I like this, but we don't have a systemic way to get this data now. The data that we have right now is not sufficient to produce this structure. I think will be ready for this after SEC info extraction pipeline is built.

No need for targets tab, this information should appear in the main page.

Mode of action should be added here as well: Kras | inhibitor for example. No need to change the field name though, targets is ok

We divide the marketed assets in three categories: Launch (< 2y), Growth (2-10y) and Established (>10y)

We do not calculate many of these fields for the moment. Until the congress we can stick to only 6 metrics in the current UI.

https://staging.bioloupe.com/company/17103

After the congress we might add some of these metrics as well.

We should add this field after the congress as we dot calculate it for the moment.

We should add this field after the congress as we dot calculate it for the moment.

Instead of Markete assets the website should appear in here.

Not all companies have marketed assets thus probably this should not appear in the main page.

I think crowd harassment is especially harmful because many small actions can combine into serious damage. Even if each person thinks they are only “criticizing,” the target may feel attacked by everyone. Platforms should not only punish threats, but also design better tools to slow down dogpiling and repeated harassment.

This article talks about the twitter hate campaign against Megan Markle, and how it was a bunch of real accounts, not bots, that were running this swarm of hate. There was no particular motive behind it, but one thing I noticed in this article was that someone said that they were running a hate account against her for fun. I feel like these kinds of people have a lot of hate in their hearts to be spreading negativity for fun, especially against someone who has done nothing wrong. I think this is an instance where crowd harassment is not acceptable, and simply is a nuisance to people.

This article about trolling and how that has been seen from angles of hate crime, etc is interesting because you never really know the true intentions behind trolling. Because its often an algorithm or a line of code behind it, its hard to pinpoint a situation in which it would be taken very seriously. However, when its being done on suicide victims pages, that definitley feels more targeted and like a real serious issue.

This source made me think about how harassment can be hidden behind a cause that sounds reasonable. Gamergate supporters often said they cared about “ethics in video game journalism,” but the campaign became known for targeting women in gaming with threats, doxing, and abuse. I think this connects well to the chapter’s point about people justifying harassment. When a group frames its attacks as protecting a community or defending values, it can make harmful behavior seem acceptable to the people taking part in it.

The paper by De Cristofaro about raids on 4chan really opened my eyes since it considers online coordinated harassment as an example of organized collective action rather than trolling. What got me thinking was the fact that such raids may lack any ideological background at all – people take part in them out of fun or a feeling of community, which somehow makes it even more difficult to deal with than harassment fueled by hate. It is scary how community building can be based on hating some stranger on the Internet.

This article was about the author's experience of being cyberstalked for 14 years by someone who repeatedly harassed her over various different ways. Even when she tried to report it, the police dismissed it because she wasn't "physically afraid" even though the harassment was stressful and mentally hard to deal with. This connects to the chapter because of the harassment she dealt with being a repeated action that doesn't fit neatly into legal definitions. Both the article and chapter show that online harassment can cause real damage to individuals even when the actions seem small in waves.

This article sits right at the intersection of crowdsourcing, harassment, and public shaming. It shows how a Twitter account mobilized a distributed crowd to identify Charlottesville marchers, with very real offline consequences like people losing jobs. I found it useful as an example of how “doing good” (calling out overt white supremacy) can still raise ethical questions about misidentification, due process, and what we want punishment to look like.

I think crowd harassment is warranted sometimes. I think if there was someone who did something extremely wrong, crowd harassment is totally justified. For example, James Charles took advantage of minors, so I think he deserves all the hate and crowd harassment he receives simply because he did a terrible unforgiving thing.

The cases mentioned above such as riots, mob violence, and governmental persecution have taught me that online bullying is not a new social problem that has emerged due to the Internet; it is an innate tendency that has simply taken a new form. The most interesting thing about online mobbing is that it eliminates the personal danger that used to prevent people from participating in a mob previously. You had to be present there and be aware of the consequences. Anyone can take part in the mobbing activity anonymously via the Internet.

Диаграма, наверное, POST /call/startup

Не критично, предложение: часто встречается эта формулировка, может лейбл введём? чтобы различать какие хуки информационные, а какие контрольные

Visual Greenwashing Techniques

The background utilizes extensive illustrations of green plants and leaves. This visual design is intended to subconsciously lead consumers to associate the product with being "natural" and "eco-friendly", even if only a small portion of the packaging itself meets environmental standards.

I think that one benefit of quote posts are that you could express your support on a certain topic that you might not be wanting to throw out on your account itself. Whether this is political, ethical, or whatever standpoint the post is on, supporting can show a piece of your character that you might want to reveal. A drawback is that if people tweet or post their opinion in the first place, it is incredibly easy to receive hate or pushback from what you post. Although this is possible with any post, its especially prevalent with quote posts.

Key Takeaways Knowing a theory ≠ living it. True expertise comes from practice, not memorization Language is power. The words you use shape what you see, feel, and can do Unlearning matters as much as learning. Default habits and assumptions must be disrupted before new skills can develop Failure is discovery. A supportive learning environment should reframe mistakes as learning, not punishment The goal is transformation, not information. The discipline should shift from teaching students about communication to helping them become expert communicators

It asks people to consider how they wound up being a particular way of acting or behaving in the world; and asks them to identify the stories they are living and how those stories shape and constrain other possible ways of being and knowing available.

The language people use shapes what they see, how they feel, and what actions are available to them — and the goal of communication education should be helping students experience that power firsthand, not just learn about it in theory.

Organizational communication already has powerful theories about how language shapes reality — the field needs to stop just teaching them as concepts and start helping people practice them as lived skills.

Reminds me of working meetings with LPMA or at work

This example makes me think about how complicated doxing can be. Publishing the KKK members’ names and addresses was meant to expose people connected to a violent racist group. I understand why some people might see this as a way to protect others. But it also raises a difficult question: even when the target has caused serious harm, does sharing private information create another form of harassment?

I wonder if this subsection should be a section ... mainly so the title shows up in the outline!

I think the title of sec 2.5 should be more general, like "Predictive Modeling" and then make Recursive Partitioning the first subsection. Why? because with Recursive Partitioning the title of the entire section, it seems to hide the real meat of the section, witch I think is the New Directions ...

Go through what the article is address and go through step by step yourself and make the notes as you go then covert those notes into an article. Do not try to shortcut this steps or you will sound robotic or miss steps.

Open- Introduction Body- List, screenshots, zight recordings to make life as easy and possible for the client to scan through Closing- Temperature check to see if any more questions and close on a good note with well wishes.

NB: Avoid long, stressful, tedious lists at all cost. Long lists that are wordy are a turn off and can frustration or escalate a calm situation. We're in an "im not reading all that generation". You either adapt and adjust or get left behind.

Tweak the saved replies to feel personable, warm and empathetic.

The customer only cares about resolving the issue or the solution. Do everything in your power and search all available resources until you can find and answer. You're required to be as helpful as possible.

That is you identify the emotion the client is feeling and you state it in your response. Keep it relevant and relatable.

• The expectation is 1 reply a minute or 1.5 hours for email while working in background
• Set the timeline expectation for the client and under promise and over deliver

• We are encouraged to probe and find out why?

• We're also encouraged to log into the account with permission and walk through the issue ourselves to replicate the steps on our end

ohh 🤨😒🤨😒

There is this controversial Russian philosopher who I know of. His daughter was killed by a terrorist attack (a carbombing), and the whole incident was somehow videotaped and spread online. Because of this, and because he really is quite controversial and has a lot of haters, whenever he posts on social media, especially Twitter (a site I use often), the replies are just clips of his daughter being blown up.

I know this is hard to believe, so this is the philosopher's wikipedia page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aleksandr_Dugin

This distinction between private and public harassment is important because the harm shifts when there’s an audience. Public attacks don’t just hurt the target; they also shape how other people see them, and they implicitly recruit bystanders as witnesses or even participants. It reminds me of times I’ve seen posts on social media where the real damage wasn’t just the words, but the fact that hundreds/thousands of others were liking and sharing them.

Important to get familiar with now for our future careers.

How to come up with questions in that topic of discussion

What to keep in mind when writing the discourse community.

The 6 key criterias to look for.

I think the overall chapter's explanation of harassment was helpful because it shows how harassment isn't always one big obvious action, but an often repeated pattern of smaller actions that cause harm to someone over time. This example helps to understand how one splash may seem accidental or small, but a barrage of splashing becomes intentional and ends up hurting an individual. Online harassment on social media works the same way, a rude comment isn't that serious on its own and people can let it roll off their back, but when its a bigger dogpile the harm becomes much bigger. This is definitely why moderation is difficult because platforms let "free expression" turn into harmful actions that get bypassed constantly.

Stick to writing about what the teacher is asking.

Always double check before making a post.

This is not surprising to me because I witness this exact pattern in children while working in a public school. Many times, children come to school making inappropriate remarks to others, talking about hating their lives, or having extreme outbursts that can last for long periods throughout the day. I have also noticed sudden changes in their engagement with instruction and assigned work. When contacting parents, they often begin venting and expressing the difficult situations they are experiencing at home, which can contribute to the student’s behavior and emotional struggles at school.

Highlighting both the advantages and disadvantages of the DSM is important for social workers so they can understand its usefulness while also recognizing its limitations. This allows social workers to apply it appropriately and effectively when helping clients. Because mental health assessment is such an essential part of diagnosis, understanding the DSM is crucial to how we will practice in the field.

Llosa argues how literature is important for protecting society and human freedom because people will become more ignorant and divided without. He warns the readers how society will become "spiritually barbaric" and can even "jeopardize its freedom". By using strong words, he creates a serious tone showing how strongly be believes in literature

Author of the text

Llossa shows a disappointed tone towards people who choose not to read because he sounds concerned. He believes they are missing out on important experiences, and has a persuasive tone to convince readers to rethink the value of literature.

By criticizing people, Llosa compares the lack of reading to a limitation that weakens language and imagination. His straight forward tone also makes the argument feel persuasive because he wants to get the point through on how literature is not optional if people want to properly communicate

Llosa believes literature helps people becomdemore understanding through his harsh diction and frustrated tone. He emphasizes how dangerous ignorance can become when people refuse to understand each other, leading to examples such as racism and prejudice.

Lolosa explains how literature can connect people despite cultural differences. He supports this by saying how literature is "one of the most common denominators of human experience." showing how stories allow people to relate and share experiences. This creates a hopeful tone since he believes literature helps humanity with shared experiences and emotions.

The political calculus—and actual math—of gerrymandering<br /> by [[Rachel Wallach]] in Johns Hopkins University Hub<br /> accessed on 2026-05-19T15:14:23

... i would take this out. there are some times when we override notices that there are multiple parts to the piece of equipment being checked out

take out this section

A student comes to the RMC desk on a whim, and checks out a Tascam Portacapture audio recorder from the circulation materials. How long can they borrow the item? A) As long as they need it B) 3 hours C) 10 hours D) 24 hours (correct) E) 7 days

At the RMC, circulation equipment can be checked out for either 3 or 24 hours, based on the type of equipment. Most cables have a 3 hour checkout period. Other pieces of equipment have a 24 hour checkout period. You can see when the item is due under the date due column in Workflows after the item has been checked out (include picture).

Some patrons may need the equipment longer than the set due date. They MUST receive prior permission from a supervisor to get an extended checkout. Patrons can get an extended checkout by emailing Robert Holden and explaining why they require a longer checkout period.

You can only extend a users checkout if they have written permission from Robert Holden.

To extend a users checkout, 1) Ask to see Robert Holden's written permission for the extended checkout 2) input the user's ID number into the User ID field 3) click the calendar icon in the top left corner 4) select the special due date 5) make sure "for this checkout only" is marked, and click ok 6) scan the piece of equipment that will have the extended checkout. 7) Tell the patron what day and time they need to return the equipment by

*You will have to go though this process for each piece of equipment that is being borrowed with an extended checkout

make this BOLD

Checking out an item means 'charging it' to a library user's account and occurs when patrons come to the front desk an request a piece of circulation equipment.

a piece of circulation equipment

get rid of this question

This is the same programs that the UVA library uses to process and circulate book, DVDs, and more!

Circulation v. Reserve

1. A Tascam Recorder with a green tag (circulation)
2. A hig-end lighting kit with a blue tag (reserve)
3. 3D printing pass that requires prior training (reserve)
4. A PA system that you can book in advance (reserve)
5. A USB to USB-C adapter that a student checked out at the desk without booking in advance (circulation)
6. A SM58 microphone, circulated though Workflows (LibCal)
7. A Canon RP camera, circulated through LibCal (reserve)
8. A Canon Vixia camera, with a UVA barcode and green tag (circulation)

Reserve Equipment

Reserve equipment are all the pieces in the vault with a BLUE tag. These items rarely have a UVA barcode, and tend to be higher-end.

The library information system we use to circulate reserve equipment is LibCal

Circulation Equipment Circulation equipment are all the pieces in the vault with a GREEN tag. All of these items have a UVA barcode that is found in the equipment's case or on the largest piece of the equipment. That's it! That's the neat trick for identifying Circulation equipment.

Circulation equipment is labeled in GREEN and has a UVA BARCODE.

The library information system we use for circulation equipment is Workflows

Reserve Equipment is the pieces of equipment that require prior trainings or permission in order to check out. Students, faculty, and staff with the proper permission book reserve equipment in advance of picking it up from the RMC desk. This equipment tends to be higher-end. Digital Media Consultants use LibCal to circulate reserve equipment.

Circulation is the equipment that ANY students, faculty, and staff can checkout during hours when the RMC desk is open. This equipment is first come, first serve, and requires no prior trainings or permissions. Digital Media Consultants will use Workflows to circulate circulation materials.

the equipment

As a Digital Media Consultant, you staff the RMC and DML desks and circulate RMC equipment.

routing is not part of the job

1. Identify and process RMC equipment in Workflows
2. Identify and process RMC equipment in LibCal
3. Understand Workflows and LibCal, the two programs used for circulating equipment at the Robertson Media Center
4. Check out and discharge RMC circulation equipment in Workflows
5. Search for patron accounts in Workflows
6. Check out and discharge RMC reserve equipment in LibCal
7. Identify the special case equipment where a combination of Workflows, LibCal, and/or paper forms are needed

the vault

Planning strategies.To help you manage your reading assignments before you begin reading. Active Reading strategies.To help you understand the material while you read. Application strategies. To solidify your understanding at a higher and deeper level after you finish reading.

i wonder about writing down in pseudo-code what a reader has to do here, e.g. coming from an object query, how it finds what spatial chunks/fragments, order of the different range requests etc.

• The Core Argument: The author challenges the narrative that AI allows unskilled users to prompt and immediately ship complex, professional-grade software. They point out that after years of widespread access to advanced models, the world is not drowning in "vibecoded" equivalents of Photoshop, Excel, or operating systems.
• The "Vibecoding" Accusation: Calling someone’s project "vibecoded slop" has become a destructive social weapon and gatekeeping mechanism. It is used to dismiss AI-assisted work, costing the target immense time and morale to defend while costing the accuser nothing.
• Hypocrisy of the Critics: The accusation itself acts like unverified "vibecoded" content. It is a fast-shipped emotional reaction put out as a factual finding, devoid of definitions, testing, or evidence.
• The Three Levels of Software Work:
  • Level 1 (Typing): Mechanical coding, syntax, loops, and memorizing syntax. AI has successfully lowered the barrier to and cost of this layer.
  • Level 2 (Verifying): Flow, testing, data structure choices, debugging, and quality control.
  • Level 3 (Deciding): Architecture, macro decisions, trade-offs, and long-term design that survives the real world.
• Source of Backlash: The gatekeeping stems from Level 1 programmers who tied their professional identity and self-worth to the physical act of typing code. Because AI made Level 1 cheap, they feel personally threatened and lash out at AI-assisted creators.
• Call to Action: Despite having a rigorous engineering and demoscene background that would allow them to "punch down," the author refuses to weaponize the term. They urge creators to transparently ship their AI-assisted work without apology, and encourage the community to judge projects by their testing and architectural choices.

Hacker News Discussion

• Shift Toward Long-Tail, Bespoke Tooling: Multiple users argue the premise is slightly off because AI isn't meant to build a mass-market "Photoshop replacement." Instead, it is empowering people to build bespoke, narrow-scoped, one-off tools (e.g., custom data scripts, household apps, or personalized pedometers) that solve exact personal needs without needing to learn full-stack development.
• The 3D Printer Analogy: A prominent debate compares vibe-coding to the 2010s hype of household 3D printers. Critics argue that just as 3D printing stalled because CAD design is harder than the actual printing, vibe-coding will stall because software architecture and data persistence are harder than generating basic code. Proponents counter that unlike 3D printing, AI software has zero upfront hardware costs, relies on devices people already own, and lowers the barrier further by translating plain English into functional instructions.
• Moving Goalposts vs. Generative Slop: Some developers express frustration that AI advocates are shifting goalposts from "AI will replace all software engineers" to "AI will build minor scripts." They emphasize that software design remains the difficult part of engineering, and raise concerns over the normalization of low-quality, AI-generated "slop" across tech and art.
• Accessibility vs. Professional Engineering: Commenters note that Level 1 coding was always the easy part, which is why experienced engineers command a premium for architectural foresight. However, making Level 1 universally accessible means a broader demographic of non-techies (the "Uncle Bobs" of the world) can finally build functional tools for themselves and their communities without relying on professional developers.

• Transition to Zed: The author has switched to Zed (v1) as their primary code editor, praising its sane defaults, fast and responsive performance, great integration with the VS Code ecosystem, and tasteful AI integration.
• The JetBrains Breakup: For years, the author paid ~$85/year for CLion and appreciated its UI, default settings, and powerful debugging tools. However, they decided to cancel their subscription because the IDE became frustratingly slow.
• Specific Technical Frustrations: - Creating a new file triggers a tedious popup and loading screen.
  • Startup and project-switching times are exceptionally sluggish.
  • Remote development features intermittently disconnect on older hardware.
  • Constant, unexpected re-indexing cycles exhaust CPU and RAM resources.
  • The massive on-disk installation footprint makes it unsuitable for older machines.
• Impact on Developer Flow: These combined performance regressions created friction, causing the author to hesitate before opening the editor and ultimately disrupting their ability to enter a productive flow state.

Hacker News Discussion

• Hardware and Environment Variables: Several commenters argue that complaints about JetBrains being slow usually depend on older hardware or a bloated setup packed with third-party plugins. Users with modern machines (like Apple Silicon) report cold start times of just a few seconds, noting that JetBrains IDEs are meant to be kept open all day rather than spun up per file.
• The Pushback Against AI and Bloat: A major pain point among long-time subscribers is JetBrains' aggressive push toward AI features. Commenters express frustration over persistent AI companion sidebars, the "minimalist" new UI (which some claim mimics VS Code and has poor icon contrast), and overall SaaS feature creep meant to justify subscription fees rather than improve core performance.
• The Text Editor vs. Full-Scale IDE Debate: A core disagreement centers around whether it is fair to compare Zed to JetBrains. Proponents of JetBrains argue it is a full-featured IDE with deep indexing and tooling capabilities that a lightweight editor like Zed may never natively match. Conversely, others counter that those features are useless if the resource-heavy footprint disrupts a developer's flow state or causes crashes.
• Alternative Workflows: Many developers mention abandoning full IDEs altogether in favor of highly optimized, lightweight text editors backed by the Language Server Protocol (LSP). Solutions like Neovim, Emacs, and Helix are praised for offering powerful code intelligence and debugging with a fraction of the memory and CPU overhead.

this might be semantics but somehow it feels odd having links for pyramid coarsening and those for say mesh faces living in the same namespace

a statistical value that divides a ranked dataset into five equal groups, with each group representing 20% of the total population.

Repyy to u/bluestemgrass at https://old.reddit.com/r/typewriters/comments/1thup7q/reink_ribbon/ RE: Ribbon for a toy Sears Holiday typewriter.

Before you go too deeply here, is the ribbon made of cloth material (nylon, silk, or cotton) or is it a plastic film/carbon type?

If it's the latter, is it a proprietary cartridge or typewriter spools? What width is the ribbon? Cartridges with carbon can be difficult if not impossible to find for these models.

It looks like it may be a Sears rebranded version of some of the Byron Jardine/PETITE toy typewriters. https://typewriterdatabase.com/no_info.525.typewriter-serial-number-database There may be an imprint of the manufacturer on the bottom which would help to identify the original manufacturer.

Most Petite typewriters use T4430 or T4431 ribbon (1/4" wide or 6.50mm) which can sometimes be found on eBay and other sites. It generally requires original spools. These were generally carbon/plastic based ribbon.

If you have the original spools, you might find someone who still manufactures carbon-based ribbon and you can cannibalize it to spool onto your Sears Holiday. Look around for some of the 80s/90s film-based cartridges meant for word processors.

If it did originally have cloth ribbon you might be able to re-ink it, but the process typically tends to be very messy. Generally some glycerine and ink meant for metal stamps (not rubber) will get you where you'd like to go. Some have also soaked their old ribbon in WD-40 as a means of rejuvenation, but this is also time consuming and messy.

More detail/photos of the manufacturing details on the bottom and photos and measurements of the spools and the original type of "ribbon" will help immensely.

If you get the chance, add your example to the typewriter database and include photos of the spools as well as measurements of their width and diameter to help others with these questions/problems in the future.

this seems to suggest that there is no relationship between layers of the resolution pyramid, right?

what I am getting at is: how would I structure an oct-tree or a quad tree with this? I specifically want to (performantly) traverse only chunks that are within a query region.

so the chunks are row-major... and we are making a distinction between the "N" dimensions of space over which a vertex is indexed, and the remaining "columns" aka dimensions, known here as vertex "Attributes" which are stored elsewhere yes?

Belief elicitation and updating probably cannot occur in real time. Too much thinking is needed. As in, the previous workshops will encourage people to submit their beliefs before the workshop, and then talk them through it during the workshop, and then ask them to submit their beliefs after the workshop. Finally, share what others thought and ask them to update their beliefs.

We're probably going to need to structure this live discussion. It's not clear what an organic discussion of this would look like. Do we have specific computing models? Will people be citing certain papers? Will it just be vibes?

Also don't use the word "disagreements" here?

I don't think you need this bit at the end. I think that's kind of obvious. Instead, we could frame it in terms of ~'which approaches are (more) reliable for the practical questions?'

"drop-in segments" -- Make it clear that people can join for only the parts they're interested in.

This is kind of captured above, but I would do something more here with belief elicitation, interactive updating, and aggregating knowledge.

This isn't something we're trying to achieve. This is just a path we're thinking of taking with the workshop.

Tool tip with some reference discussion of the limitations here.

Mention the use of instrumental variables and other strategies here, perhaps in a tooltip. Give specific references in that tooltip.

Add a tooltip here, discussing some of the strengths and limitations of each, using the context and explanations discussed elsewhere . Let me know if you need more context on this.

... (tooltip) Note this is in part due to the aforemationed point that elasticity is not likely to be constant across an individual or market demand curve, and there will also be heterogeneity thus, it matters what parts of the curve you are looking at, and which markets, times, etc.

rephrase this -- it's not quite right, and confusing

Also be clear: these are estimates of own price elasticity, although it seems unlikely that cross-price elasticities would be more consistent or robust. And these are price-shifting field experiments. But also note, in a tooltip, some of the critiques of these experiments themselves. Ask me if you need context.

I don't see what this part of the sentence adds. If the data is available in later years, we can focus on that later data. Maybe just leave this out, or mention something like "partly because of the limited availability of these products, and lags in releasing data for research use." -- But That's tooltip details. Also, I want you to ground some of these statements with references and links, mainly in tooltips.

More when they expect demand to be more price sensitive --- have pro or counter-cyclical pricing; Put the details in a tooltip

These are key issues with ~traditional econometric (IO and quant. marketing) methods.

Field experiments (supermarket-level or at school cafeterias etc.) have less of an endogeneity issue, but some of these issues are still present (e.g., short term vs long term), and these are hard to implement at scale and cleanly, and have issues of their own (see the notes/discussion, and sketch these).

Hypothetical and small-value choice experiments and hypothetical discrete choice surveys have other important limitations (mention these, from the sources and discussion).

https://www.reddit.com/r/BaseballScorecards/comments/1tfc7t0/is_tom_hanks_the_unofficial_ambassador_of_the/

Video of Tom Hanks at the Yankees/Mets game televised on Fox in bottom of 6th with Yanks leading 2 to 5. He's showing the Met mascot something in his Thirty81 Press baseball scorecard and then posting for a photo.

That Pigeon Looks Just Like Michael Keaton<br /> The Late Show with Stephen Colbert

Definitely a late model Olivetti. Either a Studio 45, which was more common in the United States, or a Studio 46, both of which came in that color.

I'm leaning toward 46 because of some of the shape of the hood as well as the white variable button on the platen which I've only ever seen on the 46 while the 45s were typically black or had the button colored to match the body color.

These aren't demos—they're previews of how AI will collapse the gap between passive content consumption and active task completion. Every image, video frame, or document becomes a potential action surface. This fundamentally changes what 'content' means.

Natural human communication is indexical (context-dependent, gesture-relying). The 'prompt engineering' era forced humans to communicate like machines—verbose and explicit. AI Pointer inverts this: it's AI adapting to human communication norms, not vice versa.

The shift from spatial pointer (where?) to semantic pointer (what?) is a fundamental interface paradigm shift—equivalent in magnitude to moving from command-line to GUI. When pixels become actionable entities, every surface becomes an AI interface.

The mouse pointer—unchanged since Douglas Engelbart's 1968 demo—is now being reimagined for the first time. The counterintuitive insight: the most ubiquitous computing interface is also the most neglected for AI integration.

This reframes the AI interaction problem: instead of AI being a destination users navigate TO, AI should come TO the user's context. This 'ambient AI' design philosophy is the opposite of the chatbox paradigm that's dominated for 3 years.

This title frames a UI component as a foundational breakthrough. It's a masterclass in branding, elevating a simple interaction tool to the level of a core technological paradigm shift, implying the mouse is obsolete and AI-native interaction is the new default.

这个声明指出了研究方法的局限性。虽然ECI分数可以用于模型间的相对比较，但不能用于追踪不同领域的绝对性能或进步趋势。这是一个重要的方法论限制，意味着我们不能直接从这些数据推断Claude在软件工程或数学方面的绝对能力提升，只能比较不同模型间的相对表现。研究者需要谨慎解读这些数据，避免过度推断。

这个数据点表明Claude在软件工程方面的优势不是偶然现象，而是跨代际的持续特征。这种一致性增强了结果的可靠性，表明这可能是Claude模型设计或训练方法导致的系统性优势。与其他可能波动的性能指标相比，这种持续的优势更具说服力，可以作为Claude模型的一个稳定特征。

这个数据点揭示了不同领域基准测试数量的不平衡性。最极端情况下，数学基准测试是软件工程基准测试的两倍。这种不平衡可能导致某些模型的ECI分数偏向特定领域，影响结果的公平性。研究者在分析时需要考虑这种不平衡可能带来的偏差，特别是当模型在不同领域的测试数量差异较大时。

大多数人认为AI主要有利于资源丰富的大企业，对最小的企业（如个体创业者）帮助有限。但Anthropic明确表示AI可以显著扩展最小企业的可能性，这是一个与主流认知相悖的观点，暗示AI技术可能对经济中最脆弱的群体产生最大的积极影响。

大多数人认为小企业是创新和新技术采用的前沿。但数据显示事实恰恰相反，小企业在AI采用方面落后于大企业，这一反直觉的观察揭示了小企业在技术采用上的结构性障碍，挑战了人们对小企业创新形象的固有认知。

大多数人认为AI工具会增加复杂性，需要学习曲线和额外时间投入。但作者认为AI实际上可以简化流程，让小企业主从想法到发布只需一个流程，这与AI会增加复杂性的主流认知形成鲜明对比。

大多数小企业主认为资源限制和人力限制是他们业务发展的永久障碍。但这位CEO认为AI已经消除了这些约束，这是一个反直觉的观点，暗示AI不仅仅是提高效率的工具，而是从根本上改变了小企业的可能性边界。

大多数人认为AI只是大型企业的工具，会进一步加剧大公司与小企业之间的差距。但作者认为AI是首个能够缩小这种差距的技术，因为它能让小企业获得以前只有大公司才能拥有的资源和能力。这一观点挑战了AI会加剧不平等的主流认知。

这一时间节点指出了教育工具的发布计划，但缺乏具体月份。'今年'指的是2026年，但文章发布于2026年5月，所以可能意味着2026年下半年。这一时间框架相对模糊，没有提供明确的发布里程碑或测试阶段信息，难以评估项目进度。

这一数据点强调了小型农业对全球经济的重要性，涉及20亿人的生计。这表明农业AI工具的潜在影响范围巨大，但文章没有提供这一数据的来源年份和统计方法，也缺乏关于小型农业在全球农业总产值中占比的信息。

这是一个具体的资金承诺，涉及2亿美元在四个关键领域投入。按四年计算，平均每年5000万美元，对于AI慈善合作来说规模可观。然而，没有说明这2亿美元的具体分配比例，以及其中多少是现金资助vs.技术支持/使用信用额度。

Anthropic今年投入1亿美元支持服务企业实际部署AI，而非仅进行试点。这是一个具体的投资金额数据，反映了AI服务市场的发展趋势和投资规模。1亿美元的投资显示了企业对AI实际部署的信心和承诺。

提到超过5,000名领导者近距离了解了该联盟，并通过实际培训促成了一批早期采用者。这是一个具体的领导层参与度指标，显示了企业内部变革管理的重要性。5,000名领导者的参与表明了变革的广度和高层支持。

大多数人认为全面采用AI聊天机器人会显著提高效率和降低成本，但作者指出这种做法虽然在诱惑上很强，但实际上并未改变公司的底线。这一观点挑战了AI替代人工能带来显著财务收益的主流假设，强调了实际业务价值评估的重要性。

尽管许多企业热衷于用聊天机器人替代人工客服，但作者断言没有客户真正只想与聊天机器人交流。这一反直觉观点挑战了自动化客服的主流趋势，暗示了完全AI驱动的客户服务可能违背了客户期望和体验。

在AI狂热的环境中，大多数人期待AI能带来神奇的转型效果，但作者认为创新没有捷径，企业必须做艰苦的工作来理解AI的实际适用性。这一观点挑战了AI营销中常见的'神奇解决方案'叙事，强调了务实评估的重要性。

大多数人认为AI应该被视为独立解决方案，但作者认为这是错误的根本认知。Willis挑战了行业共识，指出企业错误地将AI本身视为解决方案，而不是将其作为支持实际解决方案的工具。这一观点颠覆了常见的AI战略思维。

大多数人认为企业在AI方面面临的是创新挑战或技术理解问题，但作者认为这实际上是一个缺乏耐心的心理问题。Willis指出企业领导者急于展示行动，将AI变成了一种'剧场'，而非真正寻求创新解决方案。这一观点挑战了主流对AI实施障碍的认知。

这里存在一个逻辑跳跃，从'大量AI报告'直接跳到'几乎完全不可管理'，没有解释为什么这些报告会导致如此严重的后果。文章没有讨论现有的邮件过滤系统、去重机制或其他可能的解决方案，暗示问题无法被技术手段缓解，这可能是一个未经证实的假设。

文章只是简单指出Torvalds和Kroah-Hartman的观点存在对比，但没有深入分析这种差异的原因或背景。这种对比缺乏上下文，可能导致读者误解Linux社区对AI工具的整体态度。改进应包括探讨两位开发者可能的不同职责或经验如何导致观点差异，或提供其他社区成员的观点以平衡报道。

这是一个缺乏证据的推论。Torvalds声称使用AI工具的人很可能发现相同的漏洞，但没有提供任何统计数据支持这一说法。改进应包括提供实际案例或数据，表明AI工具确实倾向于发现相同的漏洞，或者讨论为什么会出现这种情况。

这里存在以偏概全的逻辑漏洞。Torvalds假设所有处理AI报告的时间都用于转发和重复确认，但没有考虑这些报告可能带来的实际价值。改进应包括提供具体的时间分配数据，或讨论这些重复报告可能带来的意外好处，如发现不同严重程度的相同漏洞。

这是一个缺乏具体证据的强断言。Torvalds声称AI报告'几乎完全不可管理'，但没有提供任何数据来支持这一说法。改进方式应包括提供具体的邮件数量、处理时间增加的数据，或与其他时期的对比，以证明AI报告确实导致了管理困难。

This argument shifts the locus of the problem from the model's architecture to the socio-technical systems that surround it. It's a provocative claim that the core issue isn't 'how to build a better model' but 'how to build a better system for deploying and governing models,' placing the onus on developers and regulators, not just AI researchers.

This is a surprisingly pragmatic turn. Instead of just measuring diversity of output (which can be gamed), it proposes measuring the quality of disagreement. This introduces a normative standard for how an AI should change its mind—on principle, not on pressure—which is a radical departure from the typical RLHF goal of user satisfaction.

This is a powerful counterintuitive claim. It suggests that the problem isn't that these models don't know enough diverse values, but that they have been over-trained to agree with the user, creating a consensus that is not based on a robust representation of human values but on a learned desire to avoid friction.

This reframes AI sycophancy from a minor quirk into a serious political and sociological issue. It argues that the inability to surface disagreement isn't just an alignment bug but a mechanism for reinforcing power imbalances and suppressing minority viewpoints, making AI a tool for homogenization rather than deliberation.

This challenges the dominant paradigm of pluralistic alignment as a simple problem of data aggregation. It reframes it as a dynamic, interactional failure, suggesting current methods are building systems that are fundamentally broken at the conversational level, not just under-representative in their training data.

这是一个未经充分证实的断言。虽然IAM框架可能没有专门针对AI代理的详细指导，但它们的原则和控制措施可能适用于代理权限管理。这种绝对化的陈述可能低估了现有IAM框架的适应性和灵活性。

这是一个情感化的过度推论，将不采取安全措施的影响描述为'灾难性'，但没有提供具体证据支持这种极端后果。虽然AI代理安全漏洞确实带来风险，但使用这种夸张的语言可能掩盖了风险评估的客观性，导致过度反应或资源分配不当。

文章假设AI代理应该拥有与人类相同的权限水平，但这是一个未经证实的假设。在某些情况下，AI代理可能需要比人类更高的权限才能有效完成任务，尤其是在自动化大规模操作时。这种假设可能忽略了AI代理的特殊性和独特需求。

这是一个过度简化的结论。虽然AI代理确实是攻击表面，但它只是整个安全生态系统的一部分。用户行为、网络配置、身份验证机制等其他因素同样重要。将问题完全归咎于代理本身可能忽视了安全问题的多维度性质。

这是一个未经充分验证的绝对断言。文章虽然描述了六次攻击都针对凭证而非模型，但这可能只是当前观察到的模式，而非普遍规律。攻击者未来可能会转向模型本身，尤其是随着AI模型安全性的提高和凭证保护措施的加强。这种过度概括可能导致对模型安全风险的忽视。

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that regularly land in the biggest German publications like Welt, FAZ, Focus, Tagesschau, Zeit, and get cited on Wikipedia.

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AlphaEvolve在TPU设计中的应用表明其已成为基础设施的核心组件，能够在两天内完成过去需要数月人工努力的缓存替换策略优化。这展示了AI系统在加速硬件开发方面的巨大潜力，显著缩短了产品上市时间。

Jeff Dean的评论表明AlphaEvolve已经从软件层面深入到硬件设计，能够提出违反直觉但高效的电路设计，直接集成到TPU芯片中。这展示了AI系统在硬件设计领域的突破性应用，可能改变芯片设计范式。

除了20%的写入放大减少，AlphaEvolve还通过新的编译器优化策略将软件存储占用减少了近9%。这表明该系统在多个层面优化基础设施的能力，从硬件到软件栈都带来了显著效率提升。

20%的写入放大减少表明AlphaEvolve在存储系统优化方面的显著贡献。这直接转化为存储效率提升和成本降低，对于处理大规模数据的Google Spanner系统而言，这是一个重要的性能改进。

10.4%的路线优化提升和每年15,000公里的距离节省是具体且有意义的商业影响。对于物流公司而言，这转化为显著的燃料成本减少和碳排放降低，展示了AlphaEvolve在解决实际问题中的实际价值。

5%的灾害预测准确率提升虽然看似不大，但这是针对20种不同灾害类别的综合提升，对于灾害预警系统而言具有重要价值。这种提升可能挽救生命并减少经济损失，特别是在高风险地区。

这是一个惊人的性能提升，从14%到88%的可行解发现能力增加了约6倍。这表明AlphaEvolve在电网优化问题上有突破性进展，显著减少了电网后处理步骤的需求，可能带来巨大的能源效率提升。

大多数人认为工业机器人应该是纯粹的功能性设备，不应有个性或情感联系，但作者提到用户给机器人命名并接受这一做法，这挑战了人们对机器人设计的传统认知，暗示人机交互正在向更个性化的方向发展。

大多数机器人系统在遇到异常情况时需要人工干预，但作者描述了一个完全自动化的故障恢复机制，这挑战了人们对机器人系统鲁棒性的普遍认知，暗示AI已经能够处理各种异常情况。

大多数AI系统需要预处理数据或使用复杂的中间步骤，但作者声称他们的机器人直接从相机像素进行推理，这挑战了人们对计算机视觉系统架构的普遍理解，暗示了一种更高效的处理方式。

大多数人认为AI工具的使用是可逆的，停止使用即可回到原状态。但作者认为一旦AI生成的代码存在，即使停止使用AI工具，维护成本也不会消失，这揭示了AI工具使用的不可逆性，是一个反直觉的观点。

大多数人认为代码编写是软件开发的主要成本，而维护只是次要开销。但作者认为维护成本实际上是永恒的负担，会持续累积并最终超过开发成本，这是一个反直觉的观点，因为它挑战了传统的项目成本估算方法。

大多数人认为AI模型无法识别具体的测试基准或评估工具，但作者发现模型有时能够识别出正在使用的特定评估方法。这一发现极具颠覆性，因为它表明AI模型可能比我们想象的更了解测试环境，这可能解释为什么某些模型在特定测试中表现异常出色。

大多数人认为AI模型在评估测试中是被动的测试对象，但作者认为AI模型能够主动识别测试环境，这挑战了我们对AI评估的基本假设。这种自我意识可能导致测试结果失真，因为模型可能在测试中表现出与实际应用中不同的行为。

Indicates the model's performance extends beyond the specific training domains, suggesting a versatile reasoning capability that is a critical metric for general AI performance.

Details the methodological pipeline, emphasizing the transition from supervised learning (SFT) to reinforcement learning (RL) and the specific techniques used (reverse-perplexity curriculum, two-stage RL).

Highlights a key capability: handling extremely long reasoning chains (100K+ tokens). This is a significant metric for evaluating the depth and persistence of the model's problem-solving abilities.

Directly states the model's top-tier performance on prestigious, human-competitive olympiad benchmarks (IMO, USAMO, IPhO), establishing a high bar for success in AI reasoning.

Nvidia的Rubin等下一代AI芯片将转向3nm工艺节点。这一技术路线图显示了AI芯片制造向更先进工艺发展的趋势，将对供应链提出更高要求。

在300亿美元的同比增长中，约200亿美元来自HBM内存。这表明内存成本是推动总支出增长的主要因素，占比约67%，凸显了HBM在AI芯片成本结构中的主导地位。

组件支出从2024年的220亿美元增长到2025年的520亿美元，增幅超过100%。这一显著增长反映了AI芯片供应链成本的急剧上升，以及行业对关键组件投入的大幅增加。

与前两种组件相比，逻辑晶圆的消耗比例仅为11%，表明AI芯片设计公司在先进逻辑晶圆市场中仍占较小份额。这说明逻辑供应相对宽松，但也预示着随着AI需求增长，这一比例可能会上升。

即使TSMC在2025年扩大了CoWoS产能，前四大设计公司仍然占据了80-85%的总供应量。这表明虽然瓶颈有所缓解，但AI芯片对先进封装的需求依然占据主导地位，显示出这一领域的结构性供需失衡。

这个数据点表明AI芯片设计公司几乎垄断了TSMC的CoWoS晶圆产能，显示出供应链的极度紧张。这一比例接近100%，意味着其他客户几乎没有获得先进封装产能的空间，这反映了AI芯片供应链的严重瓶颈状态。

大多数人认为AI能正确处理并发状态管理，但作者发现AI会破坏并发模型的基本原则，直接修改状态而不是通过消息传递，导致数据竞争问题。

大多数人认为AI生成的代码更高效，但作者指出AI往往选择技术上最简单但长期维护困难的解决方案，因为它只关注当前任务的最短路径。

大多数人关注功能交付速度和代码量，但作者指出这些指标会掩盖系统复杂度的累积，导致看似成功的项目实际上正在积累技术债务。

大多数人认为AI可以同时处理功能实现和架构设计，但作者认为AI只擅长功能开发，缺乏架构意识，需要人类明确设计约束来避免系统变得混乱。

大多数人认为开发速度越快越好，但作者认为AI辅助开发的快速迭代会产生虚假的安全感，导致架构问题被掩盖，最终导致系统崩溃。

大多数人认为AI可以完全自主开发软件，但作者认为人类干预仍然必不可少，因为AI擅长实现功能但不理解架构设计，需要人类掌控整体方向。

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• supported on a wide range of platforms.

It provides - end-to-end encrypted IPv6 routing - between all network participants.

Peerings between nodes can be configured - using TCP/TLS connections over local area networks, - point-to-point links or - the Internet.

Even though the Yggdrasil Network - provides IPv6 routing between nodes,

peering connections can be set up over either IPv4 or IPv6 networks.

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eLife Assessment

This important study provides a comprehensive map of how touch-sensitive neurons in the fly head connect to downstream circuits, revealing parallel pathways that preserve spatial organization and identifying a developmentally defined circuit linking sensory input to grooming behavior. The evidence is convincing, with detailed anatomical reconstruction and quantitative analysis supporting the main claims, while the link to behaviour remains based on prior functional work. The study will be of interest to neuroscientists studying sensory processing and motor control, and provides an invaluable resource for future functional investigations.

Joint Public Review:

Summary:

Calle-Schuler et. al. reconstruct all the pre- and post-synaptic neurons to the bristle mechanosensory neurons on the adult fly head to understand if neural circuits support the parallel mechanosensory pathways, which could be instrumental in shaping the sequential motor patterns during fly grooming. They find that most presynaptic neurons, interneurons and excitatory post synaptic neurons are also somatotopically organized, such that each neuron is more connected to bristles mechanosensory neurons that are closer on the head and less connected to bristles mechanosensory neurons that are further away. These include the direct BMN-BMN circuits, excitatory interneurons, as well as the inhibitory networks. They also identify that the one entire hemi-lineage 23b form excitatory postsynaptic circuit with BMNs, highlighting how these circuits and hence their function could be developmentally determined.

Strengths:

This is a complete map of the all the neurons which make 5 or more pre- and post-synaptic connections of the fly head BMNs. Using this, the authors have identified various trends such as ascending neurons provide most of the GABAergic inhibitory input, which could provide the presynaptic inhibition essential for the parallel model for sequential grooming generation. Moreover, they identified that the entire cholinergic hemilineage 23b is postsynaptic to BMNs. Both their excitatory postsynaptic connectivity and inhibitory presynaptic connectivity demonstrate core motifs of the parallel circuits necessary for the hierarchical suppression model of grooming sequence.

Weaknesses:

Somatotropic organization with hierarchical suppression is an elegant mechanism to generate sequential motor sequence during grooming. Yet, anatomical connectivity alone, in absence of functional connectivity, cannot explain the grooming motor sequences. Future work should be aimed at mapping the functional connectivity with behavioral sequence.

Closing statement:

The authors have addressed the major concerns regarding clarity, scope, and interpretation. The manuscript is now significantly improved and is clearly framed as an anatomical resource that identifies circuit motifs consistent with existing models of grooming control.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

We sincerely thank the Reviewers for their careful reading and insightful critiques, which have helped make the manuscript clearer and more impactful.

In response to the Reviewers, we substantially revised the manuscript to improve clarity, framing, and accessibility for readers outside the Drosophila connectomics community, while keeping the core conclusions unchanged. We clarified the study’s scope (defining parallel circuit architecture rather than testing sufficiency for reconstructing grooming sequence order), restructured the last Introduction paragraph, several Results sections, and the Discussion to foreground the main findings and their relevance to the parallel hierarchical-suppression model. We also added key methodological clarifications for non-specialist readers, including how BMN classes were identified in FAFB by a correlative approach (with type-level, not single-bristle, resolution), how FlyWire/Codex synapse counts are defined (contacts vs T-bars), how sensory BMNs can have postsynaptic sites, and what is meant by ascending vs descending neurons in a brain-only dataset. Across the Results, we improved terminology and definitions (e.g., projection zones, hemilineage 23b, BMN nomenclature such as BM-InOm), clarified what derives from prior work (Eichler et al., 2024) versus new analyses, strengthened interpretation of BMN→motor connections as likely modulatory, and expanded explanation of postsynaptic partner categories. We also revised figures and legends to better highlight overlap/segregation and somatotopy, moved the cosine-similarity matrices into the main figures (new Figure 9), added a new graphical summary figure (new Figure 15), and explicitly acknowledged key limitations, including one-hemisphere analysis and lack of VNC coverage in FAFB.

In addition, in response to the suggestion of a rank-order test relating BMN→second-order wiring to the grooming hierarchy, we clarified throughout the revised manuscript that this study does not aim to test whether connectivity alone is sufficient to reconstruct grooming sequence order, and we removed wording that could imply such a claim. As detailed in our response to that specific critique below, sequence sufficiency is outside the scope of this study, and a simple linear ordering based on aggregate synapse weights is not straightforward to interpret in this system (e.g., BM-Taste vs. BM-InOm output strength does not track grooming order, BMNs likely contribute to multiple behaviors, and head grooming order is not resolved at sufficient granularity). We therefore respectfully request that the sentence in the eLife Assessment suggesting that the paper is weakened by not including this analysis be removed. As currently written, it frames an out-of-scope analysis as a missing test of the manuscript’s main claims and may mislead readers about the paper’s intended contribution: a synaptic-resolution anatomical definition of parallel BMN circuit architecture and motifs consistent with hierarchical suppression.

Public Reviews:

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Calle-Schuler et. al. reconstruct all the pre- and post-synaptic neurons to the bristle mechanosensory neurons on the adult fly head to understand how neural circuits determine the sequential motor patterns during fly grooming. They find that most presynaptic neurons, interneurons, and excitatory postsynaptic neurons are also somatotopically organized, such that each neuron is more connected to bristles mechanosensory neurons that are closer on the head and less connected to bristles mechanosensory neurons that are further away. These include the direct BMN-BMN circuits, excitatory interneurons, as well as the inhibitory networks. They also identify that the entire hemi-lineage 23b forms excitatory postsynaptic circuits with BMNs, highlighting how these circuits and hence their function could be developmentally determined.

Strengths:

This is a complete map of all the neurons that make 5 or more pre- and post-synaptic connections of the fly head BMNs. Using this, the authors have identified various trends, such as ascending neurons providing most of the GABAergic inhibitory input, which could provide the presynaptic inhibition essential for the parallel model for sequential grooming generation. Moreover, they identified that the entire cholinergic hemilineage 23b is postsynaptic to BMNs.

Weaknesses:

Although the somatotropic organization is an elegant mechanism to generate sequential motor sequences during grooming, none of the analyses in the paper directly demonstrate that this somatotropic connectivity is sufficient to generate hierarchical suppression and reconstruct the grooming sequence. If somatotropic organization is sufficient, then hierarchical clustering should recover the grooming sequence. Their detailed connectome enables the authors to test if some networks are more crucial for grooming sequence than others: to what extent can each network individually (ascending neurons-BMN alone) or a combination (BMN-BMN, ascending-BMN, BMN-descending, etc.) recover the sequence observed during grooming. If all the pre- and post-synaptic neurons put together cannot explain the sequence, then the sequence is probably determined by individual synaptic strengths or other key downstream neurons.

We appreciate the Reviewer’s interest in how BMN connectivity relates to the grooming sequence, and agree that understanding how mechanosensory circuits contribute to hierarchical action selection is an important direction. In this study, however, our goal was not to test whether connectivity alone is sufficient to reconstruct the full grooming sequence. Rather, we focused on defining the parallel circuit architecture underlying individual grooming movements and on identifying anatomical features—most notably extensive presynaptic inhibition—that are consistent with previously proposed models of hierarchical suppression.

We recognize that aspects of the Introduction and the references cited there to prior work on the grooming sequence may have led some readers to expect a direct sequence-prediction analysis. To address this, we revised the Introduction and Results to clarify the scope of the study and adjusted language to avoid implying that we aimed to derive the grooming order from connectivity. Consistent with this framing, the Abstract mentions the sequence only in the context of presynaptic inhibition, which provides anatomical support for existing models of hierarchical suppression. We therefore do not draw conclusions about the ordering of grooming movements from the connectome itself. Details of the specific manuscript revisions are provided below in the Recommendations for authors section.

The Reviewer suggests testing whether somatotopic organization is sufficient to recover the grooming sequence by clustering BMN connectivity or by examining whether specific subnetworks (e.g., BMN → ascending, BMN → descending, or BMN→BMN pathways) reproduce the sequence. We carefully considered these possibilities. However, several factors currently limit the interpretability of such analyses.

First, synaptic weight alone does not align with known features of the grooming sequence. For example, BM-Taste neurons contribute the majority of BMN synaptic output, yet proboscis grooming is not the first head grooming movement, whereas BM-InOm neurons contribute less than 9% of total output despite eye grooming occurring first. As we now clarify in the Results, global synapse number therefore does not predict the order of grooming movements.

Second, BMNs likely distribute signals across multiple behavioral pathways beyond grooming, including circuits involved in feeding and escape behaviors. Because the connectome aggregates all postsynaptic targets, analyses based solely on connectivity strength cannot isolate the subset of circuits specifically responsible for grooming-related action selection.

Third, the head grooming sequence itself has not been resolved at the spatial granularity required for such analyses across head regions. While eye grooming is well characterized as the first head movement, the relative ordering among antennae, proboscis, and other head bristle regions remains less clearly defined, making it difficult to evaluate correspondence between connectivity-derived rankings and behavioral order.

Because of these limitations, we concluded that clustering or network-based analyses aimed at reconstructing the grooming sequence from connectivity alone would be difficult to interpret and therefore chose not to include them. Accordingly, we have deliberately avoided claiming that the connectome is sufficient to generate the grooming sequence. Instead, we interpret the somatotopic architecture and inhibitory circuitry described here as anatomical features consistent with previously proposed models of hierarchical suppression, while leaving the question of sufficiency for future studies that integrate connectomics with functional and behavioral analyses.

Given that we do not claim sufficiency of the connectome for producing the grooming sequence, we respectfully request that the eLife Assessment avoid framing the manuscript around this expectation, as wording that implies the manuscript should reconstruct the sequence from connectivity could misrepresent the intended scope of the study and potentially mislead readers about its primary contributions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Schuler et al. present an extensive analysis of the synaptic connectivity of mechanosensory head bristles in the brain of Drosophila melanogaster. Based on the previously described set of bristle afferent neurons, (BMNs), located on the head, the study aims to provide a complete, quantitative assessment of all synaptic partners in the ventral brain. Activation of head bristles induces grooming behavior, which is hierarchically organized, and hypothesized to be grounded in a parallel cellular architecture in the central brain. The authors found evidence that, at the synaptic level, neurons downstream of the BMN afferents, namely the postsynaptic LB23 interneurons and recurrent GABAergic neurons (involved in sensory gain control), are organized in parallel, following the somatotopic organization described for the BMN afferents. This study, therefore, represents an important step towards a better understanding of the cellular circuits that govern the hierarchical order of sequentially organized grooming behavior in Drosophila melanogaster.

The study is well done, the images are well designed and extensive in number, but the account is challenging to read and digest for the reader outside the Drosophila /connectome community. It is amazing what can be done with the connectome nowadays using the up-to-date FAFB dataset, the analytical and visual tools (as in FlyWire), in combination with known anatomy/physiology/behavior in DM. I suggest that the authors provide more detail on hemilineages, their relationship to the FAB connectome, the predicted neurotransmitter identity, and the use of statistical CatMAID tools used in some of the Figures.

A graphical summary at the end of the study would be very useful to highlight the important findings focusing on neuron populations identified in this study and their position in the hypothesized parallel central circuitry of BMNs.

We thank the Reviewer for the thoughtful and constructive comments. In response, we substantially revised the manuscript to improve clarity and accessibility, particularly for readers outside the Drosophila connectomics community. We rewrote portions of the Introduction, Results, and Discussion to better foreground the main findings, reduce density, and more clearly distinguish prior work from the new analyses presented here. We also added methodological clarification throughout, including how BMN classes were identified in the FAFB dataset using a correlative, type-level approach, how FlyWire/Codex synapse counts are defined, and clarified terminology related to projection zones, pre- versus postsynaptic structure, and partner classes. To address the Reviewer’s request for more developmental context, we added a more explicit definition of hemilineages at first mention in the Abstract and Results. In addition, we revised figures and legends to make the somatotopic and parallel organization of the circuitry easier to interpret, including moving the cosine-similarity matrices into the main figures. Finally, in direct response to the Reviewer’s suggestion for a higher-level synthesis, we added a new graphical summary figure (Figure 15) at the end of the manuscript to highlight the principal neuron populations identified in the study and their proposed positions within the parallel central BMN circuitry. Together, we believe these revisions have made the manuscript clearer, more accessible, and better framed for a broad readership while preserving its core conclusions. Details of these changes are provided in the Recommendations for the authors section.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors set out to extend their previous mapping of Drosophila head mechanosensory neurons (Eichler et al., 2024) by reconstructing their full second-order connectome. Their aim is to reveal how bristle mechanosensory neurons (BMNs) interface with excitatory and inhibitory partners to generate location-specific grooming movements, and to identify the circuit motifs and developmental lineages that support this transformation.

Strengths:

The strengths of this work are clear. The authors present a comprehensive synaptic-resolution connectome for BMNs, identifying nearly all of their pre- and postsynaptic partners. This dataset reveals important circuit motifs:

(1) BMNs provide feedforward excitation to descending neurons, feedforward inhibition to interneurons, and are themselves strongly regulated by GABAergic presynaptic inhibition.

(2) These motifs together support the idea that BMN activity is locally gated and hierarchically suppressed, fitting well with known behavioural sequences of grooming.

(3) The study also shows that connectivity preserves somatotopy, such that BMNs from neighbouring bristle populations converge onto shared partners, while distant BMNs remain segregated.

(4) A developmental analysis reveals both primary and secondary partners, suggesting a layered scaffold plus adult-specific elaborations.

(5) Finally, the identification of hemilineage 23b (LB23) as a core postsynaptic pathway - incorporating previously described antennal grooming neurons (aBN2) - provides a striking link between developmental lineage, anatomical connectivity, and behavioral output.

(6) Together, the dataset represents a valuable resource for the neuroscience community and a foundation for future functional studies.

Weaknesses:

There are also some weaknesses that mostly only limit clarity.

(1) The writing is dense, with results often presented in a cryptic fashion and the functional implications deferred to the discussion. As a result, the significance of circuit motifs such as BMN→motor or reciprocal inhibitory loops is sometimes buried, rather than highlighted when first described.

We thank the Reviewer for this helpful suggestion. In response, we revised several sections of the Results to improve clarity and more clearly highlight the functional significance of key circuit motifs when they are first introduced. Specifically, we streamlined dense passages and added brief explanatory statements linking motifs such as reciprocal inhibitory loops to their potential roles in the proposed parallel circuit architecture. Additional details of these revisions are provided in the Recommendations for the authors section below.

(2) Some assumptions require more explanation for non-specialist readers - for example, how bristle identity is inferred in EM in the absence of cuticular structures, or what is meant by "ascending" and "descending" in a dataset that does not include the ventral nerve cord. While some of this comes from the earlier paper, it would help readers of this one to explain this.

In response, we added clarifying text describing how BMN types were identified in the FAFB dataset using a correlative approach based on stereotyped projection morphologies and prior light-level anatomical data, and we explicitly state the limits of this type-level assignment in the absence of cuticular bristles in the EM volume. We also expanded the explanation of partner categories, including what is meant by “ascending” and “descending” neurons in a brain-only dataset. Additional details of these revisions are provided in the Recommendations for the authors section.

(3) Visualization choices also sometimes obscure key conclusions: network graphs can be visually appealing but do not clearly convey somatotopy or BMN-type differences; heatmaps or region-level matrices would make the parallel, block-like organization of the circuit more evident.

We incorporated connectivity matrices (cosine-similarity heatmaps) into the main figures to more clearly illustrate the somatotopic and parallel organization of BMN connectivity, complementing the network graph visualizations (new Figure 9). These matrices make the block-like structure of BMN partner relationships more apparent and help highlight differences among BMN types; additional details are provided in the Recommendations for the authors section.

(4) The data might also speak to roles beyond grooming (e.g., mechanosensory modulation of posture or feeding), and a brief acknowledgement of this would broaden the impact.

We added text acknowledging that BMNs contribute to additional behaviors beyond grooming, such as feeding and other mechanosensory-guided actions. These roles are supported by prior studies of bristle function and are also consistent with the diverse downstream circuits revealed in the connectome. This clarification broadens the interpretation of the dataset while maintaining the primary focus of the study on grooming-related circuitry.

(5) The restriction to one hemisphere should be explicitly acknowledged as a limitation when framing this as a 'comprehensive' connectome.

We thank the Reviewer for this suggestion. We now explicitly acknowledge this limitation in both the Results and Discussion.

In the Results section entitled “The BMN connectome” we added a sentence at the end of the paragraph that mentions the limitations. This sentence reads: “In addition, because our analysis was restricted to BMNs entering the left hemisphere, the complete right-side BMN connectome is not included, limiting assessment of bilateral symmetry, inter-hemispheric coordination, and variability across sides.”

The last paragraph of the first Discussion section describes limitations to our ‘comprehensive’ connectome. The text in this paragraph pertaining to the left/right variability reads: Second, the analysis focuses only on BMNs from the left hemisphere. Although contralateral neurons synapsing with left-side BMNs are included, the absence of the right-side BMN connectome limits assessment of bilateral symmetry, interhemispheric coordination, and side-to-side variability.

Overall, the authors achieve their main goal: they convincingly show that BMNs connect into parallel, somatotopically organized pathways, with LB23 providing a key lineage-based link from sensory input to grooming output. The dataset is carefully analyzed, and while the presentation could be streamlined, the connectome will be a valuable resource for researchers studying sensory processing, motor control, and the logic of circuit organization.

Recommendations for the authors:

Reviewing Editor Comments:

We enjoyed this work and are enthusiastic about its contribution: the resource is valuable, and the anatomical evidence is solid. Most of our suggestions concern clarity and visualization, detailed below.

In addition, the editors and reviewers felt one focused analysis would materially strengthen the paper: please use the BMN→second-order synapse weights to produce a similarity-based, one-dimensional order of BMN types and test its agreement with the known grooming sequence (e.g., via a rank correlation). A positive result would support sufficiency of the mapped wiring for the sequence; if not, the claims can be framed as "consistent with" rather than "sufficient for."

We appreciate the Reviewers’ interest in how BMN connectivity relates to the grooming sequence, and agree that understanding how mechanosensory circuits contribute to hierarchical action selection is an important direction. In this study, however, our goal was not to test whether connectivity alone is sufficient to reconstruct the full grooming sequence. Rather, we focused on defining the parallel circuit architecture underlying individual grooming movements and on identifying anatomical features—most notably extensive presynaptic inhibition—that are consistent with previously proposed models of hierarchical suppression.

We recognize that references in the Introduction to prior work on the grooming sequence may have led some readers to expect a direct sequence-prediction analysis. To address this, we revised the Introduction and Results to clarify scope and adjusted language to avoid implying that we aimed to derive the grooming order from connectivity. Consistent with this framing, the Abstract mentions the sequence only in the context of presynaptic inhibition, which provides anatomical support for existing models of hierarchical suppression. We do not draw conclusions about the ordering of grooming movements from the connectome itself.

The Reviewer-suggested analysis—using BMN-to-partner synaptic weights to derive a linear ordering of BMN types—is conceptually reasonable, but its interpretability is limited at present. First, synaptic weight alone does not align with known features of the grooming sequence: BM-Taste neurons contribute the majority of BMN synaptic output, yet proboscis grooming is not the first head movement, whereas BM-InOm neurons contribute less than 9% of output despite eye grooming occurring first. Second, BMNs likely project to multiple pathways supporting distinct behaviors, such as feeding and escape, complicating any attempt to infer a single grooming hierarchy from aggregate connectivity. Third, the head grooming sequence itself has not been resolved at the granularity required for such an analysis, particularly among the antennae, proboscis, and other head bristle regions. Accordingly, we have deliberately refrained from making claims that connectivity is sufficient to generate the grooming order.

Given that we do not claim sufficiency of the connectome for producing the grooming sequence, we respectfully request that this point be removed from the public eLife Assessment, as its current wording implies an unmet expectation outside the intended scope of the study and could mislead readers about the manuscript’s primary contributions. We appreciate the opportunity to clarify our framing and to ensure that the goals and outcomes of the work are accurately represented.

Revisions.

(1) Gave the last paragraph of the Introduction more structure to clearly state the main findings of the study in the context of what we learned about the circuit architecture proposed by the parallel model of hierarchical suppression.

New paragraph: “Here, we define the synaptic connectivity of head BMNs by mapping nearly all of their pre- and postsynaptic partners—including other BMNs, ascending and descending neurons, interneurons, and motor neurons—within the FAFB dataset. Consistent with a parallel model, we find that both presynaptic and postsynaptic partners are somatotopically organized, preserving the spatial layout of the bristle map and revealing a set of parallel mechanosensory pathways that correspond to distinct head regions. Within the postsynaptic population, we identify the developmentally-related cholinergic hemilineage 23b (LB23), whose members exhibit region-specific BMN connectivity and include neurons previously shown to elicit aimed head grooming movements when activated. This demonstrates how LB23 neurons participate in parallel postsynaptic pathways that may drive discrete components of head grooming. On the input side, BMNs receive substantial presynaptic inhibition from predominantly GABAergic partners, providing strong feedback and feedforward control over mechanosensory signaling. This inhibitory architecture is consistent with hierarchical-suppression models in which inhibition regulates sensory gain and prioritizes competing actions in the grooming sequence. Together, this mechanosensory connectome reveals core organizational principles—parallel somatotopic architecture, region-specific excitatory pathways, and strong inhibitory regulation—that are thought to constitute foundational circuit motifs supporting head grooming.”

(2) In the Results section entitled “BMN synapses show large quantitative variation across types”, we added text to the third paragraph that makes it clear that raw synapse numbers alone do not predict the sequence, if one just compares the first movement (eye grooming) and a later movement in the sequence (proboscis grooming).

That text reads: “Notably, if grooming order were driven simply by relative sensory drive—i.e., by BMN types with the strongest synaptic output eliciting cleaning of their corresponding locations first—then synapse number should track the grooming sequence. Instead, differences in synapse number do not align with the order of the grooming sequence: BM-Taste neurons account for the majority of BMN output, yet proboscis grooming is not the first head grooming movement performed, whereas BM-InOm neurons contribute only a small fraction of output despite eye grooming occurring first (Figure 1E, Figure 2A,B). This indicates that global synapse number alone is not a reliable predictor of the grooming sequence.”

(3) In the results section entitled “BMN postsynaptic partners are excitatory and inhibitory”, we added text to two different sentences to better link the results with what we are trying to test with respect to the parallel model of hierarchical suppression.

Modified sentence 1: “This excitation is hypothesized in the parallel model to help form BMN feedforward circuits that elicit aimed grooming of specific body locations, while feedforward inhibition could mediate suppression of competing grooming movements (Figure 1 – figure supplement 1A, B).”

Modified sentence 2: “Taken together, the BMN postsynaptic partners include a diverse set of neurons that mediate both feedforward excitation and inhibition and feedback inhibition, features predicted by the parallel model.”

(4) In the Results section entitled “BMNs and LB23 neurons form somatotopic pathways that elicit aimed grooming, we added text to the first sentence that better ties the section to the overall goals of the manuscript.

That text now reads: “In accordance with the parallel model of grooming, we hypothesize that BMNs connect with somatotopically organized excitatory parallel pathways eliciting aimed grooming of specific head locations (Figure 1 – figure supplement 1A, C).”

Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

(1) The connectivity matrix (like that in Lesser et al., 2024, Nature, and also in Figure 9, Figure Supplement 1 of this paper) is an easier-to-digest representation of the various connections shown in Figure 2.

We agree that connectivity matrices provide a clearer and more accessible representation of these data. Based on the context of this and other comments, we understand the Reviewer to be referring to Figure 9 rather than Figure 2. In response, we have moved the cosine-similarity connectivity matrices previously shown in Figure 9 – figure supplement 1 into the main manuscript, where they now appear as Figure 9.

These matrices depict similarity among BMN postsynaptic partners. At present, we are unable to generate equivalent matrices for presynaptic partners due to recent personnel constraints in the lab. For this reason, we have retained the original network-graph representation (now Figure 10) to display the full pre- and postsynaptic connectome structure.

We hope this compromise addresses the Reviewer’s request while clearly presenting the available analyses.

(2) Again, "Cosine based clustering is essential to demonstrate the somatotropic organization" the data in Figure 9 - Figure Supplement 1 demonstrates this better than the main Figure 9. This supplementary figure would be a great addition to the main manuscript.

Please see the preceding response for details on the changes that we made to address this reviewer comment.

(3) Figure 9 - Figure Supplement 1A: Can the authors explain why the InOm occur in two clusters (red in top and bottom)? Do InOm neurons show two different kinds of connectivity patterns?

This is a great question! We had written a possible explanation for this in the Discussion section entitled “A synaptic resolution connectome of a head somatotopic map”.

“One notable exception to this pattern is the BM-InOm population, which occupies a central position in network diagrams and exhibits broad connectivity similarity with BMNs from across the head (Figure 9A, Figure 10A-E). This likely reflects the large surface area of the compound eyes, which span dorsal, ventral, and posterior regions and neighbor multiple bristle populations. Consistent with previous work showing morphological diversity among BM-InOm neurons (Eichler et al., 2024), our output connectivity analysis suggests the presence of multiple BM-InOm subtypes defined by distinct partner profiles (Figure 9A). Future work will be needed to determine how this heterogeneity relates to spatial organization within the eye.”

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

All further comments for the authors are aimed at a better understanding of the text and for clarity. The manuscript needs revision.

(1) Ventral brain:

Please specify this term. Is it the SEG, or the gnathal ganglion? Throughout the paper, 'ventral brain', or 'brain', is the only anatomical terms you use. Are all pre-/post- partners of BMNs located in this region? I understand that you provide a statistical analysis on a network level, here, but as far as I know, the neuropil regions in Drosophila are reported in more detail on the macroscopic level (see, e.g., Itoh).

Based on our understanding of the Ito et al reference, SEG was “retired” in that manuscript in favor of gnathal ganglia. We considered using the term subesophageal zone (SEZ) in the manuscript, but ultimately chose not to adopt it. In the Drosophila brain nomenclature (Ito et al., 2014), the SEZ is defined as a region below the esophagus that encompasses multiple neuropils, such as the gnathal ganglia (GNG) and saddle (SAD), rather than a single anatomically discrete structure.

In our dataset, the GNG are the ventral-most neuropil containing the BMN projections and the highest density of BMN-related synapses, and we therefore refer to this structure explicitly where appropriate. However, BMN pre- and postsynaptic partners are not confined to the GNG or to the SEZ as a whole; some partner neurites extend dorsally into additional neuropils. As a result, the term SEZ does not accurately capture the full spatial extent of the BMN connectome analyzed here.

For clarity and consistency across analyses that span multiple adjacent neuropils, we therefore use the broader functional descriptor “ventral brain”, while explicitly identifying the gnathal ganglia and other neuropils when discussing neuropil-level synapse distributions. We believe this approach most accurately reflects both the anatomical organization of the circuit and the scope of our analysis.

Given this Reviewer’s comment, we anticipate that not mentioning the SEZ in this manuscript might result in similar confusion among readers of our manuscript. Therefore, we now mention the SEZ and the supraesophageal zone (SPZ) at the end of the Results section entitled “Synapses of BMN partners are mostly concentrated in the ventral brain”. We also added the SEZ and the SPZ to the new last summary figure (Figure 15) to help clarify the locations of the BMNs and their second order connectome.

That text reads: “Thus, while most neuropils containing synapses of second-order BMN partners are located below the esophagus (in the subesophageal zone, SEZ), we found more limited involvement of neuropils in the supraesophageal zone (SPZ; above the esophagus), suggesting relatively limited direct top-down control.”

(2) Please provide greater clarity in your use of the terms synapse-presynapse-pre- and postsynaptic partners:

In insects, synapses are polyads. It is therefore essential to distinguish whether by presynaptic (pre) you mean 1. the number of T-bars (presynaptic sites) or 2. the number of (outgoing) synaptic contacts made by a single presynaptic T-bar site. For example, a synapse configured as a tetrad (a polyad) consists of one presynaptic T-bar opposed to four postsynaptic profiles and can be counted either as one synapse (one presynaptic site, one T-bar, in CATMAID: a presynaptic connector) OR as four (outgoing) synaptic connections since the single T-bar connects to four different postsynaptic profiles. This distinction is crucial for quantifying synaptic networks in insects. Thus, the "number of synapses" may refer to 1. The number of presynaptic sites = number of T-bars = number of polyads formed by a particular neuron. 2. the number of actually outgoing synaptic contacts, a number that also reflects the degree of polyadicity. 3. number of postsynaptic sites (that is easy).

This distinction (regarding the counts of presynapses) was reported in previous connectome studies (e.g., Horne, 2018; Gruber, 2025; Schlegel,2023). Schlegel notes: ' Insect synapses are polyadic, i.e., each presynaptic site can be associated with multiple postsynaptic sites. In contrast to the Janelia hemibrain dataset, the synapse predictions used in FlyWire do not have a concept of a unitary presynaptic site associated with a T-bar. Therefore, presynapse counts used in this paper do not represent the number of presynaptic sites but rather the number of outgoing connections.' End of citation from Schlegel.

We thank the Reviewer for highlighting this important distinction. We now clarify in the Materials and methods that synapse counts are based on Codex/FlyWire annotations, which report individual pre- and postsynaptic contacts rather than unitary presynaptic sites (T-bars), consistent with prior FlyWire-based connectome studies (e.g., Schlegel et al.). We also added a brief clarification in the Results indicating that pre- and postsynaptic numbers refer to incoming and outgoing contacts.

We added a sentence to the first section of the Materials and methods entitled “Connectome data and neuron meshes”. This text reads: “Synapse counts throughout this study are based on FlyWire/Codex synapse annotations and represent the number of individual pre- to postsynaptic contacts (incoming or outgoing connections), rather than the number of presynaptic active sites (T-bars); thus, presynaptic counts reflect polyadic connectivity as described previously (Schlegel et al., 2023).”

(3) In your study, a potential misunderstanding of this distinction arises when comparing statements on line 168 versus line 184:

On line 168, you state: '... each BMN type having .... more postsynaptic than presynaptic sites'. However, on line 184 you state: 'There were significantly more postsynaptic than presynaptic partners, in agreement with the BMNs containing more presynaptic than postsynaptic structures. These are contradictory: the statement on line 168 seems to refer to the number of presynaptic T-bars, while on line 184 you refer to the number of actually outgoing connections (which more accurately reflects the degree of polyadicity). Since BMNs are sensory afferent, they are indeed expected to have more outgoing synapses into the central brain.

We thank the Reviewer for identifying this mistake. We have revised the sentence at former line 168 to now read: “In addition to differing in total synapse number, BMN types vary in their pre- versus postsynaptic composition: all BMNs contain both (Eichler et al., 2024), with presynaptic sites outnumbering postsynaptic sites by ~2× to ~9× across types (mean ≈5:1 output-to-input ratio, Figure 2 – figure supplement 1A, B, Supplementary file 2, Supplementary file 3).”

(4) Identification of bristle sensory afferents in the brain:

This is explained in more detail in the Eichler paper, but not here. I do not understand how you identified these neurons in the FAFB dataset. The number and distribution of the individuum of the FABF EM dataset are not known, and because there is variability in the number of bristles in individual flies, the true number of bristle neurons for synaptic analysis can only be estimated. The correlative approach necessary to find the bristle sensory neurons in the FAFB set is still unclear to me. See also my comments on Figure 1.

We thank the Reviewer for raising this point. We agree that our original draft did not clearly explain the correlative approach used to identify head BMNs in the FAFB dataset, and we have revised the manuscript to make this workflow explicit.

In our prior work (Eichler et al., 2024), we quantified the number of bristles in each head bristle population and assessed the extent to which populations are invariant versus variable across individuals. This established an expected range for BMN counts by bristle population and clarified the level of variability that can be expected biologically.

We then identified BMN types corresponding to specific bristle populations using different techniques, such as dye fills and light microscopy, which allowed us to define the characteristic projection morphologies and CNS entry routes associated with each population. These light-level anatomical signatures provided the basis for locating the corresponding axons in the FAFB EM volume and reconstructing the same neuron classes in EM. Importantly, because bristles themselves are not present in the EM volume, this approach supports type-level assignment (bristle population/BMN class) rather than single-bristle resolution, and we now state this explicitly to avoid overinterpretation.

To ensure this is clear to readers who have not read Eichler et al., we have added explanatory text in the Results and expanded the Figure 1 legend describing: (i) how BMN types were identified and matched, (ii) what can and cannot be resolved given natural bristle-number variability, and (iii) how this impacts interpretation of “completeness” at the level of BMN types rather than individual bristles.

In paragraph 1 of the first Results section, entitled “BMN synapses are somatotopically distributed in the ventral brain”, we added text that briefly describes the previous linkage of the head BMNs to the FAFB dataset. That text reads: “In prior work (Eichler et al., 2024), we showed that head bristle populations are innervated by specific BMN types whose axons project to distinct, spatially localized regions (projection zones) in the ventral brain (Figure 1C,D, left, Figure 1 – figure supplement 2A-E). This was determined using dye fills and light-microscopy-based tracing to identify BMN types innervating defined head bristle populations and to establish their characteristic brain projection morphologies. Bristle population counts and their variability across individuals provided expectations for BMN number per type. This quantitative constraint, combined with the highly stereotyped projection morphologies, provided a correlative anatomical framework to locate and reconstruct nearly all BMNs in the FAFB serial-section EM volume and map their projections into the CNS. Because FAFB does not include the head cuticular bristles, individual BMNs could not be linked to single bristles. Therefore, these assignments are necessarily correlative and provide type-level (population) rather than single-bristle resolution. Nevertheless, this level of resolution was sufficient to define somatotopically organized projection zones."

(5) Results:

(a) Line 102: explain hemilineage 23 B

We added text in the manuscript to better define hemilineages.

In the Abstract, we added to a sentence that highlights that the LB23 neurons are developmentally related. That sentence now reads: “We identified an excitatory cholinergic hemilineage (hemilineage 23b), a developmentally related group of neurons that elicits aimed head grooming and exhibit differential connectivity with BMNs from distinct head locations, revealing a lineage-based somatotopically organized parallel circuit architecture.”

Results section entitled “The entire cholinergic hemilineage 23b (LB23) is postsynaptic to BMNs”, we added a sentence that defines hemilineage at its first mention in the Results section. We also made slight modifications to the preceding and following sentences. That text reads: “To identify neurons crucial for establishing the BMN-postsynaptic parallel pathways that elicit head grooming movements, we focused on secondary hemilineages. In the Drosophila CNS, a hemilineage refers to the cohort of neurons derived from a single stem cell-like neuroblast that share a common developmental origin, stereotyped morphology, and are thought to have related functional roles within a circuit (Harris et al., 2015; Wreden et al., 2017). This focus was motivated by earlier findings that neurons whose activation elicited head grooming had morphologies consistent with specific hemilineages (Hampel et al., 2015; Seeds et al., 2014).”

(b) Line 151: - line 171: it is not clear to me what a projection zone is.

We thank the Reviewer for raising this point. We agree that the term “projection zone” benefits from a brief clarification. We have made minor edits at two locations to explicitly state that projection zones refer to spatially localized regions of BMN axonal arborization and synaptic distribution corresponding to specific head locations.

Changes made in the manuscript:

A sentence that first introduces the term in the fourth paragraph of the Introduction now reads: “Indeed, the BMN axon projections in the central nervous system (CNS) show a somatotopic arrangement, where distinct projection zones—spatially localized regions of axonal arborization and synaptic output—correspond to specific head and body locations (Eichler et al., 2024; Johnson and Murphey, 1985; Murphey et al., 1989; Newland, 1991; Newland et al., 2000; Tsubouchi et al., 2017).”

In a sentence in the first paragraph of the first Results section, we added a brief clarifying definition of “projection zones” at their first mention in the Results. That sentence reads: In prior work (Eichler et al., 2024), we showed that head bristle populations are innervated by specific BMN types whose axons project to distinct, spatially localized regions (projection zones) in the ventral brain (Figure 1C,D, left, Figure 1 – figure supplement 2A-E).

(c) Input-output versus presynapse-postsynapse?

A revised sentence in the last sentence of the Results section makes this distinction clear: In addition to differing in total synapse number, BMN types vary in their pre- versus postsynaptic composition: all BMNs contain both (Eichler et al., 2024), with presynaptic sites outnumbering postsynaptic sites by ~2× to ~9× across types (mean ≈5:1 output-to-input ratio, Figure 2 – figure supplement 1A,B, Supplementary file 2, Supplementary file 3).

(6) Figures:

For clarity, it would be helpful if you indicated by the arrow the name of the sensory location (antenna, eye, etc.).

We appreciate this suggestion. Major sensory locations corresponding to different head bristle populations are indicated in Figure 1 – figure supplement 1C. We explored adding these labels directly to Figure 1A, but found that doing so made the panel overly crowded and less clear. To improve visibility while keeping the main figure uncluttered, we now explicitly direct readers to this figure supplement in the Introduction.

Specifically, we added a reference to Figure 1 – figure supplement 1C in the following sentence in the Introduction: Dust-induced head grooming is performed by the forelegs that start with the eyes and progress to other locations such as the proboscis and antennae (major head locations shown in Figure 1 – figure supplement 1C) (Seeds et al., 2014).

(a) Figure 1:

A: the presence of bristle types on the head. Are the JO afferents you mention in the text reported here?

Figure 1 does not include the JONs, which were described in detail in our previous study (Hampel et al., 2020).

The JONs are mentioned in the Figure 1 – figure supplement 1. We have added text to this legend to indicate that the JONs are not the subject of this study. This text reads: “(C) Mechanosensory neurons from different head locations project to distinct, somatotopically organized zones in the ventral brain and elicit aimed grooming of those locations, including the antennae (via JONs [Johnston’s organ neurons; not analyzed in this study] and BMNs), eyes (BMNs), and proboscis (BMNs).”

Are the reconstructions shown 1 B-D also from the Eichler paper?

We regret that this was not explicitly stated in the figure legend, and have revised the legend to distinguish between what was previously published and what is new to this study.

In the Figure 1 legend, we revised the following sentence: (C, D) Reconstructed BMN projections in the ventral brain (left, previously described in (Eichler et al., 2024)) and their corresponding pre- and postsynaptic sites (right, this study), colored by type according to the bristles that they innervate.

To make this clearer in the main text, we have rewritten the first sentence in the first paragraph of the Results: In prior work (Eichler et al., 2024), we showed that head bristle populations are innervated by specific BMN types whose axons project to distinct, spatially localized regions (projection zones) in the ventral brain (Figure 1C,D, left, Figure 1 – figure supplement 2A-E).

The dots are symbolic, or do they represent the number of bristles? The number of bristles cannot be identified, and thus stems from the FABF dataset.

The dots are symbolic and do not represent the number of bristles in the FAFB dataset. As noted in response to a related reviewer comment above, the numbers and variability of head bristles were quantified in our prior work (Eichler et al., 2024). We also used dye fills and light-microscopy approaches, which provided the framework for linking BMN types to bristle populations. We have clarified this point in the revised manuscript, as described in the response above.

Synapse number of bristle afferents: number of all pre-and postsynaptic contacts?

We have addressed this point above.

(b) Figure 2:

Again, the term synapses refers to all pre-and postsynaptic contacts ?

The Figure 2 legend indicates that synapse numbers include both input and output synapses. Additionally, now the first reference to Figure 2 indicates that numbers refer to both input and output synapses.

(c) Figure 2:

Supplement presynaptic/postsynaptic means pre- and post partner?

Presynaptic: number of BMNs that were connected with at least 5 synapses to any given presynaptic partner (n), the numbers of synaptic inputs to BMNs (inputs), and the number of presynaptic partners (partners). Postsynaptic: number of BMNs that were connected with at least 5 synapses to any given postsynaptic partner, the numbers of synaptic outputs to postsynaptic partners, and the number of postsynaptic partners.

(d) Figure 3:

Explain downstream-upstream

Downstream refers to postsynaptic while upstream refers to presynaptic partners or pathways.

Comparing the right side of the Sankey d. with your diagram in B, just by judging, I see more partners of descending (post) than interneurons (post) in A. However, in B, there are clearly more postsynaptic interneurons than descending posts? There are no numbers in Figure 3A.

This is a great point! Figure 3A (the Sankey diagram) summarizes the fraction of BMN synaptic output distributed across partner classes, normalized within each BMN type. In this representation, descending neurons occupy a larger fraction because, across BMN types, they collectively receive a higher proportion of BMN output synapses.

In contrast, Figure 3B (the sunburst plot) summarizes the number of distinct postsynaptic partner neurons in each category. Here, interneurons are more numerous than descending neurons, even though individual interneurons tend to receive fewer BMN synapses on average.

Thus, the two plots are consistent: descending neurons are fewer in number but receive more synapses per neuron, whereas interneurons are more numerous but receive fewer synapses per neuron on average. When postsynaptic synapse counts are summed (as in the bottom plots), the totals for descending neurons and interneurons can therefore appear similar, despite their different representations in the Sankey diagram.

We have added text in the Results section entitled “BMN synaptic partners in the CNS: ascending, descending, and interneurons”. Text was added here because it also nicely responds to another Reviewer comment below for more description of the postsynaptic partners. That added text reads: “Interneurons are more numerous as distinct partner neurons, whereas descending neurons receive a larger fraction of BMN output synapses across BMN types (Figure 3A,B). Thus, descending neurons are fewer in number but tend to receive more BMN synapses per neuron on average, while interneurons are more numerous but often receive fewer synapses per neuron.”

(e) Figure 10: I cannot see colored circles. I found Figure 10 very hard to understand. Is this a visualization created in CATMAID? As I mentioned before, a graphical summary highlighting the information flow and architecture of the circuits analyzed in this study would be useful. In such a diagram, you could combine the findings of your study, the open question, and the undeciphered pathways. In short, a schematic of the current knowledge of the potentially parallel and recurrent architecture of the BMN circuitry.

Figure 10 (now Figure 11) is intended to specifically examine neurons that are both pre- and postsynaptic to BMNs, rather than to summarize the full connectome. The goal of this figure is to highlight two features of pre/post neurons: their somatotopic connectivity with BMN types and the presence of bilaterally symmetric neuron pairs that connect to common BMN populations.

This visualization was generated from connectome-derived connectivity data and not from CATMAID, although it uses neuron reconstructions and synapse annotations from the FAFB dataset. The colored nodes represent BMN types and are now consistently referred to as “dots” rather than “circles” to better match their appearance. We have simplified the figure legend to clarify these points.

In response to this and related comments, we also added a new graphical summary figure (Figure 15) at the end of the manuscript that schematically summarizes the information flow and parallel, recurrent architecture of the BMN circuitry at a higher level.

(7) Discussion:

I found the first part of your discussion hard to read; the second part is better. You can condense the discussion by mentioning the results/hypothesis of previous work once, and avoiding repetitions, such as the uniqueness of the BMN connectome/FAB dataset.

In response to this comment, we condensed the opening portion of the Discussion by reducing repetition of background and prior findings, particularly references to earlier BMN work and the uniqueness of the FAFB dataset. We streamlined overlapping sections, mentioned prior hypotheses and results only once, and focused the revised text more directly on the new contributions of this study—namely, the synaptic-resolution organization, somatotopic connectivity, and circuit principles revealed by the BMN connectome.

There are several cases of vague sentences, e.g.: a) Line 827: 'Head BMNs project from bristles to somatotopically organized zones in the brain (? ventral brain ?), with those innervating neighboring populations (? of bristles ?) occupying overlapping zones (Figure 1A-D)'.

We made this suggested change: Head BMNs project from bristles to somatotopically organized zones in the ventral brain, with those innervating neighboring bristle populations occupying overlapping zones (Figure 1A-D).

A remark: maybe you should indicate in Figure 1D the overlapping and segregated zones. The resolution is very low in these images.

We thank the Reviewer for this comment and agree that overlap versus segregation of projection zones was not sufficiently guided in the original presentation. Rather than adding arrows to Figure 1C,D, which we felt would reduce clarity, we now explicitly describe how overlap and segregation can be identified based on color mixing of BMN synapses in the text and figure legend. In addition, we highlight these features more clearly in Figure 1 – figure supplement 3, which provides higher-resolution, multi-view visualizations of BMN synapses where overlap and non-overlap are most evident.

Results:

Segregation between projection zones is apparent where synapses of distinct BMN types occupy non-overlapping regions with little or no color mixing, whereas overlap between projection zones is visible as spatial intermixing of differently colored synapses from neighboring BMN types (Figure 1C, D, right, Figure 1 – figure supplement 3A-E).

Figure 1 legend:

Overlapping projection zones are evident where synapses of different BMN types spatially intermingle, whereas segregated zones show little or no color mixing.

Figure 1 – figure supplement 3 legend:

These views highlight both overlapping projection zones, visible as intermingled synapses of different colors from neighboring BMN types, and segregated zones, where synapses from distinct BMN types remain spatially separated with minimal color mixing.

(b) Line 860: What is: 'location groomed'?

Added a clarification to this sentence: Thus, the location groomed (i.e. antennae) corresponds to the location of the majority of BMN inputs.

(c) Line 944: 'The sensory to motor resolution' What do you mean, here?

We have revised this sentence to “The spatial resolution of the sensory-to-motor transformation in this parallel circuit architecture remains to be tested.”

(d) The term: 'neighboring bristles' is unclear. Does it mean 'neighbor relates to members within he same bristle type (antennae)', or 'bristles of different types', e.g. antennae and eye bristles.

We thank the Reviewer for raising this point. Throughout the manuscript, the term “neighboring bristles” is used primarily to refer to neighboring bristle populations (i.e., bristles from different anatomical groups that are spatially adjacent on the head). In some contexts, the term is also used more generally to describe spatial proximity, regardless of whether the bristles belong to the same or different populations. Importantly, in both cases, the usage reflects the same underlying observation: BMNs innervating bristles that are spatially closer—whether within or between populations—show greater similarity in their postsynaptic connectivity than BMNs innervating more distant bristles.

(e) Avoid abbreviations, or explain shortly, the term under discuss: line 725: BMlnOm?

We thank the Reviewer for pointing out that the BMN nomenclature was not sufficiently clear. BMNs are named according to the bristle population they innervate (e.g., BM-Ant neurons innervate antennal bristles; BM-InOm neurons innervate interommatidial eye bristles), as defined in the Figure 1 legend. To improve clarity, we ensured that the first occurrences of these terms in the Results explicitly include the corresponding head location (e.g., “eye BM-InOm neurons”), and we added brief contextual reminders at later points where this abbreviation appears. These changes clarify the meaning of BM-InOm and related abbreviations without introducing additional terminology.

Changes made:

Figure 1 legend: clarified that BMNs are named according to the bristle population they innervate (e.g., BM-Taste neurons innervate Taste bristles).

Results, early first section (second paragraph): added head-location qualifiers at first mention (e.g., “eye BM-InOm neurons,” “proboscis BM-Taste neurons”) in sentences such as: “35 BM-Taste neurons innervating Taste bristles on the proboscis…” and “405 eye BM-InOm neurons innervating the interommatidial bristles on the eyes…”.

Later Results text where the abbreviation appears (including the sentence addressing the 5-synapse cutoff): added “eye” before BM-InOm for context (e.g., “although 555 eye BM-InOm neurons are present… only 405 meet the five-synapse threshold”).

(f) LB23 hemilineage: what was that again?

We added text in the manuscript to better define hemilineages. This is described above in response to another Reviewer suggestion.

(g) Line 732: What are ascending neurons?

We had already included a definition of ascending neurons in the second Results section entitled “The BMN connectome”. Since this was not clear to the Reviewers, we expanded on this section. There is now a new paragraph in this same section. This paragraph reads:

“Partners were grouped into five morphological categories—interneurons, descending neurons, ascending neurons, BMNs, and motor neurons—following FlyWire annotations (Dorkenwald et al., 2024). Interneurons were defined as neurons whose soma and all neurites were confined to the brain. Descending neurons were defined as neurons whose somata are located in the CNS and whose neurites extend into the descending tracts toward the ventral nerve cord (VNC). Conversely, ascending neurons were identified as neurons whose neurites enter the brain through the cervical connective and whose somata lie outside the FAFB imaged volume, resulting in only their neurites being visible in the dataset.”

(h) Line 896: What is lineage matching?

We thank the Reviewer for pointing this out. We realized that this sentence did not add clarity and contributed little to the manuscript, so we removed the sentence that used “lineage matching” from the manuscript.

(i) Line 926: The Previous work ... sentence makes no sense to me.

The sentence was reworked and now reads: “The mechanosensory neurons hypothesized from the parallel model that elicit the Drosophila grooming sequence were identified in previous work (Eichler et al., 2024; Hampel et al., 2020a, 2017, 2015; Mueller et al., 2019; Seeds et al., 2014; Zhang et al., 2020).”

(j) The FAB-dataset is indeed unique, but the fact that it is repeated several times in your discussion does not ensure understanding of the obviously complex circuit architecture potentially underlying behavior. Please, focus on your discussion strictly and condense your arguments to the specific contribution and outcome of the data in the current manuscript.

In response to this comment, we condensed the opening portion of the Discussion by reducing repetition of background and prior findings, particularly references to earlier BMN work and the uniqueness of the FAFB dataset. We streamlined overlapping sections, mentioned prior hypotheses and results only once, and focused the revised text more directly on the new contributions of this study—namely, the synaptic-resolution organization, somatotopic connectivity, and circuit principles revealed by the BMN connectome.

(k) At some parts of the discussion, it is not clear to me, if you refer to results of the actual study or refer to previous studies (Hampel, Eichler) e.g., 'Our work has shown ...' on line 872.or '...we find ... LB23 neuron elicit antennal grooming....'. or line 909: Our work reveals ......

Sentence a former line 872 was revised and now reads: “While our past and present work together reveal that a subpopulation of LB23 neurons elicits antennal grooming, we also find evidence that other LB23 neurons in the hemilineage elicit additional head grooming movements.”

Sentence at former line 909 was revised and now reads: “Our previous work and the present study reveal that the antennal grooming circuit receives inputs from two different classes of antennal mechanosensory neurons, the BMNs and JONs.”

Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

All my comments are mostly only for clarity.

(1) It would help readers if the manuscript explicitly stated how a sensory neuron can be postsynaptic - i.e., that BMN axons receive inhibitory inputs in the CNS - since this may not be intuitive to a broader audience.

We appreciate this comment and added the following text to the last paragraph of the first Results section: As expected for sensory afferents, BMNs provide synaptic output to downstream circuits; however, the presence of postsynaptic sites may be less intuitive, and reflects that BMNs can also receive synaptic input onto their central axons within the CNS.

(2) Figure 1 is a helpful context, but since much of it is directly reused from Eichler et al., 2024, it would strengthen the presentation if you clarified what is new here (e.g., the synapse quantification) versus what is recap. In addition, for readers less familiar with EM connectomics, it would be valuable to spell out how bristle neurons are assigned to classes in the absence of bristles themselves in the volume - i.e., that classification rests on stereotyped nerve entry and projection zones, which allow type-level but not single-bristle resolution. Explicitly flagging these methodological boundaries up front would make it clearer what information comes from the current work, what derives from previous reconstructions, and what the limits of resolution are.

We have addressed this recommendation above for a similar suggestion by Reviewer 2 (see above for details). In brief, we inserted an overview of the methodology used to identify BMN types in the FAFB dataset, and we now explicitly state the limitations of this correlative approach. We added a sentence in the first paragraph of the Results section that states, “Because FAFB does not include the head cuticular bristles, individual BMNs could not be linked to single bristles. Therefore, these assignments are necessarily correlative and provide type-level (population) rather than single-bristle resolution.” In addition, we revised the Figure 1 legend to more clearly distinguish panels and reconstructions that were previously reported in Eichler et al. (2024) from synapse quantification and analyses that are new to the present study.

(3) BMNs from neighboring bristle populations converge onto shared partners, while distant BMNs remain segregated - while the overlap was clear, the segregation was not visually clear in the first figure.

We thank the Reviewer for this suggestion. We have addressed this point in our response to a similar comment from Reviewer 2 (see above), where we clarified how overlap versus segregation can be identified in Figure 1 and strengthened the text and figure legends to guide readers to these features without adding clutter to the figure.

(4) The identification of direct BMN → motor neuron synapses is intriguing, but since these inputs make up only a small fraction of motor neuron synapses, it would help if the authors explicitly cautioned readers that these are likely modulatory contributions rather than stand-alone reflex arcs. This would prevent over-interpretation of the sensory-motor link. Similarly with the BMN>BMN connections.

We thank the Reviewer for this suggestion. We revised the Results section “BMN postsynaptic motor neurons” to more explicitly caution that the direct BMN → motor neuron connections are likely modulatory rather than stand-alone reflex arcs, consistent with their small contribution to total motor neuron input. The revised text reads: “However, BMN inputs accounted for only a small fraction of total synapses onto each motor neuron (≦6.28% of total inputs/BMN type, Figure 4 – figure supplement 1, Supplementary file 7), suggesting a modulatory contribution rather than direct sensory-driven motor activation.”

(5) Since the FAFB dataset only includes the brain, it would be helpful to clarify what is meant by "ascending" and "descending" partners in this context - namely that ascending neurons are VNC-derived axons entering the brain, while descending neurons are brain-derived neurons projecting out toward the VNC. Explicitly stating this will prevent confusion, given that all BMNs themselves terminate in the SEZ.

We had already included definitions in the second Results section entitled “The BMN connectome”. Since this was not clear to the Reviewers, we expanded on this section. There is now a new paragraph in this same section. This paragraph reads: Partners were grouped into five morphological categories—interneurons, descending neurons, ascending neurons, BMNs, and motor neurons—following FlyWire annotations (Dorkenwald et al., 2024). Interneurons were defined as neurons whose soma and all neurites were confined to the brain. Descending neurons were defined as neurons whose somata are located in the CNS and whose neurites extend into the descending tracts toward the ventral nerve cord (VNC). Conversely, ascending neurons were identified as neurons whose neurites enter the brain through the cervical connective and whose somata lie outside the FAFB imaged volume, resulting in only their neurites being visible in the dataset.

(6) In the section titled "BMN synaptic partners in the CNS: ascending, descending, and interneurons", the balance of explanation is skewed toward presynaptic input to BMNs. It would strengthen clarity if you expanded equally on the postsynaptic side (i.e., BMN outputs) or explicitly signposted why the focus here is on inputs. That way, readers won't be left wondering whether outputs are less important or just deferred to later figures.

We have revised the section that was previously skewed toward presynaptic BMNs. This section also addresses some confusion about interpreting Figure 3, from a critique from Reviewer 2. The section now reads: “Postsynaptic connections were predominantly interneurons (56%), with significant contributions from descending (28%) and ascending (16%) neurons (Figure 5D, F,H,J). Interneurons are more numerous as distinct partner neurons, whereas descending neurons receive a larger fraction of BMN output synapses across BMN types (Figure 3A, B). Thus, descending neurons are fewer in number but tend to receive more BMN synapses per neuron on average, while interneurons are more numerous but often receive fewer synapses per neuron. Together, these partner categories underscore the strong integration of BMNs with local brain circuitry (interneurons), and with pathways linking the brain and ventral nerve cord (VNC), through ascending neurons that provide VNC-derived synaptic input and descending neurons that carry BMN output toward the VNC.”

(7) The network diagrams in Figure 9 convey clustering, but a complementary heatmap of BMN type × partner connectivity could highlight the parallel organization more clearly. This would make the block-like separation of dorsal, ventral, and posterior subnetworks more immediately apparent, reinforcing the conclusion of parallel somatotopy-based processing. This section would also benefit from drawing the functional message more explicitly: that BMNs form largely independent, somatotopically aligned pathways with regional overlap, supporting the idea of parallel grooming circuits. Right now, the text reads as a connectivity catalog, and the key concept of parallel regional architecture risks being underemphasized.

We agree that connectivity matrices provide a clear and accessible representation of these data. We have moved the cosine-similarity connectivity matrices previously shown in Figure 9 – figure supplement 1 into the main manuscript, where they now appear as Figure 9. These matrices depict similarity among BMN postsynaptic partners. For this reason, we have retained the original network-graph representation (now Figure 10) to display the full pre- and postsynaptic connectome structure.

Based on the Reviewer’s suggestion to clearly state the key concepts of the parallel architecture, we added a sentence to the end of the Results section entitled: Somatotopy-based connectivity among BMN synaptic partners in the CNS. That text reads: “Thus, the BMNs form largely independent, somatotopically aligned pathways with regional overlap, supporting the idea of parallel grooming circuits.”

(8) It would help if the manuscript if the authors explained more explicitly the somatotopy logic (that reciprocal inhibition preserves local head regions, ensuring that suppression and gain control act locally) more clearly. At present, the narrative is buried in network-graph detail - a heatmap or simple region-level summary would make this organizational principle much clearer to readers.

We thank the Reviewer for this suggestion. To make the somatotopy logic of pre/post feedback inhibition clearer and less buried in network-graph detail, we revised the text in this Results section to more explicitly distinguish (i) reciprocal, head-region–localized inhibitory loops that could support local gain control from (ii) non-reciprocal cross-type inhibitory pathways that could contribute to heterotypic suppression between head regions. In addition, we modified the figure to more clearly convey somatotopy by adding text on the plot and updating the legend to state: “Bold text indicates the general head location of BMNs on the plot, revealing somatotopy-based connectivity with pre/post neurons (i.e. ventral, dorsal, posterior, and the ventral/dorsal transition).”

(9) Please adjust the section title, "LB23 hemilineage member neurons elicit aimed head grooming movements" to avoid implying new functional experiments. For example:

(a) "LB23 neurons include previously defined antennal grooming command neurons" or

(b) "LB23 hemilineage anatomically corresponds to grooming-related neurons".

This would make it clear that the contribution here is anatomical linkage, not fresh functional data.

We changed the section title to the Reviewer-suggested title b: LB23 hemilineage anatomically corresponds to grooming-related neurons

(10) The current network graphs in Figure 13B are not very intuitive - it is hard to visually extract the somatotopy. A connectivity heatmap or matrix (BMN types on one axis, LB23 neurons or subgroups on the other, with synapse strength as colour) would make the block-like, region-specific mapping immediately clear. A coarse-grained version (e.g., dorsal/ventral/posterior BMNs vs LB23 subgroups) could further highlight the parallel, somatotopically organized pathways. This would better support the central claim of Figure 13 than the current spring-layout graphs. Figure 13F does this for BMN inputs onto aBN2 neurons. (But it is presented only in binary form; could the authors not add a graded colour scale proportional to synapse number?)

The binary form was necessary because the results are from different sources (i.e. Catmaid versus flywire synapse counts) with different synapse numbers.

We modified the Figure 13B to more clearly convey somatotopy by adding text on the plot and updating the legend to state: “Bold text indicates the general head location of BMNs on the plot, revealing

somatotopy-based connectivity with LB23 neurons (i.e. ventral, dorsal, and posterior head).” We hope that this modification satisfies the Reviewer.

eLife Assessment

This important study combines optogenetic manipulations with wide-field cortical imaging to investigate the neural basis of context-dependent sensory processing. It provides compelling evidence that the retrosplenial cortex modulates behavioral responses to whisker deflection depending on the behavioral context. The paper will be of strong interest to neuroscientists studying cortical mechanisms of sensorimotor processing.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary

The strength of this manuscript lies in the behavior: mice use a continuous auditory background (pink vs brown noise) to set a rule for interpreting an identical single-whisker deflection (lick in W+ and withhold in W− contexts) while always licking to a brief 10 kHz tone. Behaviorally, animals acquire the rule and switch rapidly at block transitions and take a few trials to fully integrate the context cue. What's nice about this behavior is the separate auditory cue, which shows the animals remain engaged in the task, so it's not just that the mice check out (i.e., become disengaged in the W- context). The authors then use optical tools, combining cortex-wide optogenetic inactivation (using localized inhibition in a grid-like fashion) with widefield calcium imaging to map what regions are necessary for the task and what the local and global dynamics are. Classic whisker sensorimotor nodes (wS1/wS2/wM/ALM) behave as expected with silencing reducing whisker-evoked licking. Retrosplenial cortex (RSC) emerges as a somewhat unexpected, context-specific node: silencing RSC (and tjS1) increases licking selectively in W−, arguing that these regions contribute to applying the "don't lick" policy in that context. I say somewhat because work from the Delamater group points to this possibility, albeit in a Pavlovian conditioning task and without neural data.

The widefield imaging shows that RSC is the earliest dorsal cortical area to show W+ vs W− divergence after the whisker stimulus, preceding whisker motor cortex, consistent with RSC injecting context into the sensorimotor flow. A "Context Off" control (continuous white noise; same block structure) impairs context discrimination, indicating the continuous background is actually used to set the rule (an important addition!) Pre-stimulus functional-connectivity analyses suggest that there is some activity correlation that maps to the context presumably due to the continuous background auditory context. Simultaneous opto+imaging projects perturbations into a low-dimensional subspace that separates lick vs no-lick trajectories in an interpretable way.

In my view, this is a clear, rigorous systems-level study that identifies an important role for RSC in context-dependent sensorimotor transformation, thereby expanding RSC's involvement beyond navigation/memory into active sensing and action selection. The behavioral paradigm is thoughtfully designed, the claims related to the imaging are well defended, and the causal mapping is strong.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have been responsive to the prior review and I think the manuscript is a valuable and important addition to the literature.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to understand the neural basis of context-dependent sensory processing and decision-making.

Strengths:

They used an innovative behavioral paradigm where the action-outcome association changes independent of the sensory stimulus. This allowed the authors to disentangle the effect of behavioral context on sensory processing in RSC. Using this approach combined with optogenetic silencing, they discover that RSC activity is necessary for suppressing a lick response when the stimulus switches to the unrewarded context. The authors provide compelling evidence that the RSC is an important node of context-dependent sensory processing.

Weaknesses:

Sensory processing appears to be entangled with jaw/tongue movement initiation. Nonetheless, it is clear that RSC and motor cortex convey contextual signals with a very short latency.

Comments on revisions:

Thank you for updating the manuscript. Good work.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

Public Reviews:

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary

The strength of this manuscript lies in the behavior: mice use a continuous auditory background (pink vs brown noise) to set a rule for interpreting an identical single-whisker deflection (lick in W+ and withhold in W− contexts) while always licking to a brief 10 kHz tone. Behaviorally, animals acquire the rule and switch rapidly at block transitions and take a few trials to fully integrate the context cue. What's nice about this behavior is the separate auditory cue, which shows the animals remain engaged in the task, so it's not just that the mice check out (i.e., become disengaged in the W- context). The authors then use optical tools, combining cortexwide optogenetic inactivation (using localized inhibition in a grid-like fashion) with widefield calcium imaging to map what regions are necessary for the task and what the local and global dynamics are. Classic whisker sensorimotor nodes (wS1/wS2/wM/ALM) behave as expected with silencing reducing whisker-evoked licking. Retrosplenial cortex (RSC) emerges as a somewhat unexpected, context-specific node: silencing RSC (and tjS1) increases licking selectively in W−, arguing that these regions contribute to applying the "don't lick" policy in that context. I say somewhat because work from the Delamater group points to this possibility, albeit in a Pavlovian conditioning task and without neural data. I would still recommend the authors of the current manuscript review that work to see whether there is a relevant framework or concept (Castiello, Zhang, Delamater, 'The retrosplenial cortex as a possible 'sensory integration' area: a neural network modeling approach of the differential outcomes effect of negative patterning', 2021, Neurobiology of Learning and Memory).

The widefield imaging shows that RSC is the earliest dorsal cortical area to show W+ vs W− divergence after the whisker stimulus, preceding whisker motor cortex, consistent with RSC injecting context into the sensorimotor flow. A "Context Off" control (continuous white noise; same block structure) impairs context discrimination, indicating the continuous background is actually used to set the rule (an important addition!) Pre-stimulus functional-connectivity analyses suggest that there is some activity correlation that maps to the context presumably due to the continuous background auditory context. Simultaneous opto+imaging projects perturbations into a low-dimensional subspace that separates lick vs no-lick trajectories in an interpretable way.

In my view, this is a clear, rigorous systems-level study that identifies an important role for RSC in context-dependent sensorimotor transformation, thereby expanding RSC's involvement beyond navigation/memory into active sensing and action selection. The behavioral paradigm is thoughtfully designed, the claims related to the imaging are well defended, and the causal mapping is strong. I have a few suggestions for clarity that may require a bit of data analysis. I also outline one key limitation that should be discussed, but is likely beyond the scope of this manuscript.

Major strengths

(1) The task is a major strength. It asks the animal to generate differential motor output to the same sensory stimulus, does so in a block-based manner, and the Context-Off condition convincingly shows that the continuous contextual cue is necessary. The auditory tone control ensures this is more than a 'motivational' context but is decision-related. In fact, the slightly higher bias to lick on the catch trials in the W+ context is further evidence for this.

(2) The dorsal-cortex optogenetic grid avoids a 'look-where-we-expect' approach and lets RSC fall out as a key node. The authors then follow this up with pharmacology and latency analyses to rule out simple motor confounds. Overall, this is rigorous and thoughtfully done.

(3) While the mesoscale imaging doesn't allow for cellular resolution, it allows for mapping of the flow of information. It places RSC early in the context-specific divergence after whisker onset, a valuable piece that complements prior work.

(4) The baseline (pre-stim) functional connectivity and the opto-perturbation projections into a task subspace increase the significance of the work by moving beyond local correlates.

Key limitation

The current optogenetic window begins ~10 ms before the sensory cue and extends 1s after, which is ideal for perturbing within-trial dynamics but cannot isolate whether RSC is required to maintain the context-specific rule during the baseline. Because context is continuously available, it makes me wonder whether RSC is the locus maintaining or, instead, gating the context signal. The paper's results are fully consistent with that possibility, but causality in the pre-stimulus window remains an open question. (As a pointer for future work, pre-stimulusonly inactivation, silencing around block switches, or context-omission probe trials (e.g., removing the background noise unexpectedly within a W+ or W- context block), could help separate 'holding' from 'gating' of the rule. But I'm not suggesting these are needed for this manuscript, but would be interesting for future studies.)

We thank the reviewer for the comprehensive summary of our work.

We also thank the reviewer for highlighting the work from the Delamater group (Castiello et al., 2021), and we now briefly discuss this paper on P. 14 Lines 434-437 writing: “RSC was shown to contribute to negative patterning in behavioral tasks requiring rats to learn that the simultaneous presentation of two stimuli lead to an opposite outcome than each individual stimulus (Castiello et al., 2021).”

We also agree with the reviewer’s noted ‘Key limitation’ regarding the role of RSC as either maintaining context representation or serving a gating function. The reviewer proposes an exciting set of further experiments inactivating RSC at different time points to investigate when RSC activity is needed. We hope to carry out such experiments in the future. We now include a brief discussion of this interesting point on P. 14-15 Lines 455-459 writing: “First, further inactivation experiments would shed light on the timing at which RSC activity is necessary for the integration of contextual information. Specifically, it would be of great interest to inactivate RSC at different time points such as during the intertrial interval or at the transition between contexts.”

We have of course also addressed each of the more detailed comments from the “Recommendations for the authors” section, please see below.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to understand the neural basis of context-dependent sensory processing and decision-making.

Strengths:

They used an innovative behavioral paradigm where the action-outcome association changes independent of the sensory stimulus. This theoretically allows the authors to disentangle the effect of behavioral context on sensory processing. Using this approach combined with optogenetic silencing, they discover that RSC activity is necessary for suppressing a lick response when the stimulus switches to the unrewarded context.

Weaknesses:

Sensory processing appears to be entangled with jaw/tongue movement initiation. Activity in M1 and RSC during auditory-evoked lick responses appears to be identical to activity during whisker-evoked lick responses, indicating that movement initiation is the main driver of M1/RSC activity, rather than changes in the flow of sensory information. If sensory information were the main driver of the initial M1/RSC response, then auditory evoked responses should have a longer latency. Perhaps this is beyond the resolution of the calcium indicator or imaging frame rate. It is not clear from the data shown if differences in S1 activity when comparing W+ and W- stimulation are caused by context-sensitive sensory processing or whisker movement following whisker deflection.

We thank the reviewer for the comments on our work and we agree that separating sensory processing and movement initiation is very important. In the revised manuscript, we have carried out several new analyses to specifically address the points of the reviewer. The most important point is that context-dependent activity in RSC emerges at ~50 ms after the whisker stimulus, which precedes any differences in movements of the jaw or whisker. Although sensory and motor representations become increasingly entangled after stimulus delivery, we think that the first ~100 ms after the whisker stimulus is a relatively safe period for analysing sensory processing and decision making before overt context-dependent differences in movements.

Addressing the specific point “Activity in M1 and RSC during auditory-evoked lick responses appears to be identical to activity during whisker-evoked lick responses, indicating that movement initiation is the main driver of M1/RSC activity, rather than changes in the flow of sensory information.” - We have now directly compared the pattern of cortical activity evoked by whisker and auditory stimuli in correct trials in the W+ context (new Figure 3 – figure supplement 2). As expected, activity in wS1/wS2 and A1 is stronger in whisker and auditory trials respectively, following their sensory modalities. However, we also evidence a stronger response of wM1/wM2 in whisker trials as early as 40 to 60 ms following the stimulus, showing the specificity to the whisker system. We also observe a stronger response of RSC to whisker than to auditory stimulus. The auditory and whisker evoked responses are therefore different.

Addressing the specific point “If sensory information were the main driver of the initial M1/RSC response, then auditory evoked responses should have a longer latency. Perhaps this is beyond the resolution of the calcium indicator or imaging frame rate.” – As stated above, the responses to auditory and whisker stimuli are different.

Addressing the specific point “It is not clear from the data shown if differences in S1 activity when comparing W+ and W- stimulation are caused by context-sensitive sensory processing or whisker movement following whisker deflection.” - We think that the data shown in Figure 3F-H indicate that differences in S1 activity when comparing W+ and W- stimulation are not directly caused by context-sensitive sensory processing. On P. 9 Lines 270273 we write: “Early after stimulus onset, whisker deflection evoked similar activation of primary and secondary whisker somatosensory cortices (wS1 and wS2) in both W+ and W− contexts.” Indeed, context separation in wS1/wS2 only emerged later than 100 ms, which is indeed confounded by the difference in movement evoked by the sensory stimulus (now quantified in new Figure 3 – figure supplement 4). On the contrary RSC and wM1/2 responses to the whisker stimulus were different in W+ and W- at early time points (~50 ms for RSC and ~80 ms for wM1/2) which is consistent with context dependent sensory processing. At least 2 hypotheses could explain the absence of early difference in whisker evoked activity in wS1/wS2 between W+ and W-. The first one is that sensory activity in wS1/wS2 is not modulated by contextual information at all, while the alternative option would imply that sensory activity is mediated by different neuronal populations depending on context with an overall similar average response. We think this is an interesting question which we hope to address in future experiments using Neuropixels recordings and multiphoton cellular imaging to address the single neuron representation of whisker stimulus in wS1/wS2 according to context in the task presented here.

We have of course also addressed each of the more detailed comments from the“Recommendations for the authors” section, please see below.

Recommendations for the authors:

Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

Suggestions to strengthen the manuscript (no new data collection)

(1) The block-switch dynamics were clearly demonstrated behaviorally. It would be very powerful to mirror this with an analysis of neural data around the block-switch: how do the various areas adjust immediately after a shift in the continuous contextual sound? Does the RSC show any evidence of changing activity patterns? How does the within-trial activity dynamic look as a function of the number of trials from the context switch? This could be done with the data collected for Figure 3 (for within-trial dynamics), but also for the pre-stimulus baseline activity data (Figure 4A-B).

We thank the reviewer for raising this interesting point. We have now investigated the change of cortical activity at the transition between contexts (new Figure 3 – figure supplement 5). At the context transition, both to W+ and to W- contexts, we observed a rapid activation of the auditory cortex (new Figure 3 – figure supplement 5A). In addition, there appeared to be a slightly higher activation of RSC when transitioning to W- rather than to W+ (new Figure 3 – figure supplement 5A). In the future, it will be of great interest to further investigate this phenomenon.

We also evaluated the whisker deflection-evoked responses of the different cortical regions according to the number of whisker trials from context switch (new Figure 3 – figure supplement 5B&C). This analysis revealed that while the sensory response in wS1 and wS2 were constant over the time course of a context block, the response of wM1/2 and especially RSC became progressively lower in the W- context, consistent with the behavioral results in Figure 1 supporting time-dependent contextual integration.

Overall, these results strengthen the role of RSC and wM1/2 in integrating contextual information to guide the response to the whisker stimulus, and we thank the reviewer for raising this important point.

(2) It might be useful to state 'earliest among the imaged dorsal cortical areas,' and briefly acknowledge potential subcortical contributors (since those were not explored and could be earlier than cortical areas).

We agree with the reviewer. In the Summary, on P. 2 Line 39-40 we now write: “Widefield calcium imaging revealed that retrosplenial cortex was the first dorsal cortical area to show context discrimination in response to whisker stimulation”. On P. 8 Lines 257-258, we now write: “To investigate the spatiotemporal neural dynamics underlying task execution, we recorded calcium activity across the dorsal cortex in transgenic mice”. On P. 13 Lines 416-420 we now write: “Functional imaging of cortical activity with two different genetically-encoded calcium indicators each showed similar spatiotemporal dynamics of whisker sensory processing with the earliest contextdependent divergence in signalling being detected in RSC, out of the imaged dorsal cortical areas (Figure 3).” On P. 15 Lines 470-473, we now write: “Finally, it is of course important to note that many subcortical regions (as well as non-dorsal cortical regions, which were not imaged) are likely to contribute importantly to context-dependent task performance.”

(3) Fit a simple exponential/logistic to lick probability vs time-since-switch (your Figure 1Hstyle analysis) to report a time constant with CIs; it will help quantify the integration of the continuous cue.

We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We have fitted an exponential to the grand average data to quantify the time constants for integration of contextual information before the presentation of the first whisker stimulus of the block (see new Figure 1H). On P. 6 Lines 170-173 we now write: “To assess whether this temporal integration would differ between contexts we fitted an exponential to the time evolution of the lick probability. This suggested a faster transition to the W+ context than to the W- context (W+ time constant: 9.4 s, W- time constant: 15.5 s) (Figure 1H).”

(4) Because catch-trial false alarms are higher in W+ than W−, report per-context d′ and criterion for whisker trials (using signal detection theory); this separates sensitivity from bias and makes the behavioral shift more interpretable. It is also further proof that the behavior is contextual (versus a compound stimulus, for example).

We have computed the d’ and criterion for the whisker trials in the W- and W+ contexts. (see new Figure 1 - figure supplementary 1D). As suggested by the reviewer, this further supports that the behavior is driven by contextual information.

(5) For the pre-stimulus seed-correlation analysis, can you regress out the pupil/jaw/whisker activity to confirm whether the context modulation is (or is not) movement-driven? It would be helpful to better understand whether the baseline correlation is driven by differences in lowlevel factors between the contexts, versus the higher-level decision rule/context.

The reviewer raises an interesting point. However, we did not find a straightforward way to regress out movements, and thus we leave this point for future in-depth analysis. On P. 11 Lines 354-357 we now write: “It is important to note that these context-dependent changes in resting-state functional connectivity could relate to the overt context-dependent movements in the prestimulus baseline (Figure 1I&J) and/or a manifestation of higher-level internal rule representations.”

(6) For the earliest divergence analysis, is this consistent across animals and across sessions within animals? Can you show per-mouse distributions of first-crossing times (d′>2) for RSC vs wM1/2/wS2? This would help provide confidence in this key finding.

The d’ presented in Figure 3H is computed as the discriminability between contexts at the population level, meaning that at each timepoint (from Figure 3F) we compared the 2 distributions built on N=6 mice. As such if the divergence between context was not consistent across animals this d’ would be low. That said, as suggested by the reviewer, we further investigated this context divergence at single mouse level and single session level. Our analysis supporting the main finding (Figure 3F-H) is shown in new Figure 3 – figure supplement 3.

First, we show the results for a single mouse across sessions in Figure 3 – figure supplement 3A. We show the stimulus aligned activity in correct whisker trials in both contexts for the 3 recording sessions. For each session we quantified the main effect size defined as the difference of the trial average between contexts. Plotting the difference of mean response, we consistently observed that RSC ramps-up before wM1/2 for the 3 sessions.

Second, across all individual mice: we further aggregated the session average responses to show discriminability between context for each region at the single mouse level (Figure 3 – figure supplement 3B). We show that RSC is the first region to exhibit context separation in 4 out of the 6 mice that we recorded. In 2 other mice all regions seemed to show context separation but without clear temporal ordering.

Finally, when averaging across mice, we observed a clear separation and first discrimination in RSC (Figure 3F-H and Figure 3 – figure supplement 3C).

Overall, these further analyses suggest that the early divergence of RSC activity appears to be robust with a consistent mean difference in single sessions and single mice, as well as across the population of mice. We think this analysis has strengthened our manuscript and we thank the reviewer for the valuable suggestion.

(7) For the opto mapping data, could you provide P(lick) effect sizes with CIs per grid site? It would also be nice to summarize the qualitative dichotomy: RSC/tjS1 increases licking in W−; canonical wS1/wS2/wM/ALM decreases licking across contexts (to my understanding).

We now provide the P(lick) effect sizes for the main cortical areas studied in the paper in Figure 2 – figure supplement 1C. This shows the relative change in lick probability in optogenetic trials compare to control trials for each mouse.

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

(1) Do mice move their whiskers after stimulus onset? If so, are these movements dependent on behavioral context? What causes the increase in S1 activity during auditory-evoked response trials?

To answer the reviewer’s questions we have further investigated whisker movements following the sensory stimuli (whisker and auditory correct trials) in both contexts. The results of this analysis are presented in new Figure 3 – figure supplement 4.

We find that mice move their whiskers shortly after the whisker stimulus in both contexts. The time course of whisker angle in correct whisker trials is similar in both contexts with a discriminability index (d’) consistently below 1. The whisker speed in response to stimulus is slightly higher in the W+ context compared to W- with a d’ slightly above 1 after ~100 ms. We also observed evoked whisker movements in auditory trials independent of context. Thus, whisker movements are indeed evoked by the sensory stimuli, but the overall context-dependent modulation of whisker movements is weak. The early differences in whisker-evoked cortical activity in W+ compared to W- contexts are therefore more likely related to the integration of contextual information than to differences in evoked movements.

The reviewer is correct to point out that wS1 activity increases in auditory trials (Figure 3E). The response is initially very weak, but becomes more prominent after ~100 ms following the auditory tone. We do not know the underlying mechanisms, but there are several likely explanations. First, as discussed above, there are indeed some whisker movements evoked in response to the auditory stimulus (Figure 3 – figure supplement 4), which could result in sensory input to wS1. Equally, the increase could relate to licking, given the broad representation of movements in cortex and an appropriate reaction time in auditory trials (Figure 3C). Alternatively, wS1 activity in auditory trials could also be related to input connectivity from auditory cortex, top-down input from frontal cortex or subcortical regions such as high-order POm.

(2) What do the authors think is causing the W+ vs W- difference in S1/S2 activity approximately 100ms after whisker deflection?

The late W+ vs W- difference in wS1/wS2 activity could be explained by several factors. First this could be due to the difference in whisker movements after ~100 ms as shown in Figure 3 – figure supplement 4. Second this could be driven by the lick vs no lick activity (see reaction time in Figure 3C for whisker trials ~110 ms). Finally, this could be partly due to some movement independent top-down contextual information reaching wS1/wS2 at late time points. Overall, our claim in the paper is that there was no contextual difference in whisker primary and secondary cortices at early time points (before movement). On P. 9 Lines 270-273 we explicitly write: “Early after stimulus onset, whisker deflection evoked similar activation of primary and secondary whisker somatosensory cortices (wS1 and wS2) in both W+ and W− contexts.” In contrast, our main findings are grounded in the divergence of cortical activity in RSC and wM1/2 at early time points (<100 ms).

(3) The choice of PC3 seems arbitrary. Is there no task-relevant information in PC1 and PC2?

We appreciate the point raised by the reviewer and have clarified the reasoning leading to PC3 selection in the main text, where on P. 12-13 Lines 384-391 we now write: “The loadings of the first principal components were uniformly distributed and could reflect a late movement driven activation distributed across all cortical areas (Figure 4 – figure supplement 2C&D). PC2 loadings show variation along the anteroposterior axis that could reflect differences between sensory and motor regions but its time course does not separate between lick and no lick in control conditions (Figure 4 – figure supplement 2C&D). The loadings of PC3 highlighted task-related cortical regions and its time course exhibited clear differences comparing lick and no-lick trials.” In addition, we now also show the time courses for PC1 and PC2 in Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2D.

Overall, the reasoning is the following:

PC1 has spatially-homogeneous positive loadings (Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2C) and activity along PC1 gradually ramps up following sensory stimulation (Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2D). It is likely driven by widespread activation of the cortex following the whisker stimulus and the lick response. As such we believe that the taskrelated information captured by PC1 is movement related and not necessarily informative about processing of whisker and context.

PC 2 has loadings varying along the antero-posterior axis (Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2C), which could be relevant for the task, but its time-course does not discriminate between lick and no lick neither in W+ nor W- (Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2D).

PC3 has both loadings that vary between several cortical regions involved in the task (Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2C) and a time course that separates between lick and no lick in both contexts (Figure 4 – figure supplementary 2D). We thus focus on PC3 to investigate the effect of optogenetic inactivation on whisker stimulus evoked activity.

The remaining components beyond PC3 contain a very small fraction of variance and were thus not considered.

(4) Figure 3 - Supplement 1: What explains the change in fluorescence in GFP/tdT mice during W+ stimulation? Is it brain movement on the z-dimension? Could this explain differences in calcium imaging results?

We thank the reviewer for this question. The nature of intrinsic signals is a complex topic, but brain movement is unlikely to contribute importantly, because under similar behavioral conditions we (and others) typically find brain movements to be on the scale of a few microns. The three most widely-reported contributions to intrinsic optical changes in cortex relate to:

(i) Light scattering – as neurons integrate synaptic inputs and fire action potentials, the neuronal elements swell slightly due to the ionic and water fluxes (see for example Vincis et al. Cell Reports 2015, doi: 10.1016/j.celrep.2015.06.016). This reduces the refractive index mismatch between the intracellular and extracellular space. This in turn reduces light scattering, which could result in fluorescence increases.

(ii) Hemodynamics – changes in blood volume and changes in oxygenation/deoxygenation will change the absorption of light at different wavelengths, in an activity-dependent manner (also forming the basis of BOLD fMRI signals).

(iii) Flavoproteins – endogenous fluorescent proteins, such as flavoproteins present at high levels in mitochondria, have been reported to change their fluorescence depending upon neuronal activity, presumably in relationship to increased mitochondrial activity.

We therefore think it is very important to image GFP/tdTomato-expressing mice as controls, and we would suggest that this should be carried out more commonly in the field. Indeed, similar to our results, another study (Yogesh et al., eLife 2025, doi: 10.7554/eLife.104914) recently reported upon the importance of carefully examining intrinsic fluorescence changes, which were found to be present in both wide-field and two-photon imaging of GFP expressing mice.

Our results reported in Figure 3 – figure supplement 1, show that GFP/tdTomato signals over the first ~120 ms following whisker stimulation were much smaller that the equivalent changes in GCaMP6f/jRGECO1a-expressing mice, and therefore would only have a minor contribution to our analyses. However, we refrained from analysing fluorescence changes at later post-stimulus times, because the intrinsic signals indeed become increasingly prominent as the mice initiate licking.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The study examined the extent to which children's word recognition skill improves across early development, becoming faster, more accurate and less variable, and the extent to which word recognition skill is related to children's concurrent and later vocabulary knowledge.

The main strength of the study comes from the dataset which recycles previously collected data from 24 studies to examine the development of word recognition skill using data from 1963 children. This maximizes the impact of previously collected data while also allowing the study to reliably ask big picture questions on the development of word recognition skill and its relation to chronological age and vocabulary knowledge. Data analysis is rigorous, thought through and very clearly described. Data and code necessary to reproduce the manuscript are shared on the project's Github. The limitations of the study are acknowledged and the manuscript does well to tone down the causal implications of their results.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper presents a series of analyses of a large dataset combining many prior studies of early word recognition (Peekbank). The analyses demonstrate that the speed, accuracy and consistency of word learning improves with age. Moreover, the speed of word learning early in development was related to vocabulary growth over time.

Strengths:

A key strength of the paper is the use of a large multi-study dataset. This is particularly valuable in the field of early cognitive development, which has (due to practical limitations) often been based on small-scale studies that necessarily provide a shaky foundation for conclusions. The analyses are also well-motivated.

Weaknesses:

In an earlier version of the manuscript, the meaning of "word recognition ability" was ambiguous and could have referred to either (A) an intrinsic ability that matures, or (B) knowledge of the common, concrete words typically used in these studies that increases with experience. The revised version of the manuscript identifies these two interpretations and acknowledges that they cannot be teased apart in the current work.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

General note

We have issued a new release of the general Peekbank database, 2026.1, which includes more data integrity checks and several more datasets. As a result of this release, the underlying dataset we use in our paper has shifted slightly. The shifts represent a relatively small proportion of the total data and thus these changes have caused only relatively minor changes to our numerical results. We also highlight that we now include a small amount of data regarding children younger than 12 months, increasing the developmental range of our analysis (see Figure 1).

Reviewer 1 (Public review):

The limitations of the study are acknowledged to some extent, but need to be improved and ensured that they run throughout the manuscript. Thus, in the discussion, the authors note that the approach is observational and exploratory, and highlight for me a key alternative explanation of the findings, namely that faster children could be faster due to their larger vocabulary, rather than faster children learning more words. Indeed, the latter explanation for the relationship is called into question, given that growth in speed was not related to growth in vocabulary. Here, the authors note that the null result may be related to the fact that they do not sufficiently precise estimates of growth slopes, rather than taking the alternative explanation seriously that there may not be as causal a link between being a faster word learner and a better word learner (learn more words).

Thank you very much for your challenging and thoughtful comments. In hindsight we did not realize that the way we were writing about our results was ambiguous between several interpretations (one of which we endorse and one of which we do not).

We respond below to the specific suggestions about causal directionality in the longitudinal analysis, but we certainly believe that we cannot draw strong conclusions about causality from our dataset and have attempted throughout the paper to remove causal language that might have crept into our interpretation.

In response to your comments, we have made a number of key revisions aimed at qualifying and clarifying our points:

• The abstract now prominently notes that our design is observational: “In an observational study…”

• The abstract notes a positive and a negative result in the relationship between word recognition and vocabulary: “Further, across a range of longitudinal models, speed, accuracy, and vocabulary were coupled. Children with overall faster word recognition tended to show faster vocabulary growth, though developmental growth in word recognition skill was not specifically associated with growth in vocabulary.”

• The abstract removes potential casual language in the final sentence: “... these findings support the view that word recognition is a skill that develops gradually across early childhood and that this skill is deeply intertwined with early language learning.”

• A new paragraph in the Results introduces the potential hypotheses investigated via the longitudinal models.

• The final paragraph of the Results section sharpens the contrast between two possible growth hypotheses: “However, we did not find evidence for the stronger version of this claim: in neither the non-linear growth model nor the linear SEM did we find evidence that increases in speed were related to increases in vocabulary size. Thus, our findings do not support a ‘virtuous cycle’ model in which increases in recognition specifically lead to increases in vocabulary size.”

We hope these changes lead to a manuscript that better aligns with the limitations of the study.

This is especially since, but correct me if I’m wrong here, the current vocabulary size is not taken into consideration in the model examining vocabulary growth. Given the increasing number of studies showing that current vocabulary knowledge predicts vocabulary growth (Laing, Kalinowski et al, Siew & Vitevitch), one simple alternative explanation is that current vocabulary knowledge predicts both current word recognition skill and later vocabulary knowledge. Is there anything in the data speaking against this hypothesis?

We think the reviewer’s overall point is generally correct, as we described above, but we want to clarify a specific statistical point. The non-linear longitudinal model of vocabulary growth does in fact take into account a child’s average vocabulary size. (This point feels tricky in a non-linear model but it’s actually quite similar to a linear model for the purposes of this discussion). Basically, vocabulary (at all timepoints) is modeled as a function of age, with both main effects and interactions with age. Critically, each participant is also modeled as having a random intercept capturing their deviation from the average growth pattern across ages (as expressed by the fixed effects). In this model, the “main effect” (here captured by the intercept for the logistic curve in the model) that we observe for speed indicates that vocabulary growth for individuals is predicted to be faster (their curve is shifted left) if their RTs are fast. The presence of the random effects in this model thus “controls” for the fact that some participants have overall higher vocabularies (and are shifted up relative to the average growth curve).

But, we note that this model does not show an “interaction effect” (here captured by the null effect of RT on the slope parameter in the logistic model). That’s one of the null effects that we now call out much more prominently in the abstract and end of the results (per our response above).

Equally, while the SEM examines vocabulary growth controlling for age, I wonder about the other way around. What would happen to the effect of age on word recognition skill (in the LME model, S8) if one were to add concurrent vocabulary size? So does chronological age explain word recognition skill or vocabulary knowledge? Right now, the manuscript describes this effect purely related to chronological age, but is it age per se or other cognitive abilities, including a key change across development, namely, vocabulary size? Thus, the presentation of the skill learning hypothesis suggests that age is a proxy for experience, while you actually have here a very nice proxy for experience in terms of children’s vocabulary size.

Again, thank you for engaging with this tricky set of issues. Overall, our goal is to adjust the manuscript to reflect points of agreement; in particular, we agree that age is a proxy for language experience, vocabulary, and other cognitive changes, and we have stated this explicitly now in the intro to the factor analyses: “In our prior analyses, chronological age acts as a proxy for greater language experience and larger vocabulary as well as a host of other correlated developmental changes in cognition. Now we explicitly explore relations to vocabulary growth and the triadic relationship between age, word recognition, and vocabulary.”

On the statistical side, we do think that the NLME (non-linear mixed effects; the logistic growth mode) effectively controls for average vocabulary size, as described above. The longitudinal SEM also relates vocabulary growth to growth in word recognition skill. In both models, we find no evidence for coupled growth; instead the evidence points to children with higher baseline word recognition skill showing faster growth in vocabulary (speed intercept significantly related to vocabulary slope, -.14, p < .01) but not the reverse (vocabulary intercept not strongly related to speed slope; -.01, ns).

More generally, we hope our edits to the paper, detailed above, both clarify this tricky set of issues and also remove inappropriate casual language throughout.

Critically, while the discussion is more nuanced, the way the abstract is concluded and the way the Introduction is phrased suggest that the study is able to answer a causal question, which, as the authors themselves note, is not possible. The abstract, for instance, states that word recognition becomes faster, more accurate and less variable...consistent with a process of skill learning. And also that this skill plays a role in supporting early language learning, which is very causal language. I don’t think you can really claim that you are testing the two hypotheses you suggest here. The work is definitely embedded in the context of these hypotheses, but are you really able to test them? My worry is that while the discussion is more nuanced, the extent to which this study will then be cited down the line as showing that children learn more words down the line because they are faster at recognizing words, and anything that you can do to tamper with such interpretations would be good for the literature. For me, this should not just be relegated to the discussion but should be touched upon in the abstract and Introduction.

Thanks for pushing us to be more precise with how we frame and describe our findings. We agree with the reviewer that our findings do not warrant strong conclusions about the causal role of word recognition skill in vocabulary growth. Per our response above, we have now tried to carefully revise our language throughout the paper (in particular, in the abstract and introduction, as noted by the reviewer).

Finally, it would help to talk more about the mechanisms at work in any relationship between word recognition and language learning. It seems to me that this would rely on some predictive processing framework, given the description on page 4, and it would be good to make this clear (faster and more accurately you can recognize a ball, better use this evidence to infer the speaker’s intended meaning).

Thanks, this is a great point. We’ve revised this text and added references to predictive processing, unpacking a problematic paragraph into two:

“Familiar word recognition -- as measured by LWL -- is hypothesized to play a key role in language learning (19). The idea, in a nutshell, is that the faster and more accurately a child can process incoming words, the more opportunities they have for learning. Consider a child hearing the utterance "Can you put the ball in the crate?" The better the child can recognize the word "ball", the better they can use this evidence to help infer the speaker's intended meaning, allowing possible inferences about the meaning of the less familiar word, "crate" (20).

“Real time language processing, including word recognition, relies heavily on predictive processing, in which comprehenders integrate expectations from prior linguistic context with noisy and ephemeral incoming signals (21, 22). The more input a child receives, the better their predictions are likely to be, and hence the more they can learn (19, 23). Indeed, measurements of children's language input at home are consistently associated with their vocabulary size (24, 25). And, in line with this predictive processing framework, one important study found that children's word recognition speed mediated the longitudinal relationship between home language input and vocabulary growth (26). Thus, word recognition is thought to be a key support for ongoing word learning.”

Equally, when referring to word recognition, it would be good to clarify what this refers to - how well a child knows what a word refers to (and in the context of LWL, what it does not refer to) or how quickly it directs attention to what is referred to.

Thanks, we’ve added a capsule definition in the second paragraph, and added the sentence “This procedure [LWL] measures the general construct of word recognition by operationalizing knowledge of a meaning as visual attention to a specific named referent.” We hope this clarifies the relationship between LWL and word recognition.

With regards to the data, I wonder if there is a clustering of kids past 24 months that is happening here, looking at Figures 1 and 2, where it seems like there is less change past the 24-month point. Is there any way to look at whether the effect of age or vocabulary on word recognition is not linear but asymptotic?

Thanks for pointing this out; we do see what you are talking about but think it’s being handled appropriately in the analysis. In Figure 1 it clearly looks like changes to RT are asymptotic – this is why we analyze the logarithm of RT throughout the paper. In Supplement S6 we show that reaction time is indeed best fit by a log-log function. Your question about Figure 2 asks whether there is further structure beyond the log-log fit; in Supplement S7 we show some analyses that suggest a polynomial fit is not better than the log-log fit; there is some small additional linear effect of age over and above the log-log fit, but it’s minor and pretty hard to interpret in our view.

Recommendations for the authors:

Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

Page 3. Word production may manifest in overt behaviour but need not reflect complete knowledge. A child can say the word dog and use it to refer to a cat.

This is a good point. Since we are not able to speak to the precision of meaning representations (an important issue in its own right), we have omitted the phrase “with incomplete knowledge.”

Page 4. The first two sentences of the paragraph beginning with word recognition ability... don’t go together. The second sentence does not support the claim that word recognition plays a role in language learning.

Thanks, we’ve tried to smooth out this transition as part of unpacking the role of predictive processes.

Page 4. “predicts children’s standardized test scores years later” - make clear what test scores are here.

We added some additional details. The specific tests were the CELF (expressive language) and the KABC (IQ), but we thought too much detail might be distracting.

Page 5. I love Table 1, but would like for the data to be weighted somehow. So, given that some studies had a lot more trials and more children, what percentage of the data did this study contribute? That allows a clearer view of how biased the sample is in certain studies. The x in CDIS and longitudinal could be aligned to the right. I kept wondering why there was an x near some trials.

Thanks, we’ve adjusted the table to add the percentage of the total dataset (in trials) due to each study and fixed the alignment issue.

Page 6. 12 million individual samples: what samples are these? Individual data points per trial per time point. Making this clear would be great.

Clarified, thanks.

Page 9. Your accuracy measures only seem to consider the target. From what I remember of my preferential looking days, this measure usually also includes the distractor. Why do you not do this? This is especially since you have such a wide age range, so if a 12-month-old only looks for about 50 per cent of the trial and spends that time looking at the target, that is very different from a child who looks at the screen all of the trial and spends less time looking at the target here.

Sorry for any lack of clarity: we do in fact compute accuracy as the ratio of looking to target over looking to target plus looking to distractor. We have added this information to the parenthetical referenced above: “... accuracy (more target looking; computed as the ratio of target to target plus distractor looking)”.

Page 12. I only found out that age was in this model by looking at S9.

Thanks for mentioning this omission, we’ve clarified in the text: “We initially add age as an additional variable to our models to explore whether this factor structure relates to age; later we treat age as a predictor of latent factors.”

Page 12. Isn’t it trivial that speed and accuracy show negative covariance, especially given how you measure accuracy? Thus, if I take longer to fixate the target, I have less time to look at the target during the trial. If, however, I included the distractor in my accuracy measure, then I could still take longer to look at the target, but still look more at the target than the distractor.

Thanks for mentioning that this covariance is not the key result of interest; that observation didn’t come out in the text. Now we note that this covariation is “... as expected since they [speed and accuracy] are derived from the same data.” Note per above that accuracy is computed as target / target + distractor looking; even so, your observation is correct: slower looking at the target means lower accuracy at least to some degree.

Page 19. If you excluded data from trials with less than 50% of timepoints, how did this vary across age? Arguably, your study has to worry less about this, given your sample size, but it would be nice to know, which you could include in the percentage of data that each study contributed to the final sample.

Thanks, we’ve added this information to a new table in S1.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

First, I wasn’t entirely clear about what the authors meant by “word recognition ability”. For much of the manuscript (including the use of the term “word recognition ability” itself), this comes across as an intrinsic ability or skill that improves with development. Alternatively, the speed and accuracy metrics taken from studies in Peekbank might capture children’s increasing knowledge of the common, concrete words typically used in these studies. To me, this is a somewhat different construct from a general skill at recognizing words. It would be helpful if the authors could clarify which construct they intend to capture, or if it is not possible to distinguish between these constructs from the Peekbank data.

In response to this comment and related comments above, we’ve added text to the first two paragraphs trying to clarify the general construct that we’re talking about – recognizing the meaning of a word in real-time language comprehension. We’ve also clarified several times throughout the introduction that we’re talking about familiar word recognition, that is, the ability to recognize specific known words. Further, we directly acknowledge the issue above in the introduction:

“Critically, most word recognition paradigms use words that children at the target age are reported to understand and produce. They are thus not indices of vocabulary size but rather measures of how quickly and accurately the child can recognize a familiar spoken word and use it to guide their visual attention to a referent. However, it is unknown the extent to which specific responses reflect an individual child's general speed of language processing versus their familiarity of specific words.”

Second, and relatedly, if the source of the age-related improvements is increasing experience with the common concrete words used in the Peekbank studies, then one might expect word recognition and improvements with age to be related to word frequency, given that more frequent words are experienced more often. Word frequency predicts word knowledge when assessed using CDI data. Can effects of frequency be detected in Peekbank word recognition metrics? If not, why? Similarly, is the speed and accuracy of word recognition in Peekbank data related to CDI-derived word age of acquisition, and again, if not, why?

This is a fascinating set of ideas, and one that we’ve pursued extensively using the Peekbank data. Unfortunately, we think it is out of scope for the current paper, which focuses on child-level metrics (including vocabulary and processing measures). Right now the current paper doesn’t include any analysis of individual words.

Just to expand a bit on the problem here: unfortunately, modeling word recognition as a simple linear function of (log) word frequency is only possible in the case that distractors are held constant (e.g., “ball” always has “book” as its distractor), because distractor frequency plays an important role in the recognition process. However, in our dataset, words are paired with many different distractors across studies. This property means a fairly complex model of the LWL decision process would be necessary for a model to successfully predict effects for individual words. While such a model is an exciting research goal, it’s not something we can include in the current manuscript.

Finally, there is a bit of a risk of the main findings of this paper coming across as a foregone conclusion. I.e., how could it be otherwise that word recognition improves with development?

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

Regarding the feedback about the risk of the findings coming across as a foregone conclusion - perhaps a primary place in the paper where it would be useful to clarify this point is on page 6, in the paragraph beginning, “We investigate two specific hypotheses here. First, one influential theory...”. Here, it might be worth clarifying whether there are alternative ideas about the emergence of word recognition in childhood that predict different patterns, so that the findings of the current paper can be framed as shedding new light on word recognition in development, rather than a confirmation of the common-sense idea that word recognition must improve over development.

Thanks, we appreciate this feedback and it’s something we’ve struggled with in this project. Our conclusion is that this paper does not constitute a binary hypothesis test of e.g., whether word recognition is linked to vocabulary development. Instead, we lean into the idea that there are empirical issues (rather than hypotheses) that have not been quantified sufficiently. Thus, we end the revised introduction with the following paragraph:

“Across both of these issues, the contribution of our work here lies in the detailed quantitative description of development. Nearly every theory of language learning assumes some role for continuous developmental change in word recognition, but these assumptions have not previously been anchored to specific measurements. Hence neither the functional form of the assumed changes nor their concurrent and predictive relationships to vocabulary have been quantified. We leverage the Peekbank dataset to accomplish these goals.”

She doesnt want to kill Tea Cake but knows she has to.

They didn't believe the Indians and stayed in the everglades.

Both Janie and Tea Cake were getting outsider attention from the town.

Mrs. Turner did not believe she belonged with the Black community because she is mixed.

Janie is jealous of the new girl.

Tea Cake is impatient and wants to marry Janie as soon as possible.

The town doesn’t like the idea of Janie hanging out with Tea Cake.

Janie’s first encounter with Tea Cake.

Janie likes teacake but keeps finding excuses to avoid feelings for him

eLife Assessment

This important study is the first characterization of the phenotype caused by a lack of Eml3 expression in mice. Mutant animals present a disrupted pial basement membrane, leading to focal extrusions from the cerebral cortex, called ectopias. The methodology is convincing and the conclusions are solid, although further investigations on the molecular and cellular mechanisms are required to improve the manuscript. This work would be of interest to neural development biologists and human geneticists working on brain disorders.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, the authors investigate the role of the microtubule-binding protein EML3 during cortical development through the generation and characterization of an Eml3 mouse mutant. The authors focus mainly on the effects of EML3 loss on brain development, although Eml3 mouse mutants also present with developmental delay and growth restriction, and die perinatally due to respiratory distress caused by delayed maturation of the lungs. The main finding in the developing cortex is the presence of focal neuronal ectopias, which contain neurons from all cortical layers, as revealed by immunostaining. The authors use electron microscopy to show that ectopias seem to be caused by disruption to the pial basement membrane at early stages of development, which allows neurons to breach through it. To find a functional link between EML3 and the observed phenotype, studies are conducted that demonstrate expression of EML3 in radial glia cells and mesenchymal cells, both cell types involved in the formation and maintenance of the pial basement membrane. Furthermore, interaction partners for EML3 are identified through coIP-MS analysis, including tubulin beta-3, 14-3-3 proteins and cytoplasmic dynein light chain. However, mice carrying a mutant EML3 allele engineered to abolish the interaction between EML3 and cytoplasmic dynein light chain do not recapitulate any of the symptoms of complete EML3 loss.

Strengths:

The manuscript offers several important strengths that contribute significantly to the field. This study presents the first characterization of Eml3 knockout animals, providing novel insights into the role of Eml3 in vivo. Information on Eml3 function so far was restricted to cell culture data, so the results in this manuscript start to fill an important gap in our knowledge about this microtubule-binding protein. The experimental approach is carefully designed, with appropriate controls that ensure the reliability of the data. Moreover, the authors have addressed a key challenge in the analysis, namely the developmental delay of the knockout animals. By implementing a strategy to match developmental stages between wild-type and knockout groups, they allow for meaningful and valid comparisons between the two genotypes. Importantly, the authors have successfully generated three different Eml3 mutant mouse lines (knockout, floxed and with disrupted binding to cytoplasmic dynein light chain), which are very valuable tools for the broader scientific community to further study the roles of this gene in development and disease in the future.

Weaknesses:

While the manuscript presents valuable data, there are also several weaknesses that limit the overall impact of the study. Most notably, there is no clear mechanistic link established between the loss of Eml3 function and the observed phenotype, leaving the biological significance of the findings somewhat speculative, as it is not straightforward how a microtubule-associated protein can have an impact on the stability of the pial basement membrane. In this respect, but also in general for the whole manuscript, there seems to be a considerable amount of experimental work that has been conducted but is not presented, possibly due to the negative nature of the results. Additionally, the phenotype reported appears to be dependent on the genetic background, as it is absent in the CD1 strain. This observation raises concerns as to how robust the results are and how much they can be generalized to other mouse strains, but, more importantly, to humans.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This work aims to understand the role of Echinoderm Microtubule-associated Protein-like 3 (EML3) on embryogenesis and neocortical development. Importantly, this work shows that depletion of EML3 cause focal neuronal ectopias by disrupting the structural integrity of the pial basement membrane, describing a new model of cobblestone brain malformation. Another member of the EML family, EML1, has been already shown to trigger neuronal migration disorders, particularly subcortical band heterotopia by affecting cell polarity. The results presented here point to a different mechanism of action. The authors show that EML3 is expressed in radial glia cells and mesenchymal cells in the pial region and upon EML3 depletion (i.e., Eml3 mutant mice) the pial basement membrane is structurally damaged allowing migrating neuroblasts to ectopically migrate through. Answering, in this case, that the weakening of the pial basement membrane is a prerequisite of focal neuronal ectopias. The authors provide a meticulous characterization of the Eml3 mutant mice, strengthening the conclusions of the results.

Strengths:

The authors provide a very detailed analysis of the defects observed in Eml3 mutant mice, by providing not only results by inferred day of conception but by classifying embryos by their number of somite pairs.

Weaknesses:

Most of the weaknesses originally raised by the reviewer had been addressed.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

The following revisions have been made to address most of the publicly available suggestions made by the Reviewers.

We have also corrected formatting issues in two figure panels:

Fig.1B: embryo ages added over placenta images.

Fig. 4D: fixed a truncated label.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The study would benefit from clearer evidence and additional experiments that would help to establish the molecular and cellular mechanisms underlying the brain phenotype, the central topic of the work.

We agree that additional experiments are necessary to elucidate the mechanism(s) by which EML3 deficiency causes the observed developmental phenotypes. However, as no further experimentation is possible due to the closure of our laboratory, we are committed to sharing available materials including custom antibodies and cryopreserved sperm from our mouse lines. We include previously generated experimental data not presented in the original submission. While these additional data do not reveal the mechanisms, we believe that sharing hypotheses that were experimentally ruled out will benefit the scientific community.

M&M: we have added a section listing several tissue-specific Eml3 KOs generated. All of the generated cKO mice were indistinguishable from Eml3^wt controls.

Supp. Fig. 2 with staining for major PBM components has been added. We have included antibody information to M&M.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

(1) While the manuscript presents valuable data, there are also several weaknesses that limit the overall impact of the study. Most notably, there is no clear mechanistic link established between the loss of Eml3 function and the observed phenotype, leaving the biological significance of the findings somewhat speculative, as it is not straightforward how a microtubule-associated protein can have an impact on the stability of the pial basement membrane. In this respect, but also in general for the whole manuscript, there seems to be a considerable amount of experimental work that has been conducted but is not presented, possibly due to the negative nature of the results. At least some of those results could be shown, particularly (but not only) the stainings for the composition of the ECM components.

We agree that additional experiments are necessary to elucidate the mechanisms at play. While we cannot conduct further experiments, we provide additional existing data, including a new Supp. Fig. 2 showing ECM component staining. As this reviewer rightly anticipated, these results might not clarify the mechanism but sharing the hypotheses that were already experimentally tested will be helpful.

(2) Additionally, the phenotype reported appears to be dependent on the genetic background, as it is absent in the CD1 strain. This observation raises concerns as to how robust the results are and how much they can be generalized to other mouse strains, but, more importantly, to humans.

Indeed, we have determined that genetic background greatly influences the manifestation of developmental defects caused by absence or mutation of the EML3 protein in mice. Modifier genes appear to play a significant role in phenotypic expression. In humans, the presence or absence of such modifiers may result in a broad spectrum of outcomes from no clinical relevance, as seen in CD1 mice, to potential intrauterine mortality. We agree that this underscores the challenge of translating mouse model findings to human implications. Future studies could include a search for EML3 non-coding regulatory mutations and expanded analysis of neuronal development defects, such as COB, as well as cases of intrauterine growth restriction (IUGR).

(3) There is no data included in the manuscript about the generation and analysis of the Eml3AAA/AAA mouse line. This is an important omission, especially as no details on the validation or phenotypic characterization of this additional mouse line are provided. Including these elements would greatly strengthen the rigor and interpretability of the work, especially if that mouse line is to be shared with the scientific community.

We acknowledge this oversight and have added a Materials and Methods section describing the generation of Eml3 TQT86AAA mice. Validation of the Eml3 TQT86AAA mice included showing absence of EML3-DYNLL binding in our co-IP MS data in Table 3. We state that the validated Eml3 TQT86AAA mice were phenotypically indistinguishable from Eml3^wt control mice.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

(1) Besides the data provided in the figures, the authors report a significant amount of experiments/results as "Data not shown". Negative data is still important data to report, and the authors may want to choose some crucial "not shown data" to report in the manuscript.

We have incorporated key datasets previously omitted, with priority given to those specifically requested by Reviewer #2.

(2) Results in Figure 3A apparently contradict results in 3B. A better explanation of the results should improve understanding of the data. Even though the conclusion that the "onset and progression of neurogenesis is normal in Eml3 null mice" seems logical based on the data, the final numbers are not (Figure 3A) and this should be acknowledged, as well.

We provide further explanations for the data presented in figures 3A and 3B to better convey the fact that the two datasets are not contradicting. In essence, since Eml3 null mice are developmentally delayed (as determined by the number of somites at a specific age, Fig. 1C), the milestones in neurogenesis are reached at a later age in Eml3 null mice, thus at embryonic age E11.5 Eml3 null mice have fewer TBR2-positive cells (Fig. 3A). However, Eml3 null mice have reached the same neurogenesis milestones as their WT counterparts when they have the same number of somites (Fig. 3B).

Results section for Fig. 3: we provide additional explanations that reconcile the results shown in Fig. 3A and Fig. 3B.

(3) The authors should define which cell types are identified by SOX1 and PAX6.

We have defined the expression timing and cell identity marked by SOX1 and PAX6 in neural progenitors during cortical development.

eLife Assessment

In this important study, Li et al. identify estrogen receptor 1-expressing neurons (ESR1+) in Barrington's nucleus as key regulators coordinating both bladder contraction and the relaxation of the external urethral sphincter. Using appropriate and validated methodologies aligned with the current state of the art, the data are convincing and of generally high quality.