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  1. Feb 2023
    1. Avoid unusual combinations of background and text colors. For example, purple or red text on a black background is unreadable. Stick with black text on a white or gray background unless there is a strong, functional reason for some other color combination.

      This is important since we will be creating a poster/flyer. The poster/flyer should be visually appealing but it also needs to be legible so having a good color combination is necessary.

    2. Lists are useful tools for emphasizing important points, enabling readers to scan text rapidly, and providing more white space. The following presents some of the standard guidelines on lists.

      Including a list in project #1 is likely so to know how to create a correct one is very important. There are rules you need to follow in order for the list to be presented correctly.

    3. Put standard measurement units (ft, mm, gal.) in the column or row heading rather than with each item in the column or row.

      It's also important to keep your units consistent across the table. If you use mL for one measurement, you should continue to use mL instead of switching to L or cm^3 in other places.

    4. Make notices' text succinct, but not at the expense of clear writing. Avoid telegraphic writing style (omitting articles like a, an, the) in notices.

      VERY important. I understand the urge to make notes short, but often people will make a note so short that there is a lot of information omitted. This defeats the purpose of writing a note in the first place.

    5. ook for repeating groups of items in your text that you can format as table

      using tables to spread out your information is way better and clear

    6. ntroduce all lists with lead-in text; don't start a list immediately after a heading

      lead the audience with what you're going to list with a header, it's like preparing the audience with what you're going to talk about.

    7. Be consistent with using initial caps or lower-case letters on the first words of list items. Use different symbols for the second levels of nested lists. For numbered lists, use lowercase letters. For bulleted lists, use bolded en dashes or empty-centered circles

      Keeping an eye on the upper and lower-case letter depending on the list you're making help with telling how lists are structured.

    8. Use highlighting for specific, functional reasons. Avoid too much highlighting, and avoid complicated highlighting schemes.

      This is very important that you should highlight something more specific as too much can cause complications.

    9. Whatever notice design you use, avoid using long strings of bold text, italics, capital letters, or combinations of these. In addition to telling readers to do or not do something, explain three things:

      My prediction on why these three ought to be avoided is because they will have less of an impact if their designs are frequently present.

    10. If you use color, use it minimally and consistently. For example, if you have black text on a white background, you might select another color for headings. You might use that same color for figure and table titles as well as the tags for notices (the actual "Note," "Warning," "Caution," and "Danger" labels on notices).

      I strongly believe that this is a smart design to incorporate into the memo. However, it will not work for the infographic considering the age demographics.

    11. Lists are useful tools for emphasizing important points, enabling readers to scan text rapidly, and providing more white space.

      the list can be good to use in the infographic. Noted

    12. Highlighting here refers to bold text, italics, alternate fonts, capital letters, quotation marks, and other typographical tricks used to call attention to text

      Highlighting can be done in a variety of ways.

    13. In the text before each figure appears, provide a cross-reference to the figure. If you include a label and caption, place them below each figure. Omit labels and captions if they have no vital function and are not needed (for example, in instructions when the figures are closely related to the individual steps

      Make sure when adding figures make sure you title and label the figure

    14. Insert plenty of headings, perhaps one heading for every two to three paragraphs. Avoid overkill, though: lots of headings with only one or two sentences per heading does not work.

      This is good information to know when drafting your memo. Its like you cant have too much of anything.

    1. Use simple vertical lists when the list items do not need to be emphasized and are listed vertically merely for ease of reading.

      Easy reading and if you don't have to explain something in detail. Also, doesn't have to be in order.

    1. Then we use these notes to draw a visual map of an argument. In the map we see the argument's momentum as the reason points us toward the claim. We see how each element implies, supports, limits, or contradicts other elements.

      I think this part here it's helpful for someone like me who is not a strong writer.

    1. Nor wotteth man this, what a marvel it is, When seeing, and saying, and hearing are done! This Life within all living things, my Prince! Hides beyond harm; scorn thou to suffer, then, For that which cannot suffer. Do thy part! Be mindful of thy name, and tremble not!

      This quote stood out to me the most: "When seeing, and saying, and hearing are done! This Life within all living things, my Prince!"(243-244). This line is important to the text because Krishna is explaining to Arjuna that he must "Do thy part!" which basically means he must do his duty. Duty is very important in Hinduism, the word Dharma is a key concept with multiple meanings for different religions. In Hinduism, Dharma is basically the moral law that governs the individual, and they must conduct Dharma(their duty) to move up in their caste system. In the concept of the Gita, Dharma is important to Arjuna because it is his duty to fight since that was his role in society. Krishna is trying to justify that if Arjuna fights in the war he will learn the difference between the soul and the physical body.

      Sources used: “Dharma.” Encyclopædia Britannica, Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc., 23 Dec. 2022, https://www.britannica.com/topic/dharma-religious-concept. Libretexts. “2.4: Bhagavad Gita.” Humanities LibreTexts, Libretexts, 5 May 2021, https://human.libretexts.org/Bookshelves/Religious_Studies/Scriptures_of_the_Worlds_Religions_(Burke)/02%3A_Hindu_Scriptures/2.04%3A_Bhagavad_Gita#:~:text=It%20is%20Arjuna's%20duty%20(or,atman)%20and%20the%20physical%20body.

    1. First-level headings are for formal reports with multiple sections (or "chapters")

      First -level headings are important and try to confuse the readers using different level headers in the wrong spot

    2. If you are writing a brief document, start with secondlevel headings in the body of the document

      When writing short document be mindful of Frist- level headings. short documents should use 2nd level headings. Noted!

    3. Make the phrasing of headings parallel. In the following illustration, notice that the second-level headings use the how, what, when, where, why style of phrasing. The third-levels use noun phrases. (Check out this tutorial on Parallel Structure from the Purdue OWL)

      This advice will be beneficial when making your infographic and memo.

    4. For short documents, begin with the second-level heading; skip the first-level.

      im confused why so?

    5. Don't overdo headings: for example, a heading for each of a series of one- or two-sentence paragraphs. (Also, you don't need a heading per paragraph;

      REMINDER if the topic is similar than you don't have to put a heading for every paragraph

    1. Our final type of memo/email is the response to an inquiry. Most of the memos/emails you send will be informational or response to an inquiry. Response to an inquiry memos/emails address a question or series of questions—perhaps about an action, a product, or a policy.

      Answering questions in the memo would be an excellent way to help the audience trust the memo, as well as better understand the meaning behind it.

    2. In this chapter, we will look at the five most common types—progress report, meeting minutes, incident report, directive, and response to an inquiry.

      After reading this chapter, I believe that a combination of these types of memos are best suited for the Project 1 memo.

    3. You don't want to submit perfect progress reports and then suddenly your supervisor finds out the project is behind schedule!

      I think it could be possible to deliver the good news before the bad news. It can just be how the bad news is given to the supervisor. Perhaps this way can if you deliver in such a way that it may not be too much trouble, but you may still require an assistance from your supervisor.

    4. Even so, it is important to secure the correct form and make sure that you fill in the requested information. Usually there is a portion of the form where you are asked to tell what happened—provide the narrative of the event. You will want to double check all information before you commit it to the incident report, which is a legal document. You may have to look up the names and titles of persons also involved. You also want to make sure the date is correct, and any equipment names or room numbers are correct. Do not write what you THINK happened. Write where you were and what happened to you or what you saw. Explain what happened after the incident, as well. How did you handle it? What did you do? Also, be very clear and avoid any language that might not be understood by people outside your field.

      I feel that this is a good way of making incident reports, like how you can find witnesses' sides of an incident besides police officer explaining the events that occurred during and after the incident.

    5. Something you may not know about is the "through" or "via" line on paper memos. In the military or in especially hierarchical companies, it may be frowned upon for a person to send an email to someone at a level above his or her direct supervisor. At such organizations, any correspondence to a person above the writer's direct supervisor must go through the supervisor. The memo must go first to the direct supervisor, indicated with a "through" or "via" line. The direct supervisor initials by his or her name to show he or she has read and approved the memo, and then sends it to the next level until it arrives at its destination. When the final recipient receives it, he or she is assured that your memo has been read and approved all the way up the chain of command.

      While reading the Memo format, what I thought was that they look almost similar to how emails were formatted in the same as how letters were structured, except that there is no address needed to be placed. What I also didn't notice was what "through" or "via" meant until I read this part, so it was interesting that memos are given to supervisors or someone above you to approve what you've written based on the subject matter. It also sounds very smart.

    6. Finally, always be polite and practice the "you" attitude. Think about how it must feel to need information—and to perhaps be frustrated. It's true, you might be frustrated,

      When responding to other emails, it's important to make sure that you're keeping in mind the audience or target's feelings as it's important for them to receive an answer. You may feel upset, but its important to keep it professional and make sure to clear up any confusion other readers may have.

    7. nd it's probably okay to be that informal because it's also not an official event that requires action on the employees' parts. But what if tomorrow is the annual blood drive? That event may require more explanation, especially since new employees (hired since the last blood drive) may not be aware of the company's long standing support of the local blood bank.

      There can be many reason why you would need to send an email, but depending the situation it would make sense to depend the "tone" of the email by making sure your audience understands. In the text, it talks about being informal talking about stuff like doughnut party tomorrow, or being more serious when it comes to event or stuff that is more serious.,

    8. But memos evolved into emails, although paper memos are still created, and often then scanned and distributed electronically.

      This piece of text really highlights the technological advancements of information transfer

    9. And because enclosures/attachments are often indicated by paper clip symbols in an email feed, the "Attachment" note is not used in emails.

      The evolution of the terminology attachment into the paper clip symbol we see in email applications is interesting

    10. you might thank the writer for purchasing your product or for being a loyal customer or client.

      As a business owner, I use this tactic quite often because it is important to acknowledge this person took their time to reach out to you and thanking them just shows gratitude.

    11. Unlike the general information memo, a directive generally starts with the rationale behind the directive so that people feel that it is a reasonable request, and also to help people remember it. It then ends by stating the policy or procedure that readers are directed to follow. For example, let's say that for security reasons, the janitorial staff will no longer be allowed access to employee offices. Instead, employees will put their trash cans outside their offices on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays for the janitorial staff to empty. Employees will then put their trash cans back in their offices the following morning. This is a new practice, so you want to issue a directive.

      This is a great way to explain the difference of the two as it can be quite blurry as to what the distinction might be.

    12. Most importantly, as mentioned above, minutes include what happened during the meeting, including who presented on main topics and who brought forth and seconded votes, and what decisions were made.

      minutes are used to structure and manage meetings, making sure the main points are recorded and concieved.

    13. Email formats are based on memo formats—that is, they are set up to provide the four key pieces of introductory information that a memo states in the heading: to, from, subject, and date.

      memos formats have made it easy for emails to be formatted and specified making it easier to read emails faster and organize them.

    14. ou have the options of cc. CC stands for carbon copy.

      Isn't the carbon copy where add another receiver to the email? or what does it mean

    15. If you have ever written an email, you may have noticed that you have to provide the name of the person you are sending the email to and the subject. The email automatically provides the name of the sender and the date.

      And you have to be very careful when sending because of people with multiple email accounts, you have to select from the email you sending from.

    1. “I saw with these Eyes of mine the Spaniards for no other reason, but only to gratify their bloody mindedness, cut off the Hands, Noses, and Ears, both of Indians and Indianesses.”22

      This shows just how evil the Spaniards were killing innocent people for no reason.

    2. Sugar was originally grown in Asia but became a popular, widely profitable luxury item consumed by the nobility of Europe. The Portuguese began growing sugarcane along the Mediterranean, but sugar was a difficult crop. It required tropical temperatures, daily rainfall, unique soil conditions, and a fourteen-month growing season.

      Sugar is very popular in our day and age, so I think it is really neat to see how scarce it was back then. I never knew how hard it was to produce sugar back then.

    1. Prehistoric Settlement in Warren County, Mississippi. Mural by Robert Dafford, depicting the Kings Crossing archaeological site as it may have appeared in 1000 CE. Vicksburg Riverfront Murals

      It is interesting how they knew a pryamid top on a house made it best for air flow and to fight against weather conditions.

    2. The Puebloan people of Chaco Canyon faced several ecological challenges, including deforestation and overirrigation, which ultimately caused the community to collapse and its people to disperse to smaller settlements. An extreme fifty-year drought began in 1130.

      This seems almost like a great depression of the 1100s

    3. Lenapes wove nets, baskets, mats, and a variety of household materials from the rushes found along the streams, rivers, and coasts. They made their homes in some of the most fertile and abundant lands in the Eastern Woodlands and used their skills to create a stable and prosperous civilization.

      The Lenapes used the geographical land to their advantage which is very important. It helped them to be advanced, and using the resources around them was very smart.

    4. undergrowth

      I’ve never heard of this technique in farming! Very interesting to burn stuff to get good crops.

    1. The stimulus occurs immediately before the response. The stimulus (either reinforcement or punishment) occurs soon after the response.

      Classical Condition

    1. To fully understand an argument, experienced readers ask big-picture questions about the author, the audience they address, the context, the genre of the text, the purpose of the text, and the constraints that shape how it is written.

      I agree that asking questions allows you to attain more information not just to know more about the topic but to write informations that will help you gain your audience's attention.

    1. Such an argument analysis, also called a rhetorical analysis, asks you to describe what the other writer is up to, not just in terms of ideas but in terms of all the strategies they used to make the argument convincing. You become a kind of detective, piecing together the moves the writer made, the reasons for them, and their likely effects on readers.

      I often enjoy writing argument analysis because the process of it allows me to think harder and thoroughly.

    2. How well are the author's appeals to trust and emotion likely to work? Will readers likely respond as the writer imagines?

      These are important things to think about especially when doing a rhetorical analysis but they never crossed my mind.

    1. L'argent

      le problème pour Aristote est de s'arrêter à l'argent comme étant une fin alors que c'est un moyen

    2. La prudence

      la prudence donne la bonne quantité de vertu. ex : l'honneteté est vertueuse seulement avec la bonne quantité et au bon moment

    3. activité vertueuse

      ces activités vertueuses doivent être répétitives

    4. 'eudaimonie,

      en français : eudémonisme

    1. Highlight, annotate, mark pages with sticky notes or flags, and take notes as you read

      Useful

    2. s content), but how it is said (the language used to send the message, also known as form).

      Content is message. Form is the use of language

    1. Make sure your tables, charts, and graphs are appropriate to your audience, subject matter, and purpose—don't zap beginners with massive, highly technical constructions they can't understand.

      Having clear tables, charts and graphs and help a reader better understand a topic and make them comfortable explaining it. You don't need to write useless information instead you can do tables and get straight to the facts. This doesn't meant to have super long charts and graphs because that can confuse the reader.

    1. Such a practice was common and legal, but it was not at all ethical to deny sick persons the ability to afford the health care they needed.

      Its crazy how this wasn't so long ago and a lot of people still don't have health care because they cant afford it.

    2. Ethics is one of the most important topics in technical communication. When you can communicate clearly and effectively, and when it is your task to help others to understand an object, process, or procedure, it is your responsibility to do so in an ethical fashion.

      Having clear ethics can literally make a task very easy or very difficult.

    1. Good communication skills, particularly in writing, are essential if you are going to succeed in the workplace. The working world depends on written communication because within modern organizations, almost every action is documented in writing. Furthermore, many kinds of writing, including correspondence, presentations using visuals like PowerPoint, technical reports, and formal reports are prevalent in most workplaces. And the writing has to be good, accurate, clear, and grammatically correct. Kyle Wiens (2012) writes in an article in the Harvard Business Review: "If you think an apostrophe was one of the 12 disciples of Jesus, you will never work for me. If you scatter commas into a sentence with all the discrimination of a shotgun, you might make it to the foyer before we politely escort you from the building. I have a zero tolerance to grammar mistakes that make people look stupid."

      I agree with this because if you are trying to move up at any job you need to impress with your writing skills. Using certain words and how you can communicate can impress someone very easily.

  2. Jan 2023
    1. Something related to a progress report is a status report or status update. While a progress report reports upon the progress of a single project, a status report is a report on the status of your entire unit or department—it can encompass a range of projects and activities, and it is usually submitted at regular intervals—monthly or quarterly—regardless of what projects are underway.

      This is very useful for my field of work. Progress reports are longer and more in depth than a status update, but you need multiple status updates to write a progress report.

    2. In an email-only culture, this same process would be achieved by sending the email to your direct supervisor and allowing him or her to forward the email up the chain of command.

      In a professional setting emails are very useful to save time because of how you can forward emails to the chain of command and not have to leave the message in person.

    3. If it is a longer memo (longer than a paragraph), you may wish to use section headers

      Section headers to separate longer memos is useful but is there a certain way to do it?

    4. Email formats are based on memo formats—that is, they are set up to provide the four key pieces of introductory information that a memo states in the heading: to, from, subject, and date.

      The format works because it lets you know exactly who, when and why it was sent to you

    5. For example, perhaps you have received an email with the hundreds of email addresses that were cc-ed on the original email, and you have to scroll through them to get to the message. It's annoying. If it's not necessary for the recipients to know who received the email—maybe it's just a reminder that the office is closing early today--and you want to avoid the scroll through the cc's, then you can bc all the recipients. That way, there's no cc scroll, and when someone replies, there's no chance that he or she will accidentally hit "reply all."

      I think the advantage of using "BCC" (Blind Carbon Copy) in emails. By using BCC, you can avoid the recipients from having to scroll through a long list of email addresses and it also eliminates the risk of accidentally hitting "reply all" when responding, which can result in unwanted and unnecessary emails being sent to multiple people. This makes BCC a useful tool for privacy and efficiency in email communication.

    6. For most meetings, notes are kept regarding what important topics were brought up in the meeting and what important decisions were made. These notes are often kept on file so that people can look back through them if questions arise about, for example, important votes or discussions about topics. These notes are called meeting minutes. Sometimes a secretary is appointed to always take minutes. And sometimes the duty rotates among attendees. The minutes are then "written up," which is a common term for preparing them to share with the group. Meeting minutes take a particular form, whether they are distributed via memo or email. The header includes the organization's name, the date and location of the meeting, who was present, and the meeting leader and the person taking the minutes. They also include the time the meeting started and the time the meeting ended.

      Meeting minutes highlight the key issues that are discussed, motions proposed or voted on, and activities to be undertaken. The minutes of a meeting are usually taken by a designated member of the group.

    7. People generally agree that using the bc option is appropriate for privacy reasons. For example, perhaps you are an attorney, and you email an insurance company a copy of a client's claim. You might bc the client to ensure the client knows you sent the document and to keep his or her email address private from the insurance company.

      I would recommend the bc in emails especially when communicating same ideals to many people .

    8. As memos or emails, you will want to start by putting the documents in the correct format. For a memo, you will open up a word processing program, such as Microsoft Word, and you will type the memo header at the top of the document: to, from, subject, and date.

      Format is very important it is just like a recipe you need to follow to prepare a meal. I f you format is not right, then the end results will not be the same.

    9. Have empathy, be polite, and offer to assist with other questions or requests.

      This sentence proves how professional once memo or email is.

    10. You send out emails and memos for a variety of reasons—usually to distribute information.

      You send out emails and memos for a variety of reasons-usually to distribute information. This correspond to the PGCC faculty memo where the Writing Center wants to send out memos for several reasons such as when students can schedule zoom appointments, the different course days and time, the location and room number of the Writing Center, the different activities of the tutors and specialists and many more.

    11. it is not generally a good practice to send correspondence—paper or electronic—to persons at levels above your supervisor without talking to your supervisor about the matter first and perhaps asking him or her to unofficially review and approve your memo or email.

      This helped me out in my current life. At my job my coworker has problem with the nurses and their lazy ways. She said she wouldn't tell our supervisor because it wont help out the situation at hand. She wanted me to join her in going over my supervisor's head. I told her that wouldn't be a good idea and consequences could be handed down. She did any way and now she has Heat on her back. My supervisor is secretly watching her like a hawk waiting for her to slip up. Lesson learned stay in your lane and go by the chain of command.

    12. Something you may not know about is the "through" or "via" line on paper memos. In the military or in especially hierarchical companies, it may be frowned upon for a person to send an email to someone at a level above his or her direct supervisor. At such organizations, any correspondence to a person above the writer's direct supervisor must go through the supervisor. The memo must go first to the direct supervisor, indicated with a "through" or "via" line. The direct supervisor initials by his or her name to show he or she has read and approved the memo, and then sends it to the next level until it arrives at its destination. When the final recipient receives it, he or she is assured that your memo has been read and approved all the way up the chain of command.

      In certain companies people or documents have to go by the chain of command. in-order for the email to get to the director it has to be approved by supervisor. Noted!

    13. Bcc stands for blind carbon copy, and bc is blind copy, but they are the same thing. When you use the bc option, only the person bc-ed can see who gets the email. The person in the "to" box or anyone cc-ed cannot see that a bc copy was sent or who received it.

      Awesome, yea this would be good for when you're in manager position and you don't want all your employee to see certain emails. Excellent!

    14. When do you use the cc option? When you want someone to have a copy of the email, but only for reference purposes. Or to put it more casually, to keep someone in the loop. For example, you manage a team, and you recently had a meeting. You send the meeting minutes to the team members who attended the meeting. You also want your supervisor to know that 1) you had a meeting and 2) you covered important topics and some decisions are made. Your supervisor isn't necessarily going to respond to the email and isn't directly involved in the meeting or projects. This is a good time to use a cc. When you cc someone on the email, everyone who gets the email can see who is cc-ed.

      Noted. Basically cc'd is just keeping someone in the loop. GOT IT.

    15. So the "cc" in the email heading stands for carbon copy, even though we don't use carbon anymore. In fact, sometimes, the cc is just changed to c for copy.

      They need to delete this from emails because you don't need to send a copy, just add them to the to Colum.

    16. CC stands for carbon copy

      Wow! Now I know what this abbreviation means finally on emails. I find myself adding a person in the (cc) slot when its more than one person. Can anyone elaborate on this?

    17. in email, the reader feels pretty confident that the email really came from the sender because, presumably, the sender had to log in to a secure email account.

      Emails are considered safe because you have to have the sender's name in the FROM line. However, I think that emails are can be dangerous and if in the wrong hands can devastating. For example, while at work there are a lot of Spam emails(Unsolicited messages) that can can cause you network system to freeze which is cause by hackers getting into the system.

    18. Memos and emails have the to, from, subject, date heading format in common. For this reason, emails are often considered to be synonymous with memos

      Keep in mind that memos and emails are similar but memos are for internal purposes. Dont get confused.

    1. Then, make sure your writing is readable. If you have identified and analyzed your audience, you are off to a good start. Readable means that your document can be easily understood by your target audience, and refers to the formula where by words, sentence length, and sentence complexity determine how hard or easy your sentences are to read. If your readability is too high for the audience, then they will either take more time getting what they need from your writing, or it wont be of any use to them at all. Too low? You may come across as condescending, if not a lousy writer.

      This second accessibility in technical writing makes this familiar with writing text because this makes the classic Times New Roman, Font Size 12, and double spacing easy for the reader what the writer and/or author has to say.

    2. 1.3: Accessibility in Technical Writing

      You want your writing to be legible, readable, and be easily comprehended.

      Use familiar terms that the audience can understand, if you use complex terms with an audience that may not understand then they can lose interest and stop reading.

    1. Your writing has to be clear so that your reader can get from it the information you intended. Strive to make sure that you have expressed exactly what you mean, and have not left room for incorrect interpretations.

      Being clear in writing is one of the most important standards because it can keep your readers attention while being direct and continuing with an active voice.

    2. First and most important, your writing must be honest. Your trustworthiness in communication reflects not only on you personally but on your organization or discipline.

      I agree with this text because not only are you writing to be honest but also not lacking integrity with your professional communication.

    3. 1.2: Let's Take a Look at Characteristics of Technical Writing

      Characteristics of technical writing and their purposes: Technical documents should address a specific group of people that use the document to solve specific problems or use them for directional purposes.

      These documents should also reflect goals and values or the person/organization. This can be accomplished by designing a document that is intriguing and comprehensive.

      Many people collaborate on workplace documents to ensure that they are keeping their ethical obligations and respecting copy rights etc.Most workplace documents are a collaboration because of accuracy purposes as well. Others can double check each others work.

    1. Good communication skills, particularly in writing, are essential if you are going to succeed in the workplace.

      I do agree with this statement because when you are in a workplace that you want to build up to a higher position that requires you to have good communication and skills when it comes to connections.

    2. but what we know today as the professional field of technical writing began during World War I from the need for technology based documentation for military and manufacturing industries.

      I disagree with this statement. I think the first technical communications started during the creation of the first civilization, Mesopotamia.

    3. And the writing has to be good, accurate, clear, and grammatically correct.

      I agree that grammar should be grammatically correct in a formal presentation. Furthermore, it is also unfair that some people who did not receive best education on grammar will not be taken as serious due to grammatical issues.

    4. but an essential skill for the many, and goes on to state that much of what is important in American public and economic life depends on strong written and oral communication skills.

      If it is so important why is it only accessible to limited people?

    1. The success of an emotional appeal depends on how well the author predicts readers’ likely reactions.

      emotional appeal successfulness relies completely on how well the author can predict a readers reactions

    2. The overall emotional tenor of an argument is called tone. Identifying and describing the tone can give us insight into the author’s attitude and purpose.

      being able to identify tone will help reading an argument much easier

    3. Writers can help shape readers’ reactions by choosing words with particular emotional associations.

      writers can use emotional buzz words to help sway a readers view

    4. Emotional appeals need to align with logical reasoning to be legitimate.

      emotional appeals must be in motion with the logical reasoning used

    5. The tone can vary throughout an argument as the author moves from point to point.

      Tone may be fluid with an argument so long as its accurate to the material

    6. Powerful examples can help readers connect emotionally to the argument’s claims.

      strong examples will help sway the audience emotionally to the arguments claims

    7. Logic and emotion come together to build powerful arguments and infuse them with a sense of purpose.

      Logic goes great with emotional appeal

    8. Use legitimate emotional appeals to support their own written arguments.

      be accurate with the emotional appeals you use for your writing

    9. Distinguish between legitimate and illegitimate emotional appeals

      be intelligent with your emotional appeals

    10. Assess the likely effectiveness of an emotional appeal for a particular audience

      assess how an emotional appeal will match with the audience

    11. Identify the ways in which a given argument appeals to emotion through word choice, tone, or powerful examples

      identify auditorial qeues for argument appeals

    12. Describe the value of emotional appeals in written academic argument

      be able to describe emotional appeals in written argument

    1. A strong argument will leave no doubt about its precise meaning.

      a strong argument is transparent and straight forward

    2. A strong argument will offer trustworthy evidence of the kinds needed to support the particular claims.

      a strong argument uses trust worthy evidence

    3. A strong argument will accurately summarize any important counterarguments and respond to them.

      a good argument will be concise and direct with its counter arguments

    4. Once we have assessed many aspects of an argument, we can come up with an overall assessment by reflecting on which strengths and weaknesses are most significant.

      using the strengths and weaknesses of an argument, we can create an overall assessment

    5. A list of common phrases used to praise and critique arguments as discussed in this chapter.

      these assessment phrases are very common

    6. Annotations point out how two writers have structured their assessment essays.

      annotations point out structure of assessment essays

    7. A list of the fallacies, or logical problems discussed in this chapter, by their technical names.

      make a list of the fallacies

    8. Even if an argument has significant flaws, it may also contain insights worth noting.

      find both big and minor flaws in an argument

    9. To test an argument’s strength, we can identify the assumptions it depends on and determine whether or not they are valid.

      identify assumptions to test an arguments integrity

    10. If we can find an exception to something in the argument, the exception may help us identify a problem in the reasoning.

      Finding exceptions in an argument will help us out a ton

    11. College essay assignments in many disciplines ask us to give our own reasoned opinion on the validity of an argument.

      using a summary to launch my opinion can help me

    12. Use precise and varied phrases to highlight the argument’s flaws and insights.

      using precise statements will leave little room for counter arguments

    13. Write a complete assessment of an argument’s strengths and weaknesses with a thesis that points to the most crucial ones.

      to analyze an arguments strengths and weaknesses will help give me the upper hand

    14. dentify insights in an argument that can contribute to future discussions on the topic.

      It is key to identify insights for future discussions

    15. Check arguments for common problems such as exceptions, faulty evidence, invalid assumptions, and inadequate treatment of counterarguments.

      I should be sure to check for exceptions, faulty evidence, invalid assumptions, and inadequate treatment of counterarguments.

    1. et's take an example: say we are analyzing an article on climate change, and we find that it doesn't try to prove that climate change is happening. Is it neglecting to address a counterargument?  Is it making a bold choice to ignore likely objections? To answer, we would need to know in what decade the article was written. In the 1990s, when climate change was first widely publicized, many people doubted whether it was real.

      The time frame plays a part and provides context on where an author stands in an argument. I feel like this might make the text appeal to an audience who can only relate to that era/time.

    2. What is the situation that prompted the writing of this text? What was going on at the time? Can you think of any social, political, or economic conditions that were particularly important?

      The context is the foundation of the argument. An argument with no context is a novel with no plot.

    3. What does the author assume their readers know? What does the author assume about readers’ age, education, gender, location, or cultural values?

      The author's ability to identify and asses their intended audience is the "make for break" when if comes to having and reciprocated message and engaged audience. The audience also determines the author's vocabulary

    4. who it is trying to persuade, and when and where it was written.

      An argumentative essay is when the author is trying to persuade the audience the think on their side or agree with them. Before reading the rest of the chapter I wonder what components differentiates persuasive and and rhetorical analysis? I think it's the intended audience.

    1. More importantly, the two approaches to immigration might not be in such dramatic conflict as the authors would have us believe. A policy that expands legal immigration to families in desperate need, for instance, while still cracking down on illegal immigration could potentially satisfy both sides of the argument. This is the problem with many partisan issues today. While we spill ink proving the other wrong, we miss opportunities to find common ground on which to build

      There is always room for a common ground.

    1. More help and better immigration laws should be in place.

    2. While illegal immigrants crossing the border to the United States may come from desperate circumstances, it is unjust, impractical, and unrealistic for one nation to solve the problems of so many non-citizens.

      Not everyone problems can be solved but to those that we can we should.

    1. However, the Reverend Jesse Jackson also had some success in calling for a more neutral term, "African American," in the late eighties.  He thought it more appropriate to emphasize a shared ethnic heritage over color.

      Its more appropriate the term African American shows respect and curtesy.

    2. e outlines similar disagreements over word-choice and racial labels by scholars and activists like Fannie Barrier Williams and W.E.B. Du Bois surrounding now-antiquated terms like “Negro” and “colored.” These leaders debated whether labels with negative connotations should be replaced, or embraced and given a new, positive connotation.

      I consider these terms to be demeaning and degrading.

    3. Some people capitalize Black to call forth a lot of attention or commotion to this topic in a negative way.

    4. He suggests that the balance is now tipping in favor of "Black," but given past changes, usage will probably change again as the rich discussion about naming, identity, and power continues.

      You capitalize your the first letter. You should capitalize Black being as though it can at times be demeaning or less than someone or something.

    5. Are words like “black” or “white” mere adjectives, descriptors of skin color? Or are they proper nouns, indicative of group or ethnic identity?

      The first letter of your ethnicity should be capitalized it's a part of who we are as humans.

    1. Mentioning this proves that not only coronavirus but also other outbreaks can be a disaster for feminism. Pandemics, in other words, pile yet another problem on women who always face an uphill battle against patriarchal structures.

      Women faces these challenges from alpha males.

    2. ewis argues that the crisis affects women more than men because women are more likely to assume housework and childcare responsibilities while men are expected to work and “bring home the bacon.”

      I totally agree when the pandemic happen it showed the reality of people lives. Men feel they don't have to help with the kids because they make all the money or more money than women do.

    1. In the case of the border argument, the writer responds to the counterargument about security by clarifying that she does not advocate completely open borders. The sample summary already refers to this when it describes her desire to “regulate” those borders. In addition, when the summary paraphrases her claims and reasons, it uses the phrases “desperate” and “in a desperate position” to show how she limits the focus to migrants who are fleeing an awful situation.

      I agree showing both sides of the matter at hand, better arrangements should be made.

    1. In her 2019 article “Wouldn’t We All Cross the Border?”, Anna Mills urges us to seek a new border policy that helps desperate undocumented migrants rather than criminalizing them. She calls for a shift toward respect and empathy, questioning the very idea that crossing illegally is wrong. She argues that any parent in a desperate position would consider it right to cross for their child’s sake; therefore, no person should condemn that action in another. Since we cannot justify our current walls and detention centers, we must get rid of them.

      I agree if this was me in this position I would do the same. It doesn't prove to be reasonable to put them in detention center and walls. They are desperate and this is a way for them to cry out for help.

    1. Introduction

      what is the difference between the introduction and the ltter of transmittal?

    2. Executive Summary

      about 2.5 pages long, allows for exectives to absorb reports major findings

    3. Covers

      never use colored plastics slips as they are really unprofessional. The best choice is a spiral

    1. text-based tools in the context of telework also reported increased perceptions of feeling overloaded, while those reporting increased use of videoconferencing tools did not.”

      Semi face to face(video call) results in less stress then texting/emailing

    1. 3.3: Ethics and Copyright Law

      Ethics involves awareness of copyright laws

      Copyright laws exist to protect creative expression and theft of an idea for unethical uses

    1. In her 2019 article “Wouldn’t We All Cross the Border?”, Anna Mills urges us to seek a new border policy that helps desperate undocumented migrants rather than criminalizing them. She calls for a shift away from blame toward respect and empathy, questioning the very idea that crossing illegally is wrong.

      The author asks us how is criminalizing migrants making it better when they need help.

    2. The main point should be noticeable. A five star rating is outstanding. A 4 star rating is still really good but it something might need to be changed.

    3. If the argument’s main purpose is to describe reality in some way, we will want to let readers know if it is controversial or not. Is the writer defending their idea against obvious objections or counterarguments, or are they aiming to inform us about something we may not be aware of?

      The author is letting you decide whether their argument is debatable or not. What is the author telling you do you agree or disagree, you might even see both viewpoints.

    4. The author sets the tone and help us to visualize the bigger picture that they are trying to portray.

    5. In an article for _____________, writer _____________... The account of _____________ in the piece _____________ by _____________... Writing in the journal _____________, the scholar _____________ ...

      The author is stating their main claim.

    6. Readers will be bored and will learn nothing from “says.” If we choose a more dramatic and precise verb like “calls for,” “criticizes,” “describes,” “argues,” or “questions,” then readers will feel the dynamism and momentum of both the argument and the summary.

      I agree with this portion about using more precise and engaging language. Using simple words like says will bore the reader and also possibly not convey the writers goal as well.

    1. As we choose words to paraphrase a writer’s points, we will want to reread the text to see how strongly the writer suggests something or what attitude they take toward a counterargument.

      Which direction is the author going in. What point are they trying to make

    2. They will point to the role each claim plays in the overall argument. In the summary, instead of annotations, colors, arrows, and labels like “claim” and “reason,” we will use strategic phrases to show how the parts fit together.

      show great supporting evidence and how it got to the climax

    1. 3.1: Introduction to Ethics

      When something is considered legal it is not always ethical

      Ethics ask others about their beliefs; what they feel is right or wrong

      The 4 basic moral standards * Utility: what would benefit most of the society at the lowest risk * Rights: entitlement of freedom and well-being * Justice: how beliefs and burdens are distributed amongst people * Care: your response to the good of a particular person with whom you have a close relationship

    2. Such a simple scenario, but so many ways to look at the situation.

      This article did an amazing job at explaining the multiple ways a situation could be unethical. Many scenarios ultimately have a simple solution to be ethical, but it's up to that person's morals and upbringing that will determine how the scenario turns out.

    1. sugar was a difficult crop. It required tropical temperatures, daily rainfall, unique soil conditions, and a fourteen-month growing season

      I had no idea sugar was such a challenging crop to grow. Are these the same parameters required to grow sugar now?

    2. seafarers

      This is a new term that I hadn't come across before - upon further research I came to learn that it is another term for sailor.

    1. surplus food created a unique social organization centered on elaborate feasts, called potlatches

      beginning of modern day potluck?

    2. Native peoples in the Southwest began constructing these highly defensible cliff dwellings in 1190 CE and continued expanding and refurbishing them until 1260 CE before abandoning them around 1300 CE

      These buildings are really cool because I think they're a much needed reminded that the Natives didn't just wander around in tents and tipis like what's shown in most American media, they were complex civilizations.

    3. Agriculture arose sometime between nine thousand and five thousand years ago, almost simultaneously in the Eastern and Western Hemispheres.

      I think it's really crazy how humans all invented agriculture around the same time period in completely different areas and with little to no contact with others

    4. Bering Strait

      Beringia theory

    5. The Salinan people of present-day California, for example, tell of a bald eagle that formed the first man out of clay and the first woman out of a feather.

      Very similar to the Greek creation story, where Prometheus sculpted humans from clay and Athena breathed life into them

    6. political turmoil among the ruling elite and threats from external enemies may explain the end of the once-great civilization.

      These are all current strains on the US (on a larger scale) that are contributing to the cracking in our foundation as a country.

    7. mothers often wielded enormous influence at local levels, and men’s identities and influence often depended on their relationships to women

      This is ironic seeing as how these gender roles were completely flipped after the arrival of the European settlers.

    8. societies transitioning to agriculture often experienced weaker bones and teeth.

      Why? Were the crops being grown and animals they were domesticating for consumption less nutritious? Were they leaving behind a more balanced diet when transitioning to agriculture?

    9. Many groups used shifting cultivation, in which farmers cut the forest, burned the undergrowth, and then planted seeds in the nutrient-rich ashes

      This technique is called slash and burn agriculture, and is still implemented today!

    10. a bald eagle that formed the first man out of clay and the first woman out of a feather.

      There are significant similarities between the Salinan creation story and the Christian creation story.

    1. heading design consistently throughout your document.

      Consistency in design and style of the heading throughout the document/work.

    2. house" style

      What is the house style of writing?

    1. austere and spartan way

      What is the austere and spartan way?

    2. As a good writer, the accuracy of information you’re producing and using the right communication statement for a documentation you’re creating must be your priorities.

    3. boilerplate

      What does a boiler plate mean?

    4. As a writer, you must make sure that you are using the right version (and, in finding out which is correct

      Accuracy and reliability

    5. footnote

      What is a footnote?

    1. Always point out the relevance of graphics to enable the reader understand the point to it and how it correlates with everything they’ve come across previously.

    2. Make sure your graphics are appropriate to your audience, subject matter, and purpose—

      The right graphics for the right audience. Not too much, not below.

    3. discuss graphics in nearby text preceding the graphic

      Explain the graphics to make it more understandable to the reader. As they view it, they understand it.

    4. Use graphics whenever they would normally be necessary—don't wimp out because it seems like too much trouble! But at the same time, don't get hung up about creating perfect graphics (scans and photocopies work just fine for our purposes as long as you cite your source). This course is a writing course, not a graphic-arts course.

      Using graphics where they are necessary is advisable but also trying not to be stuck on wanting to create the perfect graphical design. Keep in mind that this is a writing course and not an art course. So long as your message is being passed along to your reader clearly, then it’s alright.

    5. But you're obligated to cite your sources for graphics just as you are for the words you borrow

      Citing sources for borrowed works and words is essential so as to not be accused of stealing someone else’s work.

    6. you want illustrations to be at the right technical level for your readers.

      How do I determine the right technical level for my readers?

    7. You can use graphics to represent the following elements in your technical writing: Objects—If you're describing a fuel-injection system, you'll probably need a drawing or diagram of the thing. If you are explaining how to graft a fruit tree, you'll need some illustrations of how that task is done. Photographs, drawings, diagrams, and schematics are the types of graphics that show objects. Numbers—If you're discussing the rising cost of housing in Austin, you could use a table with the columns marking off fiveyear periods since 1970; the rows could be for different types of housing. You could show the same data in the form of bar charts, pie charts, or line graphs. Tables, bar charts, pie charts, and line graphs are some of the principal ways to show numerical data. Concepts—If you want to show how your company is organized, the relationships of the different departments and officials, you could set up an organization chart—boxes and circles connected with lines that show how everything is hierarchically arranged and related. A concept graphic shows nonphysical, conceptual things and their relationships. In the figure to the right, see how Apple Computer illustrated the difference between 32-bit processors and 64-bit processors (these days, these are called infographics).

      Graphics can be used to represent so many things ranging from objects, descriptive photographs, diagrams, tables, charts, concepts and many more to make your technical writing even better and more detailed or explanatory.

    8. Many professional technical writing contains graphics. Putting graphics in your work doesn’t require any professionalism in the graphics art line, the Internet has provided means to create professional looking graphics easily.

    1. Make sure your tables, charts, and graphs are appropriate to your audience, subject matter, and purpose

      Right information for the right audience. Wrong information will cause confusion.

    2. Always discuss tables in preceding text.

      Don’t leave your reader confused and destabilized due to an unexplained table or graph.

    3. You get a better sense of the overall trend in the graph but not the precise dollar amount

      Lack of precision.

    4. A table has more preciseness and details than a graph or chart but the graph or chart has a more dramatic and interesting touch to it. You get a better sense of overall trend in the graph but not the preciseness.

    5. Don't overwhelm readers with monster 11-column, 30-row tables

      This might seem bulky and scare the reader away or even bore them causing them to skip through it and miss the important information in the table.

    6. Explain the general significance of the data in the table

      To make it easy and understandable for the reader, without them having to stress. The table should carry the details.

    7. Tables allow fast and easy access and are also easily understandable because of its comparable features.

    8. Graphs are really important in technical writing.

      We learn more from a document when graphics are included (Gatlin, 1988)

      A recent study found that readers learn faster and are better able to use the information they learn when the text includes graphics (Große,Jungmann, and Drechsler, 2015).

    1. Type the word "DANGER" in all-caps. (Underline it, or use bold.)

      To stress the urgency or the seriousness.

    2. State what will happen if the reader does not heed the notice.

      Most people tend to ignore notices till the possible outcome or consequences for their action is stated.

    3. Don't use a danger notice when a warning is more appropriate (the same as "crying wolf")

      Understanding the right special notice to use is very mandatory. Using the wrong notice would pass the message, there by confusing the reader and could expose them to unforeseen dangers or situations.