the war included industrialized genocide and unleashed the most destructive technology ever used in war. the global economic crisis gave way to a global war that became the deadliest and the most destructive in human history. when it ended, the United States stood alone as the world's superpower. The European war began in 1939 when Germany invaded Poland after signing non aggression treaty with the Soviet union defining the Baltic states as russian sphere of influnce and then annexing poland.

despite the US as a nation being way younger than the other countries involved, they became a super power and I am confused as to how specifically they rose to the top.

I find it interesting how much the US didn't like what was going on in the east, but never fully stepped in until later, when the damage from the Japanese had been enormous

I find this strategy was very smart from the point of subduing the British, however I find that British moral never broke even more interesting. It was a unique and brutal strategy from the Germans that seemed to not work.

I had always thought that Hitler felt the need to put the blame on a group of people for the fall of Germany during world war one and the state of Germany after the war.

The attack by Japan upon the U.S. naval base in Hawaii on December 7, 1941, in a surprise attack, destroyed the isolationism policy of America and turned out to be one of the pivotal points in U.S. history. In its aftermath, President Franklin Roosevelt labeled the day as "a date which will live in infamy" and, within hours, asked for a declaration of war, which Congress granted.

After the sudden defeat of Poland, France, along with its British allies, started preparing for the expected attack by the Germans. In May 1940, Hitler began his campaign against Western Europe by invading the Netherlands and Belgium, hoping to bypass the highly fortified line of defense known as the Maginot Line that protected the border between France and Germany. .

On July 7, 1937, Japan completely invaded China and defeated the Chinese National Revolutionary Army decisively under the command of Chiang Kai-shek. The rapid Japanese gains made the loss of major cities like Beijing on August 8, Shanghai on November 26, and the capital of China, Nanjing, on December 13 inevitable.

Adolph Hitler came to power through his vocal, shrill, loud denunciations of the Treaty of Versailles and how that treaty had served as an injustice to Germany. By 1932, the Nazis had gained the status of largest party in the Reichstag, reflecting widespread support amid the political instability of the Weimar Republic.

its interesting how quickly a nation can grow during a war.

it's sad that they're were so many casualties.

I don't get the difference, Germany is still attacking them.

it's interesting how they only cared about themselves.

I felt like the soviet union was the strongest allie of germany, i'm also curious why they dropped allience.

I'm curious why germany wanted to invade poland i wanna know the backstory of it.

The holocaust was very real, despite the evidence there are many deniers.

There is a video on youtube about a survivor of nanjing, its very sad and serves a beatiful testimony, i urge you to check it out.

Its scary, what fear and paranoia can do, and Mr. Mochida smiling?!

Its crazy how we managed to keep up until now.

With the coming of the modern age, came new demonic weapons.

As a participate of the media, you should be able to take steps to analyze everyday media and understand how it can influence our social environments and our minds.

I agree; we often overlook the effects of media on our daily lives and how we consume and analyze it during our downtime.

Media has become a staple to our existence in the complex world we live in.

The research supports a posthuman approach to educating students when utilizing sources of media.

The research is studied to better understand the effects media has on the large variety of population that it interacts with.

The use of language can drastically change interpretation of an audience, for better or worse.

The impact of technology goes beyond what our minds recognize. This is why the research is important, to discover the technological impact.

We, as humans, are driven and guided by relations and experience which defines intrasubjective mediation.

The post-humanist approach exceeds the limitations that define the less desirable parts of humans.

Media has a tremendous impact on society and the research is important to produce guidelines on how these technologies should be utilized.

To best understand technology it works beyond how it operates and all levels of how it operates must be considered.

It is imperative that when using sources of media to understand social and cultural factors and not just isolate your thinking.

I like the comparison here as it explains how interpreting media is a skill similar to literacy. In order to effectively use media, it is a skill that requires practice similar to print literacy.

The four components listed cumulatively sum up media literacy. Teaching students the skills will aid there success in the technology driven world we live in.

The image really does a great job of highlighting the prevalence of media today and emphasizes the quote by depicting what "disappearing into the background of our awareness looks like.

This quote emphasizes the importance to acknowledge all aspects of media literacies, such as how it impacts the user and messages.

Viewers and participants of daily media should have mastered the skills to analyze and detect misinformation in media. It is imperative especially with the rise in technology.

This was an aha moment I had when creating a Tik Tok about my medialiteracy journal. I was able to apply my research and what I learned about analyzing the community to create my own content.

Smartphones and the applications we use open up a whole new world of engagement, but they can also alienate those closest to us if they're not included in that experience. This creates a "wall" that separates us from our everyday surroundings and relationships.

Evolving access of communication within the second decade.

They're looking at what others online are listed for (and not what they've actually sold for) to set their price. They probably have no idea what the typewriter market is like and what the value of their machine really is based on a variety of factors including make/model, condition, servicing, extras, typeface. Unless their machine has an exceptionally rare typeface (usually adds $80-150) or has a brand new rubber (usually adds 30-40 for new feet) or a new platen ($100-180), then in its current condition it's probably not worth more than $50.

Once you get it, you're going to want to have it cleaned, oiled, and adjusted which will run you several hours of labor and materials at a repair shop at $50-75 per hour. It may also need one or two replacement parts.

If talking to them about the price doesn't bring it down significantly then you should pass on it. If you're not up to cleaning, adjusting, oiling a machine yourself, your best bet is to purchase something from a repair shop that already is. You'll have a far better experience. https://site.xavier.edu/polt/typewriters/tw-repair.html

For comparison here's some similar machines professionally cleaned, serviced, with new ribbons and a 3 month warranty from $240-350 with some of the price depending on particular model and desirability of color. https://reeselectronics.com/search.php?search_query=smith+corona+silent&x=0&y=0

If you've got money to burn then maybe it's worth $180 to you, but if that's the case then get something in much nicer condition from a repair shop.

reply to u/EmergencyFirst7634 at https://old.reddit.com/r/typewriters/comments/1gcyayc/this_a_good_buy/

This section sheds light on the model - it is like the missing motivation. It helps by considering the model in the context of an experiment.

Not clear where this analysis comes from. Kernel suggest a gaussian process

The Bayesian tradition includes writing the equations of the model one on top of the other and explaining the parameters latent variables etc.

isotropy is motivated by need in integration.

holds empirically (

the Isotropy assumptions simplifies integration but seems to fit with experiment

This need further consideration.

There are different hypothesis for the existence of the "power law" and some of them my not fit with this isotropy.

since there is an inner product of v_twith c_t in R^d the word vectors must all have length d so they have the same length ?

the model is a random walk with t being the word and the RV being a random vector called a discourse vector of dimension d. This vector is a distributed representation of the semantics at word t.

what is the discourse - is it one hot encoded, is it orthogonal, is it sparse, is it disentangled, is it compositional ? What is a small change in a single dimension???

What is a slow/quick random walk ? How many steps are allowed and in how many dimensions?

A bigger point is that the meaning of words dont seem to follow this model ? Adjacent words in a sentence can have dramatically different semantics. I.E. despite Firth - only a few words are strongly related. The majority are not.

we need a second equation for the change in c_t - what is small here ?

Important point

but how often can we have big jumps without effecting the word bigram probabilities? Much of english is words like The and it which don't have semantic content.

also is the correlation short term of long term

err I recall that that model of options doen't have 2000 dimensions - typicaly just one latent variable - the value of the underlaying stock at some future date and the value is real number. But the semantics are spread over a high dim space and far from real valued. So AFAIKS this is stretching the analogy too far.

Doesn't that paper uses a modified model and not the same model? If this paper a prior or a posterior of that paper :-)

What assumptions are the prior encoding here?

how are the different dynamics expected to create better dynamics (which of gaussian or log linear aggregation more realistic?)

Topics are statistical aggregates over a window or some collective and so it makes sense to model them as slowly changing. However Topics are likely also subject to significant change at say pragraph and sentence boundries and the small changes are likely an artifact of the sampling rather then of the generating process. Also text can belong to multiple topics. Words on the other hand should not be modeled as having multiple meanings.

This comment highlights the gap in the theoretical understanding of why the PMI matrix exhibits an approximately low rank. It raises the question of whether this low-rank property could be formally proven or if it is purely an empirical observation.

idea of an encounter with the body suggests an a priori separation of body and (mind? spirit?). also think about Knight's point that an encounter in Barthes is almost always sexual -- almost a sexual encounter with onseself

which itself suggests the almost mystical, magical status of the body

to what extent is this a utopian ideal?

The act of freeing slaves by there owner.

It's intriguing that no matter the year, time, bad, good or maybe not a believer of god, we tend to pray. No matter people always got to look up to a higher power. No matter what happened to her she stayed strong. She didn't even wish the people who did this bad days. Her heart was stronger than metal.

This is something that is Ludacris to me .She petition the court for her freedom, and got denied. I can't get passed the fact how people can be so cruel. She got pushed back to the end of the line like when people cut in line. I can't imagine how hard her life was.

The Great Western Schism was a rift dividing the papacy, each claiming to be the legitimate power. I can't imagine having several different divisions of the papacy. Now I believe the Pope has absolute power in the church.

There was shock due to these events. Economically their wasn't a whole lot of change. The Turks recieved vast amounts of wealth, from trade, politics and Their Navy.

I believe that a good diet is the key to a good life. I read somewhere that many people had bread for a mainstay. That's pretty unhealthy and fattening. It's a great thing that food was more atainable and the health of a pregnant female was able to have healthy children.

The Black Death had many effects on the people and the land. Town and people disappeared. One good thing that happened was the land and the soil were able to rest and replinish itself.

Technical Feedback (10/25)

Successfully Implemented (10 pts)

• ✓ Integer Variables (4/4)
• Strong rotation controls:
• rot
• secondRot
• thirdRot
• rotReverse
• ✓ Rotations/Translations (3/3)
• Multiple rotations well-implemented
• Good push()/pop() usage
• Clean ellipse positioning
• ✓ Mouse Interaction (2/2)
• Creative color control
• Good translation response
• ⚠ Variable Reset (1/2)
• Basic rotation decrement
• Missing conditional reset

Missing Requirements (15 pts)

• ✗ for() Loop (0/3)
• No iteration present
• ✗ Conditional Statements (0/3)
• No control logic
• ✗ Array Implementation (0/3)
• No element storage
• ✗ Custom Function (0/3)
• No function definitions
• ✗ Object/Class Creation (0/4)
• No OOP structure

Priority Improvements:

1. Add control logic:
2. Boundary conditions
3. Rotation limits

4. State changes

5. Create functions:

6. drawRotatingShape()
7. updateRotations()

8. handleMouseInteraction()

9. Implement storage:

10. Array for multiple shapes
11. Use for loop for creation

12. Track positions/rotations

13. Convert to OOP:

14. Create RotatingShape class
15. Move rotation properties
16. Add update methods

Your visual effects and transformations are strong, particularly the rotation system and mouse interaction. To enhance your sketch, focus on adding structure through functions and classes, and implement more dynamic control through conditionals and loops.

Technical Feedback (14/25)

Successfully Implemented (14 pts)

• ⚠ Integer Variables (3/4)
• Has variables:
  • floatingBall.x/y
  • floatingBall.speedX/Y
• Note: Movement logic inactive
• ✓ for() Loop (3/3)
• Good spectrum data iteration
• Effective circle/rectangle generation
• ✓ Custom Function (3/3)
• drawBackground(spectrum) well implemented
• ⚠ Array Usage (2/3)
• Spectrum data stored well
• Missing position control array
• ✓ Rotations/Translations (3/3)
• Good use in rectangle drawing
• Proper push()/pop() isolation

Missing Requirements (11 pts)

• ✗ Conditional Statements (0/3)
• No logic control
• ✗ Variable Reset/Inversion (0/2)
• No conditional resets
• ✗ Object/Class Creation (0/4)
• Floating ball not object-oriented
• ✗ Mouse Interaction (0/2)
• No mouseX/mouseY usage

Priority Improvements:

1. Activate ball movement:
2. Uncomment movement logic
3. Add boundary conditions

4. Implement position resets

5. Convert to OOP:

6. Create Ball class
7. Move properties to class

8. Add methods for movement

9. Add interactivity:

10. Mouse position affects visualization

11. Click events for effects

12. Enhance control:

13. Add boundary checking
14. Implement speed changes
15. Create position array

Your audio visualization is strong, particularly the spectrum analysis and transformations. Focus on adding interactivity and object-oriented structure to meet the project requirements.

Technical Feedback (2/25)

Successfully Implemented (2 pts)

• ✓ Mouse Interaction (2/2)
• Creative use of mouseX/mouseY
• Good color control implementation

Missing Requirements (23 pts)

• ✗ Integer Variables (0/4)
• r, g, b are mapped but not incrementing
• Need variables that change over time
• ✗ for() Loop (0/3)
• No iteration present
• ✗ Conditional Statements (0/3)
• No if/else logic
• ✗ Variable Reset/Inversion (0/2)
• No conditional resets
• ✗ Array Implementation (0/3)
• No position/element storage
• ✗ Custom Function (0/3)
• No function definitions
• ✗ Object/Class Creation (0/4)
• No OOP implementation
• ✗ Rotations/Translations (0/3)
• No transform operations

Priority Improvements:

1. Add incrementing variables:
2. Animation counters
3. Position changes

4. Speed variables

5. Implement basic animation:

6. Use for loop for repetition
7. Add conditionals for boundaries

8. Reset variables at limits

9. Add structure:

10. Create custom drawing function
11. Make a simple class (e.g., ColorController)

12. Store positions in array

13. Include transformations:

14. Add rotating elements
15. Translate shapes
16. Use push()/pop()

Your color interaction is good, but the sketch needs more technical elements that are outlined in the project brief. Start by adding basic animation with incrementing variables, then build up the complexity with loops and object-oriented features.

Alt text is essential for making images accessible to people with visual impairments. Crafting effective alt text depends largely on context: it should highlight the most relevant parts of the image based on its purpose. Additionally, conveying the emotions or mood evoked by the image can enrich the description and provide a fuller experience for the viewer.

Technical Feedback (16/25)

Successfully Implemented (16 pts)

• ✓ Integer Variables (4/4)
• Good use of size variable
• Effective array position incrementing
• ✓ for() Loop (3/3)
• Well-implemented array iteration
• Clean rectangle drawing logic
• ✓ Conditional Statements (3/3)
• Smart expansion control
• Good position reset conditions
• ✓ Variable Reset/Inversion (2/2)
• Effective size reset
• Good position restoration
• ✓ Array Implementation (3/3)
• rectPositions well utilized
• ⚠ Rotations/Translations (1/3)
• Basic rotation implemented
• Needs more variety

Missing Requirements (9 pts)

• ✗ Custom Function (0/3)
• Could abstract rectangle drawing
• Or animation logic
• ✗ Object/Class Creation (0/4)
• No custom classes defined
• ✗ Mouse Interaction (0/2)
• No mouseX/mouseY usage

Priority Improvements:

1. Create custom functions:
2. drawRectangle()
3. updatePositions()
4. Implement a class:
5. class Rectangle
6. class AnimationController
7. Add more transformations:
8. Multiple rotation points
9. Scale variations
10. Include mouse interaction:
11. Control expansion rate
12. Influence rectangle positions

Your animation logic is strong, particularly with arrays and conditionals. To enhance the project, focus on abstracting functionality into classes and functions, and add more interactive elements.

Technical Feedback (25/25) - Excellent

Core Requirements (Fully Met)

• ✓ Integer Variables (4/4)
• Excellent implementation:
• num, rotation
• xSpeedSmall, ySpeedSmall
• spider.speed
• ✓ for() Loop (3/3)
• Well-implemented in createSmallSpiders()
• Effectively generates multiple spiders
• ✓ Conditional Statements (3/3)
• Smart border detection
• Good movement control logic
• ✓ Variable Reset/Inversion (2/2)
• Clean implementation in moveRandomly()
• Good directional changes
• ✓ Array Usage (3/3)
• smallSpiders array well utilized
• Good position management
• ✓ Custom Function (3/3)
• createSmallSpiders()
• display() method
• ✓ Object/Class Implementation (4/4)
• Spider class
• SmallSpider class
• ⚠ Rotations/Translations (3/3)
• Good push()/pop() usage
• Could add more variety
• ✓ Mouse Interaction (2/2)
• Creative color control with mouse position

Extra Credit Opportunities:

1. Add keyPressed():
2. Spider direction control
3. Speed adjustments
4. Implement mouseClicked():
5. Spawn new spiders
6. Change behaviors

Great job! You've hit almost every requirement perfectly. The only minor improvement would be adding more varied transformations. Consider adding the bonus features to make it even more interactive!

Technical Feedback (12/25)

Successfully Implemented (12 pts)

• ✓ Integer Variables (4/4)
• Good use of movement variables:
• rot, x, y
• xSpeed, ySpeed
• grassxMove, grassxSpeed
• ✓ Conditional Statements (3/3)
• Effective grass movement limits
• Good reset conditions
• ✓ Variable Reset/Inversion (2/2)
• Smart implementation with grassxSpeed
• ✓ Rotations/Translations (3/3)
• Well-implemented push()/pop()
• Good transform isolation

Missing Requirements (13 pts)

• ✗ for() Loop (0/3)
• ✗ Array Implementation (0/3)
• ✗ Custom Function (0/3)
• ✗ Object/Class Creation (0/4)
• ✗ Mouse Interaction (0/2)
• No mouseX/mouseY usage

Suggestions for Full Score:

1. Add a for loop:
2. Could use for grass repetition
3. Or bunny multiplication
4. Implement an array:
5. Store grass positions
6. Or bunny coordinates
7. Create a custom function:
8. drawBunny()
9. createGrass()
10. Add object-oriented elements:
11. class Bunny
12. class GrassBlade
13. Include mouse interaction:
14. Bunny follows cursor
15. Click-based movement

Your animation fundamentals are strong. The variable management and transformations show good understanding. Adding the missing technical elements would easily improve your grade.

Technical Feedback (7/20)

HTML Structure (2/5)

• ✓ Main <h1> present
• ✗ Missing subheadings (<h2>, <h3>)
• ✗ HTML errors:
• Missing </p> closing tags
• Broken link syntax (<a"web"</a>)
• Orphaned <li> elements
• ✓ Images properly implemented with alt text
• ✗ List structure needs parent elements

CSS Implementation (4/10)

• ✓ ID implementation:
• #AncientForest
• #EldersRecess
• Others for layout
• ⚠ Class usage:
• .container used well
• Missing second reusable class
• ✗ Critical style errors:
• Invalid: background-color: #rgb(255, 255, 255)
• Incorrect: border-color: #red
• Excessive z-index values
• Overuse of absolute positioning

Code Quality (1/5)

• ✗ Major structural issues:
• Missing closing tags
• Broken link syntax
• Invalid CSS color values
• ✗ Layout problems:
• Excessive absolute positioning
• Unnecessary z-index stacking
• ✗ Redundant CSS declarations

Priority Fixes:

1. Fix HTML structure:
2. Close all paragraph tags
3. Correct link syntax
4. Add <ul> or <ol> for list items
5. Add subheadings for better hierarchy
6. Fix CSS syntax:
7. Remove # from RGB values
8. Correct color declarations
9. Improve layout approach:
10. Reduce absolute positioning
11. Simplify z-index usage
12. Add second reusable class
13. Clean up redundant styling

Your content and layout ideas are good, but the code needs significant cleanup. Focus on fixing the HTML structure first, then work on simplifying your CSS approach to avoid potential layout issues.

Technical Feedback (8/20)

HTML Structure (2/5)

• ✗ Critical structure issues:
• <div> inside <h1> (invalid)
• Multiple <body> tags
• Missing closing tags for <a> and <ol>
• ✗ Invalid <frame> usage (should be <iframe>)
• ⚠ Heading issues:
• Uses <h1> and <h3>
• Improper nesting
• ⚠ Custom paragraph ID used instead of <p> tag
• ✓ Images have alt attributes

CSS Implementation (5/10)

• ⚠ Problematic ID usage:
• #heading
• #heading2
• #p (should be tag selector)
• Split styles that should be unified
• ✗ Class issues:
• Invalid .container: syntax
• Missing second reusable class
• ✗ Style problems:
• Redundant h1/h3 styles
• Inline styles in <body>
• Misplaced colons
• Missing semicolons

Code Quality (1/5)

• ✗ Major structural issues:
• Multiple body tags
• Broken closing tags
• Improper element nesting
• ✗ Redundant styling
• ✗ Invalid HTML/CSS syntax
• ✗ Disorganized code structure

Critical Fixes:

1. Fix HTML structure:
2. Remove extra <body> tag
3. Fix tag nesting
4. Close all tags properly
5. Correct element usage:
6. Replace <frame> with <iframe>
7. Use proper <p> tags
8. Fix CSS:
9. Remove .container: syntax error
10. Consolidate heading styles
11. Move inline styles to CSS file
12. Clean up redundant code
13. Fix all closing tags

Hi Collin, I really enjoyed your projects concept; however, your project needs significant technical improvements to function properly. Focus first on fixing the HTML structure and closing tags, then work on organizing your CSS more efficiently.

I think this is an incredibly underrated strategy to show you're engagement towards the presenter. It's something that most don't think to do but I believe it's meaningful. In the back of the presenters mind (especially in a virtual scenario), they know that there is always going to be a handful of people that are not engaged. So by showing the speaker that they have your full intention, you are simultaneously improving the quality of their presentation. In turn, that individual will likely become a more confident speaker in the future.

I wonder what Thomas Aquinas had in mind here specifically. Was he thinking of violent games leading to injury, or of games leading to taunting and argument, or of gambling?

It seems that Thomas Aquinas's overall position is that games and play can play a positive role as an opportunity for rest from work and serious obligations when done in moderation, but that they can become problematic when done excessively and when prioritized over work, personal morals, and religion. Aquinas reaches this conclusion using theological arguments, and the purpose of this text seems to be to provide a theological perspective on games and play. This differs significantly from Isidore of Seville's writings on games which present information and opinion as fact rather than as debate/discussion (Cambridge University Press 371), and from FitzStephens writings on games and play, which approach the topic much more from a description of the mostly-positive ways in which he observed them in day-to-day life in Medieval London (FitzStephens, 1170s/1860).

Technical Feedback (11/20)

HTML Structure (4/5)

• ✓ Clear use of <h1> tags
• ✗ Missing <h2> and <h3> for better hierarchy
• ⚠ Inconsistent paragraph capitalization (#Content P)
• ✓ YouTube iframe well-implemented
• ✓ Images properly formatted with alt text

CSS Implementation (5/10)

• ✗ No IDs used (need at least 5)
• ⚠ Class usage:
• .container used well
• Missing second reusable class
• ✗ Style issues:
• Invalid syntax: margin-left:100x
• Misplaced attributes outside CSS blocks
• Redundant text-align:center declarations
• ⚠ Font declarations improperly placed in h1 block

Code Quality (2/5)

• ✗ CSS organization needs work:
• Attributes outside proper blocks
• Invalid margin values
• Inconsistent spacing
• ⚠ Inline styles should move to CSS
• ✗ Redundant style declarations

Priority Fixes:

1. Add 5 unique IDs for styling
2. Create second reusable class
3. Fix CSS syntax:
4. margin-left:100x → margin-left:100px
5. Move misplaced attributes into proper blocks
6. Add heading hierarchy (<h2>, <h3>)

Your layout and functionality work well. Focus on meeting the technical requirements (IDs and classes) and cleaning up CSS organization to improve your score significantly.

Technical Feedback (8/20)

HTML Structure (3/5)

• ✓ Main heading (<h1>) used correctly
• ✗ Custom tags used instead of standard <p> tags (<p1>, <p2>, <p4>)
• ⚠ Links present but have syntax errors (missing >)
• ✓ Image (elio2.jpeg) implemented correctly
• ✗ Needs more section headings

CSS Implementation (4/10)

• ⚠ IDs implemented:
• #containerone
• #containertwo
• #floatingpup
• Need 2 more to meet requirements
• ⚠ Classes:
• .container used well
• Need another reusable class (3+ instances)
• ✗ Style issues:
• Invalid syntax (opacity: .7.5)
• Missing semicolons
• Broken custom tag selectors

Code Quality (1/5)

• ✗ Invalid HTML elements (<div1>, <p1>, <p2>, <p4>)
• ✗ Improper CSS formatting
• ✗ Missing closing brackets
• ✗ Invalid font-family declarations
• ✗ Misused quotes in div1 styling

Priority Fixes:

1. Replace custom tags (<p1>, <p2>, <p4>) with standard <p> tags
2. Add 2 more unique IDs
3. Create another reusable class
4. Fix link syntax
5. Clean up CSS syntax (semicolons, opacity values)

Enjoyed this project overall! Address the technical issues listed here and this will be a solid submission.

Good stat to highlight about economic disadvantages and how they affect educational opportunity.

Technical Feedback (14/20)

HTML Structure (4/5)

• ✓ Good use of heading hierarchy (h1-h6)
• ✓ Paragraphs properly tagged
• ✗ Two empty <p> tags need content
• ✗ Missing navigation links
• ⚠ Images work but need better organization

CSS Implementation (7/10)

• ✓ Multiple IDs used effectively
• ✓ Good reuse of .container class
• ✗ #rain1 ID exists in CSS but not in HTML
• ✗ .container class missing style definitions
• ✗ Layout issues due to undefined container styles

Code Quality (3/5)

• ✗ HTML syntax errors:
• Missing > in <link> tag
• Unclosed final <div>
• ✗ Unused CSS selectors (p2, h2, #rain1)
• ✗ Inconsistent margin spacing
• ✗ Div structure needs optimization

Key Improvements:

1. Add navigation links
2. Define .container styles
3. Fix HTML syntax errors
4. Clean up unused CSS
5. Improve div organization

Overall I really enjoyed your concept and visuals that reinforced the theme of the page. Focus on cleaning up the technical details and completing the missing style definitions to take this to the next level.

Although in context, this line seems to mean something to the effect of, "we were all young once", the use of the word "boys" does imply that FitzStephen was intending to write to a male audience. That does give a sense that gender roles were present in Medieval London, and that both physical play and scholarly reading were possibly considered to be activities for boys and men. It's interesting because although it's maybe not quite this explicit, gender does play a role in the way in which sports today are perceived as well.

It's interesting how this section on ball games focuses on the joy, passion, and sense of community brought by ball games, while in The Etymologies of Isadore of Seville, the focus is much more on the rules and mechanisms of the ball games themselves rather than the ways in which they fit into day-to-day life (Cambridge University Press 371).

I found this section to be really interesting. I love the comparison of debate to wrestling, a very physical sport. This way of viewing debate as falling into a similar category of activity to physical sports seems similar to me to the way debate is viewed as an activity today. It's interesting, too, how despite it encouraging a similar competitiveness to physical sports which were not always viewed positively (Milliman 609), debate here is shown as an activity very much encouraged by schools and by churches.

I was shocked by the fact that ID is not mandatory in US. This is so horrible. And mailing your vote - OMG, hilarious...

In Ukraine we have special people going with closed buckets from home to home if you have something going on with health, but no mailing!!

Cementum lines are growth rings in the teeth of animals, similar to tree rings, which help estimate the animal’s age by reflecting periods of growth and dormancy.

Habitat heterogeneity describes the variety and complexity of environmental features within a landscape. Diverse habitats can influence the risk of predation by providing areas that offer more or less protection for prey.

affect of video production itself, too

SEO speak and metadata slurry, too

Oh, so this is useful and interesting because I remember hearing about these when they were first proposed. Essentially, one of the problems even when infrastructure revert to public hands is that it's in crap shape and it's not clear whose job it is to pay to fix it up.

What knowledge, personal attributes or skills do you possess that you can offer to the benefit of this role/team?

I have experience working in the private sector (i.e. businesses), public sector (i.e. government) and civil society (i.e. organisations) which which has strengthened to speak different organisational language and build relationships.

Annotation 3: "Origin countries benefit most from labor migration when they make it an explicit part of their poverty reduction strategy... These benefits could be amplified by lowering the costs of sending remittances."

This section presents an epiphany about the role of structured migration in poverty reduction. Understanding that migration, when managed properly, can contribute to economic stability through remittances and knowledge transfer offers a new perspective. This insight encourages a rethinking of migration as a strategic tool for poverty reduction rather than just a social issue. This thought connects with the inquiry question by reframing migration as a structured development strategy with tangible, targeted benefits.

https://www.worldbank.org/en/publication/wdr2023

Annotation 2: "Climate change is compounding the economic drivers of migration. About 40 percent of the world’s population—3.5 billion people—live in places highly exposed to the impacts of climate change: water shortages, drought, heat stresses, sea level rise, and extreme events."

This passage raises questions about the specific ways climate change contributes to migration patterns. It invites inquiry into potential policies that could mitigate climate-related migration. A question might be, "What strategies could both origin and destination countries employ to address climate-driven migration effectively?" This aligns with the inquiry question by prompting further exploration into how environmental factors intersect with migration policy.

Annotation 1: "Migration has proved to be a powerful force for development, improving the lives of hundreds of millions of migrants, their families, and the societies in which they live across the world. But there are challenges as well—for migrants, their countries of origin, and their countries of destination."

This passage addresses one of the main ideas of the text: migration as both a beneficial and challenging force in global development. It connects to today's inquiry question by exploring the dual nature of migration’s impact—both as a driver of progress and a source of issues that require careful management. The author seems to convey the necessity of understanding both benefits and challenges to implement policies that maximize positive outcomes.

The DIY way I organise my life by [[struthless]]

shiny new thing syndrome [2:01]

meh...

I don't understand how this is permitted. I feel like for people's data to be used by a company, they should at least have to recieve the benifit of using whatever service that company is provided.

I find this to be a very disturbing and ethically questionable buisiness model. The fact that these companies are explicitly made to make society less productive is something I find very concerning.

The author is saying that the adulthood and youngness isn't always going to stay. Its here today but will be gone tomorrow. You have beauty today and everyone is attracted by your beauty today but they wont be anymore once your beauty is gone by tomorrow.

What is left? Accumulation through ascetic compulsion to save

Puritan values are now inflicted on everyone

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UNEQUAL DISTRIBUTION OF GOODS- result of divine providence

bourgeois also powered by industrious workmen

bourgeois man, if he remained ethical, could morally justify financial pursuits

Protestant asceticism restricted enjoyment of possessions but also morally legitimized occupational labor

expectation that individual spend all their money only on Godly things

Job and mosaic law- God will bless his own and legitimacy of the law as moral standard- fueled Protestant spirit of self-righteousness and sober legality

Diction- use of divine hints - a righteous man takes up on the opportunities God has provided him

Calvinism found way to justify div of labour and profit making

following call conflated with taking up of opportunities

calling is inherently systematic and methodical

• interesting to consider how much quality non-methodical work exists in the world

wealthy should also work just because it is God's command and whatnot

lack of grace as in lack of status grace

labor as defense against worldly temptations

doesn't say directly that time is money but it translates well

BARS- deadliest sin is a waste of time

I could literally think about this all day what the church has managed to truly demonize is wasted time

relaxation seen as more of a danger than just wealth

Puritan writings were anti-wealth in a way mediaeval ethical literature was not

to Richard Baxter- wealth = morally suspect

like in all denominations- promoting ascetic way of life not sustainable and therefore feeding into Calvinistic worldliness

Baptists waiting for the spirit required things resembling Calvinists stoic action and character

Despite distinction from other manifestations of Protestantism, Baptists sill needed to have blameless congregation. So, even though God's grace couldn't be earned and rebirth had a stronger tie to a single action, rebirth was incomplete or unjustified without continual good action

Baptists believed in a sort of avoidance of the world

Spirit offered to anyone and accepted by resisting sin

Baptists took spirit of salvation through individual revelation and working through Divine Spirit

Methodism- although emotional- still just resulted in world works for the Lord

methodists rest on uncertainty of salvation but aspiring to a sort of transcendence??? replaced pre-destination

previous point led to two responses- stronger ideas of bible as only authority versus anti-Calvin ideas that grace is in fact earned and lost

methodism- in its emphasis on "the act" - posed issue with predestination doctrine for Methodists

Although Wesley attacked centralization of grace by works it was to clarify that salvation is not caused by works- even though works are necessary to identifying your own status of grace

it is difficult but guarantees the certitudo salutis and frees Calvinists of their worry

Methodism required immediate feeling of forgiveness

Methodism- methodical, systematic nature of conduct to attain certitudo salutis

the missionary- as opposed to the monk lifted up for their work outside church circles

1. nearing perfection of the law developed the state of grace and was a sign of it.
2. He provides for his chosen who wait patiently and deliberately

Pietism entered- with the ethic of "the calling" - into non Calvinistic denominations

emotions only heightened ethic of calling

Pietism had emotional element foreign to Calvinism

Pietism- movement away from heady church of theologians and invisible Christians towards the community distinct in the way the go about daily tasks

while you no longer needed to earn your salvation from God- you had to prove to the church that you deserved it and belonged to an IN crowd

more us and then in pre-destination- drove towards hatred for the enemy

proving one's faith- not necessarily earning it- an endless pursuit not derived out of attaining something but closer to deserving what you've given

I think it is important for programmers to make designs that can work for everyone. When designers and programmers overlook the needs of different groups of people, including those with disabilities this can lead to some users not being able to access there designs.

Kids who are nearsighted may instinctively sit toward the front of the classroom understanding why they need to sit there. They are simply responding to their visual needs in a way that helps them engage better with their learning environment. I never thought of it this way but it makes sense.

In both speeches, he shows his belief that we will win the war.

He seems to be more urgent in this speech.

Before in his December 8, 1941: Address to Congress Requesting a Declaration of War he made it seem more like we needed to rely on the army but now it's ourselves.

His tone at the start of this speech differs from his December 8, 1941, Address to Congress Requesting a Declaration of War, which showed the changing situation between the U.S. and Japan.

He justifies his coming actions by asserting as being for the good of his people.

Roosevelt expresses here the total commitment needed from every citizen.

His way of speaking at the start of this speech shows the importance of his words.

Here Roosevelt invokes divine intervention, asserting that they are backed by a higher power.

This statement highlights the determination and resolve , projecting Americas confidence.

The article was written nearly 5 years ago now but it was updated just over a year ago which goes to show how important the issue of Voter Restoration is in the democracy and how important it is to be more up to date with the information in this political environment.

The Voting Rights Restoration for Felons Initiative which was passed and approved in 2018 and it is something that will always be current in the topics that come up when talking about voting rights as in America, there is a very strained relationship between it's citizen and how they see felons because of the way that the Prison Industrial Complex is set up and the stigma surrounding people who have committed crimes. This article would definitely be a good place to start when it comes to the discussion on the topic and the overwhelming popularity for this amendment in Florida.

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So this clarifies that signification has primacy over manifestation, which I suppose means that concepts have an inherited durability that antecedes the sage and affects their manifestation. This also calls into question the envelopment of the prior paragraph, because that sentence seems to imply the intentionality of the subject and control over signification. But perhaps I'm missing that that's only partly how it works - the clause 'this dimension also has a role to play.'

...stability (temporary, partial, cannot be assumed) of the signified concept.

then, desires and beliefs articulated in words depend on the primacy of concepts that make them significant. But desires are greater than the simple urgency of needs, and beliefs greater than simple opinions, so the quote points toward the congealment of a manifested [subject], someone formed by concepts (sense-events) that emerge out of prior sayables. But I find this quote does not at all establish the claim of the prior paragraph, which is making an altogether different point about the meaning (development) of words being independent of particular persons. And the tension between the subject who envelops signification and its later de-velopment is sloppy and seems attributed on the part of Bowden. 'signification... may also be developed (unwrapped) independently of any speaking person' - that's a fine point but I'm cautious about attributing it to Deleuze because it concerns the status of the subject which so far is thoroughly ambiguous, 'personal manifestation' - it seems to import much more general implications from a generic post-war continental philosophy.

ok, that's a different direction - conditions of possibility (underlying assumptions?) versus execution of truth. I'm still holding out for a distinction between the truth of sense versus correct facts.

Exactly - so how do we tease this apart? The truth of sense is not the same as denotative correctness. But what is the falseness of sense? A totally senseless comment is absurd, neither true nor false, but some superficially correct statements can be dangerously wrong if they carry along with them particular assumptions

Note also that the proposition itself is body, not event. But it presumably is caused by the event of the sayable.

When a proposition - perhaps a speech act - characterizes an event it is language used in a particular way which composes the event of sense, much in the way Derrida says somewhere that the event of an utterance or of writing is the sentence. Might be interesting to look again at signature event context.

Kimmerer - the being of the bay, the event of the bay

incorporeal event-effect = sayable, the thing that can be said logical dimension = Sinn = sense-events, the extra meaning of any statement is an event constituted in relation to the sayable. Sinn is an event that captures the sayable, itself an event.

tracking Derrida here

remember that paper I wrote I think for Ashley Thompson where I talked about the penumbral quality of things... But also th paper i wrote for Stephania in which the thing that exists is the thing (person) that continually is recreated - three papers now from early grad school I need to try to find!

Sinn could be sense or deeper meaning, meaning of life but also reason (eg senseless) or orientation, direction Bedeutung - dictionary definition, narrow meaning. these bear relevantly on my trying to figure out the meaning of meaning, mean, orientation, direction, intention - the etymology. Glass half full/empty - same bedeutung, very different Sinn. Zeichen = sign

Oxford reference" Sign" - "Gottlob Frege invented a method of investigating the relationships in such a triangle through mathematical modeling. His terms for the three parts of the sign are Zeichen, Sinn, and Bedeutung. His study proceeded through a meticulous and mathematically strict analysis of synonymy and in a novel manner linked the logic of representation to truth relations."

the event is a sayable in the sense that it is a [thing] that can be said. sayable /= the words but das ding.

interesting, not totally sure I follow the ramifications

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There are 4 common types of plans. strategic, tactical, operational, and contingency plans.

Royal Strengthen Shift Springs KMM Typewriter by [[Phoenix Typewriter]]

I picked this up from a repair manual, but good to see my reading was correct.

Forming the tabs on the shift assembly inwards will increase the tension and responsiveness of the shift assembly on older Royal standard typewriters.

Conflict in which appx 200,000 people were killed in a conflict between the Rapid Support Forces and the Sudanese Armed Forces, located between the capital city of Khartoum and the western region of Darfur

known as Hemedti or Little Mohamad - also holds position of deputy head of Sudan's ruling soverign council

all familiar

This is where our guy went

After 24 years of conflict between the people of Southern Sudan and the Sudanese government in an effort to create a democratic government in Khartoum, the nation's capital, a peace agreement was signed and separated North and South Sudan.

The people of the Nuba mountains, fought for South for independence; yet after the peace treaty was signed their lives became increasingly dangerous.

The concept of cooperation and interdependence in Native culture means that man and nature coexist harmoniously and share resources together. It is fascinating to see such a topic in 2024.

He is compairing people to animals yet again

This would hurt so bad

What is he seeing

And again we inch closer and closer

we are getting closer to the truth.

very interesting roles for master and servant

Interesting, I dont think hes really carring it willingly

justice for Babo hes getting tossed around

or ya know we could call him by his name

Very strong man

Hes hiding something

Because of his idea of a colonizer and how certain people should never be above others

Storyboarding is also a personal favorite of mine! While visualizing the problem and ideal future, it becomes easier to understand which solutions would help address the issue. Additionally, it is a great way to ensure that we are actually coming up with solutions that address the root causes. During EDUC 789, my teammates and I had different visions for how to address our wicked problem (or thought we did). When I felt we were getting stuck, I suggested that we all storyboarded our understandings and what we thought would address the issue. Doing this exercise helped us understand how to build on each other's ideas, while also realigning with our problem statement. After all, "a picture is worth a thousand words."

​On a slightly different note, I love journey/process mapping. While it is commonly used in the initial 'Empathy' phase (although not limited to this), I think it is also a valuable tool for identifying areas for ideation. In fact, I once showed a stakeholder the process map I created about students' experiences before and during in-school therapy, and it was a valuable exercise. Not only did it help with identifying potential solutions, but it also clarified my understanding of the wicked problem's causes.

What would be the hub on the farm?

If the "Hanks Effect" was really so prominent, then we should see the commensurate rise in price of 5 Series Smith Coronas and particularly the Clipper and the Silent which he's also mentioned several times. In fact, he's said these would be the typewriter he'd keep if he had to get rid of all others. Given this fact, it has to be, in part, a variety of other factors which inflates the prices.

Personally I think that it's a combination of the fact that they were manufactured at the peak of typewriter use and manufacturing and before companies began using more plastic and cheaper manufacturing methods, but were also done in a later timeperiod when exterior design and color were on the rise as a differentiator in the marketplace. Quality, form, and function become part of a trifecta which drive desire and collectability.

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A 42 pocket cell phone "hotel" could be repurposed to hold the typeslugs and typebar assemblies for typewriters being disassembled, cleaned, and then reassembled.

There are smaller 30 and 36 pocket versions, but 42 is just about right for the number of typebars most typewriters have.

This is very close to what Bowden is saying about the Stoics in Logic and Sense