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  1. Oct 2024
  2. Oct 2022
    1. Kyle McCann has always prided himself in his ability to make the best of any situation. So when his boss fired him from the job he started just eight weeks earlier, McCann held back tears and decided to focus on the bright side. 
  3. Aug 2021
  4. May 2021
    1. Your brain is a leaky bucket. If you're dedicated to filling it with knowledge, you should be equally dedicated to sealing the leak. Here's how.

      way better for the opening of an article

  5. Oct 2020
    1. Impactful photographs have often been referred to as a snapshot in time. That moniker genuinely captures both the literal and figurative impact of photos.

      Strong opening that helps frame the essay's theme.

  6. Aug 2020
    1. Cajner, T., Crane, L. D., Decker, R. A., Grigsby, J., Hamins-Puertolas, A., Hurst, E., Kurz, C., & Yildirmaz, A. (2020). The U.S. Labor Market during the Beginning of the Pandemic Recession (Working Paper No. 27159; Working Paper Series). National Bureau of Economic Research. https://doi.org/10.3386/w27159

  7. Jul 2020
  8. May 2020
  9. Sep 2017
    1. Homely and 27

      This is an odd way to begin a sentence, paragraph, and new section. I'm also pretty sure she should write out "twenty seven," rather than "27."

  10. Mar 2016
  11. Jun 2015
    1. The inland wetlands and watercourses of the state of Connecticut are an indispensable and irreplaceable but fragile natural resource with which the citizens of the state have been endowed. The wetlands and watercourses are an interrelated web of nature essential to an adequate supply of surface and underground water; to hydrological stability and control of flooding and erosion; to the recharging and purification of groundwater; and to the existence of many forms of animal, aquatic and plant life.

      Necessity of watercourse (Inland Wetlands)

      -surface and ground water

      -control of flooding and erosion

      -recharging and purification of groundwater

      -general life-sustainment