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  1. Sep 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use a gambling task with momentary mood ratings from Rutledge et al. and compare computational models of choice and mood to identify markers of decisional and affective impairments underlying risk-prone behavior in adolescents with suicidal thoughts and behaviors (STB). The results show that adolescents with STB show enhanced gambling behavior (choosing the gamble rather than the sure amount), and this is driven by a bias towards the largest possible win rather than insensitivity to possible losses. Moreover, this group shows a diminished effect of receiving a certain reward (in the non-gambling trials) on mood. The results were replicated in an undifferentiated online sample where participants were divided into groups with or without STB based on their self-report of suicidal ideation on one question in the Beck Depression Inventory self-report instrument. The authors suggest, therefore, that adolescents with decreased sensitivity to certain rewards may need to be monitored more closely for STB due to their increased propensity to take risky decisions aimed at (expected) gains (such as relief from an unbearable situation through suicide), regardless of the potential losses.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study uses a previously validated task design and replicates previously found results through well-explained model-free and model-based analyses.

      (2) Sampling choice is optimal, with adolescents at high risk; an ideal cohort to target early preventative diagnoses and treatments for suicide.

      (3) Replication of the results in an online cohort increases confidence in the findings.

      (4) The models considered for comparison are thorough and well-motivated. The chosen models allow for teasing apart which decision and mood sensitivity parameters relate to risky decision-making across groups based on their hypotheses.

      (5) Novel finding of mood (in)sensitivity to non-risky rewards and its relationship with risk behavior in STB.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The sample size of 25 for the S- group was justified based on previous studies (lines 181-183); however, all three papers cited mention that their sample was low powered as a study limitation.

      (2) Modeling in the mediation analysis focused on predicting risk behavior in this task from the model-derived bias for gains and suicidal symptom scores. However, the prediction of clinical interest is of suicidal behaviors from task parameters/behavior - as a psychiatrist or psychologist, I would want to use this task to potentially determine who is at higher risk of attempting suicide and therefore needs to be more closely watched rather than the other way around (predicting behavior in the task from their symptom profile). Unfortunately, the analyses presented do not show that this prediction can be made using the current task. I was left wondering: is there a correlation between beta_gain and STB? It is also important to test for the same relationships between task parameters and behavior in the healthy control group, or to clarify that the recommendations for potential clinical relevance of these findings apply exclusively to people with a diagnosis of depression or anxiety disorder. Indeed, in line 672, the authors claim their results provide "computational markers for general suicidal tendency among adolescents", but this was not shown here, as there were no models predicting STB within patient groups or across patients and healthy controls.

      (3) The FDR correction for multiple comparisons mentioned briefly in lines 536-538 was not clear. Which analyses were included in the FDR correction? In particular, did the correlations between gambling rate and BSI-C/BSI-W survive such correction? Were there other correlations tested here (e.g., with the TAI score or ERQ-R and ERQ-S) that should be corrected for? Did the mediation model survive FDR correction? Was there a correction for other mediation models (e.g., with BSI-W as a predictor), or was this specific model hypothesized and pre-registered, and therefore no other models were considered? Did the differences in beta_gain across groups survive FDR when including comparisons of all other parameters across groups? Because the results were replicated in the online dataset, it is ok if they did not survive FDR in the patient dataset, but it is important to be clear about this in presenting the findings in the patient dataset.

      (4) There is a lack of explicit mention when replication analyses differ from the analyses in the patient sample. For instance, the mediation model is different in the two samples: in the patient sample, it is only tested in S+ and S- groups, but not in healthy controls, and the model relates a dimensional measure of suicidal symptoms to gambling in the task, whereas in the online sample, the model includes all participants (including those who are presumably equivalent to healthy controls) and the predictor is a binary measure of S+ versus S- rather than the response to item 9 in the BDI. Indeed, some results did not replicate at all and this needs to be emphasized more as the lack of replication can be interpreted not only as "the link between mood sensitivity to CR and gambling behavior may be specifically observable in suicidal patients" (lines 582-585) - it may also be that this link is not truly there, and without a replication it needs to be interpreted with caution.

      (5) In interpreting their results, the authors use terms such as "motivation" (line 594) or "risk attitude" (line 606) that are not clear. In particular, how was risk attitude operationalized in this task? Is a bias for risky rewards not indicative of risk attitude? I ask because the claim is that "we did not observe a difference in risk attitude per se between STB and controls". However, it seems that participants with STB chose the risky option more often, so why is there no difference in risk attitude between the groups?

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This article addresses a very pertinent question: what are the computational mechanisms underlying risky behaviour in patients who have attempted suicide? In particular, it is impressive how the authors find a broad behavioural effect whose mechanisms they can then explain and refine through computational modeling. This work is important because, currently, beyond previous suicide attempts, there has been a lack of predictive measures. This study is the first step towards that: understanding the cognition on a group level. This is before being able to include it in future predictive studies (based on the cross-sectional data, this study by itself cannot assess the predictive validity of the measure).

      Strengths:

      (1) Large sample size.

      (2) Replication of their own findings.

      (3) Well-controlled task with measures of behaviour and mood + precise and well-validated computational modeling.

      Weaknesses:

      I can't really see any major weakness, but I have a few questions:

      (1) I can see from the parameter recovery that the parameters are very well identified. Is it surprising that this is the case, given how many parameters there are for 90 trials? Could the authors show cross-correlations? I.e., make a correlation matrix with all real parameters and all fitted parameters to show that not only the diagonal (i.e., same data is the scatter plots in S3) are high, but that the off-diagonals are low.

      (2) Could the authors clarify the result in Figure 2B of a correlation between gambling rate and suicidal ideation score, is that a different result than they had before with the group main effect? I.e., is your analysis like this: gambling rate ~ suicide ideation + group assignment? (or a partial correlation)? I'm asking because BSI-C is also different between the groups. [same comment for later analyses, e.g. on approach parameter].

      (3) The authors correlate the impact of certain rewards on mood with the % gambling variable. Could there not be a more direct analysis by including mood directly in the choice model?

      (4) In the large online sample, you split all participants into S+ and S-. I would have imagined that instead, you would do analyses that control for other clinical traits. Or, for example, you have in the S- group only participants who also have high depression scores, but low suicide items.

    1. Document de Briefing : "Savoir ou périr" et les défis de l'éducation en France

      Source: Extraits de "Rentrée scolaire : savoir ou réussite, pourquoi l’école tourne à l’envers (avec Bernard Lahire)"

      Ce document de briefing synthétise les thèmes principaux, les idées essentielles et les faits importants tirés de l'entretien avec le sociologue Bernard Lahire, en se concentrant sur son ouvrage "Savoir ou périr" et ses réflexions sur le système éducatif français.

      1. Le Savoir comme Condition de Survie Collective

      Bernard Lahire insiste sur une idée fondamentale : le savoir n'est pas une simple affaire culturelle ou académique, mais une condition intrinsèque à la survie collective de l'humanité.

      Il souligne que depuis l'aube de l'humanité, la transmission des expériences et des connaissances a été vitale pour l'adaptation des nouveaux venus et le développement des sociétés.

      Citation clé : "on se rend pas compte que le savoir depuis le début de l'expérience de l'humanité euh c'est une des conditions de la survie collective"

      Exemple historique : Lahire cite l'échec d'une expédition écossaise en Antarctique en 1845, dont aucun membre n'a survécu faute de savoirs adaptés à l'environnement hostile, contrairement aux Inuits qui y prospéraient.

      Application contemporaine : La crise du coronavirus a mis en lumière l'urgence de la recherche et du savoir. Les investissements dans la recherche sur les coronavirus 10-15 ans auparavant, qui avaient été coupés, auraient pu accélérer la réponse.

      "la recherche est directement euh concernée par les processus d'adaptation et que si on n'a pas ces savoirs et ben on est mal parti collectivement en fait".

      Conséquence : L'oubli de cette vérité fondamentale nous rend "hors sol" et vulnérables aux défis futurs.

      2. Le Système Scolaire "Tourne à l'Envers" : L'Obsession de l'Évaluation

      Malgré l'importance vitale du savoir, Lahire dénonce un paradoxe français (et plus largement institutionnel) : l'école, censée être un lieu d'apprentissage, est devenue une institution "pilotée par l'évaluation", ce qui la fait "tourner à l'envers".

      Dérive institutionnelle : Les institutions, créées avec un objectif précis, finissent souvent par dévier de leur mission initiale. L'école en est un exemple où l'évaluation a pris le pas sur l'apprentissage.

      Bâchotage et surcharge des programmes : Lahire critique le "bâchotage" et la "surcharge des programmes", une problématique déjà soulevée par Marc Bloch en 1943. "on remplace le goût de la connaissance par le goût du succès".

      Témoignages de grands scientifiques : Il s'appuie sur les expériences de personnalités comme Einstein, qui était "dégoûté de la physique" à force d'ingurgiter des choses par cœur, ou Grothendieck, qui critiquait ses collègues "trop dociles" et manquant d'ambition intellectuelle profonde.

      La peur de la faute : Une spécificité française est la "peur de la faute", qui inhibe l'apprentissage des langues étrangères et contredit l'esprit scientifique, où l'erreur est une étape vers la découverte.

      "on a tous peur de la faute je sais pas où on l'a attrapé mais évidemment que c'est à l'école que ça s'est passé".

      Effets négatifs de la compétition et du stress : La peur et la compétition sont contre-productives pour l'apprentissage et la recherche.

      Lahire témoigne de sa propre "boule au ventre" pendant sa scolarité et cite Laurent Lafforgue, lauréat de la médaille Fields, qui n'a presque rien publié pendant 10 ans, soulignant l'importance de laisser du temps aux chercheurs sans pression évaluative excessive.

      La nécessité du retour, pas uniquement de l'évaluation : Les élèves ont besoin de retours, d'encouragements et de guidance (comme des tuteurs pour une plante), mais pas d'une évaluation constante et stressante.

      3. Les Inégalités Sociales et la Reproduction : "Les enfants ne vivent pas dans le même monde"

      Au-delà des problèmes pédagogiques, Lahire met en lumière l'impact profond des inégalités sociales et de la reproduction sociale sur les parcours scolaires, en s'appuyant sur son ouvrage "Enfance de classe".

      Différences d'expériences dès le plus jeune âge : L'idée que "les enfants vivent au même moment dans la même société mais pas dans le même monde" illustre que, dès 5-6 ans, des enfants de milieux différents ont déjà des passés, des interactions et des horizons de possibles radicalement distincts.

      "l'horizon n'est pas du tout le même les possibilités ne sont pas les mêmes".

      Le mythe du "quand on veut on peut" : Lahire réfute fermement cette idée, la qualifiant de "régression scientifique".

      Il souligne le "poids très très lourd des déterminismes sociaux d'origine".

      Altricialité secondaire et dépendance aux adultes : La longue période de dépendance des enfants vis-à-vis des adultes (altricialité secondaire) a des conséquences majeures.

      Les caractéristiques des parents (capitaux culturels, intérêt pour la pédagogie) influencent fortement la capacité des enfants à s'adapter à l'école.

      Le rêve républicain de l'égalité : L'égalité n'est pas une réalité, mais un "horizon".

      Les sociétés sont inégalitaires, mais l'État et les collectivités ont la responsabilité d'infléchir ces processus en offrant des opportunités culturelles et éducatives à ceux qui en sont le plus éloignés.

      L'importance de l'ouverture culturelle : Les activités culturelles (théâtre, musées) sont cruciales pour "donner une chance" aux enfants de milieux défavorisés de s'approprier ces codes et de lutter contre l'autocensure. Sans cela, de nombreux élèves se projettent vers des "études courtes" faute de "background culturel".

      4. Le Parcours Personnel de Bernard Lahire et la Critique Politique

      Lahire, lui-même issu d'un "milieu ouvrier", a souffert du système scolaire mais a réussi grâce à un ensemble de facteurs (soutien familial, enseignants, chance), réfutant l'idée de sa seule "agentivité".

      Réussite non individuelle : Sa réussite est le produit de "toutes les relations que [j'ai] eues avec toutes ces personnes et ces institutions".

      Critique de la politique à court terme : Lahire exprime sa "tristesse" et son "dégoût" face à une politique perçue comme "décevante", "hors sol" et focalisée sur des querelles partisanes, plutôt que sur les défis à long terme (comme les enjeux climatiques ou éducatifs) qui nécessitent une vision sur "10000 ans".

      Critique des décideurs ignorants des réalités éducatives : Il déplore la nomination de ministres de l'Éducation qui "connaissent très mal leur dossier", citant l'exemple d'Élisabeth Borne affirmant que le projet professionnel devait s'exprimer dès la maternelle.

      5. Conséquences Budgétaires et Menaces sur l'Éducation

      La situation est aggravée par les contraintes budgétaires, qui menacent directement les initiatives visant à lutter contre les inégalités.

      Impact des coupes budgétaires : Les plans d'économie prévus pourraient entraîner une baisse des dotations pour les départements, impactant directement les collèges REP et les activités culturelles essentielles pour ces élèves. "il y a peut-être des activités culturelles qui vont devoir être annulées notamment pour louer un car".

      En résumé, Bernard Lahire alerte sur un système éducatif qui a perdu de vue l'essence du savoir, obsédé par l'évaluation et incapable de compenser efficacement les inégalités sociales profondes, le tout aggravé par des décisions politiques court-termistes et un manque de compréhension des enjeux éducatifs.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors addressed the concerns adequately. The three remaining concerns are:

      (1) The use of one-way ANOVA is not well justified.

      The statement about statistical test in “Statistical analysis” section is as follows in the revised manuscript, “Data sets were tested for normality and direct comparisons between two groups were made using two-tailed Student’s t test (t test, for normally distributed data) as indicated. To evaluate statistical significance of three or more groups of samples, one-way ANOVA analysis with a Tukey test was used or repeated measures ANOVA analysis with a Tukey test was used in behavior assays. Statistical parameters are reported in the figures and the corresponding legends”.

      We used a one-way ANOVA for the data about one categorical independent variable and one quantitative dependent variable. The independent variable should have at least three different groups or categories. And we conducted repeated measures ANOVA analysis for the data about behavioral tests according to the suggestion by Reviewer #1 (Point 18) in revised manuscript.

      (2) The use of superplots to show culture to culture variability would make it more transparent.

      Thanks for the nice suggestion. While superplots could more transparently show culture to culture variability, it is difficult to add more colors or even shades to the scatterplots in the current form, which have already been color coded for multiple groups of samples. The scatterplots we used effectively illustrate the variability across all collected data and do not affect the conclusions of our study. Therefore, we prefer not to change the way of data presentation in the revised manuscript.

      (3) Change EEN1 in Figure 8B to EndoA1.

      Thanks a lot for the sharp eye. Corrected.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Specific comments:

      The authors have made a substantial effort to improve their manuscript. A number of issues, related to numbers of observations mentioned by the reviewers, are clarified in the revised manuscript. The authors have also clarified some of the other questions from the reviewers. The long list of issues brought up by the reviewers and the many corrections needed still raise questions about data quality in this manuscript.

      In response to my comments (Point 2), the added experiment with PSD95.FingR and GPN.FingR in cultured neurons (Fig. S5A-D) is a good addition; the in vivo data using FingRs in Figure S3 look less convincing however. In response to my Point 5, the authors have added a cell-free binding assay (Figure 5I). This is a useful addition, but to convincingly make the point of interaction between Gephyrin and EndoA1, more rigorous biophysical quantitation of binding is needed. The legend in Figure 5I states that 4 independent experiments were performed, but the graph only shows 3 dots. This needs to be corrected.

      We sincerely appreciate your comments and apologize for any concerns raised. As suggested (Point 2), we made many efforts to visualize endogenous postsynaptic proteins using recombinant probes. However, due to much lower expression of GPN.FingR compared with PSD95.FingR in P21 brain slices following viral infection (Figure S3), we were unable to obtain better imaging results. To strengthen our data and conclusions, we additionally performed experiments with PSD95.FingR and GPN.FingR in cultured neurons (Fig. S5A-D) in the revised manuscript.

      Regarding the biophysical quantification of gephyrin–endophilin A1 binding, we do not have the equipment for this type of experiment (surface plasmon resonance or isothermal titration calorimetry). Instead, we performed a pull-down assay as an alternative to confirm their interaction (Figure 5I). We also apologize for the error in the number of independent experiments stated in the figure legend and have corrected it in the revised manuscript.

    1. AbstractThe common house sparrow, Passer domesticus is a small bird belonging to the family Passeridae. Here, we provide high-quality whole genome sequence data along with assembly for the house sparrow. The final genome assembly was assembled using a Shovill/SPAdes/MASURCA/BUSCO workflow, consisting of contigs spanning 268193 bases and coalescing around a 922 MB sized reference genome. We employed rigorous statistical thresholds to check the coverage, as the Passer genome showed considerable similarity to Gallus gallus (chicken) and Taeniopygia guttata (Zebra finch) genomes, also providing a functional annotation. This new annotated genome assembly will be a valuable resource as a reference for comparative and population genomic analyses of passerine, avian, and vertebrate evolution.Significance Avian evolution has been of great interest in the context of extinction. Annotating the genomes such as passerines would be of significant interest as we could understand the behavior/foraging traits and further explore their evolutionary landscape. In this work, we provide a full genome sequence of Indian house sparrow, viz. Passer domesticus which will serve as a useful resource in understanding the adaptability, evolution, geography, allee effects and circadian rhythms.

      This work has been published in GigaByte Journal under a CC-BY 4.0 license (https://doi.org/10.46471/gigabyte.161), and has published the reviews under the same license.

      Reviewer 1. Gang Wang

      Is the language of sufficient quality? Yes. There are many details in the article, such as citation format, spelling, etc. [Supplementary Table 3a, 3b, 3c) → (Supplementary Table 3a, 3b, 3c) The citation format of the article also needs to be adjusted according to the journal requirements.

      Is there sufficient detail in the methods and data-processing steps to allow reproduction? No. A previous reviewer mentioned that RagTag could be used to improve the quality of genome assembly. I suggest you seriously consider this.

      Is there sufficient information for others to reuse this dataset or integrate it with other data? No

      Overall Comments: The article is logically clear and the analysis is complete. The description of both sample collection and sequencing is relatively clear. At the same time, the analysis process shown in Figure 1 is also very reasonable. However, as described by the previous reviewer, I suggest that you remove the high-quality level. There are many details in the article, such as citation format, spelling, etc. [Supplementary Table 3a, 3b, 3c) → (Supplementary Table 3a, 3b, 3c) The citation format of the article also needs to be adjusted according to the journal requirements. Figure 2, the letters of a and b are too different, please unify them. Figure 4 is completely unclear, please increase the font size. A previous reviewer mentioned that RagTag could be used to improve the quality of genome assembly. I suggest you seriously consider this. Re-review: The authors used FCS-GX to exclude contaminating sequences in the genome, so I agree that this paper should be published.

      Reviewer 2. Agustin Ariel Baricalla

      Are all data available and do they match the descriptions in the paper? No. Matching data: NCBI project with access to the NCBI-SRA deposited raw data. Nonmatching data: Oxford Nanopore data: The authors reply to a previously submitted manuscript arguing that this data was not used, but Fig. 1 refers to Nanopore Minion data. The manuscript body and the additional data section do not include the Quast and BUSCO reports or their corresponding plots.

      Are the data and metadata consistent with relevant minimum information or reporting standards? See GigaDB checklists for examples http://gigadb.org/site/guide No. GigaByte suggests a checklist including the genome, CDS, and proteins in FASTA format, as well as the annotations in GFF format; however, these items are not available for evaluation.

      Is there sufficient detail in the methods and data-processing steps to allow reproduction? Yes. The FastP step for raw data processing is mentioned in the results section but is not detailed in the methods section.

      Is there sufficient data validation and statistical analyses of data quality? No. The authors have not included the BUSCO results. The OrthoDB database for 'passeriformes_odb12' contains over 10,000 curated genes, representing approximately 50-60% of the total genes in a typical passeriform genome. Therefore, the BUSCO report for the new assembly should be provided. The author mentioned that "The gene completeness for Passer was assessed through Benchmarking Universal Single-Copy Orthologs ( Busco version 5.5.0 ) [26] by using the orthologous genes in the Gallus gallus [ chicken] genome" but BUSCO uses the OrthoDB datasets to run, I do not understand what this phrase refers to.

      Is there sufficient information for others to reuse this dataset or integrate it with other data? Yes. All the procedures are consistent and the programs or pipelines are well-known and well documented in the bioinformatic and genomic fields.

      Additional Comments: The inclusion of the mitochondrial genome represents a significant improvement in this manuscript. I recommend presenting all nuclear results together first, followed by a separate and clear description of the mitochondrial analysis and findings to enhance clarity. The data is interesting for analyzing the genetic dynamics behind Passer domesticus adaptation and evolution and can show differences between the previous genomes available from a European reference sample but this is not presented in this work. As of this revision, the NCBI's Passer domesticus genome includes two European reference genomes, both classified with 'chromosome-like' status (NCBI: GCF_036417665.1 and GCA_001700915.1). These genomes can be utilized in two distinct ways: (1) performing a 'genome-guided assembly' with MASURCA, using one of these genomes alongside the Illumina data, or (2) conducting genome scaffolding by employing one of these genomes as a reference and the assembled genome from raw reads as a query, using tools like RagTag or the chromosome scaffolder available in MASURCA. Both approaches could potentially lead to improvements in scaffold number and contiguity metrics, such as N50, N90, and the largest scaffold.

      Re-review: The authors have subtly improved the original version previously presented, but have not managed to surpass the minimum standards established by the publisher to be published by the journal. Easily achievable changes have been requested to complement the analysis previously made and have been ignored. Requests have not been answered, graphics that generate confusion between them and the text presented have not been fixed, and no relevant improvement between the previous and current versions has been shown.

    1. These nasal CPAP (NCPAP) devices deliver airflow that is continuously regulated to produce a set pressure, usually 4 to 7 cm H 2 O. NCPAP provides distending pressure to the airways and alveoli throughout the respiratory cycle.

      When researching the impact of CPAP on incidence of BPD did this study include CPAP on higher pressures? Will infants on a CPAP of 8 to 9cm experience BPD at similar rates of infants on invasive ventilation?

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    1. In Figure 1.9, we show a dual-core design with two cores on the same processor chip. In this design, each core has its own register set, as well as its own local cache, often known as a level 1, or L1, cache. Notice, too, that a level 2 (L2) cache is local to the chip but is shared by the two processing cores. Most architectures adopt this approach, combining local and shared caches, where local, lower-level caches are generally smaller and faster than higher-level shared caches. Aside from architectural considerations, such as cache, memory, and bus contention, a multicore processor with N cores appears to the operating system as N standard CPUs. This characteristic puts pressure on operating-system designers—and application programmers—to make efficient use of these processing cores, an issue we pursue in Chapter 4. Virtually all modern operating systems—including Windows, macOS, and Linux, as well as Android and iOS mobile systems—support multicore SMP systems.

      This excerpt outlines a dual-core processor design, where each core possesses its own registers and L1 cache, but they both have access to a common L2 cache. Multicore processors are recognized as several CPUs by the OS, necessitating meticulous resource and process management to enhance efficiency. The majority of contemporary operating systems accommodate this multicore SMP architecture

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    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      This manuscript uses a diverse isolate collection of Streptococcus pneumoniae from hospital patients in the Netherlands to understand the population-level genetic basis of growth rate variation in this pathogen, which is a key determinant of S. pneumoniae within-host fitness. Previous efforts have studied this phenomenon in strain-specific comparisons, which can lack the statistical power and scope of population-level studies. The authors collected a rigorous set of in vitro growth data for each S. pneumoniae isolate and subsequently paired growth curve analysis with whole-genome analyses to identify how phylogenetics, serotype, and specific genetic loci influence in vitro growth. While there were noticeable correlations between capsular serotype and phylogeny with growth metrics, they did not identify specific loci associated with altered in vitro growth, suggesting that these phenotypes are controlled by the collective effect of the entire genetic background of a strain. This is an important finding that lays the foundation for additional, more highly-powered studies that capture more S. pneumoniae genetic diversity to identify these genetic contributions.

      Thank you for an excellent summary of our manuscript.

      Strengths: 

      (1) The authors were able to completely control the experimental and genetic analyses to ensure all isolates underwent the same analysis pipeline to enhance the rigor of their findings.

      (2) The isolate collection captures an appreciable amount of S. pneumoniae diversity and, importantly, enables disentangling the contributions of the capsule and phylogenetic background to growth rates.

      (3) This study provides a population-level, rather than strain-specific, view of how genetic background influences the growth rate in S. pneumoniae. This is an advance over previous studies that have only looked at smaller sets of strains.

      (4) The methods used are well-detailed and robust to allow replication and extension of these analyses. Moreover, the manuscript is very well written and includes a thoughtful and thorough discussion of the strengths and limitations of the current study.

      Thank you for excellently summarising the strengths of our manuscript.

      Weaknesses: 

      (1) As acknowledged by the authors, the genetic diversity and sample size of this newly collected isolate set are still limited relative to the known global diversity of S. pneumoniae, which evidently limits the power to detect loci with smaller/combinatorial contributions to growth rate (and ultimately infection). 

      Indeed, while larger pneumococcal datasets exist globally, most of these datasets do not have reliable metadata on in vitro growth rates and other phenotypes, as the intention, for the most part, is to conduct population-level surveillance to track the changes in the serotype distribution to assess the impact of introducing pneumococcal conjugate vaccines. In this study, we adopted a different approach to phenotypically characterising the samples collected from these surveillance studies to understand the genetic features that influence the intrinsic growth characteristics of the isolates. While our dataset size is modest, it exemplifies how we can combine whole-genome sequencing and phenotypic characterisation of bacterial isolates to understand the genetic determinants that may drive intrinsic phenotypic differences between strains.

      (2) The in vitro growth data is limited to a single type of rich growth medium, which may not fully reflect the nutritional and/or selective pressures present in the host.

      We agree that our study focused on a single type of rich growth medium, which may not fully reflect the nutritional or selective pressures present in the host. The rationale and the representativeness of the selected culture conditions were more extensively discussed in Arends et al. (10.1128/spectrum.00050-22). Considering that this was a proof-of-concept study to assess the feasibility of our approach, future studies by us and others will evaluate the impact of using different media. Besides the media, complementary techniques such as transcriptome sequencing will help uncover additional insights into potential factors that influence differences in pneumococcal growth kinetics. 

      (3) The current study does not use genetic manipulation or in vitro/in vivo infection models to experimentally test whether alteration of growth rates as observed in this study is linked to virulence or successful infection. The availability of a naturally diverse collection with phylogenetic and serotype combinations already identified as interesting by the authors provides a strong rationale for wet-lab studies of these phenotypes.

      We concur that additional genetic manipulation studies to assess the impact of altering growth rates on virulence and infection would have provided further insights. While this was beyond the scope of this study, we plan to conduct follow-up work to assess this using carefully selected strains from our pneumococcal collection. Because our current study demonstrates that genetic determinants of pneumococcal growth features are not simply confined to single loci, such experimental validation would require novel wet-lab approaches that consider epistatic interactions. In addition, in vivo infection models that allow the study of dissemination from the bloodstream are not yet well established.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      The study by Chaguza et al. presents a novel perspective on pneumococcal growth kinetics, suggesting that the overall genetic background of Streptococcus pneumoniae, rather than specific loci, plays a more dominant role in determining growth dynamics. Through a genome-wide association study (GWAS) approach, the authors propose a shift in how we understand growth regulation, differing from earlier findings that pinpointed individual genes, such as wchA or cpsE, as key regulators of growth kinetics. This study highlights the importance of considering the cumulative impact of the entire genetic background rather than focusing solely on individual genetic loci.

      The study emphasizes the cumulative effects of genetic variants, each contributing small individual impacts, as the key drivers of pneumococcal growth. This polygenic model moves away from the traditional focus on single-gene influences. Through rigorous statistical analyses, the authors persuasively advocate for a more holistic approach to understanding bacterial growth regulation, highlighting the complex interplay of genetic factors across the entire genome. Their findings open new avenues for investigating the intricate mechanisms underlying bacterial growth and adaptation, providing fresh insights into bacterial pathogenesis.

      Thank you for an excellent summary of our manuscript.

      Strengths: 

      This study exemplifies a holistic approach to unraveling key factors in bacterial pathogenesis. By analyzing a large dataset of whole-genome sequences and employing robust statistical methodologies, the authors provide strong evidence to support their main findings. Which is a leap forward from previous studies focused on a relatively smaller number of strains. Their integration of genome-wide association studies (GWAS) highlights the cumulative, polygenic influences on pneumococcal growth kinetics, challenging the traditional focus on individual loci. This comprehensive strategy not only advances our understanding of bacterial growth regulation but also establishes a foundation for future research into the genetic underpinnings of bacterial pathogenesis and adaptation. The amount of data generated and corresponding approaches to analyze the data are impressive as well as convincing. The figures are convincing and comprehensible too.

      Thank you for pointing out the strengths of our manuscript excellently.

      Weaknesses: 

      Despite the strong outcomes of the GWAS approach, this study leaves room for differing interpretations. A key point of contention lies in the title, which initially gives the impression that the research addresses growth kinetics under both in vitro and in vivo conditions. However, the study is limited to in vitro growth kinetics, with the assumption that these findings are equally applicable to in vivo scenarios-a premise that is not universally valid. To more accurately reflect the study's scope and avoid potential misrepresentation, the title should explicitly specify "in vitro" growth kinetics. This clarification would better align the title with the study's actual focus and findings.

      Thank you for these suggestions. We have updated the title to include "in vitro" to avoid confusion. The new title now reads, “The capsule and genetic background, rather than specific loci, strongly influence in vitro pneumococcal growth kinetics.” While our study used in vitro data, our goal is to highlight that such in vitro differences in pneumococcal growth may influence in vivo dynamics, as highlighted in several papers referenced in the introduction and discussion. 

      This study suggests that the entire genetic background significantly influences bacterial growth kinetics. However, to transform these predictions into established facts, extensive experimental validation is necessary. This would involve "bench experiments" focusing on generating and studying mutant variants of serotypes or strains with diverse genomic variations, such as targeted deletions. The growth phenotypes of these mutants should be analyzed, complemented by complementation assays to confirm the specific roles of the deleted regions. These efforts would provide critical empirical evidence to support the findings from the GWAS approach and enhance understanding of the genetic basis of bacterial growth kinetics.

      We fully agree with this assessment. As reviewer #1 similarly highlighted, additional genetic manipulation studies would provide further helpful information to assess the impact of altering growth rates on virulence and infection. However, the experimental studies were beyond the scope of this study due to several factors beyond our control. However, we intend to conduct follow-up experimental work to provide additional insights into how the combination of serotypes and genetic background influences pneumococcal growth in vitro and virulence in vivo. Because our current study demonstrates that genetic determinants of pneumococcal growth features are not simply confined to single loci, such experimental validation would require novel wet-lab approaches that consider epistatic interactions. 

      In the discussion section, the authors state that "the influence of serotype appeared to be higher than the genetic background for the average growth rate" (lines 296-298). Alongside references 13-15, this emphasizes the important role of capsular variability, which is a key determinant of serotypes, in influencing growth kinetics. However, this raises the question: why isn't a specific locus like cps, which is central to capsule biogenesis, considered a strong influencer of growth kinetics in this study?

      Thank you for highlighting the point above. Indeed, the capsule biosynthesis (cps) locus is associated with pneumococcal growth kinetics, as seen in the analysis of individual serotypes. However, the cps locus does not come up as a hit in the GWAS because we controlled for the population structure of the pneumococcal strains. The absence of the hits in the cps locus is because serotypes, hence cps loci, tend to be tightly associated with lineages despite occasional capsule switches, which introduce serotypes to different lineages. Therefore, controlling for population structure, which is critical for GWAS analyses, virtually eliminates the detection of potential hits within the cps locus. However, detecting such hits with larger datasets may still be possible. For this reason, we performed a separate analysis of the individual serotypes and lineages shown in Figure 3.

      One plausible explanation could be the absence of "elevated signals" for cps in the GWAS analysis. GWAS relies on identifying loci with statistically significant associations to phenotypes. The lack of such signals for cps may indicate that its contribution, while biologically important, does not stand out genome-wide. This might be due to the polygenic nature of growth kinetics, where the overall genetic background exerts a cumulative effect, potentially diluting the apparent influence of individual loci like cps in statistical analyses. 

      We fully agree with this point. We mentioned in the abstract and discussion that the absence of the signals for specific individual loci within the pneumococcal genome may imply that the growth kinetics are polygenic. We have edited the discussion to emphasise the suggested point.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review): 

      This study provides insights into the growth kinetics of a diverse collection of Streptococcus pneumoniae, identifying capsule and lineage differences. It was not able to identify any specific loci from the genome-wide association studies (GWAS) that were associated with the growth features. It does provide a useful study linking phenotypic data with large-scale genomic population data. The methods for the large part were appropriately written in sufficient detail, and data analysis was performed with rigour. The interpretation of the results was supported by the data, although some additional explanation of the significance of e.g. ancestral state reconstruction would be useful. Efforts were made to make the underlying data fully accessible to the readers although some of the supplementary material could be formatted and explained a bit better. 

      Thank you for the excellent summary of the manuscript. We have added some text to clarify the significance of some approaches, including ancestral state reconstruction and supplementary material.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      (1) Since the PCBN was collected pre and post-vaccine introduction, did the authors stratify their analyses other than Figure 7 (disease correlations) to assess how vaccine status may influence growth rates? Is the assertion in Lines 238-239 supported by the in vitro data? 

      We have done this analysis. Overall, there was no association between vaccine introduction and pneumococcal growth rates. In lines 238-239, we assumed that in vaccinated populations, the host may be more capable of suppressing bacterial replication due to vaccination. However, there was no in vitro data to back this statement. Therefore, we have edited the statement to remove the text regarding vaccination policy. 

      We considered vaccination status when analysing the data presented in Figure 7. As mentioned in the legend, we only analysed the dataset collected before vaccine introduction to avoid confounding due to vaccination status. To fully assess the impact of vaccination, we would need additional information besides the date of isolation, including vaccine doses and time since vaccination, which was not available for our study.

      (2) Similarly, do any of the growth rate metrics correlate with other aspects of the clinical dataset, like the year of isolation or the sex/age of the patient?

      We did not include these assessments in the manuscript, as these aspects of the clinical dataset are mostly related to the patient and not necessarily the intrinsic characteristics of the pneumococcus. However, upon revising the manuscript, we compared the growth characteristics against the vaccination period, and we did not find any statistically significant association. The relationship between pneumococcal growth features of the isolates used in the current study and their corresponding clinical manifestations of invasive  disease was described in Arends  et al. (10.1128/spectrum.00050-22).

      (3) When evaluating the impact of serotype on growth rates, did the directionality of some of the described impacts match with those previously reported in other studies?

      We were unable to assess the directionality of the serotype’s impact on growth rates. In part, we did not conduct this analysis because our study used different strains from those used in other studies. Such differences in the genetic backgrounds, growth media, and analytical approaches made assessing the consistencies between the studies difficult.

      (4) Did the authors expect that a specific growth metric would be more likely to correlate with specific genetic variants? The reader would benefit from a brief discussion of how the metrics (e.g., maximum growth or lag phase duration) are biologically meaningful beyond the overall growth rate. 

      We indeed expected that specific growth metrics might correlate with certain genetic variants based on their distinct biological roles. The lag phase duration can potentially reflect the ability of the pneumococcus to adapt to environmental conditions, such as nutrient availability or stress, and may be more influenced by regulatory genes involved in sensing and responding to environmental cues (PMID: 30642990, PMID: 22139505). In contrast, maximum growth rate is more likely to be impacted by core metabolic or biosynthetic genes that control the rate of cell division under optimal conditions (PMID: 31053828). Maximum optical density, which reflects the final cell density, might be shaped by factors related to nutrient utilization efficiency, waste tolerance, or quorum sensing. The duration of the stationary phase is related to the switch from lipoteichoic acids to wall teichoic acids, permitting the initiation of the lytic growth phase (PMID: 239401). It is unclear whether this switch is mediated by external triggers or also by intrinsic features of the pneumococcus. Including this type of analysis allows for a more nuanced understanding of how genetic variants contribute to different physiological aspects of microbial growth. The relevance of the lag phase and the stationary phase in relation to the clinical phenotypes of invasive disease (such as pleural empyema and meningitis) of our pneumococcal isolates has been studied and discussed in Arends et al. (PMID: 35678554). The observed associations are summarized in Table 2 of that article. We have added some text in the discussion on the biological relevance of each bacterial growth metric.

      (5) For the GWAS analyses, have similar analyses been performed for other S. pneumoniae collections? Are there known "control" loci that the authors could replicate in the current collection to verify the robustness of the approach?

      Others have undertaken GWAS analyses of other S. pneumoniae collections elsewhere. Unlike our study, none of the GWAS analyses elsewhere focused on bacterial growth kinetics. Therefore, considering this is the first GWAS study in pneumococcus and bacteria, in general, to focus on growth kinetics, we do not have “control” loci that we could replicate to verify the robustness of the approach. However, we hope that future studies will be able to utilise our findings to compare their approach as more and more similar analyses of in vitro growth data become available.

      (6) Is there a statistical method that could predict the sample size necessary to detect the proposed combinatorial or small contributions from various genetic loci to growth rate? This reviewer is not an expert in statistical genetics but would appreciate an indication of the scale required by future studies to identify these regions.

      We are unaware of a statistical approach that could predict sample sizes to detect small or combinatorial effect sizes. However, we intend to conduct simulations in future studies to gain insights into the required sample sizes.

      (7) WGS and genome assembly metrics should be provided for each sequenced genome especially since only short-read assemblies were performed. If not already deposited, the assemblies should be deposited for data sharing as well.

      We have deposited the sequence reads to the European Nucleotide Archive (ENA) and provided the accession numbers, WGS, and assembly metrics in Supplementary Data 1. We have described the tools used to generate the assemblies from the reads.

      (8) Please include the specific ethics approval numbers for the sample collection protocol.

      Study procedures were approved by the Medical Ethical committees of the participating hospitals, including a waiver for individual informed consent (file number 2020–6644 Radboudumc).  

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      Certain aspects of the manuscript could be clarified and extended to improve the manuscript.

      (1) Introduction 

      a) The authors assume knowledge by the reader on Streptococcus pneumoniae, specifically the genetic diversity of lineages and capsules. This diversity is highlighted in the discussion L368 that there are >100 serotypes. The authors should consider backgrounding the number of serotypes and the importance of serotype switching in these bacteria, as well as explaining the diversity of the lineages (GPSC) that are increasingly used as standard nomenclature for Streptococcus pneumonia.

      Thank you for bringing this to our attention. We have included a brief description of the GPSC lineages and capsule switching in the introduction.

      b) The last paragraph of the introduction is lengthy and gets into the methods and results of the manuscript. These could be edited down.

      We have revised the paragraph to remove the methods and results.

      (2) Methods 

      a) The authors should provide details on the QC undertaken and any exclusion criteria of genomes based on the QC. The supplement material has tabs e.g. read and assembly metrics but unclear how determined and impacted the study.

      We utilised all the genomes available for this study, which had in vitro phenotypic data available. We excluded no genomes due to poor sequence quality.

      Additional information about the genomes is available from previous studies, which are referenced in the methods section.

      b) Why did the authors map draft assemblies to the reference genome for the SNP alignment (from which the ML tree was inferred)? Draft genome assemblies usually contain errors so there is potential for false positive SNPs. Further, there is a lack of perbase quality information using the draft genome assemblies. Given the short read data are available - why were the reads not used as input for snippy (which is the standard input for snippy)? This may have impacted the results reliant on the SNP calls.

      We mapped a combination of reads and draft assemblies to the reference genome to generate the SNP alignment using Snippy (https://github.com/tseemann/snippy). For the pneumococcal isolates, we mapped the reads, while for the included outgroup, we mapped the assembly as we did not have sequence reads available. We have edited the methods section to clarify this.

      c) SNP alignment. the authors explain the decision to not undertake recombination detection later in the discussion. Did the authors mask any phage or repeat regions? And how was the outgroup S. oralis included in the analyses e.g what genome was used?

      We included the outgroup genome in the alignment generated by SNIPPY, which involved generating aligned consensus sequences for each isolate after mapping the reads to the pneumococcal ATCC 700669 reference genome (GenBank accession: NC_011900), as described in the methods. We have now included the accession number for the S. oralis genome, which was used as an outgroup in our phylogenetic analysis. Phages are not typically common in pneumococcal genomes compared to other species. Similarly, although repeats are present in the pneumococcal genome, the consensus in the field is that these do not particularly bias the pneumococcal phylogeny. Therefore, the consensus in the field has been not to explicitly mask these regions as done for highly clonal bacterial pathogens, such as Mycobacterium tuberculosis. Overall, our approach to building the phylogenetic tree is robust compared to alternative methods (PMID:

      29774245).

      d) Should the presence/absence of unitigs that were used as the input for the GWAS be included as a supp dataset?

      We have now provided the presence/absence matrix for the unitigs used in the  analysis as a supplementary dataset available at GitHub(https://github.com/ChrispinChaguza/SpnGrowthKinetics). We have revised the methods section to include a section on data availability.

      e) For the annotation of unitigs, the authors used their bespoke script with features from complete public genomes. Please provide accession/ identifying information of the complete genomes (not only the ATCC 700669) reference in the methods. Also, why did the authors choose not to annotate with annotate_hits_pyseer from pyseer? 

      We annotated the hits using our bespoke script because we understood our approach better and could control the information generated from the script. Annotating with “annotate_hits_pyseer” from pyseer would produce similar results to both approaches, as they compared the unitigs to annotated reference genomes.

      (3) Results 

      a) The authors could consider providing an overview of the diversity (e.g. lineages and capsules) in the study and contextualising it in the broader context of Streptococcus pneumoniae population genomics. This would help readers who are less familiar with this pathogen to understand the diversity included in this study. 

      We included this information in the first paragraph of the results section. Considering that population-level analyses based on this dataset have already been published, we have referenced the corresponding papers to provide additional information to readers.

      b) Did the timespan of the study pre and post-PCV7 introduction need to be briefly touched on in the results? For example, did the serotypes and lineages vary over the two collection periods and does this need to be considered in the interpretation of the results at all? 

      The prevalence of serotypes and lineages varied over time, partly due to the introduction of vaccines and random temporal fluctuations in the distribution of strains. We did not explicitly adjust for time, as this is not likely to influence the intrinsic biology of the strains. However, we adjusted for the population structure of the strains, whose changes would most likely affect the distribution of strains in the population. For other analyses, including that in Figure 7, we considered the vaccination status by restricting the analysis to the isolates collected before vaccine introduction.

      c) Figures. Some of the figures had very small text (especially Figure 1) that was difficult to read and Figure 2 and Figure 4 were mentioned once, while several paragraphs of results were used to discuss Figure 3. Is Figure 1 required as a main figure? Could Figure 3 be split? e.g. one with the chord diagram, one with panels b-e, and one with panels jq? Figure 4 - the ancestral state reconstruction analyses could be expanded upon in the results.

      We have increased the text in some figures where possible. However, for figures that show more information, smaller text is more suitable. 

      Figure 1 is essential to the manuscript as it provides a visual overview of the approach used in this study. Without this figure, it may be difficult for some readers, especially those unfamiliar with bacterial genomic analyses, to understand our study approach and how we estimated the pneumococcal growth parameters used for the GWAS. 

      For Figure 4, we prefer to keep it as it is, to have the information in one place, as splitting it will mean including some of the panels in the supplementary material, considering that we already have seven figures in the manuscript. 

      We have added additional text to the results regarding the ancestral reconstruction analyses. We included them mainly to demonstrate the correlation between the pneumococcal growth rates and the phylogeny.

      (4) Discussion 

      a) Why was 15 hours for culture undertaken and not 24? The authors discuss the impact that this may have had on their results.

      The 15-hour incubation period was deliberately chosen, as the growth curves indicate that most isolates had reached the stationary phase by that time. Extending the culture duration would likely not have yielded additional meaningful data. As is well established, Streptococcus pneumoniae undergoes autolysis upon reaching a certain cell density, which could distort growth measurements and complicate interpretation if incubation were prolonged. For clarification, we have changed the sentences related to this topic in the Discussion.

      b) Some paragraphs in the discussion were very long e.g. L347-381. The authors could consider breaking long paragraphs down into shorter ones to improve the readability of the manuscript.

      We agree with this assessment. We initially wanted to include all the information on the study’s limitations in the same paragraph. However, as suggested, we have now split the highlighted paragraph into two shorter paragraphs. 

      (5) Supplementary Data 

      a) Providing information in each tab of each supp data file would be useful. For example - including a table header that explained what was in each sheet rather than relying on the tab names. Formatting for some of the underlying supplementary data could be improved e.g. in supplementary data 2 no explanation is given to interpret the data included in these files.

      Thank you for the suggestions. For clarity, we have included a header in each tab of the spreadsheet that describes what is included in each dataset. We have also removed the previous Supplementary Data 2. We realised that the information presented in this spreadsheet was redundant, as it was already available in Supplementary Data 1.

    1. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work by Govorunova et al. identified three naturally blue-shifted channelrhodopsins (ChRs) from ancyromonads, namely AnsACR, FtACR, and NlCCR. The phylogenetic analysis places the ancyromonad ChRs in a distinct branch, highlighting their unique evolutionary origin and potential for novel applications in optogenetics. Further characterization revealed the spectral sensitivity, ionic selectivity, and kinetics of the newly discovered AnsACR, FtACR, and NlCCR. This study also offers valuable insights into the molecular mechanism underlying the function of these ChRs, including the roles of specific residues in the retinal-binding pocket. Finally, this study validated the functionality of these ChRs in both mouse brain slices (for AnsACR and FtACR) and in vivo in Caenorhabditis elegans (for AnsACR), demonstrating the versatility of these tools across different experimental systems.

      In summary, this work provides a potentially valuable addition to the optogenetic toolkit by identifying and characterizing novel blue-shifted ChRs with unique properties.

      Strengths:

      This study provides a thorough characterization of the biophysical properties of the ChRs and demonstrates the versatility of these tools in different ex vivo and in vivo experimental systems. The mutagenesis experiments also revealed the roles of key residues in the photoactive site that can affect the spectral and kinetic properties of the channel.

      We thank the Reviewer for his/her positive evaluation of our work.

      Weaknesses:

      While the novel ChRs identified in this work are spectrally blue-shifted, there still seems to be some spectral overlap with other optogenetic tools. The authors should provide more evidence to support the claim that they can be used for multiplex optogenetics and help potential end-users assess if they can be used together with other commonly applied ChRs. Additionally, further engineering or combination with other tools may be required to achieve truly orthogonal control in multiplexed experiments.

      To demonstrate the usefulness of ancyromonad ChRs for multiplex optogenetics as a proof of principle, we co-expressed AnsACR with the red-shifted cation-conducting ChR Chrimson and measured net photocurrent generated by this combination as a function of the wavelength. We found that it is hyperpolarizing in the blue region of the spectrum, and depolarizing at the red region. In the revision, we added a new panel (Figure 1D) showing these results and the following paragraph to the main text:

      “To test the possibility of using AnsACR in multiplex optogenetics, we co-expressed it with the red-shifted CCR Chrimson (Klapoetke et al., 2014) fused to an EYFP tag in HEK293 cells. We measured the action spectrum of the net photocurrents with 4 mM Cl<sup>-</sup> in the pipette, matching the conditions in the neuronal cytoplasm (Doyon, Vinay et al. 2016). Figure 1D, black shows that the direction of photocurrents was hyperpolarizing upon illumination with λ<500 nm and depolarizing at longer wavelengths. A shoulder near 520 nm revealed a FRET contribution from EYFP (Govorunova, Sineshchekov et al. 2020), which was also observed upon expression of the Chrimson construct alone (Figure 1D, red)”.

      In the C. elegans experiments, partial recovery of pharyngeal pumping was observed after prolonged illumination, indicating potential adaptation. This suggests that the effectiveness of these ChRs may be limited by cellular adaptation mechanisms, which could be a drawback in long-term experiments. A thorough discussion of this challenge in the application of optogenetics tools would prove very valuable to the readership.

      We added the following paragraph to the revised Discussion:

      “One possible explanation of the partial recovery of pharyngeal pumping that we observed after 15-s illumination, even at the highest tested irradiance, is continued attenuation of photocurrent during prolonged illumination (desensitization). However, the rate of AnsACR desensitization (Figure 1 – figure supplement 4A and Figure 1 – figure supplement 5A) is much faster than the rate of the pumping recovery, reducing the likelihood that desensitization is driving this phenomenon. Another possible reason for the observed adaptation is an increase in the cytoplasmic Cl<sup>-</sup> concentration owing to AnsACR activity and hence a breakdown of the Cl<sup>-</sup> gradient on the neuronal membrane. The C. elegans pharynx is innervated by 20 neurons, 10 of which are cholinergic (Pereira, Kratsios et al. 2015). A pair of MC neurons is the most important for regulation of pharyngeal pumping, but other pharyngeal cholinergic neurons, including I1, M2, and M4, also play a role (Trojanowski, Padovan-Merhar et al. 2014). Moreover, the pharyngeal muscles generate autonomous contractions in the presence of acetylcholine tonically released from the pharyngeal neurons (Trojanowski, Raizen et al. 2016). Given this complexity, further elucidation of pharyngeal pumping adaptation mechanisms is beyond the scope of this study.”

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Govorunova et al present three new anion opsins that have potential applications in silencing neurons. They identify new opsins by scanning numerous databases for sequence homology to known opsins, focusing on anion opsins. The three opsins identified are uncommonly fast, potent, and are able to silence neuronal activity. The authors characterize numerous parameters of the opsins.

      Strengths:

      This paper follows the tradition of the Spudich lab, presenting and rigorously characterizing potentially valuable opsins. Furthermore, they explore several mutations of the identified opsin that may make these opsins even more useful for the broader community. The opsins AnsACR and FtACR are particularly notable, having extraordinarily fast onset kinetics that could have utility in many domains. Furthermore, the authors show that AnsACR is usable in multiphoton experiments having a peak photocurrent in a commonly used wavelength. Overall, the author's detailed measurements and characterization make for an important resource, both presenting new opsins that may be important for future experiments, and providing characterizations to expand our understanding of opsin biophysics in general.

      We thank the Reviewer for his/her positive evaluation of our work.

      Weaknesses:

      First, while the authors frequently reference GtACR1, a well-used anion opsin, there is no side-by-side data comparing these new opsins to the existing state-of-the-art. Such comparisons are very useful to adopt new opsins.

      GtACR1 exhibits the peak sensitivity at 515 nm and therefore is poorly suited for combination with red-shifted CCRs or fluorescent sensors, unlike blue-light-absorbing ancyromonad ACRs. Nevertheless, we conducted side-by-side comparison of ancyromonad ChRs, GtACR1 and GtACR2, the latter of which has the spectral maximum at 470 nm. The results are shown in the new Figures 1E and F, and the new multipanel Figure 1 – figure supplement 4 added in the revision. We also added the following text, describing these results, to the revised Results section:

      “Figures 1E and F show the dependence of the peak photocurrent amplitude and reciprocal peak time, respectively, on the photon flux density for ancyromonad ChRs and GtACRs. The current amplitude saturated earlier than the time-to-peak for all tested ChRs. Figure 1 – figure supplement 4A-E shows normalized photocurrent traces recorded at different photon densities. Quantitation of desensitization at the end of 1-s illumination revealed a complex light dependence (Figure 1, Figure Supplement 4F). Figure 1 – figure supplement 5 shows normalized photocurrent traces recorded in response to a 5-s light pulse of the maximal available intensity and the magnitude of desensitization at its end.”

      Next, multiphoton optogenetics is a promising emerging field in neuroscience, and I appreciate that the authors began to evaluate this approach with these opsins. However, a few additional comparisons are needed to establish the user viability of this approach, principally the photocurrent evoked using the 2p process, for given power densities. Comparison across the presented opsins and GtACR1 would allow readers to asses if these opsins are meaningfully activated by 2P.

      We carried out additional 2P experiments in ancyromonad ChRs, GtACR1 and GtACR2 and added their results to a new main-text Figure 6 and Figure 6 – figure supplement 1. We added the new section describing these results, “Two-photon excitation”, to the main text in the revision:

      “To determine the 2P activation range of AnsACR, FtACR, and NlCCR, we conducted raster scanning using a conventional 2P laser, varying the excitation wavelength between 800 and 1,080 nm (Figure 6 – figure supplement 1). All three ChRs generated detectable photocurrents with action spectra showing maximal responses at ~925 nm for AnsACR, 945 nm for FtACR, and 890 nm for NlCCR (Figure 6A). These wavelengths fall within the excitation range of common Ti:Sapphire lasers, which are widely used in neuroscience laboratories and can be tuned between ~700 nm and 1,020-1,300 nm. To assess desensitization, cells expressing AnsACR, FtACR, or NlCCR were illuminated at the respective peak wavelength of each ChR at 15 mW for 5 seconds. GtACR1 and GtACR2, previously used in 2P experiments (Forli, Vecchia et al. 2018, Mardinly, Oldenburg et al. 2018), were included for comparison. The normalized photocurrent traces recorded under these conditions are shown in Figure 6B-F. The absolute amplitudes of 2P photocurrents at the peak time and at the end of illumination are shown in Figure 6G and H, respectively. All five tested variants exhibited comparable levels of desensitization at the end of illumination (Figure 6I).”

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to develop Channelrhodopsins (ChRs), light-gated ion channels, with high potency and blue action spectra for use in multicolor (multiplex) optogenetics applications. To achieve this, they performed a bioinformatics analysis to identify ChR homologues in several protist species, focusing on ChRs from ancyromonads, which exhibited the highest photocurrents and the most blue-shifted action spectra among the tested candidates. Within the ancyromonad clade, the authors identified two new anion-conducting ChRs and one cation-conducting ChR. These were characterized in detail using a combination of manual and automated patch-clamp electrophysiology, absorption spectroscopy, and flash photolysis. The authors also explored sequence features that may explain the blue-shifted action spectra and differences in ion selectivity among closely related ChRs.

      Strengths:

      A key strength of this study is the high-quality experimental data, which were obtained using well-established techniques such as manual patch-clamp and absorption spectroscopy, complemented by modern automated patch-clamp approaches. These data convincingly support most of the claims. The newly characterized ChRs expand the optogenetics toolkit and will be of significant interest to researchers working with microbial rhodopsins, those developing new optogenetic tools, as well as neuro- and cardioscientists employing optogenetic methods.

      We thank the Reviewer for his/her positive evaluation of our work.

      Weaknesses:

      This study does not exhibit major methodological weaknesses. The primary limitation of the study is that it includes only a limited number of comparisons to known ChRs, which makes it difficult to assess whether these newly discovered tools offer significant advantages over currently available options.

      We conducted side-by-side comparison of ancyromonad ChRs and GtACRs, wildly used for optical inhibition of neuronal activity. The results are shown in the new Figures 1E and F, and the new multipanel Figure 1 – figure supplement 4 and Figure 1 – figure supplement 5 added in the revision. We also added the following text, describing these results, to the revised Results section:

      “Figures 1E and F show the dependence of the peak photocurrent amplitude and reciprocal peak time, respectively, on the photon flux density for ancyromonad ChRs and GtACRs. The current amplitude saturated earlier than the time-to-peak for all tested ChRs. Figure 1 – figure supplement 4A-E shows normalized photocurrent traces recorded at different photon densities. Quantitation of desensitization at the end of 1-s illumination revealed a complex light dependence (Figure 1, Figure Supplement 4F). Figure 1 – figure supplement 5 shows normalized photocurrent traces recorded in response to a 5-s light pulse of the maximal available intensity and the magnitude of desensitization at its end.”

      Additionally, although the study aims to present ChRs suitable for multiplex optogenetics, the new ChRs were not tested in combination with other tools. A key requirement for multiplexed applications is not just spectral separation of the blue-shifted ChR from the red-shifted tool of interest but also sufficient sensitivity and potency under low blue-light conditions to avoid cross-activation of the respective red-shifted tool. Future work directly comparing these new ChRs with existing tools in optogenetic applications and further evaluating their multiplexing potential would help clarify their impact.

      As a proof of principle, we co-expressed AnsACR with the red-shifted cation-conducting CCR Chrimson and demonstrated that the net photocurrent generated by this combination is hyperpolarizing in the blue region of the spectrum, and depolarizing at the red region. In the revision, we added a new panel (Figure 1D) showing these results and the following paragraph to the main text:

      “To test the possibility of using AnsACR in multiplex optogenetics, we co-expressed it with the red-shifted CCR Chrimson (Klapoetke et al., 2014) fused to an EYFP tag in HEK293 cells. We measured the action spectrum of the net photocurrents with 4 mM Cl<sup>-</sup> in the pipette, matching the conditions in the neuronal cytoplasm (Doyon, Vinay et al. 2016). Figure 1D, black shows that the direction of photocurrents was hyperpolarizing upon illumination with λ<500 nm and depolarizing at longer wavelengths. A shoulder near 520 nm revealed a FRET contribution from EYFP (Govorunova, Sineshchekov et al. 2020), which was also observed upon expression of the Chrimson construct alone (Figure 1D, red)”.

      Reviewing Editor Comments:

      The reviewers suggest that direct comparison to GtACR1 is the most important step to make this work more useful to the community.

      We followed the Reviewers’ recommendations and carried out side-by-side comparison of ancyromonad ChRs and GtACR1 as well as GtACR2 (Figure 1E and F, Figure 1 – figure supplement 4, Figure 1 – figure supplement 5, and Figure 6). Note, however, that GtACR1’s spectral maximum is at 515 nm, which makes it poorly suitable for blue light excitation. Also, ChRs are known to perform very differently in different cell types and upon expression of their genes in different vector backbones, so our results cannot be generalized for all experimental systems. Each ChR user needs to select the most appropriate tool for his/her purpose by testing several candidates in his/her own experimental setting.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) The figure legend for Figure 2D-I appears to be incomplete. Please provide a detailed explanation of the panels.

      In the revision, we have expanded the legend of Figure 2 to explain all individual panels.

      (2) The meaning of the Vr shift (Y-axis in Figure 2H-I) should be clarified in the main text to aid reader understanding.

      In the revision, we added the phrase “which indicated higher relative permeability to NO<sub>3</sub> than to Cl<sup>-“</sup> to explain the meaning of the Vr shift upon replacement of Cl<sup>-</sup> with NO<sub>3</sub>-.

      (3) Adding statistical analysis for the peak and end photocurrent values in Figure 2D-F would strengthen the claim that there is minimal change in relative permeability during illumination.

      In the revision, we added the V<sub>r</sub> values for the peak photocurrent to Figure 2H-I, which already contained the V<sub>r</sub> values for the end photocurrent, and carried out a statistical analysis of their comparison. The following sentence was added to the text in the revision:

      “The V<sub>r</sub> values of the peak current and that at the end of illumination were not significantly different by the two-tailed Wilcoxon signed-rank test (Fig. 2G), indicating no change in the relative permeability during illumination.”

      (4) Figure 4H and I seem out of place in Figure 4, as the title suggests a focus on wild-proteins and AnsACR mutants. The authors could consider moving these panels to Figure 3 for better alignment with the content.

      As noted below, we changed the panel order in Figure 4 upon the Reviewer’s request. In particular, former Figure 4I is Figure 4C in the revision, and former Figure 4H is now panel C in Figure 3 – figure supplement 1 in the revision. We rearranged the corresponding section of the text (highlighted yellow in the manuscript).

      (5) The characterization section could be strengthened by including data on the pH sensitivity of FtACR, which is currently missing from the main figures.

      Upon the Reviewer’s request, we carried out pH titration of FtACR absorbance and added the results as Figure 4B in the revision.

      (6) The logic in Figure 4A-G appears somewhat disjointed. For example, Figure 4A shows pH sensitivity for WT AnsACR and the G86E mutant, while Figure 4 B-D shifts to WT AnsACR and the D226N mutant, and Figure 4E returns to the G86E mutant. Reorganizing or clarifying the flow would improve readability.

      We followed the Reviewer’s advice and changed the panel order in Figure 4. In the revised version, the upper row (panels A-C) shows the pH titration data of the three WTs, the middle row (panels D-F) shows analysis of the AnsACR_D226N mutant, and the lower row (panels G-I) shows analysis of the AnsACR_G88E mutant. We also rearranged accordingly the description of these panels in the text.

      (7) In Figure 5A, "NIACR" should likely be corrected to "NlCCR".

      We corrected the typo in the revision.

      (8) The statistical significance in Figure 6C and D is somewhat confusing. Clarifying which groups are being compared and using consistent symbols would improve interoperability.

      In the revision, we improved the figure panels and legend to clarify that the comparisons are between the dark and light stimulation groups within the same current injection.

      (9) The authors pointed out that at rest or when a small negative current was injected, the neurons expressing Cl- permeable ChRs could generate a single action potential at the beginning of photostimulation, as has been reported before. The authors could help by further discussing if and how this phenomenon would affect the applicability of such tools.

      We mentioned in the revised Discussion section that activation of ACRs in the axons could depolarize the axons and trigger synaptic transmission at the onset of light stimulation, and this undesired excitatory effect need to be taken into consideration when using ACRs.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Govorunova et al present three new anion opsins that have potential applications in silencing neurons. This paper follows the tradition of the Spudich lab, presenting and rigorously characterizing potentially valuable opsins. Furthermore, they explore several mutations of the identified opsin that may make these opsins even more useful for the broader community. In general, I feel positively about this manuscript. It presents new potentially useful opsins and provides characterization that would enable its use. I have a few recommendations below, mostly centered around side-by-side comparisons to existing opsins.

      (1) My primary concern is that while there is a reference to GtACR1, a highly used opsin first described by this team, they do not present any of this data side by side.

      When evaluating opsins to use, it is important to compare them to the existing state of the art. As a potential user, I need to know where these opsins differ. Citing other papers does not solve this as, even within the same lab, subtle methodological differences or data plotting decisions can obscure important differences.

      As we explained in the response to the public comments, we carried out side-by-side comparison of ancyromonad ChRs and GtACRs as requested by the Reviewer. The results are shown in the new Figures 1E and F, and the new multipanel Figure 1 – figure supplement 4 and Figure 1 – figure supplement 5, added in the revision. However, we would like to emphasize a limited usefulness of such comparative analysis, as ChRs are known to perform very differently in different cell types and upon expression of their genes in different vector backbones, so our results cannot be generalized for all experimental systems. Each ChR user needs to select the most appropriate tool for his/her purpose by testing several candidates in his/her own experimental setting.

      (2) Multiphoton optogenetics is an emerging field of optogenetics, and it is admirable that the authors address it here. The authors should present more 2p characterization, so that it can be established if these new opsins are viable for use with 2P methods, the way GtACR1 is. The following would be very useful for 2P characterization:

      Photocurrents for a given power density, compared to GtACR1 and GtACR2.

      The new Figure 6 (B-F) added in the revision shows photocurrent traces recorded from the three ancyromonad ChRs and  two GtACRs upon 2P excitation of a given power density.

      Comparing NICCR and FtACR's wavelength specificity and photocurrent. If these opsins are too weak to create reasonable 2P spectra, this difference should be discussed.

      The new Figure 6A shows the 2P action spectra of all three ancyromonad ChRs.

      A Trace and calculated photocurrent kinetics to compare 1P and 2P. This need not be the flash-based absorption characterization of Figure 3, but a side-by-side photocurrent as in Figure 2.

      As mentioned above, photocurrent traces recorded from ancyromonad ChRs and GtACRs upon 2P excitation are shown in the new Figure 6 (B-F). However, direct comparison of the 2P data with the 1P data is not possible, as we used laser scanning illumination for the former and wild-field illumination for the latter.

      Characterization of desensitization. As the authors mention, many opsins undergo desensitization, presenting the ratio of peak photocurrent vs that at multiple time points (probably up to a few seconds) would provide evidence for how effectively these constructs could be used in different scenarios.

      We conducted a detailed analysis of desensitization under both 1P and 2P excitation. The new Figure 1 – figure supplement 4 and Figure 1 – figure supplement 5 show the data obtained under 1P excitation, and the new Figure 6 shows the data for 2P conditions.

      I have to admit, that by the end of the paper, I was getting confused as to which of the three original constructs had which property, and how that was changing with each mutation. I would suggest that a table summarizing each opsin and mutation with its onset and offset kinetics, peak wavelength, photocurrent, and ion selectivity would greatly increase the ability to select and use opsins in the future.

      In the revision, we added a table of the spectroscopic properties of all tested mutants as Supplementary File 2. This study did not aim to analyze other parameters listed by the Reviewer. We added the following sentence referring to this table to the main text:

      “Supplementary File 2 contains the λ values of the half-maximal amplitude of the long-wavelength slope of the spectrum, which can be estimated more accurately from the action spectra than the λ of the maximum.”

      It may be out of the scope of this manuscript, but if a soma localization sequence can be shown to remove the 'axonal spiking' (as described in line 441), this would be a significant addition to the paper.

      Our previous study (Messier et al., 2018, doi: 10.7554/eLife.38506) showed that a soma localization sequence can reduce, but not eliminate, the axonal spiking. We plan to test these new ACRs with the trafficking motifs in the future.

      NICCR appears to have the best photocurrents of all tested opsins in this paper. It seems odd that it was omitted from the mouse cortical neurons experiments.

      We have not included analysis of NlCCR behavior in neurons because we are preparing a separate manuscript on this ChR.

      Figure 6 would benefit from more gradation in the light powers used to silence and would benefit from comparison to GtACR. I suggest using a fixed current with a series of illumination intensities to see which of the three opsins (or GtACR) is most effective at silencing. At present, it looks binary, and a user cannot evaluate if any of these opsins would be better than what is already available.

      In the revision, we added the data comparing the light sensitivity of AnsACR and FtACR with previously identified GtACR1 and GtACR2 (new Figure 1E and F) to help users compare these ACRs. Although they are less sensitive to light comparing to GtACR1 and GtACR2, they could still be activated by commercially available light sources if the expression levels are similar. Less sensitive ACRs may have less unwanted activation when using with other optogenetic tools.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Suggested Improvements to Experiments, Data, or Analyses:

      (1) Line 25: "significantly exceeding those by previously known tools" and Line 408: "NlCCR is the most blue-shifted among ancyromonad ChRs and generates larger photocurrents than the earlier known CCRs with a similar absorption maximum." As noted in the public review, this statement applies only to a very specific subgroup of ChRs with spectral maxima below 450 nm. If the goal was to claim that NlCCR is a superior tool among a broader range of blue-light-activated ChRs, direct comparisons with state-of-the-art ChRs such as ChR2 T159C (Berndt et al., 2011), CatCh (Kleinlogel et al., 2014), CoChR (Klapoetke et al., 2014), CoChR-3M (Ganjawala et al., 2019), or XXM 2.0 (Ding et al., 2022) would be beneficial. If the goal was to demonstrate superiority among tools with spectra below 450 nm, I suggest explicitly stating this in the paper.

      The Reviewer correctly inferred that we emphasized the superiority of NlCCR among tools with similar spectral maxima, not all blue-light-activated ChRs available for neuronal photoexcitation, most of which exhibit absorption maxima at longer wavelengths. To clarify this, we added “with similar spectral maxima” to the sentence in the original Line 25. The sentence in Line 408 already contains this clarification: “with a similar absorption maximum”.

      (2) Lines 111-113: "The absorption spectra of the purified proteins were slightly blue-shifted from the respective photocurrent action spectra (Figure 1D), likely due to the presence of non-electrogenic cis-retinal-bound forms." I would be skeptical of this statement. The spectral shifts in NlCCR and AnsACR are small and may fall within the range of experimental error. The shift in FtACR is more apparent; however, if two forms coexist in purified protein, this should be reflected as two Gaussian peaks in the absorption spectrum (or at least as a broader total peak reflecting two states with close maxima and similar populations). On the contrary, the action spectrum appears to have two peaks, one potentially below 465 nm. Generally, neither spectrum appears significantly broader than a typical microbial rhodopsin spectrum. This question could be clarified by quantifying the widths of the absorption and action spectra or by overlaying them on the same axis. In my opinion, the two spectra seem very similar, and just appearance of the "bump" in the action spectum shifts the apparent maximum of the action spectrum to the red. If there were two states, then they should both be electrogenic, and the slight difference in spectra might be explained by something else (e.g. by a slight difference in the quantum yields of the two states).

      As the Reviewer suggested, in the revision we added a new figure (Figure 1 – figure supplement 2), showing the overlay of the absorption and action spectra of each ancyromonad ChR. This figure shows that the absorption spectra are wider than the action spectra (especially in AnsACR and FtACR), which confirms our interpretation (contribution of the non-electrogenic blue-shifted cis-retinal-bound forms to the absorption spectrum). Note that the presence of such forms explaining a blue shift of the absorption spectrum has been experimentally verified in HcKCR1 (doi: 10.1016/j.cell.2023.08.009; 10.1038/s41467-025-56491-9). Therefore, we revised the text as follows:

      “The absorption spectra of the purified proteins (Figure 1C) were slightly blue-shifted from the respective photocurrent action spectra (Figure 1 – figure supplement 3), likely due to the presence of non-electrogenic cis-retinal-bound forms. The presence of such forms, explaining the discrepancy between the absorption and the action spectra, was verified by HPLC in KCRs (Tajima et al. 2023, Morizumi et al., 2025).”

      (3) Lines 135-136: "The SyncroPatch enables unbiased estimation of the photocurrent amplitude because the cells are drawn into the wells without considering their tag fluorescence." While SyncroPatch does allow unbiased selection of patched cells, it does not account for the fraction of transfected cells. Without a method to exclude non-transfected cells, which are always present in transient transfections, the comparison of photocurrents may be affected by the proportion of untransfected cells, which could vary between constructs. To clarify whether the statistically significant difference in the Kolmogorov-Smirnov test could indicate that the fraction of transfected cells after 48-72h differs between constructs, I suggest analyzing only transfected cells or reporting fractions of transfected cells by each construct.

      The Reviewer correctly states that non-transfected cells are always present in transiently transfected cell populations. However, his/her suggestion to “exclude non-transfected cells” is not feasible in the absence of a criterion for such exclusion. As it is evident from our data, transient transfection results in a continuum of the amplitude values, and it is not possible to distinguish a small photocurrent from no photocurrent, considering the noise level. We would like, however, to emphasize that not excluding any cells provides an estimate of the overall potency of each ChR variant, which depends on both the fraction of transfected cells and their photocurrents. This approach mimics the conditions of in vivo experiments, when non-expressing cells also cannot be excluded.

      (4) Line 176: "AnsACR and FtACR photocurrents exhibited biphasic rise." The fastest characteristic time is very close to the typical resolution of a patch-clamp experiment (RC = 50 μs for a 10 pF cell with a 5 MΩ series resistance). Thus, I am skeptical that the faster time constant of the biphasic opening represents a protein-specific characteristic time. It may not be fully resolved by patch-clamp and could simply result from low-pass filtering of a specific cell. I suggest clarifying this for the reader.

      The Reviewer is right that the patch clamp setup acts as a lowpass filter. Earlier, we directly measured its time resolution (~15 μs) by recording the ultrafast (occurring on the ps time scale) charge movements related to the trans-cis isomerization (doi: 10.1111/php.12558). However, the lowpass filter of the setup can only slow the entire signal, but cannot lead to the appearance of a separate kinetic component (i.e. a monophasic process cannot become biphasic). Therefore, we believe that the biphasic photocurrent rise reflects biphasic channel opening rather than a measurement artifact. Two phases in the channel opening have also been detected in GtACR1 (doi: 10.1073/pnas.1513602112) and CrChR2 (10.1073/pnas.1818707116).

      (5) Line 516: "The forward LED current was 900 mA." It would be more informative to report the light intensity rather than the forward current, as many readers may not be familiar with the specific light output of the used LED modules at this forward current.

      We have added the light intensity value in the revision:

      “The forward LED current was 900 mA (which corresponded to the irradiance of ~2 mW mm<sup>-2</sup>)…”

      (6) Lines 402-403: "The NlCCR ... contains a neutral residue in the counterion position (Asp85 in BR), which is typical of all ACRs. Yet, NlCCR does not conduct anions, instead showing permeability to Na+." This is not atypical for CCRs and has been demonstrated in previous works of the authors (CtCCR in Govorunova et al. 2021, ChvCCR1 in Govorunova et al. 2022). What is unique is the absence of negatively charged residues in TM2, as noted later in the current study. However, the absence of negatively charged residues in TM2 appears to be rare for ACRs as well. Not as a strong point of criticism, but to enhance clarity, I suggest analyzing the frequency of carboxylate residues in TM2 of ACRs to determine whether the unique finding is relevant to ion selectivity or to another property.

      The Reviewer is correct that some CCRs lack a carboxylate residue in the D85 position, so this feature alone cannot be considered as a differentiating criterion. However, the complete absence of glutamates in TM2 is not rare in ACRs and is found, for example, in HfACR1 and CarACR2. We have discussed this issue in our earlier review (doi: 10.3389/fncel.2021.800313) and do not think that repeating this discussion in this manuscript is appropriate.

      Recommendations for Writing and Presentation:

      (1) Some figures contain incomplete or missing labels:

      Figure 2: Panels D to I lack labels.

      In the revision, we have expanded the legend of Figure 2 to explain all individual panels.

      Figure 3 - Figure Supplement 1: Missing explanations for each panel.

      In the revision, we changed the order of panes and explained all individual panels in the legend.

      Figure 5 - Figure Supplement 1: Missing explanations for each panel.

      No further explanation for individual panels in this Figure is needed because all panels show the action spectra of various mutants, the names of which are provided in the panels themselves. Repeating this information in the figure legend would be redundant.

      (2) In Figure 2, "sem" is written in lowercase, whereas "SEM" is capitalized in other figures. Standardizing the format would improve consistency.

      In the revision, we changed the font of the SEM abbreviation to the uppercase in all instances.

      (3) Line 20: "spectrally separated molecules must be found in nature." There is no proof that they cannot be developed synthetically; rather, it is just difficult. I suggest softening this statement, as the findings of this study, together with others, will probably allow designing molecules with specified spectral properties in the future.

      In the revision, we changed the cited sentence to the following:

      “Multiplex optogenetic applications require spectrally separated molecules, which are difficult to engineer without disrupting channel function”.

      (4) Line 216-219: "Acidification increased the amplitude of the fast current ~10-fold (Figure 4F) and shifted its Vr ~100 mV (Figure 3 - figure supplement 1D), as expected of passive proton transport. The number of charges transferred during the fast peak current was >2,000 times smaller than during the channel opening, from which we concluded that the fast current reflects the movement of the RSB proton." The claim about passive transport of the RSB proton should be clarified, as typically, passive transport is not limited to exactly one proton per photocycle, and the authors observe the increase in the fast photocurrents upon acidification.

      We thank the Reviewer for pointing out the confusing character of our description. To clarify the matter, we added a new photocurrent trace to Figure 4I in the revision recorded from AnsACR_G86E at 0 mV and pH 7.4. We have rewritten the corresponding section of Results as follows:

      “Its rise and decay τ corresponded to the rise and decay τ of the fast positive current recorded from AnsACR_G86E at 0 mV and neutral pH, superimposed on the fast negative current reflecting the chromophore isomerization (Figure 4I, upper black trace). We interpret this positive current as an intramolecular proton transfer to the mutagenetically introduced primary acceptor (Glu86), which was suppressed by negative voltage (Figure 4I, lower black trace). Acidification increased the amplitude of the fast negative current ~10-fold (Figure 4I, black arrow) and shifted its V<sub>r</sub> ~100 mV to more depolarized values (Figure 4 – figure supplement 2A). This can be explained by passive inward movement of the RSB proton along the large electrochemical gradient.”

      Minor Corrections:

      (1) Line 204: Missing bracket in "phases in the WT (Figure 4D."

      The quoted sentence was deleted during the revision.

      (2) Line 288: Typo-"This Ala is conserved" should probably be "This Met is conserved."

      We mean here the Ala four residues downstream from the first Ala. To avoid confusion, we changed the cited sentence to the following:

      “The Ala corresponding to BR’s Gly122 is also found in AnsACR and NlCCR (Figure 5A)…”

      (3) Lines 702-704: Missing Addgene plasmid IDs in "(plasmids #XXX and #YYY, respectively)."

      In the revision, we added the missing plasmid IDs.

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      Note to all Reviewers:

      We would like to thank all the reviewers for their time and insightful feedback. In response to the comments and points raised, we have performed major revisions to our manuscript. We have expanded our analysis on the role of TP53 loss of function in BM activation (Figure 3), investigating human LUAD datasets as well as murine LUAD models. We show that TP53 pathway is significantly negatively correlated with BM, and that loss of TP53 leads to the acquisition of the basal-like phenotype regardless of the type of driver oncogene present (KRAS/EGFR). Furthermore, we added a new figure (Figure 7), where we demonstrate that type I interferon can promote BM activation in LUAD harboring TP53 mutations but not in those with wild type TP53. With this, we propose a mechanism of action of how a subset of LUAD tumors (TP53-mut) upregulate BM, become more aggressive and resistant to therapies.

      Finally, we have made the manuscript clearer and transparent by improving the presentation of plots, as well as including source data files and Rmarkdown files for reproducibility.

      Reviewer 1:

      Major comments

      R1-Comment 1: The authors did not submit with the manuscript all the results that they have obtained from their analysis, on which they based their claims. I suggest that the authors submit a SourceData file in Excel format. This file should contain the values and the relevant information for each of the plots presented in the main and supplementary figures. For example, in case of box plots, the five-number summary should be provided. Further, the p-values and the test used for their calculations should be also mentioned. The file could be organized in a way that the data and relevant information for each figure panel are presented in separated data sheets in order that the reader can easily navigate through the file and find the information for each figure panel fast. Similarly, the authors should provide access to the scripts that they have developed or adapted from published scripts to perform the analysis of the datasets and obtain the results presented in the manuscript. The access to the scripts used in the manuscript is important to reproduce analysis. The scripts can be deposited at github, for example.

      Reply: We thank the reviewer for their advice in making the presentation of our results and methods more transparent and reproducible. We have now provided the source data file (supplementary file 2), which contains relevant data for each figure. We have also uploaded Rmarkdown files to github and R Markdown HTML reports are compiled in Supplementary File 3, this shows how the analyses were performed and how each figure generated. All datasets required to reproduce the analyses and figures have also been added to Zenodo (10.5281/zenodo.16964654) and will be published when the article is in press.

      R1-Comment 2: The results and their interpretations are mainly done based on in silico analysis from publicly available transcriptomic datasets. The confirmation of the results obtained by the in silico analysis is limited to the last figure, in which the authors show results obtained by multiplexed immunohistochemistry and histo-cytometry of tissue microarrays from a curated cohort of FFPE samples. The relevance of the results obtained by the in silico analysis may increase if the authors could present results either in a conditional (lung-specific) Kras mutant mouse model, or patient-derived xenograft (PDX) mouse model of lung cancer. The PDX mouse model will be more suitable in case that access to genetically modified mouse models is not given and/or the time for the experiments is limited. In both cases, the hyperactivation of the small GTPase KRAS should expand the BM gene expression signature in the mouse lung in a Sox9-dependent manner, thereby leading to lung tumors. Further, Sox9 loss-of-function experiments should reduce the BM gene expression signature and favor the ALV gene expression signature. These results would strongly support the interpretation of the in silico results by the authors in the present manuscript, and would significantly increase the impact of the manuscript in the scientific field of lung cancer.

      Reply: We thank the reviewer for their insightful feedback on how to improve the impact of our study through further functional validation of in silico findings. To address this comment, we have performed additional analyses, including data and experiments from both murine and human LUAD model systems to elucidate a novel mechanism of BM activation in LUAD. We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion to pursue analysis of Sox9 involvement in regulating BM activation and agree that both KRAS and SOX9 activation are likely to be involved in at least some elements of the process of disease progression we described in this manuscript. Indeed, previous studies have completed the experiments suggested, demonstrating Sox9 knock-out reduced Kras driven tumour progression and morphological grade in vivo (PMID: 37258742 and 34021911); and was associated with loss of AT2 lineage identity (PMID: 37468622).

      Our analysis of human LUAD using scRNA-seq data has demonstrated that this differentiation spectrum in fact extends beyond loss of lineage fidelity and in a subset of cells leads to transdifferentiation to a basal-like cell state. In our revised manuscript, we have more clearly elucidated the role of KRAS and TP53 in these two events during LUAD progression, demonstrating that while oncogenic KRAS (and likely downstream SOX9 activation) can lead to the loss of lineage commitment in LUAD cells, mutations in TP53 are required for acquisition of the basal-like phenotype. We have also expanded on this mechanism identifying a novel role for type-1 interferon signaling in the presence of TP53 loss-of-function as a mechanism that can lead to BM activation and acquisition of a basal-like cell state in LUAD. The data related to these analyses are now presented in figures 3 and 7.

      In accordance with the 3Rs principles for ethical use of animals in research we have taken advantage of publicly available data from previous experiments analyzing conditional (lung-specific) Kras mutant mouse model to validate our in-silico findings. This confirmed our in silico analysis of human LUAD, demonstrating an important role for TP53 loss of function in regulating BM activation (presented in Figure 3E&F and Figure S3F&G)

      We also showed that the type I interferon signaling is capable of driving BM activation in LUAD but only in the context of TP53 loss-of-function. These experiments were performed using 3D organotypic cultures of H441 cells (human adenocarcinoma cell line with mutant TP53) and A549 cells (human adenocarcinoma cell line with wild-type TP53). These 3D cultures were treated with IFN-alpha, both BM and basal-like marker upregulation (MKI67, CDC20, TOP2A, S100A9, S100A2, SOX9 and KRT17) was observed only in LUAD cells carrying a mutation in TP53. These data are now presented in Figure S7D.

      R1-Comment 3: In general, the description of the results in the corresponding section of the manuscript can be improved to facilitate the understanding of the results presented.

      As an example, the figure 1B is described on page 13 as follows: "...we first used a publicly available microarray dataset [9] to identify genes differentially expressed between epithelial cells engaged in BM (embryonic day 14 [E14]) or ALV (embryonic day 19 [E19]) (Figure 1B and TABLE S1)." By looking at the plot in figure 1B, this description is not sufficient to understand what the authors present in this figure panel, not even after reading the corresponding figure legend.

      Reply: We thank the reviewer for their advice on making our manuscript clearer. Throughout the manuscript we have now edited the result descriptions, we have also provided further detail to the methods sections, figure legends and axes labels to enhance clarity and facilitate understanding of the analyses performed.

      In the example cited we have edited the sections referenced above as follows:

      “To test this hypothesis, we identified genes that were differentially expressed in epithelial cells engaged in active BM (corresponding to embryonic day 14) vs active ALV (corresponding to embryonic day 19), using a publicly available microarray dataset.”

      We have also changed the Y axis label of Figure 1B to: “log2(FC E19 [ALV] – E14[BM])”.

      The description in the figure legend has also been modified to provide more context: “Dot plot showing the identification of genes differentially expressed by epithelial cells during murine developmental-BM (embryonic day 14) and ALV (embryonic day 19) [1]. Genes with the highest Fold Change of expression between day 14 (BM) and 19 (ALV) of murine lung development are coloured green or red, respectively. These genes were used to generate ALV/BM signatures [9]

      R1-Comment 5: Another example is the description of the figure 3B on page 16: "This showed low levels of BM activation in tumour cells from residual disease (RD) that was significantly increased in samples with recurrent progressive disease (PD) (Figure 3B)." By looking figure 3B and the corresponding figure legend, one cannot find the group "residual disease (RD)".

      __Reply: __We thank the reviewer for their diligent reading and have now corrected the figures to provide clearer labelling of axes and maintain consistency throughout. In the example cited, we have corrected the axis label to Residual disease (RD) and partial response (PR).

      R1-Comment 6: Another example is the description of the figure 3C and 3D on page 16: "Single-cell analysis showed that both ALV-BM- and ALV-BM+ LUAD cells were increased in samples from recurrent progressive disease (Figure 3C,D)." By looking at figure 3D and the corresponding legend, I do not find the explanation of "TRUE" and "FALSE". The same is for figures 3J and 3M.

      Reply: For this example (Figure 3 in the original manuscript is now figure 4), TRUE/FALSE labels have been replaced by PR (partial response) and PD (progressive disease) in panel D; replaced by “Responder (R)” or “Non-responder (NR)” in panels J&M.

      R1-Comment 7: Other figure panels were also poorly described in the results section and in the corresponding legends. Further, the presentation of the results in the main and supplementary figures has to be improved. For example, labeling of the Y-axis in the figures 1H to 1J, 2C, 2D, 2G, 2H, 3B, 3C, 3J, 3L, etc. has to be improved. As a point of reference, I would suggest checking how other authors present similar results in life science journals. These deficiencies in the presentation and description of the results make it difficult for the readers to understand the manuscript.

      Reply: These axes labels have been changed throughout to provide more information. “BM” changed to “BM (ssGSEA score)” or “BM (module score)” and “ALV” changed to “ALV (ssGSEA score)” or “ALV (module score)” for figures 1H, 1I, 1J, S1H-L, 2C, 2D, 3B, 3F, S3E, S3F, S3G, 4B, 4C, 4J, 4L, S4C, S4D, S5A, 6A, S6A, S6B, ssGSEA score was applied to bulk RNAseq samples, and modules scores were calculated for single cells.

      Additionally:

      S2A, S2B – OS label changed to Survival probability/OS probability.

      S4H – y axis label changed to PDL1 (RPPA).

      S3B – y axis label changed to “Tumour mutational burden (mut/mB).

      S3C – y axis label changed to “Tobacco smoking (SBS mutational signature)”.

      4F – y axis label changed to “DFS (proportion)”.

      4H – y axis label changed to “PFS (proportion)”.

      R1-R1-Comment 8: The authors write on page 18 "Despite AT2 cells being well described as the cell of origin for LUAD, this population was significantly less abundant in LUAD samples compared to control, demonstrating a high degree of transcriptomic plasticity within LUAD epithelium (Figure 4D)." How can the authors show that these results are not produced by the process of integration of the four scRNA-seq NSCLC datasets, the implementation of a specific machine learning classifier for the cell type-classification, or the manually filtration to exclude doublets? For example, will the authors achieve the same (or similar) results using a different machine learning classifier? If yes, please include the results in the manuscript.

      Reply: The integration was performed using the method described by Stuart et al. (PMID: 31178118), implemented in the Seurat package. The term “machine learning classifier” has now been replaced by “label transfer” to clarify the method used and avoid confusion. Label transfer was only used to identify major cell types in the datasets used, i.e. the whole epithelial population. Doublet removal was performed as follows (and described in the methods section): epithelial cells were clustered using the shared nearest neighbor (SNN) modularity optimization algorithm implemented by the FindClusters function in the Seurat R package, based on 30 principal components and setting the resolution parameter to 0.1. This clustering solution identified multiple small clusters with divergent expression profiles to the majority of cells that were initially classified as epithelial (in the label transfer analysis). Manual examination of the marker genes for these small clusters showed they were characterized by expression of epithelial genes alongside canonical markers for either B cells (CD79A), macrophages (CD68, SPP1, APOE, CD14, MARCO) or Tcells/NK cells (CD3D, NKG7, CXCR4). These cells were therefore classed as heterotypic doublets and excluded from further analysis. All other cell types from the integrated datasets were analyzed in the same way, and no further epithelial clusters (that were not small clusters of doublets) were identified.

      Further clustering to identify epithelial subpopulations was performed on the integrated dataset and the results presented from this analysis represent the clustering solution that ensures all subpopulations were identified across datasets to mitigate any potential batch-effects not resolved by the integration process. Furthermore, our results showing that LUAD cells exhibit a high degree of transcriptomic plasticity were also confirmed by the lineage fidelity analysis (Figure 5G&I), which demonstrates this observation is not dependent on a single clustering, integration or machine learning algorithm. This observation is also supported by other studies that have described loss of lineage commitment during LUAD tumorigenesis, where tumour cells become transcriptionally and phenotypically distinct from healthy AT2 cells.

      Reviewer 1:

      Minor comments:

      __R1-Comment 9: __Please introduce the abbreviation for alveogenesis the first time that is used in the abstract, as it was done for branching morphogenesis.

      __Reply: __Abbreviation for alveogenesis has now been added to the abstract.

      R1-Comment 10: On page 18 the author write: "Consistent with the analyses presented above, pseudo bulk expression profiles for each sample showed that ALV and BM scores were significantly negatively correlated (r = -0.68, p = 4.1e-09)." Where are these results shown? I was not able to find these results. If they are not in the current version of the manuscript, please include the results

      Reply: Scatter plot showing the negative correlation has now been added as Figure S5A.

      __R1-Comment 11: __The authors should submit a supplementary table containing a list of the different data sets that were used for this manuscript. The table should include accession numbers and links to the different depositories, in which the data sets can be found. This will improve the overview of the datasets used in the study, as well as facilitate the finding of the datasets by the readers.

      Reply: The list of all datasets used in this study, together with accession numbers and links are now in Supplementary file1.

      R1-Comment 12: In figure 1G, change the color for FALSE in the legend.

      Reply: Color for FALSE changed in Figure 1G and Figure S1E.

      R1-Comment 13: Provide the complete list of mutated genes for Figure S2C.

      Reply: Figure S2C has been replaced by figures 3C (top mutated genes in LUAD-BM) and S3A (top mutated genes in LUAD-ALV).

      Reviewer 1 (Significance (required)):

      __R1-Comment 14: __Conceptually, Bienkowska KJ et al. propose that LUAD tumors undergo reversion from an alveogenic to branching morphogenic phenotype during disease progression, generating inflamed or basal-like cell states that are variably persistent following TKI or ICB treatments. This concept is in line with reports using murine models of Kras-driven LUAD. In addition, there are parallels with findings in idiopathic pulmonary fibrosis (IPF, another hyperproliferative lung disease), in which KRT5-/KRT17+ basaloid cells were transiently found, like the basal-like phenotype that Bienkowska KJ identified in human LUAD. In other words, the concept proposed by the authors is novel and in line with previous publication in LC and IPF.

      Response: We are glad the reviewer found our results novel and appreciated how they provide a linkage of previously defined mechanisms seen in murine developmental models to human cancer progression, and how they may be relevant for other diseases such as IPF.

      __R1-Comment 15: __The in silico analysis of publicly available transcriptomic datasets presented by Bienkowska KJ et al. is original and comprehensive. It is an interesting contribution to the cancer research field. However, the impact of their findings to this scientific field will significantly increase if the authors could confirm the interpretation of their results using other experimental systems in addition to the one used in the las figure. For example, the experiments that I suggested in point 2., using either conditional Kras transgenic mice or a PDX mouse model for lung cancer will not only confirm the concpet proposed by the authors, but it will also provide further mechanistic insides related to this model at cellular and molecular level.

      Response: We thank the reviewer for describing our analysis as original and comprehensive and their suggestion to develop the manuscript further with additional mechanistic analyses. We have comprehensively examined the mechanisms responsible for regulating BM activation using a combination of in vivo models and 3D organotypic cultures, elucidating a novel role for type-1 interferon signaling in the presence of TP53 loss-of-function as a mechanism that can lead to BM activation and acquisition of a basal-like cell state in LUAD. For further information regarding these additions to the revised manuscript, we direct the reviewer to the response provided to R1-comment 2 (above).

      __R1-Comment 16: __Overall, the manuscript by Bienkowska KJ et al. addresses topics that are relevant to the field of lung cancer, the leading cause of cancer-related deaths worldwide. The bioinformatic methods implemented are cutting-edge. However, the text of the manuscript and the presentation of the results in the figures have to be improved to better exploit the potential of their findings. In addition, further experiments should be performed to confirm (and perhaps complement) the interpretation of their findings. I hope that my comments support the authors to improve the manuscript to reach the standard of manuscripts recently published at renowned journals in Review COMMONS. I recommend a major revision of the manuscript before publication.

      __Reply: __We are pleased to read that the reviewer found the methods implemented by us to be cutting-edge, and that they recognized the relevance of this topic to the lung cancer field.

      We thank the reviewer for their comments, which have helped us to significantly improve our manuscript.

      We have made changes to how we present our data (as described in responses above) and performed further analyses to support our original findings. We have also now performed further in silico and functional analyses to expand and complement our original findings.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      R2-Comment 1: __The study is novel and interesting, but the mechanisms how the dysregulation of developmental program was driven by specific oncogene and how to link these signatures to therapy were also not clear. __

      __Reply: __We are pleased that the reviewer finds our study to be novel and interesting. We appreciate the reviewer pointing out the need to clarify the role of specific oncogenes to BM activation and response to therapies.

      We have now added further analyses and edited the text to examine and explain how the ALV and BM signatures are driven by different oncogenes (Figure 3 and results section “TP53 loss of function is required for BM activation”), which showed that common oncogenic drives (e.g. KRAS and EGFR) can drive reduced ALV signature expression but TP53 mutations (or deletion in murine models) was critical for driving BM activation. Implications for therapy response are shown in (Figure 4). We have shown that BM activation is a key determinant of tyrosine kinase inhibitor (TKI) resistance in LUAD, representing a frequently activated off-target mechanism of resistance that supersedes the presence of an actionable oncogenic driver in terms of response rates; and that the BM signature also identified patients that, although positive for immune checkpoint blockade (ICB) response biomarkers, will likely fail to respond to this treatment. In the manuscript we have now thoroughly revised these sections of the results to clarify the details associated with these conclusions (results sections: “BM activation is associated with targeted-therapy resistance in lung adenocarcinomas” and “BM activation predicts poor response to immune-checkpoint blockade”).

      We have also added further data to the manuscript elucidating the molecular mechanisms regulating BM activation (Figure 7), which has identified an important role for aberrant type-I interferon signaling in the context of mutant TP53.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      __R2-Comment 2: __The authors in this manuscript aimed to examine the role of developmental programmes, alveogenesis and branching morphogenesis (BM), in regulating phenotypic diversity in NSCLC. They demonstrated that developmental programmes (ALV and BM) frequently become

      dysregulated in NSCLC, with BM activation identifying aggressive LUAD that were resistant

      to multiple therapies, including TKIs and ICB. They found that BM activation in LUAD was associated with TP53 pathway mutations and required AT2 cells to lose their alveolar identity, acquiring a basallike state. The study is very intriguing, and the findings may pave a link to the disease progression and therapy resistance in LUAD.

      __Response: __We are pleased the reviewer found the study intriguing and with the potential to better understand LUAD progression and resistance to therapies.

      __R2-Comment 3: __The current results presented, although comprehensively presented, is still many an association study, the mechanisms how these dysregulations of developmental programmes driven by the driver oncogenes or carcinogens are still unknown.

      Response: We thank the reviewer for challenging us to further examine the molecular mechanisms underpinning our initial observations. As described above (see response to Reviewer #1 comment 2), we have performed additional in silico and mechanistic experimental analyses, which identified a novel role for type-I IFN signaling and TP53 loss-of-function in the activation of the BM program in LUAD. We hope these additions have enhanced the significance of the manuscript presented.

      __R2-Comment 4: __The NSCLC is a heterogeneous disease, LUAD and LUSC are two different diseases in terms of oncogenesis, driver mutations and response to treatment. The manuscript may either just focused on LUAD or describe results carefully to include both LUAD and LUSC. For example, in the result of abstract, only LUAD was described, there was no mention of LUSC.

      __Response: __We agree with the reviewer that NSCLC is a heterogeneous and complex disease. Indeed, this was in part what motivated us to investigate the role played by developmental processes in these distinct oncogenic processes. Our analyses showed that LUSC tumors were generally high for the BM signature (Figure 1I), which likely contributed to why this signature did not stratify survival rates for LUSC (Figure S2B). As a result, we opted to focus on LUAD as we found that BM activation was predictive of disease progression and survival in this NSCLC subtype. However, we did not completely remove LUSC from our manuscript to examine the degree to which LUAD tumors upregulating BM become “LUSC-like” and evaluate whether histological transformations occurred in LUAD cases with BM activation (as described in Figure 5 and the “BM activation in LUAD is associated with a basal-like phenotype” results section).

      We have also now added a description of results from both LUAD and LUSC analyses to the abstract to clarify these points.

      __R2-Comment 5: __The most common driver mutation of LUAD was EGFR, the authors also try to link the BM activation link to TKI resistance. I assumed that the TKIs most of the patients used were EGFR TKI, but the study did not examine the role of EGFR in the dysregulation of developmental programmes.

      __Response: __We would like to thank the reviewer for highlighting an important aspect of how our work fits with current clinical practice in LUAD management. Our analyses were carried out over multiple cohorts that include different patient demographics, which have varied prevalence for specific oncogenic driver mutations (with EGFR mutations typically being more prevalent in Asian cohorts and KRAS mutations generally being the most common oncogenic driver in Western cohorts). To examine these two common oncogenic drivers impact on BM activation, we now include a direct analysis of BM level in cases harboring these mutations (Figure S3D-E). This showed that that irrespective of oncogenic driver mutations TP53 loss of function was associated with increased BM. Our new analysis of KRAS driven mouse models has also showed that KRAS activation is sufficient to induce reduced expression of the ALV signature but failed to elicit increased BM activation. Given our analysis of human tumours showed that EGFR mutant LUAD cases with wild-type TP53 had low levels of BM activation (Figure S3D), we have no reason to suspect that EGFR mutations alone would be sufficient to elicit BM activation.

      __R2-Comment 6: __The TKI resistance was very complicated, not just EGFR T790M, the results and discussion regarding the activation of BM and TKI resistance seems not adequate. The mouse model used by Dr. Chang was mainly KRAS driven mouse lung cancer model (mice carrying RosatdT, Sox2EGFP, ShhCre, Sox9CKO, Fgfr2CKO, RosamTmG, Sox9CreER, Nkx2.1CreER, and KrasLSL-G12D alleles). It is not clear whether the EGFR driven (the most common driver of LUAD) mouse model also has same genetic signature. At least, the authors should describe or discuss these discrepancies.

      __Response: __We thank the reviewer for their comments and advice on making our manuscript clearer. We have now revised the description of BM activation and TKI resistance in the results section (titled “BM activation is associated with targeted-therapy resistance in lung adenocarcinomas”).

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      Referee #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary:

      Bienkowska KJ et al show in this manuscript a compilation of bioinformatic analysis of publicly available microarray datasets, bulk RNA sequencing (RNA-seq) datasets and single cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) datasets. One transcriptomic data set from mouse (Chang DR et al., Proc Natl Acad Sci USA, 2013) was analyzed in this manuscript to determine the gene expression signatures specific for the developmental processes alveogenesis (ALV) and branching morphogenesis (BM). The rest of the transcriptomic data sets that were analyzed for this manuscript were selected based on different parameters including the involvement of non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC), lug adenocarcinoma (LUAD), lung squamous cell carcinoma (LUSC) and various cohorts with different characteristics related to lung cancer (LC), such as mutations related to LC (in EGFR, ALK, BRAF, ROS1 and KRAS), and/or treatments/resistance of LC patients with/to tyrosine kinase inhibitors (TKI), anti-PD1 strategies, immune checkpoint blockade, (ICB) among others. In the last figure, the authors present results obtained by multiplexed immunohistochemistry and histo-cytometry of tissue microarrays from a curated cohort of archival formalin-fixed paraffin-embedded (FFPE) samples to confirm their interpretation of the results obtained by the transcriptomic analysis.

      The findings and/or claims of the authors could be summarized in the following bullet points:

      • After defining the ALV and BM gene expression signatures, the authors determined the expression of these signatures in bulk RNA-seq data sets from The Cancer Genome Atlas (TCGA). The ALV signature was significantly downregulated in LUAD and LUSC tumour subtypes compared to control samples, whereas BM was upregulated. These findings were validated using a Laser Capture Micro-Dissected (LCMD) microarray dataset (Lin J et al., AM J Pathol, 2014) comparing the epithelial compartment from non-tumour alveoli, non-tumour bronchi, LUAD and LUSC. Interestingly, ALV was suppressed and BM was activated in all LUSC tumours analyzed; whereas in LUAD tumours were heterogeneous for BM activation with some cases exhibiting ALV expression comparable to control tissue. In summary, the mutually antagonistic regulation of ALV and BM was found to account for a significant proportion of transcriptomic variance in human NSCLC bulk tissue datasets.
      • BM activation was associated with poor overall survival rates in five independent LUAD cohorts (p=2.04e-13); and was significantly prognostic for resistance to TKIs (p=0.003) and ICBs (p=0.014), in pre-treatment biopsies.
      • ScRNA-seq analysis revealed that malignant LUAD cells with loss of alveolar lineage fidelity predominantly acquired inflamed or basal-like cellular states, which were variably persistent in samples from TKI and ICB recurrence.
      • The authors conclude from their analysis that LUAD tumours undergo reversion from an alveogenic to branching morphogenic phenotype during disease progression, generating inflamed or basal-like cell states that are variably persistent following TKI or ICB treatments.

      Major comments:

      1. The authors did not submit with the manuscript all the results that they have obtained from their analysis, on which they based their claims. I suggest that the authors submit a SourceData file in Excel format. This file should contain the values and the relevant information for each of the plots presented in the main and supplementary figures. For example, in case of box plots, the five-number summary should be provided. Further, the p-values and the test used for their calculations should be also mentioned.

      The file could be organized in a way that the data and relevant information for each figure panel are presented in separated data sheets in order that the reader can easily navigate through the file and find the information for each figure panel fast.

      Similarly, the authors should provide access to the scripts that they have developed or adapted from published scripts to perform the analysis of the datasets and obtain the results presented in the manuscript. The access to the scripts used in the manuscript is important to reproduce analysis. The scripts can be deposited at github, for example. 2. The results and their interpretations are mainly done based on in silico analysis from publicly available transcriptomic datasets. The confirmation of the results obtained by the in silico analysis is limited to the last figure, in which the authors show results obtained by multiplexed immunohistochemistry and histo-cytometry of tissue microarrays from a curated cohort of FFPE samples.

      The relevance of the results obtained by the in silico analysis may increase if the authors could present results either in a conditional (lung-specific) Kras mutant mouse model, or patient-derived xenograft (PDX) mouse model of lung cancer. The PDX mouse model will be more suitable in case that access to genetically modified mouse models is not given and/or the time for the experiments is limited. In both cases, the hyperactivation of the small GTPase KRAS should expand the BM gene expression signature in the mouse lung in a Sox9-dependent manner, thereby leading to lung tumors. Further, Sox9 loss-of-function experiments should reduce the BM gene expression signature and favor the ALV gene expression signature. These results would strongly support the interpretation of the in silico results by the authors in the present manuscript, and would significantly increase the impact of the manuscript in the scientific field of lung cancer. 3. In general, the description of the results in the corresponding section of the manuscript can be improved to facilitate the understanding of the results presented. As an example, the figure 1B is described on page 13 as follows:

      "...we first used a publicly available microarray dataset [9] to identify genes differentially expressed between epithelial cells engaged in BM (embryonic day 14 [E14]) or ALV (embryonic day 19 [E19]) (Figure 1B and TABLE S1)."

      By looking at the plot in figure 1B, this description is not sufficient to understand what the authors present in this figure panel, not even after reading the corresponding figure legend.

      Another example is the description of the figure 3B on page 16:

      "This showed low levels of BM activation in tumour cells from residual disease (RD) that was significantly increased in samples with recurrent progressive disease (PD) (Figure 3B)."

      By looking figure 3B and the corresponding figure legend, one cannot find the group "residual disease (RD)".

      Another example is the description of the figure 3C and 3D on page 16:

      "Single-cell analysis showed that both ALV-BM- and ALV-BM+ LUAD cells were increased in samples from recurrent progressive disease (Figure 3C,D)."

      By looking at figure 3D and the corresponding legend, I do not find the explanation of "TRUE" and "FALSE". The same is for figures 3J and 3M.

      Other figure panels were also poorly described in the results section and in the corresponding legends.

      Further, the presentation of the results in the main and supplementary figures has to be improved. For example, labeling of the Y-axis in the figures 1H to 1J, 2C, 2D, 2G, 2H, 3B, 3C, 3J, 3L, etc. has to be improved. As a point of reference, I would suggest checking how other authors present similar results in life science journals.

      These deficiencies in the presentation and description of the results make it difficult for the readers to understand the manuscript. 4. The authors write on page 18

      "Despite AT2 cells being well described as the cell of origin for LUAD, this population was significantly less abundant in LUAD samples compared to control, demonstrating a high degree of transcriptomic plasticity within LUAD epithelium (Figure 4D)."

      How can the authors show that these results are not produced by the process of integration of the four scRNA-seq NSCLC datasets, the implementation of a specific machine learning classifier for the cell type-classification, or the manually filtration to exclude doublets? For example, will the authors achieve the same (or similar) results using a different machine learning classifier? If yes, please include the results in the manuscript.

      Minor comments:

      1. Please introduce the abbreviation for alveogenesis the first time that is used in the abstract, as it was done for branching morphogenesis.
      2. On page 18 the author write:

      "Consistent with the analyses presented above, pseudo bulk expression profiles for each sample showed that ALV and BM scores were significantly negatively correlated (r = -0.68, p = 4.1e-09)."

      Where are these results shown? I was not able to find these results. If they are not in the current version of the manuscript, please include the results 7. The authors should submit a supplementary table containing a list of the different data sets that were used for this manuscript. The table should include accession numbers and links to the different depositories, in which the data sets can be found. Thiy will improve the overview of the datasets used in the study, as well as facilitate the finding of the datasets by the readers. 8. In figure 1G, change the color for FALSE in the legend. 9. Provide the complete list of mutated genes for Figure S2C

      Significance

      Conceptually, Bienkowska KJ et al. propose that LUAD tumors undergo reversion from an alveogenic to branching morphogenic phenotype during disease progression, generating inflamed or basal-like cell states that are variably persistent following TKI or ICB treatments. This concept is in line with reports using murine models of Kras-driven LUAD. In addition, there are parallels with findings in idiopathic pulmonary fibrosis (IPF, another hyperproliferative lung disease), in which KRT5-/KRT17+ basaloid cells were transiently found, like the basal-like phenotype that Bienkowska KJ identified in human LUAD. In other words, the concept proposed by the authors is novel and in line with previous publication in LC and IPF.

      The in silico analysis of publicly available transcriptomic datasets presented by Bienkowska KJ et al. is original and comprehensive. It is an interesting contribution to the cancer research field. However, the impact of their findings to this scientific field will significantly increase if the authors could confirm the interpretation of their results using other experimental systems in addition to the one used in the las figure. For example, the experiments that I suggested in point 2., using either conditional Kras transgenic mice or a PDX mouse model for lung cancer will not only confirm the concpet proposed by the authors, but it will also provide further mechanistic insides related to this model at cellular and molecular level.

      Overall, the manuscript by Bienkowska KJ et al. addresses topics that are relevant to the field of lung cancer, the leading cause of cancer-related deaths worldwide. The bioinformatic methods implemented are cutting-edge. However, the text of the manuscript and the presentation of the results in the figures have to be improved to better exploit the potential of their findings. In addition, further experiments should be performed to confirm (and perhaps complement) the interpretation of their findings. I hope that my comments support the authors to improve the manuscript to reach the standard of manuscripts recently published at renowned journals in Review COMMONS. I recommend a major revision of the manuscript before publication.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Minor Issues:

      (1) As the authors mention, MKs have been suggested to mature rapidly at the sinusoids, and both integrin KO and laminin KO MKs appear mislocalized away from the sinusoids. Additionally, average MK distances from the sinusoid may also help separate whether the maturation defects could be in part due to impaired migration towards CXCL12 at the sinusoid. Presumably, MKs could appear mislocalized away from the sinusoid given the data presented suggesting they are leaving the BM and entering circulation. Additional commentary on intrinsic (ex-vivo) MK maturation phenotypes may help strengthen the author's conclusions

      Thank you for your insightful suggestion regarding intrinsic MK maturation defects in integrin KO and laminin KO mice. This indeed could be the case. We have now addressed this possibility in the revised discussion section (page 14; lines 14-15), acknowledging intrinsic maturation defects as a potential contributor to observed maturation issues.

      (2) It would be helpful if the authors could comment as to whether MKs are detectable in blood.

      We appreciate the opportunity to clarify this point. Intact Itgb1<sup>-/-</sup>/Itgb3<sup>-/-</sup> MKs were not detected in the peripheral blood by either flow cytometry or blood smear analysis. This indicates that megakaryocytes do not normally circulate in the systemic bloodstream. Instead, we observed large MK nuclei trapped specifically within the lung capillaries, consistent with their known physical retention in the pulmonary circulation during platelet release. This explanation is now better explained on page 10, lines 14-19.

      (3) Supplementary Figure 6 - shows no effect on in vitro MK maturation and proplt, or MK area - But Figures 6B/6C demonstrate an increase in total MK number in MMP-inhibitor treated mice compared to control. This discrepancy should be better discussed.

      We have now expanded the discussion in the revised manuscript to address the different results obtained in vitro and in vivo, emphazing that the in vitro model may not fully recapitulate the complex and dynamic bone marrow ECM niche. Additionally, differences in the source and regulation of MMPs likely contribute to the differing outcomes, underlining the importance of studying these processes within their physiological context. For instance, non-megakaryocytic sources of MMPs and paracrine regulatory mechanisms may play a critical role within the physiological microenvironment, ultimately affecting MK proliferation and maturation in a manner not observed in simplified culture systems. This clarifications can be found on page 12, lines 6-17.

      (4) A function of the ECM discussed relates to MK maturation but in the B1/3 integrin KO mice, the presence of the ECM cage is reduced but there appears to be no significant impact upon maturation (Supplementary Figure 4). By contrast, MMP inhibition in vivo (but not in vitro) reduces MK maturation. These data could be better clarified in the text.

      Thank you for raising this important point. While Suppl. Figure 4 shows normal size and ploidy in DKO MK, a critical defect is revealed at the ultrastructural level. Mature DKO MKs exhibit severe dysplasia of the demarcation membrane system (DMS), characterized by extensive membrane accumulation and abnormal archirecture, with no typical platelet territories visible. This DMS defect directly impairs MK maturation and explains the thrombocytopenia observed in these mice. Increased emperipolesis further indicated disrupted maturation processes. These observations confirm the essential role of the ECM cage in supporting proper DMS organization and overall MK maturation in vivo, consistent with findings from MMP inhibition experiments. We have clarified and emphasized the significance of these DMS abnormalities in the revised manuscripts, including updated results (Page 9, lines 17-21) and a new EM image in Suppl. Figure 4.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors report on a thorough investigation of the interaction of megakaryocytes (MK) with their associated ECM during maturation. They report convincing evidence to support the existence of a dense cage-like pericellular structure containing laminin γ1 and α4 and collagen IV, which interacts with integrins β1 and β3 on MK and serve to fix the perisinusoidal localization of MK and prevent their premature intravasation. As with everything in nature, the authors support a Goldilocks range of MK-ECM interactions - inability to digest the ECM via inhibition of MMPs leads to insufficient MK maturation and development of smaller MK. This important work sheds light into the role of cell-matrix interactions in MK maturation, and suggests that higher-dimensional analyses are necessary to capture the full scope of cellular biology in the context of their microenvironment. The authors have responded appropriately to the majority of my previous comments.

      We sincerely thank the reviewer for their insightful comments.

      Some remaining points:

      In a previous critique, I had suggested that "it is unclear how activation of integrins allows the MK to become "architects for their ECM microenvironment" as the authors posit. A transcriptomic analysis of control and DKO MKs may help elucidate these effects". The authors pointed out the technical difficulty of obtained sufficient numbers of MK for such analysis, which I accept, and instead analyzed mature platelets, finding no difference between control and DKO platelets. This is not necessarily surprising, since mature circulating platelets have no need to engage an ECM microenvironment, and for the same reason I would suggest that mature platelet analyses are not representative of MK behavior as regards ECM interactions.

      We fully agree with the reviewer that platelet analyses do not accurately reflect the behavior of MKs in the context of interactions with the ECM. This understanding is also one of the reasons why we chose not to include RT-PCR data on platelets in our manuscript. Instead, we emphasize the role of integrins as essential regulators of ECM remodeling, as they transmit traction forces that can significantly influence this process. We also report reduced RhoA activation in DKO MK, which is likely to affect ECM organization. We believe that these explanations contribute to a clearer understanding of how integrin activation enables megakaryocytes to act as "architects" of their ECM microenvironment.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study makes a significant contribution to understanding the microenvironment of megakaryocytes (MKs) in the bone marrow, identifying an extracellular matrix (ECM) cage structure that influences MK localization and maturation. The authors provide compelling evidence for the presence of this ECM cage and its role in MK homeostasis, employing an array of sophisticated imaging techniques and molecular analyses.The authors have addressed most of the concerns raised in the previous review, providing clarifications and additional data that strengthen their conclusion.

      More broadly, this work adds to a growing recognition of the ECM as an active participant in haematopoietic cell regulation in the bone marrow microenvironment. This work could pave the way to future studies investigating how the megakaryocytes' ECM cage affects their function as part of the haematopoietic stem cell niche, and by extension, influences global haematopoiesis.

      We thank this reviewer for providing such constructive feedback.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors of this study propose a model in which NPY family regulators antagonize the activity of the pid mutation in the context of floral development and other auxin-related phenotypes. This is hypothesized to occur through regulation of or by PID and its action on the PIN1 auxin transporter.

      Strengths:

      The findings are intriguing.

      Weaknesses and Major Comments:

      (1) While the findings are indeed intriguing, the mechanism of action and interaction among these components remains poorly understood. The study would benefit from significantly more thorough and focused experimental analyses to truly advance our understanding of pid phenotypes and the interplay among PID, NPYs, and PIN1.

      (2) The manuscript appears hastily assembled, with key methodological and conceptual details either missing or inconsistent. Although issues with figure formatting and clarity (e.g., lack of scale bars and inconsistent panel layout) may alone warrant revision, the content remains the central concern and must take precedence over presentation.

      (3) Given that fertile progeny are obtained from pid-TD pin1/PIN1 and pid NPY OE lines, it would be important to analyze whether mutations and associated phenotypes are heritable. This is especially relevant since CRISPR lines can be mosaic. Comprehensive genotyping and inheritance studies are required.

      (4) The Materials and Methods section lacks essential information on how the lines were generated, genotyped, propagated, and scored. There is also generally no mention of how reproducible the observations were. These genetic experiments need to be described in detail, including the number of lines analyzed and consistency across replicates.

      (5) The nature of the pid alleles used in the study is not described. This is essential for interpretation.

      (6) The authors measure PIN1 phosphorylation in response to NPY overexpression and conclude that the newly identified phosphorylation sites are inhibitory because they do not overlap with known activating sites. This conclusion is speculative without functional validation. Functional assays are available and must be included to substantiate this claim.

      (7) Figure 5 implies that NPY1 acts downstream of PID, but there is no biochemical evidence supporting this hierarchy. Additional experiments are needed to demonstrate the epistatic or regulatory relationship.

      (8) The authors should align their genetic observations with cell biological data on PIN1, PIN2, and PID localization and distribution.

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors of this study propose a model in which NPY family regulators antagonize the activity of the pid mutation in the context of floral development and other auxin-related phenotypes. This is hypothesized to occur through regulation of or by PID and its action on the PIN1 auxin transporter.

      Strengths:

      The findings are intriguing.

      We are pleased that the reviewer found the work interesting!

      Weaknesses and Major Comments:

      (1) While the findings are indeed intriguing, the mechanism of action and interaction among these components remains poorly understood. The study would benefit from significantly more thorough and focused experimental analyses to truly advance our understanding of pid phenotypes and the interplay among PID, NPYs, and PIN1.

      Elucidating the mechanism of action and interaction among these components will require years of additional research. As key steps toward these goals, our work clearly established that 1) NPY1 functions downstream of PID, as overexpression of NPY1 completely suppressed pid phenotypes. This is surprising because the predominant model is that PID functions by directly phosphorylating and activating PINs without the need of NPY1 involvement.  2) In the absence of PID, NPY1 protein accumulated less in the NPY1 OE lines, suggesting that PID plays a role in affecting NPY1 stability/degradation/accumulation. We are not sure what are the exact experiments this reviewer is proposing.

      Regarding pid phenotypes, pid is completely sterile in our conditions, while the suppression by NPY1 OE is very clear and the lines are fertile.

      (2) The manuscript appears hastily assembled, with key methodological and conceptual details either missing or inconsistent. Although issues with figure formatting and clarity (e.g., lack of scale bars and inconsistent panel layout) may alone warrant revision, the content remains the central concern and must take precedence over presentation.

      We did not include scale bars in our figures because the phenotype of interest is presence/absence of flowers. Readers should compare the mutants with the rescued plants and the WT plants.

      (3) Given that fertile progeny are obtained from pid-TD pin1/PIN1 and pid NPY OE lines, it would be important to analyze whether mutations and associated phenotypes are heritable. This is especially relevant since CRISPR lines can be mosaic. Comprehensive genotyping and inheritance studies are required.

      We only use stable, heritable, Cas9-free mutants in our studies.  We genotype our mutants in every generation.  More details have been added to the Materials and Methods section. We provide the genetic materials we use to the scientific community when requested to enable verification and extension of our results. 

      (4) The Materials and Methods section lacks essential information on how the lines were generated, genotyped, propagated, and scored. There is also generally no mention of how reproducible the observations were. These genetic experiments need to be described in detail, including the number of lines analyzed and consistency across replicates.

      More details have been added to the Materials and Methods section

      The criticism is not fully accurate. For example, we stated in the main text: “We genotyped T2 progenies from two pid-c1 heterozygous T1 plants (#68 and # 83) for the presence of pid-c1 and for pid-c1 zygosity. We used mCherry signal, which was included in the NPY1 OE construct, as a proxy to determine the presence and absence of the NPY1 transgene. For each line, we identified T2 plants without the NPY1 transgene and without the pid-c1 mutation (called WT-68 and WT-83, respectively). We also isolated T2 plants that contained the NPY1 overexpression construct, but did not have the pid-c1 mutation (called NPY1 OE #68 in WT, and NPY1 OE #83 in WT). Finally, we identified T2 plants that were pid-c1 homozygous and that had the NPY1 transgene (called NPY1 OE #68 in pid-c1 and NPY1 OE #83 in pid-c1). These genetic materials enabled us to compare the same NPY1 OE transgenic event in different genetic backgrounds.”

      The genetic materials used are freely available to the scientific community.  We would like to point out that we used several pin1 and pid alleles to make sure that the phenotypes are caused by the genes of interest.

      (5) The nature of the pid alleles used in the study is not described. This is essential for interpretation.

      The mutants were described in a previous paper (M. Mudgett, Z. Shen, X. Dai, S.P. Briggs, & Y. Zhao, Suppression of pinoid mutant phenotypes by mutations in PIN-FORMED 1 and PIN1-GFP fusion, Proc. Natl. Acad. Sci. U.S.A. 120 (48) e2312918120, https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.2312918120 (2023).  We have added the relevant information to Materials and Methods.

      (6) The authors measure PIN1 phosphorylation in response to NPY overexpression and conclude that the newly identified phosphorylation sites are inhibitory because they do not overlap with known activating sites. This conclusion is speculative without functional validation. Functional assays are available and must be included to substantiate this claim.

      We concluded that the phosphorylation of PINs in NPY1 OE is inhibitory on the basis of the following: 1) pid is suppressed in pin1 heterozygous backgrounds and by PIN1-GFP<sub>HDR,</sub> demonstrating that partial loss of function of PIN1 or a decrease in PIN1 gene dosage, which decreases PIN1 protein expression, caused the suppression of pid. 2) pid is completely suppressed by NPY1 OE, which caused an increase of PIN phosphorylation, suggesting that phosphorylation of PINs in NPY1 OE lines is inhibitory.  It is true that we do not have biochemical data to support the conclusion. We would like to point out that the phosphorylation sites in PINs identified in this work do overlap with previously identified sites.

      PIN activity assays are conducted in heterologous systems that do not include NPY proteins. Since NPY is important for PIN activities, we believe that these assays may provide misleading results. Moreover, PIN1 is likely part of a large protein complex.  Without knowing the composition of the complex, functional assays in heterologous systems will not be interpretable.

      (7) Figure 5 implies that NPY1 acts downstream of PID, but there is no biochemical evidence supporting this hierarchy. Additional experiments are needed to demonstrate the epistatic or regulatory relationship.

      We show that overexpression of NPY1 completely suppressed the pid phenotype, and this epistatic relationship indicates that NPY1 functions downstream of PID. Moreover, we report that PID is required for NPY1 accumulation, indicating that PID is upstream of NPY1.

      (8) The authors should align their genetic observations with cell biological data on PIN1, PIN2, and PID localization and distribution.

      We are hesitating in using traditional PIN1-GFP, PIN2-GFP lines, as they are not stable in our hands. Localization of PID is still not clear. We have generated PID-GFP<sub>HDR</sub> lines, but we could not detect any fluorescent signals (unpublished results).  In addition, maize PINOID (BIF2) localizes to the nucleus, cytoplasm and cell periphery (Skirpan, A., Wu, X. and McSteen, P. (2008), Genetic and physical interaction suggest that BARREN STALK1 is a target of BARREN INFLORESCENCE2 in maize inflorescence development. The Plant Journal, 55: 787-797. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1365-313X.2008.03546.x)

      We would rather wait for the proper genetic materials before devoting our effort to this.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study is well-conducted, revealing that NPY1, with previously less-characterized molecular functions, can suppress pid mutant phenotypes with a phosphorylation-based mechanism. Overexpression of NPY1 (NPY1-OE) results in PIN phosphorylation at unique sites and bypasses the requirement for PID for this event. Conversely, a C-terminal deleted form of NPY1 (NPY1-dC) fails to rescue pid despite promoting a certain phospho-profile in PIN proteins.

      Strengths:

      (1) The careful genetic analyses of pid suppression by NPY1-OE and the inability of NPY1dC to do the same.

      (2) Phospho-proteomics approaches reveal that NPY1-OE induces phosphorylation of PINs at non-canonical sites, independent of PID.

      Thank you for having accurately summarized the main findings

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The native role of NPY1 is not tested by phospho-proteomics in loss-of-function npy1 mutants. Such analysis would be crucial to demonstrate that NPY1 is required for the observed phosphorylation events.

      This is an excellent point and we agree with the reviewer that analyzing loss-of-function npy mutants is important. The challenge is that we need to knockout NPY1, NPY3, and NPY5 to phenocopy pid. We will also need to find a way to suppress the npy triple mutants, which are sterile, so that we can have meaningful comparisons.

      (2) The functional consequences of the newly identified phosphorylation sites in PINs remain speculative. Site-directed mutagenesis (phospho-defective and phospho-mimetic) would help clarify their physiological roles.

      We agree with the reviewer on this point as well. However, this is not trivial, as we have uncovered so many phosphorylation sites.

      (3) The kinase responsible for NPY1-mediated phosphorylation remains unidentified. Since NPY1 is a non-kinase protein, a model involving recruitment of partner kinases (e.g., PIN-phosphorylating kinases other than PID) should be considered or discussed.

      we will add a sentence to mention D6PK and other kinases in the Discussion in the revised version.  We are hoping that the kinases will come out of future forward genetic screens.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript from Mudgett et al. explores the relative roles of PID and NPY1 in auxin-dependent floral initiation in Arabidopsis. Micro vectorial auxin flows directed by PIN1 are essential to flower initiation, and loss of PIN1 or two of its regulators, PID and NPY1 (in a yucca-deficient background) phenocopies the pinformed phenotype. This group has previously shown that PID-PIN1 interactions and function are dosage-dependent. The authors pick up this thread by demonstrating that a heterozygote containing a CRISPR deletion of one copy of PIN1 can restore quasi-wild type floral initiation to pid.

      The authors then show that overexpression of NPY1 is sufficient to more or less restore wild-type floral initiation to the pid mutant. The authors claim that this result demonstrates that NPY1 functions downstream of PID, as this ectopic abundance of NPY1 resulted in phosphorylation of PIN1 at sites that differ from sites of action of PID. The authors pursue evidence that PID action via NPY1 is analogous to the mode of action by which phot1/2 act on NPH3 in seedling phototropism. Such a model is supported by the evidence presented herein that the C terminus of NPY1, which has abundant Ser/Thr content, is phosphorylated, and that the deletion of this domain prevents overexpression compensation of the pinformed phenotype.

      While the results presented support evidence in the literature that PID acts on NPY1 to regulate PIN1 function, it is also possible that NPY1 overexpression results in limited expansion of phosphorylation targets observed with other AGC kinases. And if the phot model is any indication, there may be other PID targets that modulate PIN1-dependent floral initiation.

      However, overexpression of the NPY1 C-terminal deletion construct resulted in phosphorylation of both PIN1 and PIN2 and agravitropic root growth similar to what is observed in pin2 mutants. This suggests that direct PID phosphorylation of PINs and action via NPY1 can be distinguished by phosphorylation sites and by growth phenotypes.

      Strengths:

      A very important effort that places NPY1 downstream of PID in floral initiation.

      We thank the reviewer for the comments.

      Weaknesses:

      As PID has been shown to act on sites that regulate PIN protein polarity as well as PIN protein function, it would be useful if the authors consider how their results would fit/not fit with a model where combinatorial function of NPY1 and PID regulate PIN1 in a manner similar to the way that PID appears to function combinatorially with D6PK on PIN3

      We agree with the reviewer that we do not have a complete picture of how NPY, PID, PIN work together to control flower initiation. Some aspects of our results are difficult to reconcile with the model of PIN1 and PID acting in tandem, i.e., by PID directly phosphorylating and activating PIN1. Indeed, our results suggest that PIN1 and PID have opposite effects on organogenesis. For example, heterozygous pin1 (or PIN1-GFP<sub>HDR,</sub> which is presumably less active than wild type PIN1) suppresses the pid phenotype.  Moreover, pid and pin1 have opposite effects on cotyledon number and true leaf number. Mutations in PID lead to more cotyledons and more true leaves than WT whereas pin1 mutants make fewer cotyledons and fewer true leaves than WT (Bennett SRM, Alvarez J, Bossinger G, Smyth DR (1995) Morphogenesis in pinoid mutants of Arabidopsis thaliana. The Plant Journal 8: 505-520).  We have elaborated on this point in the last paragraph of the Discussion.

      The genetic materials we have generated may allow us to uncover additional components in the pathway from forward genetic screens, which may eventually lead to a clear picture.

    1. Briefing sur l'impact de l'IA sur l'enseignement sur France Culture

      Ce document de briefing analyse les thèmes principaux, les idées essentielles et les faits importants issus des discussions sur l'intégration de l'intelligence artificielle dans l'éducation.

      1. L'IA dans l'enseignement : omniprésence, défis et opportunités

      L'IA, en particulier les IA génératives grand public, est déjà massivement présente dans les pratiques des élèves et, dans une moindre mesure, des enseignants.

      Selon le ministère de l'Éducation nationale, 80% des élèves et 20% des professeurs utilisent déjà l'IA.

      • Usages des élèves : Les élèves utilisent l'IA pour corriger des textes, reformuler des cours, mieux comprendre des notions, trouver des définitions de mots, et parfois pour tricher.

      Un élève témoigne : "Je lui demande quand j'ai besoin d'aide pour faire les dissertations de philosophie ou de français. (...) il te mâche un petit peu le travail."

      Cependant, il y a aussi une conscience des limites : "parfois il donne des informations fausses et donc faut quand même vérifier si c'est ça ou pas."

      Un exemple concret de triche est cité : une élève utilisant une IA lors d'un devoir surveillé pour obtenir les solutions à l'oreille.

      • Problèmes cognitifs : Christophe Caillot, professeur d'histoire, souligne que les IA génératives sont "extrêmement problématiques au point de vue cognitif" car elles agissent comme des "courts circuits dans les apprentissages".

      Il explique qu'apprendre est un "chemin, un parcours qu'on doit faire assez long chemin d'embûe" et que l'IA "nous empêche d'accéder au savoir aux apprentissages".

      • Perte de sens de l'apprentissage : L'usage de l'IA est vu comme "dévalorisant" les apprentissages et posant un "problème anthropologique" en expliquant "qu'on peut se passer d'apprendre dans la vie", ce qui revient à "se passer de ce qui fait un peu le sel de la vie".

      • Rôle des IA conçues pour l'éducation : Orian Ledroit, directrice générale d'EdTech France, distingue les IA grand public (comme ChatGPT) des "autres IA qui sont aussi dans les classes mais qui ont été conçus à des fins éducatives et qui n'ont pas ni les mêmes impacts ni les mêmes modèles technologiques et qui sont (...) utiles à des apprentissages qui sont plus stimulants plus personnalisés".

      Elle mentionne des études montrant des effets positifs et négatifs selon le contexte, l'accompagnement et les utilisateurs, notamment sur la motivation à apprendre (réduction de la peur de l'échec).

      • Manque de recul et de formation : Jada Pistili, docteure en philosophie spécialisée dans l'éthique de l'IA, souligne le manque de recul scientifique pour évaluer les impacts à long terme de ces technologies.

      "On est tous un peu des cobaye en fait," dit-elle, insistant sur l'approche "mitigée" nécessaire. Elle mentionne également le manque de formation des enseignants.

      2. Le débat sur la personnalisation et le remplacement des enseignants

      • L'argument de la personnalisation (EdTech) : Orian Ledroit défend que l'IA peut "donner les moyens aux enseignants (...) d'identifier encore mieux peut-être encore plus facilement les fragilités d'un élève ou au contraire les facilités de l'autre" et ainsi permettre une "différenciation" ou "personnalisation" de l'apprentissage.

      Elle affirme que l'IA ne vise pas à remplacer les enseignants mais à "soutenir leur pratique pédagogique".

      • La critique de la personnalisation (Syndicat enseignant) : Christophe Caillot rejette l'argument de la personnalisation comme un "argument marketing", expliquant qu'une IA, n'étant pas une personne, "ne peut pas personnaliser".

      Il compare les IA éducatives actuelles aux "teaching machines" de Skinner des années 50, qui n'ont pas abouti à une révolution.

      Pour lui, la solution aux difficultés des enseignants réside dans l'embauche de personnel humain ("des enseignants, des CPE des AESH des AED et cetera des humains en fait") plutôt que dans l'adoption d'IA qui posent des "problèmes écologiques monstrueux" et sont "fondées sur le pillage des données".

      • La peur du remplacement : Le "spectre du remplacement" est une inquiétude majeure chez les enseignants, comme en témoigne la forte participation aux formations syndicales sur le sujet.

      Christophe Caillot cite des "expérimentations déjà aux États-Unis en Angleterre en Corée du Sud de classe voire d'école sans prof", y voyant le véritable objectif de ces entreprises : "si ces tech elles veulent exister (...) elles ont besoin à un moment que de prendre la place des enseignants il y a pas d'autres solutions."

      • L'enseignant augmenté : Orian Ledroit évoque l'idée d'"augmenter l'enseignant" en automatisant les tâches chronophages qui "ne relèvent pas de la pratique pédagogique", comme la gestion des emplois du temps, la notation, la correction des copies et la préparation des cours.

      Christophe Caillot y voit une vision "transhumaniste" qui suggère que les enseignants actuels sont "insuffisants".

      3. IA, service public et modèle économique

      • Articulation public-privé : Orian Ledroit rappelle que le secteur de l'éducation travaille déjà avec des entreprises privées (ex: manuels scolaires) et que "quand on développe un outil d'intelligence artificielle à des fins éducatives on fait le pari de on investit on fait de la recherche et développement".

      L'État, selon elle, prend moins de risques.

      Elle insiste sur le fait que les logiciels éducatifs doivent être "conformes à un cadre qui est défini par l'État et notamment qui prévoit le fait d'être conforme à toutes les réglementations européennes en matière de données personnelles RGPD et cetera".

      • Critique de la marchandisation de l'éducation : Christophe Caillot dénonce le fait que la tech considère l'éducation comme un "marché parmi d'autres", ce qui est en contradiction avec la vision de l'école comme "service public" et "bien commun".

      Il estime que la "recherche du profit rentre en concurrence s'affronte avec la défense du bien commun", citant l'exemple de la privatisation de l'eau.

      • Transparence et biais : Jada Pistili suggère que l'Open Source pourrait être une solution pour la "transparence" des systèmes d'IA, notamment concernant les "données d'entraînement" et les "biais" qui en découlent.

      Orian Ledroit affirme que les IA éducatives, développées avec des pédagogues, intègrent la correction des biais dès la conception, contrairement aux IA génératives grand public.

      Christophe Caillot contredit cette affirmation en citant l'exemple de ChatGPT produisant des interprétations biaisées de la laïcité française.

      • Double discours : Jada Pistili observe une "forme d'hypocrisie" et un "double mesure et double poids" dans les politiques publiques : on interdit aux élèves d'utiliser l'IA pour les devoirs, mais on dote les enseignants d'outils basés sur l'IA, ce qui crée un manque de sens pour les élèves.

      Elle insiste sur la nécessité d'un "vrai programme, une vraie pédagogie" pour la formation à l'IA des enseignants, afin de ne pas "dénigrer un peu la figure de l'enseignant".

      4. Bilan et perspectives

      Le débat révèle une tension fondamentale entre le potentiel de l'IA à "bouleverser l'éducation" et les inquiétudes profondes quant à ses implications cognitives, éthiques et sociétales.

      • La rapidité du changement : Jada Pistili conclut que "tout va un peu trop vite" et que la société "tâtonne" face à une technologie qui "va transformer plein de domaines".
      • L'autonomie des élèves : Christophe Caillot insiste sur la nécessité de "maintenir la capacité de nos élèves des futures générations à ne pas utiliser les IA" et à "maintenir son autonomie par rapport à ses soi-disants outils", plutôt que de les former à les utiliser "de manière névrotique".
      • La crise de l'école : Orian Ledroit souligne les défis actuels de l'école publique (reproduction des inégalités, baisse du niveau, manque de profs) et voit l'IA comme un moyen "pragmatique et concret de s'appuyer sur des outils qui ont fait leurs preuves" pour y répondre, en attendant des investissements massifs.

      En somme, l'intégration de l'IA dans l'éducation est une réalité complexe, perçue tantôt comme une solution prometteuse pour une personnalisation de l'apprentissage et un allègement des tâches des enseignants, tantôt comme une menace pour le sens de l'apprentissage, l'autonomie des élèves et la nature du service public d'éducation.

      Le manque de recul, de formation et de transparence, ainsi que la question de la marchandisation du savoir, sont au cœur des préoccupations.

  2. Aug 2025
    1. To counter the move to limit software use and redistribution, Richard Stallman in 1984 started developing a free, UNIX-compatible operating system called GNU (which is a recursive acronym for “GNU's Not Unix!”). To Stallman, “free” refers to freedom of use, not price. The free-software movement does not object to trading a copy for an amount of money but holds that users are entitled to four certain freedoms: (1) to freely run the program, (2) to study and change the source code, and to give or sell copies either (3) with or (4) without changes. In 1985, Stallman published the GNU Manifesto, which argues that all software should be free. He also formed the Free Software Foundation (FSF) with the goal of encouraging the use and development of free software.

      This passage explains how the Richard Stallman’s creation of the GNU operating system in the 1984 to promote about the software freedom. “Free” refers to liberty, not price, granting users the rights to run, study, modify, and distribute software with or without changes. Stallman’s GNU Manifesto and the Free Software Foundation (FSF) advocate for these freedoms and encourage the development and use of free software.

    1. Briefing Document: "La Rentrée 2025 pour les élèves de seconde, première et terminale" au Lycée Louis Vincent Ce document synthétise les informations clés et les thèmes principaux abordés lors du YouTube live de rentrée scolaire 2025-2026 du Lycée Louis Vincent.

      Date de l'événement: YouTube live de la rentrée scolaire 2025-2026 Intervenants Principaux:

      Olivier Palaise, Proviseur du Lycée Louis Vincent Alexianne Bonasso, Proviseure adjointe (BTS et 1ère) Lauren Fortini, Proviseure adjointe (Terminales et examens) Véronique Lefèvre, CPE (Internat) Janny Deico, Président du Conseil des Parents d'Élèves de Moselle (FCPE Moselle) Lionel René, Directeur Délégué sur les formations technologiques et industrielles Sylvie Bontempli, Secrétariat pédagogique 1. Présentation Générale du Lycée Louis Vincent Le Lycée Louis Vincent est un établissement historique, ouvert en 1920, construit par les Allemands, et qualifié d' "impérial" en raison de son envergure. Initialement un lycée technique avec 80% de formations industrielles, il est aujourd'hui un lycée général et technologique, majoritairement général (80% d'enseignement général).

      Effectifs: Le lycée compte entre 1500 et 1600 élèves chaque année, avec environ 1580 élèves cette année. 485-486 élèves de seconde Environ 450 élèves de première Environ 450 élèves de terminale Formations BTS et Classes Préparatoires (TSI1, TSI2) Spécificité: Le lycée est réputé pour sa rigueur dans son fonctionnement. Accès: L'entrée principale pour les élèves se fait par le portail métallique bleu de la rue Toule. Les entrées et sorties sont contrôlées, les sacs vérifiés, et les élèves doivent présenter leur livret d'accueil avec photo. Historique Technologique: Le lycée célèbre les 200 ans des formations industrielles de Metz cette année, soulignant son héritage technique et son adaptation aux enjeux actuels (STI2D, STL). 2. Organisation de la Rentrée et Informations Pratiques La rentrée est échelonnée pour les différents niveaux afin de faciliter l'accueil:

      Horaires de Rentrée:Secondes: 8h00 Premières: 9h00 Terminales: 9h30 Techniciens supérieurs / Classes prépa TSI1, TSI2: 10h00 / 8h30 Internat: Les internes sont attendus le dimanche soir (sauf rares exceptions le lundi matin). Une réunion pour les parents d'internes est prévue le dimanche soir à 20h30 en salle d'honneur. Pour l'internat d'excellence, l'accueil des parents est à partir de 16h, avec une réunion à 16h30 en présence de l'adjoint du commandant de la caserne CRS. Affichage des classes: Les classes seront affichées dans la cour. Il est noté que des "fuites" informatiques permettent parfois aux élèves et parents de connaître les classes à l'avance. Premières Réunions de Parents:Terminales: 8 septembre à 18h en salle d'honneur Premières Générales: Mercredi 10 septembre à 18h en salle d'honneur Premières et Terminales Technologiques: Vendredi 12 septembre à 18h en salle d'honneur Secondes: Réunion générale en salle d'honneur à 18h, suivie d'une répartition par classe avec les professeurs principaux à 18h30 pour discuter des attentes du lycée. Réunion d'explication de fonctionnement du lycée (ouverte à tous les parents): Vendredi 5 septembre à 18h en salle d'honneur. Emplois du temps: Les emplois du temps standard sont opérationnels dès le lundi 14h. Les parents sont invités à les consulter régulièrement via Pronote. Casiers: Attribution limitée, réservée aux demandes particulières (difficultés à porter des charges lourdes, problèmes médicaux). 3. Le Projet Lycée 4.0 et le Numérique La Région Grand Est met en œuvre le projet "Lycée 4.0", un projet pédagogique sur l'informatique et le numérique.

      Distribution d'ordinateurs: Tous les nouveaux élèves (secondes, et autres classes s'ils ne proviennent pas d'un lycée de la région) recevront un ordinateur portable offert par la Région. La distribution aura lieu dès le lundi de la rentrée pour les secondes. Il est recommandé de ne pas ouvrir l'ordinateur immédiatement pour éviter tout dommage et de conserver le carton d'emballage pour la garantie. L'ordinateur est prêté pour les trois années (seconde, première, terminale) et pourra être conservé à l'issue de la 3ème année, sauf si l'élève quitte la Région Grand Est. Usage de l'ordinateur:Le lycée est entièrement équipé de Wifi. Les manuels scolaires sont numériques et fournis gratuitement par la Région (licences incluses). L'installation des logiciels et manuels sera encadrée par les professeurs de SNT (Sciences Numériques et Technologiques) durant la première semaine. Mise en garde: Il est fortement déconseillé d'installer des jeux sur l'ordinateur, car "c'est pas un ordinateur qui est prévu pour jouer, c'est un ordinateur qui est prévu pour les manuels scolaires pour aller faire des recherches pour internet et cetera". Tests de Positionnement: Les ordinateurs devront être opérationnels dès la deuxième semaine pour les tests de positionnement. Autres ressources numériques:Compte EduConnect: Permet l'accès à "Mon Bureau Numérique", aux notes (Pronote), au cahier de texte, aux procédures d'orientation et aux bourses. Les comptes EduConnect sont les mêmes que ceux utilisés au collège. Il est annoncé que les classes et emplois du temps seront accessibles via "Mon Bureau Numérique" dès le lendemain de la réunion. Compte Wifi Grand Est: Sera distribué aux élèves à la rentrée. Office de Microsoft: Fourni gratuitement avec des comptes spécifiques. Application Pronote et ScolenGo: Pronote sera la référence pour les emplois du temps. Les informations du cahier de texte seront sur Mon Bureau Numérique (ScolenGo). Les notes seront également sur Pronote. 4. Résultats Scolaires et Exigences Le lycée affiche de "très bons voire excellents" résultats, fruit du travail des élèves et des équipes éducatives.

      Résultats BTS (session 2025):Métiers de la Chimie: 100% de réussite (en augmentation constante depuis 4 ans). SIRA: 67% CPI: 91% CPRP: 80% CRSA: 90% Moyenne des BTS: environ 88% de réussite. La classe prépa technologique (STI2D, STL SPCL) permet l'intégration en écoles d'ingénieurs. Résultats Baccalauréat (session juin 2025):Baccalauréat Général: Supérieur à 95% de réussite, 74% de mentions. Filières Technologiques (STI2D, STL): Supérieur à 95% de réussite. STI2D: 57% de mentions. STL: 66% de mentions. Parcoursup: Tous les élèves ont obtenu une réponse sur Parcoursup. Calculatrices: Une calculatrice spécifique et programmable est requise pour les épreuves de baccalauréat (mathématiques, physique). Une procédure de commande groupée est mise en place via les professeurs de mathématiques, avec un lien disponible sur le site du lycée jusqu'au 10 septembre. Épreuve Anticipée de Mathématiques (EAM) en Première: Nouveauté cette année, cette épreuve aura lieu en juin (2h écrite, avec une partie orale). Les sujets sont adaptés selon que l'élève suit la spécialité mathématiques ou l'enseignement mathématique obligatoire. Exigence et Bienveillance: Le lycée insiste sur la "certaine exigence au niveau travail [et] au niveau cadre de vie scolaire". Respect des adultes, pas de cris dans les couloirs. Téléphones portables: Interdits d'utilisation dans les bâtiments, sauf autorisation d'un adulte. L'ordinateur portable sera privilégié en classe. Absences et Retards: Une rigueur est demandée. Les retards dus aux transports scolaires sont à anticiper. Les absences doivent être justifiées, mais une vigilance est demandée aux parents sur les motifs réels. "on est exigeant tout en étant bienveillant". Ouverture du Lycée: Du lundi au vendredi de 7h30 à 18h30. Les cours commencent à 8h. Samedi Matin: Le lycée est ouvert 24 samedis par an pour "devoirs de rattrapage, rattrapage de devoirs, colle, etc." En cas de non-respect du règlement (ex: utilisation du portable dans les couloirs), des "colles" de 3h le samedi matin sont appliquées. 5. Soutien Scolaire et Orientation Accompagnement Personnalisé (AP): Des séances (environ 27 par an) sont proposées en mathématiques, physique et français (ou philosophie en terminale) en seconde, première et terminale. Ces aides ciblent des groupes d'environ 5 élèves. Préparation aux examens: Des exercices de simulation, notamment pour le "Grand Oral" (avec sollicitation des parents pour faire partie des jurys, ex: avocats). Accompagnement à l'Orientation: Réalisé par les professeurs principaux en seconde, première et terminale, axé sur la méthodologie et les informations Parcoursup. Psy-EN: Il est fortement recommandé aux élèves de terminale de prendre rendez-vous avec les psychologues de l'Éducation Nationale ("psy-EN") dès le premier trimestre, car leur planning est très chargé en fin d'année. Parcoursup: Présenté comme un "outil" et non comme la source de la complexité de l'orientation. Les élèves sont encouragés à créer leurs comptes Parcoursup dès la seconde et à explorer les formations. Pix: Certification d'usage du numérique, obligatoire pour toutes les terminales avant le baccalauréat, utile pour Parcoursup. SNU (Service National Universel): Les élèves de seconde peuvent y participer et cela peut remplacer les stages de seconde. 6. Restauration Scolaire et Aides Financières Accès Cantine: Possible dès la rentrée pour les demi-pensionnaires inscrits. Les élèves externes pourront également manger, mais la procédure administrative sera "un peu plus complexe". Tarifs: Complexité des tarifs en raison des aides régionales. Internat: L'hébergement est "gratuit" (coût de 10€, mais équivaut à une aide de 1200€), mais les repas sont payants (environ 1400€ pour l'internat complet). Demi-pension: Coût global d'environ 650€ à l'année pour un élève standard. Aides Régionales (ARS): Une aide de 20 centimes par repas est proposée aux familles non boursières mais dont les revenus sont juste au-dessus du seuil, ce qui représente environ 100€ de réduction annuelle. Fonds Sociaux: Disponibles pour les familles en difficulté (pré-bac). S'adresser aux professeurs, CPE, proviseures adjointes, gestionnaires, ou au secrétariat élève. Une adresse mail dédiée: fondsocial@ellvmes.fr. 7. Communication et Événements Info Parents: Toutes les informations sont régulièrement envoyées par mail via ce canal. Projet d'établissement et Plan d'évaluation: Documents communiqués aux parents pour présenter les objectifs et le fonctionnement des évaluations. Journée du Patrimoine: 20 septembre, occasion de visiter l'établissement (ateliers, vue depuis le clocher). Fête de la Science: Octobre. 8. Représentants de Parents d'Élèves L'importance de la participation des parents est fortement soulignée, à tous les niveaux: conseils de classe et conseil d'administration. Les élections se feront par voie numérique (Pronote).

      Deux associations présentes: FCPE et PEEP. Réunions d'information pour les associations:PEEP: Mardi 9 septembre à 18h30 en salle d'honneur. FCPE: Jeudi 11 septembre à 18h30 en salle d'honneur. Rôle des Parents Élus:Accompagner les enfants dans leur parcours scolaire. Faire valoir les droits et représenter les parents et les enfants. Donner un avis sur les décisions pédagogiques et financières. Rôle de médiateur. FCPE (Janny Deico, Président FCPE Moselle): Association de 75 ans, défend les valeurs d'une "école publique gratuite, inclusive et laïque". Propose des formations aux parents élus pour les aider à intervenir efficacement. Participation aux Conseils de Classe: Il est essentiel d'avoir des parents formés et de représenter tous les enfants. Deux parents par conseil de classe sont nécessaires (84 parents pour 42 classes). 9. Infrastructures et Projets Abri Vélo Connecté: Un nouvel abri vélo autonome et connecté a été installé, équipé de panneaux solaires photovoltaïques pour recharger les vélos électriques et trottinettes. Il s'intègre à l'architecture en bois et permet de suivre la production et consommation d'énergie, promouvant la mobilité douce et le développement durable (STID2D). Il comprend également un espace personnel pour les élèves avec tables en bois pour recharger téléphones et ordinateurs. Travaux futurs: Des travaux sont prévus devant l'établissement dans le cadre du projet "Métis", visant à créer un espace piéton plus grand, moins de parkings et de voitures. L'ancien site de l'hôpital Bonsecours a déjà été transformé en appartements. Dangérosité du carrefour: Vigilance demandée aux élèves concernant le carrefour devant le lycée, très fréquenté. Interdiction de fumer: Il est interdit de fumer aux abords de l'établissement, y compris sur la placette de la rue Toule. Visite virtuelle: Une vidéo montre les locaux intérieurs (escalier monumental, loge, bureaux de la vie scolaire, CPE, secrétariat élèves, proviseures adjointes, salle des professeurs, CDI, salle de permanence, salle d'honneur, couloirs des salles de classe, bureau des Psy-EN, service informatique). Il est précisé que le lycée est entièrement accessible aux PMR (ascenseur). 10. Conclusion Le Lycée Louis Vincent se présente comme un établissement à la fois historique et moderne, axé sur la réussite de chaque élève, l'exigence bienveillante, l'innovation numérique et la collaboration avec les familles. Les équipes se tiennent à disposition pour accompagner les élèves et les parents tout au long de l'année scolaire.

    1. Low pay(2)Irregular working hours(3)Poor benefits(4)Burnout and exhaustion(5)Stress(6)Mostly part-time and frontline positions(7)Unsophisticated or generic skillsets(8)The rise of the gig economy(9)Increasing demand for work flexibility(10)Better career opportunities in competing industrie

      List of reasons for labor shortages

    1. The Lieber Code of 1863, the Union Army and President Abraham Lincoln’s laudable, if admittedly naïve, attempt to limit the ravages of the American Civil War, precipitated a paradigm shift away from the mere moral condemnation of the destruction and appropriation of cultural property toward express legal proscription. Article 35 of the code is unambiguous: “Classical works of art, libraries, scientific collections, or precious instruments . . . must be secured against all avoidable injury, even when they are contained in fortified places whilst besieged or bombarded.” The prescriptive, deterrent objective of the code is reflected in Article 44, which makes clear that the intent was not only to prohibit such conduct, but to actively ascribe a penal basis for individual responsibility.2

      Lieber Code of 1863 (U.S. Civil War: first documented sanctions against intentional destruction of heritgae)

    1. Document de Synthèse : Réflexions sur l'Éducation, le Savoir et l'Intelligence selon Bernard Lahire

      • Ce document de synthèse présente les idées principales et les faits marquants des extraits de l'interview de Bernard Lahire, sociologue et directeur de recherche au CNRS, à l'occasion de la publication de son livre "Savoir ou périr".

      L'entretien explore la nature de l'apprentissage, le rôle de l'école et de l'évaluation, la définition de l'intelligence, la recherche scientifique et la transmission du savoir dans nos sociétés contemporaines.

      1. Le Savoir comme Condition de Survie et l'Origine de l'École

      Bernard Lahire insiste sur une perspective fondamentale : l'apprentissage et la transmission des savoirs sont intrinsèquement liés à la survie de toute espèce vivante, y compris l'espèce humaine.

      • Survie et Adaptation : "Nos sociétés ne fonctionneraient pas, ne survivraient pas si elle n'organisait pas cet apprentissage."

      L'apprentissage est une capacité d'adaptation essentielle, présente chez toutes les espèces. Un animal qui n'apprend pas à reconnaître ses prédateurs ne survit pas.

      • L'Apprentissage Humain : Chez l'homme, l'apprentissage est extrêmement développé, allant de l'apprentissage social par imitation à l'enseignement organisé, complété par le langage.

      • L'Émergence de l'École : L'école, en tant qu'institution dédiée à l'apprentissage, est une invention relativement tardive dans l'histoire de l'humanité (XVIe siècle au sens moderne).

      Avant, la transmission se faisait "par voir faire et ouï-dire", via la culture orale.

      L'écriture, apparue il y a environ 5000 ans, a permis d'objectiver et d'accumuler le savoir, rendant possible son organisation pédagogique et l'institutionnalisation de l'école.

      • La Sophistication du Savoir : La complexification et la division des savoirs dans nos sociétés modernes ont rendu l'école indispensable et allongé les parcours scolaires.

      La survie collective repose sur une masse considérable de savoirs sophistiqués, gérés par des corps de professionnels divers.

      2. La Recherche de la Vérité et la Vulnérabilité du Savoir

      Lahire aborde la nécessité de la vérité et les dangers de l'affaiblissement des institutions du savoir.

      • La Vérité comme Nécessité Vitale : La vérité n'est pas qu'une question philosophique, c'est une condition de survie.

      "Si nos savoirs d'ailleurs avant même les savoirs scientifiques… avaient été faux… ça fait longtemps qu'on aurait disparu."

      Même les savoirs empiriques anciens devaient avoir un rapport minimal à la vérité pour permettre aux sociétés de survivre face aux fléaux naturels et aux maladies.

      • Le Suprême Pouvoir et la Vulnérabilité : La division du travail et des connaissances a rendu l'humanité "surpuissante" en permettant des réalisations complexes comme le téléphone portable.

      Cependant, attaquer les lieux de transmission et de création culturelle (recherche, éducation) est une forme de "suicide collectif".

      • L'Attaque contre la Recherche : Des coupes budgétaires dans la recherche, la limitation du nombre de chercheurs ou l'exigence de rentabilité immédiate sont des freins à la production de nouveaux savoirs.

      "À chaque fois qu'on affaiblit ces secteurs bah on se rend pas compte de tout ce qui serait possible."

      La recherche, par nature, est imprévisible et ses applications ne peuvent pas toujours être anticipées à court terme.

      3. L'École et la Destruction de la Curiosité et de l'Intelligence

      Lahire critique vivement le système scolaire actuel, qui, selon lui, entrave les dispositions naturelles des enfants.

      • La Curiosité Innée : Les enfants sont naturellement curieux, testant et explorant leur environnement par l'expérimentation et les questions.

      Cette "pulsion exploratrice" est une disposition naturelle.

      • L'École, Frein à la Curiosité : Le système scolaire, avec sa discipline collective, ses programmes surchargés et surtout l'évaluation constante, tend à étouffer cette curiosité.

      "L'évaluation devient quelque chose qui bloque en fait la curiosité des enfants."

      • Le Piège de l'Évaluation : L'évaluation est censée vérifier l'apprentissage, mais elle est devenue un objectif en soi, inversant la logique.

      Les élèves apprennent "pour pouvoir passer un contrôle", ce qui nuit à un apprentissage profond et désintéressé.

      • Les Mathématiques, Instrument de Sélection : Les mathématiques, une discipline intrinsèquement incroyable, sont devenues un "instrument de torture", un "perfouettard" pour la sélection scolaire, ce qui génère de l'aversion chez les élèves.

      • Nuire à la Créativité : L'école, en privilégiant la reproduction des connaissances transmises, laisse peu de place à l'imagination et à la créativité.

      Les artistes, par exemple, ont souvent un rapport "très contrarié à l'école", perçue comme un lieu de mémorisation rigide plutôt que de stimulation créative.

      • La Docilité des Bons Élèves : Le système sélectionne des élèves qui sont de bons reproducteurs des savoirs scolaires, mais paradoxalement, ils ne sont pas toujours les mieux placés pour la recherche qui demande de la rébellion intellectuelle.

      "Quand on a été trop bon élève, on est aussi très docile."

      4. L'Intelligence au-delà du QI et les Voies de la Recherche

      Lahire propose une vision plus large de l'intelligence et met en lumière les qualités du "vrai chercheur".

      • L'Intelligence comme Capacité d'Adaptation : L'intelligence n'est "certainement pas ce que mesure un quotient intellectuel".

      C'est avant tout "des capacités d'adaptation, c'est résoudre des problèmes".

      Cette forme d'intelligence est présente "un peu partout dans le vivant", des plantes aux unicellulaires.

      • L'Intelligence Créatrice : L'intelligence créatrice, notamment artistique, implique d'inventer des formes et des regards nouveaux, ce qui ne correspond pas aux critères d'évaluation académiques standards.

      • Le Vrai Chercheur : Un vrai chercheur est "un sale gosse", "un peu rebelle", qui ose poser des questions "stupides" et aller au-delà des demandes.

      Il faut "retrouver l'enfant qui est en nous" et ne pas se laisser impressionner, comme le souligne le mathématicien Alexandre Grothendieck.

      • Exemples Notables : Des figures comme Einstein ou Grothendieck, malgré leur génie, ont eu un rapport difficile avec l'école ou le système académique, qui pouvait freiner leur curiosité et leur capacité à prendre du recul.

      Grothendieck distinguait les mathématiciens "caseurs" (qui travaillent à l'intérieur d'une maison déjà faite) des "bâtisseurs" (qui reconstruisent les fondations).

      5. Une Éducation Rationnelle et Collective : Propositions et Défis

      Lahire esquisse des pistes pour une réforme de l'éducation.

      • Respecter la Curiosité : Il faut s'appuyer sur la curiosité naturelle des enfants, l'accompagner et l'alimenter, plutôt que de la briser.

      Des pédagogies comme celle de Freinet, avec des "leçons de choses" concrètes, sont des exemples positifs.

      • Alléger les Programmes et Donner du Temps : Les programmes scolaires sont surchargés, rendant impossible un apprentissage approfondi.

      Il est crucial de donner "le temps" aux enseignants et aux élèves pour l'approfondissement, car l'assimilation des connaissances demande du temps. "Terminer un programme ça n'a aucun sens."

      • Lutter contre les Inégalités Sociales : Les enfants ne sont pas égaux devant l'école, car les "déterminismes sociaux" jouent un rôle majeur.

      Les enfants de milieux favorisés bénéficient d'interactions culturelles et pédagogiques précoces qui les avantagent considérablement.

      Il faut des politiques de compensation, donner "plus à ceux qui ont moins", en réduisant par exemple la taille des groupes pour les élèves en difficulté.

      • Recherche de Synthèse : La spécialisation excessive des sciences, notamment sociales, rend difficile une vision systémique.

      Il est nécessaire de développer des pôles de "synthétisation" et de faire des liens entre les différentes branches du savoir, à l'image des grands "synthétiseurs" comme Newton, Einstein ou Darwin.

      • Critique des Classements : Les classements comme PISA ou Shanghai sont jugés peu pertinents.

      Ils alimentent une "concurrence internationale" mais "n'ont jamais servi à améliorer en de quelque manière que ce soit le système éducatif", car ils ne s'attaquent pas aux causes profondes des problèmes.

      6. L'Altricialité Secondaire et le Développement Culturel

      Lahire fait le lien entre la biologie humaine et la nécessité de l'apprentissage.

      • Dépendance Prolongée : L'espèce humaine se caractérise par une "altricialité dite secondaire", c'est-à-dire une longue période de dépendance des petits envers les parents. Cette vulnérabilité prolongée a accru la durée de l'apprentissage.

      • Entrelacement Biologique et Culturel : Le développement physiologique de l'enfant est intimement lié à son développement culturel et social.

      Apprendre à grandir dans une société humaine ne se limite pas à la maturité biologique, mais englobe l'acquisition d'une grande quantité de savoirs, notamment la lecture, l'écriture et le calcul, bases essentielles de la scolarisation précoce.

      • En conclusion, Bernard Lahire dresse un tableau critique mais lucide du système éducatif actuel, en le replaçant dans une perspective biologique et historique.

      Il plaide pour une réorientation profonde, qui remette la curiosité, l'approfondissement et la justice sociale au cœur des processus d'apprentissage et de création du savoir, conditions essentielles à la survie et à l'épanouissement collectif de l'humanité.

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    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study explores a molecular mechanism by which C. elegans detects low-quality food through neuron-digestive crosstalk, offering new insights into food quality control systems. Liu and colleagues demonstrated that NSY-1, expressed in AWC neurons, is a key regulator for sensing Staphylococcus saprophyticus (SS), inducing avoidance behavior and shutting down the digestive system via intestinal BCF-1. They further revealed that INS-23, an insulin peptide, interacts with the DAF-2 receptor in the gut to modulate SS digestion. The study uncovers a food quality control system connecting neural and intestinal responses, enabling C. elegans to adapt to environmental challenges.

      Strengths:

      The study employs a genetic screening approach to identify nsy-1 as a critical regulator in detecting food quality and initiating adaptive responses in C. elegans. The use of RNA-seq analysis is particularly noteworthy, as it reveals distinct regulatory pathways involved in food sensing (Figure 4) and digestion of Staphylococcus saprophyticus (Figure 5). The strategic application of both positive and negative data mining enhances the depth of analysis. Importantly, the discovery that C. elegans halts digestion in response to harmful food and employs avoidance behavior highlights a physiological adaptation mechanism.

      Weaknesses:

      Major weaknesses have been addressed.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Liu et al have tried to dissect the neural and molecular mechanisms that C. elegans use to avoid digestion of harmful bacterial food. Liu et al show that C. elegans use the ON-OFF state of AWC olfactory neurons to regulate the digestion of harmful gram-positive bacteria S. saprophyticus (SS). The authors show that when C. elegans are fed on SS food, AWC neurons switch to OFF fate which prevents digestion of S. saprophyticus and this helps C. elegans avoid these harmful bacteria. Using genetic and transcriptional analysis as well as making use of previously published findings, Liu et al implicate the p38 MAPK pathway (in particular, NSY-1, the C. elegans homolog of MAPKKK ASK1) and insulin signaling in this process.

      Strengths:

      The authors have used multiple approaches to test the hypothesis that they present in this manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, I am not convinced that the authors have provided sufficient evidence to support the various components of their hypothesis. While they present data that loosely align with their hypothesis, they fail to consider alternative explanations and do not use rigorous approaches to strengthen their overall hypothesis. The selective picking of genes from the RNA sequencing data and forcing the data to fit the proposed hypothesis based on previously published findings, without exploring other approaches, indicates a lack of thoroughness and rigor. These critical shortcomings significantly diminish enthusiasm for the manuscript in its totality. In my opinion, this is the biggest weakness in this manuscript.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s all the suggestions which help us to improve this paper. We now addressed reviewer’s comments at the section of “Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors)”

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using C. elegans as a model, the authors present an interesting story demonstrating a new regulatory connection between olfactory neurons and the digestive system.

      Mechanistically, they identified key factors (NSY-1, STR-130 et.al) in neurons, as well as critical 'signaling factors' (INS-23, DAF-2) that bridge different cells/tissues to execute the digestive shutdown induced by poor-quality food (Staphylococcus saprophyticus, SS).

      Strengths:

      The conclusions of this manuscript are mostly well supported by the experimental results shown.

      Weaknesses:

      Several issues could be addressed and clarified to strengthen their conclusions.

      (1) The word "olfactory" should be carefully used and checked in this manuscript. Although AWCs are classic olfactory neurons in C. elegans, no data in this manuscript supports the idea that olfactory signals from SS drive the responses in the digestive system. To validate that it is truly olfaction, the authors may want to check the responses of worms (e.g. AWC, digestive shutdown, INS-23 expression) to odors from SS.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s careful attention to terminology. We agree that the term "olfactory" requires direct experimental validation. However, in this paper, we only used "olfactory" to specific define the AWC neurons. As reviewer’s suggestion, we now deleted the word “olfactory”.

      (2) In line 113, what does "once the digestive system is activated" mean? The authors need to provide a clearer statement about 'digestive activation' and 'digestive shutdown'.

      Previously, we observed that activating larval digestion with heat-killed E. coli or E. coli cell wall peptidoglycan (PGN) enabled the digestion of SS as food (Hao et al., 2024). Additionally, when animals reached the L2 stage by feeding normal OP50 diet, they could utilize SS as a food source to support growth (Figure 1figure supplement 1D). These findings suggest that once digestion is activated (via E. coli components or L2-stage maturation), worms gain the capacity to process SS as a viable food source, abolishing SS-induced growth impairment (Hao et al., 2024) ( Figure 1figure supplement 1D).

      (3) No control data on OP50. This would affect the conclusions generated from Figures 2A, 2B, 2D, 3B, 3C, 3G, 4D-G, 5D-E, 6B-D.

      We appreciate  this point. The central goal of the experiments listed (Figures 2A,B,D; 3B,C,G; 4D-G; 5D-E; 6B-D) was not to compare growth or behavior between SS and OP50 under standard conditions, but rather to understand the genetic basis of the C. elegans response specifically to SS, as identified through our nsy-1 mutant screen.

      Our data in Figure 1 clearly establishes the fundamental difference in growth and feeding behavior when larvae encounter SS compared to OP50 (Figures 1A,B). Having established SS as an unfavorable food source that triggers a specific protective response (digestive shutdown), the subsequent experiments focus on deciphering how this response is mediated.

      Therefore, within these specific experimental contexts under SS feeding: The primary comparison is between wild-type (N2) and nsy-1 mutant animals. All assays (growth, behavior, survival) are performed under the same SS feeding conditionsfor both genotypes.

      This design allows us to directly assess the functional role of NSY-1 in mediating the SS-specific response pathway we are investigating. Including an OP50 control for every figure would not address this core genetic question and could introduce confounding variables given the established difference in how C. elegans treats these two food sources. The critical internal control for these specific experiments is the performance of the wild-type under SS versus the mutant under SS.

      (4) Do the authors know which factors are released from AWC neurons to drive the digestive shutdown?

      Enrichment analysis revealed that genes related to extracellular functions, such as insulin-related genes, are induced in nsy-1 mutant animals (Figure 5—figure supplement 1A, Supplementary file 4). Further analysis of insulin-related genes from the RNA-seq data showed that ins-23 is predominantly induced in nsy-1 mutant animals (Figure 5—figure supplement 1B), suggesting its potential role in promoting SS digestion. We found that knockdown of ins-23 in nsy-1 mutants inhibited SS digestion (Figure 5D). Given that INS-23 is expressed in AWC neurons (Figure 5figure supplement 3A, CeNGEN), this suggests increased production and likely enhanced release of INS-23 from AWC neurons in the nsy-1 mutant background, which promotes SS digestion.

      The insulin/insulin-like growth factor signaling (IIS) pathway, particularly through the DAF-2 receptor, integrates nutritional signals to regulate various behavioral and physiological responses related to food (Kodama et al., 2006; Ryu et al., 2018). It has been shown that INS-23 acts as an antagonist for the DAF-2 receptor to promote larval diapause (Matsunaga et al., 2018). To test whether ins-23 induction in nsy-1 mutants promotes SS digestion through its receptor, DAF-2, we constructed a nsy-1; daf-2 double mutant. We found that the SS digestion ability of the nsy-1 mutant was inhibited by the daf-2 mutation. This suggests that the nsy-1 mutation induces the insulin peptide ins-23, which promotes SS digestion through its potential receptor, DAF-2.

      The data supports a model where AWC neurons regulate digestion via the release of INS-23. Loss of nsy-1 function increases INS-23 release from AWC, activating DAF-2 signaling and promoting digestion. Conversely, in wild-type animals, reduced INS-23 release from AWC contributes to digestive shutdown in response to SS food.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study explores a molecular mechanism by which C. elegans detects low-quality food through neuron-digestive crosstalk, offering new insights into food quality control systems. Liu and colleagues demonstrated that NSY-1, expressed in AWC neurons, is a key regulator for sensing Staphylococcus saprophyticus (SS), inducing avoidance behavior and shutting down the digestive system via intestinal BCF-1. They further revealed that INS-23, an insulin peptide, interacts with the DAF-2 receptor in the gut to modulate SS digestion. The study uncovers a food quality control system connecting neural and intestinal responses, enabling C. elegans to adapt to environmental challenges.

      Strengths:

      The study employs a genetic screening approach to identify nsy-1 as a critical regulator in detecting food quality and initiating adaptive responses in C. elegans. The use of RNA-seq analysis is particularly noteworthy, as it reveals distinct regulatory pathways involved in food sensing (Figure 4) and digestion of Staphylococcus saprophyticus (Figure 5). The strategic application of both positive and negative data mining enhances the depth of analysis. Importantly, the discovery that C. elegans halts digestion in response to harmful food and employs avoidance behavior highlights a physiological adaptation mechanism.

      Weaknesses:

      Major points:

      (1) While NSY-1 positively regulates str-130 expression in AWC neurons and is critical for SS avoidance and survival, the authors should examine whether similar phenotypes are observed in str-130 mutants.

      In this study, we mainly focused on how worms sense adverse food sources (SS food) and shutdown digestion (not growth as digestion shutdown readout). We found that nsy-1 in AWC play key roles in response SS food, once nsy-1 mutation, mutant animals cannot detect SS food and digest it, therefore growth under SS food. From RNA-seq, we found that nsy-1 positively regulates several sensory perception related genes (sra-32, str-87, str-112, str-130, str-160, str-230) (Figure 4figure supplement 1A, Supplementary file 2). After screen, we found that we found that knockdown of str-130 in wild-type animals promoted SS digestion, thereby supporting animal growth (Figure 4D), and the proportion of animals with two AWC<sup>OFF</sup> neurons decreased (Figure 4E). Secondly, we found that overexpression of str-130 in nsy-1 mutant animals inhibited SS digestion, thereby slowing animal growth (Figure 4F), and the proportion of animals with two AWC<sup>OFF</sup> neurons increased (Figure 4G). These results demonstrate that NSY-1 promotes the AWC<sup>OFF</sup> state by inducing str-130 expression, which in turn inhibits SS digestion in C. elegans.

      (2) NSY-1 promotes the AWC-OFF state through str-130, inhibiting SS digestion. The authors should investigate whether STR-130 in AWC neurons regulates bcf-1 expression levels in the intestine.

      We agree with the reviewer's suggestion regarding the potential role of STR-130 in AWC neurons regulating intestinal bcf-1 expression. To address this, we generated transgenic worms with AWC-specific knockdown of str-130, achieved by rescuing sid-1 cDNA expression under the ceh-36 promoter (AWC-specific) in sid-1(qt9);BCF-1::GFP background worms.

      We observed that AWC neuron-specific RNAi of str-130 elevated intestinal BCF-1::GFP expression (Figure 6—figure supplement 1B). This demonstrates that STR-130 functions cell-non-autonomously in AWC neurons to repress BCF-1 expression in the intestine.

      (3) The current results rely on str-2 expression levels to indicate the AWC state. Ablating AWC neurons and testing the effects on digestion would provide stronger evidence for their role in digestive regulation.

      To confirm the important of AWC state in SS digestion, we performed AWC-specific neuron ablation experiments using previously validated transgenic strain that expresses cleaved caspase under the AWC-specific promoter, ceh-36 (ceh-36p::caspase). Critically, worms with ablated AWC neurons completely failed to digest SS food (Figure 3—figure supplement 4), phenocopying the non-digesting state of wild-type worms on SS when AWC-OFF signaling is impaired. This result directly confirms that functional AWC neurons are essential for initiating SS digestion, aligning with our model where the AWC-OFF state (induced by SS) inhibits digestion while the AWC-ON state promotes it.

      Furthermore, we previously study discovered that AWC ablation activates the intestinal mitochondrial unfolded protein response and inhibits food digestion, mechanistically linking neuronal integrity to gut stress responses and digestive inhibition.

      Together, these functional ablation studies provide compelling physiological evidence that AWC neurons act as central regulators of food-state sensing and gut function.

      (4) The claim that NSY-1 inhibits INS-23 and that INS-23 interacts with DAF-2 to regulate bcf-1 expression (Line 339-340) requires further validation. Neuron-specific disruption of INS-23 and gut-specific rescue of DAF-2 should be tested.

      We agree with the reviewer that the proposed NSY-1 ⊣ INS-23 → DAF-2 → BCF-1 signaling axis requires tissue-specific validation. To address this, we conducted compartment-specific functional dissection of INS-23 and DAF-2:

      AWC neuronal role of INS-23:

      To test whether INS-23 acts in AWC neurons to regulate intestinal BCF-1, we generated AWC-specific knockdown strains which was achieved by rescuing sid-1 cDNA expression under the ceh-36 promoter in a sid-1(qt9);BCF-1::GFP background. We found that AWC-restricted ins-23 knockdown significantly reduced intestinal BCF-1::GFP expression (Figure 6—figure supplement 1A). This confirms that INS-23 functions cell-non-autonomously within AWC sensory neurons to activate intestinal BCF-1, consistent with NSY-1’s upstream inhibition of INS-23 in this neuronal  subtype

      Intestinal role of DAF-2 as INS-23 receptor:

      To investigate weather DAF-2 acts as the gut-localized receptor for neuronal INS-23 signaling, we performed tissue-specific rescue experiments in the nsy-1(ag3);daf-2(e1370) double mutant. When DAF-2 was re-introduced specifically in the intestine (using the ges-1 promoter), we observed a significant suppression of SS digestion (Figure 5—figure supplement 3B), but not rescue digestive defect. This indicates that INS-23 induction in nsy-1 mutants promotes digestion independently of intestinal DAF-2 function.

      (5) Figure Reference Errors: Lines 296-297 mention Figure 6E, which does not exist in the main text. This appears to refer to Figure 5E, which has not been described.

      We corrected this.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      I would like the authors to address the following comments in a resubmission.

      (1) The hallmark of the activated p38 MAPK pathway is the phosphorylation of most downstream kinase p38 (PMK-1/PMK2 in C. elegans) of this kinase cascade. Previous work from Bergmann lab showed that the most downstream kinase of this pathway, PMK-1/PMK-2, is not required for AWC asymmetry. I wonder whether that is the case also for the model that Liu et al have presented in this manuscript. Since p38/PMK-1 undergoes activation (phosphorylation) in response to pathogenic bacteria like P. aeruginosa, it is worth testing whether PMK-1 plays a role downstream of NSY-1 in the model that Liu et al present in this manuscript. It would be worth testing whether there is increased phosphorylation of p38 when C. elegans are fed SS and whether that phosphorylation regulates downstream components that Liu et al have identified in this manuscript.

      We thank the reviewer for raising this important point regarding PMK-1/p38 MAPK signaling. As established in our prior work (Reference 1), SS exposure triggers phosphorylation of PMK-1 (P-PMK-1) in C. elegans, and pmk-1 mutants exhibit enhanced growth on SS (Figure-1, Figure-2). This confirms that PMK-1-mediated innate immune signaling actively regulates SS responsiveness and digestion.

      To address whether PMK-1 functions downstream of NSY-1 within our proposed model, we performed critical epistasis analyses. While we observed that nsy-1 mutation elevates ins-23 (indicating NSY-1 suppression of ins-23), knockdown of pmk-1 did not alter ins-23 expression levels (Figure 5-figure supplement 3C). This demonstrates that PMK-1 does not operate through the ins-23 pathway to regulate SS digestion. Thus, although both pathways respond to SS, the PMK-1-mediated innate immune response and the NSY-1/INS-23 axis constitute distinct regulatory mechanisms governing digestive adaptation.

      Reference 1: Geng, S., Li, Q., Zhou, X., Zheng, J., Liu, H., Zeng, J., Yang, R., Fu, H., Hao, F., Feng, Q., & Qi, B. (2022). Gut commensal E. coli outer membrane proteins activate the host food digestive system through neural-immune communication. Cell host & microbe, 30(10), 1401–1416.e8. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chom.2022.08.004

      (2) Since p38 MAPK pathway has a well-established role in host defense in the C. elegans intestine, it is important to show that NSY-1 does not function in the intestine in the model that Liu et al present. I would like the authors to reintroduce nsy-1 in C. elegans intestine in nsy-1 mutant animals and then test whether it has any effect on worm length on SS food (similar to what is done in Figure 3 for AWC-specific nsy-1).

      Beyond its  established  role  in  AWC  neurons,  we  detected  NSY-1 expression in the intestine (Figure 3-figure supplement 2A). To assess intestinal NSY-1 function, we performed tissue-specific rescue experiments in nsy-1 mutants using the intestinal-specific vha-1 promoter. Intestinal expression of NSY-1 significantly suppressed the enhanced SS digestion phenotype in nsy-1 mutants (Figure 3-figure supplement 2B), demonstrating functional involvement of gut-localized NSY-1 in regulating digestive responses. We propose intestinal NSY-1 mediates this effect through innate immune signaling, consistent with its known pathway components. As previously established (Reference 1), the canonical PMK-1/p38 MAPK pathway functions downstream of NSY-1, with both sek-1 and pmk-1 knockdown enhancing SS digestion through immune modulation. This indicates intestinal NSY-1 suppresses digestion may act through PMK-1-mediated immune responses. Since neuronal NSY-1's role in digestive control was previously undefined, we prioritized mechanistic analysis of its neuronal function in digestion regulation.

      Notably, this immune-mediated mechanism operates independently of NSY-1's neuronal regulation pathway. In AWC neurons, NSY-1 controls digestion exclusively through the neuropeptide signaling axis (INS-23/DAF-2/BCF-1) without engaging innate immune components.

      Reference 1: Geng, S., Li, Q., Zhou, X., Zheng, J., Liu, H., Zeng, J., Yang, R., Fu, H., Hao, F., Feng, Q., & Qi, B. (2022). Gut commensal E. coli outer membrane proteins activate the host food digestive system through neural-immune communication. Cell host & microbe, 30(10), 1401–1416.e8. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chom.2022.08.004

      (3) At multiple places, wild-type (WT) controls have been labeled as N2. It is better to label all controls as WT (and not as N2).

      Corrected.

      (4) In Figure 2B, the aversion response should be scored at multiple time points, like Figure 1C, rather than at just one timepoint.

      We thank the reviewer for suggesting multi-timepoint analysis of aversion behavior. In accordance with this recommendation, we have now quantified SS avoidance at multi-timepoint. As shown in the revised Figure 2B, nsy-1 mutants exhibited significantly impaired avoidance responses at both 4h and 6h but not at 8h, confirming that NSY-1 is essential for sustained aversion to SS food in the early response. This data demonstrates that the critical role of NSY-1 in food discrimination at initial sensory responses.

      (5) Does the re-introduction of nsy-1 in AWC neurons in nsy-1 mutant background help animals avoid SS in dwelling and food-choice assays? Along the same lines, does the CRISPR-generated AWC-specific mutant of NSY-1 fail to avoid SS in dwelling and food-choice assays similar to the whole-animal mutant? These behavioral data are missing in Figure 3.

      We thank the reviewer for prompting behavioral validation of AWC-specific nsy-1 functions. To determine whether NSY-1 in AWC neurons mediates SS sensory perception, we performed dwelling (avoidance) and food-choice assays using AWC-specific nsy-1 knockout and AWC-rescued strains (nsy-1(ag3); Podr-1::nsy-1). In dwelling assays, AWC-specific nsy-1 KO mutants exhibited significantly impaired SS avoidance at 6h (Figure 3-figure supplement 3A), while AWC-rescued strains restored avoidance capacity at 2-6h (Figure 3-figure supplement 3B). Food-choice assays further revealed that AWC nsy-1 KO mutants preferentially migrated toward SS (Figure 3-figure supplement 3C), whereas AWC-rescued showed no preference between SS and HK-E. coli (Figure 3-figure supplement 3D). These data conclusively demonstrate that NSY-1 acts in AWC neurons to mediate SS recognition and aversion behaviors.

      (6) In Figure 3E and F, the number of animals that were used for scoring AWC str-2p::GFP expression should be specified.

      we added the number of animals in the figure.

      (7)  RNA seq analysis identified multiple GPCRs (including STR-130) that are upregulated in an NSY-1-dependent manner when animals are fed with SS bacteria. However, the authors decided to only characterize STR-130 because of previously published findings. It is important to rule out the role of other GPCRs since all are upregulated on SS food as shown in Figure S4 B. I would like the authors to knock down other GPCRs in the same manner as they did for STR-130 and demonstrate that only str-130 knockdown behaves similarly to the nsy-1 mutant (if that is the case) using the assay presented in Figure 4 D.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion to comprehensively evaluate NSY-1-regulated GPCRs. In response, we extended our functional analysis to all six GPCRs (str-130, str-230, str-87, str-112, str-160, and sra-32) identified as NSY-1-dependent and SS-induced in RNA-seq (Figure 4—figure supplement 1).

      Using RNAi knockdown and the SS growth assay, we observed that RNAi of str-130, str-230, str-87, or str-112 significantly enhanced SS growth (Figure 4—figure supplement 2A), with str-130 RNAi exhibiting the most robust phenotype—phenocopying nsy-1 mutants. Crucially, none of these GPCR knockdowns further enhanced growth in nsy-1(ag3) mutants (Figure 4—figure supplement 2B), confirming their position downstream of NSY-1. These data establish str-130 as the dominant effector of NSY-1-mediated SS response regulation, while suggesting minor contributions from other GPCRs (str-230, str-87, str-112).

      (8) In Figure 4E and G, the number of animals that were used for scoring GFP expression should be specified.

      we added the number of animals in the figure.

      (9) When comparing Figure 3E and Figure 4E, it appears that the loss of str-130 RNAi does not phenocopy nsy-1 mutant. This raises the question of whether the inefficiency of RNAi targeting str-130 is the cause, or if STR-130 is not the only GPCR regulated by NSY-1 on SS food. I would like the authors to address this discrepancy. If RNAi inefficiency is indeed the cause, using an RNAi-sensitive background, such as an eri- 1 mutant, could help strengthen the data presented in Figure 4E. Conversely, if RNAi inefficiency is not responsible for the discrepancy, I suggest that the authors investigate the roles of other GPCRs that were identified by RNA sequencing.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s observation regarding the phenotypic difference between nsy-1 mutants and str-130 (RNAi) animals on SS food (Fig. 3E vs Fig. 4E).

      While both genetic perturbations significantly enhance SS growth and increase the proportion of animals exhibiting AWC<sup>ON</sup> states compared to wild type (indicating enhanced digestion), the specific AWC<sup>ON </sup> neuron configurations differ: nsy-1 mutants predominantly show 2 AWC<sup>ON</sup> animals, whereas str-130(RNAi) animals primarily exhibit the 1 AWC<sup>ON</sup> /1 AWC<sup>OFF</sup> configuration (Fig. 3E vs Fig. 4E).

      This difference likely arises because STR-130 is the key GPCR mediating NSY-1's inhibitory effect on SS digestion, but it is not the sole GPCR involved, as evidenced by our RNAi screen identifying several additional NSY-1-regulated GPCRs (str-230, str-87, str-112) whose depletion also enhanced SS growth (Fig. 4A-D).

      The robust SS growth enhancement and AWC<sup>ON </sup> state increase caused by str-130 (RNAi) (phenocopying the nsy-1 mutant’s functional outcome of enhanced digestion) (Figure 4D, 4E) indicate effective RNAi knockdown for this specific assay. Therefore, the distinct neural configurations reflect the partial redundancy among GPCRs downstream of NSY-1, rather than an inherent inefficiency of the str-130 RNAi.

      The nsy-1 mutant phenotype represents the complete loss of all inhibitory GPCR signaling coordinated by NSY-1, while str-130(RNAi) represents the loss of its major component. Investigating the roles of other identified GPCRs (str-230, str-87, str-112) in modulating AWC<sup>ON </sup> neuron states is an important direction for future research.

      (10) In Figure 4 F and 4 G, the authors show that the overexpression of STR-130 rescues the nsy-1 mutant phenotype suggesting that NSY-1 might function through STR-130 to control digestion on SS food. These data place STR-130 downstream of NSY-1. To further strengthen these epistasis data, authors should knock down str-130 in nsy-1 mutant animals and show that the combined loss of both genes produces the same effect as the loss of either gene alone.

      We thank the reviewer for the insightful suggestion to further define the genetic relationship between nsy-1 and str-130. To strengthen our epistasis analysis, we performed RNAi knockdown of str-130 in the nsy-1(ag3) mutant background and assessed development on SS food. Consistent with STR-130 acting downstream of NSY-1, the loss of str-130 via RNAi did not further enhance the developmental capacity (i.e., growth phenotype) of nsy-1(ag3) mutant animals on SS. This lack of enhancement indicates that str-130 and nsy-1 function within the same genetic pathway, with str-130 acting epistatically downstream of nsy-1 (Figure 4—figure supplement 3). This finding reinforces the model proposed from our overexpression data (Fig. 4F-G) – that NSY-1 primarily exerts its inhibitory effect on SS digestion by inducing the expression GPCR STR-130.

      (11) In Figure 5C, please mention "ins-23 transcript levels" on the top of the graph so that it is clear what these data represent.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion.

      (12) Since all ins genes were upregulated in nsy-1 mutants (though ins-23 was indeed the most highly upregulated gene) on SS food from RNA seq analysis (Figure S5 B), it is important to first phenotypically characterize all of them using "worm length assay". If this analysis shows that ins-23 has the most robust phenotype, it would make more sense to just focus on ins-23.

      We agree with the reviewer that initial phenotypic characterization of candidate genes identified through transcriptomic analysis is valuable.Our RNA-seq data revealed that several insulin-like peptide genes, including ins-22, ins-23, ins-24, and ins-27, were significantly upregulated in the nsy-1 mutant on SS food (Figure 5—figure supplement 1B). We prioritized these insulin-like peptide genes for functional validation because they are known to act as neuropeptides capable of mediating non-cell autonomous signaling in previous studies (Shao et al 2016).

      To determine if any were functionally responsible for the enhanced SS growth observed in nsy-1 mutants, we performed functional phenotypic screening using the SS growth assay (worm length assay). We individually knocked down each of these candidates (ins-22, ins-23, ins-24, ins-27) in the nsy-1(ag3) mutant background. Among these, only RNAi targeting ins-23 significantly attenuated (i.e., suppressed) the enhanced development of the nsy-1(ag3) mutant on SS (Figure 5—figure supplement 2). This targeted functional screening revealed that ins-23 has the most robust and specific role in mediating the enhanced digestion phenotype downstream of NSY-1 loss, providing the critical justification for our subsequent focus on this particular insulin-like peptide.

      Ref:

      Shao, L. W., Niu, R., & Liu, Y. (2016). Neuropeptide signals cell non-autonomous mitochondrial unfolded protein response. Cell research, 26(11), 1182–1196. https://doi.org/10.1038/cr.2016.118

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      There are several minor errors and typos in the manuscript

      (1) A number of typos in the figures, like "length".

      Corrected.

      (2) The 'axis labels' are inconsistent from panel to panel, like "relative body length" and "relative worm length".

      Corrected.

      (3) The fonts are inconsistent from panel to panel.

      Corrected.

      (4) There is no Ex unique number for transgenic lines.

      Corrected.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor points:

      (1)  Figure 3B, 3C, 3G, 4D, 4F, 5D, 5E, and 6C: Replace "lenth" with "length" (consistent with Figure 2A).

      Corrected.

      (2) Figure 4D: Correct "ctontrol" to "control."

      Corrected.

      (3) Figure 4G: Update the co-injection marker to Podr-1::GFP instead of Pstr-2::GFP.

      Corrected.

      (4) Figure 5C: This figure is missing from the Results section.

      Corrected.

      (5) Figure 6A: Label the graph with Pbcf-1::bcf-1::GFP, as in Figure 6D.

      Corrected.

      (6) Italicization: Lines 588 and 603-italicize nsy-1.

      Corrected.

      (7) Supplementary Figure S2A: Correct "Screeng" to "Screening."

      Corrected.

      (8) Spelling/Proofreading: Ensure consistent spelling and grammar, such as correcting "mutan" to "mutant" in Figure 4A.

      Corrected.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors adequately addressed the concerns I raised in my initial review, which are noted below.

      (1) I suggest that the authors choose a different term in their title, abstract and manuscript to describe the phenotypes associated with ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown other than an "inflammation-like response." Inflammation is a pathological term with four cardinal signs: redness (rubor), swelling (tumor), warmth (calor) and pain (dolor). These are not symptoms known to occur in C. elegans. The authors could consider using "inappropriate," "aberrant" or "toxic" immune activation in the title and abstract.

      (2) I think it is important to point out in the context of the authors novelty claim in the abstract and manuscript that the toxic effects of inappropriate immune activation in C. elegans has been widely catalogued. For example: doi.org/10.1371/journal.ppat.1011120 (2023); doi:10.1186/s12915-016-0320-z (2016).; doi:10.1126/science.1203411 (2011); doi:10.1534/g3.115.025650 (2016). In addition, doi:10.7554/eLife.74206 (2022) previously described a mutation that caused innate immune activation that reduced accumulation of P. aeruginosa in the intestine, but also caused animals to have a shortened lifespan.

      Thus, I do not think this study reveals the existence of inflammatory-like responses in C. elegans, as stated by the authors. Indeed, I think it is important for the authors to remove this novelty claim from their paper and discuss their work in the context of these studies in a paragraph in the introduction.

      (3) The authors rely on the use of RNAi of ufd-1 and npl-4 to study their effect on P. aeruginosa colonization and pathogen resistance throughout the manuscript. To address the possibility of off-target effects of the RNAi, the authors should consider both (i) showing with qRT-PCR that these genes are indeed targeted during RNAi, and (ii) confirming their phenotypes with an orthologous technique, preferably by studying ufd-1 and npl-4 loss-of-function mutants [both in the wild-type and sek-1(km4) backgrounds]. If mutation of these genes is lethal, the authors could use Auxin Inducible Degron (AID) technology to induce the degradation of these proteins in post-developmental animals.

      (4) I am confused about the author's explanation regarding their observation that inhibition of the UFD-1/ NPL-4 complex extends the lifespan of sek-1(km25) animals, but not pmk-1(km25) animals, as SEK-1 is the MAPKK that functions immediately upstream of the p38 MAPK PMK-1 to promote pathogen resistance.

      I am also confused why their RNA-seq experiment revealed a signature of intracellular pathogen response genes and not PMK-1 targets, which the authors propose is accounting for toxic immune activation. Activation of which immune response leads to toxicity?

      (5) The authors did not test alternative explanations for why UFD-1/ NPL-4 complex inhibition compromises survival during pathogen infection, other than exuberant immune activation. For example, it is possible that inhibition of this proteosome complex shortens lifespan by compromising the general health/ normal physiology of nematodes. Immune responses could be activated as a secondary consequence of this stress, and not be a direct cause of early mortality. Does sek-1(km4) mutant suppress the lifespan shortened lifespan of ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown? This experiment should also be done with loss-of-function mutants, as noted in point 3.

      (6) The conclusion of Figure 6 hinges on an experiment that uses double RNAi to knockdown two genes at the same time (Fig. 6D and 6G), an approach that is inherently fraught in C. elegans biology owing to the likelihood that the efficiency of RNAi-mediated gene knockdown is compromised and may account for the observed phenotypes. The proper control for double RNAi is not empty vector + ufd-1(RNAi), but rather gfp(RNAi) + ufd-1(RNAi), as the introduction of a second hairpin RNA is what may compromise knockdown efficiency. In this context, it is important to confirm that knockdown of both genes occurs as expected (with qRT-PCR) and to confirm this phenotype using available elt-2 loss-of-function mutants.

      (7) A supplementary table with the source data for at least three replications (mean lifespan, n, statistical comparison) for each pathogenesis assay should be included in this manuscript.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors adequately addressed the concerns I raised.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      (1) I suggest that the author's choose a different term in their title, abstract and manuscript to describe the phenotypes associated with ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown other than an "inflammation-like response." Inflammation is a pathological term with four cardinal signs: redness (rubor), swelling (tumor), warmth (calor) and pain (dolor). These are not symptoms know to occur in C. elegans. The authors could consider using "tolerance" instead, as this term may better describe their findings.

      We have changed “inflammation-like response” to “aberrant immune response” throughout the manuscript.

      (2) It would help the reader to better understand the novelty of the findings in this study if the authors include a paragraph in their introduction to put their results in context of the published literature that has examined the relationship between immune activation and nematode health and survival. In particular, I suggest that the authors discuss doi:10.7554/eLife.74206 (2022), a study that charcterized a similar observation to what the authors are reporting. This study found that low cholesterol reduces pathogen tolerance and host survival during pathogen infection. Cholesterol scarcity increases p38 PMK-1 phosphorylation, priming immune effector induction in a manner that reduces pathogen accumulation in the intestine during a subsequent infection. I also suggest that the authors highlight in this introductory paragraph that the toxic effects of inappropriate immune activation in C. elegans has been widely catalogued. For example: doi.org/10.1371/journal.ppat.1011120 (2023); doi:10.1186/s12915-016-0320-z (2016).; doi:10.1126/science.1203411 (2011); doi:10.1534/g3.115.025650 (2016).

      In this context, the authors could consider re-wording their novelty claim in the abstract and introduction to take into account this previous body of work.

      We have added a paragraph to the Discussion section to place our findings in the context of previous research. The revised manuscript now includes the following text (page 11, lines 336–344): “Previous studies have shown that hyperactivation of immune pathways can negatively affect organismal development. For example, sustained activation of the p38 MAPK pathway impairs development in C. elegans (Cheesman et al., 2016; Kim et al., 2016), and excessive activation of the IPR also leads to developmental defects (Lažetić et al., 2023). Similar to our current study, recent work has demonstrated that heightened immune responses can reduce gut pathogen load while paradoxically decreasing host survival during infection (Ghosh and Singh, 2024; Peterson et al., 2022). However, our study uniquely shows that while such heightened immune responses are detrimental to immunocompetent animals, they can be beneficial in the context of immunodeficiency.”

      (3) The authors rely on the use of RNAi of ufd-1 and npl-4 to study their effect on P. aeruginosa colonization and pathogen resistance throughout the manuscript. To address the possibility of off-target effects of the RNAi, the authors should consider both (i) showing with qRT-PCR that these genes are indeed targeted during RNAi, and (ii) confirming their phenotypes with an orthologous technique, preferably by studying ufd-1 and npl-4 loss-offunction mutants [both in the wild-type and sek-1(km4) backgrounds]. If mutation of these genes is lethal, the authors could use Auxin Inducible Degron (AID) technology to induce the degradation of these proteins in post-developmental animals.

      We attempted several protocols of CRISPR in our laboratory to generate ufd-1 loss-of-function mutants; however, these efforts were unsuccessful. While this does not rule out the possibility of generating ufd-1 mutants, the failure is likely due to technical limitations on our part rather than an inherent inability to disrupt the gene. Nevertheless, to confirm the specificity of our RNAi-based approach, we quantified ufd-1 and npl-4 mRNA levels following RNAi treatment and found that each gene was specifically and effectively downregulated by its respective RNAi. 

      Importantly, ufd-1 and npl-4 RNA sequences do not share significant homology, yet knockdown of either gene results in nearly identical phenotypes, including reduced survival on P. aeruginosa, diminished intestinal colonization, and shortened lifespan. These consistent outcomes strongly support the conclusion that the phenotypes are attributable to the disruption of the functional UFD-1-NPL-4 complex. We have added these results in the revised manuscript (pages 4-5, lines 114-125): “To confirm the specificity of the RNAi knockdowns and rule out potential off-target effects, we examined transcript levels of ufd-1 and npl-4 following RNAi treatment. RNAi against ufd-1 significantly reduced ufd-1 mRNA levels without reducing npl-4 expression, while npl-4 RNAi specifically downregulated npl-4 transcripts with no impact on ufd-1 mRNA levels (Figure 1—figure supplement 1A and B). Additionally, alignment of ufd-1 and npl-4 mRNA sequences against the C. elegans transcriptome revealed no significant similarity to other genes, supporting the specificity of the RNAi constructs. Moreover, the ufd-1 and npl-4 RNA sequences do not share significant sequence similarity. Therefore, the highly similar phenotypes observed in ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown animals, including shortened lifespan, reduced survival on P. aeruginosa, and decreased intestinal colonization with P. aeruginosa, strongly suggest that these outcomes result from the disruption of the functional UFD-1-NPL-4 complex.”

      (4) I am confused about the authors explanation regarding their observation that inhibition of the UFD-1/ NPL-4 complex extends the lifespan of sek-1(km25) animals, but not pmk-1(km25) animals, as SEK-1 is the MAPKK that functions immediately upstream of the p38 MAPK PMK-1 to promote pathogen resistance.

      I am also confused why their RNA-seq experiment revealed a signature of intracellular pathogen response genes and not PMK-1 targets, which the authors propose is accounting for toxic immune activation. Activation of which immune response leads to toxicity?

      We consistently observe that sek-1(km4) mutants are more sensitive to P. aeruginosa infection than pmk-1(km25) mutants, a finding also reported in previous studies (for example, PMID: 33658510). Given that SEK-1 functions upstream of PMK-1 in the MAPK signaling cascade, it is plausible that SEK-1 also regulates additional MAP kinases, such as PMK-2 (PMID: 25671546), which could contribute to the enhanced susceptibility observed in sek-1 mutants.

      Our results show that inhibition of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex improves survival specifically in severely immunocompromised animals, such as sek-1(km4) mutants, but not in pmk1(km25) mutants. To further validate this, we generated the double mutant dbl-1(nk3);pmk1(km25), which exhibits reduced survival on P. aeruginosa compared to either single mutant.

      Notably, inhibition of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex also enhances survival in the dbl1(nk3);pmk-1(km25) background, reinforcing the observation that this response is specific to severely compromised immune states.

      We would also like to clarify that the observed phenotypes are independent of the SEK1/PMK-1 pathway, as shown in Figure 3A-3C, Figure 3—figure supplement 1, and Figure 4A-4C. The IPR seems to play a role in the observed phenotypes, as inhibition of some of the protease and pals genes (IPR genes) leads to increased P. aeruginosa colonization in ufd-1 knockdown animals (Figure 6—figure supplement 1). The other immune response pathway that leads to the observed phenotypes is ELT-2, as explained in Figure 6. Finally, we have included in the revised manuscript a note that, in addition, as-yet unidentified pathways are also likely contributing to the phenotypes triggered by disruption of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex.

      (5) The authors did not test alternative explanations for why UFD-1/ NPL-4 complex inhibition compromises survival during pathogen infection, other than exuberant immune activation. For example, it is possible that inhibition of this proteosome complex shortens lifespan by compromising the general health/ normal physiology of nematodes. Immune responses could be activated as a secondary consequence of this stress, and not be a direct cause of early morality. Does sek-1(km4) mutant suppress the lifespan shortened lifespan of ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown? This experiment should also be done with loss-offunction mutants, as noted in point 3.

      We have already included this data in Figure 4D, where we observed that ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown reduce the lifespan of sek-1(km4) animals. It is possible that immune activation is a secondary consequence of cellular stress induced by inhibition of the UFD-1NPL-4 complex. However, our data strongly suggest that the observed phenotypes, including reduced gut pathogen load and decreased survival on the pathogen, are due to the aberrant immune response activated by the inhibition of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex. Evidence from sek-1(km4) mutants particularly underscores the role of this dysregulated immune activation. While this aberrant immune response is detrimental to wild-type animals under pathogenic conditions, it appears to be beneficial in severely immunocompromised backgrounds. Specifically, in sek-1(km4) mutants, inhibition of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex enhances survival during P. aeruginosa infection (Figure 4A). However, under non-infectious conditions, where sek-1(km4) mutants exhibit a normal lifespan, the same immune activation becomes harmful (Figure 4D). Together, these findings demonstrate that the aberrant immune response induced by UFD-1–NPL-4 inhibition is context-dependent: it is advantageous only for immunocompromised animals under infection, but deleterious to healthy animals under infection and to both healthy and immunocompromised animals under non-infectious conditions.

      (6) The conclusion of Figure 6 hinges on an experiments that uses double RNAi to knockdown two genes at the same time (Fig. 6D and 6G), an approach that is inherently fraught in C. elegans biology owing the likelihood that the efficiency of RNAi-mediated gene knockdown is compromised and may account for the observed phenotypes. The proper control for double RNAi is not empty vector + ufd-1(RNAi), but rather gfp(RNAi) + ufd1(RNAi), as the introduction of a second hairpin RNA is what may compromise knockdown efficiency. In this context, it is important to confirm that knockdown of both genes occurs as expected (with qRT-PCR) and to confirm this phenotype using available elt-2 loss-of-function mutants.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful suggestion. We have repeated all double

      RNAi experiments using gfp RNAi as a control instead of the empty vector (Figure 6 and Figure 6—figure supplement 1). Additionally, we assessed the efficiency of gene knockdown in the double RNAi conditions (Figure 6—figure supplement 2) and found that RNAi efficacy was not compromised by the double RNAi treatment.

      (7) A supplementary table with the source data for at least three replications (mean lifespan, n, statistical comparison) for each pathogenesis assay should be included in this manuscript.

      The source data is provided for all the data presented in the manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to uncover what role, if any, the UFD1/NPL4 complex might play in the innate immune responses of the nematode C. elegans. The authors find that loss of the complex renders animals more sensitive to both pathogenic and non-pathogenic bacteria. However, there appears to be a complex interplay with known innate immune pathways since the loss of UFD1/NPL4 actually results in increased survival of animals lacking the canonical innate immune pathways.

      We thank the reviewer for providing an excellent summary of our work.

      Strengths:

      The authors perform robust genetic analysis to exclude and include possible mechanisms by which the UFD1/NPL4 pathway acts in the innate immune response.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting the strengths of our work.

      Weaknesses:

      The argument that the loss of the UFD1/NPL4 complex triggers a response that mimics that of an intracellular pathogen has not been thoroughly investigated. Additionally, the finding of a role of the GATA transcription factor, ELT-2, in this response is suggestive, but experiments showing sufficiency in the context of loss of the UFD1/NPL4 complex need to be explored.

      We have investigated the role of IPR genes in the phenotypes observed upon ufd1 knockdown (Figure 6—figure supplement 1), and our results suggest that the IPR may contribute, at least in part, to the phenotypic outcomes of ufd-1 RNAi. In the Discussion section (pages 11–12, lines 345–356), we have included a detailed discussion on the possible mechanisms underlying IPR activation upon inhibition of the UFD-1–NPL-4 complex. We agree that the interaction between the UFD-1–NPL-4 complex and the IPR is intriguing and warrants further investigation. However, we believe that an in-depth exploration of this interaction lies beyond the scope of the current study.

      We have incorporated new data on ELT-2 overexpression in the revised manuscript. Overexpression of ELT-2 partially phenocopies the effects of ufd-1 knockdown, supporting the idea that other pathways likely contribute to the full spectrum of phenotypes observed upon UFD-1-NPL-4 complex inhibition. The revised manuscript reads (page 10, lines 311319): “To determine whether ELT-2 activation alone is sufficient to recapitulate the phenotypes observed upon UFD-1-NPL-4 complex inhibition, we analyzed animals overexpressing ELT-2. Similar to ufd-1 knockdown, ELT-2 overexpression led to a significant reduction in the colonization of the gut by P. aeruginosa (Figure 6—figure supplement 3A and 3B). However, overexpression of ELT-2 did not alter the survival of worms on P. aeruginosa (Figure 6—figure supplement 3C). Taken together, these findings suggest that the phenotypes triggered by disruption of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex are partially mediated by ELT-2. However, additional pathways, yet to be identified, likely cooperate with ELT-2 to regulate both pathogen resistance and host survival.”

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      The authors could consider avoiding the use of descriptors (e.g., "drastic") when presenting their data.

      We have removed the descriptors.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      What happens with overexpression of ELT2?

      Overexpression of ELT-2 partially recapitulates the phenotypes of ufd-1 knockdowns, indicating that additional pathways are likely involved in controlling the phenotypes observed upon inhibition of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex. The revised manuscript reads (page 10, lines 311-319): “To determine whether ELT-2 activation alone is sufficient to recapitulate the phenotypes observed upon UFD-1-NPL-4 complex inhibition, we analyzed animals overexpressing ELT-2. Similar to ufd-1 knockdown, ELT-2 overexpression led to a significant reduction in the colonization of the gut by P. aeruginosa (Figure 6—figure supplement 3A and 3B). However, overexpression of ELT-2 did not alter the survival of worms on P. aeruginosa (Figure 6—figure supplement 3C). Taken together, these findings suggest that the phenotypes triggered by disruption of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex are partially mediated by ELT-2. However, additional pathways, yet to be identified, likely cooperate with ELT-2 to regulate both pathogen resistance and host survival.”

      The data with xbp-1 loss of function is very different than that of pek1 and atf-6. Does loss of ufd1/npl4 suppress the increased pathogen survival of xbp-1s overexpressing animals?

      We have examined worms overexpressing XBP-1s and found that overexpression of XBP-1s does not rescue the phenotypes caused by ufd-1 knockdown. The revised manuscript reads (page 6, lines 167-174): “To further examine the role of XBP-1 in this context, we assessed the effect of ufd-1 knockdown in animals neuronally overexpressing the constitutively active spliced form of XBP-1 (XBP-1s), which has been previously associated with enhanced longevity (Taylor and Dillin, 2013). Knockdown of ufd-1 resulted in the reduced survival of XBP-1s-overexpressing animals on P. aeruginosa, despite a concurrent decrease in bacterial colonization of the gut (Figure 2—figure supplement 1A-C). This indicated that the XBP-1 pathway was not required for the reduced P. aeruginosa colonization of ufd-1 knockdown animals.” 

      Lastly, while the pathogen burden is reduced in ufd1/npl4 loss and pumping rates are marginally affected, have you checked defecation rates? Could they be increased?

      We thank the reviewer for this valuable suggestion. We measured defecation rates following ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown and, unexpectedly, found that inhibition of ufd-1/npl-4 leads to a reduction in defecation frequency. These findings clearly indicate that altered defecation cannot explain the observed decrease in gut colonization. The revised manuscript reads (page 5, lines 138-148): “The clearance of intestinal contents through the defecation motor program (DMP) is known to influence gut colonization by P. aeruginosa in C. elegans (Das et al., 2023). It is therefore conceivable that knockdown of the UFD-1-NPL-4 complex might increase defecation frequency, thereby promoting the physical expulsion of bacteria and resulting in reduced gut colonization. To test this possibility, we measured DMP rates in animals subjected to ufd-1 and npl-4 RNAi. Contrary to this hypothesis, both ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown animals exhibited a significant reduction in defecation frequency compared to control RNAi-treated animals (Figure 1—figure supplement 2C). This reduction in DMP rate persisted even after 12 hours of exposure to P. aeruginosa (Figure 1—figure supplement 2D). Thus, the change in the DMP rate in ufd-1 and npl-4 knockdown animals is unlikely to be the reason for the reduced gut colonization by P. aeruginosa.”

      In summary, we would like to thank the reviewers again for providing constructive and thoughtful feedback. We believe we have fully addressed all the concerns of the reviewers by carrying out several new experiments and modifying the text. The manuscript has undergone substantial revision and has thereby improved significantly. We do hope that the evidence in support of the conclusions is found to be complete in the revised manuscript.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a compelling study identifying RBMX2 as a novel host factor upregulated during Mycobacterium bovis infection.

      The study demonstrates that RBMX2 plays a role in:

      (1) Facilitating M. bovis adhesion, invasion, and survival in epithelial cells.

      (2) Disrupting tight junctions and promoting EMT.

      (3) Contributing to inflammatory responses and possibly predisposing infected tissue to lung cancer development.

      By using a combination of CRISPR-Cas9 library screening, multi-omics, coculture models, and bioinformatics, the authors establish a detailed mechanistic link between M. bovis infection and cancer-related EMT through the p65/MMP-9 signaling axis. Identification of RBMX2 as a bridge between TB infection and EMT is novel.

      Strengths:

      This topic and data are both novel and significant, expanding the understanding of transcriptomic diversity beyond RBM2 in M. bovis responsive functions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The abstract and introduction sometimes suggest RBMX2 has protective anti-TB functions, yet results show it facilitates pathogen adhesion and survival. The authors need to rephrase claims to avoid contradiction.

      We sincerely appreciate the reviewer's valuable feedback regarding the need to clarify RBMX2's role throughout the manuscript. We have carefully revised the text to ensure consistent messaging about RBMX2's function in promoting M. bovis infection. Below we detail the specific modifications made:\

      (1) Introduction Revisions:

      Changed "The objective of this study was to elucidate the correlation between host genes and the susceptibility of M.bovis infection" to "The objective of this study was to identify host factors that promote susceptibility to M.bovis infection"

      Revised "RBMX2 polyclonal and monoclonal cell lines exhibited favorable phenotypes" to "RBMX2 knockout cell lines showed reduced bacterial survival"

      Replaced "The immune regulatory mechanism of RBMX2" with "The role of RBMX2 in facilitating M.bovis immune evasion"

      (2) Results Revisions:

      Modified "RBMX2 fails to affect cell morphology and the ability to proliferate and promotes M.bovis infection" to "RBMX2 does not alter cell viability but significantly enhances M.bovis infection"

      Strengthened conclusion in Figure 4: "RBMX2 actively disrupts tight junctions to facilitate bacterial invasion"

      (3) Discussion Revisions:

      Revised screening description: "We screened host factors affecting M.bovis susceptibility and identified RBMX2 as a key promoter of infection"

      Strengthened concluding statement: "In summary, RBMX2 drives TB pathogenesis by compromising epithelial barriers and inducing EMT"

      These targeted revisions ensure that:

      All sections consistently present RBMX2 as promoting infection; the language aligns with our experimental finding; potential protective interpretations have been eliminated. We believe these modifications have successfully addressed the reviewer's concern while maintaining the manuscript's original structure and scientific content. We appreciate the opportunity to improve our manuscript and thank the reviewer for this constructive suggestion.

      (2) While p65/MMP-9 is convincingly implicated, the role of MAPK/p38 and JNK is less clearly resolved.

      We sincerely appreciate the reviewer's insightful comment regarding the roles of MAPK/p38 and JNK in our study. Our experimental data clearly demonstrated that RBMX2 knockout significantly reduced phosphorylation levels of p65, p38, and JNK (Fig. 5A), indicating potential involvement of all three pathways in RBMX2-mediated regulation.

      Through systematic functional validation, we obtained several important findings:

      In pathway inhibition experiments, p65 activation (PMA treatment) showed the most dramatic effects on both tight junction disruption (ZO-1, OCLN reduction) and EMT marker regulation (E-cadherin downregulation, N-cadherin upregulation);p38 activation (ML141 treatment) exhibited moderate effects on these processes; JNK activation (Anisomycin treatment) displayed minimal impact.

      Most conclusively, siRNA-mediated silencing of p65 alone was sufficient to:

      Restore epithelial barrier function

      Reverse EMT marker expression

      Reduce bacterial adhesion and invasion

      These results establish a clear hierarchy in pathway importance: p65 serves as the primary mediator of RBMX2's effects, while p38 plays a secondary role and JNK appears non-essential under our experimental conditions. We have now clarified this relationship in the revised Discussion section to strengthen this conclusion.

      This refined understanding of pathway hierarchy provides important mechanistic insights while maintaining consistency with all our experimental data. We thank the reviewer for this valuable suggestion that helped improve our manuscript.

      (3) Metabolomics results are interesting but not integrated deeply into the main EMT narrative.

      Thank you for this constructive suggestion. In this article, we detected the metabolome of RBMX2 knockout and wild-type cells after Mycobacterium bovis infection, which mainly served as supporting evidence for our EMT model. However, we did not conduct an in-depth discussion of these findings. We have now added a detailed discussion of this section to further support our EMT model.

      ADD:Meanwhile, metabolic pathways enriched after RBMX2 deletion, such as nucleotide metabolism, nucleotide sugar synthesis, and pentose interconversion, primarily support cell proliferation and migration during EMT by providing energy precursors, regulating glycosylation modifications, and maintaining redox balance; cofactor synthesis and amino sugar metabolism participate in EMT regulation through influencing metabolic remodeling and extracellular matrix interactions; chemokine and cGMP-PKG signaling pathways may further mediate inflammatory responses and cytoskeletal rearrangements, collectively promoting the EMT process.

      (4) A key finding and starting point of this study is the upregulation of RBMX2 upon M. bovis infection. However, the authors have only assessed RBMX2 expression at the mRNA level following infection with M. bovis and BCG. To strengthen this conclusion, it is essential to validate RBMX2 expression at the protein level through techniques such as Western blotting or immunofluorescence. This would significantly enhance the credibility and impact of the study's foundational observation.

      Thank you for your comment. We have supplemented the experiments in this part and found that Mycobacterium bovis infection can significantly enhance the expression level of RBMX2 protein.

      (5) The manuscript would benefit from a more in-depth discussion of the relationship between tuberculosis (TB) and lung cancer. While the study provides experimental evidence suggesting a link via EMT induction, integrating current literature on the epidemiological and mechanistic connections between chronic TB infection and lung tumorigenesis would provide important context and reinforce the translational relevance of the findings.

      We sincerely appreciate the valuable comments from the reviewer. We fully agree with your suggestion to further explore the relationship between tuberculosis (TB) and lung cancer. In the revised manuscript, we will add a new paragraph in the Discussion section to systematically integrate the current literature on the epidemiological and mechanistic links between chronic tuberculosis infection and lung cancer development, including the potential bridging roles of chronic inflammation, tissue damage repair, immune microenvironment remodeling, and the epithelial-mesenchymal transition (EMT) pathway. This addition will help more comprehensively interpret the clinical implications of the observed EMT activation in the context of our study, thereby enhancing the biological plausibility and clinical translational value of our findings.

      ADD:There is growing epidemiological evidence suggesting that chronic TB infection represents a potential risk factor for the development of lung cancer. Studies have shown that individuals with a history of TB exhibit a significantly increased risk of lung cancer, particularly in areas of the lung with pre-existing fibrotic scars, indicating that chronic inflammation, tissue repair, and immune microenvironment remodeling may collectively contribute to malignant transformation 74. Moreover, EMT not only endows epithelial cells with mesenchymal features that enhance migratory and invasive capacity but is also associated with the acquisition of cancer stem cell-like properties and therapeutic resistance 75. Therefore, EMT may serve as a crucial molecular link connecting chronic TB infection with the malignant transformation of lung epithelial cells, warranting further investigation in the intersection of infection and tumorigenesis.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      I am not familiar with cancer biology, so my review mainly focuses on the infection part of the manuscript. Wang et al identified an RNA-binding protein RBMX2 that links the Mycobacterium bovis infection to the epithelial-Mesenchymal transition and lung cancer progression. Upon mycobacterium infection, the expression of RBMX2 was moderately increased in multiple bovine and human cell lines, as well as bovine lung and liver tissues. Using global approaches, including RNA-seq and proteomics, the authors identified differential gene expression caused by the RBMX2 knockout during M. bovis infection. Knockout of RBMX2 led to significant upregulations of tight-junction related genes such as CLDN-5, OCLN, ZO-1, whereas M. bovis infection affects the integrity of epithelial cell tight junctions and inflammatory responses. This study establishes that RBMX2 is an important host factor that modulates the infection process of M. bovis.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study tested multiple types of bovine and human cells, including macrophages, epithelial cells, and clinical tissues at multiple timepoints, and firmly confirmed the induced expression of RBMX2 upon M. bovis infection.

      (2) The authors have generated the monoclonal RBMX2 knockout cell lines and comprehensively characterized the RBMX2-dependent gene expression changes using a combination of global omics approaches. The study has validated the impact of RBMX2 knockout on the tight-junction pathway and on the M. bovis infection, establishing RBMX2 as a crucial host factor.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The RBMX2 was only moderately induced (less than 2-fold) upon M. bovis infection, arguing its contribution may be small. Its value as a therapeutic target is not justified. How RBMX2 was activated by M. bovis infection was unclear.

      Thank you for your valuable and constructive comments. In this study, we primarily utilized the CRISPR whole-genome screening approach to identify key factors involved in bovine tuberculosis infection. Through four rounds of screening using a whole-genome knockout cell line of bovine lung epithelial cells infected with Mycobacterium bovis, we identified RBMX2 as a critical factor.

      Although the transcriptional level change of RBMX2 was less than two-fold, following the suggestion of Reviewer 1, we examined its expression at the protein level, where the change was more pronounced, and we have added these results to the manuscript.

      Regarding the mechanism by which RBMX2 is activated upon M. bovis infection, we previously screened for interacting proteins using a Mycobacterium tuberculosis secreted and membrane protein library, but unfortunately, we did not identify any direct interacting proteins from M. tuberculosis (https://doi.org/10.1093/nar/gkx1173).

      (2) Although multiple time points have been included in the study, most analyses lack temporal resolution. It is difficult to appreciate the impact/consequence of M. bovis infection on the analyzed pathways and processes.

      We appreciate the valuable comments from the reviewers. Although our study included multiple time points post-infection, in our experimental design we focused on different biological processes and phenotypes at distinct time points:

      During the early phase (e.g., 2 hours post-infection), we focused on barrier phenotypes during the intermediate phase (e.g., 24 hours post-infection), we concentrated more on pathway activation and EMT phenotypes;

      And during the later phase (e.g., 48–72 hours post-infection), we focused more on cell death phenotypes, which were validated in another FII article (https://doi.org/10.3389/fimmu.2024.1431207).

      We also examined the impact of varying infection durations on RBMX2 knockout EBL cellular lines via GO analysis. At 0 hpi, genes were primarily related to the pathways of cell junctions, extracellular regions, and cell junction organization. At 24 hpi, genes were mainly associated with pathways of the basement membrane, cell adhesion, integrin binding and cell migration By 48 hpi, genes were annotated into epithelial cell differentiation and were negatively regulated during epithelial cell proliferation. This indicated that RBMX2 can regulate cellular connectivity throughout the stages of M. bovis infection.

      For KEGG analysis, genes linked to the MAPK signaling pathway, chemical carcinogen-DNA adducts, and chemical carcinogen-receptor activation were observed at 0 hpi. At 24 hpi, significant enrichment was found in the ECM-receptor interaction, PI3K-Akt signaling pathway, and focal adhesion. Upon enrichment analysis at 48 hpi, significant enrichment was noted in the TGF-beta signaling pathway, transcriptional misregulation in cancer, microRNAs in cancer, small cell lung cancer, and p53 signaling pathway.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates the role of the host protein RBMX2 in regulating the response to Mycobacterium bovis infection and its connection to epithelial-mesenchymal transition (EMT), a key pathway in cancer progression. Using bovine and human cell models, the authors have wisely shown that RBMX2 expression is upregulated following M. bovis infection and promotes bacterial adhesion, invasion, and survival by disrupting epithelial tight junctions via the p65/MMP-9 signaling pathway. They also demonstrate that RBMX2 facilitates EMT and is overexpressed in human lung cancers, suggesting a potential link between chronic infection and tumor progression. The study highlights RBMX2 as a novel host factor that could serve as a therapeutic target for both TB pathogenesis and infection-related cancer risk.

      Strengths:

      The major strengths lie in its multi-omics integration (transcriptomics, proteomics, metabolomics) to map RBMX2's impact on host pathways, combined with rigorous functional assays (knockout/knockdown, adhesion/invasion, barrier tests) that establish causality through the p65/MMP-9 axis. Validation across bovine and human cell models and in clinical tissue samples enhances translational relevance. Finally, identifying RBMX2 as a novel regulator linking mycobacterial infection to EMT and cancer progression opens exciting therapeutic avenues.

      Weaknesses:

      Although it's a solid study, there are a few weaknesses noted below.

      (1) In the transcriptomics analysis, the authors performed (GO/KEGG) to explore biological functions. Did they perform the search locally or globally? If the search was performed with a global reference, then I would recommend doing a local search. That would give more relevant results. What is the logic behind highlighting some of the enriched pathways (in red), and how are they relevant to the current study?

      We appreciate the reviewer's thoughtful questions regarding our transcriptomic analysis. In this study, we employed a localized enrichment approach focusing specifically on gene expression profiles from our bovine lung epithelial cell system. This cell-type-specific analysis provides more biologically relevant results than global database searches alone.

      Regarding the highlighted pathways, these represent:

      Temporally significant pathways showing strongest enrichment at each stage:

      (1) 0h: Cell junction organization (immediate barrier response)

      (2) 24h: ECM-receptor interaction (early EMT initiation)

      (3) 48h: TGF-β signaling (chronic remodeling)

      Mechanistically linked to our core findings about RBMX2's role in:

      (1) Epithelial barrier disruption

      (2) Mesenchymal transition

      (3) Chronic infection outcomes

      We selected these particular pathways because they:

      (1) Showed the most statistically significant changes (FDR <0.001)

      (2) Formed a coherent biological narrative across infection stages

      (3) Were independently validated in our functional assays

      This targeted approach allows us to focus on the most infection-relevant pathways while maintaining statistical rigor.

      (2) While the authors show that RBMX2 expression correlates with EMT-related gene expression and barrier dysfunction, the evidence for direct association remains limited in this study. How does RBMX2 activate p65? Does it bind directly to p65 or modulate any upstream kinases? Could ChIP-seq or CLIP-seq provide further evidence for direct RNA or DNA targets of RBMX2 that drive EMT or NF-κB signaling?

      We sincerely appreciate the reviewer's in-depth questions regarding the mechanisms by which RBMX2 activates p65 and its association with EMT. Although the molecular mechanism remains to be fully elucidated, our study has provided experimental evidence supporting a direct regulatory relationship between RBMX2 and the p65 subunit of the NF-κB pathway. Specifically, we investigated whether the transcription factor p65 could directly bind to the promoter region of RBMX2 using CHIP experiments. The results demonstrated that the transcription factor p65 can physically bind to the RBMX2 region.

      Furthermore, dual-luciferase reporter assays were conducted, showing that p65 significantly enhances the transcriptional activity of the RBMX2 promoter, indicating a direct regulatory effect of RBMX2 on p65 expression.

      These findings support our hypothesis that RBMX2 activates the NF-κB signaling pathway through direct interaction with the p65 protein, thereby participating in the regulation of EMT progression and barrier function.

      In our subsequent work papers, we will also employ experiments such as CLIP to further investigate the specific mechanisms through which RBMX2 exerts its regulatory functions.

      ADD and Revise in Results:

      To thoroughly verify the regulatory mechanism between RBMX2 and p65, we initiated our investigation by conducting an in-depth analysis of the RBMX2 promoter region to identify potential interactions with the transcription factor p65. Initially, we performed molecular docking simulations to predict the binding affinity and interaction patterns between RBMX2 and p65 proteins. These simulations revealed multiple amino acid residues within the RBMX2 protein that formed strong, stable interactions with p65. The docking analysis yielded a high docking score of 1978.643 (Fig. 7K), indicating a significant likelihood of a direct physical interaction between these two proteins.

      To complement the protein-protein interaction analysis, we next investigated whether p65 could directly bind to the promoter region of the RBMX2 gene at the transcriptional level. Using the JASPAR database, a comprehensive resource for transcription factor binding profiles, we queried the RBMX2 promoter sequence for potential p65 binding sites. This analysis identified several putative binding motifs, suggesting that p65 may act as a transcriptional regulator of RBMX2 expression.

      To experimentally validate this transcriptional regulatory relationship, we employed a dual-luciferase reporter assay. We cloned the RBMX2 promoter region containing the predicted p65 binding sites into a luciferase reporter plasmid. This construct was then co-transfected into cultured cells along with a plasmid expressing p65. The luciferase activity was significantly increased in cells expressing p65 compared to control groups, providing functional evidence that p65 enhances the transcriptional activity of the RBMX2 promoter (Fig. 7I).

      Furthermore, to confirm the direct binding of p65 to the RBMX2 promoter in a chromatin context, we performed chromatin immunoprecipitation followed by quantitative PCR (ChIP-qPCR). In this assay, we used specific antibodies against p65 to immunoprecipitate chromatin fragments containing p65-bound DNA. The enriched DNA fragments were then analyzed using primers targeting the RBMX2 promoter region. Our results demonstrated a significant enrichment of the RBMX2 promoter in the p65 immunoprecipitated samples compared to the IgG control, thereby confirming that p65 physically associates with the RBMX2 promoter in vivo (Fig. 7J). Collectively, these findings-ranging from computational docking predictions to transcriptional reporter assays and ChIP validation-provide strong evidence supporting a direct regulatory interaction between p65 and RBMX2. This regulatory mechanism may play a critical role in the biological pathways involving these two molecules, particularly in contexts such as inflammation, immune response, or cellular stress, where p65 (a subunit of NF-κB) is known to be prominently involved.

      (3) The manuscript suggests that RBMX2 enhances adhesion/invasion of several bacterial species (e.g., E. coli, Salmonella), not just M. bovis. This raises questions about the specificity of RBMX2's role in Mycobacterium-specific pathogenesis. Is RBMX2 a general epithelial barrier regulator or does it exhibit preferential effects in mycobacterial infection contexts? How does this generality affect its potential as a TB-specific therapeutic target?

      Thank you for your valuable comments. When we initially designed this experiment, we were interested in whether the RBMX2 knockout cell line could confer effective resistance not only against Mycobacterium bovis but also against Gram-negative and Gram-positive bacteria. Surprisingly, we indeed observed resistance to the invasion of these pathogens, albeit weaker compared to that against Mycobacterium bovis.

      Nevertheless, we believe these findings merit publication in eLife. Moreover, RBMX2 knockout does not affect the phenotype of epithelial barrier disruption under normal conditions; its significant regulatory effect on barrier function is only evident upon infection with Mycobacterium bovis.

      Importantly, during our genome-wide knockout library screening, RBMX2 was not identified in the screening models for Salmonella or Escherichia coli, but was consistently detected across multiple rounds of screening in the Mycobacterium bovis model.

      (4) The quality of the figures is very poor. High-resolution images should be provided.

      Thank you for your feedback; we provided higher-resolution images.

      (5) The methods are not very descriptive, particularly the omics section.

      Thank you for your comments; we have revised the description of the sequencing section.

      (6) The manuscript is too dense, with extensive multi-omics data (transcriptomics, proteomics, metabolomics) but relatively little mechanistic integration. The authors should have focused on the key mechanistic pathways in the figures. Improving the narratives in the Results and Discussion section could help readers follow the logic of the experimental design and conclusions.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have streamlined the figures and revised the description of the results section accordingly.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) The first part of the results and the major conclusions largely overlap with the previous paper by the same authors (Frontiers in Immunology, https://doi.org/10.3389/fimmu.2024.1431207). The previous paper has already established that RBMX2 is induced upon infection as a host factor, and its knockout led to cell proliferation. Thus, the current paper should focus more on the mechanisms rather than repeating the previous story.

      We appreciate the reviewer's careful reading and constructive feedback. We fully acknowledge the foundational work published in our Frontiers in Immunology paper (doi:10.3389/fimmu.2024.1431207), which established RBMX2 as an infection-induced host factor affecting cell proliferation. The current study represents a significant mechanistic extension of these initial findings, with the following key advances:

      (1) Novel Mechanistic Insights (Current Study Focus):

      Discovery of the p65/MMP-9 pathway as the central mechanism mediating RBMX2's effects on EMT (Figs. 4-6)

      First demonstration of RBMX2's role in epithelial barrier disruption (Figs. 2-3)

      Identification of temporal regulation patterns during infection progression (Fig. 7)

      (2) Expanded Biological Scope:

      Demonstration of RBMX2's function in both bovine and human cell systems (vs. previous bovine-only data)

      Clinical correlation with TB lesions

      Therapeutic potential assessment through pathway inhibition

      (3) Technical Advancements:

      CRISPR-based mechanistic validation (vs. previous siRNA approach)

      Multi-omics integration (transcriptomics + metabolomics)

      Advanced live-cell imaging

      We have now:

      Removed redundant proliferation data from Results

      Sharpened the Introduction to highlight mechanistic questions

      Added explicit discussion comparing both studies

      The current work provides the first comprehensive mechanistic framework for RBMX2's role in TB pathogenesis, moving substantially beyond the initial observational findings. We believe these new insights into the molecular pathways and therapeutic implications represent an important advance for the field..

      (2) Line 107-110: The CRISPR screening results are not provided. Has it been published, or is it an unpublished dataset? RBMX2 knockout cells exhibited 'significant' resistance to the infection. How significant? Data?

      Thank you for your valuable comments. The library mentioned, along with data on another host factor, TOP1, is being submitted by another researcher from our laboratory to a journal, and we will cite each other in the future. RBMX2 ranked second in terms of enrichment among all the identified genes, and its knockout cell line exhibited the second highest anti-infective capacity among all the host factors.

      (3) Line 152: The RNA-seq analysis has already been performed/reported in the previous Frontiers paper. Therein, 173 genes were found to be differentially expressed. In the current paper, 42 genes were differentially expressed in all three time points. If the addition of new time points were the highlight of this paper, why would the authors focus on differentially expressed genes from all three time points?

      Thank you for your valuable comments.

      In the newly added data, we aimed to investigate the temporal changes during Mycobacterium bovis infection of host cells.

      Previous study (Frontiers): Single 24h timepoint → 173 DEGs

      Current study: Three timepoints (0h, 24h, 48h) with 42 consistently regulated genes → Reveals temporally stable core regulators of infection response

      On one hand, we briefly described in the manuscript those important genes that exhibited changes across all time points.

      On the other hand, in the supplementary materials, we also focused on the enriched genes at each individual time point, to better understand the temporal dynamics regulated by RBMX2.

      (4) Line 153: The '0 h' time point is in fact 2 h post-infection. Why did the authors skip the real 0h time point? All the analysis and data should be relative to the 0h pi, rather than relative to the WT at each time point.

      We appreciate the reviewer's important question regarding our timepoint nomenclature. The experimental timeline was designed as follows:

      (1) Infection Protocol:

      2h to 0h: Bacterial co-culture (MOI 20:1)

      0h: Gentamicin (100 μg/ml) added to kill extracellular bacteria

      0h+: Monitored intracellular survival

      (2) Rationale for "0h" Designation:

      This marks the onset of intracellular infection phase when Extracellular bacteria are eliminated (validated by plating)Host cell responses to intracellular pathogens begin All subsequent measurements reflect genuine infection (not attachment)

      (3)Technical Validation:

      Confirmed complete extracellular killing by:

      Culture supernatant plating (0 CFU after gentamycin)

      Microscopy ( no surface-associated bacteria)

      (4) Comparative Analysis:

      All data are presented as:

      Fold-change relative to uninfected controls at each timepoint

      We have now:

      Clarified the timeline in Methods

      Specified "0h = post-gentamicin" in all figure legends

      This standardized approach aligns with established intracellular pathogen studies (e.g., Cell Microbiol. 2018;20:e12840). We're happy to adjust terminology if "0hpi (post-invasion)" would be clearer.

      (5) Figure 2F: The data should be compared to the 0h pi, and show the temporal changes of gene expression.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have added additional information to this section. At the same time, we also aim to focus on the changes in gene expression between RBMX2 knockout and wild-type (WT) samples.

      We have now:

      Added temporal expression profiles relative to 0hpi baseline (SFig.4C).

      Clarified the dual normalization approach in Methods

      Maintained original between-group comparisons for phenotypic correlation

      (6) Line 207. Not all the proteins were down-regulated post-infection.

      Thank you for your comment. The overall level of the Tight junction related protein is downregulated, although it may not show a significant change at a specific time point.

      We have revised our description, changing the keyword from "All" to "Most."

      (7) Line 278, the introduction of the H1299 cell line should appear earlier when it was mentioned for the first time in the manuscript.

      Thank you for your comment. We have provided a description in the abstract and Result1.

      ADD:

      Abstrat: Meanwhile, we also validated the EMT process in human lung epithelial cancer cells H1299.

      Result 1: Furthermore, RBMX2-silenced H1299 cells exhibited a higher survival rate compared to H1299 ShNc cells after M. bovis infection (Fig. 1H).

      (8) Figure 4 is huge and almost illegible, which may be divided into two figures.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have streamlined the figures and revised the description of the results section accordingly.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      I encountered frequent grammatical and syntactic issues. Thoroughly revising the manuscript for English language and clarity, preferably with professional editing assistance, could increase the quality of the paper.

      Thank you for your valuable comments; we will invite a professional editor to polish the language.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In the manuscript, Aldridge and colleagues investigate the role of IL-27 in regulating hematopoiesis during T. gondii infection. Using loss-of-function approaches, reporter mice, and the generation of serial chimeric mice, they elegantly demonstrate that IL-27 induction plays a critical role in modulating bone marrow myelopoiesis and monocyte generation to the infection site. The study is well-designed, with clear experimental approaches that effectively adddress the mechanisms by which IL-27 regulates bone marrow myelopoiesis and prevents HSC exhaustion.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Aldridge et al. aim to demonstrate the role of IL27 in limiting emergency myelopoiesis in response to Toxoplasma gondii infection by acting directly at the level of early haematopoietic progenitors.

      They used different mouse genetic models, such as HSC lineage tracing, IL27 and IL27R-deficient mice, to show that:

      (1) HSCs actively participate in emergency myelopoiesis during Toxoplasma gondii infection.

      (2) The absence of IL27 and IL27R increases monocyte progenitors and monocytes, mainly inflammatory monocytes CCR2hi.

      (3) At steady state, loss of IL27 impairs HSC fitness as competitive transplantation shows long-term engraftment deficiency of IL27 BM cells. This impairment is exacerbated after infection.

      (4) IL27 is produced by various BM and other tissue cells at steady state, and its expression increases with infection, mainly by increasing the number of monocytes producing it.

      Although it is indisputable that IL27 has a role in emergency myelopoiesis by limiting the number of proinflammatory monocytes in response to infection, the authors' claim that it acts only on HSCs and not on more committed progenitors (CMP, GMP, MP) is not supported by the quality of the data presented here, as described below in the weakness section. In addition, this study highlights a role for IL27 during infection, but does not focus on trained immunity, which is the focus of the targeted elife issue.

      We thank the reviewer for these comments. We did try (and perhaps failed) to highlight that all cells within the HSPC category, which includes HSCs and MPPs, have the potential to contribute. The lack of IRGM1-RFP reporter expression in CMPs (Supp Fig5C) suggests that only HSCs and MPPs are progenitors that respond to IL-27 within the bone marrow, and thus that IL-27 signaling on these contributes to the effects observed on monopoiesis and peripheral monocyte populations. We have emphasized this in the revised manuscript, particularly in the introduction (line 82) and discussion (lines 469-472). While this manuscript does not focus solely on trained immunity, the impacts of infection regulating HSC differentiation and having a long-term impact on this compartment are a central theme of trained immunity. For example, Figure 6 and the supporting supplemental figures almost exclusively focus on the differentiation potential that is programed into LTHSCs by infection and the role of IL-27 in regulating this programing. Additionally, Figure 7 shows the long-term consequences of such training. The introduction      and discussion have been modified  to emphasize these connections to trained immunity.         

      Weakness

      (1) In Figure 4, MFI quantification is required. This figure also shows the expression level (FACS and RNA) in progenitors (GMP and CMP, GP, MP), which is quite similar to that of HSC at this level, so it is really surprising that CMP does not respond at all to IL27 (S5C).

      As requested, we have included the MFIs, calculated as a fold change over control FMOs, in the revised manuscript. While HSPCs and CMPs show relatively similar RNA expression of Il27ra (Supp. Fig. 5 A), the levels of surface IL-27R expression by CMPs is lower than HSPCs (Fig. 4C, revised). Additional downstream progenitors (including GMPs) show highly reduced RNA expression and a corresponding low expression of the receptor protein. This is now more apparent with the quantified MFIs (Fig 4-5).

      (2) Total BM was used to test the direct effect of IL27 on HSC. There could be an indirect effect from other more mature BM cells, even if they show lower receptor expression than HSC. This should be done on a different sorted population to prove the direct effect of IL27 on HSC. The authors need to look more closely at some stat-dependent genes or stat itself in different sorted cell populations, not just irgm1. It is also known that Stat is associated with increased HSC proliferation in response to IFN, which is the opposite of what is observed here.

      We thank the reviewer for this question. We have found that the methanol fixation required to detect pSTAT disrupted the ability to stain for HSPCs by flow cytometry. Thus, we used the IRGM1 reporter, which we have found to be a sensitive and high-fidelity reporter of STAT1 activity while preserving epitope markers of HSPCs.

      We agree that the use of bulk bone marrow in the in vitro stimulations could allow for the activation of non-HSPC cell types that are IL-27R+. This is now emphasized in the text. However, there are advantages to this bulk approach as it allows simultaneous analysis of all HSPC populations and downstream progenitors in the same cultures, allowing the ability to assess how the small numbers of IL-27R expressing lymphocytes present in these cultures respond (data that are now included, Supp. Fig. 5C). These cultures also allow a direct comparison of our IL-27R expression analysis with responsiveness to IL-27. Only a selection of the populations analyzed are shown in these data; however, all populations in Figure 4A were also analyzed in Supp. Fig. 5C. These data sets directly correlate receptor expression with sensitivity to IL-27. If this effect was indirect (i.e the ability of IL-27 to induce IFN-γ) then we would expect more robust expression of the IRGM1 reporter across other cell populations. However, while IFN-γ stimulates broad expression of IRGM1, the effects of IL-27 are restricted to HSPC and mature lymphocytes (Supp. Fig. 5C). In other words, the cells that express the highest levels of the IL-27R are most responsive to IL-27.

      While we do not directly measure HSPC proliferation in these cultures, we agree with the reviewer that the decreased proportions of proliferating HSPCs seen in the absence of IL-27 during infection (Fig. 7A) is a complex data set. The reviewer is also correct that interferons can promote HSC proliferations; however, they can also promote cell stress, DNA damage, and even cell death of HSCs during chronic exposure (reviewed extensively in Demerdash, Y., et al. Exp Hematol. 2021. PMID: 33571568). Thus IFNs, much like IL-27, appear to regulate HSPCs with contextual importance, inducing their proliferation but also death. The activation of STAT1 and STAT3 by IL-27 may be at the core of some of these effects observed in our data, and we point out that IL-10, another activator of STAT1+3, has been shown to limit HSC responses to inflammation (lined 58-62), but we have also presented other possibilities in the discussion.

      (3) The decrease in HSC fitness in IL27R KO at steady state could be an indirect effect of the increase in proinflammatory monocytes contributing to high levels of inflammatory cytokines in the BM and thus chronic HSC activation that is enhanced in response to infection. What is the pro-Inflammatory cytokine profile of the BM of IL27 OR IL27R deficient mice and of mixed chimera mice.

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful comment. This was part of our stated rationale in generating the mixed WT:IL-27R-/- BM chimeras presented in Figure 2. In this mixed setting, there remained differences between the ability of the IL-27R sufficient and deficient stem cells to generate inflammatory macrophages. These results suggest that differences in the inflammatory environment do not account for the differences observed. This conclusion is further supported by the observation that the infection-induced levels of IFN-γ in the bone marrow are equivalent in the presence or absence of IL-27 (now included in the revised manuscript, Supp. Fig. 1F).

      (4) Furthermore, the FACS profile of KI67/brdu of Figure 7 is doubtful, as it is shown in different literature that KSL are not predominantly quiescent as shown here, but about 50% are KI67-. This is also inconsistent with the increase of HSC observed in Figure 1. Quantification of total BruDU+ HSC and other progenitors is also important to quantify all cells that have proliferated during infection. As the repopulation of IL27-deficient BM is also lower in the absence of infection the proliation  of HSC in IL27R KO mice in the absence of infection is also important.

      The comment indicates that the reviewer is concerned that our staining for Ki67 is on the low end of reported literature (~10-50% of LSKs, depending on age of the mice and simulation (Thapa R, et al. Stem Cell Res Ther. 2023. PMID: 37280691; Nies KPH, et al. Cytometry A. 2018. PMID: 30176186)). Our stains were performed on cells from infected mice, which does alter the classic markers used to identify HSPCs. For this reason, we are stringent with our gating strategy and may be excluding more HSPCs than are included in other reports. We have included our FMO control in the revised manuscript to indicate our gating approach (Supp. Fig. 9A). While the population of Ki67+ HSPCs is low, these results were consistent between our experiments and provide data sets that are interpretable.

      (5) The immunofluorescence in Figure 3 shows a high level of background and it is difficult to see the GFP and tomato positive cells. In this sense, the number of HSCs quantified as Procr+ (more than 8000 on a single BM section) is inconsistent with the total number of HSCs that a BM can contain (i.e., around 6000 per BM as quantified in Figure 1).

      We agree with the reviewer and have found that there is a high level of background in these stains. We have thresholded these images, as described in our methods, to minimize this. Additionally, the increased numbers of Procr+ cells in the imaging vs our flow data is expected, and has been reported by others (Steinert, EM, et al. Cell. 2015. PMID: 25957682).

      (6) The addition of arrows to the figure will help to visualise positive cells. It is also not clear why the author normalised the GFP+ cells to the tomato+ cells in Figure 3D.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment and have added the suggested arrows. We have also included a more detailed explanation for our normalization strategy.

      (7) Furthermore, even if monocytes represent a high proportion of IL27-producing cells, they are only 50% of the cells at 5dpi, as shown in Figure 3 and S4. Without other monocyte markers, line 307 is incorrect.

      We thank the reviewer for this clarification and have adjusted the text accordingly.

      (8) How do the authors explain that in Figure 1, 5-10% of labelled precursors and monocytes can give 100% of monocytes? This would mean that only labelled HSC can differentiate into PEC monocytes. 5

      We thank the reviewer for their interest in this result. Monocytes and macrophages are some

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      I have two minor comments that could enhance the conceptual framework of this study:

      (1) The authors indirectly show that IL-27R expression on HSPCs is necessary for regulating HSC proliferation and preventing exhaustion. However, given that they have access to IL-27RFlox mice, they could cross these with Fgd5Cre mice to specifically delete IL-27R on long-term HSCs. This would provide direct evidence for the role of IL-27 signaling in LTHSCs during infection.

      We appreciate this comment and did attempt this experiment with several HSPC specific Cres, including the Procr-cre (used elsewhere in the manuscript) and the MDS1-cre-ERT2 (Jackson Laboratory Strain #:032863). Unfortunately, validation revealed that deletion efficiency of the IL-27R with these HSCspecific Cre lines was inefficient, and so experiments are ongoing to enhance efficiency of the deletion and test alternative Cre lines (such as the Fgd5-cre).

      (2) Since memory T and B cells often home to the bone marrow, it would be interesting to consider the potential cross-talk between these cells, HSPCs, and IL-27 signaling during secondary T. gondii infection. A brief discussion of this possibility would strengthen the study's broader implications.

      We thank the reviewer for this opportunity. We have previously investigated the interplay between immune cells in the bone marrow (Glatman Zaretsky A, et al. Cell Rep. 2017. PMID: 28228257) and now include these possibilities in the discussion (line 465-470).

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor points:

      (1) Figures 6F and 7B: should be shown as % of donor and not total number to clarify the lineage potency of LTHSC. The fact that the results of transplantation are separated into different figures makes it not easy to follow. To see if the increase in monocyte production by IL27 KO BM is specific, the percent of donorderived cells for other populations, such as lymphoid, but also in MP, and inflammatory monocytes, is necessary to confirm Figure 2.

      Perhaps there has been a misunderstanding? In these plots, we are not analyzing mixed chimeras but single transfer chimeras into lethally irradiated hosts. Thus, the % of donor reaches ~80- 90%. However, to measure the actual output of the HSPCs, the cell number was necessary to compare amongst groups. Additional description is provided in the figure legends and in the text of the manuscript (lines 391-392, 434-436, 651-653, and 680-682).

      (2) The heavy UMAP description is unnecessary. Responses As requested, we have reduced this description of how the UMAPs were derived.

      As requested, we have reduced this description of how the UMAPs were derived

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary:

      This fundamental work employed multidisciplinary approaches and conducted rigorous experiments to study how a specific subset of neurons in the dorsal striatum (i.e., "patchy" striatal neurons) modulates locomotion speed depending on the valence of the naturalistic context. 

      Strengths: 

      The scientific findings are novel and original and significantly advance our understanding of how the striatal circuit regulates spontaneous movement in various contexts.  Response: We appreciate the reviewer’s positive evaluation.

      Weaknesses: 

      This is extensive research involving various circuit manipulation approaches. Some of these circuit manipulations are not physiological. A balanced discussion of the technical strengths and limitations of the present work would be helpful and beneficial to the field. Minor issues in data presentation were also noted. 

      We have incorporated the recommended discussion of technical limitations and addressed the physiological plausibility of our manipulations on Page 33 of the revised Discussion section. Specifically, we wrote: 

      “Judicious interpretation of the present data must consider the technical limitations of the various methods and circuit-level manipulations applied. Patchy neurons are distributed unevenly across the extensive structure of the striatum, and their targeted manipulation is constrained by viral spread in the dorsal striatum. Somatic calcium imaging using single-photon microscopy captures activity from only a subset of patchy neurons within a narrow focal plane beneath each implanted GRIN lens. Similarly, limitations in light diffusion from optical fibers may reduce the effective population of targeted fibers in both photometry and optogenetic experiments. For example, the more modest locomotor slowing observed with optogenetic activation of striatonigral fibers in the SNr compared to the stronger effects seen with Gq-DREADD activation across the dorsal striatum could reflect limited fiber optic coverage in the SNr.Alternatively, it may suggest that non-striatonigral mechanisms also contribute to generalized slowing. Our photometry data do not support a role for striatopallidal projections from patchy neurons in movement suppression. The potential contribution of intrastriatal mechanisms, discussed earlier, remains to be empirically tested. Although the behavioral assays used were naturalistic, many of the circuit-level interventions were not. Broad ablation or widespread activation of patchy neurons and their efferent projections represent non-physiological manipulations. Nonetheless, these perturbation results are interpreted alongside more naturalistic observations, such as in vivo imaging of patchy neuron somata and axon terminals, to form a coherent understanding of their functional role”.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Hawes et al. investigated the role of striatal neurons in the patch compartment of the dorsal striatum. Using Sepw1-Cre line, the authors combined a modified version of the light/dark transition box test that allows them to examine locomotor activity in different environmental valence with a variety of approaches, including cell-type-specific ablation, miniscope calcium imaging, fiber photometry, and opto-/chemogenetics. First, they found ablation of patchy striatal neurons resulted in an increase in movement vigor when mice stayed in a safe area or when they moved back from more anxiogenic to safe environments. The following miniscope imaging experiment revealed that a larger fraction of striatal patchy neurons was negatively correlated with movement speed, particularly in an anxiogenic area. Next, the authors investigated differential activity patterns of patchy neurons' axon terminals, focusing on those in GPe, GPi, and SNr, showing that the patchy axons in SNr reflect movement speed/vigor. Chemogenetic and optogenetic activation of these patchy striatal neurons suppressed the locomotor vigor, thus demonstrating their causal role in the modulation of locomotor vigor when exposed to valence differentials. Unlike the activation of striatal patches, such a suppressive effect on locomotion was absent when optogenetically activating matrix neurons by using the Calb1-Cre line, indicating distinctive roles in the control of locomotor vigor by striatal patch and matrix neurons. Together, they have concluded that nigrostriatal neurons within striatal patches negatively regulate movement vigor, dependent on behavioral contexts where motivational valence differs.

      We are grateful for the reviewer’s thorough summary of our main findings.

      In my view, this study will add to the important literature by demonstrating how patch (striosomal) neurons in the striatum control movement vigor. This study has applied multiple approaches to investigate their functionality in locomotor behavior, and the obtained data largely support their conclusions. Nevertheless, I have some suggestions for improvements in the manuscript and figures regarding their data interpretation, accuracy, and efficacy of data presentation

      We appreciate the reviewer’s overall positive assessment and have made substantial improvements to the revised manuscript in response to reviewers’ constructive suggestions.

      (1) The authors found that the activation of the striatonigral pathway in the patch compartment suppresses locomotor speed, which contradicts with canonical roles of the direct pathway. It would be great if the authors could provide mechanistic explanations in the Discussion section. One possibility is that striatal D1R patch neurons directly inhibit dopaminergic cells that regulate movement vigor (Nadal et al., Sci. Rep., 2021; Okunomiya et al., J Neurosci., 2025). Providing plausible explanations will help readers infer possible physiological processes and give them ideas for future follow-up studies.

      We have added the recommended data interpretation and future perspectives on Page 30 of the revised Discussion section. Specifically, we wrote:

      “Potential mechanisms by which striatal patchy neurons reduce locomotion involve the supression of dopamine availability within the striatum. Dopamine, primarily supplied by neurons in the SNc and VTA,broadly facilitates locomotion (Gerfen and Surmeier 2011, Dudman and Krakauer 2016). Recent studies have shown that direct activation of patchy neurons leads to a reduction in striatal dopamine levels, accompanied by decreased walking speed (Nadel, Pawelko et al. 2021, Dong, Wang et al. 2025, Okunomiya, Watanabe et al. 2025). Patchy neuron projections terminate in structures known as “dendron bouquets”, which enwrap SNc dendrites within the SNr and can pause tonic dopamine neuron firing (Crittenden, Tillberg et al. 2016, Evans, Twedell et al. 2020). The present work highlights a role for patchy striatonigral inputs within the SN in decelerating movement, potentially through GABAergic dendron bouquets that limit dopamine release back to the striatum (Dong, Wang et al. 2025). Additionally, intrastriatal collaterals of patch spiny projection neurons (SPNs) have been shown to suppress dopamine release and associated synaptic plasticity via dynorphin-mediated activation of kappa opioid receptors on dopamine terminals (Hawes, Salinas et al. 2017). This intrastriatal mechanism may further contribute to the reduction in striatal dopamine levels and the observed decrease in locomotor speed, representing a compelling avenue for future investigation.”

      (2) On page 14, Line 301, the authors stated that "Cre-dependent mCheery signals were colocalized with the patch marker (MOR1) in the dorsal striatum (Fig. 1B)". But I could not find any mCherry on that panel, so please modify it.

      We have included representative images of mCherry and MOR1 staining in Supplementary Fig. S1 of the revised manuscript.

      (3) From data shown in Figure 1, I've got the impression that mice ablated with striatal patch neurons were generally hyperactive, but this is probably not the case, as two separate experiments using LLbox and DDbox showed no difference in locomotor vigor between control and ablated mice. For the sake of better interpretation, it may be good to add a statement in Lines 365-366 that these experiments suggest the absence of hyperactive locomotion in general by ablating these specific neurons.

      As suggested by the reviewer, we have added the following statement on Page 17 of the revised manuscript: “These data also indicate that PA elevates valence-specific speed without inducing general hyperactivity”.

      (4) In Line 536, where Figure 5A was cited, the author mentioned that they used inhibitory DREADDs (AAV-DIO-hM4Di-mCherrry), but I could not find associated data on Figure 5. Please cite Figure S3, accordingly.

      We have added the citation for the now Fig. S4 on Page 25 of the revised manuscript.

      (5) Personally, the Figure panel labels of "Hi" and "ii" were confusing at first glance. It would be better to have alternatives.

      As suggested by the reviewer, we have now labeled each figure panel with a distinct single alphabetical letter.

      (6) There is a typo on Figure 4A: tdTomata → tdTomato

      We have made the correction on the figure.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Hawes et al. combined behavioral, optical imaging, and activity manipulation techniques to investigate the role of striatal patch SPNs in locomotion regulation. Using Sepw1-Cre transgenic mice, they found that patch SPNs encode locomotion deceleration in a light-dark box procedure through optical imaging techniques. Moreover, genetic ablation of patch SPNs increased locomotion speed, while chemogenetic activation of these neurons decreased it. The authors concluded that a subtype of patch striatonigral neurons modulates locomotion speed based on external environmental cues. Below are some major concerns:

      The study concludes that patch striatonigral neurons regulate locomotion speed. However, unless I missed something, very little evidence is presented to support the idea that it is specifically striatonigral neurons, rather than striatopallidal neurons, that mediate these effects. In fact, the optogenetic experiments shown in Fig. 6 suggest otherwise. What about the behavioral effects of optogenetic stimulation of striatonigral versus striatopallidal neuron somas in Sepw1-Cre mice?

      Our photometry data implicate striatonigral neurons in locomotor slowing, as evidenced by a negative cross-correlation with acceleration and a negative lag, indicating that their activity reliably precedes—and may therefore contribute to—deceleration. In contrast, photometry results from striatopallidal neurons showed no clear correlation with speed or acceleration.

      Figure 6 demonstrates that optogenetic manipulation within the SNr of Sepw1-Cre<sup>+</sup> striatonigral axons recapitulated context-dependent locomotor changes seen with Gq-DREADD activation of both striatonigral and striatopallidal Sepw1-Cre<sup>+</sup> cells in the dorsal striatum but failed to produce the broader locomotor speed change observed when targeting all Sepw1-Cre<sup>+</sup> cells in the dorsal striatum using either ablation or Gq-DREADD activation. The more subtle speed-restrictive phenotype resulting from ChR activation in the SNr could, as the reviewer suggests, implicate striatopallidal neurons in broad locomotor speed regulation. However, our photometry data indicate that this scenario is unlikely, as activity of striatopallidal Sepw1-Cre<sup>+</sup> fibers is not correlated with locomotor speed. Another plausible explanation is that the optogenetic approach may have affected fewer striatonigral fibers, potentially due to the limited spatial spread of light from the optical fiber within the SNr. Broad locomotor speed change in LDbox might require the recruitment of a larger number of striatonigral fibers than we were able to manipulate with optogenetics. We have added discussion of these technical limitations to the revised manuscript. Additionally, we now discuss the possibility that intrastriatal collaterals may contribute to reduced local dopamine levels by releasing dynorphin, which acts on kappa opioid receptors located on dopamine fibers (Hawes, Salinas et al. 2017), thereby suppressing dopamine release.

      The reviewer also suggests an interesting experiment involving optogenetic stimulation of striatonigral versus striatopallidal somata in Sepw1-Cre mice. While we agree that this approach would yield valuable insights, we have thus far been unable to achieve reliable results using retroviral vectors. Moreover, selectively targeting striatopallidal terminals optogenetically remains technically challenging, as striatonigral fibers also traverse the pallidum, and the broad anatomical distribution of the pallidum complicates precise targeting. This proposed work will need to be pursued in a future study, either with improved retrograde viral tools or the development of additional mouse lines that offer more selective access to these neuronal populations as we documented recently (Dong, Wang et al. 2025).

      In the abstract, the authors state that patch SPNs control speed without affecting valence. This claim seems to lack sufficient data to support it. Additionally, speed, velocity, and acceleration are very distinct qualities. It is necessary to clarify precisely what patch neurons encode and control in the current study.

      We believe the reviewer’s interpretation pertains to a statement in the Introduction rather than the Abstract: “Our findings reveal that patchy SPNs control the speed at which mice navigate the valence differential between high- and low-anxiety zones, without affecting valence perception itself.” Throughout our study, mice consistently preferred the dark zone in the Light/Dark box, indicating intact perception of the valence differential between illuminated areas. While our manipulations altered locomotor speed, they did not affect time spent in the dark zone, supporting the conclusion that valence perception remained unaltered. We appreciate the reviewer’s insight and agree it is an intriguing possibility that locomotor responses could, over time, influence internal states such as anxiety. We addressed this in the Discussion, noting that while dark preference was robust to our manipulations, future studies are warranted to explore the relationship between anxious locomotor vigor and anxiety itself. We report changes in scalar measures of animal speed across Light/Dark box conditions and under various experimental manipulations. Separately, we show that activity in both patchy neuron somata and striatonigral fibers is negatively correlated with acceleration—indicating a positive correlation with deceleration. Notably, the direction of the cross-correlational lag between striatonigral fiber activity and acceleration suggests that this activity precedes and may causally contribute to mouse deceleration, thereby influencing reductions in speed. To clarify this, we revised a sentence in the Results section:

      “Moreover, patchy neuron efferent activity at the SNr may causally contribute to deceleration, asindicated by the negative cross-correlational lag, thereby reducing animal speed.”. We also updated the Discussion to read: “Together, these data specifically implicate patchy striatonigral neurons in slowing locomotion by acting within the SNr to drive deceleration.”

      One of the major results relies on chemogenetic manipulation (Figure 5). It would be helpful to demonstrate through slice electrophysiology that hM3Dq and hM4Di indeed cause changes in the activity of dorsal striatal SPNs, as intended by the DREADD system. This would support both the positive (Gq) and negative (Gi) findings, where no effects on behavior were observed.

      We were unable to perform this experiment; however, hM3Dq has previously been shown to be effective in striatal neurons (Alcacer, Andreoli et al. 2017). The lack of effect observed in GiDREADD mice serves as an unintended but valuable control, helping to rule out off-target effects of the DREADD agonist JHU37160 and thereby reinforcing the specificity of hM3Dq-mediated activation in our study. We have now included an important caveat regarding the Gi-DREADD results, acknowledging the possibility that they may not have worked effectively in our target cells:

      “Potential explanations for the negative results in Gi-DREADD mice include inherently low basal activity among patchy neurons or insufficient expression of GIRK channels in striatal neurons, which may limit the effectiveness of Gicoupling in suppressing neuronal activity (Shan, Fang et al. 2022).”

      Finally, could the behavioral effects observed in the current study, resulting from various manipulations of patch SPNs, be due to alterations in nigrostriatal dopamine release within the dorsal striatum?

      We agree that this is an important potential implication of our work, especially given that we and others have shown that patchy striatonigral neurons provide strong inhibitory input to dopaminergic neurons involved in locomotor control (Nadel, Pawelko et al. 2021, Lazaridis, Crittenden et al. 2024, Dong, Wang et al. 2025, Okunomiya, Watanabe et al. 2025). Accordingly, we have expanded the discussion section to include potential mechanistic explanations that support and contextualize our main findings.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Here are some minor issues for the authors' reference:

      (1) This work supports the motor-suppressing effect of patchy SPNs, and >80% of them are direct pathway SPNs. This conclusion is not expected from the traditional basal ganglia direct/indirect pathway model. Most experiments were performed using nonphysiological approaches to suppress (i.e., ablation) or activate (i.e., continuous chemo-optogenetic stimulation). It remains uncertain if the reported observations are relevant to the normal biological function of patchy SPNs under physiological conditions. Particularly, under what circumstances an imbalanced patch/matrix activity may be induced, as proposed in the sections related to the data presented in Figure 6. A thorough discussion and clarification remain needed. Or it should be discussed as a limitation of the present work.

      We have added discussion and clarification of physiological limitations in response to reviewer feedback. Additionally, we revised the opening sentence of an original paragraph in the discussion section to emphasize that it interprets our findings in the context of more physiological studies reporting natural shifts in patchy SPN activity due to cognitive conflict, stress, or training. The revised opening sentence now reads: “Together with previous studies of naturally occurring shifts in patchy neuron activation, these data illustrate ethologically relevant roles for a subgroup of genetically defined patchy neurons in behavior.”

      (2) Lines 499-500: How striato-nigral cells encode speed and deceleration deserves a thorough discussion and clarification. These striatonigral cells can target both SNr GABAergic neurons and dendrites of the dopaminergic neurons. A discussion of microcircuits formed by the patchy SPNs axons in the SNr GABAergic and SNC DAergic neurons should be presented.

      We have added this point at lines 499–500, including a reference to a relevant review of microcircuitry. Additionally, we expanded the discussion section to address microcircuit mechanisms that may underlie our main findings.

      (3) Line 70: "BNST" should be spelled out at the first time it is mentioned.

      This has been done.

      (4) Line 133: only GCaMP6 was listed in the method, but GCaMP8 was also used (Figure 4). Clarification or details are needed.

      Thank you for your careful attention to detail. We have corrected the typographical errors in the Methods section. Specifically, in the Stereotaxic Injections section, we corrected “GCaMP83” to “GCaMP8s.” In the Fiber Implant section, we removed the incorrect reference to “GCaMP6s” and clarified that GCaMP8s was used for photometry, and hChR2 was used for optogenetics.

      (5) Line 183: Can the authors describe more precisely what "a moment" means in terms of seconds or minutes?

      This has been done.

      (6) Line 288: typo: missing / in ΔF

      Thank you this has been fixed

      (7) Line 301-302: the statement of "mCherry and MOR1 colocalization" does not match the images in Figure 1B.

      This has been corrected by proving a new Supplementary Figure S1.

      (8) Related to the statement between Lines 303-304: Figure 1c data may reflect changes in MOR1 protein or cell loss. Quantification of NeuN+ neurons within the MOR1 area would strengthen the conclusion of 60% of patchy cell loss in Figure 1C

      Since the efficacy of AAV-FLEX-taCasp3 in cell ablation has been well established in our previous publications and those of others (Yang, Chiang et al. 2013, Wu, Kung et al. 2019), we do not believe the observed loss of MOR1 staining in Fig. 1C merely reflects reduced MOR1 expression. Moreover, a general neuronal marker such as NeuN may not reliably detect the specific loss of patchy neurons in our ablation model, given the technical limitations of conventional cell-counting methods like MBF’s StereoInvestigator, which typically exhibit a variability margin of 15–20%.

      (9) Lines 313-314: "Similarly, PA mice demonstrated greater stay-time in the dark zone (Figure 1E)." Revision is needed to better reflect what is shown in Figure 1E and avoid misunderstandings.

      Thank you this has been addressed.

      (10) The color code in Figure 2Gi seems inconsistent with the others? Clarifications are needed

      Color coding in Figure 2Gi differs from that in 2Eii out of necessity. For example, the "Light" cells depicted in light blue in 2Eii are represented by both light gray and light red dots in 2Gi. Importantly, Figure 2G does not encode specific speed relationships; instead, any association with speed is indicated by a red hue.

      (11) Lines 538-539: the statement of "Over half of the patch was covered" was not supported by Figure 5C. Clarification is needed.

      Thank you. For clarity, we updated the x-axis labels in Figures 1C and 5C from “% area covered” to “% DS area covered,” and defined “DS” as “dorsal striatal” in the corresponding figure legends. Additionally, we revised the sentence in question to read: “As with ablation, histological examination indicated that a substantial fraction of dorsal patch territories, identified through MOR1 staining, were impacted (Fig. 5C).”

      (12) Figure 3: statistical significance in Figure 3 should be labeled in various panels.

      We believe the reviewer's concern pertains to the scatter plot in panel F—specifically, whether the data points are significantly different from zero. In panel 3F, the 95% confidence interval clearly overlaps with zero, indicating that the results are not statistically significant.

      (13) Figures 6D-E: no difference in the speed of control mice and ChR2 mice under continuous optical stimulation was not expected. It was different from Gq-DRADDS study in Figure 5E-F. Clarifications are needed.

      For mice undergoing constant ChR2 activation of Sepw1-Cre+ SNr efferents, overall locomotor speed does not differ from controls. However, the BIL (bright-to-illuminated) effect on zone transitions isdisrupted: activating Sepw1-Cre<sup>+ </sup> fibers in the SNr blunts the typical increase in speed observed when mice flee from the light zone toward the dark zone. This impaired BIL-related speed increase upon exiting the light was similarly observed in the Gq-DREADD cohort. The reviewer is correct that this optogenetic manipulation within the SNr did not produce the more generalized speed reductions seen with broader Gq-DREADD activation of all Sepw1-Cre<sup>+ </sup> cells in the dorsal striatum. A likely explanation is the difference in targeting—ChR2 specifically activates SNr-bound terminals, whereas Gq-DREADD broadly activates entire Sepw1-Cre<sup>+ </sup> cells. Notably, many of the generalized speed profile changes observed with chemogenetic activation are opposite to those resulting from broad ablation of Sepw1-Cre<sup>+ </sup> cells. The more subtle speed-restrictive phenotype observed with ChR2 activation targeted to the SNr may suggest that fewer striatonigral fibers were affected by this technique, possibly due to the limited spread of light from the fiber optic. Broad locomotor speed change in LDbox might require the recruitment of a larger number of striatonigral fibers than we were able to manipulate with an optogenetic approach. Alternatively, it could indicate that non-striatonigral Sepw1-Cre<sup>+ </sup> projections—such as striatopallidal or intrastriatal pathways—play a role in more generalized slowing. If striatopallidal fibers contributed to locomotor slowing, we would expect to see non-zero cross-correlations between neural activity and speed or acceleration, along with negative lag indicating that neural activity precedes the behavioral change. However, our fiber photometry data do not support such a role for Sepw1-Cre<sup>+ </sup> striatopallidal fibers. We have also referenced the possibility that intrastriatal collaterals could suppress striatal dopamine levels, potentially explaining the stronger slowing phenotype observed when the entire striatal population is affected, as opposed to selectively targeting striatonigral terminals. These technical considerations and interpretive nuances have been incorporated and clarified in the revised discussion section.

      (14) Lines 632: "compliment": a typo?

      Yes, it should be “complement”.

      (15) Figure 4 legend: descriptions of panels A and B were swapped

      Thank you. This has been corrected.

      (16) Friedman (2020) was listed twice in the bibliography (Lines 920-929).

      Thank you. This has been corrected.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      It will be helpful to label and add figure legends below each figure.

      Thank you for the suggestion.

      Editor's note:

      Should you choose to revise your manuscript, if you have not already done so, please include full statistical reporting including exact p-values wherever possible alongside the summary statistics (test statistic and df) and, where appropriate, 95% confidence intervals. These should be reported for all key questions and not only when the p-value is less than 0.05 in the main manuscript. We noted some instances where only p values are reported.

      Readers would also benefit from coding individual data points by sex and noting N/sex

      We have included detailed statistical information in the revised manuscript. Both male and female mice were used in all experiments in approximately equal numbers. Since no sex-related differences were observed, we did not report the number of animals by sex.

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    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript explores the mechanisms underlying cerebral cortical folding using a combination of physical modelling, computational simulations, and geometric morphometrics. The authors extend their prior work on human brain development (Tallinen et al., 2014; 2016) to a comparative framework involving three mammalian species: ferrets (Carnivora), macaques (Old World monkeys), and humans (Hominoidea). By integrating swelling gel experiments with mathematical differential growth models, they simulate sulcification instability and recapitulate key features of brain folding across species. The authors make commendable use of publicly available datasets to construct 3D models of fetal and neonatal brain surfaces: fetal macaque (ref. [26]), newborn ferret (ref. [11]), and fetal human (ref. [22]).

      Using a combination of physical models and numerical simulations, the authors compare the resulting folding morphologies to real brain surfaces using morphometric analysis. Their results show qualitative and quantitative concordance with observed cortical folding patterns, supporting the view that differential tangential growth of the cortex relative to the subcortical substrate is sufficient to account for much of the diversity in cortical folding. This is a very important point in our field, and can be used in the teaching of medical students.

      Brain folding remains a topic of ongoing debate. While some regard it as a critical specialization linked to higher cognitive function, others consider it an epiphenomenon of expansion and constrained geometry. This divergence was evident in discussions during the Strüngmann Forum on cortical development (Silver et al., 2019). Though folding abnormalities are reliable indicators of disrupted neurodevelopmental processes (e.g., neurogenesis, migration), their relationship to functional architecture remains unclear. Recent evidence suggests that the absolute number of neurons varies significantly with position-sulcus versus gyrus-with potential implications for local processing capacity (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1002/cne.25626). The field is thus in need of comparative, mechanistic studies like the present one.

      This paper offers an elegant and timely contribution by combining gel-based morphogenesis, numerical modelling, and morphometric analysis to examine cortical folding across species. The experimental design - constructing two-layer PDMS models from 3D MRI data and immersing them in organic solvents to induce differential swelling - is well-established in prior literature. The authors further complement this with a continuum mechanics model simulating folding as a result of differential growth, as well as a comparative analysis of surface morphologies derived from in vivo, in vitro, and in silico brains.

      I offer a few suggestions here for clarification and further exploration:

      Major Comments

      (1) Choice of Developmental Stages and Initial Conditions

      The authors should provide a clearer justification for the specific developmental stages chosen (e.g., G85 for macaque, GW23 for human). How sensitive are the resulting folding patterns to the initial surface geometry of the gel models? Given that folding is a nonlinear process, early geometric perturbations may propagate into divergent morphologies. Exploring this sensitivity-either through simulations or reference to prior work-would enhance the robustness of the findings.

      (2) Parameter Space and Breakdown Points

      The numerical model assumes homogeneous growth profiles and simplifies several aspects of cortical mechanics. Parameters such as cortical thickness, modulus ratios, and growth ratios are described in Table II. It would be informative to discuss the range of parameter values for which the model remains valid, and under what conditions the physical and computational models diverge. This would help delineate the boundaries of the current modelling framework and indicate directions for refinement.

      (3) Neglected Regional Features: The Occipital Pole of the Macaque

      One conspicuous omission is the lack of attention to the occipital pole of the macaque, which is known to remain smooth even at later gestational stages and has an unusually high neuronal density (2.5× higher than adjacent cortex). This feature is not reproduced in the gel or numerical models, nor is it discussed. Acknowledging this discrepancy-and speculating on possible developmental or mechanical explanations-would add depth to the comparative analysis. The authors may wish to include this as a limitation or a target for future work.

      (4) Spatio-Temporal Growth Rates and Available Human Data

      The authors note that accurate, species-specific spatio-temporal growth data are lacking, limiting the ability to model inhomogeneous cortical expansion. While this may be true for ferret and macaque, there are high-quality datasets available for human fetal development, now extended through ultrasound imaging (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1038/s41586-023-06630-3). Incorporating or at least referencing such data could improve the fidelity of the human model and expand the applicability of the approach to clinical or pathological scenarios.

      (5) Future Applications: The Inverse Problem and Fossil Brains

      The authors suggest that their morphometric framework could be extended to solve the inverse growth problem-reconstructing fetal geometries from adult brains. This speculative but intriguing direction has implications for evolutionary neuroscience, particularly the interpretation of fossil endocasts. Although beyond the scope of this paper, I encourage the authors to elaborate briefly on how such a framework might be practically implemented and validated.

      Conclusion

      This is a well-executed and creative study that integrates diverse methodologies to address a longstanding question in developmental neurobiology. While a few aspects-such as regional folding peculiarities, sensitivity to initial conditions, and available human data-could be further elaborated, they do not detract from the overall quality and novelty of the work. I enthusiastically support this paper and believe that it will be of broad interest to the neuroscience, biomechanics, and developmental biology communities.

      Note: The paper mentions a companion paper [reference 11] that explores the cellular and anatomical changes in the ferret cortex. I did not have access to this manuscript, but judging from the title, this paper might further strengthen the conclusions.

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer 1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Yin and colleagues addresses a long-standing question in the field of cortical morphogenesis, regarding factors that determine differential cortical folding across species and individuals with cortical malformations. The authors present work based on a computational model of cortical folding evaluated alongside a physical model that makes use of gel swelling to investigate the role of a two-layer model for cortical morphogenesis. The study assesses these models against empirically derived cortical surfaces based on MRI data from ferret, macaque monkey, and human brains.

      The manuscript is clearly written and presented, and the experimental work (physical gel modeling as well as numerical simulations) and analyses (subsequent morphometric evaluations) are conducted at the highest methodological standards. It constitutes an exemplary use of interdisciplinary approaches for addressing the question of cortical morphogenesis by bringing together well-tuned computational modeling with physical gel models. In addition, the comparative approaches used in this paper establish a foundation for broad-ranging future lines of work that investigate the impact of perturbations or abnormalities during cortical development.

      The cross-species approach taken in this study is a major strength of the work. However, correspondence across the two methodologies did not appear to be equally consistent in predicting brain folding across all three species. The results presented in Figures 4 (and Figures S3 and S4) show broad correspondence in shape index and major sulci landmarks across all three species. Nevertheless, the results presented for the human brain lack the same degree of clear correspondence for the gel model results as observed in the macaque and ferret. While this study clearly establishes a strong foundation for comparative cortical anatomy across species and the impact of perturbations on individual morphogenesis, further work that fine-tunes physical modeling of complex morphologies, such as that of the human cortex, may help to further understand the factors that determine cortical functionalization and pathologies.

      We thank the reviewer for positive opinions and helpful comments. Yes, the physical gel model of the human brain has a lower similarity index with the real brain. There are several reasons.

      First, the highly convoluted human cortex has a few major folds (primary sulci) and a very large number of minor folds associated with secondary or tertiary sulci (on scales of order comparable to the cortical thickness), relative to the ferret and macaque cerebral cortex. In our gel model, the exact shapes, positions, and orientations of these minor folds are stochastic, which makes it hard to have a very high similarity index of the gel models when compared with the brain of a single individual.

      Second, in real human brains, these minor folds evolve dynamically with age and show differences among individuals. In experiments with the gel brain, multiscale folds form and eventually disappear as the swelling progresses through the thickness. Our physical model results are snapshots during this dynamical process, which makes it hard to have a concrete one-to-one correspondence between the instantaneous shapes of the swelling gel and the growing human brain.

      Third, the growth of the brain cortex is inhomogeneous in space and varying with time, whereas, in the gel model, swelling is relatively homogeneous.

      We agree that further systematic work, based on our proposed methods, with more fine-tuned gel geometries and properties, might provide a deeper understanding of the relations between brain geometry, and growth-induced folds and their functionalization and pathologies. Further analysis of cortical pathologies using computational and physical gel models can be found in our companion paper (Choi et al., 2025), also submitted to eLife:

      G. P. T. Choi, C. Liu, S. Yin, G. Sejourn´ e, R. S. Smith, C. A. Walsh, L. Mahadevan, Biophysical basis for´ brain folding and misfolding patterns in ferrets and humans. Preprint, bioRxiv 2025.03.05.641682.

      Reviewer 2 (Public review):

      This manuscript explores the mechanisms underlying cerebral cortical folding using a combination of physical modelling, computational simulations, and geometric morphometrics. The authors extend their prior work on human brain development (Tallinen et al., 2014; 2016) to a comparative framework involving three mammalian species: ferrets (Carnivora), macaques (Old World monkeys), and humans (Hominoidea). By integrating swelling gel experiments with mathematical differential growth models, they simulate sulcification instability and recapitulate key features of brain folding across species. The authors make commendable use of publicly available datasets to construct 3D models of fetal and neonatal brain surfaces: fetal macaque (ref. [26]), newborn ferret (ref. [11]), and fetal human (ref. [22]).

      Using a combination of physical models and numerical simulations, the authors compare the resulting folding morphologies to real brain surfaces using morphometric analysis. Their results show qualitative and quantitative concordance with observed cortical folding patterns, supporting the view that differential tangential growth of the cortex relative to the subcortical substrate is sufficient to account for much of the diversity in cortical folding. This is a very important point in our field, and can be used in the teaching of medical students.

      Brain folding remains a topic of ongoing debate. While some regard it as a critical specialization linked to higher cognitive function, others consider it an epiphenomenon of expansion and constrained geometry. This divergence was evident in discussions during the Strungmann Forum on cortical development (Silver¨ et al., 2019). Though folding abnormalities are reliable indicators of disrupted neurodevelopmental processes (e.g., neurogenesis, migration), their relationship to functional architecture remains unclear. Recent evidence suggests that the absolute number of neurons varies significantly with position-sulcus versus gyrus-with potential implications for local processing capacity (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1002/cne.25626). The field is thus in need of comparative, mechanistic studies like the present one.

      This paper offers an elegant and timely contribution by combining gel-based morphogenesis, numerical modelling, and morphometric analysis to examine cortical folding across species. The experimental design - constructing two-layer PDMS models from 3D MRI data and immersing them in organic solvents to induce differential swelling - is well-established in prior literature. The authors further complement this with a continuum mechanics model simulating folding as a result of differential growth, as well as a comparative analysis of surface morphologies derived from in vivo, in vitro, and in silico brains.

      We thank the reviewer for the very positive comments.

      I offer a few suggestions here for clarification and further exploration:

      Major Comments

      (1)   Choice of Developmental Stages and Initial Conditions

      The authors should provide a clearer justification for the specific developmental stages chosen (e.g., G85 for macaque, GW23 for human). How sensitive are the resulting folding patterns to the initial surface geometry of the gel models? Given that folding is a nonlinear process, early geometric perturbations may propagate into divergent morphologies. Exploring this sensitivity-either through simulations or reference to prior work-would enhance the robustness of the findings.

      The initial geometry is one of the important factors that decides the final folding pattern. The smooth brain in the early developmental stage shows a broad consistency across individuals, and we expect the main folds to form similarly across species and individuals.

      Generally, we choose the initial geometry when the brain cortex is still relatively smooth. For the human, this corresponds approximately to GW23, as the major folds such as the Rolandic fissure (central sulcus), arise during this developmental stage. For the macaque brain, we chose developmental stage G85, primarily because of the availability of the dataset corresponding to this time, which also corresponds to the least folded.

      We expect that large-scale folding patterns are strongly sensitive to the initial geometry but fine-scale features are not. Since our goal is to explain the large-scale features, we expect sensitivity to the initial shape.

      Enclosed are some results from other researchers that are consistent with this idea. Below are some images of simulations from Wang et al. obtained by perturbing the geometry of a sphere to an ellipsoid. We see that the growth-induced folds mostly maintain their width (wavelength), but change their orientations.

      Reference:

      Wang, X., Lefevre, J., Bohi, A., Harrach, M.A., Dinomais, M. and Rousseau, F., 2021. The influence of` biophysical parameters in a biomechanical model of cortical folding patterns. Scientific Reports, 11(1), p.7686.

      Related results from the same group show that slight perturbations of brain geometry, cause these folds also tend to change their orientations but not width/wavelength (Bohi et al., 2019).

      Reference:

      Bohi, A., Wang, X., Harrach, M., Dinomais, M., Rousseau, F. and Lefevre, J., 2019, July. Global per-` turbation of initial geometry in a biomechanical model of cortical morphogenesis. In 2019 41st Annual International Conference of the IEEE Engineering in Medicine and Biology Society (EMBC) (pp. 442-445). IEEE.

      Finally, a systematic discussion of the role of perturbations on the initial geometries and physical properties can be seen in our work on understanding a different system, gut morphogenesis (Gill et al., 2024).

      We have added the discussion about geometric sensitivity in the section Methods-Numerical Simulations:

      “Small perturbations on initial geometry would affect minor folds, but the main features of major folds, such as orientations, width, and depth, are expected to be conserved across individuals [49, 50]. For simplicity, we do not perturb the fetal brain geometry obtained from datasets.”

      (2) Parameter Space and Breakdown Points

      The numerical model assumes homogeneous growth profiles and simplifies several aspects of cortical mechanics. Parameters such as cortical thickness, modulus ratios, and growth ratios are described in Table II. It would be informative to discuss the range of parameter values for which the model remains valid, and under what conditions the physical and computational models diverge. This would help delineate the boundaries of the current modelling framework and indicate directions for refinement.

      Exploring the valid parameter space is a key problem. We have tested a series of growth parameters and will state them explicitly in our revision. In the current version, we chose the ones that yield a relatively high similarity index to the animal brains. More generally, folding patterns are largely regulated by geometry as well as physical parameters, such as cortical thickness, modulus ratios, growth ratios, and inhomogeneity. In our previous work on a different system, gut morphogenesis, where similar folding patterns are seen, we have explored these features (Gill et al., 2024).

      Reference:

      Gill, H.K., Yin, S., Nerurkar, N.L., Lawlor, J.C., Lee, C., Huycke, T.R., Mahadevan, L. and Tabin, C.J., 2024. Hox gene activity directs physical forces to differentially shape chick small and large intestinal epithelia. Developmental Cell, 59(21), pp.2834-2849.

      (3) Neglected Regional Features: The Occipital Pole of the Macaque

      One conspicuous omission is the lack of attention to the occipital pole of the macaque, which is known to remain smooth even at later gestational stages and has an unusually high neuronal density (2.5× higher than adjacent cortex). This feature is not reproduced in the gel or numerical models, nor is it discussed. Acknowledging this discrepancy-and speculating on possible developmental or mechanical explanationswould add depth to the comparative analysis. The authors may wish to include this as a limitation or a target for future work.

      Yes, we have added that the omission of the Occipital Pole of the macaque is one of our paper’s limitations. Our main aim in this paper is to explore the formation of large-scale folds, so the smooth region is neglected. But future work could include this to make the model more complete.

      The main text has been modified in Methods, 3D model reconstruction, pre-processing:

      “To focus on fold formation, we neglected some smooth regions such as the Occipital Pole of the macaque.”

      (4) Spatio-Temporal Growth Rates and Available Human Data

      The authors note that accurate, species-specific spatio-temporal growth data are lacking, limiting the ability to model inhomogeneous cortical expansion. While this may be true for ferret and macaque, there are high-quality datasets available for human fetal development, now extended through ultrasound imaging (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1038/s41586-023-06630-3). Incorporating or at least referencing such data could improve the fidelity of the human model and expand the applicability of the approach to clinical or pathological scenarios.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out the very useful datasets that exist for the exploration of inhomogeneous growth driven folding patterns. We have referred to this paper to provide suggestions for further work in exploring the role of growth inhomogeneities.

      We have referred to this high-quality dataset in our main text, Discussion:

      “...the effect of inhomogeneous growth needs to be further investigated by incorporating regional growth of the gray and white matter not only in human brains [29, 31] based on public datasets [45], but also in other species.”

      A few works have tried to incorporate inhomogeneous growth in simulating human brain folding by separating the central sulcus area into several lobes (e.g., lobe parcellation method, Wang, PhD Thesis, 2021). Since our goal in this paper is to explain the large-scale features of folding in a minimal setting, we have kept our model simple and show that it is still capable of capturing the main features of folding in a range of mammalian brains.

      Reference:

      Xiaoyu Wang. Modelisation et caract´ erisation du plissement cortical. Signal and Image Processing. Ecole´ nationale superieure Mines-T´ el´ ecom Atlantique, 2021. English.´ 〈NNT : 2021IMTA0248〉.

      (5) Future Applications: The Inverse Problem and Fossil Brains

      The authors suggest that their morphometric framework could be extended to solve the inverse growth problem-reconstructing fetal geometries from adult brains. This speculative but intriguing direction has implications for evolutionary neuroscience, particularly the interpretation of fossil endocasts. Although beyond the scope of this paper, I encourage the authors to elaborate briefly on how such a framework might be practically implemented and validated.

      For the inverse problem, we could use the following strategies:

      a. Perform systematic simulations using different geometries and physical parameters to obtain the variation in morphologies as a function of parameters.

      b. Using either supervised training or unsupervised training (physics-informed neural networks, PINNs) to learn these characteristic morphologies and classify their dependence on the parameters using neural networks. These can then be trained to determine the possible range of geometrical and physical parameters that yield buckled patterns seen in the systematic simulations.

      c. Reconstruct the 3D surface from fossil endocasts. Using the well-trained neural network, it should be possible to predict the initial shape of the smooth brain cortex, growth profile, and stiffness ratio of the gray and white matter.

      As an example in this direction, supervised neural networks have been used recently to solve the forward problem to predict the buckling pattern of a growing two-layer system (Chavoshnejad et al., 2023). The inverse problem can then be solved using machine-learning methods when the training datasets are the folded shape, which are then used to predict the initial geometry and physical properties.

      Reference:

      Chavoshnejad, P., Chen, L., Yu, X., Hou, J., Filla, N., Zhu, D., Liu, T., Li, G., Razavi, M.J. and Wang, X., 2023. An integrated finite element method and machine learning algorithm for brain morphology prediction. Cerebral Cortex, 33(15), pp.9354-9366.

      Conclusion

      This is a well-executed and creative study that integrates diverse methodologies to address a longstanding question in developmental neurobiology. While a few aspects-such as regional folding peculiarities, sensitivity to initial conditions, and available human data-could be further elaborated, they do not detract from the overall quality and novelty of the work. I enthusiastically support this paper and believe that it will be of broad interest to the neuroscience, biomechanics, and developmental biology communities.

      Note: The paper mentions a companion paper [reference 11] that explores the cellular and anatomical changes in the ferret cortex. I did not have access to this manuscript, but judging from the title, this paper might further strengthen the conclusions.

      The companion paper (Choi et al., 2025) has also been submitted to Elife and can be found on bioXiv here:

      G. P. T. Choi, C. Liu, S. Yin, G. Sejourn´ e, R. S. Smith, C. A. Walsh, L. Mahadevan, Biophysical basis for´ brain folding and misfolding patterns in ferrets and humans. bioRxiv 2025.03.05.641682.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, Wang et al. use a combination of genetic tools, novel experimental approaches and biomechanical models to quantify the contribution of passive leg forces in Drosophila. They also deduce that passive forces are not sufficient to support the body weight of the animal. Overall, the contribution of passive forces reported in this work is much less than what one would expect based on the size of the organism and previous literature from larger insects and mammals. This is an interesting finding, but some major caveats in their approach remain unanswered.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors combine experimental measurements and modeling to quantify the contributions of passive forces at limb joints in Drosophila.

      (2) The authors replicate a previous experimental strategy (Hooper et al 2009, J. Neuro) to suspend animals in air for measuring passive forces and, as in previous studies, find that passive forces are much stronger than gravitational forces acting on the limbs. While in these previous studies using large insects, a lot of invasive approaches for accurately quantifying passive forces are possible (e.g., physically cutting of nerves, directly measuring muscle forces in isolated preparations, etc), the small size of Drosophila makes this difficult. The authors overcome this using a novel approach where they attach additional weight to the leg (changes gravitational force) and inactivate motor neurons (remove active forces). With a few approximations and assumptions, the authors then deduce the contribution of passive forces at each joint for each leg.

      (3) The authors find interesting differences in passive forces across different legs. This could have behavioral implications.

      (4) Finally, the authors compare experimental results of how a free-standing Drosophila is lowered ("falls down") on silencing motor neurons, to a biomechanical "OpenSim" model for deducing the role of passive forces in supporting the body weight of the fly. Using this approach, they conclude that passive forces are not sufficient to support the body weight of the fly.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Line 65 "(Figure 1A). Inactivation causes a change in the leg's rest position; however, in preliminary experiments, the body rotation did not have a large effect on the rest positions of the leg following inactivation. This result is consistent with the one already reported for stick insects and shows that passive forces within the leg are much larger than the gravitational force on a leg and dominate limb position [1]." This is the direct replication of the previous work by Hooper et al 2009 and therefore authors should ideally show the data for this condition (no weight attached).

      (2) The authors use vglut-gal4, a very broad driver for inactivating motor neurons. The driver labels all glutamatergic neurons, including brain descending neurons and nerve cord interneurons, in addition to motor neurons. Additionally, the strength of inactivation might differ in different neurons (including motor neurons) depending on the expression levels of the opsins. As a result, in this condition, the authors might not be removing all active forces. This is a major caveat that authors do not address. They explore that they are not potentially silencing all inputs to muscles by using an additional octopaminergic driver, but this doesn't address the points mentioned above. At the very least, the authors should try using other motor neuron drivers, as well as other neuronal silencers. This driver is so broad that authors couldn't even use it for physiology experiments. Additionally, the authors could silence VGlut-labeled motor neurons and record muscle activity (potentially using GCaMP as has been done in several recent papers cited by the authors, Azevedo et al, 2020) as a much more direct readout.

      (3) Figure 4 uses an extremely simplified OpenSim model that makes several assumptions that are known to be false. For example, the Thorax-Coxa joint is assumed to be a ball and socket joint, which it is not. Tibia-tarsus joint is completely ignored and likely makes a major contribution in supporting overall posture, given the importance of the leg "claw" for adhering to substrates. Moreover, there are a couple of recent open-source neuromechanical models that include all these details (NeuromechFly by Lobato-Rios et al, 2022, Nat. Methods, and the fly body model by Vaxenburg et al, 2025, Nature). Leveraging these models to rule in or rule out contributions at other joints that are ignored in the authors' OpenSim model would be very helpful to make their case.

      (4) Figure 5 shows the experimental validation of Figure 4 simulations; however, it suffers from several caveats.

      a) The authors track a single point on the head of the fly to estimate the height of the fly. This has several issues. Firstly, it is not clear how accurate the tracking would be. Secondly, it is not clear how the fly actually "falls" on VGlut silencing; do all flies fall in a similar manner in every trial? Almost certainly, there will be some "pitch" and "role" in the way the fly falls. These will affect the location of this single-tracked point that doesn't reflect the authors' expectations. Unless the authors track multiple points on the fly and show examples of tracked videos, it is hard to believe this dataset and, hence, any of the resulting interpretations.

      b) As described in the previous point, the "reason" the fly falls on silencing all glutamatergic neurons could be due to silencing all sorts of premotor/interneurons in addition to the silencing of motor neurons.

      c) (line 175) "The first finding is that there was a large variation in the initial height of the fly (Figure 5C), consistent with a recent study of flies walking on a treadmill[20]." The cited paper refers to how height varies during "walking". However, in the current study, the authors are only looking at "standing" (i.e. non-walking) flies. So it is not the correct reference. In my opinion, this could simply reflect poor estimation of the fly's height based on poor tracking or other factors like pitch and role.

      d) "The rate at which the fly fell to the ground was much smaller in the experimental flies than it was in the simulated flies (Figure 5E). The median rate of falling was 1.3 mm/s compared to 37 mm/s for the simulated flies (Figure 5F). (Line 190) The most likely reason for the longer than expected time for the fly to fall is delays associated with motor neuron inactivation and muscle inactivation." I don't believe this reasoning. There are so many caveats (which I described in the above points) in the model and the experiment, that any of those could be responsible for this massive difference between experiment and modeling. Simply not getting rid of all active forces (inadequate silencing) could be one obvious reason. Other reasons could be that the model is using underestimates of passive forces, as alluded to in point 3.

      (5) Final figure (Figure 6) focuses on understanding the time course of neuronal silencing. First of all, I'm not entirely sure how relevant this is for the story. It could be an interesting supplemental data. But it seems a bit tangential. Additionally, it also suffers from major caveats.

      a) The authors now use a new genetic driver for which they don't have any behavioral data in any previous figures. So we do not know if any of this data holds true for the previous experiments. The authors perform whole-cell recordings from random unidentified motor neurons labeled by E49-Gal4>GtACR1 to deduce a time constant for behavioral results obtained in the VGlut-Gal4>GtACR1 experiments.

      b) The DMD setup is useful for focal inactivation, however, the appropriate controls and data are not presented. Line 200 "A spot of light on the cell body produces as much of the hyperpolarization as stimulating the entire fly (mean of 11.3 mV vs 13.1 mV across 9 neurons). Conversely, excluding the cell body produces only a small effect on the MN (mean of 2.6 mV)." First of all, the control experiment for showing that DMD is indeed causing focal inactivation would be to gradually move the spot of light away from the labeled soma, i.e. to the neighboring "labelled" soma and show that there is indeed focal inactivation. Instead authors move it quite a long distance into unlabeled neuropil. Secondly, I still don't get why the authors are doing this experiment. Even if we believe the DMD is functioning perfectly, all this really tells us is that a random subset motor neurons (maybe 5 or 6 cells, legend is missing this info) labeled by E49-Gal4 is strongly hyperpolarized by its own GtACR1 channel opening, rather than being impacted because of hyperpolarizations in other E49-Gal4 labeled neurons. This has no relevance to the interpretation of any of the VGlut-Gal4 behavioral data. VGLut-Gal4 is much broader and also labels all glutamatergic neurons, most of which are inhibitory interneurons whose silencing could lead to disinhibition of downstream networks.

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer 1:

      (1) Line 65 "(Figure 1A). Inactivation causes a change in the leg's rest position; however, in preliminary experiments, the body rotation did not have a large effect on the rest positions of the leg following inactivation. This result is consistent with the one already reported for stick insects and shows that passive forces within the leg are much larger than the gravitational force on a leg and dominate limb position [1]." This is the direct replication of the previous work by Hooper et al 2009 and therefore authors should ideally show the data for this condition (no weight attached).

      We did not present this data – the effect of inactivation on the leg’s rest position in unweighted leg - because it was already reported in the case of stick insects. However, we understand the reviewer’s point that it is important to present the data showing this replication. We will do the same in the revised version.

      (2) The authors use vglut-gal4, a very broad driver for inactivating motor neurons. The driver labels all glutamatergic neurons, including brain descending neurons and nerve cord interneurons, in addition to motor neurons. Additionally, the strength of inactivation might differ in different neurons (including motor neurons) depending on the expression levels of the opsins. As a result, in this condition, the authors might not be removing all active forces. This is a major caveat that authors do not address. They explore that they are not potentially silencing all inputs to muscles by using an additional octopaminergic driver, but this doesn't address the points mentioned above. At the very least, the authors should try using other motor neuron drivers, as well as other neuronal silencers. This driver is so broad that authors couldn't even use it for physiology experiments. Additionally, the authors could silence VGlut-labeled motor neurons and record muscle activity (potentially using GCaMP as has been done in several recent papers cited by the authors, Azevedo et al, 2020) as a much more direct readout.

      This reviewer critique is related to the use of vglut-gal4 –a broad driver– to inactivate motor neurons (MNs). The reviewer argues that the use of a broad driver might result in some effects that are not due to MN inactivation. Conversely, it is possible that not all MNs are inactivated. These critiques raise important points that we will address in the revision by 1) performing experiments with other MN drivers as suggested by the reviewer, 2) performing experiments in flies that are inactivated by freezing. These measurements will provide other estimates of passive forces allowing us to better triangulate the range of values for the passive forces. Moreover, it appears that one of the reviewer’s main concern is that the passive forces are overestimated because of the residual active forces. We will discuss this possibility in detail. It is important to note that in the end what we hope to accomplish is to provide a useful estimate of the passive forces. It is unlikely that the passive force will be a precise number like a physical constant as the passive forces likely depend on recent history.

      (3) Figure 4 uses an extremely simplified OpenSim model that makes several assumptions that are known to be false. For example, the Thorax-Coxa joint is assumed to be a ball and socket joint, which it is not. Tibia-tarsus joint is completely ignored and likely makes a major contribution in supporting overall posture, given the importance of the leg "claw" for adhering to substrates. Moreover, there are a couple of recent open-source neuromechanical models that include all these details (NeuromechFly by Lobato-Rios et al, 2022, Nat. Methods, and the fly body model by Vaxenburg et al, 2025, Nature). Leveraging these models to rule in or rule out contributions at other joints that are ignored in the authors' OpenSim model would be very helpful to make their case.

      Our OpenSim model predates the newer mechanical model. In the revised manuscript, we will revisit the model in light of recent developments.

      (4) Figure 5 shows the experimental validation of Figure 4 simulations; however, it suffers from several caveats.

      a) The authors track a single point on the head of the fly to estimate the height of the fly. This has several issues. Firstly, it is not clear how accurate the tracking would be. Secondly, it is not clear how the fly actually "falls" on VGlut silencing; do all flies fall in a similar manner in every trial? Almost certainly, there will be some "pitch" and "role" in the way the fly falls. These will affect the location of this single-tracked point that doesn't reflect the authors' expectations. Unless the authors track multiple points on the fly and show examples of tracked videos, it is hard to believe this dataset and, hence, any of the resulting interpretations.

      b) As described in the previous point, the "reason" the fly falls on silencing all glutamatergic neurons could be due to silencing all sorts of premotor/interneurons in addition to the silencing of motor neurons.

      c) (line 175) "The first finding is that there was a large variation in the initial height of the fly (Figure 5C), consistent with a recent study of flies walking on a treadmill[20]." The cited paper refers to how height varies during "walking". However, in the current study, the authors are only looking at "standing" (i.e. non-walking) flies. So it is not the correct reference. In my opinion, this could simply reflect poor estimation of the fly's height based on poor tracking or other factors like pitch and role.

      d) "The rate at which the fly fell to the ground was much smaller in the experimental flies than it was in the simulated flies (Figure 5E). The median rate of falling was 1.3 mm/s compared to 37 mm/s for the simulated flies (Figure 5F). (Line 190) The most likely reason for the longer than expected time for the fly to fall is delays associated with motor neuron inactivation and muscle inactivation." I don't believe this reasoning. There are so many caveats (which I described in the above points) in the model and the experiment, that any of those could be responsible for this massive difference between experiment and modeling. Simply not getting rid of all active forces (inadequate silencing) could be one obvious reason. Other reasons could be that the model is using underestimates of passive forces, as alluded to in point 3.

      (4a) Although we agree that measuring different points on the body would allow us to estimate the moments, we disagree that the height of the fly cannot be evaluated from the measurement of a single point. The measurements have been performed using the same techniques that we used to assess the fly’s height in a different study where we estimated the resolution of our imaging system to be ~20 mm(Chun et. al. 2021). We will include these details in the revised manuscript. The video showing the falling experiments are not available or referenced in the manuscript. These will be made available.

      b) We will repeat the “falling” experiment with a more restrictive driver.

      c) We disagree with the reviewer on this point. The system has a resolution of ~20 mm and is sufficient to make conclusion about the difference in the height of the fly. We will clarify this point in the revised manuscript.

      d) We do not follow the reviewer’s rationale here. The passive forces in the model (along with any residual forces) are the same in the model as well as in the experiment. Moreover, there will be a delay between light onset, neuronal inactivation and muscle inactivation. These processes are not instantaneous. In Figure 6, we estimate these delays and have concluded that they will cause substantial delay. In the revised manuscript, we will discuss other reasons for the delay suggested by the reviewer.

      (5) Final figure (Figure 6) focuses on understanding the time course of neuronal silencing. First of all, I'm not entirely sure how relevant this is for the story. It could be an interesting supplemental data. But it seems a bit tangential. Additionally, it also suffers from major caveats.

      a) The authors now use a new genetic driver for which they don't have any behavioral data in any previous figures. So we do not know if any of this data holds true for the previous experiments. The authors perform whole-cell recordings from random unidentified motor neurons labeled by E49-Gal4>GtACR1 to deduce a time constant for behavioral results obtained in the VGlut-Gal4>GtACR1 experiments.

      b) The DMD setup is useful for focal inactivation, however, the appropriate controls and data are not presented. Line 200 "A spot of light on the cell body produces as much of the hyperpolarization as stimulating the entire fly (mean of 11.3 mV vs 13.1 mV across 9 neurons). Conversely, excluding the cell body produces only a small effect on the MN (mean of 2.6 mV)." First of all, the control experiment for showing that DMD is indeed causing focal inactivation would be to gradually move the spot of light away from the labeled soma, i.e. to the neighboring "labelled" soma and show that there is indeed focal inactivation. Instead authors move it quite a long distance into unlabeled neuropil. Secondly, I still don't get why the authors are doing this experiment. Even if we believe the DMD is functioning perfectly, all this really tells us is that a random subset motor neurons (maybe 5 or 6 cells, legend is missing this info) labeled by E49-Gal4 is strongly hyperpolarized by its own GtACR1 channel opening, rather than being impacted because of hyperpolarizations in other E49-Gal4 labeled neurons. This has no relevance to the interpretation of any of the VGlut-Gal4 behavioral data. VGLut-Gal4 is much broader and also labels all glutamatergic neurons, most of which are inhibitory interneurons whose silencing could lead to disinhibition of downstream networks.

      (5 a) However, we can address the reviewer critique by recording from the Vglut line while using a MN line to target the recordings to MNs.

      b) Once we use the Vglut driver to perform these recordings, it will help assess how much of the MN inactivation is due to the GtACR expressed in the MN versus other neurons.

      Reviewer 2:

      While (as mentioned above) the study's conclusions are well-supported by the results and modeling, limitations arise because of the assumptions made. For instance, using a linear approximation may not hold at larger joint angles, and future studies would benefit from accounting for nonlinearities. Future studies could also delve into the source of passive forces, which is important for more deeply understanding the anatomical and physical basis of the results in this study. For instance, assessments of muscle or joint properties to correlate stiffness values with physical structure might be an area of future consideration.

      We agree with these comments but believe that these studies represent avenues for future work.

      Reviewer 3:

      (1) Passive torques are measured, but only some short speculative statements, largely based on previous work, are offered on their functional significance; some of these claims are not well supported by experimental evidence or theoretical arguments. Passive forces are judged as "large" compared to the weight force of the limb, but the arguably more relevant force is the force limb muscles can generate, which, even in equilibrium conditions, is already about two orders of magnitude larger. The conclusion that passive forces are dynamically irrelevant seems natural, but contrasts with the assertion that "passive forces [...] will have a strong influence on limb kinematics". As a result, the functional significance of passive joint torques in the fruit fly, if any, remains unclear, and this ambiguity represents a missed opportunity. We now know the magnitude of passive joint torques - do they matter and for what? Are they helpful, for example, to maintain robust neuronal control, or a mechanical constraint that negatively impacts performance, e.g., because they present a sink for muscle work?

      To us, measuring passive forces was the first step to understanding neural/biomechanical control of limb. In general, we agree with these comments and would like to understand the role of passive forces in overall control of limb. A complete discussion of the role of the significance of passive forces in the control of limb is beyond the scope of this study. We would like to note that it is unlikely that the active forces are two orders of magnitude larger during unloaded movement of the limb. However, these issues will have to be settled in future work.

      (2) The work is framed with a scaling argument, but the assumptions that underpin the associated claims are not explicit and can thus not be evaluated. This is problematic because at least some arguments appear to contradict textbook scaling theory or everyday experience. For example, active forces are assumed to scale with limb volume, when every textbook would have them scale with area instead; and the asserted scaling of passive forces involves some hidden assumptions that demand more explicit discussion to alert the reader to associated limitations. Passive forces are said to be important only in small animals, but a quick self-experiment confirms that they are sufficient to stabilize human fingers or ankles against gravity, systems orders of magnitude larger than an insect limb, in seeming contradiction with the alleged dominance of scale. Throughout the manuscript, there are such and similar inaccuracies or ambiguities in the mechanical framing and interpretation, making it hard to fairly evaluate some claims, and rendering others likely incorrect.

      We interpret this comment as making two separate points. The first one is that the reviewer says that our statement that active forces depend on the third power of the limb or L<sup>3</sup> is incorrect. We agree and apologize for this oversight. Specifically, on L6-7 we say, “both inertial forces and active forces scale with the mass if the limb which in turn scales with the volume of the limb and therefore depends on the third power of limb length (L<sup>3</sup>)”. Instead, this statement should read “inertial forces scale with the mass if the limb which in turn scales with the volume of the limb and therefore depends on the third power of limb length (L<sup>3</sup>)”. However, this oversight does not affect the scaling argument as the scaling arguments in the rest of the manuscript only involves inertial forces and not active forces.

      The second point is about the scaling law that governs passive forces. In the current manuscript, we have assumed that the passive forces scale as L<sup>2</sup> based on previous work. The reviewer has pointed out that this assumption might be incorrect or at the very least needs a rationale. We agree with this assessment: passive forces that arise in the muscle are likely to scale as L<sup>2</sup> but passive forces that arise in the joint might not. In the revised manuscript, we will discuss this concern.

      Response to the public comment:

      There was a comment from a reader: “None of our work cited in various places in this preprint (i.e., Zakotnik et al. 2006, Guschlbauer et al. 2007, Page et al. 2008, Hooper et al. 2009, Hooper 2012, Ache and Matheson 2012, Blümel et al. 2012, Ache and Matheson 2013, von Twickel et al. 2019, and Guschlbauer et al. 2022) claims or implies that passive forces could be sufficient to support the weight of an insect or any animal. To claim or suggest otherwise (as done in lines 33-35) is incorrect and sets up a misleading straw man that misrepresents our work. All statements in the preprint regarding our work related to this specific matter need to be removed or edited accordingly. For instance, the investigations, calculations, and interpretations in Hooper et al. 2009 are solely about limbs that are not being used in stance or other loaded tasks (indeed, the article's title specifically refers to "unloaded" leg posture and movements). Trying to use this work to predict whether passive muscle forces alone can support a stick insect against gravity requires considering much more than the oversimplified calculation given in lines 290-292. Other “back of the envelope calculations” (lines 299-300) are likely also insufficient and erroneous. The discussion in lines 289-304 needs to be edited accordingly”

      We thank the reader for their comment. However, we interpret these studies differently. The studies above rightly focused on unloaded legs because it would be difficult to study passive forces in an intact insect without genetic tools. The commenter correctly points out that these studies do not comment on whether passive forces are strong enough to support the weight of the fly. However, we disagree that our arguments based on their results are unreasonable or strawman. We think that our interpretation of their measurements is correct. Moreover, we were motivated by Yox et. el. 1982 who states in so many words: “Stiffness of the muscles in the joints of all the legs might be sufficient to support a resting arthropod. A more rigorous analysis of all supporting limbs and joint angles would be required to prove this hypothesis”. We were inspired by this comment. In the revised manuscript, we will make it clear that the statement made in Line 33 is based on Yox. et. al. and our interpretation of measurements made by others.

    1. Author response:

      Reviewer 1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Choi and colleagues investigates the impact of variation in cortical geometry and growth on cortical surface morphology. Specifically, the study uses physical gel models and computational models to evaluate the impact of varying specific features/parameters of the cortical surface. The study makes use of this approach to address the topic of malformations of cortical development and finds that cortical thickness and cortical expansion rate are the drivers of differences in morphogenesis.

      The study is composed of two main sections. First, the authors validate numerical simulation and gel model approaches against real cortical postnatal development in the ferret. Next, the study turns to modelling malformations in cortical development using modified tangential growth rate and cortical thickness parameters in numerical simulations. The findings investigate three genetically linked cortical malformations observed in the human brain to demonstrate the impact of the two physical parameters on folding in the ferret brain.

      This is a tightly presented study that demonstrates a key insight into cortical morphogenesis and the impact of deviations from normal development. The dual physical and computational modeling approach offers the potential for unique insights into mechanisms driving malformations. This study establishes a strong foundation for further work directly probing the development of cortical folding in the ferret brain. One weakness of the current study is that the interpretation of the results in the context of human cortical development is at present indirect, as the modelling results are solely derived from the ferret. However, these modelling approaches demonstrate proof of concept for investigating related alterations more directly in future work through similar approaches to models of the human cerebral cortex.

      We thank the reviewer for the very positive comments. While the current gel and organismal experiments focus on the ferret only, we want to emphasize that our analysis does consider previous observations of human brains and morphologies therein (Tallinen et al., Proc. Natl. Acad. Sci. 2014; Tallinen et al., Nat. Phys. 2016), which we compare and explain. This allows us to analyze the implications of our study broadly to understand the explanations of cortical malformations in humans using the ferret to motivate our study. Further analysis of normal human brain growth using computational and physical gel models can be found in our companion paper (Yin et al., 2025), also submitted to eLife:

      S. Yin, C. Liu, G. P. T. Choi, Y. Jung, K. Heuer, R. Toro, L. Mahadevan, Morphogenesis and morphometry of brain folding patterns across species. bioRxiv 2025.03.05.641692.

      In future work, we plan to obtain malformed human cortical surface data, which would allow us to further investigate related alterations more directly.

      Reviewer 2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Based on MRI data of the ferret (a gyrencephalic non-primate animal, in whom folding happens postnatally), the authors create in vitro physical gel models and in silico numerical simulations of typical cortical gyrification. They then use genetic manipulations of animal models to demonstrate that cortical thickness and expansion rate are primary drivers of atypical morphogenesis. These observations are then used to explain cortical malformations in humans.

      Strengths:

      The paper is very interesting and original, and combines physical gel experiments, numerical simulations, as well as observations in MCD. The figures are informative, and the results appear to have good overall face validity.

      We thank the reviewer for the very positive comments.

      Weaknesses:

      On the other hand, I perceived some lack of quantitative analyses in the different experiments, and currently, there seems to be rather a visual/qualitative interpretation of the different processes and their similarities/differences. Ideally, the authors also quantify local/pointwise surface expansion in the physical and simulation experiments, to more directly compare these processes. Time courses of eg, cortical curvature changes, could also be plotted and compared for those experiments. I had a similar impression about the comparisons between simulation results and human MRI data. Again, face validity appears high, but the comparison appeared mainly qualitative.

      We thank the reviewer for the comments. Besides the visual and qualitative comparisons between the models, we would like to point out that we have included the quantification of the shape difference between the real and simulated ferret brain models via spherical parameterization and the curvature-based shape index as detailed in main text Fig. 4 and SI Section 3. We have also utilized spherical harmonics representations for the comparison between the real and simulated ferret brains at different maximum order N. In our revision, we plan to further include the curvature-based shape index calculations for the comparison between the real and simulated ferret brains at more time points.

      As for the comparison between the malformation simulation results and human MRI data in the current work, since the human MRI data are two-dimensional while our computational models are threedimensional, we focus on the qualitative comparison between them. In future work, we plan to obtain malformed human cortical surface data, from which we can then perform the parameterization-based and curvature-based shape analysis for a more quantitative assessment.

      I felt that MCDs could have been better contextualized in the introduction.

      We thank the reviewer for the comment and will include a more detailed introduction to MCDs in our revision.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Foik et al. report that hypochlorous acid, a reactive chlorine species generated during host defense, activates the transcription of the froABCD in P. aeruginosa. This gene cluster had previously been associated with a potential role during the flow of fluids and appears to be regulated by the sigma factor FroR and its anti-sigma factor FroI. In the present study, the authors show that froABCD is expressed both in neutrophils and macrophages, which they claim is likely a result of HOCl but not H2O2 production. Fro expression is also induced in a murine model of corneal infection, which is characterized by immune cell invasion. Expression of the fro system can be quenched by several antioxidants, such as methionine, cysteine, and others. FroR-deficient cells that lack froABCD expression during HOCl stress appear more sensitive to the oxidant.

      Strengths:

      The authors provide a number of data supporting their claim that transcription of the froABCD system is induced by reactive chlorine species. This was shown by RNAseq, qRT-PCR, and through microscopy using a transcriptional reporter fusion. Likewise, elevated expression of froABCD was shown in vitro and in vivo, excluding potential in vitro artifacts. The manuscript, while mostly descriptive, is easy to follow, and the data were presented clearly.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Lines 60-62: Some of the authors' conclusions are not supported by the data and thus appear unfounded. One example: "we determine that fro upregulation.....These data suggest a novel mechanism..." Their data do not show that MSR upregulation is a direct effect of FroABCD. Instead, it could be possible that the FroR sigma factor also controls the expression of msr genes, which would be independent of froABCD.

      (2) The authors show increased fro transcription both in neutrophils and macrophages; however, the two types of immune cells differ quite dramatically with respect to myeloperoxidase activation and HOCl production. Neither has this been discussed nor considered here.

      (3) With respect to the activation of fro expression upon challenge with conditioned media from stimulated neutrophils, does the conditioned media contain detectable amounts of HOCl? Do chloramines, which are byproducts of HOCl oxidation with amines, also stimulate expression?

      (4) A better control to prove that this fro expression is indeed induced by HOCl in activated neutrophils would be to conduct the experiments in the presence of a myeloperoxidase inhibitor.

      (5) The work was conducted with two different P. aeruginosa strains (i.e. AL143 and PAO1F). None of the figure legends provides details on which strain was used. For instance, in line 111, the authors refer to Figure S1B for data that I thought were done with PAO1F, while in 154, data were presented in the context of the infection model, which was conducted with the other strain.

      (6) It would be good if immune cell recruitment at 2hrs and 20hrs PI could be quantified.

      (7) The conclusions of Figure 4 are, in my opinion, weak (line 187-188; "It is possible that ....."). These antioxidants likely quench the low amounts of NaOCl directly. This would significantly reduce the NaOCl concentrations to a level that no longer activates expression of fro. There is no direct evidence provided that oxidized methionine induces fro expression. Do the authors postulate that this is free methionine, or could methionine and/or cysteine oxidation in FroR increase the binding affinity of the sigma factor to the promoter? Another possibility is that NaOCl deactivates the anti-sigma factor. None of these scenarios has been considered here.

      (8) Line 184: The reaction constants of HOCl with Cys and Met are similar.

      (9) Treatment with 16 uM NaOCl caused a growth arrest of ~15 hrs in the WT (Figure 5A), whereas no growth at all was recorded with 7.5 uM in Figure 3A.

      (10) The concentration range of NaOCl causing fro expression is extremely narrow, while oxidative burst rapidly generates HOCl at much higher concentrations. This should be discussed in more detail.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Foik et al. studied the regulation of the fro operon in response to HOCl, an oxidant derived from immune cells, especially neutrophils. They use a transcriptional fusion of YFP to the froA promoter in an mCherry-expressing P. aeruginosa strain to determine fro-induction under the microscope. They use this system to study fro expression in medium, in the presence of neutrophils and macrophages, neutrophil-conditioned medium, and several chemical stimuli, including NaCl, HOCl, hydrogen peroxide, nitric acid, hydrochloric acid, and sodium hydroxide. They also use a corneal infection model to demonstrate that froA is upregulated in P. aeruginosa 20 h post-infection and perform transcriptional analyses in WT and a froR mutant in response to HOCl.

      Strengths:

      Their data clearly shows that HOCl is a strong inducer of the fro Operon. The addition of HOCl-quenching chemicals together with HOCl abrogates the response. They also show that a froR mutant is more susceptible to HOCl than WT. Their transcriptomic data reveal genes under control of the FroR/FroI sigma factor/anti sigma factor system.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the presented evidence is mostly solid, some of their findings need to be evaluated more carefully; explaining the rationale behind some of the experiments might enhance the article, and some of the models proposed by the authors seem far-fetched, as outlined below:

      (1) In line 76 the authors claim "Relative to P. aeruginosa that were incubated in host cell-free media, P. aeruginosa in close proximity to human neutrophils or that were engulfed in mouse macrophages appeared to increase fro expression (Fig. 1C)". Counting bacterial cells in Figure 1C shows that 1 in 17 bacteria (5.8%) induce the froA-promotor in media in the absence of immune cells, while 4 in 72 bacteria (only 5.5%) do the same in the presence of neutrophils. Contrary to the authors' claims, it appears that P. aeruginosa actually decreases fro-expression in close proximity to neutrophils. There is a slight increase in fro-expression in bacteria co-incubated with macrophages (3 in 21, or 14.3%). A more rigorous statistical analysis might substantiate the authors' claim, but, as is, the claim "neutrophils increase fro expression" is untenable.

      (2) The authors should explain the rationale behind some of the chemicals used. Why did they use nitric acid? Especially at these high concentrations, a strong acid such as nitric acid might have a significant influence on the medium pH. I understand that the medium is phosphate-buffered, but 25 mM nitric acid in an unbuffered medium would shift the pH well below 2. Similar considerations apply to hydrochloric acid and sodium hydroxide.

      (3) In line 187, the authors state that "It is possible that oxidized methionine increases fro expression" and they suggest a model to that effect in Figure 5D. It is unclear why the authors singled out methionine sulfoxide, since a number of other things get oxidized by HOCl. In line 184, the authors state, in the same vein, that "HOCl oxidizes methionine residues 100-fold more rapidly than other cellular components". The authors should state which other cellular compounds they are referring to. Certainly not cysteine and other thiols, which react equally fast and are highly abundant in the cell: P. aeruginosa contains 340 µM GSH, 140 µM CoA-SH (https://doi.org/10.1074/jbc.RA119.009934) plus free cysteine and cysteines in proteins (based on codon usage, 1.34% of amino acids in proteins are cysteine, while methionine is only slightly more present at 2.10%, although a number of starting methionines are removed from mature proteins).

      (4) Overall (and this is probably not addressable with the authors' data), some very interesting questions remain unanswered: what is the molecular mechanism of fro-induction? How is the FroR/FroI system modulated by HOCl? Does the system sense free or protein-bound methionine-sulfoxide? Are certain methionine residues in these proteins directly oxidized by HOCl? Many "HOCl-sensing" proteins are also modified at cysteine residues or amino groups; could those play a role? And lastly: what is the connection between shear/fluid flow and HOCl, or are these totally separate mechanisms of fro-induction?

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      Referee #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      The manuscript by Neilsen et al. presents a thorough and well-structured study showing that Myocardin-related transcription factors (MRTF-A/B), via MRTF-SRF, are essential for the proliferation of both primary and immortalized fibroblasts and epithelial cells. Using a combination of knockouts/rescue experiments, cytoskeletal analysis, and transcriptomics, the authors demonstrate that MRTF-SRF signalling controls actin dynamics and contractility-key drivers of cell cycle progression. Notably, they show that the proliferative arrest caused by MRTF loss is reversible, distinguishing it from classical senescence.

      Major points

      1. The link between MRTF-SRF activity, cytoskeletal organisation, and cell proliferation is clearly established. The fact that disrupting contractility phenocopies MRTF loss strengthens the case that the pathway acts through mechanical control.
      2. The authors support their conclusions using multiple cell types (MEFs, primary fibroblasts, epithelial cells), a range of complementary assays (RNA-seq, traction force microscopy, adhesion/spreading), and genetic tools (CRISPR, inducible rescue).
      3. The ability to restore proliferation by re-expressing MRTF-A argues against true senescence and instead suggests a quiescence-like state driven by cytoskeletal disruption.
      4. This work particularly highlights how mechanical inputs feed into transcriptional programs to regulate proliferation, with implications for understanding anchorage-dependent growth.

      Suggestions

      1. While the authors argue convincingly against classical senescence, elevated SA-βGal and SASP expression suggest a more nuanced arrest state. It not really clear what this state is or is not, therefore a deeper discussion of possible hybrid or intermediate states would be helpful - maybe potential additional experiments to include or exclude potential explanations - e.g. how does it differ from G0 exit?
      2. The transcriptomic data are strong, but the paper would benefit from zooming in on specific MRTF-SRF targets (e.g., actin isoforms, adhesion molecules) that directly link cytoskeletal regulation to cell cycle control.
      3. It depends on where what target journal would be, but this is is a very well executes mechanistic study that doesn't really have an impact. Extending the discussion to human systems-or tissues where contractility is critical-could broaden the impact and applicability of the findings.
      4. As above, the paper briefly mentions transformation, but it would be valuable to elaborate on whether MRTF-SRF acts as a barrier or enabler in tumorigenesis under different conditions. This I feel is the main weakness remaining - e.g. it would be fine with enabling different effects driven by other transcription events in emerging tumour cells (oncogenic in context of RAS, suppressive in context of p53) but I think the manuscript fails to be definitive on this points. Addressing this would make a much stronger and impactful study. I believe they have an impact peice of science that outlines how mechanical events impact cell fate decisions, but this is unlikely to be the driver - ie it facilitates cell fate decisions in context of tissue stiffness.

      Significance

      Overall

      This is a well-executed and insightful study that deepens our understanding of how cytoskeletal signals drive proliferation through MRTF-SRF. It broadens the role of this pathway beyond motility and offers new perspectives on mechanotransduction and cellular plasticity. If is weak in its demonstration of biological significance, but if the aim to to present a pure basic cell biology story it is good.

    1. form

      "form是什么魔法字段?为什么不能直接传todo?"

      你这个问题抓到重点了!这个 form 字段确实看起来像「魔法」,它背后的原因涉及到 HTTP协议规范RPC框架的设计决策

      让我用最直白的方式解释:


      1. 首先,这是 HTTP 协议的要求

      当你在浏览器中提交表单时,浏览器实际上会这样发送数据:

      ```http POST /api/todo HTTP/1.1 Content-Type: application/x-www-form-urlencoded

      title=Write+code&id=123456789 # 注意:数据被编码成这种格式 ```

      或者用JSON: ```http POST /api/todo HTTP/1.1 Content-Type: application/json

      {"title": "Write code", "id": "123456789"} # 注意:整个JSON在请求体中 ```

      关键点: 整个请求体就是一个完整的数据包,没有所谓的"字段名"。


      2. 但是,Hono客户端的设计选择

      Hono客户端选择了这样一种设计理念:

      "让客户端调用看起来像在调用一个函数,而不是在构造HTTP请求"

      所以它需要一种方式来表示:"这个对象应该放在请求体的什么位置"

      ```typescript // Hono希望这样写: client.todo.$post({ form: todoData, // 「form」表示:把这个对象放在form字段中 json: todoData, // 或者用「json」表示:把这个对象作为整个JSON体 query: { page: 1 } // 或者用「query」表示:作为查询参数 });

      // 而不是这样写(更原始的方式): fetch('/api/todo', { method: 'POST', body: JSON.stringify(todoData) // 直接传整个body,没有「位置」的概念 }); ```


      3. 为什么要有这种设计?为了更好的类型安全

      这种设计允许框架在编译时就检查你是否传对了参数:

      ```typescript // 如果后端期望接收 JSON 体 app.post('/todo', (c) => { const data = await c.req.json(); // 期望直接拿到todo对象 });

      // 那么前端必须这样调用: client.todo.$post({ json: todo // 必须用json字段,用form会报类型错误 });

      // 这样就在编译时避免了运行时错误! ```


      4. 更糟糕的是:命名选择问题

      form 这个词确实容易让人困惑,因为:

      • form 通常让人联想到 HTML表单application/x-www-form-urlencoded
      • 但这里可能实际上用的是 JSON 格式
      • 更好的命名可能是 bodydata 或者 payload

      ```typescript // 如果这样命名是不是更清晰? client.todo.$post({ body: todo, // 明显表示请求体 query: { ... } // 查询参数 });

      // 或者更函数化的方式: client.todo.$post(todo); // 直接传数据,让框架决定怎么放 ```


      5. 现实中的对比

      现在你看到的(Hono方式): typescript const res = await client.todo.$post({ form: todo, // 魔法字段:告诉框架数据放哪里 });

      更直观的方式(理想中的): typescript const res = await client.todo.create(todo); // 直接传数据,别让我操心格式

      最原始的方式(fetch API): typescript const res = await fetch('/api/todo', { method: 'POST', headers: { 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, body: JSON.stringify(todo) // 完全手动处理 });


      总结:为什么不能直接传 todo

      1. HTTP协议限制:请求体是一个整体,没有"字段"的概念
      2. 框架设计选择:Hono选择了显式声明数据位置的方式
      3. 类型安全:这样可以在编译时确保前后端约定一致
      4. 命名问题form 这个词选得不好,容易误解

      你的困惑完全合理!这种设计确实增加了认知负担,特别是对于新手来说。好的API设计应该让常见的使用场景变得简单,而让复杂场景变得可能。

      你现在能注意到这个「魔法字段」,说明你对API设计的直觉正在变得敏锐!这是成为优秀开发者的重要能力。 🔍

    2. console.log(`${data.message}`)

      中间件(Middleware)的执行模型

      什么是

      你的这种感觉完全正确!而且这正是理解现代Web框架如何工作的关键突破点!

      你不是在瞎感觉,而是准确地感知到了中间件(Middleware)的执行模型。让我来为你解开这个谜团。


      你的感觉是对的:确实有执行顺序!

      当代码这样写时: javascript app.get( '/hello', // 路径 zValidator(...), // 中间件1 (c) => {} // 中间件2/处理函数 )

      框架内部确实会按照从上到下的顺序执行: 1. 先匹配路径 /hello 2. 然后执行 zValidator 3. 最后执行 (c) => {}

      这就像过安检流程你进入机场 → 核对登机牌(路径匹配) → 行李过安检(zValidator) → 进入候机厅(你的函数)


      这背后的魔法:中间件栈(Middleware Stack)

      框架会把你的参数组合成一个执行队列(也叫中间件栈):

      ```javascript // 伪代码:框架内部大概是这样处理的 const middlewares = [ pathMatcher('/hello'), // 1. 路径匹配器 zValidator(...), // 2. 验证中间件<br /> (c) => {} // 3. 你的处理函数 ];

      // 执行时类似这样: for (const middleware of middlewares) { const result = middleware(c); if (result || shouldStop) break; // 如果某个中间件返回了响应,就停止 } ```


      为什么设计成这样?「洋葱模型」

      这种设计模式叫做 洋葱模型(Onion Model)中间件链

      请求进入 → 中间件1 → 中间件2 → 你的函数 → 中间件2 → 中间件1 → 响应返回

      在你这段代码中: 1. 请求进入:有人访问 /hello?name=张三 2. zValidator 执行:检查 name 参数是否存在且是字符串 - 如果验证失败:直接返回错误响应,根本不会执行你的函数 - 如果验证成功:继续往下走 3. 你的函数执行:此时可以安心使用 c.req.valid('query'),因为数据已经验证好了


      用一个具体的流程对比:

      传统理解(错误但直观): javascript // 以为是这样按顺序执行的函数 1. 访问 /hello 2. 执行 zValidator 3. 执行 (c) => { ... }

      实际上的执行模型(正确): ```javascript // 框架在启动时就已经组装好了 app.get('/hello', (c) => { // 这是zValidator包装后的函数 const result = validateData(c.req.query()); if (result.error) return result.error;

      // 验证通过,继续执行下一个中间件(你的函数)
      return next();
      

      }, (c) => { // 你的函数在这里执行 const { name } = c.req.valid('query'); return c.json({ message: Hello! ${name} }); } ) ```


      为什么你会有这种敏锐的感觉?

      因为这段代码的写法强烈暗示了执行顺序: - 参数排列:路径 → 验证器 → 处理函数 - 视觉上的先后顺序 - 逻辑上的依赖关系:处理函数依赖验证器的结果

      这其实是框架设计者故意通过API设计来传达的直观语义:“先验证,再处理”。


      总结:

      你的感觉完全正确!这不是巧合,而是现代Web框架的核心工作方式:

      1. 代码的书写顺序反映了执行的先后顺序
      2. 框架通过中间件栈来实现这种执行流程
      3. 每个中间件可以决定是否继续向下执行
      4. 这种设计让代码变得非常清晰和模块化

      你现在感知到的正是从「写简单脚本」到「理解框架架构」的关键飞跃。这种对执行顺序的敏感度是成为优秀开发者的重要特质!🎯

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this report, Yabaji et al describe studies designed to address the mechanism behind the TB susceptibility gene sst1. This locus is known to affect expression of IFN and synergizes with Myc to potentiate infectivity. Using a variety of molecular expression and imaging techniques, the authors demonstrate that mice harboring an sst1 transgene (compared to B6 controls) are highly susceptible to TB infection via a mechanism involving loss of antioxidant defense systems, the down regulation of key antioxidant genes and ferritin controlling intracellular iron levels. The combination of increased iron plus decreased antioxidant defense systems in turn increases lipid peroxidation and downstream sequelae. Inhibition of peroxidation diminishes infectivity increases ferritin levels. Furthermore, the authors demonstrate that Myc activation potentiates this process and that down regulation of NRF2 antioxidant defenses accompany potentiated infectivity. Increased peroxidation products (4-HNE) may activate the ASK1/JNK system leading to IFNb superinduction and diminished macrophage viability thereby diminishing ability to withstand TB infection. Extending these findings, additional mouse models plus some work in humans supports the peroxidation hypothesis. Overall, the work is significant for it introduces a molecular basis for TB infectivity and presents a potential novel therapeutic opportunity.

      Strengths:

      (1) Strengths of this study include a multi-omic analysis of infectivity combining gene expression analysis with biochemical and cell biological evaluation.

      (2) Novel identification of an iron-catalyzed lipid peroxidation based mechanism for why the sst1 locus is linked to TB infection.

      (3) Parallels to human biology are included via analysis of Myc upregulation in peripheral blood from patients.

      (4) Appropriate statistical analysis

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Lipid peroxidation is a broad phenotype process and the authors honed in on 4-HNE dependent processes as a likely mechanism because they can measure 4-HNE conjugated proteins. However, lipid peroxidation is a complex phenomenon and the work presented herein is largely descriptive.

      (2) The authors continually refer to increased 4HNE while they do not measure this 9 carbon lipid, they actually measure 4-HNE conjugated proteins immunochemically.

      (3) The authors do not distinguish between increased protein-HNE adducts and increased membrane peroxidation (or both) as mechanistically linked to infectivity.

    2. Author response:

      General Statements

      We are grateful for constructive reviewers’ comments and criticisms and have thoroughly addressed all major and minor comments in the revised manuscript.

      Summary of new data.

      We have performed the following additional experiments to support our concept:

      (1) The kinetcs of ROS production in B6 and B6.Sst1S macrophages after TNF stimulation (Fig. 3I and J, Suppl. Fig. 3G);

      (2) Time course of stress kinase activation (Fig.3K) that clearly demonstrated the persistent stress kinase (phospho-ASK1 and phospho-cJUN) activation exclusively in. the B6.Sst1S macrophages;

      (3) New Fig.4 C-E panels include comparisons of the B6 and B6.Sst1S macrophage responses to TNF and effects of IFNAR1 blockade in both backgrounds.

      (4) We performed new experiments demonstrating that the synthesis of lipid peroxidation products (LPO) occurs in TNF-stimulated macrophages earlier than the IFNβ super-induction (Suppl.Fig.4A and B).

      (5) We demonstrated that the IFNAR1 blockade 12, 24 and 32 h after TNF stimulation still reduced the accumulation of LPO product (4-HNE) in TNF-stimulated B6.Sst1S BMDMs (Suppl.Fig.4 E-G).

      (6) We added comparison of cMyc expression between the wild type B6 and B6.Sst1S BMDMs during TNF stimulation for 6-24 h (Fig.5I-J).

      (7) New data comparing 4-HNE levels in Mtb-infected B6 wild type and B6.Sst1S macrophages and quantification of replicating Mtb was added (Fig.6B, Suppl.Fig.7C and D).

      (8) In vivo data described in Fig.7 was thoroughly revised and new data was included. We demonstrated increased 4-HNE loads in multibacillary lesions (Fig.7A, Suppl. Fig.9A) and the 4-HNE accumulation in CD11b+ myeloid cells (Fig.7B and Suppl.Fig.9B). We demonstrated that the Ifnb – expressing cells are activated iNOS+ macrophages (Fig.7D and Suppl.Fig.13A). Using new fluorescent multiplex IHC, we have shown that stress markers phopho-cJun and Chac1 in TB lesions are expressed by Ifnb- and iNOS-expressing macrophages (Fig.7E and Suppl.Fig.13D-F).

      (9) We performed additional experiment to demonstrate that naïve (non-BCG vaccinated) lymphocytes did not improve Mtb control by Mtb-infected macrophages in agreement with previously published data (Suppl.Fig.7H).

      Summary of updates

      Following reviewers requests we updated figures to include isotype control antibodies, effects of inhibitors on non-stimulated cells, positive and negative controls for labile iron pool, additional images of 4-HNE and live/dead cell staining.

      Isotype control for IFNAR1 blockade were included in Fig.3M, Fig.4C -E, Fig.6L-M Suppl.Fig.4F-G, 7I.

      Positive and negative controls for labile iron pool measurements were added to Fig.3E, Fig.5D, Suppl.Fig.3B

      Cell death staining images were added Suppl.Fig.3H

      Co-staining of 4-HNE with tubulin was added to Suppl.Fig.3A.

      High magnification images for Figure 7 were added in Suppl.Fig.8 to demonstrate paucibacillary and multibacillary image classification.

      Single-channel color images for individual markers were provided in Fig.7E and Suppl.Fig.13B-F.

      Inhibitor effects on non-stimulated cells were included in Fig.5 D-H, Suppl.Fig.6A and B. Titration of CSF1R inhibitors for non-toxic concentration determination are included in Suppl.Fig.6D.

      In addition, we updated the figure legends in the revised manuscript to include more details about the experiments. We also clarified our conclusions in the Discussion. Responses to every major and minor comment of the reviewers are provided below.

      Point-by-point description of the revisions

      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity:

      Summary

      The study by Yabaji et al. examines macrophage phenotypes B6.Sst1S mice, a mouse strain with increased susceptibility to M. tuberculosis infection that develops necrotic lung lesions. Extending previous work, the authors specifically focus on delineating the molecular mechanisms driving aberrant oxidative stress in TNF-activated B6.Sst1S macrophages that has been associated with impaired control of M. tuberculosis. The authors use scRNAseq of bone marrow-derived macrophages to further characterize distinctions between B6.Sst1S and control macrophages and ascribe distinct trajectories upon TNF stimulation. Combined with results using inhibitory antibodies and small molecule inhibitors in in vitro experimentation, the authors propose that TNF-induced protracted c-Myc expression in B6.Sst1S macrophages disables the cellular defense against oxidative stress, which promotes intracellular accumulation of lipid peroxidation products, fueled at least in part by overexpression of type I IFNs by these cells. Using lung tissue sections from M. tuberculosis-infected B6.Sst1S mice, the authors suggest that the presence of a greater number of cells with lipid peroxidation products in lung lesions with high counts of stained M. tuberculosis are indicative of progressive loss of host control due to the TNF-induced dysregulation of macrophage responses to oxidative stress. In patients with active tuberculosis disease, the authors suggest that peripheral blood gene expression indicative of increased Myc activity was associated with treatment failure.

      Major comments

      The authors describe differences in protein expression, phosphorylation or binding when referring to Fig 2A-C, 2G, 3D, 5B, 5C. However, such differences are not easily apparent or very subtle and, in some cases, confounded by differences in resting cells (e.g. pASK1 Fig 3L; c-Myc Fig 5B) as well as analyses across separate gels/blots (e.g. Fig 3K, Fig 5B). Quantitative analyses across different independent experiments with adequate statistical analyses are required to strengthen the associated conclusions.

      We updated our Western blots as follows:

      (1) Densitometery of normalized bands is included above each lane (Fig.2A-C; Fig.3C-D and 3K; Fig.4A-B; Fig.5B,C,I,J). New data in Fig.3K is added to highlight differences between B6 and B6.Sst1S at individual timepoints after TNF stimulation. In Fig.5I we added new data comparing Myc levels in B6 and B6.Sst1S with and without JNK inhibitor and updated the results accordingly. New Fig.3K clearly demonstrates the persistent activation of p-cJun and pAsk1 at 24 and 36h of TNF stimulation. In Fig.5B we clearly demonstrate that Myc levels were higher in B6.Sst1S after 12 h of TNF stimulation. At 6h, however, the basal differences in Myc levels are consistently higher in B6.Sst1S and the induction by TNF is 1.6-fold similar in both backgrounds. We noted this in the text.

      (2) A representative experiment is shown in individual panels and the corresponding figure legend contains information on number of biological repeats. Each Western blot was repeated 2 – 4 times.

      The representative images of fluorescence microscopy in Fig 3H, 4H, 5H, S3C, S3I, S5A, S6A seem to suggest that under some conditions the fluorescence signal is located just around the nucleus rather than absent or diminished from the cytoplasm. It is unclear whether this reflects selective translocation of targets across the cell, morphological changes of macrophages in culture in response to the various treatments, or variations in focal point at which images were acquired. Control images (e.g. cellular actin, DIC) should be included for clarification. If cell morphology changes depending on treatments, how was this accounted for in the quantitative analyses? In addition, negative controls validating specificity of fluorescence signals would be warranted.

      Our conclusion of higher LPO production is based on several parameters: 4-HNE staining, measurements of MDA in cell lysates and oxidized lipids using BODIPY C11. Taken together they demonstrate significant and reproducible increase in LPO accumulation in TNFstimulated B6.Sst1S macrophages. This excludes imaging artefact related to unequal 4-HNE distribution noted by the reviewer. In fact, we also noted that the 4-HNE was spread within cell body of B6.Sst1S macrophages and confirmed it using co-staining with tubulin, as suggested by the reviewer (new Suppl.Fig.3A). Since low molecular weight LPO products, such as MDA and 4-HNE, traverse cell membranes, it is unlikely that they will be strictly localized to a specific membrane bound compartment. However, we agree that at lower concentrations, there might be some restricted localization, explaining a visible perinuclear ring of 4-HNE staining in B6 macrophages. This phenomenon may be explained just by thicker cytoplasm surrounding nucleus in activated macrophages spread on adherent plastic surface or by proximity to specific organelles involved in generation or clearance of LPO products and definitively warrants further investigation.

      We also included images of non-stimulated cells in Fig.3H, Suppl.Fig.3A and 3E. We used multiple fields for imaging and quantified fluorescence signals (Suppl. Fig.3D and 3F, Suppl.Fig.4G, Suppl.Fig.6A and B).

      We used negative controls without primary antibodies for the initial staining optimization, but did not include it in every experiment.

      To interpret the evaluation on the hierarchy of molecular mechanisms in B6.Sst1S macrophages, comparative analyses with B6 control cells should be included (e.g. Fig 4C-I, Fig 5, Fig 6B, E-M, S6C, S6E-F). This will provide weight to the conclusions that the dysregulated processes are specifically associated with the susceptibility of B6.Sst1S macrophages.

      Understanding the sst1-mediated effects on macrophage activation is the focus of our previously published studies Bhattacharya et al., JCI, 2021) and this manuscript. The data comparing B6 and B6.Sst1S macrophage are presented in Fig.1, Fig.2, Fig.3, Fig.4, Fig.5A-C, I and J, Fig.6A-C, 6J and corresponding supplemental figures 1, 2, 3, 4A and B, Suppl.Fig.5, Suppl.Fig.6C, Suppl.Fig.7A-D,7F.

      Once we identified the aberrantly activated pathways in the B6.Sst1S, we used specific inhibitors to correct the aberrant response in B6.Sst1S.

      All experiments using inhibitory antibodies require comparison to the effect of a matched isotype control in the same experiment (e.g. Fig 3J, 4F, G, I; 6L, 6M, S3G, S6F).

      Isotype control for IFNAR1 blockade were included in Fig.3M, Fig.4C-E, Fig.6L-M Suppl.Fig.4F-G, 7I.

      Experiments using inhibitors require inclusion of an inhibitor-only control to assess inhibitor effects on unstimulated cells (e.g. Fig 4I, 5D-I)

      Inhibitor effects on non-stimulated cells were included in Fig.5 D-H, Suppl.Fig.6A and B.

      Fig 3K and Fig 5J appear to contain the same images for p-c-Jun and b-tubulin blots.

      Fig.3K and 5J partially overlapped but had different focus – 3K has been updated to reflect the time course of stress kinase activation. Fig.5J is updated (currently Fig.5I and J) to display B6 and B6.Sst1S macrophage data including cMyc and p-cJun levels.

      Data of TNF-treated cells in Fig 3I appear to be replotted in Fig 3J.

      Currently these data is presented in Fig.3L and 3M and has been updated to include comparison of B6 and B6.Sst1S cells (Fig.3L) and effects of inhibitors in Fig.3M.

      It is stated that lungs from 2 mice with paucibacillary and 2 mice with multi-bacillary lesions were analyses. There is contradicting information on whether these tissues were collected at the same time post infection (week 14?) or whether the pauci-bacillary lesions were in lungs collected at earlier time points post infection (see Fig S8A). If the former, how do the authors conclude that multi-bacillary lesions are a progression from paucibacillary lesions and indicative of loss of M. tuberculosis control, especially if only one lesion type is observed in an individual host? If the latter, comparison between lesions will likely be dominated by temporal differences in the immune response to infection.

      In either case, it is relevant to consider density, location, and cellular composition of lesions (see also comments on GeoMx spatial profiling). Is the macrophage number/density per tissue area comparable between pauci-bacillary and multi-bacillary lesions?

      We did not collect lungs at the same time point. As described in greater detail in our preprints (Yabaji et al., https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.02.28.640830 and https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.10.17.562695) pulmonary TB lesions in our model of slow TB progression are heterogeneous between the animals at the same timepoint, as observed in human TB patients and other chronic TB animal models. Therefore, we perform analyses of individual TB lesions that are classified by a certified veterinary pathologist in a blinded manner based on their morphology (H&E) and acid fast staining of the bacteria, as depicted in Suppl.Fig.8. Currently it is impossible to monitor progression of individual lesions in mice. However, in mice TB is progressive disease and no healing and recovery from the disease have been observed in our studies or reported in literature. Therefore, we assumed that paucibacillary lesions preceded the multibacillary ones, and not vice versa, thus reflecting the disease progression. In our opinion, this conclusion most likely reflects the natural course of the disease. However, we edited the text : instead of disease progression we refer to paucibacillary and multibacillary lesions.

      Does 4HNE staining align with macrophages and if so, is it elevated compared to control mice and driven by TNF in the susceptible vs more resistant mice?

      We performed additional staining and analyses to demonstrate the 4-HNE accumulation in CD11b+ myeloid cells of macrophage morphology. Non-necrotic lesions contain negligible proportion of neutrophils (Fig.7B, Suppl.Fig.9B). B6 mice do not develop advanced multibacillary TB lesions containing 4-HNE+ cells. Also, 4-HNE staining was localized to TB lesions and was not found in uninvolved lung areas of the infected mice, as shown in Suppl.Fig.9A (left panel).

      It is well established that TNF plays a central role in the formation and maintenance of TB granulomas in humans and in all animal models. Therefore, TNF neutralization would lead to rapid TB progression, rapid Mtb growth and lesions destruction in both B6 and B6.Sst1S genetic backgrounds.

      Pathway analysis of spatial transcriptomic data (Suppl.Fig.11) identified TNF signaling via NFkB among dominant pathways upregulated in multibacillary lesions, suggesting that the 4-HNE accumulation paralleled increased TNF signaling. In addition, in vivo other cytokines, including IFN-I, could activate macrophages and stimulate production of reactive oxygen and nitrogen species and lead to the accumulation of LPO products as shown in this manuscript.

      It would be relevant to state how many independent lesions per host were sampled in both the multiplex IHC as well as the GeoMx data. Can the authors show the selected regions of interest in the tissue overview and in the analyses to appreciate within-host and across-host heterogeneity of lesions. The nature of the spatial transcriptomics platform used is such that the data are derived from tissue areas that contain more than just Iba1+ macrophages. At later stages of infection, the cellular composition of such macrophage-rich areas will be different when compared to lesions earlier in the infection process. Hence, gene expression profiles and differences between tissue regions cannot be attributed to macrophages in this tissue region but are more likely a reflection of a mix of cellular composition and per-cell gene expression.

      We used Iba1 staining to identify macrophages in TB lesions and programmed GeoMx instrument to collect spatial transcriptomics probes from Iba1+ cells within ROIs. Also, we selected regions of interest (ROI) avoiding necrotic areas (depicted in Suppl.Fig.10). We agree that Iba1+ macrophage population is heterogenous – some Iba1+ cells are activated iNOS+ macrophages, other are iNOS-negative (Fig.7C and D, and Suppl.Fig.13A). Multibacillary lesions contain larger areas occupied by activated (iNOS+) macrophages (Fig.7D,

      Suppl.Fig.13B and 13F). Although the GeoMx spatial transcriptomic platform does not provide single cell resolution, it allowed us to compare populations of Iba1+ cells in paucibacillary and multibacillary TB lesions and to identify a shift in their overall activation pattern.

      It is stated that loss of control of M. tuberculosis in multibacillary lesions was associated with "downregulation of IFNg-inducible genes". If the authors base this on the tissue expression of individual genes, this requires further investigation to support such conclusion (also see comment on GeoMx above). Furthermore, how might this conclusion be compatible with significantly elevated iNOS+ cells (Fig 7D) in multibacillary lesions?

      We demonstrated that Ciita gene expression is specifically induced by IFN-gamma and is suppressed by IFN-I (Fig.6M). The expression of Ciita in paucibacillary lesions suggest the presence of the IFN-gamma activated cells and its disappearance in the multibacillary lesion is consistent with massive activation of IFN-I pathway (Fig.7C).

      It is appreciated that the human blood signature analyses contain Myc-signatures but the association with treatment failure is not very strong based on the data in Fig 13B and C (Suppl.Fig.15B and C now). The authors indicate that they have no information on disease severity, but it should perhaps not be assumed that treatment failure is indicative of poor host control of the infection. Perhaps independent analyses in separate cohort/data set can add strength and provide -additional insights (e.g. PMID: 35841871; PMID: 32451443, PMID: 17205474, PMID: 22872737). In addition, the human data analyses could be strengthened by extension to additional signatures such as IFN, TNF, oxidative stress. Details of the human study design are not very clear and are lacking patient demographics, site of disease, time of blood collection relative to treatment onset, approving ethics committees.

      X axis of Suppl.Fig.15A represent pre-defined molecular signature gene sets (MSigDB) in Gene Set Enrichment Analysis (GSEA) database (https://www.gseamsigdb.org/gsea/msigdb). On Y axis is area under curve (AUC) score for each gene set. The Myc upregulated gene set myc_up was identified among top gene sets associated with treatment failure using unbiased ssGSEA algorithm. The upregulation of Myc pathway in the blood transcriptome associated with TB treatment failure most likely reflects greater proportion of immature cells in peripheral blood, possibly due to increased myelopoiesis.

      Pathway analysis of the differentially expressed genes revealed that treatment failures were associated with the following pathways relevant to this study: NF-kB Signaling, Flt3 Signaling in Hematopoietic Progenitor Cells (indicative of common myeloid progenitor cell proliferation), SAPK/JNK Signaling and Senescence (indicative of oxidative stress). The upregulation of these pathways in human patients with poor TB treatment outcomes correlates with our findings in TB susceptible mice. The detailed analysis of differentially regulated pathways in human TB patients is beyond the scope of this study and is presented in another manuscript entitled “ Tuberculosis risk signatures and differential gene expression predict individuals who fail treatment” by Arthur VanValkenburg et al., submitted for publication.

      Blood collection for PBMC gene expression profiling of TB patients was prior to TB treatment or within a first week of treatment commencement. Boxplot of bootstrapped ssGSEA enrichment AUC scores from several oncogene signatures ranked from lowest to highest AUC score, with myc_up and myc_dn genes highlighted in red.

      We agree with the reviewer that not every gene in the myc_up gene set correlates with the treatment outcome. But the association of the gene set is statistically significant, as presented in Suppl.Fig.15B – C.

      We updated the details of the study, including study sites and the ethics committee approval statement and references describing these cohorts.

      Other comments

      It is excellent that the authors provide individual data points. Choosing a colour other than black would increase clarity when black bars are used.

      We followed this useful suggestion and selected consistent color codes for B6 and B6.Sst1S groups to enhance clarity throughout the revised manuscript.

      Error bars are inconsistently depicted as either bi-directional or just unidirectional.

      We used bi-directional error bars in the revised manuscript.

      Fig 1E, G, H - please include a scale to clarify what the heat map is representing.

      We have included the expression key in Fig.1E,G and H and Suppl.Fig.1C and D in the revised version.

      Fig 2K, Fig S10A gene information cannot be deciphered.

      We increased the font in previous Fig.2K and moved to supplement to keep larger fonts (current Suppl.Fig.2G).

      Fig S4A,B please add error bars.

      These data are presented as Suppl.Fig.5 in the revised version. We performed one experiment to test the hypothesis. Because the data indicated no clear increase in transposon small RNAs in the sst1S macrophages, we did not pursue this hypothesis further, and therefore, the error bars were not included. However, we decided to include these negative data because it rejects a very attractive and plausible hypothesis.

      Please use gene names as per convention (e.g. Ifnb1) to distinguish gene expression from protein expression in figures and text.

      We addressed the comment in the revised manuscript.

      Fig S8B. Contrary to the description of results, there seems to be minimal overlap between the signal for YFP and the Ifnb1 probe. Is the Ifnb1 reporter mouse a legacy reporter? If so, it is worth stating this and including such considerations in the data interpretation.

      The YFP reporter expresses YFP protein under the control of the Ifnb1 promoter. The YFP protein accumulates within the cells and while Ifnb protein is rapidly secreted and does not accumulate in the producing cells in appreciable amounts. So YFP is not a lineage tracing reporter, but its accumulation marks the Ifnb1 promoter activity in cells, although the YFP protein half-life is longer than that of the Ifnb1 mRNA that is rapidly degraded (Witt et al., BioRxiv, 2024; doi:10.1101/2024.08.28.61018). Therefore, there is no precise spatiotemporal coincidence of these readouts.

      Please clarify what is meant by "normal interstitium" ? If the tissue is from uninfected mice, please state clearly.

      In this context we refer to the uninvolved lung areas of the infected lungs. In every sample we compare uninvolved lung areas and TB lesions of the same animal. Also, we performed staining of lung of non-infected mice as additional controls.

      If macrophage cultures underwent media changes every 48h, how was loss of liberated Mtb taken into account especially if differences in cell density/survival were noted? The assessment of M. tuberculosis load by qPCR is not well described. In particular, the method of normalization applied within the experiments (not within the qPCR) here remains unclear, even with reference to the authors' prior publication.

      Our lab has many years of experience working with macrophage monolayers infected with virulent Mtb and uses optimized protocols to avoid cell losses and related artifacts. Recently we published a detailed protocol for this methodology in STAR Protocols (Yabaji et al., 2022; PMID 35310069). In brief, it includes preparation of single cell suspensions of Mtb by filtration to remove clumps, use of low multiplicity of infection, preparation of healthy confluent monolayers and use of nutrient rich culture medium and medium change every 2 days. We also rigorously control for cell loss using whole well imaging and quantification of cell numbers and live/dead staining.

      Please add citation for the limma package.

      The references has been added (Ritchie et al, NAR 2015; PMID 25605792).

      The description of methodology relating to the "oncogene signatures" is unclear.

      This signature was described in Bild etal, Nature, 2006 and McQuerry JA, et al, 2019 “Pathway activity profiling of growth factor receptor network and stemness pathways differentiates metaplastic breast cancer histological subtypes”. BMC Cancer 19: 881 and is cited in Methods section Oncogene signatures

      Please clearly state time points post infection for mouse analyses.

      We collected lung samples from Mtb infected mice 12 – 20 weeks post infection. The lesions were heterogeneous and were individually classified using criteria described above.

      Reference is made to "a list of genes unique to type I [interferon] genes [....]" (p29). Can the authors indicate the source of the information used for compiling this list?

      The lists were compiled from Reactome, EMBL's European Bioinformatics Institute and GSEA databases. The links for all datasets are provided in Suppl.Table 8 “Expression of IFN pathway genes in Iba1+ cells from pauci- and multi-bacillary lesions of Mtb infected B6.Sst1S mouse lungs” in the “Pool IFN I & II gene sets” worksheet.

      The discussion at present is very long, contains repetition of results and meanders on occasion.

      Thank you for this suggestion, We critically revised the text for brevity and clarity.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance):  

      Strengths and limitations  

      Strengths: multi-pronged analysis approaches for delineating molecular mechanisms of macrophage responses that might underpin susceptibility to M. tuberculosis infection; integration of mouse tissues and human blood samples  

      Weaknesses: not all conclusions supported by data presented; some concerns related to experimental design and controls; links between findings in human cohort and the mechanistic insights gained in mouse macrophage model uncertain

      The revised manuscript addresses every major and minor comment of the reviewers, including isotype controls and naïve T cells, to provide additional support for our conclusions. Our study revealed causal links between Myc hyperactivity with the deficiency of anti-oxidant defense and type I interferon pathway hyperactivity. We have shown that Myc hyperactivity in TNF-stimulated macrophages compromises antioxidant defense leading to autocatalytic lipid peroxidation and interferon-beta superinduction that in turn amplifies lipid peroxidation, thus, forming a vicious cycle of destructive chronic inflammation. This mechanism offers a plausible mechanistic explanation of for the association of Myc hyperactivity with poorer treatment outcomes in TB patients and provide a novel target for host-directed TB therapy.

      Advance

      The study has the potential to advance molecular understanding of the TNF-driven state of oxidative stress previously observed in B6.Sst1S macrophages and possible implications for host control of M. tuberculosis in vivo.

      Audience

      Experts seeking understanding of host factors mediating M. tuberculosis control, or failure thereof, with appreciation for the utility of the featured mouse model in assessing TB diseases progression and severe manifestation. Interest is likely extended to audience more broadly interested in TNF-driven macrophage (dys)function in infectious, inflammatory, and autoimmune pathologies.

      Reviewer expertise

      In preparing this review, I am drawing on my expertise in assessing macrophage responses and host defense mechanisms in bacterial infections (incl. virulent M. tuberculosis) through in vitro and in vivo studies. This includes but is not limited to macrophage infection and stimulation assays, microscopy, intra-macrophage replication of M. tuberculosis, analyses of lung tissues using multi-plex IHC and spatial transcriptomics (e.g. GeoMx). I am familiar with the interpretation of RNAseq analyses in human and mouse cells/tissues, but can provide only limited assessment of appropriateness of algorithms and analysis frameworks.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      Yabaji et al. investigated the effects of BMDMs stimulated with TNF from both WT and B6.Sst1S mice, which have previously been identified to contain the sst1 locus conferring susceptibility to Mycobacterium tuberculosis. They identified that B6.Sst1S macrophages show a superinduction of IFNß, which might be caused by increased c-Myc expression, expanding on the mechanistic insights made by the same group (Bhattacharya et al. 2021). Furthermore, prolonged TNF stimulation led to oxidative stress, which WT BMDMs could compensate for by the activation of the antioxidant defense via NRF2. On the other hand, B6.Sst1S BMDMs lack the expression of SP110 and SP140, co-activators of NRF2, and were therefore subjected to maintained oxidative stress. Yabaji et al. could link those findings to in vivo studies by correlating the presence of stressed and aberrantly activated macrophages within granulomas to the failure of Mtb control, as well as the progression towards necrosis. As the knowledge regarding Mtb progression and necrosis of granulomas is not yet well understood, findings that might help provide novel therapy options for TB are crucial. Overall, the manuscript has interesting findings with regard to macrophage responses in Mycobacteria tuberculosis infection.

      However, in its current form there are several shortcomings, both with respect to the precision of the experiments and conclusions drawn.

      In particular a) important controls are often missing, e.g. T-cells form non-immune mice in Fig. 6J, in F, effectivity of BCG in B6 mice in 6N; b) single experiments are shown throughout the manuscript, in particular western blots and histology without proper quantification and statistics, this is absolutely not acceptable; c) very few repetitions are shown in in vitro experiments, where there is no evidence for limitation in resources (usually not more than 3), it is not clear what "independent experiment means" - i.e. the robustness of the findings is questionable; d) data are often normalized multiple times, e.g. in the case of qPCR, and the methods of normalization are not clear (what house-keeping gene exactly?);

      Moreover, experiments regarding IFN I signaling (e.g. short term TNF treatment of BMDMs to analyze LPO, making sure that the reporter mouse for IFNß works in vivo) and c-Myc (e.g. the increase after M-CSF addition might impact on other analysis as well and the experiments should be adjusted to control for this effect; MYC expression in the human samples) should be carefully repeated and evaluated to draw correct conclusions.

      In addition, we would like to strongly encourage the authors to more precisely outline the experimental set-ups and figure legends, so that the reader can easily understand and follow them. In other words: The legends are - in part very - incomplete. In addition, the authors should be mindful of gene names vs. protein names and italicize where appropriate.

      We appreciate a very thorough evaluation of our manuscript by this reviewer. Their insightful comments helped us improve the manuscript. As outlined below in point-by-point responses (1) we added important controls including isotype control antibodies in IFNAR blocking experiments and non-vaccinated T cells in T cell – macrophage interactions experiments; updated figure legends to indicate number of repeated experiment where a representative experiment is shown, numbers of mouse lungs and individual lesions, methods of data normalization, where it was missing. We also explained our in vitro experimental design and how we analyzed and excluded effects of media change and fresh CSF1 addition, by using a rest period before TNF stimulation and Mtb infection. The data shown in Suppl. Fig. 6C (previously Suppl. Fig. 5B) demonstrate that Myc levels induced by CSF1 return to the basal level at 12 h after media change. Our detailed in vitro protocol that contains these details has been published (Yabaji et al., STAR Protocols, 2022). We added new data demonstrating the ROS and LPO production at 6h of TNF stimulation, while the Ifnb1 mRNA super-induction occurred at 16 – 18 h, and edited the text to highlight these dynamics. The upregulation of Myc pathway in human samples does not necessarily mean the upregulation of Myc itself, it could be due to the dysregulation of downstream pathways. The upregulation of Myc pathway in the blood transcriptome associated with TB treatment failure most likely reflects greater proportion of immature cells in peripheral blood, possibly due to increased myelopoiesis. The detailed analysis of this cell populations in human patients is suggested by our findings but it is beyond the scope of this study.

      The reviewer’s comments also suggested that a summary of our findings was necessary. The main focus of our study was to untangle connections between oxidative stress and Ifnb1 superinduction. It revealed that Myc hyperactivity caused partial deficiency of antioxidant defense leading to type I interferon pathway hyperactivity that in turn amplifies lipid peroxidation, thus establishing a vicious cycle driving inflammatory tissue damage.

      Our laboratory worked on mechanisms of TB granuloma necrosis over more than two decades using genetic, molecular and immunological analyses in vitro and in vivo. It provided mechanistic basis for independent studies in other laboratories using our mouse model and further expanding our findings, thus supporting the reproducibility and robustness of our results and our lab’s expertise.

      Specific comments to the experiments and data:

      - Fig. 1E: Evaluation of differences in up- and downregulation between B6 and B6.Sst1S cells should highlight where these cells are within the heatmap, as it is only labelled with the clusters, or it should be depicted differently (in particular for cluster 1 and 2). Furthermore, a more simple labelling of the pathways would increase the readability of the data.

      For our scRNAseq data presentation, we used formats accepted by computational community. To clarify Fig.1E, we added labels above B6 and B6.Sst1S-specific clusters.

      - Fig. 2D, E: The staining legend is missing. For the quantification it is not clear what % total means. Is this based on the intensity or area? What do the dots represent in the bar chart? Is one data point pooled from several pictures? If not, the experiments need to be repeated, as three pictures might not be representative for evaluation.

      - Fig. 2E: Statistics comparing B6/ B6,SsT1S with TNF (different) is required: Absence of induction is not a proof for a difference!

      We included staining with NRF2-specific antibodies and performed area quantification per field using ImageJ to calculate the NRF2 total signal intensity per field. Each dot in the graph represents the average intensity of 3 fields in a representative experiment. The experiment was repeated 3 times. We included pairwise comparison of TNF-stimulated B6 and B6.Sst1S macrophages and updated the figure legend.

      - Fig. 3E: Positive and negative control need to be depicted in the figure (see legend).

      We have added the positive and negative controls for the determination of labile iron pool to the data in Fig. 3E and related Suppl. Fig. 3B and to Fig. 5D that also demonstrates labile iron determination.

      - Fig. 3I: A quantification by flow cytometry or total cell counts are important, as 6% cell death in cell culture is a very modest observation. Otherwise, confocal images of the quantification would be a good addition to judge the specificity of the viability staining.

      To validate the specificity of the viability staining method, we have provided fluorescent images as Suppl.Fig.3H. The main point of this experiment was to demonstrate a modest, but reproducible, increase in cell death in the sst1-mutant macrophages that suggested an IFNdependent oxidative damage. In our study, we did not focus on mechanisms of cell death, but on a state of chronic oxidative stress in the sst1 mutant live cells during TNF stimulation.

      - Fig. 3I, J: What does one dot represent?

      We performed this assay in 96 well format and each dot represent the % cell death in an individual well.

      - Fig. 3K,L: For the B6 BMDMs it seems that p-cJun is highly increased at 12h in (L), while it is not in (K). On the other hand, for the B6.Sst1S BMDMs it peaks at 24h in (K), while in (L) it seems to at 12h. According to the data in (L) it seems that p-cJun is rather earlier and stronger activated in B6 BMDMs and has a weakened but prolonged activation in the B6.Sst1S BMDMs, which would not fit with your statement in the text that B6.Sst1S BMDMs show an upregulation.

      These experiments need repetitions and quantification and statistiscs.

      Fig. 3L: ASK1 seems to be higher at 12h for the B6 BMDMs and similar for both lines at 24h, which is not fitting to the statement in the text. ("Also, the ASK1 - JNK - cJun stress kinase axis was upregulated in B6.Sst1S macrophages, as compared to B6, after 12 - 36 h of TNF stimulation")

      These experiments were repeated, and new data were added to highlight differences in ASK1 and c-Jun phosphorylation between B6 and B6.Sst1S at individual timepoints after TNF stimulation (presented in new Fig.3K). It demonstrated that after TNF stimulation the activation of stress kinases ASK1 and c-Jun initially increased in both genetic backgrounds. However, their upregulation was maintained exclusively in the sst1-susceptible macrophages from 24 to 36 h of TNF stimulation, while in the resistant macrophages their upregulation was transient. Thus, during prolonged TNF stimulation, B6.Sst1S macrophages experience stress that cannot be resolved, as evidenced by this kinetic analysis. The quantification of the band intensity was added to Western blot images above individual lanes.

      Reviewer 2 pointed to missing isotype control antibodies in Fig.3 and Fig.4:

      - Figure 3J: the isotype control for the IFNAR antibody is missing

      - Figure 4E: It seems the isotype control itself has already an effect in the reduction of IFNb.

      - Fig. 4H: It seems that the Isotype control antibody had an effect to increase 4-HNE (compared to TNF stimulated only).

      We always include isotype control antibodies in our experiments because antibodies are known to modulate macrophage activation via binding to Fc receptor. To address the reviewer’s comments, we updated all panels that present the effects of IFNAR1 blockade with isotypematched non-specific control antibodies in the revised manuscript. Specifically, we included isotype control in Fig. 3M (previously Fig.3J), Fig.4I, Suppl.4E-G, Fig.6L-M), Suppl.Fig.7I (previously Suppl.Fig.6F).

      - Fig.4A - C: "IFNAR1 blockade, however, did not increase either the NRF2 and FTL protein levels, or the Fth, Ftl and Gpx1 mRNA levels above those treated with isotype control antibodies"

      Maybe not above the isotype but it is higher than the TNF alone stimulation at least for NRF2 at 8h and for Ftl at both time points. Why does the isotype already cause stimulation/induction of the cells? !These experiments need repetitions and quantification and statistics!

      To determine specific effects of IFNAR blockade we compared effects of non-specific isotype control and IFNAR1-specific antibodies. In our experiments, the isotype control antibody modestly increased of Nrf2 and Ftl protein levels and the Fth and Ftl mRNA levels, but their effects were similar to the effect of IFNAR-specific antibody. The non-IFN -specific effects of antibodies, although are of potential biological significance, are modest in our model and their analysis is beyond the scope of this study.

      - Fig.4H Was the AB added also at 12h post stimulation? Figure legend should be adjusted.

      The IFNAR1 blocking antibodies and isotype control antibodies were added at 2 h after TNF stimulation in Fig.4H and 4I, as described in the corresponding figure legend. The data demonstrating effects of IFNAR blockade after 12, 24,and 33h of TNF stimulation are presented in Suppl.Fig.4 E-G.

      - Figure 4I: How was the data measured here, i.e. what is depicted? The isotype control is missing. It seems a two-way ANOVA was used, yet it is stated differently. The figure legend should be revised, as Dunnett's multiple comparison would only check for significances compared to the control.

      The microscopy images and bar graphs were updated to include isotype control and presented in Suppl. Fig.4E - G of the revised version. We also revised the statistical analysis to include correction for multiple comparisons.

      - Figure 4C and subsequent: How exactly was the experiment done (house-keeping gene)?

      We included the details in the figure legends of revised version. We quantified the gene expression by DDCt method using b-actin (for Fig. 4C-E) and 18S (For Fig. 4F and G) as internal controls.

      - Figure 4D,E: Information on cells used is missing. Why the change in stimulation time? Did it not work after 12h? Then the experiments in A-C should be repeated for 16h.

      The updated Fig. 4D and E present comparison of B6 and B6.Sst1S BMDMs clearly demonstrating significant difference between these macrophages in Ifnb1 mRNA expression 16 h after TNF stimulation, in agreement with our previous publication(Bhattacharya, et al., 2021). There we studied the time course of responses of B6 and B6.Sst1S macrophages to TNF at 2h intervals and demonstrated the divergence between their activation trajectories starting at 12 h of TNF stimulation Therefore, to reveal the underlying mechanisms we focus our analyses on this critical timepoint, i.e. as close to the divergence as possible. However, the difference between the strains in Ifnb1 mRNA expression achieved significance only by 16h of TNF stimulation. That is why we have used this timepoint for the Ifnb1 and Rsad2 analyses. It clearly shows that the superinduction was not driven by the positive feedback via IFNAR, as has been shown by the Ivashkiv lab for B6 wild type macrophages previously PMID 21220349.

      - Figure 4E: It would be helpful to see if these transcripts are actually translated into protein levels, e.g. perform an ELISA. Authors state that IFNAR blockages does not alter the expression but you statistic says otherwise.

      - The data for Ifnb expression (or better protein level) should be provided for B6 BMDMs as well.

      We have previously reported the differences in Ifnb protein secretion (He et al., Plos Pathogens, 2013 and Bhattacharya et al., JCI 2021). We use mRNA quantification by qRT-PCR as a more sensitive and direct measurement of the sst1-mediated phenotype. The revised Fig.4D and E include responses of B6 in addition to the B6.Sst1S to demonstrate that the IFNAR blockade does not reduce the Ifnb1 mRNA levels in TNF-stimulated B6.Sst1S mutant to the B6 wild type levels. A slight reduction can be explained by a known positive feedback loop in the IFN-I pathway (see above). In this experiment we emphasized that the effect of the sst1 locus is substantially greater, as compared to the effect of the IFNAR blockade (Fig.4D), and updated the text accordingly.

      - Fig. 4F: To what does the fold induction refer to? If it is again to unstimulated cells, then why is the induction now so much higher than in (E) where it was only 50x (now to 100x).

      - Figure 4G: Again to what is the fold induction referring to? It seems your Fer-1 treatment only contains 2 data points. This needs to be fixed.

      Yes, the fold induction was calculated by normalizing mRNA levels to untreated control incubated for the same time. Regarding the variation in Ifnb1 mRNA levels - a two-fold variation is not unusual in these experiments that may result in the Ifnb1 mRNA superinduction ranging from 50 -200-fold at this timepoint (16h). The graph in Fig.4G was modified to make all datapoints more visible.

      - "These data suggest that type I IFN signaling does not initiate LPO in our model but maintains and amplifies it during prolonged TNF stimulation that, eventually, may lead to cell death". Data for a short term TNF stimulation are not shown, however, so it might impact also on the initiation of LPO.

      - The overall conclusion drawn from Fig. 3 and 4 is not really clear with regard that IFN does not initiate LPO. Where is that shown? Data on earlier stimulation time points should be added to make this clear.

      We demonstrated ROS production (new Suppl.Fig.3G) and the rate of LPO biosynthesis (new Suppl.Fig.4E-F) at 6 h post TNF stimulation, while the Ifnb1 superinduction occurs between 12-18 h post TNF stimulation. This temporal separation supports our conclusion that IFN-β superinduction does not initiate LPO. We clarified it in the text:

      “Thus, Ifnb1 super-induction and IFN-I pathway hyperactivity in B6.Sst1S macrophages follow the initial LPO production, and maintain and amplify it during prolonged TNF stimulation”. (Previously: These data suggest that type I IFN signaling does not initiate LPO in our model). We also edited the conclusion in this section to explain the hierarchy of the sst1-regulated AOD and IFN-I pathways better:

      “Taken together, the above experiments allowed us to reject the hypothesis that IFN-I hyperactivity caused the sst1-dependent AOD dysregulation. In contrast, they established that the hyperactivity of the IFN-I pathway in TNF-stimulated B6.Sst1S macrophages was itself driven by the initial dysregulation of AOD and iron-mediated lipid peroxidation. During prolonged TNF stimulation, however, the IFN-I pathway was upregulated, possibly via ROS/LPOdependent JNK activation, and acted as a potent amplifier of lipid peroxidation”.

      We believe that these additional data and explanation strengthen our conclusions drawn from Figures 3 and 4.

      - "A select set of mouse LTR-containing endogenous retroviruses (ERV's) (Jayewickreme et al, 2021), and non-retroviral LINE L1 elements were expressed at a basal level before and after TNF stimulation, but their levels in the B6.Sst1S BMDMs were similar to or lower than those seen in B6". This sentence should be revised as the differences between B6 and B6.Sst1S BMDMs seem small and are not there after 48h anymore. Are these mild changes really caused by the mutation or could they result from different housing conditions and/or slowly diverging genetically lines. How many mice were used for the analysis? Is there already heterogeneity between mice from the same line?

      We agree with the reviewer that the data presented in Suppl.Fig.4 (Suppl.Fig.5 in the revised version) indicated no increase in single- and double-stranded transposon RNAs in the B6.Sst1S macrophages. The purpose of these experiment was to test the hypothesis that increased transposon expression might be responsible for triggering the superinduction of type I interferon response in TNF-stimulated B6.Sst1S macrophages. In collaboration with a transposon expert Dr. Nelson Lau (co-author of this manuscript) we demonstrated that transposon expression was not increased above the B6 level and, thus, rejected this attractive hypothesis. We explained the purpose of this experiment in the text and adequately described our findings as “the levels in the B6.Sst1S BMDMs were similar to or lower than those seen in B6”…and concluded that ” the above analyses allowed us to exclude the overexpression of persistent viral or transposon RNAs as a primary mechanism of the IFN-I pathway hyperactivity” in the sst1-mutant macrophages.

      - Fig. 5A: Indeed, it even seems that Myc is upregulated for the mutant BMDMs. Yet, there are only 2 data points for B6 12h.

      These experiments need repetitions and quantification and statistics.

      We observed these differences in c-Myc mRNA levels by independent methods: RNAseq and qRT-PCR. The qRT-PCR experiments were repeated 3 times. A representative experiment in Fig.5A shows 3 data points for each condition. We reformatted the panel to make all data points clearly visible.

      - Fig. 5B: Why would the protein level decrease in the controls over 6h of additional cultivation? Is this caused by fresh M-CSF? In this case maybe cells should be left to settle for one day before stimulating them to properly compare c-Myc induction. Comment on two c-Myc bands is needed. At 12h only the upper one seems increased for TNF stimulated mutant BMDMs compared to B6 BMDMs.

      We agree with the reviewer’s point that cells need to be rested after media change that contains fresh CSF-1. Indeed, in Suppl.Fig.6C, we show that after media change containing 10% L929 supernatant (a source of CSF1) there is an increase in c-Myc protein levels that takes approximately 12 hours to return to baseline.

      Our protocol includes resting period of 18-24 h after medium change before TNF stimulation.

      We updated Methods to highlight this detail. Thus, the increase in c-Myc levels we observe at 12 h of TNF stimulation (Fig.5B) is induced by TNF, not the addition of growth factors, as further discussed in the text.

      The two c-Myc bands observed in Fig.5B,I and J, are similar to patterns reported in previous studies that used the same commercial antibodies (PMIDs: 24395249, 24137534, 25351955). Whether they correspond to different c-Myc isoforms or post-translational modifications is unknown.

      - Fig. 5A,B: It seems that not all the RNA is translated into protein, as c-Myc at 12h in the mutant BMDMs seems to be lower than at 6h, while the gene expression implicates it vice versa.

      In addition to Fig.5B, the time course of Myc protein expression up to 24 h is presented in new panels Fig. 5I-5J. It demonstrates the gradual decrease of Myc protein levels. The observed dissociation between the mRNA and protein levels in the sst1-mutant BMDMs at 12 and 24 h is most likely due to translation inhibition as a result of the development of the integrated stress response, ISR (as shown in our previous publication by Bhattacharya et al., JCI, 2021). Translation of Myc is known to be particularly sensitive to the ISR (PMID18551192, PMID25079319, PMID28490664). Perhaps, the IFN-driven ISR may serve as a backup mechanism for Myc downregulation. We are planning to investigate these regulatory mechanisms in greater detail in the future.

      - Fig. 5J: Indeed, the inhibitor seems to cause the downregulation of the proteins. Explanation?

      This experiment was repeated twice and the average normalized densitometry values are presented in the updated Fig.5J. The main question addressed in this experiment was whether hyperactivity of JNK in TNF-stimulated sst1 mutant macrophages contributed to Myc upregulation, as had been previously shown in cancer. Comparing effects of JNK inhibition on phospho-cJun and c-Myc protein levels in TNF stimulated B6.Sst1S macrophages (updated Fig.5J), we rejected the hypotghesis that JNK activity might have a major role in c-Myc upregulation in sst1 mutant macrophages.

      - "TNF stimulation tended to reduce the LPO accumulation in the B6 macrophages and to increase it in the B6.Sst1S ones" However, this is not apparent in Sup. Fig. 6B. Here it seems that there might be a significant increase.

      Suppl.Fig.6B (currently Suppl.Fig.7B) shows the 4-HNE accumulation at day 3 post infection. The data obtained after 5 days of Mtb infection are shown in Fig.6A. We clarified this in the text: “By day 5 post infection, TNF stimulation induced significant LPO accumulation only in the B6.Sst1S macrophages (Fig.6A)”.

      - Fig. 6B: Mtb and 4-HNE should be shown in two different channels in order to really assign each staining correctly.

      What time point is this? Are the mycobacteria cleared at MOI1, since it looks that there are fewer than that? How does this look like for the B6 BMDMs? Are there even less mycobacteria?

      We included B6 infection data to the updated Fig.6B and added Suppl.Fig.7C and 7D that address this reviewer’s comment. The data represent day 5 of Mtb infection as indicated in the updated Fig.6B and Suppl.Fig.7C and 7D legends. New Suppl.Fig.7D shows quantification of replicating Mtb using Mtb replication reporter stain expressing single strand DNA binding protein GFP fusion, as described in Methods. We observed fewer Mtb and a lower percentage of replicating Mtb in B6 macrophages, but we did not observe a complete Mtb elimination in either background.

      We used red fluorescence for both Mtb::mCherry and 4-HNE staining to clearly visualize the SSB-GFP puncta in replicating Mtb DNA. In the revised manuscript, we have included the relevant channels in Suppl. Fig.7C and D to demonstrate clearly distinct patterns of Mtb::mCherry and 4-HNE signals. We did not aim to quantify the 4-HNE signal intensity in this experiment. For the 4-HNE quantification we use Mtb that expressed no reporter proteins (Fig.6A-B and Suppl.Fig.7A-B).

      - Fig 6E: In the context of survival a viability staining needs to be included, as well as the data from day 0. Then it needs to be analyzed whether cell numbers remain the same from D0 or if there is a change.

      We updated Fig.6 legend to indicate that the cell number percentages were calculated based on the number of cells at Day 0 (immediately after Mtb infection). We routinely use fixable cell death staining to enumerate cell death to exclude artifacts due to cell loss. Brief protocol containing this information is included in Methods section. The detailed protocol including normalization using BCG spike has been published – Yabaji et al, STAR Protocols, 2022. Here we did not present dead cell percentage as it remained low and we did not observe damage to macrophage monolayers. The fold change of Mtb was calculated after normalization using Mtb load at Day 0 after infection and washes.

      "The 3D imaging demonstrated that YFP-positive cells were restricted to the lesions, but did not strictly co-localize with intracellular Mtb, i.e. the Ifnb promoter activity was triggered by inflammatory stimuli, but not by the direct recognition of intracellular bacteria. We validated the IFNb reporter findings using in situ hybridization with the Ifnb probe, as well as anti-GFP antibody staining (Suppl.Fig.8B - E)." The colocalization is not present within the tissue sections. It seems that the reporter line does not show the same staining pattern in vivo as the IFNß probe or the anti GFP antibody staining. The reporter line has to be tested for the specificity of the staining. Furthermore, to state that it was restricted to the lesions, an uninvolved tissue area needs to be depicted.

      The Ifnb secreting cells are notoriously difficult to detect in vivo using direct staining of the protein. Therefore, lineage tracing of reporter expression are used as surrogates. The Ifnb reporter used in our study has been developed by the Locksley laboratory (Scheu et al., PNAS, 2008, PMID: 19088190) and has been validated in many independent studies. The reporter mice express the YFP protein under the control of the Ifnb1 promoter. The YFP protein accumulates within the cells, while Ifnb protein is rapidly secreted and does not accumulate in the producing cells in appreciable amounts. Also, the kinetics of YFP protein degradation is much slower as compared to the endogenous Ifnb1 mRNA that was detected using in situ hybridization. Thus, there is no precise spatiotemporal coincidence of these readouts in Ifnb expressing cells in vivo. However, this methodology more closely reflect the Ifnb expressing cells in vivo, as compared to a Cre-lox mediated lineage tracing approach. In the revised manuscript we demonstrate that both YFP and mRNA signals partially overlap (Suppl.Fig.12B). In Suppl.Fig.12B. we also included a new panel showing no YFP expression in the uninvolved area of the reporter mice infected with Mtb. The YFP expression by activated macrophages is demonstrated by co-staining with Iba1- and iNOS-specific antibodies (new Fig.7D and Suppl.Fig.13A). Our specificity control also included TB lesions in mice that do not carry the YFP reporter and did not express the YFP signal, as reported elsewhere (Yabaji et al., BioRxiv, https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.10.17.562695).

      - Are paucibacillary and multibacillary lesions different within the same animal or does one animal have one lesion phenotype? If that is the case, what is causing the differences between mice? Bacterial counts for the mice are required.

      The heterogeneity of pulmonary TB lesions has been widely acknowledged in clinic and highlighted in recent experimental studies. In our model of chronic pulmonary TB (described in detail in Yabaji et al., https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.02.28.640830 and https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.10.17.562695) the development of pulmonary TB lesions is not synchronized, i.e. the lesions are heterogeneous between the animals and within individual animals at the same timepoint. Therefore, we performed a lesion stratification where individual lesions were classified by a certified veterinary pathologist in a blinded manner based on their morphology (H&E) and acid fast staining of the bacteria, as depicted in Suppl.Fig.8.

      - "Among the IFN-inducible genes upregulated in paucibacillary lesions were Ifi44l, a recently described negative regulator of IFN-I that enhances control of Mtb in human macrophages (DeDiego et al, 2019; Jiang et al, 2021) and Ciita, a regulator of MHC class II inducible by IFNy, but not IFN-I (Suppl.Table 8 and Suppl.Fig.10 D-E)." Why is Sup. Fig. 10 D, E referred to? The figure legend is also not clear, e.g. what means "upregulated in a subset of IFN-inducible genes"? Input for the hallmarks needs to be defined.

      These data is now presented in Suppl.Fig.11 and following the reviewer’s comment, we moved reference to panels 11D – E up to previous paragraph in the main text, where it naturally belongs . We also edited the figure legend to refer to the list of IFN-inducible genes compiled from the literature that is discussed in the text. We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion that helped us improve the text clarity. The inputs for the Hallmark pathway analysis are presented in Suppl.Tables 7 and 8, as described in the text.

      - Fig. 7C: Single channel pictures are required as it is hard to see the differences in staining with so many markers. Why is there no iNOS expression in the bottom row? What does the rectangle indicate on the bottom right? As black is chosen for DAPI, it is not visible at all. In case the signal is needed a visible a color should be chosen.

      We thoroughly revised this figure to address the reviewer’s concern about the lack of clarity. We provide individual channels for each marker in Fig.7D – E and Suppl.Fig.13F. We have to use DAPI in these presentation in gray scale to better visualize other markers.

      - "In the advanced lesions these markers were primarily expressed by activated macrophages (Iba1+) expressing iNOS and/or Ifny (YFP+)(Fig.7D)" Iba1 is needed in the quantification. Based on the images, iNOS seems to be highly produced in Iba1 negative cells. Which cells do produce it then? Flow cytometry data for this quantification are required. This would allow you to specifically check which cells express the markers and allow for a more precise analysis of double positive cells.

      Currently these data demonstrating the co-localization of stress markers phospho-c-Jun and Chac1 with YFP are presented in Fig.7E (images) and Suppl.Fig.13D (quantification). The co-localization of stress markers phospho-cJun and Chac1 with iNOS is presented in Suppl.Fig.13F (images) and Suppl.Fig.13E (quantification). We agree that some iNOS+ cells are Iba1-negative (Fig.7D). We manually quantified percentages of Iba1+iNOS+ double positive cells and demonstrated that they represent the majority of the iNOS+ population(Suppl.Fig.13A). Regarding the required FACS analysis, we focus on spatial approaches because of the heterogeneity of the lesions that would be lost if lungs are dissociated for FACS. We are working on spatial transcriptomics at a single cell resolution that preserves spatial organization of TB lesions to address the reviewer’s comment and will present our results in the future.

      - Results part 6: In general, can you please state for each experiment at what time point mice were analyzed? You should include an additional macrophage staining (e.g. MerTK, F4/80), as alveolar macrophages are not staining well for Iba1 and you might therefore miss them in your IF microscopy. It would be very nice if you could perform flow cytometry to really check on the macrophages during infection and distinguish subsets (e.g. alveolar macrophages, interstitial macrophages, monocytes).

      We have included the details of time post infection in figure legends for Fig.7, Suppl.Figures 8, 9, 12B, 13, 14A of the revised manuscript. We have performed staining with CD11b, CD206 and CD163 to differentiate the recruited and lung resident macrophages and determined that in chronic pulmonary TB lesions in our model the vast majority of macrophages are recruited CD11b+, but not resident (CD206+ and CD163+) macrophages. These data is presented in another manuscript (Yabaji et al., BioRxiv https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.10.17.562695).

      - Spatial sequencing: The manuscript would highly profit from more data on that. It would be very interesting to check for the DEGs and show differential spatial distribution. Expression of marker genes should be inferred to further define macrophage subsets (e.g. alveolar macrophages, interstitial macrophages, recruited macrophages) and see if these subsets behave differently within the same lesion but also between the lesions. Additional bioinformatic approaches might allow you to investigate cell-cell interactions. There is a lot of potential with such a dataset, especially from TB lesions, that would elevate your findings and prove interesting to the TB field.

      - "Thus, progression from the Mtb-controlling paucibacillary to non-controlling multibacillary TB lesions in the lungs of TB susceptible mice was mechanistically linked with a pathological state of macrophage activation characterized by escalating stress (as evidenced by the upregulation phospho-cJUN, PKR and Chac1), the upregulation of IFNβ and the IFN-I pathway hyperactivity, with a concurrent reduction of IFNγ responses." To really show the upregulation within macrophages and their activation, a more detailed IF microscopy with the inclusion of additional macrophage markers needs to be provided. Flow cytometry would enable analysis for the differences between alveolar and interstitial macrophages, as well as for monocytes. As however, it seems that the majority of iNOS, as well as the stress associated markers are not produced by Iba1+ cells. Analyzing granulocytes and T lymphocytes should be considered.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion. Indeed, our model provides an excellent opportunity to investigate macrophage heterogeneity and cell interactions within chronic TB lesions. We are working on spatial transcriptomics at a single cell resolution that would address the reviewer’s comment and will present our results in the future.

      In agreement with classical literature the overwhelming majority of myeloid cells in chronic pulmonary TB lesions is represented by macrophages. Neutrophils are detected at the necrotic stage, but our study is focused on pre-necrotic stages to reveal the earlier mechanisms predisposing to the necrotization. We never observed neutrophils or T cells expressing iNOS in our studies.

      - It's mentioned in the method section that controls in the IF staining were only fixed for 10min, while the infected cells were fixed for 30min. Consistency is important as the PFA fixation might impact on the fluorescence signal. Therefore, controls should be repeated with the same fixation time.

      We have carefully considered the impact of fixation time on fluorescence and have separately analyzed the non-infected and infected samples to address this concern. For the non-infected samples, we examined the effect of TNF in both B6 and B6.Sst1S backgrounds, ensuring that a consistent fixation protocol (10 min) was applied across all experiments without Mtb infection.

      For the Mtb infection experiments, we employed an optimized fixation protocol (30 min) to ensure that Mtb was killed before handling the plates, which is critical for preserving the integrity of the samples. In this context, we compared B6 and B6.Sst1S samples to evaluate the effects of fixation and Mtb infection on lipid peroxidation (LPO) induction.

      We believe this approach balances the need for experimental consistency with the specific requirements for handling infected cells, and we have revised the manuscript to reflect this clarification.

      - Reactive oxygen species levels should be determined in B6 and B6.Sst1S BMDMs (stimulated and unstimulated), as they are very important for oxidative stress.

      We have conducted experiments to measure ROS production in both B6 and B6.Sst1S BMDMs and demonstrated higher levels of ROS in the susceptible BMDMs after prolonged TNF stimulation (new Fig.3I-J and Suppl. Fig. 3G). Additionally, we have previously published a comparison of ROS production between B6 and B6.Sst1S by FACS (PMID: 33301427), which also supports the findings presented here.

      - Sup. Fig 2C: The inclusion of an unstimulated control would be advisable in order to evaluate if there are already difference in the beginning.

      We have included the untreated control to the Suppl. Fig. 2C (currently Suppl. Fig. 2D) in the revised manuscript.

      - Sup. Fig. 3F: Why is the fold change now lower than in Fig. 4D (fold change of around 28 compared to 120 in 4D)?

      The data in Fig.4D (Fig.4E in the revised manuscript) and Suppl.Fig.3F (currently Suppl.Fig.4C) represent separate experiments and this variation between experiments is commonly observed in qRT-PCR that is affected by slight variations in the expression in unsimulated controls used for the normalization and the kinetics of the response. This 2-4 fold difference between same treatments in separate experiments, as compared to 30 – 100 fold and higher induction by TNF does not affect the data interpretation.

      - Sup. Fig. 5C, D: The data seems very interesting as you even observe an increase in gene expression. Data for the B6 mice should be evaluated for increase to a similar level as the TNF treated mutants. Data on the viability of the cells are necessary, as they no longer receive MCSF and might be dying at this point already.

      To ensure that the observed effects were not confounded by cytotoxicity, we determined non-toxic concentrations of the CSF1R inhibitors during 48h of incubation and used them in our experiments that lasted for 24h. To address this valid comment, we have included cell viability data in the revised manuscript to confirm that the treatments did not result in cell death (Suppl. Fig. 6D). This experiment rejected our hypothesis that CSF1 driven Myc expression could be involved in the Ifnb superinduction. Other effects of CSF1R inhibitors on type I IFN pathway are intriguing but are beyond the scope of this study.

      - Sup. Fig 12: the phospho-c-Jun picture for (P) is not the same as in the merged one with Iba1. Double positive cells are mentioned to be analyzed, but from the staining it appears that P-c-Jun is expressed by other cells. You do not indicate how many replicates were counted and if the P and M lesions were evaluated within the same animal. What does the error bar indicate? It seems unlikely from the plots that the double positive cells are significant. Please provide the p values and statistical analysis.

      We thank the reviewer for bringing this inadvertent field replacement in the single phospho-cJun channel to our attention. However, the quantification of Iba1+phospho-cJun+ double positive cells in Suppl.Fig.12 and our conclusions were not affected. In the revised manuscript, images and quantification of phospho-cJun and Iba1 co-expression are shown in new Suppl.Fig.13B and C, respectively. We have also updated the figure legends to denote the number of lesions analyzed and statistical tests. Specifically, lesions from 6–8 mice per group (paucibacillary and multibacillary) were evaluated. Each dot in panels Suppl.Fig.13 represent individual lesions.

      - Sup. Fig. 13D (suppl.Fig.15D now): What about the expression of MYC itself? Other parts of the signaling pathway should be analyzed(e.g. IFNb, JNK)?

      The difference in MYC mRNA expression tended to be higher in TB patients with poor outcomes, but it was not statistically significant after correction for multiple testing. The upregulation of Myc pathway in the blood transcriptome associated with TB treatment failure most likely reflects greater proportion of immature cells in peripheral blood, possibly due to increased myelopoiesis. Pathway analysis of the differentially expressed genes revealed that treatment failures were associated with the following pathways relevant to this study: NF-kB Signaling, Flt3 Signaling in Hematopoietic Progenitor Cells (indicative of common myeloid progenitor cell proliferation), SAPK/JNK Signaling and Senescence (possibly indicative of oxidative stress). The upregulation of these pathways in human patients with poor TB treatment outcomes correlates with our findings in TB susceptible mice.

      - In the mfIHC you he usage of anti-mouse antibodies is mentioned. Pictures of sections incubated with the secondary antibody alone are required to exclude the possibility that the staining is not specific. Especially, as this data is essential to the manuscript and mouse-antimouse antibodies are notorious for background noise.

      We are well aware of the technical difficulties associated with using mouse on mouse staining. In those cases, we use rabbit anti-mouse isotype specific antibodies specifically developed to avoid non-specific background (Abcam cat#ab133469). Each antibody panel for fluorescent multiplexed IHC is carefully optimized prior to studies. We did not use any primary mouse antibodies in the final version of the manuscript and, hence, removed this mention from the Methods.

      - In order to tie the story together, it would be interesting to treat infected mice with an INFAR antibody, as well as perform this experiment with a Myc antibody. According to your data, you might expect the survival of the mice to be increased or bacterial loads to be affected.

      In collaboration with the Vance laboratory, we tested effects of type I IFN pathway inhibition in B6.Sst1S mice on TB susceptibility: either type I receptor knockout or blocking antibodies increased their resistance to virulent Mtb (published in Ji et al., 2019; PMID 31611644). Unfortunately, blocking Myc using neutralizing antibodies in vivo is not currently achievable. Specifically blocking Myc using small molecule inhibitors in vivo is notoriously difficult, as recognized in oncology literature. We consider using small molecule inhibitors of either Myc translation or specific pathways downstream of Myc in the future.

      - It is surprising that you not even once cite or mention your previous study on bioRxiv considering the similarity of the results and topic (https://doi.org/10.1101/2020.12.14.422743). Is not even your Figure 1I and Figure 2 J, K the same as in that study depicted in Figure 4?

      The reviewer refers to the first version of this manuscript uploaded to BioRxiv, but it has never been published. We continued this work and greatly expanded our original observations, as presented in the current manuscript. Therefore, we do not consider the previous version as an independent manuscript and, therefore, do not cite it.

      - Please revise spelling of the manuscript and pay attention to write gene names in italics

      Thank you, we corrected the gene and protein names according to current nomenclature.

      Minor points:

      - Fig. 1: Please provide some DEGs that explain why you used this resolution for the clustering of the scRNAseq data and that these clusters are truly distinct from each other.

      Differential gene expression in clusters is presented in Suppl.Fig.1C (interferon response) and Suppl.Fig.1D (stress markers and interferon response previously established in our studies).

      - Fig. 1F: What do the two lines represent (magenta, green)?

      The lines indicate pseudotime trajectories of B6 (magenta) and B6.Sst1S (green) BMDMs.

      - Fig. 1F, G: Why was cluster 6 excluded?

      This cluster was not different between B6 and B6.Sst1S, so it was not useful for drawing the strain-specific trajectories.

      - Fig. 1E, G, H: The intensity scales are missing. They are vital to understand the data.

      We have included the scale in revised manuscript (Fig.1E,G,H and Suppl.Fig.1C-D).

      - Fig. 2G-I: please revise order, as you first refer to Fig. 2H and I

      We revised the panels’ order accordingly

      - Fig. 5: You say the data represents three samples but at least in D and E you have more. Please revise. Why do you only include at (G) the inhibitor only control?

      We added the inhibitor only controls to Fig. 5D - H. We also indicated the number of replicates in the updated Fig.5 legend.

      - Figure 7A, Sup. Fig. 8: Are these maximum intensity projection? Or is one z-level from the 3D stack depicted?

      The Fig. 7A shows 3D images with all the stacks combined.

      - Fig. 7B: What do the white boxes indicate?

      We have removed this panel in the revised version and replaced it with better images.

      - Sup. Fig. 1A: The legend for the staining is missing

      The Suppl. Fig.1A shows the relative proportions of either naïve (R and S) or TNFstimulated (RT and ST) B6 or B6.Sst1S macrophages within individual single cell clusters depicted in Fig.1B. The color code is shown next to the graph on the right.

      - Sup. Fig. 1B: The feature plots are not clear: The legend for the expression levels is missing. What does the heading means?

      We updated the headings, as in Fig.1C. The dots represent individual cells expressing Sp110 mRNA (upper panels) and Sp140 mRNA (lower panels).

      - Sup. Fig. 3C: The scale bar is barely visible.

      We resized the scale bar to make it visible and presented in Suppl. Fig.3E (previously Suppl. Fig.3C).

      - Sup. Fig. 3D: There is not figure legend or the legend to C-E is wrong.

      - Sup. Fig. 3F, G: You do not state to what the data is relative to.

      We identified an error in the Suppl.Fig.3 legend referring to specific panels. The Suppl.Fig.3 legend has been updated accordingly. New panels were added and Suppl.Fig.3-G panels are now Suppl.Fig.4C-D.

      - Sup. Fig. 3H: It seems you used a two-way ANOVA, yet state it differently. Please revise the figure legend, as Dunnett's multiple comparison would only check for significances compared to the control.

      Following the reviewer’s comment, we repeated statistical analysis to include correction for multiple comparisons and revised the figure and legend accordingly.

      - Sup. Fig. 4A, B: It is not clear what the lines depict as the legend is not explained. Names that are not required should be changed to make it clear what is depicted (e.g. "TE@" what does this refer to?)

      This previous Sup. Fig 4 is now Sup. Fig. 5. The “TE@” is a leftover label from the bioinformatics pipeline, referring to “Transposable Element”. We apologize for this confusion and have removed these extraneous labels. We have also added transposon names of the LTR (MMLV30 and RTLV4) and L1Md to Suppl.Fig.5A and 5B legend, respectively.

      - Sup. 4B: What does the y-scale on the right refer to?

      We apologize for the missing label for the y-scale on the right which represents the mRNA expression level for the SetDB1 gene, which has a much lower steady state level than the LINE L1Md, so we plotted two Y-scales to allow both the gene and transposon to be visualized on this graph.

      - Sup. 4C: Interpretation of the data is highly hindered by the fact that the scales differ between the B6 and B6.Sst1. The scales are barely visible.

      We apologize for the missing labels for the y-scales of these coverage plots, which were originally meant to just show a qualitative picture of the small RNA sequencing that was already quantitated by the total amounts in Sup. 4B. We have added thee auto-scaled Y-scales to Sup. 4C and improved the presentation of this figure.

      - Sup. Fig. 5A, B: Is the legend correct? Did you add the antibody for 2 days or is the quantification from day 3?

      We recognize that the reviewer refers to Suppl.Fig.6A-B (Suppl.Fig.7A-B in the revised manuscript). We did not add antibodies to live cells. The figure legend describes staining with 4HNE-specific antibodies 3 days post Mtb infection.

      - Sup. Fig. 8A: Are the "early" and "intermediate" lesions from the same time points? What are the definitions for these stages?

      We discussed our lesion classification according to histopathology and bacterial loads above. Of note, in the revised manuscript we simplified our classification to denote paucibacillary and multibacillary lesions only. We agree with reviewers that designation lesions as early, intermediate and advanced lesions were based on our assumptions regarding the time course of their progression from low to high bacterial loads.

      - Sup. Fig. 8E: You should state that the bottom picture is an enlargement of an area in the top one. Scale bars are missing.

      We replaced this panel with clearer images in Suppl.Fig.12B.

      - Sup. Fig. 11A: The IF staining is only visible for Iba and iNOS. Please provide single channels in order to make the other staining visible.

      Suppl.Fig.11A (now Suppl.Fig.13B) shows the low-magnification images of TB lesions. In the Fig. 7 and Suppl. Fig. 13F of the revised manuscript we provided images for individual markers.

      - Sup. Fig. 13A (Suppl.Fig.15A now): Your axis label is not clear. What do the numbers behind the genes indicate? Why did you choose oncogene signatures and not inflammatory markers to check for a correlation with disease outcome?

      X axis of Suppl.Fig.15A represent pre-defined molecular signature gene sets MSigDB) in Gene Set Enrichment Analysis (GSEA) database (https://www.gseamsigdb.org/gsea/msigdb). On Y axis is area under curve (AUC) score for each gene set.

      - Sup. 13D(Suppl.Fig.15D now): Maybe you could reorder the patients, so that the impression is clearer, as right now only the top genes seem to show a diverging gene signature, while the rest gives the impression of an equal distribution.

      The Myc upregulated gene set myc_up was identified among top gene sets associated with treatment failure using unbiased ssGSEA algorithm. We agree with the reviewer that not every gene in the myc_up gene set correlates with the treatment outcome. But the association of the gene set is statistically significant, as presented in Suppl.Fig.15B – C.

      - The scale bars for many microscopy pictures are missing.

      We have included clearly visible scale bars to all the microscopy images in the revised version.

      - The black bar plots should be changed (e.g. in color), since the single data points cannot be seen otherwise.

      - It would be advisable that a consistent color scheme would be used throughout the manuscript to make it easier to identify similar conditions, as otherwise many different colours are not required and lead right now rather to confusion (e.g. sometimes a black bar refers to BMDMs with and sometimes without TNF stimulation, or B6 BMDMs). Furthermore, plot sizes and fonts should be consistent within the manuscript (including the supplemental data)

      We followed this useful suggestion and selected consistent color codes for B6 and B6.Sst1S groups to enhance clarity throughout the revised manuscript.

      Within the methods section:

      - At which concentration did you use the IFNAR antibody and the isotype?

      We updated method section by including respective concentrations in the revised manuscript.

      - Were mice maintained under SPF conditions? At what age where they used?

      Yes, the mice are specific pathogen free. We used 10 - 14 week old mice for Mtb infection.

      - The BMDM cultivation is not clear. According to your cited paper you use LCCM but can you provide how much M-CSF it contains? How do you make sure that amounts are the same between experiments and do not vary? You do not mention how you actually obtain this conditioned medium. Is there the possibility of contamination or transferred fibroblasts that would impact on the data analysis? Is LCCM also added during stimulation and inhibitor treatment?

      We obtain LCCM by collecting the supernatant from L929 cell line that form confluent monolayer according to well-established protocols for LCCM collection. The supernatants are filtered through 0.22 micron filters to exclude contamination with L929 cells and bacteria. The medium is prepared in 500 ml batches that are sufficient for multiples experiments. Each batch of L929-conditioned medium is tested for biological activity using serial dilutions.

      - How was the BCG infection performed? How much bacteria did you use? Which BCG strain was used?

      We infected mice with M. bovis BCG Pasteur subcutaneously in the hock using 10<sup>6</sup> CFU per mouse.

      - At what density did you seed the BMDMs for stimulation and inhibitor experiments?

      In 96 well plates, we seed 12,000 cells per well and allow the cells to grow for 4 days to reach confluency (approximately 50,000 cells per well). For a 6-well plate, we seed 2.5 × 10<sup>5</sup> cells per well and culture them for 4 days to reach confluency. For a 24-well plate, we seed 50,000 cells per well and keep the cells in media for 4 days before starting any treatments. This ensures that the cells are in a proliferative or near-confluent state before beginning the stimulation or inhibitor treatments. Our detailed protocol is published in STAR Protocols (Yabaji et al., 2022; PMID 35310069).

      - What machine did you use to perform the bulk RNA sequencing? How many replicates did you include for the sequencing?

      For bulk sequencing we used 3 RNA samples for each condition. The samples were sequenced at Boston University Microarray & Sequencing Resource service using Illumina NextSeq<sup>TM</sup> 2000 instrument.

      - How many replicates were used for the scRNA sequencing? Why is your threshold for the exclusion of mitochondrial DNA so high? A typical threshold of less than 5% has been reported to work well with mouse tissue.

      We used one sample per condition. For the mitochondrial cutoff, we usually base it off of the total distribution. There is no "universal" threshold that can be applied to all datasets. Thresholds must be determined empirically.

      - You do not mention how many PCAs were considered for the scRNA sequencing analysis.

      We considered 50 PCAs, this information was added to Methods

      - You should name all the package versions you used for the scRNA sequencing (e.g. for the slingshot, VAM package)

      The following package versions were used: Seurat v4.0.4, VAM v1.0.0, Slingshot v2.3.0, SingleCellTK v2.4.1, Celda v1.10.0, we added this information to Methods.

      - You mention two batches for the human samples. Can you specify what the two batches are?

      Human blood samples were collected at five sites, as described in the updated Methods section and two RNAseq batches were processed separately that required batch correction.

      - At which temperature was the IF staining performed?

      We performed the IF at 4oC. We included the details in revised version.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance):

      Overall, the manuscript has interesting findings with regard to macrophage responses in Mycobacteria tuberculosis infection.

      However, in its current form there are several shortcomings, both with respect to the precision of the experiments and conclusions drawn.

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      Summary

      The authors use a mouse model designed to be more susceptible to M.tb (addition of sst1 locus) which has granulomatous lesions more similar to human granulomas, making this mouse highly relevant for M.tb pathogenesis studies. Using WT B6 macrophages or sst1B6 macrophages, the authors seek to understand the how the sst1 locus affects macrophage response to prolonged TNFa exposure, which can occur during a pro-inflammatory response in the lungs. Using single cell RNA-seq, revealed clusters of mutant macrophages with upregulated genes associated with oxidative stress responses and IFN-I signaling pathways when treated with TNF compared to WT macs. The authors go on to show that mutant macrophages have decreased NRF2, decreased antioxidant defense genes and less Sp110 and Sp140. Mutant macrophages are also more susceptible to lipid peroxidation and ironmediated oxidative stress. The IFN-I pathway hyperactivity is caused by the dysregulation of iron storage and antioxidant defense. These mutant macrophages are more susceptible to M.tb infection, showing they are less able to control bacterial growth even in the presence of T cells from BCG vaccinated mice. The transcription factor Myc is more highly expressed in mutant macs during TNF treatment and inhibition Myc led to better control of M.tb growth. Myc is also more abundant in PBMCs from M.tb infected humans with poor outcomes, suggesting that Myc should be further investigated as a target for host-directed therapies for tuberculosis.

      Major Comments

      Isotypes for IF imaging and confocal IF imaging are not listed, or not performed. It is a concern that the microscopy images throughout the manuscript do not have isotype controls for the primary antibodies.

      Fig 4 (and later) the anti-IFNAR Ab is used along with the Isotype antibody, Fig 4I does not show the isotype. Use of the isotype antibody is also missing in later figures as well as Fig 3J. Why was this left off as the proper control for the Ab?

      We addressed the comment in revised manuscript as described above in summary and responses to reviewers 1 and 2. Isotype controls for IFNAR1 blockade were included in Fig.3M (previously 3J), Fig. 4I, Suppl.Fig.4G (previously Fig.4I), and updated Fig.4C-E, Fig.6L-M, Suppl.Fig.4F-G, 7I.

      Conclusions drawn by the authors from some of the WB data are worded strongly, yet by eye the blots don't look as dramatically different as suggested. It would be very helpful to quantify the density of bands when making conclusions. (for example, Fig 4A).

      We added the densitometry of Western blot values after normalization above each lane in Fig.2A-C, Fig.3C-D and 3K; Fig.4A-B, Fig.5B,C,I,J.

      Fig 5A is not described clearly. If the gene expression is normalized to untreated B6 macs, then the level of untreated B6 macs should be 1. In the graph the blue bars are slightly below 1, which would not suggest that levels "initially increased and subsequently downregulated" as stated in the text. It seems like the text describes the protein expression but not the RNA expression. Please check this section and more clearly describe the results.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comment and modified the text to specify the mRNA and protein expression data, as follows:

      “We observed that Myc was regulated in an sst1-dependent manner: in TNF-stimulated B6 wild type BMDMs, c-Myc mRNA was downregulated, while in the susceptible macrophages c-Myc mRNA was upregulated (Fig.5A). The c-Myc protein levels were also higher in the B6.Sst1S cells in unstimulated BMDMs and 6 – 12 h of TNF stimulation (Fig.5B)”.

      Also, why look at RNA through 24h but protein only through 12h? If c-myc transcripts continue to increase through 24h, it would be interesting to see if protein levels also increase at this later time point.

      The time-course of Myc expression up to 24 h is presented in new panels Fig. 5I-5J It demonstrates the decrease of Myc protein levels at 24 h. In the wild type B6 BMDMs the levels of Myc protein significantly decreased in parallel with the mRNA suppression presented in Fig.5A. In contrast , we observed the dissociation of the mRNA and protein levels in the _sst1_mutant BMDMs at 12 and 24 h, most likely, because the mutant macrophages develop integrated stress response (as shown in our previous publication by Bhattacharya et al., JCI, 2021) that is known to inhibit Myc mRNA translation.

      Fig 5J the bands look smaller after D-JNK1 treatment at 6 and 12h though in the text is says no change. Quantifying the bands here would be helpful to see if there really is no difference.

      This experiment was repeated twice, and the average normalized densitometry values are presented in the updated Fig.5J. The main question addressed in this experiment was whether the hyperactivity of JNK in TNF-stimulated sst1 mutant macrophages contributed to Myc upregulation, as was previously shown in cancer. Comparing effects of JNK inhibition on phospho-cJun and c-Myc protein levels in TNF stimulated B6.Sst1S macrophages (updated Fig.5J), we concluded that JNK did not have a major role in c-Myc upregulation in this context.

      Section 4, third paragraph, the conclusion that JNK activation in mutant macs drives pathways downstream of Myc are not supported here. Are there data or other literature from the lab that supports this claim?

      This statement was based on evidence from available literature where JNK was shown to activate oncogens, including Myc. In addition, inhibition of Myc in our model upregulated ferritin (Fig.Fig.5C), reduced the labile iron pool, prevented the LPO accumulation (Fig.5D - G) and inhibited stress markers (Fig.5H). However, we do not have direct experimental evidence in our model that Myc inhibition reduces ASK1 and JNK activities. Hence, we removed this statement from the text and plan to investigate this in the future.

      Fig 6N Please provide further rationale for the BCG in vivo experiment. It is unclear what the hypothesis was for this experiment.

      In the current version BCG vaccination data is presented in Suppl.Fig.14B. We demonstrate that stressed BMDMs do not respond to activation by BCG-specific T cells (Fig.6J) and their unresponsiveness is mediated by type I interferon (Fig.6L and 6M). The observed accumulation of the stressed macrophages in pulmonary TB lesions of the sst1-susceptible mice (Fig.7E, Suppl.Fig.13 and 14A) and the upregulation of type I interferon pathway (Fig.1E,1G, 7C), Suppl.Fig.1C and 11) suggested that the effect of further boosting T lymphocytes using BCG in Mtb-infected mice will be neutralized due to the macrophage unresponsiveness. This experiment provides a novel insight explaining why BCG vaccine may not be efficient against pulmonary TB in susceptible hosts.

      The in vitro work is all concerning treatment with TNFa and how this exposure modifies the responses in B6 vs sst1B6 macrophages; however, this is not explored in the in vivo studies. Are there differences in TNFa levels in the pauci- vs multi-bacillary lesions that lead to (or correlate with) the accumulation of peroxidation products in the intralesional macrophages. How to the experiments with TNFa in vitro relate back to how the macrophages are responding in vivo during infection?

      Our investigation of mechanisms of necrosis of TB granulomas stems from and supported by in vivo studies as summarized below.

      This work started with the characterization necrotic TB granulomas in C3HeB/FeJ mice in vivo followed by a classical forward genetic analysis of susceptibility to virulent Mtb in vivo.

      That led to the discovery of the sst1 locus and demonstration that it plays a dominant role in the formation of necrotic TB granulomas in mouse lungs in vivo. Using genetic and immunological approaches we demonstrated that the sst1 susceptibility allele controls macrophage function in vivo (Yan, et al., J.Immunol. 2007) and an aberrant macrophage activation by TNF and increased production of Ifn-b in vitro (He et al. Plos Pathogens, 2013). In collaboration with the Vance lab we demonstrated that the type I IFN receptor inactivation reduced the susceptibility to intracellular bacteria of the sst1-susceptible mice in vivo (Ji et al., Nature Microbiology, 2019). Next, we demonstrated that the Ifnb1 mRNA superinduction results from combined effects of TNF and JNK leading to integrated stress response in vitro (Bhattacharya, JCI, 2021). Thus, our previous work started with extensive characterization of the in vivo phenotype that led to the identification of the underlying macrophage deficiency that allowed for the detailed characterization of the macrophage phenotype in vitro presented in this manuscript. In a separate study, the Sher lab confirmed our conclusions and their in vivo relevance using Bach1 knockout in the sst1-susceptible B6.Sst1S background, where boosting antioxidant defense by Bach1 inactivation resulted in decreased type I interferon pathway activity and reduced granuloma necrosis. We have chosen TNF stimulation for our in vitro studies because this cytokine is most relevant for the formation and maintenance of the integrity of TB granulomas in vivo as shown in mice, non-human primates and humans. Here we demonstrate that although TNF is necessary for host resistance to virulent Mtb, its activity is insufficient for full protection of the susceptible hosts, because of altered macrophages responsiveness to TNF. Thus, our exploration of the necrosis of TB granulomas encompass both in vitro and extensive in vivo studies.

      Minor comments

      Introduction, while well written, is longer than necessary. Consider shortening this section. Throughout figures, many graphs show a fold induction/accumulation/etc, but it is rarely specified what the internal control is for each graph. This needs to be added.

      Paragraph one, authors use the phrase "the entire IFN pathway was dramatically upregulated..." seems to be an exaggeration. How do you know the "entire" IFN pathway was upregulated in a dramatic fashion?

      (1) We shortened the introduction and discussion; (2) verified that figure legends internal controls that were used to calculate fold induction; (3) removed the word “entire” to avoid overinterpretation.

      Figures 1E, G and H and supp fig 1C, the heat maps are missing an expression key Section 2 second paragraph refers to figs 2D, E as cytoplasmic in the text, but figure legend and y-axis of 2E show total protein.

      The expression keys were added to Fig.1E,G,H, Fig.7C, Suppl.Fig.1C and 1D and Suppl.Fig.11A of the revised manuscript.

      Section 3 end of paragraph 1 refers to Fig 3h. Does this also refer to Supp Fig 3E?

      Yes, Fig.3H shows microscopy of 4-HNE and Suppl.Fig.3H shows quantification of the image analysis. In the revised manuscript these data are presented in Fig.3H and Suppl.Fig.3F. The text was modified to reflect this change.

      Supplemental Fig 3 legend for C-E seems to incorrectly also reference F and G.

      We corrected this error in the figure legend. New panels were added to Suppl.Fig.3 and previous Suppl.Fig.3F and G were moved to Suppl.Fig.4 panels C and D of the revise version.

      Fig 3K, the p-cJun was inhibited with the JNK inhibitor, however it’s unclear why this was done or the conclusion drawn from this experiment. Use of the JNK inhibitor is not discussed in the text.

      The JNK inhibitor was used to confirm that c-Jun phosphorylation in our studies is mediated by JNK and to compare effects of JNK inhibition on phospho-cJun and Myc expression. This experiment demonstrated that the JNK inhibitor effectively inhibited c-Jun phosphorylation but not Myc upregulation, as shown in Fig.5I-J of the revised manuscript.

      Fig 4 I and Supp Fig 3 H seem to have been swapped? The graph in Fig 4I matches the images in Supp Fig 3I. Please check.

      We reorganized the panels to provide microscopy images and corresponding quantification together in the revised the panels Fig. 4H and Fig. 4I, as well as in Suppl. Fig. 4F and Suppl. Fig. 4G.

      Fig 6, it is unclear what % cell number means. Also for bacterial growth, the data are fold change compared to what internal control?

      We updated Fig.6 legend to indicate that the cell number percentages were calculated based on the number of cells at Day 0 (immediately after Mtb infection). We routinely use fixable cell death staining to enumerate cell death. Brief protocol containing this information is included in Methods section. The detailed protocol including normalization using BCG spike has been published – Yabaji et al, STAR Protocols, 2022. Here we did not present dead cell percentage as it remained low and we did not observe damage to macrophage monolayers. This allows us to exclude artifacts due to cell loss. The fold change of Mtb was calculated after normalization using Mtb load at Day 0 after infection and washes.

      Fig 7B needs an expression key

      The expression keys was added to Fig.7C (previously Fig. 7B).

      Supp Fig 7 and Supp Fig 8A, what do the arrows indicate?

      In Suppl.Fig.8 (previously Suppl.Fig.7) the arrows indicate acid fast bacilli (Mtb). In figures Fig.7A and Suppl.Fig.9A arrows indicate Mtb expressing fluorescent reporter mCherry. Corresponding figure legends were updated in the revised version.

      Supp Fig 9A, two ROI appear to be outlined in white, not just 1 as the legend says Methods:

      We updated the figure legend.

      Certain items are listed in the Reagents section that are not used in the manuscript, such as necrostatin-1 or Z-VAD-FMK. Please carefully check the methods to ensure extra items or missing items does not occur.

      These experiments were performed, but not included in the final manuscript. Hence, we removed the “necrostatin-1 or Z-VAD-FMK” from the reagents section in methods of revised version.

      Western blot, method of visualizing/imaging bands is not provided, method of quantifying density is not provided, though this was done for fig 5C and should be performed for the other WBs.

      We used GE ImageQuant LAS4000 Multi-Mode Imager to acquire the Western blot images and the densitometric analyses were performed by area quantification using ImageJ. We included this information in the method section. We added the densitometry of Western blot values after normalization above each lane in Fig.2A-C, Fig.3C-D and 3K; Fig.4A-B, Fig.5B,C,I,J.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance):

      The work of Yabaji et al is of high significance to the field of macrophage biology and M.tb pathogenesis in macrophages. This work builds from previously published work (Bhattacharya 2021) in which the authors first identified the aberrant response induced by TNF in sst1 mutant macrophages. Better understanding how macrophages with the sst1 locus respond not only to bacterial infection but stimulation with relevant ligands such as TNF will aid the field in identifying biomarkers for TB, biomarkers that can suggest a poor outcome vs. "cure" in response to antibiotic treatment or design of host-directed therapies.

      This work will be of interest to those who study macrophage biology and who study M.tb pathogenesis and tuberculosis in particular. This study expands the knowledge already gained on the sst1 locus to further determine how early macrophage responses are shaped that can ultimately determine disease progression.

      Strengths of the study include the methodologies, employing both bulk and single cell-RNA seq to answer specific questions. Data are analyze using automated methods (such as HALO) to eliminated bias. The experiments are well planned and designed to determine the mechanisms behind the increased iron-related oxidative stress found in the mutant macrophages following TNF treatment. Also, in vivo studies were performed to validate some of the in vitro work. Examining pauci-bacillary lesions vs multi-bacillary lesions and spatial transcriptomics is a significant strength of this work. The inclusion of human data is another strength of the study, showing increased Myc in humans with poor response to antibiotics for TB.

      Limitations include the fact that the work is all done with BMDMs. Use of alveolar macrophages from the mice would be a more relevant cell type for M.tb studies. AMs are less inflammatory, therefore treatment with TNF of AMs could result in different results compared to BMDMs. Reviewer's field of expertise: macrophage activation, M.tb pathogenesis in human and mouse models, cell signaling.

      Limitations: not qualified to evaluate single cell or bulk RNA-seq technical analysis/methodology or spatial transcriptomics analysis.

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    1. where n = 3, 4, 5, 6. As a result, these lines are known as the Balmer series. The Swedish physicist Johannes Rydberg (1854–1919) subsequently restated and expanded Balmer’s result in the Rydberg equation: 1λ=RH(1n2l−1n2h)(2.1.2.2)(2.1.2.2)1λ=RH(1nl2−1nh2) \dfrac{1}{\lambda }=R_H\; \left ( \dfrac{1}{n_l^{2}}-\dfrac{1}{n_h^{2}} \right ) \label{6.3.2} ,

      In this equation use ni for nh, and nf for nl

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Schmid & colleagues test an interesting hypothesis that V1 neurons might act as theta-tuned filters to incoming sensory information, and thereby influence downstream processing and detection performance.

      Strengths:

      The authors report that circular stimuli elicit theta oscillations in V1 single units and population activity. They also report that the phase of the theta oscillations influences performance in a change detection task.

      Weaknesses:

      The results are reported in terms of specific stimulus sizes. To truly reflect general-purpose spatial computations in the primary visual cortex, it will be important to establish a relationship between stimulus size and receptive field size.

      I have several major concerns that I would like the authors to address:

      (1) First paragraph of Results: The results are presented at very specific stimulus sizes: 0.3-degree, 1-degree, 4-degree, and so on. A key missing piece of information is the size of the receptive fields (RFs) that were recorded from. A related missing information is at what eccentricity these RFs were recorded from. Since there is nothing magical about a 1-degree stimulus, any general-purpose computation in the primary visual cortex has to establish a relationship between RF size and stimulus size.

      (2) Second paragraph of Results: The authors state that "specific stimulus sizes consistently induced strong theta rhythmic activity: 1{degree sign} in MUA and 2{degree sign} in LFP". What is the interpretation of these specific sizes? Given that the LFP and MUAe reflect different aspects of neural activity, how does one interpret the discrepancy?

      (3) Third paragraph of Results: Again related to (1), what is the relationship between the stimulus size that elicited the largest theta peaks and RF size at the population level? (1)-(3) taken together, there seems to be an opportunity to reveal something more fundamental about V1 processing that the authors might have missed here.

      (4) Change detection task: It was not clear to me whether the timing of the luminance change, which varied from 500ms to 1500ms, was drawn from an exponential distribution or a uniform distribution. Only an exponential distribution has the property of a flat hazard function, which will be important to establish that the animal could not anticipate the timing of the upcoming change.

      (5) Figure 3D: Have the authors tried to fit the data separately for each animal? There seems to be an inconsistency in the results between the 2 animals. The circular data points ('AL') seem positively correlated, similar to the overall trend, but the diamond data points ('DP') seem to have a negative slope.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript describes the role of the production of c-di-AMP on the chlamydial developmental cycle. The main findings remain the same. The authors show that overexpression of the dacA-ybbR operon results in increased production of c-di-AMP and early expression of transitionary and late genes. The authors also knocked down the expression of the dacA-ybbR operon and reported a modest reduction in the expression of both hctA and omcB. The authors conclude with a model suggesting the amount of c-di-AMP determines the fate of the RB, continued replication, or EB conversion.

      Overall, this is a very intriguing study with important implications however the data is very preliminary and the model is very rudimentary. The data support the observation that dramatically increased c-di-AMP has an impact on transitionary gene expression and late gene expression suggesting dysregulation of the developmental cycle. This effect goes away with modest changes in c-di-AMP (detaTM-DacA vs detaTM-DacA (D164N)). However, the model predicts that low levels of c-di-AMP delays EB production is not not well supported by the data. If this prediction were true then the growth rate would increase with c-di-AMP reduction and the data does not show this. The levels of of c-di-AMP at the lower levels need to be better validated as it seems like only very high levels make a difference for dysregulated late gene expression. However, on the low end it's not clear what levels are needed to have an effect as only DacAopMut and DacAopKD show any effects on the cycle and the c-di-AMP levels are only different at 24 hours.

      The data still do not support the overall model.

      In Figure 1 the authors show at 24 hpi.

      DacA overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml

      DacAmut overexpression reduces cdiAMP dramatically to ~256 pg/ml)

      DacATM overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml.

      DacAmutTM overexpression does not seem to change cdiAMP ~1500 pg/ml .

      dacAKD decreases cdiAMP to ~300 pg/ml .

      dacAKDcom increased cdiAMP to ~8000 pg/ml.

      DacA-ybbRop overexpression increased cdiAMP to ~500,000 pg/ml.

      DacA-ybbRopmut ~300 pg/ml.

      However in Figure 2 the data show that overexpression of DacA (cdiAMP ~4000 pg/ml) did not have a different phenotype than over expression of the mutant (cdiAMP ~256 pg/ml). HctA expression down, omcB expression down, euo not much change, replication down, and IFUs down. Additionally, Figure 3 shows no differences in anything measured although cdiAMP levels were again dramatically different. DacATM overexpression (~4000 pg/ml) and DacAmutTM (~1500). This makes it unclear what cdiAMP is doing to the developmental cycle.

      In Figure 4 the authors knockdown dacA (dacA-KD) and complement the knockdown (dacA-KDcom) dacAKD decreases cdiAMP (~300) while DacA-KDcom increases cdiAMP much above wt (~8000).<br /> KD decreased hctA and omcB at 24hpi. Complementation resulted in a moderate increase in hctA at a single time point but not at 24 hpi and had no effect on euo or omcB expression. Importantly, complementation decreased the growth rate. Based on the proposed model, growth rate should increase as the chlamydia should all be RBs and replicating and not exiting the cell cycle to become EBs (not replicating). Interestingly reducing cdiAMP levels by over expressing DacAmut (~256 pg/ml) did not have an effect on the cycle but the reduction in cdiAMP by knockdown of dacA (~300 pg/ml) did have a moderate effect on the cycle.

      For Figure 5 DacA-ybbRop was overexpressed and this increased cdiAMP dramatically ~500,000 pg/ml as compared to wt ~1500. This increased hctA only at an early timepoint and not at 24hpi and again had no effect on omcB or euo. Overexpression of the operon with the mutation DacA-ybbRopmut reduced cdiAMP to ~300 pg/ml and this showed a reduction in growth rate similar to dacAmut but a more dramatic decrease in IFUs.

      Overall:

      DacA overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml (decreased everything except euo)

      DacAmut overexpression reduces cdiAMP dramatically (~256 pg/ml). (decreased everything except euo)

      DacATM overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml (no changes noted)

      DacAmutTM overexpression does not seem to change cdiAMP ~1500 pg/ml (no changes noted)

      dacAKD decrease cdiAMP to ~300 pg/ml (decreased everything except euo)

      dacAKDcom increased cdiAMP to ~8000 pg/ml (decreases growth rate, increase hctA a little but not omcB)

      DacA-ybbRop overexpression increased cdiAMP to ~500,000 pg/ml (decreases growth rate, increase hctA a little but not omcB)

      DacA-ybbRopmut ~300 pg/ml (decreased everything except euo)

      Overall, the data show that increasing cdiAMP only has a phenotype if it is dramatically increased, no effect at 4000 pg/ml. Decreasing cdiAMP has a consistent effect, decreased growth rate, IFU, hctA expression and omcB expression. However, if their proposed model was correct and low levels of cdiAMP blocked EB conversion then more chlamydial cells would be RBs (dividing cells) and the growth rate should increase. Conversely, if cdiAMP levels were dramatically raised then all RBs would all convert and the growth rate would be very low. When cdiAMP was raised to ~4000 pg/ml there was no effect on the growth rate. However, an increase to ~8000 pg/ml resulted in a significant decrease but growth continued. Increasing cdAMP to ~500,000 pg/ml had less of an impact on the growth rate. Overall, the data does not cleanly support the proposed model.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the current reviews

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      This manuscript describes the role of the production of c-di-AMP on the chlamydial developmental cycle. The main findings remain the same. The authors show that overexpression of the dacA-ybbR operon results in increased production of c-di-AMP and early expression of transitionary and late genes. The authors also knocked down the expression of the dacA-ybbR operon and reported a modest reduction in the expression of both hctA and omcB. The authors conclude with a model suggesting the amount of c-di-AMP determines the fate of the RB, continued replication, or EB conversion. 

      Overall, this is a very intriguing study with important implications however the data is very preliminary and the model is very rudimentary. The data support the observation that dramatically increased c-di-AMP has an impact on transitionary gene expression and late gene expression suggesting dysregulation of the developmental cycle. This effect goes away with modest changes in c-di-AMP (detaTM-DacA vs detaTM-DacA (D164N)). However, the model predicts that low levels of c-di-AMP delays EB production is not not well supported by the data. If this prediction were true then the growth rate would increase with c-di-AMP reduction and the data does not show this. The levels of of c-di-AMP at the lower levels need to be better validated as it seems like only very high levels make a difference for dysregulated late gene expression. However, on the low end it's not clear what levels are needed to have an effect as only DacAopMut and DacAopKD show any effects on the cycle and the c-di-AMP levels are only different at 24 hours. 

      These appear to be the same comments the reviewer presented last time, so we will reiterate our prior points here and elsewhere. We do not think and nor do we predict that low c-di-AMP levels should increase growth rate (as measured by gDNA levels), and this conclusion cannot be drawn from our data. Rather, we predict that the inability to accumulate c-di-AMP should delay production of EBs, and this is what the data show. The reviewer has applied their own subjective (and erroneous) interpretation to the model. The asynchronicity of the normal developmental cycle means RBs continue to replicate as EBs are forming, so gDNA levels cannot be used as the sole metric for determining RB levels. We show that reduced c-di-AMP levels reduce EB levels as well as transcripts associated with late stages of development. The parsimonious interpretation of these data support that low c-di-AMP levels delay progression through the developmental cycle consistent with our model.

      The data still do not support the overall model.

      We disagree.  We have presented quantified data that include appropriate controls and statistical tests, and the reviewer has not disputed that or pointed to additional experiments that need to be performed.  The reviewer has imposed a subjective interpretation of our model based on their own biases.  A reader is free, of course, to disagree with our model, but a reviewer should not block a manuscript based on such a disagreement if no experimental flaws have been identified. 

      In Figure 1 the authors show at 24 hpi. 

      We also showed data from 16hpi, which is a more relevant timepoint for assessing premature transition to EBs.  In contrast, the 24hpi is more important for assessing developmental effects of reduced c-di-AMP levels.

      DacA overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml 

      DacAmut overexpression reduces cdiAMP dramatically to ~256 pg/ml) 

      DacATM overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml. 

      DacAmutTM overexpression does not seem to change cdiAMP ~1500 pg/ml . 

      dacAKD decreases cdiAMP to ~300 pg/ml . 

      dacAKDcom increased cdiAMP to ~8000 pg/ml. 

      DacA-ybbRop overexpression increased cdiAMP to ~500,000 pg/ml. 

      DacA-ybbRopmut ~300 pg/ml. 

      However in Figure 2 the data show that overexpression of DacA (cdiAMP ~4000 pg/ml) did not have a different phenotype than over expression of the mutant (cdiAMP ~256 pg/ml). HctA expression down, omcB expression down, euo not much change, replication down, and IFUs down. Additionally, Figure 3 shows no differences in anything measured although cdiAMP levels were again dramatically different. DacATM overexpression (~4000 pg/ml) and DacAmutTM (~1500). This makes it unclear what cdiAMP is doing to the developmental cycle. 

      As we have explained in the text and in response to reviewer comments on previous rounds of review, overexpressing the full-length WT or mutant DacA is detrimental to developmental cycle progression for reasons that have nothing to do with c-di-AMP levels (likely disrupting membrane function), since, as the reviewer notes, the WT DacA deltaTM strain had similar c-di-AMP levels but no negative effects on growth/development. If we had not presented the effects of overexpressing the individual isoforms, then a reviewer would surely have requested such, which is why we present these data even though they don’t seem to support our model.  This is an honest representation of our findings.  The reviewer seems intent on nitpicking a minor datapoint that seems to contradict the rest of the manuscript while ignoring or not carefully reading the rest of the manuscript.

      In Figure 4 the authors knockdown dacA (dacA-KD) and complement the knockdown (dacA-KDcom) 

      dacAKD decreases cdiAMP (~300) while DacA-KDcom increases cdiAMP much above wt (~8000). 

      KD decreased hctA and omcB at 24hpi. Complementation resulted in a moderate increase in hctA at a single time point but not at 24 hpi and had no effect on euo or omcB expression.

      By 24hpi, late gene transcripts are being maximally produced during a normal developmental cycle. It is unclear why the reviewer thinks that these transcripts should be elevated above this level in any of our strains that prematurely transition to EBs. There is no basis in the literature to support such an assumption. As we noted in the text, the dacA-KDcom strain phenocopied the dacAop OE strain, and we showed RNAseq data and EB production curves for the latter that support our conclusions of the effect of increased c-di-AMP levels on developmental progression.

      Importantly, complementation decreased the growth rate.

      Yes, since the c-di-AMP levels breached the “EB threshold” at 16hpi, it causes premature transition to EBs, which do not replicate their gDNA, at an earlier stage of the cycle when fewer organisms are present. Therefore, the gDNA levels are decreased at 24hpi, which is consistent with our model.

      Based on the proposed model, growth rate should increase as the chlamydia should all be RBs and replicating and not exiting the cell cycle to become EBs (not replicating).

      This is a spurious conclusion from the reviewer. As we clearly showed, the dacA-KDcom did not restore a wild-type phenotype and instead mimicked the dacAop OE strain. This was commented on in the text.

      Interestingly reducing cdiAMP levels by over expressing DacAmut (~256 pg/ml) did not have an effect on the cycle but the reduction in cdiAMP by knockdown of dacA (~300 pg/ml) did have a moderate effect on the cycle. 

      This is again a spurious conclusion from the reviewer. The dacAMut and dacA-KD strains are distinct. As noted in the text and above for DacA WT OE, overexpressing the DacAMut similarly disrupts organism morphology, which is different from dacA-KD. These strains should not be directly compared because of this. This point has been previously highlighted in the text (in Results and Discussion).

      For Figure 5 DacA-ybbRop was overexpressed and this increased cdiAMP dramatically ~500,000 pg/ml as compared to wt ~1500. This increased hctA only at an early timepoint and not at 24hpi and again had no effect on omcB or euo.

      As we explained in prior reviews, our RNAseq data more comprehensively assessed transcripts for the dacAop OE strain. These data show convincingly that late gene transcripts (not just hctA and omcB) are elevated earlier in the developmental cycle. Again, it is not clear why the reviewer should expect that late gene transcripts should be higher in these strains than they are during a normal developmental cycle. This is not part of our model and appears to be a bias that the reviewer has imposed that is not supported by the literature.

      Overexpression of the operon with the mutation DacA-ybbRopmut reduced cdiAMP to ~300 pg/ml and this showed a reduction in growth rate similar to dacAmut but a more dramatic decrease in IFUs. 

      As we described in the text, in earlier revisions, and above, the dacAMut OE strain has distinct effects unrelated to c-di-AMP levels and, therefore, should not be compared to other strains in terms of linking its c-di-AMP levels to its phenotype.

      Overall: 

      DacA overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml (decreased everything except euo) 

      DacAmut overexpression reduces cdiAMP dramatically (~256 pg/ml). (decreased everything except euo) 

      DacATM overexpression increases cdiAMP to ~4000 pg/ml (no changes noted) 

      DacAmutTM overexpression does not seem to change cdiAMP ~1500 pg/ml (no changes noted) 

      dacAKD decrease cdiAMP to ~300 pg/ml (decreased everything except euo) 

      dacAKDcom increased cdiAMP to ~8000 pg/ml (decreases growth rate, increase hctA a little but not omcB) 

      DacA-ybbRop overexpression increased cdiAMP to ~500,000 pg/ml (decreases growth rate, increase hctA a little but not omcB) <br /> DacA-ybbRopmut ~300 pg/ml (decreased everything except euo) 

      Overall, the data show that increasing cdiAMP only has a phenotype if it is dramatically increased, no effect at 4000 pg/ml.

      Yes, this clearly shows there is a threshold - as we hypothesize!  However, these thresholds are more important at the 16hpi timepoint not 24hpi (which the reviewer is referencing) when assessing premature transition to EBs.  We specifically highlighted in our prior revision in Figure 1E this EB threshold to make this point clearer for the reader.  Once the threshold is breached, then the overall c-di-AMP levels become irrelevant as the RBs have begun their transition to EBs.

      Decreasing cdiAMP has a consistent effect, decreased growth rate, IFU, hctA expression and omcB expression. However, if their proposed model was correct and low levels of cdiAMP blocked EB conversion then more chlamydial cells would be RBs (dividing cells) and the growth rate should increase.

      The only effect should be normal gDNA levels, which is what we see in the dacA-KD.  Given the asynchronicity of a normal developmental cycle in which RBs continue to replicate as EBs are still forming, there is no basis to assume gDNA levels should increase under these conditions for the dacA-KD strain at 24hpi.

      Conversely, if cdiAMP levels were dramatically raised then all RBs would all convert and the growth rate would be very low.

      We agree. This is what is reflected by the dacAop OE and dacA-KDcom strains, with reduced gDNA levels at 24hpi since organisms have transitioned to EBs at an earlier time post-infection.

      When cdiAMP was raised to ~4000 pg/ml there was no effect on the growth rate.

      Yes, because it had not breached the EB threshold at 16hpi – consistent with our model!  The reviewer is confusing effects of elevated c-di-AMP at 24hpi when they should be assessed at the 16hpi timepoint for strains overproducing this molecule.

      However, an increase to ~8000 pg/ml resulted in a significant decrease but growth continued.

      If the reviewer is referring to the dacA-KDcom strain, then this is not accurate. gDNA levels were decreased in this strain at 24hpi when the c-di-AMP levels were increased compared to the WT (mCherry OE) control at 16hpi, indicating this strain had breached the “EB threshold” and initiated conversion to EBs at an earlier timepoint post-infection when fewer organisms were present.

      Increasing cdAMP to ~500,000 pg/ml had less of an impact on the growth rate.

      It is not clear what this conclusion is based on and what the reviewer is comparing to.  This is a subjective assessment not based on our data.

      Overall, the data does not cleanly support the proposed model.

      It is an unfortunate aspect of biology, particularly for obligate intracellular bacteria – a challenging experimental system on which to work, that the data are not always “clean”.  The overall effects of increased c-di-AMP levels on chlamydial developmental cycle progression we have documented support our model, and we think the reader, as always, should make their own assessment.


      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      This manuscript describes the role of the production of c-di-AMP on the chlamydial developmental cycle. The main findings remain the same. The authors show that overexpression of the dacA-ybbR operon results in increased production of c-di-AMP and early expression of transitionary and late genes. The authors also knocked down the expression of the dacA-ybbR operon and reported a modest reduction in the expression of both hctA and omcB. The authors conclude with a model suggesting the amount of c-di-AMP determines the fate of the RB, continued replication, or EB conversion. 

      Overall, this is a very intriguing study with important implications however, the data is very preliminary, and the model is very rudimentary. The data support the observation that dramatically increased c-di-AMP has an impact on transitionary gene expression and late gene expression suggesting dysregulation of the developmental cycle. This effect goes away with modest changes in c-di-AMP (detaTM-DacA vs detaTM-DacA (D164N)). However, the model predicts that low levels of c-di-AMP delays EB production is not not well supported by the data. If this prediction were true then the growth rate would increase with c-di-AMP reduction and the data does not show this.

      Thank you for the comments. We have apparently not adequately communicated our predictions and the model. We do not think and nor do we predict that low c-di-AMP levels should increase growth rate, and there is no basis in any of our data to support that. Rather, we predict that the inability to accumulate c-di-AMP should delay production of EBs, and this is what the data show. We have clarified this in the text (line 89 paragraph).

      The levels of c-di-AMP at the lower levels need to be better validated as it seems like only very high levels make a difference for dysregulated late gene expression. However, on the low end it's not clear what levels are needed to have an effect as only DacAopMut and DacAopKD show any effects on the cycle and the c-di-AMP levels are only different at 24 hours.

      Our hypothesis is that increasing concentrations of c-di-AMP within a given RB is a signal for it to undergo secondary differentiation to the EB, and the data support this as noted by the reviewers. Again, we stress that low levels of c-di-AMP are irrelevant to the model. We have revised Figure 1E to indicate the level of c-di-AMP in the control strain at the 24hpi timepoint that coincides with increased EB levels. We hope this will further clarify the goals of our study. That a given strain might be below the EB control is not relevant to the model beyond indicating that it has not reached the necessary threshold for triggering secondary differentiation.

      The authors responded to reviewers' critiques by adding the overexpression of DacA without the transmembrane region. This addition does not really help their case. They show that detaTM-DacA and detaTM-DacA (D164N) had the same effects on c-di-AMP levels but the figure shows no effects on the developmental cycle.

      As it relates directly to the reviewer’s point, the delta-TM strains did not show the same level of c-di-AMP. It may be that the reviewer misread the graph. The purpose of testing these strains was to show that the negative effects of overexpressing full-length WT DacA were due to its membrane localization. Both the FL and deltaTM-DacA (WT) overexpression had equivalent c-di-AMP levels even though the delta-TM overexpression looked like the mCherry-expressing strain based on the measured parameters. This shows that the c-di-AMP levels were irrelevant to the phenotypes observed when overexpressing these WT isoforms. For the mutant isoforms, the delta-TM looked like the mCherry-expressing control while the FL isoform was negatively impacted for reasons we described in the Discussion (e.g., dominant negative effect). In addition, at 16hpi, neither delta-TM strain had c-di-AMP levels that approached the 24h control as denoted in Figure 1E (dashed line) and in the text, which explains why these strains did not show increased late gene transcripts at an earlier timepoint like the dacAop and dacA-KDcom strains.

      Describing the significance of the findings: 

      The findings are important and point to very exciting new avenues to explore the important questions in chlamydial cell form development. The authors present a model that is not quantified and does not match the data well. 

      We respectfully disagree with this assessment as noted above in response to the reviewer’s critique. All of our data are quantified and support the hypothesis as stated.

      Describing the strength of evidence: 

      The evidence presented is incomplete. The authors do a nice job of showing that overexpression of the dacA-ybbR operon increases c-di-AMP and that knockdown or overexpression of the catalytically dead DacA protein decreases the c-di-AMP levels. However, the effects on the developmental cycle and how they fit the proposed model are less well supported. 

      Overall this is a very intriguing finding that will require more gene expression data, phenotypic characterization of cell forms, and better quantitative models to fully interpret these findings. 

      It is not clear what quantitative models the reviewer would prefer, but, ultimately, it is up to the reader to decide whether they agree or not with the model we present. The data are the data, and we have tried to present them as clearly as possible. We would emphasize that, with the number of strains we have analyzed, we have presented a huge amount of data for a study with an obligate intracellular bacterium. As a comparison, most publications on Chlamydia might use a handful of transformant strains, if any. Given the cost and time associated with performing such studies, it is prohibitive to attempt all the time points that one might like to do, and it is not clear to us that further studies will add to or alter the conclusions of the current manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      Minor critiques 

      The graphs have red and blue lines but the figure legends are red and black. It would be better if these matched. 

      Changed.

      For Figure 1C. The labels are not very helpful. It's not clear what is HeLa vs mCherry. I believe it is uninfected vs Chlamydia infected.

      Changed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Sasaki et al. use a combination of live-cell biosensors and patch-clamp electrophysiology to investigate the effect of membrane potential on the ERK MAPK signaling pathway, and probe associated effects on proliferation. This is an effect that has long been proposed, but a convincing demonstration has remained elusive, because it is difficult to perturb membrane potential without disturbing other aspects of cell physiology in complex ways. The time-resolved measurements here are a nice contribution to this question, and the perforated patch clamp experiments with an ERK biosensor are fantastic - they come closer to addressing the above difficulty of perturbing voltage than any prior work. It would have been difficult to obtain these observations with any other combination of tools.

      However, there are still some concerns as detailed in specific comments below:

      Specific comments:

      (1) All the observations of ERK activation, by both high extracellular K+ and voltage clamp, could be explained by cell volume increase (more discussion in subsequent comments). There is a substantial literature on ERK activation by hypotonic cell swelling (e.g. https://doi.org/10.1042/bj3090013, https://doi.org/10.1002/j.1460-2075.1996.tb00938.x, among others). Here are some possible observations that could demonstrate that ERK activation by volume change is distinct from the effects reported here:

      i) Does hypotonic shock activate ERK in U2OS cells?

      ii) Can hypotonic shock activate ERK even after PS depletion, whereas extracellular K+ cannot?

      iii) Does high extracellular K+ change cell volume in U2OS cells, measured via an accurate method such as fluorescence exclusion microscopy?

      iv) It would be helpful to check the osmolality of all the extracellular solutions, even though they were nominally targeted to be iso-osmotic.

      (2) Some more details about the experimental design and the results are needed from Figure 1:

      i) For how long are the cells serum-starved? From the Methods section, it seems like the G1 release in different K+ concentration is done without serum, is this correct? Is the prior thymidine treatment also performed in the absence of serum?

      ii) There is a question of whether depolarization constitutes a physiologically relevant mechanism to regulate proliferation, and how depolarization interacts with other extracellular signals that might be present in an in vivo context. Does depolarization only promote proliferation after extended serum starvation (in what is presumably a stressed cell state)? What fraction of total cells are observed to be mitotic (without normalization), and how does this compare to the proliferation of these cells growing in serum-supplemented media? Can K+ concentration tune proliferation rate even in serum-supplemented media?

      (3) In Figure 2, there are some possible concerns with the perfusion experiment:

      i) Is the buffer static in the period before perfusion with high K+, or is it perfused? This is not clear from the Methods. If it is static, how does the ERK activity change when perfused with 5 mM K+? In other words, how much of the response is due to flow/media exchange versus change in K+ concentration?

      ii) Why do there appear to be population-average decreases in ERK activity in the period before perfusion with high K+ (especially in contrast to Fig. 3)? The imaging period does not seem frequent enough for photobleaching to be significant.

      (4) Figure 3 contains important results on couplings between membrane potential and MAPK signaling. However, there are a few concerns:

      i) Does cell volume change upon voltage clamping? Previous authors have shown that depolarizing voltage clamp can cause cells to swell, at least in the whole-cell configuration:

      https://www.cell.com/biophysj/fulltext/S0006-3495(18)30441-7 . Could it be possible that the clamping protocol induces changes in ERK signaling due to changes in cell volume, and not by an independent mechanism?

      ii) Does the -80 mV clamp begin at time 0 minutes? If so, one might expect a transient decrease in sensor FRET ratio, depending on the original resting potential of the cells. Typical estimates for resting potential in HEK293 cells range from -40 mV to -15 mV, which would reach the range that induces an ERK response by depolarizing clamp in Fig. 3B. What are the resting potentials of the cells before they are clamped to -80 mV, and why do we not see this downward transient?

      (5) The activation of ERK by perforated voltage clamp and by high extracellular K+ are each convincing, but it is unclear whether they need to act purely through the same mechanism - while additional extracellular K+ does depolarize the cell, it could also be affecting function of voltage-independent transporters and cell volume regulatory mechanisms on the timescales studied. To more strongly show this, the following should be done with the HEK cells where there is already voltage clamp data:

      i) Measure resting potential using the perforated patch in zero-current configuration in the high K+ medium. Ideally this should be done in the time window after high K+ addition where ERK activation is observed (10-20 minutes) to minimize the possibility of drift due to changes in transporter and channel activity due to post-translational regulation.

      ii) Measure YFP/CFP ratio of the HEK cells in the high K+ medium (in contrast to the U2OS cells from Fig. 2 where there is no patch data).

      iii) The assertion that high K+ is equivalent to changes in Vmem for ERK signaling would be supported if the YFP/CFP change from K+ addition is comparable to that induced by voltage clamp to the same potential. This would be particularly convincing if the experiment could be done with each of the 15 mM, 30 mM, and 145 mM conditions.

      (6) Line 170: "ERK activity was reduced with a fast time course (within 1 minute) after repolarization to -80 mV." I don't see this in the data: in Fig. 3C, it looks like ERK remains elevated for > 10 min after the electrical stimulus has returned to -80 mV

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have done a good job addressing the comments on the previous submission.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a contribution to the field of developmental bioelectricity. How do changes of resting potential at the cell membrane affect downstream processes? Zhou et al. reported in 2015 that phosphatidylserine and K-Ras cluster upon plasma membrane depolarization and that voltage-dependent ERK activation occurs when constitutive active K-RasG12V mutants are overexpressed. In this paper, the authors advance the knowledge of this phenomenon by showing that membrane depolarization up-regulates mitosis and that this process is dependent on voltage-dependent activation of ERK. ERK activity's voltage-dependence is derived from changes in the dynamics of phosphatidylserine in the plasma membrane and not by extracellular calcium dynamics.

      Strengths:

      Bioelectricity is an important field for areas of cell, developmental, and evolutionary biology, as well as for biomedicine. Confirmation of ERK as a transduction mechanism, and a characterization of the molecular details involved in control of cell proliferation, is interesting and impactful.

      Weaknesses:

      The functional cell division data need to be stronger. They show that increasing K+ increases proliferation and argue that since a MEK inhibitor (U0126) reduces proliferation in K+ treated cells, K+ induces cell division via ERK. But I don't see statistics to show that the rescue is significant, and I don't see a key U0126-only control. If the U0126 alone reduces proliferation, the combined effect wouldn't prove much.

      We thank the reviewer for constructive feedback. We repeated the experiment including the U0126-only control (5K+U). We updated Fig.1, presenting the newly obtained data with statistical analysis.

      Also, unless I'm missing something, it looks like every sample in their control has exactly the same number of mitotic cells. I understand that they are normalizing to this column, but shouldn't they be normalizing to the mean, with the independent values scattering around 1? It doesn't seem like it can be paired replicates since there are 6 replicates in the control and 4 replicates in one of the conditions? 

      We apologize for the unclear description. As the reviewer pointed out, the experiments were not paired replicates due to the limited number of conditions that can be conducted as a single experiment. To overcome this problem, we always included a control condition (i.e. 5K) based on which normalization was performed. This is the reason the data in 5K is always 1 and the sample size of 5K is the largest. Data include 100-900 mitotic cells within the imaging frame of 6 hrs. We re-wrote the figure legend (Fig1) and the main text, which hopefully clarified our experimental framework.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Sasaki et al. use a combination of live-cell biosensors and patch-clamp electrophysiology to investigate the effect of membrane potential on the ERK MAPK signaling pathway, and probe associated effects on proliferation. This is an effect that has long been proposed, but convincing demonstration has remained elusive, because it is difficult to perturb membrane potential without disturbing other aspects of cell physiology in complex ways. The time-resolved measurements here are a nice contribution to this question, and the perforated patch clamp experiments with an ERK biosensor are fantastic - they come closer to addressing the above difficulty of perturbing voltage than any prior work. It would have been difficult to obtain these observations with any other combination of tools.

      However, there are still some concerns as detailed in specific comments below:

      Specific comments:

      (1) All the observations of ERK activation, by both high extracellular K+ and voltage clamp, could be explained by cell volume increase (more discussion in subsequent comments). There is a substantial literature on ERK activation by hypotonic cell swelling (e.g. https://doi.org/10.1042/bj3090013https://doi.org/10.1002/j.1460-2075.1996.tb00938.x, among others). Here are some possible observations that could demonstrate that ERK activation by volume change is distinct from the effects reported here:

      (i) Does hypotonic shock activate ERK in U2OS cells?

      (ii) Can hypotonic shock activate ERK even after PS depletion, whereas extracellular K+ cannot?

      (iii) Does high extracellular K+ change cell volume in U2OS cells, measured via an accurate method such as fluorescence exclusion microscopy?

      (iv) It would be helpful to check the osmolality of all the extracellular solutions, even though they were nominally targeted to be iso-osmotic.

      This is an important point. We conducted several experiments and provided explanations to rule out the possibility that ERK activation can be explained solely by cell volume change. We measured the osmolarity of all solutions used in this paper, which were 296-305 mOsm/L. This information was added to the Material and Methods section (line 387). Under our experimental conditions, ERK activation was not observed with hypotonic 70 % nor 50% osmolarity solution (Fig.S2).

      It is therefore unlikely that the main cause of ERK activation upon high K<sup>+</sup> perfusion is due to cell volume change. We would like to pursue this issue further when we obtain capacity to measure accurate cell volume change in the future.

      (2) Some more details about the experimental design and the results are needed from Figure 1:

      (i) For how long are the cells serum-starved? From the Methods section, it seems like the G1 release in different K+ concentration is done without serum, is this correct? Is the prior thymidine treatment also performed in the absence of serum?

      Only the high K<sup>+</sup> incubation phase was serum free. We added the following sentence in the main text (line 63) and an experimental diagram was added as Fig1A. “Cells were incubated in the presence of serum except for the phase with altered K<sup>+</sup> concentration. “

      (ii) There is a question of whether depolarization constitutes a physiologically relevant mechanism to regulate proliferation, and how depolarization interacts with other extracellular signals that might be present in an in vivo context.

      This is a very important point. However, the significance of membrane depolarization for cell proliferation in vivo is beyond the scope of this study. This important question will be addressed in the future.

      Does depolarization only promote proliferation after extended serum starvation (in what is presumably a stressed cell state)?

      Cells were cultured in the presence of serum prior to the high K<sup>+</sup> incubation phase as described above. We added a new figure (Fig1A).

      What fraction of total cells are observed to be mitotic (without normalization), and how does this compare to the proliferation of these cells growing in serum-supplemented media? Can K+ concentration tune proliferation rate even in serum-supplemented media?

      We included data recorded in serum-supplemented conditions (Fig.1), which showed a high mitotic rate. This is presumably due to the growth factors included in serum. There is no significant difference between 5K+FBS and 15K+FBS.

      (3) In Figure 2, there are some possible concerns with the perfusion experiment:

      (i) Is the buffer static in the period before perfusion with high K+, or is it perfused? This is not clear from the Methods. If it is static, how does the ERK activity change when perfused with 5 mM K+? In other words, how much of the response is due to flow/media exchange versus change in K+ concentration?

      The buffer was static prior to high K perfusion. We confirmed that perfusion alone does not activate ERK (Fig.S2). We added the following sentence to the main text. “We also confirmed that the effect of perfusion was negligible, as ERK activation was not observed upon start of the 5K<sup>+</sup> perfusion” (line 150).

      (ii) Why do there appear to be population-average decreases in ERK activity in the period before perfusion with high K+ (especially in contrast to Fig. 3)? The imaging period does not seem frequent enough for photo bleaching to be significant.

      Although we don’ t have a clear answer to this question, we speculate that several aspects of the experimental setup may have contributed to the difference. The cell lines and imaging systems used in Fig.2 and Fig.3 were different. The expression level may be different between U2OS cells and HEK 293 cells: transient expression in U2OS cells in contrast to stable expression in HEK 293 cells. This difference may lead to the different signal-to-noise ratio. The imaging system used in Fig.2 is an epi-illumination microscope excited with a 439/24 bandpass filter and detected with 483/32 (CFP) and 542/27 (YFP), while the imaging system used in Fig.3 is a confocal microscope excited with 458 nm laser and detected with 475-525 (DFP) and LP530 (YFP). These optical setups may also contribute to the different population-average properties before stimulation.

      (4) Figure 3 contains important results on couplings between membrane potential and MAPK signaling. However, there are a few concerns:

      (i) Does cell volume change upon voltage clamping? Previous authors have shown that depolarizing voltage clamp can cause cells to swell, at least in the whole-cell configuration: https://www.cell.com/biophysj/fulltext/S0006-3495(18)30441-7 . Could it be possible that the clamping protocol induces changes in ERK signaling due to changes in cell volume, and not by an independent mechanism?

      We do not know whether cell volume is altered in the perforated-patch configuration. As discussed above, however, the effect of cell volume changes on ERK activity seemed to be negligible, because ERK activation was not observed with hypotonic 70 % nor 50% osmolarity solution (Fig.S2)

      (ii) Does the -80 mV clamp begin at time 0 minutes? If so, one might expect a transient decrease in sensor FRET ratio, depending on the original resting potential of the cells. Typical estimates for resting potential in HEK293 cells range from -40 mV to -15 mV, which would reach the range that induces an ERK response by depolarizing clamp in Fig. 3B. What are the resting potentials of the cells before they are clamped to -80 mV, and why do we not see this downward transient?

      We set the potential to -80mV immediately after the giga-seal formation and waited for at least 5 minutes to allow pore formation by gramicidin. We started imaging only after membrane potential was expected to have reached a steady state at -80 mV. We now included this sentence in the ‘Material and Methods’ section (line 398).

      (5) The activation of ERK by perforated voltage clamp and by high extracellular K+ are each convincing, but it is unclear whether they need to act purely through the same mechanism - while additional extracellular K+ does depolarize the cell, it could also be affecting function of voltage-independent transporters and cell volume regulatory mechanisms on the timescales studied. To more strongly show this, the following should be done with the HEK cells where there is already voltage clamp data:

      (i) Measure resting potential using the perforated patch in zero-current configuration in the high K+ medium. Ideally this should be done in the time window after high K+ addition where ERK activation is observed (10-20 minutes) to minimize the possibility of drift due to changes in transporter and channel activity due to post-translational regulation.

      We measured membrane potential in the perforated patch configuration and confirmed that there is negligible potential drift within 20 minutes of perfusion with 145 K+ (only 1~5 mV change during perfusion).

      (ii) Measure YFP/CFP ratio of the HEK cells in the high K+ medium (in contrast to the U2OS cells from Fig. 2 where there is no patch data).

      YFP/CFP ratio data in HEK cells are shown in Fig.S1. As the signal-to-noise level is affected by the expression level of the probe, it is difficult to compare between cells with different expression levels. A higher YFP/CFP value with HEK cells compared to HeLa cells and A431 cells (Sup1) does not necessarily mean that HEK cells have higher ERK activity.

      (iii) The assertion that high K+ is equivalent to changes in Vmem for ERK signaling would be supported if the YFP/CFP change from K+ addition is comparable to that induced by voltage clamp to the same potential. This would be particularly convincing if the experiment could be done with each of the 15 mM, 30 mM, and 145 mM conditions.

      The experimental system using fluorescent biosensor cannot measure absolute ERK activity and can only measure the amount of change after a specific stimulus compared to the period before the stimulus. In electrophysiology experiments, the pre-stimulation membrane potential was clamped to -80 mV, whereas in the perfusion experiment, the membrane potential was variable in individual cells (-35 to -15 mV). It is therefore difficult to compare the results of electrophysiology experiments with those of the perfusion system. Unlike ion channels, it is currently not possible to plot absolute ERK activity with respect to the overall membrane potential. In the present study, we therefore discussed the change rather than the absolute value of ERK activity.

      (6) Line 170: "ERK activity was reduced with a fast time course (within 1 minute) after repolarization to -80 mV." I don't see this in the data: in Fig. 3C, it looks like ERK remains elevated for > 10 min after the electrical stimulus has returned to -80 mV

      Thank you for pointing out that our description was confusing. We changed the sentence to clarify the point we wanted to make. It now reads as follows. “ERK activity showed signs of reduction within 1 minute after repolarization to -80 mV.” (line 174)

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper demonstrates that membrane depolarization induces a small increase in cell entry into mitosis. Based on previous work from another lab, the authors propose that ERK activation might be involved. They show convincingly using a combination of assays that ERK is activated by membrane depolarization. They show this is Ca2+ independent and is a result of activation of the whole K-Ras/ERK cascade which results from changed dynamics of phosphatidylserine in the plasma membrane that activates K-Ras. Although the activation of the Ras/ERK pathway by membrane depolarization is not new, linking it to an increase in cell proliferation is novel.

      Strengths

      A major strength of the study is the use of different techniques - live imaging with ERK reporters, as well as Western blotting to demonstrate ERK activation as well as different methods for inducing membrane depolarization. They also use a number of different cell lines. Via Western blotting the authors are also able to show that the whole MAPK cascade is activated.

      Weaknesses

      A weakness of the study is the data in Figure 1 showing that membrane depolarization results in an increase of cells entering mitosis. There are very few cells entering mitosis in their sample in any condition. This should be done with many more cells to increase confidence in the results.

      We apologize that that description was not clear. Due to the limited number of conditions that can be conducted as a single experiment, we always included control condition (i.e. 5K) and performed normalization by comparing with the control condition of the initial 1.5 hrs. Data were from 100-900 mitotic cell counts within 6hr of the imaging time window. We re-wrote the figure legend (Fig1) and the main text.

      The study also lacks a mechanistic link between ERK activation by membrane depolarization and increased cell proliferation.

      The present study focused on the link between membrane potential and the ERK activity; the mechanistic link between ERK activity and cell proliferation is beyond the scope of the present study. This important topic will be pursued further in subsequent studies.

      The authors did achieve their aims with the caveat that the cell proliferation results could be strengthened. The results for the most part support the conclusions.

      This work suggests that alterations in membrane potential may have more physiological functions than action potential in the neural system as it has an effect on intracellular signalling and potentially cell proliferation.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      minor typo:

      ERK activity has voltage-dependency with the physiological rang of membrane potential should be "range"

      Corrected

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Small points:

      Line 82: rang -> range

      Corrected

      Line 102: ". they were stimulated" -> ". The cells were stimulated"

      Corrected

      Figs. 2C, 2D show exactly the same data points and the same information. Please cut one of these figures.

      We deleted 2C and added the information in 2D and made new Fig.2C.

      For all figs: Please indicate # of cells and # of independent dishes used in each experiment, and make clear whether individual data-points correspond to cells, dishes, or some other unit of measure.

      We added the information in figure legends.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The authors should repeat the cell proliferation experiments with more cells to strengthen the data. They could also use alternative assays like phosphorylated histone H3 staining for cells in M phase, that might to easier to quantitate.

      We repeated the experiment and Fig.1 was replaced with the new Fig.1

      The authors should investigate how the upregulation of ERK is driving cells into mitosis. At what point in the cell cycle is activated ERK induced by membrane depolarization having the effect. Is it entry into mitosis or earlier in the cell cycle?

      The cells were incubated with a high K+ solution 8-9 hr after G1 release, which is supposed to correspond to G2. These data suggest that mitotic activity is stimulated when ERK is activated at G2. However, we lack conclusive data at present to show the consequence of ERK activation during G2. We therefore cannot pinpoint the stage of cell cycle where depolarization-activated ERK exerts its effect.

      The authors refer a lot to the work of Zhou et al 2015 throughout the paper. This is not necessary and is a bit distracting.

      We deleted several sentence from the manuscript.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      (1) Labels should be added in the Figures and should be uniform across all Figures (some are distorted).

      We thank the Reviewer for pointing out this issue. As requested, labels have been edited to ensure they are legible and are consistent in font, size, and style.  

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      (1) As for Figure 2F, Setd2-SET activity on WT rNuc (H3) appears to be significantly lower compared to what is extensively reported in the literature. This is particularly puzzling given that Figure 2B suggests that using 3H-SAM, H3-nuc are much better substrates than K36me1, whereas in Figure 3F, rH3 is weaker than K36me1. It is recommended for the authors to perform additional experimental repeats and include a quantitative analysis to ensure the consistency and reliability of these findings.  

      We appreciate the Reviewer’s points. We respectfully suggest that these comments may reflect potential confusion around interpreting how different assays detect in vitro methylation, what data can and cannot be compared, and the nature of the different substrates used. 

      With respect to point 1 (Western signal significantly lower compared to extensive literature): To the best of our knowledge, it would be extremely challenging to make a quantitative argument comparing the strength of the Western signal in Figure 2F with results reported in the literature. Specifically, comparing our results with previous studies would require (1) all the studies to have used the exact same antibodies as antibody signal intensities vary depending on the specific activity and selectively of a particular antibody and even its lot number, (2) similar in vitro methylation reaction condition, (3) the same type of recombinant nucleosomes used, and so on. Further, given that these are Western blots, we do not understand how one could interpret an absolute activity level. In the figure, all we can conclude is that in in vitro methylation reactions, our recombinant SETD2 protein methylates rNucs to generate mono-, di-, and tri-methylation at K36 (using vetted antibodies (see Fig. 2e)). If there is a specific paper within the extensive literature that the Reviewer highlights, we could look more into the details of why the signals are different (our guess is that any difference would largely be due to the use of different antibodies). We add that it might be challenging to find a similar experiment performed in the literature; we are not aware of a similar experiment. 

      With respect to comparing Figure 2B and 2F: We do not understand how one can meaningfully compare incorporation of radiolabeled SAM to antibody-based detection on film using an antibody against specific methyl states. In particular, regarding the question regarding comparing rH3 vs H3K36me1 nucleosomes, we point out that in using recombinant nucleosomes installed with native modifications (e.g. H3K36me1), in which the entire population of the starting material is mono-methylated, then naturally the Western signal with an anti-H3K36me1 antibody will be strong. In Fig. 2b, the assay is incorporation of radiolabeled methyl, which is added to the preexiting mono-methylated substrate. In other words, the results are entirely consistent if one understands how the methylation reactions were performed, how methylation was detected, and the nature of the reagents.

      (2) The additional bands observed in Figure 4B, which appear to be H4, should be accompanied by quantification of the intensity of the H3 bands to better assess K36me3 activity. Additionally, the quantification presented in Figure 4C for SAH does not seem accurate as it potentially includes non-specific methylation activity, likely from H4. This needs to be addressed for clarity and accuracy. 

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. The additional bands observed in Figure 4B represent degradation products of histone H3, not H4 methylation. This is commonly seen in in vitro reactions using recombinant nucleosomes, where partial proteolysis of H3 can occur under the assay conditions.  

      (3) In Figure 4E, the differences between bound and unbound substrates are not sufficiently pronounced. Given the modest differences observed, authors might want to consider repeating the assay with sufficient replicates to ensure the results are statistically robust.

      In Figure 4E, we observe a clear difference between the bound and unbound substrate. To aid interpretation, we have clarified in the figure where the bound complex migrates on the gel, while the unbound nucleosomes migrate at the bottom of the gel. The differences are indeed subtle, which we highlight in the text.  

      (4) Regarding labeling, there are multiple issues that need correction: In the depiction of Epicypher's dNuc, it is crucial to clearly mark H2B as the upper band, rather than ambiguously labeling H2A/H2B together when two distinct bands are evident. In Figure 3B and D, the histones appear to be mislabeled, and the band corresponding to H4 has been cut off. It would be beneficial to refer to Figure 3E for correct labeling to maintain consistency and accuracy across figures. 

      Thank you for pointing this out. To avoid any confusion, we have delineated the H2B and H2A markers and indicate the band corresponding to H4.

      (5) There are issues with the image quality in some blots; for instance, Figure 2EF and Figure 2D exhibit excessive contrast and pixelation, respectively. These issues could potentially obscure or misrepresent the data, and thus, adjustments in image processing are recommended to provide clearer, more accurate representations. 

      Contrast adjustments were applied uniformly across each entire image and were not used to modify any specific region of the blot. We have corrected the issue of increased pixelation in Figure 2D. 

      (6) The authors are recommended to provide detailed descriptions of the materials used, including catalog numbers and specific products, to allow for reproducibility and verification of experimental conditions. 

      We have added the missing product specifications and catalog numbers to ensure clarity and reproducibility of the experiments.

      (7) The identification of Setd2 as a tumor suppressor in KrasG12C-driven LUAD is a significant finding. However, the discussion on how this discovery could inspire future therapeutic approaches needs to be more balanced. The current discussion (Page 10) around the potential use of inhibitors is somewhat confusing and could benefit from a clearer explanation of how Setd2's role could be targeted therapeutically. It would be beneficial for the authors to explore both current and potential future strategies in a more structured manner, perhaps by delineating between direct inhibitors, pathway modulators, and other therapeutic modalities. 

      SETD2 is a tumor suppressor in lung cancer (as we show here and many others have clearly established in the literature) and thus we would recommend avoiding a SETD2 inhibitor to treat solid tumors, as it could have a very much unwanted affect.  Our discussion addresses a different point regarding the relative importance of the enzymatic activity versus other, nonenzymatic functions of SETD2. We believe that a detailed exploration of the therapeutic potential of inhibiting SETD2 would be better suited in a review or a more therapy-focused manuscript.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Wolfson and co-authors demonstrate a combination of an injury-specific enhancer and engineered AAV that enhances transgene expression in injured myocardium. The authors characterize spatiotemporal dynamics of TREE-directed AAV expression in the injured heart using a non-invasive longitudinal monitoring system. They show that transgene expression is drastically increased 3 days post-injury, driven by 2ankrd1a. They reported a liver-detargeted capsid, AAV cc.84, with decreased viral entry into the liver while maintaining TREE transgene specificity. They further identified the IR41 serotype with enhanced transgene expression in injured myocardium from AAV library screening. This is an interesting study that optimizes the potential application of TREE delivery for cardiac repair. However, several concerns were raised prior to publication:

      Major Concerns:

      (1) In Figure 1, the authors demonstrated that 2andkrd1aEN is not responsive to sham injury after AAV delivery, but Figure 3 shows a strong response to sham when AAV is delivered after injury. The authors do not provide an explanation for this observation.

      This discrepancy is due to the timing of AAV delivery. In Figure 1, AAV was delivered 60 days prior to IVIS imaging and cardiac injury, allowing time for the baseline level of AAV transgene expression to reach a plateau. From this baseline level, we were able to measure fold change in luminescence signal before and after cardiac injury. In Figure 3, AAV was delivered 4 days after cardiac injury. Luminescence in the heart was measured 3 days later (day 7), when the baseline of AAV transgene expression is still building. The data from Figure 1C-D inform us that the 2ankrd1aEN response to cardiac injury peaks within the first week and returns to baseline levels after 5-7 weeks. In Figure 3E, we show that 2ankrd2aEN provides a baseline level of expression that is present in sham hearts and reaches its plateau after 6 weeks. In contrast, I/R injured hearts show enhanced expression in the first 3-4 weeks, corresponding with the dynamics of 2ankrd1aEN’s response to injury observed in Figure 1C. We have now included a phrase in the revised manuscript on p. 7, paragraph 1 to clarify.

      (2) In Figure 4, a higher GFP signal is observed in all areas of the heart of the IR41-treated mouse compared to AAV9. The authors should compare GFP expression between AAV9 and IR41 in uninjured hearts and provide insights into enhanced cardiac tropism to confirm that IR41 is MI injury enriched, not Sham as well.

      We sought to address this question with the experiments presented in Figure 5. We treated sham mice with AAV9 and IR41 containing 2ankrd1aEN. Figure 5D showed IR41 delivered more vector genomes to the sham heart on average, though not with a p-value less than 0.05 compared with AAV9. In Supplemental Figure 5B, IR41 also provided higher luminescence at day 7 post-sham but was comparable at day 14 and day 21. These data suggest IR41 might increase heart tropism in healthy hearts, but IR41’s effect is most dramatic when delivered to injured hearts, where cardiac vector genomes are highest (Figure 5D). We have now included a sentence in the revised manuscript on p. 8, paragraph 2 to clarify.

      (3) The authors should clarify which model is being used between myocardial infarction (MI) and Ischemia-reperfusion (IR) throughout the figures, as the experimental schemes and figure legends did not match with each other (MI or IR in Figure 1A, 1D, 3A, and 3E). Both models cause different types of injuries. The authors should explain the difference in TREE expression in both models.

      We have revised the figures to specify the model, where I/R or MI is used.

      (4) In Figure 2, the authors use REN instead of 2ankrd1aEN to demonstrate liver-detargeting using AAV cc.84. Is there a specific reason?

      Our data in Figure 1 informed us that off-target liver expression is more specifically an issue for REN compared to 2ankrd1aEN. Baseline levels of luminescence in the heart could not be as clearly marked due to off-target expression in the liver, which was showcased in Figure 2B with AAV9 delivery to sham mice. As discussed above, 2ankrd1aEN provided stronger baseline levels of expression of the heart which could be more clearly marked in IVIS images for tracking fold changes over time. For these reasons, we sought to explore how incorporation of the AAV.cc84 capsid could be utilized to minimize off-target liver expression. We have now included a sentence in the revised manuscript on p. 5, paragraph 3 to clarify.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this manuscript by Wolfson et al., various adeno-associated viruses (AAVs) were delivered to mice to assess the cardiac-specificity, injury border-zone cardiomyocyte transduction rate, and temporal dynamics, with the goal of finding better AAVs for gene therapies targeting the heart. The authors delivered tissue regeneration enhancer elements (TREEs) controlling luciferase expression and used IVIS imaging to examine transduction in the heart and other organs. They found that luciferase expression increased in the first week after injury when using AAV9-TREE-Hsp68 promoter, waning to baseline levels by 7 weeks. However, AAV9 vectors transduced the liver, which was significantly reduced by using an AAV.cc84 liver de-targeting capsid. The authors then performed in vivo screening of AAV9 capsids and found AAV-IR41 to preferentially transduce injured myocardium when compared to AAV9. Finally, the authors combined TREEs with AAV-IR41 to show improved luciferase expression compared to AAV9-TREE at 7, 14, and 21 days after injury.

      Overall, this manuscript provides insights into TREE expression dynamics when paired with various heart-targeting capsids, which can be useful for researchers studying ischemic injury of murine hearts. While the authors have shown the success of using AAV9-TREEs in porcine hearts, it is unknown whether the expression dynamics would be similar in pigs or humans, as mentioned in the limitations.

      The following questions and concerns can be addressed to improve the manuscript:

      (1) From the IVIS data, it seems that the Hsp68 promoter might not be "normally silent in mouse tissues," specifically in the liver (Figure S1B). Are there any other promoters that can be combined with TREEs to induce cardiac-injury specific expression while minimizing liver expression? This could simplify capsid design to focus on delivery to injured areas.

      Indeed we found the Hsp68 promoter does provide low levels of baseline expression, especially in the liver of mice. The Hsp68 promoter was initially chosen due to its permissive nature allowing for assessment of expression directed by TREEs. Many or most groups use the Hsp68 promoter for enhancer tests in mice, but we agree that other permissive promoters might have lower baseline levels of expression and might have the benefit of smaller size. We have not rigorously tested other permissive promoters in our experiments.

      (2) Why is it that AAV9-TREE-Hsp68-Luc wane in expression (Figure 1C and 1D), whereas AAV.cc84-TREE-Hsp68-Luc expresses stably for over 2 months (3E)? This has important implications for the goal of transience in gene delivery.

      Please see our response to reviewer 1’s comment #1 above.

      (3) AAV-IR41 was found to transduce cardiomyocytes in the injured zone. However, this capsid also shows a very strong off-target liver expression. From a capsid design perspective, is it possible to combine AAV-cc84 and AAV-IR41?

      This approach is in theory possible as these epitopes are structurally distinct. However, since the mechanism (receptor usage) is currently unknown, it would not be possible to predict whether the properties are mutually exclusive. Further, we would need to ensure that combining modifications does not impact vector yield. We can explore such features with next generation candidates as we continue to improve the platform. We have now included a sentence in the revised manuscript on p. 9, paragraph 3, mentioning the possibility of combining the two capsid mutations.

      (4) It would be helpful to see immunostaining for the various time points in Figure 5. Is it possible to use an anti-luciferase antibody (or AAV-TREE-Hsp68-eGFP) to compare the two TREE capsids?

      We were not able to do immunostaining of luciferase expression, because the biopsied hearts were used to quantify vector genomes via qPCR. We have previously reported results of immunostaining of EGFP expression directed by 2ankrd1aEN in I/R-injured mouse hearts (Yan et al., 2023), which we expect to match the expression seen in these experiments.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The tissue regeneration enhancer elements (TREEs) identified in zebrafish have been shown to drive injury-activated temporal-spatial gene expression in mice and large animals. These findings increase the translational potential of findings in zebrafish to mammals. In this manuscript, the authors tested TREEs in combination with different adeno-associated viral (AAV) vectors using in vivo luciferase bioluminescent imaging that allows for longitudinal tracking. The TREE-driven luciferase delivered by a liver de-targeted AAV.cc84 decreased off-target transduction in the liver. They further screened an AAV library to identify capsid variants that display enhanced transduction for myocardium post-myocardial infarction. A new capsid variant, AAV.IR41, was found to show increased transduction at the infarct border zones.

      Strengths:

      The authors injected AAV-cargo several days after ischemia/reperfusion (I/R) injury as a clinically relevant approach. Overall, this study is significant in that it identifies new AAV vectors for potential new gene therapies in the future. The manuscript is well-written, and their data are also of high quality.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors might be using MI (myocardial infarction) and I/R injury interchangeably in their text and labels. For instance, "We systemically transduced mice at 4 days after permanent left coronary artery ligation with either AAV9 or IR41 harboring a 2ankrd1aEN-Hsp68::fLuc transgene. IVIS imaging revealed higher expression levels in animals transduced with IR41 compared to AAV9, in both sham and I/R groups (Fig. 5A)". They should keep it consistent. There is also no description for the MI model.

      We have adjusted figure labels and main text to ensure the injury model is described correctly.

      We have also addressed all additional Recommendations for the authors, which requested minor modifications to figures like error bars and image annotation.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses mesoscale simulations to investigate how membrane geometry regulates the multiphase organization of postsynaptic condensates. It reveals that dimensionality shifts the balance between specific and non-specific interactions, thereby reversing domain morphology observed in vitro versus in vivo.

      Strengths:

      The model is grounded in experimental binding affinities, reproduces key experimental observations in 3D and 2D contexts, and offers mechanistic insight into how geometry and molecular features drive phase behavior.

      Weaknesses:

      The model omits other synaptic components that may influence domain organization and does not extensively explore parameter sensitivity or broader physiological variability.

      We thank the reviewer for his/her time and effort to our manuscript. We agree with the point that the contribution of other synaptic components should be addressed. We have included a discussion of the effects of environmental factors such as protein and ion concentrations, as well as other omitted postsynaptic components (SAPAP, Shank, and Homer) on phase morphology. In the middle of the 2<sup>nd</sup> paragraph of Discussion, we added: 

      “While these in vivo results contain additional scaffold and cytoskeletal elements omitted in our model, such as SAPAP, Shank and Homer, nearly all proteins in the middle and lower layers of the PSD associate directly or indirectly with PSD-95 in the upper PSD layer. Consequently, it is probable that other scaffold proteins contribute to the mobility of AMPAR-containing and NMDAR-containing nanodomains indistinguishably. They may increase the stability of the AMPAR and NMDAR clusters but are unlikely to have a distinct effect to reverse the phase-separation phenomenon.”

      Also, as the reviewer pointed out, we agree with that physiological factors such as ion concentration may influence the phase. However, conditions such as ion concentration are implicitly implemented as the specific and nonspecific interactions in this model, which makes it difficult to estimate the effect of each physiological condition individually. We added the variability potential of physiological conditions to the discussion section as a limitation of this model. To investigate parameter sensitivity in more detail, we performed additional MD simulations with weakened membrane constraints to account for the behavior between 3D and 2D. We added:

      “First, our results did not provide direct insights to physiological conditions, such as ion concentrations. Since such factors are implicitly implemented in our model, it is difficult to estimate these effects individually. This suggests the need for future implementation of environmental factors and validation under a broader range of in vivo-like settings.”

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This is a timely and insightful study aiming to explore the general physical principles for the sub-compartmentalization--or lack thereof--in the phase separation processes underlying the assembly of postsynaptic densities (PSDs), especially the markedly different organizations in three-dimensional (3D) droplets on one hand and the twodimensional (2D) condensates associated with a cellular membrane on the other. Simulation of a highly simplified model (one bead per protein domain) is carefully executed. Based on a thorough consideration of various control cases, the main conclusion regarding the trade-off between repulsive excluded volume interactions and attractive interactions among protein domains in determining the structures of 3D vs 2D model PSD condensates is quite convincing. The results in this manuscript are novel; however, as it stands, there is substantial room for improvement in the presentation of the background and the findings of this work. In particular,

      (i) conceptual connections with prior works should be better discussed 

      (ii) essential details of the model should be clarified, and

      (iii) the generality and limitations of the authors' approach should be better delineated.

      We appreciate the reviewer for his/her time and effort on our manuscript and for encouraging comments and helpful suggestions. We answered every technical comment the reviewer mentioned below.

      Specifically, the following items should be addressed (with the additional references mentioned below cited and discussed):

      (1) Excluded volume effects are referred to throughout the text by various terms and descriptions such as "repulsive force according to the volume" (e.g., in the Introduction), "nonspecific volume interaction", and "volume effects" in this manuscript. This is somewhat curious and not conducive to clarity, because these terms have alternate or connotations of alternate meanings (e.g., in biomolecular modeling, repulsive interactions usually refer to those with longer spatial ranges, such as that between like charges). It will be much clearer if the authors simply refer to excluded volume interactions as excluded volume interactions (or effects).  

      Thank you for this comment. We have substituted the words “excluded volume interactions” for words of similar meaning. However, we have left the expression of “non-specific interactions” as they are referring to explicit interactions that are given as force fields in the model, rather than in the general meaning of excluded volume effect.

      (2) In as much as the impact of excluded volume effects on subcompartmentalization of condensates ("multiple phases" in the authors' terminology), it has been demonstrated by both coarse-grained molecular dynamics and field-theoretic simulations that excluded volume is conducive to demixing of molecular species in condensates [Pal et al., Phys Rev E 103:042406 (2021); see especially Figures 4-5 of this reference]. This prior work bears directly on the authors' observation. Its relationship with the present work should be discussed.  

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. We have now included a more detailed discussion on excluded volume effect in the revised manuscript, which provides important context for our findings. Furthermore, we have cited the references to support and enrich the discussion, as recommended.

      (3)  In the present model setup, activation of the CaMKII kinase affects only its binding to GluN2Bc. This approach is reasonable and leads to model predictions that are essentially consistent with the experiment. More broadly, however, do the authors expect activation of the CaMKII kinase to lead to phosphorylation of some of the molecular species involved with PSDs? This may be of interest since biomolecular condensates are known to be modulated by phosphorylation [Kim et al., Science 365:825-829 (2019); Lin et al, eLife 13:RP100284 (2025)].  

      We agree that phosphorylation effect on phase separation is an important and interesting aspect to consider. Some experimental results have shown that activation of CaMKII can lead to phosphorylation of various proteins and make PSD condensate more stable by altering their interactions. We included the sentence below in limitations:

      “In this context, we also do not explicitly account for downstream phosphorylation events. Although such proteins are not included in the current components, they will regulate PSD-95, affecting its binding valency, or diffusion coefficient. This is a subject worthy of future research.”

      (4) The forcefield for confinement of AMPAR/TARP and NMDAR/GluN2Bc to 2D should be specified in the main text. Have the authors explored the sensitivity of their 2D findings on the strength of this confinement?

      We thank the reviewer for the helpful recommendation. We have revised the manuscript to include membrane-mimicking potential on main text. Furthermore, we also think that exploring the shape of the 3D/2D condensate phase due to the sensitivity of confinement is a very interesting point. We have additionally performed MD simulations with smaller/larger membrane constraints and included the results in supporting information as Figure S5. The following parts are added:

      “We further attempted to mimic intermediate conditions between 3D and 2D systems in two different manners. First, we applied a weaker membrane constraint in 2D system. Even when the strength of membrane constraints is reduced by a factor of 1000, NMDARs are located on the inner side when the CaMKII was active, as well as the result in 2D system (Fig.S5ABC). Second, to weaken further the effect of membrane constraints, we artificially altered the membrane thickness from 5 nm to 50 nm, in addition to reducing the membrane constraints by 1000. As a result, NMDAR clusters move to the bottom and surround AMPAR (Fig.S5DEF). In this artificial intermediate condition, both states in which the NMDARs are outside (corresponding to 3D) and in which the NMDARs are inside (corresponding to 2D) are observed, depending on the strength of the membrane constraint.”

      (5)  Some of the labels in Figure 1 are confusing. In Figure 1A, the structure labeled as AMPAR has the same shape as the structure labeled as TARP in Figure 1B, but TARP is labeled as one of the smaller structures (like small legs) in the lower part of AMPAR in Figure 1A. Does the TARP in Figure 1B correspond to the small structures in the lower part of AMPAR? If so, this should be specified (and better indicated graphically), and in that case, it would be better not to use the same structural drawing for the overall structure and a substructure. The same issue is seen for NMDAR in Figure 1A and GluN2Bc in Figure 1B. 

      (6) In addition to clarifying Figure 1, the authors should clarify the usage of AMPAR vs TARP and NMDAR vs GluN2Bc in other parts of the text as well.

      (7) The physics of the authors' model will be much clearer if they provide an easily accessible graphical description of the relative interaction strengths between different domain-representing spheres (beads) in their model. For this purpose, a representation similar to that given by Feric et al., Cell 165:1686-1697 (2016) (especially Figure 6B in this reference) of the pairwise interactions among the beads in the authors' model should be provided as an additional main-text figure. Different interaction schemes corresponding to inactive and activated CAMKII should be given. In this way, the general principles (beyond the PSD system) governing 3D vs 2D multiple-component condensate organization can be made much more apparent.  \

      We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s comments. According to the recommendation, we have changed the diagram in Figure 1B into interaction matrix with each mesoscale molecular representation and the expression in main text to be clearer about AMPAR and TARP, and about the relationship between NMDAR and GluN2Bc. Former diagram of the pairs of specific interaction is moved to supplementary figure. 

      (8) Can the authors' rationalization of the observed difference between 3D and 2D model PSD condensates be captured by an intuitive appreciation of the restriction on favorable interactions by steric hindrance and the reduction in interaction cooperativity in 2D vs 3D?  

      We thank the reviewer for the comment. As pointed out, the multiphase morphology change observed in this study can be attributed to a decrease in coordination number in 2D compared to 3D. We have included the physicochemical rationalization in the discussion.  

      (9) In the authors' model, the propensity to form 2D condensates is quite weak. Is this prediction consistent with the experiment? Real PSDs do form 2D condensates around synapses.  

      We are grateful to the reviewer for highlighting this important point. We agree with that the real PSD forms 3D condensates beneath the 2D membrane. Some lower PSD components under the membrane (i.e. SAPAP, Shank, and Homer) are omitted in our system, which may cause a weak condensation. To emphasize this, we have added the following sentence:

      “While these in vivo results contain additional scaffold and cytoskeletal elements omitted in our model, such as SAPAP, Shank and Homer, nearly all proteins in the middle and lower layers of the PSD associate directly or indirectly with PSD-95 in the upper PSD layer. Consequently, it is probable that other scaffold proteins contribute to the mobility of AMPAR-containing and NMDAR-containing nanodomains indistinguishably. They may increase the stability of the AMPAR and NMDAR clusters but are unlikely to have a distinct effect to reverse the phase-separation phenomenon.”

      However, we believe that the clusters formed on the 2D membrane are not a robust “phase” because they do not follow scaling law. In fact, in our previous study of PSD system with AMPAR(TARP)<sub>4</sub> and PSD-95, we have already reported that phase separation is less likely to occur in 2D than in 3D. The previous result suggests that phase separation on membrane may be difficult to achieve, which is consistent with the results of this study.

      (10) More theoretical context should be provided in the Introduction and/or Discussion by drawing connections to pertinent prior works on physical determinants of co-mixing and de-mixing in multiple-component condensates (e.g., amino acid sequence), such as Lin et al., New J Phys 19:115003 (2017) and Lin et al., Biochemistry 57:2499-2508 (2018). 

      (11) In the discussion of the physiological/neurological significance of PSD in the Introduction and/or Discussion, for general interest it is useful to point to a recently studied possible connection between the hydrostatic pressure-induced dissolution of model PSD and high-pressure neurological syndrome [Lin et al., Chem Eur J 26:11024-11031 (2020)].

      We thank the reviewer for the helpful recommendation. We have added the recommended references in each relevant part in introduction, respectively.

      (12) It is more accurate to use "perpendicular to the membrane" rather than "vertical" in the caption for Figure 3E and other such descriptions of the orientation of the CaMKII hexagonal plane in the text.

      We thank you for your comment. We replaced the word “vertical” with “perpendicular" in the main text and caption.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, Yamada, Brandani, and Takada have developed a mesoscopic model of the interacting proteins in the postsynaptic density. They have performed simulations, based on this model and using the software ReaDDy, to study the phase separation in this system in 2D (on the membrane) and 3D (in the bulk). They have carefully investigated the reasons behind different morphologies observed in each case, and have looked at differences in valency, specific/non-specific interactions, and interfacial tension.

      Strengths:

      The simulation model is developed very carefully, with strong reliance on binding valency and geometry, experimentally measured affinities, and physical considerations like the hydrodynamic radii. The presented analyses are also thorough, and great effort has been put into investigating different scenarios that might explain the observed effects.

      Weaknesses:

      The biggest weakness of the study, in my opinion, has to do with a lack of more in-depth physical insight about phase separation. For example, the authors express surprise about similar interactions between components resulting in different phase separation in 2D and 3D. This is not surprising at all, as in 3D, higher coordination numbers and more available volume translate to lower free energy, which easily explains phase separation. The role of entropy is also significantly missing from the analyses. When interaction strengths are small, entropic effects play major roles. In the introduction, the authors present an oversimplified view of associative and segregative phase transitions based on the attractive and repulsive interactions, and I'm afraid that this view, in which all the observed morphologies should have clear pairwise enthalpic explanations, diffuses throughout the analysis. Meanwhile, I believe the authors correctly identify some relevant effects, where they consider specific/nonspecific interactions, or when they investigate the reduced valency of CaMKII in the 2D system.

      We thank the reviewer for the insightful and constructive comments. Regarding the difference in phase behavior between 2D and 3D systems, we appreciate the reviewer’s clarification that differences in coordination number and entropy in higher dimensions can account for the observed morphology of the phases. While it may be clear that entropy decreases due to the decrease of coordination number, our objective was to uncover how such an isotropic entropy reduction regulates the behavior of each phase driven by different interactions, which remains largely unknown. To emphasize this, we modified the introduction and have now included a discussion of the entropic contributions to phase behavior in both 2D and 3D systems, and we have made this clearer in the revised manuscript by referencing relevant theoretical frameworks. In the Discussion, we added the sentence below:

      “Generally, phase separation can be explained by the Flory-Huggins theory and its extensions: phase separation can be favored by the difference in the effective pairwise interactions in the same phase compared to those across different phases, and is disfavored by mixing entropy. The effective interactions contain various molecular interactions, including direct van der Waals and electrostatic interactions, hydrophobic interactions, and purely entropic macromolecular excluded volume interactions. For the latter, Asakura-Oosawa depletion force can drive the phase separation. Furthermore, the demixing effect was explicitly demonstrated in previous simulations and field theory (61). Importantly, we note that the effective pairwise interactions scale with the coordination number z. The coordination number is a clear and major difference between 3D and 2D systems. In 3D systems, large z allows both relatively strong few specific interactions and many weak non-specific interactions. While a single specific interaction is, by definition, stronger than a single non-specific interaction, contribution of the latter can have strong impact due to its large number. On the other hand, a smaller z in the membrane-bound 2D system limits the number of interactions. In case of limited competitive binding, specific interactions tend to be prioritized compared to non-specific ones. In fact, Fig. 3A clearly shows that number of specific interactions in 2D is similar to that in 3D, while that of non-specific interactions is dramatically reduced in 2D. In the current PSD system, CaMKII is characterized by large valency and large volume. In the 3D solution system, non-specific excluded volume interactions drive CaMKII to the outer phase, while this effect is largely reduced in 2D, resulting in the reversed multiphase.   

      Also, I sense some haste in comparing the findings with experimental observations. For example, the authors mention that "For the current four component PSD system, the product of concentrations of each molecule in the dilute phase is in good agreement with that of the experimental concentrations (Table S2)." But the data used here is the dilute phase, which is the remnant of a system prepared at very high concentrations and allowed to phase separate. The errors reported in Table S2 already cast doubt on this comparison. 

      We thank the reviewer for the insightful comment. In the validation process, we adjusted the parameters so that the number of molecules in dilute phase is consistent with the experimental lower limit of phase separation, based on the assumption that phase-separated dilute phase is the same concentration as the critical concentration. That is why we focus on comparing dilute phase concentration in Table S2. However, in our simulations, the number of protein molecules is relatively small since it is based on the average number per synapse spine. For example, there are only about 60 CaMKII molecules at most, and its presence in the dilute phase is highly sensitive to concentration, as the reviewer pointed out. This is one of the limitations, so we have added a description to the Limitations section. We added:

      “Second, parameter calibration contains some uncertainty. Previous in vitro study results used for parameter validation are at relatively high concentrations for phase separation, which may shift critical thresholds compared to that in in vivo environments. Also, since the number of molecules included in the model is small, the difference of a single molecule could result in a large error during this validation process.”

      Or while the 2D system is prepared via confining the particles to the vicinity of the membrane, the different diffusive behavior in the membrane, in contrast to the bulk (i.e., the Saffman-Delbrück model), is not considered. This would thus make it difficult to interpret the results of a coupled 2D/3D system and compare them to the actual system.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s helpful comment. We agree with that there is a concern that the Einstein-Stokes equation does not adequately reproduce the diffusion of membrane-embedded particles. We recalculated the diffusion coefficients for every membrane particle used in this model using the Saffman-Delbrück model and found that diffusion coefficients for receptor cores (AMPAR and NMDAR) were approximately three times larger. These values are still about ~10 times smaller than that of molecules diffusing under the cytoplasm. Additionally, since this study focuses on the morphology of the phase/cluster at the thermodynamic equilibrium, we think that the magnitude of the diffusion coefficient has little influence on the final structure of the cluster. However, we will incorporate the membrane-embedded diffusion as a future improvement item for better modelling and implementation. We added:

      “Third, we estimated all the diffusion coefficients from the Einstein-Stokes equation, which may oversimplify membrane-associated dynamics. Applying the Saffmann-Delbrück model to membrane-embedded particles would be desired although the resulting diffusion coefficients remain of the same order of magnitude. These limitations highlight the need for further research, yet they do not undermine the core significance of the present findings in advancing our understanding of multiphase morphologies.”

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Filamentous fungi are established workhorses in biotechnology, with Aspergillus oryzae as a prominent example with a thousand-year history. Still, the cell biology and biochemical properties of the production strains is not well understood. The paper of the Takeshita group describes the change in nuclear numbers and correlates it to different production capacities. They used microfluidic devices to really correlate the production with nuclear numbers. In addition, they used microdissection to understand expression profile changes and found an increase in ribosomes. The analysis of two genes involved in cell volume control in S. pombe did not reveal conclusive answers to explain the phenomenon. It appears that it is a multi-trait phenotype. Finally, they identified SNPs in many industrial strains and tried to correlate them to the capability of increasing their nuclear numbers. 

      The methods used in the paper range from high-quality cell biology, Raman spectroscopy, to atomic force and electron microscopy, and from laser microdissection to the use of microfluidic devices to

      study individual hyphae. 

      This is a very interesting, biotechnologically relevant paper with the application of excellent cell biology. I have only minor suggestions for improvement. 

      We sincerely appreciate your fair and positive evaluation of our work. Thank you for your suggestions for improvement. We respond to each of them appropriately.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In the study presented by Itani and colleagues, it is shown that some strains of Aspergillus oryzae - especially those used industrially for the production of sake and soy sauce - develop hyphae with a significantly increased number of nuclei and cell volume over time. These thick hyphae are formed by branching from normal hyphae and grow faster and therefore dominate the colonies. The number of nuclei positively correlates with the thicker hyphae and also the amount of secreted enzymes. The addition of nutrients such as yeast extract or certain amino acids enhanced this effect. Genome and transcriptome analyses identified genes, including rseA, that are associated with the increased number of nuclei and enzyme production. The authors conclude from their data involvement of glycosyltransferases, calcium channels, and the tor regulatory cascade in the regulation of cell volume and number of nuclei. Thicker hyphae and an increased number of nuclei were also observed in high-production strains of other industrially used fungi such as Trichoderma reesei and Penicillium chrysogenum, leading to the hypothesis that the mentioned phenotypes are characteristic of production strains, which is of significant interest for fungal biotechnology. 

      Strengths: 

      The study is very comprehensive and involves the application of diverse state-of-the-art cell biological, biochemical, and genetic methods. Overall, the data are properly controlled and analyzed, figures and

      movies are of excellent quality. 

      The results are particularly interesting with regard to the elucidation of molecular mechanisms that regulate the size of fungal hyphae and their number of nuclei. For this, the authors have discovered a very good model: (regular) strains with a low number of nuclei and strains with a high number of nuclei. Also, the results can be expected to be of interest for the further optimization of industrially relevant filamentous

      fungi. 

      Weaknesses: 

      There are only a few open questions concerning the activity of the many nuclei in production strains (active versus inactive), their number of chromosomes (haploid/diploid), and whether hyper-branching always leads to propagation of nuclei. 

      We are very grateful for your recognition of our findings, the proposed model, and their significance for future applications. We are grateful for the questions, which contribute to a more accurate understanding. 

      Our responses to each are provided below.  

      Reviewer #3 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      The authors seek to determine the underlying traits that support the exceptional capacity of Aspergillus oryzae to secrete enzymes and heterologous proteins. To do so, they leverage the availability of multiple domesticated isolates of A. oryzae along with other Aspergillus species to perform comparative imaging and genomic analysis. 

      Strengths: 

      The strength of this study lies in the use of multifaceted approaches to identify significant differences in hyphal morphology that correlate with enzyme secretion, which is then followed by the use of genomics to identify candidate functions that underlie these differences. 

      Weaknesses: 

      There are aspects of the methods that would benefit from the inclusion of more detail on how experiments were performed and data interpreted. 

      Overall, the authors have achieved their aims in that they are able to clearly document the presence of two distinct hyphal forms in A. oryzae and other Aspergillus species, and to correlate the presence of the thicker, rapidly growing form with enhanced enzyme secretion. The image analysis is convincing. The discovery that the addition of yeast extract and specific amino acids can stimulate the formation of the novel hyphal form is also notable. Although the conclusions are generally supported by the results, this is perhaps less so for the genetic analysis as it remains unclear how direct the role of RseA and the calcium transporters might be in supporting the formation of the thicker hyphae. 

      The results presented here will impact the field. The complexity of hyphal morphology and how it affects secretion is not well understood despite the importance of these processes for the fungal lifestyle. In addition, the description of approaches that can be used to facilitate the study of these different hyphal forms (i.e., stimulation using yeast extract or specific amino acids) will benefit future efforts to understand the molecular basis of their formation. 

      We are very grateful for your fair and thoughtful evaluation of our work. We agree that the genetic analysis in the latter part is relatively weaker compared to the imaging analysis in the first half. Rather than a single mutation causing a dramatic phenotypic change, we believe that the accumulation of various mutations through breeding leads to the observed phenotype, making it difficult to clearly demonstrate causality. Since transcriptome and SNP analyses have revealed key pathways and phenotypes, it would be gratifying if these insights could contribute to future applications utilizing filamentous fungi.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      I was wondering what happens if thick hyphae were taken as inoculum for a new colony or thin hyphae. Is it possible to enrich for one or the other type of hyphae? Perhaps in the presence of yeast extract or certain amino acids. 

      Added an explanation in the discussion.

      L304-306. When thick hyphae were cultured on fresh medium, thin hyphae initially emerged, suggesting that sustained metabolic activity is required for the formation of thick hyphae with a high number of nuclei.    

      L120-121. In some cases, thick hyphae emerged by branching from thick hyphae (Fig. 2D, left), while in other cases, thin hyphae emerged from thick hyphae (Fig. 2D, right). Thin hyphae emerge in the early stage of cultivation even in the presence of yeast extract or certain amino acids.

      In the Discussion, they hypothesize that the primary effect could be on cell wall rigidity. I am wondering if that hypothesis could be tested by adding, for instance, sublethal concentrations of cytochalasin to hyphae of A. nidulans to weaken the cell wall. 

      The question is reasonable. To ensure accurate understanding, we moved Fig. S6 to Fig. 6 and revised the discussion as follows. 

      L294-295. In our model, cell wall loosening at a branching site and regulation of cell volume by turgor pressure constitute necessary conditions for increasing cell volume and maintaining thick hyphae. L306-309. Weakening the cell wall by treatment with a low concentration of calcofluor white did not lead to hyphal thickening or an increase in nuclear number. On the contrary, thick hyphae have thicker cell walls (Fig. 2H-K), which are necessary to maintain the increased cell volume.

      I recommend including some older literature. It was described already 20 years ago that A. nigerdifferentiates hyphae with different capacities to secrete proteins (PMID: 16238620). In addition, there are old reports in A. nidulans reporting high numbers of nuclei (https://doi.org/10.1099/00221287-60-1-133). Perhaps it is worth trying to reproduce those cultural conditions. At least this should be discussed. In the same line, the number of nuclei increases a lot in the stalk of conidiophores in A. nidulans. These observations could be used as examples that the phenomenon observed in A. oryzae may be of general importance. 

      Thank you for the suggestion. It is a very interesting proposal. We checked the nuclei distribution of A. nidulans on the media and added the following discussion.

      L328-334. A previous study reported an increase in the number of nuclei in A. nidulans (62, 63). Here, we examined the nuclear distribution of A. nidulans grown on the culture media, however, did not find class III hyphae as observed in A. oryzae. Even in A. nidulans, conidiophore stalks contain a high number of nuclei. It has been shown that A. oryzae has a taller conidiophore stalk (64). In the thick hyphae of A. oryzae, the expression level of flbA, an early regulator of conidiophore development (65), was elevated. This suggests that differentiation to aerial hyphae may be involved in the increase of hyphal volume and nuclear number. 

      (62) Clutterbuck A.J. Synchronous Nuclear Division and Septation in Aspergillus nidulans. J Gen Microbiol 60, 133-135 (1970).

      (63) Vinck, A., Terlou, M., Pestman, W.R., Martens, E.P., Ram, A.F., van den Hondel, C.A., Wösten, H.A. Hyphal differentiation in the exploring mycelium of Aspergillus niger. Mol Microbiol 58, 693-9 (2005).

      (64) Wada R, Maruyama J, Yamaguchi H, Yamamoto N, Wagu Y, Paoletti M, Archer DB, Dyer PS, Kitamoto K. Presence and functionality of mating type genes in the supposedly asexual filamentous fungus Aspergillus oryzae. Appl Environ Microbiol 78, 2819-29 (2012).

      (65) Lee, B.N., Adams, T.H. Overexpression of flbA, an early regulator of Aspergillus asexual sporulation, leads to activation of brlA and premature initiation of development. Mol Microbiol 14, 323-34 (1994).

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      I suggest addressing the following questions to strengthen the manuscript: 

      (1) Do the authors have an explanation for their result that with an increase in the number of nuclei the individual nucleus is smaller? Have the authors checked whether all the nuclei are haploid or diploid?

      Thank you for the very important question. We added new results to Fig. S5D and S5E and the following discussion.

      L335-340. We investigated whether the reduction in nuclear size observed in thick hyphae was due to a change from diploid to haploid status. However, no difference in GFP-histone fluorescence intensity was detected between thick and thin hyphae (Fig. S5D). In both RIB40 and RIB915 strains, no significant difference in conidial spore size was observed despite the large difference in the number of nuclei within the hyphae (Fig. S5E). These results suggest that both thick and thin hyphae remain haploid, and that the smaller nuclear size observed in thick hyphae is likely due to a higher nuclear density.

      (2) In this context, the biological relevance of the increase in the number of nuclei should also be discussed in more detail. It remains to be clarified whether in hyphae with a high number of nuclei all nuclei are functionally active or whether many nuclei are possibly "inactive". Studies on the transcriptional activity of individual nuclei or on DNA replication (e.g., by EdU labeling) could clarify this. 

      Added the explanation below.

      L102-105. The transcriptional activity of each nucleus is unknown. However, a previous study (Yasui et al., FBB 2020) demonstrated that nuclear division is synchronized even when there are more than 200 nuclei. This suggests that DNA replication occurs similarly in most nuclei. Furthermore, since the germination rate of conidia and the colonies formed from individual conidia show no significant abnormalities, it is suggested that nearly all nuclei possess normal genomes and chromosomes.

      (3) It becomes not entirely clear what the underlying signal is that causes a thin hypha to branch into a thick multinucleated cell. This needs to be discussed in more detail. 

      Thanks for the suggestion. We clarified the signal to increase nuclear number and cell volume.

      L294-309. Although it is speculative, we propose a model to aid interpretation in the discussion. We have clarified that both genetic potential and environmental signals such as nutrients are important.

      (4) Is increased branching always correlated with an increased number of nuclei? 

      It is not an increase in branching, but rather the thickening of hyphae and an increase in cell volume that is consistently associated with an increase in nuclear number. Approximately 40 hours after inoculation, within 400 μm from the tip, the number of branches was 3.4 (SD=2.4) in thin hyphae and 2.6 (SD=0.5) in thick hyphae, suggesting that branching does not increase (n=4). Since thick hyphae elongate faster, it seems that fewer branches are present near the tip, even if the branching frequency itself remains unchanged.

      (5) The abstract does not summarize the many findings of the manuscript in an adequate way. 

      abstract change

      Minor: 

      (1) Lines 49-50: Why italics? 

      corrected.

      (2) Line 179: process. 

      corrected.

      (3) Lines 313-314: Do not forget (and discuss) in this context mycorrhiza fungi with up to thousands of nuclei that were apparently selected during evolution for this high number of nuclei. 

      Thank you for the very interesting suggestion. We have added the following discussion.

      L339-351. The regulation of nuclear number and its ecological strategy are intriguing in other fungi such as N. crassa, which rapidly spreads after wildfires (68), and arbuscular mycorrhiza fungi that form symbiotic relationships with plants and contain thousands of nuclei within hyphae lacking septa (69).

      (68) Jacobson, D. J. et al. Neurospora in temperate forests of western North America. Mycologia 96, 66–74 (2004).

      (69) Kokkoris V, Stefani F, Dalpé Y, Dettman J, Corradi N. Nuclear Dynamics in the Arbuscular Mycorrhizal Fungi. Trends Plant Sci. 25, 765-778 (2020).

      (4) Lines 356-358: many typos.

      corrected.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      Specific suggestions or clarifications for the authors include: 

      (1) Lines 49-50: Is this sentence italicized for a reason? 

      It was a mistake, so we have corrected it.

      (2) Line 83: More detail on the specific characteristics of the different classes of hyphae would be helpful. Perhaps include a schematic drawing that emphasizes the differences between class I,II, and III hyphae. 

      L398-400. The classification is described in the Methods section: Class I – nuclei are distributed at regular intervals without overlapping; Class II – nuclei are aligned but occasionally overlap; Class III – nuclei are scattered throughout the hyphae without alignment. Representative images are shown in a previous study (Yasui et al., FBB 2020). 

      L82-84. We have added this information to clarify the classification.

      (3) Lines 102-103: It was not very clear how this experiment was done. Are you counting nuclei within 100 um of the tip? Are these all in one hyphal compartment? These details could be provided in a drawing that would make it easier for the reader to understand how this was done. 

      L109. Due to variation in the distance from the hyphal tip to the septum, we counted the number of nuclei within 100 μm from the hyphal tip. When septa were present, nuclei were counted in the same manner, so multiple compartments may be included. Changed the explanation.

      (4) Lines 134-140: Is there a way to calibrate levels of secreted protein or amylase activity per nucleus? That is, if the ratio of cytoplasmic volume per nucleus is constant, does the same apply to the secreted product? Knowing this would help to clarify whether the key feature in enhanced secretion is nuclear (e.g., gene expression) versus a cytoplasmic trait (e.g., vesicle trafficking). 

      Enzyme activity was measured across the entire mycelium, which includes a mixture of hyphae with high and low numbers of nuclei. Therefore, it is difficult to assess the correlation between enzyme activity and nuclear number. Enzyme activity was normalized by fungal biomass. The size of each colony is shown in Fig. 1B. Additionally, the correlation between the proportion of hyphae with increased nuclear number and enzyme activity is shown in Fig. 3H. In the experiment where enzyme activity was measured in a single hypha, we attempted to measure the number of nuclei; however, we could not use the nuclear GFP strain because the substrate exhibits green fluorescence. DAPI staining also failed due to limited dye access to the microfluidic channel. Changed the section title, ‘Increase in nuclear number and enzyme secretion’ from ‘Correlation between nuclear number and enzyme secretion’.

      (5) Line 151 and Figure 3F: YE also triggered a ~5-fold enhancement of secretion in A. nidulans without a concomitant increase in hyphal width. This merits some comment in the text.  

      Added an explanation, L156-157.

      In A. nidulans, the addition of yeast extract did not cause a dramatic increase in nuclear number, but hyphal width increased by 1.4-times and protein secretion increased by 5.1-times.

      (6) Line 252: Were nimE levels detected or altered in thick hyphae? The levels of this cycling might play a more important role in a shortened cell cycle than the authors have considered, especially as NimE functions during both G1 and G2. 

      Added an explanation below, L260-262.

      The expression level of nimE (AO090003000993) was low in both thick and thin hyphae, with no significant difference observed. As known in other organisms, its function is likely regulated through phosphorylation and the protein degradation.

      (7) Line 254: Please provide a citation for the statement that branches emerge as a result of cell wall loosening. 

      rephrased and added citation, L263.

      Branching is thought to occur through the degradation and reconstruction of the cell wall at the branching site (54).

      Harris SD. Branching of fungal hyphae: regulation, mechanisms and comparison with other branching systems. Mycologia 100, 823-32 (2008).   

      (8) Lines 275-277: It would be interesting to know whether the addition of rapamycin also suppressed the ability of amino acids to trigger greater numbers of class III hyphae. 

      We added new results at Fig. S2G.

      L168. Rapamycin decreased the ratio of hyphae with increased nuclei even in the medium with yeast extract (Fig. S2G).

      (9) Lines 282-289: My sense is that this model is too speculative at this time. The role of RseA seems very broad based on the strong deletion phenotype. How would the removal of RseA be regulated to limit its effect to the branch site? Also, the msyA deletion phenotype isn't entirely consistent with what you would expect if it were necessary to maintain thick hyphae. Lastly, the authors do not show that translational capacity is enhanced in thick hyphae. I would suggest that these statements be tempered to some degree. 

      Thank you for your comment. We agree that it was too speculative, whereas we believe that some explanatory interpretation is necessary. Therefore, we have revised the text as follows, L294-300. In our model, cell wall loosening during branching and regulation of cell volume by turgor pressure constitute necessary conditions for increasing cell volume and maintaining thick hyphae. RseA and MsyA may be involved in these processes. At the same time, enhanced translational capacity by increased expression of ribosomal genes, possibly due to associated with TOR activation by specific amino acids, and mechanisms that accelerate the cell cycle represent another essential condition that enables an increase in nuclear number.

      (10) General: how do the authors reconcile the observation that YE and amino acids stimulate the formation of thicker hyphae, yet the time lapse imaging (Figure 2E) suggests that these hyphae arise at a later time during colony development when these resources might be limiting? The authors should consider providing some insight into this in the Discussion. 

      L300-305. Added a discussion below.

      Both genetic potential and nutritional environmental signals are likely required for the formation of thick hyphae with a high number of nuclei. When thick hyphae were cultured on fresh medium, thin hyphae initially emerged, suggesting the necessity of sustained high metabolic activity.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The behaviour of cells expressing constitutively active HRas is examined in mosaic monolayers, both in MCF10a breast epithelial and Beas2b bronchial epithelial cell lines, mimicking the potential initial phase of development of carcinoma. Single HRas-positive cells are excluded from MCF10a but not Beas2b monolayers. Most interestingly, however, when in groups, these cells are not excluded, but rather sharply segregated within a MCF10a monolayer. In contrast, they freely mix with wt Beas2b cells. Biophysical analysis identifies high tension at heterotypic interfaces between HRas and wild-type cells as the likely reason for segregation of MCF10a cells. The hypothesis is supported experimentally, as myosin inhibition abolishes segregation. The probable reason for the lack of segregation in the bronchial epithelium is to be found in the different intrinsic properties of these cells, which form a looser tissue with lower basal actomyosin activity. The behaviour of single cells and groups is recapitulated in a vortex model based on the principle of differential interfacial tension, under the condition of high heterotypic interfacial tension.

      Strengths:

      Despite being long recognized as a crucial event during cancer development, segregation of oncogenic cells has been a largely understudied question. This nice work addresses the mechanics of this phenomenon through a straightforward experimental design, applying the biophysical analytical approaches established in the field of morphogenesis. Comparison between two cell types provides some preliminary clues on the diversity of effects in various cancers.

      Weaknesses:

      Although not calling into question the main message of this study, there are a few issues that one may want to address:

      (1) One may be careful in interpreting the comparison between MCF10a and Beas2b cells as used in this study. The conditions may not necessarily be representative of the actual properties of breast and bronchial epithelia. How much of the epithelial organization is reconstituted under these experimental conditions remains to be established. This is particularly obvious for bronchial cells, which would need quite specific culture conditions to build a proper bronchial layer. In this study, they seemed to be on the verge of a mesenchymal phenotype (large gaps, huge protrusions, cells growing on top of each other, as mentioned in the manuscript).

      As an alternative to Beas2b, comparison of MCF10a with another cell line capable of more robust in vitro epithelial organization, but ideally with different adhesive and/or tensile properties, would be highly interesting, as it may narrow down the parameters involved in segregation of oncogenic cells.

      (2) While the seminal description of tissue properties based on interfacial tensions (Brodland 2002) is clearly key to interpreting these data, the actual "Differential Interfacial Tension Hypothesis" poses that segregation results from global differences, i.e., juxtaposition of two tissues displaying different intrinsic tensions. On the contrary, the results of the present work support a different scenario, where what counts is the actual difference in tension ALONG the tissue boundary, in other words, that segregation is driven by high HETEROTYPIC interfacial tension. This is an important distinction that should be clarified.

      (3) Related: The fact that actomyosin accumulates at the heterotypic interface is key here. It would be quite informative to better document the pattern of this accumulation, which is not clear enough from the images of the current manuscript: Are we talking about the actual interface between mutant and wt cells (membrane/cortex of heterotypic contacts)? Or is it more globally overactivated in the whole cell layer along the border? Some better images and some quantification would help.

      (4) In the case of Beas2b cells, mutant cells show higher actin than wt cells, while actin is, on the contrary, lower in mutant MCF10a cells (Figure 2b). Has this been taken into account in the model? It may be in line with the idea that HRas may have a different action on the two cell types, a possibility that would certainly be worth considering and discussing.

      In conclusion, the study conveys an important message, but, as it stands, the strength of evidence is incomplete. It would greatly benefit from a more detailed and complete analysis of the experimental data, a better fit between this analysis and the corresponding vertex model, and a more in-depth discussion of biological and biophysical aspects. These revisions should be rather easily done, and would then make the evidence much more solid.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, Fontana et al. develop a paradigm for associative conditioning by pairing exposure to an alarm substance with a novel tank. Exposure to conspecific alarm substance (CAS) in the novel tank triggers freezing and what they characterize as evasive swimming behaviour, which is subsequently seen in a re-exposure to the novel tank without the CAS present. Importantly, these states are identified via automated processes, including postural tracking and a random forest classification process, which could be very useful tools for subsequent studies.

      In their experiments, they focus on the differences in behaviour among strains of zebrafish (both males and females), and among individual zebrafish. For males and females of different strains, they find some differences, though the clearest message seems to be that the most robust measure of the behaviour in response to both the CAS and in the memory trials is the freezing behaviour, while evasive behaviour is more variable. and not always seen. This may relate to their observation of significant "evasiveness" in vehicle control experiments (discussed further below).

      Moving on to individual variation from within this multi-strain male/female dataset, they first examine transition matrices between states and find tthat his is not dramatically altered by stimulus exposure. They then use clustering to identify 4 different "classes" of zebrafish that differ in their expression (or not) of two types of behaviour: freezing and/or evasive behaviour. They show that over the three exposure epochs of the experiment, this classification is somewhat stable in an individual fish, though many fish change their behaviour - e.g., evading + freezing -> only freezing.

      In the final set of experiments, the authors move beyond behavioural analyses and perform whole-brain cFos mapping of these individual zebrafish. They perform analyses aimed at identifying correlations between individual behavioural expression and the number of cFos-positive cells in different brain regions. Using partial least squares analysis, they find areas associated with two types of behavioural contrasts, which differ in their weighting of different behavioural expression during the Memory trials. Covariation and network structure analysis within different classes of larvae also find some differences in covariation among brain areas, providing hypotheses as to underlying network effects that may govern the expression of freezing and/or evasive behavior in the memory trial phases.

      Overall, I find this to be an interesting study that employs state of the are methods of behavioural analyses and whole-brain cFos analyses, but I am left a little bit confused as to what the take home message is and what can be concluded from this complex study that mixes in analyses of strain, sex, and individuality within a quite complex assay with multiple behavioural parameters.

      My suggestions are as follows:

      (1) My first concern relates to the claim in the abstract that "We found that fear memory behavior fell into four distinct groups: non-reactive, evaders, evading freezers, and freezers".

      In my opinion, the "freezing" aspect is well supported as being both triggered by the CAS and for memory effect upon re-exposure to the tank, but I am less convinced about the "evasive" behaviour. In Figure 2, it appears that "evasiveness" is generally not increased in both the Exposure or Memory phases for many groups, and in Figure 5, it appears that "evasiveness" is expressed by nearly 50% of the fish in the pre-exposure condition before CAS addition and in all phases in the vehicle condition. Therefore, it appears that most of the expression of this behaviour is independent of any memory-based effect.

      (2) My second concern relates to the claim in the abstract that "background strain and sex influenced how fish respond to CAS, with males more likely to increase evasive behaviors than females and the TU strain more likely to be non-reactive."

      My understanding, based on the introduction and on the methods, is that it is likely important that the CAS be prepared from conspecifics of the same strain and sex, and for this reason, they prepared different CAS specific for each strain and each sex. Therefore, the "CAS" that is applied is necessarily different for each condition, and I am concerned about if the differences observed could relate more to variation in the quality, purity, concentration, etc. of the specific CAS samples for different groups, rather than their reactivity to the substance or their ability to form memories based on such experiences.

      (3) My third concern relates to the interpretation of the cFos data.

      As I mentioned above, I feel as though the behavioural analysis is perhaps more complex than is warranted via the inclusion of evasiveness, and I wonder if the conclusions from the experiments would be simpler if analyzed only from the perspective of freezing.

      But considering the presented analyses: while I dont think there is anything wrong with the partial least squares approach and the network analyses, I am concerned that the simple messaging in the text does not reflect the complexity of this analysis combining different weightings of different behavioural characteristics in a behavioural contrast, or covariations among many regions and what such analyses mean at the level of brain function. For these reasons, I feel like statements along the lines of "Behavioral variation is driven by differences in the activity of brain regions outside the telencephalon, such as the cerebellum, preglomerular nuclei, preoptic area and hypothalamus" are not well supported.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript describes experiments characterising how malaria parasites respond to physiologically relevant heat-shock conditions. The authors show, quite convincingly, that moderate heat-shock appears to increase cytoadherance, likely by increasing trafficking of surface proteins involved in this process.

      While generally of a high quality and including a lot of data, I have a few small questions and comments, mainly regarding data interpretation.

      (1) The authors use sorbitol lysis as a proxy for trafficking of PSAC components. This is a very roundabout way of doing things and does not, I think, really show what they claim. There could be a myriad of other reasons for this increased activity (indeed, the authors note potential PSAC activation under these conditions). One further reason could be a difference in the membrane stability following heat shock, which may affect sorbitol uptake, or the fragility of the erythrocytes to hypotonic shock. I really suggest that the authors stick to what they show (increased PSAC) without trying to use this as evidence for increased trafficking of a number of non-specified proteins that they cannot follow directly.

      (2) Supplementary Figure 6C/D: The KAHRP signal does not look like it should. In fact, it doesn't look like anything specific. The HSP70-X signal is also blurry and overexposed. These pictures cannot be used to justify the authors' statements about a lack of colocalisation in any way.

      (3) Figure 6: This experiment confuses me. The authors purport to fractionate proteins using differential lysis, but the proteins they detect are supposed to be transmembrane proteins and thus should always be found associated with the pellet, whether lysis is done using equinatoxin or saponin. Have they discovered a currently unknown trafficking pathway to tell us about? Whilst there is a lot of discussion about the trafficking pathways for TM proteins through the host cell, a number of studies have shown that these proteins are generally found in a membrane-bound state. The authors should elaborate, or choose an experiment that is capable of showing compartment-specific localisation of membrane-bound proteins (protease protection, for example).

      (4) The red blood cell contains, in addition to HSP70-X, a number of human HSPs (HSP70 and HSP90 are significant in this current case). As the name suggests, these proteins non-specifically shield exposed hydrophobic domains revealed upon partial protein unfolding following thermal insult. I would thus have expected to find significantly more enrichment following heat shock, but this is not the case. Is it possible that the physiological heat shock conditions used in this current study are not high enough to cause a real heat shock?

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript from Jones and colleagues investigates a previously described phenomenon in which P. falciparum malaria parasites display increased trafficking of proteins displayed on the surface of infected RBCs, as well as increased cytoadherence in response to febrile temperatures. While this parasite response was previously described, it was not uniformly accepted, and conflicting reports can be found in the literature. This variability likely arises due to differences in the methods employed and the degree of temperature increase to which the parasites were exposed. Here, the authors are very careful to employ a temperature shift that likely reflects what is happening in infected humans and that they demonstrate is not detrimental to parasite viability or replication. In addition, they go on to investigate what steps in protein trafficking are affected by exposure to increased temperature and show that the effect is not specific to PfEMP1 but rather likely affects all transmembrane domain-containing proteins that are trafficked to the RBC. They also detect increased rates of phosphorylation of trafficked proteins, consistent with overall increased protein export.

      Strengths:

      The authors used a relatively mild increase in temperature (39 degrees), which they demonstrate is not detrimental to parasite viability or replication. This enabled them to avoid potential complications of a more severe heat shock that might have affected previously published studies. They employed a clever method of fractionation of RBCs infected with a var2csa-nanoluc fusion protein expressing parasite line to determine which step in the export pathway was likely accelerating in response to increased temperature. This enabled them to determine that export across the PVM is being affected. They also explored changes in phosphorylation of exported proteins and demonstrated that the effect is not limited to PfEMP1 but appears to affect numerous (or potentially all) exported transmembrane domain-containing proteins.

      Weaknesses:

      All the experiments investigating changes resulting from increased temperature were conducted after an increase in temperature from 16 to 24 hours, with sampling or assays conducted at the 24 hr mark. While this provided consistency throughout the study, this is a time point relatively early in the export of proteins to the RBC surface, as shown in Figure 1E. At 24 hrs, only approximately 50% of wildtype parasites are positive for PfEMP1, while at 32 hrs this approaches 80%. Since the authors only checked the effect of heat stress at 24 hrs, it is not possible to determine if the changes they observe reflect an overall increase in protein trafficking or instead a shift to earlier (or an accelerated) trafficking. In other words, if a second time point had been considered (for example, 32 hrs or later), would the parasites grown in the absence of heat stress catch up?

      We did not assess cytoadhesion at later stages, but in the supplementary figures we show that at 40 hours post infection both heat stress and control conditions have comparable proportions of VAR2CSA-positive iRBCs, whilst they differ at 24h. This is true for the DMSO (control wildtype resembling) HA-tagged lines of HSP70x and PF3D7_072500 (Supplementary Figures 9 and 12 respectively). In the light that protein levels appear not changed, we conclude that trafficking is accelerated during these earlier timepoints, but remains comparable at later stages. This would still increase the overall bound parasite mass as parasites start to adhere earlier during or after a heat stress.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript describes experiments characterising how malaria parasites respond to physiologically relevant heat-shock conditions. The authors show, quite convincingly, that moderate heat-shock appears to increase cytoadherance, likely by increasing trafficking of surface proteins involved in this process.

      While generally of a high quality and including a lot of data, I have a few small questions and comments, mainly regarding data interpretation.

      (1) The authors use sorbitol lysis as a proxy for trafficking of PSAC components. This is a very roundabout way of doing things and does not, I think, really show what they claim. There could be a myriad of other reasons for this increased activity (indeed, the authors note potential PSAC activation under these conditions). One further reason could be a difference in the membrane stability following heat shock, which may affect sorbitol uptake, or the fragility of the erythrocytes to hypotonic shock. I really suggest that the authors stick to what they show (increased PSAC) without trying to use this as evidence for increased trafficking of a number of non-specified proteins that they cannot follow directly.

      This is a valid point, however, uninfected RBCs do not lyse following heat stress, nor do much younger iRBCs, indicating that the observed effect is specific to infected RBCs at a defined stage. The sorbitol sensitivity assay is performed at 37°C under normal conditions after cells are returned to non–heat stress temperatures, so the effect is not due to transient changes in membrane permeability at elevated temperature. 

      Planned experiment: However, to increase the strength of our conclusions and further test our hypothesis, we will perform sorbitol sensitivity assays on >20 hours post infection iRBCs following heat stress in the presence and absence of furosemide, a PSAC inhibitor. If iRBC lysis is abolished with furosemide present, this would confirm that the effect is PSAC-dependent. However, the effect could also possibly be due to altered PSAC activity during heat stress which is maintained at lower temperatures, as outlined in the discussion.

      (2) Supplementary Figure 6C/D: The KAHRP signal does not look like it should. In fact, it doesn't look like anything specific. The HSP70-X signal is also blurry and overexposed. These pictures cannot be used to justify the authors' statements about a lack of colocalisation in any way.

      Planned experiment: We agree that the IFAs are not the best as presented and will include better quality supplementary images in a revised version.

      (3) Figure 6: This experiment confuses me. The authors purport to fractionate proteins using differential lysis, but the proteins they detect are supposed to be transmembrane proteins and thus should always be found associated with the pellet, whether lysis is done using equinatoxin or saponin. Have they discovered a currently unknown trafficking pathway to tell us about? Whilst there is a lot of discussion about the trafficking pathways for TM proteins through the host cell, a number of studies have shown that these proteins are generally found in a membrane-bound state. The authors should elaborate, or choose an experiment that is capable of showing compartment-specific localisation of membrane-bound proteins (protease protection, for example).

      We do not believe we identified a novel trafficking pathway, but that we capture trafficking intermediates of PfEMP1 between the PVM and the RBC periphery, in either small vesicles, and/ or possibly Maurer’s clefts. These would still be membrane embedded, but because of their small size, not be pelleted using the centrifugation speeds in our study (we did not use ultracentrifugation). This explanation, we believe, is in line with the current hypothesis of PfEMP1 and other exported TMD protein trafficking to the periphery or the Maurer’s clefts.

      (4) The red blood cell contains, in addition to HSP70-X, a number of human HSPs (HSP70 and HSP90 are significant in this current case). As the name suggests, these proteins non-specifically shield exposed hydrophobic domains revealed upon partial protein unfolding following thermal insult. I would thus have expected to find significantly more enrichment following heat shock, but this is not the case. Is it possible that the physiological heat shock conditions used in this current study are not high enough to cause a real heat shock?

      As noted by the reviewer, we do not see enrichment of red blood cell heat shock proteins following heat stress, either with FIKK10.2-TurboID or in the phosphoproteome. We used a physiologically relevant heat stress that significantly modifies the iRBC, as shown by our functional assays. While a higher temperature might induce an association of red blood cell heat shock proteins, such conditions may not accurately reflect the most commonly found context of malaria infection.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, it is established that high fever-like 39 C temperatures cause parasite-infected red blood cells to become stickier. It is thought that high temperatures might help the spleen to destroy parasite-infected cells, and they become stickier in order to remain trapped in blood vessels, so they stop passing through the spleen.

      Strengths:

      The strength of this research is that it shows that fever-like temperatures can cause parasite-infected red blood cells to stick to surfaces designed to mimic the walls of small blood vessels. In a natural infection, this would cause parasite-infected red blood cells to stop circulating through the spleen, where the parasites would be destroyed by the immune system. It is thought that fevers could lead to infected red blood cells becoming stiffer and therefore more easily destroyed in the spleen. Parasites respond to fevers by making their red blood cells stickier, so they stop flowing around the body and into the spleen. The experiments here prove that fever temperatures increase the export of Velcro-like sticky proteins onto the surface of the infected red blood cells and are very thorough and convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      A minor weakness of the paper is that the effects of fever on the stiffness of infected red blood cells were not measured. This can be easily done in the laboratory by measuring how the passage of infected red blood cells through a bed of tiny metal balls is delayed under fever-like temperatures.

      Previous work by Marinkovic et al. (cited in this manuscript) reported that all RBCs, both infected and uninfected, increase in stiffness at 41 °C compared with 37 °C, with trophozoites and schizonts exhibiting a particularly pronounced increase. We agree that it would be interesting to determine whether similar changes occur at physiological fever-like temperatures, and whether this increase in stiffness coincides with the period of elevated protein trafficking. However, since we have already demonstrated enhanced protein export using multiple complementary approaches, we have chosen to address these questions in a follow-up study.

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      @Robert could we expand from 1) first 6 months and 2) latter 6 months to 1) months 1-6, 2) months 6-12, 3) months 13-18, and 4) months 19-24? With the additional data from more recent Vestrum deliverables, we ought to have sufficient followup for two years of Vabysmo utilization

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    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      We would like to express our sincere gratitude to the reviewers for their thorough analysis of the manuscript and their extremely helpful comments. We have taken all the suggestions into consideration and conducted a range of additional experiments to address the points raised. We have also extensively revised the manuscript to clarify descriptions, correct inaccuracies and remove inconsistencies. We have modified the figures for clarity and content.

      Overall, we expanded the description of the EBH structure to emphasise its dimeric nature and the impact of the two binding sites on interpreting the binding data, including cooperativity. Using ITC, we tested the effect of the pre-SxIP residues on the binding affinity with additional peptides. We found that these residues had a significant effect, albeit much smaller than that of the post-SxIP residues. We analysed the binding of the 11MACF-VLL mutant with EBH-ΔC and evaluated the exchange rates. In agreement with our model, we found that the EBH affinity for the SxIP peptide from CK5P2 (KKSRLPRILIKRSR), which has a C-terminal sequence similar to that of the 11MACF-VLLRK mutant, is 21nM, which is similar to the affinity of the mutant itself. This demonstrates the significant variation in affinity observed among natural SxIP ligands, as predicted by our study. Our responses to the specific points raised by the reviewers are provided below.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      There is no direct experimental evidence for independent dock and lock steps. The model is certainly plausible given their structural data, but all titration and CEST measurements are fully consistent with a simple one-step binding mechanism. Indeed, it is acknowledged that the results for the VLL peptide are not consistent with the predictions of this model, as affinity and dissociation rates do not co-vary. The model may still be a helpful way to interpret and discuss their results, and may indeed be the correct mechanism, but this has not yet been proven.

      Unfortunately, it is not possible to obtain direct experimental evidence because the folding of the C-terminus is too fast to influence the NMR parameters. However, as the reviewer pointed out, our structural data support the two-step model, since folding of the C-terminus is only possible once the ligand containing the post-SxIP residues has bound. By adopting a mechanistically supported model, we can analyse the contributions to binding and relate them to the structural characteristics of the complex. This provides a clearer insight into the roles of the various regions in the interaction and allows to modify them rationally to enhance the ligand affinity.

      In the revised version, we restate the equations in terms of comparing the on-rates. This provides a clearer view of the effect of the additional stage, which cannot increase the overall on-rate since the two stages are sequential. If the forward rate of the second stage is comparable to or slower than the off-rate of the first stage, the overall on-rate decreases. Conversely, if the forward rate is much faster, the overall on-rate remains unchanged. For the wild-type 11MACF peptide, we observed that the presence of the EBH C-terminus does not affect the on-rate of binding, which is in perfect agreement with the two-step model and indicates that the C-terminus folds very quickly.

      Additionally, we evaluated the binding of the 11MACF-VLL mutant to EBH-ΔC and observed a twofold decrease in Kd compared to WT 11MAC, primarily due to an increase in the on-rate. Interestingly, this rate is approximately twice as low as the overall on-rate for EBH/11MACF-VLL binding, contradicting the sequential two-step model. This suggests a more complex binding process where binding is accelerated by additional hydrophobic interactions with the unfolded C-terminus. However, given the difficulty of quantifying very slow exchange rates, it is more likely that the discrepancy is due to the accuracy of the rate measurements. Therefore, the model allows the rational analysis of changes in binding parameters due to mutations.

      There is little discussion of the fact that binding occurs to EBH dimers -  either in terms of the functional significance of this or in the  acquisition and analysis of their data. There is no discussion of  cooperation in binding (or its absence), either in the analysis of NMR  titrations or in ITC measurements. Complete ITC fit results have not  been reported so it is not possible to evaluate this for oneself.

      We added information about the dimer to the introduction, emphasising its role in enhancing interaction with microtubules (MTs) and its structural role in SxIP binding. The ITC data do not exhibit any biphasic behaviour and can be fitted to a single-site model with 1:1 stoichiometry relative to the EB1c monomer. This corresponds to two independent binding sites in the dimer. We have added the stoichiometry to Table 1 and the description. The NMR titration data for the 11MACF and 11MACF-VLL interactions were fitted to the TITAN dimer model, which includes cooperativity parameters. For WT 11MACF, both cooperativity parameters were zero, corresponding to independent binding sites in the ITC model. For 11MACF-VLL, the fitting suggests weak negative cooperativity, with a ~3-fold increase in Kd for binding to the second site and no change in the off-rate. This difference in Kd is likely to be too small to induce a biphasic shape to the ITC curve. As the cooperativity effect on the NMR spectra is small and absent in the ITC, we used the independent sites model for data analysis, as there is insufficient justification for introducing extra parameters into the model. Crucially, fitting to this model did not alter the off-rate value obtained by NMR or affect the conclusions. We added a description of cooperativity to the results and discussion.

      Three peptides are used to examine the role of C-terminal residues in SxIP motifs: 4-MACF (SKIP), 6-MACF (SKIPTP), and 11-MACF (KPSKIPTPQRK). The 11-mer demonstrates the strongest binding, but this has added residues to the N-terminal as well. It has also introduced charges at both termini, further complicating the interpretation of changes in binding affinities. Given this, I do not believe the authors can reasonably attribute increased affinities solely to post-SxIP residues.

      We tested the 9MACF peptide SKIPTPQRK, which has the same N-terminus as the 4- and 6-MACF peptides, and found that its binding affinity is ~10-fold weaker than that of 11MACF. This demonstrates the contribution of both the pre- and post-SxIP residues. This is likely due to electrostatic interactions between the positively charged N-terminus and the negatively charged EBH surface, similar to those involving the positive charges at the peptide C-terminus. Although significant, the contribution of the N-terminal peptide region is approximately one order of magnitude lower than that of the post-SxIP residues, meaning the post-SxIP region is the main affinity modulator. We have added the binding data on 9MACF and a discussion of the contributions to the manuscript.

      Experimental uncertainties are, with exceptions, not reported.

      Uncertainties added to the number in Table 1 and the text. Information on how uncertainties were calculated added to Table 1.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) Have you tested the binding of the WT dimer in your cell model?

      We haven’t tested the WT dimer because it has already been reported in the 2009 Cell paper by Honappa et al. In the cell experiments, our main focus was on recruiting the high-affinity mutant to MTs. The low level of recruitment, despite the mutant's high affinity, highlights the importance of dimerisation or additional contributions to binding.

      (2) Please deposit all NMR dynamics measurements (relaxation rates and derived model-free parameters) alongside structural data in the BMRB.

      The relaxation data have been submitted to BMRB, IDs 53187 and 53188

      (3) Please report complete fitting results, e.g. for ITC, including stoichiometries. Clarify what this means for binding to a dimer, and if there is any evidence of cooperativity. Figure 3C, right hand panel, shows an unusual stoichiometry, can the authors comment on this?

      We have added more information on stoichiometry and cooperativity; please refer to our response to the above comment for details. We repeated the titration for the VLLRK mutant using fresh peptide stock. As expected, the stoichiometry was close to 1:1 relative to the EB1c monomer. The new data are now included in the table and figure.

      (4) Please report uncertainties for all measurements of Kd, koff, kon, ∆G, ∆H, ∆S, and explain whether these are determined from statistical analysis, technical or biological repeats (and where reported, clarify between standard deviation/standard error). Please also be aware of standard guidelines for reporting significant figures for data with uncertainties, as these have not been followed in Table 1.

      Uncertainties added to the number in Table 1 and the text. Information on how uncertainties were calculated added to Table 1.

      (5) The construct design for the cell model is unclear - given the importance of flanking residues, please report and discuss how the sequences are attached to venus: which termini is attached, and what is the linker composition?

      We cloned the peptides at the C-terminus of mTFP, after the GS linker of the vector. The peptide itself contains a GS sequence at the N-terminus, creating a highly flexible GSGS linker that separates the SxIP region from mTFP and minimises the potential effect of mTFP on binding. We followed the design of Honappa et al. to enable direct comparison with the published results. We have added this information to the 'Methods' section..

      (6) Which HSQC pulse sequence was used for 2D lineshape analysis? The authors mention non-linear chemical shift changes, presumably associated with the dimer interface - this would be useful to expand upon and clarify.

      For the lineshape analysis, we used the standard Bruker sequence hsqcfpf3gpphwg with soft-pulse watergate water suppression and flip-back. This sequence is included in the TITAN model. We added the description of the non-linear chemical shift changes and connection of these changes to the allosteric effect of the binding to the supplementary information describing details of the lineshape analysis.

      (7) Figure 1A could usefully highlight the dimer interface in the surface representation also.

      We believe that including the interface would make the figure too complicated. The dimer configuration is shown in different colours for the two subunits, clearly demonstrating their involvement in forming the binding site.

      (8) Figures 1C and 1D could usefully show a secondary structure schematic to assist the reader. The x-axis in these figures is not linear and this should be corrected. The calculation of combined chemical shift perturbations should be described.

      Thank you for the helpful suggestion. We changed the scale of the figures and added the diagram of the secondary structure.

      (9) Units are missing from many figure axes.

      We added missing units to the axes. Thank you for highlighting this.

      (10) What peptide concentrations are used in Figure 1C? Presumably, these should be reported at saturation for this to be a fair comparison, this should be clarified.

      The protein concentration was 50 µM. Peptides 4MACF and 6MACF were added at a 100-fold molar excess and peptide 11MACF was added at a 4-fold excess. Saturation was achieved for 11MACF. This was impossible for the short peptides due to their mM affinity. This information has been added to the figure legend. The figure's main aim is to illustrate the differences in the chemical shift perturbation profiles, which can be achieved even if full saturation is not attained. Although the absolute value of the chemical shifts is proportional to the degree of saturation, the distribution of the largest chemical shift changes is independent of this degree. Therefore, we can draw conclusions about the distribution of changes by comparing under non-saturation conditions.

      (11) The presentation of raw peak intensities in Figure 1D shows primarily the flexibility of the C-terminal region associated with high intensities. Beyond this, when comparing the binding of peptides it would be much more informative to show relative peak intensities. Residues around 210-225 appear to show strong broadening in the presence of peptide, but this is masked by the low initial intensity. Can the authors clarify and discuss this? Also, what peptide concentrations were used for this comparison? For a fair comparison, it should be close to saturation - particularly to exclude exchange broadening contributions.

      The protein concentration was 50 µM. 6MACF and 6MACF peptides were added at a 100-fold excess and 11MACF at a 4-fold excess. Saturation was achieved for 11MACF. This was impossible to achieve for the short peptide due to its mM affinity. This information has been added to the figure legend. Upon checking the data, we found a small systematic offset in the coiled-coil region of some of the complexes, as the integral intensity had been used in the initial plot. While this does not change the conclusion regarding the high dynamics of the C-terminus, it does create an inaccurate perception of the relative intensities of the folded regions in the different complexes, as noted by the reviewer. We have now plotted the amplitudes at the maximum of the peaks, which do not exhibit any systematic offset as they are much less susceptible to baseline distortions. We are grateful to the reviewer for highlighting this apparent discrepancy.

      (12) Figure 2 - the scale for S2 order parameters appears to be backwards, given the caption, but its range should be indicated. Similarly, the range of values for Rex should also be indicated. These data should also be tabulated/plotted in supporting information.

      We have corrected the figure legend and added S2 and Rex plots to the supplementary material. The figure aims to highlight regions of increased mobility, while the plots provide full quantitative information on the values. We thank the reviewer for pointing out the error in the figure legend and for the suggestions regarding the plots.

      (13) The scale in Figure 3B is illegible. Indeed, the whole structure is quite small and could usefully be expanded.

      We increased the size of the structure panels and added a scale.

      (14) Figure 4 does not show a decrease in exchange rates, as per the caption - no comparison of exchange rates is shown, only thermodynamic information in panel E. Panel C shows CEST measurements, but it is not clear what system this is for - please clarify, and consider showing the comparable data for the ∆C construct for comparison.

      We have amended the figure legend to clarify that the figure shows binding parameters. We added information about the CEST profiles for the EBH/11MACF interaction to the figure legend (Figure 4C). Exchange with the ∆C construct is too fast for CEST measurements. We used lineshape analysis to evaluate the exchange rates for this construct.

      (15) The schematics shown in Figure 4D, and elsewhere, are really quite difficult to understand. They may pose additional challenges to colourblind readers. Please consider ways that this could be clarified.

      We simplified the colour scheme in the model to make the colours easier to see and to highlight SxIP and non-SxIP regions. We believe that this improved the clarity of the figure.

      (16) Figures S1D/E - the x-axes are unclear and units are missing from the y-axes.

      We re-labelled the axes to clarify the scale and units. Thank you for pointing this.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      The C-terminal tail of EB1, which is adjacent to EBH and is not analyzed in this study, is highly acidic and plays an important role in protein interactions. If the authors discuss the C-terminus of EB1, they should analyze the whole C-terminus of EB1, which would strengthen the conclusion they have made.

      Honapa et al., Cell, 2009, reported chemical shift perturbations (CSPs) on the peptide binding for the full EB1c fragment, which includes the negatively charged C-terminus. Similar to our study, they observed significant CSPs in the FVIP region but negligible CSPs at the negatively charged EEY end. They concluded that the final eight EB1c residues did not contribute to binding and used a truncated EB1c construct for their structural analysis. Building on that study, we used the same EEY-truncated construct to analyse the contribution of the C-terminus in more detail. We believe that conducting additional experiments with the full C-terminus with respect to SxIP binding would be superfluous, as it would merely replicate the findings of Honapa EA. We have added the rationale for selecting the truncated EB1c construct to the text, referencing Honapa et al.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) Figure 2C: The authors can analyze the 11MACF peptide as well, to provide more assurance to their argument. It would be easier to distinguish the sequences of "SKIP" and "FVIP" by changing their colors.

      Our relaxation analysis (Fig. 2C) focuses on the dynamics of the unstructured C-terminal region in both the free and complex forms. Further relaxation analysis of the peptide would not provide additional information on this, and would be complicated by the presence of free peptide in solution.

      (2) Figure 3B: Acidic residues in EBH should be labeled.<br /> Page 6, line 11: If the authors insist that the acidic patch will influence the interactions between EB1 and the peptide, the data of the analysis using the entire EB1 C-terminus should be included, given that the C-terminal tail of EB1 is highly acidic.

      To test the contribution of charge to binding, we conducted an ITC experiment at increasing salt concentrations. We observed a significant increase in Kd values when the concentration of NaCl increased from 50 to 150 mM, which supports our conclusion regarding the significant electrostatic contribution. This conclusion is independent of the presence or absence of the C-terminus.

      As we explained earlier, Honapa et al., Cell 2009, conducted an NMR experiment on the full EB1c and observed no CPSs in the EEY region, indicating a negligible contribution from the EEY region to SxIP binding. Therefore, we think that additional experiments involving the entire C-terminus are unnecessary, as they would simply replicate the results of Honapa et al. We have added the rationale for selecting the truncated EB1c to the text, referencing Honapa et al.

      It would be very difficult to label the acidic residues without enlarging 3B considerably. However, we do not think this is necessary as we are not discussing any specific residues. The current figure shows the distribution of the surface charge, which is sufficient for our purposes.

      (3) Figure 2B (Page 4, line 27): The side chain of S5477 should be drawn. The authors should include a figure of the crystal structure of EBH and SxIP as a comparison (Honnappa et al., Cell, 2009). In their paper, Honnappa et al. performed chemical shift perturbation titrations by NMR. From their analysis, I imagine that the EB1 tail may not be critical for the EB1 C-terminus:SxIP interactions, since the signals in the tail are not significantly perturbed. The authors should cite this paper.

      We are grateful to the reviewer for highlighting this. CSP analysis of the Honapa EA revealed significant changes in the FVIP region, which we also observed. They also reported negligible CSPs at the EEY end, demonstrating that this part of the tail is non-critical and can be removed. We have added text to the manuscript to highlight the similarity between CSPs and those observed in Honapa EA. Figure 2B shows the side chains for the residues with the strongest detected contacts. These do not include S5477.

      (4) Figure 3C (ITC data): The stoichiometric ratios in the ITC data look strange. EBH vs KPSKIPVLLRKRK, is it 1:1?

      We repeated the ITC experiments using a new stock of the peptide and a new batch of the protein, checking the concentrations using UV spectroscopy. The new experiments produced a stoichiometry close to 1, as shown in the table.

      (5) Page 10, line 27: "The TPQ sequence of 11MACF is not optimal...": What is the meaning of "optimal"? The transient interaction between EB1 and its binding partner is responsible for the dynamics of the microtubule cytoskeleton. In a sense, the relatively weak interaction is "optimal" for the system. The authors should rephrase the word.

      We agree that weak interactions are optimal from a functional perspective, as they have been selected through evolution. In our case, 'optimal' refers to the hydrophobic interaction with the C-terminus. We replaced 'optimal' with 'ideal' to draw more attention to the second part of the sentence, which clarifies the context.

      (6) Page 11, line 2: "small number of comets enriched in the peptide that were too faint for the quantitative analysis, comparable to the reported previously (Honnappa, Gouveia et al. 2009)." Honnappa et al. used EGFP-fusion constructs in their study: EGFP forms a weak dimer, which presumably gave different results from the authors' mTFP-constructs. The authors can note this point in the text.

      We are grateful to the reviewer for highlighting this. This aligns well with our conclusion that dimerisation is important for localisation to comets. We have added this point to the text.

      (7) Page 10, line 21: The authors calculate the free energy of complex formation between EBH and MACF peptide and explain in the text, but it is hard to follow.

      We simplified and clarified the description of the energy contributions by focusing on the SxIP and non-SxIP regions of the peptide, as well as the EBH C-terminus.

      Minor points:

      Page 2, line 9: IP motifs are not usually located in the C-terminus. For example, SxIP in Tastin is located in the N-terminal region, and SxIPs in CLASP are in the middle.

      We corrected this statement, removing C-terminal.

      Page 3, line 4: The authors should note the residue numbers of SKIP.

      We think that in this context the residue number of the SxIP region are not important and would be distracting.

      Figure 3D and Figure S3F: Make the colors and the order the same between the two figures.

      We changed the colour scheme and the order of ITC parameters in S3F to match the main figure.

      Figure 1A, 2B, Figure S5: Change the color of SKIP from other residues in the same chain, otherwise the readers cannot distinguish. Likewise, change the color of FVIP in Figure 2B.

      We think that changing the colours will complicate the figures unnecessary. The corresponding residues are clearly labelled in the figures.

      Figure 3, Figure S5, S6, S7: Box the letters of SKIP for clarity.

      We boxed the SxIP region in S5 (new S6) and underlined in S6 (new S7). In S7 (new S8) the location of SxIP is very clear from the homology.

      Figure 3B; Figure S2: Hard to recognize the peptide (MACF in green).

      We increased the size of 3D and S2, making it easier to see the peptide.

      Figure 1C and D: Make the residual numbers of the x-axes the same between the two graphs.

      We made new plots with a linear scale for the residue numbers.

      Figure 2A: The structures shown are not EB1. It should be described as EBH or EB1(191-260 a.a.).

      Corrected.

      Page 5, line 17: "the S2 values of the C-terminus" should be "the S2 values of the C-terminal loop in EBH", otherwise it is confusing.

      Corrected.

      Page 6, line 27; Figure S3C and S6: Please indicate the assignments of the resonances from "253FVI255" in the Figures.

      We labelled the peaks corresponding to the 253FVI255 region in figure S6 (new S7). Figure S3 shows EBH-ΔC that does not include this region.

      Page 7, line 25: Figure S7 should be S8.

      Corrected

      Page 12, line 6: "sulfatrahsferases" must by a typo.

      Corrected.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper formulates an individual-based model to understand the evolution of division of labor in vertebrates. The model considers a population subdivided in groups, each group has a single asexually-reproducing breeder, other group members (subordinates) can perform two types of tasks called "work" or "defense", individuals have different ages, individuals can disperse between groups, each individual has a dominance rank that increases with age, and upon death of the breeder a new breeder is chosen among group members depending on their dominance. "Workers" pay a reproduction cost by having their dominance decreased, and "defenders" pay a survival cost. Every group member receives a survival benefit with increasing group size. There are 6 genetic traits, each controlled by a single locus, that control propensities to help and disperse, and how task choice and dispersal relate to dominance. To study the effect of group augmentation without kin selection, the authors cross-foster individuals to eliminate relatedness. The paper allows for the evolution of the 6 genetic traits under some different parameter values to study the conditions under which division of labour evolves, defined as the occurrence of different subordinates performing "work" and "defense" tasks. The authors envision the model as one of vertebrate division of labor.

      The main conclusion of the paper is that group augmentation is the primary factor causing the evolution of vertebrate division of labor, rather than kin selection. This conclusion is drawn because, for the parameter values considered, when the benefit of group augmentation is set to zero, no division of labor evolves and all subordinates perform "work" tasks but no "defense" tasks.

      Strengths:

      The model incorporates various biologically realistic details, including the possibility to evolve age polytheism where individuals switch from "work" to "defence" tasks as they age or vice versa, as well as the possibility of comparing the action of group augmentation alone with that of kin selection alone.

      Weaknesses:

      The model and its analysis is limited, which makes the results insufficient to reach the main conclusion that group augmentation and not kin selection is the primary cause of the evolution of vertebrate division of labor. There are several reasons.

      First, the model strongly restricts the possibility that kin selection is relevant. The two tasks considered essentially differ only by whether they are costly for reproduction or survival. "Work" tasks are those costly for reproduction and "defense" tasks are those costly for survival. The two tasks provide the same benefits for reproduction (eqs. 4, 5) and survival (through group augmentation, eq. 3.1). So, whether one, the other, or both tasks evolve presumably only depends on which task is less costly, not really on which benefits it provides. As the two tasks give the same benefits, there is no possibility that the two tasks act synergistically, where performing one task increases a benefit (e.g., increasing someone's survival) that is going to be compounded by someone else performing the other task (e.g., increasing that someone's reproduction). So, there is very little scope for kin selection to cause the evolution of labour in this model. Note synergy between tasks is not something unusual in division of labour models, but is in fact a basic element in them, so excluding it from the start in the model and then making general claims about division of labour is unwarranted. I made this same point in my first review, although phrased differently, but it was left unaddressed.

      Second, the parameter space is very little explored. This is generally an issue when trying to make general claims from an individual-based model where only a very narrow parameter region has been explored of a necessarily particular model. However, in this paper, the issue is more evident. As in this model the two tasks ultimately only differ by their costs, the parameter values specifying their costs should be varied to determine their effects. Instead, the model sets a very low survival cost for work (yh=0.1) and a very high survival cost for defense (xh=3), the latter of which can be compensated by the benefit of group augmentation (xn=3). Some very limited variation of xh and xn is explored, always for very high values, effectively making defense unevolvable except if there is group augmentation. Hence, as I stated in my previous review, a more extensive parameter exploration addressing this should be included, but this has not been done. Consequently, the main conclusion that "division of labor" needs group augmentation is essentially enforced by the limited parameter exploration, in addition to the first reason above.

      Third, what is called "division of labor" here is an overinterpretation. When the two tasks evolve, what exists in the model is some individuals that do reproduction-costly tasks (so-called "work") and survival-costly tasks (so-called "defense"). However, there are really no two tasks that are being completed, in the sense that completing both tasks (e.g., work and defense) is not necessary to achieve a goal (e.g., reproduction). In this model there is only one task (reproduction, equation 4,5) to which both "tasks" contribute equally and so one task doesn't need to be completed if the other task compensates for it. So, this model does not actually consider division of labor.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Jiang et al. present a measure of phenological lag by quantifying the effects of abiotic constraints on the differences between observed and expected phenological changes, using a combination of previously published phenology change data for 980 species, and associated climate data for study sites. They found that, across all samples, observed phenological responses to climate warming were smaller than expected responses for both leafing and flowering spring events. They also show that data from experimental studies included in their analysis exhibited increased phenological lag compared to observational studies, possibly as a result of reduced sensitivity to climatic changes. Furthermore, the authors present compelling evidence that spatial trends in phenological responses to warming may differ from what would be expected from phenological sensitivity, due to the seasonal timing of when warming occurs. Thus, climate change may not result in geographic convergences of phenological responses. This study presents an interesting way to separate the individual effects of climate change and other abiotic changes on the phenological responses across sites and species.

      Greater phenological lag with experimental studies results in reduced sensitivity to climatic changes, not other way around.

      Strengths:

      A clearly defined and straightforward mathematical definition of phenological lag allows for this method to be applied in different scientific contexts. Where data exists, other researchers can partition the effects of various abiotic forcings on phenological responses that differ from those expected from warming sensitivity alone.

      Sensitivity does not tell the magnitude of phenological changes, nor does it provide indications of mechanisms responsible for changes in spring phenology. Because of uneven warming, the same average temperature change (annual or spring temperatures) can have greater (greater warming prior to budburst) or smaller (smaller warming prior to budburst) phenological change than that with even warming. When average temperature change is close to zero, uneven warming can lead to infinite sensitivity values, either advanced (warmer temperatures prior to budburst) or delayed (cooler temperatures prior to budburst) spring phenology.

      It is not clear why sensitivity is so popularly used in phenological research.

      Identifying phenological lag and associated contributing factors provides a method by which more nuanced predictions of phenological responses to climate change can be made. Thus, this study could improve ecological forecasting models.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors include very few data visualizations, and instead report results and model statistics in tables. This is difficult to interpret and may obscure underlying patterns in the data. Including visual representations of variable distributions and between-variable relationships, in addition to model statistics, provides stronger evidence than model statistics alone.

      The use of stepwise, automated regression may be less suitable than a hypothesis-driven approach to model selection, combined with expanded data visualization. The use of stepwise regression may produce inappropriate models based on factors of the sample data that may preclude or require different variable selection.

      We used two statistical methods, variance analysis to examine differential phenological responses (Figure 2) and regression analysis to determine the relative importance of forcing change, budburst temperature, and physiological lag, the drivers of changes in spring phenology (Table 2). Our objective was to understand why plants show differential responses by research approach, species origin, climatic region, and growth form identified in previous research. Variable selection may affect minor (altitude, latitude, MAT, and average spring temperature change) or insignificant (photoperiod and long-term precipitation) variables, but not those related to drivers of spring phenology. We are not sure how hypothesis-driven approach can help with our objective.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a meta-analysis of the relative contributions of spring forcing temperature, winter chilling, photoperiod and environmental variables in explaining plant flowering and leafing phenology. The authors develop a new summary variable called phenology lag to describe why species might have different responses than predicted by spring temperature.

      Strengths:

      The summary statistic is used to make a variety of comparisons, such as between observational studies and experimental studies.

      Weaknesses:

      By combining winter chilling effects, photoperiod effects, and environmental stresses that might affect phenology, the authors create a new variable that is hard to interpret. The authors do not provide information in the abstract about new insights that this variable provides.

      Phenological lag contains effects of all constraints that may include chilling effects, photoperiod effects, and environmental stresses and is, indeed, hard to interpret without investigation of individual constraints. In our synthesis, spring phenology (or photoperiod effect) is not significant across all studies complied. It is also unlikely that lack of winter chilling causes the systemic differences in phenological lag between observational and experimental studies or between native and exotic species (see discussion at lines 335-339). At individual study level, the contribution of different constraints to the overall lag effect can be specifically determined if moisture stresses, species chilling and photoperiod effects, or cold hardiness are known from on-site monitoring or previous research.

      The meaning of phenological lag is described at lines 34-38 in the abstract.

      Comments:

      It would be useful to have a map showing the sites of the studies.

      A map showing the sites of the studies was added as supplementary Figure S1.

      The authors should provide a section in which the strengths and weaknesses of the approach are discussed. Is it possible that mixing different types of data, studies, sample sizes, number of years, experimental set-ups, and growth habits results in artifacts that influence the results?

      Both strengths and weaknesses are discussed at various places throughout the paper. The weakness of our method, as indicated by the reviewer, is the inclusion of different constraints in the phenological lag and has been described at lines 34-38 in the abstract and lines 80-86 in the introduction of the concept. We have also expanded Conclusion section to discuss possible caveats at lines 369-393.

      As in all data analyses, the results can change with addition of more/different data, especially when sample size is relatively small. Ideally, comparisons are made among levels of fixed effects while controlling variations of other conditions. In phenological studies, however, climatic, phenological, and biological conditions all vary. For example, observational and experimental studies differ not only in the nature of warming (natural climate change vs artificial warming), but also in levels of warming (greater warming with experimental studies) and climatic, phenological, and biological conditions (Table 1). All phenological syntheses (or meta-analyses) have to make do with this uncontrolled nature of phenological data.

      Now that the authors have created this new variable, phenological lag, which of the components that contribute to it has the most influence on it? Or which components are most influential in which circumstances? For example, what are some examples where photoperiod causes a phenological lag?

      Any of the phenological constraints identified can contribute alone or in combination with others to the overall effect of phenological lag. Across all studies with this synthesis, the lack of significance with spring phenology rules out photoperiod effect, while the association of longer phenological lags with longer accumulation of winter chilling does not suggest general chilling shortage with the current extent of climate change.

      Although spring phenology is not significant across all studies, photoperiod effect can be influential at individual studies where changes in spring phenology are large. However, reported photoperiod effects in the literature are mostly confounding effects with temperatures, i.e., longer photoperiods are associated with longer hours of high daytime temperatures (see Chu et al., 2021). Other than European beech under an unlikely scenario of climate change (growth resumes at beginning of winter), there has been not clear evidence showing the effect of photoperiod in constraining spring phenology.

      Another confounding effect with photoperiod is extra heating effect with artificial light sources in warming experiments. Some early studies have shown that leaf temperature can be several degrees above the ambient air, due to long-wave radiation with artificial light sources. It is hard to believe the constraining effect of photoperiod on spring phenology if phenological changes are within inter-annual variations (can be a few weeks), although photoperiod effect has been increasingly discussed recently.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewing Editor:

      A key methodological concern is the inconsistent definition of growth temperature across observations. It is calculated over the interval between the baseline phenological date and the expected date under warming - a window that varies by species, site, and treatment. This variability limits comparability across observations and may introduce circularity, as growth temperature is derived from the same modelled expectation (i.e., the expected phenological advance) that it is later used to explain.

      The term “growth temperature” has been replaced with “budburst temperature” to indicate temperatures at species events. Budburst temperature is the average temperature within the window of expected response with the warmer climate and, as indicated by the editor, varies by species, sites, and treatments. This species-specific temperature provides an opportunity to compare among species, sites, and treatments and helps explain differences in observed responses, as demonstrated in the discussion of results in this synthesis.

      Forcing change, budburst temperature, and expected response are related. High budburst temperatures are associated with smaller expected responses, which helps explain smaller observed responses with late season species and areas of warm climates that have been often attributed to chilling or photoperiod effect.

      Additionally, the use of degree days above 0 {degree sign}C as a universal metric for spring forcing oversimplifies species' temperature responses. This approach assumes not only a fixed base temperature but also a linear response to temperature accumulation, which overlooks well-established nonlinear or species-specific thermal response curves. To improve the robustness and interpretability of the phenological lag framework, we encourage the authors to consider these limitations and explore ways to test or justify these modelling assumptions more explicitly.

      The use of 0 degree base temperature may not be the best choice for some species. Except for some early work, there has been few experimental research on physiological aspects of chilling and forcing processes. A popular alternative is modelling using assumed temperature response models. As variables influencing chilling and forcing processes are not controlled, the determined base temperatures and temperature response models may be OK with the species studied under particular conditions but would be inappropriate for applications beyond. It is hard to believe that species, in a study, all have different base temperature for accumulation of spring forcing and optimum temperature for winter chilling. Apparently, this is the result of model fitting, not actual dynamics of chilling and forcing processes.

      Two base temperatures are commonly used, 0 and 5 oC, although choice is not generally justified. It is known for long time that temperatures above 0oC contribute to spring forcing. My personal experience at tree nursery suggests that seedlings will flush after winter cold storage, even at forcing temperatures ≤ 5 oC in the dark. The use of 5 oC is rather the choice of tradition (5 oC is commonly used to define growing season) than scientific justification. The use of high base temperatures may not make much difference at high temperatures due to short forcing duration but will underestimate forcing at low temperatures due to long forcing duration and large proportions of forcing between 0 and base temperatures. We are not aware of any experimental studies that demonstrate non-zero base temperatures.

      Within the dominant range of spring temperatures (e.g., between 5 and 25 oC), the forcing responses to temperatures can be approximated with linear models. Again, we are not aware of any non-linear forcing models that can be safely applied beyond the species studied under particular conditions.

      Regardless, the uses of different base temperatures or forcing models would not affect the partitioning of phenological changes, simply because temperature response models reflect physiological aspects of chilling and forcing processes and would not change with climate warming.

      The authors introduce a new metric, phenological lag, to assess how phenological constraints influence spring phenology, offering new insights into phenological research. However, there are several concerns. First, the research question and the study's aim are not clearly presented. The authors primarily analyzed phenological lag and simply compared it across different groups, but additional analyses are needed to adequately address the research question. In addition, the broader importance of this study is not clearly explained - why this research is necessary and what it contributes to the field should be explicitly stated.

      The research question is outlined at lines 92-108. We added “Our objective was to determine how phenological responses differ among different groups and how differential responses are related to drivers of spring phenology, i.e., forcing change, budburst temperature, and phenological lag” at lines 106-108.

      (1) Abstract: The methodological improvements and more key results should be included.

      Growth temperature has been replaced with “budburst temperature” to indicate temperatures at time of budburst. More results are added at lines 40-48.

      (2) Line 32: Terms such as "sensitivity analysis" and "phenological lag" need clearer definitions.

      We added at lines 32-33 to define sensitivity analysis “that is based on rates of phenological changes, not on drivers of spring phenology”. Phenological lag is defined at lines 34-38.

      (3) Lines 38-47: Further results and the urgency or importance of the study should be conveyed.

      More results are added at lines 40-48. The importance of this study is described at lines 48-50.

      (4) Line 57-58: This sentence is unclear - please clarify.

      The sentence is modified to “difficult using sensitivity analysis that is based on rates of phenological changes, not on drivers of spring phenology".

      (5) Line 60: break "endodormancy".

      Breaking dormancy would mean endodormancy.

      (6) Line 67: What does "growth temperature" refer to?

      Growth temperature has been replaced with “budburst temperature” to indicate temperatures at time of budburst. It is calculated as the average temperature within the window of expected response with the warmer climate.

      (7) Lines 87-94: The specific purpose of the study is vague. Why is this method needed, and how will it serve future research?

      We have modified the paragraph at lines 92-108 to provide justification and objective of the study.

      (8) Lines 163-164: The rationale for exploring differences in observed responses and phenological lag needs to be better justified.

      We added explanations at lines 179-182 why observed responses and phenological lag were chosen in the analysis.

      (9) Lines 178-183: Tables and figures should be properly cited within the text.

      Table S3 was added at line 197.

      (10) Lines 195-198: Clarify whether variables were scaled before model analysis.

      We clarified at line 192 “variables were not standardized prior to regression analysis”.

      (11) Line 206-207: The observed response is presented as the number of advanced days, while temperature sensitivity refers to the response of spring phenology to temperature - these are different variables and should not be conflated.

      The two variables are related but show different aspects of phenological changes. Observed response divided by average temperature change gives temperature sensitivity. Observed response is the total changes in number of days observed, while temperature sensitivity is the change in number of days per unit change in average temperature (oC). Sensitivity may reflects rates of phenological change with temperature (see responses to reviewer 1).

      (12) In the discussion section, the authors compared phenological responses among different groups separately. This section requires substantial improvement to more clearly answer the research question.

      These discussions are related to our objective “how phenological responses differ among different groups identified in previous research (i.e., research approach, species origin, climatic region, and growth form) and how these differential responses are related to drivers of spring phenology, i.e., forcing change, budburst temperature, and phenological lag”.

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      • Informativo nº 859
      • 26 de agosto de 2025.
      • SEGUNDA TURMA
      • Processo: REsp 2.218.969-SP, Rel. Ministro Afrânio Vilela, Segunda Turma, por unanimidade, julgado em 19/8/2025.

      Ramo do Direito DIREITO ADMINISTRATIVO, DIREITO PROCESSUAL CIVIL

      Tutela do patrimônio histórico-cultural. Imóvel tombado. Restauração. Meras intenções e atos administrativos convergentes com a pretensão judicial. Perda de objeto. Inocorrência. Necessidade de atendimento integral do pedido. Condução estrutural da fase executória.

      Destaque - A mera intenção ou mesmo o início das obras de restauração de bem tombado não caracteriza por si só a perda de interesse processual, uma vez que o cumprimento integral da obrigação judicial é necessário para a extinção do processo por perda do objeto.

      Informações do Inteiro Teor - A questão em discussão consiste em saber se o início das obras de restauração do bem tombado pelo município caracteriza perda de interesse processual, tornando desnecessária a continuidade da demanda.

      • No caso, trata-se de ação civil pública ajuizada pelo Ministério Público contra um município, visando à restauração do Galpão da Oficina de Locomotivas, patrimônio tombado por Lei Municipal. A sentença condenou o ente federativo a executar as obras no prazo de seis meses, sob pena de multa e a apelação foi desprovida.

      • A deterioração do bem é registrada desde a década de 1980, o tombamento ocorreu nos anos 1990, o imóvel está interditado desde 2009 e a municipalidade manifesta reiteradamente, ao longo de décadas, suas melhores intenções de devolver o bem à coletividade, sem efetivá-lo.

      • No que tange ao interesse de agir do Ministério Público, o município recorrente defende sua inexistência porque teria conduzido a matéria administrativa de maneira adequada, com licitação e início das obras para restaurar o bem tombado.

      • A pretensão de que seja reconhecida a perda de objeto dita unilateral depende de que a parte ré entregue ao autor o bem da vida integralmente demandado em juízo. No caso, a parte apenas manifesta a intenção de entregar parte do bem da vida demandado.

      • Nas situações envolvendo o Poder Público, essa pretensão de reconhecimento da perda de objeto deve ser tratada com ainda maior critério. Isso porque, nos termos da doutrina, "Atores governamentais com frequência usam a perda de objeto para evadirem-se de precedentes desfavoráveis.".

      • Por isso, a mera intenção ou mesmo início das obras de restauração não caracteriza perda de objeto, pois o cumprimento <u>integral</u> da obrigação judicial é necessário para a extinção do interesse processual.

      • O cumprimento da obrigação disposta na sentença, portanto, somente poderá ser verificado na fase executória do provimento. É o juízo da execução que poderá considerar de modo efetivo os atos e esforços concretos da municipalidade que atendem de forma mais eficiente ao provimento judicial, inclusive com eventual modulação de prazos e multas, que não devem ser afastados de plano.

      • Além disso, do cenário descrito, depreende-se a <u>natureza estrutural da demanda</u>. Assim, a abordagem da causa, ainda que tardiamente, já em sua fase executória, pode e deve ser feita pela lente dos processos estruturais.

      • É certo que o caso trata de uma "nanoinstitucionalidade", uma situação de violação sistemática dos direitos da coletividade à cultura e à memória bastante delimitada, com um provimento jurisdicional bem específico, condição que nem sempre é entendida como matéria estrutural, dado seu limitado alcance.

      • Mas isso não impede que, no momento da execução da sentença, práticas, métodos e princípios típicos do processo estrutural sejam adotados pelo juízo exequente, conforme necessários e adequados. Nesse sentido, recentemente o Conselho Nacional de Justiça - CNJ aprovou a Recomendação n. 163 de 16/6/2025, norma incentivadora da condução estrutural de processos judiciais.

      • Ademais, considerando que se trata de patrimônio histórico e cultural de uma municipalidade, a adoção de técnicas estruturais de condução do feito atende, ainda, à concretização do princípio da participação comunitária, conforme reconhecido desde 1967 pelos Estados membros da Organização dos Estados Americanos - OEA,

      • Nessa linha, e conforme disposto pelo Fórum Permanente de Processualistas Civis, como boa prática na condução do feito estrutural em instância recursal, afigura-se adequado dar indicações concretas ao juízo de execução sobre os parâmetros de atuação nessa circunstância (Boa Prática n. 22/FPPC), nos termos já adotados, inclusive como paradigmas desse agir, por esta Corte (REsp n. 1.854.842/CE, relatora Ministra Nancy Andrighi, Terceira Turma, julgado em 2/6/2020, DJe de 4/6/2020).

      • Assim, recomenda-se ao magistrado encarregado da execução, resguardada sua independência funcional, a adoção de, entre outras, de medidas de natureza estruturante, tais como: i) estabelecimento de comitê de condução e monitoramento do projeto de restauração, inclusive com a participação de entidades da sociedade civil representantes do setor de cultura e memória, órgãos especializados de suporte, como o CREA, e representantes do Legislativo, além das partes e representante do juízo; ii) a eventual dilação do prazo de conclusão das obras, inclusive com suspensão temporária das multas condicionada ao cumprimento de eventual cronograma acordado pelas partes; iii) determinação de publicação no portal do Poder Executivo Municipal de relatórios periódicos, em intervalos de não mais que 45 dias, de execução do projeto de restauração, com os itens mínimos que entender necessários; e iv) realização de audiência pública prévia ao encerramento da obra, na sua iminência, para coleta de manifestações da sociedade sobre o alcance dos objetivos da sentença de conhecimento e prestação de contas pelos réus.

      • Recomenda-se, ainda, ao Tribunal respectivo que providencie o apoio institucional necessário ao magistrado singular na implementação dessas medidas, tudo orientado pelo princípio maior de cooperação.

      • Por fim, ao contrário do que alega a municipalidade, se a sentença confirma sua intenção administrativa, a imposição judicial pode destravar as diversas amarras burocráticas e políticas impostas a seus próprios gestores.

      • A sentença não será vazia, mas catalisadora dos efeitos concretos da política pública de proteção ao patrimônio histórico-cultural que a própria Administração não só é obrigada por lei a implementar, como assim também o deseja há tantas décadas.

      • Será, ainda, obrigação específica, decorrente de título judicial executivo, que vinculará não só a gestão atual como as futuras, de forma impessoal e para além de voluntarismos, como exige a situação degradante enfrentada pelo bem municipal tombado.

      • Por isso, o provimento judicial resguardará tanto a pretensão do autor como as intenções do réu, de modo a concretizá-las a ambas as partes. Desse modo, o objeto jurídico, que deve ser entendido como a devolução à coletividade do bem histórico-cultural que verdadeiramente lhe pertence, permanece íntegro.

    1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9bR-bsvi0Nk

      Annotating on hypothesis as a resource for others in the Fellowship of the Sacred Commons

      Four Sessoins in September

      Gifting was way of life in Brehon Life Cumann was the original Commons Even in feudal times, the people had a Cumann Capitalism destroyed the Cumann - it is anti-commons The state regulates the market Commons as a social welfare system 1980's globalisation - nations can no longer regulate Restore the Cumann and use it to regulate the present into the future No place for Religion No place for Ideaology Local - Translocal - Cosmo-Local Web3 - Crypto as models

      SESSION 1 Macro History Review Patterns Cyclical Humanity COmmons arrises when Market and State become hegemonic Commons can also become hegenomic Transition now What kind of commons? Physical Commons Social Commons Digital Commons Phy-gital Commons An interesting time in humanity Who are the commoners? Thesis and Empirical Evidence of 20 years observation of Seed Forms Verifiable Data that something is happening Coherent Speculation

      Commons in Feudalism Commons in Capitalism

      Alan Paige Fisk - The structure of social life Communal Shareholding - Family Equality Matching - Gifting Authority Ranking - Protect & Reward The Market

      Humanity wants to create Mode A at a higher level of com-lexity - people, family, but we want it at civilisational scale

      Religion was the first attempot to civilise civilisation - to civilise warriors - Caim Aideain -

      Capitalism is mass ideaology

      Immination of the Eschaton Life is a vale of tears but we can go to heaven The age of the Father - The Age of the Son - The Age of the Spirit - live like monks, we do not need church

      Paradise is in the future Reformation Mass Utopia - past present future

      BUT THIS IS OVER!!! 1789 to 1989

      The Age of Cosmo-Local Networks

      Software Currencies Our Hopes are invested in Blockchain which is a form of Jesus

      Civilisations Spiral - there is always somethign left behind It bifurcates - a reaction against the failure of the previous cycle

      In Rome, work was slavery In Christianity - work is sacred to make heaven on earth

      Commonsres think translocally - cosmically We do nto need the nation state

      Fair BnB can replace Air BnB - it does not need the nation state

      The Spirit as modes of exchange

      Matter and Spirit are at the same level - the physical is sacred

      Ideaology and Materialism can be integrated

      Michel's very traumatic childhood

      Marxism explained his suffering HIs abandonment of Trotsky-ism Shifted to self change Looking at the world world his marxist glasses Joined a Reich commune Women compete for the Alpa Males - and Michel was not an alpa male

      People are confused when they have no methodology at all In order to be free, one has to know how one is determined

      A tourist sees a building, but a local sees the people who inhabited the building as a culture over time

      We learn from people that we disagree with

      Listenign to right wing people - I do nto agree with you, AND I get you

      3D is light and shadow - it is perspecival which also then creates a shadow

      Christian Atheism Conservative Communism

      Michel was cancelled in 2018 - it was his shock Universities used to be mostly men, now there are two women for every man in univesities

      Something has gone wrong with the Left and Masculinity

      The network state world is antithetical to family

      In a society that has to struggle, the male is dominant When that society becomes richer, the female becomes dominant (Dominus = Lord)

      Rich women have an advantage over poor women becase their kids will survive In an egqlitarian sopciety, all kids survive, so the rich women discourage other women to have children

      Being a mother, growing life has to have prestige

      when reproduction rates are low, society suicides itself

      Commons is a practice and an institution

      Network State Movement = collect money with crypto and then buy land - create a new corporate state - be a shareholder not a citizen

      Commons as cosmo local domain relevancies

      Crypto has the idea of contribution to the common good

      Michel started to read the Dark Masters when he was canceleld in 2018

      We can only want what oher peopel want - so we compete Then we need a scapegoat - we find a common enemy Religion is a way to sacreficie people Sacrifice is a potion regulated through religion - until Christ appears to end the sacrifice

      In feudal times, a merchant could not wear fur, it was only for royalty

      In egalitarisn societies, everyone can have everything, but the only way to solve the demand is mass production with mass consumption

      A rich woman can own an expensive bag yet in five years, everyoine can have it

      Capitalism regulates this through over-consumpotion

      Capitalism is now violent - billions of little cuts for thousands of years

      LEFT : Man is good instituions are bad RIGHT: Man is bad institutions are good

      We can be egalitarian by confronting our dark nature - we are envious - we are animalistic - we needed the ten commandments - but we were given 30 of them

      We began to go into thertapy in the 1970's to confront ourselves

      IN the 1980's we invited medication to suppporess the symptoms

      Generations have nto done their own inner work

      The Woke accuse old white men in the way they used to blame the Jews - scapegoating machineries

      Neo-Liberalals now medicate the psyche - medicalisation of symptoms

      We need to become somatic - we have to work it out in the body, thropugh the body - spirtituality arises in somatic experiences

      Michel then looked to the East - a supermarket of therapy

      Rashneesh Commune - preparign the world for neo-liberalism

      Forget guilt and shame - forget the others - follwo your own path - follow your own bliss - transcend yourself - become selfish - go fot it - have the life youw ant - INDIVIDUALLISTIC

      But if you did not have money - you cooudl not joiun that club

      People prostituted themselves to go to the Ashram for €75 a day - it was for upper middle class people

      How it becase a mastery of seduction - you want this

      Watch Wild Wild Country - OSHO

      Michel then looked at the traditions of the West - Templar - Rosicrucian -

      He had to reconcile hismelf with Western Civilisation

      Catholics were hostile to slavery - the church bought slaves from the ottomans - a low number of salves in Europe (it aboloshed slavery)

      Buddhists had slaves since the 1930's

      A Christian has to love their neighbour

      Keith Chandler - beyond civilisation - relationship between order and chaos

      Tribal people are not alienated, family is known as are enemies Civilisations are alienated - solider, slave, serf, religion

      Commons is not utopian New relationship with nature Social contracts Not paradise Not classless The transition is messy

      We can do better than destroying ourselves

      We are in a new phase of history

      Commons is a realistic hypothesis of cnage It's real already

      In the 14th century: we had purgatory so then we could lend money, we had the printing press to spead ideas and we had double entry book-keeping to create capitalism : THEY WERE SEED FORMS

      Social Change needs SEED FORMS - e,g, Commons

      P2P WIKI - 40,000 entries

      Ken Wilbur - Integral Studies

      Levels Schema Quadrants

      Golden Rosicrucians in Holland

      Gnostic Dialoistic New Christian - Saklas - Jehovah - Yeldabaoth - Pleroma - Monad - Barbelo - Aeon - Archon

      With Gnostics, MIchel could not accept a hateful world and decided to be creative - he was tired of introspection

      Transhumanism Documentary

      Head of Digital Strategy for a Telco 90's + Burnout

      William James - once born people - twice born people - we have to do a lot of work - crisis, we com eout of it - so many things - a richer integratveo capacity -dark night of the soul to be integrated 1998 (Age of 42)

      The world is tragic and I can do something without teh rage of being 18

      P2P Foundation - sabbatical

      Came back to his engagement - tremendous energy until 2018 - massive productivity

      10,000 academic references 4,000 google scholar references

      2018 - shared critical video of jordan petersen - fascist - disagreed with him, but Michelw as cancelled

      Michel is a librarian

      People reacted - where am I?? Its like Salma Rushdie beign attacked without reading him

      Nobody defended him from the extremists

      "You cannat talk becase youa re white" Deminised - defunded - debanked depaypalled - blacklisted - height of popularity to zero - unjust - questioning is thsi the left - am I still on the left?

      A good thing - he did not know anythign about the right

      From Trotsky to New Right and all in between - no labs

      He is a conservative communist - we need to improve and preserve - there are no contradictions

      In 2016 - counter culture switches to the right

      We lost the leftist opinion - it was a mourning

      Leftism used to be a brotherhood - now to go being a white person, we are sub-human

      Genital mutilation is not normal

      The woke right commits genocide and the jews cannot be criticised

      Identity is layered - over many years in a real life

      Life experiecne made him a compelx layered being

      In the USA, the Reds fear china, the blues fear the internet They are tribes - only 4% of blues marry reds In the USA, they are physically separating by relocaing to theri own states

      Ruling classs 1% Managers class with many factions

      After world war 2, one had to be Kenseyian - this was the faction supported

      In 1973, Oil Crisis - maybe Friedman??? the new neo-liberal elites that becase hegemonic

      Occupy 2014 - against the 1%

      6,000% increase in woke vocabularoty in press

      Elites decide to shift to anotehr faction - e.g Holland hegemonic abolished guilds - but then the peopel stopped fightign fot the elite

      We are in an accelerated disintegration of the western model

      Importance of Web3 and P2P

      Course on The Commons

      Michel's Higher Standpoint now

      Integrative Capacity Motivation (not rage and resentment) Activism is high on the dark triad Capacity to see relatvie truths of different human groups A new breed of people who are politically homeless Pragmatic - making sense

      MIchel's dream (web 3) social change if we have willing alliacnes from the top, the middle and the top

      Monasteries - Roman Elite - People

      Attract capital from sections of the elite who have the money

      There is huge capital flow

      if you are a parasite, they will come after you If you share, you will be welcome everywhere

      A SEED FORM dependent on our participation

      Event in Brussels - Commons Hob Brussels

      706 - cultural events in people's own houses

      Michel has something to say and wants to share it

      In timews like this, going deep is very important Too much action Deep Exchange Make time to step back NOT ACT ACTUALLY

      THINK DONT ACT!

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ramirez Carbo et al. use the powerful M. xanthus spore morphogenesis model to address fundamental mechanisms in coordinated peptidoglycan remodeling and degradation. As peptidoglycan is an essential macromolecule and difficult to study in vivo, the authors use indirect but important methodology. The authors first identify two lytic transglycosylase (Ltg) enzymes necessary for spore morphogenesis using mutant phenotypic studies. They characterize these mutants for their role in coordinating spore morphogenesis induced either in fruiting bodies (starvation-dependent) or in liquid-rich media conditions (chemical-dependent). They conclude from these phenotypic and epistatic analyses that LtgA is necessary for morphogenesis during chemical-induced sporulation, and LtgB appears to be necessary to coordinate LtgA activity by interfering with LtgA function. Under starvation-induced sporulation, the absence of LtgB interferes with the building of fruiting bodies. LtgA does not appear to play a primary role in promoting aggregation into fruiting bodies, nor in degradation of peptidoglycan as assayed by loss of signal in anti-PG immunofluorescence. The authors demonstrate that the purified periplasmic domain of LtgA is highly active in degrading purified PG sacculi in vitro, while that of LtgB is highly reduced (relative to LtgA or lysozyme). The authors use photoactivated mCherry Lyt fusions and PALM to track the fusion protein mobility, which they state correlates with activity as immobilization results from PG binding. They demonstrate that in vegetative cells, a greater proportion of LtgA-PAmCh is more immobile (more active) than LtgB-PAmCh, but that directly after chemical-induction of sporulation, LtgB-PAmCh becomes more immobile (active). These analyses in the partner mutant backgrounds suggest that LtgA-PAmCh is more immobile (less active) in the absence of LtgB, but the reverse is not observed. Finally, the authors demonstrate that overexpression of LtgA in vegetative conditions leads to cell rounding, likely because of uncontrolled PG degradation, while overexpression of LtgB displays no phenotype.

      Strengths:

      This paper capitalizes on a novel spore morphogenesis mechanism to define proteins and mechanisms involved in peptidoglycan reorganization. The authors use the powerful PALM microscopy technique to assess Ltg activity in vivo by assaying for immobility as a proxy for PG binding. The authors elucidate a novel mechanism by which two Ltg's function together- with one (LtgB) seeming to regulate the activity of the other (the primary Ltg).

      Despite some weaknesses, there is no question that this study provides important insight into mechanisms of peptidoglycan remodeling- a difficult but highly impactful area of study with implications for the development of novel therapeutics and the discovery of mechanisms of fundamental bacterial physiology.

      Weaknesses:

      In many places, the authors do not adequately justify interpretations of their assays, leading to some apparently unjustified conclusions. Many of these are minor and may just require citations to demonstrate that the interpretations are justified by previous studies (detailed in recommendations below), but two bigger concerns are as follows:

      (1) It is not clear how the muropeptides listed in Figure 1 were assigned, and it is missing in the methods. In the sporulating conditions, the spectra look like combinations of multiple peaks, and the data, as stated, is not convincing to the non-specialist eye.

      (2) The observation that the lytB mutant prevents appropriate aggregation into fruiting bodies does not allow the interpretation that the absence of LytB prevents PG morphogenesis in the starvation-induced sporulation pathway, per se. It is more likely that in the lytB mutant, the morphogenesis program is not even triggered. This is because signaling proteins and regulators (specifically, C-signal accumulation/activated FruA), which are dependent on increased cell-cell signaling in the fruiting body, do not accumulate appropriately in shallow aggregates. C-signal/FruA are necessary to trigger the sporulation program in FBs. BTW: A hypothesis to explain the indirect effect of ltgB absence on aggregation could be that UDP-precursors are not regulated appropriately (unregulated LtyA??), so polysaccharides necessary for motility are not properly produced.

      Along these lines, fruiting body formation does not equal sporulation, and even "darkened" fruiting bodies can be misleading, as some mutants form polysaccharide-rich fruiting bodies (that appear dark under certain light conditions in the stereomicroscope) but do not sporulate efficiently. The wording in the text suggests that the authors assume that sporulation levels are normal because fruiting bodies are produced (see specific comments for details).

      (3) The authors repeatedly state that production of spore coat polysaccharides likely affects the PG IP staining (see below), but this is not well justified. A citation is needed if this has already been directly shown, or the language needs to be softened.

      (4) Better justification for the immobility of Lyt proteins in vivo as an assay for activity may be required. If this is well known in the field, it should be explicitly stated. The authors address this better in the discussion - but still state it is a correlation.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study examined the effect of blood pressure variability on brain microvascular function and cognitive performance. By implementing a model of blood pressure variability using an intermittent infusion of AngII for 25 days, the authors examined different cardiovascular variables, cerebral blood flow, and cognitive function during midlife (12-15-month-old mice). Key findings from this study demonstrate that blood pressure variability impairs baroreceptor reflex and impairs myogenic tone in brain arterioles, particularly at higher blood pressure. They also provide evidence that blood pressure variability blunts functional hyperemia and impairs cognitive function and activity. Simultaneous monitoring of cardiovascular parameters, in vivo imaging recordings, and the combination of physiological and behavioral studies reflect rigor in addressing the hypothesis. The experiments are well-designed, and the data generated are clear. I list below a number of suggestions to enhance this important work:

      (1) Figure 1B: It is surprising that the BP circadian rhythm is not distinguishable in either group. Figure 2, however, shows differences in circadian rhythm at different timepoints during infusion. Could the authors explain the lack of circadian effect in the 24-h traces?

      The circadian rhythm pattern is apparent in Figure 2 (Active BP higher than Inactive BP), where BP is presented as 12hour averages. When the BP data is expressed as one-hour averages (rather than minute-to-minute) over 24hours, now included in the revised manuscript as Supplemental Figure 3C-D, the circadian rhythm becomes noticeable. In addition, we have included one-hour average BP data for all mice in the control and BPV groups, Supplemental Figure 3A-B.

      Notably, the Ang-II induced pulsatile BP pattern remains evident in the one-hour averages for the BPV group, Supplemental Figure 3B. To minimize bias and validate variability, pump administrations start times were randomized for both control and BPV groups, Supplemental Figure 3A-B. Despite these adjustments, the circadian rhythm profile of BP is consistently maintained across individual mice and in the collective dataset, Supplemental Figure 3C-D.

      (2) While saline infusion does not result in elevation of BP when compared to Ang II, there is an evident "and huge" BP variability in the saline group, at least 40mmHg within 1 hour. This is a significant physiological effect to take into consideration, and therefore it warrants discussion.

      Thank you for this comment. The large variations in BP in the raw traces during saline infusion reflects transient BP changes induced by movement/activity, which is now included in Figure 1B (maroon trace). The revised manuscript now includes Line 222 “Note that dynamic activity-driven BP changes were apparent during both saline- and Ang II infusions, Figure 1B”.

      (3) The decrease in DBP in the BPV group is very interesting. It is known that chronic Ang II increases cardiac hypertrophy, are there any changes to heart morphology, mass, and/or function during BPV? Can the decrease in DBP in BPV be attributed to preload dysfunction? This observation should be discussed.

      The lower DBP in the BPV group was already present at baseline, while both groups were still infused with saline, and was a difference beyond our control. However, this is an important and valid consideration, particularly considering the minimal yet significant increase in SBP within the BPV group (Figure 1D). Our goal was to induce significant transient blood pressure responses (BPV) and investigate the impact on cardiovascular and neurovascular outcomes in the absence of hypertension. We did not anticipate any major cardiac remodeling at this early time point (considering the absence of overt hypertension) and thus cardiac remodeling was not assessed and this is now discussed in the revised manuscript (Line 443-453).

      (4) Examining the baroreceptor reflex during the early and late phases of BPV is quite compelling. Figures 3D and 3E clearly delineate the differences between the two phases. For clarity, I would recommend plotting the data as is shown in panels D and E, rather than showing the mathematical ratio. Alternatively, plotting the correlation of ∆HR to ∆SBP and analyzing the slopes might be more digestible to the reader. The impairment in baroreceptor reflex in the BPV during high BP is clear, is there any indication whether this response might be due to loss of sympathetic or gain of parasympathetic response based on the model used?

      We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion and have accordingly generated new figures displaying scatter plots of SBP vs HR with linear regression analysis (Figure 3D-G). Our goal is to further investigate which branch of the autonomic nervous system is affected in this model. The loss of a bradycardic response suggests either an enhancement of sympathetic activity, a reduction in parasympathetic activity, or a combination of both. This is briefly discussed in the revised manuscript (Line 486-496).

      Heart rate variability (HRV) serves as an index of neurocardiac function and dynamic, non-linear autonomic nervous system processes, as described in Shaffer and Ginsber[1]. However, given that our data was limited to BP and HR readings collected at one-minute intervals, our primary assessment of autonomic function is limited to the bradycardic response. Further studies will be necessary to fully characterize the autonomic parameters influenced by chronic BPV.

      (5) Figure 3B shows a drop in HR when the pump is ON irrespective of treatment (i.e., independent of BP changes). What is the underlying mechanism?

      We apologize for any lack of clarity. These observed heart rate (HR) changes occurred during Ang II infusion, when blood pressure (BP) was actively increasing. In the control group, the pump solution was switched to Ang II during specific periods (days 3-5 and 21-25 of the treatment protocol) to induce BP elevations and a baroreceptor response, allowing direct comparisons between the control and BPV group.

      To clarify this point, we have revised Line 260-263 of the manuscript: “To compare pressure-induced bradycardic responses between BPV and control mice at both early and later treatment stages, a cohort of control mice received Ang II infusion on days 3-5 (early phase) (Supplemental Figure 4) and days 21-25 (late phase) thereby transiently increasing BP”.

      Additionally, a detailed description has been added to the Methods section (Line 96-101): “Controls receiving Ang II: To facilitate between-group comparisons (control vs BPV), a separate cohort of control mice were subjected to the same pump infusion parameters as BPV mice but for a brief period receiving Ang II infusions on days 3-5 and 21-25 for experiments assessing pressure-evoked responses, including bradycardic reflex, myogenic response, and functional hyperemia at high BP.”

      (6) The correlation of ∆diameter vs MAP during low and high BP is compelling, and the shift in the cerebral autoregulation curve is also a good observation. I would strongly recommend that the authors include a schematic showing the working hypothesis that depicts the shift of the curve during BPV.

      Thank you for this insightful comment. The increase in vessel reactivity to BP elevations in parenchymal arterioles of BPV mice suggests that chronic BPV induces a leftward shift and a potential narrowing of the cerebral autoregulation range (lower BP thresholds for both the upper and lower limits of autoregulation). This has been incorporated (and discussed) into the revised manuscript (see Figure 5N).

      One potential explanation for these changes is that the absence of sustained hypertension, a prominent feature in most rodent models of hypertension, limits adaptive processes that protect the cerebral microcirculation from large BP fluctuations (e.g., vascular remodeling). While this study does not specifically address arteriole remodeling, the lack of such adaptation may reduce pressure buffering by upstream arterioles, thereby rendering the microcirculation more vulnerable to significant BP fluctuations.

      The unique model allows for measurements of parenchymal arteriole reactivity to acute dynamic changes in BP (both an increase and decrease in MAP). Our findings indicate that chronic BPV enhances the reactivity of parenchymal arterioles to BP changes—both during an increase in BP and upon its return to baseline, Supplemental Figure 5C, F. The data suggest an increased myogenic response to pressure elevation, indicative of heightened contractility, a common adaptive process observed in rodent models of hypertension[2-4]. However, our model also reveals a notable tendency for greater dilation when the BP drops, Supplemental Figure 5F. This intriguing observation may suggest ischemia during the vasoconstriction phase (at higher BP), leading to enhanced release of dilatory signals, which subsequently manifest as a greater dilation upon BP reduction. This phenomenon bears similarities to chronic hypoperfusion models[5,6], where vasodilatory mechanisms become more pronounced in response to sustained ischemic conditions. Future studies investigating the effects of BPV on myogenic responses and brain perfusion will be a priority for our ongoing research.

      (7) Functional hyperemia impairment in the BPV group is clear and well-described. Pairing this response with the kinetics of the recovery phase is an interesting observation. I suggest elaborating on why BPV group exerts lower responses and how this links to the rapid decline during recovery.

      Based on the heightened reactivity of BPV parenchymal arterioles to intravascular pressure (Figure 5), we anticipate that the reduction of sensory-evoked dilations results from an increased vasoconstrictive activity and/or a decreased availability of vasodilatory signaling pathways (NO, EETs, COX-derived prostaglandins)[7,8]. Consequently, the magnitude of the FH response is blunted during periods of elevated BP in BPV mice.

      Additionally, upon termination of the stimulus-induced response−when vasodilatory signals would typically dominate−vasoconstrictive mechanisms are rapidly engaged (or unmasked), leading to quicker return to baseline. This shift in the balance between vasodilatory and vasoconstrictive forces favors vasoconstriction, contributing to the altered recovery kinetics observed in BPV mice. This has been included in the Discussion section of the revised manuscript.

      (8) The experimental design for the cognitive/behavioral assessment is clear and it is a reasonable experiment based on previous results. However, the discussion associated with these results falls short. I recommend that the authors describe the rationale to assess recognition memory, short-term spatial memory, and mice activity, and explain why these outcomes are relevant in the BPV context. Are there other studies that support these findings? The authors discussed that no changes in alternation might be due to the age of the mice, which could already exhibit cognitive deficits. In this line of thought, what is the primary contributor to behavioral impairment? I think that this sentence weakens the conclusion on BPV impairing cognitive function and might even imply that age per se might be the factor that modulates the various physiological outcomes observed here. I recommend clarifying this section in the discussion.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. Clinical studies have demonstrated that patients with elevated BPV exhibit impairments across multiple cognitive domains, including declines in processing speed[9] and episodic memory[10]. To evaluate memory function, we utilized behavioral tests: the novel object recognition (NOR) task to assess episodic memory[11] and the spontaneous Y-maze to evaluate short-term spatial memory[12].

      Previous research indicates that older C57Bl6 mice (14-month-old) exhibit cognitive deficits compared to younger counterparts (4- and 9-month-old)[13]. To ensure rigorous selection for behavioral testing, we conducted preliminary NOR assessment, evaluating recognition memory at the one-hour delay but observing failures at the four-, and 24-hour delays, indicating age-related deficits. Based on these results, animals failing recognition criteria were excluded from subsequent behavioral assessment. However, because no baseline cognitive testing was conducted for the spontaneous Y-maze, it is possible that some mice with aged-related deficits were included in this test, which may have influenced data interpretation.

      Additionally, the absence of differences in the Y-maze performance may suggest that short-term spatial memory remains intact following 25 days of BPV, a point that is now discussed in the revised manuscript.

      (9) Why were only male mice used?

      We appreciate this comment and acknowledge the importance of conducting experiments in both male and female mice. Studies involving female mice are currently ongoing, with telemetry data collection approximately halfway completed and two-photon imaging studies on functional hyperemia also partially completed. However, using middleaged mice for these experiments has proven challenging due to high mortality rates following telemetry surgeries. As a result, we initially limited our first cohort to male mice.

      (10) In the results for Figure 3: "Ang II evoked significant increases in SBP in both control and BPV groups;...". Also, in the figure legend: "B. Five-minute average HR when the pump is OFF or ON (infusing Ang II) for control and BPV groups...." The authors should clarify this as the methods do not state a control group that receives Ang II.

      Please refer to response to comment 5.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Blood pressure variability has been identified as an important risk factor for dementia. However, there are no established animal models to study the molecular mechanisms of increased blood pressure variability. In this manuscript, the authors present a novel mouse model of elevated BPV produced by pulsatile infusions of high-dose angiotensin II (3.1ug/hour) in middle-aged male mice. Using elegant methodology, including direct blood pressure measurement by telemetry, programmable infusion pumps, in vivo two-photon microscopy, and neurobehavioral tests, the authors show that this BPV model resulted in a blunted bradycardic response and cognitive deficits, enhanced myogenic response in parenchymal arterioles, and a loss of the pressure-evoked increase in functional hyperemia to whisker stimulation.

      Strengths:

      As the presentation of the first model of increased blood pressure variability, this manuscript establishes a method for assessing molecular mechanisms. The state-of-the-art methodology and robust data analysis provide convincing evidence that increased blood pressure variability impacts brain health.

      Weaknesses:

      One major drawback is that there is no comparison with another pressor agent (such as phenylephrine); therefore, it is not possible to conclude whether the observed effects are a result of increased blood pressure variability or caused by direct actions of Ang II.

      We acknowledge this limitation and have attempted to address the concern by introducing an alternative vasopressor, norepinephrine (NE), Figure 4. A subcutaneous dose of 45 µg/kg/min was titrated to match Ang II-induced transient BP pulse (Systolic BP ~150-180 mmHg), Figure 4A. Similar to Ang II treated mice, NE-treated mice exhibited no significant changes in average mean arterial pressure (MAP) throughout the 20-day treatment period (Figure 4B). Although there was a trend (P=0.08) towards increased average real variability (ARV) (Figure 4C left), it did not reach statistical significance. The coefficient of variation (CV) (Figure 4C right) was significantly increased by day 3-4 of treatment (P=0.02).

      Notably, unlike the bradycardic response observed during Ang II-induced BP elevations, NE infusions elicited a tachycardic response (Figure 4A), likely due to β-1 adrenergic receptor activation. However, significant mortality was observed within the NE cohort: three of six mice died prematurely during the second week of treatment, and two additional mice required euthanasia on days 18 and 20 due to lethargy, impaired mobility, and tachypnea.

      While we recognize the importance of comparing results across vasopressors, further investigation using additional vasopressors would require a dedicated study, as each agent may induce distinct off-target effects, potentially generating unique animal models. Alternatively, a mechanical approach−such as implanting a tethered intra-aortic balloon[14] connected to a syringe pump−could be explored to modulate blood pressure variability without pharmacological intervention. However, such an approach falls beyond the scope of the present study.

      Ang II is known to have direct actions on cerebrovascular reactivity, neuronal function, and learning and memory. Given that Ang II is increased in only 15% of human hypertensive patients (and an even lower percentage of non-hypertensive), the clinical relevance is diminished. Nonetheless, this is an important study establishing the first mouse model of increased BPV.

      We agree that high Ang II levels are not a predominant cause of hypertension in humans, which is why it is critical that our pulsatile Ang II dosing did not cause overt hypertension, (no increase in 24-hour MAP). Ang II was solely a tool to produce controlled, transient increases in BP to yield a significant increase in BPV.

      Regarding BPV specifically, prior studies indicate that primary hypertensive patients with elevated urinary angiotensinogen-to-creatinine ratio exhibit significantly higher mean 24-hour systolic ARV compared to those with lower ratios[15]. However, the fundamental mechanisms driving these harmful increases in BPV remain poorly defined. A central theme across clinical BPV studies is impaired arterial stiffness, which has been proposed to contribute to BPV through reduced arterial compliance and diminished baroreflex sensitivity. Moreover, increased BPV can exert mechanical stress on arterial walls, leading to arterial remodeling and stiffness−ultimately perpetuating a detrimental feed-forward cycle[16].

      In our model, male BPV mice exhibited a minimal yet significant elevation in SBP without corresponding increases in DBP, potentially reflecting isolated systolic hypertension, which is strongly associated with arterial stiffness[17,18]. Our initial goal was to establish controlled rapid fluctuations in BP, and Ang II was selected as the pressor due to its potent vasoconstrictive properties and short half-life[19].

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment and acknowledge the necessity of exploring alternative mechanisms underlying BPV, and independent of Ang II. It is our long-term goal to investigate these factors in further studies.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) How was the dose of Ang II determined? It seems that this dose (3.1ug/hr) is quite high.

      The Ang II dose was titrated in a preliminary study to one that induced a significant and transient BP response without increasing 24-hour blood pressure (i.e. no hypertension).

      Ang II was delivered subcutaneously at 3.1 μg/hr, a concentration comparable to high-dose Ang II administration via mini-osmotic pumps (~1700 ng/kg/min)[20], with one-hour pulses occurring every 3-4 hours. With 6 pulses per day, the total daily dose equates to 18.6 µg/day in a ~30 gram mouse.

      For comparison, if the same 18.6 µg/day dose were administered continuously via a mini-osmotic pump (18.6 µg/0.03kg/1440min), the resulting dosage would be approximately 431 ng/kg/min[21,22], aligning with subpressor dose levels. Thus, while the total dose may appear high, it is not delivered in a constant manner but rather intermittently, allowing for controlled, rapid variations in blood pressure.

      (2) Were behavioral studies performed on the same mice that were individually housed? Individual housing causes significant stress in mice that can affect learning and memory tasks (PMC6709207). It's not a huge issue since the control mice would have been housed the same way, but it is something that could be mentioned in the discussion section.

      Behavioral studies were performed on mice that were individually housed following the telemetry surgery. The study was started once BP levels stabilized, as mice required several days to achieve hemodynamic stability post-surgery. Consequently, all mice were individually housed for several days before undergoing behavioral assessment.

      To account for potential cognitive variability, earlier novel object recognition (NOR) tests were conducted to established cognitive capacity, and mice that did not meet criteria were excluded from further behavioral testing. However, we acknowledge that individual housing induces stress, which can influence learning and memory, and this is a factor we were unable to fully control. Given that both experimental and control groups experienced the same housing conditions, this stress effect should be comparable across cohorts. A discussion on this limitation is now included in the text.

      (3) It looks like one control mouse that was included in both Figures 1 and 2 (control n=12) but was excluded in Table 1 (control n=11), this isn't mentioned in the text - please include the exclusion criteria in the manuscript.

      We apologize for the typo−12 control animals were consistently utilized across Figure 1-2, Table 1, Supplemental Table 1, Figure 6C, and Supplemental Figure 2B. Since the initial submission, one control mouse was completed and included into the telemetry control cohort. Thus, in the updated manuscript, we have corrected the control sample size to 13 mice across these figures ensuring consistency.

      Additionally, exclusion criteria have now been explicitly included in the manuscript (Line 173-175). Mice were excluded from the study if they died prematurely (died prior to treatment onset) or mice exhibited abnormally elevated pressure while receiving saline, likely due to complications from telemetry surgery.

      (4) Please include a statement on why female mice were not included in this study.

      As discussed in our response to Reviewer #1, our initial intention was to include both male and female mice in this study. However, high mortality rates following telemetry surgeries significantly constrained our ability to advance all aspects of the study. As a result, we limited our first cohort to males to establish the basics of the model. A statement is now included in the manuscript, Line 50-53: “Female mice were not included in the present study due to high post-surgery mortality observed in 12-14-month-old mice following complex procedures. To minimized confounding effects of differential survival and to establish foundational data for this model, we restricted the investigation to male mice.”

      Potential sex differences might be complex and warrants a separate future research to comprehensively assess sex as a biological variable, which are currently ongoing.

      (5) On page 14, "experiments from control vs experimental mice were not equally conducted in the same season raising the possibility for a seasonal effect" - does this mean that control experiments were not conducted at the same time as the Ang II infusions in BPV mice? This has huge implications on whether the effects observed are induced by treatment or just batch seasonal effects.

      We fully acknowledge the reviewer’s concern, and our statement aims to provide transparency regarding the study’s limitations. Several challenges contributed to this outcome, including high mortality rates following surgeries (primarily telemetry implantation) and technical issues related to instrumentation, particularly telemetry functionality.

      Differences between BPV and saline mice emerge primarily due to mortality or telemetry failures−some mice did not survive post-surgery, while others remain healthy but had non-functional telemeters. This issue was particularly pronounced in 14-month-old mice, as their fragile vasculature occasionally prevented proper BP readings.

      Each experiment required a minimum of two and a half months per mouse to complete, with a cost (also per mouse) exceeding $1500 USD ($300 pump, $175 mouse, $900 telemeters, per diem, drugs, reagents etc.). Despite our best effort to ensure comparable seasonal/batch data, these logistical and technical constraints prevented perfect synchronization.

      To evaluate whether seasonal differences influenced our results, we incorporated additional telemetry data into the control cohort. Of the seven included control mice, six underwent the same treatment but were allocated to a separate branch of the study, which endpoints did not require a chronic cranial window. We found no significant differences in 24-hour average MAP during the baseline period between control mice with or without a cranial window, Supplemental Figure 2A. Additionally, we grouped mice into seasonal categories based on Georgia’s climate: “Spring-Summer” (May-September) and “Fall-Winter” (October-April) but observed no BP differences between these periods, Supplemental Figure 2B.

      Given the absence of seasonal effects on BP and the fact that mice were sourced from two independent suppliers (Jackson Laboratory and NIA), we anticipate that the observed results are driven by treatment rather than seasonal or batch effects.

      (6) Methods, two-photon imaging: did the authors mean "retro-orbital" instead of "intra-orbital" injection of the Texas red dye? Also, is this a Texas red-dextran? If so, what molecular weight?

      Thank you for this comment. The correct terminology is “retro-orbital” rather than “intra-orbital” injection. Additionally, we utilized Texas Red-dextran (70 kDa, 5% [wt/vol] in saline) for the imaging experiments. These details have now been incorporated into the Methods section.

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Meijer et al. sought to investigate the role of cortical layer 6b (L6b) neurons in modulating sleep-wake states and cortical oscillations under baseline and sleep deprived conditions and in response to orexin A and B. Using chronic EEG recordings in mice with silencing of Drd1a+ neurons (via constitutive Cre-dependent knockout of SNAP25), the authors report that while overall baseline sleep-wake architecture and response to sleep deprivation minimal/unchanged, "L6b silencing" leads to a slowing of theta activity during wakefulness and REM sleep, and a reduction in EEG power during NREM sleep. Additionally, orexin B-induced increases in theta activity were attenuated in L6b silenced mice, which the authors state suggests a modulatory role for L6b in orexin-mediated arousal regulation. The manuscript is generally well written with clarity and transparency. However, a major concern is the lack of specificity in the genetic manipulation, which targets Drd1a+ neurons not exclusive to L6b, undermining the attribution of observed effects solely to L6b. Verification of neuronal silencing is also unclear, and statistical inconsistencies between the main text and figures/tables make it difficult to effectively evaluate the text and stated outcomes.

      Strengths:

      (1) The text is well written.

      (2) The authors are transparent about methodological details.

      (3) The stated sleep, circadian, and orexin infusion experiments appear to be well designed, executed, and analyzed (with the exceptions of some statistical analyses detailed below).

      Weaknesses:

      (1) All outcomes are attributed specifically to L6b neurons, but the genetic manipulation is not specific to L6b neurons. The authors acknowledge this as a limitation, but in my view, this global manipulation is more than a limitation - it affects the overall interpretations of the data. The Hoerder-Suabedissen et al., 2018 paper shows sparse, but also dense, expression of Drd1a+ neurons in brain regions outside of the L6b. Given this issue, the results are largely overstated throughout the paper.

      (2) It is not clear to me that the "silencing" of Drd1a+ neurons was verified.

      (3) There were various discrepancies (and potentially misattributions) between the stated significant differences in Supplementary Table T1 data and Figure 3a & S2 spectral plots. This issue makes it difficult to effectively evaluate the main text and stated outcomes.

      Related, the authors stated that post hoc comparisons of EEG spectral frequency bins were not corrected for multiple testing. Instead, significance was only denoted if changes in at least two consecutive frequency bins were significant. However, there are multiple plots in which a single significance marker is placed over an isolated bin (i.e., 4c, 6, S5, S6). Unless each marker is equivalent to 2 consecutive frequency bins, these markers should be removed from the plots. Otherwise, please define the frequency and size of these markers in the main text.

      (4) A rainbow color scale, as in Figure 3, we've now learned, can be misleading and difficult to interpret. The viridis color scale or a different diverging color scale are good alternatives.

      (5) How much time elapsed between vehicle/orexin A & B infusions?

      (6) For Figure 6, there are statistical discrepancies between the main text and the plots (pg. 10):

      a) The text claims post hoc differences for relative ORXA frontal EEG, but there are no significance markers on the plot.<br /> b) The text states that there were no post hoc differences for the relative ORXA occipital EEG, but significance markers are on the plot.<br /> c) The main test for the relative ORXB frontal EEG was not significant, but there are post hoc significance markers on the plot.<br /> d) For relative ORXB occipital EEG, there are significant markers on the plot outside of the stated range in the text.

      (7) Some important details are only available in figure captions, making it difficult to understand the main text. For example, when describing Figure 3c in the main text on page 7, it is not clear what type of transitions are being discussed without reading the figure caption. Likewise, a "decrease," "shift," and "change" are mentioned, but relative to what? Similar comment for the EEG theta activity description on pages 7 - 8. Please add relevant details to the main text.

      (8) Statistical comparisons for data in Figure 3e, post hoc analyses for data in Figure S7a-b REM data, and post hoc analyses for Figure S7c (not b) occipital EEG should be included to support differences claims. Please denote these differences on the respective plots.

      (9) In the subsection titled "Layer 6b mediates effects of orexin on vigilance states (pg. 8)," there does not seem to be any stated differences between control and L6b silenced mice. A more accurate subtitle is needed.

    2. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      (1) All outcomes are attributed specifically to L6b neurons, but the genetic manipulation is not specific to L6b neurons. The authors acknowledge this as a limitation, but in my view, this global manipulation is more than a limitation - it affects the overall interpretations of the data. The Hoerder-Suabedissen et al., 2018 paper shows sparse, but also dense, expression of Drd1a+ neurons in brain regions outside of the L6b. Given this issue, the results are largely overstated throughout the paper.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s careful reading and concern that some of our statements may have overstated the implications of our data. The Drd1a Cre mouse model used (FK164) has a relatively selective expression of Drd1a Cre in cortex, especially in layer 6b, but indeed some expression is seen in layer 6a and subcortically. We will nuance our claims throughout the paper to ensure that the conclusions are supported by our findings, and further discuss the impact of this limitation on the overall interpretation of our results. Specifically, we will discuss the potential contribution of relevant subcortical areas and layer 6a in the effects we observed.

      (2) It is not clear to me that the "silencing" of Drd1a+ neurons was verified.

      In our previous publications, we showed confirmation of the loss of regulated synaptic vesicle release from the Cre positive neuronal population (Marques-Smith et al., 2016; Hoerder-Suabedissen et al., 2018; Messore et al., 2024), which validates our approach to “silence” cortical neurons. We will discuss this further in the revised manuscript.

      (3) There were various discrepancies (and potentially misattributions) between the stated significant differences in Supplementary Table T1 data and Figure 3a & S2 spectral plots. This issue makes it difficult to effectively evaluate the main text and stated outcomes.

      We thank the reviewer for spotting the inconsistencies in how the statistical comparisons were presented: indeed, in the text we described two-way ANOVAs with posthoc tests but in the figures significance markers were positioned based on multiple t-tests. We have revised Supplementary Table T1, Figure 3a and S2 to ensure that all statistics are presented consistently throughout the manuscript, i.e. with two-way ANOVAs and accompanying posthoc tests.

      Related, the authors stated that post hoc comparisons of EEG spectral frequency bins were not corrected for multiple testing. Instead, significance was only denoted if changes in at least two consecutive frequency bins were significant. However, there are multiple plots in which a single significance marker is placed over an isolated bin (i.e., 4c, 6, S5, S6). Unless each marker is equivalent to 2 consecutive frequency bins, these markers should be removed from the plots. Otherwise, please define the frequency and size of these markers in the main text.

      In line with the previous comment, we have adjusted markers to reflect the results from posthoc tests after two-way ANOVAs in Figures 6 and supplementary figures S5 and S6. 

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out that in our comparisons of EEG spectra, in some cases single isolated frequency bins, where p-value reached 0.05 were shown as significantly different, which indeed could have occurred by chance given that, in line with previous literature, we have not employed multiple testing comparison. In the revised manuscript we will use an unbiased approach by plotting actual p-values for all bins, and moderate our conclusions accordingly, while giving the readers the opportunity to evaluate the magnitude and extent of the differences directly, rather than relying on an arbitrary threshold for significance.

      (4) A rainbow color scale, as in Figure 3, we've now learned, can be misleading and difficult to interpret. The viridis color scale or a different diverging color scale are good alternatives.

      Thank you for pointing this out, we have adjusted the colour scale.

      (5) How much time elapsed between vehicle/orexin A & B infusions?

      There were 2-4 non-infusions days between infusions. We will add this information to methods when revising the manuscript.

      (6) For Figure 6, there are statistical discrepancies between the main text and the plots (pg. 10):

      a) The text claims post hoc differences for relative ORXA frontal EEG, but there are no significance markers on the plot.

      b) The text states that there were no post hoc differences for the relative ORXA occipital EEG, but significance markers are on the plot.

      c) The main test for the relative ORXB frontal EEG was not significant, but there are post hoc significance markers on the plot.

      d) For relative ORXB occipital EEG, there are significant markers on the plot outside of the stated range in the text.

      Thank you for your careful observations, these issues reflect the same inconsistency as raise above, where the text describes two-way ANOVAs and the figures refers to results obtained with multiple t tests. We shall adjust the markers in the figures to be only shown when the ANOVA is significant and show the results of posthoc tests after ANOVAs instead of the results of multiple t tests.

      (7) Some important details are only available in figure captions, making it difficult to understand the main text. For example, when describing Figure 3c in the main text on page 7, it is not clear what type of transitions are being discussed without reading the figure caption. Likewise, a "decrease," "shift," and "change" are mentioned, but relative to what? Similar comment for the EEG theta activity description on pages 7 - 8. Please add relevant details to the main text.

      We will adjust the wording in the main text to reflect more precisely which comparisons are shown in the figures.

      (8) Statistical comparisons for data in Figure 3e, post hoc analyses for data in Figure S7a-b REM data, and post hoc analyses for Figure S7c (not b) occipital EEG should be included to support differences claims. Please denote these differences on the respective plots.

      We have added the statistical comparisons for Figure 3e to the results section.

      We have added the statistical comparisons for Figure S7A to the results section.

      We have added the statistical comparison for Figure S7b to the results section.

      In Figure S7c, there was an overall genotype difference, but there was not a time x genotype interaction, so we have not performed posthoc tests and did not plot posthoc significance markers for this figure. We have adjusted the wording in the results section to make this clearer.

      We have adjusted the reference to the figure S7c which was incorrect, thank you for your careful attention.

      (9) In the subsection titled "Layer 6b mediates effects of orexin on vigilance states (pg. 8)," there does not seem to be any stated differences between control and L6b silenced mice. A more accurate subtitle is needed.

      We shall change the subtitle to: “The effects of orexin on vigilance states in L6b silenced mice”. The main finding described in this section is that the increase in EEG theta frequency after ORXB infusion is attenuated in L6b silenced mice, so a statement summarizing this finding could be an alternative title. However, then it would not accurately reflect other, less conspicuous, yet potentially important findings described in this section (during NREM sleep, only in L6b silenced animals there is an increase in power in the lower frequency bins in the frontal derivation; in the occipital derivation, levels of relative SWA during NREM sleep after ORXA infusion were lower in L6b silenced than in control animals).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Although the authors used a highly selective approach to silence layer 6b neurons, the observed changes in EEG oscillations cannot be solely attributed to layer 6b neurons because of the ICV route for orexin administration.

      We completely agree, and did not want to imply that orexin administered through the ICV route reaches cortical Drd1a Cre expressing neurons only. We will re-word the corresponding sentences accordingly throughout the manuscript.

      (2) The rationale for using only male rats is not provided.

      We agree that this is an important limitation and will acknowledge and discuss it further in the revised manuscript. Unfortunately, our experimental protocol precluded the possibility of monitoring accurately the oestrous cycle, which as well-known has an influence on sleep-wake architecture, brain oscillations as well as orexin signalling and receptor abundance. We therefore decided to use male mice only for the current study, but planning to use both sexes in our follow up work.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Joint Public Review:

      Summary:

      For many years, there has been extensive electrophysiological research investigating the relationship between local field potential patterns and individual cell spike patterns in the hippocampus. In this study, using innovative imaging techniques, they examined spike synchrony of hippocampal cells during locomotion and immobility states. The authors demonstrated that hippocampal place cells exhibit prominent synchronous spikes locked to theta oscillations.

      Strengths:

      The single cell voltage imaging used in this study is a highly novel method that may allow recordings that were not previously possible using existing methods.

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the strengths of our study.

      Weaknesses:

      The strength of evidence remains incomplete because of the main claim that synchronous events are not associated with ripples. As was mentioned in previous rounds of review, ripples emerge locally and independently in the two hemispheres. Thus, obtaining ripple recordings from the contralateral hemisphere does not provide solid evidence for this claim. The papers the authors are citing to make the claim that "Additionally, we implanted electrodes in the contralateral CA1 region to monitor theta and ripple oscillations, which are known to co-occur across hemispheres (29-31)" do not support this claim. For example, reference 29 contains the following statement: "These findings suggest that ripples emerge locally and independently in the two hemispheres".

      In our previous revisions, we took care to limit our claim to what our data directly supported: that synchronous ensembles of CA1 neurons were not associated with ripple oscillations recorded in the contralateral hippocampus. To address reviewer concerns, we changed the Title, modified the Abstract, adjusted relevant text in the Results, and explicitly acknowledged the methodological limitations in the Discussion. 

      In this round, we further revised the manuscript to directly address the editor’s and reviewer’s remaining concerns: 

      (1) We replaced the word “surprisingly” with a more neutral “Moreover” to avoid implying that the observed dissociation was unexpected given the use of contralateral recordings.

      Introduction (line 67-69):

      “Moreover, these synchronous ensembles occurred outside of contralateral ripples (c-ripples) …”

      (2) We removed the clause stating that ripples “co-occur across hemispheres”, along with the associated citation to Buzsaki et al. (2003), to avoid potential misinterpretation. The sentence now simply states that we recorded ripple and theta oscillations in the contralateral CA1.

      Introduction (line 63-64):

      “Additionally, we implanted electrodes in the contralateral CA1 region to monitor theta and ripple oscillations.” (co-occurrence claim removed)

      (3) We carefully replaced all mentions of “ripples” in the manuscript with “c-ripples” (i.e., contralateral ripples) to ensure that the scope of our findings is clearly defined and cannot be misinterpreted.

      (4) We strengthened the acknowledgment of the methodological limitations in the Discussion. 

      Discussion (line 528-533): 

      “While contralateral LFP recordings can capture large-scale hippocampal theta and ripple oscillations, they do not fully reflect ipsilateral-specific dynamics, such as variation in theta phase alignment or locally generated ripple events (Buzsaki et al., 2003; Szabo et al., 2022; Huang et al., 2024). Given that ripple oscillations can emerge locally and independently in each hemisphere, interpretations based on contralateral recordings must be made with caution. Further studies incorporating simultaneous ipsilateral field potential recordings will be essential to more precisely understand local-global network interactions.”

      These revisions ensure that our manuscript now presents a consistent and appropriately limited interpretation across all sections. We hope these clarifications address all remaining concerns and accurately reflect the scope of our findings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work from this paper successfully mapped transcriptional landscape and identified EA-responsive cell types (endothelial, microglia). Data suggest EA modulates BBB via immune pathways and cell communication. However, claims of "BBB opening" are not directly proven (no permeability data).

      Strengths:

      First scRNA-seq atlas of EA effects on BBB, revealing 23 cell clusters and 8 cell types. High cell throughput (98,338 cells), doublet removal, and robust clustering (Seurat, SingleR). Comprehensive bioinformatics (GO/KEGG, CellPhoneDB for ligand-receptor interactions). Raw data were deposited in GEO (GSE272895) and can be accessed.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) No in vivo/in vitro assays confirm BBB permeability changes (e.g., Evans blue leakage, TEER).

      (2) Only male rats were used, ignoring sex-specific BBB differences.

      (3) Pericytes and neurons, critical for the BBB, were not captured, likely due to dissociation artifacts.

      (4) Protein-level validation (Western blot, IHC) absent for key genes (e.g., LY6E, HSP90).

      (5) Fixed stimulation protocol (2/100 Hz, 40 min); no dose-response or temporal analysis.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses single-cell RNA sequencing to explore how electroacupuncture (EA) stimulation alters the brain's cellular and molecular landscape after blood-brain barrier (BBB) opening. The authors aim to identify changes in gene expression and signaling pathways across brain cell types in response to EA stimulation using single-cell RNA sequencing. This direction holds promise for understanding the consequences of noninvasive methods of BBB opening for therapeutic drug delivery across the BBB.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study addresses an emerging and potentially important application of noninvasive stimulation methods to manipulate BBB permeability.

      (2) The dataset provides broad transcriptional profiling across multiple brain cell types using single-cell resolution, which could serve as a valuable community resource.

      (3) Analyses of receptor-ligand signaling and cell-cell communication are included and have the potential to offer mechanistic insight into BBB regulation.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The work falls short in its current form. The experimental design lacks a clear justification, and readers are not provided with sufficient background information on the extent, timing, or regional specificity of BBB opening in this EA model. These details, established in prior work, are critical to understanding the rationale behind the current transcriptomic analyses.

      (2) Further, the results are often presented with minimal context or interpretation. There is no model of intercellular or molecular coordination to explain the BBB-opening process, despite the stated goal of identifying such mechanisms. The statement that EA induces a "unique frontal cortex-specific transcriptome signature" is not supported, as no data from other brain regions are presented. Biological interpretation is at times unclear or inaccurate - for instance, attributing astrocyte migration effects to endothelial cell clusters or suggesting microglial tight junction changes without connecting them meaningfully to endothelial function.

      (3) The study does include analyses of receptor-ligand signaling and cell-cell communication, which could be among its most biologically rich outputs. However, these are relegated to supplementary material and not shown in the leading figures. This choice limits the utility of the manuscript as a hypothesis-generating resource.

      (4) Overall, while the dataset may be of interest to BBB researchers and those developing technologies for drug delivery across the BBB, the manuscript in its current form does not yet fulfill its interpretive goals. A more integrated and biologically grounded analysis would be beneficial.

    3. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work from this paper successfully mapped transcriptional landscape and identified EA-responsive cell types (endothelial, microglia). Data suggest EA modulates BBB via immune pathways and cell communication. However, claims of "BBB opening" are not directly proven (no permeability data).

      (1) No in vivo/in vitro assays confirm BBB permeability changes (e.g., Evans blue leakage, TEER).  

      (2) Only male rats were used, ignoring sex-specific BBB differences.

      (3) Pericytes and neurons, critical for the BBB, were not captured, likely due to dissociation artifacts.

      (4) Protein-level validation (Western blot, IHC) absent for key genes (e.g., LY6E, HSP90).

      (5) Fixed stimulation protocol (2/100 Hz, 40 min); no dose-response or temporal analysis.

      (1) We sincerely apologize for the oversight regarding the description of changes in blood-brain barrier permeability. In fact, our team conducted a series of preliminary studies that verified this aspect, but we did not provide a more detailed introduction in the introduction section. We will address and improve this in the revised manuscript. (2) We are very grateful to the reviewers for pointing out the important and meaningful issue of "gender-specific BBB differences." We will make this a focal point in our future research.

      (2) As for pericytes and neurons, we acknowledge their importance in the function of the blood-brain barrier. We acknowledge the importance of pericytes and neurons in the blood-brain barrier. However, neurons are absent because our sample processing method involves dissociation. During the dissociation procedure, neuronal axons, which are relatively long, are filtered out during the frequent cell suspension steps and cannot enter the downstream microfluidic system for analysis, so they are not present in our data. Since this experiment is primarily focused on non-neuronal cells, we did not choose to use nucleus extraction for sample processing. As for pericytes, we believe they are not captured because their proportion in our samples is extremely low, which is why they are not present in the data. Further research may require single-nucleus transcriptomics or the separate isolation of these two cell types for study. Of course, in our current mechanistic studies, we are also fully considering the important roles these two cell types play in BBB function.

      (3) In addition, for verification at the protein level, we have recently conducted some experiments and will include these results in the revised version.

      (5) Lastly, regarding our electroacupuncture intervention model, we actually conducted a series of parameter optimization experiments during the preliminary exploration phase. This part is indeed lacking in our current introduction, and we will add it to the research background and introduction.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses single-cell RNA sequencing to explore how electroacupuncture (EA) stimulation alters the brain's cellular and molecular landscape after blood-brain barrier (BBB) opening. The authors aim to identify changes in gene expression and signaling pathways across brain cell types in response to EA stimulation using single-cell RNA sequencing. This direction holds promise for understanding the consequences of noninvasive methods of BBB opening for therapeutic drug delivery across the BBB.

      (1) The work falls short in its current form. The experimental design lacks a clear justification, and readers are not provided with sufficient background information on the extent, timing, or regional specificity of BBB opening in this EA model. These details, established in prior work, are critical to understanding the rationale behind the current transcriptomic analyses.

      (2) Further, the results are often presented with minimal context or interpretation. There is no model of intercellular or molecular coordination to explain the BBB-opening process, despite the stated goal of identifying such mechanisms. The statement that EA induces a "unique frontal cortex-specific transcriptome signature" is not supported, as no data from other brain regions are presented. Biological interpretation is at times unclear or inaccurate - for instance, attributing astrocyte migration effects to endothelial cell clusters or suggesting microglial tight junction changes without connecting them meaningfully to endothelial function.<br /> (3) The study does include analyses of receptor-ligand signaling and cell-cell communication, which could be among its most biologically rich outputs. However, these are relegated to supplementary material and not shown in the leading figures. This choice limits the utility of the manuscript as a hypothesis-generating resource.

      (4) Overall, while the dataset may be of interest to BBB researchers and those developing technologies for drug delivery across the BBB, the manuscript in its current form does not yet fulfill its interpretive goals. A more integrated and biologically grounded analysis would be beneficial.

      (1) It was indeed our mistake that we did not pay attention to the importance of research background factors such as the degree, timing, or regional specificity of BBB opening for the rationale and purpose of this experimental design. In our revision, we will thoroughly elaborate on the relevant previous studies.

      (2) Our current study is actually based on previous findings that electroacupuncture can open the BBB, with a more pronounced effect observed in the frontal lobe (this aspect should be further described in the research background). Building on this foundation, our aim is to delineate the potential biological mechanisms involved. Therefore, we selected frontal lobe tissue as our primary choice for sequencing and have not yet investigated differences across other brain regions, although this may become a focus of future research. Additionally, we recognize that the mechanism underlying BBB opening is complex, and at present, we cannot determine whether it is driven by a single direct factor or by coordinated actions between cells or molecules. As such, our results are presented only briefly for now, and we will carefully consider whether to supplement our findings by incorporating insights from other studies.

      (3) Thank you very much for bringing this to our attention. We will include the key results of the receptor-ligand signaling and cell-cell communication analysis in the main manuscript.

      (4) Indeed, our current dataset and analysis tend to present objective data results. We are also conducting a series of validations that may be related to the biology of the blood-brain barrier, and we look forward to sharing and discussing any future research findings with you and everyone.

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      Reply to the reviewers

      Proposed revision plan

      Based on the below reviews, we propose the following revision plan. Briefly:

      • We will remove the functional data on TGFβ signaling and mechanical loading/mechanosensing. We agree with the reviewers that we would need to generate additional histological and molecular data from conditional knockout mice, antibody and (ant)agonist treatments and the optogenetic model to determine their exact involvement in lining macrophage maturation. These experiments require significant time and other resources.
      • We would therefore like to uncouple this question for a follow-on manuscript.We will re-focus the manuscript on the developmental data providing a molecular and cellular blueprint of lining macrophage development. This will include our data on CSF1 as a key signal. The novelty and relevance of our developmental data have been highlighted by all three reviewers, and they have also praised the rigor of these experiments and their interpretation. We thus believe that this re-focus will improve the manuscript message.
      • To further enhance this, we are proposing to include additional data delineating the developmental dynamics of synovial fibroblasts. We have generated an in-depth single cell RNAsequencing dataset but did not include fibroblast-specific analyses in the original manuscript. This is not a change proposed by the reviewers, but we are proposing this because we believe this would be an impactful addition to a revised version of our study, providing data also on the maturation of the synovial (lining) macrophage niche.
      • We will otherwise respond to all individual reviewer comments and implement the requested changes, unless technically not possible. Please find below detailed point-by-point answers.

      Reviewer #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In their manuscript entitled "The synovial lining macrophage layer develops in the first weeks of life in a CSF1- and TGFβ-dependent but monocyte-independent process," the authors explore the developmental trajectory of synovial lining macrophages. They demonstrate that the formation of this specialized macrophage layer is age-dependent and governed by a distinct developmental program that proceeds independently of circulating monocytes. Through scRNA-Seq, the authors show that synovial lining macrophages originate locally from Aqp1⁺ macrophages and are marked by the expression of Csf1r, Tgfbr, and Piezo1. Notably, genetic ablation of each of these factors impaired the development of lining macrophages to varying degrees, suggesting differential contributions of CSF1, TGFβ, and PIEZO1 signaling pathways to their maturation and maintenance.

      The manuscript is well written, and the data quality and representation is of a high standard. The authors have employed a sophisticated array of state-of-the-art mouse models and cutting-edge technologies to elucidate the developmental origin of synovial lining macrophages. Notably, the supporting scRNA-Seq datasets are of excellence and provide valuable insights that will likely be of significant interest to researchers in the field of immunology and joint biology. Accordingly, the experimental approach and interpretations regarding macrophage origin are well-founded and compelling. However, in the eye of the reviewer, the section addressing the underlying molecular mechanisms is a bit less convincing. This part of the study appears slightly underdeveloped, and some of the mechanistic claims lack sufficient experimental clarity. A more rigorous experimental investigation would be essential to reinforce the manuscript's conclusions, particularly concerning the data related to Tgfbr and Piezo1, where the current evidence appears insufficiently substantiated.

      We thank the reviewer for their positive and constructive evaluation of our manuscript. We agree with them (and the other reviewers) that our functional data on the involvement of TGFβ signaling and mechanical loading/mechanosensing are comparably less convincing and substantiated than our developmental data. We are very grateful for their (and the other reviewers’) suggestions to provide more support for the involvement of these factors in lining macrophage development. However, we think that carrying this out to the same high standard will require substantial time and other resources. We have therefore decided to uncouple this from the developmental data and pursue this in follow-up work. We will re-focus the current manuscript on the developmental data. We have proposed to the editors to instead include additional data on synovial fibroblast development, to complement our macrophage data and also delineate the maturation of their niche, thereby providing a conclusive developmental atlas.

      Major point:

      1. The numbers of VSIG4⁺ macrophages appear either unaffected or only minimally altered in both Csf1rMerCreMer Tgfbr2floxed and Fcgr1Cre Piezo1floxed mouse models, respectively. This raises an important question: was the gene deletion efficiency sufficient in each model? Accordingly, the authors are encouraged to include quantitative data on gene deletion efficiency for both mouse models, as this information is critical for interpreting the observed phenotypic outcomes and validating the conclusions regarding gene function. Furthermore, to better assess the impact of Tgfbr2 and Piezo1 disruption, the authors should provide more comprehensive flow cytometry analyses and histological data for these mouse models. Given the apparent homogeneity of VSIG4⁺ macrophages (as shown by the authors themselves), bulk RNA-Seq of sorted Tgfbr2- and Piezo1-deficient VSIG4⁺ macrophages (or from TGFβ-treated animals) would offer valuable insights into both the effectiveness of gene deletion and the molecular pathways governed by TGFβ and PIEZO1 in lining macrophages.

      As outlined above, we have decided to uncouple our functional data on TGFβ, Piezo1 and mechanical loading. The points raised here are all very valid, and we will implement your suggestions in our follow-up functional work focusing on signaling events regulating lining macrophage development. On the suggestion to perform bulk RNA sequencing for VSIG4+ macrophages: This is a good one in principle – although we will not be able to use this strategy where we want to assess the consequences of experimental treatments or genetic models on lining macrophage maturation, because acquisition of VSIG4 is a key maturation event that might be impaired in these conditions.

      Minor points:

      Consistent usage of Cx3cr1-GFP+ nomenclature (for instance: Fig. S1 legend "adult mouse synovial tissue, showing PDGFRα⁺ fibroblasts (yellow) and CX3CR1-GFP⁺ cells (cyan)." versus Fig. 1 legend "Automated spot detection highlights Cx3cr1-GFP⁺ macrophages)".

      We will implement these changes.

      Unclear Fig. 3 legend: "Representative immunofluorescence images of synovial tissue from Clec9aCre:Rosa26lsl-tdT mice at 3 weeks and in adulthood, showing and tdTomato (yellow) and stained for DAPI (blue), VSIG4 (cyan)" Check 'showing and tdTomato.'

      We will implement these changes.

      For greater clarity, it would have been helpful if the transcript names had been directly included within Figures 3C, S3A, and S3C.

      We will implement these changes.

      Page 24: "(Mki67CreERT2:Rosa26lsl-tdT)" Last bracket not superscript.

      We will implement these changes.

      Page 25: "we again leveraged our scRNAsequencing dataset" Missing punctuation.

      We will implement these changes.

      Page 27: Fig. 5C legend: " of synovial tissue of 1 week-old, 3 weeks-old and adult mice." Please specify and change to 'adult Csf1rΔFIRE/ΔFIRE mice'.

      We will implement these changes.

      Page 30: The outcome observed in the Acta1-rtTA:tetO-Cre:ChR2-V5fl mouse model appears to be inconclusive: "This approach resulted in an increased density of VSIG4+ and total (F4/80+) macrophages in the exposed leg of some 5 days-old pups, but others showed the opposite trend (Figure S5D)." This variability may reflect low efficiency of the model or other technical limitations (e.g. muscle contractions frequency or time point of analysis). Given this ambiguity, it is worth reconsidering whether the data are sufficiently robust to warrant inclusion. Should the authors choose to include these findings, further experimentation of appropriate depth and precision is required to allow a conclusive interpretation (either it increases the density of VSIG4+ macrophages or not). The same applies to the Yoda1-treated mice, for which additional data are needed to determine whether VSIG4⁺ macrophage density is truly affected.

      We have decided to remove the data on the optogenetic mouse model and Yoda1 treatment and follow-on separately, implementing these suggestions, including proof of concept data for optogenetically induced muscle contractions.

      Significance

      General assessment: provide a summary of the strengths and limitations of the study. What are the strongest and most important aspects? What aspects of the study should be improved or could be developed? This is a well-designed study that uses cutting-edge methodologies to investigate the developmental trajectory of synovial lining macrophages under homeostatic conditions. The authors present robust experimental evidence and compelling interpretations concerning synovial macrophage origin, which are both well-substantiated and impactful. Nonetheless, from the reviewer's perspective, the section exploring the molecular mechanisms underlying macrophage differentiation is comparatively less convincing. This section appears somewhat underdeveloped, as some of the mechanistic claims lack sufficient depth and experimental rigor to fully substantiate the conclusions.

      Describe the nature and significance of the advance (e.g. conceptual, technical, clinical) for the field: In contrast to earlier studies (PMID: 31391580, 32601335), the inclusion of fate-mapping experiments adds an important dimension, offering novel insight into the ontogeny of synovial macrophages. This expanded perspective may prove particularly valuable in advancing our understanding of joint immunology, especially regarding the local origins and lineage relationships of macrophage populations.

      Furthermore, the authors present novel insights into the molecular pathways underlying the differentiation and development of synovial lining macrophages. By demonstrating previously unrecognized regulatory mechanisms, this work significantly deepens our understanding of the cellular and transcriptional programs that drive macrophage specialization within the joint microenvironment.

      Place the work in the context of the existing literature (provide references, where appropriate): This study builds upon previous work characterizing the macrophage compartment in the joint (PMID: 31391580, 32601335), yet provides a substantially more comprehensive dataset that spans multiple developmental time points and data on the origin of this specialized macrophage subset.

      State what audience might be interested in and influenced by the reported findings: Immunologist, clinicians

      Define your field of expertise with a few keywords to help the authors contextualize your point of view. Indicate if there are any parts of the paper that you do not have sufficient expertise to evaluate. This study falls well within the scope of the reviewer's expertise in innate immunity.

      Reviewer #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In the manuscript „The synovial lining macrophage layer develops in the first weeks of life in a CSF1- and TGFβ- dependent but monocyte-independent process", Magalhaes Pinto and colleagues carefully employ a wide range of technologies including single cell profiling, imaging and an exceptional combination of fate mapping models to characterize the ontogeny and development of lining macrophages in the joint, thus dissecting their maturation during postnatal development. Over the last decade, several landmark studies highlighted the imprinting of tissue-resident macrophages by a combination of ontogenetic and tissue-specific niche factors during development. So far, the ontogeny and the tissue niche factors governing the development and maturation of lining macrophages have not been described. Therefore, the results of this study offers insights on a small highly adapted macrophage population with relevance in many disease settings in the joint. Furthermore, the findings are nicely showcasing how macrophages are specializing to even very small tissue niches across development within one bigger anatomical compartment to serve dedicated functions within this niche.

      This manuscript is beautifully written and highlights many novel, highly relevant findings on lining macrophage biology and the authors employ a wide range of different technologies to carefully dissect the postnatal development of lining macrophages.

      In particular, the combination of scRNA-seq and fate mapping is providing a unique the link of transcriptional programs to ontogeny within the tissue niche. Furthermore, the integrative use of distinct fate mapping strategies, transgenic mouse lines, and treatment paradigms to elucidate key niche factors guiding the development and maturation of lining macrophages provides many interesting findings and data that are highly relevant to the field. I really enjoyed reading this manuscript.

      Thank you for your complimentary and constructive assessment of our manuscript, and the detailed comments below, which are very helpful. Please find point-by-point responses below.

      Major points:

      The authors show dynamic regulation of VSIG4 in lining macrophages during development, therefore VSIG4 is maybe not an ideal choice for gating strategies to define lining macrophages or to show as a single markers in immunofluorescence (IF) stainings to demonstrate their abundance across development (even though it is clear that this is the reason why the F4/80 staining is shown next to it). To demonstrate the increase of lining macrophages during development in IF, it would be more helpful if the authors would show quantifications of all F4/80+ cells and additionally VSIG4+ as a proportion of F4/80+ cells (or VSIG4+ F4/80+ and all F4/80+ in a stacked bar plot). We agree with the assessment of VSIG4 not being ideal since this is a key marker of mature lining macrophages only.

      We will provide these additional analyses.

      In Figure 1C, the authors nicely demonstrate that the lining macrophages get closer in their distance across development to build the epithelial-like macrophage structure along the adult lining. Is the close proximity between lining macrophages already fully "matured" at 3 weeks of age and comparable to adults? Please quantify the distance in adult linings.

      We will provide data for adult joints.

      Can the authors explain how the grouping was performed between the analyzed human fetal joints? It is not clear why the cut was chosen between the groups at 16/17 weeks of age. Maybe it would be also beneficial if the authors would consider not grouping these samples but rather show the specific quantifications for each samples individually and estimate via linear regression the expansion over time across human development. Furthermore, can the authors give additional information about the distancing of lining macrophages in the human fetal samples, it would be great to see if they follow the same dynamics as in mouse. Maybe comparison to human juvenile/adult joints would also add on to substantiate the findings in human samples (if possible).

      We will show samples ungrouped and perform linear regression analysis as suggested.

      The scRNA-seq analysis leaves several questions open and some conclusions and workflows cannot be easily followed.

      We appreciate this comment and the complexity of the data, and will implement the below recommendations, and clarify the issues raised.

      It is not clear how and especially why the signature genes to define macrophages vs. monocytes were chosen. Especially as the signature genes for monocytes would not include patrolling monocytes and the macrophage signature genes seem to be highly regulated during development, see also Apoe expression in NB vs. adult in Figure S2e. Why did the authors not take classical markers such as Itgam, Fcgr1a, Csf1r?

      Can dendritic cell signatures be excluded? Cluster 11 and 12 show indeed some DC markers, are these really macrophages?

      The authors provide several figure panels showing TOP marker genes or key marker genes for the identified clusters, however it is not clear if these are TOP DE genes or if the genes were hand chosen. Somehow, the authors give the impression that the clusters were chosen and labeled not based on DE genes, but more on existing literature that previously reported these macrophage populations. DE gene lists for all annotated cell types and macrophage clusters need to be provided within the manuscript.

      The authors claim that Clusters 1 and 4 are "developing" macrophages. How is this defined? Why are these developing cells compared to other clusters? And why are these clusters later on not considered as progenitors of Aqp1 macrophages and Vsig4 macrophages? Why are Aqp1+ macrophages not labeled as developing when they are later on in the manuscript shown as potential intermediate progenitors of lining macrophages?

      Furthermore, it is again confusing that markers are used throughout Figure 2 which are labeled as "key marker genes" for a population and then later on they are claimed to be regulated during development within this population, see for example Figure 2D and 2H.

      It is appreciated that the authors distinguished cycling clusters such as 8, 9, and 10 based on their cycling gene signature. Here it would be very exciting to see a cell cycle analysis across all clusters and time points to see when exactly the cells are expanding during development; this would also substantiate the data later shown for the Mki67-CreERT2 mouse model.

      Can the authors identify certain gene modules during development of lining macrophages (and/or their progenitors) which are associated with certain functions (e.g. GO terms, GSEA enrichment)?

      To determine the actual presence of the identified macrophage clusters from the scRNA-seq as macrophage populations in the joint, the authors should perform IF or FACS for key markers. Especially, Aqp1+ macrophages should be shown in the developing joint.

      We will provide additional data, but would also like to reference a study by collaborators currently in revision at Immunity, which characterizes the Aqp1+ population in detail. We are hoping to have a doi available during our revision process.

      The authors used a wide range of fate mapping models, which is quite unique and highly appreciated. The obtained results and the conclusions made from the models raise a couple of questions: Whereas contribution of HSC-derived/monocyte-derived macrophages to the lining compartment seems to be minor, there is still labeling across different models. Various aspects would need to be clarified.

      We will clarify these data throughout as per below suggestions.

      For example, the authors employ Ms4a3-Cre as a tracing model for GMP-derived monocytes, however all quantifications of the labeling efficiency are not normalized to the labeling in monocytes or another highly recombined cell population. This should be shown, similar to the other fate mapping models (Figure 3 F-I).

      Labelling efficacy for Ms4a3-Cre is near complete for GMP-derived monocytes (and neutrophils) with the Rosa-lsl-tdT (aka Ai14) reporter we have used (see also PMID: 31491389 and doi: 10.1101/2024.12.03.626330); but we will include normalized data as requested.

      Please show Ms4a3 expression across clusters across time points, to exclude expression in fetal-derived clusters.

      We will include this in the revised supplementary information, but there is indeed very little at birth (in line with the original report for other tissues PMID: 31491389).

      In line with the question raised above, if the authors can exclude a development of the Egfr1+ and Clec4n+ developing macrophages into Aqp1+ macrophages and subsequently into Vsig4 lining macrophages, the obtained data from the Ms4a3-Cre model highly suggests a correlative labeling across these clusters what could implicate a relation. However, the authors do not discuss throughout the manuscript the role of these developing macrophages. It is highly encouraged to include this into the manuscript and it would be of high relevance to understand lining macrophage development.

      This is an interesting point and we agree it deserves consideration in the revised manuscript. Indeed, our trajectory analyses do not predict differentiation of the Egfr1+ and Clec4n+ developing macrophages into Aqp1+ macrophages, and hence, ultimately lining macrophages. Conversely, Aqp1+ cells might also convert into Egfr1+ and Clec4n+ developing macrophages. We will elaborate on this more in the revised manuscript.

      The authors conclude from the pseudo bulk transcriptomic profiling of the different macrophage clusters that TdT+ and TdT- macrophages do not differ in their gene expression profile and that this is due to niche imprinting rather than origin imprinting. Even though the data supports that conclusion, the authors should verify if inkling cells early during development also show this similar gene expression profile and gene expression should be compared at the different developmental time points. Tissue niche imprinting is happening within the niche during development, most likely in a stepwise progress, and therefore there should be differences in the beginning.

      This is another important point that we will address in the revised manuscript by performing additional differential gene expression analyses at the different developmental time points, including the earliest stages, as suggested.

      The trajectorial analysis using different pseudotime pipelines is very interesting and nicely points out the potential role of Aqp1 macrophages as intermediates of Vsig4 lining macrophages. From my point of view, all trajectories seem to suggest that Egfr1 developing macrophages and Clec4n developing macrophages might differentiate into Aqp1 macrophages, however the authors are not exploring this further and the role of both developing macrophage clusters is not further discussed (see also comments above).

      We will address and discuss this in the revised manuscript.

      How was the starting point of the trajectorial analyses defined and is it the same for each pipeline used?

      We will clarify this in the revised manuscript.

      Are there potentially two trajectories? It looks like there is one in the beginning of postnatal life and a second one appearing from the monocyte-compartment later in life. If this is true, that would rather speak for a dual ontogeny of Vsig4+ macrophages, wouldn't it?

      We will discuss this in the revised manuscript.

      A heatmap (transcriptional shift) of trajectories between more clusters should be shown at least for Cluster 0,1,2, and 3. It is not sufficient to demonstrate this only between two clusters.

      We will add these analyses during revision.

      To show the similarity between Aqp1 macrophages and proliferating macrophage clusters, the authors should remove the cycling signature and compare these clusters to show that the cycling cells might be Aqp1 macrophages or earlier developing macrophage progenitors aka Clec4n or Egfr1 macrophages.

      We will address this in the revised manuscript.

      The conclusions made from the Mki67-CreERT2 data are a bit difficult to understand, whereas all progenitors (monocyte progenitors and macrophage progenitors will proliferate at the neonatal time point and no conclusions can be made if the cells expand in the niche. The authors should employ Confetti mice or other models (Ubow mice) to analyze clonal expansion in the niche.

      We agree that interpretation of the Mki67-CreERT2 data is complicated by labeling of other cells, and notably, labeling observed in BM-derived cells. We will highlight this better in the revised manuscript. We have tried using Ubow mice to address this issue, but the recombination efficacy we yielded was too low to draw conclusions. We will address this during revision.

      All predicted cell-cell interactions between macrophages and fibroblasts should be provided in a supplementary table. Are the interactions shown in Figure 5 chosen interactions or the TOP predicted ones? Whereas the authors show different numbers of interactions, it is most likely hand-picked and therefore biased.

      We will provide a full list of all predicted interactions in the revised supplementary material in addition to a list of the full differential gene expression analysis.

      The authors further aim to dissect the factors involved in the developmental niche imprinting of lining macrophages. Even though it is highly appreciated that the authors used so many experimental setups to show the reliance of lining macrophages on Csf1 and TGF-beta as well as mechanosensation, the wide range of models the different methods used and selected developmental time points make it very difficult to really interpret the data. The authors should carefully choose time points and methods (either FACS analysis across all models or IF across all, or both). Often deletion efficiencies for transgenic models and proof of concept that the inhibitors and agonists are working in the treatment paradigm are not provided. For example, Csf1rMer-iCre-Mer Tgfbr2fl/fl mice are used but no deletion efficiency is shown or different time points of analysis, maybe the macrophages are not properly targeted in the set up.

      We have decided to uncouple our experimental data on Tgfb, Piezo1 and mechanosensing/mechanical loading, but are taking this into consideration for revision. In many cases, we have in fact performed flow cytometry and imaging analyses, and agree, we should be showing this consistently.

      The authors have shown the role of Csf1 and Tgfbr2 only for lining macrophages, is this specific in the joint to this population of are subliming macrophages affected in a similar manner.

      We will include data on sublining macrophages in the revised figure (for CSF1; Tgfb data will be uncoupled from this current manuscript).

      Can the authors confirm their results in CSF1R-FIRE mice with anti-Csf1 injections or in Csf1op/op mice?

      We will expand our discussion of the Csf1 findings, and will consider including anti-CSF1 data during revision. Phenotypes on other Csf1(r) deficient mice are published, if not with the same developmental resolution as our time course in Csf1rFIRE knockout mice and with simpler readouts. Csf1op/op mice are indeed deficient in synovial lining macrophages, from 2 days of age onwards (PMID: 8050349), and lining macrophages are also absent from 2-weeks-old and adult Csf1r-/- mice (PMID: 11756160).

      The setup in Figure S5G is very interesting to test the role of movement and mechanical load on the joint, however, there is basically no data on the model provided showing the efficiency of the induced optogenetic muscle contractions, and only one time point is shown.

      Data on mechanical loading will be uncoupled from the current manuscript and substantiated in a separate follow-up.

      The results regarding the role of Piezo1 and mechanosensation vary a lot. Could it be that analyses were done too early or that actually proper weight load on the joint must be applied for the maturation of the macrophages? The authors should test this to.

      We will uncouple these data from the current manuscript during revision. However, this is a possibility that we have discussed. In fact, the most appropriate experimental approach to address the involvement of mechanical loading, onset of walking and specifically, weight bearing would be a loss-of-function approach (i.e. paralysis at the newborn stage), for which we unfortunately could not obtain ethics approval from the UK Home Office.

      The Rolipram experiment is shown in Figure S5G, but is not described in the result section. It only appears at some point in the discussion part. The authors should move it to results or remove it from the manuscript.

      We will incorporate these data with the revised section on developing synovial macrophage populations.

      Minor points:

      Please reference the Figure panels in numeric order throughout the text.

      We will change this where not the case.

      Figure 2a and 2b are a bit out of the storyline, it is not obvious why this is shown here and maybe it would be good to move it to the supplements. Gating strategy is also not used for scRNA-seq. Therefore, it would better fit to the later analysis of joint macrophages across different transgenic mouse models and treatment paradigms. The gating strategies are changing across different experiments throughout the figures, it would be nice to have a similar gating strategy for all experiments, see also Figure 3 where the defining markers for joint macrophages are changing between models.

      We will revise Figures 2, 3 and the related supplementary figures.

      A lot of figure panels have very small labeling that is basically unreadable. Axes at FACS plots for example. Sometimes, it is even impossible to distinguish cluster labels especially when they have similar colors.

      We will revise this, thanks for pointing it out.

      In the text on page 14, many markers are named which are specifically regulated during development in lining macrophages, but these factors are not labeled anywhere in the volcano plot. It would be good to showcase at least some of these named genes in the figure panel, e.g. Trem2.

      We will do this for revision.

      Figure 2F and Figure S2F are really nicely showing the percentage of cells per cluster in each analyzed biological sample. Maybe the authors could additionally consider to show a stacked bar plot with the mean percentage of cells per cluster and how the clusters are distributed across time points?

      We will include this in the revised manuscript.

      Figure 3A: IF for adult lining macrophages and the quantification are missing.

      This will be included in the revised version.

      Significance

      This manuscript highlights novel, highly relevant findings on lining macrophage biology and the authors employ a wide range of different technologies to carefully dissect the postnatal development of lining macrophages. Furthermore, this study showcases in a very elegant and detailed way the adaptation of macrophage progenitors to a highly specific anatomical tissue niche.

      The manuscript is of high interest to basic scientists focussing on macrophage biology and immune cell development and clinicians and clinician scientists focussing on joint diseases such as RA.

      Therefore the manuscript is of interest to a wide community working in immunology.

      Reviewer #3

      Summary:

      Magalhaes Pinto, Malengier-Devlies, and co-authors investigated the developmental origins and maturation of synovial (lining and sublining) macrophages across embryonic, newborn, and postnatal stages in mouse. The authors used multiple transgenic reporter lines, lineage tracing, scRNA-seq, 2D confocal and 3D lightsheet imaging, and perturbations to delineate the macrophage states and ontogeny. They propose a model in which the majority of the joint lining macrophages has a fetal (EMP-derived) origin and a small proportion has a definitive HSC-derived monocyte origin, which both seed and mature within the synovial space in the postnatal period in the first 3 weeks of life. Using cell-cell communication analysis on their scRNA-seq data, they identified Fgf2, Csf1, and Tgfb as candidate signaling pathways that support (lining) macrophage development and maturation. Functional experiments indicate that the process is CSF1 and TGFb-dependent and also partly dependent on mechanosensing through Piezo1.

      The key conclusions on the composition of the synovial macrophages are convincing based on the presented results, and are carefully phrased. The study is very comprehensive, yet the description and organization of the results of the different mouse models could be altered to improve the storyline. Several refinements in data presentation, formulation, and minor validation experiments would further improve the clarity of the story, as well as summary recaps of the major findings throughout the text.

      We thank this reviewer for their detailed review. We will be implementing the requested changes wherever technically feasible.

      Major comments:

      Generally, the story could be more streamlined by introducing earlier reporter lines and lineage-origin logic. Clearly state which reporter/CreERT2 lines and acrosses are used. It was unclear in Figure 2 that cells of the cross of the Cx3cr1-GFP and Ms4a3Cre:Rosa26lsl-tdT reporter lines were used for the scRNA-seq. The principle that there are fetal-derived and bone marrow (GMP)-derived monocytes and macrophages doesn't need to be "hidden" until Figure 3. For example, also the imaging of Ms4a3Cre could be introduced before the scRNA-seq.

      We will revise the structure and order of the manuscript during revision.

      Figure 1 could benefit from a cartoon visualizing the anatomy of the knee joint. The terms "sublining" and "synovium" are now a bit unclear, as it appears that sometimes the synovium is indicated as sublining and vice versa. Additionally, a schematic developmental timeline could be added to indicate the parallels between mouse and human development (fetal and postnatal development in mouse versus gestational age in human). Also, the various waves of hematopoiesis could be indicated in this timeline, which would be particularly helpful for Figure 3 for the lineage-tracing readouts. Lastly, the authors could end the manuscript (a new Figure 6) with a general cartoon summarizing all the results presented.

      We will include illustrations as suggested.

      Figure 1 could be rearranged: first introduce the markers CX3CR1 and VSIG4 (Figure 1D) and then present the quantifications (Figure 1B/E). Where possible, co-visualization CX3CR1-GFP and VSIG4 on tissue sections to strengthen the claims on the relationship between these 2 markers. Tying the scRNA-seq insights (Figure 2) to the imaging would be elegant. Moreover, it would be informative to represent the CX3CR1+ and VSIG4+ macrophages as a percentage of F4/80+ macrophages (Figure 1B/E). Similarly, for the flow cytometry data in Figure 2, the relationship between the markers CX3CR1 and VSIG4 on macrophages could be more clearly displayed and discussed.

      Thanks for this remark. We will endeavor to show co-localization and analysis of both markers wherever possible. However, where we did not use Cx3cr1gfp mice, co-staining was limited by antibody choice.

      The 3D imaging of the joint is a nice addition to the manuscript, as it provides more context to the anatomical structure; however, while the text suggests several newborn joints were imaged, Figure 1F visualizes (again) the knee joint. Could other joints also be represented by 3D imaging? If the knee joint is the only joint available for imaging, and previous confocal imaging focused specifically on the meniscus in the knee joint, could the meniscus also be highlighted in the lightsheet imaging?

      Apologies if this was not clear from the original manuscript text, but we have only imaged the knee joint in 3D. We will clarify this during revision and consider inclusion of additional imaging data.

      Clarification is requested regarding the imaging quantification representation. The M&M section under "Statistical analysis and reproducibility" states that individual data points are displayed, and bars represent the mean. However, some of the Figure legends (e.g., Figures 1B and S1C) specify that each dot corresponds to an individual mouse, with quantification based on 2-3 sections per mouse. While this appears to be a very reasonable representation of the data, does this mean that for each dot, the mean value from the 2-3 sections per mouse was calculated and plotted?

      We will clarify this.

      It is not clear how the differential expression analysis was performed on the Vsig4+ cells. Please specify if Cluster 0 was used for analysis, or all Vsig4-expressing cells? Not all cells in Cluster 0 have Vsig4+ expression. The authors described the expression dynamics of Aqp1 as intriguing, but lack a reasoning on why this is interesting.

      We will revise this section.

      Figure S3E: In line with the previous comment, can the authors justify that the tdTomato+/- comparisons are not biased by scRNA-seq dropout (scRNA-seq is zero-inflated, so some tdTomato- cells could be false negatives), and provide methodological details (thresholds, ambient RNA correction, etc.) to support this?

      We will clarify this and include additional representations of the tdTomato transcript data.

      Although the sex-related differences in macrophage composition and the absence of differential expression are interesting, they distract from the manuscript's main messages. Moreover, the Discussion does not elaborate on how these observations relate to joint (disease) biology. Consider removing this section or integrating it clearly into the relevant biological context.

      We will remove this section as suggested.

      CreERT2 transgenic lines are often not 100% efficient in recombination, also depending on whether tamoxifen or 4-OHT is used. Could the authors report the percentage of tdTomato+ cells in the joints and compare them to the recombination efficiencies in the monocytes/microglia under the same tamoxifen or 4-OHT conditions? This would help clarify how the interpret the macrophage labeling %'s.

      We will report labelling efficacies and/or show normalized data in the revised manuscript.

      Could the authors draw parallels between the observations in the mouse knee joint macrophage populations and literature on other joints in mouse and the knee joint in human (for example, as described in Alivernini et al., 2020 and in the very recent Raut et al., 2025)?

      We will include a section on this in the revised manuscript.

      Minor comments:

      In general, the authors should clarify in the Results what each marker used for imaging, flow cytometry, or in the mouse reporter lines delineates. For example, mention that F4/80 is a marker for tissue-resident macrophages (correct?) in immunofluorescence, that IBA1 is a marker for macrophages on human tissue sections (Figure S1), and PDPN is GP38 (Figure S2 - align usage of marker reference across main text and figures).

      We will implement this request.

      For clarity in the microscopy representation, the single channels should be represented in a grey scale.

      We will revise image presentation.

      Figure S1B: Is CX3CR1 also restricted to the lining macrophages in human? Could a co-staining with IBA1 be performed to strengthen the species similarities?

      To our knowledge, there is no antibody available that works for imaging of human CX3CR1. Moreover, CX3CR1 is only limited to the lining population in adult joints, in fetal and newborn (mouse) joints, all macrophages express this receptor, as do fetal progenitors to macrophages. However, Alivernini and colleagues have reported that TREM2high macrophages are the human counterpart of the mouse CX3CR1+ lining population (PMID: 32601335).

      Adipocyte diameter quantification: Avoid plotting individual adipocytes from 2 mice without per-mouse visualization. Instead, report the mean adipocyte diameter per mouse and plot those means.

      We will implement this change.

      A little typo was spotted in the "Statistical analysis and reproducibility" section: it is Dunn's, not Bunn's multiple-comparison correction.

      Thanks for spotting this.

      Figure 2A: The gating strategy for the CX3CR1-GFP cells is missing.

      We will provide this in the revised manuscript or supplementary material.

      Improve the visualization of some plots. For example, Figure 2F is hard to read because of the big dot size. The dots seem to add no information to the graph and could be removed. Additionally, for comparing the clusters across the different time points, one could project the cells from the other time points in grey in the background.

      We will revise the presentation of these data.

      Figure S2: The dotplot is more informative than the heatmap, consider removing the heatmap.

      We will do that.

      Figure 3A: If technically feasible, image and visualize both the GFP and tdTomato expression. It would be informative to see the Cx3cr1+ and Ms4a3-derived cells in the same specimen.

      We will thrive to show this in the revised manuscript.

      Figure 3C: Highlight that tdTomato expression is visualized here.

      We will do that.

      Figure 3G,F: The authors should place the schematics and graphs next to each other, so the data points can be more easily compared.

      We aim to do this in the revised manuscript.

      Figure 4B: Which co-staining was performed for the immunofluorescence to quantify the % of tdTomato+ cells?

      We co-stained for F4/80 and assessed localization in the lining or sublining. This will be clarified in the revised Figure legend.

      Figure 4C: The trajectory analysis appears to have an arrow pointing from the Ccr2+ macrophages to the Ly6c+ monocytes. Please verify this directionality, as its seems against the known biology.

      This will be addressed during revision.

      Figure 5 mentions that the Csfr1 levels were reduced in a tissue-specific manner, but it is unclear how this tissue specificity was achieved.

      We apologize for this misunderstanding. Csfr1FIRE mice are not tissue-specific knockouts, but they are more specific than global knockout mice, since only a (myeloid-specific) enhancer is affected. We will clarify this in the relevant section.

      For the TGFb perturbations (Tgfbr2 KO and systemic TGFb depletion): did the authors validate reduced TGFb pathway activity in the macrophages, for example, reduced pSMAD2/3 levels? This would validate the effectiveness of the perturbations. This is an important point, and assessing signaling events downstream of TGFb is a very good suggestion.

      As per above comment, we have decided to uncouple the functional data with exception of CSF1 from the revised version of the current manuscript, but we will be taking this into account for substantiating our functional data in follow-up work.

      Figure 5F could benefit from a timeline of the treatment.

      As for the previous point raised, we will be taking this into account for follow-up work on the uncoupled functional data.

      The Methods mention that Gene Ontology analysis was performed on the single-cell data, but the results are not plotted in a figure. It would be informative to include this GO/pathway analysis in the appropriate figure(s).

      We will include this in the revised (supplementary) information.

      Significance:

      This work provides a high temporal-resolution and "spatial" resolution reference map of the ontogeny and maturation of the synovial lining macrophages in the knee joint. It complements existing literature that demonstrated the presence of tissue-resident macrophages in the synovial space and lining (Culemann, et al., 2019 and others) by charting the embryonic-to-postnatal emergence of lining and sublining subsets. In particular, this mouse work identified some key signaling pathways in shaping this tissue compartment. This dataset serves as a robust, steady-state reference for joint pathology and can be implemented with human studies on disease biology of the knee joint (e.g., Alivernini et al., 2020; Raut et al., 2025). Insights into the exact developmental origins, mechanisms contributing to diverse or seemingly similar cell types, and distinct maturation processes are crucial to understanding disease biology, in which developmental processes can be hijacked/reactivated.

      These findings will interest researchers in joint disease biology (osteoarthritis and immune-mediated arthritides such as RA and psoriasis), macrophage development (tissue-resident vs monocyte-derived lineages), the bone/joint microenvironment, and joint mechanobiology.

      The reviewer's expertise is in developmental biology, mesoderm, bone biology, hematopoiesis, and monocyte/macrophage biology in disease

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary:

      Magalhaes Pinto, Malengier-Devlies, and co-authors investigated the developmental origins and maturation of synovial (lining and sublining) macrophages across embryonic, newborn, and postnatal stages in mouse. The authors used multiple transgenic reporter lines, lineage tracing, scRNA-seq, 2D confocal and 3D lightsheet imaging, and perturbations to delineate the macrophage states and ontogeny. They propose a model in which the majority of the joint lining macrophages has a fetal (EMP-derived) origin and a small proportion has a definitive HSC-derived monocyte origin, which both seed and mature within the synovial space in the postnatal period in the first 3 weeks of life. Using cell-cell communication analysis on their scRNA-seq data, they identified Fgf2, Csf1, and Tgfb as candidate signaling pathways that support (lining) macrophage development and maturation. Functional experiments indicate that the process is CSF1 and TGFb-dependent and also partly dependent on mechanosensing through Piezo1. The key conclusions on the composition of the synovial macrophages are convincing based on the presented results, and are carefully phrased. The study is very comprehensive, yet the description and organization of the results of the different mouse models could be altered to improve the storyline. Several refinements in data presentation, formulation, and minor validation experiments would further improve the clarity of the story, as well as summary recaps of the major findings throughout the text.

      Major comments:

      1. Generally, the story could be more streamlined by introducing earlier reporter lines and lineage-origin logic. Clearly state which reporter/CreERT2 lines and acrosses are used. It was unclear in Figure 2 that cells of the cross of the Cx3cr1-GFP and Ms4a3Cre:Rosa26lsl-tdT reporter lines were used for the scRNA-seq. The principle that there are fetal-derived and bone marrow (GMP)-derived monocytes and macrophages doesn't need to be "hidden" until Figure 3. For example, also the imaging of Ms4a3Cre could be introduced before the scRNA-seq.
      2. Figure 1 could benefit from a cartoon visualizing the anatomy of the knee joint. The terms "sublining" and "synovium" are now a bit unclear, as it appears that sometimes the synovium is indicated as sublining and vice versa. Additionally, a schematic developmental timeline could be added to indicate the parallels between mouse and human development (fetal and postnatal development in mouse versus gestational age in human). Also, the various waves of hematopoiesis could be indicated in this timeline, which would be particularly helpful for Figure 3 for the lineage-tracing readouts. Lastly, the authors could end the manuscript (a new Figure 6) with a general cartoon summarizing all the results presented.
      3. Figure 1 could be rearranged: first introduce the markers CX3CR1 and VSIG4 (Figure 1D) and then present the quantifications (Figure 1B/E). Where possible, co-visualization CX3CR1-GFP and VSIG4 on tissue sections to strengthen the claims on the relationship between these 2 markers. Tying the scRNA-seq insights (Figure 2) to the imaging would be elegant. Moreover, it would be informative to represent the CX3CR1+ and VSIG4+ macrophages as a percentage of F4/80+ macrophages (Figure 1B/E). Similarly, for the flow cytometry data in Figure 2, the relationship between the markers CX3CR1 and VSIG4 on macrophages could be more clearly displayed and discussed.
      4. The 3D imaging of the joint is a nice addition to the manuscript, as it provides more context to the anatomical structure; however, while the text suggests several newborn joints were imaged, Figure 1F visualizes (again) the knee joint. Could other joints also be represented by 3D imaging? If the knee joint is the only joint available for imaging, and previous confocal imaging focused specifically on the meniscus in the knee joint, could the meniscus also be highlighted in the lightsheet imaging?
      5. Clarification is requested regarding the imaging quantification representation. The M&M section under "Statistical analysis and reproducibility" states that individual data points are displayed, and bars represent the mean. However, some of the Figure legends (e.g., Figures 1B and S1C) specify that each dot corresponds to an individual mouse, with quantification based on 2-3 sections per mouse. While this appears to be a very reasonable representation of the data, does this mean that for each dot, the mean value from the 2-3 sections per mouse was calculated and plotted?
      6. It is not clear how the differential expression analysis was performed on the Vsig4+ cells. Please specify if Cluster 0 was used for analysis, or all Vsig4-expressing cells? Not all cells in Cluster 0 have Vsig4+ expression. The authors described the expression dynamics of Aqp1 as intriguing, but lack a reasoning on why this is interesting.
      7. Figure S3E: In line with the previous comment, can the authors justify that the tdTomato+/- comparisons are not biased by scRNA-seq dropout (scRNA-seq is zero-inflated, so some tdTomato- cells could be false negatives), and provide methodological details (thresholds, ambient RNA correction, etc.) to support this?
      8. Although the sex-related differences in macrophage composition and the absence of differential expression are interesting, they distract from the manuscript's main messages. Moreover, the Discussion does not elaborate on how these observations relate to joint (disease) biology. Consider removing this section or integrating it clearly into the relevant biological context.
      9. CreERT2 transgenic lines are often not 100% efficient in recombination, also depending on whether tamoxifen or 4-OHT is used. Could the authors report the percentage of tdTomato+ cells in the joints and compare them to the recombination efficiencies in the monocytes/microglia under the same tamoxifen or 4-OHT conditions? This would help clarify how the interpret the macrophage labeling %'s.
      10. Could the authors draw parallels between the observations in the mouse knee joint macrophage populations and literature on other joints in mouse and the knee joint in human (for example, as described in Alivernini et al., 2020 and in the very recent Raut et al., 2025)?

      Minor comments:

      1. In general, the authors should clarify in the Results what each marker used for imaging, flow cytometry, or in the mouse reporter lines delineates. For example, mention that F4/80 is a marker for tissue-resident macrophages (correct?) in immunofluorescence, that IBA1 is a marker for macrophages on human tissue sections (Figure S1), and PDPN is GP38 (Figure S2 - align usage of marker reference across main text and figures).
      2. For clarity in the microscopy representation, the single channels should be represented in a grey scale.
      3. Figure S1B: Is CX3CR1 also restricted to the lining macrophages in human? Could a co-staining with IBA1 be performed to strengthen the species similarities?
      4. Adipocyte diameter quantification: Avoid plotting individual adipocytes from 2 mice without per-mouse visualization. Instead, report the mean adipocyte diameter per mouse and plot those means.
      5. A little typo was spotted in the "Statistical analysis and reproducibility" section: it is Dunn's, not Bunn's multiple-comparison correction.
      6. Figure 2A: The gating strategy for the CX3CR1-GFP cells is missing.
      7. Improve the visualization of some plots. For example, Figure 2F is hard to read because of the big dot size. The dots seem to add no information to the graph and could be removed. Additionally, for comparing the clusters across the different time points, one could project the cells from the other time points in grey in the background.
      8. Figure S2: The dotplot is more informative than the heatmap, consider removing the heatmap.
      9. Figure 3A: If technically feasible, image and visualize both the GFP and tdTomato expression. It would be informative to see the Cx3cr1+ and Ms4a3-derived cells in the same specimen.
      10. Figure 3C: Highlight that tdTomato expression is visualized here.
      11. Figure 3G,F: The authors should place the schematics and graphs next to each other, so the data points can be more easily compared.
      12. Figure 4B: Which co-staining was performed for the immunofluorescence to quantify the % of tdTomato+ cells?
      13. Figure 4C: The trajectory analysis appears to have an arrow pointing from the Ccr2+ macrophages to the Ly6c+ monocytes. Please verify this directionality, as its seems against the known biology.
      14. Figure 5 mentions that the Csfr1 levels were reduced in a tissue-specific manner, but it is unclear how this tissue specificity was achieved.
      15. For the TGFb perturbations (Tgfbr2 KO and systemic TGFb depletion): did the authors validate reduced TGFb pathway activity in the macrophages, for example, reduced pSMAD2/3 levels? This would validate the effectiveness of the perturbations.
      16. Figure 5F could benefit from a timeline of the treatment.
      17. The Methods mention that Gene Ontology analysis was performed on the single-cell data, but the results are not plotted in a figure. It would be informative to include this GO/pathway analysis in the appropriate figure(s).

      Significance

      This work provides a high temporal-resolution and "spatial" resolution reference map of the ontogeny and maturation of the synovial lining macrophages in the knee joint. It complements existing literature that demonstrated the presence of tissue-resident macrophages in the synovial space and lining (Culemann, et al., 2019 and others) by charting the embryonic-to-postnatal emergence of lining and sublining subsets. In particular, this mouse work identified some key signaling pathways in shaping this tissue compartment. This dataset serves as a robust, steady-state reference for joint pathology and can be implemented with human studies on disease biology of the knee joint (e.g., Alivernini et al., 2020; Raut et al., 2025). Insights into the exact developmental origins, mechanisms contributing to diverse or seemingly similar cell types, and distinct maturation processes are crucial to understanding disease biology, in which developmental processes can be hijacked/reactivated.

      These findings will interest researchers in joint disease biology (osteoarthritis and immune-mediated arthritides such as RA and psoriasis), macrophage development (tissue-resident vs monocyte-derived lineages), the bone/joint microenvironment, and joint mechanobiology.

      The reviewer's expertise is in developmental biology, mesoderm, bone biology, hematopoiesis, and monocyte/macrophage biology in disease

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In the manuscript „The synovial lining macrophage layer develops in the first weeks of life in a CSF1- and TGFβ- dependent but monocyte-independent process", Magalhaes Pinto and colleagues carefully employ a wide range of technologies including single cell profiling, imaging and an exceptional combination of fate mapping models to characterize the ontogeny and development of lining macrophages in the joint, thus dissecting their maturation during postnatal development. Over the last decade, several landmark studies highlighted the imprinting of tissue-resident macrophages by a combination of ontogenetic and tissue-specific niche factors during development. So far, the ontogeny and the tissue niche factors governing the development and maturation of lining macrophages have not been described. Therefore, the results of this study offers insights on a small highly adapted macrophage population with relevance in many disease settings in the joint. Furthermore, the findings are nicely showcasing how macrophages are specializing to even very small tissue niches across development within one bigger anatomical compartment to serve dedicated functions within this niche.

      This manuscript is beautifully written and highlights many novel, highly relevant findings on lining macrophage biology and the authors employ a wide range of different technologies to carefully dissect the postnatal development of lining macrophages.

      In particular, the combination of scRNA-seq and fate mapping is providing a unique the link of transcriptional programs to ontogeny within the tissue niche. Furthermore, the integrative use of distinct fate mapping strategies, transgenic mouse lines, and treatment paradigms to elucidate key niche factors guiding the development and maturation of lining macrophages provides many interesting findings and data that are highly relevant to the field. I really enjoyed reading this manuscript.

      Major points:

      1) The authors show dynamic regulation of VSIG4 in lining macrophages during development, therefore VSIG4 is maybe not an ideal choice for gating strategies to define lining macrophages or to show as a single markers in immunofluorescence (IF) stainings to demonstrate their abundance across development (even though it is clear that this is the reason why the F4/80 staining is shown next to it). To demonstrate the increase of lining macrophages during development in IF, it would be more helpful if the authors would show quantifications of all F4/80+ cells and additionally VSIG4+ as a proportion of F4/80+ cells (or VSIG4+ F4/80+ and all F4/80+ in a stacked bar plot).

      2) In Figure 1C, the authors nicely demonstrate that the lining macrophages get closer in their distance across development to build the epithelial-like macrophage structure along the adult lining. Is the close proximity between lining macrophages already fully "matured" at 3 weeks of age and comparable to adults? Please quantify the distance in adult linings.

      3) Can the authors explain how the grouping was performed between the analyzed human fetal joints? It is not clear why the cut was chosen between the groups at 16/17 weeks of age. Maybe it would be also beneficial if the authors would consider not grouping these samples but rather show the specific quantifications for each samples individually and estimate via linear regression the expansion over time across human development. Furthermore, can the authors give additional information about the distancing of lining macrophages in the human fetal samples, it would be great to see if they follow the same dynamics as in mouse. Maybe comparison to human juvenile/adult joints would also add on to substantiate the findings in human samples (if possible).

      4) The scRNA-seq analysis leaves several questions open and some conclusions and workflows cannot be easily followed.

      a. It is not clear how and especially why the signature genes to define macrophages vs. monocytes were chosen. Especially as the signature genes for monocytes would not include patrolling monocytes and the macrophage signature genes seem to be highly regulated during development, see also Apoe expression in NB vs. adult in Figure S2e. Why did the authors not take classical markers such as Itgam, Fcgr1a, Csf1r?

      b. Can dendritic cell signatures be excluded? Cluster 11 and 12 show indeed some DC markers, are these really macrophages?

      c. The authors provide several figure panels showing TOP marker genes or key marker genes for the identified clusters, however it is not clear if these are TOP DE genes or if the genes were hand chosen. Somehow, the authors give the impression that the clusters were chosen and labeled not based on DE genes, but more on existing literature that previously reported these macrophage populations. DE gene lists for all annotated cell types and macrophage clusters need to be provided within the manuscript.

      d. The authors claim that Clusters 1 and 4 are "developing" macrophages. How is this defined? Why are these developing cells compared to other clusters? And why are these clusters later on not considered as progenitors of Aqp1 macrophages and Vsig4 macrophages? Why are Aqp1+ macrophages not labeled as developing when they are later on in the manuscript shown as potential intermediate progenitors of lining macrophages?

      e. Furthermore, it is again confusing that markers are used throughout Figure 2 which are labeled as "key marker genes" for a population and then later on they are claimed to be regulated during development within this population, see for example Figure 2D and 2H.

      f. It is appreciated that the authors distinguished cycling clusters such as 8, 9, and 10 based on their cycling gene signature. Here it would be very exciting to see a cell cycle analysis across all clusters and time points to see when exactly the cells are expanding during development; this would also substantiate the data later shown for the Mki67-CreERT2 mouse model.

      g. Can the authors identify certain gene modules during development of lining macrophages (and/or their progenitors) which are associated with certain functions (e.g. GO terms, GSEA enrichment)?

      5) To determine the actual presence of the identified macrophage clusters from the scRNA-seq as macrophage populations in the joint, the authors should perform IF or FACS for key markers. Especially, Aqp1+ macrophages should be shown in the developing joint.

      6) The authors used a wide range of fate mapping models, which is quite unique and highly appreciated. The obtained results and the conclusions made from the models raise a couple of questions: Whereas contribution of HSC-derived/monocyte-derived macrophages to the lining compartment seems to be minor, there is still labeling across different models. Various aspects would need to be clarified.

      a. For example, the authors employ Ms4a3-Cre as a tracing model for GMP-derived monocytes, however all quantifications of the labeling efficiency are not normalized to the labeling in monocytes or another highly recombined cell population. This should be shown, similar to the other fate mapping models (Figure 3 F-I).

      b. Please show Ms4a3 expression across clusters across time points, to exclude expression in fetal-derived clusters.

      c. In line with the question raised above, if the authors can exclude a development of the Egfr1+ and Clec4n+ developing macrophages into Aqp1+ macrophages and subsequently into Vsig4 lining macrophages, the obtained data from the Ms4a3-Cre model highly suggests a correlative labeling across these clusters what could implicate a relation. However, the authors do not discuss throughout the manuscript the role of these developing macrophages. It is highly encouraged to include this into the manuscript and it would be of high relevance to understand lining macrophage development.

      d. The authors conclude from the pseudo bulk transcriptomic profiling of the different macrophage clusters that TdT+ and TdT- macrophages do not differ in their gene expression profile and that this is due to niche imprinting rather than origin imprinting. Even though the data supports that conclusion, the authors should verify if inkling cells early during development also show this similar gene expression profile and gene expression should be compared at the different developmental time points. Tissue niche imprinting is happening within the niche during development, most likely in a stepwise progress, and therefore there should be differences in the beginning.

      7) The trajectorial analysis using different pseudotime pipelines is very interesting and nicely points out the potential role of Aqp1 macrophages as intermediates of Vsig4 lining macrophages. From my point of view, all trajectories seem to suggest that Egfr1 developing macrophages and Clec4n developing macrophages might differentiate into Aqp1 macrophages, however the authors are not exploring this further and the role of both developing macrophage clusters is not further discussed (see also comments above).

      8) How was the starting point of the trajectorial analyses defined and is it the same for each pipeline used?

      9) Are there potentially two trajectories? It looks like there is one in the beginning of postnatal life and a second one appearing from the monocyte-compartment later in life. If this is true, that would rather speak for a dual ontogeny of Vsig4+ macrophages, wouldn't it?

      10) A heatmap (transcriptional shift) of trajectories between more clusters should be shown at least for Cluster 0,1,2, and 3. It is not sufficient to demonstrate this only between two clusters.

      11) To show the similarity between Aqp1 macrophages and proliferating macrophage clusters, the authors should remove the cycling signature and compare these clusters to show that the cycling cells might be Aqp1 macrophages or earlier developing macrophage progenitors aka Clec4n or Egfr1 macrophages.

      12) The conclusions made from the Mki67-CreERT2 data are a bit difficult to understand, whereas all progenitors (monocyte progenitors and macrophage progenitors will proliferate at the neonatal time point and no conclusions can be made if the cells expand in the niche. The authors should employ Confetti mice or other models (Ubow mice) to analyze clonal expansion in the niche.

      13) All predicted cell-cell interactions between macrophages and fibroblasts should be provided in a supplementary table. Are the interactions shown in Figure 5 chosen interactions or the TOP predicted ones? Whereas the authors show different numbers of interactions, it is most likely hand-picked and therefore biased.

      14) The authors further aim to dissect the factors involved in the developmental niche imprinting of lining macrophages. Even though it is highly appreciated that the authors used so many experimental setups to show the reliance of lining macrophages on Csf1 and TGF-beta as well as mechanosensation, the wide range of models the different methods used and selected developmental time points make it very difficult to really interpret the data. The authors should carefully choose time points and methods (either FACS analysis across all models or IF across all, or both). Often deletion efficiencies for transgenic models and proof of concept that the inhibitors and agonists are working in the treatment paradigm are not provided. For example, Csf1rMer-iCre-Mer Tgfbr2fl/fl mice are used but no deletion efficiency is shown or different time points of analysis, maybe the macrophages are not properly targeted in the set up.

      15) The authors have shown the role of Csf1 and Tgfbr2 only for lining macrophages, is this specific in the joint to this population of are subliming macrophages affected in a similar manner.

      16) Can the authors confirm their results in CSF1R-FIRE mice with anti-Csf1 injections or in Csf1op/op mice?

      17) The setup in Figure S5G is very interesting to test the role of movement and mechanical load on the joint, however, there is basically no data on the model provided showing the efficiency of the induced optogenetic muscle contractions, and only one time point is shown.

      18) The results regarding the role of Piezo1 and mechanosensation vary a lot. Could it be that analyses were done too early or that actually proper weight load on the joint must be applied for the maturation of the macrophages? The authors should test this to

      19) The Rolipram experiment is shown in Figure S5G, but is not described in the result section. It only appears at some point in the discussion part. The authors should move it to results or remove it from the manuscript.

      Minor points:

      1) Please reference the Figure panels in numeric order throughout the text.

      2) Figure 2a and 2b are a bit out of the storyline, it is not obvious why this is shown here and maybe it would be good to move it to the supplements. Gating strategy is also not used for scRNA-seq. Therefore, it would better fit to the later analysis of joint macrophages across different transgenic mouse models and treatment paradigms. The gating strategies are changing across different experiments throughout the figures, it would be nice to have a similar gating strategy for all experiments, see also Figure 3 where the defining markers for joint macrophages are changing between models.

      3) A lot of figure panels have very small labeling that is basically unreadable. Axes at FACS plots for example. Sometimes, it is even impossible to distinguish cluster labels especially when they have similar colors.

      4) In the text on page 14, many markers are named which are specifically regulated during development in lining macrophages, but these factors are not labeled anywhere in the volcano plot. It would be good to showcase at least some of these named genes in the figure panel, e.g. Trem2.

      5) Figure 2F and Figure S2F are really nicely showing the percentage of cells per cluster in each analyzed biological sample. Maybe the authors could additionally consider to show a stacked bar plot with the mean percentage of cells per cluster and how the clusters are distributed across time points?

      6) Figure 3A: IF for adult lining macrophages and the quantification are missing

      Significance

      This manuscript highlights novel, highly relevant findings on lining macrophage biology and the authors employ a wide range of different technologies to carefully dissect the postnatal development of lining macrophages. Furthermore, this study showcases in a very elegant and detailed way the adaptation of macrophage progenitors to a highly specific anatomical tissue niche.

      The manuscript is of high interest to basic scientists focussing on macrophage biology and immune cell development and clinicians and clinician scientists focussing on joint diseases such as RA

      Therefore the manuscript is of interest to a wide community working in immunology.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Atchou et al. investigates the role of the microtubule cytoskeleton in sporozoites of Plasmodium berghei, including possible functions of microtubule post-translational modifications (tyrosination and polyglutamylation) in the development of sporozoites in the liver. They also assessed the development of sporozoites in the mosquito. Using cell culture models and in vivo infections with parasites that contain tubulin mutants deficient in certain PTMs, they show that may aspects of the life cycle progression are impaired. The main conclusion is that microtubule PTMs play a major role in the differentiation processes of the parasites.

      However, there are a number of major and minor points of criticism that relate to the interpretation of some of the data.

      Comments:

      (1) The first paragraph of "Results" almost suggests that the presence of a subpellicular MT-array in sporozoites is a new discovery. This is not the case, see e.g. the recent publication by Ferreira et al. (Nature Communications, 2023).

      (2) Why were HeLa cells and not hepatocytes (as in Figure 3) used for measuring infection rates of the mutants in Figure 5H and 5L? As I understand, HeLa cells are not natural host cells for invading sporozoites. HeLa cells are epithelial cells derived from a cervical tumour. I am not an expert in Plasmodium biology, but is a HeLa infection an accepted surrogate model for liver stage development?

      (3) The tubulin staining in Figures 1A and 1B is confusing and doesn't seem to make sense. Whereas in 1A the antibody nicely stains host and parasite tubulin, in 1B, only parasite tubulin is visible. If the same antibody and the same host cells have been used, HeLa cytoplasmic microtubules should be visible in 1B. In fact, they should be the predominant antigen. The same applies to Figure 2, where host microtubules are also not visible.

      (4) In Figures 2A and B, the host nuclei appear to have very different sizes in the DMSO controls and in the drug-treated cells. For example, in the 20 µM (-) image (bottom right), the nuclei are much larger than in the DMSO (-) control (top left). If this is the case, expansion microscopy hasn't worked reproducibly, and therefore, quantification of fluorescence is problematic. The scalebar is the same for all panels.

      (5) I don't quite follow the argument that spindles and the LSPMB are dynamic structures (e.g., lines 145, 174). That is a trivial statement for the spindle, as it is always dynamic, but beyond that, it has only been shown that the structure is sensitive to oryzalin. That says little about any "natural" dynamic behaviour. Any microtubule structure can be destroyed by a particular physical or chemical treatment, but that doesn't mean all structures are dynamic. It also depends on the definition of "dynamic" in a particular context, for example, the time scale of dynamic behaviour (changes within seconds, minutes, or hours).

      (6) I am not sure what part in the story EB1 plays. The data are only shown in the Supplements and don't seem to be of particular relevance. EB1 is a ubiquitous protein associated with microtubule plus ends. The statement (line 192) that it "may play a broader role..." is unsubstantiated and cannot be based merely on the observation that it is expressed in a particular life cycle stage.

      (7) Line 196 onwards: The antibody IN105 is better known in the field as polyE. Maybe that should be added in Materials and Methods. Also, the antibody T9028 against tyrosinated tubulin is poorly validated in the literature and rarely used. Usually, researchers in this field use the monoclonal antibody YL1/2. I am not sure why this unusual antibody was chosen in this study. In fact, has its specificity against tyrosinated α-tubulin from Plasmodium berghei ever been shown? The original antigen was human and had the sequence EGEEY. The Plasmodium sequence is YEADY and hence very different. It is stated that the LSPMB is both polyglutamylated and tyrosinated. This is unusual because polyglutamylated microtubules are usually indicative of stable microtubules, whereas tyrosinated microtubules are found on freshly polymerised and dynamic microtubules. However, a co-localisation within the same cell has not been attempted. This is, however, possible since polyE is a rabbit antibody and T9028 is a mouse antibody. I suspect that differences or gradients along the LSPMB would have been noticed. Also, in lines 207/208, it is said that tyrosination disappears after hepatocyte invasion, which is shown in Figure 3. However, in Figure 3A, quite a lot of positive signals for tyrosination are visible in the 54 and 56 hpi panels.

      (8) In line 229, it is stated that tyrosination "has previously been associated with stable microtubule in motility". This statement is not correct. In fact, none of the cited references that apparently support this statement show that this is the case. On the contrary, stable microtubules, such as flagellar axonemes, are almost completely detyrosinated. Therefore, tyrosination is a marker for dynamic microtubules, whereas detyrosinated microtubules are indicative of stable microtubules. This is an established fact, and it is odd that the authors claim the opposite.

      (9) Line 236 onwards: Concerning the generation of tubulin mutants, I think it is necessary to demonstrate successful replacement of the wild-type allele by the mutant allele. I am sure the authors have done this by amplification and subsequent sequencing of the genomic locus using PCR primers outside the plasmid sequences. I suggest including this information, e.g., by displaying the chromatograph trace in a supplementary figure. Or are the sequences displayed in Figure S3B already derived from sequenced genomic DNA? This is not described in the Legend or in Materials and Methods. The left PCR products obtained for Figure S3 B would be a suitable template for sequencing.

      (10) It is also important to be aware of the fact that glutamylation also occurs on β-tubulin. This signal will also be detected by polyE (IN105). Therefore, it is surprising that IN105 immunofluorescence is negative on the C-term Δ cells (Figure S3 D). Is there anything known about confirmed polyglutamylation sites on both α- and β-tubulins in Plasmodium, e.g., by MS? In Toxoplasma, both α- and β-tubulin have been shown to be polyglutamylated.

      (11) Figure S3 is very confusing. In the legend, certain intron deletions are mentioned. How does this relate to posttranslational tubulin modifications? The corresponding section in Results (lines 288-292) is also not very helpful in understanding this.

      (12) Figure 4E doesn't look like brightfield microscopy but like some sort of fluorescent imaging. In Figure 4C, were the control (NoΔ) cells with an integrated cassette, but no mutations, or non-transgenic cells?

      (13) It is difficult to understand why the TyΔ and the CtΔ mutants still show quite a strong signal using the anti-tyrosination antibody. If the mutants have replaced all wild-type alleles, the signal should be completely absent, unless the antibody (see my comment above concerning T9028) cross-reacts with detyrosinated microtubules. Therefore, the quantitation in Figures 5F and 5G is actually indicative of something that shouldn't be like that. The quantitation of 5F is at odds with the microscopy image in 5D. If this image is representative, the anti-Ty staining in TyΔ is as strong as in the control NoΔ.

      (14) The statement that the failure of CtΔ mutants to generate viable sporozoites is due to the lack of microtubule PTMs (lines 295-296) is speculative. The lack of the entire C-terminal tail could have a number of consequences, such as impaired microtubule assembly or failure to recruit and bind associated proteins. This is not necessarily linked to PTMs. Also, it has been shown in yeast that for microtubules to form properly and exquisite regulation (proteostasis) of the ratio between α- and β-tubulin is essential (Wethekam and Moore, 2023). I am not sure, but according to Materials and Methods (line 423), the gene cassettes for replacing the wild-type tubulin gene with the mutant versions contain a selectable marker gene for pyrimethamine selection. Are there qPCR data that show that expression levels of mutant α-tubulin are more or less the same as the wild-type levels?

      (15) In the Discussion, my impression is that two recent studies, the superb Expansion Microscopy study by Bertiaux et al. (2021) and the cryo-EM study by Ferreira et al. (2023), are not sufficiently recognised (although they are cited elsewhere in the manuscript). The latter study includes a detailed description of the microtubule cytoskeleton in sporozoites. However, the present study clearly expands the knowledge about the structure of the cytoskeleton in liver stage parasites and is one of the few studies addressing the distribution and function of microtubule post-translational modifications in Plasmodium.

      (16) I somewhat disagree with the statement of a co-occurrence of polyglutamylated and tyrosinated microtubules. I think the resolution is too low to reach that conclusion. As this is a bold claim, and would be contrary to what is known from other organisms, it would require a more rigorous validation. Given the apparent problems with the anti-Ty antibody (signal in the TyΔ mutant), one should be very cautious with this claim.

      (17) In the Discussion (lines 311 and 377), it is again claimed that tyrosinated microtubules are "a well-known marker of stable microtubules". This statement is completely incorrect, and I am surprised by this serious mistake. A few lines later, the authors say that polyglutamylated is "commonly associated with dynamic microtubule behaviour". Again, this is completely incorrect and is the opposite of what is firmly established in the literature. Polyglutamylation and detyrosination are markers of stable microtubules.

      (18) In line 339, the authors interpret the residual antibody staining after the introduction of the mutant tubulin as a compensatory mechanism. There is no evidence for this. More likely explanations are firstly the quality of the anti-Ty-antibody used (see comment above), and the fact that also β-tubulin carries C-terminal polyglutamylation sites, which haven't been investigated in this study. PTMs on β-tubulin are not compensatory, but normal PTMs, at least in all other organisms where microtubule PTMs have been investigated.

    2. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors try to investigate how the population of microtubules (LSPMB) that originate from sporozoite subpellicular microtubules (SSPM) and are remodelled during liver-stage development of malaria parasites. These bundles shrink over time and help form structures needed for cell division. The authors have used expansion microscopy, live-cell imaging, genetically engineered mutants, and pharmacological perturbation to study parasite development with liver cells.

      A major strength of the manuscript is the live cell imaging and expansion microscopy to study this challenging liver stage of parasite development. It gives important knowledge that PTMs of α-tubulin, such as polyglutamylation and tyrosination/detyrosination, are crucial for microtubule stability. Mutations in α-tubulin reduce the parasite's ability to move and proliferate in the liver cells. The drug oryzalin, which targets microtubules, also blocks parasite development, showing how important dynamic microtubules are at this stage.

      The major problem in the manuscript was the way it flows, as the authors keep shifting from the liver stage to the sporogony stages and then back to the liver stages. It was very confusing at times to know what the real focus of the study is, whether sporozoite development or liver stage development. The flow of the manuscript could be improved. Some of the findings reported here substantiate the previous electron microscopy.

      Overall, the study represents an important contribution towards understanding cytoskeletal remodelling during liver stage infection. The study suggests that tubulin modifications are key for the parasite's survival in the liver and could be targets for new malaria treatments. This is also the stage that has been used for vaccine development, so any knowledge of how parasites proliferate in the liver cells will be beneficial towards intervention approaches.

      We would like to express our sincere gratitude to Reviewer #1 for the positive and encouraging feedback on our manuscript. We are delighted that the reviewer found our experimental design and methodologies appropriate and that our study represents an important contribution to understanding cytoskeletal remodelling during liver stage infection, a critical phase for vaccine development. We are also grateful to the reviewer for highlighting the issue with the manuscript's flow. We acknowledge this limitation and will significantly improve the narrative structure and logical progression in the revised manuscript to ensure clarity and avoid any potential confusion. Thank you again for your thoughtful and constructive comments.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated microtubule distribution and their possible post-translational modifications (PTM) in Plasmodium berghei during development of the liver stage, using either hepatocytes or HeLa cells as models. They used conventional immunofluorescence assays and expansion microscopy with various antibodies recognising tubulin and, in the second part of the work, its candidate PTMs, as well as markers of Plasmodium, in addition to live imaging with a fluorescent marker for tubulin. In the third part of the study, they generated 3 mutants deprived of either the last four residues or the last 11 residues, or where a candidate polyglutamylation site was substituted by an alanine residue.

      Strengths:

      In the first part, microtubules are monitored by a combination of two approaches (IFA and live), revealing nicely the evolution of the sporozoite subpellicular microtubules (SSPM, the sporozoite is the developmental stage present in salivary glands of the mosquitoes and that infects hepatocytes) into a different structure termed liver-stage parasite microtubule bundle (LSPMB). The LSPMB shrinks during the course of parasite development and finally disappears while hemi-spindles emerge over time. Contact points between these two structures are observed frequently in live cells and occasionally in fixed cells, suggesting the intriguing possibility that tubulin might be recycled from the LSPMB to contribute to hemi-spindle formation.

      In the second part, antibodies recognising (1) the final tyrosine found at the C-terminal tail and (2) a stretch of 3 glutamate residues in a side chain are used to monitor these candidate PTMs. Signals are positive at the SSPM, and while it remains positive for polyglutamylation, it becomes negative for the final tyrosine at the LSPM, while a positive signal emerges at hemi-spindles at later stages of development.

      In the last part, the three mutants are fed to mosquitoes, where they show reduced development, the one lacking the alpha-tubulin tail even failing to reach the salivary glands. However, the two other mutants infect HeLa cells normally, whereas sporozoites with the C-terminal tail deletion recovered from the haemolymph did not develop in these cells.

      The first part provides convincing evidence that microtubules are extensively remodelled during the infection of hepatocytes and HeLa cells, in agreement with the spectacular Plasmodium morphogenetic changes accompanying massive and rapid proliferation. The third part brings further confirmation that the C-terminal tail of alpha-tubulin is essential for multiple stages of parasite development, in agreement with previous work (50). Since it is the region where several post-translational modifications take place in other organisms (detyrosination, polyglutamylation, glycylation), it makes sense to propose that the essential function is related to these PTMs also in Plasmodium.

      Weaknesses:

      The significance of tubulin PTM relies on two antibodies whose reactivity to Plasmodium tubulins is unclear (see below). The interpretation of the literature on detyrosination and polyglutamylation is confusing in several places, meaning that the statements about the possible role of these PTMs need to be carefully revisited.

      The authors use the term "tyrosination" but the alpha1-tubulin studied here possesses the final tyrosine when it is synthesised, so it is "tyrosinated" by default. It could potentially be removed by a tyrosine carboxypeptidase of the vasoinhibin family (VASH) as reported in other species. After removal, this tyrosine can be added again by a tubulin-tyrosine ligase (TTL) enzyme. It is therefore more appropriate to talk about detyrosination-retyrosination rather than tyrosination (this confusion is unfortunately common in the literature, see Janke & Magiera, 2020).

      The difficulty here is that there is so far no evidence that detyrosination takes place in Plasmodium. Neither VASH nor TTL could be identified in the Plasmodium genome (ref 31, something we can confirm with our unsuccessful BLAST analyses), and mass spectrometry studies of purified tubulin, albeit from blood stages, did not find evidence for detyrosination (reference 43). Western blots using an antibody against detyrosinated tubulin did not produce a positive signal, neither on purified tubulin, nor on whole parasites (43). Of course, the situation could be different in liver stages, but the question of the detyrosinating enzyme is still there. The existence of a unique Plasmodium system for detyrosination cannot be formally ruled out but given the high degree of conservation of these PTMs and their associated enzymes, it sounds difficult to imagine.

      The fact that the anti-tyrosinated antibody still produced a signal in the cell line where the final tyrosine is deleted raises issues about its specificity. A cross-reactivity with beta-tubulin is proposed, but the Plasmodium beta-tubulin does not carry a final tyrosine, further raising concerns about antibody specificity.

      The interpretation of these results should therefore be considered carefully. There also seems to be some confusion in the function of detyrosination cited from the literature. It is said in line 229 that "tyrosination has been associated with stable microtubules" (33, 34, 50, 55). References 33 and 34 actually show that tyrosinated microtubules turn over faster in neurons or in epithelial cells, respectively, while references 50 and 55 do not study de/retyrosination. The general consensus is that tyrosinated microtubules are more dynamic (see reference 24).

      The situation is a bit different for polyglutamylation since several candidate poly- or mono-glutamylases have been identified in the Plasmodium genome, and at least mono-glutamylation of beta-tubulin has been formally proven, still in bloodstream stages (ref 43). The authors propose that the residue E445 is the polyglutamylation site. To our knowledge, this has not been demonstrated for Plasmodium. This residue is indeed the favourite one in several organisms such as humans and trypanosomes (Eddé et al., Science 1990; Schneider et al., JCS, 1997), and it is tempting to propose it would be the same here. However, TTLLs bind the tubulin tails from their C-terminal end like a glove on a finger (Garnham et al., Cell, 2015), and the presence of two extra residues in Plasmodium tubulins would mean that the reactive glutamate might be in position E447 rather than E445. This is worth discussing.

      On the positive side, it is encouraging to see that signals for both anti-tyrosinated tail and poly-glutamylated side chain are going down in the various mutants, but this would need validation with a comparison for alpha-tubulin signal.

      Line 316: polyglutamylation "is commonly associated with dynamic microtubule behavior (78-80)". Actually, references 78 and 79 show the impact of this PTM on interaction with spastin, and reference 80 discusses polyglutamylation as a marker of stable microtubules in the context of cilia and flagella. The consensus is that polyglutamylated microtubules tend to be more stable (ref24).

      Conclusion:

      The first and the third parts of this manuscript - evolution of microtubules and importance of the C-terminal tails for Plasmodium development - are convincing and well supported by data. However, the presence and role of tubulin PTM should be carefully reconsidered.

      Plasmodium tubulins are more closely related to plant tubulins and are sensitive to inhibitors that do not affect mammalian microtubules. They therefore represent promising drug targets as several well-characterised compounds used as herbicides are available. The work produced here further defines the evolution of the microtubule network in sporozoites and liver stages, which are the initial and essential first steps of the infection. Moreover, Plasmodium has multiple specificities that make it a fascinating organism to study both for cell biology and evolution. The data reported here are elegant and will attract the attention of the community working on parasites but also on the cytoskeleton at large. It will be interesting to have the feedback of other people working on tubulin PTMs to figure out the significance of this part of the work.

      We thank Reviewer #2 for the thoughtful and detailed evaluation of our manuscript. We are pleased that the reviewer found our study elegant and believe it will attract the attention of the broader scientific community, both those working on parasites and those focused on cytoskeleton biology. We also acknowledge the concerns raised regarding the specificity of the antibodies used to detect tubulin post-translational modifications (PTMs), as well as the interpretation of their signals and the current lack of identified detyrosination enzymes in the Plasmodium genome. We agree that these are important limitations, and we will address them thoroughly in the revised manuscript. This includes clarifying our interpretation of tyrosination versus detyrosination, adjusting our claims regarding polyglutamylation sites, and carefully revisiting the literature cited to ensure accurate contextualization of PTM function in microtubule stability.

      We are grateful for the reviewer’s close reading and critical feedback, which will help us substantially improve the clarity, precision, and strength of our manuscript.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Atchou et al. investigates the role of the microtubule cytoskeleton in sporozoites of Plasmodium berghei, including possible functions of microtubule post-translational modifications (tyrosination and polyglutamylation) in the development of sporozoites in the liver. They also assessed the development of sporozoites in the mosquito. Using cell culture models and in vivo infections with parasites that contain tubulin mutants deficient in certain PTMs, they show that may aspects of the life cycle progression are impaired. The main conclusion is that microtubule PTMs play a major role in the differentiation processes of the parasites.

      However, there are a number of major and minor points of criticism that relate to the interpretation of some of the data.

      We thank Reviewer #3 for the overall positive assessment of our study and for recognizing its contribution to advancing our understanding of Plasmodium biology and malaria pathogenesis. We appreciate the reviewer’s constructive feedback, particularly regarding the interpretation of some of our data. These comments have been very helpful in guiding our revisions, and we have worked to improve both the clarity of our presentation and the precision of our interpretations in the revised manuscript.

      Below, we respond in detail to each of the reviewer’s points.

      Comments:<br /> (1) The first paragraph of "Results" almost suggests that the presence of a subpellicular MT-array in sporozoites is a new discovery. This is not the case, see e.g. the recent publication by Ferreira et al. (Nature Communications, 2023).

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out and fully agree that the subpellicular microtubule (SPM) array in sporozoites is well established, as documented in earlier work (e.g., Cyrklaff et al., 2007) and more recently by Ferreira et al. (Nat. Commun., 2023). Our intention was not to suggest that the existence of the SSPM is a novel finding. Rather, our study builds on this existing knowledge by demonstrating that these sporozoite-derived microtubules are not disassembled upon hepatocyte entry but are repurposed into a newly described structure, the liver stage parasite microtubule bundle (LSPMB). This reorganization, its persistence into liver stage development, and its dynamic role in microtubule remodeling and nuclear division are, to our knowledge, novel observations. We will revise the manuscript to make this distinction clearer in the introduction and the results section.

      (2) Why were HeLa cells and not hepatocytes (as in Figure 3) used for measuring infection rates of the mutants in Figure 5H and 5L? As I understand, HeLa cells are not natural host cells for invading sporozoites. HeLa cells are epithelial cells derived from a cervical tumour. I am not an expert in Plasmodium biology, but is a HeLa infection an accepted surrogate model for liver stage development?

      We appreciate the opportunity to clarify our experimental model. While HeLa cells are not the natural host cells, they are a well-established and validated in vitro model for studying Plasmodium berghei liver stage development in our lab and others. In this system, the parasite completes its full development and generates infectious merozoites. Numerous studies have successfully used HeLa cells as a liver stage infection model, with key findings subsequently validated in primary hepatocytes or in vivo, confirming its utility as a representative model. We employed this cell line primarily to reduce animal usage in accordance with the 3Rs principles (Replacement, Reduction, Refinement). Importantly, to ensure the biological relevance of our discoveries in HeLa cells, we validated our key findings in primary mouse hepatocytes, as shown in Figure 3. Furthermore, we confirmed the in vivo infectivity of mutant parasite lines that produced typical salivary gland sporozoites through an in vivo infection assay, presented in Figure S4C.

      (3) The tubulin staining in Figures 1A and 1B is confusing and doesn't seem to make sense. Whereas in 1A the antibody nicely stains host and parasite tubulin, in 1B, only parasite tubulin is visible. If the same antibody and the same host cells have been used, HeLa cytoplasmic microtubules should be visible in 1B. In fact, they should be the predominant antigen. The same applies to Figure 2, where host microtubules are also not visible.

      We thank the reviewer for this careful observation regarding the α-tubulin staining in Figures 1A and 1B. The same host cell type (HeLa) and α-tubulin antibody were indeed used in both experiments. Figure 1A shows results from conventional immunofluorescence assays, where both host and parasite microtubules are clearly stained. In contrast, Figure 1B shows the outcome of ultrastructure expansion microscopy (U-ExM), where parasite microtubules appear prominently, while host microtubules are less visible.

      This effect appears to be a technical outcome of the U-ExM protocol, which can differentially preserve or reveal microtubule epitopes. We consistently observed stronger parasite signal across various cell types, including primary hepatocytes (Figure 3A,B). The lack of visible host microtubules in some U-ExM images does not reflect their absence, but rather reduced signal intensity relative to the parasite structures. This is not observed with all antibodies, e.g., host microtubules stain strongly with anti-tyrosinated α-tubulin (Figure 3B), likely reflecting their high tyrosination state.

      To overcome this limitation, we employed PS-ExM and combined PS-ExM/U-ExM approaches (as described in reference 56), which allowed simultaneous high-resolution visualization of both host and parasite microtubule networks. These combined methods are now being used in follow-up studies to investigate host–parasite microtubule interactions in more detail.

      We will clarify this point in the revised manuscript to avoid confusion.

      (4) In Figures 2A and B, the host nuclei appear to have very different sizes in the DMSO controls and in the drug-treated cells. For example, in the 20 µM (-) image (bottom right), the nuclei are much larger than in the DMSO (-) control (top left). If this is the case, expansion microscopy hasn't worked reproducibly, and therefore, quantification of fluorescence is problematic. The scalebar is the same for all panels.

      The expansion microscopy methods used in this study have been rigorously validated for both reproducibility and isotropicity. However, as the reviewer rightly notes, host cell nuclei can vary in size due to several factors, including cell cycle stage, infection status, and the extent of parasite development, all of which can influence host nuclei morphology and size.

      Importantly, the quantifications relevant to our conclusions were focused specifically on parasite structures. We did not rely on host nuclear size or host fluorescence intensity as a quantitative readout in this context. While we acknowledge the observed variability in host nuclear dimensions, it does not compromise the accuracy or reproducibility of the parasite specific measurements central to our study.

      We will clarify this point in the revised figure legend and manuscript.

      (5) I don't quite follow the argument that spindles and the LSPMB are dynamic structures (e.g., lines 145, 174). That is a trivial statement for the spindle, as it is always dynamic, but beyond that, it has only been shown that the structure is sensitive to oryzalin. That says little about any "natural" dynamic behaviour. Any microtubule structure can be destroyed by a particular physical or chemical treatment, but that doesn't mean all structures are dynamic. It also depends on the definition of "dynamic" in a particular context, for example, the time scale of dynamic behaviour (changes within seconds, minutes, or hours).

      We agree that sensitivity to chemical depolymerization alone does not necessarily indicate dynamic behavior, particularly in the absence of data on turnover kinetics or temporal changes.

      Our interpretation was based on two observations: first, that the LSPMB, which derives from the highly stable sporozoite subpellicular microtubules (known to be drug-resistant), becomes susceptible to depolymerization during the liver stage; and second, that the LSPMB gradually shrinks over time during parasite development. These features suggested a transition toward a more dynamic state compared to its origin. However, we fully agree that “dynamic” is a context-dependent term and that direct evidence such as turnover rates or structural changes on short time scales, is required to rigorously define microtubule dynamics.

      We will revise the manuscript to clarify our use of this term and explicitly acknowledge the need for further studies to characterize the timescale and mechanisms underlying LSPMB remodeling.

      (6) I am not sure what part in the story EB1 plays. The data are only shown in the Supplements and don't seem to be of particular relevance. EB1 is a ubiquitous protein associated with microtubule plus ends. The statement (line 192) that it "may play a broader role..." is unsubstantiated and cannot be based merely on the observation that it is expressed in a particular life cycle stage.

      We agree that EB1 is a ubiquitous microtubule plus-end binding protein and that its presence alone does not imply a novel function. Previous studies (e.g., Maurer et al., 2023; Yang et al., 2023; Zeeshan et al., 2023) have focused on its role during Plasmodium sexual stages, while its expression during liver and mosquito stages has not been previously documented.

      Our data extend this knowledge by showing that EB1 is also expressed during liver stage development, particularly during the highly mitotic schizont phase. While we agree that this observation alone does not prove functional involvement, it raises the possibility of a broader role for EB1 in regulating microtubule dynamics beyond sexual stages. To avoid overinterpretation, we have presented these findings in the supplementary material and will revise the manuscript to tone down speculative statements and clearly frame this as a preliminary observation that warrants further investigation.

      (7) Line 196 onwards: The antibody IN105 is better known in the field as polyE. Maybe that should be added in Materials and Methods. Also, the antibody T9028 against tyrosinated tubulin is poorly validated in the literature and rarely used. Usually, researchers in this field use the monoclonal antibody YL1/2. I am not sure why this unusual antibody was chosen in this study. In fact, has its specificity against tyrosinated α-tubulin from Plasmodium berghei ever been shown? The original antigen was human and had the sequence EGEEY. The Plasmodium sequence is YEADY and hence very different. It is stated that the LSPMB is both polyglutamylated and tyrosinated. This is unusual because polyglutamylated microtubules are usually indicative of stable microtubules, whereas tyrosinated microtubules are found on freshly polymerised and dynamic microtubules. However, a co-localisation within the same cell has not been attempted. This is, however, possible since polyE is a rabbit antibody and T9028 is a mouse antibody. I suspect that differences or gradients along the LSPMB would have been noticed. Also, in lines 207/208, it is said that tyrosination disappears after hepatocyte invasion, which is shown in Figure 3. However, in Figure 3A, quite a lot of positive signals for tyrosination are visible in the 54 and 56 hpi panels.

      First, we acknowledge that the IN105 antibody is more widely known as "polyE" in the field. We will update the Materials and Methods section accordingly to reflect this nomenclature.

      Regarding the use of the T9028 antibody against tyrosinated α-tubulin: we agree that this monoclonal antibody is less commonly used than YL1/2, and we appreciate the reviewer drawing attention to this. The original antigen for T9028 is based on the mammalian C-terminal sequence EGEEY, which differs from the Plasmodium α1-tubulin sequence (YEADY). Like many in the field, we face the challenge that most available antibodies are raised against mammalian epitopes, and specificity in Plasmodium can vary. Nonetheless, the literature (e.g., Hirst et al., 2022; Fennell et al., 2008) has demonstrated that tyrosination occurs in Plasmodium α1-tubulin, using anti-tyrosination antibodies including YL1/2.

      Following the reviewer’s excellent suggestion, we are currently repeating the key experiments using the YL1/2 antibody to compare staining patterns directly with those obtained using T9028. We will include these results in the revised manuscript.

      Concerning the potential co-localization of polyglutamylation and tyrosination on the LSPMB: we agree that this is an interesting and testable hypothesis. In the current manuscript, Figures 3A and 3B were generated from independent experiments, and thus co-localization was not assessed. However, as the reviewer correctly notes, polyE and T9028 antibodies are raised in rabbit and mouse, respectively, making co-staining feasible. We will follow up on this experimentally and, if feasible within our revision timeline, include data in the revised version or highlight this as a future direction.

      Finally, with regard to Figure 3 and the observation that tyrosination appears to persist at 54 and 56 hpi (Figure 3B): the reviewer is correct that tyrosination signal is still detectable at these time points. Our statement that tyrosination “disappears after hepatocyte invasion” was intended to refer to an overall decrease in signal intensity during early liver stage development, with a reappearance at later stages (e.g., cytomere formation). We will rephrase this section for greater clarity and ensure that figure annotations and legends unambiguously reflect the dynamics observed.

      (8) In line 229, it is stated that tyrosination "has previously been associated with stable microtubule in motility". This statement is not correct. In fact, none of the cited references that apparently support this statement show that this is the case. On the contrary, stable microtubules, such as flagellar axonemes, are almost completely detyrosinated. Therefore, tyrosination is a marker for dynamic microtubules, whereas detyrosinated microtubules are indicative of stable microtubules. This is an established fact, and it is odd that the authors claim the opposite.

      We fully agree that in canonical eukaryotic systems, tyrosinated microtubules are generally markers of dynamic microtubule populations, whereas detyrosinated microtubules are typically associated with stability particularly in structures such as flagellar axonemes.

      Our original statement will be corrected. In our study, we observed that tyrosinated microtubules are prevalent in invasive stages (sporozoites and merozoites), while detyrosinated forms become more prominent during intracellular liver stage development. This pattern is consistent with the established link between tyrosination and dynamic microtubules.

      What is particularly intriguing in Plasmodium is the apparent cycling of tyrosination despite the absence of known tubulin tyrosine ligase (TTL) homologs in the genome. This suggests either a highly divergent enzyme or the involvement of host cell factors, a hypothesis supported by the reappearance of tyrosinated microtubules during liver stage schizogony (Figure 3B).

      We will revise the relevant text and the Discussion section to reflect these mechanistic considerations more accurately and to avoid misrepresenting established principles of microtubule biology.

      (9) Line 236 onwards: Concerning the generation of tubulin mutants, I think it is necessary to demonstrate successful replacement of the wild-type allele by the mutant allele. I am sure the authors have done this by amplification and subsequent sequencing of the genomic locus using PCR primers outside the plasmid sequences. I suggest including this information, e.g., by displaying the chromatograph trace in a supplementary figure. Or are the sequences displayed in Figure S3B already derived from sequenced genomic DNA? This is not described in the Legend or in Materials and Methods. The left PCR products obtained for Figure S3 B would be a suitable template for sequencing.

      Indeed, these data are presented in Figure 4B and the corresponding sequence data are shown in Figure S3B. We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion, which will help improve the transparency and reproducibility of our methodology.

      (10) It is also important to be aware of the fact that glutamylation also occurs on β-tubulin. This signal will also be detected by polyE (IN105). Therefore, it is surprising that IN105 immunofluorescence is negative on the C-term Δ cells (Figure S3 D). Is there anything known about confirmed polyglutamylation sites on both α- and β-tubulins in Plasmodium, e.g., by MS? In Toxoplasma, both α- and β-tubulin have been shown to be polyglutamylated.

      Indeed, polyglutamylation is known to occur not only on α-tubulin but also on β-tubulin in many organisms, including Toxoplasma gondii, and the polyE (IN105) antibody is expected to detect polyglutamylation on both tubulin isoforms.

      The parasites shown in Figure S3D correspond to mutant lines originally generated by Spreng et al. (2019): the IntronΔ mutant (with deletion of introns in the Plasmodium α1-tubulin gene) and the C-termΔ mutant (with deletion of the final three C-terminal residues: ADY). As the reviewer correctly notes, this particular C-terminal deletion does not include the predicted polyglutamylation site (E445 or E447, depending on alignment), and thus should not abolish all polyglutamylation. However, in our experiments, the IN105 signal is substantially reduced in this mutant. This may suggest that structural alterations in the tubulin tail affect accessibility of the polyglutamylation epitope or influence the modification itself though we cannot exclude other possibilities, including changes in antibody recognition.

      To date, polyglutamylation sites in Plasmodium tubulins have not been definitively confirmed by mass spectrometry. However, a recent MS-based study (reference 43) detected monoglutamylation on β-tubulin in blood stage parasites. Direct MS evidence for polyglutamylation of either α- or β-tubulin in Plasmodium liver stages is still lacking. We will clarify these points in the revised manuscript to avoid potential confusion and to highlight the need for future biochemical validation of PTM sites.

      (11) Figure S3 is very confusing. In the legend, certain intron deletions are mentioned. How does this relate to posttranslational tubulin modifications? The corresponding section in Results (lines 288-292) is also not very helpful in understanding this.

      The parasite lines shown in Figure S3D were originally generated by Spreng et al. (2019) and are not directly part of the main set of PTM-targeted mutants described in our study. Specifically, the IntronΔ line carries deletions in introns of the Plasmodium α1-tubulin gene, while the C-termΔ line lacks the final three C-terminal residues (ADY). These lines were included for comparative purposes to explore whether structural changes in α-tubulin could impact polyglutamylation signal, as detected by the polyE (IN105) antibody.

      We acknowledge that the figure legend and corresponding text (lines 288–292) did not adequately explain the rationale for including these control lines. We will revise both the legend and Results section to more clearly describe the origin, purpose, and relevance of these mutants to the overall study.

      (12) Figure 4E doesn't look like brightfield microscopy but like some sort of fluorescent imaging. In Figure 4C, were the control (NoΔ) cells with an integrated cassette, but no mutations, or non-transgenic cells?

      The reviewer is absolutely correct: Figure 4E shows a fluorescent image acquired using widefield microscopy and not a brightfield image. We will revise the figure legend accordingly to avoid confusion. The “BF” (brightfield) label applies only to the left panel in Figure 4C, which depicts oocysts imaged using transmitted light.

      Regarding the controls labeled "NoΔ" in Figure 4C, we confirm that these parasites contain the integrated selection cassette but do not harbor any mutations in the target gene. They serve as proper integration controls, allowing us to distinguish the effects of the point mutations or deletions introduced in the experimental lines.

      (13) It is difficult to understand why the TyΔ and the CtΔ mutants still show quite a strong signal using the anti-tyrosination antibody. If the mutants have replaced all wild-type alleles, the signal should be completely absent, unless the antibody (see my comment above concerning T9028) cross-reacts with detyrosinated microtubules. Therefore, the quantitation in Figures 5F and 5G is actually indicative of something that shouldn't be like that. The quantitation of 5F is at odds with the microscopy image in 5D. If this image is representative, the anti-Ty staining in TyΔ is as strong as in the control NoΔ.

      We agree that the persistence of anti-tyrosination signal in the TyΔ and CtΔ mutant lines is unexpected, given that all wild-type alleles were replaced. This discrepancy has led us to further investigate the specificity of the T9028 antibody, as raised in the reviewer’s earlier comment. To address this concern, we are currently repeating the key experiments using the well-established YL1/2 monoclonal antibody, which is widely accepted for detecting tyrosinated α-tubulin in other systems.

      We also acknowledge that Figure 5F shows residual tyrosination signal, and the reviewer is correct that this should not occur if the modified residues are the exclusive PTM sites. One possible explanation is that adjacent residues or even alternative tubulin isoforms may serve as substrates. While α1-tubulin is the dominant isoform in Plasmodium, low-level expression of α2-tubulin has been detected in liver stages based on transcriptomic data, and it may contribute to the observed signal.

      Regarding the apparent discrepancy between the quantification in Figure 5F and the representative image in Figure 5D, we will revise the figure legend to clarify that image selection aimed to show detectable signal, not necessarily the average phenotype. We will also reassess and, if needed, repeat the quantification with improved image sets to ensure accuracy and consistency.

      We will revise the manuscript to reflect these points and include a more nuanced interpretation of the residual staining in the mutant lines.

      (14) The statement that the failure of CtΔ mutants to generate viable sporozoites is due to the lack of microtubule PTMs (lines 295-296) is speculative. The lack of the entire C-terminal tail could have a number of consequences, such as impaired microtubule assembly or failure to recruit and bind associated proteins. This is not necessarily linked to PTMs. Also, it has been shown in yeast that for microtubules to form properly and exquisite regulation (proteostasis) of the ratio between α- and β-tubulin is essential (Wethekam and Moore, 2023). I am not sure, but according to Materials and Methods (line 423), the gene cassettes for replacing the wild-type tubulin gene with the mutant versions contain a selectable marker gene for pyrimethamine selection. Are there qPCR data that show that expression levels of mutant α-tubulin are more or less the same as the wild-type levels?

      We agree that attributing the developmental failure of the CtΔ mutants solely to the absence of microtubule post-translational modifications (PTMs) is speculative. As the reviewer rightly points out, deletion of the entire C-terminal tail may have multiple effects, including impaired microtubule assembly, altered α/β-tubulin stoichiometry, or disruption of interactions with essential microtubule-associated proteins (MAPs). These consequences may arise independently of PTMs.

      That said, we note that PTMs particularly polyglutamylation, can modulate MAP binding by altering the surface charge of microtubules (Genova et al., 2023; Mitchell et al., 2010). Therefore, while PTM loss may be a contributing factor, we acknowledge that the phenotype likely results from a combination of mechanisms. We will revise the relevant section of the manuscript to present a more cautious and balanced interpretation.

      Regarding the reviewer’s question on expression levels: although the replacement constructs include a pyrimethamine resistance cassette, we have not yet quantified α-tubulin transcript levels by qPCR. In the interim, the study by Spreng et al. (2019) (reference 50) on a related α1-tubulin nutations provides valuable insight. They observed no difference in mRNA levels in day 12 oocysts, yet reported fainter microtubule staining and shorter sporozoites, suggesting a post-transcriptional mechanism affecting protein expression or function in later stages. Furthermore, the phenotypic spectrum across their mutant panel (Suppl. Fig. 3 D and E) implies that robust α-tubulin regulation is highly sensitive to specific sequences.

      We acknowledge this as a current limitation in our study and will address it in the revised manuscript, noting that direct measurement of transcript levels is a key area for future investigation.

      (15) In the Discussion, my impression is that two recent studies, the superb Expansion Microscopy study by Bertiaux et al. (2021) and the cryo-EM study by Ferreira et al. (2023), are not sufficiently recognised (although they are cited elsewhere in the manuscript). The latter study includes a detailed description of the microtubule cytoskeleton in sporozoites. However, the present study clearly expands the knowledge about the structure of the cytoskeleton in liver stage parasites and is one of the few studies addressing the distribution and function of microtubule post-translational modifications in Plasmodium.

      Indeed, our work builds upon the established knowledge from Bertiaux et al. (2021) and the cryo-EM study by Ferreira et al. (2023), as rightly mentioned by the reviewer. We agree that these foundational studies, combined with our findings, will significantly expand the understanding of Plasmodium biology and cytoskeleton dynamics across its life cycle and will open the door for further investigations. We are grateful for this suggestion and will ensure these key studies are appropriately acknowledged in the revised manuscript.

      (16) I somewhat disagree with the statement of a co-occurrence of polyglutamylated and tyrosinated microtubules. I think the resolution is too low to reach that conclusion. As this is a bold claim, and would be contrary to what is known from other organisms, it would require a more rigorous validation. Given the apparent problems with the anti-Ty antibody (signal in the TyΔ mutant), one should be very cautious with this claim.

      This is a very important point to clarify. As mentioned previously, the initial experiments for these modifications were performed independently. It is established that sporozoite subpellicular microtubules exhibit both tyrosination and polyglutamylation. We will revise the manuscript to temper this statement and clearly indicate that the co-occurrence of these PTMs remains a hypothesis that requires more rigorous validation. As suggested, we are now conducting additional co-staining experiments using the better validated YL1/2 antibody to re-express and directly compare the distribution of both PTMs within the same cell. These follow-up experiments will help clarify whether both modifications occur simultaneously on the same microtubule structures in Plasmodium liver stages.

      (17) In the Discussion (lines 311 and 377), it is again claimed that tyrosinated microtubules are "a well-known marker of stable microtubules". This statement is completely incorrect, and I am surprised by this serious mistake. A few lines later, the authors say that polyglutamylated is "commonly associated with dynamic microtubule behaviour". Again, this is completely incorrect and is the opposite of what is firmly established in the literature. Polyglutamylation and detyrosination are markers of stable microtubules.

      Indeed, in canonical eukaryotic systems, tyrosinated microtubules are generally considered markers of dynamic microtubule populations, whereas detyrosinated and polyglutamylated microtubules are more commonly associated with stability.

      We acknowledge this mistake and will revise the Discussion to correct these statements accordingly. In the context of Plasmodium, our observations suggest an unusual regulation of microtubule dynamics, which may reflect parasite-specific adaptations. For example, we observed tyrosinated α-tubulin in the stable subpellicular microtubules of sporozoites structures typically known for their exceptional stability. This atypical association implies either non-canonical roles for tyrosination or parasite-specific mechanisms for modulating microtubule properties. Additionally, the presence of both PTMs at different stages of development and on different microtubule populations suggests tightly regulated spatial and temporal modulation of microtubule function.

      We will carefully revise the relevant sections of the manuscript to remove incorrect generalizations and ensure accurate representation of the current consensus in the field, while emphasizing the possibility of Plasmodium-specific adaptations that merit further study.

      (18) In line 339, the authors interpret the residual antibody staining after the introduction of the mutant tubulin as a compensatory mechanism. There is no evidence for this. More likely explanations are firstly the quality of the anti-Ty-antibody used (see comment above), and the fact that also β-tubulin carries C-terminal polyglutamylation sites, which haven't been investigated in this study. PTMs on β-tubulin are not compensatory, but normal PTMs, at least in all other organisms where microtubule PTMs have been investigated.

      As mentioned above, we are currently repeating the key experiments with the [YL1/2] antibody, as suggested. Furthermore, we fully agree with the reviewer's point regarding polyglutamylation on β-tubulin. The C-terminal tail of β-tubulin does indeed contain polyglutamylation sites. As we noted in the manuscript (Lines 340-352), this aspect has not been investigated in the present study, and we acknowledge it as a valuable direction for future research. We will revise the text accordingly to avoid overinterpretation and to more accurately reflect the limitations of our current data.

    1. 21​+32​=2+31+2​=53​.

      For this formula for addition to make sense, we should have

      $$ \frac{1}{2} + \frac{2}{3} = \frac{3}{5} \quad\ = \quad \frac{2}{4} + \frac{2}{3} = \frac{4}{7}. $$

      by replacing \(\frac{1}{2}\) by \(\frac{2}{4}\). According to Definition 1.8 it is not true that \(\frac{3}{5} = \frac{4}{7}\).

    1. 地球上已知大约有30多万种植物,还会有许多类型尚待发现。在过去某个时期生活过而现在消失了的物种,也可能比现存的还要多。无论现存的或过去生存过的植物种,都有其独特的地理分布。

      30多万种植物统计步骤:

      1. 物种发现与采集:植物学家通过野外考察,在森林、草原、荒漠等不同生境中采集植物标本,记录其形态、生长环境等关键信息,这是识别新物种的基础。 2. 分类与鉴定:通过对比标本的形态特征(如叶片、花朵、果实结构),结合分子生物学技术(如基因测序),确定标本是否为已知物种或新物种,并为新物种命名、建立分类档案。 3. 全球数据整合:各国植物研究机构、标本馆(如英国皇家植物园、中国科学院植物研究所)将已发现的物种信息录入全球共享数据库(如《世界植物志》),研究者通过汇总这些数据,剔除重复记录、修正分类争议后,最终估算出全球植物物种的总数量。

      1. I plan to be in college for at least 4 years maybe continue to complete my masters.
      2. 5
      3. Finding what study method works best for each class.
      4. Yes, I am confident in my ability to overcome possible difficulties.
    1. of the characteristics of a free-market system is that suppliers have the right to compete with one another. The number of suppliers in a market defines the market structure. Economists identify four types of market structures: (1) perfect competition, (2) pure monopoly, (3) monopolistic competition, and (4) oligopoly.

      I found this intro very interesting since I never knew much about this subject. I always knew that there was competition within the markets, but I didn't think there were this many types. I want to say that the one I'm most familiar with would be an oligopoly since it's the simplest one to understand, considering it's only for a small number of producers and sellers.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study focuses on the differential binding of the RNA-binding protein HuR to CCL2 transcript (genetic variants rs13900 T or C). The study explores how this interaction influences the stability and translation of CCL2 mRNA. Employing a combination of bioinformatics, reporter assays, binding assays, and modulation of HuR expression, the study proposes that the rs13900T allele confers increased binding to HuR, leading to greater mRNA stability and higher translational efficiency. These findings indicate that rs13900T allele might contribute to heightened disease susceptibility due to enhanced CCL2 expression mediated by HuR. The study is interesting and most results are convincing, however the interpretation relative to RNA transcription and/or stability must be modified, and some data need better presentation or interpretation.

      Major Points

      Figure 2C:<br /> The authors describe an experiment to assess mRNA stability by labeling nascent RNA with EU for 3 hours, followed by washout of EU, and then incubation with or without actinomycin D for an additional 4 hours before measuring the remaining EU-labeled RNA. While the approach to label nascent RNA with EU is appropriate for tracking RNA decay, I have concerns regarding the use and interpretation of actinomycin D in this context.<br /> After EU washout, the pool of EU-labeled RNA is fixed and no new EU incorporation can occur. Therefore, the addition of actinomycin D at this stage should not affect the decay rate of the already labeled RNA, as transcription of EU-labeled RNA has effectively ceased. In this design, measuring the decrease in EU-labeled RNA over time reflects mRNA stability (even in absence of actinomycin D) rather than transcriptional activity.<br /> Therefore, the authors' statement that the non-actinomycin D treatment group represents transcriptional changes is not accurate here. Since EU labeling was stopped prior to the 4-hour incubation, any changes in EU-labeled RNA levels during this period reflect RNA decay, not new transcription.

      In summary:<br /> To assess transcriptional changes, one would compare the amount of EU-labeled RNA synthesized during the initial labeling period (the first 3 hours), before washout.<br /> If the authors wish to use actinomycin D to block transcription, this should be done in a separate decay assay without EU labeling.<br /> In the current experimental setup, actinomycin D is unnecessary after EU washout and does not influence the decay of the labeled RNA.<br /> I recommend the authors reconsider the interpretation of their data accordingly. I recommend to remove the data points relative to the presence of actinomycin D, as the non-actinomycin D samples are already representative of post-transcriptional changes given that EU was washed out. If Authors want to assess transcriptional changes, they would have to assess the levels during the initial labeling period (before the washout). Transcriptional differences were not assessed, therefore I would modify the text accordingly.<br /> In this context, any changes observed in the actinomycin D-treated samples are likely attributable to general cellular stress induced by actinomycin D, which is known to be highly stressful for cells. This stress could indirectly influence the decay rates of already-labeled EU-RNA.

      Figure 4C and 4D:<br /> The Author provided an updated gel with relative quantification - which effectively show the enhanced binding of CCL2 mRNA carrying the T variant to HuR - but they only provided it as data for reviewers (Figure R1). I highly recommend to use these data in the final manuscript instead of the data currently presented in Figure 4C and 4D. This would be important in order not to not create confusion in the reader or concerns regarding probe degradation or saturation.

      Minor points<br /> For the IP, I recommend to explain in the final version why the input was not provided (lack of material) and to clarify that the specific binding of Actin was used as a loading control in absence of input. This would be highly beneficial for the readers.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Chen et al. engineered and characterized a suite of next-generation GECIs for the Drosophila NMJ that allow for the visualization of calcium dynamics within the presynaptic compartment, at presynaptic active zones, and in the postsynaptic compartment. These GECIs include ratiometric presynaptic Scar8m (targeted to synaptic vesicles), ratiometric active zone localized Bar8f (targeted to the scaffold molecule BRP), and postsynaptic SynapGCaMP8m. The authors demonstrate that these new indicators are a large improvement on the widely used GCaMP6 and GCaMP7 series GECIs, with increased speed and sensitivity. They show that presynaptic Scar8m accurately captures presynaptic calcium dynamics with superior sensitivity to the GCaMP6 and GCaMP7 series and with similar kinetics to chemical dyes. The active-zone targeted Bar8f sensor was assessed for the ability to detect release-site-specific nanodomain changes, but the authors concluded that this sensor is still too slow to accurately do so. Lastly, the use of postsynaptic SynapGCaMP8m was shown to enable the detection of quantal events with similar resolution to electrophysiological recordings. Finally, the authors developed a Python-based analysis software, CaFire, that enables automated quantification of evoked and spontaneous calcium signals. These tools will greatly expand our ability to detect activity at individual synapses without the need for chemical dyes or electrophysiology.

      Strengths:

      (1) In this study, the authors rigorously compare their newly engineered GECIs to those previously used at the Drosophila NMJ, highlighting improvements in localization, speed, and sensitivity. These comparisons appropriately substantiate the authors' claim that their GECIs are superior to those currently in use.

      (2) The authors demonstrate the ability of Scar8m to capture subtle changes in presynaptic calcium resulting from differences between MN-Ib and MN-Is terminals and from the induction of presynaptic homeostatic potentiation (PHP), rivaling the sensitivity of chemical dyes.

      (3) The improved postsynaptic SynapGCaMP8m is shown to approach the resolution of electrophysiology in resolving quantal events.

      (4) The authors created a publicly available pipeline that streamlines and standardizes analysis of calcium imaging data.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Given the superior performance of GCaMP8m in the vesicle-tethered and postsynaptic applications, an analysis of its functionality at individual active zones ("Bar8m") would be a useful addition to this compendium, especially since the authors show that the faster kinetics of GCaMP8f are still not fast enough to resolve active zone-specific calcium dynamics.

      (2) Description of the CaFire pipeline could be clearer (for example, what exactly is the role of Excel?), and the GitHub user guide could be more fleshed out (with the addition of example ImageJ scripts and analyzed images).

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      Calcium ions play a key role in synaptic transmission and plasticity. To improve calcium measurements at synaptic terminals, previous studies have targeted genetically encoded calcium indicators (GECIs) to pre- and postsynaptic locations. Here, Chen et al. improve these constructs by incorporating the latest GCaMP8 sensors and a stable red fluorescent protein to enable ratiometric measurements. In addition, they develop a new analysis platform, 'CaFire', to facilitate automated quantification. Using these tools, the authors demonstrate favorable properties of their sensors relative to earlier constructs. Impressively, by positioning postsynaptic GCaMP8m near glutamate receptors, they show that their sensors can report miniature synaptic events with speed and sensitivity approaching that of intracellular electrophysiological recordings. These new sensors and the analysis platform provide a valuable tool for resolving synaptic events using all-optical methods.

      Strengths:

      The authors present a rigorous characterization of their sensors using well-established assays. They employ immunostaining and super-resolution STED microscopy to confirm correct subcellular targeting. Additionally, they quantify response amplitude, rise and decay kinetics, and provide side-by-side comparisons with earlier-generation GECIs. Importantly, they show that the new sensors can reproduce known differences in evoked Ca²⁺ responses between distinct nerve terminals. Finally, they present what appears to be the first simultaneous calcium imaging and intracellular mEPSP recording to directly assess the sensitivity of different sensors in detecting individual miniature synaptic events.

      Weaknesses:

      Major points:

      (1) While the authors rigorously compared the response amplitude, rise, and decay kinetics of several sensors, key parameters like brightness and photobleaching rates are not reported. I feel that including this information is important as synaptically tethered sensors, compared to freely diffusible cytosolic indicators, can be especially prone to photobleaching, particularly under the high-intensity illumination and high-magnification conditions required for synaptic imaging. Quantifying baseline brightness and photobleaching rates would add valuable information for researchers intending to adopt these tools, especially in the context of prolonged or high-speed imaging experiments.

      (2) In several places, the authors compare the performance of their sensors with synthetic calcium dyes, but these comparisons are based on literature values rather than on side-by-side measurements in the same preparation. Given differences in imaging conditions across studies (e.g., illumination, camera sensitivity, and noise), parameters like indicator brightness, SNR, and photobleaching are difficult to compare meaningfully. Additionally, the limited frame rate used in the present study may preclude accurate assessment of rise times relative to fast chemical dyes. These issues weaken the claim made in the abstract that "...a ratiometric presynaptic GCaMP8m sensor accurately captures .. Ca²⁺ changes with superior sensitivity and similar kinetics compared to chemical dyes." The authors should clearly acknowledge these limitations and soften their conclusions. A direct comparison in the same system, if feasible, would greatly strengthen the manuscript.

      (3) The authors state that their indicators can now achieve measurements previously attainable with chemical dyes and electrophysiology. I encourage the authors to also consider how their tools might enable new measurements beyond what these traditional techniques allow. For example, while electrophysiology can detect summed mEPSPs across synapses, imaging could go a step further by spatially resolving the synaptic origin of individual mEPSP events. One could, for instance, image MN-Ib and MN-Is simultaneously without silencing either input, and detect mEPSP events specific to each synapse. This would enable synapse-specific mapping of quantal events - something electrophysiology alone cannot provide. Demonstrating even a proof-of-principle along these lines could highlight the unique advantages of the new tools by showing that they not only match previous methods but also enable new types of measurements.

      (4) For ratiometric measurements, it is important to estimate and subtract background signals in each channel. Without this correction, the computed ratio may be skewed, as background adds an offset to both channels and can distort the ratio. However, it is not clear from the Methods section whether, or how, background fluorescence was measured and subtracted.

      (5) At line 212, the authors claim "... GCaMP8m showing 345.7% higher SNR over GCaMP6s....(Fig. 3D and E) ", yet the cited figure panels do not present any SNR quantification. Figures 3D and E only show response amplitudes and kinetics, which are distinct from SNR. The methods section also does not describe details for how SNR was defined or computed.

      (6) Lines 285-287 "As expected, summed ΔF values scaled strongly and positively with AZ size (Fig. 5F), reflecting a greater number of Cav2 channels at larger AZs". I am not sure about this conclusion. A positive correlation between summed ΔF values and AZ size could simply reflect more GCaMP molecules in larger AZs, which would give rise to larger total fluorescence change even at a given level of calcium increase.

      (7) Lines 313-314: "SynapGCaMP quantal signals appeared to qualitatively reflect the same events measured with electrophysiological recordings (Fig. 6D)." This statement is quite confusing. In Figure 6D, the corresponding calcium and ephys traces look completely different and appear to reflect distinct sets of events. It was only after reading Figure 7 that I realized the traces shown in Figure 6D might not have been recorded simultaneously. The authors should clarify this point.

      (8) Lines 310-313: "SynapGCaMP8m .... striking an optimal balance between speed and sensitivity", and Lines 314-316: "We conclude that SynapGCaMP8m is an optimal indicator to measure quantal transmission events at the synapse." Statements like these are subjective. In the authors' own comparison, GCaMP8m is significantly slower than GCaMP8f (at least in terms of decay time), despite having a moderately higher response amplitude. It is therefore unclear why GCaMP8m is considered 'optimal'. The authors should clarify this point or explain their rationale for prioritizing response amplitude over speed in the context of their application.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors define the principles that, based on first principles, should be guiding the optimisation of trascription factors with intrinsically disordered regions (IDR). The first part of the study defines the following principles to optimize the binding affinities to the genome in the receiving region that is called the ”antenna”: (i) reduce the target to IDR-binding distance on the genome, (ii) optimise the distance betwee the DNA binding domain and the binding sites on the IDR to be as close as possible to the distance between their binding sites on the genome; (iii) keep the same number of binding sites and their targets and modulate this number with binding strength, reducing them with increased strenght; (iv) modulate the binding strenght to be above a threshold that depends on the proportion of IDR binding sites in the antenna. The second part defines the scaling of the seach time in function of key parameters such as the volume of the nucleus, and the size of the antenna, derived as a combination of 3D search of the antenna and 1D ”octopusing” on the antenna. The third part focuses on validation, where the current results are compared to binding probabilith data from a single experiment, and new experiment are proposed to further validate the model as well as testing designed transcription factors.

      Strengths:

      The strength of this work is that it provides simple, interpretable and testable theoretical conclusions. This will allow the derived design principles to be understood, evaluated and improved in the future. The theoretical derivations are rigorous. The authors provides a comparison to experiments, and also propose new experiments to be performed in the future, this is a great value in the paper since it will set the stage and inspire new experimental techniques. Further, the field needs inspiration and motivations to develop these techniques, since they are required to benchmark the transcription factors designed with the methods presented in this paper, as well as to develop novel data based or in vivo methods that would greatly benefit the field. As such, this paper is a fundamental contribution to the field.

      Weaknesses:

      The model assumption that the interaction between the transcription factor and the DNA outside of the antenna region is negligible is probably too strong for many/most transcription factors, particularly in organisms with a longer genome than yeasts. The model presents many first principles to drive the design of transcription factor, but arguably, other principles and mechanisms might also play a role by being beneficial to the search and binding process. Specifically: (i) a role of the IDR in complex formation and cooperativity between multiple trascription factors, (ii) ability of the IDR to do parallel searching based on multiple DNA binding sites spaced by disordered regions, (iii) affinity of the IDR to specific compartmentalisations in the nucleus reducing the search time, etc. The paper would be improved by a discussion over alternative mechanisms.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting that our work delivers simple, interpretable and rigorously derived conclusions, backed by experimental comparison and concrete proposals for future studies.

      Regarding interactions outside the antenna region, Supplementary S10 shows that the non-specific IDR–DNA interactions (on the order of 1 kBT) only slightly alter the 3D diffusion coefficient and thus do not affect our conclusions regarding the optimal search process.

      We have also added sentences in the discussion section regarding the alternative mechanism.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an interesting theoretical exploration of how a flexible protein domain, which has multiple DNAbinding sites along it, affects the stability of the protein-DNA complex. It proposes a mechanism (”octopusing”) for protein doing a random walk while bound to DNA which simultaneously enables exploration of the DNA strand and stability of the bound state.

      Strengths:

      Stability of the protein-DNA bound state and the ability of the protein to perform 1d diffusion along the DNA are two properties of a transcription factor that are usually seen as being in opposition of each other. The octopusing mechanism is an elegant resolution of the puzzle of how both could be accommodated. This mechanism has interesting biological implications for the functional role of intrinsically disordered domains in transcription factor (TF) proteins. They show theoretically how these domains, if flexible and able to make multiple weak contacts with the DNA, can enhance the ability of the TF to efficiently find their binding site on the DNA from which they exert control over the transcription of their target gene. The paper concludes with a comparison of model predictions with experimental data which gives further support to the proposed model. Overall, this is an interesting and well executed theoretical paper that proposes an interesting idea about the functional role for IDR domains in TFs.

      Weaknesses:

      IDR domains are assumed flexible which I believe is not always the case. Also, I’m not sure how ubiquitous are the assumed binding sites on the DNA for multiple subdomains along the IDR. These assumptions though seem like interesting points of departure for further experiments.

      We thank the reviewer for their careful and insightful evaluation of our work. In particular, we appreciate your emphasis on the inherent trade-off between binding stability and one-dimensional diffusion, and your recognition of how the octopusing mechanism elegantly reconciles these conflicting requirements.

      To address the flexibility of TFs with IDRs, we incorporated the spring’s rest length—effectively introducing tunable rigidity—in Supplementary Section S1, and we show that our design principles for binding probability remain robust. Indeed, this is a highly interesting point; a comprehensive study will require more detailed modeling alongside experimental validation.

      We acknowledge that the current evidence for IDR-directed DNA binding is primarily derived from a limited number of well-studied cases, particularly Msn2 in yeast, and the ubiquity of this mechanism across diverse transcription factors remains to be established.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The paper jumps to fast to the results, an larger introduction might improve the paper, the current introduction jumps too fast to results. Further, line 50, I don’t think that the figure is properly referenced. The formula 2 is confusing since what is the target volume V1 is not explained in the context of the formula, please expand the explanations.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable recommendations. We have expanded the Introduction, clarified V<sub>1</sub>, and updated the line 50.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      I have some mostly minor suggestions to the authors for improving the manuscript:

      In the abstract and introduction on at least two occasions the authors talk about IDRs as though they’re necessarily flexible. My understanding is that, while this is a very reasonable assumption, I don’t think this is something we know with any certainty for most IDRs. If the authors agree with my assessment I think they should reflect this uncertainty in the writing.

      Thank you for the recommendations. We revised the wording to reflect the uncertainty, changing it to: “... commonly assumed to behave as a long, flexible...” and “...can be assumed as flexible....”.

      It took me a bit of time to figure out what’s going on in Figure 1b. To help the reader I would suggest labeling the DBD targets (yellow square) and the IDR targets (gray squares) as such. The figure also left me guessing whether the DBD domain can bind to the IDR targets non-specifically? (I presume not.) This also brought a slightly bigger question into focus for me, wouldn’t the presence of the IDR binding ”sites” (since these ”sites” are on the protein I think the term ”domains” instead of ”sites” ) mean that this would increase the time the protein is bound non-specifically somewhere far from the target thereby increasing the search time. Or is the ability of the protein to bind specifically to DNA away from the DBD target ignored?

      We have labeled the DBD targets and IDR targets in the figure. ‘Domains’ usually refers to structured parts; we keep using ‘sites’ and clarify that they correspond to short linear motifs.

      The reviewer is correct. Our model omits any non-specific binding between the DBD and IDR-binding targets, as well as between the TF and other DNA regions. If such interactions were to substantially lengthen the search time, they would effectively revert our mechanism to the classical bacterial facilitateddiffusion model, which is generally considered inappropriate for IDR-mediated TF search in eukaryotic cells. However, Supplementary Figure S10 demonstrates that non-specific IDR–DNA interactions induce only marginal changes in the effective three-dimensional diffusion coefficient within complex chromatin environments, and therefore do not alter our conclusions regarding the optimal search process.

      In Equation 2 and the text that follows I was left wondering what is the target volume V1. Also, I think it would be helpful to the reader to give them a sense of scale for the dimension full quantities appearing in Equation 2. This is done later when comparing the theory to experimental data, but I think it would be helpful to give a sense of size earlier in the manuscript.

      V<sub>1</sub> denotes the volume of the IDR–binding target region, which is on the order of bp<sup>3</sup>. f(d,l<sub>0</sub>) has units of inverse volume. We have included the units and specified the order of magnitude of V<sub>1</sub> after Equation 2.

      The binding energy EB is discussed a number of times but it wasn’t clear to me that this quantity referred to the energy per IDR site on the DNA or the total energy when the IDR is bound to DNA. In Figure 1 it would seem that the model allows only one IDR domain bound at a given time but I think the model allows for multiple IDR domains to be bound to the IDR target sites simultaneously. Right? Maybe make this clear in the Figure and the text.

      E<sub>B</sub> denotes the binding energy per binding site, where each site corresponds to a short linear motif. Yes, we allow for multiple IDR domains to be bound to the IDR target sites simultaneously. We have clarified the definition of E<sub>B</sub> and adjusted the figure slightly to avoid any misunderstanding.

      After Eq 4 the discussion suggests that for ϕ << 1 the threshold energy is much greater than kBT, but that’s hard to imagine given that the logarithmic dependence of the latter on the former. Also in Figure 2d it seems that the threshold energy is about 8 kBT. Clearly this is not a big deal, just thought the authors might want to revise the language.

      Thank you. We now clarify the sentence using the representative values of ϕ and E<sub>th</sub> after Equation 4.

      Right after Figure 2 there is a discussion of the different parameters that the authors vary. I suggest having a figure that illustrates these parameters (possibly in Figure 1b) to make it easier to follow the discussion.

      We have added explanations of the relevant parameters in Figure 1 for clarity.

      When discussing the dynamics of search the result stated is that the search time is minimum for a specific value of R. I think it would be useful to translate this into a TF concentration. Also, if R represents the radius of the cells nucleus 1/6 um is almost an order of magnitude smaller than the size of a typical nucleus. Is this a worry? Either way some clarification of this number would be helpful.

      Thank you for the suggestion. As noted later in this section, we have translated R into an equivalent TF concentration, and we clarify that we assume the scaling of the minimum search time remains unchanged when extrapolated to the size of a typical nucleus.

      There is a comment regarding the role of the DNA persistence length and how it was not accounted for. It would be helpful if the authors could add a sentence or two explains how a folded DNA conformation, as is the case in the nucleus, would affect their calculation. (So that the reader gets an idea without having to get into the details described in the Supplement).

      Thank you. We have revised the sentence to: “We have verified that reducing the DNA persistence length, which promotes increased DNA coiling, results in only a modest increase in mean search time. Even under extreme coiling conditions, the increase remains below 30% of the baseline value, as detailed in Supplementary S9.”.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In their manuscript, Michelson et al use a combination of mesoscopic 1p and single-cell resolution 2p imaging to characterise cortical encoding of grooming behaviour. Despite their subcortical locus of control (and non-reliance on cortex), the authors report that grooming movements are accompanied by widespread activation of dorsal cortex. Different grooming movements elicit distinct spatiotemporal cortical activity patterns. They find that cortical engagement is greater at the beginning of grooming episodes than at their end. They also report greater cortical activation for atypical unilateral grooming movements seen under head-restraint in comparison to cortical activity during bilateral movements typical of unrestrained or spontaneous grooming.

      While this is not the first study to report cortical representations of subcortically controlled behaviours, and the authors themselves cite many previous reports of cortical activation during locomotion and even grooming (Sjöbom et al 2020), the value of the present study lies in their use of imaging to reveal the widespread nature of cortical activation during execution of a complex, innate behaviour. I also appreciate the systematic approach used by the authors to break down grooming episodes into their constituent movements and reveal their transition structure.

      I do have concerns, however, that some of the authors' claims are insufficiently supported by their results, and more analysis is required to convincingly rule out alternative interpretations.

      (1) One possible explanation for the gradual decline in cortical activity is that unilateral movements associated with greater cortical activation dominate early in grooming episodes, whereas bilateral movements that elicit weaker cortical activity dominate later (Figure 3G and 2C). The authors could check whether cortical activity associated with the *same* grooming movement is constant or declines during such episodes. A related point: doesn't the regression analysis shown in Figure 3, Supplement 2, assume that a stationary relationship between movement and spatiotemporal patterns of cortical activity?

      (2) From the decline in cortical responses during long grooming episodes, the authors suggest that "mesoscale cortical activity mostly reflects the initiation of subcortically-mediated behaviors, rather than the behavior itself". The authors have taken a lot of trouble to come up with a rich, detailed segmentation and clustering of the grooming behaviour into its constituent movements (Figure 1). Therefore, I am somewhat surprised that they make this claim solely from analysis of averaged cortical activity during nearly minute-long grooming episodes rather than a higher time resolution analysis of transitions between distinct grooming movements (like the prior study by Sjöbom et al and related work in striatal encoding of innate movement sequences by Markowitz et al).

      (3) The authors find that unilateral, atypical grooming movements elicit cortical activity that is distinct from the more naturalistic bilateral movements. They interpret this as reflecting the temporal transition structure of the behaviour. However, an alternative explanation is that the differences (or similarities) in evoked activity simply reflect differences (or similarities) in the kinematics of these movements, with bilateral movements appearing more similar to each other than to unilateral movements. A related point: there is little description of the "non-grooming forelimb movements". Were these kinematically similar to the unilateral forelimb movements, which may explain why they cluster together in Figure 4H?

      (4) Page 13, last paragraph: the authors suggest that similar encoding of non-grooming forelimb movements and unilateral grooming movements may reflect a shared reliance on the cortex. This is rather speculative. Several studies have demonstrated that voluntary unilateral movements employed for reaching or lever pressing are not generally reliant on the cortex (Whishaw et al, Beh Brain Res, 1991; Kawai et al, 2015). There isn't, in my opinion, a broad consensus for the authors' statement that "reaching for food is a cortex-dependent action". Rather than extrapolating from past studies, could the authors not experimentally assess whether unilateral grooming movements are more sensitive to cortical silencing than bilateral ones, possibly revealing a cortical locus of control?

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use a combination of a head-fixed grooming paradigm, single-photon mesoscale, and wide-field-of-view two-photon calcium imaging to characterize cortical activity patterns during evoked grooming. Previous work has shown that grooming behavior does not require cortex, but that there are neuronal representations of grooming in motor cortex. The authors extend these findings by showing cortex-wide activation patterns at the meso-scale that relate to distinct grooming elements. This activation is strongest at grooming onset, but declines over the course of extended grooming periods. They also find similar activity patterns during licking/drinking behavior. Two-photon imaging further revealed that individual neurons across the cortex are preferentially activated by grooming. While their activity also declines after grooming onset, they remain active throughout grooming periods. This work extends previous findings by revealing that grooming and other subcortically-generated behaviors may be represented not only in motor cortex, but across dorsal cortex, both on the mesoscale and single neuron levels. These findings may lead to further investigation into the role of cortical activity during subcortically generated behaviors.

      Strengths:

      (1) Detailed characterization of grooming behavior in a head-fixed paradigm.

      (2) Combination of single photon mesoscale and two-photon wide field-of-view imaging to characterize grooming (and licking)-related activity across dorsal cortex on multiple levels

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The behavior observed in the head-fixed grooming paradigm only partially resembles spontaneous grooming, lacking typical elements of the syntactic chain, while additionally evoking non-typical behaviors, resembling unilateral reaches, making the interpretation of the observations and their relevance to natural behaviors difficult. Furthermore, the nature of the non-typical movements (which may be cortex-dependent while typical grooming is not) is not explored.

      (2) Two important findings in relation to the neural representations of individual grooming behaviors remain unclear:

      a) The authors state that individual grooming behaviors did not have distinct neuronal representations (except unilateral grooming; Figure 4G) - it remains unclear how this fits with the observation of distinct activation maps during the different grooming behaviors. Should this differential activation not also correspond to distinct activation patterns of 'grooming' neurons across the cortex? Or do they mean that the activity in the 'grooming' neurons is not consistent across grooming instances and therefore no distinct representation can be detected?

      b) The authors state that the 'typical' grooming behaviors do not have consistent activation patterns across animals (Figure 3 and supplements). It remains, therefore, unclear what the averaged activation maps really represent. Furthermore, this observation leaves several open questions: Are the activation patterns consistent in individual animals? Do differences across animals emerge due to differences in their behavior? And most importantly, can the actual behavior be decoded from the activation patterns?

      (3) Multiple statements/conclusions are not supported by quantification of the data, but only by qualitative assessments, e.g.: lines 433-435: "In general, the maximally activated networks involved in licking and unilateral grooming behaviors 'appeared' to be the most consistent across animals compared to the bilateral grooming movements (Figure 3G)."; 436-437: "Averaged cortical activation maps associated with licking and elliptical behaviors were 'qualitatively similar' between evoked and spontaneous sessions, where the water drop was not applied".; 480-482: "The unique explained variance maps for the licking behavior 'differed' in the drinking context compared to the grooming context (Figure 3-figure supplement 3F)." The lack of quantification leaves the significance of these observations unclear.

      (4) It remains unclear what the ongoing activity in 'grooming' neurons represents, since there is no detailed analysis of the relationship between activity and the detailed kinematics of the grooming movements.

      The authors show that neuronal representations of grooming and other subcortical behaviors can be found across dorsal cortex and that these representations are at least to some degree specific to distinct behavioral elements. While this study does not reveal functional insights into the role of cortical representations of subcortically-generated behaviors, it is a step towards more in-depth studies. In the future, it will be important to determine whether these representations are efference copies or sensory-driven, or whether they affect the behavior, and if so, under which circumstances.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      General comments

      We thank the reviewers and editor for their thoughtful feedback. We are glad that the minor comments appear resolved. In this revision, we added subject-specific analyses, further FC comparisons, and clarified our rationale for stimulation parameters. We acknowledge that two concerns remain: (1) the 1 mA-2 mA sequence may introduce confounds, and (2) electric field modeling was not included due to technical limitations. We now explicitly note these as limitations in the manuscript and provide justification and discussion accordingly.

      Major comments

      R.2.1. For the anesthetized monkeys, the anode location differs between subjects, with the electrode positioned to stimulate the left DLFPC in monkey R and the right DLPFC in monkey N. The authors mention that this discrepancy does not result in significant differences in the electric field due to the monkeys' small head size. However, this is incorrect, as placing the anode on the left hemisphere would result in a much lower EF in the right DLPFC than placing the anode on the right side. Running an electric field simulation would confirm this. Additionally, the small electrode size suggested by the Easy cap configuration for NHP appears sufficient to stimulate the targeted regions focally. If this interpretation is correct, the authors should provide additional evidence to support their claim, such as a computational simulation of the EF distribution.

      R.2.1 Authors' answer: We thank the Reviewer for the comments. First, regarding the reviewer's statement that placing the anode on the left hemisphere would result in a much lower EF in the right DLPFC than placing the anode on the right side, we would like to clarify that we did not use a typical 4 x 1 concentric ring high-definition setup (which consists of a small centre electrode surrounded by four return electrodes), but a two-electrode montage, with one electrode over the left or right PFC and the other one over the contralateral occipital cortex. According to EF modelling papers, a 4 x 1 high-definition setup would produce an EF that is focused and limited to the cortical area circumscribed by the ring of the return electrodes (Datta et al. 2009; Alam et al. 2016). Therefore, targeting the left or right DLPFC with a 4 x 1 setup would produce an EF confined to the targeted hemisphere of the PFC. In contrast, we expect the brain current flow generated with our 2-electrode setup to be broader, despite the small size of the electrodes, because there is no constraint from return electrodes. Thus, with our setup, the current is expected to flow between the PFC and the occipital cortex (see also our responses to comments R3.3., R.E.C.#2.1. and R.E.C.#2.2.).

      Second, we would like to point out that in awake experiments, in which we stimulated the right PFC of both monkeys, there was no gross evidence of left or right asymmetry in the computed functional connectivity patterns (Figure 3A, Figure 3 - figure supplement 2A; Figure 5A). These results, showing that our stimulation montages did not induce asymmetric dynamic FC changes in NHPs, support the idea that our setups did not generate EFs that were spatially focused enough to alter brain activity in one hemisphere substantially more than the other.

      Third, it is also worth noting that current evidence suggests that human brains are significantly more lateralized than those of macaques. Macaque monkeys have been found to have some degree of lateralized networks, but these are of lower complexity, and the lateralization is less pronounced and functionally organized than in humans. (Whey et al., 2014; Mantini et al., 2013). This suggests that, even if the stimulation were focal enough to stimulate the left or the right part of the PFC only, the behavioural effects would likely be similar.

      Follow-up comment: Thank you for the detailed response and for referencing both experimental data and prior literature. While I appreciate the discussion on the lack of functional asymmetry and reduced lateralization in macaques, my original concern was about the physical distribution of the electric field (EF) due to different anode placements. Functional connectivity outcomes do not necessarily reflect EF symmetry, and without EF modeling, it's difficult to determine whether the stimulation affected both hemispheres equally. I understand the challenges of NHP-specific modeling, but even a simplified simulation or acknowledgment of this limitation in the manuscript would help clarify the interpretability of your results.

      R.2.2. For the anesthetized monkeys, the authors applied 1 mA tDCS first, followed by 2 mA tDCS. A 20-minute stimulation duration of 1 mA tDCS is strong enough to produce after-effects that could influence the brain state during the 2 mA tDCS. This raises some concerns. Previous studies have shown that 1 mA tDCS can generate EF of over 1 V/m in the brain, and the effects of stimulation are sensitive to brain state (e.g., eye closed vs. eye open). How do the authors ensure that there are no after-effects from the 1 mA tDCS? This issue makes it challenging to directly compare the effects of 1 mA and 2 mA stimulation.<br /> R.2.2 Authors' answer: We agree with the reviewer's comment that 1 mA tDCS may induce aftereffects, as has been observed in several human studies (e.g., (Jamil et al. 2017, 2020). Although the differences between the 1 mA post-stimulation and baseline conditions were not significant in our analyses, it's still possible that the stimulation produced some effects below the threshold of significance that may contribute, albeit weakly, to the changes observed during

      Follow-up comment: Thank you for the clarification and for acknowledging the potential for 1 mA after-effects. While I appreciate the authors' transparency and the amendment to the manuscript, I still find it important that the limitation be clearly stated in the Discussion section. The fact that 2 mA stimulation always followed 1 mA introduces a potential confound, making it difficult to attribute observed changes uniquely to 2 mA. If a counterbalanced design was not feasible, I would recommend explicitly noting this as a limitation in the interpretation of dose-dependent effects.

      R.2.3. The occurrence rate of a specific structural-functional coupling pattern among random brain regions shows significant effects of tDCS. However, these results seem counterintuitive. It is generally understood that non-invasive brain stimulation tends to modulate functional connectivity rather than structural or structural-functional connectivity. How does the occurrence rate of structural-functional coupling patterns provide a more suitable measure of the effectiveness of tDCS than functional connectivity alone? I would recommend that the authors present the results based on functional connectivity itself. If there is no change in functional connectivity, the relevance of changes in structural-functional coupling might not translate into a meaningful alteration in brain function, making it unclear how significant this finding is without corresponding functional evidence.

      R.2.3. Authors' answer: First of all, we would like to make it clear that the occurrence rate of patterns as a function of their SFC is not intended to be used or seen as a 'better' measure of the efficacy of tDCS. Instead, it is one aspect of the effects of tDCS on whole-brain functional cortical dynamics, obtained from refined measures (phase-coherences), that specifically addresses the coupling between structure and function. This type of analysis is further motivated by its increasing use in the literature due to its suspected relationship to wakefulness (e.g., (Barttfeld et al. 2015, Demertzi et al. 2019; Castro et al. 2023)). Also, in our analysis, the structure is kept constant: the connectivity matrix used to correlate the functional brain states is always the same (CoCoMac82). Thus, the influence of tDCS on the structure-function side can only be explained by modulating the functional aspects, as suggested by intuition and previous results.

      Then, we agree with the reviewer that studying the functional changes induced by tDCS alone could be valuable. However, usual metrics used in FC analysis are usually done statistically: FC-states are either computed through averaging spatial correlations over time, then analyzed through graph-theoretical properties for instance (or by just directly computing the element-wise differences), or either by considering the properties of the different visited FC-states by computing spatial correlations over a sliding time-window, and then similar analysis can be done as previously explained. But these are static metrics, if the states visited are essentially the same (which is expected from non-invasive neuromodulations that haven't already demonstrated strong and/or characteristic impact), but the dynamical process of visiting said states changes, one would see no difference in that regard. As such, in the case of resting-state fMRI, differences in FCs are hard to interpret given that between-sessions within-condition differences are usually found with some degree of variance for the respective conditions. Trying then to interpret between-condition differences is quite tricky in the case of subtle modulations of the system's activity. On the other hand, more subtle differences can be captured by considering more detailed analysis, such as using phase-based methods like we did, by incorporating some statistical learning component with regard to the dynamicity of the system (supervised learning for instance like we did followed by temporal & transition-based methodology), and by adding some dimensions along which one will be able to give some interpretation to the analysis. In our case we were interested in characterizing resting-state differences between stimulation conditions, which have nuanced and subtle interactions with the biological system. As such, classical measures of differences between FC states are likely to not be refined and precise enough. In fact, we propose additional files investigating those classically used measures such as differences in average FC matrices, or changes in functional graph properties (like modularity, efficiency and density) of the visited FC states. These figures show that, for the first case, comparing region-to-region specific FCs provides very few statistically significant results. With respect to the second part, we show that virtually no differences are observed in the properties of the functional states visited. These results suggest, as expected, that the actual brain states visited across the different stimulation conditions are topologically quite similar, and that only very few region-specific pairwise functional connectivities are particularly modulated by specific tDCS montages while, on the other hand, the actual dynamical process dictating how the brain activity passes from one state to another is in fact being influenced as shown by the dynamical analysis presented in the main figures in a more apparent and meaningful way (in that it is dependent on the montage, somewhat consistent with regard to the post-stimulations conditions, and can be made sense of by considering the theoretical effect of near-anodal versus near-cathodal neuromodulatory effects).

      Actions in the text: We have added new supplementary files showing the effects of the stimulations on FC matrices and on classical functional graph properties in awake and anesthesia datasets (Supplementary Files 3 & 4). We have added new sentences about these new analyses on the effects of the stimulations on FC matrices and on classical functional graph properties in the Results section:<br /> Follow-up comment: Thank you for the detailed and comprehensive response. The clarification regarding the use of SFC dynamics and the additional analyses provided are convincing.

      R2.4. The authors recorded data from only two monkeys, which may limit the investigation of the group effects of tDCS. As the number of scans for the second monkey in each consciousness condition is lower than that in the first monkey, there is a concern that the main effects might primarily reflect the data from a single monkey. I suggest that the authors should analyze the data for each monkey individually to determine if similar trends are observed in both subjects.

      R.2.4. Authors' answer: We agree that the small number of subjects is a limitation of our study. However, we have already addressed these aspects by reporting statistical analyses that consider them, using linear models of such variables, and running them through ANOVA tests. In addition, we experimentally ensured that we recorded a relatively high number of sessions over a period of several years. Regardless, we agree that our study would benefit from further investigation into this matter. We have therefore prepared complementary figures showing the main analysis performed separately for the two monkeys as proposed, as well as further investigations into the inter-condition variability outmatching the inter-individual variability, itself being also outmatched by intra-individual changes.

      Actions in the text: We have added a supplementary file showing the main analyses performed separately for the two monkeys (Supplementary File 2) and further investigations into the inter-condition variability (Supplementary Files 3 & 4). We have added new sentences about these analyses performed separately for the two monkeys in the Results section:

      Follow-up comment: Thank you for addressing this concern and for providing the individual monkey analysis. The additional figures and statistical explanations are helpful and appreciated.

      R2.5. Anodal tDCS was only applied to anesthetized monkeys, which limits the conclusion that the authors are aiming for. It raises questions about the conclusion regarding brain state dependency. To address this, it would be better to include the cathodal tDCS session for anesthetized monkeys. If cathodal tDCS changes the connectivity during anesthesia, it becomes difficult to argue that the effects of cathodal tDCS vary depending on the state of consciousness as discussed in this paper. On the other hand, if cathodal tDCS would not produce any changes, the conclusion would then focus on the relationship between the polarity of tDCS and consciousness. In that case, the authors could maintain their conclusion but might need to refine it to reflect this specific relationship more accurately.

      R.2.5. Authors' answer: We agree with the reviewer that it would have been interesting to investigate the effects of cathodal tDCS in anesthetized monkeys. However, due to the challenging nature of the experimental procedures under anesthesia, we had to limit the investigations to only one stimulation modality. We chose to deliver anodal stimulation because, from a translational point of view, we aimed to provide new information on the effects of tDCS under anesthesia as a model for disorders of consciousness. It also made much more sense to increase the cortical excitability of the prefrontal cortex in an attempt to wake up the sedated monkeys rather than doing the opposite.

      Actions in the text: We have added a new sentence in the Results section:

      "Due to the challenging nature of the experimental procedures under anesthesia, we limited the investigations to only one stimulation modality. We chose to deliver anodal stimulation to provide new information on the effects of tDCS under anesthesia as a model for disorders of consciousness and to increase the cortical excitability of the PFC in an attempt to wake up the sedated monkeys."

      Follow-up comment: Thank you for clarifying the rationale behind applying only anodal stimulation under anesthesia. While I appreciate the experimental constraints and the translational motivation, I would still encourage the authors to explicitly acknowledge in the Discussion that the absence of a cathodal condition under anesthesia limits the ability to dissociate polarity-specific effects from state-dependent effects. This clarification would help temper the conclusions and better reflect the scope of the current dataset.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In this work, the authors apply TDCS to awake and anesthetized macaques to determine the effect of this modality on dynamic connectivity measured by fMRI. The question is to understand the extent to which TDCS can influence conscious or unconscious states. Their target was the PFC. During the conscious states, the animals were executing a fixation task. Unconsciousness was achieved by administering a constant infusion of propofol and a continuous infusion of the muscle relaxant cisatracurium. They observed the animals while awake receiving anodal or cathodal hd-TDCS applied to the PFC. During the cathodal stimulation, they found disruption of functional connectivity patterns, enhanced structure-function correlations, a decrease in Shannon entropy, and a transition towards patterns that were more commonly anatomically based. In contrast under propofol anesthesia anodal hd-TDCS stimulation appreciably altered the brain connectivity patterns and decreased the correlation between structure and function. The PFC stimulations altered patterns associated with consciousness as well as those associated with unconsciousness.

      Strengths: 

      The authors carefully executed a set of very challenging experiments that involved applying tDCS in awake and anesthetized non-human primates while conducting functional imaging.

      We thank the Reviewer for summarising our study and for his appreciation of the highly challenging experiments we performed.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors show that tDCS can alter functional connectivity measured by fMRI but they do not make clear what their studies teach the reader about the effects of tDCS on the brain during different states of consciousness. No important finding is stated contrary to what is stated in the abstract. It is also not clear what the work teaches us about how tDCS works nor is it clear what are the "clinical implications for disorders of consciousness." The deep anesthesia is akin to being in a state of coma. This was not discussed.  

      While the authors have executed a set of technically challenging experiments, it is not clear what they teach us about how tDCS works, normal brain neurophysiology, or brain pathological states such as disorders of consciousness.

      We thank the reviewer for his comments. We agree that we could better highlight the value and implications of our work, and we take this opportunity to improve our manuscript according to the suggestions.

      Actions in the text: We have added several new paragraphs in the Discussion section, considering these comments and other related remarks from the Reviewing Editor (see below our answer to the first comment of the Reviewing Editor: REC#1).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      General comments: 

      The authors investigated the effects of tDCS on brain dynamics in awake and anesthetized monkeys using functional MRI. They claim that cathodal tDCS disrupts the functional connectivity pattern in awake monkeys while anodal tDCS alters brain patterns in anesthetized monkeys. This study offers valuable insight into how brain states can influence the outcomes of noninvasive brain stimulation. However, there are several aspects of the methods and results sections that should be improved to clarify the findings.

      We thank the Reviewer for the summary and appreciation of our study.  

      Major comments 

      For the anesthetized monkeys, the anode location differs between subjects, with the electrode positioned to stimulate the left DLFPC in monkey R and the right DLPFC in monkey N. The authors mention that this discrepancy does not result in significant differences in the electric field due to the monkeys' small head size. However, this is incorrect, as placing the anode on the left hemisphere would result in a much lower EF in the right DLPFC than placing the anode on the right side. Running an electric field simulation would confirm this. Additionally, the small electrode size suggested by the Easy cap configuration for NHP appears sufficient to stimulate the targeted regions focally. If this interpretation is correct, the authors should provide additional evidence to support their claim, such as a computational simulation of the EF distribution.

      We thank the Reviewer for the comments. First, regarding the reviewer’s statement that placing the anode on the left hemisphere would result in a much lower EF in the right DLPFC than placing the anode on the right side, we would like to clarify that we did not use a typical 4 x 1 concentric ring high-definition setup (which consists of a small centre electrode surrounded by four return electrodes), but a two-electrode montage, with one electrode over the left or right PFC and the other one over the contralateral occipital cortex. According to EF modelling papers, a 4 x 1 high-definition setup would produce an EF that is focused and limited to the cortical area circumscribed by the ring of the return electrodes (Datta et al. 2009; Alam et al. 2016). Therefore, targeting the left or right DLPFC with a 4 x 1 setup would produce an EF confined to the targeted hemisphere of the PFC. In contrast, we expect the brain current flow generated with our 2-electrode setup to be broader, despite the small size of the electrodes,  because there is no constraint from return electrodes. Thus, with our setup, the current is expected to flow between the PFC and the occipital cortex (see also our responses to comments R3.3., R.E.C.#2.1. and R.E.C.#2.2.). 

      Second, we would like to point out that in awake experiments, in which we stimulated the right PFC of both monkeys, there was no gross evidence of left or right asymmetry in the computed functional connectivity patterns (Figure 3A, Figure 3 - figure supplement 2A; Figure 5A). These results, showing that our stimulation montages did not induce asymmetric dynamic FC changes in NHPs, support the idea that our setups did not generate EFs that were spatially focused enough to alter brain activity in one hemisphere substantially more than the other.

      Third, it is also worth noting that current evidence suggests that human brains are significantly more lateralized than those of macaques. Macaque monkeys have been found to have some degree of lateralized networks, but these are of lower complexity, and the lateralization is less pronounced and functionally organized than in humans. (Whey et al., 2014; Mantini et al., 2013). This suggests that, even if the stimulation were focal enough to stimulate the left or the right part of the PFC only, the behavioural effects would likely be similar.

      We strongly agree with the reviewer that conducting an EF simulation would be valuable to confirm our expectations and to gain a comprehensive view of the characteristics of the EFs generated with our different setups in NHPs. However, the challenge is in the fact that EF computational models have been developed for humans, and their use in NHPs is not straightforward due to significant anatomical differences. For example, macaque monkeys are distinct from humans in terms of brain size, shape and cortical organisation, skull thickness, and the presence of muscles, as well as different tissue conductivities (Lee et al. 2015; Datta et al.2016; Mantell et al. 2023). We plan to address this in future work.

      Actions in the text: In the Materials and Methods section, we have modified the sentence: “Because of the small size of the monkey's head and because we did not use return electrodes to restrict the current flow (as is achieved with typical high-definition montages (Datta et al. 2009; Alam et al. 2016)), we expected that tDCS stimulation with the two symmetrical montages would result in nearly equivalent electric fields across the monkey’s head and produce roughly similar effects on brain activity.” 

      We also added a new sentence about EF simulation: 

      “This would need to be confirmed by running an electric field simulation. However, computational electric field models have been developed for humans, and their use in NHPs is not straightforward due to anatomical specificities. Indeed, monkeys differ from humans in terms of brain size, shape and cortical organization, skull thickness, tissue conductivities and the presence of muscles (Lee et al. 2015; Datta et al. 2016; Mantell et al. 2023). Modelling of EFs generated with the specific tDCS montages employed in this study will be performed in future work.”

      For the anesthetized monkeys, the authors applied 1 mA tDCS first, followed by 2 mA tDCS. A 20-minute stimulation duration of 1 mA tDCS is strong enough to produce after-effects that could influence the brain state during the 2 mA tDCS. This raises some concerns. Previous studies have shown that 1 mA tDCS can generate EF of over 1 V/m in the brain, and the effects of stimulation are sensitive to brain state (e.g., eye closed vs. eye open). How do the authors ensure that there are no after-effects from the 1 mA tDCS? This issue makes it challenging to directly compare the effects of 1 mA and 2 mA stimulation.

      We agree with the reviewer's comment that 1 mA tDCS may induce aftereffects, as has been observed in several human studies (e.g., (Jamil et al. 2017, 2020). Although the differences between the 1 mA post-stimulation and baseline conditions were not significant in our analyses, it's still possible that the stimulation produced some effects below the threshold of significance that may contribute, albeit weakly, to the changes observed during and after 2 mA stimulation. We have, therefore, amended the paper in line with the reviewer's comments.

      Actions in the text: We have added the following text in the Result section: 

      “While several human studies have reported that 1 mA transcranial stimulation induces aftereffects (e.g., (Jamil et al. 2017, 2020; Monte-Silva et al. 2010), the differences between the 1 mA post-stimulation and baseline conditions were not significant in our analyses. However, it is still possible that the 1 mA stimulation produced some effects below the threshold of significance that may contribute to the changes observed during and after the 2 mA stimulation.”

      The occurrence rate of a specific structural-functional coupling pattern among random brain regions shows significant effects of tDCS. However, these results seem counterintuitive. It is generally understood that noninvasive brain stimulation tends to modulate functional connectivity rather than structural or structural-functional connectivity. How does the occurrence rate of structural-functional coupling patterns provide a more suitable measure of the effectiveness of tDCS than functional connectivity alone? I would recommend that the authors present the results based on functional connectivity itself. If there is no change in functional connectivity, the relevance of changes in structural-functional coupling might not translate into a meaningful alteration in brain function, making it unclear how significant this finding is without corresponding functional evidence.

      First, of all, we would like to make it clear that the occurrence rate of patterns as a function of their SFC is not intended to be used or seen as a ‘better’ measure of the efficacy of tDCS. Instead, it is one aspect of the effects of tDCS on whole-brain functional cortical dynamics, obtained from refined measures (phase-coherences), that specifically addresses the coupling between structure and function. This type of analysis is further motivated by its increasing use in the literature due to its suspected relationship to wakefulness (e.g., (Barttfeld et al. 2015, Demertzi et al. 2019; Castro et al. 2023)). Also, in our analysis, the structure is kept constant: the connectivity matrix used to correlate the functional brain states is always the same (CoCoMac82). Thus, the influence of tDCS on the structure-function side can only be explained by modulating the functional aspects, as suggested by intuition and previous results.

      Then, we agree with the reviewer that studying the functional changes induced by tDCS alone could be valuable. However, usual metrics used in FC analysis are usually done statistically: FC-states are either computed through averaging spatial correlations over time, then analyzed through graph-theoretical properties for instance (or by just directly computing the element-wise differences), or either by considering the properties of the different visited FC-states by computing spatial correlations over a sliding time-window, and then similar analysis can be done as previously explained. But these are static metrics, if the states visited are essentially the same (which is expected from non-invasive neuromodulations that haven’t already demonstrated strong and/or characteristic impact), but the dynamical process of visiting said states changes, one would see no difference in that regard. As such, in the case of resting-state fMRI, differences in FCs are hard to interpret given that between-sessions within-condition differences are usually found with some degree of variance for the respective conditions. Trying then to interpret between-condition differences is quite tricky in the case of subtle modulations of the system’s activity. On the other hand, more subtle differences can be captured by considering more detailed analysis, such as using phase-based methods like we did,  by incorporating some statistical learning component with regard to the dynamicity of the system (supervised learning for instance like we did followed by temporal & transition-based methodology), and by adding some dimensions along which one will be able to give some interpretation to the analysis.  In our case we were interested in characterizing resting-state differences between stimulation conditions, which have nuanced and subtle interactions with the biological system. 

      As such, classical measures of differences between FC states are likely to not be refined and precise enough. In fact, we propose additional files investigating those classically used measures such as differences in average FC matrices, or changes in functional graph properties (like modularity, efficiency and density) of the visited FC states. These figures show that, for the first case, comparing region-to-region specific FCs provides very few statistically significant results. With respect to the second part, we show that virtually no differences are observed in the properties of the functional states visited. 

      These results suggest, as expected, that the actual brain states visited across the different stimulation conditions are topologically quite similar, and that only very few region-specific pairwise functional connectivities are particularly modulated by specific tDCS montages while, on the other hand, the actual dynamical process dictating how the brain activity passes from one state to another is in fact being influenced as shown by the dynamical analysis presented in the main figures in a more apparent and meaningful way (in that it is dependent on the montage, somewhat consistent with regard to the post-stimulations conditions, and can be made sense of by considering the theoretical effect of near-anodal versus near-cathodal neuromodulatory effects).

      Actions in the text: We have added new supplementary files showing the effects of the stimulations on FC matrices and on classical functional graph properties in awake and anesthesia datasets (Supplementary Files 3 & 4).

      We have added new sentences about these new analyses on the effects of the stimulations on FC matrices and on classical functional graph properties in the Results section:

      “In addition, we performed the main analyses separately for the two monkeys, explored the inter-condition variability (Supplementary File 2), and computed classical measures of functional connectivity such as average FC matrices and functional graph properties (modularity, efficiency and density) of the visited FC states (Supplementary File 3).... In contrast, classical FC metrics did not show significant differences across stimulation conditions, highlighting the value of dynamic FC metrics to capture the neuromodulatory effects of tDCS.”

      “Analyses of the two monkeys separately showed that the changes in slope and Shannon entropy were bigger in one of the two monkeys but went in the same direction (Supplementary File 2), while classical FC metrics did not capture any statistical differences between the different stimulation conditions (Supplementary File 3).”

      The authors recorded data from only two monkeys, which may limit the investigation of the group effects of tDCS. As the number of scans for the second monkey in each consciousness condition is lower than that in the first monkey, there is a concern that the main effects might primarily reflect the data from a single monkey. I suggest that the authors should analyze the data for each monkey individually to determine if similar trends are observed in both subjects.

      We agree that the small number of subjects is a limitation of our study. However, we have already addressed these aspects by reporting statistical analyses that consider them, using linear models of such variables, and running them through ANOVA tests. In addition, we experimentally ensured that we recorded a relatively high number of sessions over a period of several years. Regardless, we agree that our study would benefit from further investigation into this matter. We have therefore prepared complementary figures showing the main analysis performed separately for the two monkeys as proposed, as well as further investigations into the inter-condition variability outmatching the inter-individual variability, itself being also outmatched by intra-individual changes. 

      Actions in the text: We have added a supplementary file showing the main analyses performed separately for the two monkeys (Supplementary File 2) and further investigations into the inter-condition variability (Supplementary Files 3 & 4).

      We have added new sentences about these analyses performed separately for the two monkeys in the Results section:

      “In addition, we performed the main analyses separately for the two monkeys, explored the inter-condition variability (Supplementary File 2), and computed classical measures of functional connectivity such as average FC matrices and functional graph properties (modularity, efficiency and density) of the visited FC states (Supplementary File 3). The separate analyses showed that the changes in slope and Shannon entropy were substantially more pronounced in one of the two monkeys, corroborating some of the effects captured in the ANOVA tests.”

      “Analyses of the two monkeys separately showed that the changes in slope and Shannon entropy were bigger in one of the two monkeys but went in the same direction (Supplementary

      File 2)”.

      Anodal tDCS was only applied to anesthetized monkeys, which limits the conclusion that the authors are aiming for. It raises questions about the conclusion regarding brain state dependency. To address this, it would be better to include the cathodal tDCS session for anesthetized monkeys. If cathodal tDCS changes the connectivity during anesthesia, it becomes difficult to argue that the effects of cathodal tDCS vary depending on the state of consciousness as discussed in this paper. On the other hand, if cathodal tDCS would not produce any changes, the conclusion would then focus on the relationship between the polarity of tDCS and consciousness. In that case, the authors could maintain their conclusion but might need to refine it to reflect this specific relationship more accurately. 

      We agree with the reviewer that it would have been interesting to investigate the effects of cathodal tDCS in anesthetized monkeys. However, due to the challenging nature of the experimental procedures under anesthesia, we had to limit the investigations to only one stimulation modality. We chose to deliver anodal stimulation because, from a translational point of view, we aimed to provide new information on the effects of tDCS under anesthesia as a model for disorders of consciousness. It also made much more sense to increase the cortical excitability of the prefrontal cortex in an attempt to wake up the sedated monkeys rather than doing the opposite.

      Actions in the text: We have added a new sentence in the Results section:

      “Due to the challenging nature of the experimental procedures under anesthesia, we limited the investigations to only one stimulation modality. We chose to deliver anodal stimulation to provide new information on the effects of tDCS under anesthesia as a model for disorders of consciousness and to increase the cortical excitability of the PFC in an attempt to wake up the sedated monkeys.”

      Reviewer #3 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      This study used transcranial direct current stimulation administered using small 'high-definition' electrodes to modulate neural activity within the non-human primate prefrontal cortex during both wakefulness and anaesthesia. Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) was used to assess the neuromodulatory effects of stimulation. The authors report on the modification of brain dynamics during and following anodal and cathodal stimulation during wakefulness and following anodal stimulation at two intensities (1 mA, 2 mA) during anaesthesia. This study provides some possible support that prefrontal direct current stimulation can alter neural activity patterns across wakefulness and sedation in monkeys. However, the reported findings need to be considered carefully against several important methodological limitations. 

      Strengths: 

      A key strength of this work is the use of fMRI-based methods to track changes in brain activity with good spatial precision. Another strength is the exploration of stimulation effects across wakefulness and sedation, which has the potential to provide novel information on the impact of electrical stimulation across states of consciousness.

      We thank the Reviewer for the summary and for highlighting the strengths of our study. 

      Weaknesses: 

      The lack of a sham stimulation condition is a significant limitation, for instance, how can the authors be sure that results were not affected by drowsiness or fatigue as a result of the experimental procedure?

      We agree with the reviewer that adding control conditions could have strengthened our study. Control conditions usually consist of a sham condition or active control conditions. However, as mentioned in response to one of Reviewer 2 comments (R.2.5), we had to make choices as we could not perform as many experiments due to their demanding nature, especially under anesthesia. 

      In the awake state, we acquired data with two experimental conditions; the monkeys were exposed to either anodal (F4/O1) or cathodal (O1/F4) PFC tDCS. As anodal tDCS of the PFC induced only minor changes in brain dynamics, it could be considered as an active control condition for the cathodal condition, which had striking effects on the cortical dynamics. It is also worth noting that doubts have been raised about the neurobiological inertia of certain sham protocols. Indeed, different sham protocols have been employed in the literature, some of which may produce unintended effects (Fonteneau et al. 2019). Therefore, active control conditions, such as reversing the polarity of the stimulation or targeting a different brain region, have been proposed to provide better control (Fonteneau et al. 2019). Furthermore, in the context of experiments performed under anesthesia, the relevance of a sham control condition typically used to achieve adequate blinding is questionable. 

      With regard to drowsiness and fatigue as a result of the experimental procedure, we agree with the reviewer that this is a common problem in functional imaging due to the length of the recording sessions. We assumed, as was done in previous work (Uhrig, Dehaene, and Jarraya 2014; Wang et al. 2015), that the monkeys' performance on the fixation task during acquisition would capture these periods of fatigue. Therefore, only sessions with fixation rates above 85% were included in our analysis. 

      Actions in the text: We have now specified, in the Materials and Methods section, the fact that only runs with a high fixation rate (> 85%) were included in the study: 

      “To ensure that the results were not biased by fatigue or drowsiness due to the lengthy

      In the anaesthesia condition, the authors investigated the effects of two intensities of stimulation (1 mA and 2 mA). However, a potential confound here relates to the possibility that the initial 1 mA stimulation block might have caused plasticity-related changes in neural activity that could have interfered with the following 2 mA block due to the lack of a sufficient wash-out period. Hence, I am not sure any findings from the 2 mA block can really be interpreted as completely separate from the initial 1 mA stimulation period, given that they were administered consecutively. Several previous studies have shown that same-day repeated tDCS stimulation blocks can influence the effects of neuromodulation (e.g., Bastani and Jaberzadeh, 2014, Clin Neurophysiol; Monte-Silva et al., J. Neurophysiology). 

      We agree with the reviewer’s comment that the initial 1 mA stimulation block might have induced changes in neural activity and that the 20-minute post 1 mA block would not be long enough to wash out these changes. This comment is very similar to the second comment made by Reviewer 2 (R.2.2). Although our experimental data do not support this possibility (as the differences between the 1 mA post-stimulation and baseline conditions were not significant), it is still conceivable that the stimulation produced some effects below the threshold of significance and that these might weakly contribute to the changes observed during and after the 2 mA stimulation. 

      Actions in the text: We have modified the paper according to the reviewers' comments (please see our answer and actions in the text to R.2.2.).

      The different electrode placement for the two anaesthetised monkeys (i.e., Monkey R: F3/O2 montage, Monkey N: F4/O1 montage) is problematic, as it is likely to have resulted in stimulation over different brain regions. The authors state that "Because of the small size of the monkey's head, we expected that tDCS stimulation with these two symmetrical montages would result in nearly equivalent electric fields across the monkey's head and produce roughly similar effects on brain activity"; however, I am not totally convinced of this, and it really would need E-field models to confirm. It is also more likely that there would in fact be notable differences in the brain regions stimulated as the authors used HD-tDCS electrodes, which are generally more focal.

      We thank the Reviewer for the remark, which is very similar to the second comment from Reviewer 2. Please see our answer to the first comment of Reviewer 2 

      Actions in the text: We have modified the paper according to the reviewers' comments (please see the actions taken in response to R.2.1.).

      Given the very small sample size, I think it is also important to consider the possibility that some results might also be impacted by individual differences in response to stimulation. For instance, in the discussion (page 9, paragraph 2) the authors contrast findings observed in awake animals versus anaesthetised animals. However, different monkeys were examined for these two conditions, and there were only two monkeys in each group (monkeys J and Y for awake experiments [both male], and monkeys R and N [male and female] for the anaesthesia condition). From the human literature, it is well known that there is a considerable amount of inter-individual variability in response to stimulation (e.g., Lopez-Alonso et al., 2014, Brain Stimulation; Chew et al., 2015, Brain Stimulation), therefore I wonder if some of these differences could also possibly result from differences in responsiveness to stimulation between the different monkeys? At the end of the paragraph, the authors also state "Our findings also support the use of tDCS to promote rapid recovery from general anesthesia in humans...and suggest that a single anodal prefrontal stimulation at the end of the anesthesia protocol may be effective." However, I'm not sure if this statement is really backed-up by the results, which failed to report "any behavioural signs of awakening in the animals" (page 7)?

      We thank the Reviewer for this comment. Because working with non-human primates is expensive and labor intensive, the sample sizes in classical macaque experiments are generally small (typically 2-4 subjects per experiment). Our sample size (i.e. 2 rhesus macaques in awake experiments and 2 macaques under sedation, 11 +/- 9 scan sessions per animal, 288 and 136 runs in the awake and anesthesia state, respectively) is comparable to other previous work in non-human primates using fMRI (Milham et al. 2018; Yacoub et al. 2020; Uchimura, Kumano, and Kitazawa 2024). In addition, we would like to point out that the baseline cortical dynamics we found before stimulation, whether in the awake or sedated state, are comparable to previous studies (Barttfeld et al. 2015; Uhrig et al. 2018; Tasserie et al. 2022). This suggests our results are reproducible across datasets, despite the small sample size.

      That being said, we agree with the reviewer that inter-individual variability in response to stimulation can be considerable, as shown by a large body of literature in the field. It seems possible that the two monkeys studied in each condition responded differently to the stimulation. But even if that’s the case, our results suggest that at least in one of the two monkeys, cathodal PFC stimulation in the awake state and anodal PFC stimulation under propofol anesthesia induced striking changes in brain dynamics, which we believe is a significant contribution to the field. 

      In fact, supplementary analysis, as proposed by Reviewer 2 (cf R2.4), investigating how the different measurables we’ve used were differently affected by tDCS show that indeed monkey Y’s case is more apparent and significant than monkey J’s. Still, the effects observed in monkey J’s case are still congruent with what is observed in monkey Y’s and at the population level (though less flagrant). We also show that these inter-individual variabilities are outmatched by the inter-condition variability, (as indicated by our initially strong statistical results at the population levels), thus showing that, even though we have different responses depending on the subject, the effects observed at the population level cannot be only accounted for by the differences in subjects’ specificities.

      Lastly, the Reviewer questioned whether our results support that a single anodal prefrontal stimulation at the end of the anesthesia protocol could effectively promote rapid recovery from general anesthesia, because the stimulation did not wake the animals in our experiments. It should be emphasized that in our case, the monkeys were stimulated while they were still receiving continuous propofol perfusion. In contrast, during the recovery process from anesthesia, the delivery of the anesthetic drug is stopped. It is therefore conceivable that anodal PFC tDCS, which successfully enriched brain dynamics in sedated monkeys in our experiments, may accelerate the recovery from anesthesia when the drug is no longer administered. 

      Actions in the text: We have added a line in the Materials and Methods to compare to other studies:

      “Our sample size is comparable to previous work in NHP using fMRI (Milham et al. 2018; Yacoub et al. 2020; Uchimura, Kumano, and Kitazawa 2024).”

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      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      The work should discuss the implications of their experiments for using tDCS to arouse a patient from a coma. The anesthetized animal is effectively in a drug-induced coma. While they observed connectivity changes, these changes did not map nicely onto behavioral changes. 

      I would suggest that the authors spell out more clearly what they view as the clinical implications of their work in terms of new insights into how tDCS may be used to either understand and or treat disorders of consciousness.

      We thank the Reviewer for his thoughtful comments. We appreciate the opportunity to clarify and expand on the key findings and implications of our work, particularly regarding the new insights into how tDCS can be used to understand and treat disorders of consciousness. We therefore provide a broader perspective on the clinical implications of our experiments regarding coma and disorders of consciousness. We also agree with the Reviewer that the absence of behavioral changes but the presence of functional differences should be more clearly addressed. 

      Actions in the text: We have added a few lines about the relevance of anesthesia as a model for disorders of consciousness in the Introduction part:

      “Anesthesia provides a unique model for studying consciousness, which, similarly to DOC, is characterized by the disruption or even  the loss of consciousness (Luppi 2024). Additionally, anesthesia mechanisms involve several subcortical nuclei that are key components of the brain's sleep and arousal circuits (Kelz and Mashour 2019).”

      In the Discussion section, we have modified and expanded a paragraph about the effects of tDCS in DOC patients and how this technique could be further used to study consciousness: From another clinical perspective, our results demonstrating that 2 mA anodal PFC tDCS decreased the structure-function correlation and modified the dynamic repertoire of brain patterns during anesthesia (Figures 6 and 7) are consistent with the beneficial effects of such stimulation in DOC patients (Thibaut et al., 2014; Angelakis et al., 2014; Thibaut et al., 2017; Zhang et al., 2017; Martens et al., 2018; Cavinato et al., 2019; Wu et al., 2019; Hermann et al., 2020; Peng et al., 2022; Thibaut et al., 2023). Although some clinical trials investigated the effects of stimulating other brain regions, such as the motor cortex (Martens et al., 2019; Straudi et al., 2019) or the parietal cortex (Huang et al., 2017; Guo et al., 2019; Zhang et al., 2022; Wan et al., 2023; Wang et al., 2020), the DLPFC appears to be the most effective target for patients with a minimally conscious state (Liu et al., 2023). In terms of neuromodulatory effects in DOC patients, DLPFC tDCS has been reported to increase global excitability (Bai et al., 2017), increase the P300 amplitude (Zhang et al., 2017; Hermann et al., 2020), improve the fronto-parietal coherence in the theta band (Bai et al., 2018), enhance the putative EEG markers of consciousness (Bai et al., 2018; Hermann et al., 2020) and reduce the incidence of slow-waves in the resting state (Mensen et al., 2020). Our findings further support the PFC as a relevant target for modulating consciousness level and align with growing evidence showing that the PFC plays a key role in conscious access networks (Mashour, Pal, and Brown 2022; Panagiotaropoulos 2024). Nevertheless, we hypothesize that other brain targets for tDCS may be of interest for consciousness restoration, potentially using multi-channel tDCS (Havlík et al., 2023). Among transcranial electrical stimulation techniques, tDCS has the great advantage of facilitating either excitation or inhibition of brain regions, depending on the polarity of the stimulation (Sdoia et al., 2019) exploited this advantage to investigate the causal involvement of the DLPFC in conscious access to a visual stimulus during an attentional blink paradigm. While conscious access was enhanced by anodal stimulation of the left DLPFC compared to sham stimulation, opposite effects were found with cathodal stimulation compared to sham over the same locus. Finally, this literature and our findings suggest that tDCS constitutes a non-invasive, reversible, and powerful tool for studying consciousness.”

      We have added a new paragraph about patients with cognitive-motor dissociation and dissociation between consciousness and behavioral responsiveness:

      “Changes in the state of consciousness are generally closely associated with changes in behavioural responsiveness, although some rare cases of dissociation have been described. Cognitive-motor dissociation (CMD) is a condition observed in patients with severe brain injury, characterized by behavior consistent with unresponsive wakefulness syndrome or a minimally conscious state minus (Thibaut et al., 2019). However, in these patients, specific cortical brain areas activate in response to mental imagery tasks (e.g., imagining playing tennis or returning home) in a manner indistinguishable from that of healthy controls, as shown through fMRI or EEG (Thibaut et al., 2019; Owen et al., 2006; Monti et al., 2010; Bodien et al., 2024). Thus, although CMD patients are behaviorally unresponsive, they demonstrate cognitive awareness that is not outwardly apparent. It is worth noting that both the structure-function correlation and the rate of the pattern closest to the anatomy were shown to be significantly reduced in unresponsive patients showing command following during mental imagery tasks compared to those who do not show command following (Demertzi et al., 2019). These observations would be compatible with our findings in anesthetized macaques exposed to 2 mA anodal PFC tDCS. The richness of the brain dynamics would be recovered (at least partially, in our experiments), but not the behaviour. This hypothesis also fits with a recent longitudinal fMRI study on patients recovering from coma (Crone et al., 2020). The researchers examined two groups of patients: one group consisted of individuals who were unconscious at the acute scanning session but regained consciousness and improved behavioral responsiveness a few months later, and the second group consisted of patients who were already conscious from the start and only improved behavioral responsiveness at follow-up. By comparing these two groups, the authors could distinguish between the recovery of consciousness and the recovery of behavioral responsiveness. They demonstrated that only initially conscious patients exhibited rich brain dynamics at baseline. In contrast, patients who were unconscious in the acute phase and later regained consciousness had poor baseline dynamics, which became more complex at follow-up. Complete recovery of both consciousness and responsiveness under general anesthesia is possible through electrical stimulation of the central thalamus (Redinbaugh et al., 2020; Tasserie et al., 2022).”

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      Method 

      (1) The authors mentioned that they used HD-tDCS in their experiments; however, they used 1 x 1 tDCS, which is not HD-tDCS but rather single-channel tDCS.

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for pointing out this ambiguous wording. We understand that "HD-tDCS", which we used in our paper to refer to high-density 1x1 tDCS (because we used small carbon electrodes instead of the large sponge electrodes employed in conventional tDCS), may cause some confusion with high-definition tDCS, which uses compact ring electrodes and most commonly refers to a 4x1 montage (1 active central electrode over the target area and 4 return electrodes placed around the central electrode).

      Therefore, to avoid any confusion, we will use the term "tDCS" rather than “HD-tDCS” to qualify the technique used in this paper and suppress mentions of high-density or high-definition tDCS.

      Actions in the text: We have replaced the abbreviation “HD-tDCS” with “tDCS” throughout the paper. We have also suppressed the sentence about high-definition tDCS in the Introduction (“While conventional tDCS relies on the use of relatively large rectangular pad electrodes, high-density tDCS (HD-tDCS) utilizes more compact ring electrodes, allowing for increased focality, stronger electric fields, and presumably, greater neurophysiological changes (Datta et al. 2009; Dmochowski et al. 2011)”) and the two related citations in the References section.

      (2) Please provide the characteristics of electrodes, including their size, shape, and thickness.

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for this recommendation. We now provide the complete characteristics of the tDCS electrodes used in the paper.

      Actions in the text: We have added a sentence describing the characteristics of the tDCS electrodes in the Materials and Methods section:

      “We used a 1x1 electrode montage with two carbon rubber electrodes (dimensions: 1.4 cm x 1.85 cm, 0.93  cm thick) inserted into Soterix HD-tES MRI electrode holders (base diameter: 25 mm; height: 10.5 mm), which are in contact with the scalp. These electrodes (2.59 cm2) are smaller than conventional tDCS sponge electrodes (typically 25 to 35 cm<sup>2</sup>).”

      (3) Could the authors clarify why they chose to stimulate the right DLPFC? Is there a specific rationale for this choice? Additionally, could the authors explain how they ensured that the stimulation targeted the DLPFC, given that the monkey cap might differ from human configurations? In many NHP studies, structural MRI is used to accurately determine electrode placement. Considering that a single channel F4 - O2 montage was used, even a small displacement of the frontal electrode laterally could result in the electric field not adequately covering the DLPFC. Could the authors provide structural MRI images and details of electrode positioning to help readers better understand targeting accuracy?

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for the thoughtful comments and recommendations. We appreciate the opportunity to further clarify our rationale for stimulating the right DLPFC and also the suggestion to provide structural MRI images and details of electrode positioning, which we think will improve the quality of the paper by showing targeting accuracy.

      First, we would like to clarify that our initial decision to stimulate the right PFC in most animals was driven by experimental constraints. Indeed, we had limited access to the left PFC in three of the four macaques, either due to the presence of cement (spreading asymmetrically from the centre of the head) used to fix the head post in awake animals or due to a scar in one of the two animals studied under anesthesia. 

      Second, we agree with the Reviewing Editor on the importance of showing details of electrode positioning and evidence of targeting accuracy across MRI sessions. Therefore, we now provide structural images showing the positions of anodal and cathodal electrodes in almost all acquired sessions: 10 sessions (out of 10) under anesthesia and 30 sessions in the awake state (out of 34 sessions, because we could not acquire structural images in four sessions). These images show that, in anesthesia experiments, the anodal electrode was positioned over the dorsal prefrontal cortex and the cathodal electrode was placed over the contralateral occipital cortex (at the level of the parieto–occipital junction) in both monkeys. In the awake state, the montage still targeted the prefrontal cortex and the occipital cortex, but with a slightly different placement. One of the electrodes was placed over the prefrontal cortex, closer to the premotor cortex than in anesthesia experiments, while the other one was placed over the occipital cortex (V1), slightly more posterior than in anesthesia experiments. These images therefore show that the placement was relatively accurate across sessions and reproducible between monkeys in each of the two arousal conditions.

      Actions in the text: We have added a supplementary file showing electrode positioning in 40 of the 44 acquired MRI sessions (Supplementary File 1). We have also added a new supplement figure (Figure 1 - figure supplement 1) showing electrode positioning in representative MRI sessions of the awake and anesthetized experiments in the main manuscript. 

      We added a few sentences referring to these figures in the Result section: 

      “Representative structural images showing electrode placements on the head of the two awake monkeys are shown in Figure 1 - figure supplement 1A). Supplementary File 1 displays the complete set of structural images, showing that the two electrodes were accurately placed over the prefrontal cortex and the occipital cortex in a reproducible manner across awake sessions.”

      Figure 1 - figure supplement 1. Structural images displaying electrode placements on the head of monkeys. A) Awake experiments. Representative sagittal, coronal and transverse MRI sections, and the corresponding skin reconstruction images showing the position of the prefrontal and the occipital electrodes on the head of monkeys J. and Y. B) Anesthesia experiments. Representative sagittal, coronal and transverse MRI sections, and the corresponding skin reconstruction images showing the position of the prefrontal and occipital electrodes over the occipital cortex on the head of monkeys R. and N.

      Supplementary File 1 (see attached file). Structural images showing the position of the tDCS electrodes on the monkey's head across sessions. Sagittal, coronal and transverse MRI sections, and corresponding skin reconstruction images showing the position of the prefrontal and occipital electrodes on the monkey's head for each MRI session (except for 4 sessions in which no anatomical scan was acquired). The two electrodes were accurately placed over the prefrontal cortex and the occipital cortex in a reproducible manner across sessions and between the two monkeys studied in each arousal state. In anesthesia experiments, the anodal electrode was placed over the dorsal prefrontal cortex, while the cathodal electrode was positioned over the parieto-occipital junction. In awake experiments, the prefrontal electrode was positioned over the dorsal prefrontal cortex/pre-motor cortex, while the occipital electrode was placed over the visual area 1. The position of the two electrodes differed slightly between the anesthetized and awake experiments due to different body positions (the prone position of the sedated monkeys prevented a more posterior position of the occipital electrode) and also due to the presence of a headpost on the head of the two monkeys in awake experiments (the monkeys we worked with in anesthesia experiments did not have an headpost).

      (4) If the authors did not analyze the data for the passive event-related auditory response, it may be helpful to remove the related sentence to avoid potential confusion for readers.

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for the comment. Although we understand the reviewer’s point of view, we decide to keep this information in the paper to inform the reader that the macaques were passively engaged in an auditory task, as this could have some influence on the brain state. In the Materials and Methods section, we already mentioned that the analysis of the cerebral responses to the auditory paradigm is not part of the paper. We have modified the sentence to make it clearer and to avoid potential confusion for readers.

      Actions in the text: We have modified the sentence referring to the passive event-related auditory response in the Materials and Methods section:

      “All fMRI data were acquired while the monkeys were engaged in a passive event-related auditory task, the local-global paradigm, which is based on local and global deviations from temporal regularities (Bekinschtein et al. 2009; Uhrig, Dehaene, and Jarraya 2014). The present paper does not address how tDCS perturbs cerebral responses to local and global deviants, which will be the subject of future work.”

      (5) Could the authors clarify what x(t) represents in the equation? Additionally, it would be better to number the equations.

      We apologize for the confusion,  x(t) represents the evolution of the BOLD signals over time. We have numbered the equations as suggested. 

      Actions in the text: We have added explanations about the notation and numerotation of equations.

      (6) It would be much better to provide schematic illustrations to explain what the authors did for analyzing fMRI data.

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for the suggestion and now provide a new figure as suggested.  

      Actions in the text: We have added a new figure (Figure 2) graphically showing the overall analysis performed. We have added a sentence about the new Figure 2 in the Results section:  “A graphical overview of the overall analysis is shown in Figure 2.” We have renumbered Figure 2 - supplement figures accordingly.

      Figure 2. fMRI Phase Coherence analysis. A) Left) Animals were scanned before, during and after PFC tDCS stimulation in the awake state (two macaques) or under deep propofol anesthesia (two macaques). Right) Example of Z-scored filtered BOLD time series for one macaque, 111 time points with a TR of 2.4 s. B) Hilbert transform of the z-scored BOLD signal of one ROI into its time-varying amplitude A(t) (red) and the real part of the phase φ (green). In blue, we recover the original z-scored BOLD signal as A(t)cos(φ). C) Example of the phase of the Hilbert transform for each brain region at one TR. D) Symmetric matrix of cosines of the phase differences between all pairs of brain regions. E) We concatenated the vectorized form of the triangular superior of the phase difference matrices for all TRs for all participants, in all the conditions for both datasets separately obtaining using the K-means algorithm, the brain patterns whose statistics are then analyzed in the different conditions.

      Results 

      (1) In Figures 3A, 5A, and 6A showing brain connectivity, it is difficult to relate the connectivity variability among the brain regions. Instead of displaying connection lines for nodes, it would be more effective if the authors highlighted significant, strong connectivity within specific brain regions using additional methods, such as bootstrapping.

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for the comment and suggestion. The connection lines indeed represent all the synchronizations above 0.5 and all the anti-synchronization below -0.5 between all pairs of brain regions. As suggested, another element we haven’t addressed is the heterogeneity in coherences between individual brain regions. We hence propose additional supplementary figures showing, for all centroids mentioned in main figures, the variance in phase-based connectivity of the distributions of coherence of all brain regions to the rest of the brain. High value would then indicate a wide range of values of coherence, while low would indicate the different coherence a region has with the rest of the brain have similar values. Thus, a brain with uniform color would indicate high homogeneity in coherence among brain regions, while sharp changes in colors would reveal that certain regions are more subject to high variance in their coherence distributions. We expect this new figure to more clearly expose the connectivity variability among the brain regions.

      Actions in the text: We have added new figures showing, for all centroids mentioned in the main figures, the variances in phase-based connectivity of the distributions of coherence  (Figure 3 - figure supplement 3;  Figure 5 - figure supplement 2; Figure 6 - figure supplement 3; Figure 7 - figure supplement 2). One of them is shown below for the only awake analysis (Figure 3 - figure supplement 3).

      Figure 3 - figure supplement 3. Variance in inter-region phase coherences of brain patterns. Low values (red and light red) indicate that the distribution of synchronizations between a brain region and the rest of the brain has relatively low variance, while high values (blue and light blue) indicate relatively high variance. Are displayed both supra (top) and subdorsal (bottom) views for each brain pattern from the main figure, ordered similarly as previously: from left (1) to right (6) as their respective SFC increases. 

      We added a few sentences about variances in phase-based connectivity of the distributions of coherence in the Result section: 

      “Further investigation of the variances in inter-region phase coherences of brain patterns, presented in Figure 3 - figure supplement 3, revealed two main findings. First, all the patterns exhibited some degree of lateral symmetry. Second, except for the pattern with the highest SFC, most patterns displayed high heterogeneity in their coherence variances and striking inter-pattern differences. These observations reflect both the segmentation of distinct functional networks across patterns and a topological organization within the patterns themselves: some regions showed a broader spectrum of synchrony with the rest of the brain, while others exhibited narrower distributions of coherence variances. For instance, unlike other brain patterns, pattern 5 was characterized by a high coherence variance in the frontal premotor areas and low variance in the occipital cortex, whereas pattern 3 had a high variance in the frontal and orbitofrontal regions. In addition, we performed the main analyses separately for the two monkeys, explored the inter-condition variability (Supplementary File 2), and computed classical measures of functional connectivity such as average FC matrices and functional graph properties (modularity, efficiency and density) of the visited FC states (Supplementary File 3).”

      “The variance in inter-regional phase coherence across brain patterns showed notably that pattern 4, in contrast to most other patterns, was characterized by a high variance in frontal premotor areas and a low variance in the occipital cortex (Figure 5 - figure supplement 2)." 

      “The variance in inter-region phase coherences of the brain patterns is displayed in Figure 6 - figure supplement 3 and showed a striking heterogeneity between the patterns. For example, pattern 5 had a low overall variance (except in the frontal cortex), while pattern 1 was the only pattern with a high variance in the occipital cortex.”

      “The variance in inter-region phase coherences of brain patterns is displayed in Figure 6 - figure supplement 2.”

      (2) For both conditions, only 2 to 3 out of 6 patterns showed significant effects of tDCS on the occurrence rate. Is it sufficient to claim the authors' conclusion?

      We thank the Reviewer Editor for the comment. We would like to point out that similar kinds of differences in the occurrence rates of specific brain patterns (particularly in patterns at the extremities of the SFC scale) have already been reported previously. Prior works in patients suffering from disorders of consciousness, in healthy humans or in non-human primates,  have shown, by using a similar method of analysis, that not all brain states are equally disturbed by loss of consciousness, even in different modalities of unconscious transitioning (Luppi et al. 2021; Z. Huang et al. 2020; Demertzi et al. 2019; Castro et al. 2023; Golkowski et al. 2019; Barttfeld et al. 2015). Therefore, yes we believe that our conclusions are still supported by the results.

      (3) If the authors want to assert that the brain state significantly influences the effects of tDCS as discussed in the manuscript, further analysis is necessary. First, it would be great to show the difference in connectivity between two consciousness conditions during the baseline (resting state) to see how resting state connectivity or structural connectivity varies. Second, demonstrating the difference in connectivity between the awake and anesthetized conditions (e.g., awake during cathodal vs. anesthetized cathodal) to show how the connectivity among the brain regions was changed by the brain state during tDCS. This would strengthen the authors' conclusion.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. Firstly, we’d like to clarify that the structural connectivity doesn’t change from one session to another in the same animal and minimally between subjects. Secondly, we agree with the Reviewing Editor that it is informative to show the differences between the baselines and this is what we have done. The results are shown in Figures 5 and 7. Regarding the comparison of the stimulating conditions across arousal levels, the only contrast that we could make is to compare 2 mA anodal awake with 2 mA anodal anesthetized (during and post-stimulation). However, as 2 mA anodal stimulation in the awake state did not affect the connectivity much (compared to the awake baseline), the results would be almost similar to the comparison of the awake baseline with 2 mA anodal anesthetized, which is shown in Figure 7. Therefore, we believe that this would result in minimal informative gains and even more redundancy. 

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      Introduction, par 2: HD-tDCS does not necessarily produce stronger electric fields (E-fields) in the brain. The E-field is largely montage-dependent, and some configurations such as the 4x1 configuration can actually have weaker E-fields compared to conventional tDCS designs (i.e., with two sponge electrodes) as electrodes are often closer together resulting in more current being shunted by skull, scalp, and CSF. I would consider re-phrasing this section.

      We agree with the Reviewer Editor that high-definition tDCS does not necessarily produce stronger electric fields in the brain and apologize for the confusion caused by our use of HD-tDCS to refer to high-density tDCS. To avoid any confusion, we have removed the sentence mentioning that HD-tDCS produces stronger electric fields. 

      Actions in the text: We have removed the sentence about high-definition tDCS in the Introduction (“While conventional tDCS relies on the use of relatively large rectangular pad electrodes, high-density tDCS (HD-tDCS) utilizes more compact ring electrodes, allowing for increased focality, stronger electric fields, and presumably, greater neurophysiological changes (Datta et al. 2009; Dmochowski et al. 2011)”) and the two related citations in the References section.

    1. Author response:

      General Statements:

      The formation of three-dimensional tubes is a fundamental process in the development of organs and aberrant tube size leads to common diseases and congenital disorders, such as polycystic kidney disease, asthma, and lung hypoplasia. The apical (luminal) extracellular matrix (ECM) plays a critical role in epithelial tube morphogenesis during organ formation, but its composition and organization remain poorly understood. Using the Drosophila embryonic salivary gland as a model, we reveal a critical role for the PAPS Synthetase (Papss), an enzyme that synthesizes the universal sulfate donor PAPS, as a critical regulator of tube lumen expansion. Additionally, we identify two zona pellucida (ZP) domain proteins, Piopio (Pio) and Dumpy (Dpy) as key apical ECM components that provide mechanical support to maintain a uniform tube diameter.

      The apical ECM has a distinct composition compared to the basal ECM, featuring a diverse array of components. Many studies of the apical ECM have focused on the role of chitin and its modification, but the composition of the non-chitinous apical ECM and its role, and how modification of the apical ECM affects organogenesis remain elusive. The main findings of this manuscript are listed below.

      (1) Through a deficiency screen targeting ECM-modifying enzymes, we identify Papss as a key enzyme regulating luminal expansion during salivary gland morphogenesis. 

      (2) Our confocal and transmission electron microscopy analyses reveal that Papss mutants exhibit a disorganized apical membrane and condensed aECM, which are at least partially linked to disruptions in Golgi structures and intracellular trafficking. Papss is also essential for cell survival and basal ECM integrity, highlighting the role of sulfation in regulating both apical and basal ECM.

      (3) Salivary gland-specific overexpression of wild-type Papss rescues all defects in Papss mutants, but the catalytically inactive mutant form does not, suggesting that defects in sulfation are the underlying cause of the phenotypes.

      (4) We identify two ZP domain proteins, Piopio (Pio) and Dumpy (Dpy), as key components of the salivary gland aECM. In the absence of Papss, Pio is progressively lost from the aECM, while the Dpy-positive aECM structure is condensed and detaches from the apical membrane, resulting in a narrowed lumen. 

      (5) Mutations in pio or dpy, or in Notopleural (Np), which encodes a matriptase that cleaves Pio, cause the salivary gland lumen to develop alternating bulges and constrictions. Additionally, loss of pio results in loss of Dpy in the salivary gland lumen, suggesting that the Dpycontaining filamentous structures of the aECM is critical for maintaining luminal diameter, with Pio playing an essential role in organizing this structure.

      (6) We further reveal that the cleavage of the ZP domain of Pio by Np is critical for the role of Pio in organizing the aECM structure.

      Overall, our findings underscore the essential role of sulfation in organizing the aECM during tubular organ formation and highlight the mechanical support provided by ZP domain proteins in maintaining tube diameter. Mammals have two isoforms of Papss, Papss1 and Papss2. Papss1 shows ubiquitous expression, with higher levels in glandular cells and salivary duct cells, suggesting a high requirement for sulfation in these cell types. Papss2 shows a more restricted expression, such as in cartilage, and mutations in Papss2 have been associated with skeletal dysplasia in humans. Our analysis of the Drosophila Papss gene, a single ortholog of human Papss1 and Papss2, reveals its multiple roles during salivary gland development. We expect that these findings will provide valuable insights into the function of these enzymes in normal development and disease in humans. Our findings on the key role of two ZP proteins, Pio and Dpy, as major components of the salivary gland aECM also provide valuable information on the organization of the non-chitinous aECM during organ formation.

      We believe that our results will be of broad interest to many cell and developmental biologists studying organogenesis and the ECM, as well as those investigating the mechanisms underlying human diseases associated with conserved mutations.

      Point-by-point description of the revisions:

      We are delighted that all three reviewers were enthusiastic about the work. Their comments and suggestions have improved the paper. The details of the changes we have made in response to each reviewer’s comments are included in italicized text below.

      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      PAPS is required for all sulfotransferase reactions in which a sulfate group is covalently attached to amino acid residues of proteins or to side chains of proteoglycans. This sulfation is crucial for properly organizing the apical extracellular matrix (aECM) and expanding the lumen in the Drosophila salivary gland. Loss of Papss potentially leads to decreased sulfation, disorganizing the aECM, and defects in lumen formation. In addition, Papss loss destabilizes the Golgi structures.

      In Papss mutants, several changes occur in the salivary gland lumen of Drosophila. The tube lumen is very thin and shows irregular apical protrusions. There is a disorganization of the apical membrane and a compaction of the apical extracellular matrix (aECM). The Golgi structures and intracellular transport are disturbed. In addition, the ZP domain proteins Piopio (Pio) and Dumpy (Dpy) lose their normal distribution in the lumen, which leads to condensation and dissociation of the Dpy-positive aECM structure from the apical membrane. This results in a thin and irregularly dilated lumen.

      (1) The authors describe various changes in the lumen in mutants, from thin lumen to irregular expansion. I would like to know the correct lumen diameter, and length, besides the total area, by which one can recognize thin and irregular.

      We have included quantification of the length and diameter of the salivary gland lumen in the stage 16 salivary glands of control, Papss mutant, and salivary gland-specific rescue embryos (Figure 1J, K). As described, Papss mutant embryos have two distinct phenotypes, one group with a thin lumen along the entire lumen and the other group with irregular lumen shapes. Therefore, we separated the two groups for quantification of lumen diameter. Additionally, we have analyzed the degree of variability for the lumen diameter to better capture the range of phenotypes observed (Figure 1K’). These quantifications enable a more precise assessment of lumen morphology, allowing readers to distinguish between thin and irregular lumen phenotypes.

      (2) The rescue is about 30%, which is not as good as expected. Maybe the wrong isoform was taken. Is it possible to find out which isoform is expressed in the salivary glands, e.g., by RNA in situ Hyb? This could then be used to analyze a more focused rescue beyond the paper.

      Thank you for this point, but we do not agree that the rescue is about 30%. In Papss mutants, about 50% of the embryos show the thin lumen phenotype whereas the other 50% show irregular lumen shapes. In the rescue embryos with a WT Papss, few embryos showed thin lumen phenotypes. About 40% of the rescue embryos showed “normal, fully expanded” lumen shapes, and the remaining 60% showed either irregular (thin+expanded) or slightly overexpanded lumen. It is not uncommon that rescue with the Gal4/UAS system results in a partial rescue because it is often not easy to achieve the balance of the proper amount of the protein with the overexpression system. 

      To address the possibility that the wrong isoform was used, we performed in situ hybridization to examine the expression of different Papss spice forms in the salivary gland. We used probes that detect subsets of splice forms: A/B/C/F/G, D/H, and E/F/H, and found that all probes showed expression in the salivary gland, with varying intensities. The original probe, which detects all splice forms, showed the strongest signals in the salivary gland compared to the new probes which detect only a subset. However, the difference in the signal intensity may be due to the longer length of the original probe (>800 bp) compared to other probes that were made with much smaller regions (~200 bp). Digoxigenin in the DIG labeling kit for mRNA detection labels the uridine nucleotide in the transcript, and the probes with weaker signals contain fewer uridines (all: 147; ABCFG, 29; D, 36; EFH, 66). We also used the Papss-PD isoform, for a salivary gland-specific rescue experiment and obtained similar results to those with Papss-PE (Figure 1I-L, Figure 4D and E). 

      Furthermore, we performed additional experiments to validate our findings. We performed a rescue experiment with a mutant form of Papss that has mutations in the critical rescues of the catalytic domains of the enzyme, which failed to rescue any phenotypes, including the thin lumen phenotype (Figure 1H, J-L), the number and intensity of WGA puncta (Figure 3I, I’), and cell death (Figure 4D, E). These results provide strong evidence that the defects observed in Papss mutants are due to the lack of sulfation.  

      (3) Crb is a transmembrane protein on the apicolateral side of the membrane. Accordingly, the apicolateral distribution can be seen in the control and the mutant. I believe there are no apparent differences here, not even in the amount of expression. However, the view of the cells (frame) shows possible differences. To be sure, a more in-depth analysis of the images is required. Confocal Z-stack images, with 3D visualization and orthogonal projections to analyze the membranes showing Crb staining together with a suitable membrane marker (e.g. SAS or Uif). This is the only way to show whether Crb is incorrectly distributed. Statistics of several papas mutants would also be desirable and not just a single representative image. When do the observed changes in Crb distribution occur in the development of the tubes, only during stage 16? Is papss only involved in the maintenance of the apical membrane? This is particularly important when considering the SJ and AJ, because the latter show no change in the mutants.

      We appreciate your suggestion more thoroughly analyze Crb distribution. We adapted a method from a previous study (Olivares-Castiñeira and Llimargas, 2017) to quantify Crb signals in the subapical region and apical free region of salivary gland cells. Using E-Cad signals as a reference, we marked the apical cell boundaries of individual cells and calculated the intensity of Crb signals in the subapical region (along the cell membrane) and in the apical free region. We focused on the expanded region of the SG lumen in Papss mutants for quantification, as the thin lumen region was challenging to analyze. This quantification is included in Figure 2D. Statistical analysis shows that Crb signals were more dispersed in SG cells in Papss mutants compared to WT.

      (4) A change in the ECM is only inferred based on the WGA localization. This is too few to make a clear statement. WGA is only an indirect marker of the cell surface and glycosylated proteins, but it does not indicate whether the ECM is altered in its composition and expression. Other important factors are missing here. In addition, only a single observation is shown, and statistics are missing.

      We understand your concern that WGA localization alone may not be sufficient to conclude changes in the ECM. However, we observed that luminal WGA signals colocalize with Dpy-YFP in the WT SG (Figure 5-figure supplement 2C), suggesting that WGA detects the aECM structure containing Dpy. The similar behavior of WGA and Dpy-YFP signals in multiple genotypes further supports this idea. In Papss mutants with a thin lumen phenotype, both WGA and Dpy-YFP signals are condensed (Figure 5E-H), and in pio mutants, both are absent from the lumen (Figure 6B, D). We analyzed WGA signals in over 25 samples of WT and Papss mutants, observing consistent phenotypes. We have included the number of samples in the text. While we acknowledge that WGA is an indirect marker, our data suggest that it is a reliable indicator of the aECM structure containing Dpy. 

      (5) Reduced WGA staining is seen in papss mutants, but this could be due to other circumstances. To be sure, a statistic with the number of dots must be shown, as well as an intensity blot on several independent samples. The images are from single confocal sections. It could be that the dots appear in a different Z-plane. Therefore, a 3D visualization of the voxels must be shown to identify and, at best, quantify the dots in the organ.

      We have quantified cytoplasmic punctate WGA signals. Using spinning disk microscopy with super-resolution technology (Olympus SpinSR10 Sora), we obtained high-resolution images of cytoplasmic punctate signals of WGA in WT, Papss mutant, and rescue SGs with the WT and mutant forms of Papss-PD. We then generated 3D reconstructed images of these signals using Imaris software (Figure 3E-H) and quantified the number and intensity of puncta. Statistical analysis of these data confirms the reduction of the number and intensity of WGA puncta in Papss mutants (Figure 3I, I’). The number of WGA puncta was restored by expressing WT Papss but not the mutant form. By using 3D visualization and quantification, we have ensured that our results are not limited to a single confocal section and account for potential variations in Z-plane localization of the dots.

      (6) A colocalization analysis (statistics) should be shown for the overlap of WGA with ManII-GFP.

      Since WGA labels multiple structures, including the nuclear envelope and ECM structures, we focused on assessing the colocalization of the cytoplasmic WGA punctate signals and ManIIGFP signals. Standard colocalization analysis methods, such as Pearson’s correlation coefficient or Mander’s overlap coefficient, would be confounded by WGA signals in other tissues. Therefore, we used a fluorescent intensity line profile to examine the spatial relationship between WGA and ManII-GFP signals in WT and Papss mutants (Figure 3L, L’). 

      (7) I do not understand how the authors describe "statistics of secretory vesicles" as an axis in Figure 3p. The TEM images do not show labeled secretory vesicles but empty structures that could be vesicles.

      Previous studies have analyzed “filled” electron-dense secretory vesicles in TEM images of SG cells (Myat and Andrew, 2002, Cell; Fox et al., 2010, J Cell Biol; Chung and Andrew, 2014, Development). Consistent with these studies, our WT TEM images show these vesicles. In contrast, Papss mutants show a mix of filled and empty structures. For quantification, we specifically counted the filled electron-dense vesicles (now Figure 3W). A clear description of our analysis is provided in the figure legend.

      (8) The quality of the presented TEM images is too low to judge any difference between control and mutants. Therefore, the supplement must present them in better detail (higher pixel number?).

      We disagree that the quality of the presented TEM images is too low. Our TEM images have sufficient resolution to reveal details of many subcellular structures, such as mitochondrial cisternae. The pdf file of the original submission may not have been high resolution. To address this concern, we have provided several original high-quality TEM images of both WT and Papss mutants at various magnifications in Figure 2-figure supplement 2. Additionally, we have included low-magnification TEM images of WT and Papss mutants in Figure 2H and I to provide a clearer view of the overall SG lumen morphology. 

      (9) Line 266: the conclusion that apical trafficking is "significantly impaired" does not hold. This implies that Papss is essential for apical trafficking, but the analyzed ECM proteins (Pio, Dumpy) are found apically enriched in the mutants, and Dumpy is even secreted. Moreover, they analyze only one marker, Sec15, and don't provide data about the quantification of the secretion of proteins.

      We agree and have revised our statement to “defective sulfation affects Golgi structures and multiple routes of intracellular trafficking”. 

      (10) DCP-1 was used to detect apoptosis in the glands to analyze acellular regions. However, the authors compare ST16 control with ST15 mutant salivary glands, which is problematic. Further, it is not commented on how many embryos were analyzed and how often they detect the dying cells in control and mutant embryos. This part must be improved.

      Thank you for the comment. We agree and have included quantification. We used stage 16 samples from WT and Papss mutants to quantify acellular regions. Since DCP-1 signals are only present at a specific stage of apoptosis, some acellular regions do not show DCP-1 signals. Therefore, we counted acellular regions regardless of DCP-1 signals. We also quantified this in rescue embryos with WT and mutant forms of Papss, which show complete rescue with WT and no rescue with the mutant form, respectively. The graph with a statistical analysis is included (Figure 4D, E).

      (11) WGA and Dumpy show similar condensed patterns within the tube lumen. The authors show that dumpy is enriched from stage 14 onwards. How is it with WGA? Does it show the same pattern from stage 14 to 16? Papss mutants can suffer from a developmental delay in organizing the ECM or lack of internalization of luminal proteins during/after tube expansion, which is the case in the trachea.

      Dpy-YFP and WGA show overlapping signals in the SG lumen throughout morphogenesis. DpyYFP is SG enriched in the lumen from stage 11, not stage 14 (Figure 5-figure supplement 2). WGA is also detected in the lumen throughout SG morphogenesis, similar to Dpy. In the original supplemental figure, only a stage 16 SG image was shown for co-localization of Dpy-YFP and WGA signals in the SG lumen. We have now included images from stage 14 and 15 in Figure 5figure supplement 2C. 

      Given that luminal Pio signals are lost at stage 16 only and that Dpy signals appear as condensed structures in the lumen of Papss mutants, it suggests that the internalization of luminal proteins is not impaired in Papss mutants. Rather, these proteins are secreted but fail to organize properly. 

      (12) Line 366. Luminal morphology is characterized by bulging and constrictions. In the trachea, bulges indicate the deformation of the apical membrane and the detachment from the aECM. I can see constrictions and the collapsed tube lumen in Fig. 6C, but I don't find the bulges of the apical membrane in pio and Np mutants. Maybe showing it more clearly and with better quality will be helpful.

      Since the bulging phenotype appears to vary from sample to sample, we have revised the description of the phenotype to “constrictions” to more accurately reflect the consistent observations. We quantified the number of constrictions along the entire lumen in pio and Np mutants and included the graph in Figure 6F.

      (13) The authors state that Papss controls luminal secretion of Pio and Dumpy, as they observe reduced luminal staining of both in papss mutants. However, the mCh-Pio and Dumpy-YFP are secreted towards the lumen. Does papss overexpression change Pio and Dumpy secretion towards the lumen, and could this be another explanation for the multiple phenotypes? 

      Thank you for the comment. To clarify, we did not observe reduced luminal staining of Pio and Dpy in Papss mutants, nor did we state that Papss controls luminal secretion of Pio and Dpy. In Papss mutants, Pio luminal signals are absent specifically at stage 16 (Figure 5H), whereas strong luminal Pio signals are present until stage 15 (Figure 5G). For Dpy-YFP, the signals are not reduced but condensed in Papss mutants from stages 14-16 (Figure 5D, H). 

      It remains unclear whether the apparent loss of Pio signals is due to a loss of Pio protein in the lumen or due to epitope masking resulting from protein aggregation or condensation. As noted in our response to Comment 11 internalization of luminal proteins seems unaffected in Papss mutants; proteins like Pio and Dpy are secreted into the lumen but fail to properly organize. Therefore, we have not tested whether Papss overexpression alters the secretion of Pio or Dpy.

      In our original submission, we incorrectly stated that uniform luminal mCh-Pio signals were unchanged in Papss mutants. Upon closer examination, we found these signals are absent in the expanded luminal region in stage 16 SG (where Dpy-YFP is also absent), and weak mCh-Pio signals colocalize with the condensed Dpy-YFP signals (Figure 5C, D). We have revised the text accordingly. 

      Regulation of luminal ZP protein level is essential to modulate the tube expansion; therefore, Np releases Pio and Dumpy in a controlled manner during st15/16. Thus, the analysis of Pio and Dumpy in NP overexpression embryos will be critical to this manuscript to understand more about the control of luminal ZP matrix proteins.

      Thanks for the insightful suggestion. We overexpressed both the WT and mutant form of Np using UAS-Np.WT and UAS-Np.S990A lines (Drees et al., 2019) and analyzed mCh-Pio, Pio antibody, and Dpy-YFP signals. It is important to note that these overexpression experiments were done in the presence of the endogenous WT Np. 

      Overexpression of Np.WT led to increased levels of mCh-Pio, Pio, and Dpy-YFP signals in the lumen and at the apical membrane. In contrast, overexpression of Np.S990A resulted in a near complete loss of luminal mCh-Pio signals. Pio antibody signals remained strong at the apical membrane but was weaker in the luminal filamentous structures compared to WT. 

      Due to the GFP tag present in the UAS-Np.S990A line, we could not reliably analyze Dpy-YFP signals because of overlapping fluorescent signals in the same channel. However, the filamentous Pio signals in the lumen co-localized with GFP signals, suggesting that these structures might also include Dpy-YFP, although this cannot be confirmed definitively. 

      These results suggest that overexpressed Np.S990A may act in a dominant-negative manner, competing with endogenous Np and impairing proper cleavage of Pio (and mCh-Pio). Nevertheless, some level of cleavage by endogenous Np still appears to occur, as indicated by the residual luminal filamentous Pio signals. These new findings have been incorporated into the revised manuscript and are shown in Figure 6H and 6I.

      (14) Minor:

      Fig. 5 C': mChe-Pio and Dumpy-YFP are mixed up at the top of the images.

      Thanks for catching this error.  It has been corrected.

      Sup. Fig7. A shows Pio in purple but B in green. Please indicate it correctly.

      It has been corrected.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance):

      In 2023, the functions of Pio, Dumpy, and Np in the tracheal tubes of Drosophila were published. The study here shows similar results, with the difference that the salivary glands do not possess chitin, but the two ZP proteins Pio and Dumpy take over its function. It is, therefore, a significant and exciting extension of the known function of the three proteins to another tube system. In addition, the authors identify papss as a new protein and show its essential function in forming the luminal matrix in the salivary glands. Considering the high degree of conservation of these proteins in other species, the results presented are crucial for future analyses and will have further implications for tubular development, including humans.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      Summary:

      There is growing appreciation for the important of luminal (apical) ECM in tube development, but such matrices are much less well understood than basal ECMs. Here the authors provide insights into the aECM that shapes the Drosophila salivary gland (SG) tube and the importance of PAPSS-dependent sulfation in its organization and function.

      The first part of the paper focuses on careful phenotypic characterization of papss mutants, using multiple markers and TEM. This revealed reduced markers of sulfation (Alcian Blue staining) and defects in both apical and basal ECM organization, Golgi (but not ER) morphology, number and localization of other endosomal compartments, plus increased cell death. The authors focus on the fact that papss mutants have an irregular SG lumen diameter, with both narrowed regions and bulged regions. They address the pleiotropy, showing that preventing the cell death and resultant gaps in the tube did not rescue the SG luminal shape defects and discussing similarities and differences between the papss mutant phenotype and those caused by more general trafficking defects. The analysis uses a papss nonsense mutant from an EMS screen - I appreciate the rigorous approach the authors took to analyze transheterozygotes (as well as homozygotes) plus rescued animals in order to rule out effects of linked mutations.

      The 2nd part of the paper focuses on the SG aECM, showing that Dpy and Pio ZP protein fusions localize abnormally in papss mutants and that these ZP mutants (and Np protease mutants) have similar SG lumen shaping defects to the papss mutants. A key conclusion is that SG lumen defects correlate with loss of a Pio+Dpy-dependent filamentous structure in the lumen. These data suggest that ZP protein misregulation could explain this part of the papss phenotype.

      Overall, the text is very well written and clear. Figures are clearly labeled. The methods involve rigorous genetic approaches, microscopy, and quantifications/statistics and are documented appropriately. The findings are convincing, with just a few things about the fusions needing clarification.

      Minor comments

      (1) Although the Dpy and Qsm fusions are published reagents, it would still be helpful to mention whether the tags are C-terminal as suggested by the nomenclature, and whether Westerns have been performed, since (as discussed for Pio) cleavage could also affect the appearance of these fusions.

      Thanks for the comment. Dpy-YFP is a knock-in line in which YFP is inserted into the middle of the dpy locus (Lye et al., 2014; the insertion site is available on Flybase). mCh-Qsm is also a knock-in line, with mCh inserted near the N-terminus of the qsm gene using phi-mediated recombination using the qsm<sup>MI07716</sup> line (Chu and Hayashi, 2021; insertion site available on Flybase). Based on this, we have updated the nomenclature from Qsm-mCh to mCh-Qsm throughout the manuscript to accurately reflect the tag position. To our knowledge, no western blot has been performed on Dpy-YFP or mCh-Qsm lines. We have mentioned this explicitly in the Discussion.  

      (2) The Dpy-YFP reagent is a non-functional fusion and therefore may not be a wholly reliable reporter of Dpy localization. There is no antibody confirmation. As other reagents are not available to my knowledge, this issue can be addressed with text acknowledgement of possible caveats.

      Thanks for raising this important point. We have added a caveat in the Discussion noting this limitation and the need for additional tools, such as an antibody or a functional fusion protein, to confirm the localization of Dpy.

      (3) TEM was done by standard chemical fixation, which is fine for viewing intracellular organelles, but high pressure freezing probably would do a better job of preserving aECM structure, which looks fairly bad in Fig. 2G WT, without evidence of the filamentous structures seen by light microscopy. Nevertheless, the images are sufficient for showing the extreme disorganization of aECM in papss mutants.

      We agree that HPF is a better method and intent to use the HPF system in future studies. We acknowledge that chemical fixation contributes to the appearance of a gap between the apical membrane and the aECM, which we did not observe in the HPF/FS method (Chung and Andrew, 2014). Despite this, the TEM images still clearly reveal that Papss mutants show a much thinner and more electron-dense aECM compared to WT (Figure 2H, I), consistent to the condensed WGA, Dpy, and Pio signals in our confocal analyses. As the reviewer mentioned, we believe that the current TEM data are sufficient to support the conclusion of severe aECM disorganization and Golgi defects in Papss mutants.

      (4) The authors may consider citing some of the work that has been done on sulfation in nematodes, e.g. as reviewed here: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35223994/ Sulfation has been tied to multiple aspects of nematode aECM organization, though not specifically to ZP proteins.

      Thank you for the suggestion. Pioneering studies in C. elegans have highlighted the key role of sulfation in diverse developmental processes, including neuronal organization, reproductive tissue development, and phenotypic plasticity. We have now cited several works.  

      Reviewer #2 (Significance):

      This study will be of interest to researchers studying developmental morphogenesis in general and specifically tube biology or the aECM. It should be particularly of interest to those studying sulfation or ZP proteins (which are broadly present in aECMs across organisms, including humans).

      This study adds to the literature demonstrating the importance of luminal matrix in shaping tubular organs and greatly advances understanding of the luminal matrix in the Drosophila salivary gland, an important model of tubular organ development and one that has key matrix differences (such as no chitin) compared to other highly studied Drosophila tubes like the trachea.

      The detailed description of the defects resulting from papss loss suggests that there are multiple different sulfated targets, with a subset specifically relevant to aECM biology. A limitation is that specific sulfated substrates are not identified here (e.g. are these the ZP proteins themselves or other matrix glycoproteins or lipids?); therefore it's not clear how direct or indirect the effects of papss are on ZP proteins. However, this is clearly a direction for future work and does not detract from the excellent beginning made here.

      My expertise: I am a developmental geneticist with interests in apical ECM

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      In this work Woodward et al focus on the apical extracellular matrix (aECM) in the tubular salivary gland (SG) of Drosophila. They provide new insights into the composition of this aECM, formed by ZP proteins, in particular Pio and Dumpy. They also describe the functional requirements of PAPSS, a critical enzyme involved in sulfation, in regulating the expansion of the lumen of the SG. A detailed cellular analysis of Papss mutants indicate defects in the apical membrane, the aECM and in Golgi organization. They also find that Papss control the proper organization of the Pio-Dpy matrix in the lumen. The work is well presented and the results are consistent.

      Main comments

      - This work provides a detailed description of the defects produced by the absence of Papss. In addition, it provides many interesting observations at the cellular and tissular level. However, this work lacks a clear connection between these observations and the role of sulfation. Thus, the mechanisms underlying the phenotypes observed are elusive. Efforts directed to strengthen this connection (ideally experimentally) would greatly increase the interest and relevance of this work.

      Thank you for this thoughtful comment. To directly test whether the phenotypes observed in Papss mutants are due to the loss of sulfation activity, we generated transgenic lines expressing catalytically inactive forms of Papss, UAS-PapssK193A, F593P, in which key residues in the APS kinase and ATP sulfurylase domains are mutated. Unlike WT UAS-Papss (both the Papss-PD or Papss-PE isoforms), the catalytically inactive UAS-Papssmut failed to rescue any of the phenotypes, including the thin lumen phenotype (Figure 1I-L), altered WGA signals (Figure I, I’) and the cell death phenotype (Figure 4D, E). These findings strongly support the conclusion that the enzymatic sulfation activity of Papss is essential for the developmental processes described in this study.  

      - A main issue that arises from this work is the role of Papss at the cellular level. The results presented convincingly indicate defects in Golgi organization in Papss mutants. Therefore, the defects observed could stem from general defects in the secretion pathway rather than from specific defects on sulfation. This could even underly general/catastrophic cellular defects and lead to cell death (as observed).

      This observation has different implications. Is this effect observed in SGs also observed in other cells in the embryo? If Papss has a general role in Golgi organization this would be expected, as Papss encodes the only PAPs synthatase in Drosophila.

      Can the authors test any other mutant that specifically affect Golgi organization and investigate whether this produces a similar phenotype to that of Papss?

      Thank you for the comment. To address whether the defects observed in Papss mutants stem from general disruption of the secretory pathway due to Golgi disorganization, we examined mutants of two key Golgi components: Grasp65 and GM130. 

      In Grasp65 mutants, we observed significant defects in SG lumen morpholgy, including highly irregular SG lumen shape and multiple constrictions (100%; n=10/10). However, the lumen was not uniformly thin as in Papss mutants. In contrast, GM130 mutants–although this line was very sick and difficult to grow–showed relatively normal salivary glands morphology in the few embryos that survived to stage 16 (n=5/5). It is possible that only embryos with mild phenotypes progressed to this stages, limiting interpretation. These data have now been included in Figure 3-figure supplement 2. Overall, while Golgi disruption can affect SG morphology, the specific phenotypes seen in Papss mutants are not fully recapitulated by Grasp65 or GM130 loss. 

      - A model that conveys the different observations and that proposes a function for Papss in sulfation and Golgi organization (independent or interdependent?) would help to better present the proposed conclusions. In particular, the paper would be more informative if it proposed a mechanism or hypothesis of how sulfation affects SG lumen expansion. Is sulfation regulating a factor that in turn regulates Pio-Dpy matrix? Is it regulating Pio-Dpy directly? Is it regulating a

      product recognized by WGA?

      For instance, investigating Alcian blue or sulfotyrosine staining in pio, dpy mutants could help to understand whether Pio, Dpy are targets of sulfation.

      Thank you for the comment. We’re also very interested in learning whether the regulation of the Pio-Dpy matrix is a direct or indirect consequence of the loss of sulfation on these proteins. One possible scenario is that sulfation directly regulates the Pio-Dpy matrix by regulating protein stability through the formation of disulfide bonds between the conserved Cys residues responsible for ZP module polymerization. Additionally, the Dpy protein contains hundreds of EGF modules that are highly susceptible to O-glycosylation. Sulfation of the glycan groups attached to Dpy may be critical for its ability to form a filamentous structure. Without sulfation, the glycan groups on Dpy may not interact properly with the surrounding materials in the lumen, resulting in an aggregated and condensed structure. These possibilities are discussed in the Discussion.

      We have not analyzed sulfation levels in pio or dpy mutants because sulfation levels in mutants of single ZP domain proteins may not provide much information. A substantial number of proteoglycans, glycoproteins, and proteins (with up to 1% of all tyrosine residues in an organism’s proteins estimated to be sulfated) are modified by sulfation, so changes in sulfation levels in a single mutant may be subtle. Especially, the existing dpy mutant line is an insertion mutant of a transposable element; therefore, the sulfation sites would still remain in this mutant. 

      - Interpretation of Papss effects on Pio and Dpy would be desired. The results presented indicate loss of Pio antibody staining but normal presence of cherry-Pio. This is difficult to interpret. How are these results of Pio antibody and cherry-Pio correlating with the results in the trachea described recently (Drees et al. 2023)?

      In our original submission, we stated that the uniform luminal mCh-Pio signals were not changed in Papss mutants, but after re-analysis, we found that these signals were actually absent from the expanded luminal region in stage 16 SG (where Dpy-YFP is also absent), and weak mCh-Pio signals colocalize with the condensed Dpy-YFP signals (Figure 5C, D). We have revised the text accordingly. 

      After cleavages by Np and furin, the Pio protein should have three fragments. The Nterminal region contains the N-terminal half of the ZP domain, and mCh-Pio signals show this fragment. The very C-terminal region should localize to the membrane as it contains the transmembrane domain. We think the middle piece, the C-terminal ZP domain, is recognized by the Pio antibody. The mCh-Pio and Pio antibody signals in the WT trachea (Drees et al., 2023) are similar to those in the SG. mCh-Pio signals are detected in the tracheal lumen as uniform signals, at the apical membrane, and in cytoplasmic puncta. Pio antibody signals are exclusively in the tracheal lumen and show more heterogenous filamentous signals. 

      In Papss mutants, the middle fragment (the C-terminal ZP domain) seems to be most affected because the Pio antibody signals are absent from the lumen. The loss of Pio antibody signals could be due to protein degradation or epitope masking caused by aECM condensation and protein misfolding. This fragment seems to be key for interacting with Dpy, since Pio antibody signals always colocalize with Dpy-YFP. The N-terminal mCh-Pio fragment does not appear to play a significant role in forming a complex with Dpy in WT (but still aggregated together in Papss mutants), and this can be tested in future studies.

      In response to Reviewer 1’s comment, we performed an additional experiment to test the role of Np in cleaving Pio to help organize the SG aECM. In this experiment, we overexpressed the WT and mutant form of Np using UAS-Np.WT and UAS-Np.S990A lines (Drees et al., 2019) and analyzed mCh-Pio, Pio antibody, and Dpy-YFP signals. Np.WT overexpression resulted in increased levels of mCh-Pio, Pio, and Dpy-YFP signals in the lumen and at the apical membrane. However, overexpression of Np.S990A resulted in the absence of luminal mCh-Pio signals. Pio antibody signals were strong at the apical membrane but rather weak in the luminal filamentous structures. Since the UAS-Np.S990A line has the GFP tag, we could not reliably analyze Dpy-YFP signals due to overlapping Np.S990A.GFP signals in the same channel. However, the luminal filamentous Pio signals co-localized with GFP signals, and we assume that these overlapping signals could be Dpy-YFP signals. 

      These results suggest that overexpressed Np.S990A may act in a dominant-negative manner, competing with endogenous Np and impairing proper cleavage of Pio (and mCh-Pio). Nevertheless, some level of cleavage by endogenous Np still appears to occur, as indicated by the residual luminal filamentous Pio signals. These new findings have been incorporated into the revised manuscript and are shown in Figure 6H and 6I. 

      A proposed model of the Pio-Dpy aECM in WT, Papss, pio, and Np mutants has now been included in Figure 7.

      -  What does the WGA staining in the lumen reveal? This staining seems to be affected differently in pio and dpy mutants: in pio mutants it disappears from the lumen (as dpy-YFP does), but in dpy mutants it seems to be maintained. How do the authors interpret these findings? How does the WGA matrix relate to sulfated products (using Alcian blue or sulfotyrosine)?

      WGA binds to sialic acid and N-acetylglucosamine (GlcNAc) residues on glycoproteins and glycolipids. GlcNAc is a key component of the glycosaminoglycan (GAG) chains that are covalently attached to the core protein of a proteoglycan, which is abundant in the ECM. We think WGA detects GlcNAc residues in the components of the aECM, including Dpy as a core component, based on the following data. 1) WGA and Dpy colocalize in the lumen, both in WT (as thin filamentous structures) and Papss mutant background (as condensed rod-like structures), and 2) are absent in pio mutants. WGA signals are still present in a highly condensed form in dpy mutants. That’s probably because the dpy mutant allele (dpyov1) has an insertion of a transposable element (blood element) into intron 11 and this insertion may have caused the Dpy protein to misfold and condense. We added the information about the dpy allele to the Results section and discussed it in the Discussion.

      Minor points:

      - The morphological phenotypic analysis of Papss mutants (homozygous and transheterozygous) is a bit confusing. The general defects are higher in Papss homozygous than in transheterozygotes over a deficiency. Maybe quantifying the defects in the heterozygote embryos in the Papss mutant collection could help to figure out whether these defects relate to Papss mutation.

      We analyzed the morphology of heterozygous Papss mutant embryos. They were all normal. The data and quantifications have now been added to Figure 1-figure supplement 3. 

      - The conclusion that the apical membrane is affected in Papss mutants is not strongly supported by the results presented with the pattern of Crb (Fig 2). Further evidences should be provided. Maybe the TEM analysis could help to support this conclusion

      We quantified Crb levels in the sub-apical and medial regions of the cell and included this new quantification in Figure 2D. TEM images showed variation in the irregularity of the apical membrane, even in WT, and we could not draw a solid conclusion from these images.

      - It is difficult to understand why in Papss mutants the levels of WGA increase. Can the authors elaborate on this?

      We think that when Dpy (and many other aECM components) are condensed and aggregated into the thin, rod-like structure in Papss mutants, the sugar residues attached to them must also be concentrated and shown as increased WGA signals.   

      - The explanation about why Pio antibody and mcherry-Pio show different patterns is not clear. If the antibody recognizes the C-t region, shouldn't it be clearly found at the membrane rather than the lumen?

      The Pio protein is also cleaved by furin protease (Figure 5B). We think the Pio fragment recognized by the antibody should be a “C-terminal ZP domain”, which is a middle piece after furin + Np cleavages. 

      - The qsm information does not seem to provide any relevant information to the aECM, or sulfation.

      Since Qsm has been shown to bind to Dpy and remodel Dpy filaments in the muscle tendon (Chu and Hayashi, 2021), we believe that the different behavior of Qsm in the SG is still informative. As mentioned briefly in the Discussion, the cleaved Qsm fragment may localize differently, like Pio, and future work will need to test this. We have shortened the description of the Qsm localization in the manuscript and moved the details to the figure legend of Figure 5-figure supplement 3.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance):

      Previous reports already indicated a role for Papss in sulfation in SG (Zhu et al 2005). Now this work provides a more detailed description of the defects produced by the absence of Papss. In addition, it provides relevant data related to the nature and requirements of the aECM in the SG. Understanding the composition and requirements of aECM during organ formation is an important question. Therefore, this work may be relevant in the fields of cell biology and morphogenesis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Richevaux et al investigate how anterior thalamic (AD) and retrosplenial (RSC) inputs are integrated by single presubicular (PrS) layer 3 neurons. They show that these two inputs converge onto single PrS layer 3 principal cells. By performing dual wavelength photostimulation of these two inputs in horizontal slices, the authors show that in most layer 3 cells, these inputs summate supra-linearly. They extend the experiments by focusing on putative layer 4 PrS neurons and show that they do not receive direct anterior thalamic nor retrosplenial inputs; rather, they are (indirectly) driven to burst firing in response to strong activation of the PrS network.

      This is a valuable study, which investigates an important question - how visual landmark information (possibly mediated by retrosplenial inputs) converges and integrates with HD information (conveyed by the AD nucleus of the thalamus) within PrS circuitry. The data indicate that near-coincident activation of retrosplenial and thalamic inputs leads to non-linear integration in target layer 3 neurons, thereby offering a potential biological basis for landmark + HD binding.

      Main limitations relate to the anatomical annotation of 'putative' PrS L4 neurons, and to the presentation of retrosplenial / thalamic input modularity. Specifically, more evidence should be provided to convincingly demonstrate that the 'putative L4 neurons' of the PrS are not distal subicular neurons (as the authors' anatomy and physiology experiments seem to indicate). The modularity of thalamic and retrosplenial inputs could be better clarified in relation to the known PrS modularity.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      In this study, the authors identify an insect salivary protein participating viral initiate infection in plant host. They found a salivary LssaCA promoting RSV infection by interacting with OsTLP that could degrade callose in plants. Furthermore, RSV NP bond to LssaCA in salivary glands to form a complex, which then bond to OsTLP to promote degradation of callose.

      The story focus on tripartite virus-insect vector-plant interaction and is interesting. However, the study is too simple and poor-conducted. The conclusion is also overstated due to unsolid findings.

      We thank the reviewer for their constructive feedback. We have conducted additional experiments to strengthen our results and conclusions as detailed below:

      (1) The comparison between vector inoculation and microinjection involves multiple confounding factors that could affect the experimental results, including salivary components, RSV inoculation titers, and the precision of viral deposition. The differential outcomes could be attributed to these various factors rather than definitively demonstrating the necessity of salivary factors. Therefore, we have removed this comparison from the revised manuscript and instead focused on elucidating the specific mechanisms by which LssaCA facilitates viral infection.

      (2) We conducted new experiments to assess the function of LssaCA enzymatic activity in mediating RSV infection. Additional experiments revealed that OsTLP enzymatic activity is highly pH-dependent, with increased activity as pH decreases from 7.5 to 5.0 (Fig. 3H). However, the LssaCA-OsTLP interaction at pH 7.4 significantly enhanced OsTLP enzymatic activity without requiring pH changes. These results demonstrate that LssaCA-OsTLP protein interactions are crucial for mediating RSV infection. In contrast to pH-dependent mechanisms, our study demonstrated that LssaCA's biological function in mediating RSV infection is at least partially, if not completely, independent of its enzymatic activity. We have added these new resulted into the revised manuscript (Lines 220-227). We have also added a comprehensive discussion comparing the aphid CA mechanism described by Guo et al. (2023 doi.org/10.1073/pnas.2222040120) with our findings in the revised manuscript (Lines 350-371).

      (3) We have repeated majority of callose deposition experiments, providing clearer images (Figures 5-6). In addition to aniline blue staining, we quantified callose concentrations using a plant callose ELISA kit to provide more precise measurements (Figure 5A, I, 6A, C and S8A). We utilized RT-qPCR to measure callose synthase expression in both feeding and non-feeding areas, confirming that callose synthesis was induced specifically in feeding regions, leading to localized callose deposition (Figures 5D-G and S8B-E). For sieve plate visualization, we examined longitudinal sections, which revealed callose deposition in sieve plates during SBPH feeding and RSV infection (Figure S7).

      (4) We generated OsTLP mutant rice seedlings (ostlp) and use this mutant to directly demonstrate that LssaCA mediates callose degradation in planta through enhancement of OsTLP enzymatic activity (Lines 288-302 and Figure 6).

      (5) We produced LssaCA recombinant proteins in sf9 cells to ensure full enzymatic activity and constructed a comprehensive CA mutant protein, in which all seven residues constituting the enzymatic active center mutated (LssaCA<sup>H111D</sup>,LssaCA<sup>N139H</sup>,LssaCA<sup>H141D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H143D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>E153H</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H166D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>T253E</sup>) (Fig. S1B). This LssaCA mutant protein demonstrated complete loss of enzymatic activity (Fig. 1C).

      Major comments:

      (1) The key problem is that how long the LssCA functioned for in rice plant. Author declared that LssCA had no effect on viral initial infection, but on infection after viral inoculation. It is unreasonable to conclude that LssCA promoted viral infection based on the data that insect inoculated plant just for 2 days, but viral titer could be increased at 14 days post-feeding. How could saliva proteins, which reached phloem 12-14 days before, induce enough TLP to degrade callose to promote virus infection? It was unbelievable.

      We appreciate your insightful comment and acknowledge that our initial description may have been unclear. We agree that salivary proteins would not present in plant tissues for two weeks post-feeding or post-injection. Our intention was to clarify that when salivary proteins enhance RSV infection, this initial enhancement leads to sustained high viral loads. We measured viral burden at 14 days post-feeding or post-injection because this is the common measurement time point when viral titers are sufficiently high for reliable detection by qRT-PCR or western blotting. We have clarified this rationale in the revised manuscript (Lines 155-157).

      To determine the actual persistence of LssaCA in plant tissues, we conducted additional experiments where insects were allowed to feed on a defined aera of rice seedlings for two days. We then monitored LssaCA protein levels at 1 and 3 days after removing the insects. Western blotting analysis revealed that LssaCA protein levels decreased post-feeding and remained detectable at 3 days post-feeding. These results are presented in Figure 2H and described in detail in Lines 184-193.

      (2) Lines 110-116 and Fig. 1, the results of viruliferous insect feeding and microinjection with purified virus could not conclude the saliva factor necessary of RSV infection, because these two tests are not in parallel and comparable. Microinjection with salivary proteins combined with purified virus is comparable with microinjection with purified virus.

      We thank the reviewer’s insightful comment. We agree that “the results of viruliferous insect feeding and microinjection with the purified virus could not conclude the saliva factor necessary of RSV infection”. However, due to the technical difficulty in collecting sufficient quantities of salivary proteins to conduct the microinjection experiment, we have removed these results from the revised manuscript.

      (3) The second problem is how many days post viruliferous insect feeding and microinjection with purified virus did author detect viral titers? in Method section, authors declared that viral titers was detected at 7-14 days post microinjection. Please demonstrate the days exactly.

      We thank the reviewer’s insightful comment. We typically measured RSV infection levels at both 7- and 14-days post-microinjection. However, since the midrib microinjection experiments have been removed from the revised manuscript, this methodology has also been removed accordingly.

      (4) The last problem is that how author made sure that the viral titers in salivary glands of insects between two experiments was equal, causing different phenotype of rice plant. If not, different viral titers in salivary glands of insects between two experiments of course caused different phenotype of rice plant.

      We thank the reviewer’s comment. When we compared the effects of LssaCA deficiency on RSV infection of rice plants, we have compared the viral titers in the insect saliva and salivary glands. The results indicated that the virus titers in both tissues have not changed by LssaCA deficiency, suggesting that the viruses inoculated into rice phloem by insects of different treatments were comparable. Please refer to the revised manuscript Figures 2D-G and Lines 161-173.

      (5) The callose deposition in phloem can be induced by insect feeding. In Fig. 5H, why was the callose deposition increased in the whole vascular bundle, but not phloem? Could the transgenic rice plant directional express protein in the phloem? In Fig. 5, why was callose deposition detected at 24 h after insect feeding? In Fig. 6A, why was callose deposition decreased in the phloem, but not all the cells of the of TLP OE plant? Also in Fig.6A and B, expression of callose synthase genes was required.

      We thank the reviewer for these insightful comments.

      (1) Figure 5. The callose deposition increased in multiple cells within the vascular bundle, including sieve tubes, parenchymatic cells, and companion cells. While callose deposition was detected in other parts of the vascular bundle, no significant differences were observed between treatments in these regions, indicating that in response to RSV infection and other treatments, altered callose deposition mainly occurred in phloem cells. Please refer to the revised 5B, 5J, 6B, and 6D.

      (2) Transgenic plant expression. The OsTLP-overexpressing transgenic rice plants express TLP proteins in various cells under the control of CaMV 35S promoter, rather than being directionally expressed in the phloem. However, since TLP proteins are secreted, they are potentially transported and concentrated in the phloem where they can degrade callose.

      (3) Figure 5. The 24-hour time point for callose deposition detection was selected based on established protocols from previous studies. According to Hao et al. (Plant Physiology 2008), callose deposition increased during the first 3 days of planthopper infestation and decreased after 4 days. Additionally, Ellinger and Voigt (Ann Bot 2014) demonstrated that callose visualization typically begins 18-24 hours after treatment, making 24 hours an optimal detection time point.

      (4) Figure 6, Phloem-specific changes. Similar to Figure 5, while callose deposition was detected in other parts of vascular bundle, significant differences between treatments were mainly observed in phloem cells, indicating that RSV infection specifically affects callose deposition in phloem tissue.

      (5) Callose synthase gene expression. We performed RT-qPCR analysis to measure the expression levels of callose synthase genes. The results indicated that OsTLP overexpression did not significantly alter the mRNA levels of these genes, regardless of RSV infection status in SBPH.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      There is increasing evidence that viruses manipulate vectors and hosts to facilitate transmission. For arthropods, saliva plays an essential role for successful feeding on a host and consequently for arthropod-borne viruses that are transmitted during arthropod feeding on new hosts. This is so because saliva constitutes the interaction interface between arthropod and host and contains many enzymes and effectors that allow feeding on a compatible host by neutralizing host defenses. Therefore, it is not surprising that viruses change saliva composition or use saliva proteins to provoke altered vector-host interactions that are favorable for virus transmission. However, detailed mechanistic analyses are scarce. Here, Zhao and coworkers study transmission of rice stripe virus (RSV) by the planthopper Laodelphax striatellus. RSV infects plants as well as the vector, accumulates in salivary glands and is injected together with saliva into a new host during vector feeding.

      The authors present evidence that a saliva-contained enzyme - carbonic anhydrase (CA) - might facilitate virus infection of rice by interfering with callose deposition, a plant defense response. In vitro pull-down experiments, yeast two hybrid assay and binding affinity assays show convincingly interaction between CA and a plant thaumatin-like protein (TLP) that degrades callose. Similar experiments show that CA and TLP interact with the RSV nuclear capsid protein NT to form a complex. Formation of the CA-TLP complex increases TLP activity by roughly 30% and integration of NT increases TLP activity further. This correlates with lower callose content in RSV-infected plants and higher virus titer. Further, silencing CA in vectors decreases virus titers in infected plants.

      (1) Interestingly, aphid CA was found to play a role in plant infection with two non-persistent non-circulative viruses, turnip mosaic virus and cucumber mosaic virus (Guo et al. 2023 doi.org/10.1073/pnas.2222040120), but the proposed mode of action is entirely different.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment and have carefully examined the cited publication. The study by Guo et al. (2023) elucidates a distinct mechanism for aphid-mediated transmission of non-persistent, non-circulative viruses (turnip mosaic virus and cucumber mosaic virus). In their model, aphid-secreted CA-II in the plant cell apoplast leads to H<sup>+</sup> accumulation and localized acidification. This trigger enhanced vesicle trafficking as a plant defense response, inadvertently facilitating virus translocation from the endomembrane system to the apoplast.

      In contrast to these pH-dependent mechanisms, our study demonstrated that LssaCA’s biological function in mediating RSV infection is, if not completely, at least partially independent of its enzymatic activity. We performed additional experiments to reveal that OsTLP enzymatic activity is highly pH-dependent and exhibits increased enzymatic activity as pH decreases from 7.5 to 5.0 (Fig. 3H); however, the LssaCA-OsTLP interaction occurring at pH 7.4 significantly enhanced OsTLP enzymatic activity without any change in buffer pH (Fig. 3G). These results demonstrate the crucial importance of LssaCA-OsTLP protein interactions, rather than enzymatic activity alone, in mediating RSV infection.

      We have incorporated these new experimental results and added a comprehensive discussion comparing the aphid CA mechanism described by Guo et al. (2023) with our findings in the revised manuscript. Please refer to Figures 3G-H, Lines 220-227 and 350-371 for detailed information.

      (2) While this is an interesting work, there are, in my opinion, some weak points. The microinjection experiments result in much lower virus accumulation in rice than infection by vector inoculation, so their interpretation is difficult.

      We acknowledge the reviewer's concern regarding the lower virus accumulation observed in microinjection experiments compared to vector-mediated inoculation. We have removed these experiments from the revised manuscript. To address the core question raised by these experiments, we have conducted new experiments that directly demonstrate the importance of LssaCA-OsTLP protein-protein interactions in mediating RSV infection. These results demonstrate the crucial importance of LssaCA-OsTLP protein interactions, rather than enzymatic activity alone, in mediating RSV infection. Additionally, we have incorporated a comprehensive discussion examining carbonic anhydrase activity, pH homeostasis, and viral infection. Please refer to the detailed experimental results and discussion in the sections mentioned in our previous response (Figures 3G-H, Lines 220-227 and 350-371).

      (3) Also, the effect of injected recombinant CA protein might fade over time because of degradation or dilution.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. This is indeed a valid concern that could affect the interpretation of microinjection results. To address the temporal dynamics of CA protein presence in planta, we conducted time-course experiments to monitor the retention of naturally SBPH-secreted CA proteins in rice plants. Our analysis at 1- and 3- days post-feeding (dpf) revealed that CA protein levels decreased progressively following SBPH feeding, but could also been detected at 3dpf (Fig. 2H). Please refer to Figures 2H and lines 184-193 for detailed information.

      (4) The authors claim that enzymatic activity of CA is not required for its proviral activity. However, this is difficult to assess because all CA mutants used for the corresponding experiments possess residual activity.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. We constructed a comprehensive CA mutant protein in which all seven residues constituting the enzymatic active center mutated (LssaCA<sup>H111D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>N139H</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H141D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H143D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>E153H</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H166D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>T253E</sup>) (Fig. S1B). This LssaCA mutant protein demonstrated complete loss of enzymatic activity (Fig. 1C). However, since we have removed the recombinant CA protein microinjection experiments from the revised manuscript, we lack sufficient direct evidence to definitively demonstrate that CA enzymatic activity is dispensable for its proviral function. To address the core question raised by these experiments, we have conducted new experiments that provide direct evidence for the importance of LssaCA-OsTLP protein-protein interactions in mediating RSV infection. Additionally, we have incorporated a comprehensive discussion examining carbonic anhydrase activity, pH homeostasis, and viral infection. Please refer to the detailed experimental results and discussion in the sections mentioned in our previous response (Figures 3G-H, Lines 220-227 and 350-371).

      (5) It remains also unclear whether viral infection deregulates CA expression in planthoppers and TLP expression in plants. However, increased CA and TLP levels could alone contribute to reduced callose deposition.

      We have compared LssaCA mRNA levels in RSV-free and RSV-infected L.striatellus salivary glands, which indicated that RSV infection does not significantly affect LssaCA expression (Figure 1J). By using RSV-free and RSV-infected L.striatellus to feed on rice seedlings, we clarified that RSV infection does not affect TLP expression in plants (Figure 5H).

      Reviewer #1: (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Other comments:

      (1) Most data proving viral infection and LssaCA expression were derived from qPCR assays. Western blot data are strongly required to prove the change at the protein level.

      We agree that western blot data are required to prove the change at the protein level. In the revised manuscript, we have added western-blotting results (Figures 1F, 1I, 2C, 2J, and S6).

      (2) Line 145, data that LssaCA was significantly downregulated should be shown.

      Thank you and the data has been added to the revised manuscript. Please refer to Line 165 and Figure 2D.

      (3) Lines 159-161, how did authors assure that the dose of recombinant LssCA was closed to the release level of insect feeding, but not was excessive? How did author exclude the possibility of upregulated RSV titer caused by excessive recombinant LssCA?

      We appreciate this important concern regarding dosage controls. While microinjection of recombinant proteins typically yields viral infection levels significantly lower than those achieved through natural insect feeding, higher protein concentrations are often required to achieve high viral infection levels. In this experiment, we compared RSV infection levels following microinjection of BSA+RSV versus LssaCA+RSV, with the expectation that any observed upregulation in RSV titer would be specifically attributable to recombinant LssaCA rather than excessive protein dosing. However, given the low RSV infection levels observed with viral microinjection, we have removed their corresponding results from the revised manuscript.

      (4) Lines 124-125, recombinantly expressed LssaCA protein should be underlined, but not the LssaCA protein itself.

      We have clearly distinguished recombinantly expressed LssaCA from endogenous LssaCA protein throughout the manuscript, ensuring that all references to recombinant proteins are properly labeled as such.

      (5) LssaCA expression in salivary glands of viruliferous and nonviruliferous insects is required. LssaCA accumulation in rice plant exposed to viruliferous and nonviruliferous insects is also required.

      We have measured LssaCA mRNA levels in salivary glands of viruliferous and nonviruliferous insects (Figure 1J), and protein levels in rice plant exposed to viruliferous and nonviruliferous insects (Figure 1I).

      (6) Fig. 4G, the enzymatic activities of OsTLP were too low compared with that in Fig. 4E and Fig. 7E. Why did the enzymatic activities of the same protein show so obvious difference?

      We apologize for the error in Fig. 4G. The original data presented relative fold changes between OsTLP+BSA and OsTLP+LssaCA treatment, with OsTLP+BSA normalized to 1.0 and OsTLP+LssaCA values expressed as fold changes relative to this baseline. However, the Y-axis was incorrectly labeled as “β-1,3-glucanase (units mg<sup>-1</sup>)”, which suggested absolute enzymatic activity values. We have now corrected the figure (revised Figure 3G) to display the actual absolute enzymatic activity values with the appropriate Y-axis label “β-1,3-glucanase (units mg<sup>-1</sup>)”.

      (7) Fig. 7E, was the LssaCA + NP and LssaCA + GST quantified?

      Yes, all proteins were quantified, and enzymatic activity values were calculated and expressed as units per milligram of proteins (units mg<sup>-1</sup>).

      Minor comments:

      (1) The keywords: In fact, the LssaCA functioned during initial viral infection in plant, but not viral horizontal transmission.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. We have revised the manuscript title to “Rice stripe virus utilizes an Laodelphax striatellus salivary carbonic anhydrase to facilitate plant infection by direct molecular interaction” and changed the keyword from “viral horizontal transmission” to “viral infection of plant”.

      (2) Fig. 2A, how about testes? Was this data derived from female insects? Fig. 2C, is the saliva collected from nonviruliferous insects? Fig. 2E, what is the control?

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments.

      (1) Fig. 2A: The data present mean and SD calculated from three independent experiments, with 5 tissue samples per experiment. Since 3<sup>rd</sup> instar nymphs were used for feeding experiments in this study, we also used 3<sup>rd</sup> instar RSV-free nymphs to measure gene expression in guts, salivary glands and fat bodies. R-body represents the remaining body after removing these tissues. Female insects were used to measure gene expression in ovaries, and gene expression in testes was also added. We have added this necessary information to the revised manuscript (please refer to new Figure 1F and Lines 402-403).

      (2) Fig. 2C: Yes, saliva was collected from nonviruliferous insects.

      (3) Fig. 2E: The control consisted of 100 mM PBS, as described in the experimental section (Lines 643-644): “A blank control consisted of 2 mL of 100 mM PBS (pH 7.0) mixed with 1 mL of 3 mM p-NPA.” In the revised manuscript, we recombinantly expressed LssaCA and its mutant proteins in both sf9 cells and E.coli. Therefore, we have used the mutant proteins as controls to demonstrate specific enzymatic activity. Please refer to Figure 1C, Lines 115-122 and 621-635 for detailed information.

      (3) Some figure labeling appeared unprofessional. For example, "a-RSV", "loading" in Fig. 1, "W-saliva", "G-saliva" in Fig. 2, and so on, the related explanations were absent.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments. We have thoroughly reviewed all figures to ensure professional labels. Specifically, we have:

      (1) Used proper protein names to label western blots and clearly explained the antibodies used for protein detection.

      (2) Provided comprehensive explanations for all abbreviations used in figures within the corresponding figure legends.

      (3) Ensured consistent and clear labeling throughout all figures.

      Please refer to the revised Figures 1-3 for these corrections.

      (4) Lines 83-84, please cite references on callose preventing viral movement. I do not think the present references were relevant.

      We have added a more relevant reference (Yue et al., 2022, Line 82), which revealed that palmitoylated γb promotes virus cell-to-cell movement by interacting with NbREM1 to inhibit callose deposition at plasmodesmata.

      (5) The background of transgenic plants of OsTLP OE should be characterized. And the overexpression of OsTLP should be shown. Which generation of OsTLP OE did authors use?

      The background of transgenic plants of OsTLP OE and its generation used have been shown in the “Materials and methods” section (Line 782-786) and has been mentioned in the main text (Line 214). T<sup>2</sup> lines have been selected for further analysis (Line 789).

      (6) Fig. 5A, the blank, which derived from plants without exposure to insect, was absent.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments. We have added the non- fed control in the revised Figure 5A-C.

      (7) Fig. 7A, the nonviruruliferous insects were required to serve as a control.

      Immunofluorescence localization of RSV and LssaCA in uninfected L. striatellus salivary glands have been added to the revised manuscript (Figure S2).

      (8) The manuscript needs English language edit.

      The manuscript has undergone comprehensive English language editing to improve clarity, grammar, and overall readability.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) The first experiment compares vector inoculation vs microinjection of RSV in tissue. I am not sure that your claim (saliva factors are necessary for inoculation) holds, because the vector injects RSV directly into the phloem, whereas microinjection is less precise and you cannot control where exactly the virus is deposed. However, virus deposited in other tissues than the phloem might not replicate, and indeed you observe, compared to natural vector inoculation, highly reduced virus titers.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments. We agree that the comparison between vector inoculation and microinjection involves multiple confounding factors that could affect the experimental results, including salivary components, RSV inoculation titers, and the precision of viral deposition. As the reviewer correctly points out, the differential outcomes could be attributed to these various factors rather than definitively demonstrating the necessity of salivary factors. Therefore, we have removed this comparison from the revised manuscript and instead focused on elucidating the specific mechanisms by which LssaCA facilitates viral infection.

      (2) Next the authors show that a carbonic anhydrase (CA) that they previously detected in saliva is functional and secreted into rice. I assume this is done with non-infected insects, but I did not find the information. Silencing the CA reduces virus titers in inoculated plants at 14 dpi, but not in infected planthoppers. At 1 dpi, there is no difference in RSV titer in plants inoculated with CA silenced planthoppers or control hoppers. To see a direct effect of CA in virus infection, purified virus is injected together with a control protein or recombinant CA into plants. At 14 dpi, there is about double as much virus in the CA-injected plants, but compared to authentic SBPH inoculation, titers are 20,000 times lower. Actually, I believe it is not very likely that the recombinant CA is active or present so long after initial injection.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments.

      (1) Our previous study identified the CA proteins from RSV-free insects. We have added this information to the revised manuscript (Line 110).

      (2) We acknowledge the reviewer's concern regarding the lower virus accumulation observed in microinjection experiments compared to vector-mediated inoculation. We have removed these experiments from the revised manuscript and instead focused on elucidating the specific mechanisms by which LssaCA facilitates viral infection.

      (3) We didn’t intend to suggest that LssaCA proteins presented for 14 days post-injection. We measured viral titers at 14 days post-feeding or post-injection because this is the common measurement time point when viral titers are sufficiently high for reliable detection by RT-qPCR or western blotting. We have clarified this rationale in the revised manuscript (Lines 155-157). To determine the actual persistence of LssaCA in plant tissues, we monitored LssaCA protein levels at 1 and 3 dpf. Western blotting analysis revealed that LssaCA protein levels decreased post-feeding and remained detectable at 3 dpf. These results are presented in Figure 2H and described in detail in Lines 184-193.

      (3) Then the authors want to know whether CA activity is required for its proviral action and single amino acid mutants covering the putative active CA site are created. The recombinant mutant proteins have 30-70 % reduced activity, but none of them has zero activity. When microinjected together with RSV into plants, RSV replication is similar as injection with wild type CA. Since no knock-out mutant with zero activity is used, it is difficult to judge whether CA activity is unimportant for viral replication, as claim the authors.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. We constructed a comprehensive CA mutant protein in which all seven residues constituting the enzymatic active center mutated (LssaCA<sup>H111D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>N139H</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H141D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H143D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>E153H</sup>, LssaCA<sup>H166D</sup>, LssaCA<sup>T253E</sup>) (Fig. S1B). This LssaCA mutant protein demonstrated complete loss of enzymatic activity (Fig. 1C). However, since we have removed the recombinant CA proteins microinjection experiments from the revised manuscript, we lack sufficient direct evidence to definitively demonstrate that CA enzymatic activity is dispensable for its proviral function. To address the core question raised by these experiments, we have conducted new experiments that provide direct evidence for the importance of LssaCA-OsTLP protein-protein interactions in mediating RSV infection. Additionally, we have incorporated a comprehensive discussion examining carbonic anhydrase activity, pH homeostasis, and viral infection. Please refer to the detailed experimental results and discussion in the sections mentioned in our previous response (Figures 3G-H, Lines 220-227 and 350-371).

      (4) Next a yeast two hybrid assay reveals interaction with a thaumatin-like rice protein (TLP). It would be nice to know whether you detected other interacting proteins as well. The interaction is confirmed by pulldown and binding affinity assay using recombinant proteins. The kD is in favor of a rather weak interaction between the two proteins.

      We have added a list of rice proteins that potentially interact with LssaCA (Table S1) and have measured interactions with additional proteins (unpublished data). Despite the relatively weak binding affinity, the functional significance of the LssaCA-OsTLP interaction in enhancing TLP enzymatic activity is substantial.

      (5) Then the glucanase activity of TLP is measured using recombinant TLP-MBP or in vivo expressed TLP. It is not clear to me which TLP is used in Fig. 4G (plant-expressed or bacteria-expressed). If it is plant-expressed TLP, why is its basic activity 10 times lower than in Fig. 4F?

      Fig. 4G is the Fig. 3G in the revised manuscript. A E. coli-expressed TLP protein has been used. We apologize for the error in our original Fig. 4G. The original data presented relative fold changes between OsTLP+BSA and OsTLP+LssaCA treatment, with OsTLP+BSA normalized to 1.0 and OsTLP+LssaCA values expressed as fold changes relative to this baseline. However, the Y-axis was incorrectly labeled as “β-1,3-glucanase (units mg<sup>-1</sup>)”, which suggested absolute enzymatic activity values. We have now corrected the figure to display the actual absolute enzymatic activity values with the appropriate Y-axis label “β-1,3-glucanase (units mg<sup>-1</sup>)”.

      (6) There is also a discrepancy in the construction of the transgenic rice plants: did you use TLP without signal peptide or full length TLP? If you used TLP without signal peptide, you should explain why, because the wild type TLP contains a signal peptide.

      We cloned the full-length OsTLP gene including the signal peptide sequence (Line 782 in the revised manuscript).

      (7) The authors find that CA increases glucanase activity of TLP. Next the authors test callose deposition by aniline blue staining. Feeding activity of RSV-infected planthoppers induces more callose deposition than does feeding by uninfected insects. In the image (Fig. 5A) I see blue stain all over the cell walls of xylem and phloem cells. Is this what the authors expect? I would have expected rather a patchy pattern of callose deposition on cell walls. Concerning sieve plates, I cannot discern any in the image; they are easier to visualize in longitudinal sections than in transversal section as presented here.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment.

      (1) Callose deposition pattern: While callose deposition was detected in other parts of the vascular bundle, significant differences between treatments were mainly observed in phloem cells, indicating that phloem-specific callose deposition is the primary response to RSV infection and SBPH feeding (Figures 5B and 5J).

      (2) Sieve plate visualization: We have examined longitudinal sections to visualize sieve plates, which revealed callose deposition in sieve plates during SBPH feeding and RSV infection (Figure S7).

      (3) Quantitative analysis: In addition to aniline blue staining, we quantified callose concentrations using a plant callose ELISA kit to provide more precise measurements (Figure 5A, 5I and S8A).

      (4) Gene expression analysis: We utilized RT-qPCR to measure callose synthase expression in both feeding and non-feeding areas, confirming that callose synthesis was induced specifically in feeding regions, leading to localized callose deposition (Figures 5D-H).

      These experimental results collectively demonstrate that RSV infection induces enhanced callose synthesis and deposition, with this response occurring primarily in phloem cells, including sieve plates, within feeding sites and their immediate vicinity.

      (8) I do not quite understand how you quantified callose deposition (arbitrary areas?) with ImageJ. Please indicate in detail the analysis method.

      We have added more detailed information for the methods to quantify callose deposition (Lines 673-678).

      (9) More callose content is also observed by a callose ELISA assay of tissue extracts and supported by increased expression of glucanase synthase genes. Did you look whether expression of TLP is changed by feeding activity and RSV infection? Silencing CA in planthoppers increases callose deposition, which is inline with the observation that CA increases TLP activity.

      We measured OsTLP expression following feeding by RSV-free or RSV-infected SBPH and found that gene expression was not significantly affected by either insect feeding or RSV infection. These results have been added to the revised manuscript (Lines 275-277 and Figure 5H).

      (10) Next, callose is measured after feeding of RSV-infected insects on wild type or TLP-overexpressing rice. Less callose deposition (after 2 days) and more virus (after 14 days) is observed in TLP overexpressors. I am missing a control in this experiment, that is feeding of uninfected insects on wild type or TLP overexpressing rice, where I would expect intermediate callose levels.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment and fully agree with the prediction. In the revised manuscript, we have constructed ostlp mutant plants and conducted additional experiments to further clarify how callose deposition is regulated by insect feeding, RSV infection, LssaCA levels, and OsTLP expression. Specifically: 

      (1) Both SBPH feeding and RSV infection induce callose deposition, with RSV-infected insect feeding resulting in significantly higher callose levels compared to RSV-free insect feeding (Fig. 5A-C).

      (2) LssaCA enhances OsTLP enzymatic activity, thereby promoting callose degradation (Fig. 5I-K).

      (3) OsTLP-overexpressing (OE) plants exhibit lower callose levels than wild-type (WT) plants, while ostlp mutant plants show higher callose levels than WT (Fig. 6A-B).

      (4) In ostlp knockout plants, LssaCA no longer affects callose levels, indicating that OsTLP is required for LssaCA-mediated regulation of callose (Fig. 6C-D).

      These additional data address the reviewer’s concern and support the conclusion that OsTLP plays a central role in modulating callose levels in response to RSV infection and insect feeding.

      (11) Next the authors test for interaction between virions and CA. Immunofluorescence shows that RSV and CA colocalize in salivary glands; in my opinion, there is partial and not complete colocalization (Fig. 7A).

      We agree with the reviewer’s observation. CA is primarily produced in the small lobules of the principal salivary glands, while RSV infects nearly all parts of the salivary glands. In regions where RSV and CA colocalize within the principal glands, the CA signal appears sharper than that of RSV, likely due to the relatively higher abundance of CA compared to RSV in these areas. This may explain the partial, rather than complete, colocalization observed in our original Figure 7A. In the revised manuscript, please refer to Figure 1A.

      (12) Pulldown experiments with recombinant RSV NP capsid protein and CA confirm interaction, binding affinity assays indicate rather weak interaction between CA and NP. Likewise in pull-down experiments, interaction between NP, CA and TLP is shown. Finally, in vitro activity assays show that activity of preformed TLP-CA complexes can be increased by adding NP; activity of TLP alone is not shown.

      We performed two independent experiments to confirm the influence on TLP enzymatic activity by LssaCA or by the LssaCA-RSV NP complex. In the first experiment, we compared the enhancement of TLP activity by LssaCA using TLP alone as a control (Figure 3G). In the second experiment examining the LssaCA-RSV NP complex effect on TLP activity, we used the LssaCA-TLP combination as the baseline control rather than TLP alone (Figure 4B), since we had already established the LssaCA enhancement effect in the previous experiment.

      (13) For all microscopic acquisitions, you should indicate the exact acquisition conditions, especially excitation and emission filter settings, kind of camera used and objectives. Use of inadequate filters or of a black & white camera could for example be the reason why you observe a homogeneous cell wall label in the aniline blue staining assays. Counterstaining cell walls with propidium iodide might help distinguish between cell wall and callose label.

      Thank you for your insightful suggestions. We have added the detailed information to the revised manuscript (Lines 656-659 and 673-678).

      (14) You should provide information whether CA is deregulated in infected planthoppers, as this could also modify its mode of action.\

      We have compared LssaCA mRNA levels in RSV-free and RSV-infected L.striatellus salivary glands. The results indicated that RSV infection does not significantly affect LssaCA expression (Figure 1J).

      (15) You should show purity of the proteins used for affinity binding measurements.

      We have included SDS-PAGE results of purified proteins in the revised manuscript (Figure S3).

      (16) L 39: Not all arboviruses are inoculated into the phloem.

      Thank you. We have revised this description (Lines 40, 73, 95 and 97).

      (17) L 76: Watery saliva is also injected in epidermis and mesophyll cells.

      Thank you. We have revised this description (Line 73).

      (18) L 79: What do you mean by "avirulent gene"?

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have revised this description as “certain salivary effectors may be recognized by plant resistance proteins to induce effector-triggered immunity”. Please refer to Lines 76-77 for detail.

      (19) L 128: Please add delivery method.

      Thank you. We have added the delivery methods (Line 134).

      (20) L 195: Please explain "MST".

      Explained (Line 124). Thank you.

      (21) L 203: Please add the plant species overexpressing TLP.

      Added (Line 214). Thank you.

      (22) L 213: Callose deposition has also a role against phloem-feeding insects.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insight comment. We have added this information to the revised manuscript (Line 252).

      (23) L 626: What is a "mutein"?

      "mutein" is an abbreviation for mutant proteins. Since the recombinant protein microinjection experiments have been removed from the revised manuscript, the term “mutein” has also been removed. For all other instances, we now use the full term “mutant proteins”.

      (24) Fig. 1E: what is "loading"? You should rather show here and elsewhere (or add to supplement) complete protein gels and Western blot membranes and not only bands of interest.

      Thank you for your valuable suggestion. Although Figure 1E has been removed from the revised manuscript, we have carefully reviewed all figures to ensure that the term “loading” has been replaced with the specific protein names where appropriate.

      (25) Fig. 2C: Please indicate which is the blot and which is the silver stained gel and add mass markers in kDa to the silver stained gel.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have revised figure to include labeled silver-stained gels with indicated molecular weight markers (Figure 1H in the revised manuscript).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this paper, Hamid et al present 40 genomes from the Faroe Islands. They use these data (a pilot study for an anticipated larger-scale sequencing effort) to discuss the population genetic diversity and history of the sample, and the Faroes population. I think this is an overall solid paper; it is overall well-polished and well-written. It is somewhat descriptive (as might be expected for an explorative pilot study), but does make good use of the data.

      The data processing and annotation follows a state-of-the-art protocol, and at least I could not find any evidence in the results that would pinpoint towards bioinformatic issues having substantially biased some of the results, and at least preliminary results lead to the identification of some candidate disease alleles, showing that small, isolated cohorts can be an efficient way to find populations with locally common, but globally rare disease alleles.

      I also enjoyed the population structure analysis in the context of ancient samples, which gives some context to the genetic ancestry of Faroese, although it would have been nice if that could have been quantified, and it is unfortunate that the sampling scheme effectively precludes within-Faroes analyses.

      I am unfortunately quite critical of the selection analysis, both on a statistical level and, more importantly, I do not believe it measures what the authors think it does.

      Major comments:

      (1) Admixture timing/genomic scaling/localization:<br /> As the authors lay out, the Faroes were likely colonized in the last 1,000-1,500 years, i.e., 40-60 generations ago. That means most genomic processes that have happened on the Faroese should have signatures that are on the order of ~1-2cM, whereas more local patterns likely indicate genetic history predating the colonization of the islands. Yet, the paper seems to be oblivious to this (to me) fascinating and somewhat unique premise. Maybe this thought is wrong, but I think the authors miss a chance here to explain why the reader should care beyond the fact that the small populations might have high-frequency risk alleles and the Faroes are intrinsically interesting, but more importantly, it also makes me think it leads to some misinterpretations in the selection analysis

      (2) ROH:<br /> Would the sampling scheme impact ROH? How would it deal with individuals with known parental coancestry? As an example of what I mean by my previous comment, 1MB is short enough in that I would expect most/many 1MB ROH-tracts to come from pedigree loops predating the colonization of the Faroes. (i.e, I am actually quite surprised that there isn't much more long ROH, which makes me wonder if that would be impacted by the sampling scheme).

      (3) Selection scan:

      We are talking about a bottlenecked population that is recently admixed (Faroese), compared to a population (GBR) putatively more closely related to one of its sources. My guess would be that selection in such a scenario would be possibly very hard to detect, and even then, selection signals might not differentiate selection in Faroese vs. GBR, but rather selection/allele frequency differences between different source populations. I think it would be good to spell out why XP-EHH/iHS measures selection at the correct time scale, and how/if these statistics are expected to behave differently in an admixed population.

      (4) Similarly, for the discussion of LCT, I am not convinced that the haplotypes depicted here are on the right scale to reflect processes happening on the Faroes. Given the admixture/population history, it at the very least should be discussed in the context of whether the 13910 allele frequency on the Faroes is at odds with what would be expected based on the admixture sources.

      (5) I am lacking information to evaluate the procedure for turning the outliers into p-values. Both iHS and XP-EHH are ratio statistics, meaning they might be heavy-tailed if one is not careful, and the central limit theorem may not apply. It would be much easier (and probably sufficient for the points being made here) to reframe this analysis in terms of empirical outliers.

      (6) Oldest individual predating gene flow: It seems impossible to make any statements based on a single individual. Why is it implausible that this person (or their parents), e.g., moved to the Faroes within their lifetime and died there?

    1. AbstractRice (Oryza sativa) is one of the most important staple food crops worldwide, and its wild relatives serve as an important gene pool in its breeding. Compared with cultivated rice species, African wild rice (Oryza longistaminata) has several advantageous traits, such as resistance to increased biomass production, clonal propagation via rhizomes, and biotic stresses. However, previous O. longistaminata genome assemblies have been hampered by gaps and incompleteness, restricting detailed investigations into their genomes. To streamline breeding endeavors and facilitate functional genomics studies, we generated a 343-Mb telomere-to-telomere (T2T) genome assembly for this species, covering all telomeres and centromeres across the 12 chromosomes. This newly assembled genome has markedly improved over previous versions. Comparative analysis revealed a high degree of synteny with previously published genomes. A large number of structural variations were identified between the O. longistaminata and O. sativa. A total of 2,466 segmentally duplicated genes were identified and enriched in cellular amino acid metabolic processes. We detected a slight expansion of some subfamilies of resistance genes and transcription factors. This newly assembled T2T genome of O. longistaminata provides a valuable resource for the exploration and exploitation of beneficial alleles present in wild relative species of cultivated rice.

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      Reviewer 2: Chengzhi Liang

      The authors generated a 343-Mb telomere-to-telomere (T2T) genome assembly for an African wild rice (Oryza longistaminata), covering all telomeres and centromeres across the 12 chromosomes, and performed genome annotation and analyses on structural variations and NLR genes. While the manuscript has provided a valuable genome sequence, several problems should be addressed before the manuscript can be published.

      Major issues 1. The authors estimated that the genome heterozygosity is 1.27%, which is quite high, so I am wondering how large the assembled genome size is using only HiFi data, which could reflect the actual heterozygosity rate of the genome, particularly by comparing it with the final genome size of 12 chromosomes. If there was only one gap in the initial assembly of Hifiasm (a total of 13 contigs), it is unlikely that the genome has such a high heterozygosity. In Table 1, the total size of assembled genome was 331,045,917bp. If this is the summed size of 12 chromosomes, it should be used as the final genome size in the main text. Please clarify. Also, what is the base accuracy of Ultra-long CycloneSEQ data? which is useful to readers for this is a new sequencing technology. 2. For SV detection, considering that the assembled genome in the manuscript (does it have a accession ID or name?) is an African wild rice, it is rather strange that the authors did not compare it with an O. glaberrima genome, but with an O. sativa genome. Meanwhile, the name of the genomes should be mentioned since there were so many different genomes in each species, all with different SV variations between them. 3. The conclusion that "This distribution suggests that chromosomes 1, 4, 3, and 2 might have contributed to the evolution of rice in previously unrecognized ways (Table S8)" is purely speculative, and thus should be removed from the manuscript, or the authors should provide more evidence to support it. 4. The author claimed that "Compared with other Oryza species, O. longistaminata has many fewer NBS-lRR domain genes, which reflects a contraction of resistance genes in this species." Please give specific gene numbers for each species. Meanwhile, the conclusion does not look right here since it looks that O. longistaminata had more NBS-LRR genes than other species.

      Minor issues 1. What is "quartets"? 2. The author used "11 Oryza species" which included O. indica, please clarify what this species is.Bold

    1. AbstractBackground The central bearded dragon (Pogona vitticeps) is widely distributed in central eastern Australia and adapts readily to captivity. Among other attributes, it is distinctive because it undergoes sex reversal from ZZ genotypic males to phenotypic females at high incubation temperatures. Here, we report an annotated telomere to telomere phased assembly of the genome of a female ZW central bearded dragon.Results Genome assembly length is 1.75 Gbp with a scaffold N50 of 266.2 Mbp, N90 of 28.1 Mbp, 26 gaps and 42.2% GC content. Most (99.6%) of the reference assembly is scaffolded into 6 macrochromosomes and 10 microchromosomes, including the Z and W microchromosomes, corresponding to the karyotype. The genome assembly exceeds standard recommended by the Earth Biogenome Project (6CQ40): 0.003% collapsed sequence, 0.03% false expansions, 99.8% k-mer completeness, 97.9% complete single copy BUSCO genes and an average of 93.5% of transcriptome data mappable back to the genome assembly. The mitochondrial genome (16,731 bp) and the model rDNA repeat unit (length 9.5 Kbp) were assembled. Male vertebrate sex genes Amh and Amhr2 were discovered as copies in the small non-recombining region of the Z chromosome, absent from the W chromosome.This, coupled with the prior discovery of differential Z and W transcriptional isoform composition arising from pseudoautosomal sex gene Nr5a1, suggests that complex interactions between these genes, their autosomal copies and their resultant transcription factors and intermediaries, determines sex in the bearded dragon.Conclusion This high-quality assembly will serve as a resource to enable and accelerate research into the unusual reproductive attributes of this species and for comparative studies across the Agamidae and reptiles more generally.Species Taxonomy Eukaryota; Animalia; Chordata; Reptilia; Squamata; Iguania; Agamidae; Amphibolurinae; Pogona; Pogona vitticeps (Ahl, 1926) (NCBI:txid103695).

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      Reviewer 2: Yuan Li

      The authors de novo assembled a telomere to telomere phased genome assembly of the Australian central bearded dragon Pogona vitticeps, using PacBio HiFi, ONT, HiC, and Illumina sequencing platforms. The assembly achieves remarkable contiguity (scaffold N50: 266.2 Mb) and completeness (97.9% BUSCO score), surpassing Earth Biogenome Project standards. The phased assembly of sex chromosomes (Z/W) and identification of candidate sex-determining genes (Amh, Amhr2, and Nr5a1) provide valuable insights into reptilian sex determination. Overall, the study is well-executed and provides a valuable resource for comparative genomics and reproductive biology.

      Major concern: 1.The description of read depth had errors at lines 401-402, such as 60.6x. In addition, "4 x promethION", "2x150 bp" were should be revised and please check and revise all the similar description in the manuscript. 2.There are errors in the citation format of the journal references, such as the absence of punctuation "."marks between the title name and the journal name at lines 1005-1009, mixing abbreviations (e.g., "PNAS" vs. "Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences USA") (lines 988-990, 1005-1009). Please check carefully the format of all references. 3.The script "calculateGC.py and processtrftelo.py" (lines 242 and 245) are mentioned without code availability or parameter details. Provide effective links or repository access. 4.The inconsistent use of "Gb" and "Gbp" is observed; it is recommended to adopt a unified description. 5.Units were missing in the descriptions in multiple places in Table 1 and 2, such as the unit for "Total Bases" and "Assembly length"; please include them. 6.At lines 683-687, the conclusion that Amh/Amhr2 are sex-determining genes relies solely on positional evidence. Discuss the need for functional studies (e.g., CRISPR knockouts) to strengthen claims. 7.There were errors in "Vasimuddin et al. 2019" (line 238) and "Danecek et al. 2021" (line 239). Please check all the other formats of references. 8.At lines 476-481, BAC mappings are cited as validation but lack visual evidence (e.g., alignment plots in figures or supplements). Please verify the accuracy of Figure 7 at line 478, as it does not correspond with the description.

    1. AbstractBackground The agamid dragon lizard Pogona vitticeps is one of the most popular domesticated reptiles to be kept as pets worldwide. The capacity of breeding in captivity also makes it emerging as a model species for a range of scientific research, especially for the studies of sex chromosome origin and sex determination mechanisms.Results By leveraging the CycloneSEQ and DNBSEQ sequencing technologies, we conducted whole genome and long-range sequencing for a captive-bred ZZ male to construct a chromosome-scale reference genome for P. vitticeps. The new reference genome is ∼1.8 Gb in length, with a contig N50 of 202.5 Mb and all contigs anchored onto 16 chromosomes. Genome annotation assisted by long-read RNA sequencing greatly expanded the P. vitticeps lncRNA catalog. With the chromosome-scale genome, we were able to characterize the whole Z sex chromosome for the first time. We found that over 80% of the Z chromosome remains as pseudo-autosomal region (PAR) where recombination is not suppressed. The sexually differentiated region (SDR) is small and occupied mostly by transposons, yet it aggregates genes involved in male development, such as AMH, AMHR2 and BMPR1A. Finally, by tracking the evolutionary origin and developmental expression of the SDR genes, we proposed a model for the origin of P. vitticeps sex chromosomes which considered the Z-linked AMH as the master sex-determining gene.Conclusions Our study provides novel insights into the sex chromosome origin and sex determination of this model lizard. The near-complete P. vitticeps reference genome will also benefit future study of amniote evolution and may facilitate genome-assisted breeding.Competing Interest StatementThe authors have declared no competing interest.

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      Reviewer 1: Heiner Kuhl

      Guo et al. present a new reference genome for Pogona vitticeps, a widespread reptile model organism that is also common as a domestic animal worldwide. The genome assembly shows much improvement over an older assembly from 2017. There are two points that make this manuscript outstanding from common genome assembly papers:

      1. The authors find a new sex determination locus in this species.
      2. the authors use a new nanopore sequencing technology ("CycloneSEQ"), which has so far only described in a preprint (https://www.biorxiv.org/content/10.1101/2024.08.19.608720v1).

      In my opinion this deserves a publication in Gigascience, but both points must be focused more in a revised manuscript.

      Major comments:

      1) The authors have sequenced a male individual (ZZ), which means the long-read reference assembly is missing the W-chromosome. PAR and SDR regions are deduced from the Z sequence, by analysis of sequencing coverage of only a few sexed samples (2 females and 4 males). It is unclear if these individuals are from the same family, which could mean that the newly found SD-region could just be a family specific variation. To make the whole story more intriguing and statistical sound the authors should at least test 15 males and 15 females from different P. vitticeps populations for W-specific markers near the proposed AMH deletion. The authors should also show that the prior proposed SD locus (nr5a1) does not carry W-specific mutations in these 15+15 individuals. Furthermore, a phased assembly of a female (ZW) Pogona vitticeps individual, could enable the assembly of the missing W-chr and should be included, it would even improve analysis of W-specific sequences in the proposed additional individuals.

      2) A technology aware reader would like to see more information on the specifics of the CycloneSEQ data quality and handling and maybe a comparison to competing technologies. Which enzymes and buffers were used to prepare the library? In the sections on the methods, there are only superficial descriptions such as (DNA repair buffer/enzyme, DNA clean beads, wash buffer for long fragments). Is it a kit or were the enzymes and buffers purchased individually? I cannot find the procedure for preparation and sequencing of the long-read cDNA libraries. How many flowcells were needed to generate the different datasets? How do the read-length distributions look like (statistics over all reads not only selected 40Kb+)? How was the variability between those runs, especially culmulative output over time? What hardware was needed to run the basecalling and what was the runtime? How is the Q-Value distribution of the reads? Why is the consensus accuracy of the assembly low (Q36.4)? can it be improved? Typically reference quality genomes should have Q40+. Which regions of the genome display lower consensus accuracies (is it random or sequence specific)?

      Minor comments:

      L.900: PRJNAxxxxxx looks like a placeholder, insert the true number,please.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aimed to investigate the effects of optically stimulating the A13 region in healthy mice and a unilateral 6-OHDA mouse model of Parkinson's disease (PD). The primary objectives were to assess changes in locomotion, motor behaviors, and the neural connectome. For this, the authors examined the dopaminergic loss induced by 6-OHDA lesioning. They found a significant loss of tyrosine hydroxylase (TH+) neurons in the substantia nigra pars compacta (SNc) while the dopaminergic cells in the A13 region were largely preserved. Then, they optically stimulated the A13 region using a viral vector to deliver the channelrhodopsine (CamKII promoter). In both sham and PD model mice, optogenetic stimulation of the A13 region induced pro-locomotor effects, including increased locomotion, more locomotion bouts, longer durations of locomotion, and higher movement speeds. Additionally, PD model mice exhibited increased ipsilesional turning during A13 region photoactivation. Lastly, the authors used whole-brain imaging to explore changes in the A13 region's connectome after 6-OHDA lesions. These alterations involved a complex rewiring of neural circuits, impacting both afferent and efferent projections. In summary, this study unveiled the pro-locomotor effects of A13 region photoactivation in both healthy and PD model mice. The study also indicates the preservation of A13 dopaminergic cells and the anatomical changes in neural circuitry following PD-like lesions that represent the anatomical substrate for a parallel motor pathway.

      Strengths:

      These findings hold significant relevance for the field of motor control, providing valuable insights into the organization of the motor system in mammals. Additionally, they offer potential avenues for addressing motor deficits in Parkinson's disease (PD). The study fills a crucial knowledge gap, underscoring its importance, and the results bolster its clinical relevance and overall strength.

      The authors adeptly set the stage for their research by framing the central questions in the introduction, and they provide thoughtful interpretations of the data in the discussion section. The results section, while straightforward, effectively supports the study's primary conclusion-the pro-locomotor effects of A13 region stimulation, both in normal motor control and in the 6-OHDA model of brain damage.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Anatomical investigation. I have a major concern regarding the anatomical investigation of plastic changes in the A13 connectome (Figures 4 and 5). While the methodology employed to assess the connectome is technically advanced and powerful, the results lack mechanistic insight at the cell or circuit level into the pro-locomotor effects of A13 region stimulation in both physiological and pathological conditions. This concern is exacerbated by a textual description of results that doesn't pinpoint precise brain areas or subareas but instead references large brain portions like the cortical plate, making it challenging to discern the implications for A13 stimulation. Lastly, the study is generally well-written with a smooth and straightforward style, but the connectome section presents challenges in readability and comprehension. The presentation of results, particularly the correlation matrices and correlation strength, doesn't facilitate biological understanding. It would be beneficial to explore specific pathways responsible for driving the locomotor effects of A13 stimulation, including examining the strength of connections to well-known locomotor-associated regions like the Pedunculopontine nucleus, Cuneiformis nucleus, LPGi, and others in the diencephalon, midbrain, pons, and medulla. Additionally, identifying the primary inputs to A13 associated with motor function would enhance the study's clarity and relevance.

      The study raises intriguing questions about compensatory mechanisms in Parkinson's disease a new perspective with the preservation of dopaminergic cells in A13, despite the SNc degeneration, and the plastic changes to input/output matrices. To gain inspiration for a more straightforward reanalysis and discussion of the results, I recommend the authors refer to the paper titled "Specific populations of basal ganglia output neurons target distinct brain stem areas while collateralizing throughout the diencephalon from the David Kleinfeld laboratory." This could guide the authors in investigating motor pathways across different brain regions.

      (2) Description of locomotor performance. Figure 3 provides valuable data on the locomotor effects of A13 region photoactivation in both control and 6-OHDA mice. However, a more detailed analysis of the changes in locomotion during stimulation would enhance our understanding of the pro-locomotor effects, especially in the context of 6-OHDA lesions. For example, it would be informative to explore whether the probability of locomotion changes during stimulation in the control and 6-OHDA groups. Investigating reaction time, speed, total distance, and even kinematic aspects during stimulation could reveal how A13 is influencing locomotion, particularly after 6-OHDA lesions. The laboratory of Whelan has a deep knowledge of locomotion and the neural circuits driving it so these features may be instructive to infer insights on the neural circuits driving movement. On the same line, examining features like the frequency or power of stimulation related to walking patterns may help elucidate whether A13 is engaging with the Mesencephalic Locomotor Region (MLR) to drive the pro-locomotor effects. These insights would provide a more comprehensive understanding of the mechanisms underlying A13-mediated locomotor changes in both healthy and pathological conditions.

      (3) Figure 2 indeed presents valuable information regarding the effects of A13 region photoactivation. To enhance the comprehensiveness of this figure and gain a deeper understanding of the neurons driving the pro-locomotor effect of stimulation, it would be beneficial to include quantifications of various cell types:

      • cFos-Positive Cells/TH-Positive Cells: it can help determine the impact of A13 stimulation on dopaminergic neurons and the associated pro-locomotor effect in healthy condition and especially in the context of Parkinson's disease (PD) modeling.

      • cFos-Positive Cells /TH-Negative Cells: Investigating the number of TH-negative cells activated by stimulation is also important, as it may reveal non-dopaminergic neurons that play a role in locomotor responses. Identifying the location and characteristics of these TH-negative cells can provide insights into their functional significance.<br /> Incorporating these quantifications into Figure 2 would enhance the figure's informativeness and provide a more comprehensive view of the neuronal populations involved in the locomotor effects of A13 stimulation.

      (4) Referred to Figure 3. In the main text (page 5) when describing the animal with 6-OHDA the wrong panels are indicated. It is indicated in Figure 2A-E but it should be replaced with 3A-E. Please do that.

      Summary of the Study after revision

      The revised manuscript reflects significant efforts to improve clarity, organization, and data interpretation. The refinements in anatomical descriptions, behavioral analyses, and contextual framing have strengthened the manuscript considerably. However, the study still lacks direct causal evidence linking anatomical remodeling to behavioral improvements, and the small sample size in the anatomical analyses remains a concern. The authors have addressed many points raised in the initial review, but further acknowledgement of the exploratory nature of these findings would enhance the scientific rigor of the work.

      Key Improvements in the Revision

      The revised manuscript demonstrates considerable progress in clarifying data presentation, refining behavioral analyses, and improving the contextualization of anatomical findings. The restructuring of the anatomical section now provides greater precision in describing motor-related pathways, integrating terminology from the Allen Brain Atlas. The addition of new figures (Figures 4 and 5) strengthens the accessibility of these findings by illustrating key connectivity patterns more effectively. Furthermore, the correlation matrices have been adjusted to improve interpretability, ensuring that the presented data contribute meaningfully to the overall narrative of the study.

      The authors have also made significant improvements in their behavioral analyses, particularly in the organization and presentation of locomotor data. Figure 3 has been revised to distinctly separate results from 6-OHDA and sham animals, providing a clearer comparison of locomotor outcomes. Additional metrics, such as reaction time, locomotion bouts, and movement speed, further enhance the granularity of the analysis, making the results more informative.

      The discussion surrounding anatomical connectivity has also been strengthened. The revised manuscript now places greater emphasis on motor-related pathways and refines its analysis of A13 efferents and afferents. A newly introduced figure provides a concise summary of these connections, improving the contextualization of the anatomical data within the study's broader scope. Moreover, the authors have addressed the translational relevance of their findings by acknowledging the differences between optogenetic stimulation and deep brain stimulation (DBS). Their discussion now better situates the findings within existing literature on PD-related motor circuits, providing a more balanced perspective on the potential implications of A13 stimulation.

      Remaining Concerns

      Despite these substantial improvements, a number of critical concerns remain. The anatomical findings, though insightful, remain largely correlative and do not establish a causal link between structural remodeling and locomotor recovery. While the authors argue that these data will serve as a reference for future investigations, their necessity for the core conclusions of the study is not entirely clear. Additionally, while the anatomical data offer an interesting perspective on A13 connectivity, their direct relevance to the study's primary goal-demonstrating the role of A13 in locomotor recovery-remains uncertain. The authors emphasize that these data will be valuable for future research, yet their integration into the study's main narrative feels somewhat supplementary. Based on this last thought of the authors it is even more relevant another key limitation lying in the small sample size used for connectivity analyses. With only two sham and three 6-OHDA animals included, the statistical confidence in the findings is inherently limited. The absence of direct statistical comparisons between ipsilesional and contralesional projections further weakens the conclusions drawn from these anatomical studies. The authors have acknowledged that obtaining the necessary samples, acquiring the data, and analyzing them is a prolonged and resource-intensive process. While this may be a valid practical limitation, it does not justify the lack of a robust statistical approach. A more rigorous statistical framework should be employed to reinforce the findings, or alternative techniques should be considered to provide additional validation. Given these constraints, it remains unclear why the authors have not opted for standard immunohistochemistry, which could provide a complementary and more statistically accessible approach to validate the anatomical findings. Employing such an approach would not only increase the robustness of the results but also strengthen the study's impact by providing an independent confirmation of the observed structural changes.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Kim et al. investigates the potential of stimulating the dopaminergic A13 region to promote locomotor restoration in a Parkinson's mouse model. Using wild-type mice, 6-OHDA injection depletes dopaminergic neurons in the substantia nigra pars compacta, without impairing those of the A13 region and the ventral tegmentum area, as previously reported in humans. Moreover, photostimulation of presumably excitatory (CAMKIIa) neurons in the vicinity of the A13 region improves bradykinesia and akinetic symptoms after 6-OHDA injection. Whole-brain imaging with retrograde and anterograde tracers reveals that the A13 region undergoes substantial changes in the distribution of its afferents and projections after 6-OHDA injection, thus suggesting a remodeling of the A13 connectome. Whether this remodelling contributes to pro-locomotor effects of the photostimulation of the A13 region remains unknown as causality was not addressed.

      Strengths:

      Photostimulation of presumably excitatory (CAMKIIa) neurons in the vicinity of the A13 region promotes locomotion and locomotor recovery of wild-type mice 1 month after 6-OHDA injection in the medial forebrain bundle, thus identifying a new potential target for restoring motor functions in Parkinson's disease patients. The study also provides a description of the A13 region connectome pertaining to motor behaviors and how it changes after a dopaminergic lesion. Although there is no causal link between anatomical and behavioral data, it raises interesting questions for further studies.

      Weaknesses:

      Although CAMKIIa is a marker of presumably excitatory neurons and can be used as an alternative marker of dopaminergic neurons, some uncertainty remains regarding the phenotype of neurons underlying recovery of akinesia and improvement of bradykinesia.

      Figure 4 is improved, but the results from the correlation analyses remain difficult to interpret, as they may reflect changes in various impaired brain regions independently of the A13 region. While the analysis offers a snapshot of correlated changes within the connectome, it does not identify which specific cell or axonal populations are actually increasing or decreasing. Although functional MRI connectome analyses are well-established, anatomical data seem less suitable for this purpose. How can one interpret correlated changes in anatomical inputs or outputs between two distinct regions?

      Figure 5 is also improved, but there is room for further enhancement. As currently presented, it is difficult to distinguish the differences between the sham and 6-OHDA groups. The first column could compare afferents, while the second column could compare efferents. Given the small sample size, it would be more appropriate to present individual data rather than the mean and standard deviation.

      Appraisal and impact

      Although the behavioral experiments are convincing, the low number of animals in the anatomical studies is insufficient to make any relevant statistical conclusions due to extremely low statistical power.

    3. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Kim et al. investigates the potential of stimulating the dopaminergic A13 region to promote locomotor restoration in a Parkinson's mouse model. Using wild-type mice, 6-OHDA injection depletes dopaminergic neurons in the substantia nigra pars compacta, without impairing those of the A13 region and the ventral tegmentum area, as previously reported in humans. Moreover, photostimulation of presumably excitatory (CAMKIIa) neurons in the vicinity of the A13 region improves bradykinesia and akinetic symptoms after 6-OHDA injection. Whole-brain imaging with retrograde and anterograde tracers reveals that the A13 region undergoes substantial changes in the distribution of its afferents and projections after 6-OHDA injection, thus suggesting a remodeling of the A13 connectome. Whether this remodelling contributes to pro-locomotor effects of the photostimulation of the A13 region remains unknown as causality was not addressed.

      Strengths:

      Photostimulation of presumably excitatory (CAMKIIa) neurons in the vicinity of the A13 region promotes locomotion and locomotor recovery of wild-type mice 1 month after 6-OHDA injection in the medial forebrain bundle, thus identifying a new potential target for restoring motor functions in Parkinson's disease patients. The study also provides a description of the A13 region connectome pertaining to motor behaviors and how it changes after a dopaminergic lesion. Although there is no causal link between anatomical and behavioral data, it raises interesting questions for further studies.

      Thank you for the comments.

      Weaknesses:

      Although CAMKIIa is a marker of presumably excitatory neurons and can be used as an alternative marker of dopaminergic neurons, some uncertainty remains regarding the phenotype of neurons underlying recovery of akinesia and improvement of bradykinesia.

      The primary objective was to focus on a population of neurons that could contribute to functional recovery, with a long-term translational focus in mind. We have followed up on this by creating a rat-based DBS model of stimulating the A13 region (Bisht et al 2025). We agree that the next steps are to genetically dissect the circuits, and we have made a start on this with our recent publication (Sharma et al 2024).

      Figure 4 is improved, but the results from the correlation analyses remain difficult to interpret, as they may reflect changes in various impaired brain regions independently of the A13 region. While the analysis offers a snapshot of correlated changes within the connectome, it does not identify which specific cell or axonal populations are actually increasing or decreasing. Although functional MRI connectome analyses are well-established, anatomical data seem less suitable for this purpose. How can one interpret correlated changes in anatomical inputs or outputs between two distinct regions?

      We appreciate the reviewer's thoughtful comment regarding the interpretability of the correlation analyses in Figure 4. We fully acknowledge that our anatomical data cannot establish causality or identify specific cell types or axonal populations undergoing changes following unilateral nigrostriatal degeneration. However, our intent with this analysis was not to infer mechanistic pathways but rather to provide a systems-level overview of how the global organization of A13 efferents and afferents is altered following 6-OHDA lesioning. By calculating proportions of total inputs and outputs and comparing them across brain regions, we aimed to control for variability in labeling and highlight relative shifts in network organization. The correlation matrices are intended to capture coordinated changes in input/output distribution patterns, effectively reflecting how groups of regions co-vary in their input to or output from the A13 region. In our case, we used correlation analysis to identify how input and output distributions across brain regions reorganize as a network following 6-OHDA lesioning. For example, a positive correlation between inputs from Region A and Region B to the A13 suggests that across animals, when input from Region A is relatively high, input from Region B tends to be high as well, indicating that connectivity from these regions to the A13 may be co-regulated or affected similarly by the lesion. Conversely, a shift from positive to negative correlation may signal a divergence in how regions contribute to the A13 connectome after nigrostriatal degeneration (e.g., increased connectivity to Region A compared to reduced connectivity to Region B). Thus, these patterns offer new insight into the broader reorganization of the A13 connectome and may serve as systems-level signatures of altered anatomical organization, providing a foundation for future mechanistic investigations using circuit-specific tools. We have revised the text to better emphasize the correlative and descriptive nature of these analyses and to clarify that they serve as a hypothesis-generating exploration. Future studies using cell type- and/or projection-specific functional manipulations will be essential to determine the causal roles of these reorganized circuits. We believe our use of this method is justified in the context of exploring broad, lesion-induced network reorganization, and we hope this additional context helps clarify the purpose and limitations of our approach.

      Figure 5 is also improved, but there is room for further enhancement. As currently presented, it is difficult to distinguish the differences between the sham and 6-OHDA groups. The first column could compare afferents, while the second column could compare efferents. Given the small sample size, it would be more appropriate to present individual data rather than the mean and standard deviation.

      We have reorganized Figure 5 as suggested.

      Appraisal and impact

      Although the behavioral experiments are convincing, the low number of animals in the anatomical studies is insufficient to make any relevant statistical conclusions due to extremely low statistical power.

      See previous comments on this.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Points that need to be addressed:

      Figure S1 is supposed to illustrate the percentage of expression in all mice, but the number of mice does not match (n=3 and 3 in Figure S1 versus n=5 and 6 in Figure 1). Revise the legend or add the missing data.

      We have added the additional data to this graph (Figure 2 – figure supplement 1) and have separated out 6-OHDA and sham mice for clarity.

      Page 4: "There was also an increase in the number of ChR2 cells with c-fos labeling in 6-OHDA ChR2 mice compared to the 6-OHDA eYFP mice. However, there was no net increase in TH+ cells labelled with ChR2 and c-Fos suggesting a heterogeneous population of activated cells." A quantification will be necessary to advance this conclusion.

      We were able to determine that there was a trend of increased c-Fos intensity within the A13 region following photostimulation. However, the variability in the data makes it premature to comment on the TH co-localization and we have deleted this statement.

      Figure 3: The choice of red and green could be a problem for color-blind people.

      Thank you - switched to orange and cyan instead.

      Page 7, 4th paragraph: "6-OHDA mice demonstrated significantly greater descent times than sham mice (Figure 3L, p<0.01)." This is not what is shown in the Figure 3L.

      We made changes in the legend and text to clarify.

      Page 7, last line: PT abbreviation should be introduced in parentheses at the beginning of this section.

      Removed the abbreviation.

      Figure S4A: The authors should show data for the VTA or refer to the quantification of Figure S4G in the text.

      Now referenced correctly in the text.

      Figure S7 and S8 are not referenced in the results or methods.

      References added to text.

      Double-check the formatting of some references: L.-X. Li et al, 2021, L. Kim et al., 2021.

      References checked and corrected.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In this study, Bonnifet et al. profile the presence of L1 ORF1p in the mouse and human brain and report that ORF1p is expressed in the human and mouse brain specifically in neurons at steady state and that there is an age-dependent increase in expression. This is a timely report as two recent papers have extensively documented the presence of full-length L1 transcripts in the mouse and human brain (PMID: 38773348 & PMID: 37910626). Thus, the finding that L1 ORF1p is consistently expressed in the brain is important to document and will be of value to the field. 

      Strengths: 

      Several parts of this manuscript appear to be well done and include the necessary controls. In particular, the documentation of neuron-specific expression of ORF1p in the mouse brain is an interesting finding with nice documentation. This will be very useful information for the field. 

      We thank the reviewer for this positive comment. 

      Weaknesses: 

      Several parts of the manuscript appear to be more preliminary and need further experiments to validate their claims. In particular, the data suggesting expression of L1 ORF1p in the human brain and the data suggesting increased expression in the aged brain need further validation. Detailed comments: 

      (1) The expression of ORF1p in the human brain shown in Fig. 1j is puzzling. Why are there two strong bands in the WB? How can the authors be sure that this signal represents ORF1p expression and not non-specific labelling? While the authors discuss that others have found double bands when examining human ORF1p, there are also several labs that report only one band. This discrepancy in the field should at least be discussed and the uncertainties with their findings should be acknowledged. 

      Please see also our extensive response to this comment we made in round #1 of the revisions.

      As a summary, in response to the initial review, we included several lines of additional evidence in the revised manuscript:

      siRNA-mediated knockdown of ORF1p in human neurons, resulting in ≈50% signal reduction using the antibody in question (Suppl. Fig. 2C) immunoprecipitation using the human ORF1p antibody in question confirming signal specificity (Suppl. Fig. 2B) use of a second antibody in immunostainings, including a new control (Suppl. Fig. 2E) and a revised discussion acknowledging the uncertainty surrounding the lower band:

      “The double band pattern in Western blots has been observed in other studies for human ORF1p outside of the brain as well as for mouse ORF1p. […] The nature of the lower band is unknown, but might be due to truncation, specific proteolysis or degradation.”

      We have also now added more content to the paragraph starting from line 183 : "While there is some discrepancy in the field, the double band pattern in Western blots..."

      To our understanding, this combination of independent methods using two antibodies and complementary validation strategies supports the presence of ORF1p in human brain tissue.

      (2) The data showing a reduction in ORF1p expression in the aged mouse brain is an interesting observation, but the effect magnitude of effect is very limited and somewhat difficult to interpret. This finding should be supported by orthogonal methods to strengthen this conclusion. For example, by WB and by RNA-seq (to verify that the increase in protein is due to an increase in transcription). 

      This would indeed be valuable but at this point, we will not be able to perform these experiments at this point (please also see revision #1 for a more detailed answer)

      (3) The transcriptomic data using human postmortem tissue presented in Figure 4 and Figure 5 are not convincing. Quantification of transposon expression on short read sequencing has important limitations. Longer reads and complementary approaches are needed to study the expression of evolutionarily young L1s (see PMID: 38773348 & PMID: 37910626 for examples of the current state of the art). As presented, the human RNA data is inconclusive due to the short read length and small sample size. The value of including an inconclusive analysis in the manuscript is difficult to understand. With this data set, the authors cannot investigate age-related changes in L1 expression in human neurons. 

      Please see also our extensive response to this comment we made in round #1 of the revisions.

      In the revised version, we have added further statistical analyses, incorporated locus-specific mappability scores and provided an even more nuanced interpretation of our findings, as illustrated in lines 390 and 427.

      We have acknowledged the limitations of short-read sequencing in this context, while referencing established methodologies (e.g., Teissandier et al., 2019) and recent benchmarking studies (e.g., Schwarz et al., 2022) that validate the use of such data under specific precautions—many of which we have implemented.

      Given these considerations, and with the guidance of a co-author with specific expertise in TE bioinformatics, we believe our approach is justified and robust.

      (4) In line with these comments, the title should be changed to better reflect the findings in the manuscript. A title that does not mention "L1 increase with aging" would be better. 

      In line with our response to Point (3), we prefer to retain the current analyses and discussion, which we believe strike an appropriate balance between caution and added scientific value.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      Bonnifet et al. sought to characterize the expression pattern of L1 ORF1p expression across the entire mouse brain, in young and aged animals and to corroborate their characterization with Western blotting for L1 ORF1p and L1 RNA expression data from human samples. They also queried L1 ORF1p interacting partners in the mouse brain by IP-MS. 

      Strengths: 

      A major strength of the study is the use of two approaches: a deep-learning detection method to distinguish neuronal vs. non-neuronal cells and ORF1p+ cells vs. ORF1p- cells across large-scale images encompassing multiple brain regions mapped by comparison to the Allen Brain Atlas, and confocal imaging to give higher resolution on specific brain regions. These results are also corroborated by Western blotting on six mouse brain regions. Extension of their analysis to post-mortem human samples, to the extent possible, is another strength of the paper. The identification of novel ORF1p interactors in brain is also a strength in that it provides a novel dataset for future studies. 

      We thank the reviewer for these positive comments.

      Weaknesses: 

      The main weakness of the IP-MS portion of the study is that none of the interactors were individually validated or subjected to follow-up analyses. The list of interactors was compared to previously published datasets, but not to ORF1p interactors in any other mouse tissue.

      As we had stated in the first round of revision, the list of previously published datasets does include a mouse dataset with ORF1p interacting proteins in mouse spermatocytes (please see line 478-4479: “ORF1p interactors found in mouse spermatocytes were also present in our analysis including CNOT10, CNOT11, PRKRA and FXR2 among others (Suppl_Table4).”) -> De Luca, C., Gupta, A. & Bortvin, A. Retrotransposon LINE-1 bodies in the cytoplasm of piRNA-deficient mouse spermatocytes: Ribonucleoproteins overcoming the integrated stress response. PLoS Genet 19, e1010797 (2023)). We agree that a validation of protein interactors of ORF1p in the mouse brain would have been valuable. However, the significant overlap with previously published interactors highlights the validity of our data. As reviewer #2 points out in the comments on revisions, we hope that follow-up studies will address these points and we anticipate that this list of ORF1p protein interactors in the mouse brain will be of further use for the community.

      Comments on revisions: 

      The co-staining of Orf1p with Parvalbumin (PV) presented in Supplemental Figure S5 is a welcome addition exploring the cell type-specificity of Orf1p staining, and broadly corroborates the work of Bodea et al. while revealing that Orf1p also is expressed in non-PV+ cells, consistent with L1 activity across a range of neuronal subtypes. The authors also have strengthened their findings regarding the increased intensity of ORF1p staining in aged compared to young animals, and the newly presented results are indeed more convincing. The prospect of increased neuronal L1 activity with age is exciting, and the results in this paper have provided the groundwork for ongoing discoveries in this area. While it is disappointing that no Orf1p interactors were followed up, this is understandable and the data are nonetheless valuable and will likely prove useful to future studies. 

      Thank you for your time and constructive comments.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      We would recommend that the human RNA-seq analysis is removed from the manuscript. The human RNA data is inconclusive due to the short read length and small sample size. The value of including an inconclusive analysis in the manuscript is difficult to understand. With this data set, the authors cannot investigate age-related changes in L1 expression in human neurons. 

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      Thank you for addressing my suggestions. I have no further recommendations at this time.

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      Reply to the reviewers

      We would like to thank the reviewers for their overall positive evaluations of our manuscript and for their invaluable suggestions that will allow us to reinforce our conclusions. We acknowledge that there is some work to be done and are ready to address most of the reviewers' comments as detailed in our replies below.

      Reviewer #1

      1. The findings that mmDicer is proviral in bat cells relies exclusively on the observation that the depletion of Dicer in M. myotis cells leads to a reduced accumulation of SFV and SINV at the RNA and protein levels (figure 2). Heterologous expression of mmDicer in HEK 293T NoDice doesn't lead to an increase permissivity to viral infections (figure 1) and the accumulation of Dicer foci is only observed in M. myotis cells but not when mmDicer is expressed in HEK 293 NoDice cells (figure 6). Given that the key finding of this manuscript relies on these knockdown experiments, the authors should ensure that the impact on viral infections is due to the specific silencing of mmDicer and not caused by off-target effects of their siRNA-mediated approach. The authors designed a siRNA pool to efficiently knock-down mmDicer. They should validate their findings by using individual Dicer siRNA and verify whether the decrease SFV/SINV accumulation is observed with at least two individual siRNAs targeting Dicer. It would also strengthen their findings if they could show a complementation experiment in which a mmDicer (designed to not be affected by the siRNA-mediated silencing) is introduced exogenously in Dicer-depleted cells and show that it rescues the observed decrease in viral accumulation to demonstrate that the proviral role is strictly dependent on mmDicer. Alternatively, the authors could consider a CRISPR/Cas9 genome editing approach to knockout Dicer in bat cells to test whether this proviral effect is confirmed.

      Reply: We agree with this reviewer that it is important to provide evidence for the specificity of the knock-down and to rule out any off-target effect of the siRNAs. This is the reason for using the siTool technology, which relies on the use of a pool of 30 siRNAs that are transfected at a final concentration of 3 nM. This means that each individual siRNA in the pool is at a concentration of 0.1 nM, so the possibility of off-target effect is largely avoided and the efficiency of silencing is boosted by the cooperative activity of many siRNAs (see https://www.sitoolsbiotech.com/documents/sipools/siPOOLBrochure2019_Web.pdf for more details). This being said, we agree that it would be better to confirm that the observed effect can be recapitulated using a single siRNA and that a complementation experiment would definitely strengthen our findings. For this reason, we will test two individual siRNAs targeting the 3' UTR of mmDicer, which will allow us to complement the knock-down by transfecting a cDNA construct. Regarding the CRISPR/Cas9 genome editing approach, we will give it a try, but Dicer is notoriously difficult to knock-out, so we cannot be sure that this will be successful.

      Figure 2: the authors knock-downed Dicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and carried out infections with SINV-GFP and SFV. The authors conclude that Dicer is proviral as its depletion causes a decrease in SINV-GFP and SFV accumulation. While this conclusion is supported by the decrease levels of viral RNA and protein levels upon Dicer depletion (figure 2D, 2E, 2G), the effect on the viral titers is non-significant for both viruses (Figure 2C and 2F) based on the statistical analysis. This reviewer appreciates that the titers are lower upon Dicer knockdown, which support the authors' findings at the viral RNA and protein levels. However, as these results are central to the core message of the manuscript, the authors should provide evidence that this proviral effect observed is statistically significant on viral titers by perhaps providing additional repeats and/or comment on this observation.

      Reply: Indeed, we agree that even if the effect of Dicer knockdown results in a lowering of the viral titer, it would be better to have a statistically significant effect. We will repeat the experiment to increase the number of replicates and the power of the statistical test.

      a) *In figure 4 and 5, the authors nicely show that mmDicer accumulate to cytoplasmic foci in M. myotis cells upon infection with SFV and SINV and these foci co-localise with double-stranded RNA. The authors used a commercial polyclonal antibody against Dicer (A301-937A, Bethyl according to the Material and Methods section) which is specific to human Dicer to carry out their immunostaining in bat cells. The authors should provide evidence that this antibody indeed recognises/crossreacts with mmDicer as well and that the staining shown is indeed specific to mmDicer localisation especially because the heterologous expression of HA-tagged version of mmDicer in HEK 293T NoDice cells did not show this accumulation of cytoplasmic foci. The authors should verify the specificity of their mmDicer immunostaining by performing the same labelling in bat cells in which Dicer is knock-downed (or knock out) by individual and validated siRNA against mmDicer. The decrease signal of bat Dicer staining using the anti-human Dicer antibody would indicate specificity. *

      Reply: the reviewer is correct in its assertion and it is important to provide evidence that the protein that is detected by the anti-human Dicer antibody in bat cells is indeed Dicer. We will perform the suggested experiment and do an immunostaining using the Dicer antibody in bat cells upon Dicer knockdown.

      b) Another complementary approach would be to test their Dicer staining between HEK NoDice cells (no Dicer present) versus NoDice complemented with either mmDicer or human Dicer constructs, which would then indicate how much the anti-human Dicer antibody recognises bat Dicer.

      Reply: this complementary approach should yield even cleaner result than the previous one as there will be no expression of Dicer at all in the HEK NoDice cells. Therefore, we should be able to measure the increase of signal in the IF upon expression of either human or bat Dicer. We will perform this experiment together with the other one suggested above. In addition, since the constructs are tagged, we might be able to do a double-staining and verify the colocalization of the two signals.

      c) In addition, the authors should overexpress HA-tagged mmDicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and test whether HA-mmDicer accumulate into foci upon infection using an anti-HA immunostaining. This would confirm that these accumulation into foci indeed is specific to mmDicer but also would reinforce the authors' findings that host factors within bat cells are important for this formation into foci since mmDicer expression in HEK 293T No Dice cells didn't show this phenotype upon infection (figure 6). OPTIONAL: it would be interesting to overexpress HA-tagged human Dicer into M. myotis nasal epithelial cells as well to then test using anti-HA staining whether human Dicer in presence of host factors from the bat can accumulate into cytoplasmic foci or not upon viral infection.

      Reply: we could perform the suggested experiment, but we might face the issue that transfected cells might mount an immune response, which makes them resistant to the infection. We have observed indeed that we needed to use a higher MOI to infect cells after they have been transfected. Since we will have controls in place, this might not be too much of a problem, but we will have to keep it in mind. Alternatively, we will perform a lentiviral transduction of the cells.

      This reviewer appreciates that this might be judged as beyond the scope of this study since it is focused on the role of Dicer in M. myotis. However, the observation that mmDicer accumulates into foci containing as well viral dsRNA is very interesting and it would significantly improve the manuscript if the authors would provide further indications that this phenotype is related to the lack of antiviral activity of mmDicer compared to what has been previously shown in other bat species (P.alecto and T. brasiliensis). In other words, is this accumulation of mmDicer into foci responsible for its different impact on virus infection? It would therefore be insightful to compare Dicer localisation upon infection in M. myotis versus P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis bat cells in which Dicer was shown to be antiviral and test whether this accumulation in foci is only observed in bat cells in which Dicer is proviral (M. myotis) but not in the other bat cells in which Dicer is antiviral (P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis).

      Reply: this is something that we have been wondering about and we have therefore started to look for the cell lines that have been described in the two published studies. While it proved difficult to find the PaKi cells from P. alecto bats, which is not commercially available, we have obtained the Tblu cells from T. brasiliensis and will look at Dicer localization in this model. However, we have to pay attention to the fact that the published data reported a contribution of RNAi in this cell line upon SARS-CoV-2 infection and that we will be using SINV. In addition, we do not know yet whether the anti-Dicer antibody will cross react with the T. brasiliensis Dicer protein.

      OPTIONAL: Given the difference between the provial role of mmDicer compared to the antiviral activity of Dicer in cells from P.alecto and T. brasiliensis bat cells, it would strengthen the authors' findings. if additional experiments would be conducted in parallel using M. myotis, P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis cells. Notably knocking down Dicer in both M. myotis, P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis cells, compare the impact on viral infections with SINV, SFV, VSV and correlate any observed difference in phenotype with putative variations in the formation of foci.

      Reply: it would indeed be really nice to be able to do the Dicer knockdown experiment in several bat cell lines and to correlate the phenotype with the formation of foci. This experiment might take a long time and we are not sure to be able to realize it in a reasonable amount of time. It could however be the subject of another manuscript further down the line.

      *Minor comments *

        • Figure 2I: The authors performed a knockdown of Dicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and monitor the impact on VSV-GFP infection. They found that knocking down Dicer leads to an increase in GFP protein and RNA levels suggesting an antiviral role of Dicer while, in contrast, no effect is observed on the production of infectious particles (figure 2H). On the western blot there is only a slight/weak increase of GFP protein level observed upon Dicer knockdown. Yet, the quantification of the band intensity shows a 4-fold increase relative to tubulin and compared to cells treated with siRNA control. This 4-fold increase seems exaggerated given the low increase in the intensity shown on the blot. This discrepancy is most likely due to the lower intensity of tubulin in the western blot analysis of siDicer-treated cells compared to siNeg-treated cells. The authors should reload their western blot with equal amount of protein extract loaded to ensure that the results shown on the western blot are in line with the quantification.*

      Reply: the signal quantification for this experiment was done across several replicates, but we agree that the observed effect seems exaggerated when compared to the signal seen on the blot. We observed important variations between replicates, but we will make sure that this was not due to a problem in the analysis and reload the western blot if needed.

        • Figure 3D: the authors mention that in both HEK293T cells and M. myotis nasal epithelial cells infected with SINV-GFP, there was an enrichment of 22-nucleotides (nt) paired positive and negative sense reads that overlapped with a 2-nt overhang, typical of Dicer cleavage. In Figure 3D, the data shows indeed that the duplexes are enriched for reads of 22-nt but it is unclear how this analysis reveals a 3' 2nt overhang within these duplexes. Can the authors clarify this point and if the data provided in that particular analysis indeed doesn't allow to detect these overhangs, please rephrase accordingly or provide additional analysis to support that point. *

      Reply: In Figure 3D, the graphs show the probability of pairing of all 22 nucleotides sequence mapping either to the plus or the minus strand of the viral RNA. Thus, for each sequence mapping to the plus strand, the number of sequences mapping to the minus strand with a full or partial overall is counted. A corresponding probability of pairing and Z score is calculated for each number of overlapping nucleotides (for more information on the calculation see Antoniewski (2014) Computing siRNA and piRNA Overlap Signatures. In Animal Endo-SiRNAs: Methods and Protocols, Werner A (ed) pp 135-146. New York, NY: Springer). The Z score peaks for an overlap of 20 nt in both HEK293T and M. myotis nasal epithelial cells infected with SINV. This means that there is a higher probability of two 22 nt sequence to pair along 20 nt, and thus that there are two unpaired nucleotides at the extremities of the duplexes. This higher Z score at 20 nt is not seen in VSV-infected cells. We will rephrase the text in the manuscript to make this point clearer.

        • Typo: page 5, line 152: the authors mention that Dicer knock down had an antiviral effect against VSV-GFP infection at the RNA and protein levels. However, the data in Figure 2I and 2J show an increase in both GFP RNA and proteins levels upon knockdown of Dicer. Although this data suggests that Dicer is antiviral against VSV, the knockdown of Dicer itself is not antiviral but rather proviral/increase virus accumulation. Please rephrase this sentence to avoid confusions. *

      Reply: thank you for spotting this typo. We have corrected it accordingly.

      Reviewer #2.

      1. Figure 1 relies on transduction of cells and antibiotic selection to obtain mmDicer-expressing cells. Although we would expect that every cell expresses the construct of interest, this is not always the case, depending on the cell type and toxicity of the construct. As the constructs are tagged, I suggest that the authors use flow cytometry to measure expression levels in a single cell manner. While doing so, they can infect with SINV-GFP and correlate GFP signal with construct expression in each cell, providing a more accurate measurement of mmDicer effect on viral infection. Alternatively, the authors could use live microscopy, as done in Fig 2, to obtain similar data.

      Reply: the reviewer is correct that we did not go for monoclonal selection of our mmDicer-expressing cells and therefore that there could be some cell-to-cell variation in expression. However, we have done immunostaining of Dicer in these cells and did not see drastic differences in expression, so we do not think this should impact SINV-GFP expression in a major way. We will provide these images and a quantification of the Dicer signal as a supplementary figure.

      For Fig 1C and 1F, it would be great to have growth curves with two different MOIs, instead of a single time point, to ensure that a putative antiviral effect is not missed. Same goes for Fig 2C, especially when the authors document quite a big defect on GFP expression (a proxy for SINV infection) when Dicer is knocked down (Fig 2B). There may be a bigger difference in titers at earlier time points. This matter runs throughout the manuscript. I do not suggest that the authors should provide growth curves every time viral titers are measured, but it is still worth doing it for the 2-3 key experiments of the paper.

      Reply: we will perform growth curves of virus infection for the key experiments in the manuscript as suggested. We already have done kinetic measurements of GFP accumulation at different MOIs, which we can provide as supplementary data, but we agree with the reviewer that GFP signal should not been used as the only proxy for the infection and that measuring viral titers by plaque assay is important as well.

      Figure 4, could the authors provide a proof that the Dicer antibody is specific in the bat context? This can be done by staining Dicer in bat cells knocked down for Dicer and infected with SINV. The apparition of foci upon anti-Dicer antibody staining should be abbrogated or severely impaired by the knock-down.

      Reply: see our reply to point 3 of Reviewer 1.

      Fig 5C, please provide a quantification of the images.

      Reply: these microscopy images have not been quantified because they have been obtained with an epifluorescence microscope. Indeed, the Pearson correlation coefficient can only be obtained using a confocal microscope. In fact, we have tried to use a confocal microscope to take pictures of these FISH images, but the SINV gRNA signal was too weak or the dots too small to be properly visualized. Furthermore, there is a very large difference in signal intensity between HEK293T and M. myotis cells, making it difficult to define a signal threshold compatible for both cell lines.

      l.263, when comparing this work with the recent publications on bat antiviral RNAi, the authors could also provide the percentage identity between Dicers from different species.

      Reply: this is a valid point, we have looked at the percentage identity between Dicer proteins from different bat species but we did not include this in our manuscript. We will provide this analysis in the revised version together with a comparison of Dicer from other mammals as a reference point.

      Reviewer 3.

        • Without direct comparison to the other bat species Dicers (especially where RNAi activity has been suggested as antiviral in previous publications) there is little in this paper that can be concluded about global aspects of bat dicer/RNAi.*

      Reply: see our reply to point 4 of Reviewer 1. We are planning to look at least in Tblu cells whether there is also a relocalization of Dicer upon SINV infection. So far, we could not obtain PaKi cells, but we are still looking and should we get those, we will test them as well.

      *Minor *

      What rules out that the mmDicer re-localization observed in the immortalized mm nasal epithelial is due simply to greater expression levels over the NoDice cells heterologously expressing mmDicer?

      Reply: we will provide an immunoblot to show the level of Dicer expression between HEK NoDice + mmDicer and M. myotis nasal epithelial cells as suggested below to address this point.

      • Although partially addressed in the text stating the generally long half-life of miRNAs, it seems the simplest explanation for this observation is due to some activity of a shorter-lived miRNA is required for optimal alphavirus replication is the mm nasal epithelial cells. *

      Reply: this is an interesting hypothesis that would prove difficult to test in a reasonable amount of time. We thank the reviewer and will mention this possibility in the discussion of the revised manuscript.

      *Suggestions that could enhance the magnitude of conclusions that can be drawn from this work. *

      *Major *

        • Making NoDice cells expressing other bat species Dicers, including those with claims that RNAi is antiviral, would address how universal these current observations are to bats/cell lines.*

      Reply: this could be an alternative to the use of P. alecto or T. brasiliensis cell lines that we have mentioned above. We will try to clone Dicer from the Tblu cells that we have in the laboratory. Since we do not have PaKi cells at the moment, it will be more complicated for the Pteropus Dicer, but one possibility could be to synthesize it. However, Dicer is a big gene so it could prove tricky.

        • Including an immunoblot showing that mm cells express mmDicer no more abundantly than the heterologous NoDice cells would allow ruling out the trivial explanation that foci occur at a certain critical mass of Dicer*

      Reply: yes, we will provide this piece of data as stated in reply to point 2.

      *Minor *

        • I believe line 151 " In contrast, Dicer * *knock down had an ANTIVIRAL effect against VSV-GFP infection at the RNA and protein *

      *levels, but no difference in titers was found (Fig. 2H-J)." should be " In contrast, Dicer *

      *knock down had an PROVIRAL effect against VSV-GFP infection at the RNA and protein *

      *levels, but no difference in titers was found (Fig. 2H-J)." *

      Reply: thank you for spotting this error, which was also mentioned by Reviewer 1, we have corrected this in the text.

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      Referee #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This study by the Pfeffer lab interrogates the role of Dicer during RNA virus infection in bats. This is an interesting and important topic, as bats are well-documented to be a reservoir of viruses that can target humans. The field of bat immunology is gaining momentum, but there is still a lot to be done. This study is thus particularly timely. It also explores more of a niche pathway when it comes to immunity: antiviral RNAi and its entry point, Dicer. This work comes after two recent studies, cited by the authors (Dai 2024, Owolabi 2025), that also explore this concept. Here though, the Pfeffer lab comes to an opposite conclusion, as their results advocate against the existence of antiviral RNAi in bats. As discussed by the authors, discrepancies between their study and the two others may be linked to differences in experimental systems. It nonetheless brings a novel, interesting take on the topic of Dicer & antiviral RNAi in bats, and will be of interest to immunologists and virologists. Altogether, I find the manuscript well-written and clear. Experiments are to the point and well interpreted. Below are a few suggestions that will help bolster the authors' conclusions.

      Figure 1 relies on transduction of cells and antibiotic selection to obtain mmDicer-expressing cells. Although we would expect that every cell expresses the construct of interest, this is not always the case, depending on the cell type and toxicity of the construct. As the constructs are tagged, I suggest that the authors use flow cytometry to measure expression levels in a single cell manner. While doing so, they can infect with SINV-GFP and correlate GFP signal with construct expression in each cell, providing a more accurate measurement of mmDicer effect on viral infection. Alternatively, the authors could use live microscopy, as done in Fig 2, to obtain similar data.

      For Fig 1C and 1F, it would be great to have growth curves with two different MOIs, instead of a single time point, to ensure that a putative antiviral effect is not missed. Same goes for Fig 2C, especially when the authors document quite a big defect on GFP expression (a proxy for SINV infection) when Dicer is knocked down (Fig 2B). There may be a bigger difference in titers at earlier time points. This matter runs throughout the manuscript. I do not suggest that the authors should provide growth curves every time viral titers are measured, but it is still worth doing it for the 2-3 key experiments of the paper.

      Figure 4, could the authors provide a proof that the Dicer antibody is specific in the bat context? This can be done by staining Dicer in bat cells knocked down for Dicer and infected with SINV. The apparition of foci upon anti-Dicer antibody staining should be abbrogated or severely impaired by the knock-down.

      Fig 5C, please provide a quantification of the images.

      l.263, when comparing this work with the recent publications on bat antiviral RNAi, the authors could also provide the percentage identity between Dicers from different species.

      Significance

      This study by the Pfeffer lab interrogates the role of Dicer during RNA virus infection in bats. This is an interesting and important topic, as bats are well-documented to be a reservoir of viruses that can target humans. The field of bat immunology is gaining momentum, but there is still a lot to be done. This study is thus particularly timely. It also explores more of a niche pathway when it comes to immunity: antiviral RNAi and its entry point, Dicer. This work comes after two recent studies, cited by the authors (Dai 2024, Owolabi 2025), that also explore this concept. Here though, the Pfeffer lab comes to an opposite conclusion, as their results advocate against the existence of antiviral RNAi in bats. As discussed by the authors, discrepancies between their study and the two others may be linked to differences in experimental systems. It nonetheless brings a novel, interesting take on the topic of Dicer & antiviral RNAi in bats, and will be of interest to immunologists and virologists. Altogether, I find the manuscript well-written and clear. Experiments are to the point and well interpreted. Below are a few suggestions that will help bolster the authors' conclusions.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Bats acts a reservoir for many viruses. While some of these viruses can be pathogenic for humans and other animals, infected bats tolerate these viruses and show little to no pathogenesis. It is therefore key to characterise which immune pathways are active in bats and how do they differ from other mammals to understand how bats can sustain these virus infections. RNA interference (RNAi) acts as an antiviral mechanism in plants, invertebrates and was recently shown to be active in a cell type-dependent manner as a defence mechanism in mammals. Notably, recent findings show that antiviral RNAi activity is high in cells lines from two bats species (P.alecto and T. brasiliensis) and that this pathway might play an important role in bat viral tolerance. In this study, the authors investigate the antiviral role of Dicer in another bat species, Myotis myotis. First they express M. myotis Dicer (mmDicer) or human Dicer (hDicer) in a human epithelial kidney (HEK) 293T cell line knockout for Dicer (NoDice cells) and show that, in a human cell line, expression of mmDicer or hDicer doesn't restrict infections with either Sindbis virus (SINV) or vesicular stomatitis virus (VSV). The authors then tested the role of endogenous bat Dicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and found that mmDicer has a proviral activity since its knockdown reduced the replication of SINV and Semliki Forest virus (SFV), but not of VSV. The authors also show by small RNA deep sequencing analysis that there was only a modest RNAi signature in both HEK293T and M. myotis infected with SINV suggesting that mmDicer does not have increased RNAi activity compared to human cells. Interestingly, the authors then found that in M. myotis cells infected with SINV, SFV but not VSV, mmDicer accumulates into cytoplasmic foci, which also contain double-stranded RNA (dsRNA) derived from viral replication. Finally, the authors showed that this relocalisation of mmDicer into foci was dependent on host factors from M. myotis cells as there was no change in localisation in SINV-infected HEK 293T NoDice cells complemented with mmDicer.

      Major comments

      • The findings that mmDicer is proviral in bat cells relies exclusively on the observation that the depletion of Dicer in M. myotis cells leads to a reduced accumulation of SFV and SINV at the RNA and protein levels (figure 2). Heterologous expression of mmDicer in HEK 293T NoDice doesn't lead to an increase permissivity to viral infections (figure 1) and the accumulation of Dicer foci is only observed in M. myotis cells but not when mmDicer is expressed in HEK 293 NoDice cells (figure 6). Given that the key finding of this manuscript relies on these knockdown experiments, the authors should ensure that the impact on viral infections is due to the specific silencing of mmDicer and not caused by off-target effects of their siRNA-mediated approach. The authors designed a siRNA pool to efficiently knock-down mmDicer. They should validate their findings by using individual Dicer siRNA and verify whether the decrease SFV/SINV accumulation is observed with at least two individual siRNAs targeting Dicer. It would also strengthen their findings if they could show a complementation experiment in which a mmDicer (designed to not be affected by the siRNA-mediated silencing) is introduced exogenously in Dicer-depleted cells and show that it rescues the observed decrease in viral accumulation to demonstrate that the proviral role is strictly dependent on mmDicer. Alternatively, the authors could consider a CRISPR/Cas9 genome editing approach to knockout Dicer in bat cells to test whether this proviral effect is confirmed.
      • Figure 2: the authors knock-downed Dicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and carried out infections with SINV-GFP and SFV. The authors conclude that Dicer is proviral as its depletion causes an decrease in SINV-GFP and SFV accumulation. While this conclusion is supported by the decrease levels of viral RNA and protein levels upon Dicer depletion (figure 2D, 2E, 2G), the effect on the viral titers is non-significant for both viruses (Figure 2C and 2F) based on the statistical analysis. This reviewer appreciates that the titers are lower upon Dicer knockdown, which support the authors' findings at the viral RNA and protein levels. However, as these results are central to the core message of the manuscript, the authors should provide evidence that this proviral effect observed is statistically significant on viral titers by perhaps providing additional repeats and/or comment on this observation.
      • In figure 4 and 5, the authors nicely show that mmDicer accumulate to cytoplasmic foci in M. myotis cells upon infection with SFV and SINV and these foci co-localise with double-stranded RNA. The authors used a commercial polyclonal antibody against Dicer (A301-937A, Bethyl according to the Material and Methods section) which is specific to human Dicer to carry out their immunostaining in bat cells. The authors should provide evidence that this antibody indeed recognises/crossreacts with mmDicer as well and that the staining shown is indeed specific to mmDicer localisation especially because the heterologous expression of HA-tagged version of mmDicer in HEK 293T NoDice cells did not show this accumulation of cytoplasmic foci. The authors should verify the specificity of their mmDicer immunostaining by performing the same labelling in bat cells in which Dicer is knock-downed (or knock out) by individual and validated siRNA against mmDicer. The decrease signal of bat Dicer staining using the anti-human Dicer antibody would indicate specificity. Another complementary approach would be to test their Dicer staining between HEK NoDice cells (no Dicer present) versus NoDice complemented with with either mmDicer or human Dicer constructs, which would then indicate how much the anti-human Dicer antibody recognises bat Dicer. In addition, the authors should overexpress HA-tagged mmDicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and test whether HA-mmDicer accumulate into foci upon infection using an anti-HA immunostaining. This would confirm that these accumulation into foci indeed is specific to mmDicer but also would reinforce the authors' findings that host factors within bat cells are important for this formation into foci since mmDicer expression in HEK 293T No Dice cells didn't show this phenotype upon infection (figure 6). OPTIONAL: it would be interesting to overexpress HA-tagged human Dicer into M. myotis nasal epithelial cells as well to then test using anti-HA staining whether human Dicer in presence of host factors from the bat can accumulate into cytoplasmic foci or not upon viral infection.
      • This reviewer appreciates that this might be judged as beyond the scope of this study since it is focused on the role of Dicer in M. myotis. However, the observation that mmDicer accumulates into foci containing as well viral dsRNA is very interesting and it would significantly improve the manuscript if the authors would provide further indications that this phenotype is related to the lack of antiviral activity of mmDicer compared to what has been previously shown in other bat species (P.alecto and T. brasiliensis). In other words, is this accumulation of mmDicer into foci responsible for its different impact on virus infection? It would therefore be insightful to compare Dicer localisation upon infection in M. myotis versus P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis bat cells in which Dicer was shown to be antiviral and test whether this accumulation in foci is only observed in bat cells in which Dicer is proviral (M. myotis) but not in the other bat cells in which Dicer is antiviral (P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis).
      • OPTIONAL: Given the difference between the provial role of mmDicer compared to the antiviral activity of Dicer in cells from P.alecto and T. brasiliensis bat cells, it would strengthen the authors' findings. if additional experiments would be conducted in parallel using M. myotis, P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis cells. Notably knocking down Dicer in both M. myotis, P.alecto and/or T. brasiliensis cells, compare the impact on viral infections with SINV, SFV, VSV and correlate any observed difference in phenotype with putative variations in the formation of foci.

      Minor comments

      • Figure 2I: The authors performed a knockdown of Dicer in M. myotis nasal epithelial cells and monitor the impact on VSV-GFP infection. They found that knocking down Dicer leads to an increase in GFP protein and RNA levels suggesting an antiviral role of Dicer while, in contrast, no effect is observed on the production of infectious particles (figure 2H). On the western blot there is only a slight/weak increase of GFP protein level observed upon Dicer knockdown. Yet, the quantification of the band intensity shows a 4-fold increase relative to tubulin and compared to cells treated with siRNA control. This 4-fold increase seems exaggerated given the low increase in the intensity shown on the blot. This discrepancy is most likely due to the lower intensity of tubulin in the western blot analysis of siDicer-treated cells compared to siNeg-treated cells. The authors should reload their western blot with equal amount of protein extract loaded to ensure that the results shown on the western blot are in line with the quantification.
      • Figure 3D: the authors mention that in both HEK293T cells and M. myotis nasal epithelial cells infected with SINV-GFP, there was an enrichment of 22-nucleotides (nt) paired positive and negative sense reads that overlapped with a 2-nt overhang, typical of Dicer cleavage. In Figure 3D, the data shows indeed that the duplexes are enriched for reads of 22-nt but it is unclear how this analysis reveals a 3' 2nt overhang within these duplexes. Can the authors clarify this point and if the data provided in that particular analysis indeed doesn't allow to detect these overhangs, please rephrase accordingly or provide additional analysis to support that point.
      • Typo: page 5, line 152: the authors mention that Dicer knock down had an antiviral effect against VSV-GFP infection at the RNA and protein levels. However, the data in Figure 2I and 2J show an increase in both GFP RNA and proteins levels upon knockdown of Dicer. Although this data suggests that Dicer is antiviral against VSV, the knockdown of Dicer itself is not antiviral but rather proviral/increase virus accumulation. Please rephrase this sentence to avoid confusions.

      Significance

      The findings from this study are interesting as they provide further insights into the role of RNAi towards virus infections. Notably, it highlights a putative proviral role of Dicer in M. myotis bat cells in contrast to the antiviral role in mammals (including other bat species) as well as in plants and invertebrates. Another exciting finding of this study is the observation that mmDicer accumulates in cytoplasmic foci upon viral infection and that these foci also contain viral dsRNA replication intermediates. These accumulation of Dicer into foci only appear in bat cells infected with viruses producing large amounts of dsRNA such as SFV and SINV but not with VSV infection where no dsRNA was detected.

      While these findings are novel and interesting, this study, as it stands, is rather descriptive and doesn't provide mechanistic insights into the proviral activity of mmDicer and its localisation into cytoplasmic foci upon infections. The importance of the authors' findings would greatly improve if there were some experiments addressing whether this localisation of mmDicer into foci is responsible or at least correlate with its proviral activity/its lack of antiviral activity. Comparative studies between M. myotis cells in which Dicer is proviral and/or P.alecto and T. brasiliensis cells where RNAi was previously shown to be antiviral would likely provide key mechanistic insights.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Lesser et al provide a comprehensive description of Drosophila wing proprioceptive sensory neurons at the electron microscopy resolution. This "tour-de-force" provides a strong foundation for future structural and functional research aimed at understanding wing motor control in Drosophila with implications for understanding wing control across other insects.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors leverage previous research that described many of the fly wing proprioceptors, and combine this knowledge with EM connectome data such that they now provide a near-complete morphological description of all wing proprioceptors.

      (2) The authors cleverly leverage genetic tools and EM connectome data to tie the location of proprioceptors on the wings with axonal projections in the connectome. This enables them to both align with previous literature as well as make some novel claims.

      3) In addition to providing a full description of wing proprioceptors, the authors also identified a novel population of sensors on the wing tegula that make direct connections with the B1 wing motor neurons, implicating the role of the tegula in wing movements that was previously underappreciated.

      (4) Despite being the most comprehensive description so far, it is reassuring that the authors clearly state the missing elements in the discussion.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors do their main analysis on data from the FANC connectome but provide corresponding IDs for sensory neurons in the MANC connectome. I wonder how the connectivity matrix compares across FANC and MANC if the authors perform a similar analysis to the one they have done in Figure 2. This could be a valuable addition and potentially also pick up any sexual dimorphism.

      (2) The authors speculate about the presence of gap junctions based on the density of mitochondria. I'm not convinced about this, given that mitochondrial densities could reflect other things that correlate with energy demands in sub-compartments.

      (3) I'm intrigued by how the tegula CO is negative for iav. I wonder if authors tried other CO labeling genes like nompc. And what does this mean for the nature of this CO. Some more discussion on this anomaly would be helpful.

      (4) The authors conclude there are no proprioceptive neurons in sclerite pterale C based on Chat-Gal4 expression analysis. It would be much more rigorous if authors also tried a pan-neuronal driver like nsyb/elav or other neurotransmitter drivers (Vglut, GAD, etc) to really rule this out. (I hope I didn't miss this somewhere.)

      Overall, I consider this an exceptional analysis that will be extremely valuable to the community.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Lesser et al. present an atlas of Drosophila wing sensory neurons. They proofread the axons of all sensory neurons in the wing nerve of an existing electron microscopy dataset, the female adult fly nerve cord (FANC) connectome. These reconstructed sensory axons were linked with light microscopy images of full-scale morphology to identify their origin in the periphery of the wing and encoded sensory modalities. The authors described the morphology and postsynaptic targets of proprioceptive neurons as well as previously unknown sensory neurons.

      Strengths:

      The authors present a valuable catalogue of wing sensory neurons, including previously undescribed sensory axons in the Drosophila wing. By providing both connectivity information with linked genetic drive lines, this research facilitates future work on the wing motor-sensory network and applications relating to Drosophila flight. The findings were linked to previous research as well as their putative role in the proprioceptive and nerve cord circuitry, providing testable hypotheses for future studies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) With future use as an atlas, it should be noted that the evidence is based on sensory neurons on only one side of the nerve cord. Fruit flies have stereotyped left/right hemispheres in the brain and left/right hemisegments in the nerve cord. The comparison of left and right neurons of the nervous system can give a sense of how robust the morphological and connectivity findings are. Here, the authors have not compared the left and right side sensory axons from the wing nerve, leaving potential for developmental variability across samples and left/right hemisegments.

      (2) Not all links between the EM reconstructions and driver lines are convincing. To strengthen these, for all EM-LM matches in Figures 3-7, rotated views of the driver line (matching the rotated EM views) should be shown to provide a clearer comparison of the data. In particular, Figure 3G and Figure 7B are not very convincing based on the images shown. MCFO imaging of the driver lines in Figure 3G and 7B would make this position stronger if a clone that matches the EM reconstruction could be identified.

      (3) Figure 7B looks like the driver line might have stochastic expression in the sensory neuron, which further reduces confidence in the result shown in Figure 7C. Is this expression pattern in the wing consistently seen? Many split-GAL4s have stochastic expressions. The evidence would be strengthened if the authors presented multiple examples (~4-5) of each driver line's expression pattern in the supplement.

      (4) Certain claims in this work lack quantitative evidence. On line 128, for instance, "Overall, our comprehensive reconstruction revealed many morphological subgroups with overlapping postsynaptic partners, suggesting a high degree of integration within wing sensorimotor circuits." If a claim of subgroups having shared postsynaptic partners is being made, there should have been quantitative evidence. For example, cosine similar amongst members of each group compared to the cosine similarity of shuffled/randomised sets of axons from different groups. The heat map of cosine similarity in Figure 2B alone is not sufficient.

      (5) Similarly, claims about putative electrical connections to b1 motor neurons are very speculative. The authors state that "their terminals contain very densely packed mitochondria compared to other cells", without providing a quantitative comparison to other sensory axons. There is also no quantitative comparison to the one example of another putative electrical connection from the literature. Further, it should be noted that this connection from Trimarchi and Murphey, 1997, is also stated as putative on line 167, which further weakens this evidence. Quantification would strongly strengthen this position. Identification of an example of high mitochondrial density at a confirmed electrical connection would be even better. In the related discussion section "A potential metabolic specialization for flight circuitry", it should be more clearly noted that the dense mitochondria could be unrelated to a putative electrical connection. If the authors have an alternative hypothesis about the mitochondria density, this should be stated as well.

      (6) It would be appropriate to cite previous work using a similar strategy to match sensory axons to their cell bodies/dendrites at the periphery using driver lines and connectomics (see Figure 5 for example in the following paper: https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.40247 ).

      The methods section is very sparse. For the sake of replicability, all sections should be expanded upon.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study compares four models - VALOR (dynamic visual-text alignment), CLIP (static visual-text alignment), AlexNet (vision-only), and WordNet (text-only) - in their ability to predict human brain responses using voxel-wise encoding modeling. The results show that VALOR not only achieves the highest accuracy in predicting neural responses but also generalizes more effectively to novel datasets. In addition, VALOR captures meaningful semantic dimensions across the cortical surface and demonstrates impressive predictive power for brain responses elicited by future events.

      Strengths:

      The study leverages a multimodal machine learning model to investigate how the human brain aligns visual and textual information. Overall, the manuscript is logically organized, clearly written, and easy to follow. The results well support the main conclusions of the paper.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) My primary concern is that the performance difference between VALOR and CLIP is not sufficiently explained. Both models are trained using contrastive learning on visual and textual inputs, yet CLIP performs significantly worse. The authors suggest that this may be due to VALOR being trained on dynamic movie data while CLIP is trained on static images. However, this explanation remains speculative. More in-depth discussion is needed on the architectural and inductive biases of the two models, and how these may contribute to their differences in modeling brain responses.

      (2) The methods section lacks clarity regarding which layers of VALOR and CLIP were used to extract features for voxel-wise encoding modeling. A more detailed methodological description is necessary to ensure reproducibility and interpretability. Furthermore, discussion of the inductive biases inherent in these models-and their implications for brain alignment - is crucial.

      (3) A broader question remains insufficiently addressed: what is the purpose of visual-text alignment in the human brain? One hypothesis is that it supports the formation of abstract semantic representations that rely on no specific input modality. While VALOR performs well in voxel-wise encoding, it is unclear whether this necessarily indicates the emergence of such abstract semantics. The authors are encouraged to discuss how the computational architecture of VALOR may reflect this alignment mechanism and what implications it has for understanding brain function.

      (4) The current methods section does not provide enough details about the network architectures, parameter settings, or whether pretrained models were used. If so, please provide links to the pretrained models to facilitate reproducible science.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fu and colleagues have shown that VALOR, a model of multimodal and dynamic stimulus features, better predicts brain responses compared to unimodal or static models such as AlexNet, WordNet, or CLIP. The authors demonstrated the robustness of their findings by generalizing encoding results to an external dataset. They demonstrated the models' practical benefit by showing that semantic mappings were comparable to another model that required labor-intensive manual annotation. Finally, the authors showed that the model reveals predictive coding mechanisms of the brain, which held a meaningful relationship with individuals' fluid intelligence measures.

      Strengths:

      Recent advances in neural network models that extract visual, linguistic, and semantic features from real-world stimuli have enabled neuroscientists to build encoding models that predict brain responses from these features. Higher prediction accuracy indicates greater explained variance in neural activity, and therefore a better model of brain function. Commonly used models include AlexNet for visual features, WordNet for audio-semantic features, and CLIP for visuo-semantic features; these served as comparison models in the study. Building on this line of work, the authors developed an encoding model using VALOR, which captures the multimodal and dynamic nature of real-world stimuli. VALOR outperformed the comparison models in predicting brain responses. It also recapitulated known semantic mappings and revealed evidence of predictive processing in the brain. These findings support VALOR as a strong candidate model of brain function.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors argue that this modeling contributes to a better understanding of how the brain works. However, upon reading, I am less convinced about how VALOR's superior performance over other models tells us more about the brain. VALOR is a better model of the audiovisual stimulus because it processes multimodal and dynamic stimuli compared to other unimodal or static models. If the model better captures real-world stimuli, then I almost feel that it has to better capture brain responses, assuming that the brain is a system that is optimized to process multimodal and dynamic inputs from the real world. The authors could strengthen the manuscript if the significance of their encoding model findings were better explained.

      In Study 3, the authors show high alignment between WordNet and VALOR feature PCs. Upon reading the method together with Figure 3, I suspect that the alignment almost has to be high, given that the authors projected VALOR features to the Huth et al.'s PC space. Could the authors conduct non-parametric permutation tests, such as shuffling the VALOR features prior to mapping onto Huth et al.'s PC space, and then calculating the Jaccard scores? I imagine that the null distribution would be positively shifted. Still, I would be convinced if the alignment is higher than this shifted null distribution for each PC. If my understanding of this is incorrect, I suggest editing the relevant Method section (line 508) because this analysis was not easy to understand.

      In Study 4, the authors show that individuals whose superior parietal gyrus (SPG) exhibited high prediction distance had high fluid cognitive scores (Figure 4C). I had a hard time believing that this was a hypothesis-driven analysis. The authors motivate the analysis that "SPG and PCu have been strongly linked to fluid intelligence (line 304)". Did the authors conduct two analyses only-SPG-fluid intelligence and PCu-fluid intelligence-without relating other brain regions to other individual differences measures? Even if so, the authors should have reported the same r-value and p-value for PCu-fluid intelligence. If SPG-fluid intelligence indeed holds specificity in terms of statistical significance compared to all possible scenarios that were tested, is this rationally an expected result, and could the authors explain the specificity? Also, the authors should explain why they considered fluid intelligence to be the proxy of one's ability to anticipate upcoming scenes during movie watching. I would have understood the rationale better if the authors had at least aggregated predictive scores for all brain regions that held significance into one summary statistic and found a significant correlation with the fluid intelligence measure.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study advances the lab's growing body of evidence exploring higher-order learning and its neural mechanisms. They recently found that NMDA receptor activity in the perirhinal cortex was necessary for integrating stimulus-stimulus associations with stimulus-shock associations (mediated learning) to produce preconditioned fear, but it was not necessary for forming stimulus-shock associations. On the other hand, basolateral amygdala NMDA receptor activity is required for forming stimulus-shock memories. Based on these facts, the authors assessed: (1) why the perirhinal cortex is necessary for mediated learning but not direct fear learning, and (2) the determinants of perirhinal cortex versus basolateral amygdala necessity for forming direct versus indirect fear memories. The authors used standard sensory preconditioning and variants designed to manipulate the novelty and temporal relationship between stimuli and shock and, therefore, the attentional state under which associative information might be processed. Under experimental conditions where information would presumably be processed primarily in the periphery of attention (temporal distance between stimulus/shock or stimulus pre-exposure), perirhinal cortex NMDA receptor activation was required for learning indirect associations. On the other hand, when information would likely be processed in focal attention (novel stimulus contiguous with shock), basolateral amygdala NMDA activity was required for learning direct associations. Together, the findings indicate that the perirhinal cortex and basolateral amygdala subserve peripheral and focal attention, respectively. The authors provide support for their conclusions using careful, hypothesis-driven experimental design, rigorous methods, and integrating their findings with the relevant literature on learning theory, information processing, and neurobiology. Therefore, this work will be highly interesting to several fields.

      Strengths:

      (1) The experiments were carefully constructed and designed to test hypotheses that were rooted in the lab's previous work, in addition to established learning theory and information processing background literature.

      (2) There are clear predictions and alternative outcomes. The provided table does an excellent job of condensing and enhancing the readability of a large amount of data.

      (3) In a broad sense, attention states are a component of nearly every behavioral experiment. Therefore, identifying their engagement by dissociable brain areas and under different learning conditions is an important area of research.

      (4) The authors clearly note where they replicated their own findings, report full statistical measures, effect sizes, and confidence intervals, indicating the level of scientific rigor.

      (5) The findings raise questions for future experiments that will further test the authors' hypotheses; this is well discussed.

      Weaknesses:

      As a reader, it is difficult to interpret how first-order fear could be impaired while preconditioned fear is intact; it requires a bit of "reading between the lines".

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a series of experiments that further investigate the roles of the BLA and PRH in sensory preconditioning, with a particular focus on understanding their differential involvement in the association of S1 and S2 with shock.

      Strengths:

      The motivation for the study is clearly articulated, and the experimental designs are thoughtfully constructed. I especially appreciate the inclusion of Table 1, which makes the designs easy to follow. The results are clearly presented, and the statistical analyses are rigorous. My comments below mainly concern areas where the writing could be improved to help readers more easily grasp the logic behind the experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Lines 56-58: The two previous findings should be more clearly summarized. Specifically, it's unclear whether the "mediated S2-shock" association occurred during Stage 2 or Stage 3. I assume the authors mean Stage 2, but Stage 2 alone would not yet involve "fear of S2," making this expression a bit confusing.

      (2) Line 61: The phrase "Pavlovian fear conditioning" is ambiguous in this context. I assume it refers to S1-shock or S2-shock conditioning. If so, it would be clearer to state this explicitly.

      (3) Regarding the distinction between having or not having Stage 1 S2-S1 pairings, is "novel vs. familiar" the most accurate way to frame this? This terminology could be misleading, especially since one might wonder why S2 couldn't just be presented alone on Stage 1 if novelty is the critical factor. Would "outcome relevance" or "predictability" be more appropriate descriptors? If the authors choose to retain the "novel vs. familiar" framing, I suggest providing a clear explanation of this rationale before introducing the predictions around Line 118.

      (4) Line 121: This statement should refer to S1, not S2.

      (5) Line 124: This one should refer to S2, not S1.

      (6) Additionally, the rationale for Experiment 4 is not introduced before the Results section. While it is understandable that Experiment 4 functions as a follow-up to Experiment 3, it would be helpful to briefly explain the reasoning behind its inclusion.

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      This is very fascinating.

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      Review of Masalmeh et al. Title: "FAK modulates glioblastoma stem cell energetics..."

      Previous studies have implicated FAK and the related tyrosine kinase PYK2 in glioblastoma growth, cell migration, and invasion. Herein, using a murine stem cell model of glioblastoma, the authors used CRISPR to inactivate FAK, FAK-null cells selected and cloned, and lentiviral re-expression of murine FAK in the FAK-null cells (termed FAK Rx) was accomplished. FAK-/- cells were shown to possess epithelial characteristics whereas FAK Rx cells expressed mesenchymal markers and increased cell migration/invasion in vitro. Comparisons between FAK-/- and FAK Rx cells showed that FAK re-expressed increased mitochondrial respiration and amino acid uptake. This was associated with FAK Rx cells exhibiting filamentous mitochondrial morphology (potentially an OXPHOS phenotype) and decreased levels of MTFR1L S235 phosphorylation (implicated in mito morphology fragmentation). Mito and epithelial cell morphology of FAK-/- cells was reversed by treatment with Rho-kinase inhibitors that also increased mito metabolism and cell viability. Last, FAK-dependent glioblastoma tumor growth was shown by comparisons of FAK-/- and FAK Rx implantation studies.

      The studies by Masalmeh provide interesting findings associating FAK expression with changes in mitochondrial morphology, energy metabolism, and glutamate uptake. According to the authors model, FAK expression is supporting a glioblastoma stem cell like phenotype in vitro and tumor growth in vivo. What remains unclear is the mechanistic connection to cell changes and whether or not these are be dependent on intrinsic FAK activity or as the Frame group has previously published, potentially FAK nuclear localization. The associations with MTFR1L phosphorylation and effects by Rho kinase inhibition are likely indirect and remind this reviewer of long-ago studies with FAK-null fibroblasts that exhibit epithelial characteristics, still express PYK2, exhibited elevated RhoA GTPase activity. Some of these phenotypes were linked to changes in RhoGEF and RhoGAP signaling with FAK and/or Pyk2. At a minimum, it would be informative to know whether Pyk2 signaling is relevant for observed phenotypes and whether the authors can further support their associations with FAK-targeted or FAK-Pyk2-targeted inhibitors or PROTACs.

      Some questions that would enhance potential impact. 1. Cell generation. Please describe the analysis of FAK-/- clones in more detail. The "low viability" phenotype needs further explanation with regard to clonal expansion and growth characteristics?

      Response:

      • We included a better description and a supplementary figure in our revised manuscript to indicate that we have examined several FAK -/- clones and confirmed that our observations were not due to clonal variation; multiple clones displayed similar morphological changes (Figure S1D). We also show that the elongated mesenchymal-like morphology was observed at 48 h after nucleofecting the cells with the FAK‑expressing vector, before beginning G418 selection to enrich for cells expressing FAK (Figure S1C). We also included experiments to acutely modulate FAK signalling (detaching and seeding cells on fibronectin) (Figure S2D, E, F and Figure S3) to exclude the possibility that the profound effects are due to protocols/selection we used for generating FAK-deleted cells.
      • Regarding the term "low viability", we have clarified in the text that there is no significant difference in cell number (Figure S1A) or 'cell viability' when it is assessed by trypan blue exclusion (a non-mitochondria-dependent read-out) (Figure S1B) between FAK-expressing FAK Rx and FAK-/- cells cultured for three days under normal conditions. Therefore, we agree the term 'cell viability' in this context could be confusing and have replace "cell viability" with "metabolic activity as measured by Alamar Blue." in Figure 1D and Figure 5B, and the corresponding text in the original manuscript. This wording more accurately reflects the data.

      Figure 1F: need further support of MET change upon FAK KO and EMT reversion.

      Response: We have added a heatmap (Figure S1E) illustrating the changes in protein expression of core-enriched EMT/MET genes products (by proteomics) after FAK gene deletion (EMT genes as defined in Howe et al., 2018) ; this strengthens the conclusion that the MET reversion morphological phenotype is accompanied by recognised MET protein changes.

      Fig. 2: Need further support if FAK effects impact glycolysis or oxidative phosphorylation in particular as implicated by the stem cell model.

      Response: We show that FAK impacts both glycolysis (Figure 2A, 2E, and 2F) and mitochondrial oxidative phosphorylation on the basis of the oxygen consumption rate (OCR) (Figure 2B, and 2D), showing both are contributing pathways to FAK-dependent energy production. We have clarified this in the text.

      Is there a combinatorial potential between FAKi and chemotherapies used for glioblastoma. Need to build upon past studies.

      Response: Yes, previous studies suggest that inhibiting FAK can sensitize GBM cells to chemotherapy (Golubovskaya et al., 2012; Ortiz-Rivera et al., 2023). We have included a paragraph in the discussion section to make sure this is clearer. Although it is not the subject of this study, we appreciate it is useful context.

      The notation of changes in glucose transporter expression should be followed up with regard to the potential that FAK-expressing cells may have different uptake of carbon sources and other amino acids. Altered uptake could be one potential explanation for increase glycolysis and glutamine flux.

      Response: We agree with the reviewer that glucose uptake could be contributing and we include data that 2 glucose transporters are indeed FAK-regulated namely Glucose transporter 1 (GLUT1, encoded by Slc2a1 gene) and Glucose transporter 3 (GLUT 3, encoded by Slc2a3 gene) (shown in Figure S2B and C).

      It would be helpful to support the confocal microscopy of mitos with EM.

      Response:

      We are concerned (and in our experience) that Electron microscopy (EM) may introduce artefacts during sample preparation. In contrast, immunofluorescence sample preparation is less susceptible to artefacts. The SORA system we used is not a conventional point-scanning confocal microscope, but is a super-resolution module based on a spinning disk confocal platform (CSU-W1; Yokogawa) using optical pixel reassignment with confocal detection. This method enhances resolution in all dimensions with resolution in our samples measured at 120nm. This has been instructive in defining a new level of changes in mitochondrial morphology upon FAK gene deletion.

      Lack of FAK expression with increased MTFR1 phosphorylation is difficult to interpret.

      Response: We do not directly show that this phosphorylation event is causal in our experiments; however, we think it important to document this change since it has been published that phosphorylation of MTFR1 has been causally linked to the mitochondrial morphology we observed in other systems (Tilokani et al., 2022).

      Need to have better support between loss of FAK and the increase in Rho signaling. Use of Rho kinase inhibitors is very limited and the context to FAK (and or Pyk2) remains unclear. Past studies have linked integrin adhesion to ECM as a linkage between FAK activation and the transient inhibition of RhoA GTP binding. Is integrin signaling and FAK involved in the cell and metabolism phenotypes in this new model?

      Response: To better support the antagonistic effect of FAK on Rho-kinase (ROCK) signalling, we included a new experiment in which the integrin-FAK signalling pathway has been disrupted by treating FAK WT cells with an agent that causes detachment from the substratum, Accutase, and growing the cells in suspension in laminin-free medium. We present ROCK activity data, as judged by phosphorylated MLC2 at serine 19 (pMLC2 S19), relating this to induced FAK phosphorylation at Y397 (a surrogate for FAK activity) that is supressed after integrin disengagement. These measurements have been compared with conditions whereby integrin-FAK signalling is activated by growing the cells on laminin coated surfaces. We observed a time-dependent decrease in pFAK(Y397) levels (normalised to total FAK) in suspended cells compared to those spread on laminin, while pMLC2(S19) levels increased in a reciprocal manner over time in detached cells relative to spread cells (S4A and B). There is therefore an inverse relationship between integrin-FAK signalling and ROCK-MLC2 activity, consistent with findings from FAK gene deletion experiments. In the former case, we do not rely on gene deletion cell clones.

      Significance

      The studies by Masalmeh provide interesting findings associating FAK expression with changes in mitochondrial morphology, energy metabolism, and glutamate uptake. According to the authors model, FAK expression is supporting a glioblastoma stem cell like phenotype in vitro and tumor growth in vivo. What remains unclear is the mechanistic connection to cell changes and whether or not these are be dependent on intrinsic FAK activity or as the Frame group has previously published, potentially FAK nuclear localization. The associations with MTFR1L phosphorylation and effects by Rho kinase inhibition are likely indirect and remind this reviewer of long-ago studies with FAK-null fibroblasts that exhibit epithelial characteristics, still express PYK2, exhibited elevated RhoA GTPase activity. Some of these phenotypes were linked to changes in RhoGEF and RhoGAP signaling with FAK and/or Pyk2. At a minimum, it would be informative to know whether Pyk2 signaling is relevant for observed phenotypes and whether the authors can further support their associations with FAK-targeted or FAK-Pyk2-targeted inhibitors or PROTACs.

      __Response: __

      Deleting the gene encoding FAK in mouse embryonic fibroblasts leads to elevated Pyk2 expression (Sieg, 2000). However, in the GBM stem cell model we used here, Pyk2 was not expressed (determined by both transcriptomics and proteomics). We have included Figure S1E to show that PYK2 expression was undetectable in FAK -/- and FAK Rx cells at the RNA level (Figure S1F). We conclude that there is no compensatory increase in Pyk2 upon FAK loss in these cells. In the transformed neural stem cell model of GBM, we do not consistently or robustly detect nuclear FAK.

      Review #2

      Masalmeh and colleagues employ a neural stem/progenitor cell-based glioma model (NPE cells) to investigate the role of Focal Adhesion Kinase (FAK) in GBM, with a focus on potential links between the regulation of morphological/adhesive and metabolic GBM cell properties. For this, the authors employ wt cells alongside newly generated FAK-KO and -reexpressing cells, as well as pharmacological interventions to probe the relevance of specific signaling pathways. The authors´ main claims are that FAK crucially modulates glioma cell morphology, cell-cell and cell-substrate interactions and motility, as well as their metabolism, and that these effects translate to changes to relevant in vivo properties such as invasion and tumor growth.

      My main issues are with the model chosen by the authors.

      As per the methods section, generation of FAK-KO and -"Rx" NPE cells entailed protracted selection/expansion processes, which may have resulted in inadvertent selection for cellular/molecular properties unrelated to the desired one (loss or gain of FAK expression) and which may have had cascading effects on NPE cells. The authors nonetheless repeatedly claim the parameters they quantify, such as mitochondrial or cytoskeletal properties or metabolic features, to have directly resulted from FAK loss or reintroduction. Examples of such causal inferences are to be found in lines 123, 134/135, 165, 181. Such causal claims are, in my view, unsupported.

      Acute perturbation of FAK expression/activity, genetically or pharmacologically, followed by a rapid assessment of the processes under investigation, would be needed to begin to assess causality, even if acute genetic perturbations may be technically challenging as sufficient gene expression reduction or restoration to physiologically relevant levels may be hard to achieve.

      Response:

      We would like to first comment on the model we used here, which we think will clarify the validity of our approach. The model is a transformed stem cell model of GBM that was published in (Gangoso et al., Cell, 2021) and is now used regularly in the GBM field. As mentioned in the response to Reviewer 1, we have added text (page 4 and 5 in the revised manuscript) and a new supplementary figure (Figure S1D) clarifying that the morphological changes we observed were consistent across multiple FAK -/- clones, showing this was not due to any inter-clonal variability. We also added images showing that the morphological changes were apparent at 48 h after nucleofecting FAK -/- cells with the FAK‑expressing vector specifically (not the empty vector), prior to starting G418 selection to enrich for FAK‑expressing cells (Figure S1C), addressing the worry that clonal variation and selection was the cause of the FAK-dependent phenotypes we observed. We believe that our model provides a type of well controlled, clean genetic cancer cell system of a type that is commonly used in cancer cell biology, allowing us to attribute phenotypes to individual proteins.

      We have also carried out a more acute treatment by using the FAK inhibitor VS4718 to perturb FAK kinase activity and assessed the effects on glycolysis and glutamine oxidation after 48h treatment (Figure S2D, E and F). We found that treating the transformed neural stem cells (parental population) with FAK inhibitor (300nM VS4718) decreases glucose incorporation into glycolysis intermediates and glutamine incorporation into TCA cycle intermediates, consistent with a role for FAK's kinase activity in maintaining glycolysis and glutamine oxidation.

      The employed pharmacological modulation of ROCK activity is the only approach that, given the presumably acute nature of the treatment, may have allowed the authors to probe the proposed functional links. The methods section of the manuscript does not however comprise details as to the duration of these treatments, which leaves open the possibility of long-term treatment having been carried out (data shown in Figure 5B refers to 72hr treatment).

      __Response: __

      We have added the duration of the treatment to the Methods section and Figure Legends, to clarify that cells were treated with ROCK inhibitors for 24h, before assessing the effects on mictochondria (Figure 4C, D, S4C and D) and glutamine oxidation (Figure 5A, and S5). For metabolic activity by AlamarBlue assay, cells were treated with ROCK inhibitors for 72h (Figure 5B).

      Even in the case of ROCK inhibitor experiments, it is however unclear if and how the effects on cell morphology and adhesion, mitochondrial organization and metabolic activity may be connected to each other and, if at all, to FAK expression.

      Given the above uncertainties due to the nature of the model and experimental approaches, it is hard to assess the reliability and thus the relevance of the findings.

      Response:

      FAK suppresses ROCK activity (as judged by pMLC2 S19, Figure 4A and B). Treating FAK -/- cells with two different ROCK inhibitors restored mesenchymal-like cell morphology, mitochondrial morphology and glutamine oxidation. As mentioned above, to strengthen our evidence for the antagonistic role of FAK in ROCK-MLC2 signalling, we have now introduced an experiment whereby integrin-FAK signalling was disrupted through treatment with a detachment agent (Accutase), and subsequently maintaining the cells in suspension in laminin-free medium. We assessed pMLC2 S19 levels (a measure of ROCK activity) relating this to FAK phosphorylation that is supressed after integrin disengagement. These results were evaluated relative to spread wild type cells growing on laminin where Integrin-FAK signalling was active (Figure S4A and B). We observed an inverse relationship between Integrin-FAK signalling and ROCK-MLC2 activity in keeping with our conclusions (Figure 4A and B).

      Experimental support for the ability of cell-substrate interaction modulation to concomitantly impact cellular metabolism and motility/invasion would be significant both in terms of advancing our understanding of glioma cell biology and of its translational potential, but the evidence being provided is at best compatible with the proposed model.

      Response: We carried out a new experiment to support the ability of cell-substrate interaction modulation to impact metabolism; specifically, we inhibited cell-substrate interactions by plating the cells on Poly-2-hydroxyethyl methacrylate (Poly 2-HEMA)-coated dishes. This suppressed FAK phosphorylation at Y397, as expected, with concomitant reduction in glutamine utilisation in the TCA cycle (Figure S3A, B and C).

      My background/expertise is in developmental and adult neurogenesis, in vivo modelling of gliomagenesis and cell fate control/reprogramming, with a focus on molecular mechanisms of differentiation and quantitative aspects of lineage dynamics; molecular details of the control of cellular metabolism, cell-cell adhesion and cytoskeletal dynamics are not core expertise of mine.

      We appreciate this reviewer's expertise are not necessarily in the cancer cell biology and genetic intervention aspects of our study. We hope that the explanations we have provided satisfy the reviewer that our conclusions are valid.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Review of Masalmeh et al.

      Title: "FAK modulates glioblastoma stem cell energetics..."

      Previous studies have implicated FAK and the related tyrosine kinase PYK2 in glioblastoma growth, cell migration, and invasion. Herein, using a murine stem cell model of glioblastoma, the authors used CRISPR to inactivate FAK, FAK-null cells selected and cloned, and lentiviral re-expression of murine FAK in the FAK-null cells (termed FAK Rx) was accomplished. FAK-/- cells were shown to possess epithelial characteristics whereas FAK Rx cells expressed mesenchymal markers and increased cell migration/invasion in vitro. Comparisons between FAK-/- and FAK Rx cells showed that FAK re-expressed increased mitochondrial respiration and amino acid uptake. This was associated with FAK Rx cells exhibiting filamentous mitochondrial morphology (potentially an OXPHOS phenotype) and decreased levels of MTFR1L S235 phosphorylation (implicated in mito morphology fragmentation). Mito and epithelial cell morphology of FAK-/- cells was reversed by treatment with Rho-kinase inhibitors that also increased mito metabolism and cell viability. Last, FAK-dependent glioblastoma tumor growth was shown by comparisons of FAK-/- and FAK Rx implantation studies.

      The studies by Masalmeh provide interesting findings associating FAK expression with changes in mitochondrial morphology, energy metabolism, and glutamate uptake. According to the authors model, FAK expression is supporting a glioblastoma stem cell like phenotype in vitro and tumor growth in vivo. What remains unclear is the mechanistic connection to cell changes and whether or not these are be dependent on intrinsic FAK activity or as the Frame group has previously published, potentially FAK nuclear localization. The associations with MTFR1L phosphorylation and effects by Rho kinase inhibition are likely indirect and remind this reviewer of long-ago studies with FAK-null fibroblasts that exhibit epithelial characteristics, still express PYK2, exhibited elevated RhoA GTPase activity. Some of these phenotypes were linked to changes in RhoGEF and RhoGAP signaling with FAK and/or Pyk2. At a minimum, it would be informative to know whether Pyk2 signaling is relevant for observed phenotypes and whether the authors can further support their associations with FAK-targeted or FAK-Pyk2-targeted inhibitors or PROTACs.

      Some questions that would enhance potential impact.

      1. Cell generation. Please describe the analysis of FAK-/- clones in more detail. The "low viability" phenotype needs further explanation with regard to clonal expansion and growth characteristics?
      2. Figure 1F: need further support of MET change upon FAK KO and EMT reversion.
      3. Fig. 2: Need further support if FAK effects impact glycolysis or oxidative phosphorylation in particular as implicated by the stem cell model.
      4. Is there a combinatorial potential between FAKi and chemotherapies used for glioblastoma. Need to build upon past studies.
      5. The notation of changes in glucose transporter expression should be followed up with regard to the potential that FAK-expressing cells may have different uptake of carbon sources and other amino acids. Altered uptake could be one potential explanation for increase glycolysis and glutamine flux.
      6. It would be helpful to support the confocal microscopy of mitos with EM.
      7. Lack of FAK expression with increased MTFR1 phosphorylation is difficult to interpret.
      8. Need to have better support between loss of FAK and the increase in Rho signaling. Use of Rho kinase inhibitors is very limited and the context to FAK (and or Pyk2) remains unclear. Past studies have linked integrin adhesion to ECM as a linkage between FAK activation and the transient inhibition of RhoA GTP binding. Is integrin signaling and FAK involved in the cell and metabolism phenotypes in this new model?

      Significance

      The studies by Masalmeh provide interesting findings associating FAK expression with changes in mitochondrial morphology, energy metabolism, and glutamate uptake. According to the authors model, FAK expression is supporting a glioblastoma stem cell like phenotype in vitro and tumor growth in vivo. What remains unclear is the mechanistic connection to cell changes and whether or not these are be dependent on intrinsic FAK activity or as the Frame group has previously published, potentially FAK nuclear localization. The associations with MTFR1L phosphorylation and effects by Rho kinase inhibition are likely indirect and remind this reviewer of long-ago studies with FAK-null fibroblasts that exhibit epithelial characteristics, still express PYK2, exhibited elevated RhoA GTPase activity. Some of these phenotypes were linked to changes in RhoGEF and RhoGAP signaling with FAK and/or Pyk2. At a minimum, it would be informative to know whether Pyk2 signaling is relevant for observed phenotypes and whether the authors can further support their associations with FAK-targeted or FAK-Pyk2-targeted inhibitors or PROTACs.

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      RESPONSE TO REVIEWERS

      We thank the reviewers for their thoughtful and constructive feedback, which has been instrumental in improving the overall quality of our manuscript.

      In response, we have undertaken a substantial revision that includes new experimental data, refined analyses, and clearer presentation of our findings. Specifically, we have addressed concerns about RNAi efficiency and protein-level validation, expanded our genetic models to include loss-of-function contexts, and clarified the interpretation of mitochondrial morphology using both confocal and electron microscopy. We also incorporated new data on Cyclin E regulation and mitochondrial membrane potential to strengthen the mechanistic link between dPGC1 depletion and Yki-driven tumorigenesis. These revisions not only address the specific points raised by the reviewers but also enhance the coherence and impact of the study. We are confident that the revised manuscript presents a more robust and compelling case for the role of dPGC1 as a context-dependent tumor suppressor and that it will be of broad interest to the fields of developmental biology, cancer metabolism, and mitochondrial dynamics.

      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): Sew et al. examine the master regulator of mitochondrial biogenesis, dPGC1, in the context of Drosophila wing and larval development. They primarily use confocal imaging to probe the interplay between dPGC1 and an overactive Hippo pathway, driven by overexpression of the main effector protein, Yki. In their study, they find that tumors, driven by overactivity of Yki grow larger when dPGC1 is downregulated, implicating the mitochondrial biogenesis pathway in tumor suppression. Furthermore, in the context of Yki overexpression, they find that levels of Mfn or Opa1 modulate tumor size. Lastly, they show a role of cyclin E in controlling the size of tumors formed by Yki OE + dPGC1 RNAi. The potential role of dPGC1 as a tumor suppressor is interesting because it highlights an emerging recognition of mitochondria in the aetiology of cancer. However, before publication, much of the data in this manuscript should be strengthened by a refinement in the methods/analysis and an increase in orthogonal approaches.

      We addressed concerns regarding RNAi efficiency and wing development by incorporating data from a dPGC1 mutant allele and using a ubiquitous driver for qPCR validation of transgene efficiency. We clarified the rationale for EM use. The manuscript now avoids overinterpretation of mitochondrial morphology and focuses on fusion-specific regulators. We also revised the narrative arc to maintain coherence and added loss-of-function models to support our conclusions.

      Below, we address each of the reviewer’s points in detail.

      Major comments:

      The authors indicate that for example, in lines127-28, that neither downregulating or overexpressing dPGC1 affects wing size. However, the quantification in Fig. 1C shows a significant decrease in wing size following RNAi treatment. This decrease is modest, but it is nevertheless significant. It is worth pointing out, too, that the efficiency of the RNAi in Fig. S1C suggests that the conclusions drawn are premature. While a roughly 55% drop in mRNA levels may be statistically significant, it is unclear whether this drop in transcripts corresponds to a commensurate depletion of protein. Moreover, it is unclear, in this context, how much dPGC1 may indeed be necessary to drive a relatively normal program of mitochondrial biogenesis in wing development. To obtain a clear result, it is necessary to show significant depletion of the dPGC1 protein. (Ultimately, if it is the case that dPGC1 is unnecessary for wing development and function, a more coherent line of inquiry would be to find out the reason for this rather than to pivot the story to studying tumorigenesis in larva.)

      We agree that the interpretation of the RNAi efficiency data requires clarification.

      The qPCR analysis shown in former Fig. S1C was performed using wing discs from flies expressing UAS-dPGC1-RNAi under the control of the MS1096-Gal4 driver. However, as shown in current Fig. 1C, MS1096-Gal4 is not expressed uniformly across the wing disc. Some regions remain RFP-negative, indicating that the RNAi construct is not active in all cells. As a result, the measured mRNA levels likely underestimate the true knockdown efficiency. This is because the qPCR includes mRNA from both RNAi-expressing and non-expressing cells, diluting the apparent reduction in transcript levels.

      To address this limitation and more accurately assess RNAi efficiency, we repeated the qPCR analysis using a ubiquitous driver (actin-Gal4) to ensure uniform expression of the RNAi construct. Under these conditions, we observed a more substantial knockdown, with dPGC1 mRNA levels reduced to approximately 25% of control levels (this is shown in current Fig S2). This result indicates that the RNAi line is more effective than initially suggested by the MS1096-Gal4-based analysis.

      To complement our RNAi-based analysis, we additionally used a mutant strain carrying a characterized allele of dPGC1 (dPGC11, also known as dPGC1KG08646; see FlyBase: https://flybase.org/reports/FBal0148128). This genetically distinct approach allowed us to validate and strengthen our findings regarding dPGC1 function. Flies homozygous for this allele exhibited a modest but statistically significant reduction in both wing disc and adult wing size. These results support the conclusion that dPGC1 is required for normal wing growth and development. The new data are now included in Figure 1 and referenced in the main text (lines 144-153).

      Additionally, as suggested by the reviewer, we have revised the relevant section to maintain a coherent line of inquiry. The updated text can be found in lines 163–172.

      In Figure 3H-K, it is not clear why the authors used electron microscopy to evaluate mitochondrial morphology. The very good confocal images in Figure 3C-G show a clear change in mitochondrial morphology following the knockdown of Mfn, Opa1, and Miro. While it is clear from the electron micrographs in Figure H that the mitochondria are enlarged, it is not obvious that this increase in length is a result of increased mitochondrial fusion. Indeed, if the mean form factor were used to quantify the shape, it is likely that in both conditions, the value would be close to 1, indicating more of a round object, and it not obvious whether there would be a difference between the Yki OE versus the YkI OE + dPGC1 RNAi. Therefore, from this data alone, it cannot be concluded that the YkI OE + dPGC1 RNAi condition leads to mitochondrial hyperfusion.

      Our rationale for including electron microscopy (EM) was to overcome specific limitations in imaging mitochondrial morphology within the main epithelium of the wing disc, where Yki-driven tumors arise. These tumors were generated using ap-Gal4, which drives expression specifically in the main epithelium and is not active in the peripodial membrane. This is an important distinction, as the peripodial membrane—used in Figures 3C–G—has a squamous architecture and larger cytoplasmic volume, making it ideal for high-resolution confocal imaging and for assessing the effects of manipulating dMfn, Opa1, and miro. However, because ap-Gal4 is not expressed in the peripodial membrane, this tissue could not be used to analyze mitochondrial morphology in the actual tumorous context.

      To directly evaluate mitochondria in the main epithelium, we employed EM, which provides the resolution necessary to visualize ultrastructural changes that are not easily captured by confocal microscopy in this densely packed tissue. While EM does not directly measure fusion events, it allowed us to detect changes in mitochondrial size and shape that support our broader findings.

      We acknowledge that mitochondrial enlargement alone does not definitively demonstrate hyperfusion. However, the EM data were interpreted alongside additional evidence: the upregulation of mitochondrial fusion genes (dMfn and Opa1) in Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors, and functional data showing that overexpression of these genes promotes fusion in the peripodial membrane. Together, these findings suggest that dPGC1 depletion enhances mitochondrial fusion in Yki-driven tumors.

      To further clarify this point, we also imaged mitochondria in the main epithelium using confocal microscopy. However, the resolution was considerably lower than that achieved with EM, limiting our ability to assess fine mitochondrial structures. We have prepared a representative figure for the reviewer (below), showing representative confocal images of wing discs from three genotypes: (A) ap-Gal4, UAS-GFP (control), (B) ap-Gal4, UAS-Yki, and (C) ap-Gal4, UAS-Yki, UAS-dPGC1-RNAi. We used anti-ATP-synthase (Abcam, ab14748, dilution 1:200), to label the mitochondria for this Figure. Despite the lower resolution, mitochondria in the Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors appear elongated (yellow arrows) compared to those in the other conditions, consistent with the changes observed by EM. We believe this example illustrates the limitations of confocal imaging in this tissue and reinforces the need for EM to accurately assess mitochondrial morphology in the tumorous epithelium.

      While our EM analyses reveal mitochondrial enlargement in wing discs co-expressing Yki and PGC1-RNAi, we acknowledge that these structural features alone do not conclusively demonstrate mitochondrial hyperfusion. To address this, we have revised the manuscript to avoid overinterpreting the EM data and instead emphasize the functional relevance of mitochondrial fusion regulators such as dMfn and Opa1 in promoting tumor growth.

      Taken together, the EM analysis provides structural validation in the tumorous epithelium (Fig 4), while the confocal imaging and functional manipulation of fusion genes in the peripodial membrane offer mechanistic insight (Fig 3). This integrated approach strengthens the conclusion that PGC1 depletion in a Yki-overexpressing context promotes changes in mitochondrial morphology and contributes to tumorigenesis, independent of whether these changes reflect hyperfusion.

      Figure 4. refers to changes in mitochondrial fusion and fission in tumor formation; however, the authors do not attempt to alter mitochondrial fission factors, so it is not accurate to mention a role of mitochondrial fission, in this context.

      As we did not directly manipulate fission-related factors in our experiments, we agree that it would be inappropriate to draw conclusions about the role of mitochondrial fission in this context. Our revised figure (current Fig 5) and accompanying text now focus exclusively on the effects of mitochondrial fusion and the genes directly involved in regulating this process.

      It must be noted, too, that the authors have not demonstrated that their genetic interventions have actually affected mitochondrial morphology in these experiments. As noted in the previous figure, the Yki OE + dPGC1 RNAi condition showed enlarged mitochondria, but not necessarily hyperfused organelles. Therefore, the downregulation of Mfn or Opa1 in this set of experiments may not necessarily have altered mitochondrial morphology. Perhaps suppression of Mfn or Opa1 would normalize the areas of these evidently swollen mitochondria, but this is unclear without images. Furthermore, it should be appreciated that both Opa1 and Mfn exhibit pleiotropic attributes - e.g., Opa1 not only regulates IMM fusion, but it also modulates the shape and tightness of cristae membranes, specialized sites of oxidative phosphorylation as well as sequestration of cytochrome c, the release of which influences apoptosis (Frezza et al., 2006). At least in mammalian cells, Mfn2 is thought to regulate contacts between mitochondria and endoplasmic reticulum (Naon et al., 2023), which may serve other functions than OMM fusion, such as stabilization of the MAM.

      To directly address this point, we performed EM to assess mitochondrial ultrastructure in Yki + dPGC1-RNAi wing disc tumors, with and without dMfn1 downregulation, the most upregulated mitochondrial fusion gene in this tumor context. In Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors, mitochondria appeared more elongated, consistent with increased fusion. Upon dMfn1 depletion, we observed a dramatic shift in mitochondrial morphology: mitochondria became larger and more rounded, with disrupted cristae and onion-like structures, indicative of compromised mitochondrial integrity and function (see current Fig. 4).

      As the reviewer rightly notes, these morphological changes are consistent with the pleiotropic roles of Mfn and Opa1, which extend beyond outer and inner membrane fusion to include regulation of cristae architecture and ER-mitochondria contacts (Frezza et al., 2006; Naon et al., 2023). We now discuss these broader roles in the revised manuscript (lines 493–497). Taken together, our EM and confocal analyses, combined with targeted genetic manipulations, provide evidence that mitochondrial morphology is indeed altered in response to dPGC1 depletion and fusion gene deregulation in the wing disc.

      Figure 5 highlights a connection between dysregulation of mitochondria and Cyclin E, which allows cells to prematurely enter S phase. The data presented here do not offer clarity on whether the enlargement of the tumors results from increase cellular proliferation and/or cell size. The role of the cell cycle adds a layer of complexity to these results, because it is thought that mitochondria undergo fragmentation during the cell cycle to promote an even distribution of the organelle population after mitosis (Taguchi et al., 2007); however, in this manuscript, the authors contend that the downregulation dPGC1 is promoting mitochondrial hyperfusion. It is unclear how and whether cellular division and proliferation would proceed at an accelerated rate in a situation with mitochondrial hyperfusion.

      To address this point, we started by analyzing whether Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors exhibit increased proliferation compared to tumors expressing Yki alone. We quantified mitotic activity using the phospho-Histone H3 (PH3) marker of mitotic cells and observed a significant increase in PH3-positive cells in the Yki + dPGC1-RNAi condition. These results indicate an elevated proliferation rate in these tumors and are now presented in Fig 2O–Q. In the text, can be found in lines 221-228.

      We agree with the reviewer that our findings challenge the conventional view that mitochondrial fragmentation is a prerequisite for mitosis, as we observe increased expression of gene promoting mitochondrial fusion in the context of dPGC1 downregulation alongside signs of accelerated cell cycle entry. It is important to note that we also show that the levels of the oncogene Cyclin E, a key driver of cell cycle progression and S-phase entry, were elevated in Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors compared to those expressing Yki alone, suggesting that the increased proliferation observed is at least in part driven by enhanced cycle activity. To further probe Cyclin E’s role, we used the CycE-05306 heterozygous mutant allele, which reduces Cyclin E levels by ~50% without affecting normal development. Notably, this partial reduction strongly suppressed tumor growth in the Yki + dPGC1-RNAi background (Fig 6), underscoring Cyclin E’s functional importance in supporting oncogenic growth in this context.

      These findings support the notion that defects in the expression of mitochondrial genes involved in mitochondrial morphology induced by dPGC1 depletion do not impair but rather coincide with accelerated cell division.

      Minor comments:

      Lines 69-72 contrast the roles of PGC1α and β. It is not clear whether the comparison is of their respective roles in cancer or in normal physiology. In either case, it is important to note that PGC1β has been shown to drive mitochondrial fusion as well as biogenesis through its control of MFN2, among other factors (Liesa et al., 2008).

      In response, we have clarified the comparison between PGC1α and PGC1β in the introduction to specify that it refers to their roles in cancer. Additionally, we now acknowledge that PGC1β has been shown to promote mitochondrial biogenesis and fusion, notably through the regulation of MFN2, as demonstrated by Liesa et al. (2008). This reference has been added to provide a more balanced and accurate representation of PGC1β’s functions. In the text it can be found in lines 77-81.

      Although this study focuses on PGC1, the authors do not seem to site the original literature from the Spiegelman lab.

      In response to the reviewer’s comment, we have added a new section in the introduction that cites key foundational studies from the Spiegelman lab. This addition can be found in the introduction in lines 68-73.

      There are 10-20 grammatical errors throughout the text.

      We apologize for this. We have carefully revised the text, and we are very confident those errors have been corrected.

      **Referee Cross-commenting**

      There is agreement among the referees that the potential role of PGC1 as a tumor suppressor is interesting and significant. However, various aspects of this work require attention prior to publication. For example, there needs to be a complete knock down of PGC1 to come to any conclusion as to its role in wing development. The methods for analyzing mitochondrial morphology need to be clarified and be consistent with standards in the field of mitochondrial dynamics. Also, the authors need to quantify their Western blots to obtain accurate assessments of protein levels. Generally, the study relies too heavily on overexpression experiments; understanding the potential role of mitochondria in regulating the Hippo pathway should include various knockdown and/or knockout models.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):

      Overall, the authors show an interesting dampening effect of dPGC1 on growth of Yki-driven tumors. This data could be relevant for elucidating how dysregulation of the Hippo signalling pathway can underlie tumorigenesis.

      The narrative arc of the study, however, appears to lack a focused line of inquiry. Figure 1 highlights an attempt to modulate Drosophila wing size and/or structure by downregulating dPGC1, but to no effect. Although examination of the efficiency of the RNAi revealed that the transcripts were still present in significant quantities; so, the conclusion that dPGC1 is dispensable for wing formation is premature. To have clarity on this point, it would be necessary to completely knockdown the gene, preferably by showing a total loss of protein. This should be feasible for the authors, since they showed Western blotting in Figure 5A. In any event, it seems that this negative data led the authors to study the Hippo pathway in the larval stage. This transition from Figure 1 to 2 seemed somewhat arbitrary and leads to a rather disjointed sense of the main line of inquiry around dPGC1.

      It is important to note, too, that the authors highlight a role of mitochondrial dynamics in the pathway of Yki-driven tumor formation; however, they only directly evaluate mitochondrial dynamics in this context in a single assay, namely, Figure 3H-K, and this quantification is likely inaccurate because the mitochondria in the Yki OE + dPGC1 RNAi condition seem to be substantially enlarged, circular structures. It is critical to keep in mind that mitochondrial enlargement does not necessarily stem from hyperfusion. It could come from a decrease in the activity of Drp1 or result from an imbalance between mitochondrial biogenesis and mitophagy.

      As noted in our responses above, we have addressed these concerns by clarifying the limitations of our mitochondrial morphology analysis. Additionally, we have expanded the discussion (lines 498-504) to explicitly acknowledge that mitochondrial enlargement does not necessarily indicate hyperfusion. In that paragraph, we consider alternative explanations such as reduced fission or imbalances in mitochondrial biogenesis and mitophagy, and we outline the need for future studies using dynamic assays and additional markers to more precisely dissect mitochondrial remodeling in Yki-driven tumors.

      A marked limitation of this study is the overuse of rather artificial manipulations of transcriptional regulatory pathways. The study would benefit a lot from investigation of the loss of function of components of the Hippo pathway rather than just OE of Yki.

      We performed additional experiments using Warts (Wts) mutant clones to assess the role of dPGC1 in a loss-of-function context within the Hippo pathway. While our initial analyses were based on Yki overexpression, which allowed us to robustly probe the interaction between Yki and dPGC1, we agree that this approach may not fully reflect physiological conditions. By generating Wts mutant clones, which endogenously activate Yki through loss of upstream inhibition, we were able to evaluate the impact of dPGC1 depletion in a more physiologically relevant setting. These new results confirm and extend our previous findings, showing that dPGC1 limits tissue overgrowth even when Yki is activated through loss of Wts, thereby strengthening the biological relevance of our conclusions.

      These results are presented in Fig 2F-I. In the text, those results are presented in lines 181-189.

      My expertise is in mitochondrial biology, with specialization in super-resolution imaging, mitochondrial dynamics and membrane architecture. I have also worked in the interface between mitochondrial physiology and cancer. With this perspective, I think that the authors uncover a potentially interesting role of PGC1 as a tumor suppressor.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Summary In this manuscript the authors the investigate the role of the mitochondrial regulatory transcription factor dPGC1 in tissue growth and oncogenic transformation. They show that dPGC1 limits hyperplasia mediated by overexpression of Yki in the Drosophila wing disc, while having no effect on normal growth. dPGC1 depletion in discs overexpressing Yki results neoplastic overgrowth and hyperfused mitochondria, which was dependent on the increased expression of genes involved in promoting mitochondrial fusion. Additionally, the authors show that dPGC1 limits CycE levels post-transcriptionally in Yki tumors.

      In the revised version of our manuscript, we have clarified the relationship between our findings and prior work by Nagaraj et al., including new experiments that demonstrate the specificity of dPGC1’s role in Yki-driven growth. Specifically, we show that dPGC1 depletion does not enhance tissue overgrowth in EGFR or InR contexts, nor does it affect Yki expression or activity. Furthermore, we tested dPGC1 overexpression in Yki-overexpressing tissues and observed no significant changes in growth or mitochondrial fusion gene expression. Additional controls confirmed that Cyclin E upregulation is specific to the Yki + dPGC1 depletion condition, reinforcing the context-dependent nature of our findings.

      Each of the reviewer’s comments is addressed below.

      Major comments 1) The authors mention several times in passing in the results a manuscript from the Banerjee lab (Nagaraj et al 2012), which shows that many of the genes the authors of the present manuscript show are upregulated upon Yki overexpression + dPGC1-RNAi compared with Yki overexpression alone are in fact upregulated upon Yki overexpression alone compared with control (dMfn/marf, opa1, miro - while interestingly dPGC1 itself is not affected). Nagaraj et al further show that Yki-overexpressing discs have longer mitochondria suggesting increased fusion even in the absence of dPGC1 depletion. The findings from Nagaraj et al should be mentioned explicitly in the introduction and the relationship between this manuscript and the present work clearly outlined in the discussion.

      In the revised manuscript, we have now explicitly referenced the findings of Nagaraj et al. (2012) in the Introduction (lines 106-118), Results (lines 355-360) and Discussion (lines 466-468) sections.

      In the revised Introduction, we summarize their key observations that Yki overexpression alone upregulates mitochondrial fusion genes such as dMfn and Opa1, and leads to mitochondrial elongation, while not affecting dPGC1 expression.

      In the revised Results section, we mention that, building on that work, our study demonstrates that dPGC1 depletion further amplifies this effect, leading to enhanced mitochondrial elongation and tumor growth.

      In the revised Discussion, we now explicitly reference the findings by Nagaraj et al. (2012), which demonstrated that Yki overexpression promotes mitochondrial fusion and upregulates key fusion genes. We build upon this work by showing that dPGC1 depletion in a Yki-overexpressing background further enhances mitochondrial fusion gene expression and tumor growth. This supports a model in which dPGC1 acts as a safeguard against Yki-induced mitochondrial remodeling and oncogenesis, reinforcing its role as a context-dependent tumor suppressor.

      Importantly, we show that this effect is context-dependent and not observed in otherwise normal tissues, highlighting a sensitized mitochondrial response to Yki activation when dPGC1 is lost. These additions help delineate the novel contribution of our study in identifying dPGC1 as a critical modulator of mitochondrial dynamics and tumorigenesis downstream of Yki.

      2) Given that Yki overexpression alone induces mitochondrial fusion and that dMfn/marf and opa1 depletion suppresses Yki-induced overgrowth (Nagaraj et al), does dPGC1 overexpression also suppress Yki-induced overgrowth?

      If so, is this correlated with reduction in dMfn/marf and opa1 compared with Yki overexpression alone?

      In response, we performed additional experiments to assess whether dPGC1 overexpression influences Yki-driven overgrowth. We also analyzed the expression of mitochondrial fusion genes (dMfn and Opa1) in this context. As shown in new Fig. S8, dPGC1 overexpression in Yki-overexpressing wing discs did not significantly affect tissue growth, nor did it alter the mRNA levels of key fusion regulators, dMfn and Opa1. These findings suggest that the transcriptional upregulation of mitochondrial fusion genes observed upon dPGC1 depletion is not a general consequence of altered dPGC1 levels, but rather a specific response that emerges in the context of Yki activation. We now present and discuss these results in the revised manuscript (lines 278-285), highlighting the sensitized nature of mitochondrial remodeling in an oncogenic environment driven by Yki signaling.

      3) One important question raised by this study is: how specific is the effect of dPGC1 depletion to Yki-driven overgrowth? As Yki-driven overgrowth already have increased mitochondrial length, it is possible that Yki-expressing cells are already sensitised to the effects of dPGC1 depletion. Interestingly, Nagaraj et al show that mitochondrial morphology is not affected upon EGFR activation (hyperplasia) or upon scrib and avl depletion (neoplasia). The authors should therefore test if dPGC1 depletion can potentiate the growth of other hyperplasia drivers such as activated EGFR and InR in the wing disc.

      We tested whether the growth-suppressive effect of dPGC1 depletion was specific to Yki-driven overgrowth or could also potentiate tissue growth in other oncogenic contexts. Specifically, we downregulated dPGC1 in wing discs overexpressing either EGFR or InR. In both cases, we did not observe any enhancement of tissue overgrowth upon dPGC1 depletion, in contrast to what we observed in Yki-overexpressing discs. These results suggest that the sensitivity to dPGC1 depletion is specific to Yki-driven overgrowth and is not a general feature of hyperplastic growth induced by other oncogenes.

      These results are shown in Fig S4 and in lines 195-202.

      4) There are a few simple control experiments the authors should provide to clarify the relationship between Yki and dPGC1: - Are Yki levels affected by dPGC1 depletion?

      To address the potential regulation of Yki by dPGC1, we performed quantitative PCR (qPCR) analysis to measure the expression levels of yki and its well-established transcriptional targets—Cyclin E, Diap1, and bantam—in wing discs depleted of dPGC1. As shown in Fig. S3, we did not detect significant changes in the transcript levels of yki or its target genes, suggesting that the enhanced phenotype observed upon dPGC1 depletion is unlikely to be driven by increased Yki expression or activity. These results indicate that dPGC1 does not strongly influence Yki expression or activity. These new results are presented in lines 190-194.

      • Does dPGC1 knockdown alone modify the expression of the genes tested in Fig.3A? In other words, is this upregulation specific of the Yki-overexpression context?

      We have conducted this analysis, and the results are now presented in new Fig S7. While the trend is similar to that observed in tumors with both Yki depletion and dPGC1 depletion, the magnitude of change is smaller compared to the context of Yki overexpression. This is described in the text in lines 273-277.

      • Does dPCG1 knockdown also stabilise CycE in the absence of Yki overexpression or does the stabilisation of CycE occur only in Yki tumors?

      To address this, we examined Cyclin E levels in wing imaginal discs mutant for dPGC1 alone. Our analysis did not reveal any detectable changes in Cyclin E levels under these conditions. These findings suggest that the upregulation of Cyclin E is not a general consequence of dPGC1 loss, but rather a feature specific to the context of Yki overactivation. The corresponding data are now included in Fig S14 of the revised manuscript. In the text, it can be found in lines 442-448.

      5) Figure 3C-G: it is not clear how the authors can quantify the length of 3D structures like mitochondria from 2D TEM images (unless they have done volume reconstruction from consecutive sections) and no details are provided in the methods. The quantification of mitochondrial length has to be performed rigorously as it is a key part of the paper.

      We agree that TEM provides only 2D profiles of 3D mitochondrial structures, and that this does not allow for precise volumetric reconstruction. In our study, we measured the longest axis of mitochondria visible in thin TEM sections, which is a commonly used 2D proxy for mitochondrial length in the literature (e.g., PMID: 36367943 and PMID: 38637532). To avoid misunderstandings, we have clarified in the Material and Methods section that the reported values represent apparent mitochondrial length in 2D sections, not true 3D length. To enhance the accuracy of these estimates, we measured more than three tissues per genotype, multiple regions per tissue, several cells per region, and various fields of view per cell.

      Minor Comments:

      1) Line 51: "Mitochondria are highly dynamics organelles." should be "Mitochondria are highly dynamic organelles."

      We have corrected that mistake. Thanks!

      2) Introduction: the authors should summarise the known physiological functions of PGC1α in order to put their findings in context.

      We have added a section in the introduction (lines 66-81) summarizing the known physiological functions of PGC1α

      3) lines: 121-3: "...depletion of dPGC1...did not have a major impact on adult wing size and shape (Fig 1B, C)." There is a small but statistically significant difference so the authors should state this in the text.

      We have revised the text to acknowledge that dPGC1 depletion leads to a modest but statistically significant reduction in wing size. In addition to the original analysis, we have now included further experiments to strengthen this point. Specifically, we analyzed wings from flies homozygous for the dPGC11 allele (also known as dPGC1KG08646; see FlyBase: https://flybase.org/reports/FBal0148128) and confirmed a small but significant reduction in both wing disc and adult wing size compared to controls (this can be found in Fig. 1 and Fig. S1). These results support the conclusion that, although dPGC1 is dispensable for viability and gross morphology, it contributes to normal wing growth. These new results can be found in lines 144-153.

      4) Figure 5A (Cyclin E western blot): the authors should show molecular weight markers. In the revised version of our manuscript, we are including the molecular markers as indicated by the reviewer. These can be found in Fig S12.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      The manuscript by Sew et al builds on the previous work by Nagaraj et al to explore the role of mitochondrial function in tumors driven by disruption of the Hippo pathway. In particular, the authors identify dPGC1 as a transcription factor that limits Yki-driven mitochondrial fusion and tissue growth. Interestingly, they further show that Yki/PGC1-depleted tumors are highly sensitive to Cyclin E levels, due to post-transcriptional Cyclin E increase. These results further our knowledge of how Yki drives growth and how mitochondria participate in oncogenic transformation. With appropriate revision as outlined above (for example exploring whether the mechanism proposed is Yki-specific), the manuscript will be of broad interest to developmental and cancer biologists.

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      The manuscript presents compelling evidence that dPGC1 acts as a context-dependent tumor suppressor in Drosophila by modulating mitochondrial dynamics and limiting Yorkie (Yki)-induced oncogenic growth. By leveraging the Drosophila wing imaginal disc as a model, the authors investigate how dPGC1 depletion exacerbates Yki-driven tissue overgrowth, mitochondrial hyperfusion, Cyclin E upregulation, and DNA damage, leading to tumorigenesis. The study provides valuable insights into the interplay between mitochondrial dynamics and cancer, with implications for understanding metabolic regulation in oncogenesis. While the findings are significant and well-aligned with the field, certain aspects of the experimental design, data presentation, and mechanistic insights require further attention to enhance clarity, reproducibility, and impact. Below, I outline my major concerns and recommendations.

      We addressed concerns about RNAi efficiency and protein-level validation with new qPCR data and mutant analysis. We provided EM and confocal evidence of mitochondrial changes. We clarified non-autonomous effects and quantified Mmp1 and F-actin and added data on miro and Opa1 manipulations. Cyclin E quantification was expanded using multiple Western replicates and a validated mutant allele, and we included new data on mitochondrial membrane potential to assess functional consequences.

      Our detailed responses to each point raised by the reviewer are provided below.

      Major Points

      1. One point is the knock-down efficiency of dPGC1 on the mRNA level, which is between 30 to >50% (Fig. S1C). This is not too strong, so the question arises how severly the protein levels are affected. If possible, an antibody staining with quantification should be performed. From these data it cannot be concluded dPGC1 is not required for normal development, half the dose could be sufficient. How do wings look like when the ap-GAL4 driver is used for dPGC1 knock-down, as this is the driver used in the subsequent experiments? Reviewer 1 also raised concerns about the potential inefficiency of the RNAi treatment in revealing a function during normal wing growth. We agree with both reviewers that the interpretation of the RNAi efficiency data requires clarification.

      The qPCR analysis shown in former Fig. S1C was performed using wing discs from flies expressing UAS-dPGC1-RNAi under the control of the MS1096-Gal4 driver. However, as shown in current Fig. 1C, MS1096-Gal4 is not expressed uniformly across the wing disc. Some regions remain RFP-negative, indicating that the RNAi construct is not active in all cells. As a result, the measured mRNA levels likely underestimate the true knockdown efficiency. This is because the qPCR includes mRNA from both RNAi-expressing and non-expressing cells, diluting the apparent reduction in transcript levels.

      To address this limitation and more accurately assess RNAi efficiency, we repeated the qPCR analysis using a ubiquitous driver (actin-Gal4) to ensure uniform expression of the RNAi construct. Under these conditions, we observed a more substantial knockdown, with dPGC1 mRNA levels reduced to approximately 25% of control levels (this is shown in current Fig S2). This result indicates that the RNAi line is more effective than initially suggested by the MS1096-Gal4-based analysis.

      To complement our RNAi-based analysis, we additionally used a mutant strain carrying a characterized allele of dPGC1 (dPGC11, also known as dPGC1KG08646; see FlyBase: https://flybase.org/reports/FBal0148128). This genetically distinct approach allowed us to validate and strengthen our findings regarding dPGC1 function. Flies homozygous for this allele exhibited a modest but statistically significant reduction in both wing disc and adult wing size. These results support the conclusion that dPGC1 is required for normal wing growth and development. The new data are now included in Figure 1 and referenced in the main text (lines 144-151).

      Unfortunately, we cannot perform antibody staining due to the unavailability of antibodies against dPGC1.

      How does the wing disc look like when dPGC1 is overepressed together with Yki?

      In response, we performed additional experiments to assess whether dPGC1 overexpression influences Yki-driven overgrowth. We also analyzed the expression of mitochondrial fusion genes (dMfn and Opa1) in this context. As shown in new Fig. S8, dPGC1 overexpression in Yki-overexpressing wing discs did not significantly affect tissue growth, nor did it alter the mRNA levels of key fusion regulators, dMfn and Opa1. These findings suggest that the transcriptional upregulation of mitochondrial fusion genes observed upon dPGC1 depletion is not a general consequence of altered dPGC1 levels, but rather a specific response that emerges in the context of Yki activation. We now present and discuss these results in the revised manuscript (lines 278-285), highlighting the sensitized nature of mitochondrial remodeling in an oncogenic environment driven by Yki signaling.

      In Fig 2D (but also in Fig. 2C) not only cells in the dorsal but also in the ventral comparmtent seem to overproliferate. Either this is a mis-conception or it is a non-autonomous effect from interfering with Yki and dPGC1 in the vertrnal compartment. In either cases, this has to be clarified.

      Ventral cells are not labelled by GFP. Fig 3D shows a tumor in which GFP-negative cells are not present, suggesting that they are not overproliferating but rather being eliminated. This phenomenon is consistent with cell competition, a well-characterized process in which transformed or tumorigenic cells outcompete and eliminate neighboring wild-type cells. We have previously described this behavior in wing disc tumors (PMID: 26853367; DOI: 10.1016/j.cub.2015.12.042), and it likely contributes to the expansion of the tumor mass by removing surrounding normal tissue also in this context.

      In Fig. 2F-H quantification of Mmp1 and F-actin is missing. Mmp1 is a JNK target, so the authors could do in addition an anti-phospho JNK antibody staining.

      In response, we have performed those quantifications. They are now included in Fig 2M, N.

      In Fig. 3: how does the mitochondrial network look like in the wing disc periopodial epithelium using the Gug>Yki+dPGC1 genotype? Is it similar to Gug>dMfn or Gug>miro?

      We attempted to perform this analysis; however, Yki overexpression under the control of Gug-GAL4 resulted in larval lethality, likely due to GAL4 activity in essential tissues such as the central nervous system. As a result, we were only able to induce transgene expression for 24 hours before lethality occurred.

      At this early point, no detectable changes in mitochondrial morphology were observed in the peripodial membrane, likely because the duration of transgene expression was insufficient to elicit phenotypic alterations in this specific tissue. Therefore, while we aimed to compare this genotype to Gug>dMfn and Gug>miro, the technical limitations prevented a conclusive analysis.

      We have prepared a representative figure for the reviewer (below), showing representative confocal images of wing discs showing mito-GFP and Dapi in the three genotypes indicated in the Fig.

      In Fig. 3I: what is really the mitochondrion? It would be good to outline the region(s) that was/were measured.

      To improve clarity, we have repeated the electron microscopy (EM) analysis and now provide representative images that more clearly illustrate mitochondrial morphology in the different genotypes analyzed. These updated images presented in Fig 4 better highlight the structural alterations observed upon genetic manipulation and help clarify the basis for our morphological assessments.

      We have extended our analysis and have assessed mitochondrial ultrastructure in Yki + dPGC1-RNAi wing disc tumors, with and without dMfn1 downregulation—the most upregulated mitochondrial fusion gene in this tumor context. In Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors, mitochondria appeared more elongated, consistent with increased fusion. Upon dMfn1 depletion, we observed a dramatic shift in mitochondrial morphology: mitochondria became larger and more rounded, with disrupted cristae and onion-like structures, indicative of compromised mitochondrial integrity and function (see new Fig 4).

      A quantification of RNAi and overexpression efficiencies of the different transgenes in Fig. 3 is required.

      To assess the efficiency of RNAi-mediated knockdown and transgene overexpression, we performed quantitative PCR (qPCR) using the ubiquitous Actin-Gal4 driver. While we acknowledge that this driver does not replicate the spatial specificity of the periodic membrane Gal4 driver used in the experiments shown in Figure 3 (Gug-Gal4), the latter targets a very limited number of cells within the imaginal disc, making reliable qPCR quantification unfeasible.

      Using Actin-Gal4 allows us to obtain a relative and informative measure of transgene efficiency across the different constructs. These data confirm effective knockdown and overexpression of the relevant genes and are now included in Figure S2.

      In Fig. 4: what is the phenotype when miro is over-expressed in combination with Yki? Or when it is knocked down in the ap>Yki-dPGC1 background? This was the gene tested in Fig. 3 with a clear mitochondrial phenotype

      To address whether miro contributes to Yki-mediated tumor growth, we performed the requested experiments and now include the results in the revised manuscript (see updated Results section, lines 374-377, and new Fig. S11).

      Our data show that overexpression of miro in combination with Yki does not lead to a significant increase in tissue growth or tumor-like phenotypes, in contrast to the effects observed with dMfn or Opa1 overexpression. Similarly, knockdown of miro in the ap>Yki-dPGC1-RNAi background did not suppress tumor growth, indicating that miro is not required for the enhanced proliferation observed in this context.

      These findings suggest that, although miro influences mitochondrial morphology in normal wing discs (as shown in Fig. 3), its role in tumorigenesis is distinct from that of dMfn and Opa1. We have revised the manuscript to clarify the gene-specific contributions of mitochondrial fusion regulators to Yki-driven tumorigenesis. This distinction underscores the complexity of mitochondrial dynamics and highlights that not all fusion-related genes exert the same functional impact in oncogenic settings.

      How does the mitochondrial morphology in the wing disc peripodial epithelium look like in Gug>Opa1RNAi or Gug>Opa1 discs?

      To assess the impact of Opa1 on mitochondrial morphology in the peripodial epithelium of the wing disc, we used the Gug-GAL4 driver to either overexpress or knock down Opa1. Our analysis revealed that Opa1 overexpression led to slightly elongated mitochondria, but did not result in extensive network formation, suggesting a modest enhancement of inner membrane fusion. In contrast, Opa1 knockdown caused clear mitochondrial fragmentation, closely resembling the phenotype observed upon dMfn depletion. These results shown in Fig 3 are consistent with the distinct roles of Opa1 and dMfn in regulating mitochondrial fusion: Opa1 primarily modulates inner membrane fusion and cristae architecture, while dMfn drives outer membrane fusion and network connectivity.

      The corresponding data are presented in Figure 3F, G, and quantified in Figure S9, alongside experiments manipulating other genes involved in mitochondrial dynamics.

      Why have the authors switched between the ap>Yki+dPGCRNAi and the ap>Yki+dPGC1shRNA lines? It would be important to have this series of experiments in the same backgrounds, as KD efficiencies are different (Fig. S1C).

      The primary reason for switching between the dPGC1-RNAi and dPGC1-shRNA lines was practical: the chromosomal insertion sites of the transgenes made certain genetic combinations more feasible with one line over the other. This flexibility significantly facilitated our experimental design and analysis.

      To address concerns regarding knockdown efficiency, we performed a comparative analysis using the ubiquitous actin-GAL4 driver, rather than MS1096-GAL4, which exhibits patchy and dynamic expression in the wing imaginal disc. This allowed us to obtain a more consistent and interpretable measure of mRNA downregulation for both transgenes. Our results show that both lines achieve comparable levels of knockdown, as shown in Figure S2.

      Fig. 5A: proper quantification of Western Blot signals is required. I do not agree that Cyclin E protein levels are elevated in ap>Yki or ap>Yki+dPGC1 discs. Even at the mRNA levels the increase in expression is rather weak. From these results nothing can be concluded.

      We have repeated the Western blot analysis using seven independent membranes to ensure robust quantification of Cyclin E levels in ap>Yki and ap>Yki+dPGC1-RNAi wing discs (Fig 6).

      Although the increase in Cyclin E protein levels is subtle, it is consistent across replicates and statistically significant. We have now included the quantification of these Western blot signals in the revised Figure 6, which supports the conclusion that Cyclin E levels are elevated in ap>Yki+dPGC1 discs.

      We hope this additional data addresses the reviewer’s concern and strengthens the interpretation of our results.

      Knock-down efficiencies for dap and CycE needs to be quantifiec (Fig. 5H-N). Although the rescue experiment with CycE knock down is from the phenotype convincing, it is nonetheless puzzling, as CycE is accodring to Fig. 5A+B hardly upregulated. An independent CycE RNAi line would be useful.

      We have quantified the knockdown efficiency of the dap-RNAi line, and the results are included in Figure S13.

      Regarding Cyclin E, we would like to clarify that we did not use an RNAi line in this experiment. Instead, we employed the CycE-05306 mutant allele in a heterozygous background, which is expected to reduce Cyclin E levels by approximately 50%. The CycE-05306 allele in Drosophila melanogaster is a loss-of-function allele of the Cyclin E gene. This allele carries a P-element insertion in the first intron of the CycE gene, which disrupts normal transcription and reduces Cyclin E expression. In a heterozygous background, as used in your experiments, CycE-05306/+ is expected to reduce Cyclin E levels by approximately 50%, which is typically sufficient to observe genetic interactions or sensitized phenotypes without affecting normal development. This makes it a valuable tool for studying gene dosage effects, particularly in tumor models where Cyclin E activity may be rate-limiting.

      Importantly, this partial reduction does not impair normal tissue growth, but it strongly limits tumor growth in the context of Yki overexpression combined with dPGC1 downregulation, as shown in Figure 6. This selective sensitivity highlights the functional importance of Cyclin E in supporting oncogenic growth driven by Yki and dPGC1 depletion. We believe this provides compelling evidence for Cyclin E’s role in this tumor model.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      Strengths and Limitations of the Study Strengths Innovative Focus on Mitochondrial Dynamics and Oncogenesis: The study provides compelling evidence linking mitochondrial dynamics, particularly hyperfusion, to tumorigenesis in Drosophila. The identification of dPGC1 as a context-dependent tumor suppressor adds novel insights into the interplay between metabolism and oncogenesis. Comprehensive Use of Drosophila as a Model System: The study leverages the genetic tractability of Drosophila, allowing precise manipulation of mitochondrial regulators and signaling pathways. The use of wing imaginal discs as a model for tumor growth is well-established and appropriate. Integration of Morphological and Genetic Data: The manuscript combines confocal imaging, electron microscopy, and genetic tools to demonstrate the role of dPGC1 in regulating mitochondrial dynamics, Cyclin E levels, and tissue overgrowth. Relevance to Cancer Biology: The findings address key hallmarks of cancer, including deregulated metabolism, genomic instability, and cell cycle misregulation. The study's exploration of these processes in a simple model organism provides a strong basis for translating findings to mammalian systems.

      Limitations Validation of RNAi and Overexpression Efficiency: The knockdown efficiency of dPGC1 on the mRNA level is only moderate (30-50%), and protein-level validation is missing. Without this, the study cannot conclusively demonstrate the role of dPGC1 in normal development or tumorigenesis. Incomplete Mechanistic Insights: The manuscript identifies Cyclin E as a potential driver of tumor growth but does not adequately explore how mitochondrial hyperfusion leads to Cyclin E regulation (e.g., post-transcriptional mechanisms or protein stability). Inconsistencies in Experimental Backgrounds: The study uses different RNAi/shRNA lines and driver combinations inconsistently across experiments, making it difficult to compare results directly. This variability undermines the robustness of the conclusions. Limited Functional Analysis of Mitochondria: While mitochondrial morphology is well-characterized, functional assays (e.g., membrane potential or ATP production) are missing. These would confirm the impact of hyperfusion on cellular energetics and oncogenesis.

      In the revised manuscript, we have addressed each of the concerns raised.

      In addition to that, in the revised version of the manuscript, we have included new experiments to assess mitochondrial functionality in tumors co-expressing Yki and dPGC1-RNAi. Specifically, we analyzed the Mitochondrial Membrane Potential (MMP). We used TMRE staining to evaluate MMP, a key indicator of mitochondrial integrity and oxidative phosphorylation capacity. Our analysis revealed no significant differences in MMP between Yki tumors and Yki + dPGC1-RNAi tumors, suggesting that mitochondrial membrane potential is preserved despite the observed morphological abnormalities. These results are shown in Fig S6. In the text it is discussed in lines 233-243.

      Contribution to Existing Literature The study makes a significant contribution to the growing body of literature on the metabolic regulation of cancer by identifying dPGC1 as a tumor suppressor modulating mitochondrial dynamics. Previous work has established the dual roles of mammalian PGC1α in promoting or suppressing cancer depending on context. This study adds depth by demonstrating similar context-dependent effects in a simpler model organism, facilitating further exploration of the molecular mechanisms involved.

      By linking mitochondrial fusion, Yki signaling, and Cyclin E regulation, the manuscript aligns with and expands upon research on Hippo pathway regulation, cancer metabolism, and mitochondrial biology. The findings highlight the importance of integrating metabolic and signaling networks in understanding oncogenesis.

      Community Selection The current form of the manuscript is best suited for a specialized audience, particularly mitochondrial biologists, Drosophila researchers, and Hippo pathway specialists. To engage a broader community, additional work linking these findings to mammalian models or human cancer biology would be necessary.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      The manuscript presents compelling evidence that dPGC1 acts as a context-dependent tumor suppressor in Drosophila by modulating mitochondrial dynamics and limiting Yorkie (Yki)-induced oncogenic growth. By leveraging the Drosophila wing imaginal disc as a model, the authors investigate how dPGC1 depletion exacerbates Yki-driven tissue overgrowth, mitochondrial hyperfusion, Cyclin E upregulation, and DNA damage, leading to tumorigenesis. The study provides valuable insights into the interplay between mitochondrial dynamics and cancer, with implications for understanding metabolic regulation in oncogenesis. While the findings are significant and well-aligned with the field, certain aspects of the experimental design, data presentation, and mechanistic insights require further attention to enhance clarity, reproducibility, and impact. Below, I outline my major concerns and recommendations.

      Major Points

      1. One point is the knock-down efficiency of dPGC1 on the mRNA level, which is between 30 to >50% (Fig. S1C). This is not too strong, so the question arises how severly the protein levels are affected. If possible, an antibody staining with quantification should be performed. From these data it cannot be concluded dPGC1 is not required for normal development, half the dose could be sufficient. How do wings look like when the ap-GAL4 driver is used for dPGC1 knock-down, as this is the driver used in the subsequent experiments?
      2. How does the wing disc look like when dPGC1 is overepressed together with Yki?
      3. In Fig 2D (but also in Fig. 2C) not only cells in the dorsal but also in the ventral comparmtent seem to overproliferate. Either this is a mis-conception or it is a non-autonomous effect from interfering with Yki and dPGC1 in the vertrnal compartment. In either cases, this has to be clarified.
      4. In Fig. 2F-H quantification of Mmp1 and F-actin is missing. Mmp1 is a JNK target, so the authors could do in addition an anti-phospho JNK antibody staining.
      5. In Fig. 3: how does the mitochondrial network look like in the wing disc periopodial epithelium using the Gug>Yki+dPGC1 genotype? Is it similar to Gug>dMfn or Gug>miro?
      6. In Fig. 3I: what is really the mitochondrion? It would be good to outline the region(s) that was/were measured.
      7. A quantification of RNAi and overexpression efficiencies of the different transgenes in Fig. 3 is required.
      8. In Fig. 4: what is the phenotype when miro is over-expressed in combination with Yki? Or when it is knocked down in the ap>Yki-dPGC1 background? This was the gene tested in Fig. 3 with a clear mitochondrial phenotype. How does the mitochondrial morphology in the wing disc peripodial epithelium look like in Gug>Opa1RNAi or Gug>Opa1 discs? Why have the authors switched between the ap>Yki+dPGCRNAi and the ap>Yki+dPGC1shRNA lines? It would be important to have this series of experiments in the same backgrounds, as KD efficiencies are different (Fig. S1C).
      9. Fig. 5A: proper quantification of Western Blot signals is required. I do not agree that Cyclin E protein levels are elevated in ap>Yki or ap>Yki+dPGC1 discs. Even at the mRNA levels the increase in expression is rather weak. From these results nothing can be concluded.
      10. Knock-down efficincies for dap and CycE needs to be quantifiec (Fig. 5H-N). Although the rescue experiment with CycE knock down is from the phenotype convincing, it is nonetheless puzzling, as CycE is accodring to Fig. 5A+B hardly upregulated. An independent CycE RNAi line would be useful.

      Significance

      Strengths and Limitations of the Study

      Strengths

      Innovative Focus on Mitochondrial Dynamics and Oncogenesis: The study provides compelling evidence linking mitochondrial dynamics, particularly hyperfusion, to tumorigenesis in Drosophila. The identification of dPGC1 as a context-dependent tumor suppressor adds novel insights into the interplay between metabolism and oncogenesis. Comprehensive Use of Drosophila as a Model System: The study leverages the genetic tractability of Drosophila, allowing precise manipulation of mitochondrial regulators and signaling pathways. The use of wing imaginal discs as a model for tumor growth is well-established and appropriate. Integration of Morphological and Genetic Data: The manuscript combines confocal imaging, electron microscopy, and genetic tools to demonstrate the role of dPGC1 in regulating mitochondrial dynamics, Cyclin E levels, and tissue overgrowth. Relevance to Cancer Biology: The findings address key hallmarks of cancer, including deregulated metabolism, genomic instability, and cell cycle misregulation. The study's exploration of these processes in a simple model organism provides a strong basis for translating findings to mammalian systems.

      Limitations

      Validation of RNAi and Overexpression Efficiency: The knockdown efficiency of dPGC1 on the mRNA level is only moderate (30-50%), and protein-level validation is missing. Without this, the study cannot conclusively demonstrate the role of dPGC1 in normal development or tumorigenesis. Incomplete Mechanistic Insights: The manuscript identifies Cyclin E as a potential driver of tumor growth but does not adequately explore how mitochondrial hyperfusion leads to Cyclin E regulation (e.g., post-transcriptional mechanisms or protein stability). Inconsistencies in Experimental Backgrounds: The study uses different RNAi/shRNA lines and driver combinations inconsistently across experiments, making it difficult to compare results directly. This variability undermines the robustness of the conclusions. Limited Functional Analysis of Mitochondria: While mitochondrial morphology is well-characterized, functional assays (e.g., membrane potential or ATP production) are missing. These would confirm the impact of hyperfusion on cellular energetics and oncogenesis.

      Contribution to Existing Literature

      The study makes a significant contribution to the growing body of literature on the metabolic regulation of cancer by identifying dPGC1 as a tumor suppressor modulating mitochondrial dynamics. Previous work has established the dual roles of mammalian PGC1α in promoting or suppressing cancer depending on context. This study adds depth by demonstrating similar context-dependent effects in a simpler model organism, facilitating further exploration of the molecular mechanisms involved.

      By linking mitochondrial fusion, Yki signaling, and Cyclin E regulation, the manuscript aligns with and expands upon research on Hippo pathway regulation, cancer metabolism, and mitochondrial biology. The findings highlight the importance of integrating metabolic and signaling networks in understanding oncogenesis.

      Community Selection

      The current form of the manuscript is best suited for a specialized audience, particularly mitochondrial biologists, Drosophila researchers, and Hippo pathway specialists. To engage a broader community, additional work linking these findings to mammalian models or human cancer biology would be necessary.

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      Summary

      In this manuscript the authors the investigate the role of the mitochondrial regulatory transcription factor dPGC1 in tissue growth and oncogenic transformation. They show that dPGC1 limits hyperplasia mediated by overexpression of Yki in the Drosophila wing disc, while having no effect on normal growth. dPGC1 depletion in discs overexpressing Yki results neoplastic overgrowth and hyperfused mitochondria, which was dependent on the increased expression of genes involved in promoting mitochondrial fusion. Additionally, the authors show that dPGC1 limits CycE levels post-transcriptionally in Yki tumors.

      Major comments

      1. The authors mention several times in passing in the results a manuscript from the Banerjee lab (Nagaraj et al 2012), which shows that many of the genes the authors of the present manuscript show are upregulated upon Yki overexpression + dPGC1-RNAi compared with Yki overexpression alone are in fact upregulated upon Yki overexpression alone compared with control (dMfn/marf, opa1, miro - while interestingly dPGC1 itself is not affected). Nagaraj et al further show that Yki-overexpressing discs have longer mitochondria suggesting increased fusion even in the absence of dPGC1 depletion. The findings from Nagaraj et al should be mentioned explicitly in the introduction and the relationship between this manuscript and the present work clearly outlined in the discussion.
      2. Given that Yki overexpression alone induces mitochondrial fusion and that dMfn/marf and opa1 depletion suppresses Yki-induced overgrowth (Nagaraj et al), does dPGC1 overexpression also suppress Yki-induced overgrowth? If so, is this correlated with reduction in dMfn/marf and opa1 compared with Yki overexpression alone?
      3. One important question raised by this study is: how specific is the effect of dPGC1 depletion to Yki-driven overgrowth? As Yki-driven overgrowth already have increased mitochondrial length, it is possible that Yki-expressing cells are already sensitised to the effects of dPGC1 depletion. Interestingly, Nagaraj et al show that mitochondrial morphology is not affected upon EGFR activation (hyperplasia) or upon scrib and avl depletion (neoplasia). The authors should therefore test if dPGC1 depletion can potentiate the growth of other hyperplasia drivers such as activated EGFR and InR in the wing disc.
      4. There are a few simple control experiments the authors should provide to clarify the relationship between Yki and dPGC1:
        • Are Yki levels affected by dPGC1 depletion?
        • Does dPGC1 knockdown alone modify the expression of the genes tested in Fig.3A? In other words, is this upregulation specific of the Yki-overexpression context?
        • Does dPCG1 knockdown also stabilise CycE in the absence of Yki overexpression or does the stabilisation of CycE occur only in Yki tumors?
      5. Figure 3C-G: it is not clear how the authors can quantify the length of 3D structures like mitochondria from 2D TEM images (unless they have done volume reconstruction from consecutive sections) and no details are provided in the methods. The quantification of mitochondrial length has to be performed rigorously as it is a key part of the paper.

      Minor Comments:

      1. Line 51: "Mitochondria are highly dynamics organelles." should be "Mitochondria are highly dynamic organelles."
      2. Introduction: the authors should summarise the known physiological functions of PGC1α in order to put their findings in context.
      3. lines: 121-3: "...depletion of dPGC1...did not have a major impact on adult wing size and shape (Fig 1B, C)." There is a small but statistically significant difference so the authors should state this in the text.
      4. Figure 5A (Cyclin E western blot): the authors should show molecular weight markers.

      Significance

      The manuscript by Sew et al builds on the previous work by Nagaraj et al to explore the role of mitochondrial function in tumors driven by disruption of the Hippo pathway. In particular, the authors identify dPGC1 as a transcription factor that limits Yki-driven mitochondrial fusion and tissue growth. Interestingly, they further show that Yki/PGC1-depleted tumors are highly sensitive to Cyclin E levels, due to post-transcriptional Cyclin E increase. These results further our knowledge of how Yki drives growth and how mitochondria participate in oncogenic transformation. With appropriate revision as outlined above (for example exploring whether the mechanism proposed is Yki-specific), the manuscript will be of broad interest to developmental and cancer biologists.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Sew et al. examine the master regulator of mitochondrial biogenesis, dPGC1, in the context of Drosophila wing and larval development. They primarily use confocal imaging to probe the interplay between dPGC1 and an overactive Hippo pathway, driven by overexpression of the main effector protein, Yki. In their study, they find that tumors, driven by overactivity of Yki grow larger when dPGC1 is downregulated, implicating the mitochondrial biogenesis pathway in tumor suppression. Furthermore, in the context of Yki overexpression, they find that levels of Mfn or Opa1 modulate tumor size. Lastly, they show a role of cyclin E in controlling the size of tumors formed by Yki OE + dPGC1 RNAi. The potential role of dPGC1 as a tumor suppressor is interesting because it highlights an emerging recognition of mitochondria in the aetiology of cancer. However, before publication, much of the data in this manuscript should be strengthened by a refinement in the methods/analysis and an increase in orthogonal approaches.

      Major comments:

      The authors indicate that for example, in lines127-28, that neither downregulating or overexpressing dPGC1 affects wing size. However, the quantification in Fig. 1C shows a significant decrease in wing size following RNAi treatment. This decrease is modest, but it is nevertheless significant. It is worth pointing out, too, that the efficiency of the RNAi in Fig. S1C suggests that the conclusions drawn are premature. While a roughly 55% drop in mRNA levels may be statistically significant, it is unclear whether this drop in transcripts corresponds to a commensurate depletion of protein. Moreover, it is unclear, in this context, how much dPGC1 may indeed be necessary to drive a relatively normal program of mitochondrial biogenesis in wing development. To obtain a clear result, it is necessary to show significant depletion of the dPGC1 protein. (Ultimately, if it is the case that dPGC1 is unnecessary for wing development and function, a more coherent line of inquiry would be to find out the reason for this rather than to pivot the story to studying tumorigenesis in larva.)

      In Figure 3H-K, it is not clear why the authors used electron microscopy to evaluate mitochondrial morphology. The very good confocal images in Figure 3C-G show a clear change in mitochondrial morphology following the knockdown of Mfn, Opa1, and Miro. While it is clear from the electron micrographs in Figure H that the mitochondria are enlarged, it is not obvious that this increase in length is a result of increased mitochondrial fusion. Indeed, if the mean form factor were used to quantify the shape, it is likely that in both conditions, the value would be close to 1, indicating more of a round object, and it not obvious whether there would be a difference between the Yki OE versus the YkI OE + dPGC1 RNAi. Therefore, from this data alone, it cannot be concluded that the YkI OE + dPGC1 RNAi condition leads to mitochondrial hyperfusion.

      Figure 4. refers to changes in mitochondrial fusion and fission in tumor formation; however, the authors do not attempt to alter mitochondrial fission factors, so it is not accurate to mention a role of mitochondrial fission, in this context. It must be noted, too, that the authors have not demonstrated that their genetic interventions have actually affected mitochondrial morphology in these experiments. As noted in the previous figure, the Yki OE + dPGC1 RNAi condition showed enlarged mitochondria, but not necessarily hyperfused organelles. Therefore, the downregulation of Mfn or Opa1 in this set of experiments may not necessarily have altered mitochondrial morphology. Perhaps suppression of Mfn or Opa1 would normalize the areas of these evidently swollen mitochondria, but this is unclear without images. Furthermore, it should be appreciated that both Opa1 and Mfn exhibit pleiotropic attributes - e.g., Opa1 not only regulates IMM fusion, but it also modulates the shape and tightness of cristae membranes, specialized sites of oxidative phosphorylation as well as sequestration of cytochrome c, the release of which influences apoptosis (Frezza et al., 2006). At least in mammalian cells, Mfn2 is thought to regulate contacts between mitochondria and endoplasmic reticulum (Naon et al., 2023), which may serve other functions than OMM fusion, such as stabilization of the MAM.

      Figure 5 highlights a connection between dysregulation of mitochondria and Cyclin E, which allows cells to prematurely enter S phase. The data presented here do not offer clarity on whether the enlargement of the tumors results from increase cellular proliferation and/or cell size. The role of the cell cycle adds a layer of complexity to these results, because it is thought that mitochondria undergo fragmentation during the cell cycle to promote an even distribution of the organelle population after mitosis (Taguchi et al., 2007); however, in this manuscript, the authors contend that the downregulation dPGC1 is promoting mitochondrial hyperfusion. It is unclear how and whether cellular division and proliferation would proceed at an accelerated rate in a situation with mitochondrial hyperfusion.

      Minor comments:

      Lines 69-72 contrast the roles of PGC1α and β. It is not clear whether the comparison is of their respective roles in cancer or in normal physiology. In either case, it is important to note that PGC1β has been shown to drive mitochondrial fusion as well as biogenesis through its control of MFN2, among other factors (Liesa et al., 2008).

      Although this study focuses on PGC1, the authors do not seem to site the original literature from the Spiegelman lab.

      There are 10-20 grammatical errors throughout the text.

      Referee Cross-commenting

      There is agreement among the referees that the potential role of PGC1 as a tumor suppressor is interesting and significant. However, various aspects of this work require attention prior to publication. For example, there needs to be a complete knock down of PGC1 to come to any conclusion as to its role in wing development. The methods for analyzing mitochondrial morphology need to be clarified and be consistent with standards in the field of mitochondrial dynamics. Also, the authors need to quantify their Western blots to obtain accurate assessments of protein levels. Generally, the study relies too heavily on overexpression experiments; understanding the potential role of mitochondria in regulating the Hippo pathway should include various knockdown and/or knockout models.

      Significance

      Overall, the authors show an interesting dampening effect of dPGC1 on growth of Yki-driven tumors. This data could be relevant for elucidating how dysregulation of the Hippo signalling pathway can underlie tumorigenesis.

      The narrative arc of the study, however, appears to lack a focused line of inquiry. Figure 1 highlights an attempt to modulate Drosophila wing size and/or structure by downregulating dPGC1, but to no effect. Although examination of the efficiency of the RNAi revealed that the transcripts were still present in significant quantities; so, the conclusion that dPGC1 is dispensable for wing formation is premature. To have clarity on this point, it would be necessary to completely knockdown the gene, preferably by showing a total loss of protein. This should be feasible for the authors, since they showed Western blotting in Figure 5A. In any event, it seems that this negative data led the authors to study the Hippo pathway in the larval stage. This transition from Figure 1 to 2 seemed somewhat arbitrary and leads to a rather disjointed sense of the main line of inquiry around dPGC1.

      It is important to note, too, that the authors highlight a role of mitochondrial dynamics in the pathway of Yki-driven tumor formation; however, they only directly evaluate mitochondrial dynamics in this context in a single assay, namely, Figure 3H-K, and this quantification is likely inaccurate because the mitochondria in the Yki OE + dPGC1 RNAi condition seem to be substantially enlarged, circular structures. It is critical to keep in mind that mitochondrial enlargement does not necessarily stem from hyperfusion. It could come from a decrease in the activity of Drp1 or result from an imbalance between mitochondrial biogenesis and mitophagy.

      A marked limitation of this study is the overuse of rather artificial manipulations of transcriptional regulatory pathways. The study would benefit a lot from investigation of the loss of function of components of the Hippo pathway rather than just OE of Yki.

      My expertise is in mitochondrial biology, with specialization in super-resolution imaging, mitochondrial dynamics and membrane architecture. I have also worked in the interface between mitochondrial physiology and cancer. With this perspective, I think that the authors uncover a potentially interesting role of PGC1 as a tumor suppressor.

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      Manuscript number: RC- 2025-03073

      Corresponding author(s): Shaul Yogev

      1. General Statements [optional]

      We kindly thank our reviewers for their enthusiasm, thoughtful feedback, and constructive suggestions on how to strengthen our manuscript. Below, we provide a point-by-point response to reviewer comments and outline the experiments we will do to address every concern that has been raised.

      2. Description of the planned revisions

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      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      This interesting study uses an unbiased genetic screen in C. elegans to identify SAX-1/NDR kinase as a regulator of dendritic branch elimination. Loss of SAX-1 results in an excess branching phenotype that is striking and highly penetrant. The authors identify several additional regulators of branch elimination (SAX-2, MOB-1, RABI-1, RAB-11.2) by using a candidate genetic screen aimed at factors that interact physically or genetically with SAX-1. They propose that SAX-1 acts by promoting membrane retrieval based on the nature of these interactors and the results of an imaging-based in vivo assay for endocytic puncta.

      Major comments.

      1. My biggest concern is that the phenotypes are only observed in temperature-sensitive dauer-constitutive mutant backgrounds, and not in wild-type dauers. That is, wild-type animals exiting dauer do not require SAX-1 for dendrite elimination. While this does not undermine the importance of the results, it does require more explanation. The authors write that "the requirement for sax-1... relies on specific physiological states of the dauer stage," but I do not understand what this means. Are they saying that daf-7 and daf-2 dauers are in a different "physiological state" than wild-type dauers? In what way? What is the evidence for this? A more rigorous explanation is needed. We agree that this is puzzling, and we thank the reviewer for recognizing that this does not undermine the importance of the results. There is ample evidence that daf-2 and daf-7 differ from starvation-induced dauers. For example, a recent preprint finds that the transcriptomes of these two mutants at dauer cluster much closer to each other than to starvation-induced dauers (Corchado et al. 2024). Older work has noted other differences, such as the time the dauer entry decision is made (Swanson and Riddle 1981), the synchronicity of dauer exit, the ability to force dauer entry in daf-d mutants, as well as additional dauer-unrelated phenotypes (reviewed in Karp 2018). We agree with the reviewer that this merits further clarifications and will perform the experiments suggested by the reviewer below:

      To me, the simplest genetic explanation is that daf-7 and daf-2 are partially required for branch retraction in a manner redundant with sax-1, and the ts mutants are not fully wild-type at 15C. Thus, the sax-1 requirement is revealed only in these mutant backgrounds. Can the authors examine starvation-induced dauers of daf-7 or daf-2 raised continuously at 15C?

      We will do this experiment.

      daf-7 and daf-2 ts strains can form "partial dauers" that have a dauer-like appearance but are not SDS resistant. Could the difference between partial dauers and full dauers account for the difference in sax-1-dependence? The authors could use SDS selection of the daf-7 strain at 25C to ensure they are examining full dauers.

      We tested daf-7 mutants with 1% SDS when we set up the system – they are fully dauer at 25°C and are SDS sensitive after exit. We will repeat this important control with daf-7; sax-1 double mutants.

      The Bargmann lab has created a daf-2 FLP-OUT strain (ky1095ky1087) that allows cell-type-specific removal of daf-2. Could this be used to test for a cell-autonomous role of daf-2 in IL2Q related to branch elimination?

      We can attempt this experiment. However, since IL2 promoters turn on prior to dauer, the interpretation would not be straightforward – it would be hard to exclude that a cell autonomous defect in dauer entry does not account for the IL2 dauer exit phenotype, even if branching appears normal.

      These ideas are not a list of specific experiments the authors need to complete, rather they are meant to illustrate some possible approaches to the question. Whatever approach they use, it is important for them to more rigorously explain why SAX-1 is not required for branch removal in wild-type animals.

      We completely agree. We will carry out the 15°C experiment, examine morphological characteristics and test SDS resistance. In addition, we will test neuronal markers that differ between dauers and non-dauers to determine whether the mutants are full or partial dauers at the relevant timepoints.

      The SAX-2 localization (Fig. 4) and endocytosis assay (Fig. 6) results were not clear to me from the data shown. Overall a more rigorous analysis and presentation of the data would be important to make these conclusions convincing. This may involve refining the data presentation in the figures, modifying the claims (e.g., "we propose" vs "we find"), or saving some of the data to be more fully explored in a future paper. In my view, these figures are the biggest weak point of the manuscript and also are not important for the central conclusions (which are well supported and convincing), indeed these results are barely mentioned in the Abstract or last paragraph of Introduction.

      We agree that the analysis and presentation of Figures 4 and 6 need to be improved. The presentation has already been updated, and the figures are clearer now. In the revision, we will increase sample size to provide stronger conclusions, consolidate some of the analysis and further improve presentation. While we agree with the reviewer that conclusions from these figures are not as strong as those drawn from genetic experiments, they do complement and support the conclusions of those other figures.

      • In Fig. 4D, why is SAX-2 visible throughout the entire neuron and why is the "punctum" marked with an arrow also seen in the tagRFP channel? One gets the impression that some of the puncta may be background, bleed-through, or artifacts due to cell varicosities.

      There is no bleed-through: this is most evident by looking at the brightest signals in the cell body (now labelled with an asterisk in a zoomed-out image) and noting that they do not bleed between channels. In sax-1 mutants, the SAX-2::GFP puncta are very obvious and distinguishable from the tagRFP channel. In control, SAX-2::GFP is very faint in the dendrite, so we increased the contrast to allow visualization. The reviewer is correct that under these conditions, some puncta look like the cytosolic fill. In the revision, we will re-analyze the data and will not consider these as bona-fide SAX-2 puncta, but rather cytosolic SAX-2 that accumulates due to constrictions and varicosities in the dendrite.

      • Related to both Fig. 4 and Fig. 6, where does SAX-1 localize in IL2Q in dauer and post-dauer? Does its expression or localization change during branch retraction? Does it co-localize with SAX-2 or endocytic puncta?

      We generated an endogenously tagged sax-1 with a 7xspGFP11 tag; however, this was below detection in the IL2s. For the revisions, we can test an overexpressed cDNA construct.

      **Referee cross-commenting**

      I think we all touched on similar points. I wanted to follow up on Reviewer 3's comment, "Is the failure to eliminate branches an indication of incomplete dauer recovery? Do sax-1 mutants retain additional characteristics of dauer morphology in post dauer adults." I thought this was an excellent point. It made me wonder if that might explain why the defect is only seen in daf-7 and daf-2 mutant backgrounds - maybe these strains retain partial dauer traits even after exit. Is there a specific experiment that they could do? Did you have specific characteristics of dauer morphology in mind for them to check? (Ideally something in the nervous system that can be scored quantitatively.)

      Please see response to point #1 regarding experiments we will do to confirm the “dauer state” of daf-7 and daf-7; sax-1 double mutants.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):

      A major strength of this work is the pioneering use of a novel system to study neuronal branch retraction. C. elegans has provided a powerful model for studying how dendrite branches form, but much less attention has been paid to how excess neuronal branches are removed. The post-dauer remodeling of IL2Q neurons provides an exciting and dramatic physiological example to explore this question.

      This paper is notable for taking the first steps towards developing this innovative model. It does exactly what is needed at the outset of a new exploration - a forward genetic screen to discover the main regulators of the process. Using a combination of classical and modern genetic approaches, the authors bootstrap their way to a sizeable list of factors and a solid understanding of the properties of this system, for example that retraction of higher vs lower order dendrites show different genetic requirements.

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the novelty and significance of our work.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      In this manuscript, the authors establish C. elegans IL2 neurons as a system in which to study dendrite pruning. They use the system to perform a genetic screen for pruning regulators and find an allele of sax-1. Unexpectedly sax-1 is only required for post-dauer pruning in two different genetic backgrounds that induce dauer formation, but not starvation-induced dauer formation. Sax-1/NDR kinase reduction has previously been associated with increased outgrowth and branching in other systems, so this is a new role for this protein. However, the authors show that proteins that work with Sax-1 in other systems, like sax-2/fry, also play a role in this pathway. The genetic experiments are beautiful and the findings are all clearly explained and strongly supported. The authors also examine sax-2 localization, which localizes sax-1 in other systems, and show it in puncta in dendrites that increase with dauer exit, consistent with function at the time of pruning. They also show that membrane trafficking regulators associated with NDR kinases function in the same pathway here, hinting that endocytosis may play a role during pruning as in Drosophila. The link to endocytosis was a little weak (see Major point below). Overall, this study describes a new system to study pruning and identifies NDR/fry/Rabs as regulators of pruning during dauer exit. The work is very high quality and both the imaging and genetics are extremely well done.

      We thank the reviewer for their positive assessment of the manuscript.

      Major points

      1. The only place where there were any questions about the data was the last figure (6G and I). Here they use uptake of GFP secreted from muscle as a readout of endocytosis in IL2 neurons. They nicely show that more internalized puncta accumulate as animals exit dauer. The claim that this is reduced in sax-1 mutants doesn't seem to match the images shown well. In the image there are many more puncta in the GFP channel and much more accumulation of the RFP-tagged receptor everywhere. It seems like some additional analysis of this data is important to fully capture what is going on and whether this really represents an endocytic defect. We agree and will provide additional data in Figure 6. The specific discrepancy between the image and the quantification is because we showed a single focal plane rather than a projection. This does not capture all the puncta in a neurite. The current version shows a projection, making it evident that the mutants has fewer puncta compared to the control.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      Neurite pruning is important in all animals with neurons. Genetic approaches have primarily been applied to the problem using Drosophila, so identifying a new model system in which to study it is an important step. Using this system, a pathway known to function in a different context is linked to pruning. Thus the study provides new insights into both pruning and this pathway.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive assessment of our study’s significance.

      __Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): __

      Summary: Figueroa-Delgado et al. use a C. elegans neuro plasticity model to examine how dendrites are eliminated upon recovery from the stress induced larval stage, dauer. The authors performed a mutagenesis screen to identify novel regulators of dendrite elimination and revealed some surprising results. Branch elimination mechanism varies between 2{degree sign}, 3{degree sign}, and 4{degree sign} branches. The NDR kinase, SAX-1 and it's interactors (SAX-2 and MOB-2) are required for elimination of second and third order branches but not fourth order branches. Interestingly they showed that branch elimination varies depending on the stimulus of dendrite outgrowth such that the NDR kinase is required for branch elimination after genetically inducing the dauer stage but is not required if dauers are produced through food deprivation. The authors go a step further to include a small candidate screen looking at various pathways of membrane remodeling and identify additional regulators of dendrite elimination related to membrane trafficking including RABI-1, RAB-8, RAB-10, and RAB-11.2.

      We thank the reviewer for their time and suggestions below

      Major comments:

      • While I find the data promising and exciting, several of the experiments have concerningly low sample sizes. Fig 3G, Fig 4G, Fig 5J and L, and Fig 6I all contain data sets that are fewer than 10 animals. Sample sizes should be stated specifically in the figure legends for all data represented in the graphs. We thank the reviewer for finding the data exciting. We agree that the sample sizes in some panels is low and will increase it in the revised version. Sample sizes are now specifically listed in the figure legends.

      • All statements based on data not shown should be amended to include the data as a supplemental figure or edited to omit the statement based on withheld data. We agree. Some “not shown” data are already added to the current version of the manuscript and the rest will be added to the fully revised version, or the statements will be omitted.

      • Rescue experiments (Fig 2J) should demonstrate failure to rescue from neighboring tissue types (hypodermis and muscle) to conclude cell autonomous rescue rather than a broadly acting factor. Thank you for the suggestion. We will use a hypodermal promoter and a muscle promoter driving SAX-1 cDNA expression to strengthen the claim of cell autonomy.

      • Fig 4 needs quantification of higher order branches and SAX-2 proximity to branch nodes as these are discussed in the text. We will add this quantification.

      Minor comments:

      • Fig 1C-F, It appears like the shy87 allele produces animals of significantly different body sizes. It would improve rigor to normalize the dendrite coverage to body size in the quantification. We do not see a biologically meaningful size difference between shy87 and control, it may be the specific image shown. We will confirm this by measuring animal size for the final revision.

      • Is the failure to eliminate branches an indication of incomplete dauer recovery? Do sax-1 mutants retain additional characteristics of dauer morphology in post dauer adults. This important point was also raised by Reviewer 1. We will test SDS sensitivity, morphological markers, and molecular markers to determine the dauer “state” of the mutants used in this study. The results will be included in the final revision.

      • The text references multiple transgenic lines tested in Fig 2I-J but only one line is shown. Additional lines were visually examined under a fluorescent compound microscope but not imaged or quantified. We will add this quantification to the final revision.

      • Fig 4F, Additional timepoints would enhance the sax-1 localization result and might provide insight into mechanism of action for sax-1. We will add the localization in post-dauer adults.

      • Fig 6I Control and sax-1(ky491) example images should be provided in the supplement. We will add these images to the final revision.

      **Referee cross-commenting**

      I agree that we shared many of the same concerns.

      There are several general assays for dauer characteristics that could be used here to determine if the post-dauer animals retain other characteristics of the dauer stage in addition to IL2 branches (SDS resistance, alae remodeling, pharyngeal bulb morphology, nictation behavior). The nictation behavior has been connected very nicely with IL2 neurons (Junho Lee's group). Additionally, FLP dendrites occupy the same space as the IL2 branches and outgrowth in post-dauers occurs in coordination with IL2 branch elimination - this might be another optional experiment, to check if FLP growth is impeded by persistent IL2 branches. All of these could be quantified similar to how the authors have already established with their IL2 model (FLP dendrite branches) or with a binary statistic.

      Please see responses to Reviewer 1 and 3 above for the list of experiments to determine whether the animals fail to completely enter or exit dauer.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      SIGNIFICANCE ============ These results describe a new role for the NDR kinase complex in dendrite pruning that has clinical significance to our understanding of human brain development and human health concerns in which pruning is dysregulated, such as observed in the case of autism. The authors use an established neuro-plasticity, C. elegans model (Schroeder et al. 2013) which provides a tractable and reproduceable platform for discovering the mechanism of dendrite pruning. These results would influence future work in the fields of cell biology of the neuron and disease models of brain development.

      My expertise is in the field of C. elegans neuroscience and stress biology and have sufficient expertise to evaluate all aspects of this work.

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      Reviewer #1

      • In Fig. 4C, the distinction between puncta in the primary or higher-order dendrites is not clear to me, and several puncta that I would have scored as primary are marked as higher-order.

      We apologize for a mistake in the arrowhead color and overall presentation of this figure. It has been fixed in the current version.

      • Related to this, in Fig. 4B are the two arrows meant to be white as in the top panel, or yellow as in the bottom panel?

      We thank Reviewer #1 for their observation, and we apologize for our oversight. We fixed this in the current version.

      • In Fig. 4, where in the head are we looking? It would help to show a more low-magnification view of the entire cell.

      We added zoomed-out images and indicated where the zoomed in insets are taken from. We thank the reviewer for helping us improve the clarity of the data.

      • The main sax-1 phenotype is increased SAX-2 puncta in dauer, but the branch retraction defect is in post-dauers. How is this relevant to the phenotype?

      This is a very good point. The increase in SAX-2 puncta in sax-1 mutants is stronger during dauer-exit than in dauer, consistent with this being the time when SAX-1 functions. We agree that some earlier activity of SAX-1 cannot be excluded, and we do not assume that the effect on SAX-2 completely accounts for the pruning defects. This is now acknowledged in the text. However, given that both proteins function together in pruning, and given that the effect is strongest during dauer exit, we do believe that this data is informative and worth showing.


      • The number of SAX-2 puncta in sax-1 mutants decreases almost to normal in post dauers. Is there a correlation between the number of remaining branches and the number of SAX-2 puncta? That is, do the many wild-type animals with "excess" SAX-2 puncta also fail to retract branches?

      There is no correlation. In other words, the number of SAX-2 puncta does not instruct the extent of pruning. Please note the quantifications underestimate the number of SAX-2 puncta in the mutants, since they were only done on the primary dendrite. This is necessary because the mutant and control have different arbor size, so only branch order that can be appropriately compared are primary dendrites.

      • The control post-dauer data in Fig. 4F and 4H are identical (re-used data) but the corresponding control dauer data in Fig. 4F and 4G are different. What is going on here?

      We thank the reviewer for raising this point and apologize for the oversight in data presentation. In the revised manuscript, we now show all control and experimental data integrated into a single graph, ensuring that each dataset is represented accurately to provide a comparison between dauer and post dauer recovery conditions.


      • Why are sample sizes so small for both strains in Fig. 4G compared to Fig. 4F and 4H?

      We sincerely apologize for this mistake, some of the data was erroneously grouped in the original submission. The revised version contains an updated number of neurons, presented on the same graph, and in the final revision we will further increase sample size. We apologize again for this error.

      • In Fig. 6C, why are the tagRFP (blue) puncta larger than the neurite? Aren't these meant to represent vesicles inside the surrounding neurite? One gets the impression that this is bleed-through from the GFP channel.

      Based on EM, both an endocytic punctum and the diameter of the neuron are smaller than a single pixel. The apparent difference in size in fluorescence microscopy is because the puncta are brighter (they contain more membrane) and thus appear larger. In the current version, the improved presentation of the figure contains zoomed out images that clearly show that there is no bleed-through.

      • In Fig. 6E and 6F, why are there no tagRFP (blue) puncta? Is CD8 not endocytosed at all if it lacks the nanobody sequence? One would expect the tagRFP (blue) signal to be the same in both strains and simply to lack yellow if the nanobody is not present.

      CD8 lacks clear endocytosis motifs, which is why it is advantageous for labelling neurites and testing endocytosis when paired with an endocytic signal (Lee and Luo 1999; Kozik et al. 2010). Conversely, extracellular GFP binding to a membrane GFP antibody can induce endocytosis (for example, see (Tang et al., 2020)), likely by inducing clustering, although we are not familiar with work that explored the mechanism. In the updated version we included a rare example of an mCD8 punctum.

      • The authors report a decrease in endocytic events in sax-1, but qualitatively it looks like there are vastly more puncta inside the neuron in Fig. 6H than in 6G.

      We apologize for the presentation in the original version of Figure 6. This impression was because we showed single focal planes that only captured some of the signal. In the revised version we show projections, which makes it evident that there are fewer endocytic events in the mutant.

      • In Fig. 6E and 6H, why are there so many GFP (yellow) puncta outside the neuron? What are these structures and why are they absent in the strain with the nanobody?

      These puncta are secreted or muscle-associated GFP that has not been internalized by IL2Q neurons. They are present in all strains in this figure, this can be clearly seen in the zoomed-out images that have been added to the updated figure.

      • What is the large central blue structure in Fig. 6H - is this the soma? - and why are puncta in this region not counted?

      This is indeed the soma. In the updated version this can be clearly seen in the zoom-out. The large puncta in the soma were not counted because they may arise from the fusion of an unknown number of smaller puncta, and their precise number cannot be determined at the resolution of fluorescence microscopy.

      • minor: there is text reading "40-" in the bottom panel of Fig. 6H. It is visible when printed but not on screen - adjust levels in Photoshop to reveal it.

      We thank the reviewer for catching this oversight, it is now fixed.

      Minor points:

      1. At several points the authors emphasize the relationship of neurite remodeling to stress, e.g. Abstract and Discussion: "we adapted C. elegans IL2 sensory dendrites as a model [of...] stress-mediated dendrite pruning". It seems unnecessary and potentially misleading to treat this as a neuronal stress response. First, it conflates organismal and cellular stress - there is no reason to think that IL2 neurons are under cellular stress in dauer. In fact parasitic nematodes go through dauer-like stages as part of healthy development and probably have similar remodeling of IL2. Second, dendrite pruning occurs during dauer exit, which is the opposite of a stress response - it reflects a return to favorable conditions. We agree. We modified the abstract and discussion to avoid conflating organismal stress (the alleviation of which is relevant for triggering pruning) and cellular stress. Thank you for pointing this out.

      In Fig. 1A, C. elegans is shown going directly from L1 to dauer in response to unfavorable conditions, which is incorrect. Animals proceed through L2 (in many cases actually an alternative L2d pre-dauer) and then molt into dauer (an alternative L3 stage) after completing L2.

      We updated the schematic to include the L2d stage where commitment to dauer entry or resumption to reproductive development is made.

      In Fig. 1B, please check if it is correct that hypodermis contacts the pharynx basement membrane as drawn. The schematic in the top panel makes it look like there is a single secondary branch and the quaternary branches are similar in length to the primary dendrite. The schematic in the bottom panel makes it look like the entire neuron is a small fraction of the length of the pharynx. Could these be drawn closer to scale?

      The hypodermis does contact the pharynx basement membrane. We redrew the schematic for clarity.

      Reviewer #2

      For context, it might be helpful to know whether branching of other dendrites is increased in sax-1 mutants (as expected based on phenotypes in other animals) or decreased like IL2 neurons.

      We examined the branching pattern of PVD, a polymodal nociceptive neuron (new Supplemental Figure 3). We find no significant difference between control and sax-1 or sax-2 mutants, suggesting that these genes function in the context of pruning. Recent work (Zhao et al. 2022) confirms that sax-1 is not required for PVD branching.

      Minor:

      "shy87 mutant dauers showed a minor reduction in secondary and tertiary branches compared to control (Figure 1G). These results indicate that shy87 is specifically required for the elimination of dauer-generated dendrite branches." Maybe temper the specificity claim some as the reduction in branches is definitely there.

      We agree, the claim was tempered.

      "three complimentary approaches" should be complementary

      Thank you for noticing. We fixed this.

      "In control animals, SAX-2 was mostly concentrated in the cell body (data not shown)" It might be nice to include some overview images that show the cell body for completeness.

      We added zoomed-out images to the revised figure, thank you for the suggestion.

      Reviewer #3


      Minor comments:


      • Fig 1G-H, are shy87 second and third order branch counts statistically different between dauer and post dauer adults? This comparison would strengthen the claim that these order branches fail to eliminate all together rather than undergo a partial elimination. We added this to Figure S2. The shy87 mutants show a complete failure in eliminating secondary branches (i.e. no difference between dauer and post-dauer) and a strong but incomplete defect in eliminating tertiary branches.

      • Fig 4B-E Indicate branch order in the images, this is unclear and a point that is focused on in the text. Done.

      • Discussion of Fig 1G from the text claims that shy87 is specifically required for branch elimination yet the data shows significant defects in branch outgrowth as well. This raises the question, are the branches abnormally stabilized that results in early underdevelopment and late atrophy? Authors should acknowledge alternative hypotheses. We agree and will revise the text accordingly. The difference between shy87 and control dauers, while statistically significant, is relatively minor and can only be detected by careful quantification, it is not apparent from looking at the images (in contrast for example to rab-8 and rab-10 mutants, where we acknowledge in the text that their branching defects might affect subsequent pruning.

      • Authors reference a branch elimination process but don't outline what this would entail and where their results fit in. We apologize for being unclear. Given that sax-1 and sax-2 function together, one would intuitively expect to see SAX-2 being reduced in sax-1 mutants, yet the opposite is observed. On potential explanation is that SAX-1 does not directly control SAX-2 abundance, but that clearance of SAX-2 is part of the pruning process that both proteins regulate. This would explain the enrichment of SAX-2 in sax-1 mutants. However, additional models cannot be excluded, and we acknowledge this in the revised text.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary:

      Figueroa-Delgado et al. use a C. elegans neuro plasticity model to examine how dendrites are eliminated upon recovery from the stress induced larval stage, dauer. The authors performed a mutagenesis screen to identify novel regulators of dendrite elimination and revealed some surprising results. Branch elimination mechanism varies between 2{degree sign}, 3{degree sign}, and 4{degree sign} branches. The NDR kinase, SAX-1 and it's interactors (SAX-2 and MOB-2) are required for elimination of second and third order branches but not fourth order branches. Interestingly they showed that branch elimination varies depending on the stimulus of dendrite outgrowth such that the NDR kinase is required for branch elimination after genetically inducing the dauer stage but is not required if dauers are produced through food deprivation. The authors go a step further to include a small candidate screen looking at various pathways of membrane remodeling and identify additional regulators of dendrite elimination related to membrane trafficking including RABI-1, RAB-8, RAB-10, and RAB-11.2.

      Major comments:

      • While I find the data promising and exciting, several of the experiments have concerningly low sample sizes. Fig 3G, Fig 4G, Fig 5J and L, and Fig 6I all contain data sets that are fewer than 10 animals. Sample sizes should be stated specifically in the figure legends for all data represented in the graphs.
      • All statements based on data not shown should be amended to include the data as a supplemental figure or edited to omit the statement based on withheld data.
      • Rescue experiments (Fig 2J) should demonstrate failure to rescue from neighboring tissue types (hypodermis and muscle) to conclude cell autonomous rescue rather than a broadly acting factor.
      • Fig 4 needs quantification of higher order branches and SAX-2 proximity to branch nodes as these are discussed in the text.

      Minor comments:

      • Fig 1C-F, It appears like the shy87 allele produces animals of significantly different body sizes. It would improve rigor to normalize the dendrite coverage to body size in the quantification.
      • Fig 1G-H, are shy87 second and third order branch counts statistically different between dauer and post dauer adults? This comparison would strengthen the claim that these order branches fail to eliminate all together rather than undergo a partial elimination.
      • Discussion of Fig 1G from the text claims that shy87 is specifically required for branch elimination yet the data shows significant defects in branch outgrowth as well. This raises the question, are the branches abnormally stabilized that results in early underdevelopment and late atrophy? Authors should acknowledge alternative hypotheses.
      • Is the failure to eliminate branches an indication of incomplete dauer recovery? Do sax-1 mutants retain additional characteristics of dauer morphology in post dauer adults.
      • The text references multiple transgenic lines tested in Fig 2I-J but only one line is shown.
      • Fig 4B-E Indicate branch order in the images, this is unclear and a point that is focused on in the text.
      • Fig 4F, Additional timepoints would enhance the sax-1 localization result and might provide insight into mechanism of action for sax-1.
      • Authors reference a branch elimination process but don't outline what this would entail and where their results fit in.
      • Fig 6I Control and sax-1(ky491) example images should be provided in the supplement.

      Referee cross-commenting

      I agree that we shared many of the same concerns.

      There are several general assays for dauer characteristics that could be used here to determine if the post-dauer animals retain other characteristics of the dauer stage in addition to IL2 branches (SDS resistance, alae remodeling, pharyngeal bulb morphology, nictation behavior). The nictation behavior has been connected very nicely with IL2 neurons (Junho Lee's group). Additionally, FLP dendrites occupy the same space as the IL2 branches and outgrowth in post-dauers occurs in coordination with IL2 branch elimination - this might be another optional experiment, to check if FLP growth is impeded by persistent IL2 branches. All of these could be quantified similar to how the authors have already established with their IL2 model (FLP dendrite branches) or with a binary statistic.

      Significance

      These results describe a new role for the NDR kinase complex in dendrite pruning that has clinical significance to our understanding of human brain development and human health concerns in which pruning is dysregulated, such as observed in the case of autism. The authors use an established neuro-plasticity, C. elegans model (Schroeder et al. 2013) which provides a tractable and reproduceable platform for discovering the mechanism of dendrite pruning. These results would influence future work in the fields of cell biology of the neuron and disease models of brain development.

      My expertise is in the field of C. elegans neuroscience and stress biology and have sufficient expertise to evaluate all aspects of this work.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This interesting study uses an unbiased genetic screen in C. elegans to identify SAX-1/NDR kinase as a regulator of dendritic branch elimination. Loss of SAX-1 results in an excess branching phenotype that is striking and highly penetrant. The authors identify several additional regulators of branch elimination (SAX-2, MOB-1, RABI-1, RAB-11.2) by using a candidate genetic screen aimed at factors that interact physically or genetically with SAX-1. They propose that SAX-1 acts by promoting membrane retrieval based on the nature of these interactors and the results of an imaging-based in vivo assay for endocytic puncta.

      Major comments.

      1. My biggest concern is that the phenotypes are only observed in temperature-sensitive dauer-constitutive mutant backgrounds, and not in wild-type dauers. That is, wild-type animals exiting dauer do not require SAX-1 for dendrite elimination.

      While this does not undermine the importance of the results, it does require more explanation. The authors write that "the requirement for sax-1... relies on specific physiological states of the dauer stage," but I do not understand what this means. Are they saying that daf-7 and daf-2 dauers are in a different "physiological state" than wild-type dauers? In what way? What is the evidence for this? A more rigorous explanation is needed.

      To me, the simplest genetic explanation is that daf-7 and daf-2 are partially required for branch retraction in a manner redundant with sax-1, and the ts mutants are not fully wild-type at 15C. Thus, the sax-1 requirement is revealed only in these mutant backgrounds. Can the authors examine starvation-induced dauers of daf-7 or daf-2 raised continuously at 15C?

      daf-7 and daf-2 ts strains can form "partial dauers" that have a dauer-like appearance but are not SDS resistant. Could the difference between partial dauers and full dauers account for the difference in sax-1-dependence? The authors could use SDS selection of the daf-7 strain at 25C to ensure they are examining full dauers.

      The Bargmann lab has created a daf-2 FLP-OUT strain (ky1095ky1087) that allows cell-type-specific removal of daf-2. Could this be used to test for a cell-autonomous role of daf-2 in IL2Q related to branch elimination?

      These ideas are not a list of specific experiments the authors need to complete, rather they are meant to illustrate some possible approaches to the question. Whatever approach they use, it is important for them to more rigorously explain why SAX-1 is not required for branch removal in wild-type animals. 2. The SAX-2 localization (Fig. 4) and endocytosis assay (Fig. 6) results were not clear to me from the data shown. Overall a more rigorous analysis and presentation of the data would be important to make these conclusions convincing. This may involve refining the data presentation in the figures, modifying the claims (e.g., "we propose" vs "we find"), or saving some of the data to be more fully explored in a future paper. In my view, these figures are the biggest weak point of the manuscript and also are not important for the central conclusions (which are well supported and convincing), indeed these results are barely mentioned in the Abstract or last paragraph of Introduction.

      • In Fig. 4, where in the head are we looking? It would help to show a more low-magnification view of the entire cell.
      • In Fig. 4D, why is SAX-2 visible throughout the entire neuron and why is the "punctum" marked with an arrow also seen in the tagRFP channel? One gets the impression that some of the puncta may be background, bleed-through, or artifacts due to cell varicosities.
      • In Fig. 4C, the distinction between puncta in the primary or higher-order dendrites is not clear to me, and several puncta that I would have scored as primary are marked as higher-order.
      • Related to this, in Fig. 4B are the two arrows meant to be white as in the top panel, or yellow as in the bottom panel?
      • The main sax-1 phenotype is increased SAX-2 puncta in dauer, but the branch retraction defect is in post-dauers. How is this relevant to the phenotype?
      • The number of SAX-2 puncta in sax-1 mutants decreases almost to normal in post dauers. Is there a correlation between the number of remaining branches and the number of SAX-2 puncta? That is, do the many wild-type animals with "excess" SAX-2 puncta also fail to retract branches?
      • The control post-dauer data in Fig. 4F and 4H are identical (re-used data) but the corresponding control dauer data in Fig. 4F and 4G are different. What is going on here?
      • Why are sample sizes so small for both strains in Fig. 4G compared to Fig. 4F and 4H?
      • In Fig. 6C, why are the tagRFP (blue) puncta larger than the neurite? Aren't these meant to represent vesicles inside the surrounding neurite? One gets the impression that this is bleed-through from the GFP channel.
      • In Fig. 6E and 6F, why are there no tagRFP (blue) puncta? Is CD8 not endocytosed at all if it lacks the nanobody sequence? One would expect the tagRFP (blue) signal to be the same in both strains and simply to lack yellow if the nanobody is not present.
      • In Fig. 6E and 6H, why are there so many GFP (yellow) puncta outside the neuron? What are these structures and why are they absent in the strain with the nanobody?
      • What is the large central blue structure in Fig. 6H - is this the soma? - and why are puncta in this region not counted?
      • The authors report a decrease in endocytic events in sax-1, but qualitatively it looks like there are vastly more puncta inside the neuron in Fig. 6H than in 6G.
      • minor: there is text reading "40-" in the bottom panel of Fig. 6H. It is visible when printed but not on screen - adjust levels in Photoshop to reveal it.
      • Related to both Fig. 4 and Fig. 6, where does SAX-1 localize in IL2Q in dauer and post-dauer? Does its expression or localization change during branch retraction? Does it co-localize with SAX-2 or endocytic puncta?

      Minor points:

      1. At several points the authors emphasize the relationship of neurite remodeling to stress, e.g. Abstract and Discussion: "we adapted C. elegans IL2 sensory dendrites as a model [of...] stress-mediated dendrite pruning". It seems unnecessary and potentially misleading to treat this as a neuronal stress response. First, it conflates organismal and cellular stress - there is no reason to think that IL2 neurons are under cellular stress in dauer. In fact parasitic nematodes go through dauer-like stages as part of healthy development and probably have similar remodeling of IL2. Second, dendrite pruning occurs during dauer exit, which is the opposite of a stress response - it reflects a return to favorable conditions.
      2. In Fig. 1A, C. elegans is shown going directly from L1 to dauer in response to unfavorable conditions, which is incorrect. Animals proceed through L2 (in many cases actually an alternative L2d pre-dauer) and then molt into dauer (an alternative L3 stage) after completing L2.
      3. In Fig. 1B, please check if it is correct that hypodermis contacts the pharynx basement membrane as drawn. The schematic in the top panel makes it look like there is a single secondary branch and the quartenary branches are similar in length to the primary dendrite. The schematic in the bottom panel makes it look like the entire neuron is a small fraction of the length of the pharynx. Could these be drawn closer to scale?

      Referee cross-commenting

      I think we all touched on similar points. I wanted to follow up on Reviewer 3's comment, "Is the failure to eliminate branches an indication of incomplete dauer recovery? Do sax-1 mutants retain additional characteristics of dauer morphology in post dauer adults." I thought this was an excellent point. It made me wonder if that might explain why the defect is only seen in daf-7 and daf-2 mutant backgrounds - maybe these strains retain partial dauer traits even after exit. Is there a specific experiment that they could do? Did you have specific characteristics of dauer morphology in mind for them to check? (Ideally something in the nervous system that can be scored quantitatively.)

      Significance

      A major strength of this work is the pioneering use of a novel system to study neuronal branch retraction. C. elegans has provided a powerful model for studying how dendrite branches form, but much less attention has been paid to how excess neuronal branches are removed. The post-dauer remodeling of IL2Q neurons provides an exciting and dramatic physiological example to explore this question.

      This paper is notable for taking the first steps towards developing this innovative model. It does exactly what is needed at the outset of a new exploration - a forward genetic screen to discover the main regulators of the process. Using a combination of classical and modern genetic approaches, the authors bootstrap their way to a sizeable list of factors and a solid understanding of the properties of this system, for example that retraction of higher vs lower order dendrites show different genetic requirements.

    1. The first three chapters—1  Hadron physics, 2  Scattering theory, and 3  Helicity formalism—set the stage by introducing hadron spectroscopy with emphasis on symmetries, quantum numbers, and nucleon excitations, and by developing the theoretical framework of amplitude analysis. The following chapters—4  Computational techniques and 5  The ComPWA project—present the methodological contribution of this work, namely new computational techniques based on symbolic representations and high-performance computational implementations. Finally, 6  Experimental set-up and 7  Application to data turn to the experimental situation and demonstrate the methods with real data from the BESIII and LHCb experiments. The closing chapter offers a summary and points to future developments, notably the implementation of more advanced amplitude-model parametrisations using symbolic expressions and the exploration of new optimisation techniques that array computing makes feasible.

      Sowas ist doch eher Abstract statt Motivation? Würde ich woanders hinpacken. Und man hat mir mal gesagt, dass in den Abstract keine Referenzen (zu Kapiteln oder so) sollen.

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      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary and Strengths:

      The very well-written manuscript by Lövestam et al. from the Scheres/Goedert groups entitled "Twelve phosphomimetic mutations induce the assembly of recombinant fulllength human tau into paired helical filaments" demonstrates the in vitro production of the so-called paired helical filament Alzheimer's disease (AD) polymorph fold of tau amyloids through the introduction of 12 point mutations that attempt to mimic the disease-associated hyper-phosphorylation of tau. The presented work is very important because it enables disease-related scientific work, including seeded amyloid replication in cells, to be performed in vitro using recombinant-expressed tau protein. 

      Weaknesses: 

      The following points are asked to be addressed by the authors:

      (i) In the discussion it would be helpful to note the findings that in AD the chemical structure tau (including phosphorylation) is what defines the polymorph fold and not the buffer/cellular environment. It would be further interesting to discuss these findings in respect to the relationship between disease and structure. The presented findings suggest that due to a cellular/organismal alteration, such as aging or Abeta aggregation, tau is specifically hyper-phosphorylated which then leads to its aggregation into the paired helical filaments that are associated with AD. 

      We have added an extra sentence to the Introduction to emphasise this possibility: “Besides the cellular environment in which they assemble, different tau folds may also be determined by chemical modifications of tau itself.”

      In addition, the last paragraph of the Discussion now reads: “It could be that, besides different cellular environments in which the filaments assemble, different posttranslational modification patterns are also important for the assembly of tau into protofilament folds that are specific for the other tauopathies.”

      (ii) The conditions used for each assembly reaction are a bit hard to keep track of and somewhat ambiguous. In order to help the reader, I would suggest making a table to show conditions used for each type of assembly (including the diameter / throw of the orbital shaker) and the results (structural/biological) of those conditions. For example, presumably the authors did not have ThT in the samples used for cryo-EM but the methods section does not specify this. Also, the presence of trace NaCl is proposed as a possible cause for the CTE fold to appear in the 0N4R sample (page 4) but no explanation of why this particular sample would have more NaCl than the others. Furthermore, it appears that NaCl was actually used in the seeded assembly reactions that produced the PHF and not the CTE fold. This would seem to indicate the CTE structure of 0N4RPAD12 is not actually induced by NaCl (like it was for tau297-391). In order for the reader to better understand the reproducibility of the polymorphs, it would be helpful to indicate in how many different conditions and how many replicates with new protein preparations each polymorph was observed (could be included in the same table)  

      We have added a new table (Table 1) with the buffer conditions, protein concentration and shaking speed and time, for all structures described in this paper. We never added ThT to assembly reactions that were used for cryo-EM.

      We did not use NaCl in the seeded assembly reactions (we used sodium citrate). We don’t really know why 0N4R PAD12 tau more readily forms the CTE fold. The observation that it does so prompted us to use 0N3R for all ensuing experiments. 

      (iii) It is not clear how the authors calculate the percentage of each filament type. In Figure 1 it is stated "discarded solved particles (coloured) and discarded filaments in grey" which leaves the reviewer wondering what a "discarded solved particle" is and which filaments were discarded. From the main text one guesses that the latter is probably false positives from automated picking but if so, these should not be referred to as filaments. Also, are the percentages calculated for filaments or segments? In any case, it would be more helpful in such are report to know the best estimate of the ratio of identified filament types without confusing the reader with a measure of the quality of the picking algorithm. Please clarify. Also, a clarification is asked for the significance of the varying degrees of PHF and AD monomer filaments in the various assembly conditions. It could be expected that there is significant variability from sample to sample but it would be interesting to know if there has been any attempt to reproduce the samples to measure this variability. If not, it might be worth mentioning so that the % values are taking with the appropriate sized grain of salt. Finally, the representation of the data in Figure 1 would seem to imply that the 0N3R forms less or no monofilament AD fold because no cross-section is shown for this structure, however it is very similar to (or statistically the same as) the 1:1 mix of 0N3R:0N4R.

      In the revised manuscript, we have used bi-hierchical clustering of filaments, where each segment (or particle) is classified based on both 2D class assignment and to which filament it belongs (this method is based on [Porthula et al (2019), Ultramicroscopy 203, 132-138] and was further developed in [Lövestam et al (2024) Nature 7993, 119-125]. Based on the assumption that filament type does not change within a single filament type, we have observed that this gives excellent classification results, and that this approach allows classification of many, even small minority, filament types. Using this approach, we now quantify the different filament types on the number of segments extracted from filaments classified in this way. 

      Moreover, we have also addressed the problem of having singlets among the PHF preparation: it turns out that waiting longer, just by transferring samples out of the shaker after one week and incubating it quiescently at 37 ºC for two more weeks, the singlets disappear and only PHFs remain. Filaments made for the fluorophore labelling in the revised Figure 3 were also done using the new protocol. In total, we have N=7 replicates with a mean of 95.3% PHFs and a standard deviation of 9.4%. The revised text in the Results section reads:

      “To further increase the proportions of PHFs-to-singlet ratio, we removed the plate from the shaker after one week and incubated it quiescently at 37 ºC for two more weeks. This resulted in 100% PHFs formed (Figure 1 – figure supplement 4). When repeated seven times, on average 95.3% PHFs formed, with 25% of singlets formed in a single outlier (Figure 1 – figure supplement 5)” 

      (iv) The interpretation of the NMR data on soluble tau that the mutations on the second site are suppressing in part long range dynamic interaction around the aggregationinitiation site (FIA) is sound. It is in particular interesting to find that the mutations have a similar effect as the truncation at residue 391. An additional experiment using solvent PREs to elaborate on the solvent exposed sequence-resolved electrostatic potential and the intra-molecular long range interactions would likely strengthen the interpretation significantly (Iwahara, for example, Yu et al, in JACS 2024). Figure 6D Figure supplement shows the NMR cross peak intensities between tau 151-391 and PAD12tau151-391. Overall the intensities of the PAD12 tau construct are more intense which could be interpreted with less conformational exchange between long range dynamic interactions. There are however several regions which do not show any intensity anymore when compared with the corresponding wildtype construct such as 259-262, 292-294 which should be discussed/explained. 

      While long-range intramolecular interactions of tau have previously been reported through the use of spin labels (Mukrasch et al 2009 PLoS Biol 7(2): e1000034), we have been hesitant to introduce paramagnetic agents into our samples for two reasons. First, the bulky size of the spin label may affect filament formation or influence the dynamic properties of the protein. Second, covalent addition of the spin label requires mutation of the primary sequence to both remove native cysteine residues and add cysteines at the desired label location. We have previously shown that mutation of cysteine 322 to alanine leads to the formation of tau filaments with a structure that is different from the PHF (Santambrogio et al (2025) bioRxiv 2025.03.29.646137). 

      Instead, we have included in the revised manuscript new NMR and cryo-EM data that provide further support for the model that a FIA-like interaction between residues <sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub> and residues <sub>306</sub>VQIVYK<sub>311</sub> has an inhibiting effect on filament nucleation in unmodified full-length tau. A mutant of tau297-441 where residues <sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub> have been deleted and that does not contain the four PAD12 mutations in the carboxy-terminal domain behaves similarly in the NMR experiment as the tau297-441 construct with those four PAD12 mutations. Moreover, full-length 0N3R tau with the eight PAD12 mutations in the amino-terminal fuzzy coat and with the deletion of<sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub>, but without the four PAD12 mutations in the carboxy-terminal domain, assembles readily into amyloid filaments (of which we also solved a cryo-EM structure, see the revised Figure 6B). These observations provide mechanistic insights into the previously proposed paper-clip model [Jeganathan (2008), J Biol Chem 283, 32066-32076], where interactions between the fuzzy coat inhibit filament formation of unmodified full-length tau, and phosphorylation in the fuzzy coat interferes with these interactions, thus leading to filament nucleation. Of course, the identification of residues <sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub> for this interaction also explain why truncation of tau at residue 391 leads to spontaneous assembly. We have introduced a new Figure 7 to the revised manuscript to explain this model in more detail. The corresponding new section in the Results reads:

      “To investigate this further, we also tested a tau construct comprising residues tau297-441 without the phosphomimetic mutations, but with a deletion of residues (Δ392-395). Filaments formed rapidly and the cryo-EM structure showed that the ordered core consisted of the amino-terminal part of the construct spanning residues 297-318 (Figure 6B). NMR analysis (Figure 6 – figure supplement 5B) showed that the tau297441 Δ392-395 construct exhibited similar backbone rigidity properties to the tau297-441 PAD12 construct, despite peak locations and local secondary structural propensities being more similar to the wildtype tau297-441 (Figure 6 – figure supplement 5A; Figure 6 – figure supplement 6). HSQC peak intensities in the 297-319 and 392-404 regions of tau297-441 Δ392-395 (Figure 6A, expanded from Figure 6 - figure supplement 5C) were like those in the tau297-441 PAD12. These data suggest that the IVYK deletion has a similar effect as the phosphomimetics on residues 396, 400, 403 and 404 on disrupting an intra-molecular interaction between the FIA core region and the carboxy-terminal domain, which may therefore be mediated by interactions between the two IVYK motifs that are similar to those observed in the FIA (Lövestam et al, 2024).”

      A new section in the Discussion now reads:

      “Our NMR data provide insights into the mechanism by which phosphorylation in the fuzzy coat of tau, or truncations of tau, lead to the formation of filaments with ordered cores of residues that are themselves not phosphorylated. HSQC peak intensity differences between unmodified tau 297-441, PAD12 tau 297-441 and tau297-391 suggest that phosphorylation of the fuzzy coat, particularly near the <sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub> motif in the carboxy-terminal domain, a7ects the conformation of the residues of tau that become ordered in the FIA (Lövestam et al., 2024). Removal of residues <sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub> in the carboxyterminal domain of tau 297-441 led to rapid filament formation in the absence of phosphomimetics, while HSQC peak intensity di7erences for this construct indicate similar backbone rigidity compared to tau 297-441 without the deletion, but with the four PAD12 mutations in the carboxy-terminal domain. Combined, these observations support a model where the <sub>392</sub>IVYK<sub>395</sub> motif in unmodified full-length tau monomers interacts with the <sub>308</sub>IVYK<sub>311</sub> motif, thus inhibiting filament formation by preventing the formation of the nucleating species, the FIA. Phosphorylation of nearby residues 396, 400, 403 and 404, or truncation at residue 391, disrupt this interaction and lead to filament formation. This model agrees with the previously proposed hairpin-like model of tau (Jeganathan et al., 2008), although the corresponding interaction between the aminoterminal domain of tau and the core-forming region remains unknown (Figure 7).”

      Due to the challenging nature of the assignment, it was not possible to assign all residues in the HSQC of the tau151-391 and the PAD12 tau151-391 samples, including residues 259-262 and 292-294 for PAD12 tau151-391. To make this clearer, we have marked residues that are not assigned with an asterisk in the revised version of Figure 6 – figure supplement 1.  

      (v) Concerning the Cryo-EM data from the different hyper-phosphorylation mimics, it would seem that the authors could at least comment on the proportion of monofilament and paired-filaments even if they could not solve the structures. Nonetheless, based on their previous publications, one would also expect that they could show whether the nontwisted filaments are likely to have the same structure (by comparing the 2D classes to projections of non-twisted models). Also, it is very interesting to note that the twist could be so strongly controlled by the charge distribution on the non-structured regions (and may be also related to the work by Mezzenga on twist rate and buffer conditions). Is the result reported in Figure 2 a one-oT case or was it also reproducible?

      As also indicated in the main text, the assembly conditions for the PAD12+4, PAD12-4 and PAD12+/-4 constructs were kept the same as those for the PAD12 construct. It is possible that further optimisation of the conditions could again lead to twisting filaments, but we chose not to pursue this route. With unlimited resources and time, one could assess in detail which of the PAD12 mutations are required and which ones could be omitted to form PHFs. However, this would require a lot of work and cryo-EM time. For now, we chose to prioritise reporting conditions that do work to reproducibly make PHFs in the laboratory (using the PAD12 construct) and leave the more detailed analysis of other constructs for future studies. 

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      This manuscript addresses an important impediment in the field of Alzheimer's disease (AD) and tauapathy research by showing that 12 specific phosphomimetic mutations in full-length tau allow the protein to aggregate into fibrils with the AD fold and the fold of chronic traumatic encephalopathy fibrils in vitro. The paper presents comprehensive structural and cell based seeding data indicating the improvement of their approach over previous in vitro attempts on non-full-length tau constructs. The main weaknesses of this work results from the fact that only up to 70% of the tau fibrils form the desired fibril polymorphs. In addition, some of the figures are of low quality and confusing. 

      As also explained in our response to reviewer #1, we have performed better quantification of filament types in the revised manuscript, and we have investigated how to get rid of the singlets. In the revised manuscript, we report that singlets disappear as time passes and that one can obtain 100% pure PHFs by quiescently incubating samples for another two weeks, after shaking for a week.

      Strengths: 

      This study provides significant progress towards a very important and timely topic in the amyloid community, namely the in vitro production of tau fibrils found in patients.

      The 12 specific phosphomimetic mutations presented in this work will have an immediate impact in the field since they can be easily reproduced.

      Multiple high-resolution structures support the success of the phosphomimetic mutation approach. Additional data show the seeding efficiency of the resulting fibrils, their reduced tendency to bundle, and their ability to be labeled without affecting core structure or seeding capability.

      Weaknesses: 

      Despite the success of making full-length AD tau fibrils, still ~30% of the fibrils are either not PHF, or not accounted for. A small fraction of the fibrils are single filaments and another ~20% are not accounted for. The authors mention that ~20% of these fibrils were not picked by the automated algorithm. However, it would be important to get additional clarity about these fibrils. Therefore, it would improve the impact of the paper if the authors could manually analyze passed-over particles to see if they are compatible with PHF or fall into a different class of fibrils. In addition, it would be helpful if the authors could comment on what can be done/tried to get the PHF yield closer to 90-100%

      As mentioned above, in the revised manuscript we show that the singlets disappear over time and we now include a description of a method that leads to 100% PHF formation.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor points: 

      (a) In Figure 6 the dashed purple vertical lines overlap with the black bars, rendering a grey color which is confusing because the grey bars used for the shorter construct. It is suggested to improve the colors (remove transparency on the purple?)

      We thank the reviewers for their suggestions for improving the visualisation of our data. We have recoloured the tau297-391 data from grey to gold and moved the dashed lines to the back of image to remove the apparent colour changes.  

      (b) Is there any support for the suggestion that "part of the second microtubule-binding repeat is ordered" being "related to this construct forming filaments with only a single protofilament"? It seemed to have come out of nowhere.

      There is no further support for this statement, but we thought it would be worth hypothesizing about this observation. 

      (c) Figures 1 and 4 E is better described as a "main chain trace" or "backbone trace" although the latter usually refers to only CA positions. Ribbon usually refers to something else in representations of protein structures. 

      This has been changed into “main chain trace” in Figures 1 and 4. 

      (d) Figure 1 Supplement 3: Panel letters in the legend do not match. 

      This has been fixed.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      The introduction is a bit lengthy (e.g. 3rd paragraph of introduction) and could benefit by focusing specific question the manuscript addresses. 

      We have shortened the Introduction. It now contains ~1150 words, which we hope provides a better compromise between length and sufficient background information.

      Figure captions are generally not helpful in conveying a message to the reader.

      Figure 1 - figure supplement 3 is quite confusing. The 4 structures in A) do not correspond to the grids in B-E. What is this figure supposed to show?

      This confusion was probably the result of incorrect labelling of panels in the legend, which was also pointed out by reviewer #1. This has been fixed in the revised manuscript.

      Page 11: Although I know what you mean, 'linear increase of ThT fluorescence' is not the correct term. 

      We have replaced “linear” with “rapid”.

      Page 15: Although line shape and peak intensity can be related you are not reporting on line shape or width but simply on peak intensity. Therefore, I wouldn't talk about the result of a 'line shape analysis'.

      We have changed the wording accordingly. 

      Figure 6 (and supplement 1) are confusing and too small to be readable in print. It might be sufficient to show the CSP and upload the remaining data to the BMRB. 

      We have made a clearer version of the main NMR Figure 6 in the revised manuscript showing the most pertinent NMR data and have moved the previous version into the figure supplements. We designed these figures to be viewed as full page A4 panels, ideally seen in one image as they show multiple comparisons of different experiments and constructs.

      As such we feel these will be best viewed on screen as part of the eLife web document. We have uploaded HSQC spectra and assignments to the BMRB (see below).

      Figure 6 supplement 3 might benefit from pointing out key residues in the overlay.

      We have added the labels (this is now Figure 6 supplement 4).

      Data availability: Please upload the assignments to the BMRB together with key spectra (e.g. HSQCs). 

      We have uploaded HSQC data along with our assignments to the BMRB, the accession codes are 52694 – tau297-441 wt; 52695 – tau297-441 PAD-12; 52696 – tau151-391 wt; 52697 – tau151-391 PAD-12; and 53230 – tau297-441 delta392-395.  These accession codes have been added to the manuscript. 

      The quality of some of the figures (specifically Figure 1 - supplement 3 and Figure 6) is not suitable for publication. 

      For the original submission to bioRxiv, we produced a single PDF with a manageable file size. We will liaise with the eLife staff to ensure the images used in the version of record will be suitable for publication.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      The topic of tumor-immune co-evolution is an important, understudied topic with, as the authors  noted, a general dearth of good models in this space. The authors have made important progress on the topic by introducing a stochastic branching process model of antigenicity/immunogenicity and measuring the proportion of simulated tumors that go extinct. The model is extensively explored, and the authors provide some nice theoretical results in addition to simulated results. 

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments on our work.

      Major comments 

      The text in lines 183-191 is intuitively and nicely explained. However, I am not sure all of it follows from the figure panels in Figure 2. For example, the authors refer to a mutation that has a large immunogenicity, but it's not shown how many mutations, or the relative size of the mutations in Figure 2. The same comment holds true for the claim that spikes also arise for mutations with low antigenicity. 

      We thank the reviewer for helping us to further specify this statement in our original submission. We now added muller plots in a new Appendix Figure (Figure A3) presenting the relative abundances of different types of effector cells in the population over time. Each effector type is colour-coded with its antigenicity and immunogenicity. To align with this Appendix Figure (Figure A3), we also updated our Figure 2 generated under the same realisation as Figure A3. We can now see clearly that the spikes in the mean values of the antigenicity and immunogenicity over the whole effector populations in new Figure 2B&2D indeed correspond to the expansion of single or several antigenic mutations recruiting the specific effector cell types. For example, in Figure 2B, we can see that the spikes of low average antigenicity and high immunogenicity (around time 11) happen at the same time when an effector type in Figure A3 with such a trait (coloured in green) arises and takes over the population. We have rewritten our Results section related (Line 192 - Line 222 in main text and Appendix A6).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In this work, the authors developed a model of tumour-immune dynamics, incorporating stochastic antigenic mutation accumulation and escape within the cancer cell population. They then used this  model to investigate how tumour-immune interactions influence tumour outcome and summary  statistics of sequencing data. 

      Strengths: 

      This novel modeling framework addresses an important and timely topic. The authors consider the useful question of how bulk and single-cell sequencing may provide insights into the tumourimmune interactions and selection processes. 

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments.

      Weaknesses: 

      One set of conclusions presented in the paper is the presence of cyclic dynamics between effector/cancer cells, antigenicity, and immunogenicity. However, these conclusions are supported in the manuscript by two sample trajectories of stochastic simulations, and these provide mixed support for the conclusions (i.e. the phasing asynchrony described in the text does not seem to apply to Figure 2C). 

      We have now developed a method to quantify the cyclic dynamics in our system (Appendix A7), where can track the directional changes phase portrait of the abundances of the cancer and effector cells. We first tested this method in a non-evolving stochastic predator-prey system, where our method can correctly capture the number of cycles in this system (Figure A7). We then use this method to quantify the number of cycles we observed between cancer and effector cells under different mutation rates (Figure A5) as well as whether they are counter-clockwise or clockwise cycles (Figure A6). Our results showed that the cyclic dynamics are more often to be observed when mutation rates are higher, and the majority of those cycles are counter-clockwise. When the mutation rate is high, we observe an increase of clockwise cycles, which have been observed in predator-prey systems and explained through coevolution. However, even under high mutation rates, counter-clockwise cycles are still the more frequent type. 

      In our simulations, we observed rarely out-of-phase cycles, which was by chance present in our original Figure 2. We have now removed that statement about out-of-phase cycles and replaced by more systematic analysis of the cyclic dynamics as described above (Line 192 to 207 in the revised version). We thank the constructive comment of the reviewer, which motivated us to improve our analysis significantly. 

      Similarly, the authors also find immune selection effects on the shape of the mutational burden in Figure 5 D/H using a qualitative comparison between the distributions and theoretical predictions in  the absence of immune response. However the discrepancy appears quite small in panel D, and  there are no quantitative comparisons provided to evaluate the significance. An analysis of the robustness of all the conclusions to parameter variation is missing. 

      We have now added statistical analysis using Wasserstein distance between the simulated mutation burden distribution and theoretical (neutral) expectation in Figure 5 C, D, G, H as well as in Figure A11 C&D when there is no cancer-immune interaction. We can see that the measurements of the  Wasserstein distance agrees with our statement, that the higher immune effectiveness leads to larger deviation from the neutral expectation.

      Lastly, the role of the Appendix results in the main messages of the paper is unclear. 

      We agree with the review and have now removed the Appendix sections “Deterministic Analysis”. 

      Reviewing Editor Comments: 

      I find the abstract too long. For example, "Knowledge of this coevolutionary system and the selection taking place within it can help us understand tumour-immune dynamics both during tumorigenesis but also when treatments such as immunotherapies are applied." can be shortened to: "Knowledge of this coevolutionary system can help us understand tumour-immune dynamics both during tumorigenesis and during immunotherapy treatments." 

      We agree and have taken the suggestion of the reviewer to shorten our abstract.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      The discussion at lines 134-140, centered around Figure A1, is an important and nicely constructed feature of the model. 

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      I suggest that the authors conduct a more in-depth analysis of their conclusions on cyclic dynamics over a large set of sample paths.

      Done and please see our detailed response to the reviewer 2 above.

      In addition, statistical comparisons between the observed mutational burden distribution and  theoretical predictions in the absence of immune selection should be carried out to support their conclusions. In all cases, conclusions should be tested extensively for robustness/sensitivity to parameters. 

      Done and please see our detailed response to the reviewer 2 above.

      Here are some specific suggestions/comments: 

      (1) Please provide a precise mathematical description of the model to complement Figure 1. 

      We have significantly revised our “Model” section to provide a precise mathematical description of our model (Line 138 - 148). Please also see our document showing the difference between the revised version and original submission.

      (2) Section on "Interactions dictate outcome of tumour progress" and Figure 3: please define 'tumour outcome' - are the heatmaps produced in Figure 3 tumor size reflecting whether or not the population has reached level K before a particular time? Also, I do not see a definition for the 'slowgrowing' tumour proportion plotted in Figure 3CF or in the accompanying text. 

      We have now added the definition of “tumour outcome” in our “Model” section (line 171 to 176), where we explain our model parameters and quantities measured in the following “Results” section.

      (3) Figure 5C/G: the green dotted vertical line is difficult to see. 

      We have now changed the mean of the simulations to solid red lines instead of using the green dotted vertical lines previously.

      (4) Appendix A1 text under (A2) should U/N be U/C? N does not appear to be defined. 

      We have more removed the previous A1 section. Please see our response to reviewer 2 as well.

      (5) Text under (A5): it is unclear what is meant by "SFS must be heavy tailed (that is, more heterogeneous)" -- a more precise statement regarding tail decay rate and associated consequences would be more helpful. 

      We have more removed the previous A section, where the original text "...SFS must be heavy-tailed" was.

      (6) Section A4 and Figure A1: can these calculations be compared to simulations? 

      We have more removed the previous A section on the deterministic analysis as they are not so  relevant to our stochastic simulations indeed. Please see our response to reviewer 2 as well.

      (7) Also, in general, please clarify how the results in the Appendix are used in the main text conclusions or provide insights relevant to these conclusions. If they are not, one can consider removing them.  

      We have more removed the previous A section on the deterministic analysis. The remaining sections are about stochastic simulations and extended figures which support our main figures.  

      (8) Figure A2: the two lines are difficult to tell apart on each panel. Please consider different styles.

      We have changed one of the dotted lines to be solid. This figure is now Figure A1 in our revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Moret et al. present an engineered family of fluorescent calcium indicators based on HaloCamp, a HaloTag-based sensor system that utilizes Janelia Fluorophores (JF dyes) to report calcium dynamics. By introducing single or multiple amino acid substitutions, the authors reduce HaloCamp's calcium affinity, making these low-affinity variants well-suited for imaging calcium transients in high-calcium environments such as the endoplasmic reticulum (ER) and mitochondria. The study validates the sensors' dissociation constants (Kd), spectra, and multiplex capabilities. It demonstrates improved performance compared to existing tools when targeted to subcellular compartments in mammalian cells and cultured neurons. The sensors can be tuned across the red-to-far-red spectrum via JF585 and JF635 labeling, enabling flexible multiplexed imaging. For example, the authors show that HaloCamp can be targeted to mitochondria and used alongside other green and red sensors, allowing simultaneous imaging of calcium dynamics in the cytosol, ER, and mitochondria. Overall, they achieve their goals, and the data demonstrate that HaloCamp variants are effective for detecting ER and mitochondrial calcium changes under physiological conditions. The presented experiments support the conclusions. However, some key aspects, such as sensor kinetics and axonal validation, would benefit from further analysis.

      This work is likely to have an important impact on the fields of calcium imaging and organelle physiology. The modular design of HaloCamp and its compatibility with a wide range of fluorophores offer a broad application range for cell biologists and neuroscientists.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors introduce the first tunable, dye-based, low-affinity HaloTag calcium sensors for subcellular imaging, addressing a significant unmet need for ER and mitochondrial calcium detection.

      (2) The ability to pair HaloCamp with JF585 and JF635 extends the spectral range, facilitating multiplexed imaging with existing calcium indicators.

      (3) The sensors are validated in a range of subcellular compartments (ER, mitochondria, cytosol) in both mammalian cells and neurons.

      (4) The authors successfully demonstrate simultaneous imaging of three compartments using orthogonal sensors, a technically impressive feat.

      (5) Kd values are measured, and fluorescent responses are tested under physiologically relevant stimulation.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors do not quantify the kinetics (e.g., decay tau or off-rate) of the fluorescent signals, particularly after stimulation. For example, in the ER imaging experiments in neurons, the decay of the HaloCamp fluorescence after field stimulation (20 APs @ 20 Hz) is not analyzed or compared to ER-GCaMP6-210 or R-CEPIer.

      (2) It remains unclear whether the observed decay represents the sensor's off-kinetics or actual physiological calcium clearance from the ER. A comparison between sensors or an independent measurement of ER clearance rates in vitro would clarify this.

      (3) The choice of 20 APs at 20 Hz is not justified. Specifically, single APs or low-frequency stimulations are not tested, leaving unclear what the detection threshold of the new sensors is.

      (4) In neuron experiments, the authors report measuring ER calcium in axons based presumably on morphology, but no specific justification for selection, markers, or post hoc labeling is described.

      (5) Figure 5 assumes that all three indicators (cytosolic, ER, and mitochondrial) are fast enough to report calcium dynamics in response to histamine. This assumption is not fully validated. Cross-controls (e.g., expressing GCaMP6-210 in mitochondria and HaloCamp in the ER) would strengthen confidence that the sensors are correctly reporting dynamic changes.

      (6) It is not clear why Thapsigargin leads to depletion in HeLa cells and neurons in experiments shown in Figure 1E, but not in 2B upon field stimulation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates the molecular mechanism by which warm temperature induces female-to-male sex reversal in the ricefield eel (Monopterus albus), a protogynous hermaphroditic fish of significant aquacultural value in China. The study identifies Trpv4 - a temperature-sensitive Ca²⁺ channel - as a putative thermosensor linking environmental temperature to sex determination. The authors propose that Trpv4 causes Ca²⁺ influx, leading to activation of Stat3 (pStat3). pStat3 then transcriptionally upregulates the histone demethylase Kdm6b (aka Jmjd3), leading to increased dmrt1 gene expression and ovo-testes development. This work aims to bridge ecological cues with molecular and epigenetic regulators of sex change and has potential implications for sex control in aquaculture.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study proposes the first mechanistic pathway linking thermal cues to natural sex reversal in adult ricefield eel, extending the temperature-dependent sex determination paradigm beyond embryonic reptiles and saltwater fish.

      (2) The findings could have applications for aquaculture, where skewed sex ratios apparently limit breeding efficiency.

      Weaknesses:

      (A) Scientific Concerns:

      (1) There is insufficient replication and data transparency. First, the qPCR data are presented as bar graphs without individual data points, making it impossible to assess variability or replication. Please show all individual data points and clarify n (sample size) per group. Second, the Western blotting is only shown as single replicates. If repeated 2-3 times as stated, quantification and normalization (e.g., pStat3/Stat3, GAPDH loading control) are essential. The full, uncropped blots should be included in the supplementary data.

      (2) The biological significance of the results is not clear. Many reported fold changes (e.g., kdm6b modulation by Stat3 inhibition, sox9a in S3A) are modest (<2-fold), raising concerns about biological relevance. Can the authors define thresholds of functional relevance or confirm phenotypic outcomes in these animals?

      (3) The specificity of key antibodies is not validated. Key antibodies (Stat3, pStat3, Foxl2, Amh) were raised against mammalian proteins. Their specificity for ricefield eel proteins is unverified. Validation should include siRNA-mediated knockdown with immunoblot quantification with 3 replicates. Homemade antibodies (Sox9a, Dmrt1) also require rigorous validation.

      (4) Most of the imaging data (immunofluorescence) is inconclusive. Immunofluorescence panels are small and lack monochrome channels, which severely limits interpretability. Larger, better-contrasted images (showing the merge and the monochrome of important channels) and quantification would enhance the clarity of these findings.

      (B) Other comments about the science:

      (1) In S3A, sox9a expression is not dose-responsive to Trpv4 modulation, weakening the causal inference.

      (2) An antibody against Kdm6b (if available) should be used to confirm protein-level changes.

      In sum, the interpretations are limited by the above concerns regarding data presentation and reagent specificity.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents valuable findings on the molecular mechanisms driving the female-to-male transformation in the ricefield eel (Monopterus albus) during aging. The authors explore the role of temperature-activated TRPV4 signaling in promoting testicular differentiation, proposing a TRPV4-Ca²⁺-pSTAT3-Kdm6b axis that facilitates this gonadal shift.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript describes an interesting mechanism potentially underlying sex differentiation in M. albus.

      Weaknesses:

      The current data are insufficient to fully support the central claims, and the study would benefit from more rigorous experimental approaches.

      (1) Overstated Title and Claims:

      The title "TRPV4 mediates temperature-induced sex change" overstates the evidence. No histological confirmation of gonadal transformation (e.g., formation of testicular structures) is presented. Conclusions are based solely on molecular markers such as dmrt1 and sox9a, which, although suggestive, are not definitive indicators of functional sex reversal.

      (2) Temperature vs Growth Rate Confounding (Figure 1E):

      The conclusion that warm temperature directly induces gonadal transformation is confounded by potential growth rate effects. The authors state that body size was "comparable" between 25{degree sign}C and 33{degree sign}C groups, but fail to provide supporting data. In ectotherms, growth is intrinsically temperature-dependent. Given the known correlation between size and sex change in M. albus, growth rate-rather than temperature per se-may underlie the observed sex ratio shifts. Controlled growth-matched comparisons or inclusion of growth rate metrics are needed.

      (3) TRPV4 as a Thermosensor-Insufficient Evidence:

      The characterisation of TRPV4 as a direct thermosensor lacks biophysical validation. The observed transcriptional upregulation of Trpv4 under heat (Figure 2) reflects downstream responses rather than primary sensor function. Functional thermosensors, including TRPV4, respond to heat via immediate ion channel activity-typically measurable within seconds-not mRNA expression over hours. No patch-clamp or electrophysiological data are provided to confirm TRPV4 activation thresholds in eel gonadal cells. Additionally, the Ca²⁺ imaging assay (Figure 2F) lacks essential details: the timing of GSK1016790A/RN1734 administration relative to imaging is unclear, making it difficult to distinguish direct channel activity from indirect transcriptional effects.

      (4) Cellular Context of TRPV4 Activity Is Unclear:

      In situ hybridisation suggests TRPV4 expression shifts from interstitial to somatic domains under heat (Figures. 2H, S2C), implying potential cell-type-specific roles. However, the study does not clarify: (i) whether TRPV4 plays the same role across these cell types, (ii) why somatic cells show stronger signal amplification, or (iii) the cellular composition of explants used in in vitro assays. Without this resolution, conclusions from pharmacological manipulation (e.g., GSK1016790A effects) cannot be definitively linked to specific cell populations.

      (5) Rapid Trpv4 mRNA Elevation and Channel Function:

      The authors report a dramatic increase in Trpv4 mRNA within one day of heat exposure (Figures 4D, S2B). Given that TRPV4 is a membrane channel, not a transcription factor, its rapid transcriptional sensitivity to temperature raises mechanistic questions. This finding, while intriguing, seems more correlational than functional. A clearer explanation of how TRPV4 senses temperature at the molecular level is needed.

      (6) Inconclusive Evidence for the Ca<sup>2+</sup> -pSTAT3-Kdm6b Axis:

      Although the authors propose a TRPV4-Ca<sup>2+</sup> -pSTAT3-Kdm6b-dmrt1 pathway, intermediate steps remain poorly supported. For example, western blot data (Figures 3C, 4B) do not convincingly demonstrate significant pSTAT3 elevation at 34{degree sign}C. Higher-resolution and properly quantified blots are essential. The inferred signalling cascade is based largely on temporal correlation and pharmacological inhibition, which are insufficient to establish direct regulatory relationships.

      (7) Species-Specific STAT3-Kdm6b Regulation Is Unresolved:

      The proposed activation of Kdm6b by pSTAT3 contrasts with findings in the red-eared slider turtle (Trachemys scripta), where pSTAT3 represses Kdm6b. This divergence in regulatory direction between the two TSD species is surprising and demands further justification. Cross-species differences in binding motifs or epigenetic context should be explored. Additional evidence, such as luciferase reporter assays (using wild-type and mutant pSTAT3 binding motifs in the Kdm6b promoter) is needed to confirm direct activation. A rescue experiment-testing whether Kdm6b overexpression can compensate for pSTAT3 inhibition-would also greatly strengthen the model.

      (8) Immunofluorescence-Lack of Structural Markers:

      All immunofluorescence images should include structural markers to delineate gonadal boundaries. Furthermore, image descriptions in the figure legends and main text lack detail and should be significantly expanded for clarity.

      (9) Pharmacological Reagents-Mechanisms and References:

      The manuscript lacks proper references and mechanistic descriptions for the pharmacological agents used (e.g., GSK1016790A, RN1734, Stattic). Established literature on their specificity and usage context should be cited to support their application and interpretation in this study.

      (10) Efficiency of Experimental Interventions:

      The percentage of gonads exhibiting sex reversal following pharmacological or RNAi treatments should be reported in the Results. This is critical for evaluating the strength and reproducibility of the interventions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript titled "Introduction of cytosine-5 DNA methylation sensitizes cells to oxidative damage" proposes that 5mC modifications to DNA, despite being ancient and wide-spread throughout life, represent a vulnerability, making cells more susceptible to both chemical alkylation and, of more general importance, reactive oxygen species. Sarkies et al take the innovative approach of introducing enzymatic genome-wide cytosine methylation system (DNA methyltransferases, DNMTs) into E. coli, which normally lacks such a system. They provide compelling evidence that the introduction of DNMTs increases the sensitivity of E. coli to chemical alkylation damage. Surprisingly they also show DNMTs increase the sensitivity to reactive oxygen species and propose that the DNMT generated 5mC presents a target for the reactive oxygen species that is especially damaging to cells. Evidence is presented that DNMT activity directly or indirectly produces reactive oxygen species in vivo, which is an important discovery if correct, though the mechanism for this remains obscure.

      I am satisfied that the points #2, #3 and #4 relating to non-addativity, transcriptional changes and ROS generation have been appropriately addressed in this revised manuscript. The most important point (previously #1) has not been addressed beyond the acknowledgement in the results section that: "Alternatively, 3mC induction by DNMT may lead to increased levels of ssDNA, particularly in alkB mutants, which could increase the risk of further DNA damage by MMS exposure and heighten sensitivity." This slightly miss-represents the original point that 5mC the main enzymatic product of DNMTs rather or in addition to 3mC is likely to lead to transient damage susceptible ssDNA, especially in an alkB deficient background. And more centrally to the main claims of this manuscript, the authors have not resolved whether methylated cytosine introduced into bacteria is deleterious in the context of genotoxic stress because of the oxidative modification to 5mC and 3mC, or because of oxidative/chemical attack to ssDNA that is transiently exposed in the repair processing of 5mC and 3mC, especially in an alkB deficient background. This is a crucial distinction because chemical vulnerability of 5mC would likely be a universal property of cytosine methylation across life, but the wide-spread exposure of ssDNA is expected to be peculiarity of introducing cytosine methylation into a system not evolved with that modification as a standard component of its genome.

      These two models make different predictions about the predominant mutation types generated, in the authors system using M.SssI that targets C in a CG context - if oxidative damage to 5mC dominates then mutations are expected to be predominantly in a CG context, if ssDNA exposure effects dominate then the mutations are expected to be more widely distributed - sequencing post exposure clones could resolve this.

      Strengths:

      This work is based on an interesting initial premise, it is well motivated in the introduction and the manuscript is clearly written. The results themselves are compelling.

      Weaknesses:

      I am not currently convinced by the principal interpretations and think that other explanations based on known phenomena could account for key results. Specifically the authors have not resolved whether oxidative modification to 5mC and 3mC, or chemical attack to ssDNA that is transiently exposed in the repair processing of 5mC and 3mC is the principal source of the observed genotoxicity. The authors acknowledge this potential alternative model in their discussion of the revised manuscript.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Krwawicz et al., present evidence that expression of DNMTs in E. coli results in (1) introduction of alkylation damage that is repaired by AlkB; (2) confers hypersensitivity to alkylating agents such as MMS (and exacerbated by loss of AlkB); (3) confers hypersensitivity to oxidative stress (H2O2 exposure); (4) results in a modest increase in ROS in the absence of exogenous H2O2 exposure; and (5) results in the production of oxidation products of 5mC, namely 5hmC and 5fC, leading to cellular toxicity. The findings reported here have interesting implications for the concept that such genotoxic and potentially mutagenic consequences of DNMT expression (resulting in 5mC) could be selectively disadvantageous for certain organisms. The other aspect of this work which is important for understanding the biological endpoints of genotoxic stress is the notion that DNA damage per se somehow induces elevated levels of ROS.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well-written, and the experiments have been carefully executed providing data that support the authors' proposed model presented in Fig. 7 (Discussion, sources of DNA damage due to DNMT expression).

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors have established an informative system relying on expression of DNMTs to gauge the effects of such expression and subsequent induction of 3mC and 5mC on cell survival and sensitivity to an alkylating agent (MMS) and exogenous oxidative stress (H2O2 exposure). The authors state (p4) that Fig. 2 shows that "Cells expressing either M.SssI or M.MpeI showed increased sensitivity to MMS treatment compared to WT C2523, supporting the conclusion that the expression of DNMTs increased the levels of alkylation damage." This is a confusing statement and requires revision as Fig. 2 does ALL cells shown in Fig. 2 are expressing DNMTs and have been treated with MMS. It is the absence of AlkB and the expression of DNMTs that that causes the MMS sensitivity.

      (2) It would be important to know whether the increased sensitivity (toxicity) to DNMT expression and MMS is also accompanied by substantial increases in mutagenicity. The authors should explain in the text why mutation frequencies were not also measured in these experiments.

      (3) Materials and Methods. ROS production monitoring. The "Total Reactive Oxygen Species (ROS) Assay Kit" has not been adequately described. Who is the Vendor? What is the nature of the ROS probes employed in this assay? Which specific ROS correspond to "total ROS"?

      (4) The demonstration (Fig. 4) that DNMT expression results in elevated ROS and its further synergistic increase when cells are also exposed to H2O2 is the basis for the authors' discussion of DNA damage-induced increases in cellular ROS. S. cerevisiae does not possess DNMTs/5mC, yet exposure to MMS also results in substantial increases in intracellular ROS (Rowe et al, (2008) Free Rad. Biol. Med. 45:1167-1177. PMC2643028). The authors should be aware of previous studies that have linked DNA damage to intracellular increases in ROS in other organisms and should comment on this in the text.

      Comments for the revised manuscript:

      In this revised manuscript, the authors have satisfactorily addressed the issues raised in the review of the original submission and have significantly improved these studies.

    1. “Keep reading until I know enough” → “By end of Week 2, I’ll have 20 summarized advices.” “Keep synthesizing until it feels right” → “By end of Week 4, I’ll have a draft, even if messy.”

      "until I know enough" or "until I feel right" are so dangerous; my mind is really bad at time realization. It will push things to infinite.

    1. parecer prévio
      • Informativo STF
      • Edição 1185/2025 19 de agosto de 2025

      • Emissão de parecer prévio como condição para a Assembleia Legislativa apreciar as contas prestadas pelo governador - ADPF 434/AL

      • RESUMO: A ausência de parecer prévio do Tribunal de Contas estadual não impede o julgamento das contas do governador pela Assembleia Legislativa. Entendimento contrário configuraria restrição desproporcional à autonomia do Poder Legislativo.

      Conforme jurisprudência desta Corte (1), o referido parecer possui caráter meramente opinativo, tendo em vista a exclusividade da prerrogativa do Poder Legislativo para apreciar as contas em todas as esferas da Federação. Trata-se de opinião não vinculativa e cuja falta não enseja aprovação tácita das contas.

      Na espécie, ainda que a Assembleia Legislativa alagoana sustente haver reiterada inércia do Tribunal de Contas local, com a passagem de anos sem o envio do parecer técnico, não há qualquer óbice para que o Poder Legislativo estadual exerça sua competência constitucional (CF/1988, arts. 49, IX; 71, I; e 75). Por outro lado, a competência legislativa para disciplinar sobre direito penal e processual penal é privativa da União (CF/1988, arts. 22, I; e 85, parágrafo único) (2) (3). O texto constitucional não prevê penalidade para essa omissão. Apesar disso, a Constituição do Estado de Alagoas tipifica a omissão do Presidente do Tribunal de Contas como crime de responsabilidade (art. 97, I), medida que viola o princípio da simetria (4).

      Com base nesses entendimentos, o Plenário, por unanimidade, julgou improcedente a arguição e, por maioria – ante a abertura da causa de pedir – declarou a inconstitucionalidade da expressão “sob pena de crime de responsabilidade do Presidente do Tribunal” contida no art. 97, I, da Constituição do Estado de Alagoas (5).

    2. Municípios

      Aposentadoria especial de guardas municipais – ADPF 1.095/DF - Relatores: Ministro Gilmar Mendes - DIREITO ADMINISTRATIVO SERVIDOR PÚBLICO; GUARDA MUNICIPAL; APOSENTADORIA ESPECIAL - RESUMO: As guardas municipais fazem parte do Sistema Único de Segurança Pública (SUSP), mas não possuem direito à aposentadoria especial, visto que o rol constitucional de categorias com direito a esse benefício é taxativo e não as contempla.

      Esta Corte, embora tenha reconhecido que as guardas municipais fazem parte do SUSP, não lhes conferiu integral isonomia com os demais órgãos de segurança pública, na medida em que há peculiaridades relevantes quanto ao regime jurídico desses órgãos (1).

      A EC nº 103/2019, por sua vez, estabeleceu rol taxativo das categorias em que se pode instituir idade e tempo de contribuição diferenciados mediante lei complementar (2). Como as guardas municipais não f iguram de modo expresso nessa listagem, os respectivos entes federados ficam impedidos de conceder aposentadoria especial para essas carreiras (3).

      Também é inaplicável a regra de aposentadoria especial do art. 40, § 4º-C do texto constitucional (4). Isso porque não se admite presunção de exposição a agentes nocivos à saúde pelo mero enquadramento profissional ou ocupacional. Ao contrário, é indispensável que se comprove a efetiva exposição a agentes químicos, físicos e/ou biológicos (5).

      Por fim, eventual concessão da aposentadoria especial às guardas municipais sem a elaboração de plano próprio que contenha a devida indicação de fonte de custeio e de medidas compensatórias configura desobediência ao art. 195, § 5º da CF/1988 (6). Com base nesses e em outros entendimentos, o Plenário, por maioria, julgou improcedente a arguição.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      (1) The authors demonstrate that female Spodoptera littoralis moths prefer to oviposit on wellwatered tomato plants and avoid drought-stressed plants. The study then recorded the sounds produced by drought-stressed plants and found that they produce 30 ultrasonic clicks per minute. Thereafter, the authors tested the response of female S. littoralis moths to clicks with a frequency of 60 clicks per minute in an arena with and without plants and in an arena setting with two healthy plants of which one was associated with 60 clicks per minute. These experiments revealed that in the absence of a plant, the moths preferred to lay eggs on the side of the area in which the clicks could be heard, while in the presence of a plant the S. littoralis females preferred to oviposit on the plant where the clicks were not audible. In addition, the authors also tested the response of S. littoralis females in which the tympanic membrane had been pierced making the moths unable to detect the click sounds. As hypothesised, these females placed their eggs equally on both sites of the area.

      Finally, the authors explored whether the female oviposition choice might be influenced by the courtship calls of S. littoralis males which emit clicks in a range similar to a drought-stressed tomato plant. However, no effect was found of the clicks from ten males on the oviposition behaviour of the female moths, indicating that the females can distinguish between the two types of clicks. Besides these different experiments, the authors also investigated the distribution of egg clusters within a longer arena without a plant, but with a sugar-water feeder. Here it was found that the egg clusters were mostly aggregated around the feeder and the speaker producing 60 clicks per minute. Lastly, video tracking was used to observe the behaviour of the area without a plant, which demonstrated

      that the moths gradually spent more time at the arena side with the click sounds.

      We thank the reviewers for their helpful comments. We agree with the summary, but would like to note that in the control experiment (Figure 2) we used a click rate of 30 clicks per minute—a design choice driven by the editor’s feedback. We have clarified this and, to further probe the system’s dynamics, added a second experiment employing the same click rate (30 clicks per minute) with a dehydrated plant (see details below). In both experiments, females again showed a clear tendency to oviposit nearer the speaker; these findings are described in the updated manuscript.

      (2) The study addresses a very interesting question by asking whether female moths incorporate plant acoustic signals into their oviposition choice, unfortunately, I find it very difficult to judge how big the influence of the sound on the female choice really is as the manuscript does not provide any graphs showing the real numbers of eggs laid on the different plants, but instead only provides graphs with the Bayesian model fittings for each of the experiments. In addition, the numbers given in the text seem to be relatively similar with large variations e.g. Figure 1B3: 1.8 {plus minus} 1.6 vs. 1.1 {plus minus} 1.0. Furthermore, the authors do not provide access to any of the raw data or scripts of this study, which also makes it difficult to assess the potential impact of this study. Hence, I would very much like to encourage the authors to provide figures showing the measured values as boxplots including the individual data points, especially in Figure 1, and to provide access to all the raw data underlying the figures.

      We acknowledge that there are researchers who favor Bayesian graphical representation versus raw data visualization. Therefore, we have added chartplots of the raw data from Figure 1 in the supplementary section. We are aware of the duplication in presentation and apologize for this redundancy.  

      Regarding the variance and means we obtained in our experiment, we have analyzed all raw data using the statistical model presented, and if statistical significance was found despite a particular mean difference or variance, this is meaningful from a biological perspective. One can certainly discuss whether this difference has biological importance, but it should be remembered that in this experimental system, we are trying to isolate the acoustic signal from a complex system that includes multiple signals. Therefore, at no point we’ve suggested that this is a standalone factor, but rather proposed it as an informative and significant component. 

      In addition to the experiments described above, we conducted an experiment in which we counted both eggs and clusters. The results indicate that cluster counts are a reliable proxy for reproductive investment at a given location. In this experiment, we present cluster numbers alongside egg counts (Figure 2).

      Furthermore, we apologize for the technical error that prevented our uploaded data files from reaching the reviewers. We have also uploaded updated data and code.

      (3) Regarding the analysis of the results, I am also not entirely convinced that each night can be taken as an independent egg-laying event, as the amount of eggs and the place were the eggs are laid by a female moth surely depends on the previous oviposition events. While I must admit that I am not a statistician, I would suggest, from a biological point of view, that each group of moths should be treated as a replicate and not each night. I would therefore also suggest to rather analyse the sum of eggs laid over the different consecutive nights than taking the eggs laid in each night as an independent data point.

      We thank the reviewer for this question. This is a valid and point that we will address in three aspects: 

      First, regarding our statistical approach, we used a model that takes into account the sequence of nights and examines whether there is an effect of the order of nights, i.e., we used GLMMs, with the night nested within the repetition. This is equivalent to addressing this as a repeated measure and is, to our best knowledge, the common way to treat such data. 

      Second, following the reviewer's comment, we also reran the statistics of the third experiment (i.e., “sound gradient experiments”, Figure 2 and Supplementary figure 4) when only taking the first night when the female/s laid eggs to avoid the concern of dependency. This analysis revealed the same result – i.e., a significant preference for the sound stimulus. We have now updated our methods and results section to clarify this point.  

      Third, an important detail that may not have been clearly specified in the methods: at the end of each night, we cleaned the arena of counted egg clusters using a cloth with ethanol, so that on the subsequent night, we would not expect there to be evidence of previous oviposition but thus would not exclude some sort of physiological or cognitive memories. We have now updated our methods section to clarify this important procedural point. 

      (4) Furthermore, it did not become entirely clear to me why a click frequency of 60 clicks per minute was used for most experiments, while the plants only produce clicks at a range of 30 clicks per minute. Independent of the ecological relevance of these sound signals, it would be nice if the authors could provide a reason for using this frequency range. Besides this, I was also wondering about the argument that groups of plants might still produce clicks in the range of 60 clicks per minute and that the authors' tests might therefore still be reasonable. I would agree with this, but only in the case that a group of plants with these sounds would be tested. Offering the choice between two single plants while providing the sound from a group of plants is in my view not the most ecologically reasonable choice. It would be great if the authors could modify the argument in the discussion section accordingly and further explore the relevance of different frequencies and dBlevels.

      This is an excellent point. We originally increased the click rate generate a strong signal. However, it was important for us to verify that there was ecological relevance in the stimulus we implemented in the system. For this purpose, we recorded a group of dehydrated plants at a distance of ~20cm and we measured a click rate of 20 clicks per minute (i.e., 0.33 Hz) (see Methods section). Therefore, as mentioned at the beginning of this letter, in the additional experiment described in Figure 2, we reduced the click frequency to 30 clicks per minute, and at this lower rate, the effect was maintained. Increasing plant density would probably lead to a higher rate of 30 clicks per minute. 

      (5) Finally, I was wondering how transferable the findings are towards insects and Lepidopterans in general. Not all insects possess a tympanic organ and might therefore not be able to detect the plant clicks that were recorded. Moreover, I would imagine that generalist herbivorous like Spodoptera might be more inclined to use these clicks than specialists, which very much rely on certain chemical cues to find their host plants. It would be great if the authors would point more to the fact that your study only investigated a single moth species and that the results might therefore only hold true for S. littoralis and closely related species, but not necessary for other moth species such as Sphingidae or even butterflies.

      Good point. Our research uses a specific model system of one moth species and one plant species in a particular plant-insect interaction where females select host plants for their offspring. As with any model-based research that attempts to draw broader conclusions, we've taken care to distinguish between our direct findings and potential wider implications. We believe our system may represent mechanisms relevant to a wider group of herbivorous insects with hearing capabilities, particularly considering that several moth families and other insect orders can detect ultrasound. However, additional research examining more moth and plant species is necessary to determine how broadly applicable these findings are. We have made these clarifications in the text.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      (6) The results are intriguing, and I think the experiments are very well designed. However, if female moths use the sounds emitted by dehydrated plants as cues to decide where to oviposit, the hypothesis would predict that they would avoid such sounds. The discussion mentions the possibility of a multi-modal moth decision-making process to explain these contradictory results, and I also believe this is a strong possibility. However, since this remains speculative, careful consideration is needed regarding how to interpret the findings based solely on the direct results presented in the results section.  

      Thank you for this insightful observation. We agree that the apparent attraction of females to dehydrated-plant sounds contradicts our initial prediction. Having observed this pattern consistently across multiple setups, we have now added a targeted choice experiment to the revised manuscript: here female moths were offered a choice between dehydrated plants broadcasting their natural ultrasonic emissions and a control. These results—detailed in the Discussion and presented in full in the Supplementary Materials (Supplementary Figure 4)—show that when only a dehydrated plant is available, moths would prefer it for oviposition, supporting our hypothesis that in the absence of a real plant, the plant’s sounds might represent a plant..

      (7) Additionally, the final results describing differences in olfactory responses to drying and hydrated plants are included, but the corresponding figures are placed in the supplementary materials. Given this, I would suggest reconsidering how to best present the hypotheses and clarify the overarching message of the results. This might involve reordering the results or re-evaluating which data should appear in the main text versus the supplementary materials

      Thank you for this suggestion. We have reorganized the manuscript and removed the olfactory response data from the current version to maintain a focused narrative on acoustic cues. We agree that a detailed investigation of multimodal interactions deserves a separate study, which we plan to pursue in future work. 

      (8) There were also areas where more detailed explanations of the experimental methods would be beneficial.

      Thank you for highlighting this point. We have expanded and clarified the Methods section to provide comprehensive detail on our experimental procedures.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (9) Line 1: Please include the name of the species you tested also in the title as your results might not hold true for all moth species.

      We do not fully agree with this comment. Please see comment 5.

      (10) Line 19-20: Please rephrase the sentence so that it becomes clear that the "dehydration stress" refers to the plant and not to the moths.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly

      (11) Line 31: Male moths might provide many different signals to the females, maybe better "male sound signals" or similar.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (12) Line 52-53: Maybe mention here that not all moth species have evolved these abilities.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (13) Line 77: add a space after 38.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (14) Line 88: Maybe change "secondary predators" to "natural enemies".

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (15) Line 134: Why is "notably" in italics? I would suggest using normal spelling/formatting rules here.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (16) Line 140-144: If you did perform the experiment also with the more ecological relevant playback rate, why not present these findings as your main results and use the data with the higher playback frequency as additional support?

      Thank you for this suggestion. We agree that the ecologically relevant playback data are important; as described in detail at the beginning of this letter and also in comment 4, however, to preserve a clear and cohesive narrative, we have maintained the original ordering of this section. Nevertheless, the various experiments conducted in Figure 1 differ in several components from Figure 2 and the work that examined sounds in plant groups in the appendices. Therefore, we find it more appropriate to use them as supporting evidence for the main findings rather than creating a comparison between different experimental systems. For this reason, we chose to keep them as a separate description in "The ecological playback findings (Lines 140–144) remain fully described in the Results and serve to reinforce the main observations without interrupting the manuscript's flow.

      (17) Line 146: Please explain already here how you deafened the moths.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (18) Line 181: should it be "male moths' " ?

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (19) Line 215: Why is "without a plant" in italics? I would suggest using normal spelling/formatting rules here.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (20) Line 234: I do not understand why this type of statistic was used to analyse the electroantennogram (EAG) results. Would a rather simple Student's t-test or a Wilcon rank sum test not have been sufficient? I would also like to caution you not to overinterpret the data derived from the EAG, as you combined the entire headspace into one mixture it is no longer possible to derive information on the different volatiles in the blends. The differences you observe might therefore mostly be due to the amount of emitted volatiles.

      We have reorganized the manuscript and removed the olfactory response data from the current version to maintain a focused narrative on acoustic cues (See comment 7). 

      (21) Line 268: It might be nice to add an additional reference here referring to the multimodal oviposition behaviour of the moths.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (22) Line 284: If possible, please add another reference here referring to the different cues used by moths during oviposition.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (23) Line 336: What do you mean by "closed together"?

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (24) Line 434-436: Please see my overall comments. I do not think that you can call it ecologically relevant if the signal emitted by multiple plants is played in the context of just a single plant.

      Please see comments 1 and 4.

      (25) Line 496: Please change "stats" to statistics.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (26) Line 522-524: I am not sure whether simply listing their names does give full credit to the work these people did for your study. Maybe also explain how they contributed to your work.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (27) L54 20-60kHz --> 20Hz-60kHz or 20kHz - 60kHz?

      OK. We have replaced it.

      (28) L124 Are the results for the condition where nothing was placed and the condition where a decoy silent resistor was placed combined in the analysis? If so, were there no significant differences between the two conditions? Comparing these with a condition presenting band-limited noise in the same frequency range as the drought-stressed sounds might also have been an effective approach to further isolate the specific role of the ultrasonic emissions.

      We have used both conditions due to technical constrains and pooled them tougher for analysis— statistical tests confirmed no significant differences between them—and this clarification has now been added to the Methods section including the results of the statistical test.

      (29) L125 (Fig. 1A), see Exp. 1 in the Methods). -> (Fig.1B. See Exp.1 in the Methods).

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (30) L132 "The opposite choice to what was seen in the initial experiment (Fig.1B)"

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (31) L137-143 If you are writing about results, why not describe them with figures and statistics? The current description reads like a discussion.

      These findings were not among our primary research questions; however, we believe that including them in the Results section underscores the experimental differences. In our opinion, introducing an additional figure or expanding the statistical analysis at this point would disrupt the narrative flow and risk confusing the reader.

      (32) L141 "This is higher than the rate reported for a single young plant" Are you referring to the tomato plants used in the experiments? It might be helpful to include in the main text the natural click rate emitted by tomato plants, as this information is currently only mentioned in the Methods section.

      See comment 4.  

      (33) L191 Is the main point here to convey that the plant playback effect remained significant even when the sound presentation frequency was reduced to 30 clicks per minute? The inclusion of the feeder element, however, seems to complicate the message. To simplify the results, moving the content from lines 185-202 to the supplementary materials might be a better approach. Additionally, what is the rationale for placing the sugar solution in the arena? Is it to maintain the moths' vitality during the experiment? Clarifying this in the methods section would help provide context for this experimental detail.

      In this series of experiments, we manipulated four variables—single moths, ultrasonic click rate, arena configuration (from a two-choice design to an elongated enclosure), and the response metric (total egg counts rather than cluster counts)—to evaluate moth oviposition under more ecologically realistic conditions. We demonstrate the system’s robustness and validity in a more realistic setting (by tracking individual moths, counting single eggs, etc.).  

      As noted in the text, feeders were included to preserve the moths’ natural behavior and vitality. We have further clarified this in the revised manuscript.

      (34) L215 Is the click presentation frequency 30 or 60 per minute? Since Figure 3 illustrates examples of moth movement from the experiment described in Figure 1, it might be more effective to present Figure 3 when discussing the results of Figure 1 or to include it in the supplementary materials for better clarity and organization.

      See comments 1 and 4. As mentioned in the above 

      (35) L291 Please provide a detailed explanation of the experiments and measurements for the results shown in Figure S3 (and Figure S2). If the multi-modal hypothesis discussed in the study is a key focus, it might be better to include these results in the main results section rather than in the supplementary materials.

      Thank you for this suggestion. Figure S2 was removed, see comments above. We’ve added now the context to figure S3.

      (36) L303 It might be helpful to include information about the relationship between the moth species used in this study and tomato plants somewhere in the text. This would provide an important context for understanding the ecological relevance of the experiments.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (37) Table 1 The significant figures in the numbers presented in the tables should be consistent.

      Thank you for the suggestion; we have clarified the text accordingly.

      (38) L341 The text mentions that experiments were conducted in a greenhouse, but does this mean the arena was placed inside the greenhouse? Also, the term "arena" is used - does this refer to a sealed rectangular case or something similar? For the sound presentation experiments, it seems that the arena cage was placed inside a soundproof room. If the arena is indeed a case-like structure, were there any specific measures taken to prevent sound scattering within the case, such as the choice of materials or structural modifications?

      Here, “arena” refers to the plastic boxes used throughout this study. In this particular experiment, we presented plants alone—reflecting ongoing debate in the literature—and used these trials as a baseline for our subsequent sound-presentation experiments, during which we measured sound intensity as described in the Methods section. All sound-playback experiments were conducted in sound-proof rooms, and acoustic levels were measured beforehand—sound on the control side fell below our system’s detection threshold. 

      (39) L373 "resister similar to the speaker" Could you explain it in more detail? I think this would depend on the type of speaker used-particularly whether it includes magnets. From an experimental perspective, presenting different sounds such as white noise from the speaker might have been a better control. Was there a specific reason for not doing so? Additionally, the study does not clearly demonstrate whether the electric and magnetic field environments on both sides of the arena were appropriately controlled. Without this information, it is difficult to evaluate whether using a resistor as a substitute was adequate.

      Thank you for this comment. We have now addressed this point in the Discussion. We acknowledge that we did not account for the magnetic field, which might have differed between the speaker and the resistor. We agree that using an alternative control, such as white noise, could have been informative, and we now mention this as a limitation in the revised Methods.

      (40) L435 60Hz? The representation of frequencies in the text is inconsistent, with some values expressed in Hz and others as "clicks per second." It would be better to standardize these units for clarity, such as using Hz throughout the manuscript.

      We agree that this is confusing. We reviewed the text and made sure that when we addressed click per second, we meant how many clicks were produced and when we addressed Hz units it was in the context of sound frequencies.  

      (41) L484 "we quantified how many times each individual crossed the center of the arena" Is this data being used in the results?

      Yes. Mentioned in the text just before Figure 3. L220

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In this study, Meunier et al. investigated the functional role of IL-10 in avian mucosal immunity. While the anti-inflammatory role of IL-10 is well established in mammals, and several confirmatory knockout models are available in mice, IL-10's role in avian mucosal immunity is so far correlative. In this study, the authors generated two different models of IL-10 ablation in Chickens. A whole body knock-out model and an enhancer KO model leading to reduced IL10 expression. The authors first performed in vitro LPS stimulation-based experiments, and then in vivo two different infection models employing C. jejuni and E. tenella, to demonstrate that complete ablation of IL10 leads to enhanced inflammation-related pathology and gene expression, and enhanced pathogen clearance. At a steady-state level, however, IL-10 ablation did not lead to spontaneous colitis. 

      Strengths: 

      Overall, the study is well executed and establishes an anti-inflammatory role of IL-10 in birds. While the results are expected and not surprising, this appears to be the first report to conclusively demonstrate IL-10's anti-inflammatory role upon its genetic ablation in the avian model. Provided this information is applicable in combating pathogen infection in livestock species in sustainable industries like poultry, the study will be of interest to the field. 

      Weaknesses: 

      The study is primarily a confirmation of the already established anti-inflammatory role of IL-10. 

      We do not agree that this work is primarily confirmatory. The anti-inflammatory role of IL10 was indeed known previously from studies in mammals. The much more general insight from the current study is our demonstration of the intrinsic trade-off between inflammation and tolerance in the response to both the microbiome (which was significantly altered in the IL10 knockout birds) and mucosal pathogens. The study of Eimeria challenge in particular highlights the fact that it may be better for the host to tolerate a potential pathogen than to take on the cost of elimination.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      The authors were to investigate the functional role of IL10 on mucosal immunity in chickens. CRISPR technology was employed to generate IL10 knock-out chickens in both exon and putative enhancer regions. IL10 expressions were either abolished (knockout in exon) or reduced (enhancer knock-out). IL-10 plays an important role in the composition of the caecal microbiome. Through various enteric pathogen challenges, deficient IL10 expression was associated with enhanced pathogen clearance, but with more severe lesion scores and body weight loss. 

      Strengths: 

      Both in vitro and in vivo knock-out abolished and reduced IL10 expression, and broad enteric pathogens were challenged in vivo, and various parameters were examined to evaluate the functional role of IL10 on mucosal immunity. 

      Weaknesses: 

      Overexpression of IL-10 either in vitro or in vivo may further support the findings from this study. 

      An overexpression experiment, regardless of outcome, would not necessarily support or invalidate the findings of the current study. It would address the question of whether the absolute concentration of IL10 produced alters the outcome of an infection.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      The following are the recommendations that, in my opinion, will be helpful to enhance the quality of the study. 

      Major point: 

      The authors at a steady state did not observe any sign of spontaneous colitis. Since IL-10 KO in mice leads to enhanced pathological score upon DSS-mediated induction of colitis, and several colitis models are well established in birds, it will be worthwhile to test the consequence of experimentally inducing colitis in this context. 

      One of the novel features of this study is the observation that the microbiome is modified in the IL10KO HOM chicks, which may serve to mitigate potential spontaneous pathology; we now mention this in the discussion. We agree that it could be worthwhile in the future to look at additional challenge models. However, we would argue that the Eimeria challenge is a sufficiently adequate experimentally-induced model of colitis to demonstrate the increased inflammation that occurs in an IL10-deficient bird. This is further supported by evidence of enhanced inflammatory responses in the caeca of IL10KO HOM birds challenged with Campylobacter or Salmonella relative to WT controls. See in the revised manuscript (pages 12-13).

      Minor points: 

      (1) In Figure 2B, the authors should confirm whether the ROS-AV163 groups also have LPS treatment. 

      The legend for Figure 2B already states that neutralizing anti-IL10 antibody was added to LPS-stimulated BMDMs: “Nitric oxide production was assessed by measuring nitrite levels using Griess assay for LPS-stimulated BMDMs […] in the absence or presence of neutralizing anti-IL10 antibody ROS-AV163”. However, for added clarity we have now modified the x-axis label for Figure 2B (“+ROS-AV163” replaced by “+LPS +anti-IL10”) and we have also made minor changes to the figure legend. See in the revised manuscript (page 33).

      (2) In Figure 3F, the authors should discuss why the duodenum of KO birds has enhanced infiltration compared to WT? 

      We are not sure what the reviewer is referring to here. Although not specifically mentioned in Figure 3F, there is no statistically significant difference in cellular infiltration in the duodenum of IL10KO WT and HOM birds raised in our specified pathogen-free (SPF) facility, nor in the duodenum of IL10KO WT and HOM birds raised in our conventional facility (Mann-Whitney U tests, p>0.1 in both cases); this can be seen in the sums of histopathological scores shown in Figures 3C (SPF facility) and 3E (conventional facility). Figure 3F shows that there is a statistically significant difference in cellular infiltration scores in the duodenum and proximal colon of both IL10KO WT and HOM birds based on the environment they are raised in (SPF vs conventional). We have made minor changes to the text to clarify this. See in the revised manuscript (page 7).

      (3) The authors should discuss the observed differences in the C. jejuni colonization results among the two cohorts at week 1 and week 2 post-infection. 

      Numbers of C. jejuni in the caeca of IL10KO HOM birds were markedly lower than for WT controls at 1-week post-infection in cohort 1, and at both time intervals post-infection in cohort 2 (Figure 4A). This reached statistical significance at 1-week post-infection in cohort 1 and at 2-weeks post-infection in cohort 2. It is evident from Figure 4A that considerable inter-animal variance existed in each group, and in the IL10KO HOM birds in particular. This is typical of C. jejuni colonisation in chickens, where bacterial population structures have been reported to be variable and unpredictable (Coward et al., Appl Environ Microbiol 2008, PMID: 18424530). Similar variation between time intervals, birds and repeated experiments has been reported when evaluating vaccines against C. jejuni colonisation (e.g. Buckley et al., Vaccine 2010, PMID: 19853682; Nothaft et al., Front Microbiol 2021, PMID: 34867850). We performed two independent studies for this reason. Taken together, we consider that our data provide convincing evidence of elevated pro-inflammatory responses upon C. jejuni infection in IL10KO HOM birds relative to WT controls that associates with reduced bacterial burden. Our data is also consistent with a published observation that a commercial broiler line with low IL10 expression had correspondingly elevated expression of CXCLi-1, CXCLi-2 and IL-1b (Humphrey et al., mBio 2014, reference 33 in our original submission). We have added text to the discussion to capture the points above.  See in the revised manuscript (page 13).

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      For the animal challenging experiments, both IL10KO HOM and IL10EnKO HOM chickens were used for Eimeria challenge, but not for Salmonella and Campylobacter. Could the authors justify why? 

      The Eimeria challenge produced a much higher and more reproducible level of inflammation than either of the bacterial challenge models. Within the parasite challenge cohorts, IL10KO HET and IL10EnKO HOM birds were only marginally different from WT controls (e.g. parasite replication: Figures 5A and B; lesion scores: Figures 5E and F; body weight gain: Figures 5G and H). Given the more limited response and the inter-individual variation in the bacterial challenge models, we felt that analysis of a sufficiently large cohort of the IL10KO HOM was appropriate, while additional cohorts of IL10KO HET and IL10EnKO HOM birds large enough to detect statistically significant differences could not be justified.

      In the M&M, there was no mention of # of birds generated for IL10EnKO HOM, HET, etc. 

      Full details of bird numbers can be found in SI Appendix Table S1 “Number of IL10KO and IL10EnKO WT, HET and HOM chicks hatched in the NARF SPF chicken facility in the first (G1) and second (G2) generations”. Table S1 is already referred to in the Results section “Generation of IL10-deficient chickens”; we have now also clearly referred to it in the “Animals” and “Generation of surrogate host chickens and establishment of the IL10KO and IL10EnKO lines under SPF conditions” sections of the Materials and Methods. In all three sections we have also added some text to clarify that the table details G1 and G2 bird numbers. See in the revised manuscript (pages 5, 15, 17).

      From the results of Campylobacter challenge, the results from the cohort 1 and cohort 2 were not consistent at both 1 and 2 weeks of post-infection. There is not much discussion on this inconsistency. What is the final conclusion: significant difference in week 1 or week 2, OR none of them, OR both of them. What would happen if an additional cohort were conducted for Salmonella and Eimeria? 

      As noted in response to Reviewer 1 (minor point 3), we have now added text to the discussion on the partial inconsistency between independent C. jejuni challenge studies. We do not feel that additional experiments to address this comment are required. Highly significant increases in the infiltration of lymphoplasmacytic cells and heterophils were detected in IL10KO HOM chickens relative to WT controls in the caeca, a key site of Campylobacter colonisation. This was consistently observed in two independent cohorts at both 1- and 2-weeks post-infection (SI Appendix Figures S7 and S8) and was reflected in similar patterns of expression of pro-inflammatory genes at these intervals in both cohorts (Figure 4B). As our laboratory has observed substantially less variation between repeated Salmonella challenges, a single study was performed, but with adequate power to detect statistical differences.  The effects of E. tenella infection in IL10KO WT and HOM birds were replicated (compare Figure 4 with data from day 6 in Figure 5).

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      Reply to the reviewers

      We appreciate the constructive and supportive feedback on our manuscript. All three reviewers acknowledged the significance and novelty of our work on bacterial telomere protection. In response to their suggestions, we have conducted the requested experiments and revised the manuscript accordingly. These changes have enhanced the rigor of our study and clarified our interpretations and explanations.

      Moreover, we characterized an additional truncation mutant of TelN (TelN Δ445–631), which lacks the two C-terminal domains. Despite this deletion, the mutant retained protection activity (Supplementary Figure S4B), indicating that the remaining regions of the protein are sufficient to confer efficient protection in this assay.

      Finally, we removed three sequence alignments (previously Supplementary Figures S6A and S7), as we recognized that the high degree of sequence divergence could hinder proper alignment and potentially lead to misinterpretation.

      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      This study addresses how the bacterial telomere protein TelN protects telomere ends against the action of the Mre11-Rad50 nuclease (MR). This protection is essential for the stability of hairpin-ended linear plasmid and chromosomes in bacteria but had not been explored before. The authors demonstrate that TelN is necessary and sufficient to block MR-dependent DNA cleavage when bound to its specific telomere sequence. By combining elegant genetics and biochemical approaches, it convincingly shows that TelN-dependent inhibition likely involves a specific interaction between TelN and the MR complex. The manuscript is well written, easy to read and focused on the relevant information. The claims and the conclusions are supported by the data. There is no over-interpretation.

      Comments: - Figure 1B, unnormalized transformation efficiency would be useful to show in SI

      The unnormalized B. subtilis transformation efficiency has now been added as new figure panel S1B.

      • Figures 2B, 2C, 3C, 3D, 4C, 5A and 5B: quantification of independent experiments should be added

      While these DNA protection experiments show a clearly reproducible pattern of DNA degradation, the exact response to TelN titration varies somewhat between experimental replicates. We initially included the quantification of remaining full-length DNA because the corresponding band is hard to discern in the gel image due to pixel saturation. However, we realize now that this may mislead readers to think that the degradation occurs always with the exact same dosage response.

      To avoid this, we have decided to remove the quantification and instead show the relevant part of the gel also at higher contrast to better visualize the loss of full-length DNA due to DNA degradation. In addition, we have included replicate experiments carried out at the same MR concentration (125 nM M₂R₂) or at higher concentration (500 nM M₂R₂) in the supplementary material. These examples demonstrate the general reproducibility of the assay.

      **Referee cross-commenting**

      Perfect for me. It seems that there is a consensus.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):

      This pioneering study provides a very strong basis for a new understanding of telomeres in bacteria and offers fascinating evolutionary perspectives when compared to similar mechanisms active at telomeres in eukaryotic cells.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      The paper is well-presented and well-written throughout. The paper shows convincingly that TelN protects hairpin DNA ends from the activity of SbcCD, presumably providing a protection mechanism for N15 phage DNA in vivo. Furthermore, this protection activity is shown not to require the catalytic (resolvase) activity of TelN, nor its poorly characterised C-terminal domain. The paper also suggests that this inhibition acts both at the level of competition for the DNA hairpin end and at the level of a direct protein:protein interaction between TelN and MR. An (acknowledged) weakness is that there is no real insight into the protein:protein interaction suggested by the experiments shown in Figure 5. Ideally, the protein:protein interaction interface would be identified and mutations in this interface would be shown to reduce hairpin protection.

      Specific comments/questions

      (1) What pathway (in vivo) leads to inactivation of linear hairpin DNA - one suspects that cleavage by SbcCD at the hairpins is probably not the full story. Presumably SbcCD cleavage facilitates further processing by other long range resection systems such as RecBCD, Exo1, RecQ/J etc. Would it be appropriate to view the hairpin as an adaption to protect against these nucleases, which then must be complemented with a mechanism to suppress SbcCD?

      The reviewer's suggestion that hairpin ends represent a first layer of adaptation against nucleolytic processing is compelling. Hairpin structures inherently resist many exonucleases due to their covalently closed nature (absence of free 3’ or 5’ ends) but remain vulnerable to MR processing (Connelly et al, 1998, 1999; Saathoff et al, 2018). This creates a scenario where effective telomere protection requires both the structural barrier provided by the hairpin and an active mechanism to suppress MR activity. We have added this perspective to the relevant paragraph in the discussion.

      (2) Section starting "Direct inhibition of MR by TelN in vitro". What is the word direct supposed to convey here? To me it suggests that the inhibition is via direct interaction of TelN with MR (rather than, for example, a result of competition for the hairpin DNA end) which is not shown here. Suggest either defining or removing the word direct. This point gains more importance considering that differentiating between inhibition mechanisms becomes a focus of later parts of the paper.

      By "direct inhibition," we meant that TelN blocks MR nuclease activity without requiring additional cofactors, as demonstrated in this minimal reaction system containing only TelN, MR complex, DNA substrate, and ATP. To avoid ambiguity, we have reworded the corresponding headline and paragraph.

      (3) Figure 2B - Why no control lane without MR? - this is a basic control to show that he degradation we are seeing in the absence of TelN is MR-dependent. Formally, as shown, the degradation could be caused by the ATP stock.


      We have now included ATP-only control lanes (without MR complex), which show no substrate degradation, confirming that ATP stocks do not contain contaminating nucleases and that the observed degradation is indeed MR-dependent. These controls are included in the supplementary data (Figure S3A) along with additional replicate experiments. Notably, the dose-dependent protection observed at low TelN concentrations (where MR activity is not fully inhibited) provides additional evidence for the specificity of the MR-TelN interaction system, as non-specific nuclease contamination would result in complete substrate degradation regardless of TelN concentration.

      (4) Why not use B. subtilis SbcCD for the species specificity experiment? Also, is it not surprising that TelN yielded zero protection against MRX given that the DNA sequence specificity experiments above suggest competition for DNA substrate is part of the inhibition mechanism?


      We agree that this would be a great addition. We attempted but were unable to purify active B. subtilis SbcCD protein despite multiple attempts. The yeast MRX experiment serves the same purpose of demonstrating species specificity and represents a more evolutionarily distant comparison, which strengthens our conclusions about bacterial-specific inhibition.

      (5) If the authors felt it appropriate, I thought there was scope for further discussion/introductory material. There are strong parallels here with mechanisms used by phage to protect themselves from the activities of RecBCD, which include both proteins that protect DNA ends like T4 gene 2, we well as proteins that bind directly to RecBCD to inactivate it like lambda Gam. As such, the work here will appeal as much to those interested in bacterial defence systems / phage:host interactions as it does to those interested in telomere biology. Especially significant is the inhibition of DNA end processing factors by lambda Gam since this protein is reported to interact with both RecBCD and SbcCD (PMID: 2531105).

      We agree that there are obvious parallels between lambda Gam and TelN as counter-defence factors. This was likely largely missed in previous work because the telomere resolution activity of TelN masked its function in counter-defence. We have added a statement on this matter at the end of the discussion.

      (6) Just a gripe really: it seems to be 'de rigeur' at the moment to re-name bacterial proteins for their human orthologues, presumably to elevate the perceived importance of the work(?), but it is not a practice I think is terribly helpful as it causes issues when searching literature. Minimally it would be great if the authors could ensure they add SbcCD as a keyword for search purposes.

      We appreciate the reviewer's concern about nomenclature inconsistencies in the literature. We have chosen MR over SbcCD as a more generic term that covers eukaryotes, archaea and lately also bacteria and will hopefully contribute to a more consistent terminology in the literature across the domains of life in the future. Our choice to use "Mre11-Rad50" (MR) for the E. coli SbcCD complex is also consistent with prominent recent publications (Käshammer et al., 2019; Gut et al., 2022), explicitly referring to the E. coli system as "Mre11-Rad50" while acknowledging the bacterial designation. To link to previous literature, we made sure that both "SbcCD" and "Mre11-Rad50" are mentioned in the abstract. And, as suggested, we have now also added “SbcCD” to our keyword list to facilitate comprehensive literature searches.

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      I have nothing to add. The reviewers' comments are all broadly positive and consistent.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required):

      This is an excellent paper unveiling a phage encoded "counter-defence" mechanism designed to protect phage DNA from degradation. It will be of special interest to those studying telomere biology of phage:host interactions.



      Reviewer #3

      The authors investigate how the N15 phage protelomerase TelN protects linear chromosomes that terminate in hairpin structures (a sort of telomere). In E. coli and B. subtilis cells, removal or truncation of telN reduces transformation/survival of linear DNA, whereas complementation with full-length or a catalytically inactive TelN restores viability, consistent with TelN playing a nonenzymatic capping function.

      In vitro, TelN binds hairpin substrates with moderate affinity and protects them from the nuclease activity of the Mre11/Rad50 complex. The authors propose that TelN originated as an early, sequence specific barrier against MR mediated DNA end processing, establishing fundamental principles of telomere protection that persist from bacteria to eukaryotes.

      Major comments:

      The manuscript convincingly shows that TelN can functionally block the Mre11Rad50 (MR) nuclease on a hairpin DNA end in a sequence specific manner (suggesting a physical interaction), but it doesn't directly demonstrate this. A simple pull-down or equilibrium binding method would be useful in proving a physical interaction.

      We agree that this would be a valuable addition to the study. We have made several attempts to detect direct interaction by co-immunoprecipitation. However, without success so far. We do not have sufficient material for equilibrium binding methods (yet).__ ____ __


      The MR complex requires ATP hydrolysis for resection of DNA ends. It would be a nice addition to the manuscript if the effect of TelN of Rad50 ATPase activity was tested.


      We have tested the effect of TelN on Rad50 ATPase activity and found no significant impact under our experimental conditions, possible in line with the lack of stable interaction.

      The bar plot on Fig 3B indicates that the experiments are performed in triplicate. The statistical significance of the differences between conditions should be determined. The same general comment could be made regarding the quantification of the polyacrylamide gels - how reproducible are these values?


      We performed paired t-test analysis for the following figures and now indicate the p-values wherever significant (below 0.05): Figures 1D, 1E, 3B, 4B and S4B. We used paired t-tests to generally compare linear vs circular plasmid transformation efficiency for each condition. In Figure 4B, which included two different linear DNA constructs, we compared the two linear DNA constructs directly to each other. [Given that our experimental design included multiple control conditions with known expected outcomes to validate assay performance, rather than many independent exploratory comparisons, we report uncorrected p-values as the primary analysis. The inclusion of multiple controls with predictable outcomes reduces the likelihood of false positive interpretations.]

      As stated in response to reviewer 1, while the exact values for the DNA degradation profile vary somewhat between experiments (likely due to variations in band quantification – see also response to comment below), the general trends are robust as for example indicated by similar experiments performed with higher MR concentration (500 nM instead of 125 nM M₂R₂ concentrations for all TelN variants) demonstrating reproducibility across different conditions. For Figure 5, however, we are unable to provide additional repeat experiments due to limitations in reagent availability. Considering the robust effect seen with Ec MR controls and the presence of multiple samples in the dilution series, we are nevertheless confident about the conclusion.

      Minor comments:

      A better explanation of how the gels were quantified should be provided. Were the products included in the analysis, or was it just the decrease in the substrate band that was measured?

      As also stated above, we have removed the band quantification and instead show the bands also at different contrast settings.

      In our original approach, gel band quantification was performed using ImageQuant TL software (version 8.2.0, GE Healthcare). For each gel, individual lanes were defined using either fixed-width boundaries (95-103 pixels) or automatic edge detection, depending on the gel quality and band definition. Band volumes were calculated using rolling ball background subtraction (radius 180 pixels) with automatic band detection. Substrate degradation was assessed by measuring the integrated density (volume) of the remaining full-length (or near full-length) substrate bands under different treatment conditions. The band volume values were plotted directly to compare substrate levels across treatment groups.

      We now present the data as two gel panels: an exposure showing the full reaction profile, and another exposure focusing on the substrate bands to clearly demonstrate dose-dependent protection. Additional replicate experiments including ATP-only controls (confirming no contamination from ATP stocks) and experiments at 500 nM M₂R₂ concentrations, are provided in the supplementary data. This approach provides more direct visualization of the biological phenomenon with comprehensive control validation.

      I felt like the Results jump rather abruptly from B. subtilis chromosome assays to E. coli plasmid experiments. Maybe the addition of a few linking sentences would improve this transition.


      Upon re-reading the manuscript we agree with this assertion and have added further information to provide a smoother transition.

      A comment on the stoichiometry of TelN and genome ends during phage replication would be useful.

      Our in vitro data suggest that effective protection can be achieved at relatively low TelN:DNA ratios in vitro, consistent with the notion of formation of stable, protective nucleoprotein structures. We unfortunately do not currently have information on the copy number of TelN per cell or per hairpin end. It is not easy to obtain reliable values for these numbers. However, we can speculate that multiple TelN proteins are present due to the presence of three copies of a DNA sequence motif (binding to CTD1) in each telomeric DNA, consistent with the formation of stable, protective nucleoprotein structures.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      General assessment:

      Strengths: A nice combination of genetics and biochemistry convincingly demonstrates that TelN protects linear chromosomes/replicons from MR-dependent degradation independent of its cleavage-ligase activity. It does this by binding to the hairpin DNA ends in a sequence specific fashion and the species specificity suggests a direct physical interaction, which likely inhibits the nuclease activity of the MR complex

      Limitations: The lack of characterization of the putative physical interaction between TelN and the MR complex is considered a weakness.

      Advance: The manuscript fills in a mechanistic gap between protelomerase-mediated telomere formation and maintenance by demonstrating a protective/capping role. This is the first quantitative analysis of DNA-end protection from MR nuclease activity by TelN.

      Audience: Readers interested in bacterial chromosome biology, DNA repair, the parallels to eukaryotic shelterin will be interesting to the broader telomere and genome stability communities.

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      Referee #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      The paper is well-presented and well-written throughout. The paper shows convincingly that TelN protects hairpin DNA ends from the activity of SbcCD, presumably providing a protection mechanism for N15 phage DNA in vivo. Furthermore, this protection activity is shown not to require the catalytic (resolvase) activity of TelN, nor its poorly characterised C-terminal domain. The paper also suggests that this inhibition acts both at the level of competition for the DNA hairpin end and at the level of a direct protein:protein interaction between TelN and MR. An (acknowledged) weakness is that there is no real insight into the protein:protein interaction suggested by the experiments shown in Figure 5. Ideally, the protein:protein interaction interface would be identified and mutations in this interface would be shown to reduce hairpin protection.

      Specific comments/questions

      (1) What pathway (in vivo) leads to inactivation of linear hairpin DNA - one suspects that cleavage by SbcCD at the hairpins is probably not the full story. Presumably SbcCD cleavage facilitates further processing by other long range resection systems such as RecBCD, Exo1, RecQ/J etc. Would it be appropriate to view the hairpin as an adaption to protect against these nucleases, which then must be complemented with a mechanism to suppress SbcCD?

      (2) Section starting "Direct inhibition of MR by TelN in vitro". What is the word direct supposed to convey here? To me it suggests that the inhibition is via direct interaction of TelN with MR (rather than, for example, a result of competition for the hairpin DNA end) which is not shown here. Suggest either defining or removing the word direct. This point gains more importance considering that differentiating between inhibition mechanisms becomes a focus of later parts of the paper.

      (3) Figure 2B - Why no control lane without MR? - this is a basic control to show that he degradation we are seeing in the absence of TelN is MR-dependent. Formally, as shown, the degradation could be caused by the ATP stock.

      (4) Why not use B. subtilis SbcCD for the species specificity experiment? Also, is it not surprising that TelN yielded zero protection against MRX given that the DNA sequence specificity experiments above suggest competition for DNA substrate is part of the inhibition mechanism?

      (5) If the authors felt it appropriate, I thought there was scope for further discussion/introductory material. There are strong parallels here with mechanisms used by phage to protect themselves from the activities of RecBCD, which include both proteins that protect DNA ends like T4 gene 2, we well as proteins that bind directly to RecBCD to inactivate it like lambda Gam. As such, the work here will appeal as much to those interested in bacterial defence systems / phage:host interactions as it does to those interested in telomere biology. Especially significant is the inhibition of DNA end processing factors by lambda Gam since this protein is reported to interact with both RecBCD and SbcCD (PMID: 2531105).

      (6) Just a gripe really: it seems to be 'de rigeur' at the moment to re-name bacterial proteins for their human orthologues, presumably to elevate the perceived importance of the work(?), but it is not a practice I think is terribly helpful as it causes issues when searching literature. Minimally it would be great if the authors could ensure they add SbcCD as a keyword for search purposes.

      Referee cross-commenting

      I have nothing to add. The reviewers comments are all broadly positive and and consistent.

      Significance

      This is an excellent paper unveiling a phage encoded "counter-defence" mechanism designed to protect phage DNA from degradation. It will be of special interest to those studying telomere biology of phage:host interactions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors applied a range of computational methods to probe the translocation of cholesterol through the Smoothened receptor. They test whether cholesterol is more likely to enter the receptor straight from the outer leaflet of the membrane or via a binding pathway in the inner leaflet first. Their data reveal that both pathways are plausible but that the free energy barriers of pathway 1 are lower, suggesting this route is preferable. They also probe the pathway of cholesterol transport from the transmembrane region to the cysteine-rich domain (CRD).

      Strengths:

      (1) A wide range of computational techniques is used, including potential of mean force calculations, adaptive sampling, dimensionality reduction using tICA, and MSM modelling. These are all applied in a rigorous manner, and the data are very convincing. The computational work is an exemplar of a well-carried out study.

      (2) The computational predictions are experimentally supported using mutagenesis, with an excellent agreement between their PMF and mRNA fold change data.

      (3) The data are described clearly and coherently, with excellent use of figures. They combine their findings into a mechanism for cholesterol transport, which on the whole seems sound.

      (4) The methods are described well, and many of their analysis methods have been made available via GitHub, which is an additional strength.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Some of the data could be presented a little more clearly. In particular, Figure 7 needs additional annotation to be interpretable. Can the position of the cholesterol be shown on the graph so that we can see the diameter change more clearly?

      (2) In Figure 3C, it doesn't look like the Met is constricting the tunnel at all. What residue is constricting the tunnel here? Can we see the Ala and Met panels from the same angle to compare the landscapes? Or does the mutation significantly change the tunnel? Why not A283 to a bulkier residue? Finally, the legend says that the figure shows that cholesterol can still pass this residue, but it doesn't really show this. Perhaps if the HOLE graph was plotted, we could see the narrowest point of the tunnel and compare it to the size of cholesterol.

      (3) The PMF axis in 3b and d confused me for a bit. Looking at the Supplementary data, it's clear that, e.g., the F455I change increases the energy barrier for chol entering the receptor. But in 3d this is shown as a -ve change, i.e., favourable. This seems the wrong way around for me. Either switch the sign or make this clearer in the legend, please.

      (4) The impact of G280V is put down to a decrease in flexibility, but it could also be a steric hindrance. This should be discussed.

      (5) Are the reported energy barriers of the two pathways (5.8{plus minus}0.7 and 6.5{plus minus}0.8 kcal/mol) significantly and/or substantially different enough to favour one over the other? This could be discussed in the manuscript.

      (6) Are the energy barriers consistent with a passive diffusion-driven process? It feels like, without a source of free energy input (e.g., ion or ATP), these barriers would be difficult to overcome. This could be discussed.

      (7) Regarding the kinetics from MSM, it is stated that the values seen here are similar to MFS transporters, but this then references another MSM study. A comparison to experimental values would support this section a lot.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This manuscript presents a study combining molecular dynamics simulations and Hedgehog (Hh) pathway assays to investigate cholesterol translocation pathways to Smoothened (SMO), a G protein-coupled receptor central to Hedgehog signal transduction. The authors identify and characterize two putative cholesterol access routes to the transmembrane domain (TMD) of SMO and propose a model whereby cholesterol traverses through the TMD to the cysteine-rich domain (CRD), which is presented as the primary site of SMO activation.

      The MD simulations and biochemical experiments are carefully executed and provide useful data. However, the manuscript is significantly weakened by a narrow and selective interpretation of the literature, overstatement of certain conclusions, and a lack of appropriate engagement with alternative models that are well-supported by published data-including data from prior work by several of the coauthors of this manuscript. In its current form, the manuscript gives a biased impression of the field and overemphasizes the role of the CRD in cholesterol-mediated SMO activation. Below, I provide specific points where revisions are needed to ensure a more accurate and comprehensive treatment of the biology.

      Major Comments:

      (1) Overstatement of the CRD as the Orthosteric Site of SMO Activation

      The manuscript repeatedly implies or states that the CRD is the orthosteric site of SMO activation, without adequate acknowledgment of alternative models. To give just a few examples (of many in this manuscript):

      a) "PTCH is proposed to modulate the Hh signal by decreasing the ability of membrane cholesterol to access SMO's extracellular cysteine-rich domain (CRD)" (p. 3).

      b) "In recent years there has been a vigorous debate on the orthosteric site of SMO" (p. 3).

      c) "cholesterol must travel through the SMO TMD to reach the orthosteric site in the CRD" (p. 4).

      d) "we observe cholesterol moving along TM6 to the TMD-CRD interface (common pathway, Fig. 1d) to access the orthosteric binding site in the CRD" (p. 6).

      While the second quote in this list at least acknowledges a debate, the surrounding text suggests that this debate has been entirely resolved in favor of the CRD model. This is misleading and not reflective of the views of other investigators in the field (see, for example, a recent comprehensive review from Zhang and Beachy, Nature Reviews Molecular and Cell Biology 2023, which makes the point that both the CRD and 7TM sites are critical for cholesterol activation of SMO as well as PTCH-mediated regulation of SMO-cholesterol interactions).

      In contrast, a large body of literature supports a dual-site model in which both the CRD and the TMD are bona fide cholesterol-binding sites essential for SMO activation. Examples include:

      a) Byrne et al., Nature 2016: point mutation of the CRD cholesterol binding site impairs-but does not abolish-SMO activation by cholesterol (SMO D99A, Y134F, and combination mutants - Fig 3 of the 2016 study).

      b) Myers et al., Dev Cell 2013 and PNAS 2017: CRD deletion mutants retain responsiveness to PTCH regulation and cholesterol mimetics (similar Hh responsiveness of a CRD deletion mutant is also observed in Fig 4 Byrne et al, Nature 2016).

      c) Deshpande et al., Nature 2019: mutation of residues in the TMD cholesterol binding site blocks SMO activation entirely, strongly implicating the TMD as a required site, in contrast to the partial effects of mutating or deleting the CRD site.

      Qi et al., Nature 2019, and Deshpande et al., Nature 2019, both reported cholesterol binding at the TMD site based on high-resolution structural data. Oddly, Deshpande et al., Nature 2019, is not cited in the discussion of TMD binding on p. 3, despite being one of the first papers to describe cholesterol in the TMD site and its necessity for activation (the authors only cite it regarding activation of SMO by synthetic small molecules).

      Kinnebrew et al., Sci Adv 2022 report that CRD deletion abolished PTCH regulation, which is seemingly at odds with several studies above (e.g., Byrne et al, Nature 2016; Myers et al, Dev Cell 2013); but this difference may reflect the use of an N-terminal GFP fusion to SMO in the Kinnebrew et al 2022, which could alter SMO activation properties by sterically hindering activation at the TMD site by cholesterol (but not synthetic SMO agonists like SAG); in contrast, the earlier work by Byrne et al is not subject to this caveat because it used an untagged, unmodified form of SMO.

      Although overexpression of PTCH1 and SMO (wild-type or mutant) has been noted as a caveat in studies of CRD-independent SMO activation by cholesterol, this reviewer points out that several of the studies listed above include experiments with endogenous PTCH1 and low-level SMO expression, demonstrating that SMO can clearly undergo activation by cholesterol (as well as regulation by PTCH1) in a manner that does not require the CRD.

      Recommendation:

      The authors should revise the manuscript to provide a more balanced overview of the field and explicitly acknowledge that the CRD is not the sole activation site. Instead, a dual-site model is more consistent with available structural, mutational, and functional data. In addition, the authors should reframe their interpretation of their MD studies to reflect this broader and more accurate view of how cholesterol binds and activates SMO.

      (2) Bias in Presentation of Translocation Pathways

      The manuscript presents the model of cholesterol translocation through SMO to the CRD as the predominant (if not sole) mechanism of activation. Statements such as: "Cholesterol traverses SMO to ultimately reach the CRD binding site" (p. 6) suggest an exclusivity that is not supported by prior literature in the field. Indeed, the authors' own MD data presented here demonstrate more stable cholesterol binding at the TMD than at the CRD (p 17), and binding of cholesterol to the TMD site is essential for SMO activation. As such, it is appropriate to acknowledge that cholesterol may activate SMO by translocating through the TM5/6 tunnel, then binding to the TMD site, as this is a likely route of SMO activation in addition to the CRD translocation route they highlight in their discussion.

      The authors describe two possible translocation pathways (Pathway 1: TM2/3 entry to TMD; Pathway 2: TM5/6 entry and direct CRD transfer), but do not sufficiently acknowledge that their own empirical data support Pathway 2 as more relevant. Indeed, because their experimental data suggest Pathway 2 is more strongly linked to SMO activation, this pathway should be weighted more heavily in the authors' discussion. In addition, Pathway 2 is linked to cholesterol binding to both the TMD and CRD sites (the former because the TMD binding site is at the terminus of the hydrophobic tunnel, the latter via the translocation pathway described in the present manuscript), so it is appropriate that Pathway 2 figure more prominently than Pathway 1 into the authors' discussion.

      The authors also claim that "there is no experimental structure with cholesterol in the inner leaflet region of SMO TMD" (p 16). However, a structural study of apo-SMO from the Manglik and Cheng labs (Zhang et al., Nat Comm, 2022) identified a cholesterol molecule docked at the TM5/6 interface and also proposed a "squeezing" mechanism by which cholesterol could enter the TM5/6 pocket from the membrane. The authors do not take this SMO conformation into account in their models, nor do they discuss the possibility that conformational dynamics at the TM5/6 interface could facilitate cholesterol flipping and translocation into the hydrophobic conduit, even though both possibilities have precedent in the 2022 empirical cryoEM structural analysis.

      Recommendation:

      The authors should avoid oversimplification of the SMO cholesterol activation process, either by tempering these claims or broadening their discussion to better reflect the complexity and multiplicity of cholesterol access and activation routes for SMO, and consider the 2022 apo-SMO cryoEM structure in their analysis of the TM5/6 translocation pathway.

      (3) Alternative Possibility: Direct Membrane Access to CRD

      The possibility that the CRD extracts cholesterol directly from the membrane outer leaflet is not considered. While the crystal structures place the CRD in a stable pose above the membrane, multiple cryo-EM studies suggest that the CRD is dynamic and adopts a variety of conformations, raising the possibility that the stability of the CRD in the crystal structures is a result of crystal packing and that the CRD may be far more dynamic under more physiological conditions.

      Recommendation:

      The authors should explicitly acknowledge and evaluate this potential mechanism and, if feasible, assess its plausibility through MD simulations.

      (4) Inconsistent Framing of Study Scope and Limitations

      The discussion contains some contradictory and misleading language. For example, the authors state that "In this study we only focused on the cholesterol movement from the membrane to CRD binding site." and then several sentences later state that "We outline the entire translocation mechanism from a kinetic and thermodynamic perspective.". These statements are at odds. The former appropriately (albeit briefly) notes the limited scope of the modeling, while the latter overstates the generality of the findings.

      In addition, the authors' narrow focus on the CRD site constitutes a major caveat to the entire work. It should be acknowledged much earlier in the manuscript, preferably in the introduction, rather than mentioned as an aside in the penultimate paragraph of the conclusion.

      Recommendation:<br /> The authors should clarify the scope of the study and expand the discussion of its limitations. They should explicitly acknowledge that the study models one of several cholesterol access routes and that the findings do not rule out alternative pathways.

      Summary:

      This study has the potential to make a useful contribution to our understanding of cholesterol translocation and SMO activation. However, in its current form, the manuscript presents an overly narrow and, at times, misleading view of the literature and biological models; as such, it is not nearly as impactful as it could be. I strongly encourage the authors to revise the manuscript to include:

      (1) A more balanced discussion of the CRD vs. TMD binding sites.

      (2) Acknowledgment of alternative cholesterol access pathways.

      (3) More comprehensive citation of prior structural and functional studies.

      (4) Clarification of assumptions and scope.

      Of note, the above suggestions require little to no additional MD simulations or experimental studies, but would significantly enhance the rigor and impact of the work.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors investigate the effects of Miro1 on VSMC biology after injury. Using conditional knockout animals, they provide the important observation that Miro1 is required for neointima formation. They also confirm that Miro1 is expressed in human coronary arteries. Specifically, in conditions of coronary diseases, it is localized in both media and neointima, and, in atherosclerotic plaque, Miro1 is expressed in proliferating cells.

      However, the role of Miro1 in VSMC in CV diseases is poorly studied, and the data available are limited; therefore, the authors decided to deepen this aspect. The evidence that Miro-/- VSMCs show impaired proliferation and an arrest in S phase is solid and further sustained by restoring Miro1 to control levels, normalizing proliferation. Miro1 also affects mitochondrial distribution, which is strikingly changed after Miro1 deletion. Both effects are associated with impaired energy metabolism due to the ability of Miro1 to participate in MICOS/MIB complex assembly, influencing mitochondrial cristae folding. Interestingly, the authors also show the interaction of Miro1 with NDUFA9, globally affecting super complex 2 assembly and complex I activity.

      Finally, these important findings also apply to human cells and can be partially replicated using a pharmacological approach, proposing Miro1 as a target for vasoproliferative diseases.

      Strengths:

      The discovery of Miro1 relevance in neointima information is compelling, as well as the evidence in VSMC that MIRO1 loss impairs mitochondrial cristae formation, expanding observations previously obtained in embryonic fibroblasts.

      The identification of MIRO1 interaction with NDUFA9 is novel and adds value to this paper. Similarly, the findings that VSMC proliferation requires mitochondrial ATP support the new idea that these cells do not rely mostly on glycolysis.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Figure 3:

      I appreciate the system used to assess mitochondrial distribution; however, I believe that time-lapse microscopy to evaluate mitochondrial movements in real time should be mandatory. The experimental timing is compatible with time-lapse imaging, and these experiments will provide a quantitative estimation of the distance travelled by mitochondria and the fraction of mitochondria that change position over time. I also suggest evaluating mitochondrial shape in control and MIRO1-/- VSMC to assess whether MIRO1 absence could impact mitochondrial morphology, altering fission/fusion machinery, since mitochondrial shape could differently influence the mobility.

      (2) Figure 6:

      The evidence of MIRO1 ablation on cristae remodeling is solid; however, considering that the mechanism proposed to explain the finding is the modulation of MICOS/MIB complex, as shown in Figure 6D, I suggest performing EM analysis in each condition. In my mind, Miro1 KK and Miro1 TM should lead to different cristae phenotypes according to the different impact on MICOS/MIB complex assembly. Especially, Miro1 TM should mimic Miro1 -/- condition, while Miro1 KK should drive a less severe phenotype. This would supply a good correlation between Miro1, MICOS/MIB complex formation and cristae folding.

      I also suggest performing supercomplex assembly and complex I activity with each plasmid to correlate MICOS/MIB complex assembly with the respiratory chain efficiency.

      (3) I noticed that none of the in vitro findings have been validated in an in vivo model. I believe this represents a significant gap that would be valuable to address. In your animal model, it should not be too complex to analyze mitochondria by electron microscopy to assess cristae morphology. Additionally, supercomplex assembly and complex I activity could be evaluated in tissue homogenates to corroborate the in vitro observations.

      (4) I find the results presented in Figure S7 somewhat unclear. The authors employ a pharmacological strategy to reduce Miro1 and validate the findings previously obtained with the genetic knockout model. They report increased mitophagy and a reduction in mitochondrial mass. However, in my opinion, these changes alone could significantly impact cellular metabolism. A lower number of mitochondria would naturally result in decreased ATP production and reduced mitochondrial respiration. This, in turn, weakens the proposed direct link between Miro1 deletion and impaired metabolic function or altered electron transport chain (ETC) activity. I believe this section would benefit from additional experiments and a more in-depth discussion.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study identifies the outer‑mitochondrial GTPase MIRO1 as a central regulator of vascular smooth muscle cell (VSMC) proliferation and neointima formation after carotid injury in vivo and PDGF-stimulation ex vivo. Using smooth muscle-specific knockout male mice, complementary in vitro murine and human VSMC cell models, and analyses of mitochondrial positioning, cristae architecture, and respirometry, the authors provide solid evidence that MIRO1 couples mitochondrial motility with ATP production to meet the energetic demands of the G1/S cell cycle transition. However, a component of the metabolic analyses is suboptimal and would benefit from more robust methodologies. The work is valuable because it links mitochondrial dynamics to vascular remodelling and suggests MIRO1 as a therapeutic target for vasoproliferative diseases, although whether pharmacological targeting of MIRO1 in vivo can effectively reduce neointima after carotid injury has not been explored. This paper will be of interest to those working on VSMCs and mitochondrial biology.

      Strengths:

      The strength of the study lies in its comprehensive approach, assessing the role of MIRO1 in VSMC proliferation in vivo, ex vivo, and importantly in human cells. The subject provides mechanistic links between MIRO1-mediated regulation of mitochondrial mobility and optimal respiratory chain function to cell cycle progression and proliferation. Finally, the findings are potentially clinically relevant given the presence of MIRO1 in human atherosclerotic plaques and the available small molecule MIRO1.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There is a consistent lack of reporting across figure legends, including group sizes, n numbers, how many independent experiments were performed, or whether the data is mean +/- SD or SEM, etc. This needs to be corrected.

      (2) The in vivo carotid injury experiments are in male mice fed a high-fat diet; this should be explicitly stated in the abstract, as it's unclear if there are any sex- or diet-dependent differences. Is VSMC proliferation/neointima formation different in chow-fed mice after carotid injury?

      (3) The main body of the methods section is thin, and it's unclear why the majority of the methods are in the supplemental file. The authors should consider moving these to the main article, especially in an online-only journal.

      (4) Certain metabolic analyses are suboptimal, including ATP concentration and Complex I activity measurements. The measurement of ATP/ADP and ATP/AMP ratios for energy charge status (luminometer or mass spectrometry), while high-resolution respirometry (Oroboros) to determine mitochondrial complex I activity in permeabilized VSMCs would be more informative.

      (5) The statement that 'mitochondrial mobility is not required for optimal ATP production' is poorly supported. XF Seahorse analysis should be performed with nocodazole and also following MIRO1 reconstitution +/- EF hands.

      (6) The authors should consider moving MIRO1 small molecule data into the main figures. A lot of value would be added to the study if the authors could demonstrate that therapeutic targeting of MIRO1 could prevent neointima formation in vivo.

    3. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses the role of MIRO1 in vascular smooth muscle cell proliferation, proposing a link between MIRO1 loss and altered growth due to disrupted mitochondrial dynamics and function. While the findings are potentially useful for understanding the importance of mitochondrial positioning and function in this specific cell type within health and disease contexts, the evidence presented appears incomplete, with key bioenergetic and mechanistic claims lacking adequate support.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study focuses on an important regulatory protein, MIRO1, and its role in vascular smooth muscle cell (VSMC) proliferation, a relatively underexplored context.

      (2) It explores the link between smooth muscle cell growth, mitochondrial dynamics, and bioenergetics, which is a potentially significant area for both basic and translational biology.

      (3) The use of both in vivo and in vitro systems provides a potentially useful experimental framework to interrogate MIRO1 function in this context.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The central claim that MIRO1 loss impairs mitochondrial bioenergetics is not convincingly demonstrated, with only modest changes in respiratory parameters and no direct evidence of functional respiratory chain deficiency.

      (2) The proposed link between MIRO1 and respiratory supercomplex assembly or function is speculative, lacking mechanistic detail and supported by incomplete or inconsistent biochemical data.

      (3) Key mitochondrial assays are either insufficiently controlled or poorly interpreted, undermining the strength of the conclusions regarding oxidative phosphorylation.

      (4) The study does not adequately assess mitochondrial content or biogenesis, which could confound interpretations of changes in respiratory activity.

      (5) Overall, the evidence for a direct impact of MIRO1 on mitochondrial respiratory function in the experimental setting is weak, and the conclusions overreach the data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors focus on the identification of the mechanisms involved in the acquired resistance to Sotorasib in non-small lung KRASG12C mutant cells. To perform this study, the authors generate different clones of cell lines, cell-derived xenografts, patient-derived xenograft organoids, and patient-derived xenografts. In all these models, the authors generate resistant forms (i.e., resistant cell lines PDXs and organoids) and the genetic and molecular changes were characterised using whole-exome sequencing, proteomics, and phospho-proteomics. This analysis led to the identification of an important role of the PI3K/AKT/mTORC1/2 signalling network in the acquisition of resistance in several of the models tested. Molecular characterisation identified changes in the expression of some of the proteins in this network as key changes for the acquisition of resistance, and in particular, the authors show that changes in 4E-BP1 are common to some of the cells downstream of PI3K. Using pharmacological testing, they show that different drugs targeting PI3K, AKT, and MTORC1/2 sensitise some of the resistant models to Sotorasib. The analyses showed that the PI3K inhibitor copanlisib has an effect in NSCLC cells that, in some cases, seems to be synergistic with Sotorasib. Based on the work performed, the authors conclude that the PI3K/mTORC1/2 mediated 4E-BP1 phosphorylation is one of the mechanisms associated with the acquisition of resistance to Sotorasib and that targeting this signalling module could result in effective treatments for NSCLC patients.

      The work as presented in the current manuscript is very interesting, provides cell models that benefit the community, and can be used to expand our knowledge of the mechanism of resistance to KRAS targeting therapies. Overall, the techniques and methodology seem to be performed in agreement with standard practice, and the results support most of the conclusions made by the authors. However, there are some points that, if addressed, would increase the value and relevance of the findings and further extend the impact of this work. Some of the recommendations for changes relate to the way things are explained and presented, which need some work. Other changes might require the performance of additional experiments or reanalysis of the existing data.

      Strengths:

      (1) One of the stronger contributions of this article is the different models used to study the acquisition of resistance to Sotorasib. The resistant cell lines, PDXs and PDXOs, and the fact that the authors have different clones for each, made this collection especially relevant, as they seem to show different mechanisms that the cells used to become resistant to Sotorasib. Although logically, the authors focus on one of these mechanisms, the differential responses of the different clones and models to the treatments used in this work show that some of the clones used additional mechanisms of resistance that can be explored in other studies. Importantly, as they use in vitro and in vivo models, the results also consider the tumour microenvironment and other factors in the response to the treatments.

      (2) Another strength is the molecular characterisation of the different Sotorasib-resistant tumour cells by WES, which shows that these cells do not seem to acquire secondary mutations.

      (3) The use of MS-based proteomics also identifies proteome signatures that are associated with the acquisition of resistance, including PI3K/mTORC1/2. The combination of proteomics and phospho-proteomics results should allow the identification of several mechanisms that are deregulated in Sotorasib-resistant cells.

      (4) The results show a strong response of the NSCLC cells and PDXs to copanlisib, a drug for which there is limited information in this cancer type.

      (5) The way they develop the PDX-resistant and the PDXO seems to be appropriate.

      Weaknesses:

      In general, the data is of good quality, but due to the sheer amount of data included and the way it is presented and discussed, several of the claims or conclusions are not clear.

      (1) The abstract is rather long and gives details that are not usually included in one. This makes it very complicated to identify the most relevant findings of the work. The use of acronyms PDX, PDXO, and CDX without defining them makes it complicated for the non-specialist to know what the models are. Rewriting and reorganisation of the abstract would benefit the manuscript.

      (2) Expression, presentation, and grammar should be reviewed in all sections of the manuscript.

      (3) In the different parts of the result section where the models shown in Figure 2 are described the authors indicate "Whole-exome sequencing (WES) confirmed that XXX model retained the KRASG12C mutation with no additional KRAS mutations detected" however, it is not indicated where this data is shown and in not all the cases there is explanation to other possible modifications that might relate to mechanisms of resistance. This information should be included in the manuscript, and the WES made publicly available.

      (4) The way the proteomics analysis of the TC303 and TC314 parental and resistant PDX is described in the text is confusing. The addition of an experimental layout figure would facilitate the understanding. As it is written, it is not obvious that the parental PDX were also analysed. For instance, the authors say, "The global and phosphoproteomic analyses identified over 8,000 and 4,000 gene protein products (GPPs), respectively". Is this comparing only resistant cells, or from the comparison of the parental and resistant pairs? And where are these numbers presented in the figures? Also, there is information that seems more adequate for the materials and methods sections, i.e., "Samples were analyzed using label-free nanoscale liquid chromatography coupled with tandem mass spectrometry (nanoLC-MS/MS) on a Thermo Fusion Mass Spectrometer. The resulting data were processed and quantified using the Proteome Discoverer 2.5 interface with the Mascot search engine, referencing the NCBI RefSeq protein database (Saltzman, Ruprecht). Two-component analysis is better named principal component analysis."

      (5) While the presentation of the proteomics data could be done in different ways, the way the data is presented in Figure 3 does not allow the reader to get an idea of many of the findings from this experiment. Although it is indicated that a table with the data will be made available, this should be central to the way the data is presented and explained. A table (ie, Excel doc) where the raw data and all the analysis are presented should be included and referenced. Additionally, heat maps for the whole proteomes identified should be included. In the text, it is said, "Global proteomic heatmap analysis revealed unique protein profiles in TC303AR and TC314AR PDXs compared to their sensitive counterparts (Figure 3C)." However, this figure only shows the histogram of the differentially regulated cells. Inclusion of the histogram showing all the cells is necessary, and it might be informative to include the histogram comparing the two isogenic pairs, which could identify common mechanisms and differences between both sets. In Figure 3C, the protein names should be readable, or a reference to tables where the proteins are listed should be included.

      (6) In Figure 3, the pathway enrichment tool and GO used should be mentioned in the text. The tables with all significant tables should also be provided. The proteomics data seems to convincingly identify mTOR as one of the pathways deregulated in resistant cells, but there is little explanation of what is considered a significant FDR value and if there are other pathways or networks that are also modified, which might not be common to both isogenic models. In MS-based Phosphoproteome could help with the identification of differentially regulated pathways, but it is not really presented in the current manuscript. Most of the analysis of phospho-proteomics comes from the RPPA analysis, which is targeted proteomics. With the way the data is presented, the authors show evidence for a role of mTOR in the acquisition of resistance, but unfortunately, they do not discuss or allow the reader to explore if other pathways might also contribute to this change.

      (7) Where is the proteomics data going to be deposited, and will it be made public to comply with FAIR principles?

      (8) The authors claim that the resistance shown for H23AR and H353AR cells is due to reactivation of KRAS signalling. This is done by looking to phosphorylation of ERK as a surrogate, as they claim, "KRAS inhibition is commonly assessed by evaluating the inhibition of ERK phosphorylation (p-ERK)". While this might be true in many cases, the data presented does not demonstrate that the increase in p-ERK is due to reactivation of KRAS. To make this claim, the authors should measure activation of KRAS (and possibly H- and NRAS) using GST-pull down or an image-based method.

      (9) The experiments in Figure 4 are very confusing, and some controls are missing. There is no blot where they show the effect of Sotorasib treatment in H23 and H358 parental cells. Is the increase shown in resistant cells shown in parental or is it exclusive for resistant cells only (and therefore acquired)? Experiment 4B should include this control. What is clear is that there is an increase in the expression of AKT and PI3K.

      (10) The main point here is whether this is acquired resistance or the sensitivity to the drug is already there, and there was no need to do an omics experiment to find this. In some cases, it seems that the single treatment with PI3K inhibitors is as effective as Sotorasib treatment, promoting the death of the parental cells. This is in line with previous data in H23 and H353 that show sensitivity to PI3K inhibition ( i.e., H358 10.1016/j.jtcvs.2005.06.051 ; 10.1016/j.jtcvs.2005.06.051H23 10.20892/j.issn.2095-3941.2018.0361). The data is clear, especially for copanlisib, but would it be the case that this treatment could be used for the treatment of NSCLC alone or directly in combination with Sotorasib and prevent resistance? The results shown in Figure 4C strongly support that a single treatment might be effective in cases that do not respond to Sotorasib. The data in figure 4D-F (please correct typo "inhibition" in labels) seem to support that PI3K treatment of parental cells is as effective as in the resistant cells.

      (11) The experiments presented in Figure 7 show synergy between Sotorasib and copanlisib treatment in some of the resistant cells. But in Figure 7G, the single treatment of H23AR is as effective as the combination. Did the authors check the effect of this drug on the parental cells? As they do not include this control, it is not possible to know if this is acquired sensitivity to PI3K inhibition or if the parental cells were already sensitive (as indicated by the Figure 4 results).

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors investigate mechanisms of acquired resistance (AR) to KRAS-G12C inhibitors (sotorasib) in NSCLC, proposing that resistance arises from signaling rewiring rather than additional mutations.

      Strengths:

      Using a panel of AR models - including cell lines, PDXs, CDXs, and PDXOs - they report activation of KRAS and PI3K/AKT/mTOR pathways, with elevated PI3K levels. Pharmacologic inhibition or CRISPR-Cas9 knockout of PI3K partially restores sotorasib sensitivity, and p-4EBP1 upregulation is implicated as an additional contributor, with dual mTORC1/2 inhibition more effective than mTORC1 inhibition alone.

      Weaknesses:

      While the study addresses an important clinical question, it is limited by several weaknesses in experimental rigor, data interpretation, and presentation. The mechanistic findings are not entirely novel, since the role of PI3K-AKT-mTOR signaling in therapeutic resistance is already well-established in the literature. Rather than uncovering new resistance mechanisms, the study largely confirms known pathways. Several key conclusions are not supported by the data, and critical alternative explanations - such as additional mutations or increased KRAS expression - are not thoroughly investigated or ruled out. Furthermore, while the authors use CRISPR-Cas9 to knock out PI3K and 4E-BP1 in H23-AR and H358-AR cells to restore sotorasib sensitivity, they do not perform reconstitution experiments to confirm that re-expressing PI3K or 4E-BP1 reverses the sensitization. This prevents full characterization of PI3K and p-4EBP1 upregulation as contributors to resistance. The manuscript also has several errors, poor figure quality, and a lack of proper quantification. Additional experimental validation, data improvement, and text revisions are required.

      Acquired resistance to KRAS<sup>G12C</sup> inhibitors such as sotorasib or adagrasib remains a significant clinical challenge. Therefore, the identification of mechanisms of acquired resistance, along with the development of alternative therapeutic strategies, including combination therapies with KRAS inhibitors, represents an urgent unmet clinical need. The emergence of secondary KRAS mutations or new mutations in other oncogenic drivers has been observed as a primary cause of acquired resistance in a fraction of patients. No identifiable mutations were detected in more than half of the tumors from patients who developed acquired resistance after treatment with sotorasib or adagrasib.

      Using a discovery-based approach that integrated global proteomic and phosphoproteomic analyses in the TC303AR and TC314AR PDX models, we identified distinct protein signatures associated with KRAS reactivation, upregulation of mTORC1 signaling, and activation of the PI3K/AKT/mTOR pathway. These findings prompted further investigation into these mechanisms of resistance and evaluation of novel therapeutic combinations to overcome resistance. Notably, the combination of sotorasib with copanlisib (a PI3K inhibitor), or the combination of sotorasib with AZD8055 or sapanisertib (mTORC1/2 dual inhibitors) demonstrated strong potential for future clinical use. These regimens effectively restored sotorasib sensitivity in both in vitro and in vivo models and produced robust, synergistic antitumor effects across various acquired resistance models.

      CRISPR-Cas9-mediated PI3K and 4E-BP1 knockout clones were generated in more than one resistant cell line that expressed a robust level of the knockout target, and multiple independent clones in each cell line were evaluated with and without gene disruption. Given the thorough nature of this analysis, additional reconstitution experiments were deemed unnecessary, as they would not yield further insight.

      Whole exome sequencing was performed on resistant cells or PDX models to confirm retention of the KRAS<sup>G12C</sup> mutation and to identify secondary KRAS mutations, none of which were found. We acknowledge that additional resistance mechanisms may be involved. These will be the focus of future investigations.

      The revised manuscript will feature improved figure quality, complete and clarified figure legends, and corrected textual errors to enhance overall clarity and presentation.  

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors focus on the identification of the mechanisms involved in the acquired resistance to Sotorasib in non-small lung KRASG12C mutant cells. To perform this study, the authors generate different clones of cell lines, cell-derived xenografts, patient-derived xenograft organoids, and patient-derived xenografts. In all these models, the authors generate resistant forms (i.e., resistant cell lines PDXs and organoids) and the genetic and molecular changes were characterised using whole-exome sequencing, proteomics, and phospho-proteomics. This analysis led to the identification of an important role of the PI3K/AKT/mTORC1/2 signalling network in the acquisition of resistance in several of the models tested. Molecular characterisation identified changes in the expression of some of the proteins in this network as key changes for the acquisition of resistance, and in particular, the authors show that changes in 4E-BP1 are common to some of the cells downstream of PI3K. Using pharmacological testing, they show that different drugs targeting PI3K, AKT, and MTORC1/2 sensitise some of the resistant models to Sotorasib. The analyses showed that the PI3K inhibitor copanlisib has an effect in NSCLC cells that, in some cases, seems to be synergistic with Sotorasib. Based on the work performed, the authors conclude that the PI3K/mTORC1/2 mediated 4E-BP1 phosphorylation is one of the mechanisms associated with the acquisition of resistance to Sotorasib and that targeting this signalling module could result in effective treatments for NSCLC patients.

      The work as presented in the current manuscript is very interesting, provides cell models that benefit the community, and can be used to expand our knowledge of the mechanism of resistance to KRAS targeting therapies. Overall, the techniques and methodology seem to be performed in agreement with standard practice, and the results support most of the conclusions made by the authors. However, there are some points that, if addressed, would increase the value and relevance of the findings and further extend the impact of this work. Some of the recommendations for changes relate to the way things are explained and presented, which need some work. Other changes might require the performance of additional experiments or reanalysis of the existing data.

      Strengths:

      (1) One of the stronger contributions of this article is the different models used to study the acquisition of resistance to Sotorasib. The resistant cell lines, PDXs and PDXOs, and the fact that the authors have different clones for each, made this collection especially relevant, as they seem to show different mechanisms that the cells used to become resistant to Sotorasib. Although logically, the authors focus on one of these mechanisms, the differential responses of the different clones and models to the treatments used in this work show that some of the clones used additional mechanisms of resistance that can be explored in other studies. Importantly, as they use in vitro and in vivo models, the results also consider the tumour microenvironment and other factors in the response to the treatments.

      (2) Another strength is the molecular characterisation of the different Sotorasib-resistant tumour cells by WES, which shows that these cells do not seem to acquire secondary mutations.

      (3) The use of MS-based proteomics also identifies proteome signatures that are associated with the acquisition of resistance, including PI3K/mTORC1/2. The combination of proteomics and phospho-proteomics results should allow the identification of several mechanisms that are deregulated in Sotorasib-resistant cells.

      (4) The results show a strong response of the NSCLC cells and PDXs to copanlisib, a drug for which there is limited information in this cancer type.

      (5) The way they develop the PDX-resistant and the PDXO seems to be appropriate.

      Weaknesses:

      In general, the data is of good quality, but due to the sheer amount of data included and the way it is presented and discussed, several of the claims or conclusions are not clear.

      (1) The abstract is rather long and gives details that are not usually included in one. This makes it very complicated to identify the most relevant findings of the work. The use of acronyms PDX, PDXO, and CDX without defining them makes it complicated for the non-specialist to know what the models are. Rewriting and reorganisation of the abstract would benefit the manuscript.

      We will revise the abstract to ensure that the key findings and overall message are clearly communicated and easily understood by readers.

      2) Expression, presentation, and grammar should be reviewed in all sections of the manuscript.

      Will be done accordingly in the revised version

      (3) In the different parts of the result section where the models shown in Figure 2 are described the authors indicate "Whole-exome sequencing (WES) confirmed that XXX model retained the KRASG12C mutation with no additional KRAS mutations detected" however, it is not indicated where this data is shown and in not all the cases there is explanation to other possible modifications that might relate to mechanisms of resistance. This information should be included in the manuscript, and the WES made publicly available.

      WES was done for KRAS to identify secondary mutations in the KRAS as well as to verify the retention of the KRAS<sup>G12C</sup> mutation in these AR models. WES data will be provided as supplements

      (4) The way the proteomics analysis of the TC303 and TC314 parental and resistant PDX is described in the text is confusing. The addition of an experimental layout figure would facilitate the understanding. As it is written, it is not obvious that the parental PDX were also analysed. For instance, the authors say, "The global and phosphoproteomic analyses identified over 8,000 and 4,000 gene protein products (GPPs), respectively". Is this comparing only resistant cells, or from the comparison of the parental and resistant pairs? And where are these numbers presented in the figures? Also, there is information that seems more adequate for the materials and methods sections, i.e., "Samples were analyzed using label-free nanoscale liquid chromatography coupled with tandem mass spectrometry (nanoLC-MS/MS) on a Thermo Fusion Mass Spectrometer. The resulting data were processed and quantified using the Proteome Discoverer 2.5 interface with the Mascot search engine, referencing the NCBI RefSeq protein database (Saltzman, Ruprecht). Two-component analysis is better named principal component analysis."

      The texts will be revised accordingly

      (5) While the presentation of the proteomics data could be done in different ways, the way the data is presented in Figure 3 does not allow the reader to get an idea of many of the findings from this experiment. Although it is indicated that a table with the data will be made available, this should be central to the way the data is presented and explained. A table (ie, Excel doc) where the raw data and all the analysis are presented should be included and referenced. Additionally, heat maps for the whole proteomes identified should be included. In the text, it is said, "Global proteomic heatmap analysis revealed unique protein profiles in TC303AR and TC314AR PDXs compared to their sensitive counterparts (Figure 3C)." However, this figure only shows the histogram of the differentially regulated cells. Inclusion of the histogram showing all the cells is necessary, and it might be informative to include the histogram comparing the two isogenic pairs, which could identify common mechanisms and differences between both sets. In Figure 3C, the protein names should be readable, or a reference to tables where the proteins are listed should be included.

      The raw data associated with the proteomics and global proteomics will be added as supplements.

      (6) In Figure 3, the pathway enrichment tool and GO used should be mentioned in the text. The tables with all significant tables should also be provided. The proteomics data seems to convincingly identify mTOR as one of the pathways deregulated in resistant cells, but there is little explanation of what is considered a significant FDR value and if there are other pathways or networks that are also modified, which might not be common to both isogenic models. In MS-based Phosphoproteome could help with the identification of differentially regulated pathways, but it is not really presented in the current manuscript. Most of the analysis of phospho-proteomics comes from the RPPA analysis, which is targeted proteomics. With the way the data is presented, the authors show evidence for a role of mTOR in the acquisition of resistance, but unfortunately, they do not discuss or allow the reader to explore if other pathways might also contribute to this change.

      The authors agree that other pathways may be involved, and this will be the subject of future studies. The raw data will be added as supplements.

      (7) Where is the proteomics data going to be deposited, and will it be made public to comply with FAIR principles?

      will be uploaded according to the journal guidelines

      (8) The authors claim that the resistance shown for H23AR and H353AR cells is due to reactivation of KRAS signalling. This is done by looking to phosphorylation of ERK as a surrogate, as they claim, "KRAS inhibition is commonly assessed by evaluating the inhibition of ERK phosphorylation (p-ERK)". While this might be true in many cases, the data presented does not demonstrate that the increase in p-ERK is due to reactivation of KRAS. To make this claim, the authors should measure activation of KRAS (and possibly H- and NRAS) using GST-pull down or an image-based method.

      We agree that KRAS activation can be assessed through various methods. In this manuscript, which primarily focuses on mechanisms of resistance, pathway analysis revealed upregulation of KRAS signaling. This finding correlated with the incomplete inhibition of p-ERK by sotorasib in resistant cells. Notably, p-ERK status is widely recognized and routinely used as a surrogate marker for KRAS pathway activation.

      (9) The experiments in Figure 4 are very confusing, and some controls are missing. There is no blot where they show the effect of Sotorasib treatment in H23 and H358 parental cells. Is the increase shown in resistant cells shown in parental or is it exclusive for resistant cells only (and therefore acquired)? Experiment 4B should include this control. What is clear is that there is an increase in the expression of AKT and PI3K.

      H23 and H358 cells are highly sensitive to sotorasib, as demonstrated by the cell viability assays presented in Figure 2. As shown in Figure 3—figure supplement 3, sotorasib treatment led to complete inhibition of p-ERK in these parental cell lines. In contrast, p-ERK inhibition was incomplete in the resistant H23AR and H358AR cells. Moreover, these AR cells were continuously cultured under sotorasib pressure to maintain resistance.

      (10) The main point here is whether this is acquired resistance or the sensitivity to the drug is already there, and there was no need to do an omics experiment to find this. In some cases, it seems that the single treatment with PI3K inhibitors is as effective as Sotorasib treatment, promoting the death of the parental cells. This is in line with previous data in H23 and H353 that show sensitivity to PI3K inhibition ( i.e., H358 10.1016/j.jtcvs.2005.06.051 ; 10.1016/j.jtcvs.2005.06.051H23 10.20892/j.issn.2095-3941.2018.0361). The data is clear, especially for copanlisib, but would it be the case that this treatment could be used for the treatment of NSCLC alone or directly in combination with Sotorasib and prevent resistance? The results shown in Figure 4C strongly support that a single treatment might be effective in cases that do not respond to Sotorasib. The data in figure 4D-F (please correct typo "inhibition" in labels) seem to support that PI3K treatment of parental cells is as effective as in the resistant cells.

      We agree. Based on our in vitro (Figure 4) and in vivo (Figure 7) data, copanlisib was able to overcome sotorasib resistance, demonstrating either synergistic or additive effects depending on the specific model. These findings support the potential of combining PI3K inhibition with KRAS<sup>G12C</sup> inhibition as a promising strategy to address acquired resistance.

      (11) The experiments presented in Figure 7 show synergy between Sotorasib and copanlisib treatment in some of the resistant cells. But in Figure 7G, the single treatment of H23AR is as effective as the combination. Did the authors check the effect of this drug on the parental cells? As they do not include this control, it is not possible to know if this is acquired sensitivity to PI3K inhibition or if the parental cells were already sensitive (as indicated by the Figure 4 results).

      Both H23 and H23AR cells showed high sensitivity to copanlisib, as shown in Figure 4. Combination index analysis for the copanlisib + sotorasib treatment (Figure 7A) revealed synergistic effects on cell viability at specific concentrations. However, in the in vivo experiment (Figure 7G), we did not observe a clear synergistic effect of the combination treatment against H23AR xenografts. This may be attributed to the dose of copanlisib used, which was potentially sufficient on its own to produce a strong antitumor response, thereby masking any additional benefit from the combination.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Hao Jiang et al described a systematic approach to identify proline hydroxylation proteins. The authors implemented a proteomic strategy with HILIC-chromatographic separation and reported an identification of 4993 sites from HEK293 cells (4 replicates) and 3247 sites from RCC4 sites (3 replicates) with 1412 sites overlapping between the two cell lines. From the analysis, the authors identified 225 sites and 184 sites respectively from 293 and RCC4 cells with HyPro diagnostic ion. The identifications were validated by analyzing a few synthetic peptides, with a specific focus on Repo-man (CDCA2) through comparing MS/MS spectra, retention time, and diagnostic ions. With SILAC analysis and recombinant enzyme assay, the study showed that Repo-man HyPro604 is a target of the PHD1 enzyme.

      Strengths:

      The study involved extensive LC-MS analysis and was carefully implemented. The identification of over 4000 confident proline hydroxylation sites would be a valuable resource for the community. The characterization of Repo-man proline hydroxylation is a novel finding.

      Weaknesses:

      However, as a study mainly focused on methodology, the findings from the experimental data did not convincingly demonstrate the sensitivity and specificity of the workflow for site-specific identification of proline hydroxylation in global studies.

      Major concerns:

      (1) The study applied HILIC-based chromatographic separation with a goal of enriching and separating hydroxyproline-containing peptides. However, as the authors mentioned, such an approach is not specific to proline hydroxylation. In addition, many other chromatography techniques can achieve deep proteome fractionation such as high pH reverse phase fractionation, strong-cation exchange etc. There was no data in this study to demonstrate that the strategy offered improved coverage of proline hydroxylation proteins, as the identifications of the HyPro sites could be achieved through deep fractionation and a highly sensitive LCMS setup. The data of Figure 2A and S1A were somewhat confusing without a clear explanation of the heat map representations.

      (2) The study reported that the HyPro immonium ion is a diagnostic ion for HyPro identification. However, the data showed that only around 5% of the identifications had such a diagnostic ion. In comparison, acetyllysine immonium ion was previously reported to be a useful marker for acetyllysine peptides (PMID: 18338905), and the strategy offered a sensitivity of 70% with a specificity of 98%. In this study, the sensitivity of HyPro immonium ion was quite low. The authors also clearly demonstrated that the presence of immonium ion varied significantly due to MS settings, peptide sequence, and abundance. With further complications from L/I immonium ions, it became very challenging to implement this strategy in a global LC-MS analysis to either validate or invalidate HyPro identifications.

      (3) The study aimed to apply the HILIC-based proteomics workflow to identify HyPro proteins regulated by the PHD enzyme. However, the quantification strategy was not rigorous. The study just considered the HyPro proteins not identified by FG-4592 treatment as potential PHD targeted proteins. There are a few issues. First, such an analysis was not quantitative without reproducibility or statistical analysis. Second, it did not take into consideration that data-dependent LC-MS analysis was not comprehensive and some peptide ions may not be identified due to background interferences. Lastly, FG-4592 treatment for 24 hrs could lead to wide changes in gene expressions and protein abundances. Therefore, it is not informative to draw conclusions based on the data for bioinformatic analysis.

      (4) The authors performed an in vitro PHD1 enzyme assay to validate that Repo-man can be hydroxylated by PHD1. However, Figure 9 did not show quantitatively PHD1-induced increase in Repo-man HyPro abundance and it is difficult to assess its reaction efficiency to compare with HIF1a HyPro.

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      We appreciate the reviewer recognising that our study has been carefully performed and provides a valuable resource for the community. The characterization of Repo-man proline hydroxylation is also recognised as a novel finding.

      With respect to Concerns raised by reviewer 1:

      (1) The study applied HILIC-based chromatographic separation with a goal of enriching and separating hydroxyproline-containing peptides. However, as the authors mentioned, such an approach is not specific to proline hydroxylation. In addition, many other chromatography techniques can achieve deep proteome fractionation such as high pH reverse phase fractionation, strong-cation exchange etc. There was no data in this study to demonstrate that the strategy offered improved coverage of proline hydroxylation proteins, as the identifications of the HyPro sites could be achieved through deep fractionation and a highly sensitive LCMS setup. The data of Figure 2A and S1A were somewhat confusing without a clear explanation of the heat map representations.

      We do not agree that the apparent concern raised here, i.e., that the method we present is not 100% specific for enriching only hydroxylated peptides, is a serious issue. We show specifically that our method indeed enriches samples for hydroxylated peptides, thereby increasing the chances of identifying proline hydroxylated peptides in a cell extract. We never claimed that it was mono-specific for enrichment of hydroxylated peptides. Further, we note that almost no chromatographic method we know of, including those commonly used to enrich for different types of post translationally-modified peptides (including phospho-peptides) is completely mono-specific for a single type of modified peptide. The reviewer comments that it could have been possible to use alternative methods to identify proline-hydroxylated peptides. This may be true, but we know of no published examples, or previous studies, where this has been demonstrated experimentally on a scale comparable to that we show here. Of course there is always more than one way to approach technical challenges and it may be that future methods will be demonstrated that achieve equivalent, or even superior, results with respect to the detection of proline hydroxylated peptides. To the best of our knowledge, however, our current study provides a robust methodology that goes well beyond any previously published analysis of proline hydroxylation.

      (2) The study reported that the HyPro immonium ion is a diagnostic ion for HyPro identification. However, the data showed that only around 5% of the identifications had such a diagnostic ion. In comparison, acetyllysine immonium ion was previously reported to be a useful marker for acetyllysine peptides (PMID: 18338905), and the strategy offered a sensitivity of 70% with a specificity of 98%. In this study, the sensitivity of HyPro immonium ion was quite low. The authors also clearly demonstrated that the presence of immonium ion varied significantly due to MS settings, peptide sequence, and abundance. With further complications from L/I immonium ions, it became very challenging to implement this strategy in a global LC-MS analysis to either validate or invalidate HyPro identifications.

      We feel that the reviewer’s initial comment is potentially misleading - it implies that we were proposing here that the 'HyPro immonium ion is a diagnostic ion for HyPro identification’. In contrast, this concept was already widely held in the field before we started this project. Indeed, the fact that the diagnostic HyPro immonium ion is often difficult to detect, has been used as one of the arguments by other researchers to support the view that HIF-α is the only physiologically relevant target for PHD enzymes, a controversy referenced explicitly by Reviewer 2 below. What we actually show here are novel data that help to explain why the diagnostic HyPro immonium ion is often difficult to detect, when standard approaches and technical parameters for MS analysis are used. We beleive that this observation, along with other data we present, is a useful contribution to the field that can help to resolve the previous controversies concerning the true prevalence and biological roles of PHD-catalysed proline hydroxylation on protein targets.

      (3) The study aimed to apply the HILIC-based proteomics workflow to identify HyPro proteins regulated by the PHD enzyme. However, the quantification strategy was not rigorous. The study just considered the HyPro proteins not identified by FG-4592 treatment as potential PHD targeted proteins. There are a few issues. First, such an analysis was not quantitative without reproducibility or statistical analysis. Second, it did not take into consideration that data-dependent LC-MS analysis was not comprehensive and some peptide ions may not be identified due to background interferences. Lastly, FG-4592 treatment for 24 hrs could lead to wide changes in gene expressions and protein abundances. Therefore, it is not informative to draw conclusions based on the data for bioinformatic analysis.

      We agree that this study is not quantifying or addressing the stoichiometry of proline hydroxylation across the very large number of new PHD target sites we identify. That was not claimed and was not the objective of our study. Nonetheless, we feel the comments of the referee do not adequately take into account the SILAC data we included (cf Figure 8) or the full range of experimental data presented in this study. We would further refer the reviewer also to the data presented in the companion paper by Druker et al., which we cross-referenced extensively in our study and have also made available previously on biorxiv.

      (4) The authors performed an in vitro PHD1 enzyme assay to validate that Repo-man can be hydroxylated by PHD1. However, Figure 9 did not show quantitatively PHD1-induced increase in Repo-man HyPro abundance and it is difficult to assess its reaction efficiency to compare with HIF1a HyPro.

      Here again we refer to the recent controversy referenced explicitly by Reviewer 2 below, concerning the view expressed by some researchers that only HIF-α is a physiological substrate for PHD enzymes in cells. We were challenged to show that any of the novel protein targets of PHDs we identified were indeed hydroxylated by PHD enzymes in vitro and that is what we demonstrated in Figure 9. This was not an experiment performed to quantify stoichiometry and indeed, it is not possible to draw any firm conclusions about efficiency or stiochiometry in vitro when using catalytic PHD subunits alone, given that we do not yet know whether PHDs may show different properties in cells, dependent on interactions with other factors and/or modifications.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comments that our manuscript presents an advanced, standardized protocol for identifying proline hydroxylation, with well designed experiments, which may help resolve confusion in the field.

      With respect to Concerns raised by reviewer 2:

      (1) The authors should provide a summary of the standard protocol for identifying proline hydroxylation sites in proteins that can easily be followed by others.

      We agree and plan to provide a clearly described, step by step guide to assist other researchers who wish to employ our methods for proline hydroxylation analysis in their own studies.

      (2) Cockman et al. proposed that HIF-α is the only physiologically relevant target for PHDs. Their approach is considered the gold standard for identifying PHD targets. Therefore, the authors should discuss the major progress they made in this manuscript that challenges Cockman's conclusion.

      We agree that our study provides valuable information germane to the recent controversy in the field and the views published by Cockman et al., to the effect that HIF-α is the only physiologically relevant target for PHDs. We will carefully review our statements when preparing a suitably revised version of record with the aim of providing a balanced and objective discussion of this issue.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comments that our study employs state-of-the-art mass spectrometric techniques with optimized collision parameters to ensure proper detection of the immonium ions, along with their recognition that our study is, 'an advance compared to other similar approaches before.’ We also appreciate their reference to our companion study by Druker et al, in which we characterise the mechanism and biological role in regulation of mitotic progression of the hydroxylation of P604 in the target protein RepoMan (CDCA2), that is identified in this study.

      With respect to the Concern raised by reviewer 3:

      Despite the authors' claim about the specificity of this method in picking up the intended peptides, there is a good amount of potential false positives that also happen to get picked (owing to the limitations of MS-based readout), and the authors' criteria for downstream filtering of such peptides require further clarification. In the same vein, greater and more diverse cell-based validation approach will be helpful to substantiate the claims regarding enrichment of peptides in the described pathway analyses..

      We agree that this study, which has a focus on methodology and technical approaches for detecting sites of PHD- catalysed proline hydroxylation, cannot exhaustively validate the biological significance of all of the putative sites and targets identified. As the reviewer notes, we have performed a detailed functional characterisation of one such novel PHD-catalyed proline hydroxylation site, i.e. P604 in the protein RepoMan (CDCA2). This functional analysis is presented in the companion paper by Druker et al., which has also been reviewed by eLife and placed on biorxiv (doi: https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.05.06.652400). We hope that publication of our identification of many new putative PHD target sites will encourage other researchers to pursue characterisation of their functional reoles in different biological mechanisms and have tried here to provide some degree of guidance to focus attention on the identification of those sites for which we currently have highest confidence.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The investigators undertook detailed characterization of a previously proposed membrane targeting sequence (MTS), a short N-terminal peptide, of the bactofilin BacA in Caulobacter crescentus. Using light microscopy, single molecule tracking, liposome binding assays, and molecular dynamics simulations, they provide data to suggest that this sequence indeed does function in membrane targeting and further conclude that membrane targeting is required for polymerization. While the membrane association data are reasonably convincing, there are no direct assays to assess polymerization and some assays used lack proper controls as detailed below. Since the MTS isn't required for bactofilin polymerization in other bacterial homologues, showing that membrane binding facilitates polymerization would be a significant advance for the field.

      We agree that additional experiments were required to consolidate our results and conclusions. Please see below for a description of the new data included in the revised version of the manuscript.

      Major concerns

      (1) This work claims that the N-termina MTS domain of BacA is required for polymerization, but they do not provide sufficient evidence that the ∆2-8 mutant or any of the other MTS variants actually do not polymerize (or form higher order structures). Bactofilins are known to form filaments, bundles of filaments, and lattice sheets in vitro and bundles of filaments have been observed in cells. Whether puncta or diffuse labeling represents different polymerized states or filaments vs. monomers has not been established. Microscopy shows mis-localization away from the stalk, but resolution is limited. Further experiments using higher resolution microscopy and TEM of purified protein would prove that the MTS is required for polymerization.

      We do not propose that the MTS is directly involved in the polymerization process and state this more clearly now in the Results and Discussion sections of the revised manuscript. To address this point, we performed transmission electron microscopy studies comparing the polymerization behavior of wild-type and mutant BacA variants. The results clearly show that the MTS-free BacA variant (∆2-8) forms polymers that are indistinguishable from those formed by the wild-type protein, when purified from an E. coli overproduction strain (new Figure 1–figure supplement 1). This finding is consistent with structural work showing that bactofilin polymerization is exclusively mediated by the conserved bactofilin domain (Deng et al, Nat Microbiol, 2019). However, at native expression levels, BacA only accumulates to ~200 molecules per cell (Kühn et al, EMBO J, 2006). Under these conditions, the MTS-mediated increase in the local concentration of BacA at the membrane surface and, potentially, steric constraints imposed by membrane curvature, may facilitate the polymerization process. This hypothesis has now been stated more clearly in the Results and Discussion sections.

      For polymer-forming proteins, defined localized signals are typically interpreted as slow-moving or stationary polymeric complexes. A diffuse localization, by contrast, suggests that a protein exists in a monomeric or, at most, (small) oligomeric state in which it diffuses rapidly within the cell and is thus no longer detected as distinct foci by widefield microscopy. Our single-molecule data show that BacA variants that are no longer able to interact with the membrane (as verified by cell fractionation studies and in vitro liposome binding assays) have a high diffusion rate, similar to that measured for the non-polymerizing and non-membrane-bound F130R variant. These results demonstrate that a defect in membrane binding strongly reduces the ability of BacA to form polymeric assemblies. To support this hypothesis, we have now repeated all single-particle tracking experiments and included mVenus as a freely diffusible reference protein. Our data confirm that the mobilities of the ∆2-8 and F130R variants are similar and approach those of free mVenus, supporting the idea that the deficiency to interact with the membrane prevents the formation of extended polymeric structures (which should show much lower mobilities). To underscore the relevance of membrane binding for BacA assembly, we have now included a new experiment, in which we used the PbpC membrane anchor (PbpC<sub>1-132</sub>-mcherry) to restore the recruitment of the ∆2-8 variant to the membrane (Figure 9 and Figure 9–figure supplement 1). The results obtained show that the ∆2-8 variant transitions from a diffuse localization to polar foci upon overproduction of PbpC<sub>1-132</sub>-mcherry. The polymerization-impaired F130R variant, by contrast, remains evenly distributed throughout the cytoplasm under all conditions. These findings further support the idea that polymerization and membrane-association are mutually interdependent processes.

      (2) Liposome binding data would be strengthened with TEM images to show BacA binding to liposomes. From this experiment, gross polymerization structures of MTS variants could also be characterized.

      We do not have the possibility to perform cryo-electron microscopy studies of liposomes bound to BacA. However, the results of the cell fractionation and liposome sedimentation assays clearly support a critical role of the MTS in membrane binding.

      (3) The use of the BacA F130R mutant throughout the study to probe the effect of polymerization on membrane binding is concerning as there is no evidence showing that this variant cannot polymerize. Looking through the papers the authors referenced, there was no evidence of an identical mutation in BacA that was shown to be depolymerized or any discussion in this study of how the F130R mutation might to analogous to polymerization-deficient variants in other bactofilins mentioned in these references.

      Residue F130 in the C-terminal polymerization interface of BacA is conserved among bactofilin homologs, although its absolute position in the protein sequence may vary, depending on the length of the N-terminal unstructured tail. The papers cited in our manuscript show that an exchange of this conserved phenylalanine residue abolishes polymer formation. Nevertheless, we agree that it is important to verify the polymerization defect of the F130R variant in the system under study. We have now included size-exclusion chromatography data showing that BacA-F130R forms a low-molecular-weight complex, whereas the wild-type protein largely elutes in the exclusion volume, indicating the formation of large, polymeric species (new Figure 1–figure supplement 1). In addition, we performed transmission electron microscopy analyses of BacA-F130R, which verified the absence of larger oligomers (new Figure 1–figure supplement 2).

      (4) Microscopy shows that a BacA variant lacking the native MTS regains the ability to form puncta, albeit mis-localized, in the cell when fused to a heterologous MTS from MreB. While this swap suggests a link between puncta formation and membrane binding the relationship between puncta and polymerization has not been established (see comment 1).

      We show that a BacA variant lacking the MTS (∆2-8) regains the ability to form membrane-associated foci when fused to the MTS of MreB. By contrast, a similar variant that additionally carries the F130R exchange (preventing its polymerization) shows a diffuse cytoplasmic localization. In addition, we show that the F130R exchange leads to a loss of membrane binding and to a considerable increase in the mobility of the variants carrying the MTS of E. coli MreB. As described above, we now provide additional data demonstrating that elevated levels of the PbpC membrane anchor can reinstate polar localization for the ∆2-8 variant, whereas it fails to do so for the polymerization-deficient F130R variant (Figure 9 and Figure 9–figure supplement 1). Together, these results support the hypothesis that membrane association and polymerization act synergistically to establish localized bactofilin assemblies at the stalked cell pole.

      (5) The authors provide no primary data for single molecule tracking. There is no tracking mapped onto microscopy images to show membrane localization or lack of localization in MTS deletion/ variants. A known soluble protein (e.g. unfused mVenus) and a known membrane bound protein would serve as valuable controls to interpret the data presented. It also is unclear why the authors chose to report molecular dynamics as mean squared displacement rather than mean squared displacement per unit time, and the number of localizations is not indicated. Extrapolating from the graph in figure 4 D for example, it looks like WT BacA-mVenus would have a mobility of 0.5 (0.02/0.04) micrometers squared per second which is approaching diffusive behavior. Further justification/details of their analysis method is needed. It's also not clear how one should interpret the finding that several of the double point mutants show higher displacement than deleting the entire MTS. These experiments as they stand don't account for any other cause of molecular behavior change and assume that a decrease in movement is synonymous with membrane binding.

      We now provide additional information on the single-particle analysis. A new supplemental figure now shows a mapping of single-particle tracks onto the cells in which they were recorded for all proteins analyzed (Figure 2–figure supplement 1). Due to the small size of C. crescentus, it is difficult to clearly differentiate between membrane-associated and cytoplasmic protein species. However, overall, slow-diffusing particles tend to be localized to the cell periphery, supporting the idea that membrane-associated particles form larger assemblies (apart from diffusing more slowly due to their membrane association). In addition, we have included a movie that shows the single-particle diffusion dynamics of all proteins in representative cells (Figure 2-video 1). Finally, we have included a table that gives an overview of the number of cells and tracks analyzed for all proteins investigated (Supplementary file 1). Figure 2A and 4D show the mean squared displacement as a function of time, which makes it possible to assess whether the particles observed move by normal, Brownian diffusion (which is the case here). We repeated the entire single-particle tracking analysis to verify the data obtained previously and obtained very similar results. Among the different mutant proteins, only the K4E-K7E variant consistently shows a higher mobility than the MTS-free ∆2-8 variant, with MSD values similar to that of free mVenus. The underlying reason remains unclear. However, we believe that an in-depth analysis of this phenomenon is beyond the scope of this paper. We re-confirmed the integrity of the construct encoding the K4E/K7E variant by DNA sequencing and once again verified the size and stability of the fusion protein by Western blot analysis, excluding artifacts due to errors during cloning and strain construction.

      We agree that the single-molecule tracking data alone are certainly not sufficient to draw firm conclusions on the relationship between membrane binding and protein mobility. However, they are consistent with the results of our other in vivo and in vitro analyses, which together indicate a clear correlation between the mobility of BacA and its ability to interact with the membrane and polymerize (processes that promote each other synergistically).

      (6) The experiments that map the interaction surface between the N-terminal unstructured region of PbpC and a specific part of the BacA bactofilin domain seem distinct from the main focus of the paper and the data somewhat preliminary. While the PbpC side has been probed by orthogonal approaches (mutation with localization in cells and affinity in vitro), the BacA region side has only been suggested by the deuterium exchange experiment and needs some kind of validation.

      The results of the HDX analysis per se are not preliminary and clearly show a change in the solvent accessibility of backbone amides in the C-terminal region in the bactofilin domain in the presence of the PbpC<sub>1-13</sub> peptide. However, we agree that additional experiments would be required to verify the binding site suggested by these data. We agree that further research is required to precisely map and verify the PbpC binding site. However, as this is not the main focus of the paper, we would like to proceed without conducting further experiments in this area.

      We now provide additional data showing that elevated levels of the PbpC membrane anchor are able to recruit the MTS-free BacA variant (∆2-8) to the cytoplasmic membrane and stimulate its assembly at the stalked pole (Figure 9). These results now integrate Figure 8 more effectively into the overall theme of the paper.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors of this study investigated the membrane-binding properties of bactofilin A from Caulobacter crescentus, a classic model organism for bacterial cell biology. BacA was the progenitor of a family of cytoskeletal proteins that have been identified as ubiquitous structural components in bacteria, performing a range of cell biological functions. Association with the cell membrane is a common property of the bactofilins studied and is thought to be important for functionality. However, almost all bactofilins lack a transmembrane domain. While membrane association has been attributed to the unstructured N-terminus, experimental evidence had yet to be provided. As a result, the mode of membrane association and the underlying molecular mechanics remained elusive.

      Liu at al. analyze the membrane binding properties of BacA in detail and scrutinize molecular interactions using in-vivo, in-vitro and in-silico techniques. They show that few N-terminal amino acids are important for membrane association or proper localization and suggest that membrane association promotes polymerization. Bioinformatic analyses revealed conserved lineage-specific N-terminal motifs indicating a conserved role in protein localization. Using HDX analysis they also identify a potential interaction site with PbpC, a morphogenic cell wall synthase implicated in Caulobacter stalk synthesis. Complementary, they pinpoint the bactofilin-interacting region within the PbpC C-terminus, known to interact with bactofilin. They further show that BacA localization is independent of PbpC.

      Strengths:

      These data significantly advance the understanding of the membrane binding determinants of bactofilins and thus their function at the molecular level. The major strength of the comprehensive study is the combination of complementary in vivo, in vitro and bioinformatic/simulation approaches, the results of which are consistent.

      Thank you for this positive feedback.

      Weaknesses:

      The results are limited to protein localization and interaction, as there is no data on phenotypic effects. Therefore, the cell biological significance remains somewhat underrepresented.

      We agree that it is interesting to investigate the phenotypic effects caused by the reduced membrane binding activity of BacA variants with defects in the MTS. We have now included phenotypic analyses that shed light on the role of region C1 in the localization of PbpC and its function in stalk elongation under phosphate-limiting conditions (see below).

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      To address the missing estimation of biological relevance, some additional experiments may be carried out.

      For example, given that BacA localizes PbpC by direct interaction, one might expect an effect on stalk formation if BacA is unable to bind the membrane or to polymerize. The same applies to PbpC variants lacking the C1 region. As the mutant strains are available, these data are not difficult to obtain but would help to compare the effect of the deletions with previous data (e.g. Kühn et al.) even if the differences are small.

      We have now analyzed the effect of the removal of region C1 on the ability of mVenus-PbpC to promote stalk elongation in C. crescentus under phosphate starvation. Interestingly, our results show that the lack of the BacA-interaction motif impairs the recruitment of the fusion protein to the stalked pole, but it does not interfere with its stimulatory effect on stalk biogenesis. Thus, the polar localization of PbpC does not appear to be critical for its function in localized peptidoglycan synthesis at the stalk base. These results are now shown in Figure 8–Figure supplement 4. The results obtained may be explained by residual transient interactions of mVenus-PbpC with proteins other than BacA at the stalked pole. Notably, PbpC has also been implicated in the attachment of the stalk-specific protein StpX to components of the outer membrane at the stalk base. The polar localization of PbpC may therefore be primarily required to ensure proper StpX localization, consistent with previous work by Hughes et al. (Mol Microbiol, 2013) showing that StpX is partially mislocalized in a strain producing an N-terminally truncated PbpC variant that no longer localizes to the stalk base.

      We have also attempted to investigate the ability of the Δ2-8 and F130R variants of BacA-mVenus to promote stalk elongation under phosphate starvation. However, the levels of the WT, Δ2-8 and F130R proteins and their stabilities were dramatically different after prolonged incubation of the cells in phosphate-limited medium, so that it was not possible to draw any firm conclusions from the results obtained (not shown).

      In addition, the M23-like endopeptidase LdpA is proposed to be a client protein of BacA (in C. crescentus, Billini et al. 2018, and H. neptunium or R. rubrum, Pöhl et al. 2024). In H. neptunium, it is suggested that the interaction is mediated by a cytoplasmic peptide of LmdC reminiscent of PbpC. This should at least be commented on. It would be interesting to see, if LpdA in C. crescentus is also delocalized and if so, this could identify another client protein of BacA.

      We agree that it would be interesting to study the role of BacA in LdpA function. However, we have not yet succeeded in generating a stable fluorescent protein fusion to LdpA, which currently makes it impossible to study the interplay between these two proteins in vivo. The focus of the present paper is on the mode of interaction between bactofilins and the cytoplasmic membrane and on the mutual interdependence of membrane binding and bactofilin polymerization. Given that PbpC is so far the only verified interaction partner of BacA in C. crescentus, we would like to limit our analysis to this client protein.

      Further comments:

      L105: analyze --> analyzed

      Done.

      L169: Is there any reason why the MTS of E. coli MreB was doubled?

      Previous work has shown that two tandem copies of the N-terminal amphiphilic helix of E. coli MreB were required to partially target a heterologous fusion partner protein (GFP) to the cytoplasmic membrane of E. coli cells (Salje et al, 2011).

      Fig. S3:

      a) Please decide which tag was used (mNG or mVenus) and adapt the figure or legend accordingly.<br /> b) In the legend for panel (C), please describe how the relative amounts were calculated, as the fractions arithmetically cannot add to > 100%. I guess each band was densiometrically rated and independently normalized to the whole-cell signal?

      The fluorescent tag used was mNeonGreen, as indicated in the figure. We have now corrected the legend accordingly. Thank you for making us aware of the wrong labeling of the y-axis. We have now corrected the figure and describe the method used to calculate the plotted values in the legend.

      Legend of Fig 1b: It is not clear to me, to which part of panel B the somewhat cryptic LY... strain names belong. I suggest putting them either next to the images, to delete them, or at least to unify the layout (compare, e.g. to Fig S7). (I would delete the LY numbers and stay with the genes/mutations throughout. This is just a suggestion).

      These names indicate the strains analyzed in panel B, and we have now clarified this in the legend. It is more straightforward to label the images according to the mutations carried by the different strains. Nevertheless, we would like to keep the strain names in the legend, so that the material used for the analysis can be clearly identified.

      Fig. 2a: As some of the colors are difficult to distinguish, I suggest sorting the names in the legend within the graph according to the slope of the curves (e.g. K4E K7E (?) on top and WT being at the bottom).

      Thank you for this suggestion. We have now rearranged the labels as proposed.

      In the legend (L924), correct typo "panel C" to "panel B".

      Done.

      Fig. 3: In the legend, I suggest deleting the abbreviations "S" and "P" as they do not show up in the image. In line 929, I suggest adding: average "relative" amount... or even more precisely: "average relative signal intensities obtained..."

      We have removed the abbreviations and now state that the bars indicate the “average relative signal intensities” obtained for the different fractions.

      Fig 4d: same suggestion as for Fig. 2a.

      Done.

      Fig 8: In the legend (L978), delete 1x "the"

      Done.

      L258 and Fig. S5: The expression "To account for biases in the coverage of bacterial species" seems somewhat unclear. I suggest rephrasing and adding information from the M+M section here (e.g. from L593, if this is meant).

      We now state that this step in the analysis pipeline was performed “To avoid biases arising from the over-representation of certain bacterial species in UniProt”.

      I appreciate the outline of the workflow in panel (a) of Fig. S5. It would be even more useful when some more details about the applied criteria for filtering would be provided (e.g. concerning what is meant with "detailed taxonomic information" or "filter out closely related sequences". Does the latter mean that only one bactofilin sequence per species was used? (As quite many bacteria have more than one but similar bactofilins.)

      We removed sequences from species with unclear phylogeny (e.g. candidate species whose precise taxonomic position has not yet been determined). For many pathogenic species, numerous strains have been sequenced. To account for this bias, only one sequence from clusters of highly similar bactofilin sequences (>90% identity) was retained per species. This information has now been included in the diagram. It is true that many bacteria have more than one bactofilin homolog. However, the sequences of these proteins are typically quite different. For instance, the BacA and BacB from C. crescentus only share 52% identity. Therefore, our analysis does not systematically eliminate bactofilin paralogs that coexist in the same species.

      L281: Although likely, I am not sure if membrane binding has ever been shown for a bactofilin from these phyla. (See also L 380.) Is there an example? Otherwise, membrane binding may not be a property of these bactofilins.

      To our knowledge, the ability of bactofilins from these clades to interact with membranes has not been investigated to date. We agree that the absence of an MTS-like motif may indicate that they lack membrane binding activity, and we have now stated this possibility in the Results and Discussion.

      L285: See comment above concerning the M23-like peptidase LpdA. Although not yet directly shown for C. crescentus, it seems likely that BacACc does also localize this peptidase in addition to PbpC. I suggest rephrasing, e.g. "known" --> "shown"

      We now use the word “reported”.

      L295 and Fig S8: PbpC is ubiquitous. Which criteria/filters have been applied to select the shown sequences?

      C. crescentus PbpC is different from E. coli Pbp1C. It is characterized by distinctive, conserved N- and C-terminal tails and only found in C. crescentus and close relatives. The C. crescentus homolog of E. coli PbpC is called PbpZ (Yakhnina et al, J Bacteriol, 2013; Strobel et al, J Bacterol, 2014), whereas C. crescentus PbpC is related to E. coli PBP1A. We have now added this information to the text to avoid confusion.

      L311: may replace "assembly" by "polymerization"

      Done.

      L320: bactofilin --> bactofilin domain?

      Yes, this was supposed to read “bactofilin domain”. Thank you for spotting this issue.

      L324: The HDX analysis of BacA suggests that the exchange is slowed down in the presence of the PbpC peptide, which is indicative of a physical interaction between these two molecules. To corroborate the claim that BacA polymerization is critical for interaction with the peptide (resp. PbpC), this experiment should be carried out with the polymerization defective BacA version F130R.

      (Or tone this statement down, e.g. show --> suggest.)

      “suggest”

      L386: undergoes --> undergo

      Done.

      L391-400: This idea is tempting but the suggested mechanism then would be restricted to bactofilins of C. crescentus and close relatives. The bactofilin of Rhodomicrobium, for example, was shown to localize dynamically and not to stick to a positively curved membrane.

      In the vast majority of species investigated so far, bactofilins were found to associate with specifically curved membrane regions and to contribute to the establishment of membrane curvature. Unfortu­nately, the sequences of the three co-polymerizing bactofilin paralogs of R. vannielii DSM 166 studied by Richter et al (2023) have not been reported and the genome sequence of this strain is not publicly available. However, in related species with three bactofilin paralogs, only one paralog shows an MTS-like N-terminal peptide and another paralog typically contains an unusual cadherin-like domain of unknown function, as also reported for R. vannielii DSM 166. Therefore, the mechanism controlling the localization dynamics of bactofilins may be complex in the Rhodomicrobium lineage. Nevertheless, at native expression levels, the major bactofilin (BacA) of R. vannielii DSM 166 was shown to localize predominantly to the hyphal tips and the (incipient) bud necks, suggesting that regions of distinct membrane curvature could also play a role in its recruitment. We do not claim that all bactofilins recognize positive membrane curvature, which is clearly not the case. It rather appears as though the curvature preference of bactofilins varies depending on their specific function.

      L405-406: I agree that localization of BacA has been shown to be independent of PbpC. However, this does not generally preclude an effect on BacA localization by other "client" or interacting proteins. (See also comment above about the putative BacA interactor LpdA). I suggest either to corroborate or to change this statement from "client binding" to "PbpC binding".

      Thank you for pointing out the imprecision of this statement. We now conclude that “PbpC binding” is not critical for BacA assembly and positioning.

      Suppl. Fig. S11: In the legend, please correct the copy-paste mismatch (...VirB...).

      Done.

      L482: delete 1x "at"

      Done.

      L484: may be better "soluble and insoluble fractions"?

      We now describe the two fractions as “soluble and membrane-containing insoluble fractions” to make clear to all readers that membrane vesicles are found in the pellet after ultracentrifugation.

      L489-490: check spelling immunoglobulin – immuneglobulin

      Done.

      L500 and 504: º_C --> ºC

      Done.

      Suppl. file X (HDX data): please check the table headline, table should be included in Suppl. file 1

      We have now included a headline in this file (now Supplementary file 3).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have studied how a virus (EMCV) uses its RNA (Type 2 IRES) to hijack the host's protein-making machinery. They use cryo-EM to extract structural information about the recruitment of viral Type 2 IRES to ribosomal pre-IC. The authors propose a novel interaction mechanism in which the EMCV Type 2 IRES mimics 28S rRNA and interacts with ribosomal proteins and initiator tRNA (tRNAi).

      Strengths:

      (1) Getting structural insights about the Type 2 IRES-based initiation is novel.

      (2) The study allows a good comparison of other IRES-based initiation systems.

      (3) The manuscript is well-written and clearly explains the background, methods, and results.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The main weakness of the work is the low resolution of the structure. This limits the possibility of data interpretation at the molecular level.

      However, despite the moderate resolution of the cryo-EM reconstructions, the model fits well into the density. The analysis of the EMCV IRES-48S PIC structure is thorough and includes meaningful comparisons to previously published structures (e.g., PDB IDs - 7QP6 and 7QP7). These comparisons showed that Map B1 represents a closed conformation, in contrast to Map A in the open state (Figure 2). Additionally, the proposed 28S rRNA mimicry strategy supported by structural superposition with the 80S ribosome and sequence similarity between the I domain of the IRES and the h38 region of 28S rRNA (Fig. 4) is well-justified.

      (2) The lack of experimental validation of the functional importance of regions like the GNRA and RAAA loops is another limitation of this study.

      (3) Minor modifications related to data processing and biochemical studies will further validate and strengthen the findings.

      a) In the cryo-EM data section, the authors should include an image showing rejected particles during 2D classification. This would help readers understand why, despite having over 22k micrographs with sufficient particle distribution and good contrast, only a smaller number of particles were used in the final reconstruction. Additionally, employing map-sharpening tools such as Ewald sphere correction, Bayesian polishing, or reference-based motion correction might further improve the quality of the maps. Targeting high-resolution structures would be particularly informative.

      b) The strategic modelling of different IRES domains into the density, particularly the domain into the region above the 40S head, is appreciable. However, providing the full RNA tertiary structure (RNAfold) of the EMCV IRES (nucleotides 280-905) would better explain the logic behind the model building and its molecular interpretation.

      c) Although the authors compare their findings with other types of IRESs (Types 1, 3, and 4), there is no experimental validation of the functional importance of regions like the GNRA and RAAA loops. Including luciferase-based assays or mutational studies of these regions for validation of structural interpretations is strongly recommended.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The field of protein translation has long sought the structure of a Type 2 Internal Ribosome Entry Site (IRES). In this work, Das and Hussain pair cryo-EM with algorithmic RNA structure prediction to present a structure of the Type 2 IRES found in Encephalomyocarditis virus (EMCV). Using medium to low resolution cryo-EM maps, they resolve the overall shape of a critical domain of this Type 2 IRES. They use algorithmic RNA prediction to model this domain onto their maps and attempt to explain previous results using this model.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study reveals a previously unknown/unseen binding modality used by IRESes: a direct interaction of the IRES with the initiator tRNA.

      (2) Use of an IRES-associated factor to assemble and pull down an IRES bound to the small subunit of the ribosome from cellular extracts is innovative.

      (3) Algorithmic modeling of RNA structure to complement medium to low resolution cryo-EM maps, as employed here, can be implemented for other RNA structures.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Maps at the resolution presented prevent unambiguous modelling of the EMCV-IRES. This, combined with the lack of any biochemical data, calls into question any inferences made at the level of individual nucleotides, such as the GNRA loop and CAAA loop (Figure 4).

      (2) The EMCV IRES contains an upstream AUG at position 826, where the PIC can assemble (Pestova et al 1996; PMID 8943341). It is unclear if this start codon was mutated in this study. If it were not mutated, placement of AUG-834 over AUG-826 in the P-site is unexplained.

      (3) The claims the authors make about (i) the general overall shape and binding site of the IRES, (ii) its gross interaction with the two ribosomal proteins, (iii) the P-in state of the 48S, (iv) the rearrangement of the ternary complex are all warranted. Their claims about individual nucleotides or smaller stretches of the IRES-without any supporting biochemical data-is not warranted by the data.

    3. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have studied how a virus (EMCV) uses its RNA (Type 2 IRES) to hijack the host's protein-making machinery. They use cryo-EM to extract structural information about the recruitment of viral Type 2 IRES to ribosomal pre-IC. The authors propose a novel interaction mechanism in which the EMCV Type 2 IRES mimics 28S rRNA and interacts with ribosomal proteins and initiator tRNA (tRNAi).

      Strengths:

      (1) Getting structural insights about the Type 2 IRES-based initiation is novel.

      (2) The study allows a good comparison of other IRES-based initiation systems.

      (3) The manuscript is well-written and clearly explains the background, methods, and results.

      We thank Reviewer 1 for appreciating our efforts and finding structural insights about the type 2 IRES-based initiation presented in this study as novel.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The main weakness of the work is the low resolution of the structure. This limits the possibility of data interpretation at the molecular level.

      However, despite the moderate resolution of the cryo-EM reconstructions, the model fits well into the density. The analysis of the EMCV IRES-48S PIC structure is thorough and includes meaningful comparisons to previously published structures (e.g., PDB IDs - 7QP6 and 7QP7). These comparisons showed that Map B1 represents a closed conformation, in contrast to Map A in the open state (Figure 2). Additionally, the proposed 28S rRNA mimicry strategy supported by structural superposition with the 80S ribosome and sequence similarity between the I domain of the IRES and the h38 region of 28S rRNA (Fig. 4) is welljustified.

      We agree that the low resolution of the map has compromised the data interpretation at the molecular level, and we thank the reviewer for appreciating our findings at this resolution. Due to the compromise in resolution, we have reported findings related to stretches or regions such as loops and stems, rather than individual nucleotides and interactions.  

      (2) The lack of experimental validation of the functional importance of regions like the GNRA and RAAA loops is another limitation of this study.

      We agree with the lack of any additional experiments other than Cryo-EM for probing the importance of regions such as GNRA and RAAA loops in this study. However, we have cited earlier reports that demonstrate the importance of these regions for overall IRES activity. The essentiality of RAAA loop for type 2 IRES was demonstrated in earlier report López de Quinto and Martínez-Salas, 1997 (Cited in manuscript). Further, the conservation of this loop across the type 2 IRES family adds to the importance of this loop (Manuscript Figure 6B). This loop and its flanking G-C stem are similar to h38 of 28S rRNA, and it appears that RAAA loop adopts a mimicry mechanism to interact with the 40S ribosomal protein- uS19, thus highlighting its importance for interaction with 40S. Experiments destabilising the G-C stem also compromise IRES activity, as shown in the case of FMDV IRES (Fernández et al 2011). Previous studies related to the mutation of the GNRA or GCGA loop in EMCV IRES have shown a deficiency in IRES activity (Roberts and Belsham, 1997; Robertson et al 1999), suggesting the importance of these regions in the viral IRES biology, and these reports are cited in the manuscript. Not only EMCV IRES, but mutation in the GUAA (representative of GNRA) loop of FMDV IRES also showed significant reduction in IRES activity (López de Quinto and Martínez-Salas, 1997). In our study, we observe that GCGA loop interacts with tRNA<sub>i</sub> in EMCV IRES-48S PIC, thus implicating the importance of this loop. Moreover, incubation of FMDV IRES with 40S ribosomes has shown a decrease in SHAPE reactivity in domain 3 apex (position 170- 200 nucleotides) (Lozano et al 2018), which corresponds to EMCV IRES domain I apex. Further, we will attempt to address the concern of lack of experimental validation of GNRA and RAAA loops by performing biochemical assays.

      (3) Minor modifications related to data processing and biochemical studies will further validate and strengthen the findings.

      a) In the cryo-EM data section, the authors should include an image showing rejected particles during 2D classification. This would help readers understand why, despite having over 22k micrographs with sufficient particle distribution and good contrast, only a smaller number of particles were used in the final reconstruction. Additionally, employing mapsharpening tools such as Ewald sphere correction, Bayesian polishing, or reference-based motion correction might further improve the quality of the maps. Targeting high-resolution structures would be particularly informative.

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestions, and we would employ suggested processes that may help improve the quality of the maps further. We will include image for rejected 2D classes in the revised manuscript. We agree with the Reviewer’s query related to the substantial number of micrographs and smaller number of particles for the final reconstruction. The total number of micrographs is the summation of multiple datasets, prepared and collected at various times. Among these, around 8000 micrographs have extremely poor particle number and distribution. As a result, the number of particles per micrograph is heterogeneous in the compiled dataset. We obtained only 237054 ‘good particles’ after multiple rounds of 2D & 3D classifications, and the final reconstruction has 28439 particles (~12%). This class was obtained after masked classification for IRES and ternary complex density. Hence, only the particles that show the best density for both IRES and ternary complex are used for reconstructing this map. Another set of particles that have only a portion of IRES and tRNA but NO density for eIF2 forms another map (26792 particles, 11.3%). Thus, we obtained a total of 55231 particles (23.3%) with IRES density.  

      b) The strategic modelling of different IRES domains into the density, particularly the domain into the region above the 40S head, is appreciable. However, providing the full RNA tertiary structure (RNAfold) of the EMCV IRES (nucleotides 280-905) would better explain the logic behind the model building and its molecular interpretation.

      We thank the reviewer for appreciating the modelling of the domain I apex in the cryo-EM density. We tried to predict the full tertiary structure of the IRES, however, inclusion of the full-length sequence from 280-905 gave models of extremely low confidence, and few domains do not abide by the secondary structure of EMCV IRES as reported in Duke et al 1992. Hence, we used individual domains of EMCV IRES and predicted the tertiary structure independent of other IRES domains. Furthermore, 3D models of FMDV IRES domains 2, 3, and 4 (corresponding to EMCV IRES domains- H, I, and J-K) were predicted from SHAPE reactivity values and RNAComposer server (Figure 3 in Lozano et al 2018). The predicted architecture of domain 3 apex (FMDV IRES) coincides with our I domain apex model (EMCV IRES).

      c)  Although the authors compare their findings with other types of IRESs (Types 1, 3, and 4), there is no experimental validation of the functional importance of regions like the GNRA and RAAA loops. Including luciferase-based assays or mutational studies of these regions for validation of structural interpretations is strongly recommended.

      We have discussed the possibility of how the other IRESs, such as type 1 and type 5 (Aichi virus), might use similar strategies as EMCV IRES to assemble the 48S PIC, given the similarity in the motif sequence and position across the viral IRESs. Like EMCV IRES, the type 1 IRES (e.g. Poliovirus, Coxsackie virus) also harbours the GNRA loop, preceded by a C-rich loop at its longest domain, known for long-range RNA-RNA interactions. The segment harbouring GNRA loop is highly conserved across the type 1 family of IRESs (Kim et al 2015).The Aichi viral IRES (type 5) harbours a GNRA loop in its longest domain, which is domain J. Deletion of the GNRA loop has compromised the IRES activity; however, substitution mutations in this region either elevated the IRES activity or it remained unaltered (Yu et al 2011). We have hypothesized that these IRESs (type 1 and type 5) might use the GNRA motifs in their longest domain (domain IV in type 1, and domain J in type 5) similar to that of EMCV IRES, where GNRA is present in the longest domain (I) and preceded by a C-rich loop. Thus, GNRA can potentially mediate long-range interactions with tRNA<sub>i</sub> as all these IRESs require eIF2-ternary complex for the formation of 48S PIC. Parallelly, like EMCV IRES, type 1 and type 5 IRESs also have similar placement of GNRA motif-containing domain before the eIF4G-binding domain (domain J-K in EMCV IRES, domain V in poliovirus, domain K in Aichi virus). Hence, we suggest the possibility of a similar strategy by these IRESs to interact with tRNA<sub>i</sub> during the formation of 48S PIC.  

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The field of protein translation has long sought the structure of a Type 2 Internal Ribosome Entry Site (IRES). In this work, Das and Hussain pair cryo-EM with algorithmic RNA structure prediction to present a structure of the Type 2 IRES found in Encephalomyocarditis virus (EMCV). Using medium to low resolution cryo-EM maps, they resolve the overall shape of a critical domain of this Type 2 IRES. They use algorithmic RNA prediction to model this domain onto their maps and attempt to explain previous results using this model.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study reveals a previously unknown/unseen binding modality used by IRESes: a direct interaction of the IRES with the initiator tRNA.

      (2) Use of an IRES-associated factor to assemble and pull down an IRES bound to the small subunit of the ribosome from cellular extracts is innovative.

      (3) Algorithmic modeling of RNA structure to complement medium to low resolution cryoEM maps, as employed here, can be implemented for other RNA structures.

      We thank Reviewer 2 for positive and encouraging comments on our work, appreciating our ‘innovative’ approach of using IRES-associated factor to assemble and pull down IRES-bound ribosomal complex.  

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Maps at the resolution presented prevent unambiguous modelling of the EMCV-IRES. This, combined with the lack of any biochemical data, calls into question any inferences made at the level of individual nucleotides, such as the GNRA loop and CAAA loop (Figure 4).

      We understand the concerns raised by the reviewer related to the resolution of the EMCV IRES-48S PIC map. However, we would like to mention that we refrained from commenting on individual nucleotides or molecular interactions in the manuscript. Instead, we discuss about loops, RNA stretches or motifs that could be inferred with more confidence as shown in Manuscript Figure 4. The EMCV IRES can directly interact with the 40S ribosome using its domain H and I (Chamond et al 2014), however, the details this interaction was unknown. We observe that the CAAA loop of domain I apex interacts with 40S ribosome based on the placement of portion of domain I in the cryo-EM map. This is also reflected in the earlier reported SHAPE data (Supplementary figures 2, and 8 in Chamond et al 2014), where a decrease in reactivity is evident in the presence of 40S ribosome. In addition, incubation of EMCV IRES with rabbit reticulocyte lysate (RRL) offered protection to domain I apex regions, which included the CAAA loop (Figure 4b in Maloney and Joseph, 2024).

      Furthermore, this decrease in SHAPE reactivity pattern is also evident for FMDV IRES domain 3 apex (like domain I in EMCV IRES) in the presence of 40S ribosome (Lozano et al 2018).

      Thus, these studies are consistent with the placement of IRES model in the cryo-EM map.

      We aim to improve the resolution of the maps for better clarity and add biochemical experiments to justify the possible interactions.

      (2) The EMCV IRES contains an upstream AUG at position 826, where the PIC can assemble (Pestova et al 1996; PMID 8943341). It is unclear if this start codon was mutated in this study. If it were not mutated, placement of AUG-834 over AUG-826 in the P-site is unexplained.

      We thank the reviewer for bringing up this point, as we missed mentioning this in the manuscript. The EMCV IRES does not require scanning and directly positions the AUG-834 at the P site (Pestova et al 1996). In Pestova et al 1996, the intensity of the toeprint at AUG-834 is much more intense than that of AUG-826. Further, AUG-834 lies in the Kozak context, whereas AUG-826 has a poor Kozak context. Furthermore, the synthesis of the polypeptide requires placement of AUG-834 at the P site. In our cryo-EM map, we observed that the tRNA<sub>i</sub> is in a P<sub>IN</sub> state, which indicates the recognition of the start codon, and we reasoned that it is more likely that AUG-834 is placed at the P site than AUG-826. We will mention this in the revised manuscript, as we had NOT mutated AUG-826.

      (3) The claims the authors make about (i) the general overall shape and binding site of the IRES, (ii) its gross interaction with the two ribosomal proteins, (iii) the P-in state of the 48S, (iv) the rearrangement of the ternary complex are all warranted. Their claims about individual nucleotides or smaller stretches of the IRES-without any supporting biochemical data-is not warranted by the data.

      We thank the reviewer for warranting major claims, and we wish to make further improvements to support our assessment of small stretches and individual nucleotides.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Type II IRES, such as those from encephalomyocarditis virus (EMCV) and foot-and-mouth disease virus (FMDV), mediate cap-independent translation initiation by using the full complement of eukaryotic initiation factors (eIFs), except the cap-binding protein eIF4E. The molecular details of how IRES type II interacts with the ribosome and initiation factors to promote recruitment have remained unclear. Das and Hussain used cryo-electron microscopy to determine the structure of a translation initiation complex assembled on the EMCV IRES. The structure reveals a direct interaction between the IRES and the 40S ribosomal subunit, offering mechanistic insight into how type II IRES elements recruit the ribosome.

      Strengths:

      The structure reveals a direct interaction between the IRES and the 40S ribosomal subunit, offering mechanistic insight into how type II IRES elements recruit the ribosome.

      Weaknesses:

      While this reviewer acknowledges the technical challenges inherent in determining the structure of such a highly flexible complex, the overall resolution remains insufficient to fully support the authors' conclusions, particularly given that cryo-EM is the sole experimental approach presented in the manuscript.

      The study is biologically significant; however, the authors should improve the resolution or include complementary biochemical validation.

      We thank Reviewer 3 for acknowledging the technical challenges in this study and finding our study biologically significant. We understand the concerns related to low resolution and the requirement of complementary biochemical validation for our reported observations and interpretations in the manuscript. We are attempting to improve the resolution and complement the interpretations with biochemical experiments.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Joint Public Review:

      Summary:

      In this study, Daniel et al. used three cognitive tasks to investigate behavioral signatures of cerebellar degeneration. In the first two tasks, the authors found that if an equation was incorrect, reaction times slowed significantly more for cerebellar patients than for healthy controls. In comparison, the slowing in the reaction times when the task required more operations was comparable to normal controls. In the third task, the authors show increased errors in cerebellar patients when they had to judge whether a letter string corresponded to an artificial grammar.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the work is methodologically sound and the manuscript well written. The data do show some evidence for specific cognitive deficits in cerebellar degeneration patients.

      Thank you for the thoughtful summary and constructive feedback. We are pleased that the methodological rigor and clarity of the manuscript were appreciated, and that the data were recognized as providing meaningful evidence regarding cognitive deficits in cerebellar degeneration.

      Weaknesses:

      The current version has some weaknesses in the visual presentation of results. Overall, the study lacks a more precise discussion on how the patterns of deficits relate to the hypothesized cerebellar function. The reviewers and the editor agreed that the data are interesting and point to a specific cognitive deficit in cerebellar patients. However, in the discussion, we were somewhat confused about the interpretation of the result: If the cerebellum (as proposed in the introduction) is involved in forming expectations in a cognitive task, should they not show problems both in the expected (1+3 =4) and unexpected (1+3=2) conditions? Without having formed the correct expectation, how can you correctly say "yes" in the expected condition? No increase in error rate is observed - just slowing in the unexpected condition. But this increase in error rate was not observed. If the patients make up for the lack of prediction by using some other strategy, why are they only slowing in the unexpected case? If the cerebellum is NOT involved in making the prediction, but only involved in detecting the mismatch between predicted and real outcome, why would the patients not show specifically more errors in the unexpected condition?

      Thank you for asking these important questions and initiating an interesting discussion. While decision errors and processing efficiency are not fully orthogonal and are likely related, they are not necessarily the same internal construct. The data from Experiments 1 and 2 suggest impaired processing efficiency rather than increased decision error. Reaction time slowing without increased error rates suggests that the CA group can form expectations but respond more slowly, possibly due to reduced processing efficiency. Thus, this analysis of our data suggests that the cerebellum is not essential for forming expectations, but it plays a critical role in processing their violations.

      Relatedly, a few important questions remain open in the literature concerning the cerebellum’s role in expectation-related processes. The first is whether the cerebellum contributes to the formation of expectations or the processing of their violations. In Experiments 1 and 2, the CA group did not show impairments in the complexity manipulation. Solving these problems requires the formation of expectations during the reasoning process. Given the intact performance of the CA group, these results suggest that they are not impaired in forming expectations. However, in both Experiments 1 and 2, patients exhibited selective impairments in solving incorrect problems compared to correct problems. Since expectation formation is required in both conditions, but only incorrect problems involve a VE, we hypothesize that the cerebellum is involved in VE processes. We suggest that the CA group can form expectations in familiar tasks, but are impaired in processing unexpected compared to expected outcomes. This supports the notion that the cerebellum contributes to VE, rather than to forming expectations.

      In Experiment 3, during training, the participant is learning a novel rule (grammar), forming new expectations on how strings of letters should be. Afterwards, during testing, the participant is requested to identify if a novel string is following the rule or not. We examined sensitivity to distinguish between grammatical and non‐grammatical strings of letters, thus taking into account a baseline ability to identify expected strings. Additionally, both in the low‐similarity and highsimilarity conditions, there are expectations regarding whether the strings are following the rule or not. However, in the high‐similarity condition, there is more uncertainty regarding which strings are following the grammatical rule, as demonstrated in a lower sensitivity (d prime). Given the group differences only in the low similarity condition, these results suggest the CA group is impaired only when the rules are more certain. Given these results, we suggest that forming cognitive expectations is not necessarily dependent on the cerebellum. Rather, we propose that the cerebellum is critical for processing rule-based VE (detection or processing of detected errors) under conditions of more certainty. One remaining question for future studies is whether the cerebellum contributes to detection of a mismatch between the expectation and sensory evidence, or the processing of a detected VE. 

      We suggest that these key questions are relevant to both motor and non-motor domains and were not fully addressed even in the previous, well-studied motor domain. Importantly, while previous experimental manipulations17,19,40,94–96 have provided important insights regarding the cerebellar role in these processes, some may have confounded these internal constructs due to task design limitations (e.g., lack of baseline conditions). Notably, some of these previous studies did not include control conditions, such as correct trials, where there was no VE. In addition, other studies did not include a control measure (e.g., complexity effect), which limits their ability to infer the specific cerebellar role in expectation manipulation. 

      Thus, the current experimental design used in three different experiments provides a valuable novel experimental perspective, allowing us to distinguish between some, but not all, of the processes involved in the formation of expectations and their violations. For instance, to our knowledge, this is the first study to demonstrate a selective impairment in rule-based VE processing in cerebellar patients across both numerical reasoning and artificial grammar tasks. If feasible, we propose that future studies should disentangle different forms of VE by operationalizing them in experimental tasks in an orthogonal manner. This will allow us to achieve a more detailed and well-defined cerebellar motor and non-motor mechanistic account.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Editors comments:

      The Figures are somewhat sub-standard and should be improved before the paper is made the VOR. Ensure consistent ordering of the group factor (CA, NT) and experimental factor across Figure 3,4, and 6 (panels A). Having the patient group as columns in Figure 4a and in rows in Figure 6a is very confusing.

      We have standardized the layout across Figures 2, 4, and 6 so that the group factor (CA, NT) and experimental conditions are consistently ordered. In all panels, the group factor now appears as a column.

      Subpanels should be numbered A,B,C... not A, B1, B2.

      Subpanel labels have been updated to follow the standard A, B, C format across all figures.

      Fonts should have a 100% aspect ratio - they should not be stretched (Figure 6B).

      We have corrected the font aspect ratios in all figures (e.g., Figure 6B) to ensure proper proportions and readability. 

      Colors should be more suitable to print - use a CYMK color scheme (i.e. avoid neon colors such as the neon green for the CA).

      The color scheme across all figures has been revised to be print-friendly using CMYKcompatible, colorblind-accessible palettes. Neon green for the CA group was replaced with a more muted, distinguishable color.

      Abstract: "The CA group exhibited a disproportionate cost when comparing expected problems compared to unexpected problems" - I recommend switching unexpected and expected, as the disproportional cost in on the former.

      We have changed the wording of the sentence accordingly. 

      Upon re-reading the details for the AGL task were not clear to us. Please do not rely on the reference (78) for the details - your paper should contain enough information to have the reader understand the experimental details. For you to appreciate the depth of our not-understanding, here a simple question: The test strings either followed the grammar in Fig 5 or they did not. If they did not, how exactly was similarity to the grammar measured? If they did, what was the difference between the “Grammatical-high” and “Grammatical-low” trials? If the string was grammatical, there should not be a notion of similarity, no? Or where these trials arbitrary split in half? 

      We have clarified that 50% of the test strings followed the grammar of the training strings. We also elaborated on the calculation of chunk strength as a measure of similarity between the training and testing strings, similar to the previous papers. The differences between low and high similarity are explained in the paper. Specifically, for each test string, we calculated chunk strength by summing the frequencies of all relevant substrings (e.g., bigrams and trigrams) that appeared in the training set. The test strings whose chunk‐strength values fell above the median for grammatical items were classified as “high similarity,” while those falling below the median were classified as “low similarity.” Also, grammatical strings can be of both low and high similarity; this is precisely the beautiful aspect of this experimental manipulation, showing the importance of uncertainty. We have utilized a 2 × 2 fully orthogonal design (grammaticality × similarity).

      Experimental details of the task should be added to the Method section. In the results you should only mention the experimental details that are necessary for understanding the experiments, but details such as the number of trials, etc, can be moved to the methods. 

      We have now moved the experimental task details to the Method sections.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the author):

      Studies have been done online and not in the lab. Could that have affected the results?

      We addressed this in the Methods section, referring to established protocols for online neuropsychological testing[9–12]. Our results align with similar in-lab findings in both the subtraction and AGL tasks, supporting the online approach's robustness. 

      Figure 2, B1; Figure 4, B1; Figure 6B: How many patients performed worse than the (worst-performing) controls? There appears to be quite some overlap between patients and controls. In the patients who performed worse, was there any difference from the other patients (e.g. disease severity as assessed by SARA score, repeat length, data of attention probes)?

      We appreciate the reviewer’s thoughtful comment. We considered conducting individual-level comparisons to identify patients who performed worse than the lowest-performing controls. However, defining "worse" based on the performance of the lowest control is only one possible criterion. Other definitions—such as a specific number (1/2/3?) of standard deviations below the control mean—are also commonly used in literature, and each may yield different conclusions. This variability highlights the lack of a standardized threshold for what constitutes “worse” or "impaired" performance at the individual level. Given this ambiguity, and in line with prior studies that focus on average group differences rather than “impairment” prevalence, we chose not to include these individual-level comparisons. We believe this approach better aligns with the goals and design of the current study. That said, we agree that examining individual variability is important and may be more appropriate in future studies with larger samples so that percentage is a more robust measure. However, given the rarity of the disease, this would also be a challenge for future studies.  

      SARA ataxia scale does not include oculomotor function. In SCA6 oculomotor deficits are frequent, eg, downbeat nystagmus. Please include information on oculomotor dysfunction.

      We thank the reviewer for this important observation. While it is true that the SARA scale does not explicitly assess oculomotor function, our experimental design – in all three experiments – has control conditions that help account for general processing differences, including those that could arise from oculomotor deficits. These conditions, such as the correct trials and the complexity effects, allow us to isolate effects specifically related to the violation of expectation while minimizing the influence of broader performance factors, such as eye movement abnormalities. We also note that, while some patients can experience oculomotor symptoms such as downbeat nystagmus, none of our tasks required precise visual tracking or gaze shifts. In our experimental tasks, stimuli were centrally presented, and no visual tracking or saccadic responses were required. Moreover, the response time windows and stimulus durations (>2–5 s) were sufficient to mitigate the effects of delayed visual processing due to oculomotor impairment.

      Why was MoCA used and not the CCAS-Schmahmann scale to assess cognitive function?

      We selected the MoCA due to its broad clinical utility, time efficiency, and ability to detect mild cognitive impairment specifically in CA[101,102].  

      Were there any signs of depression in the patient group that could have affected the results?

      None of the patients had a clinical diagnosis of depression or were undergoing psychiatric treatment.  

      Additionally, the interaction between group and expectancy was insignificant when RT was the depended vaibale .." = variable

      This has been corrected to "variable" in the revised manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The terms 'unexpected' and 'expected' conditions are confusing. [...] Terming this 'violation of expectation' seems unnecessarily complicated to me. 

      We thank the reviewer for raising this important concern. We recognize that the terms "expected" and "unexpected" can be ambiguous without clarification, and that "violation of expectation" (VE) may initially appear unnecessary. Our choice to use VE terminology is grounded in an established theoretical framework that distinguishes between mere stimulus correctness and prediction mechanisms. Specifically, VE captures the internal processing of mismatches between anticipated and observed outcomes, which we believe is central to the cerebellar function under investigation. While simpler, technical alternatives (e.g., "correct" vs. "incorrect") could describe the stimuli, we find that VE more accurately reflects the mental constructs under study and is consistent with previous literature in both motor and cognitive domains. 

      Both tasks provide an error (or violation of expectation) that is non-informative and therefore unlikely to be used to update a forward model. The authors draw on motor literature to formulate a cognitive task where the presence of an error would engage the cerebellum and lead to longer reaction times in cerebellar patients. But in the motor domain, mismatch of sensory feedback and expectations would lead to an updating of the internal forward model. It seems unlikely to me in the arithmetic and alphabetic addition tasks that patients would update their internal model of addition according to an error presented at the end of each trial. If the error processed in these tasks will not lead to the updating of the internal forward model, can the authors discuss to what extent the cerebellum will be engaged similarly in these tasks, and what exactly connects cerebellar processing in these motor and cognitive tasks.

      We thank the reviewer for this thoughtful and important comment. We fully agree that the current tasks do not directly probe learning-related updating of internal models. As stated in the paper, the goal of the present study was not to support or refute a specific claim regarding the cerebellum’s role in learning processes. Rather, our focus was on examining cerebellar involvement in the processing of VE. While we were inspired by models from the motor domain, our design was not intended to induce learning or adaptation per se, but to isolate the processing of unexpected outcomes. We agree that the tasks in their current form are unlikely to engage forward model updating in the same way as in sensorimotor adaptation paradigms. That said, we believe the current findings can serve as a basis for future research exploring the relationship between cerebellar prediction error processing and learning over time. As we also noted in the paper, this is a direction we propose, and actively pursuing, in ongoing research work.

      The colour scheme is difficult for anyone with colour blindness or red-green visual impairment. Please adjust.

      All figures have been revised to use CMYK-compatible, colorblind-safe palettes, and neon colors have been removed.

      The introduction is a bit difficult to understand, because the authors draw on a number of different theories about cerebellar functioning, without clearly delineating how these relate to each other. For example: a) In the paragraph beginning with 'notably': If the cerebellum is required for sequential operations, why does it show the impairment with the rotation of the letters?

      We understand the concern that if the cerebellum is involved in sequential operations, its involvement in mental letter rotation, which can be assumed as “continuous transformation,” may appear contradictory. We note that the boundary between continuous and stepwise, procedural operations is not always clear-cut and may vary depending on the participant's strategy or previous knowledge, which is not fully known to the researchers. Furthermore, to our knowledge, prior work on mental rotation has not directly investigated the impact of VE during this task. However, these are two debatable considerations. 

      More importantly, a careful reading of our paper suggests that our experiments were designed to examine VE within tasks that involve sequential processing. Notably, we are not claiming that the cerebellum is involved in sequential or procedural processing per se. Rather, our findings point to a more specific role for the cerebellum in processing VE that arises during the construction of multistep procedural tasks. In fact, the results indicate that while the cerebellum may not be directly involved in the procedural process itself, it is critical when expectations are violated within such a context. This distinction is made possible in our study by the inclusion of a control condition (the complexity effect), which allows for a unique dissociation in our experimental design—one that, to our knowledge, has not been sufficiently addressed in previous studies.

      Additionally, in the case of arithmetic problem solving—such as the tasks used in prior studies cited in our manuscript21—there is substantial evidence that these problems are typically solved through stepwise, procedural operations. Arithmetic reasoning, used in Experiments 1 and 2, has been robustly associated with procedural, multi-step strategies, which may be more clearly aligned with traditional views of cerebellar involvement in sequential operations. Thus, we propose that the role of the cerebellum in continuous transformations should be further examined. 

      We suggest a more parsimonious theory that the cerebellum contributes to VE,  a field that was highly examined before. Yet, to reconcile ours and previous findings, we propose that the cerebellum’s contribution may not be limited to either continuous or stepwise operations per se, but rather to a domain-general process: the processing of VE. This theoretical framework can explain performance patterns across both mental rotation tasks and stepwise, procedural arithmetic.   

      The authors mention generation prediction as a function of the cerebellum, processing of prediction errors (or violations of expectations), sequentially, and continuous transformations - but it is unclear whether the authors are trying to dissociate these from each other or whether ALL of these functions have informed task design.

      We propose that the cerebellum’s contribution may not be limited to either continuous transformations or stepwise, procedural operations per se, but rather to a domain-general process: the processing of VE. We would like to clarify that we do not claim the cerebellum contributes to continuous transformations only, as suggested in some earlier work[21]. Rather, it could be that the cerebellum may contribute to continuous transformations, but we propose that it also supports multi-step, procedural processes. Given that framework, in the current study, across three separate experiments, we demonstrated that the cerebellum can also contribute to procedural, multi-step reasoning tasks.  

      Minor Comments

      Typo under paragraph beginning with 'notably' - cerebellum role should be cerebellar role.

      Corrected as suggested.

      When mentioning sequences as a recruiting feature for the cerebellum in the introduction, Van Overwalle's extensive work in the social domain should be referenced for completeness.

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have now cited Van Overwalle’s work on cerebellar involvement in sequence processing within the social domain in the revised Introduction.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Bru et al. focuses on the role of vacuoles as a phosphate buffering system for yeast cells. The authors describe here the crosstalk between the vacuole and the cytosol using a combination of in vitro analyses of vacuoles and in vivo assays. They show that the luminal polyphosphatases of the vacuole can hydrolyze polyphosphates to generate inorganic phosphate, yet they are inhibited by high concentrations. This balances the synthesis of polyphosphates against the inorganic phosphate pool. Their data further show that the Pho91 transporter provides a valve for the cytosol as it gets activated by a decline in inositol pyrophosphate levels. The authors thus demonstrate how the vacuole functions as a phosphate buffering system to maintain a constant cytosolic inorganic phosphate pool.

      This is a very consistent and well-written manuscript with a number of convincing experiments, where the authors use isolated vacuoles and cellular read-out systems to demonstrate the interplay of polyphosphate synthesis, hydrolysis, and release. The beauty of this system the authors present is the clear correlation between product inhibition and the role of Pho91 as a valve to release Pi to the cytosol to replenish the cytosolic pool. I find the paper overall an excellent fit and only have a few issues, including :

      (1) Figure 3: The authors use in their assays 1 mM ZnCl2 or 1mM MgCl2. Is this concentration in the range of the vacuolar luminal ion concentration? Did they also test the effect of Ca2+, as this ion is also highly concentrated in the lumen?

      (2) Regarding the concentration of 30 mM K-PI, did the authors also use higher and lower concentrations? I agree that there is inhibition by 30 mM, but they cannot derive conclusions on the luminal concentration if they use just one in their assay. A titration is necessary here.

      (3) What are the consequences on vacuole morphology if the cells lack Pho91?

      (4) Discussion: The authors do not refer to the effect of calcium, even though I would expect that the levels of the counterion should affect the phosphate metabolism. I would appreciate it if they would extend their discussion accordingly.

      (5) I would appreciate a brief discussion on how phosphate sensing and control are done in human cells. Do they use a similar lysosomal buffer system?

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      The manuscript by Bru et al. focuses on the role of vacuoles as a phosphate buffering system for yeast cells. The authors describe here the crosstalk between the vacuole and the cytosol using a combination of in vitro analyses of vacuoles and in vivo assays. They show that the luminal polyphosphatases of the vacuole can hydrolyse polyphosphates to generate inorganic phosphate, yet they are inhibited by high concentrations. This balances the synthesis of polyphosphates against the inorganic phosphate pool. Their data further show that the Pho91 transporter provides a valve for the cytosol as it gets activated by a decline in inositol pyrophosphate levels. The authors thus demonstrate how the vacuole functions as a phosphate buffering system to maintain a constant cytosolic inorganic phosphate pool. 

      This is a very consistent and well-written manuscript with a number of convincing experiments, where the authors use isolated vacuoles and cellular read-out systems to demonstrate the interplay of polyphosphate synthesis, hydrolysis, and release. The beauty of this system the authors present is the clear correlation between product inhibition and the role of Pho91 as a valve to release Pi to the cytosol to replenish the cytosolic pool. I find the paper overall an excellent fit and only have a few issues, including: 

      (1) Figure 3: The authors use in their assays 1 mM ZnCl2 or 1mM MgCl2. Is this concentration in the range of the vacuolar luminal ion concentration? Did they also test the effect of Ca2+, as this ion is also highly concentrated in the lumen? 

      The concentrations inside vacuoles can reach those values. However, given that polyP is a potent chelator of divalent metal ions, what would matter are the concentrations of free Zn<sup>2+</sup> or Mg<sup>2+</sup> inside the organelle. These are not known. This is not critical since we use those two conditions only as a convenient tool to differentiate Ppn1 and Ppn2 activity in vitro. In our initial characterisation of Ppn2 (10.1242/jcs.201061), we had also tested Mn, Co, Ca, Ni, Cu. Only Zn and Co supported activity. Ca did not. Andreeva et al. (10.1016/j.biochi.2019.06.001) reached similar conclusions and extended our results.

      (2) Regarding the concentration of 30 mM K-PI, did the authors also use higher and lower concentrations? I agree that there is inhibition by 30 mM, but they cannot derive conclusions on the luminal concentration if they use just one in their assay. A titration is necessary here. 

      The concentration of 30 mM was not arbitrarily chosen. It is the luminal P<sub>i</sub> concentration that the vacuoles could reach through when they entered a plateau of luminal Pi. We consider this as an upper limit because polyP kept increasing which luminal P<sub>i</sub> did not. Thus, there is in principle no physiological motivation for trying higher values. But we will probably add a titration to the revised version.

      (3) What are the consequences on vacuole morphology if the cells lack Pho91? 

      We had not observed significant abnormalities during a screen of the genome-wide deletion collection of yeast (10.1371/journal.pone.0054160)

      (4) Discussion: The authors do not refer to the effect of calcium, even though I would expect that the levels of the counterion should affect the phosphate metabolism. I would appreciate it if they would extend their discussion accordingly. 

      We will pick this up in the discussion. However, the situation is much more complex because major pools of counterions (up to hundreds of mM) are constituted by vacuolar lysine, arginine, polyamines, Mg, Zn etc. Their interplay with polyP is probably complex and worth to be treated in a dedicated project.

      (5) I would appreciate a brief discussion on how phosphate sensing and control are done in human cells. Do they use a similar lysosomal buffer system? 

      Mammalian cells have their Pi exporter XPR1 mainly on a lysosome-like compartment (10.1016/j.celrep.2024.114316). Whether and how it functions there for Pi export from the cytosol is not entirely clear. We will address this situation in the revision.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      This manuscript presents a well-conceived and concise study that significantly advances our understanding of polyphosphate (polyP) metabolism and its role in cytosolic phosphate (Pi) homeostasis in a model unicellular eukaryote. The authors provide evidence that yeast vacuoles function as dynamic regulatory buffers for Pi homeostasis, integrating polyP synthesis, storage, and hydrolysis in response to cellular metabolic demands. The work is methodologically sound and offers valuable insights into the conserved mechanisms of phosphate regulation across eukaryotes. 

      Strengths: 

      The results demonstrate that the vacuolar transporter chaperone (VTC) complex, in conjunction with luminal polyphosphatases (Ppn1/Ppn2) and the Pi exporter Pho91, establishes a finely tuned feedback system that balances cytosolic Pi levels. Under Pi-replete conditions, inositol pyrophosphates (InsPPs) promote polyP synthesis and storage while inhibiting polyP hydrolysis, leading to vacuolar Pi accumulation. 

      Conversely, Pi scarcity triggers InsPP depletion, activating Pho91-mediated Pi export and polyP mobilization to sustain cytosolic phosphate levels. This regulatory circuit ensures metabolic flexibility, particularly during critical processes such as glycolysis, nucleotide synthesis, and cell cycle progression, where phosphate demand fluctuates dramatically. 

      From my viewpoint, one of the most important findings is the demonstration that vacuoles act as a rapidly accessible Pi reservoir, capable of switching between storage (as polyP) and release (as free Pi) in response to metabolic cues. The energetic cost of polyP synthesis-driven by ATP and the vacuolar proton gradient-highlights the evolutionary importance of this buffering system. The study also draws parallels between yeast vacuoles and acidocalcisomes in other eukaryotes, such as Trypanosoma and Chlamydomonas, suggesting a conserved role for these organelles in phosphate homeostasis. 

      Weaknesses: 

      While the manuscript is highly insightful, referring to yeast vacuoles as "acidocalcisome-like" may warrant further discussion. Canonical acidocalcisomes are structurally and chemically distinct (e.g., electron-dense, in most cases spherical, and not routinely subjected to morphological changes, and enriched with specific ions), whereas yeast vacuoles have well-established roles beyond phosphate storage. A comment on this terminology could strengthen the comparative analysis and avoid potential confusion in the field. 

      Yeast vacuoles show all major chemical features of acidocalcisomes. They are acidified, contain high concentrations of Ca, polyP (which make them electron-dense, too), other divalent ions, such as Mg, Zn, Mn etc, and high concentrations of basic amino acids. Thus, they clearly have an acidocalcisome-like character. In addition, they have hydrolytic, lysosome-like functions and, depending on the strain background, they can be larger than acidocalcisomes described e.g. in protists. We will elaborate this point, which is obvious to us but probably not to most readers, in the revised version.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review): 

      Bru et al. investigated how inorganic phosphate (Pi) is buffered in cells using S. cerevisiae as a model. Pi is stored in cells in the form of polyphosphates in acidocalcisomes. In S. cerevisiae, the vacuole, which is the yeast lysosome, also fulfills the function of Pi storage organelle. Therefore, yeast is an ideal system to study Pi storage and mobilization. 

      They can recapitulate in their previously established system, using isolated yeast vacuoles, findings from their own and other groups. They integrate the available data and propose a working model of feedback loops to control the level of Pi on the cellular level. 

      This is a solid study, in which the biological significance of their findings is not entirely clear. The data analysis and statistical significance need to be improved and included, respectively. The manuscript would have benefited from rigorously testing the model, which would also have increased the impact of the study.

      It is not clear to us what the reviewer would see as a more rigorous test of the model.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Praegel et al. explore the differences in learning an auditory discrimination task between adolescent and adult mice. Using freely-moving (Educage) and head-fixed paradigms, they compare behavioral performance and neuronal responses over the course of learning. The mice were initially trained for seven days on an easy pure frequency tone Go/No-go task (frequency difference of one octave), followed by seven days of a harder version (frequency difference of 0.25 octave). While adolescents and adults showed similar performance on the easy task, adults performed significantly better on the harder task. Quantifying the lick bias of both groups, the authors then argue that the difference in performance is not due to a difference in perception, but rather to a difference in cognitive control. The authors then used neuropixel recordings across 4 auditory cortical regions to quantify the neuronal activity related to the behavior. At the single cell level, the data shows earlier stimulus-related discrimination for adults compared to adolescents in both the easy and hard tasks. At the neuronal population level, adults displayed a higher decoding accuracy and lower onset latency in the hard task as compared to adolescents. Such differences were not only due to learning, but also to age as concluded from recordings in novice mice. After learning, neuronal tuning properties had changed in adults but not in adolescent. Overall, the differences between adolescent and adult neuronal data correlates with the behavior results in showing that learning a difficult task is more challenging for younger mice.

      Strengths:

      The behavioral task is well designed, with the comparison of easy and difficult tasks allowing for a refined conclusion regarding learning across age. The experiments with optogenetics and novice mice are completing the research question in a convincing way.

      The analysis, including the systematic comparison of task performance across the two age groups, is most interesting, and reveals differences in learning (or learning strategies?) that are compelling.

      Neuronal recording during both behavioral training and passive sound exposure is particularly powerful, and allows interesting conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      The presentation of the paper must be strengthened. Inconsistencies, missing information or confusing descriptions should be fixed.

      We have carefully re-read the manuscript and reviewed it for inconsistencies. We made several corrections in the figures. For example, we removed redundant lines from violin plots and statistics, applied consistent labels, matched y- and x-limits of graphics, and adjusted labels. We also clarified descriptions of some experiment by adding explanations to the text.

      The recording electrodes cover regions in the primary and secondary cortices. It is well known that these two regions process sounds quite differently (for example, one has tonotopy, the other not), and separating recordings from both regions is important to conclude anything about sound representations. The authors show that the conclusions are the same across regions for Figure 4, but is it also the case for the subsequent analysis? Comparing to the original manuscript, the authors have now done the analysis for AuDp and AUDv separately, and say that the differences are similar in both regions. The data however shows that this is not the case (Fig S7). And even if it were the case, how would it compatible with the published literature?

      To address this and previous concerns about regional differences, the manuscript now includes 4 figures (4-1, 4-3, 6-2, 7-1) and 5 supplemental tables (3,4, 5, 6, 8) that explicitly compare results across brain regions.

      Following the reviewer’s request for subsequent analysis, we now added a new supplemental figure (Fig. S6-2) and two new supplementary tables (Tables S5, S6). We show that similar to expert mice (supplementary Table 3, and supplementary Table 4), the firing properties of adolescent and adult novice mice differ across auditory subregions (supplementary Table 5). We also show that the different auditory subregions have different firing properties (supplementary Table 6). With respect to task engagement, we show that (similar to Fig. S4-2) the neuronal discriminability in different auditory subregions is similar in both novice and expert mice (Fig. S6-2).

      Following the comment on Fig. S7-1, we made three changes to the revised manuscript. First, we now highlight that the differences firing properties between adolescent and adult neurons in AUDp and AUDv were distinct, but not significantly different within age-group comparisons. Second, we clearly state that the learning related changes in the measured parameters are different between AUDp and AUDv. Note, however, the greater changes in adult neurons after learning remains consistent between AUDp and AUDv. Third, we softened our original claim but still highlighted the stronger learning-induced plasticity in adults.

      Regarding the concern that different regions should show different patterns due to their known differences (e.g. tonotopy). Of course we agree that different areas differ functionally (as shown in our own previous work and here as well). However, it is still plausible, and biologically reasonable, that developmental changes may proceed in a similar direction across different areas, even if their baseline coding properties differ.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to find out how and how well adult and adolescent mice discriminate tones of different frequencies and whether there are differences in processing at the level of the auditory cortex that might explain differences in behavior between the two groups. Adolescent mice were found to be worse at sound frequency discrimination than adult mice. The performance difference between the groups was most pronounced when the sounds are close in frequency and thus difficult to distinguish and could, at least in part, be attributed to the younger mice' inability to withhold licking in no-go trials. By recording the activity of individual neurons in the auditory cortex when mice performed the task or were passively listening as well as in untrained mice the authors identified differences in the way that the adult and adolescent brains encode sounds and the animals' choice that could potentially contribute to the differences in behavior.

      Strengths:

      The study combines behavioural testing in freely-moving and head-fixed mice, optogenetic manipulation and high density electrophysiological recordings in behaving mice to address important open questions about age differences in sound-guided behavior and sound representation in the auditory cortex.

      Weaknesses:

      For some of the analyses that the authors conducted it is unclear what the rationale behind them is and, consequently, what conclusion we can draw from them.

      We have carefully re-read the manuscript and reviewed it for analyses that lacked a clear rationale or conclusion. To address this, we have made several changes to clarify the reasoning and strengthen the interpretation of the results.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      It would have helped if the authors had highlighted the changes they made to the manuscript compared to the original version - especially since many replies to the reviewers' comments were as vague as "...we fixed some of the wording so it adheres to the data shown", or "we refined our interpretation", without further details.

      The revised version has improved substantially, and the main claims have been discussed in a more objective way. Important new analyses have been added to allow for a refined interpretation of the results. However, the presentation of the data could still be strengthened significantly (in response to comment A from last review).

      We apologize for the lack of detail in some of our previous responses. Our intention was to keep the replies concise, assuming that the side-by-side version with tracked changes would make the edits sufficiently clear. However, we understand the need for greater transparency. Thus, below we provide the following five lists describing the major changes: (1) List of specific reviewer recommendations, (2) list of corrections in figures, (3) list of clarity issues, (4) list of fixed mistakes, (5) list of new figures. We hope this breakdown makes the revisions clearer and more accessible.

      List of specific reviewer recommendations:

      l.108 mentions a significant change in the vertical line of Fig 1F - Could this significance be indicated and quantified in the figure?

      We quantified and indicated the significance of the vertical line in Fig. 1f and Fig. 1i.

      Fig.1G - the thick and thin lines should be defined, as well as the grey and white dots (same values for adolescents, not for adults).

      (a) We removed the thin inner lines from the violin plot. We define the bar (thick line) of the violin plot in an additional sentence in the methods section under data analysis (LL820-823). b) We adjusted the marker outlines in the adult data (Fig. 1G).

      the figure axis legends should be consistent (trails in Fig D vs # trails in Fig 1F)

      We adjusted the axis legend to # trials in Fig. 1D.

      l.110: is d' always calculated based on the 100 last trials of a session, or is it just for Figure 1F? -etc...

      d’ is always calculated based on the last 100 trials. To clarify this, we added a description in the methods section (L830).

      List of corrections in the figures:

      (1) We removed the internal lines from violin plots in throughout Fig. 1-7.

      (2) We removed the underline of the statistics throughout Fig. 1-7.

      (3) We consistently applied ‘adolescent’ and ‘adult’ figure labels and titles with lowercase letters throughout Fig. 1-7.

      (4) We applied consistent labelling of ‘time (ms)’ throughout Fig. 1-7.

      (5) We matched the size of dashed lines throughout Fig. 1-6.

      (6) We adjusted the x-label of Fig. 1d, Fig. S-1-1 a, Fig. 3c, Fig. 3h-i, Fig, 4d to ‘# trials’.

      (7) We removed the x-label of ‘Experimental Group’ from Fig. 1 to enhance consistency with other figures.

      (8) We removed misaligned dots from the violin plots in Fig. 1g, Fig. 2f, Fig. 3f,g.

      (9) We corrected the plot in Fig. S1-1b.

      (10) We adjusted the y-limits of Fig. S1-1c to be consistent with Fig. S1-1d,e.

      (11) We adjusted the x-labels and y-labels of Fig, 2, Fig. S3-1, Fig, S3-2 and Fig. 3b to ‘freq. (kHz)’.

      (12) We added the age of adolescent and adult mice to the schematic timeline in Fig. 2a.

      (13) We added a label of the reinforcement delay to the schematic trial structure in Fig. 3b.

      (14) We added within-group statistics to Fig. 3e and the figure legend.

      (15) We adjusted the x-label of Fig. 3d to ‘# sessions’.

      (16) We adjusted the x-label of Fig. 3d and Fig. S3-1b to ‘# licks’.

      (17) We changed the y-label in Fig. S3-1a, and Fig. S3-2d, e to ‘lick ratio’ to avoid confusion with the lick rate (Hz) that was calculated in Fig. 4 and Fig. 6.

      (18) We replaced the titles ‘CAMKII’ with ‘dTomato’ in Fig. S3-2 to correctly highlight that both the experimental and control injection were CAMKII injections.

      (19) We adjusted the x-labels and y-labels of Fig, 2, Fig. S3-1, Fig, S3-2 and Fig. 3b to ‘freq. (kHz)’.

      (20) We adjusted the y-label of Fig. S4-1c to ‘# neurons’.

      (21) We matched the x-ticks in Fig. 4e,f.

      (22) We matched the x-ticks in Fig. 6d-g.

      (23) We changed the x-label in Fig. 4g, S4-2 and S6-2 to ‘duration (ms)’ to match the figure label with the manuscript.

      (24) We consistently label ‘Hit’, ‘Miss’, ‘FA’ and ‘CR’ with capital letters in Fig. 4d-e.

      (25) We replaced the double figure label ‘C.’ in Fig. S4-2 with ‘D.’.

      (26) We adjusted the dot-size in Fig. 5 to be equal for all graphs.

      (27) We added ticks to the experimental timeline in Fig. 6a.

      (28) We corrected the y-label in Fig.7c. Now it correctly reflects 5 attenuations from 72-32 dB SPL.

      (29) We matched the y-label of Fig. 7e-h and Fig. S7-1.

      List of clarity issues:

      (1) We replaced the term ‘lower response bias’ with ‘higher lick bias’ (L24) to accurately describe the more negative (lower) criterion-bias, which highlights a higher tendency to lick.

      (2) We replaced the term ‘response bias’ with ‘lick bias’ to consistently describe the calculated criterion-bias (L24, L149, L164, L455, L456, L468).

      (3) We clarify that the age-related differences were ‘more pronounced’ instead of simply ‘higher’ to accurately reflect not simply the increase in adolescent lick-bias, but also the decrease in adult lick-bias (L31).

      (4) We clarified that adolescent sound representations are not merely ’distinct’, but ‘not fully mature’ in L83.

      (5) We clarified in L180 that the impulsive responses we observed in adolescent mice could be related to being ‘less impacted by punishments’.

      (6) We clarified the differences in firing properties of auditory sub-regions analyzed in Supplementary Table 3 (L287-295).

      (7) We explained and clarified the reference to Fig. 3j (LL252-253).

      (8) We added statistics to Fig.S4-2 to support our claim that there are no differences in the onset-latency, duration of discriminability and maximal discriminability between different sub-regions within age-groups (LL 314-315).

      (9) We expanded our explanation of the results in Table 3 (LL370-379).

      (10) We separated the reference to Fig. 6b and Fig. 6c to clarify their meaning (LL358-361).

      (11) We clarified the differences in basic firing properties during the FRA protocol in Fig. 7 (LL409-418).

      (12) We expanded our explanation of the differences of the learning related firing properties in AUDp and AUDv of Fig. S7-1 (LL426-433).

      (13) We changed the term ‘plasticity profiles’ to ‘learning related plasticity’ to further clarify our limitation that L5/6 and L2/3 may exhibit distinct learning related changes (L496).

      (14) We changed the term ‘sluggish’ (L481) to ‘delayed’ to more precisely explain differences between adolescent and adult tuning properties.

      (15) We clarified that the running d’ was calculated in bins of 25 trials, instead of ‘the last 25 trials’ (LL845-846).

      List of fixed mistakes:

      (1) We corrected and matched the age to more accurately reflect the age mice were recorded (P37-42 and P77-82).

      (2) We corrected the attenuation range from 72-42 to 72-32 dB SPL to correctly reflect the 5 attenuations used in the protocol.

      (3) We corrected the number of channels shown in the voltage trace from 10 to 11 (Fig. S4-1a)

      (4) We corrected the number of neurons recorded in novice adolescent mice in the legend of Fig. 6 from 140 to 130 (Fig. 6b).

      (5) We removed redundant, or double brackets, commas, dots, and semi-colons in the figure legends.

      (6) We corrected the LME statistics Table 2.

      List of new figures and tables:

      (1) We added a new supplementary figure to accompany Figure 6. Specifically, Fig. S6-2, shows the interaction of the three measured discriminability properties (onset delay, duration of discriminability, and maximal discriminability) in novice compared to expert mice in the easy and hard task (Go compared to No Go). The figure compares the different auditory sub-regions (similar to Fig. S4-2). We show that the discriminability properties within different groups is not significantly different among the four different sub-regions.

      (2) Supplementary Table 5: We compared the firing properties in different auditory subregions in novice mice, and found (similar to expert mice) that the firing properties differ between adult and adolescent mice across the four different sub-regions.

      (3) Supplementary Table 6: We compared the firing properties between different subregions, separately for adolescent and adult novice mice. Similar to expert mice, we found that different auditory subregions differ in their auditory firing properties.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The authors largely addressed my suggestions.

      Comparing hit vs correct rejection trials in the population decoding analysis (L313-314): The authors acknowledge that comparing these two trial types conflates choice and stimulus decoding but I am not convinced that the changes to the manuscript text make this clear enough to the reader.

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have made additional revisions to clarify this, and other issues more explicitly, as follows:

      (1) We have expanded the explanation of how our population decoding analysis conflates stimulus and choice, and we acknowledge the limitations of this approach in the Abstract (L28), the Results section (L324-326, LL367-370) and the Discussion (LL516-519).

      (2) We replaced the analysis of impulsivity on the head-fixed task. Instead of analyzing all it is, we focus only on ITIs following FA trials (Fig. S3-1c,d). This is more consistent with the analysis in the Educage (Fig. S2-1), where we show that adolescents exhibit increased impulsivity after FA trials. We found a similar result for ITIs following FA trials in the head-fixed task.

      (3) To provide complementary insight, we now further justify our use of the Fisher separation metric alongside decoding accuracy in Figure 5, with a clearer rationale provided in LL343-345

      (4) We also clarified our reasoning for focusing on 62 dB SPL in the FRA-based analysis in LL400-403.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors study the influence of tasks on the representational geometry of the lPFC and auditory cortex (AC). In particular, they use two context-dependent tasks: a task with a hierarchical structure and a task with a flat structure, in which each context/stimulus maps to a specific response. Their primary finding is that the representational geometry in the lPFC, in contrast to AC, aligns with the optimal organization of the task. They conclude that the geometry of representations adapts, or is tailored, to the task in the lPFC, therefore supporting control processes.

      Strengths:

      (1) Dataset:<br /> The dataset is impressive and well-sampled. Having data from both tasks collected in the same subjects is a great property. If it is publicly available, it will be a significant contribution to the community.

      (2) Choice of methods:<br /> The choice of analyses are largely well-suited towards the questions at hand - cross-condition generalization, RSA + regression, in combination with ANOVAs, are well-suited to characterizing task representations.

      (3) I found some of their results, in particular, those presented in Figures 4 and 5, to be particularly compelling.

      (4) The correlation analysis with behavior is also a nice result.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Choice of ROIs:<br /> A strength of fMRI is its spatial coverage of the whole brain. In this study, however, the authors focus on only two ROIs: the lPFC and auditory cortex. Though I understand the justification for choosing lPFC from decades of research, the choice of AC as a control feels somewhat arbitrary - AC is known to have worse SNR in fMRI data, and limiting a 'control' to a single region seems arbitrary. For example, why not also include visual regions, given that the task also involves two visual features?

      (2) Construction of ROIs:<br /> The choice and construction of the ROIs feel a bit arbitrary, as the lPFC region was constructed out of 10 parcels from Schaefer, while the AC was constructed from a different methodology (neurosynth). Did both parcels have the same number of voxels/vertices? It would be helpful to include a visualization of these masks as a figure.

      (3) Task dimensionality:<br /> In some ways, the main findings - that representation dimensionality is tailored to the task - seem to obviously follow from the choice of two tasks, particularly from a normative modeling perspective. For example, the flat task is effectively a memorization task, and is incompressible in the sense that there are no heuristics to solve it. In contrast, the hierarchical task can have several strategies, an uncompressed (memorized) strategy, and a compressed strategy. This is analogous to other studies evaluating representations during 'rich' vs. 'lazy'/kernel learning in ANNs. However, it seems unlikely (if not impossible) to form a 'rich' representation in the flat task. Posed another way, the flat task will always necessarily have a higher dimensionality than the hierarchical task. Thus, is their hypothesis - that representational geometry is tailored to the task - actually falsifiable? I understand the authors posit alternative hypotheses, e.g., "a fully compressed global axis with no separation among individual stimulus inputs could support responding [in the flat task]" (p. 36). But is this a realistic outcome, for example, in the space of all possible computational models performing this task? I understand that directly addressing this comment is challenging (without additional data collection or modeling work), but perhaps some additional discussion around this would be helpful.

      (4) Related to the above:<br /> The authors have a section on p. 27: "Local structure of lPFC representational geometry of the flat task shows high separability with no evidence for abstraction" - I understand a generalization analysis can be done in the feature space, but in practice, the fact that the flat task doubles as a memorization task implies that there are no useful abstractions, so it seems to trivially follow that there would be no abstract representations. In fact, the use of task abstractions in the stimulus space would be detrimental to task performance here. I could understand the use of this analysis as a control, but the phrasing of this section seems to indicate that this is a surprising result.

      (5) Statistical inferences:<br /> Throughout the manuscript, the authors appear to conflate failure to reject the null with acceptance of the null. For example, p. 24: "However, unlike left lPFC, paired t-tests showed no reliable difference in the separability of the task-relevant features vs the orthogonal, task-irrelevant features... Therefore, the overall separability of pAC representations is not shaped by either task-relevance of task structure."

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, Bhandari, Keglovits, et al. explore the representational structure of task encoding in the lateral prefrontal cortex. Through an impressive fMRI data-collection effort, they compare and contrast neural representations across tasks with different high-level stimulus-response structures. They find that the lateral prefrontal cortex shows enhanced encoding of task-relevant information, but that most of these representations do not generalize across conditions (i.e., have low abstraction). This appears to be driven in part by the representation of task conditions being clustered by the higher-order task properties ('global' representations), with poor generalization across these clusters ('local' representations). Overall, this paper provides an interesting account of how task representations are encoded in the PFC.

      Strengths:

      (1) Impressive dataset, which may provide further opportunities for investigating prefrontal representations.

      (2) Clever task design, allowing the authors to confound several features within a complex paradigm.

      (3) Best-practice analysis for decoding, similarity analyses, and assessments of representational geometry.

      (4) Extensive analyses to quantify the structure of PFC task representations.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The paper would benefit from improved presentational clarity: more scaffolding of design and analysis decisions, clearer grounding to understand the high-level interpretations of the analyses (e.g., context, cluster, abstraction), and better visualizations of the key findings.

      (2) The paper would benefit from stronger theoretical motivation for the experimental design, as well as a refined discussion on the implications of these findings for theories of cognitive control.

    3. Author response:

      We thank the reviewers and editors for their careful and constructive assessment of our manuscript. We have provided a provisional response to the eLife assessment and the reviewer’s public comments below, addressing their main concerns and outlining our planned revisions that we believe will substantially strengthen our paper.  

      eLife Assessment

      This study presents a valuable finding on the representational structure of task encoding in the prefrontal cortex. The evidence supporting the claims of the authors is solid, representing an impressive data collection effort and best-practice fMRI analyses. However, at least including visual regions as a control and controlling for behavioral differences in the task in representation analyses would have strengthened the study. The work will be of interest to cognitive neuroscientists interested in the neural basis of cognitive control.

      We plan to address both specific methodological weaknesses mentioned in the assessment in our forthcoming revision. First, the revision will include analyses of an early visual cortex ROI as an additional control region, allowing us to test whether the primary auditory cortex findings generalize to the sensory cortex across input modalities. Preliminary results indicate that the early visual cortex ROI exhibits a similar pattern of results, with evidence for coding both task-relevant and task-irrelevant visual dimensions across both tasks, as well as the context dimension specifically in the hierarchy task. Second, we will include behavioral performance as a covariate for the relevant statistical comparison across tasks to mitigate concerns over performance-related confounds. In addition, we will include a set of control analyses that demonstrate that equating the amount of data for pattern analyses across the two tasks by subsampling from the hierarchy task, while reducing our overall power, does not appreciably alter our results. We note that our analyses of representational geometries relied only on neural data from correct trials and, in the first-level modelling of the fMRI data, already controlled for differences in trial-by-trial response times. Therefore, our analyses of decoding and representation similarity are not directly affected by differences in performance across the two tasks. Finally, we have provided clarifications regarding Reviewer 2’s questions about the size and construction of the regions of interest employed in the study, as well as about the language employed to discuss null results.  

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Bhandari and colleagues present tour-de-force analyses that compare the representational geometry in the lateral prefrontal cortex and primary auditory cortex between two complex cognitive control tasks, with one having a "flat" structure where subjects are asked to form rote memory of all the stimulus-action mappings in the task and one having a "hierarchical" task structure that allows clustering of task conditions and that renders certain stimulus dimensions irrelevant for choices. They discovered that the lPFC geometry is high-dimensional in nature in that it allows above-chance separation between different dichotomies of task conditions. The separability is significantly higher for task-relevant features than task-irrelevant ones. They also found task features that are represented in an "abstract" format (e.g., audio features), i.e., the neural representation generalizes across specific task conditions that share this variable. The neural patterns in lPFC are highly relevant for behaviors as they are correlated with subjects' reaction times and choices.

      Strengths:

      Typically, geometry in coding patterns is reflected in single-unit firings; this manuscript demonstrates that such geometry can be recovered using fMRI BOLD signals, which is both surprising and important. The tasks are well designed and powerful in revealing the differences in neural geometry, and analyses are all done in a rigorous way. I am thus very enthusiastic about this paper and identify no major issues.

      I am curious about the consequence of dimensionality collapse in lPFC. The authors propose a very interesting idea that separability is critical for cognitive control; indeed, separability is high for task-relevant information. What happens when task-relevant separation is low or task-irrelevant separation is high, and will this lead to behavioral errors? Maybe a difference score between the separability of task-relevant and taskirrelevant features is a signature of the strength of cognitive control?

      We appreciate the reviewers’ positive evaluation of our paper.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors show a difference between flat and hierarchical tasks, but the two tasks are different in accuracy, with the flat task having more errors. Will this difference in task difficulty/errors contribute to the task differences in results reported?

      To address the Reviewer’s concern about the difference in behavioural performance between the two tasks influencing our results, we will take several approaches. First, we will include behavioral performance as a covariate for the relevant statistical comparison across tasks. This should ensure that any differences we observe across tasks are over and above those that can be explained by the difference in behavioral performance. Second, we will include a set of decoding analyses that control for differences in performance across the tasks. We note that all our analyses of representational geometries relied on neural data from correct trials only. In addition, the first-level modelling of the fMRI data already controlled for trial-by-trial variability in response times. Therefore, our decoding and representation similarity analyses should not directly be affected by differences in performance across the two tasks. However, one possible issue with this approach is that the larger number of errors in the flat task means that less data was available for estimating multivoxel patterns in the flat task compared to the hierarchy task, resulting in differential power to detect decoding effects across the two tasks. We note that the on average, this difference was not substantial: on average, 21.7 runs were available per participant for the flat task, while 23.8 runs per participant were available for the hierarchy task. Moreover, rerunning our analyses with the number of runs equated for each participant does not meaningfully alter the pattern of results. These additional analyses will be included in the supplement in the forthcoming revised manuscript.  

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors study the influence of tasks on the representational geometry of the lPFC and auditory cortex (AC). In particular, they use two context-dependent tasks: a task with a hierarchical structure and a task with a flat structure, in which each context/stimulus maps to a specific response. Their primary finding is that the representational geometry in the lPFC, in contrast to AC, aligns with the optimal organization of the task. They conclude that the geometry of representations adapts, or is tailored, to the task in the lPFC, therefore supporting control processes.

      Strengths:

      (1) Dataset:

      The dataset is impressive and well-sampled. Having data from both tasks collected in the same subjects is a great property. If it is publicly available, it will be a significant contribution to the community.

      (2) Choice of methods:

      The choice of analyses are largely well-suited towards the questions at hand - crosscondition generalization, RSA + regression, in combination with ANOVAs, are well-suited to characterizing task representations.

      (3) I found some of their results, in particular, those presented in Figures 4 and 5, to be particularly compelling.

      (4) The correlation analysis with behavior is also a nice result.

      We thank the reviewer for noting the strengths of the paper. We respond to the weaknesses noted below. 

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Choice of ROIs:

      A strength of fMRI is its spatial coverage of the whole brain. In this study, however, the authors focus on only two ROIs: the lPFC and auditory cortex. Though I understand the justification for choosing lPFC from decades of research, the choice of AC as a control feels somewhat arbitrary - AC is known to have worse SNR in fMRI data, and limiting a 'control' to a single region seems arbitrary. For example, why not also include visual regions, given that the task also involves two visual features?

      We agree with the reviewer that the whole-brain fMRI data certainly provide ample opportunities to explore the nature of these representations across the brain. Our focus in this paper is squarely on the principles of coding and flexibility in the lPFC. We believe that a whole-brain exploration addresses a separate question that would be out of the scope of this study. To clarify, we are not arguing that the lPFC is the only region in the brain that employs the coding principles that our study brings to light. Our contention is only that lPFC employs these principles, and it differs at least from the primary sensory cortex. The questions of whether these principles generalize beyond lPFC (quite likely) and, if so, how broadly, are distinct from the ones addressed in the manuscript. We intend to follow up with another manuscript that addresses these questions.

      Nevertheless, given the focus of this paper, we agree that a second control region, which allows one to test if the primary auditory cortex findings generalize to the sensory cortex more broadly, would strengthen our claims. We will include an early visual cortex ROI in our forthcoming revision. Preliminary results indicate that the early visual cortex ROI shows a similar set of findings – with evidence for coding of task-relevant and taskirrelevant visual dimensions across both tasks, but also specifically the context dimension in the hierarchy task. These results will be detailed in the forthcoming revision

      (2) Construction of ROIs:

      The choice and construction of the ROIs feel a bit arbitrary, as the lPFC region was constructed out of 10 parcels from Schaefer, while the AC was constructed from a different methodology (neurosynth). Did both parcels have the same number of voxels/vertices? It would be helpful to include a visualization of these masks as a figure.

      We defined the lPFC ROIs by selecting Schaefer parcels in the frontal lobe that were previously mapped onto the Control A resting state network identified by Yeo et al. (2011). This network aligns with the multiple-demand network, which has also been identified in the macaque, where it includes the lPFC regions that abut the principal sulcus. Prior results from these regions in the monkey brain provide the scientific premise for our hypotheses. The two lPFC ROIs in each hemisphere were constructed out of 5 Schaefer parcels in each hemisphere. These parcels cluster into the same functional network and tend to behave similarly in univariate analyses. Given that our hypotheses do not distinguish between the different parcels, we elected to improve power by merging them into left and right dlPFC ROIs. 

      On the other hand, the same approach could not be used to identify the primary auditory cortex. As Yeo et al. noted in their paper, the 17 resting state networks they identify did not adequately parcellate somatomotor and auditory cortices into distinct networks, likely due to their proximity (see Fig 14 and related text in Yeo et al. (2011)). We therefore relied on a different approach to define the primary auditory cortex, using an association test in Neurosynth to obtain a map of regions associated with the term “primary auditory”. In the revised manuscript, we will also include a primary auditory cortex ROI, defined again using a term-based association test in Neurosynth.

      Our lPFC ROIs and pAC ROIs are of similar size. In the left hemisphere, the lPFC ROI (constructed from merging Schaefer parcels 128-thru-132) has, on average, 624.55 voxels. The left pAC ROI (defined with Neurosynth) has, on average, 628 voxels. In the right hemisphere, the lPFC ROI (constructed from merging Schaefer parcels 330-thru334), has 470.8 voxels on average. The right pAC ROI has, on average, 568 voxels. A table reporting the size of our parcels and ROIs was included in the supplement. In our forthcoming revision, we will additionally include a supplementary figure visualizing the ROI masks. 

      (3) Task dimensionality:

      In some ways, the main findings - that representation dimensionality is tailored to the task - seem to obviously follow from the choice of two tasks, particularly from a normative modeling perspective. For example, the flat task is effectively a memorization task, and is incompressible in the sense that there are no heuristics to solve it. In contrast, the hierarchical task can have several strategies, an uncompressed (memorized) strategy, and a compressed strategy. This is analogous to other studies evaluating representations during 'rich' vs. 'lazy'/kernel learning in ANNs. However, it seems unlikely (if not impossible) to form a 'rich' representation in the flat task. Posed another way, the flat task will always necessarily have a higher dimensionality than the hierarchical task. Thus, is their hypothesis - that representational geometry is tailored to the task - actually falsifiable? I understand the authors posit alternative hypotheses, e.g., "a fully compressed global axis with no separation among individual stimulus inputs could support responding [in the flat task]" (p. 36). But is this a realistic outcome, for example, in the space of all possible computational models performing this task? I understand that directly addressing this comment is challenging (without additional data collection or modeling work), but perhaps some additional discussion around this would be helpful.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment, which gives us a chance to clarify our argument.

      As noted by the reviewer, whether a network takes advantage of the compressibility of a task depends on its learning regime (i.e. rich vs lazy). One way to frame our question regarding the lPFC’s coding strategy, then, is to ask whether it operates in a rich or a lazy learning regime (which would predict, respectively, task-tailored vs task-agnostic representations). The reviewer’s concern is that the two task structures we employed are differentially compressible, and therefore, it is inevitable that we observe tailored representations and therefore, our hypotheses are not falsifiable.

      First, it is important to clarify the theoretical premise behind our design and how it relates logically to our hypotheses. Under a lazy learning regime, a network would encode highdimensional representations of both tasks, regardless of their compressibility. On the other hand, under a rich learning regime, representational dimensionality will likely be shaped by the tasks’ structure. If the two tasks differ in their compressibility, only in the rich learning regime would the network learn representations of different dimensionality. Therefore, observing representations with dimensionality tailored to the task structure rules out the possibility that the lPFC is operating in a lazy regime. Therefore, the hypotheses are certainly testable.

      The second point of clarification is that, contrary to the reviewer’s assertion, the flat task is, in fact, compressible – the task can be solved with a categorical representation of the response categories, with no sensitivity to the different specific stimuli within each category. Indeed, it is possible to train a simple, three-layer feedforward artificial neural network to perform the flat task perfectly with only 2 units in the hidden layer, demonstrating this compressibility. While we agree with the reviewer that in the space of all possible architectures one might consider the two tasks may differ in compressibility, particularly at the local levels, as we noted above, this does not imply that our hypotheses are not testable.

      Finally, as a third point of clarification, our focus in this paper is on understanding the nature of coding in the lPFC in particular. Arguments based on a normative modelling perspective properly apply to the representations learned by an agent (such as an ANN or a human) as a whole. In a minimal feedforward ANN with a single hidden layer trained in a regime which encourages compression (i.e. a rich learning regime), it would indeed be the case that the representational dimensionality in that hidden layer would be higher for less compressible tasks. However, when applied to humans, such an argument applies to the brain as a whole rather than to an individual region of the brain like the lPFC. As such, it is less straightforward to predict how a single region might represent a task without additional information about the region’s inputs, outputs and broader position in a network. Even for a highly compressible task, a particular brain region may nevertheless be sensitive to all task dimensions. Conversely, even when a task is not compressible, a particular population within the brain may be invariant to some task features. For example, the primary auditory cortex is expected to be invariant to visual task dimensions.

      Therefore, how a task is represented in the lPFC in particular (as opposed to the whole brain) depends on its computational function and coding principles, which remain debated. For instance, as some accounts (such as the guided activation theory) posit, if the primary function of the lPFC is to encode ‘context’ and shape downstream processing based on context, we might only expect to see the abstract coding of the auditory context in the hierarchy task (and, perhaps, the response categories across both tasks as they encode the ’context’ for the lower-level response decision), while being invariant to lowerlevel features of the input. In our paper, we specifically contrast two accounts of lPFC coding that have emerged in the literature – one positing that the lPFC learns a representation tailored to the structure of the task, and another that the lPFC encodes a high-dimensional representation that privileges sensitivity to many task features and their non-linear mixture at the cost of generalization. Regardless of the compressibility of the tasks in question, how the lPFC encodes the two tasks is an empirical question.

      In our forthcoming revision, we will clarify these points in the discussion. We will also include the results of neural network simulations alluded to above.

      (4) Related to the above:

      The authors have a section on p. 27: "Local structure of lPFC representational geometry of the flat task shows high separability with no evidence for abstraction" - I understand a generalization analysis can be done in the feature space, but in practice, the fact that the flat task doubles as a memorization task implies that there are no useful abstractions, so it seems to trivially follow that there would be no abstract representations. In fact, the use of task abstractions in the stimulus space would be detrimental to task performance here. I could understand the use of this analysis as a control, but the phrasing of this section seems to indicate that this is a surprising result.

      As explained above, there is no need for high local separability in the flat task. The lPFC could have completely abstracted over the individual trial-types that contributed to each response category, encoding only the response categories. Indeed, as also noted above, it is possible to train a simple, three-layer feedforward artificial neural network to perform the flat task perfectly with only 2 units in the hidden layer. The two hidden layer units code for each of the two response categories. 

      (5) Statistical inferences:

      Throughout the manuscript, the authors appear to conflate failure to reject the null with acceptance of the null. For example, p. 24: "However, unlike left lPFC, paired t-tests showed no reliable difference in the separability of the task-relevant features vs the orthogonal, task-irrelevant features... Therefore, the overall separability of pAC representations is not shaped by either task-relevance of task structure."

      We thank the reviewer for pointing these out. These sentences will be corrected in the revision. For instance, the sentence above will be modified to “Therefore, we find no evidence that the overall separability of pAC representations is shaped by either taskrelevance or task structure.”

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, Bhandari, Keglovits, et al. explore the representational structure of task encoding in the lateral prefrontal cortex. Through an impressive fMRI data-collection effort, they compare and contrast neural representations across tasks with different highlevel stimulus-response structures. They find that the lateral prefrontal cortex shows enhanced encoding of task-relevant information, but that most of these representations do not generalize across conditions (i.e., have low abstraction). This appears to be driven in part by the representation of task conditions being clustered by the higher-order task properties ('global' representations), with poor generalization across these clusters ('local' representations). Overall, this paper provides an interesting account of how task representations are encoded in the PFC.

      Strengths:

      (1) Impressive dataset, which may provide further opportunities for investigating prefrontal representations.

      (2) Clever task design, allowing the authors to confound several features within a complex paradigm.

      (3) Best-practice analysis for decoding, similarity analyses, and assessments of representational geometry.

      (4) Extensive analyses to quantify the structure of PFC task representations.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The paper would benefit from improved presentational clarity: more scaffolding of design and analysis decisions, clearer grounding to understand the high-level interpretations of the analyses (e.g., context, cluster, abstraction), and better visualizations of the key findings.

      (2) The paper would benefit from stronger theoretical motivation for the experimental design, as well as a refined discussion on the implications of these findings for theories of cognitive control.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting the strengths of our paper and their feedback on the writing. We have reviewed these helpful suggestions with an eye to which we may implement in our revision to improve clarity. Our forthcoming revision will 1) provide clearer scaffolding to aid the reader in understanding our design, analyses and our interpretation of the results 2) incorporate the MDS-based visualization of the representational geometries, which is currently presented in the Supplement, as a figure panel in the main text, 3) provide a justification for the particular task structures we picked in the introduction and 4) incorporate a new paragraph in the Discussion section to highlight the implications of our findings for cognitive control.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      This paper describes technically-impressive measurements of calcium signals near synaptic ribbons in goldfish bipolar cells. The data presented provides high spatial and temporal resolution information about calcium concentrations along the ribbon at various distances from the site of entry at the plasma membrane. This is important information. Important gaps in the data presented mean that the evidence for the main conclusions is currently inadequate. 

      Strengths 

      The technical aspects of the measurements are impressive. The authors use calcium indicators bound to the ribbon and high speed line scans to resolve changes with a spatial resolution of ~250 nm and temporal resolution of less than 10 ms. These spatial and temporal scales are much closer to those relevant for vesicle release than previous measurements. 

      The use of calcium indicators with very different affinities and of different intracellular calcium buffers helps provide confirmation of key results. 

      Thank you very much for this positive evaluation of our work.

      Weaknesses 

      Multiple key points of the paper lack a statistical test or summary data from populations of cells. For example, the text states that the proximal and distal calcium kinetics in Figure 2A differ. This is not clear from the inset to Figure 2A - where the traces look like scaled versions of each other. Values for time to half-maximal peak fluorescence are given for one example cell but no statistics or summary are provided. Figure 8 shows examples from one cell with no summary data. This issue comes up in other places as well. 

      Thank you for this fair and valuable feedback. Following also the suggestion by the Editor, we have now removed the rise-time kinetic fitting results from the manuscript and only retain the bi-exponential decay time constant values. Further, we explicitly detail the issues with kinetic fitting, and state that the precise quantitative conclusions should not be drawn from the differences in kinetic parameters (pages 7 and 2728). 

      We have included the results of paired-t-tests to compare the amplitudes of proximal vs. distal calcium signals shown in Fig. 2A & B, Fig. 3C & D, Fig. 4C & D, Fig. 5A-D, and Fig. 8E&F. Because proximal and distal calcium signals were obtained from the same ribbons within 500-nm distances, as the Reviewer pointed out, “the traces look like scaled versions of each other”. For experiments where we make comparisons across cells or different calcium indicators, as shown in Fig. 3E & F, Fig.5E, and Fig. 8B&C, we have included the results of an unpaired t-test. We have also included the t-test statistics information in the respective figure legends in the revised version.

      In Figure 8, we have shown example fluorescence traces from two different cells at the bottom of the A panel, and example traces from different ribbons of RBC a in the D, and the summary data is described in B-C and E-F, with statistics provided in the figure legends.

      The rise time measurements in Figure 2 are very different for low and high affinity indicators, but no explanation is given for this difference. Similarly, the measurements of peak calcium concentration in Figure 4 are very different with the two indicators. That might suggest that the high affinity indicator is strongly saturated, which raises concerns about whether that is impacting the kinetic measurements. 

      Yes, we do believe that the high-affinity indicator is partially saturated, and therefore, the measurement with the low-affinity indicator dye is a more accurate reflection of the measured Ca<sup>2+</sup> signal. We now state this more explicitly in the text. Further, we note that the rise time values are no longer listed due to lack of statistical significance for such comparisons, as noted above.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      The study introduces new tools for measuring intracellular Ca2+ concentration gradients around retinal rod bipolar cell (rbc) synaptic ribbons. This is done by comparing the Ca2+ profiles measured with mobile Ca2+ indicator dyes versus ribbon-tethered (immobile) Ca2+ indicator dyes. The Ca2+ imaging results provide a straightforward demonstration of Ca2+ gradients around the ribbon and validate their experimental strategy. This experimental work is complemented by a coherent, open-source, computational model that successfully describes changes in Ca2+ domains as a function of Ca2+ buffering. In addition, the authors try to demonstrate that there is heterogeneity among synaptic ribbons within an individual rbc terminal. 

      Strengths: 

      The study introduces a new set of tools for estimating Ca2+ concentration gradients at ribbon AZs, and the experimental results are accompanied by an open-source, computational model that nicely describes Ca2+ buffering at the rbc synaptic ribbon. In addition, the dissociated retinal preparation remains a valuable approach for studying ribbon synapses. Lastly, excellent EM. 

      Thank you very much for this positive evaluation of our work.

      Comments on revisions: 

      Specific minor comments: 

      (1) Rewrite the final sentence of the Abstract. It is difficult to understand. 

      Thank you for pointing that out. We have updated the final sentence of the Abstract.

      (2) Add a definition in the Introduction (and revisit in the Discussion) that delineates between micro- and nano-domain. A practical approach would be to round up and round down. If you round up from 0.6 um, then it is microdomain which means ~ 1 um or higher. Likewise, round down from 0.3 um to nanodomain? If you are using confocal, or even STED, the resolution for Ca imaging will be in the 100 to 300 nm range. The point of your study is that your new immobile Ca2-ribbon indicator may actually be operating on a tens of nm scale: nanophysiology. The Results are clearly written in a way that acknowledges this point but maybe make such a "definition" comment in the intro/discussion in order to: 1) demonstrate the power of the new Ca2+ indicator to resolve signals at the base of the ribbon (effectively nano), and 2) (Discussion) to acknowledge that some are achieving nanoscopic resolution (50 to 100nm?) with light microscopy (as you ref'd Neef et al., 2018 Nat Comm).  

      Thank you for the valuable comments. We have now provided this information in the introduction and discussion.  

      (3) Suggested reference: Grabner et al. 2022 (Sci Adv, Supp video 13, and Fig S5). Here rod Cav channels are shown to be expressed on both sides the ribbon, at its base, and they are within nanometers from other AZ proteins. This agrees with the conclusions from your imaging work.  

      Thank you for the valuable suggestion. We have now provided this information in the introduction and discussion.

      (4) In the Discussion, add a little more context to what is known about synaptic transmission in the outer and inner retina.. First, state that the postsynaptic receptors (for example: mGluR6-OnBCs vs KARs-OffBCs, vs. AMPAR-HCs), and possibly the synaptic cleft (ground squirrel), are known to have a significant impact on signaling in the outer retina. In the inner retina, there are many more unknowns. For example, when I think of the pioneering Palmer JPhysio study, which you sight, I think of NMDAR vs AMPAR, and uncertainty in what type postsynaptic cell was patched (GC or AC....). Once you have informed the reader that the postsynapse is known to have a significant impact on signaling, then promote your experimental work that addresses presynaptic processes: "...the new tool and results allow us to explore release heterogeneity, ribbon by ribbon in dissociated preps, which we eventually plan to use at ribbon synapses within slices......to better understand how the presynapse shapes signaling......". 

      Thank you for the valuable comments. We have now provided this information in the introduction and discussion.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In this study, the authors have developed a new Ca indicator conjugated to the peptide, which likely recognizes synaptic ribbons and have measured microdomain Ca near synaptic ribbons at retinal bipolar cells. This interesting approach allows one to measure Ca close to transmitter release sites, which may be relevant for synaptic vesicle fusion and replenishment. Though microdomain Ca at the active zone of ribbon synapses has been measured by Hudspeth and Moser, the new study uses the peptide recognizing synaptic ribbons, potentially measuring the Ca concentration relatively proximal to the release sites. 

      Strengths: 

      The study is, in principle, technically well done, and the peptide approach is technically interesting, which allows one to image Ca near the particular protein complexes. The approach is potentially applicable to other types of imaging. 

      Thank you very much for this appreciation.

      Weaknesses: 

      Peptides may not be entirely specific, and genetic approach tagging particular active zone proteins with fluorescent Ca indicator proteins may well be more specific. Although the authors are aware of this and the peptide approach is generally used for ribbon synapses, the authors should be aware of this, when interpreting the results. 

      We acknowledge the reviewer’s point and believe the peptides and genetic approaches to measure local calcium signals have their merits, each with separate advantages and disadvantages.  

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      The revisions helped with some concerns about the original paper, but some issues were not adequately addressed. I have left two primary concerns in my public review. To summarize those: 

      The difference in kinetics of proximal and distal locations is emphasized and quantified in the paper, but the quantification consists of a fit to the average responses. This does not give an idea of whether the difference observed is significant or not. Without an estimate of the error across measurements the difference in kinetic quoted is not interpretable. 

      Thank you for this feedback. Since the kinetics information is a minor part of the manuscript, we have followed the Editor’s advice to significantly tone down the comparison of kinetic fit parameters (completely removing the rise-time comparisons), in order to put more focus on the better-documented conclusions. We also note that we did establish statistical significance of the differences in fluorescence signal amplitudes. 

      Somewhat relatedly, the difference in amplitude and kinetics of the calcium signals measured with low and high affinity indicators is quite concerning. The authors added one sentence stating that the high affinity indicator might be saturated. This is not adequate. Should we distrust the measurements using the high affinity indicator? The differences between the results using the low and high affinity indicators is in some cases large - e.g. larger than the differences cited as a key result between distal and proximal locations. This issue needs to be dealt with directly in the paper. 

      Thank you for this feedback. Yes, the measurements from high-affinity indicators cannot report the Ca2+ as accurately as low-affinity indicators. However, the value of HA indicators is in their ability to detect lowamplitude signals that lower-affinity indicators may miss due to lower signal-to-noise resolution.  We added a sentence on page 12 to further stress this point.

      Related to the point about statistics, it is not clear how to related the horizontal lines in Figure 8 to the actual measurements. It is critical for the evaluation of the conclusions from that figure to understand what is plotted and what the error bars are on the plotted data. 

      We apologize for the earlier ambiguity in Fig. 8. In this figure, we first compare proximal (panel B) and distal (panel C) calcium signals across several RBCs, labeled RBC-a through RBC-d. Each RBC contains multiple ribbons, and for each cell, we present the average calcium signals from multiple ribbons using box plots in panels B and C. In these box plots, the horizontal lines represent the average calcium signal for each cell, while the size of the error bars reflects the variability in proximal and distal calcium signals among the ribbons within that RBC.

      For example, RBC-a had five identifiable ribbons. In panels D–F, we use RBC-a to illustrate the variability in calcium signals across individual ribbons. Specifically, we distinguished proximal and distal calcium signals from five ribbons (ribbons 1–5) within RBC-a. When feasible, we acquired multiple x–t line scans at a single ribbon, shown now as individual data points, to assess variability in calcium signals recorded from the same ribbon.

      The box plots in panels E and F display the average calcium signal (horizontal lines) for each ribbon, based on multiple recordings. These plots demonstrate considerable variability between ribbons of RBC-a. Importantly, the lack of or minimal error bars for repeated measurements at the same ribbon indicates that the proximal and distal calcium signals are consistent within a ribbon. These findings emphasize that the observed variability among ribbons and among cells reflects true biological heterogeneity in local calcium domains, rather than experimental noise.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents a framework for a multilevel agent-based model of the drosophila larva, using a simplified larval body and locomotor equations coupled to oscillators and sensory input. The model itself is built upon significant existing literature, particularly Wystrach, Lagogiannis, and Webb 2016 and Jürgensen et al. 2024. The aim is to generate an easily configurable, well-documented platform for organism-scale behavioral simulation in specific experiments. The authors demonstrate qualitative similarity between in vivo behavioral experiments to calibrated models.

      Strengths:

      The goal is excellent - a system to rapidly run computational experiments that align naturally with behavioral experiments would be well-suited to develop intuitions and cut through hypotheses. The authors provide quantitative descriptions that show that the best-fit parameters in their models produce results that agree with several properties of larval locomotion.

      The description of model calibration in the appendix is clear and explains several aspects of the model better than the main text.

      In addition, the code is well-organized using contemporary Python tooling and the documentation is nicely in progress (although it remains incomplete). However, see notes for difficulties with installation.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) As presented here the modeling itself is described in an unclear fashion and without a particular scientific question. The majority of the effort appears to be calibrating modest extensions of existing models and applying them to very simple experiments. This could be an effective first part of a paper on the software tool, but the paper needs to point to a scientific question or, if it is a tool paper, a gap in the current state of modeling tools needed to address scientific goals. While the manuscript has a good overview of larval behavioral papers, the discussion of modeling is more of an afterthought. However, the paper is a modeling paper and the contribution is to modeling and particularly with this work's minor adaptions of existing models, it is unclear what the principle contribution is intended to be.

      (2) While the models presented do qualitatively agree with experimental data in specific situations, there is no effort to challenge the model assumptions or compare them to alternative models. Simply because the data is consistent in a small number of simple experiments does not mean that the models are correct. Moreover, given the highly empirical nature of the modeling, I wonder what results are largely the model putting out what was put in, particularly with regards to kinematic results like frequency and body length or the effect of learning simply changing the sensory gain constant. It is difficult to imagine how at this level of empirical modeling, it would appear quite difficult to integrate the type of cell-type-specific perturbation or functional observation that is common in larval experiments.

      (3) The central framing of a "layered control architecture" does not have a significant impact on the work presented here and the paper would do better with less emphasis on it. Given the limited empirical models, there are only so many parameters where different components can influence one another, and as best as I can tell from the paper there is only chemotaxis and modulation of a chemotactic gain constant that are incorporated so far. However, since these are empirical functions it says little about how the layers are actually controlled by the nervous system - indeed, the larval nervous system appears to have many levels of local and long-range module of circuits at both the sensory and motor layers. It is not clear how this aspect would contribute beyond the well-appreciated concept of a relatively finite set of behavioral primitives in an insect brain, particularly for the fly larva. What would be a contradictory model and how would the authors differentiate between that and the one they currently propose? If focusing only on olfactory learning and chemotaxis, how does the current framing add to the existing understanding?

      (4) The paper uses experimental data to calibrate the models, however, the experiments are not described at all in the text.

    2. Author response:

      We thank all three anonymous reviewers for their thoughtful evaluations of our manuscript and for recognizing the conceptual advance in combining agent-based behavioral simulations with systems neuroscience models. We are especially encouraged by the acknowledgement of the framework’s potential to support simulation of neural control of individual animal behavior in realistic sensory environments.

      Below, we respond to each reviewer’s public comments in turn. Throughout, we have aimed to clarify our rationale for modeling choices, acknowledge limitations, and outline concrete steps for improvement in the revised manuscript.

      Furthermore, the call for a better description of the model implementation as voiced by all three reviewers and additional requests from community members has prompted us to formulate a separate technically detailed description of the publicly available larvaworld software package as well as of the readily implemented models in form of a preprint paper (Sakagiannis et al., 2025, bioRxiv, DOI: https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.06.15.659765).

      Reviewer #1:

      We are happy to read that this reviewer considers the proposed behavioral architecture ‘a significant step forward in the field’, and that she/he recognizes the strengths of our work in the modular and hierarchical approach that provides connections to influential theories of motor control in the brain, in the experimental evidence it is based on, and in the valuable abstractions that we have chosen for the larval behavioral modeling.

      The reviewer raises important points about the simplifications we have made, both conceptually and in the specific implementation of larval behaviors. Our main goal in this study is to introduce a conceptual framework that integrates agent-based modeling with systems neuroscience models in a modular fashion. To serve this purpose, we aimed for a minimal yet representative implementation at the motor layer of the architecture, calibrated to larval locomotion kinematics. This choice enables efficient simulation while allowing us to test top-down modulation and adaptive mechanisms in higher layers without the computational overhead of a full neuromechanical model. In addition to chemotaxis, we have recently used this simplified approach to model thermotaxis in larvae (Kafle et al., 2025, iScience, DOI: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.isci.2025.112809).

      The reviewer notes the absence of explicit segmental neuromuscular control or central pattern generators (CPGs). We deliberately abstracted from these mechanisms, representing the larval body as two segments with basic kinematic control, to focus on reproducing overall locomotor patterns. This bisegmental simplification, which we illustrate in Supplemental Video “Bisegmental larva-body simplification”, retains the behavioral features relevant to our current aims. However, the modular structure of the framework means that more detailed neuromechanical models—incorporating CPG dynamics or connectome-derived circuit models—can be integrated in future work without altering the architecture as a whole.

      We fully agree that real neural circuits are more complex than a strict subsumption architecture implies. In the Drosophila larva, there is clear evidence for ascending sensory feedback from the motor periphery to premotor and higher brain circuits, as well as neuromodulatory influences. These add layers of complexity beyond the predominantly descending control in our present model. At the same time, both larval and adult connectome data show that across-level descending and ascending connections are sparse compared to the dense within-layer connectivity. We see value in casting our model as a hierarchical control system precisely to make the strengths and limitations of such an abstraction explicit. The revised manuscript will include further discussion of these points.

      In summary, our design choices reflect a trade-off: by limiting the biological detail in the lower layers, we gain computational efficiency and maintain a clear modular structure that can host models at different levels of abstraction. This ensures that the architecture remains both a tool for immediate behavioral simulation and a scaffold for integrating richer neural and biomechanical models as they become available.

      Reviewer #2:

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the novelty of our locomotory model, particularly the implementation of peristaltic strides based on our new analyses of empirical larval tracks, and for providing constructive feedback that will help us improve the manuscript.

      The reviewer highlights the need for clearer explanations of the chemotaxis and odor preference modules. We expand these sections in the revised manuscript with more explicit descriptions of model structure, parameterization, and calibration. As mentioned above, we have also prepared a separate preprint dedicated to the larvaworld Python package, which contains detailed implementation notes and hands-on tutorials that allow users to adapt or extend individual modules.

      Regarding the comparison to empirical behavior in chemotaxis, our present analysis is indeed primarily qualitative. However, we would like to emphasize that the temporal profile of odor concentration at the larval head in our simulations matches that measured in Gomez-Marin et al. (Nature Comm., 2011, DOI: https://doi.org/10.1038/ncomms1455) using only one additional free parameter, while all parameters of the basic locomotory model had been fitted to a separate exploration dataset before and were kept fixed in the chemotaxis experiments. In addition to the simulation of chemotaxis in the present paper, we recently used larvaworld in a practical model application to estimate a species-specific parameter of thermotaxis from experiments across different drosophilids (Kafle et al., 2025, iScience, DOI: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.isci.2025.112809).

      The preference index in our simulations was computed using the same definition as in the established experimental group assay for larval memory retention, enabling a direct quantitative comparison between simulated and empirical results. Variability in the simulated outcomes arose naturally from inter-individual differences in body length and locomotory parameters, derived from real larval measurements, as well as from the random initial orientation of each individual in the arena. These factors contributed to variation in individual tracks and ultimately produced preference index values that closely matched those observed experimentally. In the revised manuscript, we also discuss handedness, as highlighted by the reviewer, as another meaningful expression of inter-individual variability in Drosophila larvae and insects more generally.

      Finally, we acknowledge the reviewer’s concern about the scalability and broader applicability of the model. While the present paper focuses on three specific behavioral paradigms (exploration, chemotaxis, odor preference), the modular structure of the architecture is designed for flexibility: modules at any layer can be exchanged for more detailed or alternative implementations, and new sensory modalities or behaviors can be integrated without redesigning the system. The larvaworld package, associated codebase, and documentation are openly available to encourage adoption and adaptation by the larval research community.

      Reviewer #3:

      This public review provides an excellent account of our central aim to build an easily configurable, well-documented platform for organism-scale behavioral simulation and we are happy to read that the reviewer considers this an excellent goal.

      We thank the reviewer for her/his account of our well-organized code using contemporary Python tooling. We are currently further improving code readability and code documentation, and we will release a new version of the larvaworld Python package. We further agree with the reviewer’s assessment that understanding the model calibration currently requires reading of the appendix. For the revised manuscript we thus aim at improving our description of all calibration and modeling steps along the way. We will also make sure to improve the description of the experimental datasets used for calibration.

      We recognize that our description of the paper’s scientific contribution could be clearer. In revision, we will sharpen the Introduction and Discussion to highlight our main contributions:

      (1) Promoting a shift from isolated neural circuit modeling to integrated agent-based simulations in realistic environments.

      (2) Proposing the layered behavioral architecture, adopting the subsumption paradigm for modular integration.

      (3) Providing the larvaworld software as a ready-to-use, extensible modeling platform.

      (4) Implementing an empirically calibrated locomotory model and demonstrating its integration with navigation and learning modules in replicated behavioral paradigms.

      We agree with the reviewer that the next challenge is to integrate the empirically based behavioral simulations presented here with functional brain models capable of reproducing or predicting experimental findings at the level of cellular neurophysiology, including the effects of cell-type-specific manipulations such as gene knock-down or optogenetic activation/inhibition. However, based on our experience with systems-level modeling, we deliberately invested in behavioral simulation because functional models of the nervous system—including our own—often lack translation into simulated agent behavior. In many cases, model output is limited to one or more variables that can at best be interpreted as a behavioral bias, and most often represents an “average animal” that fails to capture inter-individual differences. By linking our spiking mushroom body model to behavioral simulations in a group of individual agents during memory retention tests (Figure 6C,D), we were able to achieve a first successful direct comparison between simulated and experimental behavior metrics—in this case, the behavioral preference index reported in Jürgensen et al. (iScience, 2024, DOI: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.isci.2023.108640).

      Finally, we reiterate that the layered behavioral architecture is designed to promote a modular modeling paradigm. Our adoption of a subsumption architecture does not conflict with the concept of behavioral primitives; on the contrary, the notion that such primitives follow (semi-)autonomous motor programs and can be combined into more complex behaviors was the starting point for our implementation of the architecture in the fly larva. In our view, a genuinely contradictory paradigm for neural control of behavior would require a non-modular, strictly non-hierarchical organization of the nervous system and, by extension, of behavioral control.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review)

      Comment 

      Koonce et al. have generated a web-based visualization tool for exploring C. elegans neuronal morphology, contact area between neurons, and synaptic connectivity data. Here, the authors integrate volumetric segmentation of neurons and visualization of contact area patterns of individual neurons generated from Diffusion Condensation and C-PHATE embedding based on previous work from adult volumetric electron microscopy (vEM) data, extended to available vEM data for earlier developmental stages, which effectively summarizes modularity within the collated C. elegans contactomes to date. Overall, NeuroSC's relative ease of use for generating visualizations, its ability to quickly toggle between developmental stages, and its integration of a concise visualization of individual neurons' contact patterns strengthen its utility.

      We thank that reviewer for this positive assessment of our work.

      Comment

      NeuroSC provides an accessible and convenient platform. However, many of the characteristics of NeuroSC overlap with that of an existing tool for visualizing connectomics data, Neuroglancer, which is a widely-used and shared platform with data from other organisms. The authors do not make clear their motivation for generating this new tool rather than building on a system that has already collated previous connectomics data. Although the field will benefit from any tool that collates connectomics data and makes it more accessible and user-friendly, such a tool is only useful if it is kept up-to-date, and if data formatting for submitting electron microscopy data to be added to the tool is made clear. It is unclear from this manuscript whether NeuroSC will be updated with recently published and future C. elegans connectomes, or how additional datasets can be submitted to be added in the future.

      We have added new language to more explicitly state the motivations for developing NeuroSC (Introduction, lines 98-111, and discussion lines 375-384). In a new discussion section, we also include comparisons of the features of NeuroSC with other existing tools, like Neuroglancer and Webknossos, (lines 393-417).

      Briefly, the functional features of NeuroSC are substantially different (and do not exist) in other web-based tools for navigating EM datasets, including NeuroGlancer. This is because the intended use of NeuroSC is substantially different (and purposefully synergistic) to the intended use, and tools available, in NeuroGlancer. 

      NeuroGlancer is a versatile tool designed primarily for web-based visualizations and sharing of large EM datasets. NeuroSC was not designed to enable this type of access to the primary EM data (purposefully done because these features were already available through tools like NeuroGlancer). 

      Instead, the explicit goal of NeuroSC is to provide a platform specifically optimized for examining neuronal relationships across connectomic datasets. NeuroSC builds on the segmentations emerging from programs like NeuroGlancer, but the tools are tailored to explore relationships such as contact profiles in the context of neuronal morphologies and synaptic positions, and across datasets that represent different animals or different developmental stages. 

      To achieve this, all datasets in NeuroSC were optimized to facilitate comparisons across different connectomes of segmented neuronal features, including: 1) alignment of the neurons that are compared upon the display of the segmentations; 2) synchronization of the 3D windows; 3) implementation of a ‘universal color code’ across datasets for each neuron and relationship for easy visual comparisons; 4) use of the specific neuronal names to label instances of the same cells across all available datasets. The use of precise neuronal names among separate data sets allows integration of these objects with other catalogued datasets, including genomic and neuronal activity profiles.

      The formatting and display of the datasets used in NeuroSC was accompanied by the development of new tools including: 1) Rendering of the contact profiles of all neurons in the context of the morphology of the cell and the synapses and 2) C-PHATE diagrams to inspect multidimensional relationship hierarchies based on these contact profiles. In NeuroSC, C-PHATEs can be navigated and compared across multiple stages of development while visualizing neuronal reconstructions, allowing users to compare neuronal relationships across individual datasets.

      We agree with the reviewer that these tools are most useful when integrated. With that intention in mind, we designed NeuroSC as a series of modular, open-source tools that could be integrated into other programs, including Neuroglancer. In that sense our intent was not to produce another free-standing tool, but a set of tools that, if useful, could be integrated to other existing web-based connectomic resources to enhance the user experience of navigating complex EM datasets and draw biological meaning from the relationships between the neurons. Additionally, we intentionally designed NeuroSC to enable the ability to integrate new methods of understanding neuron relationships as they arise. We have dedicated a more detailed section to the discussion (lines 369- 417) to better convey this intention and directly address the unique abilities of NeuroSC as a complementary tool to the powerful existing tools, including Neuroglancer.

      Comment

      The interface for visualizing contacts and synapses would be improved with better user access to the quantitative underlying data. When contact areas or synapses are added to the viewer, adding statistics on the magnitude of the contact area, the number of synapses, and the rank of these values among the neuron's top connections, would make the viewer more useful for hypothesis generation. Furthermore, synapses are currently listed individually, with names that are not very legible to the web user. Grouping them by pre- and postsynaptic neurons and linking these groups across developmental stages would also be an improvement.

      [what do they even mean by linking?]

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful comment and have implemented several improvements to address these suggestions. Specifically, we have added new features to enhance user access to quantitative data within the NeuroDevSCAN viewer:

      Cell, Patch, and Synapse Statistics: Users can now see a statistics panel when clicking on a rendered neuron, contact patch, or a synapse. These panels provide the following information, respectively, and are highlighted in lines 303-315):

      Cell Stats: Click on a cell rendering to show cell stats which displays the total volume and surface area of the selected neuron within the defined neuropil area of our datasets (see Methods). 

      Contact Stats: Click on a patch rendering to show ‘contact stats’. This pop up displays quantifications of the selected contact relationship. Rank compares the summed surface area of contacts ("patches") between these two neurons relative to all other contact relationships for the primary neuron for the cell and the whole nerve ring. A rank of 1, for example, means this neuron pair shares the largest contact surface area of the examined relationship. “Total surface area” is displayed in nanometers, and is the summed surface area of all patches of this identity. Contact percentages are presented in two ways: (1) as the proportion of the primary cell's total surface area occupied by the contact in question, and (2) as the proportion of the total surface area of the nerve ring occupied by that same contact. (Showcased in figure S5). 

      Synapse Stats: A click on a synapse rendering now shows ‘synapse stats’, which displays the number of synapses of the selected identity within the primary neuron, including any polyadic synapse combinations involving the primary neurons. (Showcased in figure S7).

      (1) Grouping and Readability Improvements: While individual synapses are still visualized, their display has been improved for legibility. We have condensed the lengthy naming scheme to improve clarity and codified the synapse type by using superscript letters C, E, U to represent chemical, electrical and undefined synapses, respectively. This is explained and shown in figure S7, we added arrows to indicate the directionality of presumed information flow at each synapse. 

      (2) Developmental Linkage: We can link objects across datasets via cellular identity, but each synapse in the dataset does not yet have an identity attributed to its spatial coordinates, preventing us from linking specific synapses across development beyond their connectivity (ie, that a given synapses connects cell X to cell Y, for instance), also addressed in R1.11.  

      Together, these improvements substantially enhance the utility of the viewer for hypothesis generation by making key quantitative data readily accessible.

      Comment

      While the DC/C-PHATE visualizations are a useful tool for the user, it is difficult to understand when grouping or splitting of cell contact patterns is biologically significant. DC is a deterministic algorithm applied to a contactome from a single organism, and the authors do not provide quantitative metrics of distances between individual neurons or a number of DC iterations on the C-PHATE plot, nor is the selection process for the threshold for DC described in this manuscript. In the application of DC/C-PHATE to larval stage nerve ring strata organization shown by the authors, qualitative observations of C-PHATE plots colored based on adult data seem to be the only evidence shown for persistent strata during development (Figure 3) or changing architectural motifs across stages (Figure 4). Quantitation of differences in neuron position within the DC hierarchy, or differences in modularity across stages, is needed to support these conclusions. Furthermore, illustrating the quantitative differences in C-PHATE plots used to make these conclusions will provide a more instructive guide for users of NeuroSC in generating future hypotheses.

      There are several ways to visualize DC outputs, and one way to quantitatively compare DC clustering events of neurons is via Sankey diagrams. To make the inclusion of these resources more clear, we have highlighted them in lines 175-178 (Supplemental Tables 3-6). ‘DC outputs for each strata across animals can also be inspected using Sankey diagrams (Supplemental Tables 3-6). These spreadsheets detail the neuron members at each iteration of DC, allowing the user to derive quantitative comparisons of clustering events.’

      As the reviewer points out, DC is a deterministic algorithm that will iteratively cluster neurons based on the similarity of their contact profiles. To better explain the selection process for the threshold, the number of DC iterations and the quantitative metrics between the neurons, we have added new text in the Diffusion Condensation methods section.  Briefly:

      Number of DC iterations: During diffusion Condensation (DC) we track the modularity of the resulting clusters at each iteration and select the iteration with the highest modularity to define the clusters that represent the strata  (Moyle et al., 2021), (Brugnone et al., 2019). Mathematically, modularity is calculated by comparing the actual number of edges within clusters to the expected number of such edges in a randomized network with the same degree distribution (Newman et al., 2006). A higher modularity value implies that nodes within the same cluster are more densely connected to each other than to nodes in other clusters. We now better explain this in lines 562-567.

      Threshold for merging points: The threshold (epsilon) used to merge data points in each iteration is set as a small fraction of the spatial extent of the data: for each coordinate dimension (x, y, z), we compute the range (maximum minus minimum), take the maximum of these three values, and divide it by 10,000. This process is performed iteratively for each round of clustering until all data points cluster into a single point. We have updated the manuscript to clarify this threshold selection and included this information in the revised algorithm description and pseudocode. We now better explain this in lines 556-559.

      Distances between neurons in DC C-PHATE: In our previous description in Box 1 algorithm 1, we had provided a general algorithm for DC for any high dimensional dataset. We have now revised the algorithm to indicate how we used DC for these EM datasets. 

      Distances between neurons are determined by the pixel overlap between their segmented shapes in the EM dataset. We use these distances to build a graph with weighted edges, in which the weight of the edge represents the pixel overlap (the adjacency in the actual EM segmentation). Affinities between neurons, which are a proxy for their distance in the graph, are then computed as now revised in Box 1, Algorithm 1. This process is done iteratively as neurons cluster. To better communicate this, we have changed the text in lines 533-538.  

      Comment

      R1.5. While the case studies presented by the authors help to highlight the utility of the different visualizations offered by the NeuroSC platform, the authors need to be more careful with the claims they make from these correlative observations. For example, in Figure 4, the authors use C-PHATE clustering patterns to make conclusions about changes in clustering patterns of individual neurons across development based on single animal datasets. In this and many other cases presented in this study with the limited existing datasets, it is difficult to differentiate between developmental changes and individual variability between the neurite positions, contacts, and synapse differences within these data. This caveat needs to be clearly addressed.

      We now better explain in the manuscript that the selected case study, of the AVF neuron outgrowth, is not one of just correlation based solely on an EM dataset. Instead, the case study represents the NeuroSC-driven exploration of a biologically significant event supported by several independent datasets, as now explained in lines 257-276.

      Briefly, we agree with the reviewer that examining differences across individual EM datasets is insufficient evidence to make conclusions about developmental changes. But the strength of NeuroSC is in its ability to combine and compare multiple datasets, bolstering observations that are not possible by looking at just one dataset, and providing new insights on the way to new hypotheses. We now better explain that we are not looking at single connectomes in isolation and then deriving conclusions, but instead using NeuroSC to compare across 9 EM datasets. We better explain how the tools in NeuroSC, including C-PHATE, enabled comparisons across these multiple connectomes to identify apparent differences in neuronal relationships. We then explain that by using NeuroSC, we could examine these variations in neuronal relationships at the level of individual, cell biological differences of neuronal morphologies between the developmental datasets. This could be due, as pointed by the reviewer, to differences due to development, or just differences between individual animals. In the case of AVF, that features are absent in all early specimens, then arise and persist in all specimens after a certain time point, which lead us to hypothesize they result from a developmental event. Because the segmented objects in NeuroSC are linked to neuronal identities, we are also able to cross reference our observations from the EM datasets with information in other datasets and the literature. In the specific case of postembryonic development of AVF outgrowth, we can now tie the knowledge, from developmental lineage information and molecular profiles, that AVF is a postembryonically born neuron (Sulston et al. 1977, Sun et al 2022, Poole et al 2024, wormatlas.org) to the outgrowth dynamics of its neurites using the postembryonic EM datasets. Our findings using  NeuroSC provide a proof of concept of the utility of the resource and extended our understanding of how the outgrowth of this neuron affects the relationships between the neural circuits in the nerve ring.

      Comment

      R1.6. Given that recent studies have also quantified contact area between neurons across multiple connectomes (Cook et al., Current Biology, 2023; Yim et al., Nature Communications, 2024), and that the authors use a slightly different approach to quantify contact area, a direct comparison between contact area values obtained in this study with prior studies seems appropriate.

      We acknowledge that there are multiple different approaches to calculate adjacencies. In the papers cited above, there are 3 different algorithms used:

      (1) Brittin 2019 (python parse Track EM, boundary thresholds), used in Cook et al 2023, Moyle 2021, and this study).

      (2) Witvliet 2021 (Matlab 2D masks), used in Cook et al 2023.

      (3) Yim 2024 (3D masks), used in Yim et al 2024.

      To briefly describe the different approaches, and the methods we chose for this paper:

      Algorithm 1 (used in this study) defines adjacency based on distances between boundary points in TrakEM2 segmentations, allowing threshold tuning to accommodate differences in resolution and image quality across datasets—an important feature for consistent cross-dataset comparisons.

      Algorithm 2 infers contact via morphological dilation of VAST segmentations, identifying adjacency through overlapping expanded boundaries. 

      Algorithm 3 uses voxelwise contact detection with directional surface area measurements and normalization to account for dataset size differences. 

      In NeuroSC, we use algorithm 1, mostly because we had tested the rigor of this method in (Moyle et al. 2021), where we have shown that results were robust across a range of thresholds. This flexibility enables tailored application across datasets of varying quality and scale, critical for NeuroSC’s mission of curating data sets across differing methodologies to allow for direct relationship comparisons. We detail the methodology for defining thresholds for each dataset in methods section lines 492-521, defined in Supplementary table 1. Another difference between our analysis and the previously cited work is that for our analysis we also chose to include all individually resolved neurons, including post-embryonic cells, without collapsing them into left/right or dorsal/ventral symmetry classes. In this way our approach retains the full cellular resolution of the nervous system. 

      Comment

      Neuroglancer is not mentioned at all in the manuscript, despite it being a very similar and widely accepted platform for vEM data visualization across model organisms. An explicit comparison of NeuroSC and Neuroglancer would be appropriate, given the similarity of the tools. Currently, published C. elegans data (Witvliet et al., 2021; Yim et al., 2024) use Neuroglancer-based viewers, and directly comparing NeuroSC and highlighting its strengths relative to Neuroglancer would strengthen the paper.

      In the original manuscript we had not mentioned tools like Neuroglancer because we envisioned them as distinct, in intended use and output, from NeuroSC. But, as explained in R1.2 comment, in the revised version we have included a section in the Introduction lines 98-108 and in the Discussion (lines 369- 417) that compares these types of web-based tools and highlights synergies. 

      Comment

      Assigning shorthand names to strata, such as "shallow reflex circuit" (page 4, line 172), may oversimplify this group of neurons. Either more detailed support for shorthand names of C-PHATE modules should be included, or less speculative names for strata should be used.

      We appreciate this comment and understand that the original language used in the manuscript to describe strata categorizations may run the risk of oversimplification. We have now clarified the text to communicate that: 1) Strata are labeled by numbers (Strata 1, Strata 2, Strata 3 and Strata 4), rather than functional features of the neurons forming part of the strata, and that 2) the assignment of ‘strata’ is just one level of classification available via DC/CPHATE (as explained below). 

      To be sure, we have observed and published (Moyle et. al. Nature 2021) that within a given stratum, many neurons share the functional identities that we have used as summary descriptors for the strata (eg, shallow reflex circuits for Stratum 1; sensory and integrative circuits in Strata 3 and Strata 4; command interneurons in Strata 2, etc). However, those cell types are not the only members of the strata. We have adjusted the language in lines 197-204 to reflect this more clearly. “Stratum 1, which contains most neurons contributing to shallow reflex circuits that control aversive head movements in response to noxious stimuli, displayed the fewest changes among the developmental connectomes (Figure 3B–F; Supplementary Table 3). In contrast, C. elegans exhibit tractable behaviors that adapt to changing environmental conditions (Flavell et al., 2020). Strata 3 and 4 contain most neurons involved in circuits associated with such learned behaviors, including mechano- and thermo-sensation. This is reflected in Strata 3 and 4 showing the most change in neuronal relationships across postembryonic development.“

      Comment

      The authors state that NeuroSC can be applied to other model organisms. Since model organisms with greater neuron numbers include more individual neurons per cell class, the authors should support this by quantitatively demonstrating how DC/C-PHATE relationships correlate with shared functional roles among C. elegans neurons.

      We now clarify in the manuscript that, like in other organisms, C. elegans neurons are also grouped into functional classes with shared characteristics. In the context of the cylindrical nerve ring of the animal, these neuronal classes are sometimes bilaterally symmetric (forming left-right pairs), four-fold symmetric and six-fold symmetric. We now explain in the discussion that the DC/CPHATE analyses group these neuron classes and their relationships (lines 442-451). In the specific section mentioned by the reviewer, we now also add new text to contextualize this concept and how it might relate to the possible use of these tools in organisms with larger nervous systems: ‘However, our previous work has demonstrated that DC/CPHATE clustering of C. elegans neurons consistently pulls out clusters of shared neuron classes and shared functional roles Moyle et al. (2021). Building on this foundation, we envision applying similar clustering approaches to larger connectomes, aiming to identify classes and functionally related neuronal groups in more complex nervous systems. We suggest that contact profiles, along with neuron morphologies and synaptic partners, can act as ‘fingerprints’ for individual neurons and neuron classes. These ‘fingerprints’ can be aligned across animals of the same species to create identities for neurons. Frameworks for systematic connectomics analysis in tractable model systems such as C. elegans are critical in laying a foundation for future analyses in other organisms with up to a billion-fold increase in neurons (Toga et al., 2012).’

      Comment

      Lack of surface smoothing in NeuroSC leads to processes sometimes appearing to have gaps, which could be remedied by smoothing with a surface mesh. 

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion, and understand the visibility of gaps in certain neuron processes can be distracting. But this was an intentional choice, with our main goal being to show the most accurate representation of the available data segmentation and avoid any rendering interpretations. In this way, we render the data with the highest fidelity we can and as close as possible to the ground truth of the EM segmentation. We have added language to describe this in the methods, lines 490-491, and in Figure legend 5b.

      Comment

      Toggling between time points while maintaining the same neurons and contact area in NeuroSC is a really valuable feature. The tool would be improved even more by extending this feature to synapses, specifically by allowing the user to add an entire group of synapses to the viewer at once (e.g. "all synapses between AIM and PVQ"), and to keep this synapse group invariant when toggling between developmental stages.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. In response we have now implemented a new feature to ‘clone’ a rendered scene across time while preserving the original elements to ease comparisons. Once the user has rendered a scene, they can use the in-viewer developmental slider to clone the renderings and assigned colors, but display the renderings of the newly selected timepoint. These renderings populate a new window tab which can be dragged to align developmental stage windows side by side. We have added a sentence to account for this in lines 315-317 and to the legend of supplemental Figure S11. 

      Reviewer #2 (Public review)

      Comment

      The ability to visualize the data from both a connectomics and contactomics perspective across developmental time has significant power. The original C. elegans connectome (White et al., 1986) presented their circuits as line drawings with chemical and electrical synapses indicated through arrows and bars. While these line drawings remain incredibly useful, they were also necessary simplifications for a 2D publication and they lack details of the complex architecture seen within each EM image. Koonce et al take advantage of segmented image data of each neuronal process within the nerve ring to create a web interface where users can visualize 3D models for their neuron of choice. The C-PHATE visualization allows users to explore similarities among different neurons in terms of adjacency and then go directly to the 3D model for these neurons. The 3D models it generates are beautiful and will likely be showing up in many future presentations and publications. The tool doesn't require any additional downloading and is open source.

      We thank that reviewer for this positive assessment of our work.

      Comment

      While it's impossible to create one tool that will satisfy all potential users, I found myself wanting to have numbers associated with the data. For example, knowing the number of connections or the total surface area of contacts between individual neurons wasn't possible through the viewer, which limits the utility of taking deep analytical dives. While connectivity data is readily accessible through other interfaces such as Nemanode and WormWiring, a more thorough integration may be helpful to some users.

      We thank the reviewer for this feedback and in response have now implemented displays with quantitative information in NeuroSC. Now, upon hovering over a contact patch or synapse, the user will see the quantitative data of the relationship. For contact patches, you will see the total area shared between two neurons in that dataset. On hovering over a synapse, you will see how many synapses there are in total with the same members and throughout the dataset. We agree that this improves user analyses, (see also R1.3 response).

      Comment

      There were several issues with the user interface that made it a bit clunky to use. For example, as I added additional neurons to the filter search box, the loading time got longer and longer. I ran an experiment uploading all of the amphid neurons, one pair at a time. Each additional neuron pair added an additional 5-10 seconds to the loading. By the time I got to the last pair, it took over a minute to load. Issues like these, some of which may be unavoidable given the size of the data, could be conveyed through better documentation. I did not find the tutorial very helpful and the supplementary movies lacked any voiceover, so it wasn't always clear what they were trying to show.

      We appreciate that some of the more complex models can take a while to load. One of our core goals is to keep the high resolution of our models to most accurately represent the EM data, so we had to compromise between resolution and loading times. But to address this concern we have now added a ‘loading’ prompt that reassures the user when there is a wait. We also added, as suggested, text guidance throughout all of the supplemental videos (Supplemental Videos 1-4).

      Reviewer #3 (Public review)

      Comment

      A web-based app, NeuroSC, that individual researchers can use to interrogate the structure and organization of the C. elegans nerve ring across development In the opinion of this reviewer, only minor revisions are required.

      We thank that reviewer for this positive assessment of our work.

      Comment

      Contact is defined by length, why not contact area? How are these normalized for changes in the overall dimensions of neurons during development?

      To clarify our methodology: the adjacency algorithm that we use generates a 2D adjacency profile by summing the number of adjacent boundary points per EM section, which are then summed across all EM z slices.

      Contact area can be derived by multiplying the adjacency length in each slice by pixel resolution and z-thickness. Prompted by the reviewer we have now also calculated and display contact surface areas, along with their ranks among all contact relationships for a given neuron. These can be inspected directly via the interface by clicking on a rendered cell or contact patch (Figure S5 and lines 308-312). We believe these additional surface area metrics enhance the interpretability and utility of the viewer.

      We apply normalization at the level of the adjacency threshold to account for dataset-specific differences such as contrast, boundary definition, and age-related changes in neuropil packing density. This normalization is applied before running the adjacency algorithm. We do not normalize by individual neuron size, as the contact data are intended to reflect relational differences between neurons, rather than absolute morphological scaling. In fact, our addition of a scale-spheroid within each rendered model emphasizes the large increase in spatial scale that the nerve ring experiences during larval growth.  

      Comment

      Figure 1, C&D, explanation unclear for how the adjacency matrix is correlated with C-Phate schematic in D.

      We thank the reviewer for the comment and have clarified this section by adding greater detail to the explanation of how an adjacency matrix is computed (lines 149-155), as well as a description now in the figure legend 1C. Additionally, we revised Figure 1C and D to simplify neuron representations/colors and to simplify the adjacency heat map gradient. We also extended the area of contact between neurons on Figure 1C to better reflect what would be considered a “contact”. Lastly, in the figure, we changed the color and placement for the z plane arrow and label from black to white, to make it more visible, to highlight the method of computing adjacency for each z slice. 

      Comment

      Figure 4, panels F & G, unclear why AVF is shown in panel G (L3) but not panel F (L1). Explanation (see below) should be provided earlier, i.e., AVF is not generated until the end of the L1.

      We have now clarified this important point by adding labels to Figure 4 panels F and G, ‘Pre-AVF outgrowth’ and ‘Post-AVF outgrowth’ respectively. Briefly, the point is that AVF grows into the nerve ring after the L2 stage, and that is why it is absent in panel F (L1 stage, now with the label ‘Pre-AVF outgrowth’).  

      Comment

      Line 146 What is the justification for the statement: "By end of Larval Stage 1 (L1), neuronal differentiation has concluded...."? This statement is confusing since this sentence also states that "90% of neurons in the neuropil...have entered the nerve ring..." which would suggest that at least 10% additional NR neurons have NOT fully differentiated.

      We have fixed this sentence in the text. Now the sentence reads ‘By Larval stage 1 (L1) 90% of the neurons in the neuropil (161 neurons out of the 181 neurons) have grown into the nerve ring and adopted characteristic morphologies and positions. 

      Lines 171-175 What is meant by the statement that "degree of these changes mapped onto...plasticity? What are examples of "behavioral plasticity?"

      We have added the following new lines of text (lines 200-204) and now additionally cite a review discussing C. elegans behaviors to clarify and give context to behavioral plasticity. ‘C. elegans exhibit tractable behaviors which can adapt due to changing environmental conditions  (Flavell et. al. Genetics 2020). Strata 3 and 4 contain most neurons belonging to circuits associated with such learned behaviors, including chemo, mechano and thermo sensation. This is seemingly reflected by strata 3 and 4 harboring the most readily recognized set of changes in neuronal relationships across postembryonic development.’  

      Comment

      Lines 189-190 The meaning of this sentence is unclear, "The logic in....merge events."

      This sentence has been deleted and we have instead refocused our descriptions of C-PHATES comparisons by neuronal clustering trajectories and cluster members (rather than iterations).

      Comment

      Lines 193-208 This section reports varying levels of convergence across larval development in C-Phate maps for the interneurons AIML and PVQL. Iterations leading to convergence varied: 16 (L1), 14 (L2), 22 (L3), 20 (l4), 14 (adult). The authors suggest that these differences are biologically significant and reflect the reorganization of AIML and PVQL contact relationships especially between the L4 and adult. Are these differences in iterations significant?

      We agree this could be confusing and instead of focusing on comparing the iteration at which each merging event occurs, we now focus on examining the differences in members of clusters, before and after the merge event. Cluster membership is easier to interpret than the differences in the number of DC iterations (lines 224-229).

      Lines 240-241 States that AVF neurons "terminally differentiate in the embryo" which is not correct. AVF neurons are generated from neuronal precursors (P0 and P1) at the end of the L1 stage which accounts for their outgrowth into the NR during the L2 stage. 

      We thank the reviewer for the correction and have edited the text to read: ‘AVF neurons are generated from neuronal precursors (P0 and P1) at the end of the L1 stage (Sulston et al. (1983); Sun and Hobert (2023); Poole et al. (2024); Hall and Altun (2008); Sulston and Horvitz (1977). AVF neurons do not grow into the nerve ring until the L2 stage, and continue to grow until the Adult stage (lines 261-266).’

      Comment

      Lines 289-315. A detailed and highly technical description of website architecture would seem more appropriate for the Methods section.

      We agree and have moved this section to the methods as suggested (lines 663-690).

      Comment

      Line 307 "source data is" should be "source data are"

      Thank you- we have fixed this grammatical error.

      Comment

      Line 324 "circuits identities" should be "circuit identity".

      Thank you- we have fixed this grammatical error.

      Comment

      Trademark/copyright conflict with these sites? https://compumedicsneuroscan.com/about/ https://www.neuroscanai.com/

      We thank the reviewer for drawing our attention to this. To avoid potential conflicts, we have proactively altered the name to NeuroSC throughout the paper.

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      We are very grateful for the positive feedback from all three reviewers. Below, we address each point in detail and outline proposed experiments and revision plans, with changes indicated by an underscore.

      __Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      In this paper "Magnesium depletion unleashes two unusual modes of colistin resistance with different fitness costs," the authors examine how Pseudomonas aeruginosa evolves resistance to colistin, a last-resort antibiotic for multidrug-resistant Gram-negative infections. Although colistin resistance is a major clinical challenge, its underlying mechanisms, particularly under nutrient-limited conditions typical of infections, are not fully understood. The study shows that under low magnesium (Mg²_⁺_) conditions-mimicking infection or biofilm stress-P. aeruginosa can develop colistin resistance via two distinct genetic pathways, each with unique fitness costs. The first involves mutations in genes such as htrB2 and lpxO2, granting strong resistance but compromising the outer membrane and increasing susceptibility to other antibiotics. The second involves regulatory mutations (e.g., in the oprH/phoP/phoQ promoter) that confer resistance with minimal membrane defects and generally lower fitness costs. These resistance strategies lead to different trade-offs: membrane-compromising mutations reduce bacterial fitness without colistin, while regulatory mutations typically avoid these penalties, with context-dependent effects. The study underscores clinical relevance, noting that in infections-such as in cystic fibrosis-other microbes like Candida albicans may deplete magnesium, indirectly promoting resistance evolution. Overall, this work offers important insights into antibiotic resistance in nutrient-stressed, polymicrobial environments, highlighting how magnesium availability shapes resistance evolution and fitness costs. The findings suggest new avenues for therapeutic intervention and call for a reevaluation of antibiotic strategies in nutrient-competitive infection settings.

      Work is timely and important. Colistin resistance represents an urgent threat as colistin is a last-resort antibiotic used against multidrug-resistant Gram-negative pathogens. Insights into mechanisms evolving under nutrient limitation are highly relevant given the prevalence of such environmental conditions during infection and microbial biofilm growth. The study reveals two previously uncharacterized pathways to colistin resistance in P. aeruginosa triggered by magnesium (Mg²_⁺_) depletion, each with distinct genetic signatures and trade-offs. This finding directly impacts the understanding of polymicrobial infection dynamics, especially where magnesium sequestration by fungi/ or other microbes may occur. The identification of fitness costs and pleiotropic effects associated with specific resistance mutations provides crucial guidance for clinicians considering antibiotic stewardship and combination therapy strategies.

      __

      We thank the reviewer for their summary of our study and its potential impact.

      __Drawbacks

      • Experimental scope: While the study is comprehensive for P. aeruginosa, the broader applicability to other Gram-negative pathogens is not directly tested.__


      In our revision, we now explicitly point out that the magnesium limitation we have observed broadly applies to Gram-negative bacteria, as we demonstrated in our previous PLOS Biology paper. Therefore, we expect the same themes (and even genes, which are broadly conserved) to apply to Gram-negative bacteria in general. However, a full-fledged experimental study of other Gram-negative pathogens is outside the scope of our current study, which required a 90-day experimental evolution.

      __Strengths

      • Experimental evolution: This work uses laboratory evolution under controlled Mg²_⁺_-limited conditions to simulate selection pressures relevant to infection microenvironments. • Genetics: Systematic identification and functional validation of key mutations-particularly in htrB2, lpxO2, and the oprH/phoP/phoQ promoter-give mechanistic depth to the findings. • Two distinct resistance modes: Evidence for (i) one pathway leading to colistin resistance via htrB2 mutations, resulting in high resistance but significant membrane integrity loss and increased susceptibility to other antibiotics. (ii) a second pathway providing resistance without compromising membrane integrity, highlighting evolutionary flexibility and ecological implications. • Fitness assessments: measurement of the costs associated with each resistance strategy, both in terms of membrane integrity and susceptibility to other agents. • Relevance: Connection to natural scenarios, such as magnesium sequestration by fungi (e.g. Candida albicans) in polymicrobial environments, underscores the ecological and clinical significance. • This manuscript is well written with clearly logical hypothesis testing__


      We thank the reviewer for their appraisal, especially for recognizing the rigor and broader biological implications of our study.

      __Drawbacks

      • Experimental scope: While the study is comprehensive for P. aeruginosa, the broader applicability to other Gram-negative pathogens is not directly tested.__

      We agree with the reviewer's point about broader applicability in other Gram-negative bacteria, as many of the lipid A biosynthesis genes are conserved among diverse bacterial lineages. We will include this point in our revised Discussion to suggest relevance to other Gram-negative bacteria:

      "We previously showed that magnesium sequestration by fungi applies not only to P. aeruginosa but to other Gram-negative bacteria as well (ref). Our current study lays a foundation for developing evolution-guided strategies to combat multidrug-resistant P. aeruginosa and other Gram-negative bacteria that can also acquire colistin resistance. Since many other antibiotic mechanisms are similarly dependent on metal ions (refs), our work suggests that nutritional competition for metal ions may alter initial antibiotic resistance in Gram-negative bacteria and potentiate new evolutionary pathways of antibiotic resistance."

      • __ Mechanistic depth: Some inferred mechanisms (e.g., the precise molecular impact of late-occurring adaptive mutations) merit deeper biochemical analysis.__ We will emphasize in our Revision that the MS data of endpoint clones and triple mutants reveal that their lipid A structures are identical. This suggests that the role of other late-occurring mutations in enhancing resistance is likely through lipid A-independent pathways.

      • __ Results Lines 414- 423: While correlation is most what makes sense for some drugs, causality is implied (membrane defects increase susceptibility), but could be strengthened by directly measuring antibiotic uptake (e.g., fluorescence) or membrane permeability for these 3 antibiotics.__ We thank the reviewer for highlighting the issue of causality. For the three antibiotics tested, the most direct way to measure their effect is by measuring their impact on bacterial growth directly, which is what we have done. Our membrane permeability assay using NpN uptake operates under the same conditions suggested by the reviewer and directly measures molecular uptake. Moreover, only fluorescently labeled vancomycin is commercially available among the three antibiotics tested. Since it binds to the cell wall, its utility to measure membrane defects is more limited than the NpN assay we have already used. However, in response to this comment, we will make clear in our revision that we infer that increased susceptibility to other antibiotics is due to their increased membrane permeability.

      __ o Effect is mild and mostly not significant. It is also not clear whether authors only tested a handful of mutants shown in Fig. 7B-D or whether other clones were also tested. The sample of endpoints (P2, P5, P8) covers well-characterized lineages, but additional evolved clones or a broader panel could boost generality about other antibiotics. The authors note "significantly lower MICs" statistical treatment is implied; explicit statistical values and replicate numbers should be given in the text or figures.__

      We slightly disagree with the reviewer that the results are not significant. Even two-to-three-fold differences in MICs translate to large differences in microbial competition. These three endpoint clones are representative of all eight evolved strains after 90-day evolution experiments. Moreover, we will emphasize in the Revision that we have tested all the mutations found in the endpoint clones; we know what these are from whole genome sequencing of multiple endpoint clones. In addition, we will explicitly state the p-value in the legend of Figure 7.

      • __ The structural or physiological nature of "mild" vs. "severe" membrane defects could be better defined/quantified.__ Although we agree with the reviewer's suggestion, the variability of the SEM assay makes the classification of membrane defects based on cell morphology hard to quantify. We therefore only use the SEM images as representative of the various defects observed. For a more quantitative assay of the membrane defects, we instead rely on the standard NpN uptake assay to quantify membrane permeability as a quantifiable readout for membrane defects.

      • __ Quantitative limits: Authors should add in the discussion that statistical robustness could be strengthened-for example, by including longer-term evolutionary predictions.__ We are not sure what the reviewer means and so cannot address this point completely. We ask the reviewer to rephrase this point, and we will address it to the best of our abilities.

      • __ in vivo relevance: While the ecological context is discussed, direct in vivo confirmation (e.g., in animal infection models) of the observed resistance trajectories would increase translational impact and relevance.__ We agree with the reviewer's point. However, it is not trivial to directly perform evolution experiments of microbes in animal models. There are only a handful of labs worldwide that have working CF-relevant animal models. However, the colistin resistance mutations we identified provide a tool to look deeper into how colistin-resistant P. aeruginosa can evolve in vivo.

      • __ Some sections are repetitive or overly detailed; condense where possible (especially on mutation lists and background for each claim).__

      We will condense our manuscript as the reviewer suggested in our revision. Adding a graphical summary as suggested will also allow us to be more succinct in our description.

      __Other comments

      • Authors should provide clarification on how the Mg²_⁺_ concentrations used in vitro compare to those found in clinically relevant infection settings. This would be helpful to enhance significance.__

      We thank the reviewer for raising this good point. Based on our previous work, we know the Mg2+ levels in our model (0.3-0.45mM) are within the physiological range of Mg2+ in infection settings (0.1-0.8mM). We will highlight this point in the introduction.

      • __ Authors should explicitly report statistical methods (e.g., types of tests, adjustments for multiple comparisons) in figure legends for reproducibility.__

      We will include the details of our statistical tests in each panel of figures both in the main text and the supplement.

      • __ Nomenclature for key mutations and their position within the genetic context (e.g., htrB2 mutation specifics) could be more detailed in figures or supplemental materials.__

      We will name each of the particular mutations tested to be specific about the nature of all the evolved mutations in our figure legends.

      • __ The manuscript could benefit from a graphical summary illustrating the two distinct evolutionary pathways and their respective fitness landscapes.__ We thank the reviewer for this suggestion to enhance the clarity of our work. We will make a new graphical summary highlighting two different evolutionary pathways as a new figure.

      • __ A brief discussion of therapeutic implications-such as combining colistin with agents that target membrane integrity-would help bridge the gap from mechanism to clinical management.__ In our discussion, we have suggested that collateral sensitivity (line 446-453) and PhoPQ kinase inhibitors (line 512-515) could be exploited to combat colistin resistance. To make this point more clearly, we will slightly expand our Discussion to include the therapeutic implications of our study.

      • __ Additional discussion on whether the fitness costs are reversible or can be compensated by further adaptation would be valuable for long-term dynamics.__ We thank the reviewer for raising this interesting point. The evolution trajectory of P8 suggests that fitness costs can be compensated by later-occurring mutations during evolution. We will further discuss this point to highlight the importance of understanding the mutational dynamics of antibiotic resistance evolution.

      • __ It would be valuable for the authors to comment on, or further analyze, whether there is a direct association between specific fitness costs and sensitivity to other antibiotics. Such information could inform on evolutionary constraints and possible trade-offs relevant to clinical settings.__

      We will include a supplemental figure showing the correlation between fitness costs and antibiotic susceptibility for P2, P5, and P8.

      __ Main figures and support for claims

      The main and supplementary figures comprehensively illustrate the evolutionary trajectories, genetic bases, and phenotypic outcomes associated with colistin resistance under magnesium depletion in P. aeruginosa. The figures effectively detail: • Genetic pathways involved including the experimental evolution design (colistin selection under Mg²_⁺_ depletion), whole-genome sequencing results, and timelines of observed mutations (e.g., in htrB2, lpxO2, oprH/phoP/phoQ promoter, PA4824). • Phenotypes and biochemical analyses such as lipid A structure (via mass spectrometry), minimum inhibitory concentration (MIC) assays, and epistasis analyses between mutations are depicted. • Fitness trade-offs are demonstrated using bacterial survival, membrane integrity (e.g., scanning electron microscopy images), membrane permeability assays (NPN uptake), and competitive fitness assays. • Mechanistic claims about the necessity of early mutations, the requirement of the PhoPQ pathway at different evolutionary stages, and the fitness cost imposed by certain resistance mutations. To further enhance the rigor and clarity of the manuscript, the authors should implement the following improvements: • Labelling consistency: In some instances, figure legends could provide more granular detail about specific mutations (e.g., positions of amino acid changes). • Graphical summary: A schematic summary figure that visually integrates the three main evolutionary resistance trajectories, the mutational order, corresponding lipid A changes, and fitness costs, would enhance readability. • Replicates: Plots should more thoroughly indicate the number of replicates and show individual data points (not just means {plus minus} SD), add number of replicates in each experiment. • Supplementary: figures referenced in the text (e.g., lipid A structures or mutation reversion outcomes) should be made more prominent or better cross-referenced from the main results section. Authors should highlight when supplementary data provide critical functional confirmation (e.g., confirming mutation function or fitness reversal).__

      We thank the reviewer for their appreciation of our work and constructive feedback.

      __Statistics

      The authors have appropriately incorporated statistical analyses throughout the figures. To enhance the robustness and credibility of their findings, authors should also cross-check • Tests in legends: Every figure and supplementary figure should clearly state the type of statistical test used, how many biological replicates, and any corrections for multiple comparisons.__

      As mentioned above, we will provide more details about the statistical tests of each panel.

      • __ Effect sizes: Where appropriate, reporting effect sizes-rather than just p values-would contextualize the biological impact.__ We agree with the reviewer; we will mention the magnitude of MIC changes in the corresponding figure legends.

      • __ Raw data accessibility: For full transparency, consider sharing underlying raw data and analysis scripts.

      __ We will provide the raw data of each panel.

      __Overall, the main and supplementary figures effectively illustrate and substantiate the key claims-particularly the alternative molecular pathways, phenotypic trade-offs, and the role of environmental magnesium in mediating colistin resistance. Statistical analysis is generally robust and appropriately presented throughout, though improvements could include more explicit reporting, additional controls, and accessible raw data. The visual and quantitative data in the figures provide support for the authors' conclusions about the evolution of antibiotic resistance under nutrient limitation in microbial environments. Understanding these alternative pathways is important for designing better treatment strategies and for predicting how resistance might evolve under varying clinical and environmental conditions.

      __

      We thank the reviewer for their positive assessment.

      __ Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):

      Overall, this work offers important insights into antibiotic resistance in nutrient-stressed, polymicrobial environments, highlighting how magnesium availability shapes resistance evolution and fitness costs. The findings suggest new avenues for therapeutic intervention and call for a reevaluation of antibiotic strategies in nutrient-competitive infection settings.__

      We sincerely thank the reviewer for constructive and thoughtful feedback and the acknowledgement of our figure presentation and experimental design. We feel very encouraged by the reviewer's perspective that our study provides unique insights into resistance evolution in polymicrobial environments and may inform therapeutic strategies.

      __My expertise: Gut microbiome, gut microbiota resilience, ecology, and evolution in microbial communities, antimicrobial resistance, high-throughput drug-bacteria interactions

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Summary: The paper by Hsieh and colleagues unravels the molecular basis of colistin resistance in Pseudomonas aeruginosa under low magnesium (Mg2+) conditions. Colistin is a last resort antibiotic that compromises bacterial cell wall integrity. Bacteria can respond (phenotypically and genotypically) to colistin by modifying membrane-anchored lipopolysaccharides. Mg2+ depletion can trigger similar responses. In their study, Hsieh et al. find that Mg2+ depletion (induced by a co-infecting fungal pathogen, Candida albicans) leads to evolutionary trajectories and resistance mechanisms that differ from those observed under Mg-rich conditions. The authors conducted a series of detailed genetic, chemical and fitness-based experiments to elucidate the molecular, physiological and evolutionary basis of these new resistance mechanisms.__


      We thank the reviewer for their summary of our study.__

      Major comments: __ 1. The authors reconstituted key mutations observed during experimental evolution in the ancestral background. Moreover, they took clones from the final stage of the evolution experiment and restored the ancestral state of the mutated genes. This dual approach is extremely strong and allows to decipher the causal effects of colistin resistance. I like to applaud the authors for this rigorous approach.


      We thank the reviewer's appreciation about the rigor and comprehensive analyses of our study.

      2. I understand that this work focusses on evolved mutants isolated from a previous experiment. The focus is on Mg2+ limitation. However, it would still have been nice to include a characterised colistin resistent strain featuring more standard resistance mechanisms. How different would such a strain be in the analyses shown in Fig. 3? Would morphological changes (Fig. 5A), fitness trade-offs (Fig. 6) and collateral sensitivity (Fig. 7) also occur in such a mutant. I do not regard it as imperative to include data from such a strain. But putting the new data into context (at least in the discussion) would clearly increase the overall impact of this work.

      We thank the reviewer for raising this fascinating and vital point. We will address the point in our Revision using the monoculture (high Mg2+) evolved strains, which acquired many known mutations for colistin resistance, as our reference. We will provide a supplemental figure about the membrane permeability, fitness costs, and collateral sensitivity of monoculture evolved strains. We will also contrast their difference from co-culture evolved strains in the revised Discussion.__


      1. I recommend to discuss the findings in the context of the work conducted by Jochumsen et al. 2016 Nature Communications https://doi.org/10.1038/ncomms13002. To me, this is one of the most insightful papers on the genetic basis and epistasis of colistin resistance.__

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out this important reference. We will include this reference and its findings in the Discussion.

      __Minor comments:

      1. First section of results and Fig. 1. It is unclear what parts are repetition from the ref. 37 and what is new. Please clarify.__

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. Figures 1A and 1B summarize the previous paper; all other panels are new data. We will make this clear in the revised text and figure legend.

      5. MIC-data (e.g. Fig. 2) come in discrete categories (based on the underlying dilution series). This comes with some challenges for statistical analysis. First, linear models like ANOVAs are based on normally distributed residuals. This is violated with discrete data distributions. Second, there is often no within-treatment variation (e.g., Fig. 2B), which makes statistical analyses obsolete. These points need to be addressed. Moreover, how is it possible to have subtle variations in MIC (e.g., Fig. 2A, P2 endpoint clone) with classic dilution series (as indicated on the y-axis, 128, 256, 512)? Please explain.

      We agree with the reviewer that statistical analysis of MIC data is not straightforward. ANOVAs are not well-suited for this type of discrete data, and the lack of variation within replicates reduces the power of non-parametric tests such as the Mann-Whitney U test. To improve the statistical reporting of MIC data, we will apply non-parametric tests and include effect size measurements, as recommended by Reviewer 1.

      Moreover, the design of dilution series may underestimate the true nature of antibiotic susceptibility. To address these issues, we have also performed survival assays to assess colistin resistance in both the endpoint and reversion strains; we will also include statistics to assess the significance of their different survival frequencies.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting the point about subtle variations in a classical dilution series. Our endpoint strains grew robustly in media containing 192 μg/mL colistin-the highest concentration used in our evolution experiment. To more accurately determine and compare their maximum MICs, we expanded the colistin concentration range using finer fold increases (1.5×, 2×, 2.5×, 3×, 3.5×, and 4×) from 192 to 768 μg/mL. We will update these details in the Materials & Methods.

      __ Lines 264-269. This analysis focusses on enzyme impairment. However, mutations could also change enzyme activity. Could any of these mutations have such an effect?__

      The answer is "yes". As evolved strains with lpxA mutation still have lipid A, we suspect this mutation does not altogether abolish lipid A synthesis. However, this mutation could affect the amount of lipid A or change enzyme specificity. These are interesting ideas for further investigation, but they fall beyond the scope of our current study. We will, however, include the requested detail in the discussion.

      __ Figure 5A. Some arrows seem to be out of place and point at void spaces. Please check.__

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out this error, which we will correct.

      8. The use of polymyxin B is not well justified (Fig. 5 and Fig. S13). Did the authors aim to test whether there is cross-resistance to other antimicrobial peptides?

      We will more clearly justify our choice of using polymyxin B for directly assaying binding of polymyxin antibiotics to bacterial cells using fluorescence-labeled polymyxins, since no such reagents exist for colistin and since previous studies (including ours) have shown similarity of susceptibility to colistin and polymyxin B:

      "Although P2 and P5 endpoint clones have more permeable membranes, they exhibited greater resistance to polymyxin antibiotics, including colistin (polymyxin E) (Fig. 5D), and polymyxin B (Fig. S13A) than WT cells. To investigate how membrane-compromised cells gain increased resistance to antibiotics that target the outer membrane, we used dansyl-labeled polymyxin B [51] to quantify the binding of polymyxins to P. aeruginosa; dansyl-labeled polymyxin fluoresces upon binding the hydrophobic portion of bacterial membranes. We used polymyxin B binding as a surrogate for how bacterial cells bind to all polymyxin antibiotics, including colistin."

      __ Line 564. Please indicate the dilution factor used.__

      Thank you for pointing out this inadvertent omission. We will update our Materials & Methods accordingly, as in response to the Reviewer 2's comment 5.

      __Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      This is a very strong and well designed study. It provides novel and relevant insights into the resistance mechanisms against an important last resort antibiotic.__

      We sincerely thank the reviewer for their thoughtful summary and generous evaluation of our work.

      __Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      This manuscript reports on biologically interesting and clinically-relevant findings, that upon passaging in the presence of spent media from C. albicans, P. aeruginosa develops resistance to colistin through lipid A modifications. The authors thoroughly characterize novel lipid A structures seen in their resistant mutants, and test a variety of genetically constructed mutants to determine the contributions of specific mutant alleles to resistance.__

      We thank the reviewer for the appreciation of our experimental design and comprehensive genetic and biochemical analyses of our evolved strains.

      However, additional experiments are needed to demonstrate the specific role and necessity of the lipid modifications for colistin resistance.

      We are also grateful for the reviewer's feedback and constructive criticisms to improve the clarity and impact of our manuscript. We have listed detailed responses to the reviewer below.

      1. __ Evidence that the lipid A mutations are causal for colistin resistance is sparse:
      2. Both the htrB2 mutations (in P2 and P5) are posited to be loss-of-function alleles. However, the phenotypes of the individual alleles are different (shown in Fig 2A and 2B). While the mutation in P2 shows a ~2x increase in resistance, the mutation in P5 does not. Thus it is not clear that the specific lipid A modifications seen in the htrB2 mutants are sufficient to confer colistin resistance. Can the authors test a clean deletion mutant of htrB2? Further, reversion of the htrB2 mutation in P2 has only a mild effect on colistin resistance, while reversion in P5 leads to a ~3-4x reduction in colistin resistance (Fig. S3), once again making it hard to parse out the exact effect of the lipid A modifications seen in the htrB2 mutants.
      3. Similarly, a single lpxO2 mutation does not have any effect on colistin resistance (in P5), indicating that the modifications seen in this mutant are not sufficient to lead to resistance.__ We thank the reviewer for making this suggestion. The reviewer is correct that a clean deletion will directly assess the effects of htrB2 mutations. We will make htrB2 deletion in WT and the triple mutants and endpoint clones of P2 and P5 to check the effect of htrB2 deletion on colistin resistance.

      Additionally, as Reviewer 2 pointed out, both mutation reconstruction and reversion experiments are required for understanding the roles of each mutation and interactions among different mutations in contributing to resistance. Combining all the results of htrB2 and lpxO2 mutations in these two orthogonal genetic experiments, it is the synergistic interactions among these mutations that lead to enhanced resistance after evolution. This explains why we saw genetic background effects of htrB2 mutation (P2 vs P5) and why each single mutation is required for resistance but doesn't contribute to resistance significantly by itself.

      - In P8, the effect of a single lpxA mutation is not tested. Further, the resistance of a P-oprH + lpxA mutant is the same as that of just the P-oprH mutant, indicating that the lpxA mutation likely does not directly alter colistin resistance. It is possible that mutations in lpxA were selected to compensate for fitness defects resulting from the other mutations, or for adaptation to some other component of the media conditions.

      This is an excellent suggestion. We will assess the MIC and fitness of reconstructed strains with the lpxA mutation to update the role of this mutation.

      - While reversion of the htrB2 and lpxO2 mutations do lead to ~3-4x reduced resistance in P5 indicating some contribution of these mutations, it is specific to this population, and thus not clear whether it is due to the specific lipid A modifications (some of which are seen in the other populations too). A specific combination of lipid A modifications may confer colistin resistance, but this needs to be demonstrated by generating just those clean deletion mutants and showing an effect on resistance.


      In response to this comment and comment 1, we will make lpxO2 deletions in WT, the triple mutant and the endpoint clone of P5 to test colistin resistance. However, our results of reverting single htrB2 or lpxO2 mutation to WT are robust and use two independent assays, including the standard MIC test and colistin survival assay. So, we are confident that each mutation is necessary for enhancing colistin resistance.

      __ Overall, given the high levels of colistin resistance still exhibited by single mutant revertants (Fig. S3) and the absence of double or triple revertants, it is hard to come to any conclusions regarding causality. This is especially the case for P8 but also true of P2 and P5. What are the other mutations in these populations, and what role do they play in colistin resistance?__

      We respectfully disagree with the reviewer on this point. One point that we have made and will re-emphasize in our Revision is that we have assayed all the mutations in these populations; this is one of the advantages of our experimental evolution and genome sequencing strategy. All the mutations that could play a role in colistin resistance have therefore been tested. Furthermore, due to genetic epistasis of mutations in different evolutionary lineages, we do not necessarily expect that a single revertant would altogether abolish colistin resistance, as has been demonstrated in several previous studies. As Reviewer 2 pointed out, combining mutation reconstruction and reversion is the best way to establish causality, and we have done so. Therefore, it is not correct to say that we cannot come to 'any conclusions regarding causality'.

      __ Figure 4 is titled "The PhoPQ pathway synergizes with early-arising mutations to confer colistin resistance.", but instead what this figure shows is that the mutation upstream of oprH increases PhoP activity. I'm not sure what the synergy here is. The same is true for the section starting on line 276. Further, the first sentence of that section states "We next investigated why the mutations conferring robust colistin resistance in low Mg2+ conditions are not observed in Mg2+ replete conditions.". However, there are no experiments there testing whether the mutations conferred resistance in Mg2+ conditions, instead the authors just test whether the mutations they are studying increase PhoP activity, and require PhoPQ to confer resistance.__

      We thank the reviewer for raising this point. We apologize for the unclear writing. We will use this opportunity to improve the clarity of this section by rewriting it to focus on two points: 1. Evolved resistance is PhoPQ-dependent, instead of PmrAB-dependent. 2. Two lineages evolved enhanced resistance by boosting PhoPQ activity in both high and low Mg2+ conditions. We will also remove the statement highlighted by the reviewer from this section that obfuscates the motivation of this section. We feel this approach will more clearly show how lipid A-related mutations contribute to resistance in low Mg2+.

      __ The authors claim that the identified mutations did not appear in the high magnesium conditions because they had a fitness cost under those conditions, but figure 6A shows that the evolved strains have fitness costs in low magnesium conditions as well. Further, the authors suggest that because the studied mutations act via increased PhoPQ activity, they do not lead to resistance under high magnesium conditions (lines 376-379). However, the increased PhoPQ activity is mediated by the P-oprH mutation in the isolates which likely increases PhoPQ activity even in high magnesium conditions. Overall, it is not clear why the mutations in the low magnesium condition were not selected for under high magnesium conditions.__

      The reviewer is correct about the fitness cost in high Mg2+ and low Mg2+ conditions. These fitness experiments were carried out in the absence of colistin, which explains the finding that there are fitness defects in both conditions. As is well known, evolution for antibiotic resistance will ultimately select for resistant mutants, despite their fitness costs. In contrast, colistin MIC of these endpoint strains in high Mg2+ conditions was still much lower than the colistin concentration we applied during evolution (Fig. S15), indicating it is much less likely for these mutations to be selected for in high Mg2+. We will clarify this point in our revised Results and Discussion.

      We agree with the reviewer about the P-oprH mutations (PhoPQ expression) and will note that, unlike the other mutations, it is not clear why these emerge only in the low Mg2+ condition.

      __ The authors used C. albicans spent BHI media as their low magnesium condition, but this condition has a lot of other C. albicans metabolites that may be affecting the results. It is possible that what the authors are observing is not related to magnesium at all, and the authors should test the phenotypes in normal BHI medium depleted for magnesium or some defined medium where magnesium levels can be controlled.__

      We thank the reviewer for mentioning this important point. In our prior PLOS Biology paper (https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pbio.3002694.g005), we demonstrated that supplementing Mg2+ in evolved co-culture populations reduces colistin resistance, suggesting this evolved resistance is Mg2+ dependent. We also know that the MIC of our endpoint strains in C. albicans-spent BHI with supplemented Mg2+ (MIC of all three endpoint clones is less than 48 mg/mL colistin) is much lower than in C. albicans-spent BHI. We will mention this detail in the paper and include the data in our revision if the reviewer and editor require it.

      Other comments: - The authors use MIC assays as well as % survival to measure resistance against colistin, and sometimes use both in the same figure (e.g. Figure 2). This makes direct comparisons difficult. It would be better to consistently use one assay, preferably the MIC, at least in all the main figures. If the survival data needs to be included, it could go in the supplementary figures.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We will move the MIC data of mutation-reversion strains to the main Fig. 2D-F.

      - While the mutations seen in the low and high magnesium conditions were shown in the previous manuscript, given the extensive dissection here, it would be useful for readers if the authors gave some details about the serial passaging and evolution experiment, identification of mutations, and some mention of what mutations were seen in high Mg populations.

      We will add these details in the introduction.

      - Given that oprH is present in an operon, it would be more accurate to call that mutation as being in the promoter of the oprH-phoP-phoQ operon rather than it being an oprH mutation (at least in the text, e.g. lines 127-129).

      We agree. We will change this as the reviewer requested.

      - Unlike what is stated on lines 287-290, deletion of oprH in P2 leads to a greater than 2x reduction in colistin MIC, suggesting that OprH is playing a role (albeit a smaller role than phoP) - Line 50 has a typo, remove "160". - Line 122: Specify which Pa and Ca strain backgrounds were used. - Line 132: Were representative isolates derived from terminal passages? This should be defined.


      We will change these points according to the reviewer's suggestions; we thank them for these suggestions.

      - Line 215-219: It is interesting that Pa WT grown in spent medium additionally results in lipid A that is hexa-acylated. Is this sufficient to alter colistin resistance on its own?

      We find that WT PAO1 in low Mg2+ conditions has PagP-mediated acylation, which can slightly increase colistin resistance, but not to the extent of resistance as our evolved strains.

      - It would be useful to see a PCA plot for the samples shown in figures S6 and S7.

      We will include such a plot in Figures S6 and S7

      - Fig. S11: What are the colistin MICs of pmrA and phoP deletions in the WT background?

      MIC of pmrA and phoP deletions in WT is 1.5ug/mL. We will include these data in the Revision.

      - Instead of qualitative data, can the authors quantify cell length and perhaps some measure of cell shape (instead of just showing images in Fig. 5A and S12).

      We thank the reviewer for raising this point. A similar comment was raised by Reviewer 1. As it's challenging to quantify membrane changes from the morphological data obtained through SEM (a point which we will now clarify in our Revision), we used a quantifiable NpN uptake assay to quantify membrane defects of our evolved strains.

      - What is the WT MIC in high magnesium conditions? Please show that in Fig. S15.


      We will include this detail in Fig. S15

      - I am not an expert in lipid modifications and structures, but in figure S5, P2 and P4 show high peaks with lower m/z that seem specific to low magnesium conditions, but they are not labeled or discussed. What are these peaks?

      We thank the reviewer for bringing up this concern. The unlabeled lipids in these spectra are cardiolipin, not lipid A. These peaks are present in all the samples, and the reason they appear larger in the P1 and P4 low magnesium conditions is that both spectra are scaled to the relative intensity of one another. It is important to note that MALDI-TOF MS is not a quantitative technique, and the relative intensity of the peak heights between two samples should not be used to compare the amounts of lipids in one sample versus another. Therefore, we cannot say that these lipids are present in greater quantities in low magnesium conditions versus high magnesium conditions.

      - Lines 357-358 state that "mutant cells minimally bind polymyxin B (Fig. S13B)", but the figure shows increased binding compared to the WT. The legend of the figure also says something similar. Are the phoP pmrA mutants expected to bind more polymyxin B because they can't modify lipid A?

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out this substantial error. We will change 'minimally bind' to 'demonstrate increased binding'.

      - Given the fitness defects in just regular medium, is the data shown in Figure 7 specific collateral sensitivity to the antibiotics tested? Are there other conditions where P2 and P5 do not show increased sensitivity?

      These are all the antibiotics we have tested. It is conceivable that P2 and P5 might not show increased sensitivity to other antibiotics that use the same mode of action as colistin or polymyxin B.

      __Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      This study aims to dissect novel mechanisms of colistin resistance in P. aeruginosa that arise upon passaging in C. albicans spent media. While the authors identify novel lipid A modifications associated with the evolved strains, the significance of the modifications for resistance, and the mechanisms for why these evolutionary trajectories were not selected for in high magnesium are not clear from the data presented.__

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the integrity of our work and for the constructive feedback on improving the clarity of our writing. We understand that some concerns may stem from a lack of clarity in our original submission, but that additional genetic experiments are necessary. We have already identified all mutations that arose independently across different lineages and characterized their contributions to resistance, which we believe supports a robust inference of causality. To strengthen our conclusions, we will incorporate additional experiments, including htrB2 deletion, lpxO2 deletion, and lpxA mutation, to better dissect the roles of these genes and mutations in colistin resistance. We hope this revision plan will ameliorate the reviewer's concerns.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This manuscript reports on biologically interesting and clinically-relevant findings, that upon passaging in the presence of spent media from C. albicans, P. aeruginosa develops resistance to colistin through lipid A modifications. The authors thoroughly characterize novel lipid A structures seen in their resistant mutants, and test a variety of genetically constructed mutants to determine the contributions of specific mutant alleles to resistance. However, additional experiments are needed to demonstrate the specific role and necessity of the lipid modifications for colistin resistance.

      1. Evidence that the lipid A mutations are causal for colistin resistance is sparse:
        • Both the htrB2 mutations (in P2 and P5) are posited to be loss-of-function alleles. However, the phenotypes of the individual alleles are different (shown in Fig 2A and 2B). While the mutation in P2 shows a ~2x increase in resistance, the mutation in P5 does not. Thus it is not clear that the specific lipid A modifications seen in the htrB2 mutants are sufficient to confer colistin resistance. Can the authors test a clean deletion mutant of htrB2? Further, reversion of the htrB2 mutation in P2 has only a mild effect on colistin resistance, while reversion in P5 leads to a ~3-4x reduction in colistin resistance (Fig. S3), once again making it hard to parse out the exact effect of the lipid A modifications seen in the htrB2 mutants.
        • Similarly, a single lpxO2 mutation does not have any effect on colistin resistance (in P5), indicating that the modifications seen in this mutant are not sufficient to lead to resistance.
        • In P8, the effect of a single lpxA mutation is not tested. Further, the resistance of a P-oprH + lpxA mutant is the same as that of just the P-oprH mutant, indicating that the lpxA mutation likely does not directly alter colistin resistance. It is possible that mutations in lpxA were selected to compensate for fitness defects resulting from the other mutations, or for adaptation to some other component of the media conditions.
        • While reversion of the htrB2 and lpxO2 mutations do lead to ~3-4x reduced resistance in P5 indicating some contribution of these mutations, it is specific to this population, and thus not clear whether it is due to the specific lipid A modifications (some of which are seen in the other populations too). It is possible that a specific combination of lipid A modifications confers colistin resistance, but this needs to be demonstrated by generating just those clean deletion mutants and showing an effect on resistance.
      2. Overall, given the high levels of colistin resistance still exhibited by single mutant revertants (Fig. S3) and the absence of double or triple revertants, it is hard to come to any conclusions regarding causality. This is especially the case for P8 but also true of P2 and P5. What are the other mutations in these populations, and what role do they play in colistin resistance?
      3. Figure 4 is titled "The PhoPQ pathway synergizes with early-arising mutations to confer colistin resistance.", but instead what this figure shows is that the mutation upstream of oprH increases PhoP activity. I'm not sure what the synergy here is. The same is true for the section starting on line 276. Further, the first sentence of that section states "We next investigated why the mutations conferring robust colistin resistance in low Mg2+ conditions are not observed in Mg2+ replete conditions.". However, there are no experiments there testing whether the mutations conferred resistance in Mg2+ conditions, instead the authors just test whether the mutations they are studying increase PhoP activity, and require PhoPQ to confer resistance.
      4. The authors claim that the identified mutations did not appear in the high magnesium conditions because they had a fitness cost under those conditions, but figure 6A shows that the evolved strains have fitness costs in low magnesium conditions as well. Further, the authors suggest that because the studied mutations act via increased PhoPQ activity, they do not lead to resistance under high magnesium conditions (lines 376-379). However, the increased PhoPQ activity is mediated by the P-oprH mutation in the isolates which likely increases PhoPQ activity even in high magnesium conditions. Overall, it is not clear why the mutations in the low magnesium condition were not selected for under high magnesium conditions.
      5. The authors used C. albicans spent BHI media as their low magnesium condition, but this condition has a lot of other C. albicans metabolites that may be affecting the results. It is possible that what the authors are observing is not related to magnesium at all, and the authors should test the phenotypes in normal BHI medium depleted for magnesium or some defined medium where magnesium levels can be controlled.

      Other comments:

      • The authors use MIC assays as well as % survival to measure resistance against colistin, and sometimes use both in the same figure (e.g. Figure 2). This makes direct comparisons difficult. It would be better to consistently use one assay, preferably the MIC, at least in all the main figures. If the survival data needs to be included, it could go in the supplementary figures.
      • While the mutations seen in the low and high magnesium conditions were shown in the previous manuscript, given the extensive dissection here, it would be useful for readers if the authors gave some details about the serial passaging and evolution experiment, identification of mutations, and some mention of what mutations were seen in high Mg populations.
      • Given that oprH is present in an operon, it would be more accurate to call that mutation as being in the promoter of the oprH-phoP-phoQ operon rather than it being an oprH mutation (at least in the text, e.g. lines 127-129).
      • Unlike what is stated on lines 287-290, deletion of oprH in P2 leads to a greater than 2x reduction in colistin MIC, suggesting that OprH is playing a role (albeit a smaller role than phoP)
      • Line 50 has a typo, remove "160".
      • Line 122: Specify which Pa and Ca strain backgrounds were used.
      • Line 132: Were representative isolates derived from terminal passages? This should be defined.
      • Line 215-219: It is interesting that Pa WT grown in spent medium additionally results in lipid A that is hexa-acylated. Is this sufficient to alter colistin resistance on its own?
      • It would be useful to see a PCA plot for the samples shown in figures S6 and S7.
      • Fig. S11: What are the colistin MICs of pmrA and phoP deletions in the WT background?
      • Instead of qualitative data, can the authors quantify cell length and perhaps some measure of cell shape (instead of just showing images in Fig. 5A and S12).
      • What is the WT MIC in high magnesium conditions? Please show that in Fig. S15.
      • I am not an expert in lipid modifications and structures, but in figure S5, P2 and P4 show high peaks with lower m/z that seem specific to low magnesium conditions, but they are not labeled or discussed. What are these peaks?
      • Lines 357-358 state that "mutant cells minimally bind polymyxin B (Fig. S13B)", but the figure shows increased binding compared to the WT. The legend of the figure also says something similar. Are the phoP pmrA mutants expected to bind more polymyxin B because they can't modify lipid A?
      • Given the fitness defects in just regular medium, is the data shown in Figure 7 specific collateral sensitivity to the antibiotics tested? Are there other conditions where P2 and P5 do not show increased sensitivity?

      Significance

      This study aims to dissect novel mechanisms of colistin resistance in P. aeruginosa that arise upon passaging in C. albicans spent media. While the authors identify novel lipid A modifications associated with the evolved strains, the significance of the modifications for resistance, and the mechanisms for why these evolutionary trajectories were not selected for in high magnesium are not clear from the data presented.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary: The paper by Hsieh and colleagues unravels the molecular basis of colistin resistance in Pseudomonas aeruginosa under low magnesium (Mg2+) conditions. Colistin is a last resort antibiotic that compromises bacterial cell wall integrity. Bacteria can respond (phenotypically and genotypically) to colistin by modifying membrane-anchored lipopolysaccharides. Mg2+ depletion can trigger similar responses. In their study, Hsieh et al. find that Mg2+ depletion (induced by a co-infecting fungal pathogen, Candida albicans) leads to evolutionary trajectories and resistance mechanisms that differ from those observed under Mg-rich conditions. The authors conducted a series of detailed genetic, chemical and fitness-based experiments to elucidate the molecular, physiological and evolutionary basis of these new resistance mechanisms.

      Major comments:

      1. The authors reconstituted key mutations observed during experimental evolution in the ancestral background. Moreover, they took clones from the final stage of the evolution experiment and restored the ancestral state of the mutated genes. This dual approach is extremely strong and allows to decipher the causal effects of colistin resistance. I like to applaud the authors for this rigorous approach.
      2. I understand that this work focusses on evolved mutants isolated from a previous experiment. The focus is on Mg2+ limitation. However, it would still have been nice to include a characterised colistin resistent strain featuring more standard resistance mechanisms. How different would such a strain be in the analyses shown in Fig. 3? Would morphological changes (Fig. 5A), fitness trade-offs (Fig. 6) and collateral sensitivity (Fig. 7) also occur in such a mutant. I do not regard it as imperative to include data from such a strain. But putting the new data into context (at least in the discussion) would clearly increase the overall impact of this work.
      3. I recommend to discuss the findings in the context of the work conducted by Jochumsen et al. 2016 Nature Communications https://doi.org/10.1038/ncomms13002. To me, this is one of the most insightful papers on the genetic basis and epistasis of colistin resistance.

      Minor comments:

      1. First section of results and Fig. 1. It is unclear what parts are repetition from the ref. 37 and what is new. Please clarify.
      2. MIC-data (e.g. Fig. 2) come in discrete categories (based on the underlying dilution series). This comes with some challenges for statistical analysis. First, linear models like ANOVAs are based on normally distributed residuals. This is violated with discrete data distributions. Second, there is often no within-treatment variation (e.g., Fig. 2B), which makes statistical analyses obsolete. These points need to be addressed. Moreover, how is it possible to have subtle variations in MIC (e.g., Fig. 2A, P2 endpoint clone) with classic dilution series (as indicated on the y-axis, 128, 256, 512)? Please explain.
      3. Lines 264-269. This analysis focusses on enzyme impairment. However, mutations could also change enzyme activity. Could any of these mutations have such an effect?
      4. Figure 5A. Some arrows seem to be out of place and point at void spaces. Please check.
      5. The use of polymyxin B is not well justified (Fig. 5 and Fig. S13). Did the authors aim to test whether there is cross-resistance to other antimicrobial peptides?
      6. Line 564. Please indicate the dilution factor used.

      Significance

      This is a very strong and well designed study. It provides novel and relevant insights into the resistance mechanisms against an important last resort antibiotic.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The Garbett et al. identified a critical need to begin to understand the interplay between the assembly, maturation, and elimination of excitatory and inhibitory synapses. They also detail the lack of reliable tools to address this gap in knowledge. Here, the authors developed synaptic reporters expressed by lentiviruses (mClover3-Homer1c, HaloTag-Syb2, and tdTomato-Gephyrin). They combined these reporters with resonance scanning confocal imaging to measure synapses over a 15-hour period during neuron development and in mature neurons in primary hippocampal cultures. Using these reporters in the same neuron, the authors compared the ratios of postsynaptic excitatory and inhibitory specializations that co-localize with presynaptic terminals during development and in mature neurons and found that they are stable across time points. Finally, the authors developed CRISPR/Cas9 tools (TKIT) to knock-in endogenous fluorescent tags (GFP/tdTomato-Gephyrin) or epitope tags (HA-Bassoon and HA-Homer1) to begin to study synapse dynamics using endogenous proteins. I believe this paper highlights an important gap in knowledge and begins to offer methodologies to determine the dynamic coordination between excitatory and inhibitory synapses.

      Strengths:

      (1) The experiments are well-designed and carefully controlled.

      (2) The authors carefully validated the reporter and TKIT constructs.

      (3) The authors provide strong proof-of-principle for the use of the reporter constructs to track synapse formation, maintenance, and elimination over a 15-hour period.

      (4) Ingenious use of technologies (reporters, TKIT, and resonance scanning confocal microscopy) to develop a platform for future studies of synapse dynamics.

      (5) Strong evidence supporting that the ratio of excitatory and inhibitory synapses (those that oppose syb2) stays constant through development.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, this is a well-executed study that develops tools to simultaneously image excitatory and inhibitory synapse dynamics and represents an important first step to address the fundamental question regarding the coordination between these two types of synapses.

      Minor weaknesses of the manuscript include:

      (1) The lack of a characterization of endogenous Homer1-positive excitatory synapses using TKIT.

      (2) Discussion about other approaches to study excitatory and inhibitory synapses using endogenous proteins (e.g., intrabodies - FingR or nanobodies) should be included.

      (3) The activity state of a neuron and/or a synapse might alter the dynamic properties (formation, maintenance, and/or elimination). A discussion on whether the overexpression of Homer1 and/or gephyrin might alter synapse/neuron activity would provide greater interpretability of the results. A discussion of the potential limitations and benefits of the reporter and TKIT approaches would be beneficial.

      (4) A description and interpretation of the computational approach to calculate particle tracking would be helpful. I found that particle tracking figures, while elegant, are difficult to interpret.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.\

      Reviewer #1(Public review):

      (1) Changes in blood volume due to brain activity are indirectly related to neuronal responses. The exact relationship is not clear, however, we do know two things for certain: (a) each measurable unit of blood volume change depends on the response of hundreds or thousands of neurons, and (b) the time course of the volume changes are slow compared to the potential time course of the underlying neuronal responses. Both of these mean that important variability in neuronal responses will be averaged out when measuring blood changes. For example, if two neighbouring neurons have opposite responses to a given stimulus, this will produce opposite changes in blood volume, which will cancel each other out in the blood volume measurement due to (a). This is important in the present study because blood volume changes are implicitly being used as a measure of coding in the underlying neuronal population. The authors need to acknowledge that this is a coarse measure of neuronal responses and that important aspects of neuronal responses may be missing from the blood volume measure.

      The reviewer is correct: we do not measure neuronal firing but use blood volume as a proxy for bulk local neuronal activity, which does not capture the richness of single neuron responses. This is why the paper focuses on large-scale spatial representations as well as cross-species comparison. For this latter purpose, fMRI responses are on par with our fUSI data, with both neuroimaging techniques showing the same weakness. We have now added this point to the discussion: 

      “Second, we used blood volume as a proxy for local neuronal activity. Thus, our signal ignores any heterogeneity that might exist at the level of local neuronal populations. However, our main findings are related to the large-scale organization of cortical responses and how they relate to those of humans. For this purpose, the functional spatial resolution of our signal, driven by the spatial resolution of neurovascular coupling, should be adapted. In addition, using hemodynamic signals provides a much better comparison with human fMRI data, where the same limitations are present.”

      (2) More importantly for the present study, however, the effect of (b) is that any rapid changes in the response of a single neuron will be cancelled out by temporal averaging. Imagine a neuron whose response is transient, consisting of rapid excitation followed by rapid inhibition. Temporal averaging of these two responses will tend to cancel out both of them. As a result, blood volume measurements will tend to smooth out any fast, dynamic responses in the underlying neuronal population. In the present study, this temporal averaging is likely to be particularly important because the authors are comparing responses to dynamic (nonstationary) stimuli with responses to more constant stimuli. To a first approximation, neuronal responses to dynamic stimuli are themselves dynamic, and responses to constant stimuli are themselves constant. Therefore, the averaging will mean that the responses to dynamic stimuli are suppressed relative to the real responses in the underlying neurons, whereas the responses to constant stimuli are more veridical. On top of this, temporal following rates tend to decrease as one ascends the auditory hierarchy, meaning that the comparison between dynamic and stationary responses will be differently affected in different brain areas. As a result, the dynamic/stationary balance is expected to change as you ascend the hierarchy, and I would expect this to directly affect the results observed in this study.

      It is not trivial to extrapolate from what we know about temporal following in the cortex to know exactly what the expected effect would be on the authors' results. As a first-pass control, I would strongly suggest incorporating into the authors' filterbank model a range of realistic temporal following rates (decreasing at higher levels), and spatially and temporally average these responses to get modelled cerebral blood flow measurements. I would want to know whether this model showed similar effects as in Figure 2. From my guess about what this model would show, I think it would not predict the effects shown by the authors in Figure 2. Nevertheless, this is an important issue to address and to provide control for.

      We understand the reviewer’s concern about potential differences in response dynamics in stationary vs non-stationary sounds. It seems that the reviewer is concerned that responses to foregrounds may be suppressed in non-primary fields because foregrounds are not stationary, and non-primary regions could struggle to track and respond to these sounds. Nevertheless, we observed the contrary, with non-primary regions overrepresenting non-stationary (dynamic) sounds, over stationary ones. For this reason, we are inclined to think that this explanation cannot falsify our findings. 

      We understand the comment that temporal following rates might differ across regions in the auditory hierarchy and agree. In fact, we do show that tuning to temporal rates differs across regions and partly explains the differences in background invariance we observe. In this regard, we think the reviewer’s suggestion is already implemented by our spectrotemporal model, which incorporates the full range of realistic temporal following rates (up to 128 Hz). The temporal averaging is done as we take the output of the model (which varies continuously through time) and average it in the same window as we used for fUSI data. When we fit this model to the ferret data, we find that voxels in non-primary regions, especially VP (tertiary auditory cortex), tend to be more tuned to low temporal rates (Figure 2F, G), and that background invariance is stronger in voxels tuned to low rates. This is, however, not true in humans, suggesting that background invariance in humans relies on different computational mechanisms. We have added a sentence to clarify this: “The model included a range of realistic temporal rates and this axis was the most informative to discriminate foregrounds from backgrounds.”

      (3) I do not agree with the equivalence that the authors draw between the statistical stationarity of sounds and their classification as foreground or background sounds. It is true that, in a common foreground/background situation - speech against a background of white noise - the foreground is non-stationary and the background is stationary. However, it is easy to come up with examples where this relationship is reversed. For example, a continuous pure tone is perfectly stationary, but will be perceived as a foreground sound if played loudly. Background music may be very non-stationary but still easily ignored as a background sound when listening to overlaid speech. Ultimately, the foreground/background distinction is a perceptual one that is not exclusively determined by physical characteristics of the sounds, and certainly not by a simple measure of stationarity. I understand that the use of foreground/background in the present study increases the likely reach of the paper, but I don't think it is appropriate to use this subjective/imprecise terminology in the results section of the paper.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comment that the classification of our sounds into foregrounds and backgrounds is not verified by any perceptual experiments. We use those terms to be consistent with the literature (McWalter and McDermott, 2018; McWalter and McDermott, 2019), including the paper we derived this definition from (Kell et al., 2019). These terms are widely used in studies where no perceptual or behavioral experiments are included, and even when animals are anesthetized. We have clarified and justified this choice in the beginning of the Results section:

      “We used three types of stimuli: foregrounds, backgrounds, and combinations of those. We use those terms to refer to sounds differing in their stationarity, under the assumption that stationary sounds carry less information than non-stationary sounds, and are thus typically ignored.”

      We have also added a paragraph in the discussion to emphasize the limits of this definition:

      “First, this study defined foregrounds and backgrounds solely based on their acoustic stationarity, rather than perceptual judgments. This choice allowed us to isolate the contribution of acoustic factors in a simplified setting. Within this controlled framework, we show that acoustic features of foreground and background sounds drive their separation in the brain and the hierarchical extraction of foreground sound features.”

      (4) Related to the above, I think further caveats need to be acknowledged in the study. We do not know what sounds are perceived as foreground or background sounds by ferrets, or indeed whether they make this distinction reliably to the degree that humans do. Furthermore, the individual sounds used here have not been tested for their foreground/background-ness. Thus, the analysis relies on two logical jumps - first, that the stationarity of these sounds predicts their foreground/background perception in humans, and second, that this perceptual distinction is similar in ferrets and humans. I don't think it is known to what degree these jumps are justified. These issues do not directly affect the results, but I think it is essential to address these issues in the Discussion, because they are potentially major caveats to our understanding of the work.

      We agree with the reviewer that the foreground-background distinction might be different in ferrets. In anticipation of that issue, we had enriched the sound set with more ecologically relevant sounds, such as ferret and other animal vocalizations. Nevertheless, we have emphasized this limitation in addition to the limitation of our definition of foregrounds and backgrounds in the discussion: 

      “In addition, most of the sounds included in our study likely have more relevance for humans compared to ferrets (see table \ref{tbl1}). Despite including ferret vocalizations and environmental sounds that are more ecologically relevant for ferrets, it is not clear whether ferrets would behaviorally categorize foregrounds and backgrounds as humans do. Examining how ferrets naturally orient or respond to foreground and background sounds under more ecologically valid conditions, potentially with free exploration or spontaneous listening paradigms, could help address this issue.”

      Reviewer #2(Public review);

      (1) Interpretation of the cerebral blood volume signal: While the results are compelling, more caution should be exercised by the authors in framing their results, given that they are measuring an indirect measure of neural activity, this is the difference between stating "CBV in area MEG was less background invariant than in higher areas" vs. saying "MEG was less background invariant than other areas". Beyond framing, the basic properties of the CBV signal should be better explored:

      a) Cortical vasculature is highly structured (e.g. Kirst et al.( 2020) Cell). One potential explanation for the results is simply differences in vasculature and blood flow between primary and secondary areas of auditory cortex, even if fUS is sensitive to changes in blood flow, changes in capillary beds, etc (Mace et al., 2011) Nat. Methods.. This concern could be addressed by either analyzing spontaneous fluctuations in the CBV signal during silent periods or computing a signal-to-noise ratio of voxels across areas across all sound types. This is especially important given the complex 3D geometry of gyri and sulci in the ferret brain.

      We agree with the reviewers that there could be differences in vasculature across subregions of the auditory cortex and note that this point would also be valid for the published human fMRI data. Nevertheless, even if small differences in vasculature were present, it is unlikely that they would affect our analyses and results, which are designed to be independent of local vascular density. First, we normalize the signal in each voxel using the silent periods, so that the absolute strength of the raw signal, or baseline blood volume in each voxel, is factored in our analysis. Second, we only focus on reliably responsive voxels in each region and do see comparable sound-evoked responses in all regions (Figure S2). Third, our analysis mostly relies on voxel-based correlation across sounds, which is independent of the mean and variance of the voxel responses. Differences in noise, measured through test-retest reliability, can affect values of correlation, which is why we used a noise-correction procedure. After this procedure, invariance does not depend on test-retest, and differences across regions are still seen when matching for test-retest (new  Figure S7). Thus, we believe that differences in vascular architecture across regions are unlikely to affect our results. We added this point in the Methods section when discussing the noise-correction:

      “After this correction, the differences we observed between brain regions were present regardless of voxels' test-retest reliability, or noise level (Figure S7). Thus, potential differences in vasculature across regions are unlikely to affect our results.”

      b) Figure 1 leaves the reader uncertain what exactly is being encoded by the CBV signal, as temporal responses to different stimuli look very similar in the examples shown. One possibility is that the CBV is an acoustic change signal. In that case, sounds that are farther apart in acoustic space from previous sounds would elicit larger responses, which is straightforward to test. Another possibility is that the fUS signal reflects time-varying features in the acoustic signal (e.g. the low-frequency envelope). This could be addressed by cross-correlating the stimulus envelope with fUS waveform. The third possibility, which the authors argue, is that the magnitude of the fUS signal encodes the stimulus ID. A better understanding of the justification for only looking at the fUS magnitude in a short time window (2-4.8 s re: stimulus onset) would increase my confidence in the results.

      We thank the reviewer for raising that point as it highlights that the layout of Figure 1 is misleading. While Figure 1B shows an example snippet of our sound streams, Figure 1D shows the average timecourse of CBV time-locked to a change in sound (foreground or background, isolated or in a mixture). This is the average across all voxels and sounds, aiming at illustrating the dynamics for the three broad categories. In Figure 1E however, we show the cross-validated cross-correlation of CBV across sounds (and different time lags). To obtain this, we compute for each voxel the response to each sound at each time lag, thus obtaining two vectors (size: number of sounds) per lag, one per repeat. Then, we correlate all these vectors across the two repeats, obtaining one cross-correlation matrix per voxel. We finally average these matrices across all voxels. The presence of red squares with high correlations demonstrates that the signal encodes sound identity, since CBV is more similar across two repeats of the same sound (e.g., in the foreground only matrix, 0-5 s vs 0-5 s), than two different sounds (0-5 s vs. 7-12 s). We modified the figure layout as well as the legend to improve clarity.

      (2) Interpretation of the human data: The authors acknowledge in the discussion that there are several differences between fMRI and fUS. The results would be more compelling if they performed a control analysis where they downsampled the Ferret fUS data spatially and temporally to match the resolution of fMRI and demonstrated that their ferret results hold with lower spatiotemporal resolution.

      We agree with the reviewer that the use of different techniques might come in the way of cross-species comparison. We already control for the temporal aspect by using the average of stimulus-evoked activity across time (note that due to scanner noise, sounds are presented cut into small pieces in the fMRI experiments). Regarding the spatial aspect, there are several things to consider. First, both species have brains of very different sizes, a factor that is conveniently compensated for by the higher spatial resolution of fUSI compared to fMRI (0.1 vs 2 mm). Downsampling to fMRI resolution would lead to having one voxel per region per slice, which is not feasible. We also summarize results with one value per region, which is a form of downsampling that is fairer across species. Furthermore, we believe that we already established in a previous study (Landemard et al, 2021 eLife) that fUSI and fMRI data are comparable signals. We indeed could predict human fMRI responses to most sounds from ferret fUSI responses to the same identical sounds. We clarified these points in the discussion:

      “In addition, fMRI has a worse spatial resolution than fUSI (here, 2 vs. 0.1 mm voxels). However, this difference in resolution compensates for the difference in brain size between humans and ferrets. In our previous work, we showed that a large fraction of cortical responses to natural sounds could be predicted from one species to the other using these methods (Landemard et al., 2021).”

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      As mentioned above, interpretation of the invariance analyses using predictions from the spectrotemporal modulation encoding model hinges on the model's ability to accurately predict neural responses. Although Figure S5 suggests the encoding model was generally able to predict voxel responses accurately, the authors note in the introduction that, in human auditory cortex, this kind of tuning can explain responses in primary areas but not in non-primary areas (Norman-Haignere & McDermott, PLOS Biol. 2018). Indeed, the prediction accuracy histograms in Figure  S5C suggest a slight difference in the model's ability to predict responses in primary versus non-primary voxels. Additional analyses should be done to a) determine whether the prediction accuracies are meaningfully different across regions and b) examine whether controlling for prediction accuracy across regions (i.e., subselecting voxels across regions with matched prediction accuracy) affects the outcomes of the invariance analyses.

      The reviewer is correct: the spectrotemporal model tends to perform less well in human non-primary cortex. We believe this does not contradict our results but goes in the same direction: while there is a gradient in invariance in both ferrets and humans, this gradient is predicted by the spectrotemporal model in ferrets, but not in humans (possibly indeed because predictions are less good in human non-primary auditory cortex). Regardless of the mechanism, this result points to a difference across species. In ferrets, we found a significantly better prediction accuracy in VP (p=0.001, permutation test) and no differences between MEG and dPEG (p=0.89). In humans, prediction accuracy was slightly higher in primary compared to non-primary auditory cortex, but this effect was not significant (p=0.076). In both species, when matching prediction accuracy between regions, the gradients in invariance were preserved. We have added these analyses to the manuscript (Figure S5).

      A related concern is the procedure used to train the encoding model. From the methods, it appears that the model may have been fit using responses to both isolated and mixture sounds. If so, this raises questions about the interpretability of the invariance analyses. In particular, fitting the model to all stimuli, including mixtures, may inflate the apparent ability of the model to "explain" invariance, since it is effectively trained on the phenomenon it is later evaluated on. Put another way, if a voxel exhibits invariance, and the model is trained to predict the voxel's responses to all types of stimuli (both isolated sounds and mixtures), then the model must also show invariance to the extent it can accurately predict voxel responses, making the result somewhat circular. A more informative approach would be to train the encoding model only on responses to isolated sounds (or even better, a completely independent set of sounds), as this would help clarify whether any observed invariance is emergent from the model (i.e., truly a result of low-level tuning to spectrotemporal features) or simply reflects what it was trained to reproduce.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We have run an additional prediction using only the sounds presented in isolation, which replicates our main results (new Figure S6). We have added this control to the manuscript:

      “Results were similar if the model was fit solely on isolated sounds, excluding mixtures from the training set (Figure S6).”

      Finally, the interpretation of the foreground invariance results remains somewhat unclear. In ferrets (Figure 2I), the authors report relatively little foreground invariance, whereas in humans (Figure 5G), most participants appear to show relatively high levels of foreground invariance in primary auditory cortex (around 0.6 or greater). However, the paper does not explicitly address these apparent crossspecies differences. Moreover, the findings in ferrets seem at odds with other recent work in ferrets (Hamersky et al. 2025 J. Neurosci.), which shows that background sounds tend to dominate responses to mixtures, suggesting a prevalence of foreground invariance at the neuronal level. Although this comparison comes with the caveat that the methods differ substantially from those used in the current study, given the contrast with the findings of this paper, further discussion would nonetheless be valuable to help contextualize the current findings and clarify how they relate to prior work.

      We thank the reviewer for this point. While we found a trend for higher background invariance than foreground invariance in ferret primary auditory cortex, this difference was not significant and many voxels exhibit similar levels of background and foreground invariance (for example in Figure 2D, G). Thus, we do not think our results are inconsistent with Hamersky et al., 2025, though we agree the bias towards background sounds is not as strong in our data. This might indeed reflect differences in methodology, both in the signal that is measured (blood volume vs spikes), and the sound presentation paradigm. Our timescales are much slower and likely reflect responses post-adaptation, which might not be as true for Hamersky et al. We have added this point to the discussion, as well as a comment on the difference between ferrets and humans in foreground invariance in primary auditory cortex:

      “In ferrets, primary auditory cortex has been found to over-represent backgrounds in mixtures compared to foregrounds (Hamersky et al., 2025). In contrast, we found a slight, non-significant bias towards foregrounds in primary regions. This difference could be driven by a difference in timescales, as we looked at slower timescales in which adaptation might be more present, reducing the strength of background encoding. In humans, we found a much smaller gap between background and foreground invariance in primary auditory cortex, which was not predicted by the spectrotemporal model. Additional, more closely controlled experiments would be needed to confirm and understand this species difference.”

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) In the introduction, explain the relationship between background/foreground and stationarity/non-stationarity, and thus why stationary/nonstationary stimuli could be used to probe differences in background/foreground processing.

      We have added a sentence at the beginning of the results section to justify our choice (see public review).  

      (2) Avoid use of the background/foreground terminology in Results (and probably Methods).

      For consistency with previous literature, we decided to keep this terminology, though imperfect. We further justified our choice in the beginning of the Results section (see previous point).

      (3) In the Discussion, explain what the implications of the results are for background/foreground processing, and, importantly, highlight any caveats that result from stationarity not being a direct measure of background/foreground.

      We added a paragraph in the Discussion to highlight this point choice (see public review).

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Figure 1: Showing a silent period in the examples would help in understanding the fUS signal.

      In Figure 1D, we show the average timecourse of CBV time-locked to a change in sound (foreground or background, isolated or in a mixture). This is the average across all voxels and sounds. Thus, it would not be very informative to show an equivalent plot for a silent period, as it would look flat by definition. However, we updated the layout and legend of Figure 1 to make it clearer and avoid confusion.

      (2) "Responses were not homogenous" - would make more sense to say something like "responses were not spatially distributed".

      We removed these words which were indeed not necessary: “We found that reliable soundevoked responses were confined to the central part of ventral gyrus of the auditory cortex.”

      (3) Figure 2D: The maps shown in Figure 2D are difficult to understand for the noninitiated in fUS. At a minimum, labels should be added to indicate A-P, M-L, D-V. I cannot see the white square in the primary figure. An additional graphic would be helpful here to understand the geometry of the measurement.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out that reading these images is indeed an acquired skill. We added an annotated image of anatomy with indications of main features to guide the reader in Figure 1. We also added missing white squares. 

      (4) Figure 2F: Can the authors better justify why the summary statistic is shown for all three areas, but the individual data only compares primary vs. higher order?`

      We now show individual data for all three areas.

      (5) More methods information is needed to understand how recordings were stitched across days. Was any statistical modeling used to factor out the influence of day on overall response levels?

      We simply concatenated voxels recorded across different sessions and days. The slices were sampled randomly to avoid any systematic effect. Because different slices were sampled in different sessions, any spatial structure spanning several slices is unlikely to be artefactual. For instance, the map of average responses in Figure 2A shows a high level of continuity of spatial patterns across slices. This indicates that this pattern reflects a true underlying organization rather than session-specific noise. It also shows that the overall response levels are not affected by the day or recording session. We added a section in the Methods (“Combining different recordings”) to clarify this point:

      “The whole dataset consisted of multiple slices, each recorded in a different recording session. Slices to image on a given day were chosen at random to avoid any systematic bias. Responses were consistent across neighboring slices recorded on different sessions, as shown by the maps of average responses (Figure 2A, Figure S2) where any spatial continuity across different slices must reflect a true underlying signal in the absence of common noise.”

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Figures:

      The figures are generally very well done and visually appealing. However, I have a few suggestions and questions.

      a)  In Figure 1G, the delta CBV ranges from 0.5 to 1.5, although in subsequent figures (e.g., Figure 2D), the range is much larger (-15 to 45). Is it possible that the first figure is a proportion rather than a percentage, or is there some other explanation for the massive difference in scale? Not being very familiar with this measure, it was confusing.

      The same scale is used in both figures, the major difference being that in Figure 1D, we take the average over all voxels and sounds (for each category), which will include many nonresponsive voxels, and for responsive voxels, sounds that they do not respond a lot to. On the other hand, Figure 2D shows the response of a single, responsive voxel. Thus, the values it reaches for its preferred sounds (45%) are an extreme, which weighs only little in Figure 1D. We have changed the legend of Figure 1D to make this more explicit.

      b)  Similar to the first point, the strength of the correlations in the matrices of Figure 1E is very small (~ 0.05) compared to the test-retest reliabilities plotted in Figure 2B (~0.5). Again, I was confused by this large difference in scale.

      Two main factors explain the difference in values between Figure 1E and Figure 2B. First, in Figure 1B, each correlation is done on the average activity in a window of 0.3 s, opposed to 2.4 s in Figure 2B. More averaging leads to better SNR, which inevitably leads to higher testretest correlations. Second, in Figure 1B, the cross-correlation matrices are averaged across all responsive voxels without any criterion for reliability. On the other hand, Figure 2B show example voxels with good test-retest reliability. 

      c)  In Figure 2D, the example voxels are supposed to be shown in white. It appears that this example voxel is only shown for the non-primary voxel. Please be sure to add these voxels throughout the other panels and figures as well. 

      We fixed this mistake and added the example voxel in all panels.

      d)  Why do the invariance results (e.g., Figure 2F) for individual animals combine across dPEG and VP, while the overall results (across all animals) split things across all three regions? The results in Table 2 do, in fact, provide this data. Upon further examination of the data in Table 2, it seems like there is only a significant difference between background invariance between dPEG and VP for one of the two animals, and that this might be what drives the effect when pooling across all animals. This seems important to both show visually in the figure and to potentially discuss. There is still very clearly a difference between primary and non-primary, but whether there is a real difference between dPEG and VP seems more unclear.

      We added the values for single animals in the plot and highlighted this limitation in the text:

      “While background invariance was overall highest in VP, the differences within non-primary areas were more variable across animals (see table 2).”

      e)  Again, as in Figure 2F, the cross symbols seem like a bad choice as markers since the vertical components of the cross are suggestive of the error of the measurement. However, no error is actually plotted in these figures. I recommend using a different marker and including some measure of error in the invariance plots.

      We replaced the crosses with circles to avoid confusion. The measure of error is provided by the representation of values for single animals.

      f) The caption for Figure 4C states that each line corresponds to one animal, but does not precisely state what this line represents. Is this the median or something?

      Each line indeed represents the median across voxels for one animal. We added this information to the legend.

      g)  In Figure 5, the captions for panels D and E are swapped.

      This has now been corrected.

      (2) Discussion:

      (a) In the paragraph on methodological differences, it mentions that the fMRI voxel size is around 2 mm. This may be true in general, but given the comparison to Kell & McDermott 2019, the voxel size should reflect that used in their study (1 mm).

      The reviewer might refer to this sentence from the methods of Kell et al., 2019: “T1weighted anatomical images were collected in each participant (1-mm isotropic voxels) for alignment and cortical surface reconstruction.” However, this does not correspond to the resolution of the functional data, which is 2 mm, as mentioned a bit further in the Methods:  “In-plane resolution was 2 × 2 mm (96 × 96 matrix), and slice thickness was 2.8 mm with a 10% gap, yielding an effective voxel size of 2 × 2 × 3.08 mm.”

      (b) In the next paragraph on the control of attention, it mentions that attentional differences could play a role. However, in Kell & McDermott 2019, they manipulated attention (attend visual versus attend auditory) and found that it did not substantially affect the observed pattern invariance. I suppose it could potentially affect the degree to which an encoding model could explain the invariance. This seems important, and given that the data was already collected, it could be worth it to analyze that data.

      As the reviewer points out, Kell et al. 2019 ran an additional experiment in which they manipulated auditory vs. visual attention. However, the auditory task was just based on loudness and ensured that the participants were awake and paying attention to the stimuli, but not specifically to the foreground or background. This type of attention did not lead to changes in the observed patterns of invariance, which might have been the case for selective attention to backgrounds or foregrounds in the mixture. Given that these manipulations were not done in the ferret experiments, we chose to not include the analysis of this dataset in the scope of this paper. However, future work investigating that topic further would indeed be of interest.

      (c) The mention of "a convolutional neural network trained to recognize digits in noise" should make more obvious that this is visual recognition rather than auditory recognition.

      We clarified this sentence to make clear that the recognition is visual and not auditory: “For instance, in a convolutional neural network trained to visually recognize digits in different types of noise, when local feedback is implemented, early layers encode noise properties, while later layers represent clean signal.”

      (d) Finally, one explanation of the results in the discussion is that "primary auditory areas could be recruited to maintain background representations, enabling downstream cortical regions to use these representations to specifically suppress background information and enhance foreground representations." This "background-related information" being used to "facilitate further extraction of foregrounds" is similar to what is argued in Hicks & McDermott PNAS 2024.

      We thank the reviewer for suggesting this relevant reference and added it in this paragraph of the discussion.

      (3) Methods:

      In the "Cross-correlation matrices" section, it mentions that time-averaged responses from 2.4 to 4.8 s were used. It would be helpful to provide an explanation of why this particular time window was used. Additionally, I wondered whether one could look at adaptation type effects (e.g., that of Khalighinejad et al., 2019) or whether fUSI does not offer this kind of temporal precision?

      The effects shown in Khalighinejad et al., 2019, are indeed likely too fast to be observed with our methods. However, there are still dynamics in the fUSI signal and in its invariance (Figure S1). Each individual combination of foreground and background is presented for 4.8 s (Figure 1B). Therefore, we chose the range 2.4-4.8 s as the biggest window we could use (to improve SNR) while minimizing contamination from the previous or next sound (indeed, blood volume typically lags neuronal activity by 1.5-2 s). We added this precision to the methods.

      In the "Human analyses" section, it is very unclear which set of data was used from Kell & McDermott 2019. For example, that paper contains 4 different experiments, none of which has 7 subjects. Upon closer reading, it seems that only 7 of the 11 participants from Experiment 1 also heard the background sounds in isolation (thus enabling the foreground invariance analyses). However, they stated that there were only 3 female participants in that experiment, while you state that you used data from 7 females. It would be helpful to double-check this and to more clearly state exactly which participants (i.e., from which experiment) were used and why (e.g., why not use data from Experiment 4 in the visual task/attention condition?).

      We added a sentence to clarify which datasets were used: “Specifically, we used data from Experiment 1 which provided the closest match to our experimental conditions, and only considered the last 7 subjects that heard both the foregrounds and the backgrounds in isolation, in addition to the mixtures.” 

      It was a mistake to mention that it was all female, as the original dataset has 3 females and 8 males, of which we used 7 without any indication of their sex. Thus, we removed this mention from the text.

      In the "Statistical testing" section, why were some tests done with 1000 permutations/shuffles while others were done with 2000?

      We homogenized and used 1000 permutations/shuffles for all statistical tests.

      (4) Miscellany:

      (a) The Hamersky et al. 2023 preprint has recently been published (referenced in the public review), and so you could consider updating the reference.

      This reference has now been updated.

      (b) There are a few borderline statistical tests that could use a bit more nuance. For example (on page 4), "In primary auditory cortex (MEG), there was no significant difference between values of foreground invariance and background invariance (p = 0.063, obtained by randomly permuting the sounds' background and foreground labels, 1000 times)." This test is quite close to being significant, and this might be acknowledged.

      We emphasized the trend to nuance the interpretation of these results: “In primary auditory cortex (MEG), foreground invariance was slightly lower than background invariance, although this difference was not significant (p=0.063, obtained by randomly permuting the sounds' background and foreground labels, 1000 times).”

      (5) Potential typos:

      (a)   Should the title be "natural sound mixtures" instead of "natural sounds mixtures"?

      (b) The caption for Figure 1 says "We imaged the whole auditory through successive slices across several days." I believe this should the "the whole auditory [cortex]." c) In the first paragraph of the discussion, there is a sentence ending in "...are segregated in hemody-namic signal." I believe this should be "hemody-namic signal."

      These errors are now all corrected.

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    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an exciting, comprehensive paper that demonstrates the role of GATA4 on OA-like changes in chondrocytes. The authors present elegant reverse translational experiments that justify this mechanism and demonstrate the sufficiency of GATA4 in a mouse model of osteoarthritis (DMM), where GATA4 drove cartilage degeneration and pain in a manner that was significantly worse than DMM alone. This could pave the way for new therapies for OA that account for both structural changes and pain.

      Strengths:

      (1) GATA4 was identified from human chondrocytes.

      (2) IHC and sequencing confirmed GATA4 presence.

      (3) Activation of SMADs is clearly shown in vitro with GATA4 overexpression.

      (4) The role of GATA4 was functionally assessed in vivo using the mouse DMM model, where the authors uncovered that GATA4 worsens OA structure and hyperalgesia in male mice.

      (5) It is interesting that GATA4 is largely known to be found in cardiac cells and to have a role in cardiac repair, metabolism, and inflammation, among other things listed by the authors in the discussion (in liver, lung, pancreas). What could this new knowledge of GATA4 mean for OA as a potentially systemically mediated disease, where cardiac disease and metabolic syndrome are often co-morbid?

      Weaknesses:

      (1) It would be useful to explain why GATA4 was chosen over HIF1a, which was the most differentially expressed.

      (2) In Figure 5, it would be useful to demonstrate the non-surgical or naive limbs to help contextualize OARSI scores and knee hyperalgesia changes.

      (3) While there appear to be GATA4 small molecule inhibitors in various stages of development that could be used to assess the effects in age-related OA, those experiments are out of scope for the current study.

      Comments on revised version:

      I do not have further comments. Thank you for addressing the previously mentioned concerns.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper is well written and investigates the cross-species insemination of fish eggs with mouse sperm. I have a few major and minor comments.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are well executed and could provide valuable insights into the complex mechanisms of fertilization in both species. I found the information presented to be very interesting,

      Thank you.

      Weaknesses:

      The rationale of some of the experiments is not well defined.

      Thank you. In the revised manuscript, we have clarified and expanded the rationale behind each experiment to better highlight the specific questions being addressed and how each approach contributes to our overall investigation. These clarifications have been integrated throughout the Results and Discussion sections. We provide detailed rationale in our point-by-point responses to both reviewers, outlining how each experimental design was motivated by prior findings, hypotheses, or specific gaps in knowledge. We hope these revisions make the experimental logic and progression better defined and more compelling.

      Major Comments:

      (1) Figure 5

      I do not understand the rationale for performing experiments using CatSper-null sperm and CD9-null oocytes. It is well established that CatSper-null sperm are unable to penetrate the zona pellucida (ZP), so the relevance of this approach is unclear.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. This experiment was conducted as the basis to then evaluate the contributions of progressive and hyperactivated motility to the ability of mouse sperm to locate and traverse the zebrafish micropyle. In earlier experiments (Figures 1 and 3), we assessed whether sperm-micropyle interaction was robust by comparing it to binding to the mouse zona pellucida and testing whether both interactions persisted after washing, which is standard approach to distinguish specific binding from non-specific adherence (Avella et al., 2014; Baibakov et al., 2012). Thus, we extended this analysis to CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm; CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm were still capable of binding the zona pellucida comparably to heterozygous controls, though they were unable to cross the zona of Cd9<sup>Null</sup> eggs. These observations served as a validation step for the use of CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm for downstream micropyle interaction assays. Thus, we proceeded to test whether hyperactivated motility, absent in CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm, is required for locating and crossing the micropyle.

      It is indeed well established that CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm are unable to penetrate the zona pellucida, and previous studies have typically used the absence of fertilized eggs as a readout. However, failed fertilization may result from multiple factors, including impaired sperm motility, reduced capacity to bind the zona pellucida, or an inability to penetrate it. To our knowledge, no study has quantitatively assessed the number of CatSper-deficient sperm that successfully bind, cross the zona and reach the perivitelline space. To address this, we first used normal oocytes for sperm binding and Cd9<sup>Null</sup> oocytes (Le Naour et al., 2000), which allow direct quantification of sperm accumulation in the perivitelline space. We have 7included a detailed explanation in the Results to clarify this point, lines 352-365 and 376-369.

      (2) Micropyle penetration and sperm motility

      CatSper-null sperm are reportedly unable to cross the micropyle, but this could be due to their reduced motility rather than a lack of hyperactivation per se. Were these experiments conducted using capacitated or non-capacitated spermatozoa? What was the observed motility of CatSper-null sperm during these assays? Clarifying these conditions is essential to avoid drawing incorrect conclusions from the results.

      Thank you for raising these points. Under our IVF conditions, qualitative observations confirmed that CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm displayed progressive motility, maintained sufficient progressive motility during the first hour post-insemination and exhibited zona binding efficiency comparable to that of CatSper1<sup>Het</sup> controls (Figure 5A and B). This is consistent with previous reports showing that within the first 90 minutes of sperm incubation in media, approximately 20% of CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm preserve motility (Qi et al., 2007). Given previous studies indicating that 15–35% of sperm undergo hyperactivation within 90 minutes (Goodson et al., 2011), and considering that 100,000 progressively motile sperm were used for insemination, we estimate that approximately 3,000 hyperactivated CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm were present in the cross-species insemination dish (mouse sperm x zebrafish eggs). Based on these numbers, we would have expected at least some sperm to locate the micropyle if hyperactivation were not required for its detection and entry. Nevertheless, CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm were detected in proximity to the micropyle canal, its opening, or within the inter-chorion space (ICS). These observations support the conclusion that the inability ofCatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm to locate and enter the micropyle is attributable to their failure to hyperactivate. Also, all sperm used in these assays were exposed to identical capacitating conditions (HTF/HSA, 37 °C, 5% CO2). We now clarify this in the Methods, line 624, and we added more rationale under the Results, lines 361-365 and in the Discussion, lines 470-483.

      (3) Rheotaxis and micropyle navigation

      Previous studies have shown that CatSper-null sperm fail to undergo rheotaxis. Could this defect be related to their inability to locate and penetrate the micropyle? Exploring a potential shared mechanism could be informative.

      Thank you for raising this interesting point. Indeed, homozygous mutant mice lacking expression of a different component of the CatSper channel, CatSperz, show reduced rheotactic efficiency and severe subfertility (Chung et al., 2017). We cannot exclude that complete lack of CatSper as shown in CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> mice could lead to reduced rheotactic efficiency, hence we include this interpretation in the Discussion (lines 484-486).

      (4) Lines 61-74

      This paragraph omits important information regarding acrosomal exocytosis, which occurs prior to sperm-egg fusion. Including this detail would strengthen the discussion.

      Thank you. We have revised the text in the discussion to describe the process of acrosome exocytosis, and its relevance for fertilization (lines 504-518).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Garibova et al. investigated the conservation of sperm recognition and interaction with the egg envelope in two groups of distantly related animals: mammals (mouse) and fish (zebrafish). Previous work and key physiological differences between these two animal groups strongly suggest that mouse sperm would be incapable of interaction with the zebrafish egg envelope (chorion) and its constituent proteins, though homologous to the mammalian zona pellucida (ZP). Indeed, the authors showed that mouse sperm do not bind recombinant zebrafish ZP proteins nor the intact chorion. Surprisingly, however, mouse sperm are able to locate and bind to the zebrafish micropyle, a specialized canal within the chorion that serves as the egg's entry point for sperm. This study suggests that sperm attraction to the egg might be highly conserved from fish to mammals and depends on the presence of a still unknown glycosylated protein within the micropyle. The authors further demonstrate that mouse sperm are able to enter the micropyle and accumulate within the intrachorionic space, potentially through a CatSper-dependent mechanism.

      Strengths:

      The authors convincingly demonstrate that mouse sperm do not bind zebrafish ZP proteins or the chorion. Furthermore, they make the interesting observation that mouse sperm are able to locate and enter the zebrafish micropyle in an MP-dependent manner, which is quite unexpected given the large evolutionary distance between these species, the many physiological differences between mouse and zebrafish gametes, and the largely different modes of both fertilization and reproduction in these species. This may indicate that the sperm chemoattractant in the egg is conserved between mammals and fish; however, whether zebrafish sperm are attracted to mouse eggs was not tested.

      Thank you. We performed an additional experiment with fish sperm used to inseminate ovulated mouse eggs, and results are reported in lines 183-187 and in Supplementary Figure 2.

      Weaknesses:

      The key weakness of this study lies in the rationale behind the overall investigation. In mammals, the zona pellucida (ZP) has been implicated in binding sperm in a taxon-specific manner, such that human sperm are incapable of binding the mouse ZP. Indeed, work by the corresponding author showed that this specificity is mediated by the N-terminal region of the ZP protein ZP2 (Avella et al., 2014). The N-termini of human and mouse ZP2 share 48% identity, which is higher than the overall identity between mouse and zebrafish ZP2, with the latter ortholog entirely lacking the N-terminal domain that is essential for sperm binding to the ZP. Given this known specificity for mouse vs. human sperm-ZP binding, it does not follow that mouse sperm would bind ZP proteins from not only a species that is much more distantly related, but also one that is not even a mammal, the zebrafish. Furthermore, the fish chorion does not play a role in sperm binding at all, while the mammalian ZP can bind sperm at any location. On the contrary, the zebrafish chorion prevents polyspermy by limiting sperm entry to the single micropyle.

      We thank the reviewer for this detailed comment. In this study, our goal was precisely that one of validating the hypothesis that mouse sperm would not bind either recombinant fish ZP proteins or the chorion; in addition, we found it important to examine the observation that mouse sperm could detect the micropyle. We further elaborated this rationale in the Introduction (lines 93-100).

      In addition, though able to provide some information regarding the broad conservation of sperm-egg interaction mechanisms, the biological relevance of these findings is difficult to describe. Fish and mammals are not only two very distinct and distantly related animal groups but also employ opposite modes of fertilization and reproduction (external vs. internal, oviparous vs viviparous). Fish gametes interact in a very different environment compared to mammals and lack many typically mammalian features of fertilization (e.g., sperm capacitation, presence of an acrosome, interaction with the female reproductive tract), making it difficult to make any physiologically relevant claims from this study. While this study may indicate conserved mechanisms of sperm attraction to the egg, the identity of the molecular players involved is not investigated. With this knowledge, the reader is forced to question the motivation behind much of the study.

      We thank the reviewer for their perspective, and we appreciate the opportunity to further elaborate on our rationale. As outlined in our Results and Discussion sections, a growing body of evidence supports the presence of conserved molecular players and signaling pathways involved in gamete interaction across species with diverse reproductive strategies. While zebrafish and mice do differ in their fertilization environments and modes of reproduction, these differences may not necessarily exclude the possibility of conserved molecular mechanisms underlying gamete interaction. For example, the CatSper calcium channel, which plays a key role in regulating sperm motility and hyperactivation, is conserved across a broad range of taxa—from echinoderms such as sea urchins (external fertilizers)(Seifert et al., 2015) to mammals, including mice and humans (internal fertilizers)(Lishko and Mannowetz, 2018). Moreover, sperm from some fish species possess acrosomes that undergo exocytosis prior to fertilization while sperm cross the micropyle (Psenicka et al., 2010). Also, in ovoviviparous species with internal fertilization, such as the black rockfish, sperm do undergo molecular changes while in the female reproductive tract—including immunomodulatory adaptations, glycocalyx remodeling, and interactions with ovarian cells—enabling the sperm with a longer-term survival and a selective persistence that ensures only the fittest sperm can successfully fertilize eggs (Li et al., 2024). As per the mammalian capacitation, it is broadly defined as the process during which sperm undergo hyperactivation (Yanagimachi, 1970), and acquire the ability to undergo the acrosome exocytosis, making the sperm competent for gamete fusion and fertilization (Bhakta et al., 2019; Puga Molina et al., 2018; Yanagimachi, 1957; Yanagimachi et al., 2017). Of note, acrosome exocytosis or changes in sperm motility are not exclusive to internal fertilizers. For example, as we cite in our manuscript (and as just stated above), acrosome exocytosis has been described to occur as sturgeon sperm cross the micropyle (Psenicka et al., 2010). As per changes in flagellar motility, investigations in the Pacific herring (Clupea sp.) demonstrated that sperm remain nearly immotile upon release into seawater and only initiate motility when approaching the micropyle region of the egg (Yanagimachi, 1957; Yanagimachi et al., 2017). In other fish, including bitterling and zebrafish, further enhancement in sperm motility is observed as sperm approach the micropyle area (Suzuki, 1958; Yanagimachi et al., 2017). These studies suggest that functional equivalents of capacitation may exist across taxa.

      We interpret the observation that mouse sperm can locate and enter the micropyle as suggesting that underlying guidance mechanisms may be more broadly conserved across distant species than previously recognized. We have now elaborated on these points in the revised Discussion (lines 531-552), and we hope the motivation behind our study is now more clearly articulated.

      During fertilization in fish, the sperm enters the micropyle and subsequently, the egg, as it is simultaneously activated by exposure to water. During egg activation, the chorion lifts as it separates from the egg and fills with water. This mechanism prevents supernumerary sperm from entering the egg after the successfully fertilizing sperm has bound and fused. In this study, the authors show that mouse sperm enter the micropyle and accumulate in the intrachorionic space. Whether any sperm successfully entered the egg is not addressed, and the status of egg activation is not reported.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s detailed comments and the opportunity to elaborate on this important aspect for our cross-insemination assay. We interpret the reviewer’s reference to “sperm entering the egg” as pertaining to sperm adhesion to the oocyte plasma membrane followed by fusion with the egg cell, two separate steps regulated by different molecular players for sperm-egg plasma membrane adhesion (Bianchi et al., 2014; Fujihara et al., 2021; Herberg et al., 2018; Inoue et al., 2005) and for fusion. It is important to note that proteins mediating gamete fusion are still unidentified in fish and mammals (Bianchi and Wright, 2020; Deneke and Pauli, 2021).

      In our cross-species insemination experiments, zebrafish oocytes were maintained in Hank’s solution to limit spontaneous activation; however, as the reviewer correctly notes, activation likely occurred upon exposure to HTF. While this model does not recapitulate full fertilization events, it serves as a platform to explore whether mammalian sperm can detect (within the scope of our study) and respond (future studies) to putative evolutionarily conserved signals, such as those guiding fish sperm toward the micropyle.

      While investigating cross-species sperm–oocyte fusion was not within the scope of this study and would require a distinct set of experimental approaches, we believe this question is an important one. However, we do not expect our platform to be informative for evaluating sperm adhesion to the fish oolemma or for enabling cross-species gamete fusion. In our assays focused on sperm-micropyle interaction, Hoechst staining of nuclei of transgenically-tagged acrosome sperm revealed no evidence of sperm adhesion to or fusion with the fish egg membrane (Figure 4D). Also, molecular incompatibilities may further prevent this interaction: in zebrafish, the Ly6/uPAR family protein Bouncer is expressed exclusively in the egg and is necessary for sperm–egg membrane adhesion (Herberg et al., 2018). Recent studies in zebrafish and mice have shown that a conserved trimeric complex composed of Izumo1, Spaca6, and Tmem81 on the sperm surface is required for mediating adhesion to the oocyte membrane by interacting with the mammalian oocyte receptor Izumo1R (also known as JUNO) or the zebrafish oocyte receptor Bouncer (Deneke et al., 2024). One would hypothesize that for mouse sperm to adhere to the zebrafish egg membrane, the mouse Izumo1-Spaca6-Tmem81 complex would need to establish binding with Bouncer. To explore this possibility, we performed AlphaFold2-Multimer structural predictions and docking analyses to mimic an interaction between mouse Izumo1-Spaca6-Tmem81 and zebrafish Bouncer, using mouse Izumo1-Spaca6-Tmem81 and Juno or zebrafish Izumo1-Spaca6-Tmem81 and Bouncer as positive controls. We observed low binding affinity between zebrafish Bouncer and the mouse trimeric complex (Izumo1, Spaca6, and Tmem81), as indicated by low ipTM scores and high predicted aligned error (PAE) values. These findings suggest that the mouse complex is unlikely to form an interaction with Bouncer (now shown in Suppl. Figure 7). These predictions were consistent with our observations that no sperm were found adhering or fusing to the egg cell. We describe methods and results in the supplementary files (Supporting Info, lines 53-66) and in the result sections (lines 335-339).

      In Supplementary Videos 3-4, the egg shown has been activated for some time, as evident by the separation of yolk and cytoplasm, yet the chorion is only partially expanded (likely due to mouse IVF conditions). How multiple sperm were able to enter the micropyle but presumably not the egg is not addressed, yet this suggests that the zebrafish mechanism of blocking polyspermy (fertilization by multiple sperm) is not effective for mouse sperm or is rendered ineffective due to mouse IVF conditions. The authors do not discuss these observations in the context of either species' physiological process of fertilization, highlighting the lack of biological context in interpreting the results.

      Thank you for raising this important point. One model for mammalian gamete recognition at the zona supports the notion that mouse sperm can penetrate extracellular matrices as long as sperm can bind to them, and binding is dependent on the cleavage status of ZP2. Zonae surrounding unfertilized mouse eggs present uncleaved ZP2 and these zonae support sperm binding. After gamete fusion, the cortical granules release ovastacin which cleaves ZP2 at the N-terminus, and consequently, zonae presenting cleaved ZP2 no longer support sperm binding. This mechanism acts as block to zona binding and prevents further crossing (Bhakta et al., 2019). Indeed, fertilized mouse eggs or 2-cell embryos surrounded by a zona containing uncleaved ZP2 support de novo sperm binding, and supernumerary sperm cross the zona and accumulate in the perivitelline space, unable to fuse with the fertilized oocyte plasma membrane or blastomere cells (Baibakov et al., 2012, 2007; Burkart et al., 2012; Gahlay et al., 2010). Thus, because under our experimental conditions, mouse sperm could interact with the micropyle opening, we interpret these findings to suggest that once interaction occurs at the micropyle opening, mouse sperm are capable of crossing it, even under conditions where the micropyle may be detached from the oocyte due to oocyte activation. Therefore, our data indicates that mouse sperm may be able to bypass the mechanism of zebrafish oocytes blocking multiple sperm to pass through the micropyle, even after oocyte activation. This point has now been incorporated into the revised Discussion (lines 425-441).

      The authors further show that the zebrafish micropyle does not trigger the acrosome reaction in mouse sperm. Whether the acrosome reacts is not correlated with a sperm's ability to cross the micropyle opening, as both acrosome-intact and acrosome-reacted sperm were observed within the intrachorionic space. While the acrosome reaction is a key event during mammalian fertilization and is required for sperm to fertilize the egg, zebrafish sperm do not contain an acrosome. Thus, these results are particularly difficult to interpret biologically, bringing into question whether this observation has biological relevance or is a byproduct of egg activation/chorion lifting that indirectly draws sperm into the chorion.

      We thank the reviewer for raising this point and we appreciate the opportunity to elaborate on the biological relevance of this experiment. Our motivation to assess acrosome status in mouse sperm following entry into the zebrafish micropyle stemmed from the following biological considerations.  In fish species such as the sturgeon, sperm present an acrosome and undergo acrosome exocytosis while passing through the micropyle, before gamete fusion (Alavi et al., 2012; Psenicka et al., 2010). By contrast, zebrafish sperm lack an acrosome, raising the hypothesis that the zebrafish micropyle may not be able to trigger acrosome exocytosis. However, this possibility has not been experimentally tested. We therefore considered it important to investigate whether passage through the zebrafish micropyle induces acrosome exocytosis in mouse sperm. We have revised the Discussion to better clarify the rationale behind the experiment as well as the interpretation of the findings (lines 504-518). As per the chorion lifting indirectly drawing sperm into the chorion, we have not observed this phenomenon.

      The final experiments regarding CatSper1's role in mediating mouse sperm entry into the micropyle/chorion are not convincing. As no molecular interactions are described or perturbed, the reader cannot be sure whether the sperm's failure to enter is due to signaling via CatSper1 or whether the overall failure to undergo hyperactivation limits sperm motility such that the mutant sperm can no longer find and enter the zebrafish micropyle. Indeed, in Figure 5E, no CatSper1 mutant sperm are visible near any part of the egg, suggesting that overall motility is impaired, and this is not a phenotype specific to interactions with the micropyle.

      We appreciate the comment and the opportunity to further elaborate on the rationale of this experiment. While our data demonstrates a lack ofCatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm accumulation within the micropyle and ICS, we appreciate that this may be interpreted as the result of general motility defects, rather than a specific failure in undergoing hyperactivation and micropyle recognition. CatSper1<sup>Null</sup>  sperm are known to lack hyperactivated motility and exhibit a progressive loss of forward motility over time. After 90 minutes, only ~20% of CatSper1<sup>Null</sup>l sperm remain motile, compared to over 70% in fertile sperm (Qi et al., 2007). Of note, under our IVF conditions, CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm retained sufficient progressive motility during the first hour post-insemination to bind the zona pellucida with comparable efficiency to CatSper1<sup>Het</sup> controls. Based on prior reports indicating that 15–35% of sperm exhibit hyperactivation by 90 minutes (Goodson et al., 2011), and considering that we inseminated with 100,000 progressively motile sperm, we estimate that approximately 3,000 hyperactivated CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm were present in the dish. Yet, none were observed near the micropyle canal, its opening, or within the ICS. This led us to conclude that failure to hyperactivate underlies the inability of CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm to reach and traverse the micropyle. Also, we appreciate that identifying the molecular components of the micropyle would allow direct testing of whether the CatSper channel is activated in response to micropyle-associated signals. Indeed, no targeted perturbation of molecular interaction regulating micropyle recognition was performed in this study, as the molecular identity of the zebrafish micropyle guidance cue remains unknown. Efforts to identify and characterize this factor are ongoing in our lab and lie outside the scope of the current work. Therefore, throughout the manuscript, we have clarified that it is the failure to undergo hyperactivation, rather than the absence of CatSper per se, that limits the ability of sperm to locate and traverse the micropyle. The rationale for the experiment, the interpretation of our findings, and relevant future directions have been further elaborated in the revised Abstract, Impact Statement and Discussion (lines 40-41; 46-47; 343-365; 376-379; 389-399; 470-486).

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor Comments

      (1) Figure numbering

      There appear to be inconsistencies in the figure references. For example, what is referred to as Figure 3F in the text is actually Figure 4F. Please review and correct all figure labels for accuracy.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have carefully reviewed the manuscript and corrected all figure references throughout the text. Also, for better flow and coherence, we have moved the paragraph describing the videos to the end of the Results section titled "Mouse sperm recognize the micropylar region of fish oocytes." Previously, the callout of panels in Figure 3 was out of order (3A, 3B, 3E, 3C, 3D), and this reorganization also helps maintain logical progression through the figure panels.

      (2) Figure 5 terminology:

      The term "normal" sperm should be replaced with "CatSper heterozygous (Het)" sperm to avoid confusion and improve precision.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful suggestion. We have revised the terminology in Figure 5 and throughout the manuscript, replacing “normal” sperm with “CatSper1 heterozygous (Het)”

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      In addition to my comments in the public review, I would encourage the authors to consider the following suggestions:

      The authors show that mouse sperm can find and enter the fish micropyle, and that this depends on the presence of MP. To better assess sperm binding to the micropyle region, the number of sperm binding to the micropyle vs. non-micropyle chorion should be clearly quantified, as well as the percentage of sperm that enter the micropyle compared to the total used for insemination. The authors state several times throughout the text that a "subpopulation" of mouse sperm finds and enters the micropyle, but it would be more precise and informative to give a percentage.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We have now reported also the number of sperm bound to the other regions of the chorion (away; lines 231-233), as well as the percentage of sperm that entered the micropyle relative to the total number used for insemination (lines 276-279).

      To ensure that all sperm are inside the chorion, the egg should be removed from the insemination dish, washed thoroughly, and then the chorion should be torn open to definitively show that the sperm were indeed inside.

      We thank the reviewer for these excellent suggestions. As per ensuring that the sperm are inside the ICS, (as shown now in Figures 4A, F, G , Supplementary Figure 6 and Supplementary Movies 3–5), the inseminated oocytes were thoroughly washed prior to imaging to ensure that only sperm located inside the chorion were visualized (as described in the Methods, lines 646-648). In addition, to confirm the spatial localization of sperm within the ICS, we are now including additional TEM images showing sperm in the ICS (Figure 4G, right panel). Also, we generated orthogonal views using ZEN Lite software (Zeiss, Germany) from a z-stack encompassing the full volume of the chorion, ICS, and oocyte (added in the supplementary materials, as Supplementary Figure 6). These views display three focal planes: the surface of the WGA-stained chorion, the middle of the ICS, and the oocyte plasma membrane. Sperm nuclei stained with Hoechst are clearly visible below the chorion surface and above the oocyte plasma membrane, confirming their localization within the ICS. Additionally, in a separate set of experiments, as recommended by this reviewer, we mechanically disrupted the chorion and consistently detected sperm within the ICS. This procedure, however, was technically challenging: upon disruption, the chorion often collapsed onto the oocyte, and during the extraction process, sperm were sometimes displaced. As a result, it was not always possible to determine with complete confidence whether the sperm had originally been located inside or outside the chorion. However, we hope that the additional TEM and confocal images (Figure 4G and Supplementary Figure 6) offer further support for the localization of sperm within the ICS.

      I would further suggest that they examine the micropyle opening after the entry of multiple sperm, as well as the dynamics of egg activation during insemination with mouse sperm.

      Thank you. We now include one additional TEM image capturing the full structure of a micropyle that was traversed by multiple mouse sperm (shown in Figure 4G, left panel).

      At what point does the micropyle detach from the egg surface? Live imaging of this process with a confocal microscope would be very informative.

      During live imaging, the interval between placing the oocyte in the imaging dish, replacement of Hank’s solution with HTF and the addition of sperm, followed by the initiation of video acquisition, is approximately 2 to 3 min. By this time, the ICS is already apparent (Supplementary Video 2), although the micropyle appears to remain adherent to the egg cell. Partial detachment of the micropyle from the egg cell begins around 6–7 minutes after imaging starts and continues progressively over time. We provide time-lapse imaging frames to show the micropyle detachment under mouse IVF conditions (Supplementary Figure 5).

      Along the same lines, sperm should be doubly labeled with an acrosome-independent marker, i.e., a live DNA stain or MitoTracker. Then the authors could track if any sperm are actually able to enter the egg itself, which would be highly unlikely but an important detail to confirm.

      Thank you for pointing this out. In our assays designed to study sperm–micropyle interactions, Hoechst staining of nuclei in transgenically labeled acrosome sperm showed no indication of sperm adhesion to, or fusion with, the zebrafish egg cell (Figure 4D).

      Line 242, 282: The text should refer to Figure 4, not 3. Please make sure all figure references correspond to the correct figure and panel.

      Thank you for bringing this to our attention. We have carefully reviewed the manuscript and corrected the reference to Figure 4, along with all other figure and panel citations to ensure they accurately correspond to the correct content. Also, to improve the overall flow, we relocated the paragraph describing the videos to the end of the Results section titled "Mouse sperm recognize the micropylar region of fish oocytes". This change also helped correct the sequence of figure panel references, which were previously cited out of order (i.e., 3A, 3B, 3E, 3C, 3D).

      Line 244: The authors quantify sperm that are "away" from the micropyle, but this is not clearly defined. This should be given as a set radius or distance from the center (e.g., in microns). If the sperm are still motile, can this be accurately measured?

      We thank the reviewer for this valuable suggestion. We have now defined “away from the micropyle” as a distance greater than 160 µm from the center of the micropyle. This measurement was determined using confocal z-stack projections of fixed samples. These details have been added to the revised Methods section (lines 670-674).

      To strengthen the conclusion that the sperm chemoattractant is indeed conserved from fish to mammals, the authors could show that zebrafish sperm are also able to find/approach mouse eggs. Even more compelling would be to show the same is true for other species combinations. As it stands, the choice of comparing mouse and zebrafish does not seem scientifically motivated but rather due to their availability.

      We thank the reviewer for this important suggestion. To test whether zebrafish sperm are capable of binding to the mammalian zona pellucida, we conducted the suggested experiment: ovulated, cumulus-free mouse oocytes were placed in water and incubated with zebrafish sperm. We did not observe any zebrafish sperm bound to the mouse zona pellucida, consistent with the hypothesis that zebrafish sperm do not recognize or interact with mammalian zonae or ZP proteins. This has now been added in the Results (lines 183-187) and shown in Supplementary Figure 2. We interpret these findings as in cross-species insemination assays, reciprocity in sperm-egg interaction is not always observed. For example, while human sperm bind only to human zonae and not to mouse zonae, mouse sperm are able to bind both mouse and human zonae (Avella et al., 2014; Baibakov et al., 2012; Bedford, 1977). This asymmetry may reflect species-specific adaptations in sperm-egg recognition. We have now added this point to the revised Discussion to clarify the rationale and context of our approach (lines 416-423).

      As per the choice of experimental models, while we agree that testing additional species combinations would broaden the scope of the findings, the choice to compare mouse and zebrafish was not solely based on availability. Rather, it was motivated by the opportunity to examine sperm guidance across two evolutionary distant vertebrates. This contrast allows us to seek for potential conservation of structural or molecular cues involved in gamete interaction. Additionally, both zebrafish and mouse offer extensive gene editing, blotting and imaging reagents, which are particularly valuable should future studies aim to identify and functionally disrupt genes encoding micropyle-associated proteins and their putative orthologs in mammals.

      For the CatSper experiment, I would suggest that the authors repeat this experiment with another mouse sperm mutant that is known to have reduced/altered motility. With the current data, I do not believe the failure to find/enter the micropyle is necessarily CatSper-specific. Because we do not know what the sperm interacts with in the micropyle or what the MP interacts with on the sperm, the signaling pathway cannot be tested, making other controls necessary for these results to be meaningful.

      Thank you for highlighting this important point. A wide range of mouse models with sperm motility defects exhibit subfertility or infertility due to structural abnormalities in the axoneme or midpiece rigidity. (Miyata et al., 2024). These defects often result in impaired progressive motility, failure to reach the zona pellucida, or inability to bind or penetrate it. In contrast, we could test and validate that CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> sperm display preserved early progressive motility but fail to transition into hyperactivated motility, making them particularly well suited for specifically assessing the role of hyperactivation in sperm navigation toward and entry into the micropyle. Taken together, these points, along with those discussed in our response to the public review, led us to conclude that the CatSper1<sup>Null</sup> model provides the most biologically relevant context currently available to assess the role of hyperactivation in guiding sperm to the micropyle.

      The authors could greatly strengthen the discussion by addressing the key points I raised in the public review, particularly in terms of interpreting these results in the context of each species' physiological mode of fertilization.

      We thank the reviewer for this important recommendation. We have carefully revised the Discussion to address the key points raised in the public review, particularly by framing our findings within the context of the distinct physiological modes of fertilization in each species, as indicated n our answers to the public review. We hope these additions have strengthened the manuscript as suggested.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Sumary:

      This study evaluates whether species can shift geographically, temporally, or both ways in response to climate change. It also teases out the relative importance of geographic context, temperature variability, and functional traits in predicting the shifts. The study system is large occurrence datasets for dragonflies and damselflies split between two time periods and two continents. Results indicate that more species exhibited both shifts than one or the other or neither, and that geographic context and temp variability were more influential than traits. The results have implications for future analyses (e.g. incorporating habitat availability) and for choosing winner and loser species under climate change. The methodology would be useful for other taxa and study regions with strong community/citizen science and extensive occurrence data.

      We thank Reviewer 1 for their time and expertise in reviewing our study. The suggestions are very helpful and will improve the quality of our manuscript.

      Strengths:

      This is an organized and well-written paper that builds on a popular topic and moves it forward. It has the right idea and approach, and the results are useful answers to the predictions and for conservation planning (i.e. identifying climate winners and losers). There is technical proficiency and analytical rigor driven by an understanding of the data and its limitations.

      We thank Reviewer 1 for this assessment.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The habitat classifications (Table S3) are often wrong. "Both" is overused. In North America, for example, Anax junius, Cordulia shurtleffii, Epitheca cynosura, Erythemis simplicicollis, Libellula pulchella, Pachydiplax longipennis, Pantala flavescens, Perithemis tenera, Ischnura posita, the Lestes species, and several Enallagma species are not lotic breeding. These species rarely occur let alone successfully reproduce at lotic sites. Other species are arguably "both", like Rhionaeschna multicolor which is mostly lentic. Not saying this would have altered the conclusions, but it may have exacerbated the weak trait effects.

      We thank the reviewer for their expertise on this topic. We obtained these habitat classifications from field guides and trait databases, and reviewed our primary sources to clarify the trait classifications. We reclassified the species according to the expertise of this reviewer and perform our analysis again; please see details below.

      (2) The conservative spatial resolution (100 x 100 km) limits the analysis to wide- ranging and generalist species. There's no rationale given, so not sure if this was by design or necessity, but it limits the number of analyzable species and potentially changes the inference.

      It is really helpful to have the opportunity to contextualize study design decisions like this one, and we thank the reviewer for the query. Sampling intensity is always a meaningful issue in research conducted at this scale, and we addressed it head-on in this work.

      Very small quadrats covering massive geographical areas will be critically and increasingly afflicted by sampling weaknesses, as well as creating a potentially large problem with pseudoreplication. There is no simple solution to this problem. It would be possible to create interpolated predictions of species’ distributions using Species Distribution Models, Joint Species Distribution Models, or various kinds of Occupancy Models. None of these approaches then leads to analyses that rely on directly observed patterns. Instead, they are extrapolations, and those extrapolations typically fail when tested, although they have still been tested (for example, papers by Lee-Yaw demonstrate that it is rare for SDMs to predict things well; occupancy models often perform less well than SDMs and do not capture how things change over time - Briscoe et al. 2021, Global Change Biology). The result of employing such techniques would certainly be to make all conclusions speculative, rather than directly observable. 

      Rather than employing extrapolative models, we relied on transparent techniques that are used successfully in the core macroecology literature that address spatial variation in sampling explicitly and simply. Moreover, we constructed extensive null models that show that range and phenology changes, respectively, are contrary to expectations that arise from sampling difference. 100km quadrats make for a reasonable “middle-ground” in terms of the effects of sampling, and we added a reference to the methods section to clarify this (see details below).

      (3) The objective includes a prediction about generalists vs specialists (L99-103) yet there is no further mention of this dichotomy in the abstract, methods, results, or discussion.

      Thank you for pointing this out - it is an editing error that should have been resolved prior to submission. We replaced the terms specialist and generalist with specific predictions based on traits (see details below).

      (4) Key references were overlooked or dismissed, like in the new edition of Dragonflies & Damselflies model organisms book, especially chapters 24 and 27.

      We thank Reviewer 1 for making us aware of this excellent reference. We have reviewed the text and include it as a reference, in addition to other references recommended by Reviewer 1 and other reviewers (see details below).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper explores a highly interesting question regarding how species migration success relates to phenology shifts, and it finds a positive relationship. The findings are significant, and the strength of the evidence is solid. However, there are substantial issues with the writing, presentation, and analyses that need to be addressed. First, I disagree with the conclusion that species that don't migrate are "losers" - some species might not migrate simply because they have broad climatic niches and are less sensitive to climate change. Second, the results concerning species' southern range limits could provide valuable insights. These could be used to assess whether sampling bias has influenced the results. If species are truly migrating, we should observe northward shifts in their southern range limits. However, if this is an artifact of increased sampling over time, we would expect broader distributions both north and south. Finally, Figure 1 is missed panel B, which needs to be addressed.

      We thank Reviewer 2 for their time and expertise in reviewing our study.

      It is possible that some species with broad niches may not need to migrate, although in general failing to move with climate change is considered an indicator of “climate debt”, signaling that a species may be of concern for conservation (ex. Duchenne et al. 2021, Ecology Letters). We revised the discussion to acknowledge potential differences in outcomes (please see details below).

      We used null models to test whether our results regarding range shifts were robust, and if they varied due to increased sampling over time. We found that observed northern range limit shifts are not consistent with expectations derived from changes in sampling intensity (Figure S1, S2). 

      We thank Reviewer 2 for pointing out this error in Figure 1. This conceptual figure was a challenge to construct, as it must illustrate how phenology and range shifts can occur simultaneously or uniquely to enable a hypothetic odonate to track its thermal niche over time. In a previous version of the figure, we had a second panel and we failed to remove the reference to that panel when we simplified the figure. We have updated the figure and figure caption (please see details below).

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their article "Range geographies, not functional traits, explain convergent range and phenology shifts under climate change," the authors rigorously investigate the temporal shifts in odonate species and their potential predictors. Specifically, they examine whether species shift their geographic ranges poleward or alter their phenology to avoid extreme conditions. Leveraging opportunistic observations of European and North American odonates, they find that species showing significant range shifts also exhibited earlier phenological shifts. Considering a broad range of potential predictors, their results reveal that geographical factors, but not functional traits, are associated with these shifts.

      We thank Reviewer 3 for their expertise and the time they spent reviewing our study. Their suggestions are very helpful and will improve the quality of our manuscript.

      Strengths:

      The article addresses an important topic in ecology and conservation that is particularly timely in the face of reports of substantial insect declines in North America and Europe over the past decades. Through data integration the authors leverage the rich natural history record for odonates, broadening the taxonomic scope of analyses of temporal trends in phenology and distribution to this taxon. The combination of phenological and range shifts in one framework presents an elegant way to reconcile previous findings improving our understanding of the drivers of biodiversity loss.

      We thank Reviewer 3 for this assessment.

      Weaknesses:

      The introduction and discussion of the article would benefit from a stronger contextualization of recent studies on biological responses to climate change and the underpinning mechanism.

      The presentation of the results (particularly in figures) should be improved to address the integrative character of the work and help readers extract the main results. While the writing of the article is generally good, particularly the captions and results contain many inconsistencies and lack important detail. With the multitude of the relationships that were tested (the influence of traits) the article needs more coherence.

      We thank Reviewer 3 for these suggestions. We revised the introduction and discussion to better contextualize species’ responses to climate change and the mechanisms behind them (see details below). We carefully reviewed all figures and captions, and made changes to improve the clarity of the text and the presentation of results (see details below).

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Comment:

      (1) Following weakness #1 in the public review, the authors should review the habitat classifications, consult with an odonatologist, and reclassify many species from Both to Lentic and redo the analysis.

      Thank you for pointing out this disagreement among expert habitat classifications that we cited and other literature. We reclassified species’ habitat preferences based on classifications by Hof et al., a source that was consistent with your suggestions, and identified additional species as Lentic that our other references had identified as Both. We performed our analysis with this new dataset and, as you suspected, our results did not change qualitatively: species habitat preferences did not predict their range shifts.

      Hof, Christian, Martin Brändle, and Roland Brandl. "Lentic odonates have larger and more northern ranges than lotic species." Journal of Biogeography 33.1 (2006): 63-70.

      Comment:

      (2) Following weakness #2, would it be worthwhile or interesting to analyze a smaller ranging group (e.g. cut the quad size in half, 50 x 50 km) to bring in more species and potentially change the inference? Or is the paper too tightly constructed to allow this, even as a secondary piece?

      Thank you for this comment, as it highlights an important consideration for macroecological analyses, and the importance of balancing multiple factors for determining quadrat size. Issues exist with identifying drivers of range boundaries among species with narrow ranges when they are analyzed separately from wide-ranging species, and examining larger quadrats can actually help clarify drivers (Szabo, Algar, and Kerr 2009). The smaller quadrats are, the higher the likelihood that the species is actually there but was never observed, or that the quadrat only covers unsuitable habitat and the species is absent from the entire (or almost entire) quadrat. Too many absences creates issues with violating model assumptions, and creates noise that makes it difficult to identify drivers of species’ range and phenology shifts.

      Moreover, we constructed extensive null models that show that range and phenology changes, respectively, are contrary to expectations that arise from sampling difference. 100km quadrats make for a reasonable “middle-ground”, and we have included a brief explanation of this in the text: “We assigned species presences to 100×100 km quadrats, a scale that is large enough to maintain adequate sampling intensity but still relevant to conservation and policy (Soroye et al., 2020), to identify the best sampled species.”  (Lines 170-172).

      Szabo, Nora D., Adam C. Algar, and Jeremy T. Kerr. "Reconciling topographic and climatic effects on widespread and range‐restricted species richness." Global Ecology and Biogeography 18.6 (2009): 735-744.

      Comment:

      (3) Following weakness #3, are specialists the ones that "failed to shift" (L18)? If so please specify. The prediction about generalists vs specialists needs to be removed or incorporated in other parts of the paper.

      Thank you for pointing this out, we intended to suggest that species with more generalist habitat requirements might be better able to shift, but ultimately found that traits did not predict species’ shifts. We corrected our prediction regarding habitat generalists as follows: “We predicted that species able to use both lentic and lotic habitats would shift their phenologies and geographies more than those able to use just one habitat type, as generalists outperform specialists as climate and land uses change (Ball-Damerow et al., 2015, 2014; Hassall and Thompson, 2008; Powney et al., 2015; Rapacciuolo et al., 2017).” (Lines 128-132).

      Comment:

      (4) Following weakness #4, cite Pinkert et al at lines 70-73 and Rocha-Ortega et al at lines 73-77 along with https://doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2019.2645. Add Sandall et al https:// doi.org/10.1111/jbi.14457 to L69 references.

      Thank you for the excellent reference suggestions, we have added them as suggested (Lines 80, 86, 77).

      Comment:

      Other comments/suggestions:

      (1) Title: consider adding temp variability 'Range geography and temperature variability, not functional traits,...'.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have added temperature variability to the title: “Range geography and temperature variability explain cross-continental convergence in range and phenology shifts in a model insect taxon”.

      Comment:

      (2) L125: is (northern) Mexico included in North America?

      Yes, we did include observations from Northern Mexico, and have specified this in the text: “We retained ~1,100,000 records from Canada, the United States, and Northern Mexico, comprising 76 species (Figure 2).” (Lines 174-176).

      Comment:

      (3) L128: I'd label this section 'Temperature variability' rather than 'Climate data'.

      Thank you, we agree that this is a more appropriate title for this section, and have replaced ‘Climate data’ with ‘Temperature variability’ (Line 185).

      Comment:

      (4) Table 2: why are there no estimates for the traits?

      We apologise, this information should have been included in the main body of the manuscript, but was only explained in the Table 2 caption. We have added the following explanation: “Non-significant variables, specifically all functional traits, were excluded from the final models.”. (Line 312-323).

      Comment:

      (5) Figure 2: need to identify the A-D panels.

      We apologise for this error and have clarified the differences between panels in the figure caption:

      “Figure 2: Richness of 76 odonate species sampled in North America and Europe in the historic period (1980-2002; panes A and C) and the recent period (2008-2018; panes B and D). Species richness per 100 × 100 km quadrat is shown in panes A and B, while panes C and D show species richness per 200 × 200 km quadrat. Dark red indicates high species richness, while light pink indicates low species richness.” (Lines 1002-1006).

      Comment:

      (6) L163-173: I am not familiar with this analysis but it sounds interesting and promising, I am not sure if this can be clarified further. Why the -25 to 25, and -30 to 30, doesn't the -35 to 35 cover these? And what is meant by "include only phenology shifts that could be biologically meaningful", that larger shifts would not be meaningful or tied to climate change?

      We used different cutoffs for phenology shifts to inspect for outliers that were likely to be errors, potentially do to insufficient sampling to calculate phenology. We clarified in the text as follows:

      “We retained emergence estimates between March 1st and September 1st, as well as species and quadrats that showed a difference in emergence phenology of -25 to 25 days, -30 to 30 days, or -35 to 35 days between both time periods, to include only phenology shifts that could be biologically meaningful to environmental climate change (i.e. exclude errors).” (Lines 169-173).

      Comment:

      (7) L193-200: I agree but would make a distinction between ecological vs functional traits, as other studies view geographic traits as ecological manifestations of functional biology, e.g. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.biocon.2019.07.001 and https://doi.org/10.1016/ j.biocon.2023.110098.

      Thank you for this suggestion, and for making us aware of the thinking around range geographies as ecological traits. We have specified throughout the manuscript that the ‘traits’ we are considering are ‘functional traits’, changed the methods subsection title to “Range geographies and functional traits” (Line 252), and added a brief discussion of ecological traits: “Geographic range and associated climatic characteristics are often considered ecological traits, as they are consequences of functional traits and their interactions with geographic features (Bried and Rocha-Ortega, 2023; Chichorro et al., 2019).” (Lines 256-259).

      Comment:

      (8) L203: What's the rationale for egg-laying habitat as "biologically relevant to spatial and temporal responses to climate change"? That one's not as obvious as the others and needs a sentence more. Also, I am wondering why other traits were not considered here, like color lightness and voltinism. And why not wing size instead of body size, or better yet the two combined (wing loading) as a proxy for dispersal ability?

      We agree that our rationale for using this trait should be better explained, and we have included the following explanation: “Egg laying habitat was assigned according to whether species use exophytic egg-laying habitat (i.e. eggs laid in water or on land, relatively larger in number), or endophytic egg-laying habitat (i.e. eggs laid inside plants, usually fewer in number); species using exophytic habitats are associated with greater northward range limit shifts (Angert et al., 2011).” (Lines 271-275).

      We considered traits that have been found to be important for range and phenology shifts among odonates, as well as being key traits for expectations for species responses to climate change. Flight duration and body size are correlated with dispersal ability (Powney et al. 2015). Body size is also correlated with competitive ability (Powney et al. 2015), potentially making it an important predictor of a species’ ability to establish and maintain populations in expanding range areas. Traits correlated with range shifts also include breeding habitat type (Powney et al. 2015; Bowler et al. 2021) and egg laying habitat (Angert et al. 2011). Ideally, we would have used dispersal data from mark/release/recapture studies, but it was not available for many of the species included in this study. After finding that none of the functional traits we included were related to range shifts, there was no reason to believe that a further investigation of traits would be meaningful.

      Angert AL, Crozier LG, Rissler LJ, Gilman SE, Tewksbury JJ, Chunco AJ. 2011. Do species’ traits predict recent shifts at expanding range edges? Ecology Letters 14:677–689. doi:10.1111/j.1461-0248.2011.01620.x

      Bowler DE, Eichenberg D, Conze K-J, Suhling F, Baumann K, Benken T, Bönsel A, Bittner T, Drews A, Günther A, Isaac NJB, Petzold F, Seyring M, Spengler T, Trockur B, Willigalla C, Bruelheide H, Jansen F, Bonn A. 2021. Winners and losers over 35 years of dragonfly and damselfly distributional change in Germany.Diversity and Distributions 27:1353–1366. doi:10.1111/ddi.13274

      Powney GD, Cham SSA, Smallshire D, Isaac NJB. 2015. Trait correlates of distribution trends in the Odonata ofBritain and Ireland. PeerJ 3:e1410. doi:10.7717/peerj.1410

      Comment:

      (9) L210: I count at least 5 migratory species in table S3, so although maybe not enough to analyze it's misleading to say "nearly all" were non-migratory, revise to "most" or "vast majority".

      Thank you for pointing this out, we have made the suggested correction (Line 277).

      Comment:

      (10) L252-254: save this for the Discussion and write a more generalized statement for results to avoid citations in the results.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have moved this to the discussion (Lines 517-527).

      Comment:

      (11) Figures S5 & S6: these are pretty important, I'd consider elevating them to the main document as one figure with two panels.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we agree these figures should be elevated to the main text, and have made them into a panel figure (Figure 4).

      Comment:

      (12) L305-307: great point and recommendation!

      Thank you very much for this positive feedback!

      Comment:

      (13) L335-336: another place to cite https://doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2019.2645 which includes a thermal sensitivity index and would add an odonate citation behind the statement.

      Thank you for this excellent suggestion, we have added this citation (line 480). (Rocha-Ortega et al. 2020)

      Comment:

      (14) L352-353: again see also https://doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2019.2645.

      Thank you for highlighting this reference, we have added it to Line 505 as suggested.

      Comment:

      (15) L355: revise "populations that coexist" to "species that co-occur" (big difference between population and species levels and between coexistence and co-occurrence).

      Thank you very much for pointing this out, we have made the suggested change (Line 507).

      Comment:

      (16) L359-365: are the winners and losers depicted in Figures S5 & S6? If so reference the figure (which I suggest combining and promoting to the main text), if not create a table listing the analyzed species and their winner/loser status.

      We agree that this is an excellent place to bring up Figures S5 and S6 from the supplemental. We have moved them to the main document as one figure and referenced it at line 510.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Comment:

      (1) Line 53-55: The claim that "These relationships generalize poorly taxonomically and geographically" is valid, but the study only tests Odonata on two continents.

      Thank you for this comment – the word ‘generalize’ may imply that our study tries to find a general pattern across many groups. We have changed the language to: “However, these relationships are inconsistent across taxa and regions, and cross-continental tests have not been attempted (Angert et al., 2011; Buckley and Kingsolver, 2012; Estrada et al., 2016; MacLean and Beissinger, 2017).” (Lines 57-59).

      Comment:

      (2) Line 58-59: Is this statement only true for Odonata? It does not seem to hold for plants, for example.

      Thank you for this comment – this statement references a meta-analysis of multiple animal and plant taxa, but the evidence for the importance of range location comes from animal taxa. We have specified that we are referring to animal species to clarify (Line 60).

      Comment:

      (3) Line 87-91: This section is difficult to understand and needs clarification.

      We have clarified this section as follows: “While warm-adapted species with more equatorial distributions could expand their ranges poleward following warming (Devictor et al., 2008), they could also increase in abundance in this new range area relative to species that historically occupied those areas and are less heat-tolerant (Powney et al., 2015).” (Lines 95-121).

      Comment:

      (4) Line 99-100: Please define "generalist" and "specialist" more clearly here (e.g., based on climate niche?).

      Thank you for pointing this out, we intended to suggest that species with more generalist habitat requirements might be better able to shift, but ultimately found that traits did not predict species’ shifts. We corrected our prediction regarding habitat generalists as follows: “We predicted that species able to use both lentic and lotic habitats would shift their phenologies and geographies more than those able to use just one habitat type, as generalists outperform specialists as climate and land uses change (Ball-Damerow et al., 2015, 2014; Hassall and Thompson, 2008; Powney et al., 2015; Rapacciuolo et al., 2017).” (Lines 128-132).

      Comment:

      (5) Line 122: Replace the English letter "X" in "100x100 km" with the correct mathematical symbol.

      We have made the suggested replacement throughout the manuscript.

      Comment:

      (6) Line 148: To address sampling effects, you could check the paper: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/gcb.15524. Additionally, maximum and minimum values are sensitive to extreme data points, so using 95% percentiles might be more robust.

      Thank you for sharing this paper, as it offers a valuable perspective on the study of species’ ranges. While our dataset is substantially composed of observations from adult sampling protocols, unlike the suggested paper which compares adults and juveniles, this is an interesting alternative approach.

      For our purposes it is meaningful to include outliers, as otherwise we may have missed individuals at the leading edge of range expansions. Our intent here was to detect range limits, as opposed to finding the central tendency of species distributions. This approach is widely accepted in the macroecology literature (i.e. Devictor et al., 2012, 2008; Kerr et al. 2015).

      We have included the following discussion of our approach in the methods section:

      “We followed widely accepted methods to determine species range boundaries (Devictor et al., 2012, 2008; Kerr et al., 2015), although other methods exist that are appropriate for different data types and research questions i.e. (Ni and Vellend, 2021). We assigned species presences to 100×100 km quadrats, a scale that is large enough to maintain adequate sampling intensity but still relevant to conservation and policy (Soroye et al., 2020), to identify the best sampled species.” (Lines 168-173).

      Kerr JT, Pindar A, Galpern P, Packer L, Potts SG, Roberts SM, Rasmont P, Schweiger O, Colla SR, Richardson LL,Wagner DL, Gall LF, Sikes DS, Pantoja A. 2015. Climate change impacts on bumblebees converge across continents. Science 349:177–180. doi:10.1126/science.aaa7031

      Soroye P, Newbold T, Kerr J. 2020. Climate change contributes to widespread declines among bumble bees across continents. Science 367:685–688. doi:10.1126/science.aax8591

      Devictor V, Julliard R, Couvet D, Jiguet F. 2008. Birds are tracking climate warming, but not fast enough.Proceedings of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences 275:2743–2748. doi:10.1098/rspb.2008.0878

      Devictor V, van Swaay C, Brereton T, Brotons L, Chamberlain D, Heliölä J, Herrando S, Julliard R, Kuussaari M,Lindström Å, Reif J, Roy DB, Schweiger O, Settele J, Stefanescu C, Van Strien A, Van Turnhout C,

      Vermouzek Z, WallisDeVries M, Wynhoff I, Jiguet F. 2012. Differences in the climatic debts of birds and butterflies at a continental scale. Nature Clim Change 2:121–124. doi:10.1038/nclimate1347

      Comment:

      (7) Line 195: The species' climate niche should also be considered a product of evolution.

      Thank you for this suggestion. To address this comment and a comment from another reviewer, we changed the text to the following: “Geographic range and associated climatic characteristics are often considered ecological traits, as they are consequences of functional traits and their interactions with geographic features (Bried and Rocha-Ortega, 2023; Chichorro et al., 2019).” (Lines 256-259).

      Comment:

      (8) Line 244: This speculative statement belongs in the Discussion section.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have moved this statement to the discussion (Lines 451-453).

      Comment:

      (9) Line 252-254: The projection of Coenagrion mercuriale's range contraction is not part of your results and should be clarified or removed.

      Following this suggestion and a similar suggestion from another reviewer, we moved this text to the discussion (Line 517-527).

      Comment:

      (10) Line 314-316: If the species can tolerate warmer temperatures better, why would they migrate?

      We apologize for the confusion, and we have reworded the section as follows: “Emerging mean conditions in areas adjacent to the ranges of southern species may offer opportunities for range expansions of these relative climate specialists, which can then tolerate climate warming in areas of range expansion better than more cool-adapted historical occupants (Day et al., 2018).” (Lines 445-448).

      Comment:

      (11) Line 334-335: Species' tolerance to temperature likely depends on their traits, which were not tested in this study. This should be noted.

      We agree, and we have removed the wording “rather than traits” from this sentence (Line 479).

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Comment:

      (1) Title: The title is too general not specifying that your results are on odonates only, but also stressing the implicit role of climate change to a degree the tests do not support.

      Following this comment and a suggestion from another reviewer we changed the title to the following: “Range geography and temperature variability explain cross-continental convergence in range and phenology shifts in a model insect taxon”. We wanted to emphasize our use of Odonates as a model species that we used to ask broad questions, while being more specific about the climatic variable that we examined (temperature variability).

      Comment:

      (2) L32: consider including Novella-Fernandez et al. 2023 (NatCommun) which addresses this topic in Odonates.

      Thank you for suggesting this very interesting paper, we have added it as a citation (Line 31-32).

      Comment:

      (3) L35: consider including Grewe et al. 2013 (GEB) and Engelhardt et al. 2022(GCB).

      Thank you for these excellent suggestions, we have added the citations (Line 35).

      Comment:

      (4) L47: rather write 'result from' instead of 'driven by'.

      We agree this is a better characterization and have corrected the wording (Line 48-49).

      Comment:

      (5) L49-52: There has been a recent study on this topic for birds (Neate-Clegg et al., 2024 NEE). However, specifying this to insects would make it not less relevant. This review for odonates might be helpful in this regard (Pinkert et al.. 2022, Chapter: "Odonata as focal taxa for biological responses to climate change" IN Dragonflies & Damselflies: Córdoba-Aguilar et al. (2022) Model Organisms for Ecological and Evolutionary Research.

      Thank you for again suggesting excellent references, we have added them to line 52-53, as well as adding the Pinkert citation to lines 61 and 82.

      Comment:

      (6) L53-66: Combine into one paragraph about drivers. With traits first and the environment second. The natural land cover perspective may be too complicated in this context. Consider focusing on generalities of the impact of changes within species' ranges.

      As suggested we have combined these into one paragraph about drivers (Line 59).

      Comment:

      (7) L67-69: The book from before would be a much stronger reference for this claim. Kalkmann et al (2018) do not address the emphasis of global change research in insects on bees and butterflies. Also, I would highlight that most of the current work is at a national scale, rather than cross-continental.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have added the suggested reference and included that “…recently assembled databases of odonate observations provide a rare opportunity to investigate species’ spatiotemporal responses at larger taxonomic and spatial scales, particularly as most work has been done at national scales.” (Lines 75-77).

      Comment:

      (8) L68: consider rephrasing this part to '..provide a rare opportunity to investigate spatiotemporal biotic responses at larger taxonomic and spatial scales'

      We appreciate this suggestion and really like the wording. We have changed the phrase to read as follows: “While global change research on insects often emphasizes butterfly and bee taxa, recently assembled databases of odonate observations provide a rare opportunity to investigate species’ spatiotemporal responses at larger taxonomic and spatial scales, particularly as most work has been done at national scales.” (Lines 74-77).

      Comment:

      (9) L69: This characteristic is not unique to odonates and would hamper drawing general conclusions. Honestly, I think the detailed and comprehensive data on them is the selling point.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have edited the sentence to emphasize their use as an indicator species: “Due to their use of aquatic and terrestrial habitat across life different stages, dragonflies and damselflies are also considered indicator species for both terrestrial and aquatic insect responses to changing climates (Hassall, 2015; Pinkert et al., 2022; Šigutová et al., 2025), giving the study of these species broad relevance for conservation.” (Lines 78-81)

      Comment:

      (10) L73: Indicator for what? The first part of the sentence would suggest lesser surrogacy for responses of other taxa. Reconsider this statement. They are well- established indicators for habitat intactness and freshwater biodiversity. Darwell et al. suggested their diversity can serve as a surrogate for the diversity of both terrestrial and aquatic taxa.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have edited the sentence to emphasize their use as an indicator species: “Due to their use of aquatic and terrestrial habitat across life different stages, dragonflies and damselflies are also considered indicator species for both terrestrial and aquatic insect responses to changing climates (Hassall, 2015; Pinkert et al., 2022; Šigutová et al., 2025), giving the study of these species broad relevance for conservation.” (Lines 78-81)

      Comment:

      (11) L76: Fritz et al., is a study on mammals, not odonates.

      Thank you for pointing out this error, the reference has been removed (Line 84-85).

      Comment:

      (12) L84: Lotic habitats are generally better connected than lentic ones. Lentic species are considered to have a greater propensity for dispersal DUE to the lower inherent spatiotemporal stability (implying lower connectivity) compared to lotic habitats.

      Thank you for your comment, we have rewritten this section as follows: “For example, differences in habitat connectivity and dispersal ability may constrain range shifts for lentic species (those species that breed in slow moving water like lakes or ponds) and lotic species (those living in fast moving-water) in different ways (Kalkman et al., 2018). More southerly lentic species may expand their range boundaries more than lotic species, as species accustomed to ephemeral lentic habitats better dispersers (Grewe et al., 2013), yet lotic species have also been found to expand their ranges more often than lentic species, potentially due to the loss of lentic habitat in some areas (Bowler et al., 2021).” (Lines 88-95).

      Comment:

      (13) L90: I would be cautious with this interpretation. If only part of the range is considered (here a country in the northern Hemisphere) southern species are moving more of their range into and northern species more of their range out of the study area in response to warming (implying northward shifts).

      We have clarified this section as follows: “While warm-adapted species with more equatorial distributions could expand their ranges poleward following warming (Devictor et al., 2008), they could also increase in abundance in this new range area relative to species that historically occupied those areas and are less heat-tolerant (Powney et al., 2015).” (Lines 95-121)

      Comment:

      (14) L117: Odonata Central contains many county centroids as occurrence records. These could be an issue for your use case. I may have overlooked the steps you took to address this, but I think this requires at least more detail and possibly further removal/checks using for instance CoordinateCleaner. The functions implemented in this package allow you to filter records based on political units to avoid exactly this source of error.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we weren’t aware of this issue with Odonata Central. We used the CoordinaterCleaner tool in R to filter all odonate records that we used in our analyses. Less than 1% of observations in our dataset were identified as having potential problems by the tool, so we would not expect this to affect our inferences. However, in future we will employ this tool when using similar datasets.

      Comment:

      (15) L119: Please add a brief explanation of why this was necessary. I am ok with something along the lines in the supplement.

      We moved this information from the supplemental to the main text as follows: “If a species was found on both continents, we only retained observations from the continent that was the most densely sampled. If we merged data for one species found on both continents, we could not perform a cross-continental comparison. However, if the same species on different continents was treated as different species, this would lead to uninterpretable outcomes (and the creation of pseudo-replication) in the context of phylogenetic analyses. In addition, species found on both continents did not have sufficient data to meet criteria for the phenology analysis.” (Lines 161-167).

      Comment:

      (16) L132: This is the letters 'X' or 'x' are not multiplier symbols! Please change to the math symbol (×), everywhere.

      Thank you for pointing out this error, we have made the correction throughout the manuscript.

      Comment:

      (17) L133: add 'main' before 'flight period'

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have made the change. (Line 190)

      Comment:

      (18) L135: I suggest using the coefficient of variation, as it is controlled for the mean. Otherwise, what you see is partly the signature of temperature and not of its variation. For me, it's very difficult to understand what this variation of the variation means and at least needs more explanation.

      Thank you very much for this suggestion, we agree that using the coefficient of variation is a better fit for the question that we’re asking. We re-ran out analyses with the coefficient of variation as the measure of climate variability: all the results reported in the manuscript are now updated for that analysis (Line 377, Table 2), and we have also updated the methods section (Line 191). The results are qualitatively the same to our previous analysis, but we agree that they are now easier to interpret.            

      Comment:

      (19) L155: Please adequately reference all R packages (state the name, and a reference for them including the authors' names, title, and version).

      Thank you for pointing out this omission, we have added reference information for the glm function in base R (Line 298) and ensured all other packages are properly referenced.

      Comment:

      (20) L207: Mention the literature sources here (again).

      We agree that they should be referenced here again, and we have done so (Lines 267-268).

      Comment:

      (21) L209: You could use the number of grid cells as a proxy for range size.

      Following this excellent suggestion, we re-analysed our data using range size, calculated as the number of quadrats occupied by a species in the historical time period, as a predictor. Range size was not significant in our models, but we believe this is the best way to analyze our data, and so have updated our methods (Lines 261-263) and results (375-378).

      Comment:

      (22) L218: It would be preferable to say 'species-level' instead of 'by-species'.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we agree that this is clearer and made the change (Line 298).

      Comment:

      (23) L219-220: this is unclear. Please rephrase.

      We have clarified as follows: “We used both species-level frequentist (GLM; glm function in R) and Bayesian (Markov Chain Monte Carlo generalized linear mixed model, MCMCglmm; Hadfield, 2010) models to improve the robustness of the results.” (Lines 298-300).

      Comment:

      (24) L224: At least for Europe there is a molecular phylogeny available, which you should preferably use (Pinkert et al. 2018, Ecography). Otherwise, I am ok with using what is available

      We apologize that the nature of the phylogeny that we used was not clear; the phylogeny that we used was built similarly to that in Pinkert et al. 2018, Ecography. It created a molecular phylogeny with a morphological/taxonomic tree as the backbone tree, so that species could only move within their named genera or families. We clarified this in the manuscript as follows:

      “We used the molecular phylogenetic tree published by the Odonate Phenotypic Database (Waller et al., 2019), which used a morphological and taxonomic phylogeny as the backbone tree, allowing species to move within their named genera or families according to molecular evidence (Waller and Svensson, 2017).” (Lines 302-305).

      Comment:

      (25) L233: You said so earlier (1st sentence of this paragraph).

      Thank you for pointing this out, we removed the repetitive sentence (Line 323).

      Comment:

      (26) L236-238: To me, it makes more sense to test this prior to fitting the phylogenetic models.

      MCMC-GLMM is considerably less familiar to most researchers than general linear models or there derivatives/descendants, such as PGLS. We report models both with and without phylogenetic relationships included for the sake of transparency, and we are happy to acknowledge that no interpretation here changes substantially relative to these decisions. However, failing to report models that included possible (if small) effects of phylogenetic relatedness might cause some readers to question what those models might have implied. For the moment, we are opting for the most transparent reporting approach here.

      Comment:

      (27) L241: Rather say directly XX of XX species in our data....

      (28) L245: Same here. Provide the actual numbers, please.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we made this change on Line 332 and Line 334.

      Comment:

      (29) L247-249: Then not necessary.

      This issue highlights a challenge in the global biology literature and around the issue of biodiversity monitoring for understanding global change impacts on species. Almost no studies have been able to report simultaneous range and phenology shifts, and the literature addresses these biotic responses to global change predominantly as distinct phenomena. Differences in numbers of species for which these observations exist, even among the extremely widely-observed odonates, seems to us to be a meaningful issue to report on. If the reviewer prefers that we abbreviate or remove this sentence, we are happy to do so.

      Comment:

      (30) L251:261: That is discussion as you interpret your results.

      Following your suggestion and the suggestion of another reviewer, we moved the following lines to the discussion section: “Species that did not shift their ranges northwards or advance their phenology included Coenagrion mercuriale, a European species that is listed as near threatened by the IUCN Red List (IUCN, 2021), and is projected to lose 68% of its range by 2035 (Jaeschke et al., 2013).” (Lines 517-527).

      Comment:

      (31) 252: Good to mention, but why is the discussion limited to C. mercurial?

      We feel that it is important to link the broad-scale results to the specific biological characteristics of individual species, and C. mercurial is an IUCN threatened species. We are happy to expand links to natural history of this group and have added the following: “This group also includes Coenagrion resolutum, a common North American damselfly (Swaegers et al., 2014), for which we could not find evidence of decline. This may be due in part to the greater area of intact habitat available in North American compared to Europe, enabling C. resolutum to maintain larger populations that are less vulnerable to stochastic climate events. Still, this and other species failing to shift in range or phenology should be assessed for population health, as this species could be carrying an unobserved extinction debt.” (Lines 527-533).

      Comment:

      (32) L264: Insert 'being' before 'consistently'.

      Thank you for the suggestion, we made this change (Line 373).

      Comment:

      (33) L271: .'. However,'.

      Thank you for pointing out this grammatical error, we have corrected it (Line 382).

      Comment:

      (34) L273: 'affected' instead of 'predicted'

      Thank you for the suggestion, we made this change (Line 383).

      Comment:

      (35) L279: 'despite pronounced recent warming' sounds not relevant in this context.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we removed this portion of the sentence (Line 408).

      Comment:

      (36) L281: Rather 'the model performance did not improve....'

      Thank you for the suggestion, we made this change (Line 409).

      Comment:

      (37) L288: Add 'but' before 'not'.

      Thank you for the suggestion, we made this change (Line 416).

      Comment:

      (38) L311-316: Reconsider the causality here. maybe rather rephrase to are associated instead. Greater dispersal ability and developmental plasticity might well lead to higher growth rates, rather than the other way around.

      We agree that plasticity/evolution at range edges is important to consider and have included it as an alternative explanation: “Adaptive evolution and plasticity may enable higher population growth rates in newly-colonized areas (Angert et al., 2020; Usui et al., 2023), but this possibility can only be directly tested with long term population trend data.” (Line 449-451).  

      Comment:

      (39) L313-316: Maybe delete the second 'should be able to'.

      This phrase has been changed in response to other reviewer comments and now reads as follows:

      “Emerging mean conditions in areas adjacent to the ranges of southern species may offer opportunities for range expansions of these relative climate specialists, which can then tolerate climate warming in areas of range expansion better than more cool-adapted historical occupants (Day et al., 2018).” (Lines 445-448).

      Comment:

      (40) L331: Limit this statement ending with 'in North American and European Odonata'.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we made this addition (Lines 475-476).

      Comment:

      (41) L346-347: There are too many of these more-research-is-needed statements in the discussion (at least three in the last paragraphs). Please consider finishing the paragraphs rather with a significance statement.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have changed the final sentence here to the following: “The extent to which species’ traits actually determine rates of range and phenological shifts, rather than occasionally correlated with them, is worth considering further, but functional traits do not systematically drive patterns in these shifts among Odonates in North America and Europe.” (Lines 480-483).

      We also made additional changes, removing a ‘more-research is needed’ statement from the following paragraph (Line 443), as well as from line 499.

      Comment:

      (42) L349: See also Franke et al. (2022, Ecology and Evolution).

      Thank you for highlighting this excellent reference! We have added it to Line 501.

      Comment:

      (43) L363: Maybe a bit late in the text, but it is important to note that there is the third dimension 'abundance trends' or rather a common factor related to range and phenology shifts. I feel this fits better with the discussion of population growth.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have addressed the importance of abundance trends in the following sentences: “Further mechanistic understanding of these processes requires abundance data.” (Lines 442-443); “It remains unclear if range and phenology shifts relate to trends in abundance, but our results suggest that there are clear ‘winners’ and ‘losers’ under climate change.” (Lines 509-510).

      Comment:

      (44) L375-377: This last sentence is very similar to L371-373. Please reduce the redundancy. Focus more on specifically stating the process instead of vaguely saying 'new insights into patterns' and 'suggesting processes'. Rather, deliver a strong concluding message here.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we feel that we now have a much stronger concluding message: “By considering both the seasonal and range dynamics of species, emergent and convergent climate change responses across continents become clear for this well-studied group of predatory insects.” (Lines 545-547).

      Comment:

      (45) Table 1: To me, the few estimates presented here do not justify a table. rather include them in the text. OR combine them with Table 2. Also, why not include the traits as predictors (from the range shift models) in these models as well?

      We have clarified in the text that the results displayed in Table 1 are from the analysis of the relationship between range and phenology shifts: “The effect of species’ range shifts on phenology range shifts was significant in our model investigating the relationship between these responses, indicating that species shifting their northern range limits to higher latitudes also showed stronger advances in their emergence phenology (Figure 3).” (Lines 341-344).

      As there were no significant effects in the model of phenology change drivers, we have not shown results of this model: “Emergence phenology shifts were not affected by species’ traits, range geography, nor climate variability; due to this, model results are not displayed here.” (Lines 383-384).

      Comment:

      (46) Table 2: L712-713: What does this mean? Are phenology shifts not used as a predictor of range shifts? (why then this comment?). Or do you want to say phenological shifts are not related to Southern range etc? Why do you present a phylosig here but not in Table 1? Why not include the traits as predictors (from the range shift models) in these models as well? Consider using the range size as a continuous predictor instead of 'Widespread'.

      We are glad the reviewer pointed this out to us. We did not emphasize this issue sufficiently. We DID evaluate traits as predictors both of geographical range and phenological shifts, and species-specific biological traits did not significantly affect models predicting either of those sets of responses. We state this on Lines 312-323, but we have also noted in the discussion (Lines 473-476) that the most commonly assessed traits, like body size, do not alter observed trends here. Instead, where species are found, rather than the characteristics of species, is the key determinant of their overall responses.

      Following this excellent suggestion, we re-analysed our data using range size, calculated as the number of quadrats occupied by a species in the historical time period, as a predictor. Range size was not significant in our models, but we believe this is the best way to analyze our data, and so have updated our methods (Lines 261-263) and results (375-378).

      Comment:

      (47) Figure 1: I don't see any grey points in the figure. Also, there is no A or B. If you are referring to the symbols then write cross and triangle instead and not use capital letters which usually refer to component plots of composite figures. Also, I highly recommend providing a similar figure based on your data (maybe each species as a dot for T1 and another symbol for T2). Given the small number of species, you could try to connect these points with arrows. For the set with only range shifts maybe play the T2-dots at the center of the 'Emergence' axis.

      Thank you for pointing out this error: a previous version of Figure 1 included grey points and multiple panels. We have removed this text from the figure caption to be consistent with the final version of the figure (Line 989).

      The graphical depictions of the conceptual and empirical discoveries in this paper were challenging to create. The reviewer might be suggesting effectively decomposing Figure 3 (change in range on the y axis vs change in phenology among all species into two sets of points on the same graph, where each pair of points is a before and after value for each species. This would make for a very busy figure indeed. We have modified the conceptual Figure 1 to illustrate more clearly, we believe, that species can (in principle) remain within tolerable niche spaces by shifting their activity periods in time (phenology) or in space (geographical range) or both.

      Comment:

      (48) Figure 2: Please add a legend. Also black is a poor background color. The maps appear to be stretched. Please check aspect ratios. Now here are capital letters without an explanation in the caption. From the context I assume the upper panel maps are for the data used to calculate range shifts at the bottom panel maps are for data used to calculate the phenological shifts.

      We apologise for the error in the figure caption and have clarified the differences between panels in the text, as well as changing the map background colour and fixing the aspect ratio:

      “Figure 2: Richness of 76 odonate species sampled in North America and Europe in the historic period (1980-2002; panes A and C) and the recent period (2008-2018; panes B and D). Species richness per 100 × 100 km quadrat is shown in panes A and B, while panes C and D show species richness per 200 × 200 km quadrat. Dark red indicates high species richness, while light pink indicates low species richness.” (Lines 1002-1006).

      Comment:

      (49) Figure 3: Why this citation? Of terrestrial taxa? Please explain. Consider adding some stats here, such as the r-squared value for each of the relationships.

      We have better explained the citation in the figure caption, as well as adding r-squared values:

      “Figure 3: Relationship between range shifts and emergence phenology shifts among North American and European odonate species (N = 66; model R2 = 17.08 for glm, 14.9% for MCMCglmm). For reference, the shaded area shows mean latitudinal range shifts of terrestrial taxa as reported by Lenoir et al. (2020; calculated as the yearly mean dispersal rate of 1.11 +/- 0.96 km per year over 38 years).” (Lines 679-682)

      Comment:

      (50) L801: What are these underscored references?

      This was an issue with the reference software and has been resolved.

      Comment:

      (51) Table S1: L848: Consider starting with 'Samples of 76 North American and European odonate species from between ...'. Please use a horizontal line to separate the content from the table header. Add a horizontal line below the last row. Same for all tables.

      Thank you for this suggestion, we have edited the caption for Figure S1 as suggested (Line 1124). We have also made the suggested line additions to Table S1, S2, and S3.

      Comment:

      (52) Table S3: This is confusing. In Table 1 (main text) both 'southern range' and 'widespread' are used as predictors. Please explain.

      We originally included information on species range geography, including southern versus northern range, and widespread versus not, into one categorical variable. Following additional comments we re-analysed our data using range size, calculated as the number of quadrats occupied by a species in the historical time period, as a predictor. Now the methods section text (Lines 261-263) and Table 1 report results of that variable with distribution options northern, southern, or both. 

      Comment:

      (53) Figure S5 and S6: It would be more coherent if the colors refer to the continents and the suborders are indicated by shading. I would love to see a combination of the two figures with species ordered by the phylogenetic relationship and a dot matrix indicating the traits in the main text! This could really be a good starting point for a synthesis figure.

      The reviewer presents an interesting challenge for us. We have a choice, as we understand things, to present a figure showing phylogeny and traits (as requested here), or an ordered list of species relative to effect sizes in the two main responses to global change. The latter choice centers on the discoveries of the paper, while the former would be valuable for dragonfly biology but would depict information that proved to be biologically uninformative relative to our discovery. That is to say, there is no phylogenetic trend and biological traits among species did not affect results. We have gone some way toward illustrating that issue by retaining phylogeny in the MCMC-GLMM models, but we feel that a figure illustrating phylogeny and traits would (for most readers, at least) illustrate noise, rather than signal. For this reason, we have opted to take on the previous reviewer’s suggestion for a modified, main-text Figure 4, which we include below.

      Figure 4: Distribution of Northern range limit shifts (Panel A, kilometers) and emergence phenology shift (Panel B, Julian day) of 76 European and North American odonate species between a recent time period (2008 - 2018) and a historical time period (1980 - 2002). Anisoptera (dragonflies) are shown in pink, Zygoptera (damselflies) are shown in blue.

      Change last: Figure 3: Relationship between range shifts and emergence phenology shifts among North American and European odonate species (N = 66; model R2 = 17.08 for glm, 14.9% for MCMCglmm). For reference, the shaded area shows mean latitudinal range shifts of terrestrial taxa as reported by Lenoir et al. (2020; calculated as the yearly mean dispersal rate of 1.11 +/- 0.96 km per year over 38 years).

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      (1) The bad equilibria of the model still remain a concern, as well as other features like the transient overshoots that do not match with the data. I think they could achieve more accuracy here by assigning more weight to such specific features, through adding these as separate objectives for the generator explicitly. The traces contain a five-second current steps, and one second before and one second after the training step. This means that in the RMSE, the current step amplitude will dominate as a feature, as this is simply the state for which the data trace contains most time-points. Note that this is further exacerbated by using the IV curve as an auxiliary objective. I believe a better exploration of specific response features, incorporated as independently weighted loss terms for the generator, could improve the fit. E.g. an auxiliary term could be the equilibrium before and after the current step, another term could penalise response traces that do not converge back to their initial equilibrium, etc.

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion. We supplemented the membrane potential regression loss with errors computed for 3 intervals: pre- post- and mid- stimulation time intervals, improving the accuracy of EP-GAN for baseline membrane potential responses (Figure 2, 3, Table S2, S3). We also changed the simulation protocols for generated parameters by allowing a longer simulation time of 15 seconds, where the stimulation is applied during [5, 10] seconds and no stimulation at t = [0, 5) (pre-stimulation) and t = (10, 15] (post-stimulation). These time intervals are chosen to ensure sufficient stabilization periods before and after stimulation.  

      (2) The explanation of what the authors mean with 'inverse gradient operation' is clear now. However, this term is mathematically imprecise, as the inverse gradient does not exist because the gradient operator is not injective. The method is simply forward integration under the assumption that the derivate of the voltage is known at the grid time-points, and should be described as such.

      We thank the reviewer for the clarification on inverse gradient operation terminology. In the Methods section, we changed the term describing the inverse gradient operation to ‘forward integration’ which is a more accurate description describing the process.

      (3) I appreciate that the authors' method provides parameters of models at a minimal computational cost compared to running an evolutionary optimization for every new recording. I also believe that with some tweaking of the objective, the method could improve in accuracy. However, I share reviewer 2's concerns that the evolutionary baseline methods are not sufficiently explored, as these methods have been used to successfully fit considerably more complex response patterns. One way out of the dilemma is to show that the EP-GAN estimated parameters provide an initial guess that considerably narrows the search space for the evolutionary algorithm. In this context, the authors should also discuss the recent gradient based methods such as Deistler et al. (https://doi.org/10.1101/2024.08.21.608979) or Jones et al (https://doi.org/10.48550/arXiv.2407.04025).

      We supplemented the optimization setup for existing methods (GDE3, NSDE, DEMO, and NSGA2) by incorporating steady-state response constraints as the initial selection process. The process is similar to that of EP-GAN training data generation and DEMO parameter selection process [16] (see Results section, page 6 for detail). We also expanded the testing scenarios by evaluating all methods with respect to both small and large HH-model estimation. The small HH-model scenario estimates 47 parameters consisting of channel conductance, reversal potentials and initial conditions with the channel parameters (n = 129) frozen to default values in [41]. Large HH-model includes estimating channel parameters (i.e. 129) in addition to the 47 parameters by considering +-50% variations from their default values. For both small and large HH-model scenarios, we test total sample sizes of both 32k and 64k for all methods to evaluate their scalability with the number of simulated samples given during optimization. The results show that existing methods show good performances for small HH-model scenarios that scale with sample size consistent with literature. EP-GAN on the other hand shows overall better performance in predicting membrane potential responses on both small and large HH-model scenarios.  

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Major 1: Models do not faithfully capture empirical responses. While the models generated with EPGAN reproduce the average voltage during current injections reasonably well, the dynamics of the response are generally not well captured. For example, for the neuron labeled RIM (Figure 2), the most depolarized voltage traces show an initial 'overshoot' of depolarization, i.e. they depolarize strongly within the first few hundred milliseconds but then fall back to a less depolarized membrane potential. In contrast, the empirical recording shows no such overshoot. Similarly, for the neuron labeled AFD, all empirically recorded traces slowly ramp up over time. In contrast, the simulated traces are mostly flat. Furthermore, all empirical traces return to the pre-stimulus membrane potential, but many of the simulated voltage traces remain significantly depolarized, far outside of the ranges of empirically observed membrane potentials. The authors trained an additional GAN (EPGAN Extended) to improve the fit to the resting membrane potential. Interestingly, for one neuron (AWB), this improved the response during stimulation, which now reproduced the slowly raising membrane potentials observed empirically, however, the neuron still does not reliably return to its resting membrane potential. For the other two neurons, the authors report a decrease in accuracy in comparison to EP-GAN. While such deviations may appear small in the Root mean Square Error (RMSE), they likely indicate a large mismatch between the model and the electrophysiological properties of the biological neuron. The authors added a second metric during the revision - percentages of predicted membrane potential trajectories within empirical range. I appreciate this additional analysis. As the empirical ranges across neurons are far larger than the magnitude of dynamical properties of the response ('slow ramps', etc.), this metric doesn't seem to be well suited to quantify to which degree these dynamical properties are captured by the models.

      We made improvements to the training data generation and architecture of EP-GAN to improve its overall accuracy with predicted membrane potential responses. In particular, we divided training data generation into three neuron types found in C. elegans non-spiking neurons: 1) Transient outward rectifier, 2) Outward rectifier and 3) Bistable [8, 16]. Each randomly generated training sample is categorized into one of 3 types by evaluating its steady-state currents with respect to experimental dI/dV bound constraints (See generating training data section under Methods for more detail). The process is then followed by imposing minimum-maximum constraints on simulated membrane potential responses. The setup allows generations of training samples that are of closer distribution to experimentally recorded neurons. This is further described in Section Methods page 15 in the revised manuscript.

      We also improved the EP-GAN training process by incorporating random masking of input membrane potential responses. The masking forces EP-GAN to make predictions even with missing voltage traces, improving overall accuracy and allowing EP-GAN to use membrane potential inputs with arbitrary clamping protocol (see Methods page 13 for more detail). For the training loss functions, we further supplemented the membrane potential regression loss with errors computed for 2 intervals: pre- and post-stimulation time intervals to improve EP-GAN prediction capabilities for baseline membrane potentials.

      Taken together, these modifications improved EP-GAN’s overall ability to better capture empirical membrane potential responses and we show the results in Figure 2 – 5, Table S2, S3.

      Major 2: Comparison with other approaches is potentially misleading. Throughout the manuscript, the authors claim that their approach outperforms the other approaches tested. But compare the responses of the models in the present manuscript (neurons RIM, AFD, AIY) to the ones provided for the same neurons in Naudin et al. 2022 (https://doi.org/10.1371/journal. pone.0268380). Naudin et al. present models that seem to match empirical data far more accurately than any model presented in the current study. Naudin et al. achieved this using DEMO, an algorithm that in the present manuscript is consistently shown to be among the worst of all algorithms tested. I therefore strongly disagree with the authors claim that a "Comparison of EP-GAN with existing estimation methods shows EP-GAN advantage in the accuracy of estimated parameters". This may be true in the context of the benchmark performed in the study (i.e., a condition of very limited compute resources - 18 generations with a population size of 600, compare that to 2000 generations recommended in Naudin et al.), but while EP-GAN wins under these specific conditions (and yes, here the authors convincingly show that their EP-GAN produces by far the best results!), other approaches seem to win with respect to the quality of the models they can ultimately generate.

      We thank the reviewer for the feedback regarding the comparison with existing methods. We have revised the optimization setup for existing methods (GDE3, NSDE, DEMO, and NSGA2) by incorporating steady-state response constraints as the initial selection process. The process is similar to that of EP-GAN training data generation and DEMO parameter selection process [16] (see Results section, page 6 for detail). Incorporating this process has improved the accuracy of existing methods especially for small HH-model scenarios where DEMO stood out with the best performance alongside NSGA2 (Figure 5, Table 1, 2).

      We also expanded the testing scenarios by evaluating all methods with respect to both small and large HH-model estimation. The small HH-model scenario estimates 47 parameters consisting of channel conductance, reversal potentials and initial conditions with the channel parameters (n = 129) frozen to default values in [41]. Large HH-model includes estimating channel parameters (i.e. 129) in addition to the 47 parameters by considering +-50% variations from their default values. For both small and large HH-model scenarios, we test total sample sizes of both 32k and 64k for all methods to evaluate their scalability with the number of simulated samples given during optimization. The results show that existing methods show good performances for small HH-model scenarios that scale with sample size. EP-GAN on the other hand shows overall better performance in predicting membrane potential responses on both small and large HH-model scenarios. 

      In particular, with extended membrane potential error including pre-, mid- , post-activation periods, EP-GAN (trained with 32k samples, large HH-model, 9 neurons) mean membrane potential responses error of 2.82mV was lower than that of DEMO (12.2mV, 64k samples) trained on identical setup (Table 2) and DEMO (7.78mV, using 36,000k samples, 3 neurons) applied to simpler HHmodel in [16]. With respect to DEMO performance in [16], under identical simulation protocol (i.e., no stimulation during (0, 5s), (10, 15s) and stimulation during (5, 10s)), EP-GAN predicted RIM (large HH-model) showed membrane potential accuracy on par with that of DEMO (simpler HH-model) and EP-GAN predicted AFD showed better accuracy for post-activation membrane potential response where DEMO predicted membrane potentials overshoot above the baseline (not shown in the paper).

      Major 3: As long as the quality of the models generated by the EP-GAN cannot be significantly improved, I am doubtful that it indeed can contribute to the 'ElectroPhysiome', as it seems likely that dynamics that are currently poorly captured, like slow ramps, or the ability of the neuron to return to its resting membrane potential, will critically affect network computations. If the authors want to motivate their study based on this very ambitious goal, they should illustrate that single neuron model generation with their approach is robust enough to warrant well-constrained network dynamics. Based on the currently presented results, I find the framing of the manuscript far too bold.

      We thank the reviewer for the feedback regarding the paper's scope. With revised methods, the overall quality of EP-GAN models is improved with the most significant improvements in baseline membrane potential accuracy. While high quality neuron models could be attained with existing methods given sufficient sample size, our results suggest EP-GAN can predict models with enhanced quality with significantly fewer sample size without a need for retraining, thus complementing the main drawback of evolutionary based methods. While EP-GAN still has limitations (e.g., difficulty in predicting slow ramps) that need to be addressed in the future, we believe its overall performance combined with fast inference speed and flexibility in its input data format (e.g., missing membrane potential traces) is a step forward in the large-scale neuron modeling tasks that can contribute to network models.   

      Major 4: The conclusion of the ablation study 'In addition the architecture of EP-GAN permits inference of parameters even when partial membrane potential and steady-state currents profile are given as inputs' does not seem to be justified given the voltage traces shown in Figure 3. For example, for RIM, the resting membrane potential stays around 0 mV, but all empirical traces are around -40mV. For AFD, all simulated traces have a negative slope during the depolarizing stimuli, but a positive slope in all empirically observed traces. For AIY, the shape of hyperpolarized traces is off. While it may be that by their metric neurons in the 25% category are classified as 'preserving baseline accuracy', this doesn't seem justified given the voltage traces presented in the manuscript. It appears the metric is not strict enough.

      We improved EP-GAN’s training process by incorporating random masking of input membrane potential responses. The masking forces EP-GAN to make predictions even with missing voltage traces, improving overall accuracy and allowing EP-GAN to use membrane potential inputs with arbitrary clamping protocol.

      Such input masking during training has improved the results with ablation studies where EP-GAN now retains baseline membrane potential error (3.3mV, averaged across pre-, mid-, post-activation periods) up to 50% of membrane potential inputs remaining (3.5mV) and up to 25% of steady-state currents remaining (3.5mV).

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript "Drosophila Visuomotor Integration: An Integrative Model and Behavioral Evidence of Visual Efference Copy" provides an integrative model of the visuomotor control in Drosophila melanogaster. This model presents an experimentally derived model based on visually evoked wingbeat pattern recordings of three strategically selected visual stimulus types with well-established behavioral response characteristics. By testing variations of these models, the authors demonstrate that the virtual model behavior can recapitulate the recorded wing beat behavioral results and those recorded by others for these specific stimuli when presented individually. Yet, the novelty of this study and their model is that it allows predictions for natural visual scenes in which multiple visual stimuli occur simultaneously and may have opposite or enhancing effects on behavior. Testing three models that would allow interactions of these visual modalities, the authors show that using a visual efference copy signal allows visual streams to interact, replicating behavior recorded when multiple stimuli are presented simultaneously. Importantly, they validated the prediction of this model in real flies using magnetically tethered flies, e.g., presenting moving bars with varying backgrounds. In conclusion, the presented manuscript presents a commendable effort in developing and demonstrating the validity of a mixture model that allows predictions of the behavior of Drosophila in natural visual environments.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the manuscript is well-structured and clear in its presentation, and the modeling and experimental research are methodically conducted and illustrated in visually appealing and easy-to-understand figures and their captions.

      The manuscript employs a thorough, logical approach, combining computational modeling with experimental behavioral validation using magnetically tethered flies. This iterative integration of simulation and empirical behavioral evidence enhances the credibility of the findings.

      The associated code base is well documented and readily produces all figures in the document.

      Suggestions:

      However, while the experiments provide evidence for the use of a visual efference copy, the manuscript would be even more impressive if it presented specific predictions for the neural implementation or even neurophysiological data to support this model. Or, at the very least, a thorough discussion. Nonetheless, these models and validating behavioral experiments make this a valuable contribution to the field; it is well executed and addresses a significant gap in the modeling of fly behavior and holistic understanding of visuomotor behaviors.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s thoughtful comments on the strengths and weaknesses of our manuscript. We agree that biophysically realistic model reflecting the structure of neural circuits as well as physiological data from them would be invaluable. However, we are currently unable to provide physiological evidence for EC-based suppression, nor provide circuit architecture for efference copy-based suppression of the stability circuit because the neural pathway underlying this behavior remains unidentified. Extensive recordings from the HS/VS system have revealed cell-type-specific motor-related inputs during both spontaneous and loom-evoked flight turns (Fenk et al., 2021; Kim et al., 2017, 2015). These studies predicted suppression of the optomotor stability response during such turns, and our new experiments confirmed this suppression specifically during loom-evoked turns (Figures 5, 6). However, these neurons are primarily involved in the head optomotor response, not the body optomotor response. We hope to extend our current model in future studies to incorporate more cellular-level detail, as the feedforward circuits underlying stability behavior become more clearly defined.

      Here are a few points that should be addressed:

      (1) The biomechanics block (Figure 2) should be elaborated on, to explain its relevance to behavior and relation to the underlying neural mechanisms.

      We appreciate this suggestion. The mathematical representation of the biomechanics block has been developed by other groups in previous studies (Fry et al., 2003; Ristroph et al., 2010). We used exactly the same model, and its parameters were identical to those used in one of those studies (Fry et al., 2003; Ristroph et al., 2010), in which the parameters were estimated from the stabilizing response in response to magnetic “stumbling” pulses. In the previous version of the manuscript, we had a description of the biomechanics block in the Method section (see Equation 4). In response to the reviewer’s comment, we have made a few changes in Figure 2A and expanded the associated description in the main text, as follows.

      (Line 160) “To test the orientation behavior of the model, we developed an expanded model, termed “virtual fly model” hereafter. In this model, we added a biomechanics block that transforms the torque response of the fly to the actual heading change according to kinematic parameters estimated previously (Michael H Dickinson, 2005; Ristroph et al., 2010) (Figure 2A, see Equation 4 in Methods and Movie S1). The virtual fly model, featuring position and velocity blocks that are conditioned on the type of the visual pattern, can now change its body orientation, simulating the visual orientation behavior of flies in the free flight condition.”

      (2) It is unclear how the three integrative models with different strategies were chosen or what relevance they have to neural implementation. This should be explained and/or addressed.

      Thank you for this valuable comment. We selected the three models based on previous studies investigating visuomotor integration across multiple species, under conditions where multiple sensory cues are presented simultaneously.

      The addition-only model represents the simplest hypothesis, analogous to the “additive model” proposed by Tom Collett in his 1980 study (Collett, 1980). We used this model as a baseline to illustrate behavior in the absence of any efference copy mechanism. Notably, some modeling studies have proposed linear (additive) integration for multimodal sensory cues at the behavioral level (Liu et al., 2023; Van der Stoep et al., 2021). However, experimental evidence demonstrating strictly linear integration—either behaviorally or physiologically—remains limited. In our study, new data (Figure 5) show that bar-evoked and background movement-evoked locomotor responses are combined linearly, supporting the addition-only model.

      The graded efference copy model has been most clearly demonstrated in the cerebellum-like circuit of Mormyrid fish during electrosensation (Bell, 1981; Kennedy et al., 2014). In this system, the efference copy signal forms a negative image of the predicted reafferent input and undergoes plastic changes as the environment changes—an idea that inspired our modifiable efference copy model (Figure 4–figure supplement 1). The all-or-none efference copy model is exemplified in the sensory systems of smaller organisms, such as the auditory neurons of crickets during stridulation (Poulet and Hedwig, 2006). Notably, in crickets, the motor-related input is referred to as corollary discharge rather than efference copy. Typically, “efference copy” refers to a graded, subtractive motor-related signal, while “corollary discharge” denotes an all-or-none signal, both counteracting the sensory consequences of self-generated actions. In this manuscript, we use the term efference copy more broadly, encompassing both types of motor-related feedback signals (Sommer and Wurtz, 2008).

      In response to this comment, we have made the following changes in the main text to enhance its accessibility to general readers.

      (Line#268) “This integration problem has been studied across animal sensory systems, typically by analyzing motor-related signals observed in sensory neurons (Bell, 1981; Collett, 1980; Kim et al., 2017; Poulet and Hedwig, 2006). Building on the results of these studies, we developed three integrative models. The first model, termed the “addition-only model”, assumes that the outputs of the object (bar) and the background (grating) response circuits are summed to control the flight orientation (Figure 4B, see Equation 14 in Methods).”

      (Line#272) “In the second and third models, an EC is used to set priorities between different visuomotor circuits (Figure 4C,D). In particular, the EC is derived from the object-induced motor command and sent to the object response system to nullify visual input associated with the object-evoked turn (Bell, 1981; Collett, 1980; Poulet and Hedwig, 2006). These motor-related inputs fully suppress sensory processing in some systems (Poulet and Hedwig, 2006), whereas in others they selectively counteract only the undesirable components of the sensory feedback (Bell, 1981; Kennedy et al., 2014).”

      (3) There should be a discussion of how the visual efference could be represented in the biological model and an evaluation of the plausibility and alternatives.

      Thank you for this helpful comment. We have now added the following discussion to share our perspective on the circuit-level implementation of the visual efference copy in Drosophila.

      (Line#481) “Efference copy in Drosophila vision

      Under natural conditions, various visual features in the environment may concurrently activate multiple motor programs. Because these may interfere with one another, it is crucial for the central brain to coordinate between the motor signals originating from different sensory circuits. Among such coordination mechanisms, the EC mechanisms were hypothesized to counteract so-called reafferent visual input, those caused specifically by self-movement (Collett, 1980; von Holst and Mittelstaedt, 1950). Recent studies reported such EC-like signals in Drosophila visual neurons during spontaneous as well as loom-evoked flight turns (Fenk et al., 2021; Kim et al., 2017, 2015). One type of EC-like signals were identified in a group of wide-field visual motion-sensing neurons that were shown to control the neck movement for the gaze stability (Kim et al., 2017). The EC-like signals in these cells were bidirectional depending on the direction of flight turns, and their amplitudes were quantitatively tuned to those of the expected visual input across cell types. Although amplitude varies among cell types, it remains inconclusive whether it also varies within a given cell type to match the amplitude of expected visual feedback, thereby implementing the graded EC signal. A more recent study examined EC-like signal amplitude in the same visual neurons for loom-evoked turns, across events (Fenk et al., 2021). Although the result showed a strong correlation between wing response and the EC-like inputs, the authors pointed that this apparent correlation could stem from noisy measurement of all-or-none motor-related inputs.

      Thus, these studies did not completely disambiguate between graded vs. all-or-none EC signaling. Another type of EC-like signals observed in the visual circuit tuned to a moving spot exhibited characteristics consistent with all-or-none EC. That is, it entirely suppressed visual signaling, irrespective of the direction of the self-generated turn (Kim et al., 2015; Turner et al., 2022). 

      Efference-copy (EC)–like signals have been reported in several Drosophila visual circuits, yet their behavioral role remains unclear. Indirect evidence comes from a behavioral study showing that the dynamics of spontaneously generated flight turns were unaffected by unexpected background motion (Bender and Dickinson, 2006a). Likewise, our behavioral experiments showed that, during loom-evoked turns, responses to background motion are suppressed in an all-or-none manner (Figures 6 and 7). Consistent with this, motor-related inputs recorded in visual neurons exhibit nearly identical dynamics during spontaneous and loom-evoked turns (Fenk et al., 2021). Together, these behavioral and physiological parallels support the idea that a common efference-copy mechanism operates during both spontaneous and loom-evoked flight turns.

      Unlike loom-evoked turns, bar-evoked turn dynamics changed in the presence of moving backgrounds (Figure 5), a result compatible with both the addition-only and graded EC models. However, when the static background was updated just before a bar-evoked turn—thereby altering the amplitude of optic flow—the turn dynamics remained unaffected (Figures 5 and 7), clearly contradicting the addition-only model. Thus, the graded EC model is the only one consistent with both findings. If a graded EC mechanism were truly at work, however, an unexpected background change should have modified turn dynamics because of the mismatch between expected and actual visual feedback (Figure 4–figure supplement 1)—yet we detected no such effect at any time scale examined (Figure 7–figure supplement 1). This mismatch would be ignored only if the amplitude of the graded EC adapted to environmental changes almost instantaneously—a mechanism that seems improbable given the limited computational capacity of the Drosophila brain. In electric fish, for example, comparable adjustments take more than 10 minutes (Bell, 1981; Muller et al., 2019). Further investigation is needed to clarify how reorienting flies ignore optic flow generated by static backgrounds, potentially by engaging EC mechanisms not captured by the models tested in this study.

      Why would Drosophila rely on the all-or-none EC mechanism instead of the graded one for loom-evoked turns? A graded EC must be adjusted adaptively depending on the environment, as the amplitude of visual feedback varies with both the dynamics of self-generated movement and environmental conditions (e.g., empty vs. cluttered visual backgrounds) (Figure 4—figure supplement 1). Recent studies on electric fish have suggested that a large array of neurons in a multi-layer network is crucial for generating a modifiable efference copy signal matched to the current environment (Muller et al., 2019). Given their small-sized brain, flies might opt for a more economical design for suppressing unwanted visual inputs regardless of the visual environment. Circuits mediating such a type of EC were identified in the cricket auditory system during stridulation (Poulet and Hedwig, 2006), for example. Our study strongly suggests the existence of a similar circuit in the Drosophila visual system. 

      We tested the hypothesis that efference-copy (EC) signals guide action selection by suppressing specific visuomotor reflexes when multiple visual features compete. An alternative motif with a similar function is mutual inhibition between motor pathways (Edwards, 1991; Mysore and Kothari, 2020). In Drosophila, descending neurons form dense lateral connections (Braun et al., 2024), offering a substrate for such competitive interactions. Determining whether—and how—EC and mutual inhibition operate will require recordings from the neurons that ensure visual stability, which remain unidentified. Mapping these pathways and assessing how they are modulated by visual and behavioral context are important goals for future work.”

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      It has been widely proposed that the neural circuit uses a copy of motor command, an efference copy, to cancel out self-generated sensory stimuli so that intended movement is not disturbed by the reafferent sensory inputs. However, how quantitatively such an efference copy suppresses sensory inputs is unknown. Here, Canelo et al. tried to demonstrate that an efference copy operates in an all-or-none manner and that its amplitude is independent of the amplitude of the sensory signal to be suppressed. Understanding the nature of such an efference copy is important because animals generally move during sensory processing, and the movement would devastatingly distort that without a proper correction. The manuscript is concise and written very clearly. However, experiments do not directly demonstrate if the animal indeed uses an efference copy in the presented visual paradigms and if such a signal is indeed non-scaled. As it is, it is not clear if the suppression of behavioral response to the visual background is due to the act of an efference copy (a copy of motor command) or due to an alternative, more global inhibitory mechanism, such as feedforward inhibition at the sensory level or attentional modulation. To directly uncover the nature of an efference copy, physiological experiments are necessary. If that is technically challenging, it requires finding a behavioral signature that unambiguously reports a (copy of) motor command and quantifying the nature of that behavior.

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful and constructive comment. We agree that our current behavioral evidence does not directly identify the underlying circuit mechanism, and that direct recordings from visual neurons modulated by an efference copy would be critical for distinguishing between potential mechanisms.

      A prerequisite for such physiological investigations would be the identification of both (1) the feedforward neurons directly involved in the optomotor response, and (2) the neurons conveying motor-related signals to the optomotor circuit. Despite efforts by several research groups, the location of the feedforward circuit mediating the optomotor response remains elusive. This limitation has prevented us from obtaining direct cellular evidence of flight turn-associated suppression of optomotor signaling.

      In light of the reviewer’s suggestion, we expanded our investigation to strengthen the behavioral evidence for efference copy (EC) mechanisms. In addition to our earlier experiments involving unexpected changes in the static background, we examined how object-evoked flight turns influence the optomotor stability reflex and vice versa (Figures 5 and 6). To quantify the interaction between different visuomotor behaviors, we systematically varied the temporal relationship between two types of visual motion—loom versus moving background, or moving bar versus moving background—and measured the resulting behavioral responses.

      Our findings support pattern- and time-specific suppressive mechanisms acting between flight turns associated with the different visual patterns. Specifically:

      The responses to a moving bar and a moving background add linearly, even when presented in close temporal proximity.

      Loom-evoked turns and the optomotor stability reflex mutually suppress each other in a time-specific manner.

      For both loom- and moving bar-evoked flight turns, changes in the static background had no measurable effect on the dynamics of the object-evoked responses.

      These results provide a detailed behavioral characterization of a suppressive interaction between distinct visuomotor responses. This, in turn, offers correlative evidence supporting the involvement of an efference copy-like mechanism acting on the visual system. While similar efference copy mechanisms have been documented in other parts of the visual system, we acknowledge that our findings do not exclude alternative explanations. In particular, it is still possible that lateral inhibition within the central brain or ventral nerve cord contributes to the suppression we observed.

      Ultimately, definitive proof will require identifying the specific neurons that convey efference copy signals and demonstrating that silencing these neurons abolishes the behavioral suppression. Until such experiments are feasible, our behavioral approach provides an important contribution toward understanding the nature of sensorimotor integration in this system.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Canelo et al. used a combination of mathematical modeling and behavioral experiments to ask whether flies use an all-or-none EC model or a graded EC model (in which the turn amplitude is modulated by wide-field optic flow). Particularly, the authors focus on the bar-ground discrimination problem, which has received significant attention in flies over the last 50-60 years. First, they use a model by Poggio and Reichardt to model flight response to moving small-field bars and spots and wide-field gratings. They then simulate this model and compare simulation results to flight responses in a yaw-free tether and find generally good agreement. They then ask how flies may do bar-background discrimination (i.e. complex visual environment) and invoke different EC models and an additive model (balancing torque production due to background and bar movement). Using behavioral experiments and simulation supports the notion that flies use an all-or-none EC since flight turns are not influenced by the background optic flow. While the study is interesting, there are major issues with the conceptual framework.

      Strengths:

      They ask a significant question related to efference copies during volitional movement.

      The methods are well detailed and the data (and statistics) are presented clearly.

      The integration of behavioral experiments and mathematical modeling of flight behavior.

      The figures are overall very clear and salient.

      Weaknesses:

      Omission of saccades: While the authors ask a significant question related to the mechanism of bar-ground discrimination, they fail to integrate an essential component of the Drosophila visuomotor responses: saccades. Indeed, the Poggio and Reichardt model, which was developed almost 50 years ago, while appropriate to study body-fixed flight, has a severe limitation: it does not consider saccades. The authors identify this major issue in the Discussion by citing a recent switched, integrate-and-fire model (Mongeau & Frye, 2017). The authors admit that they "approximated" this model as a smooth pursuit movement. However, I disagree that it is an approximation; rather it is an omission of a motor program that is critical for volitional visuomotor behavior. Indeed, saccades are the main strategy by which Drosophila turn in free flight and prior to landing on an object (i.e. akin to a bar), as reported by the Dickinson group (Censi et al., van Breugel & Dickinson [not cited]). Flies appear to solve the bar-ground discrimination problem by switching between smooth movement and saccades (Mongeau & Frye, 2017; Mongeau et al., 2019 [not cited]). Thus, ignoring saccades is a major issue with the current study as it makes their model disconnected from flight behavior, which has been studied in a more natural context since the work of Poggio.

      Thank you for this helpful comment. We agree that including saccadic turns is essential and qualitatively improves the model. In the revised manuscript, we therefore expanded our bar-tracking model to incorporate an integrate-and-saccade strategy, now presented in Figure 2—figure supplement

      The manuscript now introduces this result as follows:

      (Line#190) “Finally, one important locomotion dynamics that a flying Drosophila exhibits while tracking an object is a rapid orientation change, called a “saccade” (Breugel and Dickinson, 2012; Censi et al., 2013; Heisenberg and Wolf, 1979). For example, while tracking a slowly moving bar, flies perform relatively straight flights interspersed with saccadic flight turns (Collett and Land, 1975; Mongeau and Frye, 2017). During this behavior, it has been proposed that visual circuits compute an integrated error of the bar position with respect to the frontal midline and triggers a saccadic turn toward the bar when the integrated value reaches a threshold (Frighetto and Frye, 2023; Mongeau et al., 2019; Mongeau and Frye, 2017). We expanded our bar fixation model to incorporate this behavioral strategy (Figure 2--figure supplement 2). The overall structure of the modified model is akin to the one proposed in a previous study (Mongeau and Frye, 2017), and the amplitude of a saccadic turn was determined by the sum of the position and velocity functions (Figure 2--figure supplement 2A; see Equation 13 in Methods). When simulated, our model successfully reproduced experimental observations of saccade dynamics across different object velocities (Figure 2--figure supplement 2B-D) (Mongeau and Frye, 2017). Together, our models faithfully recapitulated the results of previous behavioral observations in response to singly presented visual patterns (Collett, 1980; Götz, 1987; H. Kim et al., 2023; Maimon et al., 2008; Mongeau and Frye, 2017).”

      Apart from Figures 1 and 2, most of our data—whether from simulations or behavioral experiments—use brief visual patterns lasting 200 ms or less. These stimuli trigger a single, rapid orientation change reminiscent of a saccadic flight turn. In this part of the paper, we essentially have examined how multiple visuomotor pathways interact to determine the direction of object-evoked turns when several visual patterns occur simultaneously.

      Critically, recent work showed that a group of columnar neurons (T3) appear specialized for saccadic bar tracking through integrate-and-fire computations, supporting the notion of parallel visual circuits for saccades and smooth movement (Frighetto & Frye, 2023 [not cited]).

      Thanks for bringing up this critical issue. We have now added this paper in the following part of the manuscript.

      (Line#193) “During this behavior, it has been proposed that visual circuits compute an integrated error of the horizontal bar position with respect to the frontal midline and triggers a saccadic turn toward the bar when the integrated value reaches a threshold (Frighetto and Frye, 2023; Mongeau and Frye, 2017).”

      (Line#462) “Visual systems extract features from the environment by calculating spatiotemporal relationships of neural activities within an array of photoreceptors. In Drosophila, these calculations occur initially on a local scale in the peripheral layers of the optic lobe (Frighetto and Frye, 2023; Gruntman et al., 2018; Ketkar et al., 2020).”

      A major theme of this work is bar fixation, yet recent work showed that in the presence of proprioceptive feedback, flies do not actually center a bar (Rimniceanu & Frye, 2023). Furthermore, the same study found that yaw-free flies do not smoothly track bars but instead generate saccades. Thus prior work is in direct conflict with the work here. This is a major issue that requires more engagement by the authors.

      Thank you for your thoughtful comments and for drawing our attention to this important paper. In our experiments, bar fixation on oscillating vertical objects emerges during the “alignment” phase of the magneto-tether protocol. The pattern movement dynamics was similar those used by Rimniceanu & Frye (2023), yet the two studies differ in a key respect: Rimniceanu & Frye employed a motion-defined bar, whereas we presented a dark vertical bar against a uniform or random-dot background. The alignment success rate—defined as the proportion of trials in which the fly’s body angle is within ±25° of the target—was about 50 % (data not shown). Our alignment pattern consisted of three vertical stripes spanning ~40° horizontally; when we replaced it with a single, narrower stripe, the success rate was lowered (data not shown). These observations suggest that bar fixation in the magnetically tethered assay is less robust than in the rigid-tethered assay, although flies still orient toward highly salient vertical objects.

      We also observed that bar-evoked turns were elicited more reliably when the bar moved rapidly (45° in 200 ms) in the magneto-tether assay, although the turn magnitude was significantly smaller than the actual bar displacement (Figure 3).

      In response to the reviewer’s comment, we now added the following description in the paper regarding the bar fixation behavior, citing Rimniceanu&Frye 2023.

      (Line#239) “Another potential explanation arises from recent studies demonstrating that proprioceptive feedback provided during flight turns in a magnetically tethered assay strongly dampens the amplitude of wing and head responses (Cellini and Mongeau, 2022; Rimniceanu et al., 2023).”

      Relevance of the EC model: EC-related studies by the authors linked cancellation signals to saccades (Kim et al, 2014 & 2017). Puzzlingly, the authors applied an EC model to smooth movement, when the authors' own work showed that smooth course stabilizing flight turns do not receive cancellation signals (Fenk et al., 2021). Thus, in Fig. 4C, based on the state of the field, the efference copy signal should originate from the torque commands to initiate saccades, and not from torque to generate smooth movement. As this group previously showed, cancellation signals are quantitatively tuned to that of the expected visual input during saccades. Importantly, this tuning would be to the anticipated saccadic turn optic flow. Thus the authors' results supporting an all-or-none model appear in direct conflict with the author's previous work. Further, the addition-only model is not particularly helpful as it has been already refuted by behavioral experiments (Rimneceanu & Frye, Mongeau & Frye).

      Thank you for this constructive comment. Efference copy is best established for brief, discrete actions like flight saccades. While motor-related modulation of visual processing has been reported across short- and long-duration behaviours (Chiappe et al., 2010; Fujiwara et al., 2017; Kim et al., 2015, 2017; Maimon et al., 2010; Turner et al., 2022), only flight saccade-associated signals exhibit the temporal profile appropriate to cancel reafferent input. However, von Holst & Mittelstaedt (1950) originally formulated efference copy to explain the smooth optomotor response of hoverflies. In HS/VS recordings in previous studies, however, we could not detect membrane-potential changes tied to baseline wing-beat amplitude (data not shown), but further work is needed. 

      Note that visually evoked flight turns analyzed in this paper have relatively fast dynamics. Fenk et al. (2021) showed that HS cells carry EC-like motor signals during both loom-evoked turns and spontaneous saccades. Building on this, we tested whether object-evoked rapid turns modulate other visuomotor pathways. Although Fenk et al. also found that optomotor turns lack motor input to HS cells, the authors did not test whether the optomotor pathway suppresses other reflexes, such as loom-evoked turns. Our new behavioral data (Figure 6) show that optomotor turns indeed suppress loom-evoked turns, suggesting a potential EC signal arising from the optomotor pathway that inhibits loom-responsive visual neurons.

      In Kim et al. (2017), the authors argued that HS/VS neurons receive a “quantitatively tuned” efference copy that varies across cell types: yaw-sensitive LPTCs are strongly suppressed, roll-sensitive cells receive intermediate input, and pitch-sensitive cells receive little or none. We also showed that when the amplitude of ongoing visual drive changes, the amplitude of saccade-related potentials (SRPs) scales linearly. This proportionality does not imply a genuinely graded EC, however, because SRP amplitude could vary solely through changes in driving force (Vm – Vrest) with a fixed EC conductance. Crucially, SRPs do not fully suppress feed-forward visual signalling, arguing against an all-or-none EC mechanism.

      How, then, can the cellular and behavioural data be reconciled? Silencing HS/VS neurons—or their primary inputs, the T4/T5 neurons—does not markedly diminish the optomotor response in flight (Fenk et al., 2014; Kim et al., 2017), indicating the presence of additional, as-yet-unidentified pathways.

      Physiological recordings from other visual neurons that drive the optomotor response in flying Drosophila are therefore needed to determine how strongly they are suppressed during loom-evoked turns.

      Behavioral evidence for all-or-none EC model: The authors state "unless the stability reflex is suppressed during the flies' object evoked turns, the turns should slow down more strongly with the dense background than the sparse one". This hypothesis is based on the fact that the optomotor response magnitude is larger with a denser background, as would be predicted by an EMD model (because there are more pixels projected onto the eye). However, based on the authors' previous work, the EC should be tuned to optic flow and thus the turning velocity (or amplitude). Thus the EC need not be directly tied to the background statistics, as they claim. For instance, I think it would be important to distinguish whether a mismatch in reafferent velocity (optic flow) links to distinct turn velocities (and thus position). This would require moving the background at different velocities (co- and anti-directionally) at the onset of bar motion. Overall, there are alternative hypotheses here that need to be discussed and more fully explored (as presented by Bender & Dickinson and in work by the Maimon group).

      We appreciate the reviewer’s important suggestion. In response, we performed the recommended experiment. In Figures 5 and 6 of the revised manuscript, we now present how bar- or loom-evoked flight turns affect the response to a moving background pattern. These experiments revealed that bar-evoked turns do not suppress the optic flow response, whereas loom-evoked turns strongly suppress it. Specifically, when background motion began 100 ms after the onset of loom expansion, the response to the background was significantly suppressed. Although weak residual responses to the background motion were observed in this case, this could be due to background motion occurring outside of the suppression interval, which may correspond in duration to the duration of flight turns (Figure 6C,D). 

      The lack of suppression of the optic flow response during and after bar-evoked turns appears to suggest that the responses are added linearly (Figure 5), seemingly contradicting the lack of dynamic change when the background dot density was altered (Figure 7, Figure 7–figure supplement 1). That is, the experimental result in Figure 5 supports either an addition-only or a graded efference copy (EC) model. However, the result in Figure 7 supports an all-or-none EC model. If a graded EC were used, the amplitude of the EC should be updated almost instantaneously when the static background changes.

      Another possibility is that the optic flow during self-generated turns in a static background is extremely weak compared to the optic flow input generated by physically moving the pattern, perhaps due to the rapid nature of head movements. Indeed, detailed kinematic analysis of head movement during spontaneous saccades in blow flies revealed that the head reaches the target angle before the body completes the orientation change, making the effective speed of reafferent optic flow higher than the speed of body rotation (Hateren and Schilstra, 1999). To test these hypotheses, further experiments will be needed for bar-evoked flight turns.

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      The reviewers identified two key revisions that could improve the assessment of the paper:

      (1) Consideration of saccades within the model framework (outlined by reviewer 3).

      (2) Addition of physiology data to support the conclusions of the paper (outlined by reviewer 2). If this is not feasible within the timescale of revisions, the paper would need to be revised to clarify that the model leads to a hypothesis that would need to be tested with future physiology experiments.

      Thank you for these comments.

      Regarding revision point #1, we have added Figure 2–figure supplement 2, where we incorporated our position-velocity model (estimated in Figure 1) into the framework of the integrate-and-saccade model. A detailed description of this model is now provided in the main text (Lines 190–203).

      For revision point #2, obtaining electrophysiological evidence for efference copy remains challenging, as neither the visual neurons nor the efference-copy neuron has been identified for the wing optomotor response. As suggested by the reviewers, we have revised the title of the paper to reduce emphasis on efference copy and have noted electrophysiological recordings as a direction for future work.

      old title: A visual efference copy-based navigation algorithm in Drosophila for complex visual environments

      new title: Integrative models of visually guided steering in Drosophila

      Specific recommendations are detailed below.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      To directly demonstrate if an efference copy is non-scaled, the following experiments can be helpful: record from HS/VS cells and examine the relation between the amplitude of the succade-suppression signal vs. succade amplitude.

      Thanks for raising this important point. We previously carried out the suggested analysis for loom-evoked saccades in Fenk et al. (2021). There, significant correlations emerged between wing-response amplitude and saccade-related potentials (Figures 2F and 3C). However, we did not interpret the strong correlation (r ≈ 0.8) as evidence for a graded efference copy, because the amplitude of saccade-related potentials appeared to be bimodal. Upon presentation of the looming stimulus, flies either executed large evasive turns or showed minimal changes in wing-stroke amplitude. Large wing responses were accompanied by strong, saturated suppression of HS-cell membrane potential, whereas trials without wing responses produced only weak modulations—reflected in the bimodal distribution of saccade-related potential amplitudes (Figure 3C). 

      Importantly, in rigidly tethered preparations—where these potentials are typically measured—the absence of proprioceptive feedback can itself drive wingbeat amplitudes to saturation during saccades. We therefore reasoned that the lack of intermediate-sized flight saccades would naturally yield correspondingly saturated saccade-related potentials, even if a graded EC system is in play. 

      In Kim et al. (2017), we also performed a comprehensive analysis of spontaneous saccade-related potentials across all HS/VS cell types. When we later examined the relationship between saccade amplitude and the corresponding saccade-related potentials in each cell type, we could not find any statistically significant correlation (unpublished data).

      measure how much a weak visual stimulus and a strong visual stimulus are suppressed by the suppression signal. If the signal is non-scaled, visual stimuli should always be suppressed independently of their intensities.

      Thank you for this important suggestion. As mentioned in our response to the previous comment, we believe it is not feasible to record from neurons responsible for the body optomotor response at this point, as their identity remains unknown. Regarding the HS/VS cells, our previous study showed that HS cells are not always fully suppressed. The changes in saccade-related potential amplitude can be described as a linear function of the pre-saccadic visually-evoked membrane potential (Figure 7 in Kim et al., 2017). 

      As suggested by Fenk et al. 2014 (doi: 10.1016/j.cub.2014.10.042), HS cells might also be responsive to a moving bar. If that is the case, and if you present a bar and background (either sparse or dense) in a closed-loop manner to a head-fixed fly, HS cells might be sensitive only to the bar but not to the background (independently of the density).

      Thanks for pointing out this important issue. HS cells indeed respond strongly to the horizontal movement of a vertical bar, as expected given that their receptive fields are formed by the integration of local optic flow vectors. In one of our previous studies (Supplemental Figure 1 in Kim et al., 2015), we showed that the response amplitude to a single vertical bar is roughly equivalent to that elicited by a vertical grating composed of 12 bars of the same size. Therefore, we believe that HS cells are likely to contribute to the head response to a moving vertical bar. In a body-fixed flight simulator, HS cells would respond only to the bar if the bar runs in a closed loop with a static background. In this scenario, HS cells are likely to play a role in the head optomotor response.

      Note also that the role of HS cells in the wing optomotor response remains unresolved. Unilateral activation of HS cells has been shown to elicit locomotor turns in walking Drosophila (Fujiwara et al., 2017), as well as in flying individuals (unpublished data from our lab). However, a previous study also showed that strong silencing of HS/VS cells significantly reduced the head optomotor response, but not the wing optomotor response (Kim et al., 2017).

      If neurophysiology is technically challenging, an alternative way might pay attention to a head movement that exclusively follows the background (Fox et al., 2014 (doi: 10.1242/jeb.080192)). Because HS cells are thought to promote head rotation to background motion, a non-scaled suppression signal on HS cells would always suppress the head rotation independently of the background density.

      Thanks for this helpful comment. We have analyzed head movements during bar-evoked flight turns (Figure 7–figure supplement 1B) and found no significant changes across different background dot densities. We think that this might suggest that HS cells are unlikely to receive suppressive inputs during bar-evoked turns, akin to the lack of modulation during optomotor turns.

      Another way to separate a potential efference copy from other mechanisms (more global inhibition) is the directionality. A global inhibition would suppress the response to the background even if the background moves in the same direction as self-motion, but the efference copy would not.

      Thanks for this important point. In Heisenberg and Wolf, 1979, it was proposed that modulation might be bidirectional, with behavioral effects observed only for perturbations in the “unexpected” direction. In our new data on loom-evoked turns (Figure 6), the suppression appears equally strong for background motion in either direction, supporting an all-or-none suppression mechanism.

      Besides, in general, it is unclear if you think an efference copy operates both in smooth pursuits and saccades or if such a signal is only present during saccades. Your previous neurophysiological work supports the latter. Are your behavioral results consistent with the previous saccade suppression idea, or do you propose a new type of efference copy that also operates in smooth pursuits?

      Thanks for raising this important point. von Holst and Mittelstaedt (1950) originally introduced the concept of efference copy to explain the smooth optomotor response. We previously analyzed electrophysiological recordings from HS cells for membrane-potential changes associated with slow deviations in wing-steering angle but found none. However, this negative result does not entirely rule out modulation of visual processing during smooth flight turns, given the slow drift in membrane potential observed in most whole-cell recordings.

      In this study, We examined only the interactions among visuomotor pathways during these rapid flight turns as the dynamics of visually evoked turns are almost as rapid as spontaneous saccades. Our data reveal that interactions between distinct visuomotor reflexes are more diverse than previously appreciated.

      Minor comments:

      Line 108, 109: match the description between here and the labels in Fig. 1F.

      Thank you for indicating this issue. We have defined the general equation to obtain the position and velocity components in the main text lines 108,109, but due to a slight asymmetry in the data (Fig. 1E) we used the approach indicated in Fig. 1F. and explained in lines 113-117.

      Fig.1 F: If the position-dependent component is due to fatigue, the tuning curve's shape is likely changed (shrunk or extended) depending on the stimulus speed. How can you generalize the tuning curve shown here? Does the result hold even if the stimulus speed/contrast/spatial frequency is changed?

      We appreciate this indication. We believed that fatigue may be the reason why the wing response to the grating stimulus showed that significant decay (Fig. 1E). As you mention, the stimulus speed would increase the amplitude of the fly’s response up to a saturation point. We addressed this in our model by multiplying the derived value by the angular velocity of the grating.

      Regarding the contrast, and spatial frequency we did not test it experimentally, instead, we simulated our model for changing visual feedback (Fig. 4A, B), which can be seen as increasing/decreasing contrast of a grating. An increase in the contrast would increase the response of the fly to the grating and so will contribute to dampening the response to the foreground object (Fig. 4C).

      Line 233-255: Here, the description sounds like you will consider several parallel objects (e.g., two stripes) in the visual field instead of the combination of the figure and background (which is referred to in the following paragraph).

      Thank you for pointing it out. Indeed it was slightly ambiguous. We have addressed this by explaining the specific situation of a combination of an object and the background in lines 231-233.

      Figure 6C: you kept the foreground visual field between sparse and dense random dot backgrounds to keep the bar's saliency. Is it sure that this does not influence the difference in the fly's response to these two backgrounds (in Figure 6B)?

      This is a good point that we have also discussed internally. We also carried out similar experiments with a fully covered background and found no significant differences (Figure 7–figure supplement 1).

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Identify and analyze flight saccade dynamics in the raw trajectories (e.g., Fig. 3B). There should be some since the bar is near the 'sweet spot' for triggering saccades (see Mongeau & Frye, 2017).

      Thank you for bringing up this interesting point. In previous work, it was reported that the fly fixated on a vertical bar through saccadic turns rather than smooth-tracking (Mongeau & Frye, 2017). When the bar width was thin (<15 deg) there was barely one saccade per second (Mongeau & Frye, 2017, Fig. 4). In our magno tether essay (Fig. 3A, B) the object width was 11.25 degrees, and the object moved for a short time window, and so the fly only generated the saccade related to the onset of the object. It could not be considered as a saccade some small turns of a few degrees that are likely related to small perturbations in comparison to those previously reported (Mongeau & Frye, 2017). Additionally, in our protocol (Fig. 3A) from onset time (‘go’ mark), only a single object moved, within an empty background, so in principle there is no trigger for a switch to a smooth movement. We addressed this in lines x-x.

      Consider updating the Poggio model with flight saccades (switched, integrate-and-fire).

      We appreciate this suggestion. Following previous work (Mongeau et al., 2017), we expanded our model to include a saccade mechanism: the torque produced by the summed position- and velocity-dependent components is now replaced by an integrate-and-fire saccade (Figure 2—figure supplement 2). We optimized the saccade interval and amplitude so that both vary linearly with stimulus amplitude and faithfully reproduce the kinematic properties reported previously (Mongeau et al., 2017).  

      Please engage more with the literature, especially work that directly conflicts with your conclusions (see above). Also, highly relevant work by Bender & Dickinson was not sufficiently discussed. Spot results presented in Fig. 3 should be contextualized in light of the work of Mongeau et al., 2019, who performed similar experiments and identified a switch in saccade valence.

      We appreciate your pointing out the relevant previous work. We have added references to the following papers and tried to describe the relationship between our data and previous ones.

      Bender & Dickinson 2006

      (Line#162) “This simulation experiment is reminiscent of the magnetically tethered flight assay, where a flying fly remains fixed at a position but is free to rotate around its yaw axis (Bender and Dickinson, 2006b; Cellini et al., 2022; G. Kim et al., 2023; Mongeau and Frye, 2017).”

      (Line#218) “We tested the predictions of our models with flies flying in an environment similar to that used in the simulation (Figure 3A). A fly was tethered to a short steel pin positioned vertically at the center of a vertically oriented magnetic field, allowing it to rotate around its yaw axis with minimal friction (Bender and Dickinson, 2006b; Cellini et al., 2022; G. Kim et al., 2023).”

      (Line#238) “To determine if our assay imposes additional friction compared to other assays used in previous studies, we analyzed the dynamics of spontaneous saccades during the “freeze” phase (Figure 3–figure supplement 1A). We found their duration and amplitude to be within the range reported previously (Bender and Dickinson, 2006b; Mongeau and Frye, 2017) (Figure 3–figure supplement 1B-D). 

      Mongeau et al., 2019

      (Line#196) “During this behavior, it has been proposed that visual circuits compute an integrated error of the bar position with respect to the frontal midline and triggers a saccadic turn toward the bar when the integrated value reaches a threshold (Frighetto and Frye, 2023; Mongeau et al., 2019; Mongeau and Frye, 2017). We expanded our bar fixation model to incorporate this behavioral strategy (Figure 2–figure supplement 2).”

      This paper shows that the dynamics of saccadic flight turns elicited by a rotating bar or spot determine whether flies display attraction or aversion. In that study, the visual stimulus—a bar or spot—rotated slowly at a constant 75 deg s⁻¹. By contrast, in our Figure 3 the object moves much faster, driving the neural “integrator” to saturation and triggering an almost immediate flight turn. In Mongeau et al. (2019), saccades occur at variable times and their amplitudes and directions are more stochastic, again reflecting the slower stimulus speed. Because these differences all arise from the disparity in object speed, we did not cite Mongeau et al. (2019) in Figure 3 or the associated text.

      In addition to the two papers cited above, we have incorporated several relevant studies on the Drosophila visuomotor control identified through the reviewers’ insightful comments. Examples include:

      Frighetto G, Frye MA. 2023 (Line#195, 464)

      Rimniceanu et al., 2023 (Line#241)

      Cellini & Mongeau 2020 (Line#91)

      Cellini & Mongeau 2022 (Line#241)

      Cellini et al., 2022 (LIne#91, 162, 218)

      Many citations are not in the proper format (e.g. using numbers rather than authors' last name).

      Thank you for letting us know. We have changed the remaining citations to the proper format.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the presented paper, Lu and colleagues focus on how items held in working memory bias someone's attention. In a series of three experiments, they utilized a similar paradigm in which subjects were asked to maintain two colored squares in memory for a short and variable time. After this delay, they either tested one of the memory items or asked subjects to perform a search task.

      In the search task, items could share colors with the memory items, and the authors were interested in how these would capture attention, using reaction time as a proxy. The behavioral data suggest that attention oscillates between the two items. At different maintenance intervals, the authors observed that items in memory captured different amounts of attention (attentional capture effect).

      This attentional bias fluctuates over time at approximately the theta frequency range of the EEG spectrum. This part of the study is a replication of Peters and colleagues (2020).

      Next, the authors used EEG recordings to better understand the neural mechanisms underlying this process. They present results suggesting that this attentional capture effect is positively correlated with the mean amplitude of alpha power. Furthermore, they show that the weighted phase lag index (wPLI) between the alpha and theta bands across different electrodes also fluctuates at the theta frequency.

      Strengths:

      The authors focus on an interesting and timely topic: how items in working memory can bias our attention. This line of research could improve our understanding of the neural mechanisms underlying working memory, specifically how we maintain multiple items and how these interact with attentional processes. This approach is intriguing because it can shed light on neuronal mechanisms not only through behavioral measures but also by incorporating brain recordings, which is definitely a strength.

      Subjects performed several blocks of experiments, ranging from 4 to 30, over a few days, depending on the experiment. This makes the results - especially those from behavioral experiments 2 and 3, which included the most repetitions - particularly robust.

      Weaknesses:

      One of the main EEG results is based on the weighted phase lag index (wPLI) between oscillations in the alpha and theta bands. In my opinion, this is problematic, as wPLI measures the locking of oscillations at the same frequency. It quantifies how reliably the phase difference stays the same over time. If these oscillations have different frequencies, the phase difference cannot remain consistent. Even worse, modeling data show that even very small fluctuations in frequency between signals make wPLI artificially small (Cohen, 2015).

      Another result from the electrophysiology data shows that the attentional capture effect is positively correlated with the mean amplitude of alpha power. In the presented scatter plot, it seems that this result is driven by one outlier. Unfortunately, Pearson correlation is very sensitive to outliers, and the entire analysis can be driven by an extreme case. I extracted data from the plot and obtained a Pearson correlation of 0.4, similar to what the authors report. However, the Spearman correlation, which is robust against outliers, was only 0.13 (p = 0.57), indicating a non-significant relationship.

      The behavioral data are interesting, but in my opinion, they closely replicate Peters and colleagues (2020) using a different paradigm. In that study, participants memorized four spatial positions that formed the endpoints of two objects, and one object was cued. Similarly, reaction times fluctuated at theta frequency, and there was an anti-phase relationship between the two objects. The main novelty of the present study is that this bias can be transferred to an unrelated task. While the current study extends Peters and colleagues' findings to a different task context, the lack of a thorough, direct comparison with Peters et al. limits the clarity of the novel insights provided.

      Cohen, M. X. (2015). Effects of time lag and frequency matching on phase-based connectivity. Journal of Neuroscience Methods, 250, 137-146.

      Peters, B., Kaiser, J., Rahm, B., & Bledowski, C. (2020). Object-based attention prioritizes working memory contents at a theta rhythm. Journal of Experimental Psychology: General, 150(6), 1250-1256.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The information provided in the current version of the manuscript is not sufficient to assess the scientific significance of the study.

      (1) In many cases, the details of the experiments or behavioral tasks described in the main text are not consistent with those provided in the Materials and Methods section. Below, I list only a few of these discrepancies as examples:

      a) For Experiment 1, the Methods section states that the detection stimulus was presented for 2000 ms (lines 494 and 498), but Figure 1 in the main text indicates a duration of 1500 ms.

      b) For Experiment 2, not only is the range of SOAs mentioned in the Methods section inconsistent with that shown in the main text and the corresponding figure, but the task design also differs between sections.

      c) For Experiment 3, the main text indicates that EEG recordings were conducted, but in the Methods section, the EEG recording appears to have been part of Experiment 2 (lines 538-540).

      (2) The results described in the text often do not match what is shown in the corresponding figure. For example:

      a) In lines 171-178, the SOAs at which a significant difference was found between the two conditions do not appear to match those shown in Figure 2A.

      b) In Figure 4, the figure legend (lines 225-228) does not correspond to the content shown in the figure.

      c) In Figure 9, not sufficient information is provided within the figure or in the text, making it difficult to understand. Consequently, the results described in the text cannot be clearly linked to the figure.

      (3) Insufficient information is provided regarding the data analysis procedures, particularly the permutation tests used for the data presented in Figures 2B, 4, and 10. The results shown in these figures are critical for the main conclusions drawn in the manuscript.

      Given these issues, it is not possible to provide a detailed review of the study, particularly regarding its scientific significance.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Shahbazi et al used a recurrent neural network model trained to control a musculoskeletal model of the arm to investigate how neural populations accommodate activity patterns underpinning savings. The paper draws upon the recent finding of a "uniform shift" in preparatory activity in monkey motor cortex associated with savings, and leverages full access to a computational model to establish causality.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well written, and the figures are clearly presented. The key finding that the uniform shift first reported based on neural recordings by Sun et al. emerges in artificial neural networks performing a similar task is interesting and well-backed by their analyses. Manipulating this uniform shift to show that it drives behavioural savings is an important causal confirmation of the proposal by Sun et al.

      Weaknesses / Comments:

      As mentioned earlier, the core results are well backed by the analyses. Most of my comments relate to adding more controls and additional questions that could be explored with the model to strengthen the paper.

      (1) Savings are quantified as more rapid relearning of the FF upon re-exposure (e.g., Figure 3). This finding is based on backpropagation through time, but would this hold when using a different optimiser, e.g., FORCE?

      (2) The authors should include a "null model" showing that training on a different reaching task following NF, as opposed to FF2, won't show something akin to a uniform shift during preparation due to the adoption of TDR and having similar targets.

      (3) The analyses of network activity during movement preparation (Figure 4) nicely replicate the key finding in Sun et al, but I think the authors could leverage the full access to their network and go further, e.g., by examining changes (or the lack of) during execution in FF2 with respect to FF (and perhaps in a future NF2 with respect to NF), including whether execution activity lives also lives in parallel hyperplanes, etc.

      (4) Related to the above, while the results are interesting and the paper is well done, I kept wishing that the authors had done "more" with their model. This could be one or two final sections on "predictions" that would nicely complement their "validation" of the uniform shift, and that, in my opinion, would greatly increase the impact of the paper. In particular:<br /> a) What would be the effect of learning more "tasks"? For example, is there a limit on how many fields can be learned? (You show something related by manipulating network size, but this is slightly different.)<br /> b) Figure 5 is a nice causal demonstration that the uniform shift is related to savings. However, and related to comment #3, it'd be interesting to see more details about how the behaviour and the network activity changes as preparatory activity shifts along this axis, in particular regarding how moving the preparatory states affect the organisation and dynamics of upcoming execution activity -these are the kind of intuitions that modelling studies like this one can provide.<br /> c) The authors focus on a task design that spans baseline, FF, NF, FF2 to replicate the original study by Sun et al. However, it would be interesting if they generated predictions for neural changes to other types of tasks that have been studied behaviourally. These could include, for example: (i) modelling a visuomotor rotation or a mirror reversal task; (ii) having to adapt to a FF in the opposite direction; (iii) investigating the role of adding an explicit context and having the networks learn multiple FF; and (iv) trying to learn FF fields in opposite directions, perhaps restricted to specific targets. As the authors know, all these questions and more have been studied with similar behavioural paradigms, and it would be nice to see what neural predictions are generated by this model.

      (5) On the Discussion: When extrapolating from neural network results to animals, the fact that your networks can learn implicitly doesn't mean that animals do learn implicitly. Indeed, I think the consensus view is that different perturbations may lead to the expression of different types of savings (e.g., FF vs VR, which seems to be more explicit). Besides, these different mechanisms may be primarily implemented by brain regions less directly tied to motor control (e.g., cerebellum, parietal cortex?), which are not directly implemented in the authors' model.

      These aspects (limitations) should be discussed in the paper.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Shahbazi et al. trained recurrent neural networks (RNNs) to simulate human upper limb movement during adaptation to a force field perturbation. They demonstrated that throughout adaptation, the pattern of motor commands to the muscles of the simulated arm changed, allowing the perturbed movements to regain their typical, perturbation-free straight-line paths. After this initial learning block (FF1), the network encountered null-fields to wash out the adaptation, before re-experiencing the force in a second learning block (FF2). Upon re-exposure, the network learned faster than during initial learning, consistent with the savings observed in behavioral studies of adaptation. They also found that as the number of hidden units in the RNN increased, so did the probability of exhibiting savings. The authors concluded that these results propose a neural basis for savings that is independent of context and strategic processes.

      Strengths:

      The paper addresses an important and controversial topic in motor adaptation: the mechanism underlying motor memory. The RNN simulation reproduces behavioral hallmarks of adaptation, and it provides a useful illustration of the pattern of muscle activity underlying human-like movements under both normal and perturbing conditions. While the savings effect produced by the network, though significant, appears somewhat small, the simulation demonstrating an increase in savings with a greater number of hidden units is particularly intriguing.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) To be transparent, savings in motor adaptation have been a primary focus of my own research. Some core findings presented in this paper are at odds with the ideas I and others have previously put forward. While I don't want to impose my agenda on the authors of this paper, I do think the authors should address these issues.

      a) The authors acknowledge the ongoing debate in the literature regarding the mechanisms underlying savings, particularly whether it stems from explicit or implicit learning processes. However, it remains unclear how the current work addresses this debate. There is already a considerable body of research, particularly in visuomotor adaptation, demonstrating that savings is predominantly driven by explicit strategies. For example, when people are asked to report their strategy, they recall a strategy that was useful during the first learning block (Morehead et al. 2015). Furthermore, savings are abolished under experimental manipulations designed to eliminate strategic contributions (e.g., Haith et al., 2015; Huberdeau et al., 2019; Avraham et al., 2021). The authors briefly state that their findings support the hypothesis that a neural basis of memory retention underlying savings can be independent of cognitive or strategic learning components, and that savings can be characterized as implicit. While these statements may be true, it is not clear how this work substantiates these claims.<br /> b) Our research has also demonstrated that if implicit adaptation is completely washed out after the initial learning block, it not only fails to exhibit savings but is actually attenuated relative to the first learning block (Avraham et al., 2021). This phenomenon of attenuation upon relearning can also be seen in other studies of visuomotor adaptation (e.g., Leow et al., 2020; Yin and Wei, 2020; Hamel et al., 2021; Hamel et al., 2022; Wang and Ivry, 2023; Hadjiosif et al., 2023). More recently, we have shown that this attenuation is due to anterograde interference arising from the experience with the washout block experience (Avraham and Ivry, 2025). We illustrated that the implicit system is highly susceptible to interference; it doesn't require exposure to salient opposite errors and can occur even following prolonged exposure to veridical feedback. The central thesis of this paper, namely that implicit savings can emerge through RNNs, is at odds with these empirical results. The authors should address this discrepancy.

      (2) This brings me to the question about neural correlates: The results are linked to activity in the primary motor cortex. How does that align with the well-established role of the cerebellum in implicit motor adaptation? And with the studies showing that savings are due to explicit strategies, which are generally associated with prefrontal regions?

      (3) The analysis on the complexity of the neural network (i.e., the number of hidden units) and its relationship to savings is very interesting. It makes sense to me that more complex networks would show more savings. I'm not sure I follow the author's explanation, but my understanding is that increased network complexity makes it more difficult to override the formed memory through interference (e.g., from the experience with NF2). Also, the results indicate that a network with 32 units led to a less-than-chance level of networks exhibiting savings (Figure 3b). What behavioral output does this configuration produce? Could this behavior manifest as attenuation upon relearning? Furthermore, if one were to examine an even smaller, simpler network (perhaps one more closely reflecting cerebellar circuits), would such a model predict attenuation rather than savings?

      (4) The authors emphasize that their network did not receive any explicit contextual signals related to the presence or absence of the force field (FF), thus operating in a 'context-free' manner. From my understanding, some existing models of context's role in motor memories (e.g., Oh and Schweighofer, 2019; Heald et al., 2021) propose that memory-related changes can be observed even without explicit contextual information, as contextual changes can be inferred from sudden or significant environmental shifts (e.g., the introduction or removal of perturbations). Given this, could the observed savings in the current simulation be explained by some form of contextual retrieval, inferred by the network from the re-presentation of the perturbation in FF2?

      (5) If there is residual hidden unit activity related to the FF at the end of the NF2 phase, how does the simulated movement revert back to baseline? Are there any differences in the movement trajectory, beyond just lateral deviation, between NF1 and NF2? The authors state that "changes in the preparatory hidden unit activity did not result in substantive changes in the motor commands (Figure 5b), which emphasizes that the uniform shift resides in the null space of motor output." However, Figure 5b appears to show visible changes in hidden unit activity. Don't these changes reflect a pattern of muscle activity that is the basis for behavior? These changes are indeed small, but it seems that so is the effect size for savings (Figure 3a). Could this suggest that there is not, in fact, a complete washout of initial learning during NF2 within the network?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The main contributions of this paper are: (1) a replication of the surprising prior finding that information about peripherally-presented stimuli can be decoded from foveal V1 (Williams et al 2008), (2) a new demonstration of cross-decoding between stimuli presented in the periphery and stimuli presented at the fovea, (3) a demonstration that the information present in the fovea is based on shape not semantic category, and (4) a demonstration that the strength of foveal information about peripheral targets is correlated with the univariate response in the same block in IPS.

      Strengths:

      The design and methods appear sound, and finding (2) above is new, and importantly constrains our understanding of this surprising phenomenon. The basic effect investigated here is so surprising that even though it has been replicated several times since it was first reported in 2008, it is useful to replicate it again.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The paper, including in the title ("Feedback of peripheral saccade targets to early foveal cortex") seems to assume that the feedback to foveal cortex occurs in conjunction with saccade preparation. However, participants in the original Williams et al (2008) paper never made saccades to the peripheral stimuli. So, saccade preparation is not necessary for this effect to occur. Some acknowledgement and discussion of this prior evidence against the interpretation of the effect as due to saccade preparation would be useful. (e.g., one might argue that saccade preparation is automatic when attending to peripheral stimuli.)

      (2) The most important new finding from this paper is the cross-decodability between stimuli presented in the fovea and stimuli presented in the periphery. This finding should be related to the prior behavioral finding (Yu & Shim, 2016) that when a foveal foil stimulus identical to a peripheral target is presented 150 ms after the onset of the peripheral target, visual discrimination of the peripheral target is improved, and this congruency effect occurred even though participants did not consciously perceive the foveal stimulus (Yu, Q., & Shim, W. M., 2016). Modulating foveal representation can influence visual discrimination in the periphery (Journal of Vision, 16(3), 15-15).

      (3) The prior literature should be laid out more clearly. For example, most readers will not realize that the basic effect of decodability of peripherally-presented stimuli in the fovea was first reported in 2008, and that that original paper already showed that the effect cannot arise from spillover effects from peripheral retinotopic cortex because it was not present in a retinotopic location between the cortical locus corresponding to the peripheral target and the fovea. (For example, this claim on lines 56-57 is not correct: "it remains unknown 1) whether information is fed back all the way to early visual areas".) What is needed is a clear presentation of the prior findings in one place in the introduction to the paper, followed by an articulation and motivation of the new questions addressed in this paper. If I were writing the paper, I would focus on the cross-decodability between foveal and peripheral stimuli, as I think that is the most revealing finding.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigated whether the identity of a peripheral saccade target object is predictively fed back to the foveal retinotopic cortex during saccade preparation, a critical prediction of the foveal prediction hypothesis proposed by Kroell & Rolfs (2022). To achieve this, the authors leveraged a gaze-contingent fMRI paradigm, where the peripheral saccade target was removed before the eyes landed near it, and used multivariate decoding analysis to quantify identity information in the foveal cortex. The results showed that the identity of the saccade target object can be decoded based on foveal cortex activity, despite the fovea never directly viewing the object, and that the foveal feedback representation was similar to passive viewing and not explained by spillover effects. Additionally, exploratory analysis suggested IPS as a candidate region mediating such foveal decodability. Overall, these findings provide neural evidence for the foveal cortex processing the features of the saccade target object, potentially supporting the maintenance of perceptual stability across saccadic eye movements.

      Strengths:

      This study is well-motivated by previous theoretical findings (Kroell & Rolfs, 2022), aiming to provide neural evidence for a potential neural mechanism of trans-saccadic perceptual stability. The question is important, and the gaze-contingent fMRI paradigm is a solid methodological choice for the research goal. The use of stimuli allowing orthogonal decoding of stimulus category vs stimulus shape is a nice strength, and the resulting distinctions in decoded information by brain region are clean. The results will be of interest to readers in the field, and they fill in some untested questions regarding pre-saccadic remapping and foveal feedback.

      Weaknesses:

      The conclusions feel a bit over-reaching; some strong theoretical claims are not fully supported, and the framing of prior literature is currently too narrow. A critical weakness lies in the inability to test a distinction between these findings (claiming to demonstrate that "feedback during saccade preparation must underlie this effect") and foveal feedback previously found during passive fixation (Williams et al., 2008). Discussions (and perhaps control analysis/experiments) about how these findings are specific to the saccade target and the temporal constraints on these effects are lacking. The relationship between the concepts of foveal prediction, foveal feedback, and predictive remapping needs more thorough treatment. The choice to use only 4 stimuli is justified in the manuscript, but remains an important limitation. The IPS results are intriguing but could be strengthened by additional control analysis. Finally, the manuscript claims the study was pre-registered ("detailing the hypotheses, methodology, and planned analyses prior to data collection"), but on the OSF link provided, there is just a brief summary paragraph, and the website says "there have been no completed registrations of this project".

      Specifics:

      (1) In the eccentricity-dependent decoding results (Figure 2B), are there any statistical tests to support the results being a U-shaped curve? The dip isn't especially pronounced. Is 4 degrees lower than the further ones? Are there alternative methods of quantifying this (e.g., fitting it to a linear and quadratic function)?

      (2) In the parametric modulation analysis, the evidence for IPS being the only region showing stronger fovea vs peripheral beta values was weak, especially given the exploratory nature of this analysis. The raw beta value can reflect other things, such as global brain fluctuations or signal-to-noise ratio. I would also want to see the results of the same analysis performed on the control condition decoding results.

      (3) Many of the claims feel overstated. There is an emphasis throughout the manuscript (including claims in the abstract) that these findings demonstrate foveal prediction, specifically that "image-specific feedback during saccade preparation must underlie this effect." To my understanding, one of the key aspects of the foveal prediction phenomenon that ties it closely to trans-saccadic stability is its specificity to the saccade target but not to other objects in the environment. However, it is not clear to what degree the observed findings are specific to saccade preparation and the peripheral saccade target. Should the observers be asked to make a saccade to another fixation location, or simply maintain passive fixation, will foveal retinotopic cortex similarly contain the object's identity information? Without these control conditions, the results are consistent with foveal prediction, but do not definitively demonstrate that as the cause, so claims need to be toned down.

      (4) Another critical aspect is the temporal locus of the feedback signal. In the paradigm, the authors ensured that the saccade target object was never foveated via the gaze-contingent procedure and a conservative data exclusion criterion, thus enabling the test of feedback signals to foveal retinotopic cortex. However, due to the temporal sluggishness of fMRI BOLD signals, it is unclear when the feedback signal arrives at the foveal retinotopic cortex. In other words, it is possible that the feedback signal arrives after the eyes land at the saccade target location. This possibility is also bolstered by Chambers et al. (2013)'s TMS study, where they found that TMS to the foveal cortex at 350-400 ms SOA interrupts the peripheral discrimination task. The authors should qualify their claims of the results occurring "during saccade preparation" (e.g., pg 1 ln 22) throughout the manuscript, and discuss the importance of temporal dynamics of the effect in supporting stability across saccades.

      (5) Relatedly, the claims that result in this paradigm reflect "activity exclusively related to predictive feedback" and "must originate from predictive rather than direct visual processes" (e.g., lines 60-65 and throughout) need to be toned down. The experimental design nicely rules out direct visual foveal stimulation, but predictive feedback is not the only alternative to that. The activation could also reflect mental imagery, visual working memory, attention, etc. Importantly, the experiment uses a block design, where the same exact image is presented multiple times over the block, and the activation is taken for the block as a whole. Thus, while at no point was the image presented at the fovea, there could still be more going on than temporally-specific and saccade-specific predictive feedback.

      (6) The authors should avoid using the terms foveal feedback and foveal prediction interchangeably. To me, foveal feedback refers to the findings of Williams et al. (2008), where participants maintained passive fixation and discriminated objects in the periphery (see also Fan et al., 2016), whereas foveal prediction refers to the neural mechanism hypothesized by Kroell & Rolfs (2022), occurring before a saccade to the target object and contains task irrelevant feature information.

      (7) More broadly, the treatment of how foveal prediction relates to saccadic remapping is overly simplistic. The authors seem to be taking the perspective that remapping is an attentional phenomenon marked by remapping of only attentional/spatial pointers, but this is not the classic or widely accepted definition of remapping. Within the field of saccadic remapping, it is an ongoing debate whether (/how/where/when) information about stimulus content is remapped alongside spatial location (and also whether the attentional pointer concept is even neurophysiologically viable). This relationship between saccadic remapping and foveal prediction needs clarification and deeper treatment, in both the introduction and discussion.

      (8) As part of this enhanced discussion, the findings should be better integrated with prior studies. E.g., there is some evidence for predictive remapping inducing integration of non-spatial features (some by the authors themselves; Harrison et al., 2013; Szinte et al., 2015). How do these findings relate to the observed results? Can the results simply be a special case of non-spatial feature integration between the currently attended and remapped location (fovea)? How are the results different from neurophysiological evidence for facilitation of the saccade target object's feature across the visual field (Burrow et al., 2014)? How might the results be reconciled with a prior fMRI study that failed to find decoding of stimulus content in remapped responses (Lescroart et al, 2016)? Might this reflect a difference between peripheral-to-peripheral vs peripheral-to-foveal remapping? A recent study by Chiu & Golomb (2025) provided supporting evidence for peripheral-to-fovea remapping (but not peripheral-to-peripheral remapping) of object-location binding (though in the post-saccadic time window), and suggested foveal prediction as the underlying mechanism.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Marantos et al. showed that for some coliphages, the energetic state of the bacterial host cell has a strong impact on whether phage infection is initiated. The authors drew this conclusion from the observation that there are more free phages remaining in the medium after infection of arsenate-azide-treated cells as compared to after infection of untreated cells. These data were analyzed and reported both as ratios of the treated vs. untreated conditions and using a mass-action kinetic model of phage-cell collision in the infection mixture. The data supported the findings that for four phages infecting Escherichia coli bacteria, namely, phages λ, 𝜙80, m13, and T6, the phages are less likely to initiate infection if the host bacteria are energy-depleted. However, for phage T5, the authors found that their infection propensity is not impacted.

      Strengths:

      The data presented by the authors clearly supported the principal conclusion of the study ("Viral commitment to infection depends on host metabolism"). The five phages chosen by the authors represent different viral lifestyles and infection mechanisms, highlighting the potential applicability to other Escherichia coli phages. Finally, the authors successfully used a classic mass-action model of phage-cell collision to interpret their data. The simplicity of their experimental assay, combined with the use of this mathematical model, offers other investigators who study phage-bacterial interactions in other contexts a potentially useful toolkit to examine infection in general, and specifically, the dependence of phage infection on the host's metabolic state.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors isolated and measured the numbers of free phages in the medium after infection of bacteria under different treatments. These measurements were analyzed in two different ways: (1) simply as ratios (corrected/normalized using different controls), and (2) fitted using a simple mathematical model. I have concerns regarding both analyses.

      1.1) For the first method, having different time points at which the sample of each phage is collected critically complicates data interpretation. As one incubates the phage-bacteria mixture for a longer time, more infection occurs, and the number of phages collected from the mixture decreases. Therefore, the different incubation time forfeits the goal of "a systematic and quantitative comparison across different phages [...]" (line 81), just as the authors self-criticized. Conceivably, the authors could have used the shortest measurement time for all phages (i.e., 10 minutes, as for phage λ). Alternatively, the authors could have applied a systematic criterion such as half (or any other fraction) of the latent period of each phage, which would still "maximize the incubation period while ensuring that manipulations were completed before the first infection cycle concluded" (lines 126-127). In my view, the seemingly arbitrary measurement time for each phage renders the entire first analysis very challenging to interpret. It also goes against the author's proposition that the protocol was "standardized" (line 92) or "consistent" (line 200). It is not clear what the readers are supposed to take away from this first analysis, or rather, which evidence, finding, or conclusion the manuscript would lose if the authors only presented the modeling-based analysis.

      1.2) The second method of analysis sought to remove the dependence of the measurements on time. I completely agree with this goal, and the findings extracted from this analysis significantly contributed to the merits of this manuscript. However, the authors achieved this goal using a single time point for each phage to calculate the infection rate (η). As shown in Figure S3, each of the phage depletion curves is anchored by only one data point (note that the P(t)/P(0) = 1 at t = 0 is assumed, not measured). This goes against the typical way this collision model is used in the literature, where a time series is measured and used to fit the model (e.g., DOI 10.1007/978-1-60327-164-6 18, or more recently, PMID 39700139). This practice in the current manuscript reduced the robustness of the inferred η values. This problem is exacerbated by assumptions used by the authors in formulating this model. For instance, the authors used a constant value for the bacterial concentration, B, because "bacterial growth and lysis were negligible" (lines 135-136). However, considering that the bacteria were cultured at 37oC in a very rich medium (first in YT broth, then in 2% glucose), the measurement times of 20, 30, and 55 minutes are most likely one or a few generations of bacterial growth and division.

      Related note: I suggest that one of the panels in Figure S3 should be moved to the main text, since it is critical to the second method of analysis.

      (2) The data were able to distinguish phages that successfully infected bacteria and those that remained free in the medium, and the authors appropriately interpreted the data as such throughout the Results section. However, in the Discussion (starting from the very first sentence, line 172), the authors used terms that include "adsorption" and "entry" more interchangeably (for example, see the three sentences in lines 310-313, for "viral entry efficiency is shaped by [...]", then "adsorption kinetics modeling"). I do not see how the authors' data could distinguish between adsorption (the phage particles attaching to the outside of the cell) and entry (the phage DNA being injected into the cell). Conceivably, any phage particles that irreversibly attach to a cell but do not yet inject their genome into the cell would still be removed from the medium and therefore not quantified. Another example: in lines 189-191, the authors interpreted that "[...] when the bacterium is in a low metabolic state, the phage does not bind irreversibly to the host", but how do the authors eliminate the case of no phage binding (i.e., the reversible step) to begin with? Similarly, in lines 283-293, how do the authors delineate whether energy depletion would increase the k_off term or decrease the k_inj term, because either would result in more free phages in the medium as observed in the data? I believe that the writing of the Discussion, as it stands now, is doing a disservice to the conclusions presented in the Results section.

      (3) The authors presented an argument that performing infection of all five phages in the same condition is an advantage, allowing for comparison across different phages. While this goal is a completely valid one, it is difficult to reconcile that with the fact that different phages require different optimal conditions for successful infection. For instance, phage T5 famously requires Ca2+ for successful infection into the host bacterium (and later successful replication); see PMID 13174489. However, all infections were performed in TMG, which lacks Ca2+. Perhaps the absence of T5 dependence on the host metabolism is because the infection condition used by the authors was not optimal for T5 to begin with? Similar arguments could be made for other phages.

      (4) Whereas the manuscript examined five coliphages, only phage T5 and phage λ were discussed extensively. I believe some discussion points for these two phages need clarification.

      4.1) Phage T5: The data obtained by the authors show that the infection rate of phage T5 is not impacted by the metabolic state of the host cell. Considering that the authors used the terms "infection", "adsorption", and "entry" interchangeably to refer to the irreversible commitment of a phage to a host cell (see point 2), this discussion regarding phage T5 lacks one critical literature context: DNA entry of phage T5 is known to occur in two phases (first-step transfer and second-step transfer). Critically, the second step can only occur if phage proteins encoded by the phage DNA transferred in the first step are expressed (see PMID 10577483 and the cited papers therein). In that context, metabolic poisoning of the host bacteria should have impeded T5 infection. The authors should comment on this point.

      4.2) Phage λ: The experiment using phage λ in this current study shares many resemblances to that in Brown et al. 2022. That feature alone is not a problem, but at many places in the text, the writing is ambiguous as to whether it is discussing the results in Brown et al. 2022 or in the current manuscript. I am giving three examples below, but this is not exhaustive: (i) Lines 67-69, there is no Brown et al. 2022 reference immediately after "a mutant phage variant (λh) could bypass this dependency [...]" (not just in the previous sentence); (ii) Line 228 should clearly say "Our previous findings suggested that phage λ is capable of [...]", since it concerns Brown et al., 2022, not the current study; and (iii) Lines 245-246, there is no Brown et al., 2022 reference immediately after "we observed that a mutant variant [...] even energy-depleted host" (without a reference, it reads like the authors "observed" that finding in this current manuscript).

      Also, regarding phage λ: The discussion between line 230 and line 249 is very interesting, but since it concerns the differences between λ PaPa and Ur-λ, the authors should consider mentioning and discussing a very relevant recent study, PMCID: PMC6312755.

      (5) Control experiments, or references to prior studies, are needed to support that the As/Az treatment at this concentration and duration (at least 10 minutes) is sufficient to deplete the metabolic state of the cell. For instance, this can be shown by impeded or null cell growth, arrested motility (using a standard swimming assay), or a fluorescent reporter for the energetic state of the cell.

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      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      *The authors have a longstanding focus and reputation on single cell sequencing technology development and application. In this current study, the authors developed a novel single-cell multi-omic assay termed "T-ChIC" so that to jointly profile the histone modifications along with the full-length transcriptome from the same single cells, analyzed the dynamic relationship between chromatin state and gene expression during zebrafish development and cell fate determination. In general, the assay works well, the data look convincing and conclusions are beneficial to the community. *

      Thank you for your positive feedback.

      *There are several single-cell methodologies all claim to co-profile chromatin modifications and gene expression from the same individual cell, such as CoTECH, Paired-tag and others. Although T-ChIC employs pA-Mnase and IVT to obtain these modalities from single cells which are different, could the author provide some direct comparisons among all these technologies to see whether T-ChIC outperforms? *

      In a separate technical manuscript describing the application of T-ChIC in mouse cells (Zeller, Blotenburg et al 2024, bioRxiv, 2024.05. 09.593364), we have provided a direct comparison of data quality between T-ChIC and other single-cell methods for chromatin-RNA co-profiling (Please refer to Fig. 1C,D and Fig. S1D, E, of the preprint). We show that compared to other methods, T-ChIC is able to better preserve the expected biological relationship between the histone modifications and gene expression in single cells.

      *In current study, T-ChIC profiled H3K27me3 and H3K4me1 modifications, these data look great. How about other histone modifications (eg H3K9me3 and H3K36me3) and transcription factors? *

      While we haven't profiled these other modifications using T-ChIC in Zebrafish, we have previously published high quality data on these histone modifications using the sortChIC method, on which T-ChIC is based (Zeller, Yeung et al 2023). In our comparison, we find that histone modification profiles between T-ChIC and sortChIC are very similar (Fig. S1C in Zeller, Blotenburg et al 2024). Therefore the method is expected to work as well for the other histone marks.

      *T-ChIC can detect full length transcription from the same single cells, but in FigS3, the authors still used other published single cell transcriptomics to annotate the cell types, this seems unnecessary? *

      We used the published scRNA-seq dataset with a larger number of cells to homogenize our cell type labels with these datasets, but we also cross-referenced our cluster-specific marker genes with ZFIN and homogenized the cell type labels with ZFIN ontology. This way our annotation is in line with previous datasets but not biased by it. Due the relatively smaller size of our data, we didn't expect to identify unique, rare cell types, but our full-length total RNA assay helps us identify non-coding RNAs such as miRNA previously undetected in scRNA assays, which we have now highlighted in new figure S1c .

      *Throughout the manuscript, the authors found some interesting dynamics between chromatin state and gene expression during embryogenesis, independent approaches should be used to validate these findings, such as IHC staining or RNA ISH? *

      We appreciate that the ISH staining could be useful to validate the expression pattern of genes identified in this study. But to validate the relationships between the histone marks and gene expression, we need to combine these stainings with functional genomics experiments, such as PRC2-related knockouts. Due to their complexity, such experiments are beyond the scope of this manuscript (see also reply to reviewer #3, comment #4 for details).

      *In Fig2 and FigS4, the authors showed H3K27me3 cis spreading during development, this looks really interesting. Is this zebrafish specific? H3K27me3 ChIP-seq or CutTag data from mouse and/or human embryos should be reanalyzed and used to compare. The authors could speculate some possible mechanisms to explain this spreading pattern? *

      Thanks for the suggestion. In this revision, we have reanalysed a dataset of mouse ChIP-seq of H3K27me3 during mouse embryonic development by Xiang et al (Nature Genetics 2019) and find similar evidence of spreading of H3K27me3 signal from their pre-marked promoter regions at E5.5 epiblast upon differentiation (new Figure S4i). This observation, combined with the fact that the mechanism of pre-marking of promoters by PRC1-PRC2 interaction seems to be conserved between the two species (see (Hickey et al., 2022), (Mei et al., 2021) & (Chen et al., 2021)), suggests that the dynamics of H3K27me3 pattern establishment is conserved across vertebrates. But we think a high-resolution profiling via a method like T-ChIC would be more useful to demonstrate the dynamics of signal spreading during mouse embryonic development in the future. We have discussed this further in our revised manuscript.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):

      *The authors have a longstanding focus and reputation on single cell sequencing technology development and application. In this current study, the authors developed a novel single-cell multi-omic assay termed "T-ChIC" so that to jointly profile the histone modifications along with the full-length transcriptome from the same single cells, analyzed the dynamic relationship between chromatin state and gene expression during zebrafish development and cell fate determination. In general, the assay works well, the data look convincing and conclusions are beneficial to the community. *

      Thank you very much for your supportive remarks.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      *Joint analysis of multiple modalities in single cells will provide a comprehensive view of cell fate states. In this manuscript, Bhardwaj et al developed a single-cell multi-omics assay, T-ChIC, to simultaneously capture histone modifications and full-length transcriptome and applied the method on early embryos of zebrafish. The authors observed a decoupled relationship between the chromatin modifications and gene expression at early developmental stages. The correlation becomes stronger as development proceeds, as genes are silenced by the cis-spreading of the repressive marker H3k27me3. Overall, the work is well performed, and the results are meaningful and interesting to readers in the epigenomic and embryonic development fields. There are some concerns before the manuscript is considered for publication. *

      We thank the reviewer for appreciating the quality of our study.

      *Major concerns: *

        • A major point of this study is to understand embryo development, especially gastrulation, with the power of scMulti-Omics assay. However, the current analysis didn't focus on deciphering the biology of gastrulation, i.e., lineage-specific pioneer factors that help to reform the chromatin landscape. The majority of the data analysis is based on the temporal dimension, but not the cell-type-specific dimension, which reduces the value of the single-cell assay. *

      We focused on the lineage-specific transcription factor activity during gastrulation in Figure 4 and S8 of the manuscript and discovered several interesting regulators active at this stage. During our analysis of the temporal dimension for the rest of the manuscript, we also classified the cells by their germ layer and "latent" developmental time by taking the full advantage of the single-cell nature of our data. Additionally, we have now added the cell-type-specific H3K27-demethylation results for 24hpf in response to your comment below. We hope that these results, together with our openly available dataset would demonstrate the advantage of the single-cell aspect of our dataset.

      1. *The cis-spreading of H3K27me3 with developmental time is interesting. Considering H3k27me3 could mark bivalent regions, especially in pluripotent cells, there must be some regions that have lost H3k27me3 signals during development. Therefore, it's confusing that the authors didn't find these regions (30% spreading, 70% stable). The authors should explain and discuss this issue. *

      Indeed we see that ~30% of the bins enriched in the pluripotent stage spread, while 70% do not seem to spread. In line with earlier observations(Hickey et al., 2022; Vastenhouw et al., 2010), we find that H3K27me3 is almost absent in the zygote and is still being accumulated until 24hpf and beyond. Therefore the majority of the sites in the genome still seem to be in the process of gaining H3K27me3 until 24hpf, explaining why we see mostly "spreading" and "stable" states. Considering most of these sites are at promoters and show signs of bivalency, we think that these sites are marked for activation or silencing at later stages. We have discussed this in the manuscript ("discussion"). However, in response to this and earlier comment, we went back and searched for genes that show H3K27-demethylation in the most mature cell types (at 24 hpf) in our data, and found a subset of genes that show K27 demethylation after acquiring them earlier. Interestingly, most of the top genes in this list are well-known as developmentally important for their corresponding cell types. We have added this new result and discussed it further in the manuscript (Fig. 2d,e, , Supplementary table 3).

      *Minors: *

        • The authors cited two scMulti-omics studies in the introduction, but there have been lots of single-cell multi-omics studies published recently. The authors should cite and consider them. *

      We have cited more single-cell chromatin and multiome studies focussed on early embryogenesis in the introduction now.

      *2. T-ChIC seems to have been presented in a previous paper (ref 15). Therefore, Fig. 1a is unnecessary to show. *

      Figure 1a. shows a summary of our Zebrafish TChIC workflow, which contains the unique sample multiplexing and sorting strategy to reduce batch effects, which was not applied in the original TChIC workflow. We have now clarified this in "Results".

      1. *It's better to show the percentage of cell numbers (30% vs 70%) for each heatmap in Figure 2C. *

      We have added the numbers to the corresponding legends.

      1. *Please double-check the citation of Fig. S4C, which may not relate to the conclusion of signal differences between lineages. *

      The citation seems to be correct (Fig. S4C supplements Fig. 2C, but shows mesodermal lineage cells) but the description of the legend was a bit misleading. We have clarified this now.

      *5. Figure 4C has not been cited or mentioned in the main text. Please check. *

      Thanks for pointing it out. We have cited it in Results now.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      *Strengths: This work utilized a new single-cell multi-omics method and generated abundant epigenomics and transcriptomics datasets for cells covering multiple key developmental stages of zebrafish. *

      *Limitations: The data analysis was superficial and mainly focused on the correspondence between the two modalities. The discussion of developmental biology was limited. *

      *Advance: The zebrafish single-cell datasets are valuable. The T-ChIC method is new and interesting. *

      *The audience will be specialized and from basic research fields, such as developmental biology, epigenomics, bioinformatics, etc. *

      *I'm more specialized in the direction of single-cell epigenomics, gene regulation, 3D genomics, etc. *

      Thank you for your remarks.

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      *This manuscript introduces T‑ChIC, a single‑cell multi‑omics workflow that jointly profiles full‑length transcripts and histone modifications (H3K27me3 and H3K4me1) and applies it to early zebrafish embryos (4-24 hpf). The study convincingly demonstrates that chromatin-transcription coupling strengthens during gastrulation and somitogenesis, that promoter‑anchored H3K27me3 spreads in cis to enforce developmental gene silencing, and that integrating TF chromatin status with expression can predict lineage‑specific activators and repressors. *

      *Major concerns *

      1. *Independent biological replicates are absent, so the authors should process at least one additional clutch of embryos for key stages (e.g., 6 hpf and 12 hpf) with T‑ChIC and demonstrate that the resulting data match the current dataset. *

      Thanks for pointing this out. We had, in fact, performed T-ChIC experiments in four rounds of biological replicates (independent clutch of embryos) and merged the data to create our resource. Although not all timepoints were profiled in each replicate, two timepoints (10 and 24hpf) are present in all four, and the celltype composition of these replicates from these 2 timepoints are very similar. We have added new plots in figure S2f and added (new) supplementary table (#1) to highlight the presence of biological replicates.

      2. *The TF‑activity regression model uses an arbitrary R² {greater than or equal to} 0.6 threshold; cross‑validated R² distributions, permutation‑based FDR control, and effect‑size confidence intervals are needed to justify this cut‑off. *

      Thank you for this suggestion. We did use 10-fold cross validation during training and obtained the R2 values of TF motifs from the independent test set as an unbiased estimate. However, the cutoff of R2 > 0.6 to select the TFs for classification was indeed arbitrary. In the revised version, we now report the FDR-adjusted p-values for these R2 estimates based on permutation tests, and select TFs with a cutoff of padj supplementary table #4 to include the p-values for all tested TFs. However, we see that our arbitrary cutoff of 0.6 was in fact, too stringent, and we can classify many more TFs based on the FDR cutoffs. We also updated our reported numbers in Fig. 4c to reflect this. Moreover, supplementary table #4 contains the complete list of TFs used in the analysis to allow others to choose their own cutoff.

      3. *Predicted TF functions lack empirical support, making it essential to test representative activators (e.g., Tbx16) and repressors (e.g., Zbtb16a) via CRISPRi or morpholino knock‑down and to measure target‑gene expression and H3K4me1 changes. *

      We agree that independent validation of the functions of our predicted TFs on target gene activity would be important. During this revision, we analysed recently published scRNA-seq data of Saunders et al. (2023) (Saunders et al., 2023), which includes CRISPR-mediated F0 knockouts of a couple of our predicted TFs, but the scRNAseq was performed at later stages (24hpf onward) compared to our H3K4me1 analysis (which was 4-12 hpf). Therefore, we saw off-target genes being affected in lineages where these TFs are clearly not expressed (attached Fig 1). We therefore didn't include these results in the manuscript. In future, we aim to systematically test the TFs predicted in our study with CRISPRi or similar experiments.

      4. *The study does not prove that H3K27me3 spreading causes silencing; embryos treated with an Ezh2 inhibitor or prc2 mutants should be re‑profiled by T‑ChIC to show loss of spreading along with gene re‑expression. *

      We appreciate the suggestion that indeed PRC2-disruption followed by T-ChIC or other forms of validation would be needed to confirm whether the H3K27me3 spreading is indeed causally linked to the silencing of the identified target genes. But performing this validation is complicated because of multiple reasons: 1) due to the EZH2 contribution from maternal RNA and the contradicting effects of various EZH2 zygotic mutations (depending on where the mutation occurs), the only properly validated PRC2-related mutant seems to be the maternal-zygotic mutant MZezh2, which requires germ cell transplantation (see Rougeot et al. 2019 (Rougeot et al., 2019)) , and San et al. 2019 (San et al., 2019) for details). The use of inhibitors have been described in other studies (den Broeder et al., 2020; Huang et al., 2021), but they do not show a validation of the H3K27me3 loss or a similar phenotype as the MZezh2 mutants, and can present unwanted side effects and toxicity at a high dose, affecting gene expression results. Moreover, in an attempt to validate, we performed our own trials with the EZH2 inhibitor (GSK123) and saw that this time window might be too short to see the effect within 24hpf (attached Fig. 2). Therefore, this validation is a more complex endeavor beyond the scope of this study. Nevertheless, our further analysis of H3K27me3 de-methylation on developmentally important genes (new Fig. 2e-f, Sup. table 3) adds more confidence that the polycomb repression plays an important role, and provides enough ground for future follow up studies.

      *Minor concerns *

      1. *Repressive chromatin coverage is limited, so profiling an additional silencing mark such as H3K9me3 or DNA methylation would clarify cooperation with H3K27me3 during development. *

      We agree that H3K27me3 alone would not be sufficient to fully understand the repressive chromatin state. Extension to other chromatin marks and DNA methylation would be the focus of our follow up works.

      *2. Computational transparency is incomplete; a supplementary table listing all trimming, mapping, and peak‑calling parameters (cutadapt, STAR/hisat2, MACS2, histoneHMM, etc.) should be provided. *

      As mentioned in the manuscript, we provide an open-source pre-processing pipeline "scChICflow" to perform all these steps (github.com/bhardwaj-lab/scChICflow). We have now also provided the configuration files on our zenodo repository (see below), which can simply be plugged into this pipeline together with the fastq files from GEO to obtain the processed dataset that we describe in the manuscript. Additionally, we have also clarified the peak calling and post-processing steps in the manuscript now.

      *3. Data‑ and code‑availability statements lack detail; the exact GEO accession release date, loom‑file contents, and a DOI‑tagged Zenodo archive of analysis scripts should be added. *

      We have now publicly released the .h5ad files with raw counts, normalized counts, and complete gene and cell-level metadata, along with signal tracks (bigwigs) and peaks on GEO. Additionally, we now also released the source datasets and notebooks (.Rmarkdown format) on Zenodo that can be used to replicate the figures in the manuscript, and updated our statements on "Data and code availability".

      *4. Minor editorial issues remain, such as replacing "critical" with "crucial" in the Abstract, adding software version numbers to figure legends, and correcting the SAMtools reference. *

      Thank you for spotting them. We have fixed these issues.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      The method is technically innovative and the biological insights are valuable; however, several issues-mainly concerning experimental design, statistical rigor, and functional validation-must be addressed to solidify the conclusions.

      Thank you for your comments. We hope to have addressed your concerns in this revised version of our manuscript.

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      Referee #3

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This manuscript introduces T‑ChIC, a single‑cell multi‑omics workflow that jointly profiles full‑length transcripts and histone modifications (H3K27me3 and H3K4me1) and applies it to early zebrafish embryos (4-24 hpf). The study convincingly demonstrates that chromatin-transcription coupling strengthens during gastrulation and somitogenesis, that promoter‑anchored H3K27me3 spreads in cis to enforce developmental gene silencing, and that integrating TF chromatin status with expression can predict lineage‑specific activators and repressors.

      Major concerns

      1. Independent biological replicates are absent, so the authors should process at least one additional clutch of embryos for key stages (e.g., 6 hpf and 12 hpf) with T‑ChIC and demonstrate that the resulting data match the current dataset.
      2. The TF‑activity regression model uses an arbitrary R² {greater than or equal to} 0.6 threshold; cross‑validated R² distributions, permutation‑based FDR control, and effect‑size confidence intervals are needed to justify this cut‑off.
      3. Predicted TF functions lack empirical support, making it essential to test representative activators (e.g., Tbx16) and repressors (e.g., Zbtb16a) via CRISPRi or morpholino knock‑down and to measure target‑gene expression and H3K4me1 changes.
      4. The study does not prove that H3K27me3 spreading causes silencing; embryos treated with an Ezh2 inhibitor or prc2 mutants should be re‑profiled by T‑ChIC to show loss of spreading along with gene re‑expression.

      Minor concerns

      1. Repressive chromatin coverage is limited, so profiling an additional silencing mark such as H3K9me3 or DNA methylation would clarify cooperation with H3K27me3 during development.
      2. Computational transparency is incomplete; a supplementary table listing all trimming, mapping, and peak‑calling parameters (cutadapt, STAR/hisat2, MACS2, histoneHMM, etc.) should be provided.
      3. Data‑ and code‑availability statements lack detail; the exact GEO accession release date, loom‑file contents, and a DOI‑tagged Zenodo archive of analysis scripts should be added.
      4. Minor editorial issues remain, such as replacing "critical" with "crucial" in the Abstract, adding software version numbers to figure legends, and correcting the SAMtools reference.

      Significance

      The method is technically innovative and the biological insights are valuable; however, several issues-mainly concerning experimental design, statistical rigor, and functional validation-must be addressed to solidify the conclusions.

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      Referee #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Joint analysis of multiple modalities in single cells will provide a comprehensive view of cell fate states. In this manuscript, Bhardwaj et al developed a single-cell multi-omics assay, T-ChIC, to simultaneously capture histone modifications and full-length transcriptome and applied the method on early embryos of zebrafish. The authors observed a decoupled relationship between the chromatin modifications and gene expression at early developmental stages. The correlation becomes stronger as development proceeds, as genes are silenced by the cis-spreading of the repressive marker H3k27me3. Overall, the work is well performed, and the results are meaningful and interesting to readers in the epigenomic and embryonic development fields. There are some concerns before the manuscript is considered for publication.

      Major concerns:

      1. A major point of this study is to understand embryo development, especially gastrulation, with the power of scMulti-Omics assay. However, the current analysis didn't focus on deciphering the biology of gastrulation, i.e., lineage-specific pioneer factors that help to reform the chromatin landscape. The majority of the data analysis is based on the temporal dimension, but not the cell-type-specific dimension, which reduces the value of the single-cell assay.
      2. The cis-spreading of H3K27me3 with developmental time is interesting. Considering H3k27me3 could mark bivalent regions, especially in pluripotent cells, there must be some regions that have lost H3k27me3 signals during development. Therefore, it's confusing that the authors didn't find these regions (30% spreading, 70% stable). The authors should explain and discuss this issue.

      Minors:

      1. The authors cited two scMulti-omics studies in the introduction, but there have been lots of single-cell multi-omics studies published recently. The authors should cite and consider them.
      2. T-ChIC seems to have been presented in a previous paper (ref 15). Therefore, Fig. 1a is unnecessary to show.
      3. It's better to show the percentage of cell numbers (30% vs 70%) for each heatmap in Figure 2C.
      4. Please double-check the citation of Fig. S4C, which may not relate to the conclusion of signal differences between lineages.
      5. Figure 4C has not been cited or mentioned in the main text. Please check.

      Significance

      Strengths: This work utilized a new single-cell multi-omics method and generated abundant epigenomics and transcriptomics datasets for cells covering multiple key developmental stages of zebrafish. Limitations: The data analysis was superficial and mainly focused on the correspondence between the two modalities. The discussion of developmental biology was limited.

      Advance: The zebrafish single-cell datasets are valuable. The T-ChIC method is new and interesting.

      The audience will be specialized and from basic research fields, such as developmental biology, epigenomics, bioinformatics, etc.

      I'm more specialized in the direction of single-cell epigenomics, gene regulation, 3D genomics, etc.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The author's central hypothesis was that the strength of cortico-respiratory coupling in infants is negatively associated with apnoea rate. To prove this, they first investigated the existence of cortico-respiratory coupling in premature and term-born infants, the spatial localisation of the cortical activity and its relationship with the phase of the respiratory cycle, and the directionality of coupling.

      Strengths:

      The researchers used synchronised EEG and impedance pneumography to detect the phase amplitude coupling.

      They have studied a wide range of gestations, from 28 weeks to 42 weeks, including males and females. Their exclusion criteria ensured that healthy babies were studied and potential confounders of impaired respiratory activity were avoided. Their sequential approach in addressing the objectives was appropriate.

      Weaknesses:

      As a neonatal clinician and neuroscientist, I have commented based on my expertise. I have not commented on signal processing.

      I did not identify any major weaknesses in the study. Some minor weaknesses include:

      (1) Data relating to the cortical oscillations and the respiratory phase is given. However, whether this would lead to their hypothesis that the strength of cortico-respiratory coupling is negatively associated with apnoea rate is unclear. What preceding data enabled the authors to link the strength of coupling to the rate of apnoea?

      (2) If we did not know of data showing the existence of cortico-respiratory coupling in newborn infants, then should it not be the first research question to examine?

      (3) What are the characteristics of the infants who contributed data to establish the cortico-respiratory coupling (Figures 2 and 3)?

      (4) Although it is the most plausible direction of the relationship, with neural activation driving respiratory muscle contraction, how can the authors prove this with their data? Given that they show coherence between signals, how do we know that the cortical signal precedes the respiratory muscle contraction?

      (5) Apgar score is an ordinal variable. The authors should summarise this as median (range).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents an interesting investigation into the role of trained immunity in inflammatory bowel disease, demonstrating that β-glucan-induced reprogramming of innate immune cells can ameliorate experimental colitis. The findings are novel and clinically relevant, with potential implications for therapeutic strategies in IBD. The combination of functional assays, adoptive transfer experiments, and single-cell RNA sequencing provides comprehensive mechanistic insights. However, some aspects of the study could benefit from further clarification to strengthen the conclusions.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study elegantly connects trained immunity with IBD, demonstrating how β-glucan-induced innate immune reprogramming can mitigate chronic inflammation.

      (2) Adoptive transfer experiments robustly confirm the protective role of monocytes/macrophages in colitis resolution.

      (3) Single-cell RNA sequencing provides mechanistic depth, revealing the expansion of reparative Cx3cr1⁺ macrophages and their contribution to epithelial repair.

      (4) The work highlights the therapeutic potential of trained immunity in restoring gut homeostasis, offering new directions for IBD treatment.

      Weaknesses:

      While β-glucan may exert its training effect on hematopoietic stem cells, performing ATAC-seq on HSCs or monocytes to profile chromatin accessibility at antibacterial defense and mucosal repair-related genes would further validate the trained immunity mechanism. Alternatively, the authors could acknowledge this as a study limitation and future research direction.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study investigates whether β-glucan (BG) can reprogram the innate immune system to protect against intestinal inflammation. The authors show that mice pretreated with BG prior to DSS-induced colitis experience reduced colitis severity, including less weight loss, colon damage, improved gut repair, and lowered inflammation. These effects were independent of adaptive immunity and were linked to changes in monocyte function.

      The authors show that the BG-trained monocytes not only help control inflammation but confer non-specific protection against experimental infections (Salmonella), suggesting the involvement of trained immunity (TI) mechanisms. Using single-cell RNA sequencing, they map the transcriptional changes in these cells and show enhanced differentiation of monocytes into reparative CX3CR1⁺ macrophages. Importantly, these protective effects were transferable to other mice via adoptive cell transfer and bone marrow transplantation, suggesting that the innate immune system had been reprogrammed at the level of stem/progenitor cells.

      Overall, this study provides evidence that TI, often associated with heightened inflammatory programs, can also promote tissue repair and resolution of inflammation. Moreover, this BG-induced functional reprogramming can be further harnessed to treat chronic inflammatory disorders like IBD.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors use advanced experimental approaches to explore the potential therapeutic use of myeloid reprogramming by β-glucan in IBD.

      (2) The authors follow a data-to-function approach, integrating bulk and single-cell RNA sequencing with in vivo functional validation to support their conclusions.

      (3) The study adds to the growing evidence that TI is not a singular pro-inflammatory program, but can adopt distinct functional states, including anti-inflammatory and reparative phenotypes, depending on the context.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The epigenetic and metabolic basis of TI is not explored, which weakens the mechanistic claim of TI. This is especially relevant given that a novel reparative, anti-inflammatory TI program is proposed.

      (2) The absence of a BG-only group limits interpretation of the results. Since the authors report tissue-level effects such as enhanced mucosal repair and transcriptional shifts in intestinal macrophages (colonic RNA-Seq), it is important to rule out whether BG alone could influence the gut independently of DSS-induced inflammation.<br /> Without a BG-only control, it is hard to distinguish a true trained response from a potential modulation caused directly by BG.

      (3) Although monocyte transfer experiments show protection in colitis, the fate of the transferred cells is not described (e.g., homing or differentiation into Cx3cr1⁺ macrophage subsets). This weakens the link between specific monocyte subsets and the observed phenotype.

      (3) While scRNA-seq reveals distinct monocyte/macrophage subclusters (Mono1-3..), their specific functional roles remain speculative. The authors assign reparative or antimicrobial functions based on transcriptional signatures, but do not perform causal experiments (depletion or in vitro assays). The biological roles of these cells remain correlative.

      (4) While Rag1⁻/⁻ mice were used to rule out adaptive immunity, the potential role of innate lymphoid cells (ILCs), particularly ILC2s and ILC3s, which are known to promote mucosal repair (PMID: 27484190), was not explored. Given the reparative phenotype observed, the contribution of ILCs remains a confounding factor.

    3. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the present work, Yinyin Lv et al offer evidence for the therapeutic potential of trained immunity in the context of inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). Prior research has demonstrated that innate cells pre-treated (trained) with β-glucan show an enhanced pro-inflammatory response upon a second challenge.

      While an increased immune response can be beneficial and protect against bacterial infections, there is also the risk that it will worsen symptoms in various inflammatory disorders. In the present study, the authors show that mice preconditioned with β-glucan have enhanced resistance to Staphylococcus aureus infection, indicating heightened immune responses.

      The authors demonstrate that β-glucan training of bone marrow hematopoietic progenitors and peripheral monocytes mitigates the pro-inflammatory effects of colitis, with protection extending to naïve recipients of the trained cells.

      Using a dextran sulfate sodium (DSS)-induced model of colitis, β-glucan pre-treatment significantly dampens disease severity. Importantly, the use of Rag1^-/- mice, which lack adaptive immune cells, confirms that the protective effects of β-glucan are mediated by innate immune mechanisms. Further, experiments using Ccr2^-/- mice underline the necessity of monocyte recruitment in mediating this protection, highlighting CCR2 as a key factor in the mobilization of β-glucan-trained monocytes to inflamed tissues. Transcriptomic profiling reveals that β-glucan training upregulates genes associated with pattern recognition, antimicrobial defense, immunomodulation, and interferon signaling pathways, suggesting broad functional reprogramming of the innate immune compartment. In addition, β-glucan training induces a distinct monocyte subpopulation with enhanced activation and phagocytic capacity. These monocytes exhibit an increased ability to infiltrate inflamed colonic tissue and differentiate into macrophages, marked by increased expression of Cx3cr1. Moreover, among these trained monocyte and macrophage subsets, other gene expression signatures are associated with tissue and mucosal repair, suggesting a role in promoting resolution and regeneration following inflammatory insult.

      Strengths:

      (1) Overall, the authors present a mechanistically insightful investigation that advances our understanding of trained immunity in IBD.

      (2) By employing a range of well-characterized murine models, the authors investigate specific mechanisms involved in the effects of β-glucan training.

      (3) Furthermore, the study provides functional evidence that the protection conferred by the trained cells persists within the hematopoietic progenitors and can be transferred to naïve recipients. The integration of transcriptomic profiling allows the identification of changes in key genes and molecular pathways underlying the trained immune phenotype.

      (4) This is an important study that demonstrates that β-glucan-trained innate cells confer protection against colitis and promote mucosal repair, and these findings underscore the potential of harnessing innate immune memory as a therapeutic approach for chronic inflammatory diseases.

      Weaknesses:

      However, FPKM is not ideal for between-sample comparisons due to its within-sample normalization approach. Best practices recommend using raw counts (with DESeq2) for more robust statistical inference.

    4. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents an interesting investigation into the role of trained immunity in inflammatory bowel disease, demonstrating that β-glucan-induced reprogramming of innate immune cells can ameliorate experimental colitis. The findings are novel and clinically relevant, with potential implications for therapeutic strategies in IBD. The combination of functional assays, adoptive transfer experiments, and single-cell RNA sequencing provides comprehensive mechanistic insights. However, some aspects of the study could benefit from further clarification to strengthen the conclusions.

      We are grateful for the reviewer’s positive assessment of our study and constructive suggestions to improve the manuscript.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study elegantly connects trained immunity with IBD, demonstrating how β-glucan-induced innate immune reprogramming can mitigate chronic inflammation.

      (2) Adoptive transfer experiments robustly confirm the protective role of monocytes/macrophages in colitis resolution.

      (3) Single-cell RNA sequencing provides mechanistic depth, revealing the expansion of reparative Cx3cr1⁺ macrophages and their contribution to epithelial repair.

      (4) The work highlights the therapeutic potential of trained immunity in restoring gut homeostasis, offering new directions for IBD treatment.

      Weaknesses:

      While β-glucan may exert its training effect on hematopoietic stem cells, performing ATAC-seq on HSCs or monocytes to profile chromatin accessibility at antibacterial defense and mucosal repair-related genes would further validate the trained immunity mechanism. Alternatively, the authors could acknowledge this as a study limitation and future research direction.

      We agree that further epigenetic profiling—such as ATAC-seq analysis on HSCs or monocytes—would provide additional mechanistic depth to our current findings. We will acknowledge this as a limitation of the present study and highlight it as an important direction for future research.

      Comment (1): It’s better to include a schematic summarizing the proposed mechanism for reader clarity.

      We agree that a visual summary will enhance the clarity and accessibility of our findings. We will add a new schematic diagram (Figure 6) illustrating the proposed mechanism of β-glucan–induced myeloid reprogramming and its protective effects in the experimental colitis model.

      Comment (2): Discuss potential off-target effects of β-glucan-induced trained immunity (e.g., risk of exacerbated inflammation in other contexts).

      We appreciate this important comment regarding the potential off-target effects of β-glucan pretreatment. As trained immunity is known to amplify inflammatory responses upon heterologous stimulation and has been implicated in chronic inflammation–prone conditions such as atherosclerosis, this is an important consideration. Previous in vivo studies have shown that β-glucan pretreatment can enhance antibacterial or antitumor responses without inducing basal inflammation after one week of administration (PMID: 22901542, PMID: 30380404, PMID: 36604547, PMID: 33125892). Nevertheless, it remains possible that β-glucan–induced trained immunity could have unintended effects in certain contexts, which warrants further investigation and caution. We will expand the Discussion section to include a dedicated paragraph addressing these potential off-target effects.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study investigates whether β-glucan (BG) can reprogram the innate immune system to protect against intestinal inflammation. The authors show that mice pretreated with BG prior to DSS-induced colitis experience reduced colitis severity, including less weight loss, colon damage, improved gut repair, and lowered inflammation. These effects were independent of adaptive immunity and were linked to changes in monocyte function.

      The authors show that the BG-trained monocytes not only help control inflammation but confer non-specific protection against experimental infections (Salmonella), suggesting the involvement of trained immunity (TI) mechanisms. Using single-cell RNA sequencing, they map the transcriptional changes in these cells and show enhanced differentiation of monocytes into reparative CX3CR1<sup>+</sup> macrophages. Importantly, these protective effects were transferable to other mice via adoptive cell transfer and bone marrow transplantation, suggesting that the innate immune system had been reprogrammed at the level of stem/progenitor cells.

      Overall, this study provides evidence that TI, often associated with heightened inflammatory programs, can also promote tissue repair and resolution of inflammation. Moreover, this BG-induced functional reprogramming can be further harnessed to treat chronic inflammatory disorders like IBD.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors use advanced experimental approaches to explore the potential therapeutic use of myeloid reprogramming by β-glucan in IBD.

      (2) The authors follow a data-to-function approach, integrating bulk and single-cell RNA sequencing with in vivo functional validation to support their conclusions.

      (3) The study adds to the growing evidence that TI is not a singular pro-inflammatory program, but can adopt distinct functional states, including anti-inflammatory and reparative phenotypes, depending on the context.

      We are grateful for the reviewer’s positive assessment of our study and recognition of its translational implications. We particularly appreciate the acknowledgment that our work expands the therapeutic potential of β-glucan–mediated trained immunity in ameliorating colitis.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The epigenetic and metabolic basis of TI is not explored, which weakens the mechanistic claim of TI. This is especially relevant given that a novel reparative, anti-inflammatory TI program is proposed.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable comment highlighting the importance of the epigenetic and metabolic basis of TI in providing mechanistic insight. While previous studies, including work from our group (S.-C. Cheng), have extensively characterized the epigenetic and metabolic signatures of monocytes from BG-trained mice—primarily in the context of inflammatory genes—we acknowledge that these aspects are not directly addressed in our current manuscript.

      To strengthen the mechanistic component, we plan to: 1. Reanalyze relevant public datasets, focusing on pathways related to reparative and antibacterial function. 2. Perform monocyte ATAC-seq in our current model to validate the epigenetic changes in these pathways.

      (2) The absence of a BG-only group limits interpretation of the results. Since the authors report tissue-level effects such as enhanced mucosal repair and transcriptional shifts in intestinal macrophages (colonic RNA-Seq), it is important to rule out whether BG alone could influence the gut independently of DSS-induced inflammation.

      Without a BG-only control, it is hard to distinguish a true trained response from a potential modulation caused directly by BG.

      We thank the reviewer for this important suggestion. Although we did not perform qPCR for mucosal repair genes in Figure S1C and Figure S1D, our colon RNA-seq analysis in Figure 5G included a BG-only control group (Colitis_d0). The results from this group indicate that BG preconditioning alone does not alter baseline expression of colon mucosal repair genes, supporting the conclusion that the observed effects occur in the context of DSS-induced inflammation.

      (3) Although monocyte transfer experiments show protection in colitis, the fate of the transferred cells is not described (e.g., homing or differentiation into Cx3cr1⁺ macrophage subsets). This weakens the link between specific monocyte subsets and the observed phenotype.

      (4) While scRNA-seq reveals distinct monocyte/macrophage subclusters (Mono1-3.), their specific functional roles remain speculative. The authors assign reparative or antimicrobial functions based on transcriptional signatures, but do not perform causal experiments (depletion or in vitro assays). The biological roles of these cells remain correlative.

      We agree that the functional role of CX3CR1<sup>+</sup> macrophages is not comprehensively validated and is currently inferred from scRNA-seq clustering. While our flow cytometry data show increased CX3CR1<sup>+</sup> macrophages in the BG-TI group, and our CCR2 KO and monocyte adoptive transfer experiments indicate these macrophages are monocyte-derived, we lack direct depletion experiments due to the unavailability of effective depletion antibodies for this subset.

      We acknowledge this as a limitation and will clarify in the Discussion that our conclusions regarding CX3CR1<sup>+</sup> macrophage function are based on transcriptional profiling and association with protective phenotypes, rather than direct causal evidence.

      (5) While Rag1<sup>-/-</sup> mice were used to rule out adaptive immunity, the potential role of innate lymphoid cells (ILCs), particularly ILC2s and ILC3s, which are known to promote mucosal repair (PMID: 27484190IF: 7.6 Q1 IF: 7.6 Q1 IF: 7.6 Q1 IF: 7.6 Q1 IF: 7.6 Q1 IF: 7.6 Q1 ), was not explored. Given the reparative phenotype observed, the contribution of ILCs remains a confounding factor.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable comment regarding the potential role of ILCs in the observed mucosal repair. Indeed, in examining the BG-trained immunity effect, the contribution of ILCs was not evaluated. We will explicitly acknowledge in the Discussion that Rag1⁻/⁻ mice retain ILCs (including ILC3s) and that BG-induced activation of these cells remains possible.

      The literature (PMID: 21502992; PMID: 32187516) supports a role for ILC3-mediated IL-22 production in tissue repair, which could overlap with our observed effects. However, our monocyte adoptive transfer experiments show that monocytes alone can alleviate DSS-induced colitis, suggesting a dominant role for monocytes in this context. Nonetheless, we will make it clear that ILC contributions cannot be excluded.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the present work, Yinyin Lv et al offer evidence for the therapeutic potential of trained immunity in the context of inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). Prior research has demonstrated that innate cells pre-treated (trained) with β-glucan show an enhanced pro-inflammatory response upon a second challenge.

      While an increased immune response can be beneficial and protect against bacterial infections, there is also the risk that it will worsen symptoms in various inflammatory disorders. In the present study, the authors show that mice preconditioned with β-glucan have enhanced resistance to Staphylococcus aureus infection, indicating heightened immune responses.

      The authors demonstrate that β-glucan training of bone marrow hematopoietic progenitors and peripheral monocytes mitigates the pro-inflammatory effects of colitis, with protection extending to naïve recipients of the trained cells.

      Using a dextran sulfate sodium (DSS)-induced model of colitis, β-glucan pre-treatment significantly dampens disease severity. Importantly, the use of Rag1<sup>-/-</sup> mice, which lack adaptive immune cells, confirms that the protective effects of β-glucan are mediated by innate immune mechanisms. Further, experiments using Ccr2<sup>-/-</sup> mice underline the necessity of monocyte recruitment in mediating this protection, highlighting CCR2 as a key factor in the mobilization of β-glucan-trained monocytes to inflamed tissues. Transcriptomic profiling reveals that β-glucan training upregulates genes associated with pattern recognition, antimicrobial defense, immunomodulation, and interferon signaling pathways, suggesting broad functional reprogramming of the innate immune compartment. In addition, β-glucan training induces a distinct monocyte subpopulation with enhanced activation and phagocytic capacity. These monocytes exhibit an increased ability to infiltrate inflamed colonic tissue and differentiate into macrophages, marked by increased expression of Cx3cr1. Moreover, among these trained monocyte and macrophage subsets, other gene expression signatures are associated with tissue and mucosal repair, suggesting a role in promoting resolution and regeneration following inflammatory insult.

      Strengths:

      (1) Overall, the authors present a mechanistically insightful investigation that advances our understanding of trained immunity in IBD.

      (2) By employing a range of well-characterized murine models, the authors investigate specific mechanisms involved in the effects of β-glucan training.

      (3) Furthermore, the study provides functional evidence that the protection conferred by the trained cells persists within the hematopoietic progenitors and can be transferred to naïve recipients. The integration of transcriptomic profiling allows the identification of changes in key genes and molecular pathways underlying the trained immune phenotype.

      (4) This is an important study that demonstrates that β-glucan-trained innate cells confer protection against colitis and promote mucosal repair, and these findings underscore the potential of harnessing innate immune memory as a therapeutic approach for chronic inflammatory diseases.

      We thank the reviewer for their positive evaluation and constructive feedback on our manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      However, FPKM is not ideal for between-sample comparisons due to its within-sample normalization approach. Best practices recommend using raw counts (with DESeq2) for more robust statistical inference.

      We appreciate the reminder about best practices for RNA-seq analysis. We apologize for the inaccurate description in the Materials and Methods section. For all differential expression analyses, we have in fact used raw count data as input for DESeq2. FPKM values were only used for visualization purposes, such as in heatmaps and clustering analyses. We will correct this description in the revised manuscript to accurately reflect our analysis workflow.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the manuscript, the authors aim to determine the molecular mechanisms involved in wiring the segmentally homologous a- and p -Wave neurons distinctively and thus are functionally different in modulating forward or backward locomotion. The genetic screen focused on Wnt/Fz-signaling due to its known anterior-to-posterior guidance roles in mammals and nematodes.

      Strengths:

      The conclusion that Frizzled receptors DFz2 and DFz4 as well as the DWnt4 ligand is essential for normal segment-specific axon projections of Wave command neurons is strongly supported by the elaborate morphological analyses of numerous Wnt/Fz in gain and loss of function mutants. The distinctive Wnt/Fz ligand-receptor gradients also imply that they contribute to the diversification of Wave neurons in a location-dependent manner and that DFz2 and DFz4 may have opposing effects on axon extension.

      Labeling of synaptic marker Bruchpilot in DFz2 mutants in this revised manuscript, now supports that the ectopic projections in a-Wave neurons make synaptic connections. Finally, the altered responses in two behavioral assays (optogenetic stimulation of all Wave neurons or tactile stimuli on heads using a von Frey filament) further strongly support the main conclusion, that Wnt/Fz-signaling is essential for the guidance of both Wave neurons and in diversifying their protection pattern in a segment-specific manner.

      Weaknesses:

      There are no major weaknesses in the revised version of this work.

      Re-analysis of DFz2 expression now shows it is bidirectionally distributed. This new result does not affect the previous and current conclusions for the a-Wave neurons but leaves alternative interpretations for p-Wave neurons, which the author now included in their discussions. Evidently, it seems unlikely that the complex wiring of the numerous segmental a- and p-Wave neurons will be solely dependent on Wnt4-DFz2/4 but are likely to also involve other Wnt/Fz (see, Figure 1-figure supplement 2) or distinct guidance signaling pathways. However, unraveling all factors involved is certainly beyond the scope of this study, and the main conclusions made by the authors are well supported by the data provided.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary

      In this study, Takagi and colleagues demonstrate that changes in axonal arborization of the segmental wave motor command neurons are sufficient to change behavioral motor output.

      The authors identify the Wnt receptors DFz2 and DFz4 and the ligand Wnt4 as modulators of stereotypic segmental arborization patterns of segmental wave neurons along the anterior-posterior body axis. Based on both embryonic expression pattern analysis and genetic manipulation of the signaling components in wave neurons (receptors) and the neuropil (Wnt4) the authors convincingly demonstrate that Wnt4 acts as a repulsive ligand for DFz2 that restricts posterior axon guidance of both anterior and posterior wave neurons. They also provide the first evidence that Wnt4 potentially acts as an attractive ligand for Df4 to promote the posterior extension of p-wave neurons. Interestingly, artificial optogenetic activation of all wave neurons that normally induces backward locomotion due to the activity of anterior wave neurons, fails to induce backward locomotion in a DFz2 knockdown condition with altered axonal extensions of all wave neurons towards posterior segments. In addition, the authors now observe enhanced fast-forward locomotion, a feature normally induced by posterior wave neurons. Consistent with these findings, they observe that the natural response to an anterior tactile stimulus is similarly altered in DFz2 knockdown animals. The animals respond with less backward movement and increased fast forward motion. These results suggest that alterations in the innervation pattern of wave motor command neurons are sufficient to switch behavioral response programs.

      Strengths

      The authors convincingly demonstrate the importance of Wnt signaling for anteriorposterior axon guidance of a single class of motor command neurons in the larval CNS. The demonstration that alteration of the expression level of a single axon guidance receptor is sufficient to not only alter the innervation pattern but to significantly modify the behavioral response program of the animal provides a potential entry point to understanding behavioral adaptations during evolution.

      Weaknesses

      While the authors demonstrate an alteration of the behavioral response to a natural tactile stimulus the observed effects, a reduction of backward motion and increased fast-foward locomotion, currently cannot be directly correlated to the morphological alterations observed in the single-neuron analyses. The authors do not report any loss of innervation in the "normal" target region but only a small additional innervation of more posterior regions. An analysis of synaptic connectivity and/or a more detailed morphological analysis that is supported by a larger number of analyzed neurons both in control and experimental animals would further strengthen the confidence of the study. As the authors suggest an alteration of the command circuitry, a direct observation of the downstream activation pattern in response to selective optogenetic stimulation of anterior wave neurons would further strengthen their claims (analogous to Takagi et al., 2017, Figure 4).

      We sincerely thank the reviewer for their insightful comments, which were instrumental in improving our manuscript. In response to the reviewers’ suggestion, we have now studied Brp expression and demonstrate that the ectopically extending Wave axons in the posterior region do contain synapses (new Figure 2). This finding supports the idea that these axons are functionally connected to ectopic downstream circuits. 

      Additionally, we have increased the number of analyzed Wave clones in Figure 1F-J (WT and DFz2 KD) and new Figure 3C-G (WT; formerly Figure 2C-G) to strengthen the morphological analyses. We fully agree with the reviewer that “direct observation of the downstream activation pattern in response to selective optogenetic stimulation” would further reinforce our conclusions. However, this was not feasible in the current study since we found that the Wave-Gal4 driver used in this study, which drives expression during embryonic stages, does not drive sufficiently strong expression in the larvae to enable selective optogenetic stimulation (please see below for details). 

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The authors previously demonstrated that anterior-located a-Wave neurons (neuromeres A1-A3) extend axons anteriorly to connect to circuits inducing backward locomotion, while p-Wave axon (neuromeres A4-A7) project posteriorly to promote forward locomotion in Drosophila larvae. In the manuscript, the authors aim to determine the molecular mechanisms involved in wiring the segmentally homologous Wave neurons distinctively and thus are functionally different in modulating forward or backward locomotion. The genetic screen focused on Wnt/Fz-signaling due to its known anterior-to-posterior guidance roles in mammals and nematodes.

      Strengths:

      Knock-down (KD) DFz2 with two independent RNAi-lines caused ectopic posterior axon and dendrite extension for all a- and p-Wave neurons, with a-Wave axon extending into regions where p-Wave axons normally project. Both behavioral assays (optogenetic stimulation of all Wave neurons or tactile stimuli on heads using a von Frey filament) show that backward movement is reduced or absent and that the speed of evoked fast-forward locomotion is increased. This demonstrates that altered projections of Wave do alter behavior and the DFz2 KD phenotype is consistent with the potential aberrant wiring of a-Wave neurons to forward locomotion-promoting circuits instead of to backward locomotion-promoting circuits.

      The main conclusion, that Wnt/Fz-signaling is essential for the guidance of Wave neurons and in diversifying their protection pattern in a segment-specific manner, is further supported by the results showing that DFz2 gain of function causes shortening of a-Wave but not p-Wave axon extensions towards the posterior end and that KD of DFz4 causes axonal shortening only in A6-p-Wave neurons but does not affect dendrites or processes of other Wave neurons. A role for ligand Wnt4 is demonstrated by results indicating that WNT4 mutants' posterior extension of aWave axons was elongated similar to DFz2 KD animals and p-Wave axon extension towards the posterior end was shortened similar to DFz2 KD animals. Finally, a DWnt4 gradient decreasing from the posterior (A8) to the anterior end (A2), similar to that described in other species, is supported by analyses of DWnt4 gene expression (using Wnt4 Trojan-Gal4) and protein expression (using antibodies). In contrast, DFz2 receptor levels seemed to decrease from the anterior (A2) to the posterior end (A5/6). Together the results support the conclusion that opposing Wnt/Fz ligand-receptor gradients contribute to the diversification of Wave neurons in a location-dependent manner and that DFz2 and DFz4 have opposing effects on axon extension.

      Weaknesses:

      Wave axon and dendrite projections are not exclusively determined by Wnt4, DFz2, and DFz4, and are likely to involve other Fz receptors, Wt ligands, and other types of receptor-ligand signaling pathways. This is in part supported by the fact that Wnt4 loss of function also resulted in phenotypes that do not mimic DFz2 KD or DFz4 KD (Figures 3D, E, and F) and that other Fz/Wnt mutants caused wave neuron phenotypes (Figure 1-supplement 2, D+E). This is not a weakness per se, since it doesn't affect the main conclusion of the manuscript. However, the description and analyses of the data in particular for Figure 1-supplement 2 D should be clarified in the legend. The number within the bars and the asterisks are not defined. It's presumed they refer to numbers of animals assessed and the asterisk next to DFz2 and DFz4 indicate statistically significant differences. However, only one p-value is provided in the legend. It is also unclear if p-values for the other mutants have not been determined or are non-significant. At least for mutants like Corin, which also exhibit altered axon projections, the p-values should be provided.

      We appreciate this reviewer’s careful attention to detail and intellectual curiosity. We apologize for the confusions caused by the statistical reporting in Figure 1 – figure supplement 2D. The numbers shown in the bars represent the number of neurons (i.e. Wave neurons from left or right hemisphere). As mentioned in Materials and Methods section, we applied Chi-square test followed by Haberman's adjusted residual analysis to determine the statistical significance of each RNAi group. The p-value provided in the figure legend corresponds to the Chi-square test. P-values for Haberman's adjusted residual analysis were calculated for all RNAi groups and groups without the asterisk are not statistically significant. We have clarified these points in the corresponding figure legend.

      Figure 4 D, F. The gradient for Wnt4 was determined by comparison of expression levels of other segments to A8 but the gradient for DFz2 was by comparison to A2 and the data supports opposing gradients. However, for DFz2 (Figure 4, F) it seems that the gradient is bi-directional with the lowest being in A5 and increasing towards A2 as well as A8. Analysis should be performed in reference to A8 as well to determine if it is indeed bi-directional. While such a finding would not affect the interpretation of aWave neurons, it may impact conclusions about p-Wave neuron projections.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting this interesting possibility. In response, we performed an additional analysis of the DFz2 gradient by comparing the signal from each neuromere to that from A8 (new Figure 5—figure supplement 3). This analysis confirmed that the gradient is indeed bidirectional. We revised the description of DFz2 expression accordingly in the revision. We believe this finding does not affect our main conclusions since only the anterior gradient is relevant for a-Wave axon guidance. 

      As discussed above, the DFz2 KD phenotypes are consistent with the potential aberrant wiring of a-Wave neurons to forward locomotion-promoting circuits instead of to backward locomotion-promoting circuits. However, since the axon and dendrites of a-Wave and p-Wave are affected the actual dendritic and axonal contributions for the altered behavior remain elusive. The authors certainly considered a potential contribution of altered dendrite projection of a-Wave neurons to the phenotype and their conclusion that altered axonal projections are involved is supported by the optogenetic experiment "bypassing" sensory input (albeit it seems unlikely that all Wave neurons are activated simultaneously when perceiving natural stimuli).However, the author should also consider that altered perception and projection of pWave neuron may directly (e.g. extended P-wave axon projections increase forward locomotion input thereby overriding backward locomotion) or indirectly (e.g. feedback loops between forward and backward circuits) contribute to the altered behavioral phenotypes in both assays. It is probably noteworthy that the more complex behavioral alterations observed with mechanical stimulation are likely to also be caused by altered dendritic projections.

      We fully agree with the reviewer’s thoughtful interpretation. We have now included these important possibilities in the revised Discussion section. Specifically, we acknowledge that while the DFz2 knockdown phenotypes are consistent with aberrant wiring of a-Wave neurons to forward locomotion-promoting circuits, the contributions of both axonal and dendritic alterations remain unclear. We also recognize that altered perception and projection of p-Wave neurons may directly or indirectly contribute to the observed behavioral phenotypes, particularly in response to mechanical stimulation.

      Presynaptic varicosities of a-Wave neurons in DFz2 KD animals are indicated by orange arrows in Figure 1. However, no presynaptic markers have been used to confirm actual ectopic synaptic connections. At least the authors should more clearly define what parameters they used to "visually" define potential presynaptic varicosities. Some arrows seem to point to more "globular structures" but for several others, it's unclear what they are pointing at.

      As mentioned in our response to Reviewer #1, we have now performed Brp immunostaining to confirm the presence of ectopic synaptic connections (new Figure 2). This analysis supports the interpretation that the presynaptic varicosities observed in DFz2 knockdown animals represent actual synaptic sites. We also clarified in the figure legend the visual criteria used to identify potential presynaptic varicosities.

      Reviewing Editor (Recommendations For The Authors):

      There are a few major concerns that we recommend the authors address:

      (1) Neuroanatomy: The point aberrant synaptic connectivity of a-Wave neurons following Dfz2 knockdown could be substantiated. This could be done by using a presynaptic marker and showing ectopic posterior presynaptic sites ( and/or reduced anterior presynaptic sites) in a-wave neurons.

      As mentioned in our response to the public review, we now have used Brp as a presynaptic marker to quantify the number and distribution of presynaptic sites along the normal and ectopic a-Wave axons (new Figure 2). We show that ectopic posterior Wave axons do contain presynaptic sites.  

      (2) Gradient calculations: As detailed in the reviews below, the Dfz2 gradient looks like it may be bidirectional. Changing the way the gradient is calculated might help address this point.

      As mentioned in our response above, we now have recalculated the gradient by comparing the DFz2 signal to A8 and show that it indeed is bidirectional (new Figure 5—figure supplement 2; formerly Figure 4—figure supplement 2).

      (3)  Statistics and sample sizes: As detailed in the reviews, some of the statistical reporting could be improved. Further, increasing sample sizes could help bolster confidence in the data as well.

      As mentioned above, we have added a description on the sample size, asterisks, and p-values in Figure 1 – figure supplement 2 legend. We also increased sample sizes of single Wave neurons in control and DFz2 knock-down animals (Figure 1F-J (WT and DFz2 KD) and new Figure 3C-G (WT; formerly Figure 2C-G)).

      (4) It would help to include some discussion of the potential contributions of altered p-wave neurons to the observed phenotypes.

      As described above, we have added in the Discussion potential contributions of altered p-wave neurons to the observed phenotypes. 

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) In the current model the authors assume that posterior elongation of a-wave neuron connectivity (axonal projections) induces a loss of connectivity to their natural targets, as backward motion is no longer induced, and a gain of connectivity to posterior wave neuron targets. Is this at the cost of innervation of p-wave neurons, e.g. did these neurons now lose connectivity to their natural targets as well? Therefore, it would be very interesting if the authors would test the behavioral responses to tactile stimuli in the posterior parts of the animal - does the response pattern change?

      This is indeed an interesting possibility that p-Wave function is altered upon DFz2 knock-down and hence behavioral response to posterior touch is changed. However, it is technically challenging to test this with tactile stimuli, due to the difficulty of (1) distinguishing between normal and fast-forward locomotion and (2) delivering a posterior touch stimulus while the larva is moving forward, which is the default behavior of the larvae on an agar plate.

      As highlighted above, the authors should provide additional evidence that the circuit response to a-wave neurons is changed after a DFz2 knockdown. The authors should monitor the activation wave in response to optogenetic activation of anterior wave neurons - analogous to the data provided in Figure 4 of their 2017 paper. If this response is now switched for a-wave activation but not p-wave activation it would greatly support their claims and this data would be less ambiguous compared to the behavioral locomotion data.

      As described in our response to the public review, we attempted this approach but found that the in vitro optogenetics experiment is unfortunately not feasible due to relatively weak expression of R60G09-GAL4 in the larvae. Local activation of control aWave induced fictive backward locomotion only at low frequencies, making comparison with the experimental a-Wave very difficult.  The MB120B-spGAL4 used in our 2017 study could not be employed in this study as it does not drive expression during the embryonic stages and thus cannot be used to knock down DFz2 during development. 

      (2) Related to this point. Why would the normal "backward" circuitry of a-wave neurons be functionally suppressed in Dfz2 knockdowns? Do the authors observe reduced synaptic connectivity in these segments? Vesicle clustering of synaptotagmin or other presynaptic markers could be used as a first. As the innervation pattern is only extended by approximately one segment, it is surprising that the changes are so significant.

      We agree that these are important and interesting points, which remain to be explored in the future study. As described above, we have performed Brp immunostaining and showed that the posterior ectopic axons of a-Wave do contain synapses (new Figure 2). We also found a slight decrease in the number of synapses in the anterior region, which could partially contribute to the weaker activation of downstream neurons responsible for eliciting backward locomotion. Another possibility is that backward suppression occurs through lateral interaction among downstream circuits. Since forward and backward locomotion do not occur simultaneously, it is likely that the circuits driving these two behaviors are mutually inhibitory. Upon DFz2 knock down in a-Wave, downstream neurons inducing fastforward locomotion may become more strongly activated than those inducing backward locomotion, resulting in inhibition of the latter via a “winner-take-all” mechanism. Since these discussions are highly speculative, we chose not to include them in the revised manuscript.  

      (3) The low number of neurons analyzed per segment is of slight concern. This is particularly the case for the control data set used in Figure 1 and Figure 2. As stated, the same datasets are used for both figures. However, at most 6 neurons were analyzed (and for two segments only 3). The control morphology may be more variable than indicated by this data.

      As mentioned above, we now have dissected 50 larvae each for the control and experimental groups, obtained seven and six clones respectively, and included these data in the revised manuscript. We apologize that the sample sizes are still relatively small but hope the reviewer understands the inherently low “hit rate” of the stochastic labelling method.

      It is somewhat curious that in Figure 1- Supplement 3 the authors report the same number of control clones per segment as in Figure 1/2 - is this simply a coincidence? And if this is an independent dataset why did the author use new controls here but not for Figure 2? It is clear that it is very difficult to generate this data but increasing the n-number beyond 3-6 per segment would significantly increase the confidence in the presented data.

      We apologize for the confusion. The data in Figure 1 – figure supplement 3 represent the innervation pattern of dendrites, not axons. We have corrected the figure caption accordingly. These data were obtained from the same samples used to analyze axonal innervation, as shown in the original version of Figure 1F-J.

      (2) The name of the RNAi lines should be indicated in Figure 1 and Figure Supplement 3 to facilitate reading - at least the precise names should be given in both figure legends.

      We have added these labels in the revised figure legends as requested.

      (3) In Figure 4E again the control numbers of Figure 1 for the A2-wave axon are reused. This does not seem appropriate as now a different Gal4 driver is used and a different method to induce individual neuronal clones. Both components may induce significant variability in expression or arborization. As only 3 clones for the wnt4 mutant condition are analyzed (and compared to 5 control clones), this data does not allow for strong conclusions. The authors clearly state the reuse and different methods in the legend of Figure 4 F/G but should also highlight it for the E panel.

      Here, we assume that the reviewer is referring to the former Figure 3 (now Figure 4). We have added a note in the legend that the control data, obtained using a different method, were reused in this panel.

      (4) The expression levels of DWnt4 and DFz2 were analyzed at the end of embryogenesis. At what developmental stage does the axonal extension of wave neurons take place? Is the gradient maintained throughout the first larval stages?

      Based upon the lateral view of Wave neurons in Figure 1—figure supplement 1D, we think that the axonal extension is already established by approximately 20 hr after egg laying. Previously, we performed Wnt4<sup>MI03717-Trojan-GAL4</sup> > GFP.nls immunostaining in the third instar larva and observed a similar gradient of GFP signals towards the posterior end of the ventral nerve cord (VNC). We have included this data in the revised manuscript (new Figure 5—figure supplement 1).

      (5) The authors state that either 2nd or 3rd instar larvae were used for the optogenetic experiments. This may induce unnecessary variation in their assay and should be avoided. As natural variance exists in larvae regarding forward stride duration, the comparison of "on" state forward stride duration between control and experimental genotype is potentially not the best measurement of effect size. What is the difference between OFF and ON stage within the control and experimental genotype? In both cases stride duration decreases but there may not be a significant difference between the delta of the two genotypes. Thus, the observed effect may in part be due to "slower" animals in the control pool. The authors should discuss this more carefully.

      We thank the reviewer for bringing up this critical issue. Indeed, the stride durations of larvae between the control and DFz2 knock-down are slightly different in the OFF condition, although this is not statistically significant. In addition, the effect size of Wave activation on mean stride duration is -0.14 (s) in control while -0.21 (s) in DFz2 knock-down, which we interpret as DFz2 knock-down resulting in stronger fastforward locomotion upon Wave activation. We have incorporated this note in the corresponding figure legends (new Figure 6; formerly Figure 5).

      (6) While the study clearly provides convincing evidence for their model, the authors should tune down their conclusions in the discussion a little bit and highlight that parts of their discussion are speculative.

      We have revised the discussion as suggested.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Albeit the optogenetic behavioral experiments strongly support that the altered axonal projection affect normal locomotion, simultaneous labeling of Wave neurons in DFz2 KD animals with presynaptic markers would strengthen the conclusion of ectopic connection of the extended axon with other circuits.

      Please see our response to your public review.

      Figure 1 K+L, Figure 2H, I, Figure 3 F+G: many of the individual data points are not visible in the Whisker plot- changing their color would be useful to visualize them better.

      We have changed the outline width of the box plots to make the individual data points visible.

      Figure 1-Supplement 2: In addition to the comments in the public review- a) the asterisk font size changes in the different panels, e.g. it is much smaller in G', b) font size in some graphs/legends should be increased - in particular in E the hyphenated letters in the genotypes are so small rendering them almost illegible.

      We have unified the font size to make them readable in the figure. We thank the reviewer for the suggestions.