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  1. Jan 2018
  2. Dec 2017
  3. Nov 2017
  4. Oct 2017
    1. For the moment I’ll put on my scientific thinking hat because there numerous ways that I can provide evidence for my claim the people believe all sorts of crazy things.

      Change "there" to "there are".

  5. Sep 2017
    1. Miss Amazing is a pageant for girls and young women with learning disabilities. In the 10 years since it began, 1,700 girls and young women with disabilities have taken part.Pageant Has Spread To More Than 30 States

      The author should explain why these girls need a special pageant though. How do their learning disabilities make it harder for them to succeed in a regular pageant?

    1. A third might leave the experience out of his story altogether, deeming it unimportant.

      Basically the author seems to be saying that the choices you make about how you view your past have as much of an effect on you as your actual past.

  6. Apr 2017
    1. Three of the victims were of Turkish origin,[38] two victims were from German Sinti families and one from a Kosovan Roma family.

      About 50 people of various ethnic backgrounds gathered at a Munich sports hall early Saturday to await official word on the fate of missing loved ones (Washington Post, 2016).

  7. Feb 2017
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  10. Nov 2015
    1. Does the Espionage Act violate the First Amendment guarantee of free speech?

      I think that this is not the legal issue that is targeted in the book on this case? I concluded that it is more about whether this pamphlet and political expression is protected under the First Amendments rights of the Constitution for the defendant. Or whether obstruction of war time ideals and peace is a crime in a state of unrest?

  11. Apr 2014
    1. Reproducibility

      Reproducibility is mentioned in the title of this section, but it is not mentioned elsewhere in the document and I don't see it addressed in what's written in this section.