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    1. What the team should report

      Even ignoring the confidence interval thing, I feel like there's a right answer here, and the right answer is just to report the entire data set that you use for evaluation. I feel like the null hypothesis should be that you report everything and you need a reason to leave out the 11 cars with an exact training match. Comparing the matched records shows that it's not training data leakage, and cars with identical feature match in the training data don't necessarily have the same label.

      Imagine you go up to your boss and you're like, "Hey, our model might do 87.8% good, and it might do 86.2% good, and this is with slightly different evaluation settings, which I don't really have a good concrete reason why I excluded some for the second statistic." I feel like you should just make a claim, state your uncertainty (ideally, quantitatively with error bars), and then take responsibility for the claim.

    2. Two drifts to catch early. A student who starts improving the model, adding model_year or changing the neighbor count, has left the reporting question; the lab is about which cars a score describes, and a model change needs new predictions and its own evaluation rows. A student who asks AI to repeat the supplied arithmetic needs a reason that recount bears on the proposal, since the counts are given and correct.

      Probably no one is going to be this dumb, and your staff are smart enough to call out either of these proposals as bs

    1. La pseudociencia y la superstici´on no son nuevas. Han estado con nosotros tanto tiem- po como hemos sido humanos. Pero la diferencia entre ciencia y pseudociencia no es simplemente la presencia o ausencia de “magia”. Es una cuesti´on de m´etodo, de c´omo aproximarse a la verdad.

      Me parece interesante porque muestra que la diferencia entre ciencia y pseudociencia está en la forma de buscar la verdad. La ciencia se basa en pruebas, evidencias y métodos que permiten comprobar lo que se afirma

  2. agencyai.mit.edu agencyai.mit.edu
    1. You can ask it to calculate, inspect records, trace code, or question an interpretation.

      This sounds like you want the human to plan out exactly what computation to do and then asks the AI to do it. I feel like it's somewhat valid to just ask the AI the investigation question and then prompt based on what it gives you back.

    2. After your first look, how convinced are you by the proposed method? What is your judgment based on?

      I don't know if this is intended, but my first reaction to whether or not I would trust this paper didn't actually involve opening up the paper at all. It just involved going to Google Scholar and looking at where the paper was published and seeing that it has 1100 citations. I think if it was published in a good conference in 2021 and it has that many citations, it's probably trustworthy.

    3. delegation scenario

      What is the delegation scenario?

      Edit: Oh, I see now. It refers to step 4. I don't think we should call it the delegation scenario. It's kind of unclear.

    4. Why did you use AI or work without it? If you used AI, show one exchange and explain how your checks affected what you did next.

      Again, there's no way that you're going to allow people to not use AI here, right?

    5. besides the session transcript

      I don't think the teammate should read the session transcript. When you communicate results, I think you should be the meat proxy between your LLM and the person you are communicating to. Ideally, they would be unable to tell that you used an LLM at all

    6. Your goal is to learn the method well enough to explain it without notes or recommend a model for a team to use. Choose one goal.

      I feel like the goal should just be to recommend a model for the team to use, and what you're looking for is that the student should try to understand the model well. Though I think this also overlaps strongly with scenario 2, so you could delete it.

    7. Name one part of your chosen investigation you might need help understanding, and explain how that could affect your approach.

      What does this mean? Need help understanding in what way?

    8. Your job is to decide which accuracy results the team should report and how to describe them.

      To me, when I see 87.8% and 86.2% so close together, I want to calculate the error bars on each of the individual accuracy scores (e.g. like the 95% Wilson confidence interval). If the error bars are on the order of 1% already just from re-sampling the data, then I personally wouldn't spend all that time trying to figure out which accuracy score to report, and I would just report either one of them with the error bars included, since it's just a difference of noise anyways.

    9. What the supplied results can support Use the supplied binary labels in your conclusions. The packet has no numeric MPG measurements. The development set is available for inspection and model comparisons. The project has no untouched test set, so report comparisons as exploratory development results. A higher development accuracy supports a comparison on these rows under the recorded settings. It does not establish a causal relationship between a feature and fuel economy, performance on present-day cars, or the value of using the model for a purchasing decision.

      I feel like we can delete this text. This should be common sense for the student / something that staff can catch during checkoffs if e.g. they claim a causal relationship or something, and it's not directly related to the data description.

    10. finds the closest training car

      so it's a 1-NN model (k=1). Might be good to just state that directly.

      Edit: Oh, I see. There is a flag to change the value of k. I think this should be clarified up front.

    11. Each feature is scaled by its training-set standard deviation so its numeric units do not alone determine the distance.

      Does this just mean that each feature is normalized, or do you not subtract the mean?

    12. Read what the model does and the data description.

      Don't hyperlink here. It makes it seem like it's going to open up a new external page or tab

    1. he labeled points (1/k, (A_0)e), (0, A_0), and (-1/k, (A_0)/e). The second graph is of when k<0 and with the labeled points (-1/k, (A_0)e), (0, A_0), and (1/k, (A_0)/e)." src="/@api/deki/files/12238/fig_6.8.4.jpg">

      Found the information for the graphs previously shown.

    1. Single-blind: Only researcher knows who is being assigned to what group. Double-blind: Both the researcher and the participants don't know which group the participants will be put into.

    2. A random sample is a subset of a larger population in which every member of the population has an equal chance of being selected. With random assignment, all participants have an equal chance of being assigned to either group.

    3. Longitudinal research: A research design in which data-gathering is administered repeatedly over an extended period of time. Very informative, but incredible time and financial investment. Sometimes, both participants and researcher cannot see these projects to their end. High attrition rate (reduction in the number of research participants due to dropouts)

    4. Naturalistic Observation is where the researcher will observe the subjects' behavior in its natural environment. Observer bias is a major problem in this type of research, where the subjects might change their behavior just because they are being watched.

    1. It is the process of telling a story about yourself that draws on the shared cultural story archetypes which creates and maintains a shared identity.

      When I think of community I think about having shared identity like this quote suggests. That it is more about shared experiences than anything else.

    2. The manifestations of this are that I take pride in showing people around the city. I feel slighted when people say horrible things about it. I feel at home whenever I hear a Geordie (Newcastle) accent (despite not having one myself). And so on.

      Can people still be part of the community even if they aren't proud of it like the author is? I feel like even if you aren't proud of it what surrounds you really influences who you are.

    3. It must be able to explain why “community” is different from other social groups — such as “society”, “family” or just a group of people.

      I think this point is interesting. I believe that even a group of people can be your community or your family can be part of it since they create a sense of belonging.

    4. You will never hear someone in this context say that “community” is a thing that can be ignored or should be feared. And you will, almost never, hear people say what they mean by “community”.

      This is an interesting perspective that I have never heard before. I can see how community can be misused for bad. It kind of reminds me of how people fall into cults or bad leadership because they are lonely and promised the sense of community.

    1. ederland moet binnen de Europese Unie werken aan een buitenlandbeleid dat nietafhankelijk is van één grootmacht, maar inzet op het spreiden van macht, gelijkwaardigheiden meer internationale samenwerking

      Nederland moet aktief eraan werken, om buitenlands beleid een Europeese competentie te maken.

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    1. We can see how widely the half-lives for these substances vary. Knowing the half-life of a substance allows us to calculate the amount remaining after a specified time. We can use the formula for radioactive decay: (4.6.4)A⁡(t)=A0⁡eln⁡(0.5)T⁢t(4.6.5)A⁡(t)=A0⁡eln⁡(0.5)⁢tT(4.6.6)A⁡(t)=A0⁡(eln⁡(0.5))tT(4.6.7)A⁡(t)=A0⁡(12)tT

      Why are equation 4.6.4 and 4.6.5 the same?

    1. Listen to Kevin Stoller

      Kevin's discussion of learning environments was very helpful. I agree with having your own space to interact, collaborate, and work together. Also, I liked the discussion about how your desk is placed in your classroom. and on having enough room to walk between students' desks. It is a must-do. The reason is that I have been in so many classrooms, while subbing, and I can definitely tell a difference. And the one thing I like about subbing is being in the room where the students can see you, and you can see them. It makes it much easier to see what they are actually doing.

    2. Room Arrangement: Middle & High School pa

      This was very helpful for arranging your classroom. The one I liked was the table arrangement. for high school. because it allows students to work in groups in the classroom rather than move their desks closer together.

    3. Listen to two HS teachers discuss how desk placement plays a role in classroom management

      I like this video. It is a great discussion on how to arrange your desk in the classroom.

    1. The response begins

      As a reader, I feel like I start entering into the timeline and technical component without really understanding the context or what the real issues of concern are.

      Therefore I would suggest putting in as a second slide some context before you go into 'The response begins"

      I suggest the context cover:

      First, I think you need a new slide something simple that helps the reader to understand the problem that satellite damage assessments solve, their limitations, and why that poses challenges to responders. For example, what used to happen after an earthquake (before we had these type of assessments)? What do these assessments help with (ie. to determine where to deploy SAR, potential people in need humanitarian assistance)? What are the downsides of satellite damage assessments (ie. foreshadow why you can have assessments that come up with such different levels of building damage, or why it might show a building damaged when it's not), And therefore why is it a challenge for humanitarian's that there are so many assessments now?

      2) You need to briefly explain what the Centre's role was in Venezuela (later you reference a 'viewer') and its connection to Copernicus EMS. Otherwise you go straight into Copernicus and the reader doesn't understand why.

    2. For evaluators: keep testing this methodology across different crises, and build the system that makes it routine: a required specification for contributed products (analysed extent, metadata, a common building base) and a standing way for providers to contribute into a shared space, so that combining and evaluating starts the day the first product arrives rather than weeks later.

      I didn't really understand this one, but as long as it's using language that evaluators understand that's fine.

    3. (three of the six reach a Spearman ρ of 0.7 or more against the Copernicus EMS ordering)

      maybe put in the technical brief unless you think this will be widely understood.

    4. and it needs a shared picture of who has looked where to work.

      ? Meaning this is what we provided through the 'viewer' that can put all the assessments together?

    5. During this response, an ad hoc viewer our team stood up within days let responders see who had looked where. It filled part of the gap, not all of it, and nothing had planned for it.

      This feels like it comes out of nowhere and it needs some clarity eg. "who had looked where" - meaning responders to see what satellite data was available? Part of what gap and what does 'nothing had planned for it'.

      Perhaps this needs to be part of the beginning context - because this is the first time we're seeing what role the Centre had this.

    6. The conclusion at the bottom of the graph is good and should be its own box to the side. Also does using the assessments then help to overcome the issue raised in the slide above that ranking by neighborhood only works where it's in an area already known to be damaged? If so, I think it should be clearer that by using the assessments together you can use it not only within a neighborhood to identify with greater confidence what buildings are damaged, but also in areas where you may not have an EMT deployed yet (presumably).

      Postscript :) I see you then go back into the neighborhoods with the next slide.

    7. Ranking orders that zone; it does not find one, and it never names a building.

      This didn't make sense to me, so perhaps it needs to be reworded.

    8. One caveat carries through: this holds inside an area already known to be badly hit.

      This part of the answer is good but then the caveat confused me - meaning we couldn't say the same for another area where EMS weren't on the ground verifying?

    9. The Answer and the blurb at the bottom of the graph "Even on the most generous reading..." Is good. It needs to be its own box and pulled out. The answer is too buried. I want to see the answer and analysis before I look at the graph - it helps the reader to understand it.

    10. It took me a few reads to get this and I wonder if it's just a placement issue. I wonder if this would be better placed in the next section after the questions and before the baseline - meaning the first step is looking at where the assessments can be compared in relation to where Copernicus was operating.

      I would also suggest deleting "manual mapping on very-high resolution imagery, not modeling). I don't think it's necessary to understand the story and so anywhere you can cut technical detail I would.

    11. A stack of assessments of the same disaster: PDFs, shapefiles, dashboards. Different methods, different extents, and answers from 9,635 to 163,225 damaged buildings, a factor of seventeen. Which do you act on?

      This is great, but give a bit more info as to why this is hard for humanitarians.

      The S&R audience probably have a pretty good idea, but for those providing these assessments giving them a clear picture of why this is difficult - the types of decisions that have to be made and why having different assessments makes that harder – will be very helpful and eye opening to them. You want to give this audience the "ah-ha moment" now I get it why this would be hard.

    12. Two further products arrived in the same window but are not evaluated here: HOT's fAIr, an AI-plus-crowd product that publishes no analysed extent, so its misses and false alarms cannot be counted fairly; and DISHA (UN Global Pulse), which is licence-restricted and covers less than half of the shared strip.

      This is quite technical, you could perhaps streamline to "Two further products arrived in the same window but are not evaluated here" and then put the note more detailed explanation in the methodology. The fuller explanation interrupts the flow.

    13. relating detected damage to debris tonnage

      Not sure I understand this? Meaning it detects where there is debris tonnage or the data that comes from it giving an estimate of debris tonnage based on the damage?

    14. At the end here, suggest a short line on what the purpose of this GitHub is - is to explain how to make use of it operationally? This opening slide is like the summary so the reader needs to know up front where it's going.

    1. Ismene. He is stronger than we are, Antigone. He is the kmg. And the whole citv is with him. Thousands and thousands of them, swarming thr

      The fear that Creon put in everyone including his own family is immense. Fear of punishment , death imprisonment is definitely great example of that power and control that Creon has over his peoples

    2. ANTIGONE,her hands clasped round her knees, sits on thetop step. The THREE GuARDSsit on the steps, in a smallgroup, playing cards. The Cm.us stands on the top step.EuRYDICEsits on the top step, ;ust left of center, knitting.The NuRsE sits on the second step, left of EURYDICE.lsMENEstands in front of arch, left, facing HAEMON,whostand,s left of her. CREONsits in the chair at right end ofthe t'able, his arm over the shoulder of his PAGE,who sitson the stool beside his chair. The MESSENGERis leaningagainst the downstage portal of the right arch.The curtain rises slowly; then the CHORUS turns andmoves downstage.

      Immediately, the stage directions describe where each character is positioned, establishing their relationships and the tension behind the scene. Creon is seated with his Page, which shows his authority and control. Meanwhile, Antigone is sitting apart from the others. The Guards are playing cards which creates this casual feeling, contrasting with the more serious situation surrounding Antigone.

    3. m terrified. I'm so afraid that, even though it is daylight, you'll still try to bury Polynices. Antigone, little sister, we all want to make you happy- Haemon, and Nurse, and I, and Puff whom you love. We love you, we are alive, we need you. And you remember what Polynices was like. He was our brother, of course. But he's dead; and he never loved you. He was a bad brother. He was like an enemy in the house. He never thought of you. Why should you think of him? What if his soul does have to wander through endless time with- out rest or peace? Don't try something that is beyond your strength. You are always defying the world, but you're only a girl, after all. Stay at home tonight. Don't try to do it, I beg you. It's Creon's doi

      Antigone is being warned of Creon's overreaching power and might and reminded by her sister Ismene how much she is loved . She is told not to do "something that is beyond your strength". Unfortunately she chooses to go against the voice of reason , rules and reality.

    1. I’m not sure a genre is a destination so much as a way of thinking, a tendency of inquiry.

      I personally like this because genre isn't just a type of writing that we read. It shows how we can change the ways we read something and think about what we are reading. It helps us as reader and writers think about what we want to explore.

    2. he had read Faulkner’s novel three times and still didn’t understand it. Faulkner said, “Read it four times.” Some pieces just aren’t going to be meaningful to you.

      Not every writing you will read will make sense to everyone. When you read something more than once you still won't be able to connect to it and that is okay.

    3. Short story writers study poetry to learn form and infuse their sentences with sound and rhythm. Playwrights read memoir and nonfiction to hear how different people speak, and for inspiration and content.

      This demonstrates how writers improve their writing by looking into all kinds of writing. The short story writers use poetry when looking to understand sounds and rhythms of short stories. This also shows how different types of writing can inspire you.

    1. the expensive delicate ship that must have seen Something amazing, a boy falling out of the sky, Had somewhere to get to and sailed calmly on.

      In life, people move on, even when horrible atrocities or cruel things happen in the world- people move on.

    1. Autor(es) / Professor(a) Maria Cristina Komatsu Braga Massarollo e Mariana Cristina Augusto Belver Ana Aparecida de Souza Santana Gonçalez e Demerson Gabriel Bussoni Jane Bezerra dos Santos, Marcia Regina Costa de Brito, Thiago Jhonata de Oliveira Machado

      AJUSTE- Está faltando o Professor João Gregório Neto que é o coordenador do curso, na parte dos Autores.

    1. What you’re actually doing to narrow your topic is making at least one aspect of your topic more specific.

      This sentence helped me realize that narrowing a topic is important itself.

    1. Although the Spaniards believed pure Spanish blood (sangre puro) was most the noble, in practice Spanish-American society became quite mixed as Spanish men and native women had Mestizo children.

      This junxtapostion is quite facinating tome, how can you think less of a group of people but also procreate with them?

    2. Because relatively few Spanish women emigrated to the colonies, especially in the early decades, many conquistadors took native women as wives and mistresses.

      This is a huge part of why a lot of minorities have spansih blood with out knowing where exactly it came from. It's rare to find blood that wasn't miuxed with theirs in the heavily affected conqured areas.

    3. The Spanish word for gentleman, Hidalgo, literally means “son of something” (hijo de algo), suggesting that common men could become noble by acquiring wealth, lands, and status as a conquistador.

      I am Mexican so I find this part extremely interesting! I know many families who are also Mexican and have this last name, I wonder if the procees in obtaing it had to do with the colonization.

    1. For its part, symbolic interactionism would focus on how armed robbers make such decisions as when and where to rob someone and on how their interactions with other criminals reinforce their own criminal tendencies. It would also investigate how victims of armed robbery behave when confronted by a robber. To reduce armed robbery, it would advocate programs that reduce the opportunities for interaction among potential criminal offenders, for example, after-school programs that keep at-risk youths busy in “conventional” activities so that they have less time to spend with youths who might help them get into trouble.

      I will be doing my own resreach on this afterwrds!

    2. As these comments might suggest, functionalism views social problems as arising from society’s natural evolution. When a social problem does occur, it might threaten a society’s stability, but it does not mean that fundamental flaws in the society exist. Accordingly, gradual social reform should be all that is needed to address the social problem.

      The way I view it is that there is a social structure in place in a society, and when that structure fails, we will see a rise in social issues. It's almost like an experiment. For context, the. Social structure of a society is the experiment and that experiment fails when there are social problems that just grow and grow to the point where it is hard to ignore and we've seen this throughout history, and we've seen how evolutions happen and revolutions happens because let's say the issue got too big to the point where. The masses decided no more but this makes me question is it possible for societies to install a structure that? Minimizes social issues to the fullest extent?

    3. People construct their roles as they interact; they do not merely learn the roles that society has set out for them. As this interaction occurs, individuals negotiate their definitions of the situations in which they find themselves and socially construct the reality of these situations. In so doing, they rely heavily on symbols such as words and gestures to reach a shared understanding of their interaction.

      This is really interesting! my first time learning about this concept

    4. f this cultural standard did not exist, far fewer American women would suffer from eating disorders than do now. Because it does exist, even if every girl and woman with an eating disorder were cured, others would take their places unless we could somehow change this standard. Viewed in this way, eating disorders are best understood as a public issue, not just as a personal trouble.

      and with social media its just getting far more worse!

    5. The high US unemployment rate stemming from the severe economic downturn that began in 2008 provides a telling example of the point Mills was making. Millions of people lost their jobs through no fault of their own. While some individuals are undoubtedly unemployed because they are lazy or lack good work habits, a more structural explanation focusing on lack of opportunity is needed to explain why so many people were out of work. If so, unemployment is best understood as a public issue rather than a personal trouble.

      interestingly enough about 47% of Americans work multiple jobs today

    6. it is easy to think that their problems are theirs alone, and that they and other individuals with the same problems are entirely to blame for their difficulties.

      I think that it's more than us viewing it aa that's the individual's problem alone. I feel like when. We are in society where certain things that wouldn't be considered social norms are. frowned upon on and when people act against societal norms, they're actually dehumanized for it and I think it's so easy for us to just. attack one another rather than being compassionate because there could be so many reasons on why a person decided to commit an act, or why a person Is unemployed, or may be in poor health, drink too much alcohol but focusing specifically on drinking too much alcohol and committing crimes. A person's behavior most of the time has intent. A person doesn't simply in most cases, do something just to do it. There's a reason, let's say for example someone got caught stealing groceries or this is a very well known one that I see all the time, but people steal baby formula. There is one group of people who says that it's wrong and that it's not fair to, people who actually pay for these formulas. And there are other people who will say that well”he person probably couldn't afford getting their baby formula and they wanted to ensure that their baby had something to eat”. So when you're dealing with these two arguments, it could be. let's say someone is an alcoholic. They're usually frowned upon, but we don't know what it is that the alcohol person may be experiencing mentally. And they may be using it as a coping mechanism. However, a lot of people don't really care to aknowledge a different perspective. They just go off on what they believe in and I think that causes more harm. And good, because if you're shaming someone for doing. A crime. Such as stealing or drinking alcohol without really taking the time to understand why The person did it. Then that itself will create more social problems.

    1. he actions of individuals and groups may also make a difference. Many people have public-service jobs or volunteer in all sorts of activities involving a social problem: they assist at a food pantry, they help clean up a riverbank, and so forth

      absolutly! getting involved with your community is SO important!

    2. An important source of change in social problems is protest by a social change group or movement.

      We (young adults) must first learn how to properly organize, I personally enjoy protesting!

    3. lthough social problems are indeed persistent, it is also true that certain problems are less serious now than in the past. Change is possible. As just one of many examples, consider the conditions that workers face in the United States. As Chapter 12 discusses, many workers today are unemployed, have low wages, or work in substandard and even dangerous workplaces. Yet they are immeasurably better off than a century ago, thanks to the US labor movement that began during the 1870s

      Although this is the case its important to note that the rights we currently have from the efforts of those before us does not mean those very rights can not be taken from us at any given moment. which is why people need to involved in their communities, and politics even if they may not want to, rights although viewed as inalienable cant be taken away.

    1. Researchers are often passionate about their work, but they must take care not to let the findings they expect and even hope to uncover affect how they do their research.

      I haven't released my survey yet so this is advice to me!

    2. Observational research, also called field research, is a staple of sociology. Sociologists have long gone into the field to observe people and social settings, and the result has been many rich descriptions and analyses of behavior in juvenile gangs, bars, urban street corners, and even whole communities.

      I actually learned this in psychology and after really conceptualizing the idea of observational studies I realized that I subconsciously do this in public. Not in the sense where I'm like collecting data, which I do sometimes I think to myself I'm like “How many white cars can I count? In the next minute” or “ How many people are wearing this specific color?” Things like that. Although I'm not going out of my way to conduct a experiment to write a paper on it's just so interesting to me to do when I'm bored and in public but in the most normal way possible.

    3. The researchers then determined the percentage of men in each group who committed repeated domestic violence during the next six months and found that those who were arrested had the lowest rate of recidivism, or repeat offending (Sherman & Berk, 1984).

      Although it is good that we see a decrease in repeated violence against women is actually sad, if you think about it, in the perspective in which it had to the intervention of a authority to stop the violence. This for some reason reminds me of the bystander effect and how much it’s a threat to community.

    4. Survey Many people can be included. If given to a random sample of the population, a survey’s results can be generalized to the population. Large surveys are expensive and time consuming. Although much information is gathered, this information is relatively superficial.

      I'm currently using surveys in my research on Gender, higher education, and economic outcome!

    1. I'm interested in Pyrocystis biology and related research, and in search of recent published papers I found this article. The math may be intriguing, but the biology link they implied is flawed at the very beginning due to a lack of fundamental understanding of phycology. The most obvious one in my opinion is "we model the chloroplast as a small, perfectly absorbing sphere at the center of the cell", which literally is an example of spherical chicken in a vacuum. Plastid is commomly being pushed to the surface of plant cell by the central vacuole, rather than staying at the center. This is an important evolution-driven adaptation to maximize photosynthesis, as chloroplast remodeling is highly regulated in most autotrophic eukaryotes. For Pyrocystis lunula, the circadian and light-induced remodeling of plastid is a well documented phenomenon. Pyrocystis fusiformis also shows circadian plastid movement, in which they retract filament-like plastid and expand bioluminescence-producing scintillons around dusk. The plastid of Pyrocystis is not small nor sphere nor at the center of the cell. These observations have actually been cited and summarized in the Introduction of this paper. It seems like the authors avoid this issue by ignoring it. I'm not sure if they were mislead by the photos they found, or they intentionally selected night phase photo in which the plastid was retracted around the nucleus (which appear to sit at the center that can be an artifact due to perspective). There are many if not all other aspects regarding dinoflagellate biology that's questionable. For example, they claimed that "In the turbulent ocean, microorganisms receive sunlight that is scattered and refracted from nearly all directions, while their random orientations within the flow further homogenize the light distribution", which is not backed up by proper ecological research citation. Vertical light intensity distribution in ocean along with many other metrics including nutrition, oxygen, salinity, and temperature are well-studied in marine ecology. The non-homogenized distribution of these factors drive vertical migration of planktons, especially dinoflagellates. Algae can also control their orientation in current by buoyancy shift and shape adaptation affecting fluid dynamics.

      Part of the study was about Chlamydomonas reinhardtii. I don't know much about green algae but I don't see much meaningful advancement comparing to the original PNAS paper, in which the authors already measured the focal length and refractive index of the cell. This math/physics paper only built pure math models/simulations and did not appreciate previous experiment measurements in their models. All these made their so-called "framework for understanding how cell shape influences the distribution of light in organisms" and even "offer a testable hypothesis for subcellular organization driven by optical advantages" less defensible to my view.

      Cell optics is an emerging subject that's not only drawing attention in organelle research but also a long-standing consideration in microscopy. It's indeed an important issue pending applied math and theoretical physics analysis, however, it's not properly addressed in this article to yield practical values. I love mathematics too and I'm glad to learn from mathematicians who share their thoughts on multidisciplinary topics, but I geniunely believe that mathematicians should restrain themselves from commenting complex systems they don't really understand. They should consult experts in the established field and respect others' previous work before building oversimplifying models without hand-on experience but idealized imagination and making misinformed claims bleeding into peer-reviewed archives. This is extra concerning in the LLM era, when AI can easily pick up lines from such publications to validate an inaccurate prompt.

    1. Once a social group succeeds in turning a condition or behavior into a social problem, it usually tries to persuade the government (local, state, and/or federal) to take some action—spending and policymaking—to address the problem

      I wish more young people did this more. what i mean is i wish constitutes would go to their representative more and express the social issues happening within their community

    2. . When the contemporary women’s movement began in the late 1970s, it soon focused on rape and sexual assault as serious crimes and as manifestations of women’s inequality. Thanks to this focus, rape and sexual assault eventually entered the public consciousness, views of these crimes began to change, and legal policymakers began to give them more attention. In short, sexual violence against women became a social problem.

      I remember I remember watching a video in which a. Congress member, I believe he was a member in the. Judicial branch, he had trial because a woman that had worked in his cabinet was being sexually assaulted and coerced. So they were in Congress and there was a whole trial. She was standing there, she had to represent herself. We had former President Biden, who was in the committee of people who was interviewing her and as I was watching the video. I forget the name of the video, I can't give you the specific year. But basically it's a group of men interviewing a woman who is coming to them, telling them that she has faced sexual abuse in her workspace and the way they were posing their questions. It was very interesting because the questions were insinuating that she was doing it for attention or someone was putting her up to. So policies are so important.

  3. drive.google.com drive.google.com
    1. If it no longer inspired Webster and hisassociates, it lived on in the minds of many farmers, artisans, factory workers,shopkeepers, and small-business owners, as well as in the beliefs of theprofessionals, artists, intellectuals, and other menbers of the lower and middleclasses.

      Progress to the proletariat is different than the progress of the capitalist.

    2. Turning theJeffersonian ideal on its head, this view makes instrumental values fundamentalto social progress, and relegates what formerly were considered primary, goal-setting values (justice, freedom, harmony, beauty, or self-fulfillment) to asecondaray status.

      This makes sense since tools are a significant turning point to human progress.

    3. The difference between the earlier Enlightenment conception of progressand that exemplified by Webster is largely attributable to the difference betweenthe groups they represented. Franklin, Jefferson, and the heroic generation offounding revolutionists constituted a distinct, rather unusual social class in thatfor a short time the same men possessed authority and power in most of itsforms: economic, social, political, and intellectual. The industrial capitalists forwhom Webster spoke were men of a very different stripe. They derived theirstatus from a different kind of wealth and power, and their conception ofprogress, like their economic and social aspirations, were correspondinglydifferent.

      The definition of progress changes with social class and political ideals.

    4. The new scientific knowledge andtechnological power was expected to make possible a comprehensiveimprovement in all the conditions of life - social, political, moral, and intellectualas well as material

      Considering humans are less plagued by disease and predators, id say we are making progress towards that cause.

    5. It assumes that history, or at least modernhistory, is driven by the steady, cumulative, and inevitable expansion of humanknowledge of and power over nature.

      This is a clear goal that we are making progress in, gaining knowledge about nature and holding the power of knowledge while expanding it.

    1. C. what counts as good AI use?

      I feel like this section would be better structured as like takeaways or claims about what counts as good AI use, and then bullets under those claims. I think A and B have clear stories (people are using AI for more work, and you shouldn't leave AI completely unsupervised), but I feel like after reading through section C I don't have a concrete answer to what coutns as good AI use or not. I think one of the takeaways is probably to be aware that you probably won't learn the things that you're delegating, since you don't go through the friction of solving those problems even if it's faster.

    2. Google Co-Scientist (Nature, 2026) extends delegation to literature review, hypothesis generation, and ranking at scale. Researchers still have to decide which results hold up and which to pursue.

      if you need to cut for time, I think this is probably mostly redundant with the OpenAI source. Though maybe you don't want to only talk about OpenAI haha

    3. Show one possible learning setting in the print era.

      I think it would actually be helpful if you tried to give a more comprehensive list of all the things that you prepare as an educator, and see what parts can be done using AI vs other mediums and what the tradeoffs are.

    4. run a trade poll. Which era would you prefer to learn in? What practice or tool would you import from another era, and what convenience would you give up?

      I think the phrasing isn't separate technology in each "era", more so like a growing bucket of technologies for education. Like in the "Internet era", people were definitely using all of the oral dialogue, print, and the Internet. And then for a given activity (e.g. 6.390 recitations), you can choose the materials, practices, feedback, constraints, and there's tradeoffs to using different technologies for each of them (where it's select all that apply, not necessarily choose one). Like for material, we print handouts, but also let students work on their iPad. We release written solutions but also have a TA explaining the solutions.

    5. the joke comparing unedited AI output to an AOL address on a business card. What is AOL? It helped millions of households get online in the 1990s, bundling access, email, and other services. The joke treats that old address as a sign that someone hasn’t kept up. I had to look up AOL to get it.

      I had to ask Claude to explain this joke to me. It might be too subtle

    6. f AI can help produce mathematics beyond what we could derive ourselves, what should we still learn to judge the result, use it, and decide what to investigate next?

      This applies beyond math for most AI outputs. How much should we try to understand, vs how much are we just satisfied with a verification? We should at least have a verification.

    7. the same question arises in research. OpenAI field report on eight agent-assisted scientific computing projects (2026) found that agents handled much of the routine engineering. Researchers spent more time defining correct behavior and deciding how to measure it.

      https://openai.com/index/research-acceleration-view-inside-openai/ openai more recently (5 days ago) released a cool report about how they use gpt internally, like what types of work has been handled by gpt and how that has evolved throughout the year. Section 3 has the relevant figures for you.

    1. Shakespeare's portrayal of love in this play goes beyond mere romantic infatuation. Instead, it delves into the complexities of love, including familial love, love at first sight, and the destructive power of love when it encounters societal barriers

    1. two major conditions of the validity of benchmark results

      Less reletad to the paper random thought: These evaluaiton practices are great but I wonder if what are the most popular ways to evaluate generalization of AI agents. Feels like interval evals (with non-contaminated data and complex problems from diverse domains) of frontier labs is still the standard. But this may become less and less scalable as people put everything into model training data, where data contamination is kind of unavoidable, semantically speaking.

    1. Agents succeed quickly and fail slowly.

      I suspect the underlying reason is largely because those tasks where the agent took longer are simply much harder in terms of cognitive demands. Therefore, I believe increasing the test time inference budget can yield satisfactory performance returns if scaled up cleverly, especially in a CL / RSI loop

    2. Guardrails can improve error recovery. A prominent failure mode occurs when models repeatedlyedit the same code snippet. The usual suspect for this behavior is an agent introducing a syntaxerror (e.g., incorrect indentation, extra parenthesis) via an errant edit. As discussed in Section 3, weadd an intervention to the edit logic that lets a modification apply only if it does not produce majorerrors. We compare this interface with the No edit and edit w/o linting alternatives in Figure 6.This intervention improves performance considerably (without linting, 15.0% ↓ 3.0).

      What about tasks for which we don't have environmental feedback that serve as guardrails? This is especially the case for non-verifiable tasks.

    3. thought and an action [62]

      Is ReAct necessarily the best paradigm? Looks like most agentic work focuses on this. I wonder what are the competitive alternatives out there, and what are the pros and cons.

    4. Context management.

      Can scale to large context size but how to most effectively manage the context such that critical information's loss rate is reduced as much as possible? Ideally, we should build AI agents that can be fine-tuned and select what it should rememeber selectively

    5. These deficits substantially hamper performance, motivating the need for anagent-computer interface (ACI), i.e., an abstraction layer between the LM agent and computer, toenhance the LM agent’s abilities in computer environments (Figure 1).

      How can we design the AI agents such that it can flexibly adapt to new repositories or any virtual information workflow to perform optimally given its available computational resources and inherent capabilities? Feels like self-evolving AI agent (in particular harnesses) is the only way to go as manual evaluation and adaption is not scalable, though occasional human feedback can help.

    1. Spice Mixes Recipes by Naomi Braeden [2017] Cooking With Spices - 100 Recipes for Blends Marinades and Sauces from Around the World by Mark C. Stevens [2017]

      added to Zotero 2026-09-11

      via u/Anxious_Increase_219 at https://old.reddit.com/r/CookbookLovers/comments/1wc9gyb/spice_blend_book/

      They also recommend:

      Also about spices and cooking with spices:

      • Culinary Herbs and Spices by Ben-Erik von Wyk [2013]

      • Beginner's Guide to Cooking with Spices by Joseph Veebe [2019]

      • Herb & Spice Companion - The Complete Guide to Over 100 Herbs & Spices by Lindsey Herman [2015]

      • Herbs & Spices, The Cooks' Reference by Jill Norman [2015]

      • Spice - Understand the Science of Spice Create Exciting New Blends and Revolutionize by Dr Stuart Farrimond [2018]

      • The Encyclopedia of Herbs, Spices, & Flavorings by Elisabeth Lambert Ortiz [1992]

    1. THE WASTE LAND

      The title The Waste Land is interesting because the poem has seasonal elements in it as we can see in the first lines of the poem. The seasons bring both growth and decay, but the title only focuses on the latter. The gods that we read about in the golden bough have similar elements to this poem with osiris being celebrated with sorrow and joy.

    2. In the Golden Borough, the article discusses the changing seasons and the death of vegetation. That is to say, the article speaks about how different cultures and religions have related concepts and ideas about their gods dying; when the god dies, the fertility and successful harvest go with them, meaning that the land that is left behind is barren and desolate; in other words, a wasteland.

    3. After reading the three sources we were provided, I believe that it's clear that Eliot didn't invent his title and actually lifted it straight out of the Grail tradition, where "the waste land" is essentially a fixed term for a specific kind of ruin. Malory uses those exact words: after a king is struck down, the land stops producing anything, and the text says plainly, "men call it... the waste land." So before a reader even opens Eliot's poem, the title is doing a citation's job. It is alluding that this modern work belongs to that older lineage of stories about a land gone barren because something at its center is broken. What I found interesting about this is that the phrase itself is build from two words doing specific work. In this case, "Waste" doesn't mean empty from the start, but rather it means used up, drained, and no longer able to produce what it once did. The use of the word "Land" means shared, common ground, and not one person's private situation. So the title is asserting something communal has been exhausted, not that one character is sad. In my opinion, thats a larger claim than a title like "London" or "1922" could ever make and I think that the sources back this up. Weston explains why a barren landscape gets tied to a person's condition in the first place—she says the tradition rests on a king's sickness being "sympathetically reflected on the land," meaning one figure's failure spreads outward and blights everything around him. Hence, Eliot's title borrows that logic and drops the individual king out of it, generalizing the wound to a whole era.

    4. THE WASTE LAND

      The title The Waste Land is strung on a thread of connection first to Weston's analysis of the Grail tradition and then to Frazer's The Golden Bough. In Weston's words, the physically barren nature of The Waste Land reflects the weakened and unstable condition of the Fisher King. It proves to be more than merely an empty or ruined landscape, but something possessing an almost-sentience. Weston describes the tightly intertwined relationship between the land and the king: when the ruler is wounded sick, or suffering from age, the land becomes infertile. When the hero finds success in his quest, the land becomes fertile once more. Weston references the latest edition of Frazer's The Golden Bough, tracing this nature-human connection back to an older ritual logic in which one singular life force affects humans, animals, and vegetable fertility. Frazer's influence on Weston's analysis is especially significant because the aforementioned ritual logic follows a distinct pattern of death and eventual rebirth through the symbol of a "Vegetation Deity" who dies and is revived. By titling his work The Waste Land, Eliot implies that the modern world is not dissimilar to the mythic Waste Land; both share spiritual and emotional qualities that leave the impression of emotional sterility. Eliot, however, departs from older ritual logic by moving away from a predictable, certain regeneration, introducing the question of whether or not a damaged civilization can ever reach the point of no return.

    5. THE WASTE LAND

      The word waste is decidedly different from many words with which it is used interchangeably, such as junk or trash. Generally, the latter two evoke the idea that something is not now, nor has it ever been, of value. Waste, on the contrary, is not always waste. Rather, waste is formed as a byproduct of a valuable reaction, and is itself likely composed of the leftovers of something that was once itself valuable. When one wastes food, for instance, it does not mean that the food was inedible, but rather that one simply chose not to eat it. Waste also enables people to recognize that though something may not be present now, just as a wasteland is evocative of an area in which nothing can grow, that does not mean the area has necessarily always been barren and desolate. In ritual to romance, Weston says "Therefore the written word had to be found. It has taken me some nine or ten years longer to complete the evidence, but the chain is at last linked up..." (1) By virtue of analyzing features of a certain story, Weston is able to bring in more evidence and link it to others. Eliot works in The Waste Land of post WWI, but he too acts as a sort of tailor, sewing up what once was into one distinct narrative, despite drawing on so many narratives of the past. The Waste Land is an endeavor of recognizing the components that were present before the waste. Furthermore, the story of the Grail itself speaks of the restoration of a Waste Land connected with the death of an unknown and unnamed knight. Gawain's quest to seek knowledge and understand the past, even as some aspects remain unclear, is a quest to restore the Waste Land. Eliot's is strikingly similar. Ultimately, the final consequence of Gawain and some forms of Perceval's quest is not necessarily to seek the grail for its own sake, but rather, the restoration of the land. Eliot's poem, however iconic, is just as valuable for its restoration of other works and myths as it is as a standalone work.

      Similarly, in the myth of Osiris, the God-King is killed and strewn into pieces. When Osiris is revived, he is no longer the divine king of Egypt, bringing unto the kingdom prosperity. Egypt itself was formed upon an oasis in an otherwise uninhabitable desert, a wasteland. However, Osiris is resurrected king of the dead. Eliot does much the same with the stories he tells. They do not necessarily return to public prominence, but they are bandaged and revived. They live on not as the art du jour, but nevertheless, their art is forever preserved in relics. Art brought purpose to humanity, bringing us from the Waste Land. Even as any one form of art becomes obsolete, it remains intrinsically valuable insofar as it influences in some nonlinear progression the art of today.

    6. THE WASTE LAND

      The title of this poem serves as a strong metaphor for destruction and death. In myth and legends the word "wasteland" would be talking about barren lands which are uninhabitable, along with this in multiple plays of these myths, the land would be something that would describe the emotions of gods and godesses. After reading the notes for the title it really does seem fitting in short, describing the entirety of the poem as a wasteland. The point of view is lost, and barren. Like a wasteland. But the poem itself talked about life, and growth, making the title seem ironic. Its most direct connection is with the Golden Bough where it explicitly shares its ideas about life and death. This is mirrored here. The relationship between all texts are interesting and can further our understanding of this poem.

    1. For threat intelligence investigators, sophistication has stopped being a reliable signal of who is behind an operation.

      From Ben Buchanan, "The Legend of Sophistication," "sophistication bears on the applicability and utility of the offense-defense balance in cyber operations, an area of both academic and policy debate." "Sophistication" is often an ill-defined term. I think in this case, "technically clever" would probably provide a better definition.

    2. The cybersecurity skills of AI models means that AI has collapsed the labor and tooling gap that used to separate well-resourced, state-sponsored operations from individual operators.

      In terms of tooling gap, there is some variability. While state-sponsored adversaries are generally better resourced, I would argue that some groups like "Salt Typhoon" and "Volt Typhoon" are very adept at living-off-the-land. And numerous other APTs are likely using open source and security tooling to great effect, so I would argue that their knowledge of how to utilize those tools has made them much more effective. And that, is where the gap is truly closing. Where an AI model can potentially walk you through an attack chain

    1. I, Pyramus, am not 0824  Pyramus, but Bottom the weaver. This will put them 0825  out of fear.

      The way I see it, Bottom is slightly dumb for insinuating both of these things. He wishes credit for the incredible role of Pyramus, yet wishes not for the women to weep at his death. By all details of Bottom's character, he should want the ladies to cry over his demise knowing that he is Bottom.

    2. I believe we must leave the killing out, 0818 15 when all is done.

      While Bottom is shown to be the most annoying out of all the actors, the other actors are shown to be just as incompetent, if not even more in scenes like this.

    3. Tie up my lover’s tongue. Bring him silently

      While this could be her expression of annoyance with Bottom, it could also be her lack of trust in Bottom to stay with her, resulting in her wish to restrain him in some way.

      Alternatively, it could simply be a manner of bedroom preference, which could also potentially explain a stressor behind her relationship with Oberon.

    4. The summer still doth tend upon my state

      I view this both as an enticement and a threat. Titania can promise a life beyond what any mortal could imagine otherwise but could also summon hell on Earth if rejected. This conflicts with her very points made to Oberon about keeping the humans' peace, indicating that her permanent state of infatuation is directly affecting her sobriety/sanity to some extent.

    5. Thou art as wise as thou art beautiful.

      This line could potentially be viewed either as Titania's own infatuatedly misconstrued belief or as an unintentional insult towards Bottom's character, showing that he presents as both smarter and more attractive upon saying only somewhat flirtatious thoughts in order to backpedal on his own quips.

    6. 0919 O Bottom, thou art changed! What do I see on 0920  thee?

      This line is written less like one of fear and more like one of amazement, perhaps out of the suspicion that Bottom may lose his reason like a beast and attack if they act any more rudely. This potentially juxtaposes the actors' view of the lion in their play, as a lion is apparently so scary that they have to severely lighten their interpretation, while an ass shouldn't invoke fear but does impressively.

    1. I feel this is very important! I know we will all probably make this choice one time in or life, and we always want what seems to be the “better” option but could be worse. Money is a big factor in jobs 100%, and can make us take a job easily! I had a job offer that was more than mine now, and i shadowed for a day and I was so glad I didn’t let the money they were offering make me take the job! If I didn’t shadow I would have a job i wasn’t happy with. Have you ever took a job, or made a choice you weren’t happy with in the ending?

    1. Recovery technology searches increased 340% this year,

      does that mean they are searching it up to want to buy it or looking at its negative effects. AI isnt going to tell us what the customers are thinking

    1. the limits of newwriting technologies that are placed in front of us by the corporate sector.

      how are you supposed to think for yourself if you are not able to think for yourself?

    1. You are the project manager. Review each request, classify its significance, and route it to the appropriate approval authority.

      Remove this and replace with a role and introduction

    1. “Part of it is that I just don’t want to live down to the stereotype of the filly fresh off the rock farm who can’t handle anything spicier than feldspar.”

      And who was kicked out and exiled to Ponyville!

    2. “You know I’d have stopped if it ran the risk of hurting the baby.”

      Pinkie was pregnant at the time, Cheesy, you should've let her have more visits to Chuck E Cheese to fuel her pregnancy cravings.

    3. She’d made her hot chocolate according to the original recipe, making it more of a drinkable mole sauce. She had added whipped cream, though that had dissolved once it touched the surface.

      It's because she added chilli pepper hot sauce first.

    4. it was in front of a roaring fire three days before the Gift Givers pranced through the sky.

      Aurora, Bori and Alice would enlist a warning to Pinkie to have her New Years' Resolution be not eat as much spicy food until the end of 2027.

    5. Pinkie looked up from licking up the last bit of rice out of what had been a biryani and gave a thoughtful puff. The flames were a vivid enough pink that they left green afterimages in her sight. “I could probably send a few letters with it.”

      whispers into Pinkie's Ears You have a dragon assistant that lived with you and the Cakes the same way Spike did with Twilight, when you got kicked out by the Rock Family because you weren't the daughter they hoped for!

    6. Saffron slowly spun a spare one of the white, waxy peppers in her magic, taking in the black spots that suggested a moaning face.

      Wouldn't want to eat them, they're grown by Satan in the garden of Hell.

    7. Saffron set a plate of cheese covered in a vivid green sauce before Pinkie. “Not made with actual naga venom, of course, no more than moon pies are made by Luna. But it should—” She blinked at the empty plate.

      It would be much better if there were tacos with it, and peppers and tomatoes.

    8. “And you, champion of the Tasty Treat’s annual curry eating contest three years running, think I can help you take your spice tolerance even further?”

      NO! The Cutie Map hates Pinkie, don't let her try anything!

    9. The door to the room opened, and a stallion in scrubs sighed. “Princess Twilight? We’ve talked about this, Your Highness. You can leave your vital trackers on your friends, but we really must insist that you follow the usual visiting hours.” He blinked as he took in the rest of the room. “And take Mr. Sandwich with you, please. He should have been out of here hours ago.”

      It's Doctor Braveheart! His Scotty accent (if he were voiced by Billy Connolly) explains it all.

    1. respiratory rate

      Rate The respiratory rate is counted by watching the chest rise and fall. Each rise and fall is counted as one respiration. Rate The normal respiratory rate for an adult is 12-20 breaths per minute. Respiratory rate does vary by age. Rhythm The respiratory rhythm should be regular, meaning breaths are evenly spaced out. Other times, the rhythm may be irregular, shallow, deep, or a combination of these. Quality The quality of respiration can be observed as the client breathes. This focuses on the effort that the client requires in order to move air into and out of the lungs. Unlabored breathing is observed when the client uses the muscles with ease during inspiration and expiration. Increased work of breathing is noted when the client requires more effort to move air into and out of the lungs. Use of accessory muscles is seen when clients begin to use muscles other than the diaphragm when breathing. Some of these muscles include the sternocleidomastoid, scalene muscles, and trapezius muscles. Retractions can also be observed as the client continues to use other muscles to pull air into and out of the lungs. Some examples of these include intercostal retractions and subcostal retractions.

    1. eLife Assessment

      The results of this study are important and the approach to dissect the developmental contribution of RIF1 function is convincing. The finding that replication timing and gene expression may be independently controlled is intriguing and provides a strong foundation for future research. The work will be of interest for researchers both in the transcription and the replication field, especially for scientists investigating the interplay between the two processes.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors sought to determine how Rif1 contributes to DNA replication timing (RT), transcriptional regulation, and embryonic development using zebrafish. They generated a maternal-zygotic rif1 knockout line and examined developmental phenotypes, genome-wide replication timing profiles, RNA-seq, and nascent transcription (SLAM-seq) during early embryogenesis.

      Their major findings in this manuscript are

      (1) Rif1 is not essential for zebrafish viability, unlike its partially essential role in mice.

      (2) Rif1 deficiency causes defects in female sex determination, delayed epiboly, and reduced primitive erythropoiesis.

      (3) Genome-wide RT is altered by Rif1, but developmental stage has a much larger influence than Rif1 itself.

      (4) Rif1 is required for the proper maturation ("sharpening") of the RT program during development rather than for specific developmental RT switches.

      (5) Rif1 has a much stronger effect on transcription during zygotic genome activation (ZGA) than on replication timing at these early stages.

      (6) Loss of Rif1 leads to increased expression of early zygotic genes, indicating that Rif1 normally suppresses widespread transcription during ZGA.

      Overall, the work proposes that Rif1 independently regulates replication timing and transcription, with these two functions becoming most prominent at different developmental stages.

      The major strengths of the manuscript are as follows.

      (1) the study combines multiple genome-wide approaches including whole-genome RT profiling, RNA-seq, SLAM-seq in combination with gene KO and developmental analyses.

      (2) One of the strongest points is that the authors conducted the analyses at multiple developmental stages rather than a single point.

      (3) The most important conclusion is that the Rif1 regulates transcription during development in a manner largely independent of its RT function, which was further strengthened by the additional data provided in the revised manuscript.

      On the other hand, the weakness of the manuscript includes the followings.

      (1) Limited mechanistic insight. The questions such as where Rif1 binds on the chromatin (in relation to the transcriptional promoters/ enhancers and replication origins).

      (2) Which functional domains of RIf1 are involved in regulation of transcription and replication (Is PP1 recruitment required for transcription regulation?) are not addressed.

      (3) Since Rif1 is known to be involved in chromatin organization/ nuclear architecture regulation, the studies addressing this (Hi-C, compartment analyses, ATAC seq etc) would provide important mechanistic information.

      (4) Female sex determination phenotype is intriguing, but it remains largely descriptive, and its mechanisms are elusive at the moment.

      Overall, the results support the authors' conclusions and they have successfully provided answers to the authors' original questions on developmental roles of Rif1 in RT and transcription in vertebrate.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors responded to my comments in a largely satisfactory manner. They have conducted additional analyses and concluded that Rif1 regulates transcription during ZGA largely independently of its classical RT function, which is an important finding.

      Although authors did not examine origin firing and replication fork rate in rif1 KO cells, which I suggested in my original review, this can be saved for their future studies.

      I think the revised manuscript has been improved and provides important basic information on the functions of the conserved Rif1 protein in RT and transcriptional regulation.

      I have no further recommendation for additional experiments or data analyses.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study by Masser et al. analyzes global replication timing and gene expression in rif-1 null zebrafish. This work is an extension of their previous report of the normal replication timing pattern during wild-type zebrafish development. The major valuable finding here is that Rif1 is not essential for viability in zebrafish, and - counter to expectation from studies in cultured cells and other species - late replication does not strongly depend on Rif1. Instead, the data suggest that Rif1 subtly sharpens replication timing pattern during normal development rather than function generally to delay replication timing. In the absence of Rif1, the normal pattern establishment is somewhat delayed. The authors also document some changes in expression during development with more genes being repressed by Rif1 than activated at some early stages.

      The study and analysis are generally rigorous, and the conclusions are supported by convincing data. Given the strong link between replication timing and cell type/development, studying timing in a whole developing organism is important. The experimental approach is technically challenging, particularly the bioinformatic analysis. The scientific advance here is largely confined to documenting the timing of Rif1-affected transcription, the unanticipated effect of the rif1 deletion on replication timing and on sex determination, though the latter is not explored. The difference in timing of the transcription phenotypes and replication phenotypes suggests they may be very distinct Rif1 roles. The overall study a useful set of findings and detailed data for future work.

      Loss of Rif1 did not affect viability, but it did strongly influence sex determination, resulting in a lower population of females. This effect is the strongest organismal phenotype, but the study provides no mechanistic explanation for the loss of females from the data gathered here.

      Comments on revised version:

      We are generally satisfied with the revised version of this manuscript.

    4. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      In this manuscript authors examined the effect of rif1 knockout on replication timing and transcription in early embryos of zebrafish. Contrary to the expectation, genome-wide replication timing domains did not significantly change upon Rif1 knockout, although the replication timing became less dynamic in the mutant, meaning the entire genomes are replicated toward the mid S. In contrast, transcriptional profiles change by rif1 mutation throughout the embryo stage. These effects were more predominantly observed after gastrulation at the early stages of zebrafish development.

      The results presented in this manuscript provide new information on the effects of rif1 mutation on early zebrafish development, although the underlying mechanism has not been explored. The information is useful for researchers in the field of early development, with specific focus on replication and transcription regulation.

      The genome wide analyses of replication timing has been conducted and analyzed properly. The transcriptional analyses are conducted by RNA-seq and SLAM-seq (determining the nascent mRNA), and the results convincingly show the overall transcriptional patterns at different developmental stages.

      This work shows that Rif1 regulates replication timing and transcription in zebrafish embryos, while the extents of the effects vary during the developmental process. Although the data convincingly illustrate the whole picture of Rif1 KO on replication and transcription during zebrafish development, the mechanistic insight is missing. Especially, how Rif1 may or may not coordinately regulate replication and transcription during the zebrafish development has not been addressed.

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the value of combining genome-wide replication-timing, RNA-seq, and SLAM-seq analyses across zebrafish development. We agree that the original study did not establish a molecular mechanism linking Rif1-dependent transcriptional and replication-timing effects. To address whether these effects are locally coordinated, we added a gene-centred analysis comparing replication-timing values for genes with increased, decreased, or unchanged transcript abundance at Dome (Figure 5--figure supplement 2). Differentially expressed genes did not show a clear enrichment in early- or late-replicating regions, either at Dome or at pre-MBT. These results argue against replication timing state being the primary determinant of the Dome-stage transcriptional changes. We also expanded the Discussion to explain the limitations of the current study and the need for future measurements of origin use, fork progression, chromatin state, and cell-type-specific effects. The new discussion of Nakatani et al. (2025) further places our findings in the context of evidence that Rif1-dependent replication-timing changes can be uncoupled from transcriptional changes.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      This study by Masser et al. analyzes global replication timing and gene expression in rif-1 null zebrafish. This work is an extension of their previous report on the normal replication timing pattern during wild-type zebrafish development. The major valuable finding here is that Rif1 is not essential for viability in zebrafish, and - counter to expectation from studies in cultured cells and other species - late replication does not strongly depend on Rif1. Instead, the data suggest that Rif1 subtly sharpens replication timing pattern during normal development rather than function generally to delay replication timing. In the absence of Rif1, the normal pattern establishment is somewhat delayed. The authors also document some changes in expression during development with more genes being repressed by Rif1 than activated at some early stages.

      The study and analysis are generally rigorous, and the conclusions are supported by convincing data. The manuscript is well written, though there are aspects of the presentation that could be improved for a broader scientific audience. Given the strong link between replication timing and cell type/development, studying timing in a whole developing organism is important. The experimental approach is technically challenging, particularly the bioinformatic analysis. The scientific advance here is largely confined to documenting the timing of Rif1-affected transcription, the unanticipated effect of the rif1 deletion on replication timing and on sex determination, though the latter is not explored. The work is descriptive and feels like two relatively unconnected studies, transcription and replication plus a small bit of development, and the difference in timing of the transcription phenotypes and replication phenotypes suggests they may be very distinct Rif1 roles. There isn't a lot of new insight into the mechanism of how Rif1 affects either replication timing or gene expression. As such, the overall study is an useful set of findings and detailed data for future work, but it doesn't make a big step forward in understanding the role of Rif1 or the biological processes it affects.

      Weaknesses worth addressing include the following:

      (1) Loss of Rif1 did not affect viability, but it did strongly influence sex determination, resulting in a lower population of females. This effect is the strongest organismal phenotype, but the study provides no explanation for the loss of females from the data gathered here.

      (2) The approach to distinguish nascent zygotically expressed mRNAs from maternal mRNAs is a strength. Are the differentially expressed genes related at all to regions of the genome whose replication timing is most affected? Are any of them related to the sex determination or developmental phenotypes?

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the rigor of the analyses and the value of studying replication timing in a developing vertebrate. We revised the manuscript extensively to make the experimental logic, zebrafish developmental context, replication-timing analyses, and figure legends more accessible to a broad audience. We also quantified the gastrulation phenotype, showing an approximately one-hour delay in completion of epiboly in maternal-zygotic rif1 mutants rather than a persistent developmental arrest.

      We agree that the mechanism underlying the sex-ratio phenotype remains unresolved. The transcriptomic experiments were performed in whole embryos at stages much earlier than zebrafish sex determination and therefore cannot resolve changes in primordial germ cells or supporting gonadal somatic cells. We have avoided making a mechanistic connection between the early embryonic transcriptional changes and the adult sex-ratio phenotype and identify this as an important area for future study. To address the relationship between transcription and replication timing, we added Figure 5--figure supplement 2. Genes with increased or decreased transcript abundance at Dome were not preferentially associated with early- or late-replicating regions. Together with the distinct developmental timing of the transcriptional and replication-timing phenotypes, this supports the interpretation that Rif1 has separable roles in the two processes rather than a single local mechanism that directly couples them.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Using the zebrafish model system, this manuscript assessed the roles of Rif1 protein in replication timing control and transcription during early development, and successfully demonstrated the differential impact of Rif1 protein in replication timing control and transcription. Moreover, the comprehensive assessments of the impacts of mutating Rif1 on animal development (including animal survival and sexual development) were assessed. Although there are works that examined Rif1's implications in replication timing and transcription separately, this work is unique in assessing all these points at once.

      The strength of this manuscript is the genomic analyses of replication timing and transcription being combined in a single model system. Consequently, this manuscript clearly demonstrates the differential impact of Rif1 in these processes during zebrafish development.

      The weakness of this manuscript is, as the authors comment in the Discussion, analyses of replication timing and transcription were performed using bulk embryos. There is a possibility that tissue-specific changes could have been masked. Tissue-specific or single-cell analysis in the future will fill the gap in the knowledge.

      Some of the findings presented in this manuscript are consistent with previous findings using different models such as Drosophila and mice, whereas other findings do not necessarily agree. I hope further studies will reveal more clearly what is common in these systems, and what is different.

      Also, the suggestion that the Rif1 protein may be implicated in a function similar to Fanconi-Anemia genes/proteins is very intriguing.

      Overall, the data presented in this manuscript sufficiently justify the authors' claims. Moreover, this manuscript provides interesting insights into Rif1's function, as well as how development could be controlled.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting the strength of analyzing replication timing, transcription, and developmental phenotypes in the same vertebrate model. We agree that bulk-embryo measurements may mask tissue- or cell-type-specific effects. We now emphasize this limitation and the need for future tissue-specific or single-cell studies, particularly in the cell populations relevant to sex determination. We also expanded the cross-species context by discussing the recent mouse-embryo study by Nakatani et al. (2025), which supports a conserved role for RIF1 in consolidation of the replication-timing program while also indicating that replication-timing and transcriptional effects can be uncoupled. We agree that defining which Rif1 functions are conserved across zebrafish, mouse, Drosophila, and other systems, including possible relationships to Fanconi-anaemia pathways, will be an important direction for future work.

      Reviewing Editor:

      While the paper was under revision, a relevant paper from the Torres-Padilla lab was published (Nakatani et al., Developmental Cell, 2025). It complements these studies and cites the previous version of this manuscript. I suggest adding a reference in the Discussion to support the conclusions.

      We thank the Reviewing Editor for bringing the recent study by Nakatani et al. to our attention. We have added a standalone paragraph near the end of the Discussion explaining how this work complements our findings, and we have added the complete reference to the bibliography. The new Discussion text reads:

      “A recent study in mouse embryos independently identified RIF1 as a regulator of the developmental consolidation of the RT program. RIF1 depletion produced a less-defined, developmentally immature RT program, while RIF1-dependent RT changes were not correlated with transcriptional changes (Nakatani et al., 2025). Together with our findings in zebrafish, these results support a conserved role for RIF1 in sharpening replication timing during vertebrate development and indicate that its effects on replication timing can be uncoupled from changes in gene expression.”

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      The results presented in this manuscript provide new information on the effects of rif1 mutation on replication and transcription during early zebrafish development, although the underlying mechanism has not been explored. I suggest authors consider conducting the following experiments.

      (1) Does replication timing domains have any role in Rif1-mediated regulation of transcription? It is not clear from the data presented whether transcriptionally affected genes are in the early replicating domains or late replicating domains (that appear after the shield stage). This should be examined.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful suggestion. To address whether transcriptional effects in rif1 mutants are associated with replication timing, we assigned each gene the nearest smoothed replication timing value and compared replication timing distributions for genes whose transcript levels increased at Dome, decreased at Dome, or were not significantly changed. This analysis is now shown in Figure 5—figure supplement 2. Genes with increased or decreased transcript abundance at Dome did not show a clear enrichment for either early- or late-replicating regions relative to genes with no significant transcript change. This was also true when replication timing was examined at pre-MBT, the stage preceding the major transcriptional changes detected at Dome. These results argue against replication timing state being the primary determinant of the Dome-stage transcriptional changes observed in rif1 mutant embryos. We have revised the Results to describe this analysis and added Figure 5—figure supplement 2.

      (2) It is of interest whether the Rif1-mediated regulation of transcription and replication are mediated by a common mechanism, e.g. through alteration of chromatin structures. Close look at the data in Figure 3D indicates that some genome segments convert replication timing or undergo significant changes of replication timing. It would be informative to know whether these segments (Rif1-regulated replication domains) are associated with the genes whose expression change upon rif1 knockout.

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful suggestion. We agree that an association between Rif1-dependent replication timing changes and Rif1-dependent transcriptional changes would be informative, and we considered this analysis. We attempted to identify Rif1-regulated replication timing domains using the same approach that we previously used to define developmentally regulated timing domains. However, the effect of Rif1 loss differed qualitatively from the developmental timing switches described in our prior work. Rather than producing a limited set of discrete timing-domain transitions, Rif1 loss caused a broad reduction in the dispersion of replication timing values across the genome, consistent with a general flattening of the timing profile. Under these conditions, an unbiased domain-calling approach preferentially identifies genomic regions with the most extreme early or late timing values in wild-type embryos, because these regions show the largest shift toward the mean in rif1 mutants. Thus, the resulting “Rif1-regulated replication domains” largely reflect the strongest wild-type timing domains rather than a discrete set of Rif1-specific regulatory intervals. For this reason, we do not think that assigning differentially expressed genes to such domains would provide a meaningful test of whether Rif1 regulates transcription and replication timing through a common local mechanism. Instead, we have now added a gene-centred analysis comparing replication timing values for genes with increased, decreased, or unchanged transcript abundance at Dome (Figure 5—figure supplement 2), which directly addresses whether transcriptionally affected genes are associated with early- or late-replicating regions.

      (3) Replication is analyzed only by timing analysis. Authors need to analyze frequency of origin firing and replication fork rate by DNA fiber analyses to see whether they are affected by rif1 knockout at various stages of development.

      We agree that measuring origin firing frequency and replication fork rate would provide valuable additional information about how Rif1 loss affects the replication program. However, performing DNA fibre analyses across multiple zebrafish developmental stages and genotypes would require substantial optimization and experimental expansion beyond the scope of the current revision. The current study was designed to measure genome-wide replication timing and transcript abundance across developmental stages, rather than single-molecule replication dynamics. We therefore have not added DNA fibre experiments. Instead, we have revised the Discussion to acknowledge this limitation and to clarify that replication timing reflects the combined effects of origin usage, fork progression, fork directionality, and fork stability. We added the following text to the Discussion:

      “A further limitation of this study is that we concentrated on replication timing without directly measuring other features of the replication program that contribute to this timing. These features include origin usage, replication fork spacing, fork directionality, fork progression, and fork stability. A more comprehensive understanding of how Rif1 loss affects these parameters will be important for defining the relationship between Rif1-dependent changes in replication timing and transcription.”

      Figure 4B, D and F: I did not see the blue lines which represent preMBT in the panels shown.

      We thank the reviewer for identifying this error. The pre-MBT data were not intended to be shown in Figures 4B, 4D, and 4F. We have corrected the figure legend by removing the reference to the blue pre-MBT line.

      Line 270: Figure 4G should be Figure 6G.

      We thank the reviewer for identifying this error. We have corrected the figure reference from Figure 4G to Figure 6G.

      No description of Figure 6E and 6F in the main text.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this omission. We have added text to the Results describing Figures 6E and 6F. The revised text explains that Dome Up-DEGs are normally upregulated from pre-MBT to Shield stages but show earlier upregulation in rif1 mutant embryos, whereas Dome Down-DEGs normally decrease between Dome and Shield stages but show earlier reduction in mutant embryos.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) This study is an extension of the lab’s previous work which established the wild-type genome-wide replication timing pattern during zebrafish development. The experimental details and analysis are described in the methods, but the general strategy is sometimes treated very cursorily. A non-expert can only understand parts of it by going back to the Seifert study.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We agree that the replication-timing strategy should be understandable without requiring readers to consult our previous study. We have revised the manuscript to explain the general logic of the assay more clearly. Specifically, we now state that replication timing was inferred from copy-number differences between S-phase and G1-phase genomic DNA: genomic regions that replicate early in S phase are enriched in S-phase DNA relative to G1 DNA, whereas later-replicating regions are less enriched. We also clarified that pre-MBT, dome, and shield embryos were treated as S-phase samples because most cells are in S phase at these stages, whereas nuclei from bud and 24 hpf embryos were sorted by DNA content to isolate G1 and S-phase fractions. These additions make the experimental design and interpretation of the replication-timing profiles clearer in the main text and Methods.

      Figure 2 is meant to document developmental delay in early embryos, but the differences between the single wt and mutant examples in 2D are poorly described and labeled. Most readers will be unfamiliar with the specifics of zebrafish development. There is also no quantification of this developmental phenotype, and that quantification should be included along with better labeling and description of 2D.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We agree that the developmental delay shown in Figure 2D required clearer explanation and quantification for readers who are less familiar with zebrafish gastrulation. We have revised the Results to explain that epiboly is the process by which the blastoderm and yolk syncytial layer move toward the vegetal pole to envelop the yolk cell, and that zebrafish gastrulation stages are commonly described by the percentage of yolk coverage. We also added quantification of this phenotype. At 10 hpf, most wild-type embryos had completed epiboly, whereas most rif1 mutant embryos had not: 18 of 24 wild-type embryos, but only 2 of 24 mutant embryos, had reached 100% yolk coverage. By 11 hpf, all wild-type and mutant embryos had completed epiboly. These revisions clarify that rif1 mutant embryos show an approximately 1-hour delay in epiboly completion rather than a persistent arrest in gastrulation.

      (3) The presentation could be greatly improved with additional information about the experimental approach and display. As written, the text and figure legends assume readers are intimately familiar with replication timing experiments, zebrafish development, and differential gene expression analysis. Most of the figure legends are not sufficient to understand the figures themselves, and the necessary information is also not always in the results. An example is Figure 3 which is not well described (other than the PCA plots); the term “lag” which is the x-axis in 3C is not defined.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful comment. We agree that several aspects of the replication-timing analysis required clearer explanation for readers who are less familiar with replication-timing experiments. We have revised the Results to explain the logic of the replication-timing assay more clearly and have added a more detailed description of the autocorrelation analysis in Figure 3C. Specifically, we now explain that autocorrelation measures how similar replication-timing values are across increasing genomic distances along the same chromosome, providing a quantitative readout of the peak-and-valley structure of the timing profile. We also clarified that increasing autocorrelation across hundreds of kilobases reflects the progressive establishment of broader replication-timing domains during development. In addition, we changed the x-axis label in Figure 3C from “lag” to “Genomic distance (Mb).” Together, these changes should make the experimental approach and display easier to understand without requiring readers to consult our previous replication-timing study.

      Figure 4 is generally poorly described and labelled (4B, D, and F graph legends indicate preMBT in the data, but there are no blue lines on the graphs), and Figures 6 and 7 are quite busy.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We agree that the Figure 4 legend incorrectly described the data shown in panels B, D, and F. The pre-MBT data were not intended to be plotted in these panels, and we have removed the corresponding reference from the figure legend. We recognize that Figures 6 and 7 contain several analyses, but we have retained the current organization because the panels in each figure address a connected set of questions. Figure 6 summarizes how Rif1 loss affects abundance of developmentally regulated transcripts, whereas Figure 7 extends this analysis by directly measuring nascent transcription using SLAM-seq.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      I do not think any additional experiments are required to justify the authors’ claims. Well done! However, for readers’ benefit, I propose the following changes or adding more explanations:

      (1) Page 2, line 86: I guess “single copy” means “single copy per haploid”. Better to clarify this point.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful clarification. The reviewer is correct that “single copy” refers to a single copy per haploid genome. We have revised the text to state that the zebrafish genome has a single copy of the rif1 gene per haploid genome.

      (2) Related to the data presented in Figure 2C, do you have an explanation for why sex determination is affected in the heterozygotes, despite the change in Rif1 expression being subtle (Figure 1C)?

      We thank the reviewer for raising this point. We agree that the reduction in whole-embryo rif1 mRNA levels in heterozygotes appears modest relative to the sex-ratio phenotype. At present, we can only speculate about the basis for this difference. One possibility is that whole-embryo mRNA measurements do not accurately reflect Rif1 abundance in the specific cell populations that influence zebrafish sex determination, such as primordial germ cells or their supporting somatic cells. We have therefore avoided making a strong mechanistic conclusion from the heterozygous phenotype.

      (3) Related to the data presented in Figure 2D, did you observe a delay in heterozygotes?

      We thank the reviewer for this question. We have not quantitatively analyzed epiboly progression in heterozygous embryos. However, we did not observe an obvious developmental delay in heterozygotes during early development. The delay shown in Figure 2D was observed in maternal-zygotic rif1 homozygous mutants.

      (4) Figure 3D: it is not easy to distinguish WT and mutant lines, particularly for the Bud stage. Please consider changing the colour schemes or other aspects. For example, making colour lines thinner may help.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful suggestion. We agree that the wild-type and mutant profiles in Figure 3D, particularly at the bud stage, were difficult to distinguish in the original version. We have revised Figure 3D by reducing the line width of the colored profiles, which improves the contrast between the wild-type and mutant traces.

      (5) Figure 3E: Could you avoid overlapping of WT and mutant plots?

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We considered separating the wild-type and mutant density plots in Figure 3E, but we have retained the overlaid format because the purpose of this panel is to directly compare the distributions of replication timing values between genotypes at each developmental stage. Overlaying the plots makes the reduced dispersion of timing values in the rif1 mutants easier to visualize relative to the corresponding wild-type distribution.

      (6) Figure 4C and 4E: the point legends (WT and mutant) do not match the points used in the graph.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this potential source of confusion. In Figures 4C and 4E, point shape indicates genotype, with open squares representing wild-type samples and open circles representing rif1 mutant samples. Point color indicates developmental stage. We used separate visual encodings for genotype and stage to avoid a large legend containing every genotype-stage combination. To make this clearer, we have revised the figure legend to state explicitly that point shape denotes genotype and point color denotes developmental stage.

      (7) Figure 4D: Very difficult to recognise 24 hr mutant line. Please improve the way there are shown.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful suggestion. We agree that the 24 hpf mutant profile in Figure 4D was difficult to distinguish in the original version. We have revised the figure by changing the appearance of the mutant lines to make them more visible while preserving the stage color scheme.

      (8) Related to data presented in Figure 4B. Is it possible to show a statistical evaluation of all (or a reasonably large number of samples from) DARs?

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. Figure 4A already provides a genome-wide analysis of the DAR set shown by example in Figure 4B. Specifically, Figure 4A plots the change in replication timing from shield to 24 hpf for all 2,498 putative enhancer-associated DARs in both wild-type and rif1 mutant embryos. The strong correlation between wild-type and mutant values indicates that DAR-associated timing changes are largely preserved in rif1 mutants. Because all DARs used for this analysis are included in the scatterplot, we did not add a separate statistical analysis of selected examples from Figure 4B.

      (9) Page 8, line 220: It is unclear what “all” means. Is it all the available replication timing values genome-wide? Please clarify.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this ambiguity. In this sentence, “all” refers to all genome-wide replication timing values calculated from the genomic windows used in our replication timing analysis. We have revised the text to make this clearer.

      (10) Figures 6C and 6D: Colour labels are too dark and it is almost impossible to read texts inside. Please reconsider the colour scheme.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We agree that the labels in Figures 6C and 6D were difficult to read because of insufficient contrast. We have changed the text colour inside the colored boxes to white to improve legibility.

      (11) Related to overall transcription studies: Is there any sign that Rif1 mutation affects the transcription of genes involved in sex determination?

      We thank the reviewer for raising this interesting question. We have not specifically analyzed whether genes involved in sex determination are differentially expressed in the early embryonic transcriptome data. Because zebrafish sex determination occurs substantially later than the embryonic stages analyzed here, and likely depends on specific cell populations such as primordial germ cells and supporting gonadal somatic cells, we do not think the current whole-embryo RNA-seq data can directly resolve this question. We therefore avoid drawing a mechanistic connection between the early transcriptional changes and the adult sex-ratio phenotype. Determining whether Rif1 mutation affects transcription in the cell populations that regulate zebrafish sex determination will be an important direction for future work.

    1. efers to a patient’s level of arousal and alertness

      Level of consciousness can be described in terms such as alert, lethargic, obtunded, stupor, or coma.

      Reference Jarvis, C., & Eckhardt, A. L. (2024). Pocket companion for physical examination & health assessment (9th ed., pp. 9–16). Elsevier.

    1. Billbee

      Same here as before, we are starting with a superlative. Let's get rid of those, we point out those strengths but we don't say it is a superlative. Also again, we start with the basis of ERP and multi channel 1st, before going into strength weakness, et cetera.

    2. 4. Odoo

      Here the same problem again, we need to make sure that we covered the basis first, so core functionalities of ERP and multi channel, to understand where we are starting with this competitor. Only then do we go into details about their strength and their weakness and their specialities. And please remove superlatives

    3. Das CRM ist Grundschicht in allen Paketen und kein Zusatzmodul, und für Handelspartner stehen Konditionen, Rahmenbestellungen und das Gutschriftsverfahren bereit.

      I don't even know, do other competitors have a CRM system or is this a unique point?

    4. Die Grenze ist das Preismodell in Verbindung mit der Kanalseite. weclapp rechnet pro Nutzer und Monat ab, und die Anbindung an Marktplätze liegt erst im Paket ERP Handel für 163 € pro Nutzer und Monat. Neun Verkaufskanäle sind zugleich die kleinste Auswahl im Vergleich.

      In a way this is really good, I want that we discuss weaknesses also of the core here in the last section. But at the same time, I don't want to say or to argue that price is the biggest weakness. Let's start with weaknesses that are functional and then we add the pricing as an additional weakness or potential weak point. I'm not even convinced that the pricing here is a weakness.

    5. Auch die Produktion ist echt und nicht nur ein Etikett: Produktionsstücklisten, Produktionsaufträge, Arbeitspläne und Materialkostenkalkulation gehören zum Handelspaket, ebenso Serien- und Chargennummern, eine vierstufige Lagerstruktur mit konfigurierbaren Lagerplatztypen, eine mobile Lager-App und mehrere Inventurarte

      This is all part of the ERP functionality, the first sentence seems a bit off. What does it mean, let's rewrite.

    6. weclapp ist das einzige System in diesem Vergleich, das eine vollständige eigene Buchführung im Standard mitbringt, und zwar schon im kleinsten Paket. Bei der Einrichtung wird verbindlich zwischen Einnahmenüberschussrechnung und Bilanz mit Gewinn- und Verlustrechnung gewählt, dazu kommen SKR03 und SKR04, Stapelbuchung, Summen- und Saldenliste, Festschreibung, Offene-Posten-Verwaltung, dreistufiges Mahnwesen, Zahllauf, Kassenbuch, Umsatzsteuervoranmeldung und Zusammenfassende Meldung. Wer den Steuerberater entlasten statt nur beliefern will, findet das im Feld sonst nirgends.

      This is a specific strength about bookkeeping, it is good that we mentioned it but I still want to start every major section of a competitor with the basics. So what do they cover in terms of ERP functionalities and multi channel functionalities. only then can we go into specific strengths and weaknesses

    7. Dafür ist Xentral das transparenteste Angebot im Feld. Die Preise stehen als veröffentlichte Staffel im Netz und steigen mit der Auftragszahl statt mit dem Umsatz, beginnend bei 99 € im Monat und über Starter bei 349 € und Business bei 649 € bis Pro bei 849 €. Für eine Marke mit hohem Warenkorb und überschaubarer Auftragszahl ist das rechnerisch attraktiv. Die Bewertungen sind stabil: 4,1 von 5 aus 202 Bewertungen bei OMR Reviews, dessen Profil vom Anbieter selbst betrieben wird, und 4,5 von 5 aus 46 Bewertungen bei Capterra.

      All right, let's get rid of superlatives again, one only sing it that we need to consider is which ratings do we want to use, we cannot have OMR, Capterra, and trust pilot mixed in differently. So either we use all three for all competitors or we focus on one and use it for all competitors. Otherwise it doesn't make any sense.

    8. Zwei Einschränkungen gehören dazu. Xentral bringt kein eigenes Shopsystem mit, es sitzt hinter Shopify, Shopware, WooCommerce, BigCommerce oder Adobe Commerce. Und die Kanalbreite ist kleiner, als die Marketingzahl vermuten lässt: Nativ angebunden sind zwölf Kanäle, der weitaus größte Teil der übrigen Marktplatzkacheln läuft über Tradebyte oder Mirakl und setzt damit einen eigenen Vertrag beim Anbindungspartner voraus.

      The problem for me is that this is to negative, first of all is it really downside if the channels come the partners, also plenty one has a lot of partner channels. Secondly I would much prefer if these core topics are just descriptive, so basically ERP functionalitiesand multi channel options should be descriptive first and then only in the last paragraph do we list downsides potentially, including those limitations we see in the core abilities.

    9. Xentral hat unter den Cloud-Systemen die größte warenwirtschaftliche Tiefe, und sie zeigt sich genau dort, wo eine Marke mit eigener Lieferkette hinschaut. Bestellvorschlag, Preisanfrage beim Lieferanten, Verbindlichkeiten und Kostenstellen sind vorhanden, das Lager kennt benannte Lagerplätze, Mehrlagerbetrieb inklusive externer Lager, mehrstufige Kommissionierung mit Scan-Kontrolle sowie Chargen, Seriennummern, Mindesthaltbarkeitsdaten und Gefahrgut mit UN-Nummer. Wer selbst beschafft und selbst versendet, findet hier mehr Prozess als in jedem anderen Cloud-System dieser Preisklasse.

      This is a good start, the question is, are they really better at this kind of ERP questions and functionalities, compared to plenty one? At any rate I want to get rid of superlatives.

    10. 1. PlentyONE

      About general section structure, we have laid out some basic criteria above, and I want to mention the good parts of each competitors against those criteria. So basically mention the parts they are good at, with a specific focus on multi channel and ERP functionalities. So in essence we start with the good parts and where the company is stronger anyway, and then we discussed the downsides or let's just say the limitations.

    11. Auf Trustpilot steht PlentyONE bei 3,8 von 5 aus 159 Bewertungen, mit deutlich geteiltem Echo zwischen Betrieb und Einrichtungsphase, und

      This is to negative, I am not sure if I want to keep these kind of scores anyway. Let's discuss.

    12. Die Grenze verläuft bei der Fertigung. Fertigungsaufträge und die Auflösung mehrstufiger Stücklisten sind in der Tarifmatrix nicht ausgewiesen, wer also selbst produziert statt fertigen zu lassen, führt diesen Teil in einem anderen System.

      I am not sure if we should mention this, it is not irrelevant point for most companies.

    1. eLife Assessment

      In this manuscript, the authors analyse the nanoscale localisation of α5β1 and αVβ3 integrins in integrin adhesion complexes (IAC) by dual-colour STORM and DNA-Paint and assess the spatial organisation at the nano and mesoscale of their main adaptors (paxillin, talin and vinculin). This is an important work that provides detailed analyses that reveal how elements of these complex structures are really organised at the nanoscale, an essential perspective for a better understanding of how IACs function and regulate mechanotransduction processes. The evidence presented is convincing, using complementary super-resolution imaging techniques and subsequent computational modelling that enabled a quantitative assessment of the resulting data.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In recent years, it becomes increasingly evident how beautifully intricate IAC are at the nanoscale. Studies like the one presented here that shed light on the precise inner organisation of IAC are thus quite important and relevant to obtain better in-depth understanding of IAC functioning and the contribution of different integrin subtypes to cell adhesive and mechanotransductive processes.

      Interestingly, the authors found a distinct localisation of α5β1 and αVβ3 integrin nanoclusters within focal adhesion of human fibroblasts, with α5β1 integrin nanoclusters being at the periphery of IAC and αVβ3 integrin nanoclusters randomly distributed. Furthermore, a surprisingly high percentage of inactive integrins within IAC and relatively low spatial integrin colocalisation with adaptor proteins has been shown.

      Strengths:

      This is a very thoroughly performed STORM-based assessment of the nanodistribution of α5β1 and αVβ3 nanoclusters within IAC (and outside). The image quality is outstanding, and the authors have meticulously executed the experiments and the image analyses.

      Weaknesses:

      The only weakness is maybe that the manuscript remains descriptive. However, the high quality of the "description" of the nano-organisation of IAC by this scrupulous study is really important to better understand the inner workings of IAC. It provides a very solid foundation to look deeper into the (patho)physiological implications of this organisation, see recommendations (which are rather suggestions in this case).

      Comments on revision:

      The authors meticulously addressed all my questions and suggestions. I want to thank the authors for an exemplary revision.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, dual-color super-resolution microscopy analysis was performed to study the co-operation between integrins and focal adhesion proteins in human fibroblast cells. The study focused on two integrins which have been previously found to be mainly responsible for focal adhesions, namely α5β1 and αvβ3.

      Specifically, the study tried to shed light on the nanoclustering of integrins in focal adhesions.

      In the current study, more integrin nanoclusters were observed in focal adhesions compared to other cell-matrix adhesion structures. The study revealed that both α5β1 and αvβ3 form nanoclusters and those appear segregated from each other. While αvβ3 nanoclusters organize randomly inside focal adhesions regardless of their activation state, α5β1 nanoclusters, and particularly the nanoclusters containing β1-integrin in active conformation preferentially organized at the edges of focal adhesions. The nanoclusters formed by each integrin were similar in size.

      Cytoplasmic adapter proteins appeared less in nanocluster assemblies, suggesting that integrin nanoclusters are also forming without the studied cytoplasmic adapter proteins (talin, vinculin, paxillin). Active integrins were identified with help of conformation-specific antibodies, and those enabled to study the colocalization between integrins and their cytoplasmic adapter proteins. This analysis revealed that activated integrins are strongly engaged with adapter proteins

      Strengths:

      The study stems from the thorough computational modelling of the nanoclusters, which enables quantification of the behavior of the clusters, including their mesoscale distribution.

      The study strengthens the view that α5β1 and αvβ3 have specific functions in focal adhesions, α5β1 nanoclusters localizing preferentially on focal adhesion edges. The study also revealed that nanoclusters localized at the edges of focal adhesion were enriched for talin and paxillin but not for vinculin.

      Analysis of adaptor protein nanoclusters (paxillin, talin, and vinculin) revealed that all adapter protein nanoclusters studied here close to active β1 nanoclusters are enriched on the focal adhesion edge region, whereas integrin adaptor nanoclusters far from active β1 appear to be more uniformly distributed.

      Importantly, the current study suggests that integrin subtype-specific nanoclusters are not only present at early stage of adhesion formation, but integrin nanoclusters remain segregated from each other also in mature focal adhesions, maintaining their sizes and number of molecules.

      Interestingly, the study revealed that selected cytoplasmic adaptors (paxillin, talin and vinculin), also form nanoclusters of similar size and number of single molecule localizations as the integrins, regardless of whether they locate inside or outside focal adhesions. The adapter nanoclusters are enriched in the focal adhesion "belt", colocalizing with the active α5β1 integrin nanoclusters.

      Weaknesses:

      The current study is highly dependent on the antibodies. It is possible, that antibodies, containing two binding sites for antigen, influence the nanoscale organization (and also activation) of the receptors. Control experiments to study possible contribution of antibodies for the measured outcome should be performed to verify the main findings. One possible approach could be to use fluorescently tagged integrins available. Alternatively, integrins (or adapter proteins) could be tagged with small ligand and detected using monovalent binder.

      Only a limited number of integrin adapter proteins were investigated. Given the high number of identified adapter proteins, this is an understandable choice. However, it would be fascinating to understand if the nanoclusters of inactive integrins are dominantly bound with certain adapter protein, such as tensin.

      Comments on revision:

      The authors addressed the concern related to the use of antibodies and secondary antibodies by performing DNA-PAINT experiment, which revealed highly similar results as obtained with conventional antibodies.

    4. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      We have addressed all the concerns and recommendations by the reviewers, in particular, the requested control experiments using alternative super-resolution microscopy approaches and analysis of the data using Voronoi tessellation in addition to DBSCAN, as requested by reviewer 3. We also provide additional data on tensin3 as suggested by reviewer 2. Finally, to provide a first insight on the role of mechanical forces in the distribution of integrin nanoclusters inside FAs as recommended by reviewer 1, we have performed experiments at different cell seeding times where it is known that FA maturation over time requires mechanical forces.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In recent years, it has become increasingly evident how beautifully intricate IAC are at the nanoscale. Studies like the one presented here that shed light on the precise inner organisation of IAC are thus quite important and relevant in order to obtain a better in-depth understanding of IAC functioning and the contribution of different integrin subtypes to cell adhesive and mechanotransductive processes.

      Interestingly, the authors found a distinct localisation of α5β1 and αvβ3 integrin nanoclusters within focal adhesion of human fibroblasts, with α5β1 integrin nanoclusters being at the periphery of IAC and αvβ3 integrin nanoclusters randomly distributed. Furthermore, a surprisingly high percentage of inactive integrins within IAC and relatively low spatial integrin colocalisation with adaptor proteins has been shown.

      Strengths:

      This is a very thoroughly performed STORM-based assessment of the nanodistribution of α5β1 and αvβ3 nanoclusters within IAC (and outside). The image quality is outstanding, and the authors have meticulously executed the experiments and the image analyses.

      We are grateful to the reviewer for acknowledging the strengths of our study.

      Weaknesses:

      The only weakness is maybe that the manuscript remains descriptive. However, the high quality of the "description" of the nano-organisation of IAC by this scrupulous study is really important to better understand the inner workings of IAC. It provides a very solid foundation to look deeper into the (patho)physiological implications of this organisation, see recommendations (which are rather suggestions in this case).

      We thank the reviewer for their feedback and have addressed their recommendations in our updated manuscript and accompanying reply (see recommendations to the authors). In summary, we have now performed experiments at different seeding times as FA maturation requires mechanical forces, and enquired whether forces might play a role in establishing the spatial distribution of the two different integrins within more mature IACs. The results are now shown as new Fig. 2 and discussed in pages 9 and 10. In addition, in order to get a first insight into the biological implications of our findings we performed dual-colour super-resolution experiments of tensin-3 and α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> in FAs, as tensin-3 has been implicated in fibronectin fibrillogenesis. The results are now shown in Fig. S8 and we discuss their potential implications in pages 22 and 23 of the revised manuscript (see more details in the reply to the recommendation to the authors).

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, dual-color super-resolution microscopy analysis was performed to study the co-operation between integrins and focal adhesion proteins in human fibroblast cells. The study focused on two integrins which have been previously found to be mainly responsible for focal adhesions, namely α5β1 and αvβ3.

      Specifically, the study tried to shed light on the nanoclustering of integrins in focal adhesions.

      In the current study, more integrin nanoclusters were observed in focal adhesions compared to other cell-matrix adhesion structures. The study revealed that both α5β1 and αvβ3 form nanoclusters, and those appear segregated from each other. While αvβ3 nanoclusters organize randomly inside focal adhesions regardless of their activation state, α5β1 nanoclusters, and particularly the nanoclusters containing β1-integrin in active conformation, preferentially organized at the edges of focal adhesions. The nanoclusters formed by each integrin were similar in size.

      Cytoplasmic adapter proteins appeared less in nanocluster assemblies, suggesting that integrin nanoclusters are also forming without the studied cytoplasmic adapter proteins (talin, vinculin, paxillin). Active integrins were identified with the help of conformation-specific antibodies, and this enabled us to study the colocalization between integrins and their cytoplasmic adapter proteins. This analysis revealed that activated integrins are strongly engaged with adapter proteins.

      Strengths:

      The study stems from the thorough computational modelling of the nanoclusters, which enables quantification of the behavior of the clusters, including their mesoscale distribution.

      The study strengthens the view that α5β1 and αvβ3 have specific functions in focal adhesions, α5β1 nanoclusters localizing preferentially on focal adhesion edges. The study also revealed that nanoclusters localized at the edges of focal adhesion were enriched for talin and paxillin but not for vinculin.

      Analysis of adaptor protein nanoclusters (paxillin, talin, and vinculin) revealed that all adapter protein nanoclusters studied here close to active β1 nanoclusters are enriched on the focal adhesion edge region, whereas integrin adaptor nanoclusters far from active β1 appear to be more uniformly distributed.

      Importantly, the current study suggests that integrin subtype-specific nanoclusters are not only present at an early stage of adhesion formation, but integrin nanoclusters remain segregated from each other also in mature focal adhesions, maintaining their sizes and number of molecules.

      Interestingly, the study revealed that selected cytoplasmic adaptors (paxillin, talin, and vinculin), also form nanoclusters of similar size and number of single molecule localizations as the integrins, regardless of whether they locate inside or outside focal adhesions. The adapter nanoclusters are enriched in the focal adhesion "belt", colocalizing with the active α5β1 integrin nanoclusters.

      We are grateful to the reviewer for acknowledging the strengths of our study.

      Weaknesses:

      The current study is highly dependent on the antibodies. It is possible that antibodies containing two binding sites for antigen influence the nanoscale organization (and also activation) of the receptors. Control experiments to study the possible contribution of antibodies to the measured outcome should be performed to verify the main findings. One possible approach could be to use fluorescently tagged integrins available. Alternatively, integrins (or adapter proteins) could be tagged with a small ligand and detected using a monovalent binder.

      We understand the concern of the reviewer regarding the use of antibodies for imaging. Nevertheless, we would like to clarify that antibody labelling has always been performed after cell fixation, precluding potential cross-linking artefacts due to protein mobility and avoiding unwanted receptor activation.

      Nevertheless, and although it is highly unlikely to happen in fixed cells, there could be two potential sources of antibody (Ab) labelling artefacts. As the reviewer noted, a primary Ab containing two binding sites could bind to two adjacent proteins (within ~10 nm from each other), potentially underestimating the stoichiometry of the nanoclusters, i.e., number of receptors or proteins per nanocluster. However, in our manuscript we never attempted to provide an estimation of the nanocluster stoichiometry, as it is highly challenging (and prone to artefacts) to provide quantification of the number of proteins using super-resolution-based single-molecule localisation methods which rely on the stochastic blinking of individual fluorophores.

      A second source for potential artefacts comes from the use of the secondary Ab, which (albeit unlikely) could bind to two different primary Abs. To exclude this potential artefact, we performed super-resolution imaging using DNA-PAINT as a different imaging strategy. In this case, the DNA docking site is site-specifically coupled to one camelid single-domain Ab (sdAB), having a much smaller size as compared to a secondary Ab, reducing therefore linkage error and increasing the accessibility of primary Ab-labelled proteins. These new data are included now in Fig. S4. As can be observed, no differences in terms of nanocluster sizes and/or compositions were observed for any of the proteins investigated using DNA-PAINT as compared to our initial STORM data. These control experiments thus rule out any potential artefacts introduced by the secondary Ab (for more details, please see the reply to the recommendations for authors section).

      Only a limited number of integrin adapter proteins were investigated. Given the high number of identified adapter proteins, this is an understandable choice. However, it would be fascinating to understand if the nanoclusters of inactive integrins are dominantly bound with a certain adapter protein, such as tensin.

      We fully agree with the reviewer and have now performed dual-colour super-resolution STED microscopy of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> and tensin-3 on HFF cells seeded for 24 hours. Interestingly, instead of being an integrin inactivator, we found that tensin-3 is also highly enriched at the FA periphery where a large fraction of active β<sub>1</sub> integrins are located, suggesting that at these particular regions, active β<sub>1</sub> could be either engaged to talin (as shown in our original data) or to tensin-3 (our new data shown in Fig. S8). We provide more details of our answer in the section of “recommendation to the authors”. Additional experiments, which in our opinion fall outside of the scope of this work, would be necessary to identify other potential integrin inactivator partners, but certainly a topic of future interest to our group.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their study, the authors reveal using dual-color super-resolution STORM microscopy modality and immunolabeling in fixed adherent cells, that β1 and β3 integrins as well as adaptors (paxillin, talin and vinculin) are all organized in nanoclusters of similar size (50nm) and molecular density (20 copy number) inside FAs but also outside. Using activityspecific immunolabeling of β1 and β3 integrins, they revealed that active integrin subpopulations were both clustered but in distinct exclusive nano-aggregates in agreement with Spiess et al. (2018). Once more, the "active" integrin nanoclusters displayed similar properties in terms of size and molecular density, suggesting that molecular organization in nanoclusters is an intrinsic property of integrins in plasma membrane multimerizing independently of their location (inside or outside FAs), their level of activation, or their connection to the cytoskeleton. Then the authors followed up by analyzing at the mesoscale how these "universal" nanoclustered adhesive units are distributed spatially. Inspecting the surface density of nanoclusters revealed that the density of integrin nanoclusters in FAs was 5x larger, compared to integrin nanoclusters outside adhesions. Interestingly, whereas the density of total integrin nanoclusters was 2-4x larger than adaptor nanoclusters, the density of "active" integrin nanoclusters stoichiometrically matches that of talin and vinculin nanoclusters, and was slightly outnumbered by paxillin nanoclusters. These findings suggest that inside FAs, among the total number of integrin nanoclusters, the subset of "active" integrin nanoclusters could be engaged with "adaptor" nanoclusters on a 1:1 ratio. Using analysis of the nearest neighbor distance (NND) between distinct integrin clusters and each of the adaptors, the authors report that they found negligible spatial colocalization of integrins with these adaptor proteins and that spatial segregation is essentially determined by the density of nanoclusters within the FAs. As authors reported that α5β1 and αvβ3 do not intermix at the nanoscale, the authors finally highlighted how α5β1 and αvβ3 distinct nanoclusters are differently organized and segregated inside FAs. Adapting the NND analysis in order to inspect how far the nanoclusters are from the edges of FAs they are located in, authors revealed that α5β1 but not αvβ3 integrin nanoclusters are enriched on FA edges and that similar FA edge-enriched distribution for "active" α5β1 and adaptor protein nanoclusters was found for talin and paxillin but not vinculin. The latter results suggest that FA edges could constitute multiprotein hubs for enhanced colocalization and activation for α5β1 integrin nanoclusters and adaptors such as talin and paxillin. Unfortunately NND analysis could not confirm this enhanced colocalization hypothesis.

      General Assessment:

      While the study presents some valuable findings, it reads currently as a compilation of intriguing but preliminary observations derived primarily from a single methodology (dual-color STORM and DBSCAN clustering analysis). As the initial findings often lack confirmation through additional data analysis (such as the NND analysis the authors used), there's a critical necessity to bolster the methodological approach. This should involve replicating the main findings using alternative single-molecule super-resolution techniques (such as quantitative DNA-PAINT) or employing different clustering analytical tools (such as voronoi-tessellation). Furthermore, the manuscript feels incomplete, focusing solely on describing molecular organization without offering substantial insights into how these observations correlate with the regulation, activation, and functionality of integrins at the cellular level.

      We appreciate the comment of the reviewer and have taken their recommendation to heart in order to validate our methodology. In summary, we have now performed extensive DNA-PAINT to replicate most of our initial findings obtained by STORM, as requested by the reviewer. In addition, as a different super-resolution imaging strategy, we have also used STED microscopy to confirm the nanoclustering of integrins and some of the adaptors demonstrating now, by means of three different super-resolution techniques, that both integrins and their adaptors form nanoclusters of similar size and composition, regardless of whether they are inside or outside FAs. We have included these data as Figs. S3 and S4 and discussed the results in pages 8-9 of the main manuscript.

      Regarding the use of an alternative analysis for the data, we have now used the Voronoi tessellation algorithm to re-analyse our STORM data, as requested by the reviewer. The results of the analysis, which render similar sizes and number of localizations as obtained by DBSCAN, are now included in Fig. S5 and mentioned in page 8 of the main manuscript.

      The manuscript presents extensive datasets and utilizes methodologies in which the investigators demonstrate expertise. Nevertheless, there's uncertainty regarding the novelty and broad appeal of the findings. For instance, the observation of integrin nanoclustering has been previously reported in several publications (e.g., Changede et al., Dev Cell 2015; Spiess et al., JCB 2018; Fujiwara et al., JCB 2023). Similarly, the accumulation of specific proteins at the periphery of FAs has been documented elsewhere (e.g., Sun et al., NCB 2016; Stubb et al., NatComm 2019; Nunes-Vicente TCB 2023), as well as the differential dynamic organization of α5β1 and αvβ3 integrins inside FAs (e.g., Rossier et al., NCB 2012). Beyond the universal organization of adhesive proteins, there's a need to identify novel insights that significantly advance the field. One potential avenue could involve pinpointing the molecular determinant controlling the FA edge enrichment of active α5β1 integrins and talin nanoclusters. For instance, could there be an interplay between α5β1 and αvβ3 integrin nanoclusters visible on one's organisation when suppressing the other using deletion (KO) or depletion (SiRNA)? Also, could KANK, which also exhibits enrichment and regulates talin activity (e.g., Sun et al., NCB 2016), play a role in this process? Identifying the molecular players that regulate even partially the mesoscale organization of nanoclusters of proteins would really benefit the breadth of this manuscript.

      We could not agree more with the reviewer and in fact, we are currently investigating the mechanisms that control the enrichment of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> and adaptors at the edges of FAs. However, considering the amount of work needed to determine the spatiotemporal organization of other molecular players using super-resolution imaging constitutes a major tour de force.

      To get a first insight into the process of active α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> enrichment at the FA edges, we hypothesised that mechanical forces exerted by the actomyosin machinery could influence the lateral distribution of both integrin subsets (α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> and α<sub>v</sub>β<sub>3</sub>) inside FAs. Since FA maturation and strengthening over time requires mechanical forces, we performed experiments at different cell seeding times (90 min, 3 hours and 24 hours) and used STORM imaging to follow the evolution of integrin nanoclustering in time as well as their spatial distributions inside FAs. Interestingly, while nanoclustering of both integrin sub-sets inside FAs is not influenced by seeding times, their lateral distribution was markedly different, with α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> nanocluster distribution being already established at earlier seeding times, while α<sub>v</sub>β<sub>3</sub> nanocluster distribution appeared as rather random at earlier seeding times and progressively organized reaching a well-defined lateral spacing at 24 hours of spreading time. These initial data strongly suggest that mechanical forces might play a role in the distinct lateral distribution of both subsets of integrin nanoclusters over time. We have now included these data as new Fig. 2 of the revised manuscript and discuss the results in the associated text (pages 9 and 10). We also discuss potential avenues for further research along the directions suggested by the reviewer.

      In addition, since it has been recently shown that tensin-3 interaction with talin drives the formation of fibronectin-associated fibrillar adhesions (Atherton et al, J Cell Biol 2022) which are enriched in β<sub>1</sub> integrins, we performed dual-colour super-resolution STED microscopy of β<sub>1</sub> and tensin-3 on HFF cells seeded for 24 hours. Interestingly, our initial data show co-enrichment of both tensin-3 and active β<sub>1</sub> nanoclusters at the FA periphery, suggesting that at these particular regions, active β<sub>1</sub> could be either engaged to talin (as shown in our original manuscript) or to tensin. Our current working hypothesis is that α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> enrichment at the FA periphery serves to facilitate the translocation of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> integrins from FAs to fibrillar adhesions, most probably in a talin-tensin-dependent manner. We have now included these data as Fig. S8 and accompanying discussion in pages 22 and 23 of the revised manuscript.

      Echoing the previous concern, the manuscript described a novel and rather surprising finding related to molecular clustering of adhesion proteins. Indeed, the fact that nanoclusters exhibit uniform size and molecular density regardless of the protein type, location, or activation level is indeed surprising and raises many questions about the methodology used to assess molecular clustering. I feel that the description and characterization of integrin nanoclusters appear incomplete and need to be expanded by comparing different analytical strategies for protein clustering. Furthermore, a lack of the manuscript in its actual form concerns the quantification of integrin numbers inside the observed nanoclusters. I agree that the path from optical microscopy to protein stoichiometry quantification is hard and full of drawbacks. But the authors do not fully address these issues that are extremely important when discussing protein nanoclustering. This quantitative aspect should be discussed.

      We appreciate the comment of the reviewer as indeed, the existence of “universal” nanoclusters is intriguing. Recently, together with Prof. S. Mayor we have written a short review in Curr. Opin. Cell Biol 2024 proposing that nanoclustering constitutes a molecular-scale organisation principle that governs cellular information flow at the plasma membrane. Our proposal is supported by an extensive number of recent papers showing that most cell membrane receptors and downstream signalling components are organized as pre-assembled nanoclusters. We posit that these nanoclusters serve as modular units whose concatenation in a specific spatiotemporal sequence leads to distinct signalling outputs. Thus, the existence of universal nanoclusters of integrin receptors and adaptors is indeed intriguing but not surprising to us.

      In any case, the concern of the reviewer is well-taken, and as mentioned above, we have used a different algorithm to detect and quantify nanoclustering, obtaining similar values using either Voronoi tessellation or DBSCAN approaches. These data are now included as Fig. S5 in the manuscript.

      Regarding the quantification of integrin numbers inside the observed nanoclusters, we agree with the reviewer that determining protein stoichiometry using single-molecule localization microscopy or STED remains a major technical challenge and is highly prone to artefacts. For this reason, we refrain from making claims about absolute protein numbers per nanocluster. Our relative comparison of nanoclustering among the different proteins investigated is thus exclusively based on the number of single-molecule localisations contained in each nanocluster which is a fair approach since we always use the same reporter fluorophore and maintain similar excitation conditions throughout our experiments. We have now included a few lines on page 9 regarding quantification of the absolute protein numbers inside the nanoclusters and further discuss in the revised manuscript the limitations of single-molecule localisation methods towards the stoichiometry determination of the nanoclusters (see page 20 of the revised manuscript).

      First, it is crucial for the authors to carefully examine and discuss in their manuscript whether there are any potential biases or limitations in the experimental techniques (dual-color STORM) or data analysis methods employed (DBSCAN). Second, the authors did not in the current manuscript, but should provide control samples to demonstrate the sensitivity and dynamic range of their experimental strategy.

      As already mentioned, we have validated the STORM data using both DNA-PAINT and STED and, validated our data analysis obtained with DBSCAN using the Voronoi tessellation algorithm. See Figs. S3, S4 and S5. In terms of sensitivity and dynamic range of our methodology: our set-up has single-molecule detection sensitivity which is demonstrated by the fact that we observe and detect discrete blinking events, a property of single-molecule fluorescence emission and key ingredient to super-resolution single-molecule localisation microscopy. The dynamic range (if we understand correctly the question of the reviewer) is given by the number of frames used to accumulate single-molecule localisations. In our case, we stop acquisition after we deplete most of the single-molecule spots in the imaging view, which typically occurred after 70,000 frames acquisition, as correctly mentioned in the material & methods section.

      In STORM images displayed in Figure S1, the authors highlighted localization clusters detected by DBSCAN as a signature for integrin nanoclusters. But the authors do not discuss the localization spots that were not detected by DBSCAN. Could they be individual integrins? And if so, they should also be considered as useful information? This brings me to another related technical question about how DBSCAN handles the case where fluorescent molecules are blinking. This is important as multiple emissions by a single fluorophore could be detected as a nanocluster of several molecules where it would be an artefact due to the photophysics of the fluorophore. Could the authors comment on these points?

      As mentioned in the original manuscript, between 20-30% of the localizations were not assigned to nanoclusters (Fig. S1H, I) since we imposed a minimum of ten localizations within the radius defined by DBSCAN to be considered as a true nanocluster. This essentially means that regions with less than 10 localizations were not considered in our nanoclustering analysis. However, we cannot be certain as to whether these lower number of localizations correspond to individual integrins, stochastic blinking of the fluorophore or small aggregates containing only a couple of integrins, for the same reasons that we cannot provide quantification of the absolute number of proteins included in each nanocluster: stoichiometry determination by means of single-molecule super-resolution methods is highly prone to artefacts.

      Regarding the concern of how DBSCAN handles fluorophore blinking, the reviewer is completely right as the photophysics of the fluorophore can influence the analysis of the data and the identification of true nanoclusters. To decouple the photophysics of the fluorophore we first assess the number of blinking events within the DBSCAN radius, i.e., number of localizations corresponding to individual antibodies sparsely distributed on the glass surface. In our case, the median values for the two activator-reporter pairs corresponded to 5 localizations for Alexa 405-Alexa647-conjugated Abs and 3 localizations for Cy3-Alexa 647-conjugated Abs (see Fig. 1E). Yet, despite these median values, the number of localizations per individual Ab naturally shows a distribution. Thus, to avoid any overestimation in the degree of nanoclustering, we impose an additional constrain to our analysis and consider true nanoclusters only those ones containing at least 10 localizations. We have now significantly extended the explanation in the main text (see page 6) as well as materials & methods so that it becomes clearer to the reader.

      Also, using isolated and stochastically physisorbed fluorophores (Ab coupled with activator /reporter pairs used in this study) on glass helped define the signature in STORM of a single isolated molecule. To obtain the signature of clustered fluorophores, the authors could use anti-donkey antibodies to cross-link those STORM-specifically labeled Ab as a means to artificially obtain clustered fluorophores. Ultimately, to avoid the bias effect of the glass surfaces on the photophysics of fluorophores and be in the same imaging conditions as for the described nanoclusters, the authors should use model systems composed of multimers of GFP vs. single GFP, immunolabeled with a GFP-binding monoclonal antibody. This will permit evaluation of the cluster signature obtained with DBSCAN analysis of STORM data for single vs. multimers of known stoichiometry. This would constitute an undisputable molecular stoichiometry ruler.

      We appreciate the suggestions of the reviewer. Regarding the potential bias effect of the glass surface on the photophysics of the fluorophores we would like to clarify that the “calibration” for the number of blinking events per individual Ab on glass were performed on the same sample containing the cells that we image, so that we maintain exactly the same experimental and imaging conditions avoiding any potential artefacts. To our understanding this approach is more accurate than performing the calibration on glass substrates and then moving to samples containing the cells. This information is now contained in page 6 of the revised manuscript and in the materials and method section. Once the number of blinking events from individual Abs on glass within the DBSCAN radius are determined, one can then determine the number of localizations within the same DBSCAN radius on other parts of the sample. More localizations within the same DBSCAN radius basically means more molecules, and thus nanoclusters. This approach has been extensively used by other experts in the field as we properly acknowledge in our manuscript (Pageon et al, Mol. Cell. Biol 2016; Spiess et al. J. Cell Biol 2022).

      Using anti-donkey antibodies to cross-link those STORM-specifically labelled Ab in order to artificially obtain clustered fluorophores, as suggested by the reviewer, is indeed a sound approach to retrieve signatures of clustering. Nevertheless, we have preferred not to use this approach because those artificially induced clusters would have very little resemblance to the real nanoclusters and would only allow us to validate the performance of DBSCAN for cluster recognition. As mentioned above, DBSCAN is a well-established algorithm and used by many different experts in the field and thus can be trusted by the community. Instead, and following the recommendation of the reviewer, we now provide results using an alternative cluster analysis algorithm (Voronoi tessellation) reaching similar conclusions regarding the existence of integrin and adaptor nanoclustering inside FAs.

      Finally, the suggestion of using monomeric vs multimeric GFPs to determine the stoichiometry of the nanoclusters is highly appreciated. Indeed, we have used this approach in the past to identify nanoclustering of the chemokine receptor CXCR4 in living T cells (Mol. Cell 2018 and PNAS 2022). However, these experiments are best performed at sub-labelling conditions, which inherently underestimate the degree of nanoclustering. Combining GFPs with PALM to enable super-resolution is another approach but also subject to artefacts regarding the photo-conversion efficiency of GFPs as we reported earlier (Nature Methods 2017) and leading to underestimation of nanocluster stoichiometry.

      In summary, providing nanocluster stoichiometry from single-molecule localisation images remains a major technical challenge and is highly sensitive to methodological assumptions. We have therefore focused here on providing robust evidence for the existence of integrin and adaptor nanoclustering, using three different superresolution approaches and two independent analytical methods for cluster determination.

      Due to the surprising finding of the nanoclusters' "universality", it is imperative for the authors to validate the findings through complementary methodologies and analytical tools. This should involve replication of results using alternative super-resolution techniques (quantitative DNA-PAINT) and exploring different clustering algorithms (VoronoïTesselation) to ensure the robustness and reliability of the observations.

      As already mentioned, we have now performed extensive DNA-PAINT to replicate most of our initial findings obtained by STORM, as requested by the reviewer. In addition, as a different super-resolution imaging strategy, we have also used STED microscopy to confirm the nanoclustering of integrins and some of the adaptors demonstrating now, by means of three different super-resolution techniques, that both integrins and their adaptors form nanoclusters of similar size and composition, regardless of whether they are inside or outside FAs. We have included these data as Figs. S3 and S4 and discussed the results in pages 8-9 of the main manuscript.

      Regarding the use of an alternative analysis for the data, we have now used the Voronoi tessellation algorithm to re-analyse our STORM data, as requested by the reviewer. The results of the analysis, which render similar sizes and number of localizations as obtained by DBSCAN, are now included in Fig. S5 and mentioned in page 8 of the main manuscript.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      This work already, as is, provides significant and novel information on IAC.

      The unexpectedly low spatial colocalisation of integrins with adaptor proteins might indeed be caused by the potentially quite long extension of talin upon force exposure and the ample zones of activity of IAC proteins, imaging the involved proteins in scale, as can be seen in Barnett and Goult (2022, doi: 10.3389/fncel.2022.1014629)? In super-resolution microscopy, this spatial separation might, in fact, become apparent. It would be interesting to see whether lowering the actomyosin contraction by different concentrations of blebbistatin lowers this separation. In general, it would also be interesting to understand whether lowering the forces can disrupt the nano-organisation and the strong separation of the two analysed integrin subtypes. It is true that nascent adhesion formation is force-independent, but maybe the forces play a role in establishing the particular integrin subtype nano-organisation within more mature IAC. I am also aware that a lot of work has already gone into the conclusion of this project.

      We thank the reviewer for these thoughtful comments and suggestions. Our most recent preliminary data (not yet included in this manuscript) indeed indicate that the physical separation of integrin nanoclusters (and adaptors) inside focal adhesions (FAs) is force-dependent. We are currently reproducing these experiments using lipid bilayers of varying viscosities and controlled ligand density to explore how ligand mobility (i.e., equivalent to force exerted from the extracellular side) controls the degree of IAC nanoclustering and their spatial segregation in FAs. This approach is more amenable to super-resolution microscopy as lipid bilayers are quite thin and optically transparent, yet the experiments are still challenging, time-consuming, and thus ongoing.

      To obtain a first hint as to whether forces might play a role in establishing the spatial distribution of the two different integrins within more mature IACs as the reviewer suggests, we have performed experiments at different seeding times (90 min, 3 hours and 24 hours). Our results show that even at earlier times (90 min), when a lower number of mature FAs are established, nanoclustering of integrins and main adaptors are similar to 24 hours. In contrast, and as suggested by the reviewer, the spatial distribution of the different subsets of integrin nanoclusters inside FAs is markedly different as a function of seeding time, with α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> nanocluster distribution being already established at 90 min, while α<sub>v</sub>β<sub>3</sub> nanocluster distribution appears rather random at earlier seeding times and progressively organizes reaching a well-defined lateral spacing at 24 hours of spreading time. As FA strengthening over time requires mechanical forces, and α<sub>v</sub>β<sub>3</sub> is preferentially involved in FA strengthening (Roca-Cusachs et al PNAS 2009), these data strongly suggest that forces play a differential role in the lateral distribution of both integrin nanoclusters over time. We have now included these data as a new Fig. 2 in the revised manuscript and discuss the results in the associated text (pages 9 and 10). We also mention in the discussion additional experiments, as suggested by the reviewer, to further substantiate this hypothesis.

      Considering the high quality of the work and the new insight about the inner organisation of IAC, maybe the summary Figure 5 should be elaborated a bit, taking into account e.g. different lengths of extended talin proteins and also the various positions of vinculins on talin proteins (depending on opened cryptic binding sites), as well as the possibility that various actin filaments might be associated with single talins. What I mean is, the authors impressively demonstrate the complexity of IAC nano-organisation, which should be paid more tribute in the concluding figure. The quality of the figure should be adapted to the quality of the work.

      We have adapted Figure 5 (now Figure 6) as suggested by the reviewer.

      I would be curious to hear a bit more about the further speculations of the authors in the discussion, e.g., about why the integrin subunits are organised in this way. Why might the α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> be preferentially located in the periphery? What is the potential physiological relevance of this organisation? Is this organisation different in other cell types (have the authors looked at other cells)? Is the organisation lost in pathophysiological situations, such as cancer?

      Although we do not know yet what drives the preferential location of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> nanoclusters to the FA periphery, it is known that Kank2 also exhibits enrichment at the FA periphery, regulates talin activity and it is involved in the formation of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub>-enriched fibrillar adhesions (Sun et al, Nature Cell Biol 2016). Thus, it is highly probable that α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> enrichment at the FA periphery is a necessary step for their translocation from mature FAs to fibrillar adhesions to then assemble fibronectin into the fibrillar networks as found and needed in connective tissues. Consistent with this idea, we have observed similar α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> distribution on other fibroblast cell lines (MEFS), which are the primary cells that produce fibrillar adhesions. Thus, α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> nanocluster distribution inside FAs might be physiologically important for the process of fibronectin fibrillogenesis.

      Since it has been documented that tensin is important for fibronectin fibrillogenesis (Pankov et al J Cell Biol 2000) and more recently, it has been shown that tensin-3 interaction with talin drives the formation of fibronectin-associated fibrillar adhesions (Atherton et al, J Cell Biol 2022), we thought to investigate the spatial distribution of tensin-3 and its relationship with α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> inside FAs by means of dual colour super-resolution STED microscopy. Interestingly, our initial data on HFF cells seeded for 24 hours show both enrichment of tensin-3 and α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> nanoclusters at the edges of mature FAs, supporting our working hypothesis that α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> enrichment at the FA periphery serves to translocate α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> integrins from FAs to fibrillar adhesions, probably in a talin-tensin-dependent manner. While these initial data are quite exciting, many more experiments that include simultaneous super-resolution mapping of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub>, talin and tensin in mature FAs are required to fully validate our hypothesis. Yet, because of their relevance we consider it appropriate to include these data as Fig. S8 and discussing their potential implications in pages 22 and 23 of the revised manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Perform control experiments to confirm that the nanocluster size/composition is not affected by the antibodies used.

      As explained in the response to the public reviews, antibody labelling has always been performed after cell fixation, precluding potential cross-linking artefacts due to protein mobility and avoiding unwanted receptor activation. In addition, we have performed super-resolution imaging using DNA-PAINT as a different imaging strategy. In this case, the DNA docking site is site-specifically coupled to one camelid single-domain Ab (sdAB), having a much smaller size as compared to a secondary Ab, reducing therefore linkage error and increasing the accessibility of primary Ab-labelled proteins. As can be observed in new Fig S4, no differences in terms of nanocluster sizes and/or compositions were observed for any of the proteins investigated using DNA-PAINT as compared to our initial STORM data. These control experiments thus rule out any potential artefacts introduced by the secondary Ab. Finally, we would like to highlight that our results on the nanoclustering of integrins in terms of their size and number of localizations is consistent with previous results obtained by other groups around the world using similar labelling protocols as us (Spies et al, J. Cell Biol 2022), or relying on halo-tag strategies, as suggested by the reviewer (see Fujiwara et al, J. Cell Biol. 2023). The consistency of these results amongst different groups gives us further confidence that the nanocluster size/composition are not affected by the antibodies used.

      (2) Extend the study by inspecting a set of integrin adapter proteins for their association with inactive integrins, focusing on adapters associated with the maintenance of the inactive state. Possible candidates would be tensin and filamin, for example.

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion and have now performed dual-colour super-resolution STED microscopy of α<sub>5</sub>β<sub>1</sub> and tensin-3 on HFF cells seeded for 24 hours. Interestingly, instead of being an integrin inactivator, we found that tensin-3 is also highly enriched at the FA periphery where a large fraction of active β<sub>1</sub> integrins are located, suggesting that at these particular regions, active β<sub>1</sub> could be either engaged to talin (as shown in our original data) or to tensin-3 (our new data shown in Fig. S8). These results might be surprising at first, since tensin competes with talin for the same binding site to the cytoplasmic β-tail of integrins, and thus believed to act as integrin inactivator, as the reviewer indicates. Nevertheless, recent data has shown that tensin is capable to activate integrins (in particular if β<sub>1</sub> is phosphorylated) by interacting with the actin cytoskeleton, providing mechanical coupling for integrin activation (Georgiadou & Ivaska, Trends Cell Biol. 2017). We have now included these new data as Fig. S8 in the revised manuscript. Additional experiments, which in our opinion fall outside of the scope of this work, would be necessary to identify other potential integrin inactivator partners, but certainly a topic of future interest to our group.

      (3) While the methods are described in sufficient detail, it is important to ask if the findings are based on sufficient data. Table S5 provides detailed information about the number of samples studied, and it appears that only small numbers of samples were investigated for certain protein pairs. This should be discussed, and perhaps more data should be obtained to strengthen the data.

      We have now performed additional experiments using DNA-PAINT as alternative super-resolution imaging technique (as also requested by reviewer 3) which adds additional data to the whole manuscript.

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