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    1. Finally, a small number of Jews, never exceeding five hundred, livedin Paris during the eighteenth century. They had no recognized institu-tions, and the practice of their religion was only tolerated as of 1755.They lived under police surveillance and were subject to imprisonmentor expulsion if found without their special short-term passports.

      This passage explains the scope of anti-Jewish sentiment in Paris and the wider anti-Jewish movement in France at the time. The Jewish people were essentially political prisoners in the country in which they made their residence.

    2. The Jews of Metz, like their Ashkenazi brethren in Alsace and Lor-raine, maintained a significant degree of communal autonomy in civilmatters.

      This sentence indicates that the Jewish people of Metz lived similarly to Ashkenazi jews as they were able to enjoy some sense of civil freedom. What is interesting is that the sentence says "civil matter" and not political ones. This could lead one to infer that political freedoms were not as robust in Metz

    1. Although you might think editing and proofreading aren’t necessary since you were fairly careful when you were writing, the truth is that even the brightest people and best writers make mistakes when they write

      Yes, always do this because we don't really notice when we do our mistakes until we actually read thought your writing.

    2. The textbook English for Business Success explains that what writers need most is feedback from readers who can respond to both the words on the page and critique whether the writing responds to the assignment; this process is called peer review.

      The textbook states that feedback from peers who will give you honest, and respectfully critical advice, can help you gain stronger writing skills.

    1. As of the end of 2022, perhaps up to 1,500 US officials had complained of having suffered such debilitating and disabling symptoms as constant headaches, dizziness, loss of memory and vision, nausea, insomnia, and vertigo.

      To increase credibility, how do these compare to non-US officials? Were others experiencing this effect? Also, does it compare closely with an existing ailment?

    2. severe headaches and nausea, after hearing unidentifiable grinding, piercing, and unbearable noises inside their heads, with those who were exposed the longest suffering from the most crippling disabilities.

      similar yet some variation in reported symptoms compared to Lin's study

    3. tolerating, denying, and concealing decades of Russian attacks, at the expense of American officials, has harmed the credibility and weakened the power of the US government to deter other acts of aggression.

      Very serious and definitive allegation

    4. threatening the Russians with retaliation.

      Highly accusatory. While Lin provided an evidence-based scientific study, this article is useful in how it reflects US sentiments and accusations towards Russia

    5. President Vladimir Putin and Russian military officers have publicly bragged about developing weapons that could cause health effects similar to Havana Syndrome.

      No source provided here

    6. recall a series of historically documented Soviet technical operations against the US embassy in Moscow that began in 1953 and lasted for decades, providing credible evidence of serious harm to numerous diplomats and other US officials.

      Unlike James Lin's report, the FPRI is quasi-accusing Russians in Havana Syndrome

    1. Avant-garde became a kind of generic term for a number of art movements centered on the idea of artistic autonomy and independence.

      Can avant-garde stem from a blending of traditional values? What is and can the new avant-garde characterized by, in the context of contemporary issues faced by humanity.

    2. The avant-garde was never a cohesive group of artists and what was avant-garde in one nation was not necessarily the same in others.

      DIY is my American avant-garde

    1. One commonly employed technique in modern journalism is the inverted pyramid style. This style requires objectivity and involves structuring a story so that the most important details are listed first for ease of reading. In the inverted pyramid format, the most fundamental facts of a story—typically the who, what, when, where, and why—appear at the top in the lead paragraph, with nonessential information in subsequent paragraphs.

      The pyramid is the most effective way to organize a story. the pyrmid basically breaks down the level of importance. This basically describes how the most fundamental facts of a story appear at the top in the lead paragraph, with less needed information in the paragraphs to follow.

    2. Although literary journalism certainly affected newspaper reporting styles, it had a much greater impact on the magazine industry. Because they were bound by fewer restrictions on length and deadlines, magazines were more likely to publish this new writing style than were newspapers. Indeed, during the 1960s and 1970s, authors simulating the styles of both Wolfe and Capote flooded magazines such as Esquire and The New Yorker with articles.

      This basically was invented for newspapers, but had a bigger impact on the magazine area. It makes sense because magazines are less strict in terms of deadlines for certain materials. What I highlighted explains how the magazines had the outlet to express themself more for longer and detailed writing.

    3. But interpretive journalism posed a new problem for editors: the need to separate straight objective news from opinions and analysis. In response, many papers in the 1930s and 1940s “introduced weekend interpretations of the past week’s events … and interpretive columnists with bylines.

      With everyone turning to interpretive journalism, it became a problem when the writers had to decipher real news from opinion. What they did was make two separate sections for facts and opinions. This basically tells us that both fact and opinion matter when reading texts.

    1. There is a variation of stem and leaf displays that is useful for comparing distributions. The two distributions are placed back to back along a common column of stems. The result is a “back-to-back stem and leaf display.” Figure 2.2.4 shows such a graph. It compares the numbers of TD passes in the 1998 and 2000 seasons.

      This is a very helpful way to compare the two distributions because placing them back to back makes differences easy to see. We can see that using the same stems allows for direct comparison meanwhile still showing the exact data values.

    1. Comparing Distributions Often we need to compare the results of different surveys, or of different conditions within the same overall survey. In this case, we are comparing the “distributions” of responses between the surveys or conditions. Bar charts are often excellent for illustrating differences between two distributions.

      This is a very effective way to compare distributions because bar charts clearly show differences between groups. They make it easy to see patterns, such as increases, decreases, or similarities across conditions at a glance.

    1. ay have experienced the impacts of less dense air at higher elevations. If you usually live, work, and recreate at lower elevations, you might find yourself getting short of breath while doing some of those same things at higher elevations. You may even get a headache or feel sluggish. This is because the molecules are further apart, resulting in air that is less dense, or “rarified”. Although you are filling your lungs, you still are not getting as many oxygen molecules in.

      question 6

    1. Significantly, they also fall within the permissible‘‘safe’’ limits of currently promulgated safety standards andprotection guidelines, The required microwave technologyis mature and in general, commercially available in manydeveloped countries

      What would this technology be used for?

    2. umerous laboratoryinvestigations and theoretical research, and supported by bio-logical, physical, mathematical, and computer simulationsalong with reported experiences of the embassy staff.

      Supporting evidence: compare with the group, how strong is the evidence of their theories?

    3. The symptomsinclude headaches, severe hearing loss, ringing in the ears,nausea, and problems with balance or vertigo, and are sug-gestive of a connection to the inner ear apparatus within thehuman head

      Symptoms

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    1. Topic sentence: summarizes the main idea of the paragraph; presents a claim that supports your thesis. Supporting sentences: examples, details, and explanations that support the topic sentence (and claim). Concluding sentence: gives the paragraph closure by relating the claim back to the topic sentence and thesis statement.

      Good reference to create a good essay.

    2. Transitions within a paragraph help readers to anticipate what is coming before they read it. Within paragraphs, transitions tend to be single words or short phrases. Words like while, however, nevertheless, but, and similarly, as well as phrases like on the other hand and for example, can serve as transitions between sentences and ideas.

      Transitions in a paragraph guide readers and show how ideas connect. They are usually single words or short phrases that help the reader follow the flow of sentences and ideas.

    3. The topic may relate to your thesis statement, but you’ll need to be more specific here. Consider a sentence like this: “Cooking is difficult.” The claim is confusing because it is not clear for whom cooking is difficult and why. A better example would be, “While there are food pantries in place in some low-income areas, many recipients of these goods have neither the time nor the resources to make nutritionally sound meals from what they receive.” (Stylistically speaking, if you wanted to include “Cooking is difficult,” you could make it the first sentence, followed by the topic sentence. The topic sentence should be precise.) In expository writing, each paragraph should articulate a single main idea that relates directly to the thesis statement. This construction creates a feeling of unity, making the paper feel cohesive and purposeful. Connections between each idea—both between sentences and between paragraphs—should enhance that sense of cohesion.

      Topic sentences should be specific and clear explain the main idea of a paragraph. In expository writing, each paragraph should focus on one idea that directly supports the thesis.

    4. In order to fulfill the requirements of strong primary support, the information you choose must meet the following standards: Be specific. The main points you make about your thesis and the examples you use to expand on those points need to be specific. Use specific examples to provide the evidence and to build upon your general ideas. These types of examples give your reader something narrow to focus on, and if used properly, they leave little doubt about your claim. General examples, while they convey the necessary information, are not nearly as compelling or useful in writing because they are too obvious and typical. Be relevant to the thesis. Primary support is considered strong when it relates directly to the thesis. Primary support should show, explain, or prove your main argument without delving into irrelevant details. When faced with lots of information that could be used to prove your thesis, you may think you need to include it all in your body paragraphs. But effective writers resist the temptation to lose focus. This idea is so important, here it is again: effective writers resist the temptation to lose focus. Choose your examples wisely by making sure they directly connect to your thesis. Be detailed. Remember that your thesis, while specific, should not be overly detailed. The body paragraphs are where you develop the discussion that a thorough essay requires. Using detailed support shows readers that you have considered all the facts and chosen only the most precise details to enhance your point of view.

      Strong primary support in writing should be specific, relevant to the thesis, and detailed. Specific examples make ideas clearer and more convincing than general ones.

    1. Chronological To tell a story or relate an experience To explain the history of an event or a topic To introduce the steps in a process Spatial To help readers visualize something as you want them to see it To create a main impression using the senses (sight, touch, taste, smell, and sound) Order of Importance To persuade or convince To rank items by their importance, benefit, or significance

      These types of writings are really important since we would need to add good source of detailed information. Also that it can it can relate to your personal story or concepts that would change society thinking.

    2. For example, when telling a story, it may be important to first describe the backstory.

      A backstory can be important so the audience is not that lost meanwhile reading the highest point. It also gives a context on your topic.

    3. An outline is a written plan that serves as a skeleton for the paragraphs you write. Later, when you draft paragraphs in the next stage of the writing process, you will add support to create “flesh” and “muscle” for your assignment. The outline will utilize the ideas you developed during the prewriting process. When you write, your goal is not only to complete an assignment but also to write for a specific purpose—perhaps to inform, to explain, to persuade, or to achieve a combination of these purposes. Your purpose for writing should always be in the back of your mind, because it will help you decide which pieces of information belong together and how you will order them. Three common ways to structure a paper are chronological order, spatial order, and order of importance. Choose the order that will most effectively fit your purpose and support your main poi

      An outline is a plan that organizes ideas from prewriting and helps structure paragrpah before drafting. Keeping the writing purpose in mind helps decide how ideas are grouped and ordered. Writers can organize their paper using chronological order, spatial order, or order of importance

    4. When you write, it is helpful when your ideas are presented in an order that makes sense. The writing you complete in all your courses exposes how analytically and critically your mind works. In some courses, the only direct contact you may have with your instructor is through the assignments you write for the course. You can make a good impression by spending time ordering your ideas. Order refers to your choice of what to present first, second, third, and so on in your writing. The order you pick closely relates to your purpose for writing that particular assignment. For example, when telling a story, it may be important to first describe the backstory. Or you may need to first describe a 3-D movie projector or a television studio to help readers visualize the setting and scene. You may want to group your support effectively to convince readers that your point of view on an issue is well reasoned and worthy of belief. In longer pieces of writing, you may organize parts in different ways so that your purpose stands out clearly and all parts of the paper work to consistently develop your main point.

      Organizing ideas clearly in writing helps show a writer's critical and analytical thinking. The order of ideas should match the purpose of the assignments, such as telling a story, describing a setting, or making an argument.

    5. The textbook English for Business Success explains that your prewriting activities and readings can help you gather information for your assignment. The more you sort through the pieces of information you found, the more you will begin to see the connections between them.

      This allows you to notice patterns and connections to help you understand the information.

    6. Once you begin narrowing down your topic, depending on the type of paper, you may be ready to start drafting. The best point to begin writing your draft also depends on the genre of essay you are writing

      Knowing down a genre can help with choosing a topic, and once a topic is chosen, the paper will flow easier and faster.

    1. IMPA was analyzed by tandem mass spectrometry (MS/MS) in multiple reaction monitoring (MRM) mode as well as by high-resolution mass spectrometry (HR-MS) without fragmentation following liquid chromatography (LC) separation and electrospray ionization (ESI) in negative mode, ESI (−).

      Short explanation of how the IMPA (more stable version of sarin after it enters the body) was found.

    2. ccordingly, this product might also act as a diagnostic marker for poisoning with organophosphorus agents.

      Put simply, Sarin binds with protein in the body and the remnant is a strong indicator of poisoning.

    3. The limited stability and high reactivity of sarin (Fig. 1) precludes detection of the intact poison in vivo, thus requiring the search for more stable and long-lived surrogate parameters derived from biotransformation.

      This explains my previous question as to why the sarin was analyzed so long after the victim's death.

    4. Tissues of a dead female victim were taken several weeks after death. Immediately after poisoning on April 29, 2013 in the Syrian city of Saraqueb, the victim was reported to have shown miosis (contraction of the pupils) and other symptoms of cholinergic crisis, and died within 24 h after suspected exposure [2].
      1. So is miosis a key symptom?
      2. The samples were taken several weeks after death. Might this affect the samples, or does the substance not degrade?
      3. Might any other demographic info (age, location, etc.) affect the samples?
    5. These experimental results provided unambiguous evidence for a systemic intoxication and were the first proving the use of sarin in the ongoing bellicose conflict. This scenario underlines the requirement for qualified and specialized analytical laboratories to face repeated violation of the Chemical Weapons Convention.

      Main point - strongly claims "unambiguous" evidence

    6. variety of biotransformation products of the nerve agent sarin was detected, including the hydrolysis product O-isopropyl methylphosphonic acid (IMPA) as well as covalent protein adducts with e.g., albumin and human butyrylcholinesterase (hBChE).

      Key finding

    1. What either-or thinking misses inthis case is that technology, like cyborgs, is embedded inhistories and contexts in which politics, ethics, kinship,the law, biology, and other technological systems are allsimultaneously important for shaping the future of workin an automated economy.

      testing

    1. MethodI ran a series of OLS regressions including cross-sectional and separate coun-try estimations. One major drawback of survey research is the high rate ofmissing data because of nonresponses. In the data used, the percentage ofmissing values was 22% for religious service attendance. When all variablesof interest are included in the regression model, the number of cases retainedin the sample drops to 6,409 (only 46% of all respondents) as a result of list-wise deletion.8Political scientists generally either replace the missing values by educatedguesses (e.g., means) or perform listwise deletion, which results in “a loss ofvaluable information at best and severe selection bias at worst” (King, Hon-aker, Joseph, & Scheve, 2001, p. 49). An alternative to listwise deletion ismultiple imputation, which involves imputing m values for a missing cellbased on the existing information (i.e., observed cells). I used Amelia II,developed by Honaker, King, and Blackwell (2007). I ran five imputations ofthe data in Amelia II and later combined the imputed data sets by calculatingthe mean values in Stata 9.

      Метод OLS-регрессии помогает понять, какие факторы влияют на поддержку демократии, сравнивать страны и использовать большие данные. Слабая сторона использования данного метода заключается в том, что он имеет пропуски (например, 22% не указали, как часто посещают религиозные службы). Их «дополняли» с помощью другого специального метода, но полностью проблему смещения выборки это не решает.

    2. o test these hypotheses, the present study uses the fourth wave of the WVS

      Автор использует четвертую волну исследований World Values Survey (WVS, «Всемирный обзор ценностей»), которая проводилась в 1999-2001 гг. Именно в этой волне затрагивались многие мусульманские страны, что делает этот датасет одним из лучших для анализа ценностей и политических установок в мусульманских обществах на момент публикации работы (2010 г.)

    3. Following the footsteps of this research, I examine the individual-leveldeterminants of support for democracy in 10 Muslim-majority countries.

      Сильная сторона работы описана в этом предложении. Помимо широкой выборки, автор смещает акцент с институциональных факторов на индивидуальные факторы поддержки демократии. Методологически его подход можно интерпретировать в духе Люсьена Пая, поскольку внимание смещено с формальных институтов на индвидуальные установки граждан.

    4. Neither class member-ship nor perceptions of government involvement consistently reaches statis-tical significance. This result is surprising given the well-establishedtheoretical literature about the role of middle and working class attitudes intransition to and consolidation of democracy.

      Вывод

    5. Theeffect of political Islamist views is mixed, as an individual who prefers to seepious individuals in public offices is less supportive of democracy in Turkeyand Bosnia and is more supportive in Pakistan and Indonesia. Turkey, vehe-mently secular, is the only country where this variable reaches statistical sig-nificance in the negative direction for both specific (4.3%) and diffusesupport (13.2%). This may be the result of secularist modernization policiesfollowed in this country. In contrast, the positive and strong effect of political

      Вывод

    6. Finally, the evidence in favor of Islamic values approach is scarce. Religi-osity does not reach statistical significance in 8 of the 10 countries (for asimilar finding, see Hoffman, 2004; Jamal, 2006; Rose, 2002; Tessler, 2002).

      Вывод и несогласие с теорией о том, что религиозность влияет на поддержку демократии.

    7. The difference between the negative and positive ends of political trustgenerates a 9% increase in the specific support for democracy. Although thisis a large and expected effect, it may be an artifact of measurement. 11 Thesubstantive effects of tolerance and interpersonal trust are modest, and thelatter makes a difference only for specific support. More interestingly, religi-osity has no discernable effect, whereas stronger preferences for religiousindividuals in public offices decrease diffuse support by only 2% and specificsupport by 4%. This result shows that at the attitudinal level, being a piousMuslim does not necessarily have a negative impact on attitudes towarddemocracy (Esposito & Mogahed, 2007; Hassan, 2008; Jamal, 2006; Rose,2002; Tessler, 2002)

      Вывод

    8. Among the indicators of social capital theory, political trust is statisticallysignificant with a positive coefficient, whereas interpersonal trust reachesstatistical significance in the specific support model.

      Вывод

    9. The first three items are about the outcomes of democratic governance,whereas the last two ask the respondents to provide a general assessment ofdemocracy. Factor analysis was conducted with these five items, and twofactors were extracted. The first three items tapping respondents’ opinionsabout specific outcomes of democratic governance load strongly on a firstfactor (factor loadings are .80, .77, and .77, respectively, with a Cronbach’salpha of .75), and the last two items tapping respondent attitudes regardingoverall support for democracy load on a second factor (factor loadings are.77 and .62, with a Cronbach’s alpha of .52). This distinction resemblesEaston’s (1965) typology of diffuse and specific support. 7 I prefer to useEaston’s concepts below; however, I approach the results of the factor analy-sis cautiously as the use of these concepts does not mean that I use specificand diffuse support in a pure Eastonian sense

      Сильная сторона аргументации. В качестве зависимой переменной автор использовал два типа поддержки демократии, что позволяет более точно анализировать различные аспекты отношения к демократии.

    10. ecently, Jamal and Tessler (2008) used evidence from the ArabBarometer Survey to demonstrate that Arab citizens understand democracy indifferent terms.

      Соглашается с ними

    11. The second reason for the problematic nature of the teleological interpre-tation of modernization theory concerns its cultural implications. Although,modernization is expected to foster mass democratic values and beliefs as aresult of industrialization, urbanization, and increased wealth and education,it is not clear how these values and beliefs are brought about or whether theyare causes or consequences of democratization. Furthermore, Lipset (1994,p. 3), the strongest proponent of modernization theory, declared that culturalfactors are more important than modernization for the prospect of democracyand that certain faiths, such as Islam, Christian orthodoxy, and Confucian-ism, are fundamentally incompatible with democratic values. Inglehart(1990) argued that economic development leads to cultural changes that inturn lead to democracy. More recently, Inglehart and Norris (2003) arguedthat the real fault line between Islam and the West is not political. Rather,they claimed that what divides the two cultures are values and attitudesrelated to the perceptions of gender equality and tolerance. As individualsmove to urban areas, get better education, and increase their wealth, they arealso expected to become more secular, more accepting of women’s roles insociety, and socially more tolerant in general (Jamal, 2006; Moghadam,2003). In their recent analyses, Hoffman (2004) and Jamal (2006) found evi-dence supporting this argument. 1 According to a cultural interpretation ofmodernization theory, it can be expected that individuals with positive per-ceptions of gender equality and those who are more tolerant will be moresupportive of democracy compared to those lacking these opinions

      Автор соглашается с этими исследователями и использует их работы и эмпирические наблюдения в качестве своих аргументов. При этом критически относится к Липсету, т.к. на индивидуальном уровне ислам не препятствует поддержке демократических режимов.

    12. Furthermore, a mutually beneficial relationship exists between states andcertain segments of societies in the Middle Eastern countries. The state poli-cies especially targeted middle classes (using state-owned enterprises;Richards & Waterbury, 2008) and organized labor (by controlling the tradeunions; Posusney, 1997) to maintain this relationship. Although the develop-ment of a strong private sector independent of the state may have eventuallybegun to undermine the power of the authoritarian state and created a citi-zenry equipped with democratic values, rentierism (Richards & Waterbury,2008) or the “resource curse” (Ross, 2001) provided the state with someautonomy from the public by removing the government reliance on taxes inthe oil-rich Middle Eastern countries and the other parts of the Islamic world(i.e., workers’ remittances and tourism revenues in Morocco and Turkey)

      Автор соглашается с этим исследователем и использует его работы и эмпирические наблюдения в качестве своих аргументов.

    13. It is argued that members of the middle and workingclass will challenge authoritarian practices if and only if they experience con-siderable independence from the state (Kamrava, 2005). To elaborate, if anauthoritarian state controls a substantial portion of its citizens’ behavior byproviding jobs and benefits (e.g., tax-free income), the modernization pro-cess may not necessarily create a democratically oriented citizenry (Bellin,2002; Kamrava, 2005). This is particularly valid for the authoritarian regimesof the Middle East, where clientelism contaminates the political life andserves to legitimize authoritarian practices (Lust-Okar, 2008). The existenceof a strong government in political and economic life may depress the emer-gence of “critical citizens” (Norris, 1999), particularly those among the mid-dle class. This tendency, combined with the clientelistic nature of the politicalsystem (especially in certain parts of the Muslim world), may strengthenauthoritarian values and prevent the emergence of a democratic citizenry

      Автор соглашается с этими исследователями и использует их работы и эмпирические наблюдения в качестве своих аргументов.

    14. The relationship of development and democracy, however, has proven tobe more subtle than this linear economic scheme. “Multiple modernities”may emerge as a result of interaction between modernizing forces and theexisting cultural and institutional structures in a country (Eisenstadt, 2000,pp. 13-15).

      Автор соглашается с этим исследователем

    15. So far, few students of comparative politics have investigated the determi-nants of individual support for democracy in Muslim countries (Bratton,2003; Hoffman, 2004; Jamal, 2006; Rose, 2002; Tessler, 2002).

      Автор соглашается с этими авторами, но и не принимает их выводы безоговорочно.

    16. These countries represent different regime types including elec-toral democracies, authoritarian republics, and monarchies. Table 1 presentsthe rankings of these countries according to the United Nations HumanDevelopment Index (HDI; 2001), their Freedom House status (2001) andGDP per capita (2001), and their percentage support for democracy calcu-lated from the WVS.

      Сравнительный кросс-национальный анализ. Автор учитывает большое количество людей из разных стран, а не из одной-двух, для выявления общей закономерности, что делает его работу более объективной.

    1. Natives of North America also settled in complex societies in various regions, based mainly on the cultivation of corn, wild rice, squash, and pumpkins and on managing the environment to promote the success of game animals. The traditional U.S. and Canadian Thanksgiving dinner celebrates the native foods of North America, including the turkey.

      It is cool to see where most of our Thanksgiving dishes came from. Like the reason we have all of these dishes was because of the Native of North America and the things they found and ate.

    2. Now the ultimate end and scope that incited the Spaniards to endeavor the Extirpation and Desolation of this People, was Gold only…

      I remember a few years back playing a video game. I forget which one, but at some point a character said something along the lines of "After everything, all you've got to show is some metal," in relation to the pursuit of gold. That's always stuck with me. Metal has value, yes, but it's not worth blood. People shouldn't die for it, and no man with an ounce of honor should kill for it. I think that Bartolomé would've thought much the same.

    3. there was nothing wanting in them for the acquisition of eternal grace, but the sole Knowledge and Understanding of the Deity….

      Although the religious focus feels strange to me, as someone who isn't religious, I also know that this is a clear sign of how deeply his compassion for these people ran. To see them as children of God in his age was radical and needed.

    4. Bartolomé de Las Casas

      This man was a saint in many ways. He saw the writing on the wall, saw that the ink was blood, and did what he could to try and prevent the coming storm. It's a true shame that he didn't make more progress in that goal.

    5. he king Montezuma, who was accompanied by Itzcohuatzin and by those who had brought food for the Spaniards, protested: “Our lords, that is enough! What are you doing? These people are not carrying shields or macanas. Our lords, they are completely unarmed!”

      It wasn't about anything other than domination, I imagine. So many people died for ideas that just feel broken. I can't imagine what it must have felt like to see it, to watch people bleed and kill for a concept as vague as control.

    6. hey also murdered the king of Nauhtla, Cohualpopocatzin, by wounding him with arrows and then burning him alive.

      I can't imagine why the brutality was so common in these killings. I get that you need to send a message, but this is cruel on every level imaginable.

    7. have met you face to face! I was in agony for five days, for ten days, with my eyes fixed on the Region of the Mystery. And now you have come out of the clouds and mists to sit on your throne again.

      If this is a verified account, I get the impression that Montezuma was a very charismatic speaker. I could listen to this kind of language all day.

    8. A million people had disappeared in a little over 50 years.

      This is one of the most humbling facts of history. We aren't immune to the world, even when we think we've claimed it. A million deaths brought not by conquest or famine, but disease. It's a terrible, almost insulting way for a society to fall.

    9. To support this population, the Maya farmed in raised irrigated fields, built canals, and bred fish, water plants, and algae to use as fertilizer. In mountainous areas, the Maya terraced the hillsides to provide flat areas for planting, like their cousins in South America.

      I've had the opportunity to see some of these sites, and it really is amazing how well they did. Keep in mind, the best pack animal they had was a lama. They had to carry most of this stuff themselves.

    10. By comparison, Chinese intensive rice farming, the most successful agricultural technique known in Europe and Asia, supported only about one person per acre at the same time.

      I would not have guessed that the Chinese rice farming would be the most successful agricultural technique known to Europe and Asia. I thought it would have been something with Europe and their potatoes.

    11. This demographic parity changed very quickly, as we will soon see.

      I'm just going to say in advance that this is likely due to the disease. Tragic, all-consuming disease, namely smallpox.

    12. Even today, typical histories of America tend to consider the moment of Columbus’ landing on October 12, 1492, to be a significant starting point. Some continue to consider Columbus to have been a heroic explorer while others regard him as a monster and accuse him of deliberate genocide.

      I have heard both sides of this story. I don't really know which one I believe the most, I do still consider the moment of Columbus' landing to be significant starting point of America. While discussion him either being a hero or a monster people have argued for years.

    1. This practice is the origin of the myth of El Dorado, the “Golden Man” sought by the Spanish in their early explorations.  Over time, Spaniards such as Coronado came to believe they were searching for a city of gold, which they never found.

      This is where they got the ritual of the king dusting himself in gold and diving into the waters as a purification ritual of the God's. I have heard of the name El Dorado before and I knew a little bit about it. I think it is cool that the practice of this was how the myth of El Dorado started.

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    1. How I Taught My Neighbor to Keep the Volume Down

      Teaching My Neighbor to Keep the Volume Down

      • The Setup: In 2007, the author moved to an apartment where Dish Network was the only option. He upgraded to a DVR package that included an RF (Radio Frequency) remote, allowing him to control the TV from anywhere in the apartment without line-of-sight.
      • The Problem: A loud neighbor moved in and also acquired Dish Network with an RF remote. Because they shared the same default frequency, the author's remote experienced interference, and he realized his remote could control the neighbor's set-top box.
      • The Conflict: The neighbor frequently played his TV at high volume. The author attempted to visit the neighbor to explain the technical interference issue and build rapport, but the neighbor was rude, yelled "I'm not buying," and slammed the door.
      • The Solution: Instead of reprogramming his remote to avoid interference, the author decided to "train" the neighbor. He kept the RF remote in his bedroom and established a rule: if the neighbor's volume exceeded a specific threshold (estimated level 15-20), he would use the remote to turn the neighbor's device off.
      • The Result: Through "Pavlovian conditioning," the neighbor eventually learned that keeping the volume low kept the TV on, while raising it caused the TV to shut off. The author successfully conditioned the neighbor to maintain a lower volume without ever speaking to him again.

      Hacker News Discussion

      • Counter-Tactics: The top comment shared a similar revenge story where a user blasted System of a Down's "Chop Suey" at 4 AM to retaliate against a neighbor who watched loud reality TV late at night; the neighbor eventually complained and changed their behavior.
      • Technical Warfare: Commenters discussed various gadgets for dealing with noisy neighbors, such as the "STFU" device which purportedly pipes audio back directionally, and directional ultrasound speakers.
      • Pavlovian Experiments: Another user described using a fake smoke detector with an annoying buzzer triggered via Bluetooth to "train" a neighbor to stop smoking on their balcony, mirroring the blog post's conditioning theme.
      • Skepticism and Meta-Commentary: Several users questioned the veracity of these "tall tales," leading to a debate about whether Hacker News is becoming more like Reddit.
      • Morning vs. Night: A sub-thread debated the consideration gap between "morning people" (who make noise early) and "night people" (who make noise late), with users arguing that society unfairly favors morning noise.
      • Escalation: Anecdotes ranged from passive-aggressive automated systems to extreme physical confrontations, such as a neighbor throwing a loud stereo through a window.
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      It's capitalism. Capitalism ruins everything.

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    1. As she was also so white as not to be known as of colored lineage, without a critical survey, and her child was white also, it was much easier for her to pass on unsuspected.

      I think the story does have issues but I think this line truly shows the issues with it. Of course there were people who were enslaved that were light-skin and therefore it made it easier for them to "pass" as white, but the reason this line is important is that because she is "pass-able" she doesn't have the same "accent" as her other counter-parts. Why is it that she is lighter therefore her pronunciation is better. Personally I think this encapsulates the issue at hand.

    1. the next step is to get students to interact critically with the writing, to begin to push at the limits of not only the content, but also the shape of the thinking contained within the content.

      I think the point kyla makes here is very important. We know that it is important to examine the conent but getting engaged with the readings, taking them personal is very important and very helpful. We see kayla making that point "you read it aleast three times". reading it from different angles with very important and helpful.

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      *Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required): *

      *Using genetics and microscopy approaches, Cabral et al. investigate how fission yeast regulates its length and width in response to osmotic, oxidative, or low glucose stress. Miller et al. have recently found that the cell cycle regulators Cdc25, Cdc13 and Cdr2 integrate information about cell volume, time and cell surface area into the cellular decision when to divide. Cabral now build on this work and test how disruption of these regulators affects cell size adaptation. They find that each stress condition shows a distinct dependence on the individual regulators, suggesting that the complex size control network enables optimized size adaptation for each condition. Overall, the manuscript is clear and the detailed methods ensure that the experiments can be replicated.

      Major comments:

      1.) It would be much easier to follow the authors' conclusions, if in addition to surface area to volume ratio, length and width, they would also plot cell volume at division in Figs. 1-4.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: Due to space constraints in the main (and supplemental) figures, we focused on SA:Vol ratio together with cell length and width, which directly define cell geometry in rod-shaped fission yeast. Surface area and volume are derived from these measurements and can be misleading when considered alone, as similar surface area or volume values can arise from distinct combinations of length and width. The SA:Vol ratio therefore serves as a robust integrative metric for capturing coordinated changes in length and width that reshape cell geometry. We would be happy to include individual surface area and volume plots if requested.

      2.) To me, it seems that maybe even more than upon osmotic stress, the cdc13-2x strain differs qualitatively from WT in low glucose conditions, where the increased SA-V ratio is almost completely abolished.

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We agree with the reviewer and have revised the manuscript text to point out this difference. The newly added text states: “Under low glucose, cdc13-2x cells also showed a WT-like response, decreasing length and increasing in SA:Vol ratio (Figures 3B-D). However, this SA:Vol increase was reduced compared to WT (1% vs 8.5%; Figures 1D and 3B), suggesting impaired geometric remodeling under glucose limitation.”

      3.) It is not entirely clear to me why two copies of Cdc13 would qualitatively affect the responses. Shouldn't the extra copy behave similarly to the endogenous one and therefore only lead to quantitative changes? Maybe the authors can discuss this more clearly or even test a strain in which Cdc13 function is qualitatively disrupted.

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: Increased Cdc13 protein concentration in cdc13-2x cells disrupts the typical time-scaling of Cdc13 protein. Consistent with this, cdc13-2x cells enter mitosis at a smaller cell size. We have modified the text to clarify this point. The new text states: “To access the role of the Cdc13 time-sensing pathway, we disrupted Cdc13 protein abundance by creating a cdc13-2x strain carrying an additional copy of cdc13 integrated at an exogenous locus. cdc13-2x cells divided at a smaller size than WT, reflecting accelerated mitotic entry upon disruption of typical time-scaling of Cdc13 protein (Figure S1A).”

      4.) I don't see why the authors come to the conclusion that under osmotic stress cells would maximize cell volume. It leads to a decreased cell length, doesn't it?

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: WT cells under osmotic stress do decrease in length, but this is accompanied by an increase in cell width. Because width contributes disproportionately to cell volume in rod-shaped cells, this change results in a modest but reproducible reduction in the SA:Vol ratio relative to WT cells in control medium (Figure 1D). We note that the degree of this change under osmotic stress is small (-0.4%), although statistically significant (p * Likewise, in Figure 2B, they interpret tiny changes in the SA/V. By my estimation, the difference between control and osmotic stress is only 2% (1.195/1.17), less that the wild-type case, which appears to be twice that (which is still pretty modest). The small amplitude of these changes is obscured by the fact that the graphs do not have a baseline at zero, which, as a matter of good data-presentation practice, they should.

      *

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We appreciate the reviewer’s distinction between statistical and biological significance and agree that this is an important point to clarify. We now note in the revised text that changes in SA:Vol ratio under osmotic stress are numerically small and should not be overinterpreted. Our revised text now states: “Under oxidative and osmotic stress, the SA:Vol ratio decreased, indicating greater cell volume expansion relative to surface area (Figure 1D). However, we note that the reduction in SA:Vol under osmotic stress, while statistically significant, was modest in magnitude (−0.4%).”

      Although small in absolute terms, even subtle geometric changes can be biologically meaningful in fission yeast due to the small size of these cells, where minor shifts in length or width translate into measurable differences in membrane area relative to cytoplasmic volume. Importantly, in Figure 2B, the key observation is not the magnitude of the change but its direction: cdc25-degron-DaMP cells exhibit a ~2% increase in SA:Vol ratio under osmotic stress, in contrast to the decrease observed in WT cells under the same condition. This opposite response reflects altered cell geometry and is supported by corresponding changes in cell length and width. We have revised the Results text to emphasize both the modest magnitude and the directional nature of these effects: “Under osmotic stress, cdc25-degron-DaMP cells exhibited a ~2% increase in SA:Vol ratio, opposite to the modest decrease observed in WT cells. This increase arose from increased cell length and reduced width (Figures 2B-D).”

      Regarding data presentation, because SA:Vol ratios vary over a narrow numerical range, setting the y-axis minimum to zero would compress the data and obscure all detectable differences. Instead, we have modifed our SA:Vol ratio graphs in Fig. 1-4 to have consistent axis scaling across panels to accurately convey relative changes while maintaining visual clarity. We are happy to provide full data tables and statistical outputs upon request.

      * I am also concerned about the use of manual measurement of width at a single point along the cell. This approach is very sensitive to the choice of width point and to non-cylindrical geometries, several of which are evident in the images presented. MATLAB will return the ??? as well as the length from a mask, but even better, one can more accurately calculate the surface area and volume by assuming rotational symmetry of the mask. Given that surface area and volume calculation need to be redone anyway, as discussed below, I encourage the authors to calculate them directly from the mask, instead of using the cylindrical assumption.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: In initial experiments to calculate surface area and volume of fission yeast cells for prior work (Miller et al., 2023, Current Biology) we found that automated width measurements by MATLAB or ImageJ were inaccurate for a subset of cells leading to noisy cell surface area and volume values. Measuring cell width by hand and assuming that each cell in a given strain had the same cell radius (average of population) for calculation of cell surface area and volume gave more consistent results and recapitulated established conclusions regarding size control mechanisms.

      In this previous work and the current study, abnormally skinny or wide regions of a cell were avoided when drawing a line to measure the cell width by hand. For each strain and condition, an average cell width was determined per independent experiment and used for surface area and volume calculations. Additionally, previous analysis demonstrated that this approach yields results consistent with a rotation method derived directly from cell masks, which does not assume a cylindrical cell shape (Facchetti et al., 2019, Current Biology; Miller et al., 2023, Current Biology).

      To test the validity of our size measurements and confirm the robustness of our results in this study we compared the surface area and volume of cells by this rotation method. We have added this additional information to our revised methods section and also added SA:Vol ratio graphs generated from the rotation size measurement to our revised Figure S1 E-J. Importantly, both approaches used to measure cell size gave consistent results and supported the same conclusions.*

      The authors also need to be more careful about their claims about size-dependent scaling. The concentration of both Cdc13 and Cdc25 scale with size (perhaps indirectly, in the case of Cdc13), but Cdr2 does not. Cdr2 activity has been proposed to scale with size, and its density at cortical nodes has been reported to scale with size, although that claim has been challenged .*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We have modified text in the Introduction and Results to address this point. Our revised text in the introduction states: “Recent work has shown that Cdk1 activation integrates size- and time-dependent inputs: the Wee1-inhibitory kinase Cdr2 cortical node density scales with cell surface area (Pan et al., 2014; Facchetti et al., 2019); Cdc25 nuclear accumulation scales with cell volume; and cyclin Cdc13 accumulates over time in the nucleus (Miller et al., 2023) (Figure 1B).” Our revised text in the results section states: “Cdr2 functions as a cortical scaffold that regulates Wee1 activity in relation to cell size, with Cdr2 nodal density reported to scale with cell surface area, enforcing a surface area threshold for mitotic entry (Pan et al., 2014; Allard et al., 2018; Facchetti et al., 2019; Sayyad and Pollard, 2022).”*

      Even taking the authors approach at face value, there are observations that do not seem to make sense, which led me to realize that the wrong formulae were used to calculate surface area and volume.

      In Figure 1E,F, the KCl-treated cells get shorter and wider; surely, that should result in a lower SA/V ratio. However, as noted above, in Figure 1D, they are shown to have a similar ratio. As a sanity check, I eye-balled the numbers off of the figure (control: 14 µm x 3.6 µm and KCl: 11 µm x 3.8 µm) and calculated their surface area and volume using the formula for a capsule (i.e., a cylinder with hemispheric ends).

      SA = the surface area of the two hemispheres + the surface are of the cylinder in between = 4*pi*(width/2)^2 + pi*width*(length-width), the length-width term calculates the side length of the capsule (length without the hemispheres) from the full length of the capsule (length including the hemispheres)

      V = the volume of the two hemispheres + the volume of the cylinder in between = 4/3*pi*(width/2)^3 + pi*(width/2)^2*(length-width).

      I got SA/V ratios of around 2, which are way off from what is presented in Figure 1D, but my calculated ratio goes down in KCl, as expected, but not as reported.

      To make sure I was not doing something wrong, I was going to repeat my calculations with the formulae in Table 1, which made me realize both are incorrect. The stated formula for the cell surface area-2*pi*RL-only represents to surface area of the cylindrical side of the cells, not its hemispherical ends. And it is not even the correct formula for the surface area of the side, because that calls for L to be the length of the side (without the hemispherical ends) not the length of the cell (which includes the hemispherical ends). L here is stated to be cell length (which is what is normally measured in the field, and which is consistent with the reported length of control cells in Figure 1E being 14 µm). The formula for the volume of a capsule in the form use in Table 1 (volume of a cylinder of length L - the volume excluded from the hemispherical ends) is pi*R^2*L - (8-(4/3*pi))*R^3.

      Given these problems, I think I spent too much time thinking about the rest of the paper, because all of the calculations, and perhaps their interpretations, need to be redone.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: The surface area and volume equations for a cylinder with hemispherical ends used in our study and listed in our table are correct and widely used in other work with fission yeast cells (Navarro and Nurse, 2012; Pan et al., 2014; Facchetti et al., 2019; BayBay et al., 2020; and Miller et al., 2023). We write our equations with variables for cell length and radius because these are biologically relevant and measured parameters for fission yeast cells. Cell length (L) refers to the total tip-to-tip length of the cell, including the hemispherical ends, and radius (R) refers to half the measured cell width. We have revised the Methods section to clarify this definition and avoid ambiguity (Please see methods section “Cell geometry measurements”)

      Additionally, SA or Vol calculations were performed using the length of each individual cell and the average cell radius of the population. We did not use mean cell length of the population for our calculations like the reviewer assumed in their “sanity check” above. Please see methods section “Cell geometry measurements”. We hope that these clarifications and text revisions improve transparency and reproducibility.

      * Minor Points:

      Strains should be identified by strain number is the text and figure legends.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: For clarity and readability, we refer to strains by genotype in the main text and figure legends, which we believe is more informative for readers than strain numbers. All strain numbers corresponding to each genotype are provided in Table S1, ensuring traceability and reproducibility without compromising clarity in data presentation.*

      In the Introduction, "Most cell control their size" should be "Most eukaryotic cell control their size".*

      • *

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: The text has been corrected as suggested.*

      Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):

      Nothing to add.*

      *Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):

      Summary This manuscript reports that fission yeast cells exhibit distinct cell size and geometry when exposed to osmotic, oxidative, or low-glucose stress. Based on quantitative measurements of cell length and width, the authors propose that different stress conditions trigger specific 'geometric adaptation' patterns, suggesting that cell size homeostasis is flexibly modulated depending on environmental cues. The study provides phenotypic evidence that multiple environmental stresses lead to distinct outcomes in the balance between cell surface area and volume, which the authors interpret as stress-specific modes of size control.

      Major comments 1) The authors define the 48-hour time point as the 'long-term response', but no justification is provided for why 48 hours represents a physiologically relevant adaptation phase. It is unclear whether the size-control mode has stabilized by that time, or whether it may continue to change afterward. At minimum, the authors should provide a rationale (e.g., growth recovery dynamics, transcriptional adaptation plateau, or pilot time-course observations) to demonstrate that 48 hours corresponds to the steady-state adaptive phase rather than an arbitrarily selected time point.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We thank the reviewer for this important point and agree that the definition of the long-term response should be clarified. We have addressed this with new experiments and revised text. We now incorporate growth curve data and doubling time analyses for all yeast strains grown under control and stress conditions (See new Figure S3). These analyses show that following an initial transient stress-induced cell cycle delay, growth rates stabilize well before 48 hours. Notably, the slowest growth rate observed was in 1M KCl, with a doubling time of ~4 hours across all yeast strains tested. Thus, by 48 hours, cells in this condition have undergone more than 12 generations of growth, while cells in all other conditions with shorter doubling times have undergone even more divisions. So by allowing cells to grow for 48 hours prior to imaging, we are capturing cells that have resumed sustained cell cycle progression following transient stress-induced cell cycle delays. Because cell size control is tightly linked to the cell cycle, we define 48 hours as a physiologically relevant time point where cells have adapted to stress conditions.

      Our revised methods now states: “Cultures were incubated at 25°C while shaking at 180 rpm for 48 h prior to imaging. This time point was chosen to ensure that cells had progressed beyond the initial transient stress response and reached a stable, condition-specific growth state, as confirmed by growth curve and doubling time analyses showing stabilization well before 48 h (Figure S3), including in the slowest growing condition (1 M KCl; doubling time ~4 h).”

      * 2*)Related to the above comment, the authors propose that different stresses lead to distinct cell size adaptations, yet the rationale for the chosen stress intensities and exposure times is insufficiently described. It remains unclear whether the osmotic, oxidative, and low-glucose conditions used here induce comparable levels of cellular stress. Dose-response and time-course analyses would greatly strengthen the conclusions. Without such analyses, it is difficult to support the interpretation that geometry modulation represents a direct adaptive response.

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: * *We selected the specific stress conditions based on previously published work showing that these doses elicit robust responses while preserving overall cell viability and the capacity for recovery. We note that osmotic, oxidative, and low glucose conditions perturb fundamentally different cellular systems (turgor pressure and cell wall mechanics, redox balance, and metabolism etc.) and therefore do not generate directly comparable levels of cellular stress in a quantitative sense. Our goal was not to equalize stress intensity across conditions, but to examine how cells change their geometry in response to distinct classes of stressors.

      We have clarified the rationale for specific stress conditions in the revised methods: “These stress intensities were selected based on prior studies demonstrating robust cellular responses while preserving cell viability and the capacity for recovery (Fantes and Nurse, 1977, Shiozaki and Russell, 1995, Degols, et al., 1996; López-Avilés et al., 2008; Sansó et al., 2008; Satioh et al., 2015, Salat-Canela et al., 2021, Bertaux et al., 2023).”

      * 3) The authors describe stress-induced size changes as an 'adaptive' response. While this is an appealing hypothesis, the presented data do not demonstrate that the change in cell size itself confers a fitness advantage. Evidence showing that blocking the size change reduces stress survival-or that the altered size improves growth recovery- would be required to support this claim. Without such data, the use of the term 'geometric adaptation' seems overstated.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We have revised the text to remove the term “adaptive” and now describe stress-induced size changes in descriptive terms. As discussed further in response to Comment 4, new growth curve and doubling time analyses show that defects in surface area or volume expansion do not uniformly impair growth or survival over the stress exposure examined here, reinforcing the decision to avoid fitness-based language.*

      4) The authors conclude that mutants exhibit no major defects in growth or viability during 48-hour stress exposure based on comparable septation index values (Fig. S2). However, septation index alone does not fully capture growth performance or cell-cycle progression and is not sufficient to support claims regarding fitness or robustness of proliferation. If the authors intend to make statements about 'growth', 'viability', or 'cell-cycle progression', additional quantitative measures (e.g., growth curves, doubling time, colony-forming units, or microcolony growth measurements) would be necessary. Alternatively, the claims should be toned down to align with the measurements currently provided.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We have addressed this concern with new experiments and revised text. In addition to septation index measurements (now analyzed using chi-square tests of proportions; Figure S2), we performed growth curve experiments and doubling time analyses for all genotypes under control and stress conditions (new Figure S3). These additional data show that growth rates are largely comparable across genotypes in control, oxidative, and low-glucose conditions, with more pronounced genotype-dependent differences emerging under osmotic stress. Defects in surface area or volume expansion did not uniformly correspond to impaired population growth, indicating that geometric remodeling is not strictly required for proliferation over the 48-hour stress exposure examined here. We have refined our conclusion to emphasize that defects in surface area or volume expansion do not uniformly impair growth or survival. See revised Results text under the heading “Defects in surface area or volume expansion do not uniformly compromise growth or survival”.*

      5) Related to the above comment, the manuscript does not adequately rule out the possibility that the decreased division size simply results from slower growth or delayed cell-cycle progression rather than a shift in the size-control mechanism. Measurements and normalizations of growth rate are required; without them, the interpretation remains speculative.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We agree that changes in growth rate or altered cell cycle timing are important to consider. We have revised our text: “Changes in growth rate or cell cycle progression under stress may influence division size by altering mitotic regulator accumulation. Future studies measuring mitotic regulator dynamics alongside growth rates will be needed to distinguish direct changes in size control mechanisms from growth- or timing-dependent effects.”

      * 6) Regarding the phenotypes of wee1-2x cells, it is interesting that they increase the SA:Vol ratio under all stress conditions and show phenotypes distinct from cdr2Δ cells. From these observations, the authors claims that Cdr2 and Wee1 function as a surface-area-sensing module that complements the volume-sensing and time-sensing pathways to maintain geometric homeostasis. To support this interpretation, the authors could consider additional experiments, such as analyzing cdr2Δ + wee1-2x cells under the same stress conditions. Such data would test whether increased Wee1 can rescue or modify the cdr2Δ phenotype, providing functional evidence for the proposed Cdr2-Wee1-Cdk1 regulatory relationship. Measurements of cell length, width, SA:Vol ratio, and, if feasible, Cdk1 activity markers in the strain would greatly strengthen the mechanistic claims.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We thank the reviewer for this insightful suggestion. While analysis of a cdr2Δ wee1-2x strain could provide additional mechanistic detail, such experiments address a distinct question beyond the scope of our current study, which focuses on how cell geometry changes under different stress conditions in cells with perturbed surface area-, volume-, or time-sensing pathways. Our conclusions regarding a surface area-sensing role for Cdr2-Wee1 signaling are based on previous studies (Pan et al., 2014; Facchetti et al., 2019; Miller et al., 2023) and the cell geometry phenotypes we observe of cdr2Δ and wee1-2x cells under stress conditions. *

      Minor comments 1) The manuscript focuses on adaptation through changes in the surface-to-volume ratio; however, only the ratio is shown. Presenting the underlying values of surface area and volume would clarify which geometric parameter primary contributes to the observed changes.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: Please see our response to Reviewer 1 major comment 1.*

      *2) Statistical analysis for Fig.S2 should be provided.

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: We have completed this. See revised Figure S2 and methods.*

      3) The paper by Kellog and Levin 2022 is missing from the reference list.*

      AUTHOR RESPONSE: Thank you for catching this. This reference has now been added. *

      **Referees cross-commenting**

      After reading the other reviewer's reports, I recognize that focal points differ, but they appear sequential rather than contradictory.

      Reviewer 2 raises concerns regarding the surface area/volume calculations, which-if incorrect-would influence many of the quantitative conclusions. I agree that confirming the validity of these calculations (and recalculating if necessary) should be the top priority before evaluating the biological interpretations.

      Reviewer 1 raises more mechanistic biological questions. These are certainly important, but in my view they depend on the robustness of the quantitative analysis highlighted by Reviewer 2.

      Therefore, I regard the reports as complementary rather than conflicting. Once the analytical issue pointed out by Reviewer 2 is resolved, the field will be in a better position to assess the significance of the mechanistic points raised by Reviewer 1 (as well as those in my own report).

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      General assessment One of the major strengths of this manuscript is its quantitative, side-by-side comparison of multiple environmental stresses under a unified experimental and analytical framework. The authors provide well-controlled morphometric measurements, allowing direct comparison of geometry changes that would otherwise be difficult to evaluate across studies. The observation that different stress types generate distinct geometric outcomes is particularly intriguing and has the potential to stimulate new conceptual thinking in the field of size control. However, the strength of the conceptual conclusion is currently limited by several aspects of the experimental design and interpretation. In particular, it remains unclear whether the observed geometry changes represent active adaptive responses rather than non-specific consequences of prolonged or string stress exposure. Demonstrating whether geometry remodeling provides a fitness advantage, clarifying whether the changes reach a steady-state rather than reflecting slow drift over time, or identifying upstream stress pathways that govern the response would substantially strengthen the conceptual advance. Even if additional mechanistic or fitness-related data cannot be added, refining the interpretation so that it remains aligned with the present evidence will enhance the clarity, and impact of the study.

      Advance Previous study - including the 2023 publication by the James B. Moseley group - established that fission yeast integrates distinct size-control pathways related to surface area, volume, and time under normal growth conditions. The present manuscript extends this line of work to stressed environments and argues that each stress condition elicits a distinct size-control pattern. To our knowledge, a systematic comparison of cell geometry across multiple stress types in the context of size-control pathways has not been reported, and this represents a potentially valuable conceptual advance. The advance is primarily phenomenological and conceptual rather than mechanistic: the work presents new correlation between stress types and geometry but does not yet elucidate the pathways governing these responses or demonstrate a functional advantage. With additional evidence - or with qualifiers ensuring that claims match the current data - the study could make an important contribution to understanding how cells integrate environmental cues into size-control strategies.

      Audience Although the primary audience consists of researchers in the fields of cell growth, cell-cycle control, and stress responses in yeast, the conceptual contribution may interest broader fields such as growth homeostasis, metabolic adaptation, and pathological cell size changes in higher eukaryotes. Beyond yeast biology, the modular view of size regulation proposed here may inspire new investigations in stem cell biology, cancer research, and biotechnology where environmental adaptation and cell size are closely linked.

      Expertise: nuclear morphology; cell morphology; cell growth; cell cycle; cytoskeleton*

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary

      This manuscript reports that fission yeast cells exhibit distinct cell size and geometry when exposed to osmotic, oxidative, or low-glucose stress. Based on quantitative measurements of cell length and width, the authors propose that different stress conditions trigger specific 'geometric adaptation' patterns, suggesting that cell size homeostasis is flexibly modulated depending on environmental cues. The study provides phenotypic evidence that multiple environmental stresses lead to distinct outcomes in the balance between cell surface area and volume, which the authors interpret as stress-specific modes of size control.

      Major comments

      1) The authors define the 48-hour time point as the 'long-term response', but no justification is provided for why 48 hours represents a physiologically relevant adaptation phase. It is unclear whether the size-control mode has stabilized by that time, or whether it may continue to change afterward. At minimum, the authors should provide a rationale (e.g., growth recovery dynamics, transcriptional adaptation plateau, or pilot time-course observations) to demonstrate that 48 hours corresponds to the steady-state adaptive phase rather than an arbitrarily selected time point.

      2)Related to the above comment, the authors propose that different stresses lead to distinct cell size adaptations, yet the rationale for the chosen stress intensities and exposure times is insufficiently described. It remains unclear whether the osmotic, oxidative, and low-glucose conditions used here induce comparable levels of cellular stress. Dose-response and time-course analyses would greatly strengthen the conclusions. Without such analyses, it is difficult to support the interpretation that geometry modulation represents a direct adaptive response.

      3) The authors describe stress-induced size changes as an 'adaptive' response. While this is an appealing hypothesis, the presented data do not demonstrate that the change in cell size itself confers a fitness advantage. Evidence showing that blocking the size change reduces stress survival-or that the altered size improves growth recovery- would be required to support this claim. Without such data, the use of the term 'geometric adaptation' seems overstated.

      4) The authors conclude that mutants exhibit no major defects in growth or viability during 48-hour stress exposure based on comparable septation index values (Fig. S2). However, septation index alone does not fully capture growth performance or cell-cycle progression and is not sufficient to support claims regarding fitness or robustness of proliferation. If the authors intend to make statements about 'growth', 'viability', or 'cell-cycle progression', additional quantitative measures (e.g., growth curves, doubling time, colony-forming units, or microcolony growth measurements) would be necessary. Alternatively, the claims should be toned down to align with the measurements currently provided.

      5) Related to the above comment, the manuscript does not adequately rule out the possibility that the decreased division size simply results from slower growth or delayed cell-cycle progression rather than a shift in the size-control mechanism. Measurements and normalizations of growth rate are required; without them, the interpretation remains speculative.

      6) Regarding the phenotypes of wee1-2x cells, it is interesting that they increase the SA:Vol ratio under all stress conditions and show phenotypes distinct from cdr2Δ cells. From these observations, the authors claims that Cdr2 and Wee1 function as a surface-area-sensing module that complements the volume-sensing and time-sensing pathways to maintain geometric homeostasis. To support this interpretation, the authors could consider additional experiments, such as analyzing cdr2Δ + wee1-2x cells under the same stress conditions. Such data would test whether increased Wee1 can rescue or modify the cdr2Δ phenotype, providing functional evidence for the proposed Cdr2-Wee1-Cdk1 regulatory relationship. Measurements of cell length, width, SA:Vol ratio, and, if feasible, Cdk1 activity markers in the strain would greatly strengthen the mechanistic claims.

      Minor comments

      1) The manuscript focuses on adaptation through changes in the surface-to-volume ratio; however, only the ratio is shown. Presenting the underlying values of surface area and volume would clarify which geometric parameter primary contributes to the observed changes.

      2) Statistical analysis for Fig.S2 should be provided.

      3) The paper by Kellog and Levin 2022 is missing from the reference list.

      Referees cross-commenting

      After reading the other reviewer's reports, I recognize that focal points differ, but they appear sequential rather than contradictory.

      Reviewer 2 raises concerns regarding the surface area/volume calculations, which-if incorrect-would influence many of the quantitative conclusions. I agree that confirming the validity of these calculations (and recalculating if necessary) should be the top priority before evaluating the biological interpretations.

      Reviewer 1 raises more mechanistic biological questions. These are certainly important, but in my view they depend on the robustness of the quantitative analysis highlighted by Reviewer 2.

      Therefore, I regard the reports as complementary rather than conflicting. Once the analytical issue pointed out by Reviewer 2 is resolved, the field will be in a better position to assess the significance of the mechanistic points raised by Reviewer 1 (as well as those in my own report).

      Significance

      General assessment

      One of the major strengths of this manuscript is its quantitative, side-by-side comparison of multiple environmental stresses under a unified experimental and analytical framework. The authors provide well-controlled morphometric measurements, allowing direct comparison of geometry changes that would otherwise be difficult to evaluate across studies. The observation that different stress types generate distinct geometric outcomes is particularly intriguing and has the potential to stimulate new conceptual thinking in the field of size control. However, the strength of the conceptual conclusion is currently limited by several aspects of the experimental design and interpretation. In particular, it remains unclear whether the observed geometry changes represent active adaptive responses rather than non-specific consequences of prolonged or string stress exposure. Demonstrating whether geometry remodeling provides a fitness advantage, clarifying whether the changes reach a steady-state rather than reflecting slow drift over time, or identifying upstream stress pathways that govern the response would substantially strengthen the conceptual advance. Even if additional mechanistic or fitness-related data cannot be added, refining the interpretation so that it remains aligned with the present evidence will enhance the clarity, and impact of the study.

      Advance

      Previous study - including the 2023 publication by the James B. Moseley group - established that fission yeast integrates distinct size-control pathways related to surface area, volume, and time under normal growth conditions. The present manuscript extends this line of work to stressed environments and argues that each stress condition elicits a distinct size-control pattern. To our knowledge, a systematic comparison of cell geometry across multiple stress types in the context of size-control pathways has not been reported, and this represents a potentially valuable conceptual advance. The advance is primarily phenomenological and conceptual rather than mechanistic: the work presents new correlation between stress types and geometry but does not yet elucidate the pathways governing these responses or demonstrate a functional advantage. With additional evidence - or with qualifiers ensuring that claims match the current data - the study could make an important contribution to understanding how cells integrate environmental cues into size-control strategies.

      Audience

      Although the primary audience consists of researchers in the fields of cell growth, cell-cycle control, and stress responses in yeast, the conceptual contribution may interest broader fields such as growth homeostasis, metabolic adaptation, and pathological cell size changes in higher eukaryotes. Beyond yeast biology, the modular view of size regulation proposed here may inspire new investigations in stem cell biology, cancer research, and biotechnology where environmental adaptation and cell size are closely linked.

      Expertise: nuclear morphology; cell morphology; cell growth; cell cycle; cytoskeleton.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Cabral et al. present a analysis of the effects of environmental stress of cellular geometry in the fission yeast S. pombe. The stresses they study-oxidative, osmotic and nutritional-have previously been shown to affect cell size in fission yeast. Here, the authors do a more sophisticated analysis, measuring surface area as well as volume (for which length had previously been used as a proxy, assuming fission yeast cells are cylinders of constant width). In addition, they investigate the effect of mutations in three cell-cycle control proteins that have been proposed to regulate cell geometry: Cdc13, Cdc25 and Cdr2. It is an interesting study that could provide insight into cell-size control and environmental-stress response in fission yeast. However, I have serious concerns about the analysis of the data. In fact, as I was writing up my concerns, I noticed that the formulae in Table 1 for surface area and volume are incorrect, so the whole paper appears to require reanalysis.

      One general problem is that the authors seem to confuse statistical significance with biological significance. They claim that both oxidative and osmotic stress cause a reduction in SA/V ratio. For oxidative stress, the difference is evident, but the control and KCl-treated cells look to have indistinguishable distributions. Perhaps there is a significant statistical difference between the, but I am skeptical. (I would ask for the data table to try out the stats myself, but given the revelation below that the number will all need to be recalculated, that point is moot). In any case, the difference is certainly not biologically significant.

      Likewise, in Figure 2B, they interpret tiny changes in the SA/V. By my estimation, the difference between control and osmotic stress is only 2% (1.195/1.17), less that the wild-type case, which appears to be twice that (which is still pretty modest). The small amplitude of these changes is obscured by the fact that the graphs do not have a baseline at zero, which, as a matter of good data-presentation practice, they should.

      I am also concerned about the use of manual measurement of width at a single point along the cell. This approach is very sensitive to the choice of width point and to non-cylindrical geometries, several of which are evident in the images presented. MATLAB will return the ??? as well as the length from a mask, but even better, one can more accurately calculate the surface area and volume by assuming rotational symmetry of the mask. Given that surface area and volume calculation need to be redone anyway, as discussed below, I encourage the authors to calculate them directly from the mask, instead of using the cylindrical assumption.

      The authors also need to be more careful about their claims about size-dependent scaling. The concentration of both Cdc13 and Cdc25 scale with size (perhaps indirectly, in the case of Cdc13), but Cdr2 does not. Cdr2 activity has been proposed to scale with size, and its density at cortical nodes has been reported to scale with size, although that claim has been challenged <https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/36093997>.

      Even taking the authors approach at face value, there are observations that do not seem to make sense, which led me to realize that the wrong formulae were used to calculate surface area and volume.

      In Figure 1E,F, the KCl-treated cells get shorter and wider; surely, that should result in a lower SA/V ratio. However, as noted above, in Figure 1D, they are shown to have a similar ratio. As a sanity check, I eye-balled the numbers off of the figure (control: 14 µm x 3.6 µm and KCl: 11 µm x 3.8 µm) and calculated their surface area and volume using the formula for a capsule (i.e., a cylinder with hemispheric ends).

      SA = the surface area of the two hemispheres + the surface are of the cylinder in between = 4pi(width/2)^2 + piwidth(length-width), the length-width term calculates the side length of the capsule (length without the hemispheres) from the full length of the capsule (length including the hemispheres)

      V = the volume of the two hemispheres + the volume of the cylinder in between = 4/3pi(width/2)^3 + pi(width/2)^2(length-width).

      I got SA/V ratios of around 2, which are way off from what is presented in Figure 1D, but my calculated ratio goes down in KCl, as expected, but not as reported.

      To make sure I was not doing something wrong, I was going to repeat my calculations with the formulae in Table 1, which made me realize both are incorrect. The stated formula for the cell surface area-2piRL-only represents to surface area of the cylindrical side of the cells, not its hemispherical ends. And it is not even the correct formula for the surface area of the side, because that calls for L to be the length of the side (without the hemispherical ends) not the length of the cell (which includes the hemispherical ends). L here is stated to be cell length (which is what is normally measured in the field, and which is consistent with the reported length of control cells in Figure 1E being 14 µm). The formula for the volume of a capsule in the form use in Table 1 (volume of a cylinder of length L - the volume excluded from the hemispherical ends) is piR^2L - (8-(4/3pi))R^3.

      Given these problems, I think I spent too much time thinking about the rest of the paper, because all of the calculations, and perhaps their interpretations, need to be redone.

      Minor Points:

      Strains should be identified by strain number is the text and figure legends.

      In the Introduction, "Most cell control their size" should be "Most eukaryotic cell control their size".

      Significance

      Nothing to add.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Using genetics and microscopy approaches, Cabral et al. investigate how fission yeast regulates its length and width in response to osmotic, oxidative, or low glucose stress. Miller et al. have recently found that the cell cycle regulators Cdc25, Cdc13 and Cdr2 integrate information about cell volume, time and cell surface area into the cellular decision when to divide. Cabral now build on this work and test how disruption of these regulators affects cell size adaptation. They find that each stress condition shows a distinct dependence on the individual regulators, suggesting that the complex size control network enables optimized size adaptation for each condition. Overall, the manuscript is clear and the detailed methods ensure that the experiments can be replicated.

      Major comments:

      1. It would be much easier to follow the authors' conclusions, if in addition to surface area to volume ratio, length and width, they would also plot cell volume at division in Figs. 1-4.
      2. To me, it seems that maybe even more than upon osmotic stress, the cdc13-2x strain differs qualitatively from WT in low glucose conditions, where the increased SA-V ratio is almost completely abolished.
      3. It is not entirely clear to me why two copies of Cdc13 would qualitatively affect the responses. Shouldn't the extra copy behave similarly to the endogenous one and therefore only lead to quantitative changes? Maybe the authors can discuss this more clearly or even test a strain in which Cdc13 function is qualitatively disrupted.
      4. I don't see why the authors come to the conclusion that under osmotic stress cells would maximize cell volume. It leads to a decreased cell length, doesn't it?

      Significance

      Fission yeast has long been used as a model for eukaryotic cell size regulation. So far, this research has been mostly focused on steady state size regulation. While it has long been clear that cells across organisms adapt their size in response to environmental changes, little is known about how these external inputs are processed through the size control network. Dissecting how disruption of the various branches of the size control network affects size adaptation is an important step towards a mechanistic understanding of this process. Future studies will have to build on these observations and investigate how each stress mechanistically affects the respective regulator(s). While the details of the molecular players and their contribution to size adaptation are likely specific to fission yeast, the concept of stress type-specific size adaptation that is mediated through different regulators is likely conserved and thus of broader relevance.

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    1. The consistency is also impressive given the fact that when the causal arrow is reversed and one considers research that investigates the influence of repressive behavior on dissent (exploring one of the core aspects of collective action theory regarding the importance of costs), the results are highly inconsistent.

      This is the part that confuses researchers. We know that dissent causes repression, but we don't know if repression actually stops dissent. Sometimes people get scared and go home (negative impact), but other times it just makes them angrier and leads to more protests (positive impact). It’s a puzzle because the government keeps using repression even though they aren't totally sure it works.

    2. "When challenges to the status quo take place, authorities generally employ some form of repressive action to counter or eliminate the behavioral threat; in short, there appears to be a “Law of Coercive""

      If people start protesting or challenging the way things are (the status quo), the government almost always hits back with force to make them stop. Political scientists call it a "Law" because it happens so consistently across almost every country they’ve studied

    1. As he passed by the Sea of Galilee, he saw Simon and his brother Andrew casting their nets into the sea; they were fishermen.

      "He saw Simon and his brother Andrew (Mark 1:16)" Any ideas about what Jesus "saw" in these two brothers?

    1. for a whale of good size and quality was driven ashore there, and they secured it, and flensed it, and had then no lack of provisions.

      Whales often feel like, if we had hunted them sustainably, they might just have been the single most valuable resource on earth.

    2. There was no lack of salmon there either in the river or in the lake, and larger salmon than they had ever seen before.

      Don't underestimate the amount of natural resources North America used to have. It really would have been something to behold.

    3. Great ice mountains lay inland back from the sea, and it was as a [tableland of] flat rock all the way from the sea to the ice mountains; and the country seemed to them to be entirely devoid of good qualities

      I've been to Greenland myself, and that is about what you get there. It's a lot of ice and long rocky coastlines. Glad to see that hasn't changed.

    1. Do you think there is information that could be discovered through data mining that social media companies shouldn’t seek out (e.g., social media companies could use it for bad purposes, or they might get hacked and others could find it)? Do you think there is information that could be discovered through data mining that social media companies should seek out (e.g., they can’t make their platform treat people fairly without knowing this)?

      I think, especially with kids/teens on social media, data mining through specific chats or dms could be catastrophic for those people, because of the uprise in joking about serious issues that could get you in a lot of trouble if say someone read your dms on instagram. So I think dms should stay private, and I think personalization based data mining is the way to go.

    1. And from this diffidence of one another, there is no way for any man to secure himself so reasonable as anticipation; that is, by force, or wiles, to master the persons of all men he can so long till he see no other power great enough to endanger him: and this is no more than his own conservation requireth, and is generally allowed. Also, because there be some that, taking pleasure in contemplating their own power in the acts of conquest, which they pursue farther than their security requires, if others, that otherwise would be glad to be at ease within modest bounds, should not by invasion increase their power, they would not be able, long time, by standing only on their defence, to subsist. And by consequence, such augmentation of dominion over men being necessary to a man’s conservation, it ought to be allowed him.

      Thomas Hobbs argues that man should be able to defend himself for his conservation despite there being an urgent need.

    1. Preëminence in all and each is yours--

      What is that e with the dots on top of it? I've only seen this in my native language on the vowel "u" (Spanish).

    1. the World Health Organization (WHO) reported an official global death toll of over 6 million, while the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention reported US deaths exceeding 1 million

      I like how this text included the specific death toll because it really shows the full impact that Covid-19 had on the population, economy, and even families. I also found it interesting that they named these numbers but pointed out the problem with the count of direct Covid deaths (statistics) and the difference between that to excess mortality.

    2. Social epidemiology is the study of the causes and distribution of diseases and impairments within a population.

      This definition focuses on more than just biological causes but the social patterns of the diseases and impairments. This means that epidemiologist focus more one who is getting sick, where are they getting sick at, and what are the conditions that this person is going through. Based on the video we watched in class, "Rohrman on Social Epidemiology" they focus on the upstream of diseases rather than trying to rapidly heal one person at a time, they look at the situation as a social situation.

    1. lack people cost an average of US$1,800 less per year than the care given to white people with the same number of chronic health problems

      Please someone correct me if I'm wrong, but it seems that because Black people are not receiving adequate care when they are sick, it causes them to be sicker, and as a result, it affects studies that determine how likely someone is to be sick with a certain disease or infection This leads to even more racist misconceptions, for example that Black people contract more illnesses than white people. The structural racism in the U.S. is not only present in every corner of our society, it is also cyclical and almost self sustaining. This is why naming it and intentionally taking action wherever possible is so important.

    1. 8.3. Mining Social Media Data# Data mining is the process of taking a set of data and trying to learn new things from it.

      This section shows that data mining can reveal surprising patterns, like predicting someone’s interests or political views from social media behavior. However, the part about spurious correlations is especially important. Just because two things move together does not mean one causes the other. The candle reviews and COVID example was funny but also a good reminder that data can be misleading. As a data science student, this makes me realize we must be careful when interpreting results and avoid jumping to conclusions too quickly.

    2. Additionally, groups keep trying to re-invent old debunked pseudo-scientific (and racist) methods of judging people based on facial features (size of nose, chin, forehead, etc.), but now using artificial intelligence.

      I have noticed a lot of these on social media they like to ask you about these kinds of things, and we have to be careful because AI nowadays gives old ideas a new sense of accuracy, even though the science behind them is still wrong. It also shows how technology can reinforce bias instead of eliminating it if it’s not used

    3. One particularly striking example of an attempt to infer information from seemingly unconnected data was someone noticing that the number of people sick with COVID-19 correlated with how many people were leaving bad reviews of Yankee Candles saying “they don’t have any scent” (note: COVID-19 can cause a loss of the ability to smell):

      Fascinating case study, I have heard of this previously!

    4. By looking at enough data in enough different ways, you can find evidence for pretty much any conclusion you want.

      Data that launches a conclusion hardly means it's the cause (correlation does not mean causation), and people often forget that. Treating every correlated data set we find that boosts our personal, political, or other beliefs has been the pinnacle of interaction online because more often than not, people force their beliefs in what they found to try and sway the opposition. They don't want to debate or understand the other side; they only want to win the argument.

    1. 8.1. Sources of Social Media Data# Social media platforms collect various types of data on their users. Some data is directly provided to the platform by the users. Platforms may ask users for information like: email address name profile picture interests friends Platforms also collect information on how users interact with the site. They might collect information like (they don’t necessarily collect all this, but they might): when users are logged on and logged off who users interact with What users click on what posts users pause over where users are located what users send in direct messages to each other Online advertisers can see what pages their ads are being requested on, and track users across those sites. So, if an advertiser sees their ad is being displayed on an Amazon page for shoes, then the advertiser can start showing shoe ads to that same user when they go to another website. Additionally, social media might collect information about non-users, such as when a user posts a picture of themselves with a friend who doesn’t have an account, or a user shares their phone contact list with a social media site, some of whom don’t have accounts (Facebook does this). Social media platforms then use “data mining” to search through all this data to try to learn more about their users, find patterns of behavior, and in the end, make more money.

      This section made me realize how much data social media platforms collect, even beyond what we intentionally share. I used to think they only stored basic info like my name or email, but they also track behaviors like what I click on, how long I look at posts, and even where I go online. It feels a little uncomfortable because many of these things happen without us noticing. It shows that our online actions can reveal a lot about us, not just what we directly say. This makes me think we should be more careful about privacy and what platforms are allowed to collect.

    2. Media Data# Social media platforms collect various types of data on their users. Some data is directly provided to the platform by the users. Platforms may ask users for information like: email address name profile picture interests friends Platforms also collect information on how users interact with the site. They might collect information like (they don’t necessarily collect all this, but they might): when users are logged on and logged off who users interact with What users click on what posts users pause over where users are located what users send in direct messages to each other Online advertisers can see what pages their ads are being requested on, and track users across those sites. So, if an advertiser sees their ad is being displayed on an Amazon page for shoes, then the advertiser can start showing shoe ads to that same user when they go to another website. Additionally, social media might collect information about non-users, such as when a user posts a picture of themselves with a friend who doesn’t have an account, or a user shares their phone contact list with a social media site, some of whom don’t have accounts (Facebook does this). Social media platforms then use “data mining” to search through all this data to try to learn more about their users, find patterns of behavior, and in the end, make more money.

      This section clearly shows how much data social media platforms collect, often beyond what users knowingly provide. I was especially surprised by the idea that platforms can collect data about non-users through photos or contact lists. It makes it clear that participation in social media data systems isn’t always a choice, which raises serious concerns about privacy and consent.

    3. Some data is directly provided to the platform by the users. Platforms may ask users for information like: email address name profile picture interests friends

      This is interesting because people often share this data, which gives platforms detailed insight into others' identities and behaviors. That information can be used to personalize experiences, but also raises privacy and data-use concerns.

    4. Some data is directly provided to the platform by the users. Platforms may ask users for information like: email address name profile picture interests friends

      This is often what social media platforms ask for when you create an account.

    5. Even though I always knew there was data being gathered constantly, I never realized the extent to which value is extracted from information that I would have considered useless before this chapter.

    6. One point that stood out to me is how data mining on social media often happens without users’ explicit consent, even when platforms claim to be transparent. This creates a concerning ethical gap because users may not realize how their casual interactions, like liking a post or following an account, are being aggregated and sold to third parties. It makes me wonder what more could be done to make these practices visible to the average user, so they can make more informed choices about their data.

    1. hese women had to be careful about being considered overly active due tothe risk to their reputations and several, including Mercy Otis Warren and Hannah Griffitts, whowrote political verses and plays, published their works anonymously.

      While searching for other sources this has also been something I've read. It affirms the idea of women being intellectual and politically active during the time period, even if it looked different than how men in this sphere would behave.

    2. Linda Kerber, "History", Women, 21

      Another scholarly source. Has the same author as the previous source I highlighted, is in quotations and also italicized, letting me know it is an essay within a book.

    3. he traditional helpmate role inthe eighteenth-century included a long-standing gender expectation that women could act as a"surrogate" husband, allowing women to stretch the division between masculine and femininewithout censure.

      Another interesting part, the idea of a women acting as "'surrogate' husband" aligns well with Eliza's role within Hamilton, and would give context for the work she went on to do after her husbands death. I'm curious about how this societal expectation of women extends towards widows: Was it common that women still operated as the leader of their household once the husband had passed?

    4. Linda Kerber, "'History Can Do It No Justice': Women and the Reinterpretation of the American Revolution," InWomen in the Age ofthe American Revolution, edited by Ronald Hoffman and Peter J. Albert (Charlottesville, VA:University Press of Virginia, 1989):22.

      Scholarly secondary source, published through a university.

    5. ome of the more common challenges faced by Revolutionary era women werecaused by the absence of their husbands and male relatives and women responded differently tothe recruitment of their loved ones. Some resented their husbands for leaving them unprotectedto care for families, fam1s, and businesses while others encouraged their men to enlist andappealed to other women to let their men join as well

      This directly speaks to the experience of Eliza within Hamilton, as it is a continuous point of contention that Hamilton leaves Eliza alone to run the home, even while his first son was on the way. This serves as good context for the conflict between the couple throughout the musical.

    1. That is, nothing like what I expected Japan to be. I wanted to go to Mount Fuji because I imagined it would be a trip to the un-Japan, a country I wasn’t sure even existed anymore except in nostalgic dreams.

      I feel like this paragraph (and the one before that elaborates on the reasons Mount Fuji isn't climbed by people) is a good set-up to the actual climb itself. The author is trying to establish a reason/point in their climb so that their writing/this piece itself has purpose and a deeper draw than just a simple summary of her trip and climb up Mount Fuji.

    2. . I went to see Fujizuko on a blazing hot July Sunday when the sky was the color of cement and the air was so thick it felt woolly.

      Great use of sensory imagery to set the scene/start the anecdote. Also, using cement to compliment the use of woolly when describing the air sort of compounds the effect of heavy air. It also compliments the later mention of smog/pollution and contrast any typical/idealized imagery of Tokyo that tourists may have.

    1. What was accurate, inaccurate, or surprising about your ad profile? How comfortable are you with Google knowing (whether correctly or not) those things about you?

      I know for a fact google knows all the info about me, gender age shopping preferences ect., but since I am under 18 it claims to not store that information. That is something that I find hard to believe, given that I do experience targeting ads and marketing on my google account. I am not really comfortable nor uncomfortable about them storing information about me, anyway, because most sites do it anyway.

    2. What was accurate, inaccurate, or surprising about your ad profile? How comfortable are you with Google knowing (whether correctly or not) those things about you?

      Google knows a lot about me apparently, it knows my sge, income, occupation, and more. I believe that when I see the ads I receive, google can pick out what kind of person I am based on my interactions and interests. I wouldn't say its creepy because I understand that my data is apart of the business transaction for using Google. Data is money nowadays.

    1. 8.2. Data From the Reddit API# When we’ve been accessing Reddit through Python and the “PRAW” code library. The praw code library works by sending requests across the internet to Reddit, using what is called an “application programming interface” or API for short. APIs have a set of rules for what requests you can make, what happens when you make the request, and what information you can get back. If you are interested in learning more about what you can do with praw and what information you can get back, you can look at the official documentation for those. But be warned they are not organized in a friendly way for newcomers and take some getting used to to figure out what these documentation pages are talking about. So, if you are interested, you can look at the praw library documentation to find out what the library can do (again, not organized in a beginner-friendly way). You can learn a little more by clicking on the praw models and finding a list of the types of data for each of the models, and a list of functions (i.e., actions) you can do with them. You can also look up information on the data that you can get from the Reddit API by looking at the Reddit API Documentation. The Reddit API lets you access just some of the data that Reddit tracks, but Reddit and other social media platforms track much more than they let you have access to.

      This section shows how powerful—and dangerous—data mining can be when patterns are taken out of context. The examples make it clear that just because data lines up does not mean it reveals a true cause, especially with spurious correlations. It highlights how easily data can be used to support misleading or biased conclusions, which is especially concerning when these inferences affect real people’s identities and social outcomes.

    1. What kind of relationship do you have or want to have with your receiver?

      I want a honest and professional relationship with my reciever. The use of professional tone and being apologetic would be useful here.

    2. What outcome do you want to achieve?

      I want to inform my boss that due to illness I will not be able to attend work in the morning. I also want to point out in this email that I have done some leg work but cannot make for certain that everythign will be ready and set up for the meeting.

    1. Here, the philosopher Jean-Paul Sartre offers a useful perspective. He argued that we are free precisely because there is a gap between the in-itself (our bodies, histories, and circumstances) and the for-itself (our aspirations, values, and self-conceptions). We are never fully identical to who we imagine ourselves to be, and that is a feature, not a bug.

      Hmmm, or this is what God designed us to be. To yearn for something more.

    1. People in the antiwork subreddit found the website where Kellogg’s posted their job listing to replace the workers. So those Redditors suggested they spam the site with fake applications, poisoning the job application data, so Kellogg’s wouldn’t be able to figure out which applications were legitimate or not (we could consider this a form of trolling). Then Kellogg’s wouldn’t be able to replace the striking workers, and they would have to agree to better working conditions.

      I think that if data can be easily compromised, it is almost never pure. I think one people become too aware that a certain kind of data matters, they might change their behavior to affect the outcome. I feel like once data collection is more covert, and unnoticeable, (ex. Google) people don't really bother to influence it.

    2. So those Redditors suggested they spam the site with fake applications, poisoning the job application data, so Kellogg’s wouldn’t be able to figure out which applications were legitimate or not

      This emphasizes that trolling and data poisoning aren't necessarily a bad thing; we see the word "poison" and instantly think of negative connotations like illness, fatigue, and death. However, it can often be used in a positive light, as in this example, where they used it to fight back against a massive corporation that chose greed over humanity. The same can be said of the ICE applications recently: people began applying to ICE just to deny the position, stalling DHS and wasting the time they would have used to hire, but then undertrain, overpay, and undermine immigration security.

    3. The first thing that I thought of was how I can do this. I think this is a tool we could use to protect ourselves from exploitation, or at least make it harder to extract useful information.

    1. Many writers rely too heavily on summary because it is what they can most easily write

      I tend to have the same issue whenever I start to rush on essays I like to summarize more than actual analysis.

    1. Just as the surgeons never compared radical mastectomy with other procedures, when you rely on personal experience to decide what is true, you usually don’t have a systematic comparison group because you’re observing only one “patient”: yourself. Perhaps you try tapping on your eyebrows to calm yourself in an anxious moment—and it seems to work! But how would you have felt if you’d tried something different? That salt lamp you’ve been using seems to reduce your stress, but what would have happened without it? Maybe you would have felt fine anyway. You might think visiting a rage room makes you calm down when you’re angry, but would you have felt even better if you had gone to the gym? What if you had done nothing and just let a little time pass

      When finding the best solution to a problem, it is so important to not just settle with the first option. You can try something and believe it helps you, but it is also important that you try other things too, before deciding that’s the only way. I think this can also relate to deciding where you want to go to school. Comparing other peoples experiencing and ratings of different schools can help you find the right one for you, rather than just liking the rating on one and sticking with that one.

    2. For instance, suppose you’re considering buying a new car. You want the most reliable one, so after consulting Consumer Reports, you decide on a Honda Fit, a top-rated car based on objective road testing and a survey of 1,000 Fit owners. But then you hear about your cousin’s Honda Fit, which is always in the shop. Why not rely on your own experience—or that of someone you know and trust—as a source of information?

      I believe it is most important to take all means of advice into account. In this example, this individual has already done some research of their own, when they hear about someone else’s experience with said car. It is important to weigh these options and decide if its better to rely on the ratings or someone close to you.

    1. .

      Halfway through here are my thoughts so far. Omakakiins is a great character and they are developing her well. The other characters all feel like background in comparison to her so I don't really care for them as much. I think this is extremely advanced for elementary and middle grades Im not sure if they could handle this text properly. So far I am really enjoying the story and learning more about the native culture the slang, traditions, and ways of life are all so fascinating.

    2. When a mother put charcoal on her child’s face, it was a sign that the child was ready to starve for a vision, for power. A child with a blackened face didn’t eat for days, and sometimes lived out in the woods alone until the spirits took pity on him or her and helped out with a special vision, a special visit, some information.

      This is wild but also great setup for elite storytelling which the native Americans seem to have

    3. “I fed them some berries. I wanted to bring them home, to adopt them, have them live with me at my house as my little brothers. But now that you’re here, Grandmother, I will leave quietly. These scissors in my hands are not for killing, just for sewing. They are nothing compared to your teeth and claws.”

      Pleading for life with the bear

    4. She had never had any children, and each of her three husbands had slunk off in turn during the night, never to be seen again.

      Im wondering what is so polarizing about Old Tallow

    5. The air was fresh, delicious, smelling of new leaves in the woods, just-popped-out mushrooms, the pelts of young deer.

      I really enjoy the way the author describes the surrounding here

    1. Gary Nash, “Introduction,” in The Negro in the AmericanRevolution, ed. Benjamin Quarles (Chapel Hill: University ofNorth Carolina, 2012), xx.

      2 scholarly secondary source

    2. Black people were restricted from participating based on racial ideology. Therefore, it is believed that the conceptof a Black Founder should not be conceptualized in the same way as a White Founder.

      Black people are often left out of important times history. And even more often left in the shadow of a white man who takes the credit. As history has shown time and time again black history is only taught when it comes from black suffering.

    3. They are defined by their efforts to (1) build social institutions for Black people in the UnitedStates; (2) emphasize universal emancipation; and (3) incite dialogue over the meaning of Black identity.2 Their purposewas to help establish a separate and safe country for Black people, both free and enslaved, within the racist structures ofthe United States.

      The goal of Black Founder isn't talked about the same way it's talked about compared to White Founders. It's important to know that Black Founders' vision for America didn't align with those of White Founders. They wanted a segregated country where Black people could be free and safe from the alienation of white supremacists.

    4. Black American revolutionary soldiers did fight in the war, not out of love for a country that oppressed them, but out oflove for life, survival, and the preservation of their race.

      This can be compared to the African American soldiers that fought for the Confederates (or maybe even fought at all) during the Civil War.

    5. In these three cases, the Black soldierswere essential for the war efforts; the need to win the warbecame stronger than racial/racist ideology.4

      It has become normal for Black soldiers to not be recognized for their efforts in America's independence. When they were the ones were out on the field fighting for the notion of a nation that didn't value them as comrades.

    1. 1.  Under the previous governance model, the Ministry had a consultative council on clean energy which, at its height, contributed to reviewing renewable energy goals and proposed specific incentives policies for renewable energy, serving to legitimize policy making through NGO and academic participation. These types of stakeholders had formal positions in the council, and could see their specific proposition being included in policy documents stating lists of actions intended during the administration, called sectoral or special programs. For participants having to provide proof of impact to donors, these documents could become critical evidence of influence.  (Back)

      Industrial policy and government-led planning is an important change from previous governments. Not only regulating but setting goals. There are budget constraints that could be detrimental for a rapid implementation of a clean energy transition.

    1. Weak thesis statement: Advertising companies use sex to sell their products. A thesis is weak when the statement is too broad.

      Thesis statements should be more specific and not too broad

    2. writers need a thesis statement to provide a specific focus for their essay and to organize what they will discuss in the body of their writing.

      Thesis statement is a very important part of writing

    1. Avator

      OED: 1.c. Something which is the manifestation of a divine power or a prevailing spirit, quality, characteristic, etc.; (more generally) a manifestation, a phase. Also: the period of such a manifestation.

      Perhaps a reference to Vishnu's tenth avatar.

    1. rather than addressing these risks, he pressured the procurement division to deliver unrealistic savings targets

      This shows how management is pressured to meet targets and can encourage certain behavior

    2. Kraft failed to design and maintain effective internal accounting controls for its procurement division.

      This shows the importance of controls. Kraft’s failure allowed improper accounting practices to continue for years.

    3. The accounting improprieties resulted in Kraft reporting inflated adjusted

      This shows and explains what we've learned about earnings management and ethical financial reporting. Companies love to manipulate for their benefits

    1. The alleged ‘‘purity’’ of the archival fondsas an integral organic whole was increasingly challenged in working reality,however much the evidential rhetoric lingered from an earlier period.

      (I remember we only need to do one post, I'm doing an additional one because I had thoughts I wanted to express) It seems to me that the early focuses on truth, impartiality, purity, etc. especially as they relate to the history of a nation are indicative of a sort of imperialist, or just broadly nationalist approach to record keeping. The concept of a pure truth that is muddied by human inadequacies seems tied to other scientific movements of the time like eugenics. It feels like a weird comparison to make, but you see the common thread of logic drawn from evolutionary theory and various industrial philosophies: Humans are flawed, thus we must erase the fallible parts of humanity so that there is only the most rational and advantageous parts left. It's interesting to see how much archival theory was dominated by a similar approach until the material impracticality forced a change in perspective.

    1. (“We always talk about how Jim Davidson was the idea of who should be funny”) meant they “had no idea we could access that space”, says Pabani.View image in fullscreenLet’s talk about sex … Poppy Jay and Rubina Pubani’s Brown Girls Do It Too.In short, were it not for podcasts, there is no way the pair would have found themselves professionally engaged in the business of making people laugh.

      before podcasting became popular, people had a certain stereotype on comedians regarding how they looked and acted. Podcasting brought to light that anyone with the materials could join in comedic conversation.

    1. trust is understood as the relationship between a collectiveand an institution

      trust defined as the relationship between a collective and an institution - difficulties in assigning an unanimous defintition from political and philosophical scholars - seen as an abstract interaction between faith, legal assurances and social expectations to form a foundation for societal cooperation

    2. psychological impact of deepfake exposure and the perceived effectiveness of transparency andaccountability based regulatory frameworks in California

      investigating psychological impacts of deepfake exposure and legislative intervention- perceived effectiveness of california regulations on transparency and accountability

    3. research underscores the urgency ofproactive regulation, civic education, and institutional transparenc

      paper demonstrates the urgent need for proactive regulations: - for institutional transparency and to protect democratic integrity: - because even when participants were able to detect deepfakes, they showed slightly decreased trust in public figures and US governmental institutions

      • highlights that even when ai deception failed, participants expressed ethical concerns of this technology and the way it may be used to fabricate political truths
    4. deepfakes disrupt the conditions necessary formaintaining collective belief in government transparency, accountability, and authenticity

      deepfakes disrupt the collective belief in government transparency, accountability and authenticity

    1. One of the main goals of social media sites is to increase the time users are spending on their social media sites. The more time users spend, the more money the site can get from ads, and also the more power and influence those social media sites have over those users. So social media sites use the data they collect to try and figure out what keeps people using their site, and what can they do to convince those users they need to open it again later.

      One thing that I hate about social media is countless advertisement, almost everything ads' content is completely different than the real content. What even worse is when those app is designed to hard to close the app, for instance a really small button to close the ad or not allowed to close at all. Nowadays a new type of ads is killing my patients for ads, if you move your phone slightly, a minor tilt, etc, it will automatically redirect to the web page of the ads, that really tiggers me off

    1. Earlier this year, Mr. Ramaphosa approved a law, which has not yet come into effect, to allow the government to expropriate private property for public purposes. In almost all cases, such expropriations would require compensation to the landowner. It does, however, allow for rare cases in which the government could expropriate land without compensation if the land is not being used.

      UNDERLYING point of contention is issue of LAND OWNERSHIP -> Perhaps now in the news because Afrikaners are concerned about requisitions

      Ramaphosa admin passed a law that would allow govt yo exporpriate private property for "public purposes" , most often with compensation -> similar to other expropriation laws arounf the world (Canada?) -> So far no land, contrary to Trump's claims, has been expropriated w/o compensation SINCE 1994.

      And in fact this is kind of the key issue here -> notes that Black South Africans were disspossessed of farmland and continue to own only around 30% of all agricultural land. Whites own the remaining 70%

      Basically going to explain article and then explain that this actually matter of controlling history. Farm murders have been around for a long time. V, C describe how they are used by Afrikaners to avoid historical culpability for crimes of Apartheid -> to avoid trials for direct violence, in some cases, but also to avoid broader questions about continued benefitting from the racial divide

      Drop fact that 70% of wealth is still owned by white South Africans.

      Likewise, by asserting this is a genocide, are also thereby asserting their own definition as an ethnic group -> shores up unstable identity.

    1. Some data is directly provided to the platform by the users. Platforms may ask users for information like: email address name profile picture interests friends Platforms also collect information on how users interact with the site. They might collect information like (they don’t necessarily collect all this, but they might): when users are logged on and logged off who users interact with What users click on what posts users pause over where users are located what users send in direct messages to each other Online advertisers can see what pages their ads are being requested on, and track users [h1] across those sites. So, if an advertiser sees their ad is being displayed on an Amazon page for shoes, then the advertiser can start showing shoe ads to that same user when they go to another website. Additionally, social media might collect information about non-users, such as when a user posts a picture of themselves with a friend who doesn’t have an account, or a user shares their phone contact list with a social media site, some of whom don’t have accounts (Facebook does this [h2]). Social media platforms then use “data mining” to search through all this data to try to learn more about their users, find patterns of behavior, and in the end, make more money.

      I know that data mining is inevitable, however I'm still concerning about the safety of my personal information. As long as we go online surfing we will definitely leave online footprint, that would be seen by social media company, network carrier, etc. Something real happened to me, when I registered an account of an application, my cellphone number got leaked and been sold to fraud company that kept phone calls me and text me that really causing some troubles to my daily life

    1. Battles emerged over the westward expansion of slavery and over the role of the federal government in protecting the interests of enslavers.

      Whats the role of the federal government?

    1. Act toward and write to others as you would want them to do for you if the roles were reversed

      I'm a firm believer in this because we never know what one another is going through. We can't expect good outcomes if we don't show up as the example.

    2. Compassion impels us to work tirelessly to alleviate the suffering of our fellow creatures

      What experience did the author encounter to have this opinion about compassion?

    1. The future of this space is clearly heading toward deeper AI integration in music education -- real-time technique correction via computer vision, adaptive curricula driven by machine learning, and spatial computing experiences like Simply Piano's Vision Pro app. For now, the best approach is pragmatic: choose the app that matches your current level and goals, commit to daily practice, and graduate to more rigorous tools as you progress.

      The future of this space is clearly headed toward deeper AI integration in music education—think real-time technique correction through computer vision, adaptive curricula driven by machine learning, and spatial computing experiences, such as Simply Piano's Vision Pro app. For now, the best approach is straightforward: choose the app that aligns with your current skill level and goals, commit to daily practice, and transition to more advanced tools as you progress.

    2. Microphone recognition listens through your device mic. The upside: it works with any piano -- acoustic, digital, or a basic keyboard without MIDI output, which covers most entry-level instruments.

      Microphone recognition listens through your device's mic. The upside: it works with any piano—acoustic, digital, or a basic keyboard without MIDI output —which covers most entry-level instruments.

    3. Hoffman Academy and Piano Marvel offer the most generous free tiers. And Playground Sessions is the only app

      Hoffman Academy and Piano Marvel offer the most generous free tiers. Playground Sessions is the only app

    4. Hoffman Academy is the best free resource for young children (ages 5-12) and anyone wanting solid music theory foundations. Led by a single charismatic instructor -- Mr. Hoffman -- the platform offers hundreds of free video lessons covering theory

      Hoffman Academy is the best free resource for young children (ages 5-12) and anyone seeking a solid foundation in music theory. Led by a single charismatic instructor, Mr. Hoffman, the platform offers hundreds of free video lessons covering theory

    5. Song arrangements are a common complaint (some feel heavily simplified), but the structured lesson progression is more methodical than pure gamification apps.

      Song arrangements are a common complaint (some feel overly simplified), but the structured lesson progression is more methodical than that of pure gamification apps.

    6. Playground Sessions is the best choice for MIDI keyboard owners who want a structured curriculum with a one-time payment option. Co-created by the late Quincy Jones (who passed away in November 2024), it blends gamification with bootcamp-style video instruction from real musicians. The app is MIDI-optimized -- giving it an accuracy edge over microphone-based competitors -- though acoustic piano users will find the experience limited.

      Playground Sessions is the best choice for MIDI keyboard owners seeking a structured curriculum with a one-time payment. Co-created by the late Quincy Jones (who passed away in November 2024), it blends gamification with bootcamp-style video instruction from real musicians. The app is MIDI-optimized, giving it an accuracy edge over microphone-based competitors, though acoustic piano users will find the experience limited.

    7. At roughly $200/year, it is the most expensive option here but still a fraction of weekly private lessons.

      At roughly $200/year, it is the most expensive option here, but still a fraction of the cost of weekly private lessons.

    8. There is no AI feedback or automated play-along scoring -- the app exists (via Musora), but the experience is closer to an online piano school than a typical interactive learning app.

      Unlike many learning apps, there is no AI feedback or automated play-along scoring. Instead, Pianote offers an experience that feels more like attending an online piano school.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This important study is of relevance for the fields of predictive processing, perception and learning, with a well-designed paradigm allowing the authors to avoid several common confounds in investigating predictions, such as adaptation. Using a state-of-the-art multivariate EEG approach, the authors test the opposing process theory and find evidence in support of it. Overall, the empirical evidence is solid, however, some conclusions rest on limited evidence and need further work to reconcile the present results with previous studies.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their study McDermott et al. investigate the neurocomputational mechanism underlying sensory prediction errors. They contrast two accounts: representational sharpening and dampening. Representational sharpening suggests that predictions increase the fidelity of the neural representations of expected inputs, while representational dampening suggests the opposite (decreased fidelity for expected stimuli). The authors performed decoding analyses on EEG data, showing that first expected stimuli could be better decoded (sharpening), followed by a reversal during later response windows where unexpected inputs could be better decoded (dampening). These results are interpreted in the context of opposing process theory (OPT), which suggests that such a reversal would support perception to be both veridical (i.e., initial sharpening to increase the accuracy of perception) and informative (i.e., later dampening to highlight surprising, but informative inputs).

      Strengths:

      The topic of the present study is of significant relevance for the field of predictive processing. The experimental paradigm used by McDermott et al. is well designed, allowing the authors to avoid common confounds in investigating predictions, such as stimulus familiarity and adaptation. The introduction provides a well written summary of the main arguments for the two accounts of interest (sharpening and dampening), as well as OPT. Overall, the manuscript serves as a good overview of the current state of the field.

      Weaknesses:

      In my opinion the study has a few weaknesses. Some method choices appear arbitrary (e.g., binning). Additionally, not all results are necessarily predicted by OPT. Finally, results are challenging to reconcile with previous studies. For example, while I agree with the authors that stimulus familiarity is a clear difference compared to previous designs, without a convincing explanation why this would produce the observed pattern of results, I find the account somewhat unsatisfying.

    3. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Reviewer 1

      Minor

      The main substance of my previous comment I suppose targeted a deeper issue - namely whether such a result is reflecting a resolution to a 'neural prediction' puzzle or a 'perceptual prediction' puzzle. Of course, these results tell us a great deal about a potential resolution for how dampening and sharpening might co-exist in the brain - but in the absence of corresponding perceptual effects (or a lack of correlation between neural and perceptual variables - as outlined in this revision) I do wonder if any claims about implications for perception might need moderation or caveating. To be honest, I don't think the authors *need* to make any more changes along these lines for this paper to be acceptable - it is more an issue they might wish to consider themselves when contextualizing their findings.

      Thank you for the thoughtful comment. We have now added a caveat to the relevant section of the discussion to make it clearer that we are discussing neural results, not perceptual results (p.20, lines 378-379).

      I am also happy with the changes that the authors have made justifying which claims can and cannot made based on a statistical decoding test against 'chance' in a single condition using t-tests. I was perhaps a little unclear when I spoke about 'comparisons against 0' in my original review, when the key issue (as the authors have intuited!) is about comparisons against 'chance' (where e.g., 0% decoding above chance is the same thing as 'chance'!). The authors are of course correct in the amendment they have made on p.29 to make clear this is a 'fixed effects analysis' - though I still worry this could be a little cryptic for the average reader. I am not suggesting that the authors run more analyses, or revise any conclusions, but I think it would be more transparent if a note was added along the lines of "while the fixed effects approach (one-sample t-test) enables us to establish whether some consistent informative patterns are detectable in these particular subjects, the results from our paired t-tests support inference to the wider population".

      This sentence has been added for increased transparency (p. 27, lines 544-547).

      Reviewer 3

      Major

      (1) In the previous round of comments, I noted that: "I am not fully convinced that Figures 3A/B and the associated results support the idea that early learning stages result in dampening and later stages in sharpening. The inference made requires, in my opinion, not only a significant effect in one-time bin and the absence of an effect in other bins. Instead to reliably make this inference one would need a contrast showing a difference in decoding accuracy between bins, or ideally an analysis not contingent on seemingly arbitrary binning of data, but a decrease (or increase) in the slope of the decoding accuracy across trials. Moreover, the decoding analyses seem to be at the edge of SNR, hence making any interpretation that depends on the absence of an effect in some bins yet more problematic and implausible". The authors responded: "we fitted a logarithmic model to quantify the change of the decoding benefit over trials, then found the trial index for which the change of the logarithmic fit was < 0.1%. Given the results of this analysis and to ensure a sufficient number of trials, we focused our further analyses on bins 1-2". However, I do not see how this new analysis addresses the concern that the conclusion highlights differences in decoding performance between bins 1 and 2, yet no contrast between these bins are performed. While I appreciate the addition of the new model, in my current understanding it does not solve the problem I raised. I still believe that if the authors wish to conclude that an effect differs between two bins they must contrast these directly and/or use a different appropriate analysis approach.

      Relatedly, the logarithmic model fitting and how it justifies the focus on analysis bin 1-2 needs to be explained better, especially the rationale of the analysis, the choice of parameters (e.g., why logarithmic, why change of logarithmic fit < 0.1% as criterion, etc), and why certain inferences follow from this analysis. Also, the reporting of the associated results seems rather sparse in the current iteration of the manuscript.

      We thank the reviewer for this important point. Following your suggestion, we conducted additional post-hoc tests directly comparing the first and second bins. We found significant differences between bins in the invalid trials, but not the valid trials, suggesting that sharpening/dampening effects are condition specific. This is discussed in the manuscript on p.14, lines 268-271; p.15, 280-284; p.20, lines 382-386.

      A logarithmic analysis was chosen as learning is usually found to be a nonlinear process; learning effects occur rapidly before stabilising relatively early, as seen in Fig. 2D. This is consistent with other research which found that logarithmic fits efficiently describe learning curves in statistical learning (Kang et al., 2023; Siegelman et al., 2018; Choi et al., 2020). By utilising a change of logarithmic fit at <0.1% as a criterion, it is ensured that virtually zero learning took place after that point, allowing us to focus our analysis on learning effects as they developed and providing a more accurate model of representational change. This is explained in the manuscript on p.13, lines 250-251; p.27-28, lines 557-563.

      (2) A critical point the authors raise is that they investigate the buildup of expectations during training. They go on to show that the dampening effect disappears quickly, concluding: "the decoding benefit of invalid predictions [...] disappeared after approximately 15 minutes (or 50 trials per condition)". Maybe the authors can correct me, but my best understanding is as follows: Each bin has 50 trials per condition. The 2:1 condition has 4 leading images, this would mean ~12 trials per leading stimulus, 25% of which are unexpected, so ~9 expected trials per pair. Bin 1 represents the first time the participants see the associations. Therefore, the conclusion is that participants learn the associations so rapidly that ~9 expected trials per pair suffice to not only learn the expectations (in a probabilistic context) but learn them sufficiently well such that they result in a significant decoding difference in that same bin. If so, this would seem surprisingly fast, given that participants learn by means of incidental statistical learning (i.e. they were not informed about the statistical regularities). I acknowledge that we do not know how quickly the dampening/sharpening effects develop, however surprising results should be accompanied with a critical evaluation and exceptionally strong evidence (see point 1). Consider for example the following alternative account to explain these results. Category pairs were fixed across and within participants,i.e. the same leading image categories always predicted the same trailing image categories for all participants. Some category pairings will necessarily result in a larger representational overlap (i.e., visual similarity, etc.) and hence differences in decoding accuracy due to adaptation and related effects. For example, house  barn will result in a different decoding performance compared to coffee cup  barn, simply due to the larger visual and semantic similarity between house and barn compared to coffee cup and barn. These effects should occur upon first stimulus presentation, independent of statistical learning, and may attenuate over time e.g., due to increasing familiarity with the categories (i.e., an overall attenuation leading to smaller between condition differences) or pairs.

      We apologise for the confusion, there are 50 expected trials per bin per condition. The trial breakdown is as follows. Each participant completed 1728 trials, split equally across 3 mappings (two 2:1 maps and one 1:2 map), giving 1152 trials in the 2:1 mapping. Stimuli were expected in 75% of trials (864), leaving 216 per bin, and 54 per leading image in each bin. We have clarified this in the script (p.14, line 267; p.15, line 280). This is in line with similar studies in the field (e.g. Han et al., 2019).

      (3) In response to my previous comment, why the authors think their study may have found different results compared to multiple previous studies (e.g. Han et al., 2019; Kumar et al., 2017; Meyer and Olson, 2011), particularly the sharpening to dampening switch, the authors emphasize the use of non-repeated stimuli (no repetition suppression and no familiarity confound) in their design. However, I fail to see how familiarity or RS could account for the absence of

      sharpening/dampening inversion in previous studies.

      First, if the authors argument is about stimulus novelty and familiarity as described by Feuerriegel et al., 2021, I believe this point does not apply to the cited studies. Feuerriegel et al., 2021 note: "Relative stimulus novelty can be an important confound in situations where expected stimulus identities are presented often within an experiment, but neutral or surprising stimuli are presented only rarely", which indeed is a critical confound. However, none of the studies (Han et al., 2019; Richter et al., 2018; Kumar et al., 2017; Meyer and Olson, 2011) contained this confound, because all stimuli served as expected and unexpected stimuli, with the expectation status solely determined by the preceding cue. Thus, participants were equally familiar with the images across expectation conditions.

      Second, for a similar reason the authors argument for RS accounting for the different results does not hold either in my opinion. Again, as Feuerriegel et al. 2021 correctly point out: "Adaptation-related effects can mimic ES when the expected stimuli are a repetition of the last-seen stimulus or have been encountered more recently than stimuli in neutral expectation conditions." However, it is critical to consider the precise design of previous studies. Taking again the example of Han et al., 2019; Kumar et al., 2017; Meyer and Olson, 2011. To my knowledge none of these studies contained manipulations that would result in a more frequent or recent repetition of any specific stimulus in the expected compared to unexpected condition. The crucial manipulation in all these previous studies is not that a single stimulus or stimulus feature (which could be subject to familiarity or RS) determines the expectation status, but rather the transitional probability (i.e. cue-stimulus pairing) of a particular stimulus given the cue. Therefore, unless I am missing something critical, simple RS seems unlikely to differ between expectation condition in the previous studies and hence seems implausible to account for differences in results compared to the current study.

      Moreover, studies cited by the authors (e.g. Todorovic & de Lange, 2012) showed that RS and ES are separable in time, again making me wonder how avoiding stimulus repetition should account for the difference in the present study compared to previous ones. I am happy to be corrected in my understanding, but with the currently provided arguments by the authors I do not see how RS and familiarity can account for the discrepancy in results.

      The reviewer is correct in that the studies cited (Han et al., 2019; Kumar et al., 2017; Meyer and Olson, 2011) ensure that participants are equally familiar with the images across expectation conditions. Where the present study differs is that participants are not familiar with individual exemplars at all. Han et al., 2019 used a pool of 30 individual images, and subjects underwent exposure sessions lasting two hours each daily for 34 days prior to testing. Kumar et al., 2017 used a pool of 12 images with subjects being exposed to each sequential pair 816 times over the course of the training period. Meyer & Olsen, 2011 used pure tones at five different pitch levels. While familiarity of stimuli across conditions was controlled for in these studies in the sense that familiarity was constant across conditions, novelty was not controlled for. The present study uses a pool of ~3500 images, which are unrepeated across trials.

      Feuerriegel et al., 2021 also points out: “There are also effects of adaptation that are dependent on the recent stimulation history extending beyond the last encountered stimulus and long-lag repetition effects that occur when the first and second presentation of a stimulus is separated by tens or even hundreds of intervening images”. Bearing this in mind, and given the very small pool of stimuli being used by Han et al., 2019; Kumar et al., 2017; Meyer and Olson, 2011, it stands to reason that these studies may still have built-in but unaccounted for effects relating to the repetition of exemplars. Thus, our avoidance of those possible confounds, in addition to foregoing any prior training, may elicit differing results. Furthermore, as pointed out by Walsh et al. 2020, methodological heterogeneity (such as subject training) can produce contrasting results as PP makes divergent predictions regarding the properties of prediction error given different permutations of variables such as training, transitional probabilities, and conditional probabilities. In our case, the use of differing methodology was intentional. These issues have been discussed in more detail on p.5, lines 112-115; p.19, lines 368-377; p.20, lines 378-379).

      Minor

      (1) The authors note in their reply to my previous questions that: "As mentioned above, we opted to target our ERP analyses on Oz due to controversies in the literature regarding univariate effects of ES (Feuerriegel et al., 2021)". This might be a lack of understanding on my side, but how are concerns about the reliability of ES, as outlined by Feuerriegel et al. (2021), an argument for restricting analyses to 1 EEG channel (Oz)? Could one not argue equally well that precisely because of these concerns we should be less selective and instead average across multiple (occipital) channels to improve the reliability of results?

      The reviewer is correct in suggesting that a cluster of occipital electrodes may be more reliable than reporting one single electrode. We have amended the analysis to examine electrodes Oz, O1, and O2 (p.9, lines 187-188; p.11, lines 197-201).

      (2) The authors provide a github link for the dataset and code. However, I doubt that github is a suitable location to share EEG data (which at present I also cannot find linked in the github repo). Do the authors plan to share the EEG data and if so where?

      Thank you for bringing this to my attention. EEG data has now been uploaded at osf.io/x7ydf and linked to the github repository (p.28, lines 569-570).

      (3) The figure text could benefit from additional information; e.g. Fig.1C and Fig.3 do not clarify what the asterisk indicates; p < ? with or without multiple comparison correction?

      Thank you for pointing out this oversight, the figure texts have been amended (p. 9, line 168; p.16, line 289).

    1. Game controllers represent a “control technology” and “control revolu-tion” in response to the “crisis of control” resulting from the need to inter-act with digitalized gameplay. Controllers determine how gameplay inputscan be processed and communication reciprocated to make some form ofgameplay possible. That is, controllers are a revolution because we didn’tneed them before gameplay became digital, but also because they mediate,remediate, and make possible familiar gameplay elements, activities, andoutcomes within a digital setting.Bolter and Grusin describe how remediation is “representation of onemedium in another.”10 They write, “Every act of mediation depends on otheracts of mediation. Media are continually commenting on, reproducing, andreplacing each other,”11 or at least are becoming more popular.

      Akin to McLuhan's tetrad :)

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