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  1. May 2026
    1. On 2022-11-10 12:05:31, user Mattia Deluigi wrote:

      Very interesting study!

      A few suggestions:

      • In the current preprint, it is stated that “Visual inspection of the NTSR1-H4X:SR142948A complex, and two structures with the chemically-related antagonist SR48692 (NTSR1-H4X:SR48692 and<br /> NTSR1-H4bmX:SR48692), reveals that the M250(5.51) sidechain points away from the TM bundle...”.

      However, this is not entirely correct. In the NTSR1-H4bmX:SR48692<br /> complex, M250 points towards, not away from, the TM bundle.

      • In Figures 3F and S8G,H, F347(7.31) is labeled incorrectly and should be F346(7.30). Y346(7.30) is also labeled incorrectly and should be Y347(7.31).

      • It is stated that “Addition of NT8-13 or SR142948A induces sizeable upfield chemical shift perturbations (Figure 3A).”

      However, the next sentence states that the peaks are approximately aligned, which I don’t understand: “The positions of the M2044.60 peak in the apo, NT8-13 and SR142948A bound forms are approximately aligned, despite the different nature of the ligands”.

      Do you actually mean the position of the M204 side chain in the crystal<br /> structures?

      • It is also stated: “Thus, it suggests the main effect of the ligands on M204(4.60) chemical shifts is through the modulation of the contacts with other receptor residues, rather than the direct effect of the ligand on the methionine methyl group.”

      Don’t you think the ligands could indeed have a strong direct effect?<br /> The apo pocket is obviously empty, whereas in the NT8-13 and SR14 complexes, M204 is rather close to the isobutyl and adamantyl moieties of the ligands, respectively.

      All the best,

      Mattia

    1. On 2022-11-09 20:23:10, user Black Wang wrote:

      Can the authors explain why DFP treatment does not induce HIF1 stabilization in Fig. 1A, 1C, which is very odd? Also, FBXL4 KO clone 1D4 has much less BNIP3 expression than clone 2G10 while both KO clones have similar expression level of NIX.

    1. On 2022-11-09 09:15:00, user Hauser Kronenberg DZNE wrote:

      This work is an important resource and characterisation of culture media conditions for anyone doing in vitro iPSC-microglial monocultures.

      1. We were curious if the authors had performed immunocytochemistry for some of the most common microglial markers (eg. Pu.1, IBA1, Tmem119, or similar) with the different media conditions?

      2. Did the authors also ever test the effect of the frequently used poly-D-Lysine or poly-L-ornithin coatings for example? Or play/adjust the density of plated cells?

      3. Unfortunately it wasn’t quite clear to us, if one or all iPSCs lines were used in each round of differentiation and which line is represented in the brightfield images.

    1. On 2022-11-07 21:26:11, user Debra Tumbula Hansen wrote:

      This is an exciting result that may impact the development of therapeutics. Since the results are largely based on antibodies that are specific to each NPR1, NPR2 and NPR3, and since these three proteins have some sequence homology, then some additional information on the antibodies may be needed to robustly confirm this intriguing conclusion. Are the NPR antibodies monoclonal, and what region of each protein is recognized? What would also help would be to show the full lane for each blot, ideally including size markers. The anti-NPR3 blots appear to cut off where the anti-NPR1 signal runs, and vice-versa. Each antibody could be validated for recognition of its specific target, and lack of recognition of the other two homologous targets. The validations are needed only for whichever of the three methods (western, immunoprecipitation, or immunohistochemistry) was used for that antibody. It would also help to explain if the p62 protein is a receptor protein and to confirm that p62 is in the cell membrane fraction, like NPR1, NPR2 and NPR3. Also, the dimer is one possible form of the NPR enzymes. The few studies that have been done with purified, active mammalian NPR have identified a tetramer for NPR1 (PMID: 1657900 & 35821229). Eventually, it will be interesting to see if NPR3 forms a heterotetramer or a heterodimer with NPR1 and NPR2. Either form is consistent with the results of this preprint.

    1. On 2022-11-07 20:26:55, user George Orwell wrote:

      This sentence is ambiguous enough it seems nonsensical: "In addition, they retain activity against monoclonal antibody resistance mutations conferring reduced susceptibility to previously authorized mAbs."<br /> I think I know what the authors are trying to say and not say.<br /> Against BA.2 (the latest, most common variant tested), Sotrovimab (VIR-7831) and VIR-7831 do NOT demonstrate potent in vitro and in vivo activity: Table 1 shows IC50 and IC90 values for Sotrovimab need to be about a thousand and ten thousand times higher than against the Wuhan strain. But everything is being done to avoid making that clear.

      To call the oldest strain "wild-type" is inappropriate, as the preponderance of the evidence indicates a lab origin, so there is no wild type.

    1. On 2022-11-07 14:23:16, user Erin Schuman wrote:

      Erin Schuman<br /> Jan 7, 2021<br /> While initial reports argued that emetine was required to stabilize the interaction of puromycylated peptides with ribosomes, some recent studies of local protein synthesis via the puromycylation method relied on treatment with puromycin alone for ~5–10 min, with the implication that detected nascent proteins do not appreciably diffuse away from their site of synthesis (i.e. ribosome) within the treatment time (Colombo et al., 1965; tom Dieck et al., 2015; Morisaki et al., 2016). To determine how far a nascent protein might diffuse on these timescales (i.e. the spatial resolution of the method), we calculated the expected displacement as a function of time, based on the previously measured diffusion coefficient of GFP in the cytosol (Di Rienzo et al., 2014; Figure 5). This calculation depends on the dimensionality of space in which the molecule is confined. However, even in the most limiting case of one-dimensional diffusion—approximating movement along a very narrow neural projection—a protein is expected to diffuse ~100 µm in less than 1 min. This distance is large compared to both the scale of the relevant structures to which protein synthesis was localized in neurons (tens of microns) (tom Dieck et al., 2015; Biever et al., 2020), and to the diameter of HeLa cells (~20 microns) (Borle, 1969), in which the method was demonstrated (David et al., 2012). Thus, limiting puromycin treatment time to a few minutes does not ensure that nascent proteins remain confined to the subcellular region in which they are synthesized.<br /> More<br /> Using Green Fluorescent Protein (GFP) diffusion in CHO cells as a model for endogenous protein diffusion is not the most appropriate. In non-native cells, the diffusion of GFP is influenced by molecular crowding of its environment, as it likely does not have any abundant endogenous protein interaction partners (e.g. aequorin). For example, the GFP diffusion value cited by Enam et al. in Figure 5, (dark green line in our linked Figure), derived from studies in CHO cells, is much faster than the GFP diffusion values obtained in neuronal compartments like axons (light green line in Figure) (Reshetniak et al., 2020). In fact, and even better, there are direct data available on the diffusion of puromycylated peptides in a neuron-derived cell line (Ge et al., 2016) (purple line in Figure). The diffusion of puromycylated peptides measured directly in Ge et al., is ~ 10-fold slower than the diffusion of cytosolic GFP in CHO cells shown in Figure 5 of Enam et al. In addition, many groups have directly studied the diffusion of neuronal proteins in mature neurons- and again found diffusion values that are much slower than cytosolic GFP in the same subcellular compartment (grey line in Figure). As such, we believe that puromycin, when used appropriately, can be used in neurons to ascertain or validate the location of nascent proteins in or near the compartment (axonal or dendritic) in which they were synthesized. Practically speaking, measurements should be made in distal processes (e.g. > 50 microns from the cell body) following short-labelling times (~ 5 min) using a low (~2 – 5 uM) puromycin concentration– these are the typical parameters used by most experimenters, including our group.

      link to Figure: https://schumanlab.github.i...

      Erin Schuman, Paul Donlin-Asp, Susanne tom Dieck

      References.

      Enam et al., 2020. Puromycin reactivity does not accurately localize translation at the subcellular level eLife. DOI: 10.7554/eLife.60303

      Ge et al., 2016. Puromycin analogs capable of multiplexed imaging and profiling of protein synthesis and dynamics in live cells and neurons. Angewandte Chemie. doi.org/10.1002/anie.201511030

      Reshetniak et al., 2020. A comparative analysis of the mobility of 45 proteins in the synaptic bouton. The EMBO Journal. doi.org/10.15252/embj.20201...

    1. On 2022-11-05 15:22:58, user Frank wrote:

      The days after vaccination for the bivalent cohort is closer than the two monovalent shot cohort, and so antibody levels may be biased higher for the bivalent group due to temporal features.

      "two monovalent boosters (70-100 days after vaccination), or the bivalent booster (16-42 days after vaccination)"

    1. On 2022-11-05 13:23:45, user a rookie wrote:

      I think it would be better to explain more about why you chose albicidin in the Introduction. Because there are lots of compounds that are structurally similar to albicin. I mean, do not multiply entities beyond necessity.

    1. On 2022-11-05 12:34:20, user YotamW Constantini wrote:

      Very nice work. Question regarding the complexity when adding covariates: The design matrix X in the simple case doesn't require regression for β_0 as it is the mean, but adding domains will require regression. Do you think the complexity then would increase cubicly with the number of location and/or number of domains?

    1. On 2022-11-05 08:46:05, user Heather Etchevers wrote:

      Very convincing, careful enhancer analyses.

      For the record, my collaborators and I published the following some time ago (J Med Genet 2006;43:211–217. doi: 10.1136/jmg.2005.036160):

      "Presumably, the CHD7 protein plays an important role in chromatin remodelling during early development and allows a level of epigenetic control over target genes expressed in mesenchymal cells derived from the cephalic neural crest. We analysed the expression pattern of the CHD7 gene during early human development. CHD7 is widely expressed in the undifferentiated neuroepithelium and in mesenchyme of neural crest origin. Towards the end of the first trimester it is expressed in dorsal root ganglia, cranial nerves/ganglia, and auditory, pituitary, and nasal tissues as well as in the neural retina."

      The involvement of some of the transcription factors of interest in the present work (SOX10, FOXD3, CHD7), were also established in human neural crest and other embryonic tissues in this early transcriptomics paper back in 2008 (Hum Mol Genet. doi: 10.1093/hmg/ddn235):

      "We finally examined the spatial expression of a selection of genes identified by SAGE using in situ hybridization on human embryo sections at C13 (Fig. 4). SOX11 and MAZ code for transcription factors and GJA1 for a critical gap junction protein; other genes we studied (not shown) include the transcription factors SOX10 (24), ZEB2 (25) and CHD7 (26) and HEYL; the receptors encoded by NOTCH2 and FGFR2; and the cytoskeleton-associated CTNNB1 and MID1 (27). All were expressed in both the neuroepithelium and NCC, with the exception of SOX10, which only postmigratory hNCC appeared to express at C13. (...) As in animals, SOX10 (24) and FOXD3 (Fig. 3) appeared to be more expressed by early postmigratory hNCC than the neural tube."

      Due probably in part to restrictions on the number of references, neither of these contributions had been mentioned in the important basic research published thereafter by Bajpai et al. 2010, Sperry et al. 2014, or your own group's Williams et al. 2019.

      But it may not be too late to recognize that others, too, laid foundations for the community's further insights into the specific impacts of widely important (perhaps not "housekeeping") chromatin modifiers such as CHD7 on vertebrate neural crest lineages in particular.

    1. On 2022-11-05 00:31:14, user René Janssen wrote:

      A very well written paper by experts on this field of bird and insect migration studies.

      What I miss in the discussion is the foraging and migration of bats (mostly nightly, but also by daytime) that could give false signals. I think it would be improve the paper to add some sentence to this problem.

      Again: thanks for the well written paper and great research.

      René Janssen<br /> The Netherlands

    1. On 2022-11-04 01:27:48, user Yuko Munekata wrote:

      I cannot see the Table mentioned in the main text. Could you please tell me where I can find it?<br /> Best Regards,<br /> Yuko Munekata

    1. On 2022-11-04 01:00:24, user E. Castedo Ellerman wrote:

      Wonderful that you have been sharing the code as it is getting developed. You can use a reference more permanent than a github.com URL if you use a SWHID. For instance, your official Sep 10 release has SWHID swh:1:rev:a5523b8abe525c0630308dec31801eafc83133d7<br /> which can be used at archive.softwareheritage.org or any service in the future that supports SWHIDs. Software Heritage has more details on how to cite, badges, etc...

    1. On 2022-11-03 15:59:25, user Donald R. Forsdyke wrote:

      MEANING OF “POLYGENES”

      The study of Xiong et al. “highlights that, in addition to incompatibility factors with large effects, genomically dispersed polygenes are also abundant in creating butterfly reproductive isolation” (1). Regarding polygenes, they cite a 1992 paper of Naveira (2), rather than his 1998 summary of work carried out with Maside (3). They appreciate my drawing this to their attention and have suggested that readers of their preprint paper would appreciate a formal comment. At issue is whether, when genomically dispersed, the term “polygenes” should be interpreted as “many genes,” or something else.

      Pondering why incompatibility factors are so dispersed they write (1):

      “One of our key findings is that many factors of perhaps individually small effects are widely dispersed across autosomes or on the Z chromosome. Consequently, average chromosomal ancestry is often more informative of phenotypes than any particular locus. This pattern is similar to the polygenic threshold model of hybrid incompatibility in Drosophila, where abnormal phenotypes depend more on the total quantity of introgression than where introgression occurs in the genome [41, 42, 43].”

      Their first reference here “[41]” is to Naveira’s 1992 report on polygenic effects causing sterility in male fruit fly hybrids. However, they do not mention his subsequent detailed studies with Maside that were summarized in 1998 (3). These concluded that, rather than genes per se, “it might be only a question of foreign DNA amount.” Thus, “experiments on the nature of these polygenes suggest that the coding potential of their DNA may be irrelevant.”

      The Naviera-Maside hypothesis was cited in a 2000 paper on Haldane's rule (4), but it has been largely overlooked in the literature. There appears to be no discussion of the hypothesis in the paper of Xiong et al. (1), even though the case for it has grown appreciably (5). It is also important in view of their paper's opening remarks on "the sex with the greatest fitness costs." Fitness usually implies genes. However, sterility and fitness do not necessarily go together. A mule is sterile but very fit. So being "fit" is subtle and it may be unwise to imply that a sterile organism is necessarily unfit, especially when that sterility is considered "largely phenomenological." Thus, it is good that Xiong et al. write of "incompatability factors" rather than of "incompatability genes" (1), which implies phenotypes.

      (1) Xiong T, Tarikere S, Rosser N, Li X, Yago M, Mallet J (2022) Diverse genetic architectures on the Z chromosome underlie the two rules of speciation in Papilio butterfly hybrids. BioRxiv: doi.org/10.1101/2022.10.28.... (Oct 30)<br /> (2) Naveira HF (1992) Location of X-linked polygenic effects causing sterility in male hybrids of Drosophila simulans and D. mauritiana. Heredity 68, 211–217.<br /> (3) Naveira HF & Maside XR (1998) The genetics of hybrid male sterility in Drosophila. In: Endless Forms: Species and Speciation. (Howard, DJ & Berlocher, SH, eds.), pp. 330-338. Oxford: Oxford University Press.<br /> (4) Forsdyke DR (2000) Haldane's rule: hybrid sterility affects the heterogametic sex first because sexual differentiation is on the path to species differentiation. J. Theor. Biol. 204, 443-452.<br /> (5) Forsdyke DR (2022) Centenary of Haldane's "rule": why male sterility may be normal, not "idiopathic". J. Genetics 101 (1), 26.

  2. Apr 2026
  3. social-media-ethics-automation.github.io social-media-ethics-automation.github.io
    1. 9.1. Privacy# There are many reasons, both good and bad, that we might want to keep information private. There might be some things that we just feel like aren’t for public sharing (like how most people wear clothes in public, hiding portions of their bodies) We might want to discuss something privately, avoiding embarrassment that might happen if it were shared publicly We might want a conversation or action that happens in one context not to be shared in another (context collapse) We might want to avoid the consequences of something we’ve done (whether ethically good or bad), so we keep the action or our identity private We might have done or said something we want to be forgotten or make at least made less prominent We might want to prevent people from stealing our identities or accounts, so we keep information (like passwords) private We might want to avoid physical danger from a stalker, so we might keep our location private We might not want to be surveilled by a company or government that could use our actions or words against us (whether what we did was ethically good or bad) When we use social media platforms though, we at least partially give up some of our privacy. For example, a social media application might offer us a way of “Private Messaging” [i1] (also called Direct Messaging) with another user. But in most cases those “private” messages are stored in the computers at those companies, and the company might have computer programs that automatically search through the messages, and people with the right permissions might be able to view them directly. In some cases we might want a social media company to be able to see our “private” messages, such as if someone was sending us death threats. We might want to report that user to the social media company for a ban, or to law enforcement (though many people have found law enforcement to be not helpful), and we want to open access to those “private” messages to prove that they were sent.

      I completely agree and support the reasoning that privacy is a fundamental right of each and every one of us. This does not mean we have something to hide, but it is our individual choice to keep our identities and expressions private to ourselves. I have personally wanted to maintain privacy online to stay safe from harm and identity theft from abusers.

    1. On 2022-11-03 05:01:46, user Anubhav Prakash wrote:

      Dear Author, <br /> Congratulations for this very Interesting paper. I want to further understand two things<br /> 1. Does the down regulation of sox2 expression in the segregating patch, also triggers the expression of some different kind of adhesion molecule to facilitate the segregation? <br /> 2. Probably a little tangential to the paper, does the size of segregating sensory patches are similar in different individuals ? If it is similar, then how do u think that might be regulated. Can also throught as how the segregating patches being (Sox 2 down regulation/ lmx1 expression) positioned in the common sensory regions?

      This paper is very informative. Thank you very much.

      Anubhav Prakash <br /> Graduate student, NCBS (India)

    1. On 2022-11-03 02:07:05, user Nathan Pearson wrote:

      Thanks for so quickly posting these findings for the community.

      Can you clarify (in main text, and perhaps in figure and/or yet unposted supplemental material) how many of the bivalent recipients had been boosted once (or twice) previously with monovalent -- and, ideally, a basic profile of age, sex, etc. among the study cohorts?

      And, of obvious interest, can you report which analogous titer measures differ significantly -between- cohorts (rather than merely within cohorts), including after accounting for multiple testing?

    1. On 2022-11-02 18:28:17, user Paul Robbins wrote:

      I have some concerns about the attribution of many of the gene alterations that were proposed to have resulted from RNA editing. When the changes were evaluated in our tumor samples it appears that multiple changes resulted from incorrect mapping of the sequence reads. For example, the PHF2 variants, which occurred at the first 2 bases of intron 16, corresponded to the first 2 bases of exon 17. These are visible in IGV when soft clipping is turned off, and the first 5 bases that were proposed to be intronic also matched the first 5 bases of exon 17, which is indicative of the problem of mapping RNA-seq reads properly. This was not true of all of the changes, as the G>A changes in NEIL1 mapped to exonic sequences, but we also have transcriptome data from matched normal tissue samples from 1 of our patients where expression of these variants was observed. This is another issue that has not to my knowledge been adequately addressed, as normal tissues express ADAR, indicating that these changes may not be tumor-specific. Finally, there is the issue of the high error rate of reverse transcription, which may not occur equally at all sites. This is a problem that is not easy to resolve, unless these changes are directly probed, which would seem like a good way of potentially validating these changes.

    1. On 2022-11-01 16:18:06, user Joel Boerckel wrote:

      Journal club review of:<br /> Toll-like receptor 4 signaling in osteoblasts is required for load-induced bone formation in mice.<br /> Rajpar et al. bioRxiv 2022<br /> doi.org/10.1101/2022.08.05....

      We reviewed this preprint as a part of Arcadia Science's preprint review initiative. Collated comments follow:

      In this preprint, Rajpar et al. identify a novel role for Toll-like receptor 4 (TLR4) in mechanical load-induced bone accrual. The authors conditionally deleted TLR4 from Ocn-Cre-expressing cells (which primarily target mature osteoblasts and osteocytes). Ocn-conditional TLR4 deletion had negligible effect on baseline bone phenotype, but abrogated the effects of ulnar loading on periosteal and endosteal bone formation in both male and female mice. Prior papers from the lab demonstrated that nerve growth factor (NGF) expression by periosteal cells is upregulated by loading. Here, they show that periosteal NGF expression in loaded bones is reduced by the NF-kB inhibitor, BAY 11-7082, and that loading increases the number of TLR4+ periosteal cells in WT mice. Complementary in vitro experiments in MC3T3 cells and primary osteoblasts, showed that both NFkB and TLR4 inhibition abrogated the increase in NGF expression induced by in vitro mechanical stimulation (by fluid shear stress). Finally, the authors use bulk RNA seq to compare the transcriptomic profiles of loaded or non-loaded limbs in TLR4 knockouts and wildtype mice. <br /> Overall, these new data are exciting and implicate a novel role for a classic inflammatory signaling cascade in bone mechanoadaptation. However, we found that the structure of the paper, written with NGF as the starting point, is challenging to follow for naïve readers unfamiliar with the prior NGF studies and obscures the key finding (viz., TLR4). The authors could adapt the flow described above to make it an easier read and to emphasize the novelty and impact.

      Several experiments in the paper feature insufficient sample size or missing data, whose addition would improve the strength of the conclusions that can be made.

      Specific comments:<br /> 1. Immunostaining in Fig 1 shows NGF:eGFP expression in the periosteum. This is qualitative; it would be better to quantify the number of eGFP+ cells and show this as a percentage of the total number of cells in the region of interest, for both loaded and non-loaded bones. While built on prior results, display and quantification of both loaded and non-loaded bones is important to demonstration the extent to which the BAY inhibitor reduces NGF expression to non-loaded baseline levels.<br /> 2. The qPCR data in Fig 1 C-F are not adequately powered. A minimum of 3 mice per treatment group must be analyzed for statistical analysis. <br /> 3. It is not clear how the ∆∆Ct values in Fig. 1 C-F are normalized. This information appears to be missing.<br /> 4. An explanation of the kinetics of NGF and TRL4 analysis would help. NGF-EGFP expression is analyzed 3 hours post loading and TLR4 positivity is analyzed at 7 days.<br /> 5. Figure 2 is presented as relative values, and non-loaded images are not shown. It took us a while to understand this figure. It would be clearer and more rigorous to show all four groups – Non-loaded WT, Loaded WT, Non-loaded cKO and loaded cKO on the same graph, along with corresponding representative images. These data are included in table 2, but tables are always harder to interpret compared to the main figure. Statistical comparison using repeated measures ANOVA would preserve matching and account for animal-animal variability.<br /> 6. Scale bars are missing on the images in Fig 2. <br /> 7. Figure 3 provides important support for the TLR4-NGF connection, especially with TAK-242 inhibition. The use of two orthogonal NFkB inhibitors to show the same effect is robust. Adding figure labels or illustrations to clarify the cell types used in each panel will add clarity. <br /> 8. The timeline is missing from Fig 3A. <br /> 9. The sample size for experiments in Fig 3 is unclear. Showing individual data points for independent samples, including for controls, is important. <br /> 10. Addition of a diagram/illustration to Figure 3 to indicate the fluid shear stress conditions would add clarity. “Load” should be changed to FSS (Fluid Shear Stress) in this figure.<br /> 11. The RNA-seq analysis in Figures 4, 5, 6 is unclear and does not show the comparisons most relevant to the study. We recommend re-analysis using the following comparisons:<br /> A. Effect of load: Loaded WT vs Non-loaded WT. Which pathways are regulated by loading?<br /> B. Effect of TLR4-cKO on pathways identified in (A) as load-induced pathways: Loaded WT vs Loaded cKO. Are the same pathways that were up/down due to loading still up/down after the KO? <br /> C. NGF-signaling: the in vitro data show NGF expression is abrogated by TLR4 inhibition. But in the RNA-seq data, NGF remains significantly upregulated by loading in cKO mice. Whether this upregulation in the knockouts is due to the heterogeneity of the lysed cells in the tissue or is actually relatively lower than the upregulation of NGF by loading in WT mice is not shown. Comparison of the effect of loading on NGF induction in WT and cKO mice could answer this. If NGF signaling is reduced in cKO mice, compared to WT, RNA-seq would be the ideal method to look for signatures of altered signaling downstream of NGF.

      Reviewed by: Boerckel Laboratory, University of Pennsylvania, Oct. 14, 2022.

    1. On 2022-11-01 06:28:15, user Giorgio Cattoretti wrote:

      I have to admit that I personally like the game of the easy moniker for the abstruse algorithms; and I may soon engage myself with the game. But with no acronym and a copyright protected brand name, I hope does not ends as another previous story: Pokemon (https://rdcu.be/cYHmb).

    1. On 2022-10-31 15:54:07, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      Figure 5: It would have been interesting to see the water-soaking phenotypes as these would have been expected to appear at around 24. Can a water-soaking phenotype be “reversed” once plants are shifted from LD to LL 24h after Pst infection. Same for the stomatal aperture.

    2. On 2022-10-31 15:53:52, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      Figure 4b/c/d: Labelling at the bottom should be as in a (“DC3000” instead “Control”, “DC3000+BTH” instead “BTH”)

    3. On 2022-10-31 15:53:13, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      Figure 3a, b and c: Are the same gene expression patterns and SA levels observed for the different light settings when treatment with Pst instead of flg22 is performed?

    4. On 2022-10-31 15:52:49, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      Figure S3/Line 200: “Moreover, under LL, Pst grew to levels similar to Pst hopM1-/avrE1- (h-/a-), which cannot induce water-soaking (Fig. S3).”<br /> - Pst and the Pst mutant line levels are markedly different

    5. On 2022-10-31 15:52:27, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      Line 168: “We observed that, under LL conditions, Pst could no longer induce water-soaking lesions in Arabidopsis leaves, in contrast to LD or DD (Fig. 2a).”<br /> - add that this is after 24h in the main text to make clear that there is a difference in time points for disease resistance and water soaking assays?

    6. On 2022-10-31 15:51:49, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      We think it would be interesting to measure ABA levels for the different light conditions as aba2-1 appears to have a strong effect on bacterial titters and ABA as antagonist of SA plays an important role in the discussion

    7. On 2022-10-31 15:51:23, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      We appreciate the schematic diagram of light conditions/treatments in Figure 5. Would it be possible to include similar diagrams for the other figures as this would make it easier to follow how plants have been treated. In the methods could it be described in more detail at what point after infection the light conditions were applied?

    8. On 2022-10-31 15:51:04, user Daniel Lüdke wrote:

      The following comments and suggestions were made by S. Johnson, Y. Li, C. Briggs, J. Claeys and D. Lüdke during the 2022 TSL preprint pizza party.

      In this preprint the authors demonstrate that different light conditions affect the outcome of Pseudomonas challenge on Arabidopsis. While darkness appears to favour the induction of stomatal closure and the formation of water-soaking lesions, these phenotypes are reduced/prevented under constant light conditions, leading to enhanced resistance. The authors show that this requires SA as well as integration of red and far/red light signaling. In the following are some comments and suggestions that came up during our discussion of this study:

    1. On 2022-10-31 10:53:55, user ROBERTA BANKS wrote:

      Thank you for taking the time to submit this paper. Although tobacco smoking is a prevalent problem, not much research dives into how it affects human physiology on a cellular level. I appreciate your efforts to explore this topic on a deeper level.

      The title of the paper and objectives of the study stated in the paper claim to explore the effects of cigarette smoke on neurodegeneration and reactive oxygen species, however, there is a less definite link between these topics and inflammatory markers. These topics are not fully explored in this paper. More specifically, reactive oxygen species are not explored to the depths in which EVs were explored, yet it was stated in the paper, “cigarette smoke induces a series of mechanisms that activate cell populations from both the innate and the adaptive immunity, which in turn promote the secretion of multiple inflammation-related molecules such as proinflammatory cytokines including chemokines, reactive oxygen species (ROS) and extracellular vesicles...” Reactive oxygen species were not explored sufficiently to claim that cigarette smoke can activate ROS. The lack of exploration of key topics mentioned in the beginning of the paper, make the overall study over-promising in combination with a lack of data to back up the paper’s claims. For future studies, it would be helpful to see how ROS is affected in EV-secreting cells post smoking a cigarette to have a better understanding of cigarette smoke on ROS.

      The data that is available in this paper seems to be more descriptive than quantitative and has difficulty showing significance to claims that are being made. There is also a lack of controls in your data which make the existing data and claims unreliable. Perhaps in Figure 1 and 2, it would have been helpful to take blood from the smokers after smoking to compare the data and ensure what you are seeing is significant. In addition some of the claims that are in this paper are very generalized. It is important to understand how different demographics are impacted by cigarette smoke physiologically. Might I suggest, for a future direction, conducting more testing data to see if there are any statistically significant differences in physiological response for individuals of different demographics. (For example, age, BMI, gender, ethnicity/cultural background, diabetic/non diabetic, etc.

      Once again, thank you for posting this paper. It allowed me to think deeper about the physiological effects of tobacco smoke.

    2. On 2022-10-24 04:59:52, user Sarah O'Malley wrote:

      Hello, my name is Sarah O’Malley, and I am a student of the Biomedical Research minor at UCLA. I recently read this paper with my program’s journal club, and I want to thank you for your work on mEVs and early biomarkers of tobacco smoking-induced disease. My class learned a great deal of information while reading and discussing this paper, and I would like to present some suggestions and comments:

      The variety of techniques utilized to isolate and characterize mEVs here were impressive. However, I suggest including percentage breakdowns of the different populations studied on the flow cytometry plots (Figure 2A, 2B, 2E). This data may have already been calculated through FlowJo or could easily be calculated with this software, and it would be valuable to display these percentages to provide more precise quantifications of EV populations. In addition, I believe that Figure 2D may have been incorrectly referred to as Figure 5D in the results section titled “Extracellular vesicle concentration increases in circulation 1 hour after smoking in never-smokers”.

      Also, in the results or discussion section, I would suggest including a description of why there are four post-smoking samples in Figure 2F compared to the 20 non-smoking participants or the nine pre-smoking samples shown in Figure 2F. Next, if possible, I would also suggest conducting the tests performed on nonsmokers in Figure 1 and 2 on smokers as well, which could provide additional data on the acute effects of smoking and if these effects change with the chronic smoking of tobacco. I understand that this data may be difficult to collect, but I believe that it could bolster the content of this paper.

      Lastly, I was wondering what specific statistical test you conducted for this figure. The figure legend states that a non-parametric unpaired t-test was performed. However, I wonder if a paired test should have been used, as this data consists of blood from the same individuals pre- and post-smoking. Thus, I do not know if the groups can be considered independent. Also, t-tests are parametric tests, so I am unsure of what a nonparametric t-test refers to. This pattern of referring to a nonparametric t-test was also maintained throughout the paper. Was a Wilcoxon signed-rank test performed? If not, then I would suggest implementing this statistical test here, as it serves a similar purpose to a t-test but is applicable to paired, nonparametric data. For the other instances of unpaired nonparametric t-tests, I would suggest using a Mann-Whitney U test, which also serves a similar purpose to a t-test but is applicable to unpaired, nonparametric data.

      In Figure 4B, I would suggest expanding the heatmap to display MFI levels for each sample analyzed instead of condensing the data as shown. In this condensed form, the data is a bit difficult to interpret. Alternatively, I would suggest displaying some of the quantifications of activation marker levels described in the results section, as these quantifications would convey the same message but through a more easily interpretable form.

      The discussion around Figure 5 depends on a trend shown in sTREM2 expression and a statistical decrease in BDNF expression. In the results and discussion sections, the following conclusions made about the smoking-linked mechanisms of neurodegeneration may be a bit strong based on this data. I would suggest performing follow-up experiments on other neurodegeneration markers to strengthen this evidence or perhaps test BBB functionality, as this was a concept linked to neurodegeneration throughout this paper.

      I have a quick general note on the references section. I had some trouble finding a few of the papers cited in-text in the references section (e.g. Zalba et al. 2007, Sophocles Chrissobolis et al. 2011). My class had similar difficulties navigating the references section, so I would suggest following up on the consistency of citations in-text and within this section.

      Overall, thank you for posting this paper! It was a highly educational read.

    1. On 2022-10-31 05:04:22, user Ashraya Ravikumar wrote:

      Summary:

      In this work, the author asks how protein structures change based on analyzing the torsion angles. Through examples they show that the distribution of points in this representation correlates with resolution and data collection temperature of the structures. They also construct the RoPE space of a protein using time-resolved experiment datasets and show that minor changes in the linear coordinate space are clearly observed in the RoPE space. This work demonstrates the utility of a non-linear representation of the conformational space in visualizing changes throughout the structure which are originally considered subtle. This work is very interesting and can have significant impact on ensemble studies on protein structures and in crystallization/cryo-EM and fragment screening efforts by showing the impact of temperature and resolution. The manuscript is very concise (perhaps too concise?) and well written.

      Major points:

      1. In Page 3, para 2, the author states differences associated with data collection temperature is preserved across space groups for trypsin and lysozyme but Figure 1(a) and 1(b) marks different space groups only for lysozyme and not for trypsin<br /> 2.The section on carboxymyoglobin has some unclear statements:<br /> (a) “The RoPE space of these structures showed that, over the first three picoseconds, two torsion angle modes are sufficient to represent a clear trajectory during release of carbon monoxide”. Fig 1(e) does show a trajectory from -0.1ps to 3.0 ps but it is not clear how two torsion modes are sufficient to build the trajectory.<br /> (b)“The last three timepoints, 10 ps, 50 ps and 150 ps, are therefore beyond the biologically relevant timescales for CO dissociation in myoglobin and in-line with this, they did not strongly correlate with any other timepoints in RoPE space”. We are confused about which figure/data supports this non-correlation. Is it to be interpreted from Fig 1(e)? If yes, then the author should describe what is correlation and non-correlation in the context of this figure.<br /> (c) The section on “mapping motion back onto structure” in the methods makes it unclear why the scaling is normalized to 1degree and how that might bias the magnitude of motion observed in Figure 2a (+/- 0.3 A)
      2. We tried running some analysis on the RoPE website but it was either unclear how to go about submitting a job or the website became unresponsive after clicking on “view conformational space”. The author can provide a run-through of the website usage with some examples.
      3. It is unclear how important the vagabond refinement performed here is in the clustering. How would figure 1a, b look, for example, if the PDB or PDB-REDO models were subjected to ROPE without further refinement?
      4. At the end of the SVD, it should be possible to project the contributions for each SV back onto the torsion angles most responsible for the differences. It would be interesting to plot that for BPTI and lysozyme to identify the torsions/areas leading to the greatest differences across temperatures.

      Minor points:

      1. There are some gray colored points in Figure 1(a) and 1(b) which are not accompanied by a legend and their significance not explained.
      2. To highlight the advantage of RoPE space, the author can show clustering of the same protein chains when clustered based on RMSD. The crowding of points when using RMSD vs. the separation of points when using torsion angles can make the utility of RoPE space obvious to the reader.

      3. Ashraya Ravikumar and James Fraser, UCSF

    1. On 2022-10-30 20:11:02, user Christina Stallings wrote:

      Very interesting manuscript! There are a couple of additional references that would be appropriate and important to include and discuss. The first is the original manuscript that first noted the similarity of the DciA domain with the N-terminus of DnaA (PMCID: PMC5720831, 10.1371/journal.pgen.1007115). The second is a recently published manuscript that explores predicted structures of DciA homologs across bacterial phyla (PMCID: PMC9380583, DOI: 10.1128/jb.00163-22).

    1. On 2022-10-30 17:53:25, user Thomas Guttmann wrote:

      Thomas Guttmann (thomasg@zahav.net.il)

      The SARS-CoV-2 isolate you have selected to show the special pattern (regular distancing of the BsaI/BsmBI sites, and the longest fragment being short) indeed exhibits the stated features, but I have randomly checked four other SARS-CoV-2 isolates, and they do not exhibit the same features.<br /> Your isolate:<br /> NCBI Reference Sequence: NC_045512.2<br /> Four other isolates:<br /> GenBank: MT192773.1<br /> GenBank: MT764166.1<br /> GenBank: MZ831225.1<br /> GenBank: ON110425.1

      More strains should be shown to have the alleged properties. The fact is that the virus mutates, and the recognition sites may appear and disappear. In the meantime, the supposed special features may be artefacts.

    2. On 2022-10-29 16:04:44, user Prashant wrote:

      I see the logic of the 'presence' of the type IIs sites as an indication that the genome was prepared for in-vitro assembly but those sites were not yet used for inserting variant fragments. So the paper should also comment on any restriction sites that they believe have been used up by adding a variant fragment thereby removing any type IIs sites present there.

      For example I would do this by aligning a fragment such as the furin site containing fragment to multiple viral genomes, look for regions where homology shifts from one genome to another anook into those genomes for any restricti

    3. On 2022-10-24 15:12:40, user Marlise Amstutz wrote:

      But the great advantage of Type IIS restriction enzymes is, that if I assemble fragments using these enzymes I don't need to leave the recognition site of these enzymes in. It let's me create scareless, seamless sequences. So when I use Type IIS RE why would I let them in? The only reason would be for further modifications. But then, why would I leave the same site several times and not use different sites, so I can direct my future modifications specifically? I can't imagine someone, would have designed this like that.

    4. On 2022-10-23 03:08:24, user Alex Crits-Christoph wrote:

      Genomic and phylogenetic evidence proves this preprint false for a very simple reason: the 'endonuclease fingerprint' observed in SARS-CoV-2 is also present in the bat coronaviruses most closely related to SARS-CoV-2. Thus, any hypothetical engineer of the RE sites would have to go to enormous lengths to purposefully mimick natural bat coronaviruses that have only been discovered in the past 2 years: a very dubious proposition. The far simpler alternative is that the sites evolved via natural recombination from natural bat coronaviruses.

      Further, if one examines the genomic regions around each restriction enzyme sites, we find that SARS-CoV-2 shares general genetic similarity with the virus(es) it shares the RE site (or lack therefore) with. This would further indicate that they were inherited via recombination. For example, two BsaI sites missing in SARS-CoV-2 are also missing in the RpYN06 batCoV, which follows naturally from the phylogenetic prediction that RpYN06 is the nearest neighbor in that region. Correspondingly, SARS-CoV-2 shares not just the lack of the BsaI sites in this region, but several other mutations as well: a signal entirely inconsistent with engineering and entirely consistent with natural recombination. The same is true with other natural batCoVs if you examine any of the RE sites described in this work.

      For the engineering hypothesis, this would have to imply that someone not only modified the RE sites to match natural viruses, but also unrelated nearby sites as well - an even more ludicrous proposition that I do not think even these authors can defend.

      Finally, this sort of analysis can be be done systematically by reconstructing a recombinant ancestor of SARS-CoV-2, as the two papers below did:<br /> https://www.nature.com/arti...<br /> (See Fig 2)<br /> https://www.science.org/doi...<br /> (See Fig 6)

      The recombinant ancestor is a reconstruction of the common ancestor of SARS-CoV-2 and other known bat viruses in each region of the genome. The recombinant ancestor of SARS-CoV-2 indeed shares the exact BsaI/BsmBI RE pattern of SARS-CoV-2, minus a signal synonymous mutation: thus further proving that these sites were naturally acquired via recombination. This follows intuitively from the observation that different bat viruses each have some of the RE sites described in this work, and that each bat virus that shares an RE or lack therefore with SARS-CoV-2 is the most recent common ancestor of that genomic region.

      For more, please read:<br /> https://twitter.com/flodeba...<br /> https://twitter.com/acritsc...<br /> https://twitter.com/K_G_And...<br /> https://twitter.com/zhihuac...

      And the data described in my comment is fully available at:<br /> https://github.com/alexcrit...<br /> In particular, the file with 'alignment-with-RpYN06.fasta' which includes a comparison with several batCoVs ignored in this preprint.

      Let us be clear, this is firm phylogenetic proof that the RE pattern in this work is natural. I would not use the word 'proof' lightly in science, but if we cannot use it in such a clear circumstance, we cannot use it at all. If the authors have any integrity they should gracefully retract their work here.

    5. On 2022-10-22 09:06:50, user Jacques Basaldúa wrote:

      How are synonymous mutations evidence of manipulation?

      1. They encode the same peptide, therefore researchers who would have "manipulated" the sequence would have no other reason to do it than "signing" the sequence.
      2. For the same reason, all intermediate viruses on every path from A to B are viable (in fact functionally identical), which if anything indicates it could be natural.
      3. The statistical analysis assumes independence of the mutations, which is a very tall order (linkage disequilibrium, etc.).

      Are we saying "SARS-CoV-2 is an anomaly" (which could just mean "we have lose ends") to argue in favor of the laboratory accident hypothesis?

    6. On 2022-10-22 02:57:06, user Tomato Addict wrote:

      When you test a hypothesis, you are also testing the assumptions that go along with that hypothesis. You describe a lot of assumptions in the methods, but do not say if any effort was made to check the sensitivity of the results to particular assumptions. For that matter, were these methods pre-specified before you looked at the data, or were they tuned to the data you have? If the latter, then you may have a Type I error problem.

      I strongly suggest you should consult a Biostatistician.

    7. On 2022-10-21 16:40:50, user disqus_8AVEuorTBu wrote:

      I appreciate the approach and that your data is public, but I disagree with the conclusion for a few reasons. I really hope you can address these issues before certain “news” organizations gets ahold of this.

      One criterion for IVGA is even spacing of cut sites, yet the SARS-CoV-2 BsaI/BsmBI fingerprint includes a tiny 643nt fragment within nsp13/helicase. This region is identical to SARS except for a single I->V mutation, so why would anyone engineering this virus want to separate this fragment to then do nothing to it? I prefer to believe this is just a cherry-picked pair of restriction enzymes and random noise. One could argue that this is similar to the less even iWIV1 cuts (Figure 2B), but iWIV1’s shortest fragment is still much larger than SARS-CoV-2’s and is only so short because of plasmid instability reported by Zeng et al. This unstable region is, however, very far from SARS-CoV-2’s short fragment, so again I see no reason why anyone would need this short fragment for engineering.

      Relatedly, although the longest fragment length is minimized when cuts are perfectly even spaced, statistics based on longest fragment length are not robust against tiny fragments and lead to false positives. Accounting for all fragment length by fitting to Poisson/exponential distributions would give better statistics, and I’m sure that SARS-CoV-2 would become less significant i.e. nothing in Figure 3A looks at all like Figure 2A.

    8. On 2022-10-21 15:50:35, user Jackson Emanuel wrote:

      The authors state that "The combined odds of obtaining 5 wobble mutations by chance is likely very low (Table S3), although robust estimation of the odds requires considering a space of possible sites and careful examination of wobble mutation rates in the literature, so we leave this task to future research.”However, it is already known to be the case that RNA viruses are under strong purifying selection (doi: 10.1016/j.gene.2007.09.013), and that synonymous SNPs occur far more often than non-synonymous SNPs. This difference affects the validity of their in silico mutation analysis.

    9. On 2022-10-21 03:51:47, user Jared Roach wrote:

      The distribution of random fragment lengths is a beta distribution. (Roach JC. Random subcloning. Genome Res. 1995 Dec;5(5):464-73. doi: 10.1101/gr.5.5.464. PMID: 8808467.) Maximum fragment length is not a robust statistic - it has high variance.

    1. On 2022-10-30 13:28:15, user The Sato Lab (Kei Sato) wrote:

      This preprint is now included in a paper published at Cell Host & Microbe:<br /> doi: 10.1016/j.chom.2022.10.003

      When you refer this study, please refer the peer-reviewed paper above.<br /> Best wishes,<br /> Kei

    1. On 2022-10-30 08:47:01, user Ruzek Lab wrote:

      Interesting study and very nice results, congratulations! Maybe you missed these two papers on TBEV reporting similar results: <br /> Palus et al. Mice with different susceptibility to tick-borne encephalitis virus infection show selective neutralizing antibody response and inflammatory reaction in the central nervous system. J Neuroinflammation. 2013 Jun 27;10:77. doi: 10.1186/1742-2094-10-77. PMID: 23805778; PMCID: PMC3700758.<br /> Palus et al. A novel locus on mouse chromosome 7 that influences survival after infection with tick-borne encephalitis virus. BMC Neurosci. 2018 Jul 6;19(1):39. doi: 10.1186/s12868-018-0438-8. PMID: 29976152; PMCID: PMC6034256.

    1. On 2022-10-29 08:23:12, user Karen Lange wrote:

      This study investigates the autoproteolytic cleavage of polycystin1/PC1 in the C. elegans ortholog LOV-1. Walsh et al used CRISPR genome editing to tag the endogenous LOV-1 protein at both the N-terminus (mScarlet) and C-terminus (mNeonGreen).

      Figure 1 clearly shows that the N and C tagged fragments have different localisation patterns. The N and C terminal tagged fragments also displayed different transport dynamics (Figure 4). When a point mutation that is predicted to prevent cleavage (C2181S) was introduced in the mScarlet::LOV-1::mNeonGreen strain the localisation of LOV-1 was severely disrupted. Interestingly the the N-termini of LOV-1 was enriched in the cilia of three ray neurons suggesting that some cleavage can still occur in this mutant. Taken together this body of work presents strong evidence that LOV-1 is processed in C. elegans.

      The mScarlet::LOV-1::mNeonGreen strain will be a very useful tool for use in future studies to model conserved ciliopathy variants. I would predict that missense variants in the N or C terminal fragment do not affect the function of the other. Modelling these variants will help to elucidate disease mechanisms.

      One concern I have is whether or not the double tagged LOV-1 protein is fully functional. I can see in Figure 3D/F that the mating efficiency with unc-52 and the response behaviour is not significantly different from wild-type. However, I do not see the comparison to wild-type in the dpy-17 mating efficiency assay (Figure 3E). I would have appreciated a supplemental figure when the double tagged LOV-1 allele is first introduced to immediately address whether or not it is functional.

    1. On 2022-10-28 21:26:44, user Pierre Siffredi wrote:

      in the evaluation of power, they do not seem to actually test if this really outperforms basic meta-analysis. outside of contrived scenarios, basic meta analysis is usually the best

      i can't imagine the cross population LD working so great when most people want to use gwas summary from admixed samples, at least until biobanks provide LD calculations along with their summary data

    1. On 2022-10-28 13:55:06, user Jovana Deretic wrote:

      This work was supported by European Molecular Biology Organization (EMBO) Installation grant 3622 and an EMBO Young Investigator Award to ENF, The Scientific and Technological Research Council of Turkey (TUBITAK) grant 119Z347 to ENF. This project has received funding from the European Union's Horizon 2020 research and innovation program under the Marie Sklodowska-Curie grant agreement No 896644 awarded to JD.<br /> The article is now published in the FEBS Journal, doi: 10.1111/febs.16367, with open access after January 2023

    1. On 2022-10-28 11:23:07, user Robert Eibl wrote:

      This study shows that

      1) A fourth vaccination, either monovalent (only against original SARS-CoV-2 strain), or bivalent (also against Omicron BA.4/BA.5), really can induce a robust antibody response against SARS-CoV-2 variants,<br /> including Omicron BA.4/BA.5.

      2) Within 3-5 weeks after vaccination and in small<br /> groups of only about 20 volunteers each, a highly significant effect of the bivalent over monovalent vaccines may not be that clear, although in my view and in consideration<br /> of the logarithmic scale, I can clearly see a better outcome for the bivalent vaccines.

      Consideringnew Omicron variants currently evolving further from BA.4 or BA.5, this would further support the use of the bivalent vaccines. In addition, the study tested only the antibody (B-cell) response. It is reasonable to expect also a specific T-cell response. Finally, the level of protection may be demonstrated soon in the clinical outcome within a few months.

    2. On 2022-10-27 03:23:18, user Nathan Pearson wrote:

      Please consider using plotted datum color, shape, or size to distinguish recipients of Moderna vs. Pfizer bivalent boosters (and, ideally, to also distinguish recipients of 4 Pfizer founder-monovalent doses vs. 4 Moderna founder-monovalent doses vs. 4 founder-monovalent doses including at least one Moderna and one Pfizer dose -- as well as recipients known to have recovered from a COVID bout in the _ months prior to assay).

      Currently your main plot does not independently use color and shape (e.g., in Fig. 1B all squares are blue and all triangles red); as such, you have some flexibility to include more information in the plot that might help at least anecdotally highlight further factors (such as brand) that may shape quantitative findings.

      Thanks.

    1. On 2022-10-28 08:53:32, user Mark Banfield wrote:

      We have observed cases of domain integrations in Pikm-1 being accepted by the Pikm-2 helper. But equally, there are cases where integration results in autoactivity, like those highlighted in this work. Our goal here was to address specific cases where autoactivity arose from manipulation of the integrated domain in the Pikm-1 chassis, and to provide methods of addressing this. We are yet to determine definitive rules that describe/predict whether an integration will cause autoactivity, and as such there is an element of trial and error in the approach at present. In this regard, some pikobodies can be incorporated into the Pikm-1 chassis without autoactivity - but this isn’t contradictory, especially as shown in the supplement of Kourelis et al., where there are several different nanobodies trialled that did result in autoactive phenotypes. But yes, we agree, the use of Pikp-2 with a Pikm-1 nanobody chimera could be used to alleviate, or help lower, autoactivity caused by the integration of some nanobodies.

    2. On 2022-10-13 12:53:12, user Ryan Kessens wrote:

      It's amazing how intolerant the Pikm-2 allele is of changes to the sensor Pik allele. I'm particularly surprised that the RGA5 HMA domain in Pikm-1 was not tolerated by Pikm-2 considering the fact that nanobody domains can be incorporated into Pikm-1 and coexpressed with Pikm-2 with some success. Do these seemingly contradictory results surprise you? Do you think there is something special about the nanobody structure that makes it a good replacement for the HMA domain in Pikm-1? Do you think coexpression of Pikp-2 with Pikm-1 pikobodies would result in less autoactivity?

    1. On 2022-10-26 13:05:02, user Diana Camila Gómez De La Cruz wrote:

      Regarding the statistics, were the student t-tests controlled for multiple testing? Perhaps this could be expanded on in the material & methods section.

    2. On 2022-10-26 13:04:17, user Diana Camila Gómez De La Cruz wrote:

      There appears to be no strong conservation of either RE02 in Solanaceae, or RLP30 in Brassicaceae. Perhaps the authors could go more into the phylogeny of these receptors, which might highlight putative receptors in Brassica and tomato involved in the recognition of SCPSs. Also, in the Arabidopsis accessions that do recognize SCPSs, is there sequence variation in RLP30?

    3. On 2022-10-26 13:03:22, user Diana Camila Gómez De La Cruz wrote:

      In figure 3 the authors show that different mutants and fragments of SCPSs are differentially recognized by different plant species. In this figure it is not immediately clear how these mutant proteins were produced (extended data 7 makes clear this is from Pichia), this should be highlighted in the figure 3 legend. Additionally, the western blots for the truncations appear to be missing and perhaps the western blots for the individual cysteine mutations should be moved to the main figure. Finally, the interpretation of this data is that there is differential recognition of these SCPSs mutants and fragments between species, indicating that either there are additional receptors, or different epitopes are recognized by SCPSs-recognizing receptors in these species, or the SCPSs-recognizing receptors differ in their robustness of recognition. One alternative interpretation is that the apoplastic conditions are different between these species, and therefore these SCPSs mutants/fragments may behave differently depending on the species. Either this could be mentioned in the text, or a western blot should be added after infiltration to show the stability of these mutants in the apoplast of the different species.

    4. On 2022-10-26 13:00:13, user Diana Camila Gómez De La Cruz wrote:

      The paper does not go into structural similarities between the cysteine-rich effectors from the different pathogens, specially between SCP and VmE02. Given that this effector family is widely distributed, it is likely that Alphafold2 would be able to produce high-confidence models. This might also help to narrow down candidate proteins recognized in the fractions from Pseudomonads

    5. On 2022-10-26 12:57:34, user Diana Camila Gómez De La Cruz wrote:

      In figure 1E the authors show a CoIP, where they pulled-down on the receptor-side to show that SCPSs-Myc specifically interacts with RLP30-GFP, and not RLP23-GFP (used as a control). However, this experiment requires a Myc-tagged secreted protein as a negative control, rather than no control at all on the effector side. Finally, a less cropped version of the CoIP (as a supplemental, if needed), and a ponceau stain or similar for loading control would be appreciated.

    6. On 2022-10-26 12:55:54, user Diana Camila Gómez De La Cruz wrote:

      This paper nicely characterised the previously reported SCFE1 as the small cysteine-rich protein SCPSs, and showed its recognition by RLP30 in Arabidopsis. This is demonstrated using T-DNA knockout lines, complementation, and CoIP. The authors show that SCPSs-like effectors from fungi other than S. sclerotiorum, oomycete and bacterial pathogens are also recognized by RLP30. In addition, they also show that SCPSs is recognized by different plant species. Based on sequence similarity to VmE02, the authors identify that the N. benthamiana receptor RE02 (also known as NbCSPR) can also recognize SCPSs. The authors then go on to delineate the recognized peptide from SCPSs, showing there is variation between plant species in the ability to recognize fragments derived from SCPSs. Finally, the authors show that RLP30 can also recognize an unknown elicitor found in small molecule fractions from Pseudomads, unlike the NbRE02.

      We enjoyed reading this well-written paper! The data were nicely presented, and generally well controlled. We have some comments that could improve the manuscript, although these would not affect the overall message.

      The following comments and suggestions were made by J. Kourelis, D. Gómez De La Cruz and J. Bennett.

    1. On 2022-10-26 10:34:06, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      Here are some potential future questions/avenues of exploration that arose in our discussion of the study:

      It would be super interesting in future works to identify the receptor/s involved in perception of plant and parasite derived PSY peptides. This would enable many new lines of questioning.

      Are MigPSY peptides triggering an immune response or mediating any sort of PTI-like response (i.e. triggering a ROS burst) in any root knot nematode hosts (i.e. rice)?

      How do plant receptors (such as Xa21) distinguish between endogenous and parasite derived PSY peptides? What are the molecular determinants for this specificity? It would be super interesting to study the potential co-evolutionary arms race between pathogen PSYs and host receptors.

      How did plant pathogens acquire PSY peptide mimics, evolutionarily speaking? Do non-plant pathogenic nematodes also have PSY peptides? Is it possible that non-plant pathogenic nematodes also produce these or similar peptides for other unrelated endogenous processes and then these were co-opted over evolutionary time to fulfil a role in pathogenesis?

    2. On 2022-10-26 10:33:37, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      General comments

      A sentence highlighting that this appears to be a case of convergent evolution in the discussion/conclusions would be nice!

      Would be interesting to test whether there is an additive effect between the nematode PSY peptides and the endogenous plant peptide (AtPSY1). This may help clarify if MigPSY peptides are functioning via the same signaling pathway as AtPSY1as performed in Figure 3 of the cited paper (Pruitt et al. 2017).

    3. On 2022-10-26 10:32:20, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      Figure 5<br /> In Figure 5, are graphs B and D independent? Does the number of galls affect the number of females with egg masses? Are these two independent processes?

      Is nematode fitness affected by silencing the PSY peptides? Is it correct to conclude that the silencing of the PSY peptides is affecting pathogenicity of the nematode and not the fitness?

      In Figure 5, GFP targeting siRNAs are used as a negative control. Could an improved negative control be used that knocks down a sequence that is expressed in nematode that does not impact nematode development or pathogenicity?

    4. On 2022-10-26 10:31:31, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      Figure 4<br /> Based on the in situ hybridization assay against the mRNA of the PSY mimics, the authors hypothesize that the PSY peptides are sulphated in the nematode. Is this enough evidence to hypothesize that the peptides are sulphated inside the nematode? The location of MigPSY transcripts and the location of sulfation may be completely different. Could the peptides be sulphated in the host?

    5. On 2022-10-26 10:31:07, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      Figure 2<br /> Mock is currently the only negative control, as even the truncated peptide exhibite an effect. As all peptides used influenced root growth, would there be a different and more stringent negative control that could be included? Does mutating one of the conserved residues in the PSY peptides abrogate their root growth promoting effects? If so, maybe this could be a nice control. Really liked the inclusion of the truncated peptide! Cool to see that even this variant retains root growth promoting activity.

      Also related to Figure 2, it would be helpful for any readers trying to build on these data or trying to design similar experiments what the rationale for using 100 nM concentration of the peptides in the growth medium in Figure 2. Was this decision based on the bibliography or was this found experimentally?

    6. On 2022-10-26 10:30:30, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      Figure 1<br /> •Would it be possible to model these MigPSY peptides with AlphaFold2? This would be nice to include in Figure 1. If not, is there any other in silico approach that could be used to have an insight about the structure of these small peptides? We would find any exploration of structural homology between plant and parasite PSY peptides from very exciting. Do MigPSYs exhibit structural homology to other proteins, either from the host or the pathogen?

    7. On 2022-10-26 10:29:27, user Mauricio P. Contreras wrote:

      We highly enjoyed reading this preprint, the study was well written and easy to read! We find the idea of convergent evolution of plant PSY peptide mimics in both bacteria and nematodes super interesting and look forward to any follow-up studies.

      All comments/suggestions by M. Bergum, M. P. Contreras, L. Feng, X. Lyu, S. Muniyandi, A. Posbeyikian and H. Pai

    1. On 2022-10-25 04:27:57, user Amanda Maldonado wrote:

      The article strikes me as a well-written analysis of aquatic bacterial evolution. I think that this article was incredibly effective in proving the points hypothesized in the introduction and abstract. All of the information in the article tied back to information first brought up in the introduction, which helped me as the reader follow along and see the significance of the information being provided. I also appreciate how clearly the thesis statement is addressed in the introduction of the paper. The main idea of the paper is that physicochemical factors largely contribute to the phylogeny of aquatic bacteria. This is proven by the methods mentioned in the thesis, which is a phylogenetic and MAGs analysis. Although the purpose of this paper was briefly mentioned in the introduction as relating to climate change and understanding how changing environmental conditions might affect bacteria, the authors could have been a bit more explicit about how these findings affect this field of study. I would rate the significance of this paper as a modest contribution, because although the authors did tie its importance to climate change, more context regarding its place in the field would allow me to have a better understanding of its significance. The findings are important for understanding how climate change affects ecosystems and the organisms such as bacteria living within them, but again, more context would help in understanding the gravity of these findings. The methodology in this paper is convincing, and the only area I find questionable is the validity of MAGs in acting as an accurate representation of bacterial genomes. This question however is one addressed by the authors and accounted for in the data collection. The writing quality is a particular strength of this paper, and I thought the figures and thought process behind the data collection was well communicated to the reader. A strength of this article is that it does incite intrigue regarding the question of how climate change might affect the environment, leaving open further questions about how studying the past evolution of organisms might provide insight into their potential future evolution.

    2. On 2022-10-25 02:19:08, user Zeyad El-Naghy wrote:

      It was a pleasure reading your paper! Not only did confirm a lot of speculations that were proposed in prior studies, but it also highlighted a lot of new information about an aquatic environment (ie. brackish biomes) that has not previously been elucidated. It is intriguing that the transitions of bacterial communities both into and out of brackish bodies have glossed over in the field despite such type of environments taking up such a large portion of global waters. Some strong points of the paper that I noticed was that I liked how for the most part the figures in the paper were properly explained in the written portion and that the conclusions drawn were easily traced back to the data in the figures. It made going through the findings of the study a pretty straightforward process. In addition, I liked how you acknowledged the missing information from this experiment in your discussion section, such as exactly why transitions were more frequent into than out of brackish biomes. These kinds of acknowledgements paves the way for future research to build off of this study and come up with answers to these gaps in knowledge. In the end, you mention that "phylogenomic analyses should be supplemented with experimental and ecological approaches" in future studies, but what exactly did you have in mind? One suggestion I had was maybe repeating the experiment in other brackish bodies of water such as the Black Sea/Salian Sea to see if the results can be reproduced? Overall, great work!

    3. On 2022-10-24 22:34:03, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      This was a very interesting paper. It was based on large-scale phylogenomic analysis and tried to explain the findings through biochemical and molecular points of view. On the general organization of this paper, a minor suggestion I would propose is including a workflow chart to explain how each experiment is connected to the question of investigation. Regarding the result, I noticed from Fig 5 that there are clear increases in acidic protein proportions for all transitions, but for the frequency of basic proteins, only the BM transition showed a slight increase. I was curious if there is an explanation for this. Additionally, I was a little confused if this paper is trying to suggest a causal relationship between functional gene content changes and cross-biome transitions, or if it aims at showing the association between these two events. Lastly, I was wondering if there are other ways (both computational and experimental) to validate the findings from this paper.<br /> Overall, this is a good paper with beautiful figures and in-depth analysis of molecular incidents in cross-biome transition. Thank you for presenting your work here!

    4. On 2022-10-22 15:18:45, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      I really enjoyed reading this study. I liked that this paper was easy to read if you have a good scientific background. I just thought that there could be some terms that could be defined in the Introduction such as brackish waters and MAGs. I also thought that maybe specifically defining the conditions for the marine filtered genome. I know that there was a supplemental table talking about where the MAGs came from, but I think it would be better to put that somewhere in the paper (either the results or methods) because it has a lot of important information. On another note, I don't know what happened but for some reason for figure 5, I just saw a replicate of figure 1 even though figure 5 was obviously different. Overall though, the paper was very interesting and well written! <br /> Also, I know in the preprint you mentioned that climate change has a role in affecting some of the factors in marine environments like salinity. Also, this study shows that bacteria transitioning between different marine biomes is pretty rare. However, the study also showed that there are some species of bacteria that are making these transitions. I guess what my question is do you think that there's still hope that bacteria will survive climate change and be able to adapt to different biomes?

    5. On 2022-10-22 00:15:10, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      This is interesting research, not only because it corroborates past findings, but also because it confirms and arouses mixed reactions concerning microbial diversity in equal measure. It is my pleasure to make these remarks. The work is well structured, well researched, and properly presented, easy to read even for non-scientific audiences. When going through the details though, I could not keep the concepts of hospital-acquired infections, antibiotic resistance, and the emergence of novel diseases out of my mind, particularly because of how they are linked to the overall concept of microbial diversity and adaptability. For antimicrobial resistance, for instance, the underlying factor has everything to do with the transfer of mobile genetic elements (MGEs) between two genomes. When MGEs access the chromosomes of new bacterial hosts, the outcome is phenotypical alteration. If the MGEs contained antibiotic resistance then novel or ongoing pathogenesis may result. Nevertheless, your study has demonstrated that bacterial species rarely cross environmental barriers. However, it is interesting to note that this is not the entirety of the results because there are distinct transitions between aquatic biomes, which, noteworthy, are ancient, rare, and often directed towards the brackish biome. At the same time, there are frequent transitions into brackish sites, which are harder to explain. I am just concerned, are there tests that can ascertain these claims? Previous studies have identified that bacteria are opportunistic and may manipulate any loophole to establish supremacy. The concern is further aggravated by your additional findings, that brackish bacteria often exhibit enriched gene functions for various physiological responses, including transcriptional regulation, which is integral in the re-writing genetic information, further begging the question should there be a cause for worry.

    1. On 2022-10-25 04:04:37, user Pooja Ravi wrote:

      Hello! This was a very interesting and captivating paper. It was very educational and understandable, even with limited knowledge of the field of Trypanosomes and parasitology. The contribution of the paper to really delve into the immunogenic capabilities of antigen variability of Trypanosoma is really providing a different perspective as to how it undergoes immune evasion. This detail really aided in surmising the paper's focal target of Trypanosoma responding to cells within extravasuclar spaces and their respective capabiltiies of changing their VSGs in such an environmental niche to best suit their survival as a whole. I was a bit curious of whether the tissue-dependency of this organism could be affected by different tissue types and extravascular conditions? For instance, would meningital tissue and extravascular spaces in the cranium feature a different response than enteroid tissue in the gut, and extravascular spaces there? The writing overall was very thorough and really helped to build my understanding. I feel one important and arbitrary takeaway from this work could be the clinical capability of recognizing this antigenic shifting, and maybe finding a means to classify the pattern of shifts to determine an effective means of possibly quantifying and curing sleeping sickness.

    2. On 2022-10-24 23:55:58, user Shreya Jolly wrote:

      Summarize the (at most) 3 key main ideas.

      The three key ideas I gathered from this paper were –

      1. Extravascular spaces appear as an important and previously overlooked niche for antigenic variation in T. brucei infection.
      2. Extravascular-resident T. Brucei play a profound role in the longevity and persistence of T. brucei infection by exhibiting novel immune evading VSGs.
      3. Extravascular spaces potentially facilitate antigenic variation by providing parasites extra ‘time’ to reside in the same.

      Main contribution of the paper

      This paper highlights the role of the extravascular spaces in enhancing and or prolonging T. Brucei infection. This is a novel finding because previous work on T. Brucei has barely studied antigenic variation in extravascular spaces. Most studies have been conducted on blood resident T. Brucei. Claims that state that T. brucei populations residing in the blood fully represent the antigenic complexity of T. brucei populations have been falsely passed on. Consequently, this paper helps break such false beliefs. Besides breaking false beliefs, the importance of this paper is further highlighted in the introduction section which states that most T. Brucei parasites reside in the extravascular spaces during T. Brucei infection. By providing a rationale over why they do so, this paper helps guide effective strategies to eliminate T. Brucei infection. Now for example, researchers are more likely to focus on preventing the entry of these parasites into the extravascular spaces since it is these spaces which provide the parasites their key pathogenic mechanism and or strategy.

      Critique

      One of the claims researchers make to explain how extravascular spaces help enhance and or prolong T. Brucei infection involves the immune system. The researchers specifically claim that extravascular spaces provide the parasites additional time to carry out antigenic variation. While the researchers have provided an immunological basis for this hypothesis of theirs (by including the IgM antibody), I do feel that it still too far-fetched. It could be the extensive VSGs found in the extravascular spaces provide parasites additional time to carry out more antigenic variation rather than the extravascular space itself providing the parasites additional time to carry out antigenic variation (through blocking IgM). To solidify their IgM hypothesis, perhaps they can block the IgM antibody of mice and then infect them. This way the additional time earlier enjoyed by only the extravascular residing parasites can also be enjoyed by the blood resident parasites. If blood-resident parasites in this condition just like the tissue-resident parasites start to demonstrate higher antigenic variation, then this can provide support for the researcher’s claim that the tissue’s provision of extra time is what makes the parasites undergo more extensive antigenic variation within the extravascular spaces.

      It is important to note that the researchers in this study made use of a specific model of T. Brucei. They used T. brucei EATRO1125 AnTat1.1E 90-13 parasites which are incapable of developing into their short stumpy forms (McDonald et al., 2018). This appears risky since the short stumpy forms of the parasite enable it to undergo apoptosis and cell death. Hence it could be that the parasites continued existence in the tissue could be due to their inability to undergo apoptosis rather than the VSG itself. This definitely poses challenges on the main contribution of the paper which associates prolonged T. Brucei infection to VSGs and antigenic diversity. Hence while using this cell line helps researchers account for antigenic variations which are independent of development, it also likely causes continued parasite pertinence due to the inability of the same to undergo apoptosis.<br /> Surface proteins like VSGs which serve as key players in host-pathogen interactions are often subjected to strong selection pressures resulting in rapid evolutionary changes through mutation, recombination, and gene duplication. Consequently, studying VSGs repertoires is very challenging and I wonder how the researchers ensure the initial stability of VSGs for comparison post antigenic variations.

      Significance

      While I do think that the finding is novel and hence significant, I believe that the researchers can do a better job in explaining the applicability of this finding in the field of vector biology. There also exist some issues (model of the parasite used) which may make one skeptical about the paper’s main contribution and hence significance.

      Methodology

      I believe that the experiments were well-designed. This is because they made use of appropriate and highly accurate reagents and techniques. For instance, after obtaining the tissues from mice who had been infected with T. Brucei infection, the tissues were treated with TRIzolTM LS to obtain RNA. Usage of TRIzolTM has long been considered the “gold standard” for RNA purification. The all-in-one reagent can lyse extremely complex samples, is easily scalable, generates and or recovers ample RNA yield and is also effective in inactivating RNAses. This way the researchers ensure that they preserve the RNA quality, integrity, and quantity. To get rid of any contaminating DNA researchers also make use of DNases This prevents their sample from being contaminated and hence ensures the integrity of their data (and therefore claims). Additionally, the researchers also make use of the Mag-Bind Total Pure NGS which refers to a reliable solution used for the purification of both DNA and RNA for next-generation sequencing workflows. The technique enables the researchers to selectively bind fragments thereby providing the flexibility of left, right or double-sided size selection. The purified RNA generated post this technique is suitable for a variety of downstream applications such as NGS library preparation, microarrays, automated fluorescent sequencing. Knowing that the researchers use such a reliable technique to purify and select their RNA gives me confidence over some of their results such as the one presented in the abstract – the expressed VSG repertoire is not uniform across populations of parasites within the same infection. Following extraction of the RNA from the extravascular tissue post T. brucei infection, the researchers then obtain cDNA from the RNA using Superscript III reverse transcriptase and a primer that binds to the conserved VSG 14-mer in the 3’UTR. Using the enzyme Superscript III reverse transcriptase to carry out the reverse transcription definitely serves to be advantageous. This appears to be an effective strategy since the particular enzyme has been modified to have a higher half-life, higher thermal stability, and reduced RNase H activity. Furthermore, using primers that specifically bind to the VSG gene enable, the researchers to obtain cDNAs of VSG. cDNA’s reflect expressed genes and obtaining the same for VSG hence helps provide researchers an idea of the extent of VSG expression. Post obtaining the cDNA the researchers then subject the same to 25 rounds of PCR using VSG-specific primers that contain a Phusion polymerase. Use of such a polymerase definitely serves advantageous since, the polymerase brings together a novel Pyrococcus-like enzyme with a processivity enhancing domain. This enables the generation of PCR products with accuracy and high speed which is something previously unattainable with single enzymes. This further adds to my believability of the results since the reagents chosen to appear to be high quality and error aversive. Once the PCR products are obtained, they are then quantified using QuBit HS DNA kit which is a kit that enables accurate and precise quantification of dsDNA. The resulting DNA which represents VSG genes present in extravascular tissue post infection with the parasite, are sequenced using Illumina sequencing which is a high-throughput sequencing technique. Consequently, through using high-throughput, modern and accurate techniques, the researchers definitely make their data appear accurate.

      Using these techniques also helps the researcher’s study both the genetic and epigenetic bases of antigenic variation. Antigenic variations often occur by altering the DNA sequence of an antigen encoding gene or the regulatory elements. The changes then cause alterations in the expression levels of the antigen. Since the researchers in this study not only sequence the VSG specific genes but also obtain and quantify the cDNA extracted from the RNA of TRIzolTM incubated extravascular tissue, this method enables them to assess both and account for both the genetic and expression level changes that associate with the genetic basis of antigenic variations. In fact, this method even enables the researchers to account for the epigenetic variations of antigenic variations. During epigenetic variations, antigenic variations manifest as changes in their expression levels as opposed to changes in their genes. Hence even if sequencing data shows no changes which may lead to the assumption of no antigenic variation, coupling this method with cDNA acquisition and quantification, definitely enables researchers to account for the epigenetic basis of antigenic expression by providing the researchers a chance to study changes in expression levels (Cortés & Deitsch, 2017). According to (Stockdale et al., 2008), three key things are required for antigenic variation. The first requirement includes the need for a family of genes encoding antigenically distinct surface antigens. T. brucei contains more than 1000 VSG genes. Through having access to those genes using VSG-specific primers, PCR, and sequencing and that too of extravascular tissues post the parasite’s infection, this technique enables researchers to assess antigenic variations in extravascular tissue. Another requirement for demonstrating antigenic variation includes the need for a single pathogen to express one variant antigen gene at a time. This prevents the over exhaustion of the surface antigens repertoire. Through extracting and quantifying cDNA which represent genes which have been expressed post extravascular T. brucei parasitic infection, the researchers can assess the same as well. The third and final strategy needed to achieve antigenic variation includes a mechanism which enables the microbe to switch the single expressed antigen gene. T. brucei appears unique in that it actually acquires two mechanisms to achieve those switching. The first mechanism involves a single antigen gene being expressed and then being periodically silenced with another gene being activated. This can be assessed by the chosen method since it makes use of cDNA analysis. The second strategy used relies on recombination. Specifically, there exist a site for antigen gene expression. Switching to new antigenic variants is achieved by recombination into the specific site. Often times a silent antigen gene is copied and duplicated into the expression site deleting the resident gene. I am not exactly sure how the method helps researchers study such form of homologous recombination. Perhaps researchers can further venture into this.

      Most important limitation

      I believe the most important limitation of this study is the utilization of a model of T. Brucei which is incapable of undergoing apoptosis (due to the model’s inability to form short stumpy bodies). Since the entire study focuses on assessing parasitemia and relating the same to antigenic variation, how do researchers control for the effects of reduced apoptosis on the parasitemia?

      Another important limitation I would like to highlight is that involving the data presented in figure 5. The data in this figure is generated by the researchers testing for unique VSGs generated on day 6 in the blood. I wonder why this is the case. This is because in an earlier section, the researchers specifically mention that they did not assess for unique VSGs in day 6 since there were too few VSGs generated at the time. This makes me a bit skeptical about the results generated in day 6 since the data for the same in the context of unique VSGs was never presented. Another question that arises is why the authors specifically chose to study day 6 VSGs and exclude day 10 and 14 VSGs for this analysis. I believe that some rationale could be provided to better understand this choice of the author.

      Writing

      I would give this paper a score of 4 for its writing. This is because I genuinely feel that the researchers were able to communicate complex ideas in a simplistic and comprehensible manner. However, I think that certain terminologies such as tissue tropism, and certain concepts such as immune evasion could be further explained, since the audience may not have much science background. While I did not find any grammatical errors, I do think the researchers should keep track of the claims they make. For instance, in one section of the paper, the researchers wrote that they did not assess unique VSGs on day 6 since none were generated by then. However later onwards when describing the findings presented in figure 5, they stated that they assessed/looked for the unique VSGs on day 6 in the blood. These two statements appear contradictory and makes one skeptical over the writing and hence the overall study.

      Any questions the work leaves open?

      In this study the researchers find what they like to call unique VSGs. Unique VSGs are VSGs only expressed in certain spaces. I believe that the researchers can further expand on their study by assessing the role of these unique VSGs in tissue tropism. If the identified VSGs do play a role in tissue tropism, this can significantly uplift the impact factor of this research study given that tissue tropism changes during the course of infection and hence potentially serves a diagnostic tool. For instance, acute Toxoplasma gondii infections associate with gut cell invasion whilst chronic disease is characterized by brain invasion and neurological impairment. Trypanosome tropism towards the central nervous system causes a variety of sleep disturbances, psychiatric, motor, and sensory malfunctions. Hence understanding the potential of those unique tissue specific VSGs in T. brucei specific tropism can definitely improve the applicability of this particular paper.

      In this paper, the researchers show that majority of antigenic variation takes place in the extravascular spaces. It would be interesting to evaluate the survivability of the blood-resident VSGs prior to extravascular invasion using in vitro studies. This could potentially enable drug development which prevents the entrance of T. brucei into the extravascular spaces.

      In this study, the researchers only study VSGs for up to 14 days. At this point according to the researchers, tissue-resident populations only begin to diverge from one another and the blood. Studying longer periods of VSG expression can definitely help the researchers further address their aim of studying the role of extravascular parasites in T. brucei infection. I wonder why the researchers choose to only study 14 days post infection. Are there any limitations that restrict them for studying T. brucei for longer periods of time.

      The researchers in this paper also discuss about tissue-specific VSG selection. This seems to make quite a lot of sense. This is because other parasites like Plasmodium do express different var genes Besides studying for tissue-specific VSG selection, researchers in this study can also study the role of VSGs in things other than antigenic variation.

      According to Silva Pereira (20220, researchers are currently underestimating the extent to which VSGs are repurposed beyond their role as variant antigens. Indeed, there do exist nonvariant VSGs that perform specific functions such as serum-resistance associated VSG. To relate this future study with their antigen specific aims, they can assess how antigenic variations in VSGs evolve and or modify VSGs to carry out other unique functionalities.

      The researchers in this study discuss the applicability of their findings in the context of natural infections. They specifically claim that the variations can help the parasite survive in wild animals who may already have anti-VSG immunity. However, I feel that to improve the generalizability of the research’s findings to humans, researchers can assess if these antigen variation strategies enable the parasite to survive longer in a vaccinated human already acquiring VSG active immunity, nonvaccinated human already acquiring VSG herd immunity or infant already acquiring anti-VSG passive immunity. This can definitely be an interesting arena to look into.

    3. On 2022-10-24 15:59:40, user Nyah Johnson wrote:

      Hi! I thought that this was a great paper. It was very informational and allowed for easy understandings of the goal of the research which i thought was pretty interesting. I did, however, have some questions about the main points. I think a point being proven was in regard to the question about parasites expressing antigenic variation while in extracellular spaces. I was curious on when exactly the antigenic variation occurs. Is there a signal that notifies the parasite when to change the VSG coat also? I think ultimately these were questions the paper posed as well, however i think it could be beneficial to list some speculations on what you might think is occurring. It could help with providing some context in relation to this in the background. Also I was a bit unclear on the plan for future work. I didn't see it really discussed in detail, either that, or I wasn't sure if the questions you posed at the end of discussion was where the future work was headed. Overall, the paper was great i was able to fully emerge and and take interest in the topic despite this not being my primary discipline. Explanations were amazing, I would just narrow down on the points you weren't sure about because I also wasn't sure about it and others may not be as well.

    4. On 2022-10-24 01:42:04, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      This was a fascinating and well written paper. Additionally, the analysis in the results and discussion were logical and easy to follow. I do think at times there is some confusion/ambiguity regarding the sample sizes for some tissues. In the methods section, you mentioned that 3 brain samples (2 day 10, 1 day 14) and 1 heart sample (day 10) were excluded from analysis. When talking about Figure 2A, you said that the initiating VSG was detectable in 23/24 tissue samples from day 10. I was wondering if that was supposed to be 20/21 tissue samples? I had a similar comment with figure 3C and figure 4, where the legends say that n = 4 for each tissue. I think it would be helpful to mention that n=2 for day 10 brain samples and n = 3 for day 10 heat/day14 brain samples in the legends of figures 3 and 4 in case a reader did not catch that in the methods section. I also had two minor comments regarding figures. For 2A and 2C, since you are comparing the blood to tissue spaces collectively, I don’t think having the tissues being different colors is necessarily useful. It might be visually beneficial if all tissue samples were the same color (i.e. blue) like they are in 3B. Additionally, for 2A, 2C, and 5, the Y-axes say Log10(% parasites), but the tick marks show actual per cents.

    5. On 2022-10-22 02:13:33, user Martina Kathryn wrote:

      This was a great paper, very informative comparisons and analysis done. The only source of confusion was with the supplementary figures 1A and 1B. You stated that, "The number of VSGs in a sample did not correlate with either the number of reads aligned or the number of parasites in a sample 1A & B)" which I agree with but you added on to state that this was "suggesting that sampling of each population was sufficient" which I didn't understand. Also the labeling of the x-axes for figures 4B and 4C was really confusing. 4B- I interpreted the label as though this measurement was done in only one mouse, but then this wouldn't be possible because the mouse would have been killed on day 10 and measurements couldn't have been done on day 14. Not until I read the text section. Maybe I'd advise that you add n=4 to this figure to indicate that 4 mice were monitored for each tissue. This was the same case for 4C. Ideally, one is supposed to look at the figure and get all the necessary information from it without checking the text part of the results for more information about what the figure is communicating.

    1. On 2022-10-24 23:44:43, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      Thank you for giving us the opportunity to review your preprint article! I enjoyed reading the article and it was fun to learn a little more about whale songs and their potential influences. Understanding how vocal learning and conformity is especially important as the noise environment continues changing in the ocean. Overall, the article had a lot of information that supported how much fin whales depend on vocal learning and conformity.

      I felt that your abstract and introduction requires additional information to understand the paper. There was a clear definition for vocal learning, but conformity and what a singing season is was not well defined. Additional information on fin whales would have also been nice to better understand their behavior not in the context of song. I liked how you included other examples of species to gain a better understanding and it also helped show that this study could potentially translate to those species as well. It was clear what questions you were trying to answer with your study, and you defined your results clearly without going too deep into it.

      For the most part your methods and results were clear to understand even for someone who has no background in what was studied! In Figure 2, I thought that I had was to potentially add a comparison in Panel C to the 1998/1999 season. It would be interesting to see the change that occurred in all the locations in the ONA region instead of just seeing the one shown in Panel B. Figure 3 was clear to understand and it supported most of the claims that were made in the introduction. I thought it was very cool to see how many ways these figures could be interpreted. An additional suggestion that I have is for Figure 4, I felt like the figure caption was bare and was missing some information to make it easier to understand and there was not much detail into what this figure was supporting so I had to make my own inferences into what was being shown there. Additionally, frequency of note was spoken throughout the article so the frequency on the y-axis was confusing so potentially changing or clearly defining that axis title would be beneficial.

      The discussion section in your paper went into a lot of detail and at times felt like too much. The discussion of the results that you obtained were lost in a lot of the extra information that was in it and at times were confusing since it felt like it was jumping around too much. At times it felt like I was reading a review article on animal songs instead of results from a study, but some of this information may be beneficial to have in the introduction section instead. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed getting to understand whale songs a little bit better and the results that came out of your work are very interesting and hopefully this can form a basis for future studies in other animals that use song.

    2. On 2022-10-24 00:05:14, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      This manuscript presents a wealth of supporting data for evidence of vocal learning and conformity among whale songs in the fin whale (Balaenoptera physalus). Romagosa and colleagues present a twenty-one yearlong observational study of three critical components of the songs produced by male fin whales. It is the first study to suggest a mechanism driving vocal learning and conformity in animal songs, specifically pertaining to the fin whale. Romagosa & colleagues’ comprehensive analysis includes a dearth of both temporal and spatial data. The assessment the inter-note interval (INI, i.e., rhythm), the 20-Hz note, and the High Frequency (HF) note of the fin whale song is used as a conduit by which the authors reveal patterns of change and adoption of different patterns over time. The authors use a wide geographical range, inclusive of 15 sampling locations grouped into 7 separate regions, with data collection spanning between 1999 and 2020. They provide thorough consideration of alternate interpretations of their data and use the existing literature to further bolster their proposed ideologies.

      This manuscript has immense potential to posit something novel to the field, based on the background the authors have provided. However, due to the seeming overreliance on existing literature in the discussion, limited exploration and elaboration on the data itself in the results section, and poor articulation of caveats in the sampling methodology, the significance of the findings presented are undermined. Based on the targeted journal, a re-organization of the manuscript’s structure may be suitable to address these more structural issues. Despite the incredible amount of data, there lacks thorough explanations of how the data directly supports the conclusions presented. The results section could be elaborated upon to increase the credibility of the stated conclusions (examples starting in line 93 through 106, 119 – 127, 136-144). The discussion section does not implicate the data presented in this paper in the conclusions being made by the authors as much as it should, and it seems to rely much more heavily on existing literature in the greater field (i.e., extending beyond marine mammals). Switching some of the description of the data from the discussion section into the results section will make both sections easier to read and understand. .

      As these studies are purely observational, the methodology should be highlighted more, and as stated previously, perhaps may merit a structural reorganization of the manuscript itself. Because of the several sampling differences such as those in instrumentation & manufacturer, including the supporting evidence for why these data are still usable and comparable is critical to the credibility of the work (see Supplementary Material, lines 30 – 50). This experiment should be included either in the main body of the text or highlighted more explicitly in the main body, so the reader knows to find it there. The inconsistencies between recording machinery need to be explained, as the authors have performed an additional study to verify these data. Using figure 1 to be referenced primarily by the methods section is a poor choice of ordering, and perhaps the visuals provided in figure 1 can be moved into the supplement since they are not showing any data. This would leave available a spot to move the experiment in the supplementary material into the main text.

      Additionally, including more detailed figure legends (i.e., explaining that each symbol represents an individual recording/represents one day, explaining the red circle in current figure 1A in the legend, etc.). The same descriptive wording used in the legend for Figure 3 (specifically the information provided in line 133 – 135) should be applied to all figures in both the main and supplemental data. The rationale for the groupings of regions in the histograms of INIs and HF note peaks in Figures 4A & B is unclear and not indicated. Figure 4B is not discussed in the text either. Having panels in figures that are not described in the text is confusing, as the reader cannot understand what the purpose is of what is being presented.

      Generally speaking, the manuscript was a delight to read. It was well-written, and I felt that the background and foundation for the work presented was laid out very well. This data that is being presented has exciting implications for the field and fills in a clear gap in knowledge. The amount of time and dedication that was given to these studies should not be understated. I felt that the authors framed their goals and provided comprehensive context for the material being shown. This research should be celebrated, and the authors should be pleased with the work that went into this manuscript!

    3. On 2022-10-22 22:22:22, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      Dear Romagosa and Colleagues,

      I enjoyed reading your article, and commend you for synthesizing a vast number of datasets from across different research groups, spanning many years. Just goes to show the strength of researcher collaboration for the purposes of broadening our understanding of important topics. I do, however, have some comments on your paper which I would like to share. I should preface this with a statement of reflexivity - noting that I am not a marine biologist or within an associated field of interest, but have a background in the social sciences and an interest in One Health. Further, as a current academic and researcher in the social sciences I view your work through the lenses inherent to my discipline. I acknowledge the limitation that my lack of prior technical knowledge in this field brings, and intend to provide a critical perspective that may conform to those that also view your paper without prior technical knowledge.

      That said, I was initially drawn to your article because of your title. As such, based on your title I was expecting to read about a novel new notion of 'song conformity among fin whales'. Through your background, and discussion sections, I learnt that song conformity is an established notion for many animals, and species of whales - including fin whales (Line 243). So, while the title is clear and short, it also leads the reader to expect to learn about a new concept that is 'song conformity', but you later note that evidence of song conformity exists among fin whales already. Perhaps your paper would benefit from a reevaluation of the title to clarify that you intend to show, through a synthesis of multiple study datasets, trends within fin whale songs over a long time horizon.

      In your abstract, I thought you presented your main arguments quite well (Lines 25-28), though could have added a little more detail on your methodological choice and your study population (male fin whales) - perhaps in Lines 23-24. In Line 29, you note that you found "evidence of vocal learning of rhythm" and "conformity" - these are strong findings - and I was keen to read more.

      I thoroughly enjoyed reading your introduction, and I was most interested in reading your problem statement - and more specifically, the gap in the literature that you were trying to fill. In Lines 59-63 you note four distinct gaps that is our understanding of (1) the functional mechanisms of vocal learning, (2) natural selection and learning strategies, (3) the benefits of song conformity and (4) individual decisions impacting song evolution. You also note that "vocal learning of rhythm is ... poorly understood" [Line 62], and research focuses on complex songs. You call for "a broader view" to piece a part the different mechanisms of vocal learning to better understand prevalence and evolution [Lines 63-65]. Here I was anticipating a little more detail on what you meant by "different mechanisms". Also, while it was certainly interesting to read about all the gaps in our understanding of vocal learning and conformity, it wasn't immediately clear to me which of these gaps your work was seeking to address. A little more clarity here would have helped.

      In your methods section, I was intrigued to read about the processes that were involved in the creation of your analytical dataset. It seems like you had some challenges synthesizing inconsistent recordings which created some gaps in your dataset, and necessitated the exclusion of some data. Since the data was so critical to your examination of trends in songs over time, it would have helped to provide a figure tracking the data itself - e.g., the amount/type/nature of data that was available to you, the amount/type/nature of data that was excluded, and the amount/type/nature of data that made it into your final analytical dataset. Furthermore, I would have liked to have read a little more about your statistical assumptions. You employ the use of histograms to compare song distributions among periods/regions, I would have liked to have read a little more about whether you performed statistical analyses to assess distributional similarities (KS test?).

      In your results section, Figure 2 was intended to demonstrate song changes over time. Using the ONA SE dataset you present avg. song INIs over time, a stacked bar chart summarizing the three song types within the period, and a spatial presentation of this stacked bar chart. Maybe I missed it, but it wasn't clear to me how you technically defined and labelled "hybrid" songs in your dataset - from Figure 2 Panel A I noticed song INIs that fell within the 12s-19s range but the confidence intervals appeared to overlap into both the 12s and 19s ranges. Without further information, this did not appear to be clear evidence of a hybrid song. Much more clarity on how you defined hybrid songs, as well as an accompanying (supplementary) table on statistical summaries would strengthen your work here in my opinion. Figures 3 and 4 intended to show long term song trends (in avg. song INIs and two song parameters), and distributional comparisons of song INIs for regions and periods where simultaneous recordings were made, respectively. Much more clarity on the organization and interpretation of the data for Figure 3A would have been appreciated. Multiple ocean regions are plotted on the same graph, and a trend line is plotted through them. My first question is, are these regions comparable enough to be plotted side-by-side? For in other words, did these regions start from the same origin point? Is the trend being largely driven by ONA or the BBIC?

      Finally, in your discussion section, you do a good job contextualizing your research. And, explain your results through factual and counter-factual arguments (e.g., these results can't mean 'this' because if they did 'this' is what we would have found). At times, you extend the meaning behind your results a little too far for comfort - for example, when describing your results in the context of mating [Lines 241-254]. The arguments make sense, but without further evidence, it veers into conjecture. Though, in my opinion, this is a problem with the way you've framed your discussion pieces rather than a problem with the content itself. It would have been helpful to read a section on the limitations of your study design, and limitations of your study findings which would have clarified areas where you noticed anomalous results (such as the Barents Sea findings).

      All-in-all good work, though as a lay-reader, I did need more information at times and some clarity on your processes.

    4. On 2022-10-21 20:50:34, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      Hello, I read your article. I knew nothing about whale song before this, but your article helped me realize the mystery and variability of whale song. In addition, I noticed that this research was over two decades. I really appreciate your persistence and dedication.

      I don't know anything about this area before, but I'd like to leave a few comments here. I apologize if there's anything inappropriate. As for panel 2C, the figure shows the INI song type spatial gradient in transition period. But do whales stay in one place? Can there be repeated measure? Is it possible that a particular whale or group of whales was sampled twice at two adjacent sampling location? Maybe you'd like to do a short one or two sentence discussion of the impact of whale migration on data collection.

      Also, have you tried using some type of tracer to track a particular whale? I was wondering if you could track the song of one whale, and the songs of other whales around it. If you have data on that, I'm very curious what that looks like.

      For the discussion section, personally, the reading experience is not that good. I felt like so many assumptions were thrown at me that it took me some time to sort out your central idea. If I may be so bold, would you consider re-section the paragraph, or making it a little bit more concise?

      Again, thank you for doing such an amazing research. That was eye-opening for me.

    5. On 2022-10-21 03:13:15, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      I had a lot of pleasure reading the article. I knew nothing about fin whales, so I had a lot of questions.<br /> If the public targeted by this article are not fin whale specialist, I think it could be helpful to add more information about their reproductive behavior and their immigration pattern. <br /> The question I asked myself were: Do the fine whales migrate? If they do what their migration pattern? Do they come back at the same place at the reproduction period? I think the article needs to give us the proof that population that measured overtime at different place are not the same, that there is no replacement of a group by another one, do the group get mixed? <br /> Since the authors are looking at evidence of song learning and conformity, I think it is important to ascertain that we are talking about different population across different geographic location and not the same group that would be recorded over different time period at different place. I don't think there was a tracker device, that would have help or at least it more information about the fin whale behavior during the reproduction period need to be clarify. I would suggest providing more information about the data collection, or in the discussion explain why all regions were not sampled in all years and time periods. Why was hydrophone channel used in the Canary Island, but the seismometer preferred for BBIC?<br /> The figure 4 does add any information, all seem well described by the 3 first figures. Maybe I missed, but I did not see in the discussion an explanation about the why there were no change in INI with the fin whale population in the Barents Sea. If there is no way to ascertain with this data that they were no population replacement, I would then add it in the limitation section.<br /> Those are the main points that I want to share, as a reader who is not the field of animal communication.

    1. On 2022-10-24 22:09:32, user Jorawar Sandhu wrote:

      Hello! I just wanted to start off by saying that I really enjoyed reading your paper! I’ve often read about this topic before, but this was a really novel take on the topic of antimicrobial resistance. Beginning with the introduction and abstract I thought there was sufficient background information provided on why this topic is important, and why it is relevant to study today. In addition, it was also clear to me what the goal of this paper was (studying the effects of ARM-1 on Mfd). However, I would have preferred to see a little more background information on the Mfd compound. I understood how it operates to produce mutations, but I wish this compound was expanded upon a little more. Perhaps including some information on whether this compound is only seen in bacteria, and if not, are there any analogs in other organisms? Moving on to the first experiment, this was the only part of the study I had a little trouble understanding. I understood the underlying mechanisms that displayed the relationship of Mfd to the RNAP molecule, and how the ARM-1 compound thwarts this relationship. I just wish a little more context was provided as to how you arrived from 43 hits to ARM-1. When focusing on the next three figures presented I think that these were all done very well. I will, however, suggest for figure 2 perhaps splitting up the figure into two separate figures/parts. The first part containing information for figures 2A and 2B, and the next part containing information for figures 2C and 2D. I suggest this because the two halves of figure 2 discuss information that deals with separate topics. I thought that figure 3 was very clear and displayed your findings quite well! The only suggestion I have here is to define what “CTL” is. I tried to find a specific definition for this term in the paper but was unable to do so. Figure 4 was quite clear, and I found everything quite easy to understand! Overall, I really enjoyed reading this paper. This was a very interesting look into something I think many people have heard of in at least some context. I am very interested to see where this research goes next, as I believe it has a lot of potential to create a very positive impact throughout the world.

    2. On 2022-10-23 23:34:31, user CDSL JHSPH wrote:

      I enjoyed this article. As for feedback, I gathered from the article that this research contributes to the notion that scientists need a new way to think about targeting antimicrobial-resistant bacteria. Here you provide the audience with a new method of preventing the bacteria from evolving at all. While previous interventions focused on killing the evolved bacteria. However, did you ask questions about addressing the bacteria that have already developed into something like, let’s say MRSA? Your approach evaluated in this research is new and innovative, but it does not mention the life of the bacteria after it has evolved as a limitation. With that said, I feel it would greatly benefit this article to contain a limitation section so you could reflect on possible improvements for future work and shortcomings of the current work. Other questions to address in this section would be what happens if AMR bacteria does evolve and what parameters are in place to inhibit it? Specifically, you leave the audience wondering how ARM-1 can be used medically. I feel since this is a huge component of why you did this research, it should be addressed in the conclusions section. How can it be used? For whom? What would access look like? Where is it most needed? Who and what countries could benefit? Why is this intervention the best course of action for people? How could it actually be used as an anti-evolution drug? There is a disconnect for me when I compare the outcome of the research and how it can meaningfully impact medicine beyond just stating that it can. Although this paper was scientific, it is dense for someone coming from a non-science background to digest. I did feel it was logical and well-written but could have benefited from being broken up into more sections. I found myself rereading the results section since you combined the methods, results, and figures altogether and only had four subheadings. Although you have a discussion section, I felt that your discussion section was actually in your results section and that your discussion section acted as a conclusion section. This made it challenging for the reader to synthesize the results section in an efficient manner. From reading the summary, I felt the main idea is that the inhibition of Mfd activity by the lead compound ARM-1 delays the development of mutations and resistance acquisition in pathogens. This finding then demonstrates that molecular mechanisms are targetable which ultimately could prevent AMR in future pathogens. If this is not what you are trying to convey, then I would advise reworking your summary and or introduction. I agree with others that replication of the study could benefit more concrete findings to solidify the argument this article is making. I do feel this paper dives into some really interesting questions which I feel need to be explored further. In terms of the next steps and future experiments, figuring out how your research fits into the lifecycle of the AMR bacteria could prove insightful. Overall, good job, it is an important research topic that has not been addressed in the way you present it and I feel it is adding to the field of science. Thank you for your contributions.

    3. On 2022-10-23 05:42:14, user Maxine (CDSL) wrote:

      Hi, <br /> I felt that this pre print did an excellent job at showing the importance of AMR. <br /> For this comment I am just going to address the introduction and discussion as those are the parts that peaked my interest the most. <br /> For the abstract and introduction, i felt that it was very thorough and descriptive in describing AMR, and what our next steps as scientist and researchers should be to combat AMR. Great background information overall, nothing much to critique. <br /> The discussion I felt that you all, <br /> elaborated very well on their findings, missed out on discussing further research. I also felt that it was not as interesting as the introduction and could have added a bit more future research. Also felt that a lot of scientific jargon was used, which should be avoided when trying to translate to the general public.

    4. On 2022-10-22 17:29:44, user Alwyn Guan wrote:

      Hi there,

      This is a very intertesting article for me to read, as it does give me a new perspective on how to tackle AMR other than the endless new inhibitor and new resistance loop. I was also very glad to see that ARM-1 can delay the onset of AMR in multiple strains and even in strains that already devleoped resistance, which looks much promising/hopeful. However, I do have some questions about your experimental design and results. So for your highthrough-put drug screen, I saw that you used two plasmids, one with IPTG-inducible promoter, the other one with LacI/LacO roadblock. I just wonder if IPTG, which mimics allolactose, would have any off-target effect on LacI repressor? I can clearly tell that your ARM-1 inhibits mfd by your following results, but I was just wondering why you did not use any promoter that is inducible by any compounds other than allolactose analog. (Also I could only see panel 1a for supplementary figure 1, did you forget to upload the other panels?)

      Another question is about Figure 2c. I noticed that with the presence or absence of ARM-1, the EC values are roughly the same in this figure. You reasoned it as "The reduction in the ECs in the presence of ARM-1 is most likely because, at equilibrium, when RNAP cannot dissociate from DNA, it cannot re-initiate transcription, consequently preventing new EC formation.", which did not make much sense to me at first. If that is the case, the EC value with ARM-1 should still be higher than that of the group without ARM-1, unless ARM-1 is not working at all. So I checked the supplementary material, and found that you repeated the expeiment, and the mean value for ARM-1 -ve group is 0.40, that for ARM-1 +ve group (different conc) range from 0.6-0.8, and this makes much more sense now. So I think if you should put the mean value in Fig 2c instead? (For supplementary figure 3, in panel a I saw two 25 and one 12.5 microM ARM-1 tested, but in panel b I saw two 12.5 microM and one 25 microM in the table, you might want to double check on that.)

      Again, this is an interesting paper for me to read and I really enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your effort on combating with AMR.

    5. On 2022-10-21 19:59:23, user Billy wrote:

      This was a well conducted study to identify a small molecule that could inhibit the development of antimicrobial resistance. The authors identified a small molecule (ARM-1) that inhibited the RNA polymerase-associated DNA translocase Mfd, a protein shown to be involved in the development of antimicrobial resistance, and inhibited its ability to dissociate stalled RNAPs from DNA and had a modest impact on intrinsic ATPase activity of Mfd. The assays used were well suited for the study and revealed ARM-1's ability to inhibit Mfd and reduce the rate of mutation in bacteria grown in culture and during the course of infection of a human cell line. The authors also highlight that there was no detectable resistance of the bacteria to ARM-1 and that ARM-1 is able to deter the development of anitmicrobial resistance in diverse bacterial species. Only minor edits to spelling and grammar would be suggested. For example, the figure caption for Figure 4 says that the "Concentration of ARM-1 used against S. enterica is 50 uM," however, S. enterica was not one of the species indicated in the figure. Overall, this manuscript represents a significant advance in the battle against antimicrobial resistance and opens the door to further studies that explore the effects of this or other similar molecules in a mammalian system during the course of infection.

    6. On 2022-10-21 03:03:05, user H Bao wrote:

      It’s very refreshing to interpretate the AMR problem in the evolutionary point of view. The idea of inhibiting the evolution of antimicrobial resistance is fascinating and creative. And I’m very excited to see a brand-new potential solution to AMR. But I think this paper can be even better if there’s more clarification for people without rich related backgrounds. <br /> As for the abstract and introduction part, I understand that researchers chose Mfd as a target based on their previous research. But I’m curious if there is any other reason why they chose Mfd as a target? For example, if there is any other advantages of targeting Mfd. Or if there have already been studies focusing on molecules targeting Mfd so there’s already material for this research. Also, I’m curious whether there are any other possible targets for anti-evolution. Maybe going deeper into possible mechanisms of anti-evolution could help me even better understand the importance of this research.<br /> As for the methods, I believe it’s already clear enough. One thing I’m interested in but not explained in the article is that, where did the authors get these candidate compounds. Is it based on previous research or specific design. I think giving more information in this part may be helpful for clarifying the origin or differences between theses leading compounds.<br /> The figures and results are very clear and closely related to the hypothesis under testing. It may be clearer to me if the authors can briefly explain why the chose these strains of bacteria for detection. For example, for what reasons why they can be representative.<br /> The discussion part is clear and thorough. I was hoping there could be more exploration on this result. For example, I am curious whether similar target exist in other pathogens like fungi. If there are any other major limitations for this method or leading compound. Moreover, there could be more explorations on the potential further research directions since this idea is refreshing and inspiring.<br /> Overall, I really like the idea of re-thinking solving AMR form the root, and interpretating this problem from evolution’s point of view.

    7. On 2022-10-20 17:33:27, user Amy Chen wrote:

      I really liked reading this article! It provided new insight on antibiotic resistance and provided a new approach that could have potential to be developed into drugs for future use. It is easy to see the big picture when reading through the summary, however there was no clear hypothesis to the study but only a sentence about the big picture of what the methods contained. Including a hypothesis may be better to communicate what the goal is of this study. Readers do know what steps were involved but it may be unclear at first why are we testing this and what results or conclusions are we trying to get to. the results and figures did support each other and each method had correlated figures that showed the results from that method and made it easy for me to understand the results. However, because the result and methods are grouped into one big portion, it was a bit hard to follow the flow of how the experiment was done. I had to go back and forth between each subheading to be able to have a big picture of what the methods were. The results were also scattered in each section and I had to go through the whole results section to be able to have a summary of results. If I were trying to duplicate results, this may take me more time to go through as there is no separate methods section. I would have to read through everything for each step of the research. <br /> I liked how there were analysis of in vivo and in vitro as well as biochemistry of ARM-1. Yet there was not a lot of replication done. With replications of study, it could help strengthen the findings, although sone findings here are consistent with previous findings, which does strengthen the argument. I liked how there were a lot of references, however a lot were from 10 years or older, which may be outdated. It would be better to include more recent findings or studies to strengthen the arguments. Overall, this paper did provide insight to AMR and did contribute to the community.

    1. On 2022-10-24 16:48:31, user Jonathan Eisen wrote:

      Very interesting paper. I note - in 2000 we published a paper that is somewhat related to what you report here. See https://genomebiology.biome....

      In this we reported on how comparisons of closely / moderately closely related bacterial genomes showed that the distance a gene was from the origin of replication was conserved but the side of the origin it was on was not. In comparisons of very close relatives, one can see the inversions that led to this pattern. In comparisons of slightly more distant relatives, one could not really see the inversions but we saw an X-like pattens of conservation.

      This has been seen now in many many other comparisons of bacterial and archaeal genomes.

      We discuss in the paper possible explanations for why this pattern is seen including mutation bias (e.g., more symmetric inversions than others) or selection (e.g., distance a gene is from the origin).

    1. On 2022-10-23 03:07:17, user Wenwu Wu wrote:

      An interesting study. Genes associated with cuticular wax and flavonoid biosynthetic pathways are highly expressed in leafy bracts, likely shedding lights. I wonder whether these genes are among the convergent natural selected genes in the species.

    1. On 2022-10-20 21:34:50, user Moshe Tsvi Gordon wrote:

      In the third and fourth panel of Figure 2F it looks like the low FRET <br /> states might be a result of photobleaching. In those traces did you see <br /> recovery to the higher FRET state or was the transition to a low FRET <br /> state permanent?

    1. On 2022-10-19 06:48:27, user zbfz wrote:

      How is the project going ? Why the manuscript is withdrawn ? It seems the data presented here is somewhat contradictroy with their previous publication (http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j...:YhmCqGPuTSJAWIaPrcf1BIWgXMc "http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.chom.2012.07.009)") showing that co-injection of Pa + Mm (Fig.2) didn't reduce neutrophils recruitment VS injection of Pa alone, suggesting not a inhibitory role of Mm but neutrophils are invisible to Mm.

    1. On 2022-10-18 15:12:35, user Shaun Mahony wrote:

      This is an interesting paper that applies neural networks to model ATAC-seq and TF binding data in Plasmodium for the first time. However, it would be useful to provide a more detailed description of the methods, particularly to clarify the following points:

      Q1: The training labels are applied to 200bp bins, but the input sequences are expanded to 1Kbp centered on each bin. I'm confused about how the labels propagate when the windows are expanded. Let's say you have a negative bin that neighbors a positive bin. When you expand the 1Kbp window around the negative bin, the input sequence will encompass the positive bin. Is this 1Kbp input then labeled as positive or negative?

      Q2: When you split the data into training/validation/test, do you randomly choose bins or restrict them to particular chromosomes? If you randomly choose 200bp bins for your test data, won't the sequences from the test bins also be present in the training set (because of the way that windows are expanded to 1Kbp)?

      Q3: How were the Enformer and Basenji2 models trained? Are they trained on all data at once (i.e., multi-headed output model) or on each dataset separately?

      Q4: According to Supp. Table 1, most models include the following hyperparameter settings: convKnernal1st=320, convKnernal2ed=480. These hyperparameters are labeled as follows in the table: "convKnernal1st: The filter size of first convolution layer; convKnernal2ed: The second size of first convolution layer". I'm confused by this description. Do these hyperparameters represent the filter width or the number of filters in each layer? I'm presuming the latter, but then what width filters were used?

      Q5: The Github doesn't seem to contain code for training the models; is this code available?

    1. On 2022-10-17 21:41:43, user Eric Martin wrote:

      Thank you for releasing this preprint of your efforts to improve our understanding of when multi-task pQSAR models will be better than single-task models. I have a few questions and comments whose answers might also be helpful to readers of your final published version. The first regards the large performance difference between the kinase and gpcr/safety data sets. Besides the differences you mention in the Discussion, a huge difference is the quality of the single-task RFR models shown in figures 4a and 5a. Judging from the plots, for the kinase models, the median RFR correlation appears to be r2~0.02 and maybe 3% have r2>0.15. It appears that the for the GPCR/Safety models median r2~0.5, and 90% have r2>0.15. RFR is a very local method, strongly influenced by near neighbors. I have only seen such high r2 for RFR when members of the test sets have very close neighbors in the training sets. I would anticipate that the Tanimoto similarity between members of the test set to the nearest member of the training set for the gpcr/safety data is much higher than the kinases. It would be great to see histograms of the distribution of this value for both the kinase and gpcr/safety training/test set splits used in the RFR models from figures 4 and 5. This is very important, because the main purpose of multi-task modeling is to increase the applicability domain. The multi-task models are informed by the compounds from all assays, rather than just those from each individual assay. If the test set has near neighbors in the training set, the applicability domain is not challenged, so there will be little or no advantage to multi-task modeling. If this difference is large, it could be at least as important as the factors you discussed.

      Another less critical difference between the kinase and gpcr/safety data sets, but worth mentioning in the discussion, is that the latter was aggregated across assays by target. The kinase data set kept assays for the same target distinct, because activity of a compound against a target is not defined, and differences between assays lead to incommensurate results. Indeed, a problem with ExcapeDB is that it already aggregates across assays for a target. Incidentally, the text also says that the gpcr/safety measurements were converted to nM, and measurements for the same target were averaged. I assume averaging (and modeling) was done as log(concentration), not directly as nM?

      Finally, the text says "partial least squares (PLS) models are built for each assay, using the measured values in the profile for the rest of the assays as features. ... When the model is used for inference, missing values in the sparse profile are filled in with predictions from the RF models; these together with the measured values are used by the PLS models for the final activity predictions" It thus reads as if the RFR predictions were not used to impute missing values in PLS model training. I assume the missing values were filled with RFR predictions for PLS training as well as prediction?

    1. On 2022-10-17 14:06:24, user Yuta Otsuka wrote:

      The first part of the title, "Root twisting drives halotropism", does not seem to be indicated by presented data. Am I missing something?

    1. On 2022-10-17 09:00:34, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This review reflects comments and contributions by Ruchika Bajaj, Sree Rama Chaitanya Sridhara and Sara El Zahed. Review synthesized by Ruchika Bajaj.

      This study has developed a novel one-step methodology for the incorporation of membrane proteins from cells to lipid Salipro nanoparticles for structure-function studies using surface plasmon resonance (SPR) and single-particle cryoelectron microscopy (cryo-EM), which is a profound technology in the field of membrane protein structural biology. We raise some points that may strengthen the manuscript below:

      Main section, 4th paragraph “resuspended in digitoxin-containing buffer”- Does the sentence mean that membrane proteins were solubilized by detergent before reconstitution into salipro particles? Are salipro and digitoxin added at the same step? If this is the case, it is unclear how one can distinguish between the step wise solubilization and reconstitution or direct reconstitution into salipro particles. Further discussion on the mechanism of reconstitution would be helpful. In the same paragraph, the fragment “to increase membrane fluidity and render lipids” raises the question of whether the concentration of digitonin was optimized to balance the increase in membrane fluidity but not rendering the solubilization of membrane proteins.

      Main section, 4th paragraph, “the formation of saponin-containing mPANX1-GFP particles was assessed by analytical size exclusion chromatography using fluorescence detector” - It is assumed that fluorescence is detected from GFP. As the construct expressed is PANX1-GFP, GFP fluorescence signal will be received from reconstituted as well as not reconstituted PANX1. Is saponin specific signal being used as a signal for measuring the reconstitution of PANX1-GFP? In the same paragraph, “PreScission protease for on-column cleavage” is mentioned. Is GFP still intact in the expressed PANX-1 or is it cleaved? A diagram of these procedures showing the various steps will be helpful for readers.

      Main section, 4th paragraph “SDS-PAGE revealed the formation of pure and homogeneous Salipro-mPANX1 nanoparticles”- However, extra bands are present above the major band in Figure 1E, can some comment be provided on this point. Possible explanations for the additional bands could be post translational modifications or degradation of mPANX1.

      Methodology section, “membrane protein reconstitution screening using fluorescence-detection size exclusion chromatography (FSEC)” -The amount of salipro is given in ug. A comment on the ratio of protein to salipro particles would be important to decide the concentration of salipro with respect to the mass of the cell pellet.

      Figure 1G: The molecular weight of Salipro-mPANX1 particles is mentioned to be approximately 466kD. mPANX1 weighs about 48kD and heptamer will be 336kDa. A discussion on comparison of experimental and actual molecular weight would be interesting.

      hPANX1 was expressed in sf9 insect cells. A description regarding trials of expression of this construct in expi293 cells would be informative.

      Supplemental Figure 1B: The gel is overloaded and shows multiple bands for hPANX1, recommend selecting an alternative image for hPANX.

      Paragraph 6A phrase, “challenged with bezoylbenzoyl-ATP(bzATP), spironolactone and cabenoxolone” - Please explain the meaning of ‘challenged’ here.

      Supplementary Figure 2: Paragraph 6 mentions “binding constant could not be determined”. Please provide an explanation for this. Is it about the saturation phase not being approachable because of the feasibility of the binding experiment at higher concentration of cabenoxolone?

      The last summary sentence in Paragraph 6 is not clear, recommend rephrasing it.

      Figure 2A shows that Salipro particles have His tag. This suggests that an additional step of affinity purification with His tag could have been used to distinguish or separate reconstituted and un-reconstituted PANX1.

      Supplementary figure 4: Please explain whether the datasets for samples in the presence and absence of fluorinated lipids were combined together.

      Paragraph 8, “intracellular helices were not well resolved” - Please comment on a possible explanation. Does the Salipro scaffold contribute to the resolution? Please mention any future possibilities regarding improving the resolution by modifying the salipro scaffold or alternative scaffold. In the same paragraph, rmsd is mentioned at promoter level, please comment on how this value changes at heptamer level and why is it important to report the rmdd value to appreciate the direct reconstitution methodology.

      Last paragraph 10, “future membrane protein research” - Please comment on the utility of this methodology on prokaryotic membrane proteins, bacterial outer or inner membrane proteins or eukaryotic membrane proteins. Some more examples of reconstitution with the same method will support the applicability of this methodology on diverse kinds of membrane proteins. A discussion section comparing this methodology to other methods would also be useful for readers.

    1. On 2022-10-16 16:15:13, user Alex Crits-Christoph wrote:

      In this preprint, Washburrne and colleagues put forth some reasoning and basic analysis that they believe suggests the viral genomic data from the early SARS-CoV-2 pandemic is consistent with a single spillover event. This is in contrast to the work of Pekar et al. 2022 Science, which concluded that the genomic data from the early pandemic is best explained by multiple independent spillover events from an animal population. However, this preprint misrepresents the findings of Pekar et al. 2022, and makes several conceptual errors that fundamentally undermine their conclusions.

      There are 4 basic features of the early SARS-CoV-2 phylogeny that are each largely inconsistent with a single spillover event:

      A Lineage A ancestral haplotype is inconsistent with the molecular clock: Lineage B exhibits more divergence from the root of the tree than would be expected if lineage A were the ancestral virus in humans (Pekar Fig S20, S19).

      Two basal polytomies of lineages A and B were formed at the start of the SARS-CoV-2 epidemic, whereas most single introductions within a city, location, or event are characterized by a single polytomy.

      There are no plausible candidates for intermediate genomes observed for lineages A and B.

      Both Lineage A and Lineage B are connected to and were present during the outbreak at the Huanan Seafood Market, and there was sustained case transmission within the market for up to a month.

      The authors have *attempted* (unsuccessfully) to address points 2 and 3, but they have entirely ignored points 1 and 4, which are still highly pertinent. All four of these observations need to be explained by any hypothesis of SARS-CoV-2 origins.

      Now, on to specific scientific errors in this work:

      1. In the first section, the authors describe how superspreading events can create polytomies, as do introduction events. This is an intuitive observation, as both superspreading events and successful introductions can result from rapid transmission from a singular infection source. What they fail to note, however, is that superspreading events and introduction events are characterized by a single polytomy, not by two. Here is a simple list of introduction/superspreading events characterized by a single polytomy:

      New Zealand https://www.nature.com/arti...<br /> Lombardy https://www.nature.com/arti...<br /> Louisiana (Mardi Gras superspreading event) https://www.sciencedirect.c...<br /> Xinfadi market in Beijing https://academic.oup.com/ns...

      In none of the above cases of introduction/superspreader events do we observe two basal polytomies separated by two mutations with no intermediates as we do for early SARS-CoV-2 in Wuhan.

      Ironically, the authors cite Popa et al. 2020 Nature Communications on the spread of SARS-CoV-2 in Austria as an example of how polytomies can be linked to superspreader events. However, this work elegantly describes how each polytomy results from a separate introduction event into Austria:

      Vienna-1 clade/polytomy: connected to an index patient from Italy.<br /> Tyrrol-1 clade/polytomy: phylogenetically linked to North America.<br /> Vienna-3 clade/polytomy: connected to Cluster OG, an independent travel-associated cluster.<br /> Tyrrol-3 clade/polytomy: connected to Cluster D, an independent travel-associated cluster.

      So indeed, the cited work is actually more strong evidence that introduction events — including those of a ‘superspreader’ nature — are characterized by a single polytomy. We see no instances of a single superspreader event creating two concurrent polytomies, separated by two or more mutations, as we observe with the rise of lineages A and B in Wuhan. It is not merely the existence of polytomies in a phylogeny that is relevant, but the observed ratio of polytomy frequency and size, which Pekar et al. simulations predict would arise very infrequently with a single introduction.

      Further, the authors are incorrect in their characterization of the FAVITES models used by Pekar et al. FAVITES has been modified to accurately recapitulate SARS-CoV-2 superspreading nature; see Worobey et al. 2020 Science, Figure S2. Washburne et al. say:

      “and the transmission model of FAVITES will extend superspreading events over timescales that within-host evolution can occur”. However, the simulations in Pekar et al., 2022, and in FAVITES more broadly, account for within-host evolution: the coalescent process and subsequent mutational evolution are agnostic to subsampling and within-host evolution.

      1. In the second section, the authors describe how ascertainment biases and biased contact tracing could affect the recovered phylogeny. The core conceptual errors here are namely:

      The lineage A/B split and the basal polytomies of SARS-CoV-2 are still obvious in any phylogeny of early SARS-CoV-2 even when excluding genomes from the city of Wuhan: this phylogenetic structure is factually not an artifact of sampling, and anyone is welcome to build a tree of sequences before April 2020 excluding those from Wuhan and demonstrate this.

      Likewise, lineage A is still incompatible with the molecular clock when genomes linked to the Huanan Market are excluded. Even in sequences from February 2020 can you see a ‘lag’ in the evolution of lineage A from its root compared to lineage B (Pekar Fig S20).

      The authors propose no explanation of how contact tracing of patients connected to one market could produce a phylogenetic artifact of two large, basal polytomies: indeed, their simple analysis in Fig 2 shows that contact tracing will preferentially sample just one lineage, not two. Small polytomies are common throughout the SARS-CoV-2 phylogeny.

      A contact tracing bias cannot explain a lack of intermediate genomes between lineages A and B into itself. Firstly, if the evolution between the lineages occurred in humans, the patients with intermediate genomes should be contact traceable from normal lineage B patients. Second, even if they were missed in Wuhan, we would see the phylogenetic descendents of the intermediate genotype spread to other countries, unless this lineage just happened to be wiped out very quickly.

      As discussed by the Worobey et al. 2021 Science perspective, several of the earliest known SARS-CoV-2 patients were emphatically not contact traced from others — they were independently noticed in different hospitals throughout the city. This includes the earliest known case of lineage A, who was not contact traced, and had no noted connection to the Huanan Seafood Market, but after the fact was realized to live just a few blocks away (and shopped at a nearby market).

      Several other data points that together point towards the known early case data in Wuhan not being strongly characterized by ascertainment bias are discussed in the supplementary text of Worobey et al. 2022 Science section on this topic.

      1. In the third section, the authors put forth the possibility that several sampled genomes were intermediate sequences of lineage A and lineage B. Again here, they both misunderstand the data that they are reporting on, and misconstrue the methods and findings of Pekar et al.

      They propose that a set of genomes obtained from Sichuan may constitute C/C intermediate haplotypes between lineages A and B. However, the data does not support this, as elegantly explained by Zach Hensel on Twitter: <br /> https://twitter.com/alchemy...<br /> https://twitter.com/alchemy...

      Washburne writes: "It is difficult to see how sequencing errors, which are random, could occur at exactly the same position in these 12 early outbreak genomes."

      However, what they do not understand is that several of these genomes were plagued by systematic bioinformatics errors, not random sequencing errors. This was likely due to a known issue with a pipeline that imputed the reference genotype in loci with no read support, instead of replacing those positions with N characters. As demonstrated by Hensel above, for this particular dataset with poor coverage, that included the vast majority of samples which had no coverage at the relevant sites.

      Further, the authors misunderstand why certain genomes have been excluded from Pekar et al. The deciding observation is not the quality of the underlying sequencing data — although that is certainly likely the hidden cause — but the observation that some genomes share multiple polymorphisms with derived lineages in A and B, strongly indicating that they are phylogenetically aberrant. In all scenarios in which underlying data are available, it has been confirmed that these phylogenetic outliers are plagued by poor data quality issues, with missing data that has often been incorrectly imputed. In cases without the underlying data, the only alternative explanation would have to be a highly unusual degree of recurrent mutations. As this is fully explained in Pekar et al. 2022, I highly suggest the authors attempt a re-read to understand the reasoning of how we can identify these incorrect genomes.

      There are two more “minor” (in the grand scheme of things) errors in this section:

      “Lineage A and Lineage B, are separated by only two defining single nucleotide changes (SNCs), at positions 8782 and 21844”

      This is incorrect - the second position should be 28144, not 21844. This is wrong throughout the manuscript.

      "Intermediate sequences suggest there may not be two basal polytomies"

      Polytomies can be separated by a single mutation and still be polytomies: there is a basal polytomy in lineage A, and a separate basal polytomy in lineage B. The existence of intermediate genomes would not preclude the presence of these two polytomies.

      In sum, neither of the three points raised by Washburne and colleagues are in fact relevant to the hypothesis of multiple spillovers of SARS-CoV-2. Finally, it is also important to briefly discuss a broader conceptual error made by the authors. As they write:

      "Far from being able to conclude two spillover events, both hypotheses - natural origin and lab origin - are still on the table."

      This quote (along with knowledge of their past works) makes evident the aim of the authors: to reject the possibility of multiple SARS-CoV-2 spillovers because it is a finding largely inconsistent with their preferred laboratory origin hypothesis. They are correct in thinking that multiple spillovers of SARS-CoV-2 cannot easily be explained by a hypothesis of laboratory emergence. They are, however, incorrect in their statement that a lack of evidence for multiple spillovers would “put the lab origin hypothesis on the table”. There is an astounding degree of evidence against the possibility of laboratory emergence, primarily:

      (1) the complete lack of epidemiological contacts traced to the WIV, and the March 2020 seronegativity of Shi Zhengli’s group, <br /> (2) the geographic epicenter of the pandemic was in Hankou, Wuhan, not Wuchang, where the WIV resides, <br /> (3) the detailed insight we have into the research ongoing at the WIV in 2018-2019, including CoV sequences submitted to GenBank in 2018 (Yu Ping et al.) and Latinne et al. 2020 (submitted Oct 6 2019), multiple publicly available theses and papers, interviews, collaborator emails, US intelligence investigations, and unfunded grant proposals: all of which has so far indicated a lack of a SARS-CoV-2 progenitor at WIV, <br /> (4) the preponderance of evidence from the known early cases within the city of Wuhan, which were either linked to or centered around the Huanan Seafood Market, including the very first cases first identified in hospitals as reported by independent journalists as described in Worobey 2021 Science perspective,<br /> (5) the positive viral samples from an animal cage, a freezer, a defeathering machine, and the drains and ground of wildlife selling stalls within the western half of the Huanan Seafood Market, the half to which most human cases were also linked, and <br /> (6) direct and geographic links of patients and environmental sampling firmly establishing that both early SARS-CoV-2 lineages A and B were first identified in connection to the Huanan Seafood Market.

      Put otherwise, it is clear that the authors misrepresent and misunderstand the reasons why multiple spillovers have been proposed. Contrary to their beliefs, it is not to undermine or reject the laboratory hypothesis. The clear evidence against that hypothesis is well described in Holmes et al. 2021 Cell, The WHO Mission Report, and Worobey et al. 2022 Science— it is entirely incidental that the likelihood of multiple spillovers also happens to be inconsistent with their hypothesis.

      Why then has the possibility of multiple spillovers been proposed? Because the genomic data from the early SARS-CoV-2 pandemic is *peculiar*, and these peculiarities have so far only been adequately explained by models incorporating multiple spillovers. It is as simple as that.

    2. On 2022-10-14 11:40:10, user Zach Hensel wrote:

      Most of the C/C sequences discussed in this manuscript come from a single study (Lin et al 2021 DOI: 10.1016/j.chom.2021.01.015) that reports methods inconsistent with Washburne et al concluding that associated GISAID records represent complete, full-length sequences. For example, the very first sequence shown in Table 1 in Washburne et al, EPI_ISL_451351, corresponds to sample SC-PHCC1-030. Table S2 shows that this sample has only 89.4% coverage with at least 1 read and only 63.2% coverage with at least 10 reads. Yet, the associated GISAID record is full length with zero Ns. Clearly these are consensus Wuhan-Hu-1 genomes modified by detected variations, and this is confirmed in the manuscript by Lin et al that is cited by Washburne et al:

      For Nanopore sequencing data, the ARTIC bioinformatics pipeline for COVID (https://artic.network/ncov-... was used to call single nucleotide changes, deletions and insertions relative to the reference sequence. The final consensus genomes were generated for each sample based on the variants called in each position.

      This is not limited to Sichuan sequences, but also to Wuhan samples from the same study.

      Furthermore, Table 1 in Washburne et al includes a sample that was, in fact, considered in Pekar et al. EPI_ISL_453783 is a second record for EPI_ISL_452363 (identical sample ID, patient age, sampling date, and sequence).

      Multiple authors of this manuscript have promoted their claimed discovery of new intermediate genomes on social media for the past several weeks and have been repeatedly been informed of these and other errors in their claims and have yet to make any corrections.

      Edit 17/October/2022 -- Authors Washburne and Massey have responded that they are aware of this comment.<br /> Washburne: "I stand by every word."<br /> Massey: "grist to the mill lol"

    1. On 2022-10-15 11:39:10, user René Janssen wrote:

      Dear authors,

      In my opinion this study is very well done, well written and with very interesting outcomes. You are mentioning pollution by grooming already. Please add that this pollution is coming by timber conservation methods; now stays the pollution route unclear.

      The concept of the memory test is comparable with of McFarland (1998) (see https://doi.org/10.32469/10... for Permethrin and as you stated by Hsiao et al (2016) for Imidacloprid; Wu et al (2020) shows further that Imidacloprid has also effect on the echolocation for bats. It would be good to state this effect more clear in your paper, now this stays is a bit vague. It would be worthwhile to compare and contrast the results of these three very same outcomes in three different studies with three very different pesticides together. This would make the study more valuable than it is now already.

      Many thanks for doing this excellent study and well written paper.

      All the best,

      René Janssen<br /> The Netherlands

    1. On 2022-10-15 09:35:56, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This study has developed a tool to characterize small molecule modulators of RNA-protein binding events. Please see below a few points which may help strengthen the manuscript.

      • The term “temporal” is used multiple times in the paper, to facilitate clarity for readers from different disciplines, it may be useful to provide some further explanation or context for the term.

      • Introduction section, “independent datasets have failed to reach consensus”, please provide some brief explanation about those independent datasets mentioned.

      • Introduction section, last paragraph “We apply TRIBE ID to profile cytoplasmic G3BP1-RNA interactions …” - further explanation of these three processes linked together would be helpful.

      • Figure 1, please provide some further explanation for the difference between TRIBE and TRIBE-ID. Since the dimerization is forced by rapamycin, a control experiment to explain artifact binding would be helpful.

      • In the section, “Rapamycin-mediated dimerization of G3BP1-FRB and FKBP-ADAR”, recommend adding some clarification about the goal of this experiment, which could be understanding either native processes or in a rapamycin-dependent manner.

      • In section, “G3BP1 TRIBE analysis with human and Drosophila ADAR2 catalytic domains” - suggest commenting on the reasoning for ideal ADAR to possess characteristics like “high editing activity when dimerized or fused to G3BP1”. Are these characteristics important to increase signal/noise ratio in the assay? Also, an explanation of T375G mutation and control experiments with wild type ADAR for any inhibition effect for Figure 2 would be helpful.

      • In the section, “Temporally controlled G3BP1-RNA interaction analysis with TRIBE-ID”, please clarify whether the experiment described in Figure 3 provides information about the time of interaction between RNA and G3BP1.

      • A paragraph describing any limitations and other possible applications of this tool on other systems would add to the manuscript.

    1. On 2022-10-15 07:19:46, user Rick Webb wrote:

      Fixation using glutaraldehyde and processing at room temperature can cause major artefacts in the structure of bacteria. The nucleoid, for example, looks nothing like it does in real life, its structure is grossly changed. So it would be good to see these results verified using techniques like high pressure freezing and freeze substitution where the structural preservation will be less artifactual.

    1. On 2022-10-14 14:54:32, user Kevin McKernan wrote:

      The conflict of interest section is misleading. It should clearly spell out that these authors are competitors of the company that hosts the largest dataset they chose not to use (Medicinal Genomics). The reasons provided for ignoring this data are not compelling given their own manuscript cites many authors who have made use of such data in peer reviewed settings (Hurgobin, Henry, Allen, Joly). The comment about a single preprint using this data not being peer reviewed is disingenuous given the weight of the other authors peer reviewed work. The only other sequencing data, the manuscript does considers are from entities that have exited the Cannabis genomics services business and no longer pose a commercial threat to the authors (Phylos and Sunrise genomics). These commercial biases are important for the reader to understand.

    1. On 2022-10-13 19:16:01, user BacillusBaRosh wrote:

      Author responses to feedback posted on hypothes.is - cut and paste because could not figure out how to respond there https://hypothes.is/a/5fVcAEaSEe2k4CPVTDZz7Q

      AtanasRadkov<br /> Oct 7<br /> on "Magnesium modulates Bacillus s…"<br /> (www.biorxiv.org)<br /> General comments:

      This study carefully delineates the role of magnesium in cell division versus cell elongation. The results are really important specifically for rod-shaped bacteria and also an important contribution to the broader field of understanding cell shape. Specifically, I love that they are distinguishing between labile and non-labile intracellular magnesium pools, as well as extracellular magnesium! These three pools are really challenging to separate but I commend them on engaging with this topic and using it to provide alternative explanations for their observations!

      A major contribution to prior findings on the effects of magnesium is the author’s ability to visualize the number of septa in the elongating cells in the absence of magnesium. This is novel information and I think the field will benefit from the microscopy data shown here.

      I completely agree with the authors that we need to be more careful when using rich media such as LB. It is particularly sad that we may be missing really interesting biology because of that! It’s worth moving away from such media or at least being more careful about batch to batch variability. Batch to batch variability is not as well appreciated in microbiology as it is for growing other cell types (for example, mammalian cells and insect cells).

      For me, the most exciting finding was that a large part of the cell length changes within the first 10min after adding magnesium. The authors do speculate in the discussion that this is likely happening because of biophysical or enzymatic effects, and I hope they explore this further in the future!

      I love how the paper reads like a novel! Congratulations on a very well-written paper!

      Kudos to the authors for providing many alternative explanations for their results. It demonstrates critical thinking and an open-mind to finding the truth.

      Comment<br /> Figure 2C → please include indication of statistical significance<br /> Figure 3C → please include indication of statistical significance<br /> Figure 6A → please include indication of statistical significance<br /> Figure 8B → please include indication of statistical significance<br /> Figure S1B → please include indication of statistical significance<br /> Figure S3B → please include indication of statistical significance

      Response<br /> Easy to add

      Comment<br /> For your overexpression experiments, do the overexpressed proteins have a tag? It would be helpful to have Western blot data showing that the particular proteins are actually being overexpressed. I think the phenotypes that you observe are very compelling, so I don’t doubt the conclusions. Western blot data would just provide some additional confirmation that you are actually achieving overexpression of UppS, MraY, and BcrC.

      Response<br /> The proteins are untagged. For the UppS and BcrC the cell shortening occurs with addition of inducer, , so strong indication expression is occurring. A western would provide information about degree of overexpression, but we don’t think is necessary to support conclusion drawn. Do you think there is an alternative possibility that needs to be excluded? We note that in another preprint (https://www.biorxiv.org/con... the authors delete the native uppS in their inducible Phy-uppS strain (Fig S4) and at 100 uM IPTG (10X less than what we used in experiment) the cells have wt growth on LB plates, so we at least know the Phy-uppS is functional and made (or they would die!). We are introducing the uppS deletion into our strain to see if we can identify a concentration of IPTG that doesn’t affect cell growth but still induces shortening.

      For MraY, the result is negative, so you are spot on – it is impossible to tell if due to lack of overexpression from data shown. We only know the strain is correctly made from sequencing. We will investigate if there is an antibody or functional fusion available. The reason we were not sure was worth doing is because the MraY reaction is reversible (15131133). This means that without a phenotype, there is no simple way to know the reaction can even be pushed forward even if the overexpression is confirmed (more negative data). We actually overexpressed some other proteins that act downstream (MraY, MurJ, AmJ) and they were also negative for shortening. Probably we should remove the negative data or reword to make the caveats of the negative result clear.

      Question<br /> Based on your data, there are definitely differences in gene expression when you compare cells grown in media with and without magnesium. Because the majority in cell length increase occurs in such a short time though (the first 10min), I was wondering if you think that some or most of it is not due to gene expression?

      Response<br /> The shortening is even faster than 10 min (not only statistically significant, but also obvious qualitatively if we mount immediately after adding Mg2+ ). We did not include the first timepoint because original purpose was to check everything was ready with microscope – did not expect shortening so fast! We can definitely add that data in. When we saw, we tried to capture the transition on pads, but going from culture to pad seems to stress the cells too much in the small window where the cool stuff happens. Since growth rate doesn’t appear to be a big factor in those initial divisions, we might be able to grow at lower temp and shift to pads for adjustment period before adding Mg2+. Did not play with it much due to lack of resources atm, but a flowcell setup would probably be best.<br /> In short, we think rapid divisions right after transition do not require transcription or translation. It really “smells” more like a biophysical thing.

      Question<br /> Do you have any hypotheses what is most likely to be affected by magnesium? Do you think if the membrane may be affected?

      Response<br /> We have a lot of hypotheses – all of which are speculative. There could be an extracytoplasmic enzyme involved in envelope synthesis is sensitive to Mg2+ availability, and that at lower concentrations, it’s activity is affected. There is some old literature with membrane preps that suggests PG synthesis requires higher Mg2+ than teichoic acid synthesis. If Und-P is limiting, higher Mg2+ may shift make the pool more available to make the septum. Tingfeng initially hypothesized there might be a receptor/signal mechanism but has not been able to identify one. Und-P seems to be important, but “availability” is not just pool, but how fast (and where!) the flipping across the membrane occurs. If Und-PP needs to be dephosphorylated to Und-P before being flipped back to cytoplasmic side, anything that effects the PPi equilibrium would be predicted to affect the reaction rate, with lower Pi (in periplasm or pseudoperiplasm in case of G+) favoring the dephosphorylation. Cell wall associated Mg2+ could shift equilibrium to be more favorable for a Und-PP phosphatase more closely associated with the divisome. I could go all day… In short, we don’t know enough!

      Question<br /> Why do you think less magnesium activates this program of less division and more elongation? Additionally why is abundant magnesium activating a program of increased cell division and less elongation? Do you think there is some evolutionary advantage, especially considering how important magnesium is for ATP production?

      Response<br /> In the window we looked at, the elongation rate is constant (not less or more) and only the division frequency changes. Some bacteria (like Caulobacter and to lesser extent E. coli) clearly elongate and divide simultaneously, so there is some competition for substrate (like Lipid II). Septators like Bacillus seem to delineate the two processes more, but we have found conditions where even Bacillus invaginates during division, so it’s not absolute. Like eukaryotic cells, bacterial undoubtedly have mechanisms not only commit to a round of DNA replication when there is some signal that resources are sufficient. Clearly with some bugs, this is not the case with cell division. The alternative possibility is that every cell cycle there is an opportunity to divide if some threshold of *something(s)* is reached. There is a hypothesis from Mtb literature that it may be GTP, but it’s not at all clear that is sufficient. In yeast, size at cell division is affected by perturbing 1-C pool.

      Question<br /> Related to this previous question, I also wonder if this magnesium-dependent phenotype would extend to other unicellular organisms, may be protists or algae? That would be a really exciting direction to explore!

      Response<br /> It’s a great question – lots to do! We didn’t even look at another Gram-positive, but we plan to. It’s trickier to limit Mg2+ in Gram-negatives (see 27471053 – we tried Bsub homolog for those wondering – it’s not responsible for phenotype we see).

      Question<br /> Regarding the zinc and manganese experiments, why do you think they lead to additional phenotypes compared to magnesium? Do you have any hypotheses?

      Response<br /> We have hypotheses, but if my (Jen’s) twitter engagement is any indication, way too speculative for public consumption at present. Need grant to acquire preliminary data to write grant.

      Question<br /> Regarding your results that Lipid I availability may be a major a problem for the cell division in the absence of magnesium, do you think that is due to effects magnesium has on the enzymes directly, or do you think magnesium affects the substrate availability/conformation by coordinating the phosphate groups? Or something else, may be membrane conformation?

      Response<br /> Several proteins involved in envelope synthesis (like UppS) are Mg2+ dependent enzymes. But at least for any intracellular players, levels of Mg2+ should be more than high enough to support enzyme activity even when levels are low (0.8 – 3.0 mM is Bsub range I recall off top of head). Could have impact extracytoplasmically by lowering pool sponged into the cell wall, but intuition (for what that is worth) is that it is not the coordination of an enzyme with a metal that is impacted rather the equilibrium with other ions like Pi and H+ and that this impacts net ATP synthesis. Lots to think about and do, and no simple answers. When Tingfeng started project idea was to find mechanism – didn’t realize we were asking “how does the cell work?” Turned out to be a bit much for a dissertation project :)

      -Jen Herman and Tingfeng Guo

    1. On 2022-10-13 04:34:53, user W John Martin wrote:

      A Figure was inadvertantly ommited from the uploaded article. I will work on having it included: The Legend of the Figure is included below

      Legend: Photo of an ethidium bromide-stained 8-laned agarose gel electrophoresis. The arrow points to lane 4 and shows the migration of a portion of the DNA that was extracted from the filtered and ultracentrifuged supernatant of stealth virus-1 infected MRHF cells. Lane 3 directly beneath the arrow shows the migration of another portion of the extracted DNA that was digested using EcoRI enzyme prior to electrophoresis. Lane is EcoRI digested DNA obtained from the lysate of the infected MRHF cells. Lanes 1 and 3 are HindIII and Bst-II lambda phage DNA markers, the largest of which are 23,130 and 8,454 nucleotide base pairs, respectively. The lower staining material in lanes 3, 4, and 6 is RNA. Reproduced from reference (1) with permissio

    1. On 2022-10-12 11:44:01, user Lily Fogg wrote:

      Please note that upon peer review, this manuscript was divided into two related papers which were published back-to-back in the Journal of Experimental Biology:

      1) Development of dim-light vision in the nocturnal reef fish family Holocentridae. I: Retinal gene expression <br /> Link: https://journals.biologists...

      2) Development of dim-light vision in the nocturnal reef fish family Holocentridae. II: Retinal morphology<br /> Link:<br /> https://journals.biologists...

    1. On 2022-10-11 18:59:18, user Willow K. Coyote wrote:

      General assessment:<br /> D’Costa, Hinds et al. develop a framework to infer protein fitness based on laboratory evolution data using DHFR as a test case. This framework is based on a generalized Pott’s model, which infers parameters from successive rounds of selections using sequencing data. This model works well to predict fitness and epistasis within the experimental data’s bounds but cannot predict beyond it. Overall, we enjoyed the exploration of the model and the data, we had a difficult time understanding what major insights were gleaned from the work, and we found the manuscript was written for perhaps a bit too specialized of an audience. From our perspective, the manuscript could be greatly improved by focusing on the novelty of the models and including additional context for more general audiences.

      Strengths:<br /> 1)The manuscript is a rigorous and model driven exploration of how data can be used for training <br /> 2) The authors transparently present the performance of there models even when it does not work as planned.

      Weaknesses:<br /> 1) It was difficult to identify what the key takeaways of the paper were. Perhaps working on the narrative would make it easier to identify these takeaways.

      2) From our reading we found the manuscript was written at an expert level. We found this made it difficult to interpret some of the results.

      High-level Recommendations:

      1) The quality of a high throughput assay is largely determined based on the quality of the input library. However, the authors do not show the level of coverage gleaned from the library that could result in some parts of the gene not being well-represented within the model. We would love to see more discussion of the raw sequencing data and its analysis to get a sense of the overall quality/coverage of the DHFR libraries and the signal-to-noise within the selection.

      2) From our reading the overall framing of the manuscript appeared to be for a very technical audience. As readers we are very familiar with genotype-phenotype assays and to a limited degree models to represent the data from this assays. However, as we are not deeply familiar with Potts models and their novelty in the context of fitness landscapes, it was difficult for us to understand portions of the manuscript. In addition as using Pott’s model to represent the directed evolution experiments appeared to be a major novelty for the manuscript it would be useful to provide more background for why this specifically is novel.

      3) From our reading the interpretation and exploration of the model was focused on describing the smooth or ruggedness of the fitness landscape and testing whether one could extrapolate from this fitness landscape to future predicted generations of sequences. We found it admirable the authors shared that the extrapolation did not work. Fot the fitness landscape exploration more background would likely benefit a non-expert reader. For example, the fitness landscape was described as being ‘Fuji-like’. For those familiar with fitness landscapes, this means a smooth landscape with a single peak. However, for those unfamiliar, this could be somewhat confusing. Furthermore, perhaps it would be worth exploring what we can learn about fitness landscapes with the model, as this could yield further insight.

      Specific discussions of results and figures:<br /> Figure 1: Shows the directed evolution experiment using error-prone PCR on DHFR to search the fitness landscape for diverse sequences encoding DHFR activity. A: In the text the authors could explain why they stopped the experiment at round 15, but not earlier or later. B: This panel shows clearly that round 15 is distant from other rounds. Within D the authors show a plot of what fraction of mutations are accumulated throughout the experiment at a given position. A high score here likely implies that there is a beneficial impact of mutating a residue at a position. In the text position, 20 is discussed widely but is not noted on the figure while the figure notes positions 71 and 117 are noted but not discussed until later during the interactions discussion mostly focused on Figure 2. We found this somewhat confusing and it would perhaps be beneficial to note where specifically residue 20 is (presumably within the greyed out ‘Nucleotide Binding’ part of the plot). Perhaps more discussion of why mechanistically N20D is beneficial would be useful for aiding in interpreting the result.

      Figure 2:<br /> A: Shows a heatmap of how the model predicts fitness for mutations at each position. Error-prone PCR was used to make libraries for this experiment as in classic directed evolution experiments and is well known to not result in full coverage. Within the model it appears that most positions have a predicted fitness with many being 0 (based on the greyish color). We would like to know the percentage of variants present for the predictions. As illustrated later in the manuscript, the model does not perform well when extending beyond the data. Perhaps if positions with low confidence or without frequent observed mutations at the beginning of the experiment were withheld the performance of the model would improve.Within the text the authors mention how the heatmap highlights the importance of the catalytic residues but as presented it is difficult to see this as we did not know where these are within the heatmap. It would be useful to have annotations for where the catalytic/functional residues are. It appears that the N20D that is enriched with the library is not positive within the model. Why could that be? <br /> B: The authors mapped the average predicted mutational effect onto the structure of DHFR. The discussion of this data is rather limited to negative impacts within the core. Perhaps it would be useful to talk more about what can be learned or compare to previous library studies of DHFR such as recent work done in Kimberly Reynold’s lab (McCormick, J., 2021 eLife).<br /> C-D: The authors then explore interactions within the model as a way to look at epistasis by looking at interactions across residues. Within D the authors show specific examples mapped onto the structure focusing on either side of the NADPH binding site. It would be useful within C to highlight interactions that appear important and highlighted in D. <br /> E-F: The authors compare how well the model can be used to identify contacting residues based on interactions scores. The authors show that including the 15th round improves model performance. For many interactions contacts are incorrectly predicted, however within the text the authors discuss how the model performs well compares to other approaches. For many regions of the contact map especially the end of the gene there are few predictions. Why is that? Overall, we find this exploration of the models to be difficult to interpret as from our view it appears the model is frequently predicting incorrect contacts or no contacts at all. Perhaps this is expected and that should likely be discussed further within the text.

      Figure 3: Using their model trained on experimental data, they simulated several evolutionary trajectories of DHFR until a fitness peak was reached. Each simulation converged on the same peak, relatively close to the WT sequence. Following this, simulations were performed starting from the last experimental time point; however, mutants after this point were found to be inactive. In the discussion of these results, the authors note several reasons for this shortcoming of their model, all of which seem reasonable and highlight the need for more data to effectively use such models. Key suggestions include a discussion of how/where the inactivating mutations occur in the enzyme. Are these concentrated in specific hotspots, or are they in areas well sampled by the preceding libraries?

      Suggested citation: “Deciphering protein evolution and fitness landscapes with latent space models”, Xinqiang Ding, Zhengting Zou & Charles L. Brooks III, Nature Communications 2019

      Format of review: We reviewed this paper as part of our weekly paper discussion. We read a paper in depth weekly and discuss it as a group. In contrast to most journal clubs, we do not make slides, and everyone is an active participant in presenting a paper in which we typically each will describe each figure within the paper. As we are a group with diverse backgrounds, the person with the most experience in that area will bring everyone up to speed if anything is confusing. We focus on going through a paper from figure to figure. For these reasons, most of our comments and suggestions are about the figures. Beyond that, we try to understand the major points a paper makes and whether the data presented in the figures supports it. Different people wrote a description for each figure they wrote.

      Authors of Review: <br /> Willow Coyote-Maestas<br /> Matthew Howard<br /> Patrick Rockefeller Grimes<br /> Christian Macdonald<br /> Donovan Trinidad<br /> Arthur Melo

      Relevant expertise: Scientifically, we come from many different backgrounds but most people within our group have experience with membrane proteins, high throughput genotype-phenotype assays, and developing assays for measuring how mutations break membrane protein.

    1. On 2022-10-09 23:27:46, user jiarong wrote:

      I am glad to see to see updated manuscript w/ the contamination in the negative set (microbial + plasmid) removed in the simulated Refseq data, addressing my previous comments (http://disq.us/p/2it17sx) "http://disq.us/p/2it17sx)"). I have a few more comments:<br /> - I am concerned that there are unknown prophages in the microbes in the mock community data that could significantly skew the precision lower. The contaminant screening that is used in the simulated Refseq data might help here too.<br /> - From my experience on VirSorter2, the optimal score cutoff for highest F1 could change a lot with different datasets such as environment types, eg. soil samples generally requires higher cutoff. Thus this SOP (https://www.protocols.io/vi... is the recommended way to run VirSorter2.

    1. On 2022-10-09 16:47:55, user Jordan Willis wrote:

      Hello,

      Any software that bridges the gap between computationalist and experimentalist is great. However, the primary use case for this will be remote servers. People just don't have the laptops required to run the cellranger software. Even if they did, once you throw docker into the mix, you ask the experimentalist end user to know quite a bit about the command line. If they know enough to use docker, they would probably be able to use a lot of the command line apps available for this. With that in mind, I'd like to see way more documentation on the remote setup. Especially the incorporation of the ShinyProxy. I want to use this for folks on my team but I'm not especially clear on how this app works with the proxy.

      My other concern is the closed source code baked into the docker image. I'd encourage you to release it.

      Also, the youtube documentation while great, also should be posted as static documentation.

      Thanks,<br /> Jordan

    1. On 2022-10-08 16:37:04, user Michael Ailion wrote:

      This paper aims to understand how toxin-antidote (TA)<br /> elements are spread and maintained in species, especially in species where<br /> outcrossing is infrequent and the selfish gene drive of TA elements is limited.<br /> The paper focuses on the possible fitness costs and benefits of the peel-1/zeel-1 element in the nematode C. elegans. A combination of mathematical modeling and experimental tests of<br /> fitness are presented. The authors make a surprising finding: the toxin gene peel-1<br /> provides a fitness advantage to the host. This is a very interesting<br /> finding that challenges how we think about selfish genetic elements,<br /> demonstrating that they may not be wholly “selfish” in order to spread in a<br /> population.

      This paper is of interest to evolutionary biologists and<br /> population geneticists. It provides empirical evidence that supports a previous<br /> hypothesis of how selfish toxin-antidote elements spread in non-obligate<br /> outcrossing species. While the experiments and data are appropriate for<br /> addressing this hypothesis, one major conclusion is not supported by the data<br /> and one other major conclusion is supported only weakly.

      Strengths

      1. The authors support results found with a zeel-1 peel-1 introgressed strain by using<br /> CRISPR/Cas9 genetic engineering to precisely knock-out the genes of interest.<br /> They were careful to ensure the loss-of-function of these generated alleles by<br /> using genetic crosses.

      2. Similarly, the authors are careful with<br /> controls, ensuring that genetic markers used in the fitness assays did not<br /> affect the fitness of the strain. This ensures that the genes of interest are causative<br /> for any source of fitness differences between strains, therefore making the<br /> data reliable and easily interpretable.

      3. A powerful assay for directly measuring the<br /> relative fitness of two strains is used.

      4. The authors support relative fitness data<br /> with direct measurements of fitness proximal traits such as body size (a proxy<br /> for growth rate) and fecundity, providing further support for the conclusion<br /> that peel-1 increases fitness.

      Weaknesses

      1. One major conclusion is that peel-1 increases<br /> fitness independent of zeel-1, but this claim is not well supported by<br /> the data. The data presented show that the presence of zeel-1 does<br /> not provide a fitness benefit to a peel-1(null) worm. But the experiment<br /> does not test whether zeel-1<br /> is required for the increased<br /> fitness conferred by the presence of peel-1.<br /> Ideally, one would test whether a zeel-1(null);peel-1(+) strain is<br /> as fit as a zeel-1(+);peel-1(+) strain, but this experiment may<br /> be infeasible since a zeel-1(null);peel-1(+) strain is inviable.

      2. The CRISPR-generated peel-1<br /> allele in the N2 background only accounts for 32% of the fitness difference<br /> of the introgressed strain. Thus, the effect of peel-1 alone on fitness appears to be rather small. Additionally, this<br /> effect of peel-1 shows only weak<br /> statistical significance (and see point 5 below). Given that this is the key<br /> experiment in the paper, the major conclusion of the paper that the presence of<br /> peel-1 provides a fitness benefit is<br /> supported only weakly. For example, it is possible that other mutations caused<br /> by off-target effects of CRISPR in this strain may contribute to its decreased<br /> fitness. It would be valuable to point out the caveats to this conclusion, or<br /> back it up more strongly with additional experiments such as rescuing the peel-1(null) fitness defect with a<br /> wild-type peel-1 allele or determining<br /> if introduction of wild-type peel-1 into<br /> the introgressed strain is sufficient to confer a fitness benefit.

      3. The strain that introgresses the zeel-1 peel-1 region from CB4856 into the N2 background was made by<br /> a different lab. Given that N2 strains from different labs can vary<br /> considerably, it is unclear whether this introgressed strain is indeed isogenic<br /> to the N2 strain it is competed against, or whether other background mutations<br /> outside the introgressed region may contribute to the observed<br /> fitness differences.

      4. Though the CRISPR-generated null allele of peel-1 only accounts for 32% of the<br /> fitness difference of the zeel-1 peel-1 introgressed<br /> strain, these two strains have very similar fecundity and growth rates. Thus,<br /> it is unclear why this mutant does not more fully account for the fitness<br /> differences.

      5. Improper statistical tests are used. All comparisons use<br /> a t test, but this test is inappropriate when multiple comparisons are made.<br /> Importantly, correction for multiple comparisons may decrease the already weak<br /> statistical significance of the fitness costs of the peel-1 CRISPR allele (Fig 3E), which is the key result in the<br /> paper.

      6. N2 fecundity and growth rate measurements<br /> from Fig 2B&C are reused in Fig 3C&D. This should be explicitly stated.<br /> It should also be stated whether all three strains (N2, the zeel-1 peel-1 introgressed strain, and<br /> the peel-1 CRISPR mutant) were<br /> assayed in parallel as they should be. If so, a statistical test that corrects<br /> for multiple comparisons should also be used.

      7. It appears that the same data for the<br /> controls for the fitness experiments (i.e. N2 vs. marker & N2 vs.<br /> introgressed npr-1; glb-5) may be<br /> reused in Fig 2A and 3E. If so, this should be stated. It should also be stated<br /> whether all the experiments in these panels were performed in parallel. If so,<br /> this may affect the statistical significance when correcting for multiple<br /> comparisons.

      Minor<br /> points

      1. Though the mathematical modeling is interesting from a<br /> theoretical point of view, we feel that it oversells the rationale behind the<br /> experiments, setting up a “straw man” argument to knock down. Also, the modeling<br /> relies on rather high assumptions of the possible carrying cost of peel-1/zeel-1. For example, the modeling<br /> of the effect of outcrossing rate on peel-1/zeel-1<br /> frequency assumes a selection coefficient of 0.35, which seems rather<br /> arbitrary and high. Where does this number come from? Is there any precedence<br /> for this high carrying cost? In our opinion, the idea that energy expenditure<br /> or leaky toxicity accounts for such a high carrying cost seems unlikely.

      2. The two studies cited for “outcrossing rates typical for<br /> C. elegans” estimated vastly different outcrossing rates (~20% or ~1%).<br /> The model presented in Fig S1 specifically uses the lower estimates (0-2%), so<br /> the Sivasundar & Hey paper is miscited here. It is unclear whether there is<br /> a good rationale to go with the lower rate estimates.

      3. The measurement of body-size is unclear in the main<br /> text. Only when reading methods did we realize that body-size is more of a<br /> proxy for growth rate rather than an end-point measurement of worm size.

      4. What is the temporal distribution of egg laying of the<br /> N2 and N2peel-1(null) strains? Based on how the<br /> data collection is described in the Methods, the authors should already have<br /> these data. Does egg-laying start at the same time in the two strains? The fact<br /> that strains carrying peel-1 grow<br /> faster but also apparently produce more sperm (which might slow them down)<br /> makes an analysis of this worthwhile, especially since fitness depends on when<br /> eggs are laid, not just how many. Some more characterization of this fitness<br /> trait seems appropriate and useful for beginning to understand how peel-1<br /> may be increasing fitness. Given that the number of sperm limits how many eggs<br /> are laid, the presence of peel-1 apparently results in more sperm. It is<br /> surprising that a gene exclusively expressed in developing sperm can lead to<br /> production of more sperm.

      5. Line 65: the statement “similar elements have not been<br /> identified in obligate outcrossing Caenorhabditis nematodes” is somewhat<br /> misleading. TA elements may not have been identified in obligate outcrossing<br /> nematodes because of research bias since genetic experiments are easier to<br /> perform in non-obligate outcrossers and it is unclear that there have been<br /> extensive searches for TA elements in outcrossing nematodes. Furthermore, as<br /> the mathematical models in this study suggest, TA elements will spread quickly<br /> with increasing rate of outcrossing. Since a TA element’s non-fixation within a<br /> species has historically been a prerequisite for its discovery, the rapid TA<br /> element fixation that would generally occur in obligate outcrossers would make<br /> their identification more challenging.

      6. Line 209-210: it is stated that this is the “first<br /> measurement of the fitness cost of a TA element to the host” and “first<br /> demonstration that a TA element can benefit the organism.” These claims may be<br /> overstated. It has been previously shown in several cases that TA elements can<br /> provide fitness benefits in bacteria, such as improved antibiotic resistance<br /> (e.g. Bogati et al. 2022, PMID: 34570627).

      7. More details about the CRISPR protocol would be helpful.<br /> It is unclear whether Cas9/sgRNAs were introduced as RNPs or plasmids (and at<br /> what concentrations). It is unclear how worms were screened for edits. It is<br /> also unclear how many Dpy or Rol worms were screened and how many peel-1 or<br /> zeel-1 edited worms were found (the efficiency of CRISPR). The meaning<br /> of the shaded portion of the repairing oligo sequences in the table is not<br /> explained. Finally, it is not stated whether CRISPR-generated mutant strains<br /> were outcrossed.

      Reviewed (and signed)<br /> by Lews Caro and Michael Ailion

    1. On 2022-10-07 09:11:44, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This review reflects comments and contributions by Ruchika Bajaj and Sanjay Kumar Sukumar. Review synthesized by Iratxe Puebla.

      The preprint studied the conformational changes upon binding of the Akt protein kinase to the Akt active site inhibitor A-443654 and the Akt allosteric inhibitor MK-2206, under three states of Akt: inactive monophosphorylated, partially active tris-phosphorylated, and fully activated, tris-phosphorylated bound to PIP3 membranes. The MK-2206 resulted in allosteric conformational changes in all states and restricted membrane binding through sequestration of the PH domain. The A-443654 inhibitor led to allosteric conformational changes in the monophosphorylated and phosphorylated states, with increased protection in the PH domain upon membrane binding. The results can assist the design of Akt-targeted therapeutics.

      The reviewers had a few minor comments about the paper:

      It could be helpful to include a short explanation early in the text about the use of HDX-MS, how it works and why it is useful for exploring conformational changes.

      Figure 2A+B provide a nice representation of the HDX exchange data.

      Results ‘3 seconds at 1°C, which is referred to as 0.3 sec in all graphs and the source data)’ - This may be a bit confusing for someone who wants to look at the data in the figures independently. Consider an alternative way of representation or providing some further clarification in the figure legend.

      Results ‘Decreases in exchange in the kinase domain were similar to those observed in the absence of membranes, occurring in regions encompassing the αC helix, the ATP binding pocket, as well as changes covering the activation loop and C-lobe:PH interface’ - Please clarify whether the comparison here relates to the data in Fig. 3A/C vs Fig 4A/C.

      Results ‘There were multiple regions of significantly decreased deuterium exchange in the kinase and PH domains (Fig. 2B, 2D, 2E).’ - This section mainly focuses on conformational change upon the addition of MK-2206 allosteric inhibitor binding. Figure 2F appears to be the most relevant for the comparison. It is suggested to provide additional combination of data with ATP analogs to understand the coordination of ATP and inhibitor during the inhibition step in the cycle.

      Results ‘Both experiments were carried out under saturating concentrations of inhibitor binding, so this difference reflects intrinsic conformational differences.’ - Saturating concentrations implies that most of the population will be in the same conformation. Please comment on the association between saturating concentrations and intrinsic conformational differences.

      Discussion - There do not appear to be many structures available for different conformational states of Akt. The study has mapped hdx data on available structures, however, it'd be good to see correlation of conformational changes by HDX with conformational changes in structure.

    1. On 2022-10-07 09:04:58, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This review reflects comments and contributions by Ruchika Bajaj, Gary McDowell, Sree Rama Chaitanya Sridhara. Review synthesized by Iratxe Puebla.

      The preprint studies the process for mitochondrial targeting of mitochondrial precursor proteins. Using a yeast model, experiments show that the cytosol transiently stores matrix-destined precursors in dedicated granules which the authors name MitoStores. The formation of MitoStores is controlled by the heat shock proteins Hsp42 and Hsp104, and suppresses the toxicity arising from non-imported accumulated mitochondrial precursor proteins.

      The manuscript is clear and well-written. The reviewers raised a few comments and suggestions as outlined below:

      The introduction was extremely clear and provides a good summary of the protein homeostasis dimension of the problem in question. However, there could be a clearer discussion of the processes of import, in particular with respect to the results discussing “clogging”. It is suggested to add a penultimate transitional paragraph in the introduction that facilitates this transition e.g. this could be expansion of the first paragraph in the Results section, moved into the introduction to provide more context about the cloggers, PACE, and the Rpn4-mediated proteasomal regulation.

      Figure 2E and Figure S2 - Can some further explanation be provided about what data belongs to delta-rpn otr WT, or whether the associated fold change is reported - delta-rpn/WT.

      Results ‘while the levels of most chaperones were unaffected or even reduced in Δrpn4 cells, the disaggregase Hsp104 and the small heat shock protein Hsp42 were considerably upregulated (Fig. 2F, G)’ - Suggest adding some further clarification as to why Hsp104 and Hsp42 are selected despite perturbations in other protein partners. Are there other proteins than proteosomes and chaperones which are significantly up- or down-regulated? STRING or cytoscape tools may help with the interactome analysis.

      Figure 3

      • Figure 3A - It seems Δrpn4 cells are bigger in size than control cells, suggest commenting on this point.
      • Figure 3B ‘Hsp104-GFP was purified on nanotrap sepharose’ - Please clarify on which tag the purification was based.
      • ‘grown at the indicated temperatures’ - Please clarify the rationale for using 30 or 40C.
      • ‘SN, supernatant representing the non-bound fraction’ - Please report what is total, wash and elute etc.

      Results ‘protein accumulated at similar levels as Hsp104-GFP in the yeast cytosol (Fig. S4B)’ - Please clarify whether the image reports qualitative or quantitative data, and how the levels of DHFR-GFP and Hsp104-GFP are compared based on S4B.

      ‘Owing to the striking acquisition of nuclear encoded mitochondrial proteins in these structures, we termed them MitoStores’ - Suggest providing some discussion about the fraction of Hsp104 that is part of the MitoStores? Does a major portion of Hsp104 in the absence of Rpn4 form MitoStore structures?

      Figure S5 C ‘Quantification of the colocalization of Hsp104-GFP with Pdb1-RFP after clogger expression for 4.5 h.’ - Suggest normalizing the intensity with one another.

      Results ‘Upon clogger induction, the RFP signal formed defined punctae that colocalized with Hsp104-GFP’ - The Hsp104-GFP pattern seems different between Fig 3A, 5, and S5. In some cases, clear punctae are seen and in others, a diffused pattern. Can some comment be provided on this? This might be important to score the colocalization between Hsp104-GFP and other protein partners tagged with RFP. If different conditions were used in the figures, recommend specifying this in the figure legends.

      Discussion ‘We observed that MitoStores are transient in nature and dissolve…’ - Suggest adding some discussion about the half-life of MitoStores, and about what the different stressors that can trigger MitoStores may be.

    1. On 2022-10-07 00:51:41, user Michael Ailion wrote:

      This manuscript investigates the cellular basis of reduced insulin secretion in Prader-Willi syndrome (PWS) by generating several independent INS-1-derived cell lines to model PWS. These PWS model cells have reduced insulin secretion and reduced levels of insulin and several other secreted peptides. A possible mechanism is suggested by transcriptomic and proteomic analyses, demonstrating the reduced expression of a number of endoplasmic reticulum (ER) chaperones that may be important for proper folding of insulin; reduced levels of chaperones may lead to reductions in insulin levels, though it should be emphasized that this is just a model and hasn’t been tested. The experiments are performed well and the data are solid and convincing, though the effect sizes are of rather small magnitude and it is unclear how important the small effects seen here are to the pathophysiology of PWS. The extensive and rigorous molecular characterization of the mutations in the PWS model cell lines is a particular strength, and the fact that several independent PWS and control cell lines are generated increases the confidence in the results. The proteomic and transcriptomic datasets generated in this work are important contributions to the field. We have a number of relatively minor critiques, many related to the writing and presentation of the work.

      Specific comments:<br /> 1. Though the data appear to be solid, virtually all of the effects are of small magnitude, < 2 fold (e.g. insulin secretion, altered expression of chaperones at both the mRNA and protein levels, ER-stress sensitivity). This is fine, but is not readily apparent from the way the paper is written (e.g. line 389, where insulin secretion is described as “dramatically reduced” or elsewhere where effect sizes can only be gleaned by careful examination of the figures). More transparency and explicit discussion of the effect sizes would be helpful. For instance, it would be helpful to compare the effect sizes seen here to those of PWS mouse models and human patients.

      1. The take-home model of the paper is that the effect on insulin in PWS is due to an indirect effect on chaperones. This is a reasonable and interesting model, but given that the magnitude of the downregulation of these chaperones is actually quite small (appears to be less than 2-fold for most or all of them), it seems possible that some other mechanism is at play and this may be a red herring. It is unclear whether such a modest decrease in multiple chaperones would produce the observed effects on insulin content and secretion, though it is an interesting question for future work. However, it would also be nice to see the full lists of proteomic data presented as supplementary tables for interested readers so possible alternative targets can be more easily explored.

      2. It is concluded that PWS cells are unable to compensate for decreases in chaperones because many chaperones are simultaneously downregulated. This argument does not make a lot of sense to us, and would seem to depend on the mechanism of compensation, which is not further described here. For example, if chaperone genes are transcriptionally downregulated in PWS mutants, what precludes an independent compensation mechanism from simply turning transcription back up, unless the PWS genes are important for the compensation process itself? It would help to present more about what is known about this compensation mechanism, and whether it occurs transcriptionally or posttranscriptionally. A small decrease in many chaperones does not inherently seem to preclude a possible compensation mechanism.

      3. The paper is rather difficult to read with lots of jargon and a poor narrative flow. The reader has to do a lot of work to figure things out on their own without much help. Several examples of this are provided in the next few comments(#5-8).

      4. Some genes or proteins come up quite suddenly without mentioning their functions or significance. For example, in lines 85-90, SNRPN, SNORD116 and SNORD107 have not been introduced yet as PWS genes, which makes the subsequent conclusion confusing that PWS genes function in beta cells.

      5. In several places in the proteomics and transcriptomics sections, there are long lists of genes or proteins with very little context to orient the reader. It is hard for the reader to make much of these lists, and some guidance as to why they are considered worth pointing out or short take-home messages in these sections would be useful.

      6. The description of engineering PWS INS-1 cells is quite hard to follow. Figure 1B is not very intuitive. These sections demanded a lot of work from the reader, much of which required looking at supplementary figures to understand the main Results sections. As many readers may not look at these figures, it would help to make this section more accessible.

      7. The rationale for performing RNA-seq of small RNAs is not provided. This section ends up interrupting the main narrative and feeling tangential.

      8. Since PWS cells have altered levels of many proteins, it is unclear whether the total protein content is a good parameter to use for normalization of insulin secretion.

      9. It would help to see the unnormalized raw data for the insulin secretion experiments. Figure 2 shows pooled data from several cell lines. It would also be helpful to see the data for each line separately in a supplementary figure.

      10. It is not stated how many times proteomic and transcriptomic experiments were replicated. It is stated that each was performed on three control and three PWS cell lines, but it is unclear if each line was tested just once. It seems likely that the data depicted in the figures are pooled from the different lines though this is not stated explicitly. More clarity on these points would be useful. Separate figures for unpooled data of each cell line would also be useful in the Supplement so that variability between lines can be seen.

      11. The study emphasizes the deficits in secreted peptides and ER chaperones but doesn’t provide an explanation for proteins that are increased. A number of neuronal active zone proteins are reported to have increased expression at the mRNA level, but for most it is unclear whether this effect extends to the protein level (only CHGB is labeled in Figure 3). The possible relevance of these changes is also unclear. It is pointed out that many of these proteins may play a role in insulin secretion, but it is unclear why potentially increased levels would lead to the decreased secretion observed in PWS cells unless these factors are negative regulators of insulin secretion (though that seems unlikely given their neuronal functions). Thus, the relevance of these results is unclear.

      12. It would be helpful to explicitly state in the Results how many of the genes with reported changes in RNA levels were validated and were not validated by RT-PCR experiments.

      13. It is unclear whether it is standard practice to use an anti-KDEL antibody in Western blots to specifically identify GRP94 and GRP78, given that this antibody would be expected to recognize many proteins. If so, it would be helpful to cite other articles that validate this method or state the same thing.

      14. Electron microscopy images in Fig S17 show one picture of each cell line, leading to the conclusion that PWS cells have normal ultrastructure. It is unclear what criteria were used to make this apparently subjective conclusion (no quantitative data are presented). Also, there is no mention of how many cells and sections were examined.

      15. Fig S18: confocal cell images are difficult to assess. It would be helpful to zoom in on one cell for better comparison. As with EM data, it is unclear what criteria were used to compare the PWS cells to control and no quantitation is provided, nor is there mention of number of cells examined.

      Reviewed (and signed) by Michael Ailion and Chau Vuong

    1. On 2022-10-06 16:52:55, user Christina Nord wrote:

      How is the choice of what individual-level variable constitutes a "block" made? In Pearl and Schulman (1983) they quote Schulman and Boorman (1983) and state, "Very roughly, the criterion for comembership of two individuals in the same block is that they should bear similar relationships to the remaining members of the population, evaluating “similarity” simultaneously across all types of networks for which data are available." Could age be considered a block, for primates, if sex is? TIA!

    1. On 2022-10-06 13:37:37, user Kirk Overmyer wrote:

      This work has now been published at Plant Communications:

      Fuqiang Cui, Xiaoxue Ye, Xiaoxiao Li, Yifan Yang, Zhubing Hu, Kirk Overmyer, Mikael Brosché, Hong Yu, Jarkko Salojärvi,<br /> Chromosome-level genome assembly of the diploid blueberry Vaccinium darrowii provides insights into its subtropical adaptation and cuticle synthesis,<br /> Plant Communications,<br /> Volume 3, Issue 4,<br /> 2022,<br /> 100307,<br /> ISSN 2590-3462,<br /> https://doi.org/10.1016/j.x....<br /> (https://www.sciencedirect.c...

    1. On 2022-10-06 06:20:06, user Mahendra Gaur wrote:

      This protein from monkeypox shows the 25-40% similarity with human Dual specificity protein phosphatase and Protein tyrosine phosphatase. However, for identification of potential therapeutic drug targets, essential and non-host homologous protein were considered. How this protein can be considered as drug-target against MPXV?

    1. On 2022-10-05 17:10:51, user Pierre Joubert wrote:

      A few concerns have been raised about this manuscript that we wish to address specifically here as well as in a second version of this preprint.

      Concern 1: We report a large number of eccDNA breakpoints in our samples in this manuscript. This large number and diversity of eccDNAs could be the result of contaminating linear DNA. This contaminating linear could call into question our results. In general, our pipeline could be calling other artefacts as eccDNAs, and has not been as thoroughly vetted as other previously published pipelines.

      Our response:<br /> • We have performed a thorough degradation of linear DNA in all our samples which follows the standards set by our colleagues in the field. We also verified this degradation using qPCR.<br /> • We provide two PCR experiments that support our claims of little to no linear DNA contamination in our samples.<br /> • We used split reads and discordant reads to identify eccDNA forming regions. Any remaining linear DNA that was directly sequenced would not result in either of these read variants and would therefore not result in calls by our pipeline. We verified this by running our pipeline on whole genome sequencing data from other studies.<br /> • While the phi29 polymerase prefers to amplify circular DNA, contaminating linear DNA may also be amplified, resulting in multimeric sequences that, when sequenced, result in split reads and therefore eccDNA calls by our pipeline. This is an accepted weakness of this protocol in the field. However, this method is still widely used by our colleagues, pointing to the fact that this weakness is not enough to invalidate the analysis of eccDNA sequencing data. Clearly, the preference of the phi29 polymerase for circular DNA is strong enough to allow meaningful analysis. All of the data we re-analyzed in this study used the phi29 amplification protocol and therefore would have been similarly affected by linear DNA contamination, but these samples did not show the abundance of eccDNAs we saw in M. oryzae.<br /> • We sequenced O. sativa samples in addition to our M. oryzae samples to verify that our lab methods were not the source of our observations in M. oryzae. Our sequenced O. sativa samples appeared very similar to the samples produced by a previous study across many characteristics and looked very different from what we saw in M. oryzae. Specifically, the number of eccDNAs identified in those samples were much smaller than in M. oryzae.<br /> • We compared our called eccDNA forming regions to those called using the same sequencing data by a previous study (Møller et al. 2018) and found that our results were largely similar, and our criteria for eccDNA calling was more stringent than those previously published.<br /> • Other previously published pipelines, like ecc_finder, use peaks of sequencing reads in the genome as the primary basis for identifying eccDNAs in the genome. However, given the large diversity of eccDNAs we found in M. oryzae we were unable to rely on a peak calling based approach for our data, and instead wrote our own pipeline that relies entirely on split-mapping reads and opposite facing read pairs which are strong evidence of eccDNAs, and used in conjunction with peak-calling in other pipelines.<br /> • We also compared our Illumina called eccDNAs to eccDNAs called using PacBio data in the same samples. This data is much easier to interpret as long split reads are clear evidence of eccDNA formation. We found substantial overlap between eccDNAs called using our Illumina data and using our PacBio data.

      Concern 2: We report very little overlap in eccDNA breakpoints between samples, especially among technical replicates, which calls into question the results, especially when it comes to the relevance of genes being found on eccDNAs. This little overlap, combined with potential linear DNA contamination, could point to this study simply over-analyzing noisy data without biological significance. While we explain this lack of overlap by pointing, in part, to under-sequencing, we also claim that this cannot be the reason a subset of genes are never present on eccDNAs in our data which seems contradictory.

      Our response:<br /> • The number of eccDNA forming regions we identified in each of our technical replicates suggests that each sample contained an extremely large number of distinct eccDNA molecules. Our analysis of split read counts per eccDNA showed that the majority of these eccDNA molecules were very likely present at very low copy numbers. Furthermore, replication of individual eccDNA molecules in M. oryzae is likely to be very rare or non-existent.<br /> • We split our technical replicates after DNA extraction. Given the hugely diverse population of low copy number eccDNAs in each of these samples, it is extremely likely that some eccDNAs ended up in one aliquot and not the others. This likely explains the lack of overlap in exact breakpoints between technical replicates.<br /> • We also showed that increasing our sequencing coverage per technical replicate likely would have led to better overlap between technical replicates. However, this likely would not have completely solved the problem given the low copy number of the eccDNAs.<br /> • Given the little overlap in breakpoints between samples, we instead sought to analyze the hotspots and coldspots for eccDNA formation in the genome. We felt that this analysis was meaningful because, while our technical replicates did not share exact breakpoints, they did share many approximate breakpoints (if we allow boundaries to be within 100 bp of each other, for example) pointing to the existence of these hotspots. We compared this overlap in breakpoints to our expected overlap if we had sequenced random segments of the genome in each sample and found no such overlap.<br /> • We chose to focus on these hotspots and coldspots by taking a gene-based perspective and counting how often M. oryzae genes were fully contained within eccDNAs in our data, regardless of the exact breakpoints of the eccDNAs. This helped us identify a group of genes that we never found fully contained within an eccDNA in any of our samples. In this case, we were able to show, through rarefaction and permutation analyses, that we do not expect that increasing our sequencing coverage would have led to the discovery of all of these genes in our samples. We used this analysis as evidence that, while under sequencing may have affected our ability to detect overlap in exact breakpoints between samples, it did not explain this observation.

    1. On 2022-10-05 09:40:05, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This review reflects comments and contributions by Ruchika Bajaj, Pablo Ranea-Robles, Sree Rama Chaitanya Sridhara. Review synthesized by Iratxe Puebla.

      In this preprint Munhoz et al. identify adiponectin as the main effector of the protective effects of sera from lean women and calorie-restricted rats on beta-cell integrity and glucose-stimulated insulin secretion. The study reports that sera from obese humans and rats impairs beta-cell integrity and insulin secretion in the absence of nutrient overload. This observation implies that changes in circulating factors between obese and lean individuals would explain the effects on beta-cell function. The levels of circulating adiponectin in rat sera and human plasma were consistent with the metabolic effects observed in beta-cells. Finally, adding adiponectin to islet cultures that were incubated with sera from obese individuals restored beta-cell integrity and glucose-stimulated insulin secretion. The data are reported in a clear way and the manuscript is well written. Data are consistent with a role of adiponectin in the observed protective effects, but some additional experiments are suggested to clarify this role.

      Major comments

      The paper states that adiponectin is necessary to maintain islet function and integrity. According to the data reported, it is recommended to amend the conclusions to indicate that adiponectin is “sufficient”. A key experiment to demonstrate that adiponectin is necessary would be to deplete the sera of adiponectin and then evaluate the same parameters on beta-cells/islet primary culture. Adiponectin-receptor KO beta-cells would also help to clarify the role of adiponectin in the protective effects of sera. It may also be worth exploring if there were other hormones or other components beyond adiponectin which may have the similar increase in serum samples.

      In Figure 3A/3B, a picture of the corresponding Ponceau used for quantification should be shown next to the adiponectin blot. It would also be helpful to provide the full raw blots as supplementary files to allow for further evaluation, e.g. there seems to be a faint band in 3A above the predicted band which might be cropped in 3B, and there seems to be some difference in protein migration in different samples. Please show as a supplementary figure the full blot for adiponectin with all the samples shown in quantification.

      In the blot in Figure 3B there does not appear to be a clear difference between adiponectin levels in lean vs obese women, which would argue against adiponectin having a beneficial metabolic effect when treating beta-cells. It would be useful to provide some further comments on this possible discrepancy.

      Figure 4E compares different amounts of glucose with either FBS or no serum+adiponectin. Another condition with only no serum + vehicle for adiponectin should be included as a negative control, as shown in Figure 5.

      Minor comments

      Abstract - Please specify in which model (cell/islet culture) the effects are observed.

      Sex-specific differences - The findings in humans are really interesting. However, only male rats are reported in this manuscript. Would there be any difference between male and female CR-rats sera when applied to beta-cells? This experiment would be a great addition to the paper. If the experiment cannot be completed at this time, there should be a mention to this limitation in the discussion.

      Results ‘Fig. 1A shows that the animals on the CR diet gained significantly less weight over the course of 15 weeks, but did not lose mass’ - This text refers to mass, the figure legend says weight, the y axis title on the figure states body mass. Please clarify for consistency.

      Results ‘They were within the same age range (Table 1), but were clearly distinct in body mass indexes (BMI), which separated them into lean and obese groups: lean women (BMI 22 ± 0.9, Fig. 2B)’ - Please clarify the reference to Figure 2B in this fragment as the figure does not report BMI.

      Results ‘these results show a clear modulatory effect of circulating blood factors on metabolic fluxes in β-cells, which are stimulated by factors present in samples from lean and female subjects.’ - It is interesting that this is only observed for females, does this suggest that there may be sex-related factors involved, instead of or in addition to diet status? Could some further comment be added as to why the effect may only be observed in females.

      Please mention in the abstract/discussion that the results are obtained from in vitro experiments using beta-cells and islet primary cultures.

      Conclusions: suggest specifying “in the blood of lean rats” in the fragment that states “... in the blood of lean animals”.

      Methods

      Please report the method of euthanasia.

      ‘experiments were carried out in accordance with the A. C. Camargo Cancer Center Institutional Review Board under registration n°. 3117/21’ - Please clarify whether the study received ethical approval, or was exempt from this requirement at this setting.

      Please report what type of fetal bovine serum (FBS) was used (e.g., charcoal-stripped FBS) as well as the FBS catalog number.

      ‘sera from both groups were collected to be used on cultured INS-1E β-cells, under physiologically relevant conditions’ - Please provide further clarification on the conditions applied.

      ‘adiponectin supplementation in the plasma from obese donors’ - Please report how this was prepared.

      ‘Data were expressed as means ± standard error of the mean (SEM)’ - There is a concern about using SEM to illustrate the distribution of data points, please consider using SD.

    1. On 2022-10-03 20:00:55, user Alexander Alleman wrote:

      Much more experimentation and scholarship are required to make such an extraordinary claim in the title and such statements as "proved the direct consumption of atmospheric N2 by eukaryotic organisms ". My opinion is that this manuscript offers little evidence of these stated results.

      My biggest concern is the contamination of media and agar with residual nitrogen and the lack of multiple replatings to remove residual nitrogen within the cell. Besides the statement on line 23, the authors do not list how many times the yeast strains were replated on nitrogen-free agar to confirm that residual nitrogen is not being used.

      Regular agar tends to have some small amount of nitrogen left over from its purification process. We have experienced that nitrogen-fixing bacteria will not derepress nitrogenase unless on pure agar. We use noble agar to make nitrogen-free plates. But for these experiments where absolute proof is required, I suggest using electrophoresis grade agarose as the thickening agent of plates

      For the media lacking Mo and Fe, was chelating or acid washing of the growth bottles performed to remove Fe and Mo? Does yeast require some Fe for growth?

      Suppl Fig 6 does not seem the yeast grew very well compared to Fig 1. Therefore it seems that Mo or Fe might be required, or there are residual metals or nitrogen in the media.

      A positive control in parallel with an acetylene reductase assay is required for the GC-TCD dinitrogen consumption assays. This will show that known biological nitrogen fixation bacteria act similarly to the yeast in your experiment. Azotobacter vinelandii is a model aerobic diazotroph with lots of experimental data to compare to.

      I am afraid the dinitrogen consumption assay is a very unusual way of determining nitrogen fixation in a normal atmosphere. Most N2 consumption assays are performed in vitro with nitrogenase under an argon atmosphere as one can measure the change in concentration of N2. I am afraid the authors are measuring the change in partial pressure after the consumption of O2 in the vial.

      15N gas enrichment or 15N natural abundance assay must be performed to confirm atmospheric dinitrogen assimilation.

      Ammonia or the total N of the cells is never measured. Therefore, it should be easy to compare the biomass before and after and determine if there is more nitrogen in the bioreactor.

      Why are the GC dinitrogen consumption assays performed on media with added nitrogen? Where are the assays with nitrogen-free media? Biologically why would yeast be fixing large amounts of nitrogen when it's freely available?

      S. cerevisiae is one, if not the most, studied organisms in the history of biology. Is there any evidence in the literature that provides any clues that it is fixing nitrogen under ammonia-supplemented conditions?

      Please provide a standard curve of nitrogen and oxygen for the GC data. How do you calculate the initial N2 concentration in the headspace?

      Suppl Fig 10. The 16s primers seem to not work well on the positive control of E. coli. If a small population of bacteria was symbiotic with the yeast, this gel does not show they are not there.

      The authors have failed to produce any convincing evidence that yeast strains can fix atmospheric nitrogen. While careful experimentation and multiple controls might still prove their hypothesis correct, contamination from nitrogen in the media or a diazotrophic bacteria is most likely allowing the small amount of growth seen on plates. In addition, the GC assay does not have proper controls and is inadequate to show nitrogen fixation.

    1. On 2022-10-03 09:55:42, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

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      This review reflects comments and contributions by Luciana Gallo, Claudia Molina Pelayo, Sónia Gomes Pereira, Asli Sadli. Review synthesized by Iratxe Puebla.

      The preprint examines the meiotic recombination co-factor MND1 and its role in the repair of double-strand breaks (DSBs) in somatic cells. The paper reports that MND1 stimulates DNA repair through homologous recombination (HR) but is not involved in the response to replication-associated DSBs. MND1 localization to DSBs occurs through direct binding to RAD51-coated ssDNA. MND1 loss potentiates the G2 DNA damage checkpoint and the toxicity of IR-induced damage, opening avenues for therapeutic intervention, particularly in HR-proficient tumors.

      The reviewers raised some minor comments and suggestions on the work:

      Results ‘Therefore, we conclude that MND1-HOP2 are ubiquitously expressed proteins’ - we understand that the study looked at the transcript's expression level and not protein levels, consider revising this sentence.

      Figure 1F - Due to the differences in intensity for the loading control, recommend quantifying the normalized level of MND1.

      ‘we used live-cell imaging of RPE1 cells’ - Are these cells p53 KO? In Suppl. Figure 1K, RPE Delpta-p53 cells are used , but the HALO tag was introduced in the normal (WT) RPE cells. Could some clarification be provided for this difference, and report what's the level of MND1 and the effects of its loss in WT RPE cells?

      ‘Analysis of 53BP1 foci formation and resolution in asynchronously growing RPE1 cells revealed that MND1 depletion leads to slower repair and retention of DSBs after IR (Figure 2A, Suppl. Figure 2F&G)’ - While the quantification shown in Figure 2A is explicit, the foci in the raw images displayed in Suppl. Figure 2G appears to be more frequent in the siNT, especially in the last 2 time points. It may be worth making the images bigger and maybe clearer?

      ‘our data show that the role of MND1 in DNA repair is most prominent in G2 phase cells and restricted to repair of two-ended DSBs’ - Can some further context be provided for the last part of this claim. Is this due to the different modes of action of the different drugs used? If so, it would be nice to clarify in the text which drugs induce the two-ended DSBs.

      ‘These data show that MND1 is recruited to sites of DSBs’ - The data shows that there is an increase in MND1 foci, but whether these are or not the sites of DSBs is not clear. Recommend co-staining with a known DSBs marker.

      Methods

      • Haploid genetic screen - Please describe how cells were fixed.
      • Please detail if/what software was used for the Fisher’s exact test.
      • ‘Cells were fixed after 7 days of growth in 80% methanol and stained with 0.2% crystal violet’ - Please report at which temperature and for how long the steps were completed, and provide a reference for the crystal violet reagent.
      • ‘Membranes were blocked in 5% BSA’ - Please report the temperature and duration for this step.
      • Please describe how the propidium iodide staining was performed.
    1. On 2022-10-03 09:44:44, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

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      This review reflects comments and contributions by Vasihvani Ananthanarayanan, Sam Lord, Rinalda Proko, Luciana Gallo, Sónia Gomes Pereira, Asli Sadli, Mugda Sathe, Parijat Sil. Review synthesized by Iratxe Puebla.

      The preprint studies the molecular function of Arl15, a member of the Arf-like GTPases (Arls) group, which has been linked to magnesium homeostasis. The manuscript reports that Arl15 localizes in the Golgi and plasma membrane, including filopodia. The dissociation of Golgi or the expression of Arf1 dominant-negative mutant leads to a mislocalization of Arl15 to the cytosol. Knocking down Arl15 results in reduced filopodial number, altered focal adhesion kinase organization, and enhanced cargo uptake. Arl15 knockdown decreases cell migration and enhances cell spreading and adhesion strength. The findings point to a functional role for Arl15 in the Golgi.

      General comments

      Figures 1,2, 3 - The images display one representative example, recommend providing quantification (e.g. PCC/Manders) across several biological replicates, as well as information on the type of images reported, single slice, max Z projection etc.

      For the bar plots, the paper reports the number of cells as well as the number of times the experiment was repeated, which is excellent. However, it is unclear whether the SEM error bars and p-values were calculated based on the number of repeats (correct) or based on the number of cells (incorrect). Can clarification be provided for this point. See https://doi.org/10.1083/jcb... and https://doi.org/10.1371/jou....

      Throughout the paper there are several references to ‘data not shown’ - please report the data for those items.

      Specific comments

      Introduction, first paragraph - Suggest shortening the paragraph, particularly regarding the description of the different Arls and their relationship/correlation with all diseases.

      ‘These results show that similar to HeLa cells, Arl15-GFP localizes to PM along with filopodia and Golgi in all mammalian cell types’ - Suggest revising the fragment to ‘all the mammalian cell types tested in the study’, to avoid generalizing to every mammalian cell type.

      ‘the localization of Arl15-GFP to PM however remained unchanged as compared to DMSO treated cells (Fig. 2A).’ - Fig 2A only compares mCherry-UtrCH against Arl15-GFP. To support this claim, Arl15-GFP would need to be compared to WGA-AF, as in Figure 1, and their colocalization quantified to confirm that it remained unchanged.

      ‘We treated mCherry-UtrCH expressing HeLa:Arl15-GFP stable cells with a small molecular inhibitor of Rac1 (CAS 1177865-17-6) or Cdc42 (ML141)’ - Please report the concentration of both inhibitors.

      ‘Overall, these studies indicate that neither actin depolymerization nor the key regulatory molecules of filopodia/lamellipodia affect the localization of Arl15 to PM/Golgi.’ - The visualization reports Arl15-GFP v mCherry-UtrCH, to support the claim please check against WGA/GM130 as in Figure 1. Also, Figure 2c Arl15 for FAK inhibitor looks different from the DMSO control, recommend confirmation with WGA staining. Can also some explanation be provided for the fact that the Arl-15 in Figure 2A and 2C DMSO looks quite different from 2B and 2D despite the stable cell line with uniform expression?

      ‘which mislocalized Golgi pool of Arl15 without affecting its PM localization (Fig. 2D)’ - There does not seem to be a marked difference in Arl15-GFP's intracelluar localisation in cells with and without microtubules, and the PM signal appears slightly reduced in the Nocodazole-treated cells. Is it possible to please quantify the localisation?

      Figure 2 -The quality of the images from panels B and D looks very different from those of A and C. Can some clarification be provided, were the same microscope, camera, and settings used?

      Figure 3 - It would be good to mention the role of brefeldin A as an ATPase inhibitor to provide context for why it is being used.

      ‘Surprisingly, Arl15-GFP localized to the cytosol as similar to Arf1-GFP in GM130 dispersed cells that are indicative of brefeldin A treatment in HeLa cells (Fig. 3A).’ - It may be worth clarifying the reference to a surprising result, considering the nocadozol results would this result not be expected? It may also be worth providing some comments about the possible PM localisation difference when Golgi is disrupted with nocadozol vs BrefeldinA/golgicide A. It seems that the PM localisation is also affected in the BrefeldinA/golgicideA treatments.

      Figure 3A ‘Cells were treated with DMSO (as control), brefeldin A or golgicide A for 24 h followed fixation’ - Please comment on the 24-hour period, BFA would be expected to work in minutes timescale: https://rupress.org/jcb/art...

      Supplementary Fig 2A - The blots for Arl15 endogenous are very different between S2A and S2B. Also a 40% knockdown of Arf1 decreases the level of Arl15 by 17%. Can some comments be provided on the significance of this decrease.

      Figure 4 - Is the SEM over 3 independent experiments or total number of cells from the three experiments? What was the criteria used to define a structure as filopodia?

      ‘However, we continued with Arl15V80A,A86L,E122K cytosolic mutant to study the functionality of Arl15 in HeLa cells’ - It may be worth specifying the reason to use the V80A,A86L,E122K form instead of the more simple V80A alone?

      ‘To test whether the mislocalized Cav-2 and STX6 are targeted to lysosomes in siArl15 cells’ - Please comment on why colocalisation with lysotracker or lamp1 positive structures was not examined instead of treating the cells with bafilomycin A1? Note that bafilomycin A1 also inhibits retrograde membrane traffic at the ER–Golgi boundary: https://www.molbiolcell.org...

      Figure 5 - Please clarify whether the quantification of images was done on images taken from the same microscope? Also, suggest arranging the figures in a way that the quantification and images are not so far apart from each other.

      Figure 5D - It is unclear how the western blot of EGFR showing total EGFR is indicative of what happened to its trafficking, this appears to be in contrast to the increase in transferrin uptake data. Recommend normalizing the transferrin uptake to surface transferrin levels as one can have higher uptake simply because there is more transferrin receptor instead of actual changes in trafficking rates.

      ‘Nevertheless, the reason for the partial loss of STX6 and caveolin-2 localization from Golgi in the ASAP1/2 knockdown cells requires investigation’ - Text earlier mentioned "However, we have not observed any significant change in Arl15 and its dependent cargo (caveolin-2 and STX6) localization to Golgi in siASAP1/2 cells " and there does not appear to be any difference in the siASAP1 or siASAP2 on Fig 6. However, in Figure S3 there is a slight reduction in the intensity. Can this be clarified?

      Methods ‘Post chase, cells were washed with 1X PBS, fixed with 3% formaldehyde…’ - Please report for how long and at which temperature the fixation step was completed.

    1. On 2022-10-02 18:32:50, user Carrie Partch wrote:

      The labs of Seth Rubin and Carrie Partch at UCSC jointly reviewed this preprint. This manuscript examines how the two transactivation domains (TADs) of β-catenin interact with several domains of CBP/p300 to potentially control transcriptional activation. A combination of biochemistry, NMR, and ITC studies narrow down several binding sites for TAZ1 and TAZ2 domains. Overall, the manuscript is well organized and provides new details on these interactions that may play a role in β-catenin function. We have some suggestions that might enhance the clarity of the work below. Thanks for an enjoyable read!<br /> Figure 1: <br /> • The schematics do not depict consistent widths/domain lengths and CBP/p300 is missing some domains, including one implicated in β-catenin binding (Emami et al. 2004, PNAS).<br /> • It would be helpful if your schematic also illustrated all of the constructs used in the study and these names were used consistently.<br /> • If space allows, a simplified diagram of the pathway described in the text could be helpful.

      Figure 2:<br /> • It would be helpful to add dashed line for predicted secondary structure cut-off at 0.3 in panel B.<br /> • It would enhance the rigor of the work to show expression levels for the constructs used in panel C.

      Figure 3:<br /> • Labeling the MW markers, light and heavy IgG chains, and proteins (does the 666-781 fragment overlap with the light chain?) in panel A, along with the input, would make this figure easier to read.<br /> • The results of the pulldown seem pretty straightforward so quantification from n = 2 experiments seems unnecessary. If you do so, please define what ‘relative’ means in the quantification and make sure that your statistical methodologies are appropriate for this low n.

      Figure 4:<br /> • There is some concern that the ITC data might be overfit to a two-site binding model without more information on the fits. Additional rationale or evidence that justifies use of the two-site model would also be welcome.

      Figures 5 & 7:<br /> • It might be easier to interpret the binding interface if you used surface representation for the TAZ domains instead of ribbon.

      Figure 8:<br /> • It was a bit confusing to show an analysis of the NMR data from the construct used in Fig. S3 in panel A, but then use data in panels B – E from a larger construct. We struggled a bit throughout the manuscript to match domain names and fragments (see Fig. 1 comment above) with the data.<br /> • It could be helpful to conclude with a cartoon or schematic that illustrates what was learned here.

      Other:<br /> • Discussion text mentions a possible role for phosphorylation of serines; if citations for this exist, please add them or perhaps broaden this to a possible role for PTMs in general.<br /> • Consistent labeling of ITC data throughout the paper would help clarify which constructs were used in each experiment.

    1. On 2022-10-02 17:56:40, user Carrie Partch wrote:

      The labs of Seth Rubin and Carrie Partch at UCSC jointly reviewed this preprint. This manuscript examines how the two transactivation domains (TADs) of β-catenin interact with several domains of CBP/p300 to potentially control transcriptional activation. A combination of biochemistry, NMR, and ITC studies narrow down several binding sites for TAZ1 and TAZ2 domains. Overall, the manuscript is well organized and provides new details on these interactions that may play a role in β-catenin function. We have some suggestions that might enhance the clarity of the work below. Thanks for an enjoyable read!<br /> Figure 1: <br /> • The schematics do not depict consistent widths/domain lengths and CBP/p300 is missing some domains, including one implicated in β-catenin binding (Emami et al. 2004, PNAS).<br /> • It would be helpful if your schematic also illustrated all of the constructs used in the study and these names were used consistently.<br /> • If space allows, a simplified diagram of the pathway described in the text could be helpful.

      Figure 2:<br /> • It would be helpful to add dashed line for predicted secondary structure cut-off at 0.3 in panel B.<br /> • It would enhance the rigor of the work to show expression levels for the constructs used in panel C.

      Figure 3:<br /> • Labeling the MW markers, light and heavy IgG chains, and proteins (does the 666-781 fragment overlap with the light chain?) in panel A, along with the input, would make this figure easier to read.<br /> • The results of the pulldown seem pretty straightforward so quantification from n = 2 experiments seems unnecessary. If you do so, please define what ‘relative’ means in the quantification and make sure that your statistical methodologies are appropriate for this low n.

      Figure 4:<br /> • There is some concern that the ITC data might be overfit to a two-site binding model without more information on the fits. Additional rationale or evidence that justifies use of the two-site model would also be welcome.

      Figures 5 & 7:<br /> • It might be easier to interpret the binding interface if you used surface representation for the TAZ domains instead of ribbon.

      Figure 8:<br /> • It was a bit confusing to show an analysis of the NMR data from the construct used in Fig. S3 in panel A, but then use data in panels B – E from a larger construct. We struggled a bit throughout the manuscript to match domain names and fragments (see Fig. 1 comment above) with the data.<br /> • It could be helpful to conclude with a cartoon or schematic that illustrates what was learned here.

      Other:<br /> • Discussion text mentions a possible role for phosphorylation of serines; if citations for this exist, please add them or perhaps broaden this to a possible role for PTMs in general.<br /> • Consistent labeling of ITC data throughout the paper would help clarify which fragments of b-catenin were used in each experiment.

    1. On 2022-10-01 15:44:36, user Phillip Gordon-Weeks wrote:

      This study is an elegant confirmation of the well-established fact that growth cones need dynamic microtubules to execute a turn while providing new optogenetic tools to interrogate +TIP functions. The demonstration that EB3 cannot substitute for EB1 in maintaining microtubule growth perhaps should not come as a great surprise since EB3 occupies a more proximal position than EB1 at the microtubule plus end as first shown in cell lines (Dart et al; 2017, Oncogene 36, 4111-4123 https://doi.org/10.1038/onc... Roth et al., 2019, J. Cell Sci., 132, 1–18. https://doi.org/10.1242/jcs... and, more recently, in cortical neurons (Poobalsingam et al., 2021 https://doi.org/10.1111/jnc....

    1. On 2022-09-30 22:29:46, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      Small things: S6, S7,... There's a typo in multiple figures, "Addative". The sign of Figure 4D and E might be reversed. In Methods "rfc" is supposed to be "rcf". The author's point could be strengthened by mentioning the RMSE of the trio models in the text (rather than just in the Figure), as was done for the pair models. Figure 3A is a little confusing regarding the relationship between all the bar graphs-- could be useful to add an "=" before the 4th bar graph in each series so show what each model predicts the outcome to be.

    2. On 2022-09-30 22:29:26, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      Figure 2D displays nearly bimodal distribution of effect on focal by pairs of affecting species. Could be nice to explore if this difference is consistently (across RP, BI, CF) due to the same groups of affecting species.

    3. On 2022-09-30 22:29:17, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      The authors should clarify if growth rate is included in "metabolic profile" in the list of things that correlated with effect size across focal species.

    4. On 2022-09-30 22:29:03, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      It is know that the effect of a drug, and therefore perhaps a bacteria, can be non-linear with concentration, and that dose-additivity (Bliss) predicts drug combinations better than effect-additivity (DOI: 10.1038/s41564-018-0252-1). How might this impact the results? Of course, it can hard to half the concentration of the bacteria in the setup to create the Bliss model (although maybe something with lower glucose might help?) Might the fastest grower in each pair/trio reach the highest concentration, limit the growth of other species, and therefore provide an effect quite similar to itself in isolation? How would a "fastest grower" model compare to a "strongest" model? The authors note that growth rate did not correlate with effect size for "some" focal species, but might such a model work for the remaining focal species?

    5. On 2022-09-30 22:28:44, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      The discussion should mention a limitation of this method is its inability to detect interactions that depend on spatial structure (it is known that higher order interactions can depend on spatial structure DOI: 10.1038/nature14485) to fast growers, and to only single carbon source (DOI: 10.1038/s41559-020-1099-4). It should also be noted that any interactions that affects flourescence rather than growth would be misinterpreted.

    6. On 2022-09-30 22:28:34, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      The selection of 30 strains chosen for the trio experiment seems biased towards negative interactions, for which the strongest model is particularly good in the doublet model. The authors might consider repeating this with a subset biased towards mixed and/or positive interaction to get a more complete picture.

    7. On 2022-09-30 22:28:26, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      Please report what method is used for adjusting optical density and what is the potential range in values. Were all cells in stationary phase before renormalizing?

    8. On 2022-09-30 22:28:15, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      The additive interaction model is particularly bad for interactions of negative-negative interaction pairs. Is there a "floor" below which negative interactions cannot be measured or realized? This seems to be the case in Figure 3B: all observed effects are -4 or higher. While the authors explored adding a ceiling (carrying capacity) to the model, a floor should be explored as well and might improve the accuracy of the additive and mean models.

    9. On 2022-09-30 22:27:27, user MIT Microbiome Club wrote:

      Focal species were transformed to constitutively express a fluorescent protein - is this on a plasmid or integrated in the chromosome?

    1. On 2022-09-28 19:26:59, user Lori O'Brien wrote:

      Interesting findings, great to see this translated to mammalian TFs. This was originally shown for the Drosophila TF bicoid in 2000, that the ARM was important for RNA-binding and it was similar to HIV proteins (https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.... The authors do not cite this though, it would be great to see that study recognized.

    1. On 2022-09-27 23:04:37, user anonymous wrote:

      Throughout: it is confusing to shift between common and scientific names. Both Marine Iguana and Amblyrhynchus are fine but switching between them in the discussion is confusing.

    2. On 2022-09-27 23:04:14, user anonymous wrote:

      lines 58-59: It might be helpful for some readers if you identify the fossil reptiles you're referring to. Several of them are "house-hold" names (like Mosasaurs) so will be useful to some readers not as knowledgeable about such groups.

    3. On 2022-09-27 23:03:56, user anonymous wrote:

      Lines 54-56: It's not clear to me what you mean here: does "reptile" refer to crown-group Reptilia or a more "evolutionary" definition of reptiles that includes stem amniotes and synapsids as well? It is not clear to me how a modern clade could have played a role in the origin of other tetrapod clades.

    1. On 2022-09-27 22:37:19, user hunterk wrote:

      Line 142-144-I had a quick thought about the use of brain tissue for signs of a stress response due to elevational changes. I might expect to see those changes more in the fat body because that's often cited as the main hub of the immune and stress response. If it feels useful, it might be good to describe how the brain response could directly affect behavior more than a gene expression response in the fat body. (Apologies if you do describe this, I might have missed it.) In general, I'm also curious how these gene expression patterns might relate to aging in these bees-do they show similar signatures of aging (perhaps as defined by DEGs related to the Ti-J-LiFE pathway https://royalsocietypublish...

    1. On 2022-09-27 21:32:48, user Charles Warden wrote:

      Hi,

      Thank you for posting this preprint.

      I receive an error message when I try to access the following link:

      https://chenlabgccri.shinya...

      Is there something in the path that should be changed and/or something on the server that is needed to activate the link?

      Thank you again!

      Sincerely,<br /> Charles

    1. On 2022-09-27 10:22:51, user Matthew Herron wrote:

      Very cool stuff. If I may make one minor suggestion, I'd have liked a short description of the selection protocol earlier in the manuscript. Fig. 2 kind of shows it, but a sentence or two in the Intro would add to the context for the Results (this is assuming the current order with the Methods at the end).

    1. On 2022-09-26 15:10:46, user anonym wrote:

      There are some mistakes in the influent column in the tables. The values for S_h2 and S_ch4 should be 1.0E-... instead of 10E-..., and the influent value of S_H+ should be 0.0 instead of 1.0

    1. On 2022-09-26 13:27:22, user Gauthier wrote:

      Where can I find the supplementary data including the species list? They are not supposed to be submitted to biorxiv along with the main text ?

    1. On 2022-09-25 19:03:27, user smd555 smd555 wrote:

      Good day, dear authors!<br /> I have a question: do these newly described hunter-gatherers from the Middle Don show any genetical similarity to Sredniy Stog samples from Ukraine (I4110 and I5882)?

      Best regards

    1. On 2022-09-25 03:03:28, user Peter Uetz wrote:

      I would say explicitly what the yellow cavity is in Fig. 7 (I guess it's the foregut, as shown in other figures), but it's a good idea to make this explicit for non-experts. I was wondering already when I looked at the Liem paper before I found your paper.

    1. On 2022-09-23 12:58:38, user Laura Rossini wrote:

      Pleased to announce that the final updated and peer-reviewed version of this manuscript was published in Frontiers in Plant Science. Laura Rossini

      Bretani G, Shaaf S, Tondelli A, Cattivelli L, Delbono S, Waugh R, Thomas W, Russell J, Bull H, Igartua E, Casas AM, Gracia P, Rossi R, Schulman AH and Rossini L (2022) Multi-environment genome-wide association mapping of culm morphology traits in barley. <br /> Front. Plant Sci. 13:926277. doi: 10.3389/fpls.2022.926277

      https://doi.org/10.3389/fpl...

    1. On 2022-09-23 05:03:03, user Bela Toth wrote:

      Hi Michi,<br /> impressive work, although I slightly disagree with you on the basic assumption of evolution. Nevertheless, I have a technical issue with this manuscript: The number of mRNA transcripts contigs that you show for the different genes in Figure 5 are not well defined. You forget that genes can produce several transcripts by the process of alternative splicing. Therefore labeling the x-axis with the gene names is a bit misleading.

      Take care!

    1. On 2022-09-22 18:44:51, user john wallingford wrote:

      The FAK-based ciliary adhesion complex is an enigmatic structure in motile ciliated cells, and this paper is a welcome contribution for both the technical advance (new fixation methods) and new cellular insight (links to the apical microtubule network).

    1. On 2022-09-22 18:25:45, user john wallingford wrote:

      The paper also has me thinking about patterns of cytoplasmic mechanics. Microheology shows that cytoplasmic stiffness differs in different regions of migrating cells. How do such patterns relate to the propagation of forces at the cortex/membrane?

    2. On 2022-09-22 18:23:46, user john wallingford wrote:

      Using an elegant new technique, this paper reveals new insights in the role of the plasma membrane and the actin cortex in the propagation of forces across single cells. For this developmental biologist, the paper provides an exciting new paradigm to explore further in multi-cellular tissues, in particular as we seek to understand recent findings of mechanical heterogeneities in individual cell-cell junctions during morphogenesis (e.g. Huebner, 2021: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih... Cavanaugh, 2022: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih...

    3. On 2022-09-22 18:20:07, user Robert J. Huebner wrote:

      Belly et al investigate membrane tension transmission across individual cells. They find that membrane tension is strongly propagated in response to cellular protrusions or pulling on membranes and the actin cortex. However, pulling on the membrane alone does not stimulate tension propagation. One exciting conclusion is that the cell cortex opposes tension propagation when force is applied to the membrane alone. It would be interesting if the authors proposed a mechanism for how the cortex resists tension propagation when force is only applied to the membrane.

    4. On 2022-09-22 18:12:57, user Shinuo Weng wrote:

      Beautiful work! I'm curious why the actin flow upon actin pulling is in the opposite direction to the membrane tension propagation. Thank you!

    5. On 2022-09-22 18:07:02, user Austin T. Baldwin wrote:

      De Belly et al describe different dynamics of membrane tension propagation dependent on whether they perturb the cell membrane or cortical actin. Adhesive linkers between the membrane and the cortex are essential in their model of how this tension is propagated, but what these linkers are or could be is poorly explained. More discussion on the possible identities of these linkers and subsequent perturbation of these linkers (if possible) would enhance an already-fascinating set of experiments.

    1. On 2022-09-22 16:24:14, user PSauer wrote:

      This bioRxiv manuscript, combined with its companion manuscript "Structures of the Cyanobacterial Phycobilisome", has now been puplished in Nature doi: 10.1038/s41586-022-05156-4

    1. On 2022-09-21 03:31:40, user Daniel E. Weeks wrote:

      What a fun and interesting paper! It even applies Student's t test to Student's data!

      I am interested in your variable selection (Table S2) with the disparate results between the different methods.

      One minor suggestion would be to merge Table S3 into Table S2, as it would be nice to be able to see these metrics at the same time as we're seeing which variables were selected.

      Regarding variable selection, I really like this discussion of variable selection issues:

      Heinze G, Wallisch C, Dunkler D. Variable selection – A review and recommendations for the practicing statistician. Biometrical Journal. 2018;60(3):431–449. DOI: https://doi.org/10.1002/bim...

      I like their recommendation to "assess selection stability and model uncertainty", which is what we ended up doing in this recent paper:

      Heinsberg LW, Carlson JC, Pomer A, Cade BE, Naseri T, Reupena MS, Weeks DE, McGarvey ST, Redline S, Hawley NL. Correlates of daytime sleepiness and insomnia among adults in Samoa. Sleep Epidemiology. 2022 Dec;2:100042. DOI: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.s...

      We had originally wanted to use a lasso where we forced in a few variables that we thought had to be in all models, but couldn't get existing software to work in our hands to enable proper post-selection inference. When no variables are forced in, proper post-selection inference after variable selection via lasso can be done using these approaches:

      1. Taylor J, Tibshirani R. Post-Selection Inference for ℓ1-Penalized Likelihood Models. Can J Stat. 2018 Mar;46(1):41–61. PMID: 30127543 PMCID: PMC6097808 DOI: https://doi.org/10.1002/cjs...

      2. Lee JD, Sun DL, Sun Y, Taylor JE. Exact post-selection inference, with application to the lasso. The Annals of Statistics. Institute of Mathematical Statistics; 2016 Jun;44(3):907–927. DOI: https://doi.org/10.1214/15-...

    1. On 2022-09-19 14:09:03, user Gregory Way wrote:

      We reviewed this preprint as a part of Arcadia's preprint review initiative: https://twitter.com/Arcadia...

      Peidli et al. present a data resource (for single-cell perturbations) and apply energy distance (e-distance) to quantify differences in perturbations. For the data resource, the authors focus on curating single-cell RNAseq and ATACseq measurements perturbed with CRISPR, drug treatments, and a few other perturbation types. The authors curate a total of 44 datasets. Overall, the paper is very well written with a sound logical flow. However, many elements of the paper seem incomplete. We provide several specific comments regarding our views on how the paper could improve. We thank the authors for posting their preprint and code publicly.

      Our two primary comments are:

      1. The data are not harmonized from reads. Instead, the authors process (in most cases) already processed read count by gene matrices. The authors also use different versions of scanpy to process different datasets. This is definitely still valuable, but the authors should state these facts earlier and probably decrease the use of “harmonization”. Additionally, there is no evaluation to determine the effect or benefit of this read count harmonization. Calculating e-distance before and after harmonization across datasets might be helpful.

      2. E-distance is not sufficiently benchmarked. The math and intuition are described marvelously, but how does E-distance behave across datasets and common perturbations? How does subsampling read depth impact E-distance calculations? How does drug dose impact e-distance? How does sequencing technology impact e-distance? How does modifying the distance metric within the E-distance calculation impact calculations?

      We also have several general comments on different aspects of the paper and github repository. We hope that the authors can benefit from our deep dive on the paper. Thanks again!

      Introduction

      • Definition of single-cell perturbation data (SCPD)

      Overall, this subsection is more of a “methods/techniques overview” of how to collect SCPD rather than defining what SCPD actually is. What is output from these techniques?<br /> - The authors should define these data in more detail.<br /> - The authors should also further define the techniques as it is helpful to have a general idea of why the data collected from the techniques are “good” and not just “more data are better”.

      Motivation for distance measure of high-dimensional profiles:

      • The authors claim that E-distance can identify strong or weak perturbations. It’s unclear what a strong or weak perturbation is. I was unable to find this information from a quick google search so I think they should define that here (not found in methods either).

      Motivation for unifying datasets

      • Their motivation only seems to be “it doesn’t exist yet because it’s difficult to do” so therefore we should do it. What will/could come of the integrated and standardized datasets? What would we hope to find?

      Web Interface

      • The authors claim, “a web interface for data access, analysis and visualization is available at scperturb.org.” There is data access on that site, but analysis and visualization appear to be absent using Brave and Safari browsers.
      • It seems that one would require a computer with enough memory (500G) to run scPerturb to reproduce the analysis. The authors present solutions for how to overcome these requirements, but it did not seem that they attempted to solve them.
      • The authors state that there are Quality Control plots for each dataset on the website but we could not find.

      Results<br /> - The authors should briefly describe the methods underlying the statement “dense low-dimensional embeddings of the original data (see Methods for details)” in a bit more detail upon introduction.<br /> - It is surprising to me that there are so many cells with 2 perturbations (proportionally to a single perturbation) (sup fig 1). Is this because of an overweighting of a specific study?<br /> - It might be helpful to add targeted sequencing depth to table 1 per study, also helpful to add the sequencing platforms used.<br /> - Data source trust: Zenodo sources appear to be auxiliary data downloads as opposed to direct sources. How might other researchers assume trust in the sources? Are the included metadata implied or entrusted to the authors?<br /> - Are the UMAPs in Figure 3E the same UMAP space or are the spaces fit independently in both panels?<br /> - Need to provide a bit more rationale for why the authors chose E-distance over the other options.<br /> - Did they calculate E-distance for all perturbations? Sup Fig 3 shows this, so maybe? It was not obvious where to find the measurements.<br /> - There are only 11 drug perturbations in common. This is a very interesting observation! How many genes are perturbed in common datasets?

      Methods<br /> - For the scATAC-Seq data, it’s not clear to me if they perform LSI jointly across all samples or not. This would cause non-interoperability across datasets if not done jointly since each LSI dimension may mean something different in each dataset. In addition, they provide peaks x counts matrix -- which is dataset specific. I would suggest aligning jointly using a uniform set of peaks -- Running MACS2 on all datasets would be a huge benefit to the community.<br /> - How do the different versions of scanpy impact data processing? Typically, harmonized data are generated with a single pipeline.<br /> - When performing subsampling to fit PCA, did the authors transform the full data subsequently? In other words, does the PCA fitting step impact cell count for e-distance calculation?<br /> - What distance measure is used in the E-distance calculation for ||x_i - x_J||? L2? For perturbations, comparing L2 to other metrics would help benchmark the method.

      Code/Github<br /> - It seems to us a good idea to spend time improving the existing model / code at https://github.com/theislab.... The authors should justify why they are not contributing to existing open source code.<br /> - I can’t find the script “fragments2outputs.R” in their github. From their paper: “All features described in the overview above were computed with ArchR functions. For details inspect the “fragments2outputs.R” script in our code repository (see Data Availability).”

      Data Repo comments:<br /> - Manual data testing for reproducibility within https://github.com/sanderla... (one must perform the steps, the repo doesn’t provide or outline within the code itself)<br /> - Suggests using “mamba” but does not provide instructions on how to install mamba <br /> - Would suggest a small description for each folder in the directory (README) explaining its contents <br /> - There’s no usage example on how to download the data or use the program<br /> - Would be best to have a notebook (or bash script) that describes the entire workflow. <br /> - The notebooks are not sequentially executed and there are no execution instructions<br /> - What environment (OS/hardware/configuration/etc) is required to run the code?<br /> - Is notebook (.ipynb) output expected within committed code? (should these have been scrubbed with nbconvert/jupytext?)

      Data Availability<br /> - Based on this section, their website only contains the first three bullet points (e.g scRNA-seq data, scATAC-seq data, and details about the datasets). We could not easily find the last three bullet points (Quality control plots for each dataset, Filtering, e.g., by readout or type of perturbation, Commands for direct file download using the Unix command curl)

      This review was produced jointly at The University of Colorado by:

      Gregory P. Way, PhD<br /> Natalie Davidson, PhD<br /> Erik Serrano<br /> Parker Hicks<br /> Jenna Tomkinson<br /> Dave Bunten

    1. On 2022-09-19 07:58:28, user zhljude wrote:

      Hi Thomas Burger:

      This article is a nice work. However, the low resolution of the Figures makes it confused to understand the content of the article. Could you provide clearer Figures ?

      Best regards<br /> Jude

    1. On 2022-09-18 23:37:46, user Sebastian wrote:

      Hi, cool paper!<br /> I had a bit of trouble understanding one thing though: how do you prevent or even correct for false positives in this procedure? Could you measure FPR?

      It seems to me that the narrow selection of literature (enriched in associations with Depression/AD), the relatively long reasoning chains, and the paths through hub nodes such as "Nervous System Process" can very easily result in hits that "biologically make sense"; what prevents this process from just returning each and every entity that is connected to one of the parent nodes of Depression and AD? You even encourage hierarchical chains, so the chance for parent hub nodes is almost 1 I would assume.

      Generally, what is the reasoning for allowing these chains to cross through nodes with such low specificity?

    1. On 2022-09-16 12:07:25, user EM wrote:

      This is a very important paper. It indicates that classifying and understanding the crystal polymorphisms that occur during protein/enzyme reactions with its ligand in crystals can lead to a detailed understanding of protein reaction mechanisms. This paper will become increasingly important with the development of the 4th generation synchrotron radiation facilities.

    1. On 2022-09-15 15:36:04, user Foster Birnbaum wrote:

      The difference between Figures 4 and 5 is striking. In Figure 4, UniRep/BO is clearly superior to the other versions, whereas in Figure 5, even a random sequence performs well until higher iterations and there is never a clear difference between UniRep/BO and the other methods. You highlight that this task is very specific and is convex as explanations for why UniRep/BO is not clearly better, but I am still wondering why the performance for any method is not much better than random. Also, you also state that the sequence length is fixed at thirteen residues. In part A of the results, you mention that an advantage of BO is that the sequence length can change during optimization. Have you experimented with letting BO run with a variable length sequence on the unknown target matching problem? In addition, can you perform the AlphaFold task using the two ablated methods? I think including the ablation results for all three tasks would be helpful.

      I think Figure 1 could be made clearer if the sequences and labels proposed from the logits went directly to the train step, instead of being directed first to a separate shape. This would make Figure 1 have a more triangular structure, with the logits at the top, the UniRep vector in the bottom left, and the prediction plot in the bottom right. I think this could help make the flow of information clearer.

    2. On 2022-09-15 01:35:35, user Sebastian Swanson wrote:

      When designing peptide binders, how does bayesian optimization compare to alphafold hallucination as far as runtime? It seems like the main benefit of BO is that it could require less forward passes through the network to find a binder with high pLDDT, but since extra time is required to embed the sequence with uniref, train the MLPs and find the gradient, it’s not clear how significant the speed up will be. Regarding the alphafold predictions of your design and the patgiri peptide, it seems like loop 1 is collapsed into the protein domain, as opposed to wrapping around the peptide, as one might expect it to given the Ras-SOS complex (PDB ID: 1NVW). Do you think it’s possible that alphafold is struggling to model the binding of the patgiri peptide due to the flexibility of the loops, and that is responsible for the abnormally low pLDDT? Have you considered using alternative methods, like openfold (which has different weights) or Rosetta PIPER-FlexPepDock to test whether this peptide is predicted to bind?

    1. On 2022-09-15 07:03:40, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This review reflects comments and contributions by Joe Biggane, Luciana Gallo, Rachel Lau, Sam Lord, Dipika Mishra, Claudia Molina. The comments were synthesized by Iratxe Puebla.

      The study reports two two Bcl-2 family proteins, BNIP5 and Bcl-G, which inhibit Bak-dependent apoptosis through engagement of MODE 2 inhibition. The BH3 domains of these proteins act as selective Bak activators, while not inhibiting anti-apoptotic proteins, leading to increased binding of activated Bak to Mcl-1, which prevents apoptosis.

      The reviewers raised a couple of questions about the methodology and several other suggestions for the paper, outlined below:

      Methodology

      Throughout the study various BH3 mimetics are used, but the combinations in which they are used and/or the doses employed could be more clearly reported. For example, in Figure 1E and 1F ABT-737 and S63845 are used at 1 μM. Then, in Figure 1H, A-331852 is substituted for ABT-737 in combination with S63845 and the concentration is not reported. In Figure 1H, ABT-737 and S63845 are used again, but this time at a concentration of 2 μM each. Other concentrations are used in Figures 2, 3, and 5. There seems to be a dose-response assay in Figure 3B, but it is used for a specific use case. It would be beneficial to report all combinations and doses employed, and the rationale for them in the main text, to allow readers to fully interpret the data presented.

      In various figures, there is a concern about the statistical approach to calculate p-values based on multiple measurements or cells within each sample. The t-test and ANOVA assume that each measurement is independent, and multiple nuclei within the same sample are not independent. Recommend either not reporting p-values or averaging together the values from each biological replicate to calculate the p-value using those sample-level means. For more information, see https://doi.org/10.1371/jou... and https://doi.org/10.1083/jcb...

      Specific comments

      Introduction ‘The two MOMP effectors Bcl-2 associated x (Bax) and Bcl-2 antagonist killer (Bak) are inactive in resting cells as these cells exhibit low levels of proapoptotic BH3-only proteins (e.g. BIM)....and some are additionally able to activate Bax and Bak (sensitizers and direct activators, e.g. BIM)’ - Recommend revising the fragment for clarity, adding references to support the statements and possibly an introductory figure to help visualize the proteins involved.

      Introduction, last paragraph ‘We found that two Bcl-2 proteins, Bcl-2 interacting protein 5 (BNIP5) and Bcl-G, act as selective inhibitors of Bak-dependent but not Bax-dependent apoptosis…’ - The fragment is unclear, BNIP5 and Bcl-G are first reported as Bak-inhibitors, then activators and back to inhibitors. Does this mean to describe protein-protein interaction and changes in conformation?

      Figure 1

      • Recommend using a different color scheme for Figure 1E to assist visual interpretation of the results, in particular consider using a color-blind friendly color palette.
      • colony formation (F)’ - The text later on refers to ‘clonogenic survival’, would it be possible to clarify in the legend or text what is being assessed, i.e. recovery assay, clonogenic survival or colony formation?
      • Figure 1G - Please clarify whether 2 uM of each are used in this experiment.
      • We transduced PC9 lung cancer or A375 melanoma cells…’ - It is nice to see that different cell lines were assessed to address any cell line-specific effects. Would be interesting to see if this effect occurs in normal cell lines and not just cancer cell lines.

      Figure 2 - The inline color-coded legends are useful when bars are displayed but in the figure several bars are close to zero, consider an alternative method to label the bars.

      Results ‘...suggesting posttranscriptional regulation of Bak levels by BNIP5’ - Maybe large proteome databases of multiple cell lines (e.g CCLE) can be datamined to determine the correlation between BNIP and Bak expression?

      Figure 3B, 3D and 3E - Please clarify the concentrations used for each treatment in the figure legend.

      Methods, Cell viability and cell death measurements - The study assessed cell death or cell viability with either live cell imaging, or in fixed cells, can the methodology for this be elaborated upon? Also, propidium iodide staining is used in several sections of the results, recommend adding information about this under the Methods section.

      Methods - There are several missing references in the Methods section.

      Suggest adding Supplemental Figure 6 as a graphical abstract.

    1. On 2022-09-15 06:44:56, user Iratxe Puebla wrote:

      Review coordinated via ASAPbio’s crowd preprint review

      This review reflects comments and contributions by Ashley Albright, Luciana Gallo, Sam Lord, Dipika Mishra, Claudia Molina, Arthur Molines, Sónia Gomes Pereira, Parijat Sil, Rinalda Proko. The comments were synthesized by Richa Arya.

      The reviewers like the motivation behind the study as a lot is still unknown about the impact of fluorescent tags on various mechanisms in biology. The work is impactful. However we outline below some major questions and several minor points:

      1. Related to the data analysis:

      The findings are valuable however the analyses may not be sufficiently sensitive to pick up morphological changes. Maybe other more sensitive approaches for measuring interference in the biology of these neurons could also be tested, like bulk growth rates, a stimulus added to the culture medium or other?

      Some of the phenotypes (see Figure 1D and Figure 3D) are relatively subtle and the manuscript relies heavily on statistics to support the claims. Independent of the statistics, the differences are not striking by eye examination. Perhaps more data is necessary to bolster some of the reported claims.

      As continuation to the expression analysis, it is important to estimate the expression levels of the actin binding probes used, in order to rule out the fact that some of the observed differences between LifeACT-GFP and AC-GFP may be due to discrepancies in the extent of overexpression of these probes. It would greatly add to the study to include, at least for some of the phenotypes, whether the measured parameters respond to the low versus high expression levels of the same probe.

      1. Related to the transient expression:

      Figure 1: The transient expression method used in the manuscript shows a lot of variability in expression levels, between cells, and between replicates.

      Expression levels could confound the interpretation. One of the constructs could be expressed more or less than the other, resulting in stronger or weaker phenotypes, not because it is more or less toxic than the other per se but because its expression level is different. It would be relevant to "normalize" for the expression level of each construct. Another way to circumvent this, at least partially, would be to substantially increase the number of cells analyzed, which would allow for a range of expression values to be represented in the data.

      1. Related to FRAP analysis Last paragraph result 1: ‘and depends only on their affinity to F-actin, that is similar in AC-GFP and LifeAct-GFP (Figure 1A, Figure 1B, Supplementary Video 1). In addition, our results suggest that even without photomanipulation, minor changes in actin reorganization cannot be revealed when using actin-binding probes…’ - Based on the images reported, it is not possible to establish how much of the signal is due to the population of probes being bound to actin versus the population that is free floating in the cytoplasm. The recovery could be due to the diffusion of free-floating probes and therefore give no information about affinity for actin. EGFP alone was used as a baseline for cytoplasmic diffusion, the slower recovery from the EGFP-actin implies that some portion of the EGFP-actin is incorporated in filaments. Recommend replacing "Affinity" with "relative ability to incorporate into filaments." A possibility to address the issue of size-based diffusion in cytoplasm is to complete FRAP measurements in latrunculin-treated cells that depolymerize most of the actin filaments. This will enable to set a baseline for each of the probes here (which will now probably be either free or G-actin bound) and provide a complement to the Jasplakinolide treatment.

      In addition, our results suggest that even without photomanipulation, minor changes in actin reorganization cannot be revealed when using actin-binding probes.’ - There has been only two actin binding probes tested, both with similar turnover as measured in FRAP in their own assay. It might be worth making a comparison in this experiment with a very strong actin binding probe as control, such as Utrophin.

      1. Figure 2: Theat measurement shown is not a very good proxy for filopodia motility.

      The study used an intensity-weighted center of mass. This means that the center of mass moves, not only because the shape of the filopodia changes but also because the signal intensity changes. In other words, the shape of a filopodia could be constant (no motility) and yet have a center of mass that moves because the mCherry signal fluctuates inside it. This could be avoided if the center of mass of the shape is used, not weighed by intensity. This is especially a concern because the signal from the cytoplasmic mCherry is used for the analysis. If a folipodia locally thickens in the Z-direction, the cytoplasmic signal will increase locally, displacing the intensity weighted center of mass even if the 2D contour has not changed. Using a membrane signal would provide a better alternative. It would also be possible to make use of the resource Filotracker, that tracks the length of the filopodia as a measure of filopodia dynamics. Find the paper and the resource here: https://www.molbiolcell.org...

      1. Result 2 last para, ‘We found no significant difference in center of mass displacement between actin probe expressing cells and EGFP expressing control filopodia (Figure 2B)…’. This section needs more clarity and evidence to conclude that the probes do not alter filopodia dynamics. Maybe filopodia growth rate or some additional measurements? Failing to find significance does not equate to finding evidence of absence. It may be that this one parameter is not sufficiently sensitive. Maybe this possible uncertainty should be discussed in the last sentence of the paragraph, to note that the data highlights the possibility that the tested actin labeling proteins do not interfere.

      Minor Comments

      Introduction: ‘Actin is a key cytoskeletal element in mammalian cells involved in many cellular mechanisms’. mammalian cells can be replaced with eukaryotic cells. It would also be nice to mention some of the cellular mechanisms involved such as cell division, and migration, among others.

      Introduction: it would be good to describe the various phenotypes observed in previous studies when actin was labeled or when actin-binding proteins were used. It would give readers context about the level of toxicity and what phenotypes to expect.

      Introduction last paragraph: ‘…and to exclude certain actin structures from labeling (Munsie et al., 2009)’: one more reference could be added for this statement: Sanders et al., 2013 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.go...

      Figure1: It would be nice to have grayscale images of the actin channel in addition to the overlay.

      Figure 1 B, C: For all of the FRAP recovery curves, recommend providing insets, zooming in on the first 30 to 60 sec of the recovery, as that's when most of the recovery happens. The last 120 sec of the plots show a "flat" plateau.

      Figure 1D, in the fluorescence recovery plateau %."In addition, our results suggest that even without photo manipulation, minor changes in actin reorganization cannot be revealed when using actin-binding probes." This claim relies on the p-values. In looking at Figure 1D, left panel, EGFP-actin (orange) dots there appears to be an outlier. Independent of the outlier, the collection of dots does not appear that different by eye, recommend providing additional data to support this claim.

      Result 1: ‘In Jasplakinolide-treated neurons, as expected, we observed an almost immediate recovery of fluorescence in the EGFP expressing group, whereas the EGFP-actin signal did not recover…’. The fact that the EGFP-actin signal did not recover is surprising. Normally not all of the actin present in the protrusion is incorporated into filaments, some of it is floating around freely. Hence, some of the signal should be recovering, even after stabilization of the actin filament, simply due to diffusion. For example, the EGFP signal recovers in presence of Jasp. due to diffusion of the free-floating probe. Recommend some discussion about the absence of recovery for the EGFP-actin.

      Figure 2A: ‘Red lines show the movement track of intensity weighted center of mass..’. The red dots for the center of mass cluster and overlap, recommend color coding the dots so that it is clear visually what the displacement of the center of mass was and showing an overlay of the contours used for the analysis. Additionally, in the Supplementary Video 2 it looks like EGFP and EGFP-actin centers of mass are more displaced than AC-GFP or LifeAct-GFP. It would be good to clarify if this is exactly the same example as shown in the figure.

      Figure 2B: ‘Average intensity-weighted center of mass displacement over 60s time periods…’ Why was only a 60 sec interval considered when there are images up to 120 sec and the video goes until 180 sec? Additionally, please specify if these are the first 60 sec of imaging.

      Result 3: It is known that expression levels of actin binding probes can alter actin structures and their dynamics. It would have been great to do the following: (a) estimate the levels of expressed lifeact-GFP/AC-GFP and see how they compare with each other, (b) note or look for phenotypic differences as a function of the expression levels of these probes. It might be worth plotting the spine morphometric data in categories of low, medium and high expression levels of the two actin binding probes as well as EGFP-Actin (since this can affect nucleation/treadmilling etc at very high expression levels). Just as the identity of the actin binding probe being used is an important consideration in studies of actin dynamics, so is the expression levels of these probes.

      Result 3: use p-values to compare different cell lines, the n used in the statistics should be the number of samples, not the number of spines.

      Result 3: ‘This is like due to the known high background fluorescence level of LifeAct, originating from its affinity to G-actin (Melak, Plessner and Grosse, 2017)…’. Actin chromobody is also known to bind G actin. Is there a significant difference in G Actin binding affinity for LifeACT versus AC that can account for this explanation?

      Figure 3C ‘Expression of EGFP-actin or LifeAct-GFP for 24 hours did not influence total protrusion density’ - Please indicate whether these morphological analyses were done blinded as to what the cells were expressing, or any steps taken to reduce bias.

      Figure 3D: There is a similar concern here as for Figure 1D. Here the number of cells is higher, but the density of the points is not shown. By eye the box plots do not look very different, violin plots may be better for these data so that the distribution of data points is more apparent.

      Figure 3F: it would be useful to have a representative image of each (stubby, thin, and mushroom) class, to help non-experts better visualize what's being analyzed .

      Result 4, paragraph 1, ‘..whether dendritic arborization is altered within 24 h after the transfection of the tested probes…’ All the experiments were performed 24h after transfection, would it be worth testing different time intervals (e.g. 12-16h and/or 48h)?

      Result 4C,D E: suggest adding quantification to enhance the data.

      Materials and Methods section, ‘Live cell imaging and FRAP experiments, post-bleach in every case (Supplementary Video 2)…’. Should this read video 1.

      Materials and Methods section, ‘Live cell imaging and FRAP experiments,Then, cumulative displacement curves were calculated, and the 60 sec points were compared and statistically analysed (Supplementary Video 1)…’. Should this read video 2.

      Materials and Methods section: There are several custom-made plugins used in this work. It is good practice to make these available to the community by depositing them in a repository (e.g. GitHub, zenodo).

    1. On 2022-09-14 23:03:56, user Alex wrote:

      The new localization predictor built based largely on this dataset, PB-Chlamy, will be an invaluable tool for the community and may inspire hypothesis-based questions. We were curious if the authors could leverage the combination of protein localization and sequence information to (1) predict sub-organellar localizations within the chloroplast (e.g. stroma vs. pyrenoid etc.) and (2) correlate protein physicochemical properties (based on primary sequence) with localization.

    2. On 2022-09-14 23:03:47, user Alex wrote:

      Using immunofluorescence to directly detect PRM1, PHB2, and SNE1 validated localizations from the author’s over expression reporters to the ER/nucleus, cytosol, and nucleoplasm. For proteins localized to novel punctate structures in the chloroplast, localizing a subset of these proteins at endogenous expression levels via epitope tagging and immunofluorescence would rule out the formation of these punctate structures as a consequence of overexpression, especially for puncta that exhibit a robust mobile fraction by FRAP.

    3. On 2022-09-14 23:03:37, user Alex wrote:

      It was really impressive to see how visualizing localization though microscopy revealed new structures within the chloroplast and the manual effort it took to classify localization patterns. More information on how localization patterns were classified in the methods and results section would be helpful. Currently, we understand that an individual z-stack was independently analyzed with two people with disagreements resulting in ambiguous/no assignment. But more information on how the number of classes was determined is needed, especially since many novel punctate structures in the chloroplast were discovered. We also wondered whether an automated method of clustering image profiles would yield similar localization assignments.

    4. On 2022-09-14 23:03:28, user Alex wrote:

      The ~3,000 overexpression vectors cloned and ~1,000 strains generated will be a valuable resource and the accompanying website will also facilitate access and use of these tools. It was unclear whether localization studies were attempted with all ~3,000 vectors or just the ~1,000 studied. If only 3,000 were attempted, but only 1,000 successfully localized it would be useful for the authors to comment on why the ~2,000 could not be localized (fitness defects as a consequence of tagging, post-transcriptional regulation, whether a subset were localized with other methods/approaches, etc…) and suggest potential alternative approaches.

    1. On 2022-09-14 22:40:22, user Sky wrote:

      Currently, the collision rate is based on some assumptions about the efficiency of transfection. I was wondering if a closer approximation of the collision rate could be inferred from the rate of non-self collisions available in the single cell seq data.

    2. On 2022-09-14 20:55:58, user Hannah wrote:

      Really interesting integration of single-cell and MPRA techniques. More information about how these CRS's were chosen would be helpful.

      I would be curious to see how these promoter activity changes you observe in the HEK293 cells and K562 cells also carry over to changes in the expression of the genes that these promoters control.

      For the cell cycle analyses, have you looked at what transcription factors might be driving these changes in promoter activity?

    1. On 2022-09-14 22:22:18, user Ohainle Lab wrote:

      How is hexameric capsid binding to host factors facilitating viral infection? What is the model and at what stage of viral replication would this be important? Assembly? Post-assembly? Would there be a way to test this?

    2. On 2022-09-14 22:22:05, user Ohainle Lab wrote:

      Very nice data in Figure 3: we like how you made predictions from the structures and can introduce mutations to toggle capsid protein conformations to go in both (hexamer or pentamer) directions

    1. On 2022-09-14 20:58:14, user CK wrote:

      It's mentioned that Replacing Cs with Ch results in a 133-fold difference in the ratio of favorable (hippurate and cinnamoylglycine) to unfavorable (phenylacetylglycine) Phe metabolites. Given that it is known Phenylacetylglycine plays a causative role in cardiovascular disease, did you see any phenotypic differences in ΔCh vs ΔCs mice in terms of cardiovascular disease/mouse growth?

    2. On 2022-09-14 20:56:20, user Chris wrote:

      Great paper!

      Would it be possible to feed mice with ∆Ch∆Cs communtities with 7alpha-dehydroxylation to see if the metabolite alone is sufficient to prevent the bacterial diversity changes?

      Would it also be possible to transform 7a-dehydroxylation synthesis genes into a different bacterium other than Ch or Cs to see if that would rescue ∆Ch∆Cs?

      Additionally, were any obvious phenotypes noticed in ∆Ch∆Cs colonized mice?

    1. On 2022-09-14 14:47:30, user Grimm wrote:

      It's not the topic of the paper but I'd love to see the STRUCTURE results for k < 6. Your reference data are another mosaic stone in revising the species concept of western Eurasian beeches.

      Also, I wonder, given the fit of your reference data (Fig. 1) with studies that focussed on western Eurasian beeches and the underestimating current species concept (cited Denk 1999a,b; Gömöry & Paule 2010; Cardoni et al. 2022), whether one should still use "Oriental beech" in the singular. I'd write "Oriental beeches" to stress the fact it's more than one biological entity. Especially given that you can identify introduced hybrids between Greater Caucasus Oriental beeches (i.e. F. orientalis s.str.) and European beech (F. sylvatica s.str.) and not just between Oriental (F. sylvatica subsp. orientalis) and European beech (F. sylvatica subsp. sylvatica); and in the light of of this being indeed a showcase for the genetic diversity in the Oriental beeches, which, indeed, surpass that in the European beech, in all data assembled so far and highlighted in this study.

      Regarding the aspect of level of diversity (especially with regard to F. sylvatica and detection-capacity for [introduced] hybrids), adding the STRUCTURE profiles with k < 6 (it says, you run with k = [1,10]) as supplementary information could be an additional selling point for highlighting the different Oriental beeches as not a single but several, possibly also climatically non-identical, and differentially related to the European beech, genetic resources for the European beech forests and with respect to climate change and AGF potential (which may differ between the Oriental beech spp.)

    1. On 2022-09-13 22:06:06, user Hae Kyung Im wrote:

      In this paper, the authors attribute the wrong null hypothesis to the standard TWAS approach. The issue seems to stem from a confusion between the true parameter (a number) with its estimator (a continuous random variable). They state that the null hypothesis is that the estimator = 0, which is an event of probability 0.

      The better way to think about the error in the genetic predictors of gene expression is not to change the null hypothesis but in terms of an error in variables problem. Under reasonable assumptions of independence between reference and target sets, error in variables leads to attenuation and not inflation. Many papers have addressed this problem.

      More details

    1. On 2022-09-13 21:46:19, user Damien F. Meyer wrote:

      Acknowledgements <br /> The authors gratefully acknowledge Géraldine Bossard and Valérie Rodrigues for technical assistance in the development of ELISA assays.

      Funding information<br /> The authors acknowledge the financial support from Franco-Slovak bilateral project PHC Stephanik 2014 n°31798XB and from European Union in the framework of the European Regional Development Fund (ERDF), n° 2015-FED-186, MALIN project “Surveillance, diagnosis, control and impact of infectious diseases of humans, animals and plants in tropical islands”.

      Conflict of interest disclosure<br /> The authors declare they have no conflict of interest relating to the content of this article.

      Author contributions<br /> VP and DFM conceived the original idea. NV and MB acquired the funding. VP, EB, IM, OG, CP and DFM performed. VP, EB, IM, CP and DFM analysed data. VP and DFM drafted the manuscript. All authors read and approved the final manuscript.

      Data availability<br /> Data are available on Zenodo public repository at the following address https://zenodo.org/record/5...