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  1. Mar 2018
    1. These amendments would tighten, in two ways, the threshold which the Minister of the Crown has to reach in order to be able to exercise the powers. They would tighten it by providing, first, that the powers could be used only where it was “necessary” to use them, not where it was considered “appropriate”. Secondly, they would give an objective test for whether the use of the powers was necessary, rather than the subjective test of whether the Minister considered it appropriate.
    1. oes not connect with my artifact at all but it provides the information on why are we losing the battle to the aids epidemic. I wo

      how can this be?

    2. JANAC i

      what is this?

    3. n Africa are a major social empowerment that influences the communities a

      What kind of evidence exists in this source?

    4. on. I pursue this source because I was curious about what did sports brand position and their say about the problem since this epidemic were affecting their Sponsor athlete. This information could


    5.   I wouldn’t find this article useful unless I mention the impact that Tom Waddell made in the history and what when on after his death. It would be more useful if were talking about the future of the Gay community or before him what actions did the gay c


    6. h.D. in history from Yale, where his training focused on twentieth-century U.S. politics and culture.He has worked in book publishing since 2011 and presented his research to audiences at Harvard, Yale, Cornell, and meetings of the Organization of American History and the American Society of Church History.

      Try to follow the prescribed 5-sentence requirements

    1. that is being made is composed of a different material which makes them heavy and difficult to transport

      Is this pure description?

    2. common aid quilt dimensions. This blo

      You need an introduction, I think. What will this page do?

    1. ill provide a clear understanding

      Are you sure? Why do you think so?

    2. also die out.” (Conca) 

      Good use of quotation here.

    3. There no solution to force people to go our way and we have to leave it up to that personal ethics and morals

      What does this mean?

    4. hoice to take action to either follow the directions or they choose to ignore and keep continuing their habits

      Doesn't this assume they understand what's being communicated?

    5. Projects. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2014. Print.

      Why only provide citation for one text?

  2. Feb 2018
    1. Culture and History

      Love the integration of images. Good. The next step for you is to 1) give attribution to these images. Whose are they? where do they come from? and 2) how do they affect your post?

    2. “Stand By Me (1961)”

      Great presence of multimodality! Now I'm wondering how this sonic information affects the content of this post?

    3. Hartman’s provides an analysis that each time we classify an object we interpret the significance of the object by embracing the four procedures such as intellectual, physical, emotional, and cultural

      What the thesis of the introduction? The answer to this question will be slightly different from a one-sentence summary of what can be found in the text. What is the main idea?

  3. Jan 2018
    1. hopsticks: Their Origin and Signific

      Can you provide a link to this source? Would you want to or not? Why?

    2. For instance, the object that represents my traditional Chinese Culture is an object widely used to eat which is a white pair of chopsticks

      Great example here!!!! This would make a really interesting extra post in which you analyze a set of chop sticks via the Prownian analysis format.

    3. Then,

      I caution you against such a rigid characterization of the process. It's not as laboratory-step like as you make it seem here... Know what I mean?

    4. e better one sees, the subtler the connections one finds oneself able to make.

      Nice quotation. What page?

    5. On the contrary, this creates a conflict because Haltman’s mentions that sometimes we require a lot of time and patience on the researching and observing the object that it takes a long period to time to discover the importance and meaning.

      Hmmm... The conflict is between what and what?

    6. This explains that it is crucial to ponder a physical and a psychological connection that we have in common with the object.

      I think I know what you mean here... You're talking about identifying the connections you're making personally with the object. Right? Good.

    7. On the other hand, from my point of view will it provide the capability to explain and connect with the object why is it important to us without providing a negative opinion or a biased response on the audience

      Interesting. Is there any such thing, really, as "objective" and "unbiased"? Aren't the realms of emotion and culture, if not the others, too, realms of the subjective?

    8. For example: how it affects our daily lives, the polarities (smooth, hot/cold, light /dark, straight/ Curve…Etc.)  and surroundings that the object is in, life and death, and fear.

      This is an example of what exactly?

    9. detailed accurate methods

      "accurate"? How do you know?

    10. As a result, he provided the reader a snippet of how to identify these objects and values from the reading and the models.

      What do you mean in this sentence?

    11. This metho

      Be careful of "This"... To what are you referring here? There's another this in the sentence too...

    12. In h

      Where did you get this image? And I wonder why you chose it. What does it contribute to the post?

    13. that

      What object are you talking about? Think about an audience who just happens upon this webpage. You'll need to introduce what the writing is about before you dive in.