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    1. What is Digital Storytelling and How to Use it in the Most Powerful Way

      GPT SUMMARY:

      The article What is Digital Storytelling and How to Use it in the Most Powerful Way from the ThingLink Blog explores the concept, benefits, and applications of digital storytelling. Key takeaways include:

      1. What is Digital Storytelling?

        • Digital storytelling is the use of multimedia elements such as text, images, video, voiceovers, animation, and interactive content to create compelling narratives.

        • It is widely used in education, healthcare, museums, and other fields to enhance learning and engagement.

      2. Benefits of Digital Storytelling

        • Enhanced Creativity: Allows individuals to control the pacing, visuals, and overall presentation.

        • Easy Sharing & Accessibility: Digital stories can be distributed through social media, websites, and online platforms.

        • Real-Time Updates: Stories can be quickly modified to reflect new perspectives or updated information.

        • Engagement & Emotional Connection: Multimedia narratives are visually compelling and emotionally impactful.

      3. Educational Applications

        • Encourages creative self-expression and communication skills.

        • Supports collaborative learning as students work together to build stories.

        • Makes content more engaging and accessible, benefiting visual learners and those with different learning styles.

        • Provides technical skill development through the use of digital tools.

        • Enables global collaboration, allowing students to share stories across classrooms and cultures.

      4. How to Use Digital Storytelling Effectively

        • Define the story’s objective and message.

        • Decide on the narrative structure (linear or open-ended).

        • Storyboard each step before production.

        • Choose the best media elements to enhance the story (video, sound effects, visuals).

      5. Digital Storytelling Tools

        • WeVideo – Cloud-based video editing with sound and effects.

        • Google Slides/Microsoft PowerPoint – Simple, template-based storytelling.

        • ThingLink – Interactive visual storytelling with virtual exhibitions.

        • Virtual Reality (VR) – Immersive storytelling for deeper engagement.

      6. Powerful Ways to Share Digital Stories

        • Embedded links in emails, websites, and blogs.

        • Social media sharing (YouTube, Vimeo, Facebook).

        • QR codes for instant access across devices.

      7. The Future of Digital Storytelling

        • Virtual reality (VR) is increasingly integrated into digital storytelling, providing immersive learning experiences.

        • Advancements in technology make digital storytelling more accessible to everyone, regardless of technical expertise.

      Conclusion

      Digital storytelling is a versatile, impactful tool that enhances learning, communication, and creativity across various fields. By effectively integrating multimedia elements, educators, students, and professionals can craft meaningful narratives that engage and educate diverse audiences.

    1. 10 Best Storyboard Softwares for Students in 2024

      GPT Summary: The article 10 Best Storyboard Softwares for Students in 2024 from Boords provides an overview of top storyboard tools for students, focusing on features, ease of use, and affordability. Key highlights include:

      1. Boords

        • Best for collaboration: Enables students to receive feedback directly on storyboard frames.

        • AI Storyboard Generator: Converts scripts into animated visuals.

        • Automatic Animatics: Turns static frames into video sequences.

        • Student Discount: 50% off for educational users.

      2. Studiobinder

        • Script-to-Storyboard Feature: Auto-generates storyboards from scripts.

        • Shot Tagging & Image Editing: Enhances visual storytelling.

        • Best for Beginners: User-friendly and visually appealing.

      3. Krock.io

        • AI-Powered Storyboarding: Automates storyboard creation for faster workflows.

        • Collaboration Tools: Real-time feedback and structured reviews.

        • Ideal for Students Needing Efficiency: Reduces manual effort while maintaining quality.

      4. Storyboard That

        • Great for teamwork: Includes collaborative and feedback-sharing features.

        • Drag-and-Drop Interface: Makes it accessible for students.

        • Widely Used in Education: Also helpful for customer journey mapping.

      5. Wonder Unit Storyboarder

        • Free & Open-Source: Ideal for budget-conscious students.

        • Basic Drawing & Editing Tools: Lacks advanced AI features.

        • Best for Individual Users: Great for manual storyboarding.

      6. FrameForge

        • Virtual Film Studio: Uses optically accurate virtual cameras for real-world shot planning.

        • Detailed Storyboard Prints: Includes camera height, focal length, and angles.

        • Best for Film & TV Students: Prepares students for industry standards.

      7. PanelForge

        • Combines 2D & 3D: Allows students to visualize space and character orientation.

        • Enhances Storytelling Skills: Helps in experimenting with different angles.

        • Best for Developing Technical Skills.

      8. Miro • Infinite Canvas: Unlimited space for brainstorming and sketching.

        • Not Specific to Storyboarding: Lacks dedicated storyboard tools but works as an online whiteboard.

        • Best for Brainstorming & Planning.

      9. Conclusion: The best storyboard software depends on the student’s needs-

        • For collaboration & AI assistance: Boords, Krock.io, Storyboard That.

        • For beginners & script conversion: Studiobinder.

        • For technical depth: FrameForge, PanelForge.

        • For free/open-source: Wonder Unit.

        • For brainstorming: Miro.

      These tools make digital storytelling and filmmaking more accessible, helping students develop essential creative and technical skills.

    1. The 6 Best AI Storyboard Generators in 2024

      The article The 6 Best AI Storyboard Generators in 2024 from Boords evaluates top AI-powered storyboard tools based on their features, efficiency, and usability. Key highlights include:

      1. Boords (Top Choice)

        • AI Storyboard Generator: Converts text prompts into full storyboards.

        • Character Guidelines: Maintains character consistency across frames.

        • Collaboration Features: Export as PDFs, PNGs, or MP4 animatics; share storyboards with feedback tools.

        • Customizable Character Outfits & Scene Variations.

      2. Storyboard Hero

        • Basic AI Storyboarding: Helps with video planning and collaboration.

        • Downside: Lacks user-friendly design, character consistency, and AI-driven refinements.

      3. Krock.io

        • CSV-Based Storyboard Generator: Creates scenes from structured data.

        • Missing Features: No text-prompt generation or character consistency tools.

      4. Elai.io

        • AI Script & Scene Generation: Great for multilingual videos.

        • Limitations: Slow loading times and fewer collaboration options.

      5. Storyboarder.ai

        • Cloud-Based AI Storyboarding: Generates entire storyboards in minutes.

        • Downside: No voiceover, character guidelines, or versioning tools.

      6. Voxxio

        • Speech-to-Storyboard AI: Converts spoken ideas into visuals.

        • Weakness: Lacks character consistency, text-prompt generation, and collaboration features.

      7. Conclusion

        • Best Overall: Boords (AI-driven, user-friendly, best for character consistency).

        • Best for Data-Driven Storyboarding: Krock.io.

        • Best for Quick Conceptualization: Storyboarder.ai and Voxxio.

        • Best for Multilingual Video Creation: Elai.io.

      Boords stands out as the most advanced tool, while others offer unique strengths depending on user needs.

    1. sommaire de la présentation avec des estimations de timestamps basées sur la lecture du transcript : • [0:00 - 0:50] Introduction de la conférence : Remerciements, présentation du sujet de recherche de l'intervenant (liens entre cinéma et esprit critique depuis l'après-guerre) et de l'objectif de la présentation (comment le cinéma, et plus particulièrement le documentaire, peut aider à développer l'esprit critique). • [0:50 - 1:55] La "Septicotèque" : Présentation de la "Septicotèque", une liste de films intéressants pour traiter divers aspects de l'esprit critique, disponible en ligne et participative. L'art et la culture sont intrinsèquement politiques. • [1:55 - 2:50] Le podcast associé à la "Septicotèque" : Création d'un podcast mensuel par l'association "Sceptique" pour discuter de films méconnus sous l'angle de l'esprit critique (exemples : Matrix, Don't Look Up, Le Village, un film indien). Intérêt pour les films de procès et les documentaires. • [2:50 - 3:50] Intérêt pour les documentaires et rencontre avec Alain Krivine : Fascination pour le genre documentaire depuis le film "Opération Lune". Discussion avec Alain Krivine (Science et Pseudosciences) et désaccord sur sa définition du documentaire comme film complotiste, ce qui a poussé l'intervenant à approfondir la question. • [3:50 - 4:25] Plan de l'intervention : Éclaircir les définitions du documentaire et leurs enjeux, puis examiner les usages possibles du documentaire dans l'éducation à l'esprit critique, notamment dans l'éducation aux médias, avec l'exemple d'"Opération Lune". Conclusion avec des nuances. • [4:25 - 5:55] Définition du mot "documenteur" : Étymologie du mot "documenteur" (documentaire + menteur), inventé a priori par Agnès Varda dans son film "Documenteur" (1981), un film de fiction avec des éléments documentaires. Varda n'a pas théorisé le concept. • [5:55 - 7:05] Première définition de "documenteur" : le faux documentaire : Définition d'un "documenteur" comme une fiction habillée des apparences du genre documentaire, soit un faux documentaire. Exemples : La Bombe, Punishment Park, Spinal Tap, Forgotten Silver, Opération Lune, Bye Bye Belgium, C'est arrivé près de chez vous. • [7:05 - 9:45] Deuxième définition de "documenteur" : le documentaire mensonger : Définition alternative du "documenteur" dans les milieux zététiques comme des documentaires mensongers mettant en avant de fausses informations (documentaires complotistes et pseudoscientifiques). Exemples : La Révélation des Pyramides, Hold Up, documentaires sur RMC Découverte. • [9:45 - 12:00] La résurgence du mot "documenteur" et hypothèse québécoise : Le mot "documenteur" ressurgit dans les années 2000, potentiellement via le Québec et le croisement avec le terme anglais "mocumentary". Première utilisation retrouvée dans la revue québécoise "24 Images" en lien avec le réalisateur Robert Morin. • [12:00 - 13:00] L'ouvrage de Jean-Pierre Bertin-Maghit : "Les Documenteurs des années noires" : Présentation de l'ouvrage qui utilise "documenteur" dans le sens de documentaire de propagande (films vichystes), mais le terme n'est pas réellement théorisé. L'ouvrage est excellent sur le cinéma de propagande. • [13:00 - 14:30] Le terme "documenteur" dans la sphère sceptique et le vide sémantique : Le terme "documenteur" tel qu'utilisé parfois (ex : émission "L'Heure des Documenteurs") ne correspond à aucune définition réelle. Il y a un vide sémantique en français pour définir les documentaires complotistes et pseudoscientifiques. • [14:30 - 16:00] Propositions de termes alternatifs et retour à la définition du faux documentaire : Proposition de continuer à parler de documentaire de propagande ou de "pseudo-documentaire" ou "documentaire moisi". La définition de "documenteur" comme faux documentaire est privilégiée par les chercheurs en cinéma et les cinéphiles (Festival Envisions, Festival Documentaire de l'Abitibi-Témiscamingue). • [16:00 - 17:30] Définition de François Niney du "documenteur" : Présentation de la définition de François Niney : un faux documentaire qui révèle progressivement son illusion (proche du "mocumentary" anglais et du canular). • [17:30 - 19:00] Contradiction entre les définitions et position personnelle : Les deux définitions de "documenteur" sont contradictoires. L'intervenant préfère utiliser "documenteur" pour les faux documentaires à visée critique et regrette son utilisation pour les documentaires mensongers. • [19:00 - 21:15] Difficulté de définir le "documenteur" comme genre et exemple de "Bye Bye Belgium" : Difficulté de définir un genre par l'intention du créateur et la réception du spectateur. Présentation de "Bye Bye Belgium" comme exemple de "documenteur" parodiant les codes télévisuels pour inciter à la méfiance envers les médias. • [21:15 - 24:30] Introduction à l'analyse d'"Opération Lune" : Comment le "documenteur" peut développer l'esprit critique en fonctionnant comme un canular (tromperie révélée). Introduction à l'analyse des effets de mise en scène dans "Opération Lune" pour faire adhérer au propos. • [24:30 - 27:00] Analyse d'un extrait d'"Opération Lune" (jusqu'à 21:45 du film) : Identification des éléments qui poussent à l'adhésion : interviews de vrais témoins, musique, images d'archives (et d'illustration), voix off (comme voix omnisciente), montage, champ sémantique (mafia), mise en place d'un énonciateur (le documentariste), caméra non diégétique. Le mythe des images d'archives est déconstruit (images comme construction sociale et point de vue). Critique du traitement des images d'archives dans "Apocalypse". • [27:00 - 33:00] Comment le faux est inséré dans "Opération Lune" (extrait à 27:30 du film) : Le canular doit avoir un fond réaliste. L'image d'archive et le discours s'auto-alimentent. Analyse d'un deuxième extrait où une fausse témoin (une actrice) est utilisée pour créer le lien entre les propos réels mais hors contexte d'autres intervenants. Critique du montage qui ne correspond pas à la réalité. Importance du rythme rapide du film qui ne laisse pas le temps de la réflexion. Discours des hommes politiques parfois vides et réinterprétables. Le vrai soutient le faux dans le montage. Effets de montage (fondu enchaîné sur une photo) pour accréditer la fausse témoin. • [33:00 - 37:30] Comment "Opération Lune" révèle la supercherie : Indices dans le montage. L'humour devient de plus en plus présent, contradiction entre le narrateur et les images (exagérations, situations absurdes au Vietnam). Faux sous-titres. Le film se termine par un bêtisier. Mélange de rires de vrais intervenants dans le bêtisier. • [37:30 - 40:45] Le "documenteur" et l'éducation à l'esprit critique : Le "documenteur" sert à l'éducation aux médias en faisant prendre conscience des dispositifs utilisés. Citation de Jérémy Hur sur le bénéfice éducatif de la prise de conscience de la lecture "documentarisante". Limites de l'utilisation des "documenteurs" : réceptivité du public (risque de blocage ou d'adhésion totale), nécessité d'un accompagnement discursif. Risque de neutralisation de la posture critique par excès de dévoilement et de délégation de l'esprit critique au réalisateur. Importance de garder un esprit critique sur le film lui-même (discours politique). Exemples de "documenteurs" militants (Peter Watkins). Le degré d'adhésion peut révéler le caractère potentiellement réaliste de certaines situations ("Bye Bye Belgium"). Conclusion : toute œuvre défend un discours et une position. • [40:45 - 42:45] Question 1 : Influence d'"Opération Lune" sur les croyances concernant le programme Apollo ? Difficile à dire. Le film ne dit pas qu'on n'a jamais marché sur la lune, mais que les images sont fausses. Les théories du complot lunaire préexistaient au film. Diffusion du film en France et risque de mauvaise interprétation si le spectateur ne voit pas le début. Exemples d'éléments humoristiques dans le film qui passent inaperçus pour certains. • [42:45 - 45:20] Question 2 : "Documenteur" et intelligence artificielle ? L'IA crée une illusion de vérité, mais la manipulation des images et des discours existait déjà avant. Importance de toujours se méfier des images, même non générées par des IA. Exemple d'exercice pédagogique possible avec des sujets télévisés sans le son. • [45:20 - 47:35] Question 3 : Existe-t-il des "documenteurs" pour un jeune public ? Difficulté à trouver des exemples précis. Mention d'un court-métrage documentaire humoristique sur le dauphin fait par des étudiants. Problème d'accessibilité de certains "documenteurs". Exemple de "Vendre la guerre" (Gulf War Syndrome). Mention d'un outil pédagogique (codes) du Brass à Bruxelles utilisant "Opération Lune". Exemple de la vidéo YouTube "Le complot des chats" faite par des adolescents pour des adolescents pour expliquer les mécanismes complotistes. Suggestion de réaliser directement un "documenteur" à des fins pédagogiques. • [47:35 - Fin] Remerciements.

    1. Digital Storytelling: Benefits, Examples, Tools & Tips for 2025

      The article Digital Storytelling: Benefits, Examples, Tools & Tips for 2025 from Research.com explores the role of digital storytelling in education and beyond. Key takeaways include:

      1. What is Digital Storytelling?

      Digital storytelling integrates multimedia elements (text, images, video, audio, and interactive content) within a narrative structure. Unlike traditional storytelling, digital stories exist in electronic formats and often include interactive components like maps and social media.

      1. Benefits of Digital Storytelling in Education

        • Enhances Engagement: Digital stories capture student interest and cater to various learning styles.

        • Improves Learning Outcomes: Helps develop critical thinking, creativity, research, and technical skills.

        • Encourages Emotional Connection: Evokes emotions, making lessons more impactful.

        • Supports Different Literacy Skills: Fosters information, visual, technological, and media literacy.

        • Promotes Collaboration: Allows students to work together on projects, improving teamwork and communication skills.

      2. Challenges in Implementing Digital Storytelling

        • Technical Proficiency: Educators and students may need training in multimedia tools.

        • Access to Technology: Not all students have reliable digital resources.

        • Time Constraints: Creating digital stories can be time-consuming, requiring proper planning.

      3. Beyond Education: Other Applications

        • Public Health & Social Services: Programs like Silence Speaks and Patient Voices use digital storytelling to share personal and healthcare experiences.

        • Business & Marketing: Companies use digital storytelling to enhance user engagement through personal narratives and testimonials.

      4. Key Elements of an Effective Digital Story

        • Clear Point of View: The story should reflect the creator’s perspective.

        • Dramatic Question: Creates intrigue and keeps the audience engaged.

        • Emotional Content: Personal, relatable stories evoke strong emotional responses.

        • Concise Narrative: Storytelling should be economical, focusing on essential elements.

        • Pacing & Soundtrack: Proper rhythm and music enhance storytelling impact.

      5. Popular Digital Storytelling Tools

        • Book Creator – Create multimedia ebooks and digital stories.

        • WeVideo – Cloud-based video creation tool.

        • Storyboard That – Drag-and-drop platform for storyboards and comics.

        • Anchor – Podcast creation and editing platform.

        • FlexClip – Easy-to-use video creation software.

      6. Tips for Creating an Effective Digital Story

        • Start with a focused idea and small scope.

        • Show rather than tell—use visuals effectively.

        • Use transitions and effects sparingly to avoid distractions.

        • Ensure a strong emotional or narrative connection.

      Overall, digital storytelling is a powerful tool in education, business, and social awareness, fostering creativity, engagement, and collaboration.

    1. Putting Thoughts on Paper: Start with a Storyboard!

      GPT SUMMARY:

      The article Putting Thoughts on Paper: Start with a Storyboard! from the Teaching Channel highlights how storyboards can help students, especially those struggling with writing and recall, organize and communicate their thoughts.

      Key points include:

      1.  Challenges in Student Expression
      

      Many students struggle with analyzing text and recalling information, particularly those with learning difficulties or limited vocabulary.

      Some students may understand concepts but lack the ability to express them in writing.

      2.  The Role of Storyboards
      

      Inspired by filmmaking, storyboards offer a structured way to visually represent ideas.

      They serve as a “rough draft” for students who have difficulty with written expression.

      3.  Classroom Implementation
      

      Teachers can guide students to list important characters, settings, and key details before drawing their storyboard.

      Visual representations help students organize their thoughts before transitioning to written assignments.

      Students who struggle with writing can use pictures to demonstrate their understanding and explain their work verbally.

      4.  Scaffolding and Adaptations
      

      Some students may need step-by-step guidance, while others can independently translate visuals into writing.

      Teachers can provide prompts and checklists to ensure key details are included.

      5.  Assessment and Application
      

      Storyboards can act as pre-writing tools, helping students outline their ideas before formal writing.

      They support comprehension, engagement, and deeper thinking about texts.

      Overall, the article emphasizes how storyboards bridge the gap between comprehension and written communication, making learning more accessible for all students.

    1. Using Storyboards in the Classroom

      GPT SUMMARY:

      The article Using Storyboards in the Classroom by Darcy Bakkegard explores how storyboards, traditionally used in filmmaking, can be adapted for educational purposes across different grades and subjects.

      Key points include:

      1.  What Are Storyboards?
      

      Storyboards are visual representations of sequences or concepts, helping students break down ideas into logical steps.

      They can range from simple four-box structures to complex multi-page layouts.

      2.  Why Use Storyboards?
      

      They encourage students to organize information in chunks and logical sequences.

      They provide a visual method to demonstrate understanding, benefiting students who struggle with written expression.

      They allow for easy feedback and revisions.

      3.  When to Use Storyboards?
      

      Beginning of a Unit: Helps activate prior knowledge, organize thoughts, and make predictions.

      During a Lesson: Supports understanding, summarizes key ideas, and checks comprehension.

      End of a Unit: Serves as an exit ticket, supports reflection, and helps students plan complex projects.

      4.  Practical Applications:
      

      Teachers can use storyboards for diverse subjects, such as explaining scientific processes, sequencing historical events, or outlining math problems.

      Digital and physical formats are both useful, with tools like Canva, Padlet, and Adobe Spark offering online options.

      5.  Assessment & Reflection:
      

      Instead of quizzes, students can demonstrate learning through storyboard creation.

      Teachers can use them to evaluate understanding and encourage peer collaboration.

      Overall, storyboards provide a flexible and engaging way to help students visualize and process their learning.

    1. Briefing Document : Exploration de la Nature Humaine et du Concept d'Essence Source : Extraits de "De la nature humaine (1) - Claudine Tiercelin (2024-2025)"

      Date : 20 octobre 2024 (date du cours mentionnée dans l'introduction)

      Introduction : La Question Obsédante de la Nature Humaine

      Claudine Tiercelin entame son dernier cycle de cours au Collège en s'attaquant à la question complexe et controversée de la nature humaine.

      Dès son introduction, elle souligne l'audace qu'il y aurait aujourd'hui à rédiger un traité sur ce sujet, tant la notion est considérée par beaucoup comme obsolète, voire réactionnaire.

      Elle note un clivage persistant entre ceux qui nient l'existence d'une nature humaine et ceux qui, principalement en psychologie cognitive et philosophie expérimentale, en défendent l'urgence de la compréhension.

      Face à ce "déluge passionnel" et ces "raccourcis en tout genre", Tiercelin annonce son intention d'"enquêter" sur cette notion, s'inscrivant dans la continuité de ses travaux antérieurs sur la connaissance, les vertus épistémiques et la vérité.

      Thème 1 : Le Scepticisme Contemporain Face à la Notion de Nature Humaine

      Tiercelin met en évidence un scepticisme généralisé quant à la pertinence et même à l'existence de la nature humaine.

      Elle cite Maria Kronfeldner et son livre "What's Left of Human Nature?" (Que reste-t-il de la nature humaine ?), dont le titre reflète l'état d'esprit dominant. Kronfeldner elle-même dresse une liste étendue des domaines et des questions auxquels la notion de nature humaine est connectée (évolution, culture, animalité, génétique, IA, morale, etc.), soulignant ainsi la complexité et les multiples angles d'approche.

      "qui oserait aujourd'hui rédiger un volumineux Traité de la nature humaine qui aurait le culot d'intitulé un livre d'Aristote à Darwin et retour qui sent passer pour un FIFé réactionnaire... prendrait le risque de s'intéresser à la nature humaine notion obsolète pure superstition voilà bien une notion parfaitement inutile au dire du plus grand nombre d'ailleurs c'est bien connu la nature humaine cela ne correspond à rien cela n'existe pas"

      Tiercelin relève également la division disciplinaire sur cette question, avec les biologistes et psychologues souvent plus enclins à défendre le concept, tandis que les historiens et anthropologues se montrent plus sceptiques.

      Elle mentionne les travaux de Steven Pinker ("The Blank Slate") qui critique le déni moderne de la nature humaine, s'appuyant sur une perspective évolutionniste, et l'anthropologue Marshall Sahlins qui considère que la civilisation occidentale s'est construite sur une idée erronée de la nature humaine.

      "le chercheur en sciences cognitive stevenen pinger signale à ses lecteur qu'une perspective évolutionniste appropriée nous apprend que nous ne sommes som pas des ardoises vierges et en qu'en conséquence on ne saurait nier la nature humaine."

      "l'antrop l'anthropologue Marshall sins a défendu la conclusion modeste selon laquelle comme il le dit la civilisation occidentale s'est largement construite sur une idée erronée de la nature humaine"

      Cependant, Tiercelin nuance cette division, rappelant que même au sein de la théorie de l'évolution, les avis divergent.

      Elle cite David Hull, dont le travail a influencé de nombreuses critiques du concept, mais souligne aussi des perspectives nuancées venant des sciences sociales, comme celle de Sahlins qui ne nie pas l'existence d'une nature humaine, mais insiste sur sa dépendance à la culture.

      "Salins d'ailleurs ne prétend pas qu'une telle nature n'existe pas mais affirme plutôt que je cite son mode d'existence et son efficacité sociale dépendent de la culture concernerné fin de citation"

      Thème 2 : Les Sources et la Complexité des Désaccords

      Tiercelin identifie plusieurs sources aux désaccords concernant la nature humaine.

      Polysémie du terme "humain" : Le terme peut se référer à l'espèce biologique Homo sapiens, à des espèces plus anciennes du genre Homo partageant certaines propriétés, aux humains modernes sur le plan comportemental (symbolisme, outils complexes, etc.), ou même aux humains contemporains vivant dans des structures sociales complexes.

      Cette variation de référence complexifie les discussions. "l'hypothèse naturelle peut sembler être que nous parlons de spécimen de l'espèce biologique Homo sapiens n'est-ce pas, c'est-à-dire d'organismes appartenant au taxon qui s'est séparé euh et bien du reste de la lignée hinine il y a environ pardon 150000 ans." "toutefois certaines affirmations semblent mieux se comprendre comme faisant au moins potentiellement référence à des organismes appartenant à diverses espèces plus anciennes au sein de la sous-tribu homo avec lesquels les spécimes d'Homo sapiens partagent des propriétés qui ont souvent été jugé significatives"

      • Confusion entre caractéristique typique et distinctive : On mélange souvent ce qui est commun ou typique de l'humanité avec ce qui la distingue des animaux et lui conférerait une supposée supériorité.

      • Différentes conceptions du mot "nature" dans "nature humaine" : On peut s'intéresser au concept lui-même (sa signification, son utilité, ses implications) ou à ce que signifie être humain (les traits caractéristiques de l'homme). Tiercelin annonce qu'elle privilégiera la première approche, l'analyse conceptuelle.

      • "il est deux manières en effet d'aborder évidemment la question de la nature humaine en mettant l'accent soit sur la nature humaine soit sur la nature humaine si vous optez pour la seconde question vous vous intéresserez au concept de nature humaine à son contenu à sa signification explicative le plus important étant de savoir si l'expression nature humaine se réfère à quoi que ce soit aut dit vous vous demanderez par exemple ce que signifie avoir une nature humaine ce concept est-il comme la monarchie britannique la relique d'un âge révolu correspondt-il seulement à quelque chose de réel n'est-ce pas qu'un pur mot quelle est l'utilité d'un tel concept quels sont les engagements épistémiques et ontologiques et ajoutons sociau et politique que l'on prend lorsqu'on utilise un tel terme et de t"

      • Influence des traditions philosophiques et des préjugés : Les débats sont souvent surdéterminés par un "lourd bagage de tradition" et les connotations normatives attachées au terme.

      Thème 3 : Le Débat Historique et Philosophique Illustré par Voltaire et Hartog

      Tiercelin illustre la complexité du débat à travers deux exemples :

      • Voltaire contre Pascal : L'analyse de la critique voltairienne de l'anthropologie pascalienne (péché originel comme fondement de la nature humaine) met en lumière l'opposition entre une métaphysique "raisonnable" (à la Locke et Newton) et une métaphysique spéculative. Voltaire rejette l'idée que la nature humaine, avec ses contradictions, puisse prouver la nécessité de la religion chrétienne. Il défend une vision plus empirique de l'homme, dont la sociabilité naturelle est un antidote au concept de péché originel. Cependant, Tiercelin souligne que Voltaire ne fait que substituer sa propre anthropologie à celle de Pascal.
      • "mon idée est donc que le péché originel ne peut être prouvé par la raison et que c'est un point de foi la proposition qu'il faut rendre solidaire de celle-ci pour ce qui concerne la connaissance de la nature humaine dit pour sa part que comme tout ce qui es t comme le reste de la nature l'homme je cite est ce qu'il doit être"
      • "La sociabilité naturelle de l'homme vous le voyez est donc chemin faisant aussi le plus puissant antidote de Voltaire contre le péché originel de Pascal"
      • L'Enquête Historique de François Hartog : Tiercelin présente l'ouvrage récent de François Hartog, "Départager l'humanité", qui adopte une perspective historique et conceptuelle pour analyser les différentes figures de l'humain (Homo Graecus, Homo Romanus, Homo Christianus, Homo Humanus, Homo Inhumanus) et les "partages" (séparations et créations de commun) qui les définissent à travers l'histoire. Hartog met l'accent sur la construction historique de l'idée d'humanité plutôt que sur une essence naturelle. Il montre comment les critères d'inclusion et d'exclusion ont évolué, culminant avec la période de l'inhumain au XXe siècle et les défis contemporains posés par les non-humains et la crise de l'humanitaire.
      • "L'homme est une idée historique et non pas une espèce naturelle" (citation de Merleau-Ponty en exergue du livre d'Hartog)
      • "partager dit-il c'est tranché séparé mais c'est aussi selon l'autre sens du verbe partagé avec créer du commun il en va ainsi de la vie en cité police ce commun qu'à la différence des non grec les Grecs se ventent de partager mais du même mouvement ce geste d'ouverture à d'autres emporte aussi avec lui la fixation de limite de hiérarchie voire le prononcer d'exclusion"
      • "plus que jamais l'homo inumanus et les violences qui font son ordinaire sont donc de retour autrement dit la progression considérable de l'humanitaire va de pair avec la faillite d'un nombre croissant d'État la multiplication des catastrophes naturelles l'extension des guerrias l'intensification des guerres et leur cortège de violence extrême et l'écart ne cessent de croître entre d'une part les progrès de l'inhumanité et de l'autre ce de l'humanitaire au détriment du second bien entendu"

      Thème 4 : La Portée Normative et les Inquiétudes Liées au Concept de Nature Humaine

      Tiercelin souligne que la violence des débats autour de la nature humaine provient souvent moins d'un désaccord sur son contenu que sur le rôle normatif qu'on lui accorde (descriptif, comparatif, mais surtout normatif). On craint qu'il ne serve de base à l'exclusion, à la négation de l'égalité et à des interdictions morales.

      "pour beaucoup vous voyez ce qui met tant de monde mal à l'aise hein c'est la portée normative considérable de l'expression on y voit une source possible d'exclusion de négation de possibilités sociales en terme notamment d'égalité et d'interdiction morale bref le simple déploiement d'un concept typiquement voire nécessairement pernicieux"

      Elle présente l'analyse de Maria Kronfeldner, qui identifie trois rôles épistémiques (classification, description, explication) et des fonctions pragmatiques de la nature humaine, la plus importante étant selon elle la déshumanisation. Kronfeldner lie cette fonction à l'essentialisme, à l'évolution, à l'hérédité, au clivage nature-culture et aux hypothèses de normalité.

      Elle propose de dépasser ces difficultés en adoptant une conception "post-essentialiste, pluraliste et interactive" de la nature humaine.

      "la plus importante étant selon elle que la référence à la nature humaine est utilisée pour la déshumanisation c'est-à-dire pour considérer les autres comme moins humains"

      "elle répond pour sa part ce qui incidemment n'est pas ma position je la cite une conception antiessentialiste post essentialiste pluraliste et interactive de la nature humaine"

      Thème 5 : La Question de l'Essence et de l'Essentialisme

      Tiercelin aborde ensuite la notion d'essence, souvent au cœur des critiques de la nature humaine.

      Elle constate une "forme de consensus anti-essentialiste" et souligne la mauvaise presse générale de l'essentialisme, souvent associé à une vision téléologique dépassée.

      Elle mentionne la critique de Quine qui remet en question la possibilité de distinguer les propriétés essentielles des propriétés accidentelles sans une explication claire de ce qui détermine le statut modal des propriétés.

      "quin n'avait-il pas raison d'être sceptique quant à la possibilité d'expliquer comment et pourquoi un objet à telle propriété essentiellement et teles autres accidentellement et d'en conclure que nous n'avions besoin de rien d'aut autre que d'une explication naturelle de ce pourquoi nous attribuons certaines propriétés modales d'éré à certains objets"

      "l'essentialisme dixitquin sont incapables de répondre à la demande de conditions nécessairire et suffisante permettant d'identifier la même entité à travers différents scénarios ou monde poss possible"

      Cependant, Tiercelin note un regain d'intérêt pour la métaphysique et un "renouveau de l'essentialisme" dans les années 70 (Kripke, Putnam), ainsi que des formes contemporaines d'essentialisme (scientifique, aristotélicien, "liquiditisme" qu'elle défend elle-même).

      La question centrale devient alors de savoir si ces nouvelles formes d'essentialisme peuvent éclairer le concept de nature humaine.

      Thème 6 : Clarifications Conceptuelles sur l'Essence et l'Essentialisme

      Tiercelin propose plusieurs clarifications concernant les termes d'"essence" et d'"essentialisme" :

      • Propriété essentielle comme propriété nécessaire : Une propriété essentielle est souvent vue comme nécessairement attachée à une entité, découlant de son identité ou constitutive de sa nature.
      • Essence et existence : Une propriété essentielle est ce qu'une entité doit posséder pour exister. Sa perte entraînerait la cessation d'existence de l'entité.
      • Essentialisme superficiel vs. profond : L'essentialisme profond considère que les propriétés essentielles d'une chose déterminent son identité et son caractère unique, tandis que l'essentialisme superficiel se montre plus contextualiste.
      • Essence générale (de genre/espèce) vs. essence individuelle : Une essence générale est partagée par les membres d'un même genre ou espèce, tandis qu'une essence individuelle est propre à un individu.
      • Essence et définition réelle : Une définition réelle vise à saisir ce qu'est une entité, indépendamment de nos représentations, contrairement à une définition nominale qui porte sur la signification d'un mot ou d'un concept.
      • Essentialisme concernant les individus vs. les espèces (kind) : Il est crucial de distinguer ces deux niveaux d'essentialisme, car ils n'impliquent pas nécessairement les mêmes affirmations.
      • Tiercelin illustre cette distinction avec l'exemple de l'or (essence de l'espèce) et de la bague en or (essence individuelle), ainsi qu'avec l'exemple des tigres (essence de l'espèce Panthera tigris ne signifiant pas que les tigres individuels sont essentiellement membres de cette espèce).

      Conclusion Provisoire : Vers une Nouvelle Compréhension ?

      En guise de conclusion de cet extrait, Tiercelin pose la question de savoir si les nouvelles formes d'essentialisme peuvent renouveler notre compréhension de la nature humaine.

      Elle suggère que la distinction entre l'essentialisme concernant les espèces et celui concernant les individus sera importante pour la suite de sa réflexion.

      Elle annonce que la semaine prochaine, elle explorera plus en détail les objections issues de la biologie contre tout essentialisme.

      Ce briefing met en lumière la complexité et la richesse du débat autour de la nature humaine, ainsi que le rôle central qu'y joue le concept d'essence.

      L'approche de Tiercelin, privilégiant l'analyse conceptuelle et s'inscrivant dans une perspective métaphysique, promet une exploration approfondie des enjeux épistémiques et ontologiques soulevés par cette question persistante.

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      Reviewer #1:

      Major Comments:

      1. The data in the paper strongly suggests that the new copper shuttles are selective for copper and have faster binding kinetics (Fig 1) than the previous one. However, the data regarding the copper shuttling from the copper(Aβ) peptides is not very convincing. It appears to be due to the Cu effect alone (Fig.3), as the reduction in viability with Cu(II)+ AscH- is almost the same as the Cu(II)(Aβ)+AscH-. To convincingly show that the peptide shuttle can strip copper from (Aβ) peptides, the authors need to show that the copper is bound to the (Aβ) peptide before it is used in the experiment. Rightfully so, the effect of the toxicity of Cu(II)+ AscH- is similar to that of Cu(II)(Aβ16)+AscH-. This is due to the fact that Aβ16 is not toxic to the cells, so therefore there is no compounded effect of Cu and Aβ16 as seen for Cu(II)(Aβ40). As for the toxicity of Cu(II)+ AscH-, it is be similar to Cu(II)(Aβ)+AscH- because Cu(II) will be bound to a weaker ligand in the medium and such loosely bound Cu is also able to produce ROS with AscH- with similar rates as Cu-Ab.

      Data from our lab and others have shown that in HEPES solution at pH 7.4, Aβ forms a complex with Cu. The present work is also in line with Cu-binding to Ab, as in Figure 1C (GSH), the rate of Cu withdrawal by the shuttle can only be explained by Cu bound to Ab, as Cu in the buffer binds to the shuttle much faster. Also, the AscH- consumption rate measured in Fig S5D-E are congruent of Cu bound to Ab, unbound Cu has a much faster rate of AscH- consumption (Santoro et al. 2018, doi.org/10.1039/C8CC06040A).

      The concentrations of Aβ and Cu used in our experimental condition were determined with a UV-Vis spectrophotometer.

      Minor comments:

      1. The paper does not cite Figure 1A and some supplementary figures, especially Supp. Fig. 1-2. All the figures and supplementary figures should be cited. This has been rectified for all the concerned figures.

      The data presentation in Figures 3B and S8 is confusing."-" signs indicate no addition or the blank box means no addition. Also, the AKH-αR5W4 has no "-" sign in the first bar. For clarity, please indicate the -, +, or no sign means in the figure legends. Also, what does "Batch A" refer to in Figure 3B?

      The figures have been modified as suggested by the reviewer.

      Page 7, correct (Error! Referencesource not found.Figure 1C).

      This has been rectified.

      The Giantin staining in Figure 2B is making it hard to visualize ATP7A trafficking. If the Giantin image overlay is removed, it may be easier to see the movement of ATP7A from the perinuclear region to the vesicles.

      The images have been modified to better appreciate the ATP7A change in distribution upon the increase in intracellular Cu level. We have reduced the number of conditions for which images are provided and provided individual staining for clarity. Zoomed images are also provided. The remainder of the conditions are in Figure S7B

      In the introduction, the authors mention, "These molecules have, however, a major pitfall as is seen for Elesclemol, a candidate for Menkes disease treatments 32. The authors cite reference " Tsvetkov, P. et al. Copper induces cell death by targeting lipoylated TCA cycle proteins." The paper showing elesclomol as a candidate for Menkes disease treatments is Guthrie L et al., Elesclomol alleviates Menkes pathology and mortality by escorting Cu to cuproenzymes in mice. Science. 2020.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out, which was apparently not clearly explained. Our intention here was to show that a major pitfall of shuttles like Elesclomol, as seen in the study by Tsvetkov, P. et al. Science (2022), is cuprotoxicity. The sentence has been clarified and the work of Guthrie L et al is cited for Elesclomol as a candidate for Menkes disease.

      Reviewer #2 :

      Major issues:

      1. This reviewer is not convinced that the authors' experimental system is well suited for studies of glia activation and protective effects. With the exception of a couple of panels it is very hard to see differences. The authors should significantly improve the quality of images in Figure 5 to make this set of data convincing. We thank the reviewer for his/her detailed evaluation and for bringing to light the quality of the image in Figure 5. We have therefore improved the quality of the images by improving the signal to noise ratio to better show the differences between conditions.

      Similarly, the quality of giantin staining is low and needs to be improved and more experimental details are needed (see details below).

      As stated in our answer to reviewer 1, the images have been modified to better appreciate ATP7A redistribution upon increase of intracellular Cu levels. We have reduced the number of conditions for which images are provided and provided individual staining for clarity. Zoomed images are also provided. The remainder of the conditions are in Figure S7B.

      Given that shuttles are found within vesicles, the authors should discuss the mechanism through which Cu is released into the cytosol to trigger ATP7B trafficking.

      The mechanism of Cu escape from endosomes remains poorly understood. However, supported by our recent observations that Cu quickly (within 10 min) dissociates from the Cu-shuttle AKH-αR5W4NBD in endosomes (Okafor et al., 2024, /doi.org/10.3389/fmolb.2024.1355963), we discuss the potential involvement CTR1/2 and DMT1 (page 16).

      There are numerous small writing issues that make paper difficult to read. The authors are encouraged to carefully edit their manuscript.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out and several errors have been corrected whereas various sentences have been clarified.

      Minor issues

      * „A solution of monomerized Aβ complex in 10% DMEM (diluted with DMEM salt solution) was prepared in microcentrifuge tubes" - here and further the description of media composition is confusing What is the rest 90%?

      This has been rectified. The composition of the salt solution that makes up the 90% has been provided (page 4).

      * „Afterwards, AscH- was added to the tubes and vortexed, the mixture was then added to PC12 cells" - concentration of ascorbate is mentioned only once (later in the figure legend) where it can be barely found, also without explaining the choice of concentration. Additionally, ascorbate's product code is not listed. Please, correct.

      These points have been rectified.

      * Description of the cell (PC12 line) handling conditions is absent (growth medium, passage number used etc) and should be included.

      This information is now provided.

      * ATP7A delocalization assay. Details for the secondary antibodies are absent (full name (e.g. AlexaFluor 488), manufacturer, code) and should be added.

      Missing information has been added.

      * page 6: „Next, we investigated the capacity of the shuttles to withdraw Cu(II) from cell culture media, DMEM 10% and DMEM/F12 1:1 (D/F)." Here and further explanation is needed why the mixture of DMEM/F12 is needed (F12 is also not listed in the materials list).

      DMEM/F12 is a media that is commercially available used for some cell types, and it has been added to the materials list (page 4).

      * Page 7. Legend to the figure 1B: „Conditions: Cu(II)=AKH-αR5W4NBD=DapHH-αR5W4NBD=HDapH-αR5W4NBD= 5 μM, DMEM 10%, D/F 100%, 25{degree sign}C, n=3." - „DMEM/F12" ratio equals to „100%" is confusing, please clarify

      This has been clarified.

      * Page 8-9. Legend to the Figure 2A. „Similar observations were obtained with 5 different cell cultures." Same remark goes to the legend to supplementary figure 7 ("Similar observations were obtained with at least 3 different cell cultures"). Do the authors mean independent experiments or different cell lines? Please clarify. If different cell lines, consider including these data into the supplement.

      Indeed we meant independent experimentations. This has been clarified.

      * Page 8-9, figure 2B. Giantin is a cis-golgi marker, which should localize perinuclearly. In the cells shown the signal is diffuse and appears non-specific. Please improve the quality.

      We have reduced the number of conditions for which images are provides and are providing individual staining for clarity. Zoomed images are also provided allowing visualization of the typical cis-Golgi distribution of Giantin.

      * Page 8-9, figure 2B. ATP7A is shown in green. The authors did not specify the secondary antibody has been used for it. If the secondary antibody used for labeling of ATP7A has green fluorescence then how does one distinguish between the transporter signal and signal of the green fluorescent shuttle? Please provide more details.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this point as we missed to mention this technical issue in the original manuscript. The Cu-shuttles labeled with NBD indeed emit in the green signal, but they are not fixable under our conditions and are washed out during ICC procedure. Accordingly, they do generate any background signal and do not interfere with the ICC as shown by the controls and test conditions (Figure S7B and Figure 2B). This is now mentioned (page 11).

      * Page 9 and Figure 2B. Why did authors use Cu(II)EDTA for the experiment? What was the concentration? Please, add this information as well as Cu(II)GTSM treatment conditions to the experiment description in materials and methods.

      EDTA is a strong chelator of Cu(II), however due to its negative charge it cannot penetrate the plasma membrane thus importing Cu. It is therefore used as a negative control, to eliminate the speculation of Cu non-specifically crossing the plasma membrane or through a channel.

      * Figure 2 and supplementary figure 7. It would be beneficial to have higher magnification images. Please, add them, if possible.

      These higher magnification images have been provided.

      * Page 11. „In conclusion, the novel Cu(II)-selective peptide shuttles .... capable of instantly preventing ... toxicity on PC12 cells, whereas ... instantly rescue Cu(II)Aβ1-42 toxicity". Authors should be more careful with terminology. According to the materials and methods, the survival assay was carried out after 24h of cells' treatment with the reagents. Effect visible after 24h and „instant rescue" is not the same, Please clarify or modify the wording

      In principle, the peptides cannot reverse the production of ROS, however they prevent ROS production. Therefore, for the peptides to have an effect, they have to instantly halt ROS production. This is justified by the novel shuttles being more effective than AKH-αR5W4NBD in preventing toxicity, given we modified just the Cu binding sequence. We have however restricted the use of the term instantly to ROS production.

      * Page 13, figure 5, panels C and D. In both quantitations Cu(II) was used as one of the control conditions. Why in panel D the percentage of activated microglial cells (second graphs from right) is several fold higher (appr. 150% vs >500%)?

      This variability was observed throughout our set of experiments and could be linked to the quality of the hippocampal slices used. Slight variations in the age of the animals or in the traces of metals in the mediums are likely explanations. However, the different groups that are compared represent experiments performed simultaneously.

      * Supplementary Figure S3B. The lowest solid line does not correspond to any color in the legend (please, check and correct). However, by the method of exclusion, one may conclude that it refers to Cu(II)+HDapH-shuttle. What could be a potential explanation for stronger quenching of this shuttle by binding Cu(II) directly from the spiked media comparing to when it is pre-complexed with copper (also supported by the panel D)?

      The stronger quenching of this shuttle by binding Cu(II) directly from the spiked media comparing to when it is pre-complexed with copper is not significant.

      * In discussion the authors mention that the designed shuttles are prone to degradation in 48 hours. In the viability assays, they treat cells for 24 hours, in the fluorescent and confocal microscopy experiments for one hour or less. What is the lifetime of these shuttle peptides in the cells?

      The lifetime of the shuttle peptide in the cells is currently unknown. However, after 24h incubation of PC12 cells with the AKH-αR5W4NBD, DapHH-αR5W4NBD and HDapH-αR5W4NBD, the Cu shuttles lose their punctate distribution and appear diffuse inside the cells. We have recently shown that AKH-αR5W4NBD cycles through different endosomal compartments and eventually reaches the lysosomes where it could be degraded (Okafor et al., 2024, /doi.org/10.3389/fmolb.2024.1355963). Therefore, the diffuse distribution of the fluorescence signal could suggest degradation of the Cu-shuttles.

      * From the microscopy observations, the mechanism of entry of apo-shuttles (with no Cu(II) in the complex) and in complex with Cu(II) looks quite different. Namely, in figure S7 the fluorescent signal is very strong in the plasma membrane with significantly less vesicular pattern when compared to figure 2A. It is especially apparent for DapHH shuttle at 15 minutes of incubation. Can authors hypothesize/discuss the reason for these differences?

      The difference of the shuttle’s signal in the presence or absence of Cu binding, is due to fluorescence quenching by Cu bound and was at the heart of the design of these shuttles. Hence a strong signal at the plasma membrane is seen in the absence of Cu as these CPP-based shuttles interact strongly with the plasma membrane. However in presence of Cu, they become less visible due to quenching by Cu. Interestingly however, is that when Cu dissociates from the shuttle inside the cells (likely in acid endosomes), this quenching is suppressed and the fluorescence reappears. This is now better explained (page 10).

      * Please, show the figures in the supplementary file in the same order as you refer to them.

      This has been rectified.

      * Introduction. Description of the shuttle peptides: „(3) a cell penetrating peptide (CPP), αR5W4, with sequence RRWWRRRWWR, for cell entry35" - one R is the middle is extra.

      This has been rectified.

      *Kd units are missing (pages 2, 3 and 15) and should be added.

      This has been added.

      * Figure 1A is either not referred at all or mislabeled.

      * Page 7, Figure 1B: x axis on the second panel (+Mn+) misses a label.

      * Page 8. „Upon addition of DapHH-αR5W4NBD or HDapH-αR5W4NBD, an immediate slow-down in ROS production was observed (Figure 1D and S1E), ..." - mislabeled supplementary figure, please, correct.

      * Page 11. „...but not in the presence of AKH-αR5W4NBD which required pre-incubation to prevent toxicity (Figure 3AFigure)." Please, correct the reference to the figure.

      * Page 11. „This is in line with the faster retrieval ... previously demonstrated in vitro (Figure 1)" - please, specify the panel.

      * Supplementary materials and methods, subsection „Retrieval of Cu by peptide shuttles from Aβ", page 2: „The same was done for 10 μM Cu(II)...to give the estimated 100% saturated emission level." - check the spelling of the shuttle species.

      * Supplementary Figure S4. By the behavior of AKH-shuttle in the presence of copper and other metals, it looks that panels are shuffled, i.e. panel C looks corresponding to the panel B with DMEM/F12 conditions, whish is also supported by the values in the Table S1. Please, check and correct, if needed.

      * Supplementary figure S9, panel A. Apparently, mislabeled images with Abeta1-42 and Cu(II)Abeta1-42. Please, correct.

      We apologize for the different issues in referencing figures. This has been rectified.

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Minor Concerns

      I think that authors can add some concepts of general interest on AD, as follows

      evidence showed that AD top-line disease-modifying drugs employing monoclonal antibodies (donanemab, lecanemab, and aducanumab) that tag Aβ, based on the 'Amyloid cascade hypothesis', are able to rid the brain of Aβ plaques, but the drug benefits consist in a reduction of 35% of cognitive decline. The remaining disease burden (more than 65%) has no disease-modifying therapeutic options, at the moment. Furthermore, monoclonal antibodies against Aβ have strong side- events (ARIA). On this basis, it could be suggested that removing Aβ plaque might not be sufficient to slow the 100% percentage of clinical decline in AD. This is why the Cu(II) shuttle invention presented by the candidate may represent a valid and concrete means to fight AD, since also meta-analyses demonstrate that Cu and more specifically non-Cp Cu is increased in AD (PMID: 34219710). The authors can add some of these clinical considerations in the Discussion.

      There is only a very brief description of the scenario of evidence of the involvement of copper in Alzheimer's, especially from a clinical point of view, I mean the scenario resulting from clinical studies carried out on AD patients. This would have highlighted the unmet medical need to which these new compounds (the Cu shuttles) can provide an answer. At least for a subpopulation of Alzheimer's patients, and we know that there are different subtypes of Alzheimer's disease (for example 10.1016/j.neurobiolaging.2004.04.001, but authors can find others), these Cu(II) selective shuttles could provide beneficial effects. Literature reports about a percentage of AD patients with increased levels of Cu (some papers on this topic e can be easily retrieved,), who may primarily benefit from these compounds. These can be easily identified as it is also characterized by a different biochemical, cognitive, and genetic profile. The current study is timely since AD patients with high Cu can be easily identified since they are characterized by a different biochemical, cognitive, and genetic profile as per recent findings (PMID: 37047347). This information can improve the quality of the manuscript by providing information about the unmet clinical need that this study can answer

      We thank the reviewer for his very positive evaluation and for his suggestion that gives more perspective to our work. Accordingly, we have added these parts to the introduction and discussion sections.

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      Referee #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This is an interesting work characterizing a new generation of copper shuttles with an improved ability to retrieve copper intracellularly from amyloid beta (Ab). In the in-vitro experiments, the authors demonstrate that both DapHH-αR5W4NBD and HDapH-αR5W4NBD have faster Cu(II) retrieval kinetic than the previously characterized shuttle. The authors show the ability of on Cu(II)-DapHH-αR5W4NBD and Cu(II)-HDapH-αR5W4NBD to release copper intracellularly by monitoring changes in the intracellular pattern of the copper transporter ATP7A. Using PC12 cells, the author found that one of the shuttles, DapHH-αR5W4NBD can rescue Cu(II)Aβ1-42 toxicity, and this and other shuttles, show some protective effects in organotypic slices. Overall, the chemical and biochemical data are clear and the ability of new shuttles to deliver Cu to vesicles is convincingly demonstrated. Similarly, the protective effects on plasma membrane permeability in hippocampal staining are also apparent.

      Major issues:

      1. This reviewer is not convinced that the authors' experimental system is well suited for studies of glia activation and protective effects. With the exception of a couple of panels it is very hard to see differences. The authors should significantly improve the quality of images in Figure 5 to make this set of data convincing.
      2. Similarly, the quality of giantin staining is low and needs to be improved and more experimental details are needed (see details below)
      3. Given that shuttles are found within vesicles, the authors should discuss the mechanism through which Cu is released into the cytosol to trigger ATP7B trafficking.
      4. There are numerous small writing issues that make paper difficult to read. The authors are encouraged to carefully edit their manuscript

      Minor issues

      • „A solution of monomerized Aβ complex in 10% DMEM (diluted with DMEM salt solution) was prepared in microcentrifuge tubes" - here and further the description of media composition is confusing What is the rest 90%?
      • „Afterwards, AscH- was added to the tubes and vortexed, the mixture was then added to PC12 cells" - concentration of ascorbate is mentioned only once (later in the figure legend) where it can be barely found, also without explaining the choice of concentration. Additionally, ascorbate's product code is not listed. Please, correct.
      • Description of the cell (PC12 line) handling conditions is absent (growth medium, passage number used etc) and should be included.
      • ATP7A delocalization assay. Details for the secondary antibodies are absent (full name (e.g. AlexaFluor 488), manufacturer, code) and should be added
      • page 6: „Next, we investigated the capacity of the shuttles to withdraw Cu(II) from cell culture media, DMEM 10% and DMEM/F12 1:1 (D/F)." Here and further explanation is needed why the mixture of DMEM/F12 is needed (F12 is also not listed in the materials list).
      • Page 7. Legend to the figure 1B: „Conditions: Cu(II)=AKH-αR5W4NBD=DapHH-αR5W4NBD=HDapH-αR5W4NBD= 5 μM, DMEM 10%, D/F 100%, 25{degree sign}C, n=3." - „DMEM/F12" ratio equals to „100%" is confusing, please clarify
      • Page 8-9. Legend to the Figure 2A. „Similar observations were obtained with 5 different cell cultures." Same remark goes to the legend to supplementary figure 7 ("Similar observations were obtained with at least 3 different cell cultures"). Do the authors mean independent experiments or different cell lines? Please clarify. If different cell lines, consider including these data into the supplement
      • Page 8-9, figure 2B. Giantin is a cis-golgi marker, which should localize perinuclearly. In the cells shown the signal is diffuse and appears non-specific. Please improve the quality
      • Page 8-9, figure 2B. ATP7A is shown in green. The authors did not specify the secondary antibody has been used for it. If the secondary antibody used for labeling of ATP7A has green fluorescence then how does one distinguish between the transporter signal and signal of the green fluorescent shuttle? Please provide more details
      • Page 9 and Figure 2B. Why did authors use Cu(II)EDTA for the experiment? What was the concentration? Please, add this information as well as Cu(II)GTSM treatment conditions to the experiment description in materials and methods.
      • Figure 2 and supplementary fugure 7. It would be beneficial to have higher magnification images. Please, add them, if possible.
      • Page 11. „In conclusion, the novel Cu(II)-selective peptide shuttles .... capable of instantly preventing ... toxicity on PC12 cells, whereas ... instantly rescue Cu(II)Aβ1-42 toxicity". Authors should be more careful with terminology. According to the materials and methods, the survival assay was carried out after 24h of cells' treatment with the reagents. Effect visible after 24h and „instant rescue" is not the same, Please clarify or modify the wording
      • Page 13, figure 5, panels C and D. In both quantitations Cu(II) was used as one of the control conditions. Why in panel D the percentage of activated microglial cells (second graphs from right) is several fold higher (appr. 150% vs >500%)?
      • Supplementary Figure S3B. The lowest solid line does not correspond to any color in the legend (please, check and correct). However, by the method of exclusion, one may conclude that it refers to Cu(II)+HDapH-shuttle. What could be a potential explanation for stronger quenching of this shuttle by binding Cu(II) directly from the spiked media comparing to when it is pre-complexed with copper (also supported by the panel D)?
      • In discussion the authors mention that the designed shuttles are prone to degradation in 48 hours. In the viability assays, they treat cells for 24 hours, in the fluorescent and confocal microscopy experiments for one hour or less. What is the lifetime of these shuttle peptides in the cells?
      • From the microscopy observations, the mechanism of entry of apo-shuttles (with no Cu(II) in the complex) and in complex with Cu(II) looks quite different. Namely, in figure S7 the fluorescent signal is very strong in the plasma membrane with significantly less vesicular pattern when compared to figure 2A. It is especially apparent for DapHH shuttle at 15 minutes of incubation. Can authors hypothesize/discuss the reason for these differences?
      • Please, show the figures in the supplementary file in the same order as you refer to them.
      • Introduction. Description of the shuttle peptides: „(3) a cell penetrating peptide (CPP), αR5W4, with sequence RRWWRRRWWR, for cell entry35" - one R is the middle is extra.
      • Kd units are missing (pages 2, 3 and 15) and should be added
      • Figure 1A is either not referred at all or mislabeled
      • Page 7, Figure 1B: x axis on the second panel (+Mn+) misses a label
      • Page 8. „Upon addition of DapHH-αR5W4NBD or HDapH-αR5W4NBD, an immediate slow-down in ROS production was observed (Figure 1D and S1E), ..." - mislabeled supplementary figure, please, correct.
      • Page 11. „...but not in the presence of AKH-αR5W4NBD which required pre-incubation to prevent toxicity (Figure 3AFigure)." Please, correct the reference to the figure.
      • Page 11. „This is in line with the faster retrieval ... previously demonstrated in vitro (Figure 1)" - please, specify the panel.
      • Supplementary materials and methods, subsection „Retrieval of Cu by peptide shuttles from Aβ", page 2: „The same was done for 10 μM Cu(II)...to give the estimated 100% saturated emission level." - check the spelling of the shuttle species
      • Supplementary Figure S4. By the behavior of AKH-shuttle in the presence of copper and other metals, it looks that panels are shuffled, i.e. panel C looks corresponding to the panel B with DMEM/F12 conditions, whish is also supported by the values in the Table S1. Please, check and correct, if needed.
      • Supplementary figure S9, panel A. Apparently, mislabeled images with Abeta1-42 and Cu(II)Abeta1-42. Please, correct.

      Significance

      Delivering copper to various cells and tissue to improve cells function or removal excess copper to decrease pathology is an important and timely goal. This work describe new membrane-permeable reagents, "shuttles" with improved intracellular copper release and protective effects in PC12 cells. While, the results are overall interesting, the quality of writing and data presentation needs to be improved.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In the manuscript titled "Next-generation Cu(II) selective peptide shuttles prevent Cu(Aβ)-induced toxicity and microglial activation in organotypic hippocampal slices" the authors have designed and synthesized two novel peptide shuttles that specifically bind to copper in the extracellular medium and transport them into the cells where copper is released and used for the copper-dependent function. The new copper shuttles are based on the previously published copper shuttle reported by the same group. Compared to the older peptide shuttle, which required pre-incubation for an hour in cellular media before adding AscH- to prevent copper(Aβ)-induced toxicity, the new copper shuttles reported in this article do not require pre-incubation. Overall, the manuscript is well written, experiments are controlled, and data are clear. The authors need to clarify some of the issues mentioned below:

      Major Comments:

      1. The data in the paper strongly suggests that the new copper shuttles are selective for copper and have faster binding kinetics (Fig 1) than the previous one. However, the data regarding the copper shuttling from the copper(Aβ) peptides is not very convincing. It appears to be due to the Cu effect alone (Fig.3), as the reduction in viability with Cu(II)+ AscH- is almost the same as the Cu(II)(Aβ)+AscH-. To convincingly show that the peptide shuttle can strip copper from (Aβ) peptides, the authors need to show that the copper is bound to the (Aβ) peptide before it is used in the experiment.

      Minor comments:

      1. The paper does not cite Figure 1A and some supplementary figures, especially Supp. Fig. 1, 2. All the figures and supplementary figures should be cited.
      2. The data presentation in Figures 3B and S8 is confusing."-" signs indicate no addition or the blank box means no addition. Also, the AKH-αR5W4 has no "-" sign in the first bar. For clarity, please indicate the -, +, or no sign means in the figure legends. Also, what does "Batch A" refer to in Figure 3B?
      3. Page 7, correct (Error! Referencesource not found.Figure 1C).
      4. The Giantin staining in Figure 2B is making it hard to visualize ATP7A trafficking. If the Giantin image overlay is removed, it may be easier to see the movement of ATP7A from the perinuclear region to the vesicles.
      5. In the introduction, the authors mention, "These molecules have, however, a major pitfall as is seen for Elesclemol, a candidate for Menkes disease treatments 32. The authors cite reference " Tsvetkov, P. et al. Copper induces cell death by targeting lipoylated TCA cycle proteins." The paper showing elesclomol as a candidate for Menkes disease treatments is Guthrie L et al., Elesclomol alleviates Menkes pathology and mortality by escorting Cu to cuproenzymes in mice. Science. 2020.

      Significance

      General Assessment: This well-written manuscript reports two novel peptide shuttles that specifically bind to copper in the extracellular medium and transport them into the cells where copper is released and available for the copper-dependent function. However, more convincing data is needed to show that the new peptide shuttles can pick copper from the copper bound to the (Aβ) peptides. In addition to their high specificity to copper, these copper shuttles can be tracked in real-time, making them well-suited for mechanistic studies to follow copper importation in cells, providing valuable new research tools to the copper community.

      Advance: The new copper shuttles in this manuscript are based on the previously published copper shuttle reported by the same group. Compared to the older peptide shuttle, which required pre-incubation for an hour in cellular media before adding AscH- to prevent copper(Aβ)-induced toxicity, the new copper shuttles reported in this article do not require pre-incubation and hence have faster binding kinetics.

      Audience: It will attract a broad audience, as the copper shuttles reported in this paper are promising drugs for Alzheimer's disease.

      My expertise: Mitochondria copper biology

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Shi and colleagues report the use of modified Cre lines in which the coding region of Cre is disrupted by rox-STOP-rox or lox-STOP-lox sequences to prevent the expression of functional protein in the absence of Dre or Cre activity, respectively. The main purpose of these tools is to enable intersectional or tamoxifen-induced Cre activity with minimal or no leaky activity from the second, Cre-expressing allele. It is a nice study but lacks some functional data required to determine how useful these alleles will be in practice, especially in comparison with the figure line that stimulated their creation.

      Strengths:

      The new tools can reduce Cre leak in vivo.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Activity of R26-loxCre line. As the authors point out, the greatest value of this approach is to accomplish a more complete Cre-mediated gene deletion using CreER transgenes that are combined with low-efficiency floxed alleles using their R26-loxCre line that is similar to the iSure Cre reported by Benedito and colleagues. The data in Figure 5 show strong activity at the Confetti locus, but the design of the newly reported R26-loxCre line lacks a WPRE sequence that was included in the iSure-Cre line to drive very robust protein expression. Thus while the line appears to have minimal leak, as the design would predict, the question of how much of a deletion increase is obtained over simple use of the CreER transgene alone is a key question for use by investigators. This is further addressed in Figure 6 where it is compared with Alb-CreER alone to recombine the Ctnnb1 floxed allele. They demonstrate that recombination frequency is clearly improved, but the western blot in Figure 6E does not look like there was a large amount of remaining b-catenin to remove. These data are certainly promising, but the most valuable experiment for such a new tool would be a head-to-head comparison with iSure (or the latest iSure version from the Benedito lab) using the same CreER and target floxed allele. At the very least a comparision of Cre protein expression between the two lines using identical CreER activators is needed.

      (2) In vivo analysis of mCre activities. Why did the authors not use the same driver to compare mCre 1, 4, 7, and 10? The study in Figure 2 uses Alb-roxCre for 1 and 7 and Cdh5-roxCre for 4 and 10, with clearly different levels of activity driven by the two alleles in vivo. Thus whether mCre1 is really better than mCre4 or 10 is not clear.

      (3) Technical details are lacking. The authors provide little specific information regarding the precise way that the new alleles were generated, i.e. exactly what nucleotide sites were used and what the sequence of the introduced transgenes is. Such valuable information must be gleaned from schematic diagrams that are insufficient to fully explain the approach.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors are interested in the relative importance of PRL versus GH and their interactive signaling in breast cancer. After examining GHR-PRLR interactions in response to ligands, they suggest that a reduction in cell surface GHR in response to PRL may be a mechanism whereby PRL can sometimes be protective against breast cancer.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of the study include the interesting question being addressed and the application of multiple complementary techniques, including dSTORM, which is technically very challenging, especially when using double labeling. Thus, dSTORM is used to analyze co-clustering of GHR and PRLR, and, in response to PRL, rapid internalization of GHR and increased cell surface PRLR. Conclusions from Proximity ligation assays are that some GHR and PRLR are within 40 nm (≈ 4 plasma membranes) of each other and that upon ligand stimulation, they move apart. Intact receptor knockin and knockout approaches and receptor constructs without the Jak2 binding domain demonstrate a) a requirement for the PRLR for there to be PRL- driven internalization of GHR, and b) that Jak2-PRLR interactions are necessary for stability of the GHR-PRLR colocalizations.

      Weaknesses:

      Although improved over the first version, the manuscript still suffers from a lack of detail, which in places makes it difficult to evaluate the data and would make it very difficult for the results to be replicated by others.

      Comments on revised version:

      Points for improvement of the manuscript:

      (1) There is still insufficient detail about the proximity ligation assay. For example, PLAs that use reagents from Sigma (as now reported) require primary antibodies from two different species and yet both the anti-PRLR and anti-GHR used for dSTORM were mouse monoclonals. On line 356 it says that the ECD antibodies were used for microscopy and the PLA is microscopy. Were instead the ICD antibodies used for the PLA? If so, how do we know that one or more of the proteins in the very strong "non-specific" bands seen on Figure 5A are not what is being localized? Could you do a Western blot of just cell membrane proteins? There needs to be further clarity/explanation.

      (2) Although the manuscript now shows a Western blot using the antibodies against intracellular regions of the receptor, a full Western blot is not provided for the antibodies against the S2 extracellular domain used for the dSTORM. While I haven't checked the papers showing characterization of the anti-GHR, I did re-check reference 70, which the authors say shows full characterization of the PRLR antibody, and this does not show a full Western (only portions of gels). How do we know that this antibody is not recognizing some other cell surface molecule, the surface expression of which increases upon stimulation of the cells with PRL? Is there only one band when blotting whole cell extracts with either the GHR or PRLR ECD antibodies so we can be sure of specificity? Figure S2 helps some, but these are different cells and the relative expression of the PRLR versus some other potential cell surface protein in these engineered cells may well be completely different.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      (1) The questions after reading this manuscript are what novel insights have been gained that significantly go beyond what was already known about the interaction of these receptors and, more importantly, what are the physiological implications of these findings? The proposed significance of the results in the last paragraph of the Discussion section is speculative since none of the receptor interactions have been investigated in TNBC cell lines. Moreover, no physiological experiments were conducted using the PRLR and GH knockout T47D cells to provide biological relevance for the receptor heteromers. The proposed role of JAK2 in the cell surface distribution and association of both receptors as stated in the title was only derived from the analysis of box 1 domain receptor mutants. A knockout of JAK2 was not conducted to assess heteromers formation.

      We thank the reviewer for these comments. The novel insight is that two different cytokine receptors can interact in an asymmetric, ligand-dependent manner, such that one receptor regulates the other receptor’s surface availability, mediated by JAK2. To our knowledge this has not been reported before. Beyond our observations, there is the question if this could be a much more common regulatory mechanism and if it has therapeutic relevance. However, answering these questions is beyond the scope of this work.

      Along the same line, the question regarding the biological relevance of our receptor heteromers and JAK2’s role in cell surface distribution is undoubtfully very important. Studying GHR-PRLR cell surface distributions in JAK2 knockout cells and certain TNBC cell lines as proposed by the reviewer could perhaps be insightful. However, most TNBCs down-regulate PRLR [1], so we would first have to identify TNBC cell lines that actually express PRLR at sufficiently high levels. Moreover, knocking out JAK2 is known to significantly reduce GHR surface availability [2,3], such that the proposed experiment would probably provide only limited insights.

      Unfortunately, our team is currently not in the position to perform any experiments (due to lack of funding and shortage of personnel). However, to address the reviewer’s comment as much as possible, we have revised the respective paragraph of the discussion section to emphasize the speculative nature of our statement and have added another paragraph discussing shortcoming and future experiments (see revised manuscript, pages 23-24).

      (1) López-Ozuna, V., Hachim, I., Hachim, M. et al. Prolactin Pro-Differentiation Pathway in Triple Negative Breast Cancer: Impact on Prognosis and Potential Therapy. Sci Rep 6, 30934 (2016). https://www.nature.com/articles/srep30934

      (2) He, K., Wang, X., Jiang, J., Guan, R., Bernstein, K.E., Sayeski, P.P., Frank, S.J. Janus kinase 2 determinants for growth hormone receptor association, surface assembly, and signaling. Mol Endocrinol. 2003;17(11):2211-27. doi: 10.1210/me.2003-0256. PMID: 12920237.

      (3) He, K., Loesch, K., Cowan, J.W., Li, X., Deng, L., Wang, X., Jiang, J., Frank, S.J. Janus Kinase 2 Enhances the Stability of the Mature Growth Hormone Receptor, Endocrinology, Volume 146, Issue 11, 2005, Pages 4755–4765,https://doi.org/10.1210/en.2005-0514

      (2) Except for some investigation of γ2A-JAK2 cells, most of the experiments in this study were conducted on a single breast cancer cell line. In terms of rigor and reproducibility, this is somewhat borderline. The CRISPR/Cas9 mutant T47D cells were not used for rescue experiments with the corresponding full-length receptors and the box1 mutants. A missed opportunity is the lack of an investigation correlating the number of receptors with physiological changes upon ligand stimulation (e.g., cellular clustering, proliferation, downstream signaling strength).

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comments. While we are confident in the reproducibility of our findings, including those obtained in the T47D cell line, we acknowledge that testing in additional cell lines would have strengthened the generalizability of our results. We also recognize that performing a rescue experiment using our T47D hPRLR or hGHR KO cells would have been valuable. Furthermore, examining physiological changes, such as proliferation rates and downstream signaling responses, would have provided additional insights. Unfortunately, these experiments were not conducted at the time, and we currently lack the resources to carry them out.

      (3) An obvious shortcoming of the study that was not discussed seems to be that the main methodology used in this study (super-resolution microscopy) does not distinguish the presence of various isoforms of the PRLR on the cell surface. Is it possible that the ligand stimulation changes the ratio between different isoforms? Which isoforms besides the long form may be involved in heteromers formation, presumably all that can bind JAK2?

      This is a very good point. We fully agree with the reviewer that a discussion of the results in the light of different PRLR isoforms is appropriate. We have added information on PRLR isoforms to the Introduction (see revised manuscript, page 2) and Discussion sections (see revised manuscript, pages 23-24).

      (4) Changes in the ligand-inducible activation of JAK2 and STAT5 were not investigated in the T47D knockout models for the PRL and GHR. It is also a missed opportunity to use super-resolution microscopy as a validation tool for the knockouts on the single cell level and how it might affect the distribution of the corresponding other receptor that is still expressed.

      We thank the reviewer for his comment. We fully agree that such additional experiments could be very valuable. We are sorry but, as already mentioned above, this is not something we are able to address at this stage due to lack of personnel and funding. However, we do hope to address these and other proposed experiments in the future.

      (5) Why does the binding of PRL not cause a similar decrease (internalization and downregulation) of the PRLR, and instead, an increase in cell surface localization? This seems to be contrary to previous observations in MCF-7 cells (J Biol Chem. 2005 October 7; 280(40): 33909-33916).

      It has been recently reported for GHR that not only JAK2 but also LYN binds to the box1-box2 region, creating competition that results in divergent signaling cascades and affects GHR nanoclustering [1]. So, it is reasonable to assume that similar mechanisms may be at work that regulate PRLR cell surface availability. Differences in cells’ expression of such kinases could perhaps play a role in the perceived inconsistency. Also, Lu et al. [2] studied the downregulation of the long PRLR isoform in response to PRL. All other PRLR isoforms were not detectable in MCF-7 cells. So, differences between MCF-7 and T47D may lead to this perceived contradiction.

      At this stage, we can only speculate about the actual reasons for these seemingly contradictory results. However, for full transparency, we are now mentioning this apparent contradiction in the Discussion section (see page 23) and have added the references below.

      (1) Chhabra, Y., Seiffert, P., Gormal, R.S., et al. Tyrosine kinases compete for growth hormone receptor binding and regulate receptor mobility and degradation. Cell Rep. 2023;42(5):112490. doi: 10.1016/j.celrep.2023.112490. PMID: 37163374.

      https://www.cell.com/cell-reports/pdf/S2211-1247(23)00501-6.pdf

      (2) Lu, J.C., Piazza, T.M., Schuler, L.A. Proteasomes mediate prolactin-induced receptor down-regulation and fragment generation in breast cancer cells. J Biol Chem. 2005 Oct 7;280(40):33909-16. doi: 10.1074/jbc.M508118200. PMID: 16103113; PMCID: PMC1976473.

      (6) Some figures and illustrations are of poor quality and were put together without paying attention to detail. For example, in Fig 5A, the GHR was cut off, possibly to omit other nonspecific bands, the WB images look 'washed out'. 5B, 5D: the labels are not in one line over the bars, and what is the point of showing all individual data points when the bar graphs with all annotations and SD lines are disappearing? As done for the y2A cells, the illustrations in 5B-5E should indicate what cell lines were used. No loading controls in Fig 5F, is there any protein in the first lane? No loading controls in Fig 6B and 6H.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have amended Fig. 5A to now show larger crops of the two GHR and PRLR Western Blot images and thus a greater range of proteins present in the extracts. Please note that the bands in the WBs other than what is identified as GHR and PRLR are non-specific and reflect roughly equivalent loading of protein in each lane.

      We also made some changes to Figures 5B-5E.

      (7) The proximity ligation method was not described in the M&M section of the manuscript.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have added a description of the PL method to the Methods section.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the Authors):

      A final suggestion for future investigations: Instead of focusing on the heteromer formation of the GHR/PRLR which both signal all through the same downstream effectors (JAK2, STAT5), it would have been more cancer-relevant, and perhaps even more interesting, to look for heteromers between the PRLR and receptors of the IL-6 family since it had been shown that PRL can stimulate STAT3, which is a unique feature of cancer cells. If that is the case, this would require a different modality of the interaction between different JAK kinases.

      We highly appreciate the reviewer’s recommendation and hope to follow up on it in the near future.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      (1) I could not fully evaluate some of the data, mainly because several details on acquisition and analysis are lacking. It would be useful to know what the background signal was in dSTORM and how the authors distinguished the specific signal from unspecific background fluorescence, which can be quite prominent in these experiments. Typically, one would evaluate the signal coming from antibodies randomly bound to a substrate around the cells to determine the switching properties of the dyes in their buffer and the average number of localisations representing one antibody. This would help evaluate if GHR or PRLR appeared as monomers or multimers in the plasma membrane before stimulation, which is currently a matter of debate. It would also provide better support for the model proposed in Figure 8.

      We are grateful for the reviewer’s comment. In our experience, the background signal is more relevant in dSTORM when imaging proteins that are located at deeper depths (> 3 μm) above the coverslip surface. In our experiments, cells are attached to the coverslip surface and the proteins being imaged are on the cell membrane. In addition, we employed dSTORM’s TIRF (total internal reflection fluorescence) microscopy mode to image membrane receptor proteins. TIRFM exploits the unique properties of an induced evanescent field in a limited specimen region immediately adjacent to the interface between two media having different refractive indices. It thereby dramatically reduces background by rejecting fluorescence from out-of-focus areas in the detection path and illuminating only the area right near the surface.

      Having said that, a few other sources such as auto-fluorescence, scattering, and non-bleached fluorescent molecules close to and distant from the focal plane can contribute to the background signal. We tried to reduce auto-fluorescence by ensuring that cells are grown in phenol-red-free media, imaging is performed in STORM buffer which reduces autofluorescence, and our immunostaining protocol includes a quenching step aside from using blocking buffer with different serum, in addition to BSA. Moreover, we employed extensive washing steps following antibody incubations to eliminate non-specifically bound antibodies. Ensuring that the TIRF illumination field is uniform helps reduce scatter. Additionally, an extended bleach step prior to the acquisition of frames to determine localizations helped further reduce the probability of non-bleached fluorescent molecules.

      In short, due to the experimental design we do not expect much background. However, in the future, we will address this concern and estimate background in a subtype dependent manner. To this end we will distinguish two types of background noise: (A) background with a small change between subsequent frames, which mainly consists of auto-fluorescence and non-bleached out-of-focus fluorescent molecules; and (B) background that changes every imaging frame, which is mainly from non-bleached fluorescent molecules near the focal plane. For type (A) background, temporal filters must be used for background estimation [1]; for type (B) background, low-pass filters (e.g., wavelet transform) should be used for background estimation [2].

      (1) Hoogendoorn, Crosby, Leyton-Puig, Breedijk, Jalink, Gadella, and Postma (2014). The fidelity of stochastic single-molecule super-resolution reconstructions critically depends upon robust background estimation. Scientific reports, 4, 3854. https://doi.org/10.1038/srep03854

      (2) Patel, Williamson, Owen, and Cohen (2021). Blinking statistics and molecular counting in direct stochastic reconstruction microscopy (dSTORM). Bioinformatics, Volume 37, Issue 17, September 2021, Pages 2730–2737, https://doi.org/10.1093/bioinformatics/btab136

      (2) Since many of the findings in this work come from the evaluation of localisation clusters, an image showing actual localisations would help support the main conclusions. I believe that the dSTORM images in Figures 1 and 2 are density maps, although this was not explicitly stated. Alexa 568 and Alexa 647 typically give a very different number of localisations, and this is also dependent on the concentration of BME. Did the authors take that into account when interpreting the results and creating the model in Figures 2 and 8?

      I believe that including this information is important as findings in this paper heavily rely on the number of localisations detected under different conditions.

      Including information on proximity labelling and CRISPR/Cas9 in the methods section would help with the reproducibility of these findings by other groups.

      Figures 1 and 2 show Gaussian interpolations of actual localizations, not density maps. Imaging captured the fluorophores’ blinking events and localizations were counted as true localizations, when at least 5 consecutive blinking events had been observed. Nikon software was used for Gaussian fitting. In other words, we show reconstructed images based on identifying true localizations using gaussian fitting and some strict parameters to identify true fluorophore blinking. This allowed us to identify true localizations with high confidence and generate a high-resolution image for membrane receptors.

      Indeed, Alexa 568 and 647 give different numbers of localization. This is dependent on the intrinsic photo-physics of the fluorophores. Specifically, each fluorophore has a different duty cycle, switching cycle, and survival fraction. However, we note that we focused on capturing the relative changes in receptor numbers over time, before and after stimulation by ligands, not the absolute numbers of surface GHR and PRLR. We are not comparing the absolute numbers of localizations or drawing comparisons for localization numbers between 568 and 647. For all these different conditions/times, the photo-physics for a particular fluorophore remains the same. This allows us to make relative comparisons.

      As far as the effect of BME is concerned, the concentration of mercaptoethanol needs to be carefully optimized, as too high a concentration can potentially quench the fluorescence or affect the overall stability of the sample. However, we are using an optimized concentration which has been previously validated across multiple STORM experiments. This makes the concerns relating to the concentration of BME irrelevant to the current experimental design. Besides, the concentration of BME is maintained across all experimental conditions.

      We have added information regarding PL and CRISPR/Cas9 for generating hGHR KO and hPRLR KO cells in two new subsections to the Methods section.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      In the methods please include:<br /> (1) A section with details on proximity ligation assays.

      We have added a description of the PL method to the Methods section.

      (2) A section on CRISPR/Cas9 technology.

      We have added two new sections on “Generating hGHR knockout and hPRLR knockout T47D cells” and “Design of sgRNAs for hGHR  or hPRLR knockout” to the Methods section.

      (3) List the precise composition of the buffer or cite the paper that you followed.

      We used the buffer recipe described in this protocol [1] and have added the components with concentrations as well as the following reference to the manuscript.

      (1) Beggs, R.R., Dean, W.F., Mattheyses, A.L. (2020). dSTORM Imaging and Analysis of Desmosome Architecture. In: Turksen, K. (eds) Permeability Barrier. Methods in Molecular Biology, vol 2367. Humana, New York, NY. https://doi.org/10.1007/7651_2020_325

      (4) Exposure time used for image acquisition to put 40 000 frames in the context of total imaging time and clarify why you decided to take 40 000 images per channel.

      Our Nikon Ti2 N-STORM microscope is equipped with an iXon DU-897 Ultra EMCCD camera from Andor (Oxford Instruments). According to the camera’s manufacturer, this camera platform uses a back-illuminated 512 x 512 frame transfer sensor and overclocks readout to 17 MHz, pushing speed performance to 56 fps (in full frame mode). We note that we always tried to acquire STORM images at the maximal frame rate. As for the exposure time, according to the manufacturer it can be as short as 17.8 ms. We would like to emphasize that we did not specify/alter the exposure time.

      See also: https://andor.oxinst.com/assets/uploads/products/andor/documents/andor-ixon-ultra-emccd-specifications.pdf

      The decision to take 40,000 images per frame was based on our intention to identify the true population of the molecules of interest that are localized and accurately represented in the final reconstruction image. The total number of frames depends on the sample complexity, density of sample labeling and desired resolution. We tested a range of frames between 20,000 and 60,000 and found for our experimental design and output requirements that 40,000 frames provided the best balance between achieving maximal resolution and desired localizations to make consistent and accurate localization estimates across different stimulation conditions compared to basal controls.

      (5) The lasers used to switch Alexa 568 and Alexa 647. Were you alternating between the lasers for switching and imaging of dyes? Intermittent and continuous illumination will produce very different unspecific background fluorescence.

      Yes, we used an alternating approach for the lasers exciting Alexa 647 and Alexa 568, for both switching and imaging of the dyes.

      (6) A paragraph with a detailed description of methods used to differentiate the background fluorescence from the signal.

      We have addressed the background fluorescence under Point 1 (Public Review). We have added a paragraph in the Methods section on this issue.

      (7) Minor corrections to the text:

      It appears as though there is a large difference in the expression level of GHR and PRLR in basal conditions in Figure 1. This can be due to the switching properties of the dyes, which is related to the amount of BME in the buffer, or it can be because there is indeed more PRL. Would the authors be able to comment on this?

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestions. According to expression data available online there is indeed more PRLR than GHR in T47D cells. According to CellMiner [1], T47D cells have an RNA-Seq gene expression level log2(FPKM + 1) of 6.814 for PRLR, and 3.587 for GHR, strongly suggesting that there is more PRLR than GHR in basal conditions, matching the reviewer’s interpretation of our images in Fig. 1 (basal). However, we would advise against using STORM images for direct comparisons of receptor expression. First, with TIRF images, we are only looking at the membrane fraction (~150 nm close to the coverslip membrane interface) that is attached to the coverslip. Secondly, as discussed above, our data represent relative cell surface receptor levels that allow for comparison of different conditions (basal vs. stimulation) and does not represent absolute quantifications. Everything is relative and in comparison to controls.

      Also, BME is not going to change the level of expression. The differences in growth factor expression as estimated by relative comparison can be attributed to the actual changes in growth factors and is not an artifact of the amount of BME in the buffer or the properties of dyes. These factors are maintained across all experimental conditions and do not influence the final outcome.

      (1) https://discover.nci.nih.gov/cellminer/

      (8) I would encourage the authors to use unspecific binding to characterize the signal coming from single antibodies bound to the substrate. This would provide a mean number of localizations that a single antibody generates. With this information, one can evaluate how many receptors there are per cluster, which would strengthen the findings and potentially provide additional support for the model presented in Figure 8. It would also explain why the distributions of localisations per cluster in Fig. 3B look very different for hGHR and hPRLR. As the authors point out in the discussion, the results on predimerization of these receptors in basal conditions are conflicting and therefore it is important to shed more light on this topic.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestions. While we are unable to perform this experiment at this stage, we will keep it in mind for future experiments.

      (9) Minor corrections to the figures:

      Figure 1:

      In the legend, please say what representation was used. Are these density maps or another representation? Please provide examples of actual localisations (either as dots or crosses representing the peaks of the Gaussians). Most findings of this work rely on the characterisation of the clusters of localisations and therefore it is of essence to show what the clusters look like. This could potentially go to the supplemental info to minimise additional work. It's very hard to see the puncta in this figure.

      If the authors created zoomed regions in each of the images (as in Figure 3), it would be much easier to evaluate the expression level and the extent of colocalisation. Halfway through GHR 3 min green pixels become grey, but this may be the issue with the document that was created. Please check. Either increase the font on the scale bars in this figure or delete it.

      As described above, Figure 1 does not show density maps. Imaging captured the fluorophores’ blinking events and localizations were counted as true localizations, when at least 5 consecutive blinking events had been observed. Nikon software was used for Gaussian fitting and smoothing.

      We have generated zoomed regions. In our files (original as well as pdf) we do not see pixels become grey. We increased the font size above one of the scale bars and removed all others.

      Figure 3:

      In A, the GHR clusters are colour coded but PRLR are not. Are both DBSCN images? Explain the meaning of colour coding or show it as black and white. Was brightness also increased in the PRLR image? The font on the scale bars is too small. In B, right panels, the font on the axes is too small. In the figure legend explain the meaning of 33.3 and 16.7

      In our document, both GHR and PRLR are color coded but the hGHR clusters are certainly bigger and therefore appear brighter than the hPRLR clusters. Both are DBSCAN images. The color coding allows to distinguish different clusters (there is no other meaning). We have kept the color-coding but have added a sentence to the caption addressing this. Brightness was increased in both images of Panel B equally. 33.3 and 16.7 are the median cluster sizes. We have added a sentence to the caption explaining this. We have increased the font on the axes in B (right panels).

      Figure 4:

      I struggled to see any colocalization in the 2nd and the 3rd image. Please show zoomed-in sections. In the panels B and C, the data are presented as fractions. Is this per cell? My interpretation is that ~80% of PRL clusters also contain GHR.

      Is this in agreement with Figures 1 and 2? In Figure 1, PRL 3 min, Merge, colocalization seems much smaller. Could the authors give the total numbers of GHR and PRLR from which the fractions were calculated at least in basal conditions?

      We have provided zoom-in views. As for panels B and C, fractions are number of clusters containing both receptors divided by the total number of clusters. We used the same strategy that we had used for calculating the localization changes: We randomly selected 4 ROIs (regions of interest) per cell to calculate fractions and then calculated the average of three different cells from independently repeated experiments. We did not calculate total numbers of GHR/PRLR. The numbers are fractions of cluster numbers.

      Moreover, the reviewer interprets results in panels B and C that ~80% of PRLR clusters also contain GHR. We assume the reviewer refers to Basal state. Now, the reviewer’s interpretation is not correct for the following reason: ~80% of clusters have both receptors. How many of the remaining (~20%) clusters have only PRLR or only GHR is not revealed in the panels. Only if 100% of clusters have PRLR, we can conclude that 80% of PRLR clusters also contain GHR.

      Also, while Figures 1 and 2 show localization based on dSTORM images, Figure 3 indicates and quantifies co-localization based on proximity ligation assays following DBSCAN analysis using Clus-DoC. We do not think that the results are directly comparable.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      (1) The manuscript suffers from a lack of detail, which in places makes it difficult to evaluate the data and would make it very difficult for the results to be replicated by others. In addition, the manuscript would very much benefit from a full discussion of the limitations of the study. For example, the manuscript is written as if there is only one form of the PRLR while the anti-PRLR antibody used for dSTORM would also recognize the intermediate form and short forms 1a and 1b on the T47D cells. Given the very different roles of these other PRLR forms in breast cancer (Dufau, Vonderhaar, Clevenger, Walker and other labs), this limitation should at the very least be discussed. Similarly, the manuscript is written as if Jak2 essentially only signals through STAT5 but Jak2 is involved in multiple other signaling pathways from the multiple PRLRs, including the long form. Also, while there are papers suggesting that PRL can be protective in breast cancer, the majority of publications in this area find that PRL promotes breast cancer. How then would the authors interpret the effect of PRL on GHR in light of all those non-protective results? [Check papers by Hallgeir Rui]

      We thank the reviewer for such thoughtful comments. We have added a paragraph in the Discussion section on the limitations of our study, including sole focus on T47D and γ2A-JAK2 cells and lack of PRLR isoform-specific data. Also, we are now mentioning that these isoforms play different roles in breast cancer, citing papers by Dufau, Vonderhaar, Clevenger, and Walker labs.

      We did not mean to imply that JAK2 signals only via STAT5 or by only binding the long form. We have made this point clear in the Introduction as well as in our revised Discussion section. Moreover, we have added information and references on JAK2 signaling and PRLR isoform specific signaling.

      In our Discussions section we are also mentioning the findings that PRL is promoting breast cancer. We would like to point out that it is well perceivable that PRL is protective in BC by reducing surface hGHR availability but that this effect may depend on JAK2 levels as well as on expression levels of other kinases that competitively bind Box1 and/or Box2 [1]. Besides, could it not be that PRL’s effect is BC stage dependent? In any case, we have emphasized the speculative nature of our statement.

      (1) Chhabra, Y., Seiffert, P., Gormal, R.S., et al. Tyrosine kinases compete for growth hormone receptor binding and regulate receptor mobility and degradation. Cell Rep. 2023;42(5):112490. doi: 10.1016/j.celrep.2023.112490. PMID: 37163374.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Points for improvement of the manuscript:

      (1) Method details -

      a) "we utilized CRISPR/Cas9 to generate hPRLR knockout T47D cells ......" Exactly how? Nothing is said under methods. Can we be sure that you knocked out the whole gene?

      We have addressed this point by adding two new sections on “Generating hGHR knockout and hPRLR knockout T47D cells” and “Design of sgRNAs for hGHR or hPRLR knockout” to the Methods section.

      b) Some of the Western blots are missing mol wt markers. How specific are the various antibodies used for Westerns? For example, the previous publications are quoted as providing characterization of the antibodies also seem to use just band cutouts and do not show the full molecular weight range of whole cell extracts blotted. Anti-PRLR antibodies are notoriously bad and so this is important.

      There is an antibody referred to in Figure 5 that is not listed under "antibodies" in the methods.

      We have modified Figure 5a, showing the entire gel as well as molecular weight markers. As for specificity of our antibodies, we used monoclonal antibodies Anti-GHR-ext-mAB 74.3 and Anti-PRLR-ext-mAB 1.48, which have been previously tested and used. In addition, we did our own control experiments to ensure specificity. We have added some of our many control results as Supplementary Figures S2 and S3.

      We thank the reviewer for noticing the missing antibody in the Methods section. We have now added information about this antibody.

      c) There is no description of the proximity ligation assay.

      We have addressed this by adding a paragraph on PLA in the Methods section.

      d) What is the level of expression of GHR, PRLR, and Jak2 in the gamma2A-JAK2 cells compared to the T47D cells? Artifacts of overexpression are always a worry.

      γ2A-JAK2 cell series are over-expressing the receptors. That’s the reason we did not only rely on the observation in γ2A-JAK2 cell lines but also did the experiment in T47D cell lines.

      e) There are no concentrations given for components of the dSTORM imaging buffer. On line 380, I think the authors mean alternating lasers not alternatively.

      Thank you. Indeed, we meant alternating lasers. We are referring to [1] (the protocol we followed) for information on the imaging buffer.

      (1) Beggs, R.R., Dean, W.F., Mattheyses, A.L. (2020). dSTORM Imaging and Analysis of Desmosome Architecture. In: Turksen, K. (eds) Permeability Barrier. Methods in Molecular Biology, vol 2367. Humana, New York, NY. https://doi.org/10.1007/7651_2020_325

      f) In general, a read-through to determine whether there is enough detail for others to replicate is required. 4% PFA in what? Do you mean PBS or should it be Dulbecco's PBS etc., etc.?

      We prepared a 4% PFA in PBS solution. We mean Dulbecco's PBS.

      (2) There are no controls shown or described for the dSTORM. For example, non-specific primary antibody and second antibodies alone for non-specific sticking. Do the second antibodies cross-react with the other primary antibody? Is there only one band when blotting whole cell extracts with the GHR antibody so we can be sure of specificity?

      We used monoclonal antibodies Anti-GHR-ext-mAB 74.3 and Anti-PRLR-ext-mAB 1.48 (but also tested several other antibodies). While these antibodies have been previously tested and used, we performed additional control experiments to ensure specificity of our primary antibodies and absence of non-specific binding of our secondary antibodies. We have added some of our many control results as Supplementary Figures S2 and S3.

      (3) Writing/figures-

      a) As discussed in the public review regarding different forms of the PRLR and the presence of other Jak2-dependent signaling

      We have added paragraphs on PRLR isoforms and other JAK2-dependent signaling pathways to the Introduction. Also, we have added a paragraph on PRLR isoforms (in the context of our findings) to the Discussion section.

      b) What are the units for figure 3c and d?

      The figures show numbers of localizations (obtained from fluorophore blinking events). In the figure caption to 3C and 3D, we have specified the unit (i.e. counts).

      c) The wheat germ agglutinin stains more than the plasma membrane and so this sentence needs some adjustment.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. We have rephrased this sentence (see caption to Fig. 4).

      d) It might be better not to use the term "downregulation" since this is usually associated with expression and not internalization.

      While we understand the reviewer’s discomfort with the use of the word “downregulation”, we still think that it best describes the observed effect. Moreover, we would like to note that in the field of receptorology “downregulation” is a specific term for trafficking of cell surface receptors in response to ligands. That said, to address the reviewer’s comment, we are now using the terms “cell surface downregulation” or “downregulation of cell surface [..] receptor” throughout the manuscript in order to explicitly distinguish it from gene downregulation.

      e) Line 420 talks about "previous work", a term that usually indicates work from the same lab. My apologies if I am wrong, but the reference doesn't seem to be associated with the authors.

      At the end of the sentence containing the phrase “previous work”, we are referring to reference [57], which has Dr. Stuart Frank as senior and corresponding author. Dr. Frank is also a co-corresponding author on this manuscript. While in our opinion, “previous work” does not imply some sort of ownership, we are happy to confirm that one of us was responsible for the work we are referencing.

      Reviewing Editor's recommendations:

      The reviewers have all provided a very constructive assessment of the work and offered many useful suggestions to improve the manuscript. I'd advise thinking carefully about how many of these can be reasonably addressed. Most will not require further experiments. I consider it essential to improve the methods to ensure others could repeat the work. This includes adding methods for the PLA and including detail about the controls for the dSTORM. The reviewers have offered suggestions about types of controls to include if these have not already been done.

      We thank the editor for their recommendations. We have revised the methods section, which now includes a paragraph on PLA as well as on CRISPR/Cas9-based generation of mutant cell lines. We have also added information on the dSTORM buffer to the manuscript. Data of controls indicating antibody specificity (using confocal microscopy) have been added to the manuscript’s supplementary material (see Fig. S2 and S3).

      I agree with the reviewers that the different isoforms of the prolactin receptor need to be considered. I think this could be done as an acknowledgment and point of discussion.

      We have revised the discussions section and have added a paragraph on the different PRLR isoforms, among others.

      For Figure 2E, make it clear in the figure (or at least in legend) that the middle line is the basal condition.

      We thank the editor for their comment. We have made changes to Fig 2E and have added a sentence to the legend making it clear that the middle depicts the basal condition.

      My biggest concern overall was the fact that this is all largely conducted in a single cell line. This was echoed by at least one of the reviewers. I wonder if you have replicated this in other breast cancer cell lines or mammary epithelial cells? I don't think this is necessary for the current manuscript but would increase confidence if available.

      We thank the editor for their comment and fully agree with their assessment. Unfortunately, we have not replicated these experiments in other BC cell lines nor mammary epithelial cells but would certainly want to do so in the near future.

    1. Briefing Document : Analyse des Thèmes Clés de l'Entretien avec Philippe Meirieu Source : Excerpts de l'entretien "Echange avec...Philippe Meirieu"

      Date : 2025

      Introduction :

      Cet entretien avec Philippe Meirieu, figure importante de la pédagogie en France, offre une analyse critique du système éducatif actuel et propose des pistes de réflexion pour son amélioration.

      En s'appuyant sur son expérience personnelle d'enseignant et de chercheur, Meirieu aborde des thèmes fondamentaux tels que le sens de l'école, la formation des enseignants, la place de la culture, le rapport au savoir, les enjeux démocratiques, la question de la norme, le recrutement des enseignants et la nécessité d'un continuum éducatif.

      Ce document synthétise les principaux thèmes et idées exprimés, en incluant des citations significatives de l'entretien.

      Thèmes et Idées Principales :

      1. La Genèse d'une Réflexion Pédagogique à Partir des Difficultés du Terrain :

      Meirieu ancre sa réflexion dans ses expériences शुरुआती d'enseignant, confronté aux résistances des élèves et à la complexité de la transmission du savoir.

      Cette confrontation l'a conduit à une démarche de "enseignant chercheur" :

      "moi si j'avais à à décrire mon histoire je partirai de mes premières expériences de d'enseignant de professeur moi j'ai commencé comme professeur de philo ensuite j'ai été untite ensuite j'étais prof de collège et chaque fois je me suis trouvé face à un certain nombre de difficultés je me suis trouvé face à des élèves qui résistaient face à des élèves qui avaient pas nécessairement envie d'apprendre ce que je leur enseignais au moment où je leur enseignais et et je me suis construit au sens propre du terme comme un enseignant chercheur c'est-à-dire comme quelqu'un qui va chercher de quoi résoudre les questions qui se posent à lui dans la pratique voilà"

      Il souligne l'importance de considérer la résistance des élèves comme un moteur de compréhension et d'amélioration de l'enseignement, à l'image de la résistance électrique qui produit de la lumière.

      "investiguer la résistance des autres à mon enseignement moi je dis toujours c'est une image un peu facile peut-être mais que la résistance il faut prendre ce terme au sens quasiment de l'ampoule électrique dans l'ampoule électrique il y a une résistance cette résistance empêche de passer le courant mais aussiel est clair et moi ce qui m'a aidé à travailler à chercher c'est mes difficultés c'est mes difficultés quotidiennes et c'est à partir de mes difficultés que j'ai construit mon travail"

      2. La Perte de Cap et de Finalités dans le Système Éducatif Actuel :

      Meirieu déplore un manque de vision claire et de finalités politiques fortes pour l'école, comparant les réformes actuelles à une réparation constante de la "machine" sans se soucier de sa destination. Il cite Jean Zay et Alain Savary comme des ministres ayant su impulser des perspectives globales.

      "ce que je trouve de dommage aujourd'hui c'est que on répare en permanence la machine comme on dirions-nous on est en permanence à à raccorder des tuyaux on est dans dans la cale du paquebo à à regarder si on peut pas améliorer la rentabilité de tel ou tel système sans se demander où va le paquebo [...] il semble que les grands ministres de l'éducation sont ceux qui ont su certes rentrer dans la machine mais aussi donner des perspectives donner des axes fort ce qu'a fait Jané ce qu'a fait ensuite quelqu'un comme Alain Savari"

      Il insiste sur la nécessité pour les dirigeants de définir clairement les fondements et les finalités du système éducatif.

      3. La Pauvreté du Débat Public sur l'Éducation :

      Meirieu critique la superficialité du débat actuel, souvent réduit à des slogans et à des mesures ponctuelles (uniforme, résultats PISA, restauration de l'autorité) sans aborder les questions de fond.

      Il regrette l'absence de débat intelligent sur les enjeux éducatifs, illustrée par le traitement réducteur de la question du numérique et des écrans.

      "moi d'abord je suis frappé par l'extrême pauvreté du débat sur l'éducation en France une pauvreté qui est absolument indigne d'un pays comme la France qui a une histoire sur le plan éducatif qui est une histoire fantastique formidable [...] et je trouve que au regard de cette histoire on parle un peu de l'uniforme de temps en temps comme ça sous forme d'une bouffée médiatique on parle parfois des résultats de PISA on parle un peu de la restauration de l'autorité mais tout ça me semble relever plutôt de l'écume des slogans et et ne pas réellement mettre en débat en débat public en débat intelligent ces questions de l'éducation"

      Il propose d'organiser une convention citoyenne pour relancer un débat de fond et souligne la nécessité d'intégrer l'histoire de la pensée éducative dans la formation des enseignants.

      "je crois qu'une convention citoyenne serait bien adaptée à condition que évidemment on tienne compte de ce qu'elle dit on tient compte de ses de ses préconisations oui bien sûr je je suis convaincu que dans la formation initiale et continue des enseignants il faudrait introduire toute une histoire et une acculturation au débat sur l'école et sur l'éducation"

      4. Les Nouveaux Défis Éducatifs Face aux Évolutions Sociétales :

      Meirieu met en lumière les défis inédits auxquels l'éducation est confrontée, tels que la menace sur la démocratie, la remise en cause de la notion de vérité (fake news), et la nécessité de travailler sur le collectif face à la montée de l'individualisme et du communautarisme.

      Il appelle à repenser le rôle de l'éducation à la lumière de la philosophie politique.

      "il me semble que que chaque génération et celle la nottre en particulier se trouve en face de défi éducatif nouveau il se trouve que la démocratie aujourd'hui on le voit bien est menacée alors qu'on considérait depuis longtemps que c'était un régime solidement établie on voit que la notion de vérité elle-même est remise en cause à travers euh les fake news les réseaux sociaux on voit que la notion de collectif doit être travaillée on assiste aujourd'hui à une monté quand même à la fois de l'individuali sme et puis de du communautarisme toutes ces questions-là il faut les les repenser à la lumière de la philosophie politique et les repenser en se posant la question de ce que l'éducation peut faire par rapport à ça"

      5. La Distinction Fondamentale entre les "Fondations" et les "Fondements" de l'École :

      Meirieu reprend la distinction de Ferdinand Buisson entre les savoirs techniques de base ("lire, écrire, compter" - les fondations) et le sens et les finalités de l'éducation (les fondements).

      Il critique une focalisation excessive sur les fondations au détriment des fondements, privant les apprentissages de leur dimension émancipatrice.

      "déjà Ferdinand Buisson qui est le le grand penseur de de l'école républicaine à l'époque de Jul ferie distingué dans les fondamentaux ce qu'il appelait les les fondations et les fondements hein une maison ça a besoin de fondation il faut des fondations faut que dans la terre il y ait un peu de béton qu'on creuse qu'on stabilise ça ce sont les fondations c'est technique ça c'est le lire écrire compté mais les fondations sont pas le fondement une maison son fondement c'est ce qu'on va en faire c'est qui va l'habiter à quoi elle va servir et ça réellement on ne se le pose pas comme question"

      Il illustre cela avec l'enseignement de la lecture et de l'écriture, souvent réduit à l'acquisition de techniques sans explorer leur pouvoir de libération.

      6. La Nécessité d'un "Idéal d'École" Sans Tomber dans l'"École Idéale" Utopique :

      Meirieu emprunte une distinction à la psychanalyse pour distinguer le "moi idéal" de l'"idéal du moi".

      Il transpose cette idée à l'école, plaidant pour un "idéal d'école" qui motive l'action et le progrès, sans chercher à créer des "écoles idéales" marginales et coupées de la réalité du système global.

      "on peut soit rêver à l'école idéale et à ce moment-là on va construire des établissements marginaux et on va éventuellement créer une école hor contrat où on va entre nous réaliser les pratiques qui sont des pratique parfaite en se cooptant et en a ayant que des élèves qui sont à la fois volontaires et mobilisés ça c'est l'école idéale et moi je crois pas à l'école idéale mais je crois qu'il faut avoir un idéal d'école c'est-à-dire il faut être mu par un idéal d'école il faut pas euh aller chercher à à créer des écoles idéales"

      7. La Question de la Culture à l'École : Porte d'Entrée vs. Arrivée :

      Meirieu aborde la tension entre la culture académique traditionnelle et la culture des jeunes. Il propose une approche pragmatique, considérant la culture des élèves comme une possible "porte d'entrée" vers des apprentissages plus approfondis, à condition de ne pas s'y limiter et de maintenir l'exigence intellectuelle.

      "moi j'ai toujours été très partagé là-dessus je pense qu'il y a des situations où il est extrêmement difficile d'imposer la culture académique traditionnelle à des jeunes pour qui cette culture est totalement étrangère et que donc on peut dans ces situationsl partir de la culture qui est la l'heure mais partir ne veut pas dire y rester voilà pour moi [...] je dirais ne confondons pas la porte d'entrée et l'arrivée"

      Il insiste sur la nécessité de placer l'exigence, l'approfondissement et le dépassement au cœur des pratiques pédagogiques.

      8. La Redéfinition des "Savoirs Fondamentaux" :

      Meirieu remet en cause l'idée que "lire, écrire, compter" constituent les seuls savoirs fondamentaux.

      Il met l'accent sur des compétences transversales essentielles telles que la réflexivité, la capacité à ne pas se laisser influencer, la disponibilité à l'altérité et un certain rapport au savoir.

      "d'abord moi je remets réellement en cause l'idée que compter sont des savoirs fondamentaux ce sont des savoirsfaire nécessaires mais ce qui est fondamental c'est pas ça ce qui est fondamental c'est le surc à l'acte et la réflexivité ce qui est fondamental c'est de ne pas se laisser embarquer et mettre sous emprise ce qui est fondamental c'est d'être disponible à l'altérité et capable d'entendre l'autre dans ce qu'il a à me dire et pas simplement de le détruire s'il me contredit"

      Il insiste sur l'importance de transmettre à travers les savoirs une exigence de recherche, d'investigation et de vérité, soulignant que si l'enseignement se réduisait à la transmission d'informations, l'intelligence artificielle surpasserait rapidement les enseignants.

      9. L'"Entrée dans l'Écrit" plutôt que le Simple "Lire-Écrire" :

      Meirieu préfère parler d'"entrer dans l'écrit" pour souligner la découverte par l'enfant de ce que l'écrit apporte en termes d'émancipation (mémoire, espace, temps), plutôt que de se limiter à l'apprentissage technique du lire et de l'écrire.

      "moi je crois que il faut parler d'entrer dans l'écrit pas de lire écrire parce que d'abord la simple distinction lire écrire est une e distinction qui peut être discutée on peut parfaitement dire à juste titre d'ailleurs que pour lire il faut que des gens aent écrit avant et donc l'écrit précède le lire et en fait on sait que pour chaque enfant aussi l'écrit précède le lire c'estàdire le fait de construire du sens à travers des signes précède le décryptage c'est pour ça que je parle moi d'entrer dans l'écrit c'est-à-dire de découverte de ce que l'écrit apporte à l'humain en terme d'émancipation"

      10. L'Importance d'Intégrer l'Épistémologie et l'Anthropologie dans l'Enseignement :

      Meirieu plaide pour une intégration de l'épistémologie (histoire et fondements des savoirs) et de l'anthropologie (sens pour l'humain) dans l'enseignement de chaque discipline.

      Il propose d'enseigner chaque discipline "comme histoire", à la fois la grande histoire de sa construction et comme un récit (narrativité) pour faciliter l'entrée des élèves dans la connaissance.

      "on peut penser un enseignement qui intègre l'épistémologie moi j'ai eu l'occasion de de travailler quand j'étais au Conseil supérieur des programmes un peu d'une autre manière plutôt que que de d'enseigner de l'épistémologie et d'en faire une sorte de discipline supplémentaire intégrer la dimension historique et anthropologique de chaque discipline dans l'enseignement de cette discipline j'avais même dit à un moment enseigner toute discipline comme histoire"

      Il illustre cela avec l'exemple de l'EPS et de la question du rapport au corps, ou encore avec l'histoire des sciences.

      11. La Nécessité de Prendre en Compte l'Élève dans sa Globalité (Corps et Esprit) :

      Meirieu critique l'"idéalisme" de l'enseignement français qui tend à considérer l'élève comme un pur esprit, ignorant son histoire, sa corporéité et son environnement. Il souligne l'importance du rapport à l'espace, des rituels et des "dispositifs attentionnels" pour favoriser la posture mentale nécessaire à l'apprentissage.

      "je crois que l'enseignement français un de ces principaux défauts c'est son idéalisme c'est-à-dire l'idée que un élève est un pur esprit et que finalement on s'adresse à lui simplement à la partie de lui qui est entre les sourcils et et les cheveux à son cerveau indépendamment et encore un cerveau très idéalisé qui est plutôt le cerveau épistémique tel que le décrit piagé on s'adresse à lui indépend endamment de toute son histoire de toute sa corporéité et de tout son environnement à mon avis ça c'est une erreur fondamentale"

      Il insiste sur la nécessité pour l'ensemble de l'école de travailler sur le corps, les postures et la manière d'entrer dans l'espace d'apprentissage.

      12. La Distinction entre Normalisation et Normativité :

      Concernant la question de l'uniforme et plus généralement des normes, Meirieu rappelle la distinction de Georges Canguilhem entre la normalisation (uniformisation, potentiellement arbitraire et mortifère) et la normativité (ce qui est construit par un collectif pour assurer son fonctionnement). Il plaide pour une école qui fasse découvrir la normativité plutôt que d'imposer une normalisation.

      "moi quand on me parle de la question de la norme norme vestimentaire norme comportemental normes cognitiv j'interroge toujours comme le faisait georgees kanguilem pour savoir s'il s'agit de la normalisation ou de la normativité et ça c'est une distinction qui me paraît absolument fondamentale la norm la normalisation dit Quang guilem c'est tout le monde pareil et Quang guilem qui était philosophe mais aussi biologiste dit la normalisation c'est toutes les cellules identiques c'est le cancer je ne veux voir qu'une tête tout le monde est pareil et c'est arbitraire la normativité dit quand qu'il aime c'est ce qui est construit par un collectif pour assurer la des personnes ensemble c'est-à-dire ce qui est nécessaire pour que les individus en commun puissent effectuer le travail qu'ils ont à faire"

      13. La Crise du Recrutement des Enseignants et la Perte de Sens du Métier :

      Meirieu exprime sa vive préoccupation face aux difficultés de recrutement, soulignant que la question salariale n'est pas la seule en cause. Il évoque le manque de clarté des finalités, la transformation de l'institution en un "service" avec des parents "clients", la technocratisation du métier et le sentiment pour les enseignants d'être des exécutants plutôt que des concepteurs.

      "oui moi je suis extrêmement préoccupé par les difficultés de recrutement aujourd'hui du corp enseignant euh une société qui n'est pas capable de mobiliser sa jeunesse sur l'avenir sur les jeunes générations est une société qui doit quand même s'interroger mais je ne crois pas que la question salariale soit la seule elle est importante hein la France a pris un très gros retard sur la reconnaissance salariale des enseignants mais c'est pas la seule je pense qu'il y a d'autres d'autres dimensions qui jouent en particulier euh le manque de clarté des finalités"

      Il décrit un climat de "dépression" inédit au sein de la profession, lié à une perte de sens et à une dévalorisation symbolique du rôle de l'éducation dans la société.

      14. La Complexité de la Transmission du Savoir et la Nécessité de la Formation Continue :

      Meirieu insiste sur la différence entre la passion pour une discipline et la passion pour son enseignement, soulignant que la formation doit aider les enseignants à opérer ce basculement et à comprendre les résistances des élèves. Il propose des initiatives de formation croisée entre disciplines pour favoriser cette prise de conscience.

      "c'est compliqué un enseignant de mathématique en collège ou au lycée c'est quelqu'un qui va devoir assumer un passage déterminant il va devoir passer de la passion des mathématiques à la passion de l'enseignement des mathématiques c'e st un basculement et c'est un basculement que parfois certains collègues ne parviennent pas à faire et s'ils ne parviennent pas à faire ce basculement ils ne rentrent pas dans l'enseignement des maths ils sont figés sur l'idée que ceux qui ne réussissent pas sont des incapables des feignants ils ne comprennent pas qu'on ne comprennent pas ils ne comprennent pas qu'on ne s'intéresse pas ils ne sont pas capables d'examiner les résistances à leur propre enseignement sous l'angle positif hein pour améliorer cet enseignement"

      15. Plaidoyer pour une "École du Commun" avec des Transitions Douces entre les Cycles :

      Meirieu appelle à penser l'école de la scolarité obligatoire (3-16 ans) comme une "école du commun", axée sur l'apprentissage de ce qui est essentiel à tous, et organisée avec des transitions progressives plutôt que des ruptures brutales, notamment entre le CM2 et la 6ème.

      "oui je crois qu'on aurait tout intérêt à à penser en terme d'école fondamental d'école de la scolarité obligatoire dans l'instruction obligatoire l'école de 3 à 16 ans et et la pensée comme étant alors non pas l'école unique qui a fait l'objet d'un d'un gros travail historique mais l'école du commun l'école où on apprend ce qui va faire à tous et et la pensée avec des transitions et non pas des ruptures"

      Il propose de limiter le nombre d'enseignants par élève en 6ème et 5ème et de favoriser la création d'"unités pédagogiques fonctionnelles". Il suggère également de s'appuyer sur les professeurs volontaires pour la bivalence.

      16. La Nécessité d'un Continuum Éducatif et du Rôle des Tiers-Lieux :

      Meirieu insiste sur le fait que l'école ne peut pas être la seule instance éducative et plaide pour un continuum éducatif plus large intégrant la famille et les "tiers-lieux" (éducation populaire, associations, etc.). Il rappelle l'importance de l'éducation familiale et du secteur des loisirs (aujourd'hui trop marchandisé) dans le développement de l'enfant et de l'adolescent.

      "moi je crois que l'école est évidemment un lieu fondateur fondateur de la République et de la démocratie puisque c'est le lieu où des enfants avec des trajectoires différentes avec des des histoires différentes avec des cultures différentes et singulières viennent partager les mêmes savoirs et ce ce cette espèce de mouvement ou des singularités se confrontent pour partager des savoirs communs est fondateur de notre faire ensemble de notre faire ensemble société et je pense qu'à cet égard l'école ne peut pas être la seule à faire cela et un des enjeu me semble-t-il aujourd'hui c'est de resituer l'école dans un continuum éducatif plus large"

      17. Le Rôle Ambivalent des Syndicats et la Nécessité d'Alliances avec les Parents :

      Meirieu reconnaît la tension au sein des syndicats entre la défense des intérêts corporatistes et celle du bien commun de l'éducation. Il appelle à une réflexion sur l'avenir de l'école intégrant tous les partenaires (syndicats, confédérations, parents d'élèves, élus locaux). Il insiste particulièrement sur la nécessité pour les enseignants de construire une alliance avec les parents face aux politiques qui tendent à les opposer.

      "oui je crois que les syndicats sont partagés tous les syndicats plus ou moins et de manière très différenciée sont partagés entre une forme de défense des intérêts corporatistes et une forme de défense du bien commun de l'avenir de l'institution éducative et de l'avenir de l'éducation au sens le plus global du terme [...] moi je dis depuis déjà plusieurs années au sindicat à quel point il faut construire une alliance avec les parents parce que les politiques depuis presque 30 ans jouent les parents contre les profs"

      18. Agir sur Plusieurs Segments pour une Éducation Émancipatrice, Égalitaire et Solidaire :

      Pour Meirieu, améliorer l'éducation nécessite d'agir simultanément sur plusieurs fronts : ce qui se passe avant l'école (langage, éducation familiale), une véritable refondation de l'éducation prioritaire, une amélioration de la formation des enseignants et une qualité du débat public sur l'éducation.

      "je pense que travailler à l'avenir d'une éducation à la fois émancipatrice égalitaire et solidaire nécessite de s'intéresser simultanément à à plusieurs segments d'abord il faut s'intéresser à ce qui se passe avant l'école on sait qu'un élève qui entre en en petite section peut posséder 600 mots ou 5000 mots [...] il faut s'intéresser à l'éducation familiale aussi on n pas en France de recherches suffisantes dans ce domaine [...] je pense qu'il faut aussi travailler sur une vraie reondme de l'éducation dite prioritaire [...] le troisème aspect bien sûr c'est la formation des enseignants"

      Il insiste sur le rôle essentiel de l'éducation populaire et la nécessité de la soustraire à la seule sphère marchande.

      19. Suggestions de Lectures Essentielles :

      En conclusion, Meirieu partage une liste de lectures qui ont marqué son parcours et qu'il recommande aux enseignants et éducateurs :

      Lettre à une maîtresse d'école des enfants de Barbiana (rééditée sous le titre Lettre à une institutrice) Textes de Célestin Freinet (notamment les Invariants pédagogiques) Comment aimer un enfant de Janusz Korczak Ouvrages d'Olivier Reboul sur la philosophie de l'éducation Ouvrages de Daniel Hameline Littérature en général, notamment américaine (Russell Banks)

      Conclusion :

      L'entretien avec Philippe Meirieu offre une perspective riche et nuancée sur les défis et les enjeux de l'éducation en France.

      Son analyse, ancrée dans l'expérience et nourrie par une profonde réflexion philosophique et pédagogique, met en lumière la nécessité d'une vision renouvelée, d'un débat public de qualité et d'une action concertée sur de multiples fronts pour construire une école véritablement émancipatrice, égalitaire et solidaire.

      Ses recommandations insistent sur l'importance de redonner du sens au métier d'enseignant, de prendre en compte l'élève dans sa globalité, de dépasser les approches technicistes et de réintégrer l'école dans un continuum éducatif plus vaste.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The current paper consists of two parts. The first part is the rigorous feature optimization of the MEG signal to decode individual finger identity performed in a sequence (4-1-3-2-4; 1~4 corresponds to little~index fingers of the left hand). By optimizing various parameters for the MEG signal, in terms of (i) reconstructed source activity in voxel- and parcel-level resolution and their combination, (ii) frequency bands, and (iii) time window relative to press onset for each finger movement, as well as the choice of decoders, the resultant "hybrid decoder" achieved extremely high decoding accuracy (~95%). This part seems driven almost by pure engineering interest in gaining as high decoding accuracy as possible.<br /> In the second part of the paper, armed with the successful 'hybrid decoder,' the authors asked more scientific questions about how neural representation of individual finger movement that is embedded in a sequence, changes during a very early period of skill learning and whether and how such representational change can predict skill learning. They assessed the difference in MEG feature patterns between the first and the last press 4 in sequence 41324 at each training trial and found that the pattern differentiation progressively increased over the course of early learning trials. Additionally, they found that this pattern differentiation specifically occurred during the rest period rather than during the practice trial. With a significant correlation between the trial-by-trial profile of this pattern differentiation and that for accumulation of offline learning, the authors argue that such "contextualization" of finger movement in a sequence (e.g., what-where association) underlies the early improvement of sequential skill. This is an important and timely topic for the field of motor learning and beyond.

      Strengths:

      Each part has its own strength. For the first part, the use of temporally rich neural information (MEG signal) has a significant advantage over previous studies testing sequential representations using fMRI. This allowed the authors to examine the earliest period (= the first few minutes of training) of skill learning with finer temporal resolution. Through the optimization of MEG feature extraction, the current study achieved extremely high decoding accuracy (approx. 94%) compared to previous works. For the second part, the finding of the early "contextualization" of the finger movement in a sequence and its correlation to early (offline) skill improvement is interesting and important. The comparison between "online" and "offline" pattern distance is a neat idea.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite the strengths raised, the specific goal for each part of the current paper, i.e., achieving high decoding accuracy and answering the scientific question of early skill learning, seems not to harmonize with each other very well. In short, the current approach, which is solely optimized for achieving high decoding accuracy, does not provide enough support and interpretability for the paper's interesting scientific claim. This reminds me of the accuracy-explainability tradeoff in machine learning studies (e.g., Linardatos et al., 2020). More details follow.

      There are a number of different neural processes occurring before and after a key press, such as planning of upcoming movement and ahead around premotor/parietal cortices, motor command generation in primary motor cortex, sensory feedback related processes in sensory cortices, and performance monitoring/evaluation around the prefrontal area. Some of these may show learning-dependent change and others may not.

      Given the use of whole-brain MEG features with a wide time window (up to ~200 ms after each key press) under the situation of 3~4 Hz (i.e., 250~330 ms press interval) typing speed, these different processes in different brain regions could have contributed to the expression of the "contextualization," making it difficult to interpret what really contributed to the "contextualization" and whether it is learning related. Critically, the majority of data used for decoder training has the chance of such potential overlap of signal, as the typing speed almost reached a plateau already at the end of the 11th trial and stayed until the 36th trial. Thus, the decoder could have relied on such overlapping features related to the future presses. If that is the case, a gradual increase in "contextualization" (pattern separation) during earlier trials makes sense, simply because the temporal overlap of the MEG feature was insufficient for the earlier trials due to slower typing speed.

      Several direct ways to address the above concern, at the cost of decoding accuracy to some degree, would be either using the shorter temporal window for the MEG feature or training the model with the early learning period data only (trials 1 through 11) to see if the main results are unaffected would be some example.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      One goal of this paper is to introduce a new approach for highly accurate decoding of finger movements from human magnetoencephalography data via dimension reduction of a "multi-scale, hybrid" feature space. Following this decoding approach, the authors aim to show that early skill learning involves "contextualization" of the neural coding of individual movements, relative to their position in a sequence of consecutive movements. Furthermore, they aim to show that this "contextualization" develops primarily during short rest periods interspersed with skill training, and correlates with a performance metric which the authors interpret as an indicator of offline learning.

      Strengths:

      A strength of the paper is the innovative decoding approach, which achieves impressive decoding accuracies via dimension reduction of a "multi-scale, hybrid space". This hybrid-space approach follows the neurobiologically plausible idea of concurrent distribution of neural coding across local circuits as well as large-scale networks. A further strength of the study is the large number of tested dimension reduction techniques and classifiers.

      Weaknesses:

      A clear weakness of the paper lies in the authors' conclusions regarding "contextualization". Several potential confounds, which partly arise from the experimental design (mainly the use of a single sequence) and which are described below, question the neurobiological implications proposed by the authors, and provide a simpler explanation of the results. Furthermore, the paper follows the assumption that short breaks result in offline skill learning, while recent evidence, described below, casts doubt on this assumption.

      Specifically:<br /> The authors interpret the ordinal position information captured by their decoding approach as a reflection of neural coding dedicated to the local context of a movement (Figure 4). One way to dissociate ordinal position information from information about the moving effectors is to train a classifier on one sequence, and test the classifier on other sequences that require the same movements, but in different positions (Kornysheva et al., Neuron 2019). In the present study, however, participants trained to repeat a single sequence (4-1-3-2-4). As a result, ordinal position information is potentially confounded by the fixed finger transitions around each of the two critical positions (first and fifth press). Across consecutive correct sequences, the first keypress in a given sequence was always preceded by a movement of the index finger (=last movement of the preceding sequence), and followed by a little finger movement. The last keypress, on the other hand, was always preceded by a ring finger movement, and followed by an index finger movement (=first movement of the next sequence). Figure 4 - supplement 2 shows that finger identity can be decoded with high accuracy (>70%) across a large time window around the time of the keypress, up to at least {plus minus}100 ms (and likely beyond, given that decoding accuracy is still high at the boundaries of the window depicted in that figure). This time window approaches the keypress transition times in this study. Given that distinct finger transitions characterized the first and fifth keypress, the classifier could thus rely on persistent (or "lingering") information from the preceding finger movement, and/or "preparatory" information about the subsequent finger movement, in order to dissociate the first and fifth keypress. Currently, the manuscript provides little evidence that the context information captured by the decoding approach is more than a by-product of temporally extended, and therefore overlapping, but independent neural representations of consecutive keypresses that are executed in close temporal proximity - rather than a neural representation dedicated to context.<br /> During the review process, the authors pointed out that a "mixing" of temporally overlapping information from consecutive keypresses, as described above, should result in systematic misclassifications and therefore be detectable in the confusion matrices in Figures 3C and 4B, which indeed do not provide any evidence that consecutive keypresses are systematically confused. However, such absence of evidence (of systematic misclassification) should be interpreted with caution, and, of course, provides no evidence of absence. The authors also pointed out that such "mixing" would hamper the discriminability of the two ordinal positions of the index finger, given that "ordinal position 5" is systematically followed by "ordinal position 1". This is a valid point which, however, cannot rule out that "contextualization" nevertheless reflects the described "mixing".

      During the review process, the authors responded to my concern that training of a single sequence introduces the potential confound of "mixing" described above, which could have been avoided by training on several sequences, as in Kornysheva et al. (Neuron 2019), by arguing that Day 2 in their study did include control sequences. However, the authors' findings regarding these control sequences are fundamentally different from the findings in Kornysheva et al. (2019), and do not provide any indication of effector-independent ordinal information in the described contextualization - but, actually, the contrary. In Kornysehva et al. (Neuron 2019), ordinal, or positional, information refers purely to the rank of a movement in a sequence. In line with the idea of competitive queuing, Kornysheva et al. (2019) have shown that humans prepare for a motor sequence via a simultaneous representation of several of the upcoming movements, weighted by their rank in the sequence. Importantly, they could show that this gradient carries information that is largely devoid of information about the order of specific effectors involved in a sequence, or their timing, in line with competitive queuing. They showed this by training a classifier to discriminate between the five consecutive movements that constituted one specific sequence of finger movements (five classes: 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th movement in the sequence) and then testing whether that classifier could identify the rank (1st, 2nd, 3rd, etc) of movements in another sequence, in which the fingers moved in a different order, and with different timings. Importantly, this approach demonstrated that the graded representations observed during preparation were largely maintained after this cross-decoding, indicating that the sequence was represented via ordinal position information that was largely devoid of information about the specific effectors or timings involved in sequence execution. This result differs completely from the findings in the current manuscript. Dash et al. report a drop in detected ordinal position information (degree of contextualization in figure 5C) when testing for contextualization in their novel, untrained sequences on Day 2, indicating that context and ordinal information as defined in Dash et al. is not at all devoid of information about the specific effectors involved in a sequence. In this regard, a main concern in my public review, as well as the second reviewer's public review, is that Dash et al. cannot tell apart, by design, whether there is truly contextualization in the neural representation of a sequence (which they claim), or whether their results regarding "contextualization" are explained by what they call "mixing" in their author response, i.e., an overlap of representations of consecutive movements, as suggested as an alternative explanation by Reviewer 2 and myself.

      Such temporal overlap of consecutive, independent finger representations may also account for the dynamics of "ordinal coding"/"contextualization", i.e., the increase in 2-class decoding accuracy, across Day 1 (Figure 4C). As learning progresses, both tapping speed and the consistency of keypress transition times increase (Figure 1), i.e., consecutive keypresses are closer in time, and more consistently so. As a result, information related to a given keypress is increasingly overlapping in time with information related to the preceding and subsequent keypresses. The authors seem to argue that their regression analysis in Figure 5 - figure supplement 3 speaks against any influence of tapping speed on "ordinal coding" (even though that argument is not made explicitly in the manuscript). However, Figure 5 - figure supplement 3 shows inter-individual differences in a between-subject analysis (across trials, as in panel A, or separately for each trial, as in panel B), and, therefore, says little about the within-subject dynamics of "ordinal coding" across the experiment. A regression of trial-by-trial "ordinal coding" on trial-by-trial tapping speed (either within-subject, or at a group-level, after averaging across subjects) could address this issue. Given the highly similar dynamics of "ordinal coding" on the one hand (Figure 4C), and tapping speed on the other hand (Figure 1B), I would expect a strong relationship between the two in the suggested within-subject (or group-level) regression. Furthermore, learning should increase the number of (consecutively) correct sequences, and, thus, the consistency of finger transitions. Therefore, the increase in 2-class decoding accuracy may simply reflect an increasing overlap in time of increasingly consistent information from consecutive keypresses, which allows the classifier to dissociate the first and fifth keypress more reliably as learning progresses, simply based on the characteristic finger transitions associated with each. In other words, given that the physical context of a given keypress changes as learning progresses - keypresses move closer together in time, and are more consistently correct - it seems problematic to conclude that the mental representation of that context changes. To draw that conclusion, the physical context should remain stable (or any changes to the physcial context should be controlled for).

      A similar difference in physical context may explain why neural representation distances ("differentiation") differ between rest and practice (Figure 5). The authors define "offline differentiation" by comparing the hybrid space features of the last index finger movement of a trial (ordinal position 5) and the first index finger movement of the next trial (ordinal position 1). However, the latter is not only the first movement in the sequence, but also the very first movement in that trial (at least in trials that started with a correct sequence), i.e., not preceded by any recent movement. In contrast, the last index finger of the last correct sequence in the preceding trial includes the characteristic finger transition from the fourth to the fifth movement. Thus, there is more overlapping information arising from the consistent, neighbouring keypresses for the last index finger movement, compared to the first index finger movement of the next trial. A strong difference (larger neural representation distance) between these two movements is, therefore, not surprising, given the task design, and this difference is also expected to increase with learning, given the increase in tapping speed, and the consequent stronger overlap in representations for consecutive keypresses. Furthermore, initiating a new sequence involves pre-planning, while ongoing practice relies on online planning (Ariani et al., eNeuro 2021), i.e., two mental operations that are dissociable at the level of neural representation (Ariani et al., bioRxiv 2023).

      A further complication in interpreting the results stems from the visual feedback that participants received during the task. Each keypress generated an asterisk shown above the string on the screen. It is not clear why the authors introduced this complicating visual feedback in their task, besides consistency with their previous studies. The resulting systematic link between the pattern of visual stimulation (the number of asterisks on the screen) and the ordinal position of a keypress makes the interpretation of "contextual information" that differentiates between ordinal positions difficult. During the review process, the authors reported a confusion matrix from a classification of asterisks position based on eye tracking data recorded during the task, and concluded that the classifier performed at chance level and gaze was, thus, apparently not biased by the visual stimulation. However, the confusion matrix showed a huge bias that was difficult to interpret (a very strong tendency to predict one of the five asterisk positions, despite chance-level performance). Without including additional information for this analysis (or simply the gaze position as a function of the number of astersisk on the screen) in the manuscript, this important control anaylsis cannot be properly assessed, and is not available to the public.

      The authors report a significant correlation between "offline differentiation" and cumulative micro-offline gains. However, this does not address the question whether there is a trial-by-trial relation between the degree of "contextualization" and the amount of micro-offline gains - i.e., the question whether performance changes (micro-offline gains) are less pronounced across rest periods for which the change in "contextualization" is relatively low. The single-subject correlation between contextualization changes "during" rest and micro-offline gains (Figure 5 - figure supplement 4) addresses this question, however, the critical statistical test (are correlation coefficients significantly different from zero) is not included. Given the displayed distribution, it seems unlikely that correlation coefficients are significantly above zero.

      The authors follow the assumption that micro-offline gains reflect offline learning. However, there is no compelling evidence in the literature, and no evidence in the present manuscript, that micro-offline gains (during any training phase) reflect offline learning. Instead, emerging evidence in the literature indicates that they do not (Das et al., bioRxiv 2024), and instead reflect transient performance benefits when participants train with breaks, compared to participants who train without breaks, however, these benefits vanish within seconds after training if both groups of participants perform under comparable conditions (Das et al., bioRxiv 2024). During the review process, the authors argued that differences in the design between Das et al. (2024) on the one hand (Experiments 1 and 2), and the study by Bönstrup et al. (2019) on the other hand, may have prevented Das et al. (2024) from finding the assumed (lasting) learning benefit by micro-offline consolidation. However, the Supplementary Material of Das et al. (2024) includes an experiment (Experiment S1) whose design closely follows the early learning phase of Bönstrup et al. (2019), and which, nevertheless, demonstrates that there is no lasting benefit of taking breaks for the acquired skill level, despite the presence of micro-offline gains.

      Along these lines, the authors' claim, based on Bönstrup et al. 2020, that "retroactive interference immediately following practice periods reduces micro-offline learning", is not supported by that very reference. Citing Bönstrup et al. (2020), "Regarding early learning dynamics (trials 1-5), we found no differences in microscale learning parameters (micro-online/offline) or total early learning between both interference groups." That is, contrary to Dash et al.'s current claim, Bönstrup et al. (2020) did not find any retroactive interference effect on the specific behavioral readout (micro-offline gains) that the authors assume to reflect consolidation.

      The authors conclude that performance improves, and representation manifolds differentiate, "during" rest periods (see, e.g., abstract). However, micro-offline gains (as well as offline contextualization) are computed from data obtained during practice, not rest, and may, thus, just as well reflect a change that occurs "online", e.g., at the very onset of practice (like pre-planning) or throughout practice (like fatigue, or reactive inhibition). That is, the definition of micro-offline gains (as well as offline contextualization) conflates online and "offline" processes. This becomes strikingly clear in the recent Nature paper by Griffin et al. (2025), who computed micro-offline gains as the difference in average performance across the first five sequences in a practice period (a block, in their terminology) and the last five sequences in the previous practice period. Averaging across sequences in this way minimises the chance to detect online performance changes, and inflates changes in performance "offline". The problem that "offline" gains (or contextualization) is actually computed from data entirely generated online, and therefore subject to processes that occur online, is inherent in the very definition of micro-offline gains, whether, or not, they computed from averaged performance.

      A simple control analysis based on shuffled class labels could lend further support to the authors' complex decoding approach. As a control analysis that completely rules out any source of overfitting, the authors could test the decoder after shuffling class labels. Following such shuffling, decoding accuracies should drop to chance-level for all decoding approaches, including the optimized decoder. This would also provide an estimate of actual chance-level performance (which is informative over and beyond the theoretical chance level). During the review process, the authors reported this analysis to the reviewers. Given that readers may consider following the presented decoding approach in their own work, it would have been important to include that control analysis in the manuscript to convince readers of its validity.

      Furthermore, the authors' approach to cortical parcellation raises questions regarding the information carried by varying dipole orientations within a parcel (which currently seems to be ignored?) and the implementation of the mean-flipping method (given that there are two dimensions - space and time - it is unclear what the authors refer to when they talk about the sign of the "average source", line 477).

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors investigate the functional difference between the most commonly expressed form of PTH, and a novel point mutation in PTH identified in a patient with chronic hypocalcemia and hyperphosphatemia. The value of this mutant form of PTH as a potential anabolic agent for bone is investigated alongside PTH(1-84), which is a current anabolic therapy. The authors have achieved the aims of the study.

      Strengths:

      The work is novel, as it describes the function of a novel, naturally occurring, variant of PTH in terms of its ability to dimerise, to lead to cAMP activation, to increase serum calcium, and its pharmacological action compared to normal PTH.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      (1) In your response to the reviewers you included a figure. You said it was for the reviewers only. We are *not* including it here. Is that correct or should it be in the Public Reviews?

      We apologize for any confusion and appreciate your thorough review. The phrase “data only for reviewers” was intended to indicate that the content was included in the revision based on reviewers’ comments, not in the main text (article). However, we acknowledge that this phrasing may be inappropriate. We are agree to make the figure included in the previous author response of the public reviews. Accordingly, we propose to revise the previous author response as follows:

      - Remove "(data only for reviewers)".

      -  Correct the typo from "perosteal" to "periosteal".

      - “Thank you for your comment. First, we ensured that the bones sampled during the experiment showed no defects, and we carefully separated the femur bones from the mice to preserve their integrity. In the 3-point bending test, PTH treatment significantly increased the maximum load of the femur bone compared to the OVX-control group. Additionally, the maximum load in the PTH treatment group was significantly greater than that observed in the PTH dimer group. Furthermore, structural factors influencing bone strength, such as the periosteal perimeter and the endocortical bone perimeter, were also increased in the PTH treatment group compared to the PTH dimer group.”

      (2) Do you mean to always have R<sup>0</sup> (have a superscript) and RG (never have a superscript) or should they be shown in the same way throughout your paper?

      Thank you for your thorough review. Based on previous studies that addressed the conformation of PTH1R, R<sup>0</sup> is typically shown with a superscript, while RG is not (Hoare et al., 2001; Dean et al., 2006; Okazaki et al., 2008). We have followed this notation and will ensure consistency throughout our paper.

      Hoare, S. R., Gardella, T. J., & Usdin, T. B. (2001). Evaluating the signal transduction mechanism of the parathyroid hormone 1 receptor: effect of receptor-G-protein interaction on the ligand binding mechanism and receptor conformation. Journal of Biological Chemistry, 276(11), 7741-7753.

      Dean, T., Linglart, A., Mahon, M. J., Bastepe, M., Jüppner, H., Potts Jr, J. T., & Gardella, T. J. (2006). Mechanisms of ligand binding to the parathyroid hormone (PTH)/PTH-related protein receptor: selectivity of a modified PTH (1–15) radioligand for GαS-coupled receptor conformations. Molecular endocrinology, 20(4), 931-943.

      Okazaki, M., Ferrandon, S., Vilardaga, J. P., Bouxsein, M. L., Potts Jr, J. T., & Gardella, T. J. (2008). Prolonged signaling at the parathyroid hormone receptor by peptide ligands targeted to a specific receptor conformation. Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences, 105(43), 16525-16530.

      (3) The following grammatical and fact changes and word changes are requested.

      We appreciate the thoughtful review and thank you for pointing out the grammatical, factual, and word changes required. We have carefully reviewed and addressed each of these corrections to ensure the paper's accuracy and readability.

      We appreciate the reviewers' detailed and constructive reviews. We have addressed all the comments to improve the quality of our paper.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors have performed an antigenic assay for human seasonal N1 neuraminidase using antigens and mouse sera from 2009-2020 (with one avian N1 antigen). This shows two distinct antigen groups. There is poorer reactivity with sera from 2009-2012 against antigens from 2015-2019, and poorer reactivity with sera from 2015-2020 against antigens from 2009-2013. There is a long branch separating these two groups. However, 321 and 423 are the only two positions that are consistently different between the two groups. Therefore these are the most likely cause of these antigenic differences.

      Strengths:

      (1) A sensible rationale was given for the choice of sera, in terms of the genetic diversity.

      (2) There were two independent batches of one of the antigens used for generating sera, which demonstrated the level of heterogeneity in the experimental process.

      (3) Replicate of the Wisconsin/588/2019 antigen (as H1 and H6) is another useful measure of heterogeneity.

      (4) The presentation of the data, e.g. Figure 2, clearly shows two main antigenic groups.

      (5) The most modern sera are more recent than other related papers, which demonstrates that has been no major antigenic change.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Issues with experimental methods<br /> As I am not an experimentalist, I cannot comment fully on the experimental methods. However, I note that BALB/c mice sera were used, whereas outbred ferret sera are typically used in influenza antigenic characterisation, so the antigenic difference observed may not be relevant in humans. Similarly, the mice were immunised with an artificial NA immunogen where the typical approach would be to infect the ferret with live virus intra-nasally.

      (2) Five mice sera were generated per immunogen and then pooled, but data was not presented that demonstrated these sera were sufficiently homogenous that this approach is valid.

      (3) There were no homologous antigens for most of the sera. This makes the responses difficult to interpret as the homologous titre is often used to assess the overall reactivity of a serum. The sequence of the antigens used is not described, which again makes it difficult to interpret the results.

      (4) To be able to untangle the effects of the individual substitutions at 321, 386, and 432, it would have been useful to have included the naturally occurring variants at these positions, or to have generated mutants at these positions. Gao et al clearly show an antigenic difference with ferret sera correlated separately with N386K and I321V/K432E.

      (5) The challenge experiments in Gao et al showed that NI titre was not a good correlate of protection, so that limits the interpretation of these results.

      Issues with the computational methods

      (6) The NAI titres were normalised using the ELISA results, and the motivation for this is not explained. It would be nice to see the raw values.

      (7) It is not clear what value the random forest analysis adds here, given that positions 321 and 432 are the only two that consistently differ between the two groups.

      (8) As with the previous N2 paper, the metric for antigenic distance (the root mean square of the difference between the titres for two sera) is not one that would be consistent when different sera are included. More usual metrics of distance are Archetti-Horsfall, fold down from homologous, or fold down from maximum.

      (9) Antigenic cartography of these data is fraught. I wonder whether 2 dimensions are required for what seems like a 1-dimensional antigenic difference - certainly, the antigens, excluding the H5N1, are in a line. The map may be skewed by the high reactivity Brisbane/18 antigen. It is not clear if the column bases (normalisation factors for calculating antigenic distance) have been adjusted to account for the lack of homologous antigens. It is typical to present antigenic maps with a 1:1 x:y ratio.

      Issues with interpretation

      (10) Figure 2 shows the NAI titres split into two groups for the antigens, however, A/Brisbane is an outlier in the second antigenic group with high reactivity.

      (11) Following Gao et al, I think you can claim that it is more likely that the antigenic change is due to K432E than I321V, based on a comparison of the amino acid change.

      Appraisal:

      Taking into account the limitations of the experimental techniques (which I appreciate are due to resource constraints), this paper meets its aim of measuring the antigenic relationships between 2009-2020 seasonal N1s, showing that there were two main groups. The authors discovered that the difference between the two antigenic groups was likely attributable to positions 321 and 432, as these were the only two positions that were consistently different between the two groups. They came to this finding by using a random forest model, but other simpler methods could have been used.

      Impact:

      This paper contributes to the growing literature on the potential benefit of NA in the influenza vaccine.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, Chunharas and colleagues compared the representational differences of orientation information during a sensory task and a working memory task. By reanalyzing data from a previous fMRI study and applying representational similarity analysis (RSA), they observed that orientation information was represented differently in the two tasks: during visual perception, orientation representation resembled the veridical model, which captures the known naturalistic statistics of orientation information; whereas during visual working memory, a categorical model, which assumes different psychological distances between orientations, better explained the data, particularly in more anterior retinotopic regions. The authors suggest fundamental differences in the representational geometry of visual perception and working memory along the human retinotopic cortex.

      Strengths:

      Examining the differences in representational geometry between perception and working memory has important implications for the understanding of the nature of working memory. This study presents a carefully-executed reanalysis of previous data to address this question. The authors developed a novel method (model construction combined with RSA) to examine the representational geometry of orientation information under different tasks, and the control analyses provide rich, convincing support for their claims.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the control analyses are convincing, I still have alternative explanations for some of the results. I'm also concerned about the low sample size (n = 6 in the fMRI experiment). Overall, I think additional analyses may help to further clarify the issues and strengthen the claims.

      (1) The central claim of the current study is that orientation information is represented in a veridical manner during the sensory task, and in a categorical manner during working memory. However, In the sensory task, a third type of representational geometry was observed, especially in brain regions from V3AB and beyond. These regions showed a symmetric pattern in which oblique orientations (45 and 135 degrees) appeared more similar to each other. In fact, a similar pattern can even be found in V1-V3, although the effect looked weaker. The authors raised two possible explanations for this in the discussion, one being that participants might have used verbal labels (e.g., diagonal) for both orientations, and the other being a lack of attention to orientation. Either way, this suggests that a veridical model may not be the best fit for these ROIs. How would this symmetric model explain the sensory data, in comparison to the veridical model?

      (2) If the symmetric model also explains the sensory data well, I wonder whether this result challenges the authors' central claim, or instead suggests that the sensory task is not ideal for the purpose of the study. One way to address this issue might be to use the sample period of the working memory task as the perception task, as some other studies have been doing (e.g., Kwak & Curtis, 2022). This epoch of data might function as a stronger version of the attention task as the authors discussed in the discussion. What would the representational geometry look like in the sample period? I would also like to note that the current analyses used 5.6-13.6 s after stimulus onset for the memory task, which I think may reflect a mix of sample- and delay-related activity.

      (3) When comparing the veridical and categorical models, it is important to first show the significance of each model before making comparisons. For instance, was the veridical model significant in different ROIs in the memory task? And was either model significant in IPS1-3 in the two tasks? I'm asking about this because the two models appear to be both significant in the memory task, whereas only the veridical model was significant in the sensory task (with overall lower correlation coefficients than the categorical model in the memory task).

      (4) The current study has a low sample size of six participants. With such a small sample, it would be helpful to show results from individual participants. For example, I appreciate that Figures 2D and 3C showed individual data points, but additionally showing the representational geometry plot (i.e., Figure 1C) for each subject could better illustrate the robustness of the effect. Alternatively, the original paper from which the fMRI data were drawn actually had two fMRI experiments with similar task designs. I wonder if the authors could replicate these patterns using data from the second experiment with seven participants. This might provide even stronger support for the current findings with a more reasonable sample size.

    1. A second principle to be observed before a custodial sentence isimposed is designed to discourage judges from escalating the severityof the sentence in response to subsequent offending. Having imposedan alternative to custody for one offence, some judges may ‘‘up-tariff’’and impose a custodial sentence if a youth reappears before the court,reasoning that the first sentence was insufficiently severe to discou-rage the offender. Section 39(4) attempts to constrain this judicialpractice, providing that ‘‘[t]he previous imposition of a particularnon-custodial sentence on a young person does not preclude ayouth justice court from imposing the same or any other non-custodialsentence for another offence.’’ While this provision does not prohibitjudges from following the ‘‘step principle’’ logic at sentencing, theprovision means that the same alternative sanction may be imposedon consecutive occasions.

      EXTERNAL: PREVIOUS NON-CUSTODIAL SENTENCE DOESN'T INCREASE LIKELIHOOD OF GETTING JAILTIME

    2. The omission of any reference to deterrence in the YCJA statement ofsentencing purpose may have contributed to lowering the number ofcustodial sentences imposed in youth court (Cesaroni and Bala 2008).Its absence in the act, in contrast to the Criminal Code, suggests thatgeneral and specific deterrence are not to be objectives of sentencing inyouth court. A number of early judgments under the act emphasizedthe absence of explicit mention of deterrence in the act as a reason forimposing a non-custodial sentence (Roberts and Bala 2003). In 2006,the Supreme Court of Canada rendered its decision in R. v. B.W.P., oneof the first cases under the new act to reach the highest court. Theunanimous decision of the Court upheld a trial decision that empha-sized the importance of rehabilitation. The Court discussed the role ofdeterrence in sentencing, observing that for adults ‘‘general deterrenceis factored in the determination of the sentence, the offender is pun-ished more severely, not because he or she deserves it, but becausethe court decides to send a message to others who may be inclined toengage in similar criminal activity’’ (R. v. B.W.P. at para. 2). TheSupreme Court recognized that under the previous statute, the YOA,general deterrence had been an objective of sentencing youths, albeitto a lesser extent than for adults. The Court, accepted, however, thatthe YCJA established ‘‘a new sentencing regime’’ for young offendersin Canada. Justice Charron wrote that the act ‘‘sets out a detailed andcomplete code for sentencing young persons under which terms it isnot open to the youth sentencing judge to impose a punishment for thepurpose of warning, not the young person, but others against enga-ging in criminal conduct. Hence, general deterrence is not a principleof youth sentencing under the present regime’’ (R. v. B.W.P. at para. 4).The Supreme Court also recognized that, while general deterrenceshould not be an objective in sentencing youth offenders, the factthat a youth is to be held accountable in youth court undoubtedlyhas ‘‘the effect of deterring the young person and others from commit-ting crimes’’ (R. v. B.W.P. at para. 4)

      EXTERNAL LAW, INTERNAL LAW: DETERRENCE IS NO LONGER A MOTIVATION BEHIND YOUTH SENTENCING

    3. The YCJA encourages the diversion of cases from youth court, provid-ing for both ‘‘extrajudicial measures’’ and ‘‘extrajudicial sanctions.’’‘‘Extrajudicial sanctions’’ are non-court, community-based programsthat may result in responses, such as restitution to a victim or family-group conferencing, while the concept of ‘‘extrajudicial measures’’ isbroader, including extrajudicial sanctions as well as oral warnings orwritten cautions by the police and police referrals to community coun-selling agencies. The act clearly is intended to reduce the number ofyouths appearing in youth court, particularly first offenders and juve-niles accused of minor offences, as indicated by the presumption in s.4(c): ‘‘Extrajudicial measures are presumed to be adequate to hold ayoung person accountable for his or her offending behaviour if theyoung person has committed a non-violent offence and has not pre-viously been found guilty of an offence’’ (emphasis added). Further,there is a statutory direction that a police officer ‘‘shall’’ considerwhether to invoke an extrajudicial measure prior to commencing judi-cial proceedings against a young person (s. 6). The act affirms theimportance and stresses the range of application of extrajudicial mea-sures, recognizing in s. 4(a) that ‘‘extrajudicial measures are often themost appropriate and effective way to address youth crime.

      EXTERNAL LAW: EXTRAJUDICIAL PUNISHMENTS FOR CRIME ARE EMPHASIZED, COMMUNITY BASED PROGRAMS

    1. Ask yourself and others in your program the following:1. Is the policy practical?2. Is the policy age-appropriate for all the children you care for and for yourenvironment?3. Will center based staff, (or family child care assistant if program is familychild care), be able to incorporate the policy and procedures into the dailyoperations of the program? What training may they need?4. Is the information in the policy accessible and easy to use?5. Does the policy do what it’s intended to do regarding the children’s healthand safety?Page 9 TAChildGuidanceGCC20051107

      These are the parts that my team and I can use when developing a child guidance policy

    2. Reinforce positive behavior by recognizing children’s positive actions;• Adults model appropriate behavior by being consistent with what theprogram’s expectations for children;• Redirect children toward positive activities by interrupting a child’snegative behavior and steering the child toward an acceptable substituteactivity;• Teach children new skills and encourage them to discuss and resolve theirconflicts on their own or with the adult’s assistance when necessary ratherthan imposing an adult’s solution on them. Encourage children to expresstheir feelings in words and to resolve problems peacefully;• Ignore simple inappropriate negative behavior that is unpleasant;• Work in close partnership with parents to address children’s difficulties athome and at the program. Develop shared understanding to developconsistency between home and child care;• Observe and document children’s behavior;• Meet with parents, keep them informed of their children’s behaviors anddocument your parent discussions;• Assess specialized support services if a child’s behavior continues to beharmful to themselves or others. With written parental permission, referthe family for mental health counseling or other specialized services thatcan help address the child’s behavior problems. Follow your policy forreferrals;4. Supports that are available to assist child guidance efforts• Learn and list community supports available as an addendum to your childguidance policy; and,• Include addendum language that requires center based staff, (family childcare assistants if your program is family child care), attend communitytraining regarding child guidance/ techniques and good early childhoodpractices based on their individual needs.Test the policyAsk yourself and others in your program the following:1. Is the policy practical?2. Is the policy age-appropriate for all the children you care for and for yourenvironment?3. Will center based staff, (or family child care assistant if program is familychild care), be able to incorporate the policy and procedures into the dailyoperations of the program? What training may they need?4. Is the information in the policy accessible and easy to use?5. Does the policy do what it’s intended to do regarding the children’s healthand safety?Page 9 TAChildGuidanceGCC20051107

      The section that emphasizes working closely with parents is something we can definitely integrate more deeply into our Child Guidance Policy. In our program, we’ve noticed that maintaining open communication with parents about children's behaviors both at home and at the center helps create consistency and provides better support for the children. We also plan to incorporate the strategies for reinforcing positive behavior and redirecting negative behavior into our training for staff.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Shao et al. investigate the contribution of different cortical areas to working memory maintenance and control processes, an important topic involving different ideas about how the human brain represents and uses information when no longer available to sensory systems. In two fMRI experiments, they demonstrate that human frontal cortex (area sPCS) represents stimulus (orientation) information both during typical maintenance, but even more so when a categorical response demand is present. That is, when participants have to apply an added level of decision control to the WM stimulus, sPCS areas encode stimulus information more than conditions without this added demand. These effects are then expanded upon using multi-area neural network models, recapitulating the empirical gradient of memory vs control effects from visual to parietal and frontal cortices. Multiple experiments and analysis frameworks provide support for the authors' conclusions, and control experiments and analysis are provided to help interpret and isolate the frontal cortex effect of interest. While some alternative explanations/theories may explain the roles of frontal cortex in this study and experiments, important additional analyses have been added that help ensure a strong level of support for these results and interpretations.

      Strengths:

      - The authors use an interesting and clever task design across two fMRI experiments that is able to parse out contributions of WM maintenance alone along with categorical, rule-based decisions. Importantly, the second experiments only uses one fixed rule, providing both an internal replication of Experiment 1's effects and extending them to a different situation when rule switching effects are not involved across mini-blocks.

      - The reported analyses using both inverted encoding models (IEM) and decoders (SVM) demonstrate the stimulus reconstruction effects across different methods, which may be sensitive to different aspects of the relationship between patterns of brain activity and the experimental stimuli.

      - Linking the multivariate activity patterns to memory behavior is critical in thinking about the potential differential roles of cortical areas in sub-serving successful working memory. Figure 3's nicely shows a similar interaction to that of Figure 2 in the role of sPCS in the categorization vs. maintenance tasks. This is an important contribution to the field when we consider how a distributed set of interacting cortical areas support successful working memory behavior.

      - The cross-decoding analysis in Figure 4 is a clever and interesting way to parse out how stimulus and rule/category information may be intertwined, which would have been one of the foremost potential questions or analyses requested by careful readers.

      - Additional ROI analyses in more anterior regions of the PFC help to contextualize the main effects of interest in the sPCS (and no effect in the inferior frontal areas, which are also retinotopic, adds specificity). And, more explanation for how motor areas or preparation are likely not involved strengthens the takeaways of the study (M1 control analysis).

      - Quantitative link via RDM-style analyses between the RNNs constructed and fMRI data.

      Weaknesses:

      - In the given tasks, multiple types of information codes may be present, and more detail on this possibility could always be added analytically or in discussion. However, the authors have added beneficial support to this comparison in this version of the manuscript.

      - The space of possible RNN architectures and their biological feasibility could always be explored more, but links between the fMRI and RNN data provide a good foundation for this work moving forward.

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      *Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): *

      • The authors investigate in this study the function of LIN-42 for the process of precise molting timing in C. elegans. To achieve this, they compare LIN-42 with its mammalian ortholog, Period. They found that similar to Period, LIN-42 interacted with the kinase KIN-20, a mammalian Casein kinase 1 (CK1) ortholog. Hence, two different proteins involved in rhythmic processes, LIN-42 and Period function in a conserved manner. *
      • First, they used mutants with specific deletions to untangle various phenotypes during C. elegans development. From this analysis they identify a specific region, corresponding to a CK1-binding region in mammals, to be mainly involved in the rhythmic molting phenotype. Next, they identify KIN-20, the CK1 ortholog as interaction partner of LIN-42. They even were able to demonstrate an interaction of CK1 with the region of LIN-42. Using CK1, they identified potential phosphorylation sites within LIN-42 and compared those with immunoprecipitated protein in vivo. There was a substantial overlap. While the C-terminal tail of LIN-42 was heavily phosphorylated, deletion of the C-terminal part resulted only in a minor phenotype for rhythmic molting. Last but not least, they demonstrated that point mutations that inactivate the catalytic function of KIN-20 produced a rhythmic molting phenotype. The interaction of LIN-42 with KIN-20 affected the localization of the kinase, similar to what was found to Period and CK1. *
      • Overall, the experiments are well done, well controlled and well described even for non-specialists. I guess it was not easy to kind of sort out the many overlapping phenotypes. It was certainly helpful just to focus on the clear rhythmic molting phenotype. *

      • I have no major or minor comments. *

      • Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)): *

      • The manuscript is well written and can be followed by non-specialists of the field. The experiments are well performed. Even if some experiments did not yield the expected phenotype, e.g. deletion of the C-terminal tail of LIN-42 had only a minor phenotype inspire of heavy phosphorylation, these experiments are anyhow included and explained. *

      • Overall, the study is interesting for people in the C. elegans field and by similarity mammalian chronobiology. I would expect that most of the progress based on this study will be on the further elucidation of the molting phenotype and how the other phenotypes related to this. Then this could emerge as a blueprint for molting phenomena in other species as well. *
      • I am a mammalian chronobiologist working on Period proteins. *

      We thank the reviewer for their positive evaluation of our work.

      *Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): *

      • This study represents pioneering work on LIN-42, the C. elegans ortholog of PER, uncovering its role in molting rhythms and heterochronic timing. A key strength of this work lies in its integrative approach, combining genetic and developmental analyses in C. elegans with biochemical characterization of LIN-42 protein. *

      • At the organismal level, the authors take advantage of the power of C. elegans as a model system, employing precise genetic manipulations and high-resolution developmental assays to dissect the contributions of LIN-42 and its interaction partner KIN-20, the C. elegans ortholog of CK1, to molting rhythms. Their findings provide in vivo evidence that binding of LIN-42 with KIN-20 promotes the nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 and is crucial for molting rhythms, while its PAS domain appears dispensable for this function. This detailed phenotypic analysis of multiple LIN-42 and KIN-20 mutants represents a significant contribution to our understanding of the developmental clock. *

      • At the biochemical level, the study provides a detailed analysis of the mechanism underlying LIN-42's interaction with CK1, demonstrating that LIN-42 contains a functionally conserved CK1-binding domain (CK1BD). Through their in vitro kinase assays and structural insights, the authors identified distinct roles for CK1BD-A and CK1BD-B: the former in kinase inhibition and the latter in stable CK1 binding and phosphorylation. Importantly, their data align well with previous findings on PER-CK1 regulation in mammalian and Drosophila systems, reinforcing the evolutionary conservation of key clock components. *

      • Overall, this work stands out for its deep and important insights into how CK1-mediated regulation extends beyond the circadian clock to regulate the developmental clock. The combination of genetic approaches with biochemical analyses makes this an outstanding contribution to both chronobiology and nematode developmental biology. *

      We thank the reviewer for the strong endorsement for publication of our work

      *Major comment 1: * * In Figure 2D, I could not find a crucial control if the authors claim that KIN-20 binds to LIN-42. For example, a single mutant of LIN-42-3xFLAG could be used as a control for the double mutant. *

      We will do an appropriate control experiment.

      *Major comment 2: * * The sizes of the KIN20 bands were very diverged (~40 kDa and ~60 kDa), but the authors provide no explanation for this. *

      The worm produces several KIN-20 isoforms. We will state this in the revised manuscript.

      *Major comment 3: * * Regarding the MS study, the raw data are available, but the detailed supplemental Excel files would be more informative for readers. For example, are other interactors such as REV-ERB/NHR-85 detected in Figure 2A? Regarding Figure 4F, the list of phosphorylation sites and MS scores is also informative. *

      We apologize for our omission in stating clearly in the figure legend that the significantly enriched proteins were labeled with a red dot. These were only LIN-42 itself and KIN-20. NHR-85 was not enriched. We will state this explicitly in a revised version and provide all relevant information.

      *Major comment 4: * * It is an important finding that the PAS domain of LIN-42 is not essential for the molting rhythms. Is the PAS domain also dispensable for binding with KIN-20? *

      Although we have currently no reason to assume that the PAS domain would be required for KIN-20 binding, we will perform an in vitro experiment to test for binding.

      *Major comment 5 (Optional): * * In this study, the authors carefully performed in vitro kinase assays, and I strongly suggest that they investigate whether the CKI-mediated phosphorylation of LIN-42 is temperature-compensated and whether the CKI-BD-AB regions affect it. *

      Although this is an interesting question, addressing it appears outside the scope of the manuscript and a revision; please see section 4 below.

      *Major comment 6 (Optional): * * In Figure 6, the authors argue that the CKI-BD of LIN-42 is important for CK1 nuclear translocation. It would be better to show the effect of the nuclear accumulation of CKI on nuclear proteins, like the mammalian CKI-PER2-CLOCK story. Does CKI localization affect phosphorylation status of other clock-related proteins including REV-ERB/NHR-85? * * Phospho-proteome analysis would identify nuclear substrates of CK1. In addition, is phosphorylation of LIN-42 dispensable for the CK1 nuclear translocation? *

      This is another interesting question yet currently nothing is known about other CK1/KIN-20 targets, and we have no evidence for NHR-85 being one. Please see our detailed comments in the section 4 below.

      To address whether LIN-42 phosphorylation affects CK1/KIN-20 nuclear accumulation, we will seek to examine KIN-20 localization in LIN-42∆Tail animals.

      *Major comment 7 (Optional): * * LIN-42 rhythmic expression could drive rhythmic nuclear accumulation of KIN-20. It would be better to examine this possibility using kin-20::GFP in lin-42 mutants. *

      We agree that the mutant analysis is important for this and Fig. 6C shows reduced KIN-20 nuclear accumulation in LIN-42∆CK1BD.

      Minor 1: * * I could not find the full gel images of the Western blot analyses as supplemental materials.

      This data will be added.

      Minor 2: * * The authors discussed a conserved module in two different clocks. A statement regarding a recently published paper (Hiroki and Yoshitane, Commun Biol, 2024) would be informative for readers.

      We will add such a statement.

      ***Referee cross-commenting** *

      • I basically agree with reviewer 1 and hope that this paper will be published soon as it is very valuable for our field. I have constructively pointed out some parts that could be improved, but depending on the editor's judgement, I believe that even if not all of these are revised, it will be sufficient for publication. *

      • Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)): *

      • This work stands out for its deep and important insights into how CK1-mediated regulation extends beyond the circadian clock to regulate the developmental clock. The combination of genetic approaches with biochemical analyses makes this an outstanding contribution to both chronobiology and nematode developmental biology. *

      • I strongly suggest editors to accept this study with minor modifications according to the following comments.*

      We thank the reviewer for their strong support and the clear indication of required vs. optional revisions.

      *Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): *

      • In their manuscript "A conserved chronobiological complex times C. elegans development", Spangler, Braun, Ashley et al. investigate the mechanisms through which the PERIOD orthologue, lin-42, regulates rhythmic molting in C. elegans. Through precise genetic manipulations, the authors identify a particular region of lin-42, the 'CK1BD', which regulates molting timing, with less effect on other lin-42 phenotypes (e.g. heterochrony). They show that LIN-42 and the casein kinase 1 (CK1) homologue KIN-20 interact in vivo, and identify phosphorylation sites of LIN-42. Using biochemical assays, they find that the CK1BD of LIN-42 is sufficient for interaction with the human homologue of KIN-20, CK1, in vitro. The LIN-42 CK1BD is also required for the proper nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 in vivo. Furthermore, a point mutation that should disrupt the catalytic activity of KIN-20 also shows an irregular molting phenotype, similar to the lin-42 CK1BD mutant. The manuscript is very well-written and the data and methods are well-presented and detailed. Overall this work makes a convincing case that the C. elegans lin-42:Kin-20 and mammalian period:Ck1 interactions have functionally conserved roles in the oscillatory developmental programs of each organism (molting timing and circadian rhythms, respectively), with a few caveats below that can be addressed.*

      We thank the reviewer for their positive evaluation of our work.

      *Major comments: *

        1. The authors have shown that LIN-42 is phosphorylated in vivo, but the dependence of this phosphorylation on KIN-20 is not fully addressed. In the discussion (lines 417-420), the authors mention that the unhealthy phenotype of the kin-20 mutant animals prevented them from assessing LIN-42 phosphorylation in this genetic background. To bolster their model and to circumvent this issue, it should be feasible to generate a kin-20 degron allele and to perform the LIN-42 phospho-proteomics upon inducible degradation. Alternatively, perhaps a phos-tag western blot for LIN-42 could be used to compare the kin-20 wild-type to kin-20 mutants.*

      We agree, and acknowledged in the discussion, that phoshorylation of LIN-42 by KIN-20 in vivo has not been demonstrated by us. However, as discussed in the section 4 below, we find that this costly, challenging and time-consuming experiment is not warranted by the expected gain.

      For technical reasons, the in vitro biochemistry was done using human CK1 protein. There are a few places (e.g. results, line 248 and discussion line 437), where the language, in my opinion, is extrapolating the CK1 results too strongly to KIN-20. The authors mention that feedback inhibition is a known property of human CK1. It is indeed quite striking that the LIN-42 CK1BD region interacts with and is phosphorylated by the human counterpart of KIN-20, and that feedback inhibition is also seen! However, the language about KIN-20 itself should be softened, since there does not appear to be clear evidence that KIN-20 exhibits the same properties as human CK1 (unless perhaps human CK1 can functionally replace KIN-20 in worms, or the proteins were extremely similar?)

      We will follow the reviewer’s advice and carefully examine the text for instances where we extrapolated too much and tone these down. (We note that this does not apply to the example of line 248 where we wrote “Collectively, our data establish that the LIN-42

      CK1BD is functionally conserved and mediates stable binding to the CK1 kinase domain.”, i.e., there was no mentioning of KIN-20.)

      The role of the three LIN-42 isoforms should be further clarified. Minimally, it should be explained why the alleles where both b and c isoforms should be flag-tagged seem to only produce detectable b isoform (e.g. Fig. 2C).

      We will clarify that the individual roles of the isoforms are largely unknown and that we can only speculate that the c-isoform may exhibit either generally low expression or expression in only few cells or tissues.

      4. Related to points 2 and 3 above, the authors have shown that the CKIBD mediates association with human CK1 in vitro, and is required for nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 in vivo, but not that the complex formation between LIN-42 and KIN-20 depends on the CK1BD. Given the reciprocal co-IP findings, it should be feasible to create tagged versions of lin-42(deltaCK1BD) and to determine the effect on LIN-42-KIN-20 complex formation. While there is already a b-isoform tag, an a-isoform tag would also help to address whether both the b and a isoforms interact with KIN-20 in a CK1BD-dependent manner in vivo. These strains would also allow the authors to determine how the CK1BD deletion affects overall levels/stability/rhythmic accumulation of LIN-42(a or b), which would potentially serve to strengthen their conclusions about the role of the lin-42 CK1BD.

      We will attempt to generate a FLAG-tagged LIN-42∆CK1BD to perform IP and check for binding of KIN-20.

      As detailed in section 4, we cannot tag LIN-42a individually due to the structure of the genomic locus, and its level appear very low to begin with.

      In the molting timing assay, there is an unexpected result where the delta-C-terminal-tail lin-42 allele resembles the n1089 (N-terminal deletion) (line 315). Could the authors more clearly explain this finding?

      As we point out in the manuscript, n1089 is a partial deletion with a breakpoint in a noncoding (intronic) region of lin-42. Accordingly, it is currently unknown, what mature transcripts and proteins are made in the mutant animals. This prevents us from making educated guesses as to why there is a phenotypic resemblance between these and lin-42∆tail mutant animals. We will clarify in the manuscript that this is an interesting, but currently unexplained observation.

      *Minor comments: *

        1. The correspondence between the LIN-42 "SYQ" and "LT" motifs and the motifs referred to as "A" and "B" should be clarified, and consistent names/labels used. Are these interchangeable names? If it is necessary to use both names, the differences between SYQ/LT and A/B should be made more clear.*

      We agree that the situation is not completely satisfactory but feel that we need to use both names since they have both been used in the literature. We will work to revise the text to reflect more clearly the correspondence.

      For data presented as "% of animals", please indicate the number of animals scored (e.g. egl, alae assays - ~ how many animals per replicate (dot)?).

      We will provide these numbers.

      Line 145-148 - Mentioning the relevant phenotype(s) of the lin-42 null allele from the cited paper would provide a good point of comparison here.

      We will mention the previously described phenotypes.

      Line 201 - the phrase "This is also true for the proteins:" is unclear, as the previous sentence states that both lin-42 and kin-20 mRNAs oscillate, while the next sentence says that only LIN-42 protein oscillates.

      We apologize for the confusion and will correct the text.

      Line 231 - please explain the significance of the 'lower response signal' in the BLI assay for the CKIBD(no tail).

      We will clarify that the lower response signal observed for the CK1BD compared to the CK1BD+Tail (residues 402-589; same construct used in Fig. 3B) reflects its smaller molecular weight, which reduces the overall mass contribution to the BLI sensor.

      Fig. 2 - C/D - the genotype lane labels should I think indicate an N-terminal rather

      We will fix this mistake.

      7. Fig. 6, line 367 - lin-42 is variably described as promoting increased KIN-20 'nuclear accumulation' or 'localization'. I think that 'accumulation' is more accurate, as it doesn't imply a specific mechanism for the difference (transport vs stabilization, etc.)

      We will revise the manuscript accordingly.

      *8. Fig 6B - an overlay of the panels or another way of quantifying the colocalization would make this result more clear. *

      We will supply the requested overlay.

      *Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)): *

      • This work presents a major mechanistic and conceptual advance in our understanding of the role of lin-42/Period, a conserved key regulator of C. elegans development. Previously, it was not clear if the heterochronic and circadian functions of lin-42 were genetically separable, nor was it known how LIN-42 physically interacted with the CK1 homologue. This work addresses these questions using precise genome engineering and detailed phenotypic and biochemical approaches. The work also reveals the conservation of bi-directional/reciprocal regulation between lin-42 and kin-20. The main limitations of the study, which can potentially be addressed as outlined in the 'major points' above, are that evidence should be provided that lin-42 phosphorylation depends on kin-20 in vivo, and that the CK1BD mediates the interaction in vivo (since the in vitro work is with human CK1). As the authors indicate, this is the first 'conserved clock module' of this type, and this work will therefore be of significant interest to both the C. elegans developmental biology and the more general biological timing fields. *

      • Field of expertise of the reviewer- C. elegans genetics and development.*

      Description of the studies that the authors prefer not to carry out

      *Major comment 5 (Optional): * * In this study, the authors carefully performed in vitro kinase assays, and I strongly suggest that they investigate whether the CKI-mediated phosphorylation of LIN-42 is temperature-compensated and whether the CKI-BD-AB regions affect it. *

      Temperature compensation is of course one of the most striking features of circadian clocks, and CK1-mediated phosphorylation of PER appears a critical component. We agree that it would be interesting to examine whether or not this feature exists in an animal whose development is not or only partially temperature-compensated. However, these studies are not straightforward – we would first have to set up an assay and demonstrate temperature compensation for the mammalian PER – CK1 pair as a positive control. We were not able to purify KIN-20 so could only test whether the LIN-42 substrate promoted temperature compensation. Moreover, either result for LIN-42 – CK1 would immediately raise new questions that would deserve extensive follow-up: if there is temperature compensation, why is worm development not compensated? If there is none, where/how do the interactions between CK1 and LIN-42 differ from those between CK1 and PER? Hence, we propose that these studies are outside the scope of the current study.

      *Major comment 6 (Optional): * * In Figure 6, the authors argue that the CKI-BD of LIN-42 is important for CK1 nuclear translocation. It would be better to show the effect of the nuclear accumulation of CKI on nuclear proteins, like the mammalian CKI-PER2-CLOCK story. Does CKI localization affect phosphorylation status of other clock-related proteins including REV-ERB/NHR-85? * * Phospho-proteome analysis would identify nuclear substrates of CK1. In addition, is phosphorylation of LIN-42 dispensable for the CK1 nuclear translocation? *

      We agree that it will be important to identify relevant targets of KIN-20 in future work. Unfortunately, at this point, none are known, and we especially do not have any knowledge of the phosphorylation status of NHR-85. Indeed, in unrelated (and unpublished) work we have done a phosphoproteomics time course of wild-type animals. We have not detected any NHR-85-derived phosphopeptides in our analysis. Thus, this would establish a completely new line of research, incompatible with the timelines of a revision.

      @Ref. 3:

      1. *The authors have shown that LIN-42 is phosphorylated in vivo, but the dependence of this phosphorylation on KIN-20 is not fully addressed. In the discussion (lines 417-420), the authors mention that the unhealthy phenotype of the kin-20 mutant animals prevented them from assessing LIN-42 phosphorylation in this genetic background. To bolster their model and to circumvent this issue, it should be feasible to generate a kin-20 degron allele and to perform the LIN-42 phospho-proteomics upon inducible degradation. Alternatively, perhaps a phos-tag western blot for LIN-42 could be used to compare the kin-20 wild-type to kin-20 mutants. * We agree, and acknowledged in the discussion, that phoshorylation of LIN-42 by KIN-20 in vivo has not been demonstrated by us. However, since our data from the LIN-42∆Tail mutant also suggest that LIN-42 phosphorylation be functionally largely dispensable for KIN-20’s function in rhythmic molting, we consider further elucidation of this point a lower priority, especially considering the challenges involved. As we have seen for our unpublished work on wild-type animals, a phosphoproteomics experiments would be costly and time-consuming, with a non-trivial analysis (due to the underlying dynamics of protein level changes). A phos-tag gel would be subject to multiple confounders given the abundance of the phosphosites that we detected on immunoprecipitated LIN-42 – unlikely to stem only from KIN-20 activity – and an increase in total LIN-42 levels that we observe upon KIN-20 depletion, and thus appears unsuited to providing a meaningful answer.

      *Related to points 2 and 3 above, the authors have shown that the CKIBD mediates association with human CK1 in vitro, and is required for nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 in vivo, but not that the complex formation between LIN-42 and KIN-20 depends on the CK1BD. Given the reciprocal co-IP findings, it should be feasible to create tagged versions of lin-42(deltaCK1BD) and to determine the effect on LIN-42-KIN-20 complex formation. While there is already a b-isoform tag, an a-isoform tag would also help to address whether both the b and a isoforms interact with KIN-20 in a CK1BD-dependent manner in vivo. These strains would also allow the authors to determine how the CK1BD deletion affects overall levels/stability/rhythmic accumulation of LIN-42(a or b), which would potentially serve to strengthen their conclusions about the role of the lin-42 CK1BD. *

      As detailed in section 2, we will address the point concerning LIN-42∆CK1BD. However, due to the overlapping exons, we are unable to tag the a-isoform independently of the b-isoform. Moreover, in a western blot of a line where both a- and b-isoforms are tagged, we have observed only little or no LIN-42a signal, suggesting that, like the c-isoform, its expression may be more limited, making biochemical characterization difficult. Hence, these experiments are not feasible.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In their manuscript "A conserved chronobiological complex times C. elegans development", Spangler, Braun, Ashley et al. investigate the mechanisms through which the PERIOD orthologue, lin-42, regulates rhythmic molting in C. elegans. Through precise genetic manipulations, the authors identify a particular region of lin-42, the 'CK1BD', which regulates molting timing, with less effect on other lin-42 phenotypes (e.g. heterochrony). They show that LIN-42 and the casein kinase 1 (CK1) homologue KIN-20 interact in vivo, and identify phosphorylation sites of LIN-42. Using biochemical assays, they find that the CK1BD of LIN-42 is sufficient for interaction with the human homologue of KIN-20, CK1, in vitro. The LIN-42 CK1BD is also required for the proper nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 in vivo. Furthermore, a point mutation that should disrupt the catalytic activity of KIN-20 also shows an irregular molting phenotype, similar to the lin-42 CK1BD mutant. The manuscript is very well-written and the data and methods are well-presented and detailed. Overall this work makes a convincing case that the C. elegans lin-42:Kin-20 and mammalian period:Ck1 interactions have functionally conserved roles in the oscillatory developmental programs of each organism (molting timing and circadian rhythms, respectively), with a few caveats below that can be addressed.

      Major comments:

      1. The authors have shown that LIN-42 is phosphorylated in vivo, but the dependence of this phosphorylation on KIN-20 is not fully addressed. In the discussion (lines 417-420), the authors mention that the unhealthy phenotype of the kin-20 mutant animals prevented them from assessing LIN-42 phosphorylation in this genetic background. To bolster their model and to circumvent this issue, it should be feasible to generate a kin-20 degron allele and to perform the LIN-42 phospho-proteomics upon inducible degradation. Alternatively, perhaps a phos-tag western blot for LIN-42 could be used to compare the kin-20 wild-type to kin-20 mutants.
      2. For technical reasons, the in vitro biochemistry was done using human CK1 protein. There are a few places (e.g. results, line 248 and discussion line 437), where the language, in my opinion, is extrapolating the CK1 results too strongly to KIN-20. The authors mention that feedback inhibition is a known property of human CK1. It is indeed quite striking that the LIN-42 CK1BD region interacts with and is phosphorylated by the human counterpart of KIN-20, and that feedback inhibition is also seen! However, the language about KIN-20 itself should be softened, since there does not appear to be clear evidence that KIN-20 exhibits the same properties as human CK1 (unless perhaps human CK1 can functionally replace KIN-20 in worms, or the proteins were extremely similar?)
      3. The role of the three LIN-42 isoforms should be further clarified. Minimally, it should be explained why the alleles where both b and c isoforms should be flag-tagged seem to only produce detectable b isoform (e.g. Fig. 2C).
      4. Related to points 2 and 3 above, the authors have shown that the CKIBD mediates association with human CK1 in vitro, and is required for nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 in vivo, but not that the complex formation between LIN-42 and KIN-20 depends on the CK1BD. Given the reciprocal co-IP findings, it should be feasible to create tagged versions of lin-42(deltaCK1BD) and to determine the effect on LIN-42-KIN-20 complex formation. While there is already a b-isoform tag, an a-isoform tag would also help to address whether both the b and a isoforms interact with KIN-20 in a CK1BD-dependent manner in vivo. These strains would also allow the authors to determine how the CK1BD deletion affects overall levels/stability/rhythmic accumulation of LIN-42(a or b), which would potentially serve to strengthen their conclusions about the role of the lin-42 CK1BD.
      5. In the molting timing assay, there is an unexpected result where the delta-C-terminal-tail lin-42 allele resembles the n1089 (N-terminal deletion) (line 315). Could the authors more clearly explain this finding?

      Minor comments:

      1. The correspondence between the LIN-42 "SYQ" and "LT" motifs and the motifs referred to as "A" and "B" should be clarified, and consistent names/labels used. Are these interchangeable names? If it is necessary to use both names, the differences between SYQ/LT and A/B should be made more clear.
      2. For data presented as "% of animals", please indicate the number of animals scored (e.g. egl, alae assays - ~ how many animals per replicate (dot)?).
      3. Line 145-148 - Mentioning the relevant phenotype(s) of the lin-42 null allele from the cited paper would provide a good point of comparison here.
      4. Line 201 - the phrase "This is also true for the proteins:" is unclear, as the previous sentence states that both lin-42 and kin-20 mRNAs oscillate, while the next sentence says that only LIN-42 protein oscillates.
      5. Line 231 - please explain the significance of the 'lower response signal' in the BLI assay for the CKIBD(no tail).
      6. Fig. 2 - C/D - the genotype lane labels should I think indicate an N-terminal rather than C-terminal LIN-42 tag.
      7. Fig. 6, line 367 - lin-42 is variably described as promoting increased KIN-20 'nuclear accumulation' or 'localization'. I think that 'accumulation' is more accurate, as it doesn't imply a specific mechanism for the difference (transport vs stabilization, etc.)
      8. Fig 6B - an overlay of the panels or another way of quantifying the colocalization would make this result more clear.

      Significance

      This work presents a major mechanistic and conceptual advance in our understanding of the role of lin-42/Period, a conserved key regulator of C. elegans development. Previously, it was not clear if the heterochronic and circadian functions of lin-42 were genetically separable, nor was it known how LIN-42 physically interacted with the CK1 homologue. This work addresses these questions using precise genome engineering and detailed phenotypic and biochemical approaches. The work also reveals the conservation of bi-directional/reciprocal regulation between lin-42 and kin-20. The main limitations of the study, which can potentially be addressed as outlined in the 'major points' above, are that evidence should be provided that lin-42 phosphorylation depends on kin-20 in vivo, and that the CK1BD mediates the interaction in vivo (since the in vitro work is with human CK1). As the authors indicate, this is the first 'conserved clock module' of this type, and this work will therefore be of significant interest to both the C. elegans developmental biology and the more general biological timing fields.

      Field of expertise of the reviewer- C. elegans genetics and development.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This study represents pioneering work on LIN-42, the C. elegans ortholog of PER, uncovering its role in molting rhythms and heterochronic timing. A key strength of this work lies in its integrative approach, combining genetic and developmental analyses in C. elegans with biochemical characterization of LIN-42 protein.

      At the organismal level, the authors take advantage of the power of C. elegans as a model system, employing precise genetic manipulations and high-resolution developmental assays to dissect the contributions of LIN-42 and its interaction partner KIN-20, the C. elegans ortholog of CK1, to molting rhythms. Their findings provide in vivo evidence that binding of LIN-42 with KIN-20 promotes the nuclear accumulation of KIN-20 and is crucial for molting rhythms, while its PAS domain appears dispensable for this function. This detailed phenotypic analysis of multiple LIN-42 and KIN-20 mutants represents a significant contribution to our understanding of the developmental clock.

      At the biochemical level, the study provides a detailed analysis of the mechanism underlying LIN-42's interaction with CK1, demonstrating that LIN-42 contains a functionally conserved CK1-binding domain (CK1BD). Through their in vitro kinase assays and structural insights, the authors identified distinct roles for CK1BD-A and CK1BD-B: the former in kinase inhibition and the latter in stable CK1 binding and phosphorylation. Importantly, their data align well with previous findings on PER-CK1 regulation in mammalian and Drosophila systems, reinforcing the evolutionary conservation of key clock components.

      Overall, this work stands out for its deep and important insights into how CK1-mediated regulation extends beyond the circadian clock to regulate the developmental clock. The combination of genetic approaches with biochemical analyses makes this an outstanding contribution to both chronobiology and nematode developmental biology.

      Major comment 1:

      In Figure 2D, I could not find a crucial control if the authors claim that KIN-20 binds to LIN-42. For example, a single mutant of LIN-42-3xFLAG could be used as a control for the double mutant.

      Major comment 2:

      The sizes of the KIN20 bands were very diverged (~40 kDa and ~60 kDa), but the authors provide no explanation for this.

      Major comment 3:

      Regarding the MS study, the raw data are available, but the detailed supplemental Excel files would be more informative for readers. For example, are other interactors such as REV-ERB/NHR-85 detected in Figure 2A? Regarding Figure 4F, the list of phosphorylation sites and MS scores is also informative.

      Major comment 4:

      It is an important finding that the PAS domain of LIN-42 is not essential for the molting rhythms. Is the PAS domain also dispensable for binding with KIN-20?

      Major comment 5 (Optional):

      In this study, the authors carefully performed in vitro kinase assays, and I strongly suggest that they investigate whether the CKI-mediated phosphorylation of LIN-42 is temperature-compensated and whether the CKI-BD-AB regions affect it.

      Major comment 6 (Optional):

      In Figure 6, the authors argue that the CKI-BD of LIN-42 is important for CK1 nuclear translocation. It would be better to show the effect of the nuclear accumulation of CKI on nuclear proteins, like the mammalian CKI-PER2-CLOCK story. Does CKI localization affect phosphorylation status of other clock-related proteins including REV-ERB/NHR-85? Phospho-proteome analysis would identify nuclear substrates of CK1. In addition, is phosphorylation of LIN-42 dispensable for the CK1 nuclear translocation?

      Major comment 7 (Optional):

      LIN-42 rhythmic expression could drive rhythmic nuclear accumulation of KIN-20. It would be better to examine this possibility using kin-20::GFP in lin-42 mutants.

      Minor 1:

      I could not find the full gel images of the Western blot analyses as supplemental materials.

      Minor 2:

      The authors discussed a conserved module in two different clocks. A statement regarding a recently published paper (Hiroki and Yoshitane, Commun Biol, 2024) would be informative for readers.

      Referee cross-commenting

      I basically agree with reviewer 1 and hope that this paper will be published soon as it is very valuable for our field. I have constructively pointed out some parts that could be improved, but depending on the editor's judgement, I believe that even if not all of these are revised, it will be sufficient for publication.

      Significance

      This work stands out for its deep and important insights into how CK1-mediated regulation extends beyond the circadian clock to regulate the developmental clock. The combination of genetic approaches with biochemical analyses makes this an outstanding contribution to both chronobiology and nematode developmental biology.

      I strongly suggest editors to accept this study with minor modifications according to the following comments.

    1. Live Migration One feature not found in general-purpose operating systems but found in type 0 and type 1 hypervisors is the live migration of a running guest from one system to another. We mentioned this capability earlier. Here, we explore the details of how live migration works and why VMMs can implement it relatively easily while general-purpose operating systems, in spite of some research attempts, cannot. First, let's consider how live migration works. A running guest on one system is copied to another system running the same VMM. The copy occurs with so little interruption of service that users logged in to the guest, as well as network connections to the guest, continue without noticeable impact. This rather astonishing ability is very powerful in resource management and hardware administration. After all, compare it with the steps necessary without virtualization: we must warn users, shut down the processes, possibly move the binaries, and restart the processes on the new system. Only then can users access the services again. With live migration, we can decrease the load on an overloaded system or make hardware or system changes with no discernable disruption for users. Live migration is made possible by the well-defined interface between each guest and the VMM and the limited state the VMM maintains for the guest. The VMM migrates a guest via the following steps: 1. The source VMM establishes a connection with the target VMM and confirms that it is allowed to send a guest. 2. The target creates a new guest by creating a new VCPU, new nested page table, and other state storage. 3. The source sends all read-only memory pages to the target. 4. The source sends all read–write pages to the target, marking them as clean. 5. The source repeats step 4, because during that step some pages were probably modified by the guest and are now dirty. These pages need to be sent again and marked again as clean. 6. When the cycle of steps 4 and 5 becomes very short, the source VMM freezes the guest, sends the VCPU's final state, other state details, and the final dirty pages, and tells the target to start running the guest. Once the target acknowledges that the guest is running, the source terminates the guest.

      Live migration allows moving a running guest from one physical system to another with minimal downtime. This feature enhances resource management and hardware maintenance, avoiding service disruptions. The migration process involves copying guest memory, transferring CPU state, and synchronizing updates to ensure a seamless transition. VMMs minimize interruptions by iteratively transferring memory pages until only a small set remains, at which point the guest is frozen, final state is transferred, and execution resumes on the target machine. Live migration is a powerful feature unique to virtualization, enabling dynamic workload balancing and system upgrades without impacting user experience.

    2. Frequently, the free-space list is implemented as a bitmap or bit vector. Each block is represented by 1 bit. If the block is free, the bit is 1; if the block is allocated, the bit is 0. For example, consider a disk where blocks 2, 3, 4, 5, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 17, 18, 25, 26, and 27 are free and the rest of the blocks are allocated. The free-space bitmap would be 001111001111110001100000011100000 ... The main advantage of this approach is its relative simplicity and its efficiency in finding the first free block or n consecutive free blocks on the disk. Indeed, many computers supply bit-manipulation instructions that can be used effectively for that purpose. One technique for finding the first free block on a system that uses a bit vector to allocate space is to sequentially check each word in the bitmap to see whether that value is not 0, since a 0-valued word contains only 0 bits and represents a set of allocated blocks. The first non-0 word is scanned for the first 1 bit, which is the location of the first free block. The calculation of the block number is (number of bits per word) × (number of 0-value words) + offset of first 1 bit. Again, we see hardware features driving software functionality. Unfortunately, bit vectors are inefficient unless the entire vector is kept in main memory (and is written to the device containing the file system occasionally for recovery needs). Keeping it in main memory is possible for smaller devices but not necessarily for larger ones. A 1.3-GB disk with 512-byte blocks would need a bitmap of over 332 KB to track its free blocks, although clustering the blocks in groups of four reduces this number to around 83 KB per disk. A 1-TB disk with 4-KB blocks would require 32 MB (240 / 212 = 228 bits = 225 bytes = 25 MB) to store its bit map. Given that disk size constantly increases, the problem with bit vectors will continue to esca

      A common free-space tracking method uses bitmaps, where each block is represented by a bit—1 for free, 0 for allocated. This approach simplifies searching for available blocks, as bitwise operations efficiently locate the first free block. However, bitmaps consume significant memory, especially for large disks. For instance, a 1-TB disk with 4-KB blocks needs 32 MB for a bit vector. Keeping the entire vector in memory speeds up access but may be infeasible for very large storage devices. Clustering blocks into groups can reduce memory usage. Despite its efficiency, this method struggles with scalability as storage sizes grow.

    1. § 3º
      • Processo(s): RE 882.461
      • Tema: 816
      • Relator: Min. Dias Toffoli

      Título:

      a) Incidência do ISSQN em operação de industrialização por encomenda, realizada em materiais fornecidos pelo contratante, quando referida operação configura etapa intermediária do ciclo produtivo de mercadoria.

      b) Limites para a fixação da multa fiscal moratória, tendo em vista a vedação constitucional ao efeito confiscatório.

      O Tribunal fixou a seguinte tese:

      1. É inconstitucional a incidência do ISS a que se refere o subitem 14.05 da Lista anexa à LC nº 116/03 se o objeto é destinado à industrialização ou à comercialização;

      2. As multas moratórias instituídas pela União, Estados, Distrito Federal e municípios devem observar o teto de 20% do débito tributário", e, no que diz respeito apenas à primeira tese fixada, atribuiu eficácia ex nunc, a contar da data de publicação da ata de julgamento do mérito, para:

      a) impossibilitar a repetição de indébito do ISS em favor de quem recolheu esse imposto até a véspera da referida data, vedando, nesse caso, a cobrança do IPI e do ICMS em relação aos mesmos fatos geradores;

      b) impedir que os municípios cobrem o ISS em relação aos fatos geradores ocorridos até a véspera daquela data.

      1. Ficam ressalvadas (i) as ações judiciais ajuizadas até a véspera da mesma data, inclusive as de repetição de indébito e as execuções fiscais em que se discuta a incidência do ISS, e (ii) as hipóteses de comprovada bitributação relativas a fatos geradores ocorridos até a véspera da mencionada data, casos em que o contribuinte terá direito à repetição do indébito do ISS e não do IPI/ICMS, respeitado o prazo prescricional, independentemente da propositura de ação judicial até esse marco.

      2. No caso de não recolhimento nem do ISS nem do IPI/ICMS, o Tribunal entendeu pela incidência do IPI/ICMS em relação aos fatos geradores ocorridos até a véspera da publicação da ata de julgamento do mérito.”

    2. guardas municipais
      • RE 846854 - Repercussão Geral – Mérito (Tema 544)
      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno
      • Relator(a): Min. LUIZ FUX
      • Redator(a) do acórdão: Min. ALEXANDRE DE MORAES
      • Julgamento: 01/08/2017
      • Publicação: 07/02/2018

      • As Guardas Municipais executam atividade de segurança pública (art. 144, § 8º, da CF), essencial ao atendimento de necessidades inadiáveis da comunidade (art. 9º, § 1º, CF), pelo que se submetem às restrições firmadas pelo Supremo Tribunal Federal no julgamento do ARE 654.432 (Rel. Min. EDSON FACHIN, redator para acórdão Min. ALEXANDRE DE MORAES, Tribunal Pleno, julgado em 5/4/2017)


      • ADPF 995
      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno
      • Relator(a): Min. ALEXANDRE DE MORAES
      • Julgamento: 28/08/2023
      • Publicação: 09/10/2023 ODS 16 - Paz, Justiça e Instituições Eficazes

      DIREITO CONSTITUCIONAL E SEGURANÇA PÚBLICA. ART. 144, §8º, DA CONSTITUIÇÃO. RECONHECIMENTO DAS GUARDAS MUNICIPAIS COMO ÓRGÃO DE SEGURANÇA PÚBLICA. LEGÍTIMA OPÇÃO DO CONGRESSO NACIONAL AO INSTITUIR O SISTEMA ÚNICO DE SEGURANÇA PÚBLICA (LEI N° 13.675/18). PRECEDENTES. PROCEDÊNCIA DO PEDIDO. 1. É evidente a necessidade de união de esforços para o combate à criminalidade organizada e violenta, não se justificando, nos dias atuais da realidade brasileira, a atuação separada e estanque de cada uma das Polícias Federal, Civis e Militares e das Guardas Municipais; pois todas fazem parte do Sistema Único de Segurança Pública.

      1. Essa nova perspectiva de atuação na área de segurança pública, fez com que o Plenário desta Suprema Corte, no julgamento do RE 846.854/SP, reconhecesse que as Guardas Municipais executam atividade de segurança pública (art. 144, § 8º, da CF), essencial ao atendimento de necessidades inadiáveis da comunidade (art. 9º, § 1º, da CF).
      2. O reconhecimento dessa posição institucional das Guardas Municipais possibilitou ao , com CONGRESO NACIONAL, em legítima opção legislativa, no § 7º do artigo 144 da Constituição Federal, editar a Lei nº 13.675, de 11/6/2018, na qual as Guardas Municipais são colocadas como integrantes operacionais do Sistema Único de Segurança Pública (art. 9º, § 1º, inciso VII).
      3. O quadro normativo constitucional e jurisprudencial dessa SUPREMA CORTE em relação às Guardas Municipais permite concluir que se trata de órgão de segurança pública, integrante do Sistema Único de Segurança Pública (SUSP).
      4. Arguição de Descumprimento de Preceito Fundamental conhecida e julgada procedente para, nos termos do artigo 144, §8º da CF, CONCEDER INTERPRETAÇÃO CONFORME À CONSTITUIÇÃO aos artigo 4º da Lei 13.022/14 e artigo 9º da 13.675/18 DECLARANDO INCONSTITUCIONAL todas as interpretações judiciais que excluam as Guardas Municipais, devidamente criadas e instituídas, como integrantes do Sistema de Segurança Pública.

      • Informativo nº 791
      • 18 de outubro de 2023.
      • TERCEIRA SEÇÃO
      • Processo: HC 830.530-SP, Rel. Ministro Rogerio Schietti Cruz, Terceira Seção, por unanimidade, julgado em 27/9/2023, DJe 4/10/2023.

      Ramo do Direito DIREITO CONSTITUCIONAL, DIREITO PROCESSUAL PENAL

      Paz, Justiça e Instituições EficazesTema <br /> Guardas municipais. Exercício de atividade de segurança pública que não se equipara por completo às polícias. Art. 301 do CPP. Flagrante delito. Tráfico de drogas. Não ocorrência. Art. 244 do CPP. Busca pessoal. Ausência de relação com as finalidades da guarda municipal. Impossibilidade. Prova ilícita.

      DESTAQUE - O fato de as guardas municipais não haverem sido incluídas nos incisos do art. 144, caput, da CF não afasta a constatação de que elas exercem atividade de segurança pública e integram o Sistema Único de Segurança Pública. Isso, todavia, não significa que possam ter a mesma amplitude de atuação das polícias.

      INFORMAÇÕES DO INTEIRO TEOR - O fato de as guardas municipais não haverem sido incluídas nos incisos do art. 144, caput, da Constituição Federal não afasta a constatação de que elas exercem atividade de segurança pública e integram o Sistema Único de Segurança Pública. Isso, todavia, não significa que possam ter a mesma amplitude de atuação das polícias.

      • Bombeiros militares, por exemplo, integram o rol de órgãos de segurança pública previsto nos incisos do art. 144, caput, da Constituição, mas nem por isso se cogita que possam realizar atividades alheias às suas atribuições, como fazer patrulhamento ostensivo e revistar pessoas em via pública à procura de drogas.

      • O Supremo Tribunal Federal, apesar de reconhecer em diversos julgados que as guardas municipais integram o Sistema Único de Segurança Pública e exercem atividade dessa natureza, nunca as equiparou por completo aos órgãos policiais para todos os fins.

      • Não se pode confundir "poder de polícia" com "poder das polícias" ou "poder policial". "Poder de polícia" é conceito de direito administrativo previsto no art. 78 do Código Tributário Nacional e explicado pela doutrina como "atividade do Estado consistente em limitar o exercício dos direitos individuais em benefício do interesse público". Já o "poder das polícias" ou "poder policial", típico dos órgãos policiais, é marcado pela possibilidade de uso direto da força física para fazer valer a autoridade estatal, o que não se verifica nas demais formas de manifestação do poder de polícia, que somente são legitimadas a se valer de mecanismos indiretos de coerção, tais como multas e restrições administrativas de direitos. Um agente de vigilância sanitária, por exemplo, quando aplica multa e autua um restaurante por descumprimento a normas de higiene, o faz em exercício de seu poder de polícia, mas nem de longe se pode compará-lo com um agente policial que usa a força física para submeter alguém a uma revista pessoal.

      • Dessa forma, o "poder das polícias" ou "poder policial" diz respeito a um específico aspecto do poder de polícia relacionado à repressão de crimes em geral pelos entes policiais, de modo que todo órgão policial exerce poder de polícia, mas nem todo poder de polícia é necessariamente exercido por um órgão policial.

      • Conquanto não sejam órgãos policiais propriamente ditos, as guardas municipais exercem poder de polícia e também algum poder policial residual e excepcional dentro dos limites de suas atribuições. A busca pessoal - medida coercitiva invasiva e direta - é exemplo desse poder, razão pela qual só pode ser realizada dentro do escopo de atuação da guarda municipal.

      • Ao dispor, no art. 301 do CPP, que "qualquer do povo poderá [...] prender quem quer que seja encontrado em flagrante delito", o legislador, tendo em conta o princípio da autodefesa da sociedade e a impossibilidade de que o Estado seja onipresente, contemplou apenas os flagrantes visíveis de plano, como, por exemplo, a situação de alguém que, no transporte público, flagra um indivíduo subtraindo sorrateiramente a carteira do bolso da calça de outrem e o detém. Distinta, no entanto, é a hipótese em que a situação de flagrante só é evidenciada depois de realizar atividades invasivas de polícia ostensiva ou investigativa, como a busca pessoal ou domiciliar, uma vez que não é qualquer do povo que pode investigar, interrogar, abordar ou revistar seus semelhantes.

      • A adequada interpretação do art. 244 do Código de Processo Penal é a de que a fundada suspeita de posse de corpo de delito é um requisito necessário, mas não suficiente, por si só, para autorizar a realização de busca pessoal, porque não é a qualquer cidadão que é dada a possibilidade de avaliar a presença dele. Em outras palavras, mesmo se houver elementos concretos indicativos de fundada suspeita da posse de corpo de delito, a busca pessoal só será válida se realizada pelos agentes públicos com atribuição para tanto, a quem compete avaliar a presença de tais indícios e proceder à abordagem e à revista do suspeito.

      • Da mesma forma que os guardas municipais não são equiparáveis a policiais, também não são cidadãos comuns, de modo que, se, por um lado, não podem realizar tudo o que é autorizado às polícias, por outro, também não estão plenamente reduzidos à mera condição de "qualquer do povo". Trata-se de agentes públicos que desempenham atividade de segurança pública e são dotados do importante poder-dever de proteger os bens, serviços e instalações municipais, assim como os seus respectivos usuários.

      • Dessa forma, é possível e recomendável que exerçam a vigilância, por exemplo, de creches, escolas e postos de saúde municipais, para garantir que não tenham sua estrutura danificada por vândalos, ou que seus frequentadores não sejam vítimas de furto, roubo ou algum tipo de violência, a fim de permitir a continuidade da prestação do serviço público municipal correlato a tais instalações. Nessa linha, guardas municipais podem realizar patrulhamento preventivo na cidade, mas sempre vinculados à finalidade da corporação, sem que lhes seja autorizado atuar como verdadeira polícia para reprimir e investigar a criminalidade urbana ordinária.

      • Não é das guardas municipais, mas sim das polícias, como regra, a competência para investigar, abordar e revistar indivíduos suspeitos da prática de tráfico de drogas ou de outros delitos cuja prática não atente de maneira clara, direta e imediata contra os bens, serviços e instalações municipais ou as pessoas que os estejam usando naquele momento.

      • Poderão, todavia, realizar busca pessoal em situações excepcionais - e por isso interpretadas restritivamente - nas quais se demonstre concretamente haver clara, direta e imediata relação com a finalidade da corporação, como instrumento imprescindível para a realização de suas atribuições. Vale dizer, salvo na hipótese de flagrante delito, só é possível que as guardas municipais realizem excepcionalmente busca pessoal se, além de justa causa para a medida (fundada suspeita), houver pertinência com a necessidade de tutelar a integridade de bens e instalações ou assegurar a adequada execução dos serviços municipais, assim como proteger os seus respectivos usuários, o que não se confunde com permissão para desempenharem atividades ostensivas ou investigativas típicas das polícias militar e civil para combate da criminalidade urbana ordinária em qualquer contexto.

      • No caso, guardas municipais estavam em patrulhamento quando depararam com o acusado em "atitude suspeita". Por isso, decidiram abordá-lo e, depois de revista pessoal, encontraram certa quantidade de drogas no bolso traseiro e nas vestes íntimas dele, o que ensejou a sua prisão em flagrante delito.

      • Ainda que, eventualmente, se considerasse provável que o réu ocultasse objetos ilícitos, isto é, que havia fundada suspeita de que ele escondia drogas, não existia certeza sobre tal situação a ponto de autorizar a imediata prisão em flagrante por parte de qualquer do povo, com amparo no art. 301 do CPP. Tanto que só depois de constatado que havia drogas dentro do bolso e das vestes íntimas do abordado é que se deu voz de prisão em flagrante para ele, e não antes.

      • Portanto, por não haver sido demonstrada concretamente a existência de relação clara, direta e imediata com a proteção dos bens, serviços ou instalações municipais, ou de algum cidadão que os estivesse usando, não estavam os guardas municipais autorizados, naquela situação, a avaliar a presença da fundada suspeita e efetuar a busca pessoal no acusado.

    3. § 8º

      Guardas municipais: competência legislativa e exercício de policiamento ostensivo e comunitário - RE 608.588/SP (Tema 656 RG)

      TESE FIXADA: - É constitucional, no âmbito dos municípios, o exercício de ações de segurança urbana pelas Guardas Municipais, inclusive policiamento ostensivo e comunitário, respeitadas as atribuições dos demais órgãos de segurança pública previstos no art. 144 da Constituição Federal e excluída qualquer atividade de polícia judiciária, sendo submetidas ao controle externo da atividade policial pelo Ministério Público, nos termos do artigo 129, inciso VII, da CF. Conforme o art. 144, § 8º, da Constituição Federal, as leis municipais devem observar as normas gerais fixadas pelo Congresso Nacional.

      • A atuação legislativa local para disciplinar as atribuições das guardas municipais destinadas à proteção de bens, serviços e instalações do município deve estar adequada às especificidades locais e à finalidade constitucional de promoção da segurança pública no âmbito da respectiva competência e em cooperação com os demais órgãos de segurança.
      • O poder normativo conferido ao legislador municipal tem de se compatibilizar com a repartição constitucional de competências. Para tanto, as leis municipais que instituem suas respectivas guardas devem se adequar às especificidades locais, que restringem o poder legiferante, e à finalidade constitucional de promoção da segurança pública, além de observar as normas gerais fixadas pelo Congresso Nacional (CF/1988, art. 144, § 8º) (1).
      • O texto constitucional não realizou uma escolha categórica sobre a forma de atuação das guardas municipais, apenas estabeleceu as balizas norteadoras e atribuiu sua concretização ao legislador local.
      • Nesse contexto, o Estatuto Geral das Guardas Municipais (Lei nº 13.022/2014) foi julgado constitucional por esta Corte (2). Ele contribui para delimitar o espaço normativo dado pela Constituição em respeito ao pacto federativo e evidencia o caráter colaborativo entre os entes que atuam na segurança pública e devem atuar de forma conjunta e harmônica.

      É constitucional — e não afronta o pacto federativo — o exercício do policiamento ostensivo e comunitário pela guarda municipal no âmbito local correspondente, desde que respeitadas as atribuições dos outros entes federativos.

      • As guardas municipais podem exercer ações de segurança urbana e a atribuição do policiamento ostensivo e comunitário se insere no desenho normativo do federalismo de cooperação em prol da segurança pública, que é um dever do Estado e direito e responsabilidade de todos. Ademais, o policiamento ostensivo não é exclusivo da polícia militar.
      • As guardas municipais integram o Sistema Único de Segurança Pública – Susp (Lei nº 13.675/2018) e, por força do art. 144 da CF/1988, atuam diretamente na área de segurança pública, naquilo que tem pertinência com a esfera da municipalidade.
      • Por fim, além de a atividade policial exercida pelas guardas municipais se submeter ao controle externo do Ministério Público, cuja fiscalização objetiva evitar eventuais abusos (CF/1988, art. 129, VII), elas não podem realizar atividade de polícia judiciária, pois exclusiva da polícia civil e da Polícia Federal, responsáveis por investigar e apurar infrações penais.
      • Na espécie, trata-se de recurso extraordinário interposto contra acórdão do Tribunal de Justiça do Estado de São Paulo que, em ação direta, declarou a inconstitucionalidade do dispositivo de lei municipal em que atribuído à guarda local o exercício de ações de segurança urbana, inclusive policiamento preventivo e comunitário, promovendo a mediação de conflitos.
      • A decisão recorrida, em suma, considerou que o mencionado preceito invadiu competência da polícia militar para a realização do policiamento ostensivo, em afronta à norma da Constituição estadual que reproduz o disposto no art. 144, § 8º, da CF/1988.
      • Com base nesses e em outros entendimentos, o Plenário, por maioria, ao apreciar o Tema 656 da repercussão geral, (i) deu provimento ao recurso extraordinário para declarar a constitucionalidade do art. 1º, I, da Lei nº 13.866/2004 do Município de São Paulo/SP, em sua redação original (3) e naquela dada pela Lei paulista nº 14.879/2009 (4); e (ii) fixou a tese anteriormente citada.
    1. 1 A Choose the option (a–c) which is NOT possible ineach sentence
      1. Our brains are constantly ...... with choices. a) faced — сталкиваются

      b) confronted — противостоят

      c) opposed — противятся Разница:

      "Faced" и "confronted" означают, что мозг сталкивается с выбором, что подходит по смыслу.

      "Opposed" означает активное сопротивление, что не подходит в данном контексте.

      1. The house is quite ...... , with no neighbours nearby. a) lone — одинокий (обычно о человеке)

      b) isolated — изолированный

      c) secluded — уединенный Разница:

      "Isolated" и "secluded" подходят для описания дома, который находится вдали от других.

      "Lone" обычно используется для описания одиночества людей, а не мест.

      1. Go round the field ...... a) anti-clockwise — против часовой стрелки (британский вариант)

      b) counter-clockwise — против часовой стрелки (американский вариант)

      c) the wrong way round — в неправильном направлении Разница:

      "Anti-clockwise" и "counter-clockwise" означают одно и то же, но используются в разных вариантах английского.

      "The wrong way round" означает, что движение происходит неправильно, что не подходит по смыслу.

      1. The company is ...... a period of restructuring. a) taking up — начинать (обычно хобби или деятельность)

      b) going ahead with — продолжать, двигаться вперед

      c) embarking upon — начинать (что-то важное или новое) Разница:

      "Going ahead with" и "embarking upon" подходят для описания начала процесса реструктуризации.

      "Taking up" не подходит, так как обычно относится к началу хобби или занятия.

      1. My client ...... the view that climate change is still a question of debate. a) subscribes to — придерживается (мнения)

      b) concurs with — соглашается с

      c) sees eye to eye with — полностью согласен с (кем-то) Разница:

      "Subscribes to" и "concurs with" подходят для описания согласия с мнением.

      "Sees eye to eye with" используется, когда два человека согласны друг с другом, а не с идеей.

      1. ...... deliveries – all city zones! a) Take-over — захват, поглощение

      b) Take-out — еда на вынос

      c) Take-away — еда на вынос (британский вариант) Разница:

      "Take-out" и "take-away" означают еду на вынос, что подходит по смыслу.

      "Take-over" относится к бизнесу (поглощение компании) и не подходит здесь.

      1. Need to sort something with the mayor? Ask Petros to help, he’s got a lot of ...... a) influence — влияние

      b) persuasion — убеждение (как процесс)

      c) clout — влияние, вес (разговорное) Разница:

      "Influence" и "clout" подходят для описания способности влиять на других.

      "Persuasion" относится к процессу убеждения, а не к наличию влияния.

      1. The shortage of nursing staff is a ...... problem. a) worrying — вызывающий беспокойство

      b) vexing — раздражающий, досадный

      c) concerned — обеспокоенный (обычно о человеке) Разница:

      "Worrying" и "vexing" подходят для описания проблемы.

      "Concerned" описывает чувство человека, а не характеристику проблемы.

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      We thank the reviewers for their comments and have included substantial new data to strengthen the work by specifically addressing questions regarding the molecular mechanisms driving the proteomic and phenotypic changes observed in these disease models. We have generated a new ganglioside disease model (GM1 gangliosidosis) and demonstrated that the lysosomal exocytosis mechanism identified for GM2 gangliosidosis is a conserved mechanism that alters the PM proteome (see new Figure 5).

      We have also carried out substantial additional experimental work to address the question of whether specific protein-lipid interactions drive some of these changes. We have preliminary data supporting this (included below) but we are not confident that these data are robust enough for inclusion in this manuscript. This work required substantial in vitro experiments including the expression and purification of several proteins for use in liposome binding assays. Although these data are promising, they have been challenging to reproduce and we would prefer to develop this work further for inclusion in a subsequent paper.

      Although not requested by any reviewers we have also included substantial additional multielectrode array (MEA) data in Figure 4 to further support the phenotypic changes to electrical signalling seen in the Tay Sachs disease model.

      We would like to note that even without these new data the reviewers highlighted that the “high-quality data presented significantly advance the field” and that the work “exposes key conceptual novelties” using “new insight” and “new tools” that shed “light on the complex pathophysiology that links lipid accumulation to neuronal dysfunction”. And that this highlights “an underappreciated dimension of these diseases” allowing them to be “understood better thanks to this study”. More generally the reviewers state that the work is of interest to both “clinicians and basic researchers” and is relevant to “broader fields in cellular and neurodegenerative biology”.

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      Reviewer 1

      Confirmation of Neuronal Differentiation: To confirm neuronal differentiation in their i3N cell model, the authors show qPCR results indicating the expression of mature neuronal markers and the downregulation of stem cell markers by day 14. However, single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) could provide a more detailed evaluation of the differentiation process, addressing the fine-grained cell-type composition within the cell population. Depending on the results, the authors might more precisely interpret functional data and assess the possible influence of increased GM2 levels on cell fate decisions.

      The accumulation of GM2 may not be identical across all neurons and so it is possible that, although the neuronal populations as a whole display mature differentiation, individual cells may respond differently to the amount of lipid debris. However, there are several technical reasons why obtaining samples for scRNAseq is extremely challenging. By 14 dpi the separation of individual neurons from each other is very difficult as they are in a densely grown and highly attached and interconnected network. Furthermore, the individual neurons have a highly polarized differentiated morphology with long delicate axonal and dendritic projections, that are readily cleaved and lysed in the process of harvesting and dissociation to obtain single cell suspensions for FACS sorting. In neurons, mRNAs are also abundantly localised along the length of their neuritic projections [1], thus these damaged preparations would provide unreliably meaningful data. Alternatively, sufficiently isolated individual neurons show poor survival and do not mature. If these technical difficulties could be overcome, in order to monitor altered differentiation, it would be necessary to determine which timepoint was most relevant to capture differences between day 0 stem cells and day 28 when they are synchronously firing glutamatergic neuron cultures. For this analysis to be robust it would require sample preparation and analysis of multiple stages of the differentiation process. For all the reasons above we cannot address this reviewer’s request.

      Mechanistic Links Between Lipid Accumulation and Proteomic Changes: The authors report specific proteome changes upon HEXA/B KO. What are the mechanistic links between lipid accumulation and proteomic changes? Is the overall degradative performance of lysosomes compromised? The authors note that certain proteins, such as TSPANs, can bind directly to GSL headgroups. Clarifying whether the observed proteomic changes result from specific, direct lipid-protein interactions versus indirect effects could strengthen the argument for targeted lipid-mediated proteomic shifts.

      In response to these questions, we have carried out substantial additional experimental work testing the lipid interactions of some of the proteins that are most altered in their abundance at the PM. We focussed on the top non-lysosomal proteins as we are proposing that the lysosomal ones are primarily changed due to lysosomal exocytosis, suggesting the non-lysosomal are the best candidates for direct GSL-binding. To robustly identify specific lipid-protein interactions is highly challenging but something we have demonstrated previously [2].

      In vitro lipid-binding assays require expression and purification of the proteins of interest to then be used in liposome pulldown experiments using liposomes of defined composition. As we are most interested in the specificity of the headgroup interaction we focussed on producing the extracellular portions of these proteins that would be predicted to bind these headgroups (again this is a strategy we have successfully used previously [2]). We expressed and purified the extracellular domains of three top non-lysosomal hits: CNTNAP4, CNTN5 and NTRK2 (Fig. R1A, provided in attached response document). These purified proteins were used in liposome-binding assays using liposomes composed of different sphingolipids and gangliosides (Fig. R1B). These data demonstrate that the GPI-anchored protein CNTN5 and its potential binding partner CNTNAP4 bind promiscuously to different headgroups. This may be consistent with their being incorporated into GSL-rich membrane microdomains via the GPI-anchor. Interestingly, in this assay NTRK2 demonstrates specific and substantial binding to GM2, with some weaker binding to GD3.

      These data support that the increased abundance of NTRK2 at the PM could be driven by direct interactions with the same lipid that is accumulating at the PM. As exciting and compelling as these data are, we have subsequently been unable to repeat this observation for NTRK2. We are unsure why and have tried several different strategies to test this interaction, but at this stage with only an N=1 for this observation we do not feel confident to include these data in the manuscript.

      We intend to pursue this further using a range of alternative techniques and protein constructs but this will take substantial additional time and effort that we feel go beyond the scope of this current manuscript.

      Additionally, does this phenomenon extend to other sphingolipidoses (e.g., Gaucher disease)? Comparing the proteomes of i3N cells across different sphingolipidoses could reveal whether the accumulation of distinct GSLs produces unique or shared proteomic profiles, highlighting similarities or specificities across lysosomal storage disorders.

      We agree with the reviewer that this is an interesting and important question and had intended to do this as follow-up work in a future publication. However, in the interests of addressing this point here, we are including additional data we have generated from a new i3N model of GM1 gangliosidosis. As for the GM2 gangliosidosis models, we used CRISPRi to knockdown GLB1 and have confirmed this KD by q-PCR. We have also profiled the GSL composition and quantified the increased GM1 abundance. We have followed this up with both whole-cell and PM proteomics. We have presented comparative proteomics of the two models and demonstrated that they both result in significant accumulation of lysosomal proteins both in cells and at the PM. This shared proteomic profile is consistent with lysosomal exocytosis being a conserved mechanism driving altered PM composition in these diseases. We have included this work as an additional results section and an additional figure (Figure 5) as well as expanding the discussion. For this analysis we collected mass spec data at 28 dpi based on our observations in the paper that electrical signalling was synchronised at this point (Fig 4). In the text we discuss additional changes in these new WCP data such as the appearance of other trafficking molecules such as Arl8a that further support a lysosomal exocytosis mechanism.

      In terms of the unique proteomic profiles of these diseases, the read depth of the PMP data in this case was not sufficient to confidently identify differences between the two gangliosidosis models and therefore we intend to pursue this work with additional LSDs in future studies to be included in a follow-up paper.

      In terms of mechanistic links between lipid accumulation and proteome changes, we feel these new data provide substantial additional support that the appearance of lysosomal proteins at the PM is driven by lysosomal exocytosis and have preliminary data supporting that some non-lysosomal protein changes may be driven by altered protein-lipid interactions.

      Impact of Increased PM GM2 Levels on Endocytic Pathways: Along similar lines, the authors show differences in the PM proteome and in the representation of specific PM lipid domain-associated proteins. As some of these proteins are turned over by mechanisms involving lipid domain-dependent endocytosis, the authors might want to examine the effect of increased PM GM2 levels on various endocytic pathways.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion and have attempted assays monitoring endocytosis using several approaches including the uptake of fluorescently labelled bovine serum albumin (DQ-BSA) [3–5]. These endocytosis assays are well established in standard cell lines such as HeLa cells. Despite several attempts by us to get this working in neurons using multiple alternative readouts (microscopy and plate-based fluorescence) we have been unable to measure changes in endocytosis. Exploration of alternative methods to probe Clathrin-independent/dynamin-independent endocytosis (CLIC/GEEC) suggests these pathways are difficult to observe by fluorescence microscopy as there is minimal concentration of cargo proteins during the formation of carriers before endocytosis [6]. As an alternative strategy to probe changes in lipid-domain dependent endocytosis we have analysed the proteomics data for changes in galectins but no changes were identified in the data. We also explored available tools for modulating lysosomal exocytosis and monitoring lysosomal movement including activating TRPML1 to trigger exocytosis and activating ABCA3 to drive more lipid accumulation [7–10]. Similarly to the endocytosis assays above, these were not translatable to neurons in our hands due to a range of challenges including increased toxicity of these drugs on this cell type. We have made a substantial effort to try and address these questions and have conferred with colleagues who have also reported difficulties in establishing these assays in neurons. We are keen to continue to pursue this question but due to the technical challenges we feel this work lies beyond the scope of the current manuscript.

      Multifaceted Nature of Gangliosidoses as PM Disorders: The manuscript presents an important perspective by reframing gangliosidoses as multifaceted PM disorders that disrupt neuronal function and membrane composition. By further elaborating on the connection between membrane lipid alterations, neuronal excitability, and synaptic composition, and by exploring the interplay with lysosomal dysfunction, the authors could provide a richer understanding of gangliosidoses and GSL function in general.

      We appreciate that the reviewer agrees with us that reframing gangliosidoses as more complex multifaceted diseases is important. We are not sure if there is a request here for more elaboration in the text but based on the new data included in the paper, we have expanded some of the discussion around these points. We are very enthusiastic to continue to probe the connections and interplay as described by the reviewer and this is the focus of our ongoing studies.

      Reviewer 2

      1. T-tests and one-way ANOVAs were used, but it is not clear if datasets were tested for normality and equal standard deviations. Please add these details. If data are not normal or standard deviations are unequal, other tests will have to be used.

      All graphs were checked for normality and variance in standard deviation and for figure 1F, where the data was not normally distributed, a Kruskal-Wallace test was used in place of a one-way ANOVA. All significantly different results are now labelled on graphs and the relevant tests described in the figure legends. This has also all been updated in the Supplementary data.

      1. It needs to be clearly explained how many data points were used for statistical analyses and what the data points were. E.g., N=3 independent experiments on 3 different days, each done in n=3 different wells, total n=9. Each well can be considered a biological replicate, but it's of lesser value than the "big Ns" done on different days. The authors can choose different ways of defining their N/n numbers, but it has to be transparent. The bar graphs would ideally display the data points.

      All figure legends now clearly explain N and n numbers used in experiments. Individual data points are displayed on qPCR graphs where N and n are mixed, with shapes denoting the biological repeat (N). In addition to clarification in figure legends, N and n numbers are described in the methods sections where appropriate.

      For completeness we also include here details of these N/n numbers.

      • For the q-PCR experiments, technical triplicates (repeats on the same day, n=3) were carried out for 3 separate biological replicates on different days (N=3). We have changed how these data are plotted to clarify this.
      • For the activity assays, N=3 biological replicates were carried out on cell lysates from cultures grown on different days.
      • For the microscopy analysis, coverslips from N=3 biological replicates on different days were used. n=2 coverslips per N were used to generate 15 images per N.
      • For the glycan analysis, N=3 independent cell pellets were prepared on different days.
      • For the proteomics experiments, these were done as N=3 independent cell cultures grown and prepared on different days. Specifically, one of each cell line SCRM, HEXA-1, HEXA-2, HEXB-1 and HEXB-2 were grown and harvested or biotinylated at a time (for WCP or PMP), with repeats on different days. These N=3 were then combined for the ΔHEX-A/B lines to provide N=12 biological repeats for disease cell lines to be compared to N=3 biological repeats for “SCRM” control cell lines.
      • For calcium imaging, n=4 wells for each of SCRM, ΔHEXA-1 and ΔHEXB1 were averaged and the mean from each was used to provide n=3 data points across two biological repeats of this experiment, N=2.
      • For the MEA data, we now include substantially more data than in the original manuscript (see comments at the top of this document). This is now N=3 biological replicates across n=52 wells over a time period from 38-45 dpi.
      • The N/n values and statistical tests have also all been updated in the Supplementary data.
        1. There should be a comment on how statistical power was calculated upfront and if not: how N/n numbers were chosen ("based on similar expts in the past").

      N/n numbers, as detailed above, were chosen based on previous experiments by ourselves and others, as well as recommended practice [2,11–15]. Typically, these papers do not describe the statistical power upfront. We have added statements to this effect and relevant references to the methods section of the manuscript.

      1. "This suggests that some of the proteins that are accumulating in these diseases are specifically products of lipid accumulation rather than a product of general lysosomal dysfunction. In further support of this, several lysosomal proteins including V-type ATPases (ATP6 family), mannose-6-phosphate receptor (M6PR) and biogenesis of lysosomal organelle complex subunits (BLOC1) are quantified in the WCP but are not increased in abundance." This part is confusing. It seems like the authors observe an accumulation of endolysosomes in general (page 6), but then only certain endolysosomal proteins accumulate - and the authors speculate that this is due to decreased degradation or enhanced translation (mRNA levels are unaffected). This question should be addressed better, ideally experimentally: are endolysosomes accumulating in general or not? And what defines the endolysosomal proteins that accumulate vs. those that don't? How is that regulated?

      Recently published work has identified that late endosomes/lysosomes do not possess one composition; they are dynamically remodelled and there is substantial heterogeneity in the composition of different lysosomes [16,17]. While some components, such as LAMP1 and Cathepsin D, are common across all lysosomal compartments there is considerable heterogeneity in the composition of these organelles. These studies also demonstrate that in disease-relevant conditions or upon drug treatment, lysosomes change their protein composition. For example, in a LIPL-4 KO mouse model they observe an increased abundance of Ragulator complex components, similarly to the increase in LAMTOR3 seen in our new 28 dpi WCP data for GM1 and GM2 gangliosidoses. Interestingly, in this study they demonstrate that lysosomal lipolysis leads to bigger changes in lysosomal protein composition than other pro-longevity mechanisms [17]. Another recent paper looking at a different lysosomal storage disease in microglia with accumulating GSLs and cholesterol has also identified abundance changes in a subset of lysosomal proteins including several we observe here including TTYH3, NPC1, PSAP and TSPAN7 [18]. Beyond proteomic analyses, the experimental tools for identifying these different populations are currently very limited, but these published studies support that it is possible to have accumulation of what we define as lysosomes by IF (using LAMP1 or lysotracker) but for the proteomic analysis to identify increased abundance of only a subset of lysosomal proteins.

      These papers do not identify or speculate on how these differences are regulated. Analysis of the changes in our WCP as well as the new data for GM1 gangliosidoses support that the proteins that are most changed in response to GSL accumulation are membrane proteins involved in lipid and cholesterol binding and transport (New Fig 2D and 5E and see response below). This specific enrichment suggests that the changes are directly linked to the lipid changes, thus our suggestion that these accumulate due to a need for the cell to process these lipids but also that they may get “trapped” in the membrane whorls such that they are not efficiently degraded.

      We have included the references above and a more detailed description of lysosomal heterogeneity into the main text to help address the reviewer’s questions.

      1. Fig. 1D: The GO terms are confusing. Why are there more proteins in the category lysosomal membrane than lysosome as a whole? Other categories seem to be overlapping as well.

      We apologize for the confusion; this graph does not display protein counts it is the adjusted P values for the enrichment of the term. To make this clearer, the DAVID analysis graphs are now presented in a new format. We present in this new graph the false discovery rate (FDR) (adjusted P value) which is a measure of the significance of whether that GO term is specifically enriched in the dataset. We have also expanded the GO term analysis to include molecular function and biological process descriptors in addition to the cellular component originally described. For full clarity, to the right of each term we include the number of significant hits that have this term, that being the number of proteins that are contributing to this GO term enrichment.

      1. Fig. 2C/3A: It'd be good to also show the hits that don't match the expectation/pathways of interest.

      We provide a full list in the Supplementary Information of all hits that are considered significant allowing the reader to access this information without having to download the datasets from PRIDE. We did not label all hits in these panels to avoid cluttering the image. In the main text we have focused on those that clearly fall within related categories or pathways as we feel that several “hits” in the same area represents a more compelling and confident assessment of the data. Several of the additional hits not mentioned in the main text do still match the expectations/pathways. For example, one of the top hits not labelled in the WCP is GPR155 (a cholesterol binding protein at the lysosomal membrane) and one of the top unlabelled hits in the PMP data is OPCML (a GPI-anchored protein that clusters in GSL-rich microdomains). There are some, such as KITLG (up in the PMP data), that we don’t currently have a hypothesis for why/how they change, but we are reluctant to describe and speculate upon additional isolated/orphan hits in the main text when these have not been further validated.

      1. Fig. 3: It is not intuitive that synaptic proteins in particular would accumulate at the plasma membrane due to the lipid storage defect. Are they mis-trafficked or are they at synaptic membranes? That could, e.g, be addressed by isolating synaptosomes. And why this selectivity for synaptic proteins? Neurons should have more plasma membrane that is not synaptic. And, e.g, the release of lysosomal material should not happen at synapses (and lysosomes should not deliver synaptic proteins to the PM, unless there is a failure to degrade them).

      We agree that synapses represent a relatively small proportion of the entire PM of neurons, but synapses are particularly enriched with glycosphingolipids where they affect synaptogenesis and synaptic transmission [19–22]. For these reasons we think that some synaptic proteins are particularly sensitive to these lipid changes as they are localised in GSL-rich membrane microdomains. We have now clarified this point in the text. We have also further clarified that we were not proposing that lysosomal proteins are present at the synapses. We observed that lysosomal proteins are enriched at the PM and this may be more generally across the whole PM, while the changes to synaptic proteins may or may not be localised at the synapse. We apologise for the confusion and have modified the text at the end of the PM proteomics results section to make this clearer.

      To try and address experimentally the question of whether these proteins are at synapses, we have attempted synaptosome enrichment. However, lysosomal compartments co-sedimented with synaptosomes during the preparation – LAMP1 staining was enriched in the synaptosome preparations of all samples including SCRM controls. Therefore, we cannot distinguish these compartments which is particularly problematic in this disease model.

      (7. Continued) Or is there an effect on synaptic vesicles? Are there more? Do they deliver their cargo more readily? Or is there a failure to do endocytosis of synaptic proteins, and that's why the accumulate? What is the connection between SVs and endolysosomes? More clarity would be good here.

      We do think that there is an effect on synaptic vesicles particularly as the SV proteins SYT1 and SV2b are significantly increased in abundance at the PM suggesting they are not being internalized normally. Furthermore, the new WCP data going out to 28 dpi for both GM1 and GM2 gangliosidoses have identified a significant increase in Arl8a which plays a shared role in lysosomal and SV anterograde trafficking [23,24]. Whilst previously thought of as discrete pathways, evidence now suggests that endolysosomal and SV recycling pathways form a continuum with several shared proteins involved in the fusion, trafficking and sorting in both pathways [25]. Arl8a provides a good example of an adaptor protein that functions in both pathways and also when overexpressed results in enhanced neurotransmission consistent with our studies [26]. We have adjusted the discussion text to include a description of the links between SVs and endolysosomal trafficking and the potential shared role Arl8a may be playing in both pathways.

      Regarding the question of whether there are more SVs or not, this is hard to determine directly as they are particularly small (~50 nm) and difficult to visualise or specifically stain for using microscopy. Not all SV-associated proteins are increased in the PMP data, for example SNAP25 and several other synaptotagmins are not changed in the 28 dpi data for both gangliosidosis models. We hope in the future to address SV changes more directly with higher resolution imaging such as electron microscopy or cryo-tomography but cannot currently confidently answer these specific questions.

      1. Fig. 4: The assumption that there is more synaptic activity because there are more synaptic proteins at the membrane seems to be plausible, but also speculative at this point.

      We have modified the text at the end of this results section to highlight that this is a speculative link.

      1. The possible contribution of glial cells should at least be discussed.

      We mention potential deleterious effects on bystander cells including other neurons, astrocytes and microglia in the second last paragraph of the discussion. In response to this request we have expanded and modified this text.

      Minor: there are some typos etc.

      Although no specific examples were listed, we have endeavored to find and correct typos, we have also checked for English spelling (not American) throughout.

      Reviewer 3

      1. Results section, 1st paragraph- to develop disease models- -- Please add cellular models as we already have KO mouse models.

      This has been added to the text.

      1. It was not clear what was the percentage of mutation success with their CRISPR technique.

      The CRISPR method employed here was CRISPRi so there is no mutation of the genome. Instead, inactive/dead-Cas9 is targeted to the promotor/early exon of the HEXA or HEXB gene to inhibit mRNA production. We have included qPCR data to demonstrate the extent of the KD for two different guides to each of these genes in Fig 1.

      1. Will the anti-GM2 antibody be available for other researchers? The researcher details needs to be clarified.

      The anti-GM2 antibody is not commercial available and was generated by one of the co-authors. We invite scientists with an interest in this antibody to contact the corresponding author for details.

      1. Hex activity assay was shown in 1C, but it was not clear that it is MUG or MUGS.

      We apologise for this and have relabelled these activity assay graphs and expanded the legend text to clarify how these two substrates were used to distinguish the two different KD lines. We also corrected a small mistake in the methods section.

      1. Is there a significance in Figure 2 B, 4A, 4B,4C and 4E?

      Based on additional requests from reviewer 2 we have added significance indicators and details of significance tests for several panels in Figures 1-5 including 2B and 4B. For 4A we do not state a significant difference, we use these data to select a timepoint (28 dpi) where all cell lines have synchronous (correlated) signal. The data in Figure 4C and D have been substantially updated and expanded. Analysis of the data in 4C is plotted in 4D where we show significance. For 4E we are stating that the applied stimulation (white triangles) stimulates the HEXA cells every time but the SCRM do not respond to each stimulation. It is not clear how we would quantify this difference and there is no precedent for doing this in the MEA literature or by the Axion company who provided the instrument. We have also included additional references for best practice when analysing MEA data.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      I am quite impressed with the study. The use of i3N based cellular model was well established, characterized and produced some very interesting results.

      Authors have created a cellular model of iPSC cell line for TSD and SD. They confirmed the efficacy of new cell line and then did many assays including enzymatic assays, IHC, EM, gene expression, proteomics, electrophysiological studies. The information generated is very novel and will contribute in furthering the understanding of TSD and SD pathology.

      Use of triplicates, writing the possible conclusions are clear.

      Few minor concerns:

      1. Results section, 1st paragraph- to develop disease models- -- Please add cellular models as we already have KO mouse models.
      2. It was not clear what was the percentage of mutation success with their CRISPR technique.
      3. Will the anti-GM2 antibody be available for other researchers? The researcher details needs to be clarified.
      4. Hex activity assay was shown in 1C, but it was not clear that it is MUG or MUGS.
      5. Is there a significance in Figure 2 B, 4A, 4B,4C and 4E?

      Significance

      I consider this paper to be an advancement in the field and recommend acceptance after minor revisions.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Nicholson et al. report interesting findings related to ganglioside biology. The ganglioside GM2 (a lipid with several sugar groups) is the substrate of the hydrolytic lysosomal β- hexosaminidase A (HexA) enzyme (cutting off sugar groups). When subunits of the enzyme are mutated and dysfunctional, GM2 lipids accumulate in cells (in lysosomes and in membranes). This leads to GM2 gangliosidoses, Tay-Sachs and Sandhoff diseases. The authors have generated i3Neuron-based models of Tay-Sachs and Sandhoff diseases by efficiently knocking down Hex enzymes. They observe storage of GM2, formation of "membrane whorls", and accumulation of endolysosomal proteins. The accumulating proteins seem to be largely related to lipid metabolism. Moreover, the composition of the plasma membrane is significantly impacted by both lipid and protein changes. In particular, synaptic proteins seem to accumulate at the plasma membrane.

      The following suggestions are made to improve the study:

      1. T-tests and one-way ANOVAs were used, but it is not clear if datasets were tested for normality and equal standard deviations. Please add these details. If data are not normal or standard deviations are unequal, other tests will have to be used.
      2. It needs to be clearly explained how many data points were used for statistical analyses and what the data points were. E.g., N=3 independent experiments on 3 different days, each done in n=3 different wells, total n=9. Each well can be considered a biological replicate, but it's of lesser value than the "big Ns" done on different days. The authors can choose different ways of defining their N/n numbers, but it has to be transparent. The bar graphs would ideally display the data points.
      3. There should be a comment on how statistical power was calculated upfront and if not: how N/n numbers were chosen ("based on similar expts in the past").
      4. "This suggests that some of the proteins that are accumulating in these diseases are specifically products of lipid accumulation rather than a product of general lysosomal dysfunction. In further support of this, several lysosomal proteins including V-type ATPases (ATP6 family), mannose-6-phosphate receptor (M6PR) and biogenesis of lysosomal organelle complex subunits (BLOC1) are quantified in the WCP but are not increased in abundance." This part is confusing. It seems like the authors observe an accumulation of endolysosomes in general (page 6), but then only certain endolysosomal proteins accumulate - and the authors speculate that this is due to decreased degradation or enhanced translation (mRNA levels are unaffected). This question should be addressed better, ideally experimentally: are endolysosomes accumulating in general or not? And what defines the endolysosomal proteins that accumulate vs. those that don't? HOw is that regulated?
      5. Fig. 1D: The GO terms are confusing. Why are there more proteins in the category lysosomal membrane than lysosome as a whole? Other categories seem to be overlapping as well.
      6. Fig. 2C/3A: It'd be good to also show the hits that don't match the expectation/pathways of interest.
      7. Fig. 3: It is not intuitive that synaptic proteins in particular would accumulate at the plasma membrane due to the lipid storage defect. Are they mis-trafficked or are they at synaptic membranes? That could, e.g, be addressed by isolating synaptosomes. And why this selectivity for synaptic proteins? Neurons should have more plasma membrane that is not synaptic. And, e.g, the release of lysosomal material should not happen at synapses (and lysosomes should not deliver synaptic proteins to the PM, unless there is a failure to degrade them). Or is there an effect on synaptic vesicles? Are there more? Do they deliver their cargo more readily? Or is there a failure to do endocytosis of synaptic proteins, and that's why the accumulate? What is the connection between SVs and endolysosomes? More clarity would be good here.
      8. Fig. 4: The assumption that there is more synaptic activity because there are more synaptic proteins at the membrane seems to be plausible, but also speculative at this point.
      9. The possible contribution of glial cells should at least be discussed.

      Minor: there are some typos etc.

      Significance

      General Assessment

      Strenghts:

      1. The data seem robust.
      2. From a descriptive point of you, there is new insight.
      3. New tools for the field are presented.
      4. Disease phenotypes are recapitulated.
      5. Several techniques are employed, protein and mRNA were studied.
      6. Protein and lipid changes are reported.

      Weaknesses:

      • see previous section for details
      • overall, the data are descriptive in nature and deeper insight into mechanisms would be desirable

      Advance:

      • New tools are presented that recapitulate diseases phenotypes
      • proteins, lipids and mRNAs are studied, and interesting effects are reported
      • GM2 lipid accumulation diseases will be understood better thanks to this study

      Audience:

      • Clinicians and basic researchers studying these diseases should be equally interested.
      • Clinicians and basic researchers studying neurodegenerative disease may also be interested (at least some)
      • lipid biologists will be interested

      About me:

      • cell biologist/protein biochemist studying Parkinson's disease
    1. 反对维多利亚时代和资产阶级社会强调的道德、责任、进步和实用主义

      维多利亚时代(1837-1901)是英国历史上一个相对保守且沉闷的时期,其社会风气强调道德教条,重视家庭、社会责任、个人的名誉以及道德行为。这样的社会氛围并非无缘由地产生,而是多方面因素共同作用的结果。以下是几个主要原因,解释了为什么维多利亚时代会过度注重道德教条,以及为何这也成了对当时社会的一种反叛。

      1. 工业革命与社会变革

      工业革命带来了巨大的社会变革,改变了英国的经济、政治以及社会结构。随着城市化的加速,社会生活的复杂性也迅速增长,传统的农耕生活和阶级结构遭遇挑战,城市中涌现出大量的新兴工人阶级和中产阶级。面对这种急剧变化,社会上很多人感到不安,尤其是上层阶级,他们急于通过强化道德规范和行为准则来恢复秩序,确保社会的稳定与安全。

      2. 皇室与宗教的影响

      维多利亚时代的英国是一个深受基督教影响的社会,维多利亚女王本身也具有非常传统的道德观念。她和她的丈夫阿尔伯特亲王强调道德的严格性和家庭的传统价值观,成为社会道德标准的象征。宗教教义在当时的公共生活中占据着重要地位,而基督教道德观念(如贞洁、家庭至上、勤劳等)主导了社会的行为规范。

      为了应对工业化带来的社会动荡和不安,维多利亚社会推崇坚守道德教条,特别是在家庭、性别角色以及个人行为上。男性被期望具备自制力和责任感,而女性则被期望维持纯洁、贞洁的形象。任何偏离这些规范的行为都可能受到严厉的批评和排斥。

      3. 性别与社会角色的分化

      维多利亚时代非常强调性别角色的区分,男性和女性的社会角色被严格规范。女性的主要角色是家庭主妇,负责家庭管理和道德教育,而男性则被期望承担经济支柱和公共道德榜样的角色。这种严格的性别分化催生了对于行为规范的苛刻要求。女性的贞洁、谦逊和自制被视为最重要的美德,而对男性的道德要求则更多体现在责任感、工作伦理和社会担当上。

      这一时期的道德教条特别重视性别与性行为的规范,任何“堕落”或“不道德”的行为都会引发广泛的社会关注。例如,性别不平等的严格规定、对于婚外情和性别流动的压制,使得个人的私生活受到极大的社会审视。

      4. 阶级差异与社会控制

      在维多利亚时代,阶级差异依然非常显著。上层阶级通过推崇道德教条和行为规范来维持他们的社会地位,并与下层阶级保持一定的距离。在他们看来,遵守道德教条不仅仅是个人行为的要求,也是社会地位和声誉的体现。而对于下层阶级和工人阶级来说,道德的教条则是社会控制的工具,旨在通过规范其行为来确保社会的稳定。

      5. 反叛与艺术的对抗

      尽管社会风气推崇保守的道德观,维多利亚时代的文化和艺术中却出现了反叛的声音。文学、艺术和思想家们开始质疑这些道德教条和社会约束,尤其是在性别、爱情、欲望等方面。例如,奥斯卡·王尔德、比亚兹莱等作家和艺术家通过作品反思和批判社会的道德束缚,提出了对个体自由、艺术表现和欲望的更为开放的看法。

      这些艺术家的作品往往带有强烈的反叛精神,挑战传统道德观念。例如,王尔德的《道林·格雷的画像》就探讨了美与道德之间的关系,质疑了外貌与道德的统一性,呈现了一种脱离道德教条的极端个体主义。这些作品揭示了维多利亚社会的道德标准与个体真实情感和欲望之间的冲突,成为当时的文化反叛。

      6. 心理学与哲学的兴起

      随着心理学和哲学的发展,特别是弗洛伊德的潜意识理论和尼采的超人哲学,维多利亚时代的知识分子开始反思压抑的道德约束对人类心理和行为的影响。道德教条被认为不仅是一种社会控制的手段,也可能是对个体自由和心理健康的压制。这一思潮影响了包括艺术家、作家在内的许多知识分子,使得道德教条成为讨论和反叛的焦点。

      总结

      维多利亚时代的社会风气强调道德教条,部分源于工业化、阶级分化、宗教与皇室的影响,以及对社会秩序的渴望。这种文化规范通过严格的行为和性别要求控制个体的行为,尤其在性、家庭和社会责任方面。然而,这种过于保守和压抑的社会氛围也成为了许多艺术家和思想家反叛的根源,挑战传统道德观念,提出对个体自由、欲望和真实情感的更大宽容。

    2. “世纪末”情绪 (Fin de siècle)

      “世纪末”情绪(Fin de siècle)是指19世纪末期,尤其是1890年代,西方社会普遍感受到的时代末日感、颓废和不安。这种情绪不仅体现在文学、艺术、音乐等文化领域,也在社会和哲学思想中有所体现。人们感受到的对未来的悲观、对社会进步的怀疑、对生活意义的空虚感,都是这种情绪的表现。要理解这种情绪的原因,可以从以下几个方面来探讨:

      1. 工业革命与现代化带来的冲击

      工业革命对社会结构、经济模式和人类生活方式产生了极为深远的影响。虽然工业革命带来了科技的进步、生产力的提高以及全球化的进程,但与此同时,也带来了社会不平等、贫富差距加大、劳动者剥削严重以及城市化进程中出现的社会问题。尤其是在19世纪末期,许多人开始对现代化带来的负面效应产生反思:城市化进程导致了人类的孤独感,资本主义的高度发展让个体在物质和精神上感到空虚,传统价值观的崩塌让人们对社会的方向产生迷茫。

      2. 社会不稳定与政治动荡

      19世纪末期,欧洲和其他地区普遍存在政治不稳定和社会动荡。各种社会改革运动、工人运动、民族解放运动以及各国之间的冲突不断,许多人感到社会体系的不稳定和未来的不可预知。尤其是在德国、奥匈帝国等地的民族冲突和帝国主义的扩张背景下,战争和社会剧变的阴影笼罩着人们的生活。这种政治不确定性导致了对未来的忧虑和对进步的怀疑,进而形成了“世纪末”情绪的一部分。

      3. 科学与理性主义的崩塌

      19世纪是理性主义和科学主义的黄金时代。启蒙运动以来,西方世界坚信通过理性、科学和技术的发展,人类能够掌控自然、解决社会问题、并实现进步。然而,随着科学的不断发展,尤其是达尔文的进化论、弗洛伊德的精神分析学说、尼采的“上帝已死”等理论的提出,人们逐渐意识到理性并不是万能的,科学不能解释一切,且某些理性原则甚至可能导致道德和精神层面的危机。例如,达尔文的进化论挑战了基督教的创世论,弗洛伊德对无意识的揭示让人们重新审视人性的复杂性和深层的欲望,而尼采对传统道德的反叛则引发了对人类意义和价值观的深刻质疑。

      科学和理性主义的这些挑战使得许多人对“人类能够通过理性达到完美”这一信念产生了深刻的怀疑,进而对社会进步和人类未来的前景感到悲观。

      4. 哲学与艺术的变革

      19世纪末,哲学和艺术开始发生深刻的变革,这些变革也反映了“世纪末”情绪的产生。例如,尼采提出的“超人”理论挑战了传统道德和宗教信仰,主张个体应当通过自身的意志来创造价值和意义,而非依赖外部的道德规范。与此同时,象征主义和颓废艺术的兴起则体现了对现实世界的深刻失望。许多艺术家和文学家开始关注虚无、孤独和死亡,表现出对传统社会和道德的逃避和反叛。

      例如,奥斯卡·王尔德、夏尔·波德莱尔等作家通过作品传达了对社会的批判和对个人存在意义的探索,王尔德的《道林·格雷的画像》就探讨了美、道德与堕落之间的复杂关系。这些艺术作品充满了悲观和颓废的情绪,强调对物质主义社会的批判和对理性主义的拒绝。

      5. 心理学的兴起与人类意识的复杂性

      弗洛伊德的精神分析学说提出了人类内心的复杂性,强调无意识和欲望对人类行为的影响。这一理论动摇了理性主义世界观,并揭示了人类个体和集体行为中潜在的混乱和不可控性。随着心理学的兴起,人们开始意识到,人的行为不再能简单地归结为理性和道德的决定,个体内心的冲突、欲望、恐惧和潜意识成为影响社会行为和个体生活的重要因素。这种对人类内心世界的深入探索让许多人感到无所适从,逐渐产生了对理性和传统道德的深刻怀疑,进一步滋生了“世纪末”的悲观情绪。

      6. 生活意义的空虚与现代人的孤独感

      在“世纪末”情绪的背后,还有对生活意义的深刻空虚感。工业化带来了物质的丰富,却也带来了精神的匮乏。许多人感到日常生活被机械化、物化,人与人之间的联系变得疏远,现代人的孤独感和失落感日益加剧。对于许多人来说,传统的宗教、家庭、社会等价值体系逐渐瓦解,代之而来的是一片空白。人们开始怀疑生活的意义,甚至怀疑存在本身的价值,反映了对人类未来的深刻不安和对生命本质的困惑。

      总结

      “世纪末”情绪的核心,是人们对未来的悲观和迷茫,以及对社会进步、理性和传统道德的深刻怀疑。随着社会、科学、哲学和文化的深刻变化,尤其是工业革命、科学发现、哲学思想的挑战,以及生活的现代化和人类内心世界的揭示,19世纪末的人们感到他们所依赖的旧有秩序和信仰已经崩塌,留下的则是对人类未来的迷茫、对理性的质疑和对生活意义的空虚。正是这种时代的危机感滋养了颓废美学的兴起,成为那个时期文化艺术的标志。

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews: 

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      The manuscript consists of two separate but interlinked investigations: genomic epidemiology and virulence assessment of Salmonella Dublin. ST10 dominates the epidemiological landscape of S. Dublin, while ST74 was uncommonly isolated. Detailed genomic epidemiology of ST10 unfolded the evolutionary history of this common genotype, highlighting clonal expansions linked to each distinct geography. Notably, North American ST10 was associated with more antimicrobial resistance compared to others. The authors also performed long-read sequencing on a subset of isolates (ST10 and ST74) and uncovered a novel recombinant virulence plasmid in ST10 (IncX1/IncFII/IncN). Separately, the authors performed cell invasion and cytotoxicity assays on the two S. Dublin genotypes, showing differential responses between the two STs. ST74 replicates better intracellularly in macrophages compared to ST10, but both STs induced comparable cytotoxicity levels.

      Comparative genomic analyses between the two genotypes showed certain genetic content unique to each genotype, but no further analyses were conducted to investigate which genetic factors were likely associated with the observed differences. The study provides a comprehensive and novel understanding of the evolution and adaptation of two S. Dublin genotypes, which can inform public health measures. 

      The methodology included in both approaches was sound and written in sufficient detail, and data analysis was performed with rigour. Source data were fully presented and accessible to readers. Certain aspects of the manuscript could be clarified and extended to improve the manuscript. 

      (1) For epidemiology purposes, it is not clear which human diseases were associated with the genomes included in this manuscript. This is important since S. Dublin can cause invasive bloodstream infections in humans. While such information may be unavailable for public sequences, this should be detailed for the 53 isolates sequenced for this study, especially for isolates selected to perform experiments in vitro.

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have added the sample type for the 53 isolates sequenced for this study. These additional details have been added to Supplementary Tables 1, 4, 9 and 10.

      (2) The major AMR plasmid in described S. Dublin was the IncC associated with clonal expansion in North America. While this plasmid is not found in the Australian isolates sequenced in this study, the reviewer finds that it is still important to include its characterization, since it carries blaCMY-2 and was sustainedly inherited in ST10 clade 5. If the plasmid structure is already published, the authors should include the accession number in the Main Results.

      We have provided accessions and context for two of the IncC hybrid plasmids that have been previously reported in the literature in the Introduction. The text now reads:

      “These MDR S. Dublin isolates all type as sequence type 10 (ST10), and the AMR determinants have been demonstrated to be carried on an IncC plasmid that has recombined with a virulence plasmid encoding the spvRABCD operon (12,16,18,19).  This has resulted in hybrid virulence and AMR plasmids circulating in North America including a 329kb megaplasmid with IncX1, IncFIA, IncFIB, and IncFII replicons (isolate CVM22429, NCBI accession CP032397.1) (12,16) and a smaller hybrid plasmid 172,265 bases in size with an IncX1 replicon (isolate N13-01125, NCBI accession KX815983.1) (19).”

      Further characterisation of the IncA/C plasmid circulating in North America was beyond the scope of this study.

      (a) The reviewer is concerned that the multiple annotations missing in  plasmid structures in Supplementary Figures 5 & 6, and  genetic content unique to ST10 and ST74 was due to insufficient annotation by Prokka. I would recommend the authors use another annotation tool, such as Bakta (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8743544/) for plasmid annotation, and reconstruction of the pangenome described in Supplementary Figure 10. Since the recombinant virulence plasmid in ST10 is a novel one, I would recommend putting Supplementary Figure 5 as a main figure, with better annotations to show the virulence region, plasmid maintenance/replication, and possible conjugation cluster.

      In the supplementary figures of the plasmids, we sought to highlight key traits on interest on the plasmids, namely plasmid replicons, antimicrobial resistance and heavy metal resistance (Supplementary Figure 5) and virulence genes (Supplementary Figure 6). The inclusion of the accessions of publicly available isolates provide for characterised plasmids such as the S. Dublin virulence plasmid (NCBI accession: CP001143). 

      For the potentially hybrid plasmid with IncN/IncX1/IncFII reported in Supplementary Figure 6, we have undertaken additional analyses of the two Australian isolates to reannotate these isolates with Bakta which provides for more detailed annotations. 

      We have added new text to the methods which reads as: 

      “The final genome assemblies were confirmed as S. Dublin using SISTR and annotated using both Prokka v1.14.6 (69) for consistency with the draft genome assemblies and  Bakta v1.10.1 (93) which provides for more detailed annotations (Supplementary Table 13). Both Prokka and Bakta annotations were in agreement for AMR, HMR and virulence genes, with Bakta annotating between 3-7 additional CDS which were largely ‘hypothetical protein’.”

      For the pangenome analysis of the seven ST74 and ten ST10 isolates, we have continued to use the Prokka annotated draft genome assemblies for input to Panaroo. 

      (4) The authors are lauded for the use of multiple strains of ST10 and ST74 in the in vitro experiment. While results for ST74 were more consistent, readouts from ST10 were more heterogenous (Figure 5, 6). This is interesting as the tested ST10 were mostly clade 1, so ST10 was, as expected, of lower genetic diversity compared to tested ST74 (partly shown in Figure 1D. Could the authors confirm this by constructing an SNP table separately for tested ST10 and ST74? Additionally, the tested ST10 did not represent the phylogenetic diversity of the global epidemiology, and this limitation should be reflected in the Discussion.

      In response to the reviewer’s comments, we have provided a detailed SNP table (Supplementary Table 12) to further clarify the genetic diversity within the tested ST10 and ST74 strains. 

      Additionally, we have expanded on the limitation regarding the phylogenetic diversity of the ST10 isolates in the Discussion, highlighting how the strains used in the in vitro experiments may not fully represent the global epidemiological diversity of S. Dublin ST10. The new text now reads:

      “This study has limitations, including a focus on ST10 isolates from clade 1, which do not represent global phylogenetic diversity. Nonetheless, our pangenome analysis identified >900 uncharacterised genes unique to ST74, offering potential targets for future research. Another limitation is the geographic bias in available genomes, with underrepresentation from Asia and South America. This reflects broader disparities in genomic research resources but may improve as public health genomics capacity expands globally.”

      (5) The comparative genomics between ST10 and ST74 can be further improved to allow more interpretation of the experiments. Why were only SPI-1, 2, 6, and 19 included in the search for virulome, how about other SPIs? ST74 lacks SPI-19 and has truncated SPI-6, so what would explain the larger genome size of ST74? Have the authors screened for other SPIs using more well-annotated databases or references (S. Typhi CT18 or S. Typhimurium ST313)? The mismatching between in silico prediction of invasiveness and phenotypes also warrants a brief discussion, perhaps linked to bigger ST74 genome size (as intracellular lifestyle is usually linked with genome degradation).

      Systematic screening for SPIs with detailed reporting on individual genes and known effectors is still an area of development in Salmonella comparative genomics. In our characterisation of the virulome in this S. Dublin dataset we decided to focus on SPI1, SPI-2, SPI-6 and SPI-19 as these had been identified in previous studies and were considered to be most likely linked to the invasive phenotype of S. Dublin. We thought the truncation of SPI-6 and lack of SPI-19 in ST74 compared to the ST10 isolates would provide a basis to explore genomic differences in the two genotypes, with the screening for individual genes on each SPIs reported in Supplementary Figure 7 and Supplementary Table 9.  

      We have expanded upon the mismatching of the in silico prediction of invasiveness and phenotypes in the Discussion. We now explore the increased genome size and intracellular replication of the ST74 population. We hypothesise that invasiveness has not been studied as thoroughly in zoonotic iNTS as much as human adapted iNTS and S. Typhi, and the increased genome content may be required for survival in different host species. The new text now reads:

      “Our phenotypic data demonstrated a striking difference in replication dynamics between ST10 and ST74 populations in human macrophages. ST74 isolates replicated significantly over 24 hours, whereas ST10 isolates were rapidly cleared after 9 hours of infection. ST74 induced significantly less host cell death during the early-mid stage of macrophage infection, supported by limited processing and release of IL-1ß at 9 hpi. While NTS are generally potent inflammasome activators (60), most supporting data come from laboratory-adapted S. Typhimurium strains. Our findings suggest that ST74 isolates may employ immune evasion mechanisms to avoid host recognition and activation of cell death signaling in early infection stages. Similar trends have been observed with S. Typhimurium ST313, which induces less inflammasome activation than ST19 during murine macrophage infection (61). This could facilitate increased replication and dissemination at later stages of infection. Consistent with this, we observed comparable cytotoxicity between ST10 and ST74 isolates at 24 hpi, suggesting ST74 induces cell death via alternative mechanisms once intracellular bacterial numbers are unsustainable. Further research is needed to identify genomic factors underpinning these observations.”

      (6) On the epidemiology scale, ST10 is more successful, perhaps due to its ongoing adaptation to replication inside GI epithelial cells, favouring shedding. ST74 may tend to cause more invasive disease and less transmission via fecal shedding. The presence of T6SS in ST10 also can benefit its competition with other gut commensals, overcoming gut colonization resistance. The reviewer thinks that these details should be more clearly rephrased in the Discussion, as the results highly suggested different adaptations of two genotypes of the same serovar, leading to different epidemiological success.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting that we could rephrase this important point. We have added additional text in the Discussion to better interpret the differences in the two genotypes of S. Dublin and how this relates to difference epidemiological success. The new text now reads:

      “While machine learning predicted lower invasiveness for ST74 compared to ST10, the increased genomic content of ST74 may support higher replication in macrophages. We speculate that increased intracellular replication could enhance systemic dissemination, though this requires in vivo validation. Invasiveness of S. enterica is often linked to genome degradation (4,62–64). However, this is mostly based on studies of human-adapted iNTS (ST313) and S. Typhi, leaving open the possibility that the additional genomic content of ST74 supports survival in diverse host species. An uncharacterised virulence factor may underlie this replication advantage. Collectively, these findings highlight phenotypic differences between S. Dublin populations ST10 and ST74. Enhanced intra-macrophage survival of ST74 could promote invasive disease, whereas the prevalence of ST10 may relate to better intestinal adaptation and enhanced faecal shedding. In vivo models are needed to test this hypothesis. Interestingly, the absence of SPI-19 in ST74, which encodes a T6SS, may reflect adaptation to enhanced replication in macrophages. SPI-19 has been linked to intestinal colonisation in poultry (23,56) and mucosal virulence in mice (56). It’s possible that the efficient replication of ST74 in macrophages might compensate for the absence of SPI-19, relying instead on phagocyte uptake via M cells or dendritic cells. The larger pangenome of ST74 compared to ST10 could further enhance survival within hosts. These findings highlight important knowledge gaps in zoonotic NTS host-pathogen interactions and drivers of emerging invasive NTS lineages with broad host ranges.”

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      This is a comprehensive analysis of Salmonella Dublin genomes that offers insights into the global spread of this pathogen and region-specific traits that are important to understanding its evolution. The phenotyping of isolates of ST10 and ST74 also offers insights into the variability that can be seen in S. Dublin, which is also seen in other Salmonella serovars, and reminds the field that it is important to look beyond lab-adapted strains to truly understand these pathogens. This is a valuable contribution to the field. The only limitation, which the authors also acknowledge, is the bias towards S. Dublin genomes from high-income settings. However, there is no selection bias; this is simply a consequence of publically available sequences.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      (1) The Abstract did not summarize the main findings of the study. The authors should rewrite to highlight the key findings in genomic epidemiology (low AMR generally, novel plasmid of which Inc type, etc.) and the in vitro experiments. The findings clearly illustrate the differing adaptations of the two genotypes. Suggest to omit 'economic burden' and 'livestock' as this study did not specifically address them.

      We agree with the Reviewer and have re-written the abstract to directly reflect the major outcomes of the research. We have also deleted wording such as ‘livestock’, ‘economic burden’ and ‘One Health’ as we did not specifically address these issues as highlighted by the Reviewer. 

      (2) Figure 2: The MCC tree should include posterior support in major internal nodes. The current colour scheme is also confusing to readers (columns 1, 2). Suggest to revise and include additional key information as columns: major AMR genes (blaCMY-2, strAB, floR) and mer locus, so this info can be visualized in the main figure. 

      Thank you for your valuable feedback. We have revised Figure 2 with the MCC tree to include posterior support on the internal nodes. We have also amended the figure legend to explain the additional coloured internal nodes. We have also amended the heatmap in Figure 2 to include additional white space between the columns to make it easier for the readers to distinguish. We didn’t change the colours in this figure as we have used the same colours throughout for the different traits reported in this study. Further, we chose to keep the AMR profiles reported in Figure 2 at the susceptible, resistant or MDR. This was done to convey the overview of the AMR profiles, and we provide detail in the AMR and HMR determinants in the Supplementary Figures and Tables. 

      (3) The manuscript title is not informative, as it did not study the 'dynamics' of the two genotypes. Suggest to revise the study title along the lines of main results.

      Thank you for the feedback on the title. We have amended this to better reflect the main findings of the study, and it now reads as “Distinct adaptation and epidemiological success of different genotypes within Salmonella enterica serovar Dublin”

      (4) The co-occurrence of AMR and heavy metal resistance genes (like mer) are quite common in Salmonella and E. coli. This is not a novel finding. The reviewer would suggest shortening the details related to heavy metal resistance in Results and Discussion, to make the writing more streamlined. 

      In line with the Reviewer comments, we have shortened the details in the Results and Discussion on the co-occurrence of AMR and HMR.  

      (5) L185: missing info after n=82. 

      This has been revised to now read as “n=82 from Canada”. 

      (6) I think Vi refers to the capsular antigen, not flagelle. Please double-check this.

      Thank you for highlighting this mistake. We have revised all instances.

      (7) L252-253: which statistic was used to state 'no association'. Also, there is no evidence presented to support 'no fitness cost associated with resistance and virulence."

      We have removed this sentence.

      (8) 320: Figure 6F is a scatterplot, not PCA. Please confirm. 

      The reviewer is correct, this is in fact a scatterplot. We have amended the figure legend and text.

      (9) For Discussion, it would be helpful to compare the phenotype findings with that of other invasive Salmonella like Typhi or Typhimurium ST313.

      Thank you for noting this, we had alluded to findings from ST313 but have now expanded include some further comparisons to S. Typhimurium ST313 and added references for these within the Discussion. The additional text now reads:

      “Similar trends have been observed with S. Typhimurium ST313, which induces less inflammasome activation than ST19 during murine macrophage infection (61). This could facilitate increased replication and dissemination at later stages of infection.”

      "Invasiveness of S. enterica is often linked to genome degradation (4,62–64).

      However, this is mostly based on studies of human-adapted iNTS (ST313) and S. Typhi, leaving open the possibility that the additional genomic content of ST74 supports survival in diverse host species. An uncharacterised virulence factor may underlie this replication advantage.”

      (10) L440: no evidence for "successful colonization" of ST74. Actually, the findings suggested otherwise.

      Thank you for picking this up, we have amended the sentence to better reflect the findings. The amended text now reads as:

      “It’s possible that the efficient replication of ST74 in macrophages might compensate for the absence of SPI-19, relying instead on phagocyte uptake via M cells or dendritic cells. The larger pangenome of ST74 compared to ST10 could further enhance survival within hosts.”

      (11) L460-461: The data did not show an increasing trend of iNTS related to S. Dublin.

      Thank you for identifying this. This sentence has been revised accordingly and now reads as:

      “While the data did not indicate an increasing trend of iNTS associated with S. Dublin, the potential public health risk of this pathogen suggests it may still warrant considering it a notifiable disease, similar to typhoid and paratyphoid fever.”

      (12) L465: Data were not analyzed explicitly in the context of animal vs. human. Suggest omitting 'One Health' from the conclusion.

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have omitted “One Health” from the conclusion

      (13) L500: Was the alignment not checked for recombination using Gubbins? The approach here is inconsistent with the method described in the subtree selected for BEAST analysis (L546).

      We have now applied Gubbins to the phylogenetic tree constructed using IQTREE, and the methods and results have been updated accordingly.

      (14) What was the output of Tempest? Correlation or R2 value? 

      We have now included the R2 value from Tempest and reported this in the manuscript. 

      (15) L556: marginal likelihood to allow evaluation of the best-fit model. Please rephrase to state this clearly.

      We have rephrased this in the manuscript to state this clearly.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The main observation that the sperm from CRISP proteins 1 and 3 KO lines are postfertilization less developmentally competent is convincing. However, the molecular characterization of the mechanism that leads to these defects and the temporal appearance of the defects requires additional studies.

      We thank the reviewer for the valuable comments. As requested, additional experiments were carried out to analyze both the molecular mechanisms and the temporal appearance of the observed defects. Our results showed that DNA integrity defects appear during epididymal maturation and/or storage (see Figure 5B), that the epididymal fluid contributes to sperm DNA fragmentation defects (See Figure 6A) and that these defects seem not to be due to an increase in oxidative stress (Figure 5C) but rather to a dysregulation in Ca<sup>2+</sup> homeostasis within the epididymis (Figure 6A,B).

      Strengths:

      The generation of these double mutant mice is valuable for the field. Moreover, the fact that the double mutant line of Crisp 1 and 3 is phenotypically different from the Crisp 1 and 4 line suggests different functions of these epididymis proteins. The methods used to demonstrate that developmental defects are largely due to post-fertilization defects are also a considerable strength. The initial characterization of these sperm has altered intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels, and increased rates of DNA fragmentation are valuable.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments on our work.

      Weaknesses:

      The study is mechanistically incomplete because there is no direct demonstration that the absence of these proteins alters the epididymal environment and fluid, wherein during the passage through the epididymis the sperm become affected. Also, a direct demonstration of how the proteins in question cause or lead to DNA damage and increased Ca<sup>2+</sup> requires further characterization.

      The new experiments included in the revised version (see Figure 6A) showed that exposure of control WT sperm to epididymal fluid form mutant mice leads to an increase in sperm DNA fragmentation levels, confirming that the absence of CRISP1 and CRISP3 alters the epididymal fluid wherein the sperm become affected. In addition, new observations showing that WT sperm exposed to WT epididymal fluid in the presence of Ca<sup>2+</sup> also exhibit higher DNA fragmentation levels (Figure 6A) together with the finding that mutant sperm exhibit higher intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels (Figure 6B) but no higher levels of ROS, strongly support a dysregulation in Ca<sup>2+</sup> homeostasis within the epididymis and sperm as the main responsible for DNA integrity defects.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      The authors showed that CRISP1 and CRISP3, secreted proteins in the epididymis, are required for early embryogenesis after fertilization through DNA integrity in cauda epididymal sperm. This paper is the first report showing that the epididymal proteins are required for embryogenesis after fertilization. However, some data in this paper (Table 1 and Figure 2A) are overlapped in a published paper (Curci et al., FASEB J, 34,15718-15733, 2020; PMID: 33037689). Furthermore, the authors did not address why the disruption of CRISP1/3 leads to these phenomena (the increased level of the intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> level and impaired DNA integrity in sperm) with direct evidence. Therefore, if the authors can address the following comments to improve the paper's novelty and clarification, this paper may be worthwhile to readers.

      We thank the reviewer for the constructive comments. Regarding the data included in Table 1 and Figure 2A, it is important to note that Table 1 includes data on embryo development corresponding to C1/C4 DKO mice not published before in which the data on embryo development corresponding to C1/C3 DKO was used as simultaneous control. Figure 2A showed in vivo fertilization results at short times after mating (4h instead of 18 h) that have been neither reported before.

      Regarding studies to address why the disruption of CRISP1 and CRISP3 leads to defects in DNA integrity and Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels, we have carried out new experiments showing that mutant sperm do not exhibit higher levels of ROS (see Figure 5C), not favoring oxidative stress as the mechanism underlying mutant sperm defects. In addition, we found that DNA integrity defects develop during epididymal transit (Figure 5B) and that exposure of WT sperm to epididymal fluid from mutant mice leads to an increase in sperm DNA fragmentation levels (Figure 6A), confirming that the absence of CRISP1 and CRISP3 alters the epididymal fluid. Finally, our new results showing that WT sperm exposed to WT epididymal fluid in the presence of Ca<sup>2+</sup> also exhibit higher DNA fragmentation levels (Figure 6A) together with the higher intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels detected in mutant sperm (Figure 6B) strongly support a dysregulation in Ca<sup>2+</sup> homeostasis within the epididymis and sperm as the main responsible for DNA integrity defects.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Overall comments:

      This manuscript investigates the mechanisms whereby the absence of the epididymal CRISP proteins 1 and 3 (Cysteine-Rich Secretory Proteins) causes infertility and lower embryo developmental rates. This strain's infertility seems to have a post-fertilization origin because the rates of in vivo fertilization are like the controls, but the development to the blastocyst stage is decreased. The results of this study show that (1) mutant sperm viability, progressive motility, and morphology are normal;

      (2) in vivo fertilization rates are comparable to controls, but embryo development is reduced;

      (3) in vitro fertilization studies found reduced fertilization rates and activation rates even in zona-free studies;

      (4) additional functional studies showed increased rates of DNA fragmentation and elevated Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels in mutant sperm.

      The results presented are credible and hint that the epididymis might play a role before and after fertilization and directly affect embryo development. However, the study is mechanistically incomplete, as there is no direct demonstration that the absence of these proteins alters the epididymal environment and fluid, wherein the passage through the epididymis the sperm become functionally defective, and whether mutant or control epididymal fluid or purified CRISP proteins can change, either reduce or overcome, respectively, the developmental competence of the control or mutant sperm and induce functional changes in the counterpart sperm. In summary, the main observation that the sperm from CRISP proteins 1 and 3 KO lines are post-fertilization less developmentally competent is significant and important, but the molecular characterization of the defects and the temporal appearance of defects requires additional studies.

      Specific comments:

      (1) Introduction.

      It is too long. The description of the function of the epididymis should be reduced. The functional properties of the Crisp genes should also be substantially shortened.

      As requested, the Introduction has been revised and descriptions of the epididymis and CRISP have been shortened

      (2) Results.

      • Lines 140 to 142. Remove these initial lines. Start directly addressing the results of the C1/C3 strain, which is the mutant under consideration here. Referring to the C1/C4 results detracts from the focus of the study.

      As suggested by the reviewer, lines 140 to 142 have been removed.

      • Table 1. Move the two-cell embryo line to the top of the Table and place the Blastocyst line below it. This organization is the conventional method to present this type of data.

      As suggested, the order of the lines in Table 1 has been modified to align with the conventional presentation method.

      • Figures 1 and 2A and B data are solid and support the notion that enough sperm reach the site of fertilization, and that the sperm are defective in their capacity to support embryo development. Figures 2C and D have interesting data, although additional information would strengthen these results. The authors concluded that the sperm were defective in the epididymis. Where in the epididymis? These sperm were all from the cauda. Could the authors collect sperm from the upper portion of the cauda, or midportion, and compare if the defects manifest gradually?

      We appreciate this interesting and appropriate comment from the reviewer. In this regard, all the studies in our work were carried out using sperm from the whole cauda epididymis, the reason why we could not answer where defective sperm appear in the epididymis. In view of this, we have now conducted a comparative DNA fragmentation analysis between caput and cauda sperm from both genotypes. Our findings indicate that while cauda mutant sperm showed once again higher DNA fragmentation levels than controls, caput sperm exhibited levels of DNA damage not significantly different between genotypes. These results confirm that defects in DNA appear following sperm passage through the epididymal caput, supporting the hypothesis that defects in DNA fragmentation manifest during sperm transit through the epididymis and /or during storage in the cauda. These results have been included in the revised version of the manuscript (see lines 235-240/Figure 5B of the revised version)

      • Figure 3 displays the results of in vitro fertilization, either COCs A-C or zona-free fertilization D-F. The results are important and differ from those produced by fertilization in vivo. The authors indicate that these confirm that the in vivo conditions overcome in vitro defects. However, this study never addresses the reason behind it. Is there less expression of proteins related to these functions, or the function of some proteins is compromised? The authors should advance a hypothesis or a rationale to explain these results.

      As indicated by the reviewer, our results showed differences between the fertilization rates observed for mutant mice under in vivo and in vitro conditions, as previously observed for all our single and multiple KO models (Da Ros et al., 2008; PMID: 18571638, Brukman et al., 2016; PMID: 26786179, Weigel Muñoz, 2018; PMID: 29481619, Ernesto et al., 2015; PMID: 26416967, Carvajal et al,. 2018; PMID: 30510210) and also reported by other groups (Okabe et al., 2007; PMID: 17558467). In this regard, it has been well established that, although millions of sperm are ejaculated into the female tract, only a few (approximately one per oocyte) reach the fertilization site (i.e. the ampulla) (Cummins and Yanagimachi, 1982; doi:10.1002/mrd.1120050304). This efficient selection system by the female reproductive tract leads to the arrival of only the best sperm at the fertilization site, even in males with reproductive deficiencies, thereby “masking” sperm defects that can be detected under in vitro conditions due to the competition between good and bad quality sperm for the egg. Thus, although we can not exclude other mechanisms to explain the commonly observed differences between in vivo and in vitro fertilization rates, our rationale is that the natural and efficient sperm selection process that takes place within the female reproductive tract masks sperm defects that can, otherwise, be detected under the competitive in vitro conditions. This explanation is now included in the discussion of the revised version of the manuscript (see lines 320-325).

      • Data in Figures 4 and 5 support the interpretation of the authors. However, it is necessary to establish the level of oxidative stress in the mutant sperm vs. the controls. Also, a question to explore is for how long does the sperm need to reside in that mutant environment to start undergoing the DNA fragmentation reported?

      In response to the valuable request from the reviewer regarding the level of oxidative stress in sperm, we have analyzed reactive oxygen species (ROS) levels in mutant and control epididymal sperm. Our results showed that ROS levels in mutant sperm were not higher than those observed in the control group, supporting the idea that mechanisms other than oxidative stress may be leading to the increased DNA fragmentation observed in mutant sperm. These results are now included in the revised version of the manuscript (see Figure 5C).

      Regarding the question on how long the sperm need to reside in the mutant environment to undergo DNA fragmentation, recent experiments carried out in response to this reviewer in which we analyzed DNA fragmentation in caput sperm led us to conclude that DNA fragmentation develops during epididymal transit and/or storage in the cauda. While these observations do not precisely define the time within the epididymis that sperm require for exhibiting DNA fragmentation, our additional new in vitro experiments analyzing the effect of epididymal fluids on sperm DNA integrity showed that exposure of WT sperm to DKO fluid for only 1 hr already leads to an increase in DNA fragmentation (see Figure 6A of the revised manuscript), suggesting that sperm do not need long periods within the mutant environment to be affected.

      (3) The length of the Discussion section should be shortened, especially by not recapitulating data presented in the Results section.

      As requested by the reviewer, sections recapitulating results have been modified.

      Minor comments:

      (1) The sentence in lines 171 and 172 is unclear, "However, despite the short time after mating, once again, the in vivo fertilized eggs corresponding to the mutant group exhibited clear defects to reach the blastocyst stage in vitro compared to controls." What do the authors mean by short time? It is the expected time, correct?

      It is well established that after copulatory plug formation, most oocytes are fertilized within 2 to 8 hours, with fertilization rates that increase over time: 0–5% at 1.5 hours post-mating; 40% at 4 hours post-mating and more than 90% at 7 hs after mating (Muro et al., 2016; PMID: 26962112, La Spina et al., 2016; PMID: 26872876). In order to examine whether the embryo development defects observed for mutant mice were due to a delayed arrival of sperm to the ampulla, we decided to analyze the percentage of fertilized eggs recovered from the ampulla at “short times” (4 hs) after mating to avoid the possibility that the prolonged stay of sperm within the female tract corresponding to the usual “overnight mating” schedule could be giving defective sperm enough time to reach the ampulla and, finally, fertilize the eggs (i.e. delayed fertilization). Our results showed that, despite the expected lower fertilization rates observed for both control and mutant males when analyzed just 4 hs after mating, the fertilized eggs corresponding to the mutant group were still exhibiting clear defects to develop into blastocysts compared to controls, not favoring the idea that embryo development defects were due to a delayed fertilization. The sentence in lines “171 and 172” has been modified in the revised version of the manuscript to better explain this conclusion (see lines 152-155 of the revised version).

      (2) Line 177. Mutant epididymal sperm already carry defects leading to embryo development failure. Under this subheading, the authors compare within the same female the ability of mutant and control sperm delivered into different horns to support fertilization and embryo development. They show that the embryo development induced by mutant sperm is diminished vs. controls under very similar conditions, confirming the previous results of post-fertilization failure. The data also answers the question raised by the authors of whether the fertilization defects appear during or after epididymal transit; the interpretation of the results is the functional defects in the sperm are present before the transport into the female tract. Important unaddressed questions are, could these defects begin even earlier before arriving at the cauda? Did the authors try to incubate the mutant sperm with the epididymal fluid of WT mice to examine if the sperm defects could be rescued? The opposite experiment could also be performed, where WT sperm are incubated with the epididymal fluid of mutant mice, and the treated sperm examined for altered Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels or DNA fragmentation.

      First of all, we would like to clarify that our question about whether the fertilization defects appear “during or after epididymal transit” was in fact referring to whether defects appear during epididymal maturation or later on, at the moment of ejaculation. In this regard, our in vivo and in vitro fertilization studies allowed us to conclude that defects were already present in epididymal sperm without excluding the possibility that additional defects could appear at the vas deferens or at the moment of ejaculation due to the contribution of seminal plasma secretions.

      Regarding whether sperm defects could appear even earlier before arriving to the cauda, we have now analyzed DNA fragmentation defects in caput vs cauda both mutant and control sperm observing differences between genotypes only for cauda sperm. Based on these observations, we conclude that DNA integrity defects appear within the epididymis after sperm passage through the caput either when sperm reach the corpus or the cauda epididymis, or during their storage within the cauda region.

      Also, as suggested by the reviewer, we incubated in vitro WT sperm with epididymal fluid from DKO mice (and vice versa) and then analyzed DNA fragmentation levels. Results showed that exposure of control sperm to the mutant epididymal fluid for 1 hr significantly increased DNA fragmentation levels. When mutant sperm (exhibiting higher levels of DNA fragmentation than control sperm), were exposed to epididymal fluid from WT mice, no differences between groups were observed. Together, these results confirm both that the epididymal fluid from mutant mice contributes to the higher DNA fragmentation levels detected in mutant sperm, and that normal epididymal fluid would not be able to rescue the DNA fragmentation present in mutant cells. These results are now included in the revised version of the manuscript (see Figure 6A).

      (3) Lines 203 to 216. In these paragraphs the authors indicate "that mutant sperm had a lower percentage of fertilization and lower rates of blastocysts (Figure 3D, E), indicating that defects in egg coat penetration were not responsible for embryo development failure. Later, they indicated that a few eggs fertilized by mutant sperm failed to activate. It is shown that Ca<sup>2+</sup> oscillations are normal, indicating that the defects lie elsewhere. Could the authors propose a mechanism based on their sperm DNA defects?

      As described in the Result and Discussion sections of the original manuscript, we decided to investigate the existence of possible defects in sperm DNA fragmentation based on evidence indicating that delays in early embryo development may result from the time taken by the egg to repair damaged paternal DNA (Esbert et al., 2018; PMID: 30259705, Newman et al., 2022; PMID: 34954800, Nguyen et al., 2023; PMID: 37658763). In this regard, it is known that time is needed before the first embryonic cell division for activation of the egg DNA repairing machinery (Martin et al., 2019; PMID: 30541031, Newman et al., 2022; PMID: 34954800) and that increased sperm DNA damage may necessitate more time for repair by the oocyte (Martin et al., 2019; PMID: 30541031, Newman et al., 2022; PMID: 34954800). Based on this, we decided to examine possible DNA damage in sperm. Our finding that, in fact, sperm DNA fragmentation was clearly increased in mutant sperm led us to propose that delays in early embryo development in our mutant colonies may result from the time required by the egg to repair sperm DNA fragmentation.

      (4) The demonstration that C1/C3 sperm have abnormal rates of DNA fragmentation and Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels is significant. Additional studies would strengthen the findings reported here. For example, what are the levels of oxidative stress in these sperm? Are there other changes related to oxidative stress? Performing a TUNNEL assay will strengthen the notion of DNA damage demonstrated here with the chromatin dispersion assay.

      As mentioned previously, we analyzed oxidative stress by evaluating ROS levels in control and mutant sperm observing no differences between genotypes. These results have been included in the revised version of the manuscript (See Figure 5C). We appreciate the suggestion of performing TUNNEL assay for future studies.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Major comments:

      (1) There are some reports small RNAs gained during the epididymal transition of sperm are essential for embryonic development (e.g., Conine et al., Dev Cell, 46, 470480, 2018; PMID: 30057276), suggesting that the luminal changes in Crisp1/3 double KO (dKO) epididymis lead to the phenotype in this study. In fact, there is no evidence whether CRISP1/CRISP3 secreted from an epididymis exists in cauda epididymal sperm and directly controls the observed phenomena. Also, the authors wrote there is no strong evidence to exclude the possible role of small RNA in Crisp1/3 dKO sperm (lines 370-372). Therefore, it is at least necessary to measure small RNA abundance in dKO mice.

      As mentioned by the reviewer and as cited in our manuscript, there is a report indicating that the small RNAs gained during epididymal transit may play a role in embryonic development (Conine et al., 2018; PMID: 30057276). However, the need of small RNAs for embryonic development still remains a topic of debate (Wang et al. 2020; PMCID: PMC7799177). In this regard, clear evidence indicating that sperm DNA fragmentation is associated with embryo development defects together with the increase in sperm DNA fragmentation levels observed in mutant sperm support sperm DNA damage as one of the causes leading to the observed phenotype in our mutant mice. Moreover, recent experiments carried out in response to Reviewer 1 comments revealed that exposure of control sperm to epididymal fluid from mutant mice significantly increases DNA fragmentation levels, confirming that the absence of CRISP1 and CRISP3 proteins in epididymal fluid contributes to sperm DNA damage in mutant sperm. Finally, whereas oxidative stress might also lead to embryo development impairment as mentioned in our original manuscript, recent evaluation of ROS levels in control and mutant sperm carried out in response to Reviewer 1’s comments did not show higher ROS levels in mutant sperm. Thus, although as mentioned in the manuscript, we do not exclude the possibility that small RNAs may also contribute to embryo development defects, our observations support DNA fragmentation and a dysregulation in Ca<sup>2+</sup> homeostasis within the epididymis and sperm as the main responsible for embryo development failure in our mutant males. The experiments using epididymal fluid (Figure 6A) and those evaluating ROS levels (Figure 5C) have been included in the revised version of the manuscript and discussed accordingly.

      (2) Lines 245-248 and 354-374: According to Figure 5C, the intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> level significantly increased in Crisp1/3 dKO sperm compared to control. The author hypothesized that this increase could destroy sperm DNA integrity, causing defects in early embryogenesis. However, the authors did not show the direct evidence.

      Specifically, as CRISP1 inhibits CatSper (line 95), the authors believed the increased Ca<sup>2+</sup> level in Crisp1/3 dKO sperm was observed. Crisp1/3 dKO and Crisp1/4 dKO mice share the disruption of Crisp1, but the phenotype is totally different. Thus, the authors should also examine the CatSper activity in Crisp1/3 dKO sperm.

      We appreciate the reviewer's insightful comments. In this regard, whereas C1/C3 and C1/C4 DKO colonies shares the disruption of Crisp1, the intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels in these two colonies are different as no increase in sperm intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> was detected in Crisp C1/C4 DKO mice. Thus, this difference in intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels might explain the different embryo development phenotype observed in our two DKO colonies. In this regard, our results revealed that sperm intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels are different depending on the Crisp gene being deleted. Whereas the lack of Crisp1 did not affect intracellular sperm Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels (Weigel Munoz et al, 2018; PMID: 29481619), there was an increase in Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels in CRISP2 KO sperm (Brukman et al., 2016; PMID: 26786179) and a decrease in sperm when Crisp4 was deleted (Carvajal 2019, Ph.D Thesis). Thus, although the ability of CRISP3 to regulate sperm Ca<sup>2+</sup> channels has not yet been reported, the existence of functional compensations between homologous CRISP members (Curci et al., 2020; PMID: 33037689) makes it complicated to draw straightforward conclusions based on the behavior of each individual protein in Ca<sup>2+</sup> regulation. In fact, while the lack of CRISP1 and CRISP4 does not affect sperm Ca<sup>2+</sup> concentration (Carvajal 2019, Ph.D Thesis), the simultaneous lack of CRISP1 and CRISP3 produced an increase in Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels and the lack of the four CRISP proteins showed a decrease in the intracellular levels of the cation after capacitation (Curci et al, 2020). Based on these observations, we conclude that the absence of CRISP1 may or may not lead to altered intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels depending on the other simultaneously-deleted gene/s.

      The authors make a hypothesis that the increased Ca<sup>2+</sup> level may lead to damaged DNA integrity by citing a published paper (lines 360-363). In the published paper, the authors examined the influence of the luminal fluid of the epididymis and vas deference on sperm chromatin fragmentation (Gawecka et al., 2015). However, they did not mention the increased DNA fragmentation in epididymal sperm when these sperm were incubated with Ca<sup>2+</sup> or Mn2+. So, the authors' hypothesis is over discussion. Thus, the correlation between the intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> level and DNA integrity in sperm is still unclear. So, the authors should show why the increased Ca<sup>2+</sup> level leads to DNA fragmentation with direct evidence.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comment regarding the work by Gawecka et al., (2015), and the opportunity to clarify the proposed mechanism underlying our observations. In the above mentioned paper, the authors reported that when mouse epididymal or vas deferens sperm were incubated with divalent cations (Ca<sup>2+</sup> and Mn<sup>2+</sup>) in the presence of luminal fluid, they were induced to degrade their DNA in a process termed sperm chromatin fragmentation (SCF). The fact that both the ejaculated and epididymal mutant sperm used in our studies had been exposed to epididymal fluid lacking CRISP proteins known to regulate sperm Ca<sup>2+</sup> channels, opened the possibility that changes in Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels within the epididymal fluid and/or sperm could be responsible for the higher DNA fragmentation levels observed in mutant cells. In this regard, it is important to note that, as requested by Reviewer 1, we performed additional in vitro experiments in which WT epididymal sperm were exposed to mutant or WT epididymal fluid in the presence or absence of Ca<sup>2+</sup> and DNA fragmentation analyzed at the end of incubation. Results showed a significant increase in DNA fragmentation in WT sperm exposed to either mutant epididymal fluid or WT fluid in the presence of Ca<sup>2+</sup> (Figure 6A). We believe these observations together with the higher intracellular Ca<sup>2+</sup> levels detected in DKO sperm (Figure 6B) provides strong evidence supporting changes in Ca<sup>2+</sup> homeostasis in the epididymis and sperm as the main responsible for the observed sperm DNA integrity defects. This could be mediated by the activation of Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependent nucleases present within the epididymal fluid and/or sperm cells as previously suggested (Shaman et al., 2006; PMID: 16914690, Sotolongo et al., 2005; PMID: 15713834, Boaz et al., 2008; PMID: 17879959, Dominguez and Ward, 2009; PMID: 19938954). These observations have now been included and discussed in the revised version of the manuscript (see lines 245-265 and 427-439).

      Minor Comments:

      (3) Standards for measuring rates should be clarified, such as two-cell rates are determined by dividing the number of two-cell embryos by the total number of eggs.

      As requested, standards for measuring rates have now been clarified in the corresponding figure legends

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review): 

      Summary: 

      In this manuscript, the authors investigate the role of BEND2, a novel regulator of meiosis, in both male and female fertility. Huang et al have created a mouse model where the full-length BEND2 transcript is depleted but the truncated BEND2 version remains. This mouse model is fertile, and the authors used it to study the role of BEND2 on both male and female meiosis. Overall, the full-length BEND2 appears dispensable for male meiosis. The more interesting phenotype was observed in females. Females exhibit a lower ovarian reserve suggesting that full-length BEND2 is involved in the establishment of the primordial follicle pool. 

      Strengths: 

      The authors generated a mouse model that enabled them to study the role of BEND2 in meiosis. The role of BEND2 in female fertility is novel and enhances our knowledge of genes involved in the establishment of the primordial follicle pool. 

      Weaknesses: 

      The manuscript extensively explores the role of BEND2 in male meiosis; however, a more interesting result was obtained from the study of female mice. 

      We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s thoughtful evaluation of our work and recognition of the strengths of our study. We are especially grateful for the acknowledgment of the novelty of our findings regarding the role of BEND2 in female fertility. While we extensively characterized the e ects of BEND2 depletion in male meiosis, we agree that the phenotype observed in females provides particularly interesting insights into the establishment of the primordial follicle pool. 

      Reviewer #2 (Public review): 

      In their manuscript entitled "BEND2 is a crucial player in oogenesis and reproductive aging", the authors present their findings that full-length BEND2 is important for repair of meiotic double strand break repair in spermatocytes, regulation of LINE-1 elements in spermatocytes, and proper oocyte meiosis and folliculogenesis in females. The manuscript utilizes an elegant system to specifically ablate the full-length form of BEND2 which has been historically di icult to study due to its location on the X chromosome and male sterility of global knockout animals. 

      The authors have been extremely responsive to reviewer critiques and have presented strong data and appropriate conclusions, making it an excellent addition to the field. 

      We are truly grateful for the reviewer’s thoughtful review and recognition of the key contributions of our study. We appreciate the acknowledgment of how our model overcomes the challenges in studying BEND2 and the importance of our findings in both male and female meiosis. We also value the reviewer’s encouraging comments on our responsiveness to their feedback and the quality of our data and conclusions.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review): 

      Huang et al. investigated the phenotype of Bend2 mutant mice which expressed truncated isoform. Bend2 deletion in male showed fertility and this enabled them to analyze the BEND2 function in females. They showed that Bend2 deletion in females showed decreasing follicle number which may lead to loss of ovarian reserve. 

      Strengths: 

      They found the truncated isoform of Bend2 and the depletion of this isoform showed decreasing follicle number at birth. 

      Weaknesses: 

      The authors showed novel factors that impact ovarian reserve. Although the number of follicles and conception rate are reduced in mutant mice, the in vitro fertilization rate is normal and follicles remain at 40 weeks of age. It is difficult to know how critical this is when applied to the human case. 

      We greatly appreciate the reviewer’s comments and recognition of the strengths of our work. We are grateful for their acknowledgment of our findings related to the truncated isoform of Bend2 and its e ect on ovarian reserve. We also agree that, although our study provides important insights, we are still far from directly applying these results to human clinical scenarios. There is much further research needed before these findings can be translated. 

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):: 

      The authors have addressed all concerns both editorially and experimentally. This is a very nice manuscript, and I congratulate the authors on their work. 

      We sincerely appreciate your kind words and thoughtful review. Your feedback has been invaluable in improving our manuscript, and we are grateful for your time and effort. Thank you for your support and encouragement!

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):: 

      In Figure 3, graphs in panels C & D have typos in the early zygotene column where it reads "zyotene". 

      We appreciate your careful review and for pointing out the typos in Figure 4, which has been corrected in the new version of the manuscript. 

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors): 

      ・Since there are two isoforms of Bend2, and the authors depleted one isoform, this is not suitable to use "full length" in the titles and in the manuscripts. 

      We respectfully disagree with the reviewer’s comment. In our mouse model, we specifically remove the full-length isoform of Bend2. Therefore, we consider it appropriate to refer to it as such in the manuscript. Our results indicate that the full-length isoform is not required to complete meiotic prophase in males but is indispensable for setting up the ovarian reserve in females. We appreciate the reviewer’s input and are happy to clarify this point further if needed.

      ・Is there any reason why authors used 7 month old females for in vitro fertilization? It may not be recognized as aged mice but it seems a bit old to perform IVF especially when the ovarian reserve in mutant mice is decreased. If there is any reason, please clarify it. In addition, since the authors added IVF data, which showed similar fertilization ratio between control and mutant, the authors need to discuss why the litter size was decreased in mutant mice. It may be to strong to conclude "subfertility". 

      We used 7-month-old females for IVF because this falls within the age range of the samples analyzed for ovarian reserve, with the oldest females being 8 months old. Regarding the apparent discrepancy between IVF results and litter size, we addressed this in the discussion section of the manuscript: 'Interestingly, our mutant oocyte quality analysis suggests that mature oocytes from mutant females are equally competent to develop into a blastocyst as control ones. These data suggest that the subfertility observed in Bend2 mutants may be due to errors in later developmental stages, such as implantation or organogenesis.' We appreciate the reviewer’s feedback and hope this clarification helps.

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      I know this is likely the definition from the reference, but it seems weird to specifically mention marriage--as that is not required to procreate

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated DG neuronal activity at the population and single cell level across sleep/wake periods. They found an infraslow oscillation (0.01-0.03 Hz) in both granule cells (GC) and mossy cells (MC) during NREM sleep. The important findings are:

      (1) The antiparallel temporal dynamics of DG neuron activities and serotonin neuron activities/extracellular serotonin levels during NREM sleep<br /> (2) The GC Htr1a-mediated GC infraslow oscillation.

      Strengths:

      (1) The combination of polysomnography, Ca-fiber photometry, two-photon microscopy and gene depletion is technically sound. The coincidence of microarousals and dips in DG population activity is convincing. The dip in activity in upregulated cells is responsible for the dip at the population level.

      (2) DG GCs express excitatory Htr4 and Htr7 in addition to inhibitory Htr1a, but deletion of Htr1a is sufficient to disrupt DG GC infraslow oscillation, supporting the importance of Htr1a in DG activity during NREM sleep.

      Weaknesses from the original round of review:

      (1) The current data set and analysis are insufficient to interpret the observation correctly [...].

      (2) It is acceptable that DG Htr1a KO induces the reduced freezing in the CFC test (Fig. 6E, F), but it is too much of a stretch that the disruption of DG ISO causes impaired fear memory. There should be a correlation.

      (3) It is necessary to describe the extent of AAV-Cre infection. The authors injected AAV into the dorsal DG (AP -1.9 mm), but the histology shows the ventral DG (Supplementary Fig. 4), which reduces the reliability of this study.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thank you for the clarification of the detection criteria and the quantification of the specific events. This reviewer can now follow the authors' interpretation.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Turi, Teng and the team used state-of-the-art techniques to provide convincing evidence on the infraslow oscillation of DG cells during NREM sleep, and how serotonergic innervation modulates hippocampal activity pattern during sleep and memory. First, they showed that the glutamatergic DG cells become activated following an infraslow rhythm during NREM sleep. In addition, the infraslow oscillation in the DG is correlated with rhythmic serotonin release during sleep. Finally, they found that specific knockdown of 5-HT receptors in the DG impairs the infraslow rhythm and memory, suggesting that serotonergic signaling is crucial for regulating DG activity during sleep. Given that the functional role of infraslow rhythm still remains to be studied, their findings deepen our understanding on the role of DG cells and serotonergic signaling in regulating infraslow rhythm, sleep microarchitecture and memory.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated DG neuronal activity at the population and single cell level across sleep/wake periods. They found an infraslow oscillation (0.01-0.03 Hz) in both granule cells (GC) and mossy cells (MC) during NREM sleep. The important findings are 1) the antiparallel temporal dynamics of DG neuron activities and serotonin neuron activities/extracellular serotonin levels during NREM sleep, and 2) the GC Htr1a-mediated GC infraslow oscillation.

      Strengths:

      (1) The combination of polysomnography, Ca-fiber photometry, two-photon microscopy and gene depletion is technically sound. The coincidence of microarousals and dips in DG population activity is convincing. The dip in activity in upregulated cells is responsible for the dip at the population level.

      (2) DG GCs express excitatory Htr4 and Htr7 in addition to inhibitory Htr1a, but deletion of Htr1a is sufficient to disrupt DG GC infraslow oscillation, supporting the importance of Htr1a in DG activity during NREM sleep.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The current data set and analysis are insufficient to interpret the observation correctly.<br /> a. In Fig 1A, during NREM, the peaks and troughs of GC population activities seem to gradually decrease over time. Please address this point.

      b. In Fig 1F, about 30% of Ca dips coincided with MA (EMG increase) and 60% of Ca dips did not coincide with EMG increase. If this is true, the readers can find 8 Ca dips which are not associated with MAs from Fig 1E. If MAs were clustered, please describe this properly.<br /> c. In Fig 1F, the legend stated the percentage during NREM. If the authors want to include the percentage of wake and REM, please show the traces with Ca dips during wake and REM. This concern applies to all pie charts provided by the authors.

      d. In Fig 1C, please provide line plots connecting the same session. This request applies to all related figures.

      e. In Fig 2C, the significant increase during REM and the same level during NREM are not convincing. In Fig 2A, the several EMG increasing bouts do not appear to be MA, but rather wakefulness, because the duration of the EMG increase is greater than 15 seconds. Therefore, it is possible that the wake bouts were mixed with NREM bouts, leading to the decrease of Ca activity during NREM. In fact, In Fig 2E, the 4th MA bout seems to be the wake bout because the EMG increase lasts more than 15 seconds.

      f. Fig 5D REM data are interesting because the DRN activity is stably silenced during REM. The varied correlation means the varied DG activity during REM. The authors need to address it.

      g. In Fig 6, the authors should show the impact of DG Htr1a knockdown on sleep/wake structure including the frequency of MAs. I agree with the impact of Htr1a on DG ISO, but possible changes in sleep bout may induce the DG ISO disturbance.

      (2) It is acceptable that DG Htr1a KO induces the reduced freezing in the CFC test (Fig. 6E, F), but it is too much of a stretch that the disruption of DG ISO causes impaired fear memory. There should be a correlation.

      (3) It is necessary to describe the extent of AAV-Cre infection. The authors injected AAV into the dorsal DG (AP -1.9 mm), but the histology shows the ventral DG (Supplementary Fig. 4), which reduces the reliability of this study.

      Responses to weaknesses mentioned above have been addressed in the first revision.

      Comments on revisions:

      In the first revision, I pointed out the inappropriate analysis of the EEG/EMG/photometry data and gave examples. The authors responded only to the points raised and did not seem to see the need to improve the overall analysis and description. In this second revision, I would like to ask the authors to improve them. The biggest problem is that the detection criteria and the quantification of the specific event are not described at all in Methods and it is extremely difficult to follow the statement. All interpretations are made by the inappropriate data analysis; therefore, I have to say that the statement is not supported by the data.

      Please read my following concerns carefully and improve them.

      (1) The definition of the event is critical to the detection of the event and the subsequent analysis. In particular, the authors explicitly describe the definition of MA (microarousal), the trough and peak of the population level of intracellular Ca concentrations, or the onset of the decline and surge of Ca levels.

      (1-1) The authors categorized wake bouts of <15 seconds with high EMG activity as MA (in Methods). What degree of high EMG is relevant to MA and what is the lower limit of high EMG? In Fig 1E, there are some EMG spikes, but it was unclear which spike/wave (amplitude/duration) was detected as MA-relevant spike and which spike was not detected. In Fig 2E, the 3rd MA coincides with the EMG spike, but other EMG spikes have comparable amplitude to the 3rd MA-relevant EMG spike. Correct counting of MA events is critical in Fig 1F, 2F, 4C.

      We have added more information about the MA definition in Methods, including EMG amplitude. Furthermore, we have re-analyzed MA and MA-related calcium signals in Fig1 and Fig2. Fig-S1 shows the traces of EMG aptitude for all MA events show in Fig1G and Fig2G.

      (1-2) Please describe the definition of Ca trough in your experiments. In Fig 1G, the averaged trough time is clear (~2.5 s), so I can acknowledge that MA is followed by Ca trough. However, the authors state on page 4 that "30% of the calcium troughs during NREM sleep were followed by an MA epoch". This discrepancy should be corrected.

      We apologize for the misleading statement. We meant 30% of ISO events during NERM sleep. We have corrected this. To detect the calcium trough of ISO, we first calculated a moving baseline (blue line in Fig-S2 below) by smoothing the calcium signals over 60 s, then set a threshold (0.2 standard deviation from the moving baseline) for events of calcium decrease, and finally detected the minimum point (red dots in Fig-S2) in each event as the calcium trough. We have added these in Methods.

      (1-3) Relating comment 1-2, I agree that the latency is between MA and Ca through in page 4, as the authors explain in the methods, but, in Fig 1G, t (latency) is labeled at incorrect position. Please correct this.

      We are sorry for the mistake in describing the latency in the Methods. The latency was defined as the time difference between the onset of calcium decline (see details below in 1-4) and the onset of the MA. We have corrected this in the revised manuscript. Thus, the labeling in Fig1G was correct.

      (1-4) The authors may want to determine the onset of the decline in population Ca activity and the latency between onset and trough (Fig 1G, latency t). If so, please describe how the onset of the decline is determined. In Fig 1G, 2G, S6, I can find the horizontal dashed line and infer that the intersection of the horizontal line and the Ca curve is considered the onset. However, I have to say that the placement of this horizontal line is super arbitrary. The results (t and Drop) are highly dependent on the position of horizontal line, so the authors need to describe how to set the horizontal line.

      Indeed, we used the onset of calcium decline to calculate the latency as mentioned above. First, we defined the baseline (dashed line in Fig1G) by calculating the average of calcium signals in the10s window before the MA (from -15s to -5s in Fig1G). The onset of calcium decline is defined as the timepoint where calcium decrease was larger than 0.05 SD from this baseline. We have added these in Methods.

      (1-5) In order to follow Fig 1F correctly, the authors need to indicate the detection criteria of "Ca dip (in legend)". Please indicate "each Ca dip" in Fig 1E. As a reader, I would like to agree with the Ca dip detection of this Ca curve based on the criteria. Please also indicate "each Ca dip" in Fig 2E and 2F. In the case of the 2nd and 3rd MAs, do they follow a single Ca dip or does each MA follow each Ca dip? This chart is highly dependent on the detection criteria of Ca dip.

      We have indicated each ca dip in Fig 1 and Fig 2.

      As I mentioned above, most of the quantifications are not based on the clear detection criteria. The authors need to re-analyze the data and fix the quantification. Please interpret data and discuss the cellular mechanism of ISO based on the re-analyzed quantification.

      As suggested, we have re-analyzed the MA and MA-related photometry signals. Accordingly, parts of Fig1 and Fig2 have been revised. Although there are some small changes, the main results and conclusions remain unchanged.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors employ a series of well-conceived and well-executed experiments involving photometric imaging of the dentate gyrus and raphe nucleus, as well as cell-type specific genetic manipulations of serotonergic receptors that together serve to directly implicate serotonergic regulation of dentate gyrus (DG) granule (GC) and mossy cell (MC) activity in association with an infra slow oscillation (ISO) of neural activity has been previously linked to general cortical regulation during NREM sleep and microarousals.

      Strengths:

      There are a number of novel and important results, including the modulation of dentage granule cell activity by the infraslow oscillation during NREM sleep, the selective association of different subpopulations of granule cells to microarousals (MA), the anticorrelation of raphe activity with infraslow dentate activity.

      The discussion includes a general survey of ISOs and recent work relating to their expression in other brain areas and other potential neuromodulatory system involvement, as well as possible connections with infraslow oscillations, micro arousals, and sensory sensitivity.

      Weaknesses:

      - The behavioral results showing contextual memory impairment resulting from 5-HT1a knockdown are fine, but are over-interpreted. The term memory consolidation is used several times, as well as references to sleep-dependence. This is not what was tested. The receptor was knocked down, and then 2 weeks later animals were found to have fear conditioning deficits. They can certainly describe this result as indicating a connection between 5-HT1a receptor function and memory performance, but the connection to sleep and consolidation would just be speculation. The fact that 5-HT1a knockdown also impacted DG ISOs does not establish dependency. Some examples of this are:

      – The final conclusion asserts "Together, our study highlights the role of neuromodulation in organizing neuronal activity during sleep and sleep-dependent brain functions, such as memory.", but the reported memory effects (impairment of fear conditioning) were not shown to be explicitly sleep-dependent.

      – Earlier in the discussion it mentions "Finally, we showed that local genetic ablation of 5-HT1a receptors in GCs impaired the ISO and memory consolidation". The effect shown was on general memory performance - consolidation was not specifically implicated.

      – The assertion on page 9 that the results demonstrate "that the 5-HT is directly acting in the DG to gate the oscillations" is a bit strong given the magnitude of effect shown in Fig. 6D, and the absence of demonstration of negative effect on cortical areas that also show ISO activity and could impact DG activity (see requested cortical sigma power analysis).

      – Recent work has shown that abnormal DG GC activity can result from the use of the specific Ca indicator being used (GCaMP6s). (Teng, S., Wang, W., Wen, J.J.J. et al. Expression of GCaMP6s in the dentate gyrus induces tonic-clonic seizures. Sci Rep 14, 8104 (2024). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-024-58819-9). The authors of that study found that the effect seemed to be specific to GCaMP6s and that GCaMP6f did not lead to abnormal excitability. Note this is of particular concern given similar infraslow variation of cortical excitability in epilepsy (cf Vanhatalo et al. PNAS 2004). While I don't think that the experiments need to be repeated with a different indicator to address this concern, you should be able to use the 2p GCaMP7 experiments that have already been done to provide additional validation by repeating the analyses done for the GCaMP6s photometry experiments. This should be done anyway to allow appropriate comparison of the 2p and photometry results.

      – While the discussion mentions previous work that has linked ISOs during sleep with regulation of cortical oscillations in the sigma band, oddly no such analysis is performed in the current work even though it is presumably available and would be highly relevant to the interpretation of a number of primary results including the relationship between the ISOs and MAs observed in the DG and similar results reported in other areas, as well as the selective impact of DG 5-HT1a knockdown on DG ISOs. For example, in the initial results describing the cross correlation of calcium activity and EMG/EEG with MA episodes (paragraph 1, page 4), similar results relating brief arousals to the infraslow fluctuation in sleep spindles (sigma band) have been reported also at .02 Hz associated with variation in sensory arousability (cf. Cardis et al., "Cortico-autonomic local arousals and heightened somatosensory arousability during NREMS of mice in neuropathic pain", eLife 2021). It would be important to know whether the current results show similar cortical sigma band correlations. Also, in the results on ISO attenuation following 5-HT1 knockdown on page 7 (fig. 6), how is cortical EEG affected? is ISO still seen in EEG but attenuated in DG?

      – The illustrations of the effect of 5-HT1a knockdown shown in Figure 6 are somewhat misleading. The examples in panels B and C show an effect that is much more dramatic than the overall effect shown in panel D. Panels B and C do not appear to be representative examples. Which of the sample points in panel D are illustrated in panels B, C? it is not appropriate to arbitrarily select two points from different animals for comparison, or worse, to take points from the extremes of the distributions. If the intent is to illustrate what the effect shown in D looks like in the raw data, then you need to select examples that reflect the means shown in panel D. It is also important to show the effect on cortical EEG, particularly in sigma band to see if the effects are restricted to the DG ISOs. It would also be helpful to show that MAs and their correlations as shown in Fig 1 or G as well as broader sleep architecture are not affected.

      – On page 9 of the results it states that GCs and MCs are upregulated during NREM and their activity is abruptly terminated by MAs through a 5-HT mediated mechanism. I didn't see anything showing the 5-HT dependence of the MA activity correlation. The results indicate a reduction in ISO modulation of GC activity but not the MA correlated activity. I would like to see the equivalent of Fig 1,2 G panels with the 5-HT1a manipulation.

      Responses to Revewer#3 have been addressed in the first revision. 

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor comment: Several recent publications from different laboratories have shown rhythmic release of norepinephrine (NE) (~0.03 Hz) in the medial prefrontal cortex, the thalamus, and in the locus coeruleus (LC) of the mouse during sleep-wake cycles-> Please add "preoptic area" here

      We have added the citation.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor

      (1) (abstract, page 2 line 9) what kind of "increased activity" did the authors find?

      Increased activity compared to that during wakefulness. We have added this.

      (2) (result, page 4) please define first, early, and late stage of NREM sleep in the methods.

      We have added these in the Methods.

      (3) (result, page 6) please define "the risetime of the phasic increase".

      It refers to the latency between the increase of 5-HT and the MA onset. We have clarified this in the text.

      (4) (supplement Fig 3 legend) please reword "5-HT events" and "5-HT signals" because these are ambiguous.

      We have defined the events in the legend.

      (5) (Fig 5A) please replace the picture without bubbles.

      We have replaced the image in Fig5A.

    1. Author response:

      Reviewer 1:

      A primary limitation of this study, acknowledged by the authors, is its reliance on self-reports of participants’ emotional states. Although considerable effort was made to minimize expectation effects, further research is needed to confirm that the observed behavioral changes reflect genuine alterations in emotional states.

      Thank you very much for raising this point. We fully agree that self-reported emotional states are inherently subjective and that the ramifications of this need to be clarified in the manuscript. However, we would suggest that the focus on self-report may be a strength rather than a limitation. First, the regularities and rules underlying and determining emotional self-report are of primary importance and interest in their own right, and the work presented here does, we believe, shed light on a rich structure present in multivariate timeseries of subjective self-reports and their response to external inputs. Second, there is no clear definition of what a ”genuine emotion state” might be; particularly if there is a discrepancy with self-reported emotions.

      Additionally, the generalizability of the findings to long-term remediation strategies remains an open question.

      Yes, we agree that what we have described is limited to a short-term intervention and change.

      Whether these changes bear on longer-term changes remains to be assessed. Furthermore, the mechanisms or processes that would support such a maintenance are of substantial interest, and will be the focus of future work.

      Second, the statistical analysis, particularly the computational approach, sometimes lacks sufficient detail and refinement. While I will not elaborate on specific points here, one notable issue is the interpretation of the intrinsic matrix (A). The model-free analysis reveals correlations between emotions at a given time or within an emotional state across time points. However, it does not provide evidence to support lagged interactions across states that would justify non-diagonal elements in A. The other result concerning the dynamics matrix only highlights a trend in the dominant eigenvalue, which is difficult to interpret in isolation. The absence of a statistically significant group x intervention interaction furthermore makes this finding a little compelling. This weakens the study’s conclusions about the importance of intrinsic dynamics, as claimed in the title.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s detailed feedback on the statistical analysis and interpretation of the intrinsic dynamics matrix. It is true that the model-free analysis as presented focuses on within-state correlations and that we have not provided such model-free evidence for lagged interactions across states. We do note that the model comparison suggested that the intervention caused changes in the full A matrix. This would be unlikely if there had not been meaningful cross-emotion lagged effects. Similarly, inference of the A matrix could have revealed a diagonal matrix, and we preferred not to impose such an assumption a priori, as it is very restrictive. Nevertheless, in the absence of a statistically significant group x intervention interaction, the findings regarding the A matrix are less compelling than those related to the control analyses. While this is likely due to a lack of statistical power, these are important points which we will consider in more detail in the revision.

      Finally, to avoid potential misunderstandings of their work, the authors should be more careful about their use of terms pertaining to the control theory and take the time to properly define them. For example, the ”controllability” of emotional states can either denote that those states are more changeable (control theory definition), or, conversely, more tightly regulated (common interpretation, as used in the abstract). This is true for numerous terms (stability, sensitivity, Gramian, etc.) for which no clear definition nor references are provided. Readers unfamiliar with the framework of control theory will likely be at a loss without more guidance.

      Thank you for this point. We recognize the potential for misunderstanding due to the dual usage of terms such as ”controllability” and will improve the clarity to avoid any misunderstanding.

      Reviewer 2:

      Acquiring data online inevitably gives rise to selection and self-selection effects. This needs to be acknowledged clearly. Exacerbating this, participant remuneration seems low at an amount below the minimum or living wage in Western countries (do the authors know where their participants came from?).

      Thank you for this point. We certainly agree that different experimental settings can induce different biases, and this is no different for online settings. However, online tasks such as the one used here, have become accepted, and there is now a substantial literature showing that in-lab effects are often well-replicated in online settings (Gillan and Rutledge, 2021) . For the current study, it is not clear that an inperson setting may not induce comparably complex biases, e.g. to do with differences between experimenters. All participants were from the UK. Remuneration rates were comparable to other experimental settings, in keeping with other online studies, UK living wage recommendations, and ultimately determined according to institutional ethical guidance.

      Another concern is that the intervention does not simply take place before the second block begins but is ongoing during the whole of the second block in that it is integrated into the phrasing of the task on each trial. It is therefore somewhat misleading to speak of a period ’after the intervention’, and it would have been interesting to assess the effect of this by including a third group where the phrasing does not change, but the floating leaves intervention takes place.

      Thank you for this point. We acknowledge that the phrasing of the emotion question in the second block may have influenced the observed effects. Including a third group without the reminder would have provided valuable insights and is an important consideration for future studies. We will acknowledge this limitation.

      As mentioned in the Limitations section, observation noise was assumed and not estimated. While this is understandable in this case, the effect of this assumption could have been assessed by simulation with varying levels of observation (and process) noise.

      Thank you for this comment. We would like to clarify that both observation noise and process noise were estimated in the analyses. We will ensure this is emphasized better in the revised version to avoid future misunderstandings.

      Relatedly, the reliance on formal model comparison is unfortunate since the outcome of such comparisons is easily influenced by slight changes to assumptions such as noise levels. An alternative approach would have been to develop a favoured model based on its suitability to address the research question and its ability, established by simulation, to distill relevant changes of behaviour into reliable parameter estimates.

      We agree that model comparison alone is insufficient. This is why we have also included extensive simulations, including posterior predictive checks, and have followed established best-practice procedures (Wilson and Collins, 2019). We have focused on a relatively simple model space to avoid overfitting to the dataset, and hence reduce the risk of spurious findings. While we agree that outcomes will be influenced by underlying assumptions, this would persist with the suggested approach of relying on a favoured model. Simulations themselves rely on predefined structures and noise specifications, which inherently shape parameter recovery and inference. Relying only on a favoured model might risk model misspecification, whereby the model may not actually capture the data, and the parameters intended to capture the intervention effect could be confounded. We will clarify the reasoning behind our approach in the revised version.

      The statistical analyses clearly show the limitations of classical statistical testing with highly complex models of the kind the authors (commendably) use. Hunting for statistically significant interactions in a multivariate repeated-measures design relying on inputs from time seriesderived point estimates is a difficult proposition. While the authors make the best of the bad situation they create by using null-hypothesis significance testing, a more promising approach would have been to estimate parameters using a sampler like Stan or PyMC and then draw conclusions based on posterior predictive simulations.

      This comment raises several interesting points. First, we agree that the value of classical test on individual parameters within such complex situations is limited. This is why our main focus is on global measures like model comparison. Our use of the classical tests is more to support the understanding of the nature of the data, i.e. they have a more descriptive aim. We will hope to clarify this further in the revision. Second, in terms of sampling, we would like to emphasize that the Kalman filter is both efficient and analytical tractable, making it well-suited to our data and research question. It may have been possible to use sampling to obtain posterior distributions rather than point estimates. However, we did not judge this to be worth the (substantial) additional computational cost.

      Reviewer 3:

      An interesting but perhaps at present slightly confusing aspect of their described results relates to the ’controllability’ of emotions, which they define as their susceptibility to external inputs. Readers should note this definition is (as I understand it) quite distinct from, and sometimes even orthogonal to, concepts of emotional control in the emotion literature, which refer to intentional control of emotions (by emotion regulation strategies such as distancing). The authors also use this second meaning in the discussion. Because of the centrality of control/controllability (in both meanings) to this paper, at present it is key for readers to bear these dual meanings in mind for juxtaposed results that distancing ”reduces controllability” while causing ”enhanced emotional control”.

      We fully agree with the reviewer’s observation that ”controllability” can be interpreted in different ways. we will revise the text to ensure consistent usage and explicitly state the distinction between the control theory definition of controllability and its interpretation in the emotion regulation literature.

      As above the authors use an active control - a relaxation intervention - which is extremely closely matched with their active intervention (and a major strength). However, there was an additional difference between the groups (as I currently understand it): ”in the group allocated to the distancing intervention, the phrasing of the question about their feelings in the second video block reminded participants about the intervention, stating: ”You observed your emotions and let them pass like the leaves floating by on the stream.” I do wonder if the effects of distancing also have been partially driven by some degree of reappraisal (considered a separate emotion regulation strategy) since this reminder might have evoked retrospective changes in ratings.

      We appreciate this substantial point. While our study was designed to isolate the effects of distancing, we acknowledge that elements of reappraisal may also have influenced the results. We will discuss this in the revised version. Additionally, as noted in our response to Reviewer 2, including a third group without the reminder could have provided valuable information, and we consider this to be an important direction for future research.

      Not necessarily a weakness, but an unanswered question is exactly how distancing is producing these effects. As the authors point out, there is a possibility that eye-movement avoidance of the more emotionally salient aspects of scenes could be changing participants’ exposure to the emotions somewhat. Not discussed by the authors, but possibly relevant, is the literature on differences between emotion types on oculomotor avoidance, which could have contributed to differential effects on different emotions.

      Thank you very much for these suggestions. It is very true that different emotions can elicit different patterns of oculomotor avoidance, which could have contributed to our observed effects. Research suggests that emotions such as disgust are associated with visual avoidance (Armstrong et al., 2014; Dalmaijer et al., 2021), whereas anxiety and other negative emotions exhibited increased attentional bias after fear conditioning (Kelly and Forsyth, 2009; Pischek-Simpson et al., 2009). It would be very interesting to repeat the experiment with eye-tracking to examine these possibilities. What would be particularly interesting to examine is whether a distancing intervention induces multiple, emotionally-specific behaviours, or not.

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      Dalmaijer, E. S., Lee, A., Leiter, R., Brown, Z., and Armstrong, T. (2021). Forever yuck: Oculomotor avoidance of disgusting stimuli resists habituation. Journal of Experimental Psychology. General, 150(8):1598– 1611.

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    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study identifies a key role for bodywide canonical Wnt gradients in controlling the outcome of regeneration within planarians, likely acting in parallel to injury-induced cues that also use tissue asymmetry to control this process. In S. Mediterranea a central part of this decision process is the asymmetric expression of the Wnt inhibitor notum specifically at injury sites facing in the anterior direction to promote head formation and inhibit tail formation through regulation of canonical Wnt signaling pathways. Leveraging classic studies by T.H. Morgan over a century ago, which found that amputated thin transverse fragments occasionally incorrectly regenerate 2 heads rather than a head and a tail in a species of Girardia planarians, this study identifies a closely related species G. Sinensis which undergoes errors to regeneration specificity under similar challenges. Morgan had proposed that his results might arise from the use of a "gradient of materials" providing axis information across the body axis such that small tissue fragments are too narrow to interpret gradient differences, leading to head/tail polarity defects in regeneration. The authors show very convincingly that this species of planaria undergoes notum expression after injury, but unlike in S. Mediterranea, this occurs symmetrically at the onset of regeneration. Using RNAi, they show notum participates in the regeneration of mispolarized heads (though interestingly apparently not in normal head regeneration unlike in Smeds, at least under these conditions). G. Sinensis planarians, like many organisms, have abundant expression of Wnt genes posteriorly. To test whether this gradient of Wnts may participate in the regeneration distinct from any Wnt signals activated after injury, the authors use chemical inhibition to reduce Wnt signaling prior to injury and then alleviate inhibition following injury by removal of the drug and confirming successful washout of the drug using mass spec. They also raise a new antibody that can detect beta-catenin-1 in this species in order to monitor the body-wide cWnt gradient after these treatments, and correlate this with outcomes on the head/tail regeneration decision. Using this approach, they find that homeostatic inhibition of porcupine (required for Wnt secretion) could dampen the cWnt/beta-catenin gradient and increase the incidence of inappropriate head regeneration at posterior-facing wounds. In addition, they find that the cWnt gradient is less steep in larger animals that also concurrently have a higher incidence of mistakes in regeneration specificity. Together, the paper presents compelling experiments and analysis to support the conclusion that cWnt gradients are an important determinant of head/tail identity determination decisions in G. Sinensis, and thereby proposes a plausible model that the notum asymmetry present in S. Mediterranea could act in parallel to support the higher regeneration robustness observed in that species.

      Strengths:

      This is a great paper, an instant classic. It addresses an enduring problem that Morgan and others initiated more than a century ago and brings a new synthesis of ideas to clarify an important mechanism. I also like the term "regeneration specificity" which can provide a nice unification and generalization of ideas that other authors have variously described as regeneration patterning or regeneration polarity. The work is a tour de force that creatively builds new tools and observations to leverage a new model of planarian species for unraveling general mechanisms of regeneration decision-making. The experiments are rigorously conducted and I find the overall data to be quite compelling. I have some comments for the authors to consider below for drawing out the interpretation and also clarifying the underlying mechanism.

      Comments:

      (1) The G. Sinesis species showed accurate head/tail specificity in 2mm thick fragments but was strongly impaired at 1 mm thick. I am assuming that outcomes of pieces greater than 2mm would make similarly robust head/tail choices, implying a rather sharp transition occurring between 1 and 2 mm. In that case, in the gradient model, are there theoretical reasons to predict that polarity outcomes would decline sharply rather than gradually as size thickness decreases? I think the muscle fibers themselves are thought to have lengths on the order of 200 microns, so I wonder what could account for the characteristic length of less than 1mm here? From the lab's prior analysis of beta-cat gradient, is this perhaps the minimal length where a difference in bcat protein levels can be detected? This is not essential to resolve in this draft (in my view), just a very interesting question arising from the present study. Relatedly, it seems that the slope of cWnt at the wound site itself might not be enough information for polarity because at a highly granular level, this should be identical at posterior-facing wounds from trunk fragments versus thin transverse fragments obtained at the same AP position, yet trunk fragments succeed at regeneration specificity whereas thin transverse fragments fail.

      (2) The paper nicely shows strong evidence that notum expression is definitely symmetric at the first occurrence of its expression by 6 hours in D. Sinensis, and this is a really important result of the paper. At 12 hours, it does look to me in the FISH experiments that there is more persistence of expression at the anterior-facing wound versus the posterior-facing wounds (Fig 2D), although the methods for quantification in Fig2E/F do not show a difference in expression at the two wound sites at this time point. Could this difference arise from differences in the perdurance or timing of early wound-induced signaling at the two wound sites that was perhaps too subtle to detect in the quantification methods used? Or perhaps these images do not represent the population? On a related note, the quantification method seems to fail to show that in 6h Smeds, notum expression is indeed asymmetric. Probably the issue here is not the data in the FISH images themselves which strongly support the author's interpretations, but rather a deficiency or limitation of the quantification method used, which should be resolved so that the conclusions from the single FISH images can be interpreted robustly. For example, some authors have used a method of counting notum+ cells and I wonder if this could provide better quantitative information here.

      (3) Given that the double-headed phenotype is observed from thin transverse fragments, ideally, the symmetry of notum could be established to occur in those types of fragments as well. This experiment would clarify that notum is expressed at posterior-facing wounds in the very same types of fragments that undergo the highest levels of mistakes in regeneration specificity.

      (4) Is wnt1 expressed symmetrically at wound sites in this species? It seems there are cases like acoels where wound-induced Wnt activation can occur asymmetrically but through preferential expression of Wnts at posterior-facing wounds, rather than notum. It would be interesting to know although I also think the work the authors already have done in this study itself already constitutes a very comprehensive advance and could be the subject of future work.

      (5) I agree that notum is relatively much more strongly expressed at the far posterior region in D. Senesis than in Smeds, but it does seem from the RNAseq data it also has some locally enriched expression at the anterior pole. Because the RNAseq analysis involves scaling expression across the regions for each gene, it is difficult to know if the anterior expression is relatively lower or perhaps even about the same level of expression as the anterior pole expression of this gene in Smeds. Though not essential to make the desired arguments, in situs on notum in the intact animals would be helpful to clarify this. Relatedly it would be fascinating to know whether D. Senesis notum undergoes anterior-pole expression around the 72 hour or similar timepoint as in Smeds.

      (6) The assessment of beta-catenin gradients was done through protein extractions from whole tissue fragments. However, it has been shown in other planarian species that beta-catenin can have strong tissue-specific expression in, for example, the pharynx, brain, and reproductive systems. Some supporting evidence or argument should be presented to clarify the interpretation that the graded expression observed by western blotting cannot be fully explained by this kind of tissue-specific expression of beta-catenin rather than representing a true signaling gradient as interpreted by the authors. For example, if this antibody could be used in immunostaining, this could support the beta-catenin signaling gradient. Alternatively, information about the location of the pharynx or any other posterior reproductive tissues in D. Sinensis could be calibrated with respect to the fragment bins used for the gradient--perhaps a portion of the C59-dependent body-wide gradient measured here occurs fully within tail tissue that lacks other regionalized tissue that could be a potential additional source of beta-catenin. Further discussion and interpretation, or additional experiments, should be included to rule out alternative confounding sources of beta-catenin in order to clarify the interpretation of the western blot as representing a beta-catenin signaling gradient.

      (7) I find the analysis in Figure 5 to be quite compelling for showing the importance of cWnt/Bcat gradients in contributing to head/tail determination, and I also think that the author's discussion of the limitations of the approach are well articulated and considered. Based on prior literature, it also seems very likely that there is a third redundantly acting component to regeneration specificity, which is the amplification of small differences in cWnt in a directional-dependent manner early in the regeneration process (24-72 hours in Smeds). This would explain why post-amputation with porcupine inhibitor in D. Sinensis caused 100% penetrant defects in regeneration specificity while the pre-treatment paradigm caused a weaker effect (25-40% for larger animals). In Smeds, it is known already that delivery of dsRNAs against beta-catenin-1, wnt1, and notum only after injury caused polarity defects, and thus all three genes certainly have a function relevant for head/tail after injury (Petersen and Reddien 2008, 2009, 2011- please note these experiments were reported in the text of these studies and not in individual figures). This evidence, combined with extensive FISH and complementary RNAi studies in the field, strongly suggests that some combination of the 6-18h injury-induced phase but also very likely the subsequent "pole-specific phase" of wnt1 expression is likely to be important for driving or enacting the tail fate program and is therefore a component of the regeneration specificity mechanism described here.

      (8) Prior work has also demonstrated roles for Wnt genes expressed in gradients to participate in regeneration specificity. In particular, inhibition of the wntP-2/wnt11-5 gene, which is expressed in an animal-wide gradient, strongly enhanced the effects of inhibition of wnt1, which is the earliest wound-activated Wnt gene, to cause 100% penetrant posterior head regeneration phenotypes in S. mediterranea (Petersen and Reddien 2009). These observations are complementary to the present study by implicating Wnts expressed in bodywide gradients in the process of regeneration decision-making. Given that this study also showed that wnt1 is necessary for new wntP-2 expression during the wound-induced early phase and that wnt1 activation does not require beta-catenin for its expression, collectively suggest a more complex process involved in gradient detection and the involvement of wound signals likely beyond only autoregulation of the cWnt gradient or notum asymmetry mechanisms. Although this paper is cited already, framing the present study more fully in context with this and other relevant prior work would be helpful to contextualize the advance for the field.

    1. How 4 Schools Are Teaching SEL Skills in an Age of Social Media

      GPT Summary: Social Media, AI, and Student Social-Emotional Learning

      Educators are increasingly concerned about how social media and digital technology impact students’ social-emotional skills, such as communication, self-perception, and relationships. A national EdWeek survey found that 65% of educators believe they should play a role in teaching students how to use social media responsibly.

      The Role of SEL in Navigating Digital Challenges

      Social-emotional learning (SEL) helps students develop non-academic skills like emotional regulation, decision-making, and collaboration—essential for success in both school and life. However, not all school districts have incorporated SEL into their digital education strategies.

      How Four School Districts Approach SEL & Digital Citizenship

      1. Washoe County School District, Nevada • Focuses on digital reputation and long-term consequences of social media. • Teaches SEL skills through explicit instruction and daily classroom routines. • Hosts Parent University to educate parents on screen time, social media risks, and tech boundaries. • Incorporating AI literacy into SEL lessons.

      2. Pewaukee School District, Wisconsin • Established a digital citizenship curriculum early on. • Combines SEL and tech education to help students navigate digital stressors responsibly. • Teaches lateral reading to help students verify online information. • Provides regular SEL lessons through guidance counselors.

      3. Hermiston School District, Oregon • Prioritizes collaboration, critical thinking, and communication as key skills for the future. • Teaches students to use digital tools appropriately and reteaches skills when necessary. • Supports teachers with professional learning communities and instructional coaching. • Provides parents with seminars on digital well-being.

      4. San Ramon Valley Unified School District, California • Encourages students to recognize when to put technology down and focus on in-person interactions. • Uses counselor-led SEL activities to build social-emotional skills. • Focuses on peer influence, ensuring students support each other in making healthy digital choices. • Engages parents through information nights to address concerns about tech use.

      Key Takeaways • Digital literacy and SEL must go hand in hand to help students navigate social media responsibly. • Parental involvement is crucial, with schools offering guidance on screen time and tech boundaries. • Schools must actively teach responsible social media use, decision-making, and self-awareness to foster a healthier digital environment.

      While social media and AI continue to shape students’ lives, integrating SEL into digital education can empower them to use technology positively and responsibly.

    1. Using social media in education: 10 can’t-miss tips

      GPT Summary: 10 Ways Educators Can Use Social Media in the Classroom

      Social media offers educators and students numerous opportunities, from improving digital literacy to fostering engagement. Here are ten essential ways to integrate social media into education:

      1. Attract New Students • Use social media campaigns to highlight program benefits and increase enrollment. • Create engaging posts with student testimonials and success stories.

      2. Build a Community • Use Facebook Groups or class hashtags to foster discussion and collaboration. • Encourage students to create and manage their own online communities.

      3. Broadcast Updates & Alerts • Use platforms like X (formerly Twitter) for real-time updates. • Share important school-wide announcements on social media.

      4. Livestream Lectures • Stream classes via Facebook, Instagram, or YouTube for accessibility. • Provide recorded lectures for students to review at their own pace.

      5. Teach Digital Literacy • Educate students about responsible online behavior and media consumption. • Incorporate fact-checking exercises to combat misinformation.

      6. Encourage User-Generated Content (UGC) • Motivate students to post content related to coursework. • Use hashtags to organize and track student contributions.

      7. Support Active & Passive Learning • Use social media for interactive assignments like video or photo essays. • Encourage students to research and analyze online discussions.

      8. Teach Networking & Thought Leadership • Guide students in building LinkedIn profiles and connecting with professionals. • Encourage participation in online discussions with experts.

      9. Develop Critical Thinking Skills • Use platforms like X for concise argument writing and fact-checking exercises. • Encourage debates and discussions in social media forums.

      10. Celebrate Student & Alumni Achievements • Highlight student successes on social media to build pride and engagement. • Feature alumni achievements to inspire current students.

      Final Thoughts

      By integrating social media into the classroom, educators can enhance learning, communication, and digital literacy. Thoughtful implementation ensures a safe and productive environment for students to engage with technology meaningfully.

    1. Integrating Blogging into the Classroom

      GPT Summary: Integrating Blogging into the Classroom

      Blogging can be a powerful tool for student engagement, allowing them to express their perspectives on topics they care about while developing writing and digital literacy skills. However, many educators hesitate due to concerns about student participation, respectfulness, and online management.

      Overcoming Common Blogging Challenges • Encouraging Serious Participation: Students take blogging more seriously when their audience is authentic and engaged. Platforms like Youth Voices provide a real-world audience and set high expectations. • Teaching Academic Commentary: Commenting should be framed as a genre with clear guidelines, distinguishing it from casual social media interactions. • Building Student Ownership: Linking blogs to students’ personal emails fosters responsibility for their work and engagement with feedback. • Writing with Purpose: Allowing students to choose meaningful topics enhances motivation and authenticity.

      Best Practices for Blogging Success 1. Use an authentic platform with a professional and interactive audience. 2. Teach structured commenting as an academic skill. 3. Give students control over their posts while maintaining accountability. 4. Encourage writing on real-world issues to foster civic engagement.

      By implementing these strategies, teachers can turn blogging into a valuable educational experience while empowering students as thoughtful, engaged writers.

    1. Social Media in Education: 13 Ideas for the Classroom

      GPT Summary: Social Media in Education

      Social media has been a debated topic in education since gaining popularity in the early 2010s. However, many educators now recognize its potential benefits, including improving communication, collaboration, and digital literacy.

      How Social Media is Changing Education • Engaging Students: With 95% of American teens using at least one social media platform, educators can use these tools to interact with students where they already are. • Connecting Schools & Communities: Schools can use social media for announcements, event promotion, emergency alerts, and virtual meetings. • Enhancing Communication: Teachers can interact with students and parents in real time, providing updates and sharing resources.

      Pros & Cons of Social Media in the Classroom

      ✅ Benefits: • Increases engagement and participation, especially for students who struggle with in-person discussions. • Facilitates quick access to information and resources. • Helps students practice responsible digital citizenship. • Strengthens teacher-parent communication. • Free and widely available.

      ❌ Challenges: • Can be a distraction if not managed properly. • May reduce face-to-face communication skills. • Risks include cyberbullying and inappropriate content. • Requires careful monitoring and clear usage guidelines.

      8 Social Media Tools for Education 1. Facebook – Organizes class groups, shares updates, and enables live lessons. 2. Twitter – Posts short updates and resources; teaches concise writing. 3. Blogs – Encourages essay writing and digital journaling. 4. Pinterest – Organizes visual learning materials. 5. Instagram – Shares assignments, project updates, and visual content. 6. Reddit – Facilitates academic discussions and research. 7. YouTube – Hosts educational videos and student projects. 8. LinkedIn – Helps students build professional networks and resumes.

      5 Ways to Use Social Media in Learning 1. Blogs for Learning Progress – Students track their understanding over time. 2. Instagram/TikTok for Visual Responses – Encourages creative multimedia learning. 3. Twitter for Media Literacy – Teaches fact-checking skills. 4. LinkedIn for Career Readiness – Helps students build job market skills.

      Best Practices for Safe & Effective Use • Set Boundaries: Keep academic and personal accounts separate. • Teach Digital Literacy: Emphasize responsible and ethical social media use. • Highlight Student Achievements: Share class projects and accomplishments. • Manage Platforms Efficiently: Use scheduling tools like Hootsuite for multiple accounts.

      Social media can be a valuable educational tool when used thoughtfully. What are your thoughts on its role in education? Do you see any potential challenges in implementing these strategies?

    1. ch 2 pg 4 - Whatever can be proved to be good must be so by being shown to be a means to something admitted to be good without proof - there is a comprehensive formula, including all things which are in themselves good, and that what ever else is good, is not so as an end, but as a mean, the formula may be accepted or rejected, but is not a subject of what is commonly understood by proof - Mill will attempt to enter into the philosophical grounds which can be given for assenting to the utilitarian standard, I shall offer some illustrations of the doctrine itself; with the view of showing more clearly what it is, distinguishing it from what it is not, and disposing of such of the practical objections to it as either originate in, or are closely connected with, mistaken interpretations of its meaning

    Annotators

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews

      Reviewer #1:

      The biggest concern in this regard is: that almost all the characterization is performed in cultured dissociated neurons…

      While it is true that most of the characterization done in this paper was in cultured neurons, we verified that PFE3 mediates functional ablation of excitatory synapses in vivo (Fig. 3). Furthermore, the GPHN.FingR-XIAP (GFE3), a protein very similar to the complex formed following activation of paGFE3 and chGFE3, has been extensively tested by us and others in vivo(1-4).

      Reviewer #2:

      For paGFE3 and chGFE3, the E3 ligase (RING domain of Mdm2) is overexpressed throughout cells as a separate construct. Although the authors show that Gephyrin is not significantly reduced without light or chemical activation, it remains possible that other proteins could be ubiquitinated due to the overexpressed E3 domain.

      In our previous paper(1), we tested neurons under 3 conditions: 1. expressing a construct similar to PBP-E3, consisting of a FingR with a randomized binding domain fused to the same XIAP ring domain used in paGFE3 and chGFE3 (RAND-E3). 2. expressing GPHN.FingR. 3. not expressing any exogenous proteins (control neurons). In each case, we found that expression of a variety of excitatory and inhibitory synaptic proteins was not significantly different when exposed to either of these exogenous proteins compared with control neurons.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      (1)  Can the authors use the tools to show the ablation of endogenous PSD95 without FingR overexpression?

      The experiments described in Fig. 3 are an example of this type of experiment. Furthermore, the PSD-95.FingR was extensively tested and has been used in dozens of studies without any indication that its expression alters cellular function or morphology. Note also that the transcriptional regulation system of PSD-95.FingR limits the expression such that there is virtually no background, so it is not really being overexpressed.

      (2) I am missing some control experiments for the excitatory synapses ablator- can the authors show that cells transfected with the plasmid and no DOX, show similar numbers of synapses as neurons without transfection?

      We have added an experiment comparing cells expressing PSD-95.FingR alone, and others expressing PFE3 with no Dox. We found that the two types of cells express amounts of PSD-95 that are not significantly different (Fig. S2L).

      (3) I am not quite sure how they used paired statistics on staining since they could only stain the cell at the end of the experiment. Are the comparisons performed on different cells?

      These experiments were done on the same cells. However, the methods of labeling were different- the initial counting of synapses was done, so we agree with the reviewer that it would be best not to use a paired analysis. Accordingly, we have changed Figs. 1F and 2D.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper develops a phase method to obtain the excitatory and inhibitory afferents to certain neuron populations in the brainstem. The inferred contributions are then compared to the results of voltage clamp and current clamp experiments measuring the synaptic contributions to post-I, aug-E and ramp-I neurons.

      Strengths:

      The electrophysiology part of the paper is sound and reports novel features with respect to earlier work by JC Smith et al 2012, Paton et al 2022 (and others) who have mapped circuits of the respiratory central pattern generator. Measurements on ramp-I neurons, late-I neurons and two types of post-I neurons in Fig.2 besides measurements of synaptic inputs to these neurons in Fig.5 are to my knowledge new.

      Weaknesses:

      The phase method for inferring synaptic conductances fails to convince. The method rests on many layers of assumptions and the inferred connections in Fig.4 remain speculative. To be convincing, such method ought to be tested first on a model CPG with known connectivity to assess how good it is at inferring known connections back from the analysis of spatio-temporal oscillations. For biological data, once the network connectivity has been inferred as claimed, the straightforward validation is to reconstruct the experimental oscillations (Fig.2) noting that Rybak et al (Rybak, Paton Schwaber J. Neurophysiol. 77, 1994 (1997)) have already derived models for the respiratory neurons.

      The transformation from time to phase space, unlike in the Kuramoto model, is not justified here (L.94) and is wrong. The underpinning idea that "the synaptic conductances depend on the cycle phase and not on time explicitly" is flawed because synapses have characteristic decay times and delays to response which remain fixed when the period of network oscillations increases. Synaptic properties depend on time and not on phase in the network. One major consequence relevant to the present identification of excitatory or inhibitory behaviour, is that it cannot account for change in behaviour of inhibitory synapses - from inhibitory to excitatory action - when the inhibitory decay time becomes commensurable to the period of network oscillations (Wang & Buzsaki Journal of Neuroscience 16, 6402 (1996), van Vreeswijk et al. J. Comp. Neuroscience 1,313 (1994), Borgers and Kopell Neural Comput. 15, 2003). In addition, even small delays in the inhibitory synapse response relative to the pre-synaptic action potential also produce in-phase synchronization (Chauhan et al., Sci. Rep. 8, 11431 (2018); Borgers and Kopell, Neural Comput. 15, 509 (2003)). The present assumption are way too simplistic because you cannot account for these commensurability effects with a single parameter like the network phase. There is therefore little confidence that this model can reliably distinguish excitatory from inhibitory synapses when their dynamics properties are not properly taken into account.

      L..82, Eq.1 makes extremely crude assumptions that the displacement current (CdV/dt) is negligible and that the ion channel currents are all negligible. Vm(t) is also not defined. The assumption that the activation/inactivation times of all ion channels are small compared to the 10-20ms decay time of synaptic currents is not true in general. Same for the displacement current. The leak conductance is typically g~0.05-0.09ms/cm^2 while C~1uF/cm^2. Therefore the ratio C/g leak is in the 10-20ms range - the same as the typical docking neurotransmitter time in synapses.

      Models of brainstem CPG circuits have been known to exist for decades: JC Smith et al 2012, Paton et al 2022, Bellingham Clin. Exp. Pharm. And Physiol. 25, 847 (1998); Rubin et al., J. Neurophysiol. 101, 2146 (2009) among others. The present paper does not discuss existing knowledge on respiratory networks and gives the impression of reinventing the wheel from scratch. How will this paper add to existing knowledge?

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have done a good job at revising the manuscript to put this work into the context of earlier work on brainstem central pattern generators.

      I still believe the case for the method is not as convincing as it would have been if the method had been validated first on oscillations produced by a known CPG model. Why would the inference of synaptic types from the model CPG voltage oscillations be predetermined? Such inverse problems are quite complicated and their solution is often not unique or sufficiently constrained. Recovering synaptic weights (or CPG parameters) from limited observations of a highly nonlinear system is not warranted (Gutenkunst et al., Universally sloppy parameter sensitivities in systems biology models, PLoS Comp. Biol. 2007; www.doi.org/10.1371/journal.pcbi.0030189) especially when using surrogate biological models like Hodgkin-Huxley models.

      In p.2, the edited section refers to the interspike interval being much smaller than the period of the network. More important is to mention the relationship between the decay time of inhibitory synapses and the period of the network.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      By measuring intracellular changes in membrane voltage from a single neuron of the medulla the authors describe a method for determining the balance of excitatory and inhibitory synaptic drive onto a single neuron within this important brain region.

      Strengths:

      This data-driven approach to exploring neural circuits is well described and could be valuable in identifying microcircuits that generate rhythms. Importantly, perhaps, this inference method could enable microcircuits to be studied without the need for time consuming anatomical tracing or other more involved electrophysiological techniques. Therefore, I definitely can see the value in developing an approach of this type.

      Weaknesses:

      There are many assumptions that need to be accepted in order to successfully apply this technique and I was pleased to see that several of these assumption have been explored by the authors in this study.

      For example, this approach involves assuming the reversal potential that is associated with the different permeant ions that underlie the excitation and inhibition as well as the application of Ohms law to estimate the contribution of excitation and inhibitory conductance. My first concern was that this approach relies on a linear I-V relationship between the measured voltage and the estimated reversal potential. However, open rectification is a feature of any I-V relationship generated by asymmetric distributions of ions (see the GHK current equation) and will therefore be a particular issue for the inhibition resulting from asymmetrical Cl- ion gradients across GABA-A receptors. The mixed cation conductance that underlies most synaptic excitation will also generate a non-linear I-V relationship due to the inward rectification associated with polyamine block of AMPA receptors. The authors present evidence that over most of the voltage range examined the I-V relationship is linear and this is a helpful addition.

      This approach has similarities to earlier studies undertaken in the visual cortex that estimated the excitatory and inhibitory synaptic conductance changes that contributed to membrane voltage changes during receptive field stimulation. However, these approaches also involved the recording of transmembrane current changes during visual stimulation that were undertaken in voltage-clamp at various command voltages to estimate the underlying conductance changes. Molkov et al have attempted to essentially deconvolve the underlying conductance changes without this information and I am concerned that this simply may not be possible.

      The current balance equation (1) cited in this study is based upon the parallel conductance model developed by Hodgkin & Huxley. One key element of the HH equations is the inclusion of an estimate of the capacitive current generated due to the change in voltage across the membrane capacitance. While the present study takes into account the impact of membrane capacitance, a deeper discussion on how variations in capacitance across different neuron types might affect inference accuracy would be useful. Differences in capacitance could introduce variability in inferred conductances, potentially influencing model predictions.

      Studies using acute slicing preparations to examine circuit effects have often been limited to the study of small microcircuits - especially feedforward and feedback interneuron circuits. It is widely accepted that any information gained from this approach will always be compromised by the absence of patterned afferent input from outside the brain region being studied. In this study, descending control from the Pons and the neocortex will not be contributing much to the synaptic drive and ascending information from respiratory muscles will also be absent completely. This may not have been such a major concern if this study was limited to demonstrating the feasibility of a methodological approach. However, this limitation does need to be considered when using an approach of this type to speculate on the prevalence of specific circuit motifs within the medulla (Figure 4). Therefore, I would argue that some discussion of this limitation should be included in this manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript examines the impact of congenital visual deprivation on the excitatory/inhibitory (E/I) ratio in the visual cortex using Magnetic Resonance Spectroscopy (MRS) and electroencephalography (EEG) in individuals whose sight was restored. Ten individuals with reversed congenital cataracts were compared to age-matched, normally sighted controls, assessing the cortical E/I balance and its interrelationship and to visual acuity. The study reveals that the Glx/GABA ratio in the visual cortex and the intercept and aperiodic signal are significantly altered in those with a history of early visual deprivation, suggesting persistent neurophysiological changes despite visual restoration. First of all, I would like to disclose that I am not an expert in congenital visual deprivation, nor in MRS. My expertise is in EEG (particularly in the decomposition of periodic and aperiodic activity) and statistical methods. Second, although the authors addressed some of my concerns on the previous version of this manuscript, major concerns and flaws remain in terms of methodological and statistical approaches along with the (over) interpretation of the results.

      Persistent specific concerns include:<br /> (1 3.1) Response to Variability in Visual Deprivation<br /> Rather than listing the advantages and disadvantages of visual deprivation, I recommend providing at least a descriptive analysis of how the duration of visual deprivation influenced the measures of interest. This would enhance the depth and relevance of the discussion.

      (2 3.2) Small Sample Size<br /> The issue of small sample size remains problematic. The justification that previous studies employed similar sample sizes does not adequately address the limitation in the current study. I strongly suggest that the correlation analyses should not feature prominently in the main manuscript or the abstract, especially if the discussion does not substantially rely on these correlations. Please also revisit the recommendations made in the section on statistical concerns.

      (3 3.3) Statistical Concerns<br /> While I appreciate the effort of conducting an independent statistical check, it merely validates whether the reported statistical parameters, degrees of freedom (df), and p-values are consistent. However, this does not address the appropriateness of the chosen statistical methods.

      Several points require clarification or improvement:

      (4) Correlation Methods: The manuscript does not specify whether the reported correlation analyses are based on Pearson or Spearman correlation.<br /> This has been addressed in the final revision

      (5) Confidence Intervals: Include confidence intervals for correlations to represent the uncertainty associated with these estimates.<br /> This has been addressed in the final revision

      (6) Permutation Statistics: Given the small sample size, I recommend using permutation statistics, as these are exact tests and more appropriate for small datasets.

      (7) Adjusted P-Values: Ensure that reported Bonferroni corrected p-values (e.g., p > 0.999) are clearly labeled as adjusted p-values where applicable.<br /> This has been addressed in the final revision

      (8) Figure 2C<br /> Figure 2C still lacks crucial information that the correlation between Glx/GABA ratio and visual acuity was computed solely in the control group (as described in the rebuttal letter). Why was this analysis restricted to the control group? Please provide a rationale.

      (9 3.4) Interpretation of Aperiodic Signal<br /> Relying on previous studies to interpret the aperiodic slope as a proxy for excitation/inhibition (E/I) does not make the interpretation more robust.

      (10) Additionally, the authors state:<br /> "We cannot think of how any of the exploratory correlations between neurophysiological measures and MRS measures could be accounted for by a difference e.g. in skull thickness."

      (11) This could be addressed directly by including skull thickness as a covariate or visualizing it in scatterplots, for instance, by representing skull thickness as the size of the dots.

      (12 3.5) Problems with EEG Preprocessing and Analysis<br /> Downsampling: The decision to downsample the data to 60 Hz "to match the stimulation rate" is problematic. This choice conflates subsequent spectral analyses due to aliasing issues, as explained by the Nyquist theorem. While the authors cite prior studies (Schwenk et al., 2020; VanRullen & MacDonald, 2012) to justify this decision, these studies focused on alpha (8-12 Hz), where aliasing is less of a concern compared of analyzing aperiodic signal. Furthermore, in contrast, the current study analyzes the frequency range from 1-20 Hz, which is too narrow for interpreting the aperiodic signal asE/I. Typically, this analysis should include higher frequencies, spanning at least 1-30 Hz oreven 1-45 Hz (not 20-40 Hz).

      (13) Baseline Removal: Subtracting the mean activity across an epoch as a baseline removal step is inappropriate for resting-state EEG data. This preprocessing step undermines the validity of the analysis. The EEG dataset has fundamental flaws, many of which were pointed out in the previous review round but remain unaddressed. In its current form, the manuscript falls short of standards for robust EEG analysis.

      (14) The authors mention: "The EEG data sets reported here were part of data published earlier (Ossandón et al.,2023; Pant et al., 2023)." Thus, the statement "The group differences for the EEG assessments corresponded to those of a larger sample of CC individuals (n=38) " is a circular argument and should be avoided."<br /> The authors addressed this comment and adjusted the statement. However, I do not understand, why the full sample published earlier (Ossandón et al., 2023) was not used in the current study?

      Comments on revisions:

      The current version of the manuscript is almost unchanged compared to the last version. Unfortunately, I observed that the authors have not adequately addressed most of my previous suggestions; rather, they provided justifications for not incorporating them.

      Given this, I do not see the need to modify my initial assessment.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      We thank the reviewers for their efforts. They have pointed out several shortcomings and made very helpful suggestions. Based on their feedback, we have substantially revised the manuscript and feel the paper has been much improved because of it.

      Notable changes are:

      (1) As our model does not contain feed-back connections, the focus of the study is now more clearly communicated to be on feed-forward processes only, with appropriate justifications for this choice added to the Introduction and Discussion sections. Accordingly, the title has been changed to include the term “feed-forward”.

      (2) The old Figure 5 has been removed in favor of reporting correlation scores to the right of the response profiles in other figures.

      (3) We now discuss changes to the network architecture (new Figure 5) and fine-tuning of the hyperparameters (new Figure 6) in the main text instead of only the Supplementary Information.

      (4) The discussion on qualitative versus quantitative analysis has been extended and given its own subsection entitled “On the importance of experimental contrasts and qualitative analysis of the model”.

      Below, we address each point that the reviewers brought up in detail and outline what improvements we have made in the revision to address them.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This study trained a CNN for visual word classification and supported a model that can explain key functional effects of the evoked MEG response during visual word recognition, providing an explicit computational account from detection and segmentation of letter shapes to final word-form identification.

      Strengths:

      This paper not only bridges an important gap in modeling visual word recognition, by establishing a direct link between computational processes and key findings in experimental neuroimaging studies, but also provides some conditions to enhance biological realism.

      Weaknesses:

      The interpretation of CNN results, especially the number of layers in the final model and its relationship with the processing of visual words in the human brain, needs to be further strengthened.

      We have experimented with the number of layers and the number of units in each layer. In the previous version of the manuscript, these results could be found in the supplementary information. For the revised version, we have brought some of these results into the main text and discuss them more thoroughly.

      We have added a figure (Figure 5 in the revised manuscript) showing the impact of the number of convolution and fully-connected layers on the response profiles of the layers, as well as the correlation with the three MEG components.

      We discuss the figure in the Results section as follows:

      “Various variations in model architecture and training procedure were evaluated. We found that the number of layers had a large impact on the response patterns produced by the model (Figure 5). The original VGG-11 architecture defines 5 convolution layers and 3 fully connected layers (including the output layer). Removing a convolution layer (Figure 5, top row), or removing one of the fully connected layers (Figure 5, second row), resulted in a model that did exhibit an enlarged response to noisy stimuli in the early layers that mimics the Type-I response. However, such models failed to show a sufficiently diminished response to noisy stimuli in the later layers, hence failing to produce responses that mimic the Type-II or N400m, a failure which also showed as low correlation scores.

      Adding an additional convolution layer (Figure 5, third row) resulted in a model where none of the layer response profiles mimics that of the Type-II response. The Type-II response is characterized by a reduced response to both noise and symbols, but an equally large response to consonant strings, real and pseudo words. However, in the model with an additional convolution layer, the consonant strings evoked a reduced response already in the first fully connected layer, which is a feature of the N400m rather than the Type-II. These kind of subtleties in the response pattern, which are important for the qualitative analysis, generally did not show quantitatively in the correlation scores, as the fully connected layers in this model correlate as well with the Type-II response as models that did show a response pattern that mimics the Type-II.

      Adding an additional fully connected layer (Figure 5, fourth row) resulted in a model with similar response profiles and correlation with the MEG components as the original VGG-11 architecture (Figure 5, bottom row) The N400m-like response profile is now observed in the third fully connected layer rather than the output layer. However, the decrease in response to consonant strings versus real and pseudo words, which is typical of the N400m, is less distinct than in the original VGG-11 architecture.”

      And in the Discussion section:

      “In the model, convolution units are followed by pooling units, which serve the purpose of stratifying the response across changes in position, size and rotation within the receptive field of the pooling unit. Hence, the effect of small differences in letter shape, such as the usage of different fonts, was only present in the early convolution layers, in line with findings in the EEG literature (Chauncey et al., 2008; Grainger & Holcomb, 2009; Hauk & Pulvermüller, 2004). However, the ability of pooling units to stratify such differences depends on the size of their receptive field, which is determined by the number of convolution-and-pooling layers. As a consequence, the response profiles of the subsequent fully connected layers was also very sensitive to the number of convolution-and-pooling layers. The optimal number of such layers is likely dependent on the input size and pooling strategy. Given the VGG-11 design of doubling the receptive field after each layer, combined with an input size of 225×225 pixels, the optimal number of convolution-andpooling layers for our model was five, or the model would struggle to produce response profiles mimicking those of the Type-II component in the subsequent fully connected layers (Figure 5).”

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) The similarity between CNNs and human MEG responses, including type-I (100ms), type-II (150ms), and N400 (400ms) components, looks like separately, lacking the sequential properties among these three components. Is the recurrent neural network (RNN), which can be trained to process and convert a sequential data input into a specific sequential data output, a better choice?

      When modeling sequential effects, meaning that the processing of the current word is influenced by the word that came before it, such as priming and top-down modulations, we agree that such a model would indeed require recurrency in its architecture. However, we feel that the focus of modeling efforts in reading has been overwhelmingly on the N400 and such priming effects, usually skipping over the pixel-to-letter process. So, for this paper, we were keen on exploring more basic effects such as noise and symbols versus letters on the type-I and type-II responses. And for these effects, a feed-forward model turns out to be sufficient, so we can keep the focus of this particular paper on bottom-up processes during single word reading, on which there is already a lot to say.

      To clarify our focus on feed-forward process, we have modified the title of the paper to be:

      “Convolutional networks can model the functional modulation of the MEG responses associated with feed-forward processes during visual word recognition” furthermore, we have revised the Introduction to highlight this choice, noting:

      “Another limitation is that these models have primarily focused on feed-back lexicosemantic effects while oversimplifying the initial feed-forward processing of the visual input.

      […]

      For this study, we chose to focus on modeling the early feed-forward processing occurring during visual word recognition, as the experimental setup in Vartiainen et al. (2011) was designed to demonstrate.

      […]

      By doing so, we restrict ourselves to an investigation of how well the three evoked components can be explained by a feed-forward CNN in an experimental setting designed to demonstrate feed-forward effects. As such, the goal is not to present a complete model of all aspects of reading, which should include feed-back effects, but rather to demonstrate the effectiveness of using a model that has a realistic form of input when the aim is to align the model with the evoked responses observed during visual word recognition.”

      And in the Discussion section:

      “In this paper we have restricted our simulations to feed-forward processes. Now, the way is open to incorporate convolution-and-pooling principles in models of reading that simulate feed-back processes as well, which should allow the model to capture more nuance in the Type-II and N400m components, as well as extend the simulation to encompass a realistic semantic representation.”

      (2) There is no clear relationship between the layers that signal needs to traverse in the model and the relative duration of the three components in the brain.

      While some models offer a tentative mapping between layers and locations in the brain, none of the models we are aware of actually simulate time accurately and our model is no exception.

      While we provide some evidence that the three MEG components are best modeled with different types of layers, and the type-I becomes somewhere before type-II and N400m is last in our model, the lack of timing information is a weakness of our model we have not been able to address. In our previous version, this already was the main topic of our “Limitations of the model” section, but since this weakness was pointed out by all reviewers, we have decided to widen our discussion of it:

      “One important limitation of the current model is the lack of an explicit mapping from the units inside its layers to specific locations in the brain at specific times. The temporal ordering of the components is simulated correctly, with the response profile matching that of the type-I occurring the layers before those matching the type-II, followed by the N400m. Furthermore, every component is best modeled by a different type of layer, with the type-I best described by convolution-and-pooling, the type-II by fully-connected linear layers and the N400m by a one-hot encoded layer. However, there is no clear relationship between the number of layers the signal needs to traverse in the model to the processing time in the brain. Even if one considers that the operations performed by the initial two convolution layers happen in the retina rather than the brain, the signal needs to propagate through three more convolution layers to reach the point where it matches the type-II component at 140-200 ms, but only through one more additional layer to reach the point where it starts to match the N400m component at 300-500 ms. Still, cutting down on the number of times convolution is performed in the model seems to make it unable to achieve the desired suppression of noise (Figure 5). It also raises the question what the brain is doing during the time between the type-II and N400m component that seems to take so long. It is possible that the timings of the MEG components are not indicative solely of when the feed-forward signal first reaches a certain location, but are rather dictated by the resolution of feed-forward and feedback signals (Nour Eddine et al., 2024).”

      See also our response to the next comment of the Reviewer, in which we dive more into the effect of the number of layers, which could be seen as a manipulation of time.

      (3) I am impressed by the CNN that authors modified to match the human brain pattern for the visual word recognition process, by the increase and decrease of the number of layers. The result of this part was a little different from the author’s expectation; however, the author didn’t explain or address this issue.

      We are glad to hear that the reviewer found these results interesting. Accordingly, we now discuss these results more thoroughly in the main text.

      We have moved the figure from the supplementary information to the main text (Figure 5 in the revised manuscript). And describe the results in the Results section:

      “Various variations in model architecture and training procedure were evaluated. We found that the number of layers had a large impact on the response patterns produced by the model (Figure 5). The original VGG-11 architecture defines 5 convolution layers and 3 fully connected layers (including the output layer). Removing a convolution layer (Figure 5, top row), or removing one of the fully connected layers (Figure 5, second row), resulted in a model that did exhibit an enlarged response to noisy stimuli in the early layers that mimics the Type-I response. However, such models failed to show a sufficiently diminished response to noisy stimuli in the later layers, hence failing to produce responses that mimic the Type-II or N400m, a failure which also showed as low correlation scores.

      Adding an additional convolution layer (Figure 5, third row) resulted in a model where none of the layer response profiles mimics that of the Type-II response. The Type-II response is characterized by a reduced response to both noise and symbols, but an equally large response to consonant strings, real and pseudo words. However, in the model with an additional convolution layer, the consonant strings evoked a reduced response already in the first fully connected layer, which is a feature of the N400m rather than the Type-II. These kind of subtleties in the response pattern, which are important for the qualitative analysis, generally did not show quantitatively in the correlation scores, as the fully connected layers in this model correlate as well with the Type-II response as models that did show a response pattern that mimics the Type-II.

      Adding an additional fully connected layer (Figure 5, fourth row) resulted in a model with similar response profiles and correlation with the MEG components as the original VGG-11 architecture (Figure 5, bottom row) The N400m-like response profile is now observed in the third fully connected layer rather than the output layer. However, the decrease in response to consonant strings versus real and pseudo words, which is typical of the N400m, is less distinct than in the original VGG-11 architecture.”

      We also incorporated these results in the Discussion:

      “However, the ability of pooling units to stratify such differences depends on the size of their receptive field, which is determined by the number of convolution-andpooling layers. This might also explain why, in later layers, we observed a decreased response to stimuli where text was rendered with a font size exceeding the receptive field of the pooling units (Figure 8). Hence, the response profiles of the subsequent fully connected layers was very sensitive to the number of convolution-and-pooling layers. This number is probably dependent on the input size and pooling strategy. Given the VGG11 design of doubling the receptive field after each layer, combined with an input size of 225x225 pixels, the optimal number of convolution-and-pooling layers for our model was five, or the model would struggle to produce response profiles mimicking those of the type-II component in the subsequent fully connected layers (Figure 5).

      […]

      A minimum of two fully connected layers was needed to achieve this in our case, and adding more fully connected layers would make them behave more like the component (Figure 5).”

      (4) Can the author explain why the number of layers in the final model is optimal by benchmarking the brain hierarchy?

      We have incorporated the figure describing the correlation between each model and the MEG components (previously Figure 5) with the figures describing the response profiles (Figures 4 and 5 in the revised manuscript and Supplementary Figures 2-6). This way, we (and the reader) can now benchmark every model qualitatively and quantitatively.

      As we stated in our response to the previous comment, we have added a more thorough discussion on the number of layers, which includes the justification for our choice for the final model. The benchmark we used was primarily whether the model shows the same response patterns as the Type I, Type II and N400 responses, which disqualifies all models with fewer than 5 convolution and 3 fully connected layers. Models with more layers also show the proper response patterns, however we see that there is actually very little difference in the correlation scores between different models. Hence, our justification for sticking with the original VGG11 architecture is that it produces the qualitative best response profiles, while having roughly the same (decently high) correlation with the MEG components. Furthermore, by sticking to the standard architecture, we make it slightly easier to replicate our results as one can use readily available pre-trained ImageNet weights.

      As well as always discussing the correlation scores in tandem with the qualitative analysis, we have added the following statement to the Results:

      “Based on our qualitative and quantitative analysis, the model variant that performed best overall was the model that had the original VGG11 architecture and was preinitialized from earlier training on ImageNet, as depicted in the bottom rows of Figure 4 and Figure 5.”

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      As has been shown over many decades, many potential computational algorithms, with varied model architectures, can perform the task of text recognition from an image. However, there is no evidence presented here that this particular algorithm has comparable performance to human behavior (i.e. similar accuracy with a comparable pattern of mistakes). This is a fundamental prerequisite before attempting to meaningfully correlate these layer activations to human neural activations. Therefore, it is unlikely that correlating these derived layer weights to neural activity provides meaningful novel insights into neural computation beyond what is seen using traditional experimental methods.

      We very much agree with the reviewer that a qualitative analysis of whether the model can explain experimental effects needs to happen before a quantitative analysis, such as evaluating model-brain correlation scores. In fact, this is one of the intended key points we wished to make.

      As we discuss at length in the Introduction, “traditional” models of reading (those that do not rely on deep learning) are not able to recognize a word regardless of exact letter shape, size, and (up to a point) rotation. In this study, our focus is on these low-level visual tasks rather than high-level tasks concerning semantics. As the Reviewer correctly states, there are many potential computational algorithms able to perform these visual task at a human level and so we need to evaluate the model not only on its ability to mimic human accuracy but also on generating a comparable pattern of mistakes. In our case, we need a pattern of behavior that is indicative of the visual processes at the beginning of the reading pipeline. Hence, rather than relying on behavioral responses that are produced at the very end, we chose the evaluate the model based on three MEG components that provide “snapshots” of the reading process at various stages. These components are known to manifest a distinct pattern of “behavior” in the way they respond to different experimental conditions (Figure 2), akin to what to Reviewer refers to as a “pattern of mistakes”. The model was first evaluated on its ability to replicate the behavior of the MEG components in a qualitative manner (Figure 4). Only then do we move on to a quantitative correlation analysis. In this manner, we feel we are in agreement with the approach advocated by the Reviewer.

      In the Introduction, we now clarify:

      “Another limitation is that these models have primarily focused on feed-back lexicosemantic effects while oversimplifying the initial feed-forward processing of the visual input.

      […]

      We sought to construct a model that is able to recognize words regardless of length, size, typeface and rotation, as well as humans can, so essentially perfectly, whilst producing activity that mimics the type-I, type-II, and N400m components which serve as snapshots of this process unfolding in the brain.

      […]

      These variations were first evaluated on their ability to replicate the experimental effects in that study, namely that the type-I response is larger for noise embedded words than all other stimuli, the type-II response is larger for all letter strings than symbols, and that the N400m is larger for real and pseudowords than consonant strings. Once a variation was found that could reproduce these effects satisfactorily, it was further evaluated based on the correlation between the amount of activation of the units in the model and MEG response amplitude.”

      To make this prerequisite more clear, we have removed what was previously Figure 5, which showed the correlation between the various models the MEG components out of the context of their response patterns. Instead, these correlation values are now always presented next to the response patterns (Figures 4 and 5, and Supplementary Figures 2-6 in the revised manuscript). This invites the reader to always consider these metrics in relation to one another.

      One example of a substantial discrepancy between this model and neural activations is that, while incorporating frequency weighting into the training data is shown to slightly increase neural correlation with the model, Figure 7 shows that no layer of the model appears directly sensitive to word frequency. This is in stark contrast to the strong neural sensitivity to word frequency seen in EEG (e.g. Dambacher et al 2006 Brain Research), fMRI (e.g. Kronbichler et al 2004 NeuroImage), MEG (e.g. Huizeling et al 2021 Neurobio. Lang.), and intracranial (e.g. Woolnough et al 2022 J. Neurosci.) recordings. Figure 7 also demonstrates that the late stages of the model show a strong negative correlation with font size, whereas later stages of neural visual word processing are typically insensitive to differences in visual features, instead showing sensitivity to lexical factors.

      We are glad the reviewer brought up the topic of frequency balancing, as it is a good example of the importance of the qualitative analysis. Frequency balancing during training only had a moderate impact on correlation scores and from that point of view does not seem impactful. However, when we look at the qualitative evaluation, we see that with a large vocabulary, a model without frequency balancing fails to properly distinguish between consonant strings and (pseudo)words (Figure 4, 5th row). Hence, from the point of view of being able to reproduce experimental effects, frequency balancing had a large impact. We now discuss this more explicitly in the revised Discussion section:

      “Overall, we found that a qualitative evaluation of the response profiles was more helpful than correlation scores. Often, a deficit in the response profile of a layer that would cause a decrease in correlation on one condition would be masked by an increased correlation in another condition. A notable example is the necessity for frequency-balancing the training data when building models with a vocabulary of 10 000. Going by correlation score alone, there does not seem to be much difference between the model trained with and without frequency balancing (Figure 4A, fifth row versus bottom row). However, without frequency balancing, we found that the model did not show a response profile where consonant strings were distinguished from words and pseudowords (Figure 4A, fifth row), which is an important behavioral trait that sets the N400m component apart from the Type-II component (Figure 2D). This underlines the importance of the qualitative evaluation in this study, which was only possible because of a straightforward link between the activity simulated within a model to measurements obtained from the brain, combined with the presence of clear experimental conditions.”

      It is true that the model, even with frequency balancing, only captures letter- and bigramfrequency effects and not the word-frequency effects that we know the N400m is sensitive to. Since our model is restricted to feed-forward processes, this finding adds to the evidence that frequency-modulated effects are driven by feed-back effects as modeled by Nour Eddine et al. (2024, doi:10.1016/j.cognition.2024.105755). See also our response to the next comment by the Reviewer where we discuss feed-back connections. We have added the following to the section about model limitations in the revised Discussion:

      “The fact that the model failed to simulate the effects of word-frequency on the N400m (Figure 8), even after frequency-balancing of the training data, is additional evidence that this effect may be driven by feed-back activity, as for example modeled by Nour Eddine et al. (2024).”

      Like the Reviewer, we initially thought that later stages of neural visual word processing would be insensitive to differences in font size. When diving into the literature to find support for this claim, we found only a few works directly studying the effect of font size on evoked responses, but, surprisingly, what we did find seemed to align with our model. We have added the following to our revised Discussion:

      “The fully connected linear layers in the model show a negative correlation with font size. While the N400 has been shown to be unaffected by font size during repetition priming (Chauncey et al., 2008), it has been shown that in the absence of priming, larger font sizes decrease the evoked activity in the 300–500 ms window (Bayer et al., 2012; Schindler et al., 2018). Those studies refer to the activity within this time window, which seems to encompass the N400, as early posterior negativity (EPN). What possibly happens in the model is that an increase in font size causes an initial stronger activation in the first layers, due to more convolution units receiving input. This leads to a better signal-to-noise ratio (SNR) later on, as the noise added to the activation of the units remains constant whilst the amplitude of the input signal increases. A better SNR translates ultimately in less co-activation of units corresponding to orthographic neighbours in the final layers, hence to a decrease in overall layer activity.”

      Another example of the mismatch between this model and the visual cortex is the lack of feedback connections in the model. Within the visual cortex, there are extensive feedback connections, with later processing stages providing recursive feedback to earlier stages. This is especially evident in reading, where feedback from lexical-level processes feeds back to letter-level processes (e.g. Heilbron et al 2020 Nature Comms.). This feedback is especially relevant for the reading of words in noisy conditions, as tested in the current manuscript, as lexical knowledge enhances letter representation in the visual cortex (the word superiority effect). This results in neural activity in multiple cortical areas varying over time, changing selectivity within a region at different measured time points (e.g. Woolnough et al 2021 Nature Human Behav.), which in the current study is simplified down to three discrete time windows, each attributed to different spatial locations.

      We agree with the Reviewer that a full model of reading in the brain must include feed-back connections and share their sentiment that these feed-back processes play an important role and are a fascinating topic to study. The intent for the model presented in our study is very much to be a stepping stone towards extending the capabilities of models that do include such connections.

      However, there is a problem of scale that cannot be ignored.

      Current models of reading that do include feedback connections fall into the category we refer to in the paper as “traditional models” and all only a few layers deep and operate on very simplified inputs, such as pre-defined line segments, a few pixels, or even a list of prerecognized letters. The Heilbron et al. 2020 study that the Reviewer refers to is a good example of such a model. (This excellent and relevant work was somehow overlooked in our literature discussion in the Introduction. We thank the Reviewer for pointing it out to us.) Models incorporating realistic feed-back activity need these simplifications, because they have a tendency to no longer converge when there are too many layers and units. However, in order for models of reading to be able to simulate cognitive behavior such as resolving variations in font size or typeface, or distinguish text from non-text, they need to operate on something close to the pixel-level data, which means they need many layers and units.

      Hence, as a stepping stone, it is reasonable to evaluate a model that has the necessary scale, but lacks the feed-back connections that would be problematic at this scale, to see what it can and cannot do in terms of explaining experimental effects in neuroimaging studies. This was the intended scope of our study. For the revision, we have attempted to make this more clear.

      We have changed the title to be:

      “Convolutional networks can model the functional modulation of the MEG responses associated with feed-forward processes during visual word recognition” and added the following to the Introduction:

      “The simulated environments in these models are extremely simplified, partly due to computational limitations and partly due to the complex interaction of feed-forward and feed-back connectivity that causes problems with convergence when the model grows too large. Consequently, these models have primarily focused on feed-back lexico-semantic effects while oversimplifying the initial feed-forward processing of the visual input. 

      […]

      This rather high level of visual representation sidesteps having to deal with issues such as visual noise, letters with different scales, rotations and fonts, segmentation of the individual letters, and so on. More importantly, it makes it impossible to create the visual noise and symbol string conditions used in the MEG study to modulate the type-I and type-II components. In order to model the process of visual word recognition to the extent where one may reproduce neuroimaging studies such as Vartiainen et al. (2011), we need to start with a model of vision that is able to directly operate on the pixels of a stimulus. We sought to construct a model that is able to recognize words regardless of length, size, typeface and rotation with very high accuracy, whilst producing activity that mimics the type-I, type-II, and N400m components which serve as snapshots of this process unfolding in the brain. For this model, we chose to focus on the early feed-forward processing occurring during visual word recognition, as the experimental setup in the MEG study was designed to demonstrate, rather than feed-back effects

      […]

      By doing so, we restrict ourselves to an investigation of how well the three evoked components can be explained by a feed-forward CNN in an experimental setting designed to demonstrate feed-forward effects. > As such, the goal is not to present a complete model of all aspects of reading, which should include feed-back effects, but rather to demonstrate the effectiveness of using a model that has a realistic form of input when the aim is to align the model with the evoked responses observed during visual word recognition.”

      And we have added the following to the Discussion section:

      “In this paper we have restricted our simulations to feed-forward processes. Now, the way is open to incorporate convolution-and-pooling principles in models of reading that simulate feed-back processes as well, which should allow the model to capture more nuance in the Type-II and N400m components, as well as extend the simulation to encompass a realistic semantic representation. A promising way forward may be to use a network architecture like CORNet (Kubilius et al., 2019), that performs convolution multiple times in a recurrent fashion, yet simultaneously propagates activity forward after each pass. The introduction of recursion into the model will furthermore align it better with traditional-style models, since it can cause a model to exhibit attractor behavior (McLeod et al., 2000), which will be especially important when extending the model into the semantic domain.

      Furthermore, convolution-and-pooling has recently been explored in the domain of predictive coding models (Ororbia & Mali, 2023), a type of model that seems particularly well suited to model feed-back processes during reading (Gagl et al., 2020; Heilbron et al., 2020; Nour Eddine et al., 2024).”

      We also would like to point out to the Reviewer that we did in fact perform a correlation between the model and the MNE-dSPM source estimate of all cortical locations and timepoints (Figure 7B). Such a brain-wide correlation map confirms that the three dipole groups are excellent summaries of when and where interesting effects occur within this dataset.

      The presented model needs substantial further development to be able to replicate, both behaviorally and neurally, many of the well-characterized phenomena seen in human behavior and neural recordings that are fundamental hallmarks of human visual word processing. Until that point, it is unclear what novel contributions can be gleaned from correlating low-dimensional model weights from these computational models with human neural data.

      We hope that our revisions have clarified the goals and scope of this study. The CNN model we present in this study is a small but, we feel, essential piece in a bigger effort to employ deep learning techniques to further enhance already existing models of reading. In our revision, we have extended our discussion where to go from here and outline our vision on how these techniques could help us better model the phenomena the reviewer speaks of. We agree with the reviewer that there is a long way to go, and we are excited to be a part of it.

      In addition to the changes described above, we now end the Discussion section as follows: 

      “Despite its limitations, our model is an important milestone for computational models of reading that leverages deep learning techniques to encompass the entire computational process starting from raw pixels values to representations of wordforms in the mental lexicon. The overall goal is to work towards models that can reproduce the dynamics observed in brain activity observed during the large number of neuroimaging experiments performed with human volunteers that have been performed over the last few decades. To achieve this, models need to be able to operate on more realistic inputs than a collection of predefined lines or letter banks (for example: Coltheart et al., 2001; Heilbron et al., 2020; Laszlo & Armstrong, 2014; McClelland & Rumelhart, 1981; Nour Eddine et al., 2024). We have shown that even without feed-back connections, a CNN can simulate the behavior of three important MEG evoked components across a range of experimental conditions, but only if unit activations are noisy and the frequency of occurrence of words in the training dataset mimics their frequency of use in actual language.”

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      The paper is rather qualitative in nature. In particular, the authors show that some resemblance exists between the behavior of some layers and some parts of the brain, but it is hard to quantitively understand how strong the resemblances are in each layer, and the exact impact of experimental settings such as the frequency balancing (which seems to only have a very moderate effect according to Figure 5).

      The large focus on a qualitative evaluation of the model is intentional. The ability of the model to reproduce experimental effects (Figure 4) is a pre-requisite for any subsequent quantitative metrics (such as correlation) to be valid. The introduction of frequency balancing is a good example of this. As the reviewer points out, frequency balancing during training has only a moderate impact on correlation scores and from that point of view does not seem impactful. However, when we look at the qualitative evaluation, we see that with a large vocabulary, a model without frequency balancing fails to properly distinguish between consonant strings and (pseudo)words (Figure 4, 5th row). Hence, from the point of view of being able to reproduce experimental effects, frequency balancing has a large impact.

      That said, the reviewer is right to highlight the value of quantitative analysis. An important limitation of the “traditional” models of reading that do not employ deep learning is that they operate in unrealistically simplified environments (e.g. input as predefined line segments, words of a fixed length), which makes a quantitative comparison with brain data problematic. The main benefit that deep learning brings may very well be the increase in scale that makes more direct comparisons with brain data possible. In our revision we attempt to capitalize on this benefit more. The reviewer has provided some helpful suggestions for doing so in their recommendations, which we discuss in detail below.

      We have added the following discussion on the topic of qualitative versus quantitative analysis to the Introduction:

      “We sought to construct a model that is able to recognize words regardless of length, size, typeface and rotation, as well as humans can, so essentially perfectly, whilst producing activity that mimics the type-I, type-II, and N400m components which serve as snapshots of this process unfolding in the brain.

      […]

      These variations were first evaluated on their ability to replicate the experimental effects in that study, namely that the type-I response is larger for noise embedded words than all other stimuli, the type-II response is larger for all letter strings than symbols, and that the N400m is larger for real and pseudowords than consonant strings. Once a variation was found that could reproduce these effects satisfactorily, it was further evaluated based on the correlation between the amount of activation of the units in the model and MEG response amplitude.”

      And follow this up in the Discussion with a new sub-section entitled “On the importance of experimental contrasts and qualitative analysis of the model”

      The experiments only consider a rather outdated vision model (VGG).

      VGG was designed to use a minimal number of operations (convolution-and-pooling, fullyconnected linear steps, ReLU activations, and batch normalization) and rely mostly on scale to solve the classification task. This makes VGG a good place to start our explorations and see how far a basic CNN can take us in terms of explaining experimental MEG effects in visual word recognition. However, we agree with the reviewer that it is easy to envision more advanced models that could potentially explain more. In our revision, we expand on the question of where to go from here and outline our vision on what types of models would be worth investigating and how one may go about doing that in a way that provides insights beyond higher correlation values.

      We have included the following in our Discussion sub-sections on “Limitations of the current model and the path forward”:

      “The VGG-11 architecture was originally designed to achieve high image classification accuracy on the ImageNet challenge (Simonyan & Zisserman, 2015). Although we have introduced some modifications that make the model more biologically plausible, the final model is still incomplete in many ways as a complete model of brain function during reading.

      […]

      In this paper we have restricted our simulations to feed-forward processes. Now, the way is open to incorporate convolution-and-pooling principles in models of reading that simulate feed-back processes as well, which should allow the model to capture more nuance in the Type-II and N400m components, as well as extend the simulation to encompass a realistic semantic representation. A promising way forward may be to use a network architecture like CORNet (Kubilius et al., 2019), that performs convolution multiple times in a recurrent fashion, yet simultaneously propagates activity forward after each pass. The introduction of recursion into the model will furthermore align it better with traditional-style models, since it can cause a model to exhibit attractor behavior (McLeod et al., 2000), which will be especially important when extending the model into the semantic domain. Furthermore, convolution-and-pooling has recently been explored in the domain of predictive coding models (Ororbia & Mali, 2023), a type of model that seems particularly well suited to model feed-back processes during reading (Gagl et al., 2020; Heilbron et al., 2020; Nour Eddine et al., 2024).”

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) The method used to select the experimental conditions under which the behavior of the CNN is the most brain-like is rather qualitative (Figure 4). It would have been nice to have a plot where the noisyness of the activations, the vocab size and the amount of frequency balancing are varied continuously, and show how these three parameters impact the correlation of the model layers with the MEG responses.

      We now include this analysis (Figure 6 in the revised manuscript, Supplementary Figures 47) and discuss these factors in the revised Results section:

      “Various other aspects of the model architecture were evaluated which ultimately did not lead to any improvements of the model. The response profiles can be found in the supplementary information (Supplementary Figures 4–7) and the correlations between the models and the MEG components are presented in Figure 6. The vocabulary of the final model (10 000) exceeds the number of units in its fullyconnected layers, which means that a bottleneck is created in which a sub-lexical representation is formed. The number of units in the fully-connected layers, i.e. the width of the bottleneck, has some effect on the correlation between model and brain (Figure 6A), and the amount of noise added to the unit activations less so (Figure 6B). We already saw that the size of the vocabulary, i.e. the number of wordforms in the training data and number of units in the output layer of the model, had a large effect on the response profiles (Figure 4). Having a large vocabulary is of course desirable from a functional point of view, but also modestly improves correlation between model and brain (Figure 6C). For large vocabularies, we found it beneficial to apply frequency-balancing of the training data, meaning that the number of times a word-form appears in the training data is scaled according to its frequency in a large text corpus. However, this cannot be a one-to-one scaling, since the most frequent words occur so much more often than other words that the training data would consist of mostly the top-ten most common words, with less common words only occurring once or not at all. Therefore, we decided to scale not by the frequency 𝑓 directly, but by 𝑓𝑠, where 0 < 𝑠 < 1, opting for 𝑠 = 0.2 for the final model (Figure 6D).”

      (2) It is not clear which layers exactly correspond to which of the three response components. For this to be clearer, it would have been nice to have a plot with all the layers of VGG on the x-axis and three curves corresponding to the correlation of each layer with each of the three response components.

      This is a great suggestion that we were happy to incorporate in the revised version of the manuscript. Every figure comparing the response patterns of the model and brain now includes a panel depicting the correlation between each layer of the model and each of the three MEG components (Figures 4 & 5, Supplementary Figures 2-5). This has given us (and now also the reader) the ability to better benchmark the different models quantitatively, adding to our discussion on qualitative to quantitative analysis.

      (3) It is not clear to me why the authors report the correlation of all layers with the MEG responses in Figure 5: why not only report the correlation of the final layers for N400, and that of the first layers for type-I?

      We agree with the reviewer that it would have been better to compare the correlation scores for those layers which response profile matches the MEG component. While the old Figure 5 has been merged with Figure 4, and now provides the correlations between all the layers and all MEG components, we have taken the Reviewer’s advice and marked the layers which qualitatively best correspond to each MEG component, so the reader can take that into account when interpreting the correlation scores.

      (4) The authors mention that the reason that they did not reproduce the protocol with more advanced vision models is that they needed the minimal setup capable of yielding the desired experiment effect. I am not fully convinced by this and think the paper could be significantly strengthened by reporting results for a vision transformer, in particular to study the role of attention layers which are expected to play an important role in processing higher-level features.

      We appreciate and share the Reviewer’s enthusiasm in seeing how other model architectures would fare when it comes to modeling MEG components. However, we regard modifying the core model architecture (i.e., a series of convolution-and-pooling followed by fully-connected layers) to be out of scope for the current paper.

      One of the key points of our study is to create a model that reproduces the experimental effects of an existing MEG study, which necessitates modeling the initial feed-forward processing from pixel to word-form. For this purpose, a convolution-and-pooling model was the obvious choice, because these operations play a big role in cognitive models of vision in general. In order to properly capture all experimental contrasts in the MEG study, many variations of the CNN were trained and evaluated. This iterative design process concluded when all experimental contrasts could be faithfully reproduced.

      If we were to explore different model architectures, such as a transformer architecture, reproducing the experimental contrasts of the MEG study would no longer be the end goal, and it would be unclear what the end goal should be. Maximizing correlation scores has no end, and there are a nearly endless number of model architectures one could try. We could bring in a second MEG study with experimental contrasts that the CNN cannot explain and a transformer architecture potentially could and set the end goal to explain all experimental effects in both MEG studies. But even if we had access to such a dataset, this would almost double the length of the paper, which is already too long.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Wolbachia are maternally transmitted bacteria that can manipulate host reproduction in various ways. Some Wolbachia induce male killing (MK), where the sons of infected mothers are killed during development. Several MK-associated genes have been identified in Homona magnanima, including Hm-oscar and wmk-1-4, but the mechanistic links between these Wolbachia genes and MK in the native host are still unclear.

      In this manuscript, Arai et al. show that Hm-oscar is the gene responsible for Wolbachia-induced MK in Homona magnanima. They provide evidence that Hm-Oscar functions through interactions with the sex determination system. They also found that Hm-Oscar disrupts sex determination in male embryos by inducing female-type dsx splicing and impairing dosage compensation. Additionally, Hm-Oscar suppresses the function of Masc. The manuscript is well-written and presents intriguing findings. The results support their conclusions regarding the diversity and commonality of MK mechanisms, contributing to our understanding of the mechanisms and evolutionary aspects of Wolbachia-induced MK.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Insects and their relatives are commonly infected with microbes that are transmitted from mothers to their offspring. A number of these microbes have independently evolved the ability to kill the sons of infected females very early in their development; this male killing strategy has evolved because males are transmission dead-ends for the microbe. A major question in the field has been to identify the genes that cause male killing and to understand how they work. This has been especially challenging because most male-killing microbes cannot be genetically manipulated. This study focuses on a male-killing bacterium called Wolbachia. Different Wolbachia strains kill male embryos in beetles, flies, moths, and other arthropods. This is remarkable because how sex is determined differs widely in these hosts. Two Wolbachia genes have been previously implicated in male-killing by Wolbachia: oscar (in moth male-killing) and wmk (in fly male-killing). The genomes of some male-killing Wolbachia contain both of these genes, so it is a challenge to disentangle the two.

      This paper provides strong evidence that oscar is responsible for male-killing in moths. Here, the authors study a strain of Wolbachia that kills males in a pest of tea, Homona magnanima. Overexpressing oscar, but not wmk, kills male moth embryos. This is because oscar interferes with masculinizer, the master gene that controls sex determination in moths and butterflies. Interfering with the masculinizer gene in this way leads the (male) embryo down a path of female development, which causes problems in regulating the expression of genes that are found on the sex chromosomes.

      We would like to thank you for evaluating our manuscript.

      Strengths:

      The authors use a broad number of approaches to implicate oscar, and to dissect its mechanism of male lethality. These approaches include: a) overexpressing oscar (and wmk) by injecting RNA into moth eggs, b) determining the sex of embryos by staining female sex chromosomes, c) determining the consequences of oscar expression by assaying sex-specific splice variants of doublesex, a key sex determination gene, and by quantifying gene expression and dosage of sex chromosomes, using RNASeq, and d) expressing oscar along with masculinizer from various moth and butterfly species, in a silkmoth cell line. This extends recently published studies implicating oscar in male-killing by Wolbachia in Ostrinia corn borer moths, although the Homona and Ostrinia oscar proteins are quite divergent. Combined with other studies, there is now broad support for oscar as the male-killing gene in moths and butterflies (i.e. order Lepidoptera). So an outstanding question is to understand the role of wmk. Is it the master male-killing gene in insects other than Lepidoptera and if so, how does it operate?

      We would like to thank you for evaluating our manuscript. Our data demonstrated that Oscar homologs play important roles in male-killing phenotypes in moths and butterflies; however, the functional relevance of wmk remains uncertain. As you noted, whether wmk acts as a male-killing gene in insects such as flies and beetles—or even in certain lepidopteran species—requires further investigation using diverse insect models, which we are eager to explore in future research.

      Weaknesses:

      I found the transfection assays of oscar and masculinizer in the silkworm cell line (Figure 4) to be difficult to follow. There are also places in the text where more explanation would be helpful for non-experts.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have revised the section on the cell-based experiment. Further, we revised the manuscript to make it accessible to a broader audience. We believe these revisions have significantly improved the clarity and comprehensiveness of our manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Wolbachia are maternally transmitted bacteria that can manipulate host reproduction in various ways. Some Wolbachia induce male killing (MK), where the sons of infected mothers are killed during development. Several MK-associated genes have been identified in Homona magnanima, including Hm-oscar and wmk-1-4, but the mechanistic links between these Wolbachia genes and MK in the native host are still unclear.

      In this manuscript, Arai et al. show that Hm-oscar is the gene responsible for Wolbachia-induced MK in Homona magnanima. They provide evidence that Hm-Oscar functions through interactions with the sex determination system. They also found that Hm-Oscar disrupts sex determination in male embryos by inducing female-type dsx splicing and impairing dosage compensation. Additionally, Hm-Oscar suppresses the function of Masc. The manuscript is well-written and presents intriguing findings. The results support their conclusions regarding the diversity and commonality of MK mechanisms, contributing to our understanding of the mechanisms and evolutionary aspects of Wolbachia-induced MK.

      We would like to thank you for evaluating our manuscript.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have already addressed the reviewer's concerns.

      We would like to thank you for evaluating our manuscript.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Overall, this is a clearly written manuscript with nice hypothesis testing in a non-model organism that addresses the mechanism of Wolbachia-mediated male killing. The authors aim to determine how five previously identified male-killing genes (encoded in the prophage region of the wHm Wolbachia strain) impact the native host, Homona magnanima moths. This work builds on the authors' previous studies in which

      (1) they tested the impact of these same wHm genes via heterologous expression in Drosophila melanogaster

      (2) also examined the activity of other male-killing genes (e.g., from the wFur Wolbachia strain in its native host: Ostrinia furnacalis moths).

      Advances here include identifying which wHm gene most strongly recapitulates the male-killing phenotype in the native host (rather than in Drosophila), and the finding that the Hm-Oscar protein has the potential for male-killing in a diverse set of lepidopterans, as inferred by the cell-culture assays.

      We would like to thank you for evaluating our manuscript.

      Strengths:

      Strengths of the manuscript include the reverse genetics approaches to dissect the impact of specific male-killing loci, and use of a "masculinization" assay in Lepidopteran cell lines to determine the impact of interactions between specific masc and oscar homologs.

      We would like to thank you for evaluating our manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      It is clear from Figure 1 that the combinations of wmk homologs do not cause male killing on their own here. While I largely agree with the author's conclusions that oscar is the primary MK factor in this system, I don't think we can yet rule out that wmk(s) may work synergistically or interactively with oscar in vivo. This might be worth a small note in the discussion. (eg at line 294 'indicating that wmk likely targets factors other than masc." - this could be downstream of the impacts of oscar; perhaps dependent on oscar-mediated impacts on masc first).

      We sincerely appreciate your suggestion. Whilst wmk genes themselves did not exhibit apparent lethal effects on the native host, as you noted, we cannot entirely rule out the possibility that wmk may be involved in male-killing actions, either directly or indirectly assisting the function of Hb-oscar. Following your suggestion, we have added a brief note in the discussion section regarding the interpretation of wmk functions.

      “In addition, Katsuma et al. (2022) reported that the wmk homologs encoded by wFur did not affect the masculinizing function of masc in vitro, indicating that wmk likely targets factors other than masc. Whilst we cannot rule out the possibility that wmk may work synergistically or interactively with oscar in vivo—potentially acting downstream of oscar’s impact—our results strongly suggested that Wolbachia strains have acquired multiple MK genes through evolution.” (lines 287-292)

      Regarding the perceived male-bias in Figure 2a: I think readers might be interpreting "unhatched" as "total before hatching". You could eliminate ambiguity by perhaps splitting the bars into male and female, and then within a bar, coloring by hatched versus unhatched. But this is a minor point, and I think the updated text helps clarify this.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have accordingly revised the figure 2a. In addition, we have included more detailed information in the first sentence of the section Males are killed mainly at the embryonic stage.

      “The sex of hatched larvae (neonates) and the remaining unhatched embryos was determined by the presence or absence of W chromatin, a condensed structure of the female-specific W chromosome observed during interphase.” (lines 171-173)

      The new Figure 4b looks to be largely redundant with the oscar information in Figure 1a.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have removed Figure 4b due to its overlap with Figure 1a and have incorporated relevant figure legends into the Figure 1a legend.

      Updated statistical comparisons for the RNA-seq analysis are helpful. However these analyses are based on single libraries (albeit each a pool of many individuals), so this is still a weaker aspect of the manuscript.

      Thank you for your suggestion. As you noted, the use of single libraries (due to the limited number of available individuals, though each includes approximately 50 males and females) may be a potential limitation of this study. However, as demonstrated in the qPCR assay for the Z-linked gene provided in the previous revision, we believe that our data and conclusion—that Wolbachia/ Hb-oscar disrupts dosage compensation by causing the overexpression of Z-linked genes—are well-supported and robust.

      The new information on masc similarity is useful (Fig 4d) - if the authors could please include a heatmap legend for the colors, that would be helpful. Also, please avoid green and red in the same figure when key for interpretation.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have accordingly included a heatmap legend and revised the colors.

      Figure 1A "helix-turn-helix" is misspelled. ("tern").

      We have revised.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Comments from the reviewing editor: I would suggest you address the comments of the reviewer on the revised version.

      We have further revised the manuscript to address all the questions, comments and suggestions provided by the reviewers. We believe that the resulting revisions have significantly enhanced the quality and comprehensiveness of our manuscript.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Thank you for revising this manuscript. I have a few last recommendations:

      - Line 214: re: 'Statistical data are available in the supplementary data file', it would be more helpful to add a few words here that actually summarize the statistical results

      We would like to thank you for your suggestion. We have revised the sentence to describe the overview of the statistical results.

      “RNA-seq analysis revealed that, in Hm-oscar-injected embryos, Z-linked genes (homologs on the B. mori chromosomes 1 and 15) were more expressed in males than in females (Fig. 3a), which was not observed in the GFP-injected group (Fig. 3b). Similarly, as previously reported by Arai et al. (2023a), high levels of Z-linked gene expression were also observed in wHm-t-infected males, but not in NSR males (Fig. 3c,d). The high (i.e., doubled) Z-linked gene expression in both Hm-oscar-expressed and wHm-t-infected males was further confirmed by quantification of the Z-linked Hmtpi gene (Fig. 3e). These trends were statistically supported, with all data available in the supplementary data file.” (lines 205-213)

      - Figure 1 legend: do you mean 'bridged' instead of 'brigged'?

      We have accordingly revise, thank you for the suggestion.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Reviewer 1:

      (1) The results do not support the conclusions. The main "selling point" as summarized in the title is that the apoptotic rate of zebrafish motorneurons during development is strikingly low (~2% ) as compared to the much higher estimate (~50%) by previous studies in other systems. The results used to support the conclusion are that only a small percentage (under 2%) of apoptotic cells were found over a large population at a variety of stages 24-120hpf. This is fundamentally flawed logic, as a short-time window measure of percentage cannot represent the percentage on the long-term. For example, at any year under 1% of human population die, but over 100 years >99% of the starting group will have died. To find the real percentage of motorneurons that died, the motorneurons born at different times must be tracked over long term, or the new motorneuron birth rate must be estimated. Similar argument can be applied to the macrophage results.<br />

      In the revised manuscript (revised Figure 4), we extended the observation time window as long as possible, from 24 hpf to 240 hpf. After 240 hpf, the transparency of zebrafish body decreased dramatically, which made optical imaging quite difficult.

      We are confident that this 24-240 hpf time window covers the major time window during which motor neurons undergo programmed cell death during zebrafish early development. We chose the observation time window based on the following two reasons: 1) Previous studies showed that although the time windows of motor neuron death vary in chick (E5-E10), mouse (E11.5-E15.5), rat (E15-E18), and human (11-25 weeks of gestation), the common feature of these time windows is that they are all the developmental periods when motor neurons contact with muscle cells. The contact between zebrafish motor neurons and muscle cells occurs before 72 hpf, which is included in our observation time window. 2) Most organs of zebrafish form before 48-72 hpf, and they complete hatching during 48-72 hpf. Food-seeking and active avoidance behaviors also start at 72 hpf, indicating that motor neurons are fully functional at 72 hpf.

      Previous studies in zebrafish have shown that the production of spinal cord motor neurons largely ceases before 48 hpf, and then the motor neurons remain largely constant until adulthood (doi: 10.1016/j.celrep.2015.09.050; 10.1016/j.devcel.2013.04.012; 10.1007/BF00304606; 10.3389/fcell.2021.640414). Our observation time window covers the major motor neuron production process. Therefore, we believe that neurogenesis will not affect our findings and conclusions.

      Although we are confident that 240 h tracking is long enough to measure the motor neuron death rate, several sentences have been added in the discussion part, “In our manuscript, we tracked the motor neuron death in live zebrafish until 240 hpf, which was the longest time window we could achieve. But there was still a possibility that zebrafish motor neurons might die after 240 hpf.”

      We agreed that the “2%” description might not be very accurate. Thus, we have revised our title to “Zebrafish live imaging reveals a surprisingly small percentage of spinal cord motor neurons die during early development.”

      (2) The conclusion regarding timing of axon and cell body caspase activation and apoptosis timing also has clear issues. The ~minutes measurement are too long as compared to the transport/diffusion timescale between the cell body and the axon, caspase activity could have been activated in the cell body and either caspase or the cleaved sensor move to the axon in several seconds. The authors' results are not high frequency enough to resolve these dynamics. Many statements suggest oversight of literature, for example, in abstract "however, there is still no real-time observation showing this dying process in live animals.".

      Real-time imaging of live animals is quite challenging in the field. Currently, using confocal microscopy, we can only achieve minute-scale tracking. In the future, with more advanced imaging techniques, the sensor fish in the present study may provide us with more detailed information on motor neuron death. We have removed “real-time” from our revised manuscript. We also revised the mentioned sentence in the abstract.

      (3) Many statements should use more scholarly terms and descriptions from the spinal cord or motorneuron, neuromuscular development fields, such as line 87 "their axons converged into one bundle to extend into individual somite, which serves as a functional unit for the development and contraction of muscle cells"

      We have removed this sentence.

      (4) The transgenic line is perhaps the most meaningful contribution to the field as the work stands. However, mnx1 promoter is well known for its non-specific activation - while the images do suggest the authors' line is good, motorneuron markers should be used to validate the line. This is especially important for assessing this population later as mnx1 may be turned off in mature neurons. The author's response regarding mnx1 specificity does not mitigate the original concern.

      The mnx1 promoter has been widely used to label motor neurons in transgenic zebrafish. Previous studies have shown that most of the cells labeled in the mnx1 transgenic zebrafish are motor neurons. In this study, we observed that the neuronal cells in our sensor zebrafish formed green cell bodies inside of the spinal cord and extended to the muscle region, which is an important morphological feature of the motor neurons.

      Furthermore, a few of those green cell bodies turned into blue apoptotic bodies inside the spinal cord and changed to blue axons in the muscle regions at the same time, which strongly suggests that those apoptotic neurons are not interneurons.

      In fact, no matter what method is used, such as using antibodies to stain specific markers to label motor neurons, 100% specificity cannot be achieved. More importantly, although the mnx1 promoter might have labeled some interneurons, this will not affect our major finding that only a small percentage of spinal cord motor neurons die during the early development of zebrafish.

      Reviewer 2:

      (1) Title: The 50% figure of motor neurons dying through apoptosis during early vertebrate development is not precisely accurate. In papers referenced by the authors, there is a wide distribution of percentages of motor neurons that die depending on the species and the spinal cord region. In addition, the authors did not examine limb-innervating motor neurons, which are the ones best studied in motor neuron programmed cell death in other species. Thus, a better title that reflects what they actually show would be something like "A surprisingly small percentage of early developing zebrafish motor neurons die through apoptosis in non-limb innervating regions of the spinal cord."

      In fish, there are no such structures as limbs, although fins may be evolutionarily related to limbs. In our manuscript, we studied the naturally occurring motor neuron death in the whole spinal cord during the early stage of zebrafish development. The death of motor neurons in limb-innervating motor neurons has been extensively studied in chicks and rodents, as it is easy to undergo operations such as amputation. However, previous studies have shown this dramatic motor neuron death occurs not only in limb-innervating motor neurons but also in other spinal cord motor neurons (doi: 10.1006/dbio.1999.9413).

      We have revised our title to “Zebrafish live imaging reveals a surprisingly small percentage of spinal cord motor neurons die during early development.”

      (2) lines 18-19: "embryonic stage of vertebrates" is very broad, since zebrafish are also vertebrates; it would be better to be more specific

      lines 25-26: The authors should be more specific about which animals have widespread neuronal cell death.

      We have revised our manuscript accordingly.

      (3) lines 98-99; 110-111; 113; 122-123; 140-141: A cell can undergo apoptosis. But an axon, which is only part of a cell, cannot undergo apoptosis. Especially since the axon doesn't have a separate nucleus, and the definition of apoptosis usually includes nuclear fragmentation. A better subheading would describe the result, which is that caspase activation is seen in both the cell body and the axon.

      We have revised the subheadings and related words in the manuscript accordingly. In the introduction, we also revised the expression of the third aim from “Which part of a neuron (cell body vs. axon) will die first?” to “Which part of a neuron (cell body vs. axon) will degrade first?”.

      (4) lines 159-160; 178-179: This is an oversimplification of the literature. The authors should spell out which populations of motor neuron have been examined and say something about the similarities and difference in motor neuron death.

      We have revised it accordingly.

      (5) lines 200; 216: The authors did not observe macrophages engulfing motor neurons. But that does not mean that they cannot. Making the conclusion stated in this subheading would require some kind of experiment, not just observations.

      We did observe few colocalizations of macrophages and dead motor neurons.  To more accurately express these data, in the revised manuscript, we used “colocalization” to replace “engulfment.” The subheading has been revised to “Most dead motor neurons were not colocalized with macrophages.” Accordingly, panel C of Figure 5 has also been revised.

      (6) lines 234-246: The authors seem to have missed the point about VaP motor neuron death, which was two-fold. First, VaP death has been previously described, thus it could serve as a control for the work in this paper, especially since the conditions underlying VaP death and survival have been experimentally tested. Second, they should acknowledge that previous work showed that at least some motor neuron death in zebrafish differs from that described in chick and rodents. This conclusion came from work showing that death of VaP is independent of limitations in muscle innervation area, suggesting it is not coupled to muscle-derived neurotrophic factors.

      Figures: The authors should say which level of the spinal cord they examined in each figure.

      We have compared our findings with previous findings in the revised manuscript. The death of VaP motor neurons is not related to neurotrophic factors, but the death of other motor neurons may be related to neurotrophic factors, which needs further study and evidence. Our study examined the overall motor neuron apoptosis regardless of the causes and locations. To avoid misunderstanding, in the revised manuscript, we removed the data and words related to neurotrophic factors.

      We also extended the observation time window as long as possible, from 24 hpf to 240 hpf (revised Figure 4). After 240 hpf, the transparency of zebrafish body decreased dramatically, which made the optical imaging quite difficult.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Experiments in model organisms have revealed that the effects of genes on heritable traits are often mediated by environmental factors---so-called gene-by-environment (or GxE) interactions. In human genetics, however, where indirect statistical approaches must be taken to detect GxE, limited evidence has been found for pervasive GxE interactions. The present manuscript argues that the failure of statistical methods to detect GxE may be due to how GxE is modelled (or not modelled) by these methods.

      The authors show, via re-analysis of an existing dataset in Drosophila, that a polygenic ‘amplification’ model can parsimoniously explain patterns of differential genetic effects across environments. (Work from the same lab had previously shown that the amplification model is consistent with differential genetic effects across the sexes for several traits in humans.) The parsimony of the amplification model allows for powerful detection of GxE in scenarios in which it pertains, as the authors show via simulation.

      Before the authors consider polygenic models of GxE, however, they present a very clear analysis of a related question around GxE: When one wants to estimate the effect of an individual allele in a particular environment, when is it better to stratify one’s sample by environment (reducing sample size, and therefore increasing the variance of the estimator) versus using the entire sample (including individuals not in the environment of interest, and therefore biasing the estimator away from the true effect specific to the environment of interest)? Intuitively, the sample-size cost of stratification is worth paying if true allelic effects differ substantially between the environment of interest and other environments (i.e., GxE interactions are large), but not worth paying if effects are similar across environments. The authors quantify this trade-off in a way that is both mathematically precise and conveys the above intuition very clearly. They argue on its basis that, when allelic effects are small (as in highly polygenic traits), single-locus tests for GxE may be substantially underpowered.

      The paper is an important further demonstration of the plausibility of the amplification model of GxE, which, given its parsimony, holds substantial promise for the detection and characterization of GxE in genomic datasets. However, the empirical and simulation examples considered in the paper (and previous work from the same lab) are somewhat “best-case” scenarios for the amplification model, with only two environments, and with these environments amplifying equally the effects of only a single set of genes. It would be an important step forward to demonstrate the possibility of detecting amplification in more complex scenarios, with multiple environments each differentially modulating the effects of multiple sets of genes. This could be achieved via simulations similar to those presented in the current manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Wine et al. describe a framework to view the estimation of gene-context interaction analysis through the lens of bias-variance tradeoff. They show that, depending on trait variance and context-specific effect sizes, effect estimates may be estimated more accurately in context-combined analysis rather than in context-specific analysis. They proceed by investigating, primarily via simulations, implications for the study or utilization of gene-context interaction, for testing and prediction, in traits with polygenic architecture. First, the authors describe an assessment of the identification of context-specificity (or context differences) focusing on “top hits” from association analyses. Next, they describe an assessment of polygenic scores (PGSs) that account for context-specific effect sizes, showing, in simulations, that often the PGSs that do not attempt to estimate context-specific effect sizes have superior prediction performance. An exception is a PGS approach that utilizes information across contexts. Strengths:

      The bias-variance tradeoff framing of GxE is useful, interesting, and rigorous. The PGS analysis under pervasive amplification is also interesting and demonstrates the bias-variance tradeoff.

      Weaknesses:

      The weakness of this paper is that the first part -- the bias-variance tradeoff analysis -- is not tightly connected to, i.e. not sufficiently informing, the later parts, that focus on polygenic architecture. For example, the analysis of “top hits” focuses on the question of testing, rather than estimation, and testing was not discussed within the bias-variance tradeoff framework. Similarly, while the PGS analysis does demonstrate (well) the bias-variance tradeoff, the reader is left to wonder whether a bias-variance deviation rule (discussed in the first part of the manuscript) should or could be utilized for PGS construction.

      We thank the editors and the reviewers for their thoughtful critique and helpful suggestions throughout. In our revision, we focused on tightening the relationship between the analytical single variant bias-variance tradeoff derivation and the various empirical analyses that follow.

      We improved discussion of our scope and what is beyond our scope. For example, our language was insufficiently clear if it suggested to the editor and reviewers that we are developing a method to characterize polygenic GxE. Developing a new method that does so (let alone evaluating performance across various scenarios) is beyond the scope of this manuscript.

      Similarly, we clarify that we use amplification only as an example of a mode of GxE that is not adequately characterized by current approaches. We do not wish to argue it is an omnibus explanation for all GxE in complex traits. In many cases, a mixture of polygenic GxE relationships seems most fitting (as observed, for example, in Zhu et al., 2023, for GxSex in human physiology).

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      MAJOR COMMENT

      The amplification model is based on an understanding of gene networks in which environmental variables concertedly alter the effects of clusters of genes, or modules, in the network (e.g., if an environmental variable alters the effect of some gene, it indirectly and proportionately alters the effects of genes downstream of that gene in the network---or upstream if the gene acts as a bottleneck in some pathway). It is clear in this model that (i) multiple environmental variables could amplify distinct modules, and (ii) a single environmental variable could itself amplify multiple separate modules, with a separate amplification factor for each module.

      However, perhaps inspired by their previous work on GxSex interactions in humans, the authors’ focus in the present manuscript is on cases where there are only two environments (“control” and “high-sugar diet” in the Drosophila dataset that they reanalyze, and “A” and “B” in their simulations [and single-locus mathematical analysis]), and they consider models where these environments amplify only a single set of genes, i.e., with a single amplification factor. While it is of course interesting that a single-amplification-factor model can generate data that resemble those in the Drosophila dataset that the authors re-analyze, most scenarios of amplification GxE will presumably be more complex. It seems that detecting amplification in these more complex scenarios using methods such as the authors do in their final section will be correspondingly more difficult. Indeed, in the limit of sufficiently many environmental variables amplifying sufficiently many modules, the scenario would resemble one of idiosyncratic single-locus GxE which, as the authors argue, is very difficult to detect. That more complex scenarios of amplification, with multiple environments separately amplifying multiple modules each, might be difficult to detect statistically is potentially an important limitation to the authors’ approach, and should be tested in their simulations.

      We agree that characterizing GxE when there is a mixture of drivers of context-dependency is difficult. Developing a method that does so across multiple (and perhaps not pre-defined) contexts is of high interest to us but beyond the scope of the current manuscript

      We note that for GxSex, modeling this mixture does generally improve phenotypic prediction, and more so in traits where we infer amplification as a major mode of GxE.

      MINOR COMMENTS

      Lines 88-90: “This estimation model is equivalent to a linear model with a term for the interaction between context and reference allele count, in the sense that context-specific allelic effect estimators have the same distributions in the two models.”

      Does this equivalence require the model with the interaction term also to have an interaction term for the intercept, i.e., the slope on a binary variable for context (since the generative model in Eq. 1 allows for context-specific intercepts)?

      It does require an interaction term for the intercept. This is e_i (and its effect beta_E) in Eq. S2 (line 70 of the supplement).

      Lines 94-96: Perhaps just a language thing, but in what sense does the estimation model described in lines 92-94 “assume” a particular distribution of trait values in the combined sample? It’s just an OLS regression, and one can analyze its expected coefficients with reference to the generative model in Eq. 1, or any other model. To say that it “assumes” something presupposes its purpose, which is not clear from its description in lines 92-94.

      We corrected “assume” to “posit”.

      Lines 115-116: It should perhaps be noted that the weights wA and wB need not sum to 1.

      Indeed; it is now explicitly stated.

      Lines 154-160: I think the role of r could be made even clearer by also discussing why, when VA>>VB, it is better to use the whole-sample estimate of betaA than the sample-A-specific estimate (since this is a more counterintuitive case than the case of VA<<VB discussed by the authors).

      This is addressed in lines 153-154, stating: “Typically, this (VA<<VB) will also imply that the additive estimator is greatly preferable for estimating β_B , as β_B will be extremely noisy”

      Line 243 and Figure 4 caption: The text states that the simulated effects in the high-sugar environment are 1.1x greater than those in the control environment, while the caption states that they are 1.4x greater.

      We have corrected the text to be consistent with our simulations.

      TYPOS/WORDING

      Line 14: “harder to interpret” --> “harder-to-interpret”

      Line 22: We --> we

      Line 40: “as average effect” -> “as the average effect”?

      Line 57: “context specific” --> “context-specific”

      Line 139: “re-parmaterization” --> “re-parameterization”

      Lines 140, 158, 412: “signal to noise” --> “signal-to-noise”

      Figure 3C,D: “pule rate” --> “pulse rate”

      The caption of Figure 3: “conutinous” --> “continuous”

      Line 227: “a variant may fall” --> “a variant may fall into”

      Line 295: “conferring to more GxE” --> “conferring more GxE” or “corresponding to more GxE”? This is very pedantic, but I think “bias-variance” should be “bias--variance” throughout, i.e., with an en-dash rather than a hyphen.

      We have corrected all of the above typos.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (This section repeats some of what I wrote earlier).

      - First polygenic architecture part: the manuscript focuses on “top hits” in trying to identify sets of variants that are context-specific. This “top hits” approach seems somewhat esoteric and, as written, not connected tightly enough to the bias-variance tradeoff issue. The first section of the paper which focuses on bias-variance trade-off mostly deals with estimation. The “top hits” section deals with testing, which introduces additional issues that are due to thresholding. Perhaps the authors can think of ways to make the connection stronger between the bias-variance tradeoff part to the “top hits” part, e.g., by introducing testing earlier on and/or discussion estimation in addition to testing in the “top hits” part of the manuscript. The second polygenic architecture part: polygenic scores that account for interaction terms. Here the authors focused (well, also here) on pervasive amplification in simulations. This part combines estimation and testing (both the choice of variants and their estimated effects are important). In pervasive amplification the idea is that causal variants are shared, the results may be different than in a model with context-specific effects and variant selection may have a large impact. Still, I think that these simulations demonstrate the idea developed in the bias-variance tradeoff part of the paper, though the reader is left to wonder whether a bias-variance decision rule should or could be utilized for PGS construction.

      In both of these sections we discuss how the consideration of polygenic GxE patterns alters the conclusions based on the single-variant tradeoff. In the “top hits” section, we show that single-variant classification itself, based on a series of marginal hypothesis tests alone, can be misleading. The PGS prediction accuracy analysis shows that both approaches are beaten by the polygenic GxE estimation approach. Intuitively, this is because the consideration of polygenic GxE can mitigate both the bias and variance, as it leverages signals from many variants.

      We agree that the links between these sections of the paper were not sufficiently clear, and have added signposting to help clarify them (lines 176-180; lines 275-277; lines 316-321).

      - Simulation of GxDiet effects on longevity: the methods of the simulation are strange, or communicated unclearly. The authors’ report (page 17) poses a joint distribution of genetic effects (line 439), but then, they simulated effect estimates standard errors by sampling from summary statistics (line 445) rather than simulated data and then estimating effect and effect SE. Why pose a true underlying multivariate distribution if it isn’t used?

      We rewrote the Methods section “Simulation of GxDiet effects on longevity in Drosophila to make our simulation approach clearer (lines 427-449). We are indeed simulating the true effects from the joint distribution proposed. However, in order to mimic the noisiness of the experiment in our simulations, we sample estimated effects from the true simulated effects, with estimation noise conferring to that estimated in the Pallares et al. dataset (i.e., sampling estimation variances from the squares of empirical SEs).

      - How were the “most significantly associated variants” selected into the PGS in the polygenic prediction part? Based on a context-specific test? A combined-context test of effect size estimates?

      For the “Additive” and “Additive ascertainment, GxE estimation” models (red and orange in Fig. 5, respectively), we ascertain the combined-context set. For the “GxE” and “polygenic GxE” (green and blue in Fig. 5, respectively) models, we ascertain in a context-specific test. We now state this explicitly in lines 280-288 and lines 507-526.

      - As stated, I find the conclusion statement not specific enough in light of the rest of the manuscript. “the consideration of polygenic GxE trends is key” - this is very vague. What does it mean “to consider polygenic GxE trends” in the context of this paper? I can’t tell. “The notion that complex trait analyses should combine observations at top associated loci” - I don’t think the authors really refer to combining “observations”, rather perhaps combine information from top associated loci. But this does not represent the “top hits” approach that merely counts loci by their testing patterns. “It may be a similarly important missing piece...” What does “it” refer to? The top loci? What makes it an important missing piece?

      We rewrote the conclusion paragraph to address these concerns (lines 316-321).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This paper examines the reproducibility of results reported by the Murphy lab regarding transgenerational inheritance of a learned avoidance behavior in C. elegans. It has been well established by multiple labs that worms can learn to avoid the pathogen pseudomonas aeruginosa (PA14) after a single exposure. The Murphy lab has reported that learned avoidance is transmittable to 4 generations and dependent on a small RNA expressed by PA14 that elicits the transgenerational silencing of a gene in C. elegans. The Hunter lab now reports that although they can reproduce inheritance of the learned behavior by the first generation (F1), they cannot reproduce inheritance in subsequent generations.

      This is an important study that will be useful for the community. Although they fail to identify a "smoking gun", the study examine several possible sources for the discrepancy, and their findings will be useful to others interested in using these assays. The preference assay appears to work in their hands in as much as they are able to detect the learned behavior in the P0 and F1 generations, suggesting that the failure to reproduce the transgenerational effect is not due to trivial mistakes in the protocol. The authors provide a full protocol and highlight key deviations from the Murphy lab protocol. The authors provide good evidence that no single protocol modification was sufficient on its own to explain the divergent results. It remains possible that protocol differences affected the assay cumulatively or that other uncontrolled factors were responsible. Nevertheless, the authors provide good evidence that the trans-generational effect reported by the Murphy lab lacks experimental robustness, calling into question its ecological relevance in the wild.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      […] Overall, this is an important paper that demonstrates that one model for transgenerational inheritance in C. elegans is not reproducible. This is important because it is not clear how many of the reported models of transgenerational inheritance reported in C. elegans are reproducible. The authors do demonstrate a memory for F1 embryos that could be a maternal effect, and the authors confirm that this is mediated by a systemic small RNA response. There are several points in the manuscript where a more positive tone might be helpful.

      We would like to correct the statement made in the second to last sentence. The demonstration of an F1 response to PA14 was first reported by Moore et al., (2019) and then by Pereira et al., (2020) using a different behavioral assay. We merely confirmed these results in our hands, and confirmed the observation, first reported by Kaletsky et al., (2020), that sid-1 and sid-2 are required for this F1 response; although we did find that sid-1 and sid-2 are not required for the PA14-induced increase in daf-7p::gfp expression in ASI neurons in the F1 progeny of trained adults, which had not been addressed in the published work.

      Yes, the intergenerational F1 response could be a maternal effect, but the in utero F1 embryos and their precursor germ cells were directly exposed to PA14 metabolites and toxins (non-maternal effect) as well as any parental response, whether mediated by small RNAs, prions, hormones, or other unknown information carriers. While the F1 aversion response does require sid-1 and sid-2, we would not presume that the substrate is therefore an RNA molecule, particularly because the systemic RNAi response supported by sid-1 and sid-2 is via long double-stranded RNA. To date, no evidence suggests that either protein transports small RNAs, particularly single-stranded RNAs.

      Strengths:

      The authors note that the high copy number daf-7::GFP transgene used by the Murphy group displayed variable expression and evidence for somatic silencing or transgene breakdown in the Hunter lab, as confirmed by the Murphy group. The authors nicely use single copy daf-7::GFP to show that neuronal daf-7::GFP is elevated in F1 but not F2 progeny with regards to the memory of PA14 avoidance, speaking to an intergenerational phenotype.

      The authors nicely confirm that sid-1 and sid-2 are generally required for intergenerational avoidance of F1 embryos of moms exposed to PA14. However, these small RNA proteins did not affect daf-7::GFP elevation in the F1 progeny. This result is unexpected given previous reports that single copy daf-7::GFP is not elevated in F1 progeny of sid mutants. Because the Murphy group reported that daf-7 mutation abolishes avoidance for F1 progeny, this means that the sid genes function downstream of daf-7 or in parallel, rather than upstream as previously suggested.

      The published report (Moore et al., 2019) shows only multicopy daf-7p::gfp results and does not address the daf-7p::gfp response in sid-1 or sid-2 mutants. Thus, our discovery that systemic RNAi, exogenous RNAi, and heritable RNAi mutants don’t disrupt elevated daf-7p::gfp in ASI neurons in the F1 progeny of PA14 trained P0’s is only unexpected with respect to the published models (Moore et al., 2019, Kaletsky et al., 2020).

      The authors studied antisense small RNAs that change in Murphy data sets, identifying 116 mRNAs that might be regulated by sRNAs in response to PA14. Importantly, the authors show that the maco-1 gene, putatively targeted by piRNAs according to the Kaletsky 2020 paper, displays few siRNAs that change in response to PA14. The authors conclude that the P11 ncRNA of PA14, which was proposed to promote interkingdom RNA communication by the Murphy group, is unlikely to affect maco-1 expression by generating sRNAs that target maco-1 in C. elegans. The authors define 8 genes based on their analysis of sRNAs and mRNAs that might promote resistance to PA14, but they do not further characterize these genes' role in pathogen avoidance. The Murphy group might wish to consider following up on these genes and their possible relationship with P11.

      Weaknesses:

      This very thorough and interesting manuscript is at times pugnacious.

      We reiterate that we never claimed that Moore et al., (2019) did not obtain their reported results. We simply stated that we could not replicate their results using the published methods and then failed in our search to identify variable(s) that might account for our results. In revising the manuscript, we have striven to make clear, unmuddied statements of facts and state that future investigations may provide independent evidence that supports the original claims and explains our divergent results.

      Please explain more clearly what is High Growth media for E. coli in the text and methods, conveying why it was used by the Murphy lab, and if Normal Growth or High Growth is better for intergenerational heritability assays.

      We added the standard recipes and the following explanations in the methods section to the revised text.

      “NG plates minimally support OP50 growth, resulting in a thin lawn that facilitates visualization of larvae and embryos. HG plates (8X more peptone) support much higher OP50 growth, resulting in a thick bacterial lawn that supports larger worm populations.”

      We have also included the following text in our presentation and discussion of the effects of growth conditions on worm choice in PA14 vs OP50 choice assays.

      “Furthermore, because OP50 pathogenicity is enhanced by increased E. coli nutritive conditions (Garsin et al., 2003, Shi et al., 2006), the growth of F1-F4 progeny on High Growth (HG) plates (Moore et al., 2019; 2021b), which contain 8X more peptone than NG plates and therefore support much higher OP50 growth levels, immediately prior to the F1-F4 choice assays may further contribute to OP50 aversion among the control animals.”

      We don’t know enough to claim that HG or NG media is better than the other for intergenerational assays, but they are different. Thus, switching between the two in a multigenerational experiment likely introduces unknown variability.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      This paper examines the reproducibility of results reported by the Murphy lab regarding transgenerational inheritance of a learned avoidance behavior in C. elegans. It has been well established by multiple labs that worms can learn to avoid the pathogen pseudomonas aeruginosa (PA14) after a single exposure. The Murphy lab has reported that learned avoidance is transmittable to 4 generations and dependent on a small RNA expressed by PA14 that elicits the transgenerational silencing of a gene in C. elegans. The Hunter lab now reports that although they can reproduce inheritance of the learned behavior by the first generation (F1), they cannot reproduce inheritance in subsequent generations.

      This is an important study that will be useful for the community. Although they fail to identify a "smoking gun", the study examines several possible sources for the discrepancy, and their findings will be useful to others interested in using these assays. The preference assay appears to work in their hands in as much as they are able to detect the learned behavior in the P0 and F1 generations, suggesting that the failure to reproduce the transgenerational effect is not due to trivial mistakes in the protocol. An obvious reason, however, to account for the differing results is that the culture conditions used by the authors are not permissive for the expression of the small RNA by PA14 that the MUrphy lab identified as required for transgenerational inheritance. It would seem prudent for the authors to determine whether this small RNA is present in their cultures, or at least acknowledge this possibility.

      We thank the reviewer for raising this issue and have added the following statement to this effect in the revised manuscript.

      “We note that previous bacterial RNA sequence analysis identified a small non-coding RNA called P11 whose expression correlates with bacterial growth conditions that induce heritable avoidance (Kaletsky et al., 2020). Critically, C. elegans trained on a PA14 ΔP11 strain (which lacks this small RNA) still learn to avoid PA14, but their F1 and F2-F4 progeny fail to show an intergenerational or transgenerational response (Figure 3L in Kaletsky et al., 2020). The fact that we observed an intergenerational (F1) avoidance response is evidence that our PA14 growth conditions induce P11 expression.”

      We believe that this addresses the concern raised here.

      The authors should also note that their protocol was significantly different from the Murphy protocol (see comments below) and therefore it remains possible that protocol differences cumulatively account for the different results.

      As suggested below, we have added to the supplemental documents the protocol we followed for the aversion assay. In our view, this document shows that our adjustments to the core protocol were minor. Furthermore, where possible, these adjustments were explicitly tested in side-by-side experiments for both the aversion assay and the daf-7p::gfp expression assay and presented in the manuscript.

      To discover the source(s) of discrepancy between our results and the published results we subsequently introduced variations to this core protocol to exclude likely variables (worm and bacteria growth temperatures, assay conditions, worm handling methods, bacterial culture and storage conditions, and some minor developmental timing issues). Again, where possible, the effect of variations was tested in side-by-side experiments for both the aversion assay and the daf-7p::gfp expression assay and were presented in or have now been added to the manuscript.

      It remains possible that we misunderstood the published Murphy lab protocols, but we were highly motivated to replicate the results so we could use these assays to investigate the reported RNAi-pathway dependent steps, thus we read every published version with extreme care.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      […] Strengths:

      (1) The authors provide a thorough description of their methods, and a marked-up version of a published protocol that describes how they adapted the protocol to their lab conditions. It should be easy to replicate the experiments.

      As noted above in response to a suggestion by reviewer #2, we have replaced the annotated published protocol with the protocol that we followed. This will aid other groups' attempts to replicate our experimental conditions.

      (2) The authors test the source of bacteria, growth temperature (of both C. elegans and bacteria), and light/dark husbandry conditions. They also supply all their raw data, so that the sample size for each testing plate can be easily seen (in the supplementary data). None of these variations appears to have a measurable effect on pathogen avoidance in the F2 generation, with all but one of the experiments failing to exhibit learned pathogen avoidance.

      We note that the parallel analysis of daf-7p::gfp expression in ASI neurons was also tested for several of these conditions and also failed to replicate the published findings.

      (3) The small RNA seq and mRNA seq analysis is well performed and extends the results shown in the original paper. The original paper did not give many details of the small RNA analysis, which was an oversight. Although not a major focus of this paper, it is a worthwhile extension of the previous work.

      (4) It is rare that negative results such as these are accessible. Although the authors were unable to determine the reason that their results differ from those previously published, it is important to document these attempts in detail, as has been done here. Behavioral assays are notoriously difficult to perform and public discourse around these attempts may give clarity to the difficulties faced by a controversial field.

      Thank you for your support. Choosing to pursue publication of these negative results was not an easy decision, and we thank members of the community for their support and encouragement.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Although the "standard" conditions have been tested over multiple biological replicates, many of the potential confounders that may have altered the results have been tested only once or twice. For example, changing the incubation temperature to 25{degree sign}C was tested in only two biological replicates (Exp 5.1 and 5.2) - and one of these experiments actually resulted in apparent pathogen avoidance inheritance in the F2 generation (but not in the F1). An alternative pathogen source was tested in only one biological replicate (Exp 3). Given the variability observed in the F2 generation, increasing biological replicates would have added to the strengths of the report.

      We agree that our study was not exhaustive in our exploration of variables that might be interfering with our ability to detect F2 avoidance. We also note that some of these variables also failed (with many more independent experiments) to induce elevated daf-7p::gfp expression in ASI neurons in F2 progeny. Our goal was not to show that variation in some growth or assay condition would generate reproducible negative results, but the exploration was designed to tweak conditions to enable detection of a robust F2 response. Given the strength of the data presented in Moore et al., (2019) we expected that adjustment of the problematic variable would produce positive results apparent in a single replicate, which could then be followed up. If we had succeeded, then we would have documented the conditions that enabled robust F2 inheritance and would have explored molecular mechanisms that support this important but mysterious process.

      (2) A key difference between the methods used here and those published previously, is an increase in the age of the animals used for training - from mostly L4 to mostly young adults. I was unable to find a clear example of an experiment when these two conditions were compared, although the authors state that it made no difference to their results.

      We can state firmly that the apparent time delay did not affect P0 learned avoidance (new Figure S1) or, as documented in Table S1, daf-7p::gfp expression in ASI neurons. In our experience, training mostly L4’s on PA14 frequently failed to produce sufficient F1 embryos for both F1 avoidance assays or daf-7p::gfp measurements in ASI neurons and collection of F2 progeny. Indeed, in early attempts to detect heritable PA14 aversion, trained P0 and F1 progeny were not assayed in order to obtain sufficient F2’s for a choice assay. These animals failed to display aversion, but without evidence of successful P0 training or an F1 intergenerational response this was deemed a non-fruitful trouble-shooting approach. We have added supplemental Figure S1 which presents P0 choice assay results from experiments using younger trained animals that failed to produce sufficient F1’s to continue the inheritance experiments.

      The different timing at the start of training between the two protocols may reflect the age of the recovered bleached P0 embryos. It is reasonable to assume that bleaching day 1 adults vs day 2 or 3 adults from the P-1 population could shift the average age of recovered P0 embryos by several hours. The Murphy protocol only states that P0 embryos were obtained by bleaching healthy adults. Regardless, if the hypothesis entertained here is true, that a several hour difference in larval/adult age during 24 hours of training affects F2 inheritance of learned aversion but does not affect P0 learned avoidance, then we would argue that this paradigm for heritable learned avoidance, as described in Moore et al., (2019, 2021), is not sufficiently robust for mechanistic investigations.

      (3) The original paper reports a transgenerational avoidance effect up to the F5 generation. Although in this work the authors failed to see avoidance in the F2 generation, it would have been prudent to extend their tests for more generations in at least a couple of their experiments to ensure that the F2 generation was not an aberration (although this reviewer acknowledges that this seems unlikely to be the case).

      We would point out that we also failed to robustly replicate the F2 response in the daf-7p::gfp expression assays. An F2-specific aberration that affects two different assays seems quite unlikely, and it remains unclear how we would interpret a positive result in F3 and F4 generations without a positive result in the F2 generation. Were we to further extend these investigations, we believe that exploration of additional culture conditions would warrant higher priority than extension of our results to the F3 and F4 generations.

      Reviewing Editor Comments:

      The reviewers' suggestions for improving the manuscript were mostly minor, to change the wording in some places and to add some more explanation regarding the methods.

      What should be highlighted in the section on OP50 growth conditions is that the initial preference for PA14 in the Murphy lab has also been observed by multiple other labs (Bargmann, Kim, Zhang, Abbalay). The fact that this preference was not observed by the Hunter lab is one of several indicators of subtle differences in the environment that might add up to explain the differences in results.

      We agree that subtle known and unknown differences in OP50 and PA14 culture conditions can have measurable effects on the detection of PA14 attraction/aversion relative to OP50 attraction/aversion that could obscure or create the appearance of heritable effects between generations. We have added (see below) to the text a fuller description of the variability in the initial or naive preference observed in different laboratories using similar or variant 2-choice assays and culture conditions. It is worth emphasizing that direct comparison of the OP50 growth conditions specified in Moore et al., (2021) frequently revealed a much larger effect on the naïve choice index than is reported between labs (Figure 4).  

      “Naïve (OP50 grown) worms often show a bias towards PA14 in choice assays (Zhang et al., 2005; Ha et al., 2010; Moore et al., 2019; Pereira et al., 2020; Lalsiamthara and Aballay, 2022). This response, rather than representing an innate attraction to PA14, likely reflects the context of the worm's recent growth on OP50, a mild C. elegans pathogen (Garigan et al., 2002; Garsin et al., 2003; Shi et al., 2006). Thus, the naïve worms presented with a choice between a recently experienced mild pathogen (OP50) and a novel food choice (PA14) initially choose the novel food instead of the known mild pathogen (OP50 aversion).

      In line with our results, some other groups have also reported higher naïve choice index scores (Lee et al., 2017). This variability in naïve choice may reflect differences in growth conditions of either the OP50 or PA14 bacteria. In addition, we note that among the studies that show naïve worm attraction to Pseudomonas (OP50 aversion) there are extensive methodological differences from the methods in Moore et al., (2019; 2021b), including differences in bacterial growth temperature, incubation time, whether the bacteria is diluted or concentrated prior to placement on the choice plates, the concentration of peptone in the choice plates, the length of the choice assay, and the inclusion of sodium azide in the choice assays (Zhang et al., 2005; Ha et al., 2010; Moore et al., 2019; Pereira et al 2020; Lalsiamthara and Aballay, 2022). Thus, the cause of the variability across published reports is not clear.”

      Overall, an emphasis on the absence of robustness of the reported results, rather than failure to reproduce them (which can always have many reasons), is appropriate.

      We agree that an emphasis on robustness is appropriate and have modified the text throughout the manuscript to shift the emphasis to absence of robustness. This includes a change to the manuscript title, which is now, “Reported transgenerational responses to Pseudomonas aeruginosa in C. elegans are not robust”

      A significant experimental addition would be some attempts to determine whether the bacterial PA14 pathogen in the authors' lab produces the P11 small RNA, which has been proposed to have a causal role in initiating the previously reported transgenerational inheritance.

      We acknowledge in the revised manuscript that a subsequent publication (Kaletsky et al., 2020) identified a correlation between PA14 training conditions that induced transgenerational memory and the expression of P11, a P. aeruginosa small non-coding RNA (see our response above to Reviewer #2’s similar query). While testing for the presence of P11 in Harvard culture conditions would be an important assay in any study whose purpose was to investigate the proposed P11-mediated mechanism underlying the transgenerational responses reported by the Murphy Lab, our goal was rather to replicate the robust transgenerational (F2) responses to PA14 training and then to investigate in more detail how sid-1 and sid-2 contribute to transgenerational epigenetic inheritance. Neither sid-1 nor sid-2 are predicted to transport small RNAs or single-stranded RNAs, thus testing for the presence of P11 is less relevant to our goals. Regardless, we note that Figure 3L in Kaletsky et al., (2020) showed that PA14 ΔP11 bacteria failed to induce an F1 avoidance response. Thus, the fact that we observed F1 avoidance implies that our culture conditions successfully induced P11 expression.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      The abstract could be more positive by concluding that 'We conclude that this example of transgenerational inheritance lacks robustness but instead reflects an example of small RNA-mediated intergenerational inheritance.'

      As recommended, we have added additional clarifying information to the abstract and moderated the conclusion sentence.

      “We did confirm that the dsRNA transport proteins SID-1 and SID-2 are required for the intergenerational (F1) inheritance of pathogen avoidance, but not for the F1 inheritance of elevated daf-7 expression. Furthermore, our reanalysis of RNA seq data provides additional evidence that this intergenerational inherited PA14 response may be mediated by small RNAs.”

      “We conclude that this example of transgenerational inheritance lacks robustness, confirm that the intergenerational avoidance response, but not the elevated daf-7p::gfp expression in F1 progeny, requires sid-1 and sid-2, and identify candidate siRNAs and target genes that may mediate this intergenerational response.”

      Differential expression of sRNAs or mRNAs might be better understood quantitatively by presenting data in scatterplots (Reed and Montgomery 2020) rather than in volcano plots.

      We agree and have modified Figure 6A and 6B.

      This statement in the main text might be unnecessary, as it affects the tenor of the conclusion of this significant manuscript. 'We note that none of the raw data for the published figures and unpublished replicate experiments . . . this hampered our ability to fully compare'.

      We have rewritten this paragraph to focus on our goal: to identify the source of the discrepancy between our results and the published results. We considered discarding this statement but ultimately decided that our inability to directly compare our data to that of previously published work is a shortcoming of our study that deserves to be acknowledged and explained.

      “Ideally, we would have compared our results with the published results (Moore et al., 2019), to possibly identify additional experimental parameters for further investigation; for example, a quantitative comparison of naïve choice in the P0 and F1 generations could help to determine the role of bacterial growth in the choice assay response. However, none of the raw data for the published figures and unpublished replicate experiments (Moore et al., 2019) were available on the publisher’s website or provided upon request to the corresponding author. In the absence of a quantitative comparison, it remains possible that an explanation for the discrepancies between our results and those of Moore et al., (2019) has been overlooked.”

      The final sentence of the Discussion could be tempered and more positive by stating 'Thus independent reproducibility is of paramount concern, and we have tried to be completely transparent as a model for how heritability research should be conducted within the C. elegans community'.

      Thank you. The suggested sentence nicely captures our intention. We now use it, almost verbatim, as our final sentence.

      “Thus, independent reproducibility is of paramount concern, and we have tried to be completely transparent as a model for how heritability research should be presented within the C. elegans community.”

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Specific comments:

      (1) Protocol: It is difficult to assess from the Methods the exact protocol used by the authors to assay food preference. The annotated Murphy protocol is not sufficient. The authors should provide their own protocol - a detailed lab-ready protocol where every step is outlined, and any steps that deviate from the Murphy lab protocol are called out.

      Thank you for this excellent suggestion. We now include a protocol that documents the precise steps, timings, and controls that we followed (S1_aversion_protocol). We also include footnotes to both explain the reasons behind particular steps and to document known differences to the published protocol. Given the thoroughness of this suggested approach, we have thus removed the annotated version of Moore et al., (2021) from the revised submission.

      (2) The authors imply in the methods that, unlike the Murphy lab, they did NOT use azide in the assay, and instead used 4oC to "freeze" the worms in place - It is not clear whether this method was used throughout all their assays and whether this could be a source of the difference. This change is NOT indicated in the annotated Murphy lab STAR Protocol they provide in the supplement.

      We apologize for the lack of clarity. Concerned that azide may be interfering with our ability to detect heritable silencing we tested and then used cold-induced rigor to preserve worm choice in some choice assay results. This was not a change to the core protocol, but a variation used in some assays to determine whether azide could reduce our ability to detect heritable behavioral responses to PA14 exposure. As Moore et al., (2021) show, too much azide can affect measurement of worm choice. Too little or ineffective azide also can affect measurement of worm choice. Azide also affects bacteria (both OP50 and PA14), which could affect the production of molecules that attract or repel worms, much like performing the assay in light vs dark conditions can influence the measured choice index.

      In our hands, cold-induced rigor worked well and within biological replicates was indistinguishable from azide (Figure S10). Thus, we include those results in our analysis and now indicate in Tables 2 and S2 and in Figures 1 and 3 which experiments used which method. As suggested, we now provide a detailed protocol that includes a note describing our precise method for cold-induced rigor.

      Also, the number of worms used in each assay needs to be specified (same or different from Murphy protocol?), and whether any worms were "censored" as in the Murphy protocol, and if so on what basis.

      While we published the exact number of worms scored in each assay (on each plate) it is unknown how this might compare to the results published in Moore et al., (2019), as the number of animals in the presented choice assays (either per plate or per choice) were not reported. Details on censoring, when to exclude data, and additional criteria to abandon an in-progress experiment are now detailed in the protocol (S1_aversion_protocol)

      (3) Several instances in the text cite changes in the protocol as producing "no meaningful differences" without referring to a specific experiment that supports that statement (for example, line 399 regarding azide).

      We now include data and methods comparing azide and cold-induced rigor (Supplemental document S1_aversion_protocol, Supplemental Figure S10), and data showing the P0 choice index for 48-52 hour post-bleach L4/young adults (Supplemental Figure S1), in addition to the previously noted absence of effects due to differences in embryo bleaching protocols (Figures 2, 3 and Tables 1, 2, S1, and S2).

      (4) If the authors want to claim the irreproducibility of the Murphy lab results, they should use the exact protocol used by the Murphy lab in its entirety. It is not sufficient to show that individual changes do not affect the outcome, since the protocol they use appears to include SEVERAL changes which could cumulatively affect the results. If the authors do not want to do this, they should at least acknowledge and summarize in their discussion ALL their protocol changes.

      We acknowledge these minor differences between the protocols we followed and the published methods but disagree that they invalidate our results. We transparently present the effect of known minimal protocol changes. We also present analysis of possible invalidating variations (number of animals in a choice assay). We emphasize that in our hands both measures of TEI, the choice assay and measurement of daf-7p::gfp in ASI neurons, failed to replicate the published transgenerational results.

      If the protocol is sensitive to how animals are counted, whether bleached embryos are mixed gently or vigorously or a few hours difference in age at training, then in our view this TEI paradigm is not robust.

      See also our response to reviewer #3’s public reviews above.

      (5) The authors acknowledge that "non-obvious growth culture differences" could account for the different results. In this respect, the Murphy lab has proposed that the transgenerational effect requires a small RNA expressed in PA14. The authors should check that this RNA is expressed in the cultures they grow in their lab and use for their experiments. This could potentially identify where the two protocols diverge.

      The bacterial culture conditions and worm training procedures described in Moore et al., (2019) successfully produced trained P0 animals that transmitted a PA14 aversion response to their F1 progeny. In a subsequent publication (Kaletsky et al., 2020), the Murphy lab showed a correlation between the culture conditions that induce heritable avoidance and the expression of P11, a P. aeruginosa small non-coding RNA. As mentioned above in response to Reviewer #2’s public review and the Reviewing Editor’s comments to authors, the Murphy lab showed that PA14 ΔP11 bacteria fail to induce an F1 avoidance response (Figure 3L in Kaletsky et al., (2020)). Thus, the fact that we observed F1 avoidance implies that our culture conditions successfully induced P11 expression. We believe that this addresses the concern raised here. Furthermore, if P11 is not reliably expressed in pathogenic PA14, then the published model is unlikely to be relevant in a natural environment. Again, we thank the reviewer for raising this issue and have added this information to the revised manuscript (see above response to Reviewer #2’s Public Reviews).

      (6) Legend to Figure 1: please clarify which experiments were done with which PA14 isolates especially for A-C. What is the origin of the N2 strain used here?

      These details from Tables 2 and S2 have been added to Figure 1 panels A-C and Figure 3. Bristol N2, obtained from the CGC (reference 257), was used for aversion experiments.

      (7) Growth conditions: "These young adults produced comparable P0 and F1 results (Figure 1, Figure 2, and Figure 3)." It is not clear from the text what specific figure panels need to be compared to examine the effect of the variables described in the text. Please indicate which figure panels should be compared (lines 70-95).

      The information for the daf-7p::gfp expression experiments displayed in Figure 1 and Figure 2 is presented in Table 1 and Table S1. The data for P0 aversion training using younger animals is now presented in Figure S1.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      While overall I found this easy to follow and well-written, I think the clarity of the figures could be improved by incorporating some of the information from S2 into Figure 3. Besides the figure label listing the experiment (Exp1, Exp2, etc) it would be helpful to add pertinent information about the experiment. For example Exp 1.1 (light, 20{degree sign}C), Exp1.2 (dark, 20{degree sign}C), Exp 5 (25{degree sign}C, light), etc.

      Thank you for the suggestion. These details from Tables 2 and S2 have been added to Figures 1 A-C, and 3.

      Citations

      • Moore, R.S., Kaletsky, R., and Murphy, C.T. (2019). Piwi/PRG-1 Argonaute and TGF-beta Mediate Transgenerational Learned Pathogenic Avoidance. Cell 177, 1827-1841 e1812.

      • Moore, R.S., Kaletsky, R., and Murphy, C.T. (2021). Protocol for transgenerational learned pathogen avoidance behavior assays in Caenorhabditis elegans. STAR Protoc 2, 100384.

      • Kaletsky, R., Moore, R.S., Vrla, G.D., Parsons, L.R., Gitai, Z., and Murphy, C.T. (2020). C. elegans interprets bacterial non-coding RNAs to learn pathogenic avoidance. Nature 586, 445-451.

      • Pereira, A.G., Gracida, X., Kagias, K., and Zhang, Y. (2020). C. elegans aversive olfactory learning generates diverse intergenerational effects. J Neurogenet 34, 378-388.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Chen et al have identified a new candidate gene for high myopia, ZC3H11A, and using a knock-out mouse model, have attempted to validate it as a myopia gene and explain a potential mechanism. They identified 4 heterozygous missense variants in highly myopic teenagers. These variants are in conserved regions of the protein, and predicted to be damaging, but the only evidence the authors provide that these specific variants affect protein function is a supplement figure showing decreased levels of IκBα after transfection with overexpression plasmids (not specified what type of cells were transfected). This does not prove that these mutations cause loss of function, in fact it implies they have a gain-of-function mechanism. They then created a knock-out mouse. Heterozygotes show myopia at all ages examined but increased axial length only at very early ages. Unfortunately, the authors do not address this point or examine corneal structure in these animals. They show that the mice have decreased B-wave amplitude on electroretinogram (a sign of retinal dysfunction associated with bipolar cells), and decreased expression of a bipolar cell marker, PKCα. On electron microscopy, there are morphologic differences in the outer nuclear layer (where bipolar, amacrine, and horizontal cell bodies reside). Transcriptome analysis identified over 700 differentially expressed genes. The authors chose to focus on the PI3K-AKT and NF-κB signaling pathways and show changes in expression of genes and proteins in those pathways, including PI3K, AKT, IκBα, NF-κB, TGF-β1, MMP-2 and IL-6, although there is very high variability between animals. They propose that myopia may develop in these animals either as a result of visual abnormality (decreased bipolar cell function in the retina) or by alteration of NF-κB signaling. These data provide an interesting new candidate variant for development of high myopia, and provide additional data that MMP2 and IL6 have a role in myopia development. For this revision, none of my previous suggestions have been addressed.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Chen and colleagues investigated ZC3H11A as a potential cause of high myopia (HM) in humans through the analysis of exome sequencing in 1,015 adolescents and experiments involving Zc3h11a knock-out mice. The authors showed four possibly pathogenic missense variants in four adolescents with HM. After that, the authors presented the phenotypic features of Zc3h11a knock-out mice, the result of RNA-sequencing, and a comparison of mRNA and protein levels of the functional candidates between wild-type and Zc3h11a knock-out mice. Based on their observations, the authors concluded that ZC3H11A protein contributes to the early onset of myopia.

      The strengths of this manuscript include: (1) successful identification of characteristic ophthalmic phenotypes in Zc3h11a knock-out mice, (2) demonstration of biological features related to myopia, such as PI3K-AKT and NF-kB pathways, and (3) inclusion of supporting human genetic data in individuals with HM. On the other hand, the weaknesses of this paper appear to be: (1) the lack of robust evidence from their genomic analysis, and (2) insufficient evidence to support phenotypic similarity between humans with ZC3H11A mutations and Zc3h11a knock-out mice. Given that the biological mechanisms of high myopia are not fully understood, the identification of a novel gene is valuable. As described in the manuscript, it is worth noting that the previous study using myopic mouse model has implicated the role of ZC3H11A in the etiology of myopia (Fan et al. Plos Genet 2012).

      Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions.

      Specific comments:

      (1) I am concerned about the certainty of similarity in phenotypes between individuals with ZC3H11A mutation and Zc3h11a knock-out mice. A crucial point would be that there are no statistical differences in axial lengths (ALs) between wild-type and Zc3h11a knock-out mice at 8W and 10W, even though ALs in the individuals with ZC3H11A mutation were long. I would also like to note that the phenotypic information of these individuals is not available in the manuscript, although the authors indicated the suppressed b-wave amplitude in Zc3h11a knock-out mice. Considering that the authors described that "Detailed ophthalmic examinations were performed (lines: 321-323)", the detailed clinical features of these individuals should be included in the manuscript.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. The axial length in Zc3h11a Het-KO mice were found to be significantly greater than in WT littermates at weeks 4 and 6 (Independent samples t-test, p<0.05; Figure 2A and B). Although no significant differences were observed at other time points, there was still some degree of increase in these parameters. We continued to measure corneal curvature and found no significant differences between the two groups. Therefore, the difference in refraction may be due to the small size of the mouse eye. A 1 D change in refraction corresponds to only a 5-6 μm change in AL(1). However, the SD-OCT resolution used in this study is relatively low (theoretical resolution of 6 μm)(2, 3), so the small changes measured in vitreous cavity depth and AL may not be statistically significant. Additionally, some studies have shown that axial lengths reported in frozen sections are longer than those measured in vivo for age-matched mice(1, 4). Another possible explanation is that the curvature and refractive power of the lens have changed. These hypotheses provide a reasonable explanation for the mismatch between changes in refraction and ocular length parameters.

      Reference

      (1) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. A paraxial schematic eye model for the growing C57BL/6 mouse. Vision research 44, 1857-1867 (2004).

      (2) Yuan Y, Chen F, Shen M, Lu F, Wang J. Repeated measurements of the anterior segment during accommodation using long scan depth optical coherence tomography. Eye & contact lens 38, 102-108 (2012).

      (3) Shen M, et al. SD-OCT with prolonged scan depth for imaging the anterior segment of the eye. Ophthalmic Surgery, Lasers and Imaging Retina 41, S65-S69 (2010).

      (4) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. In vivo biometry in the mouse eye with low coherence interferometry. Vision research 44, 2445-2456 (2004).

      Additionally, regarding the “detailed ophthalmic examinations”, due to our patients were selected from a myopia screening cohort of over one million (children and adolescents myopia survey [CAMS] program), and ophthalmic examination only includes semi-annual refractive error measurements (a total of 5 times, with refractive error being the average of the three maximum values) and only one axial length measurement. The inappropriate description of “Detailed clinical features” has been removed.

      (2) The term "pathogenic variant" should be used cautiously. Please clarify the pathogenicity of the reported variants in accordance with the ACMG guideline.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. Four missense mutations in the ZC3H11A gene (c.412G>A, p.V138I; c.128G>A, p.G43E; c.461C>T, p.P154L; and c.2239T>A, p.S747T) were identified in the 1015 HM patients aged from 15 to 18 years. All of the identified mutations exhibited very low frequencies or does not exist in the Genome Aggregation Database (gnomAD) and Clinvar, and using pathogenicity prediction software SIFT, PolyPhen2, and CADD, most of them display high pathogenicity levels. Among them, c.412G>A, c.128G>A and c.461C>T were located in or around a domain named zf-CCCH_3 (Figure 1A and B). Furthermore, all of the mutation sites were located in highly conserved amino acids across different species (Figure 1C). Four mutations resulted in a higher degree of conformational flexibility and altered the negative charge at the corresponding sites (Figure 1D and E). Meanwhile, through transfection of overexpression mutant plasmids, it was found that compared to the wild-type, the mRNA expression levels of IκBα in the nucleus of all four mutant types (ZC3H11A<sup>V138I</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>G43E</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>P154L</sup> and ZC3H11A<sup>S747T</sup>) were significantly reduced (Supplement Figure 3). According to the ACMG guidelines, the above mutations can be classified as “Pathogenic Moderate”.

      (3) The genetic analysis does not fully support the claim that ZC3H11A is causative for HM. While the authors showed the rare allele frequencies and high CADD scores (> 20) of the identified variants, these were insufficient to establish causality. A helpful way to assess the causality would be performing a segregation analysis. An alternative approach is to show significant association by performing a gene-level association test. Assessing the pathogenicity of the variants using various prediction software, such as SIFT, PolyPhen2, and REVEL may also provide additional supportive evidence.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have addad the pathogenicity of the variants using various prediction software, such as SIFT, PolyPhen2, CADD, and the population variation databases, such as Genome Aggregation Database (gnomAD_AF) and ClinVar. Meanwhile, through transfection of overexpression mutant plasmids, it was found that compared to the wild-type, the mRNA expression levels of IκBα in the nucleus of all four mutant types (ZC3H11A<sup>V138I</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>G43E</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>P154L</sup> and ZC3H11A<sup>S747T</sup>) were significantly reduced (Supplement Figure 3).

      (4) As shown in Figure 2, significant differences in refraction were observed from 4 weeks to 10 weeks. Nevertheless, no differences were observed in AL, anterior/vitreous chamber depth, and lens depth. The author should experimentally clarify what factors contribute to the observed difference in refraction.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. The existing data show significant differences in refraction between 4 and 10 weeks, with the AL and vitreous cavity depth of Het mice being longer than those of WT mice at 4 and 6 weeks. Although no significant differences were observed at other time points, there was still some degree of increase in these parameters. We continued to measure corneal curvature and found no significant differences between the two groups. Therefore, the difference in refraction may be due to the small size of the mouse eye. A 1 D change in refraction corresponds to only a 5-6 μm change in AL(1). However, the SD-OCT resolution used in this study is relatively low (theoretical resolution of 6 μm)(2, 3), so the small changes measured in vitreous cavity depth and AL may not be statistically significant. Additionally, some studies have shown that axial lengths reported in frozen sections are longer than those measured in vivo for age-matched mice(1, 4). Another possible explanation is that the curvature and refractive power of the lens have changed. These hypotheses provide a reasonable explanation for the mismatch between changes in refraction and ocular length parameters.

      Reference

      (1) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. A paraxial schematic eye model for the growing C57BL/6 mouse. Vision research 44, 1857-1867 (2004).

      (2) Yuan Y, Chen F, Shen M, Lu F, Wang J. Repeated measurements of the anterior segment during accommodation using long scan depth optical coherence tomography. Eye & contact lens 38, 102-108 (2012).

      (3) Shen M, et al. SD-OCT with prolonged scan depth for imaging the anterior segment of the eye. Ophthalmic Surgery, Lasers and Imaging Retina 41, S65-S69 (2010).

      (4) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. In vivo biometry in the mouse eye with low coherence interferometry. Vision research 44, 2445-2456 (2004).

      (5) The gene names should be italicized throughout the manuscript.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. The gene names have been italicized throughout the manuscript.

      (6) Table 1: providing chromosomal positions and rs numbers (if available) would be helpful for readers.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have provided the chromosome positions and rs number (if available) of each mutation in Table 1.

      (7) Figure 5b, c, and d: the results of pathway analysis and GO enrichment analysis are difficult to interpret due to the small font size. It would be preferable to present these results in tables. Moreover, the authors should set a significant threshold in the enrichment analyses.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have adjusted the font size of the image. In the retina transcriptome analysis, we have set Fold change (FC) of at least two and a P value < 0.05 as thresholds to analyze differentially expressed genes (DEGs). The GO terms and KEGG pathways enrichment analysis selected the top 20 with the most significant differences or the highest number of enriched genes for display.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary: Chong Chen and colleagues reported that mutations were identified in the ZC3H11A gene in four adolescents from 1015 high myopia subjects in their myopia cohort. They further generated Zc3h11a knockout mice utilizing the CRISPR/Cas9 technology. They analyzed the heterozygotes knockout mice compared to control littermates and found refractive error changes, electrophysiological differences, and retinal inflammation-related gene expression differences. They concluded that ZC3H11A may play a role in the early onset of myopia by regulating inflammatory responses.

      Strengths:

      Data were shown from both clinical cohort and animal models.

      Weaknesses:

      Their findings are interesting and important, however; they need to resolve several points to make the current conclusion.

      (1) They described the ZC3H11A gene as a pathogenic variant for high myopia. It should be classified as pathogenic according to the guidelines of the American College of Medical Genetics and Genomics (Richards et al., Genet Med 17(5):405-24, 2015). The modes of inheritance for the families need to be shown. They also described identifying the gene as a "new" candidate. It should be checked in databases such as gnomAD and ClinVar, and any previous publications and be declared as a novel variant.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. Four missense mutations in the ZC3H11A gene (c.412G>A, p.V138I; c.128G>A, p.G43E; c.461C>T, p.P154L; and c.2239T>A, p.S747T) were identified in the 1015 HM patients aged from 15 to 18 years. All of the identified mutations exhibited very low frequencies or does not exist in the Genome Aggregation Database (gnomAD) and Clinvar, and using pathogenicity prediction software SIFT, PolyPhen2, and CADD, most of them display high pathogenicity levels. Among them, c.412G>A, c.128G>A and c.461C>T were located in or around a domain named zf-CCCH_3 (Figure 1A and B). Furthermore, all of the mutation sites were located in highly conserved amino acids across different species (Figure 1C). Four mutations resulted in a higher degree of conformational flexibility and altered the negative charge at the corresponding sites (Figure 1D and E). Meanwhile, through transfection of overexpression mutant plasmids, it was found that compared to the wild-type, the mRNA expression levels of IκBα in the nucleus of all four mutant types (ZC3H11A<sup>V138I</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>G43E</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>P154L</sup> and ZC3H11A<sup>S747T</sup>) were significantly reduced (Supplement Figure 3). According to the ACMG guidelines, the above mutations can be classified as “Pathogenic Moderate”.

      Unfortunately, our patients are part of the MAGIC project (aged 15 years or older), a cohort consists of thousands of individuals with HM (patients from the children and adolescents myopia survey [CAMS] program) who have undergone WES, and their parents' relevant information was not collected for performing a segregation analysis.

      (2) The phenotypes of the heterozygote mice are weak overall. The het mice showed mild to moderate myopic refractive shifts from 4 to 10 weeks of age. However, this cannot be explained by other ocular biometrics such as anterior chamber depth or lens thickness. Some differences are found between het and WT littermates in axial length and vitreous chamber depth but disappear after 8 weeks old. Furthermore, the early differences are not enough to explain the refractive error changes. They mentioned that they did not use homozygotes because of the embryonic lethality. I would strongly suggest employing conditional knockout systems to analyze homozygotes. This will also be able to identify the causative tissues/cells because they assume bipolar cells are functional. The cells in the retinal pigment epithelium and choroid are also important to contribute to myopia development.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. The existing data show significant differences in refraction between 4 and 10 weeks, with the AL and vitreous cavity depth of Het mice being longer than those of WT mice at 4 and 6 weeks. Although no significant differences were observed at other time points, there was still some degree of increase in these parameters. We continued to measure corneal curvature and found no significant differences between the two groups. Therefore, the difference in refraction may be due to the small size of the mouse eye. A 1 D change in refraction corresponds to only a 5-6 μm change in AL(1). However, the SD-OCT resolution used in this study is relatively low (theoretical resolution of 6 μm)(2, 3), so the small changes measured in vitreous cavity depth and AL may not be statistically significant. Additionally, some studies have shown that axial lengths reported in frozen sections are longer than those measured in vivo for age-matched mice(1, 4). Another possible explanation is that the curvature and refractive power of the lens have changed. These hypotheses provide a reasonable explanation for the mismatch between changes in refraction and ocular length parameters.

      Reference

      (1) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. A paraxial schematic eye model for the growing C57BL/6 mouse. Vision research 44, 1857-1867 (2004).

      (2) Yuan Y, Chen F, Shen M, Lu F, Wang J. Repeated measurements of the anterior segment during accommodation using long scan depth optical coherence tomography. Eye & contact lens 38, 102-108 (2012).

      (3) Shen M, et al. SD-OCT with prolonged scan depth for imaging the anterior segment of the eye. Ophthalmic Surgery, Lasers and Imaging Retina 41, S65-S69 (2010).

      (4) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. In vivo biometry in the mouse eye with low coherence interferometry. Vision research 44, 2445-2456 (2004).

      The drawback is that, we did not conduct relevant research on homozygous knockout mice. The first reason is that our patient's mutation pattern is heterozygous mutation (Heterozygous knockout mice can better simulate human phenotypes). The second reason is that homozygous knockout mice are lethal, and we did not use the conditional knockout mouse model for further research. At the same time, we limited the pathway of myopia to the recognized and classical retina-sclera pathway, and did not study other pathways such as retinal pigment epithelium and choroid.

      (3) Their hypothesis regarding inflammatory gene changes and myopic development is not logical. Are the inflammatory responses evoked from bipolar cells? Did the mice show an accumulation of inflammatory cells in the inner retina? Visible retinal inflammation is not generally seen in either early-onset or high-myopia human subjects. Can this be seen in the actual subjects in the cohort? To me, this is difficult to adapt the retina-to-sclera signaling they mentioned in the discussion so far. Egr-1 may be examined as described.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. We have removed the hypothesis regarding inflammatory gene changes and myopic development. At present, the explanation is based solely on the correlation of signal pathways, the theoretical basis comes from the reference literature:

      “Lin et al., Role of Chronic Inflammation in Myopia Progression: Clinical Evidence and Experimental Validation. EBioMedicine, 2016 Aug:10:269-81, Figure 7.”

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Chen et al have identified a new candidate gene for high myopia, ZC3H11A, and using a knock-out mouse model, have attempted to validate it as a myopia gene and explain a potential mechanism. They identified 4 heterozygous missense variants in highly myopic teenagers. These variants are in conserved regions of the protein, but the authors provide no evidence that these specific variants affect protein function. They then created a knock-out mouse. Heterozygotes show myopia at all ages examined but increased axial length only at very early ages. Unfortunately, the authors do not address this point or examine corneal structure in these animals. They show that the mice have decreased B-wave amplitude on electroretinogram (a sign of retinal dysfunction associated with bipolar cells), and decreased expression of a bipolar cell marker, PKCa. They do not address, however, whether there are fewer bipolar cells, or simply decreased expression of the marker protein. On electron microscopy, there are morphologic differences in the outer nuclear layer (where bipolar, amacrine, and horizontal cell bodies reside). Transcriptome analysis identified over 700 differentially expressed genes. The authors chose to focus on the PI3K-AKT and NF-kB signaling pathways and show changes in the expression of genes and proteins in those pathways, including PI3K, AKT, IkBa, NF-kB, TGF-b1, MMP-2, and IL-6, although there is very high variability between animals. They propose that myopia may develop in these animals either as a result of visual abnormality (decreased bipolar cell function in the retina) or by alteration of NF-kB signaling. These data provide an interesting new candidate variant for the development of high myopia, and provide additional data that MMP2 and IL6 have a role in myopia development, but do not support the claim of the title that myopia is caused by an inflammatory reaction.

      Thank you for your valuable comments. Four missense mutations in the ZC3H11A gene (c.412G>A, p.V138I; c.128G>A, p.G43E; c.461C>T, p.P154L; and c.2239T>A, p.S747T) were identified in the 1015 HM patients aged from 15 to 18 years. All of the identified mutations exhibited very low frequencies or does not exist in the Genome Aggregation Database (gnomAD) and Clinvar, and using pathogenicity prediction software SIFT, PolyPhen2, and CADD, most of them display high pathogenicity levels. Among them, c.412G>A, c.128G>A and c.461C>T were located in or around a domain named zf-CCCH_3 (Figure 1A and B). Furthermore, all of the mutation sites were located in highly conserved amino acids across different species (Figure 1C). Four mutations resulted in a higher degree of conformational flexibility and altered the negative charge at the corresponding sites (Figure 1D and E). Meanwhile, through transfection of overexpression mutant plasmids, it was found that compared to the wild-type, the mRNA expression levels of IκBα in the nucleus of all four mutant types (ZC3H11A<sup>V138I</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>G43E</sup>, ZC3H11A<sup>P154L</sup> and ZC3H11A<sup>S747T</sup>) were significantly reduced (Supplement Figure 3). According to the ACMG guidelines, the above mutations can be classified as “Pathogenic Moderate”.

      The existing data show significant differences in refraction between 4 and 10 weeks, with the AL and vitreous cavity depth of Het mice being longer than those of WT mice at 4 and 6 weeks. Although no significant differences were observed at other time points, there was still some degree of increase in these parameters. We continued to measure corneal curvature and found no significant differences between the two groups. Therefore, the difference in refraction may be due to the small size of the mouse eye. A 1 D change in refraction corresponds to only a 5-6 μm change in AL(1). However, the SD-OCT resolution used in this study is relatively low (theoretical resolution of 6 μm)(2, 3), so the small changes measured in vitreous cavity depth and AL may not be statistically significant. Additionally, some studies have shown that axial lengths reported in frozen sections are longer than those measured in vivo for age-matched mice(1, 4). Another possible explanation is that the curvature and refractive power of the lens have changed. These hypotheses provide a reasonable explanation for the mismatch between changes in refraction and ocular length parameters.

      To evaluate the change in the number of a specific type of retinal cells, the most commonly used experimental method involves staining with antibodies specific to the target cell type, followed by fluorescence microscopy. The fluorescence intensity or the number of cells can be analyzed semi-quantitatively to assess the changes in the specific cell type in the retina. For example, in retinal degenerative models, rhodopsin-specific staining is used to identify the loss of rod cells. In our study, we selected PCK-α as a marker protein for bipolar cells to assess their number. Additionally, transmission electron microscopy (TEM) was used to observe damage to the cell morphology in the inner nuclear layer (INL) of Het mice, where bipolar cell bodies are located. Based on both sets of data, we conclude that bipolar cells have indeed undergone structural damage and a reduction in number.

      Reference

      (1) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. A paraxial schematic eye model for the growing C57BL/6 mouse. Vision research 44, 1857-1867 (2004).

      (2) Yuan Y, Chen F, Shen M, Lu F, Wang J. Repeated measurements of the anterior segment during accommodation using long scan depth optical coherence tomography. Eye & contact lens 38, 102-108 (2012).

      (3) Shen M, et al. SD-OCT with prolonged scan depth for imaging the anterior segment of the eye. Ophthalmic Surgery, Lasers and Imaging Retina 41, S65-S69 (2010).

      (4) Schmucker C, Schaeffel F. In vivo biometry in the mouse eye with low coherence interferometry. Vision research 44, 2445-2456 (2004).

      We have removed the hypothesis regarding inflammatory gene changes and myopic development. At present, the explanation is based solely on the correlation of signal pathways, the theoretical basis comes from the reference literature:

      “Lin et al., Role of Chronic Inflammation in Myopia Progression: Clinical Evidence and Experimental Validation. EBioMedicine, 2016 Aug:10:269-81, Figure 7.”

    1. Note de synthèse : Violence à l'école - Crise de sens et réponses politiques Ce document de synthèse examine les principaux thèmes et idées développés dans les extraits fournis de l'article "Violence scolaire : crise de sens et réponse politique." et du livre "Zéro pointé ? Une histoire politique de la violence à l’école" d'Éric Debarbieux.

      Thème 1 : Évolution et perception de la violence à l'école

      Contrairement à une perception courante d'une augmentation générale de la violence subie par les élèves, les enquêtes du ministère indiquent une stabilité de cette violence, y compris entre élèves.

      Cependant, une évolution significative et récente est l'augmentation de la "violence idéologique portée par les élèves eux-mêmes", touchant au "racisme, à la xénophobie ou au LGBTphobies et en particulier la transphobie".

      Selon l'interview, cette augmentation est "très récente mesurée par le ministère" et peut être liée à "l’ambiance idéologique générale de la société au niveau mondial".

      Éric Debarbieux, fort de 40 ans de recherche sur le sujet, corrobore l'absence d'une augmentation générale de la violence subie.

      Il exprime sa lassitude face aux questions récurrentes suggérant une aggravation ("Alors, « ça » monte ? C’est mieux ailleurs ? C’était mieux avant ?") et aux solutions simplistes souvent proposées ("faut les punir, y a qu’à les exclure, des internats, des militaires, la restauration de l’autorité").

      Il critique également la tendance à attribuer des "causes" uniques et superficielles à la violence ("Mai 68, le laxisme, la famille, l’immigration, le wokisme, la culture de l’excuse, la théorie du genre, la monoparentalité, le manque de re-pères, l’ensauvagement").

      Thème 2 : Réponses politiques à la violence à l'école

      L'analyse historique des réponses politiques révèle une prise de conscience tardive de la réalité de la violence scolaire, principalement à partir des années 1990, notamment sous l'impulsion d'alertes comme celles de Jacques Pain.

      Les années 90 ont vu une "conjonction entre une prise de conscience sociétale et médiatique de la violence à l’école à partir de grandes manifestations lycéens et une logique politique avec un plan ministériel contre la violence à l’école".

      Depuis, une caractéristique marquante est la prolifération de "plans" ministériels, souvent déclenchés par la pression médiatique. Jusqu'en 2010-2011, on compte environ une douzaine de plans, souvent "plus ciblés sur le lien police et justice qu’Éducation nationale".

      Cette approche est critiquée comme un "traitement externalisé", basé sur une "vision fausse de la violence comme intrusive, comme étant une intrusion de l’extérieur".

      Debarbieux souligne également la "permanence dans les réponses publiques" et la domination de la "logique du plan ministériel dans une verticalité continue… et inefficace".

      Il note que malgré les bonnes intentions initiales de certains ministres, comme Jean-Michel Blanquer affirmant ne pas vouloir d'une "réforme Blanquer" et privilégiant les "solutions de terrain", la réalité a souvent été une "véritable frénésie d’injonctions" et une approche "top down" que "le terrain n’en peut plus".

      Thème 3 : Harcèlement et cyberharcèlement

      Le harcèlement et le cyberharcèlement sont devenus des sujets centraux dans la perception et la discussion de la violence à l'école.

      Les "progrès techniques avec le web 2.0 voire 3.0 ont amené de nouveaux outils à disposition du harcèlement".

      Cependant, le phénomène n'est pas entièrement nouveau, ayant déjà été discuté lors des Assises nationales de 2011.

      Le harcèlement en milieu scolaire se manifeste souvent par la constitution de groupes désignant un "bouc émissaire", ciblant des aspects tels que "le racisme, à la xénophobie, la transphobie, la grossophobie ou encore le trop bon élève".

      Ce processus est décrit comme la manière dont un "nous" se monte contre un "autre" et est "précipitée par un climat politique diffusé ad nauseam par différents médias, des médias sociaux ou des médias télévisuels".

      L'interview met en cause le rôle de la "presse Bolloré" dans les cours de récréation.

      Debarbieux rappelle avoir joué un rôle important dans la "découverte politique et médiatique du harcèlement en milieu scolaire", mais insiste sur le fait qu'il n'en a pas été "l’inventeur".

      Il critique la prétention de ceux qui se disent "briseurs de tabous" en ignorant le travail antérieur.

      Thème 4 : Crise de sens et rôle des acteurs

      Les sources convergent sur l'idée que la violence à l'école est profondément liée à une "crise de sens". L'interview affirme qu'"il y a longtemps que l’on sait que la violence est une crise de sens !

      Où est le sens de tout ça quand ce sont les ministres eux-mêmes et une grande partie de la classe politique qui en rajoutent sur le rejet de l’autre ?

      Et méprisent finalement la jeunesse dans le jurassique stéréotype de l’enfant sauvage, pour ne pas dire de sauvages."

      Debarbieux insiste sur l'importance de ne pas penser à court terme et de ne pas réagir de manière démagogique à chaque fait divers.

      Il critique la "gouvernance top down" et la surabondance de "textes et circulaires" qui se sont "accélérés d’une manière incroyable depuis une quinzaine d’années".

      Il souligne également le fossé qui s'est creusé entre l'école et le monde politique, ainsi qu'entre l'école et certains parents, avec un "sentiment de déclassement et de mépris".

      Certains personnels expriment un désir d'"éloigner les familles" perçues comme perturbatrices.

      Thème 5 : Rôle de la recherche et des experts

      Debarbieux relate son parcours de chercheur et ses interactions avec différents ministères, soulignant les difficultés et les enjeux de faire entendre les résultats de la recherche dans les décisions politiques.

      Il critique l'instrumentalisation de la recherche à des fins de communication plutôt que pour éclairer réellement les problèmes.

      L'exemple de sa brève rencontre avec François Bayrou illustre cette préoccupation : "Ce qui intéresse le ministre est manifestement plus la communication que le sujet lui-même.

      Ce qui l'intéresse est bien sûr son image."

      Il décrit également les tentatives de l'administration de mesurer la violence, notamment à travers le logiciel Signa (puis Sivis), et les limites de ces recensements administratifs, qui peuvent être sujets à sous-déclaration par crainte d'une mauvaise réputation.

      Il relate son implication dans la création d'un observatoire de la victimation en milieu scolaire et les obstacles rencontrés, y compris la suppression de l'Observatoire national de la délinquance et des réponses pénales.

      Debarbieux défend une définition large de la violence, incluant les "microviolences" et le harcèlement, car une définition restreinte est "en réalité méprisante pour les victimes".

      Il souligne que l'histoire de la violence est celle d'une "lente découverte des victimes" et de la reconnaissance de leur parole.

      Il met en garde contre la tentation de la "tolérance zéro précoce" et la vision simpliste d'un passage inéluctable de l'"incivilité" à la délinquance.

      Il insiste sur l'importance de considérer l'accumulation des désordres et la nécessité d'une justice sociale pour combattre l'oppression quotidienne.

      Thème 6 : Exemples de politiques et de leurs limites

      Le livre "Zéro pointé ?" offre une histoire politique des différentes approches adoptées pour lutter contre la violence à l'école. Plusieurs exemples illustrent les limites et les échecs de certaines politiques :

      Plans ministériels successifs : Souvent réactifs à la pression médiatique, ils manquent de continuité et d'efficacité à long terme.

      Coopération École-Police-Justice : Répétée mais pas toujours effective sur le terrain, notamment en raison du manque de connaissance mutuelle et de l'instabilité des personnels.

      "Sanctuarisation" de l'école : Basée sur une vision de la violence comme intrusion externe, elle néglige les dynamiques internes et les causes profondes.

      Recours à l'armée et à la discipline militaire : L'expérience des camps JET et les propositions de "camps de redressement" sont présentées comme inefficaces pour la réinsertion des jeunes délinquants.

      Création de personnels précaires (APS) : Malgré un investissement initial et des espoirs, le manque de pérennisation et de reconnaissance a conduit au désenchantement et à la perte d'une partie de l'investissement.

      Réformes et circulaires incessantes : L'inflation de textes administratifs nuit à la clarté de l'action et n'atteint pas le cœur du métier des enseignants.

      "ABCD de l'égalité" : L'abandon de cette expérimentation face aux pressions idéologiques illustre les difficultés de mener des politiques transversales sur des sujets sensibles. Conclusion

      • Les sources présentées dressent un tableau complexe de la violence à l'école et des tentatives politiques pour y répondre.

      Si une augmentation générale de la violence subie n'est pas avérée, l'émergence d'une violence idéologique et la persistance du harcèlement, notamment en ligne, constituent des défis majeurs.

      L'histoire des politiques publiques est marquée par une succession de plans souvent réactifs et externalisés, une verticalité excessive et un manque de continuité.

      La recherche a contribué à une meilleure compréhension du phénomène et à la reconnaissance des victimes, mais son influence sur les décisions politiques reste limitée.

      Les exemples analysés soulignent les difficultés de mise en œuvre de politiques efficaces et pérennes, souvent entravées par des logiques administratives rigides, des pressions idéologiques et un manque de vision à long terme.

      La "crise de sens" au sein de l'école et de la société apparaît comme un élément fondamental à adresser pour une approche véritablement efficace de la violence scolaire.

    1. reasons for temporariness of theocracies 1. lack of secular skills and means to run modern economy - by religious leaders 2. unwillingness to entertain the compromises of political + international relations

    1. ALL FOUR CONCEPTS OF WHY YOU SHOULD FOLLOW THE LAW: 1. gratitude = your country & law was the source of great benefits for you, so you should at least obey the law but against, you could argue that you can be grateful to many people, but it doesn't mean you have to obey everything they say 2. promise-keeping: citizens promise to obey the law in exchange for protection & other benefits (kind of a "social contract" like in Rawls' theory) 3. fairness: different from promise-keeping, because it's extended to all citizens, as a moral ground to everyone, not just to those who choose to participate in the politics SO, you should obey the law, because it would be unfair not to; you owe your fellow citizens "if they all comply and you benefit, it is unfair if you benefit without complying" 4. public good = if people break the law, the welfare of society is diminished, thus we're all morally obliged to obey

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this detailed study, Cohen and Ben-Shaul characterized the AOB cell responses to various conspecific urine samples in female mice across the estrous cycle. The authors found that AOB cell responses vary with the strains and sexes of the samples. Between estrous and non-estrous females, no clear or consistent difference in responses was found. The cell response patterns, as measured by the distance between pairs of stimuli, are largely stable. When some changes do occur, they are not consistent across strains or male status. The authors concluded that AOB detects the signals without interpreting them. Overall, this study will provide useful information for scientists in the field of olfaction.

      Strengths:

      The study uses electrophysiological recording to characterize the responses of AOB cells to various urines in female mice. AOB recording is not trivial as it requires activation of VNO pump. The team uses a unique preparation to activate the VNO pump with electric stimulation, allowing them to record AOB cell responses to urines in anesthetized animals. The study comprehensively described the AOB cell responses to social stimuli and how the responses vary (or not) with features of the urine source and the reproductive state of the recording females. The dataset could be a valuable resource for scientists in the field of olfaction.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The figures could be better labeled.

      (2) For Figure 2E, please plot the error bar. Are there any statistics performed to compare the mean responses?

      (3) For Figure 2D, it will be more informative to plot the percentage of responsive units.

      (4) Could the similarity in response be explained by the similarity in urine composition? The study will be significantly strengthened by understanding the "distance" of chemical composition in different urine.

      (5) If it is not possible for the authors to obtain these data first-hand, published data on MUPs and chemicals found in these urines may provide some clues.

      (6) It is not very clear to me whether the female overrepresentation is because there are truly more AOB cells that respond to females than males or because there are only two female samples but 9 male samples.

      (7) If the authors only select two male samples, let's say ICR Naïve and ICR DOM, combine them with responses to two female samples, and do the same analysis as in Figure 3, will the female response still be overrepresented?

      (8) In Figure 4B and 4C, the pairwise distance during non-estrus is generally higher than that during estrus, although they are highly correlated. Does it mean that the cells respond to different urines more distinctively during diestrus than in estrus?

      (9) The correlation analysis is not entirely intuitive when just looking at the figures. Some sample heatmaps showing the response differences between estrous states will be helpful.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Many aspects of the study are carefully done, and in the grand scheme this is a solid contribution. I have no "big-picture" concerns about the approach or methodology. However, in numerous places the manuscript is unnecessarily vague, ambiguous, or confusing. Tightening up the presentation will magnify their impact.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study includes urine donors from males of three strains each with three social states, as well as females in two states. This diversity significantly enhances their ability to interpret their results.

      (2) Several distinct analyses are used to explore the question of whether AOB MCs are biased towards specific states or different between estrus and non-estrus females. The results of these different analyses are self-reinforcing about the main conclusions of the study.

      (3) The presentation maintains a neutral perspective throughout while touching on topics of widespread interest.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Introduction:<br /> The discussion of the role of the VNS and preferences for different male stimuli should perhaps include Wysocki and Lepri 1991

      (2) Results:<br /> a) Given the 20s gap between them, the distinction between sample application and sympathetic nerve trunk stimulation needs to be made crystal clear; in many places, "stimulus application" is used in places where this reviewer suspects they actually mean sympathetic nerve trunk stimulation.<br /> b) There appears to be a mismatch between the discussion of Figure 3 and its contents. Specifically, there is an example of an "adjusted" pattern in 3A, not 3B.<br /> c) The discussion of patterns neglects to mention whether it's possible for a neuron to belong to more than one pattern. For example, it would seem possible for a neuron to simultaneously fit the "ICR pattern" and the "dominant adjusted pattern" if, e.g., all ICR responses are stronger than all others, but if simultaneously within each strain the dominant male causes the largest response.

      (3) Discussion:<br /> a) The discussion of chemical specificity in urine focuses on volatiles and MUPs (citation #47), but many important molecules for the VNS are small, nonvolatile ligands. For such molecules, the corresponding study is Fu et al 2015.<br /> b) "Following our line of reasoning, this scarcity may represent an optimal allocation of resources to separate dominant from naïve males": 1 unit out of 215 is roughly consistent with a single receptor. Surely little would be lost if there could be more computational capacity devoted to this important axis than that? It seems more likely that dominance is computed from multiple neuronal types with mixed encoding.

      (4) Methods:<br /> a) Male status, "were unambiguous in most cases": is it possible to put numerical estimates on this? 55% and 99% are both "most," yet they differ substantially in interpretive uncertainty.<br /> b) Surgical procedures and electrode positioning: important details of probes are missing (electrode recording area, spacing, etc).<br /> c) Stimulus presentation procedure: Are stimuli manually pipetted or delivered by apparatus with precise timing?<br /> d) Data analysis, "we applied more permissive criteria involving response magnitude": it's not clear whether this is what's spelled out in the next paragraph, or whether that's left unspecified. In either case, the next paragraph appears to be about establishing a noise floor on pattern membership, not a "permissive criterion."<br /> e) Data analysis, method for assessing significance: there's a lot to like about the use of pooling to estimate the baseline and the use of an ANOVA-like test to assess unit responsiveness.<br /> But:<br /> i) for a specific stimulus, at 4 trials (the minimum specified in "Stimulus presentation procedure") kruskalwallis is questionable. They state that most trials use 5, however, and that should be okay.<br /> ii) the methods statement suggests they are running kruskalwallis individually for each neuron/stimulus, rather than once per neuron across all stimuli. With 11 stimuli, there is a substantial chance of a false-positive if they used p < 0.05 to assess significance. (The actual threshold was unstated.) Were there any multiple comparison corrections performed? Or did they run kruskalwallis on the neuron, and then if significant assess individual stimuli? (Which is a form of multiple-comparisons correction.)

    3. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this detailed study, Cohen and Ben-Shaul characterized the AOB cell responses to various conspecific urine samples in female mice across the estrous cycle. The authors found that AOB cell responses vary with the strains and sexes of the samples. Between estrous and non-estrous females, no clear or consistent difference in responses was found. The cell response patterns, as measured by the distance between pairs of stimuli, are largely stable. When some changes do occur, they are not consistent across strains or male status. The authors concluded that AOB detects the signals without interpreting them. Overall, this study will provide useful information for scientists in the field of olfaction.

      Strengths:

      The study uses electrophysiological recording to characterize the responses of AOB cells to various urines in female mice. AOB recording is not trivial as it requires activation of VNO pump. The team uses a unique preparation to activate the VNO pump with electric stimulation, allowing them to record AOB cell responses to urines in anesthetized animals. The study comprehensively described the AOB cell responses to social stimuli and how the responses vary (or not) with features of the urine source and the reproductive state of the recording females. The dataset could be a valuable resource for scientists in the field of olfaction.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The figures could be better labeled.

      Figures will be revised to provide more detailed labeling.

      (2) For Figure 2E, please plot the error bar. Are there any statistics performed to compare the mean responses?

      We did not perform statistical comparisons (between the mean rates across the population). We will add this analysis and the corresponding error bars. 

      (3) For Figure 2D, it will be more informative to plot the percentage of responsive units.

      We will do it.

      (4) Could the similarity in response be explained by the similarity in urine composition? The study will be significantly strengthened by understanding the "distance" of chemical composition in different urine.

      We agree. As we wrote in the Discussion: “Ultimately, lacking knowledge of the chemical space associated with each of the stimuli, this and all the other ideas developed here remain speculative.”

      A better understanding of the chemical distance is an important aspect that we aim to include in our future studies. However, this is far from trivial, as it is not chemical distance per se (which in itself is hard to define), but rather the “projection” of chemical space on the vomeronasal receptor neurons array. That is, knowledge of the chemical composition of the stimuli, lacking full knowledge of which molecules are vomeronasal system ligands, will only provide a partial picture. Despite these limitations, this is an important analysis which we would have done had we access to this data.

      (5) If it is not possible for the authors to obtain these data first-hand, published data on MUPs and chemicals found in these urines may provide some clues.

      Measurements about some classes of molecules may be found for some of the stimuli that we used here, but not for all. We are not aware of any single dataset that contains this information for any type of molecules (e.g., MUPs) across the entire stimulus set that we have used. More generally, pooling results from different studies has limited validity because of the biological and technical variability across studies. In order to reliably interpret our current recordings, it would be necessary to measure the urinary content of the very same samples that were used for stimulation. Unfortunately, we are not able to conduct this analysis at this stage.

      (6) It is not very clear to me whether the female overrepresentation is because there are truly more AOB cells that respond to females than males or because there are only two female samples but 9 male samples.

      It is true that the number of neurons fulfilling each of the patterns depends on the number of individual stimuli that define it. However, our measure of “over-representation” aims to overcome this bias, by using bootstrapping to reveal if the observed number of patterns is larger than expected by chance. We also note that more generally, the higher frequency of responses to female, as compared to male stimuli, is obtained in other studies by others and by us, also when the number of male and female stimuli is matched (e.g., Bansal et al BMC Biol 2021, Ben-Shaul et al, PNAS 2010, Hendrickson et al, JNS, 2008).

      (7) If the authors only select two male samples, let's say ICR Naïve and ICR DOM, combine them with responses to two female samples, and do the same analysis as in Figure 3, will the female response still be overrepresented?

      We believe that the answer is positive, but we can, and will perform this analysis to check.

      (8) In Figure 4B and 4C, the pairwise distance during non-estrus is generally higher than that during estrus, although they are highly correlated. Does it mean that the cells respond to different urines more distinctively during diestrus than in estrus?

      This is an important observation. For the Euclidean distance there might be a simple explanation as the distance depends on the number of units (and there are more units recorded in non-estrus females). However, this simple explanation does not hold for the correlation distance. A higher distance implies higher discrimination during the non-estrus stage, but our other analyses of sparseness and the selectivity indices do not support this idea. We note that absolute values of distance measures should generally be interpreted cautiously, as they may depend on multiple factors including sample size. Also, a small number of non-selective units could increase the correlation in responses among stimuli, and thus globally shift the distances. For these reasons, we focus on comparisons, rather than the absolute values of the correlation distances. In the revised manuscript, we will note and discuss this important observation.

      (9) The correlation analysis is not entirely intuitive when just looking at the figures. Some sample heatmaps showing the response differences between estrous states will be helpful.

      If we understand correctly, the idea is to show the correlation matrices from which the values in 4B and 4C are taken. We can and will do this, probably as a supplementary figure.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Many aspects of the study are carefully done, and in the grand scheme this is a solid contribution. I have no "big-picture" concerns about the approach or methodology. However, in numerous places the manuscript is unnecessarily vague, ambiguous, or confusing. Tightening up the presentation will magnify their impact.

      We will revise the text with the aim of tightening the presentation.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study includes urine donors from males of three strains each with three social states, as well as females in two states. This diversity significantly enhances their ability to interpret their results.

      (2) Several distinct analyses are used to explore the question of whether AOB MCs are biased towards specific states or different between estrus and non-estrus females. The results of these different analyses are self-reinforcing about the main conclusions of the study.

      (3) The presentation maintains a neutral perspective throughout while touching on topics of widespread interest.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Introduction:

      The discussion of the role of the VNS and preferences for different male stimuli should perhaps include Wysocki and Lepri 1991

      Agreed. we will refer to this work in our discussion.

      (2) Results:

      a) Given the 20s gap between them, the distinction between sample application and sympathetic nerve trunk stimulation needs to be made crystal clear; in many places, "stimulus application" is used in places where this reviewer suspects they actually mean sympathetic nerve trunk stimulation.

      In this study, we have considered both responses that are triggered by sympathetic trunk activation, and those that occur (as happens in some preparations) immediately following stimulus application (and prior to nerve trunk stimulation). An example of the latter Is provided in the second unit shown in Figure 1D (and this is indicated also in the figure legend). In our revision, we will further clarify this confusing point.

      b) There appears to be a mismatch between the discussion of Figure 3 and its contents. Specifically, there is an example of an "adjusted" pattern in 3A, not 3B.

      True. Thanks for catching this error. We will correct this.

      c) The discussion of patterns neglects to mention whether it's possible for a neuron to belong to more than one pattern. For example, it would seem possible for a neuron to simultaneously fit the "ICR pattern" and the "dominant adjusted pattern" if, e.g., all ICR responses are stronger than all others, but if simultaneously within each strain the dominant male causes the largest response.

      This is true. In the legend to Figure 3B, we actually write: “A neuron may fulfill more than one pattern and thus may appear in more than one row.”, but we will discuss this point in the main text as well.

      (3) Discussion:

      a) The discussion of chemical specificity in urine focuses on volatiles and MUPs (citation #47), but many important molecules for the VNS are small, nonvolatile ligands. For such molecules, the corresponding study is Fu et al 2015.

      We fully agree. We will expand our discussion and refer to Fu et al.

      b) "Following our line of reasoning, this scarcity may represent an optimal allocation of resources to separate dominant from naïve males": 1 unit out of 215 is roughly consistent with a single receptor. Surely little would be lost if there could be more computational capacity devoted to this important axis than that? It seems more likely that dominance is computed from multiple neuronal types with mixed encoding.

      We agree, and we are not claiming that dominance, nor any other feature, is derived using dedicated feature selective neurons.  Our discussion of resource allocation is inevitably speculative. Our main point in this context is that a lack of overrepresentation does not imply that a feature is not important. We will revise our discussion to better clarify our view of this issue.

      (4) Methods:

      a) Male status, "were unambiguous in most cases": is it possible to put numerical estimates on this? 55% and 99% are both "most," yet they differ substantially in interpretive uncertainty.

      This sentence is actually misleading and irrelevant. Ambiguous cases were not considered as dominant for urine collection. We only classified mice as dominant if they were “won” in the tube test and exhibited dominant behavior in the subsequent observation period in the cage. We will correct the wording in the revised manuscript.

      b) Surgical procedures and electrode positioning: important details of probes are missing (electrode recording area, spacing, etc).

      True. We will add these details.

      c) Stimulus presentation procedure: Are stimuli manually pipetted or delivered by apparatus with precise timing?

      They are delivered manually. We will clarify this as well.

      d) Data analysis, "we applied more permissive criteria involving response magnitude": it's not clear whether this is what's spelled out in the next paragraph, or whether that's left unspecified. In either case, the next paragraph appears to be about establishing a noise floor on pattern membership, not a "permissive criterion."

      True, the next paragraph is not the explanation for the more permissive criteria. The more permissive criteria involving response magnitude are actually those described in Figure 3A and 3B. The sentence that was quoted above merely states that before applying those criteria, we had also searched for patterns defined by binary designation of neurons as responsive, or not responsive, to each of the stimuli (this is directly related to the next comment below). Using those binary definitions, we obtained a very small number of neurons for each pattern and thus decided to apply the approach actually used and described in the manuscript.

      e) Data analysis, method for assessing significance: there's a lot to like about the use of pooling to estimate the baseline and the use of an ANOVA-like test to assess unit responsiveness.

      But:

      i) for a specific stimulus, at 4 trials (the minimum specified in "Stimulus presentation procedure") kruskalwallis is questionable. They state that most trials use 5, however, and that should be okay.

      The number of cases with 4 trials is truly a minority, and we will provide the exact numbers in our revision.

      ii) the methods statement suggests they are running kruskalwallis individually for each neuron/stimulus, rather than once per neuron across all stimuli. With 11 stimuli, there is a substantial chance of a false-positive if they used p < 0.05 to assess significance. (The actual threshold was unstated.) Were there any multiple comparison corrections performed? Or did they run kruskalwallis on the neuron, and then if significant assess individual stimuli? (Which is a form of multiple-comparisons correction.)

      First, we indeed failed to mention that our criterion was 0.05. We will correct that in our revision. We did not apply any multiple comparison measures. We consider each neuron-stimulus pair as an independent entity, and we are aware that this leads to a higher false positive rate. On the other hand, applying multiple comparisons would be problematic, as we do not always use the same number of stimuli in different studies. Applying multiple comparison corrections would lead to different response criteria across different studies. Notably, most, if not all, of our conclusions involve comparisons across conditions, and for this purpose we think that our procedure is valid. We do not attach any special meaning to the significance threshold, but rather think of it as a basic criterion that allows us to exclude non-responsive neurons, and to compare frequencies of neurons that fulfill this criterion.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Pinho et al. investigated the role of the dorsal vs ventral hippocampus and the gender differences in mediated learning. While previous studies already established the engagement of the hippocampus in sensory preconditioning, the authors here took advantage of freely-moving fiber photometry recording and chemogenetics to observe and manipulate sub-regions of the hippocampus (dorsal vs. ventral) in a cell-specific manner. The authors first found sex differences in the preconditioning phase of a sensory preconditioning procedure, where males required more preconditioning training than females for mediating learning to manifest, and where females displayed evidence of mediated learning even when neutral stimuli were never presented together within the session.

      After validation of a sensory preconditioning procedure in mice using light and tone neutral stimuli and a mild foot shock as the unconditioned stimulus, the authors used fiber photometry to record from all neurons vs. parvalbumin_positive_only neurons in the dorsal hippocampus or ventral hippocampus of male mice during both preconditioning and conditioning phases. They found increased activity of all neurons, as well as PV+_only neurons in both sub-regions of the hippocampus during both preconditioning and conditioning phases. Finally, the authors found that chemogenetic inhibition of CaMKII+ neurons in the dorsal, but not ventral, hippocampus specifically prevented the formation of an association between the two neutral stimuli (i.e., light and tone cues), but not the direct association between the light cue and the mild foot shock. This set of data: (1) validates the mediated learning in mice using a sensory preconditioning protocol, and stresses the importance of taking sex effect into account; (2) validates the recruitment of dorsal and ventral hippocampi during preconditioning and conditioning phases; and (3) further establishes the specific role of CaMKII+ neurons in the dorsal but not ventral hippocampus in the formation of an association between two neutral stimuli, but not between a neutral-stimulus and a mild foot shock.

      Strengths:

      The authors developed a sensory preconditioning procedure in mice to investigate mediated learning using light and tone cues as neutral stimuli, and a mild foot shock as the unconditioned stimulus. They provide evidence of a sex effect in the formation of light-cue association. The authors took advantage of fiber-photometry and chemogenetics to target sub-regions of the hippocampus, in a cell-specific manner and investigate their role during different phases of a sensory conditioning procedure.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors went further than previous studies by investigating the role of sub-regions of the hippocampus in mediated learning, however, there are several weaknesses that should be noted:

      (1) This work first validates mediated learning in a sensory preconditioning procedure using light and tone cues as neutral stimuli and a mild foot shock as the unconditioned stimulus, in both males and females. They found interesting sex differences at the behavioral level, but then only focused on male mice when recording and manipulating the hippocampus. The authors do not address sex differences at the neural level.

      (2) As expected in fear conditioning, the range of inter-individual differences is quite high. Mice that didn't develop a strong light-->shock association, as evidenced by a lower percentage of freezing during the Probe Test Light phase, should manifest a low percentage of freezing during the Probe Test Tone phase. It would interesting to test for a correlation between the level of freezing during mediated vs test phases.

      (3) The use of a synapsin promoter to transfect neurons in a non-specific manner does not bring much information. The authors applied a more specific approach to target PV+ neurons only, and it would have been more informative to keep with this cell-specific approach, for example by looking also at somatostatin+ inter-neurons.

      (4) The authors observed event-related Ca2+ transients on hippocampal pan-neurons and PV+ inter-neurons using fiber photometry. They then used chemogenetics to inhibit CaMKII+ hippocampal neurons, which does not logically follow. It does not undermine the main finding of CaMKII+ neurons of the dorsal, but not ventral, hippocampus being involved in the preconditioning, but not conditioning, phase. However, observing CaMKII+ neurons (using fiber photometry) in mice running the same task would be more informative, as it would indicate when these neurons are recruited during different phases of sensory preconditioning. Applying then optogenetics to cancel the observed event-related transients (e.g., during the presentation of light and tone cues, or during the foot shock presentation) would be more appropriate.

      (5) Probe tests always start with the "Probe Test Tone", followed by the "Probe Test Light". "Probe Test Tone" consists of an extinction session, which could affect the freezing response during "Probe Test Light" (e.g., Polack et al. (http://dx.doi.org/10.3758/s13420-013-0119-5)). Preferably, adding a group of mice with a Probe Test Light with no Probe Test Tone could help clarify this potential issue. The authors should at least discuss the possibility that the tone extinction session prior to the "Probe Test Light" could have affected the freezing response to the light cue.

    2. Reviewer #4 (Public review):

      Summary

      Pinho et al use in vivo calcium imaging and chemogenetic approaches to examine the involvement of hippocampal sub-regions across the different stages of a sensory preconditioning task in mice. They find clear evidence for sensory preconditioning in male but not female mice. They also find that, in the male mice, CaMKII-positive neurons in the dorsal hippocampus: (1) encode the audio-visual association that forms in stage 1 of the task, and (2) retrieve/express sensory preconditioned fear to the auditory stimulus at test. These findings are supported by evidence that ranges from incomplete to convincing. They will be valuable to researchers in the field of learning and memory.

      Abstract

      Please note that sensory preconditioning doesn't require the stage 1 stimuli to be presented repeatedly or simultaneously.

      "Finally, we combined our sensory preconditioning task with chemogenetic approaches to assess the role of these two hippocampal subregions in mediated learning."<br /> This implies some form of inhibition of hippocampal neurons in stage 2 of the protocol, as this is the only stage of the protocol that permits one to make statements about mediated learning. However, it is clear from what follows that the authors interrogate the involvement of hippocampal sub-regions in stages 1 and 3 of the protocol - not stage 2. As such, most statements about mediated learning throughout the paper are potentially misleading (see below for a further elaboration of this point). If the authors persist in using the term mediated learning to describe the response to a sensory preconditioned stimulus, they should clarify what they mean by mediated learning at some point in the introduction. Alternatively, they might consider using a different phrase such as "sensory preconditioned responding".

      Introduction

      "Low-salience" is used to describe stimuli such as tone, light, or odour that do not typically elicit responses that are of interest to experimenters. However, a tone, light, or odour can be very salient even though they don't elicit these particular responses. As such, it would be worth redescribing the "low-salience" stimuli in some other terms.

      "These higher-order conditioning processes, also known as mediated learning, can be captured in laboratory settings through sensory preconditioning procedures2,6-11."<br /> Higher-order conditioning and mediated learning are not interchangeable terms: e.g., some forms of second-order conditioning are not due to mediated learning. More generally, the use of mediated learning is not necessary for the story that the authors develop in the paper and could be replaced for accuracy and clarity. E.g., "These higher-order conditioning processes can be studied in the laboratory using sensory preconditioning procedures2,6-11."

      In reference to Experiment 2, it is stated that: "However, when light and tone were separated on time (Unpaired group), male mice were not able to exhibit mediated learning response (Figure 2B) whereas their response to the light (direct learning) was not affected (Figure 2D). On the other hand, female mice still present a lower but significant mediated learning response (Figure 2C) and normal direct learning (Figure 2E). Finally, in the No-Shock group, both male (Figure 2B and 2D) and female mice (Figure 2C and 2E) did not present either mediated or direct learning, which also confirmed that the exposure to the tone or light during Probe Tests do not elicit any behavioral change by themselves as the presence of the electric footshock is required to obtain a reliable mediated and direct learning responses."<br /> The absence of a difference between the paired and unpaired female mice should not be described as "significant mediated learning" in the latter. It should be taken to indicate that performance in the females is due to generalization between the tone and light. That is, there is no sensory preconditioning in the female mice. The description of performance in the No-shock group really shouldn't be in terms of mediated or direct learning: that is, this group is another control for assessing the presence of sensory preconditioning in the group of interest. As a control, there is no potential for them to exhibit sensory preconditioning, so their performance should not be described in a way that suggests this potential.

      Methods - Behavior

      I appreciate the reasons for testing the animals in a new context. This does, however, raise other issues that complicate the interpretation of any hippocampal engagement: e.g., exposure to a novel context may engage the hippocampus for exploration/encoding of its features - hence, it is engaged for retrieving/expressing sensory preconditioned fear to the tone. This should be noted somewhere in the paper given that one of its aims is to shed light on the broader functioning of the hippocampus in associative processes.

      This general issue - that the conditions of testing were such as to force engagement of the hippocampus - is amplified by two further features of testing with the tone. The first is the presence of background noise in the training context and its absence in the test context. The second is the fact that the tone was presented for 30 s in stage 1 and then continuously for 180s at test. Both changes could have contributed to the engagement of the hippocampus as they introduce the potential for discrimination between the tone that was trained and tested.

      Results - Behavior

      The suggestion of sex differences based on differences in the parameters needed to generate sensory preconditioning is interesting. Perhaps it could be supported through some set of formal analyses. That is, the data in supplementary materials may well show that the parameters needed to generate sensory preconditioning in males and females are not the same. However, there needs to be some form of statistical comparison to support this point. As part of this comparison, it would be neat if the authors included body weight as a covariate to determine whether any interactions with sex are moderated by body weight.

      What is the value of the data shown in Figure 1 given that there are no controls for unpaired presentations of the sound and light? In the absence of these controls, the experiment cannot have shown that "Female and male mice show mediated learning using an auditory-visual sensory preconditioning task" as implied by its title. Minimally, this experiment should be relabelled.

      "Altogether, this data confirmed that we successfully set up an LTSPC protocol in mice and that this behavioral paradigm can be used to further study the brain circuits involved in higher-order conditioning."<br /> Please insert the qualifier that LTSPC was successfully established in male mice. There is no evidence of LTSPC in female mice.

      Results - Brain

      "Notably, the inhibition of CaMKII-positive neurons in the dHPC (i.e. J60 administration in DREADD-Gi mice) during preconditioning (Figure 4B), but not before the Probe Test 1 (Figure 4B), fully blocked mediated, but not direct learning (Figure 4D)."<br /> The right panel of Figure 4B indicates no difference between the controls and Group DPC in the percent change in freezing from OFF to ON periods of the tone. How does this fit with the claim that CaMKII-positive neurons in the dorsal hippocampus regulate associative formation during the session of tone-light exposures in stage 1 of sensory preconditioning?

      Discussion

      "When low salience stimuli were presented separated on time or when the electric footshock was absent, mediated and direct learning were abolished in male mice. In female mice, although light and tone were presented separately during the preconditioning phase, mediated learning was reduced but still present, which implies that female mice are still able to associate the two low-salience stimuli."<br /> This doesn't quite follow from the results. The failure of the female unpaired mice to withhold their freezing to the tone should not be taken to indicate the formation of a light-tone association across the very long interval that was interpolated between these stimulus presentations. It could and should be taken to indicate that, in female mice, freezing conditioned to the light simply generalized to the tone (i.e., these mice could not discriminate well between the tone and light).

      "Indeed, our data suggests that when hippocampal activity is modulated by the specific manipulation of hippocampal subregions, this brain region is not involved during retrieval."<br /> Does this relate to the results that are shown in the right panel of Figure 4B, where there is no significant difference between the different groups? If so, how does it fit with the results shown in the left panel of this figure, where differences between the groups are observed?

      "In line with this, the inhibition of CaMKII-positive neurons from the dorsal hippocampus, which has been shown to project to the restrosplenial cortex56, blocked the formation of mediated learning."<br /> Is this a reference to the findings shown in Figure 4B and, if so, which of the panels exactly? That is, one panel appears to support the claim made here while the other doesn't. In general, what should the reader make of data showing the percent change in freezing from stimulus OFF to stimulus ON periods?

    3. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Pinho et al. presents a novel behavioral paradigm for investigating higher-order conditioning in mice. The authors developed a task that creates associations between light and tone sensory cues, driving mediated learning. They observed sex differences in task acquisition, with females demonstrating faster-mediated learning compared to males. Using fiber photometry and chemogenetic tools, the study reveals that the dorsal hippocampus (dHPC) plays a central role in encoding mediated learning. These findings are crucial for understanding how environmental cues, which are not directly linked to positive/negative outcomes, contribute to associative learning. Overall, the study is well-designed, with robust results, and the experimental approach aligns with the study's objectives.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors develop a robust behavioral paradigm to examine higher-order associative learning in mice.

      (2) They discover a sex-specific component influencing mediated learning, with females exhibiting enhanced learning abilities.

      (3) Using fiber photometry and chemogenetic techniques, the authors identify the dorsal hippocampus but not the ventral hippocampus, which plays a crucial for encoding mediated learning.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study would be strengthened by further elaboration on the rationale for investigating specific cell types within the hippocampus.

      We will add more information to better explain the rationale of our experiments and/or manipulations.

      (2) The analysis of photometry data could be improved by distinguishing between early and late responses, as well as enhancing the overall presentation of the data.

      We will provide new photometry analysis to differentiate between early and late responses during stimuli presentations.

      (3) The manuscript would benefit from revisions to improve clarity and readability.

      We will improve the clarity and readability of our manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Pinho et al. developed a new auditory-visual sensory preconditioning procedure in mice and examined the contribution of the dorsal and ventral hippocampus to learning in this task. Using photometry they observed activation of the dorsal and ventral hippocampus during sensory preconditioning and conditioning. Finally, the authors combined their sensory preconditioning task with DREADDs to examine the effect of inhibiting specific cell populations (CaMKII and PV) in the DH on the formation and retrieval/expression of mediated learning.

      Strengths:

      The authors provide one of the first demonstrations of auditory-visual sensory preconditioning in male mice. Research on the neurobiology of sensory preconditioning has primarily used rats as subjects. The development of a robust protocol in mice will be beneficial to the field, allowing researchers to take advantage of the many transgenic mouse lines. Indeed, in this study, the authors take advantage of a PV-Cre mouse line to examine the role of hippocampal PV cells in sensory preconditioning.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors report that sensory preconditioning was observed in both male and female mice. However, their data only supports sensory preconditioning in male mice. In female mice, both paired and unpaired presentations of the light and tone in stage 1 led to increased freezing to the tone at test. In this case, fear to the tone could be attributed to factors other than sensory preconditioning, for example, generalization of fear between the auditory and visual stimulus.

      To address the pertinent doubt raised by the reviewer, we will perform new experiments to generate a new unpaired group in female mice through the increase of the temporal interval between light and tone exposure during the preconditioning phase. We believe this new results will bring additional information to better understand the performance of female mice in sensory preconditioning.

      (2) In the photometry experiment, the authors report an increase in neural activity in the hippocampus during both phase 1 (sensory preconditioning) and phase 2 (conditioning). In the subsequent experiment, they inhibit neural activity in the DH during phase 1 (sensory preconditioning) and the probe test, but do not include inhibition during phase 2 (conditioning). It was not clear why they didn't carry forward investigating the role of the hippocampus during phase 2 conditioning. Sensory preconditioning could occur due to the integration of the tone and shock during phase two, or retrieval and chaining of the tone-light-shock memories at test. These two possibilities cannot be differentiated based on the data. Given that we do not know at which stage the mediate learning is occurring, it would have been beneficial to additionally include inhibition of the DH during phase 2.

      We will perform new experiments to generate novel data by inhibiting the CamK-positive neurons of the dorsal hippocampus during the conditioning phase.

      (3) In the final experiment, the authors report that inhibition of the dorsal hippocampus during the sensory preconditioning phase blocked mediated learning. While this may be the case, the failure to observe sensory preconditioning at test appears to be due more to an increase in baseline freezing (during the stimulus off period), rather than a decrease in freezing to the conditioned stimulus. Given the small effect, this study would benefit from an experiment validating that administration of J60 inhibited DH cells. Further, given that the authors did not observe any effect of DREADD inhibition in PV cells, it would also be important to validate successful cellular silencing in this protocol.

      By combining chemogenetic and fiber photometry approaches, we will perform a control experiments to demonstrate that our chemogenetic experiments are decreasing CAMK- or PV-dependent activity in dorsal and ventral hippocampus.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Pinho et al. investigated the role of the dorsal vs ventral hippocampus and the gender differences in mediated learning. While previous studies already established the engagement of the hippocampus in sensory preconditioning, the authors here took advantage of freely-moving fiber photometry recording and chemogenetics to observe and manipulate sub-regions of the hippocampus (dorsal vs. ventral) in a cell-specific manner. The authors first found sex differences in the preconditioning phase of a sensory preconditioning procedure, where males required more preconditioning training than females for mediating learning to manifest, and where females displayed evidence of mediated learning even when neutral stimuli were never presented together within the session.

      After validation of a sensory preconditioning procedure in mice using light and tone neutral stimuli and a mild foot shock as the unconditioned stimulus, the authors used fiber photometry to record from all neurons vs. parvalbumin_positive_only neurons in the dorsal hippocampus or ventral hippocampus of male mice during both preconditioning and conditioning phases. They found increased activity of all neurons, as well as PV+_only neurons in both sub-regions of the hippocampus during both preconditioning and conditioning phases. Finally, the authors found that chemogenetic inhibition of CaMKII+ neurons in the dorsal, but not ventral, hippocampus specifically prevented the formation of an association between the two neutral stimuli (i.e., light and tone cues), but not the direct association between the light cue and the mild foot shock. This set of data: (1) validates the mediated learning in mice using a sensory preconditioning protocol, and stresses the importance of taking sex effect into account; (2) validates the recruitment of dorsal and ventral hippocampi during preconditioning and conditioning phases; and (3) further establishes the specific role of CaMKII+ neurons in the dorsal but not ventral hippocampus in the formation of an association between two neutral stimuli, but not between a neutral-stimulus and a mild foot shock.

      Strengths:

      The authors developed a sensory preconditioning procedure in mice to investigate mediated learning using light and tone cues as neutral stimuli, and a mild foot shock as the unconditioned stimulus. They provide evidence of a sex effect in the formation of light-cue association. The authors took advantage of fiber-photometry and chemogenetics to target sub-regions of the hippocampus, in a cell-specific manner and investigate their role during different phases of a sensory conditioning procedure.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors went further than previous studies by investigating the role of sub-regions of the hippocampus in mediated learning, however, there are several weaknesses that should be noted:

      (1) This work first validates mediated learning in a sensory preconditioning procedure using light and tone cues as neutral stimuli and a mild foot shock as the unconditioned stimulus, in both males and females. They found interesting sex differences at the behavioral level, but then only focused on male mice when recording and manipulating the hippocampus. The authors do not address sex differences at the neural level.

      As discussed above, we will perform additional experiment to evaluate the presence of a reliable sensory preconditioning in female mice. In addition, although observing sex differences at the neural level can be very interesting, we think that it is out of the scope of the present work. However, we will mention this issue/limitation in the Discussion in the new version of the manuscript.

      (2) As expected in fear conditioning, the range of inter-individual differences is quite high. Mice that didn't develop a strong light-->shock association, as evidenced by a lower percentage of freezing during the Probe Test Light phase, should manifest a low percentage of freezing during the Probe Test Tone phase. It would interesting to test for a correlation between the level of freezing during mediated vs test phases.

      We will provide correlations between the behavioral responses in both probe tests.

      (3) The use of a synapsin promoter to transfect neurons in a non-specific manner does not bring much information. The authors applied a more specific approach to target PV+ neurons only, and it would have been more informative to keep with this cell-specific approach, for example by looking also at somatostatin+ inter-neurons.

      We will better justify the use of specific promoters and the targeting of PV-positive neurons. We will also add discussion on potential interesting future experiments such as the targeting of other GABAergic subtypes.

      (4) The authors observed event-related Ca2+ transients on hippocampal pan-neurons and PV+ inter-neurons using fiber photometry. They then used chemogenetics to inhibit CaMKII+ hippocampal neurons, which does not logically follow. It does not undermine the main finding of CaMKII+ neurons of the dorsal, but not ventral, hippocampus being involved in the preconditioning, but not conditioning, phase. However, observing CaMKII+ neurons (using fiber photometry) in mice running the same task would be more informative, as it would indicate when these neurons are recruited during different phases of sensory preconditioning. Applying then optogenetics to cancel the observed event-related transients (e.g., during the presentation of light and tone cues, or during the foot shock presentation) would be more appropriate.

      We will perform new experiments to analyze the activity of CAMK-positive neurons during light-tone associations during the preconditioning phase in male mice.

      (5) Probe tests always start with the "Probe Test Tone", followed by the "Probe Test Light". "Probe Test Tone" consists of an extinction session, which could affect the freezing response during "Probe Test Light" (e.g., Polack et al. (http://dx.doi.org/10.3758/s13420-013-0119-5)). Preferably, adding a group of mice with a Probe Test Light with no Probe Test Tone could help clarify this potential issue. The authors should at least discuss the possibility that the tone extinction session prior to the "Probe Test Light" could have affected the freezing response to the light cue.

      We will add discussion on this issue raised by the reviewer.

      Reviewer #4 (Public review):

      Summary

      Pinho et al use in vivo calcium imaging and chemogenetic approaches to examine the involvement of hippocampal sub-regions across the different stages of a sensory preconditioning task in mice. They find clear evidence for sensory preconditioning in male but not female mice. They also find that, in the male mice, CaMKII-positive neurons in the dorsal hippocampus: (1) encode the audio-visual association that forms in stage 1 of the task, and (2) retrieve/express sensory preconditioned fear to the auditory stimulus at test. These findings are supported by evidence that ranges from incomplete to convincing. They will be valuable to researchers in the field of learning and memory.

      Abstract

      Please note that sensory preconditioning doesn't require the stage 1 stimuli to be presented repeatedly or simultaneously.

      We will correct this wrong sentence in the abstract.

      "Finally, we combined our sensory preconditioning task with chemogenetic approaches to assess the role of these two hippocampal subregions in mediated learning."

      This implies some form of inhibition of hippocampal neurons in stage 2 of the protocol, as this is the only stage of the protocol that permits one to make statements about mediated learning. However, it is clear from what follows that the authors interrogate the involvement of hippocampal sub-regions in stages 1 and 3 of the protocol - not stage 2. As such, most statements about mediated learning throughout the paper are potentially misleading (see below for a further elaboration of this point). If the authors persist in using the term mediated learning to describe the response to a sensory preconditioned stimulus, they should clarify what they mean by mediated learning at some point in the introduction. Alternatively, they might consider using a different phrase such as "sensory preconditioned responding".

      Through the text, we will avoid the term “mediated learning” and we will replace it with more accurate terms. In addition, we will interrogate the role of dHPC in Stage 2 as commented above.

      Introduction

      "Low-salience" is used to describe stimuli such as tone, light, or odour that do not typically elicit responses that are of interest to experimenters. However, a tone, light, or odour can be very salient even though they don't elicit these particular responses. As such, it would be worth redescribing the "low-salience" stimuli in some other terms.

      We will substitute “low-salience” for “innocuous”.

      "These higher-order conditioning processes, also known as mediated learning, can be captured in laboratory settings through sensory preconditioning procedures2,6-11."

      Higher-order conditioning and mediated learning are not interchangeable terms: e.g., some forms of second-order conditioning are not due to mediated learning. More generally, the use of mediated learning is not necessary for the story that the authors develop in the paper and could be replaced for accuracy and clarity. E.g., "These higher-order conditioning processes can be studied in the laboratory using sensory preconditioning procedures2,6-11."

      Through the text, we will avoid the term “mediated learning” and we will replace it with more accurate terms.

      In reference to Experiment 2, it is stated that: "However, when light and tone were separated on time (Unpaired group), male mice were not able to exhibit mediated learning response (Figure 2B) whereas their response to the light (direct learning) was not affected (Figure 2D). On the other hand, female mice still present a lower but significant mediated learning response (Figure 2C) and normal direct learning (Figure 2E). Finally, in the No-Shock group, both male (Figure 2B and 2D) and female mice (Figure 2C and 2E) did not present either mediated or direct learning, which also confirmed that the exposure to the tone or light during Probe Tests do not elicit any behavioral change by themselves as the presence of the electric footshock is required to obtain a reliable mediated and direct learning responses."<br /> The absence of a difference between the paired and unpaired female mice should not be described as "significant mediated learning" in the latter. It should be taken to indicate that performance in the females is due to generalization between the tone and light. That is, there is no sensory preconditioning in the female mice. The description of performance in the No-shock group really shouldn't be in terms of mediated or direct learning: that is, this group is another control for assessing the presence of sensory preconditioning in the group of interest. As a control, there is no potential for them to exhibit sensory preconditioning, so their performance should not be described in a way that suggests this potential.

      We will re-write the text to clarify the right comments raised by the Reviewer.

      Methods - Behavior

      I appreciate the reasons for testing the animals in a new context. This does, however, raise other issues that complicate the interpretation of any hippocampal engagement: e.g., exposure to a novel context may engage the hippocampus for exploration/encoding of its features - hence, it is engaged for retrieving/expressing sensory preconditioned fear to the tone. This should be noted somewhere in the paper given that one of its aims is to shed light on the broader functioning of the hippocampus in associative processes.

      We will further discuss this aspect on the manuscript.

      This general issue - that the conditions of testing were such as to force engagement of the hippocampus - is amplified by two further features of testing with the tone. The first is the presence of background noise in the training context and its absence in the test context. The second is the fact that the tone was presented for 30 s in stage 1 and then continuously for 180s at test. Both changes could have contributed to the engagement of the hippocampus as they introduce the potential for discrimination between the tone that was trained and tested.

      We will consider the aspect raised by the reviewer on the manuscript.

      Results - Behavior

      The suggestion of sex differences based on differences in the parameters needed to generate sensory preconditioning is interesting. Perhaps it could be supported through some set of formal analyses. That is, the data in supplementary materials may well show that the parameters needed to generate sensory preconditioning in males and females are not the same. However, there needs to be some form of statistical comparison to support this point. As part of this comparison, it would be neat if the authors included body weight as a covariate to determine whether any interactions with sex are moderated by body weight.

      We will add statistical comparisons between male and female mice.

      What is the value of the data shown in Figure 1 given that there are no controls for unpaired presentations of the sound and light? In the absence of these controls, the experiment cannot have shown that "Female and male mice show mediated learning using an auditory-visual sensory preconditioning task" as implied by its title. Minimally, this experiment should be relabelled.

      We will relabel Figure 1.

      "Altogether, this data confirmed that we successfully set up an LTSPC protocol in mice and that this behavioral paradigm can be used to further study the brain circuits involved in higher-order conditioning."

      Please insert the qualifier that LTSPC was successfully established in male mice. There is no evidence of LTSPC in female mice.

      We will generate new experiments to try to demonstrate that SPC can be also observed in female mice.

      Results - Brain

      "Notably, the inhibition of CaMKII-positive neurons in the dHPC (i.e. J60 administration in DREADD-Gi mice) during preconditioning (Figure 4B), but not before the Probe Test 1 (Figure 4B), fully blocked mediated, but not direct learning (Figure 4D)."

      The right panel of Figure 4B indicates no difference between the controls and Group DPC in the percent change in freezing from OFF to ON periods of the tone. How does this fit with the claim that CaMKII-positive neurons in the dorsal hippocampus regulate associative formation during the session of tone-light exposures in stage 1 of sensory preconditioning?

      We will rephrase and add more Discussion regarding this section of the results to stick to what the graphs are showing. We will clarify that the group where dHPC activity is inhibited during preconditioning is the only one where the % of change is not significantly different from 0 (compared to the control or the group where the dHPC activity was modulated during the test).

      Discussion

      "When low salience stimuli were presented separated on time or when the electric footshock was absent, mediated and direct learning were abolished in male mice. In female mice, although light and tone were presented separately during the preconditioning phase, mediated learning was reduced but still present, which implies that female mice are still able to associate the two low-salience stimuli."

      This doesn't quite follow from the results. The failure of the female unpaired mice to withhold their freezing to the tone should not be taken to indicate the formation of a light-tone association across the very long interval that was interpolated between these stimulus presentations. It could and should be taken to indicate that, in female mice, freezing conditioned to the light simply generalized to the tone (i.e., these mice could not discriminate well between the tone and light).

      We will rewrite this part depending on the results observed in female mice.

      "Indeed, our data suggests that when hippocampal activity is modulated by the specific manipulation of hippocampal subregions, this brain region is not involved during retrieval."

      Does this relate to the results that are shown in the right panel of Figure 4B, where there is no significant difference between the different groups? If so, how does it fit with the results shown in the left panel of this figure, where differences between the groups are observed?

      We will re-write it to clearly describe our results and we will also revise all the statistical analysis.

      "In line with this, the inhibition of CaMKII-positive neurons from the dorsal hippocampus, which has been shown to project to the restrosplenial cortex56, blocked the formation of mediated learning."

      Is this a reference to the findings shown in Figure 4B and, if so, which of the panels exactly? That is, one panel appears to support the claim made here while the other doesn't. In general, what should the reader make of data showing the percent change in freezing from stimulus OFF to stimulus ON periods?

      We will rewrite the text to clearly describe our results, and we will also revise all the statistical analysis. In addition, we will better explain the data showing the % of change.

    1. so, normally 315 of Reunification Treaty prevents acts commited on East German soil prior to reunification from being punished, if they were not punishable under East German Law (kinda like our warunek podwójnej karalaności)

      BUT, here: - immunity does not apply where there was already West German Law (west german law applied to crimes on foreign soil if): 1. the acts are commited against German 2. the person that committed them becomes a resident of WG or comes to WG

      prof. Samson argues that EG became part of WG, so their law is applicable 7(2) (similarly, the people who were shot, were Germans, so 7(1))

      BUT it's a stretch, because EGs were considered foreigners by WG

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In "Founder effects arising from gathering dynamics systematically bias emerging pathogen surveillance" Bradford and Hang present an extension to the SIR model to account for the role of larger than pairwise interactions in infectious disease dynamics. They explore the impact of accounting for group interactions on the progression of infection through the various sub-populations that make up the population as a whole. Further, they explore the extent to which interaction heterogeneity can bias epidemiological inference from surveillance data in the form of IFR and variant growth rate dynamics. This work advances the theoretical formulation of the SIR model and may allow for more realistic modeling of infectious disease outbreaks in the future.

      Strengths:

      (1) This work addresses an important limitation of standard SIR models. While this limitation has been addressed previously in the form of network-based models, those are, as the authors argue, difficult to parameterize to real-world scenarios. Further, this work highlights critical biases that may appear in real-world epidemiological surveillance data. Particularly, over-estimation of variant growth rates shortly after emergence has led to a number of "false alarms" about new variants over the past five years (although also to some true alarms).

      (2) While the results presented here generally confirm my intuitions on this topic, I think it is really useful for the field to have it presented in such a clear manner with a corresponding mathematical framework. This will be a helpful piece of work to point to to temper concerns about rapid increases in the frequency of rare variants.

      (3) The authors provide a succinct derivation of their model that helps the reader understand how they arrived at their formulation starting from the standard SIR model.

      (4) The visualizations throughout are generally easy to interpret and communicate the key points of the authors' work.

      (5) I thank the authors for providing detailed code to reproduce manuscript figures in the associated GitHub repo.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors argue that network-based SIR models are difficult to parameterize (line 66), however, the model presented here also has a key parameter, mainly P_n, or the distribution of risk groups in the population. I think it is important to explore the extent to which this parameter can be inferred from real-world data to assess whether this model is, in practice, any easier to parameterize.

      (2) The authors explore only up to four different risk groups, accounting for only four-wise interactions. But, clearly, in real-world settings, there can be much larger gatherings that promote transmission. What was the justification for setting such a low limit on the maximum group size? I presume it's due to computational efficiency, which is understandable, but it should be discussed as a limitation.

      (3) Another key limitation that isn't addressed by the authors is that there may be population structure beyond just risk heterogeneity. For example, there may be two separate (or, weakly connected) high-risk sub-groups. This will introduce temporal correlation in interactions that are not (and can not easily be) captured in this model. My instinct is that this would dampen the difference between risk groups shown in Figure 2A. While I appreciate the authors's desire to keep their model relatively simple, I think this limitation should be explicitly discussed as it is, in my opinion, relatively significant.

    2. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work considers the biases introduced into pathogen surveillance due to congregation effects, and also models homophily and variants/clades. The results are primarily quantitative assessments of this bias but some qualitative insights are gained e.g. that initial variant transmission tends to be biased upwards due to this effect, which is closely related to classical founder effects.

      Strengths:

      The model considered involves a simplification of the process of congregation using multinomial sampling that allows for a simpler and more easily interpretable analysis.

      Weaknesses:

      This simplification removes some realism, for example, detailed temporal transmission dynamics of congregations.

      We appreciate Reviewer #1's comments. We hope our framework, like the classic SIR model, can be adapted in the future to build more complex and realistic models.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In "Founder effects arising from gathering dynamics systematically bias emerging pathogen surveillance" Bradford and Hang present an extension to the SIR model to account for the role of larger than pairwise interactions in infectious disease dynamics. They explore the impact of accounting for group interactions on the progression of infection through the various sub-populations that make up the population as a whole. Further, they explore the extent to which interaction heterogeneity can bias epidemiological inference from surveillance data in the form of IFR and variant growth rate dynamics. This work advances the theoretical formulation of the SIR model and may allow for more realistic modeling of infectious disease outbreaks in the future.

      Strengths:

      (1) This work addresses an important limitation of standard SIR models. While this limitation has been addressed previously in the form of network-based models, those are, as the authors argue, difficult to parameterize to real-world scenarios. Further, this work highlights critical biases that may appear in real-world epidemiological surveillance data. Particularly, over-estimation of variant growth rates shortly after emergence has led to a number of "false alarms" about new variants over the past five years (although also to some true alarms).

      (2) While the results presented here generally confirm my intuitions on this topic, I think it is really useful for the field to have it presented in such a clear manner with a corresponding mathematical framework. This will be a helpful piece of work to point to to temper concerns about rapid increases in the frequency of rare variants.

      (3) The authors provide a succinct derivation of their model that helps the reader understand how they arrived at their formulation starting from the standard SIR model.

      (4) The visualizations throughout are generally easy to interpret and communicate the key points of the authors' work.

      (5) I thank the authors for providing detailed code to reproduce manuscript figures in the associated GitHub repo.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors argue that network-based SIR models are difficult to parameterize (line 66), however, the model presented here also has a key parameter, mainly P_n, or the distribution of risk groups in the population. I think it is important to explore the extent to which this parameter can be inferred from real-world data to assess whether this model is, in practice, any easier to parameterize.

      (2) The authors explore only up to four different risk groups, accounting for only four-wise interactions. But, clearly, in real-world settings, there can be much larger gatherings that promote transmission. What was the justification for setting such a low limit on the maximum group size? I presume it's due to computational efficiency, which is understandable, but it should be discussed as a limitation.

      (3) Another key limitation that isn't addressed by the authors is that there may be population structure beyond just risk heterogeneity. For example, there may be two separate (or, weakly connected) high-risk sub-groups. This will introduce temporal correlation in interactions that are not (and can not easily be) captured in this model. My instinct is that this would dampen the difference between risk groups shown in Figure 2A. While I appreciate the authors's desire to keep their model relatively simple, I think this limitation should be explicitly discussed as it is, in my opinion, relatively significant.

      We appreciate Reviewer 2's thoughtful comments and wish to address some of the weaknesses:

      We agree that inferring P_n from real data will be challenging, but think this is an important direction for future research. Further, we’d like to reframe our claim that our approach is "easier to parameterize" than network models. Rather, P_n has fewer degrees of freedom than analogous network models, just as many different networks can share the same degree distribution. Fewer degrees of freedom mean that we expect our model to suffer from fewer identifiability issues when fitting to data, though non-identifiability is often inescapable in models of this nature (e.g., \beta and \gamma in the SIR model are not uniquely identifiable during exponential growth). Whether this is more or less accurate is another question. Classic bias-variance tradeoffs argue that a model with a moderate complexity trained on one data set can better fit future data than overly simple or overly complex models.

      We chose four risk groups for purposes of illustration, but this can be increased arbitrarily. It should be noted that the simulation bottleneck when increasing the numbers of risk groups is numerical due the stiffness of the ODEs. This arises because the nonlinearity of infection terms scales with the number of risk groups (e.g., ~ \beta * S * I^3 for 4 risk groups). As such, a careful choice of numerical solvers may be required when integrating the ODEs. Meanwhile, this is not an issue for stochastic, individual based implementation (e.g., Gillespie). As for how well this captures super-spreading, we believe choosing smaller risk groups does not hinder modeling disease spread at large gatherings. Consider a statistical interpretation, where individuals at a large gathering engage in a series of smaller interactions over time (e.g., 2/3/4/etc person conversations). The key determinants of the resulting gathering size distribution at any one large gathering are the number of individuals within some shared proximity over time and the infectiousness/dispersal of the pathogen. Of course, whether this interpretation is a sufficient approximation for classic super-spreading events (e.g., funerals during 2014-2015 West Africa Ebola outbreak) is a matter of debate. Our framework is best interpreted at a population level where the effects of any single gathering are washed out by the overall gathering distribution, P_n. As the prior weakness highlighted, establishing P_n is challenging, but we believe empirically measuring proxies of it may provide future insight in how behavior impacts disease spread. For example, prior work has combined contact tracing and co-location data from connection to WiFi networks to estimate the distribution of contacts per individual, and its degree of overdispersion (Petros et al. Med 2022).

      We chose to introduce our framework in a simple SIR context familiar to many readers. This decision does not in any way limit applying it to settings with more population structure. Rather, we believe our framework is easily adaptable and that our presentation (hopefully) makes it clear how to do this. For example, two weakly connected groups could be easily achieved by (for each gathering) first sampling the preferred group and then sampling from the population in a biased manner. The biased sampling could even be a function of gathering sizes, time, etc. The resulting infection terms are still (sums of) multinomials. More generally, the sampling probabilities for an individual of some type need not be its frequency (e.g., S/N, I/N). Indeed, we believe generating models with complex social interactions is both simplified and made more robust by focusing on modeling the generative process of attending gatherings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper describes technically-impressive measurements of calcium signals near synaptic ribbons in goldfish bipolar cells. The data presented provides high spatial and temporal resolution information about calcium concentrations along the ribbon at various distances from the site of entry at the plasma membrane. This is important information. Important gaps in the data presented mean that the evidence for the main conclusions is currently inadequate.

      Strengths

      (1) The technical aspects of the measurements are impressive. The authors use calcium indicators bound to the ribbon and high-speed line scans to resolve changes with a spatial resolution of ~250 nm and a temporal resolution of less than 10 ms. These spatial and temporal scales are much closer to those relevant for vesicle release than previous measurements.

      (2) The use of calcium indicators with very different affinities and different intracellular calcium buffers helps provide confirmation of key results.

      Weaknesses

      (1) Multiple key points of the paper lack statistical tests or summary data from populations of cells. For example, the text states that the proximal and distal calcium kinetics in Figure 2A differ. This is not clear from the inset to Figure 2A - where the traces look like scaled versions of each other. Values for time to half-maximal peak fluorescence are given for one example cell but no statistics or summary are provided. Figure 8 shows examples from one cell with no summary data. This issue comes up in other places as well.

      (2) Figure 5 is confusing. The figure caption describes red, green, and blue traces, but the figure itself has only two traces in each panel and none are red, green, or blue. It's not possible currently to evaluate this figure.

      (3) The rise time measurements in Figure 2 are very different for low and high-affinity indicators, but no explanation is given for this difference. Similarly, the measurements of peak calcium concentration in Figure 4 are very different from the two indicators. That might suggest that the high-affinity indicator is strongly saturated, which raises concerns about whether that is impacting the kinetic measurements.

    2. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper describes technically-impressive measurements of calcium signals near synaptic ribbons in goldfish bipolar cells. The data presented provides high spatial and temporal resolution information about calcium concentrations along the ribbon at various distances from the site of entry at the plasma membrane. This is important information. Important gaps in the data presented mean that the evidence for the main conclusions is currently inadequate.

      Strengths

      (1) The technical aspects of the measurements are impressive. The authors use calcium indicators bound to the ribbon and high-speed line scans to resolve changes with a spatial resolution of ~250 nm and a temporal resolution of less than 10 ms. These spatial and temporal scales are much closer to those relevant for vesicle release than previous measurements.

      (2) The use of calcium indicators with very different affinities and different intracellular calcium buffers helps provide confirmation of key results.

      Thank you very much for this positive evaluation of our work.

      Weaknesses

      (1) Multiple key points of the paper lack statistical tests or summary data from populations of cells. For example, the text states that the proximal and distal calcium kinetics in Figure 2A differ. This is not clear from the inset to Figure 2A - where the traces look like scaled versions of each other. Values for time to half-maximal peak fluorescence are given for one example cell but no statistics or summary are provided. Figure 8 shows examples from one cell with no summary data. This issue comes up in other places as well.

      Thank you for this feedback. We will address this in our revised manuscript.

      (2) Figure 5 is confusing. The figure caption describes red, green, and blue traces, but the figure itself has only two traces in each panel and none are red, green, or blue. It's not possible currently to evaluate this figure.

      Thank you for pointing out this oversight. The figure indeed only shows the proximal and distal calcium signals, but not the cytoplasmic ones. The figure will be corrected in our revised manuscript.

      (3) The rise time measurements in Figure 2 are very different for low and high-affinity indicators, but no explanation is given for this difference. Similarly, the measurements of peak calcium concentration in Figure 4 are very different from the two indicators. That might suggest that the high-affinity indicator is strongly saturated, which raises concerns about whether that is impacting the kinetic measurements.

      As we had mentioned in the text, we do believe that the high-affinity version is partially saturated. This will be a problem for strong depolarizations and signals near the membrane. The higher affinity indicators are more useful for reporting calcium levels on the ribbon after the depolarization when the signal from the low affinity indicators is small. We will address this in the discussion of the revision.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study introduces new tools for measuring intracellular Ca2+ concentration gradients around retinal rod bipolar cell (rbc) synaptic ribbons. This is done by comparing the Ca2+ profiles measured with mobile Ca2+ indicator dyes versus ribbon-tethered (immobile) Ca2+ indicator dyes. The Ca2+ imaging results provide a straightforward demonstration of Ca2+ gradients around the ribbon and validate their experimental strategy. This experimental work is complemented by a coherent, open-source, computational model that successfully describes changes in Ca2+ domains as a function of Ca2+ buffering. In addition, the authors try to demonstrate that there is heterogeneity among synaptic ribbons within an individual rbc terminal.

      Strengths:

      The study introduces a new set of tools for estimating Ca2+ concentration gradients at ribbon AZs, and the experimental results are accompanied by an open-source, computational model that nicely describes Ca2+ buffering at the rbc synaptic ribbon. In addition, the dissociated retinal preparation remains a valuable approach for studying ribbon synapses. Lastly, excellent EM.

      Thank you very much for this appreciation.

      Weaknesses:

      Heterogeneity in the spatiotemporal dynamics of Ca2+ influx was not convincingly related to ribbon size, nor was the functional relevance of Ca2+ dynamics to rod bipolars demonstrated (e.g., exocytosis to different postsynaptic targets). In addition, the study would benefit from the inclusion of the Ca2+ currents that were recorded in parallel with the Ca2+ imaging.

      Thank you for this critique. We agree that the relationship between size and Ca2+ signal is not established by our recordings. By analogy to the hair cell literature, we believe that it is a reasonable hypothesis, but more studies will be necessary to definitively determine whether the signal relates to the ribbon size or synaptic signaling. This will be addressed in future experiments.

      We will include the Ca<sup>2+</sup> currents in the revision.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors have developed a new Ca indicator conjugated to the peptide, which likely recognizes synaptic ribbons, and have measured microdomain Ca near synaptic ribbons at retinal bipolar cells. This interesting approach allows one to measure Ca close to transmitter release sites, which may be relevant for synaptic vesicle fusion and replenishment. Though microdomain Ca at the active zone of ribbon synapses has been measured by Hudspeth and Moser, the new study uses the peptide recognizing synaptic ribbons, potentially measuring the Ca concentration relatively proximal to the release sites.

      Strengths:

      The study is in principle technically well done, and the peptide approach is technically interesting, which allows one to image Ca near the particular protein complexes. The approach is potentially applicable to other types of imaging.

      Thank you very much for this appreciation.

      Weaknesses:

      Peptides may not be entirely specific, and the genetic approach tagging particular active zone proteins with fluorescent Ca indicator proteins may well be more specific. I also feel that "Nano-physiology" is overselling, because the measured Ca is most likely the local average surrounding synaptic ribbons. With this approach, nobody knows about the real release site Ca or the Ca relevant for synaptic vesicle replenishment. It is rather "microdomain physiology" which measures the local Ca near synaptic ribbons, relatively large structures responsible for fusion, replenishment, and recycling of synaptic vesicles.

      The peptide approach has been used fairly extensively in the ribbon synapse field and the evidence that it efficiently labels the ribbon is well established, however, we do acknowledge that the peptide is in equilibrium with a cytoplasmic pool. Thus, some of the signal arises from this cytoplasmic pool. The alternative of a genetically encoded Ca-indicator concatenated to a ribbon protein would not have this problem, but would be more limited in flexibility in changing calcium indicators. We believe both approaches have their merits, each with separate advantages and disadvantages.

      As for the nano vs. micro argument, we certainly do not want to suggest that we are measuring the same nano-domains, in the 10s of nanometers, that drive neurotransmitter release, but we do believe we are in the sub-micrometer--100s of nm—range. We chose the term based on the usage by other authors to describe similar measurements (Neef et al., 2018; https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-017-02612-y), but we see the reviewer’s point. To avoid confusion, we will change the title in the revision.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This retrospective study provides new data regarding the prevalence of pain in women with PCOS and its relationship with health outcomes. Using data from electronic health records (EHR), the authors found a significantly higher prevalence of pain among women with PCOS compared to those without the condition: 19.21% of women with PCOS versus 15.8% in non-PCOS women. The highest prevalence of pain was conducted among Black or African American (32.11%) and White (30.75%) populations. Besides, women with PCOS and pain have at least a 2-fold increased prevalence of obesity (34.68%) at baseline compared to women with PCOS in general (16.11%). Also, women with PCOS had the highest risk for infertility and T2D, but women with PCOS and pain had higher risks for ovarian cysts and liver disease. Regarding these results, the authors suggested the critical need to address pain in the diagnosis and management of PCOS due to its significant impact on patient health outcomes.

      Strengths:

      (1) The problem of pain assessment in PCOS patients is well described and the authors provided a clear rationale selection of the retrospective design to investigate this problem.

      (2) A large number of analyzed patient records (76,859,666 women) and their uniformity increases the power of the study. Using the Propensity Score Matching makes it possible to reduce the heterogeneity of the compared cohorts and the influence of comorbid conditions.

      (3) Analysis in different ethnic cohorts provides actual and necessary data regarding the prevalence of pain and its relationship with different health conditions that will be helpful for clinicians to make a diagnosis and manage PCOS in women of different ethnicities.

      (4) Assessment of the risk of different health conditions including PCOS-associated pathology as other common groups of diseases in PCOS women with or without pain allows to differentiate the risk of comorbid conditions depending on the presence of one symptom (pelvic or abdominal pain, dysmenorrhea).

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Although the paper has strengths in methodology and data analysis, it also has some weaknesses. The lack of a hypothesis doesn't allow us to evaluate the aim and significance of this study.

      (2) The exclusion criteria don't include conditions, that can lead to symptoms similar to PCOS: thyroid diseases, hyperprolactinemia, and congenital adrenal hyperplasia. Thyroid status is not being taken into account in the criteria for matching. All these conditions could occur as on prevalence results as on risk assessment.

      (3) The significant weakness of the study is the absence of a Latin American cohort. Probably the White cohort includes Latin Americans or others, but the results of the study cannot be extrapolated to particular White ethnicities.

      (4) The authors didn't provide sufficient rationale for future health outcomes and this list didn't include diseases of the digestive system or disorders of thyroid glands, which can also cause abdominal pain.

    2. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This retrospective study provides new data regarding the prevalence of pain in women with PCOS and its relationship with health outcomes. Using data from electronic health records (EHR), the authors found a significantly higher prevalence of pain among women with PCOS compared to those without the condition: 19.21% of women with PCOS versus 15.8% in non-PCOS women. The highest prevalence of pain was conducted among Black or African American (32.11%) and White (30.75%) populations. Besides, women with PCOS and pain have at least a 2-fold increased prevalence of obesity (34.68%) at baseline compared to women with PCOS in general (16.11%). Also, women with PCOS had the highest risk for infertility and T2D, but women with PCOS and pain had higher risks for ovarian cysts and liver disease. Regarding these results, the authors suggested the critical need to address pain in the diagnosis and management of PCOS due to its significant impact on patient health outcomes.

      Strengths:

      (1) The problem of pain assessment in PCOS patients is well described and the authors provided a clear rationale selection of the retrospective design to investigate this problem.(2) A large number of analyzed patient records (76,859,666 women) and their uniformity increases the power of the study. Using the Propensity Score Matching makes it possible to reduce the heterogeneity of the compared cohorts and the influence of comorbid conditions.(3) Analysis in different ethnic cohorts provides actual and necessary data regarding the prevalence of pain and its relationship with different health conditions that will be helpful for clinicians to make a diagnosis and manage PCOS in women of different ethnicities. (4) Assessment of the risk of different health conditions including PCOS-associated pathology as other common groups of diseases in PCOS women with or without pain allows to differentiate the risk of comorbid conditions depending on the presence of one symptom (pelvic or abdominal pain, dysmenorrhea).

      We appreciate the positive feedback on this manuscript. Pain assessment in women with PCOS is of paramount interest and because of a gap in this research area, we are trying to address it.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Although the paper has strengths in methodology and data analysis, it also has some weaknesses.

      The lack of a hypothesis doesn't allow us to evaluate the aim and significance of this study.

      We would like to thank the Reviewer for their valuable feedback regarding the hypothesis of this study. We understand that the hypothesis may not have been written clearly under the objectives and we will correct this in the formal revision.

      The primary hypothesis of this study is that women with PCOS experience a higher prevalence to pain (including dysmenorrhea, abdominal pain and pelvic pain) compared to women without PCOS, and this prevalence varies by racial groups. Our hypothesis aims to explore the relationship between PCOS and pain, the associated health risks, and the potential racial disparities in pain prevalence and long-term health outcomes. Additionally, we seek to assess the effect of treatment on reducing pain symptoms in women with PCOS. This study not only examines the immediate burden of pain but also investigates its long-term consequences, including risks of infertility, obesity, and type 2 diabetes.

      To enhance clarity for readers, we will explicitly state this hypothesis in the revised manuscript and ensure that its connection to the study’s objectives is clearly articulated. We appreciate the Reviewer’s insights and will incorporate these refinements to strengthen the manuscript.

      (2) The exclusion criteria don't include conditions, that can lead to symptoms similar to PCOS: thyroid diseases, hyperprolactinemia, and congenital adrenal hyperplasia. Thyroid status is not being taken into account in the criteria for matching. All these conditions could occur as on prevalence results as on risk assessment.

      We would like to thank the Reviewer for highlighting the need to include these additional conditions that mimic PCOS. After excluding hypothyroidism, hyperprolactinemia, and adrenal hyperplasia from the PCOS and PCOS and pain cohorts, we observed that 7,690 patients (1.65%) with PCOS and 1,854 patients (1.36%) with PCOS were removed. Based on this observation, we plan to add these three conditions to our exclusion criteria and rerun our analysis for disease prevalence and relative risk for our resubmission.

      We will update the manuscript accordingly to reflect these exclusions and ensure clarity in our methodology. Additionally, we will discuss the rationale for excluding these conditions to improve transparency and provide a more precise interpretation of our findings.

      (3) The significant weakness of the study is the absence of a Latin American cohort. Probably the White cohort includes Latin Americans or others, but the results of the study cannot be extrapolated to particular White ethnicities.

      We appreciate the Reviewer’s suggestion to include Latin American cohorts in studies. In this paper we only used race as a variable and did not incorporate ethnicity. However, for our resubmission we plan to include self-reported ethnicity in our analysis which will capture the Latin American cohort stratified by self-reported race groups. This addition will provide a more comprehensive understanding of racial and ethnic differences in our study population, and we will update the manuscript accordingly to reflect this expansion.

      (4) The authors didn't provide sufficient rationale for future health outcomes and this list didn't include diseases of the digestive system or disorders of thyroid glands, which can also cause abdominal pain.

      We appreciate the Reviewer comment and understand their concern. Our current results highlight the prevalence of disorders of the digestive system in Figure 2 and in the results section. To further strengthen our analysis, we plan to include disorders of the digestive system in our relative risk (RR) assessment. However, we will not be able to include the same analysis for thyroid dysfunctions as they will be considered as an exclusion criterion. These updates will be incorporated into the revised manuscript to ensure clarity and completeness.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study offers a thorough analysis of the prevalence of pain in women with polycystic ovary syndrome (PCOS) and its associations with health outcomes across various racial groups. Furthermore, the research investigates the prevalence of PCOS and pain among different racial demographics, as well as the increased risk of developing various conditions in comparison to individuals who have PCOS alone.

      Strengths:

      The study emphasizes pain as a significant comorbidity of PCOS, an area that is critically underexplored in existing literature. The findings regarding the increased prevalence of some of the diseases in the PCOS + pain group provide valuable direction for future research and clinical care. I believe physicians should incorporate pain score assessments into their clinical practice to improve patient's quality of life and raise awareness about pain management. If future research focuses on the mechanisms of pain, it would provide a better understanding of pain and allow for a focus on the underlying causes rather than just symptomatic management. The study also highlights the association between PCOS+pain and various comorbidities, such as obesity, hypertension, and type 2 diabetes, as well as conditions like infertility and ovarian cysts, offering a holistic view of the burden of PCOS.

      We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer’s insightful comments. We hope that our findings will encourage further research on the occurrence of pain in women with PCOS and that others will replicate our results to strengthen the evidence in this area. As noted in our introduction, there are currently no standardized abdominal pain score assessments specifically for women with PCOS. We hope that the findings from this study will contribute to efforts toward developing a standardized pain assessment for the PCOS community. In the meantime, further research across more diverse populations will be essential to build a more comprehensive understanding of this issue.

      Weaknesses:

      Due to the nature of the retrospective study, some data may not be readily available in the system. Instead of simply categorizing participants based on whether they experience pain, it would be more useful to employ a pain scale or questionnaire to better understand the severity and type of patients' pain. This approach would allow for a more thorough analysis of pain improvement following treatment with the three widely used medications for PCOS. Additionally, it would be beneficial for the authors to specify subtypes of the disease rather than generalizing conditions, such as mentioning specific digestive system disorders or mental health disorders. The lack of detailed analysis of specific disorders limits the depth of the findings. This may cause authors to make incorrect conclusions.

      We appreciate the Reviewer for highlighting the importance of categorizing pain levels experienced by women with PCOS. However, there is currently no standardized pain assessment for abdominal pain, and therefore more research is required before such a classification can be made. Additionally, the electronic health record data we leveraged via the TriNextX platform does not include any pain scale data from unstructured notes. Despite these limitations, this study is an important step toward recognizing abdominal and pelvic pain in women with PCOS. Our findings indicate that women with PCOS report abdominal pain independent of digestive conditions such as irritable bowel syndrome— a condition often associated with pain in this population.

      We would like to thank the Reviewer for their thoughtful comment with respect to subtyping the future health outcomes. To address this, we plan to include the most common diseases associated with PCOS for each general disease group as a supplemental figure in the revised manuscript.

    1. 冷战北美防空系统

      从你提供的文章 "The most important computer you’ve never heard of: How SAGE jumpstarted today’s technology and built IBM into a powerhouse" 中,我提取了以下关键点:

      什么是 SAGE?

      • SAGE (Semi-Automatic Ground Environment): 一个于 1958 年实施的,用于在冷战期间防御北美洲免受苏联轰炸机袭击的空防系统。
      • 目的: 建立一个横跨美国和加拿大的大规模互联雷达阵列,连接到分布式计算机和雷达显示网络,以探测、识别和拦截潜在的敌机。

      历史背景和动因

      • 冷战威胁: 苏联原子弹试验和快速轰炸机的发展,使美国感到需要建立中央化的防御战略。
      • 空防薄弱: 二战后美国空防力量分散,缺乏统一协调,无法有效应对高速轰炸机威胁。
      • 技术挑战: 当时的技术水平难以满足构建有效中央空防系统的需求。

      技术特点与创新

      • Whirlwind I 计算机: SAGE 的技术基础,最初由 MIT 为海军开发的飞行模拟器,后被空军评估用于空防。
        • 实时计算机: Whirlwind I 是世界首台真正的实时计算机,能够即时响应用户操作。
        • 关键技术: 高可靠性真空管和磁芯存储器的发展使 Whirlwind I 成为可能,并提高了其速度和可靠性。
      • SAGE 系统架构:
        • 区域划分: 北美分为 23 个扇区,每个扇区设有一个方向中心。
        • 层级结构: 多个方向中心数据汇集到作战指挥中心。
        • 冗余设计: 通过冗余通信链路和“交叉互告”同步协议确保系统在部分中心被摧毁后仍能运行。
      • AN/FSQ-7 计算机: SAGE 系统的核心计算机,是有史以来建造的最大的计算机。
        • 双处理器: 采用双处理器结构,一主一备,提高可靠性。
        • 硬件规模: 使用 49,000 个真空管,68K 32 位磁芯内存,运行速度约为 75,000 指令/秒。
        • 存储: 使用磁鼓内存进行永久存储。
        • 实时系统: AN/FSQ-7 是真正的实时系统,能够快速处理雷达数据并做出反应。
      • 人机交互界面: 每个方向中心配备约 90 个控制台,操作员通过控制台监控空域、识别不明飞行器、指挥拦截任务。
        • 图形显示: 大型屏幕用于显示空情态势。
        • 直接指令传输: 拦截指令和目标数据可以直接无线电传输到战斗机,无需语音通信。

      SAGE 的运行场景 (拦截过程)

      1. 雷达探测: 雷达网络探测到不明飞行器。
      2. 信息传递: 雷达数据高速传输到 SAGE 方向中心。
      3. 目标识别: 空军人员在 SAGE 控制台扫描空域,识别不明飞行器,判断威胁等级。
      4. 拦截指令: 武器指挥员评估威胁后,武器指挥员下达拦截指令。
      5. 任务分配: 拦截指挥员将目标分配给战斗机,系统自动计算最佳拦截航线和高度。
      6. 数据上传: 关键目标数据无线电传输到战斗机计算机。
      7. 自动驾驶拦截: 战斗机飞行员启动自动驾驶,飞机根据地面控制中心数据自动调整航向进行拦截。
      8. 飞行员接管: 接近目标后,飞行员接管控制,进行武器发射。
      9. 返回基地: 完成拦截后,自动驾驶系统控制战斗机返回基地。

      SAGE 的影响与意义

      • 技术革命的跳板: SAGE 推动了许多现代科技的发展,如:
        • 实时计算: SAGE 是最早的大规模实时计算系统之一,为后续的实时系统发展奠定了基础。
        • 计算机网络: SAGE 的互联架构预示了计算机网络的雏形。
        • 人机交互: SAGE 的控制台设计是早期人机交互的尝试。
        • 大规模软件工程: SAGE 的开发是早期大规模软件工程的实践。
      • IBM 的崛起: IBM 是 SAGE 计算机 AN/FSQ-7 的主要承包商,SAGE 项目极大地提升了 IBM 的技术实力和行业地位,使其成为计算机行业的巨头。
      • 对现代科技的深远影响: 文章认为 SAGE 是“你从未听说过的最重要的计算机”,它为今天的技术奠定了基础,尽管其本身已成为“古代历史”。

      总结

      SAGE 不仅仅是一个军事项目,更是一项技术奇迹,它在冷战背景下诞生,为了应对当时的空防威胁而建立,却意外地推动了计算机技术和相关领域的飞速发展,为我们 आज के 技术世界 奠定了重要的基石。

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      Reviewer #1

      A systemic analysis of the influence of these ego-1 alleles on fertility can provide valuable information on further studies on EGO-1's functions in fertility.

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful comment. We scored the brood size of all strains carrying a missense mutation at the ego-1 locus and added an extended figure showing their brood sizes as Fig. EV1A. Although the strain carrying gk721963, which was outcrossed six times with tmC18, showed a slightly reduced brood size, other strains showed no significant change in brood size compared to wild-type animals. The original strain carrying gk721963 has 24 homozygous mutations on chromosome I, where ego-1 is located. Of these, 15 mutations are in the region covered by tmC18, and 9 alleles are not covered. These background mutations may not be unremoved and affect fertility in concert with the ego-1 mutation. However, we believe that identifying the cause of this slight phenotype is very difficult and not essential to the overall analysis, so we have only presented the scored data for future studies on EGO-1's functions.

      The genotype of JMC231 is hrde-1(tor125[GFP::3xFLAG::hrde-1]) III. In line 245 and 551, HRDE-1::GFP is typed. typo?

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have corrected these for consistency.

      1. In Figure 4C, the fluorescence intensity in ego-1(S1198L) appears to be more than twice as high as the wild type animals, yet the mean intensity shows only mildly upregulated in Figure 4D. Is the images representative?

      Thank you for your comment. We agree that the fluorescence intensity in the original wild-type image may not have been representative. To address this concern, we have replaced the wild-type image in Fig. 3C (4C in the previous version) with an image that is more reflective of the average fluorescence intensity observed across the biological replicates.

      1. A brief introduction of tmC18 in the legend of Figure 6 would be friendly to readers.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have added statements explaining tmC18 to the legend of Fig. 5 (Fig. 6 in the previous version) for clarity and to make the experiments more understandable.

      1. In the discussion section, a detailed summary of three recent published papers about the "phenotypic hangover" phenotype would help to understand how EGO-1 contribute to feeding RNAi. (Dodson & Kennedy, 2019; Lev et al., 2019; Ouyang et al., 2019).

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have incorporated a detailed summary of the "phenotypic hangover" phenotype in the discussion section.

      1. Has the authors examined the cellular localization of EGO-1(S1198L) ? Construction of gfp::ego-1(S1198L) animals would provide this information.

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful comment. We have generated the GFP::EGO-1(S1198L) strain and analyzed its subcellular localization and dynamics. These analysis revealed no abnormality in the expression, localization and dynamics of GFP::EGO-1(S1198L) compared to the wild type. The data are shown in Fig. EV3, and a section of the description about this is added to the third section of the Results.

      Reviewer #2

      Key conclusions are convincing, but data and stats need to be clarified in some cases (see below).

      Line 202-211: The found that znfx-1(-) partially restored sensitivity of S1198L mutants to pos-1 RNAi but did not significantly restore pop-1 RNAi. Later, section 228-243, they provide evidence that cde-1 and hrde-1 mutations partially restore sensitivity to pos-1, but not pop-1, RNAi. The authors should discuss what might be going on here.

      Thank you for your comment. We have added a discussion on the differential restoration of sensitivity to pos-1 and pop-1 RNAi in the presence of znfx-1, cde-1, and hrde-1 mutations, proposing that this variation may result from differences in the RNA metabolism of these target genes (Knudsen-Palmer et al., 2024). Additionally, we incorporated the results from the additional RNAi experiments targeting gld-1 and mpk-1 (as outlined in our response to Reviewer 3, Comment 3), which further support our proposed model. We hope this revision presents a more thorough analysis of the interplay between these mutations and RNAi sensitivity.

      Lines 276-279: Confusing as written. The authors do not show RNAi assays for germline genes with rrf-1(null) ego-1(S1198L) double mutants. They should show these data.

      Thank you for the feedback. We have added the RNAi assay data for germline genes with rrf-1(null) ego-1(S1198L) double mutants in Figure EV3C and D.

      For the wording, I suggest "RRF-1 compensates for partial loss of EGO-1 activity in S1198L with respect to 25{degree sign}C brood size (Fig. #), but not for germline exo-RNAi (Fig. #). Therefore, the defects..."

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have revised the wording as recommended.

      Minor comments Throughout, figure legends shown indicate the statistical test used, and the p value must be indicated (e.g., *** indicates p-value of #).

      The authors should use consistent nomenclature for the ego-1 null allele. In Fig. 5 it's listed as "" and elsewhere as tm521.

      Thank you for pointing this out. We corrected this in the revised manuscript.

      Line 90: Please include references for the ego-1 null germline phenotype.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We included two references demonstrating the ego-1 null germline phenotype in the revised manuscript.

      Line 107-109: Wording is confusing. I suggest "Disruption of the E granule, of which EGO-1 is a component, has recently been shown to upregulate sRNA targeting ..."

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have revised the wording as suggested.

      Line 118-120: Wording is unclear. I suggest "In addition we found that sid-1 and rde-11 transcripts in ego-1(S1198L) were downregulated, and this effect was suppressed in hrde-1, cde-1, and znfx-1 mutants."

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have revised the wording as suggested.

      Line 121-123: The meaning is unclear. Please clarify what "detached" means in this context.

      Thank you for the comment. We have revised the sentence to remove the term "detached" for clarity and have instead explicitly described the phenomenon, stating that the RNAi-defective (Rde) phenotype persists over generations in an RRF-1-dependent manner, even in the absence of the original ego-1(S1198L) mutation.

      Line 171-172: Substitute "in the genome" for "in terms of its genomic locus"

      Thank you for the suggestion. We have revised the wording as suggested.

      Line 207: Substitute "the pos-1 RNAi defect" for "the Rde phenotype of pos-1 RNAi"

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have revised the text as suggested.

      Line 269: Text says Fig 5A,B, shows restoration to "wt levels," but stats only show significant change from ego-1(S1198L). Stats showing comparison with wt should be shown, as well.

      Thank you for the comment. We have revised the text to clarify the expression levels and removed the statement about "restoration to wild-type levels" where statistical comparisons were not provided.

      The text refers to the wrong figure/panel in some places. Line310 references Fig. 6A-C as showing the phenotype of ego-1(+/-) heterozygotes and ego-1(+/+) homozygotes, but only the latter is shown in 6A-C. Heterozygotes are shown in Fig. 6D-F.

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have revised the statement accordingly.

      Line 350 should reference Fig. 7C, D (not Fig 3A).

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have corrected it to Fig. 6C, D (Fig. 7C, D in the previous version) as suggested.

      Line 380-381: Wording is awkward. I suggest "Additionally, this allele showed synthetic ts sterility with an rrf-1 deletion mutation."

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have revised the text as suggested.

      Figure 8: There is a typo in panel C: the allele shown is ego-1(null) not ego-1(S1198).

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have updated the allele to ego-1(null) in panel C.

      Reviewer #3

      1. The authors link the direct gene-silencing function of EGO-1 with temperature-sensitive sterility (Figure 8). However, the data in Figure 1 show that the RNAi resistance phenotype and ts-sterility are anti-correlated, the most RNAi-resistant ego-1 alleles are least ts-sensitive and vice versa. Therefore, motivating further experiments through the connection between exo-RNAi resistance and ts-sterility is not justified, e.g. "the temperature sensitive sterile phenotype is a hallmark of the mutator complex.... which is necessary for exo-RNAi-driven silencing". Also, the claim of the redundancy between ego-1 and rrf-1 in controlling ts-sterility is not justified. The ego-1(V1128E) and (C823Y) alleles show strong ts-sterility (Figure 1E), which is not compensated by RRF-1. Therefore, the specific nature of ego-1(S1198L) and (R539Q) mutations leads to a higher dependence of endogenous RNAi silencing processes on RRF-1. Remarkably, although the exo-RNAi resistance of these alleles is dominant (Figure EV2 A,B) and clearly distinct from ego-1 null heterozygous animals, the ts-sterility of ego-1 null heterozygouts and S1198L or R539Q heterozygouts is identical (Figure EV C).

      We thank the reviewer for the insightful comments. We have revised the second section of the Results to simplify the argument by removing descriptions related to WAGO 22G RNA and fertility. This revision ensures that our conclusions remain focused and directly address the observed genetic interactions. Additionally, we have expanded the Discussion to further clarify the specific nature of ego-1(S1198L) with respect to RRF-1.

      1. The experiments in Figures 6 and Figure 7C,D are the most important findings of this study, showing that EGO-1 has a role in the licensing of genes important for exo-RNAi in the germline (such as sid-1 and rde-11). The apparent persistence of RRF-1-dependent (and presumably HDRE-1-dependent) silencing of sid-1 and rde-11 in a genetically wild-type background that correlates with exo-RNAi resistance is remarkable, although not novel (it was shown for mutants defective in P-granules). The use of ego-1 missense viable background was instrumental in these experiments. However, it is not clear whether the specific nature of ego-1(S1198L) mutation also played a role, such as enhanced production of RRF-1-dependent endogenous silencing small RNAs. The ego-1(V1128E) allele is an apparent hypomorph, which is viable and exo-RNAi-resistant (Figure 1, EV2A). Performing an experiment shown in Figure 6 with this allele for five generations would be highly illuminating, and either outcome would be interesting.

      Thank you for this insightful comment. We agree that investigating whether the specific nature of the ego-1(S1198L) mutation contributes to the observed effects is essential. To address this, we performed the experiment shown in Figure 6 using the ego-1(V1128E) allele four generations and data is now shown in Fig. EV7.

      1. Conclusions from the experiments in Figures 3 and 4 are not convincing. The imaging data can be moved to supplemental materials. The suppression experiments shown in Figure 4A,B are weak. The effects of cde-1 mutation are hard to interpret, and these data can be omitted. The znfx-1 and hrde-1 loss does not affect resistance to pop-1. If the authors want to insist on their model, they should use several additional exo-RNAi target genes producing Emb (or other) phenotypes and repeat the experiments.

      Thank you for your valuable feedback. We agree with the concerns raised and have made the suggested changes, including moving the imaging data to Fig. EV4 and omitting the cde-1 data. Regarding the lack of suppression effects for pop-1, we acknowledge the need for further investigation and have performed additional exo-RNAi experiments with target genes gld-1 (Ste) and mpk-1 (Ste) to evaluate our model. Both znfx-1 and hrde-1 mutants significantly suppressed the Rde phenotype in ego-1(S1198L) when subjected to these RNAi, supporting our model. We have added these data in Fig. 3B and EV5A and moved the pop-1 RNAi data to Fig. EV5B.

      1. The exo-RNAi resistance and reduced sid-1 and rde-11 expression correlate. The reduction of these exo-RNAi factors is a plausible explanation for the epigenetic RNAi resistance shown in Figure 6. However, ego-1(S1198L); hrde-1(-) P0 is resistant to pop-1(RNAi) to a large extent (Figure 4B), while sid-1 and rde-11 expression is restored in this double compared to single ego-1(S1198L) (Figure 5B). Therefore, ego-1(S1198L) exo-RNAi resistance is not likely driven to any extent by the misregulation of other RNAi genes. The nature of the (S1198L) mutation is likely to play a major role. Also, surprisingly, rrf-1(-) addition to ego-1(S1198L) does not restore sid-1 and rde-11 expression. Why? The authors do not comment on this.

      Thank you for your detailed comment. To address your concerns, we will incorporate additional experimental data outlined in our response to Comment 3 and revised our description accordingly. Regarding the observation that rrf-1(-) addition to ego-1(S1198L) does not restore sid-1 and rde-11 expression, we hypothesize that this may result from the process by which the rrf-1 knockout was generated via CRISPR in an ego-1(S1198L) mutant background, where sid-1 and rde-11 expression was already reduced. This suggests that rrf-1 may not be required to maintain the reduced expression state once it is established. We will include these points in the revised manuscript.

      1. The discussion points about the nature of new EGO-1 missense mutations involving Alpha Fold predictions can be illustrated through Alpha Fold model figures.

      Thank you for your comment. We agree that illustrating the discussion points with Alpha Fold model figures would enhance clarity. We included an extended view figure based on Alpha Fold predictions to better visualize the structural implications of the EGO-1 mutations.

      1. The authors should consider a model where ego-1(S1198L) affects RRF-1 activity such that it is more active in the endogenous RNAi silencing processes at the expense of exo-RNAi. This could explain the reduced ts-sterility in ego-1(S1198L), which is RRF-1-dependent, similar to the better-investigated epigenetic inheritance of exo-RNAi resistance. However, the exact mechanism of ego-1(S1198L) cannot be explained by genetic methods and is beyond the scope of this study.

      Thank you for this insightful and critical comment. We agree that the interaction between ego-1(S1198L) and RRF-1 activity is an important aspect to consider. Based on the results from our additional experiments described above, we discussed about this possibility. We deeply appreciate your suggestion, as it provides valuable direction for interpreting our findings and developing a more comprehensive understanding of the mechanism.

      Minor comments:

      • Figure 8C typo: ego-(0) is meant to be shown.

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have updated the allele to ego-1(null) in panel C.

      • Pak and Fire, Science, 2007 should be cited in connection to secondary siRNA production. Ruby and Bartel, Cell, 2006 should be cited as the first study that identified 21U-RNAs.

      Thank you for pointing this out. We added citations to Pak and Fire (Science, 2007) in connection to secondary siRNA production and to Ruby and Bartel (Cell, 2006) as the first study identifying 21U-RNAs.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary:

      Mitani and colleagues' manuscript investigates the role of RNA-dependent RNA polymerase (RdRP) EGO-1 in regulating exogenous RNAi (induced by dsRNA delivery) efficiency in the germline of C. elegans. Since the null ego-1 mutation leads to sterility, the authors take advantage of several missense ego-1 mutant strains that are fertile but RNAi-resistant.

      Major comments:

      The authors recognize at least two distinct mechanisms of EGO-1 function in regulating exo-RNAi. The first is direct, since EGO-1 RdRP is required for the production of secondary small RNAs mediating exo-RNAi silencing (this mechanism has been studied for many years), and the second one is indirect, through the role of EGO-1 RdRP in the production of endogenous "licensing" small RNAs that allow germline gene expression, including expression of genes required for exo-RNAi response. In addition, the authors find that the chosen missense mutant strains show a dominant exo-RNAi resistance phenotype, unlike the recessive ego-1 null.

      Although the authors recognize the complex nature of ego-1 phenotypes and provide a helpful model in Figure 8, I find that not all conclusions are consistent with the presented data. A more rigorous data interpretation and presentation logic is required for publication. Also, some additional simple experiments can be done to enhance the rigor of conclusions.

      1. The authors link the direct gene-silencing function of EGO-1 with temperature-sensitive sterility (Figure 8). However, the data in Figure 1 show that the RNAi resistance phenotype and ts-sterility are anti-correlated, the most RNAi-resistant ego-1 alleles are least ts-sensitive and vice versa. Therefore, motivating further experiments through the connection between exo-RNAi resistance and ts-sterility is not justified, e.g. "the temperature sensitive sterile phenotype is a hallmark of the mutator complex.... which is necessary for exo-RNAi-driven silencing". Also, the claim of the redundancy between ego-1 and rrf-1 in controlling ts-sterility is not justified. The ego-1(V1128E) and (C823Y) alleles show strong ts-sterility (Figure 1E), which is not compensated by RRF-1. Therefore, the specific nature of ego-1(S1198L) and (R539Q) mutations leads to a higher dependence of endogenous RNAi silencing processes on RRF-1. Remarkably, although the exo-RNAi resistance of these alleles is dominant (Figure EV2 A,B) and clearly distinct from ego-1 null heterozygous animals, the ts-sterility of ego-1 null heterozygouts and S1198L or R539Q heterozygouts is identical (Figure EV C).
      2. The experiments in Figures 6 and Figure 7C,D are the most important findings of this study, showing that EGO-1 has a role in the licensing of genes important for exo-RNAi in the germline (such as sid-1 and rde-11). The apparent persistence of RRF-1-dependent (and presumably HDRE-1-dependent) silencing of sid-1 and rde-11 in a genetically wild-type background that correlates with exo-RNAi resistance is remarkable, although not novel (it was shown for mutants defective in P-granules). The use of ego-1 missense viable background was instrumental in these experiments. However, it is not clear whether the specific nature of ego-1(S1198L) mutation also played a role, such as enhanced production of RRF-1-dependent endogenous silencing small RNAs. The ego-1(V1128E) allele is an apparent hypomorph, which is viable and exo-RNAi-resistant (Figure 1, EV2A). Performing an experiment shown in Figure 6 with this allele for five generations would be highly illuminating, and either outcome would be interesting.
      3. Conclusions from the experiments in Figures 3 and 4 are not convincing. The imaging data can be moved to supplemental materials. The suppression experiments shown in Figure 4A,B are weak. The effects of cde-1 mutation are hard to interpret, and these data can be omitted. The znfx-1 and hrde-1 loss does not affect resistance to pop-1. If the authors want to insist on their model, they should use several additional exo-RNAi target genes producing Emb (or other) phenotypes and repeat the experiments.
      4. The exo-RNAi resistance and reduced sid-1 and rde-11 expression correlate. The reduction of these exo-RNAi factors is a plausible explanation for the epigenetic RNAi resistance shown in Figure 6. However, ego-1(S1198L); hrde-1(-) P0 is resistant to pop-1(RNAi) to a large extent (Figure 4B), while sid-1 and rde-11 expression is restored in this double compared to single ego-1(S1198L) (Figure 5B). Therefore, ego-1(S1198L) exo-RNAi resistance is not likely driven to any extent by the misregulation of other RNAi genes. The nature of the (S1198L) mutation is likely to play a major role. Also, surprisingly, rrf-1(-) addition to ego-1(S1198L) does not restore sid-1 and rde-11 expression. Why? The authors do not comment on this.
      5. The discussion points about the nature of new EGO-1 missense mutations involving Alpha Fold predictions can be illustrated through Alpha Fold model figures.
      6. The authors should consider a model where ego-1(S1198L) affects RRF-1 activity such that it is more active in the endogenous RNAi silencing processes at the expense of exo-RNAi. This could explain the reduced ts-sterility in ego-1(S1198L), which is RRF-1-dependent, similar to the better-investigated epigenetic inheritance of exo-RNAi resistance. However, the exact mechanism of ego-1(S1198L) cannot be explained by genetic methods and is beyond the scope of this study.

      7. Data and the methods are presented in such a way that they can be reproduced.

      8. Statistical analyses are adequate.

      Minor comments:

      • Figure 8C typo: ego-(0) is meant to be shown.
      • Pak and Fire, Science, 2007 should be cited in connection to secondary siRNA production. Ruby and Bartel, Cell, 2006 should be cited as the first study that identified 21U-RNAs.

      Significance

      General assessment:

      The strength of this study is in generating reagents suitable for performing experiments that were not feasible with the sterile null mutant. The major finding of the paper is the epigenetic inheritance of resistance to exo-RNAi by the wild-type descendants of ego-1 mutants, which is dependent on rrf-1. There are numerous weaknesses in the interpretation of other data, which are described in section 1. The study's limitation is the exclusive use of genetic approaches. The effect of the antimorphic point mutations on EGO-1 stability, localization, and interaction with other proteins could have provided more insight into the protein's function.

      • The most notable results presented in the paper are very similar to the findings of several groups published in 2019 (Lev et al., Ouyang et al, and Dodson and Kennedy) and, therefore, are not novel. The experimental setup is identical to Dodson and Kennedy; it just uses different mutants. The novel aspect is the opposite relationship between ego-1 and rrf-1, which has not been described before.
      • This research will be of interest to C. elegans researchers and those following epigenetic phenomena.
      • My expertise is in RNAi in C. elegans and epigenetics. I have sufficient expertise to evaluate all aspects of the paper.
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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      The study conducted by Katsufumi Dejima and colleagues represents an advance in understanding the multiple roles of RdRPs in C. elegans germ cells. EGO-1 is an essential RdRP that is required for multiple aspects of C. elegans germline development and efficient RNAi of germline-expressed genes. Yet, currently there is a lack of sufficient genetic mutants to differentiate the multiple biological functions of EGO-1. In this study, the authors examined a large number of non-null alleles for ego-1 gene and identified four alleles that affect exogenous RNAi, while does not compromise fertility. The authors then focused on the allele ego-1(S1198L), examined its influence on germ granule compartments and investigated the molecular mechanism of EGO-1's involvement in feeding RNA interference. Together, their work reveal an extensive interdependent RdRP network that is responsible for regulating exo-RNAi in the germline.

      Overall, this is a well-executed study that uncovers the molecular mechanism of EGO-1' function in germline RNAi response and the multiple roles of EGO-1 and RRF-1 in regulating germline RNAi. The findings are poised to have an impact on RNAi research fields.

      I have a few comments below. While they are largely minor, addressing them would further enhance the manuscript's clarity and impact.

      1. A systemic analysis of the influence of these ego-1 alleles on fertility can provide valuable information on further studies on EGO-1's functions in fertility.
      2. The genotype of JMC231 is hrde-1(tor125[GFP::3xFLAG::hrde-1]) III. In line 245 and 551, HRDE-1::GFP is typed. typo?
      3. In Figure 4C, the fluorescence intensity in ego-1(S1198L) appears to be more than twice as high as the wild type animals, yet the mean intensity shows only mildly upregulated in Figure 4D. Is the images representative?
      4. A brief introduction of tmC18 in the legend of Figure 6 would be friendly to readers.
      5. In the discussion section, a detailed summary of three recent published papers about the "phenotypic hangover" phenotype would help to understand how EGO-1 contribute to feeding RNAi. (Dodson & Kennedy, 2019; Lev et al., 2019; Ouyang et al., 2019).
      6. Has the authors examined the cellular localization of EGO-1(S1198L) ? Construction of gfp::ego-1(S1198L) animals would provide this information.

      Significance

      Strength: Enough genetic alleles to differentiate the multiple biological functions of EGO-1.

      Limitations: Whether mutant alleles affect siRNA production is unknown.

      Advance: The multiple functions of RdRp protein were analyzed through genetic means.

      Audience: Basic research, small RNA community and C. elegans community

      My expertise: small RNA and germ granule.

    1. Briefing Document : "Et si on levait les yeux ? Une classe face aux écrans" Date : 8 mai 2024

      Source : Excerpts from "Et si on levait les yeux ? Une classe face aux écrans"

      Public Cible : Toute personne intéressée par l'impact des écrans sur les enfants et la société, notamment les parents, les éducateurs et les décideurs politiques.

      Résumé Exécutif : Ce document présente les principaux thèmes et idées clés tirés d'extraits de l'ouvrage "Et si on levait les yeux ?

      Une classe face aux écrans". Le texte explore l'omniprésence des écrans dans la vie des enfants de la "génération alpha" et ses conséquences négatives sur leur attention, leur langage, leur capacité à l'effort et leurs relations sociales.

      Il met en lumière le rôle addictif des écrans, alimenté par la dopamine, et l'influence des algorithmes de l'économie de l'attention.

      Le document souligne l'importance de la prise de conscience, de l'éducation aux médias, de la fixation de limites et de la proposition d'alternatives pour aider les enfants à reprendre le contrôle et à développer des relations et des intérêts dans le monde réel.

      L'expérience d'une classe de CM2 menée par leur instituteur est présentée comme un exemple d'initiative visant à sensibiliser les enfants et à les reconnecter avec la nature et les interactions humaines.

      Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :

      1. L'omniprésence et l'impact des écrans sur la "génération alpha" :

      • Les enfants nés avec les smartphones et les tablettes (génération alpha) sont immergés dans un monde d'écrans qui prennent une place considérable dans leur vie.
      • Un instituteur témoigne de l'évolution en 15 ans : autrefois, les enfants jouaient dehors ou lisaient ; aujourd'hui, les écrans sont omniprésents.
      • Conséquences négatives observées : "moindre capacité d'attention", "appauvrissement du langage", "perte du goût de l'effort", "isolement", "une aptitude à l'attente à l'ennui".
      • Les écrans sont perçus par certains enfants comme un "fil invisible" qui les "accroche sur le cerveau".
      • La déconnexion des écrans peut entraîner des réactions fortes chez les enfants, comparées à des "crises" ou à un manque. Un enfant compare cela au comportement d'un "fou" ou d'un "psychopathe" face au manque de son téléphone.

      2. L'attention et la concentration mises à mal :

      • L'attention réflexe, stimulée par les écrans (lumière, mouvement), se développe au détriment de l'attention volontaire et de la concentration.
      • L'attention moyenne des enfants est estimée à 8 secondes en raison du zapping constant sur les réseaux sociaux.
      • L'évolution des formats des réseaux sociaux (vidéos plus courtes sur TikTok) témoigne de cette réduction de la capacité d'attention.
      • Même une courte exposition aux écrans avant la classe peut diminuer la capacité de concentration nécessaire à la résolution de problèmes.
      • Des exercices de respiration et de méditation sont proposés en classe pour aider les enfants à se recentrer et à développer leur attention intérieure. Un enfant témoigne se sentir "libre" et avoir les "esprits tranquilles" grâce à ces exercices, contrairement à la sensation d'être "comme ça" devant les écrans.

      3. L'addiction aux écrans et le rôle de la dopamine :

      • Les écrans sont comparés à des substances addictives, suscitant des réactions de manque lors du sevrage. Une mère décrit son enfant sans écran comme un "drogué", un "toxico".
      • La dopamine, l'hormone du plaisir, est libérée par les interactions sur les écrans (likes, commentaires, gains dans les jeux vidéo), créant un cycle de renforcement positif.
      • Un enfant de 10 ans avoue jouer à GTA (un jeu déconseillé aux moins de 18 ans), soulignant l'exposition à des contenus inappropriés et la recherche de la dopamine.
      • La facilité d'accès au plaisir immédiat des écrans est mise en contraste avec l'effort nécessaire à des activités plus enrichissantes comme la lecture. "Les écrans c'est facile... c'est plus facile que de manger un fruit qu'on a pelé."

      4. L'économie de l'attention et la manipulation des algorithmes :

      • Les plateformes numériques sont engagées dans une "guerre pour capter notre attention". Le PDG de Netflix considère même le sommeil comme son principal concurrent.
      • L'attention est une capacité qui se forme et se déforme, soulignant le rôle de l'éducation.
      • Les algorithmes sont conçus pour retenir l'utilisateur le plus longtemps possible en lui proposant du contenu ciblé (ex: vidéos de chats), exploitant ainsi ses préférences et ses désirs. "Quand vous scrollez vous êtes en train de faire comme une machine à sous."
      • Ce système aliène l'utilisateur, qui devient le "dindon de la farce", le "jouet des algorithmes", perdant son temps au profit des plateformes.

      5. L'impact sur les relations sociales et le langage :

      • Les écrans créent une distance au sein des familles, où chacun est "dans sa pièce avec son écran", entraînant un manque de partage et de communication.
      • L'écran peut faire "écran à la relation", isolant les individus dans leur "bulle".
      • Paradoxalement, dans un service d'urgence, des jeunes privés de leurs portables ne s'en plaignent pas, car l'absence de solitude est un facteur compensatoire. "Madame c'est parce qu'ici on n'est pas seul."
      • L'appauvrissement du langage est souligné, avec une baisse du nombre de mots disponibles chez les enfants.
      • Les abréviations utilisées dans les SMS témoignent d'une certaine "flemme" et d'un manque d'effort dans la communication écrite.
      • Le langage est présenté comme un "super pouvoir", essentiel pour l'expression, la compréhension et la résolution de conflits. Un manque de vocabulaire peut entraîner des difficultés relationnelles et une vulnérabilité face à la manipulation. "Ceux qui parlent le moins bien dans l'école c'est toujours ceux qui ont des embrouilles à la récré."
      • Les mots ont un impact puissant et peuvent blesser autant que des actes physiques. Il est important de maîtriser son langage, notamment sur les réseaux sociaux où les écrits laissent des traces durables.

      6. Le rôle des parents et de l'éducation :

      • Les parents sont confrontés à une complexité accrue de leur rôle face à l'omniprésence des écrans.
      • L'exemplarité des parents est cruciale : les enfants remarquent si les écrans sont plus importants que leurs propres paroles. "Si c'est plus important ce qui se passe sur l'écran de mon père ou de ma mère que ce que je suis en train de lui dire c'est que ça doit être génial ce qui se passe sur ces écrans."
      • L'éducation nationale a un rôle à jouer dans la prévention et la sensibilisation aux dangers des écrans.
      • Il est essentiel de fixer des limites et de guider les enfants vers les "trésors" que recèle le monde réel. "Nos enfants ont besoin de nous face aux écrans pour les contrôler et les limiter bien sûr mais aussi pour les guider vers tous les trésors qu'il recèent."

      7. La nécessité de se reconnecter au réel et de trouver des alternatives :

      • Les enfants sont de plus en plus exposés à des univers "artificialisés" et ont besoin de se reconnecter à la nature, au "vivant", à l'"imprévu" et à l'"émerveillement".
      • Une classe expérimente un séjour de 10 jours sans écran en pleine nature, permettant aux enfants de redécouvrir leurs sensations et la beauté de leur environnement. "J'ai aimé entendre les oiseaux et à un moment j'ai aussi l'impression que je rentendais les arbres le vent."
      • L'importance de la présence et de l'attention dans les relations est soulignée. "Le plus beau cadeau qu'on puisse faire à à quelqu'une ou à quelqu'un c'est celui de notre présence."
      • Pour contrer l'addiction aux écrans, il est nécessaire de susciter des "désirs supérieurs", des activités qui procurent plus de plaisir et de sens que le monde virtuel. "Si on veut aider les les jeunes à quitter l'addiction des écrans il faut susciter en eux comme le dit Spinoza un désir supérieur."
      • La lecture et les activités partagées en famille sont présentées comme des alternatives enrichissantes.

      8. La technologie n'est pas neutre et nécessite un usage conscient :

      • Contrairement à l'idée reçue, la technologie n'est pas neutre ; elle est "ambivalente", à la fois positive et négative.
      • L'écran est comparé à un "parc" avec des zones sûres et des zones dangereuses, nécessitant un accompagnement et une éducation à son usage. "L'écran c'est comme un parc où il y a un côté sombre où il faut pas y aller parce que tu risques de plonger dedans et de jamais en sortir."
      • Il est crucial de développer un usage des écrans où ils sont des "serviteurs" et non des "maîtres", en les utilisant consciemment pour des besoins spécifiques et en se fixant des règles.

      Conclusion :

      Les extraits de "Et si on levait les yeux ?" dressent un portrait préoccupant de l'impact des écrans sur la jeune génération. Ils soulignent l'urgence d'une prise de conscience collective et d'actions éducatives pour aider les enfants à développer un rapport plus sain et équilibré avec le monde numérique.

      L'expérience de la classe présentée dans le livre offre un exemple concret de démarche positive pour reconnecter les enfants au monde réel, à la nature et aux relations humaines, tout en développant leur esprit critique face aux sirènes des écrans.

      L'enjeu est de former des "têtes bien faites" capables d'utiliser les outils numériques avec discernement et de cultiver des richesses intérieures et relationnelles durables.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The present study, led by Thomas and collaborators, aims to describe the firing activity of individual motor units in mice during locomotion. To achieve this, they implanted small arrays of eight electrodes in two heads of the triceps and performed spike sorting using a custom implementation of Kilosort. Simultaneously, they tracked the positions of the shoulder, elbow, and wrist using a single camera and a markerless motion capture algorithm (DeepLabCut). Repeated one-minute recordings were conducted in six mice at five different speeds, ranging from 10 to 27.5 cm·s⁻¹.

      From these data, the authors reported that:

      (1) a significant portion of the identified motor units was not consistently recruited across strides,<br /> (2) motor units identified from the lateral head of the triceps tended to be recruited later than those from the long head,<br /> (3) the number of spikes per stride and peak firing rates were correlated in both muscles, and<br /> (4) the probability of motor unit recruitment and firing rates increased with walking speed.

      The authors conclude that these differences can be attributed to the distinct functions of the muscles and the constraints of the task (i.e., speed).

      Strengths:

      The combination of novel electrode arrays to record intramuscular electromyographic signals from a larger muscle volume with an advanced spike sorting pipeline capable of identifying populations of motor units.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There is a lack of information on the number of identified motor units per muscle and per animal.

      (2) All identified motor units are pooled in the analyses, whereas per-animal analyses would have been valuable, as motor units within an individual likely receive common synaptic inputs. Such analyses would fully leverage the potential of identifying populations of motor units.

      (3) The current data do not allow for determining which motor units were sampled from each pool. It remains unclear whether the sample is biased toward high-threshold motor units or representative of the full pool.

      (4) The behavioural analysis of the animals relies solely on kinematics (2D estimates of elbow angle and stride timing). Without ground reaction forces or shoulder angle data, drawing functional conclusions from the results is challenging.

      Major comments:

      (1) Spike sorting

      The conclusions of the study rely on the accuracy and robustness of the spike sorting algorithm during a highly dynamic task. Although the pipeline was presented in a previous publication (Chung et al., 2023, eLife), a proper validation of the algorithm for identifying motor unit spikes is still lacking. This is particularly important in the present study, as the experimental conditions involve significant dynamic changes. Under such conditions, muscle geometry is altered due to variations in both fibre pennation angles and lengths.

      This issue differs from electrode drift, and it is unclear whether the original implementation of Kilosort includes functions to address it. Could the authors provide more details on the various steps of their pipeline, the strategies they employed to ensure consistent tracking of motor unit action potentials despite potential changes in action potential waveforms, and the methods used for manual inspection of the spike sorting algorithm's output?

      (2) Yield of the spike sorting pipeline and analyses per animal/muscle

      A total of 33 motor units were identified from two heads of the triceps in six mice (17 from the long head and 16 from the lateral head). However, precise information on the yield per muscle per animal is not provided. This information is crucial to support the novelty of the study, as the authors claim in the introduction that their electrode arrays enable the identification of populations of motor units.

      Beyond reporting the number of identified motor units, another way to demonstrate the effectiveness of the spike sorting algorithm would be to compare the recorded EMG signals with the residual signal obtained after subtracting the action potentials of the identified motor units, using a signal-to-residual ratio.

      Furthermore, motor units identified from the same muscle and the same animal are likely not independent due to common synaptic inputs. This dependence should be accounted for in the statistical analyses when comparing changes in motor unit properties across speeds and between muscles.

      (3) Representativeness of the sample of identified motor units

      However, to draw such conclusions, the authors should exclusively compare motor units from the same pool and systematically track violations of the recruitment order. Alternatively, they could demonstrate that the motor units that are intermittently active across strides correspond to the smallest motor units, based on the assumption that these units should always be recruited due to their low activation thresholds.

      One way to estimate the size of motor units identified within the same muscle would be to compare the amplitude of their action potentials, assuming that all motor units are relatively close to the electrodes (given the selectivity of the recordings) and that motoneurons innervating more muscle fibres generate larger motor unit action potentials.

      Currently, the data seem to support the idea that motor units that are alternately recruited across strides have recruitment thresholds close to the level of activation or force produced during slow walking. The fact that recruitment probability monotonically increases with speed suggests that the force required to propel the mouse forward exceeds the recruitment threshold of these "large" motor units. This pattern would primarily reflect spatial recruitment following the size principle rather than flexible motor unit control.

      (4) Analysis of recruitment and firing rates

      The authors currently report active duration and peak firing rates based on spike trains convolved with a Gaussian kernel. Why not report the peak of the instantaneous firing rates estimated from the inverse of the inter-spike interval? This approach appears to be more aligned with previous studies conducted to describe motor unit behaviour during fast movements (e.g., Desmedt & Godaux, 1977, J Physiol; Van Cutsem et al., 1998, J Physiol; Del Vecchio et al., 2019, J Physiol).

      (5) Additional analyses on behaviour

      The authors currently analyse motor unit recruitment in relation to elbow angle. It would be valuable to include a similar analysis using the angular velocity observed during each stride, as higher velocity would place each muscle in a less favourable position on the force-velocity relationship for generating the required force. More broadly, comparing stride-by-stride changes in firing rates with changes in elbow angular velocity would further strengthen the final analyses presented in the results section.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using the approach of Myomatrix recording, the authors report that:

      (1) Motor units are recruited differently in the two types of muscles.<br /> (2) Individual units are probabilistically recruited during the locomotion strides, whereas the population bulk EMG has a more reliable representation of the muscle.<br /> (3) The recruitment of units was proportional to walking speed.

      Strengths:

      The new technique provides a unique data set, and the data analysis is convincing and well-performed.

      Weaknesses:

      The implications of "probabilistical recruitment" should be explored, addressed, and analyzed further.

      Comments:

      One of the study's main findings (perhaps the main finding) is that the motor units are "probabilistically" recruited. The authors do not define what they mean by probabilistically recruited, nor do they present an alternative scenario to such recruitment or discuss why this would be interesting or surprising. However, on page 4, they do indicate that the recruitment of units from both muscles was only active in a subset of strides, i.e., they are not reliably active in every step.

      If probabilistic means irregular spiking, this is not new. Variability in spiking has been seen numerous times, for instance in human biceps brachii motor units during isometric contractions (Pascoe, Enoka, Exp physiology 2014) and elsewhere. Perhaps the distinction the authors are seeking is between fluctuation-driven and mean-driven spiking of motor units as previously identified in spinal motor networks (see Petersen and Berg, eLife 2016, and Berg, Frontiers 2017). Here, it was shown that a prominent regime of irregular spiking is present during rhythmic motor activity, which also manifests as a positive skewness in the spike count distribution (i.e., log-normal).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      In this article, Kawanabe-Kobayashi et al., aim to examine the mechanisms by which stress can modulate pain in mice. They focus on the contribution of noradrenergic neurons (NA) of the locus coeruleus (LC). The authors use acute restraint stress as a stress paradigm and found that following one hour of restraint stress mice display mechanical hypersensitivity. They show that restraint stress causes the activation of LC NA neurons and the release of NA in the spinal cord dorsal horn (SDH). They then examine the spinal mechanisms by which LC→SDH NA produces mechanical hypersensitivity. The authors provide evidence that NA can act on alphaA1Rs expressed by a class of astrocytes defined by the expression of Hes (Hes+). Furthermore, they found that NA, presumably through astrocytic release of ATP following NA action on alphaA1Rs Hes+ astrocytes, can cause an adenosine-mediated inhibition of SDH inhibitory interneurons. They propose that this disinhibition mechanism could explain how restraint stress can cause the mechanical hypersensitivity they measured in their behavioral experiments.

      Strengths:

      (1) Significance. Stress profoundly influences pain perception; resolving the mechanisms by which stress alters nociception in rodents may explain the well-known phenomenon of stress-induced analgesia and/or facilitate the development of therapies to mitigate the negative consequences of chronic stress on chronic pain.

      (2) Novelty. The authors' findings reveal a crucial contribution of Hes+ spinal astrocytes in the modulation of pain thresholds during stress.

      (3) Techniques. This study combines multiple approaches to dissect circuit, cellular, and molecular mechanisms including optical recordings of neural and astrocytic Ca2+ activity in behaving mice, intersectional genetic strategies, cell ablation, optogenetics, chemogenetics, CRISPR-based gene knockdown, slice electrophysiology, and behavior.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Mouse model of stress. Although chronic stress can increase sensitivity to somatosensory stimuli and contribute to hyperalgesia and anhedonia, particularly in the context of chronic pain states, acute stress is well known to produce analgesia in humans and rodents. The experimental design used by the authors consists of a single one-hour session of restraint stress followed by 30 min to one hour of habituation and measurement of cutaneous mechanical sensitivity with von Frey filaments. This acute stress behavioral paradigm corresponds to the conditions in which the clinical phenomenon of stress-induced analgesia is observed in humans, as well as in animal models. Surprisingly, however, the authors measured that this acute stressor produced hypersensitivity rather than antinociception. This discrepancy is significant and requires further investigation.

      (2) Specifically, is the hypersensitivity to mechanical stimulation also observed in response to heat or cold on a hotplate or coldplate?

      (3) Using other stress models, such as a forced swim, do the authors also observe acute stress-induced hypersensitivity instead of stress-induced antinociception?

      (4) Measurement of stress hormones in blood would provide an objective measure of the stress of the animals.

      (5) Results:

      a) Optical recordings of Ca2+ activity in behaving rodents are particularly useful to investigate the relationship between Ca2+ dynamics and the behaviors displayed by rodents.

      b) The authors report an increase in Ca2+ events in LC NA neurons during restraint stress: Did mice display specific behaviors at the time these Ca2+ events were observed such as movements to escape or orofacial behaviors including head movements or whisking?

      c) Additionally, are similar increases in Ca2+ events in LC NA neurons observed during other stressful behavioral paradigms versus non-stressful paradigms?

      d) Neuronal ablation to reveal the function of a cell population.

      e) The proportion of LC NA neurons and LC→SDH NA neurons expressing DTR-GFP and ablated should be quantified (Figures 1G and J) to validate the methods and permit interpretation of the behavioral data (Figures 1H and K). Importantly, the nocifensive responses and behavior of these mice in other pain assays in the absence of stress (e.g., hotplate) and a few standard assays (open field, rotarod, elevated plus maze) would help determine the consequences of cell ablation on processing of nociceptive information and general behavior.

      f) Confirmation of LC NA neuron function with other methods that alter neuronal excitability or neurotransmission instead of destroying the circuit investigated, such as chemogenetics or chemogenetics, would greatly strengthen the findings. Optogenetics is used in Figure 1M, N but excitation of LC→SDH NA neuron terminals is tested instead of inhibition (to mimic ablation), and in naïve mice instead of stressed mice.

      g) Alpha1Ars. The authors noted that "Adra1a mRNA is also expressed in INs in the SDH".

      h) The authors should comprehensively indicate what other cell types present in the spinal cord and neurons projecting to the spinal cord express alpha1Ars and what is the relative expression level of alpha1Ars in these different cell types.

      i) The conditional KO of alpha1Ars specifically in Hes5+ astrocytes and not in other cell types expressing alpha1Ars should be quantified and validated (Figure 2H).

      j) Depolarization of SDH inhibitory interneurons by NA (Figure 3). The authors' bath applied NA, which presumably activates all NA receptors present in the preparation.

      k) The authors' model (Figure 4H) implies that NA released by LC→SDH NA neurons leads to the inhibition of SDH inhibitory interneurons by NA. In other experiments (Figure 1L, Figure 2A), the authors used optogenetics to promote the release of endogenous NA in SDH by LC→SDH NA neurons. This approach would investigate the function of NA endogenously released by LC NA neurons at presynaptic terminals in the SDH and at physiological concentrations and would test the model more convincingly compared to the bath application of NA.

      l) As for other experiments, the proportion of Hes+ astrocytes that express hM3Dq, and the absence of expression in other cells, should be quantified and validated to interpret behavioral data.

      m) Showing that the effect of CNO is dose-dependent would strengthen the authors' findings.

      n) The proportion of SG neurons for which CNO bath application resulted in a reduction in recorded sIPSCs is not clear.

      o) A1Rs. The specific expression of Cas9 and guide RNAs, and the specific KD of A1Rs, in inhibitory interneurons but not in other cell types expressing A1Rs should be quantified and validated.

      (6) Methods:

      It is unclear how fiber photometry is performed using "optic cannula" during restraint stress while mice are in a 50ml falcon tube (as shown in Figure 1A).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The structure of a heterohexameric 3:3 LGI1-ADAM22 complex is resolved by Yamaguchi et al. It reveals the intermolecular LGI1 interactions and their role in bringing three ADAM22 molecules together. This may be relevant for the clustering of axonal Kv1 channels and control over their density. While it is currently not clear if the heterohexameric 3:3 LGI1-ADAM22 complex has a physiological role, the detailed structural information, presented here, allows us to pinpoint mutations or other strategies to probe the relevance of the 3:3 complex in future work.

      The experimental work is done to a high standard, and I have no comments on that part. I do have several recommendations that I hope will be considered.

      (1) A previously determined 2:2 heterodimeric complex of LGI1-ADAM22 was suggested to play a role in trans interactions. Could the authors discuss if the heterohexameric 3:3 LGI1-ADAM22 is more likely to represent a cis complex or a trans complex, or if both are possible?

      (2) It is not entirely clear to me if the LGI1-ADAM22 complex is also crosslinked in the HS-AFM experiments. Could this be more clearly indicated? In addition, if this is the case, could an explanation be given about how the complex can still dissociate?

      (3) The LGI1 and ADAM22 are of similar size. To me, this complicates the interpretation of dissociation of the complex in the HS-AFM data. How is the overinterpretation of this data prevented? In other words, what confidence do the authors have in the dissociation steps in the HS-AFM data?

      (4) What is the "LGI1 collapse" mentioned in Figure 4c?

      (5) Am I correct that the structure indicates that the trimerization is entirely organized by LGI1? This would suggest LGI1 trimerizes on its own. Can this be discussed? Has this been observed?

      (6) C3 symmetry was not applied in the cryo-EM reconstruction of the heterohexameric 3:3 LGI1-ADAM22 complex. How much is the complex deviating from C3 symmetry? What interactions stabilize the specific trimeric conformation reconstructed here, compared to other trimeric conformations?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      During early Drosophila pupal development, a subset of larval abdominal muscles (DIOMs) is remodelled using an autophagy-dependent mechanism.

      To better understand this not very well studied process, the authors have generated a transcriptomics time course using dissected abdominal muscles of various stages from wild-type and autophagy-deficient mutants. The authors have further identified a function for BNIP3 in muscle mitophagy using this system.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper does provide a detailed mRNA time course resource for DIOM remodelling.

      (2) The paper does find an interesting BNIP3 loss of function phenotype, a block of mitophagy during muscle remodelling, and hence identifies a specific linker between mitochondria and the core autophagy machinery. This adds to the mechanism of how mitochondria are degraded.

      (3) Sophisticated fly genetics demonstrates that the larval muscle mitochondria are, to a large extent, degraded by autophagy during DIOM remodelling.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Mitophagy during DIOM remodelling is not novel (earlier papers from Fujita et al.).

      (2) The transcriptomics time course data are not well connected to the autophagy part. Both could be separated into 2 independent manuscripts.

      (3) The muscle phenotypes need better quantifications, both for the EM and light microscopy data in various figures.

      (4)The transcriptomics data are hard to browse in the provided PDF format.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Compelling and clearly described work that combines two elegant cell fate reporter strains with mathematical modelling to describe the kinetics of CD4+ TRM in mice. The aim is to investigate the cell dynamics underlying the maintenance of CD4+TRM.

      The main conclusions are that:<br /> (1) CD4+ TRM are not intrinsically long-lived.<br /> (2) Even clonal half-lives are short: 1 month for TRM in skin, and even shorter (12 days) for TRM in lamina propria.<br /> (3) TRM are maintained by self-renewal and circulating precursors.

      Strengths:

      (1) Very clearly and succinctly written. Though in some places too succinctly! See suggestions below for areas I think could benefit from more detail.

      (2) Powerful combination of mouse strains and modelling to address questions that are hard to answer with other approaches.

      (3) The modelling of different modes of recruitment (quiescent, neutral, division linked) is extremely interesting and often neglected (for simpler neutral recruitment).

      Weaknesses/scope for improvement:

      (1) The authors use the same data set that they later fit for generating their priors. This double use of the same dataset always makes me a bit squeamish as I worry it could lead to an underestimate of errors on the parameters. Could the authors show plots of their priors and posteriors to check that the priors are not overly-influential? Also, how do differences in priors ultimately influence the degree of support a model gets (if at all)? Could differences in priors lead to one model gaining more support than another?

      (2) The authors state (line 81) that cells were "identified as tissue-localised by virtue of their protection from short-term in vivo labelling (Methods; Fig. S1B)". I would like to see more information on this. How short is short term? How long after labelling do cells need to remain unlabelled in order to be designated tissue-localised (presumably label will get to tissue pretty quickly -within hours?). Can the authors provide citations to defend the assumption that all label-negative cells are tissue-localised (no false negatives)? And conversely that no label-positive cells can be found in the tissue (no false positives)? I couldn't actually find the relevant section in the methods and Figure S1B didn't contain this information.

      (3) Are the target and precursor populations from the same mice? If so is there any way to reflect the between-individual variation in the precursor population (not captured by the simple empirical fit)? I am thinking particularly of the skin and LP CD4+CD69- populations where the fraction of cells that are mTOM+ (and to a lesser extent YFP+) spans virtually the whole range. Would it be nice to capture this information in downstream predictions if possible?

      (4) In Figure 3, estimates of kinetics for cells in LP appear to be more dependent on the input model (quiescent/neutral/division-linked) than the same parameters in the skin. Can the authors explain intuitively why this is the case?

      (5) Can the authors include plots of the model fits to data associated with the different strengths of support shown in Figure 4? That is, I would like to know what a difference in the strength of say 0.43 compared with 0.3 looks like in "real terms". I feel strongly that this is important. Are all the fits fantastic, and some marginally better than others? Are they all dreadful and some are just less dreadful? Or are there meaningful differences?

      (6) Figure 4 left me unclear about exactly which combinations of precursors and targets were considered. Figure 3 implies there are 5 precursors but in Figure 4A at most 4 are considered. Also, Figure 4B suggests skin CD69- were considered a target. This doesn't seem to be specified anywhere.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript addresses a fundamental problem of immunology - the persistence mechanisms of tissue-resident memory T cells (TRMs). It introduces a novel quantitative methodology, combining the in vivo tracing of T-cell cohorts with rigorous mathematical modeling and inference. Interestingly, the authors show that immigration plays a key role in maintaining CD4+ TRM populations in both skin and lamina propria (LP), with LP TRMs being more dependent on immigration than skin TRMs. This is an original and potentially impactful manuscript. However, several aspects were not clear and would benefit from being explained better or worked out in more detail.

      (1) The key observations are as follows:

      a) When heritably labeling cells due to CD4 expression, CD4+ TRM labeling frequency declines with time. This implies that CD4+ TRMs are ultimately replenished from a source not labeled, hence not expressing CD4. Most likely, this would be DN thymocytes.

      b) After labeling by Ki67 expression, labeled CD4+ TRMs also decline - This is what Figure 1B suggests. Hence they would be replaced by a source that was not in the cell cycle at the time of labeling. However, is this really borne out by the experimental data (Figure 2C, middle row)? Please clarify.

      (2) For potential source populations (Figure 2D): Please discuss these data critically. For example, CD4+ CD69- cells in skin and LP start with a much lower initial labeling frequency than the respective TRM populations. Could the former then be precursors of the latter? A similar question applies to LN YFP+ cells. Moreover, is the increase in YFP labeling in naïve T cells a result of their production from proliferative thymocytes? How well does the quantitative interpretation of YFP labeling kinetics in a target population work when populations upstream show opposite trends (e.g., naïve T cells increasing in YFP+ frequency but memory cells in effect decreasing, as, at the time of labeling, non-activated = non-proliferative T cells (and hence YFP-) might later become activated and contribute to memory)?

      (3) Please add a measure of variation (e.g., suitable credible intervals) to the "best fits" (solid lines in Figure 2).

      (4) Could the authors better explain the motivation for basing their model comparisons on the Leave-One-Out (LOO) cross-validation method? Why not use Bayesian evidence instead?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Sleep plays a critical role in memory consolidation, but the neural mechanisms underlying this relationship remain poorly understood. The authors present novel findings implicating two small neuronal groups with inhibitory connections, PAM-a1 to DPM, in sleep regulation and LTM consolidation. However, whether the PAM-a1 to DPM microcircuit promotes LTM consolidation through sleep regulation requires further investigation.

      Strengths:

      The authors report several novel findings. Brief activation or inhibition of PAM-a1 neurons, or brief inhibition of DPM neurons during the first few hours after training, impairs 24-hour LTM. Notably, these brief manipulations disrupt sleep for many hours afterward, particularly at night. Interestingly, disruption of PAM-a1 and DPM neurons impairs sleep and appetitive memory consolidation only under starvation conditions, and pharmacological induction of sleep during the night rescues the LTM defects. These findings suggest that PAM-a1 and DPM neurons are involved in sleep regulation and LTM consolidation under starvation. These are important findings that advance our understanding of the link between sleep and memory consolidation.

      Weaknesses:

      Some claims lack sufficient evidence or clarity:

      (1) All sleep experiments are conducted under the "training" (temperature-change) condition. While genotypic controls are helpful, additional no-training controls are required to confirm that the observed differences are due to training rather than unknown genotype-related factors. The fact that experimental genotypes exhibit significantly altered sleep even before "training" (e.g., Figs. 7H, J, K, 8A, B, D) highlights the necessity of these controls.

      (2) Previous studies on disrupted memory due to sleep reduction have primarily examined conditions with severe sleep deprivation. In contrast, this report claims that relatively small decreases in total sleep accompanied by sleep fragmentation are responsible for impaired memory consolidation. It remains unclear whether sleep fragmentation at this level is truly critical for memory consolidation. The authors should cause sleep loss and fragmentation of similar magnitude through other means and determine whether it can impair LTM.

      (3) The authors employed a neural activity reporter to show that starvation increases the basal activity of PAM-a1 but not DPM neurons in untrained flies (Figures 9C-E). They observed small increases in the activity of both neuron groups immediately after training but not one hour later. Given the inhibitory connection from PAM-a1 to DPM, it is unclear why both neuron groups show increased activity after training. Additionally, as the authors acknowledge, it is puzzling how the inactivation of PAM-a1 produces similar effects on sleep and memory as DPM inhibition and PAM-a1 activation. Further experiments are needed to clarify these findings, such as manipulating PAM-a1 activity during the one-hour post-training period and evaluating the effect on DPM activity. Including data from training under fed conditions would provide a more comprehensive understanding of state-dependent neural activity. Even if certain experiments are not feasible, these issues warrant further discussion. It is also important to clarify that the term "synchronized" does not imply single-spike-level synchrony.

      (4) The authors considered that PAM-a1 and DPM might function in parallel, independent pathways for sleep and LTM. They rejected this possibility based on the lack of additive effects when both neuronal groups were simultaneously inactivated. However, they found that MB299B-labelled neurons exert stronger memory effects than MB043B-labelled neurons, while MB043B neurons have stronger sleep effects. If sleep is a primary driver of memory consolidation, a stronger correlation between memory and sleep effects would be expected. This observation merits further discussion.

      (5) Given prior knowledge that PAM neurons are heterogeneous and that the R58E02 driver is broadly expressed, data in Figures 1-5 concerning PAM are outdated. The use of more restricted PAM-a1 drivers from the outset would make the manuscript easier to read and interpret.

      (6) Some figures lack relevant data, certain experiments are missing necessary controls, and anomalies are present in some data sets.

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    Annotators

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1(Public review):

      comment 1: Lu et al. use their workflow to visualize RNA expression of five enzymes that are each involved in the biosynthetic pathway of different neurotransmitters/modulators, namely chat (cholinergeric), gad (GABAergic), tbh (octopaminergic), th (dopaminergic), and tph (serotonergic). In this way, they generate an anatomical atlas of neurons that produce these molecules. Collectively these markers are referred to as the "neuronpool." They overstate when they write, "The combination of these five types of neurons constitutes a neuron pool that enables the labeling of all neurons throughout the entire body." This statement does not accurately represent the state of our knowledge about the diversity of neurons in S. mediterranea. There are several lines of evidence that support the presence of glutamatergic and glycinergic neurons, including the following. The glutamate receptor agonists NMDA and AMPA both produce seizure-like behaviors in S. mediterranea that are blocked by the application of glutamate receptor antagonists MK-801 and DNQX (which antagonize NMDA and AMPA glutamate receptors, respectively; Rawls et al., 2009). scRNA-Seq data indicates that neurons in S. mediterranea express a vesicular glutamate transporter, a kainite-type glutamate receptor, a glycine receptor, and a glycine transporter (Brunet Avalos and Sprecher, 2021; Wyss et al., 2022). Two AMPA glutamate receptors, GluR1 and GluR2, are known to be expressed in the CNS of another planarian species, D. japonica (Cebria et al., 2002). Likewise, there is abundant evidence for the presence of peptidergic neurons in S. mediterranea (Collins et al., 2010; Fraguas et al., 2012; Ong et al., 2016; Wyss et al., 2022; among others) and in D. japonica (Shimoyama et al., 2016). For these reasons, the authors should not assume that all neurons can be assayed using the five markers that they selected. The situation is made more complex by the fact that many neurons in S. mediterranea appear to produce more than one neurotransmitter/modulator/peptide (Brunet Avalos and Sprecher, 2021; Wyss et al., 2022), which is common among animals (Vaaga et al., 2014; Brunet Avalos and Sprecher, 2021). However the published literature indicates that there are substantial populations of glutamatergic, glycinergic, and peptidergic neurons in S. mediterranea that do not produce other classes of neurotransmission molecule (Brunet Avalos and Sprecher, 2021; Wyss et al., 2022). Thus it seems likely that the neuronpool will miss many neurons that only produce glutamate, glycine or a neuropeptide.

      In response to your comments, we agree that our initial statement regarding the "neuron pool" overstated the extent of neuronal coverage provided by the five selected markers. We have revised the sentence as “The combination of these five types of neurons constitutes a neuron pool that enables the labeling of most of the neurons throughout the entire body, including the eyes, brain, and pharynx”.

      Furthermore, we chose the five neurotransmitter systems (cholinergic, GABAergic, octopaminergic, dopaminergic, and serotonergic) based on their well-characterized roles in planarian neurobiology and the availability of reliable markers. However, we acknowledge the limitations of this approach and recognize that it does not encompass all neuron types, particularly those involved in glutamatergic, glycinergic, and peptidergic signaling, which have been documented in S. mediterranea. We have also added the content about other neuron types in our revised results section “Additionally, the neuron system of S. mediterranea is complex which characterized by considerable diversity among glutamatergic, glycinergic, and peptidergic neurons in planarians and many neurons in S. mediterranea express more than one neurotransmitter or neuropeptide, which adds further complexity to the system. We used five markers for a proof of concept illustration. By employing Fluorescence in Situ Hybridization (FISH), we successfully visualized a variety of planarian neurons, including cholinergic (chat<sup>+</sup>), serotonergic (tph<sup>+</sup>), octopaminergic (tbh<sup>+</sup>), GABAergic (gad<sup>+</sup>), and dopaminergic (th<sup>+</sup>) neurons based on their well-characterized roles in planarian neurobiology and the availability of reliable markers. (Figure S2A, Supplemental video 2) (Currie et al., 2016). The combination of these five types of neurons constitutes a neuron pool that enables the labeling of most of the neurons throughout the entire body, including the eyes, brain, and pharynx (Figure 1B).”

      comment 2: The authors use their technique to image the neural network of the CNS using antibodies raised vs. Arrestin, Synaptotagmin, and phospho-Ser/Thr. They document examples of both contralateral and ipsilateral projections from the eyes to the brain in the optic chiasma (Figure 1C-F). These data all seem to be drawn from a single animal in which there appears to be a greater than normal number of nerve fiber defasciculatations. It isn't clear how well their technique works for fibers that remain within a nerve tract or the brain. The markers used to image neural networks are broadly expressed, and it's possible that most nerve fibers are too densely packed (even after expansion) to allow for image segmentation. The authors also show a close association between estrella-positive glial cells and nerve fibers in the optic chiasma.

      Thank you for your detailed feedback. While we did not perform segmentation of all neuron fibers, we were able to segment more isolated fibers that were not densely packed within the neural tracts. We use 120 nm resolution to segment neurons along the three axes. Our data show the presence of both contralateral and ipsilateral projections of visual neurons. Although Figure 1C-F shows data from one planarian, we imaged three independent specimens to confirm the consistency of these observations. In the revised manuscript, we have included a discussion on the limitations of TLSM in reconstructing neural networks. In the discussion part, we added “It should be noted that the current resolution for our segmentation may be limited when resolving fibers within densely packed regions of the nerve tracts”.

      comment 3: The authors count all cell types, neuron pool neurons, and neurons of each class assayed. They find that the cell number to body volume ratio remains stable during homeostasis (Figure S3C), and that the brain volume steadily increases with increasing body volume (Figure S3E). They also observe that the proportion of neurons to total body cells is higher in worms 2-6 mm in length than in worms 7-9 mm in length (Figure 2D, S3F). They find that the rate at which four classes of neurons (GABAergic, octopaminergic, dopaminergic, serotonergic) increase relative to the total body cell number is constant (Figure S3G-J). They write: "Since the pattern of cholinergic neurons is the major cell population in the brain, these results suggest that the above observation of the non-linear dynamics between neurons and cell numbers is likely from the cholinergic neurons." This conclusion should not be reached without first directly counting the number of cholinergic neurons and total body cells. Given that glutamatergic, glycinergic, and peptidergic neurons were not counted, it also remains possible that the non-linear dynamics are due (in part or in whole) to one or more of these populations.

      We have revised the statement into “These results suggest that the above observation of the non-linear dynamics between neuron and total cell number is not likely from the octopaminergic, GABAergic, dopaminergic, and serotonergic neurons. Since our neuron pool may not include glutamatergic, glycinergic, and peptidergic neurons, the non-linear dynamics may be from cholinergic neurons or other neurons not included in our staining.”

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The proprietary nature of the microscope, protected by a patent, limits the technical details provided, making the method hard to reproduce in other labs.

      Thank you for your comment. We understand the importance of reproducibility and transparency in scientific research. We would like to point out that the detailed design and technical specifications of the TLSM are publicly available in our published work: Chen et al., Cell Reports, 2020. Additionally, the protocol for C-MAP, including the specific experimental steps, is comprehensively described in the methods section of this paper. We believe that these resources should provide sufficient information for other labs to replicate the method.

      (2) The resolution of the analyses is mostly limited to the cellular level, which does not fully leverage the advantages of expansion microscopy. Previous applications of expansion microscopy have revealed finer nanostructures in the planarian nervous system (see Fan et al. Methods in Cell Biology 2021; Wang et al. eLife 2021). It is unclear whether the current protocol can achieve a comparable resolution.

      Thank you for raising this important point. The strength of our C-MAP protocol lies in its fluorescence-protective nature and user convenience. Notably, the sample can be expanded up to 4.5-fold linearly without the need for heating or proteinase digestion, which helps preserve fluorescence signals. In addition, the entire expansion process can be completed within 48 hours. While our current analysis focused on cellular-level structures, our method can achieve comparable or better resolution and we will add this information in the revised manuscript as “It is important to point out that the strength of our C-MAP protocol lies in its fluorescence-protective nature and user convenience. Notably, the sample can be expanded up to 4.5-fold linearly without the need for heating or proteinase digestion, which helps preserve fluorescence signals. In addition, the entire expansion process can be completed within 48 hours. Based on our research requirement, two spatial resolutions were adopted to image expanded planarians, 2×2×5 μm<sup>3</sup> and 0.5×0.5×1.6 μm<sup>3</sup>. The resolution can be further improved to 500 nm and 120 nm, respectively.”

      (3) The data largely corroborate past observations, while the novel claims are insufficiently substantiated.

      A few major issues with the claims:

      Line 303-304: While 6G10 is a widely used antibody to label muscle fibers in the planarian, it doesn't uniformly mark all muscle types (Scimone at al. Nature 2017). For a more complete view of muscle fibers, it is important to use a combination of antibodies targeting different fiber types or a generic marker such as phalloidin. This raises fundamental concerns about all the conclusions drawn from Figures 4 and 6 about differences between various muscle types. Additionally, the authors should cite the original paper that developed the 6G10 antibody (Ross et al. BMC Developmental Biology 2015).

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments and acknowledge that 6G10 does not uniformly label all muscle fiber types. We agree that this limitation should be recognized in the interpretation of our results. We have revised the manuscript to explicitly state the limitations of using 6G10 alone for muscle fiber labeling and highlight the need for additional markers. We have included the following statement in the Results section: “It is noted that previous studies reported that 6G10 does not label all body wall muscles equivalently with the limitation of predominantly labeling circular and diagonal fibers (Scimone et al., 2017; Ross et al., 2015). Our observation may be limited by this preference”. We would also clarify that the primary objective of our study was to demonstrate the application of our 3D tissue reconstruction method in addressing traditional research questions. Nonetheless, we agree that expanding the labeling strategy in future studies would allow for a more thorough investigation of muscle fiber diversity. Relevant citations have been properly revised and updated.

      (4) Lines 371-379: The claim that DV muscles regenerate into longitudinal fibers lacks evidence. Furthermore, previous studies have shown that TFs specifying different muscle types (DV, circular, longitudinal, and intestinal) both during regeneration and homeostasis are completely different (Scimone et al., Nature 2017 and Scimone et al., Current Biology 2018). Single-cell RNAseq data further establishes the existence of divergent muscle progenitors giving rise to different muscle fibers. These observations directly contradict the authors' claim, which is only based on images of fixed samples at a coarse time resolution.

      Thank you for your valuable feedback. Our intent was not to suggest that DV muscles regenerate into longitudinal fibers. Our observations focused on the wound site, where DV muscle fibers appear to reconnect, and longitudinal fibers, along with other muscle types, gradually regenerate to restore the structure of the injured area. We have revised the our statement as:“During the regeneration process, DV muscle fibers reconnect at the wound site, with longitudinal fibers and other muscle types gradually restoring the structure at the anterior tip and later integrating with circular and diagonal fibers through small DV fiber branches (Figure S5O1-O3).”

      (5) Line 423: The manuscript lacks evidence to claim glia guide muscle fiber branching.

      We agree with your concerns that our statement may be overestimated. We have removed this statement from the revised version. Instead, we focused on describing our observations of the connections between glial cells and muscle fibers. We have revised the section as follows: “Considering the interaction between glial and muscle cells, the localization of estrella<sup>+</sup> glia and muscle fibers is further investigated. By dual-staining of anti-Phospho (Ser/Thr) and 6G10 in inr-1 RNAi and β-catenin-1 RNAi planarians, we found that the morphologies of neurons are normal, and they have close contact with muscle fibers (Figure 6D, E). However, by dual staining of estrella and 6G10, we found that the structure of glial cells is star-shaped in egfp RNAi planarian, however, glial cells in inr-1 RNAi and β-catenin-1 RNAi planarians have shorter cytoplasmic projections, and their sizes are smaller, lacking the major projection onto the muscles (Figure 6D, E, Figure S6E-K). Especially, in the posterior head of β-catenin-1 RNAi planarians, the glial cell has few axons and can hardly connect with muscle fibers (Figure 6E). These results indicated that proper neuronal guidance and muscle fiber distribution could potentially contribute to facilitating accurate glial-to-muscle projections.

      (6) Lines 432/478: The conclusion about neuronal and muscle guidance on glial projections is similarly speculative, lacking functional evidence. It is possible that the morphological defects of estrella+ cells after bcat1 RNAi are caused by Wnt signaling directly acting on estrella+ cells independent of muscles or neurons.

      We understand that this approach is insufficient and we have revised the this section as follows: “Further investigation is required to distinguish the cell-autonomous and non-autonomous effects of inr-1 RNAi and β-catenin-1 RNAi on muscle and glial cells.”

      (7) Finally, several technical issues make the results difficult to interpret. For example, in line 125, cell boundaries appear to be determined using nucleus images; in line 136, the current resolution seems insufficient to reliably trace neural connections, at least based on the images presented.

      We use two setups for imaging cells and neuron projections. For cellular resolution imaging, we utilized a 1× air objective with a numerical aperture (NA) of 0.25 and a working distance of 60 mm (OLYMPUS MV PLAPO). The voxel size used was 0.8×0.8×2.5 μm<sup>3</sup>. This configuration resulted in a resolution of 2×2×5 μm<sup>3</sup> and a spatial resolution of 0.5×0.5×1.25 μm<sup>3</sup> with 4.5× isotropic expansion. Alternatively, for sub-cellular imaging, we employed a 10×0.6 SV MP water immersion objective with 0.8 NA and a working distance of 8 mm (OLYMPUS). The voxel size used in this configuration was 0.26×0.26×0.8 μm<sup>3</sup>. As a result of this configuration, we achieved a resolution of 0.5×0.5×1.6 μm<sup>3</sup> and a spatial resolution of 0.12×0.12×0.4 μm<sup>3</sup> with a 4.5× isotropic expansion. The higher resolution achieved with sub-cellular imaging allows us to observe finer structures and trace neural connections.

      Regarding your question about cell boundaries, we have revised the manuscript to specify that the boundaries we identified are those of each nucleus.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The work would have been strengthened by a more careful consideration of previous literature. Many papers directly relevant to this work were not cited. Such omissions do the authors a disservice because in some cases, they fail to consider relevant information that impacts the choice of reagents they have used or the conclusions they are drawing.

      For example, when describing the antibody they use to label muscles (monoclonal 6G10), they do not cite the paper that generated this reagent (Ross et al PMCID: PMC4307677), and instead, one of the papers they do cite (Cebria 2016) that does not mention this antibody. Ross et al reported that 6G10 does not label all body wall muscles equivalently, but rather "predominantly labels circular and diagonal fibers" (which is apparent in Figure S5A-D of the manuscript being reviewed here). For this reason, the authors of the paper showing different body wall muscle populations play different roles in body patterning (Scimone et al 2017, PMCID: PMC6263039, also not cited in this paper) used this monoclonal in combination with a polyclonal antibody to label all body wall muscle types. Because their "pan-muscle" reagent does not label all muscle types equivalently, it calls into question their quantification of the different body wall muscle populations throughout the manuscript. It does not help matters that their initial description of the body wall muscle types fails to mention the layer of thin (inner) longitudinal muscles between the circular and diagonal muscles (Cebria 2016 and citations therein).

      Ipsilateral and contralateral projections of the visual axons were beautifully shown by dye-tracing experiments (Okamoto et al 2005, PMID: 15930826). This paper should be cited when the authors report that they are corroborating the existence of ipsilateral and contralateral projections.

      Thank you for your feedback. We have incorporated these citations and clarifications into the revised manuscript. We acknowledge the limitations of this approach and have added a statement for this limitation in the revised manuscript “It is noted that previous studies reported that 6G10 does not label all body wall muscles equivalently with the limitation of predominantly labeling circular and diagonal fibers (Scimone et al., 2017; Ross et al., 2015). Our observation may be limited by this preference.”

      (2) The proportional decrease of neurons with growth in S. mediterranea was shown by counting different cell types in macerated planarians (Baguna and Romero, 1981; https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/BF00026179) and earlier histological observations cited there. These results have also been validated by single-cell sequencing (Emili et al, bioRxiv 2023, https://www.biorxiv.org/content/10.1101/2023.11.01.565140v). Allometric growth of the planaria tail (the tail is proportionately longer in large vs small planaria) can explain this decrease in animal size. The authors never really discuss allometric growth in a way that would help readers unfamiliar with the system understand this.

      Thank you for your feedback. We have incorporated these citations and clarifications into the revised manuscript “These findings provide evidence to support the previous prediction and consistency between different planarian species (Baguñà et al., 1981; Emili et al.,2023). Because the tail is proportionately longer in large than in small planarians, the allometric growth of the planarians can be one possibility for this decrease along with the increase in animal size. The phenomenon may also suggest the existence of a threshold in the increase of planarian neuron numbers, which may ultimately contribute to some physiological changes, such as planarian fission.”

      (3) In some cases, the authors draw stronger conclusions than their results warrant. The authors claim that they are showing glial-muscle interactions, however, they do not provide any images of triple-stained samples labeling muscle, neurons, and glia, so it is impossible for the reader to judge whether the glial cells are interacting directly with body wall muscles or instead with the well-described submuscular nerve plexus. Their conclusion that neurons are unaffected by beta-cat or inr-1 RNAi based on anti-phospho-Ser/Thr staining (Fig. 6E) is unconvincing. They claim that during regeneration "DV muscles initially regenerate into longitudinal fibers at the anterior tip" (line 373). They provide no evidence for such switching of muscle cell types, so it is unclear why they say this.

      We acknowledge that some of our conclusions were overclaimed given the current data, and we appreciate the opportunity to clarify and refine these claims in the revised manuscript. Due the technique reason, we have not achieved the triple-staining to address this concern. We hope to make a progress in our future studies. Regarding the statement that "DV muscles initially regenerate into longitudinal fibers at the anterior tip" (line 373), as addressed in our previous response, this statement was unclear. Our intent was not to imply that DV muscles switch into longitudinal fibers. Instead, we observed that muscle fibers reconnect at the wound site, with longitudinal fibers and other muscle types gradually restoring the structure. We have revised this section: “During the regeneration process, DV muscle fibers reconnect at the wound site, with longitudinal fibers and other muscle types gradually restoring the structure at the anterior tip and later integrating with circular and diagonal fibers through small DV fiber branches (Figure S5O1-O3).”

      (4) The authors show how their automated workflow compares to manual counts using PI-stained specimens (Figure S1T). I may have missed it, but I do not recall seeing a similar ground truth comparison for their muscle fiber counting workflow. I mention this because the segmented image of the posterior muscles in Figure 4I seems to be missing the vast majority of circular fibers visible to the naked eye in the original image.

      Thank you for raising this important point. We have included a ground truth comparison of our automated muscle fiber segmentation with the original image in the revised Figure S6. The original Figure S6 has been changed as Figure S7. Regarding the observation of missing circular fibers in Figure 4I, we agree that the segmentation appears to have missed a significant number of circular fibers in this particular image. This may have been due to limitations in the current parameters of the segmentation algorithm, especially in distinguishing fibers in regions of varying intensity or overlap.

      (5) It is unclear why the abstract says, "We found the rate of neuron cell proliferation tends to lag..." (line 25). The authors did not measure proliferation in this work and neurons do not proliferate in planaria.

      Thank you for pointing out this mistake. What we intended to convey was the increase in neuron number during homeostasis. We have revised the abstract “We found that the increase in neuron cell number tends to lag behind the rapid expansion of somatic cells during the later phase of homeostasis.”

      (6) It is unclear what readers are to make of the measurements of brain lobe angles. Why is this a useful measurement and what does it tell us?

      The measurement of brain lobe angles is intended to provide a quantitative assessment of the growth and morphological changes of the planarian brain during regeneration. Additionally, the relevance of brain lobe angles has been explored in previous studies, such as Arnold et al., Nature, 2016, further supporting its use as a meaningful parameter.

      (7) The authors repeatedly say that this work lets them investigate planarians at the single-cell level, but they don't really make the case that they are seeing things that haven't already been described at the single-cell level using standard confocal microscopy.

      Thank you for your comment. We agree that single-cell level imaging has been previously achieved in planarians using conventional confocal microscopy. However, our goal was to extend the application of expansion microscopy by combining C-MAP with tiling light sheet microscopy (TLSM), which allows for faster and high-resolution 3D imaging of whole-mount planarians. We have added in the discussion section: “This combination offers several key advantages over standard techniques. For example, it enables high-throughput imaging across entire organisms with a level of detail and speed that is not easily achieved using confocal methods. This approach allows us to investigate the planarian nervous system at multiple developmental and regenerative stages in a more comprehensive manner, capturing large-scale structures while preserving fine cellular details. The ability to rapidly image whole planarians in 3D with this resolution provides a more efficient workflow for studying complex biological processes.”

    1. It’s important to understand that the Question Library stores questions separately from the quizzes in D2L Brightspace. Questions are not automatically copied to the Question Library when they are imported to or created in a quiz. Therefore, it’s a good idea to import any questions to the Question Library if they are not already there so that you have a backup in case a quiz is deleted. Step 1 Click on the name of the section or subsection to which you would like to import the questions. Step 2 Click Import > Browse Existing Questions. Step 3 Change the Source to the quiz you would like to import the questions from. Step 4 The list of questions will appear on the page. Check the box next to the questions or sections you would like to import, or check the box at the top to select them all. Step 5 Click Import when you have finished selecting your questions. Step 6 Repeat steps 1-5 until you have finished copying your quiz questions into the Question Library. Step 7 Check to make sure that the sections and questions are organized in the Question Library as you would like them and move sections/questions as needed. > Done Editing Questions

      Something doesn't seem right here. Should this be the two column with grey shaded boxes style?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The chromophore molecule of animal and microbial rhodopsins is retinal which forms a Schiff base linkage with a lysine in the 7-th transmembrane helix. In most cases, the chromophore is positively charged by protonation of the Schiff base, which is stabilized by a negatively charged counterion. In animal opsins, three sites have been experimentally identified, Glu94 in helix 2, Glu113 in helix 3, and Glu181 in extracellular loop 2, where a glutamate acts as the counterion by deprotonation. In this paper, Sakai et al. investigated molecular properties of anthozoan-specific opsin II (ASO-II opsins), as they lack these glutamates. They found an alternative candidate, Glu292 in helix 7, from the sequences. Interestingly, the experimental data suggested that Glu292 is not the direct counterion in ASO-II opsins. Instead, they found that ASO-II opsins employ a chloride ion as the counterion. In the case of microbial rhodopsin, a chloride ion serves as the counterion of light-driven chloride pumps. This paper reports the first observation of a chloride ion as the counterion in animal rhodopsin. Theoretical calculation using a QM/MM method supports their experimental data. The authors also revealed the role of Glu292, which serves as the counterion in the photoproduct, and is involved in G protein activation.

      The conclusions of this paper are well supported by data, while the following aspects should be considered for the improvement of the manuscript.

      (1) Information on sequence alignment only appears in Figure S2, not in the main figures. Figure S2 is too complicated by so many opsins and residue positions. It will be difficult for general readers to follow the manuscript because of such an organization. I recommend the authors show key residues in Figure 1 by picking up from Figure S2.

      (2) Halide size dependence. The authors observed spectral red-shift for larger halides. Their observation is fully coincident with the chromophore molecule in solution (Blatz et al. Biochemistry 1972), though the isomeric states are different (11-cis vs all-trans). This suggests that a halide ion is the hydrogen-bonding acceptor of the Schiff base N-H group in solution and ASO-II opsins. A halide ion is not the hydrogen-bonding acceptor in the structure of halorhodopsin, whose halide size dependence is not clearly correlated with absorption maxima (Scharf and Engelhard, Biochemistry 1994). These results support their model structure (Figure 4), and help QM/MM calculations.

      (3) QM/MM calculations. According to Materials and Methods, the authors added water molecules to the structure and performed their calculations. However, Figure 4 does not include such water molecules, and no information was given in the manuscript. In addition, no information was given for the chloride binding site (contact residues) in Figure 4. More detailed information should be shown with additional figures in Figure SX.

      (4) Figure 5 clearly shows much lower activity of E292A than that of WT, whose expression levels are unclear. How did the authors normalize (or not normalize) expression levels in this experiment?

      (5) The authors propose the counterion switching from a chloride ion to E292 upon light activation. A schematic drawing on the chromophore, a chloride ion, and E292 (and possible surroundings) in Antho2a and the photoproduct will aid readers' understanding.

    1. Briefing Document : Analyse des enjeux et perspectives de l'école inclusive en France

      Ce document de briefing synthétise les principaux thèmes, idées et faits saillants issus de l'émission "L'école inclusive au périscope".

      L'émission a exploré l'évolution, les enjeux, les défis et les perspectives de l'école inclusive en France, en s'appuyant sur l'expertise d'acteurs clés du secteur.

      Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :

      1. Évolution Historique de l'École Inclusive en France : Un Long Cheminement

      • L'idée d'une école inclusive est le fruit d'une longue évolution historique en France.
      • Début du 20ème siècle : Création de classes spécialisées, perçue rétrospectivement comme une forme d'exclusion des enfants handicapés ("une école de la séparation").
      • 1975 : Étape de l'intégration des enfants en situation de handicap dans le milieu ordinaire avec une loi importante. Cependant, cette loi n'a qu'un impact limité initialement.
      • 2005 : Loi marquant un tournant fondamental. Deux changements majeurs sont introduits :
      • La notion de handicap évolue : elle n'est plus uniquement liée à la personne mais aussi au contexte.
      • La gestion de l'accompagnement est confiée à la Maison Départementale des Personnes Handicapées (MDPH), auparavant relevant uniquement de l'Éducation Nationale.
      • Ces évolutions ont fait émerger trois droits fondamentaux :
      • Le droit de vivre parmi les autres.
      • Le droit de participer sans exclusion à la vie collective.
      • Le droit de décider de sa vie et de choisir son projet de vie.
      • Confirmations législatives :2013 (Loi de refondation pour l'école) : Inscrit la notion d'école inclusive dans le code de l'éducation et établit la nécessité de la réaliser (obligation de résultat).
      • 2019 (Loi pour une école de la confiance) : Réaffirme le principe de l'école inclusive, précise de nombreux points, notamment :
      • Le droit à une scolarité pour tous les enfants.
      • L'institution des Pôles Inclusifs d'Accompagnement Localisés (PIAL) pour un accompagnement au plus près des enfants.
      • La favorisation de la coopération avec le médico-social.
      • La création d'un service départemental de l'école inclusive.

      2. L'École Inclusive dans un Cadre International : Un Mouvement Global

      • Le mouvement inclusif n'est pas spécifique à la France et s'inscrit dans un cadre international depuis une trentaine d'années.
      • 1994 : Déclaration de Salamanque. La France, avec de nombreux autres pays, réfléchit à la question des besoins éducatifs spéciaux et émerge l'idée de construire une "école pour tous", allant au-delà de la seule question du handicap pour inclure tous les enfants à risque d'exclusion.
      • Début des années 2000 : UNESCO. Publication de principes directeurs en faveur de l'inclusion, insistant sur l'idée de processus et s'adressant à tous les élèves, pas seulement ceux en situation de handicap.
      • 2010 : Convention relative aux droits des personnes handicapées (ratifiée par la France). Pose le principe d'accessibilité (pas seulement physique mais aussi aux services et systèmes de communication), engageant la France à rendre son école accessible. Cette convention a une valeur juridique supérieure aux lois nationales.

      3. Bilan et Points de Blocage Depuis 2005 : Entre Avancées et Défis Persistants

      • Évolutions Positives :Augmentation significative du nombre d'enfants en situation de handicap scolarisés en milieu ordinaire (environ 500 000, dont près de 90% en classes ordinaires).
      • Amélioration de l'accueil avec des structures médico-sociales et des classes spécialisées plus ouvertes (passage de l'intégration à l'inclusion).
      • Développement de l'accompagnement humain, qui a permis l'accueil de nombreux enfants.
      • Points de Blocage et Défis :Accompagnement Humain : Développement exponentiel parfois peu maîtrisé (statuts, salaires, conditions de travail).
      • Déséquilibre Accessibilité/Compensation : La France a peut-être trop mis l'accent sur la compensation (accompagnement humain) au détriment de l'accessibilité de l'environnement scolaire.
      • Relation Médico-Social/École : Questionnement et retard de la France selon l'ONU quant au rapprochement entre ces deux secteurs.
      • Relation MDPH/Éducation Nationale : Nécessité d'amélioration et fortes disparités territoriales en termes de délais et d'accueil.

      4. Engagements Internationaux et Réalités Nationales : Un Décalage Persistant

      • Bien qu'il y ait des évolutions quantitatives (nombre d'élèves scolarisés, modalités), la France peine à répondre pleinement à ses engagements internationaux, notamment en matière d'accessibilité et de réduction des exclusions.
      • Rapport de l'ONU (2017) : Pointe la nécessité pour la France de passer d'une approche individuelle compensatrice à une approche collective de mise en accessibilité du système éducatif et enjoint la fermeture des établissements spécialisés.
      • D'autres rapports d'inspections générales vont dans le même sens.
      • La construction de l'école inclusive est un "processus transformatif" visant à faire évoluer le système pour accueillir a priori tous les élèves et leur permettre de prendre leur place.

      5. La Minute Juris : Cadre Législatif et Évolutions du Droit

      • Principe d'inclusion scolaire (devenu scolarisation inclusive) : L'école doit s'adapter à l'élève, et non l'inverse. Ce droit à l'éducation a une valeur constitutionnelle et est exigible de la collectivité.
      • Obligation de l'État : Assurer une formation scolaire aux enfants présentant un handicap, avec les moyens financiers et humains nécessaires à la scolarisation en milieu ordinaire. Jusqu'en 1975, l'obligation scolaire n'était pas effective pour ces enfants.
      • Responsabilité de l'État : La justice administrative reconnaît l'obligation légale de l'État d'offrir une prise en charge éducative au moins équivalente à celle du milieu ordinaire, adaptée aux besoins spécifiques. Le défaut de scolarisation d'un enfant handicapé engage la responsabilité de l'État.
      • Scolarisation en établissement de référence : Principe de proximité, l'orientation en établissement spécialisé ne se fait qu'en cas de besoin et avec l'accord des parents.
      • Collaboration Médico-Sociale : Institutionnalisée par décret, avec des conventions précisant les modalités d'intervention.
      • Droit Créance des AESH : Reconnu par le Conseil d'État, la privation de scolarisation adaptée constituant une atteinte grave à une liberté fondamentale.
      • Questions de Genre (Élèves Trans) : Formalisation progressive du droit à l'éducation, axée sur :
      • Protection contre le harcèlement : Inclus dans les dispositifs généraux de lutte contre le harcèlement scolaire (lois de 2013 et 2022). Le harcèlement moral est reconnu comme atteinte à une liberté fondamentale.
      • Reconnaissance du droit : Respect du prénom d'usage choisi par l'élève (avec accord parental pour les mineurs) dans les documents internes. Aménagements pratiques possibles concernant les espaces d'intimité (simple possibilité, pas obligation de résultat).
      • Si la consécration juridique de l'inclusion ne fait aucun doute, sa pleine effectivité demeure un idéal.

      6. Témoignages de Terrain : Mise en Œuvre et Défis Concrets (Académie de Nantes)

      • Pilotage : Intégration de l'école inclusive dans le projet d'établissement, coordination des moyens, sensibilisation dès la rentrée, utilisation d'outils de communication (Pronote), adaptation aux dispositifs (PIAL), évaluations régulières. Rôle central du chef d'établissement.
      • Collaboration/Coopération/Coordination : Travail avec le médico-social (CESSAD), les familles (rendez-vous, entretiens), intégration des AESH à l'équipe éducative (participation aux ESS, conseils de classe, réunions). Rapprochement Rectorat/ARS au niveau académique (stratégies communes, unités d'enseignement externalisées, équipes mobiles d'appui à la scolarisation). Nécessité d'apprendre à travailler en intermétiers.
      • Maillage Territorial et Dispositifs d'Accompagnement : Complexité des niveaux d'intervention et diversité des territoires. Enjeu de rendre l'environnement accessible pour limiter le recours à la compensation. Expérimentation des pôles d'appui à la scolarité. Importance de la coopération avec les familles et de la lisibilité des dispositifs. Intégration des PIAL dans les établissements. Travail en réseau avec différents services.
      • Formation et Sensibilisation : Nombreuses formations déployées (AESH, enseignants, cadres). Nécessité de mieux former pour répondre à la diversité des besoins. Accent sur l'accessibilité plutôt que sur la connaissance exhaustive des troubles. Importance de la formation initiale et continue, ainsi que de la sensibilisation des personnels de service.

      7. Conclusion et Perspectives

      • Points Positifs : Engagement des personnels, augmentation du nombre d'enfants accueillis, engagement localisé.
      • Défis Majeurs : Augmentation continue du nombre d'enfants en situation de handicap à accueillir, nécessité d'améliorer la communication avec les familles (parcours perçu comme un "parcours du combattant").
      • Enjeux d'Accessibilité : Passer d'une logique de compensation individuelle à une logique d'accessibilité collective de l'environnement scolaire et pédagogique. Les mesures compensatoires peuvent parfois être sources d'obstacles supplémentaires.
      • Transformation Nécessaire : L'école inclusive nécessite une transformation réelle de l'école, impliquant une réflexion à tous les niveaux du système éducatif (politiques publiques, pilotage, établissement, pratiques pédagogiques) et une action conjointe des différents acteurs. Reconnaissance des "petits pas" quotidiens.
      • Ce briefing met en lumière la complexité et la richesse des débats autour de l'école inclusive en France, soulignant à la fois les progrès accomplis et les défis importants qui restent à relever pour garantir une éducation de qualité et véritablement inclusive pour tous les élèves.
    2. Voici un sommaire de la vidéo "L'école inclusive au périscope" avec des estimations de timestamps basées sur le déroulement de l'émission :

      • [0:00 - 1:15] Introduction de l'émission et des intervenants

        • Présentation de l'émission "Au Périscope" consacrée à l'école inclusive.
        • Introduction des quatre intervenants : Yannick Ten (Inspecteur général de l'éducation, du sport et de la recherche), Virginie Legal (Principale adjointe au collège Trémolière à Cholet), Stéphane Bertrou (Conseiller technique école inclusive pour la rectrice de l'académie de Nantes), et Frédéric Dupré (Maître de conférence à l'INSEI).
      • [1:15 - 2:00] Introduction à la thématique de l'école inclusive

        • Annonce d'une première partie consacrée aux enjeux et d'une seconde partie aux témoignages de terrain.
      • [2:00 - 4:25] Retour historique sur la thématique de l'école inclusive (Yannick Ten)

        • Début des années 1900 : Création de classes spécialisées perçue comme de l'exclusion.
        • 1975 : Étape de l'intégration des enfants en situation de handicap en milieu ordinaire (loi de 75).
        • 2005 : Loi posant véritablement les principes d'une école inclusive, avec deux changements majeurs : la notion de handicap liée au contexte et la gestion confiée à la Maison départementale des personnes handicapées (MDPH).
        • Émergence de trois droits : vivre parmi les autres, participer sans exclusion, et décider de sa vie.
        • 2013 (Loi de refondation pour l'école) et 2019 (Loi pour une école de la confiance) : Confirmation et précision du principe de l'école inclusive, obligation de résultat, institution des pôles inclusifs d'accompagnement localisés, coopération avec le médico-social, et création du service départemental de l'école inclusive.
      • [4:25 - 6:50] Vision internationale de l'école inclusive (Frédéric Dupré)

        • Mouvement inclusif global depuis une trentaine d'années.
        • 1994 : Déclaration de Salamanque sur les besoins éducatifs spéciaux et l'idée d'une école pour tous.
        • Début des années 2000 : Principes directeurs de l'UNESCO en faveur de l'inclusion.
        • 2010 : Ratification par la France de la Convention relative aux droits des personnes handicapées, principe d'accessibilité (non uniquement physique) et valeur juridique supérieure aux lois nationales.
      • [6:50 - 10:00] Évolutions depuis 2005 et points de blocage (Yannick Ten & Frédéric Dupré)

        • Évolutions positives : augmentation du nombre d'enfants en situation de handicap scolarisés en milieu ordinaire (environ 500 000, majoritairement à 90% en classes ordinaires), accueil amélioré avec des structures médico-sociales et des classes spécialisées plus ouvertes.
        • Point de blocage : l'accompagnement humain (développement exponentiel mais parfois non maîtrisé, questions de statuts, salaires, conditions de travail).
        • Déséquilibre entre accessibilité et compensation (la France n'a pas assez développé l'accessibilité).
        • Relation avec le médico-social qui pose question (retard de la France selon l'ONU).
        • Relation MDPH et Éducation Nationale à améliorer, avec de fortes disparités territoriales.
        • Engagement international : évolutions quantitatives mais nécessité de progresser sur l'accessibilité.
        • Rapports (ONU, inspections générales) pointant la nécessité de passer d'une approche compensatrice à une approche privilégiant l'accessibilité et enjoignant à fermer les établissements spécialisés.
        • La construction de l'école inclusive est un processus transformatif visant à accueillir a priori tous les élèves.
      • [10:00 - 11:05] La Minute Juris (Raphaël Mata duvgot)

        • Loi du 8 juillet 2013 intégrant l'inclusion scolaire dans le code de l'éducation.
        • Loi du 26 juillet 2019 (école de la confiance) transformant "inclusion scolaire" en "scolarisation inclusive" : ce n'est plus l'élève qui s'adapte à l'école, mais l'école qui s'adapte à l'élève.
        • Droit à l'éducation à valeur constitutionnelle.
        • Obligation pour l'État d'assurer l'égalité de traitement et des dispositions appropriées pour l'accès de chacun en fonction de ses besoins particuliers.
        • Focus sur les élèves souffrant d'un handicap : obligation de formation scolaire, moyens financiers et humains nécessaires à la scolarisation en milieu ordinaire (loi de 2005).
        • Responsabilité de l'État en cas de défaut de scolarisation adaptée.
        • Collaboration avec le secteur médico-social institutionnalisée (décret de 2009).
        • Droit créance à la charge de l'éducation nationale pour les AESH (ordonnance de 2010).
        • Focus sur les questions de genre et le droit à l'éducation des élèves trans : protection contre le harcèlement (lois de 2013 et 2022), reconnaissance du droit (circulaire Blanquer sur le prénom d'usage), aménagements pratiques (usage des espaces d'intimité).
        • La pleine effectivité de l'inclusivité demeure un idéal.
      • [11:05 - 12:10] Transition vers les témoignages de terrain

        • Introduction de la seconde partie avec Stéphane Bertrou et Virginie Legal.
      • [12:10 - 13:10] Orientations nationales et mise en œuvre locale (Stéphane Bertrou)

        • L'école inclusive comme question socialement vive, nécessitant un cadrage du supranational au national.
        • Conférence nationale du handicap de 2023 (CNH 23) et ses 10 engagements, dont l'école pour tous.
        • Engagement dans l'acte 2 de l'école inclusive.
        • Déploiement sur le territoire de l'Académie de Nantes (cinq départements, environ 25 000 jeunes reconnus handicapés scolarisés en établissements ordinaires et 3 500 dans le médico-social).
        • Quatre thématiques pour le transfert du national au territoire : pilotage, travailler avec le médico-social, maillage territorial, et formation.
      • [13:10 - 14:00] Pilotage de l'école inclusive (Stéphane Bertrou & Virginie Legal)

        • Au niveau académique : projet académique intégrant l'école inclusive, création des services départementaux de l'école inclusive (SDUI) et des comités départementaux de suivi de l'école inclusive (CDSI).
        • Au niveau de l'établissement (Collège Trémolière) : intégration dans le projet d'établissement, rôle central du chef d'établissement, sessions de sensibilisation, utilisation de Pronote pour le partage d'informations, intégration des PIAL, évaluations régulières.
      • [14:00 - 16:00] Collaboration, coopération, coordination (Stéphane Bertrou & Virginie Legal)

        • Nécessité de "travailler avec" différents acteurs (médico-social, familles, PIAL).
        • Rapprochement rectorat-ARS, stratégies communes (troubles neurodéveloppementaux, unités d'enseignement autisme, dispositifs d'autorégulation).
        • Équipes mobiles d'appui à la scolarisation (EMAS).
        • Apprendre à travailler ensemble entre enseignement et médico-social, exemples de plateaux du médico-social implantés dans des établissements scolaires.
        • Dans l'établissement : collaboration avec les CESSAD et les familles, intégration des AESH à l'équipe éducative, rôle crucial du coordinateur ULIS.
      • [16:00 - 17:30] Réaction de Frédéric Dupré sur les pratiques effectives et la complexité

        • Constatation de la présence du vocabulaire inclusif.
        • Importance de regarder les pratiques effectives et leur correspondance aux enjeux d'accessibilité.
        • Évolution de la forme scolaire classique avec plusieurs professionnels travaillant ensemble.
        • Complexité des dispositifs et du travail conjoint (enseignant-AESH, etc.).
      • [17:30 - 18:00] Complexité des niveaux d'intervention et des dispositifs (Yannick Ten)

        • Complexité des niveaux d'intervention (académie, département, établissement, écoles) et nécessité d'une compréhension partagée.
        • Complexité des dispositifs (acronymes, etc.) pour les enseignants, les acteurs et les familles.
        • Importance de visualiser le parcours de l'élève de la maternelle au lycée.
        • Question de la mesure et de l'évaluation de l'autonomie progressive des enfants en situation de handicap.
      • [18:00 - 19:45] Maillage territorial et dispositifs d'accompagnement (Stéphane Bertrou & Virginie Legal)

        • Le maillage territorial en écho à la complexité et aux différents niveaux d'intervention, permettant de visualiser le parcours.
        • Enjeu premier : rendre l'environnement (spatial, classe, enseignement) accessible.
        • Pôle d'appui à la scolarité (expérimentation nationale) : concentration des regards pour rendre les établissements plus accessibles.
        • Nécessité pour l'Éducation Nationale d'apporter les réponses de premier niveau.
        • Coopération avec les familles, rendre lisible le parcours.
        • Dans l'établissement : intégration des PIAL, travail en réseau avec les établissements environnants et les services éducatifs et de soins, anticipation de la mise en place des pôles d'appui.
      • [19:45 - 22:40] Formation et sensibilisation des personnels (Stéphane Bertrou, Yannick Ten & Virginie Legal)

        • Importance de la formation face à la diversité des élèves.
        • Nombreuses formations déployées (AESH, enseignants, cadres) au niveau académique et départemental.
        • Accent mis sur l'accessibilité plutôt que sur la connaissance approfondie de chaque trouble.
        • Bémol de Yannick Ten : évolution positive des processus de formation mais insuffisance et écart entre intentions et réalité.
        • Nécessité de renforcer la formation initiale et continue, et de former les personnels de service et d'intervention des collectivités territoriales.
        • Dans l'établissement : importance accordée à la formation et à la sensibilisation de tous les personnels, sessions de sensibilisation dès la rentrée, réunions pluridisciplinaires, encouragement à la participation aux formations académiques et départementales, rôle central du chef d'établissement dans l'impulsion de cette dynamique.
      • [22:40 - 23:30] Autres aspects essentiels de l'école inclusive (Stéphane Bertrou)

        • Importance de la communication pour rendre l'existant lisible et mieux accueillir les familles.
        • Nécessité d'anticiper pour que l'école soit suffisamment accessible et éviter les demandes de compensation à la MDPH.
        • Enjeu des adaptations des pratiques pédagogiques, appui sur les ressources existantes (enseignants spécialisés), transformation réelle de l'école nécessaire.
      • [23:30 - 25:45] Conclusion (Yannick Ten & Frédéric Dupré)

        • Yannick Ten : engagement des personnels, augmentation du nombre d'enfants en situation de handicap accueillis (tendance à la hausse), importance de comprendre le "parcours du combattant" des familles.
        • Frédéric Dupré : la loi de 2005 évalue les besoins pour proposer des mesures compensatoires et non une mise en accessibilité de l'environnement, choix du système éducatif français s'appuyant sur l'accompagnement humain et les dispositifs "inclusifs", vigilance sur le fait que les mesures compensatoires peuvent être sources d'obstacles supplémentaires, importance de réfléchir à l'accessibilité (à l'école, pédagogique, didactique) à tous les échelons du système éducatif, reconnaissance des petits pas réalisés au quotidien, nécessité d'une action conjointe pour une école pour tous.
      • [25:45 - 28:30] La Minute Biblique (Sylvien Paul)

        • Présentation de ressources sur l'école inclusive : site education.gouv.fr, ouvrages (Agir pour les réussites scolaires, Inclusion scolaire dispositif et pratique pédagogique, L'autisme à l'école, Éducation inclusive privilège ou droit, Gouvernance et inclusion scolaire), revue (La Nouvelle Revue éducation et société inclusive), portail Canopé (Cap école inclusive), et les anciens numéros du Périscope.
      • [28:30 - Fin] Mot de la fin et annonce du prochain numéro

        • Remerciements aux invités et annonce du prochain numéro du Périscope le 11 mars sur le parcours de l'élève .
    1. Voici un sommaire de la vidéo "Le parcours de l'élève au périscope" avec des indications temporelles approximatives basées sur la structure du transcript :

      • [0:00 - 1:30] Introduction : Présentation de l'émission "Au Périscope" consacrée au parcours de l'élève, des intervenants (Jean-Marc Moulet, Philippe Montoya, Patrick Avogadro, Noémie Olympio) et du déroulement de l'émission (enjeux puis témoignages, séparés par la minute juris).

      • [1:30 - 3:20] Définition et enjeux du parcours de l'élève : Jean-Marc Moulet définit le parcours de l'élève comme tout ce qu'un élève vit à l'intérieur et à l'extérieur de l'école pour se construire, réussir son orientation et son insertion professionnelle. Il distingue cela des parcours éducatifs et souligne l'importance du parcours Avenir au collège.

      • [3:20 - 4:55] Différentes étapes du parcours : Évolution du parcours de l'élève de l'école primaire (soutien en classe) au collège (structures spécifiques comme les SEGPA, options) et au lycée (diversification des parcours au lycée professionnel et général/technologique).

      • [4:55 - 6:40] Accompagnement et objectifs du système éducatif : Le système éducatif accompagne les élèves dès la 4ème avec des heures d'orientation et un accompagnement personnalisé. L'objectif n'est pas uniquement l'insertion professionnelle mais aussi la formation de citoyens heureux et la diversification des possibles en tenant compte de l'origine sociale et des pressions de genre. Le socle commun inclut les compétences à s'orienter.

      • [6:40 - 8:15] Évolution des choix et enjeux économiques : Comparaison du nombre de filières aujourd'hui par rapport au passé, valorisation du lycée professionnel et liens avec les enjeux économiques et les métiers en tension. L'information sur l'orientation est déléguée aux régions pour tenir compte des spécificités économiques locales.

      • [8:15 - 9:55] Position de la recherche sur le parcours de l'élève : Noémie Olympio présente la vision de la recherche, axée sur les périodes charnières (aménagements précoces, 3ème et seconde) et la spécificité française d'un tronc commun jusqu'à 15 ans. Elle souligne les limites de cette uniformité et le déterminisme scolaire et social des trajectoires.

      • [9:55 - 13:05] Le panel de la DEP et les inégalités : Présentation du panel d'élèves de la DEP et des variables intéressantes : capital informationnel des familles, niveau d'aspiration et maintien des aspirations. Le phénomène de "refroidissement des aspirations" est mis en évidence, non toujours lié à la performance scolaire. Inégalités liées à la représentation de l'utilité des diplômes.

      • [13:05 - 14:20] Question sur l'évolution du tronc commun et le capital informationnel : Discussion sur un éventuel recul de l'âge du tronc commun et explication de la constitution du capital informationnel des familles (catégorie socio-professionnelle, rapport à la mobilité, stratégies éducatives).

      • [14:20 - 21:00] Minute Juris (Raphaël Mata duvignot) : Présentation des dispositifs administratifs qui ponctuent juridiquement le parcours de l'élève : socle commun de connaissances, compétences et de culture (article L 111-1), redoublement (article L 31-7, D 321-6, D 331-62), orientation scolaire (article D 331-2, L331-7, D331-31, D331-34), et classes et groupes spécifiques (article D 332-5, D 332-7, L12-1). Conclusion sur l'importance de l'adaptation du système.

      • [21:00 - 25:05] Table ronde - Expériences de terrain et inégalités territoriales : Patrick Avogadro évoque l'impact du territoire sur le parcours dès le primaire et les synergies avec les collectivités. Philippe Montoya souligne le rôle des projets éducatifs de territoire, des cordées de la réussite et des internats d'excellence pour lutter contre les inégalités et favoriser la mobilité. Exemple de l'action "écolier citoyen" à Toulouse.

      • [25:05 - 27:15] Forces nationales et mobilité : Jean-Marc Moulet présente les campus des métiers d'excellence (CMQ) comme un levier pour la mobilité et le lien avec l'économie locale, produisant des ressources pour les collèges.

      • [27:15 - 30:25] Enjeux liés au territoire (suite) et gommer les discriminations : Noémie Olympio développe les enjeux liés aux inégalités sociales et spatiales, le rôle du niveau de diplôme des parents sur la mobilité et les dispositifs comme les internats d'excellence et les cordées de la réussite. Elle met en garde contre la notion d'élève méritant et la rhétorique néolibérale. Jean-Marc Moulet aborde l'importance d'une découverte précoce des métiers dès la 5ème et cite des exemples d'actions menées dans les collèges pour élargir l'éventail des possibles et favoriser la mobilité.

      • [30:25 - 34:00] Découverte des métiers dans les établissements professionnels : Patrick Avogadro décrit les actions mises en place dans son lycée professionnel pour élargir les perspectives des élèves : découverte des métiers des parents, immersions en entreprise, mini-stages, stage de 3ème et stage de seconde. Objectif de passer de 15 à 45 métiers connus.

      • [34:00 - 37:00] Inclusion des élèves en situation de handicap et poursuite d'études : Philippe Montoya aborde les difficultés spécifiques de mobilité pour les élèves en situation de handicap et les initiatives pour favoriser leur autonomie. Il souligne le faible taux de poursuite d'études dans le supérieur et les actions menées au niveau de l'académie de Toulouse pour l'inclusion dans l'enseignement supérieur et professionnel.

      • [37:00 - 42:00] Découverte des métiers (suite) et formation des acteurs : Patrick Avogadro évoque le "soutien au parcours" et le parcours différencié en lycée professionnel, ainsi que les rencontres avec des professionnels et d'anciens élèves. Jean-Marc Moulet insiste sur l'impact déterminant de la rencontre avec des professionnels et cite une étude sur l'orientation des filles vers les sciences. Exemples d'actions locales. Noémie Olympio met en garde contre le paternalisme et le "refroidissement des aspirations" et souligne l'importance de données fiables (CREDOC).

      • [42:00 - 47:05] Partenaires pour l'accompagnement et formation des enseignants : Philippe Montoya présente les partenaires internes (psychologues EN, CIO, IEN) et externes (médecins EN, région, ONISEP). Il insiste sur la co-éducation avec les familles. Patrick Avogadro cite les professeurs principaux et les DDFPT. Jean-Marc Moulet évoque les compétences à s'orienter de l'ONISEP et la plateforme "Avenir", ainsi que les bureaux des entreprises et les associations. Noémie Olympio souligne l'importance du travail en équipe et en réseau (CMQ), la collaboration collège-lycée et lycée pro-enseignement supérieur, et l'impact de la gestion algorithmique sur l'autocensure.

      • [47:05 - 51:00] Conclusion et perspectives : Jean-Marc Moulet résume les points clés, soulignant la tendance à faciliter et accompagner les parcours, l'importance de ne pas se limiter à l'insertion professionnelle, la nécessité de développer la plasticité et l'enjeu du décrochage scolaire.

      • [51:00 - 54:00] Minute Biblie (Sylven Paul) : Présentation de ressources bibliographiques : rapports de l'Inspection générale (notamment sur la découverte des métiers au collège par Jean-Marc Moulet), articles de Noémie Olympio, et le site de l'ONISEP avec la plateforme "Avenir".

      • [54:00 - Fin] Conclusion de l'émission et remerciements.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Torro et al. presented CellDetective, an open-source software designed for a user-friendly execution of single-cell segmentation, tracking, and analysis of time-lapse microscopy data. The authors demonstrated the applications of the software by measuring NK cell spreading events acquired with reflection interference contrast microscopy (RICM), as well as detecting target cell death events and their interaction with neighboring NK cells in a multichannel widefield microscopy dataset.

      Strengths:

      The segmentation (StarDist, Cellpose) and tracking (bTrack) modules implemented were based on existing and published software packages. The authors added the event detection, classification, and analysis modules to enable an end-to-end time-lapse microscopy data processing and analysis pipeline, complete with a graphical user interface (GUI). This minimizes the coding experience required from the user. The documentation that accompanies CellDetective is also adequate.

      Weaknesses:

      Given that the software was designed to improve user experience, such an approach also limits its scope and functionality and is currently capable of handling very specific types of experiments. Additionally, this reviewer has also encountered many technical difficulties (see documented bugs/crashes below) that have prevented an extensive exploration of all the functionality of CellDetective.

      Specifics:

      (1) The software can only handle 2D 'widefield' time-lapse imaging datasets. It should be noted that many studies that examine cell-cell interactions in vitro also used confocal microscopy and acquired the time-lapse images in 3D z-stacks to enable the reconstruction of entire cell volumes from multiple optical sections along the z-axis.

      Given that almost all of the implemented segmentation (StarDist, Cellpose) and tracking (bTrack) packages already support the handling of 3D datasets, it is unclear why CellDetective was designed to only work with 2D datasets.

      As noted above, extending the support for 3D images would allow the scope and utility of this software to be further extended for imaging studies acquired in z-stacks. As an example, the dense clustering of effector cells in Figure 4 had prevented accurate segmentation due to the 2D nature of the experimental dataset. More importantly, support for a 3D dataset could also allow for the tracking of fluorescent protein-based sub-cellular as well as membrane protein localization during cell-cell interactions.

      Furthermore, it also widens the potential applicability for analyzing datasets from 3D organoid imaging and perhaps even intravital two-photon microscopy.

      (2) The software in its current form only allows the broad demarcation of the cells examined into two populations: targets and effectors. This limits the number of cell populations that can be examined for their interactions. It might be more useful to just allow multiple user-defined populations instead of restricting the populations to target and effector cells only.

      (3) Similarly, subsetting of each of the populations could be made more intuitive. Although it is possible to define subsets of cells using the "Custom classification" function under the "Measure" module with user-defined parameters, visualization of multiple groups remains unintuitive and it appears that only one custom classified group can be selected and visualized at any given time in the Signal Annotator under Measurement instead of allowing visualization of multiple (custom defined) groups of cells in different colors. It is also unclear how, if possible at all, to visualize a custom group of cells in the Signal Annotator under the Detect Events module.

      Software issues:

      (4) When initially tested on v1.3.9, the Segment module could not be initiated (with the error message AttributeError: 'WindowsPath' object has no attribute 'endswith' when attempting to run segmentation).<br /> Update: this has been fixed in v1.3.9.post4 dated February 7th, 2025.

      (5) Further testing was then performed by downgrading the software to v1.3.1. While testing the ADCC demo experiment (https://celldetective.readthedocs.io/en/latest/adcc-example.html), the workflow was stuck at attempts to initiate the Detect Events step:

      AssertionError: No signal matches with the requirements of the model ['dead_nuclei_channel_mean', 'area']. Please pass the signals manually with the argument selected_signals or add measurements. Abort.

      (Update: fixed in the latest v1.3.9.post4 version dated February 7th, 2025)

      (6) Random bugs causing the software to crash. Example: switching characteristic to 'status_color' in the Signal Annotator under Measurement caused the software to crash (v1.3.9.post4):

      TypeError: ufunc 'isnan' is not supported for the input types, and the inputs could not be safely coerced to any supported types according to the casting rule 'safe'

      (7) Overall, when exploring the functionality of the software, there have been multiple instances of software crashes when clicking/switching around to show different parameters, etc.

      This reviewer understands the difficulties and time involved in bug fixing and hopes that the experience could have been much smoother and that the software behaves much more stably in order to maximize its useability.

    2. Author response:

      In view of the suggestions of the referees, we wish to underline that a user can interact with celldetective at two levels: a non-coder can analyse data and train models without coding, but is necessarily offered pre-determined choices and flexibility. An advanced user however has practically limitless flexibility to extend the fully-open source celldetective, aided by its modularity and detailed manual.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Torro et al. presented CellDetective, an open-source software designed for a user-friendly execution of single-cell segmentation, tracking, and analysis of time-lapse microscopy data. The authors demonstrated the applications of the software by measuring NK cell spreading events acquired with reflection interference contrast microscopy (RICM), as well as detecting target cell death events and their interaction with neighboring NK cells in a multichannel widefield microscopy dataset.

      Strengths:

      The segmentation (StarDist, Cellpose) and tracking (bTrack) modules implemented were based on existing and published software packages. The authors added the event detection, classification, and analysis modules to enable an end-to-end time-lapse microscopy data processing and analysis pipeline, complete with a graphical user interface (GUI). This minimizes the coding experience required from the user. The documentation that accompanies CellDetective is also adequate.

      Weaknesses:

      Given that the software was designed to improve user experience, such an approach also limits its scope and functionality and is currently capable of handling very specific types of experiments. Additionally, this reviewer has also encountered many technical difficulties (see documented bugs/crashes below) that have prevented an extensive exploration of all the functionality of CellDetective.

      We apologize for the technical difficulties and bugs; the ones mentioned have been already corrected. New users have also tested the installation and reported it to be bug-free.

      We fully agree on the compromise that has to be found between user experience and versatility. We have already tested celldetective in other biological contexts, such as microbiology, but made a choice to showcase it in the article for immunological applications. We invite the reader to consult the software documentation and online examples to learn about more options.

      Specifics:

      (1) The software can only handle 2D 'widefield' time-lapse imaging datasets. It should be noted that many studies that examine cell-cell interactions in vitro also used confocal microscopy and acquired the time-lapse images in 3D z-stacks to enable the reconstruction of entire cell volumes from multiple optical sections along the z-axis.

      Given that almost all of the implemented segmentation (StarDist, Cellpose) and tracking (bTrack) packages already support the handling of 3D datasets, it is unclear why CellDetective was designed to only work with 2D datasets.

      As noted above, extending the support for 3D images would allow the scope and utility of this software to be further extended for imaging studies acquired in z-stacks. As an example, the dense clustering of effector cells in Figure 4 had prevented accurate segmentation due to the 2D nature of the experimental dataset. More importantly, support for a 3D dataset could also allow for the tracking of fluorescent protein-based sub-cellular as well as membrane protein localization during cell-cell interactions.

      Furthermore, it also widens the potential applicability for analyzing datasets from 3D organoid imaging and perhaps even intravital two-photon microscopy.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. Indeed, extension to 3-dimensions is a natural development, since we have chosen segmentation and tracking methods which are compatible with 3D. However, two important strengths of celldetective are: harnessing statistical power of cell populations together with multiplexing biological conditions, and dynamic analysis of fast events.

      For both, 2D is advantageous. Our own focus is on analyzing cellular events with minute time resolution, relevant in immunology. By our estimate (experience and literature), 3D timelapse acquisition would reduce the time resolution, as well as throughput (in terms of events and conditions) to below acceptable level. While we don’t envisage this upgrade in the immediate future, we encourage advanced users to contribute to further develop the open-source code in this direction. As a mitigation solution, a 2.5D approach on a flat sample by combining two z planes (in order to address issues of cell superposition for example), could be readily implemented with minimal change.

      (2) The software in its current form only allows the broad demarcation of the cells examined into two populations: targets and effectors. This limits the number of cell populations that can be examined for their interactions. It might be more useful to just allow multiple user-defined populations instead of restricting the populations to target and effector cells only.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. There is little architectural limitation to its implementation; this will be proposed in the future version. This updated version will allow more than two user-defined populations, labelled directly by the user, which will also facilitate the natural extension to more varied biological applications. Three-way interactions are much more complex, and, to our knowledge, not currently addressed by biologists. The interactions will for the moment be limited to 2 populations interactions, as multipartite ones involve a higher level of code modifications, not immediately envisaged.

      (3) Similarly, subsetting of each of the populations could be made more intuitive. Although it is possible to define subsets of cells using the "Custom classification" function under the "Measure" module with user-defined parameters, visualization of multiple groups remains unintuitive and it appears that only one custom classified group can be selected and visualized at any given time in the Signal Annotator under Measurement instead of allowing visualization of multiple (custom defined) groups of cells in different colors. It is also unclear how, if possible at all, to visualize a custom group of cells in the Signal Annotator under the Detect Events module.

      The simultaneous visualization of several classes poses problems in the choice of colors and symbols, and may render the tool difficult to use. The time propagation option in the classification tool allows to define event classes as opposed to groups, that are compatible with the Signal Annotator. For more complex classifications, a simple solution is to work with composite classifications, which are already supported by using logical AND/OR operators on the condition defining the class. We believe that this feature is sufficient to address this issue.

      Software issues:

      (4) When initially tested on v1.3.9, the Segment module could not be initiated (with the error message AttributeError: 'WindowsPath' object has no attribute 'endswith' when attempting to run segmentation).

      Update: this has been fixed in v1.3.9.post4 dated February 7th, 2025.

      (5) Further testing was then performed by downgrading the software to v1.3.1. While testing the ADCC demo experiment (https://celldetective.readthedocs.io/en/latest/adcc-example.html), the workflow was stuck at attempts to initiate the Detect Events step:

      AssertionError: No signal matches with the requirements of the model ['dead_nuclei_channel_mean', 'area']. Please pass the signals manually with the argument selected_signals or add measurements. Abort.

      (Update: fixed in the latest v1.3.9.post4 version dated February 7th, 2025)

      (6) Random bugs causing the software to crash. Example: switching characteristic to 'status_color' in the Signal Annotator under Measurement caused the software to crash (v1.3.9.post4):

      TypeError: ufunc 'isnan' is not supported for the input types, and the inputs could not be safely coerced to any supported types according to the casting rule 'safe'

      (7) Overall, when exploring the functionality of the software, there have been multiple instances of software crashes when clicking/switching around to show different parameters, etc.

      This reviewer understands the difficulties and time involved in bug fixing and hopes that the experience could have been much smoother and that the software behaves much more stably in order to maximize its useability.

      We apologize again for the various technical issues encountered during the review process, and thank the reviewer for mentioning that several bugs were already fixed in the last software release. The open source and software maintenance protocol enabled by github should help to resolve any further emerging issue.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Immune assays enable the analysis of immune responses in vitro. These assays generate time series image data across several experimental conditions. The imaging parameters such as the imaging modality and the number of channels can vary across experiments. A challenge in the field is the lack of (open source) tools to process and analyze these data. R. Torro, et. al. developed an open source end-to-end pipeline for the analysis of image data from these immune assays. The pipeline is designed with a GUI and is suited for experimental biologists with no coding experience. The authors have incorporated several existing methods and tools for individual tasks such as for segmentation and cell tracking, and incorporated them with custom methods where necessary such as for tracking cell state transitions.

      Strengths:

      (1) The tool is extremely well-documented and easy to install.

      (2) Applicable to a wide variety of imaging modalities and analysis.

      (3) There are several different options for each step, such as segmentation using traditional methods or deep learning methods, and all the analysis steps are integrated in one place with a GUI. The no-coding requirement makes this a very powerful tool for biologists and has the potential to enable a wide variety of analyses.

      Weakness:

      (1) It would be good to provide documentation on how to make the tool applicable for applications and analysis other than for immune profiling since most methods integrated here are applicable well beyond immune profiling. For example, a user might want to use the tool just for the segmentation of their IF microscopy-images.

      This is an important suggestion that we will implement as short demonstrations using data from the public domain. These will be proposed as examples in the online documentation.

      (2) They applied Celldetective to two immune assays. The authors present the results from these assays and use the results to validate their assay. However, they have not included data that demonstrates results obtained via this pipeline are comparable to results obtained with other pipelines and/or if these results are consistent with what is expected in the literature.

      In the final version of the article, we shall compare celldetective with existing literature, including our previous work, when possible. However, we emphasize that most of the presented data are original and don’t have any published equivalent in the literature. Concerning the immunotherapy assays, data presented already show expected trends (see for example Fig. 2 and Fig. 5). We reserve for future publications the systematic comparison with traditional (non microscopy-based) methods, as we consider it out-of-scope here. Additionally, there is, to our knowledge no existing open pipeline performing the full end-to-end analysis.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This paper uses single-molecule FRET to investigate the molecular basis for the distinct activation mechanisms between 2 GPCR responding to the chemokine CXCL12 : CXCR4, that couples to G-proteins, and ACKR3, which is G-protein independent and displays a higher basal activity.

      Strengths:

      It nicely combines the state-of-the-art techniques used in the studies of the structural dynamics of GPCR. The receptors are produced from eukaryotic cells, mutated, and labeled with single molecule compatible fluorescent dyes. They are reconstituted in nanodiscs, which maintain an environment as close as possible to the cell membrane, and immobilized through the nanodisc MSP protein, to avoid perturbing the receptor's structural dynamics by the use of an antibody for example.

      The smFRET data are analysed using the HHMI technique, and the number of states to be taken into account is evaluated using a Bayesian Information Criterion, which constitutes the state-of-the-art for this task.

      The data show convincingly that the activation of the CXCR4 and ACKR3 by an agonist leads to a shift from an ensemble of high FRET states to an ensemble of lower FRET states, consistent with an increase in distance between the TM4 and TM6. The two receptors also appear to explore a different conformational space. A wider distribution of states is observed for ACKR3 as compared to CXCR4, and it shifts in the presence of agonists toward the active states, which correlates well with ACKR3's tendency to be constitutively active. This interpretation is confirmed by the use of the mutation of Y254 to leucine (the corresponding residue in CXCR4), which leads to a conformational distribution that resembles the one observed with CXCR4. It is correlated with a decrease in constitutive activity of ACKR3.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the data overall support the claims of the authors, there are however some details in the data analysis and interpretation that should be modified, clarified, or discussed in my opinion

      Concerning the amplitude of the changes in FRET efficiency: the authors do not provide any structural information on the amplitude of the FRET changes that are expected. To me, it looks like a FRET change from ~0.9 to ~0.1 is very important, for a distance change that is expected to be only a few angstroms concerning the movement of the TM6. Can the authors give an explanation for that? How does this FRET change relate to those observed with other GPCRs modified at the same or equivalent positions on TM4 and TM6?

      The large FRET change in our system was initially unexpected. However, the reviewer is mistaken that the expected distance change is only a few angstroms. Crystal structures of the homologous beta2 adrenergic receptor (β<sub>2</sub>AR) in inactive and active conformations reveal that the cytoplasmic end of TM6 moves outwards by 16 angstroms during activation (Rasmussen et al., 2011, ref 47).  Consistent with this, smFRET studies of β<sub>2</sub>AR labeled in TM4 and TM6 (as here) showed that the donor-acceptor (D-A) distance was 14 angstroms longer in the active conformation (Gregorio et al., ref 38).  Surprisingly, the apparent distance change in our system (calculated for our FRET probes, A555/Cy5, using FPbase.com) is almost 30 angstroms. A possible explanation is that the fluorophore attached to TM6 interacts with lipids within the nanodisc when TM6 moves outwards, which could stretch the fluorophore linker and thereby increase the D-A distance (lipids were absent in the β<sub>2</sub>AR study). Such an interaction could also constrain the fluorophore in an unfavorable orientation for energy transfer, also leading to lower than expected FRET efficiencies and inflated distance calculations. Regardless, it is important to emphasize that none of the interpretations or conclusions of our study are based on computed D-A distances. Rather, we resolved different receptor conformations and quantified their relative populations based on the measured FRET efficiency distributions.

      Finally, we note that a recent smFRET study of the glucagon receptor (labeled in TM4 and TM6, as here) also revealed a large difference in apparent FRET efficiencies between inactive (E<sub>app</sub> = 0.83) and active (E<sub>app</sub> = 0.32) conformations (Kumar et al., ref. 39). Thus, the large change in FRET efficiency observed in our study is not unprecedented.

      Concerning the intermediate states: the authors observe several intermediate states.

      (1) First I am surprised, looking at the time traces, by the dwell times of the transitions between the states, which often last several seconds. Is such a long transition time compatible with what is known about the kinetic activation of these receptors?

      We too were surprised by the apparent kinetics of the receptors in our system. However, it was previously noted that purified systems, including nanodiscs, lead to slower activation times for GPCRs compared to cellular membrane systems (Lohse et al, Curr. Opin. Cell Biology, 27, 8792, 2014). Indeed, slow transitions among different FRET states (dwell times in the seconds range) were also observed in recent smFRET studies of the mu opioid receptor (Zhao et al., 2024, ref. 41) and the glucagon receptor (Kumar et al., 2023, ref. 39). These studies are consistent with the observed time scale of the FRET transitions reported here.

      (2) Second is it possible that these “intermediate” states correspond to differences in FRET efficiencies, that arise from different photophysical states of the dyes? Alexa555 and Cy5 are Cyanines, that are known to be very sensitive to their local environment. This could lead to different quantum yields and therefore different FRET efficiencies for a similar distance. In addition, the authors use statistical labeling of two cysteines, and have therefore in their experiment a mixture of receptors where the donor and acceptor are switched, and can therefore experience different environments. The authors do not speculate structurally on what these intermediate states could be, which is appreciated, but I think they should nevertheless discuss the potential issue of fluorophore photophysics effects.

      The reviewer is correct that the intermediate FRET states could, in principle, arise from a conformational change of the receptor that alters the local environment of the donor and/or acceptor fluorophores, rather than a change in donor-acceptor distance. This caveat is now included in the discussion on Pg. 10:

      “In principle, the intermediates in CXCR4 and ACKR3 could represent partial movements of TM6 from the inactive to active conformation or more subtle conformational changes altering the photophysical characteristics of the probes without drastically altering the donor-acceptor distance. Either possibility leads to detectable changes in apparent FRET efficiency and reflect discrete conformational steps on the activation pathway; however, it is not possible to resolve specific structural changes from the data.”

      Regarding the second possibility, it is true that our labeling methodology leads to a statistical mixture of labeled species (D on TM6 and A on TM4, D on TM4 and A on TM6). If the photophysical properties of the fluorophores were markedly different for the two labeling orientations, this would produce two different FRET efficiencies for a given receptor conformation. Assuming two receptor conformations, this scenario would produce four distinct FRET states: E<sub>1</sub> (inactive receptor, labeling configuration 1), E<sub>2</sub> (active receptor, labeling configuration 1), E<sub>3</sub> (inactive receptor, labeling configuration 2) and E<sub>4</sub> (active receptor, labeling configuration 2), with two cross peaks in the TDP plots, corresponding to E<sub>1</sub> ↔ E<sub>2</sub> and E<sub>3</sub> ↔ E<sub>4</sub> transitions. Notably, E<sub>2</sub> ↔ E<sub>3</sub> cross peaks would not be present, since states E<sub>2</sub> and E<sub>3</sub> exist on separate molecules. Instead, we see all states inter-connected sequentially, R ↔ R’ ↔ R* in CXCR4 and R ↔ R’ ↔ R*’ ↔ R* in ACKR3 (Fig. 2), suggesting that the resolved FRET states represent interconnected conformational states.

      We added the following text to the Results section on Pg. 6:

      “Two-dimensional transition density probability (TDP) plots revealed that the three FRET states were connected in a sequential fashion (Figs. 2A & B), indicating that the transitions occurred within the same molecules. Notably, these observations exclude the possibility that the midFRET state arises from different local fluorophore environments (hence FRET efficiencies) for the two possible labeling orientations of the introduced cysteines: assuming two receptor conformations, this model would produce four distinct FRET states, but only two cross peaks in the TDP plot.”

      (3) It would also have been nice to discuss whether these types of intermediate states have been observed in other studies by smFRET on GPCR labeled at similar positions.

      Intermediate states have also been reported in previous smFRET studies of other GPCRs. For example, in the glucagon receptor (also labeled in TM4 and TM6), a third FRET state (E<sub>app</sub> =  0.63) was resolved between the inactive (E<sub>app</sub>  = 0.85) and active (E<sub>app</sub>  = 0.32) states (Kumar et al., Ref. 39).  Discrete intermediate receptor conformations were also observed in the A<sub>2A</sub>R labeled in TM4 and TM6 (Fernandes et al., Ref 40). These examples are now cited in the Discussion.

      On line 239: the authors talk about the R↔R' transitions that are more probable. In fact it is more striking that the R'↔R* transition appears in the plot. This transition is a signature of the behavior observed in the presence of an agonist, although IT1t is supposed to be an inverse agonist. This observation is consistent with the unexpected (for an inverse agonist) shift in the FRET histogram distribution. In fact, it appears that all CXCR4 antagonists or inverse agonists have a similar (although smaller) effect than the agonist. Is this related to the fact that these (antagonist or inverse agonist) ligands lead to a conformation that is similar to the agonists, but cannot interact with the G-protein ?? Maybe a very interesting experiment would be here to repeat these measurements in the presence of purified G-protein. G-protein has been shown to lead to a shift of the conformational space explored by GPCR toward the active state (using smFRET on class A and class C GPCR). It would be interesting to explore its role on CXCR4 in the presence of these various ligands. Although I am aware that this experiment might go beyond the scope of this study, I think this point should be discussed nevertheless.

      We thank the reviewer for this observation and the possible explanation offered.  In response, we have added the following text to the Results section on Pg. 7:

      “The small-molecule ligand IT1t is reported to act as an inverse agonist of CXCR4 (54-56). However, the conformational distribution of CXCR4 showed little change to the overall apparent

      FRET profile, although R’ ↔ R* transitions appeared in the TDP plot (Figs. 3A & B, Fig. S8). This suggests that the small molecule does not suppress CXCR4 basal signaling by changing the conformational equilibrium. Instead IT1t appears to increase transition probabilities which may impair G protein coupling by CXCR4.”

      We have also added the following text to the Results on Pg. 8:

      “Despite the ability of CXCL12<sub>P2G</sub> and CXCL12<sub>LRHQ</sub> to stabilize the active R* conformation of CXCR4, both variants are known to act as antagonists (20). This suggests that the CXCL12 mutants inhibit CXCR4 coupling to G proteins not by suppressing the active receptor population but rather by increasing the dynamics of the receptor state transitions. Our results suggest that the helical movements considered classic signatures of the active state may not be sufficient for CXCR4 to engage productively with G proteins.”

      In addition, we have added the following text to the Discussion on Pg. 11:

      “The chemokine variants CXCL12<sub>P2G</sub> and CXCL12<sub>LRHQ</sub> are reported to act as antagonists of CXCR4 (19, 20), and the small molecule IT1t acts as an inverse agonist (54-56). Surprisingly, none of these ligands inhibit formation of the active R* conformation of CXCR4. In fact, the chemokine variants both stabilize and increase this state to some degree, although less effectively than CXCL12<sub>WT</sub>. Thus, the antagonism and inverse agonism of these ligands does not appear to be linked exclusively to receptor conformation, suggesting that the ligands inhibit coupling of G proteins to CXCR4 or disrupt the ligand-receptor-G protein interaction network required for signaling (Fig. S10) (21, 23).  Interestingly, these ligands also increase the probabilities of state-to-state transitions (Figs. 3B & 4B), suggesting that enhanced conformational exchange prevents the receptor from productively engaging G proteins. Similarly, ACKR3 is naturally dynamic and lacks G protein coupling, suggesting a common mechanism of G protein antagonism.”

      Finally, we also agree that experiments with G proteins could be informative. In fact, we initiated such experiments during the course of this study.  However, it soon became apparent that significant optimization would be required to identify fluorophore labeling positions that report receptor conformation without inhibiting G protein coupling. Accordingly, we decided that G protein experiments would be the subject of future studies.

      However, we added the following text to the Discussion on Pg. 12:

      “Future smFRET studies performed in the presence of G proteins should be informative in this regard”.

      The authors also mentioned in Figure 6 that the energetic landscape of the receptors is relatively flat ... I do not really agree with this statement. For me, a flat conformational landscape would be one where the receptors are able to switch very rapidly between the states (typically in the submillisecond timescale, which is the timescale of protein domain dynamics). Here, the authors observed that the transition between states is in the second timescale, which for me implies that the transition barrier between the states is relatively high to preclude the fast transitions.

      We thank the reviewer for the comment. We have modified the description of the energy landscapes of ACKR3 and CXCR4 in the discussion on Pg. 10 as follows:

      “These observations imply that ACKR3 has a relatively flat energy landscape, with similar energy minima for the different conformations, whereas the energy landscape of CXCR4 is more rugged (Fig. 6). For both receptors, the energy barriers between states are sufficiently high that transitions occur relatively slowly with seconds long dwell times (Figs. 1C and S2).”

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      his manuscript uses single-molecule fluorescence resonance energy transfer (smFRET) to identify differences in the molecular mechanisms of CXCR4 and ACKR3, two 7transmembrane receptors that both respond to the chemokine CXCL12 but otherwise have very different signaling profiles. CXCR4 is highly selective for CXCL12 and activates heterotrimeric G proteins. In contrast, ACKR3 is quite promiscuous and does not couple to G proteins, but like most G protein-coupled receptors (GPCRs), it is phosphorylated by GPCR kinases and recruits arrestins. By monitoring FRET between two positions on the intracellular face of the receptor (which highlights the movement of transmembrane helix 6 [TM6], a key hallmark of GPCR activation), the authors show that CXCR4 remains mostly in an inactive-like state until CXCL12 binds and stabilizes a single active-like state. ACKR3 rapidly exchanges among four different conformations even in the absence of ligands, and agonists stabilize multiple activated states.

      Strengths:

      The core method employed in this paper, smFRET, can reveal dynamic aspects of these receptors (the breadth of conformations explored and the rate of exchange among them) that are not evident from static structures or many other biophysical methods. smFRET has not been broadly employed in studies of GPCRs. Therefore, this manuscript makes important conceptual advances in our understanding of how related GPCRs can vary in their conformational dynamics.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The cysteine mutations in ACKR3 required to site-specifically install fluorophores substantially increase its basal and ligand-induced activity. If, as the authors posit, basal activity correlates with conformational heterogeneity, the smFRET data could greatly overestimate the conformational heterogeneity of ACKR3.

      The change in basal ACKR3 activity with the Cys introductions are modest in comparison and insignificantly different as determined by extra-sum-of-squares F test (P=0.14).

      (2) The probes used cannot reveal conformational changes in other positions besides TM6. GPCRs are known to exhibit loose allosteric coupling, so the conformational distribution observed at TM6 may not fully reflect the global conformational distribution of receptors. This could mask important differences that determine the ability of intracellular transducers to couple to specific receptor conformations.

      We agree that the overall conformational landscape of the receptors has not been investigated and we have added this caveat to the discussion on Pg. 12.

      “An important caveat is that our study does not report on the dynamics of the other TM helices and H8, some of which are known to participate in arrestin interactions.”

      (3) While it is clear that CXCR4 and ACKR3 have very different conformational dynamics, the data do not definitively show that this is the main or only mechanism that contributes to their functional differences. There is little discussion of alternative potential mechanisms.

      The main functional difference between CXCR4 and ACRK3 is their effector coupling: CXCR4 couples to G proteins, whereas ACKR3 only couples to arrestins (following phosphorylation of the C-terminal tail by GRKs). As currently noted in the discussion, ACKR3 has many features that may contribute to its lack of G protein coupling, including lack of a well-ordered intracellular pocket due to conformational dynamics, lack of an N-term-ECL3 disulfide, different chemokine binding mode, and the presence of Y257. Steric interference due to different ICL loop structures may also interfere with G protein activation. No one thing has proven to confer ACKR3 with G protein activity including swapping all of the ICLs to those of canonical chemokine receptor, suggesting it is a combination of these different factors. The following has been added to the discussion on Pg. 13 to clearly note that any one feature is unlikely to drive the atypical behavior of ACKR3:

      “The atypical activation of ACKR3 does not appear to be dependent on any singular receptor feature and is likely a combination of several factors.”

      (4) The extent to which conformational heterogeneity is a characteristic feature of ACKRs that contributes to their promiscuity and arrestin bias is unclear. The key residue the authors find promotes ACKR3 conformational heterogeneity is not conserved in most other ACKRs, but alternative mechanisms could generate similar heterogeneity.

      Despite the commonalities in the roles of the ACKRs, they all appear to have evolved independently. Thus, we do not believe that all features observed and described for one ACKR will explain the behavior of another. We have carefully avoided expanding our observations to other ACKRs to avoid suggesting common mechanisms.

      (5) There are no data to confirm that the two receptors retain the same functional profiles observed in cell-based systems following in vitro manipulations (purification, labeling, nanodisc reconstitution).

      We agree this is an important point. All labeled receptors responded to agonist stimulation as expected. As only properly folded receptors are able to make the extensive interactions with ligands necessary for conformational changes (for instance, CXCL12 interacts with all TMs and ECLs), this suggests that the proteins are folded correctly and functional following all manipulations.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This is a well-designed and rigorous comparative study of the conformational dynamics of two chemokine receptors, the canonical CXCR4 and the atypical ACKR3, using single-molecule fluorescence spectroscopy. These receptors play a role in cell migration and may be relevant for developing drugs targeting tumor growth in cancers. The authors use single-molecule FRET to obtain distributions of a specific intermolecular distance that changes upon activation of the receptor and track differences between the two receptors in the apo state, and in response to ligands and mutations. The picture emerging is that more dynamic conformations promote more basal activity and more promiscuous coupling of the receptor to effectors.

      Strengths:

      The study is well designed to test the main hypothesis, the sample preparation and the experiments conducted are sound and the data analysis is rigorous. The technique, smFRET, allows for the detection of several substates, even those that are rarely sampled, and it can provide a "connectivity map" by looking at the transition probabilities between states. The receptors are reconstituted in nanodiscs to create a native-like environment. The examples of raw donor/acceptor intensity traces and FRET traces look convincing and the data analysis is reliable to extract the sub-states of the ensemble. The role of specific residues in creating a more flat conformational landscape in ACKR3 (e.g., Y257 and the C34-C287 bridge) is well documented in the paper.

      Weaknesses:

      The kinetics side of the analysis is mentioned, but not described and discussed. I am not sure why since the data contains that information. For instance, it is not clear if greater conformational flexibility is accompanied by faster transitions between states or not.

      The reviewer is correct that kinetic information is available, in principle, from smFRET experiments. However, a detailed kinetic analysis will require a much larger data set than we currently possess, to adequately sample all possible transitions and the dwell times of each FRET state. We intend to perform such an analysis in the future as more data becomes available. The purpose of this initial study was to explore the conformational landscapes of CXCR4 and ACKR3 and to reveal differences between them. To this end, we have documented major differences in conformational preferences and response to ligands of the two receptors that are likely relevant to their different biological behavior. Future kinetic information will add further detail, but is not expected to alter the conclusions drawn here.

      The method to choose the number of states seems reasonable, but the "similarity" of states argument (Figures S4 and S6) is not that clear.

      We thank the reviewer for noting a need for further clarification. We qualitatively compared the positions of the various FRET peaks across treatments to gain insight into the consistency of the conformations and avoid splitting real states by overfitting the data. For instance, fitting the ACKR3 treatments with three states leads to three distinct FRET populations for the R’ intermediate. Adding a fourth state results in two intermediates that are fairly well overlapping. In contrast, the two-intermediate model for CXCR4 appears to split the R* state of the CXCL12 treated sample and causes a general shift in both intermediate states to lower FRET values when CXCL12 is present. As we assume that the conformations are consistent throughout the treatments, we conclude that this represents an overfitting artifact and not a novel CXCL12CXCR4 R*’ state. Additional sentences have been added to the supplemental figure legend to better describe the comparative analysis.

      “(Top) With the 3-state model, the R’ states for apo-CXCR4 and for CXCL12- and IT1t-bound receptor overlapped well with similar apparent FRET values across all of the tested conditions. In the case of the four-state model, the R*’ (Middle) and R’ (Bottom) states were substantially different across the ligand treatments. In particular, the R*’ state with CXCL12 treatment appears to arise from a splitting of the R* conformation, indicating that the model was overfitting the data.”

      Also, the "dynamics" explanation offered for ACKR3's failure to couple and activate G proteins is not very convincing. In other studies, it was shown that activation of GPCRs by agonists leads to an increase in local dynamics around the TM6 labelling site, but that did not prevent G protein coupling and activation.

      We agree with the reviewer that any single explanation for ACKR3 bias, including the dynamics argument presented here, is insufficient to fully characterize the ACKR3 responses. As noted by the reviewer, the TM6 movement and dynamics is generally correlated with G protein coupling, whereas other dynamics studies (Wingler et al. Cell 2019) have noted that arrestinbiased ligands do not lead to the same degree of TM6 movement. We have added the following statement to the discussion on Pg. 13:

      “The atypical activation of ACKR3 does not appear to be dependent on any singular receptor feature and is likely a combination of several factors.” 

      Recommendations for the authors:  

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      I would like to raise a technical point about the calculation and reporting of the FRET efficiency. The authors report the FRET efficiency as E=IA/(IA+ID). There is now a strong recommendation from the FRET community (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41592-018-0085-0) to use the term “FRET efficiency” only when a proper correction procedure of all correction factors has been applied, which is not the case here (gamma factor has not been calculated). The authors should therefore use the term “Apparent FRET Efficiency” and  E<sub>app</sub> in all the manuscripts.

      Also, it would be nice to indicate directly on the figures whether a ligand that is used is an agonist, antagonist, inverse agonist, etc...

      We thank the reviewer for suggesting this clarification in terminology. We now refer to apparent FRET efficiency (or E<sub>app</sub>) throughout the manuscript and in the figures. In addition, we have added ligand descriptions to the relevant figures.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) M159(4.40)C/Q245(6.28)C ACKR3 appears to have higher constitutive activity than ACKR3 Wt (Fig. S1). While the vehicle point itself is likely not significant due to the error in the Wt, the overall trend is clear and arguably even stronger than the effect of Y257(6.40)L (Fig. S9). While this is an inherent limitation of the method used, it should be clearly acknowledged; the comment in lines 162-164 seems to skirt the issue by only saying that arrestin recruitment is retained. It would be helpful and more rigorous to report the curve fit parameters (basal, E<sub>max</sub>, EC50) for the arrestin recruitment experiments and the associated errors/significance (see https://www.graphpad.com/guides/prism/latest/statistics/stat_qa_multiple_comparisons_ after_.htm for a discussion).

      The Emin, E<sub>max</sub>, and EC50 for M159<sup>4</sup>.<sup>40</sup>C/Q245<sup>6</sup>.<sup>28</sup>C ACKR3 were compared against the values for WT ACKR3 from Fig. S1 and only the E<sub>max</sub> was determined to be significantly different by the extra sum of squares F test. A note has been added to the text to reflect these results on Pg. 5.

      “Only the E<sub>max</sub> for arrestin recruitment to CXCL12-stimulated ACKR3 was significantly altered by the mutations, while all other pharmacological parameters were the same as for WT receptors.”

      (2) The methods do not specify the reactive group of the dyes used for labeling (i.e., AlexaFluor 555-maleimide and Cy5-maleimide?).

      We regret the omission and have added the necessary details to the materials and methods.

      (3) Were any of the native Cys residues removed from ACKR3 and CXCR4 in the constructs used for smFRET? ACKR3 appears to have two additional Cys residues in the N-terminus besides the one involved in the second disulfide bridge, and these would presumably be solvent-exposed. If so, please specify in the Methods and clarify whether the constructs tested in functional assays included these. (Also, please specify if the human receptors were used.)

      No additional cysteine residues were mutated in either receptor. All exposed cysteines are predicted to form disulfides. The residues in the N-terminus that the reviewer alludes to, C21 and C26, form a disulfide (Gustavsson et al. Nature Communications 2017) and are thus protected from our probes. Consistent with these expectations, neither WT CXCR4 nor ACKR3 exhibited significant fluorophore labeling (now mentioned in the text on Pg. 5). The species of origin has been added to the material and methods.

      (4) There are a few instances where the data seem to slightly diverge from the proposed models that may be helpful to comment on explicitly in the text:

      - Figure 4E (ACKR3/CXCL12(P2G)): As noted in the legend, despite stabilizing R*/R*', CXCL12(P2G) reduces transitions between these states compared to Apo. This is more similar to the effects of VUF16840 (Figure 3D) than the other ACKR3 agonists. The authors note the difference between CXCL12(LHRQ) and CXCL12(P2G) (but not vs Apo) in this regard. There might be some other information here regarding the relative importance of the conformational equilibrium vs transition rates for receptor activity.

      Although the TDPs for CXCL12<sub>P2G</sub> and VUF16840 are similar, as noted by the reviewer, the overall FRET envelopes are drastically different.

      The differences in transition probabilities for R ↔ R’ and R*’ « R* transitions observed in the presence of CXCL12<sub>P2G</sub> or CXCL12<sub>LRHQ</sub> relative to the apo receptor are now explicitly noted in the Results.

      - The conformational distributions of ACKR3 apo and ACKR3 Y257L CXCL12 are very similar (Figure 5A,D). However, there is a substantial difference in the basal activity of WT vs CXCL12stimulated Y257L (Figure S9).

      The mutation Y257L appears to promote the highest and lowest FRET states at the expense of the intermediates. Although the distribution appears similar between Apo-WT and CXCL12Y257L, the depopulation of the R’ state may lead to the observed activation in cells.

      (5) There are inconsistent statements regarding the compatibility of G protein binding to the "active-like" ACKR3 conformation observed in the authors' previous structures (Yen et al, Sci Adv 2022). In the introduction, the authors seem to be making the case that steric clashes cannot account for its lack of coupling; in the discussion, they seem to consider it a possibility.

      The introduction to previous research on the molecular mechanisms governing the lack of ACKR3-G protein coupling was not intended to be all encompassing, but rather to highlight previous efforts to elucidate this process and justify our study of the role  of dynamics. Due to the positions of the probes, we can only comment on the impact on TM6 movements and not other conformational changes. The steric clash reported in Yen et al. was in ICL2 and not directly tested here, so our observations do not preclude changes occurring in this region. We also do not claim that the active-like state resolved in our previous structures matches any specific state isolated here by smFRET.

      (6) Line 83-85: "Having excluded other mechanisms we therefore surmised that the inability of ACKR3 to activate G proteins may be due to differences in receptor dynamics."

      Line 400-402: "It is possible that the active receptor conformation clashes sterically with the G protein as suggested by docking of G proteins to structures of ACKR3."

      As mentioned above, we suspect the mechanisms governing the inability of  ACKR3 to couple to G proteins may be more complex than one particular feature but instead due to a combination of several factors. Accordingly, we have not completely eliminated a contribution of steric hindrance as we described in Yen et al. Sci Adv 2022 and instead include it as a possibility. Following the line highlighted here, we list several alternatives: 

      “Alternatively, the receptor dynamics and conformational transitions revealed here may prevent formation of productive contacts between ACKR3 and G protein that are required for coupling, even though G proteins appear to constitutively associate with the receptor.”

      And, at the end of the paragraph, we have added the following sentence: 

      “The atypical activation of ACKR3 does not appear to be dependent on any singular receptor feature and is likely a combination of several factors.”

      (7) If the authors believe that the various ligands/mutations are only altering the distribution/dynamics of the same 3/4 conformations of CXCR4/ACKR3, respectively, is there a reason each FRET efficiency histogram is fit independently instead of constraining the individual components to Gaussian components with the same centroids, and/or globally fitting all datasets for the same receptor?

      We performed global analysis across all data sets for each sample and condition. Since the peak positions of the various FRET states recovered in this way were consistent across treatments (Fig. S4,S6), we did not feel it was necessary to perform a further global analysis across all samples for a given receptor.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      The manuscript is well-written, the arguments are easy to follow and the figures are helpful and clear. Here are a few questions/suggestions that the authors might want to address before the paper will be published:

      (1) Include a table with kinetic rates between states in SI and have a brief discussion in the main text to support the trends observed in transition probabilities.

      As noted above, determining rate constants for each of the state-to-state transitions will require a much larger set of experimental smFRET data than is currently available and will be the subject of future studies.

      (2) The argument of state similarity (Figure S4 and S6)... why are the profiles not Gaussian, like in the fits on Figures S3 and S5, repectively? I would also suggest that once the number of states is chosen to do a global fit, where the FRET values of a certain sub-state across different conditions for one receptor are shared.

      The state distributions presented in Figs. S4 and S6 (as well as throughout the rest of the paper) are derived from HMM fitting of the time traces themselves, and are not constrained to be Gaussian, whereas the GMM analysis in Figs. S3 and S5 are Gaussian fits to the final apparent FRET efficiency histograms.

      Similar to our response to Review 2 above, due to the consistency of the fitted peak positions obtained across different conditions for a given sample, we did not feel that further global analysis was necessary.

      (3) It is shown FRET changes from ~0.85 in the inactive (closed) state to ~0.25 in the active (open) state. How do these values match the expectations based on crystal structure and dye properties?

      As noted in our response to Reviewer 1, translating the apparent FRET values using the assumed Förster distances for A555/Cy5 (per FPbase) suggest a change in D-A distance of ~30 angstroms, whereas the expected change from structures is ~16 Å. We suspect this discrepancy is due to the lipids immediately adjacent to the fluorophores, which may lead to the probes being constrained in an extended position when TM6 moves outwards, thus also reporting the linker length in the distance change. Additionally, such interactions may constrain the donor and acceptor in unfavorable orientations for energy transfer, which would also reduce the FRET efficiency in the active state. Since the calculated D-A distance changes appear too large for GPCR activation, we have opted to not make any structural interpretations. Instead, all of our conclusions are based on resolving individual conformational states and quantifying their relative populations, which is based directly on the measured FRET efficiency distributions, not computed distances.

      (4) The results on the effect of CXCL12-P2G on CXCR4 are confusing...despite being an antagonist, this ligand stabilizes the "active state"...I am not sure if the explanation offered is sufficient that the opening of the intracellular cleft is not sufficient to drive the G protein coupling/activation.

      We agree that the explanation related to the opening of the intracellular cleft being insufficient to drive G protein coupling/activation is speculative and we have removed that text. We now simply propose that the CXCL12 variants inhibit coupling of G proteins to CXCR4 or disrupt interactions necessary for signaling, as stated in the following text to the results on Pg. 8:

      “Despite the ability of CXCL12<sub>P2G</sub> and CXCL12<sub>LRHQ</sub> to stabilize the active R* conformation of CXCR4, both variants are known to act as antagonists (20). This suggests that the CXCL12 mutants inhibit CXCR4 coupling to G proteins not by suppressing the active receptor population but rather by increasing the dynamics of the receptor state-to-state transitions. Our results suggest that the helical movements considered classic signatures of the active state may not be sufficient for CXCR4 to engage productively with G proteins.”

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1:

      We thank the Reviewer for being very supportive of the work and acknowledging how important it is to understand allosteric modulation in the spike and the potential of this knowledge to contribute to the design of novel therapeutic strategies (for example, disrupting or altering the allosteric networks within the spike can be a novel strategy for drug development against COVID-19). We address their comments below: 

      (1) The Reviewer states that although the strategy used to extract the responses has been "previously validated", the complexity of the interactions investigated requires "a robust statistical analysis, which is not shown quantitatively". 

      As the Reviewer points out, the D-NEMD approach has been previously validated in various protein systems ranging from soluble enzymes to integral membrane proteins, including the spike (e.g. [Kamsri et al. (2024) Biochem; Beer et al. (2024) Chem Sci; Oliveira et al. (2023) J Mol Cell Biol; Chan et al. (2023) JACS Au; Castelli et al. (2023) JACS; Castelli et al. (2023) Protein Sci; Oliveira et al. (2022) Comput Struct Biotechnol J; Gupta et al. (2022) Nat Comm; Oliveira et al. (2021) JACS; Galdadas et al. (2021) eLife; Abreu et al. (2019) Proteins; Oliveira et al. (2019) JACS; Oliveira et al. (2019) Structure]. The Kubo-Onsager relation is used to extract the evolution of the protein's response to a perturbation by comparing the equilibrium and nonequilibrium trajectories at equivalent points in time. The calculated responses at individual times are then averaged over all the repeats (210 repeats in the current work), and the standard error of the mean (SEM) is used to assess the significance of the average response. The SEM indicates how much the calculated mean deviates from the true population mean. Calculating the SEM allows us to determine how accurate the measured response is as an estimate of the population response and assess the convergence of our calculations. The evolution of the average C<sub>α</sub> displacement and corresponding SEM values for each individual monomer can be visualised in detail in Figures S7-S9. We have added a new sentence to the Materials and Methods section in the Supporting Information, explicitly stating how the convergence and statistical significance of the responses were assessed.

      (2) The Reviewer considers that the evidence presented in the paper "is compelling" but suggests performing a sequence analysis to facilitate the understanding of the results by the scientific community. 

      We thank the Reviewer for their excellent suggestion to perform a sequence analysis of the FA site region and its allosteric connections. Indeed, this analysis (Figure S24) clearly shows that several of the mutations, deletions and insertions in the Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Delta, and Omicron variants are located either in or near the regions of the protein shown to respond to the removal of linoleate from the FA site. These sequence changes affect the protein's responses, and are responsible for the differences in allosteric behaviour observed between variants, as described previously for the non-glycosylated spike [Oliveira et al. (2023) J Mol Cell Biol]. Furthermore, some variants, such as Beta, Gamma, and Omicron, contain residue substitutions at the FA site. For example, the lysine in position 417 in the ancestral spike is mutated to asparagine in Beta and Omicron and threonine in the Gamma variant. Another example is arginine 408 in the original protein, which has been replaced by asparagine in several Omicron sub-variants. 

      To summarise, the sequence analysis (Figure S24) supports our initial 3D analysis (Figure S25), indicating that many of the changes observed in the variants of concern are indeed in or close to the allosteric networks involving the FA site. We have now included the sequence analysis results in the current paper and added a new figure to Supporting Information showing the sequence alignments between the ancestral spike and different variants (Figure S24). 

      (3) The Reviewer also has "minor considerations": first, they point to a discrepancy in the presentation of residue values S325 in the plots of Chains A, B, and C of Figure S3; second, they ask why several regions, such as RBM and Furin Site in figures S6, S7, and S8 show significant changes.

      To answer both points raised by the Reviewer, we need to start by explaining that the spike typically features 22 N-glycosylation and at least two O-glycans sites per monomer. These sites have been found to be heterogeneously populated in different experimental studies (e.g. [Watanabe et al. (2020) Science; Shajahan et al. (2020) Glycobiology; Zhang et al. (2021) Mol Cell Proteomics]). Given this, the spike model used as the starting point for this work reflects this heterogeneity, with asymmetric site-specific glycosylation profiles derived from the glycoanalytic data reported by Watanable et al. for N-glycans [Watanabe et al. (2020) Science] and Shajahan et al. for O-glycans [Shajahan et al. (2020) Glycobiology]. This means that the glycan occupancy and composition for each site differ between the three monomers. For example, while monomer A contains the two O-glycans sites (linked to T323 and S325, respectively) fully occupied, monomers B and C only contain the T323 O-glycan. A detailed description of the glycosylation of the spike model is given in the supporting information of [Casalino et al. (2020) ACS Cent Sci].

      Regarding the Reviewer's first minor point, the discrepancy in behaviour observed in Figure S3 for S325 is related to the fact that this glycosylation site is only occupied in monomer A, with no glycans present in this site in monomers B and C. 

      Regarding the second point, the differences observed in the responses between the three monomers in Figures S7-S9 are probably due to asymmetries in the protein dynamics introduced by the different glycosylation patterns in the monomers. 

      We have now added a new paragraph to the materials and methods section in the Supporting Information describing the asymmetric site-specific glycosylation profiles of the monomers.

      (4) Due to the complexity of the allosteric interactions observed, the Reviewer suggests including in the paper a "diagram showing the flow of allosteric interactions" or a "vector showing how the perturbation done in the FA Active site takes contact with other relevant regions". 

      This is an excellent suggestion to facilitate the visualisation of the allosteric networks. We have added a new figure to Supporting Information highlighting the allosteric pathways identified from the DNEMD simulations and the direction of the propagation of the structural changes (Figure S26).

      Reviewer #2:

      We thank the Reviewer for their time in evaluating our manuscript and providing suggestions for improving it and ideas for further work. We are happy that the Reviewer found this to be a "nice paper" with the calculations "well done" and interesting results. We address their comments below: 

      (1) The Reviewer suggests improving the paper by adding a more detailed explanation of the DNEMD simulations approach, a method that, although proposed decades ago, is still generally unfamiliar to the community. They also asked for "information on the convergence of the observables".

      As stated by the Reviewer, a dynamical approach to nonequilibrium molecular dynamics (D-NEMD) was first proposed in the seventies by Ciccotti et al. [Ciccotti et al. (1975) Phys Rev Lett; Ciccotti et al. (1979) J Stat Phys]. This approach combines MD simulations in equilibrium and nonequilibrium conditions. The rationale for the D-NEMD approach is simple and can be described as follows: if an external perturbation (e.g. binding/unbinding of a ligand) is added to a simulation sampling an equilibrium state and, by doing so, a parallel nonequilibrium simulation is started, the structural response of the protein to the perturbation can be directly measured by comparing the equilibrium and nonequilibrium trajectories at equivalent points in time by using the Kubo-Onsager relation as long as enough sapling is gathered (for more details, please see the reviews [Balega et al. (2024) Mol Phys; Oliveira et al. (2021) Eur Phys J B; Ciccotti et al. (2016) Mol Simul]). This approach, although conceptually simple, is very powerful as it allows for computing the evolution of the dynamic response of the protein to the external perturbation, while assessing the convergence and statistical significance of that response. This approach also has the advantage that the convergence and significance of the response can be easily evaluated, and the associated errors can be computed and made as small as desirable by increasing the number of nonequilibrium trajectories. Determining the statistical errors associated with the responses (through, e.g., the determination of the standard error of the mean, SEM) is essential to test if the sampling gathered is sufficient. In this paper, the SEM was calculated for each average C<sub>α</sub> displacement value at times 0.1, 1 and 10 ns after the removal of linoleate, LA (see Figures S7-S9). The SEM indicates how accurate the measured response is as an estimate of the population response and allows us to assess the convergence of the results. 

      Generally, multiple (tens to hundreds) D-NEMD simulations are needed to achieve statistically significant results for biomolecular systems (for examples, see [Balega et al. (2024) Mol Phys; Oliveira et al. (2021) Eur Phys J B]). As such, the length of the D-NEMD simulations (typically 5 to 10 ns) reflects the balance between the computational resources available and the number of replicates needed to achieve statistically significant responses from the system. Following the Reviewer's suggestion, we have now added a brief description of the D-NEMD approach to the main manuscript and expanded the D-NEMD section in the Supporting Information with a more detailed description of the method, including adding a new figure showing a schematic representation of the D-NEMD approach (Figure S5) as well as explicitly stating the settings used in these simulations and how the statistical significance of the responses was assessed. 

      (2) The Reviewer suggests comparing the D-NEMD results with "more traditional analysis, such as correlation analysis, or community network analysis". 

      We agree with the Reviewer that this is an important comparison, which can provide a broader, more articulate and coherent picture of spike allostery and have, therefore, performed additional analysis. The dynamic cross-correlation analysis suggested by the Reviewer is a valuable tool for identifying the regions in the protein influenced by the FA site in equilibrium conditions. However, such an approach is not straightforwardly applicable to D-NEMD simulations, as these simulations are not in equilibrium. Nevertheless, as suggested by the Reviewer, we have determined the cross-correlation matrices for both the equilibrium and D-NEMD simulations (Figure S22), similar to those in our previous work [Galdadas et al. (2021) eLife] and [Oliveira et al. (2022) J Mol Cell Biol]. The analysis of these matrices can provide information about possible allosteric networks. In Figure S22, the cyan and blue regions represent moderate and high negative correlations between C<sub>α</sub> atoms, while orange and red regions correspond to moderate and high positive correlations. Negative correlations indicate residues moving in opposite directions (moving toward or away from each other). In contrast, positive values imply that the residues are moving in similar directions. We also note that, with collaborators, we have compared D-NEMD and other nonequilibrium and equilibrium MD analysis methods for allostery [Castelli et al.  (2023) JACS].

      The cross-correlation maps depicted in Figure S22 show moderate to high positive correlations between the FA sites and two of the three RBDs in the protein. This happens because each FA site sits at the interface between two neighbouring RBDs. Low to moderate negative and mildly positive correlated motions can also be observed between the FA site and the NTDs and fusion peptide surrounding regions, respectively. To facilitate the visualisation of the above-described motions, we have also mapped the statistical correlations for R408 and K417 (two FA site residues able to directly form salt-bridge interactions with the carboxylate head group of LA) on the protein's three-dimensional structure (Figure S23). Figure S23 highlights the patterns of movement described above and allows us to identify the regions whose motions are coupled to the FA site.

      Interestingly, some segments forming the signal propagation pathways, such as R454-K458 in all three monomers, and C525-K537 in monomers B and C, can also be identified from the cross-correlation matrices, showing moderate to high correlations with the FA site (Figures S22-S23). The crosscorrelation maps computed from the equilibrium trajectories (with FA sites occupied with LA) show a slight increase in the dynamic correlations, mainly for the RBDs, compared to the maps obtained from the nonequilibrium trajectories (Figure S22). This indicates that the presence of LA in the FA strengthens the connections between the FA site and other parts of the protein. 

      We have updated the manuscript to include the cross-correlation analysis, with two new figures added to Supporting Information: one depicting the cross-correlation maps for the D-NEMD and equilibrium simulations (Figure S22), and the other showing the statistical correlations for R408 and K417 (Figure S23). 

      (3) The Reviewer considers the observed connection between the fatty acid site and the heme/biliverdin site "interesting" and suggests "exploring the impact of ligand removal on this secondary site on the protein".

      Similarly to the Reviewer, we find the connection between the FA and the heme/biliverdin site fascinating and worthy of further investigation. The observed connection between these two sites shows the complexity of the allosteric effects in the spike. It would be interesting and informative to perform new equilibrium simulations of the heme/biliverdin spike complex and a new set of D-NEMD simulations in which this site is perturbed (e.g. through the removal of the heme group) to map the networks connecting this allosteric site to other functionally important regions of the spike, including the FA site and potentially other allosteric sites. These new simulations would allow us to assess the reversibility of the connection between the FA and heme/biliverdin sites and enhance our understanding of allosteric modulation in the spike and the role of the heme/biliverdin site in this process. However, due to the large size of the system and the associated computational demands, such simulations are not possible within the timeframe of the revision of this paper. These simulations would take many months to complete using our HPC resources. We also note that an experimental structure of the spike containing both heme and linoleate is not available. Further simulation analysis of the communication pathways involving the heme/biliverdin site is an excellent idea for future work.

      (4) The Reviewer "liked the mapping of existing mutations on the communication pathway" and suggested a more detailed study focusing on the effect of the mutations. 

      We fully agree with the Reviewer and consider that a detailed study focusing on the effect of the mutations, insertions, and deletions in the different glycosylated variants of concern (including new emerging ones) would be of great interest. Our previous work using D-NEMD on the non-glycosylated ancestral, Alpha, Delta, Delta plus and Omicron BA.1 spikes revealed significant differences in the allosteric responses to LA removal, with the changes in the variants affecting both the amplitude of the structural responses and the rates at which these rearrangements propagate within the protein [Oliveira et al. (2023) J Mol Cell Biol]. 

      Using the D-NEMD approach to systematically investigate the impact of each individual mutation and their contribution to the overall allosteric response of the glycosylated variants (similar to what we have done previously for the D614G mutation in the non-glycosylated protein [Oliveira et al. (2021) Comput Struct Biotechnol J]) would provide insights into the functional modulation of the spike. However, as noted above in point 3, spike simulations are highly computationally expensive, both in terms of processing and data storage requirements, because of the large size of the protein and the need for equilibrium and D-NEMD simulations. This makes the suggested mutational study unfeasible within the timeframe of the current revisions. It is, however, an excellent idea for future research.

      Reviewer #3:

      We thank the Reviewer for carefully reading and critically reviewing this work and recognising that the findings reported are "based on an impressive amount of sampling" and "meticulous" analysis. We address their comments below: 

      (1) The Reviewer considers that this work "does not clearly show any new findings" as it shows that the glycans do not significantly impact the internal networks in the protein.

      We respectfully disagree with the Reviewer. This work identifies new allosteric effects in the spike, specifically, the connection of the FA site with the heme binding site. The equilibrium simulations alone provide the first analysis of the effects of linoleate binding in the fully glycosylated spike. The finding that glycosylation does not significantly affect the allosteric pathways in the spike is in itself an important finding. Previous D-NEMD simulations investigated only the non-glycosylated spike ([Oliveira et al. (2021) Comput Struct Biotechnol J; Oliveira et al. (2022) J Mol Cell Biol] ) leading to questions of whether the allosteric effects pathways were changed by glycosylation; our results here show that the main conclusions are reinforced, but glycosylation does have some effect on networks, and also on the speed of the dynamical response. To the best of our knowledge, our work represents the first investigation to analyse the impact of glycosylation on the allosteric networks in the spike. We show that even though the presence of glycans in the exterior of the spike does not significantly alter the internal communication pathways in the protein, in some cases (for example, the glycans linked to N234, T373 and S375), they create direct connections between different regions, which may facilitate the propagation of the structural changes. 

      (2) The Reviewer suggests adding a "clear and concise description" of the D-NEMD approach to the manuscript.

      We appreciate that the use of the D-NEMD method to study biomolecular systems is relatively new, and so may be unfamiliar. As explained above in our response to Reviewer 2 (point 1), a brief description of the D-NEMD approach was now included in the main manuscript. A detailed description of the method was also added to Supporting Information, including a new figure representing the rationale for the approach (Figure S5). The interested reader is directed to previous applications and reviews for more details of the method (e.g. [Balega et al. (2024) Mol Phys; Oliveira et al. (2021) Eur Phys J B; Ciccotti et al. (2016) Mol Simul; Kamsri et al. (2024) Biochem; Beer et al. (2024) Chem Sci; Oliveira et al. (2023) J Mol Cell Biol; Chan et al. (2023) JACS Au; Castelli et al. (2023) JACS; Castelli et al. (2023) Protein Sci; Oliveira et al. (2022) Comput Struct Biotechnol J; Gupta et al. (2022) Nat Comm; Oliveira et al. (2021) JACS; Galdadas et al. (2021) eLife; Abreu et al. (2019) Proteins; Oliveira et al. (2019) JACS; Oliveira et al. (2019) Structure]). 

      (3) The Reviewer invites us to "discuss the robustness of the findings with respect to forcefield choices".

      The Reviewer raises an important but rather complex question, and one which can, of course, be posed for any molecular dynamics simulation study. The short answer is that we have chosen state-of-the-art forcefields, which have been shown to give results for the spike that are in good agreement with experiments; glycosylated spike simulations are rather computationally expensive, and constructing the models also requires significant human time and effort. Thus, while in principle interesting, it is not practical to repeat the current simulations with different forcefields. However, as detailed below, comparison of our simulations of the glycosylated and non-glycosylated [Oliveira et al. (2022) Comput Struct Biotechnol J] spike using different forcefields indicates that our conclusions are robust and are not dependent on the choice of forcefield. 

      Comparing the performance and accuracy of different force fields is not straightforward, as the results depend on the system of interest, properties simulated and sampling. In this work, the CHARMM36m all-atom additive force field was used to describe the protein and glycans. CHARMM36m is a widely used force field that has previously been validated for the simulations of biological systems [Huang et al. (2013) J Comput Chem; Guvench et al. (2009) J Chem Theory Comput], including proteins, lipids and glycans, with many of studies adopting it in the literature. Additionally, the glycosylated models of the spike used in this work have also been successfully applied and tested before (e.g. [Dommer et al. (2023) Int J High Perform Comput Appl; Sztain et al. (2021) Nat Chem; Casalino et al. (2021) Int J High Perform Comput Appl; Casalino et al. (2020) ACS Cent Sci]), with their dynamics shown to correlate well with experimental data.   

      It is also worth pointing out that, despite differences in the amplitude of the responses, the allosteric networks identified using the D-NEMD approach for the non-glycosylated [Oliveira et al. (2022) Comput Struct Biotechnol J] and glycosylated spikes are generally similar (Figure S13). While the responses for the non-glycosylated protein were extracted from simulations using the AMBER99SBILDN forcefield [Oliveira et al. (2022) Comput Struct Biotechnol J], those reported in this work were obtained from trajectories using the CHARMM36m forcefield. The similarity between the responses for the two systems (which were simulated using different forcefields) is a good indication that our findings are forcefield independent. 

      (4) The Reviewer suggests comparing our findings with "alternative methods of analysing allostery". 

      As stated above in our response to Reviewer 2 point 2, we consider the suggested comparison an excellent idea. We have therefore performed a dynamic cross-correlation analysis to identify the regions in the protein coupled to the FA site in both equilibrium and nonequilibrium conditions (see Figures S22-S23). Overall, this analysis shows that the FA site motions are strongly coupled to the RBDs and moderately to weakly connected to the NTDs and fusion peptide surrounding regions (please see a detailed description of the results of the correlation analysis in our response to Reviewer 2 point 2). The cross-correlation analysis performed was added to the manuscript, and two new figures were included in the Supporting Information (Figures S22-S23): the first, showing the cross-correlation maps for the D-NEMD and equilibrium simulations; the second, showing the statistical correlations for R408 and K417 (two residues forming the FA site and that can directly interact with the carboxylate head group of LA). 

      We agree that comparing different allosteric analysis methods is interesting, informative and important. As noted above, we have compared D-NEMD and other nonequilibrium and equilibrium MD analysis methods for allostery in the well-characterised K-Ras system [Castelli et al.  (2023) JACS].

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:  

      Reviewer # 1 (Public Review): 

      Summary:

      The authors use an innovative behavior assay (chamber preference test) and standard calcium imaging experiments on cultured dorsal root ganglion (DRG) neurons to evaluate the consequences of global knockout of TRPV1 and TRPM2, and overexpression of TRPV1, on warmth detection. They find a profound effect of TRPM2 elimination in the behavioral assay, whereas the elimination of TRPV1 has the largest effect on the neuronal responses. These findings are very important, as there is substantial ongoing discussion in the field regarding the contribution of TRP channels to different aspects of thermosensation.

      Strengths:

      The chamber preference test is an important innovation compared to the standard two-plate test, as it depends on thermal information sampled from the entire skin, as opposed to only the plantar side of the paws. With this assay, and the detailed analysis, the authors provide strong supporting evidence for a role of TRPM2 in warmth avoidance. The conceptual framework using the Drift Diffusion Model provides a first glimpse of how this decision of a mouse to change between temperatures can be interpreted and may form the basis for further analysis of thermosensory behavior.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors juxtapose these behavioral data with calcium imaging data using isolated DRG neurons. As the authors acknowledge, it remains unclear whether the clear behavioral effect seen in the TRPM2 knockout animals is directly related to TRPM2 functioning as a warmth sensor in sensory neurons. The effects of the TRPM2 KO on the proportion of warmth sensing neurons are very subtle, and TRPM2 may also play a role in the behavioral assay through its expression in thermoregulatory processes in the brain. Future behavioral experiments on sensory-neuron specific TRPM2 knockout animals will be required to clarify this important point.

      Reviewer # 1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) I have no further suggestions for the authors, and congratulate them with their excellent study.

      For the authors information, ref. 42 does contain behavioral data from both male (Fig. 4 and Extended Figure 7) and female (Extended Figure 8) mice.

      We thank the referee for pointing out that both males and female mice were tested in the Vandewauw et al. 2018 study. We deliberated whether to include this at the appropriate section of our manuscript (“Limitations of the Study”). But since Vandewauw et al. assessed noxious heat temperatures and we here assess innocuous warmth temperature, we felt that this reference would not add to the clarification whether there are sex differences in Trp channelbased warmth temperature sensing. In particular, we did not want to “use” the argument and to suggest that there are no sex temperature differences in the warmth range just because Vandewauw et al. did not observe major sex differences in the noxious temperature range. 

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):  

      Summary and strengths:

      In the manuscript, Abd El Hay et al investigate the role of thermally sensitive ion channels TRPM2 and TRPV1 in warm preference and their dynamic response features to thermal stimulation. They develop a novel thermal preference task, where both the floor and air temperature are controlled, and conclude that mice likely integrate floor with air temperature to form a thermal preference. They go on to use knockout mice and show that TRPM2-/- mice play a role in the avoidance of warmer temperatures. Using a new approach for culturing DRG neurons they show the involvement of both channels in warm responsiveness and dynamics. This is an interesting study with novel methods that generate important new information on the different roles of TRPV1 and TRPM2 on thermal behavior.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thanks to the authors for addressing all the points raised. They now include more details about the classifier, better place their work in context of the literature, corrected the FOVs, and explained the model a bit further. The new analysis in Figure 2 has thrown up some surprising results about cellular responses that seem to reduce the connection between the cellular and behavioral data and there are a few things to address because of this:

      (1) TRPM2 deficient responses: The differences in the proportion of TRPM2 deficient responders compared to WT are only observed at one amplitude (39C), and even at this amplitude the effect is subtle. Most surprisingly, TRPM2 deficient cells have an enhanced response to warm compared to WT mice to 33C, but the same response amplitude as WT at 36C and 39C. The authors discuss why this disconnect might be the case, but together with the lack of differences between WT and TRPM2 deficient mice in Fig 3, the data seem in good agreement with ref 7 that there is little effect of TRPM2 on DRG responses to warm in contrast to a larger effect of TRPV1. This doesn't take away from the fact there is a behavioral phenotype in the TRPM2 deficient mice, but the impact of TRPM2 on DRG cellular warm responses is weak and the authors should tone down or remove statements about the strength of TRPM2's impact throughout the manuscript, for example:

      "Trpv1 and Trpm2 knockouts have decreased proportions of WSNs."

      "this is the first cellular evidence for the involvement of TRPM2 on the response of DRG sensory neurons to warm-temperature stimuli"

      "we demonstrate that TRPV1 and TRPM2 channels contribute differently to temperature detection, supported by behavioural and cellular data"

      "TRPV1 and TRPM2 affect the abundance of WSNs, with TRPV1 mediating the rapid, dynamic response to warmth and TRPM2 affecting the population response of WSNs."

      "Lack of TRPV1 or TRPM2 led to a significant reduction in the proportion of WSNs, compared to wildtype cultures".

      We agree with the referee that the somewhat surprising result of the subtle phenotype in Trpm2 knock-out DRG culture experiments, that became detectable in the course of the new analysis, was overemphasized in the previous version of the manuscript. Per suggestion, we have toned down or removed the statements in the revised manuscript (for the referee to find those changes easily, they are indicated in “track-changes mode” in the submitted document).  

      (2) The new analysis also shows that the removal of TRPV1 leads to cellular responses with smaller responses at low stimulus levels but larger responses with longer latencies at higher stimulus levels. Authors should discuss this further and how it fits with the behavioral data.

      Because these changes shown in Fig. 2E are also subtle (similar to the cellular Trpm2 phenotype discussed above), and because both the “% Responders” (Fig 2.D) and The AUC analysis (Fig. 2F) show a reduction in Trpv1 knock out cultures ––both, at lower and at higher stimulus levels–– we did not want to overstate this difference too much and therefore did not further discuss this aspect in the context of the behavioral differences observed in the Trpv1 knock-out animals.  

      (3) Analysis clarification: authors state that TRPM2 deficient WSNs show "Their response to the second and third stimulus, however, are similar to wildtype WSNs, suggesting that tuning of the response magnitude to different warmth stimuli is degraded in Trpm2-/- animals." but is there a graded response in WT mice? It looks like there is in terms of the %responders but not in terms of response amplitude or AUC. Authors could show stats on the figure showing differences in response amplitude/AUC/responders% to different stimulus amplitudes within the WT group.

      We have added the statistics in the main text, you find them on page 7 (also in “track changes mode”).

      (4) New discussion point: sex differences are "similar to what has been shown for an operant-based thermal choice assay (11,56)", but in their rebuttal, they mention that ref 11 did not report sex differences. 56 does. Check this.

      Thank you for pointing out this mishap. We have now corrected this in the “Limitations of the study” section of the discussion and have removed the Paricio-Montesions et al study from that section and slightly revised the text (see “track-changes” on page 16).

      (5) The authors added in new text about the drift diffusion model in the results, however it's still not completely clear whether the "noise" is due to a perceptual deficit or some other underlying cause. Perhaps authors could discuss this further in the discussion.

      We have now included more discussion concerning this (page 14):

      “However, the increased noise in the drift-di3usion model points to a less reliable temperature detection mechanism. Although noise in drift di3usion models can encompass various sources of variability—ranging from peripheral sensory processing to central mechanisms like attention or motor initiation—the most parsimonious interpretation in our study aligns with a perceptual deficit, given the altered temperatureresponsive neuronal populations we observed. This implies that, despite the substantial loss of WSNs, the remaining neuronal population provides su3icient information for the detection of warmer temperatures, albeit with reduced precision”

      Within the limits of the data that is available, we hope the referee agrees with us that we have now adequately discussed this aspect; we feel that any further discussion would be too speculative.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Authors of this article have previously shown the involvement of the transcription factor Zinc finger homeobox-3 (ZFHX3) in the function of the circadian clock and the development/differentiation of the central circadian clock in the suprachiasmatic nucleus (SCN) of the hypothalamus. Here, they show that ZFHX3 plays a critical role in the transcriptional regulation of numerous genes in the SCN. Using inducible knockout mice, they further demonstrate that the deletion Of Zfhx3 induces a phase advance of the circadian clock, both at the molecular and behavioral levels.

      Strengths:

      - Inducible deletion of Zfhx3 in adults

      - Behavioral analysis

      - Properly designed and analyzed ChIP-Seq and RNA-Seq supporting the conclusion of the behavioral analysis

      Weaknesses:

      - Further characterization of the disruption of the activity of the SCN is required.

      (1) We thank the reviewer for their valuable inputs. Indeed, a comprehensive behavioral assessment of mice of this genotype was executed in Wilcox et al. ;2017 study. In Wilcox et al.; 2017, Figure 4, 6-h phase advance (jetlag) clearly showed faster reentrainment in ZFHX3-KO mice when compared to the controls.

      - The description of the controls needs some clarification.

      (2) We agree with the reviewer and have modified the text at line 211-212 to clearly describe the controls.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      ZFHX3 is a transcription factor expressed in discrete populations of adult SCN and was shown by the authors previously to control circadian behavioral rhythms using either a dominant missense mutation in Zfhx3 or conditional null Zfhx3 mutation using the Ubc-Cre line (Wilcox et al., 2017). In the current manuscript, the authors assess the function of ZFHX3 by using a multi-omics approach including ChIPSeq in wildtype SCNs and RNAseq of SCN tissues from both wildtype and conditional null mice. RNAseq analysis showed a loss of oscillation in Bmal1 and changes in expression levels of other clock output genes. Moreover, a phase advance gene transcriptional profile using the TimeTeller algorithm suggests the presence of a regulatory network that could underlie the observed pattern of advanced activity onset in locomotor behavior in knockout mice.

      In figure1, the authors identified the ZFHX3 bound sites using ChIPseq and compared the loci with other histone marks that occur at promoters, TSS, enhancers and intergenic regions. And the analysis broadly points to a role for ZFHX3 in transcriptional regulation. The vast majority of nearly 40000 peaks overlapped H3K4me3 and K27ac marks, active promoters which also included genes falling under the GO category circadian rhythms. However, no significant differential ZFHX3 bound peaks were detected between ZT3 and ZT15. In these experiments, it is not clear if and how the different ChIP samples (ZFHX3 and histone PTM ChIPs) were normalized/downsampled for analysis. Moreover, it seems that ZFHX3 binding or recruitment has little to do with whether the promoters are active.

      (3) We thank the reviewer for their valuable comment. Different ChIP samples (ZFHX3 and histone PTM ChIPs) were treated in the same manner from preprocessing (quality control by FastQC, adapter trimming, alignment to mm10 genome) and peak calling was performed using respective input samples as control using MACS2 as mentioned in Methods. The data was normalized using bamCoverage tools and bigwig files were generated for visual inspection using UCSC Genome Browser. These additional details are added to Methods at line 592. Finally, BEDTools was employed to study overlapping peaks between ZFHX3 and histone PTMs.

      We agree that, alone, the current data does not make any claim for ZFHX3 being crucial for promoter to be active. Our data clearly suggests that a vast majority of ZFHX3 genomic binding in the SCN was observed at active promoters marked by H3K4me3 and H3K27ac and potentially regulating gene transcription.

      Based on a enrichment of ARNT domains next to K4Me3 and K27ac PTMs, the authors propose a model where the core-clock TFs and ZFHX3 interact. If the authors develop other assays beyond just predictions to test their hypothesis, it would strengthen the argument for role in circadian transcription in the SCN. It would be important in this context to perform a ChIP-seq experiment for ZFHX3 in the knockout animal (described from Figure 2 onwards) to eliminate the possibility of non-specific enrichment of signal from "open chromatin'. Alternatively, a ChIPseq analysis for BMAL1 or CLOCK could also strengthen this argument to identify the sites co-occupied by ZFHX3 and core-clock TFs.

      (4a) We agree that follow-up experiments such as BMAL1/CLOCK ChIPseq suggested by the reviewer will further confirm the proposed interaction of ZFHX3 with core-clock TFs. However, this is beyond the scope of the current study. 

      (4b) Again, conducting complementary ChIPseq in ZFHX3 knockout mice will strengthen the findings, but conducting TF-ChIPseq in a specific brain tissue such as the SCN (unlike peripheral tissues such as liver) does not only warrant use of multiple animals per sample but is also technically challenging and time-consuming to ensure specificity of the sample. For these reasons, datasets such as ours on the SCN are uncommon. Furthermore, in this particular context, we are certain that, based on current dataset, the ZFHX3 peaks (narrow) we observed were well-defined and met the specified statistical criteria mitigating any risk of signal arising from non-specific enrichment from open-chromatin regions.

      Next, they compared locomotor activity rhythms in floxed mice with or without tamoxifen treatment. As reported before in Wilcox et al 2017, the loss of ZFHX3 led to a shorter free running period and reduced amplitude and earlier onset of activity. Overall, the behavioral data in Figure 2 and supplementary figure 2 has been reported before and are not novel.

      (5) We recognise that a detailed circadian behavior assessment from adult mice lacking ZFHX3 has been conducted previously by Nolan lab (Wilcox et al; 2017). In the current study, however, we used a separate cohort of mice, to focus on the behavioral advance noted in 24-h LD cycle and generated a more refined assessment. Importantly, these mice were also used for transcriptomic studies as detailed in Figure 3, which we consider to be a positive feature of our experimental design: behavior and molecular analyses were performed on the same animals.

      Next, the authors performed RNAseq at 4hr intervals on wildtype and knockout animals maintained in light/dark cycles to determine the impact of loss of ZFHX3. Overall transcriptomic analysis indicated changes in gene expression in nearly 36% of expressed genes, with nearly half being upregulated while an equal fraction was downregulated. Pathways affected included mostly neureopeptide neurotransmitter pathways. Surprisingly, there was no correlation between the direction in change in expression and TF binding since nearly all the sites were bound by ZFHX3 and the active histone PTMs. The ChIP-seq experiment for ZFHX3 in the UBC-Cre+Tam mice again could help resolve the real targets of ZFHX3 and the transcriptional state in knockout animals.

      (6) We agree with the reviewer that most of the differentially expressed genes showed ZFHX3 binding at active promoter sites. That said, the current dataset is in line with recently published ZFHX3-CHIPseq data by Baca et al; 2024 [PMID: 38412861] in human neural stem cells and Hu et al; 2024 [PMID: 38871709] in human prostate cancer cells that clearly suggests ZFHX3 binds at active promoters and act as chromatin remodellers/mediators that modulate gene transcription depending on the accessory TFs assembled at target genes. Therefore, finding no correlation in the direction of change in expression is not striking. 

      To determine the fraction of rhythmic transcripts, Using dryR, the authors categorise the rhythmic transcriptome into modules that include genes that lose rhythmicity in the KO, gain rhythmicity in the KO or remain unaffected or partially affected. The analysis indicates that a large fraction of the rhythmic transcriptome is affected in the KO model. However, among core-clock genes only Bmal1 expression is affected showing a complete loss of rhythm. The authors state a decrease in Clock mRNA expression (line 294) but the panel figure 4A does not show this data. Instead it depicts the loss in Avp expression - {{ misstated in line 321 ( we noted severe loss in 24-h rhythm for crucial SCN neuropeptides such as Avp (Fig. 3a).}}

      (7a) Indeed, among the core-clock genes rhythmic expression is lost after ZFHX3 knockout only for Bmal1. However, given the mice were rhythmic (as assessed by wheel-running activity) in LD conditions, the observed 24-h gene expression rhythm in the majority of core-clock genes (Pers and Crys) is consistent with behavior data, and suggests towards an altered molecular clock with plausible scenarios as explained at line 439. That said, the unique and well-defined changes (amplitude and phase) observed as demonstrated in Figure 5 highlights a model in which ZFHX3 exerts differential control, for example in case of Per2 noted advance in molecular rhythm (~2-h), but no such change in Cry, presents an opportunity to delineate further the regulation of TTFL genes.

      (7b) Line 294 revised as – “Bmal1 demonstrating a complete loss of 24-h rhythm (Fig. 4A), and its counterpart Clock mRNA showing overall reduced expression levels (Supplementary Table 3)”.

      7c) Line 321 is referring to loss of Avp expression and the typo has been corrected from “Figure 3a to 4a”. Thank you. 

      However, core-clock genes such as Pers and Crys show minor or no change in expression patterns while Per2 and Per3 show a ~2hr phase advance. While these could only weakly account for the behavioral phase advance, the authors used TimeTeller to assess circadian phase in wildtype and ZFHX3 deficient mice. This approach clearly indicated that while the clock is not disrupted in the knockout animals, the phase advance can be correctly predicted from a network of gene expression patterns.

      Strengths:

      The authors use a multiomic strategy in order to reveal the role of the ZFHX3 transcription factor with a combination of TF and histone PTM ChIPseq, time-resolved RNAseq from wildtype and knockout mice and modeling the transcriptomic data using TimeTeller. The RNAseq experiments are nicely controlled and the analysis of the data indicates a clear impact on gene-expression levels in the knockout mice and the presence of a regulatory network that could underlie the advanced activity onset behavior.

      Weaknesses:

      It is not clear whether ZFHX3 has a direct role in any of the processes and seems to be a general factor that marks H3K4me3 and K27ac marked chromatin. Why it would specifically impact the core-clock TTFL clock gene expression or indeed daily gene expression rhythms is not clear either. Details for treatment of different ChIP samples (ZFHX3 and histone PTM ChIPs) on data normalization for analysis are needed. The loss of complete rhythmicity of Avp and other neuropeptides or indeed other TFs could instead account for the transcriptional deregulation noted in the knockout mice.

      (8) We thank the reviewer for the constructive feedback.  The current data suggests ZFHX3 acts as a mediating factor, occupying targeted active promoter sites and regulating gene expression by partnering with other key TFs in the SCN. Please see point 6 for clarification. The binding sites of ZFHX3 clearly showed enrichment for E-box(CACGTG) motif bound by CLOCK/BMAL1 along with binding sites for key SCN-specific TFs such as RFX (please see Supplementary Fig1). Our data thereby shows that it affects both core-clock and clock output genes (at varied levels) thereby exercising a pervasive control over the SCN transcriptome.

      For treatment of ChIP samples please see point 3. We followed ENCODE guidelines strictly. 

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      - The early activity onset associated with a short photoperiod is a phenotype found in mice with a perturbed function of the SCN like Per2 mutant (PMID: 17218255), or Clock KO (PMID: 22431615). Such disruption of the SCN function also leads to a faster synchronization to day feeding (PMID: 23824542) or jetlag (PMID: 25063847; PMID: 24092737). Therefore, authors should study the synchronizing function of these mice to day feeding and/or jetlag.

      (9) Please see our response to point 1.

      - The description of the negative controls needs clarification. While the "Method" suggests that both Cre- and Cre+ mice are treated with Tamoxifen, the text rather suggest that the controls are Cre- and Cre+ animals non-treated by Tamoxifen. Because of the potential effect of Tamoxifen on gene expression, Cre- treated animals are a required control.

      (10) We thank the reviewer. As detailed in Methods, both Cre- and Cre+ mice were treated with Tamoxifen and compared. The text had been revised at line 212. In addition to this, another genetic control (-Tamoxifen) was also used (Figure 2 and 3).

      - On line 486, authors wrote "It is important to note that although in the present study we used adult-specific Zfhx3 null mutants resulting in global loss of ZFHX3, the effects observed both at molecular and behavioural levels are independent of its functional role(s) in other tissues." On what evidence is this statement based? Using global KO rather suggest a potential role of other tissues.

      (11) We agree with the reviewer, but at line 486 we refer to the effects observed at circadian behavior and daily gene expression in the SCN to be independent of pleiotropic roles of ZFHX3 such as involvement in angiogenesis, spinocerebellar ataxia etc. We have revised the text.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      It is not clear whether the behavioral experiments presented in this study were performed on a new set of animals - different from the cohort used in the Wilcox et al 2017 paper. For example, the proportion of total activity graphed in Figure 2C look strikingly similar to activity counts in Figure 3A in the prior publication (doi: 10.1177/0748730417722631)- down to the small burst in activity after ZT20 in the control (-Tam) group.

      (12) The behavioral experiments presented in this study were performed on a completely new cohort of mice to those used in Wilcox et al.; 2017. The mice used for behavioral assessment. In the current study were later used for molecular experiments. Please see point 5.

      Information on ChIP-seq such as read length, PE or SE seq, number of reads/replicate/condition/sample is missing. Versions of the softwares used should be indicated if known.

      (13) The details are added as:

      (13a) “Briefly, SCN punches were pooled from 80 mice at each. designated times (ZT3, ZT15) corresponding to one biological replicate per timepoint” at line 567.

      (13b) “24 ug sheared chromatin sample collected from each time point (ZT3, ZT15)” at line 571.

      (13c) “75-bp single end sequencing : 30 million reads/sample” at line 577.  

      (13d) “At line 584 – MACS algorithm v2.1.0 added”

      Versions of other softwares used were already mentioned.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In their study, Avraham-Davidi et al. combined scRNA-seq and spatial mapping studies to profile two preclinical mouse models of colorectal cancer: Apcfl/fl VilincreERT2 (AV) and Apcfl/fl LSL-KrasG12D Trp53fl/fl Rosa26LSL-tdTomato/+ VillinCreERT2 (AKPV). In the first part of the manuscript, the authors describe the analysis of the normal colon and dysplastic lesions induced in these models following tamoxifen injection. They highlight broad variations in immune and stromal cell composition within dysplastic lesions, emphasizing the infiltration of monocytes and granulocytes, the accumulation of IL-17+gdT cells, and the presence of a distinct group of endothelial cells. A major focus of the study is the remodeling of the epithelial compartment, where the most significant changes are observed. Using non-negative matrix factorization, the authors identify molecular programs of epithelial cell functions, emphasizing stemness, Wnt signaling, angiogenesis, and inflammation as major features associated with dysplastic cells. They conclude that findings from scRNA-seq analyses in mouse models are transposable to human CRC. In the second part of the manuscript, the authors aim to provide the spatial context for their scRNA-seq findings using Slide-seq and TACCO. They demonstrate that dysplastic lesions are disorganized and contain tumor-specific regions, which contextualize the spatial proximity between specific cell states and gene programs. Finally, they claim that these spatial organizations are conserved in human tumors and associate region-based gene signatures with patient outcomes in public datasets. Overall, the data were collected and analyzed using solid and validated methodology to offer a useful resource to the community.

      Main comments:

      (1) Clarity<br /> The manuscript would benefit from a substantial reorganization to improve clarity and accessibility for a broad readership. The text could be shortened and the number of figure panels reduced to emphasize the novel contributions of this work while minimizing extensive discussions on general and expected findings, such as tissue disorganization in dysplastic lesions. Additionally, figure panels are not consistently introduced in the correct order, and some are not discussed at all (e.g., Figure S1D; Figure 3C is introduced before Figure 3A; several panels in Figure 4 are not discussed). The annotation of scRNA-seq cell states is insufficiently explained, with no corresponding information about associated genes provided in the figures or tables. Multiple annotations are used to describe cell groups (e.g., TKN01 = γδ T and CD8 T, TKN05 = γδT_IL17+), but these are not jointly accessible in the figures, making the manuscript challenging to follow. It is also not clear what is the respective value of the two mouse models and time points of tissue collection in the analysis.

      (2) Novelty<br /> While the study is of interest, it does not present major findings that significantly advance the field or motivate new directions and hypotheses. Many conclusions related to tissue composition and patient outcomes, such as the epithelial programs of Wnt signaling, angiogenesis, and stem cells, are well-established and not particularly novel. Greater exploration of the scRNA-seq data beyond cell type composition could enhance the novelty of the findings. For instance, several tumor microenvironment clusters uniquely detected in dysplastic lesions (e.g., Mono2, Mono3, Gran01, Gran02) are identified, but no further investigation is conducted to understand their biological programs, such as applying nNMF as was done for epithelial cells. Additional efforts to explore precise tissue localization and cellular interactions within tissue niches would provide deeper insights and go beyond the limited analyses currently displayed in the manuscript.

      (3) Validation<br /> Several statements made by the authors are insufficiently supported by the data presented in the manuscript and should be nuanced in the absence of proper validation. For example:<br /> (a) RNA velocity analyses: The conclusions drawn from these analyses are speculative and need further support.<br /> (b) Annotations of epithelial clusters as dysplastic: These annotations could have been validated through morphological analyses and staining on FFPE slides.<br /> (c) Conservation of mouse epithelial programs in human tumors: The data in Figure S5B does not convincingly demonstrate the enrichment of stem cell program 16 in human samples. This should be more explicitly stated in the text, given the emphasis placed on this program by the authors.<br /> (d) Figure S6E: Cluster Epi06 is significantly overrepresented in spatial data compared to scRNA-seq, yet the authors claim that cell type composition is largely recapitulated without further discussion, which reduces confidence in other conclusions drawn.<br /> Furthermore, stronger validation of key dysplastic regions (regions 6, 8, and 11) in mouse and human tissues using antibody-based imaging with markers identified in the analyses would have considerably strengthened the study. Such validation would better contextualize the distribution, composition, and relative abundance of these regions within human tumors, increasing the significance of the findings and aiding the generation of new pathophysiological hypotheses.

    2. Author response:

      We thank the reviewers for their appreciation of our work and the recommendations to improve the manuscript. We have included a point-by-point response below. To summarize, for revision we plan to:

      • Clarify the manuscript to improve readability and coherence,

      • Ensure that all figures are thoroughly discussed in the text,

      • Tone down biological claims based on RNA velocity where applicable.

      While we agree with the reviewer that functional validation and/or spatial proteomics data accompanying this study could provide additional insights and broader contextualization, this is unfortunately beyond the scope of the study.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors conducted a spatial analysis of dysplastic colon tissue using the Slide-seq method. Their main objective is to build a detailed spatial atlas that identifies distinct cellular programs and microenvironments within dysplastic lesions. Next, they correlated this observation with clinical outcomes in human colorectal cancer.

      Strengths:

      The work is a good example of utilising spatial methods to study different tumour models. The authors identified a unique stem cell program to understand tumours gently and improve patient stratification strategies.

      Weaknesses:

      However, the study's predominantly descriptive nature is a significant limitation. Although the spatial maps and correlations between cell states are interesting observations, the lack of functional validation-primarily through experiments in mouse models-weakens the causal inferences regarding the roles these cellular programs play in tumour progression and therapy resistance.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. Indeed, functional validation to pin down causal dependencies and a more thorough investigation of tumor progression and therapy resistance both in mouse model as well as human patients and/or patient derived samples would broaden the insights to be gained from this work. Unfortunately, this is beyond the scope of this study.

      The authors also missed an opportunity to link the mutational status of malignant cells with the cellular neighbourhoods.

      The data reported in this study only contains spatial data for one mouse model (AV). As spatial data for the other model (AKPV) is missing, it is not possible to link the mutational type of the model with the cellular neighborhoods. We did investigate whether there is extra "somatic" mutational heterogeneity in the AV data, both regarding single nucleotide variations (SNVs) and copy number variations (CNVs). But at the time when the mice were sacrificed (after 3 weeks) there was no significant mutational heterogeneity discoverable.

      Overall, the study contributes to profiling the dysplastic colon landscape. The methodologies and data will benefit the research community, but further functional validation is crucial to validate the biological and clinical implications of the described cellular interactions.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In their study, Avraham-Davidi et al. combined scRNA-seq and spatial mapping studies to profile two preclinical mouse models of colorectal cancer: Apcfl/fl VilincreERT2 (AV) and Apcfl/fl LSL-KrasG12D Trp53fl/fl Rosa26LSL-tdTomato/+ VillinCreERT2 (AKPV). In the first part of the manuscript, the authors describe the analysis of the normal colon and dysplastic lesions induced in these models following tamoxifen injection. They highlight broad variations in immune and stromal cell composition within dysplastic lesions, emphasizing the infiltration of monocytes and granulocytes, the accumulation of IL-17+gdT cells, and the presence of a distinct group of endothelial cells. A major focus of the study is the remodeling of the epithelial compartment, where the most significant changes are observed. Using non-negative matrix factorization, the authors identify molecular programs of epithelial cell functions, emphasizing stemness, Wnt signaling, angiogenesis, and inflammation as major features associated with dysplastic cells. They conclude that findings from scRNA-seq analyses in mouse models are transposable to human CRC. In the second part of the manuscript, the authors aim to provide the spatial context for their scRNA-seq findings using Slide-seq and TACCO. They demonstrate that dysplastic lesions are disorganized and contain tumor-specific regions, which contextualize the spatial proximity between specific cell states and gene programs. Finally, they claim that these spatial organizations are conserved in human tumors and associate region-based gene signatures with patient outcomes in public datasets. Overall, the data were collected and analyzed using solid and validated methodology to offer a useful resource to the community.

      Main comments:

      (1) Clarity

      The manuscript would benefit from a substantial reorganization to improve clarity and accessibility for a broad readership. The text could be shortened and the number of figure panels reduced to emphasize the novel contributions of this work while minimizing extensive discussions on general and expected findings, such as tissue disorganization in dysplastic lesions. Additionally, figure panels are not consistently introduced in the correct order, and some are not discussed at all (e.g., Figure S1D; Figure 3C is introduced before Figure 3A; several panels in Figure 4 are not discussed). The annotation of scRNA-seq cell states is insufficiently explained, with no corresponding information about associated genes provided in the figures or tables. Multiple annotations are used to describe cell groups (e.g., TKN01 = γδ T and CD8 T, TKN05 = γδT_IL17+), but these are not jointly accessible in the figures, making the manuscript challenging to follow. It is also not clear what is the respective value of the two mouse models and time points of tissue collection in the analysis.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. For the revision we plan to clarify the manuscript to improve readability and coherence in text and figures, and expand on the cell type nomenclature.

      (2) Novelty

      While the study is of interest, it does not present major findings that significantly advance the field or motivate new directions and hypotheses. Many conclusions related to tissue composition and patient outcomes, such as the epithelial programs of Wnt signaling, angiogenesis, and stem cells, are well-established and not particularly novel. Greater exploration of the scRNA-seq data beyond cell type composition could enhance the novelty of the findings. For instance, several tumor microenvironment clusters uniquely detected in dysplastic lesions (e.g., Mono2, Mono3, Gran01, Gran02) are identified, but no further investigation is conducted to understand their biological programs, such as applying nNMF as was done for epithelial cells. Additional efforts to explore precise tissue localization and cellular interactions within tissue niches would provide deeper insights and go beyond the limited analyses currently displayed in the manuscript.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. Our study aimed to spatially characterize the tumor microenvironment, with scRNA-seq analysis serving to support this spatial characterization.<br /> Due to technical limitations—such as the number of samples and the limited capture efficiency of Slide-seq—the resolution of immune cell identification in our spatial analysis is constrained. Additionally, while immune and stromal cells formed distinct clusters, epithelial cells exhibited a continuum that was better captured using nNMF.

      Lastly, our manuscript provides a general characterization of monocyte and granulocyte populations in scRNA-seq (line 142) and their spatial microenvironments (line 390). We believe that additional analyses of these populations would be beyond the scope of this study and could place an unnecessary burden on the reader. Instead, we suggest that such analyses be explored in future studies.

      We remark that we analyzed tissue localization for two entirely different spatial transcriptomics assays (Slide-seq and Cartana) to the resolution of cell types and programs, which was feasible within the constraints of the sparsity and gene panel and sample size in the experiments. A path to further increase the resolution of investigation in this dataset is to include other datasets, e.g. by the emerging transformer-based spatial transcriptomics integration methods, which unfortunately is outside the scope of the current study.

      We also remark that the current manuscript already includes an investigation of cellular interactions within tissue niches based on COMMOT (Fig 4k, Fig S8i, Supp Item 4).

      (3) Validation

      Several statements made by the authors are insufficiently supported by the data presented in the manuscript and should be nuanced in the absence of proper validation. For example:<br /> (a) RNA velocity analyses: The conclusions drawn from these analyses are speculative and need further support.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. We will clarify that our conclusions from the RNA velocity analysis need further support by experimental validation, which is out of the scope of the study.

      (b) Annotations of epithelial clusters as dysplastic: These annotations could have been validated through morphological analyses and staining on FFPE slides.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. While this could have been a possible approach, our study primarily relies on scRNA-seq, which does not preserve tissue morphology, and Slide-seq of fresh tissue, where such an analysis is particularly challenging.

      (c) Conservation of mouse epithelial programs in human tumors: The data in Figure S5B does not convincingly demonstrate the enrichment of stem cell program 16 in human samples. This should be more explicitly stated in the text, given the emphasis placed on this program by the authors.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. Indeed, Figure S5B does not demonstrate the program 16 enrichment in human samples. We will clarify this in the manuscript.

      (d) Figure S6E: Cluster Epi06 is significantly overrepresented in spatial data compared to scRNA-seq, yet the authors claim that cell type composition is largely recapitulated without further discussion, which reduces confidence in other conclusions drawn.

      We thank the reviewer for this remark. Indeed, Epi06 was a cluster which drew our attention during early analyses for its mixed expression profiles with contributions of vastly different cell types. We concluded that this is best explained by doublets and excluded it from further analysis. In the current manuscript we only briefly hinted at this in figure legend 2A ("Cluster Epi06: doublets (not called by Scrublet)"), and we will expand on this in the revised manuscript. The observation that this cluster is significantly overrepresented in the annotation of the spatial data is not surprising in this context as this annotation comes from the decomposition of compositional data which contains contributions of multiple cells per Slide-seq bead which are structurally very similar to doublets. We will add this point as well to the revised manuscript.

      Furthermore, stronger validation of key dysplastic regions (regions 6, 8, and 11) in mouse and human tissues using antibody-based imaging with markers identified in the analyses would have considerably strengthened the study. Such validation would better contextualize the distribution, composition, and relative abundance of these regions within human tumors, increasing the significance of the findings and aiding the generation of new pathophysiological hypotheses.

      We agree with the reviewer with their assessment that validation by antibody-based imaging (or other spatial proteomics data) would have been useful follow-up experiments to the experiments and results presented in our manuscript, yet these are beyond the scope of the current study.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript by Yang et al. presents a potentially novel mechanism by which Plscr1 defends against influenza virus infection. Using a global knockout (KO) and a tissue-specific overexpression mouse model, the authors demonstrate that Plscr1-KO mice exhibit increased susceptibility and inflammation following IAV infection. In contrast, overexpression of Plscr1 in ciliated epithelial cells protects mice from infection. Through transcriptomic analysis in mice and mechanistic studies in cell culture models, the authors reveal that Plscr1 transcriptionally upregulates Ifnlr1 expression and physically interacts with this receptor on the plasma membrane, thereby enhancing IFN-λ-mediated viral clearance.

      Overall, it's a well-performed study, however, causality between Plscr1 and Ifnlr1 expression needs to be more firmly established. This is because two recent studies of PLSCR1 KO cells infected with different viruses found no major differences in gene expression levels compared with their WT controls (Xu et al. Nature, 2023; LePen et al. PLoS Biol, 2024). There were also defects in the expression of other cytokines (type I and II IFNs plus TNF-alpha) so a clear explanation of why Ifnlr1 was chosen should also be given.

      While Plscr1 has long been recognized as a cell-intrinsic antiviral restriction factor, few studies have explored its broader physiological role. This study thus provides interesting insights into a specific function of Plscr1 in IAV-permissive airway epithelial cells and its contribution to whole-body anti-viral immunity. There are three important issues that should be addressed, and several minor points should also be considered.

      (1) The authors propose that Plscr1 restricts IAV infection by regulating the type III IFN signaling pathway. While the data show a positive correlation between Ifnlr1 and Plscr1 levels in both mouse and cell culture models, additional evidence is needed to establish causality between the impaired type III IFN pathway, and the increased susceptibility observed in Plscr1-KO mice. To strengthen this conclusion, the following experiments could be undertaken: (i) Measure IAV titers in WT, Plscr1-KO, Ifnlr1-KO, and Plscr1/ Ifnlr1-double KO cells. If the antiviral activity of Plscr1 is highly dependent on Ifnlr1, there should be no further increase in IAV titers in double KO cells compared to single KO cells; (ii) over-express Plscr1 in Ifnlr1-KO cells to determine if it still inhibits IAV infection. If Plscr1's main action is to upregulate Ifnlr1, then it should not be able to rescue susceptibility since Ifnlr1 cannot be expressed in the KO background. If Plscr1 over-expression rescues viral susceptibility, then there are Ifnlr1-independent mechanisms involved. These experiments should help clarify the relative contribution of the type III IFN pathway to Plscr1-mediated antiviral immunity.

      (2) Transcriptional activation of IFNLR1 by Plscr1 is a central mechanistic conclusion of this manuscript. A ChIP assay was used to demonstrate direct binding between Plscr1 and the Ifnrl1 promoter region. This single evidence does not sufficiently prove the role of Plscr1 in transcriptional activation. Other forms of evidence would help make this mechanistic explanation more compelling. For example, nuclear un-on experiments would demonstrate Ifnrl1 mRNA synthesis in addition to promoter binding.

      (3) In Figure 4, the authors demonstrate the interaction between Plscr1 and Ifnlr1. They suggest that this interaction modulates IFN-λ signaling. However, Figures 5C-E show that the 5CA mutant, which lacks surface localization and the ability to bind Ifnlr1, exhibits similar anti-flu activity to WT Plscr1. Does this mean the interaction between Plscr1 and Ifnlr1 is dispensable for Plscr1-mediated antiviral function? Can the authors compare the activation of IFN-λ signaling pathway in Plscr1-KO cells expressing empty vector, WT Plscr1, and 5CA mutant? This could be done by measuring downstream ISG expression or using an ISRE-luciferase reporter assay upon IFN-λ treatment.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This nice study explores the role of phospholipid scramblase 1 (PLSCR1) in regulating antiviral immunity and host morbidity during influenza A virus (IAV) infection. The authors identify PLSCR1 as a critical regulator of interferon-lambda receptor 1 (IFNLR1) expression, acting through enzymatic-independent mechanisms. Using PLSCR1-deficient and conditional overexpression mouse models, the study demonstrates that PLSCR1 enhances antiviral responses and mitigates inflammation, potentially through modulating type III interferon (IFN-λ) signaling. While the findings underline the importance of PLSCR1 in early viral control and tissue homeostasis, they also highlight its cell-specific functions, particularly in ciliated airway epithelial cells. This work contributes to understanding the interplay between host factors and antiviral pathways, paving the way for novel therapeutic strategies targeting host proteins.

      Specific Comments:

      (1) The statement that type I interferons are expressed by "almost all cells" is inaccurate (line 61). Type I IFN production is also context-dependent and often restricted to specific cell types upon infection or stimulation.

      (2) The antiviral response is assessed solely through flu M gene expression. Incorporating infectious virus titers (e.g., TCID50 or plaque assay) would provide a more robust and direct measure of antiviral activity.

      (3) While mRNA expression of interferons is measured, protein levels (e.g., through ELISA) should also be quantified to establish the functional relevance of IFN expression changes.

      (4) It is unclear whether reduced IFNLR1 expression translates to defective downstream signaling or antiviral responses after IFN-λ treatment in PLSCR1-deficient cells. This is particularly pertinent given the increase in IFN-λ ligand in vivo, which might compensate for receptor downregulation.

      (5) Detailed gating strategies for immune cell subsets are absent and should be included for clarity and reproducibility.

      (6) The study does not definitively establish that reduced IFN-λ signaling causes the observed in vivo phenotype. Increased morbidity and mortality in PLSCR1-deficient mice could also stem from elevated TNF-α levels and lung damage, as proinflammatory cytokines and/or enhanced lung damage are known contributors to influenza morbidity and mortality. This point warrants detailed discussions.

    1. “But if you think about it from the perspective of an individual,” says lab director David Rand, “for each dollar that you contribute, it gets doubled to two dollars and then split four ways – which means each person only gets 50 cents back for the dollar they contributed.”

      this logic is flawed?? if each person contributes $1, the pot is doubled from $4 to $8. $8 is then divided evenly 4 ways, resulting in each person receiving $2 each. This is a $1 return not $0.50

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      • We thank the reviewers for their useful suggestions regarding how to improve our manuscript.
      • Reviewer 3 declared that s/he did not find and evaluate the provided Supplementary Materials. As a result, many of her/his criticisms seem invalid: the requested data, validations etc. were already there in the Supplementary Figures and Tables.
      • To avoid confusion, we renamed the transgene that is commonly used as a readout for STAT-activated transcription from 10xStat92E-GFP to 10xStat92E DNA binding site-GFP (please see comments by Reviewer 2 that show how easily one can think that Stat92E protein levels go up because of the misleading name of this transgene).
      • One co-author, Martin Csordós was among the authors by mistake. Although first considered, his contribution was not included in either the original or the current manuscript version, so we removed his name from the revised version with his permission.
      • We prefer to use colour coding for Sections 2., 3. and 4. in our responses to Reviewer comments rather than splitting the responses to queries in separate sections, because many of our answers contain a mixture of planned experiments (labeled as bold), already available data (labeled as underlined), and *explanations why we think that no additional analyses are necessary* (between asterisks). Data already provided in the original submission but missed by Reviewers has white background in our responses. Reviewer comments

      Reviewer 1

      Major comments:

      R1/1. ”Figure 6E seems to indicate that a subset of Su(var)2-10/PIAS isoforms may bind to ATG8 (directly or indirectly). This leads to the straightforward prediction that this subset should be differentially affected by the selective autophagy at the center of the manuscript. That could be tested to strengthen that point. “

      Response:

      The Atg8a-binding subset of Su(var)2-10/PIAS isoforms could indeed be differentially affected by selective autophagy__. To test this, we will analyze in vivo Su(var)2-10 isoform abundance on western blots with an anti- Su(var)2-10 antibody in __Atg8aΔ12and ____Atg8aK48A/Y49A (Atg8aLDS) mutants.

      Minor comments:

      R1/2. “ in Fig S1B,C the colocalization between GFP reporters for STAT92E and AP-1 activity and glia marker does not seem convincing, indicating other cell types may be expressing them as well.”

      *Response: *

      *The overlap between glia labelling and STAT92E and AP-1 transcriptional readout reporter expression is indeed not complete. First of all, epithelial cells in the wing display both STAT92E and AP-1 activity even in uninjured conditions when glial expression of these reporters is not yet observed. Transcriptional reporter activity outside of the wing nerve was previously indicated in figures with arrowheads, now the epithelium is labeled and the regions containing nerve glia are outlined everywhere. *

      The fiber-like reporter expression after injury in the wing nerve could correspond to either glia or axons1–3. Glia in the wing nerve have a filament-like appearance resembling axons in confocal images, even glial nuclei are flat/elongated1. Importantly, STAT92E enhancer-driven GFP also labels the nucleus in expressing cells, as opposed to glially driven mtdTomato that is membrane-tethered (and thus excluded from the nucleus: see Fig. S1B, C). Of note, TRE-GFP and Stat-GFP are not expressed in neurons because the cell bodies and nuclei of wing vein neurons are never GFP-positive, see Fig. 2C, Figs. S1, S4 in Neukomm et al.1 and Figure 1 for Reviewers. We also explain this better now in the revised manuscript (please see the legend of Fig. S1).

      Nonetheless, we plan to analyze colocalization of mtdTomato-labeled neurons and TRE-GFP and Stat-GFP around the neuronal cell bodies to unequivocally show their different identities. Additionally, we will include transverse confocal sections of the genotypes in Fig. S1B, C that may better illustrate the colocalization.

      Fig. 1 for Reviewers. Neuronal (nSyb+) and Stat92E-GFP+ cell morphology in the L1 vein at the anterior wing margin around the neuronal cell bodies which occupy a stereotypical position at the sensilla1. The location and shape of neuronal nuclei (left panel) are different from Stat-GFP+ cell nuclei (right panel, please see also Fig. S1B, C) based on the circumferential GFP signal. Therefore, cells expressing TRE-GFP and Stat-GFP in injured wing nerves are glia and not neurons.

      R1/3. “p.7 Instead of "Su(var)2-10 is mainly nuclear due to its transcriptional repressor and chromatin organizer functions" It may be better to say" .. .consistent with its transcriptional repressor and chromatin organizer functions"”

      Response:

      We have modified the manuscript accordingly.

      R1/4. It is not clear whether the differences in Su(var)2-10/PIAS accumulation between Atg16 and Atg101 RNAi indicate functional differences of blocking autophagy at different stages or simply differences in RNAi efficiency (Atg16) versus the Atg101 mutant.”

      Response:

      We have added glial Atg1 (the catalytic subunit of the autophagy initiation complex that also includes Atg101) knockdown experiments that show the same lack of Su(var)2-10 accumulation in uninjured conditions as seen in the Atg101 null mutant (please see Fig. S6C). Please note that Atg16-Atg5-Atg12 dependent conjugation of LC3/Atg8a is involved in various vesicle trafficking pathways in addition to autophagy4–6, alterations of which may perturb baseline Su(var)2-10 levels in uninjured animals.

      Significance:

      R1/5. “STAT92E-dependent glial upregulation of vir-1, but not Draper, is shown, but consequences for glial functions in nerve injury are not tested.”

      Response:

      We will test antimicrobial peptide (AMP) expression in glia after nerve injury and whether this is affected by STAT92E and vir-1. Certain AMPs such as Attacin C are known to be regulated by both the Stat and NF-____κΒpathways7, and AMPs can be generally upregulated in response to brain injury8,9. This could serve pathogen clearance functions after defence lines such as the epithelium and blood-brain barrier are compromised. In addition, we will test the recruitment of glial processes into the antennal lobe after olfactory nerve injury in animals with glial STAT92E or vir-1 deficiency. Glial invasion is an adaptive response to axon injury and a first step towards debris clearance10.

      R1/6. “experiments indicate a role for Su(var)2-10/PIAS SUMOylation activity in tis autophagic degradation, but it is not clear whether the critical substrata Su(var)2-10/PIAS itself or another protein.”

      “binding of Su(var)2-10/PIAS to ATG8 is indicated, but no in vitro experiment performed to test whether this is direct and perhaps SUMOylation dependent.”

      Response:

      *We aimed to answer this question by using a point mutant form of Su(var)2-10: CTD2, which is unable to properly autoSUMOylate itself11, see Fig. 6D. CTD2 mutant Su(var)2-10 levels increased in S2 cells transfected with the mutant construct relative to the wild-type, similar to lysosome inhibition affecting the wild-type protein level but not the mutant variant. Importantly, wild-type Su(var)2-10 is present in CTD2 mutant Su(var)2-10-transfected cells, which can still SUMOylate other Su(var)2-10 targets. It is thus the intrinsic SUMOylation defect of the CTD2 mutant that results in its impaired degradation. It is firmly established that increased Su(var)2-10/PIAS levels repress STAT92E activity12, mammalian example: Liu et al., 199813, pointing to Su(var)2-10 as the critical substrate for autophagy during STAT92E derepression.*

      We will further address this point and investigate if Su(var)2-10 directly binds to Atg8a by in vitro SUMOylation of GST-Su(var)2-10 and subsequent GST pulldown assay with HA-Atg8a. In vitro SUMOylation reaction with purified GST-Su(var)2-10 and negative controls are available via in-house collaboration11. We will incubate the resulting proteins and non-SUMOylated counterparts with in vitro transcribed /translated HA-Atg8a, and interactions will be tested by anti-HA western blotting with quantitative fluorescent LICOR Odyssey CLX detection.

      Reviewer 2

      Major comments:

      R2/1. The working hypothesis is that upon injury, Su(var)2-10 is degraded by autophagy and, as a consequence, Stat92E induces vir-1 expression.

      Could the authors clarify why do Stat92E levels increase upon injury? Does Stat92E stability increase upon ATG mediated Su(var)2-10 degradation? Or does it expression/nuclear translocation change?“

      Response:

      We did not state that Stat92E levels increase during injury - we only used the 10xStat92E DNA binding site-GFP reporter (we have renamed it as such in our revised manuscript to avoid confusion) that is commonly referred to as 10xStat92E-GFP in the literature14, as a readout for Stat92E-dependent transcription.

      To address these questions, we will use an endogenous promoter-driven STAT92E::GFP::FLAG protein-protein fusion transgene (https://flybase.org/reports/FBti0147707.htm) to test if STAT92E stability/expression or translocation is altered during injury or upon disruption of selective autophagy. We have already tested this reporter and it is detected in the wing nerve nuclei after injury (Figure 2 for Reviewers, panel A).

      As the Atg8aLDS mutation specifically impairs selective autophagy, we will use this mutant and wild-type controls to assess STAT92E::GFP::FLAG abundance on western blots from fly lysates with anti-GFP antibody. To assess STAT92E::GFP::FLAG nuclear translocation as well as stability/expression, we will use independently Atg8aLDS and Su(var)2-10 RNAi in glia to perturb STAT92E -dependent transactivation and visualize glia cell membrane by membrane-tethered tdTomato, glial nuclei by DAPI/anti-Repo and STAT92E with the STAT92E::GFP::FLAG fusion transgene in dissected brains. We can also evaluate STAT92E nuclear translocation with the same genotypes in the injured wing nerve glia. Of note, studies in mammals failed to identify an obvious effect of PIAS1 on STAT1 abundance13, please see Figure 2B from this paper as Figure 2 for Reviewers, panel B. Rather, PIAS family proteins bind tyrosine-phosporylated STAT dimers and impair their DNA binding thereby their transcriptional activation function15.

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      Proc. Natl. Acad. Sci. USA Vol. 95, pp. 10626–10631

      https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.95.18.10626.

      Fig. 2 for Reviewers.

      1. Stat92E::GFP::FLAG expression and nuclear appearance in the wing nerve before and after injury
      2. Increasing PIAS1 (Su(var)2-10 ortholog) levels does not affect STAT1 abundance in mammalian cells R2/2. Also, since Su(var) levels increase upon ATG RNAi, independently of injury, do ATG levels increase upon injury? It does not seem to be the case from Fig 6D, but then, if the ATG levels do not increase, how to explain the injury mediated effects of Su(var)2-10? “

      Response:

      *We have not seen an effect of injury on the rate of autophagic degradation (flux) using the common flux reporter GFP-mCherry -Atg8a in glia after injury (shown in Fig. S2D – not 6D). Also, levels of the typical autophagic cargo p62/Ref(2)P and core autophagy proteins such as Atg12, Atg5, Atg16 do not change after nervous system injury16suggesting no change in general autophagic turnover. *

      *An increase in general autophagy would be one option to promote degradation of a given cargo. Just as for the ubiquitin-proteasome system, in selective autophagy the labelling of the cargo/substrate for degradation is a regulated process. Dynamic ubiquitylation of a cargo often promotes its autophagic degradation17. We hypothesize that SUMO may fulfil a similar role in labelling cargo for elimination and this may be promoted by injury in the case of Su(var)2-10, which warrants future studies. *

      R2/3. “Su(var)2-10 levels in control and injured wings are different between ATG18RNAi and ATG101 mutant (Fig 5). Could the authors explain the rational for using two ATG mutants? and the meaning of this difference? Also, why comparing data using the RNAi approach and a mutation?”

      Response:

      This issue was also raised in R1/4 and we refer the Reviewer/Editor to that section for our new Atg1 knockdown data and explanations.

      *There is a consensus in the autophagy community that mutants for multiple Atg genes should always be used to ensure that it is indeed canonical autophagy that is affected (because Atg proteins can have non-autophagic roles, as is the case for Atg16 in regulation of phagosome maturation - LAP). *

      R2/4. “Fig 6 What is the relevance of the Atg8, Sumo and Su(var)2-10 colocalization at puncta, since there is a lot of colocalization outside the puncta and also lots of Su(var)2-10 or Atg8 labeling that does not colocalize? “

      Response:

      *Su(var)2-10 orthologs PIAS1-4 localize to the nuclear matrix and certain foci in the chromatin and may play roles in heterochromatin formation, DNA repair, and repression of transposable elements in addition to transcriptional repression18–20. SUMO-modified proteins accumulate in response to PIAS activity in phase-separated foci also referred to as SUMO glue21. We show colocalization of Atg8a with similar Su(var)2-10 and SUMO double positive structures in foci. *

      *We do not expect a full overlap between Su(var)2-10 and Atg8a labeling for a number of reasons. First, Su(var)2-10 has many different roles that may not be regulated by autophagy. Second, Atg8a+ autophagosomes in the cytoplasm deliver not only indidivual proteins such as Su(var)2-10 for degradation but also many other cellular components. Third, nuclear Atg8a is implicated in the removal of the Sequoia transcriptional repressor from autophagy genes that is unlikely to involve Su(var)2-1022. Now we include these points in the Discussion section.*

      R2/5. “The statement made in the first sentence of the discussion is very strong: 'we have uncovered an activation mechanism for Stat92E', without sufficient supporting evidence.”

      Response:

      We have rephrased this section as follows:

      Here we have uncovered the autophagy-dependent clearance of a direct repressor of the Stat92E transcription factor. This, synergistically with injury-induced Stat92E phosphorylation, may ensure proper Stat92E-dependent responses in glia after nerve injury to promote glial reactivity.

      R2/6. “Could the authors validate (some) expression data by in situ hybridization experiments?”

      Response:

      *Our gene expression data were derived from wing nerve imaging or wing tissue. Unfortunately, in situ hybridization is not feasible in this organ because probes do not penetrate the thick chitin-based cuticule and wax cover of the wing (and the same is true for wing immunostaining).* We do provide independent evidence for vir-1 upregulation in the wing after injury via quantitative PCR (qPCR) in Fig. S5C. To corroborate reporter-based data, we will also analyze drpr in qPCR using wing material after injury at the same time points.

      R2/7. “Could the authors validate the RNAi lines molecularly (or refer to published data on these lines?”

      Response:

      *Almost all RNAi lines have already been validated by qPCR, western blot, or immunostaining in Szabo et al., 202316 and other publications23–25. The only exception is Su(var)2-10JF03384 and we show that it is indistinguishable from the validated Su(var)2-10HMS00750 RNAi line (which causes 95% transcript reduction): it also strongly derepresses STAT activity. These reagents have also been widely used in the community (e.g. https://flybase.org/reports/FBal0242556.htm, https://flybase.org/reports/FBal0233496.htm).*

      R2/8. „Clarifying the role of Su(var)2-10 on Stat92E would benefit to the presented work. Does Atg8-Su(var)2-10 binding affect Stat92E accumulation, expression, translocation to the nucleus? Some of these experiments could be obtained in S2 cell transfection assays, if too complex in vivo.”

      Response:

      As explained in R2/1, we will use an endogenous promoter-driven STAT92E::GFP::FLAG protein-protein fusion transgene to test if STAT92E stability/expression or translocation is altered upon disruption of selectiveautophagy (in Atg8aLDS mutant flies).

      R2/9. „Also, what happens to the axons in the mutant conditions described in the manuscript? This would higher the impact of the work, but would require in vivo work with fly stocks containing several transgenes.”

      Response:

      We have already published in our previous paper, Szabo et al., 202316 that the mutants used in the current study display normal axon morphology__. There are only two mutants that we did not test in that paper: Atg8aLDS and our new Atg8anull and we will examine these remaining two during the revision, __but we already published in the above paper that axons appear normal in Atg8aΔ4, a widely used Atg8a mutant allele.

      R2/10. „It has been published that Draper is involved in the response to injury in the adult wing nerve. See for example Neukomm et al (2014). The authors should discuss how this fits with their hypothesis and data. In this respect, Fig S4B, which should support the hypothesis, should be improved. It is rather hard to interpret it.”

      Response:

      Fig. S3 (draper protein trap-Gal4 driven GFP-RFP reporter expression) and S4B (intronic STAT92E binding site of the draper gene driven GFP-RFP reporter expression) show similar results: drpr is already expressed in wing nerve glia before injury, which is in line with Draper’s crucial role in the injury response because Draper-mediated glial signaling triggers glial reactivity. This has been added to the Discussion.

      Minor comments:

      R2/11. „Rubicon is also a negative regulator of autophagy (doi:10.1038/s41598-023-44203-6). in (Fig2 B, D) we have a higher GFP intensity in both uninjured and injured, and the difference between Injured/uninjured is less significant compared to control. It is possible that Rubicon KD causes more autophagy leading to a higher activation of Stat92E even in control. I wouldn't take the results as a proof of canonical autophagy implication and not LC3-associated phagocytosis”

      Response:

      Loss of Rubicon could indeed potentially remove more Su(var)2-10 via increased autophagy, leading to higher Stat92E activity. However, there is no statistically significant difference between injured and uninjured controls and injured and uninjured Rubicon knockdown, respectively, in Fig2 B, D (p=0.6975 and >0.9999 for each comparison). We are puzzled by the statement that the reviewer „wouldn't take the results as a proof of canonical autophagy implication and not LC3-associated phagocytosis”. We analyzed Rubicon as a factor critical for LAP and its deficiency does not prevent Stat transcriptional activity following injury unlike the loss of Atg8a, Atg16, Atg13 and Atg5. We will further support this result with a mutant of Atg16 with part of the WD40 domain deleted, because this region is critical for LAP but not for autophagy.16,26,27

      R2/12. „The rationale for using both repoGal4 and repoGS is unclear. If, as mentioned, the goal is to avoid developmental defects, repoGS should be consistently used. Especially I don't understand how both were utilized to knock down the same genes, such as Atg16”

      Response:

      *We had to use repoGS (a drug-inducible Gal4 active in glia) because knocking down Su(var)2-10 with repoGal4 resulted in no viable adult progeny. Su(var)2-10 is an essential gene as opposed to most autophagy genes and its absence results in embryonic lethality24. Thus all Su(var)2-10 silencing experiments were done with repoGS. Similarly, Stat92E is involved in various developmental processes and its loss is embryonic lethal. repoGal4 was used for genes generally not having an adverse effect when absent during development16 in the first two figures. In Fig. 4D, we silenced Atg16 by repoGS because it is one of the controls for testing a genetic epistasis between Su(var)2-10 and Atg16. Please note that we see exactly the same phenotype in case of Atg16 knockdown when using either Gal4 version.* This has been explained in the revised methods section.

      R2/13. „In the third paragraph of the introduction, I am confused whether Stat92E regulates drpr of the reverse”

      Response:

      Upon antennal injury, Drpr receptor binding to phagocytic cargo initiates a positive feedback loop in glial cells to promote its own transcription28. Drpr receptor in the plasma membrane regulates Stat92E and AP-1 activity via signal transduction. Stat92E and AP-1, in turn, increases drpr transcription10,28–30 that will result in more plasma membrane Drpr protein expression. We have explained this more clearly in the revised Introduction.

      R2/14. „I cannot find the evidence for vir-1 being expressed in glia and target of Gcm in the refences that have been cited.”

      Response:

      We apologize for not explaining this better: vir-1 is called CG5453 in Freeman et al., 200331. It is listed in Table 1 as a Gcm target since there is no detectable CG5453 expression in a Gcm null mutant, please see below. We have updated the manuscript with this gene name.

      .....

      .....

      Part of Table 1 from Freeman et al., 200331.

      R2/15. „The presence of a Stat92E binding site on the vir-1 promoter has already bene described in the paper from Imler and collaborators, Nature immunology 2005. Actually, if this site is present in their transgenic line, it would help the authors strengthen the argument that Stat92E has a direct role on vir1 (for which they make a very strong statement in the discussion, with no direct evidence).”

      Response:

      *The evidence that Stat92E may have a direct role in vir-1 transcription in glia comes exactly from the same reporter transgene described by Imler and collaborators in the mentioned paper32. We received this transgenic line from the Imler group and monitored its expression after injury upon depletion of Stat92E (Fig. 3B). It thus contains the studied Stat binding site. This was referenced in the Methods and in all relevant sections of the main text, and we now explicitly state this in the revised text.*

      R2/16. In the Fig S2D, I do not see a lot of GFP+ (Glia) cells. I see more Atg8a in injured 3 dpi regardless of colocalization with glia”

      Response:

      Fig S2D uses one of the standard assays for autophagic turnover, which we now explain in more detail in the Results section. Basically, the dual tagged GFP::mCherry::Atg8a transgene is expressed in glia, and GFP is quenched in lysosomes after delivery by autophagy while mCherry remains fluorescent. So, in addition to double positive dots (autophagosomes), there are mCherry dots lacking GFP (autolysosomes) if autophagy is functional. All of these dots are in glia but the cell boudaries are not visible.

      The images shown are single optical slices. The number of mCherry+ puncta are around 7-8 per field in both uninjured and injured (3 dpi) conditions, but puncta brightness is always variable. Since most mCherry+ puncta were rather bright in the original 3 dpi image, we changed it to a more representative image.

      R2/17. „The quantification of the signals is made in a specific region of the wing, I guess throughout the nerve thickness. This could be represented more carefully in a schematic and It would also help defining colocalization in the first figure, by using a transverse section.”

      Response:

      The quantification method is described in Materials and Methods and we have added that quantification was done on single optical slices. The imaged region is depicted in Fig. S1A, where we indicated the rectangular region used in Fiji for image quantification. We will add transverse sections of wings as suggested.

      R2/18. „A number of ATG genes are considered in the manuscript, but the rational for using them is not always clear. Showing a schematic would help clarify this. „

      Response:

      We have added a table showing the different steps of autophagy where the studied Atg genes/proteins function (now Supplementary Table 1). We also added whether the gene is considered specific for autophagy or can play a role in another process, e.g. LAP. We studied different autophagy genes in line with the assumption that disabling distinct autophagic complexes should produce the same phenotype if this process is indeed autophagy (and not LC3-associated phagocytosis for example).

      R2/19. „Fig 7 is not cited and its legend is very short.”

      Response:

      We have now cited Fig 7 and expanded its legend.

      R2/20. „Clarify the color coding in Fig S1E”

      Response:

      We added that red is injured, black is uninjured.

      R2/21. „What is the tandem tagged autophagic fly reporter in fig S2D?”

      Response:

      This is one of the most common tools to study autophagy, please see the updated explanation above at your first question regarding Fig. S2D.

      R2/22. „Add a schematic on the vir-1 isoforms.”

      Response:

      We have added a a schematic showing the vir-1 isoforms in Fig. S5B.

      R2/23. „Fig S6B and Fig 5 relate on the levels of Su(var)2-10 upon Atg16 RNAi, but the scale is not the same, why?”

      Response:

      *The scales are different because these two images measure different things. Fig. 5 indeed displays quantification of Su(var)2-10 levels in brain glia. However, Fig S6B shows quantification of Stat92E-induced GFP reporter levels (as a proxy of Stat92E transcriptional activity) in the wing nerve upon Atg16 knockdown. *

      Reviewer 3

      R3/1. „The claim that the negative regulator of Stat92E signaling is removed by selective autophagy, involving selective autophagy receptors different from/in addition to Ref(2)P/p62 is not convincingly shown. This claim probably needs to be softened.”

      Response:

      *We have rephrased this sentence as follows: *

      „These data suggest that selective autophagy is involved in Stat92E-dependent transcriptional activation in glia.”

      R3/2. „The reporter that was used (10xSTAT92E-eGFP) is not a dynamic reporter of STAT92E activity. It accumulates in glia and is highly stable. The appropriate reporter to look at dynamic changes would be 10XSTAT92E-dGFP, which has a degradable (unstable) GFP that is required to see dynamic changes even in the CNS. All of the claims about STAT92E regulation use this reporter, so they are questionable.”

      Response:

      10XSTAT92E-dGFP featuring destabilized GFP could be a more appropriate tool for monitoring dynamic changes in transcription when short term- e.g. few hours - changes are investigated. However, we did not see any expression of 10XSTAT92E-dGFP (we tried 2 different transgenic insertions) in the wing nerve, please see Figure 3 for Reviewers. In the brain, dGFP expression with this reporter is also several times lower than stable GFP, please compare Fig. 4A and B in Doherty et al28.

      The use of 10xSTAT92E-eGFP to follow dynamic expression changes is justified by many lines of evidence. First, there is no 10xSTAT92E-EGFP expression in uninjured wing nerves (Fig. S1D,E). Injury induces EGFP expression in the wing nerve with a sustained activation from 1 to 3 dpi (days post injury), and the EGFP expression returns to the baseline by 5 dpi (Fig. S1D, E). Second, the initial Stat-dependent upregulation of drpr and the 10XSTAT92E-dGFP signal in the brain both occur in the first 24 hours after injury and are sustained for 72 hours28 similar to our results with 10xSTAT92E-EGFP ((Fig. S1D,E). These results indicate that the dynamics of 10xSTAT92E-EGFP expression allows monitoring changes in Stat-dependent transcription occurring over days.

      Figure 3 for Reviewers. Lack of 10XSTAT92E-dGFP signal in the wing nerve from two independent insertions of the same transgene at the indicated time points after wing injury.

      R3/3. „The claim that glial drpr is not upregulated by wing injury and drpr accumulation is not apparently a prerequisite for efficient debris processing within the wing is weak. First, they did not stain for Draper using antibodies, rather they used expression constructs. Dee7 is a promoter that was found to be injury activated in the CNS (were they able to replicate that result? I did not receive the supplemental data), but it might not be the crucial regulator in the periphery. The MIMIC line that was converted is better, but might not represent the full spectrum of regulatory events at the draper locus. Finally, they never actually test for endogenous RNA changes, or use the antibody on westerns. Their lack of evidence is not as compelling as it could be.”

      Response:

      The__ original Supplemental Material already provides answers for this and subsequent questions of Reviewer 3__. We deposited the Supplemental Material to bioRxiv at the time of the first Review Commons submission and it was/is available at https://www.biorxiv.org/content/10.1101/2024.08.28.610109v2.supplementary-material.

      Figs. S3 and S4 show in the wing and the brain (using two different drpr reporters for its transcriptional regulation) that drpr expression does not change much in the wing after nerve injury, as opposed to the brain.

      *We did indeed replicate that dee7-Gal4 expression is induced in the brain after antennal injury using UAS- TransTimer (Fig. S4A). In contrast, wing cell nuclei already show expression of both fluorescent proteins in uninjured conditions, and RFP+ nucleus numbers do no change after wing injury (Fig. S4B, C). drpr-Gal4 was generated by conversion of a MiMIC gene trap element into a Gal4 that traps all transcripts. drprMI07659 is in an intron that is common in all drpr isoforms so it should capture the regulation of all transcript isoforms. *

      We will further analyze drpr expression via independent methods during the revision: qPCR amplification of a common region of drpr transcripts, and western blot with anti-Drpr antibody to compare injured and uninjured wing material. Of note, we see no upregulation of drpr 2 days after wing injury in our (unpublished) RNAseq results either.

      *Unfortunately, immunostaining of the adult wing is not feasible because antibodies do not penetrate the thick chitin-based cuticle and wax cover of the wing.*

      R3/4. „The authors claim autophagy contributes to glial reactive states in part by acting on JAK-STAT pathway via regulation of Stat92E. They did not investigate other potential STAT92E targets. Does Atg16 knockdown alter STAT92E expression? Apparently Vir1 is still upregulated in the absence of Atg16 following injury, but they don’t show STAT92E changes.”

      Response:

      We did investigate other potential STAT92E targets besides vir-1. This is referred to in the text as „*immunity-related gene reporters” and it again can be found in the Supplemental Material (____Supplementary Table 2). None of these genes showed glia-specific upregulation following injury. *

      We will investigate STAT92E expression with the STAT92E::GFP::FLAG protein-protein fusion transgene after disrupting autophagy as also suggested by Reviewer 2. Please see our detailed answer to the first comment of Reviewer 2.

      *We do not agree with the comment that „Vir1 is still upregulated in the absence of Atg16 following injury” because Fig. 3F,G show that lack of Atg16 abolishes the upregulation of the vir-1 reporter: the change from uninjured to injured becomes statistically not significant and the mean GFP intensities are practically identical. *

      R3/5. „The authors claim Su(var)2-10 is an autophagic cargo. They should better characterize Su(var)2-10 degradation and its regulation, and image quality needs to be improved (better images, merged examples, and clearer indication of what they are highlighting. There are many arrows in figures that I don't know what they are pointing to. Much of the labeling in Fig 1 (and others) looks like axons. Could TRE-GFP be turned on in neurons? How did they discriminate?”

      Response:

      As also explained to Reviewer 1’s last comment, we will carry out experiments to address whether SUMOylated Su(var)2-10 binds Atg8a, which can provide evidence for a direct SUMO-dependent autophagic elimination of Su(var)2-10. Please see our detailed response there.

      We will further improve image quality for brain images and we already incorporated new images in Fig. S6. *Merged images were missing only in Fig 5, which we have included in the current version. Arrows and arrowheads were used as described in Figure legends, but instead of those, we now clearly label the epithelium and we outlined the region of wing nerve glia in all images. *

      Please see our response to the first minor comment of Reviewer 1 regarding the expression of reporters in wing tissues.

      R3/6. „The authors claim interaction of Su(var)2-10 with Atg8a in the nucleus and cytoplasm can trigger autophagic breakdown, involving Su(var)2-10 SUMOylation. The paper would benefit from showing direct SUMOylation of Su(var)2-10 after injury. Is there any way to examine this in vivo?”

      Response:

      We will test direct SUMOylation of Su(var)2-10 using a recently described method by Andreev et al., 202233. FLAG-GFP-Smt3 (SUMO)____ is expressed under SUMO transcriptional regulation and we will immunoprecipitate FLAG-GFP-SUMO and GFP alone as negative control with GFPTrap beads from lysates of heads subjected to traumatic brain injury that results in glial reactivity16____, and also from uninjured head lysates. We will use anti-____Su(var)2-10 ____western blotting to visualize SUMOylated Su(var)2-10 and whether its levels are modulated by brain injury.

      R3/7. „The authors state in discussion "we find that draper is highly expressed in wing nerve glia already in uninjured conditions and it is not further induced by wing transection - indicating high phagocytic capacity in wing glia ... axon debris clearance takes substantially longer in the wing nerve than in antennal lobe glomeruli, thus draper levels may not readily predict actual phagocytic activity in glia". However, they never actually assess this in their experiments. All the conclusions about Draper are made from promoter fusions of integrated reporters, which are imperfect. This conclusion cannot be made.”

      Response:

      As described in our response to R3/3, we will further test drpr expression changes after wing injury using two independent methods: qPCR and western blot .

      We deleted this part from the Discussion that were criticized by the reviewer because these are not important for the main message of our manuscript.

      R3/8. „Both STAT92E and Jun are activated by a stress response. Could this be a stress response to disrupting autophagy that is somehow enhance by injury?”

      Response:

      *Stress responses are indeed relayed by AP-1 and Stat signaling, and impaired autophagy could be a source of stress. We would like to emphasize, though, that the main finding of our manuscript is that disrupting autophagy suppresses Stat-dependent transcription. Autophagy inhibition does not increase Stat signaling in uninjured wing nerves and while control flies upregulate Stat activity upon injury, autophagy-deficient animals fail to do so (Fig. 1). Thus, Stat signaling is not activated by loss of autophagy – it is activated by injury (that is the stress) and Stat activation requires autophagy in this setting.*

      R3/9. „Minor:

      I don't think that "glially" is a word.”

      Response:

      Online dictionaries such as Wiktionary list glially as a word, and many scientific articles use it: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.conb.2022.102653, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.yexcr.2013.08.016,https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jpain.2006.04.001*, to give some examples. *

      We nonetheless refrain from using it in the updated text.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In this study the authors explore a potential role for STAT92E and Su(var)2-10 in glial responses to injury in the adult Drosophila wing. The major claims are that canonical autophagy and not LAP sustains STAT92E signaling after in jury. The negative regulator STAT92E is removed by selective autophagy, but this is not ref(2)p/p62 (perhaps). Glial draper expression is not upregulated and Draper accumulation is not apparently a prerequisite for efficient debris clearance in the wing. Su(var)2-10 is an autophagic cargo, mediator of STAT92E-dependennt transcription; and interacts with Atg8a, perhaps sumoylating targets. In general, the model is reasonable, but the data do not support the conclusions, and the quality of the data needs improvement before firm conclusions can be reached. Concerns include:

      1. The claim that the negative regulator of Stat92E signaling is removed by selective autophagy, involving selective autophagy receptors different from/in addition to Ref(2)P/p62 is not convincingly shown. This claim probably needs to be softened.
      2. The reporter that was used (10xSTAT92E-eGFP) is not a dynamic reporter of STAT92E activity. It accumulates in glia and is highly stable. The appropriate reporter to look at dynamic changes would be 10XSTAT92E-dGFP, which has a degradable (unstable) GFP that is required to see dynamic changes even in the CNS. All of the claims about STAT92E regulation use this reporter, so they are questionable.
      3. The claim that glial drpr is not upregulated by wing injury and drpr accumulation is not apparently a prerequisite for efficient debris processing within the wing is weak. First, they did not stain for Draper using antibodies, rather they used expression constructs. Dee7 is a promoter that was found to be injury activated in the CNS (were they able to replicate that result? I did not receive the supplemental data), but it might not be the crucial regulator in the periphery. The MIMIC line that was converted is better, but might not represent the full spectrum of regulatory events at the draper locus. Finally, they never actually test for endogenous RNA changes, or use the antibody on westerns. Their lack of evidence is not as compelling as it could be.
      4. The authors claim autophagy contributes to glial reactive states in part by acting on JAK-STAT pathway via regulation of Stat92E. They did not investigate other potential STAT92E targets. Does Atg16 knockdown alter STAT92E expression? Apparently Vir1 is still upregulated in the absence of Atg16 following injury, but they don't show STAT92E changes.
      5. The authors claim Su(var)2-10 is an autophagic cargo. They should better characterize Su(var)2-10 degradation and its regulation, and image quality needs to be improved (better images, merged examples, and clearer indication of what they are highlighting. There are many arrows in figures that I don't know what they are pointing to. Much of the labeling in Fig 1 (and others) looks like axons. Could TRE-GFP be turned on in neurons? How did they discriminate?
      6. The authors claim interaction of Su(var)2-10 with Atg8a in the nucleus and cytoplasm can trigger autophagic breakdown, involving Su(var)2-10 SUMOylation. The paper would benefit from showing direct SUMOylation of Su(var)2-10 after injury. Is there any way to examine this in vivo? The authors state in discussion "we find that draper is highly expressed in wing nerve glia already in uninjured conditions and it is not further induced by wing transection - indicating high phagocytic capacity in wing glia ... axon debris clearance takes substantially longer in the wing nerve than in antennal lobe glomeruli, thus draper levels may not readily predict actual phagocytic activity in glia". However, they never actually assess this in their experiments. All the conclusions about Draper are made from promoter fusions of integrated reporters, which are imperfect. This conclusion cannot be made. Both STAT92E and Jun are activated by a stress response. Could this be a stress response to disrupting autophagy that is somehow enhance by injury?

      Minor:

      I don't think that "glially" is a word.

      Significance

      Based on the quality of the data, it is hard to consider this manuscript having made a major step forward. A significant amount of work needs to be done to firm up the conclusions. In its present form, the major contributions are the identification vir-1 as upregualted (maybe) and a potential role for autophagy.

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      Reviewer # 1: The study is well-executed, and the claims are supported by appropriate experiments. As introduced by the authors in their introduction, ubiquitin-dependent endocytosis of AA transporters has been previously shown in S. cerevisiae and TXNIP has previously been identified as a regulator of glucose uptake by promoting endocytosis of GLUT1 and GLUT4. Here, the authors identify the molecular mechanism by which TXNIP promotes the endocytosis, and degradation of amino acid transporters (SLC7A5-SLC7A3) through its interaction with HECT-type ubiquitin ligases. This is an advance in the field and will be of interest for researchers in the fields of quiescence, metabolism and cell biology. Experiments are well designed and important controls have been performed. Overall, the claims and the conclusions are supported by the data.* *

      Response: We thank the reviewer for the thorough evaluation of our manuscript and for the insightful, constructive comments. Reviewer 1 had five minor comments, and we have addressed them all.

      Minor comment 1: The authors should indicate how often western blot experiments were repeated with similar results. Ideally band quantification (as in Fig. 2b) for the most relevant proteins should be provided for all shown Western blots.* *

      Response: Each Western Blot (WB) experiment has been performed at least 3 times and each WB result for SLC7A5 is complemented by immunofluorescence and/or additionally by FACS analysis, across the manuscript.

      In the partially revised version of the manuscript, we already__ incorporated WB quantifications of SLC7A5 protein levels__ for Figures 1c, f, h, Figure 3b, Figure 4b, and Figure 5a, c in Supplementary Figure 1b, Supplementary Figure 2c, f, Supplementary Figure 4a, e, and in Supplementary Figure 5a, c, respectively.

      Minor comment 2: For confocal images no n number of experiments/analyzed cells is stated. Often only 2-3 cells are shown in these images. In some figures, conclusions from these confocal images are additionally supported by cell surface FACS.

      Response: Each immunofluorescence experiment has been performed at least 3 times.

      Minor ____comment 3: For panels with missing cell surface FACS quantifications, the authors should consider using the existing imaging data to perform quantifications of the membrane signal. In this way the reader can get the right impression of the reproducibility of the phenotype described.* *

      Response: Each immunofluorescence experiment has been performed at least 3 times. In the partially revised version of the manuscript, line-scan quantification of immunofluorescence (IF) of SLC3A2 at the plasma membrane (PM) is now provided for immunofluorescence experiments in Figure 1e, g, Figure 3c, e in Supplementary Figure 2b, e, Supplementary Figure 4b, c, and for SLC2A1 in Supplementary Figure 3i, were FACS data was missing. In addition, WB experiments complement the results of each IF experiment.

      Minor comment 4: I appreciate that the authors have also investigated SLC2A1 endocytosis in their experimental setup. Interestingly, they found that TXNIP mediated downregulation of SLC7A5-SLC3A2 was not linked to TXNIP mediated SLC2A1 endocytosis. Since the role of TXNIP in glucose metabolism has been studied in more detail in the past, it would be interesting if the authors could further comment on the differences/similarities in the molecular mechanism of glucose and AA transporter downregulation in the discussion.* *

      Response: Thank you for bringing up this point. We now have added the following paragraph to the discussion to speculate about the differences/similarities in the molecular mechanism of glucose and AA transporter downregulation in the discussion:

      ‘Moreover, in RPE1 cells entering quiescence, GLUT1/4 was not downregulated. Hence, it seems that TXNIP can discriminate, in a context dependent manner, between targeting SLC7A5-SLC3A2 or GLUT1/4 for endocytosis. Since AKT mediated phosphorylation invariably appeared to inactivate TXNIP, and dephosphorylation re-activated it, additional mechanism must confer TXNIP selectivity towards SLC7A5-SLC3A2 or GLUT1/4. We consider it likely, that the exposure of sorting motifs in cytosolic tails of SLC7A5 or GLUT1/4 could regulate the binding of activated TXNIP and thus controls selective endocytosis to adapt nutrient uptake. The exposure of these sorting motifs could be dependent on the metabolic context / state of the cell. Indeed, yeast a-arrestins can detect n- or c-terminal acidic sorting motifs in amino acid transporters, respectively, that are alternatively exposed in response to amino acid excess or starvation (Ivashov et al., 2020a) (Guiney et al, 2016). Inspection of the SLC7A5 sequence indicates a possible n-terminal acidic sorting motif (17EEKEEAREK25). Two lysine residues (K19, K25) in this sequence have been found to be ubiquitinated in an earlier study upon protein kinase C (PKC) activation and mTORC1 inhibition (Barthelemy & Andre, 2019; Rosario et al, 2016).’

      Minor ____comment 5: I would recommend a colour blind-friendly colour palette for the confocal images* *

      Response: Thank you for pointing this out – we have changed the color palette accordingly.

      Reviewer # 2: This study establishes TXNIP as a regulator of LAT1 endocytosis and metabolic homeostasis in quiescence. The integration of KO models and a TXNIP-deficient patient strengthens the findings, though clinical characterization remains underdeveloped relative to the mechanism reported, and biochemical interactions require endogenous validation. The work expands our understanding of TXNIP beyond association studies, positioning it as a key player in nutrient sensing and metabolic regulation. Addressing the concerns will enhance its relevance across fields - particularly metabolism, cell biology, and disease research. Overall, this is a very interesting study indeed. The use of TXNIP knockout models and a loss-of-function patient variant strengthens the conclusion that TXNIP is required for LAT1 degradation. The functional consequences of TXNIP deficiency (elevated intracellular aa, sustained mTORC1 activation, and accelerated quiescence exit) are well-supported by the data. The major concerns are as follows:

      Response: We thank the reviewer for the thorough evaluation of our manuscript and for the insightful, constructive comments. Reviewer 2 had three major concerns and one minor comment.

      Major concern 1. The identification of a biallelic TXNIP loss-of-function variant in a patient with metabolic disease and neurological dysfunction is highly significant. However, it is problematic that the manuscript effectively presents a case report but does not explicitly frame it as such, and the clinical details are very superficial (lack of pedigree, genetics, structured disease timeline, differential diagnosis, any histology/scans/photography and broader metabolic profiling - please see best practices for case reports). Although whole-exome sequencing identified the TXNIP variant, it remains unclear whether other genetic or metabolic contributors were systematically excluded. At first glance, the clinical discovery strengthens the physiological significance of the cell biology. However, a discrepancy remains between the clear neurological presentation of the patient (intellectual disability, autism and epilepsy) and the fibroblast-based TXNIP-LAT1 mechanism described in the study. Furthermore, the metabolic phenotype described in this manuscript is significantly more severe than that reported in a previous Swedish study of TXNIP deficiency in humans, where the clinical presentation was milder. This discrepancy suggests that different TXNIP mutations may lead to a spectrum of clinical outcomes, which is highly novel (i.e. metabolic and neurological in terms of loss of function, and carcinogenesis with respect to association studies, reviewed in PMID: 37794178). Of course, this could be influenced by mutation type, genetic background, compensatory mechanisms or environmental factors - it is noteworthy that the previous siblings had mitochondrial dysfunction, and this remains unknown in the present individual. Addressing this variability and discussing potential reasons for the pronounced phenotype observed in this patient would strengthen the manuscript overall. It is noteworthy that LAT1 is highly expressed in brain endothelial cells, which can also adopt a quiescent state (PMID: 33627876), and the authors should expand beyond the single sentence in their discussion. In the absence of the above details, the title and conclusions of Figure 3 and in the discussion greatly overstate causality, implying a direct relationship between TXNIP loss and metabolic dysfunction, despite data from only one patient. his may indeed be the case, but the claims should be carefully revised to reflect an association rather than definitive causation until additional patients are identified. Additionally, while it is assumed that the authors have obtained ethical approval and informed consent, this needs to be explicitly stated for transparency, with dedicated details in the methods sections. Addressing these issues will improve the rigor and mechanistic coherence of the study - otherwise it is quite disjointed.

      Response: We have addressed many these valid concerns and provide a detailed description of the patient in the partially revised manuscript (please see below).

      ‘The patient is a boy, born in 2014 as the first child of healthy, consanguineous parents of Turkish origin. During pregnancy, the mother was diagnosed with polyhydramnios. At 38 + 6 weeks of gestation, the baby was in a breech position, leading to a cesarean section. At birth, he weighed 3880 g (P90), measured 55 cm in length, and had a head circumference of 38 cm.

      On the seventh day of life, he exhibited floppiness, recurrent hypoglycaemia, and lactic acidosis, prompting his transfer from the birth hospital to a tertiary care centre. During the first three days there, his lowest recorded blood glucose level was 30 mg/dl, lactate levels were approximately 6.5 mmol/l, and pH was 7.11. Subsequently, he developed hypertriglyceridemia, with triglyceride levels reaching 364 mg/dl. Initially stable, he began experiencing elevated pCO2 levels (up to 70 mmHg due to bradypnea) and metabolic acidosis on day 10. A glucose infusion (10 mg/kg/min) stabilized his glucose and lactate concentrations, though lactate remained elevated at around 3-4 mmol/l. Regardless, his muscular hypotonia persisted. On day 12, a skin punch biopsy for a fibroblast culture was performed.

      By day 20, glucose and lactate levels had stabilized with regular feeding, allowing his transfer back to a peripheral hospital. During infancy, his blood glucose concentrations were within standard range (Supplementary Table 1), but the boy experienced recurrent hypoglycaemia in response to metabolic stress, e.g., infections. He exhibited psychomotor developmental delays and, from 18 months of age, experienced increasing epileptic seizures (up to 3-4 per month), which were managed with levetiracetam, topiramate, and lamotrigine. Currently, he remains metabolically stable but presents with significant developmental delay, muscular hypotonia, and autistic features.

      Whole-exome sequencing from peripheral blood of the patient detected a homozygous single nucleotide insertion c.642_643insT in exon 5 of 8 of the TXNIP gene. This variant was not recorded in the population genetic variant database gnomAD that lists TXNIP as likely haplosufficient (pLI = 0, LOEUF = 0,709: https://gnomad.broadinstitute.org accessed Sept. 10, 2024). No other (likely) pathogenic variant in any other gene, with known function in metabolism was identified as explanation of the clinical features in the child. Potential pathogenic variants in genes required for mitochondrial functions were also not detected, although they were initially expected to cause the phenotype of the boy.

      The TXNIP variant c.642_643insT caused a frameshift and a premature stop codon after 59 AA (denoted p.Ile215TyrfsTer59), likely causing nonsense-mediated decay (NMD) or the synthesis of a severely truncated TXNIP protein (Figure 3a). Both parents are healthy heterozygous carriers for the TXNIP variant. Serendipitously, this TXNIP variant was similar to the gene-edited version in the RPE1 TXNIPKO cells (p.I215TfsX11).

      The patient showed consistent metabolic alterations compatible with an AA transporter deficiency. Blood plasma concentrations of several large neutral amino acids (LNAAs, including L, I, V) were elevated throughout the years 2014 – 2022 (Supplementary Table 1). The increased molar ratio of the LNAAs (L, I, V) to aromatic AAs (F, Y), resulted in an elevated Fischer’s ratio (FR, 2014: FR = 4.46; 2016: FR = 5.38, 2018: FR = 5.90; 2021; FR= 6.98; 2022: FR = 4.23; FR reference range = 2.10 - 4). The methionine levels are not dramatically altered (Supplementary Table 1).’

      We also provide the following ethical statement:

      __‘Ethical statement __

      All patients’ data were extracted from the medical routine records. Written informed consent for molecular genetic studies and publication of data was obtained from the legal guardians of the patient. This approach was approved by the ethics committee of the Medical University of Innsbruck (UN4501-MUI). The study was conducted in accordance with the principles of the Declaration of Helsinki.’

      During the revision, we will additionally address how the other known TXNIP variant (TXNIP p.Gln58His; p.Gly59*; PMID: 30755400) affects nutrient transporter endocytosis. This TXNIP variant will be expressed in TXNIPKO RPE1 cells to analyze its effect on quiescence induced SLC7A5 downregulation. The results of this experiment will allow comparing directly the effect of both known TXNIP variants (p.Gln58His; p.Gly59* and p.Ile215TyrfsTer59) on SLC7A5 downregulation in an identical genetic background. In addition, we will compare how both TXNIP variants affect mitochondrial function (using Seahorse technology).

      Major concern 2. The authors report that TXNIP interacts with HECT E3 ligases to regulate substrate degradation, yet this conclusion is drawn from overexpression-based immunoprecipitation studies, which do not confirm interaction under endogenous conditions. Without direct evidence of TXNIP-HECT E3 binding at native expression levels, this mechanistic link remains unresolved. Given that the authors have already generated antibody-validated TXNIP KO models, endogenous validation should be feasible if the interactions are not super-transient.

      Response: While the manuscript was under review, we have improved the stringency of our TXNIP-HECT type ubiquitin ligase interaction experiments and developed additional biochemical experiments that strengthen our original conclusions. In the course of these experiments, we found that the interaction of TXNIP with NEDD4, WWP2 and HECW1/2 (but not with WWP1 or ITCH) were particularly dependent on the PPxY331 motif.

      During the revision, we will conduct additional experiments to substantiate these findings and to narrow down the list possible ubiquitin ligases that are required for the downregulation of SLC7A5. In particular, we will test if endogenous TXNIP co-immunoprecipitates (in a PPxY motif dependent manner) NEDD4, HECW1/2 or another HECT type ubiquitin ligase.

      Furthermore, we will include a newly developed ‘Bead-Immobilized Prey Assay (BIPA)’, were protein-protein interactions can be analyzed by microscopy in a fast in straight forward manner. In the BIPA, ALFA-TXNIP (or mutant variants) are first captured on ALFA-beads (Bead immobilized). These TXNIP beads are then incubated with cell lysates from HEK293 expressing GFP-tagged HECT type ubiquitin ligases (Prey). The binding of the GFP-tagged ubiquitin ligases to the TXNIP beads is analyzed by fluorescence microscopy and quantified (Figure 1b, a BIPA with YFP-NEDD4). This efficient assay will also be conducted with NEDD4, WWP1, WWP2, HECW2, and ITCH to analyze how they bind to TXNIP, TXNIP-PPxY331 and the PPxY double mutant.

      Together we are confident that our experiments establish that TXNIP must interact with a specific subset of HECT type ubiquitin ligase (our prime candidate are NEDD4 and HECW1/2) to trigger SLC7A5-SLC3A2 ubiquitination, endocytosis and lysosomal degradation.

      Major concern 3. What are the temporal dynamics of TXNIP-associated degradation, and is this process distinct from endosomal microautophagy (as reported in PMID: 30018090)? The authors present convincing, high-quality FACS-based data supporting TXNIP-mediated turnover. If this pathway is mechanistically separate from endosomal microautophagy, it suggests a hierarchy of degradation pathways leading to quiescence. Live cell imaging studies that define the temporal dynamics of this process using the tools the authors have created may reveal the relationship between these processes and refine the broader implications of TXNIP in homeostatic adaptation.

      Response: Thank you for this interesting suggestion.

      During the revision, we will first investigate a potential temporal correlation of endosomal micro-autophagy of p62/SQSTM1, NBR1, TAX1BP1, NDP52, and NCOA4 (PMID: 30018090) and the downregulation of SLC7A5 as cells enter quiescence. For these experiments, we will follow the turn-over of the above-mentioned autophagy adaptors and compare it to the turnover of SLC7A5, using either WB analysis, or microscopy or both.

      Next, we will test if SLC7A5-SLC3A2 endocytosis and lysosomal degradation is required to initiate endosomal micro-autophagy of p62/SQSTM1, NBR1, TAX1BP1, NDP52, and NCOA4 in TXNIPKO cells.

      Together, these experiments will address if the endosomal micro-autophagy and TXNIP mediated downregulation of SLC7A5 are mechanistically linked during entry into quiescence.

      Minor comment 1. In the discussion, the authors might briefly speculate on the implications of any functional redundancy that might exist between other arrestins.

      We will provide this information in the fully revised version of the manuscript.

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    Annotators

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates the effects of the explicit recognition of statistical structure and sleep consolidation on the transfer of learned structure to novel stimuli. The results show a striking dissociation in transfer ability between explicit and implicit learning of structure, finding that only explicit learners transfer structure immediately. Implicit learners, on the other hand, show an intriguing immediate structural interference effect (better learning of novel structure) followed by successful transfer only after a period of sleep.

      Strengths:

      This paper is very well written and motivated, and the data are presented clearly with a logical flow. There are several replications and control experiments and analyses that make the pattern of results very compelling. The results are novel and intriguing, providing important constraints on theories of consolidation. The discussion of relevant literature is thorough. In sum, this work makes an exciting and important contribution to the literature.

      Weaknesses:

      There have been several recent papers which have identified issues with alternative forced choice (AFC) tests as a method of assessing statistical learning (e.g. Isbilen et al. 2020, Cognitive Science). A key argument is that while statistical learning is typically implicit, AFC involves explicit deliberation and therefore does not match the learning process well. The use of AFC in this study thus leaves open the question of whether the AFC measure benefits the explicit learners in particular, given the congruence between knowledge and testing format, and whether, more generally, the results would have been different had the method of assessing generalization been implicit. Prior work has shown that explicit and implicit measures of statistical learning do not always produce the same results (eg. Kiai & Melloni, 2021, bioRxiv; Liu et al. 2023, Cognition).

      The authors argued in their response to this point that this issue could have quantitative but not qualitative impacts on the results, but we see no reason that the impact could not be qualitative. In other words, it should be acknowledged that an implicit test could potentially result in the implicit group exhibiting immediate structure transfer.

      We thank the reviewer for their feedback and added a statement in our discussion section acknowledging the possible effects of alternative measures of learning.

      Given that the explicit/implicit classification was based on an exit survey, it is unclear when participants who are labeled "explicit" gained that explicit knowledge. This might have occurred during or after either of the sessions, which could impact the interpretation of the effects and deserves discussion.

      We agree with the mentioned shortcoming in principle, although there are good methodological reasons for this, as discussed in our previous response. We added a statement on this topic to our discussion to make the potential issues and our reasoning in the design decision more transparent for the reader.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Sleep has not only been shown to support the strengthening of memory traces, but also their transformation. A special form of such transformation is the abstraction of general rules from the presentation of individual exemplars. The current work used large online experiments with hundreds of participants to shed further light on this question. In the training phase participants saw composite items (scenes) that were made up of pairs of spatially coupled (i.e., they were next to each other) abstract shapes. In the initial training, they saw scenes made up of six horizontally structured pairs and in the second training phase, which took place after a retention phase (2 min awake, 12 hour incl. sleep, 12 h only wake, 24 h incl. sleep), they saw pairs that were horizontally or vertically coupled. After the second training phase, a two-alternativesforced-choice (2-AFC) paradigm, where participants had to identify true pairs versus randomly assembled foils, was used to measure performance on all pairs. Finally, participants were asked five questions to identify, if they had insight into the pair structure and post-hoc groups were assigned based on this. Mainly the authors find that participants in the 2 minute retention experiment without explicit knowledge of the task structure were at chance level performance for the same structure in the second training phase, but had above chance performance for the vertical structure. The opposite was true for both sleep conditions. In the 12 h wake condition these participants showed no ability to discriminate the pairs from the second training phase at all.

      Strengths:

      All in all, the study was performed to a high standard and the sample size in the implicit condition was large enough to draw robust conclusions. The authors make several important statistical comparisons and also report an interesting resampling approach. There is also a lot of supplemental data regarding robustness.

      Weaknesses:

      My main concern regards the small sample size in the explicit group and the lack of experimental control.

      We thank the reviewer for the valuable feedback throughout the review process. The issues mentioned here have been addressed in our previous response.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this project, Garber and Fiser examined how the structure of incidentally learned regularities influences subsequent learning of regularities, that either have the same structure or a different one. Over a series of six online experiments, it was found that the structure (spatial arrangement) of the first set of regularities affected learning of the second set, indicating that it has indeed been abstracted away from the specific items that have been learned. The effect was found to depend on the explicitness of the original learning: Participants who noticed regularities in the stimuli were better at learning subsequent regularities of the same structure than of a different one. On the other hand, participants whose learning was only implicit had an opposite pattern: they were better in learning regularities of a novel structure than of the same one. However, when an overnight sleep separated the first and second learning phases, this opposite effect was reversed and came to match the pattern of the explicit group, suggesting that the abstraction and transfer in the implicit case were aided by memory consolidation.

      In their revision the authors addressed my major comments successfully and I commend them for that.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      We would encourage the authors to add text to the manuscript that acknowledges/discusses the two issues pointed out in our review.

      We added relevant passages to the discussion section of the manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The authors have improved some sections of the manuscript and this is reflected in my assessment. The major weaknesses remain unchanged. Since my review is published alongside the paper, readers can make up their own mind regarding their severity.

      My only hard ask would be to add that the study was not preregistered into the main manuscript as I asked before! I am surprised that the authors are so reluctant to honestly state this fact....

      We have not stated this fact in our manuscript until now since our understanding is that papers that report preregistered studies state and cite their preregistration in their method section, while any omission of such a statement by default conveys that no preregistration occurred. In fact, we cannot recall encountering papers with statements of no-preregistration in the literature. Nevertheless, we have no issue stating that our study was not preregistered and per the reviewer's request, we have added such an explicit statement in our manuscript.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      *  I strongly urge the authors to remove the Results sub-sections from Methods.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting this issue arising from our previous layout, which we decided to handle the following way. We re-labeledl the subsections in question as “Additional Analyses” to avoid confusion, we removed any redundant findings already reported in Results of the main text, and we moved a small number of more substantial findings from the Methods Section to the main text Results as requested. We believe that this solution constitutes the most readable option, as we do not clutter the main results with extensive sanity checks and results

      of minor interest, while we also do not need to establish experiment-wise result sections in the Supplementary Materials, which would further disperse information interested readers might look for.

      *  Authors report that in Experiment 4 "Participants with explicit knowledge (n=23) show the same pattern of results as they did in Experiment 1", but that seems inaccurate, as they did learn novel pairs in Exp4 whereas they did not in Exp1. This can be seen in the figure and also in Methods-Results: "performing above chance for ... pairs of a novel structure (M=69.6, SE=5.9, d=0.69, t(22)=3.33 p=0.012, BF=13.6) in the second training phase"

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out this error in our interpretation of the results and adjusted the section in question to better align with what our result actually shows.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Multiple compounds that inhibit ATP-sensitive potassium (KATP) channels also chaperone channels to the surface membrane. The authors used an artificial intelligence (AI)-based virtual screening (AtomNet) to identify novel compounds that exhibit chaperoning effects on trafficking-deficient disease-causing mutant channels. One compound, which they named Aekatperone, acts as a low affinity, reversible inhibitor and effective chaperone. A cryoEM structure of KATP bound to Aekatperone showed that the molecule binds at the canonical inhibitory site.

      Strengths and weaknesses:

      The details of the AI screening itself are inevitably opaque, but appear to differ from classical virtual screening in not involving any physical docking of test compounds into the target site. The authors mention criteria that were used to limit the number of compounds, so that those with high similarity to known binders and 'sequence identity' (does this mean structural identity) were excluded. The identified molecules contain sulfonylurea-like moieties. How different are they from other sulfonylure4as?

      We thank the reviewers for the questions. As part of the library preparation, molecules with greater than 0.5 Tanimoto similarity in ECFP4 space to any known binders of the target protein and its homologs within 70% sequence identity were excluded to increase the possibility of identifying novel hits. After scoring and ranking the molecules by the AtomNet® technology, a diversity clustering was performed using the Butina algorithm (Butina D. Unsupervised Data Base Clustering Based on Daylight’s Fingerprint and Tanimoto Similarity: A Fast and Automated Way To Cluster Small and Large Data Sets, J. Chem. Inf. Comput. Sci. 1999, 39, 747–750) with a Tanimoto similarity cutoff of 0.35 in ECFP4 space to minimize selection of structurally similar scaffolds for the final compound buy-list. We have revised the results and methods sections to make this clear.

      Sulfonylureas are defined by their core structure comprising a sulfonyl group (–S(=O)<sub>2</sub>) and a urea moiety (–NH–CO–NH–). While some compounds identified in our study contain a sulfonamide group (R-S(=O) <sub>2</sub>-NR<sub>2</sub>), they differ structurally from sulfonylureas by lacking the key urea group and by incorporating unique R-group substitutions (we have now added this to Figure 1A legend). For example, compound C27 (Z2068224500) includes a sulfonamide group but not a urea moiety. Likewise, C45 (Aekatperone, Z1620764636) contains a sulfonamide group along with an aromatic, nitrogen-rich heterocyclic ring, but no urea group. Additionally, the R-groups in these compounds are more complex than the simple aromatic or alkyl chains typical of sulfonylureas. They include heterocyclic aromatic systems and nitrogen-rich structures, which likely influence their binding properties and lipophilicity. These structural differences suggest distinct functional and pharmacological profiles as supported by our biochemical and functional studies.

      The experimental work confirming that Aekatperone acts to traffic mutant KATP channels to the surface and acts as a low affinity, reversible, inhibitor is comprehensive and clear, with very convincing cell biological and patch-clamp data, as is the cryoEM structural analysis, for which the group are leading experts. In addition to the three positive chaperone-effective molecules, the authors identified a large number of compounds that are predicted binders but apparently have no chaperoning effect. Did any of them have inhibitory action on channels? If so, does this give clues to separating chaperoning from inhibitory effects?

      This is an interesting question. Evidence from cryo-EM, biochemical and electrophysiology studies reveal a critical role of Kir6.2 N-terminus in K<sub>ATP</sub> channel assembly and gating, and that pharmacological chaperones like glibenclamide, repaglinide, carbamazepine, and now aekatperone exert their chaperoning and inhibitory effects by stabilizing the interaction between Kir6.2 N-terminus and the SUR1-ABC core. This stabilization, while promoting the assembly of Kir6.2 and SUR1 to “chaperone” trafficking-impaired mutant channels to the cell surface, also inhibits the channel by restricting the Kir6.2 C-terminal domain from rotating to an open state. An additional mechanism by which these compounds inhibit channel activity is by preventing SUR1-NBD dimerization, which mediates physiological activation of the channel by MgADP (see review: Driggers CM, Shyng SL. Mechanistic insights on K<sub>ATP</sub> channel regulation from cryo-EM structures. J Gen Physiol. 2023 Jan 2;155(1): e202113046, PMID: 36441147). From our compound screening, we did find some compounds that showed mild inhibition of the channel by electrophysiology but no obvious chaperone effects by western blots. It is possible that small chaperoning effects of some compounds showing mild channel inhibition effects were missed due to the lower sensitivity of the western blot assay compared to electrophysiology. Alternatively, these compounds could inhibit channels by preventing SUR1NBD dimerization without stabilizing the Kir6.2 N-terminus, which is required for the chaperone effect based on our model. Unfortunately, we did not find any compounds that show chaperone effects but no channel inhibition effects, which is consistent with our understanding of how this type of K<sub>ATP</sub> chaperones work (i.e. by stabilizing Kir6.2 N-terminus interaction with SUR1’s ABC core).

      The authors suggest that the novel compound may be a promising therapeutic for treatment of congenital hyperinsulinism due to trafficking defective KATP mutations. Because they are low affinity, reversible, inhibitors. This is a very interesting concept, and perhaps a pulsed dosing regimen would allow trafficking without constant channel inhibition (which otherwise defeats the therapeutic purpose), although it is unclear whether the new compound will offer advantages over earlier low-affinity sulfonylurea inhibitor chaperones. These include tolbutamide which has very similar affinity and effect to Aekatperone. As the authors point out this (as well as other sulfonlyureas) are currently out of favor because of potential adverse cardiovascular effects, but again, it is unclear why Aekatperone should not have the same concerns.

      We thank the reviewer for the comments. This is clearly an important question to address in the future. While we have not directly tested the effects of Aekatperone on cardiac functions, we did assess its inhibitory effect on cells expressing the cardiac K<sub>ATP</sub> channel isoform (SUR2A/Kir6.2). Our results indicate that Aekatperone exhibits higher sensitivity toward the pancreatic K<sub>ATP</sub> channel isoform (SUR1/Kir6.2) compared to the cardiac isoform. However, we acknowledge that Aekatperone could still have cardiotoxic effects through its potential action on other channels, such as the hERG channel.

      It is worth noting that tolbutamide, despite its known cardiotoxic effects, does not exert these effects through cardiac K<sub>ATP</sub> channel inhibition. This has been demonstrated in studies showing no inhibitory effect of tolbutamide on SUR2A/Kir6.2 channels and on channels formed by Kir6.2 and SUR1 harboring the S1238Y mutation (also shown as S1237Y in some studies using a different SUR1 isoform)--the amino acid substitution found in SUR2A at the corresponding position (Ashfield R, Gribble FM, Ashcroft SJ, Ashcroft FM. Identification of the high-affinity tolbutamide site on the SUR1 subunit of the K<sub>ATP</sub> channel. Diabetes. 1999 Jun;48(6):1341-7, PMID: 10342826). This suggests that tolbutamide’s cardiotoxic effects might involve other targets like the hERG channel. Interestingly, tolbutamide contains a hydrophobic tail and aromatic rings that align well with the structural features for hERG interaction (Garrido A, Lepailleur A, Mignani SM, Dallemagne P, Rochais C. hERG toxicity assessment: Useful guidelines for drug design. Eur J Med Chem. 2020 Jun 1;195:112290, PMID: 32283295). In contrast, highaffinity sulfonylureas such as glibenclamide and glimepiride, which have additional benzamide moieties, are associated with lower cardiovascular risks (Douros A, Yin H, Yu OHY, Filion KB, Azoulay L, Suissa S. Pharmacologic Differences of Sulfonylureas and the Risk of Adverse Cardiovascular and Hypoglycemic Events. Diabetes Care. 2017, 40:1506-1513, PMID:

      28864502). Given these considerations, a comprehensive assessment of Aekatperone’s potential cardiotoxicity is crucial. Future studies involving in silico modeling, in vitro, and in vivo experiments will be essential to evaluate Aekatperone’s interaction with hERG and other offtarget effects. These efforts will help clarify its safety profile. This point has now been added to the Discussion.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their study 'AI-Based Discovery and CryoEM Structural Elucidation of a KATP Channel Pharmacochaperone', ElSheikh and colleagues undertake a computational screening approach to identify candidate drugs that may bind to an identified binding pocket in the SUR1 subunit of

      KATP channels. Other KATP channel inhibitors such as glibenclamide have been previously shown to bind in this pocket, and in addition to inhibition KATP channel function, these inhibitors can very effectively rescue cell surface expression of trafficking deficient KATP mutations that cause excessive insulin secretion (Congenital Hyperinsulinism). However, a challenge for their utility for treatment of hyperinsulinism has been that they are powerful inhibitors of the channels that are rescued to the channel surface. In contrast, successful therapeutic pharmacochaperones (eg. CFTR chaperones) permit function of the channels rescued to the cell membrane. Thus, a key criteria for the authors' approach in this case was to identify relatively low affinity compounds that target the glibenclamide binding site (and be washed off) - these could potentially rescue KATP surface expression, but also permit KATP function.

      Strengths:

      The main findings of the manuscript include:

      (1) Computational screening of a large virtual compound library, followed by functional screening of cell surface expression, which identified several potential candidate pharmacochaperones that target the glibenclamide binding site.

      (2) Prioritization and functional characterization of Aekatperone as a low affinity KATP inhibitor which can be readily 'washed off' in patch clamp, and cell based efflux assays. Thus the drug clearly rescues cell surface expression, but can be manipulated experimentally to permit function of rescued channels.

      (3) Determination of the binding site and dynamics of this candidate drug by cryo-EM, and functional validation of several residues involved in drug sensitivity using mutagenesis and patch clamp.

      The experiments are well-conceived and executed, and the study is clearly described. The results of the experiments are very straightforward and clearly support the conclusions drawn by the authors. I found the study to provide important new information about KATP chaperone effects of certain drugs, with interesting considerations in terms of ion channel biology and human disease.

      Weaknesses:

      I don't have any major criticisms of the study as described, but I had some remaining questions that could be addressed in a revision.

      (1) The chaperones can effectively rescue KATP trafficking mutants, but clearly not as strongly as the higher affinity inhibitor glibenclamide. Is this relationship between inhibitory potency, and efficacy of trafficking an intrinsic challenge of the approach? I suspect that it may be an intractable problem in the sense that the inhibitor bound conformation that underlies the chaperone effect cannot be uncoupled from the inhibited gating state. But this might not be true (many partial agonist drugs with low efficacy can be strongly potent, for example). In this case, the approach is really to find a 'happy medium' of a drug that is a weak enough inhibitor to be washed away, but still strong enough to exert some satisfactory chaperone effect. Could some additional clarity be added in the discussion on whether the chaperone and gating effects can be 'uncoupled'.

      Thank you for the suggestion. A similar question was raised by Reviewer 1, which was addressed above (public review, point 2). We have now added more discussion to clarify this point.

      (2) Based on the western blots in Figure 2B, the rescue of cell surface expression appears to require a higher concentration of AKP compared to the concentration response of channel inhibition (~9 microM in Figure 3, perhaps even more potent in patch clamp in Figure 2C). Could the authors clarify/quantify the concentration response for trafficking rescue?

      Thank you for bringing up this observation. Indeed, the pharmacochaperone effects of Aekatperone as well as other previously published K<sub>ATP</sub> pharmacochaperones require higher concentrations compared to their inhibitory effects on surface-expressed channels. This difference likely stems from the necessity for these compounds to cross the cell membrane and interact with newly synthesized channels in the endoplasmic reticulum, where the trafficking rescue occurs. We estimate that effective pharmacochaperone activity for Aekatperone can be achieved at concentrations ranging from 50 to 100 µM in cells expressing trafficking-deficient K<sub>ATP</sub> channel mutants, higher than that required for inhibition of surface-expressed channels (~9 µM IC50). Future work could focus on medicinal chemistry modifications, for example esterification of Aekatperone (Zhou G. Exploring Ester Prodrugs: A Comprehensive Review of Approaches, Applications, and Methods. Pharmacology & Pharmacy, 2024, 15, 269-284). Once inside the cell, the esters would be cleaved by endogenous esterases to release the active compound, ensuring efficient intracellular delivery. This strategy could potentially improve membrane permeability and bioavailability of the compound, which would lower the required concentrations to achieve desired chaperoning effects.

      (3) A future challenge in the application of pharmacochaperones of this type in hyperinsulinism may be the manipulation of chaperone concentration in order to permit function. In experiments it is straightforward to wash off the chaperone, but this would not be the case in an organism. I wondered if the authors had attempted to rescue channel function with diazoxide ine presence of AKP, rather than after washing off (ie. is AKP inhibition insurmountable, or can it be overcome by sufficient diazoxide).

      Thank you for raising this important point. We have previously shown (Martin GM et al. Pharmacological Correction of Trafficking Defects in ATP-sensitive Potassium Channels Caused by Sulfonylurea Receptor 1 Mutations. J Biol Chem. 2016, 291: 21971-21983, PMID: 27573238) that diazoxide, which stabilizes K<sub>ATP</sub> channels in an open conformation, also reduces physical association between Kir6.2 N-terminus and SUR1 as demonstrated by reduced crosslinking of engineered azido-phenylalanine (an unnatural amino acid) at Kir6.2 N-terminal amino acid 12 position to SUR1. Incubating cells with diazoxide did not rescue the trafficking mutants but actually further reduced the maturation efficiency of trafficking mutants. For this reason, we did not include diazoxide during Aekatperone incubation and instead added diazoxide after Aekatperone washout to potentiate the activity of mutant channels rescued to the cell surface. In vivo, we envision testing alternating Aekatperone and diazoxide dosing to maximize functional rescue of K<sub>ATP</sub> trafficking mutants.

      (4) Do the authors have any information about the turnover time of KATP after washoff of the chaperone (how stable are the rescued channels at the cell surface)? This is a difficult question to probe when glibenclamide is used as a chaperone, but maybe much simpler to address with a lower affinity chaperone like AKP.

      Thank you for your thoughtful comment. While we have not yet tested the duration of rescued K<sub>ATP</sub> channels at the cell surface following Aekatperone washout, we have conducted similar studies with carbamazepine (Chen PC et al. Carbamazepine as a novel small molecule corrector of trafficking-impaired ATP-sensitive potassium channels identified in congenital hyperinsulinism. J Biol Chem. 2013, 288: 20942-20954, PMID: 23744072), another compound exhibiting reversible inhibitory and chaperone effects (apparent affinity between glibenclamide and Aekatperone). Our previous findings with carbamazepine showed that in cultured cells its chaperone effects were detectable as early as 1 hour and peaked around 6 hours after treatment. Furthermore, when carbamazepine was removed following a 16-hour treatment, the rescue effect persisted for up to 6 hours post-drug removal. These results provide a potential duration of the surface expression rescue effects of reversible pharmacochaperones.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The paper is well-written and comprehensive with only very minor essentially copy-editing needed. That said, it would be good if the authors could answer the main points raised above:

      (1) What is the relevant Tanimoto parameters and sequence identity (does this mean structural identity) for the identified compounds?

      As we answered above in response to the overall assessment, to facilitate the identification of novel hits, molecules with greater than 0.5 Tanimoto similarity in ECFP4 space to any known binders of the target protein and its homologs within 70% amino acid sequence identity were excluded from the commercial library. Additionally, after scoring and ranking the molecules by the AtomNet® technology, a diversity clustering was performed on the top 30,000 molecules using the Butina algorithm with a Tanimoto similarity cutoff of 0.35 in ECFP4 space to minimize selection of structurally similar scaffolds for the final compound buy-list.

      (2) Did any of the identified putative binders have inhibitory action on channels? If so, does this give clues to separating chaperoning from inhibitory effects?

      Please see response to the same question in the overall assessment above.

      (3) Acknowledge that the identified compounds contain sulfonylurea-like moieties, and address why Aekatperone should (or perhaps does not) offer anything advantage over low affinity sulfonrylureas such as tolbutamide?

      Please see response to the same question in the overall assessment above.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Thank you for assembling the interesting study, which I felt was well designed and communicated. The diverse approaches used in the study, with consistent findings, were definitely a strength. The core findings are also well distilled in the main body of the text, and although there is quite a lot of supplementary information, I felt that it was presented appropriately and well selected in terms of what would be important for readers hoping to learn more. In addition to the questions described above, I only had a few minor editorial issues that could be fixed related to presentation.

      (1) Figure 1B. The colours and resolution of the chemical structures are difficult to see clearly and could be improved.

      We have revised the figure accordingly.

      (2) This is a minor wording point... first sentence of the discussion describes the drugs as pancreatic-selective, when it would be more clear to describe them as selective for the pancreatic isoform of KATP (Kir6.2/SUR1), or perhaps better as 'exhibiting ~4-5 fold selective for SUR1-containing KATP channels vs. SUR2A or SUR2B'.

      We have changed the wording as suggested.

      (3) As a curiosity (not necessary to do more experiments), but I am curious if the authors know whether there is any meaningful enhancement of trafficking of WT channels by AKP.

      All pharmacochaperones we have identified to date including Aekatperone also slightly enhance WT channel surface expression (10-20%).

      Reviewing editor recommendations:

      (1) Given the modest resolution of the EM reconstruction, it is perhaps not entirely clear how AKP was assigned to the density observed. Specifically, it would be helpful to include a comparison of an AKP-free map and the current AKP map (filtered to a similar resolution) showing slice views of densities in the region around the inferred binding site. This would be very helpful in ascertaining whether the cryoEM reconstruction is an independent validation of the computational and functional experiments or whether the density inference depends on the additional knowledge.

      We appreciate the editor’s suggestion. We have now added a Supplemental Figure (Supplementary Figure 7 in the revised manuscript) that compares our AKP-free cryoEM density deposited previously to the EMDB (EMD-26320) and the AKP-bound cryoEM density from this study, with cryoEM density (filtered to the same resolution) superimposed on the structural model.

      (2) It could help to mention in brief what is a probable mechanism of AKP inhibition - that is how after binding of AKP, channel opening is restricted. Is it similar to that of other site A ligands?

      Based on the strong Kir6.2 N-terminal cryoEM density observed in our AKP map, AKP most likely inhibits K<sub>ATP</sub> channels by trapping the Kir6.2 N-terminus in the central cavity of SUR1’s ABC core thus preventing Kir6.2-C-terminal domain from rotating to an open conformation, similar to other ligands that stabilize the Kir6.2 N-terminus-SUR1 interface by binding to site A (such as tolbutamide and AKP), site B (such as repaglinide), or both site A and site B (such as glibenclamide). We have now included this in the revised Results and Discussion sections.

      (3) In the context of the MD simulations, do other site A ligands (which from my understanding bind at a similar site) also exhibit similar flexibility as AKP? If there is information available on the flexibility of ligands of varying affinities, bound to the same site, maybe some correlative inferences can be drawn? However, in MD simulation trajectories it is not entirely uncommon for a ligand to simply get trapped in a local energy well. Since the authors have performed significant analysis of their MD results it could be worth mentioning/discussing such phenomena.

      Previously published MD data addressing ligand dynamics, such as glibenclamide in the SUR1 pocket (Walczewska-Szewc K, Nowak W. Photo-Switchable Sulfonylureas Binding to ATPSensitive Potassium Channel Reveal the Mechanism of Light-Controlled Insulin Release. J Phys Chem B. 2021, 125: 13111-13121, PMID: 34825567), indicate a certain degree of flexibility. Unfortunately, we cannot directly compare these results, as the simulations were performed without the KNtp domain in the SUR1 cavity, which partially contributes to ligand stabilization. This is an issue we plan to investigate in the future.

      In this study, we ran five independent MD simulations, each 500 ns long, resulting in a total of 2.5 μs of simulation time. Across all replicates, the ligand stayed in the same position, with variations mainly in the dynamics of the blurred segment. Considering the length of the simulations and the consistency across the runs, we believe this binding pose is stable and represents a global (or at least highly stable) energy minimum, consistent with the cryo-EM data.

      (4) In electrophysiological assays, 10 uM AKP seems to inhibit all currents (Figure 2), but in the Rb+ flux assay ~10 uM appears to be the IC50. The reason for this difference is not entirely clear and it would help to comment on this.

      Thank you for noticing the difference. The initial electrophysiological experiments were conducted using the very small amount of AKP provided to us from Atomwise. We estimated the concentration of the reconstituted AKP the best we could, but the concentration was likely to not be very accurate due to difficulty in handling the very small amount of the AKP powder. Subsequent Rb<sup>+>/sup> efflux experiments were conducted using a different, larger batch of AKP we purchased from Enamine. We have now stated this in the Methods section.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      As reported above, this paper by Xu et al reports on a new method to combine the analysis of coevolutionary patterns with dynamic profiles to identify functionally important residues and reveal correlations between binding sites.

      Strengths:

      In general, coevolutionary analysis and MD analysis are carried out separately and while there have been attempts to compare the information provided by the two, no unified framework exists. Here, the authors convincingly demonstrate that integrating signals from Dynamics and coevolution gives information that substantially overcomes the one provided by either method in isolation. While other methods are useful, they do not capture how dynamics is fundamental to define function and thus sculpts coevolution, via the 3D structure of the protein. At the same time, the authors demonstrate how coevolution in turn also influences internal dynamics. The Networks they rebuild unveil information at an even higher level: the model starts pairwise but through network representation the authors arrive to community analysis, reporting on interaction patterns that are larger than simple couples.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors should

      - Make an effort in suggesting/commenting the limits of applicability of their method;

      We have added a sentence on Page 17, line 15 that describes the limitation of our method.

      - Expand discussion on how DyNoPy compares to other methods;

      A paragraph has been added to explain the comparison with other models (Page 3, line 18)

      - Dynamic is not essential in all systems (structural proteins): The authors may want to comment on possible strategies they would use for other systems where their framework may not be suitable/applicable.

      We agree with the reviewer that dynamics is not essential in all systems. In systems where there is limited role of dynamics in the function, the analysis done with DyNoPy is equivalent to conventional coevolution analysis, which can be consider one limitation of our method. Conversely, for dynamic proteins, combining functional dynamics descriptors with coevolution analysis using DyNoPy, helps in denoising information by deconvolution of communities. We have included this in the manuscript to highlight the suitability/applicability of the method.

      Further, we have added a paragraph in the Introduction and conclusions highlighting the main difference between DyNoPy and existing computational tools like DCCM, KIN, and SPM and for your convenience it is provided below:

      “Functional sites are often regulated by both, local and global interactions. Changes in these interactions are instrumental for functional events like substrate binding, catalysis, and conformational changes (18). The development of physical models of protein dynamics and the increase in available computational power has stimulated the adoption of computational techniques (19, 20) to investigate the conformational dynamics of proteins, an essential component of the many biological functions (21, 22). Different models have been proposed to describe the interactions between residues during simulations and network models have been particularly popular,  including methods on single structures and MD simulations data built by analysing the response to external forces on residue networks (23), by estimating the prevalence of non-covalent energy interaction networks in homologous proteins (24), or by analysing linear or non-linear correlation in atomic fluctuations (25, 26). These techniques have demonstrated their usefulness in extracting allosteric networks from structural data with applications in enzyme design (26).”

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Authors introduced a computational framework, DyNoPy, that integrates residue coevolution analysis with molecular dynamics (MD) simulations to identify functionally important residues in proteins. DyNoPy identifies key residues and residue-residue coupling to generate an interaction graph and attempts to validate using two clinically relevant β-lactamases (SHV-1 and PDC-3).

      Strengths:

      DyNoPy could not only show clinically relevance of mutations but also predict new potential evolutionary mutations. Authors have provided biologically relevant insights into protein dynamics which can have potential applications in drug discovery and understanding molecular evolution.

      Weaknesses:

      Although DyNoPy could show the relevance of key residues in active and non-active site residues, no experiments have been performed to validate their predictions.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting this point. We acknowledge that direct experimental validation of our predictions for DyNoPy has not yet been performed. However, we have provided explanations and evidence from experiments conducted on closely related homologs to support the relevance of key residues. These homologs share significant structural and functional similarity, which strengthens the reliability of our predictions.

      In addition, they should compare their method with conventional techniques and show how their method could be different.

      We thank all the reviewers for highlighting this oversight on our behalf. In Introduction and conclusion, we have added the following paragraphs:

      “Functional sites are often regulated by both, local and global interactions. Changes in these interactions are instrumental for functional events like substrate binding, catalysis, and conformational changes (18). The development of physical models of protein dynamics and the increase in available computational power has stimulated the adoption of computational techniques (19, 20) to investigate the conformational dynamics of proteins, an essential component of the many biological functions (21, 22). Different models have been proposed to describe the interactions between residues during simulations and network models have been particularly popular,  including methods on single structures and MD simulations data built by analysing the response to external forces on residue networks (23), by estimating the prevalence of non-covalent energy interaction networks in homologous proteins (24), or by analysing linear or non-linear correlation in atomic fluctuations (25, 26). These techniques have demonstrated their usefulness in extracting allosteric networks from structural data with applications in enzyme design (26). ”

      An explanation of "communities" divided in the work and how these communities are relevant to the article should be provided. In addition, choice of collective variables and their relevance in residue coupling movement is also not very well explained. Dynamics cross correlation map can also be a good method for understanding the residue movements and can explain the residue-residue coupling, it is not explained how DyNoPy is different from the conventional methods or can perform better.

      The following sentences have been included in the manuscript to address the questions raised by the reviewer:

      On Community Definition and relevance

      DyNoPy identified coevolving residue pairs (scaled coevolution score >1) with interactions strongly correlated with protein functional motions (i.e., J values larger than zero). Applying network analysis on the combined dynamics-coevolution matrix helps us extracting higher-order interactions beyond pairwise coupling and detecting critical residues, which show multiple interactions with each other. Moreover, indirect long-range relationships, which would be hard to identify from numerical data, could be detected through community clustering. Community-based analysis offers a more comprehensive understanding of residue relationships and enables the visualization of residue couplings on the protein structure.

      On Choice of collective variables:

      DyNoPy works on the assumption that time-dependent interactions between critical residues, either having significant structural change or not will correlate with functional conformational motions. Since MD simulation data is high-dimensional, a time-dependent dynamic descriptor is required to extract the most relevant information for the process under study. A good collective variable (CV) should appropriately describe protein functional motions. Thus, a CV that detects the highest number of residue couplings is expected to be the most suitable descriptor (Mentioned in Page 22 Line 14). In our study, we tested 12 CVs, either focusing on the entire protein or on selected regions. And the best performed CV (the one identified the most residue couplings) was selected for further analysis. In practical applications, users can decide whether to focus on the most relevant global or local dynamics descriptor  depending on the dynamics of their specific system.

      We have added a paragraph in the Introduction differentiating DyNoPy with other methods including DCCM. DCCM differs from DyNoPy in two aspects 1) it does not account for inter-residue coevolution 2) the correlation matrix captures correlations of atomic/residue movements associated with the whole intrinsic dynamics of the system, without filtering for the contributions to the important motions involved in the biological function. Additionally, any residue pair contributing to functional motion without itself undergoing any structural change will not be visible in this approach.

      In the sentence "DyNoPy identified eight significant communities of strongly coupled residues within SHV-1 (Supporting Fig. S4A)" I could not find a clear description of eight significant communities.

      The following sentences have been included in the results, methods and figure legends that define ‘significant community’:

      ‘DyNoPy identified eight meaningful communities, each consisting of at least three strongly coupled residues within SHV-1 (Supplementary Fig. S4A). All crucial catalytic residues and critical substitution sites previously mentioned participating in one of these communities with the exceptions of R<sub>43</sub>, R<sub>202</sub>, and S<sub>130</sub>.’ (Page 8 Line 28)

      ‘A meaningful community should contain at least three residues.’ (Page 21 Line 2)

      ‘A reasonable residue community should contain at least three residues.’ (SI Page 11)

      Again the description of communities is not clear to me in the following sentence "Detailed description of the other three communities is provided in the supporting information (Fig. S6)."

      This following sentence has been rewritten.

      ‘Detailed description of communities with secondary importance for protein function (community 3, 8, and 9) is provided in the supplementary information (Supplementary Fig. S6).’ (Page 9, line 8)

      In the sentence "N170 acts as an intermediary between N136 and E166". Kindly cite the reference figure to show N179 as intermediate residue.

      This sentence has been rewritten to avoid any confusion.

      ‘Although DyNoPy did not detect this direct interaction between N136 and E166, the established relationship between N136 and N170 highlights the role of N136 in influencing E166.’ (Page 10 Line 8)

      Please be careful with the numbers. In the sentence "These residues not only interact with each other directly but are also indirectly coupled via 21 other residues." I could count 22 other residues and not 21.

      We thank the reviewer for spotting this error. This has now been corrected. All the communities are counted again.

      ‘These residues not only interact with each other directly but are also indirectly coupled via 22 other residues.’ (Page 12 Line 14)

      In the sentence "Unlike other substitution sites that are adjacent to the active site, R<sub>205</sub> is situated more than 16 Å away from catalytic serine S<sub>70</sub>". Please add this label somewhere in the figure.

      The figure legends have been updated to include this. Distances have been added to community 4 Fig. 3 and community 6 Fig. 4. Residue index in the legend of Fig.3 has been included as subscript. Distance in the main text has been changed to be more accurate.

      ‘G<sub>156</sub> and A<sub>146</sub> are two functional important residues distant from the active site. G<sub>156</sub> is 21.3Å away from the catalytic S<sub>70</sub>. A<sub>146</sub> is 16.8Å away from S<sub>70</sub>.’ (Page 12 Line 2)

      ‘R<sub>205</sub> is a functional important residue that is 20.6Å away from the active site S<sub>70</sub>.’ (Page 13 Line 10)

      Please cite a reference in the sentence "This indicates that mutations on G238 would result in an alteration on protein catalytic function, as well as an increased flexibility of the protein, which strongly aligns with previous finding."

      The citation has been added

      ‘This indicates that mutations on G238 would result in an alteration on protein catalytic function, as well as an increased flexibility of the protein, which strongly aligns with previous finding (62).’ (Page 15 Line 2)

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, Xu, Dantu and coworkers report a protocol for analyzing coevolutionary and dynamical information to identify a subset of communities that capture functionally relevant sites in beta-lactamases.

      Strengths:

      The combination of coevolutionary information and metrics from MD simulations is interesting for capturing functionally relevant sites, which can have implications in the fields of drug discovery but also in protein design.

      Weaknesses:

      The combination of coevolutionary information and metrics from MD simulations is not new as other protocols have been proposed along the years (the current version of the paper neglects some of them, see below), and there are a few parameters of the protocol that, in my opinion, should be better analyzed and discussed.

      (1) As mentioned, the introduction of the paper lacks some important publications in the field of using graph theory to represent important interaction networks extracted from MD simulations (DOI: 10.1002/pro.4911), and also combining MD data with MSA to identify functionally relevant sites for enzyme design (doi: 10.1021/acscatal.4c04587, 10.1093/protein/gzae005).

      We are very grateful for pointing us to these references. We have added a paragraph in the Introduction mentioning these and other computational tools similar to DyNoPy. Further, in conclusion we have highlighted the differences between DyNoPy and existing tools.

      (2) The matrix used to apply graph theory (J_ij) is built from summing the scaled coevolution and degree of correlation values. The alpha and beta weights are defined, and the authors mention that alpha is set to 0.5, thus beta as well to fulfil with the alpha + beta = 1. Why a value of 0.5 has been selected? How this affects the overall results and conclusions extracted? The finding that many catalytically relevant residues are identified in the communities is not surprising given that such sites usually present a high conservation score.

      This is an excellent question. Our present formulation allows the user to easily assess the influence of coevolution and dynamic couplings on the output. Setting alpha to 0.5, weights both evolutionary and dynamics information equally and has shown promising results in SHV-1 and PDC-3. As it has been presented in the manuscript, setting alpha to 1, i.e., purely utilising coevolution data does not let us identify critical residues effectively as all residues are included in the set (Supplementary Fig. S4 and S5). In future work, we would like to investigate the effect of scanning alpha from 0 to 1 on the final residue list, possibly on a larger set of proteins and protein families.

      We would also like to point out that some of the residue pairs with coevolution scores in the top 1% have J-scores set to 0, as they lacked significant coupling to the functional dynamics.

      (3) Another important point that needs further explanation is the selection of the relevant descriptor of protein dynamics. In this study two different strategies have been used (one more global the other more local), but more details should be provided regarding their choice. What is the best strategy according to the authors? Why not using the same strategy for both related systems? The obtained results using one methodology or the other will have a large impact on the dynamical score. Another related point is: what is the impact of the MD simulation length, how the MSA is generated and number of sequences used for MSA construction?

      As in the case of many complex proteins, the flow of information occurs in β-lactamases via structural interactions (https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.66567). These interactions occur both on a local level, as in the case of binding site residues or residues immediately surrounding the binding site; however, there are interactions far away (>20Å) from the binding site that have the ability to alter function. We have obtained this information from extensive surveys of clinical isolates and experimental data. To account for such interactions, a more global approach has to be taken. To answer the reviewer’s question: each system is unique and there is no one-fixed strategy. In short, the method used should be able to denoise information and the user is advised to fine-tune their findings by corroborating with experimental and clinical information.

      The length of MD simulations is also system specific. Some systems effectively sample the functional dynamics within a shorter simulation time, while others take a long timescale MD simulation to converge. The results won’t change as long as the simulation has effectively sampled the functional dynamics associated with biological function.

      The MSA is generated by the HH-Suite package as mentioned on Page 19 Line 19. More specifically, the MSA is constructed based on the UniRef30 database, where sequences are clustered, and each cluster contains sequences with at least 30% sequence identity. This provides a non-redundant set of protein sequences. Our package allows the automatic generation of MSAs from the database. For SHV-1, the alignment contains 18,175 protein sequences and for PDC-3, the alignment consists of 27,892 protein sequences. Full details of this protocol are published in Bibik et al. (https://doi.org/10.1093/bioinformatics/btae166). We have revised the methods section to include these details.

      Other Minor Alterations

      ‘Fig. S1 and S2’ has been changed to ‘Supplementary Fig. S1 and S2’ for consistency (Page 6 Line 12)

      (1) ‘Figure 5B’ has been changed to ‘Fig. 5B’ for consistency (Page 16 Line 11)

      (2) All the ‘Figure’ has been changed to ‘Fig.’ in the SI for consistency

      (3) Just as the suggestion, an alteration has been made on the Step 1 of Fig.1.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript from Hammond et al., investigates the modularity of the segmentation clock and morphogenesis in early vertebrate development, focusing on how these processes might independently evolve to influence the diversity of segment numbers across vertebrates.

      Methodology: The study uses a previously published computational model, parameterized for zebrafish, to simulate and analyse the interactions between the segmentation clock and the morphogenesis of the pre-somitic mesoderm (PSM). Their model integrates cell advection, motility, compaction, cell division, and the synchronization of the embryo clock. Three alternative scenarios of PSM morphogenesis were modeled to examine how these changes affect the segmentation clock.

      Model System: The computational model system combines a representation of cell movements and the phase oscillator dynamics of the segmentation clock within a three-dimensional horseshoe-shaped domain mimicking the geometry of the vertebrate embryo PSM. The parameters used for the mathematical model are mostly estimated from previously published experimental findings.

      Key Findings and Conclusions: (1) The segmentation clock was found to be broadly robust against variations in morphogenetic processes such as cell ingression and motility; (2) Changes in the length of the PSM and the strength of phase coupling within the clock significantly influenced the system's robustness; (3) The authors conclude that the segmentation clock and PSM morphogenesis exhibited developmental modularity (i.e. relative independence), allowing these two phenomena to evolve independently, and therefore possibly contributing to the diverse segment numbers observed in vertebrates.

      Major comments from the original round of review:

      (1) The key conclusion drawn by the authors (that there is robustness, and therefore modularity, between the morphogenetic cellular processes modeled and the embryo clock synchronization) stems directly from the modeling results appropriately presented and discussed in the manuscript.

      The model comprises some strong assumptions, however all have been clearly explained and the parameterization choices are supported by experimental findings, providing biological meaning to the model. Estimated parameters are well explained, and seem reasonable assumptions (from the embryology perspective).

      (2) This study, as is, achieves its proposed goal of evaluating the potential robustness of the embryo clock to changes in (some) morphogenetic processes. The authors do not claim that the model used is complete, and they properly identify some limitations, including the lack of cell-cell interactions. Given the recognized importance of cellular physical interactions for successful embryo development, including them in the model would be a significant addition in future studies.

      (3) The authors have deposited all the code used for analysis in a public GitHub repository that is updated and available for the research community.

      (4) In page 6, the authors justify their choice of clock parameters for cells ingressing the PSM: "As ingressing cells do not appear to express segmentation clock genes (Mara et al. (2007)), the position at which cells ingress into the PSM can create challenges for clock patterning, as only in the 'off' phase of the clock will ingressing cells be in-phase with their neighbors."

      However, there are several lines of evidence (in chick and mouse), that some oscillatory clock genes are already being expressed as early as in the gastrulation phase (so prior to PSM ingression) (Feitas et al, 2001 [10.1242/dev.128.24.5139]; Jouve et al, 2002 [10.1242/dev.129.5.1107]; Maia-Fernandes at al, 2024 [10.1371/journal.pone.0297853]).

      Question: Is this also true in zebrafish? (I.e. is there any recent experimental evidence that the clock genes are not expressed at ingression, since the paper cited to support this assumption is from 2007).

      If they are expressed in zebrafish (as they are in mouse and chick), then the cell addition should have random clock gene periods when they enter the PSM and not start all with a constant initial phase of zero. Probably this will not impact the results since the cells will also be out of phase with their neighbors when they "ingress", however, it will model more closely the biological scenario (and avoid such criticism).

      Significance:

      GENERAL ASSESSMENT

      This study uses a previously published model to simulate alternative scenarios of morphogenetic parameters to infer the potential independence (termed here modularity) between the segmentation clock and a set of morphogenetic processes, arguing that such modularity could allow the evolution of more flexible body plans, therefore partially explaining the variability in the number of segments observed in the vertebrates. This question is fundamental and relevant, yet still poorly researched. This work provides a comprehensive simulation with a model that tries to simplify the many morphogenetic processes described in the literature, reducing it to a few core fundamental processes that allow drawing the conclusions sought. It provides theoretical insight to support a conceptual advance in the field of evolutionary vertebrate embryology.

      ADVANCE

      This study builds on a model recently published by Uriu et al. (eLife, 2021) that incorporates quantitative experimental data within a modeling framework including cell and tissue-level parameters, allowing the study of multiscale phenomena active during zebrafish embryo segmentation. Uriu's publication reports many relevant and often non-intuitive insights uncovered by the model, most notably the description of phase vortices formed by the synchronizing genetic oscillators interfering with the traveling-wave front pattern.

      However, this model can be further explored to ask additional questions beyond those described in the original paper. A good example is the present study, which uses this mathematical framework to investigate the potential independence between two of the modeled processes, thereby extracting extra knowledge from it. Accordingly, the present study represents a step forward in the direction of using relevant theoretical frameworks to quantitatively explore the landscape of complex molecular hypotheses in silico, and with it shed some light on fundamental open questions or inform the design of future experiments in the lab.

      The study incorporates a wide range of existing literature on the developmental biology of vertebrates. It comprehensively cites prior work, such as the foundational studies by Cooke and Zeeman on the segmentation clock and the role of FGF signaling in PSM development as discussed by Gomez et al. The literature properly covers the breadth of knowledge in this field.

      AUDIENCE

      Target audience: This study is relevant for fundamental research in developmental biology, specifically targeting researchers who focus on early embryo development and morphogenesis from both experimental and theoretical perspectives. It is also relevant for evolutionary biologists investigating the genetic factors that influence vertebrate evolution, as well as to computational biologists and bioinformatics researchers studying developmental processes and embryology.

      Developmental researchers studying the segmentation clock in other vertebrate model organisms (namely mouse and chick), will find this publication especially valuable since it provides insights that can help them formulate new hypotheses to elucidate the molecular mechanisms of the clock (for example finding a set of evolutionarily divergent genes that might interfere with PSM length).<br /> Additionally, this study provides a set of cellular parameters that have yet to be measured in mouse and chick, therefore guiding the design of future experiments to measure them, allowing the simulation of the same model with sets of parameters from different vertebrate model organisms, therefore testing the robustness of the findings reported for zebrafish.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Verd and colleagues explored how various biologically relevant factors influence the robustness of clock dynamics synchronization among neighboring cells within the context of somatogenesis, adapting a mathematical model presented by Urio et. al in 2021 in a similar context. Specifically they show that clock dynamics is robust to different biological mechanisms such as cell infusion, cellular motility, compaction-extension and cell-division. On the other hand , the length of Presomitic Mesoderm (PSM) and density of cells in it has a significant role in the robustness of clock dynamics. While the manuscript is well-written and provides clear descriptions of methods and technical details, it tends to be somewhat lengthy.

      Major comments from original round of review:

      (1) The authors mention that "...the model is three dimensional and so can quantitatively recapture the rates of cell mixing that we observe in the PSM". I am not convinced with this justification of using a 3D model. None of the effects the authors explore in this manuscript requires a three dimensional model or full physical description of the cellular mechanics such as excluded volume interaction etc. A one-dimensional model characterized by cell position along the arclength of PSM and somatic region and segmentation clock phase θ can incorporate all the physics authors described in this manuscript as well as significantly computationally cheap allowing the authors to explore the effect of different parameters in greater detail.

      (2) I am not sure about the justification for limiting the quantification of phase synchrony in a very limited (one cell diameter wide) region at one end of the somatic part (Page 33 below Fig. 9). From my understanding of the manuscript, the segments appear in significant length anterior to this region. Wouldn't an ensemble average of multiple such one cell diameter wide regions in the somatic region be a more accurate metric for quantifying synchrony?

      (3) While studying the effect of cellular ingression, the authors study three discrete modes-random, DP and DP+LV and show that in the DP+LV mode the clock synchrony becomes affected. I would like the authors to explore this in a continuous fashion from a pure DP ingression to Pure LV ingression and intermediates.

      (4) While studying the effect of length and density of cells in PSM on cellular synchrony, the authors restrict to 3 values of density and 6 values of PSM length keeping the other parameter constant. I would be interested to see a phase diagram similar to Fig. 7 in the two dimensional parameter space of L and ρ0. I am curious if a scaling relation exists for the parameter values that partition the parameter space with and without synchrony.

      (5) Both in the abstract and introduction, the authors discuss at a great length about the variability in the number of segments. I am curious how the number and width of the segments observed depend on different parameters related to cellular mechanics and the segmentation clock ?

      (6) The authors assume that the phase dynamics of the chemical network may be described by an oscillator with constant frequency. For the completeness of the manuscript, the author should discuss in detail, for which chemical networks this is a good assumption.

      (7) Figure 3 and the associated text shows no effect of the cellular motility profile in the synchrony of the segmentation clock. This may be moved to the supplementary considering the length of this manuscript.

      Significance:

      The manuscript answers some important questions in the synchrony of segmentation clock in the vertebrates utilizing a model published earlier. However, the presented result is incomplete in some aspects (points 2 to 5 of section A) and that could be overcome by a more detailed analysis using a simpler one dimensional (point 1 of section A). I believe this manuscript could be of interest to an intersecting audience of developmental biologists, systems biologists, and physicists/engineers interested in dynamical systems.

      [Editors' note: the authors have responded comprehensively to the reviews from Review Commons.]

    3. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Hammond et al. study robustness of the vertebrate segmentation clock against morphogenetic processes such as cell ingression, cell movement and cell division to ask whether the segmentation clock and morphogenesis are modular or not. The modularity of these two would be important for evolvability of the segmenting system. The authors adopt a previously proposed 3D model of the presomitic mesoderm (Uriu et al. 2021 eLife) and include new elements; different types of cell ingression, tissue compaction and cell cycles. Based on the results of numerical simulations that synchrony of the segmentation clock is robust, the authors conclude that there is a modularity in the segmentation clock and morphogenetic processes. The presented results support the conclusion. The manuscript is clearly written. I have several comments that could help the authors further strengthen their arguments.

      Major comment: 

      [Optional] In both the current model and Uriu et al. 2021, coupling delay in phase oscillator model is not considered. Given that several previous studies (e.g. Lewis 2003, Herrgen et al. 2010, Yoshioka-Kobayashi et al. 2020) suggested the presence of coupling delays in DeltaNotch signaling, could the authors analyze the effect of coupling delay on robustness of the segmentation clock against morphogenetic processes?

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion. Owing to the computational demands of including such a delay in the model, we cannot feasibly repeat every simulation analysed here in the presence of delay, and would like to note that the increased computational demand that delays put on the simulations is also the reason why Uriu et al 2021 did not include it, as stated in their published exchange with reviewers. However, analogous to our analysis in figure 7, we can analyse how varying the position of progenitor cell ingression affects synchrony in the presence of the coupling delay measured in zebrafish by Herrgen et al. (2010). We show this analysis in a new figure 8 (8B, specifically), on page 21, and discuss its implications in the text on pages 2022. Our analysis reveals that the model cannot recover synchrony using the default parameters used by Uriu et al. (2021) and reveal a much stronger dependence on the rate of cell mixing (vs) than shown in the instantaneous coupling case (cf. figure 7). However, by systematically varying the value of the delay we find that a relatively minor increase in the delay is sufficient to recover synchrony using the parameter set of Uriu et al. (see figure 8C). Repeating this across the three scenarios of cell ingression we see that the combination of coupling strength and delay determine the robustness of synchrony to varying position of cell ingression. This suggests that the combination of these two parameters constrain the evolution of morphogenesis.

      Minor comments: 

      -  PSM radius and oscillation synchrony are both denoted by the same alphabet r. The authors should use different alphabets for these two to avoid confusion.

      We thank the reviewer for spotting this. This has now been changed throughout to rT, as shorthand for ‘radius of tissue’.

      -  page 5 Figure 1 caption: (x-x_a/L) should be (x-x_a)/L.

      We thank the reviewer for spotting this. This has now been corrected.

      -  Figure 3C: Description of black crosses in the panels is required in the figure legend.

      Thank you for spotting this. The legend has now been corrected.

      -  Figure 3C another comment: In this panel, synchrony r at the anterior PSM is shown. It is true that synchrony at anterior PSM is most relevant for normal segment formation. However, in this case, the mobility profile is changed, so it may be appropriate to show how synchrony at mid and posterior PSM would depend on changes in mobility profile. Is synchrony improved by cell mobility at the region where cell ingression happens?

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion. We have now plotted the synchrony along the AP axis for varying motility profiles, and this can be seen in figure 3 supplement 1, and is briefly discussed in the text on page 11. We show that while the synchrony varies with x-position (as already expected, see figure 2), there is no trend associated with the shape of the motility profile.

      -  In page 12, the authors state that "the results for the DP and DP+LV cases are exactly equal for L = 185 um, as .... and the two ingression methods are numerically equivalent in the model". I understood that in this case two ingression methods are equivalent, but I do not understand why the results are "exactly" equal, given the presence of stochasticity in the model.

      These results can be exactly equal despite the simulations being stochastic because they were both initialised using the same ‘seed’ in the source code. However, we now see that this might be confusing to the reader, and we have re-generated this figure but this time initialising the simulations for each ingression scenario using a different seed value. This is now reflected in the text on page 12 and in figure 4.

      -  The authors analyze the effect of cell density on oscillation synchrony in Fig. 4 and they mention that higher density increases robustness of the clock by increasing the average number of interacting neighbours. I think it would be helpful to plot the average number of neighbouring cells in simulations as a function of density to quantitatively support the claim.

      We thank the reviewer for their suggestion. Distributions of neighbour numbers for exemplar simulations with varying density can now be found in  figure 4 supplementary figure 1 and are referred to in the text on page 11.

      -  The authors analyze the effect of PSM length on synchrony in Fig. 4. I think kymographs of synchrony r as shown in Fig. 2D would also be helpful to show that indeed cells get synchronized while advecting through a longer PSM.

      We thank the reviewer for their suggestion and agree that visualising the data in this way is an excellent idea. We have generated the suggested kymographs and added them to figure 4 as supplements 2 and 4, and discussed these results in the text on page 12.

      -  I understand that cells in M phase can interact with neighboring cells with the same coupling strength kappa in the model, although their clocks are arrested. If so, this aspect should be also mentioned in the main text in page 16, as this coupling can be another noise source for synchrony.

      We agree this is an important clarification. We explicitly state this, and briefly justify our choice, in the text on page 16.

      -  Figure 5-figure supplement 2: panel labels A, B, C are missing. 

      Thank you for bringing this to our attention. These have now been added.

      – Figure 5-figure supplement 3: panel labels A, B, C are missing.

      Thank you for bringing this to our attention. These have now been added.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance):

      Synchronization of the segmentation clock has been studied by mathematical modeling, but most previous studies considered cells in a static tissue without morphogenesis. In the previous study by Uriu et al. 2021, morphogenetic processes such as cell advection due to tissue elongation, tissue shortening, and cell mobility were considered in synchronization. The current manuscript provides methodological advances in this aspect by newly including cell ingression, tissue compaction and cell cycle. In addition, the authors bring a concept of modularity and evolvability to the field of the vertebrate segmentation clock, which is new. On the other hand, the manuscript confirms that the synchronization of the segmentation clock is robust by careful simulations, but it does not propose or reveal new mechanisms for making it robust or modular. The main targets of the manuscript will be researchers working on somitogenesis and evolutionary biologists who are interested in evolution of developmental systems. The manuscript will also be interested by broader audiences, like developmental biologists, biophysicists, and physicists and computer scientists who are working on dynamical systems.

      We thank the reviewer for their interest in our manuscript and for acknowledging us as one of the first to address the modularity and evolvability of somitogenesis. We hope that this work will encourage others to think about these concepts in this system too.  

      In the original submission, we identified a high enough coupling strength as the main mechanism underlying the identified modularity in somitogenesis. Since, we have included an analysis of the coupling delay and find that it is the interplay between coupling strength and coupling delay that mediate the identified modularity, allowing PSM morphogenesis and the segmentation clock to evolve independently in regions of parameter space that are constrained and determined by the interplay between these two parameters. We have now added an extra figure (figure 8) where we explore this interplay and have discussed it at length in the last section of the results and in the discussion. We again thank the reviewer for encouraging us to include delays in our analysis.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity):

      SUMMARY 

      The manuscript from Hammond et al., investigates the modularity of the segmentation clock and morphogenesis in early vertebrate development, focusing on how these processes might independently evolve to influence the diversity of segment numbers across vertebrates.

      Methodology: The study uses a previously published computational model, parameterized for zebrafish, to simulate and analyse the interactions between the segmentation clock and the morphogenesis of the pre-somitic mesoderm (PSM). Their model integrates cell advection, motility, compaction, cell division, and the synchronization of the embryo clock. Three alternative scenarios of PSM morphogenesis were modeled to examine how these changes affect the segmentation clock.

      Model System: The computational model system combines a representation of cell movements and the phase oscillator dynamics of the segmentation clock within a three-dimensional horseshoe-shaped domain mimicking the geometry of the vertebrate embryo PSM. The parameters used for the mathematical model are mostly estimated from previously published experimental findings.

      Key Findings and Conclusions: (1) The segmentation clock was found to be broadly robust against variations in morphogenetic processes such as cell ingression and motility; (2) Changes in the length of the PSM and the strength of phase coupling within the clock significantly influenced the system's robustness; (3) The authors conclude that the segmentation clock and PSM morphogenesis exhibited developmental modularity (i.e. relative independence), allowing these two phenomena to evolve independently, and therefore possibly contributing to the diverse segment numbers observed in vertebrates.

      MAJOR COMMENTS

      (1) The key conclusion drawn by the authors (that there is robustness, and therefore modularity, between the morphogenetic cellular processes modeled and the embryo clock synchronization) stems directly from the modeling results appropriately presented and discussed in the manuscript. The model comprises some strong assumptions, however all have been clearly explained and the parameterization choices are supported by experimental findings, providing biological meaning to the model. Estimated parameters are well explained and seem reasonable assumptions (from the embryology perspective).

      We thank the reviewer for their positive comments about our work

      (2) This study, as is, achieves its proposed goal of evaluating the potential robustness of the embryo clock to changes in (some) morphogenetic processes. The authors do not claim that the model used is complete, and they properly identify some limitations, including the lack of cellcell interactions. Given the recognized importance of cellular physical interactions for successful embryo development, including them in the model would be a significant addition in future studies.

      We would like to clarify that the model does include cell-cell interactions as cells interact with their neighbours’ clock phase to synchronise and to avoid occupying the same physical space. 

      (3) The authors have deposited all the code used for analysis in a public GitHub repository that is updated and available for the research community.

      We support open source coding practices.

      (4) In page 6, the authors justify their choice of clock parameters for cells ingressing the PSM: "As ingressing cells do not appear to express segmentation clock genes (Mara et al. (2007)), the position at which cells ingress into the PSM can create challenges for clock patterning, as only in the 'off' phase of the clock will ingressing cells be in-phase with their neighbours."  However, there are several lines of evidence (in chick and mouse), that some oscillatory clock genes are already being expressed as early as in the gastrulation phase (so prior to PSM ingression) (Feitas et al, 2001 [10.1242/dev.128.24.5139]; Jouve et al, 2002 [10.1242/dev.129.5.1107]; Maia-Fernandes at al, 2024 [10.1371/journal.pone.0297853]) Question: Is this also true in zebrafish? (I.e. is there any recent experimental evidence that the clock genes are not expressed at ingression, since the paper cited to support this assumption is from 2007). If they are expressed in zebrafish (as they are in mouse and chick), then the cell addition should have random clock gene periods when they enter the PSM and not start all with a constant initial phase of zero. Probably this will not impact the results since the cells will also be out of phase with their neighbours when they "ingress", however, it will model more closely the biological scenario (and avoid such criticism).

      We thank the reviewer for their comments. While it is known that in zebrafish the clock begins oscillating during epiboly and before the onset of segmentation (Riedel-Kruse et al., 2007), to our knowledge no-one has examined whether posteriorly or laterally ingressing progenitor cells express clock genes prior to their ingression into the PSM, which occurs later in development than the first oscillations which give rise to the first somites. We have not found any published evidence of her/hes gene expression in the dorsal donor tissues or lateral tissues surrounding the PSM, however we acknowledge that this has not been actively studied before and our assumption relies on an absence of evidence, rather than evidence of absence. 

      However, we agree with the reviewer that one should include such an analysis for completeness, and we have now generated additional simulations where progenitor cells ingress with a random clock phase. This data is presented in figure 2 supplement 1 and mentioned in the main text on page 9.

      MINOR COMMENTS 

      (1) The citations are appropriate and cover the major labs that have published work related to this study (although with some overrepresentation of the lab that published the model used).

      We have cited the vast literature on somitogenesis to the best of our ability and do recognise that the work of the Oates lab appears prominently, but this is probably because their experimental data were originally used to parametrise the model in Uriu et al. 2021.

      (2) The text is clear, carefully written, and both the methods and the reasoning behind them are clearly explained and supported by proper citations.

      We are very glad to see that the reviewer found that the manuscript was clearly presented.

      (3) The figures are comprehensive, properly annotated, with explanatory self-contained legends. I have no comments regarding the presentation of the results.

      Thank you

      (4) Minor suggestions: 

      a. Page 26: In the Cell addition sub-section of the Methods section, correct all instances where the word domain is used, but subdomain should be used (for clarity and coherence with the description of the model, stated as having a single domain comprising 3 subdomains).

      We thank the reviewer for raising this, this is a good point. We have now corrected to ‘subdomain’ where appropriate.

      b. Page 32: Table 1. Parameter values used in our work, unless otherwise stated -> Suggestion: Add a column with the individual citations used for each parameter (to facilitate the confirmation of each corresponding reference).

      Thank you for the suggstion, we have now done this (see table 1 page 36).

      Reviewer #2 (Significance):

      GENERAL ASSESSMENT 

      This study uses a previously published model to simulate alternative scenarios of morphogenetic parameters to infer the potential independence (termed here modularity) between the segmentation clock and a set of morphogenetic processes, arguing that such modularity could allow the evolution of more flexible body plans, therefore partially explaining the variability in the number of segments observed in the vertebrates. This question is fundamental and relevant, yet still poorly researched. This work provides a comprehensive simulation with a model that tries to simplify the many morphogenetic processes described in the literature, reducing it to a few core fundamental processes that allow drawing the conclusions seeked. It provides theoretical insight to support a conceptual advance in the field of evolutionary vertebrate embryology.

      ADVANCE

      This study builds on a model recently published by Uriu et al. (eLife, 2021) that incorporates quantitative experimental data within a modeling framework including cell and tissue-level parameters, allowing the study of multiscale phenomena active during zebrafish embryo segmentation. Uriu's publication reports many relevant and often non-intuitive insights uncovered by the model, most notably the description of phase vortices formed by the synchronizing genetic oscillators interfering with the traveling-wave front pattern.  However, this model can be further explored to ask additional questions beyond those described in the original paper. A good example is the present study, which uses this mathematical framework to investigate the potential independence between two of the modeled processes, thereby extracting extra knowledge from it. Accordingly, the present study represents a step forward in the direction of using relevant theoretical frameworks to quantitatively explore the landscape of complex molecular hypotheses in silico, and with it shed some light on fundamental open questions or inform the design of future experiments in the lab.

      The study incorporates a wide range of existing literature on the developmental biology of vertebrates. It comprehensively cites prior work, such as the foundational studies by Cooke and Zeeman on the segmentation clock and the role of FGF signaling in PSM development as discussed by Gomez et al. The literature properly covers the breadth of knowledge in this field.

      AUDIENCE

      Target audience | This study is relevant for fundamental research in developmental biology, specifically targeting researchers who focus on early embryo development and morphogenesis from both experimental and theoretical perspectives. It is also relevant for evolutionary biologists investigating the genetic factors that influence vertebrate evolution, as well as to computational biologists and bioinformatics researchers studying developmental processes and embryology.

      Developmental researchers studying the segmentation clock in other vertebrate model organisms (namely mouse and chick), will find this publication especially valuable since it provides insights that can help them formulate new hypotheses to elucidate the molecular mechanisms of the clock (for example finding a set of evolutionarily divergent genes that might interfere with PSM length). Additionally, this study provides a set of cellular parameters that have yet to be measured in mouse and chick, therefore guiding the design of future experiments to measure them, allowing the simulation of the same model with sets of parameters from different vertebrate model organisms, therefore testing the robustness of the findings reported for zebrafish.

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity): 

      In this manuscript, Verd and colleagues explored how various biologically relevant factors influence the robustness of clock dynamics synchronization among neighboring cells within the context of somatogenesis, adapting a mathematical model presented by Urio et. al in 2021 in a similar context. Specifically they show that clock dynamics is robust to different biological mechanisms such as cell infusion, cellular motility, compaction-extension and cell-division. On the other hand , the length of Presomitic Mesoderm (PSM) and density of cells in it has a significant role in the robustness of clock dynamics. While the manuscript is well-written and provides clear descriptions of methods and technical details, it tends to be somewhat lengthy.

      Below are the comments I would like the authors to address:

      (1) The authors mention that "...the model is three dimensional and so can quantitatively recapture the rates of cell mixing that we observe in the PSM". I am not convinced with this justification of using a 3D model. None of the effects the authors explore in this manuscript requires a three dimensional model or full physical description of the cellular mechanics such as excluded volume interaction etc. A one-dimensional model characterized by cell position along the arclength of PSM and somatic region and segmentation clock phase θ can incorporate all the physics authors described in this manuscript as well as significantly computationally cheap allowing the authors to explore the effect of different parameters in greater detail.

      One of the main objectives of the work we present in this manuscript is to assess how the evolution of PSM morphogenesis affects, or does not affect, segment patterning. The PSM is a three-dimensional tissue with differing cell rearrangement dynamics along its anterior-posterior axis. In addition, PSM dimension, density, the rearrangement rate, and patterns of cell ingression all vary across vertebrate species, and they are functional, especially cell mixing as it promotes synchronisation and drives elongation. In order to answer questions on the modularity of somitogenesis we therefore consider it absolutely necessary to include a three-dimensional representation of the PSM that captures single cells and their movements. In addition, this will allow us, as Reviewer #2 also pointed out, to reparametrize our model using species-specific data as it becomes available. 

      While the reviewer is right in that lower dimensional representations would be computationally more efficient, and are generally more tractable, it would not be possible to represent cell mixing in one dimension, as this happens in three dimensions. One could perhaps encode the synchrony-promoting effect of cell mixing via some coupling function κ(x) that increases towards the posterior, however it is unclear what existing biological data one could use to parameterise this function or determine its form. Cell mixing can be modelled in a two-dimensional framework, however this cannot quantitatively recapture the rate of cell mixing observed in vivo, which is an advantage of this model. 

      Furthermore, it is unclear how one would simulate processes such as compactionextension using a one-dimensional model. The two different scenarios of cell ingression which we consider can also not be replicated in a one-dimensional model, as having a population of cells re-acquiring synchrony on the dorsal surface of the tissue while new material is added to the ventral side, creating asynchrony, is qualitatively different than a one-dimensional scenario where cells are introduced continuously along the spatial axis.

      (2) I am not sure about the justification for limiting the quantification of phase synchrony in a very limited (one cell diameter wide) region at one end of the somatic part (Page 33 below Fig. 9). From my understanding of the manuscript, the segments appear in significant length anterior to this region. Wouldn't an ensemble average of multiple such one cell diameter wide regions in the somatic region be a more accurate metric for quantifying synchrony?

      Indeed, such a metric (e.g. as that used by Uriu et al. to quantify synchrony along the xaxis) would be more accurate for determining synchrony within the PSM. However, as per the clock and wavefront model of somitogenesis, only synchrony at the very anterior of the PSM (or at the wavefront, equivalently) is functional for somitogenesis and thus evolution. Therefore, we restrict our analysis to the anterior-most region of the PSM. We now further justify this in the main text on page 9.

      (3) While studying the effect of cellular ingression, the authors study three discrete modes- random, DP and DP+LV and show that in the DP+LV mode the clock synchrony becomes affected. I would like the authors to explore this in a continuous fashion from a pure DP ingression to Pure LV ingression and intermediates.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion; this is a very interesting question. We are currently working on a related computational and experimental project to address the question of how PSM morphogenesis can change over evolutionary time to evolve the different modes that we see across species. As part of this work, we are running precisely the simulations suggested by the reviewer to find regions of parameter space in which all the relevant morphogenetic processes can freely evolve.  While interesting, this work is however outside the scope of the current manuscript.

      (4) While studying the effect of length and density of cells in PSM on cellular synchrony, the authors restrict to 3 values of density and 6 values of PSM length keeping the other parameter constant. I would be interested to see a phase diagram similar to Fig. 7 in the two-dimensional parameter space of L and ρ0. I am curious if a scaling relation exists for the parameter values that partition the parameter space with and without synchrony.

      We thank the reviewer for their suggestion and agree that this would constitute an interesting addition to the manuscript. We have now generated these data, which are shown in figure 4 supplement 5 and mentioned on page 13. We see no clear relationship between these two variables when co-varying in the presence of random ingression. 

      (5) Both in the abstract and introduction, the authors discuss at a great length about the variability in the number of segments. I am curious how the number and width of the segments observed depend on different parameters related to cellular mechanics and the segmentation clock ?

      We thank the reviewer for this question. It was not clear to us if this was something the reviewer wants us to address in the study’s background and introduction, or an analysis we should include in the results. Therefore, we have responded to both comprehensively below:

      The prevailing conceptual framework for understanding this is the clock and wavefront model (Cooke and Zeeman, 1976), which posits that the somite length is inversely proportional to the frequency of the clock relative to the speed of the wavefront, and that the total number of segments is the relative frequency multiplied by the total duration of somitogenesis.

      Experimentally we know that the frequency is determined in part by the coupling strength (Liao, Jorg, and Oates, 2016), and from comparative embryological studies (Gomez et al., 2008; Steventon et al., 2016) we know that changes in the elongation dynamics of the PSM correlate with changes in somite number, presumably by altering the total duration of somitogenesis (Gomez et al., 2009). These changes in elongation are thought to be driven by the changes in cell and tissue mechanics we test in our manuscript. 

      Within our model, we cannot in general predict how the number of segments responds to changes in either clock parameters or cell mechanical parameters, as we lack understanding of what causes somitogenesis to cease; this is thus not encoded in our model and segmentation can in principle proceed indefinitely. Therefore, we have not performed this analysis.

      Similarly, we have not included an analysis of somite length. This is for two reasons: 1) as per the clock and wavefront model, the frequency at the PSM anterior (which we analyse) is equivalent to this measurement, as we assume (in general) the wavefront ($x = x_{a}$) is inertial. 2) the length of the nascent somite is not thought to be of much relevance to the adult phenotype, and by extension evolution. Somites undergo cell division and growth soon after their patterning by the segmentation clock, therefore their final size does not majorly depend on the dynamics of the segmentation clock. Rather, the main function of the clock is to control their number (and polarity).

      (6) The authors assume that the phase dynamics of the chemical network may be described by an oscillator with constant frequency. For the completeness of the manuscript, the author should discuss in detail, for which chemical networks this is a good assumption.

      We thank the reviewer for their suggestion and now justify this assumption in the methods on page 31. 

      Such an assumption is appropriate for the segmentation clock, as the clock in the posterior of the PSM is thought to oscillate with a constant frequency, at least for the majority of somitogenesis although the frequency of somite formation slows towards the end of this process in zebrafish (Giudicelli et al., 2007, PLoS Biol.). In addition, PSM cells isolated and cultured in the presence of FGF (thus replicating the signalling environment of the posterior PSM) will continue to exhibit her1 oscillations with an apparently constant frequency (Webb et al., 2016). 

      We note that such formulations are widely used within the segmentation clock literature (e.g. Riedel-Kruse et al., 2007, Morelli et al., 2009).

      (7) Figure 3 and the associated text shows no effect of the cellular motility profile in the synchrony of the segmentation clock. This may be moved to the supplementary considering the length of this manuscript.

      Thank you for the suggestion. However, we would argue that the lack of effect is a crucial result when discussing modularity. Reviewer #2 agrees with this assessment.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance): 

      The manuscript answers some important questions in the synchrony of segmentation clock in the vertebrates utilizing a model published earlier. However, the presented result is incomplete in some aspects (points 2 to 5 of section A) and that could be overcome by a more detailed analysis using a simpler one dimensional (point 1 of section A). I believe this manuscript could be of interest to an intersecting audience of developmental biologists, systems biologists, and physicists/engineers interested in dynamical systems.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript reports an fMRI study looking at whether there is animacy organization in a non-primate, mammal, the domestic dog, that is similar to that observed in humans and non-human primates (NHPs). A simple experiment was carried out with four kinds of stimulus videos (dogs, humans, cats, and cars), and univariate contrasts and RSA searchlight analysis was performed. Previous studies have looked at this question or closely associated questions (e.g. whether there is face selectivity in dogs). The import of the present study is that it looks at multiple types of animate objects, dogs, humans, and cats, and tests whether there was overlapping/similar topography (or magnitude) of responses when these stimuli were compared to the inanimate reference class of cars. The main finding was of some selectivity for animacy though this was primarily driven by the dog stimuli, which did overlap with the other animate stimulus types, but far less so than in humans.

      Strengths:

      I believe that this is an interesting study in so far as it builds on other recent work looking at category-selectivity in the domestic dog. Given the limited number of such studies, I think it is a natural step to consider a number of different animate stimuli and look at their overlap. While some of the results were not wholly surprising (e.g. dog brains respond more selectively for dogs than humans or cats), that does not take away from their novelty, such as it is. The findings of this study are useful as a point of comparison with other recent work on the organization of high-level visual function in the brain of the domestic dog.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) One challenge for all studies like this is a lack of clarity when we say there is organization for "animacy" in the human and NHP brains. The challenge is by no means unique to the present study, but I do think it brings up two more specific topics.

      First, one property associated with animate things is "capable of self-movement". While cognitively we know that cars require a driver, and are otherwise inanimate, can we really assume that dogs think of cars in the same way? After all, just think of some dogs that chase cars. If dogs represent moving cars as another kind of self-moving thing, then it is not clear we can say from this study that we have a contrast between animate vs inanimate. This would not mean that there are no real differences in neural organization being found. It was unclear whether all or some of the car videos showed them moving. But if many/most do, then I think this is a concern.

      Second, there is quite a lot of potential complexity in the human case that is worth considering when interpreting the results of this study. In the human case, some evidence suggests that animacy may be more of a continuum (Sha et al. 2015), which may reflect taxonomy (Connolly et al. 2012, 2016). However moving videos seem to be dominated more by signals relevant to threat or predation relative to taxonomy (Nastase et al. 2017). Some evidence suggests that this purported taxonomic organization might be driven by gradation in representing faces and bodies of animals based on their relative similarity to humans (Ritchie et al. 2021). Also, it may be that animacy organization reflects a number of (partially correlated) dimensions (Thorat et al. 2019, Jozwik et al. 2022). One may wonder whether the regions of (partial) overlap in animate responses in the dog brain might have some of these properties as well (or not).

      (2) It is stated that previous studies provide evidence that the dog brain shows selectivity to "certain aspects of animacy". One of these already looked at selectivity for dog and human faces and bodies and identified similar regions of activity (Boch et al. 2023). An earlier study by Dilks et al. (2015), not cited in the present work (as far as I can tell), also used dynamic stimuli and did not suffer from the above limitations in choosing inanimate stimuli (e.g. using toy and scene objects for inanimate stimuli). But it only included human faces as the dynamic animate stimulus. So, as far as stimulus design, it seems the import of the present study is that it included a *third* animate stimulus (cats) and that the stimuli were dynamic.

      (3) I am concerned that the univariate results, especially those depicted in Figure 3B, include double dipping (Kriegesorte et al. 2009). The analysis uses the response peak for the A > iA contrast to then look at the magnitude of the D, H, C vs iA contrasts. This means the same data is being used for feature selection and then to estimate the responses. So, the estimates are going to be inflated. For example, the high magnitudes for the three animate stimuli above the inanimate stimuli are going to inherently be inflated by this analysis and cannot be taken at face value. I have the same concern with the selectivity preference results in Figure 3E.

      I think the authors have two options here. Either they drop these analyses entirely (so that the total set of analyses really mirrors those in Figure 4), or they modify them to address this concern. I think this could be done in one of two ways. One would be to do a within-subject standard split-half analysis and use one-half of the data for feature selection and the other for magnitude estimation. The other would be to do a between-subject design of some kind, like using one subject for magnitude estimation based on an ROI defined using the data for the other subjects.

      (4) There are two concerns with how the overlap analyses were carried out. First, as typically carried out to look at overlap in humans, the proportion is of overlapping results of the contrasts of interest, e.g, for face and body selectivity overlap (Schwarlose et al. 2006), hand and tool overlap (Bracci et al. 2012), or more recently, tool and food overlap (Ritchie et al. 2024). There are a number of ways of then calculating the overlap, with their own strengths and weaknesses (see Tarr et al. 2007). Of these, I think the Jaccard index is the most intuitive, which is just the intersection of two sets as a proportion of their union. So, for example, the N of overlapping D > iA and H > iA active voxels is divided by the total number of unique active voxels for the two contrasts. Such an overlap analysis is more standard and interpretable relative to previous findings. I would strongly encourage the authors to carry out such an analysis or use a similar metric of overlap, in place of what they have currently performed (to the extent the analysis makes sense to me).

      Second, the results summarized in Figure 3A suggest multiple distinct regions of animacy selectivity. Other studies have also identified similar networks of regions (e.g. Boch et al. 2023). These regions may serve different functions, but the overlap analysis does not tell us whether there is overlap in some of these portions of the cortex and not in others. The overlap is only looked at in a very general sense. There may be more overlap locally in some portions of the cortex and not in others.

      (5) Two comments about the RSA analyses. First, I am not quite sure why the authors used HMAX rather than layers of a standardly trained ImageNet deep convolutional neural network. This strikes me also as a missed opportunity since many labs have looked at whether later layers of DNNs trained on object categorization show similar dissimilarity structures as category-selective regions in humans and NHPs. In so far as cross-species comparisons are the motivation here, it would be genuinely interesting to see what would happen if one did a correlation searchlight with the dog brain and layers of a DNN, a la Cichy et al. (2016).

      Second, from the text is hard to tell what the models for the class- and category-boundary effects were. Are there RDMs that can be depicted here? I am very familiar with RSA searchlight and I found the description of the methods to be rather opaque. The same point about overlap earlier regarding the univariate results also applies to the RSA results. Also, this is again a reason to potentially compare DNN RDMs to both the categorical models and the brains of both species.

      (6) There has been emphasis of late on the role of face and body selective regions and social cognition (Pitcher and Ungerleider, 2021, Puce, 2024), and also on whether these regions are more specialized for representing whole bodies/persons (Hu et al. 2020, Taubert, et al. 2022). It may be that the supposed animacy organization is more about how we socialize and interact with other organisms than anything about animacy as such (see again the earlier comments about animacy, taxonomy, and threat/predation). The result, of a great deal of selectivity for dogs, some for humans, and little for cats, seems to readily make sense if we assume it is driven by the social value of the three animate objects that are presented. This might be something worth reflecting on in relation to the present findings.

    2. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      Farkas and colleagues conducted a comparative neuroimaging study with domestic dogs and humans to explore whether social perception in both species is underpinned by an analogous distinction between animate and inanimate entities an established functional organizing principle in the primate and human brain. Presenting domestic dogs and humans with clips of three animate classes (dogs, humans, cats) and one inanimate control (cars), the authors also set out to compare how dogs and humans perceive their own vs other species. Both research questions have been previously studied in dogs, but the authors used novel dynamic stimuli and added animate and inanimate classes, which have not been investigated before (i.e., cats and cars). Combining univariate and multivariate analysis approaches, they identified functionally analogous areas in the dog and human occipitotemporal cortex involved in the perception of animate entities, largely replicating previous observations. This further emphasizes a potentially shared functional organizing principle of social perception in the two species. The authors also describe between- species divergencies in the perception of the different animate classes, arguing for a less generalized perception of animate entities in dogs, but this conclusion is not convincingly supported by the applied analyses and reported findings.

      Strengths

      Domestic dogs represent a compelling model species to study the neural bases of social perception and potentially shared functional organizing principles with humans and primates. The field of comparative neuroimaging with dogs is still young, with a growing but still small number of studies, and the present study exemplifies the reproducibility of previous research. Using dynamic instead of static stimuli and adding new stimuli classes, Farkas and colleagues successfully replicated and expanded previous findings, adding to the growing body of evidence that social perception is underpinned by a shared functional organizing principle in the dog and human occipito-temporal cortex.

      Weaknesses

      The study design is imbalanced, with only one category of inanimate objects vs. three animate entities. Moreover, based on the example videos, it appears that the animate stimuli also differed in the complexity of the content from the car stimuli, with often multiple agents interacting or performing goal-directed actions. Moreover, while dogs are familiar with cars, they are definitely of lower relevance and interest to them than the animate stimuli. Thus, to a certain extent, the results might also reflect differences in attention towards/salience of the stimuli.

      We agree with the Reviewer and were aware that using only one class of inanimate objects but three classes of animate entities, along with the differences in complexity and relevance between the animate and the inanimate stimuli potentially elicited more attention to the inanimate condition and may have thus introduced a confound. We are revising the related limitation in the discussion to acknowledge this and to emphasize why we believe these differences do not compromise our main findings.

      The methods section and rationale behind the chosen approaches were often difficult to follow and lacked a lot of information, which makes it difficult to judge the evidence and the drawn conclusions, and it weakens the potential for reproducibility of this work. For example, for many preprocessing and analysis steps, parameters were missing or descriptions of the tools used, no information on anatomical masks and atlas used in humans was provided, and it is often not clear if the authors are referring to the univariate or multivariate analysis.

      We acknowledge the concerns regarding the clarity and completeness of the methods section and are significantly revising the descriptions of the methods. Of note, in humans, the Harvard-Oxford Cortical Structural Atlas (Frazier et al., 2005; Makris et al., 2006; Desikan et al., 2006; Goldstein et al., 2007), implemented within the FSL software package, was used for anatomical masks, while the Automated Anatomical Labeling atlas (Tzourio-Mazoyer et al., 2002) was used for assigning labels.

      In regard to the chosen approaches and rationale, the authors generally binarize a lot of rich information. Instead of directly testing potential differences in the neural representations of the different animate entities, they binarize dissimilarity maps for, e.g. animate entity > inanimate cars and then calculate the overlap between the maps.

      We thank the Reviewer for these comments and ideas. We also appreciate the second Reviewer for their related concerns and suggestions about the overlap calculation. Since the neural processing of different animate entities in the dog brain is largely unexplored, in some of our analyses we aimed to provide a straightforward and directly comparable characterization of animacy perception in the two species. We believe that a measure of how overlapping the neural representations of different animate classes are in the dog vs. the human visual cortex is a simple but meaningful and insightful characterization of how animacy perception is structured in the two species, despite the lack of spatial detail. Our decision to use binarization was based on these considerations. In response to this Reviewer’s request for providing richer information, in our revised manuscript, we will present more details and additional non-binarized calculations. Specifically, we are going to use nonbinarized data to present the response profiles of a broad, anatomically defined set of regions that have been related in other works to visual functions, to thus show where there is significant difference and overlap between the neural responses for the three animate classes in each species.

      The comparison of the overlap of these three maps between species is also problematic, considering that the human RSA was constricted to the occipital and temporal cortex (there is now information on how they defined it) vs. whole-brain in dogs.

      We thank this Reviewer for raising yet another relevant point about overlap calculation. We note that the overlap calculation for univariate results used the visually responsive cortex in both dogs and humans. The decision to restrict the multivariate analysis to the occipital and temporal lobes in humans, where the visual areas are, was to reduce computational load. Since RSA in dogs yielded significant voxels almost exclusively in the occipital and temporal cortices, we believe this decision did not introduce major bias in our results. This concern will also be discussed in our revised submission.

      Of note, in the category- and class-boundary test, as for the other multivariate tests, the occipital and temporal cortex of humans was delineated based on the MNI atlas.

      Considering that the stimuli do differ based on low-level visual properties (just not significantly within a run), the RSA would also allow the authors to directly test if some of the (dis)similarities might be driven by low-level visual features like they, e.g. did with the early visual cortex model. I do think RSA is generally an excellent choice to investigate the neural representation of animate (and inanimate) stimuli, but the authors should apply it more appropriately and use its full potential.

      We thank the Reviewer for this suggestion. While this study did not aim to investigate the correlation between low-level visual features and animacy, the data is available, and the suggested analysis can be conducted in the future. This issue will also be discussed in our revised submission.

      The authors localized some of the "animate areas" also with the early visual cortex model (e.g. ectomarginal gyrus, mid suprasylvian); in humans, it only included the known early visual cortex - what does this mean for the animate areas in dogs?

      We thank the Reviewer for raising this point. Although the labels are the same, both EMG and mSSG are relatively large gyri, and the clusters revealed by each of the two analyses hardly overlap, with peak coordinates more than 12 mm apart for R EMG, and in different hemispheres for mSSG (but more than 11 mm apart even if projected on the same hemisphere). We will detail the differences and the overlaps in the revised submission.

      The results section also lacks information and statistical evidence; for example, for the univariate region-of-interest (ROI) analysis (called response profiles) comparing activation strength towards each stimulus type, it is not reported if comparisons were significant or not, but the authors state they conducted t-tests. The authors describe that they created spheres on all peaks reported for the contrast animate > inanimate, but they only report results for the mid suprasylvian and occipital gyrus (e.g. caudal suprasylvian gyrus is missing).

      We thank this Reviewer for catching these errors. The missing statistics will be provided in the revised manuscript. Also, we mistakenly named the peak in caudal suprasylvian gyrus occipital gyrus on the figure depicting the response profiles. This will also be corrected.

      Furthermore, considering that the ROIs were chosen based on the contrast animate > inanimate stimuli, activation strength should only be compared between animate entities (i.e., dogs, humans, cats), while cars should not be reported (as this would be double dipping, after selecting voxels showing lower activation for that category).

      We thank both Reviewers for raising this relevant point about potential double dipping. The aim of this analysis was to describe the relationship between the neural response elicited by the three animate stimulus classes, to show that the animacy-sensitive peaks are not the results of the standalone greater response to a single animate class. We conducted t-tests only to assess significant difference between these three animate conditions and no stats were performed or reported for any animate class vs. inanimate comparisons in these ROIs. In addition to providing the missing t-tests (comparing animate classes), we will present response profiles and corresponding statistics for a broad set of additional, independent ROIs, defined either anatomically or functionally by other studies in the revised version.

      The descriptive data in Figure 3B (pending statistical evidence) suggests there were no strong differences in activation for the three species in dog and human animate areas. Thus, the ROI analysis appears to contradict findings from the binary analysis approach to investigate species preference, but the authors only discuss the results of the latter in support of their narrative for conspecific preference in dogs and do not discuss research from other labs investigating own-species preference.

      Studying conspecific-preference was not the primary aim of this study. We only used our data to characterize the animate-sensitive regions from this aspect. The species-preference test provides an overall characterization of the entire animate-sensitive region, revealing a higher number of voxels with a maximal response to conspecific than other stimuli in dogs (and a similar tendency in humans), confirming previous evidence on neural conspecific preference in visual areas in both species. The response profiles presented so far describe only the ROIs around the main animate-sensitive peaks and, as the Reviewer points out, in most cases reveal no significant conspecific bias. We believe there is no contradiction here: the entire animate-sensitive region may weakly but still be conspecific-preferring, whereas the main animate-sensitive peaks are not; the centers of conspecific preference may be located elsewhere in the visual cortex and may be supported by mechanisms other than animacy-sensitivity. In the revised manuscript, we will elaborate more on this. Additionally, in response to other comments, and for a better and more coherent characterization of species preference (and animacy sensitivity) across the visual cortex, we will present response profiles for other, independently defined regions and explore conspecific-sensitivity in those additional regions as well. Furthermore, we will discuss related own-species preference literature in greater detail.

      The authors also unnecessarily exaggerate novelty claims. Animate vs inanimate and own vs other species perceptions have both been investigated before in dogs (and humans), so any claims in that direction seem unsubstantiated - and also not needed, as novelty itself is not a sign of quality; what is novel, and a sign of theoretical advance besides the novelty, are as said the conceptual extension and replication of previous work.

      We agree with this Reviewer regarding novelty claims in general, and we confirm that we had no intention to overstate the uniqueness of our results. We also did not mean to imply that this work would be the first one on animacy perception in dogs, which it obviously is not. But we understand that we could have been more explicit presenting our work as a conceptual extension and replication of previous works, and we are revising the wording of the discussion from this aspect.

      Overall, more analyses and appropriate tests are needed to support the conclusions drawn by the authors, as well as a more comprehensive discussion of all findings.

      We are thankful for all comments. We will revise the methods section to provide sufficient detail and ensure replicability; conduct additional analyses as detailed above; and provide a more comprehensive discussion of all findings.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript reports an fMRI study looking at whether there is animacy organization in a non-primate, mammal, the domestic dog, that is similar to that observed in humans and non-human primates (NHPs). A simple experiment was carried out with four kinds of stimulus videos (dogs, humans, cats, and cars), and univariate contrasts and RSA searchlight analysis was performed. Previous studies have looked at this question or closely associated questions (e.g. whether there is face selectivity in dogs). The import of the present study is that it looks at multiple types of animate objects, dogs, humans, and cats, and tests whether there was overlapping/similar topography (or magnitude) of responses when these stimuli were compared to the inanimate reference class of cars. The main finding was of some selectivity for animacy though this was primarily driven by the dog stimuli, which did overlap with the other animate stimulus types, but far less so than in humans.

      Strengths:

      I believe that this is an interesting study in so far as it builds on other recent work looking at category-selectivity in the domestic dog. Given the limited number of such studies, I think it is a natural step to consider a number of different animate stimuli and look at their overlap. While some of the results were not wholly surprising (e.g. dog brains respond more selectively for dogs than humans or cats), that does not take away from their novelty, such as it is. The findings of this study are useful as a point of comparison with other recent work on the organization of high-level visual function in the brain of the domestic dog.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) One challenge for all studies like this is a lack of clarity when we say there is organization for "animacy" in the human and NHP brains. The challenge is by no means unique to the present study, but I do think it brings up two more specific topics.

      First, one property associated with animate things is "capable of self-movement". While cognitively we know that cars require a driver, and are otherwise inanimate, can we really assume that dogs think of cars in the same way? After all, just think of some dogs that chase cars. If dogs represent moving cars as another kind of selfmoving thing, then it is not clear we can say from this study that we have a contrast between animate vs inanimate. This would not mean that there are no real differences in neural organization being found.

      It was unclear whether all or some of the car videos showed them moving. But if many/most do, then I think this is a concern.

      We thank this Reviewer for raising this relevant point about the potential animacy of cars for dogs and its implication for our results. Of note, two-thirds of our car stimuli showed a car moving (slow, accelerating, or fast). We acknowledge that these stimuli contained motionbased animacy cues, and in this regard, there was no clear difference between our animate and inanimate conditions, and possibly between some of the representations they elicited. However, our animate and inanimate stimuli differed in other key factors accounting for animacy organization, such as visual features including the presence of faces, bodies, body parts, postures, and certain aspects of biological motion. So we believe that this limitation does not compromise our main conclusions. We will elaborate on this point further in the revised discussion, also considering how dogs’ differential behavioral responses to cars and animate entities may provide additional insights in this regard.

      Second, there is quite a lot of potential complexity in the human case that is worth considering when interpreting the results of this study. In the human case, some evidence suggests that animacy may be more of a continuum (Sha et al. 2015), which may reflect taxonomy (Connolly et al. 2012, 2016). However moving videos seem to be dominated more by signals relevant to threat or predation relative to taxonomy (Nastase et al. 2017). Some evidence suggests that this purported taxonomic organization might be driven by gradation in representing faces and bodies of animals based on their relative similarity to humans (Ritchie et al. 2021). Also, it may be that animacy organization reflects a number of (partially correlated) dimensions (Thorat et al. 2019, Jozwik et al. 2022). One may wonder whether the regions of (partial) overlap in animate responses in the dog brain might have some of these properties as well (or not).

      We agree that it would be interesting to dissect which animacy-related factor(s) contribute to the observed animacy sensitivity in different regions, and although this was not the original aim of the study, we agree that we could have made better use of the variation in our stimuli to discuss this aspect. Specifically, some animacy features are shared by all three animate stimulus classes, namely the presence of biological motions, faces, and bodies. In contrast, animate classes differed in some other aspects, for example in how dogs perceived dogs, humans, and cats as social agents and in their potential behavioral goals towards them. It can therefore be argued that regions with two- and especially three-way overlapping activations are more probably involved in processing biological motion, face and body aspects, and non-overlapping ones the social agency- and behavioural goal-related aspects. In line with this, the shared animacy features are indeed ones that have been reported to be central in human animacy representation and that may have made the overlaps in human brain responses greater. We will provide a more detailed discussion of the results from this viewpoint in the revised manuscript.

      (2) It is stated that previous studies provide evidence that the dog brain shows selectivity to "certain aspects of animacy". One of these already looked at selectivity for dog and human faces and bodies and identified similar regions of activity (Boch et al. 2023). An earlier study by Dilks et al. (2015), not cited in the present work (as far as I can tell), also used dynamic stimuli and did not suffer from the above limitations in choosing inanimate stimuli (e.g. using toy and scene objects for inanimate stimuli). But it only included human faces as the dynamic animate stimulus. So, as far as stimulus design, it seems the import of the present study is that it included a *third* animate stimulus (cats) and that the stimuli were dynamic.

      We agree with this Reviewer that the findings of Dilks et al. (2015) are relevant to our study and have therefore cited them. However, the citation itself was imprecise and will be corrected in the revised manuscript.

      (3) I am concerned that the univariate results, especially those depicted in Figure 3B, include double dipping (Kriegesorte et al. 2009). The analysis uses the response peak for the A > iA contrast to then look at the magnitude of the D, H, C vs iA contrasts. This means the same data is being used for feature selection and then to estimate the responses. So, the estimates are going to be inflated. For example, the high magnitudes for the three animate stimuli above the inanimate stimuli are going to inherently be inflated by this analysis and cannot be taken at face value. I have the same concern with the selectivity preference results in Figure 3E.

      I think the authors have two options here. Either they drop these analyses entirely (so that the total set of analyses really mirrors those in Figure 4), or they modify them to address this concern. I think this could be done in one of two ways. One would be to do a within- subject standard split-half analysis and use one-half of the data for feature selection and the other for magnitude estimation. The other would be to do a between-subject design of some kind, like using one subject for magnitude estimation based on an ROI defined using the data for the other subjects.

      We thank both Reviewers again for raising this important point about potential double dipping. We also thank this Reviewer for specific suggestions for split-half analyses – we agree that, had our original analyses involved double dipping, such a modification would be necessary. But, as we explained in our response above, this was not the case. Indeed, whereas we do visualize all four conditions in Fig. 3B, we only conducted t-tests to assess differences between the three animate conditions (the corresponding stats have been missing from the original manuscript but will be added during revision). So, importantly, we did not evaluate the magnitude of the D, H, C vs iA contrasts in any of the ROIs defined by animate-sensitive peaks; therefore, we believe that these analyses do not involve double dipping. This holds for the species preference results in Fig. 3E as well. We will clarify this in the revised manuscript. Of note, in response to a request by the other reviewer and to provide richer information about the univariate results, we will also provide response profiles and corresponding stats for a broad set of additional ROIs, defined either anatomically or functionally by other studies (e.g., Boch et al., 2023).

      (4) There are two concerns with how the overlap analyses were carried out. First, as typically carried out to look at overlap in humans, the proportion is of overlapping results of the contrasts of interest, e.g, for face and body selectivity overlap (Schwarlose et al. 2006), hand and tool overlap (Bracci et al. 2012), or more recently, tool and food overlap (Ritchie et al. 2024). There are a number of ways of then calculating the overlap, with their own strengths and weaknesses (see Tarr et al. 2007). Of these, I think the Jaccard index is the most intuitive, which is just the intersection of two sets as a proportion of their union. So, for example, the N of overlapping D > iA and H > iA active voxels is divided by the total number of unique active voxels for the two contrasts. Such an overlap analysis is more standard and interpretable relative to previous findings. I would strongly encourage the authors to carry out such an analysis or use a similar metric of overlap, in place of what they have currently performed (to the extent the analysis makes sense to me).

      We agree with this Reviewer that the Jaccard index is an intuitive and straightforward overlap measure. Importantly, for our overlap calculations we already use this measure (and a very similar one) – but we acknowledge that this was not clear from the original description. Specifically, for the multivariate overlap test, we used the Jaccard index exactly as described by this Reviewer. For the univariate overlap test, we use a very similar measure, with the only difference that there, to reference the search space, the intersection of specific animate-inanimate contrasts was divided by the total voxel number of animate-sensitive areas (which is highly similar to the union of the specific animate-inanimate contrasts). In the revised submission we will provide a more detailed explanation of the overlap calculations, making it explicit that we used the Jaccard index (and a variant of it).

      Second, the results summarized in Figure 3A suggest multiple distinct regions of animacy selectivity. Other studies have also identified similar networks of regions (e.g. Boch et al. 2023). These regions may serve different functions, but the overlap analysis does not tell us whether there is overlap in some of these portions of the cortex and not in others. The overlap is only looked at in a very general sense. There may be more overlap locally in some portions of the cortex and not in others.

      We thank this Reviewer for this comment, we agree that adding spatial specificity to these results will improve the manuscript. Therefore, during revision, we will assess the anatomical distribution of the overlap results, making use of a broad set of ROIs potentially relevant for animacy perception, defined either anatomically or functionally by other studies (e.g., Boch et al., 2023 for dogs).

      (5) Two comments about the RSA analyses. First, I am not quite sure why the authors used HMAX rather than layers of a standardly trained ImageNet deep convolutional neural network. This strikes me also as a missed opportunity since many labs have looked at whether later layers of DNNs trained on object categorization show similar dissimilarity structures as category-selective regions in humans and NHPs. In so far as cross-species comparisons are the motivation here, it would be genuinely interesting to see what would happen if one did a correlation searchlight with the dog brain and layers of a DNN, a la Cichy et al. (2016).

      We thank the Reviewer for this comment and suggestion. At the start of the project, HMAX was the most feasible model to implement given our time and expertise constrains. Additionally, the biologically motivated HMAX was also an appropriate choice, as it simulates the selective tuning of neurons in the primary visual cortex (V1) of primates, which is considered homologous with V1 in carnivores (Boch et al., 2024).

      Although we agree that using DNNs have recently been extensively and successfully used to explore object representations and could provide valuable additional insights for dogs’ visual perception as well, we believe that adding a large set of additional analyses would stretch the frames of this manuscript, disproportionately shifting its focus from our original research question. Also, our experiment, designed with a different, more specific aim in mind, did not provide a large enough stimulus variety of animate stimuli for a general comparison of the cortical hierarchy underlying object representations in dog and human brains and thus our data are not an optimal starting point for such extensive explorations. Having said that, we are thankful for this Reviewer for the idea and will consider using a DNN to uncover dog’ visual cortical hierarchy in future studies with a better suited stimulus set. Furthermore, in accordance with eLife’s data-sharing policies, we will make the current dataset publicly available so further hypothesis and models can be tested.

      Second, from the text is hard to tell what the models for the class- and categoryboundary effects were. Are there RDMs that can be depicted here? I am very familiar with RSA searchlight and I found the description of the methods to be rather opaque. The same point about overlap earlier regarding the univariate results also applies to the RSA results. Also, this is again a reason to potentially compare DNN RDMs to both the categorical models and the brains of both species.

      In the revised manuscript we will provide a more detailed explanation of the methods used to determine class- and category-boundary effects. In short, the analysis we performed here followed Kriegeskorte et al. (2008), and the searchlight test looked for regions in which between-class/category differences were greater than within-class/category differences. We will also include RDMs. Additionally, we will provide anatomical details for the overlap results for RSA, just as for the univariate results, using the same independently defined broad set of ROIs, defined either anatomically or functionally by other studies (e.g., Boch et al., 2023 for dogs).

      (6) There has been emphasis of late on the role of face and body selective regions and social cognition (Pitcher and Ungerleider, 2021, Puce, 2024), and also on whether these regions are more specialized for representing whole bodies/persons (Hu et al. 2020, Taubert, et al. 2022). It may be that the supposed animacy organization is more about how we socialize and interact with other organisms than anything about animacy as such (see again the earlier comments about animacy, taxonomy, and threat/predation). The result, of a great deal of selectivity for dogs, some for humans, and little for cats, seems to readily make sense if we assume it is driven by the social value of the three animate objects that are presented. This might be something worth reflecting on in relation to the present findings.

      We thank the Reviewer for this suggestion. The original manuscript already discussed how motion-related animacy cues involved in social cognition may explain that animacysensitive regions reported in our study extend beyond those reported previously and also the role of biological motion in the observed across-species differences. This discussion of the role of visual diagnostic features and features that involved in perceiving social agents will be extended in the revised discussion, also in response to the first comment of this Reviewer, to reflect on how social cognition-related animacy cues may have affected our results in dogs.

    1. Voici un sommaire de la vidéo "La montagne en 2050, l’après ski ?" avec des estimations de timestamps basées sur le déroulement de la conférence :

      • [0:00 - 0:10] Introduction par Hélène Billong Grandand (Les Shifters Lyon) : Présentation d'Hélène Billong Grandand et du groupe local des Shifters Lyon. Elle explique que les Shifters sont liés au Shift Project, un think tank travaillant sur la décarbonation de l'économie, présidé par Jean-Marc Jancovici. Les Shifters sont une association de bénévoles qui collaborent avec le Shift Project, informent, s'informent, débattent et sensibilisent sur la transition énergétique. La conférence du jour porte sur la montagne en 2050 et la question de l'après-ski.

      • [0:10 - 0:20] Présentation des intervenants et du sujet : Hélène annonce les intervenants : Guillaume Desmurs sur l'histoire du développement économique de la montagne, Fiona Mille sur les enjeux de transition en montagne, et Guillaume Desru, maire de Bourg Saint-Maurice, avec un exemple concret. Le choix du sujet est motivé par l'absence de conférence sur ce thème à Lyon, la saison hivernale, et le travail du Shift Project sur la résilience des territoires de montagne.

      • [0:20 - 0:25] Quelques chiffres clés sur la montagne (Shift Project) : Présentation de quelques chiffres issus du travail du Shift Project : 31% du stock national carbone de la forêt en zone montagne, 30% de l'offre d'hébergement touristique national en montagne, 75% des exploitations agricoles spécialisées dans l'élevage en montagne (dont 50% bovin). L'empreinte carbone du tourisme en montagne est majoritairement liée au transport des touristes.

      • [0:25 - 0:30] Regards de pratiquants de la montagne (vidéos de témoignages de shifters) : Hélène introduit une série de témoignages vidéo de shifters lyonnais partageant leur expérience et leur pratique de la montagne.

      • [0:30 - 0:35] Témoignage d'Éric (52 ans, Culoz) : Éric raconte ses différentes découvertes de la montagne : les grandes stations de ski en famille, la simplicité de la montagne en Pologne, et la montagne découverte avec ses enfants (bonhommes de neige, luge). Il apprécie désormais la montagne à travers les raquettes, le ski, la baignade dans les lacs, la randonnée et le vélo.

      • [0:35 - 0:38] Témoignage de Louise (9 ans, Chambéry) : Louise décrit la montagne avec sa végétation, ses prairies et ses forêts. Elle apprécie les activités hivernales (ski alpin, ski de fond, luge, raquettes) et estivales (randonnée, course à pied, vélo) en famille et avec ses amis.

      • [0:38 - 0:42] Témoignage d'Arnaud (37 ans, Chambéry) : Arnaud a découvert la montagne l'hiver en skiant en famille à La Plagne. Il a appris le ski avec l'ESF et le ski de fond à l'école. Il décrit la montagne hivernale comme hostile mais d'une grande beauté et un terrain de jeu naturel. Sa pratique a évolué vers le ski de randonnée, moins gourmand en infrastructures, tout en continuant le ski de piste et le ski de fond nocturne.

      • [0:42 - 0:47] Témoignage de Frédéric (54 ans, Lyon) : Frédéric a découvert le ski à 6 ans en Haute-Maurienne. Il a continué à skier jeune adulte avec l'UCPA, découvrant différentes stations et le ski hors-piste (Grands Montets, Vallée Blanche). Habitant à Lyon, il pratique plus souvent la montagne, été comme hiver, et s'interroge sur l'impact de sa pratique sur l'environnement.

      • [0:47 - 0:50] Transition vers l'intervention de Guillaume Desmurs : Hélène commente les témoignages et souligne que beaucoup de Lyonnais pratiquent la montagne sans y vivre. Elle évoque les problèmes de trafic pour se rendre en station le samedi et introduit Guillaume Desmurs, venu d'Annecy, pour parler de l'histoire des stations de ski.

      • [0:50 - 1:25] Intervention de Guillaume Desmurs : Histoire du développement économique des stations de ski : Guillaume Desmurs rappelle la dépendance actuelle aux voitures pour monter en station. Il présente une version courte de sa conférence sur l'histoire des stations de ski françaises, soulignant que comprendre les décisions des années 60-70 est essentiel pour la transition. Il cite André Compagnonville sur la nécessité de penser le vrai plutôt que le plaisir. Il partage son expérience personnelle d'avoir grandi en station de ski. Il montre des magazines de ski des années 30-40, soulignant que le plaisir du ski n'a pas beaucoup changé. Avant-guerre, les villages de montagne s'équipaient organiquement avec des téléskis locaux. La première tentative de station de ski dédiée est Cestrière en Italie. Après la Seconde Guerre mondiale, Émile Allais et Laurent Chappis sont des figures clés. Allais invente le domaine skiable damé et les équipes de secouristes à Courchevel. Chappis, architecte urbaniste, dessine Courchevel en 1945, prototype de la station moderne avec un front de neige orienté sud. Chappis n'avait pas anticipé l'importance de la voiture. Il s'interrogeait sur la nature d'une station de sport d'hiver et la place de la population locale. L'aménagement des Trois Vallées a été imaginé par Chappis et Maurice Michot en camp de prisonniers.

      • [1:25 - 1:45] L'essor des stations du plan neige (années 60-70) : Les années 60 voient des changements majeurs dans le matériel de ski (du cuir au plastique, skis sandwich). Les stations de ski françaises du plan neige (1964-1975) sont une création de la société du carbone. L'État soutient la construction de grandes stations pour fixer les populations et concurrencer l'Autriche et la Suisse ("la bataille du ski européen"). Les années 60 sont celles des Trente Glorieuses et de la société du carbone (voiture, avion, immobilier). L'immobilier est le cœur du modèle économique des stations. Le tourisme de masse concentre les flux de touristes dans le temps et l'espace. La Tarentaise concentre plus de la moitié du business du ski en France (Les Arcs, La Plagne, Val d'Isère, Les Trois Vallées). On compte 400 000 lits en Tarentaise, dont la moitié sont froids. La construction continue malgré tout. La brochure de vente de Val Thorens (ouverture en 1973) promettait des liaisons incroyables. Dès 1968, la vente d'immobilier est centrale.

      • [1:45 - 1:55] La fin du plan neige et la loi montagne (1985) : La fin du plan neige est marquée par une crise économique et des événements dramatiques (avalanche à Val d'Isère en 1970). Le discours de Valéry Giscard d'Estaing en 1977 constate les excès du développement et marque un changement de direction. 350 000 lits touristiques ont été construits pendant le plan neige ; on en compte 2,7 millions aujourd'hui, dont la moitié sont froids. La loi montagne de 1985 devait donner la main aux maires sur l'immobilier avec les UTN, mais cela n'a pas limité la construction.

      • [1:55 - 2:00] Tensions et perspectives actuelles : L'immobilier continue de faire vivre les stations, générant des tensions entre promoteurs et habitants. Manifestations contre la bétonisation (La Clusaz, 2022). Des maires comme celui de Villard-de-Lans perçoivent les remontées mécaniques comme vitales. Philippe Bourdeau appelle à optimiser l'existant et à travailler l'habitabilité plutôt que l'attractivité. Le pourcentage élevé de résidences secondaires (75 à 92%) rend l'habitation à l'année difficile.

      • [2:00 - 2:05] Question sur la dépendance à la voiture et exemples : Question sur des exemples de stations non dépendantes de la voiture. Guillaume Desmurs cite Avoriaz (accès en voiture avec parkings souterrains), Zermatt (sans voiture), et Bourg Saint-Maurice (funiculaire).

      • [2:05 - 2:10] Question sur l'importance de l'immobilier par rapport aux remontées mécaniques : Question sur la rentabilité de l'immobilier par rapport aux remontées mécaniques. Guillaume Desmurs cite un rapport de la Cour des Comptes de février 2024 qui rappelle le cercle vertueux (aujourd'hui vicieux) entre immobilier et remontées mécaniques. Alain Boulogne (Saint-Gervais) dit qu'on vit de l'immobilier, pas du tourisme. L'immobilier rapporte de l'argent aux promoteurs qui ne sont pas forcément intéressés par le développement du territoire.

      • [2:10 - 2:12] Question sur les stations sans remontées mécaniques (ski de rando) : Question sur l'existence de stations axées sur le ski de randonnée (Montespluga en Italie, vallée en Autriche, station fermée au Canada).

      • [2:12 - 2:15] Réponse : Fin d'un modèle économique carboné, pas du ski : Guillaume Desmurs explique que l'on sort d'un modèle économique carboné (voiture, parking, immobilier), pas du ski. Ces stations alternatives rapportent peu. L'été en station (VTT, randonnée) n'est pas rentable ; seul le ski alpin en hiver permet de rentabiliser les infrastructures.

      • [2:15 - 2:20] Question sur les politiques pour réduire le nombre de résidences secondaires : Question sur les politiques pour réduire le nombre et l'impact des résidences secondaires (72% minimum, jusqu'à 95%). Guillaume Desmurs explique que c'est le cœur de l'économie. Il cite un rapport de l'Inspection des finances (2023) sur la raréfaction du logement principal dans les zones touristiques. D'autres pays (Australie, Nouvelle-Zélande, Autriche, Suisse) ont des lois limitant les résidences secondaires. En France, les outils actuels (taxe sur les résidences secondaires) sont marginaux. L'Inspection des finances rappelle qu'il est possible de limiter le droit de propriété pour l'intérêt général. Joël Giraud évoque des dispositifs de rénovation urbaine. Le fort taux de résidences secondaires entraîne une perte d'habitants et la fermeture de classes.

      • [2:20 - 2:25] Transition vers l'intervention de Fiona Mille (Montagne Wilderness) : Guillaume Desmurs conclut en expliquant que Fiona Mille va prendre la parole et qu'il restera pour les questions à la fin.

      • [2:25 - 2:30] Intervention de Fiona Mille : Enjeux de la transition en montagne : Fiona Mille se présente comme bénévole et présidente de Montagne Wilderness France. Elle explique que l'association (fondée en 1988) se concentre sur la cohabitation entre les montagnes sauvages (85% de la biodiversité terrestre) et la montagne à vivre. L'objectif est de trouver un équilibre entre protection et vie à l'année. Montagne Wilderness est une association nationale avec une équipe salariée à Grenoble et près de 2000 bénévoles. L'association travaille sur la défense des espaces naturels, encourage les pratiques respectueuses et amplifie la transition des territoires de montagne, vus comme un laboratoire.

      • [2:30 - 2:35] Représentations de la montagne et questions sur la transition : Fiona interroge l'audience sur leurs représentations de la montagne (neige, air pur, beauté, etc.). Elle note que personne n'a encore mentionné le ski. Elle demande ensuite ce à quoi l'audience pense quand on parle de transition en montagne (transport, ski, fromage, gestion de l'eau, manque de neige, lits froids).

      • [2:35 - 2:40] La transition souvent réduite à la question du ski : Fiona constate que médiatiquement, la transition en montagne est souvent réduite à la question de la transition du modèle économique du ski. Elle montre des exemples de titres d'articles de presse. Cela se comprend en raison du poids culturel et économique du ski.

      • [2:40 - 2:45] Relativisation du poids économique du ski et vision anthropocène des stations : Fiona relativise le poids économique du ski en donnant l'exemple des Pyrénées où l'emploi touristique représente 10 à 13% des emplois, et le ski 10% de cet emploi touristique. L'économie de la montagne est plus diversifiée. Elle cite Diego Landivar et Emmanuel Bonet qui voient les stations comme des organisations typiques de l'anthropocène, basées sur une ressource naturelle (la neige) que l'on croyait renouvelable mais qui se raréfie.

      • [2:45 - 2:50] La maladaptation des territoires de montagne : Fiona montre une photo peu engageante de Champrousse. Malgré les enjeux économiques, de nombreuses stations s'endettent pour faire perdurer le ski, ce qui constitue une grave maladaptation au changement climatique (retenues collinaires, canons à neige). Elle donne l'exemple de Font-Romeu où 80% du domaine est équipé en canons à neige dans un département en crise hydrique. Même Zermatt, souvent cité pour sa mobilité, utilise des pelleteuses sur glacier. Le modèle économique est à bout de souffle. La question n'est pas de savoir si on skiera demain, mais dans quelles conditions. Le retrait de Martin Fourcade de la présidence du comité d'organisation des JO est un signal fort. Le ski sur neige 100% artificielle ne fait plus rêver.

      • [2:50 - 2:55] Nécessité d'une transition plus large que la seule question du ski : Fiona souligne la nécessité d'accélérer la transition des stations de haute et moyenne montagne, et de stopper la maladaptation. Cependant, il serait limitant de réduire la transition à la seule question du ski, car les défis sont plus vastes. Il faut repenser l'avenir des montagnes au-delà de l'après-ski.

      • [2:55 - 3:05] Les défis du changement climatique en montagne : Les territoires de montagne sont des sentinelles du climat, avec des effets du dérèglement climatique deux fois plus rapides qu'en plaine. Les conséquences sont visibles : passage de la neige à la pluie, disparition des glaciers (80% pourraient disparaître d'ici 2100 à +4°C). Les écosystèmes montagnards sont en première ligne : forêts victimes d'incendies et de scolytes, pâturages asséchés, perte de biodiversité. Au-delà de l'attractivité, la question de l'habitabilité est cruciale.

      • [3:05 - 3:15] Défis de la mobilité, du logement et de l'agriculture : La mobilité est un défi essentiel (touristique et quotidienne en montagne), surtout dans une société post-carbone. Vivre en montagne sans voiture est compliqué. Le logement est une question majeure, avec une forte proportion de résidences secondaires qui empêchent la vie à l'année. La rentabilité à court terme nuit à l'habitabilité. La question de l'agriculture et de la résilience alimentaire en montagne est peu traitée au niveau national.

      • [3:15 - 3:20] Conclusion : Comment vivre demain en montagne ? Consultation nationale de Montagne Wilderness : Malgré les complexités, la montagne fait rêver. La question centrale est de savoir comment respecter et repenser la vie dans ces territoires. Montagne Wilderness a lancé une consultation nationale le 27 janvier pour recueillir des idées sur l'avenir des montagnes (près de 100 000 votes et 1000 propositions en 2 semaines). La montagne est un reflet des débats sociétaux. Des acteurs économiques, collectifs citoyens et élus s'engagent pour le changement. Il faut passer d'une consommation de la montagne à une relation plus profonde et respectueuse. La consultation est ouverte jusqu'au 30 mars. Il est important d'avoir ce débat avec ceux qui traversent ces territoires. Il faut redéfinir collectivement nos imaginaires de la montagne.

      • [3:20 - 3:23] Question sur le développement industriel de la montagne (hydroélectricité) : Question sur le potentiel d'un développement industriel de la montagne, en prenant l'exemple de l'hydroélectricité dans la vallée de la Romanche.

      • [3:23 - 3:28] Réponse : Diversification économique à l'échelle du territoire : Fiona répond que Montagne Wilderness a travaillé sur le sujet de l'industrie de demain en montagne. La diversification économique doit se penser à l'échelle du territoire, pas seulement des stations. Il faut investir dans l'agriculture, l'artisanat, l'industrie. Le débat n'est pas encore à ce niveau. Les maires de station sont face à une impasse s'ils cherchent la même rentabilité qu'avec le ski au sein de leur seule station. La coopération territoriale est nécessaire.

      • [3:28 - 3:30] Question sur les "technosolutions" (couverture de glaciers, albédo) : Question sur le risque que les solutions techniques nous éloignent de solutions plus durables.

      • [3:30 - 3:35] Réponse : Les glaciers comme signaux d'alerte, pas comme objets à "sauver" artificiellement : Fiona explique que ces "technosolutions" sont de faux problèmes. Une partie des glaciers va disparaître inéluctablement. L'enjeu est de voir les glaciers comme des signaux d'alerte pour réduire nos émissions de gaz à effet de serre. Elle mentionne un événement autour des glaciers en 2025. Il faut aussi questionner la pertinence de continuer à aménager des glaciers en voie de disparition.

      • [3:35 - 3:38] Question sur la répartition des richesses en montagne : Question sur la répartition des richesses générées par le tourisme en montagne entre différents acteurs (grands hôteliers, saisonniers).

      • [3:38 - 3:42] Réponse : Nécessité d'une coalition d'acteurs et d'une meilleure compréhension des économies locales : Fiona explique qu'une coalition d'acteurs est en cours de création pour travailler sur ce sujet essentiel. Il manque de données nationales précises sur ce qui fait vivre les territoires. Elle donne l'exemple d'une initiative dans le Vercors (The Camp de Loïs Habert) qui montre que l'économie de la montagne ne se limite pas au ski. Il faut accompagner ceux qui font déjà vivre la transition et soutenir les initiatives locales.

      • [3:42 - 3:45] Introduction de Guillaume Desru (maire de Bourg Saint-Maurice) : Hélène introduit Guillaume Desru, maire de Bourg Saint-Maurice, en évoquant l'évolution de la perception des saisons par les jeunes et le changement des "stars" du collège (skieurs à skateurs). Elle pose la question de ce qu'est devenu Bourg Saint-Maurice depuis les années 90.

      • [3:45 - 4:00] Intervention de Guillaume Desru : L'exemple de Bourg Saint-Maurice : Guillaume Desru se présente comme maire de Bourg Saint-Maurice depuis 2020. Il plaisante sur sa position de dernier intervenant et sur son profil atypique (prof de physique normand arrivé en 2000, cycliste). Il explique que sa liste a été montée sous forme d'apéro-débats pour provoquer le débat public. Il cite un proverbe savoyard : "C'est quand il fait beau qu'on refait le toit". Présentation du territoire de Bourg Saint-Maurice (180 km², 800-3800m d'altitude, trois massifs, quatre stations de ski internationales dont Les Arcs, 5ème station mondiale, 40 000 lits touristiques). Les Arcs ont été bien conçues dès les années 60 (station sans voiture imaginée par Charlotte Perriand). La montagne est en mouvement (funiculaire iconique). Face aux événements climatiques, naturels, sanitaires et géopolitiques récurrents, il faut être responsable et engagé. Il faut investir maintenant.

      • [4:00 - 4:05] Mobilité à Bourg Saint-Maurice : La mobilité représente 60% de l'empreinte carbone. Un "choc de l'offre" a été mis en place pour favoriser le train et les transports en commun locaux (coût du réseau de navettes : 3 millions par an, +40% en 4 ans, prix divisé par 3, horaires et périodes étendus). Promotion de la station en lien avec le train. En 5 ans, un quart des visiteurs arrivent en train. Offres spéciales pour ceux venant en train.

      • [4:05 - 4:10] Logement à Bourg Saint-Maurice : Moratoire sur les constructions touristiques neuves. La loi Climat Résilience et le Zéro Artificialisation Nette imposent des choix (logement pour habitants vs. résidence touristique). Exemple du quartier des Alpins : concertation avec les habitants pour privilégier le logement à l'année plutôt qu'un projet touristique initial. La commune est l'aménageur pour maîtriser le projet de A à Z. Création d'une SEM pour gérer le logement sans spéculation.

      • [4:10 - 4:15] Plan Local d'Urbanisme (PLU) de Bourg Saint-Maurice : Le PLU reprend les orientations de la municipalité (préservation des terres agricoles, forestières et naturelles, optimisation de chaque mètre carré artificialisé). Il a été bien accueilli par la CDPENAF et les associations (Mountain Wilderness, FNSEA). Optimisation des lits touristiques aux Arcs.

      • [4:15 - 4:20] Diversification économique et touristique : Diversification notamment l'été grâce au funiculaire, à la dimension de "petite ville" de Bourg Saint-Maurice (7200 habitants), à une culture d'événements bénéficiant aux habitants et aux visiteurs. Formation avec un campus connecté et accompagnement des entreprises. Clin d'œil aux Shifters et au rêve de voir Jean-Marc Jancovici à Bourg Saint-Maurice.

      • [4:20 - 4:25] Environnement et préservation du vivant : Anecdote sur le glacier de l'Aiguille Rouge : face à sa fonte, le domaine skiable voulait le creuser pour continuer le ski. Après concertation et présentation des données scientifiques (perte de 6m de glace par an), un consensus s'est dégagé pour rendre cette zone à la montagne (zone de freeride) d'ici 1-2 ans.

      • [4:25 - 4:30] Gestion de l'eau à Bourg Saint-Maurice : Pas ultra exemplaire, mais recherche d'un équilibre (pas plus de 50% d'enneigement de culture, autorisations respectées, efforts pour être vertueux). Tarification progressive de l'eau (les gros consommateurs paient plus cher).

      • [4:30 - 4:35] Invitation à l'événement "La montagne en mouvement" (20-22 mars à Bourg Saint-Maurice et aux Arcs) : Invitation à venir découvrir les enjeux de la montagne, notamment les glaciers, et à participer à un événement positif sur l'avenir de la montagne.

      • [4:35 - 4:40] Conclusion : Résultats et perspectives : Au niveau des mobilités, l'offre a explosé grâce à une volonté politique. L'occupation touristique augmente (+4% par an) sans construction de nouveaux lits depuis 2021, grâce à une meilleure optimisation. Arrêt de la promotion touristique hors Europe. Forte politique en faveur des habitants (80% du budget d'investissement 2025 dédié aux transitions). Appel à l'engagement citoyen pour les élections municipales de 2026.

      • [4:40 - 4:45] Question sur l'organisation des JO 2030 : Question sur l'opinion concernant l'organisation des JO 2030. Fiona exprime un dilemme entre l'opportunité de raconter une autre histoire de la montagne et les signaux négatifs depuis le retrait de Martin Fourcade.

      • [4:45 - 4:50] Intervention de Guillaume Desmurs sur les JO 2030 : Guillaume Desmurs a écrit un livre ("La Montagne en 2030 : Enquête sur les Jeux Olympiques et Paralympiques") sur la candidature des JO 2030. Il critique l'absence de dossier de candidature publique et analyse les promesses (JO durables, économes, réutilisation des infrastructures) qu'il juge peu crédibles. Il remet en question l'argument que les JO seraient au service de la transition des territoires de montagne, soulignant l'absence de projet de territoire existant.

      • [4:50 - 4:53] Opinion de Fiona Mille sur les JO 2030 : Fiona estime que les JO d'hiver incarnent un frein à la transition en véhiculant un imaginaire dépassé autour des sports d'hiver. Elle a également écrit un livre ("Réinventons la montagne. Alpes 2030 : un autre imaginaire est possible") avec trois scénarios pour 2030, dont un avec les JO entraînant une fuite en avant. Si les JO sont le seul cap, cela risque de décevoir.

      • [4:53 - 4:57] Parallèle avec les JO de Denver 1976 et enjeux immobiliers : Guillaume Desmurs établit un parallèle entre la candidature des JO 2030 et celle avortée de Denver en 1976 (opposition citoyenne, objectif de promotion des stations et de développement immobilier). Il souligne que les JO 2030 visent à maintenir le modèle économique en place et à continuer la construction immobilière. Le pôle glace des JO 2030 est prévu à Nice.

      • [4:57 - 5:00] Question sur l'influence de Bourg Saint-Maurice comme zone de transit : Question sur l'influence de Bourg Saint-Maurice comme zone de transit vers d'autres stations de Haute-Tarentaise.

      • [5:00 - 5:05] Réponse de Guillaume Desru : Plan de mobilité en Haute-Tarentaise : Guillaume Desru reconnaît le traumatisme de la réputation de Bourg Saint-Maurice comme ville de transit. Un plan de mobilité est en cours de mise en place en Haute-Tarentaise avec renforcement des navettes pour favoriser l'accès en train. Les travaux du pôle d'échange multimodal sont prévus au printemps. Bourg Saint-Maurice a réussi à rassurer ses voisins et travaille en coopération sur la mobilité.

      • [5:05 - 5:10] Question sur l'impact climatique et la fermeture potentielle de stations : Question sur les prévisions d'impact climatique à horizon 2030-2050 et le nombre de stations potentiellement amenées à fermer.

      • [5:10 - 5:15] Réponse de Guillaume Desru : Préparation au choc et projections scientifiques : La température à Bourg Saint-Maurice a augmenté de +2.7°C en 50 ans. Préparation du territoire pour amortir le choc, car un hiver sur deux pourrait être très compliqué dès 2040. Seules trois stations (Montgenèvre, Bourg Saint-Maurice/Les Arcs, Tignes) se préparent réellement. Une étude de 2023 prévoit que 98% des stations fermeraient sans neige artificielle dans un monde à +4°C, et 60% à +2°C.

      • [5:15 - 5:20] Fiona Mille : Enneigement artificiel et remise en question du modèle : La question est de savoir ce que l'on souhaite autour de l'enneigement artificiel. La transition est écologique, sociale, sociétale et doit questionner notre rapport à la montagne. Un modèle économique totalement hors sol a-t-il encore du sens ?. Une étude d'Atout France montre que les jeunes sont moins intéressés par le ski sur neige artificielle. Le CIO exige 100% de neige artificielle pour l'équité des épreuves des JO. Le ski devient hors sol. Il faut un débat de société.

      • [5:20 - 5:22] Guillaume Desmurs : Localisation du pôle glace des JO 2030 : Le pôle glace des JO 2030 sera situé à Nice, dans la plaine du Var.

      • [5:22 - 5:28] Question sur la persistance de l'achat immobilier en montagne et les possibilités d'interdiction pour les communes : Question sur les raisons pour lesquelles l'achat immobilier en montagne continue malgré les risques, et sur les possibilités pour les communes d'interdire ce type de transactions.

      • [5:28 - 5:33] Réponse de Guillaume Desmurs : Investissement, spéculation et manque d'outils réglementaires : Les stations de ski sont devenues des lieux d'investissement pour les banques. Les acheteurs pourraient perdre de l'argent à long terme. Les JO garantissent une certaine pérennité jusqu'en 2030. Le droit à la propriété en France empêche une interdiction totale des résidences secondaires comme en Suisse (Lex Weber). Des outils comme les Baux Emphytéotiques et les SEM logement existent, mais sont insuffisants. La montagne et la mer sont des lieux d'investissement bancables avec des durées d'amortissement de 20-25 ans. Les assurances pourraient changer leur approche face aux risques.

      • [5:33 - 5:40] Question sur les alternatives au ski pour faire vivre la montagne : Question sur les alternatives au ski pour l'économie de la montagne. Guillaume Desru : On skiera différemment, quand il y aura de la neige. La montagne offre d'autres activités (promenade, forêt, contemplation, ressourcement, autres sports). Travailler l'imaginaire des vacances à la montagne même sans ski quotidien. L'exemple de l'année Covid où les gens se promenaient et faisaient de la luge.

      • [5:40 - 5:45] Fiona Mille : Le besoin de montagne est évident, repenser l'accueil et les expériences : Le besoin de montagne est évident (60% des Français y sont allés récemment). La question est de repenser l'accueil pour des expériences riches et pleines de sens. Éviter une vision caricaturale (ski vs. sans ski). Imaginer des stations ouvertes toute l'année, axées sur la découverte de la montagne, le tourisme social, l'éducation à l'environnement. Passer d'une consommation à un rapport sensible à la montagne.

      • **[5:45 - 5:50] Guillaume Desmurs : Sortir du "tout ski" et du "tout

    2. Briefing Document : La Montagne en 2050, l’Après-Ski ? Date : 8 février 2024

      Source : Excerpts de la conférence "La montagne en 2050, l’après ski ?" organisée par le groupe local des Shifters Lyon.

      Intervenants principaux cités :

      • Hélène Billong Grandand (Les Shifters Lyon)
      • Guillaume Desmurs
      • Fiona Mille (Montagne Wilderness)
      • Guillaume Desru (Maire de Bourg-Saint-Maurice)
      • Jean-Marc Jancovici (The Shift Project)
      • Émile Allais
      • Laurent Chappis
      • Philippe Bourdeau

      Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :

      Cette conférence organisée par les Shifters de Lyon a exploré l'avenir de la montagne à l'horizon 2050, en se posant la question cruciale de "l'après-ski".

      L'événement a combiné une introduction sur les activités du Shift Project et des Shifters, des témoignages de pratiquants de la montagne, et des présentations d'experts et d'acteurs locaux sur l'histoire du développement économique de la montagne, les enjeux de transition, et des exemples concrets comme la politique menée à Bourg-Saint-Maurice.

      1. Introduction : Le Shift Project et les Shifters

      Hélène Billong Grandand a introduit la conférence en présentant les Shifters, une association sœur du Shift Project, think tank présidé par Jean-Marc Jancovici, qui travaille sur la décarbonation de l'économie.

      Elle a souligné la rigueur scientifique du Shift Project et sa mission d'éclairer et d'influencer les débats sur la transition énergétique.

      Les Shifters, composés de bénévoles, ont pour missions de collaborer avec le Shift Project, d'informer et de débattre sur la transition énergétique, et de sensibiliser divers acteurs.

      La conférence s'inscrivait dans cet objectif d'information et de débat sur le thème de la montagne en 2050.

      Elle a mentionné que le Shift Project a travaillé sur la résilience des territoires, avec une partie spécifique dédiée à la montagne, dont les rapports sont accessibles en ligne.

      Des chiffres clés issus de ces travaux ont été présentés pour illustrer les enjeux :

      • Carbone : 31% du stock national de carbone forestier est en zone de montagne.
      • Tourisme : 30% de l'offre d'hébergement touristique national est en montagne.
      • Agriculture : 75% des exploitations agricoles spécialisées dans l'élevage sont en montagne (50% en élevage bovin).
      • Empreinte Carbone du Tourisme : Majoritairement liée au transport des touristes.

      2. Regards de Pratiquants de la Montagne

      La conférence a diffusé des témoignages de quatre shifters aux profils variés (âge, lieu de résidence, pratiques) partageant leur relation à la montagne et son évolution :

      • Éric (52 ans, Ain) : Évolution de sa pratique, des grandes stations axées sur les remontées mécaniques à la découverte des plaisirs simples comme la promenade et les activités douces (raquettes, ski de randonnée, baignade, vélo). Il souligne la découverte de la montagne avec ses enfants autour de jeux dans la neige.

      • Louise (9 ans, Chambéry) : Description sensorielle de la montagne et de ses activités préférées (raquettes, ski alpin, ski de fond, luge, randonnée, VTT).

      • Arnaud (37 ans, Chambéry) : Découverte de la montagne via le ski alpin en famille, évolution vers le ski de randonnée moins gourmand en infrastructure, et la pratique du ski de fond nocturne. Il a appris à respecter la force de la nature. "J'ai découvert un monde hostile, froid et dangereux où la nature est clairement plus puissante que l'homme, mais d'une très grande beauté et surtout j'ai pu trouver un terrain de jeu naturel où glisser, sauter et repousser mes limites."

      • Frédéric (54 ans, Lyon) : Découverte de la montagne par le ski en famille, puis via l'UCPA avec la pratique du hors-piste (Grands Montets, Vallée Blanche). Il s'interroge sur l'impact de sa pratique face au réchauffement climatique et sur la manière de préserver la montagne. "Aujourd'hui avec le réchauffement climatique je m'interroge sur l'impact de ma pratique sur l'écosystème et l'environnement de la montagne comment faire au mieux pour que la montagne puisse nous émerveiller encore longtemps."

      • Ces témoignages ont mis en lumière la diversité des pratiques et des liens émotionnels avec la montagne, ainsi que les préoccupations croissantes face aux changements environnementaux.

      3. Histoire du Développement Économique de la Montagne (Guillaume Desmurs)

      Guillaume Desmurs a retracé l'histoire du développement des stations de ski en France, soulignant les décisions prises dans les années 60-70 qui déterminent la situation actuelle et les blocages à la transition. Il a rappelé que le plaisir du ski est constant, mais le contexte a évolué.

      • Avant-Guerre : Développement organique par les locaux avec des téléskis bricolés, ski de randonnée principal.

      • Après-Guerre : Courchevel comme prototype de la station moderne, impulsée par le département en 1945. Rôle clé d'Émile Allais (invention du domaine skiable damé, des secours sur pistes) et de l'architecte urbaniste Laurent Chappis (conception du front de neige). Chappis n'avait pas anticipé l'ampleur de l'usage de la voiture. "Jamais j'aurais imaginé qu'il y aurait autant de voitures qu'on aurait besoin de faire autant de parking."

      • Les Années 60 et le Plan Neige (1964-1975) : Période déterminante avec l'intervention de l'État pour créer des fleurons touristiques concurrentiels à l'Autriche et à la Suisse ("la bataille du ski européen"). Développement de la société du carbone (voiture, avion, immobilier). L'immobilier devient le cœur du modèle économique des stations. Tourisme de masse concentré dans le temps et l'espace. La Tarentaise concentre plus de la moitié du business du ski en France. "Les stations de ski elles vivent pas du tourisme, elles vivent de l'immobilier."

      • Fin du Plan Neige (Années 70) : Crise économique, prise de conscience des excès (trop de résidences secondaires, impact sur les populations locales et l'environnement). Discours de Valéry Giscard d'Estaing en 1977 marquant cette fin.

      • Post Plan Neige (Années 80 à Aujourd'hui) : Vote de la loi Montagne (1985) censée donner la main aux maires sur l'immobilier, mais la construction continue (de 350 000 lits en 1977 à 2,7 millions aujourd'hui, dont la moitié sont froids). Forte proportion de résidences secondaires (75 à 92%). Des tensions apparaissent entre les promoteurs et les habitants qui souhaitent un arrêt de la bétonisation. "Aujourd'hui il n'est pas possible d'habiter à l'année, de moins en moins possible d'habiter à l'année..."

      • Nécessité de l'Habitabilité : Il faut cesser de travailler l'attractivité et se concentrer sur l'habitabilité des territoires de montagne (bien vivre, travailler, grandir, s'éduquer, se cultiver). "Il est temps aujourd'hui de travailler l'habitabilité, de cesser de travailler l'attractivité des territoires."

      • Il a été souligné le manque d'exemples de stations en France ne dépendant pas de la voiture, contrairement à des cas comme Zermatt (Suisse) ou Avoriaz (où l'accès se fait en voiture malgré tout). Bourg-Saint-Maurice, avec son funiculaire, est un cas particulier mais minoritaire en termes de flux touristiques.

      4. Les Enjeux de Transition en Montagne (Fiona Mille)

      Fiona Mille a élargi le débat au-delà de la seule question du ski, en soulignant la richesse et la pluralité de la montagne (sports, grands espaces sauvages, biodiversité, vie à l'année, pastoralisme, sylviculture).

      Elle a regretté que la transition en montagne soit souvent réduite médiatiquement à la question de la neige et de l'avenir des stations de ski.

      • Le Ski : Un Poids Culturel et Économique, Mais Pas Tout : Si le ski a une forte importance culturelle et économique (notamment en Tarentaise), l'économie de la montagne est plus diversifiée (artisanat, agriculture, services).

      • Les Stations : Miroirs de l'Anthropocène : Basées sur une ressource naturelle (la neige) que l'on croyait renouvelable et qui s'amenuise. Les efforts pour faire perdurer le ski (enneigement artificiel, retenues collinaires) peuvent être des maladaptations coûteuses et peu attrayantes. "Est-ce que la station des amoureux à Champrousse elle fait rêver aujourd'hui ? Je pense pas."

      • Des Défis Multiples :Climat : Effets du dérèglement climatique deux fois plus rapides en montagne (fonte des neiges et des glaciers - 80% des glaciers mondiaux pourraient disparaître d'ici 2100 avec +4°C -, impact sur les écosystèmes, multiplication des événements extrêmes comme les éboulements et les crues). "Les écosystèmes montagnards ils sont aussi en première ligne des effets du dérèglement climatique."

      • Mobilité : Défi majeur de la mobilité touristique (forte émettrice de GES) et de la mobilité quotidienne en montagne dans une société post-carbone. "Comment on va en station en mobilité douce demain ? C'est aussi comment on se déplace au quotidien en mobilité douce ? C'est très compliqué aujourd'hui de vivre en montagne sans voiture."

      • Logement : Question cruciale de l'habitabilité face à la prolifération des résidences secondaires. "Comment on vit une bonne vie à l'année en montagne ? C'est déjà pouvoir pouvoir se loger."

      • Agriculture : Résilience alimentaire en montagne, impact du dérèglement climatique sur les pâturages.

      • Nécessité d'un Autre Regard : Passer d'une logique d'attractivité à une logique d'habitabilité et de respect des limites planétaires. "Comment on protège et on fait vivre les montagnes demain ?"

      • Consultation Nationale "Montagne 2030" (Montagne Wilderness) : Lancée pour recueillir les idées sur l'avenir de la montagne. Un fort engouement témoigne de l'intérêt du sujet. Il est crucial de redéfinir collectivement nos imaginaires de la montagne.

      5. Exemple de Bourg-Saint-Maurice (Guillaume Desru)

      Guillaume Desru, maire de Bourg-Saint-Maurice, a présenté la politique proactive menée par sa commune face aux enjeux de la transition, sous le mot d'ordre "C'est quand il fait beau qu'on refait le toit."

      • **Territoire et Contexte : Vaste commune avec une forte diversité (urbain, station internationale des Arcs sans voiture grâce à Charlotte Perriand, villages, patrimoine militaire). 5ème station de ski du monde.

      • Confrontation aux Risques : Multiples risques (climatiques, environnementaux, sanitaires, géopolitiques) rendent la transition nécessaire.

      • Actions Concrètes :Mobilité : "Choc de l'offre" sur les transports en commun (prix divisé par 3, horaires et périodes étendues), promotion du train (1/4 des visiteurs arrivent en train), investissement important dans le pôle d'échange multimodal. "Venez en train !"

      • Logement : Moratoire sur les constructions touristiques neuves. Priorité à l'habitat permanent (exemple de la reconversion du quartier des Alpins). Création d'une SEM pour maîtriser le logement et éviter la spéculation.

      • Urbanisme : PLU préservant les terres agricoles, les espaces forestiers et naturels, optimisant chaque mètre carré artificialisé.

      • Diversification Économique et Touristique : Développement du tourisme estival (funiculaire ouvert l'été), culture et événements pour les habitants et les visiteurs, formation (campus connecté), accompagnement des entreprises.

      • Environnement et Préservation du Vivant : Remise en question de l'aménagement du glacier de l'Aiguille Rouge (laisser place à une zone de freeride). Gestion de l'eau (pas plus de 50% d'enneigement de culture, tarification progressive de l'eau).

      • Bilan Provisoire : Augmentation de la fréquentation touristique sans construction de nouveaux lits, forte politique en faveur des habitants, investissements importants dans les transitions. "On n'a pas construit un lit depuis 2021, on fait +4% par an en terme de fréquentation."

      • Appel à l'Engagement : Incitation à s'engager dans la vie politique locale.**

      6. Débat et Perspectives d'Avenir

      Le débat a permis d'approfondir plusieurs points :

      • Jeux Olympiques d'Hiver 2030 : Vus comme un frein à la transition par Fiona Mille et Guillaume Desmurs (maintien du modèle économique, accent sur l'immobilier, projet non transparent). La démission de Martin Fourcade est un signal fort. L'histoire des JO de Denver 1976 a été évoquée comme parallèle.

      • Résidences Secondaires : Nécessité de réguler leur nombre et leur impact, mais manque d'outils juridiques en France (contrairement à la Suisse ou l'Autriche). Le cœur du modèle économique actuel rend difficile un changement radical.

      • Alternatives au "Tout Ski" : Importance de travailler l'imaginaire de la montagne à toutes les saisons, valoriser d'autres activités (randonnée, contemplation, culture), et diversifier l'économie locale (artisanat, agriculture, services, industrie). L'année du COVID a montré une fréquentation possible sans ski alpin.

      • Exemples de Transition : Difficulté de trouver des exemples parfaits de transition réussie en raison des choix de développement différents selon les pays. Mention des démarches intéressantes de Métabief, Bourg-Saint-Maurice/Les Arcs et Tignes. Importance de considérer les petites initiatives locales.

      • Impact Climatique : Les projections indiquent une fermeture potentielle de nombreuses stations sans enneigement artificiel. Préparer les territoires au choc est crucial.

      • Rôle des Médias : Évolution positive du traitement des sujets montagnes au niveau national, avec une meilleure prise en compte des enjeux de transition.

      Conclusion :

      La conférence a mis en évidence la complexité des enjeux auxquels la montagne est confrontée à l'horizon 2050.

      Si le modèle économique basé sur le ski intensif et l'immobilier est clairement remis en question par les changements climatiques et les aspirations des habitants, des alternatives émergent et une prise de conscience s'opère.

      La transition nécessitera une vision globale, une action politique volontariste, une diversification économique, et un changement de regard sur la montagne, passant d'une logique de consommation à une relation plus respectueuse et durable.

      L'engagement citoyen et la participation aux débats locaux sont essentiels pour construire cet avenir.

    1. 图及其简介

      上图展示了伊斯兰教的主要教派及其不同的法学流派宗教分支,涵盖了逊尼派什叶派哈瓦利吉派、以及苏菲主义等多个伊斯兰教派和流派。

      1. 逊尼派(Sunni)

      逊尼派是伊斯兰教中最为广泛的派别,图中列出了逊尼派的四大法学流派(Madhhab): - 哈乃斐学派(Hanafi) - 汉巴里学派(Hanbali) - 马基里学派(Maliki) - 沙斐仪学派(Shafi'i)

      这些法学流派主要通过对伊斯兰教法(沙里亚法)的不同理解和实践来区分,其中每个学派都有其独特的法律解释和宗教实践。

      此外,图中还提到了逊尼派的巴雷维(Barelvi)德班德运动(Deoband Movement),这两者都是在印度次大陆流行的逊尼派宗教改革运动。

      2. 什叶派(Shi'ah)

      什叶派是伊斯兰教的第二大派别,图中列出了几个主要的什叶派分支: - 伊斯马仪派(Isma'ilism):包含了几个分支,如七人派(Seveners)尼扎里派(Nizari)穆斯塔利派(Musta'li)等。 - 扎伊迪派(Zaidiyyah)贾法尔派(Jafari):贾法尔派是什叶派法学的重要流派,源自贾法尔·萨迪克伊玛目。 - 十二伊玛目派(Twelfthers):这是最广泛的什叶派分支,信奉12位伊玛目。 - 阿列维派(Alevi)阿瓦利派(A'laawī)等。

      3. 哈瓦利吉派(Khawarij)

      哈瓦利吉派是伊斯兰教的一个极端派别,源于穆罕默德去世后的内战,强调清教徒式的道德标准和对不符合伊斯兰教法的统治者进行反抗。 - 阿兹拉基派(Azraqi)哈鲁里派(Haruriyya)是哈瓦利吉派的两个分支。

      4. 伊巴迪派(Ibadiyya)

      伊巴迪派是早期伊斯兰教中的一个独立派别,主要存在于阿曼北非等地区。该派注重伊斯兰教义的公正道德实践

      5. 苏菲主义(Sufism)

      苏菲主义是伊斯兰教的神秘主义流派,注重内在的灵性修行和与神的直接接触。图中列出了多个苏菲教团(Tariqah): - 贝克塔什派(Bektashi) - 吉什提派(Chishti) - 舒哈瓦尔迪派(Suhrawardiyya) - 纳克什班迪派(Naqshbandi) - 卡迪里亚派(Qadiriyya)等。

      这些教团在不同地区的影响不同,通常通过冥想、念珠祷告和慈善等方式来实现与神的合一。

      6. 马赫迪主义(Mahdism)

      马赫迪主义是关于救世主马赫迪)的信仰,图中提到了不同的马赫迪主义派别,如马赫迪亚派(Mahdavia)赞基尔派(Zikri)等,这些派别强调马赫迪神的选定者,会在末日来临时带来公正与和谐。

      7. 无宗派的穆斯林(Non-denominational Muslims)

      这些是没有明确归属某个教派的穆斯林,通常包括: - 非宗派穆斯林(Ghair Madhhabi) - 仅仅是穆斯林(Just a Muslim)

      8. Ahl al-Qur'an(古兰经派)

      这些人认为,古兰经是唯一的指导,拒绝所有的哈迪斯(穆罕默德的言行记录)。他们通常被称为古兰经派,强调只根据《古兰经》来理解和实践伊斯兰教。

      9. 其他流派

      图中还列出了其他一些特定的宗教和哲学流派,如: - 阿赫勒·古兰(Ahl al-Qur'an):仅依据《古兰经》的信徒。 - 提交者(Submitters):强调完全服从神的旨意。

      总结:

      该图展示了伊斯兰教内部的多样性,从主流的逊尼派和什叶派,到各种法学流派、神秘主义教团和无宗派的穆斯林群体。每个派别或流派在伊斯兰教义的解读上有所不同,但它们共同的基础是《古兰经》和穆罕默德的教义。不同的伊斯兰教派别体现了伊斯兰教思想在不同历史背景和地区条件下的发展和变异。

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors completed a statistically rigorous analysis of the synchronization of sharp-wave ripples in the hippocampal CA1 across and within hemispheres. They used a publicly available dataset (collected in the Buzsaki lab) from 4 rats (8 sessions) recorded with silicon probes in both hemispheres. Each session contained approximately 8 hours of activity recorded during rest. The authors found that the characteristics of ripples did not differ between hemispheres, and that most ripples occurred almost simultaneously on all probe shanks within a hemisphere as well as across hemispheres. The differences in amplitude and exact timing of ripples between recording sites increased slightly with the distance between recording sites. However, the phase coupling of ripples (in the 100-250 Hz range), changed dramatically with the distance between recording sites. Ripples in opposite hemispheres were about 90% less coupled than ripples on nearby tetrodes in the same hemisphere. Phase coupling also decreased with distance within the hemisphere. Finally, pyramidal cell and interneuron spikes were coupled to the local ripple phase and less so to ripples at distant sites or the opposite hemisphere.

      Strengths:

      The analysis was well-designed and rigorous. The authors used statistical tests well suited to the hypotheses being tested, and clearly explained these tests. The paper is very clearly written, making it easy to understand and reproduce the analysis. The authors included an excellent review of the literature to explain the motivation for their study.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors state that their findings (highly coincident ripples between hemispheres), contradict other findings in the literature (in particular the study by Villalobos, Maldonado, and Valdes, 2017), but fail to explain why this large difference exists. They seem to imply that the previous study was flawed, without examining the differences between the studies.

      The paper fails to mention the context in which the data was collected (the behavior the animals performed before and after the analyzed data), which may in fact have a large impact on the results and explain the differences between the current study and that by Villalobos et al. The Buzsaki lab data includes mice running laps in a novel environment in the middle of two rest sessions. Given that ripple occurrence is influenced by behavior, and that the neurons spiking during ripples are highly related to the prior behavioral task, it is likely that exposure to novelty changed the statistics of ripples. Thus, the authors should analyze the pre-behavior rest and post-behavior rest sessions separately. The Villalobos et al. data, in contrast, was collected without any intervening behavioral task or novelty (to my knowledge). Therefore, I predict that the opposing results are a result of the difference in recent experiences of the studied rats, and can actually give us insight into the memory function of ripples.

      In one figure (5), the authors show data separated by session, rather than pooled. They should do this for other figures as well. There is a wide spread between sessions, which further suggests that the results are not as widely applicable as the authors seem to think. Do the sessions with small differences between phase coupling and amplitude coupling have low inter-hemispheric amplitude coupling, or high phase coupling? What is the difference between the sessions with low and high differences in phase vs. amplitude coupling? I noticed that the Buzsaki dataset contains data from rats running either on linear tracks (back and forth), or on circular tracks (unidirectionally). This could create a difference in inter-hemisphere coupling, because rats running on linear tracks would have the same sensory inputs to both hemispheres (when running in opposite directions), while rats running on a circular track would have different sensory inputs coming from the right and left (one side would include stimuli in the middle of the track, and the other would include closer views of the walls of the room). The synchronization between hemispheres might be impacted by how much overlap there was in sensory stimuli processed during the behavior epoch.

      The paper would be a lot stronger if the authors analyzed some of the differences between datasets, sessions, and epochs based on the task design, and wrote more about these issues. There may be more publicly available bi-hemispheric datasets to validate their results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Chen and colleagues describe mechanisms by which UBA7 and UBE2L6 form disulfide bonds, disrupting the ISG15 transfer cascade. As other similar structures are currently available, the authors further note that the spontaneous formation of this disulfide suggests that it is a potential regulatory mechanism. Demonstrating that this mechanism occurs and is modulated in cells would greatly improve the impact of their work.

      Strengths:

      The various biochemical and structural experiments are largely convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The main point of the paper is that this covalent complex could occur and is potentially regulated in cells is limited. The authors even show an experiment in cells where this complex is formed by expressing UBE2L6-V5 and GFP-UBA7, awkwardly referenced in the discussion.

      The authors should consider attempting an experiment with endogenous proteins and either modulate the formation of this complex in different cellular conditions or downplay this part of their story. For example, this sentence, "This redox-sensitive complex implies a link between oxidative stress and regulation of the immune response, highlighting a potential therapeutic target for modulating immune reactions arising from infections and inflammatory conditions." is in the abstract and should be excluded or rephrased considering the lack of cellular data.

      Also, their one-cell-based experiment is shown in the discussion. This should be in the results as is standard practice but also repeated. It appears that the reduced lanes don't seem to have GFP or the GFP-UBA7. Without those controls, this experiment seems incomplete.

      (2) Their intro sets up the paper to explain the disulfide formation they see in Figure 1, but a more fitting experiment would be to look at the disulfide formation between UBA7 and UBE2L6 at different pHs. It would nicely supplement the biochemical pKa data as this reaction is their focal point.

      (3) While the biochemical data is extensive, it is not concise or easily accessible to a broad readership. The authors should try to clarify and simplify the text overall. Furthermore, many figure callouts are missing, interfering with the clarity of the text.

      Minor

      (1) Because the experiments are pKa dependent, knowing what buffers the proteins were finished in (final SEC purification step) is important. Similarly - for all assays, the buffers were not reported (SEC-MALS, biochemical assays).

      (2) While the CBB and fluorescent gel assays look convincing, more controls are needed for their SEC experiments (Figure 1d), particularly because the authors definitively say the binding is because of S-S bonds. Using a reducing buffer like TCEP or DTT or their catalytic mutants to show reduced co-migration would be helpful. This is even more important given the reported high affinities between UBA7/UBE2L6 in Figure 6.

      (3) Based on the data presented, it is unclear that the kinetic values are taken within initial velocity regimes. Some data in the supplement showing that the single time points represent initial velocities would be appreciated.

      (4) As stated, "Previous experiments reveal an intriguing anomaly during the UBA7-UBE2L6-ISG15 thioester transfer reaction. Despite adding more ISG15 and UBE2L6, the level of UBE2L6~ISG15 remained the same." This experiment should be shown or the statement removed.

      (5) Similarly, "Forty human E2 enzymes are classified in the InterProdatabase (https://www.ebi.ac.uk/interpro/), with the majority interacting with UBA1, whereas UBE2L6 and UBE2Z exclusively interact with UBA7 and UBA6, respectively." Is missing a reference.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Shi et al, has utilized multiple imaging datasets and one set of samples for analyzing serum EV-miRNAs & EV-RNAs to develop an EV miRNA signature associated with disease-relevant radiomics features for early diagnosis of pancreatic cancer. CT imaging features (in two datasets (UMMD & JHC and WUH) were derived from pancreatic benign disease patients vs pancreatic cancer cases), while circulating EV miRNAs were profiled from samples obtained from a different center (DUH). The EV RNA signature from external public datasets (GSE106817, GSE109319, GSE113486, GSE112264) were analyzed for differences in healthy controls vs pancreatic cancer cases. The miRNAs were also analyzed in the TCGA tissue miRNA data from normal adjacent tissue vs pancreatic cancer.

      Strengths:

      The concept of developing EV miRNA signatures associated with disease relevant radiomics features is a strength.

      Weaknesses:

      While the overall concept of developing EV miRNA signature associated with radiomics features is interesting, the findings reported are not convincing for the reasons outlined below:

      (1) Discrepant datasets for analyzing radiomic features with EV-miRNAs: It is not justified how CT images (UMMD & JHC and WUH) and EV-miRNAs (DUH) on different subjects and centers/cohorts shown in Figures 1 &2 were analyzed for association. It is stated that the samples were matched according to age but there is no information provided for the stages of pancreatic cancer and the kind of benign lesions analyzed in each instance.

      (2) The study is focused on low-abundance miRNAs with no adequate explanation of the selection criteria for the miRNAs analyzed.

      (3) While EV-miRNAs were profiled or sequenced (not well described in the Methods section) with two different EV isolation methods, the authors used four public datasets of serum circulating miRNAs to validate the findings. It would be better to show the expression of the three miRNAs in the additional dataset(s) of EV-miRNAs and compare the expressions of the three EV-miRNAs in pancreatic cancer with healthy and benign disease controls.

      (4) It is not clear how the 12 EV-miRNAs in Figure 4C were identified.

      (5) Box plots in Figures 4D-F and G-I of three miRNAs in serum and tissue should show all quantitative data points.

      (6) What is the GBM model in Figure 5?

      (7) What are the AUCs of individual EV-miRNAs integrated as a panel of three EV-miRNAs?

      (8) The authors could have compared the performance of CA19-9 with that of the three EV-miRNAs.

      (9) How was the diagnostic performance of the three EV-miRNAs in the two molecular subtypes identified in Figure 6&7? Do the C1 & C2 clusters correlate with the classical/basal subtypes, staging, and imaging features?

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates a low abundance microRNA signature in extracellular vesicles to subtype pancreatic cancer and for early diagnosis. There are several major questions that need to be addressed. Numerous minor issues are also present.

      Strengths:

      The authors did a comprehensive job with numerous analyses of moderately sized cohorts to describe the clinical and translational significance of their miRNA signature.

      Weaknesses:

      There are multiple weaknesses of this study that should be addressed:

      (1) The description of the datasets in the Materials and Methods lacks details. What were the benign lesions from the various hospital datasets? What were the healthy controls from the public datasets? No pancreatic lesions? No pancreatic cancer? Any cancer history or other comorbid conditions? Please define these better.

      (2) It is unclear how many of the controls and cases had both imaging for radiomics and blood for biomarkers.

      (3) The authors should define the imaging methods and protocols used in more detail. For the CT scans, what slice thickness? Was a pancreatic protocol used? What phase of contrast is used (arterial, portal venous, non-contrast)? Any normalization or pre-processing?

      (4) Who performed the segmentation of the lesions? An experienced pancreatic radiologist? A student? How did the investigators ensure that the definition of the lesions was performed correctly? Raidomics features are often sensitive to the segmentation definitions.

      (5) Figure 1 is full of vague images that do not convey the study design well. Numbers from each of the datasets, a summary of what data was used for training and for validation, definitions of all of the abbreviations, references to the Roman numerals embedded within the figure, and better labeling of the various embedded graphs are needed. It is not clear whether the graphs are real results or just artwork to convey a concept. I suspect that they are just artwork, but this remains unclear.

      (6) The DF selection process lacks important details. Please reference your methods with the Boruta and Lasso models. Please explain what machine learning algorithms were used. There is a reference in the "Feature selection.." section of "the model formula listed below" but I do not see a model formula below this paragraph.

      (7) In Figure 2, more quantitative details are needed. How are patients dichotomized into non-obese and obese? What does alcohol/smoking mean? Is it simply no to both versus one or the other as yes? These two risk factors should be separated and pack years of smoking should be reported. The details of alcohol use should also be provided. Is it an alcohol abuse history? Any alcohol use, including social drinking? Similarly, "diabetes" needs to be better explained. Type I, type II, type 3c? P values should be shown to demonstrate any statistically significant differences in the proportions of the patients from one dataset to another.

      (8) In the section "Different expression radiomic features between pancreatic benign lesions and aggressive tumors", there is a reference to "MUJH" for the first time. What is this? There is also the first reference to "aggressive tumors" in the section. Do the authors just mean the cases? Otherwise there is no clear definition of "aggressive" (vs. indolent) pancreatic cancer. This terminology of tumor "aggressiveness" either needs to be removed or better defined.

      (9) Figure 3 needs to have the specific radiomic features defined and how these features were calculated. Labeling them as just f1, f2, etc is not sufficient for another group to replicate the results independently.

      (10) It is not clear what Figure 4A illustrates as regards model performance. What do the different colors represent, and what are the models used here? This is very confusing.

      (11) Figure 5 shows results for many more model runs than the described 10, please explain what you are trying to convey with each row. What are "Test A" and "Test B"? There is no description in the manuscript of what these represent. In the figure caption, there is a reference to "our center data" which is not clear. Be more specific about what that data is.

      (12) Figure 6 describes the subtypes identified in this study, but the authors do not show a multi-variable cox proportional hazards model to show that this subtype classification independently predicts DFS and OS when incorporating confounding variables. This is essential to show the subtypes are clinically relevant. In particular, the authors need to account for the stage of the patients, and receipt of chemotherapy, surgery, and radiation. If surgery was done, we need to know whether they had R1 or R0 resection. The details about the years in which patients were included is also important.

      (13) How do these subtypes compare to other published subtypes?

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      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Dad et al. explored the roles of cytosolic carboxypeptidase 5(CCP5)in the development of ependymal multicilia in the brain. CCP family are erasers of polyglutamylation of ciliary-axoneme microtubules. The authors generated a new mutant mouse of Agbl5 gene, which encodes CCP5, with deletion of its N-terminus and partial carboxypeptidase (CP) domain (named AGBL5M1/M1).

      Strengths:

      The mutant mice revealed lethal hydrocephalus due to degeneration of ependymal multicilia. Interestingly, this is in contrast with the phenotype of Agbl5 mutants with disruption solely in the CP domain of CCP5 (named AGBL5M2/M2) that did not develop hydrocephalus despite increased glutamylation levels in ependymal cilia as observed for AGBL5M1/M1 mutants. The study has been well-performed and the findings suggest a unique function of the N-domain of CCP5 in ependymal multicilia stability.

      Weaknesses:

      The content of this article is relatively descriptive and lacks molecular insights.

      We thank the Reviewer’s positive comments. To address the molecular insights of the dysregulated planar cell polarity (PCP) in Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> ependyma, we are planning to further assess the microtubule polarization and the expression/localization of PCP core proteins in ependymal cells. We also plan to quantify the intensity of actin networks around BB patches to better understand to which extent it is affected in the ependyma of the mutants and contributes to the impaired stability of BBs (Please see below).

      We will also assess whether Agbl5 commonly functions in multiciliated cells of other organs.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study analyzed the consequences of Agbl5 mutation on ependymal cell development and function. The authors first characterize their mutant mouse line reporting a reduced lifespand and severe hydrocephalus. Next, they report a defect in ependymal cell cilia number and motility. They provide evidence for impaired basal body organisation and cilia glutamylation.

      Strengths:

      Description of a mutant mouse which implicates Cytosolic Carboxypeptidase 5 (the product of Agbl5 gene) for proper ependymal cells.

      Weaknesses:

      Description of phenotype is incomplete:

      We thank the Reviewer’s constructive comments. We agree that more quantitative analysis of the phenotypes in Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> will strengthen this study.

      - Figure 3G - the sequence from the movie is not really informative. Providing beating frequencies as quantification of the data would be more informative.

      We agree that quantification of the cilia beating frequencies and directions in these experiments will be more informative.

      - Figure 3 - the quantification of actin network would strengthen the message.

      We agree with the Reviewers. We will quantify the total intensity of actin around BB patch and the total intensity of actin per BB to determine to which extent the actin networks are affected in Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> ependymal cells.

      - Lines 219 -220 - the authors conclude “Taken together, in Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> ependymal cells, the expression of genes promoting multiciliogenesis were not impaired but certain proteins associated with differentiated ependymal cells are not properly expressed”. However, they do not assess gene but protein expression (IF). In addition, their quantification shows differences in the number of FoxJ1 positive cells which indeed is an impaired expression.

      We will clarify this statement.

      - Microtubules are involved in the local organization of ciliary basal bodies (see Werner et al., Vladar et al.,2011; Boutin et al., 2014). It would be interesting for the authors to check whether the subapical network of microtubules is glutamylated or not during ependymal cell differentiation and how this network is affected in their mutants.

      We thank the Reviewer’s suggestion. We agree this is an interesting point to look at. We will assess the glutamylation status of the subapical microtubule networks in differentiating ependymal cells and whether they are affected in the mutants.

      - Showing the data mentioned in the discussion on Cep110 would be a nice addition to the paper.

      These results will be provided.

      - Line 354: "The latter serves as a component of tissue polarity that is required for asymmetric PCP protein localization in each cell (Boutin et al., 2014; Vladar et al., 2012)." The cited reference did not demonstrate that this microtubule network is required for asymmetric PCP localization.

      We thank the Reviewer for critical reading. We will correct the citation.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors developed a new Agbl5 KO allele, extending the deletion to the N-terminus of CCP5 to explore its function in mouse ependymal cells.

      Strengths:

      They show that the KO mice exhibit severe hydrocephalus due to disorganized and mislocated basal bodies. Additionally, they present evidence of both impaired beating coordination and a reduction in ciliary beating.

      Weaknesses:

      The manuscript is well-written but lacks specific interpretations of the results presented. Further experiments are needed to be fully convincing.

      We thank the Reviewer’s comments. We plan to conduct the following experiments to strengthen this study.

      (1) Quantify the intensity of actin staining around BB patches and its intensity relative to the number of BBs to assess to which extent the actin networks in Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> ependymal cells are affected (please refer to the above response to the comments of Reviewer 2#).

      (2) Co-stain tdTomato with cell specific markers to strengthen the spatial expression of tdTomato.

      (3) Seek proper antibodies to determine the correlation between signals of GT335 and Ac-Tub in ependymal multicilia of Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> mice.

      (4) Quantitatively compare the size of ependymal cells in the wild-type and Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> mice to address whether there is a consequence of possible dysfunction of primary cilia in the precursors of ependymal cells in the mutants. If so, we will further analyze how the primary cilia in the precursors of ependymal cells are affected in the mutants.

      (5) Address whether the rotational polarity is affected in the Agbl5<sup>M1/M1</sup> mutant mice.

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      *Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Summary: This manuscript authored by Kakui and colleagues aims to understand on how mitotic chromosomes get their characteristic, condensed X shape, which is functionally important to ensure faithful chromosome segregation and genome inheritance to both daughter cells. The authors focus on the condensin complex, a central player in chromosome condensation. They ask whether it condenses chromosomes through a now broadly popular "loop-extrusion" mechanism, in which a chromatin-bound condensin complex reels chromatin into loops until it dissociates or encounters a roadblock on the polymer (another condensin or some other protein complex), or through an alternative, "diffusion-capture" mechanism, in which a chromatin-bound condensin complex forms loops by encountering another chromatin-bound condensin until they dissociate from DNA (or from each other.) The authors measured the progressive changes in the shape of mitotic chromosomes by taking samples at given time points from synchronized and mitotically arrested cells and found that while all chromosomes become more condensed and shorter, their width correlated with the length of the chromosome arms. They also observed that chromosome compaction/shortening evolves on a time scale much longer than the interval between the onset of chromosome condensation and the start of chromosome segregation, suggesting that chromatin condensation does not reach its steady-state during an unperturbed mitosis. The observed width-length correlation could be described by a power law with an exponent that increases with the time (i.e. chromosome condensation). The authors also performed polymer simulations of the diffusion-capture mechanism and found that the simulations semi-quantitatively recapitulate their experimental observations. Major Comments My most substantial comments focus on somewhat technical details of the image analysis approaches taken and the polymer models employed. However, as all reported data are derived from those details, I feel it is crucial to address them. *

      We thank the reviewer for their suggestions on how to improve our image analysis and polymer modelling experiments. We are keen to develop both aspects of our manuscript with additional experiments as detailed below.

      1. * Definition/measurement of chromatin arms width and length. The approach taken to manually threshold an "arm" object and then fitting it with a same-area ellipse is not an ideal approach to gauge length and width of the arm, for the following reasons: (1) An ellipse appears to do a poor job approximating many of the objects that we see in the zoom-in insets of Fig.1. Importantly, for somewhat bent shapes we see in the insets it likely strongly underestimates the length of the arms; this approach also presents potential problems for measuring width as well (see 2 and 3 here). (2) One concern is that, due to the diffraction limit, a cylindrical fluorescent object could appear somewhat wider at the mid-length than the real underlying cylinder or the poles; this effect could become more pronounced as the object gets brighter and shorter. (3) Forcing the fit to an ellipse to objects that are not truly rod-shaped can drive an overestimation of the width of the object, and I suspect that this effect also might correlate with the length and brightness of the object. (4) Given 1-3 above, I think the approach the authors used for the first two time points, while not perfect, is better suited and likely more robust while avoiding these caveats. Moreover, why the authors cannot use this same approach (but just for each arm separately) for the later (30+ min) time points as they used for first two is unclear. This point is underscored by the observation that there is a drastic difference in the results between the first two and all subsequent points. When the authors compared the two approaches at the 30 min time point (where width-length dependence is still weak) in different cell lines they did indeed see different results (Fig. S2), although they concluded that the difference was acceptable. * While the manuscript was under review, we have developed an improved pipeline to measure chromosome widths. As suggested by the reviewer, this approach is based on the method used for the first two time points. An additional improvement allows us to take automated measurements along the entire chromosome arm length, instead of being restricted to straight segments. We propose to use the improved algorithm to repeat the measurements at later time points.

      * Along these lines, the difference between short and long arms for the chromosome in the insets of Fig.1 are quite subtle, except maybe at 180 and 240 min. On a related note, it might be informative to compare data for the two sister chromatid arms (as the underlying polymer has the same length) long vs long and short vs short and long vs short to help establish the robustness of the approach. *

      The chromosome arm width differences are clear and measurable. We will select insets that illustrate the arm width differences in a more representative way, and we will furthermore conduct the suggested analyses on subsets of chromosome arms to test the robustness of our approach.

      * Regarding the power-law distribution, it is hard to judge based on the presented data whether it is a really good description of the data or not. In Fig.1c, the points for a given time can barely be distinguished, while in Fig.1b the authors plot individual time points in the panels, but the fits and points are overlapping so much that it is challenging to the main trends described by the clouds. The most informative approach for the reader would be to provide confidence intervals of the best fit parameters for all parameters that were varied in the fit. As the authors make some conclusions based on the power-law exponent values they observed, it would be helpful to know how confident we are in those values. *

      Confidence intervals of the power law exponents will be provided.

      * The conclusion that short arms equilibrate faster based on Fig.3a is not fully convincing. For example, in a scenario where ~1.5 microns is the equilibrium length for all arms, and that the longest arms equilibrate the fastest - you would see the same qualitative pattern for quantiles, not much change in low percentiles, while you would observe a decrease in the values for the high percentiles. The authors might be right, but Fig. 3A does not unambiguously demonstrate that it is so based on this evidence alone. *

      Our reasoning is based on the observation that the shortest percentiles do not change or do not change rapidly after 30 minutes, while the longest percentiles are clearly still relaxing towards a steady state. We will repeat this analysis with the new measurements, obtained in response to point 1.

      * As for chromosome roundness, typically in image analysis, roundness is defined through the ratio of (perimeter)2/area; it might be better to use "aspect ratio" for the metrics used by the authors. And, perhaps, one should expect that shorter (measured, not necessarily by polymer contour length) arms should have a higher width/length ratio? If one selects for more round objects, there should be no surprise that the width and length get almost proportional. Given all of this, I am not sure whether width/aspect ratio serves as a good proxy for the chromatin condensation progression, which is how the authors are employing this data in the manuscript as written. *

      We thank the reviewer for alerting us to an alternatively used definition of ‘roundness’. We will consider this concern, with one solution being to use ‘width-length ratio’ in its place.

      * For the diffusion-capture model simulations, I think the results of the simulation would strongly depend on the assumptions of the probability to associate and the time scale of dissociation of the beads representing the condensin complex. For example, for a very strong association one might expect that all condensin will end up in one big condensate, even in the case of a long polymer. This is not explored/discussed at all. Did the authors optimize their model in any way? If not, how have they estimated the values they used? Moreover, perhaps this is an opportunity to learn/predict something about condensin properties, but the authors do not take advantage of this opportunity. *

      We in fact explored the consequences of altering diffusion capture on and off rates when we initially developed the loop capture simulations, and we will report on the robustness of our model to the probability of dissociation as part of our revisions.

      * In addition, the authors did some checks to show that the steady-state results of the simulations do not depend on the initial conditions. However, as some of the results reported concern the polymer evolution to the steady state (Fig.6b-c), they also need to examine whether these results depend on the chosen initial conditions (or not), and if they do, what is the rationale for the choices the authors have made? *

      The current manuscript contains a comparison of steady states reached after simulations were started from elongated or random walk initial states (see Supplementary Figure 4). We will provide better justification for the choice of a 4x elongated initial state, which approximates the initial state observed in vivo.

      * A more thorough discussion of other possible models, beyond diffusion-capture model considered here, would be beneficial to the reader. First, the authors practically discard the possibility of the loop-extrusion model to explain their observations (although they never explicitly state this in the abstract or discussion). However, they neither leveraged simulations to rigorously compare models nor included some other substantiated arguments to explain why they prefer their model. This is important, as one of the major findings here is that the chromatin never reaches steady state for condensation, making it challenging to intuit what one should expect in this very dynamic state. Second, the authors, while briefly mentioning that there might be some other mechanisms contributing to the mitotic chromosome reshaping, do not really discuss those possibilities in a scholarly way. For example, work by the Kleckner group has suggested an involvement of bridges between sister chromatids into their shortening dynamics (Chu et al. Mol Cell 2020). Third, the authors do not discuss how they envision the interplay between the different SMC complexes - cohesin, condensin I and condensin II - as they act on the same chromatin polymer, or at least acknowledge a possible role that this interplay might contribute to the observed time dependencies. The reviewer raises important points, which we are keen to explore by performing loop extrusion simulations, as well as in an expanded discussion section.

      Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):

      Significance: The question the authors are trying to address is fundamental and important. While loop extrusion-driven mitotic chromosome organization is a popular model, considering alternative models is always crucial, especially when one can find experimental observations that allow us to discriminate between possible models. The main limitations are: 1) the performance of the approach the authors take to measure chromosome shape is in question and 2) the main competitive model (loop extrusion) is not modeled. If all shortcomings are addressed this work may provide strong evidence for the diffusion-capture model and thus advance our mechanistic understanding of mitotic processes, which will be of broad interest to the fields of genome and chromosome biology. We are happy to hear that the reviewer agrees that our work ‘may provide strong evidence for the diffusion-capture model and thus advance our mechanistic understanding of mitotic processes’. See above for how we propose to address the two main limitations.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      SUMMARY The authors tracked the progression of mitotic chromosome compaction over time by imaging chromatin spreads from HeLa cells that were released from G2/M arrest. By measuring the mitotic chromosome arms' width and length at different times post-release, the authors demonstrated that the speed at which the chromosome arms reach an equilibrium state is dependent on their length. The authors were able to recapitulate this observation using polymer simulations that they previously developed, supporting the model of loop capture as the mechanism for mitotic chromosome compaction.

      MAIN COMMENTS This is a straightforward paper that supports an alternative mechanism (relative to the highly popular loop-extrusion) model for chromosome compaction. My comments are meant to help the manuscript reach a wider audience.

      I suggest that "equilibrium" be replaced with "equilibrium length" since it is the only equilibrium parameter of concern. *

      The reviewer is correct, and we will implement this change, also taking into account the reasoning of reviewer 3 that ‘steady state’ is a better term to describe a final shape that is maintained by an active process.*

      In the results, it may help to describe how loop capture and loop extrusion are incorporated into the simulations, using terminology that non-experts can understand. Such a description should be accompanied by figures that can be related to the other figures (color scheme, nomenclature if possible). *

      Following from the reviewer’s suggestion, we will provide schematics of the loop capture and loop extrusion mechanisms.*

      OTHER COMMENTS P5: Is it possible the chromosome-spread processing may distort the structures of the chromosomes? *

      We will compare chromosome dimension in live cells with those following spreading to investigate this possibility.*

      Please clarify whether mitosis can complete after drug removal at the various treatment intervals. *

      Drug treatment and removal is often used as an experimental tool. We will perform a control experiment to explore whether mitosis can indeed complete after drug removal under our experimental conditions.*

      P6: "Our records are not, therefore, meant as an accurate absolute measure of individual arms. Rather, fitting allows us to sample all chromosome arms and deduce overall trends of chromosome shape changes over time" It would be better to state this sentence earlier in this paragraph, or earlier in the section so that readers' expectations are curbed when they're reading the detailed analysis plan. *

      Note that we will employ an additional image analysis method, in response to comments from reviewer 1, which should lead to more reliable width measurements.*

      P6: "As soon as individual chromosome arms become discernible (30 minutes), longer chromosome arms were wider, a trend that became more pronounced as time progressed." Implies that at early time points, when the lengths of the arms were unknown, the longer arms were equal or narrower than the short arms. I think it's more accurate to say that as soon as the arms were resolved, the longer arms appeared wider. *

      We will adopt the reviewers’ more accurate wording.*

      P7: Is there a functional consequence to the long arms not equilibrating before anaphase onset? *

      The reviewer raises an interesting question, which we will explore in our revised discussion. One consequence of not reaching ‘steady state’ is that ‘time in mitosis’ becomes a key parameter that defines compaction at anaphase onset.*

      P13: "In a loop capture scenario, we can envision how condensin II sets up a coarse rosette architecture, with condensin I inserting a layer of finer-grained rosettes." This should be illustrated in a figure. *

      We will consider such a figure, though the roles of two condensin complexes is peripheral to our current study. Investigating the consequences of two distinct condensins for chromosome formation will provide fertile ground for future investigations. *

      FIGURES Fig. 1: "...while insets show chromosomes at increasing magnification over time" sounds like the microscope magnification is changing over time. Please change "magnification" to "enlargement". Alternatively, if the goal of the figure is to illustrate the shape/dimensions change of the chromosomes over time, wouldn't it be better to keep all the enlargements at the same scale? *

      During the revisions, we will explore whether to show the insets at the same magnification, or to adjust the wording as suggested by the reviewer.*

      Fig. 2a plot: Does the distribution of normalized intensities really justify a Gaussian fit? I see a double Gaussian. *

      The chosen example indeed resembles a double Gaussian. We will explore whether this is due to noise in the measurement and a poor choice of an example, or whether a double Gaussian fit is indeed merited.*

      Please label the structures that resemble "rosettes". Good idea, which we will implement.

      Lu Gan

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      General - This is a simulation-centric study of mammalian chromosome compaction that supports the loop-capture mechanism. It may be viewed as provocative by some readers because loop-extrusion has dominated the chromosome-compaction literature in the past decade. The only limitation, which is best addressed by future studies, is the absence of more direct molecular evidence of loop capture in situ. Though this same limitation applies to studies of the loop-extrusion mechanism.

      Advance - It is valuable for the field to consider alternative mechanisms. In my opinion, the dominant one has been studied to death by indirect methods without a direct molecular-resolution readout in situ. While the field awaits better experimental tools, more mechanisms should be explored.

      Audience - The chromosome-biology community (both bacterial and eukaryotic) will be interested.

      Expertise - My lab uses cryo-ET to study chromatin in situ.

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      In this manuscript, Kakui et al. measured the length/width relationships of mitotic chromosomes in human cells that had entered mitosis for different durations. This simple measurement revealed very interesting behaviors of mitotic chromosomes. They found that the longer chromosome arms were wider than shorter ones. Mitotic chromosoms became progressively wider over time, with shorter ones reached the final state faster than the longer ones. They then built a loop-capture polymer model, which explained the time-dependent increase of width/length ration rather well, but did not quite explain the final roundness of chromosomes.

      I suggest the following points for the authors to consider.

      Major points (1) There is no experimental evidence that the loop capture mechanism is condensin-depdendent. Can the authors deplete condensin I or II or both and measure chromosome length and width in similar assays? This will link their models to molecular players. *

      Such analyses have been conducted by others, and we will provide a brief survey with relevant references to the literature in our revised introduction.*

      (2) It seems rather intuitive to me that if one defines the spacing the condensin-binding sites, then the loop sizes will be the same between shorter and longer chromosomes. It then follows that shorter chromosomes are rounder. Is it that simple? If not, can the authors provide a better explanation. *

      The reviewer makes an interesting point that roundness (width-length ratio), is greater for shorter chromosome arms, even if chromosome width is constant. We will make this clear in the revised manuscript.*

      (3) If the loop sizes are the same between shorter and longer chromosomes, why can't loop extrusion model explain this phenomenon? If one assumes that condensin is stopped by the same barrier element and has the same distrution at the loop base, this should produce the same outcome as loop capture. *

      The key feature of loop extrusion is the formation of a linear condensin backbone, resulting in a bottle brush-shaped chromosome. This arrangement prevents further equilibration of loops into a wider structure, as occurs in the loop capture mechanism by rosette rearrangements. These differences will be better explained, using a schematic, in the revised manuscript.*

      Minor points (1) "We are aware that this approximation underestimates the length of the longest chromosome arms and overestimates the length of the shortest arms." should be "We are aware that this approximation underestimates the length of the longer chromosome (q) arms and overestimates the length of the shorter (p) arms.". Right? *

      In fact, this comparison applies to all longer and shorter arms, not only pairs of p and q arms, which we will clarify.*

      (2) Some scientists argue that the final chromosome conformation might be kinetically driven. Even if the short chromosomes have reached the final roundness, this doesn't necessarily mean that they have reached equilibrium in cells. "Steady state" might be a better term to describe the chromosomes in vivo, as there are clearly energy-burning processes. *

      The reviewer is right that the term ‘equilibrium’ can be seen as misleading, which we will replace with ‘steady state’.*

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      I find the paper intellectually stimulating and a pleasure to read. It suggests a plausible explanation for mitotic chromosome formation. As such, it will be of great interest to scientists in the chromatin field.

      Reviewer #4 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      The take home message of this study is that chromosome structure can be attained through mechanisms of looping that do not require an explicit loop extrusion function. As the authors states, alternative models of loop capture have been proposed, dating from 2015-2016. THese models show DNA chains through simply Brownian diffusion can adopt a loop structure (citation 27, 28 and similarly Entropy gives rise to topologically associating domains Vasquez et al 2016 DOI: 10.1093/nar/gkw510).*

      The reviewer makes an excellent point in that entropy considerations, e.g. depletion attraction, likely contribute to the efficiency of loop capture. We will refer to this principle, including a citation to the Vasquez et al. study, in the revised manuscript.

      * In this study, the authors go through careful and well-documented chromosome length measurements through prophase and metaphase. The modeling studies clearly show that loop capture provides a tenable mechanism that accounts for the biological results. The results are clearly written and propose an important alternative narrative for the foundation of chromosome organization.

      Reviewer #4 (Significance (Required)):

      The study is important because it takes a reductionist approach using just Brownian motion and loop capture to ask how well the fundamental processes will recapitulate the biological outcome. The fact that loop capture can account for the arm length to width relationships on biological time scales is important to report to the community. The work is extremely well done and the analysis of chromosome features is thorough and well-documented.*

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      Referee #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary: This manuscript authored by Kakui and colleagues aims to understand on how mitotic chromosomes get their characteristic, condensed X shape, which is functionally important to ensure faithful chromosome segregation and genome inheritance to both daughter cells. The authors focus on the condensin complex, a central player in chromosome condensation. They ask whether it condenses chromosomes through a now broadly popular "loop-extrusion" mechanism, in which a chromatin-bound condensin complex reels chromatin into loops until it dissociates or encounters a roadblock on the polymer (another condensin or some other protein complex), or through an alternative, "diffusion-capture" mechanism, in which a chromatin-bound condensin complex forms loops by encountering another chromatin-bound condensin until they dissociate from DNA (or from each other.)

      The authors measured the progressive changes in the shape of mitotic chromosomes by taking samples at given time points from synchronized and mitotically arrested cells and found that while all chromosomes become more condensed and shorter, their width correlated with the length of the chromosome arms. They also observed that chromosome compaction/shortening evolves on a time scale much longer than the interval between the onset of chromosome condensation and the start of chromosome segregation, suggesting that chromatin condensation does not reach its steady-state during an unperturbed mitosis. The observed width-length correlation could be described by a power law with an exponent that increases with the time (i.e. chromosome condensation). The authors also performed polymer simulations of the diffusion-capture mechanism and found that the simulations semi-quantitatively recapitulate their experimental observations.

      Major Comments

      My most substantial comments focus on somewhat technical details of the image analysis approaches taken and the polymer models employed. However, as all reported data are derived from those details, I feel it is crucial to address them. 1. Definition/measurement of chromatin arms width and length. The approach taken to manually threshold an "arm" object and then fitting it with a same-area ellipse is not an ideal approach to gauge length and width of the arm, for the following reasons: (1) An ellipse appears to do a poor job approximating many of the objects that we see in the zoom-in insets of Fig.1. Importantly, for somewhat bent shapes we see in the insets it likely strongly underestimates the length of the arms; this approach also presents potential problems for measuring width as well (see 2 and 3 here). (2) One concern is that, due to the diffraction limit, a cylindrical fluorescent object could appear somewhat wider at the mid-length than the real underlying cylinder or the poles; this effect could become more pronounced as the object gets brighter and shorter. (3) Forcing the fit to an ellipse to objects that are not truly rod-shaped can drive an overestimation of the width of the object, and I suspect that this effect also might correlate with the length and brightness of the object. (4) Given 1-3 above, I think the approach the authors used for the first two time points, while not perfect, is better suited and likely more robust while avoiding these caveats. Moreover, why the authors cannot use this same approach (but just for each arm separately) for the later (30+ min) time points as they used for first two is unclear. This point is underscored by the observation that there is a drastic difference in the results between the first two and all subsequent points. When the authors compared the two approaches at the 30 min time point (where width-length dependence is still weak) in different cell lines they did indeed see different results (Fig. S2), although they concluded that the difference was acceptable. Along these lines, the difference between short and long arms for the chromosome in the insets of Fig.1 are quite subtle, except maybe at 180 and 240 min. On a related note, it might be informative to compare data for the two sister chromatid arms (as the underlying polymer has the same length) long vs long and short vs short and long vs short to help establish the robustness of the approach. 2. Regarding the power-law distribution, it is hard to judge based on the presented data whether it is a really good description of the data or not. In Fig.1c, the points for a given time can barely be distinguished, while in Fig.1b the authors plot individual time points in the panels, but the fits and points are overlapping so much that it is challenging to the main trends described by the clouds. The most informative approach for the reader would be to provide confidence intervals of the best fit parameters for all parameters that were varied in the fit. As the authors make some conclusions based on the power-law exponent values they observed, it would be helpful to know how confident we are in those values. 3. The conclusion that short arms equilibrate faster based on Fig.3a is not fully convincing. For example, in a scenario where ~1.5 microns is the equilibrium length for all arms, and that the longest arms equilibrate the fastest - you would see the same qualitative pattern for quantiles, not much change in low percentiles, while you would observe a decrease in the values for the high percentiles. The authors might be right, but Fig. 3A does not unambiguously demonstrate that it is so based on this evidence alone. 4. As for chromosome roundness, typically in image analysis, roundness is defined through the ratio of (perimeter)2/area; it might be better to use "aspect ratio" for the metrics used by the authors. And, perhaps, one should expect that shorter (measured, not necessarily by polymer contour length) arms should have a higher width/length ratio? If one selects for more round objects, there should be no surprise that the width and length get almost proportional. Given all of this, I am not sure whether width/aspect ratio serves as a good proxy for the chromatin condensation progression, which is how the authors are employing this data in the manuscript as written. 5. For the diffusion-capture model simulations, I think the results of the simulation would strongly depend on the assumptions of the probability to associate and the time scale of dissociation of the beads representing the condensin complex. For example, for a very strong association one might expect that all condensin will end up in one big condensate, even in the case of a long polymer. This is not explored/discussed at all. Did the authors optimize their model in any way? If not, how have they estimated the values they used? Moreover, perhaps this is an opportunity to learn/predict something about condensin properties, but the authors do not take advantage of this opportunity. In addition, the authors did some checks to show that the steady-state results of the simulations do not depend on the initial conditions. However, as some of the results reported concern the polymer evolution to the steady state (Fig.6b-c), they also need to examine whether these results depend on the chosen initial conditions (or not), and if they do, what is the rationale for the choices the authors have made? 6. A more thorough discussion of other possible models, beyond diffusion-capture model considered here, would be beneficial to the reader. First, the authors practically discard the possibility of the loop-extrusion model to explain their observations (although they never explicitly state this in the abstract or discussion). However, they neither leveraged simulations to rigorously compare models nor included some other substantiated arguments to explain why they prefer their model. This is important, as one of the major findings here is that the chromatin never reaches steady state for condensation, making it challenging to intuit what one should expect in this very dynamic state. Second, the authors, while briefly mentioning that there might be some other mechanisms contributing to the mitotic chromosome reshaping, do not really discuss those possibilities in a scholarly way. For example, work by the Kleckner group has suggested an involvement of bridges between sister chromatids into their shortening dynamics (Chu et al. Mol Cell 2020). Third, the authors do not discuss how they envision the interplay between the different SMC complexes - cohesin, condensin I and condensin II - as they act on the same chromatin polymer, or at least acknowledge a possible role that this interplay might contribute to the observed time dependencies.

      Significance

      The question the authors are trying to address is fundamental and important. While loop extrusion-driven mitotic chromosome organization is a popular model, considering alternative models is always crucial, especially when one can find experimental observations that allow us to discriminate between possible models. The main limitations are: 1) the performance of the approach the authors take to measure chromosome shape is in question and 2) the main competitive model (loop extrusion) is not modeled. If all shortcomings are addressed this work may provide strong evidence for the diffusion-capture model and thus advance our mechanistic understanding of mitotic processes, which will be of broad interest to the fields of genome and chromosome biology.

    1. 对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑: 基于经验主义原则和怀疑主义立场,对 实体 (substance)、自我 (self) 和外部世界 (external world) 等传统形而上学概念提出了质疑,认为这些概念缺乏充分的经验基础

      当然,非常乐意为您详细解释 大卫·休谟 (David Hume) 如何基于其经验主义原则和怀疑主义立场,对 实体 (substance)、自我 (self) 和外部世界 (external world) 这些传统的形而上学概念提出质疑,并认为它们缺乏充分的经验基础。

      核心思想回顾:经验主义与怀疑主义

      在深入解释休谟对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑之前,我们先简要回顾一下他的核心哲学立场:

      • 经验主义 (Empiricism): 休谟是坚定的经验主义者,他认为 所有知识都来源于经验。 经验由两种知觉构成:

        • 印象 (Impressions): 我们直接、生动的感官体验和内在感受,例如看到红色、感受到疼痛、体验到快乐等等。印象是原始的、直接的、强烈的。
        • 观念 (Ideas): 我们对印象的回忆、想象和思考,是印象的副本。观念是次生的、间接的、相对微弱的。

        “印象原则 (Copy Principle)”: 休谟认为,所有观念都必须能够追溯到相应的印象。 如果一个观念无法追溯到任何印象,那么这个观念就是 没有经验基础的、空洞的、甚至是无意义的

      • 怀疑主义 (Skepticism): 休谟是一位温和的怀疑主义者。 他对人类理性认识世界的能力持 审慎和怀疑的态度。 他认为,我们无法通过理性获得关于世界本质的 绝对确定性知识。 他尤其怀疑以下几点:

        • 归纳推理 (Induction) 的可靠性
        • 因果关系 (Causation) 的必然性
        • 形而上学概念 (Metaphysical Concepts) 的经验基础

      休谟对实体 (Substance) 的怀疑

      • 传统形而上学中的 “实体 (Substance)” 概念: 在传统的形而上学中,尤其是受到亚里士多德哲学的影响,实体 (substance) 被认为是事物 根本的、不变的、作为属性的承载者 的“东西”。 实体被认为是事物 内在的本质 (essence),是事物之所以是其所是的 基础。 例如,对于一个苹果来说,它的红色、圆形、甜味等等都是 属性 (qualities),而这些属性都依附于一个 实体,这个实体就是 “苹果的实体”。 实体被认为是 独立存在 的,而属性则不能独立存在,必须依附于实体。

      • 休谟的质疑: 缺乏 “实体的印象” 基于其经验主义原则,休谟质疑了 “实体” 概念的经验基础。 他的论证可以概括为:

        1. 我们所有的知觉都来自于印象和观念。 这是经验主义的基本前提。
        2. 当我们感知一个对象 (例如苹果) 时,我们所获得的都只是各种属性的印象,例如颜色 (红色)、形状 (圆形)、气味 (苹果香)、味道 (甜味)、触感 (光滑) 等等。 我们感知到的是各种不同的感觉性质。
        3. 我们并没有获得任何 “实体” 本身的印象。 无论我们如何仔细地感知苹果,我们都无法找到一个独立于这些属性之外的“实体”的印象。 我们看不到、闻不到、摸不到、尝不到、也感受不到 “苹果的实体” 本身。
        4. 根据 “印象原则”, 如果我们没有关于 “实体” 的印象,那么我们关于 “实体” 的观念就是缺乏经验基础的、空洞的。 观念必须来源于印象,没有印象就没有合法的观念。
      • 结论: “实体” 只是属性的集合,而非其承载者 因此,休谟认为,我们所谓的 “实体”, 只不过是我们感知到的各种属性的集合, 我们习惯性地将这些属性捆绑在一起,用一个词语 (例如“苹果”) 来指代。 并不存在一个独立于属性之外的、作为属性承载者的 “实体”。 “实体” 只是我们想象力的产物,是我们为了方便思考和交流而构建的概念,但它 在经验中没有对应物

        休谟并非否认我们感知到各种对象,而是质疑我们对对象 “形而上学实体” 的理解。 他认为,我们只需要承认我们感知到各种 属性的集合 就足够了, 没有必要假设一个 不可感知的、神秘的实体 作为这些属性的承载者。

      休谟对自我 (Self) 的怀疑

      • 传统哲学中的 “自我 (Self)” 概念: 在笛卡尔等理性主义哲学家看来,自我 (self) 是一个 统一的、持久的、不变的实体, 是我们 思想、意识和经验的中心。 自我被认为是 灵魂 (soul) 或 心灵 (mind), 是一个独立的、与身体不同的 精神实体。 自我被认为是 identity (同一性) 的基础, 是我们之所以在不同时间、不同状态下仍然是 “同一个我” 的原因。

      • 休谟的质疑: 缺乏 “自我的印象” 休谟同样运用经验主义原则,质疑了 “自我” 概念的经验基础。 他的论证可以概括为:

        1. 我们所有的知觉仍然来自于印象和观念。
        2. 当我们进行内省 (introspection),试图去认识 “自我” 时,我们所能意识到的,都只是我们当下的各种知觉状态,例如思想、情感、感觉、意象等等。 我们意识到的只是一系列 不断变化的心理内容 (perceptions)
        3. 我们并没有获得任何 “自我” 本身的印象。 无论我们如何深入地内省,我们都无法找到一个独立于这些知觉内容之外的、持续不变的 “自我” 的印象。 我们找不到一个能够始终如一地保持同一性的 “自我” 的经验。
        4. 根据 “印象原则”, 如果我们没有关于 “自我” 的印象,那么我们关于 “自我” 的观念就是缺乏经验基础的、虚构的。
      • “捆束理论 (Bundle Theory of Self)”: 自我只是知觉的集合 因此,休谟提出了著名的 “捆束理论 (Bundle Theory of Self)”。 他认为, 自我 (self) 并非一个单一的、持久的实体,而只是一种 “捆束 (bundle)” 或 “集合 (collection)”, 是由 各种不同的知觉 (perceptions) 组成的, 这些知觉以 快速的连续 (rapid succession) 互相取代和变化。 就像一个剧院里, 不同的角色轮番登场, 构成了一个 知觉的剧场 (theatre of perceptions), 但并不存在一个 统一的、持久的 “自我” 作为这个剧场的 所有者或观看者

        休谟的比喻非常形象:

        对于我个人而言,每当我最亲密地审视我称之为 “我自己” 的东西时,我总是会碰到某一特定的知觉,比如热或冷、光或暗、爱或恨、痛苦或快乐的印象。 我在任何时候都绝无法在没有知觉的情况下把握住我自己,并且也绝不能观察到任何别的东西,而只能观察到知觉。[1]

        人心灵是某种东西的剧场,各种知觉相继出现;它们像舞台上的演员一样,来来去去,变幻着姿势和场景。 在整个运动中,它们之间可能存在着某种真实的同一性或单纯性,但这并没有给它们杂乱的连续性带来哪怕是最细微的相似性。 同一种心灵绝非由一个永恒不变的方式构成。 它只是一连串知觉,由难以想象的速度彼此承继,并处于永恒的流动和运动之中。[2]

        休谟的“捆束理论” 解构了传统哲学中 “自我” 的形而上学观念, 认为自我并非一个神秘的实体, 而是一种 心理现象, 是我们的 知觉经验的组织和模式。 “自我” 的同一性并非实体的同一性, 而是 知觉之间联系和相似性的连续性 造成的 心理幻觉

      休谟对外部世界 (External World) 的怀疑

      • 常识与哲学中的 “外部世界 (External World)” 概念: 在日常生活中,我们都 自然而然地相信存在着一个独立于我们意识之外的 “外部世界 (external world)”。 这个外部世界包含着各种 物体、事物和事件, 它们 持续存在 (persistently exist), 即使当我们不感知它们的时候, 它们仍然在那里。 哲学上,也普遍承认存在一个 客观的、独立于主体意识之外的物质世界

      • 休谟的质疑: 缺乏 “外部世界的印象” 休谟基于其经验主义和怀疑主义立场,对我们 关于外部世界的知识的可靠性 提出了质疑。 他的论证可以概括为:

        1. 我们所有的知识都来源于经验, 而经验的基础是感官印象。
        2. 我们所有的感官印象都是主观的、内在的, 都只发生在我们自己的心灵内部。 当我们 “看到” 一棵树时, 我们直接获得的只是一种 视觉印象, 这个印象是 发生在我们心灵中的, 而非发生在我们心灵之外的 “外部世界” 中。 我们并没有 直接地、立即地 感知到 “外部世界” 本身。
        3. 我们无法证明我们的印象与 “外部世界” 之间存在着必然的、可靠的对应关系。 我们 永远无法走出自己的心灵, 去直接比较我们的印象与 “外部世界” 是否一致。 我们只能 间接地通过更多的印象 (例如不同的感官) 来验证印象, 但这仍然是在 印象的领域内循环, 无法真正触及 “外部世界” 本身。
        4. 因此,我们关于 “外部世界” 存在的信念, 以及我们关于 “外部世界” 的知识, 都缺乏充分的经验基础, 都建立在不确定的推论和假设之上。
      • 批判 “双重存在 (Double Existence)” 理论: 休谟批判了当时流行的一种解释外部世界存在的理论,即 “双重存在 (Double Existence)” 理论。 这种理论认为, 我们所感知到的 印象 (perceptions) 具有 双重存在: 既作为 我们心灵中的心理现象 (mental phenomena) 存在, 又作为 外部世界中物体的副本 (copies of external objects) 存在。 我们通过印象来间接地认识外部世界。 休谟认为, 这种 “双重存在” 的假设是 没有根据的。 我们 没有任何印象 能够证明存在着一个 独立于我们心灵之外的外部世界, 并且我们的印象是这个外部世界的 精确副本

      • 批判 “因果推论 (Causal Inference)” 论证: 另一种论证外部世界存在的思路是 “因果推论 (Causal Inference)”。 这种论证认为, 我们之所以相信存在外部世界, 是因为 我们的印象必然有其原因 (cause), 而最合理的解释就是 外部世界的物体 是我们印象的 原因。 休谟也批判了这种论证。 基于他的 因果怀疑论, 他认为我们无法证明 因果关系的必然性, 我们对因果关系的理解仅仅是 心理习惯的产物。 因此, 我们 无法通过因果推论可靠地证明 外部世界的存在。

      • 结论: 对外部世界的信念是习惯和本能,而非理性证明 最终,休谟认为, 我们 相信存在外部世界 以及 相信外部世界持续存在和独立存在 的信念, 更多的是来自于 本能、自然倾向和心理习惯 (instinct, natural tendency, and custom of mind), 而非 理性论证或经验证据。 这种信念虽然在日常生活中非常实用和重要, 但 在哲学上, 仍然是一种无法完全证明的假设。 我们 永远无法摆脱主观经验的限制, 去获得关于 “客观外部世界” 的 绝对确定性知识

      总结: 温和的怀疑主义与经验主义的局限

      休谟对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑, 并非是要 彻底否定 这些概念的日常实用价值或经验现象。 他的目的在于 揭示这些传统形而上学概念缺乏充分的经验基础, 强调 人类理性认识世界的局限性, 以及 经验主义哲学的边界

      休谟的怀疑主义是 温和的、学术性的, 而非 彻底的、实践性的。 他承认, 在日常生活中, 我们 不得不 假设外部世界存在, 不得不认为自己是同一个自我, 不得不运用因果推理进行预测和行动。 但作为哲学家, 他有责任 揭示这些信念的哲学基础的脆弱性, 提醒人们 理性认知的局限, 避免 独断论和形而上学 speculation, 将哲学研究 限定在经验的范围内

      休谟的怀疑主义 并非绝望的悲观主义, 而是一种 清醒的认识和理性的谦逊。 他认为, 虽然我们无法获得绝对可靠的形而上学知识, 但我们仍然可以通过 经验观察、科学方法和道德情感, 来 理解人性、认识世界、改善社会和提升生活将哲学从形而上学的玄思中解放出来, 转向对人性和经验世界的务实研究, 正是休谟哲学的重要贡献和永恒价值所在。

      希望以上详细解释能够帮助您理解休谟对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑主义思想。 如果您还有其他问题, 欢迎继续提问。

      注释:

      [1] 休谟,《人性论》第一卷,论知性,第四部分,第六节,“论人格的同一性”,[SBN 252-253]。 [2] 休谟,《人性论》第一卷,论知性,第四部分,第二节,“论怀疑论与理性无关”,[SBN 253]。

      (注: [SBN xxx] 指的是 《人性论》的标准版本 A Treatise of Human Nature, edited by L.A. Selby-Bigge and P.H. Nidditch (Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1978) 的页码。)

    1. 休谟的因果怀疑论, 动摇了传统形而上学中 实体 (substance)、本质 (essence)、第一推动力 (first cause) 等概念的基础, 也对 自然神论 (Deism) 的 上帝作为宇宙创造者和设计者 的观念提出了质疑

      当然,非常乐意为您详细解释 大卫·休谟 (David Hume) 如何基于其经验主义原则和怀疑主义立场,对 实体 (substance)、自我 (self) 和外部世界 (external world) 这些传统的形而上学概念提出质疑,并认为它们缺乏充分的经验基础。

      核心思想回顾:经验主义与怀疑主义

      在深入解释休谟对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑之前,我们先简要回顾一下他的核心哲学立场:

      • 经验主义 (Empiricism): 休谟是坚定的经验主义者,他认为 所有知识都来源于经验。 经验由两种知觉构成:

        • 印象 (Impressions): 我们直接、生动的感官体验和内在感受,例如看到红色、感受到疼痛、体验到快乐等等。印象是原始的、直接的、强烈的。
        • 观念 (Ideas): 我们对印象的回忆、想象和思考,是印象的副本。观念是次生的、间接的、相对微弱的。

        “印象原则 (Copy Principle)”: 休谟认为,所有观念都必须能够追溯到相应的印象。 如果一个观念无法追溯到任何印象,那么这个观念就是 没有经验基础的、空洞的、甚至是无意义的

      • 怀疑主义 (Skepticism): 休谟是一位温和的怀疑主义者。 他对人类理性认识世界的能力持 审慎和怀疑的态度。 他认为,我们无法通过理性获得关于世界本质的 绝对确定性知识。 他尤其怀疑以下几点:

        • 归纳推理 (Induction) 的可靠性
        • 因果关系 (Causation) 的必然性
        • 形而上学概念 (Metaphysical Concepts) 的经验基础

      休谟对实体 (Substance) 的怀疑

      • 传统形而上学中的 “实体 (Substance)” 概念: 在传统的形而上学中,尤其是受到亚里士多德哲学的影响,实体 (substance) 被认为是事物 根本的、不变的、作为属性的承载者 的“东西”。 实体被认为是事物 内在的本质 (essence),是事物之所以是其所是的 基础。 例如,对于一个苹果来说,它的红色、圆形、甜味等等都是 属性 (qualities),而这些属性都依附于一个 实体,这个实体就是 “苹果的实体”。 实体被认为是 独立存在 的,而属性则不能独立存在,必须依附于实体。

      • 休谟的质疑: 缺乏 “实体的印象” 基于其经验主义原则,休谟质疑了 “实体” 概念的经验基础。 他的论证可以概括为:

        1. 我们所有的知觉都来自于印象和观念。 这是经验主义的基本前提。
        2. 当我们感知一个对象 (例如苹果) 时,我们所获得的都只是各种属性的印象,例如颜色 (红色)、形状 (圆形)、气味 (苹果香)、味道 (甜味)、触感 (光滑) 等等。 我们感知到的是各种不同的感觉性质。
        3. 我们并没有获得任何 “实体” 本身的印象。 无论我们如何仔细地感知苹果,我们都无法找到一个独立于这些属性之外的“实体”的印象。 我们看不到、闻不到、摸不到、尝不到、也感受不到 “苹果的实体” 本身。
        4. 根据 “印象原则”, 如果我们没有关于 “实体” 的印象,那么我们关于 “实体” 的观念就是缺乏经验基础的、空洞的。 观念必须来源于印象,没有印象就没有合法的观念。
      • 结论: “实体” 只是属性的集合,而非其承载者 因此,休谟认为,我们所谓的 “实体”, 只不过是我们感知到的各种属性的集合, 我们习惯性地将这些属性捆绑在一起,用一个词语 (例如“苹果”) 来指代。 并不存在一个独立于属性之外的、作为属性承载者的 “实体”。 “实体” 只是我们想象力的产物,是我们为了方便思考和交流而构建的概念,但它 在经验中没有对应物

        休谟并非否认我们感知到各种对象,而是质疑我们对对象 “形而上学实体” 的理解。 他认为,我们只需要承认我们感知到各种 属性的集合 就足够了, 没有必要假设一个 不可感知的、神秘的实体 作为这些属性的承载者。

      休谟对自我 (Self) 的怀疑

      • 传统哲学中的 “自我 (Self)” 概念: 在笛卡尔等理性主义哲学家看来,自我 (self) 是一个 统一的、持久的、不变的实体, 是我们 思想、意识和经验的中心。 自我被认为是 灵魂 (soul) 或 心灵 (mind), 是一个独立的、与身体不同的 精神实体。 自我被认为是 identity (同一性) 的基础, 是我们之所以在不同时间、不同状态下仍然是 “同一个我” 的原因。

      • 休谟的质疑: 缺乏 “自我的印象” 休谟同样运用经验主义原则,质疑了 “自我” 概念的经验基础。 他的论证可以概括为:

        1. 我们所有的知觉仍然来自于印象和观念。
        2. 当我们进行内省 (introspection),试图去认识 “自我” 时,我们所能意识到的,都只是我们当下的各种知觉状态,例如思想、情感、感觉、意象等等。 我们意识到的只是一系列 不断变化的心理内容 (perceptions)
        3. 我们并没有获得任何 “自我” 本身的印象。 无论我们如何深入地内省,我们都无法找到一个独立于这些知觉内容之外的、持续不变的 “自我” 的印象。 我们找不到一个能够始终如一地保持同一性的 “自我” 的经验。
        4. 根据 “印象原则”, 如果我们没有关于 “自我” 的印象,那么我们关于 “自我” 的观念就是缺乏经验基础的、虚构的。
      • “捆束理论 (Bundle Theory of Self)”: 自我只是知觉的集合 因此,休谟提出了著名的 “捆束理论 (Bundle Theory of Self)”。 他认为, 自我 (self) 并非一个单一的、持久的实体,而只是一种 “捆束 (bundle)” 或 “集合 (collection)”, 是由 各种不同的知觉 (perceptions) 组成的, 这些知觉以 快速的连续 (rapid succession) 互相取代和变化。 就像一个剧院里, 不同的角色轮番登场, 构成了一个 知觉的剧场 (theatre of perceptions), 但并不存在一个 统一的、持久的 “自我” 作为这个剧场的 所有者或观看者

        休谟的比喻非常形象:

        对于我个人而言,每当我最亲密地审视我称之为 “我自己” 的东西时,我总是会碰到某一特定的知觉,比如热或冷、光或暗、爱或恨、痛苦或快乐的印象。 我在任何时候都绝无法在没有知觉的情况下把握住我自己,并且也绝不能观察到任何别的东西,而只能观察到知觉。[1]

        人心灵是某种东西的剧场,各种知觉相继出现;它们像舞台上的演员一样,来来去去,变幻着姿势和场景。 在整个运动中,它们之间可能存在着某种真实的同一性或单纯性,但这并没有给它们杂乱的连续性带来哪怕是最细微的相似性。 同一种心灵绝非由一个永恒不变的方式构成。 它只是一连串知觉,由难以想象的速度彼此承继,并处于永恒的流动和运动之中。[2]

        休谟的“捆束理论” 解构了传统哲学中 “自我” 的形而上学观念, 认为自我并非一个神秘的实体, 而是一种 心理现象, 是我们的 知觉经验的组织和模式。 “自我” 的同一性并非实体的同一性, 而是 知觉之间联系和相似性的连续性 造成的 心理幻觉

      休谟对外部世界 (External World) 的怀疑

      • 常识与哲学中的 “外部世界 (External World)” 概念: 在日常生活中,我们都 自然而然地相信存在着一个独立于我们意识之外的 “外部世界 (external world)”。 这个外部世界包含着各种 物体、事物和事件, 它们 持续存在 (persistently exist), 即使当我们不感知它们的时候, 它们仍然在那里。 哲学上,也普遍承认存在一个 客观的、独立于主体意识之外的物质世界

      • 休谟的质疑: 缺乏 “外部世界的印象” 休谟基于其经验主义和怀疑主义立场,对我们 关于外部世界的知识的可靠性 提出了质疑。 他的论证可以概括为:

        1. 我们所有的知识都来源于经验, 而经验的基础是感官印象。
        2. 我们所有的感官印象都是主观的、内在的, 都只发生在我们自己的心灵内部。 当我们 “看到” 一棵树时, 我们直接获得的只是一种 视觉印象, 这个印象是 发生在我们心灵中的, 而非发生在我们心灵之外的 “外部世界” 中。 我们并没有 直接地、立即地 感知到 “外部世界” 本身。
        3. 我们无法证明我们的印象与 “外部世界” 之间存在着必然的、可靠的对应关系。 我们 永远无法走出自己的心灵, 去直接比较我们的印象与 “外部世界” 是否一致。 我们只能 间接地通过更多的印象 (例如不同的感官) 来验证印象, 但这仍然是在 印象的领域内循环, 无法真正触及 “外部世界” 本身。
        4. 因此,我们关于 “外部世界” 存在的信念, 以及我们关于 “外部世界” 的知识, 都缺乏充分的经验基础, 都建立在不确定的推论和假设之上。
      • 批判 “双重存在 (Double Existence)” 理论: 休谟批判了当时流行的一种解释外部世界存在的理论,即 “双重存在 (Double Existence)” 理论。 这种理论认为, 我们所感知到的 印象 (perceptions) 具有 双重存在: 既作为 我们心灵中的心理现象 (mental phenomena) 存在, 又作为 外部世界中物体的副本 (copies of external objects) 存在。 我们通过印象来间接地认识外部世界。 休谟认为, 这种 “双重存在” 的假设是 没有根据的。 我们 没有任何印象 能够证明存在着一个 独立于我们心灵之外的外部世界, 并且我们的印象是这个外部世界的 精确副本

      • 批判 “因果推论 (Causal Inference)” 论证: 另一种论证外部世界存在的思路是 “因果推论 (Causal Inference)”。 这种论证认为, 我们之所以相信存在外部世界, 是因为 我们的印象必然有其原因 (cause), 而最合理的解释就是 外部世界的物体 是我们印象的 原因。 休谟也批判了这种论证。 基于他的 因果怀疑论, 他认为我们无法证明 因果关系的必然性, 我们对因果关系的理解仅仅是 心理习惯的产物。 因此, 我们 无法通过因果推论可靠地证明 外部世界的存在。

      • 结论: 对外部世界的信念是习惯和本能,而非理性证明 最终,休谟认为, 我们 相信存在外部世界 以及 相信外部世界持续存在和独立存在 的信念, 更多的是来自于 本能、自然倾向和心理习惯 (instinct, natural tendency, and custom of mind), 而非 理性论证或经验证据。 这种信念虽然在日常生活中非常实用和重要, 但 在哲学上, 仍然是一种无法完全证明的假设。 我们 永远无法摆脱主观经验的限制, 去获得关于 “客观外部世界” 的 绝对确定性知识

      总结: 温和的怀疑主义与经验主义的局限

      休谟对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑, 并非是要 彻底否定 这些概念的日常实用价值或经验现象。 他的目的在于 揭示这些传统形而上学概念缺乏充分的经验基础, 强调 人类理性认识世界的局限性, 以及 经验主义哲学的边界

      休谟的怀疑主义是 温和的、学术性的, 而非 彻底的、实践性的。 他承认, 在日常生活中, 我们 不得不 假设外部世界存在, 不得不认为自己是同一个自我, 不得不运用因果推理进行预测和行动。 但作为哲学家, 他有责任 揭示这些信念的哲学基础的脆弱性, 提醒人们 理性认知的局限, 避免 独断论和形而上学 speculation, 将哲学研究 限定在经验的范围内

      休谟的怀疑主义 并非绝望的悲观主义, 而是一种 清醒的认识和理性的谦逊。 他认为, 虽然我们无法获得绝对可靠的形而上学知识, 但我们仍然可以通过 经验观察、科学方法和道德情感, 来 理解人性、认识世界、改善社会和提升生活将哲学从形而上学的玄思中解放出来, 转向对人性和经验世界的务实研究, 正是休谟哲学的重要贡献和永恒价值所在。

      希望以上详细解释能够帮助您理解休谟对实体、自我和外部世界的怀疑主义思想。 如果您还有其他问题, 欢迎继续提问。

      注释:

      [1] 休谟,《人性论》第一卷,论知性,第四部分,第六节,“论人格的同一性”,[SBN 252-253]。 [2] 休谟,《人性论》第一卷,论知性,第四部分,第二节,“论怀疑论与理性无关”,[SBN 253]。

      (注: [SBN xxx] 指的是 《人性论》的标准版本 A Treatise of Human Nature, edited by L.A. Selby-Bigge and P.H. Nidditch (Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1978) 的页码。)

    1. 权利作为王牌 (Rights as Trumps):

      Dworkin的“权利作为王牌”(Rights as Trumps)是他法理学思想中的一个关键概念,提出这一观点主要是为了应对当时主流的法律实证主义和功利主义观点。理解这个概念需要从Dworkin对法律和道德的整体看法出发,特别是他对个人权利在法律中的优先性和不可妥协性的看法。

      1. “权利作为王牌”的背景

      Dworkin提出“权利作为王牌”这一观点,是对功利主义法律实证主义的批判。在这两种理论中,法律的有效性通常是以其社会效益或经济效益为衡量标准。而功利主义尤其强调最大化幸福,这种思路可能导致个体权利的牺牲,以换取社会的整体最大利益。

      Dworkin认为,个人权利应当具有优先性,即使是在一些看似有利于社会整体利益的情境中,个体的基本权利也应当得到保障。换句话说,个体的权利不能随意被牺牲,即使牺牲它能够带来更大的社会效益。

      2. “王牌”概念的含义

      在Dworkin的理论中,“王牌”(trump)是一个比喻,意思是个人的权利比其他利益或法律原则更具有优先性。就像扑克牌中的王牌,它可以击败其他的牌,即使是面临更强大的牌时,王牌仍然可以决定游戏的结果。

      具体来说,“权利作为王牌”的含义是: - 当个人的基本权利和其他社会或政治目标发生冲突时,这些权利应当优先得到保护。 - 即使有强烈的公共利益或社会效益要求,个人的权利也不能因为功利主义或效率的考虑而被剥夺或妥协。 - 这个观点明确了权利不可交易,这意味着在一定条件下,法律和政府不得通过牺牲个体权利来追求所谓的社会或经济效益。

      3. 与功利主义的对立

      Dworkin的“权利作为王牌”观点是对功利主义多数原则的反动。功利主义的核心观点是最大化整体幸福利益,即如果牺牲少数人的权利能为大多数人带来更大的好处,那么牺牲是可以接受的。

      Dworkin认为,个体的基本权利不能被牺牲,哪怕为了更大的社会利益。他批评功利主义忽视了个体权利的不可侵犯性和尊严,提出权利作为王牌的观点强调,某些权利是不可被违反的,即使这种侵犯可能会带来更高的社会效益。

      例如,言论自由宗教信仰自由是个体权利的一部分,即使这些权利行使的结果可能带来一定的社会冲突或不便,它们依然应当被法律保障,因为这些权利是不可妥协的。

      4. 与法律实证主义的对立

      法律实证主义的代表人物如霍布斯鲍姆等认为,法律的有效性是基于权威机构的认可和制定,不必关注道德或权利的内容。因此,法律规则的权威性并不依赖于它是否符合某种道德标准或是否保护个体的基本权利。

      Dworkin则认为,法律不仅仅是社会规则的集合,它应当反映更高的道德价值,尤其是正义个体权利。他的“权利作为王牌”理论就是反对那种认为法律规则可以完全独立于道德的看法。Dworkin认为,个体的基本权利必须受到保障,法律应该为这些权利提供最高的保护

      5. 权利与法律的关系

      Dworkin在其经典著作《权利的帝国》中详细阐述了权利作为王牌的概念。他认为,法律体系中应当有明确的原则和规定来保障基本权利,这些权利应当在面临冲突时具有优先权

      例如: - 言论自由:如果某个法律要求某些言论必须被限制,而该言论涉及一个人的基本信仰或表达自由,那么该法律不能以效率或社会安定为理由去限制言论自由。因为言论自由作为基本权利,是无法通过简单的社会利益交换来被妥协的。 - 生命权:即使某项法律可能有助于社会的整体安全或稳定,个体的生命权也不应被牺牲。例如,在战争或紧急情况下,某些基本的生命权应当得到无条件保障

      6. 批评与支持

      支持者: - Dworkin的“权利作为王牌”观点为个体权利的保护提供了有力的理论支持,尤其是在面对政治或社会压力时,确保个体不被随意剥夺或侵犯。 - 它强调了法律的道德性,认为法律不仅仅是社会规则的集合,还是维护正义和保障基本人权的工具。

      批评者: - 一些批评者认为,Dworkin的这一观点过于理想化,忽视了现实中的复杂性。在实际的社会治理中,如何平衡个体权利和公共利益,如何处理权利之间的冲突,是一个复杂且困难的问题。 - 也有观点认为,权利作为王牌可能导致法律上的僵化,即对于一些在现实中可能具有争议的权利,无法灵活应对和调整。

      7. 总结

      Dworkin的“权利作为王牌”理论强调,个体的基本权利在法律体系中具有至高无上的地位,它们不能因为公共利益或其他社会目标而被牺牲。这一观点深刻影响了现代法理学,尤其是在涉及人权公民自由等问题时,提供了一种新的思考框架,强调在复杂的法律和社会环境中,个体权利应当受到不可妥协的保护

    1. 关系经济理论 (Relational Economic Theory) 的构建

      确实,朱尔斯·科尔曼(Jules Coleman) 在其学术生涯中对法理学、法律经济学以及侵权法领域作出了诸多贡献,特别是在侵权法的研究中,科尔曼提出了关系经济理论(Relational Economic Theory),该理论结合了法律分析经济学分析,并且与传统的法律经济学有一定的不同。

      1. 关系经济理论的背景

      科尔曼在侵权法领域提出的关系经济理论,试图通过一种新的视角来理解法律责任,特别是侵权法中的赔偿机制和法律责任的分配。他强调,不同于传统的法律经济学(Law and Economics)强调效率的分析,关系经济理论更多关注的是社会关系信任合作网络在法律规则和经济行为中的作用。

      传统的法律经济学主要聚焦于利用经济学的工具来分析法律规则的效率和效果,着重于如何通过法律实现资源配置的最优效率。而科尔曼的关系经济理论则将这一分析框架扩展到法律关系本身,特别是关注个体之间的关系如何通过法律得到保护和调节,从而影响经济行为和社会互动。

      2. 关系经济理论的核心概念

      科尔曼的关系经济理论有以下几个重要的特点:

      1) 法律与经济的交织

      科尔曼强调,法律规则不仅仅是单纯的效率工具,它还反映了个体之间社会关系的结构。在侵权法的领域,侵权行为和责任分配不仅是经济活动的结果,还与社会关系的构建、信任机制和合作网络的形成密切相关。通过法律保障个体间的责任和义务,可以促进社会关系的稳定与合作。

      2) 侵权法中的社会关系

      与传统的法律经济学关注如何通过赔偿来最大化资源配置不同,科尔曼的关系经济理论在分析侵权法时更注重个体之间的社会联系。例如,侵权行为不只是经济损失的赔偿问题,更重要的是如何在法律框架下,构建和维护个体之间的社会信任和合作关系。

      3) 长远的经济与社会合作

      科尔曼认为,侵权法的主要目标不仅是补偿受害者的损失,更是维持和促进长远的社会合作关系。这与传统的赔偿至上的理念不同,他的理论关注长期合作的价值,认为通过法律调节社会关系,可以为未来的经济活动和合作提供稳定的环境。

      4) 多元化的损害赔偿机制

      在传统法律经济学框架下,损害赔偿的目标通常是通过金钱补偿来恢复受害者的状态。然而,科尔曼的关系经济理论认为,赔偿不仅仅是经济层面的补偿,它还涉及到心理和社会层面的修复。通过法律制度的设计,可以促进社会关系的和谐和修复,进而增强社会整体的稳定性。

      3. 与传统法律经济学的区别

      虽然科尔曼的关系经济理论也涉及经济学分析,但它与传统的法律经济学存在显著差异:

      1) 重点不同

      传统的法律经济学(如罗纳德·科斯吉尔伯特·斯塔克等学者的理论)侧重于通过经济效率来分析法律制度,认为法律规则应该最小化交易成本和冲突,从而促进资源的最优配置。而科尔曼的关系经济理论则侧重于分析法律规则如何影响个体之间的关系,特别是如何通过法律构建和维持社会信任与合作网络。

      2) 法律目标的不同理解

      法律经济学主要关注效率:即通过法律减少社会资源的浪费,提升资源配置效率。而科尔曼的关系经济理论则更加注重法律如何通过调节社会关系来保障长期合作和信任。这种理论视角更加注重社会互动和情感联系的维度,而非单纯的经济利益。

      3) 法理学视角

      科尔曼的理论更接近法理学,尤其是在侵权法的研究中,强调法律不仅仅是一个效率工具,它还反映了法律对社会互动和关系的深远影响。通过侵权法,法律不仅仅是为了补偿经济损失,还承载着维护社会合作与信任的功能。

      4. 关系经济理论在侵权法中的应用

      科尔曼的关系经济理论对侵权法的影响主要体现在以下几个方面:

      1) 社会关系中的责任分配

      科尔曼认为,侵权法应该通过合理的责任分配来维护个体之间的合作与信任。在传统的侵权法理论中,侵权行为主要关心的是经济损失的赔偿,但在科尔曼看来,这种分析过于片面,忽视了赔偿背后更深层次的社会关系。他提出,责任分配应该考虑到对受害人和加害人之间关系的调节,这种调节有助于促进社会的长期稳定。

      2) 长远的经济关系

      通过侵权法的设计,法律不仅仅补偿当期的损失,它还促进了社会合作的长期发展。科尔曼认为,侵权法中的赔偿机制应该考虑到如何通过法律手段修复受害者与加害人之间的关系,从而保持社会的稳定和合作。

      3) 社会信任的法律保障

      科尔曼的关系经济理论还强调,法律不仅仅是经济行为的调节工具,它还是社会信任的保障机制。在侵权法中,赔偿和责任分配应该体现法律对社会信任的保护,而不是单纯的金钱补偿

      5. 总结

      朱尔斯·科尔曼侵权法领域提出的关系经济理论,为我们提供了一种新的思考框架,结合了法律分析经济学分析,但却不同于传统的法律经济学。科尔曼的理论更加注重社会关系信任在法律体系中的作用,特别是在侵权法中如何通过合理的责任分配和赔偿机制,促进社会合作与信任的长期稳定。

      通过这一理论,科尔曼强调了法律不仅仅是为了经济效率而服务,它同样对社会关系和人际互动有着深远的影响,尤其是在构建长期稳定的社会合作关系方面。因此,关系经济理论为我们提供了一个法律与社会互动更加紧密结合的全新视角。

    1. 文章详细介绍了他的自然法理论,以及他对当代自然法复兴的贡献。

      apun_debug: 指令:提取关键点。

      分析用户查询和文章内容: 1. 用户要求从文章中提取关键点。 2. 文章主题是介绍约翰·菲尼斯的著作《自然法与自然权利》及其思想。 3. 文章结构清晰,包含多个小标题,方便提取关键信息。

      提取关键点策略: 1. 总结性开头: 提取文章开头对《自然法与自然权利》的地位评价,作为文章的总括性关键点。 2. 对比核心: 抓住文章核心的对比,即菲尼斯与施特劳斯的自然法思想差异。 3. 菲尼斯的核心思想: 提取菲尼斯自然法理论的核心概念和创新点,例如: - 对自然法理论流行解读的批判 - 基本善 (生命、知识、游戏等) - 自明性论证 - 实践理性优先 - 有限的价值多元主义 4. 菲尼斯与不同思想流派的关系: 提取菲尼斯与不同思想流派的关联和区别: - 与法律实证主义的关系(复杂性、方法论和实质主张的差异) - 与自由主义的关系(貌合神离) 5. 文章的总结性评价: 提取文章结尾对菲尼斯著作的总结性评价和历史地位判断。

      组织关键点: 按照文章结构,将提取的关键点组织成逻辑清晰的列表,方便用户快速理解文章核心内容。

      润色和精简: 对提取的关键点进行润色和精简,确保语言简洁明了,重点突出。例如,将一些例子和细节性的论证适当概括,提炼核心观点。 避免直接复制粘贴文章段落,进行总结和归纳。

      检查关键点完整性: 最后,检查提取的关键点是否全面覆盖文章的核心内容,是否准确表达了文章的主要观点,确保关键点能够帮助用户快速把握文章精髓。 特别是检查是否遗漏了关于菲尼斯理论创新,突破和贡献的描述。

      反思与迭代: 重新审视提取的关键点,思考是否还有更简洁或更全面的表达方式。例如, “菲尼斯vs.施特劳斯” 可以更精炼地表达为 “菲尼斯与施特劳斯的自然法思想对比”。 价值多元主义的描述可以精简,突出“有限的多元主义” 和 “与自由主义的复杂关系”。

      最终策略调整: 在以上分析和思考后,最终确定按照结构化和精炼化的方式提取关键点,力求用简洁的语言概括文章核心思想,并突出菲尼斯理论的创新性和重要性。 确保关键点既能抓住文章重点,又能方便用户快速理解和记忆。 将“实践必要性论证的批判” 也加入关键点,因为它也是文章批判和菲尼斯理论背景的重要组成部分。 增加一个关键点 “菲尼斯的贡献与意义”, 总结文章对菲尼斯历史地位和理论价值的评价。 最终输出的关键点应该是一个结构清晰,内容完整,重点突出的摘要。

      Strategizing complete. Proceeding with response generation. <ctrl3348>``` 关键点提取如下:

      文章主题: 介绍约翰·菲尼斯及其著作《自然法与自然权利》

      核心观点:

      • 《自然法与自然权利》的地位:
        • 启蒙时代后最重要的自然法著作之一,与第二版并列。
        • 当代无可争议的经典,出版不久即成经典。
      • 菲尼斯 vs. 施特劳斯:
        • 菲尼斯将自然法研究定义为哲学研究,区别于对自然法理论的思想史研究 (施特劳斯)。
        • 施特劳斯偏重思想史梳理,菲尼斯更侧重哲学论证自然法的真理性。
        • 菲尼斯对施特劳斯的目的论宇宙观与自然正当的关联提出批评。
      • 自然法面临的理论困境与“虚假繁荣”:
        • 现代性冲击:自然科学兴起,历史感和相对主义抬头,从“事实”推不出“价值”成为普遍法则,自然法面临挑战。
        • 实践必要性论证的缺陷:以避免恶果为理由拥抱自然法,存在“诉诸后果谬误”,且不能真正证明自然法的真理。
        • 当代自然法“复兴”实为“虚假繁荣”,缺乏有力的理论证明,多停留在实践层面。
      • 菲尼斯对自然法的“拯救”与理论创新:
        • 批判对自然法理论的流行解读: 驳斥自然法与法律实证主义的“恶法非法” vs. “恶法亦法” 的简单对立,认为自然法主要是伦理学和政治哲学理论,而非狭隘的法哲学。
        • 提出基本善理论: 论证存在生命、知识、游戏、审美经验、社会性、实践合理性、“宗教”等一系列自明的基本善 (价值)。
        • 强调基本善的自明性: 基本善无需证明,为有经验的智者自明,通过反驳怀疑论来间接证明。
        • 从实践理性理解自然法: 与传统自然法学家不同,菲尼斯从实践理性而非人性出发理解自然法,认为需先领会人的目的 (基本善) 才能理解人性。
      • 菲尼斯与法律实证主义:
        • 方法论层面: 批评法律实证主义的描述性研究预设了评价性视角,指出描述以评价为前提。 但文章作者认为菲尼斯混淆了研究的价值和研究对象的价值,且对描述性研究的理解存在偏差。
        • 实质层面: 菲尼斯的法哲学与法律实证主义差异不大,尊重实在法,批评法律实证主义理论狭隘,认为自然法理论可包容法律实证主义。
      • 菲尼斯与自由主义:
        • 菲尼斯的自然法理论与自由主义并非天然盟友,存在复杂关系。
        • 共同善: 强调共同体的重要性,但坚持个人本位,认为共同善是实现个人良善生活的工具。
        • 有限的价值多元主义: 承认价值多元,但强调存在有限的、不言自明的基本价值,可能倾向于家长主义措施,与自由主义的多元宽容度有所不同。
      • 菲尼斯的贡献与意义:
        • 菲尼斯使自然法在智识层面重获吸引力,为自然法在现代知识架构中辩护。
        • 创造了不同思想流派 (分析哲学、天主教、施特劳斯学派等) 友好交流的理论空间。
        • 尽管理论可能并非完美无缺,但菲尼斯因其“自然法学家”的身份和贡献而重要,在自然法思想史上留下重要印记。

      总结: 菲尼斯的《自然法与自然权利》是一部重要的自然法著作,通过批判流行观点、重建理论基础,有力地回应了现代性对自然法的挑战,并在自然法思想史上占据重要地位。 ```

    1. 国际法之父

      格劳秀斯(Hugo Grotius)通常被称为“近代国际法之父”,而不是“国际法之父”,这一称号的界定和历史背景有其特殊的原因。

      1. 国际法的概念与格劳秀斯的贡献

      格劳秀斯的《战争与和平法》(De Jure Belli ac Pacis)被视为国际法学科的奠基之作,首次系统地阐述了国际法的基本原则和规范。他的贡献在于提出了国际法不应仅仅是各国政府之间的契约和约定,还应当涉及更广泛的、适用于所有国家的普遍法则,强调国家间的平等和对战时行为的规制。这些基本原则和思考方式为后来的国际法体系的形成奠定了基础。

      然而,“国际法”这一概念的历史并非从格劳秀斯开始。在中世纪和文艺复兴时期,已存在一些国家间关系的规制,尤其是通过教会法、自然法和海洋法等形式。不过,格劳秀斯的贡献在于,他将这些不同的法理和原则系统化,并为其提供了理论支撑。

      2. 为什么是“近代国际法之父”

      格劳秀斯通常被称为“近代国际法之父”,而不是“国际法之父”,这主要与历史发展国际法学科的演变有关。

      • “近代”与“传统”法的区分:国际法的起源可以追溯到古代和中世纪。例如,古希腊、罗马时期就有对战争、外交、海洋等方面的法律规定,而基督教教会法对中世纪的国际关系也有重要影响。格劳秀斯的《战争与和平法》是基于自然法理性主义的立场,强调普遍适用的国际规则,而不仅仅是宗教或特定历史背景下的权力政治。

      • 奠定近代国际法学科的基础:格劳秀斯的理论体系具有近代性,他为国际法的基础提供了现代化的框架,将国际法视为一种独立的学科,而不仅仅是国家间的契约与利益安排。这种对国际法的规范性和系统性的探讨,使得他的工作成为国际法学科的奠基之作。因此,他被称为“近代国际法之父”,即在“近代”这个特定的历史时期内,他的思想奠定了国际法的体系。

      • 国际法的系统性:在格劳秀斯之前,国际法的观念虽然有一定的存在,但缺乏系统化的理论框架。格劳秀斯通过强调自然法普遍原则(例如战争与和平的法则、外交官的特权等),为国际法的发展提供了一个可操作的理论模型。这个模型奠定了后来的国际法演变,尤其是在西ph系统化和条约制定方面。

      3. 历史背景与学科演化

      • 在格劳秀斯之前,虽然存在诸如《和平法》或《外交法》之类的思想或实践,但是这些通常是某些特定文明或地区的产物。格劳秀斯之所以被称为“近代国际法之父”,是因为他提出的国际法原则超越了地域性的局限,试图构建一种普遍适用于所有国家的法则。因此,他不仅被视为近代国际法的奠基者,也为后来国际法的全球化奠定了理论基础。

      • 与“国际法之父”相比,格劳秀斯的工作更加现代性,他提出的理论体系直接影响了后来的国际法学者,尤其是19世纪的海牙和平法联合国等国际机构的法律框架。

      4. 格劳秀斯与后来的国际法学者

      格劳秀斯的理论直接影响了沃尔福(Christian Wolff)、维特(Vattel)等后来的国际法学者,尤其是在现代国际法的某些关键概念上,如国家主权、国际冲突解决机制等。这些理论的进一步发展构建了近代国际法的体系和内容,使得格劳秀斯的地位作为“近代国际法之父”得到了历史性的确认。

      结论

      因此,格劳秀斯被称为“近代国际法之父”,是因为他系统化和理论化了国际法的概念,为近代国际法体系的构建提供了核心的理论基础。虽然他并不是第一个涉及国际法的思想家,但他开创的现代国际法理论框架使他成为了近代国际法的奠基者。所以,“近代”这一限定非常关键,它指的是格劳秀斯奠定的现代、全球化的国际法体系的基础。

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      Reply to the reviewers

      Our manuscript shows that, in cycling cells, the proneural master regulator transcription factor ASCL1 binds preferentially to pro-neurogenic enhancers in G1 phase of the cell cycle but this binding does not drive gene expression. As cells move to S/G2, ASCL1 binding is now enriched at promoters of pro-proliferative genes where it activates gene expression to maintain a pro-proliferative progenitor state. However, stalling of the cell cycle in G1 allows ASCL1 binding at enhancers to facilitate H3K27ac deposition and pro-neurogenic gene expression, driving the differentiation programme. We thus show hitherto unknown cell cycle dependency of distinct transcriptional programmes driven by the same transcription factor at different cell cycle stages and reveal why a lengthening specifically of G1 can allow engagement of a differentiation programme by turning unproductive factor binding into a productive interaction.

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      We note, Reviewer 1:

      This is an interesting study and provides new insight into the dual mechanisms of proneural transcription factors in neuroblastoma proliferation and differentiation. Since ASCL1 has similar dual roles in proliferation and neural differentiation in normal CNS development, the results of this report will improve the understanding of this factor more generally.

      from Reviewer 2:

      This work addresses an important long-standing question: how can Ascl1 simultaneously promote cell cycle and neurogenesis? It will be of relevance for the fields of neurogenesis, stem cell biology, reprogramming, and cancer biology.

      We thank the reviewers for their very positive evaluations of the paper and its implications. Where questions and concerns were raised we have addressed them fully, below.

      1. Point-by-point description of the revisions

      Reviewer 1:

      “The authors have not done a motif analysis of the ASCL1-ChIPseq so it is not clear whether E-box motifs are enriched/dominate. This is an important control. Also, it would be very useful to compare the ASCL1-ChIP-seq with other published datasets in other neural tissues, as an additional control.”

      Prompted by this comment, we have performed motif analysis on the consensus set of ASCL1 ChIP-seq peaks in the DMSO control samples (i.e. freely cycling cells). This identified the canonical ASCL1 E-box motif as the most significantly enriched, occurring in the majority of peaks:

      We have now added this motif analysis output to Figure 1A.

      As requested, we downloaded a previously published ASCL1 ChIP-seq dataset (Păun et al. 2023) where human iPSCs were differentiated into cortical neurons. We find that ~25% of our consensus peakset intersects with binding sites detected in cortical neurons, representing just under 50% of this latter set. This is a large intersection of 25,000 peaks, especially considering the developmental differences between the two cell types (neuroblastic progenitors of the PNS versus more differentiated cortical neurons of the CNS). We have now added this figure to Supplementary Figure 1.

      “Most of the analysis is done on regions that are less than 50 kb from the nearest TSS. This restricts the analysis to about half the peaks. Since they observe a difference between the G2M peak and the G1 peaks in their distance from the TSSOur ChIP-seq protocol was very sensitive and detected even low levels/transient ASCL1 binding, giving a large number of ASCL1 peaks. Consequently, a significant fraction of the genes in the genome became associated with ASCL1 binding and so we used a stringent distance based cut-off based on the assumption that there is a higher likelihood of enhancers acting on nearby promoters, rather than those further away. When we link all peaks to their nearest TSS, irrespective of distance, we find a similar trend, namely G1 enriched ASCL1 binding is associated with neuronal developmental processes, whereas SG2M enriched binding is uniquely associated with mitotic and cell cycle processes, (although we do now see some axonal terms appear under these less stringent conditions). These two figures have now been added to Supplementary Figure 4.

      “The correlate the genes that decline with ASCL1 KO and the peaks from the ChIP-seq using GO terms, but would be very useful to determine how many of these genes are direct targets. This can bve done by showing the correlaiton between the RNAseq and the ChIP-seq on a gene-by-gene basis rather than using GO.”

      Thank you for this useful suggestion. To investigate any correlation between the ASCL1 ChIP-seq and ASCL1 KO RNA-seq, we quantified the log2 fold change in expression level (WT/KO) following ASCL1 KO for any gene that was associated with an ASCL1 binding site in asynchronous cycling cells. Plotting these fold changes as a histogram/density plot (left) reveals that these genes generally exhibited a positive fold change i.e. a decrease in expression level following ASCL1 KO (blue dotted line shows the mean log2 fold change for the ASCL1 bound genes, black dotted line is at 0). Looking specifically at the 1000 genes associated with the most significant ASCL1 ChIP-seq peaks confirms this (right), where more genes show large decreases in gene expression following KO, where the local polynomial regression (LOESS; locally estimated scatterplot smoothing, black line) is consistently higher than 1.

      Left plot: Log2 fold change in expression level for all ASCL1 bound genes, where positive fold change indicates a reduction in expression level following ASCL1 knockout, and a negative fold change indicates an increased expression following knockout. The mean value (blue dotted line), mode and median are all greater than 0 (black dotted line) indicating general reduction in expression level following ASCL1 knockout.

      Right plot: 1000 genes associated with the strongest ASCL1 peaks (normalised peak score from DiffBind) were plotted against their fold change in expression following ASCL1 knockout. There is a large amount of variability, but the local polynomial regression (LOESS, black line) is consistently greater than 1 (red dotted line; no fold change).

      We have now added the right figure to Supplementary Figure 2

      Reviewer 2 also raised similar concerns:

      “Other minor points: In figure 2, it would be interesting to display the overlap between bound and regulated genes.”

      As suggested, we looked at the overlap between genes bound by ASCL1 in DMSO treated, freely cycling cells and intersected them with genes that showed a significant change in expression level following ASCL1 KO. This reveals that the majority of bound genes are regulated by ASCL1. Put another way, the large majority of genes that exhibited differential expression following ASCL1 KO were bound by ASCL1 in WT cells.

      We have now added this Venn diagram to Figure 2.

      “The lack of ASCL1 dependence of the G1 neuronal genes (Fig 5B) is interesting, but may be confounded by the possibility that these sites are driven equally well by a redundant proneural trnascription factor, like NEUROD1 or NEUROG. This possibility should be addressed by carrying out ChIP for these factors at select sites (G2M vs G1). Alternatively ChIP-seq for these factors would be ideal. Without these experiments the conclusion is not supported: "This indicates that ASCL1 is capable of binding to neuronal targets in G1 phase of the cell cycle in neuroblastoma cells but is not supporting their expression under cycling conditions."

      The problem of redundant TFs is also an issue with the experiments to teat the effects of long G1 arrest.”

      Thank you for raising this possibility, which prompted us to look at expression of other proneural proteins in these neuroblastoma cells. Consistent with the important role for ASCL1 in neuroblastoma previously reported in contrast to lack of reports about prominent roles for other proneural transcription factors, we quantified the expression levels of other proneural proteins in parental SK-N-BE(2)-C cells and the ASCL1 KO clone. We found that the expression level of all other proneural factors was very low, especially when compared to ASCL1, and did not increase following ASCL1 KO, showing no signs of compensatory uplift. We therefore conclude that there is a very low likelihood of interference from these factors. Moreover, methodologies such as ChIP-seq for these other proneural proteins are unlikely to work given their extremely low expression levels. We now include these findings in Supplementary Figure 5.

      “The finding that G1 ASCL1 sites show less accessibility than G2M sites is interesting; is thre a reduction in ASCL1 ChIP-seq signal at these sites as well? Or is ASCL1 bound but not able to open the chromaitn at these sites?”

      We have shown in Supplementary Figure 3 of the original manuscript that there is a reduced level of ASCL1 binding at G1 enriched sites compared to SG2M enriched sites when looking at asynchronous, freely cycling cells SK-N-BE(2)-C, and two other neuroblastoma cell lines.

      To further investigate this, we performed this same analysis on the individual SK-N-BE(2)-C asynchronous replicates independently, which showed the same trend. These freely cycling cells comprise approximately 65% G0/G1 cells and 35% SG2M cells (Figure 3C). Despite more cells being in G1 in asynchronous freely cycling cells, the ASCL1 ChIP-seq signal is markedly reduced for sites which are preferentially bound by ASCL1 during G1 phase. Addressing the Reviewer’s question, this indicates that the lower levels of accessibility at G1 enriched sites versus G2M enriched sites are a result of reduced binding of ASCL1 in G1.

      We hypothesised that reduced binding in G1 could be a result of lower ASCL1 protein concentrations. To address this, we performed ASCL1 antibody-based staining and hoechst based cell cycle analysis in SK-N-BE(2)-C cells, followed by flow cytometry. This enabled us to individually quantify ASCL1 protein levels in specific cell cycle subpopulations. The relative cell size changes across the cell cycle, so to account for this we plotted the relative changes in ASCL1 protein levels with the relative changes in cell size. This revealed that ASCL1 protein levels in G2M were significantly higher than expected if solely due to changes in cell size (and the levels in S phase were lower than expected for the cell size). In contrast, when we performed the same analysis for the housekeeping gene, TBP, we observed more consistent protein levels that scaled proportionately with cell size. This reveals a degree of cell cycle-dependent regulation of ASCL1 protein levels, which may account for differences in overall binding between the two phases, and indicate that reduced ASCL1 binding in G1 may be due to a lower amount of ASCL1 protein compared to the level in other cell cycle stages (normalised for cell size).

      We have now moved the SK-N-BE(2)-C plot from original Supplementary Figure 3 to Figure 4, and added the results above to Figure 4.

      “The reduction in accessible sites in the ASCL1 KO for the G2M sites is consistent with the effects on proliferation, but the effect is very modest. Would this effect be greater if the analysis of the ATAC-seq data were confined to sites with E-boxes? it would be useful to know what percentage of the accessible sites have an E-box and what percent of these sites are lost in the ASCL1 KO. This might show the importance of redundant proneural TFs.”

      We now undertake additional analysis to address this important point directly. Of the 14,460 peaks that exhibit enriched ASCL1 binding during SG2M, 9,228 contain a canonical ASCL1 E-box motif (NNVVCAGCTGBN, taken from HOMER motif analysis above), as determined by FIMO, MEME suite (q-value We quantified the ATAC-seq signal at these peaks containing high confidence ASCL1 E-box motifs before and after ASCL1 KO and found that this extra filtering step had no impact on the magnitude of the change in accessibility following ASCL1 KO. This suggests that ASCL1 knockout has an equal effect on the accessibility of bound sites regardless of the underlying motif, and indirectly indicates that even the peaks showing degenerate ASCL1 motifs show a reduction in accessibility following ASCL1 knockout. This latter set could include sites where ASCL1 binding is mediated or enhanced by a cofactor.

      Reviewer 2:

      “There is however, one important concern to be clarified before strong conclusions can be extracted from the data: are palbociclib-treated cells comparable to control cells? 7 days of G1 arrest could have led to differentiation of at least a fraction of the NSCs and therefore the increased expression of neuronal genes (and chromatin changes) could reflect a higher percentage of differentiated cells (or higher degree of differentiation) in that sample rather than increased expression of neuronal genes in NSCs. A characterization of the cultures after the 7-day treatment is therefore necessary before drawing any conclusions. This could be done through immunohistochemistry to assess the presence of differentiated cells and control for the continuous and homogeneous expression of stemness markers (some useful markers include Nestin, Sox2, DCX, Tubb3 or GFAP). The reversibility assay, as shown in Figure S2 would also be very informative for the 7-day time point.”

      For ASCL1 ChIP-seq experiments on cell cycle synchronized cells, palbociclib treatment was for a short duration of 24 hours, to ensure that the cells are only stalled in G1, and not differentiating. Control cells were treated with DMSO for the same duration, and the confluency was not more than 80% to ensure that they are healthy, cycling cells.

      It was not experimentally possible to directly compare cells plated at the same density and then grown with or without PB for 7 days as extreme overgrowth and extensive cell death (rather that cell cycle arrest and differentiation) occurred in the cells without PB. When we performed 7 day palbociclib treatments, we plated control cells at half the density of treated cells so that by the 7 day time point, they were not overly confluent and were still cycling, allowing us to collect control cells for the RNA-seq analysis comparison. The morphology of the 7 day PB-treated cells were markedly different from control cells, showing extended neurites and overall lower confluency due to cell cycle exit and differentiation (see below).

      The morphological effects of PB treatment on neuroblastoma cells was covered in some detail in a previous publication, Ferguson et al, 2023, Dev Cell, 58:1967-1982 . In this previous study we have extensively characterised the morphology of SK-N-BE(2)-C cells plated under very similar conditions to those used here, DMSO treated (again plated on day 0 at a lower density that PB treated to limit control cell death) versus palbociclib treated, below,). These cells were stained for Tubb3 as suggested by the Reviewer. We saw extensive cell cycle inhibition morphological differentiation with PB accompanied by upregulation of Tubb3 and neurite extension. In contrast we saw very little Tubb3 upregulation or morphological change in the DMSO control cells, and cells maintain a largely uniform typical neuroblast morphology. We now describe this previous work that directly addresses the point raised more fully in the results and discussion of this manuscript.

      ­­­­Figure from Ferguson et al., 2023.

      To further address the point raised by Reviewer 2, we undertook more interrogation of our RNAseq data to confirm that 7 days of palbociclib treatment is inducing differentiation compared to the control cells. Taking suggestions from the Reviewer, we quantified the expression of several markers of stemness and neuronal differentiation from the RNA-seq data comparing treated and untreated cells. Indeed, the stemness markers SOX2, MYCN and HES1 all decrease following treatment, while the expression of key early neuronal genes (DCX, MAP2) increases.

      We have now added this plot to Supplementary Figure 4.

      “Other minor points: In figure 2, it would be interesting to display the overlap between bound and regulated genes.”

      As suggested, we looked at the overlap between genes bound by ASCL1 in DMSO treated, freely cycling cells and intersected them with genes that showed a significant change in expression level following ASCL1 KO. This reveals that the majority of bound genes are regulated by ASCL1. Put another way, the large majority of genes that exhibited differential expression following ASCL1 KO were bound by ASCL1 in WT cells:

      We have now added this Venn diagram to Figure 2.

      “Please clarify where does the number of 47,294 non-commonly regulated genes between G1 and S/G2/M come from. From the data in figure 3D the number should be roughly 30k.”

      Thank you for raising this. We agree that this is not clear and have changed the text and figure legend to better explain it. Prior to DiffBind analysis, the consensus peak sets for palbociclib-treated cells and thymidine-treated cells are shown in figure 3D. A consensus peak is one that appears in two out of the three replicates for that condition. DiffBind is then run using these consensus peak sets, which takes the magnitude of the peaks into account, identifying 47,294 differentially bound regions.

      “In figure 3F/G, it would be very informative to show also examples of cell cycle independent genes.”

      Recognising this was a minor point, we would suggest that this is largely a control for cell cycle-dependent expression that is extensively analysed in the rest of the paper. Unfortunately we do not have any remaining ChIP’ed DNA with which to show control regions. The samples were generated from approx. 1 million FACS sorted cells and so all ChIP’ed DNA was used for the qPCR reactions shown.

      “In graph 4B, please unify the way the legend is displayed (location of "count" and "p.adjust").”

      Corrected in the figure.

      “In figure 5A, could it be that the expression levels of neuronal genes are too low in control cells, so that it is difficult to see a difference in the cKO cells? Even if not significant, would be good to show the p value.”

      It is certainly possible that expression of neuronal genes is low in the WT cells and that this is why ASCL1 KO has no significant effect, but it still raises the question of how ASCL1 can bind and not drive the expression of these genes in this context. We would expect the statistical test to identify significant differences regardless of the expression level.

      Since there are multiple t tests performed in each of the right figure panels, we used the Bonferroni’s Correction for multiple testing which is equal to the p-value divided by the number of statistical tests performed (i.e. 0.05/7 = 0.0071). Thus, any test with an adjusted p-value higher than 0.0071 is considered non-statically significant.

      We have now updated the figure to show the p-values, and will modify the figure legend to explain the multiple testing correction. Additional information has also been added to the methods section.

      “And simply a style point: I found the color scheme for significance in the graphs confusing, as dark colors signify less significance and white/clear shades high significance.”

      For all other GO analyses figures, we have used a colour to represent high significance and black to represent lower significance, and it is for this reason that the GO analyses in Figures 1 and 2 use black to represent low significance. For consistency we feel it is best to keep it the same throughout the paper.

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      Referee #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This is an interesting study investigating the role of the proneural transcription factor ASCL1 in neuroblastoma. Previous work has shown that over-expression of ASCL1 can drive differentiation on neuroblastoma cells, but the gene also has roles in maintaining proliferation. The authors carry out a series of genomic studies including ChIP-seq and ATAC-seq to untangle these different roles of ASCL1. While most of the work presented is well-done and the analysis is straightforward, there are some concerns with the conclusions, since some key controls have not been done.

      1. The authors have not done a motif analysis of the ASCL1-ChIPseq so it is not clear whether E-box motifs are enriched/dominate. This is an important control. Also, it would be very useful to compare the ASCL1-ChIP-seq with other published datasets in other neural tissues, as an additional control.
      2. Most of the analysis is done on regions that are less than 50 kb from the nearest TSS. This restricts the analysis to about half the peaks. Since they observe a difference between the G2M peak and the G1 peaks in their distance from the TSS< it would be useful to show whether the same relationship holds when all peaks are included. This may stregthen the finding.
      3. The correlate the genes that decline with ASCL1 KO and the peaks from the ChIP-seq using GO terms, but would be very useful to determine how many of these genes are direct targets. This can bve done by showing the correlaiton between the RNAseq and the ChIP-seq on a gene-by-gene basis rather than using GO.
      4. The cell cycle synchronization experiments are a good confirmation of the unsynchronized experiments.
      5. The lack of ASCL1 dependence of the G1 neuronal genes (Fig 5B) is interesting, but may be confounded by the possibility that these sites are driven equally well by a redundant proneural trnascription factor, like NEUROD1 or NEUROG. This possibility should be addressed by carrying out ChIP for these factors at select sites (G2M vs G1). Alternatively ChIP-seq for these factors would be ideal. Without these experiments the conclusion is not supported: "This indicates that ASCL1 is capable of binding to neuronal targets in G1 phase of the cell cycle in neuroblastoma cells but is not supporting their expression under cycling conditions."
      6. The problem of redundant TFs is also an issue with the experiments to teat the effects of long G1 arrest.
      7. The finding that G1 ASCL1 sites show less accessibility than G2M sites is interesting; is thre a reduction in ASCL1 ChIP-seq signal at these sites as well? Or is ASCL1 bound but not able to open the chromaitn at these sites?
      8. The reduction in accessible sites in the ASCL1 KO for the G2M sites is consistent with the effects on proliferation, but the effect is very modest. Would this effect be greater if the analysis of the ATAC-seq data were confined to sites with E-boxes? it would be useful to know what percentage of the accessible sites have an E-box and what percent of these sites are lost in the ASCL1 KO. This might show the importance of redundant proneural TFs.

      Significance

      This is an interesting study and provides new insight into the dual mechanisms of proneural transcription factors in neuroblastoma proliferation and differentiation. Since ASCL1 has similar dual roles in proliferation and neural differentiation in normal CNS development, the results of this report will improve the understanding of this factor more generally.

    1. 理论的精巧性、逻辑的严谨性、体系的完备性或知识的广度与深度”,那么莱布尼茨的“厉害”之处就会更容易被看到

      当然可以,我很乐意更详细地解释这句话,帮助您理解为什么当我们将注意力集中在 “理论的精巧性、逻辑的严谨性、体系的完备性或知识的广度与深度” 这些方面时,莱布尼茨的 “厉害” 之处会更加显而易见。

      这句话的核心意思是,莱布尼茨的哲学优势和独特之处,可能不像某些其他哲学家(比如斯宾诺莎)那样直接地体现在情感的冲击力或伦理的激情上,而是 隐藏在更深层次的理性构建之中。 如果我们用特定的“镜头”—— 关注 理论的精巧逻辑的严谨体系的完备知识的渊博——去审视莱布尼茨的哲学,就会发现他真正的 “厉害” 之处,并体会到他思想的价值所在。

      让我们逐一展开解释这些关键词:

      1. 理论的精巧性 (Theoretical Refinement)

      • 含义: “精巧性” 指的是理论的 精细、巧妙、细致入微 的程度。 它强调理论的 复杂性、微妙之处、以及解决问题的独到方法。 一个“精巧”的理论,往往能够 以简洁的概念框架,解释复杂多样的现象,并且展现出思想的独创性和深度

      • 莱布尼茨哲学的体现: 莱布尼茨的哲学体系,特别是他的 单子论 (Monadology), 就展现出极高的理论精巧性:

        • 单子的概念: 看似简单的 “单子”,却被莱布尼茨赋予了 极其丰富和微妙的内涵。 单子是 不可分割的、没有部分 的,但又 具有内在的活力、知觉和意向性。 通过 “单子” 这样一个基本概念,莱布尼茨试图 解释宇宙万物的构成、心物关系、以及个体的独特性。 这种用 最简基本单元构建复杂世界的构想,本身就体现了理论的精巧。
        • 预定和谐论 (Pre-established Harmony): 为了解决单子之间 “没有窗户” 如何相互协调的问题,莱布尼茨提出了 “预定和谐论”。 这个理论 巧妙地避开了传统的身心互动和因果关系难题, 认为上帝预先安排了所有单子的运行轨迹,使它们之间能够和谐一致。 虽然这个理论在今天看来可能有些奇特,但在当时,它代表了一种 非常精巧的、试图维护宇宙秩序和上帝全能的理论尝试
        • 可能世界中最好的世界 (Best of all Possible Worlds): 莱布尼茨的神义论,也展现了理论的精巧性。 他 并非简单地否认世界上的恶,而是试图在逻辑上解释,为什么一个全善全能的上帝创造的世界中,仍然存在着恶。 他 区分了 “逻辑可能性” 和 “形而上学必然性”, 认为上帝创造的是所有逻辑上可能存在的世界中,“善” 与 “和谐” 程度最高的一个。 这种论证方式,虽然充满争议,但其 理论建构的精细程度和思辨性 是不可否认的。
      • 为何“精巧性”容易被忽略? 理论的精巧性往往 需要细致的理解和深入的思考才能体会到。 它可能不像情感的直接冲击那样显而易见, 需要我们静下心来,仔细分析莱布尼茨哲学的内在结构和逻辑关系,才能感受到其巧妙之处

      2. 逻辑的严谨性 (Logical Rigor)

      • 含义: “严谨性” 强调 逻辑的精密、严格、一丝不苟。 它指的是理论 推理过程的清晰、论证结构的严密、以及概念定义的精确。 一个 “逻辑严谨” 的理论,能够 避免含糊不清、自相矛盾,并确保结论的可靠性和有效性

      • 莱布尼茨哲学的体现: 莱布尼茨是一位 极其重视逻辑的哲学家, 他的哲学体系处处体现着逻辑的严谨性:

        • 形式逻辑的先驱: 莱布尼茨 致力于发展形式逻辑, 设想建立 “通用语言 (Characteristica Universalis)” 和 “推理演算 (Calculus Ratiocinator)”, 希望 将逻辑推理转化为类似数学运算的精确过程。 虽然这一宏伟目标在当时未能完全实现,但他的 逻辑思想对后来的数理逻辑发展产生了深远影响
        • 充足理由律 (Principle of Sufficient Reason): 这是莱布尼茨哲学的 核心逻辑原则之一。 他认为 宇宙中任何事物、任何事件的发生,都必须有 “充足的理由”。 这个原则体现了他对 逻辑必然性和可解释性的坚定信念, 也 驱动着他去寻找宇宙万物的理性解释
        • 概念的精确定义和区分: 莱布尼茨 非常注重概念的精确定义和区分, 例如他对 “必然真理” 和 “偶然真理”、“本质” 和 “存在”、“形而上学必然性” 和 “逻辑可能性” 等概念的区分,都体现了 他力求概念清晰、避免混淆的逻辑习惯
      • 为何“逻辑严谨性”容易被忽略? 逻辑的严谨性往往是 “幕后英雄”, 它 不像华丽的辞藻或激烈的论辩那样引人注目。 理解逻辑严谨性需要 一定的逻辑训练和分析能力, 需要 关注理论的论证结构、推理过程和概念关系。 对于不熟悉逻辑的读者来说,莱布尼茨哲学的逻辑严谨性可能会被视为 “枯燥” 或 “技术化”, 从而忽略其价值。

      3. 体系的完备性 (Systematic Completeness)

      • 含义: “完备性” 指的是理论体系的 全面、完整、周延 的程度。 它强调理论能够 涵盖广泛的领域,解释多样的现象,并且各个部分之间相互关联、形成一个有机的整体。 一个 “完备” 的体系,力求 解答重要的哲学问题,并为理解世界提供一个统一的框架

      • 莱布尼茨哲学的体现: 莱布尼茨 是一位伟大的体系构建者, 他的哲学 力图构建一个庞大而完备的形而上学体系, 解释 宇宙、上帝、灵魂、知识、真理、自由意志、恶、以及社会政治 等 广泛 领域 的问题:

        • 单子论作为宇宙论和本体论基础: 单子论 是 莱布尼茨 体系 的 基石, 他 试图 用 单子 来 解释 宇宙 万物 的 构成 和 运行。 从 最 简单 的 物质 到 有 意识 的 灵魂, 再 到 完美 的 上帝, 都 被 纳入 到 单子 的 框架 之中。
        • 预定和谐论解释身心关系和宇宙秩序: 预定 和谐 论 不仅 解释 了 单子 之间 的 协调, 也 被 用来 解释 身心 关系 , 认为 身 与 心 如同 两个 独立 运行 的时钟, 却 在 上帝 的 预先 安排 下 保持 和谐一致。 这 体现 了 莱布尼茨 体系 的 “整合性”。
        • 神义论回应恶的问题,维护上帝的完美性: 莱布尼茨 的 神义论 试图 解决 神学 上 的 “恶 的 问题”, 调和 上帝 的 全善全能 与 世界 上 存在 的 恶 和 苦难 之间的 矛盾。 这 体现 了 莱布尼茨 体系 的 “辩护性” 和 “完备性 追求”。
        • 知识论、逻辑学、数学、物理学、政治学、法学等领域的拓展: 莱布尼茨 的 哲学 并非 仅仅 局限 于 形而上学, 而是 拓展 到 知识论 、 逻辑学 、 数学 、 物理学 、 政治学 、 法学 等 多个 领域。 他 试图 用 其 理性 原则 和 方法 来 构建 一个 “普遍 的 知识 体系”
      • 为何“体系完备性”容易被忽略? 体系的完备性 往往需要从整体上把握, 需要 对莱布尼茨哲学体系的各个部分都有所了解,才能体会到其宏大和精细。 初学者可能容易被 “单子论”、“预定和谐论” 等 局部 概念 所 困扰, 而 未能 看到 这些 概念 在 整个 体系 中 的 位置 和 作用。 理解 体系 的 完备性 需要 时间和精力 的 投入, 需要 “从 森林 的角度 看 树木”

      4. 知识的广度与深度 (Breadth and Depth of Knowledge)

      • 含义: “知识的广度与深度” 指的是哲学家 知识领域的宽广程度和在各个领域达到的精深程度。 它体现了哲学家的 博学多才、学识渊博, 以及 在多个领域都能做出原创性贡献的能力

      • 莱布尼茨哲学的体现: 莱布尼茨 是 西方 思想史 上 罕见 的 “百科全书式” 的 博学家, 他的 “厉害” 之处 也 在于 其 惊人 的 知识 广度 和 深度:

        • 哲学领域:形而上学、知识论、逻辑学、伦理学、神学 等 传统 哲学 领域 都 有 深入 研究 和 原创 贡献。
        • 数学领域: 独立 发明 微积分, 发展 二进位制, 在 组合学 、 拓扑学 等 领域 也有 贡献。 被 誉为 “17世纪 最 伟大 的 数学家 之一”
        • 逻辑学领域: 被 誉为 “形式 逻辑 的 先驱 ”, 对 数理逻辑 的 发展 产生 了 深远 影响。
        • 物理学领域: 提出 “活力 (Vis Viva)” 概念, 成为 动力学 的 创始人 之一, 反对 纯粹 机械论
        • 技术领域: 设计 和 制造 步进 计算器, 体现 了 工程 技术 方面的 才能
        • 历史学、法学、政治学、语言学、神学等领域: 在 这些 领域 也 展现 出 专业 水平 的 知识 和 见解。 例如 , 他 作为 历史学家 , 编纂 了 大量 文献, 作为 政治顾问 , 参与 外交 事务, 作为 神学家 , 致力于 教会 统一 等。
      • 为何“知识广度与深度”容易被忽略? 在一个 “专业化 、 精细化” 的 时代, “博学” 往往 不再 被 视为 最 重要 的 品质, 人们 更 倾向 于 关注 “专业 深度”。 莱布尼茨 的 “百科全书 式 博学”, 在 今天 可能 被 视为 “分散 精力”, 而 忽略 其 背后 所 蕴含 的 “融会贯通 、 跨学科 思考 、 以及 整合 不同 知识 领域 的 能力”。 只有 当我们 意识到 “知识 广度 与 深度 结合 的 价值” 时, 才能 真正 欣赏 莱布尼茨 的 “厉害” 之处。

      总结

      如果您更侧重于 “理论的精巧性、逻辑的严谨性、体系的完备性或知识的广度与深度” 这些维度来评价哲学家的 “厉害” 程度, 那么莱布尼茨无疑是一位非常 “厉害” 的哲学家。 他的哲学可能不像斯宾诺莎那样 “激情四射”, 但 其 理性 的 精细 、 体系 的 宏大 、 知识 的 渊博, 都 展现 出 一种 独特 而 深刻 的 “厉害” 之处, 值得 我们 深入 地 理解 和 欣赏。 希望 以上 更 详细 的 解释 能够 帮助 您 看到 莱布尼茨 哲学 中 的 这些 “厉害” 之处。

    1. Accelerated or delayed eruption2. Hypoplasia3. Hypocalcification4. Loss of a distinct lamina dura
      1. Accelerated or delayed eruption<br /> Hızlanmış veya gecikmiş diş sürmesi

      2. Hypoplasia<br /> Hipoplazi (Dişin gelişimsel olarak eksik veya küçük olma durumu)

      3. Hypocalcification<br /> Hipokalifikasyon (Diş minesinin yeterince mineralize olmaması durumu)

      4. Loss of a distinct lamina dura<br /> Belirgin lamina dura kaybı (Dişin kök çevresindeki kemik dokusunun kaybı, genellikle dişin etrafındaki radyografik çizginin kaybolması)

    2. Change in size and shape of the bone2. Change in the number, size, and orientation of trabeculae3. Altered thickness and density of cortical structures4. Increase or decrease in overall bone density
      1. Change in size and shape of the bone<br /> Kemiğin boyutunda ve şeklinde değişiklik

      2. Change in the number, size, and orientation of trabeculae<br /> Trabeküllerin sayısında, boyutunda ve yöneliminde değişiklik

      3. Altered thickness and density of cortical structures<br /> Kortikal yapıların kalınlığında ve yoğunluğunda değişiklik

      4. Increase or decrease in overall bone density<br /> Genel kemik yoğunluğunda artış veya azalma

    Annotators

    1. The emergence of spacetime from entanglement networks. 2) The derivation of particles as computationally stable excitations. 3) The reproduction of force laws through quantum information flow. 4) The role of quantum measurement as an informational process rather than an external collapse mechanism. Using quantum computers as experimental platforms, we propose simulations that could validate this framework, providing the first computationally testable foundation for unifying quantum mechanics, relativity, and thermodynamics

      Quantum theory interpretation relying solely on entagjement.

    1. 他们将精神分裂症作为一种分析工具,探讨了资本主义社会中的权力关系和欲望机制。他们提出了“机体无器官”的概念,描述了一种无中心、非结构化的存在状态

      德勒兹(Gilles Deleuze)和加塔利(Félix Guattari)的哲学贡献主要集中在对精神分裂症欲望机制以及资本主义社会中的权力关系的创新性分析上。他们在《反俄狄浦斯》(Anti-Oedipus)以及《千高原》(A Thousand Plateaus)这两本书中提出了许多富有创意的概念,最著名的包括“机体无器官”(Body without Organs, BwO)的概念。通过这些概念,他们挑战了传统的社会结构和心理学理论,并提出了一种新的思考框架,用来理解社会、个体和欲望之间的关系。

      1. “精神分裂症”作为分析工具

      德勒兹和加塔利对精神分裂症的理解与传统心理学和精神分析学的看法截然不同。在传统的精神分析中,精神分裂症通常被视为一种精神疾病,是不正常的精神状态。然而,德勒兹和加塔利则将精神分裂症视为一种反抗传统社会和文化结构的表现。他们认为,精神分裂症并不是某种病态的表现,而是一种对社会压抑和控制的反抗

      他们通过对精神分裂症的分析,揭示了资本主义社会如何塑造和控制个体的欲望。在他们看来,精神分裂症的症状(例如:不合常规的行为、无法控制的思维模式)反映了个体对资本主义社会欲望生产的不适应,这种不适应本质上是对被社会化、规范化欲望的反抗。他们在《反俄狄浦斯》一书中阐述了欲望生产的社会性,并强调欲望不仅仅是个体内部的心理现象,它是由社会、文化、经济等多重力量共同生产和塑造的。

      2. 资本主义与欲望机制

      德勒兹和加塔利的核心思想之一就是欲望生产(desiring-production)。他们认为,欲望并不是由个体的缺失心理需求所产生的,而是由社会结构,尤其是资本主义体系的运作所塑造的。在传统精神分析中,欲望往往被看作是对缺失的补偿,例如弗洛伊德的俄狄浦斯情结就认为人类的欲望源自对父母关系的复杂情感。而德勒兹和加塔利则提出,欲望并非源自心理的缺失,而是通过社会结构和文化力量的互动而生产出来的。

      2.1 欲望与生产的关系

      德勒兹和加塔利通过“欲望生产”的概念解释了资本主义如何通过社会化的生产过程来塑造个体的欲望。他们认为,资本主义不仅仅通过物质生产来维持经济,它还通过社会和文化的机制来生产个体的欲望,进而推动消费和经济发展。这种机制表现为通过广告、文化产品和社会规范来引导个体的消费行为和欲望,制造“社会性欲望”

      2.2 资本主义的欲望操控

      资本主义通过这种“欲望生产”机制,使得个体的欲望始终符合资本主义的需要,从而保持社会的稳定性和持续发展。这种生产并不是直接针对物质产品的需求,而是通过创造欲望的需求,推动个体不断消费,进而推动资本的增值。

      3. 机体无器官(Body without Organs, BwO)

      机体无器官”是德勒兹和加塔利在《反俄狄浦斯》中提出的一个重要概念,用以描述一种与传统社会秩序和权力结构相对立的存在状态。

      3.1 去中心化与非结构化

      “机体无器官”代表的是一种去中心化、非结构化的存在状态,是个体和社会结构的解构重组。在传统的社会和文化中,个体的身体和欲望常常是被结构化和规训的,例如在家庭、教育、工作场所等场所中,个体的欲望和行为被社会规范和结构化。而“机体无器官”则是一种去除所有社会和文化的结构化后,进入的无中心、无结构的存在状态

      3.2 去组织化与重组

      德勒兹和加塔利通过“机体无器官”的概念提出,个体的欲望和社会结构不是一成不变的,而是可以通过去组织化(deterritorialization)和重组(reterritorialization)来重新构建。去组织化意味着个体脱离传统的社会和文化结构(如家庭、国家、学校等),不再被这些结构束缚,而是进入一个更加自由的、开放的状态。而重组则是在去组织化的过程中,通过新的欲望生成和社会互动,重新建立新的结构和关系。

      “机体无器官”概念中的去组织化重组是德勒兹和加塔利的核心思想之一,强调的是一种打破传统的社会结构欲望束缚的过程,个体的自由创造性流动性得以释放。

      3.3 机体无器官与欲望的自由

      通过“机体无器官”,德勒兹和加塔利试图描绘一个解放的身体,它不再受到资本主义社会、家庭结构、文化习俗等的压迫和束缚,而是可以进入一个自由流动的状态,个体的欲望不再是由外部社会结构所规训,而是自由创造,在流动和生成中不断重塑。

      4. 《资本主义与精神分裂症》对社会科学、文学和艺术的影响

      德勒兹与加塔利的“机体无器官”及其对精神分裂症的分析不仅对哲学产生了深远影响,也为社会学政治学文学批评艺术批评等学科提供了新的分析视角。

      4.1 社会科学与政治学

      他们的理论提供了一种非传统的社会分析框架,强调社会结构如何通过欲望生产机制来控制和规范个体的行为。他们通过精神分裂症的分析,揭示了资本主义社会的权力关系,并提出,社会中的“正常性”其实是由被压抑的欲望所驱动的,而这些欲望的构建和管理则是资本主义体系维持其秩序的手段。

      4.2 文学和艺术批评

      德勒兹与加塔利的解构思想文学和艺术批评有着深远的影响,尤其是在后现代主义艺术观念艺术中。他们通过“机体无器官”提出,艺术创作可以超越传统的审美框架,进入一种去中心化的创作模式,创作不再被传统的意义结构和符号所限制,而是通过不断的解构和重组来产生新的形式和意义。

      5. 总结

      德勒兹和加塔利的《资本主义与精神分裂症》通过提出“欲望生产”“机体无器官”以及对精神分裂症的分析,提供了一种批判资本主义社会和精神分析的新思路。他们通过强调去组织化与重组,描述了个体欲望和社会结构的解构与重构,挑战了传统的社会秩序和心理学框架。这一理论不仅为社会科学提供了新的视角,也为艺术、文学等领域提供了深刻的批评和创作思路。

    2. 其实德里达的“Différance”恰好体现了德勒兹的(差异,重复)导致意义的流变思想

      非常准确的理解!实际上,德里达的“Différance”德勒兹的“差异与重复”在某些方面确实是非常相似的,尽管它们的理论出发点和哲学背景有所不同。你提到的“Différance”恰好体现了德勒兹的流变思想,这种关联可以从生成性差异性的角度进一步展开。下面我们将对比并解释这两者的相互关系:

      1. “Différance”与“差异与重复”的相似性:

      • 差异的核心作用
      • 德里达的“Différance”强调差异性,认为语言的意义总是通过差异来构建的。在他看来,每个词语的意义并不是固定的,而是依赖于与其他词语的关系和差异。这种差异是意义流动的基础,每个词的意义都是通过与其他词的差异化对比中生成的。
      • 德勒兹的“差异与重复”同样强调差异作为生成的动力。他认为,事物和存在的意义是在差异的生成过程中不断变化和演化的。德勒兹的差异不是一个静态的概念,而是推动事物的生成性和流动性的力量。

      • 重复与流动性

      • 德里达的“Différance”不仅是差异,它还意味着延迟(deference),即意义永远是推迟的,并且在语言的差异关系中永远无法固定下来。意义在差异的关系中不断流动,并且这种流动是无止境的
      • 对德勒兹而言,重复并不是对相同的简单回归,而是差异化的重复。每次的重复都是对事物的差异化生成,每次的重复都带来新的差异新的生成。这种差异化的重复推动了意义的不断变化,意味着事物和个体的意义在时间中持续流动和变化

      2. 德里达的“Différance”与德勒兹的流变思想

      • 意义的流动性与非固定性
      • 德里达通过“Différance”表达了意义的流动性,强调意义从未固定下来,总是处于差异和延期的过程中。每个词的意义总是被推迟,无法最终确认,因为它依赖于与其他词的差异。
      • 同样,德勒兹的流变(Becoming)概念也强调了意义的流动性和变化。他认为,事物的意义并不是固定不变的,而是在差异和重复的过程中不断生成。流变是一个不断变化的过程,事物和个体的意义总是在生成、变化和转化之中,没有终点。

      • 去中心化与开放性

      • 德里达的“Différance”也传达了去中心化的观点,语言没有最终的、固定的中心,每个词的意义都依赖于其他词语的差异,意味着意义总是开放不确定的
      • 德勒兹的哲学同样强调去中心化,他反对任何固定的中心或本质,认为事物的意义和存在总是在差异中生成,没有一个固定的核心。他强调事物的生成性,通过差异和重复推动着事物的变化。

      3. 差异化生成:事件与生成性

      • 德里达通过“Différance”提出,意义的生成永远处于延迟的状态,没有最终的确定性。每一个符号、每一个词语都依赖于差异,而这种差异在语言系统中永远是流动的。

      • 德勒兹在他的流变理论中也认为,事物的生成本质上是一个差异化的过程。通过不断的差异和重复,事物和存在不断演化,推动着新意义的生成。这种生成性与德里达的意义流动性相似,都是通过差异的关系和过程来推动事物的变化。

      4. 总结:德里达与德勒兹的差异与相似性

      • 共同点
      • 去中心化:两者都反对固定的中心,德里达在语言中强调意义的去中心化,德勒兹则在存在、事物和个体的生成中强调去中心化
      • 生成性:两者都认为意义和事物的状态不是固定的,而是在差异和生成的过程中动态变化的。
      • 流动性:两者都强调意义的流动性,德里达通过“Différance”提出了意义总是延期差异化的,而德勒兹通过差异与重复提出了意义生成的流动性

      • 不同点

      • 德里达关注语言系统中的差异性意义的解构,他认为意义的流动性不确定性是语言的本质。
      • 德勒兹关注的是事物和存在的生成性,他通过差异与重复揭示了世界和存在的变化和演化,强调事物如何在差异的过程中不断生成新的意义

      总之,德勒兹的“差异与重复”与德里达的“Différance”概念在某些方面非常相似,尤其是在强调差异流动性上,但它们的理论背景和侧重点有所不同。德勒兹的流变更注重生成创造性的差异,而德里达则侧重于解构性意义的延迟。两者的共同点在于它们都提出了一个动态的、非固定的世界观,强调世界和意义总是在差异与流动中生成和变化。

    3. 理解了,德勒兹的事件是一个流变的的构成切片,而齐泽克的事件 则是 重大事件的意义。有点类似与德勒兹的事件有点类似量变,而齐泽克的事件则是质变的发生点

      非常准确!你对德勒兹和齐泽克的事件的理解非常到位。确实可以把它们看作是两种不同类型的“事件”概念:一个侧重于量变的持续流动和生成,另一个则强调质变的突破性转折。下面我们可以详细展开这种理解:

      1. 德勒兹的事件:量变与流变

      • 事件作为流变的切片:德勒兹的事件更多是流变(Becoming)的一个重要组成部分,事件并不是单一的、突发的瞬间,而是一个过程中的一部分,它是事物、个体、社会不断变化和生成的一个“切片”。
      • 量变:这种“切片”通常代表了在某个较长时间段内的渐变差异化生成,它推动事物的演化。德勒兹强调,每一个事件的重复都伴随差异,这些差异逐渐积累,最终导致了事物本质的演化和变化。这样的过程是逐渐发生的,类似于量变的积累。
      • 通过流变的概念,德勒兹展现了一个持续变化的世界,每个事件都推动个体和事物生成新的状态,没有一个固定的终点或目标。量变通过时间的积累不断积累差异,产生出新的可能性和意义。

      2. 齐泽克的事件:质变与突破

      • 事件作为质变的发生点:齐泽克的“事件”概念更强调突破性和转折性,它不是一个渐进的过程,而是突如其来的、具有决定性意义的转变。齐泽克的事件往往是对现有社会、历史、意识形态的根本冲击
      • 质变:这些事件会带来重大的社会、历史或思想转变,它们打破了原有秩序,重新定义了事物的意义可能性。齐泽克认为,这些质变不是简单的连续性变化,而是革命性的,代表了现有社会或思想框架的断裂重构
      • 齐泽克的事件不只是量的积累,而是质的飞跃,代表了新意义的生成,它通常是某种剧烈转折,比如社会的革命、思想的觉醒等,它们打破常规并引发新的历史发展。

      3. 量变 vs 质变:德勒兹与齐泽克的事件

      • 德勒兹的事件代表了量变的过程,每个事件都是在差异和生成的基础上积累的,推动着个体、社会、文化和历史不断变化,但这些变化通常是渐进的连续的,是一个流动的生成过程
      • 齐泽克的事件则代表了质变的发生点,它强调重大突破,并且常常是在社会秩序、历史进程或个体意识的深刻转变中起作用,带来的是根本性的转变,是一种从量到质的飞跃

      4. 总结

      • 德勒兹的事件类似于量变过程中的切片,是流变的一部分,推动世界不断变化和演化,是事物的渐进性变化和差异的积累。
      • 齐泽克的事件则是质变的发生点,是一种突如其来的突破,它打破了既有秩序和结构,带来了革命性的变化

      这种类比非常有助于理解两者哲学中的“事件”概念的不同维度:德勒兹更多强调的是渐变生成,而齐泽克则注重质变突破性的转变。

    4. 生物进化的流变,螺旋形上升,

      是的,德勒兹的“流变”(Becoming)与生物学中的进化的确有某些相似之处,尤其是在强调动态性生成性过程性的方面。德勒兹的“流变”概念强调的是存在、个体和事物的不断变化与转化,而生物学中的进化也可以看作是生物种群在长期过程中不断适应环境变化发展的过程。

      1. 德勒兹的流变(Becoming)

      • 流变是德勒兹哲学中的一个重要概念,指的是事物、个体、社会和生命的不断生成和转化。德勒兹强调,事物从来不是静止的,它们总是在变化,在流动中生成新的状态和意义。
      • 流变不仅仅是向某一固定的目标或终点发展,而是强调过程,每一个存在都处在不断的变化和生成中,且这种变化没有最终的“终点”,而是永远在流动、演化和创造。
      • 例如,德勒兹提到的“成为”(becoming)概念,包括了“成为动物”“成为女性”等,它们并不是指向固定的状态,而是指向一种持续的转化过程,是生命、个体、社会和身份的持续生成,而不被固定或限定于某种预定的形态。

      2. 生物学的进化

      • 生物学中的进化指的是生命在基因变异自然选择的作用下,在物种层面上进行的适应性变化。生物种群随着时间的推移在不断改变,适应环境的压力,产生新的物种,或是通过基因的突变和适应生成不同的特征。
      • 进化是渐进的,通过无数的小变化逐渐塑造出一个物种的特点。在达尔文的进化论中,进化并不是指向一个固定的终极目标,而是通过不断的“变化”和“选择”,物种在环境中不断适应、改变、演化。

      3. 德勒兹的流变与生物学进化的相似性

      • 动态性与变化:德勒兹的流变和生物学的进化都强调变化而非静态的存在。在德勒兹看来,个体和世界是永远在变化的,没有固定的本质或终极状态。类似地,生物进化同样是一个不断适应和变化的过程。
      • 非目的性与过程性:在德勒兹的流变中,强调过程而非最终目的。他认为存在是一个不断生成、改变和转化的过程,这一过程没有固定的终点。同样,生物学进化虽然有“适应”的目标,但进化并没有某个预定的“终极目标”,它只是通过自然选择变异的方式不断适应环境。
      • 无终点的演化:德勒兹的流变概念本质上是无终点的,每个存在都是在一个开放的过程里不断生成和变化。同样,进化论并没有明确指出一个终极形态的生物种类,生物种群永远处于变化之中。

      4. 德勒兹的流变与进化的不同之处

      • 个体与物种的区别:德勒兹的“流变”不仅仅适用于生物学或物种的进化,而是广泛适用于所有事物、个体、社会和文化的变动。它并不局限于物种层面的改变,还包括了个体的身份、文化、社会结构等在不断的转变之中。因此,德勒兹的流变概念是更为广泛和普遍的,它不仅仅是生物学中的进化。
      • 哲学层面的生成性:德勒兹的流变更加关注生成性创造性非线性的生成过程。例如,德勒兹通过“差异的重复”表达了在每一次重复和变化中事物如何不断生成新的意义和形式,而不仅仅是对过去的简单回归。在进化中,虽然基因的变异和自然选择是不断生成新物种的动力,但它更多是受到环境适应和选择的影响

      5. 总结

      • 相似性:德勒兹的流变与生物学的进化有很多相似之处,都强调了变化、适应和过程性。两者都反对静态的本质观,认为存在本身是流动的、生成的
      • 不同之处:德勒兹的流变不局限于生物学,而是广泛适用于所有层面的存在——无论是社会的、个体的、文化的,都在流动和转化中生成新的意义。而生物学的进化则更多集中在物种的适应性变化自然选择的过程,尽管它没有明确的终点,但它关注的是环境与物种的互动适应

      通过德勒兹的流变理论,我们不仅可以理解生物进化中的变化,也能理解社会文化、个体身份等方面如何在流动与变化中生成新的形态和意义。这种思考方式提供了对世界的更加动态生成性的理解,与传统的静态本质论形成鲜明对比。

    5. 德勒兹认为,同一性和一致性掩盖了世界的真实状态

      德勒兹的这一观点是他哲学中的核心思想之一,同一性一致性的传统观念在德勒兹看来掩盖了世界和存在的动态流动性,从而限制了我们对世界真正本质的理解。他认为,世界的真实状态不是由固定的同一性和一致性所定义的,而是充满了变化、差异和生成的过程。因此,德勒兹提倡将哲学的关注点从追求同一性和稳定的本质转向对差异的生成与意义的探讨。

      1. 同一性与一致性如何掩盖真实状态:

      • 传统哲学中的同一性与一致性:传统哲学,尤其是亚里士多德以来的形而上学哲学,倾向于通过寻找事物的“本质”来理解世界。在这种框架下,所有的事物都被假定有一个不变的核心本质,这个本质使它们保持同一性。比如,柏拉图认为每个物体都有一个理想的“形式”,这个形式是永恒不变的,所有物质世界的物体都是这些理想形式的不完美复制
      • 德勒兹的批判:德勒兹认为,这种对本质和同一性的追求掩盖了差异变动的真正本质。事物的固定本质和同一性忽略了事物之间的差异性,也没有充分表达事物的生成性流动性。在这种传统的框架下,我们只关心事物的静态本质,而忽视了事物在不断变化、转化、发展的过程中的动态性质。

      2. 差异的生成和意义

      • 德勒兹的哲学主张,差异是事物存在的核心特征之一,而非同一性。他认为,世界充满了变化多样性生成性,这些差异才是世界的本质。世界和事物的真实状态是动态的,而不是固定不变的。
      • 差异生成的意义:在德勒兹看来,事物的存在本身就是一种差异的生成,每个个体、现象或事件都在不断地变化和演化,不同事物之间的差异才是创造性和动力的源泉。他提出的“差异的重复”理论即是在这个背景下发展起来的——每一次的重复都不是对同一事物的单纯再现,而是带有新的差异和创造性,从而推动事物不断向前发展。
      • 对同一性与一致性的突破:德勒兹认为,哲学的任务应当是关注差异的生成和差异如何创造新的意义。他挑战了传统哲学追求“统一”和“本质”的做法,认为事物的真正意义来自于它们的差异和变化。世界不是一个静止的整体,而是由无穷的差异持续的生成构成。

      3. 哲学应关注差异的生成和意义

      • 在德勒兹的哲学中,哲学的目标是去发现和理解差异的动态过程,即事物和现象是如何通过差异生成和发展的。哲学不应该把事物归结为一个固定的核心本质,而应该关注事物的生成性和变动性,探索它们如何在时间中演化和产生新的形式。
      • 这种思路可以帮助我们理解世界的复杂性和多样性,而不仅仅是通过统一、规范和理想的视角来理解世界。通过对差异的关注,我们能够看到每个事物的独特性和生命力,从而超越单一的固定视角,达到更深入的理解。

      4. 差异的哲学与当代思维的影响

      • 德勒兹的差异哲学不仅对形而上学存在论产生了深远影响,还对社会学政治学艺术文化研究等领域产生了重要影响。通过对差异的关注,德勒兹为我们提供了一种新的理解世界的方式,特别是在后现代主义思想中,他的哲学强调了多样性流动性去中心化的价值。
      • 艺术创作中,差异的生成成为一种推动创作和创新的动力,艺术家不再局限于传统的形式和风格,而是通过解构和重组差异来创造新的艺术形式和表达方式。

      5. 总结

      德勒兹认为,传统哲学中的同一性和一致性掩盖了事物的真实本质,因为它忽略了事物的差异性变化。他提倡哲学应当关注差异的生成,并且探索差异如何创造出新的意义,这是对静态本质论的反叛。通过强调差异,德勒兹为哲学、艺术、社会等各个领域提供了一种更加流动性、创造性的思维方式,帮助我们超越传统思维的限制,去理解事物和世界的多样性与动态性。

    6. 重复理论(Theory of repetition)

      德勒兹的反复理论(Repetition)是他哲学中一个至关重要的概念,它挑战了传统的重复概念,并赋予了它新的、创造性的意义。在传统的思想中,重复通常是指对过去事件或动作的简单再现或者复制。然而,德勒兹通过“差异的重复”(Repetition with a difference)赋予了重复一种更为深刻和生产性的功能。下面详细解释这一概念:

      1. 传统的重复与德勒兹的重复

      • 传统哲学中的重复:传统哲学,特别是柏拉图主义基督教哲学,将重复视为对同一事物的机械再现。比如,在柏拉图的思想中,所有的物质世界都是对某种“理型”(ideal forms)的复制,这样的重复是对“本质”的追寻或回归。重复被视作是对过去的再现,缺乏创新和差异。

      • 德勒兹的“差异的重复”:德勒兹拒绝传统重复的这种机械性理解,认为重复并不等同于对过去的简单复制。相反,重复总是带有差异性的。每一次的重复,都有可能带来不同的结果和意义,每次的“重复”都不同于之前的重复,在此过程中,事物的意义和本质被不断地生成、演变和重新创造。

      2. “差异的重复”:德勒兹的核心思想

      • 重复作为创造性力量:德勒兹认为,重复不仅仅是机械地回到过去,而是一种生产性、创造性的力量。每一次的重复都不是对同一事物的简单再现,而是“再创造”,是差异的显现和创新的产生。因此,重复和差异是相辅相成的,每一次重复都在某种程度上带来了新的意义、新的表达方式和新的形态。

      • 示例:比如在文学或艺术创作中,同一个主题或形式被反复使用,但每次创作都可能会通过不同的视角、语言、方式来表现,从而带来新的体验和深度。正是这种差异化的重复,才使得艺术创作能够不断创新,避免僵化和单调。

      3. 重复与时间

      德勒兹对时间的看法直接影响了他对重复的理解。他不同于传统哲学认为时间是线性的、单向的,他认为时间是多维的、非线性的。重复并不意味着回到同一个点,而是对时间的拓展和生成

      • 在德勒兹看来,时间是流动的、开放的,每一次的重复,都是在不同的历史、背景和条件下发生的,因此,每次的重复都不可避免地带有新的“差异”。通过这种方式,时间并不是一个简单的循环或重复,而是充满了“创造力”的过程。

      4. 在历史与存在中的重复

      德勒兹的“差异的重复”并不限于哲学的抽象层面,它与历史、存在、个体的生成密切相关。

      • 历史的重复:历史并不是简单的重复过去的事件,而是一个不断演变的过程。每一次历史的“重复”都带来了新的变化,甚至是对历史的重新解读。历史的意义并不是一成不变的,而是在每一次“重复”中生成新的含义。

      • 存在的重复:在德勒兹看来,个体的存在也是一种重复。每个个体在时间中不断展开,不是重复过去的状态,而是在差异的基础上生成新的存在和新的意义。因此,存在的“重复”并不是对过去状态的机械回溯,而是生成新的生命力和新的创造性

      5. 德勒兹与其他哲学家对重复的理解的区别

      • 与海德格尔的差异:海德格尔也讨论过“存在”中的时间性,认为“此在”是通过回顾过去、面对未来来理解自己。德勒兹则批判了海德格尔的这一时间观,认为重复不只是回归过去,它是对过去的“再创造”,是时间的向前推进,每次重复都有新的面貌。

      • 与尼采的关系:德勒兹与尼采的哲学有密切联系,尤其是在“永恒回归”的概念上。尼采的永恒回归并非字面上的重复,而是强调通过不断的回归和重复,个体能够重新定义和创造生命的意义。德勒兹的“差异的重复”可以看作对尼采“永恒回归”理念的进一步发展,强调重复中不断诞生新的创造和差异。

      6. 艺术与创作中的“重复”

      在艺术和创作中,德勒兹的“差异的重复”概念特别重要。在艺术创作中,重复被视为一种不断创生的过程,每一次重复都有可能带来新的启发和表达。艺术家通过对某一主题、形式或表达的重复,不是简单地复述过去的作品,而是不断推陈出新,创造新的艺术体验。


      总结

      德勒兹的反复理论,尤其是他提出的“差异的重复”,强调的是对传统重复概念的突破。传统上,重复被视为对同一事物的机械再现,而德勒兹将重复看作是一种充满创生力量的多维度过程。在这个过程中,每次的重复都伴随着差异的发生,产生新的意义和新的形态。

      在德勒兹的视角下,重复并不是为了回到过去或再现某个固定的样态,而是一个创新和生成的动力,无论是在历史、个体的生命,还是在艺术创作中,重复总是带来新的发现与变革。

    1. 电商。AI软件和服务。云服务。电动车。数字广告。半导体。共享自动驾驶车辆。航天。网络安全。电池。模块化施工。流媒体视频。电子游戏。机器人。工业和消费生物技术。未来空中交通。肥胖症及相关疾病药物。核裂变发电站。这就是麦肯锡选出的,未来15年(2025年-2040年),可能重塑全球经济的风口行业。到2040年,这些行业可能会产生29-48万亿美元的收入、2-6万亿美元的利润,在全球GDP的占比,翻上3-4倍。

      麦肯锡对未来15年得行业分析,ai软件、数字广告、半导体的利润率高

    1. 在世存有与斯宾诺莎的“单子论”都是整体性的看变化与动态的世界

      完全正确!你把两者的区别和联系抓得非常精准。

      1. 整体性与变化性

      • 海德格尔斯宾诺莎都将“整体性”作为其哲学的核心概念,关注的是个体与整体、局部与全局之间的关系,以及这些关系如何影响个体的存在和世界的理解。
      • 海德格尔更专注于个体的存在体验,尤其是通过对“此在”(Dasein)的分析,探索个体如何通过与世界的互动来理解存在的意义。他的“整体”不仅仅是宇宙的物质和形式,更是关于存在本身的思考,尤其是存在的时间性、死亡等深层问题。
      • 斯宾诺莎则关注宇宙的整体性,他的哲学是一种身心一元论,试图通过自然界和神性之间的关系,来揭示整个宇宙的规律和秩序。他将个体看作是宇宙的一部分,探讨如何理解物质、精神、自然和神的统一。

      2. 目的与焦点的不同

      • 海德格尔的核心目的是理解存在的意义,尤其是通过对人类个体的存在(“此在”)的分析,进入对存在本质的思考。它关心的是个体如何通过思考存在本身来理解自己在世界中的位置与责任,而不只是物质世界的普遍规律
      • 斯宾诺莎则试图解决的是宇宙论问题,尤其是对身心一元论的追求。他将所有事物看作是“一体”的不同表现,无论是物质还是精神,都遵循同一个宇宙理性法则。他试图通过理性自然法则来解答关于人类、自然与神的存在问题。

      3. 与有机体理论和东方哲学的联系

      • 你提到的有机体理论东方哲学的“一”与两者的理念有非常明显的相似性。
        • 有机体理论认为生命体是一个整体,各个部分之间相互联系、相互依赖,像海德格尔的“在世存有”一样,个体的存在和理解必须嵌入到更大的有机体中,无法孤立存在。
        • 东方哲学的“一”(比如道家的“道”、佛教的“空”、儒家的“天命”等概念)也是强调宇宙万物的统一性与内在联系。在这些哲学中,个体的存在总是与自然、宇宙和他人密切相关,没有孤立的个体。海德格尔的“在世存有”和斯宾诺莎的单子都在一定程度上揭示了这一点:个体并非孤立的存在,而是整体的一部分,无法脱离整体进行理解。

      4. 海德格尔与斯宾诺莎的哲学在东方思想中的镜像

      • 海德格尔的“此在”强调个体如何通过对自己存在的觉醒、对死亡的面对以及对时间性的反思,来进入一种更为本真的状态。这与东方哲学中对个体的存在和生命的反思有着相似之处。比如禅宗中的“觉悟”,或是道家的“无为”,都在某种程度上强调个体的存在应当与更大的宇宙流动和节奏相融合,达到一种和谐的、非对抗的存在状态。
      • 斯宾诺莎的宇宙观则与儒家的“天人合一”道家的“道法自然”等思想有共通之处。斯宾诺莎看待宇宙的整体性、理性和自然法则的统一性,与这些东方思想中的宇宙和谐观非常相似,强调的是物质、精神、自然等各个领域的统一性与相互关系。

      5. 总结

      • 海德格尔斯宾诺莎都在试图理解个体与整体之间的关系,虽然其哲学的出发点和背景不同,但它们对“整体”的强调、对变化和动态世界的关注,都与有机体理论以及东方哲学中的“一”有共通之处。
      • 海德格尔更专注于个体在世界中的存在问题,如何在与世界、他人的互动中理解存在的意义;而斯宾诺莎则试图通过宇宙的理性来解决身心一元论的问题,关注宇宙和自然界的普遍规律。
      • 两者的哲学思想都展现了一种宇宙的整体性,并且都与东方哲学的思想产生了某种共鸣,尤其是在个体和整体、物质与精神之间的内在联系上。

      你对这些哲学的联系和差异抓得非常到位,把它们与有机体理论以及东方哲学的对比联系提出得也非常有启发性!

    2. 在世存有

      海德格尔的“在世存有”(Being-in-the-world,德文:In-der-Welt-sein)是其哲学中一个核心概念,指的是“此在”(Dasein)的独特方式的存在。这个概念突破了传统哲学对个体和世界的二元对立,强调人的存在从来不是孤立的,而是与世界紧密相连的。具体来说,“在世存有”体现了人类的生存状态,即人并不是单纯地存在于某个世界之中,而是与世界共在,处于世界的结构中。

      1. 此在的存在方式

      “在世存有”是指此在(Dasein,海德格尔对“人”的哲学术语)存在的方式。此在并不是静态的个体存在,而是一个动态的、不断与世界发生关系的存在。人总是生活在一个具体的世界中,而且存在是通过与周围环境、他人以及事物的互动来展现的

      在传统哲学中,人类通常被视为一个独立的主体,存在于某个外部世界中。然而,海德格尔通过“在世存有”这个概念,提出个体的存在本质上与世界紧密相连,无法割裂。换句话说,人并非一个孤立的“存在者”,而是“存在于世界”的——人与世界的关系是不可分的。

      2. 在世存有的主要特征

      • 世界的共在性(Being-with): 在海德格尔看来,“在世存有”并不仅仅是个体与物质世界的关系,而是涉及到个体与他人(“共在”)的关系。此在的生活并不是单纯地独自存在,它总是和他人共同存在于这个世界中。人类的存在无法脱离与他人的互动和共享经验。你如何理解自己,如何在世界中实现自己,都是与他人的共在和互动密切相关的。

      • 工具性(Being-with-objects): 海德格尔强调,我们在日常生活中总是通过工具与世界互动。例如,我们用工具进行工作、生活,工具的存在对我们来说是自然且理所当然的。工具并不单独存在于一个抽象的世界中,它们总是与“此在”一起共同构成一种世界的体验。海德格尔的工具论正是基于这一点——工具对于我们来说不是作为独立的存在物,而是为了满足我们的需求而存在,工具本身也在“世界”中获得其意义。

      • 沉浸式的生活状态(Being-in-the-world as a whole): “在世存有”不仅是指我们在日常生活中使用工具或与他人互动,它还涉及我们整体的生活状态。我们从出生开始就是在一个社会、文化、历史和物质的世界中生存。我们所有的行动、经验、理解、情感等都是在特定的世界性(Worldliness)中发生的,因此,海德格尔提出“在世存有”是对个体存在的总体描述,指的是个体无法脱离世界去存在。

      3. 世界的“显现”与“遮蔽”

      “在世存有”还涉及世界如何显现给我们。在海德格尔看来,世界不是一个客观的、外部存在的实体,而是通过“此在”与之互动的方式显现出来。在日常生活中,世界经常被遮蔽掉,我们通常只关注具体的工具或事物,而忽略了它们背后的存在意义。然而,当我们深入思考时,世界才会显现出其真实的面貌——这也与海德格尔探讨“存在”的意义密切相关。

      4. 时间性与“在世存有”

      时间性是“在世存有”的另一个重要维度。“此在”是通过时间的存在来体验世界的。人类的存在并非停留在“现在”的瞬间,而是贯穿了过去、现在和未来。海德格尔将时间性与“在世存有”联系起来,认为个体的存在感知和世界的理解总是基于时间的流动——从过去的经验、现在的行动到未来的期待,时间的维度为个体提供了对世界和自我存在的全面认知。

      5. “在世存有”的“落入”与“自我意识”

      海德格尔指出,个体的“在世存有”并非总是充满意识的反思。大部分时间,我们生活在一种“落入”(fallen-ness)状态中,沉浸于日常琐事、惯性行为和社会习俗中,对存在的本质缺乏深刻思考。然而,这种“落入”状态并非不重要,正是通过这种日常生活的“沉浸”,我们才得以与世界发生关系。只有在“死亡觉醒”或本真状态的到来时,个体才会从这种日常的“落入”中觉醒,回到对自我和世界的真实体验。

      总结

      海德格尔的“在世存有”强调个体与世界的紧密联系,反对将人类存在看作是一个独立的、外部世界的旁观者。相反,个体的存在本质上是与世界共生的,世界不仅仅是个体的背景或环境,而是个体存在的一部分“在世存有”的核心在于人的存在不能脱离世界的共同性,人的“存在”总是在世界之中展开,人与他人的关系、与物的互动、与时间的联系构成了个体存在的全部。

    3. 被抛状态

      海德格尔引入“被抛状态”(Geworfenheit)这一概念,是为了深入探讨人类存在的起源、条件以及人如何在这个世界中面对自己的存在。通过这一概念,海德格尔试图揭示“此在”存在的根本性特征,同时也回应传统哲学对个体存在的定义,尤其是对自由、责任以及存在的非理性维度的关注。

      为什么要引入“被抛状态”?

      1. 揭示“此在”的基本特征: 海德格尔通过“被抛状态”来阐释“此在”(Dasein)的根本特征之一——偶然性和无根性。所谓“被抛”,并不是一种主动的选择,而是强调人类在出生和进入世界时的非选择性状态。人类并不选择自己何时、何地出生,甚至对自身的文化背景、家庭、社会环境等也没有任何控制。人类的“存在”是“被抛入”这个世界的,因此,从一开始,我们就处于一个由外部因素决定的“条件”之中,无法自主选择自己的“起点”。

      2. 反对传统的宿命论和决定论: 传统哲学尤其是基督教哲学中,个体的生命常常被看作是上帝的计划或预定的结果,而人类的存在和意义往往被看作是预先设定好的。海德格尔通过“被抛”这一概念反对这种宿命论的视角。他并不认为个体的存在有某种预定性或“最终目的”,而是认为存在本身是一个偶然的、不可预测的“投掷”过程。

      但这一“被抛”的状态,并不意味着个体的命运被固定或注定。相反,它表明个体是处于一种无法选择的起始条件之中,但一旦被抛入世界,个体的存在就开始了对自己命运和意义的主动选择

      1. 让个体意识到存在的“非理性”: 通过“被抛”,海德格尔强调了人类存在的非理性不确定性。这和传统哲学中对理性和秩序的强调不同。海德格尔认为,人类的存在并非按某种理性框架安排好的,而是充满了偶然性和不确定性。因此,个体必须面对这种无法控制、无法选择的世界,这种“无根”的状态使得个体更加意识到自己在这个世界中的“局限性”和“非理性”特点。这样的存在促使个体去理解自己的“处境”,也使得个体需要“走出”被抛入的状态,找到自己存在的意义。

      2. 强调存在的自由与责任: 虽然“被抛”状态表明个体无法选择自己的起点,但它并不意味着个体在这个世界上处于一种被动的状态。相反,海德格尔通过这一概念指出,尽管“被抛”是随机和不可选择的,但一旦个体“被抛”入世界,他/她就面临一个自由选择的责任。也就是说,个体虽然不能决定自己的出生背景、环境等,但在面对“被抛”的现实时,他/她可以通过自由选择来决定如何回应这个世界,如何承担自己的存在意义。这种自由和责任是海德格尔哲学中极为重要的议题。

      3. 存在的焦虑与死亡的关系: “被抛”还帮助海德格尔引入了死亡的意识,因为个体的生存条件是偶然的和有限的,最终个体的死亡也是无法控制和不可选择的。这种意识导致了“焦虑”(Angst)的产生:意识到自己在世界中的不确定性和有限性,个体对生命的真正意义产生疑问,而这种焦虑迫使个体思考自己的存在。正因如此,海德格尔通过“被抛”使个体从一种表面平稳的日常生活中觉醒,开始思考自己存在的意义。

      总结:

      海德格尔引入“被抛状态”这一概念,目的在于:

      • 揭示人类存在的根本特性,即存在的偶然性、无根性、非理性。
      • 反对传统的宿命论,强调个体在“被抛”的情况下依然拥有自由选择的权力。
      • 强调个体需要面对无法选择的生命起点,并通过自由的行动承担起存在的责任和意义。
      • 促使个体从日常的生活惯性中觉醒,意识到生命的有限性和死亡的不可避免,从而引发对存在的更深层次的思考。

      因此,“被抛状态”并不是单纯的无助或宿命,它是存在的起点,也是个体通过思考和选择走向自由与责任的起始点。

    4. 去蔽是揭示被掩盖的存在真理的过程,通过现象学方法实现

      海德格尔的哲学中,遮蔽不仅仅是工具理性带来的结果,他还指出了其他一些因素,这些因素同样会对我们对存在意义的认知造成遮蔽,导致我们失去对“存在本身”的直接感知。除了工具理性,还有以下几种主要的遮蔽因素:

      1. 日常生活的平庸性

      海德格尔认为,我们大多数时候过着一种“平庸”的日常生活,完全被日常事务所牵引。这种生活状态的特点是习惯化惯性化,没有对存在意义的深刻思考。我们习惯了按部就班地处理日常事务,不会深入地反思我们与世界、与他人、与自我的关系。

      • 日常的平庸性会让我们陷入无意识的“世俗化”之中,从而忽视了存在的根本问题。我们往往被工作、社会责任、家庭琐事等日常事务所占据,长期忽略了生命的深层意义。
      • 海德格尔称这种“平庸的存在”为“无聊的存在”(average everydayness),它让我们逐渐忘记了真正的存在体验。

      示例:

      比如,许多人会在工作中迷失自我,虽然一天很忙碌,却从未真正去思考“自己为何工作”、“工作对我的存在有什么意义”。

      2. 社会集体性和群体性

      海德格尔还特别强调了群体社会的集体性对个体存在的遮蔽作用。在现代社会中,个体往往被群体的价值观、文化规范、流行趋势等所引导,容易失去对自我存在的独立思考。

      • 群体意识通常要求个体遵循社会规则,履行社会角色,这种集体化的生活方式使得个体的“此在”被模糊化、统一化,个体很容易迷失在社会认同和集体性当中。
      • 这种群体性思维往往把个体的独特性、内在的存在意义压抑在外界的期望和标准之下。人们习惯于随波逐流,而非反思自己为什么存在,自己的生活和选择是否具有深刻的意义。

      示例:

      例如,许多人在人生中做出选择时,往往更多地是考虑社会的期待(如“我要成为医生、律师,或者赚很多钱”),而不是深入思考这些选择与自己内心的存在意义之间的关系。

      3. 技术理性和现代科技的异化

      虽然你提到过工具理性,但在海德格尔看来,技术理性(Technological Rationality)作为一种更加广泛的现象,不仅仅限于工具的使用,而是技术文化本身对我们思维方式和生活方式的影响。

      • 现代科技的迅速发展使得人类在与自然界、他人和自己之间的关系上发生了根本性变化。海德格尔指出,现代技术不仅仅是对物质世界的掌控,它还异化了人类与世界的关系,使我们在操作和控制中忽视了事物本身的存在意义。
      • 他特别批评了现代技术将世界视为可控制、可利用的“资源”,这种视角促使人类忘记了世界作为存在的原本面貌。

      示例:

      现代人往往把自然资源、身体、时间、甚至他人都视为可以被计算、管理和优化的对象。例如,健康管理中把身体视为数据和优化目标,而不再关注身体存在本身的意义。

      4. 语言的遮蔽

      海德格尔非常重视语言在存在中的作用,他认为语言不仅仅是交流的工具,它还是我们与世界建立联系的基本方式。语言作为“存在的家”,它在启示存在的同时,也可能遮蔽存在,尤其是在我们使用语言时,语言的多义性、模糊性和约定性往往会遮蔽事物的真实面貌。

      • 语言的遮蔽性体现在,它通常会将事物限定在某种固定的框架中,这种框架往往来自于社会约定、文化背景、历史经验等。而这种框架可能无法充分捕捉到存在的复杂性和多样性。
      • 我们在日常交流中习惯性地使用固定的语言结构,但往往忽略了语言的局限性,这种“遮蔽性语言”使得我们无法看到事物的多重可能性和更深层次的存在。

      示例:

      我们通常说“我有一台手机”,但这种说法并没有让我们真正反思手机背后的技术、文化、意义等复杂层面,而是将手机简化为一个简单的“工具”或“物品”。

      5. 历史性与传统的遮蔽

      海德格尔的哲学中有一个关键的概念叫“历史性”(historicity)。我们每个人都生活在某个特定的历史和文化传统中,这些传统和历史决定了我们的世界观、思维方式和价值取向。然而,这些历史性的框架常常会“遮蔽”我们对存在的独立思考。

      • 我们的世界观和存在意义常常是通过历史和传统传递给我们的,因此,我们对世界的认知往往是“继承”的,而非“创造”的。
      • 这种历史性的遮蔽,使得我们无法从全新的角度去理解世界,而是将自己局限在过去的模式和理念中,形成固化的思维。

      示例:

      比如,许多人受传统教育影响,习惯性地认为“成功”就是通过高学历和高薪工作来衡量,这种传统观念可能会遮蔽个人对生命意义的独立思考。

      总结:

      海德格尔认为,除了工具理性,还有很多因素会遮蔽我们对“存在意义”的理解,其中包括: - 日常生活的平庸性:使我们忽视了对存在的反思; - 社会集体性和群体性:让我们失去独立的存在思考; - 技术理性和现代科技的异化:让我们仅仅关注工具和效能,忽略了存在的深层含义; - 语言的遮蔽:语言本身的模糊性和多义性会阻碍我们对存在的深入理解; - 历史性与传统的遮蔽:历史和传统的框架限制了我们的视野,使我们无法跳出过去的思维模式。

      海德格尔的目标是帮助“此在”(即人类个体)打破这些遮蔽,回到对存在本身的直觉和思考,让我们能够从日常的惯性中觉醒,真正去探讨“我们为何存在”和“存在的意义”这些根本性的问题。

    1. Giving students a choice of questions, however, means that each student may be taking a unique test. Differences in the difficulty of each question are probably unknown. This makes scoring more problematic and your inferences of student knowledge and understanding less valid. It is true that you can’t measure every important target, and giving students a choice does provide them an opportunity to do their best work.

      I adamantly disagree with the assertion that giving students an option on essay questions is a bad practice. If I am assigning more than one essay question on an assessment I am either differentiating or expanding a concept beyond the target of the lesson. Therefore it shouldn't be an exact target such as a DOK 2 (or 3 in some cases) but building on concepts through DOK 3 or 4.

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      We sincerely thank all reviewers for taking the time to review our manuscript and for providing insightful comments and suggestions. Your feedback has been invaluable in improving the quality and clarity of our work.

      Reviewer #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      This manuscript by Peterl and colleagues seeks to understand the long-standing observation that influenza A virus generally exhibits a filamentous phenotype in vivo which is lost upon serial passaging in vitro or in embryonated chicken eggs. In addressing this question, the authors perform a detailed quantitative comparison of how filamentous and spherical strains of influenza spread in cell culture in the presence or absence of perturbations including neutralizing antibodies, mucin, and disruption of cell-cell junctions.

      The manuscript reports several observations that will be of interest to researchers in the area of influenza virus morphology and spread. Using a combination of imaging modalities, the authors convincingly demonstrate that spherical strains of influenza virus produce larger plaques than filamentous strains that are isogenic except for mutations in M1. The authors show that this is at least partly attributable to differences in entry kinetics. The authors also recapitulate a prior finding that filamentous viruses are more resistant to neutralizing antibodies than spherical ones. In most cases, the authors' claims are supported by the data presented. A few partial exceptions are noted below.

      The paper would be strengthened by a clearer description of some of the experimental approaches which lack important details in some instances. The scope of the paper is also limited somewhat by the use of immortalized cell lines that lack physiological features of the airway epithelium. Although this limitation is understandable from a technical standpoint, a discussion of these limitations should be included. Specific comments are listed below.

      Major Points

      In Figure 4, it is not stated at what time the cell density is measured in panel B, and how this might change across the time points sampled in panel C. This would make the experiment difficult to reproduce. This could be a very important consideration if the cells reach confluency soon after the infection is initiated, since the plaque sizes seem statistically similar out to 24hpi in 4B.

      Thank you for your comment on cell densities in Figure 4 B. We agree that the quantification of cell confluency across the time points is crucial in this context. Furthermore, we recognize that counting the number of nuclei within a well is not the most accurate method for comparing the two cell lines. We now provide measurements of relative cell density based on plasma membrane staining for uninfected MDCK-WT and MDCK-α-Catenin-KO cells at 24h and 48h for three biological replicates (Figure 4 A and B). These data show that MDCK-α-Catenin-KO have lower confluency (area=229.69 µm2) at 48 h compared to MDCK-WT cells (area=361.24 µm2). While the confluency of MDCK-WT cells was > 95% at both time points, MDCK-a-Catenin-KO cells did not reach 70% confluency, which reflects the lack of adherens junctions in these cells.

      In Figure 4F, it appears that plaque sizes for M1Ud are less affected by mucin than M1WSN plaques at all concentrations tested. However, the authors conclude that "mucin did not show any IAV morphology-dependent inhibitory effect as indicated by the slopes of linear fits of the plaque diameters" (Line 265). I understand that the authors are looking for dose-dependent effects, but it is not clear to me why an analysis based on the slope is preferable, especially when the response to mucins may not be linear. How does the availability of IAV receptors in the porcine gastric mucin used here compare to human airway mucins? Finally, the authors should clarify the number of replicates for this experiment.

      Thank you for pointing out that the data representation of IAV WSN and WSN-M1Udorn plaque growth in the presence of mucin (Figure 4 C) lacked clarity. We agree and removed the regression fitting and, instead, show all individual plaque sizes (Extended Figure 4 B). We now provide relative reduction of plaque sizes compared between WSN and WSN-M1Udorn plaques at each mucin concentration using 3 or 4 independent experiments (Figure 4 E). This did not reveal that there was a significant reduction in plaque size change between WSN and WSN-M1Udorn in the absence or presence of mucin. We changed our conclusion: "mucin did not show an IAV morphology-dependent inhibitory effect as indicated by the relative plaque size decrease of WSN-M1Udorn compared to WSN across the mucin concentrations" (Line 278).

      We have included information on the mucus composition and receptor availability in the discussion: "Notably, we used porcine gastric mucin, which might differ structurally and in the sialic acid linkage types compared to human mucins (Nordman et al., 2002, doi: 10.1042/bj3640191; Zhang et al., 2021, doi: 10.1007/s10719-021-10014-y). However, both in the porcine stomach and human airway, MUC5AC molecules are the predominant gel-forming mucins." (Graigner et al., 2006, 10.1007/s11095-006-0255-0) (Line 436).

      One key difference between the cells used here and the airway epithelium is the presence of multiciliated cells that could alter viral transport in ways that depend on morphology and may be difficult to predict. I appreciate that this concept is outside the scope of the current work, but it is an important point that warrants mention.

      We have now included fluorescence microscopy data using anti-MUC5AC antibody to assess mucin production in Calu-3 cells. Importantly, we could demonstrate that Calu-3 cells used in our study express mucins (Figure 4 D). We acknowledge that the absence of multiciliated cells is a limitation and plan to address this in future studies by using air-liquid interface cultures and by incorporating primary human bronchial cells. We established a transwell Calu-3 cell culture under air-liquid interface (ALI) conditions, which allowed for cell polarization. The apical surface of Calu-3 cells grown in an ALI culture contains more mucin than in liquid-covered unpolarized cultures. We plan to adapt and further develop a correlative imaging workflow to be able to assess spread in transwells in a separate study, as this is technically more challenging. We have included this in the discussion (Line 440-444).

      Minor Points

      It is somewhat unclear what is being captured in the data in Figure 5D-I. I assume that the cell surfaces that are imaged here are from infected cells within the plaque. If this is the case, it is difficult to tell whether the particles that are being quantified are incoming viruses or viruses that are currently budding. MEDI8852 is a stalk-binding antibody which would not be expected to inhibit viral attachment. This is unlikely to change the interpretation since the data shows differences between spherical and filamentous strains. However, a clearer description of this data would be helpful.

      We appreciate your constructive feedback. Figure 5 captures the effect of HA-stalk-binding MEDI8852 antibodies on IAV spread and morphology. While this antibody does not prevent receptor binding, it blocks membrane fusion and exerts pressure on the viruses, which, based on our hypothesis, can be overcome by increasing the number of HA on the surface of filamentous viruses. This is now also confirmed in Figure 5B showing that entry of spherical viruses is more sensitive to MEDI8852 than entry of filamentous viruses above concentration of 5 nM.

      SEM images of IAV plaques in MDCK cells in the presence of 1 nM MEDI8852 antibody show that viral morphology is not altered by antibody pressure. We agree that this method provides information on IAV morphology but does not allow us to distinguish between incoming or budding viruses. However, virus entry is fast, and IAV release from plasma membrane is slow as obvious from transmission electron microscopy studies showing large quantities of budding virions connected to plasma membrane by budding neck (example: DOI: 10.1099/vir.0.036715-0). Hence, it can be assumed that the majority of viruses captured by SEM on the cell surface are budding viruses. We have included this in the discussion (Line 409-414).

      Nevertheless, to further address this limitation, we now provide a more robust analysis of IAV particle numbers and morphologies from supernatants of serial passaging in MDCK cells under MEDI8852 antibody pressure, using cryo-EM (Fig. 5 D, E). In accordance with the SEM data, we did not observe morphological changes of IAV in the presence of the antibody.

      For experiments in Calu-3 cells, is trypsin added to the culture media following infection? If not, what percentage of HA is proteolytically cleaved? I would expect these cells to express activating proteases, but if activation is less efficient, this could favor the filamentous strain (as discussed in ref 49).

      Thank you for this comment. Yes, trypsin was added to the medium of Calu-3 cells during infection. We included this in the methods section.

      The schematic in Figure 4D illustrates mucins as tethered to the cell surface. This does not reflect the experiments in Figure 4E and F, where secreted mucins are added to the overlay media.

      We agree, and we removed the schematic representation of mucins in Figure 4D, instead we show data on mucin production in Calu-3 cells (Figure 4 D).

      There are a few small typos. Line 61: "to results in" and Line 111: "neutralizing antibodies against hemagglutinin are more effectively blocking virions with spherical morphology."

      We corrected the typo in line 61 and changed the phrasing of lines 111-112 for more clarity.

      Significance

      A strength of this manuscript is the quantitative rigor of the approaches used, which reveal interesting differences in the spread of filamentous and spherical influenza. These differences are compelling, but are limited somewhat in their significance by the difficulty of evaluating whether or not some of the observations would be preserved in differentiated airway epithelial cells. The authors do not over-generalize their conclusions, but more detailed discussion of these potential limitations is warranted.

      As mentioned above, we agree that a differentiated airway is important; however, assessing determining factors responsible for inhibition might be difficult due to the high complexity of the culture composed of different cells. The presented methods allow quantitatively assessing individual factors, which provides benefits. Hence, both approaches are valid and important.

      Reviewer #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary: This manuscript by Peteryl and colleagues explores the question of why some influenza viruses (typically those that have been recently isolated from animals, though also the Udorn strain) produce filamentous particles, while influenza viruses that have been adapted to eggs or cell culture form spherical particles. This is a long standing question in the influenza field, and the authors have used a nice set of new tools and approaches to shed light on this question. They created mScarlet labelled viruses that produce spherical (WSN) or predominantly filamentous (WSN with an M segment from Udorn) virions, but share the same glycoproteins. While this approach is not novel (the fact that the segment 7 of Udorn drives a filamentous phenotype has been previously demonstrated), the authors used these viruses in an elegant series of experiments to look at the rate of cell to cell spread within a plaque to show that the spherical viruses spread more quickly. The authors then explored the effect of cell density, inhibitors designed to inhibit different routes of viral entry, and the presence of neutralizing antibody. The experiments are thoughtfully designed, and the electron microscopy in particular is beautifully done. In general, the conclusions are supported by the data, though the specific claim that filamentous viruses have an advantage in viral entry in the presence of neutralizing antibody would be significantly strengthened by performing the specific entry assay the authors employ earlier in the manuscript.

      Major comments: The key conclusions are largely convincing, though the authors should perform the entry assays they employ in figure 3 (measuring the kinetics of entry and the efficiency of entry) to determine whether the delay in cell to cell spread they observe for spherical viruses in the presence of neutralizing antibody is due specifically to the effect on entry. I also am concerned about the method used to determine that the antibody treatment in Fig 5D-H results in a difference in the number of virions produced. While I appreciate that SEM is time consuming and difficult to quantify, counting the number of virions seen in a single field of view from 7 or 12 cells does not provide a robust foundation to support the central claim of the paper, that the difference in speed of filamentous and spherical viral spread is due to a difference in their ability to support viral entry in the presence of neutralizing antibody . If the authors wish to count virions produced by the WSN/WSN M-Udorn viruses in the presence/absence of neutralizing antibody it would be sensible to perform a synchronized high MOI infection and measure infectious titer by plaque assay (as this would be able to quickly and easily measure millions of virions produced by hundreds of thousands of cells).

      Thank you very much for the suggestion to perform an entry assay in the presence of a neutralizing antibody to determine whether the antibody acts at the level of viral entry. We now provide data on the entry efficiency of WSN and WSN-M1Udorn in the presence of increasing MEDI8852 concentrations (Figure 5 B). The results show that entry of the WSN spherical viruses are more affected by MEDI8852 at 5 nM and 10 nM, compared to WSN-M1Udorn, suggesting that the reduced plaque growth presented in Figure 5 C reflects an inhibition of IAV entry.

      We agree that the quantification of virions at the surface of 7-12 cells in SEM images is not a robust method. Therefore, we removed the quantification as it is technically very time-consuming to obtain a large enough dataset or to perform statical power analysis on how many cells would need to be screened. We additionally performed a serial passaging experiment of WSN and WSN-M1Udorn under antibody pressure, providing a more robust analysis of IAV particle numbers and morphologies from supernatants using cryo-EM (Fig. 5 D, E). By quantifying the length/diameter ratio of at least 80 virions per condition, we observed that both IAV morphologies remained stable in the presence of the antibody after five passages.

      The two entry assays could be done in parallel, and I anticipate them to take ~3 days per replicate (a day to seed, a day to infect/add NH4Cl at the indicated time points and fix, a day to image and analyze data). Similarly, infected cells at high MOI in the presence/absence of nAb, collecting viral supernatants, and tittering by plaque assay should take ~one week. The reagents to perform these experiments are already in hand, and as the costs will be limited to standard tissue culture reagents, using a microscopy set up the authors already possess. The experiments throughout the paper are well described, with appropriate methodological detail and statistical analysis.

      Minor comments: • Viruses without the mScarlet spread faster, the WSN-Udorn has more viruses with mScarlet than the WSN does so how do we know that some of the difference isn't down to that?

      Thank you for this important question. It is correct that viruses without mScarlet spread faster. We used WSN mScarlet viruses for CLSEM and live cell imaging of Calu-3 cells. To ensure that the observed differences in viral spread kinetics were not attributable to the presence or absence of mScarlet but to viral morphology, we conducted additional immunofluorescence staining for viral nucleoprotein (NP) or matrix protein 2 (M2) (Extended Figure 1 H-I). This allowed us to account for all viral plaques, including those that were not mScarlet-positive. This way we obtained data for our experiments with MDCK-α-Catenin-KO cells, mucin, zanamivir and MEDI8852 (Figure 4 and 5).

      • While Calu3 cells are reported to make mucus the authors should verify the expression of relevant mucus proteins in their hands, and this phenotype can be variable depending on culture conditions.

      Thank you for highlighting this important point. We verified the expression of MUC5AC in Calu-3 cells grown on cover slips and observed MUC5AC expression in distinct puncta (Figure 5 D).

      • In 5F and I does 'mock' mean no antibody or no virus?

      We apologize for the imprecise nomenclature in Figure 5 F and changed the Figure description.

      • The authors should either include data to support the claim in line 410: "Our data provide further evidence that IAV filamentous morphology is lost to accelerate cell-to-cell spread by faster entry kinetics and to achieve higher entry efficiency" or reword this sentence, since at present this manuscript does not include experiments demonstrating the loss of filamentous morphology in tissue culture of the WSN-M1 Udorn virus.

      Thank you, we agree and modified the sentence.

      Significance

      The data and conclusions presented in this manuscript are exciting and novel, and should be of high interest to virologists and cell biologists. The work builds on (and appropriately references) prior work in the field of influenza particle shape by the Lamb, Barclay, Garcia-Sastre, Vahey, Fletcher and Ivanovic groups. It provides new information and techniques to show that spherical virions spread faster than filamentous virions within plaques, and this advantage is not negated by cell density, the presence of mucus, or different entry inhibitors but is significantly reduced in the presence of neutralizing antibodies. It also includes other useful observations to the field (the fact that infected Calu3 cells migrate to the center of infected plaques, the fact that the entry kinetics and success rate of filaments is lower compared to spheres). Expertise: virology, influenza, virion morphology, cell biology

      __Reviewer #3 __

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity:

      The manuscript by Peterl et al. deals with the still interesting question of why influenza A viruses are filamentous in natural isolates but adopt a spherical phenotype in cell culture. The authors generated recombinant IAV reporter viruses that display identical antigenic (HA and NA) surfaces but differ in their morphology due to expression of an M1 protein that confers a spherical or filamentous phenotype. The data show that spherical viruses exhibit increased entry kinetics and spread faster in cell culture compared to filamentous viruses and that this is also the case in the presence of mucins and at a low cell density. Interestingly, the authors found that spherical viruses are more efficiently blocked by neutralizing HA antibodies than filamentous viruses, providing an interesting advantage for the filamentous phenotype of natural IAV isolates due to antibody pressure. The manuscript is of the usual excellent quality of the working group of Petr Chlanda and the data are very interesting. The experiments are well thought out and the results are comprehensible, convincing and visually very clear. The fact that a current preprint also describes that neutralizing antibodies drives filamentous virus formation (as mentioned by the authors in the discussion) does not diminish the message and quality of this work. There were a few minor open questions that came to mind that could be included in the discussion: The authors found that the filamentous morphology was stable throughout multiple rounds of infection during plaque formation. Is this still the case even with multiple passages (e.g 10x) in cell culture or does the number of spherical particles increase at some point?

      Thank you for your positive feedback and this suggestion. We performed serial passaging of WSN and WSN-M1Udorn in MDCK cells in the presence of 1 nM MEDI8852 antibody and harvested supernatants from passage 1 and 5. Supernatants were plunge-frozen, and virion counts and morphologies were determined by cryo-electron microscopy. Data from at least 80 analyzed virions per condition showed that the overall number of spherical and filamentous virions was reduced after passage 5 under antibody pressure (Fig 5 D). However, both morphologies remained stable throughout five passages in the presence of MEDI8852 (Fig. 5 E). We did not observe an increase in spherical particles after five passages.

      The filamentous virus spreads slower in cell culture. Does NA play a role here? NA is probably distributed differently on the surface of filamentous viruses (at the tips) than on spherical viruses?

      Thank you for this comment. As correctly pointed out, NA is enriched on one side/tip of filamentous (Calder et al., 2010, doi:10.1073/pnas.1002123107) or spherical IAV as now highlighted in Figure 1 D and E (white arrowheads). This asymmetric NA distribution and the HA-NA balance have been reported to be crucial for the release of newly formed virions and their spread through the mucus layer in the airway epithelium (De Vries et al., 2019, doi: 10.1016/j.tim.2019.08.010). Additionally, we compared the role of NA in the spread of spherical and filamentous IAV by performing fluorescent plaque assays in the presence of Zanamivir, a potent NA inhibitor. Analysis of plaque growth in the presence of increasing Zanamivir concentrations showed that the spread of both IAV morphologies was inhibited to a comparable extent (Figure 4 F and extended Figure 4 C). This result suggests that the inhibition of NA enzymatic activity does not influence the IAV morphology-dependent spread. We have included this information in the results (Line 281-285) and discussion (Line 465-468).

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      The manuscript is of the usual excellent quality of the working group of Petr Chlanda and the data are very interesting. The experiments are well thought out and the results are comprehensible, convincing and visually very clear.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes a series of lab and field experiments to understand the role of tadpole transport in shaping the microbiome of poison frogs in early life. The authors conducted a cross-foster experiment in which R. variabilis tadpoles were carried by adults of their own species, carried by adults of another frog species, or not carried at all. After being carried for 6 hours, tadpole microbiomes resembled those of their caregiving species. Next, the authors reported higher microbiome diversity in tadpoles of two species that engage in transport-based parental care compared to one species that does not. Finally, they collected tadpoles either from the backs of an adult (i.e., they had recently been transported) or from eggs (i.e., not transported) but did not find significant overlap in microbiome composition between transported tadpoles and their parents.

      Strengths:

      The cross-foster experiment and the field experiment that reared transported and non-transported tadpoles are creative ways to address an important question in animal microbiome research. Together, they imply a small role for parental care in the development of the tadpole microbiome. The manuscript is generally well-written and easy to understand.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Developmental time series:

      It was not entirely clear how this experiment relates to the rest of the manuscript, as it does not compare any effects of transport within or across species.

      (2) Cross-foster experiment:

      The "heterospecific transport" tadpoles were manually brushed onto the back of the surrogate frog, while the "biological transport" tadpoles were picked up naturally by the parent. It is a little challenging to interpret the effect of caregiver species since it is conflated with the method of attachment to the parent. I noticed that the uptake of Os-associated microbes by Os-transported tadpoles seemed to be higher than the uptake of Rv-associated microbes by Rv-associated tadpoles (comparing the second box from the left to the rightmost boxplot in panel S2C). Perhaps this could be a technical artifact if manual attachment to Os frogs was more efficient than natural attachment to Rv frogs.

      I was also surprised to see so much of the tadpole microbiome attributed to Os in tadpoles that were not transported by Os frogs (25-50% in many cases). It suggests that SourceTracker may not be effectively classifying the taxa.

      (3) Cross-species analysis:

      Like the developmental time series, this analysis doesn't really address the central question of the manuscript. I don't think it is fair for the authors to attribute the difference in diversity to parental care behavior, since the comparison only includes n=2 transporting species and n=1 non-transporting species that differ in many other ways. I would also add that increased diversity is not necessarily an expectation of vertical transmission. The similarity between adults and tadpoles is likely a more relevant outcome for vertical transmission, but the authors did not find any evidence that tadpole-adult similarity was any higher in species with tadpole transport. In fact, tadpoles and adults were more similar in the non-transporting species than in one of the transporting species (lines 296-298), which seems to directly contradict the authors' hypothesis. I don't see this result explained or addressed in the Discussion.

      (4) Field experiment:

      The rationale and interpretation of the genus-level network are not clear, and the figure is not legible. What does it mean to "visualize the microbial interconnectedness" or to be a "central part of the community"? The previous sentences in this paragraph (lines 337-343) seem to imply that transfer is parent-specific, but the genus-level network is based on the current adult frogs, not the previous generation of parents that transported them. So it is not clear that the distribution or co-distribution of these taxa provides any insight into vertical transmission dynamics.

    2. Author response:

      To address Reviewer 1’s concerns, we will implement the following changes:

      Comment 1: We will clarify that, even without direct comparisons within or across species, whether vertically transmitted microbes act as pioneering colonizers or integrate into an existing community is an important factor influencing their effect on community composition.

      Comment 2: We will provide additional details on the biology of the surrogate frog Oophaga sylvatica, explain how tadpole manipulation might influence adhesion to the caregiver, and acknowledge that the lack of knowledge on the physiological mechanisms underlying tadpole attachment currently limits our discussion to speculation.

      We will further clarify in the “Methods” section that SourceTracker’s ability to accurately estimate source proportions was assessed by evaluating how well it assigned training samples to their correct source environments. We will provide the predictions for the training set and describe how they informed our data preprocessing and analysis approach.

      Comment 3: While we predicted that community distances between tadpoles and adults would be smaller in species with parental transport, we explicitly state that our results did not confirm this expectation. We thus see no contradiction in our discussion but will ensure that this point is more clearly communicated. In response to the reviewer’s suggestion, we will incorporate additional literature on how tadpoles’ skin microbial communities change over time and adapt to their environment. We will also expand on how the life history of L. longirostris—specifically, the frequent presence of adults in tadpole habitats—may facilitate horizontal microbiota transmission, potentially contributing to shorter community distances.

      Comment 4: We will remove the network visualization to prevent any misinterpretation.

      Additionally, following Reviewer 2’s suggestion, we will include data on the absolute abundance of ASVs shared between parent and offspring after one month of development to further support the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The novel advance by Wang et al is in the demonstration that, relative to a standard extinction procedure, the retrieval-extinction procedure more effectively suppresses responses to a conditioned threat stimulus when testing occurs just minutes after extinction. The authors provide some solid evidence to show that this "short-term" suppression of responding involves engagement of the dorsolateral prefrontal cortex.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the study is well-designed and the results are potentially interesting. There are, however, a few issues in the way that it is introduced and discussed. Some of the issues concern clarity of expression/communication. However, others relate to a theory that could be used to help the reader understand why the results should have come out the way that they did. More specific comments and questions are presented below.

      Weaknesses:

      INTRODUCTION & THEORY

      (1) It is difficult to appreciate why the first trial of extinction in a standard protocol does NOT produce the retrieval-extinction effect. This applies to the present study as well as others that have purported to show a retrieval-extinction effect. The importance of this point comes through at several places in the paper. E.g., the two groups in Study 1 experienced a different interval between the first and second CS extinction trials; and the results varied with this interval: a longer interval (10 min) ultimately resulted in less reinstatement of fear than a shorter interval. Even if the different pattern of results in these two groups was shown/known to imply two different processes, there is nothing in the present study that addresses what those processes might be. That is, while the authors talk about mechanisms of memory updating, there is little in the present study that permits any clear statement about mechanisms of memory. The references to a "short-term memory update" process do not help the reader to understand what is happening in the protocol.

      In reply to this point, the authors cite evidence to suggest that "an isolated presentation of the CS+ seems to be important in preventing the return of fear expression." They then note the following: "It has also been suggested that only when the old memory and new experience (through extinction) can be inferred to have been generated from the same underlying latent cause, the old memory can be successfully modified(Gershman et al., 2017). On the other hand, if the new experiences are believed to be generated by a different latent cause, then the old memory is less likely to be subject to modification. Therefore, the way the 1stand 2ndCS are temporally organized (retrieval-extinction or standard extinction) might affect how the latent cause is inferred and lead to different levels of fear expression from a theoretical perspective." This merely begs the question: why might an isolated presentation of the CS+ result in the subsequent extinction experiences being allocated to the same memory state as the initial conditioning experiences? This is not yet addressed in any way.

      (2) The discussion of memory suppression is potentially interesting but, in its present form, raises more questions than it answers. That is, memory suppression is invoked to explain a particular pattern of results but I, as the reader, have no sense of why a fear memory would be better suppressed shortly after the retrieval-extinction protocol compared to the standard extinction protocol; and why this suppression is NOT specific to the cue that had been subjected to the retrieval-extinction protocol.

      (3) Relatedly, how does the retrieval-induced forgetting (which is referred to at various points throughout the paper) relate to the retrieval-extinction effect? The appeal to retrieval-induced forgetting as an apparent justification for aspects of the present study reinforces points 2 and 3 above. It is not uninteresting but lacks clarification/elaboration and, therefore, its relevance appears superficial at best.

      (4) I am glad that the authors have acknowledged the papers by Chalkia, van Oudenhove & Beckers (2020) and Chalkia et al (2020), which failed to replicate the effects of retrieval-extinction reported by Schiller et al in Reference 6. The authors have inserted the following text in the revised manuscript: "It should be noted that while our long-term amnesia results were consistent with the fear memory reconsolidation literature, there were also studies that failed to observe fear prevention (Chalkia, Schroyens, et al., 2020; Chalkia, Van Oudenhove, et al., 2020; Schroyens et al., 2023). Although the memory reconsolidation framework provides a viable explanation for the long-term amnesia, more evidence is required to validate the presence of reconsolidation, especially at the neurobiological level (Elsey et al., 2018). While it is beyond the scope of the current study to discuss the discrepancies between these studies, one possibility to reconcile these results concerns the procedure for the retrieval-extinction training. It has been shown that the eligibility for old memory to be updated is contingent on whether the old memory and new observations can be inferred to have been generated by the same latent cause (Gershman et al., 2017; Gershman and Niv, 2012). For example, prevention of the return of fear memory can be achieved through gradual extinction paradigm, which is thought to reduce the size of prediction errors to inhibit the formation of new latent causes (Gershman, Jones, et al., 2013). Therefore, the effectiveness of the retrieval-extinction paradigm might depend on the reliability of such paradigm in inferring the same underlying latent cause." Firstly, if it is beyond the scope of the present study to discuss the discrepancies between the present and past results, it is surely beyond the scope of the study to make any sort of reference to clinical implications!!! Secondly, it is perfectly fine to state that "the effectiveness of the retrieval-extinction paradigm might depend on the reliability of such paradigm in inferring the same underlying latent cause..." This is not uninteresting, but it also isn't saying much. Minimally, I would expect some statement about factors that are likely to determine whether one is or isn't likely to see a retrieval-extinction effect, grounded in terms of this theory.

      CLARIFICATIONS, ELABORATIONS, EDITS

      (5) Some parts of the paper are not easy to follow. Here are a few examples (though there are others):

      (a) In the abstract, the authors ask "whether memory retrieval facilitates update mechanisms other than memory reconsolidation"... but it is never made clear how memory retrieval could or should "facilitate" a memory update mechanism.

      (b) The authors state the following: "Furthermore, memory reactivation also triggers fear memory reconsolidation and produces cue specific amnesia at a longer and separable timescale (Study 2, N = 79 adults)." Importantly, in study 2, the retrieval-extinction protocol produced a cue-specific disruption in responding when testing occurred 24 hours after the end of extinction. This result is interesting but cannot be easily inferred from the statement that begins "Furthermore..." That is, the results should be described in terms of the combined effects of retrieval and extinction, not in terms of memory reactivation alone; and the statement about memory reconsolidation is unnecessary. One can simply state that the retrieval-extinction protocol produced a cue-specific disruption in responding when testing occurred 24 hours after the end of extinction.

      (c) The authors also state that: "The temporal scale and cue-specificity results of the short-term fear amnesia are clearly dissociable from the amnesia related to memory reconsolidation, and suggest that memory retrieval and extinction training trigger distinct underlying memory update mechanisms." ***The pattern of results when testing occurred just minutes after the retrieval-extinction protocol was different to that obtained when testing occurred 24 hours after the protocol. Describing this in terms of temporal scale is unnecessary; and suggesting that memory retrieval and extinction trigger different memory update mechanisms is not obviously warranted. The results of interest are due to the combined effects of retrieval+extinction and there is no sense in which different memory update mechanisms should be identified with the different pattern of results obtained when testing occurred either 30 min or 24 hours after the retrieval-extinction protocol (at least, not the specific pattern of results obtained here).

      (d) The authors state that: "We hypothesize that the labile state triggered by the memory retrieval may facilitate different memory update mechanisms following extinction training, and these mechanisms can be further disentangled through the lens of temporal dynamics and cue-specificities." *** The first part of the sentence is confusing around usage of the term "facilitate"; and the second part of the sentence that references a "lens of temporal dynamics and cue-specificities" is mysterious. Indeed, as all rats received the same retrieval-extinction exposures in Study 2, it is not clear how or why any differences between the groups are attributed to "different memory update mechanisms following extinction".

      DATA

      (6A) The eight participants who were discontinued after Day 1 in Study 1 were all from the no reminder group. The authors should clarify how participants were allocated to the two groups in this experiment so that the reader can better understand why the distribution of non-responders was non-random (as it appears to be).

      (6B) Similarly, in study 2, of the 37 participants that were discontinued after Day 2, 19 were from Group 30 min and 5 were from Group 6 hours. The authors should comment on how likely these numbers are to have been by chance alone. I presume that they reflect something about the way that participants were allocated to groups: e.g., the different groups of participants in studies 1 and 2 could have been run at quite different times (as opposed to concurrently). If this was done, why was it done? I can't see why the study should have been conducted in this fashion - this is for myriad reasons, including the authors' concerns re SCRs and their seasonal variations.

      (6C) In study 2, why is responding to the CS- so high on the first test trial in Group 30 min? Is the change in responding to the CS- from the last extinction trial to the first test trial different across the three groups in this study? Inspection of the figure suggests that it is higher in Group 30 min relative to Groups 6 hours and 24 hours. If this is confirmed by the analysis, it has implications for the fear recovery index which is partly based on responses to the CS-. If not for differences in the CS- responses, Groups 30 min and 6 hours are otherwise identical. That is, the claim of differential recovery to the CS1 and CS2 across time may simply an artefact of the way that the recovery index was calculated. This is unfortunate but also an important feature of the data given the way in which the fear recovery index was calculated.

      (6D) The 6 hour group was clearly tested at a different time of day compared to the 30 min and 24 hour groups. This could have influenced the SCRs in this group and, thereby, contributed to the pattern of results obtained.

      (6E) The authors find different patterns of responses to CS1 and CS2 when they were tested 30 min after extinction versus 24 h after extinction. On this basis, they infer distinct memory update mechanisms. However, I still can't quite see why the different patterns of responses at these two time points after extinction need to be taken to infer different memory update mechanisms. That is, the different patterns of responses at the two time points could be indicative of the same "memory update mechanism" in the sense that the retrieval-extinction procedure induces a short-term memory suppression that serves as the basis for the longer-term memory suppression (i.e., the reconsolidation effect). My pushback on this point is based on the notion of what constitutes a memory update mechanism; and is motivated by what I take to be a rather loose use of language/terminology in the reconsolidation literature and this paper specifically (for examples, see the title of the paper and line 2 of the abstract).

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The study investigated whether memory retrieval followed soon by extinction training results in a short-term memory deficit when tested - with a reinstatement test that results in recovery from extinction - soon after extinction training. Experiment 1 documents this phenomenon using a between-subjects design. Experiment 2 used a within-subject control and saw that the effect is also observed in a control condition. In addition, it also revealed that if testing is conducted 6 hours after extinction, there is not effect of retrieval prior to extinction as there is recovery from extinction independently of retrieval prior to extinction. A third Group also revealed that retrieval followed by extinction attenuates reinstatement when the test is conducted 24 hours later, consistent with previous literature. Finally, Experiment 3 used continuous theta-burst stimulation of the dorsolateral prefrontal cortex and assessed whether inhibition of that region (vs a control region) reversed the short-term effect revealed in Experiments 1 and 2. The results of control groups in Experiment 3 replicated the previous findings (short-term effect), and the experimental group revealed that these can be reversed by inhibition of the dorsolateral prefrontal cortex.

      Strengths

      The work is performed using standard procedures (fear conditioning and continuous theta-burst stimulation) and there is some justification of the sample sizes. The results replicate previous findings - some of which have been difficult to replicate and this needs to be acknowledged - and suggest that the effect can also be observed in a short-term reinstatement test.

      The study establishes links between the memory reconsolidation and retrieval-induced forgetting (or memory suppression) literatures. The explanations that have been developed for these are distinct and the current results integrate these, by revealing that the DLPFC activity involved in retrieval-extinction short-term effect. There is thus some novelty in the present results, but numerous questions remain unaddressed.

      Weakness

      The fear acquisition data is converted to a differential fear SCR and this is what is analysed (early vs late). However, the figure shows the raw SCR values for CS+ and CS- and therefore it is unclear whether acquisition was successful (despite there being an "early" vs "late" effect - no descriptives are provided).

      In Experiment 1 (Test results) it is unclear whether the main conclusion stems from a comparison of the test data relative to the last extinction trial ("we defined the fear recovery index as the SCR difference between the first test trial and the last extinction trial for a specific CS") or the difference relative to the CS- ("differential fear recovery index between CS+ and CS-"). It would help the reader assess the data if Fig 1e presents all the indexes (both CS+ and CS-). In addition, there is one sentence which I could not understand "there is no statistical difference between the differential fear recovery indexes between CS+ in the reminder and no reminder groups (P=0.048)". The p value suggests that there is a difference, yet it is not clear what is being compared here. Critically, any index taken as a difference relative to the CS- can indicate recovery of fear to the CS+ or absence of discrimination relative to the CS-, so ideally the authors would want to directly compare responses to the CS+ in the reminder and no-reminder groups. In the absence of such comparison, little can be concluded, in particular if SCR CS- data is different between groups. The latter issue is particularly relevant in Experiment 2, in which the CS- seems to vary between groups during the test and this can obscure the interpretation of the result.

      In experiment 1, the findings suggest that there is a benefit of retrieval followed by extinction in a short-term reinstatement test. In Experiment 2, the same effect is observed to a cue which did not undergo retrieval before extinction (CS2+), a result that is interpreted as resulting from cue-independence, rather than a failure to replicate in a within-subjects design the observations of Experiment 1 (between-subjects). Although retrieval-induced forgetting is cue-independent (the effect on items that are suppressed [Rp-] can be observed with an independent probe), it is not clear that the current findings are similar, and thus that the strong parallels made are not warranted. Here, both cues have been extinguished and therefore been equally exposed during the critical stage.

      The findings in Experiment 2 suggest that the amnesia reported in Experiment 1 is transient, in that no effect is observed when the test is delayed by 6 hours. The phenomena whereby reactivated memories transition to extinguished memories as a function of the amount of exposure (or number of trials) is completely different from the phenomena observed here. In the former, the manipulation has to do with the number of trials (or total amount of time) that the cues are exposed. In the current Experiment 2, the authors did not manipulate the number of trials but instead the retention interval between extinction and test. The finding reported here is closer to a "Kamin effect", that is the forgetting of learned information which is observed with intervals of intermediate length (Baum, 1968). Because the Kamin effect has been inferred to result from retrieval failure, it is unclear how this can be explained here. There needs to be much more clarity on the explanations to substantiate the conclusions.<br /> There are many results (Ryan et al., 2015) that challenge the framework that the authors base their predictions on (consolidation and reconsolidation theory), therefore these need to be acknowledged. These studies showed that memory can be expressed in the absence of the biological machinery thought to be needed for memory performance. The authors should be careful about statements such as "eliminate fear memores" for which there is little evidence.

      The parallels between the current findings and the memory suppression literature are speculated in the general discussion, and there is the conclusion that "the retrieval-extinction procedure might facilitate a spontaneous memory suppression process". Because one of the basic tenets of the memory suppression literature is that it reflects an "active suppression" process, there is no reason to believe that in the current paradigm the same phenomenon is in place, but instead it is "automatic". In other words, the conclusions make strong parallels with the memory suppression (and cognitive control) literature, yet the phenomena that they observed is thought to be passive (or spontaneous/automatic). Ultimately, it is unclear why 10 mins between the reminder and extinction learning will "automatically" suppress fear memories. Further down in the discussion it is argued that "For example, in the well-known retrieval-induced forgetting (RIF) phenomenon, the recall of a stored memory can impair the retention of related long-term memory and this forgetting effect emerges as early as 20 minutes after the retrieval procedure, suggesting memory suppression or inhibition can occur in a more spontaneous and automatic manner". I did not follow with the time delay between manipulation and test (20 mins) would speak about whether the process is controlled or automatic. In addition, the links with the "latent cause" theoretical framework are weak if any. There is little reason to believe that one extinction trial, separated by 10 mins from the rest of extinction trials, may lead participants to learn that extinction and acquisition have been generated by the same latent cause.

      Among the many conclusions, one is that the current study uncovers the "mechanism" underlying the short-term effects of retrieval-extinction. There is little in the current report that uncovers the mechanism, even in the most psychological sense of the mechanism, so this needs to be clarified. The same applies to the use of "adaptive".

      Whilst I could access the data in the OFS site, I could not make sense of the Matlab files as there is no signposting indicating what data is being shown in the files. Thus, as it stands, there is no way of independently replicating the analyses reported.

      The supplemental material shows figures with all participants, but only some statistical analyses are provided, and sometimes these are different from those reported in the main manuscript. For example, the test data in Experiment 1 is analysed with a two-way ANOVA with main effects of group (reminder vs no-reminder) and time (last trial of extinction vs first trial of test) in the main report. The analyses with all participants in the sup mat used a mixed two-way ANOVA with group (reminder vs no reminder) and CS (CS+ vs CS-). This makes it difficult to assess the robustness of the results when including all participants. In addition, in the supplementary materials there are no figures and analyses for Experiment 3.

      One of the overarching conclusions is that the "mechanisms" underlying reconsolidation (long term) and memory suppression (short term) phenomena are distinct, but memory suppression phenomena can also be observed after a 7-day retention interval (Storm et al., 2012), which then questions the conclusions achieved by the current study.

      References:

      Baum, M. (1968). Reversal learning of an avoidance response and the Kamin effect. Journal of Comparative and Physiological Psychology, 66(2), 495.<br /> Chalkia, A., Schroyens, N., Leng, L., Vanhasbroeck, N., Zenses, A. K., Van Oudenhove, L., & Beckers, T. (2020). No persistent attenuation of fear memories in humans: A registered replication of the reactivation-extinction effect. Cortex, 129, 496-509.<br /> Ryan, T. J., Roy, D. S., Pignatelli, M., Arons, A., & Tonegawa, S. (2015). Engram cells retain memory under retrograde amnesia. Science, 348(6238), 1007-1013.<br /> Storm, B. C., Bjork, E. L., & Bjork, R. A. (2012). On the durability of retrieval-induced forgetting. Journal of Cognitive Psychology, 24(5), 617-629.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have revised the manuscript but most of my concerns have remained unaddressed.

      (1) There are still no descriptive statistics to substantiate learning in Experiment 1.

      (2) In the revised analyses, the authors now show that CS- changes in different groups (for example, Experiment 2) so this means that there is little to conclude from the differential scores because these depend on CS-. It is unclear whether the effects arise from CS+ performance or the differential which is subject to CS- variations.

      (3) The notion that suppression is automatic is speculative at best

      (4) It still struggle with the parallels between these findings and the "limbo" literature. Here you manipulated the retention interval, whereas in the cited studies the number of extinction (exposure) was varied. These are two completely different phenomena.

      (5) My point about the data problematic for the reconsolidation (and consolidation) frameworks is that they observed memory in the absence of the brain substrates that are needed for memory to be observed. The answer did not address this. I do not understand how the latent cause model can explain this, if the only difference is the first ITI. Wouldn't participants fail to integrate extinction with acquisition with a longer ITI?

      (6) The materials in the OSF site are the same as before, they haven't ben updated.

      (7) Concerning supplementary materials, the robustness tests are intended to prove that you 1) can get the same results by varying the statistical models or 2) you can get the same results when you include all participants. Here authors have done both so this does not help. Also, in the rebuttal letter, they stated "Please note we did not include non-learners in these analyses " which contradicts what is stated in the figure captions "(learners + non learners)"

      (8) Finally, the literature suggesting that reconsolidation interference "eliminates" a memory is not substantiated by data nor in line with current theorising, so I invite a revision of these strong claims.

      Overall, I conclude that the revised manuscript did not address my main concerns.

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      Reply to the reviewers

      1. General Statements

      We thank the reviewers for their thorough evaluation of this manuscript. We are pleased that overall, they found our work and results valuable for the scientific community. Based on their feedback, we performed additional experiments and made several changes to strengthen the manuscript and expand the target audience.

      *All three reviewers pointed out that the manuscript lacked demonstration of OneSABER method applicability across sample types (i.e., its claimed versatility) and other whole-mount systems beyond the Macrostomum lignano flatworm. *

      We now include an additional results section with accompanying figures (Figs. 6 and 7) that demonstrate the application of OneSABER in whole-mount samples of another flatworm, the planarian Schmidtea mediterranea (Fig. 6), which is much larger than M. lignano, and in formalin-fixed paraffin-embedded (FFPE) mouse small intestine tissue sections (Fig. 7). We believe that these additional experiments on different sample types demonstrate the versatility of the OneSABER approach.

      Please note that two more authors, Jan Freark de Boer and Folkert Kuipers, have been added for their contribution to mouse FFPE sections.

      Furthermore, two reviewers asked for an additional main figure with a comparison of the signal strengths between the different OneSABER methods.

      We have addressed this comment by including an additional results section and its adjacent figure (Fig. 5), where we provide a comparison of fluorescent signals from the same probes and gene but different OneSABER development methods.

      Additionally, to implement the revisions, we modified Fig. 1 and Supplementary Fig. 6 and broadened Supplementary Tables S1-S2, S4-S6.

      2. Point-by-point description of the revisions

      Reviewer #1

      1) “Fig.1 seems to suggest that the protocol for in vitro swapping of 3' concatemers happens in two consecutive PCR steps. I recommend indicating in the figure that the switching can be conducted in a single in vitro reaction.”

      We have changed Fig. 1 to make this clearer.

      2) “Is it possible to multiplex the switching in one single reaction? For example, perform p27 to p28 and p29 to p30 simultaneously? This will be crucial for the split-probe methodology.”

      We did not test it. This should be possible if there is no overlap between the 3’ initiator sequences. However, it seems counterproductive as the elongation efficiencies of switching reactions from the 3’ initiator sequences to another concatemer may vary (Supplementary Fig. S6). Running independent extension/switch reactions and performing equimolar mixing of purified extended probes could be a better solution.

      3) “Did the authors encounter any switching hairpins sequence that does not work? If not, can they postulate, what are the requirements for the design of switching sequences.”

      The design criteria followed the requirements postulated in the original SABER article and its Supplementary Materials (Kishi et al 2019). All switching hairpins we tested in the pairs of the 3 used 3’ initiator sequences (p27, p28 and p30) worked, but elongation efficiencies varied (see an example in Supplementary Fig. S6).

      4) “Is there cross hybridization between the switched and original hairpins? For example, can the authors show that the signals from p27 and p30 do not overlaps?”

      The in situ hybridization results with swapped primary probes are shown in Fig. 6B (multiplexed HCR in S. mediterranea). All probes were originally designed using a p27 PER initiator. We swapped Smed-vit-1 with p30 and Smedwi-1 with p28. We also updated Fig. S6, by adding the second section (B) showing the in vitro results after concatemer swapping, as well as hybridization specificity of the secondary imager probes.

      5) “Can the authors quantify results from the direct, AP, TSA, and HCR? What do you mean by 'narrow anatomical structures like neural chords (syt11) or muscles (tnnt2) seem less visible'?”

      *“I agree with reviewer #2 regarding the lack of comparison to standard SABER.” *

      A comparison of fluorescent signals from the same probes/genes but different OneSABER development methods is shown in Fig. 5.

      We have rephrased the sentence for clarity. From “As a result, despite higher intracellular resolution, some narrow anatomical structures like neural chords (syt11) or muscles (tnnt2) seem less visible for the human eye after SABER HCR (Figs. 3, 4).” to “As a result, despite higher intracellular resolution, some fine anatomical structures like neural chords (syt11) or muscles (tnnt2) are less resolved by widefield fluorescence microscopy after SABER HCR FISH compared to SABER TSA FISH”

      Reviewer #2

      1) “This work is building on standard SABER (a set of PER-extended primary probes that serve as landing pads for secondary fluorescently-labeled readout oligos) and pSABER (the readout oligo carries HRP instead of a dye for downstream TSA). The novelty of the work presented here is introducing additional variations of signal amplification, i.e. by using an hapten-labeled oligo to recruit a tertiary readout probe (antibodies conjugated with HRP or AP) or using SABER in combination with HCR. Since SABER can be seen as the underlying platform and pSABER was (arguably) also already introduced as a new platform by Attar et al. 2023, it seems difficult to introduce OneSABER as yet another new platform, of which standard SABER and pSABER are a part of. The reviewer encourages the authors to overthink the conceptual introduction, which in view of its certainly distinct novel features might allow a clearer distinction to previous work.”

      We agree with the reviewer’s comments. We have added additional information in the Introduction section to clarify the novelty and key distinct features of OneSABER that justify its separation from other SABER protocols.

      2) “Although the authors take care in tributing prior work, some of the studies are only mentioned in the results section, one of such cases is pSABER by Attar et al. 2023. The close relation between pSABER and SABER TSA (HRP on readout oligo vs. hapten on readout oligo + HRP-conjugated antibody) needs to be better positioned in the introduction, clearly framing earlier work, inspirations drawn etc.. This is in line with my previous point.”

      The pSABER preprint article by Attar et al. 2023 (now published in a peer-reviewed journal as Attar et al. 2025) is now mentioned in the Introduction, and its inspirational impact on our research is clearly stated.

      3) “Fig. 1 lists the individual modules of the OneSABER platform: i) standard SABER, ii) AP SABER, iii) SABER TSA, iv) pSABER (TSA FISH) (would recommend leaving it with original name when introducing it and include additional explanation in parentheses) and iv) SABER HCR. The main figures feature only AP SABER, SABER TSA and SABER HCR, for standard SABER and pSABER one must look up the SI. Since the authors describe the limited performance of standard SABER for one of their targets of interest (syt11) and since they have tested this target for all five conditions, it would be valuable to include a comparative view of all five platform modules in a single figure for syt11 or even also piwi, which also seems to have been tested for all five. Comparing the signal strength would be useful for the community, at least of each SABER variation compared to standard SABER.”

      We agree with the reviewer’s comments. Except for pSABER, a comparison of fluorescence signals from the same probes/genes but different OneSABER development methods is shown in Fig. 5. To make the comparison as objective as possible, all FISH developments were re-done using available “far red” fluorophores, except for pSABER. Unfortunately, our directly labeled HRP oligonucleotides for pSABER lost their activity after a year of storage at +4oC. These conjugated oligonucleotides are very expensive and, given their limited shelf life, we cannot justify ordering a new batch for this experiment. Therefore, we only have the data for pSABER syt11 with FITC green tyramide, which is not comparable to “far red” fluorophore signals. This issue has also been discussed in the main text.

      In addition, we have modified Fig. 1, as suggested.

      4) “The description of how the authors designed their probes is very detailed and they also provide a nice step-by-step protocol for their individual commands using Oligominer and BLAT software. This reviewer is wondering how the authors chose their PER sequences that they appended to their mined set of homologous in situ hybridization probes (p27,p28,p30). This is a general problem of multiplexed ISH approaches with single-stranded overhang, could the author's comment on potential self-interaction of the appended sequence with the homologous part, which might limit the PER efficiency, or elaborate on their choice?”

      As being ourselves novice to SABER when we started our work, we based our selection of the p27, p28, and p30 PER sequences on their multiple co-occurrences in previous publications (Amamoto et al. 2019, doi: 10.7554/eLife.51452; Saka et al. 2019, doi: 10.1038/s41587-019-0207-y; Wang et al. 2020, doi: 10.1016/j.omtm.2020.10.003; Salinas-Saavedra et al. 2023, doi: 10.1016/j.celrep.2023.112687; and Attar et al. 2023, doi: 10.1101/2023.01.30.526264). We did not consider the potential interference between PER concatemers and homologous primary probe-binding sequences. However, as all PER concatemers were specifically designed to lack G nucleotides to keep them from self-annealing (Kishi et al. 2019, doi: 10.1038/s41592-019-0404-0), we assumed that it would also reduce potential annealing to the homologous part of the probe.

      5) “Fig.1 and l. 125 describe straightforward in vitro switching of the concatemer sequence for an existing set of primary probes as a central feature of the OneSABER platform. However, the authors to my knowledge do not show such experiments themselves and only cite the original SABER paper by Kishi et al. 2019. This reviewer would be grateful to be pointed toward where in Kishi et al. 2019 this was demonstrated, however in view of this central part of the swopping scheme in the OneSABER platform an experiment showing this swopping is missing.”

      In the article by Kishi et al. 2019, concatemer switching/swapping is termed as “primer remapping”. We found this term confusing because it does not describe the essence of the reaction. The in situ hybridization results with swapped primary probes are shown in Fig. 6B (multiplexed HCR in S. mediterranea). All probes were originally designed using a p27 PER initiator. We swapped Smed-vit-1 with p30 and Smewi-1 with p28. We also updated Fig. S6, by adding the second section (B) showing the in vitro results after concatemer swapping, as well as hybridization specificity of the secondary imager probes.

      6) “the description of Table S6 could use additional information in the legend such that the reader does not have to scroll down to Section S1 to retrieve the information (PER reaction, gel conditions, ladder is dsDNA, what are the individual bands)”

      Probably, the reviewer meant Fig. S6. We now wrote a more detailed caption for the figure and extended it with a second panel (B) to illustrate the results of 3’ concatemer swapping.

      7) “the manuscript features an extensive set of resources in main body, supplementary materials and protocols. It is important and usually not merited sufficiently making the effort to compare orthogonal approaches for a given aim. This reviewer particularly appreciates the detailed strengths & weaknesses discussion in Table S6.”

      We thank the reviewer for the appreciation of our work.

      8) “Minor comments:

      -Definitions should be consistent, in Fig. 1 all approaches are defined with FISH added, but this definition is not followed consistently in the main text.”

      These definitions are now made consistent throughout the text.

      9) “Optional:

      -The authors describe several newly developed optimization steps during sample preparation for M. lignano ISH experiments compared to established ones. If the data exists, they include a supplementary figure showing improvements of optimized protocol steps”

      As almost every step and the buffer recipes were different from the original ISH protocol by Pfister et al. (2007) because of the use of liquid-exchange columns, different probes, and development chemistry, we believe that a comparison would be excessive. We think that the key difference points are already substantially highlighted in the results section.

      Reviewer #3

      1) “Despite including a whole figure (Figure 1) featuring the operation scheme of the OneSABER platform, the figure as well as the associated text fall short with respect to clearly stating the advantage of the different aspects of the platform. Consider a clearer and more thorough explanation of the different aspects of the platfrom.”

      Details on the advantages and disadvantages of using different OneSABER methods in terms of their experimental application and cost efficiency are described in Supplementary Tables S4-S6 of the submitted manuscript. However, we agree that the description in Fig. 1 was too concise and also did not refer to these tables. We have expanded the description in Fig. 1.

      2) “Related to the first comment: A more detailed description of the similarities and/or differences of this platform relative to similar applications such as the study by Hall et al, 2024”

      The mere point of mentioning the preprint of Hall et al. 2024 (now peer-reviewed, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.celrep.2024.114892) was to acknowledge that in M. lignano the HCR technology has been previously applied (although only once), while all other previously published works on M. lignano utilized canonical antisense RNA probes colorimetric in situ hybridization. We have extensively mentioned the HCR approach and its working principles throughout the submitted manuscript.

      3) “The authors describe the probes used as short, synthetic DNA probes targeting short RNA transcripts. Are these probes Oligopaints (Beliveau et al, 2015)? Why is that not more clearly stated in the text?”

      Oligopaints use oligo libraries as a renewable source of FISH probes, and these libraries are amplified with fluorophore-conjugated PCR primers. We used synthetic DNA probes directly. In this sense, our probe sets are not oligopaints. However, we used the OligoMiner pipeline of Oligopaints for the design of the probes, and thus used the same tiling strategy as oligopaints. We believe that this has been explained in the manuscript. Please refer to comment 4 of Reviewer 2.

      4) “Line 105, p5: The authors state that the number of probes depends on the target RNA length and its expression strength. This data should be in the main text and described in detail since it is a major aspect of the platform design.”

      We believe that this statement is common sense, as one cannot design more than 5x 30-50 bp probes for 200 nt transcripts, while for a 2000 bp mRNA, the theoretical limit is ~50 probes. Similarly, weakly expressed genes (regardless of their length) would require either more probes to reach the detection threshold or stronger amplification through choice of concatemer length and/or signal developing techniques. We have rephrased this sentence in the main text to reflect this.

      5) “Figure 2 showcases one of the most compelling data supporting the versatility of the platform. Can the signals in each panel be quantified and compared to 1. Published Ab staining? Is there a clear correlation in the intensity of the signals? 2. Between Vector Blue and NBT? 3. Chemical staining and FISH signals?”

      Since M. lignano is a relatively new model, there are no published antibody stainings for M. lignano genes used in this study. Furthermore, colorimetric precipitate methods are not quantitative but rather qualitative, because their signal strength is proportional to both the target RNA level and the development time; thus, signals from weakly expressed transcripts can be “boosted” simply by longer development. Therefore, a correct quantitative comparison with colorimetric methods, as requested by the reviewer, was not possible. However, with some corrections on fluorophore differences and animal-to-animal variability, it is possible to roughly compare peak saturation intensities for FISH methods if the experiments are designed for this aim. We performed these experiments, and a comparison of fluorescent signals from the same probes/genes but different OneSABER development methods is shown in Fig. 5.

      Minor comments:

      6) “The whole mount images and signals are often diffuse, can they be visualized using a DIC where the morphology of the organism is clearer?”

      We are unsure which images appear to be diffused to the reviewer. The other reviewers have not pointed out similar issues. Perhaps the question resolves once full-resolution uncompressed images are uploaded.

      7) “In order to support the claim that this is a universal approach for whole-mount staining, can the authors show an example of applicability to C. elegans?”

      This is now addressed. We included two additional results sections with two accompanying figures (Figs. 6 and 7) that demonstrate OneSABER’s application in whole-mount samples of a much larger than M. lignano model flatworm, the planarian Schmidtea mediterranea (Fig. 6), as well as in formalin-fixed paraffin-embedded (FFPE) small intestine tissue sections of a mouse model (Fig. 7).

    1. 塔拉纳·伯克 (Tarana Burke): MeToo

      塔拉纳·伯克 (Tarana Burke) 是美国社会活动家,知名的女性主义者和性别暴力问题的倡导者。她最为人所知的是发起了#MeToo运动,这是一个全球范围内的反性骚扰和性暴力运动,旨在通过女性的团结与支持,推动社会对性别暴力的关注和改变。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      塔拉纳·伯克生于1973年,成长于纽约市的一个低收入家庭。她从小便意识到社会不平等和性别暴力的严重性,特别是在她自己的社区中。伯克的经历和成长环境使她深刻理解了贫困、种族歧视和性别暴力如何交织在一起,塑造了她后来的社会活动和立场。

      2. #MeToo运动的创立

      塔拉纳·伯克在2006年创立了#MeToo运动,最初的目标是支持和帮助那些经历过性暴力的女性,特别是那些来自边缘化群体(如非洲裔女性、低收入女性、青少年等)。这个运动并非一时的行为或口号,而是伯克长期以来对性暴力问题的关注的自然延伸。

      她在最初的#MeToo运动中,使用这一术语来为受害者提供一个共享的空间,让她们知道她们并不孤单。她强调,#MeToo运动不是仅仅关于个人的经历,而是关于集体的力量,以及如何通过团结、支持与行动来对抗普遍存在的性暴力和性别不公。

      3. #MeToo运动的爆发

      虽然塔拉纳·伯克于2006年就开始使用#MeToo这一术语,但这个运动在2017年被广泛关注,当时好莱坞女演员艾丽莎·米兰诺(Alyssa Milano)通过社交媒体推动了这一运动的广泛传播。米兰诺号召女性分享自己遭遇性骚扰的经历,迅速引发了全球范围内的讨论和声援,成为一个全民参与的社会运动。

      伯克对此感到既高兴又感慨,尽管#MeToo在社交媒体上取得了前所未有的成功,但她强调,这个运动的初衷从未改变——它本应关注的是对受害者提供资源、支持和对抗性暴力的长期工作,而不仅仅是社交媒体上的一时风潮。

      4. 塔拉纳·伯克的核心价值观

      塔拉纳·伯克的核心价值观之一是赋权(empowerment)。她坚信,只有通过集体的行动,支持受害者并为她们提供必要的资源,才能根本改变性别暴力的文化。她不仅关注个人受害者的创伤,还关注如何通过教育、公共政策和社会行动来破除性别暴力的社会结构。

      她的另一核心价值观是恢复性正义(restorative justice)。伯克反对将性暴力和骚扰仅仅视作一种法律上的犯罪行为,主张通过社区支持和恢复性对话,帮助受害者康复,并促使社会成员参与其中,共同推动文化变革。

      5. 公众形象与影响

      作为#MeToo运动的创始人之一,塔拉纳·伯克在全球范围内拥有广泛的影响力。她是美国性别平等与性暴力问题的发声者,曾多次在公众场合和媒体上阐述她的观点。她的讲话充满力量,且以一种温和却坚定的方式鼓励更多女性站出来发声,挑战长期存在的性别不平等和暴力问题。

      2018年,她出版了个人回忆录《Unbound: My Story of Liberation and the Birth of the Me Too Movement》,在书中,她详细回顾了自己如何走上倡导性别平等与反性暴力的道路,并且阐述了#MeToo运动的由来和背后深刻的社会背景。

      6. #MeToo运动的影响

      MeToo运动不仅为全球数百万女性提供了一个安全的平台,让她们能够公开自己的遭遇,也极大地改变了社会对性骚扰和性暴力的认识。许多知名人士因此被揭露性骚扰行为,包括电影制片人哈维·韦恩斯坦(Harvey Weinstein)和许多政治、娱乐界人物。运动让性别暴力成为公众话题,推动了很多国家和地区在性骚扰相关法律和社会政策方面的改革。

      塔拉纳·伯克也强调,#MeToo运动不仅仅是“暴露性侵者”,而是要构建一个更加平等和尊重的社会。她呼吁社会要去除对性暴力受害者的污名化和歧视,帮助受害者走向恢复和康复。

      7. 面临的挑战与批评

      尽管#MeToo运动在全球范围内获得了巨大的成功,但它也面临着一些挑战和批评。部分人认为,这个运动过于关注名人暴力事件,忽视了普通女性,特别是来自少数族裔和贫困社区的女性的声音。塔拉纳·伯克则始终强调,#MeToo运动最初的重点就是帮助边缘化群体,因此她呼吁在运动中更多关注这些群体的需求。

      8. 结论

      塔拉纳·伯克的工作与#MeToo运动彻底改变了公众对性暴力的认知,推动了社会对于性别平等和暴力受害者的重新关注。她的行动不仅在美国国内产生了深远的影响,也为全球范围内的性别平等事业注入了新的动力。通过她的努力,越来越多的人开始意识到性暴力不是个别事件,而是深层次的文化问题,只有通过系统性改革,才能实现真正的社会变革。

    2. 1990 艾玛·沃特森 (Emma Watson):性别平等

      艾玛·沃特森(Emma Watson),英国女演员、活动家和女性主义者,以其在《哈利·波特》系列电影中的赫敏·格兰杰(Hermione Granger)角色而成名。除了作为演员,沃特森还以其积极的社会活动和女性主义立场而闻名,特别是在推广性别平等、女性权利和可持续发展的议题上,成为了全球性别平等运动的先锋之一。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      艾玛·查尔特·沃特森于1990年4月15日出生在法国巴黎,父母分别是英国律师Jacqueline Luesby和Chris Watson。沃特森自小便展现出了卓越的学习能力和对艺术的兴趣。她的家庭在她很小的时候就搬回了英国,她在英国的牛津郡长大。

      沃特森从小就表现出了对表演的兴趣,并且在就读于牛津大学时继续深造。在参加《哈利·波特》系列电影的拍摄时,她仍在上学,并且始终致力于平衡她的学术和演艺事业。她最终以英语文学专业毕业,获得了牛津大学的学位。

      2. 演艺生涯:赫敏·格兰杰角色

      沃特森的演艺事业始于1999年,当时年仅9岁的她被选中出演《哈利·波特与魔法石》中的赫敏·格兰杰一角。这个角色是《哈利·波特》系列中的主要人物之一,赫敏聪明、果断且勇敢,是许多观众喜爱的角色。她出演了该系列的所有电影,并在全球范围内获得了无数的粉丝。

      通过在《哈利·波特》系列中的表现,沃特森不仅赢得了多个奖项,还成为了全球知名的年轻演员。赫敏这一角色展现了女性独立、智慧和勇气的特点,给很多观众带来了正面的影响,尤其是对于女性角色的塑造。

      3. 社会活动与女性主义

      在事业的巅峰,沃特森并没有选择只聚焦于演艺圈,而是投入到多个社会问题的倡导中,尤其是性别平等女性权利

      3.1 联合国女性亲善大使

      沃特森在2014年被任命为联合国妇女亲善大使。在这个角色中,她领导了HeForShe运动,这是一个全球性的倡导性别平等和女性赋权的活动,旨在激发男性在女性平等权利方面发挥更多的作用。通过这一运动,沃特森强调了性别平等不仅是女性的责任,而是每个人都应为之努力的事业。

      HeForShe运动的目标是挑战全球范围内的性别歧视,并鼓励男性站出来支持女性权利。这一运动获得了全球范围内的广泛支持,沃特森也因此受到了许多国际媒体的关注和赞誉。沃特森在联合国大会上的讲话激励了无数人,特别是那些关注性别不平等问题的年轻人。

      3.2 女性主义与性别平等

      沃特森将女性主义定义为“争取男女平等的运动”,她强调,女性主义并不是一个贬低男性的概念,而是一个推动社会全面进步的思想。她在多个场合公开表达了自己对性别平等的坚定立场,并强调性别不平等不仅影响女性,也对男性和整个社会造成负面影响。

      沃特森在多个公开场合提到,她是女性主义者,她支持女性在政治、经济和文化领域的平等权利。她一直积极参与关于性别不平等、薪资差距、性别暴力和性骚扰等问题的讨论,力求通过提升公众意识和推动政策变革,创造更加公平和包容的社会。

      3.3 教育与倡导

      沃特森在公众演讲和社交平台上也频繁发表关于性别平等、女性教育和女性参与的讲话。她曾在2015年为哈佛大学毕业典礼发表讲话,讲述了女性在现代社会中所面临的挑战,呼吁全社会更加关注性别平等问题。她提出,女性主义是“为平等发声的运动”,她提到,许多女性正在努力争取自身的权利,但社会对女性的压迫仍然存在。

      4. 环保与可持续发展

      除了性别平等,沃特森还对环境保护可持续发展表现出浓厚的兴趣。她参与了多个与环保相关的项目,致力于提升人们对环保问题的关注。沃特森是多个环保组织的倡导者之一,尤其关注纺织业的可持续性。她多次呼吁减少对环境的破坏,推动环保产品的生产与消费,提倡可持续时尚。

      沃特森也在社交媒体上大力宣传环保理念,并支持使用环保材料和减少碳足迹的倡议。

      5. 电影与其他事业

      除了参与《哈利·波特》系列,沃特森还参演了许多其他电影作品。她在《壁花少年》(The Perks of Being a Wallflower)、《美丽心灵的永恒阳光》(The Bling Ring)、以及《美女与野兽》(Beauty and the Beast)等影片中都有出色表现。

      她还参与了多个与文化、教育和女性议题相关的活动,推动了文化产业中的女性话语权。

      6. 个人生活

      尽管沃特森的生活多为公众关注,但她始终尽力保持个人生活的低调。她一直强调在事业、社会活动和个人生活之间寻找平衡,并对家人和朋友十分珍视。她对于自己在社会活动中的角色也有深刻反思,认为自己不仅仅是一个公众人物,更是一个为社会进步做出贡献的积极倡导者。

      7. 总结

      艾玛·沃特森不仅是一位才华横溢的演员,还通过她的女性主义立场和社会活动,成为了性别平等和社会正义的强有力代言人。她通过联合国HeForShe运动、她在多个公共平台上的讲话以及她对环境保护的倡导,致力于推动社会的进步与改变。沃特森的影响力不仅限于电影行业,她的工作在全球范围内激发了无数年轻人参与到性别平等、环保和社会正义的事业中。

    3. 1986 劳拉·贝茨 (Laura Bates)

      劳拉·贝茨(Laura Bates)是英国的作家、活动家和女性主义者,因其在性别平等反性别歧视反性别暴力以及社会文化性别观念批判等方面的工作而广受关注。贝茨的工作着重于揭示和挑战日常生活中普遍存在的性别不平等,尤其是通过文化、社会和媒体中的性别刻板印象和性别暴力。她的影响力体现在她的著作、公共演讲以及在社交媒体上的广泛倡导。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      劳拉·贝茨出生于1986年,她在英国长大,大学时期主修文学。贝茨早期的职业生涯涉及写作和媒体工作,但她的女性主义意识和社会责任感在她的个人经历和社会观察中逐步加强。她深受社会文化对女性的刻板印象和性别歧视的影响,最终决定投身于性别平等和女性主义事业。

      2. “日常性别主义”项目

      劳拉·贝茨最广为人知的贡献是她发起的“日常性别主义”(Everyday Sexism)运动。这个项目的核心是通过收集并分享女性在日常生活中遭遇的性别歧视和性别暴力事件,揭示出这些行为的普遍性和社会对女性的不平等对待。

      2.1 “日常性别主义”运动

      2012年,贝茨通过Twitter发起了“日常性别主义”项目,鼓励女性分享自己在日常生活中遇到的性别歧视经历。这个项目的目的是揭示看似微不足道但却普遍存在的性别不平等现象,例如街头性骚扰、职场性别歧视、家庭中的性别角色期待等。通过广泛收集和分享这些经验,贝茨希望让公众认识到性别歧视和性别暴力并非个别现象,而是整个社会文化中的结构性问题。

      该项目后来发展为一个全球性的社交媒体运动,并在世界范围内获得了广泛关注。许多女性和一些男性开始分享自己遭遇性别不平等的亲身经历。贝茨通过这一项目不仅揭示了性别歧视的普遍性,还呼吁改变社会对性别不平等的容忍态度。

      3. 主要著作与影响

      贝茨的主要著作包括《日常性别主义:女性如何在现代社会中被压迫》(Everyday Sexism),这本书总结了她的运动经验和她收集到的女性日常生活中遭遇性别歧视的故事。书中展示了各种不同形式的性别歧视,并指出这些问题的普遍性及其对女性日常生活的影响。贝茨在书中提到,许多性别不平等和暴力行为并不显眼或显而易见,往往被人们忽视或合理化,而这些微小的歧视行为却累积成了巨大的社会问题。

      3.1 《日常性别主义》(Everyday Sexism)

      这本书不仅是对性别歧视现象的描述,也是对该现象的深刻分析。贝茨通过女性的亲身经验展示了性别不平等是如何渗透到社会的各个层面,从公共空间到职场,再到家庭生活。她认为,性别歧视并不是单一的事件,而是一种日积月累的文化现象,几乎每个女性在不同的生活领域都会遇到这种不平等待遇。

      3.2 《女孩的勇气》(Girl Up)

      在这本书中,贝茨进一步探讨了如何帮助年轻女孩面对社会中的性别压力和挑战。书中结合个人故事、社会观察以及女性主义理论,强调了如何在青春期和成长期建立自尊心,并鼓励女孩们通过挑战社会规范,树立自己的独立性和自信心。她讨论了从小女孩到成年女性的过渡过程,如何避免让社会性别期待限制女孩们的潜力和成长。

      3.3 《有话说:女性如何突破沉默》(Speak Up: A Guide to Saying No to Sexism

      这本书是贝茨为帮助年轻女性应对性别不平等问题所写的实用指南。书中提供了关于如何识别和反击性别歧视的具体建议,包括如何处理性骚扰、如何在职场上应对性别偏见、如何与身边的人讨论性别不平等问题等。

      4. 贝茨的性别观与女性主义观点

      贝茨的女性主义观点具有鲜明的批判性,她认为现行的社会制度通过性别角色的建构加深了性别不平等,尤其是在文化和经济领域。她的写作强调性别不仅仅是个人的身份认同问题,更是涉及社会结构、文化规范和政治经济体系的深刻问题。她主张,性别不平等的问题不能仅仅通过对个体行为的批判来解决,而是需要通过制度改革、文化变革和社会意识的提升来改变。

      5. 影响与荣誉

      贝茨的“日常性别主义”运动不仅引起了广泛关注,还促使了全球范围内对性别歧视问题的重新审视。她通过这一平台促使许多女性表达和讨论她们的性别歧视经历,推动了女性主义理论和实践的发展。

      贝茨不仅是作家和活动家,还是公共演讲者和教育工作者。她参与了多种国际会议、讲座和媒体活动,倡导性别平等女性主义。她的作品和活动不仅影响了英国的性别平等运动,也在国际范围内促进了女性主义的讨论。

      6. 总结

      劳拉·贝茨是一位现代女性主义者,尤其以其“日常性别主义”运动而闻名。通过这项运动,她揭示了性别不平等在日常生活中的普遍性,并在全球范围内引发了对性别歧视现象的广泛关注。贝茨的著作和理论贡献不仅推动了对性别歧视的反思,也为改变社会文化中的性别规范和提升女性地位提供了理论基础。她的工作使得女性主义更加接地气,也更加关注日常生活中那些看似微不足道却深刻影响社会公正的性别问题。

    4. 丽贝卡·沃克 (Rebecca Walker):黑人女性主义

      丽贝卡·沃克(Rebecca Walker)是美国著名的作家、活动家和女性主义者,广泛被认为是第三波女性主义的代表人物之一。她的作品和思想推动了对性别、种族、文化和社会身份的深刻反思,同时她也是女性主义的多样性和包容性的倡导者。沃克特别关注黑人女性的经验和身份问题,并通过个人的文学创作以及社会活动挑战传统的性别和种族规范。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      丽贝卡·沃克于1969年出生在美国纽约市,是著名黑人女权主义者、作家和活动家阿琳·霍普金斯(Alice Walker)的女儿。阿琳·霍普金斯是著名的小说《紫色姐妹花》(The Color Purple)一书的作者,她的母亲不仅是文学界的知名人物,还是20世纪的妇女权利活动家之一。

      沃克的家庭背景深刻影响了她的成长过程,尽管她的母亲是女性主义的重要代表之一,但沃克在成长期曾经历过较为复杂的家庭关系和自我认同的挣扎,这些经历在她的写作和思考中都留下了深刻印记。

      2. 主要作品与思想

      沃克的写作涉及了女性主义种族问题性别认同以及文化认同等多方面议题。她的作品通常带有强烈的个人色彩,同时也深入探讨了社会中的多重身份和压迫机制。

      2.1 《黑人女性主义的声明》("A Black Feminist's Manifesto")

      沃克在1992年出版了《黑人女性主义的声明》一书,这是她对当时女性主义运动的回应之一。她在这本书中提出了自己的女性主义观点,强调了黑人女性的独特处境,并质疑传统白人女性主义如何忽视种族、阶级和性别交织的复杂性。沃克认为,黑人女性不仅面临着性别的压迫,还承受着种族主义和贫困等多重压迫。因此,真正的女性主义应当包容种族和阶级等不同维度的差异,并对黑人女性的声音和经验给予更多关注。

      2.2 《第三波女性主义宣言》("Third Wave Feminism Manifesto")

      沃克被认为是第三波女性主义的先锋之一。第三波女性主义与传统的第二波女性主义(即1970年代的女性解放运动)有所不同,第三波女性主义更加关注多样性个体经验。沃克倡导一种包容性女性主义,认为女性主义不应仅仅局限于白人中产阶级女性的声音,而是要听取各类族裔、背景、性取向和性别身份的女性声音。她在作品中强调,女性主义的未来应当是一种更加多元和包容的运动,能够容纳不同的观点、文化和实践。

      2.3 《我父亲的遗产:黑人女性的历史与身份》

      这本书探讨了沃克在成长过程中对父亲和家族历史的思考。沃克的父亲是一名著名的黑人活动家,在她的成长过程中,沃克与父亲的关系复杂且多样。在这本书中,沃克通过回顾自己的家庭历史,探索了父亲的遗产黑人女性身份的关系,以及这些因素如何塑造她个人的身份认同。

      2.4 《女性主义21世纪:黑人的声音》

      女性主义21世纪:黑人的声音》是沃克对当前女性主义和黑人女性主义未来的展望。她在书中提出,女性主义不能单纯地关注白人女性的斗争,还应当关注黑人女性在当今社会中所面临的挑战。在现代社会中,沃克认为,黑人女性面临的压力不仅来自性别和种族歧视,还有来自贫困、教育不平等和政治制度的不公等多重因素。

      3. 第三波女性主义的贡献

      丽贝卡·沃克是第三波女性主义的代表性人物之一,她通过自己的作品和思想推动了女性主义的多样化。在沃克的视角下,女性主义不应仅仅是一个针对特定性别群体的运动,而是一个包容多样身份的运动,涵盖种族、性别、性取向、阶级等多重维度。她特别强调黑人女性在女性主义运动中的地位,并主张给予黑人女性更多的表达空间和自主权。

      4. 黑人女性主义与文化认同

      沃克的写作强调了文化认同在黑人女性解放中的重要性。她认为,黑人女性的经验不应被简单地理解为性别问题,种族和阶级也构成了压迫的核心因素。她倡导将黑人文化作为女性主义的核心组成部分,认为黑人女性的解放必须在尊重和保留其文化的基础上进行。

      沃克不仅将焦点放在黑人女性的经验上,还通过探索个人与社会的关系来提出女性主义对当今社会的深刻批评。她关注的不仅是身体的解放,而是思想和文化的解放,从而推动整个社会对性别、种族、文化等多维度问题的深刻思考。

      5. 与父亲的关系

      沃克与父亲的关系复杂且充满张力,这一点在她的很多作品中有所体现。沃克的父亲查尔斯·沃克(Charles Walker)是一位知名的黑人活动家,曾积极参与美国的民权运动。然而,沃克的父亲在家庭中也有不光彩的历史,包括一些家庭暴力行为。这种个人与家族的复杂历史也成为沃克作品中的一个重要主题,尤其是在《我父亲的遗产》这本书中,她深入探讨了与父亲关系的疏离感以及如何通过文化认同和家庭历史来寻找自我。

      6. 丽贝卡·沃克的影响

      丽贝卡·沃克通过其作品和女性主义活动,成为了美国女性主义运动和黑人女性主义的关键人物之一。她的思考和写作不仅为女性主义运动带来了新的视角,还为跨种族、跨文化的女性主义提供了理论依据。她的作品至今仍然影响着全球女性主义和文化研究的学术讨论。

      总的来说,丽贝卡·沃克是一个思想开阔、充满批判精神和创新意识的女性主义者,她为第三波女性主义注入了新的活力,并推动了黑人女性主义在当代社会中的重要地位。

    5. 1942- 格洛丽亚·安扎尔杜亚 (Gloria Anzaldúa):跨界(混血),性别,种族

      Gloria Anzaldúa(1942-2004)是美国著名的学者、作家、诗人和思想家,尤其以她在跨文化性别种族问题上的独特视角而著名。她的作品深刻影响了女性主义、拉丁裔文化、酷儿理论和边缘性群体的研究。Anzaldúa是边缘性(borderlands)和跨越界限(border-crossing)思想的代表人物,她的理论对当代文化研究和社会运动产生了重要影响。

      1. 主要作品与思想

      Anzaldúa的代表作之一是《Borderlands/La Frontera: The New Mestiza》(1987),这本书被认为是拉美女性主义和跨文化批评的经典。她在书中探讨了边界(border)的概念,特别是美墨边界这一地区的文化、社会和心理层面的复杂性。

      1.1 《Borderlands/La Frontera: The New Mestiza》

      这本书融合了诗歌散文理论,并提出了她的核心思想——新混血人(New Mestiza)。Anzaldúa通过她的个人经历以及拉丁裔女性在美国的经验,探讨了边界问题如何影响个人身份、文化认同以及社会关系。她的“新混血人”概念挑战了传统的种族、文化和性别分类,提出了一种流动性多重认同跨越界限的生活方式。

      1.2 混血/跨越界限的身份

      Anzaldúa提出了“Mestiza consciousness”(混血意识)的概念,强调这种意识体现在一个人的身份跨越了多重文化、语言和社会界限。她将“混血”视为一种力量,而不是缺陷,认为这种跨越界限的经验能够赋予个体更深刻的理解和独特的视角。

      1.3 性别、种族和语言

      Anzaldúa认为,语言是文化身份和社会关系的关键,特别是她提到的Chicano/Chicana(墨西哥裔美国人)的双重文化身份问题。她强调,女性主义和跨性别理论的视角必须同时关注性别种族,因为这些因素交织在一起,构成了她们的独特压迫经验。

      2. 边界和跨越边界的思想

      Anzaldúa的思想围绕“边界”这一核心概念展开。她认为,边界不仅仅是物理上的界限(如国界),更是文化、社会和心理上的界限。边界不仅分隔着不同群体,它也构成了身份的形成和文化认同的基础。Anzaldúa用这个概念来探讨自己作为拉丁裔女性在美国的双重文化身份,强调个人的生活经验往往是在这种“边界”的交织中形成的。

      她的边界思想尤其对酷儿理论跨性别理论跨文化主义的研究产生了重大影响,因为她挑战了身份的单一性和固守的传统分类,提出了“跨越边界”的理论。她认为,生活在多个文化和语言空间的人,能够在流动性变化中找到新的可能性。

      3. 性别与女性主义视角

      Anzaldúa的女性主义理论强调多重身份交叉性(intersectionality)和边缘群体的经验。她认为女性主义应关注种族、性别、阶级、文化等多个层面的交织,并反对任何单一的压迫视角。她的工作中,女性不仅是受害者,也有能力从压迫中解放出来,寻求自己的力量与自由。

      3.1 女性主义与跨文化

      她不仅批评了白人女性主义的排他性,认为它过于忽视了种族、文化背景的差异,还批判了主流女性主义未能关注到有色人种女性、特别是拉美裔女性的独特处境。她呼吁一种跨文化的女性主义,将来自不同文化背景的女性经验结合起来,推动一个更加包容的全球女性解放运动。

      4. 理论影响

      Anzaldúa的理论在多个学科领域产生了重要影响,包括:

      • 女性主义研究:她提出的多重身份、混血意识和文化边界的理论对跨文化女性主义的研究具有深远影响。
      • 酷儿理论与性别研究:她的跨性别边界的概念对酷儿理论和性别研究提供了重要启示,推动了对非传统性别身份和性别流动性的理解。
      • 文化研究与民族学:她的“Mestiza consciousness”概念为文化研究提供了一种反思混合身份和文化认同的方式,特别是在全球化和移民背景下。

      5. 核心概念总结

      • Mestiza consciousness(混血意识):指的是一种在文化交汇处、跨越社会边界的多重认同状态。它是对身份的流动性、复杂性和相互交织的认识。
      • Borderlands(边界):Anzaldúa用“边界”不仅描述了地理和政治的分隔,更强调了文化、性别、种族和心理的分隔,及这些分隔如何影响个人与群体的身份认同。
      • Crossing borders(跨越边界):她提倡超越文化、语言和性别的传统界限,探索流动性和跨文化认同,挑战固定的身份标签。

      6. 个人生活背景与影响

      Anzaldúa生于德州的一个墨西哥裔家庭,在拉美裔移民文化中长大。她的成长背景使她对跨文化经验、边界身份以及种族和性别压迫的敏感性特别强。作为一名拉丁裔女性,她在美国社会中感受到多重身份的压迫与边缘化,这使她的写作和思想深刻反映了性别、种族文化交织的复杂性。

      7. 总结

      Gloria Anzaldúa的学术贡献和文学作品为理解文化边界混血身份跨性别女性主义提供了独特的视角,她的作品至今仍然深刻影响着女性主义酷儿理论以及文化研究。通过将文化、性别、种族和身份的复杂交织作为研究的核心,Anzaldúa为当代学术界提出了一种全新的跨越边界的视角,挑战了传统的身份认同范式,并为边缘群体发声。

    6. 生态女性主义 (Ecofeminism)

      生态女性主义(Ecofeminism)是一个跨学科的思想流派,它将女性主义生态学相结合,认为性别压迫和环境压迫在许多方面是相互交织、互为因果的。生态女性主义者认为,社会对女性和自然界的压迫往往通过相似的方式进行:通过支配、剥削和压迫。因此,生态女性主义不仅仅关心女性的社会地位,还强调环境保护和生态正义,呼吁对自然界和女性的解放。

      1. 生态女性主义的核心观点

      生态女性主义试图通过反思和批判传统的性别、环境、以及权力结构来推动社会变革。它的核心观点如下:

      a) 性别与环境的压迫相互关联

      生态女性主义的一个核心思想是,女性和自然在传统的父权社会中常常被视为“他者”(Other),即被视为应当被支配和利用的对象。性别不平等和环境劣化往往具有相似的结构性特征——在性别压迫中,女性被归类为“弱者”和“从属”,而自然也被视为“资源”和“供给者”,容易被剥削。

      b) 反对父权制和支配结构

      生态女性主义认为,父权制是性别压迫和环境破坏的根源之一。在父权制下,男性主导的社会结构依赖于对女性和自然的支配与剥削。这种结构体现在经济、政治、文化等各个领域,并加剧了对女性身体的控制以及对自然资源的无节制开发。生态女性主义批判这种支配关系,呼吁建立更加平等和可持续的社会秩序。

      c) 强调人与自然的相互依存

      生态女性主义提倡一种非剥削性的、基于相互尊重与合作的社会观念。它主张人类与自然应该建立一种更加和谐的关系,人类不应当被视为与自然界隔离的存在。生态女性主义者认为,只有通过消除性别和环境上的压迫,才能实现人类和自然界的共同解放。

      d) 从女性的视角出发

      生态女性主义认为,女性在自然和环境事务中往往处于较低的位置,尤其是在发展中国家和农耕社会中,女性通常负责农业生产、家庭劳务和环境保护等工作。因此,女性的视角可以为我们提供对环境问题的不同理解,特别是在如何以更加可持续的方式管理自然资源上。生态女性主义强调赋予女性更多的决策权,让她们参与到关于环境保护和资源管理的公共事务中。

      2. 生态女性主义的理论基础

      生态女性主义的理论基础是多元化的,融合了环境学、女性主义理论、社会学、哲学以及人类学等学科的思想。以下是生态女性主义的几个关键理论来源:

      a) 女性主义的思想

      生态女性主义源自传统女性主义的核心思想,尤其是反对父权制对女性的压迫。女性主义批判社会中不平等的性别结构,主张男女平等,并在此基础上强调女性在家庭、社会和经济事务中的平等权利。生态女性主义在此基础上进一步将女性的解放与自然环境的保护相联系,认为解决环境问题需要从根本上改变性别不平等的结构。

      b) 生态学的思想

      生态女性主义借鉴了生态学的基本理论,特别是生态系统相互依赖和环境可持续发展的概念。它批判人类社会中对自然资源的掠夺性利用,强调生态的可持续性和人与自然之间的和谐关系。生态女性主义者认为,环境问题不仅仅是技术性或政策性的问题,而是涉及到社会结构、权力关系和性别不平等的根本问题。

      c) 反对人类中心主义

      生态女性主义也批判了传统的“人类中心主义”思想,这种思想认为人类处于自然界之上,享有支配自然的权力。生态女性主义主张,应该摒弃这种以人类为中心的世界观,转而建立一个尊重所有生命、注重生态平衡的世界观。它倡导一种去人类中心化的环境伦理,强调人类与自然的共生关系。

      3. 生态女性主义的历史与发展

      生态女性主义作为一个思想流派,最早出现在20世纪70年代和80年代,当时一些女性主义者开始意识到,性别压迫和环境问题是相互联系的,二者需要一起解决。1974年,弗朗西斯·穆尔·拉佩(Frances Moore Lappé)出版的《食物的民主》(Diet for a Small Planet)一书指出,环境问题和性别不平等是相互交织的,并提出了解决方案。随后,许多女性主义者开始将生态学的观点与女性主义的思想结合起来,推动了生态女性主义的形成。

      在1980年代和1990年代,生态女性主义开始逐渐发展为一个独立的学术领域。卡里·格雷普(Carolyn Merchant)的《自然的死亡:西方文化中的环境主义与女性主义》(The Death of Nature: Women, Ecology, and the Scientific Revolution)和伊莎贝尔·斯图尔特(Isabelle Stengers)的工作等学者的研究,为生态女性主义提供了理论支持。

      4. 生态女性主义的实践

      生态女性主义不仅仅停留在理论层面,还在社会运动中发挥了重要作用。以下是生态女性主义的几项关键实践:

      a) 环境正义

      生态女性主义强调环境正义,主张那些最容易受到环境污染和资源剥夺影响的人群,通常是社会中最弱势的群体,包括贫困的女性、少数族裔群体以及发展中国家的农民。生态女性主义倡导为这些群体争取平等的环境权益,包括更清洁的空气、水资源、以及更健康的生活环境。

      b) 可持续农业与土地权

      在农业领域,生态女性主义强调女性在土地管理和农业生产中的重要角色。许多生态女性主义者主张通过发展可持续农业、避免大规模工业化农业来保护自然资源。这些观点特别关注女性在农村经济中的角色,特别是在发展中国家,女性通常负责农业工作、家务劳动和食品生产。

      c) 文化和教育的变革

      生态女性主义者提倡教育和文化变革,鼓励批判性思维,质疑传统的父权制和物化女性的性别角色,呼吁创造更加平等和可持续的社会文化。教育和社会运动是生态女性主义实现其目标的重要途径。

      5. 生态女性主义的影响

      生态女性主义对环境运动和女性主义运动的影响深远。它不仅为环境问题提供了更广泛的社会理论视角,还促使环境保护运动更加关注性别不平等、社会阶层差异以及全球不平等问题。同时,它也推动了女性主义者将环境问题纳入性别压迫和社会正义的议题之中。通过这种方式,生态女性主义影响了多个领域,如:

      • 环境政策:推崇更加平等的资源分配和可持续的环境管理。
      • 社会运动:促进性别平等、环境保护和社会正义的融合。
      • 学术研究:推动了跨学科的学术研究,推动了环境伦理学、性别研究和社会学的发展。

      6. 生态女性主义的挑战

      尽管生态女性主义已取得一定进展,但它仍面临许多挑战。比如,如何将生态女性主义的思想在全球范围内普及,如何在经济发展与环境保护之间找到平衡,如何在社会的主流话语体系中推广性别与环境问题的关联,都是尚待解决的问题。此外,生态女性主义也面临如何解决全球南方和北方之间在环境与性别不平等问题上的差异。

      总结

      生态女性主义通过结合性别平等与环境正义的理论,提供了一种新颖的视角来理解社会的压迫结构。它通过强调性别与自然环境的相互压迫,呼吁对自然界和女性的解放,推动了环境保护与社会正义的结合。生态女性主义不仅在学术领域产生了深远影响,也为全球性的环境和社会运动提供了理论支持,并通过实际行动推动着全球社会的变革。

    7. 金伯莉·克伦肖 (Kimberlé Crenshaw)

      金伯莉·克伦肖(Kimberlé Crenshaw) 是一位美国法律学者、社会理论家和活动家,以其在交叉性(Intersectionality)理论领域的开创性贡献而闻名。她的研究主要集中在法律、社会正义、种族和性别问题上,并且是推动法律和社会学领域重新思考身份、压迫和不平等结构的重要人物。

      1. 交叉性理论的创立

      金伯莉·克伦肖最为人知的贡献是她提出的交叉性(Intersectionality)概念。交叉性理论旨在解释个体如何在多个身份标签(如性别、种族、阶级、性取向等)交织中经历压迫和不平等。她指出,传统的社会正义运动常常将这些身份分开讨论,例如,将种族问题与性别问题分开,忽视了这些身份在实际生活中是交织在一起的。

      交叉性并非仅指个体如何同时处于不同的身份类别中,而是关注这些身份交织所带来的独特压迫体验。比如,一个黑人女性的生活体验既受到她作为女性的性别歧视,也受到她作为黑人的种族歧视影响,而这些歧视和压迫并不是简单地加在一起的,而是相互交织,共同作用,形成独特的压迫结构。

      2. 交叉性在法律中的应用

      克伦肖的交叉性理论最初是作为一种法律分析工具提出的,她的研究揭示了现有的法律框架往往不能充分反映和解决跨越种族、性别和阶级等多重身份的压迫。例如,在传统的性别歧视或种族歧视案件中,法律往往只关注单一的身份类别,而忽略了多重身份交织带来的独特经验。

      克伦肖在她的经典论文《交叉性与黑色女性的政治经济》中分析了黑人女性在法律体系中的地位,特别是她们在面对职场、家庭暴力和司法不公时,如何面临多重歧视和压迫。她指出,黑人女性经常在性别歧视和种族歧视之间“被夹在中间”,现有的法律体系不能有效保护她们的权益,因为法律通常只考虑单一身份的歧视。

      3. 《法律的交叉性:黑人女性的经验》

      克伦肖的影响力源于她在1991年发表的论文《交叉性:黑人女性的政治经验》("Mapping the Margins: Intersectionality, Identity Politics, and Violence against Women of Color")。在这篇文章中,克伦肖不仅提出了交叉性的概念,还探讨了如何通过交叉性理论来理解和应对性别暴力、种族暴力、经济不平等以及社会歧视等问题。

      她特别强调,黑人女性在遭遇性暴力或家庭暴力时,所面临的压迫和困境是难以通过单一维度的法律分析(比如仅仅通过性别或种族的视角)来解决的。她提出,应该通过交叉性来重新思考和制定法律、政策,以更全面地理解多重身份的压迫。

      4. 交叉性对社会正义运动的影响

      克伦肖的交叉性理论不仅对法律研究产生了深远影响,还对社会正义运动产生了巨大影响。她的理论为女性主义黑人解放运动同性恋权利运动性别平等运动等提供了新的理论工具,帮助这些运动更加细致和全面地理解不同群体面临的复杂压迫。

      • 黑人女性主义:克伦肖的交叉性理论特别对黑人女性主义产生了深刻影响。黑人女性主义者不仅关注性别和种族歧视的交织,还关注贫困、阶级、移民身份等因素如何加剧对黑人女性的压迫。

      • LGBTQ+运动:交叉性理论也为LGBTQ+群体,尤其是跨性别、双性恋群体的斗争提供了理论支持。它帮助理解这些群体如何同时面临性别、性取向、种族等多重身份的压迫。

      • 全球正义运动:在全球化的背景下,交叉性理论对国际社会中的不平等现象进行了重新审视。例如,它可以帮助我们理解全球南方国家的女性、移民和难民等群体如何在多重身份的交织中遭遇压迫。

      5. 克伦肖的其他贡献

      除了交叉性理论,克伦肖还在法律批判学种族研究社会正义领域做出了诸多贡献。她是法律批判理论的创始人之一,这一理论挑战了现有法律体系的公正性,认为法律并非中立的,而是由强势社会集团所主导,用来维护不平等的社会结构。

      她还是女性主义法学的先锋人物,呼吁将女性的声音纳入法律分析,并提倡对现有法律和政策的批判性审视。她的研究也涉及到种族和经济不平等,尤其关注少数群体和贫困群体如何在法治和社会秩序中被边缘化。

      6. 学术与公共活动

      克伦肖在加利福尼亚大学洛杉矶分校(UCLA)教授法律与社会学,并且是卡尔·布鲁斯基金会的创始人之一。她还在全球多个学术机构、非营利组织和政府机构担任顾问,推动交叉性理论的实践应用。

      总结

      金伯莉·克伦肖的交叉性理论为我们提供了一个新的视角,帮助我们理解和解决多重身份交织下的压迫和不平等。她的工作不仅在学术领域具有深远影响,也为社会运动提供了更为细致和全面的理论框架,使得性别、种族、阶级等因素不再被孤立地讨论,而是视为复杂社会问题中的互相关联部分。她的研究提醒我们,在追求社会正义的过程中,必须考虑多重身份的复杂性,才能真正实现平等和自由。

    8. 凯特·米利特 (Kate Millett):性政治

      凯特·米利特 (Kate Millett)(1934年9月14日—2017年9月6日)是美国著名的女性主义者、作家、艺术家和社会活动家。她被认为是第二波女性主义的关键人物之一,她的思想和著作对性别平等、女性解放和社会结构的变革产生了深远的影响。

      1. 早期生活与教育背景

      • 出生与家庭:凯特·米利特出生于美国明尼苏达州的圣保罗。她的父亲是一位商人,母亲是一位家庭主妇。米利特在成长过程中,曾遭遇过家庭中的父权主义氛围,这促使她日后对性别不平等产生深刻的反思。

      • 教育背景:米利特在明尼苏达大学(University of Minnesota)获得学士学位,后来她前往牛津大学(University of Oxford)继续深造,并在哥伦比亚大学(Columbia University)获得了硕士学位。在哥伦比亚大学,她的研究方向包括文学与心理学,这为她后来的理论建设奠定了基础。

      2. 《性别政治》:女性主义理论的奠基石

      凯特·米利特最为人熟知的作品是《性别政治》(Sexual Politics),该书于1970年出版,是第二波女性主义的重要著作之一。米利特通过这本书提出了对传统性别观念的激烈批判,特别是对男性主导的文化和社会结构进行深刻反思。

      书中核心观点:

      • 性别政治与父权制:米利特在《性别政治》中提出,性别不平等不仅仅是一种文化现象,而是深深嵌入在社会的结构和政治中。她认为,父权制(Patriarchy)是社会中广泛存在的性别不平等体系,男性主导的社会结构、文化和政治系统通过控制女性的身体和行为,确保了他们的统治地位。

      • 性别的社会构建性:米利特认为,性别差异并非源自生物本能,而是通过社会文化的建构形成的。她强调,性别不平等是由社会和文化的规约和规范所塑造的,而这种规范通过家庭、教育、法律、宗教等多种渠道得以维护。

      • 对文学的批判:在《性别政治》一书中,米利特还批评了西方文学中的性别偏见,尤其是文学作品中的女性形象。她指出,许多文学作品通过塑造“顺从”与“依赖”的女性角色,反映并维护了父权制社会的价值观。这些作品不仅未能揭示女性的社会地位和权利,反而通过对女性的描写加强了社会对女性的压迫。

      3. 影响与贡献

      • 性别解放的思想传播者:米利特的《性别政治》不仅为女性主义理论的发展提供了坚实的理论基础,也为女性主义运动注入了新的思想力量。她通过揭示父权制如何在文化和社会中渗透,推动了对女性地位、性别角色以及社会结构的广泛反思。

      • 批判性社会理论:米利特的工作超越了简单的性别问题,她还将性别不平等置于更广泛的社会、政治、经济框架下进行分析。她的理论为理解性别与阶级、种族等社会身份的交叉性提供了新的视角。

      • 学术与公共领域的影响:米利特的理论对学术界,特别是社会学、文学批评、性别研究等领域产生了深远的影响。同时,她也在公共领域中发挥了重要作用,为妇女权益和性别平等提供了理论支持。

      4. 个人生活与女性主义实践

      • 从艺术家到活动家:除了写作,凯特·米利特还在艺术创作和社会活动中积极参与。她的个人艺术作品常常反映出她对女性身份和性别不平等的关注。例如,她在纽约的一个艺术展览中展出了她对女性经验的独特表达。她不仅是理论家,也是女性主义的积极活动家,致力于推动社会变革和女性解放。

      • 同性恋身份与实践:米利特在她的个人生活中也一直倡导同性恋权利和多元化性别身份的认同。她本人的性取向对她的女性主义观念也有重要影响,她认为,性别的解放不仅是为了异性恋女性争取平等,更是为了所有性别和性取向的人争取自由与尊严。

      5. 后期工作与遗产

      凯特·米利特的思想继续在当代女性主义、性别研究、文化批评等领域产生深远影响。尽管她的许多观点在过去几十年中有所争议,但她对性别政治、父权制和社会结构的深刻洞察为现代性别平等和社会正义运动提供了重要的理论框架。

      她的批判理论、女性主义立场以及对性别规范的质疑,使她成为了20世纪和21世纪初女性主义思想的重要代表之一。她的工作不仅影响了学术界,也深刻影响了社会运动和文化发展,尤其是在推动性别平等、反对性别暴力和争取性别自由方面。

      6. 代表作品与著作

      • 《性别政治》(Sexual Politics):米利特的代表作,深入分析了性别、权力和父权制社会结构对女性的压迫。
      • 《反叛的女性》(The Feminine Mystique):尽管这本书是由贝蒂·弗里丹(Betty Friedan)所著,但米利特在这本书的基础上进一步深化了对女性压迫的分析,特别是在家庭和私密空间中的性别不平等。
      • 《女性主义的回忆》(A Feminist Memoir):这是米利特的回忆录,讲述了她的成长经历、个人挑战以及她在女性主义运动中的经历。

      总结

      凯特·米利特是第二波女性主义运动的奠基人物之一,她的作品特别是《性别政治》为性别不平等、父权制和女性解放提供了理论支持。她不仅是思想家和作家,也是社会活动家,致力于推动女性解放与社会变革。米利特的贡献不仅限于学术界,她的思想和实践在全球范围内产生了广泛的影响,是现代女性主义运动的重要代表之一。

    9. 1934 格洛丽亚·斯泰纳姆 (Gloria Steinem):办杂志,争取平等权利

      格洛丽亚·斯泰纳姆 (Gloria Steinem)(1934年3月25日—)是美国著名的女性主义活动家、作家、记者和社会政治活动家。她是第二波女性主义运动的重要代表人物之一,以其在推动性别平等、女性权利和社会正义方面的贡献闻名于世。斯泰纳姆不仅在美国,甚至在全球范围内,对女性解放运动产生了深远的影响。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      • 出生与家庭:斯泰纳姆出生于美国俄亥俄州的托莱多,她的父亲是一位商人,母亲是一位家庭主妇。她的家庭背景并不富裕,但她从小表现出强烈的求知欲与独立精神。斯泰纳姆的母亲在她小时候经历了精神疾病,这对斯泰纳姆的人生观和对女性身份的理解产生了深远影响。

      • 教育背景:斯泰纳姆在首都华盛顿的斯密斯学院(Smith College)完成了本科学习,并获得了学位。她的学术背景帮助她在未来的职业生涯中,尤其是在新闻领域取得了成功。

      2. 早期职业生涯与女性主义觉醒

      • 从记者到活动家:斯泰纳姆的早期职业生涯是在新闻行业,尤其是为《纽约杂志》工作期间,她成为一名著名的调查记者。她也曾在一些男性主导的媒体中担任编辑职务,写作的主题通常涉及性别、社会不公等问题。然而,正是她作为一名记者,尤其是1960年代初期关于女性在职场中所面临的问题的报道,让她意识到了自己对性别不平等的深刻关注。

      • 作为活动家的觉醒:在1970年代初,斯泰纳姆亲自参与了女性主义运动,成为了二战后第二波女性主义的核心人物之一。她的参与不仅限于撰写文章和发表演讲,还积极参与示威游行和立法改革,旨在推动性别平等的实现。

      3. 《女权主义的基础》与女性主义运动

      • 创办《女性生存》杂志:1972年,斯泰纳姆与其他女性活动家共同创办了《女性生存》(Ms. Magazine)。该杂志是美国历史上第一个面向女性的政治、文化和社会问题的杂志,成为了女性主义的重要平台。斯泰纳姆担任该杂志的编辑,推动了她的思想在社会中的传播。杂志的创办标志着女性主义在媒体中的重大突破,它使得性别平等、女性生育权、性别暴力等话题成为公共讨论的中心。

      • 推广女权主义(Feminism):斯泰纳姆提倡的女权主义主张全面平等,反对性别歧视,强调女性在政治、经济和文化中的权利。她强调“女性主义”并不仅仅是女性的私人问题,而是社会的结构性问题,是一种普遍的社会运动,涉及到所有人的权利和平等。

      4. 重要贡献与活动

      • 争取平等权利:斯泰纳姆长期致力于推动妇女权利的立法变革,争取女性在工作、教育、健康、法律等方面的平等待遇。她是推动美国平等权利修正案(Equal Rights Amendment, ERA)通过的重要支持者之一,该修正案旨在确保性别平等在宪法中得到体现。

      • 反对性别暴力和性别歧视:斯泰纳姆是反对性别暴力和性别歧视的积极倡导者。她在公共场合大力呼吁对性侵犯、家庭暴力和性骚扰的社会关注,推动相关法律改革,帮助为受害者提供更多的法律保障和支持。

      • 支持女性生育权:斯泰纳姆大力支持女性生育自主权和计划生育,尤其是推动合法化的堕胎权利。她认为,生育权是女性最基本的权利之一,只有拥有生育选择的自由,女性才能真正享有平等。

      5. 文化与社会影响

      • “女孩革命”的代言人:斯泰纳姆是第二波女性主义的代言人之一,她的行动为女性主义注入了活力。她不仅为自己的时代塑造了社会观念,还为后来的女性主义运动铺平了道路。斯泰纳姆通过出版书籍、撰写文章、主持演讲等多种方式,使女性解放思想进入了公共舆论的主流。

      • 文化转型的推动者:斯泰纳姆的努力不仅限于政治和法律层面,她还在文化领域作出了贡献。她通过文化活动和媒体工作,挑战了传统性别角色,鼓励女性在各行各业中追求自己的理想和自由。

      6. 后期工作与影响

      • 继续推动社会正义:在过去的几十年中,斯泰纳姆持续致力于各种社会正义事业,涵盖性别平等、种族平等、移民权益、环境保护等多个领域。她也一直在国际上为全球女性权益发声,特别是关注发展中国家的女性问题。

      • 影响与遗产:斯泰纳姆的思想和行动对全球女性主义运动产生了深远的影响,她为女性主义理论的传播和社会对女性问题的广泛关注提供了强有力的支持。她也被认为是全球女性主义运动的象征之一,尤其是在西方社会,她为女性争取平等的权利,推动性别观念的变革作出了巨大贡献。

      7. 代表作品与著作

      • 《女性生存》杂志:作为《女性生存》杂志的创始人之一,斯泰纳姆的编辑工作帮助推动了现代女性主义理论和公共讨论的发展。
      • 《我的故事》(My Life on the Road):在2015年出版的回忆录《我的故事》中,斯泰纳姆回顾了她的职业生涯和生活历程,讲述了她的活动经历、女性主义之路以及她如何亲历并推动女性权利的改变。

      总结

      格洛丽亚·斯泰纳姆是美国女性主义运动的领导者之一,她通过创办《女性生存》杂志,推动性别平等的立法改革,并通过她的公共演讲和写作,挑战了传统性别角色与女性的社会定位。斯泰纳姆不仅在美国,也在全球范围内推动了女性解放,成为女性主义的代表人物之一。她的工作为后来的女性主义者提供了理论支持,并为全球女性争取平等和自由的斗争做出了重要贡献。

    10. 1921-2006 贝蒂·弗里丹 (Betty Friedan)

      贝蒂·弗里丹 (Betty Friedan)(1921年2月4日—2006年2月4日)是美国著名的女性主义者、作家和社会活动家,她的作品和行动深刻影响了20世纪中期的女性运动,尤其是第二波女性主义的崛起。弗里丹被认为是推动女性在社会、家庭和职场中争取平等权益的重要人物之一。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      • 出生与家庭:贝蒂·弗里丹出生于美国伊利诺伊州的波士顿,她的父亲是一名商人,母亲则是一位家庭主妇。弗里丹从小受到了教育重视,家里气氛较为传统。她在学术上表现出色,毕业于斯密斯学院(Smith College),并获得心理学学位。
      • 婚姻与家庭:弗里丹结婚并生育了三个孩子,但在家庭中她逐渐意识到自己对传统家庭角色的不满。这一觉醒成为她后续进行女性解放斗争的动力之一。

      2. 《女性的奥秘》与第二波女性主义

      • 《女性的奥秘》:贝蒂·弗里丹最为人知的作品是1963年出版的《女性的奥秘》(The Feminine Mystique),这本书被认为是第二波女性主义运动的奠基之作。弗里丹在书中揭示了二战后美国社会中,女性被限制在家庭主妇角色中的压抑感和无声的不满。她批判了当时主流社会对女性的传统期待,认为家庭主妇角色是对女性潜力和自由的压抑。
      • 书中她提出了“女性的奥秘”这一概念,指的是社会对女性的期望将她们定义为家庭的支柱、丈夫的支持者和孩子的照料者,从而限制了女性的发展和自我实现。
      • 《女性的奥秘》引发了广泛的讨论,帮助许多家庭主妇意识到自己的不满并鼓励她们重新思考自我价值和社会角色。

      • 对女性压抑的批判:弗里丹的作品提出了这样一个观点:社会和文化对女性的期望(如她们应当甘愿做妻子和母亲)不但让她们失去了自我,还将女性的生活压缩在单一的角色中。她批判了那些让女性无法实现自我、只能依赖男性的社会结构。

      3. 女性权利运动的推动者

      • 创建“全国妇女组织” (NOW):1966年,弗里丹联合一批女性活动家共同创建了“全国妇女组织”(National Organization for Women, NOW)。NOW旨在推动女性平等权利的实现,包括争取平等就业机会、教育机会、产假、性别平等法律和更好的生育控制等。弗里丹担任该组织的首任主席,并在她的领导下,NOW成为美国历史上最具影响力的女性主义团体之一。
      • 推动立法改革:弗里丹和NOW积极推动许多立法改革,包括争取女性的平等待遇、推动《平等权利修正案》(ERA)在美国宪法中通过,虽然这个修正案最终未能通过,但它在提高人们对性别平等问题的认识上起到了重要作用。
      • 妇女工作与职场问题:弗里丹在她的活动中强调女性在职场上的权利,尤其关注女性是否能在职场上获得与男性相等的待遇,包括薪资、职业晋升机会等。

      4. 后期的贡献与影响

      • 继续推进女性权益:弗里丹并没有止步于《女性的奥秘》出版后的影响,她在20世纪后半段继续积极参与妇女权益运动,并且是20世纪60到80年代的女性政治的重要声音之一。
      • 《女性的第二次觉醒》:1976年,弗里丹出版了《女性的第二次觉醒》(The Second Stage)。这本书集中讨论了女性主义运动发展的第二阶段——即如何应对已经获得的一些权利和社会的抵抗力量。她在这本书中提出,女性解放不仅仅是改变法律和制度,更是一个涉及个人自我觉醒和社会价值转变的长期过程。
      • 支持女性多样性:随着时间的推移,弗里丹的观点逐渐转向对女性群体差异的认可,她开始关注种族、阶级、性取向等方面的交叉性问题,并支持更多元的女性主义视角。

      5. 个人生活与挑战

      • 个人生活中的冲突:在她的个人生活中,弗里丹也经历了一些冲突。她既是职业女性,又是母亲和妻子,这使她的个人生活充满挑战。她自称要平衡家庭生活和职业发展时感到非常艰难,这一体验深刻影响了她对社会对女性期望的批判。
      • 婚姻和家庭的变化:弗里丹的婚姻最终因不和而结束,她的离婚和重新寻找自我成为她女性主义观点发展的重要部分。她的个人经历与她的社会理论有着密切的联系。

      6. 遗产与影响

      贝蒂·弗里丹对女性主义的贡献不仅限于她的书籍和演讲,她还通过实际的社会行动影响了数代女性主义者。她强调个人解放与社会改革的结合,推动了美国乃至全球女性权益的进步。

      • 第二波女性主义的代表人物:弗里丹是第二波女性主义运动的代表人物之一,她与其他女性主义者如格洛丽亚·斯坦姆(Gloria Steinem)、贝尔·胡克斯(bell hooks)等一起,推动了关于性别平等、女性权利的广泛讨论。
      • 文化影响:她的作品《女性的奥秘》至今被视为女性主义经典,深刻影响了后来的女性主义理论和实践。她的行动和思想为女性争取更平等的社会地位和更多元的角色提供了坚实的理论支持。

      总结

      贝蒂·弗里丹是一位深刻影响20世纪女性解放运动的女性主义者,她通过《女性的奥秘》一书揭示了二战后美国女性在家庭主妇角色中被压抑的困境,并通过创建全国妇女组织(NOW)等途径推动了平等权利的法律改革。弗里丹的理论和行动不仅为女性权利的进步提供了坚实基础,也为全球范围内的女性主义运动提供了理论框架和实践指导。

    11. 1858-1928 艾米琳·潘克赫斯特 (Emmeline Pankhurst):英国女性选举权

      艾米琳·潘克赫斯特 (Emmeline Pankhurst)(1858年7月15日—1928年6月14日)是英国著名的妇女权利活动家,妇女社会政治联盟(WSPU, Women's Social and Political Union)的创始人之一。她被广泛认为是英国妇女争取投票权运动的领军人物之一,她的奋斗和领导使得英国女性最终获得了投票权。潘克赫斯特的领导风格和行动方式激烈且具有争议,她通过极端手段和直接行动来推动社会变革,成为20世纪初女性运动中的关键人物。

      1. 早期生活与背景

      • 出生与家庭:艾米琳·潘克赫斯特出生于曼彻斯特的一个中产阶级家庭,父亲是政治活动家,母亲是知名的社会改革者。她从小受到父母对社会正义和妇女权利的影响。潘克赫斯特家族的成员中有很多活跃的政治人士,这使她从小就接触到了政治和社会运动的概念。
      • 教育与婚姻:她接受了较为传统的教育,并与理查德·潘克赫斯特(Richard Pankhurst)结婚。理查德是一个支持妇女投票权的律师,对她的思想和事业产生了重大影响。婚后,艾米琳成为了五个孩子的母亲,同时也是社会改革和妇女权益的积极倡导者。

      2. 妇女选举权运动的领导

      • 早期参与:艾米琳·潘克赫斯特早期受到了女性权利活动家的启发,尤其是在她加入英国女性选举权运动后。她开始积极参与演讲、集会等活动,推动女性的投票权和政治参与。
      • 创立妇女社会政治联盟(WSPU):1903年,艾米琳·潘克赫斯特创立了妇女社会政治联盟(WSPU)。该组织旨在通过激进手段争取女性投票权,区别于此前以温和手段争取选举权的组织(如国家妇女选举权协会)。WSPU强调激烈的抗议、公开示威、游行等行动,潘克赫斯特本人提出“行动胜于言辞”的口号,主张通过直接行动来引起社会的广泛关注。

      3. 激进主义与运动的策略

      • 暴力抗议:WSPU的策略包括了非暴力但具有高度冲击力的抗议行动。例如,女性们会在政治集会上大声抗议,破坏公共设施,甚至在某些情况下进行纵火和破坏活动。潘克赫斯特自己也曾多次参与此类抗议活动。为了表达抗议,妇女们会拒绝传统的社会规范,如不参加家庭生活、抗议政府官员等。
      • 绝食抗议:许多参与WSPU的女性会通过绝食来抗议政府的无视和压迫。政府对此采取了强硬措施,强行喂食那些绝食的女性,造成了许多妇女在监禁期间健康受损。潘克赫斯特和其他活动家也因参与抗议被多次监禁,这一时期她经历了数次绝食和强迫喂食。

      4. 第一次世界大战与政治转变

      • 战时策略:第一次世界大战爆发后,艾米琳·潘克赫斯特及其组织调整了战略。她宣布暂停部分抗议活动,支持政府的战争努力,尽管这在一些妇女权利支持者中引起了争议。潘克赫斯特认为,支持国家的战争会帮助提高妇女在社会中的地位,并促使政府在战后给予女性投票权。
      • 战时贡献:她呼吁女性加入战时劳动,帮助制造武器和支援战争,这一立场使她获得了一些政府的支持,也使妇女在战时社会角色的转变中逐步获得更多的公民认可。

      5. 女性投票权的实现

      • 投票权的胜利:1918年,英国通过了《人民代表法案》,允许30岁以上的女性投票,但仍然没有实现男女平等的投票权。艾米琳·潘克赫斯特的努力和激烈抗议被认为为这一立法胜利奠定了基础,虽然她在此时已年迈,不再亲自参与运动。
      • 最终的成就:最终,英国在1928年实现了选举权平等,女性和男性拥有同等的投票权,潘克赫斯特的努力为这一历史性成就做出了巨大的贡献。

      6. 个人生活与遗产

      • 晚年:艾米琳·潘克赫斯特在1928年去世,享年69岁。她未能亲眼见到所有女性获得完全的选举权,但她的工作无疑为此提供了坚实的基础。
      • 遗产:潘克赫斯特的斗争为后来的女性运动和全球妇女选举权运动提供了重要的启示和影响。她的名字与激进的女性主义紧密联系,她的事迹至今仍为世界各地的女性权利运动所铭记。她的女儿克里斯塔贝尔·潘克赫斯特(Christabel Pankhurst)和西尔维亚·潘克赫斯特(Sylvia Pankhurst)也继续参与了妇女运动。

      7. 潘克赫斯特的影响力

      艾米琳·潘克赫斯特的激进主义在当时极具争议,然而她的领导为女性争取选举权做出了不可磨灭的贡献。她的斗争向社会展示了女性在社会和政治生活中应有的平等地位,也改变了女性在公共事务中的角色。尽管她的策略有时被认为过于激进,但她无疑是英国女性争取政治权利的关键人物之一。

      总结

      艾米琳·潘克赫斯特是英国妇女投票权运动的象征之一,她通过领导妇女社会政治联盟并采用激进的抗议方法,成为全球女性主义历史上的关键人物之一。她的努力不仅为女性争取到了投票权,也推动了女性在社会中更广泛的政治参与和社会地位的提升。

    12. 苏珊·安东尼 (Susan B. Anthony):女权运动,选举权

      Susan B. Anthony (1820-1906) 是美国女性主义者、废奴主义者和社会改革家,被广泛认为是美国妇女权利运动的先驱之一。她的工作为女性争取投票权、平等权利和社会参与奠定了基础。以下是关于她的详细介绍:

      1. 早期生活与背景

      • 出生:Susan Brownell Anthony 1820年2月15日出生于马萨诸塞州的亚当斯镇(Adams, Massachusetts)。她生于一个新教贵格会家庭,这一宗教信仰强调平等、简朴和社会责任。
      • 家庭背景:她的父亲 Daniel Anthony 是一位商人、废奴主义者和女性权利支持者,母亲 Lucy Read Anthony 虽然较为保守,但她也支持女儿的事业。家庭的政治立场对她的思想和活动产生了深远影响。
      • 教育:Anthony 幼年时接受了家庭教育,并后来在学校接受了正式教育。然而,19世纪初期女性教育机会有限,因此她的教育水平相对较低,但她非常热衷于自我教育和社会问题的学习。

      2. 早期的社会活动

      • 废奴主义运动:Susan B. Anthony 在年轻时便加入了废奴主义运动。她坚信所有人不论肤色和性别都应该享有自由和权利。她曾与著名的废奴主义者如Frederick Douglass 和 William Lloyd Garrison 合作。
      • 教师生涯:19世纪中期,Anthony 也曾做过一段时间的教师,期间她开始关注教育中的性别不平等问题,特别是女性和女孩在教育领域的机会缺乏。
      • 社会改革:除了废奴主义,Susan B. Anthony 还对社会的诸多问题表现出强烈的关注,例如酗酒、劳动者权益、经济不平等和女权等。

      3. 妇女选举权运动

      • 与伊丽莎白·凯迪·斯坦顿的合作:Susan B. Anthony 与伊丽莎白·凯迪·斯坦顿(Elizabeth Cady Stanton)合作,成为19世纪美国妇女选举权运动的核心人物。她们共同组织了多个女性集会,致力于提高公众对女性投票权的认知。
      • 著名行动——1872年非法投票:1872年,Susan B. Anthony 在纽约州罗切斯特市(Rochester)组织了一个历史性的行动——她偷偷投票,违反了当时的选举法,要求美国政府承认女性的选举权。她因此被逮捕,并在法庭上提出了有力的辩护,强调女性与男性同样应该享有选举权。虽然最终被判有罪并罚款,但她坚决拒绝支付罚款,认为这是一种对她个人和整个妇女运动的不公。
      • 演讲和游说:Anthony 在全国各地进行演讲,激发了数以千计女性争取平等选举权的激情。她的演讲风格直白、充满力量,成为许多女性主义者的榜样。

      4. 成就与遗产

      • 女性投票权的先驱:虽然 Susan B. Anthony 未能在生前看到女性获得投票权,但她的努力为后来的成就铺平了道路。1919年,美国通过了《第19修正案》,为女性赋予了投票权,这一成就被广泛认为是Susan B. Anthony 和她的同伴们努力的结果。
      • 成立美国妇女选举权协会(NWSA):与伊丽莎白·凯迪·斯坦顿共同创立了美国妇女选举权协会,这个组织在推动女性投票权方面发挥了巨大作用。其后,Anthony 也加入了美国妇女公民协会(NAWSA),以推动选举权法案。
      • 影响力:Susan B. Anthony 的工作不仅在美国产生了深远影响,还为全球女性权利运动提供了灵感。她的斗争激发了20世纪更多的女性争取平等权利。

      5. 个人品德与挑战

      • 坚韧与毅力:Susan B. Anthony 的坚韧性格和不屈不挠的精神使她成为女性主义运动的标志性人物。尽管她面临过无数的挑战,包括被社会排斥、受到公众的恶意攻击、甚至在法律面前受辱,她依然坚持自己的理念。
      • 社会争议:Anthony 的工作并不是没有争议,尤其是在推动女性选举权的过程中,她曾受到许多传统主义者和保守派的强烈反对,甚至有批评者认为她的行动会扰乱社会秩序。但她坚定地认为,不论性别,任何有理性的人都应该享有平等的公民权利。

      6. 去世与纪念

      • 去世:Susan B. Anthony 于1906年3月13日去世,享年86岁。尽管她未能亲眼见到妇女投票权的通过,但她为此做出了不可磨灭的贡献。
      • 纪念与影响:在她去世之后,她的名字和成就成为了妇女平等运动的象征。美国政府为了纪念她,曾将她的肖像印在美国硬币上,称她为“美国女性投票权的象征”。

      总结

      Susan B. Anthony 是一位坚韧不拔的女性权利和社会改革的先锋,她为女性争取平等选举权、教育权利和社会参与的努力在美国历史上留下了深刻的印记。她不仅是一位杰出的社会活动家,也是一个不畏挑战、敢于质疑社会不公的女性主义者,她的工作至今仍为全球的女性争取平等权利提供了灵感。

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents data demonstrating NopT's interaction with Nod Factor Receptors NFR1 and NFR5 and its impact on cell death inhibition and rhizobial infection. The identification of a truncated NopT variant in certain Sinorhizobium species adds an interesting dimension to the study. These data try to bridge the gaps between classical Nod-factor-dependent nodulation and T3SS NopT effector-dependent nodulation in legume-rhizobium symbiosis. Overall, the research provides interesting insights into the molecular mechanisms underlying symbiotic interactions between rhizobia and legumes.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript nicely demonstrates NopT's proteolytic cleavage of NFR5, regulated by NFR1 phosphorylation, promoting rhizobial infection in L. japonicus. Intriguingly, authors also identify a truncated NopT variant in certain Sinorhizobium species, maintaining NFR5 cleavage but lacking NFR1 interaction. These findings bridge the T3SS effector with the classical Nod-factor-dependent nodulation pathway, offering novel insights into symbiotic interactions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In the previous study, when transiently expressed NopT alone in Nicotiana tobacco plants, proteolytically active NopT elicited a rapid hypersensitive reaction. However, this phenotype was not observed when expressing the same NopT in Nicotiana benthamiana (Figure 1A). Conversely, cell death and a hypersensitive reaction were observed in Figure S8. This raises questions about the suitability of the exogenous expression system for studying NopT proteolysis specificity.

      (2) NFR5 Loss-of-function mutants do not produce nodules in the presence of rhizobia in lotus roots, and overexpression of NFR1 and NFR5 produces spontaneous nodules. In this regard, if the direct proteolysis target of NopT is NFR5, one could expect the NGR234's infection will not be very successful because of the Native NopT's specific proteolysis function of NFR5 and NFR1. Conversely, in Figure 5, authors observed the different results.

      (3) In Figure 6E, the model illustrates how NopT digests NFR5 to regulate rhizobia infection. However, it raises the question of whether it is reasonable for NGR234 to produce an effector that restricts its own colonization in host plants.

      (4) The failure to generate stable transgenic plants expressing NopT in Lotus japonicus is surprising, considering the manuscript's claim that NopT specifically proteolyzes NFR5, a major player in the response to nodule symbiosis, without being essential for plant development.

      Comments on the revised version:

      My concerns regarding the potential function of NopT during nodule symbiosis have been adequately addressed in the revised manuscript. Therefore, I have no further questions about this version, aside from a few minor suggestions:

      (1) Please carefully check the text formatting throughout the manuscript to ensure consistency with scientific conventions and the journal's standards. For example, Line 105-117 and line119-131.<br /> (2) The term "detrimental" in line 624 may not accurately describe the function of NopT in rhizobial infection. Since the authors propose that NopT proteolytically cleaves NFR5 and suppresses NF signaling as a potential fine-tuning mechanism for legume symbiosis, a more precise term may be needed.<br /> (3) Lines 632-634 are somewhat unclear. If NopT serves as a strategy for rhizobia to evade detection by plant immunity, then knocking out NopT should, in theory, inhibit rhizobial infection. Clarification on this point would be beneficial.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Bacterial effectors that interfere with the inner molecular workings of eukaryotic host cells are of great biological significance across disciplines. On the one hand they help us to understand the molecular strategies that bacteria use to manipulate host cells. On the other hand they can be used as research tools to reveal molecular details of the intricate workings of the host machinery that is relevant for the interaction/defence/symbiosis with bacteria. The authors investigate the function and biological impact of a rhizobial effector that interacts with and modifies, and curiously is modified by, legume receptors essential for symbiosis. The molecular analysis revealed a bacterial effector that cleaves a plant symbiosis signaling receptor to inhibit signaling and the host counterplay by phosphorylation via a receptor kinase. These findings have potential implications beyond bacterial interactions with plants.

      Bao and colleagues investigated how rhizobial effector proteins can regulate the legume root nodule symbiosis. A rhizobial effector is described to directly modify symbiosis-related signaling proteins, altering the outcome of the symbiosis. Overall, the paper presents findings that will have a wide appeal beyond its primary field.

      Out of 15 identified effectors from Sinorhizobium fredii, they focus on the effector NopT, which exhibits proteolytic activity and may therefore cleave specific target proteins of the host plant. They focus on two Nod factor receptors of the legume Lotus japonicus, NFR1 and NFR5, both of which were previously found to be essential for the perception of rhizobial nod factor, and the induction of symbiotic responses such as bacterial infection thread formation in root hairs and root nodule development (Madsen et al., 2003, Nature; Tirichine et al., 2003; Nature). The authors present evidence for an interaction of NopT with NFR1 and NFR5. The paper aims to characterize the biochemical and functional consequences of these interactions and the phenotype that arises when the effector is mutated.

      Evidence is presented that in vitro NopT can cleave NFR5 at its juxtamembrane region. NFR5 appears also to be cleaved in vivo. and NFR1 appears to inhibit the proteolytic activity of NopT by phosphorylating NopT. When NFR5 and NFR1 are ectopically over-expressed in leaves of the non-legume Nicotiana benthamiana, they induce cell death (Madsen et al., 2011, Plant Journal). Bao et al., found that this cell death response is inhibited by the coexpression of nopT. Mutation of nopT alters the outcome of rhizobial infection in L. japonicus. These conclusions are well supported by the data.

      The authors present evidence supporting the interaction of NopT with NFR1 and NFR5. In particular, there is solid support for cleavage of NFR5 by NopT (Figure 3) and the identification of NopT phosphorylation sites that inhibit its proteolytic activity (Figure 4C). Cleavage of NFR5 upon expression in N. benthamiana (Figure 3A) requires appropriate controls (inactive mutant versions) that have been provided, since Agrobacterium as a closely rhizobia-related bacterium might increase defense related proteolytic activity in the plant host cells.

      We appreciate your recognition of the importance of appropriate controls in our experimental design. In response to your comments, we revised our manuscript to ensure that the figures and legends provide a clear description of the controls used. We also included a more detailed description of our experimental design at several places. In particular, we have highlighted the use of the protease-dead version of NopT as a control (NopT<sup>C93S</sup>). Therefore, NFR5-GFP cleavage in N. benthamiana clearly depended on protease activity of NopT and not on Agrobacterium (Fig. 3A). In the revised text, we carefully revied the conclusion and do not conclude at this stage that NopT proteolyzes NFR5. However, our subsequent experiments, including in vitro experiments, clearly show that NopT is able to proteolyze NFR5.

      Key results from N. benthamiana appear consistent with data from recombinant protein expression in bacteria. For the analysis in the host legume L. japonicus transgenic hairy roots were included. To demonstrate that the cleavage of NFR5 occurs during the interaction in plant cells the authors build largely on western blots. Regardless of whether Nicotiana leaf cells or Lotus root cells are used as the test platform, the Western blots indicate that only a small proportion of NFR5 is cleaved when co-expressed with nopT, and most of the NFR5 persists in its full-length form (Figures 3A-D). It is not quite clear how the authors explain the loss of NFR5 function (loss of cell death, impact on symbiosis), as a vast excess of the tested target remains intact. It is also not clear why a large proportion of NFR5 is unaffected by the proteolytic activity of NopT. This is particularly interesting in Nicotiana in the absence of Nod factor that could trigger NFR1 kinase activity.

      Thank you for your comments regarding the cleavage of NFR5 by NopT and its functional implications. We acknowledge that our immunoblots indicate only a relatively small proportion of the NFR5 cleavage product. Possible explanations could be as follows:

      (1) The presence of full-length NFR5 does not preclude a significant impact of NopT on function of NFR5, as NopT is able to interact with NFR5. In other words, the NopT-NFR5 and NopT-NFR1 interactions at the plasma membrane might influence the function of the NFR1/NFR5 receptor without proteolytic cleavage of NFR5. In fact, protease-dead NopT<sup>C93S</sup> expressed in NGR234ΔnopT showed certain effects in L. japonicus (less infection foci were formed compared to NGR234ΔnopT Fig. 5E). In this context, it is worth mentioning that the non-acylated NopT<sup>C93S</sup> (Fig. 1B) and NopT<sub>USDA257</sub> (Fig. 6B) proteins were unable to suppress NFR1/NFR5-induced cell death in N. benthamina, but this could be explained by the lack of acylation and altered subcellular localization.

      (2) In the cleavage assay, only small portion of NFR5 could be detected for cleavage by NopT. However, this cleavage might be sufficient to suppress signaling pathways, leading to the observed phenotypic changes (loss of cell death in N. benthamiana; altered infection in L. japonicus). We do believe this is a great point, therefore, we carefully revised the conclusion about this point. Throughout the paper, we stated that the cleavage of NFR5 suppresses symbiotic signaling but not disrupt the symbiotic signaling. We also removed the conclusion that cleavage of NFR5 by NopT results in the function loss of NFR5.

      (3) N. benthamiana co-expressing NFR1/NFR5 leads to strong cell death, which suggest that the NFR1 kinase activity might be constitutively active even in the absence of Nod factors. But why co-expression of symbiotic receptor leads to cell death and how kinase activity is active in the absence of Nod factor are not clear, which is of great interest to be studied.

      (4) The proteolytic activity of NopT may be reduced by the interaction of NopT with other proteins such as NFR1, which phosphorylates NopT and inactivates its protease activity.

      In our revised manuscript version, we provide now quantitative data for the efficiency of NFR5 cleavage by NopT in different expression systems used (Figure 3 and Supplemental Fig. 16). We have also improved our Discussion in this context.  

      Comments on latest version:

      The presentation of the figures and the language has greatly improved and the specific mistakes pointed out in the last review have been corrected. I especially appreciate the new images used to illustrate the observed mutant phenotypes, which are much clearer and easier to understand. The pictures used to illustrate the mutant phenotypes seem to be of more comparable root regions than before. Overall, the requested changes have been implemented, with some exceptions described below.

      • Figure 1: New representative images are shown for BAX1 and CERK1. These pictures are more consistent with the phenotype seen in other treatments, but since the data has not changed, I presume the data from leaf discs (where the leaf discs for these treatments looked very different) previously shown is still included. The criteria for what was considered cell death is in my opinion still not described in the legend. The cell death/total ratio has been added for all leaf discs, as requested.

      Thank you so much for carefully pointing out this. Cell death in leaf disc results in the formation of necrotic plaques, which restrains pathogens within deceased cells. These plaques commonly manifest as leaf dehydration, frequently accompanied by a translucent appearance. Brown and shriveled leaf discs serve as indicators of cell death. We have added these descriptions in the figure legend of Figure 1.

      • Figure 2: the discussion of the figure now emphasizes direct protein interaction. There is still no size marker in 2D or a description of size in the figure legend, making it difficult to compare the result to Figure 3. If I understand the rebuttal comments correctly, there are other bands on the blot, including non-specific bands. This does not negate the need to include the full blot as a supplemental figure to show cleaved NFR5 as well as other bands. I do not see any other clarifications on this subject in the manuscript.

      Thank you for your suggestion. In the revised manuscript, we have included the kDa range for all proteins detected in Figure.2D. The full blot of Co-IP assay was shown in Fig S2 (a new supplemental data). Yes, we detected some smaller bands after immunoblot, but we cannot give clear conclusion of what these bands are based on the current study. Interestingly, these smaller bands were immunoprecipitated by anti-FLAG beads, suggesting that these bands are some truncated peptides from NFR5.

      • Figure 5: From the pictures, it is now easier to understand what is meant by "infection foci". Although there is no description in the methods of how these were distinguished from infection threads, I believe the images are clear enough.

      Thank you for your helpful comment. In the revised manuscript, we have added the descriptions about this experiment in the method section and in the legend in Figure 5A.

      • Figure 6: The changes in the discussion are appreciated, but panel E still misrepresents the evidence in the paper, as from the drawing it still seems that the cleaved NFR5 is somehow directly responsible for suppressing infection when this was not shown.

      Thank you for your thoughtful comments. We appreciate your suggestion to the schematic model to illustrate the cleavage of NFR5 to suppressing rhizobia infection. In the revised manuscript, we have changed the model in Figure 6E.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents data demonstrating NopT's interaction with Nod Factor Receptors NFR1 and NFR5 and its impact on cell death inhibition and rhizobial infection. The identification of a truncated NopT variant in certain Sinorhizobium species adds an interesting dimension to the study. These data try to bridge the gaps between classical Nod-factor-dependent nodulation and T3SS NopT effector-dependent nodulation in legume-rhizobium symbiosis. Overall, the research provides interesting insights into the molecular mechanisms underlying symbiotic interactions between rhizobia and legumes.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript nicely demonstrates NopT's proteolytic cleavage of NFR5, regulated by NFR1 phosphorylation, promoting rhizobial infection in L. japonicus. Intriguingly, authors also identify a truncated NopT variant in certain Sinorhizobium species, maintaining NFR5 cleavage but lacking NFR1 interaction. These findings bridge the T3SS effector with the classical Nod-factor-dependent nodulation pathway, offering novel insights into symbiotic interactions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In the previous study, when transiently expressed NopT alone in Nicotiana tobacco plants, proteolytically active NopT elicited a rapid hypersensitive reaction. However, this phenotype was not observed when expressing the same NopT in Nicotiana benthamiana (Figure 1A). Conversely, cell death and a hypersensitive reaction were observed in Figure S8. This raises questions about the suitability of the exogenous expression system for studying NopT proteolysis specificity.

      We appreciate your attention to these plant-specific differences. Previous studies showed that NopT expressed in tobacco (N. tabacum) or in specific Arabidopsis ecotypes (with PBS1/RPS5 genes) causes rapid cell death (Dai et al. 2008; Khan et al. 2022). Khan et al. 2022 reported recently that cell death does not occur in N. benthamiana unless the leaves were transformed with PBS1/RPS5 constructs. Our data shown in Fig. S17 confirm these findings. As cell death is usually associated with induction of plant protease activities, we considered N. tabacum and A. thaliana plants as not suitable for testing NFR5 cleavage by NopT. In fact, no NopT/NFR5 experiments were not performed with these plants in our study. In response to your comment, we now better describe the N. benthamiana expression system and cite the previous articles_. Furthermore, we have revised the Discussion section to better emphasize effector-induced immunity in non-host plants and the negative effect of rhizobial effectors during symbiosis. Our revisions certainly provide a clearer understanding of the advantages and limitations of the _N. benthamiana expression system.

      (2) NFR5 Loss-of-function mutants do not produce nodules in the presence of rhizobia in lotus roots, and overexpression of NFR1 and NFR5 produces spontaneous nodules. In this regard, if the direct proteolysis target of NopT is NFR5, one could expect the NGR234's infection will not be very successful because of the Native NopT's specific proteolysis function of NFR5 and NFR1. Conversely, in Figure 5, authors observed the different results.

      Thank you for this comment, which points out that we did not address this aspect precisely enough in the original manuscript version. We improved our manuscript and now write that nfr1 and nfr5 mutants do not produce nodules (Madsen et al., 2003; Radutoiu et al., 2003) and that over-expression of either NFR1 or NFR5 can activate NF signaling, resulting in formation of spontaneous nodules in the absence of rhizobia (Ried et al., 2014). In fact, compared to the nopT knockout mutant NGR234ΔnopT, wildtype NGR234 (with NopT) is less successful in inducing infection foci in root hairs of L. japonicus (Fig. 5). With respect to formation of nodule primordia, we repeated our inoculation experiments with NGR234ΔnopT and wildtype NGR234 and also included a nopT over-expressing NGR234 strain into the analysis. Our data clearly showed that nodule primordium formation was negatively affected by NopT. The new data are shown in Fig. 5 of our revised version. Our data show that NGR234 infection is not really successful, especially when NopT is over-expressed. This is consistent with our observations that NopT targets Nod factor receptors in L. japonicus and inhibits NF signaling (NIN promoter-GUS experiments). Our findings indicate that NopT might be an “Avr effector” for L. japonicus. However, in other host plants of NGR234, NopT possesses a symbiosis-promoting role (Dai et al. 2008; Kambara et al. 2009). Such differences could be explained by different NopT targets in different plants (in addition to Nod factor receptors), which may influence the outcome of the infection process. Indeed, our work shows that NopT can interact with various kinase-dead LysM domain receptors, suggesting a role of NopT in suppression or activation of plant immunity responses depending on the host plant. We discuss such alternative mechanisms in our revised manuscript version and emphasize the need for further investigation to elucidate the precise mechanisms underlying the observed infection phenotype and the role of NopT in modulating symbiotic signaling pathways. In this context, we would also like to mention the new figures of our manuscript which are showing (i) the efficiency of NFR5 cleavage by NopT in different expression systems (Figure 3), (ii) the interaction between NopT<sup>C93S</sup> and His-SUMO-NFR5JM-GFP (Supplementary Fig. 5), and (iii) cleavage of His-SUMO-NFPJM-GFP by NopT (Supplementary Figs. S8 and S9).

      (3) In Figure 6E, the model illustrates how NopT digests NFR5 to regulate rhizobia infection. However, it raises the question of whether it is reasonable for NGR234 to produce an effector that restricts its own colonization in host plants.

      Thank you for mentioning this point. We are aware of the possible paradox that the broad-host-range strain NGR234 produces an effector that appears to restrict its infection of host plants. As mentioned in our answer to the previous comment, NopT could have additional functions beyond the regulation of Nod factor signaling. In our revised manuscript version, we have modified our text as follows:

      (1) We mention the potential evolutionary aspects of NopT-mediated regulation of rhizobial infection and discuss the possibility that interactions between NopT and Nod factor receptors may have evolved to fine-tune Nod factor signaling to avoid rhizobial hyperinfection in certain host legumes.

      (2) We also emphasize that the presence of NopT may confer selective advantages in other host plants than L. japonicus due to interactions with proteins related to plant immunity. Like other effectors, NopT could suppress activation of immune responses (suppression of PTI) or cause effector-triggered immunity (ETI) responses, thereby modulating rhizobial infection and nodule formation. Interactions between NopT and proteins related to the plant immune system may represent an important evolutionary driving force for host-specific nodulation and explain why the presence of NopT in NGR234 has a negative effect on symbiosis with L. japonicus but a positive one with other legumes.

      (4) The failure to generate stable transgenic plants expressing NopT in Lotus japonicus is surprising, considering the manuscript's claim that NopT specifically proteolyzes NFR5, a major player in the response to nodule symbiosis, without being essential for plant development.

      We also thank for this comment. We have revised the Discussion section of our manuscript and discuss now our failure to generate stable transgenic L. japonicus plants expressing NopT. We observed that the protease activity of NopT in aerial parts of L. japonicus had a negative effect on plant development, whereas NopT expression in hairy roots was possible. Such differences may be explained by different NopT substrates in roots and aerial parts of the plant. In this context, we also discuss our finding that NopT not only cleaves NFR5 but is also able to proteolyze other proteins of L. japonicus such as LjLYS11, suggesting that NopT not only suppresses Nod factor signaling, but may also interfere with signal transduction pathways related to plant immunity. We speculate that, depending on the host legume species, NopT could suppress PTI or induce ETI, thereby modulating rhizobial infection and nodule formation.

      Comments on revised version:

      This version has effectively addressed most of my concerns. However, one key issue remains unresolved regarding the mechanism of NopT in regulating nodule symbiosis. Specifically, the explanation of how NopT catabolizes NFR5 to regulate symbiosis is still not convincing within the current framework of plant-microbe interaction, where plants are understood to genetically control rhizobial colonization.

      While alternative regulatory mechanisms in plant-microbe interactions are plausible, the notion that the NRG234-secreted effector NopT could reduce its own infection by either suppressing plant immunity or degrading the symbiosis receptor remains unsubstantiated. I believe further revisions are needed in the discussion section to more clearly address and clarify these findings and any lingering uncertainties.

      We appreciate your positive comments on the reason why NopT catabolizes NFR5 to regulate symbiosis. NopT belongs to pathogen effecftors YopT family and also cleavage Arabidopsis AtLYK5 and L. japonicus LjLYS11 which trigger immunity responses in plants. NFR5, AtLYK5 and LjLYS11 has the conserved amino acid motif at the juxtamembrane domain, leading to cleaving NFR5 by NopT during symbiosis. Besides, in plant-microbe interaction, effector HopB1 cleaves immune co-receptor BAK1 at the kinase domain to inhibit plant defense. The effect on cleavage of receptor may be positive or negative. NopT suppressing symbiosis may avoid preventing hyperinfection in the specific interaction between rhizobia and legumes. In the revised manuscript, we have emphasized this point more clearly in why NopT could reduce its own infection by either suppressing plant immunity in discussion.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Evaluation of the author's responses to the reviewer comments during the first review round

      Reviewer's Comment:

      Regardless of whether Nicotiana leaf cells or Lotus root cells are used as the test platform, the Western blots indicate that only a small proportion of NFR5 is cleaved when co-expressed with NopT, and most of the NFR5 persists in its full-length form (Figures 3A-D). It is not quite clear how the authors explain the loss of NFR5 function (loss of cell death, impact on symbiosis), as a vast excess of the tested target remains intact. It is also not clear why a large proportion of NFR5 is unaffected by the proteolytic activity of NopT. This is particularly interesting in Nicotiana in the absence of Nod factor that could trigger NFR1 kinase activity.

      Summary of response:

      • NopT could be interfering with the NFR1/NFR5 complex without proteolytic cleavage

      • The cleaved fraction may still be sufficient to disrupt signaling pathways

      • Elevated abundance of NFR5 relative to WT levels

      • Add quantitative data for efficiency of NFR5 cleavage in different systems

      Evaluation of response:

      • The quantification of NFR5 cleavage efficiency is welcome, and there is some discussion of the possible reasons for the large proportion of uncleaved NFR5. It is clear that there is a large difference in cleavage efficiency between L. japonicus roots and N. benthamiana.

      • The data is shown as a bar plot. Given that only 3 biological replicates are used, the data points should be shown, and there is too little data to provide sensible error bars. It would be better to simply make a dot-plot and indicate the mean for each sample. However, the main aim of the comment is addressed.

      Thank you for your constructive comments regarding Figure S16. In the revised manuscript, we have presented these data into dot-Plot format.

      Reviewer's Comment:

      It is also difficult to evaluate how the ratios of cleaved and full-length protein change when different versions of NopT are present without a quantification of band strengths normalized to loading controls (Figure 3C, 3D, 3F). The same is true for the blots supporting NFR1 phosphorylation of NopT (Figure 4A).

      Summary of response:

      • Quantified proportion of cleaved and full length NFR5 in different systems (S14)

      • Band strengths of immunoblots quantified (4B)

      Evaluation of response:

      • The quantification has been performed as requested and the data is shown as bar plots. This type of data is frequently displayed as part of the blot figure itself, printed under each respective lane, making it easier for the reader to connect the ratios to the band sizes. If data is shown in a plot, the data points should be shown on the plot, as described above.

      Thank you for your constructive comments regarding Figure 3. In the revised manuscript, we have added the cleavage efficiency in the 3A-3D.

      Reviewer's Comment:

      Nodule primordia and infection threads are still formed when L. japonicus plants are inoculated with ∆nopT mutant bacteria, but it is not clear if these primordia are infected or develop into fully functional nodules (Figure 5). A quantification of the ratio of infected and non-infected nodules and primordia would reveal whether NopT is only active at the transition from infection focus to thread or perhaps also later in the bacterial infection process of the developing root nodule.

      Summary of response:

      • Additional experiments with NGR234 or NGR234ΔnopT mutants find no non-infected nodules (fig. 5)

      Evaluation of response:

      • The requested quantification has been done, although the support for the findings would be stronger if also mature nodules per plant were quantified and plotted. If non-infected nodules were neither present in NGR234 or NGR234ΔnopT, it would still be advisable to include images of cross-sections of the fully-developed nodules.

      We appreciate your positive comments on the cross-sections of the fully-developed nodules. In the revised manuscript, we have added the cross-section images of nodules in the Figure S12.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used a subset of a very large, previously generated 16S dataset to:<br /> (1) Assess age-associated features; and (2) develop a fecal microbiome clock, based on an extensive longitudinal sampling of wild baboons for which near-exact chronological age is known. They further seek to understand deviation from age-expected patterns and uncover if and why some individuals have an older or younger microbiome than expected, and the health and longevity implications of such variation. Overall, the authors compellingly achieved their goals of discovering age-associated microbiome features and developing a fecal microbiome clock. They also showed clear and exciting evidence for sex and rank-associated variation in the pace of gut microbiome aging and impacts of seasonality on microbiome age in females. These data add to a growing understanding of modifiers of the pace of age in primates, and links among different biological indicators of age, with implications for understanding and contextualizing human variation. However, in the current version, there are gaps in the analyses with respect to the social environment, and in comparisons with other biological indicators of age. Despite this, I anticipate this work will be impactful, generate new areas of inquiry, and fuel additional comparative studies.

      Thank you for the supportive comments and constructive reviews.

      Strengths:

      The major strengths of the paper are the size and sampling depth of the study population, including the ability to characterize the social and physical environments, and the application of recent and exciting methods to characterize the microbiome clock. An additional strength was the ability of the authors to compare and contrast the relative age-predictive power of the fecal microbiome clock to other biological methods of age estimation available for the study population (dental wear, blood cell parameters, methylation data). Furthermore, the writing and support materials are clear, informative and visually appealing.

      Weaknesses:

      It seems clear that more could be done in the area of drawing comparisons among the microbiome clock and other metrics of biological age, given the extensive data available for the study population. It was confusing to see this goal (i.e. "(i) to test whether microbiome age is correlated with other hallmarks of biological age in this population"), listed as a future direction, when the authors began this process here and have the data to do more; it would add to the impact of the paper to see this more extensively developed.

      Comparing the microbiome clock to other metrics of biological age in our population is a high priority (these other metrics of biological age are in Table S5 and include epigenetic age measured in blood, the non-invasive physiology and behavior clock (NPB clock), dentine exposure, body mass index, and blood cell counts (Galbany et al. 2011; Altmann et al. 2010; Jayashankar et al. 2003; Weibel et al. 2024; Anderson et al. 2021)). However, we have opted to test these relationships in a separate manuscript. We made this decision because of the complexity of the analytical task: these metrics were not necessarily collected on the same subjects, and when they were, each metric was often measured at a different age for a given animal. Further, two of the metrics (microbiome clock and NPB clock) are measured longitudinally within subjects but on different time scales (the NPB clock is measured annually while microbiome age is measured in individual samples). The other metrics are cross-sectional. Testing the correlations between them will require exploration of how subject inclusion and time scale affect the relationships between metrics.

      We now explain the complexity of this analysis in the discussion in lines 447-450. In addition, we have added the NPB clock (Weibel et al. 2024) to the text in lines 260-262 and to Table S5.

      An additional weakness of the current set of analyses is that the authors did not explore the impact of current social network connectedness on microbiome parameters, despite the landmark finding from members of this authorship studying the same population that "Social networks predict gut microbiome composition in wild baboons" published here in eLife some years ago. While a mother's social connectedness is included as a parameter of early life adversity, overall the authors focus strongly on social dominance rank, without discussion of that parameter's impact on social network size or directly assessing it.

      Thank you for raising this important point, which was not well explained in our manuscript. We find that the signatures of social group membership and social network proximity are only detectable our population for samples collected close in time. All of the samples analyzed in  Tung et al. 2015 (“Social networks predict gut microbiome composition in wild baboons”) were collected within six weeks of each other. By contrast, the data set analyzed here spans 14 years, with very few samples from close social partners collected close in time. Hence, the effects of social group membership and social proximity are weak or undetectable. We described these findings in Grieneisen et al. 2021 and Bjork et al. 2022, and we now explain this logic on line 530, which states, “We did not model individual social network position because prior analyses of this data set find no evidence that close social partners have more similar gut microbiomes, probably because we lack samples from close social partners sampled close in time (Grieneisen et al. 2021; Björk et al. 2022).”

      We do find small effects of social group membership, which is included as a random effect in our models of how each microbiome feature is associated with host age (line 529) and our models predicting microbiome Dage (line 606; Table S6).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Dasari et al present an interesting study investigating the use of 'microbiota age' as an alternative to other measures of 'biological age'. The study provides several curious insights into biological aging. Although 'microbiota age' holds potential as a proxy of biological age, it comes with limitations considering the gut microbial community can be influenced by various non-age related factors, and various age-related stressors may not manifest in changes in the gut microbiota. The work would benefit from a more comprehensive discussion, that includes the limitations of the study and what these mean to the interpretation of the results.

      We agree and have text to the discussion that expands on the limitations of this study and what those limitations mean for the interpretation of the results. For instance, lines 395-400 read, “Despite the relative accuracy of the baboon microbiome clock compared to similar clocks in humans, our clock has several limitations. First, the clock’s ability to predict  individual age is lower than for age clocks based on patterns of DNA methylation—both for humans and baboons (Horvath 2013; Marioni et al. 2015; Chen et al. 2016; Binder et al. 2018; Anderson et al. 2021). One reason for this difference may be that gut microbiomes can be influenced by several non-age-related factors, including social group membership, seasonal changes in resource use, and fluctuations in microbial communities in the environment”

      In addition, lines 405-411 now reads, “Third, the relationships between potential socio-environmental drivers of biological aging and the resulting biological age predictions were inconsistent. For instance, some sources of early life adversity were linked to old-for-age gut microbiomes (e.g., males born into large social groups), while others were linked to young-for-age microbiomes (e.g., males who experienced maternal social isolation or early life drought), or were unrelated to gut microbiome age (e.g., males who experienced maternal loss; any source of early life adversity in females).”

      Strengths:

      The dataset this study is based on is impressive, and can reveal various insights into biological ageing and beyond. The analysis implemented is extensive and high-level.

      Weaknesses:

      The key weakness is the use of microbiota age instead of e.g., DNA-methylation-based epigenetic age as a proxy of biological ageing, for reasons stated in the summary. DNA methylation levels can be measured from faecal samples, and as such epigenetic clocks too can be non-invasive. I will provide authors a list of minor edits to improve the read, to provide more details on Methods, and to make sure study limitations are discussed comprehensively.

      Thank you for this point. In response, we have deleted the text from the discussion that stated that non-invasive sampling is an advantage of microbiome clocks. In addition, we now propose a non-invasive epigenetic clock from fecal samples as an important future direction for our population (see line 450).

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Abstract - The opening 2 sentences are not especially original or reflective of the potential value/ premise of the study. Members of this team have themselves measured variation in biological age in many different ways, and the implication that measuring a microbiome clock is easy or straightforward is not compelling. This paper is very interesting and provides unique insight, but I think overall there is a missed opportunity in the abstract to emphasize this, given the innovative science presented here. Furthermore, the last 2 sentences of the abstract are especially interesting - but missing a final statement on the broader significance of research outside of baboons.

      We appreciate these comments and have revised the Abstract accordingly. The introductory sentences now read, “Mammalian gut microbiomes are highly dynamic communities that shape and are shaped by host aging, including age-related changes to host immunity, metabolism, and behavior. As such, gut microbial composition may provide valuable information on host biological age.” (lines 31-34). The last two sentences of the abstract now read, “Hence, in our host population, gut microbiome age largely reflects current, as opposed to past, social and environmental conditions, and does not predict the pace of host development or host mortality risk. We add to a growing understanding of how age is reflected in different host phenotypes and what forces modify biological age in primates.” (lines 40-43).

      If possible, it would be highly useful to present some comments on concordance in patterns at different levels. Are all ASVs assessed at both the family and genus levels? Do they follow similar patterns when assessed at different levels? What can we learn about the system by looking at different levels of taxonomic assignment?

      The section on relationships between host age and individual microbiome features is already lengthy, so we have not added an analysis of concordance between different taxonomic levels. However, we added a justification for why we tested for age signatures in different levels of taxa to line 171, which reads, “We tested these different taxonomic levels in order to learn whether the degree to which coarse and fine-grained designations categories were associated with host age.”

      To calculate the delta age - please clarify if this was done at the level of years, as suggested in Figure 3C, or at the level of months or portion months, etc?

      Delta age is measured in years. This is now clarified in lines 294, 295, and 578.

      Spelling mistake in table S12, cell B4 (Octovber)

      Thank you. This typo has been corrected.

      Given the start intro with vertebrates, the second paragraph needs some tweaking to be appropriate. Perhaps, "At least among mammals, one valuable marker of biological aging may lie in the composition and dynamics of the mammalian gut microbiome (7-10)." Or simply remove "mammalian".

      We have updated this sentence based on your suggestions in line 54. It reads, “In mammals, one valuable marker of biological aging may lie in the composition and dynamics of the gut microbiome (Claesson et al. 2012; Heintz and Mair 2014; O’Toole and Jeffery 2015; Sadoughi et al. 2022).”

      A rewrite at the end of the introduction is needed to avoid the almost direct repetition in lines 115-118 and 129-131 (including lit cited). One potentially effective way to approach this is to keep the predictions in the earlier paragraph and then more clearly center the approach and the overarching results statement in the latter paragraph. (I.e., "we find that season and social rank have stronger effects on microbiome age than early life events. Further, microbiome age does not predict host development or mortality.").

      Thank you for pointing this out. We have re-organized the predictions in the introduction based on your suggestion. The alternative “recency effects” model now appears in the paragraph that starts in line 110. The final paragraph then centers on the overall approach and the results statement (lines 128-140)

      Be clear in each case where taxon-level trends are discussed if it's at Family, Genus, or other level. It's there most, but not all, of the time.

      We have gone through the text and clarified what taxa or microbiome feature was the subject of our analyses in any places where this was not clear.

      In the legend for Figure 2, add clarification for how values to right versus left of the centered value should be interpreted with respect to age (e.g. "values to x of the center are more abundant in older individuals").

      We now clarify in Figure 2C and 2D that “Positive values are more abundant in older hosts”.

      Figure 3 - Are Panels A, B, and C all needed - can the value for all individuals not also be overlaid in the panel showing sex differences and the same point showing individuals with "old" and "young" microbiomes be added in the same plot if it was slightly larger?

      We agree and have simplified Figure 3. We reduced the number of panels from three to two, and we added the information about how to calculate delta age to Panel A. We also moved the equation from the top of Panel C to the bottom right of Panel A.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Dasari et al present an interesting study investigating the use of 'microbiota age' as an alternative to other measures of 'biological age'. The study provides several curious insights which in principle warrant publication. However, I do think the manuscript should be carefully revised. Below I list some minor revisions that should be implemented. Importantly, the authors should discuss in the Discussion the pros and cons of using 'microbiota age' as a proxy of 'biological age'. Further, the authors should provide more information on Methods, to make sure the study can be replicated.

      Thank you for these important points. Based on your comments and those of the first reviewer, we have expanded our discussion of the limitations of using microbiota age as a proxy for biological age (see edits to the paragraph starting in line 395).

      We have also expanded our methods around sample collection, DNA extraction, and sequencing to describe our sampling methods, strategies to mitigate and address possible contamination, and batch effects. See lines 483-490 and our citations to the original papers where these methods are described in detail.

      (1) Lines 85-99: I think this paragraph could be revisited to make the assumptions clearer. For instance, the last sentence is currently a little confusing: are authors expecting males to exhibit old-for-age microbiomes already during the juvenile period?

      This prediction has been clarified. Line 96 now reads, “Hence, we predicted that adult male baboons would exhibit gut microbiomes that are old-for-age, compared to adult females (by contrast, we expected no sex effects on microbiome age in juvenile baboons).”

      (2) Lines 118-121: Could the authors discuss this assumption in relation to what has been observed e.g., in humans in terms of delays in gut microbiome development? Delayed/accelerated gut microbiome development has been studied before, so this assumption would be stronger if related to what we know from previous studies.

      This comment refers to the sentence which originally stated, “However, we also expected that some sources of early life adversity might be linked to young-for-age gut microbiota. For instance, maternal social isolation might delay gut microbiome development due to less frequent microbial exposures from conspecifics.” We have slightly expanded the text here (line 117) to explain our logic. We now include citations for our predictions. We did not include a detailed discussion of prior literature on microbiome development in the interest of keeping the same level of detail across all sections on our predictions.

      (3) As the authors discuss, various adversities can lead to old-for-age but also young-for-age microbiome composition. This should be discussed in the limitations.

      We agree. This is now discussed in the sentence starting at line 371, which reads, “…deviations from microbiome age predictions are explained by socio-environmental conditions experienced by individual hosts, especially recent conditions, although the effect sizes are small and are not always directionally consistent.” In addition, the text starting at line 405 now reads, “Third, the relationships between potential socio-environmental drivers of biological aging and the resulting biological age predictions were inconsistent. For instance, some sources of early life adversity were linked to old-for-age gut microbiomes (e.g., males born into large social groups), while others were linked to young-for-age microbiomes (e.g., males who experienced maternal social isolation or early life drought), or were unrelated to gut microbiome age (e.g., males who experienced maternal loss; any source of early life adversity in females).”

      (4) In various places, e.g., lines 129-131, it is a little unclear at what chronological age authors are expecting microbiota to appear young/old-for-age.

      This sentence was removed while responding to the comments from the first reviewer.

      (5) Lines 132-133: this statement could be backed by stating that this is because the gut microbiota can change rapidly e.g., when diet changes (or whatever the authors think could be behind this).

      We have added an expository sentence at line 123, including new citations. This sentence reads, “Indeed, gut microbiomes are highly dynamic and can change rapidly in response to host diet or other aspects of host physiology, behavior, or environments”.

      We now cite:

      · Hicks, A.L., et al. (2018). Gut microbiomes of wild great apes fluctuate seasonally in response to diet. Nature Communications 9, 1786.

      · Kolodny, O., et al. (2019). Coordinated change at the colony level in fruit bat fur microbiomes through time. Nature Ecology & Evolution 3, 116-124.

      · Risely, A., et al. (2021) Diurnal oscillations in gut bacterial load and composition eclipse seasonal and lifetime dynamics in wild meerkats. Nat Commun 12, 6017.

      (6) Lines 135-137: current or past season and social rank? This paragraph introduces the idea that it could be past rather than current socio-environmental factors that might predict microbiota age, so the authors should clarify this sentence.

      We have clarified the information in this sentence. line 135 now reads, “In general, our results support the idea that a baboon’s current socio-environmental conditions, especially their current social rank and the season of sampling, have stronger effects on microbiome age than early life events—many of which occurred many years prior to sampling.”

      (7) Lines 136-137: this sentence could include some kind of a conclusion of this finding. What might this mean?

      We have added a sentence at line 138, which speculates that, “…the dynamism of the gut microbiome may often overwhelm and erase early life effects on gut microbiome age.”

      (8) Use 'microbiota' or 'microbiome' across the manuscript; currently, the terms are used interchangeably. I don't have a strong opinion on this, although typically 'microbiota' is used when data comes from 16S rRNA.

      We have updated the text to replace any instance of “microbiota” with “microbiome”. We use the term microbiome in the sense of this definition from the National Human Genome Research Institute, which defines a microbiome as “the community of microorganisms (such as fungi, bacteria and viruses) that exists in a particular environment”.

      (9) Figure 1 legend: make sure to unify formatting; e.g., present sample sizes as N= or n=, rather than both, and either include or do not include commas in 4-digit values (sample sizes).

      We have checked the formatting related to sample sizes and the use of commas in 4-digits in the main text and supplement. The formats are now consistent.

      (10) Line 166: relative abundances surely?

      Following Gloor et al. (2017), our analyses use centered log-ratio (CLR) transformations of read counts, which is the recommended approach for compositional data such as 16S rRNA amplicon read counts. CLR transformations are scale-invariant, so the same ratio is obtained in a sample with few read versus many reads. We now cite Gloor et al. (2017) at line 169 and in the methods in line 517, which reads “centered log ratio (CLR) transformed abundances (i.e., read counts) of each microbial phyla (n=30), family (n=290), genus (n=747), and amplicon sequence variance (ASV) detected in >25% of samples (n=358). CLR transformations are a recommended approach for addressing the compositional nature of 16S rRNA amplicon read count data (Gloor et al. 2017).”  

      (11) Lines 167-172: were technical factors, e.g., read depth or sequencing batch, included as random effects?

      Thank you for catching this oversight in the text. We did model sequencing depth and batch effects. The sentence starting at line 173 now reads, “For each of these 1,440 features, we tested its association with host age by running linear mixed effects models that included linear and quadratic effects of host age and four other fixed effects: sequencing depth, the season of sample collection (wet or dry), the average maximum temperature for the month prior to sample collection, and the total rainfall in the month prior to sample collection (Grieneisen et al. 2021; Björk et al. 2022; Tung et al. 2015). Baboon identity, social group membership, hydrological year of sampling, and sequencing plate (as a batch effect) were modeled as random effects.”

      (12) Lines 175-180: When discussing how these alpha diversity results relate to previous findings, the authors should be clear about whether they talk about weighted or non-weighted measures of alpha diversity. - also maybe this should be included in the discussion rather than the results? Please consider this when revisiting the manuscript (see how it reads after edits).

      Richness is the only unweighted metric, which we now clarify in line 181. We opted to retain the interpretation in the text in its original location to maintain the emphasis in the discussion on the microbiome clock results.

      (13) Table S1 is very hard to interpret in the provided PDF format as columns are not presented side-by-side. It is currently hard to check model output for e.g., specific families. This needs to be revisited.

      We agree. We believe that eLife’s submission portal automatically generates a PDF for any supplementary item. However, we also include the supplementary tables as an Excel workbook which has the columns presented side-by-side.

      (14) Line 184: taxa meaning what? Unclear what authors refer to with this sentence, taxa across taxonomic levels, or ASVs, or what does the 51.6% refer to?

      We have edited line 191 to clarify that this sentence refers to taxa at all taxonomic levels (phyla to ASVs).

      (15) Line 191: a punctuation mark missing after ref (81).

      We have added the missing period at the end of this sentence.

      (16) Lines 189-197: this should go into the discussion in my opinion.

      We have opted to retain this interpretation, now at line 183.

      (17) Lines 215-219: Not sure what this means; do the authors mean features were not restricted to age-associated taxa, ie also e.g., diversity and other taxa-independent patterns were included? If so, the rest of the highlighted lines should be revisited to make this clear, currently to me it is very unclear what 'These could include features that are not strongly age-correlated in isolation' means. Currently, that sounds like some features included were only age-associated in combination with other features, but unclear how this relates to taxa-dependency/taxa-independency.

      We agree this was not clear. We have revised line 224 to read, “We included all 9,575 microbiome features in our age predictions, as opposed to just those that were statistically significantly associated with age because removing these non-significant features could exclude features that contribute to age prediction via interactions with other taxa.”

      (18) Line 403-407: There is now a paper showing epigenetic clocks can be built with faecal samples, so this argument is not valid. Please revisit in light of this publication: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/epdf/10.1111/mec.17330

      Thank you for bringing this paper to our attention. We deleted the text that describes epigenetic clocks as invasive, and we now cite this paper in line 450, which reads, “We also hope to measure epigenetic age in fecal samples, leveraging methods developed in Hanski et al. 2024.”

      (19) Line 427: a punctuation mark/semicolon missing before However.

      We have corrected this typo.

      (20) Lines 419-428: I don't quite understand this speculation. Why would the priority of access to food lead to an old-looking gut microbiome? This paragraph needs stronger arguments, currently unclear and also not super convincing.

      We agree this was confusing. We have revised this text to clarify the explanation. The text starting at line 424 now reads, “This outcome points towards a shared driver of high social status in shaping gut microbiome age in both males and females. While it is difficult to identify a plausible shared driver, one benefit shared by both high-ranking males and females is priority of access to food. This access may result in fewer foraging disruptions and a higher quality, more stable diet. At the same time, prior research in Amboseli suggests that as animals age, their diets become more canalized and less variable (Grieneisen et al. 2021). Hence aging and priority of access to food might both be associated with dietary stability and old-for-age microbiomes. However, this explanation is speculative and more work is needed to understand the relationship between rank and microbiome age.”

      (21) Line 434: remove 'be'.

      We have corrected this typo.

      (22) Line 478: add information on how samples were collected; e.g., were samples collected from the ground? How was cross-contamination with soil microbiota minimised? Were samples taken from the inner part of depositions? These factors can influence microbiota samples quite drastically so detailed info is needed. Also what does homogenisation mean in this context? How soon were samples freeze-dried after sample collection?

      We have expanded our methods with respect to sample collection. This text starts in line 483 and reads, “Samples were collected from the ground within 15 minutes of defecation. For each sample, approximately 20 g of feces was collected into a paper cup, homogenized by stirring with a wooden tongue depressor, and a 5 g aliquot of the homogenized sample was transferred to a tube containing 95% ethanol. While a small amount of soil was typically present on the outside of the fecal sample, mammalian feces contains 1000 times the number of microbial cells in a typical soil sample (Sender, Fuchs, and Milo 2016; Raynaud and Nunan 2014), which overwhelms the signal of soil bacteria in our analyses (Grieneisen et al. 2021). Samples were transported from the field in Amboseli to a lab in Nairobi, freeze-dried, and then sifted to remove plant matter prior to long term storage at -80°C.”

      (23) Line 480 onwards: were negative controls included in extraction batches? Were samples randomised into extraction batches?

      Yes, we included extraction blanks. These are now described in lines 495-500. This text reads, “We included one extraction blank per batch, which had significantly lower DNA concentrations than sample wells (t-test; t=-50, p < 2.2x10-16; Grieneisen et al. 2021). We also included technical replicates, which were the same fecal sample sequenced across multiple extraction and library preparation batches. Technical replicates from different batches clustered with each other rather than with their batch, indicating that true biological differences between samples are larger than batch effects.”

      (24) Were extraction, library prep, and sequencing negative controls included? Is data available?

      We included extraction blanks (described above) and technical replicates, which were the same sample sequenced across multiple extraction and library preparation batches. Technical replicates from different batches clustered with each other rather than with their batch, indicating that true biological differences between samples are larger than batch effects.

      We have updated the data availability statement to read, “All data for these analyses are available on Dryad at https://doi.org/10.5061/dryad.b2rbnzspv. The 16S rRNA gene sequencing data are deposited on EBI-ENA (project ERP119849) and Qiita (study 12949). Code is available at the following GitHub repository: https://github.com/maunadasari/Dasari_etal-GutMicrobiomeAge”.

      (25) Line 562: how were corrected microbiome delta ages calculated? Currently, the authors state x, y and z factors were corrected for, but it is unclear how this was done.

      The paragraph starting at line 577 describes how microbiome delta age was calculated. We have made only a few changes to this text because we were not sure which aspects of these methods confused the reviewer. However, briefly, we calculated sample-specific microbiome Dage in years as the difference between a sample’s microbial age estimate, age<sub>m</sub> from the microbiome clock, and the host’s chronological age in years at the time of sample collection, age<sub>c</sub>. Higher microbiome Dages indicate old-for-age microbiomes, as age<sub>m</sub> > age<sub>c</sub>, and lower values (which are often negative) indicate a young-for-age microbiome, where age<sub>c</sub> > age<sub>m</sub> (see Figure 3).

      (26) Line 579: typo 'as'.

      We have corrected this typo.

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    1. 鲁宾认为“魅惑圈/外围界限”模型反映了社会中存在的“性等级制 (Sexual Hierarchy)”

      性等级制(Sexual Hierarchy)性压迫(Sexual Oppression)是相互关联的概念,涉及社会如何通过性别、性取向、性行为和性表达来构建不平等的权力结构。以下是对这两个概念的详细解释,特别是在鲁宾的理论框架下。

      1. 性等级制(Sexual Hierarchy)

      性等级制是社会将不同的性行为、性身份和性表达按不同的价值等级进行排列的一种社会结构。这个结构通常表现为一种金字塔式的权力结构,其中某些性行为和身份被视为“正常”、优越或高价值的,而另一些则被视为“异常”、低价值或劣势的。性等级制不仅仅是对性行为的评价,也涉及社会对不同群体性身份的认可或排斥。

      鲁宾的“魅惑圈/外围界限”模型

      • 魅惑圈(The Charmed Circle):鲁宾(Gayle Rubin)提出的“魅惑圈”概念描述了社会中被视为“规范”“正当”的性行为、性身份和性表达。位于“魅惑圈”内部的性行为或身份被看作是社会接受的、理想的、被奖励和支持的。例如,异性恋、婚姻关系中的性行为、性别角色分明等通常被视为魅惑圈的核心。
      • 外围界限(The Outer Limits):与“魅惑圈”内部的行为和身份相对的是“外围界限”,这代表了那些社会认定为“不正常”“边缘化”的性行为和身份。例如,同性恋、双性恋、跨性别者性工作者非传统的性实践(如BDSM)等往往被推到“外围界限”之外,遭受歧视、压迫和排斥。

      通过这一模型,鲁宾揭示了性行为和性身份的社会结构。位于魅惑圈中心的性行为和身份享有特权和资源,而位于外围界限的性行为和身份则遭遇社会的不容忍、法律制约和文化排斥。

      2. 性压迫(Sexual Oppression)

      性压迫是指社会通过多种手段(如性别规范、法律、制度、文化)对特定群体的性行为、性身份和性表达进行限制、控制和惩罚,从而维护社会中的不平等权力结构。性压迫往往与性等级制紧密相关,性等级制通过规范和分类不同的性行为和身份,确立了社会对某些性行为或身份的认可对其他行为或身份的压制

      性压迫的关键在于它通过对“外围界限”外部群体的压制来维持现有的社会权力结构。例如: - 法律:许多国家的法律曾经(或仍然)禁止同性恋行为、跨性别者的性别表达等,作为对这些群体的压迫。 - 文化:文化中存在对非传统性行为的污名化(例如,性工作、BDSM等行为常被污名化为“异端”或“病态”)。 - 社会规范:社会对婚姻、家庭等传统性别角色的强化,迫使个体遵循规范,反之则面临排斥和羞辱。

      性压迫不仅仅体现在性行为上,还体现在性别角色的强制性规定上。传统的性别角色期待男性表现出“强势”、“理性”和“领导力”,而女性则被期望表现为“温柔”、“顺从”和“关怀”。这些角色的强制性施加了对个体身份的约束,并且通常导致女性、性少数群体和其他不符合传统规范的个体遭遇压迫。

      3. 性等级制与性压迫的关系

      性等级制和性压迫之间有着密切的关系。性等级制实际上是性压迫的一种重要机制,它通过在社会中构建一个基于性行为和身份的金字塔式结构来实现压迫。

      • 性等级制作为性压迫的基础:性等级制通过将“正常”性行为和身份置于“顶端”来支持性压迫。这意味着,处于外围界限的性行为和性身份不断被边缘化和压迫。例如,性少数群体如同性恋者、双性恋者和跨性别者常常被社会视为“偏离正常”的存在,从而遭遇暴力、歧视和排斥。
      • 性压迫的维护:性压迫通过社会、法律和文化的机制维持性等级制。传统社会规范通常会通过家庭、学校、工作场所等机构强化性别和性行为的规范,从而确保性等级制的延续。这种压迫不仅限于性行为本身,还涉及对性别角色、性别表达和性身份的控制。

      4. 性压迫与其他形式的社会压迫的交织

      鲁宾强调,性压迫并不是孤立存在的,它与其他形式的社会压迫(如种族压迫、阶级压迫、性别压迫等)是交织在一起的。交叉性(Intersectionality)理论揭示了这些不同形式的压迫如何互相作用并共同塑造个体的社会地位和经验。

      例如: - 一名黑人女性可能同时面临性别压迫(作为女性)和种族压迫(作为黑人),她的性别和种族身份交织在一起,形成了独特的性压迫经验。 - 同样,一名同性恋男性可能面临因性取向而产生的压迫,但如果他是某个低收入阶层的人,那么阶级压迫和性压迫也会交织在一起,进一步加剧他的社会边缘化。

      5. 总结

      • 性等级制(Sexual Hierarchy) 是社会通过性行为、性身份和性表达的不同价值等级来构建的权力结构,某些性行为和性身份被视为优越或正常,而其他则被视为低级或不正常。
      • 性压迫(Sexual Oppression) 是社会通过文化、法律和制度对这些被边缘化的性行为、身份和表达进行限制和控制,从而维护性等级制和社会权力结构的稳定。
      • 性等级制是性压迫的一个关键机制,它通过将特定性行为和身份置于“魅惑圈”内部或外围界限之外,强化了对不同群体的压迫。
      • 交叉性强调了性压迫与其他形式的社会压迫如何相互交织,共同影响个体的社会地位和生活经验。
    1. Joint Public Review:

      This paper examines the role of MLCK (myosin light chain kinase) and MLCP (myosin light chain phosphatase) in axon regeneration. Using loss-of-function approaches based on small molecule inhibitors and siRNA knockdown, the authors explore axon regeneration in cell culture and in animal models from central and peripheral nervous systems. Their evidence shows that MLCK activity facilitates axon extension/regeneration, while MLCP prevents it. Additionally, they show that when the MLCK/MLCP pathway is experimentally intervened, F-actin is redistributed in the growth cone.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript presents a wide range of experimental models to address its hypothesis and biological question. Notably, the use of multiple in vivo models significantly enhances the overall validity of the study.

      What follows is a discussion of the merits and limitations of different claims of the manuscript in light of the evidence presented.

      (1) The authors combine MLCK inhibitors with Bleb (Figure 6), trying to verify if both pairs of inhibitors act on the same target/pathway. MLCK may regulate axon growth independent of NMII activity. However, this has very important implications for the understanding not only on how NMII works and affects axon extension but also in trying to understand what MLCP is doing. One wonders if MLCP actions, which are opposite of MLCK, also independent of NMII activity? The authors try to address this controversial issue in the discussion section. The reviewers consider that it is still an open question, and acknowledge that it would require a significant amount of experimental work to solve the issue, that goes well beyond the main goal of the present study.

      (2) Using western blot and immunohistochemical analyses, authors first show that MLCK expression is increased in DRG sensory neurons following peripheral axotomy, concomitant to an increase in MLC phosphorylation, suggesting a causal effect (Figure 1). The authors claim that it is common that axon growth-promoting genes are upregulated. It would have been interesting at<br /> this point to study in this scenario the regulation of MLCP.

      (3) Using DRG cultures and sciatic nerve crush in the context of MLCK inhibition (ML-7) and down-regulation, authors conclude that MLCK activity is required for mammalian peripheral axon regeneration both in vitro and in vivo (Figure 2). In parallel, the authors show that these treatments affect, as expected, the phosphorylation levels of MLC.

      (4) The authors then examined the role of the phosphatase MLCP in axon growth during regeneration. The authors first use a known MLCP blocker, phorbol 12,13-dibutyrate (PDBu), to show that is able to increase the levels of p-MLC, with a concomitant increase in the extent of axon regrowth of DRG neurons, both in permissive as well as non-permissive substrates. The authors repeat the experiments using the knockdown of MYPT1, a key component of the MLC-phosphatase, and again can observe a growth-promoting effect (Figure 3).

      (5) In the next set of experiments (presented in Figure 4) authors extend the previous observations in primary cultures from the CNS. For that, they use cortical and hippocampal cultures, and pharmacological and genetic loss-of-function using the above-mentioned strategies. The expected results were obtained in both CNS neurons: inhibition or knockdown of the kinase decreases axon growth, whereas inhibition or knockdown of the phosphatase increases growth. A main weakness in this set is that drugs were used from the beginning of the experiment, and hence, they would also affect axon specification. As pointed out in Materials and Method (lines 143-145) authors counted as "axons" neurites longer than twice the diameter of the cell soma, and hence would not affect the variable measured. In any case, to be sure one is only affecting axon extension in these cells, the drugs should have been used after axon specification and maturation, which occurs at least after 3 DIV. Taking this into account, the conclusions with this experimental design are limited.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper examines the role of MLCK (myosin light chain kinase) and MLCP (myosin light chain phosphatase) in axon regeneration. Using loss-of-function approaches based on small molecule inhibitors and siRNA knockdown, the authors explore axon regeneration in cell culture and in animal models from central and peripheral nervous systems. Their evidence shows that MLCK activity facilitates axon extension/regeneration, while MLCP prevents it.

      Major concerns:

      (1) In the title, authors indicate that the observed effects from loss-of-function of MLCK/MLCP take place via F-actin redistribution in the growth cone. However, there are no experiments showing a causal effect between changes in axon growth mediated by MLCK/MLCP and F-actin redistribution.

      Thank you for your comments. We revised the title of our manuscript to “MLCK/MLCP regulates mammalian axon regeneration and redistributes the growth cone F-actin”. (line 3)

      (2) The author combines MLCK inhibitors with Bleb (Figure 6), trying to verify if both pairs of inhibitors act on the same target/pathway. MLCK may regulate axon growth independent of NMII activity. However, this has very important implications for the understanding not only on how NMII works and affects axon extension, but also in trying to understand what MLCP is doing. One wonders if MLCP actions, which are opposite of MLCK, also independent of NMII activity? The authors, in the discussion section, try to find an explanation for this finding, but I consider it fails since the whole rationale of the manuscript is still around how MLCK and MLCP affect NMII phosphorylation.

      Thank you for your comments. Although both MLCK and MLCP regulate the activity of NMII, it has been reported that they also govern domain-specific spatial control of actin-based motility in the growth cone. Specifically, MLCK activity is essential for arc translocation and retrograde flow within the P domain, while MLCP appears to specifically modulate arc movement and associated myosin II contractility in the T zone and C domain (Ref). Therefore, it is proposed that the regulatory mechanisms of MLCK and MLCP are highly complex during the process of axon growth. 

      [Ref]:Xiao-Feng Zhang, Andrew W Schaefer, Dylan T Burnette, Vincent T Schoonderwoert, Paul Forscher. Rho-dependent contractile responses in the neuronal growth cone are independent of classical peripheral retrograde actin flow. Neuron. 2003 Dec 4;40(5):931-44.

      What follows is a discussion of the merits and limitations of different claims of the manuscript in light of the evidence presented.

      (1) Using western blot and immunohistochemical analyses, authors first show that MLCK expression is increased in DRG sensory neurons following peripheral axotomy, concomitant to an increase in MLC phosphorylation, suggesting a causal effect (Figure 1). The authors claim that it is common that axon growth-promoting genes are upregulated. It would have been interesting at this point to study in this scenario the regulation of MLCP.

      We thank Reviewer for the positive comment on our manuscript.

      (2) Using DRG cultures and sciatic nerve crush in the context of MLCK inhibition (ML-7) and down-regulation, authors conclude that MLCK activity is required for mammalian peripheral axon regeneration both in vitro and in vivo (Figure 2). In parallel, the authors show that these treatments affect as expected the phosphorylation levels of MLC.

      The in vitro evidence is of standard methods and convincing. However, here, as well as in all other experiments using siRNAs, no Control siRNAs were used. Authors do show that the target protein is downregulated, and they can follow transfected cells with GFP. Still, it should be noted that the standard control for these experiments has not been done.

      Thank you for your comments. We utilized scrambled siRNA as a control. I sincerely apologize for the oversight in the manuscript; although we mentioned that scrambled siRNA was used as a control in the figure legends, we failed to clearly articulate this important information in the methods section. We have revised the manuscript accordingly. (line 87, line 549, line, line 562, line 568).

      (3) The authors then examined the role of the phosphatase MLCP in axon growth during regeneration. The authors first use a known MLCP blocker, phorbol 12,13-dibutyrate (PDBu), to show that is able to increase the levels of p-MLC, with a concomitant increase in the extent of axon regrowth of DRG neurons, both in permissive as well as non-permissive substrates. The authors repeat the experiments using the knockdown of MYPT1, a key component of the MLC-phosphatase, and again can observe a growth-promoting effect (Figure 3).

      The authors further show evidence for the growth-enhancing effect in vivo, in nerve crush experiments. The evidence in vivo deserves more evidence and experimental details (see comment 2). A key weakness of the data was mentioned previously: no control siARN was used.

      Thank you for your comments. As mentioned above, we used scramble siRNA as control in vivo experiment as well.

      (4) In the next set of experiments (presented in Figure 4) authors extend the previous observations in primary cultures from the CNS. For that, they use cortical and hippocampal cultures, and pharmacological and genetic loss-of-function using the above-mentioned strategies. The expected results were obtained in both CNS neurons: inhibition or knockdown of the kinase decreases axon growth, whereas inhibition or knockdown of the phosphatase increases growth. A main weakness in this set is that drugs were used from the beginning of the experiment, and hence, they would also affect axon specification. As pointed in Materials and Method (lines 143-145) authors counted as "axons" neurites longer than twice the diameter of the cell soma, and hence would not affect the variable measured. In any case, to be sure one is only affecting axon extension in these cells, the drugs should have been used after axon specification and maturation, which occurs at least after 5 DIV.

      Thank you for your comments. We acknowledge that the early administration of drugs can lead to unintended effects on neuronal polarization and axon formation. However, in line with our previous publication, we focused exclusively on measuring the longest length of the axon. To quantify axon length, we selected neurons exhibiting an axonal process exceeding twice the diameter of their cell body and measured the longest axon from 100 neurons for each condition (Ref 1, Ref 2). Consequently, we believe that drug administration at the onset of cell culture influences axon formation; however, it does not significantly affect the drug's impact on axon length.

      [Ref 1]: Chang-Mei Liu, Rui-Ying Wang, Saijilafu, Zhong-Xian Jiao, Bo-Yin Zhang, Feng-Quan Zhou. MicroRNA-138 and SIRT1 form a mutual negative feedback loop to regulate mammalian axon regeneration. Genes Dev. 2013 Jul 1;27(13):1473-83.

      [Ref 2]: Eun-Mi Hur, Saijilafu, Byoung Dae Lee, Seong-Jin Kim, Wen-Lin Xu, Feng-Quan Zhou. GSK3 controls axon growth via CLASP-mediated regulation of growth cone microtubules. Genes Dev. 2011 Sep 15;25(18):1968-81.

      (5) In Figure 7, the authors a local cytoskeletal action of the drug, but the evidence provided does not differentiate between a localized action of the drugs and a localized cell activity.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comments and have revised our title to “MLCK/MLCP Regulates mammalian axon regeneration and redistributes growth cone F-actin.” Furthermore, we have made corresponding revisions to the manuscript (line31, line 73).

      References:

      (1) Eun-Mi Hur 1, In Hong Yang, Deok-Ho Kim, Justin Byun, Saijilafu, Wen-Lin Xu, Philip R Nicovich, Raymond Cheong, Andre Levchenko, Nitish Thakor, Feng-Quan Zhou. 2011. Engineering neuronal growth cones to promote axon regeneration over inhibitory molecules. Proc Natl Acad Sci U S A. 2011 Mar 22;108(12):5057-62. doi: 10.1073/pnas.1011258108.

      (2) Garrido-Casado M, Asensio-Juárez G, Talayero VC, Vicente-Manzanares M. 2024. Engines of change: Nonmuscle myosin II in mechanobiology. Curr Opin Cell Biol. 2024 Apr;87:102344. doi: 10.1016/j.ceb.2024.102344.

      (3) Karen A Newell-Litwa 1, Rick Horwitz 2, Marcelo L Lamers. 2015. Non-muscle myosin II in disease: mechanisms and therapeutic opportunities. Dis Model Mech. 2015 Dec;8(12):1495-515. doi: 10.1242/dmm.022103.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Saijilafu et al. demonstrate that MLCK/MLCP proteins promote axonal regeneration in both the central nervous system (CNS) and peripheral nervous system (PNS) using primary cultures of adult DRG neurons, hippocampal and cortical neurons, as well as in vivo experiments involving sciatic nerve injury, spinal cord injury, and optic nerve crush. The authors show that axon regrowth is possible across different contexts through genetic and pharmacological manipulation of these proteins. Additionally, they propose that MLCK/MLCP may regulate F-actin reorganization in the growth cone, which is significant as it suggests a novel strategy for promoting axonal regeneration.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript presents a wide range of experimental models to address its hypothesis and biological question. Notably, the use of multiple in vivo models significantly enhances the overall validity of the study.

      We thank Reviewer for the positive comment on our manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      - The authors previously published that blocking myosin II activity stimulates axonal growth and that MLCK activates myosin II. The present work shows that inhibiting MLCK blocks axonal regeneration while blocking MLCP (the protein that dephosphorylates myosin II) produces the opposite effect. Although this contradiction is discussed, no new evidence has been added to the manuscript to clarify this mechanism or address the remaining questions. Critical unresolved questions include: what happens to myosin II expression when both MLCK and MLCP are inhibited? If MLCK/MLCP are acting through an independent mechanism, what would that mechanism be?

      - In the discussion, the authors mention the existence of two myosin II isoforms with opposing effects on axonal growth. Still, there is no evidence in the manuscript to support this point.

      - It is also unclear how MLCK/MLCP acts on the actin cytoskeleton. The authors suggest that proteins such as ADF/cofilin, Arp 2/3, Eps8, Profilin, Myosin II, and Myosin V could regulate changes in F-actin dynamics. However, this study provides no experimental evidence to determine which proteins may be involved in the mechanism.

      Thank you for your comments. Axon growth is an exceptionally intricate process, facilitated by the coordinated regulation of gene expression in the soma, axonal transport along the shaft, and the assembly of cytoskeletal elements and membrane proteins at the growth cone. In this paper, our results primarily demonstrate that MLCK/MLCP plays a crucial role in regulating mammalian axon regeneration and redistributing F-actin within the growth cone; however, we did not investigate which specific proteins act downstream of MLCK/MLCP during axon regeneration.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      - A title more suitable for the evidence shown can be: MLCK/MLCP regulates mammalian axon regeneration and redistributes the growth cone F-actin.

      Thank you for your comments. We revised the title of our manuscript to“MLCK/MLCP regulates mammalian axon regeneration and redistributes the growth cone F-actin” (line 3).

      -In figure 3, It would be useful to indicate in the figure legend, that the red arrow is pointing to a suture that was performed during surgery to mark clearly the injury site.

      Thank you for your comments. We revised Figure 3 legend that indicates the red arrow is pointing to a suture that was performed during surgery to mark clearly the injury site (line 571-572).

      - The following is a concern raised in the previous round, and that the response by the authors was so complete and accurate that I consider it would be useful to include it in the discussion section.

      Thank you for your comments. We included those contents in the discussion section of our revised manuscript (line 348-354, line 355-359).

      The author combines MLCK inhibitors with Bleb (Figure 6), trying to verify if both pairs of inhibitors act on the same target/pathway. The rationale is wrong for at least two reasons.

      a- Because both lines of evidence point to contrasting actions of NMII on axon growth, one approach could never "rescue" the other.

      Reply by authors in R1:If MLCK regulates axon growth through the activation of Myosin, the inhibitory effect of ML-7 (an MLCK inhibitor) on axon growth might be influenced by Bleb, a NMII inhibitor. However, our findings reveal that the combination of Bleb and ML-7 does not alter the rate of axon outgrowth compared to ML-7 alone. This suggests that the roles of ML-7 and Bleb in axon growth are independent. It means MLCK may regulate axon growth independent of NMII activity.

      b- Because the approaches target different steps on NMII activation, one could never "prevent" or rescue the other. For example, for Bleb to provide a phenotype, it should find any p-MLC, because it is only that form of MLC that is capable of inhibiting its ATPase site. In light of this, it is not surprising that Bleb is unable to exert any action in a situation where there is no p-MLC (ML-7, which by inhibiting the kinase drives the levels of p-MLC to zero, Figure 4A). Hence, the results are not possible to validate in the current general interpretation of the authors. (See 'major concern').

      Reply by authors in R1: The reported mechanism of blebbistatin is not through competition with the ATP binding site of myosin. Instead, it selectively binds to the ATPase intermediate state associated with ADP and inorganic phosphate, which decelerates the phosphate release. Importantly, blebbistatin does not impede myosin's interaction with actin or the ATP-triggered disassociation of actomyosin. It rather inhibits the myosin head when it forms a product complex with a reduced affinity for actin. This indicates that blebbistatin functions by stabilizing a particular myosin intermediate state that is independent of the phosphorylation status of myosin light chain (MLC).

      [Ref] Kovács M, Tóth J et al. Mechanism of blebbistatin inhibition of myosin II. J Biol Chem. 2004 Aug 20;279(34):35557-63.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Desveaux et al. performed Elisa and translocation assays to identify among 34 cystic fibrosis patients which ones produced antibodies against P. aeruginosa type three secretion system (T3SS). The authors were especially interested in antibodies against PcrV and PcsF, two key components of the T3SS. The authors leveraged their binding assays and flow cytometry to isolate individual B cells from the two most promising sera, and then obtained monoclonal antibodies for the proteins of interest. Among the tested monoclonal antibodies, P3D6 and P5B3 emerged as the best candidates due to their inhibitory effect on the ExoS-Bla translocation marker (with 24% and 94% inhibition, respectively). The authors then showed that P5B3 binds to the five most common variants of PcrV, while P3D6 seems to recognize only one variant. Furthermore, the authors showed that P3D6 inhibits translocon formation, measured as cell death of J774 macrophages. To get insights into the P3D6-PcrV interaction, the authors defined the crystal structure of the P3D6-PcrV complex. Finally, the authors compared their new antibodies with two previous ones (i.e., MEDI3902 and 30-B8).

      Strengths:

      (1) The article is well written.

      (2) The authors used complementary assays to evaluate the protective effect of candidate monoclonal antibodies.

      (3) The authors offered crystal structure with insights into the P3D6 antibody-T3SS interaction (e.g., interactions with monomer vs pentamers).

      (4) The authors put their results in context by comparing their antibodies with respect to previous ones.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors used a similar workflow to the one previously reported in Simonis et al. 2023 (antibodies from cystic fibrosis patients that included B cell isolation, antibody-PcrV interaction modeling, etc.) but the authors do not clearly explain how their work and findings differentiate from previous work.

      (2) Although new antibodies against P. aerugisona T3SS expand the potential space of antibody-based therapies, it is unclear if P3D6 or P5B3 are better than previous antibodies. In fact, in the discussion section authors suggested that the 30-B8 antibody seems to be the most effective of the tested antibodies.

      (3) The authors should explain better which of the two antibodies they have discovered would be better suited for follow-up studies. It is confusing that the authors focused the last sections of the manuscript on P3D6 despite P3D6 having a much lower ExoS-Bla inhibition effect than P5B3 and the limitation in the PcrV variant that P3D6 seems to recognize. A better description of this comparison and the criteria to select among candidate antibodies would help readers identify the main messages of the paper.

      (4) This work could strongly benefit from two additional experiments:<br /> a) In vivo experiments: experiments in animal models could offer a more comprehensive picture of the potential of the identified monoclonal antibodies. Additionally, this could help to answer a naïve question: why do the patients that have the antibodies still have chronic P. aeruginosa infections?<br /> b) Multi-antibody T3SS assays (i.e., a combination of two or more monoclonal antibodies evaluated with the same assays used for characterization of single ones). This could explore the synergistic effects of combinatorial therapies that could address some of the limitations of individual antibodies.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors examined the function of CLIP in exercise-mediate inhibition of osteoarthritis using an ACL transection rat model. The authors rely on rigorous experimental design and methods to demonstrate that CLIP is downregulated in osteoarthritic cartilage tissue and that CLIP expression can be rescued by moderate treadmill exercise. They further show that activation of Nrf2 signaling occurs through CLIP inhibition of Keap1-Nrf2. The results are novel as they suggest a new role for CLIP in OA pathogenesis. The following points need to be addressed in order to bring additional clarity to this work.

      Strengths:

      This is an interesting study that addresses an important global health issue. The significance is high and the work is novel and mechanistic.

      Weaknesses:

      A major concern is that a direct link between exercise and CLIP-mediated inhibition of ferroptosis via Keap1-Nrf2 pathway is not supported by the provided data. The ferroptosis studies were performed in vitro, whereas the effect of exercise was demonstrated in an OA animal model. Therefore, the data suggest a potential correlation between CLIP-Keap1-Nrf2 and exercise. This must be described as a limitation in the discussion section. Consequently, the title of the manuscript needs to better reflect the interpretation of these data.

      Figure 1: Radiomics data are not described in the text. OARSI scoring of damaged and undamaged sections is not presented in the figure.

      Figure 2: Data presentation is very dense in this figure. It is recommended that Figure 2 be split into two figures. Also, the histology and IHC images in Figure 2A are of poor resolution. These data do not sufficiently demonstrate early OA pathology. Clearer images to substantiate the authors' statement need to be provided.

      Figure 3: The superficial zone appears to be misrepresented; it should include only the top 2-3 layers of flat chondrocyte cells.

      Figure 4: This Figure should be listed as supplementary data. CTS is not spelled out in the legend. Also, a rationale for using low, medium, and high CTS needs to be provided.

      Figure 5: Please describe positive and negative controls. Please elaborate on the findings of the yeast hybrid experiment in the results. Please expand KD-02 experimental condition in the legend and results.

      Figure 6: Please move Figure S2 into the main Figures and describe the results in section 2.9 which describes ferroptosis.

      In the results section, it is recommended that the authors describe all panels of the figures appropriately in sequential order. The authors are advised to provide publication-quality figures and, in some cases, to split figure panels into new figures as well as to ensure that the fonts and data are legible. Finally, the use of non-conventional abbreviations (such as G3 for passage-3 chondrocytes, CG for the control condition, and OE for overexpression) may confuse the readership, and describing each abbreviation when used for the first time is required.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Recent studies indicate a beneficial role for moderate-intensity exercise in early osteoarthritis (OA). This manuscript by Jia et al. investigates the role of cartilage intermediate layer protein (CILP) and moderate exercise in maintaining hyaline cartilage integrity following anterior cruciate ligament transection (ACLt) in rats. Single-cell RNA-sequencing of OA and OA+ exercise knee joints from rats at 4 weeks post-ACLt revealed the upregulation of CILP and a higher Col2/Col1 ratio in OA knee chondrocytes from ACLt rats that exercised on a treadmill. CILP was downregulated in the damaged portions, compared to healthy regions of knee cartilage of patients undergoing total knee arthroplasty. In the rat ACLt model, CILP is downregulated in the OA cartilage but not in OA + exercise cartilage. Using CLIP1 over-expression and knockdown in passage 3 cultures of primary rat chondrocytes, the authors demonstrate that the loss of CILP is associated with higher ROS, lipid peroxidation, and iron content in chondrocytes whereas its overexpression is protective against these changes. CILP binds to Keap1, and its overexpression disrupts Keap1/Nrf2 interaction and attenuates Nrf2 ubiquitination. The authors conclude that exercise protects the articular cartilage intermediate zone and the associated upregulation of CILP facilitates Keap1-Nrf2 interaction to prevent chondrocyte ferroptosis and hyaline cartilage fibrosis.

      Strengths:

      The study is interesting, and the experiments are conducted well. The methodology is well-described. The data presented strongly support the downregulation of CILP in human OA cartilage and its potential role in regulating Keap1/Nrf2 interaction and chondrocyte ferroptosis.

      Weaknesses:

      The data do not support a role for CILP in exercise-mediated inhibition of hyaline cartilage fibrosis in early OA. The reason for selecting CILP from the ScRNA-seq for further analysis is not clear. The manuscript is put together sloppily. The abstract, introduction, and results were written confusingly, and hard to follow. Some of the figures were confusing as well. Still, the study is interesting.

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      Reviewer #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In this manuscript, the authors highlight the importance of the Golgi apparatus during SARS-CoV-2 infection. Specifically, using different compounds able to alter Golgi structure and function, the authors show a strong reduction in SARS-CoV-2 infection rate. In particular it is interesting to observe that treatments of 24 hrs with BFA strongly impair viral infection, highlithing the importance of Golgi function for this virus. Albeit the time of treatment is different. this observation is in contrast with previous studies on related coronaviruses (Ghosh et al., 2020) that did not observe any effect upon treatment with BFA. This might imply that SARS-CoV-2 relies more on conventional trafficking pathways respect to other coronaviruses which, under certain conditions, favour different trafficking routes.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments. Indeed, our results with BFA treatment for 24 hours are inconsistent with previous studies based on the prototype coronavirus MHV (Ghosh et al., 2020). To validate this observation, we have now performed new experiments with BFA treatment for 4, 6, and 8 hours, matching the time points used in the previous study (Ghosh et al, 2020). Our new results show that BFA treatment at these early time points significantly inhibits SARS-CoV-2 assembly and secretion, as measured by immunoblotting and TCID50 assays, without reducing intracellular viral RNA levels, which serve as a marker of genome replication. This implies that Golgi function and an intact ER-to-Golgi trafficking route are required for SARS-CoV-2 assembly and secretion. These new results are now presented as new Fig. 2C-H.

      The authors additionally observed that viral infection increases TGN46 levels while decreasing GRASP55 levels. To dissect the role of TGN46 and GRASPR55, the authors performed several infection studies in cells in which the levels of the two proteins were modulated either by overexpression (GRASP55) and/or siRNA-mediated knock-down (GRASP55 and TGN46). Those approaches suggest that GRASPR55 overexpression, a protein essential for Golgi stack formation, decelerates viral trafficking and inhibits viral assembly while its depletion reverses the effects. On the other hand, TGN46 knock-down impairs viral trafficking but not assembly. Overall the study clearly shows the importance of the Golgi during SARS-CoV-2 and also shows that modulation of those two factors affect viral infection.

      We appreciate the reviewer's accurate summary of our work and positive comments.

      However the claims that specifically the trafficking (TGN46) and trafficking and assembly (GRASP55) are not fully substantiated. Regarding GRASP55, the authors state that viral infection decreases GRASPR55 levels and this results in Golgi fragmentation. However GRASPR55 levels decrease is shown at 24 hrs post infection while Golgi fragmentation occurs as early as 5 hrs. Thus there might be no direct casual effect between the two effects.

      We agree with the reviewer that GRASP55 downregulation is unlikely to be the only reason for Golgi fragmentation in the infected cells. In our results, 5- or 8-hour post infection caused only mild Golgi fragmentation (Fig. S6D), while 24 hours post infection led to severe Golgi fragmentation. On the other hand, GRASP55 is likely to play a relevant role as SARS-CoV-2 induced Golgi fragmentation can be partially rescued by exogenous GRASP55 expression (Fig S6C). We have modified the text in lines 303-305 accordingly to acknowledge the possibility that other factors also contribute to Golgi fragmentation in infected cells.

      Additionally, the authors show that overexpression of GRASP55 rescue Golgi fragmentation, as observed by imaging, however is not clear if only infected cells where quantified and if they had the same level of infection.

      Yes, only infected cells with either GFP or GRASP55-GFP expression were quantified. The viral infection rate was significantly lower in GRASP55-GFP expressing cells compared to GFP expressing cells (Fig 5A-B).

      The authors exclude and effect on entry based on experiment on Spike expressing pseudovirus in 293-ACE2, however they also clearly observe reduction of ACE2 on the membrane of GRASPR55 expressing cells (Fig S6B). Thus how can they explain this discrepancy and how ca defect in entry can be fully marked out in these cell lines?

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. This discrepancy is likely due to the different systems used in the two experiments.

      In the pseudovirus entry assay, ACE2 was exogenously expressed in 293T cells and GRASP55 expression did not show any effect on the viral entry efficiency. In contrast, Huh7-ACE2 cells were selected for a high surface expression of ACE2. While GRASP55 expression reduces surface ACE2 levels as shown in our cell surface biotinylation assay, we believe that the surface ACE2 levels in GRASP55-expressing cells remain sufficient to support viral entry. To further investigate whether GRASP55 expression affects viral entry using authentic SARS-CoV-2, we performed RT-qPCR analysis of intracellular RNA level of the spike, N, and RdRp in both GFP and GRASP55-GFP expressing cells 4 hours post infection (new Fig 5D). Our results show that GRASP55 expression does not affect SARS-CoV-2 entry efficiency, even though it reduces ACE2 surface expression levels.

      It is not clear to which process the authors refer to when they write about "viral trafficking". Is it virion trafficking or viral proteins trafficking? The two process are linked but are not the same. This oversemplification can be misleading. For instance the authors show that overexpression of GRASP55 decreases Spike protein on the plasma membrane and its depletion increases S protein incorporation into psudoviruses. However it was shown that in infected cells S protein is mainly retained at the ERGIC by M and E (Boson et al., 2021) where viral assembly occurs. Thus an increase in S trafficking on the PM does not correlate with an increase in virion trafficking,

      We agree with the reviewer that our use of the term "viral trafficking" is imprecise and we have changed this throughout the manuscript to be more specific. S trafficking to the PM may not necessarily be equal to an increase in virion trafficking and thus have rephrased these terms in our writing accordingly.

      We acknowledge that our cell surface biotinylation assay results only demonstrate that GRASP55 overexpression slows down spike protein trafficking to the PM. We have accordingly also examined viral protein and infectious particle secretion into the culture medium as a more direct readout of virion trafficking (new Fig 2E, 2H, 6K, and 7P).

      Finally, we have removed all of the data describing spike incorporation into pseudoviruses as we acknowledge that plasma membrane assembly of lentiviruses is not a good model for SARS-CoV-2 assembly.

      ...and ultimately, the data provided do not fully support the authors claim on a modulation of "virion trafficking" in response to GRASP or TGN46 changes, since no experiments clearly show a change in virions secretion.

      In response to the above comment, we provide the following clarification: Our Western blotting, TCID50 assay, and plaque assay results collectively demonstrate that SARS-CoV-2 virion secretion is reduced in GRASP55 expressing cells (new Fig 5E-M) and in TGN46-depleted cells (new Fig 7F-H, 7L-N). Conversely, viral assembly and secretion appear to be increased in GRASP55-depleted cells (new Fig 6A, 6E-I) at 24 hpi. Furthermore, within a single viral secretion cycle (10 hpi), GRASP55 depletion increased viral secretion (new Fig 6K), while TGN46 depletion reduced viral secretion (new Fig 7P). These findings strongly support the conclusion that GRASP55 and TGN46 modulate viral secretion.

      Importantly, the authors do not rule out potential effects of their perturbations on genome replication. The only experiment that they perform in this direction is presented in Fig. S7B, where the authors show similar percentage of infected cells at early stage upon silecing of GRASPR55. The experiment suggests that productive entry is similar in these conditions, but quantification of intracellular viral genome could exclude a change in viral replication. If no changes in viral replication are observed, the authors could verify an increase in particles secretion by collecting supernatants from the early time points and performing plaque assays and quantification of viral genomes by qRT-PCR, to prove that modulation of GRASPR55 indeed promote SARS-CoV-2 trafficking.

      We thank the reviewer for the excellent suggestions. In response, we performed RT-qPCR analysis in GRASP55-expressing and TGN46-depleted cells at 4 hpi to compare the viral genome replication process. Additionally, we performed western blotting analysis and released viral titer assay of the culture media from both GRASP55-depleted and TGN46-depleted cells at 10 hpi to investigate virion release. Our new results show that GRASP55 depletion increases viral secretion (new Fig. 6K), while TGN46 depletion reduces viral secretion (new Fig. 7P). Furthermore, GRASP55 expression and TGN46 depletion do not perturb viral genome replication (new Fig. 5D and new Fig. 7R).

      Finally, whenever reduction of viral infection is observed upon cell partubation, a robust analysis of cell viability should be presented to exclude pleiotropic effects. Expecially in presence of multiple pertubation that might affect cell metabolism. The authors should carefully control cell viability and growth in response to depletion of TGN46 and GRASP55.

      We thank the reviewer for the excellent suggestions, which were also pointed out by reviewer #3. To address this, we performed the LDH cytotoxicity assay under SARS-CoV-2 infection conditions with TGN46 depletion and GRASP55 depletion/expression (new Fig. 5C, 6L, 7Q). Our new results show that no significant cell death was induced by TGN46 depletion, GRASP55 depletion/expression, or other perturbations.

      Minor: show data on viability of the drug and add the relative section in Material and Methods.

      We performed LDH assays of SARS-CoV-2 infected Huh7-ACE2 cells treated with 9 small molecules, and LDH release levels were similar across all treatments (new Fig. S3C). Additionally, a CellTiter Glo viability assay of 293T-ACE2 cells did not show any significant effect of cell viability with small molecule treatment (new Fig S3F). Detailed descriptions of these assays have been included in the Material and Methods section.

      Figure 3A: should read spike and not nucleocapsid eported for SARS-CoV-2

      Fig. 3A labeling is correct - cells were labeled with antibodies for GRASP65 (rabbit) and for nucleocapsid (mouse).

      Lack of inhibition with camostat correlates with lack of TMPRSS2 in the Huh7. The sentence seems to be too general while in this case the effect is clearly cell specific. Similarly, the importance of the lysosome in viral entry is restricted to cells lacking TMPRSS2 and cannot be generalized since CQ, for example, does not work in Calu-3 cells that express TMPRSS2 cells.

      We agree with the reviewer and have added one sentence: The relative smaller effect of camostat mesylate observed here, compared to previous studies (Hoffmann et al, 2021), might be due to the use of different cell lines across studies in lines 182-184. We also discussed the discrepancy of CQ treatment between our Huh7-ACE2 cells and Calu-3 cells (Hoffmann et al, 2020) in lines 466-473.

      Typo: Fig S3B - Y axis should reat viral not vrial

      Thank you - we have corrected this.

      S3C: concentrations of the compound used in the assay should be reported. Was a viability assay performed also in the 293T-ACE2 cell line?

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion. We have added the concentration information to the legend in Fig. S3E "Cell entry assay of 293T or 293T-ACE2 cells by SARS-CoV-2 Spike pseudotyped lentivirus for 24h in the presence of indicated molecules at the same concentrations as in Fig. 2A." Additionally, we performed a CellTiter Glo assay to assess the viability of 293T-ACE2 cells treated with the 9 molecules. The results demonstrate that treatment with these 9 molecules does not alter cell viability (Fig. S3F).

      Significance

      Overall, the major strenght of the manuscript is that it has clarified the importance of the Golgi during SARS-CoV-2 infection. The drugs screening demonstrate that for SARS-CoV-2 the conventional secretion seems to have major role respect to other secretory routes observed for other coronaviruses. Also it is clear that the two factors identified by the authors have a role in viral infection, however the major limitation is that the authors failed to clearly highlight which step/s of the viral life cycle are modulated upon GRASP55 and TGN46 perturbatio. Expecially the claims on "trafficking" is not fully substantiated, since the only experiment in this direction is the transport of Spike protein on the plasma membrane upon GRASPR55 overexpression. It is risky to conclude that the trafficking of a single protein reflect the intracellular trafficking of the virions.

      Several of the finding presented in the first part of the manuscript have been already previously reported (for example the fragmentation of the Golgi upon SARS-CoV-2 infection), however the role of GRASP55 and TGN46 in SARS-CoV-2 infection has been reported here for the first time. This manuscript can be of interest for a broad audience considering the topic (cell biology, host-pathogen interactions and molecular virology)

      My expertise reside in the field of molecular virology, expecially in the contest of the mechanisms of viral replication and host-pathogen interactions.

      We thank the reviewer for the overall positive comments and excellent suggestions. We hope that our new results have convincingly demonstrated that viral trafficking is regulated by GRASP55 and TGN46.

      Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Summary: In this study, Zhang and colleagues address the impact on SARS-CoV-2 infection on the morphology of the Golgi apparatus and convincingly demonstrate a fragmentation of this organelle in infected cells. Conversely, they show that the modulation of TGN46 or GRASP55 expressions, two components of this organelle impact SARS_CoV-2 replication. By monitoring the relative levels of viral Spike and nucleocapsid in the cell supernatants, they conclude that GRASP55 regulates particle assembly and trafficking while TGN46 controls only secretion. The study was generally well performed, and the quality of the microscopy and western blot data is good. It was appreciated that all the phenotypes were robustly quantified. I believe that this study is potentially interesting and relevant for the SARS-CoV-2 community since providing an extensive characterization of the interplay between SARS-CoV-2 and the Golgi apparatus.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments.

      However, as described below, I have some concerns regarding the interpretations of some of the key conclusions. Moreover, the fact that it was already described by several groups that Golgi is a key machinery used for SARS-CoV-2 virion assembly (ERGIC) and secretion dampens my enthusiasm about the study, especially without clear molecular mechanisms about the interplay between SARS-CoV-2 proteins and TNG46/GRASP55.

      We rephrased some sentences following the reviewer's suggestions. Although it was believed that SARS-CoV-2 is assembled at the ERGIC, there has been significant controversy surrounding the virion secretion pathway. Our results strongly support that SARS-CoV-2 virions traffic through the Golgi apparatus and that an intact ER-to-Golgi trafficking pathway is essential for SARS-CoV-2 assembly and secretion. Manipulation of two Golgi-resident proteins, GRASP55 and TGN46, significantly regulates SARS-CoV-2 secretion. Interestingly, GRASP55 regulates both assembly and secretion of SARS-CoV-2, while TGN46 exclusively modulates viral secretion. This is consistent with their subcellular localization, as GRASP55 is localized to the medial/trans Golgi, whereas TGN46 is localized to the TGN. We hope that our new experimental results (Figs. 2C-H, 5C-D, 6J-L, and 7O-R) have addressed all concerns from the reviewer. Identification of downstream protein targets involved in TGN46/GRASP55-mediated modulation of SARS-CoV-2 trafficking will be the focus of our future studies.

      Major comments: -All the assays have been performed in liver-derived Huh7 cells (overexpressing SARS-CoV-2 receptor) ACE2 (for infection) or kidney 293 cells (for pseudotyped HIV entry assays). However, no conclusion was validated in lung-derived cells (like A549-ACE2, Calu-3 or primary cells), which would be important since the respiratory tract is the main target of SARS-CoV-2

      In our study, Huh7-ACE2 cells are sorted for the high expression of endogenous ACE2 protein, and we did not overexpress ACE2 protein. Also, the liver has been reported to be a site of SARS-CoV-2 infection in humans (Barnes, 2022). We did use A549 and Calu-3 cells in pilot experiments; A549 cells displayed infection rates that were too low for our purposes, and Calu-3 cells showed both low infection rates and relatively disorganized Golgi in the absence of viral infection. We were able to add new IF results from Calu-3 cells. Consistent with our findings in Huh7-ACE2 cells, SARS-CoV-2 infection disrupts Golgi structure and alters protein levels of TGN46 and GRASP55 in Calu3 cells (new Fig. S5R-W). We also confirmed GRASP55 downregulation and TGN46 upregulation in VeroE6 cells (Fig S5K-N).

      -Fig2: The impact of the drugs on replication was assessed by measuring the % of infected cells. At 24 hpi, I am unsure about what this value is supposed to measure (the whole life cyle, intracellular replication or spread?), especially since it is not indicated when the drugs were added to the cells. Was it during, before or after the infection? This information should be provided.

      Fig. 2 refers to infection, not replication. We agree that infection encompasses multiple steps of the viral cycle. In our experiments, cells were treated with the drugs immediately before viral infection. We have added the information into the Fig. 2 legend.

      If the "Golgi" drugs impact egress only (as inferred by the genetic modulation phenotypes), I would expect that at this early time point, the % of infection would not drastically change (as well as intracellular RNA) but that the extracellular infectious titers would decrease. Plaque assays (or TCID50 assays) and RT-qPCR on intracellular viral RNA should be conducted to better understand the impact of drug treatments.

      This is a great suggestion! As the reviewer expected, our new BFA time-point assay shows that at early time points, the intracellular RNA levels for S, N and RdRp are not reduced. However, the extracellular N protein (measured by WB) and virial titer (measured by TCID50 assay), which serve as readouts for virion secretion, are significantly decreased (new Fig. 2C-H).

      On page 10, it is said that the virus makes three cycles of replication within 24 hours following infection. On what data is this based? This seems a lot. If this is true (and shown in Huh7-ACE2 cells), does the assay of figure 2 measure spread in general? More importantly, despite mentioned, the cell viability data are not provided. It is important to show them to ensure that these concentrations of drugs are not toxic at the tested concentrations.

      It has been reported that a single cycle of SARS-CoV-2 infection is approximately 8 hours (Eymieux et al, 2021). Therefore, Fig. 2 represents a multicycle infection, reflecting a composite measure of viral infection and spread. Under the microscope, we did not observe dramatic cell death at the tested concentration. To further assess cytotoxicity, we performed a cell toxicity assay for the 9 small molecules that inhibit viral infection of Huh7-ACE2 cells. The results show that no or minor cell death was observed with all these compounds (Fig. S3C).

      -I appreciated the extensive confocal microscopy analysis performed by the authors, which seems of high quality and overall, very convincing. They clearly show that SARS-CoV-2 infection induces the fragmentation of the Golgi apparatus although it was reported by others before as mentioned by the authors.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments. We agree that Golgi fragmentation was observed during SARS-CoV-2 infection, as we mentioned. However, our study provides a comprehensive and systematic analysis of the entire host cell endomembrane system in the response to viral infection.

      However, it was hard for me to make the functional link between these data and those related to GRASP55 and TGN46 overexpression/knockdown. First, the authors should assess the morphology of the Golgi apparatus in Huh7-ACE2 when GRASP55 is knocked down/out or when TGN46 is overexpressed. Second, in these 2 conditions that favor replication, it should be assessed whether this correlates with Golgi fragmentation. Even if this was probably shown before, it is relevant to show that these genetic modulations induce Golgi reshaping in this particular cell type by confocal microscopy (and ideally electron microscopy).

      Thank you for the suggestion. We performed IF analysis to assess Golgi morphology in Huh7-ACE2 cells under conditions of GRASP55 knockdown or TGN46 overexpression. Our results show that GRASP55 depletion disrupts Golgi structure (Fig. S7D), whereas TGN46 expression does not significantly alter the Golgi morphology (Fig. S8D).

      -The fact that GRASP55-GFP expression decreases in 293T the cell surface levels of ACE2, the receptor of Spike (Fig S6), raises concern that the effect of GRASP55 is not specific to the virus and suggests that the whole secretory pathway is altered, while an impairment of virus entry should be expected in this cell line. Is there a similar trend in Huh7-ACE2?

      Reviewer 1 raised a similar question regarding viral entry efficiency. Fig. S6B, performed in Huh7-ACE2 cells, shows that GRASP55-GFP expression also decreases ACE2 surface level in these cells. To further assess whether GRASP55 expression affects viral entry, we performed RT-qPCR analysis of viral RNA at early time points of infection. We found that authentic SARS-CoV-2 entry efficiency was not altered by GRASP55 expression (new Fig. 5D). Although GRASP55 overexpression does alter the secretory pathway, we want to point out that SARS-CoV-2 infection downregulates endogenous GRASP55 expression. We have used GRASP55 overexpression as a probe to assess the effects of GRASP55 on the secretory pathway and on SARS-CoV-2 virion trafficking, but this does not actually reflect what is observed in SARS-CoV-2 infection.

      In addition to addressing the functionality of the secretory machinery in Huh7-ACE2, it would be relevant to repeat the cell surface labelling in the context of pseudotyped virus production with other viral envelopes such as VSV G protein or HIV gp41/gp120. If the phenotype is specific to Spike trafficking, the cell surface abundance of these alternative viral proteins should not be impacted by GRASP55 overexpression. Otherwise, this would indicate a general effect of on the secretory pathway. Besides, since HIV Gag is directed directly to the plasma membrane during particle assembly without entering the secretory pathway, I am not convinced that upstream alteration on nucleocapsid assembly at the ERGIC should be excluded. Indeed, changes on the S/N ratios are generally mild and I feel that this cannot explain the phenotypes in the extracellular infectious titers.

      We have removed the original figure because we acknowledge that HIV Gag is directed directly to the plasma membrane, which is different from the trafficking of SARS-CoV-2 spike protein. We appreciate the reviewer's recognition of the difference in extracellular infectious titers between GFP and G55-GFP expressing cells. We hypothesize that GRASP55 expression not only reduces the number of spikes on each virion but also inhibits the secretion of SARS-CoV-2, resulting in a significantly lower extracellular infectious titer. We agree that it would be interesting to test whether GRASP55 expression affects viral production with other viral envelopes. However, this is beyond the scope of the current study and represents a promising direction for future research.

      More generally, the comparison between trafficking and assembly should be better assessed and not simply based on extracellular N and S levels. It was hard to see the differences between the two in terms of phenotypes. The authors should at least measure the intracellular infectivity upon TGN46 and GRASP55 knock/down and overexpression as well as intracellular vRNA abundance as a readout of RNA replication (which is anticipated to remain unchanged).

      We thank the reviewer for the valuable suggestions. We performed RT-qPCR analysis of Spike, N, and RdRp at early time points of infection. The new results show that neither GRASP55 expression (new Fig. 5D) nor TGN46 depletion (new Fig. 7R) affects viral RNA abundance at an early infection timepoint (4 hpi). Also, we found that GRASP55 depletion increased intracellular infectivity (new Fig. 6J) while TGN46 depletion did not affect intracellular infectivity (new Fig. 7O), suggesting that GRASP55 modulates viral assembly but TGN46 does not.

      -Finally, mechanistic insight about the viral determinants regulating the morphology of the Golgi would significantly strengthen the study.

      Fig S6 shows that S expression decreases ACE2 surface levels? If so, could some S mutants be tested? Does it correlate with Golgi fragmentation? Do other viral structural proteins contribute to Golgi morphological alterations?

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestions. These are indeed interesting experiments, but we believe that investigating viral determinants of Golgi fragmentation should be pursued by future studies.

      In the same line of idea, how GRASP55 and TGN46 regulate replication. The link with Golgi morphology is unclear. Are these proteins hijacked by SARS-COV-2?

      Our new data in this revised manuscript more clearly define the stages in the viral infection cycle that are modulated by GRASP55 and TGN46. New Fig. 5D and Fig. 7R show that neither GRASP55 nor TGN46 affects viral entry or early viral replication. However, GRASP55 perturbation modulates viral assembly and secretion, while TGN46 perturbation affects virion secretion but not assembly. Fig. S6C shows that GRASP55 overexpression in the presence of the virus partially rescues Golgi fragmentation. The mechanisms by which GRASP55 and TGN46 are hijacked by SARS-CoV-2 will be explored in the future studies.

      Page 13 mentions some relevant mutants that could be assessed in this context and provide mechanistic insights.

      It would be interesting to investigate the effects of GRASP55 mutants or specific domains on SARS-CoV-2 trafficking, which we plan to explore in future studies.

      Minor comments: -The signal of calreticulin in Fig. S1 is too low to appreciate it distribution.

      We have increased the intensity of calreticulin staining for both uninfected and infected cells in parallel in Fig. S1. Thank you.

      -Fig 4K, Q: The differences in LC3 forms levels are not convincing. These results do not allow to draw any conclusion about autophagy, especially considering that this was done at steady-state and that the autophagic flux was not measured. Indeed, a bafilomycin A treatment control would be required to measure the real induction of autophagosomes. Lysosomal degradation inhibition allows the detection of LC3 accumulation.

      We agree that additional experiments are needed to demonstrate autophagic flux alteration by SARS-CoV-2. We observed an increase in LC3II/LC3I ratio in infected cells at steady state and did not explore this further, since this is not our main focus of this study. Therefore, we have removed the LC3 blots and quantification from Figs. 4 and S5.

      -In the GRASP55 overexpression and TGN46 knockdown studies, associated cell viability should be measured to control that that these genetic manipulations do not induce any cytotoxicity which may impact viral replication.

      We appreciate the reviewer's suggestions. We performed the LDH cytotoxicity assay under SARS-CoV-2 infection with TGN46 depletion or GRASP55 expression. Our new results show that TGN46 depletion or GRASP55 depletion/expression did not induce significant cell death (Figs. 5C, 6L, and 7Q).

      -The authors should test the impact of GRASP55 and GRASP65 knock-out on SARS-CoV-2 replication

      Investigating the genetic GRASP55 knockout effect on SARS-CoV-2 replication would be valuable. However, ACE2 protein expression in our Huh7-ACE2 cells decreases with cell passages, making knockout construction on this background impractical due to low ACE2 levels and poor viral infection rates. We believe that both our GRASP55 overexpression and depletion assays sufficiently support its role in SARS-CoV-2 trafficking. Future studies will explore GRASP55 knockout in different cell lines.

      -The authors should provide more details about the USA-WA1/2020 isolate in the Methods section. Is it related to the "Wuhan" strain or the variant which spread globally in early 2020 (with D614G mutation in Spike).

      USA-WA1/2020 was isolated from an oropharyngeal swab from a patient who returned from China and developed COVID-19 on January 19, 2020, in Washington, USA. It is related to the "Wuhan" strain but does not have D614G mutation in spike. Additional details have been added to the Methods section.

      -Fig 8: The combined modulation of GRASP55 and TGN46 expressions does not really seem additive to me since a 70% decrease of either protein modulation is observed while the combined condition brings this value to 75% in TCID50 assays. This does not bring much insight to the study in my opinion. I would suggest that the authors consider removing this figure.

      We agree with the reviewer's recommendation and have removed Fig. 8.

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      General assessment and advance: The study was generally well performed, and the quality of the microscopy and western blot data is good. It was appreciated that all the phenotypes were quantified extensively. However, I have some concerns regarding the interpretations of some of the key conclusions. Moreover, the fact that it was already described by several groups that Golgi is a key machinery for SARS-CoV-2 virion assembly (ERGIC) and secretion dampens my enthusiasm about the study. In addition, the antiviral activity of several tested drugs was also reported elsewhere. A clear mechanism of how SARS-CoV-2 induces a fragmentation of the Golgi would strengthen the study. In the same line of idea, it is unclear how TGN46 and GRASP55 regulate the late steps of the life cycle. The link between SARS-CoV-2-induced Golgi fragmentation and TGN46/GRASP55 is unclear. In my opinion, the data did not allow to clearly discriminate between virion assembly and egress. I was not convinced that it was not simply due to a general disruption of the secretory pathway (as attested by ACE2 down regulation upon GRASP55 overexpression).

      Targeted audience: This study will be of high interest for molecular virologists (not only working on SARS-CoV-2) but could be very well fit into the scope of molecular/cell biology-focused generalist journals

      Reviewer expertise: Molecular virology, virus-host interactions (especially involving membranous organelles), SARS-CoV-2, RNA viruses

      Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Summary:

      Zhang et al. demonstrated in this study that the Golgi apparatus and many other organelles are disturbed by SARS-CoV-2 infection. They focused on the Golgi apparatus and especially on TGN46 and GRASP55 which are both affected differently in their level of expression by the SARS-CoV-2 infection. TGN46 is overexpressed while GRASP55 is decreased in expression. Through different methods overexpression or depletion, the authors nicely demonstrated that modulation of both proteins either increased or decreased particles production. They demonstrated that in absence of GRASP55, SARS-CoV-2 release is increased in the medium. On the contrary, depletion of TGN46 decreases the secretion of SARS-CoV-2 particles.

      We thank the reviewer for the accurate summary of our work.

      Major comments:

      Figure 1: The authors demonstrated that SARS-CoV-2 expression affected the morphology of multiple organelles. Although the results are clear, my concern was that the MOI=1 was really high which indeed would affect the whole cell. To have a less drastic effect on the cell, I would suggest realizing the visualization of some organelles (Golgi, EEA1, Rab7 for example) at a lower MOI=0.1. In addition, it would be nice to verify with a live-dead assay with the MOI=1 if after 24h the cells are still alive, which will confirm that these disturbances are not caused by cells in process of dying.

      We thank the reviewer for the excellent suggestions. Investigating how SARS-CoV-2 reshapes subcellular organelles at low MOI (e.g., 0.1) and at different time points would be interesting but is beyond the scope of our study. However, we have performed LDH assay at MOI=1, 2 and 3 for 24 hours to assess cell death. Our results show that LDH release was similar across these conditions (Fig. S5R). We also performed RT-qPCR analysis of Spike, N, and RdRp at early time points of infection. The new results show that neither GRASP55 expression (new Fig. 5D) nor TGN46 expression (Fig. 7R) affects viral RNA abundance at an early infection timepoint (4 hpi).

      Figure 2: The results indicated in that panel are really nice. However, the addition of a virus with drugs could increase the proportion of cell death. For the Figure 2C, I propose that the author use a LDH assay to prove that the decrease in infection is not caused by cell death. In addition, a RT-qPCR would be more appropriate to indicate the infection rate and support the microscopy data.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive feedback and suggestions. As recommended, we performed an LDH assay to assess cytotoxicity under 9 small molecules treatment of infected cells. Additionally, we performed RT-qPCR analysis for the BFA time-point treatment assay. No significant cell death was observed under these conditions (new Figs. 2D, and S3C).

      Figure 3: The authors should have been consistent and add spike instead of nucleocapsid for GalT. According to the figures, Spike seemed to co-localize more with GM130 than Golgin 245. Data analysis of colocalization between Spike and GM130 should be performed to complete the observation. Are no colocalizations of Spike observed with the other Golgi markers?

      We agree with the reviewer that it was ideal if spike and GalT were co-stained. Unfortunately, both our spike antibody and GalT antibody are from rabbit, so co-staining could not be done as GM130/spike. We performed colocalization analysis between Spike and GM130, and the results show that GRASP55 expression did enhance Spike and GM130 colocalization to some extent (new Fig. S6E-F). We only co-stained spike with GM130 and Golgin-245 due to the antibody availability.

      Figure 4K: While all the experiments were performed at MOI=1, why is the authors using MOI=2 for the immunoblots. Did they have a different result in protein expression for MOI=1 in HuH cells? if so they should show a blot indicating this result.

      We did not perform WB to assess protein expression at MOI=1, but our cell toxicity assay showed that there is no significant difference between MOI=2 and MOI=1.

      Figure 5: Viral infection should be indicated using RT-qPCR data analysis to support the microscopy observations.

      We performed RT-qPCR analysis (new Figs. 2F, 5D, and 7R) and found that BFA treatment did not reduce viral RNA levels at all three time points. Also, GRASP55 expression and TGN46 depletion did not inhibit viral genome RNA levels within one viral infection cycle. Additionally, our new TCID50 assay results support our microscope observation (new Fig. 7O-P). Thanks for the suggestion.

      Figure 6: The authors should look at the trafficking of ACE2 and TfR in case of GRASP55 depletion like they did in case of GRASP55 overexpression. It could demonstrate if the virus is using trafficking pathways that are common to the one used by some host receptors to reach the plasma membrane.

      Thanks for the excellent suggestion. We performed cell surface biotinylation assay of control and GRASP55-depleted cells. We found that ACE2 and TfR receptor displayed a similar reduction on the cell surface (Fig. S7C), consistent with previous findings that GRASP55 depletion induced Golgi fragmentation and accelerated global conventional protein secretion.

      Figure 7: Viral infection assay should also be performed by RT-qPCR. Figure 7H: The immunoblots conditions were performed at MOI=3 this time. The authors should indicate why they did not keep the same MOI conditions. In that case, they should use an intracellular marker for their medium experiment to prove that they isolated proteins that are secreted and not simply released from dead cells. I will also suggest to show LDH assay at MOI=2 and 3 to monitor cell death. Is the Golgi fragmented when GRASP 55 is overexpressed in presence of the virus? Microscopy observations should be performed to reply to this question as it will support their model. The authors suggest that GRASP55 overexpression decreases spike incorporation inside the virion. Can they observe if Spike still colocalizes with GM130 when GRASP55 is overexpressed?

      We showed that TGN46 depletion inhibits viral infection by both IF and WB. We further confirmed this through TCID50 assay for both cells and media (new Fig. 7O-P), strengthening our hypothesis.

      As we described above, we performed morphological analysis at MOI=1 so that we could observe a significant number of infected cells but minimize cell toxicity. We performed immunoblotting (in Fig. 7H) at MOI=3 to get a good viral infection rate.

      As suggested, we also performed LDH assay at MOI=2 and 3 to monitor cell death (new Fig. S2O). Fig. S6C shows that GRASP55 overexpression in the presence of the virus partially rescues Golgi fragmentation. GRASP55 expression did also enhance Spike and GM130 colocalization to some extent (new Fig. S6E-F).

      Minor comments:

      Figure 1P in the text: Considering that Rab7 up-regulation is equal to "growth of late endosome" is an overstatement. Rab7 is cytosolic at its inactive state and at the endosome at its active state. The authors would have to prove this statement by monitoring an increased quantity of Rab7 at the endosomes which is not enough by just monitoring protein intensity by microscopy. As Rab7 is also localized in lysosomes, and the authors used Lamp2 as a lysosomal marker, it is strange that the area of these structures is not increased. The authors should replace the term "growth" by "an increase in the area of their vesicles".

      We did observe less but larger LAMP2 puncta in the infected cells. We agree with the reviewer and rephrased "growth" by an increase in the area of their vesicles". Thank you for the excellent suggestions.

      Figure 1Q-T: The observations described in the text did not match the quantification, the area of lysosomes is not significantly different from the non-infected conditions.

      In Fig. 1Q-T, we did observe fewer but larger LAMP2 puncta in the infected cells, which was consistent with our quantification, i.e., fewer puncta (Fig. 1R), but each punctum was larger (Fig. 1S), and total area was similar.

      Figure 8: In the text, it is mentioned that there is "a dramatic reduction of spike and N in the lysate in GRASP55-expressing and TGN46 depleted cells". However, the quantification indicated that the decrease in N and S content is non-significant. Can the authors precise what was the sample of comparison in the text (siControl versus siTGN46 or siTGN46+GFP versus siTGN46+GFP-GRASP55)?

      The decrease in N and S content is significant with the lysate sample comparison (siControl versus siTGN46; siControl+GFP versus siTGN46+GFP; siTGN46+GFP versus siTGN46+GFP-GRASP55). We have now removed this Figure following Reviewer #2's suggestion, since the results are consistent with single protein manipulation and more experiments are needed to confirm whether there is an additive effect.

      **Referee cross-commenting**

      I agree with most of the concerns of the other reviewers. I do also consider that they should have done their study on cells expressing naturally ACE2. However, at this stage, it will be a lot of work to perform all of their study in a more relevant cell type. The authors should repeat some of their key experiments in lung-derived cell types, to determine if GRASP55 and TGN46 have the same effect on SARS-CoV-2 virion secretion/production.

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestions and understanding. As we mentioned before, our study utilizes Huh7-ACE2 cells, which are sorted for the high expression of endogenous ACE2 protein, without ACE2 overexpression. Actually, we also tested A549 and Calu-3 cells. While A549 cells displayed very low infection rate, Calu-3 cells displayed disorganized Golgi without viral infection. However, we did perform immunofluorescence assays in Calu-3 cells. Consistent with our findings in Huh7-ACE2 cells, SARS-CoV-2 infection disrupts Golgi structure and alters protein levels of TGN46 and GRASP55 in Calu3 cells (new Fig. S5R-W). Also, others have reported that liver can be a target for SARS-CoV-2 infection in humans. Furthermore, we confirmed GRASP55 downregulation and TGN46 upregulation in VeroE6 cells (Fig. S6K-N).

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      The study identified two Golgi proteins (TGN46 and GRASP55) that are involved in modulating the release of SARS-CoV-2 particles from the cells. As these proteins are also acting on general secretion of host proteins to the plasma membrane, the effect on SARS-CoV-2 release could just be indirect. However, it does not change the informative points of the study raised by Zhang et al. It highlights really well how the host trafficking pathway could be diverted for the purpose of the virus, which is to produce particles to maintain its survival.

      Strengths: The authors performed a precise and well quantified study. Observing how SARS-CoV-2 impacts host organelles morphology and uses host trafficking proteins to produce particles, brings more clarity on some unclear parts of the life cycle of the virus. In addition, it exposes new targets for therapeutic studies.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments.

      Weakness: The paper is mostly based on microscopy analysis and need some other methods to support their data. The paper lacks some molecular mechanisms explaining the clear role of GRASP55 and TGN46 in particle production or assembly.

      In the revised version, we incorporated RT-qPCR assay, cell cytotoxicity assay, and BFA time-point treatment assay. Notably, we added intracellular and extracellular viral titer assays to more precisely distinguish between effects on virion assembly and virion secretion. We also confirmed the key observation that SARS-CoV-2 infection modulates GRASP55 and TGN46 expression in the Calu-3 lung cell line. Additionally, our early time-point results clearly support the role of GRASP55 and TGN46 in viral trafficking.

      • Audience: The paper will be interesting for basic research for a virology and cell biology audience.
      • Field of expertise with a few keywords: Virology and host cell trafficking.

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    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Liu et al., present an immersion objective adapter design called RIM-Deep, which can be utilized for enhancing axial resolution and reducing spherical aberrations during inverted confocal microscopy of thick cleared tissue.

      Strengths:

      RI mismatches present a significant challenge to deep tissue imaging, and developing a robust immersion method is valuable in preventing losses in resolution. Liu et al., present data showing that RIM-Deep is suitable for tissue cleared with two different clearing techniques, demonstrating the adaptability and versatility of the approach.

      Greetings, we greatly appreciate your feedback. In truth, we have utilized three distinct clearing techniques, including iDISCO, CUBIC, and MACS, to substantiate the adaptability and multifunctionality of the RIM-Deep adapter.

      Weaknesses:

      Liu et al., claim to have developed a useful technique for deep tissue imaging, but in its current form, the paper does not provide sufficient evidence that their technique performs better than existing ones.

      We are in complete agreement with your recommendation, and the additional experiments will conduct a thorough comparison of the efficacy between the RIM-deep adapter and the official adapter in the context of fluorescence bead experiments, along with their performance in cubic and MASC tissue clearing techniques.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Suggestions for improvement:

      Major revisions:

      (1) For the bead experiment, the comparison was made to a 10X dry objective instead of an immersion objective, please make a comparison to the standard immersion objective.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We fully agree with your suggestion to make a comparison with the standard immersion objective. We plan to conduct this comparison in future experiments and will thoroughly analyze the imaging differences between the official adapter and the RIM-deep adapter.

      (2) It is unclear if an accurate comparison of objectives (same NA etc) is being made in Fig 1G-J, since the official adapter image appears to be of lower resolution even at the surface. At the very least, progressive 2D slices of the reconstruction must be shown for both adapters instead of just the RIM-Deep adapter.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We strictly controlled the numerical aperture (NA) of the objectives in Fig 1G-J to ensure the accuracy of the comparison. However, the imaging resolution of the official adapter is consistent with that of the RIM-deep adapter. We agree that showing progressive 2D slices of the reconstruction would provide a more comprehensive comparison of the two adapters.

      (3) Similarly, since there already exists an official adapter, it would be useful to see that RIM-Deep performs better even in the mouse tissue, since the clearing method was different.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We will investigate the imaging performance of the two additional tissue clearing protocols using both the official adapter and the RIM-deep adapter.

      (4) The movies need legends, as it is unclear if they even show 2-D slices very deep into the tissue.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We will add figure legends to each movie.

      (5) The purpose of Supplementary Figure 3 in its current form is unclear, as is the statement in the text related to it : "The effectiveness and utility of this adapter configuration have been substantiated through a comprehensive series of experimental validations".

      Thank you for your suggestion. We will revise the statement to: "We validated the effectiveness and utility of this adapter configuration through a series of experiments."

      (6) The system is variably referred to as RIM-Deep or DepthView Enhancer in the text and figures, it would be beneficial to the readers if the authors stuck to one name.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We will choose RIM-Deep as the sole name.

      Minor revisions

      Figures

      (1) “Confocal" is incorrectly spelled as "confocol" in Figure 1, "media" is misspelled in multiple places.

      Thank you. We will correct these errors.

      (2) The camera is misplaced in the Figure 1 A drawing

      Thank you. We will fix this issue.

      (3) It would be useful to have actual pictures of the immersion objective setup (both RIM-Deep and the pre-existing adapter) since the diagrams are not very clear.

      Thank you. We will include actual pictures of both the RIM-Deep and the pre-existing adapter in the supplementary materials.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study by Popli et al. evaluated the function of Atg14, an autophagy protein, in reproductive function using a conditional knockout mouse model. The authors showed that female mice lacking Atg14 were infertile partly due to defective embryo transport function of the oviduct and faulty uterine receptivity and decidualization using PgrCre/+;Atg14f/f mice. The findings from this work are exciting and novel. The authors demonstrated that a loss of Atg14 led to an excessive pyroptosis in the oviductal epithelial cells that compromises cellular integrity and structure, impeding the transport function of the oviduct. In addition, the authors use both genetic and pharmacological approaches to test the hypothesis. Therefore, the findings from this study are high-impact and likely reproducible. However, there are multiple major concerns that need to be addressed to improve the quality of the work.

      Thank you for the additional data that solidified the conclusion of this study. The authors addressed almost all of my previous concerns in this revised manuscript. However, some key points wording still need to be addressed.

      Comments on revisions:

      In Fig. 2A, please ensure that these are 5.0 dpc samples since implantation has already occurred at this point. However, the embryo appeared free-floating adjacent to the luminal epithelial cells (LE), even in control.

      We understand the reviewer’s concern. We have now replaced the previous H & E image with a clearer, higher-quality section that shows a fully attached embryo within a closed uterine lumen representing a typical implantation morphology at the D5 stage of pregnancy. (Revised Figure 2A)

      Fig. 3A-B: "Approximately 80-90% of blastocysts" contradicts the quantification in Figure 3C, which showed a percentage of blastocysts below 50%. Please clarify and correct as needed.

      In Fig. 3A-B, we mean to say approximately 80-90% embryos. We have now corrected the statement in the revised manuscript (Line no: 349-351).  

      The authors showed that Acetylated a-tubulin was present in the ampulla region of cKO (Fig. 4A). However, the revised manuscript still stated that (lines 397-399) ...there was a substantial loss of the ciliary epithelial cells (indicated by fewer a-tubulin and FOXJ1-positive cells) (Fig. 4B, left panel and Fig. S3)... So, the authors may want to tone down their conclusion regarding a "substantial loss" of ciliated epithelial cells if the quantification of ciliated cell number is not performed.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. To avoid redundancy and ambiguity, we have revised the statement as below (Line no: 391-395):

      “As shown in Fig. 4A, normal ciliary structures were observed in the ampulla of both control and cKO oviducts. However, in the isthmus of cKO oviducts, we observed a reduction in both the FOXJ1- and PAX8-expressing cells (Fig. 4B, and Fig. S3).”

      Fig. 4C - the areas with red inset boxes labeled for isthmus are not really isthmus (in both control and cKO). The zoomed-in images (Fig. 4C - The far-right panel for both control and cKO, images are the transitional zone from the ampulla to the isthmus. The isthmus areas should have a thick muscle layer with almost no ciliated cells - see Fig. 4B cKO - those are true isthmus areas.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this. We have corrected the label accordingly. Since ciliary epithelial cells predominantly reside in the ampulla, we have included high-resolution images specifically for the ampulla regions.

      • Fig. 3A and 3C, it appears that the images were taken at different magnifications, but the scale bars are the same at 200 um. The authors, please double-check the scale bars.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this. We have double-checked all the figures to ensure the scale bars are correctly displayed and aligned with the resolution.

      • Fig. 6D - why polyphillin-treated samples did not sum to 100%? - please double-check.

      Since approximately 50% of the embryos were retained in the oviduct following polyphyllin treatment (Figure 6C, upper bar), the bar in Figure 6D represents this percentage (50% retained) rather than 100%.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review)

      In this manuscript, Popli et al investigated the roles of autophagy-related gene, Atg14, in the female reproductive tract (FRT) using conditional knockout mouse models. By ablation of Atg14 in both oviduct and uterus with PR-Cre (Atg14 cKO), authors discovered that such females are completely infertile. They went on to show that Atg14 cKO females have impaired embryo implantation as well as embryo transport from oviduct to uterus. Further analysis showed that Atg14 cKO leads to increased pyroptosis in oviduct, which disrupts oviduct epithelial integrity and leads to obstructive oviduct lumen and impaired embryo transport. The authors concluded that Atg14 is critical for maintaining the oviduct homeostasis and keeping the inflammation under check to enable proper embryo transport.

      The authors have barely addressed most of my concerns in this revised version with a few minor issues remaining to be addressed:

      (1) The authors tried to address my first concern regarding the statement that "autophagy is critical for maintaining the oviduct homeostasis". The revised statement in Lines 53-54 "we report that Atg14-dependent autophagy plays a crucial role in maintaining..." is still not correct. It should be corrected as " we report that autophagy-related protein Atg14 plays a crucial role in maintaining...".

      We thank the reviewer for this nice suggestion. We have now modified the statement as suggested (Line no: 54).

      (2) Line 349-351 described 80-90% of blastocysts retrieved from oviducts of cKO mice, which is in consistent with Figure 3B (showing more than 98%).

      We thank the reviewer for noting this. We have now corrected the statement as: “Unexpectedly, oviduct flushing from cKO mice resulted in the retrieval of approximately 90% of embryos, suggesting their potential entrapment within the oviducts, impeding their transit to the uterus”. (Line No: 349-351).

      (3) Line 447, "Fig. 5E" should be Fig. 6A. In addition, grammar error in the next sentence.

      We have corrected the figure number and addressed the grammatical error.

      (4) In Figure 6D, why the composition of blastocysts in chemical treated group do not add up to 100%.

      As explained in Reviewer 1 responses, the bar in Figure 6D represents the 50% retained embryos from Figure 6C upper bar the full count.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Pooja Popli and co-authors tested the importance of Atg14 in the female reproductive tract by conditionally deleting Atg14 use PrCre and also Foxj1cre. The authors showed that loss of Atg14 leads to infertility due to the retention of embryos within the oviduct. The authors further concluded that the retention of embryos within the oviduct is due to pyroptosis in oviduct cells leading to defective cellular integrity. The revised manuscript has included new experimental data (Figs. S2B, 5B, 5C, and S3) that satisfied the concerns of this reviewer. The manuscript should provide important advancement to the field.

      We sincerely thank the reviewer for the thoughtful evaluation of our manuscript and appreciate your constructive feedback.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript proposes that primary hepatocytes can replicate their DNA without the six-subunit ORC. This follows previous studies that examined mice that did not express ORC1 in the liver. In this study, the authors suppressed expression of ORC2 or ORC1 plus ORC2 in the liver.

      Comments:

      (1) I find the conclusion of the authors somewhat hard to accept. Biochemically, ORC without the ORC1 or ORC2 subunits cannot load the MCM helicase on DNA. The question arises whether the deletion in the ORC1 and ORC2 genes by Cre is not very tight, allowing some cells to replicate their DNA and allow the liver to develop, or whether the replication of DNA proceeds via non-canonical mechanisms, such as break-induced replication. The increase in the number of polyploid cells in the mice expressing Cre supports the first mechanism, because it is consistent with few cells retaining the capacity to replicate their DNA, at least for some time during development.

      (2) Fig 1H shows that 5 days post infection, there is no visible expression of ORC2 in MEFs with the ORC2 flox allele. However, at 15 days post infection, some ORC2 is visible. The authors suggest that a small number of cells that retained expression of ORC2 were selected over the cells not expressing ORC2. Could a similar scenario also happen in vivo?

      (3) Figs 2E-G show decreased body weight, decreased liver weight and decreased liver to body weight in mice with recombination of the ORC2 flox allele. This means that DNA replication is compromised in the ALB-ORC2f/f mice.

      (4) Figs 2I-K do not report the number of hepatocytes, but the percent of hepatocytes with different nuclear sizes. I suspect that the number of hepatocytes is lower in the ALB-ORC2f/f mice than in the ORC2f/f mice. Can the authors report the actual numbers?

      (5) Figs 3B-G do not report the number of nuclei, but percentages, which are plotted separately for the ORC2-f/f and ALB-ORC2-f/f mice. Can the authors report the actual numbers?

      (6) Fig 5 shows the response of ORC2f/f and ALB-ORC2f/f mice after partial hepatectomy. The percent of EdU+ nuclei in the ORC2-f/f (aka ALB-CRE-/-) mice in Fig 5H seems low. Based on other publications in the field it should be about 20-30%. Why is it so low here? The very low nuclear density in the ALB-ORC2-f/f mice (Fig 5F) and the large nuclei (Fig 5I) could indicate that cells fire too few origins, proceed through S phase very slowly and fail to divide.

      (7) Fig 6F shows that ALB-ORC1f/f-ORC2f/f mice have very severe phenotypes in terms of body weight and liver weight (about on third of wild-type!!). Fig 6H and 6I, the actual numbers should be presented, not percentages. The fact that there are EYFP negative cells, implies that CRE was not expressed in all hepatocytes.

      (8) Comparing the EdU+ cells in Fig 7G versus 5G shows very different number of EdU+ cells in the control animals. This means that one of these images is not representative. The higher fraction of EdU+ cells in the double-knockout could mean that the hepatocytes in the double-knockout take longer to complete DNA replication than the control hepatocytes. The control hepatocytes may have already completed DNA replication, which can explain why the fraction of EdU+ cells is so low in the controls. The authors may need to study mice at earlier time points after partial hepatectomy, i.e. sacrifice the mice at 30-32 hours, instead of 40-52 hours.

      (9) Regarding the calculation of the number of cell divisions during development: the authors assume that all the hepatocytes in the adult liver are derived from hepatoblasts that express Alb. Is it possible to exclude the possibility that pre-hepatoblast cells that do not express Alb give rise to hepatocytes? For example, the cells that give rise to hepatoblasts may proliferate more times than normal giving rise to a higher number of hepatoblasts than in wild-type mice.

      (10) My interpretation of the data is that not all hepatocytes have the ORC1 and ORC2 genes deleted (eg EYFP-negative cells) and that these cells allow some proliferation in the livers of these mice.

      My comments regarding the previous version still stand, since the authors did not perform experiments to address them.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      eLife Assessment

      This descriptive manuscript builds on prior research showing that the elimination of Origin Recognition Complex (ORC) subunits does not halt DNA replication. The authors use various methods to genetically remove one or two ORC subunits from specific tissues and observe continued replication, though it may be incomplete. The replication appears to be primarily endoreduplication, indicating that ORC-independent replication may promote genome reduplication without mitosis. Despite similar findings in previous studies, the paper provides convincing genetic evidence in mice that liver cells can replicate and undergo endoreduplication even with severely depleted ORC levels. While the mechanism behind this ORC-independent replication remains unclear, the study lays the groundwork for future research to explore how cells compensate for the absence of ORC and to develop functional approaches to investigate this process. The reviewers agree that this valuable paper would be strengthened significantly if the authors could delve a bit deeper into the nature of replication initiation, potentially using an origin mapping experiment. Such an exciting contribution would help explain the nature of the proposed new type of Mcm loading, thereby increasing the impact of this study for the field at large.

      We appreciate the reviewers’ suggestion. Till now we know of only one paper that mapped origins of replication in regenerating mouse liver, and that was published two months back in Cell (PMID: 39293447).  We want to adopt this method, but we do not need it to answer the question asked.  We have mapped origins of replication in ORC-deleted cancer cell lines and compared to wild-type cells in Shibata et al., BioRXiv (PMID: 39554186) (it is under review).  We report the following:  Mapping of origins in cancer cell lines that are wild type or engineered to delete three of the subunits, ORC1, ORC2 or ORC5 shows that specific origins are still used and are mostly at the same sites in the genome as in wild type cells. Of the 30,197 origins in wild type cells (with ORC), only 2,466 (8%) are not used in any of the three ORC deleted cells and 18,319 (60%) are common between the four cell types. Despite the lack of ORC, excess MCM2-7 is still loaded at comparable rates in G1 phase to license reserve origins and is also repeatedly loaded in the same S phase to permit re-replication. 

      Citation: Specific origin selection and excess functional MCM2-7 loading in ORC-deficient cells. Yoshiyuki Shibata, Mihaela Peycheva, Etsuko Shibata, Daniel Malzl, Rushad Pavri, Anindya Dutta. bioRxiv 2024.10.30.621095; doi: https://doi.org/10.1101/2024.10.30.621095 (PMID: 39554186)

      We have now included this in the discussion.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The origin recognition complex (ORC) is an essential loading factor for the replicative Mcm2-7 helicase complex. Despite ORC's critical role in DNA replication, there have been instances where the loss of specific ORC subunits has still seemingly supported DNA replication in cancer cells, endocycling hepatocytes, and Drosophila polyploid cells. Critically, all tested ORC subunits are essential for development and proliferation in normal cells. This presents a challenge, as conditional knockouts need to be generated, and a skeptic can always claim that there were limiting but sufficient ORC levels for helicase loading and replication in polyploid or transformed cells. That being said, the authors have consistently pushed the system to demonstrate replication in the absence or extreme depletion of ORC subunits.

      Here, the authors generate conditional ORC2 mutants to counter a potential argument with prior conditional ORC1 mutants that Cdc6 may substitute for ORC1 function based on homology. They also generate a double ORC1 and ORC2 mutant, which is still capable of DNA replication in polyploid hepatocytes. While this manuscript provides significantly more support for the ability of select cells to replicate in the absence or near absence of select ORC subunits, it does not shed light on a potential mechanism.

      The strengths of this manuscript are the mouse genetics and the generation of conditional alleles of ORC2 and the rigorous assessment of phenotypes resulting from limiting amounts of specific ORC subunits. It also builds on prior work with ORC1 to rule out Cdc6 complementing the loss of ORC1.

      The weakness is that it is a very hard task to resolve the fundamental question of how much ORC is enough for replication in cancer cells or hepatocytes. Clearly, there is a marked reduction in specific ORC subunits that is sufficient to impact replication during development and in fibroblasts, but the devil's advocate can always claim minimal levels of ORC remaining in these specialized cells.

      The significance of the work is that the authors keep improving their conditional alleles (and combining them), thus making it harder and harder (but not impossible) to invoke limiting but sufficient levels of ORC. This work lays the foundation for future functional screens to identify other factors that may modulate the response to the loss of ORC subunits.

      This work will be of interest to the DNA replication, polyploidy, and genome stability communities.

      Thank you.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript proposes that primary hepatocytes can replicate their DNA without the six-subunit ORC. This follows previous studies that examined mice that did not express ORC1 in the liver. In this study, the authors suppressed expression of ORC2 or ORC1 plus ORC2 in the liver.

      Comments:

      (1) I find the conclusion of the authors somewhat hard to accept. Biochemically, ORC without the ORC1 or ORC2 subunits cannot load the MCM helicase on DNA. The question arises whether the deletion in the ORC1 and ORC2 genes by Cre is not very tight, allowing some cells to replicate their DNA and allow the liver to develop, or whether the replication of DNA proceeds via non-canonical mechanisms, such as break-induced replication. The increase in the number of polyploid cells in the mice expressing Cre supports the first mechanism, because it is consistent with few cells retaining the capacity to replicate their DNA, at least for some time during development.

      In our study, we used EYFP as a marker for Cre recombinase activity. ~98% of the hepatocytes in tissue sections and cells in culture express EYFP, suggesting that the majority of hepatocytes successfully expressed the Cre protein to delete the ORC1 or ORC2 genes. To assess deletion efficiency, we employed sensitive genotyping and Western blotting techniques to confirm the deletion of ORC1 and ORC2 in hepatocytes isolated from Alb-Cre mice. Results in Fig. 2C and Fig. 6D demonstrate the near-complete absence of ORC2 and ORC1 proteins, respectively, in these hepatocytes.

      The mutant hepatocytes underwent at least 15–18 divisions during development. The inherited ORC1 or ORC2 protein present during the initial cell divisions, would be diluted to less than 1.5% of wild-type levels within six divisions, making it highly unlikely to support DNA replication, and yet we observe hepatocyte numbers that suggest there was robust cell division even after that point.

      Furthermore, the EdU incorporation data confirm DNA synthesis in the absence of ORC1 and ORC2. Specifically, immunofluorescence showed that both in vitro and in vivo, EYFP-positive hepatocytes (indicating successful ORC1 and ORC2 deletion) incorporated EdU, demonstrating that DNA synthesis can occur without ORC1 and ORC2.

      Finally, the Alb-ORC2f/f mice have 25-37.5% of the number of hepatocyte nuclei compared to WT mice (Table 2).  If that many cells had an undeleted ORC2 gene, that would have shown up in the genotyping PCR and in the Western blots.

      (2) Fig 1H shows that 5 days post infection, there is no visible expression of ORC2 in MEFs with the ORC2 flox allele. However, at 15 days post infection, some ORC2 is visible. The authors suggest that a small number of cells that retained expression of ORC2 were selected over the cells not expressing ORC2. Could a similar scenario also happen in vivo?

      This would not explain the significant incorporation of EdU in hepatocytes that are EYFP positive and do not have detectable ORC by Western blots.  Also note that for MEFs we are delivering the Cre by Adenovirus infection in vitro, so there is a finite probability that a cell will not receive the virus, the Cre and will not delete ORC2.  However, in vivo, the Alb-Cre will be expressed in every cell that turns on albumin.  There is no escaping the expression of Cre.

      (3) Figs 2E-G shows decreased body weight, decreased liver weight and decreased liver to body weight in mice with recombination of the ORC2 flox allele. This means that DNA replication is compromised in the ALB-ORC2f/f mice.

      It is possible that DNA replication is partially compromised or may slow down in the absence of ORC2. However, it is important to emphasize that livers with ORC2 deletion remain capable of DNA replication, so much so that liver function and life span are near normal. Therefore, some kind of DNA replication has to serve as a compensatory mechanism in the absence of ORC2 to maintain liver function and support regeneration.

      (4) Figs 2I-K do not report the number of hepatocytes, but the percent of hepatocytes with different nuclear sizes. I suspect that the number of hepatocytes is lower in the ALB-ORC2f/f mice than in the ORC2f/f mice. Can the authors report the actual numbers?

      We show in Table 2 that the Alb-Orc2f/f mice have about 25-37.5% of the hepatocytes compared to the WT mice.

      (5) Figs 3B-G do not report the number of nuclei, but percentages, which are plotted separately for the ORC2-f/f and ALB-ORC2-f/f mice. Can the authors report the actual numbers?

      In all the FACS experiments in Fig. 3B-G we collect data for a total of 10,000 nuclei (or cells).  For Fig. 3E-G we divide the 10,000 nuclei into the bottom 40% on the EYFP axis (EYFP low, which is mostly EYFP negative) as the control group, and EYFP high (top 20% on the EYFP axis) test group.  We have described this in the Methods in the revision and labeled EYFP negative and positive as EYFP low and high in the Figures and Figure legends.

      (6) Fig 5 shows the response of ORC2f/f and ALB-ORC2f/f mice after partial hepatectomy. The percent of EdU+ nuclei in the ORC2-f/f (aka ALB-CRE-/-) mice in Fig 5H seems low. Based on other publications in the field it should be about 20-30%. Why is it so low here? The very low nuclear density in the ALB-ORC2-f/f mice (Fig 5F) and the large nuclei (Fig 5I) could indicate that cells fire too few origins, proceed through S phase very slowly and fail to divide.

      The percentage of EdU+ nuclei in the ORC2f/f without Alb-Cre mice is 8%, while in PMID 10623657 ~10% of wild type nuclei incorporate  EdU at 42 hr post partial hepatectomy (mid-point between the 36-48 hr post hepatectomy that was used in our study).  The important result here is that in the ORC2f/f mice with Alb-Cre (+/-) we are seeing significant EdU incorporation. We have also corrected the X-axis labels in 5F, 5I, 7E and 7F to reflect that those measurements were not made at 36 hr post-resection but later (as was indicated in the schematic in Fig. 5A).

      (7) Fig 6F shows that ALB-ORC1f/f-ORC2f/f mice have very severe phenotypes in terms of body weight and liver weight (about on third of wild-type!!). Fig 6H and 6I, the actual numbers should be presented, not percentages. The fact that there are EYFP negative cells, implies that CRE was not expressed in all hepatocytes.

      The liver weight is very dependent on the body weight, and so we have to look at the liver to body weight ratio to determine if it is inordinately small, and the ratio is 70% of the WT.  In females the liver and body weight are low (although in proportion to each other), which maybe is what the reviewer is talking about.  However, the fact that liver weight and body weight are not as low in males, suggest that this is a gender (hormone?) specific effect and not a DNA replication defect.  We had discussed this possibility.  We have another paper also in BioRXiv (Su et al. doi.org/10.1101/2024.12.18.629220) that suggests that ORC subunits have significant effect on gene expression, so it is possible that that is what leads to this sexual dimorphism in phenotype.  We have now added this to the discussion.

      The bottom 40% of nuclei on the EYFP axis in the FACS profiles (what was labeled EYFP negative but will now be called EYFP low) contains mostly non-hepatocytes that are genuinely EYFP negative.   Non-hepatocytes (bile duct cells, endothelial cells, Kupffer cells, blood cells) are a significant part of cells in the dissociated liver (as can be seen in the single cell sequencing results in PMID: 32690901).  Their presence does not mean that hepatocytes are not expressing Cre.  Hepatocytes are nearly 100% EYFP positive, as can be seen in the tissue sections (where the hepatocytes take up most of visual field) and in cells in culture.  Also if there are EYFP negative hepatocyte nuclei in the FACS, that still does not rule out EYFP presence in the cytoplasm.  The important point from the FACS is that the EYFP high nuclei (which have expressed Cre for the longest period) are polyploid relative to the EYFP low nuclei.

      (8) Comparing the EdU+ cells in Fig 7G versus 5G shows very different number of EdU+ cells in the control animals. This means that one of these images is not representative. The higher fraction of EdU+ cells in the double-knockout could mean that the hepatocytes in the double-knockout take longer to complete DNA replication than the control hepatocytes. The control hepatocytes may have already completed DNA replication, which can explain why the fraction of EdU+ cells is so low in the controls. The authors may need to study mice at earlier time points after partial hepatectomy, i.e. sacrifice the mice at 30-32 hours, instead of 40-52 hours.

      The apparent difference that the reviewer comments on stems from differences in nuclear density in the images in Fig. 7G and 5G (also quantitated in Fig. 7F and 5F).  The quantitation in Fig. 7H and 5H show that the % of EdU plus cells are comparable (5-8%). 

      (9) Regarding the calculation of the number of cell divisions during development: the authors assume that all the hepatocytes in the adult liver are derived from hepatoblasts that express Alb. Is it possible to exclude the possibility that pre-hepatoblast cells that do not express Alb give rise to hepatocytes? For example the cells that give rise to hepatoblasts may proliferate more times than normal giving rise to a higher number of hepatoblasts than in wild-type mice.

      Single cell sequencing of mouse liver at e11 shows hepatoblasts expressing hepatocyte specific markers (PMID: 32690901).  All the cells annotated from the single-cell seq analysis are differentiated cells arguing against the possibility that undifferentiated endodermal cells (what the reviewer probably means by pre-hepatoblasts) exist at e11.  We have added this citation to the paper.

      Here is a review that says the hepatoblasts expressing Albumin are present before e13.  (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK27068/) says: “The differentiation of bi-potential hepatoblasts into hepatocytes or BECs begins around e13 of mouse development. Initially hepatoblasts express genes associated with both adult hepatocytes (Hnf4α, Albumin) ...”  Thus, we can be certain that hepatoblasts before e13 express albumin.  Our calculation of number of cell divisions in Table 2 begins from e12.

      The reviewer may be suggesting that ORC deletion leads to the immediate demise of hepatoblasts (despite having inherited ORC protein from the endodermal cells) causing undifferentiated endodermal cells to persist and proliferate much longer than in normal development.  We consider it unlikely, but if true it will be very unexpected, both by suggesting that deletion of ORC immediately leads to the death of the hepatoblasts (despite a healthy reserve of inherited ORC protein) and by suggesting that there is a novel feedback mechanism from the death/depletion of hepatoblasts leading to the persistence and proliferation of undifferentiated endodermal cells. We have added the reviewer’s suggestion to the discussion.

      (10) My interpretation of the data is that not all hepatocytes have the ORC1 and ORC2 genes deleted (eg EYFP-negative cells) and that these cells allow some proliferation in the livers of these mice.

      Please see the reply in question #1.  Particularly relevant: “Finally, the Alb-ORC2f/f mice have 25-37.5% of the number of hepatocyte nuclei compared to WT mice (Table 2).  If that many cells had an undeleted ORC2 gene, that would have shown up in the genotyping PCR and in the Western blots.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors address the role of ORC in DNA replication and that this protein complex is not essential for DNA replication in hepatocytes. They provide evidence that ORC subunit levels are substantially reduced in cells that have been induced to delete multiple exons of the corresponding ORC gene(s) in hepatocytes. They evaluate replication both in purified isolated hepatocytes and in mice after hepatectomy. In both cases, there is clear evidence that DNA replication does not decrease at a level that corresponds with the decrease in detectable ORC subunit and that endoreduplication is the primary type of replication observed. It remains possible that small amounts of residual ORC are responsible for the replication observed, although the authors provide arguments against this possibility. The mechanisms responsible for DNA replication in the absence of ORC are not examined.

      Strengths:

      The authors clearly show that there are dramatic reductions in the amount of the targeted ORC subunits in the cells that have been targeted for deletion. They also provide clear evidence that there is replication in a subset of these cells and that it is likely due to endoreduplication. Although there is no replication in MEFs derived from cells with the deletion, there is clearly DNA replication occurring in hepatocytes (both isolated in culture and in the context of the liver). Interestingly, the cells undergoing replication exhibit enlarged cell sizes and elevated ploidy indicating endoreduplication of the genome. These findings raise the interesting possibility that endoreduplication does not require ORC while normal replication does.

      Weaknesses:

      There are two significant weaknesses in this manuscript. The first is that although there is clearly robust reduction of the targeted ORC subunit, the authors cannot confirm that it is deleted in all cells. For example, the analysis in Fig. 4B would suggest that a substantial number of cells have not lost the targeted region of ORC2. Although the western blots show stronger effects, this type of analysis is notorious for non-linear response curves and no standards are provided. The second weakness is that there is no evaluation of the molecular nature of the replication observed. Are there changes in the amount of location of Mcm2-7 loading that is usually mediated by ORC? Does an associated change in Mcm2-7 loading lead to the endoreduplication observed? After numerous papers from this lab and others claiming that ORC is not required for eukaryotic DNA replication in a subset of cells, we still have no information about an alternative pathway that could explain this observation.

      We do not see a significant deficit in MCM2-7 loading (amount and rate) in cancer cell lines where we have deleted ORC1, ORC2 or ORC5 genes separately in Shibata et al. bioRxiv 2024.10.30.621095; doi: https://doi.org/10.1101/2024.10.30.621095 (PMID: 39554186).  This is now cited in the discussion.

      The authors frequently use the presence of a Cre-dependent eYFP expression as evidence that the ORC1 or ORC2 genes have been deleted. Although likely the best visual marker for this, it is not demonstrated that the presence of eYFP ensures that ORC2 has been targeted by Cre. For example, based on the data in Fig. 4B, there seems to be a substantial percentage of ORC2 genes that have not been targeted while the authors report that 100% of the cells express eYFP.

      (1) The PCR reactions in Fig. 4B are still contaminated by DNA from non-hepatocyte cells:  bile duct cells, endothelial, Kupfer cells and blood cells.  Microscopy of  cultured cells idnetifies the hepatocytes unequivocally from their morphology. <2% of the hepatocyte cells in culture in Fig. 4C are EYFP-.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The authors should present the data as suggested in the review and reformulate their conclusions. If possible, mice should be examined 30-32 hours after partial hepatectomy.

      Based on the Literature we chose a time that is consistent with the previous paper from us (Uchida et al., Genes & Dev).

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) It would improve the paper to use single-cell methods (e.g. FISH) to assess the deletion of ORC subunits in the targeted cells.

      This is something we will reserve for future studies.

      (2) The importance of the paper would be increased dramatically by showing that the elimination of ORC changed the location of Mcm2-7 loading. This would be highly likely if the authors hypothesis that ORC is not involved is true. On the other hand, given ORC's role in origin selection, an observation that the same sites are used but less frequently would support a hypothesis that residual intact ORC is responsible for the replication observed.

      Shibata et al (PMID: 39554186) has answered this question.  The loss of ORC does not change the locations of origins or even the ability to specify origins.  We argue that this is what is to be expected from our hypothesis, that although ORC is clearly important for MCM loading in yeast and in biochemical experiments, something unexpected is going on in human cells.  Either a vanishingly small amount of ORC (undetectable by commonly used methods) can load the full complement of MCM2-7 at a rate that is comparable to wild type cells, or there is an ORC-independent mechanism of MCM2-7 loading.   This is now added to the discussion.

    1. Art. 78
      • RE 633782
      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno
      • Relator(a): Min. LUIZ FUX
      • Julgamento: 26/10/2020
      • Publicação: 25/11/2020

      EMENTA: RECURSO EXTRAORDINÁRIO. REPERCUSSÃO GERAL. TEMA 532. DIREITO CONSTITUCIONAL E ADMINISTRATIVO. PRELIMINARES DE VIOLAÇÃO DO DIREITO À PRESTAÇÃO JURISDICIONAL ADEQUADA E DE USURPAÇÃO DA COMPETÊNCIA DO SUPREMO TRIBUNAL FEDERAL AFASTADAS. PODER DE POLÍCIA. TEORIA DO CICLO DE POLÍCIA. DELEGAÇÃO A PESSOA JURÍDICA DE DIREITO PRIVADO INTEGRANTE DA ADMINISTRAÇÃO PÚBLICA INDIRETA. SOCIEDADE DE ECONOMIA MISTA. PRESTADORA DE SERVIÇO PÚBLICO DE ATUAÇÃO PRÓPRIA DO ESTADO. CAPITAL MAJORITARIAMENTE PÚBLICO. REGIME NÃO CONCORRENCIAL. CONSTITUCIONALIDADE. NECESSIDADE DE LEI FORMAL ESPECÍFICA PARA DELEGAÇÃO. CONTROLE DE ABUSOS E DESVIOS POR MEIO DO DEVIDO PROCESSO. CONTROLE JUDICIAL DO EXERCÍCIO IRREGULAR. INDELEGABILIDADE DE COMPETÊNCIA LEGISLATIVA. 1. O Plenário deste Supremo Tribunal reconheceu repercussão geral ao thema decidendum, veiculado nos autos destes recursos extraordinários, referente à definição da compatibilidade constitucional da delegação do poder de polícia administrativa a pessoas jurídicas de direito privado integrantes da Administração Pública indireta prestadoras de serviço público. 2. O poder de polícia significa toda e qualquer ação restritiva do Estado em relação aos direitos individuais. Em sentido estrito, poder de polícia caracteriza uma atividade administrativa, que consubstancia verdadeira prerrogativa conferida aos agentes da Administração, consistente no poder de delimitar a liberdade e a propriedade. 3. A teoria do ciclo de polícia demonstra que o poder de polícia se desenvolve em quatro fases, cada uma correspondendo a um modo de atuação estatal: (i) a ordem de polícia, (ii) o consentimento de polícia, (iii) a fiscalização de polícia e (iv) a sanção de polícia. 4. A extensão de regras do regime de direito público a pessoas jurídicas de direito privado (1) integrantes da Administração Pública indireta, desde que (2) prestem serviços públicos de atuação própria do Estado e em 3 (3) regime não concorrencial é admissível pela jurisprudência da Corte. (Precedentes: RE 225.011, Rel. Min. Marco Aurélio, Red. p/ o acórdão Min. Maurício Corrêa, Tribunal Pleno, julgado em 16/11/2000, DJ 19/12/2002; RE 393.032-AgR, Rel. Min. Cármen Lúcia, Primeira Turma, DJe 18/12/2009; RE 852.527-AgR, Rel. Min. Cármen Lúcia, Segunda Turma, DJe 13/2/2015). 5. A constituição de uma pessoa jurídica integrante da Administração Pública indireta sob o regime de direito privado não a impede de ocasionalmente ter o seu regime aproximado daquele da Fazenda Pública, desde que não atue em regime concorrencial. 6. Consectariamente, a Constituição, ao autorizar a criação de empresas públicas e sociedades de economia mista que tenham por objeto exclusivo a prestação de serviços públicos de atuação típica do Estado e em regime não concorrencial, autoriza, consequentemente, a delegação dos meios necessários à realização do serviço público delegado. Deveras: a) A admissão de empregados públicos deve ser precedida de concurso público, característica que não se coaduna com a despedida imotivada; b) o RE 589.998, esta Corte reconheceu que a ECT, que presta um serviço público em regime de monopólio, deve motivar a dispensa de seus empregados, assegurando-se, assim, que os princípios observados no momento da admissão sejam, também, respeitados por ocasião do desligamento; c) Os empregados públicos se submetem, ainda, aos princípios constitucionais de atuação da Administração Pública constantes do artigo 37 da Carta Política. Assim, eventuais interferências indevidas em sua atuação podem ser objeto de impugnação administrativa ou judicial; d) Ausente, portanto, qualquer incompatibilidade entre o regime celetista existente nas estatais prestadoras de serviço público em regime de monopólio e o exercício de atividade de polícia administrativa pelos seus empregados. 7. As estatais prestadoras de serviço público de atuação própria do Estado e em regime não concorrencial podem atuar na companhia do atributo da coercibilidade inerente ao exercício do poder de polícia, mormente diante da atração do regime fazendário. 8. In casu, a Empresa de Transporte e Trânsito de Belo Horizonte – BHTRANS pode ser delegatária do poder de polícia de trânsito, inclusive quanto à aplicação de multas, porquanto se trata de estatal municipal de capital majoritariamente público, que presta exclusivamente serviço público de atuação própria do Estado e em regime não concorrencial, consistente no policiamento do trânsito da cidade de Belo Horizonte. Preliminares: 9. A jurisprudência do Supremo Tribunal Federal é firme no sentido de que o princípio da fundamentação das decisões não obriga o órgão julgador a responder a todas as questões suscitadas pelas partes, mas somente aqueles que sejam suficientes para motivar o seu convencimento. Preliminar de violação do direito à prestação jurisdicional adequada afastada. 10. A alínea d, inciso III, artigo 102, da Constituição exige, para atração da competência do Supremo Tribunal Federal, declaração expressa da validade de lei local contestada em face de lei federal, o que, in casu, não se verifica. Preliminar de usurpação de competência afastada. 11. Os recursos extraordinários interpostos pela Empresa de Transporte e Trânsito de Belo Horizonte – BHTRANS e pelo Ministério Público do Estado de Minas Gerais devem ser conhecidos em razão do preenchimento de todos os requisitos de admissibilidade, notadamente o da tempestividade, prequestionamento, legitimidade e o do interesse recursal, além da repercussão geral da matéria reconhecida pelo Plenário Virtual desta Corte. 12. Ex positis, voto no sentido de (i) CONHECER e DAR PROVIMENTO ao recurso extraordinário interposto pela Empresa de Transporte e Trânsito de Belo Horizonte – BHTRANS e (ii) de CONHECER e NEGAR PROVIMENTO ao recurso extraordinário interposto pelo Ministério Público do Estado de Minas Gerais, para reconhecer a compatibilidade constitucional da delegação da atividade de policiamento de trânsito à Empresa de Transporte e Trânsito de Belo Horizonte – BHTRANS, nos limites da tese jurídica objetivamente fixada pelo Pleno do Supremo Tribunal Federal. 13. Repercussão geral constitucional que assenta a seguinte tese objetiva: “É constitucional a delegação do poder de polícia, por meio de lei, a pessoas jurídicas de direito privado integrantes da Administração Pública indireta de capital social majoritariamente público que prestem exclusivamente serviço público de atuação própria do Estado e em regime não concorrencial.”

      Tema - 532 - Aplicação de multa de trânsito por sociedade de economia mista.

      Tese - É constitucional a delegação do poder de polícia, por meio de lei, a pessoas jurídicas de direito privado integrantes da Administração Pública indireta de capital social majoritariamente público que prestem exclusivamente serviço público de atuação própria do Estado e em regime não concorrencial.


      • Informativo nº 790
      • 10 de outubro de 2023.
      • PRIMEIRA TURMA
      • Processo: REsp 1.950.332-RJ, Rel. Ministro Gurgel de Faria, Primeira Turma, por unanimidade, julgado em 26/9/2023, DJe 2/10/2023.

      Ramo do Direito DIREITO ADMINISTRATIVO

      Paz, Justiça e Instituições Eficazes Parcerias e meios de implementaçãoTema Poder de polícia. Função sancionadora. Delegação. Câmara de comercialização de energia elétrica - CCEE. Associação de natureza privada. Impossibilidade.

      DESTAQUE - Não é possível delegar a função sancionadora do exercício do poder de polícia à Câmara de Comercialização de Energia Elétrica - CCEE por ser uma associação privada que não integra a Administração Pública.

      INFORMAÇÕES DO INTEIRO TEOR - No plano da jurisprudência, o Supremo Tribunal Federal já se manifestou sobre a questão relativa à delegação de poder de polícia administrativa a entidades privadas no julgamento da ADI n. 1.717, de relatoria do Ministro Sydney Sanches, quando concluiu pela "indelegabilidade, a uma entidade privada, de atividade típica de Estado, que abrange até poder de polícia, de tributar e de punir, no que concerne ao exercício de atividades profissionais regulamentadas".

      • O Superior Tribunal de Justiça, ao examinar o mesmo tema de fundo do presente processo, também consagrou a tese de que, em relação às fases do "ciclo de polícia", somente os atos relativos ao consentimento e à fiscalização são delegáveis, seguindo o entendimento de que aqueles referentes à legislação e à sanção derivam do poder de coerção do Poder Público, este indelegável às pessoas jurídicas de direito privado.

      • Acontece que, contra a supracitada decisão do STJ, houve a interposição de Recurso Extraordinário (633782/MG), tendo sido o recurso afetado como representativo de controvérsia. Na ocasião do julgamento daquele apelo, houve a revisão parcial do entendimento do STF sobre a possibilidade de delegação da função de polícia, cristalizando o Supremo a tese de que "é constitucional a delegação do poder de polícia, por meio de lei, a pessoas jurídicas de direito privado integrantes da Administração Pública indireta de capital social majoritariamente público que prestem exclusivamente serviço público de atuação própria do Estado e em regime não concorrencial".

      No caso, porém, o precedente não se aplica, pois: a) a CCEE é associação privada que não integra a Administração Pública; b) não há permissão constitucional para que atue como agente delegada da função administrativa de infligir sanções; c) os integrantes não gozam de qualquer estabilidade no emprego; d) embora a Câmara seja associação civil sem fins lucrativos, o fato é que ela é integrada "por titulares de concessão, permissão ou autorização" e "por outros agentes vinculados aos serviços e às instalações de energia elétrica", ou seja, ela é essencialmente composta por pessoas jurídicas que, como fim principal, visam o lucro.

      • Ademais, não há lei formal autorizando direta e expressamente que a CCEE aplique diretamente multas aos particulares, e depois as cobre por conta própria, na medida em que essa atribuição só é mencionada no Decreto n. 5.177/2004 c/c Resolução Normativa ANEEL n. 109.

    1. Discussion Questions1) Do you think women should delay getting annual mammograms until they reach 50? Explain your position. 2) Why do you think there was such a strong public reaction to the announcement of the new guidelines? 3) How do you think the federal task force could have communicated its mammogram recommendations more effectively? 4) Do you think annual mammograms in women aged 40–49 leads to overdiagnosis and overtreatment? Use evidence to support your view. 5) Talk to your family doctor to find out what he or she thinks about the new mammogram guidelines. What is the doctor's position and how will he or she advise female patients?

      I can use some of these questions to better my case study

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Although the scripts are available at the github link that is shown, the Readme file is not available as a text file. Spreadsheets summarizing the RNA-seq data ought to be available for download, but these are not present. Likewise, are spreadsheets available for the data used to generate the plots in Fig. 10, so that the identities of particular, correlated genes can be viewed?

      We have now included the excel sheet with all the DEGs shown in Figure 8-9 (Figure 8 – Source data 1-8). The source data include DEGs that are up- and down-regulated in gWAT, iWAT, liver, and skeletal muscle. The source data files (excel) are the standard output format. We have also updated the github (https://github.com/Leandromvelez/CTRP10-Manuscript-DEG-Sex-specific-connectivities-and-integration) to include a README file and updated the R scripts to annotate steps and processing considerations.  In addition, the README file now contains drive links to the files used the unfiltered kallisto TPM and counts at the transcript-level, as well as resulting Differential Expression results based on genotype.  Obviously, all criteria from aligned transcripts such as gene filtering and normalization are included in the scripts provided.

      Several items would strengthen the work:

      (1) Is a CTRP10 antibody available, and does the protein abundance correlate with the mRNA abundances that were assessed in Fig. 1?

      Unfortunately, no validated antibody currently exists for CTRP10. Consequently, we were not able to assess protein abundance of CTRP10 in our study.

      (2) Were there compensatory changes in the abundance of other CTRP family members? This might be observed at the protein, but not mRNA, level. It might be reasonable to test for the effects of liver, gWAT, skeletal muscle, and iWAT.

      We observed no compensatory changes in other CTRP family members based on our RNA-seq data. Unfortunately, we do not have protein data for other CTRP family members.

      (3) The gene expression changes shown in Fig. 9 are ranked according to z-score, but it is not clear how this is calculated. It would be helpful to indicate the log2 change in each case.

      The z-score is a very commonly used method to show DEGs in studies involving RNA-seq data. We calculate the z-score based on the gene transcript source data (Fig. 8 – Source data 1-8). Z-score is defined as z = (x-μ)/σ, where x is the raw score (gene transcript level), μ is the population mean (mean of gene expression across both WT and KO samples), and σ is the population standard deviation. In essence, the z-score is the raw score minus the population mean, divided by the population standard deviation. We now included this information in Fig. 9 legend.

      (4) In Fig. 6, female HFD-fed KO mice had increased glucose (and insulin) after an overnight fast, but increased glucose was not observed in the GTT data. Possibly, this is because the mice were fasted for only 6h for the GTT. This might be mentioned during the description of these data, on lines 221-224. However, this also raises the question of whether there is a difference in the rate of gluconeogenesis (or possibly glycogenolysis for the 6h data) in the KO compared to the controls. Understanding this would require the use of tracers, and is reasonably beyond the scope of this study, but might be mentioned in the discussion.

      Per reviewer’s suggestion, we have included this in the “limitation section” of the discussion.

      Reduced RER in the HFD-fed female mice might begin to suggest a mechanism since this suggests the mice might have decreased oxidation of carbohydrates and increased oxidation of fat compared to control animals. A glucose tracer might be used to test whether more glucose is stored and, if so, in what tissue this occurs. Possibly, this could be done ex vivo on isolated tissues or cells. Again, this is reasonably beyond the scope of the present study.

      Per reviewer’s suggestion, we have included this in the “limitation section” of the discussion.

      (5) The discussion includes a brief discussion of the role of estrogen and suggests that in CTRP10 KO mice there are differences in other factors that would be needed to explain the phenotype. Although it is agreed that this is likely the case, estrogen levels were not measured in the present study. It seems like this would be important to study, and might shed light on the female-specific phenotype.

      We have now included serum estrogen data. No significant differences in estrogen levels were seen between WT and KO female mice fed either a low-fat diet (Fig. 4 – figure supplement 1) or a high-fat diet (Fig. 5 – figure supplement 2).

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      While the concept is potentially exciting, there are major problems with the current manuscript. It lacks the mechanistic details behind MHO.

      (1) There is a significant gap that was not addressed by the authors. How exactly does CTRP10 lead to the activation of proteins like Fgf1, Fgf21, Il22ra1, Ucp3, and Klf15 in Ctrp10 knockout female mice? Is it likely that CTRP10 regulates these proteins via indirect mechanisms?

      We acknowledge that the lack of mechanistic understanding of how CTRP10 loss-of-function leads to changes in gene expression is a major limitation of the study. We have highlighted this limitation in the discussion section.

      • The author notes that Ctrp10 knockout female mice, particularly those on a high-fat diet lack Nr1d1 and can sustain a relatively healthy metabolic state. This is supported by the demonstrated upregulation of Fgf1, Fgf21, Il22ra1, Ucp3, and Klf15 in Ctrp10 knockout female mice. However, the mechanisms through which Ctrp10 knockout influences the expression of these molecules are not elucidated.

      We acknowledge that this is a major limitation of the study. We have highlighted this limitation in the discussion section. 

      • How do you substantiate the role of age and a high-nutrient diet in the development of obesity in knockout female mice? However, it is still unclear whether administering a high-fat diet in >20 week age of mice can develop insulin resistance where obesity is developing in LFD.

      When fed a low-fat diet, Ctrp10-KO female mice developed obesity with age and yet show little if any glucose intolerance or insulin resistance based on our glucose tolerance and insulin tolerance tests. For the HFD group, we are only comparing WT and KO mice on the same diet (not across diet). While WT mice on HFD gained significant amount of weight over time as expected, Ctrp10-KO female mice gain substantially higher amount of weight relative to WT littermates. Despite this, we did not observe a worsening of glucose tolerance and insulin resistance (based on GTT and ITT) in the KO female mice relative to WT controls as we would expect, since greater adiposity in HFD-fed mice generally correlated with worse metabolic outcomes. 

      (2) The authors should add the NR1D1 dependency study in female mice if possible.

      To address would require the generation of Ctrp10/Nr1d1 double KO mouse model and to carry out the entire study again in these double KO mice. Although this suggestion by the reviewer is a good one, this is beyond the scope of the present study.

      (3) NR1D1 represses the set of genes that promotes lipogenesis (the author should add some data that validates this statement).

      The role of NR1D1 in regulating metabolic genes are extensively documented in the published literature. NR1D1 (also known as REV-ERBα) is a constitutive transcriptional repressor (PMID: 26044300; PMID: 27445394). Many metabolic genes that are normally represses by NR1D1 is de-repressed in mice lacking NR1D1 globally or in the tissue-specific manner (PMID: 26044300; PMID: 34350828; PMID: 22562834). Among the many NR1D1 target genes involved in lipid metabolism include: CD36, Plin2, Elovl5, Acss3 (from: PMID: 26044300); as well as Scd1, Scd2, Pnpla5, Acsl1, Fasn, Hadhb, and Oxsm (from: PMID: 34350828).  We have included this information in the discussion section.

      (4) The authors should study the effect of Ctrp10 overexpression in HFD-fed female mice and also with KO of CTRP10 in adult mice if possible.

      The suggestion by the reviewer is a good one. However, this is beyond the scope of the study. We do not have a Ctrp10 conditional KO mouse model; as such, we could not study the effect of knocking out CTRP10 in adult mice. Overexpression studies are often considered non-physiological these days since the level of the overexpressed protein is generally much higher than the normal physiological level. For this reason, we did not attempt any overexpression study. 

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Line 114: Could you please provide definitions for "GluK2" and "GluK4" for readers unfamiliar with these terms?

      We have now provided definition for these terms.

      Line 140: It's stated that skeletal muscle and the pancreas express similar levels of Ctrp10 as the brain. Please double-check and clarify this assertion for accuracy.

      In mice, based on our own data (Fig. 1B), Ctrp10 expression in skeletal muscle and pancreas is comparable to that in the whole brain. In human, based on publicly available data (e.g., Genotype-Tissue Expression portal; GTex), brain expresses much higher level of CTRP10 transcript relative to other peripheral tissues.

      Line 141: Have you investigated whether Ctrp10 levels in plasma change after refeeding? If not, consider exploring this aspect to enhance the comprehensiveness of the study.

      No validated antibody currently exists for CTRP10. As such, we could not assess plasma level of CTRP10 after refeeding. We have included this as limitation of our study in the discussion section.  

      Lines 143-144: Clarify the age bracket of the animals used in the study. Additionally, have you observed similar responses, such as downregulation of Ctrp10 in response to refeeding, in both old and young mice in peripheral tissues?

      We have now included the age of the mice (~10 weeks old) for the fasting refeeding study as shown in Fig. 1C in the result and method sections.  

      Lines 135-149: To complement the experiments shown in Fig 1B-D, provide data pertaining to females.

      Ideally, we would like to have this data as well. However, to do this for females would involve 47 mice and the collection of 120 tissues (Fig. 1B; n = 10 per tissue), 390 tissues (Fig. 1C; n = 7-8 per tissue per fast or refed state), and 528 tissues (Fig. 1D; n = 11 per tissue per HFD or LFD). This would be a total of 1038 tissue samples. The main purpose of Fig. 1B-D is to demonstrate that Ctrp10 transcript is widely expressed and that its expression is modulated by nutritional (HFD vs. LFD) and metabolic (fast vs. refeed) states. These data provided a rationale to examine the metabolic phenotype in mice lacking CTRP10.

      To address the reviewer’s point, we looked at the expression levels of CTRP10/C1QL1 between males and females in the Genotype-Tissue Expression (GTEx) database portal and it does not appear that there are sex differences in CTRP10 expression patterns in normal tissues.  

      Line 152: Can you provide evidence supporting the hypothesis that Ctrp10 is secreted into the circulation?

      CTRP10 has a classic signal peptide sequence and the protein is secreted when expressed in HEK 293 cells (PMID: 18783346). We have shown previously that CTRP10 can be found in the FPLC-fractionated mouse serum using a polyclonal rabbit anti-mouse CTRP10 antibody we generated (PMID: 18783346); this antibody, however, does not work on tissue lysates (many non-specific bands). There is evidence in published literature to show that CTRP10/C1QL2 is clearly found circulating in human plasma. Some of the studies include: 1) Human C1QL2/CTRP10 is detected in the human plasma from UK BioBank (PMID: 37794186; C1QL2 is highlighted in page 335) and serum samples from pregnant females (PMID: 39062451; C1QL2 is highlighted in Table 2). We have included this information in the Introduction section.

      Line 178: In Fig 4 D and E (and other figures in the paper), it would be more accurate to express adipocyte size in "μm²" instead of "uM2."

      We have double checked and fixed this issue in the figure 4 and 7.

      Line 259: Please specify the age of the animals used in the study.

      In the method section, we did mention that LFD was provided for the duration of the study, beginning at 5 weeks of age; and that HFD was provided for 14 weeks, beginning at 6-7 weeks of age. Also, in Figure 2A and Figure 4A, the age of the mice is also indicated.

      Lines 275-283 and 288-296: It would be more appropriate to move this content to the Discussion section for better contextualization.

      We feel that the published information on NR1D1 and FGF21 should be mentioned in the result section so that the readers can immediately appreciate the significance of our data shown in Fig. 8 and 9. However, we also included similar information concerning NR1D1 in the discussion section for better contextualization as suggested.  

      Line 301: The section on DEG analysis requires additional details. How was the DEG analysis conducted? Were the DEGs from "wild type and KO mice" compared with "human DEGs regulated by sex"? Also, details about the phenotype of the human subjects and their association with obesity should be included. Additionally, discuss specific genes identified by the analysis and their relevance to the Ctrp10 story and human sex-specific gene connectivity analysis.

      We have updated the section on DEG analysis and, related to reviewer comments above, significantly expanded the github repository, detailing an analytical walkthrough of all computational analyses performed. To clarify the human integration analysis, we have added the following to the methods:

      “To investigate the degree of conservation of CTRP-engaged pathways, we mapped the differentially expressed genes (DEGs) identified from Ctrp10 knockout (KO) versus wild-type (WT) mice to their human orthologs, including human CTRP10, in the GTEx database for transcriptional correlations. Individuals were stratified by sex to examine sex-specific gene connectivity, consisting of 210 males and 100 females to compare gene expression across tissues. Gene-connectivity analyses were performed based on population correlation significances summarized by cumulative -log10(pvalues) as previously described"

      Line 330: In Fig 7L, increased oxidative stress in the liver of KO mice is shown. Please provide an explanation for the claim that Ctrp10-KO female mice resembled the WT controls.

      In Fig. 7L, we did observe a modest, but significant, increase in oxidative stress in the liver based on the quantification of malondialdehyde (MDA) level, a marker of tissue oxidative stress. However, we did not see any significant differences in the expression of oxidative genes in the liver between WT and KO female mice (Fig. 7J); thus, the statement in line 330 (discussion section) that pertains to oxidative gene expression in fat and liver (Fig. 7E and 7J) is correct. 

      Line 375: Could you clarify the term "adipose tissue health" and further discuss or provide evidence demonstrating compromised adipose tissue health in female KO mice following HFD?

      Adipose tissue health refers to the healthy functioning of adipose tissue (based on its functionality, immune cell population and profile, and metabolic gene expression profiles). Adipose tissue releases free fatty acids in response to fasting and takes up lipids in response to refeeding. Both are these functions are preserved in KO mice as we did not observe any significant differences in free fatty acids (NEFA) and triglyceride levels in the fasted and refed states (Fig. 6AB). Also, we did not observe any significant differences in the expression of inflammatory and fibrotic genes in the adipose tissue of WT and KO female mice fed a high-fat diet (Fig. 7E). If anything, we actually observed a modest, but significant, reduction in the expression of some ER and oxidative stress genes in the KO female mice relative to WT controls (Fig. 7E). 

      Line 408: Please provide data regarding estrogen levels in wild-type and KO female mice for comparison.

      We have now included serum estrogen data. No significant differences in estrogen levels were seen between WT and KO female mice fed either a low-fat diet (Fig. 4 – figure supplement 1) or a high-fat diet (Fig. 5 – figure supplement 2).

      Line 587: The GitHub link provided seems to be inactive or incorrect. Please verify and provide the correct link.

      We have also updated the github (https://github.com/Leandromvelez/CTRP10-Manuscript-DEG-Sex-specific-connectivities-and-integration) to include a README file and updated the R scripts to annotate steps and processing considerations. 

      Lines 590-599: Provide additional details about the analysis of human sex-specific genes. Including a table of the top DEGs and pathways differentially regulated by sex would be beneficial for readers' comprehension.

      We have expanded the methods, results and associated github repositories to detail all reproducible parameters used in these analyses.  The new table of DEGs is included in the manuscript and github repositories.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, Nedbalova et al. investigate the biochemical pathway that acts in circulating immune cells to generate adenosine, a systemic signal that directs nutrients toward the immune response, and S-adenosylmethionine (SAM), a methyl donor for lipid, DNA, RNA, and protein synthetic reactions. They find that SAM is largely generated through the uptake of extracellular methionine, but that recycling of adenosine to form ATP contributes a small but important quantity of SAM in immune cells during the immune response. The authors propose that adenosine serves as a sensor of cell activity and nutrient supply, with adenosine secretion dominating in response to increased cellular activity. Their findings of impaired immune action but rescued larval developmental delay when the enzyme Ahcy is knocked down in hemocytes are interpreted as due to effects on methylation processes in hemocytes and reduced production of adenosine to regulate systemic metabolism and development, respectively. Overall this is a strong paper that uses sophisticated metabolic techniques to map the biochemical regulation of an important systemic mediator, highlighting the importance of maintaining appropriate metabolite levels in driving immune cell biology.

      Strengths:

      The authors deploy metabolic tracing - no easy feat in Drosophila hemocytes - to assess flux into pools of the SAM cycle. This is complemented by mass spectrometry analysis of total levels of SAM cycle metabolites to provide a clear picture of this metabolic pathway in resting and activated immune cells.

      The experiments show that the recycling of adenosine to ATP, and ultimately SAM, contributes meaningfully to the ability of immune cells to control infection with wasp eggs.

      This is a well-written paper, with very nice figures showing metabolic pathways under investigation. In particular, the italicized annotations, for example, "must be kept low", in Figure 1 illustrate a key point in metabolism - that cells must control levels of various intermediates to keep metabolic pathways moving in a beneficial direction.

      Experiments are conducted and controlled well, reagents are tested, and findings are robust and support most of the authors' claims.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors posit that adenosine acts as a sensor of cellular activity, with increased release indicating active cellular metabolism and insufficient nutrient supply. It is unclear how generalizable they think this may be across different cell types or organs.

      In the final part of the Discussion, we elaborate slightly more on a possible generalization of our results, while being aware of the limited space in this experimental paper and therefore intend to address this in more detail and comprehensively in a subsequent perspective article.

      The authors extrapolate the findings in Figure 3 of decreased extracellular adenosine in ex vivo cultures of hemocytes with knockdown of Ahcy (panel B) to the in vivo findings of a rescue of larval developmental delay in wasp egg-infected larvae with hemocyte-specific Ahcy RNAi (panel C). This conclusion (discussed in lines 545-547) should be somewhat tempered, as a number of additional metabolic abnormalities characterize Ahcy-knockdown hemocytes, and the in vivo situation may not mimic the ex vivo situation. If adenosine (or inosine) measurements were possible in hemolymph, this would help bolster this idea. However, adenosine at least has a very short half-life.

      We agree with the reviewer, and in the 4th paragraph of the Discussion we now discuss more extensively the limitations of our study in relation to ex vivo adenosine measurements and the importance of the SAM pathway on adenosine production.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors wish to explore the metabolic support mechanisms enabling lamellocyte encapsulation, a critical antiparasitic immune response of insects. They show that S-adenosylmethionine metabolism is specifically important in this process through a combination of measurements of metabolite levels and genetic manipulations of this metabolic process.

      Strengths:

      The metabolite measurements and the functional analyses are generally very strong and clearly show that the metabolic process under study is important in lamellocyte immune function.

      Weaknesses:

      The gene expression data are a potential weakness. Not enough is explained about how the RNAseq experiments in Figures 2 and 4 were done, and the representation of the data is unclear.

      The RNAseq data have already been described in detail in our previous paper (doi.org/10.1371/journal.pbio.3002299), but we agree with the reviewer that we should describe the necessary details again here. The replicate numbers for RNAseq data were added to figure legends, the TPM values for the selected genes shown in figures are in S1_Data and new S4_Data file with complete RNAseq data (TPM and DESeq2) was added to this revised version.

      The paper would also be strengthened by the inclusion of some measure of encapsulation effectiveness: the authors show that manipulation of the S-adenosylmethionine pathway in lamellocytes affects the ability of the host to survive infection, but they do not show direct effects on the ability of the host to encapsulate wasp eggs.

      The reviewer is correct that wasp egg encapsulation and host survival may be different (the host can encapsulate and kill the wasp egg and still not survive) and we should also include encapsulation efficiency. This is now added to Figure 3D, which shows that encapsulation efficiency is reduced upon Ahcy-RNAi, which is consistent with the reduced number of lamellocytes.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors of this study provide evidence that Drosophila immune cells show upregulated SAM transmethylation pathway and adenosine recycling upon wasp infection. Blocking this pathway compromises the lamellocyte formation, developmental delay, and host survival, suggesting its physiological relevance.

      Strengths:

      Snapshot quantification of the metabolite pool does not provide evidence that the metabolic pathway is active or not. The authors use an ex vivo isotope labelling to precisely monitor the SAM and adenosine metabolism. During infection, the methionine metabolism and adenosine recycling are upregulated, which is necessary to support the immune reaction. By combining the genetic experiment, they successfully show that the pathway is activated in immune cells.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors knocked down Ahcy to prove the importance of SAM methylation pathway. However, Ahcy-RNAi produces a massive accumulation of SAH, in addition to blocking adenosine production. To further validate the phenotypic causality, it is necessary to manipulate other enzymes in the pathway, such as Sam-S, Cbs, SamDC, etc.

      We are aware of this weakness and have addressed it in a much more detailed discussion of the limitations of our study in the 6th paragraph of the Discussion.

      The authors do not demonstrate how infection stimulates the metabolic pathway given the gene expression of metabolic enzymes is not upregulated by infection stimulus.

      Although the goal of this work was to test by 13C tracing whether the SAM pathway activity is upregulated, not to analyze how its activity is regulated, we certainly agree with the reviewer that an explanation of possible regulation, especially in the context of the enzyme expressions we show, should be included in our work. Therefore, we have supplemented the data with methyltransferase expressions (Figure 2-figure supplement 3. And S3_Data) and better describe the changes in expression of some SAM pathway genes, which also support stimulation of this pathway by changes in expression. The enzymes of the SAM transmethylation pathway are highly expressed in hemocytes, and it is known that the activity of this pathway is primarily regulated by (1) increased methionine supply to the cell and (2) the actual utilization of SAM by methyltransferases. Therefore, a possible increase in SAM transmethylation pathway in our work can be suggested (1) by increased expression of 4 transporters capable of transporting methionine, (2) by decreased expression of AhcyL2 (dominant-negative regulator of Ahcy) and (3) by increased expression of 43 out of 200 methyltransferases. This was now added to the first section of Results.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewing Editor Comments:

      In the discussion with the reviewers, two points were underlined as very important:

      (1) Knocking down Ahyc and other enzymes in the SAM methylation pathway may give very distinct phenotypes. Generalising the importance of "SAM methyaltion" only by Ahcy-RNAi is a bit cautious. The authors should be aware of this issue and probably mention it in the Discussion part.

      We are aware of this weakness and have addressed it in a much more detailed discussion of the limitations of our study in the 6th paragraph of the Discussion.

      (2) Sample sizes should be indicated in the Figure Legends. Replicate numbers on the RNAseq are important - were these expression levels/changes seen more than once?

      Sample sizes are shown as scatter plots with individual values wherever possible and all graphs are supplemented with S1_Data table with raw data. The RNAseq data have already been described in detail in our previous paper (doi.org/10.1371/journal.pbio.3002299), but we agree with the reviewers that we should describe the necessary details again here. The replicate numbers for RNAseq data were added to figure legends, the TPM values for the selected genes shown in figures are in S1_Data and new S4_Data file with complete RNAseq data (TPM and DESeq2) was added to this revised version.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Major points:

      (1) Please provide sample sizes in the legends rather than in a supplementary table.

      Sample sizes are shown either as scatter plots with individual values or added to figure legends now.

      (2) More details in the methods section are needed:

      For hemocyte counting, are sessile and circulating hemocytes measured?

      We counted circulating hemocytes (upon infection, most sessile hemocytes are released into the circulation). While for metabolomics all hemocyte types were included, for hemocyte counting we were mainly interested in lamellocytes. Therefore, we counted them 20 hours after infection, when most of the lamellocytes from the first wave are fully differentiated but still mostly in circulation, as they are just starting to adhere to the wasp egg. This was added to the Methods section.

      How were levels of methionine and adenosine used in ex vivo cultures selected? This is alluded to in lines 158-159, but no references are provided.

      The concentrations are based on measurements of actual hemolymph concentrations in wild-type larvae in the case of methionine, and in the case of adenosine, we used a slightly higher concentration than measured in the adgf-a mutant to have a sufficiently high concentration to allow adenosine to flow into the hemocytes. This is now added to the Methods section.

      Minor points:

      Response to all minor points:  Thank you, errors has now been fixed.

      (1) Line 186 - spell out MTA - 5-methylthioadenosine.

      (2) Lines 196-212 (and elsewhere) - spelling out cystathione rather than using the abbreviation CTH is recommended because the gene cystathione gamma-lyase (Cth) is also discussed in this paragraph. Using the full name of the metabolite will reduce confusion.

      We rather used cystathionine γ-lyase as a full name since it is used only three times while CTH many more times, including figures.

      (3) Figure 2 - supplement 2: please include scale bars.

      (4) Line 303 - spelling error: "trabsmethylation" should be "transmethylation".

      (5) Line 373 - spelling error: "higer" should be "higher".

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      For the RNAseq data, it's unclear whether the gene expression data in Figures 2 and 4 include biological replicates, so it's unclear how much weight we should place on them.

      The replicate numbers for RNAseq data were added to figure legends, the TPM values for the selected genes shown in figures are in S1_Data and new S4_Data file with complete RNAseq data (TPM and DESeq2) was added to this revised version.

      The representation of these data is also a weakness: Figure 2 shows measurements of transcripts per million, but we don't know what would be high or low expression on this scale.

      We have added the actual TPM values for each cell in the RNAseq heatmaps in Figure 2, Figure 2-figure supplement 3, and Figure 4 to make them more readable. Although it is debatable what is high or low expression, to at least have something for comparison, we have added the following information to the figure legends that only 20% of the genes in the presented RNAseq data show expression higher than 15 TPM.

      Figure 4 is intended to show expression changes with treatment, but expression changes should be shown on a log scale (so that increases and decreases in expression are shown symmetrically) and should be normalized to some standard level (such as uninfected lamellocytes).

      The bars in Figure 4C,D show the fold change (this is now stated in the y-axis legend) compared to 0 h (=uninfected) Adk3 samples - the reason for this visualization is that we wanted to show (1) the differences in levels between Adk3 and Adk2 and in levels between Ak1 and Ak2, respectively, and at the same time (2) the differences between uninfected and infected Adk3 and Ak1. In our opinion, these fold change differences are also much more visible in normal rather than log scale.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) It might be interesting to test how general this finding would be. How about Bacterial or fungal infection? The authors may also try genetic activation of immune pathways, e.g. Toll, Imd, JAK/STAT.

      Although we would also like to support our results in different systems, we believe that our results are already strong enough to propose the final hypothesis and publish it as soon as possible so that it can be tested by other researchers in different systems and contexts than the Drosophila immune response.

      (2) How does the metabolic pathway get activated? Enzyme activity? Transporters? Please test or at least discuss the possible mechanism.

      The response is already provided above in the Reviewer #3 (Public review) section.

      (3) The authors might test overexpression or genetic activation of the SAM transmethylation pathway.

      Although we agree that this would potentially strengthen our study, it may not be easy to increase the activity of the SAM transmethylation pathway - simply overexpressing the enzymes may not be enough, the regulation is primarily through the utilization of SAM by methyltransferases and there are hundreds of them and they affect numerous processes. 

      (4) Supplementation of adenosine to the Ahcy-RNAi larvae would also support their conclusion.

      Again, this is not an easy experiment, dietary supplementation would not work, direct injection of adenosine into the hemolymph would not last long enough, adenosine would be quickly removed.

      (5) It is interesting to test genetically the requirement of some transporters, especially for gb, which is upregulated upon infection.

      Although this would be an interesting experiment, it is beyond the scope of this study; we did not aim to study the role of the SAM transmethylation pathway itself or its regulation, only its overall activity and its role in adenosine production.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Wang et al. developed a set of optical sensors to monitor Rab protein activity. Their investigation into Rab activity in dendritic spines during structural long-term plasticity (sLTP) revealed sustained Rab10 inactivation (>30min) and transient Rab4 activation (~5 min). Through pharmacological and genetic manipulation to constitutively activate or inhibit Rab proteins, the authors discovered that Rab10 negatively regulates sLTP and AMPA receptor trafficking, while Rab4 positively influences sLTP but only during the transient phase. These optical sensors provide new tools for studying Rab activity in cell biology and neurobiology. The distinct kinetics and functions of Rab proteins are important for understanding synaptic plasticity. However, there are some concerns regarding result inconsistencies within this manuscript and with prior work.

      Strengths:

      (1) The introduction of a series of novel sensors that can address numerous questions in Rab biology.<br /> (2) The use of multiple methods to manipulate Rab proteins to reveal the roles of Rab10 and Rab4 in LTP.<br /> (3) The discovery of Rab4 activation and Rab10 inhibition with different kinetics during sLTP, correlating with their functional roles in the transient (Rab4) and both transient and sustained (Rab10) phases of sLTP.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The discrepancy between spine phenotype and sLTP potential with Rab10 perturbation remains unexplained (refer to previous Weakness #4). The basal state is the outcome of many activity-dependent processes that are physiologically relevant. It is also unclear why different preparations would yield different results. These can be experimentally addressed, and it is at least important to highlight and discuss the discrepancies.<br /> (2) In the response, the authors estimated that the bleed-through from mEGFP-Rab is ~3% and the red channel signal from FRET changes is ~20%. The context of these percentages is unclear. Are they percentages of the total signal in the red channel, or does 3% refer to 3% of the green channel signal? Additionally, there is no explanation of how these numbers were estimated.<br /> (3) The changes in the fEPSP slope in response to theta burst stimulation (a decrease followed by a gradual increase) differ from prior publications (e.g. PMID: 1359925, 3967730, 19144965, 20016099). The explanation of these differences due to different conditions in response to Reviewer's recommendation #6 does not seem sufficient.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study examines the roles of Rab10 and Rab4 proteins in structural long-term potentiation (sLTP) and AMPA receptor (AMPAR) trafficking in hippocampal dendritic spines using various different methods and organotypic slice cultures as the biological model.<br /> The paper shows that Rab10 inactivation enhances AMPAR insertion and dendritic spine head volume increase during sLTP, while Rab4 supports the initial stages of these processes. The key contribution of this study is identifying Rab10 inactivation as a previously unknown facilitator of AMPAR insertion and spine growth, acting as a brake on sLTP when active. Rab4 and Rab10 seems to be playing opposing roles, suggesting a somewhat coordinated mechanism that precisely controls synaptic potentiation, with Rab4 facilitating early changes and Rab10 restricting the extent and timing of synaptic strengthening.

      Strengths:

      The study combines multiple techniques such as FRET/FLIM imaging, pharmacology, genetic manipulations and electrophysiology to dissect the roles of Rab10 and Rab4 in sLTP. The authors developed highly sensitive FRET/FLIM-based sensors to monitor Rab protein activity in single dendritic spines. This allowed them to study the spatiotemporal dynamics of Rab10 and Rab4 activity during glutamate uncaging induced sLTP. They also developed various controls to ensure the specificity of their observations. For example, they used a false acceptor sensor to verify the specificity of the Rab10 sensor response.

      This study reveals previously unknown roles for Rab10 and Rab4 in synaptic plasticity, showing their opposing functions in regulating AMPAR trafficking and spine structural plasticity during LTP.

      Weaknesses:

      In the first round of revision I raised these points:

      (1) In sLTP, the initial volume of stimulated spines is an important determinant of induced plasticity. To address changes in initial volume and those induced by uncaging, the authors present Extended Data Figure 2. In my view, the methods of fitting, sample selection, or both may pose significant limitations for interpreting the overall results. While the initial spine size distribution for Rab10 experiments spans ~0.1-0.4 fL (with an unusually large single spine at the upper end), Rab4 spine distribution spans a broader range of ~0.1-0.9 fL. If the authors applied initial size-matched data selection or used polynomial rather than linear fitting, panels a, b, e, f, and g might display a different pattern. In that case, clustering analysis based on initial size may be necessary to enable a fair comparison between groups-not only for this figure but also for main Figures 2 and 3.

      - The authors responded to this point as follows: For sensor uncaging experiments, we usually uncaged glutamate at large mushroom spines because we need to have a good signal-to-noise ratio. We just happen to choose these spines with different initial sizes for Rab4 sensor and Rab10 sensor uncaging experiments.

      Even if they happen to choose these spine sizes, it is possible to compare only those that match in size. This does not require any additional experiments. Because of this, I do not find this response satisfactory.

      (2) Another limitation is the absence of in vivo validation, as the experiments were performed in organotypic hippocampal slices, which may not fully replicate the complexity of synaptic plasticity in an intact brain, where excitatory and inhibitory processes occur concurrently. High concentrations of MNI-glutamate (4 mM in this study) are known to block GABAergic responses due to its antagonistic effect on GABA-A receptors, thereby precluding the study of inhibitory network activity or connectivity, which is already known to be altered in organotypic slice cultures.

      - I found the Authors following response reasonable and useful:

      We appreciate the reviewer's comments and would like to clarify that we have conducted experiments in acute slices for LTP using conditional Rab10 knockout (Fig. 4k, 4l), and we obtained similar results. Additionally, we have recently published findings on the behavioral deficits observed in heterozygous Rab10 knockout mice (PubMed 37156612). These studies further support our conclusions and provide additional context for our findings.