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This has concerning implications for companies that want to bust unions. Additionally, the fact that this is a possibility only divides management and employees further and creates adversity.

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This happens so often without us even realizing it. Missing emails is so easy. Also, understanding what someone means over text often requires some sort of interpretation that can be taken in the completely wrong direction if the message does not say word for word what it is asking.

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I think that the discussions of race and class are inseparable and intersectional. You can't talk about one without the other. We learned las week that race is socially constructed, and that it was created and continues to be upheld for the economic interests of the people on top to continue to justify the oppression and exploitation of others. Institutionalized racism reinforces the economic conditions of certain racial and ethnic identities as well.

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They get money from selling the information of their users to other companies. They will also be able to use more targeted ads if they use all the information they have about a user, and if the user buys something, they make more money from that purchase.

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It’s interesting how something as small as changing one word or phrase can completely shift how people interpret a question. This made me think about how often survey results in the news might be influenced by the way questions are asked, not just by people’s actual opinions. I think this shows that writing survey questions is more of a science than I realized, it takes a lot of testing and awareness to get it right. Overall, this part of the reading made me appreciate how much work goes into making surveys fair, balanced, and truly representative of what people think.

Agreed. Another thought I had is that people frequently find it more difficult to challenge a statement than to agree with it, so sometimes it's also important to factor in that people can be less inclined to challenge a faulty/inaccurate assumption just because they might have a hard time articulating their disagreement or because they've had less experience exercising critical thinking where they're encouraged to challenge an assumption/the status quo.

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Although there is an option for private messaging for users to have private communication with other users, it will still be stored in the cloud server. However, in today's era of widespread and advanced Internet access, private message also infringes upon users' privacy to a certain extent.

This article reports the situation that Facebook stores users' passwords in plain text instead of encrypted password, meaning stuffs with enough access can directly see the passwords of all the users. Even though they said no one leaked or illegally used the passwords, I still have doubts about this since we don't know what they actually do. When using social media, we give up some of our privacy, so I think if there are some things that we really don't want others to know, we should try to not talk about them on social media.

A spillover is when a virus or pathogen that usually lives in animals crosses over and infects humans. It happens when people come into close contact with animals that carry the virus or with things contaminated by them. Most spillovers don’t cause large outbreaks, but each one gives the virus a chance to adapt and spread.

Privacy would be the most important and personal type of information for each person in the world. So, how do we protect our privacy to avoid unexpected things happening? Privacy is about control, which means once peopel control themselves to avoid share their personal privacy information in the website, they would be safe.

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Washington still mentions the Patriots after the revolution where nothing really changed right then and there except British inclusion really made me think is there more to what he is trying to say in this farewell message. I think he is still saying America isn't as untied as the thought it would be and should maintain working on it as the years go by to make it better. I'm glad Washington is speaking his mind through this message and what should happen as America continues to grow.

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6 billion people without broadband is a large number of people. It is hard to imagine when everyone around me is so connected to technology.

It is interesting to see that Scholarly Publishing is very profitable.

Most classes I have taken the textbook is right at my fingertips on the computer. It makes life a lot easier than toting around heavy books that I don't know what to do with when class ends.

This is a great privilege that I have. I use my phone for everything such as school, work, family, finances, entertainment and so much more.

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This is a curious claim that I cannot substantiate. After looking around, I see the same claim in Wikipedia's article for Copyright renewal in the United States, but the cited source (Fishman, Stephen; 2010. The Public Domain: How to Find & Use Copyright-Free Writings, Music, Art & More) doesn't appear to provide a robust citation. (On page 287 in Chapter 15, Fishman writes, "The Copyright Office estimates that only about 15% of pre-1964 published works were ever renewed", unaccompanied by a footnote.) One also notices that 1961 and 1964 are not the same year.

I stumble across a similar claim ("a 1961 report from the U.S. Copyright Office estimates that 85% of the books never had the copyrights renewed") on lcgsco.org, which disappointingly turns out to be the website for "Larimer County Genealogical Society", with no link to the report in question.

The Copyright Office does make available its historical archive of annual reports at https://www.copyright.gov/history/annual_reports.html. Could its annual report be the one referred to? Searching for the string "renewal" in the 1961 annual report turns up two noteworthy occurrences (out of a reported nine):

1. on page 2, a claim related to renewals mentioning a "15 percent" figure

2. on page 16, a description of "Studies 29–31 [… including …] 31. Renewal of Copyright"

The full sentence on page 2 where the "15 percent" figure appears is actually that "The year's increase in registrations was nearly 3 percent, this was counting a 15 percent decrease in renewal registrations, the result of the corresponding decrease in original regisrations 28 years previously." This is, troublingly, not the same thing as fewer than 15% of copyright registrations until 1961 being renewed. (It is not even the same as only 15% of registrations up for renewal in 1961 being renewed.) It is a 15% decrease in renewals relative to the prior year, i.e., number of renewals in 1961 compared to the number of renewals in 1960. If this is the report that the is meant to be the source for those claims of 85% non-renewal, it then it fails verification.

I have also come across a reference for renewal figures in a 2008 article in D-Lib Magazine (Peter B. Hirtle, "Copyright Renewal, Copyright Restoration, and the Difficulty of Determining Copyright Status"). Footnote 4 there cites the same Study 31 (attributed to a Barbara Ringer). Interestingly, it is not cited as a way to substantiate the 15% claim, but instead that "only 7% of registered copyrighted books" were renewed. It's not clear from context whether that claim is meant to be about the full range of potential renewals up to 1961, or merely the subset of works up for renewal in 1961.

At the time of this comment, I have not yet looked into Study 31 itself. I expect it to contain answers.

eLife Assessment

This study provides valuable insights into the influence of sex on bile acid metabolism and the risk of hepatocellular carcinoma (HCC). The data to support that there are inter-relationships between sex, bile acids, and HCC in mice are convincing, although this is a largely descriptive study. Future studies are needed to understand the interaction of sex hormones, bile acids, and chronic liver diseases and cancer at a mechanistic level. Also, there is not enough evidence to determine the clinical significance of the findings given the differences in bile acid composition between mice and men.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Liver cancer shows a high incidence in males than females with incompletely understood causes. This study utilized a mouse model that lacks the bile acid feedback mechanisms (FXR/SHP DKO mice) to study how dysregulation of bile acid homeostasis and a high circulating bile acid may underlie the gender-dependent prevalence and prognosis of HCC. By transcriptomics analysis comparing male and female mice, unique sets of gene signatures were identified and correlated with HCC outcomes in human patients. The study showed that ovariectomy procedure increased HCC incidence in female FXR/SHP DKO mice that were otherwise resistant to age-dependent HCC development, and that removing bile acids by blocking intestine bile acid absorption reduced HCC progression in FXR/SHP DKO mice. Based on these findings, the authors suggest that gender-dependent bile acid metabolism may play a role in the male-dominant HCC incidence, and that reducing bile acid level and signaling may be beneficial in HCC treatment. This study include many strengths: 1. Chronic liver diseases often proceed the development of liver and bile duct cancer. Advanced chronic liver diseases are often associated with dysregulation of bile acid homeostasis and cholestasis. This study takes advantage of a unique FXR/SHP DKO model that develop high organ bile acid exposure and spontaneous age-dependent HCC development in males but not females to identify unique HCC-associated gene signatures. The study showed that the unique gene signature in female DKO mice that had lower HCC incidence also correlated with lower grade HCC and better survival in human HCC patients. 2. The study also suggests that differentially regulated bile acid signaling or gender-dependent response to altered bile acids may contribute to gender-dependent susceptibility to HCC development and/or progression. 3. The sex-dependent differences in bile acid-mediated pathology clearly exist but are still not fully understood at the mechanistic level. Female mice have been shown to be more sensitive to bile acid toxicity in a few cholestasis models, while this study showed a male dominance of bile acid promotion of HCC. This study used ovariectomy to demonstrate that female hormones are possible underlying factors. Future studies are needed to understand the interaction of sex hormones, bile acids, and chronic liver diseases and cancer.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Liver cancer shows a high incidence in males than females with incompletely understood causes. This study utilized a mouse model that lacks the bile acid feedback mechanisms (FXR/SHP DKO mice) to study how dysregulation of bile acid homeostasis and a high circulating bile acid may underlie the gender-dependent prevalence and prognosis of HCC. By transcriptomics analysis comparing male and female mice, unique sets of gene signatures were identified and correlated with HCC outcomes in human patients. The study showed that ovariectomy procedure increased HCC incidence in female FXR/SHP DKO mice that were otherwise resistant to agedependent HCC development, and that removing bile acids by blocking intestine bile acid absorption reduced HCC progression in FXR/SHP DKO mice. Based on these findings, the authors suggest that gender-dependent bile acid metabolism may play a role in the male-dominant HCC incidence, and that reducing bile acid level and signaling may be beneficial in HCC treatment. 

strengths:

(1) Chronic liver diseases often proceed the development of liver and bile duct cancer. Advanced chronic liver diseases are often associated with dysregulation of bile acid homeostasis and cholestasis. This study takes advantage of a unique FXR/SHP DKO model that develop high organ bile acid exposure and spontaneous age-dependent HCC development in males but not females to identify unique HCC-associated gene signatures. The study showed that the unique gene signature in female DKO mice that had lower HCC incidence also correlated with lower grade HCC and better survival in human HCC patients. 2. The study also suggests that differentially regulated bile acid signaling or gender-dependent response to altered bile acids may contribute to gender-dependent susceptibility to HCC development and/or progression. 3. The sex-dependent differences in bile acidmediated pathology clearly exist but are still not fully understood at the mechanistic level. Female mice have been shown to be more sensitive to bile acid toxicity in a few cholestasis models, while this study showed a male dominance of bile acid promotion of HCC. This study used ovariectomy to demonstrate that female hormones are possible underlying factors. Future studies are needed to understand the interaction of sex hormones, bile acids, and chronic liver diseases and cancer. 

We thank Reviewer 1 for their positive and thorough assessment of our manuscript

Weaknesses:

(1) HCC shows heterogeneity, and it is unclear what tissues (tumor or normal) were used from the DKO mice and human HCC gene expression dataset to obtain the gene signature, and how the authors reconcile these gene signatures with HCC prognosis.

Mice studies: Aged DKO mice develop aggressive tumors (major and minor nodules, See Figure 1), and the entire liver is burdened with multiple tumor nodules. It is technically challenging to demarcate the tumor boundaries as most of the surrounding tissues do not display normal tissue architecture. Therefore, livers from age- and sexmatched wild-type C57/BL6 mice were used as control tissue. All the mice were inbred in our facility. Spatial transcriptomics and longitudinal studies are ongoing to collect tumors at earlier time points wherein we can differentiate tumor and non-tumor tissue. 

Human Studies: We mined five separate clinical data sets. The human HCC gene expression comprised of samples from the (i) National Cancer Institute (NCI) cohort (GEO accession numbers, GSE1898 and GSE4024) and (ii) Korea, (iii) Samsung, (iv) Modena, and (v) Fudan cohorts as previously described (GEO accession numbers, GSE14520, GSE16757, GSE43619, GSE36376, and GSE54236). We have added a new supplemental table 4, giving details of these datasets. Depending on the cohort, they are primarily HCC samples- surgical resections of HCC, control samples, with some tumors and paired non-tumor tissues.

(2) The authors identified a unique set of gene expression signatures that are linked to HCC patient outcomes, but analysis of these gene sets to understand the causes of cancer promotion is still lacking. The studies of urea cycle metabolism and estrogen signaling were preliminary and inconclusive. These mechanistic aspects may be followed up in revision or future studies.

We agree. Experiments to elicit HCC causality and promotion are complex, given the heterogeneous nature of liver cancer. Moreover, the length of time (12 months) needed to spontaneously develop cancer in this DKO mouse model makes it challenging. As mentioned by the reviewer, mechanistic studies are ongoing, and longitudinal time course experiments are actively being pursued to delineate causality. Having said that, we mined the TCGA LIHC (The Cancer Genome Atlas Liver Hepatocellular Carcinoma) database to examine the expression of the individual urea cycle genes and found them suppressed in liver tumorigenesis (new Supplementary Figure 4). We also evaluated if estrogen receptor  (Er) targets altered in DKO females (DKO_Estrogen) correlate with overall survival in HCC (new Supplementary Figure 6). We note that Er expression per se is reduced in males and females upon liver tumorigenesis. Also, DKO_Estrogen signature positively corroborated with better overall survival (new Supplementary Figure 6). These findings further bolster the relevance of urea cycle metabolism and estrogen signaling during HCC. 

(3) While high levels of bile acids are convincingly shown to promote HCC progression, their role in HCC initiation is not established. The DKO model may be limited to conditions of extremely high levels of organ bile acid exposure. The DKO mice do not model the human population of HCC patients with various etiology and shared liver pathology (i.e. cirrhosis). Therefore, high circulating bile acids may not fully explain the male prevalence of HCC incidence.

We agree with this comment that our studies do not show bile acids can initiate HCC and may act as one of the many factors that contribute to the high male prevalence of HCC. This is exactly the reason why throughout the manuscript we do not write about HCC initiation. To clarify further, in the revised discussion of the manuscript, we have added a sentence to highlight this aspect, “while this study demonstrates bile acids promote HCC progression it does not investigate or provide evidence if excess bile acids are sufficient for HCC initiation.”

(4) The authors showed lower circulating bile acids and increased fecal bile acid excretion in female mice and hypothesized that this may be a mechanism underlying the lower bile acid exposure that contributed to lower HCC incidence in female DKO mice. Additional analysis of organ bile acids within the enterohepatic circulation may be performed because a more accurate interpretation of the circulating bile acids and fecal bile acids can be made in reference to organ bile acids and total bile acid pool changes in these mice.

As shown in this manuscript- we provide BA compositional analyses from the liver, serum, urine, and feces (Figures 5 and 6, new Supplementary Figure 8, Supplementary Tables 4 and 5). Unfortunately, we did not collect the intestinal tissue or gallbladders for BA analysis in this study. Separate cohorts of mice are being aged for future BA analyses from different organs within the enterohepatic loop. We thank you for this suggestion. Nevertheless, we have previously measured and reported BA values to be elevated in the intestines and the gall bladder of young DKO mice (PMC3007143).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Weaknesses:

(1) The translational value to human HCC is not so strong yet. Authors show that there is a correlation between the female-selective gene signature and low-grade tumors and better survival in HCC patients overall. However, these data do not show whether this signature is more highly correlated with female tumor burden and survival. In other words, whether the mechanisms of female protection may be similar between humans and mice. In that respect, it would also be good to elaborate on whether women have higher fecal BA excretion and lower serum BA concentration.

The reviewer poses an interesting question to test if the DKO female-specific signatures are altered differently in male vs. female HCC samples. As we found the urea cycle and estrogen signaling to be protective and enriched in our mouse model, we tested their expression pattern using the TCGA-LIHC RNA-seq data. We found urea cycle genes and Er transcripts broadly reduced in tumor samples irrespective of the sex (new Supplementary Figure 4 and Supplementary Figure 6), indicating that these pathways are compromised upon tumorigenesis even in the female livers. 

While prior studies have shown (i) a smaller BA pool w synthesis in men than women (PMID: 22003820), we did not find a study that systematically investigated BA excretion between the sexes in HCC context. The reviewer is spot on in suggesting BA analysis from HCC and unaffected human fecal samples from both sexes. Designing and performing such studies in the future will provide concrete proof of whether BA excretion protects female livers from developing liver cancer. We thank you for these suggestions.

(2) The authors should perform a thorough spelling and grammar check.

We apologize for the typos, which have been fixed, and as suggested by the reviewer, we have performed a grammar check.

(3) There are quite some errors and inaccuracies in the result section, figures, and legends. The authors should correct this.

We apologize for the inadvertent errors in the manuscript, and we have clarified these inaccuracies in the revised version. Thank you.

Reviewer#1 (Recommendations for the authors).

(1) Figures 1A-F, This statement of altered liver steatosis needs to be further supported by measurement of liver triglycerides. Lower magnification images of Sirius red stain should be shown for better evaluation of liver fibrosis.

Unfortunately, we did not measure liver triglycerides and sirius red stained samples have faded, and lower magnification is unavailable at this juncture. We have modified our results accordingly.  

We did not take the gross picture of WT female and DKO female livers in the same frame as shown below. Since the manuscript is focused on male and female differences in liver cancer incidence, we provided DKO male and female liver images as Figure 1D in the paper.

Author response image 1.

Gross liver images of a year-old WT and DKO mice which show prominent hepatocarcinogenesis in DKO male mice

(2) Can the authors clarify if the gene transcriptomics was performed with normal or tumor tissues of DKO mice?

Gene transcriptomics were performed with the tumor tissue of DKO mice. We have previously published data from younger non tumor bearing DKO male mice (PMCID: PMC3007143). 

(3) Supplementary Figure 3C. Could the authors confirm if this is F vs M or just DKO female since it does not seem to match the result description in the main text? It is better practice to indicate the sub-panels of the Supplementary Figures in the main text while describing the results.

As the reviewer correctly points out Supplementary Figure 3C is DKO F vs M signature not DKO_female signature and this has been clarified in the text. We have also included DKO_F data now to reduce the confusion.

(4) Figure 3. Legend, the data presented are not well explained in the Legend, especially the labeling and what is being presented and compared.

As suggested by the reviewer, we have modified the legend accordingly.

(5) Supplementary Table 4 does not contain total serum bile acid as described in the main text.

We agree with the reviewer. We provided primary and secondary BA concentrations, Supplementary Table 4 (currently Supplementary Table 5 in the revised version): Rows 20 and 21. but not their added total. We have modified the text accordingly.

(6) Method section: many experiments lack descriptions of details.

We have added details to the animal experimental design, ER ChIP-PCR, schematics of experiments are included within the main and supplemental figures, metabolomics and BA analysis have been expanded. 

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

General:

(1) The authors are advised to do a thorough grammar and spelling check.

We have performed spelling and grammar check as suggested using an online platform Grammarly. Thank You.

Results:

(1) Figure 1 o The authors should show in Figure 1D female WT and female DKO liver.

See Figure 1 added in our responses to point 1 of reviewer 1’s comment.

In the Figure legend, (A-E) should be replaced by (A+D). 

Thank you. We have modified it accordingly.

The authors do not refer to 1J in the text, please add this reference.

Thank you for pointing it. We have referenced 1J in the text.

The description of 1H does not elaborate on the sex differences in ALT/AST levels, as this is the focus of the manuscript.

We have added a sentence to show that the injury markers are higher in DKO males, which is consistent with an advanced disease. Thanks.

The authors should use the correct nomenclature in Figure 1I/1J (gene vs protein and capitals vs non-capitals).

The Figure 1I and 1J show gene expression of Fxr and Shp and hence we used the non-capital italicized nomenclature. Thanks.

(2) Figure 2:

The x-axis length is different in Figures 2A and 2B. Please correct to visualize the differences between males and females better.

The x axis length has been fixed as suggested. Thanks

(3) Figure 3:

The authors should elaborate on how the patients were assigned to each gene signature. This is not fully clear.

The gene set obtained from the WT and DKO mice were used. The process used is shown as a schematic in Supplemental Fig 2C and the gene list is included  in an excel sheet as Supplemental table 1. 

We are curious how these data (F3A-C) would look when separating male and female human patients.

We performed an overall survival analysis with a subgroup of patients and provide it. We segregated the HCC cohort data on sex and age (>55 yr, since we assumed 55 as an age for menopause) and evaluated the DKO gene signature. Similar to the original figure 3, we find that irrespective of sex, and age, DKO FvsM gene signature corresponds with better overall survival in men and in women. These findings align with the combined analysis in overall survival shown in original Figure 3 of the manuscript, and therefore we did not modify it. If deemed necessary, we are happy to include the figure below to reviewers in the main manuscript.

Author response image 2.

Correlation of gene signatures obtained from WT and DKO mouse model with the survival data of HCC patients segregated by age and sex. The Kaplan Meier Survival graphs were generated based on WT and DKO transcriptome changes using five HCC clinical cohorts. Analysis of OS (Overall Survival) in patients ((A) Men and (B) Women) using the gene signatures representative of either male WT or male DKO, female WT or female DKO, and unique changes observed in female DKO mice but not in male DKO mice.

What was used as the control signature in Figure 3C? Please specify this.

For Figure 3C we compared the DKO_M signature to that of DKOF vs M signature. These genes are listed as an Excel Sheet (Supplementary Table 1).

The authors claim that DKO female mice display chronic cholestasis, similar to their male counterparts. Please refer to previous work or show the data.

Serum BA levels are elevated in DKO females are reported in supplementary table 5 and we find comparable hepatic BA composition in Figure 5 F.

(4) Figure 4: Labels for the x-axis are missing in Figure 4C. Please add legends or labels to the bars.

The x axis label is included in the top Serum BAs in (M)

In Figure 4I, the percentage of input is quite low. An IgG control would show whether recruitment of ERalpha to the shown loci is significant above background levels. Also, ChIP on the OVX liver could serve as a negative control.

We did use IgG as control pull down and the signals above this background were considered. We have not performed this in OVX, which would be an excellent negative control for future studies. Thank You.

The results and legends refer to ChIP-qPCR, while methods only mention ChIP-seq.Please adapt.

We sincerely apologize for the mistake. We used published ChIP-seq to identify putative binding site and then performed ChIP PCR to validate it. We have clarified and rectified this error. Thank You.

Significance indications in the figure legend do not correspond with significance indications in the figure. Please explain the used significance symbols in the figure in the legend.

Thank You. The legends and their significance have been matched.

(5) Figure 5:

Authors claim lowered total serum BA in females compared to males, and reference to Supplementary Table 4. However, these data are not provided, only percentages and ratios are displayed.

In the revised version, this has become Table 5. See response to the same concern noted by Reviewer 1, Point 5 above.

Figure 5D: Are sulphated BA also elevated in WT females? Please provide these data.

There is no significant urinary excretion of BAs in WT control animals. We have previously measured and found none. But under cholestatic conditions BAs are observed in urine. Therefore, sulphated BA levels were found only in the DKO mice. 

Figure 5H: Is the fecal BA excretion in WT females also proportionally higher than in males? Please provide these data.

We were unable to perform the untargeted metabolomics profiling of WT fecal samples. When we measured for BAs in the feces, as expected very low conc were present irrespective of the sex (~0.01 M) and we did not find any sex difference.  Also, prior studies in 129SVJ strain exhibited comparable fecal excretion (PMC150802). We did not find any clinical studies that measured fecal BA between the sexes.

(6) Figure 6:

References in the text of the result section to Figure 6 are wrong. The authors should change this.

Thank You. This has been rectified.

Significance indications in the legend do not correspond with significance indications in the figure. Please explain the used significance symbols in the figure in the legend.

Thank You. The legends and their significance have been matched.

(7) Supplemental Figure 3:

Please adapt the title of this figure; the sentence is incorrect. The description of this figure is very poor.

We have modified the legend and the title of the Supplemental Figure 3 to make it more appropriate. Thanks

Please explain what the blue and red dots represent.

Each dot in blue and yellow indicate the Bayesian probability generated from our BCCP model.

What are the bold horizontal lines representing? Why are there no dots in some box plots? Please elaborate.

The box represents the interquartile range (IQR), encompassing the middle 50% of the data. The bottom and top edges correspond to the 25th and 75th percentiles, respectively, while the bold horizontal line indicates the median value.

The absence of visible dots in certain categories—particularly in higher CLIP and TNM stages—is due to the small number of patients, all of whom had similar Bayesian prediction probabilities. As these values cluster tightly around the median, the individual dots may be overlapped and hidden behind the median line.

The figure is not visually easy to understand, please reconsider the representation.  

We hope the modified figure legends with the explanation of the lines and the points in the graphs increases the clarity and makes them acceptable.

Please add the DKO_female signature plot.

We have added these graph to Supplemental figure 3

(8) Supplemental 4A:

Fold change at Z-score is missing. This should be added.

Thank you we have added this information

(9) Supplemental 5:

The scale bar is missing. This should be included.

The figure is now supplemental figure 8 and the scale bar has been added.

Methods:

(1) Did the authors use ChIP-sequencing or ChIP-qPCR? Please describe the correct method.

We apologize for the error. We have used ChIP-PCR and rectified it in our methods and in our response to a figure 4 query.

(2) It is unclear how the mouse model was generated. Please refer to earlier publications.

The mice were generated in house at UIUC, and we have added this sentence to the Methods section. The original reference has been cited in the text (PMCID: PMC3007143).

Discussion:

(1) The authors claim in the discussion: 'consistently higher recruitment of ER to the classical BA synthetic genes ...' This is not shown in Figure 4I, only ER recruitment to Cyp7a1 is significantly higher in females. Please rephrase.

We agree and we have modified the sentence Cyp7A1 accounts for ~75% of BA synthesis and is a rate-limiting gene in the classical BA synthesis pathway. 

(2) The authors could make their statements stronger if they could elaborate on whether women have more fecal BA excretion, and if there are differences in serum BA concentration in HCC between male and female patients. 

Unfortunately, we were unable to find clinical studies with appropriate controls which examined and reported serum BA in HCC in a sex specific manner.

In addition, to understand whether the female-specific protections in humans are similar to mice, it would be nice to show correlations of the female-specific mouse signature with male and female liver signatures.

At this time, we do not have large n numbers of control or precancerous early-stage patient datasets from both sexes to make such comparisons. Nevertheless, there is translational relevance of these sex-specific signature. Figure 2 included in the reviewer response shows that DKO male signature correlates with poor overall survival in males, whereas neither DKO male nor DKO female signature predict outcome in females. In contrast, DKO female-specific gene signature (DKOFvsM) correlates with better overall survival in both men and in women. 

(3) The authors state in the discussion: 'Currently we do not know how to reconcile this data other than indicating a potential ER independent mechanism.' We do not understand the reasoning behind this statement. Please clarify.

We find that increased Erα expression in DKO coincides with CA-mediated suppression of BA synthesis genes in the absence of Fxr and Shp. But we also noticed that in OVX DKO mice, Erα expression is blunted, and so is basal BA synthesis gene expression. Putting together these data, it is intriguing that Erα expression correlates both positively and negatively with BA synthesis genes. To reconcile these contrasting results, we have written the following sentence in the discussion.

“These findings suggest Erα expression is linked to both positive and negative regulation of BA synthesis genes. But we do not know how ER elicits these differential effects on BA synthesis.”

I've come across lots of claims online (e.g. https://lcgsco.org/the-majority-of-books-published-before-1964-are-free-of-copyrights/ and the current revision of the Wikipedia article on copyright renewal in the United States) that "A US Copyright Office study in 1961 found that fewer than 15% of registered copyrights had been renewed". I haven't been able to substantiate this claim, however.

Could this passage be the source? It clearly doesn't line up with the claim.

The Los Rios Community College District seems to want the best education for their students. Investing in your students education invests in your future as a college.

Who are the privileged few? Why is there a lock on what we can learn?

It is alarming how much more profitable academic publishing is than retail. Education should be available to everyone. Many people hold back on getting an education or continuing an education because of cost.

Academic information should be readily available to anyone that wishes to use it. What would the world be without access to academic information?

eLife Assessment

This is an important study of critical period plasticity, focused on temperature manipulations, and how different parts of the Drosophila larval motor circuit adapt or maladapt. The work convincingly demonstrates that components of the motor network respond in distinct ways to the heat shock, and the combination of functional, structural, and electrophysiological approaches makes the study of significant interest. The work points to central interneurons as primary drivers of maladaptive changes, while motoneurons and neuromuscular junctions show compensatory or homeostatic adjustments. The study is methodologically rigorous, contributing significant insights into critical period biology using a tractable invertebrate model.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors examine the impact of heat stress during an embryonic CP in Drosophila, focusing on the larval locomotor network. They show that elevated temperature increases neuronal activity and, when applied during the CP, results in long-term instability of the network, which manifests in prolonged seizure recovery times. At the neuromuscular junction, substantial structural changes occur, including terminal overgrowth and altered receptor composition, yet synaptic transmission remains preserved due to homeostatic regulation. Motoneurons display reduced excitability but receive increased synaptic input from premotor interneurons. These findings suggest that maladaptive instability originates within the central circuitry rather than at the neuromuscular junction, where changes seem to be homeostatically compensated. The study concludes that different network components exhibit distinct and hierarchical responses to CP perturbations, with premotor interneurons setting the tone for downstream adjustments in motoneurons.

Strengths:

The work takes advantage of the unique accessibility of the Drosophila system. A major strength of the study is the integration of structural, physiological, and behavioral analyses, which allows the authors to draw a comprehensive picture of how CP perturbations shape the locomotor network. The choice of an ecologically relevant stimulus (heat stress) is particularly convincing, as it links experimental manipulations more closely to natural environmental conditions. The experiments are carefully designed, and the results are robust and consistent with previous findings in the field, while also extending them in new directions.

Weaknesses:

The study leaves some uncertainty regarding the experimental design and interpretation. The change from short to prolonged heat shock manipulations raises the possibility that the effects observed may not be confined to the critical period alone - this could be experimentally addressed or simply rephrased in the text. In addition, the maladaptive (seizure recovery) and adaptive/homeostatic phenotypes are not always clearly distinguished or highlighted, which makes it harder to appreciate how the different levels of the network plasticity fit together into a single mechanistic framework.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript presents a thoughtful and well-executed study of critical period plasticity in the Drosophila larval motor circuit. The authors examined how transient heat, 32 {degree sign}C, during the embryonic stage, altered network properties, showing that premotor interneurons A27h increase excitatory drive onto motoneurons, which respond with a reduction in excitability. At the NMJ, synaptic terminals expand and GluRIIA distribution shifts, yet synaptic transmission remains largely unaffected. Despite these local compensations, the treated larvae display slower crawling and prolonged recovery from seizures, indicating that the network is functionally compromised.

Strengths:

(1) One of the major strengths of this study is the elegant dissection of a defined circuit, tracking changes from premotor interneurons through motoneurons to the NMJ. The multimodal approach provides a comprehensive view of how connected elements respond to CP perturbations.

(2) An interesting finding is that NMJ morphology changes dramatically without corresponding deficits in synaptic transmission, challenging the common assumption that larger boutons necessarily indicate stronger synapses.

(3) Another intriguing result is that even with two layers of homeostatic compensation, locomotor behavior is still impaired, highlighting the limits of compensation and underscoring the critical role of CP timing.

(4) Beyond these scientific insights, the study benefits from a well-defined, tractable system and simple experimental manipulations, which together make the results highly interpretable and reproducible.

Weaknesses:

There are a few areas where the manuscript could be strengthened.

(1) Although A27h premotor neurons are well characterized, the claim that they are the causal driver of downstream changes would be strengthened by additional experiments or a clearer discussion of the temporal hierarchy.

(2) While 32 {degree sign}C heat stress is presented as ecologically relevant, it produces maladaptive behavioral outcomes, raising questions about the ecological and mechanistic interpretation of the model. In particular, most experiments, with the exception of Figure 1, used prolonged (24h) heat treatments, which could introduce developmental effects beyond the CP itself. Comparing shorter and longer heat exposures would help clarify the specificity of the CP response.

(3) While there are schematics for experimental procedures, a circuit diagram tracing information flow and indicating where structural and functional changes occur would help readers better understand the findings.

(4) Finally, the main paradox of the study, that robust homeostatic compensations occur yet behavior remains impaired, could be explored in more depth in the Discussion.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

During development, neural circuits undergo brief windows of heightened neuronal plasticity (e.g., critical periods) that are thought to set the lifelong functional properties of underlying circuits. These authors, in addition to others within the Drosophila community, previously characterized a critical period in late fly embryonic development, during which alterations to neuronal activity impact late-stage larval crawling behavior. In the current study, the authors use an ethologically-relevant activation paradigm (increased temperature) to boost motor activity during embryogenesis, followed by a series of electrophysiology and imaging-based experiments to explore how 3 distinct levels of the circuit remodel in response to increases in embryonic motor activity. Specifically, they find that each level of the circuit responds differently, with increased excitatory drive from excitatory pre-motor neurons, reduced excitability in motor neurons, and no physiological changes at the NMJ despite dramatic morphological differences. Together, these data suggest that early life experience in the motor neuron drives compensatory changes at each level of the circuit to stabilize overall network output.

Strengths:

The study was well-written, and the data presented were clear and an important contribution to the field.

Weaknesses:

The sample sizes and what they referred to throughout the distinct studies were unclear. In the legends, the authors should clearly state for each experiment N=X, and if N refers to an NMJ, for example, instead of an individual animal, they should state N=X NMJs per N=X animals. This will help readers better understand the statistical impact of the study.

I still find this an astute recognition as indeed I think our position towards the university has become more negative, while both also address different audiences. The article is an appeal to universities, this booklet is an attempt at collectivising within/without the university

This is great

It seems things have gotten so much worse so quickly

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This seems a bit outdated now, given the trajectory APCs went. I wonder whether the article's authors would still feel like this about APCs now.

I wonder to what extent this has been adopted in LIS education since the article was published?

Is the underlying issue connected to how we value scholarly work?

Was information a public good before?

Is it only the organisation of the 'apparatuses that govern society's presentation'. And does organisation mean capitalism?

monthly composites based on instantaneous [fv] and [uv]?

not just by latitude, also by longitude

eLife Assessment

This study provides novel and convincing evidence that both dopamine D1 and D2 expressing neurons in the nucleus accumbens shell are crucial for the expression of cue-guided action selection, a fundamental component of decision-making. The research is systematic and rigorous in using optogenetic inhibition of either D1- or D2-expressing medium spiny neurons in the NAc shell to reveal attenuation of sensory-specific Pavlovian-Instrumental transfer, while largely sparing value-based decision on an instrumental task. The findings in this report build on prior research and resolve some conflicts in the literature regarding decision-making.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

In the current article, Octavia Soegyono and colleagues study "The influence of nucleus accumbens shell D1 and D2 neurons on outcome-specific Pavlovian instrumental transfer", building on extensive findings from the same lab. While there is a consensus about the specific involvement of the Shell part of the Nucleus Accumbens (NAc) in specific stimulus-based actions in choice settings (and not in General Pavlovian instrumental transfer - gPIT, as opposed to the Core part of the NAc), mechanisms at the cellular and circuitry levels remain to be explored. In the present work, using sophisticated methods (rat Cre-transgenic lines from both sexes, optogenetics and the well-established behavioral paradigm outcome-specific PIT - sPIT), Octavia Soegyono and colleagues decipher the differential contribution of dopamine receptors D1 and D2 expressing-spiny projection neurons (SPNs).

After validating the viral strategy and the specificity of the targeting (immunochemistry and electrophysiology), the authors demonstrate that while both NAc Shell D1- and D2-SPNs participate in mediating sPIT, NAc Shell D1-SPNs projections to the Ventral Pallidum (VP, previously demonstrated as crucial for sPIT), but not D2-SPNs, mediates sPIT. They also show that these effects were specific to stimulus-based actions, as value-based choices were left intact in all manipulations.

This is a well-designed study and the results are well supported by the experimental evidence. The paper is extremely pleasant to read and add to the current literature.

Comments on revisions:

We thank the authors for their detailed responses and for addressing our comments and concerns.

To further improve consistency and transparency, we kindly request that the authors provide, for Supplemental Figures S1-S4, panels E (raw data for lever presses during the PIT test), the individual data points together with the corresponding statistical analyses in the figure legends.

In addition, regarding Supplemental Figure S3, panel E, we note the absence of a PIT effect in the eYFP group under the ON condition, which appears to differ from the net response reported in the main Figure 5, panel B. Could the authors clarify this apparent discrepancy?

We also note a discrepancy between the authors' statement in their response ("40 rats excluded based on post-mortem analyses") and the number of excluded animals reported in the Materials and Methods section, which adds up to 47. We kindly ask the authors to clarify this point for consistency.

Finally, as a minor point, we suggest indicating the total number of animals used in the study in the Materials and Methods section.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Soegyono et a. describes a series of experiments designed to probe the involvement of dopamine D1 and D2 neurons within the nucleus accumbens shell in outcome-specific Pavlovian-instrumental transfer (osPIT), a well-controlled assay of cue-guided action selection based on congruent outcome associations. They used an optogenetic approach to phasically silence NAc shell D1 (D1-Cre mice) or D2 (A2a-Cre mice) neurons during a subset of osPIT trials. Both manipulations disrupted cue-guided action selection but had no effects on negative control measures/tasks (concomitant approach behavior, separate valued guided choice task), nor were any osPIT impairments found in reporter only control groups. Separate experiments revealed that selective inhibition of NAc shell D1 but not D2 inputs to ventral pallidum were required for osPIT expression, thereby advancing understanding of the basal ganglia circuitry underpinning this important aspect of decision making.

Strengths:

The combinatorial viral and optogenetic approaches used here were convincingly validated through anatomical tract-tracing and ex vivo electrophysiology. The behavioral assays are sophisticated and well-controlled to parse cue and value guided action selection. The inclusion of reporter only control groups is rigorous and rules out nonspecific effects of the light manipulation. The findings are novel and address a critical question in the literature. Prior work using less decisive methods had implicated NAc shell D1 neurons in osPIT but suggested that D2 neurons may not be involved. The optogenetic manipulations used in the current study provides a more direct test of their involvement and convincingly demonstrate that both populations play an important role. Prior work had also implicated NAc shell connections to ventral pallidum in osPIT, but the current study reveals the selective involvement of D1 but not D2 neurons in this circuit. The authors do a good job of discussing their findings, including their nuanced interpretation that NAc shell D2 neurons may contribute to osPIT through their local regulation of NAc shell microcircuitry.

Weaknesses:

The current study exclusively used an optogenetic approach to probe the function of D1 and D2 NAc shell neurons. Providing a complementary assessment with chemogenetics or other appropriate methods would strengthen conclusions, particularly the novel demonstration for D2 NAc shell involvement. Likewise, the null result of optically inhibiting D2 inputs to ventral pallidum leaves open the possibility that a more complete or sustained disruption of this pathway may have impaired osPIT.

Conclusions:

The research described here was successful in providing critical new insights into the contributions of NAc D1 and D2 neurons in cue-guided action selection. The authors' data interpretation and conclusions are well reasoned and appropriate. They also provide a thoughtful discussion of study limitations and implications for future research. This research is therefore likely to have a significant impact on the field.

Comments on revisions:

I have reviewed the rebuttal and revised manuscript and have no remaining concerns.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In the current article, Octavia Soegyono and colleagues study "The influence of nucleus accumbens shell D1 and D2 neurons on outcome-specific Pavlovian instrumental transfer", building on extensive findings from the same lab. While there is a consensus about the specific involvement of the Shell part of the Nucleus Accumbens (NAc) in specific stimulus-based actions in choice settings (and not in General Pavlovian instrumental transfer - gPIT, as opposed to the Core part of the NAc), mechanisms at the cellular and circuitry levels remain to be explored. In the present work, using sophisticated methods (rat Cre-transgenic lines from both sexes, optogenetics, and the well-established behavioral paradigm outcome-specific PIT-sPIT), Octavia Soegyono and colleagues decipher the diNerential contribution of dopamine receptors D1 and D2 expressing spiny projection neurons (SPNs). 

After validating the viral strategy and the specificity of the targeting (immunochemistry and electrophysiology), the authors demonstrate that while both NAc Shell D1- and D2SPNs participate in mediating sPIT, NAc Shell D1-SPNs projections to the Ventral Pallidum (VP, previously demonstrated as crucial for sPIT), but not D2-SPNs, mediates sPIT. They also show that these eNects were specific to stimulus-based actions, as valuebased choices were left intact in all manipulations. 

This is a well-designed study, and the results are well supported by the experimental evidence. The paper is extremely pleasant to read and adds to the current literature.

We thank the Reviewer for their positive assessment. 

Reviewer 2 (Public Review):

Summary: 

This manuscript by Soegyono et al. describes a series of experiments designed to probe the involvement of dopamine D1 and D2 neurons within the nucleus accumbens shell in outcome-specific Pavlovian-instrumental transfer (osPIT), a well-controlled assay of cueguided action selection based on congruent outcome associations. They used an optogenetic approach to phasically silence NAc shell D1 (D1-Cre mice) or D2 (A2a-Cre mice) neurons during a subset of osPIT trials. Both manipulations disrupted cue-guided action selection but had no eNects on negative control measures/tasks (concomitant approach behavior, separate valued guided choice task), nor were any osPIT impairments found in reporter-only control groups. Separate experiments revealed that selective inhibition of NAc shell D1 but not D2 inputs to ventral pallidum was required for osPIT expression, thereby advancing understanding of the basal ganglia circuitry underpinning this important aspect of decision making.

Strengths: 

The combinatorial viral and optogenetic approaches used here were convincingly validated through anatomical tract-tracing and ex vivo electrophysiology. The behavioral assays are sophisticated and well-controlled to parse cue and value-guided action selection. The inclusion of reporter-only control groups is rigorous and rules out nonspecific eNects of the light manipulation. The findings are novel and address a critical question in the literature. Prior work using less decisive methods had implicated NAc shell D1 neurons in osPIT but suggested that D2 neurons may not be involved. The optogenetic manipulations used in the current study provide a more direct test of their involvement and convincingly demonstrate that both populations play an important role. Prior work had also implicated NAc shell connections to ventral pallidum in osPIT, but the current study reveals the selective involvement of D1 but not D2 neurons in this circuit. The authors do a good job of discussing their findings, including their nuanced interpretation that NAc shell D2 neurons may contribute to osPIT through their local regulation of NAc shell microcircuitry. 

We thank the Reviewer for their positive assessment. 

Weaknesses: 

The current study exclusively used an optogenetic approach to probe the function of D1 and D2 NAc shell neurons. Providing a complementary assessment with chemogenetics or other appropriate methods would strengthen conclusions, particularly the novel demonstration of D2 NAc shell involvement. Likewise, the null result of optically inhibiting D2 inputs to the ventral pallidum leaves open the possibility that a more complete or sustained disruption of this pathway may have impaired osPIT.

We acknowledge the reviewer's valuable suggestion that demonstrating NAc-S D1- and D2-SPNs engagement in outcome-specific PIT through another technique would strengthen our optogenetic findings. Several approaches could provide this validation. Chemogenetic manipulation, as the reviewer suggested, represents one compelling option. Alternatively, immunohistochemical assessment of phosphorylated histone H3 at serine 10 (P-H3) oMers another promising avenue, given its established utility in reporting striatal SPNs plasticity in the dorsal striatum (Matamales et al., 2020). We hope to complete such an assessment in future work since it would address the limitations of previous work that relied solely on ERK1/2 phosphorylation measures in NAc-S SPNs (Laurent et al., 2014). The manuscript was modified to report these future avenues of research (page 12). 

Regarding the null result from optical silencing of D2 terminals in the ventral pallidum, we agree with the reviewer's assessment. While we acknowledge this limitation in the current manuscript (page 13), we aim to address this gap in future studies to provide a more complete mechanistic understanding of the circuit.

Reviewer 3 (Public Review):

Summary:

The authors present data demonstrating that optogenetic inhibition of either D1- or D2MSNs in the NAc Shell attenuates expression of sensory-specific PIT while largely sparing value-based decision on an instrumental task. They also provide evidence that SS-PIT depends on D1-MSN projections from the NAc-Shell to the VP, whereas projections from D2-MSNs to the VP do not contribute to SS-PIT.

Strengths:

This is clearly written. The evidence largely supports the authors' interpretations, and these eNects are somewhat novel, so they help advance our understanding of PIT and NAc-Shell function.

We thank the Reviewer for their positive assessment. 

Weaknesses:

I think the interpretation of some of the eNects (specifically the claim that D1-MSNs do not contribute to value-based decision making) is not fully supported by the data presented.

We appreciate the reviewer's comment regarding the marginal attenuation of valuebased choice observed following NAc-S D1-SPN silencing. While this manipulation did produce a slight reduction in choice performance, the behavior remained largely intact. We are hesitant to interpret this marginal eMect as evidence for a direct role of NAc-S D1SPNs in value-based decision-making, particularly given the substantial literature demonstrating that NAc-S manipulations typically preserve such choice behavior (Corbit et al., 2001; Corbit & Balleine, 2011; Laurent et al., 2012). Furthermore, previous work has shown that NAc-S D1 receptor blockade impairs outcome-specific PIT while leaving value-based choice unaMected (Laurent et al., 2014). We favor an alternative explanation for our observed marginal reduction. As documented in Supplemental Figure 1, viral transduction extended slightly into the nucleus accumbens core (NAc-C), a region established as critical for value-based decision-making (Corbit et al., 2001; Corbit & Balleine, 2011; Laurent et al., 2012; Parkes et al., 2015). The marginal impairment may therefore reflect inadvertent silencing of a small number of  NAc-C D1-SPNs rather than a functional contribution from NAc-S D1-SPNs. Future studies specifically targeting larger NAc-C D1-SPN populations would help clarify this possibility and provide definitive resolution of this question.

Reviewer 1 (Recommendations for the Author):

My main concerns and comments are listed below.

(1) Could the authors provide the "raw" data of the PIT tests, such as PreSame vs Same vs PreDiNerent vs DiNerent? Could the authors clarify how the Net responding was calculated? Was it Same minus PreSame & DiNerent minus PreDiNerent, or was the average of PreSame and PreDiNerent used in this calculation?

The raw data for PIT testing across all experiments are now included in the Supplemental Figures (Supplemental Figures S1E, S2E, S3E, and S4E). Baseline responding was quantified as the average number of lever presses per minute for both actions during the two-minute period (i.e., average of PreSame and PreDiMerent) preceding each stimulus presentation. This methodology has been clarified in the revised manuscript (page 7).

(2) While both sexes are utilized in the current study, no statistical analysis is provided. Can the authors please comment on this point and provide these analyses (for both training and tests)?

As noted in the original manuscript, the final sample sizes for female and male rats were insuMicient to provide adequate statistical power for sex-based analyses (page 15). To address this limitation, we have now cited a previous study from our laboratory (Burton et al., 2014) that conducted such analyses with suMicient power in identical behavioural tasks. That study identified only marginal sex diMerences in performance, with female rats exhibiting slightly higher magazine entry rates during Pavlovian conditioning. Importantly, no diMerences were observed in outcome-specific PIT or value-based choice performance between sexes.

(3) Regarding Figure 1 - Anterograde tracing in D1-Cre and A2a-Cre rats (from line 976), I have one major and one minor question:

(3.1) I do not understand the rationale of showing anterograde tracing from the Dorsal Striatum (DS) as this region is not studied in the current work. Moreover, sagittal micrographs of D1-Cre and A2a-Cre would be relevant here. Could the authors please provide these micrographs and explain the rationale for doing tracing in DS?

We included dorsal striatum (DS) tracing data as a reference because the projection patterns of D1 and D2 SPNs in this region are well-established and extensively characterized, in contrast to the more limited literature on these cell types in the NAc-S. Regarding the comment about sagittal micrographs, we are uncertain of the specific concern as these images are presented in Figure 1B.

If the reviewer is requesting sagittal micrographs for NAc-S anterograde tracing, we did not employ this approach because: (1) the NAc-S and ventral pallidum are anatomically adjacent regions and (2) the medial-lateral coordinates of the ventral pallidum and lateral hypothalamus do not align optimally with those of the NAc-S, limiting the utility of sagittal analysis for these projections.

(3.2) There is no description about how the quantifications were done: manually? Automatically? What script or plugin was used? If automated, what were the thresholding conditions? How many brain sections along the anteroposterior axis? What was the density of these subpopulations? Can the authors include a methodological section to address this point?

We apologize for the omission of quantification methods used to assess viral transduction specificity. This methodological description has now been added to the revised manuscript (page 22). Briefly, we employed a manual procedure in two sections per rat, and cell counts were completed in a defined region of interest located around the viral infusion site.

(4) Lex A & Hauber (2008) Dopamine D1 and D2 receptors in the nucleus accumbens core and shell mediate Pavlovian-instrumental transfer. Learning & memory 15:483- 491, should be cited and discussed. It also seems that the contribution of the main dopaminergic source of the brain, the ventral tegmental area, is not cited, while it has been investigated in PIT in at least 3 studies regarding sPIT only, notably the VP-VTA pathway (Leung & Balleine 2015, accurately cited already).

We did not include the Lex & Hauber (2008) study because its experimental design (single lever and single outcome) prevents diMerentiation between the eMects of Pavlovian stimuli on action performance (general PIT) versus action selection (outcome-specific PIT, as examined in the present study). Drawing connections between their findings and our results would require speculative interpretations regarding whether their observed eMects reflect general or outcome-specific PIT mechanisms, which could distract from the core findings reported in the article.

Several studies examining the role of the VTA in outcome-specific PIT were referenced in the manuscript's introduction. Following the reviewer's recommendation, these references have also been incorporated into the discussion section (page 13). 

(5) While not directly the focus of this study, it would be interesting to highlight the accumbens dissociation between General vs Specific PIT, and how the dopaminergic system (diNerentially?) influences both forms of PIT.

We agree with the reviewer that the double dissociation between nucleus accumbens core/shell function and general/specific PIT is an interesting topic. However, the present manuscript does not examine this dissociation, the nucleus accumbens core, or general PIT. Similarly, our study does not directly investigate the dopaminergic system per se. We believe that discussing these topics would distract from our core findings and substantially increase manuscript length without contributing novel data directly relevant to these areas. 

(6) While authors indicate that conditioned response to auditory stimuli (magazine visits) are persevered in all groups, suggesting intact sensitivity to the general motivational properties of reward-predictive stimuli (lines 344, 360), authors can't conclude about the specificity of this behavior i.e. does the subject use a mental representation of O1 when experiencing S1, leading to a magazine visits to retrieve O1 (and same for S2-O2), or not? Two food ports would be needed to address this question; also, authors should comment on the fact that competition between instrumental & pavlovian responses does not explain the deficits observed.

We agree with the Reviewer that magazine entry data cannot be used to draw conclusions about specificity, and we do not make such claims in our manuscript. We are therefore unclear about the specific concern being raised. Following the Reviewer’s recommendation, we have commented on the fact that response competition could not explain the results obtained (page 11, see also supplemental discussion). 

The minor comments are listed below.

(7) A high number of rats were excluded (> 32 total), and the number of rats excluded for NAc-S D1-SPNs-VP is not indicated.

We apologize for omitting the number of rats excluded from the experiment examining NAc-S D1-SPN projections to the ventral pallidum. This information has been added to the revised manuscript (page 22).

(7.1) Can authors please comment on the elevated number of exclusions?

A total of 133 rats were used across the reported experiments, with 40 rats excluded based on post-mortem analyses. This represents an attrition rate of approximately 30%, which we consider reasonable given that most animals received two separate viral infusions and two separate fiber-optic cannula implantations, and that the inclusion of both female and male rats contributed to some variability in coordinates and so targeting. 

(7.2) Can authors please present the performance of these animals during the tasks (OFF conditions, and for control ones, both ON & OFF conditions)?

Rats were excluded after assessing the spread of viral infusions, placement of fibre-optic cannulas and potential damage due to the surgical procedures (page 21). The requested data are presented below and plotted in the same manner as in Figures 3-6. The pattern of performance in excluded animals was highly variable. 

Author response image 1.

(8) For tracing, only males were used, and for electrophysiology, only females were used.

(8.1) Can authors please comment on not using both sexes in these experiments? 

We agree that equal allocation of female and male rats in the experiments presented in Figures 1-2 would have been preferable. Animal availability was the sole factor determining these allocations. Importantly, both female and male D1-Cre and A2A-Cre rats were used for the NAc-S tracing studies, and no sex diMerences were observed in the projection patterns. The article describing the two transgenic lines of rats did not report any sex diMerence (Pettibone et al., 2019). 

(8.2) Is there evidence in the literature that the electrophysiological properties of female versus male SPNs could diNer?

The literature indicates that there is no sex diMerence in the electrophysiological properties of NAc-S SPNs (Cao et al., 2018; Willett et al., 2016).  

(8.3) It seems like there is a discrepancy between the number of animals used as presented in the Figure 2 legend versus what is described in the main text. In the Figure legend, I understand that 5 animals were used for D1-Cre/DIO-eNpHR3.0 validation, and 7 animals for A2a-Cre/DIO-eNpHR3.0; however, the main text indicates the use of a total of 8 animals instead of the 12 presented in the Figure legend. Can authors please address this mismatch or clarify?

The number of rats reported in the main text and Figure 2 legend was correct. However, recordings sometimes involved multiple cells from the same animal, and this aspect of the data was incorrectly reported and generated confusion. We have clarified the numbers in both the main text and Figure 2 legend to distinguish between animal counts and cell counts. 

(9) Overall, in the study, have the authors checked for outliers?

Performance across all training and testing stages was inspected to identify potential behavioral outliers in each experiment. Abnormal performance during a single session within a multi-session stage was not considered suMicient grounds for outlier designation. Based on these criteria, no subjects remaining after post-mortem analyses exhibited performance patterns warranting exclusion through statistical outlier analysis. However, we have conducted the specific analyses requested by the Reviewer, as described below. 

(9.1) In Figure 3, it seems that one female in the eYFP group, in the OFF situation, for the diNerent condition, has a higher level of responding than the others. Can authors please confirm or refute this visual observation with the appropriate statistical analysis?

Statistical analysis (z-score) confirmed the reviewer's observation regarding responding of the diMerent action in the OFF condition for this subject (|z| = 2.58). Similar extreme responding was observed in the ON condition (|z| = 2.03). Analyzing responding on the diMerent action in isolation is not informative in the context of outcome-specific PIT. Additional analyses revealed |z| < 2 when examining the magnitude of choice discrimination in outcome-specific PIT (i.e., net same versus net diMerent responding) in both ON and OFF conditions. Furthermore, this subject showed |z| < 2 across all other experimental stages. Based on these analyses, we conclude that the subject should be kept in all analyses. 

(9.2) In Figure 5, it seems that one male, in the ON situation, in the diNerent condition, has a quite higher level of responding - is this subject an outlier? If so, how does it aNect the statistical analysis after being removed? And who is this subject in the OFF condition?

The reviewer has identified two diMerent male rats infused with the eNpHR3.0 virus and has asked closer examination of their performance.

The first rat showed outlier-level responding on the diMerent action in the ON condition (|z| = 2.89) but normal responding for all other measures across LED conditions (|z| < 2). Additional analyses revealed |z| = 2.55 when examining choice discrimination magnitude in outcome-specific PIT during the ON condition but not during the OFF condition (|z| = 0.62). This subject exhibited |z| < 2 across all other experimental stages.

The second rat showed outlier-level responding on the same action in the OFF condition (|z| = 2.02) but normal responding for all other measures across LED conditions (|z| < 2). Additional analyses revealed |z| = 2.12 when examining choice discrimination magnitude in outcome-specific PIT during the OFF condition but not during the ON condition (|z| = 0.67). This subject also exhibited |z| < 2 across all other experimental stages.

We excluded these two subjects and conducted the same analyses as described in the original manuscript. Baseline responding did not diMer between groups (p = 0.14), allowing to look at the net eMect of the stimuli. Overall lever presses were greater in the eYFP rats (Group: F(1,16) = 6.08, p < 0.05; η² = 0.28) and were reduced by LED activation (LED: F(1,16) = 9.52, p < 0.01; η² = 0.44) and this reduction depended on the group considered (Group x LED: F(1,16) = 12.125, p < 0.001; η² = 0.43). Lever press rates were higher on the action earning the same outcome as the stimuli compared to the action earning the diMerent outcome (Lever: F(1,16)= 49.32; η² = 0.76; p < 0.001), regardless of group (Group x Lever: p = 0.14). There was a Lever by LED light condition interaction (Lever x LED: F(1,16)= 5.25; η² = 0.24; p < 0.05) but no an interaction between group, LED light condition, and Lever during the presentation of the predictive stimuli (p = 0.10). Given the significant Group x LED and Lever x LED interactions, additional analyses were conducted to determine the source of these interactions. In eYFP rats, LED activation had no eMect (LED: p = 0.70) and lever presses were greater on the same action (Lever: (F(1,9) = 23.94, p < 0.001; η² = 0.79) regardless of LED condition (LED x Lever: p = 0.72). By contrast, in eNpHR3.0 rats, lever presses were reduced by LED activation (LED: F(1,9) = 23.97, p < 0.001; η² = 0.73), were greater on the same action (Lever: F(1,9) = 16.920, p < 0.001; η² = 0.65) and the two factors interacted (LED x Lever: F(1,9) = 9.12, p < 0.01; η² = 0.50). These rats demonstrated outcome-specific PIT in the OFF condition (F(1,9) = 27.26, p < 0.001; η² = 0.75) but not in the ON condition (p = 0.08).

Overall, excluding these two rats altered the statistical analyses, but both the original and revised analyses yielded the same outcome: silencing the NAc-S D1-SPN to VP pathway disrupted PIT. More importantly, we do not believe there are suMicient grounds to exclude the two rats identified by the reviewer. These animals did not display outlier-level responding across training stages or during the choice test. Their potential classification as outliers would be based on responding during only one LED condition and not the other, with notably opposite patterns between the two rats despite belonging to the same experimental group. 

(10) I think it would be appreciable if in the cartoons from Figure 5.A and 6.A, the SPNs neurons were color-coded as in the results (test plots) and the supplementary figures (histological color-coding), such as D1- in blue & D2-SPNs in red.

Our current color-coding system uses blue for D1-SPNs transduced with eNpHR3.0 and red for D2-SPNs transduced with eNpHR3.0. The D1-SPNs and D2-SPNs shown in Figures 5A and 6A represent cells transduced with either eYFP (control) or eNpHR3.0 virus and therefore cannot be assigned the blue or red color, which is reserved for eNpHR3.0transduced cells specifically. The micrographs in the Supplemental Figures maintain consistency with the color-coding established in the main figures.

(11) As there are (relatively small) variations in the control performance in term of Net responding (from ~3 to ~7 responses per min), I wonder what would be the result of pooling eYFP groups from the two first experiments (Figures 3 & 4) and from the two last ones (Figures 5 & 6) - would the same statically results stand or vary (as eYFP vs D1-Cre vs A2a-Cre rats)? In particular for Figures 3 & 4, with and without the potential outlier, if it's indeed an outlier.

We considered the Reviewer’s recommendation but do not believe the requested analysis is appropriate. The Reviewer is requesting the pooling of data from subjects of distinct transgenic strains (D1-Cre and A2A-Cre rats) that underwent surgical and behavioral procedures at diMerent time points, sometimes months apart. Each experiment was designed with necessary controls to enable adequate statistical analyses for testing our specific hypotheses. 

(12) Presence of cameras in operant cages is mentioned in methods, but no data is presented regarding recordings, though authors mention that they allow for real-time observations of behavior. I suggest removing "to record" or adding a statement about the fact that no videos were recorded or used in the present study.

We have removed “to record” from the manuscript (page 18). 

(13) In all supplementary Figures, "F" is wrongly indicated as "E".

We thank the Reviewer for reporting these errors, which have been corrected. 

(14) While the authors acknowledge that the eNicacy of optogenetic inhibition of terminals is questionable, I think that more details are required to address this point in the discussion (existing literature?). Maybe, the combination of an anterograde tracer from SPNs to VP, to label VP neurons (to facilitate patching these neurons), and the Credependent inhibitory opsin in the NAc Shell, with optogenetic illumination at the level of the VP, along with electrophysiological recordings of VP neurons, could help address this question but may, reasonably, seem challenging technically.

Our manuscript does not state that optogenetic inhibition of terminals is questionable. It acknowledges that we do not provide any evidence about the eMicacy of the approach. Regardless, we have provided additional details and suggestions to address this lack of evidence (page 13). 

(15) A nice addition could be an illustration of the proposed model (from line 374), but it may be unnecessary.

We have carefully considered the reviewer's recommendation. The proposed model is detailed in three published articles, including one that is freely accessible, which we have cited when presenting the model in our manuscript (page 14). This reference should provide interested readers with easy access to a comprehensive illustration of the model.

Reviewer 2 (Recommendations for the Author):

As noted in my public comments, this is a truly excellent and compelling study. I have only a few minor comments.

(1) I could not find the coordinates/parameters for the dorsal striatal AAV injections for that component of the tract tracing experiment.

We apologize for this omission, which has now been corrected (page 16). 

(2) Please add the final group sizes to the figure captions.

We followed the Reviewer’s recommendation and added group sizes in the main figure captions. 

(3) The discussion of group exclusions (p 21 line 637) seems to accidentally omit (n = X) the number of NAc-S D1-SPNs-VP mice excluded.

We apologize for this omission, which has now been corrected (page 22). 

(4) There were some labeling issues in the supplementary figures (perhaps elsewhere, too). Specifically, panel E was listed twice (once for F) in captions.

We apologize for this error, which has now been corrected.  

(5) Inspection of the magazine entry data from PIT tests suggests that the optogenetic manipulations may have had some eNects on this behavior and would encourage the authors to probe further. There was a significant group diNerence for D1-SPN inhibition and a marginal group eNect for D2-SPNs. The fact that these eNects were in opposite directions is intriguing, although not easily interpreted based on the canonical D1/D2 model. Of course, the eNects are not specific to the light-on trials, but this could be due to carryover into light-oN trials. An analysis of trial-order eNects seems crucial for interpreting these eNects. One might also consider normalizing for pre-test baseline performance. Response rates during Pavlovian conditioning seem to suggest that D2eNpHR mice showed slightly higher conditioned responding during training, which contrasts with their low entry rates at test. I don't see any of this as problematic -- but more should be done to interpret these findings.

We thank the reviewer for raising this interesting point regarding magazine entry rates. Since these data are presented in the Supplemental Figures, we have added a section in the Supplemental Material file that elaborates on these findings. This section does not address trial order eMects, as trial order was fully counterbalanced in our experiments and the relevant statistical analyses would lack adequate power. Baseline normalization was not conducted because the reviewer's suggestion was based on their assumption that eNpHR3.0 rats in the D2-SPNs experiment showed slightly higher magazine entries during Pavlovian training. However, this was not the case. In fact, like the eNpHR3.0 rats in the D1-SPNs experiment, they tended to display lower magazine entries during training. The added section therefore focuses on the potential role of response competition during outcome-specific PIT tests. Although we concluded that response competition cannot explain our findings, we believe it may complicate interpretation of magazine entry behavior. Thus, we recommend that future studies examine the role of NAc-S SPNs using purely Pavlovian tasks. It is worth nothing that we have recently completed experiments (unpublished) examining NAc-S D1- and D2-SPN silencing during stimulus presentation in a Pavlovian task identical to the one used here. Silencing of either SPN population had no eMect on magazine entry behavior.

Reviewer 3 (Recommendations for the Author):

Broad comments:

Throughout the manuscript, the authors draw parallels between the eNect established via pharmacological manipulations and those shown here with optogenetic manipulation. I understand using the pharmacological data to launch this investigation, but these two procedures address very diNerent physiological questions. In the case of a pharmacological manipulation, the targets are receptors, wherever they are expressed, and in the case of D2 receptors, this means altering function in both pre-synaptically expressed autoreceptors and post-synaptically expressed D2 MSN receptors. In the case of an optogenetic approach, the target is a specific cell population with a high degree of temporal control. So I would just caution against comparing results from these types of studies too closely.

Related to this point is the consideration of the physiological relevance of the manipulation. Under normal conditions, dopamine acts at D1-like receptors to increase the probability of cell firing via Ga signaling. In contrast, dopamine binding of D2-like receptors decreases the cell's firing probability (signaling via Gi/o). Thus, shunting D1MSN activation provides a clear impression of the role of these cells and, putatively, the role of dopamine acting on these cells. However, inhibiting D2-MSNs more closely mimics these cells' response to dopamine (though optogenetic manipulations are likely far more impactful than Gi signaling). All this is to say that when we consider the results presented here in Experiment 2, it might suggest that during PIT testing, normal performance may require a halting of DA release onto D2-MSNs. This is highly speculative, of course, just a thought worth considering.

We agree with the comments made by the Reviewer, and the original manuscript included statements acknowledging that pharmacological approaches are limited in the capacity to inform about the function of NAc-S SPNs (pages 4 and 9). As noted by the Reviewer, these limitations are especially salient when considering NAc-S D2-SPNs. Based on the Reviewer’s comment, we have modified our discussion to further underscore these limitations (page 12). Finally, we agree with the suggestion that PIT may require a halting of DA release onto D2-SPNs. This is consistent with the model presented, whereby D2-SPNs function is required to trigger enkephalin release (page 13).     

Section-Specific Comments and Questions:

Results:

Anterograde tracing and ex vivo cell recordings in D1 Cre and A2a Cre rats: Why are there no statistics reported for the e-phys data in this section? Was this merely a qualitative demonstration? I realize that the A2a-Cre condition only shows 3 recordings, so I appreciate the limitations in analyzing the data presented.

The reviewer is correct that we initially intended to provide a qualitative demonstration. However, we have now included statistical analyses for the ex vivo recordings. It is important to note that there were at least 5 recordings per condition, though overlapping data points may give the impression of fewer recordings in certain conditions. We have provided the exact number of recordings in both the main text (page 5) and figure legend. 

What does trial by trial analysis look like, because in addition to the eNects of extinction, do you know if the responsiveness of the opsin to light stimulation is altered after repeated exposures, or whether the cells themselves become compromised in any way with repeated light-inhibition, particularly given the relatively long 2m duration of the trial.

The Reviewer raises an interesting point, and we provide complete trial-by-trial data for each experiment below. As identified by the Reviewer, there is some evidence for extinction, although it remained modest. Importantly, the data suggest that light stimulation did not aMect the physiology of the targeted cells. In eNpHR3.0 rats, performance across OFF trials remained stable (both for Same and DiMerent) even though they were preceded by ON trials, indicating no carryover eMects from optical stimulation.

Author response image 2.

The statistics for the choice test are not reported for eNpHR-D1-Cre rats, but do show a weakening of the instrumental devaluation eNect "Group x Lever x LED: F1,18 = 10.04, p < 0.01, = 0.36". The post hoc comparisons showed that all groups showed devaluation, but it is evident that there is a weakening of this eNect when the LED was on (η² = 0.41) vs oN (η² = 0.78), so I think the authors should soften the claim that NAcS-D1s are not involved in value-based decision-making. (Also, there is a typo in the legend in Figure S1, where the caption for panel "F" is listed as "E".) I also think that this could be potentially interesting in light of the fact that with circuit manipulation, this same weakening of the instrumental devaluation eNect was not observed. To me, this suggests that D1-NAcS that project to a diNerent region (not VP) contribute to value-based decision making.

This comment overlaps with one made in the Public Review, for which we have already provided a response. Given its importance, we have added a section addressing this point in the supplemental discussion of the Supplementary Material file, which aligns with the location of the relevant data. The caption labelling error has been corrected.

Materials and Methods:

Subjects:

Were these heterozygous or homozygous rats? If hetero, what rats were used for crossbreeding (sex, strain, and vendor)? Was genotyping done by the lab or outsourced to commercial services? If genotyping was done within the lab, please provide a brief description of the protocol used. How was food restriction established and maintained (i.e., how many days to bring weights down, and was maintenance achieved by rationing or by limiting ad lib access to food for some period in the day)?

The information requested by the Reviewer have been added to the subjects section (pages 15-16).  

Were rats pair/group housed after implantation of optic fibers?

We have clarified that rats were group houses throughout (see subjects section; pages 15-16). 

Behavioral Procedures:

How long did each 0.2ml sucrose infusion take? For pellets, for each US delivery, was it a single pellet or two in quick succession?

We have modified the method section to indicate that the sucrose was delivered across 2 seconds and that a single pellet was provided (page 17). 

The CS to ITI duration ratio is quite low. Is there a reason such a short ratio was used in training?

These parameters are those used in all our previous experiments on outcome-specific PIT. There is no specific reason for using such a ratio, except that it shortens the length of the training session. 

Relative to the end of training, when were the optical implantation surgeries conducted, and how much recovery time was given before initiating reminder training and testing?

Fibre-optic implantation was conducted 3-4 days after training and another 3-4 days were given for recovery. This has been clarified in the Materials and methods section (pages 15-16).

I think a diagram or schematic showing the timeline for surgeries, training, and testing would be helpful to the audience.

We opted for a text-based experimental timeline rather than a diagram due to slight temporal variations across experiments (page 15).

On trials, when the LED was on, was light delivered continuously or pulsed? Do these opto-receptors 'bleach' within such a long window?

We apologize for the lack of clarity; the light was delivered continuously. We have modified the manuscript (pages 6 and 19) and figure legend accordingly. The postmortem analysis did not provide evidence for photobleaching (Supplemental Figures) and as noted above, the behavioural results do not indicate any negative physiological impact on cell function.  

Immunofluorescence: The blocking solution used during IHC is described as "NHS"; is this normal horse serum?

The Reviewer is correct; NHS stands for normal horse serum. This has been added (page 21). 

Microscopy and imaging:

For the description of rats excluded due to placement or viral spread problems, an n=X is listed for the NAc S D1 SPNs --> VP silencing group. Is this a typo, or was that meant to read as n=0? Also, was there a major sex diNerence in the attrition rate? If so, I think reporting the sex of the lost subjects might be beneficial to the scientific community, as it might reflect a need for better guidance on sex-specific coordinates for targeting small nuclei.

We apologize for the error regarding the number of excluded animals. This error has been corrected (page 23). There were no major sex diMerences in the attrition rate. The manuscript has been updated to provide information about the sex of excluded animals (page 23). 

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eLife Assessment

This study provides important evidence that negative affect is associated with slower cognitive processing in daily life, with findings replicated across three independent samples and supported by rigorous statistical analyses. The strength of evidence is convincing, though reliance on a proxy measure of processing speed limits the completeness of the conclusions.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

A study researching the relationship between affective shifts and cognitive performance in a daily life setting.

Strengths:

The evidence provided is compelling: the findings are conceptually replicated in three samples of adequate size and statistical rigor in analyzing the data, with methods beyond the current state of the art in applied research. For example, using two-step multilevel vector autoregressive models that were adopted to allow the inclusion of covariates, and contemporaneous effects corrected for temporal relations and background covariates. In addition, the authors use beautiful visualizations to convey the different samples used (Figure 1) and intuitive and rich figures to convey their obtained results.

In summary, the authors were able to convincingly show that higher negative affect is linked to slower cognitive processing speed, with results supporting their conclusions.

Weaknesses:

I have one major concern. Although a check for careless responding has been conducted on the basis of long reaction times, I wonder whether, beyond long response times, any other sanity checks with respect to, e.g., careless responding were done? For example, a lack of variability of EMA items over subsequent occasions, e.g., say 15, is often seen as an indicator of careless responding, especially when using VAS items. In line 693, it is stated, "We added a small amount of random noise, ranging from -0.1 to +0.1, to each EMA time series to allow models to converge when EMA time series showed minimal variance over time", which I understand, but this lack of variability could also be caused by participants stopping to take the study seriously. For datasets 1 and 2, this might be more difficult to assess (due to the limited response values), but maybe the authors can get an indication of this in dataset 3?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, Fittipaldi et al. assessed whether cognitive processing speed - as operationalized by the Digital Questionnaire Response Time (DQRT) - and affect (both positive and negative) are related in contemporaneous and temporaneous ways, both between and within-subject. At the between-person level, they found positive relationships with DQRT and negative affect, and the opposite for positive affect. This was similar at the within-subject contemporaneous level.

The authors further test Granger-causality in the dynamics, for both Affect -> DQRT and DQRT -> Affect. They find that affect and t-1 is associated with DQRT in the same manner as in the other models (positively for negative affect, and negatively for positive affect). Interestingly, DQRT -> Affect was largely non-significant for most affect items.

This study adds important information on the associations between affect and cognitive measures outside the lab, showcasing a methodological approach to translate laboratory research to new contexts.

Strengths

Overall, this study has a strong methodological approach, which is commendable. The use of three independent samples with different affective measures is a good way to showcase the validity of the findings. The multi-level modelling approach is also done thoroughly and appropriately within the context of MLVAR modelling. The findings are also well visualized, making it easy to follow along with the interconnected and potentially confusing analyses.

Weaknesses

The authors use the DQRT as a measure of cognitive processing, which isn't fully validated or substantiated as such. The authors do address this as a limitation, but I believe it warrants a much broader discussion, as the construct being assessed may not be the construct intended by the authors. This makes it difficult to ascertain whether the conclusion drawn (that affect impacts cognitive function) is valid. I would rather frame it that there are associations between affect and response times, which can indicate many different things, be it potentially careless responding or other mechanisms at play.

That's what I do on TikTok every day!

eddy driven jet stuff

Już pojedyńcza interwencja z body scanem pomogła zwiększyć HRV u młodych dorosłych. Co pokazuje, że istnieje jakiś mechanizm przez który HRV może wzrastac.

Mindfulness, bofeedback HRV i ćwiczenia fizyczne mogą mieć jakaś wspólna ukrytą zmienną, która podnosi HRV

благочестивый дуб

хехе

тело = стечение стихий

палингенесия

НОВОЕ ТЕЛО (покрывало из Федона)

АПОКАТАСТАСИС

зла не будет вовсе

метафора плавления

ВОТ!

мучения

снова "Пир"

неоплатонизм

у Бога нет памяти!

в единении нет вожделения

и надежды и веры нет...

гвозди пристрастия

надежда и память связаны с земным пребыванием души

это интересная мысль, получается в мире есть запас стихий, но никакого круговорота

богопознание

а это "Пир"

опять душа как сила

после смерти ничего не хочется

это тоже "Федон"

упражнение в смерти, "Федон"

плотское пристрастие, "Федон"

бесплотное состояние души!

жизнь = море

лоно авраамово = благое состояние души

что такое добро

два рода жизни

до грехопадения

ад следует понимать духовно

интересная мысль, получается в мире есть запас стихий, но нет круговорота

все равно его не брошу, потому что он хороший!

это люди)

дергает за веревочки!

душа навсегда в своих стихиях, но где же тогда смерть?

тело как собственность души

стихии соединяются вновь

воскресение ТЕЛЕСНО

душа узнает стихии и "держится" их

определение воскресения

душа-художница

душа не исчезает

интересно, что она не упоминает движение вокруг оси

"Федон"

польза раздражения (это видимо thymos?)

вот кстати да!

повторение сказанного выше

АПОКАТАСТАСИС

т.е. отделение есть?

небесное - земное - преисподнее

Аид - это не место!

видимо, была точка зрения, что они в другое полушарие отправляются?

ну ок...

безразличие порывов

польза вожделений

describes the lessons to be learned from post-war Bosnia: equality is contested concept and that dif groups and reps are very aware of dangers of exclusion and discrimination, inclusion of some groups might lead to exclusion and institutions to include may turn out ot be exclusive and discriminatory, and necessity for time to adapt and be flexible. other post-conflict situtations interact with this issue of equality so to address the author argues it needs, precise constitutional mechs and protection of certain rights and that they need to be allowed to change/evolve over time

B&H has most complicated pol system because it combines mutli-d federal system with power-sharing amongst elites form three constituent peoples. its institutional framework served to end the 1992-1995 war and lay foundation for elite cooperation and fed.

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Always a lot of questions about this part about how far out to search for genes - Might think to add a subquestion, how far does it make sense to look, then telling them to look at the 2 closest ones at each side

the immediate recognition of the dismemberment from the US could also be from ideological differences as Milosevic was seen as a communist leader of serbia more than his nationalism that he shared with other Yugoslavian leaders. US was able to frame Serbia and Slovene-Croat as communist vs democracy.

an assumption that would connect EU and US in the quick dismemberment of Yugoslavia is realted to how powerful/large the Yugoslavian army was. additionally, its suspected that american recognition of the independence of B&H was becuase they were known to induce open warfare in Yugoslavia. plus, Bosnia had the highest concentration of military industries, therefore supporting the separation ensured a rapid debilitation for Yugoslavia

ohhh. *this is an assumption on their part

emphasises the international communities involvement with the Yugoslavian responsible disintegration of Yugoslavia. There was a mix of open political support and ready acceptance of the dismemberment of Yugoslavia.

describes the series of proclamations of independence from Slovenia and Croatia, the recognition and acceptance of Slovenia, Croatia, and B&H into the UN, the civil war that broke out amongst the disintegration that the European Union and US legally intervened with to turn it into an international conflict, and the UN Security Council imposing sanctions on Yugoslavia.

wow two years

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Plug-in hybrid vehicles (PHEVs) are not as environmentally friendly as previously claimed, according to recent EU data.

• Real-world emissions from PHEVs average 135 g CO₂/km, only 19% less than conventional petrol and diesel cars which average 166 g CO₂/km.
• Official WLTP tests significantly underestimate emissions; PHEVs often run on the combustion engine, even in electric mode, increasing real fuel consumption.
• In electric-only mode, PHEVs still burn around 3 liters of petrol per 100 km, resulting in emissions of 68 g CO₂/km—over eight times higher than manufacturers’ claims.
• Hidden fuel consumption costs drivers approximately 500 euros per year more than official manufacturer data suggests.
• PHEVs are among the most expensive on the market; average price in 2025 in Germany, France and the UK is 55,700 euros, about 15,000 euros higher than average battery-only electric cars.
• Increasing electric range through larger batteries does not reduce emissions; heavier vehicles consume more fuel and energy overall.
• PHEVs with electric ranges above 75 km emit more CO₂ on average than those with ranges of 45–75 km.
• The biggest discrepancies are noted for Mercedes-Benz plug-in hybrids; in 2023, their real emissions exceeded official figures by an average of 494%, with the GLE-Class over by 611%.
• Automotive industry is lobbying to have PHEVs recognized as low-emission beyond 2035, despite new EU regulations that require the transition to zero-emission vehicles.
• Weakening EU regulations could undermine the development and adoption of truly zero-emission technologies.
• According to Transport & Environment, plug-in hybrids are “one of the biggest myths in motoring,” often emitting almost as much as combustion-engine cars and much more than test results indicate.
• EEA and T&E data casts doubt on PHEVs as effective solutions for transportation decarbonization; their environmental benefits are increasingly questioned.

I think whether violating privacy of users is good or bad depends on the purpose of doing that. Some social media companies violate users' privacy because they want to make sure the users' actions on the platform are legal. There are so many fake accounts and scams on the social media, so some companies might violate these users' privacy in order to protect other users from being victimized. But like we learned from last chapter, one of the main goal of social medias is to increase the time users spend on their platforms. And I think they also want users on their platforms to be as more as possible. So they might collect users and non-users' data and analyze these data without getting permission.

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непонятно почему 1. как-будто и там и там мы передаём его столько раз, сколько всего процессов. То есть экономия не насколько сильная

не очень понятно как это должно рабоать. Сначала мы говорим что если несколько пользователей смотрят один порт, он может гарантировать доставку только до одного из них, а потом что всё взаимодействие группы строится вокруг одного порта, который могут также читать снаружи. как-будто это не очень удобный метод

Если честно, не очень понял как конкретно будет выглядеть accept message. Мы же должны как-то по его содержанию понять на какое именно сообщение мы отослали accept message. Мне сразу подумалось, что можно дополнительно ввести хеш-функцию для сообщений и вместе с sqeuence number'ом отправлять в accept message ещё и хеш сообщения, которое мы хотим заакцептить. Тогда узлы, принимающие accept message смогут понять, на какое именно сообщение пришло подтверждение от sequencer'а.

Compare this with the limit notation introduced in Chapter 5 below the definition of continuity.

eLife Assessment

This important work develops the C. elegans as a model organism for studying effort-based discounting by asking the worms to choose between patches of easy and hard to digest bacteria. The authors provide convincing evidence that the nematodes are effort discounting. They also provide solid evidence of involvement of dopamine in the food preference and that the finding is not restricted to lab-acclimated strains.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Millet et al. show that C. elegans systematically prefers easy-to-eat bacteria but will switch its choice when harder-to-eat bacteria are offered at higher densities, producing indifference points that fit standard economic discounting models. Detailed kinetic analysis reveals that this bias arises from unchanged patch-entry rates but significantly elevated exit rates on effortful food, and dop-3 mutants lose the preference altogether, implicating dopamine in effort sensitivity. These findings extend effort-discounting behavior to a simple nematode, pushing the phylogenetic boundary of economic cost-benefit decision-making.

Strengths:

Extends the well-characterized concept of effort discounting into C. elegans, setting a new phylogenetic boundary and opening invertebrate genetics to economic-behavior studies.

Elegant use of cephalexin-elongated bacteria to manipulate "effort" without altering nutritional or olfactory cues, yielding clear preference reversals and reproducible indifference points.

Application of standard discounting models to predict novel indifference points is both rigorous and quantitatively satisfying, reinforcing the interpretation of worm behavior in economic terms.

The three-state patch-model cleanly separates entry and exit dynamics, showing that increased leaving rates-rather than altered re-entry-drive choice biases.

Demonstrates that _dop-3_ mutants lose normal effort discounting, firmly tying monoaminergic signaling to this behavior and paralleling vertebrate findings.

Demonstration of discounting in wild strain (solid evidence).

Weaknesses:

Only _dop-3_ shows an effect, whereas _cat-2_/_dat-1_ do not, leaving the broader role of dopamine synthesis and reuptake ambiguous.

With only five wild isolates tested, and only one clearly showing clear evidence of preference for the easy to eat bacteria, it's hard to conclude that effort discounting isn't a lab-strain artifact or how broadly it varies in natural populations.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Here Millet et al. adapted a t-maze paradigm for use in C. elegans to understand whether nematodes exhibit effort discounting behaviors comparable to other species. C. elegans worms were reliably sensitive to how effortful the food was to consume, allowing for the application of standard economic models of decision-making to be applied to their behavior. The authors then demonstrated the necessity of dopamine signaling for this behavior, identifying dop-3 mutants in particular as insensitive to effort. Together, this work establishes a new model system for the study of discounting behavior in cost-benefit decision-making.

Strengths:

The question is well-motivated and the approach taken here is novel; it is uncommon for worms to undergo such behavioural procedures (although this lab has previously been integral to pushing the extent of the complexity of behaviours studied in C. elegans). The authors are careful in their approach to altering and testing the properties of the elongated bacteria. Similarly, they go to some effort to understand what exactly is driving behavioural choices in this context, both through application of simple standard models of effort discounting and a kinetic analysis of patch leaving. The comparisons to various dopamine mutants further extends the translational potential of their findings. I also appreciate the comparison to natural isolate strains as the question of whether this behaviour may be driven by some sort of strain-specific adaptation to the environment is not regularly addressed in mammalian counterparts to this work.

Weaknesses:

The authors have now addressed concerns about whether the mechanisms underlying the choice behavior here are generalizable to other organisms. Specifically, their work speaks to foraging-inspired effort discounting paradigms in rodents and humans in which the decision is whether to stay or leave a given resource, rather than to simultaneous decision-making across two options in a T-maze.

The dopamine results are interesting but still difficult to interpret. As the authors discuss, the lack of an effect in the cat-2 and dat-1 mutants is surprising given the effect in the dop-3 mutants. Understanding what exactly the role of dop-3 is here therefore requires further study.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors establish a behavioral task to explore effort discounting in C. elegans. By using bacterial food that takes longer to consume, the authors show that for equivalent effort, as measured by pumping rate, animals obtain less food, as measured by fat deposition.

The authors formalize the task by applying a neuroeconomic decision making model that includes, value, effort, and discounting. They use this to estimate the discounting C. elegans apply based on ingestion effort by using a population level 2-choice T-maze.

They then analyze the behavioral dynamics of individual animals transitioning between on-food and off-food states. Harder to ingest bacteria led to increased food patch leaving.

Finally, they examined a set of mutants defective in different aspects of dopamine signaling, as dopamine plays a key role in discounting in vertebrates and regulates certain aspects of C. elegans foraging.

In their response to the first set of reviews, the authors take care to ensure their task is analogous to at least some of those used in mammals and make changes to the text to better clarify some of their conclusions. My view is the same--that this is an interesting paper for methodological and scientific reasons that brings an important theoretical framework to bear on C. elegans foraging behavior. While I think the mutant results are somewhat unsatisfying, this is not the principal contribution of the work.

Strengths:

The behavioral experiments and neuroeconomic analysis framework are compelling and interesting and make a significant contribution to the field. While these foraging behaviors have been extensively studied, few include clearly articulated theoretical models to be tested.

Demonstrating that C. elegans effort discounting fits model predictions and has stable indifference points is important for establishing these tasks as a model for decision making.

Weaknesses:

The dopamine experiments are harder to interpret. The authors point out the perplexing lack of an effect of dat-1 and cat-2. dop-3 leads to general indifference. I am not sure this is the expected result if the argument is a parallel functional role to discounting in vertebrates. dop-3 causes a range of locomotor phenotypes and may affect feeding (reduced fat storage), and thus there may be a general defect in the ability to perform the task rather than anything specific to discounting.

That said, some of the other DA mutants also have locomotor defects and do not differ from N2. But there is no clear result here-my concern is that global mutants in such a critical pathway exhibit such pleiotropy that it's difficult to conclude there is a clear and specific role for DA in effort discounting. This would require more targeted or cell-specific approaches. The authors state these experiments are outside the scope of the current study, and that at minimum their results implicate dopamine signaling in some form. I tend to agree but still think locomotion defects of DA mutants complicate this question.

Meanwhile, there are other pathways known to affect responses to food and patch leaving decisions-5HT, PDF, tyramine, etc. in their response the authors state they focus on dopamine because of its role in discounting behavior in mammals.

Author response:

The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

Reviewer #1(Public Reviews):

Summary: 

Here, Millet et al. consider whether the nematode C. elegans 'discounts' the value of reward due to effort in a manner similar to that shown in other species, including rodents and humans. They designed a T-maze effort choice paradigm inspired by previous literature, but manipulated how effortful the food is to consume.C. elegans worms were sensitive to this novel manipulation, exhibiting effort-discountinglike behaviour that could be shaped by varying the density of food at each alternative in order to calculate an indifference point. This discounting-like behaviour was related to worms' rates of patch leaving, which differed between the low and high effort patches in isolation. The authors also found a potential relationship to dopamine signalling, and also that this discounting behaviour was not specific to lab-based strains of C. elegans . 

Strengths: 

The question is well-motivated, and the approach taken here is novel. The authors are careful in their approach to altering and testing the properties of the effortful, elongated bacteria. Similarly, they go to some effort to understand what exactly is driving behavioural choices in this context, both through the application of simple standard models of effort discounting and a kinetic analysis of patch leaving. The comparisons to various dopamine mutants further extend the translational potential of their findings. I also appreciate the comparison to natural isolate strains, as the question of whether this behaviour may be driven by some sort of strain-specific adaptation to the environment is not regularly addressed in mammalian counterparts. The manuscript is well-written, and the figures are clear and comprehensible. 

Weaknesses: 

Discounting is typically defined as the alteration of a subjective value by effort (or time, risk, etc.), which is then used to guide future decision-making. By adapting the standard t-maze task for C. elegans as a patch-leaving paradigm, the authors observe behaviour strongly consistent with discounting models, but that is likely driven by a different process, in particular by an online estimate of the type of food in the current patch, which then influences patch-leaving dynamics (Figure 3). This is fundamentally different from decision-making strategies relating to effort that have been described in the rodent and human literatures. 

We agree that in our study worms are likely making an on-line estimate of food quality in the current patch, but we wish to point out that rodents and humans also use on-line estimates in some significant effort-discounting paradigms. With respect to rodents, we call attention to effort discounting studies involving the widely used progressive ratio task (references in Discussion). In this task, animals can either lever-press for a preferred food or consume a less preferred food that is freely available nearby. However, the number of lever presses required to obtain preferred food increases as a function of the cumulative number of lever presses until the effort-cost of obtaining preferred food becomes too high and the animal switches to a freely available food. In essence, the lever and the freely available food are patches and the animal decides whether or not to leave the “lever” patch. It seems inescapable that the progressive ratio task involves an on-line assessment of the cost/benefit relationship associated with lever pressing. With respect to humans, one highly cited study (reference in Discussion) presented participants with a series of virtual apple trees. They could see how many apples are in the current tree and how much effort (squeezing a handgrip) is required to gather them. Their task was to decide whether or not to gather apples from that tree based on the perceived cost and benefit. Thus, on-line estimation is a common strategy used by animals and humans as shown in the effort discounting literature. We now make this point in the Discussion section titled A model of effort-discounting like behavior.

Similarly, the calculation of indifference points at the group instead of at the individual level also suggests a different underlying process and limits the translational potential of their findings. The authors do not discuss the implications of these differences or why they chose not to attempt a more analogous trial-based experiment.  

It is not clear to us why changing the read-out –– from the individual level to the population level –– necessarily suggests that a different biological mechanism is at work. In our view, there is one mechanism and it can be seen from different perspectives (e.g., individual vs population). Furthermore, the analogous trial-based experiment, as we understand it, would be to record behavior one worm at a time in the T-maze. This design is not practical because it entails recording a large number of single worms in the T-maze for 60 min each. 

In the case of both the dopamine and natural isolate experiments, the data are very noisy despite large (relative to other C. elegans experiments) sample sizes. In the dopamine experiment, disruption of dop1, dop-2, and cat-2 had no statistically significant effect. There do not appear to be any corrections for multiple comparisons, and the single significant comparison, for dop-3, had a small effect size. 

An ANOVA followed by a Dunnett test was used to test differences between groups in Fig. 4 and 5. The Dunnett test is a multiple comparison test comparing experimental groups to a single control group. It is used to minimize type I error while maintaining statistical power and does not require further correction for multiple comparisons. We have clarified the use of the Dunnett test in the statistical table.  The effect size for dop-3 is 0.5 (Cohen’s d), which is typically interpreted as a medium, not small, effect size.(e.g. Cohen, Psychological Bulletin, 1992, Vol. 112. No. 1,155-159). 

More detailed behavioural analyses on both these and the wild isolate strains, for example by applying their kinetic analysis, would likely give greater insight as to what is driving these inconsistent effects. 

More detailed behavioral analysis could reveal why we observe a difference in effort discounting in some strains and not others. However, it is not obvious what type of behavioral analysis would be needed to differentiate between pleiotropic effects of the mutations/natural isolates and more specific effects on effort discounting. A simple kinetic analysis in particular may not be enough to reveal relevant differences between mutants/natural isolates. For this reason, we think that such experiments may be better suited for future follow up studies.

Reviewer #2 (Public Reviews)

Summary: 

Millet et al. show that C. elegans systematically prefers easy-to-eat bacteria but will switch its choice when harder-to-eat bacteria are offered at higher densities, producing indifference points that fit standard economic discounting models. Detailed kinetic analysis reveals that this bias arises from unchanged patch-entry rates but significantly elevated exit rates on effortful food, and dop-3 mutants lose the preference altogether, implicating dopamine in effort sensitivity. These findings extend effortdiscounting behavior to a simple nematode, pushing the phylogenetic boundary of economic costbenefit decision-making. 

Strengths: 

(1) Extends the well-characterized concept of effort discounting into C. elegans , setting a new phylogenetic boundary and opening invertebrate genetics to economic-behavior studies. 

(2) Elegant use of cephalexin-elongated bacteria to manipulate "effort" without altering nutritional or olfactory cues, yielding clear preference reversals and reproducible indifference points. 

(3) Application of standard discounting models to predict novel indifference points is both rigorous and quantitatively satisfying, reinforcing the interpretation of worm behavior in economic terms. 

(4) The three-state patch-model cleanly separates entry and exit dynamics, showing that increased leaving rates-rather than altered re-entry-drive choice biases. 

(5) Investigates the role of dopamine in this behavior to try to establish shared mechanisms with vertebrates. 

(6) Demonstration of discounting in wild strain (solid evidence). 

Weaknesses: 

(1) The kinetic model omits rich trajectory details-such as turning angles or hazard functions-that could distinguish a bona fide roaming transition from other exit behaviors. 

The overarching goal of present paper was to develop a simple model for effort discounting in a small, genetically tractable organism.  Accordingly,  we focused on quantitative assays that are easy to implement and analyze. The patch-leaving assay and its associated kinetic analysis are one such assay. To keep things simple in this assay, we counted the number of  transitions between the three states shown in Fig. 3A. We chose not to analyze the data in terms of turning angles or hazard functions because the metrics we developed seemed sufficient. Finally, we note that there are new modeling data showing that the presumptive transitions into the roaming state can be explained in terms of a one-state stochastic model in which there is no discrete roaming state (Elife. 2025 Jul 30;14:RP104972. doi:

10.7554/eLife.104972.PMID: 40736321).

(2) Only dop-3 shows an effect, and the statistical validity of this result is questionable. It is not clear if the authors corrected for multiple comparisons, and the effect size is quite small and noisy, given the large number of worms tested. Other mutants do not show effects. Given these two concerns, the role of dopamine in C. elegans effort discounting was unconvincing. 

An ANOVA followed by a Dunnett test was used to test statistical significance in figures 4 and 5 (see above for a discussion of these tests). We believe this approach is rigorous, and the use of these tests is statistically valid. We note that the effect size for this comparison was medium.

(3) With only five wild isolates tested (and variable data quality), it's hard to conclude that effort discounting isn't a lab-strain artifact or how broadly it varies in natural populations. 

The fact that four of the five natural isolates tested display levels of effort discounting similar to N2 (only one natural isolate does not display effort discounting) argues against effort discounting being a laboratory adaption.  We have nevertheless weakened the claim regarding natural isolates. We now say effort discounting-like behavior may not be an adaptation to the laboratory environment.  

(4) Detailed analysis of behavior beyond preference indices would strengthen the dopamine link and the claim of effort discounting in wild strains. 

Going beyond preference in the behavioral analysis might or might not reveal new phenotypes that strengthen the link with dopamine. At present, however, we think such experiments are beyond the scope of the paper.

(5) A few mechanistic statements (e.g., tying satiety exclusively to nutrient signals) would benefit from explicit citations or brief clarifications for non-worm specialists. 

We are unable to identify a mechanistic statement tying satiety to nutrient signals in our manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public Reviews)

Summary: 

The authors establish a behavioral task to explore effort discounting in C. eleganss . By using bacterial food that takes longer to consume, the authors show that, for equivalent effort, as measured by pumping rate, they obtain less food, as measured by fat deposition. The authors formalize the task by applying a formal neuroeconomic decision-making model that includes value, effort, and discounting. They use this to estimate the discounting that C. elegans applies based on ingestion effort by using a population-level 2-choice T-maze. They then analyze the behavioral dynamics of individual animals transitioning between on-food and off-food states. Harder to ingest bacteria led to increased food patch leaving. Finally, they examined a set of mutants defective in different aspects of dopamine signaling, as dopamine plays a key role in discounting in vertebrates and regulates certain aspects of C. elegans foraging. 

Strengths: 

The behavioral experiments and neuroeconomic analysis framework are compelling, interesting, and make a significant contribution to the field. While these foraging behaviors have been extensively studied, few include clearly articulated theoretical models to be tested. 

Demonstrating that C. elegans effort discounting fits model predictions and has stable indifference points is important for establishing these tasks as a model for decision making. 

Weaknesses: 

The dopamine experiments are harder to interpret. The authors point out the perplexing lack of an effect of dat-1 and cat-2. dop-3 leads to general indifference. I am not sure this is the expected result if the argument is a parallel functional role to discounting in vertebrates. dop-3 causes a range of locomotor phenotypes and may affect feeding (reduced fat storage), and thus, there may be a general defect in the ability to perform the task rather than anything specific to discounting.

That said, some of the other DA mutants also have locomotor defects and do not differ from N2. But there is no clear result here - my concern is that global mutants in such a critical pathway exhibit such pleiotropy that it's difficult to conclude there is a clear and specific role for DA in effort discounting. This would require more targeted or cell-specific approaches. 

We agree with the reviewer that the results of the dopamine experiments are puzzling and getting a better understanding of the role of dopamine in effort-discounting will require more sensitive assays and different experimental approaches (e.g. cell-specific rescues). However, as mentioned by the reviewer, all the mutations tested have some pleiotropic effects, yet only dop-3 displays a defect in effort discounting. This, in our opinion, points to a specific role of dop-3 in effort-discounting in C. elegans. This point is now made in the Discussion in the section titled Role of dopamine signaling in effort discountinglike behavior.

Meanwhile, there are other pathways known to affect responses to food and patch leaving decisions: serotonin, pigment-dispersing factor, tyramine, etc. The paper would have benefited from a clarification about why these were not considered as promising candidates to test (in addition to or instead of dopamine). 

We focused on DA because of its well-established effect on effort discounting in rodents.

Testing other pathways is a goal for future research.

Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

The current results are more a reframing of data gathered from a patch-leaving paradigm, but described in the form of economic choice modelling in which discounting is one possible explanation. One more parsimonious explanation that worms estimate in real-time some rate of reward and leave the patch at some threshold, consistent with canonical foraging models, previous experiments in C. elegans, and the authors' own data (Figure 3). Therefore, I am wary about some of the claims made in this manuscript, such as 'decision-making strategies based on effort-cost trade-offs are evolutionarily conserved'. 

These points are now addressed in the Discussion in a revised section titled A model of effortdiscounting like behavior. (i) We now call attention to the fact that our T-maze assay is a patch-leaving foraging paradigm. (ii) We now propose a revised model in which “worms make an on-line assessment of food value in the current patch which in turn alters patch-leaving dynamics, increasing the exit rates from cephalexin-treated patches as shown in Figure 3.” (iii) We now provide evidence from the rodent and human literature that the strategy of on-line assessment of reward value may be evolutionarily conserved in the case of a class of effort discounting tasks whose solution requires on-line assessments. 

If the reason the authors chose to do a patch-leaving style task rather than a traditional t-maze is because C. elegans is unable to retain the sort of information necessary to make such simultaneous decisions - e.g., if pre-training on the two options isn't possible - then this in itself suggests that mechanisms underlying these decisions in worms and mammals are unlikely to be the same. I mention this because I would like to suggest to the authors an alternative interpretation: that patch foraging is actually 'the' canonical computation that translates across species. This would, in fact, be nicely consistent with some other recent modelling work in humans, e.g., https://www.biorxiv.org/content/10.1101/2025.05.06.652482v1. 

Please see the previous response.

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

Can you provide a picture of the regular and CEPH bacteria? 

Done (see Figure 1––figure supplement 1).

Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

I would recommend testing representative mutants in other pathways in the choice task. If possible, more targeted experiments with dop-3, including either cell-specific KOs or rescues, would very much strengthen this aspect of the paper. 

While valuable, these experiments are out of scope for the present study.

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As such, the optimal cost for something is more of a psychological subjective function than an objective algorithmic process.

This obviously leaves aside the philosophical dimension of ethics.

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Referee #3

Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

Summary

The manuscript presents IGNITE (Inference of Gene Networks using Inverse kinetic Theory and Experiments), an unsupervised machine learning framework for constructing gene regulatory networks from single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) data. IGNITE utilizes a kinetic inverse Ising model to infer gene interactions from binarized expression data and can predict genetic perturbation effects, such as those from knockout experiments. Although the application of inverse Ising models to network reconstruction is not entirely novel, IGNITE's specific implementation and its application to single-cell RNA sequencing data represent a new development. The method is tested on the transition from naive to formative states in murine pluripotent stem cells, a system the authors are highly knowledgeable about, and its performance is compared to state-of-the-art alternative methods.

Major concerns

My concern regards the generality of the method, particularly the entire pipeline presented, and the fairness of the performance comparison. These concerns can be easily addressed by the authors by better explaining their choices and their general applicability, and by toning down the conclusions about the comparison with existing inference methods.

The pre-processing steps are extensive, and their rationale is not always clear, though the results heavily depend on this analysis. Several steps appear to involve arbitrary choices optimized for specific outcomes, potentially introducing biases. The authors should better explain the rationale behind their choices to mitigate these concerns.

Specifically, part of the pipeline seems to be built to reproduce a specific expression pattern of 24 genes that some of the authors discovered in a previous paper. Although this prior knowledge could be useful and relevant in this specific system, it could limit the generality of the method. For example, the authors selected approximately 2000 genes based on prior knowledge and used a combination of t-SNE and UMAP for dimensionality reduction (although the two techniques have a similar goal). This specific combination seems to reproduce the pseudotime alignment the authors were expecting to find, but such prior information might not be available in general. Therefore, feature selection and the methods used to project data need more justification, especially if the goal is to create a general tool applicable across different biological systems.

Analogously, the clustering seems manually adjusted to match known expression patterns of 24 relevant genes, rather than being the result of an optimized clustering method. Additionally, the clusters overlap with different time points, raising concerns about potential batch effects. These issues should be addressed to strengthen the validity of the method.

The claims about the comparison with existing methods should be toned down. While the comparisons are useful and interesting, they might be biased due to the method's fine-tuning for the specific system studied. The claim that the model requires only scRNA-seq data is misleading, as strong prior biological knowledge was used to select, for example, the genes analyzed.

Significance

The manuscript is scientifically sound, clearly written, and deserves publication. The proposed method is quantitative, novel, theoretically grounded, and was tested in detail with appropriate null models and statistical methods. Moreover, IGNITE can be applied to various biological systems as the availability of scRNA-seq datasets is continuously growing. The paper will be of interest to a broad community of computational biologists and biology labs interested in gene regulation using scRNA-seq data.

The limitation, in my opinion, is the method's (particularly the pre-processing pipeline) fine-tuning for the specific biological system tested. Testing IGNITE on another biological system without pre-selected pre-processing steps or detailed biological priors would be more convincing and make the paper's conclusions much stronger. The comparison with other methods also may be slightly biased due to this fine-tuning.

My background is in statistical physics, with expertise in biological physics, specifically in mathematical modeling and data analysis in molecular biology.

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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

Corridori et al introduce IGNITE, a computational framework to infer gene regulatory networks (GRNs) from scRNA-seq data leveraging the kinetic Ising model, which can be used to simulate synthetic gene expression and perform in-silico knockout experiments. Other similar frameworks exist, but none combine these three aspects together. The authors have generated a scRNA-seq of murine ESCs differentiation which they use to compare their method with others. Specifically they show that they can infer known regulatory interactions, that they can generate similar data than the original and that it can potentially predict gene expression changes in transcription factor knock-out perturbations.

Major comments:

• Many of the authors' claims are backed by qualitative results and not properly quantified. In Fig2, authors qualitatively compare intra gene correlations between genes for the original data and their prediction. Instead of just visualizing they should compute and report the Spearman correlation between the original expression and the predicted one. The Fraction of Agreement is not a good metric to compare knockout predictions since it is completely dependent on the class imbalance of signs, for example if the selected genes are 75% positive and 25% negative, a naive predictor that only outputs positive predictions will still have a high score. Instead, the authors should quantify this with Spearman correlation or RMSE and compare across methods. In FigS4a-b the authors qualitatively claim that other methods could not predict the expected cell composition, which they should quantify and report the values across methods. When comparing against the ground truth network, the fraction of correctly inferred interactions is technically the same as precision but is ignoring recall. I suggest the authors compute precision, recall and a combined F1 score to compare the evaluated methods. Authors claim that the method is scalable to a larger number of genes but no data is provided, they should show how their method compares to others when using a different number of cells and number of genes at memory usage and running time.
• The authors need to better describe which tests were performed when talking about significance, which thresholds and which corrections, if any, were employed.
• To reduce the number of dimensions of scRNA-seq data the authors use t-SNE and then from the obtained result UMAP to project the data into a lower dimensional space. This is fundamentally wrong since distances are not well preserved in t-SNE. Instead the authors should first employ PCA and then UMAP. Additionally, the authors use UMAP distances in the Slingshot pseudotime calculation. Similar to t-SNE, UMAP distances have no real meaning and should only be used for visualization purposes. Instead, the authors should provide Slingshot the obtained PCA embeddings.
• Dictys (PMID: 37537351) is a known GRN inference method that also can simulate gene expression but is missing in the benchmark, the authors should add it to the method comparison.
• The current manuscript is not reproducible since it is missing the method's code, the code to reproduce the figures and the generated scRNA-seq data.
• Authors claim that the method is scalable to a larger number of genes but no data is provided to back this claim. They should show how their method compares to others when using a different number of cells and number of genes.

Minor points:

• In the introduction, authors mention multimodal GRN inference methods but do not provide any references.
• In Table 1, CellOracle is annotated as not being able to do multiple KO which is wrong. Additionally, the authors mention that IGNITE uses no prior knowledge which is not really true since it requires pseudotime ordering. The authors should add a column to Table 1 whether methods require pseudotime.
• It is unclear what the dashed arrow of Fig1b means. Moreover, plotting gene expression values on top of UMAPs can be misleading, instead authors should plot the gene expression distributions binned by pseudotime.
• The authors report a p-value of 1.04x10-171 which is below detection limit (see PMID: 30921532). Authors should change it to an interval such as p < 2.2×10-16.
• To make CellOracle results easier to interpret and more comparable, authors should run it at the atlas level instead of at the cell type level, this way generating only one GRN. This can be achieved by assigning the same cluster label to all cells.
• Experimental values in FigS3b seem to have been repeated and do not match the previous ones for IGNITE and SCODE.
• It is unclear what the different circles mean in Fig5b.

Significance

This manuscript is an incremental and methodological work for specialized audiences. Its strengths are that the authors employ kinetic Ising model for GRN inference and that they provide a single framework capable of inferring, simulating and perturbing gene expression. The main limitations are that the claims should be better quantified and that the code and data need to be made accessible.

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Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

Summary

Corridori and colleagues propose IGNITE, a novel method to recover Gene Regulatory Networks (GRN) from single cell RNA-sequencing (scRNA-seq) data. Their method solves the inverse Ising problem generating a cohort of candidate GRN optimising it to minimise the difference to the input expression matrix. Authors report the IGNITE is able to predict wild type data and simulate both single and multiple gene knockouts. Authors benchmark this method on a in-house data set of differentiating pluripotent stem cells (PSC). They focus on a small set of genes known to be involved in PSC differentiation into formative cells. Authors benchmark IGNITE against state of the art tools (SCODE, MaxEnt and CELLORACLE). They evaluate IGNITE ability to predict wild type gene expression by comparing their data with experimental data and with SCODE. They conclude the tool has generative capacity comparable with SCODE. They also evaluate IGNITE ability to recover known interactions with respect to other tools without finding it to significantly outperform them.

Major comments

• Are the key conclusions convincing?

Conclusions appear convincing although model generalizability could be shown in a more thorough manner. For instance, analysing some other publicly available dataset could help demonstrate hyperparameters effects on GRN predictions and their robustness across different experiments. - Should the authors qualify some of their claims as preliminary or speculative, or remove them altogether?

Claims are well supported by data. - Would additional experiments be essential to support the claims of the paper? Request additional experiments only where necessary for the paper as it is, and do not ask authors to open new lines of experimentation.

I think the work would benefit from an additional benchmark on a different cellular system. This experiment would show how hyperparameters generalise across datasets and would provide potential users insights how to tweak them.

Also, how does the model scale with the number of genes? A benchmark on computation time and resources required to infer GRN of growing size would be valuable in the adoption of this tool.

In addition, I think the GRN comparison benchmark presented in section (3.4) would benefit from a quantitative discussion. Authors show inferred GRNs in Figure 4 and S5. For instance, measuring matrix similarity (when appropriate) would help understanding how predicted GRN compare. I understand authors attempt to do so by focusing on validated interactions and computing the fraction of correctly inferred interactions (FCI) but I think a measurement of the overall similarity (eg. Pearson correlation) would add on this.

Another comment regards the dependency between Correlation Matrices Distance (CMD) and FCI, shown in Figure 5. I understand that IGNITE GRN that maximise FCI are not the same that minimise CMD. However, it looks like GRN that maximise FCI have higher value in terms of biological information. I wonder whether optimization for one or the other metric could be left to the end user as a tunable parameter.

Authors should discuss why the expression of some genes does not follow the expected trends (Fig 1C vs Fig S1A). Out of the 24 genes they select for their analysis, at least four do not follow the expected trends: Sox2, according to literature, is a Naive gene, however, in Figure 1C its gene expression pattern is more similar to Formative late genes. Other genes with similar "unexpected" patterns are Zic3, Etv4 and Sall4.

Are the suggested experiments realistic in terms of time and resources? It would help if you could add an estimated cost and time investment for substantial experiments.

I think suggested experiments are doable as long as authors get publicly available data, i.e. the in-house dataset they generated for this study is enough to show applicability. For example datasets analysed in SCODE paper (https://doi.org/10.1093/bioinformatics/btx194) could be used as second benchmark. The point of applying the tool to another dataset is to show how it generalises across different biological systems, experiments and, potentially, sequencing technologies. - Are the data and the methods presented in such a way that they can be reproduced?

The methods section is really clear. To enable reproducibility both raw scRNA-seq data, the IGNITE source code and code written to benchmark it should be released in the public domain in appropriate repositories (eg. ENA, GitHub, Binder etc). - Are the experiments adequately replicated and statistical analysis adequate?

Yes.

Minor comments

• Specific experimental issues that are easily addressable.

Related to the Sox2 expression pattern is the binarization shown in Figure 2D. How is it possible that Sox2 is always marked as active? Could the authors clarify how these outlier behaviours emerge and propose mitigation strategies, if any?

In section 5.11.2 it is unclear if xi are in log scale or not. Since the model starts from binarized, log transformed expression values, should not generated ones be in the same scale as the input? - Are prior studies referenced appropriately?

Yes, referencing is clear. - Are the text and figures clear and accurate?

Yes, figures appear to be clear, readable and well documented both in captions and main text. - Do you have suggestions that would help the authors improve the presentation of their data and conclusions?

Section 3.3 could be improved by better describing experimental datasets. Only in the methods section it is clearly stated that experimental data for single KO experiments were retrieved from the literature.

Check typesetting:

• parenthesis missing in Eq. 1
• Leftover $ in section 3.1
• Parenthesis missing in Section 3.3
• Misplaced comma in section 5.2.1

Significance

• Describe the nature and significance of the advance (e.g. conceptual, technical, clinical) for the field.

The paper presents a method to infer GRN from scRNA-seq data alone. Applications include GRN prediction and their perturbations. This paper represents a technical advance in the field as it is the first application of the inverse Ising problem GRN inference. - Place the work in the context of the existing literature (provide references, where appropriate).

The paper itself presents the landscape of GRN inference tools using scRNA-seq data: SCODE, MaxEnt and CELLORACLE. More tools exist, for instance SCENIC (https://doi.org/10.1038/nmeth.4463) mainly relies on co-expression matrices. Other tools exist but require additional data types e.g. GRaNIE and GRaNPA (https://doi.org/10.15252/msb.202311627) leverage on physical interaction data (ATAC-seq, ChIP-seq). Similarly DeepFlyBrain uses deep neural networks to infer eGRN in Drosophila (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41586-021-04262-z). The value of tools like IGNITE and its competitors is that they do not require additional data types, which, in turn, helps in controlling experimental costs. - State what audience might be interested in and influenced by the reported findings.

The paper might be of interest to biologists interested in regulation of gene expression. The tool might turn out to be useful in planning experimental work by guiding the choice of perturbations to introduce in experimental systems. - Define your field of expertise with a few keywords to help the authors contextualize your point of view. Indicate if there are any parts of the paper that you do not have sufficient expertise to evaluate.

I am a computational biologist.

I have no sufficient expertise to evaluate the mathematical details of the method.

Perhaps something to do also with the fact that human memory tends to retain information better when a high degree of surprise or emotion is associated with an event. See also the hyper-correction effect.

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eLife Assessment

This important study combines behavioural psychophysics with image-computable models to contrast a view-selective model of face recognition with a view-tolerant process. Although diagnostic orientations vary with viewpoint (horizontal for frontal, vertical for profile), human recognition remains consistently tuned to horizontal information, aligning with the view-tolerant model's predictions. The evidence for view-invariant recognition is solid, though testing more plausible model variants and considering generalisability to more naturalistic face stimuli would strengthen the conclusions.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors describe the results of a single study designed to investigate the extent to which horizontal orientation energy plays a key role in supporting view-invariant face recognition. The authors collected behavioral data from adult observers who were asked to complete an old/new face matching task by learning broad-spectrum faces (not orientation filtered) during a familiarization phase and subsequently trying to label filtered faces as previously seen or novel at test. This data revealed a clear bias favoring the use of horizontal orientation energy across viewpoint changes in the target images. The authors then compared different ideal observer models (cross-correlations between target and probe stimuli) to examine how this profile might be reflected in the image-level appearance of their filtered images. This revealed that a model looking for the best matching face within a viewpoint differed substantially from human data, exhibiting a vertical orientation bias for extreme profiles. However, a model forced to match targets to probes at different viewing angles exhibited a consistent horizontal bias in much the same manner as human observers.

Strengths:

I think the question is an important one: The horizontal orientation bias is a great example of a low-level image property being linked to high-level recognition outcomes, and understanding the nature of that connection is important. I found the old/new task to be a straightforward task that was implemented ably and that has the benefit of being simple for participants to carry out and simple to analyze. I particularly appreciated that the authors chose to describe human data via a lower-dimensional model (their Gaussian fits to individual data) for further analysis. This was a nice way to express the nature of the tuning function, favoring horizontal orientation bias in a way that makes key parameters explicit. Broadly speaking, I also thought that the model comparison they include between the view-selective and view-tolerant models was a great next step. This analysis has the potential to reveal some good insights into how this bias emerges and ask fine-grained questions about the parameters in their model fits to the behavioral data.

Weaknesses:

I will start with what I think is the biggest difficulty I had with the paper. Much as I liked the model comparison analysis, I also don't quite know what to make of the view-tolerant model. As I understand the authors' description, the key feature of this model is that it does not get to compare the target and probe at the same yaw angle, but must instead pick a best match from candidates that are at different yaws. While it is interesting to see that this leads to a very different orientation profile, it also isn't obvious to me why such a comparison would be reflective of what the visual system is probably doing. I can see that the view-specific model is more or less assuming something like an exemplar representation of each face: You have the opportunity to compare a new image to a whole library of viewpoints, and presumably it isn't hard to start with some kind of first pass that identifies the best matching view first before trying to identify/match the individual in question. What I don't get about the view-tolerant model is that it seems almost like an anti-exemplar model: You specifically lack the best viewpoint in the library but have to make do with the other options. Again, this is sort of interesting and the very different behavior of the model is neat to discuss, but it doesn't seem easy to align with any theoretical perspective on face recognition. My thinking here is that it might be useful to consider an additional alternate model that doesn't specifically exclude the best-matching viewpoint, but perhaps condenses appearance across views into something like a prototype. I could even see an argument for something like the yaw-averages presented earlier in the manuscript as the basis for such a model, but this might be too much of a stretch. Overall, what I'd like to see is some kind of alternate model that incorporates the existence of the best-match viewpoint somehow, but without the explicit exemplar structure of the view-specific model.

Besides this larger issue, I would also like to see some more details about the nature of the cross-correlation that is the basis for this model comparison. I mostly think I get what is happening, but I think the authors could expand more on the nature of their noise model to make more explicit what is happening before these cross-correlations are taken. I infer that there is a noise-addition step to get them off the ceiling, but I felt that I had to read between the lines a bit to determine this.

Another thing that I think is worth considering and commenting on is the stimuli themselves and the extent to which this may limit the outcomes of their behavioral task. The use of the 3D laser-scanned faces has some obvious advantages, but also (I think) removes the possibility for pigmentation to contribute to recognition, removes the contribution of varying illumination and expression to appearance variability, and perhaps presents observers with more homogeneous faces than one typically has to worry about. I don't think these negate the current results, but I'd like the authors to expand on their discussion of these factors, particularly pigmentation. Naively, surface color and texture seem like they could offer diagnostic cues to identity that don't rely so critically on horizontal orientations, so removing these may mean that horizontal bias is particularly evident when face shape is the critical cue for recognition.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This study investigates the visual information that is used for the recognition of faces. This is an important question in vision research and is critical for social interactions more generally. The authors ask whether our ability to recognise faces, across different viewpoints, varies as a function of the orientation information available in the image. Consistent with previous findings from this group and others, they find that horizontally filtered faces were recognised better than vertically filtered faces. Next, they probe the mechanism underlying this pattern of data by designing two model observers. The first was optimised for faces at a specific viewpoint (view-selective). The second was generalised across viewpoints (view-tolerant). In contrast to the human data, the view-specific model shows that the information that is useful for identity judgements varies according to viewpoint. For example, frontal face identities are again optimally discriminated with horizontal orientation information, but profiles are optimally discriminated with more vertical orientation information. These findings show human face recognition is biased toward horizontal orientation information, even though this may be suboptimal for the recognition of profile views of the face.

One issue in the design of this study was the lowering of the signal-to-noise ratio in the view-selective observer. This decision was taken to avoid ceiling effects. However, it is not clear how this affects the similarity with the human observers.

Another issue is the decision to normalise image energy across orientations and viewpoints. I can see the logic in wanting to control for these effects, but this does reflect natural variation in image properties. So, again, I wonder what the results would look like without this step.

Despite the bias toward horizontal orientations in human observers, there were some differences in the orientation preference at each viewpoint. For example, frontal faces were biased to horizontal (90 degrees), but other viewpoints had biases that were slightly off horizontal (e.g., right profile: 80 degrees, left profile: 100 degrees). This does seem to show that differences in statistical information at different viewpoints (more horizontal information for frontal and more vertical information for profile) do influence human perception. It would be good to reflect on this nuance in the data.

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If this is not the case, the perceptron algorithm will not terminate, but surprisingly it will stay bounded. See Block and Levin, "On the Boundedness of an Iterative Procedure for Solving a System of Linear Inequalities", Proc. Amer. Math. Soc., Vo. 26., No. 2, (1970), 229-245.

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eLife Assessment

This important study uses a combination of behavioral and molecular techniques to identify neuromodulators that influence blood-feeding behavior in the disease vector, Anopheles stephensi. Through a combination of gene expression analysis and RNA knockdown, the authors identify neuropeptides RYamide and sNPF as candidate regulators for blood-feeding, demonstrate behavioral changes upon co-knockdown, and anatomically characterize their expression patterns. While the evidence for behavioral characterization and expression mapping is solid, the evidence supporting a direct causal role for these neuropeptides in promoting host-seeking remains unproven.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Bansal et al. present a study on the fundamental blood and nectar feeding behaviors of the critical disease vector, Anopheles stephensi. The study encompasses not just the fundamental changes in blood feeding behaviors of the crucially understudied vector, but then uses a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate neuromodulation pathways which influence blood feeding behavior in this mosquito species. The authors then provide evidence through RNAi knockdown of candidate pathways that the neuromodulators sNPF and Rya modulate feeding either via their physiological activity in the brain alone or through joint physiological activity along the brain-gut axis (but critically not the gut alone). Overall, I found this study to be built on tractable, well-designed behavioral experiments.

Their study begins with a well-structured experiment to assess how the feeding behaviors of A. stephensi change over the course of its life history and in response to its age, mating, and oviposition status. The authors are careful and validate their experimental paradigm in the more well-studied Ae. aegypti, and are able to recapitulate the results of prior studies, which show that mating is a prerequisite for blood feeding behaviors in Ae. aegypt. Here they find A. Stephensi, like other Anopheline mosquitoes, has a more nuanced regulation of its blood and nectar feeding behaviors.

The authors then go on to show in a Y-maze olfactometer that ,to some degree, changes in blood feeding status depend on behavioral modulation to host cues, and this is not likely to be a simple change to the biting behaviors alone. I was especially struck by the swap in valence of the host cues for the blood-fed and mated individuals, which had not yet oviposited. This indicates that there is a change in behavior that is not simply desensitization to host cues while navigating in flight, but something much more exciting is happening.

The authors then use a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate genes in the blood-feeding stages of the mosquito's life cycle to identify a list of 9 candidates that have a role in regulating the host-seeking status of A. stephensi. Then, through investigations of gene knockdown of candidates, they identify the dual action of RYa and sNPF and candidate neuromodulators of host-seeking in this species. Overall, I found the experiments to be well-designed. I found the molecular approach to be sound. While I do not think the molecular approach is necessarily an all-encompassing mechanism identification (owing mostly to the fact that genetic resources are not yet available in A. stephensi as they are in other dipteran models), I think it sets up a rich line of research questions for the neurobiology of mosquito behavioral plasticity and comparative evolution of neuromodulator action.

Strengths:

I am especially impressed by the authors' attention to small details in the course of this article. As I read and evaluated this article, I continued to think about how many crucial details could potentially have been missed if this had not been the approach. The attention to detail paid off in spades and allowed the authors to carefully tease apart molecular candidates of blood-seeking stages. The authors' top-down approach to identifying RYamide and sNPF starting from first principles behavioral experiments is especially comprehensive. The results from both the behavioral and molecular target studies will have broad implications for the vectorial capacity of this species and comparative evolution of neural circuit modulation.

Weaknesses:

There are a few elements of data visualizations and methodological reporting that I found confusing on a first few read-throughs. Figure 1F, for example, was initially confusing as it made it seem as though there were multiple 2-choice assays for each of the conditions. I would recommend removing the "X" marker from the x-axis to indicate the mosquitoes did not feed from either nectar, blood, or neither in order to make it clear that there was one assay in which mosquitoes had access to both food sources, and the data quantify if they took both meals, one meal, or no meals.

I would also like to know more about how the authors achieved tissue-specific knockdown for RNAi experiments. I think this is an intriguing methodology, but I could not figure out from the methods why injections either had whole-body or abdomen-specific knockdown.

I also found some interpretations of the transcriptomic to be overly broad for what transcriptomes can actually tell us about the organism's state. For example, the authors mention, "Interestingly, we found that after a blood meal, glucose is neither spent nor stored, and that the female brain goes into a state of metabolic 'sugar rest', while actively processing proteins (Figure S2B, S3)".

This would require a physiological measurement to actually know. It certainly suggests that there are changes in carbohydrate metabolism, but there are too many alternative interpretations to make this broad claim from transcriptomic data alone.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Bansal et al examine and characterize feeding behaviour in Anopheles stephensi mosquitoes. While sharing some similarities to the well-studied Aedes aegypti mosquito, the authors demonstrate that mated females, but not unmated (virgin) females, exhibit suppression in their blood-feeding behaviour. Using brain transcriptomic analysis comparing sugar-fed, blood-fed, and starved mosquitoes, several candidate genes potentially responsible for influencing blood-feeding behaviour were identified, including two neuropeptides (short NPF and RYamide) that are known to modulate feeding behaviour in other mosquito species. Using molecular tools, including in situ hybridization, the authors map the distribution of cells producing these neuropeptides in the nervous system and in the gut. Further, by implementing systemic RNA interference (RNAi), the study suggests that both neuropeptides appear to promote blood-feeding (but do not impact sugar feeding), although the impact was observed only after both neuropeptide genes underwent knockdown.

Strengths and/or weaknesses:

Overall, the manuscript was well-written; however, the authors should review carefully, as some sections would benefit from restructuring to improve clarity. Some statements need to be rectified as they are factually inaccurate.

Below are specific concerns and clarifications needed in the opinion of this reviewer:

(1) What does "central brains" refer to in abstract and in other sections of the manuscript (including methods and results)? This term is ambiguous, and the authors should more clearly define what specific components of the central nervous system was/were used in their study.

(2) The abstract states that two neuropeptides, sNPF and RYamide are working together, but no evidence is summarized for the latter in this section.

(3) Figure 1<br /> Panel A: This should include mating events in the reproductive cycle to demonstrate differences in the feeding behavior of Ae. aegypti.<br /> Panel F: In treatments where insects were not provided either blood or sugar, how is it that some females and males had fed? Also, it is unclear why the y-axis label is % fed when the caption indicates this is a choice assay. Also, it is interesting that sugar-starved females did not increase sugar intake. Is there any explanation for this (was it expected)?

(4) Figure 3<br /> In the neurotranscriptome analysis of the (central) brain involving the two types of comparisons, can the authors clarify what "excluded in males" refers to? Does this imply that only genes not expressed in males were considered in the analysis? If so, what about co-expressed genes that have a specific function in female feeding behaviour?

(5) Figure 4<br /> The authors state that there is more efficient knockdown in the head of unfed females; however, this is not accurate since they only get knockdown in unfed animals, and no evidence of any knockdown in fed animals (panel D). This point should be revised in the results test as well. Relatedly, blood-feeding is decreased when both neuropeptide transcripts are targeted compared to uninjected (panel C) but not compared to dsGFP injected (panel E). Why is this the case if authors showed earlier in this figure (panel B) that dsGFP does not impact blood feeding? In addition, do the uninjected and dsGFP-injected relative mRNA expression data reflect combined RYa and sNPF levels? Why is there no variation in these data, and how do transcript levels of RYa and sNPF compare in the brain versus the abdomen (the presentation of data doesn't make this relationship clear).

(6) As an overall comment, the figure captions are far too long and include redundant text presented in the methods and results sections.

(7) Criteria used for identifying neuropeptides promoting blood-feeding: statement that reads "all neuropeptides, since these are known to regulate feeding behaviours". This is not accurate since not all neuropeptides govern feeding behaviors, while certainly a subset do play a role.

(8) In the section beginning with "Two neuropeptides - sNPF and RYa - showed about 25% and 40% reduced mRNA levels...", the authors state that there was no change in blood-feeding and later state the opposite. The wording should be clarified as it is unclear.

(9) Just before the conclusions section, the statement that "neuropeptide receptors are often ligand-promiscuous" is unjustified. Indeed, many studies have shown in heterologous systems that high concentrations of structurally related peptides, which are not physiologically relevant, might cross-react and activate a receptor belonging to a different peptide family; however, the natural ligand is often many times more potent (in most cases, orders of magnitude) than structurally related peptides. This is certainly the case for various RYamide and sNPF receptors characterized in various insect species.

(10) Methods<br /> In the dsRNA-mediated gene knockdown section, the authors could more clearly describe how much dsRNA was injected per target. At the moment, the reader must carry out calculations based on the concentrations provided and the injected volume range provided later in this section.

It is also unclear how tissue-specific knockdown was achieved by performing injection on different days/times. The authors need to explain/support, and justify how temporal differences in injection lead to changes in tissue-specific expression. Does the blood-brain barrier limit knockdown in the brain instead, while leaving expression in the peripheral organs susceptible? For example, in Figure 4, the data support that knockdown in the head/brain is only effective in unfed animals compared to uninjected animals, while there is no evidence of knockdown in the brain relative to dsGFP-injected animals. Comparatively, evidence appears to show stronger evidence of abdominal knockdown mostly for the RYa transcript (>90%) while still significantly for the sNPF transcript (>60%).

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript investigates the regulation of host-seeking behavior in Anopheles stephensi females across different life stages and mating states. Through transcriptomic profiling, the authors identify differential gene expression between "blood-hungry" and "blood-sated" states. Two neuropeptides, sNPF and RYamide, are highlighted as potential mediators of host-seeking behavior. RNAi knockdown of these peptides alters host-seeking activity, and their expression is anatomically mapped in the mosquito brain (sNPF and RYamide) and midgut (sNPF only).

Strengths:

(1) The study addresses an important question in mosquito biology, with relevance to vector control and disease transmission.

(2) Transcriptomic profiling is used to uncover gene expression changes linked to behavioral states.

(3) The identification of sNPF and RYamide as candidate regulators provides a clear focus for downstream mechanistic work.

(3) RNAi experiments demonstrate that these neuropeptides are necessary for normal host-seeking behavior.

(4) Anatomical localization of neuropeptide expression adds depth to the functional findings.

Weaknesses:

(1) The title implies that the neuropeptides promote host-seeking, but sufficiency is not demonstrated (for example, with peptide injection or overexpression experiments).

(2) The proposed model regarding central versus peripheral (gut) peptide action is inconsistently presented and lacks strong experimental support.

(3) Some conclusions appear premature based on the current data and would benefit from additional functional validation.

Author response:

Public Reviews:

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Bansal et al. present a study on the fundamental blood and nectar feeding behaviors of the critical disease vector, Anopheles stephensi. The study encompasses not just the fundamental changes in blood feeding behaviors of the crucially understudied vector, but then uses a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate neuromodulation pathways which influence blood feeding behavior in this mosquito species. The authors then provide evidence through RNAi knockdown of candidate pathways that the neuromodulators sNPF and Rya modulate feeding either via their physiological activity in the brain alone or through joint physiological activity along the brain-gut axis (but critically not the gut alone). Overall, I found this study to be built on tractable, well-designed behavioral experiments.

Their study begins with a well-structured experiment to assess how the feeding behaviors of A. stephensi change over the course of its life history and in response to its age, mating, and oviposition status. The authors are careful and validate their experimental paradigm in the more well-studied Ae. aegypti, and are able to recapitulate the results of prior studies, which show that mating is a prerequisite for blood feeding behaviors in Ae. aegypt. Here they find A. Stephensi, like other Anopheline mosquitoes, has a more nuanced regulation of its blood and nectar feeding behaviors.

The authors then go on to show in a Y-maze olfactometer that ,to some degree, changes in blood feeding status depend on behavioral modulation to host cues, and this is not likely to be a simple change to the biting behaviors alone. I was especially struck by the swap in valence of the host cues for the blood-fed and mated individuals, which had not yet oviposited. This indicates that there is a change in behavior that is not simply desensitization to host cues while navigating in flight, but something much more exciting is happening.

The authors then use a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate genes in the blood-feeding stages of the mosquito's life cycle to identify a list of 9 candidates that have a role in regulating the host-seeking status of A. stephensi. Then, through investigations of gene knockdown of candidates, they identify the dual action of RYa and sNPF and candidate neuromodulators of host-seeking in this species. Overall, I found the experiments to be well-designed. I found the molecular approach to be sound. While I do not think the molecular approach is necessarily an all-encompassing mechanism identification (owing mostly to the fact that genetic resources are not yet available in A. stephensi as they are in other dipteran models), I think it sets up a rich line of research questions for the neurobiology of mosquito behavioral plasticity and comparative evolution of neuromodulator action.

We appreciate the reviewer’s detailed summary of our work. We thank them for their positive comments and agree with them on the shortcomings of our approach.

Strengths:

I am especially impressed by the authors' attention to small details in the course of this article. As I read and evaluated this article, I continued to think about how many crucial details could potentially have been missed if this had not been the approach. The attention to detail paid off in spades and allowed the authors to carefully tease apart molecular candidates of blood-seeking stages. The authors' top-down approach to identifying RYamide and sNPF starting from first principles behavioral experiments is especially comprehensive. The results from both the behavioral and molecular target studies will have broad implications for the vectorial capacity of this species and comparative evolution of neural circuit modulation.

We really appreciate that the reviewer has recognised the attention to detail we have tried to put, thank you!

Weaknesses:

There are a few elements of data visualizations and methodological reporting that I found confusing on a first few read-throughs. Figure 1F, for example, was initially confusing as it made it seem as though there were multiple 2-choice assays for each of the conditions. I would recommend removing the "X" marker from the x-axis to indicate the mosquitoes did not feed from either nectar, blood, or neither in order to make it clear that there was one assay in which mosquitoes had access to both food sources, and the data quantify if they took both meals, one meal, or no meals.

We thank the reviewer for flagging the schematic in figure 1F. As suggested, we have removed the “X” markers from the x-axis and revised the axis label from “choice of food” to “choice made” to better reflect what food the mosquitoes chose in the assay. For clarity, we have now also plotted the same data as stacked graphs at the bottom of Fig. 1F, which clearly shows the proportion of mosquitoes fed on each particular choice. We avoid the stacked graph as the sole representation of this data, as it does not capture the variability in the data.

I would also like to know more about how the authors achieved tissue-specific knockdown for RNAi experiments. I think this is an intriguing methodology, but I could not figure out from the methods why injections either had whole-body or abdomen-specific knockdown.

The tissue-specific knockdown (abdomen only or abdomen+head) emerged from initial standardisations where we were unable to achieve knockdown in the head unless we used higher concentrations of dsRNA and did the injections in older females. We realised that this gave us the opportunity to isolate the neuronal contribution of these neuropeptides in the phenotype produced. Further optimisations revealed that injecting dsRNA into 0-10h old females produced abdomen-specific knockdowns without affecting head expression, whereas injections into 4 days old females resulted in knockdowns in both tissues. Moreover, head knockdowns in older females required higher dsRNA concentrations, with knockdown efficiency correlating with the amount injected. In contrast, abdominal knockdowns in younger females could be achieved even with lower dsRNA amounts.

We have mentioned the knockdown conditions- time of injection and the amount dsRNA injected- for tissue-specific knockdowns in methods but realise now that it does not explain this well enough. We have now edited it to state our methodology more clearly (see lines 932-948).

I also found some interpretations of the transcriptomic to be overly broad for what transcriptomes can actually tell us about the organism's state. For example, the authors mention, "Interestingly, we found that  after a blood meal, glucose is neither spent nor stored, and that the female brain goes into a state of metabolic 'sugar rest', while actively processing proteins (Figure S2B, S3)".

This would require a physiological measurement to actually know. It certainly suggests that there are changes in carbohydrate metabolism, but there are too many alternative interpretations to make this broad claim from transcriptomic data alone.

We thank the reviewer for pointing this out and agree with them. We have now edited our statement to read:

“Instead, our data suggests altered carbohydrate metabolism  after a blood meal, with the female brain potentially entering a state of metabolic 'sugar rest' while actively processing proteins (Figure S2B, S3). However, physiological measurements of carbohydrate and protein metabolism will be required to confirm whether glucose is indeed neither spent nor stored during this period.” See lines 271-277.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Bansal et al examine and characterize feeding behaviour in Anopheles stephensi mosquitoes. While sharing some similarities to the well-studied Aedes aegypti mosquito, the authors demonstrate that mated females, but not unmated (virgin) females, exhibit suppression in their bloodfeeding behaviour. Using brain transcriptomic analysis comparing sugar-fed, blood-fed, and starved mosquitoes, several candidate genes potentially responsible for influencing blood-feeding behaviour were identified, including two neuropeptides (short NPF and RYamide) that are known to modulate feeding behaviour in other mosquito species. Using molecular tools, including in situ hybridization, the authors map the distribution of cells producing these neuropeptides in the nervous system and in the gut. Further, by implementing systemic RNA interference (RNAi), the study suggests that both neuropeptides appear to promote blood-feeding (but do not impact sugar feeding), although the impact was observed only  after both neuropeptide genes underwent knockdown.

Strengths and/or weaknesses:

Overall, the manuscript was well-written; however, the authors should review carefully, as some sections would benefit from restructuring to improve clarity. Some statements need to be rectified as they are factually inaccurate.

Below are specific concerns and clarifications needed in the opinion of this reviewer:

(1) What does "central brains" refer to in abstract and in other sections of the manuscript (including methods and results)? This term is ambiguous, and the authors should more clearly define what specific components of the central nervous system was/were used in their study.

Central brain, or mid brain, is a commonly used term to refer to brain structures/neuropils without the optic lobes (For example: https://www.nature.com/articles/s41586-024-07686-5). In this study we have focused our analysis on the central brain circuits involved in modulating blood-feeding behaviour and have therefore excluded the optic lobes. As optic lobes account for nearly half of all the neurons in the mosquito brain (https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC8121336/), including them would have disproportionately skewed our transcriptomic data toward visual processing pathways.

We have indicated this in figure 3A and in the methods (see lines 800-801, 812). We have now also clarified it in the results section for neuro-transcriptomics to avoid confusion (see lines 236-237).

(2) The abstract states that two neuropeptides, sNPF and RYamide are working together, but no evidence is summarized for the latter in this section.

We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have now added a statement “This occurs in the context of the action of RYa in the brain” to end of the abstract, for a complete summary of our proposed model.

(3) Figure 1

Panel A: This should include mating events in the reproductive cycle to demonstrate differences in the feeding behavior of Ae. aegypti.

Our data suggest that mating can occur at any time between eclosion and oviposition in An. stephensi and between eclosion and blood feeding in Ae. aegypti. Adding these into (already busy) 1A, would cloud the purpose of the schematic, which is to indicate the time points used in the behavioural assays and transcriptomics.

Panel F: In treatments where insects were not provided either blood or sugar, how is it that some females and males had fed? Also, it is unclear why the y-axis label is % fed when the caption indicates this is a choice assay. Also, it is interesting that sugar-starved females did not increase sugar intake. Is there any explanation for this (was it expected)?

We apologise for the confusion. The experiment is indeed a choice assay in which sugar-starved or sugar-sated females, co-housed with males, were provided simultaneous access to both blood and sugar, and were assessed for the choice made (indicated on the x-axis): both blood and sugar, blood only, sugar only, or neither. The x-axis indicates the choice made by the mosquitoes, not the choice provided in the assay, and the y-axis indicates the percentage of males or females that made each particular choice. We have now removed the “X” markers from the x-axis and revised the axis label from “choice of food” to “choice made” to better reflect what food the mosquitoes chose to take.

In this assay, we scored females only for the presence or absence of each meal type (blood or sugar) and are therefore unable to comment on whether sugar-starved females consumed more sugar than sugarsated females. However, when sugar-starved, a higher proportion of females consumed both blood and sugar, while fewer fed on blood alone.

For clarity, we have now also plotted the same data as stacked graphs at the bottom of Fig. 1F, which clearly shows the proportion of mosquitoes fed on each particular choice. We avoid the stacked graph as the sole representation of this data as it does not capture the variability in the data.

(4) Figure 3

In the neurotranscriptome analysis of the (central) brain involving the two types of comparisons, can the authors clarify what "excluded in males" refers to? Does this imply that only genes not expressed in males were considered in the analysis? If so, what about co-expressed genes that have a specific function in female feeding behaviour?

This is indeed correct. We reasoned that since blood feeding is exclusive to females, we should focus our analysis on genes that were specifically upregulated in them. As the reviewer points out, it is very likely that genes commonly upregulated in males and females may also promote blood feeding and we will miss out on any such candidates based on our selection criteria.

(5) Figure 4

The authors state that there is more efficient knockdown in the head of unfed females; however, this is not accurate since they only get knockdown in unfed animals, and no evidence of any knockdown in fed animals (panel D). This point should be revised in the results test as well.

Perhaps we do not understand the reviewer’s point or there has been a misunderstanding. In figure 4D, we show that while there is more robust gene knockdown in unfed females, blood-fed females also showed modest but measurable knockdowns ranging from 5-40% for RYamide and 2-21% for sNPF.

Relatedly, blood-feeding is decreased when both neuropeptide transcripts are targeted compared to uninjected (panel C) but not compared to dsGFP injected (panel E). Why is this the case if authors showed earlier in this figure (panel B) that dsGFP does not impact blood feeding?

We realise this concern stems from our representation of the data. Since we had earlier determined that dsGFP-injected females fed similarly to uninjected females (fig 4B), we used these controls interchangeably in subsequent experiments. To avoid confusion, we have now only used the label ‘control’ in figure 4 (and supplementary figure S9) and specified which control was used for each experiment in the legend.

In addition to this, we wanted to clarify that fig 4C and 4E are independent experiments. 4C is the behaviour corresponding to when the neuropeptides were knocked down in both heads and abdomens.

4E is the behaviour corresponding to when the neuropeptides were knocked down in only the abdomens. We have now added a schematic in the plots to make this clearer.

In addition, do the uninjected and dsGFP-injected relative mRNA expression data reflect combined RYa and sNPF levels? Why is there no variation in these data,…

In these qPCRs, we calculated relative mRNA expression using the delta-delta Ct method (see line 975). For each neuropeptide its respective control was used. For simplicity, we combined the RYa and sNPF control data into a single representation. The value of this control is invariant because this method sets the control baseline to a value of 1.

…and how do transcript levels of RYa and sNPF compare in the brain versus the abdomen (the presentation of data doesn't make this relationship clear).

The reviewer is correct in pointing out that we have not clarified this relationship in our current presentation. While we have not performed absolute mRNA quantifications, we extracted relative mRNA levels from qPCR data of 96h old unmanipulated control females. We observed that both sNPF and RYa transcripts are expressed at much lower levels in the abdomens, as compared to those in the heads, as shown in the graphs inserted below.

Author response image 1.

(6) As an overall comment, the figure captions are far too long and include redundant text presented in the methods and results sections.

We thank the reviewer for flagging this and have now edited the legends to remove redundancy.

(7) Criteria used for identifying neuropeptides promoting blood-feeding: statement that reads "all neuropeptides, since these are known to regulate feeding behaviours". This is not accurate since not all neuropeptides govern feeding behaviors, while certainly a subset do play a role.

We agree with the reviewer that not all neuropeptides regulate feeding behaviours. Our statement refers to the screening approach we used: in our shortlist of candidates, we chose to validate all neuropeptides.

(8) In the section beginning with "Two neuropeptides - sNPF and RYa - showed about 25% and 40% reduced mRNA levels...", the authors state that there was no change in blood-feeding and later state the opposite. The wording should be clarified as it is unclear.

Thank you for pointing this out. We were referring to an unchanged proportion of the blood fed females. We have now edited the text to the following:

“Two neuropeptides - sNPF and RYa - showed about 25% and 40% reduced mRNA levels in the heads but the proportion of females that took blood meals remained unchanged”. See lines 338-340.

(9) Just before the conclusions section, the statement that "neuropeptide receptors are often ligand promiscuous" is unjustified. Indeed, many studies have shown in heterologous systems that high concentrations of structurally related peptides, which are not physiologically relevant, might cross-react and activate a receptor belonging to a different peptide family; however, the natural ligand is often many times more potent (in most cases, orders of magnitude) than structurally related peptides. This is certainly the case for various RYamide and sNPF receptors characterized in various insect species.

We agree with the reviewer and apologise for the mistake. We have now removed the statement.

(10) Methods

In the dsRNA-mediated gene knockdown section, the authors could more clearly describe how much dsRNA was injected per target. At the moment, the reader must carry out calculations based on the concentrations provided and the injected volume range provided later in this section.

We have now edited the section to reflect the amount of dsRNA injected per target. Please see lines 921-931.

It is also unclear how tissue-specific knockdown was achieved by performing injection on different days/times. The authors need to explain/support, and justify how temporal differences in injection lead to changes in tissue-specific expression. Does the blood-brain barrier limit knockdown in the brain instead, while leaving expression in the peripheral organs susceptible?

To achieve tissue-specific knockdowns of sNPF and RYa, we optimised both the time of injection as well as the dsRNA concentration to be injected. Injecting dsRNA into 0-10h females produced abdomen specific knockdowns without affecting head expression, whereas injections into 96h old females resulted in knockdowns in both tissues. Head knockdowns in older females required higher dsRNA concentrations, with knockdown efficiency correlating with the amount injected. In contrast, abdominal knockdowns in younger females could be achieved even with lower dsRNA amounts, reflecting the lower baseline expression of sNPF in abdomens compared to heads and the age-dependent increase in head expression (as confirmed by qPCR). It is possible that the blood-brain barrier also limits the dsRNA entering the brain, thereby requiring higher amounts to be injected for head knockdowns.

We have now edited this section to state our methodology more clearly (see lines 932-948).

For example, in Figure 4, the data support that knockdown in the head/brain is only effective in unfed animals compared to uninjected animals, while there is no evidence of knockdown in the brain relative to dsGFP-injected animals. Comparatively, evidence appears to show stronger evidence of abdominal knockdown mostly for the RYa transcript (>90%) while still significantly for the sNPF transcript (>60%).

As we explained earlier, this concern likely stems from our representation of the data. Since we had earlier determined that dsGFP-injected females fed similarly to uninjected females (fig 4B), we used these controls interchangeably in subsequent experiments. To avoid confusion, we have now only used the label ‘control’ in figure 4 (and supplementary figure S9) and specified which control was used for each experiment in the legend.

In addition to this, we wanted to clarify that fig 4C and 4E are independent experiments. 4C is the behaviour corresponding to when the neuropeptides were knocked down in both heads and abdomens. 4E is the behaviour corresponding to when the neuropeptides were knocked down in only the abdomen. We have now added a schematic in the plots to make this clearer.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript investigates the regulation of host-seeking behavior in Anopheles stephensi females across different life stages and mating states. Through transcriptomic profiling, the authors identify differential gene expression between "blood-hungry" and "blood-sated" states. Two neuropeptides, sNPF and RYamide, are highlighted as potential mediators of host-seeking behavior. RNAi knockdown of these peptides alters host-seeking activity, and their expression is anatomically mapped in the mosquito brain (sNPF and RYamide) and midgut (sNPF only).

Strengths:

(1) The study addresses an important question in mosquito biology, with relevance to vector control and disease transmission.

(2) Transcriptomic profiling is used to uncover gene expression changes linked to behavioral states.

(3) The identification of sNPF and RYamide as candidate regulators provides a clear focus for downstream mechanistic work.

(3) RNAi experiments demonstrate that these neuropeptides are necessary for normal host-seeking behavior.

(4) Anatomical localization of neuropeptide expression adds depth to the functional findings.

Weaknesses:

(1) The title implies that the neuropeptides promote host-seeking, but sufficiency is not demonstrated (for example, with peptide injection or overexpression experiments).

Demonstrating sufficiency would require injecting sNPF peptide or its agonist. To date, no small-molecule agonists (or antagonists) that selectively mimic sNPF or RYa neuropeptides have been identified in insects. An NPY analogue, TM30335, has been reported to activate the Aedes aegypti NPY-like receptor 7 (NPYLR7; Duvall et al., 2019), which is also activated by sNPF peptides at higher doses (Liesch et al., 2013). Unfortunately, the compound is no longer available because its manufacturer, 7TM Pharma, has ceased operations. Synthesising the peptides is a possibility that we will explore in the future.

(2) The proposed model regarding central versus peripheral (gut) peptide action is inconsistently presented and lacks strong experimental support.

The best way to address this would be to conduct tissue-specific manipulations, the tools for which are not available in this species. Our approach to achieve head+abdomen and abdomen only knockdown was the closest we could get to achieving tissue specificity and allowed us to confirm that knockdown in the head was necessary for the phenotype. However, as the reviewer points out, this did not allow us to rule out any involvement of the abdomen. This point has been addressed in lines 364-371.

(3) Some conclusions appear premature based on the current data and would benefit from additional functional validation.

The most definitive way of demonstrating necessity of sNPF and RYa in blood feeding would be to generate mutant lines. While we are pursuing this line of experiments, they lie beyond the scope of a revision. In its absence, we relied on the knockdown of the genes using dsRNA. We would like to posit that despite only partial knockdown, mosquitoes do display defects in blood-feeding behaviour, without affecting sugar-feeding. We think this reflects the importance of sNPF in promoting blood feeding.

Recommendations for the authors:

Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

Overall, I found this manuscript to be well-prepared, visually the figures are great and clearly were carefully thought out and curated, and the research is impacwul. It was a wonderful read from start to finish. I have the following recommendations:

Thank you very much, we are very pleased to hear that you enjoyed reading our manuscript!

(1) For future manuscripts, it would make things significantly easier on the reviewer side to submit a format that uses line numbers.

We sincerely apologise for the oversight. We have now incorporated line numbers in the revised manuscript.

(2) There are a few statements in the text that I think may need clarification or might be outside the bounds of what was actually studied here. For example, in the introduction "However, mating is dispensable in Anophelines even under conditions of nutritional satiety". I am uncertain what is meant by this statement - please clarify.

We apologise for the lack of clarity in the statement and have now deleted it since we felt it was not necessary.

(3) Typo/Grammatical minutiae:

a) A small idiosyncrasy of using hyphens in compound words should also be fixed throughout. Typically, you don't hyphenate if the words are being used as a noun, as in the case: e.g. "Age affects blood feeding.". However, you would hyphenate if the two words are used as a compound adjective "Age affects blood-feeding behavior". This may not be an all-inclusive list, but here are some examples where hyphens need to either be removed or added. Some examples:

"Nutritional state also influences other internal state outputs on blood-feeding": blood-feeding -> blood feeding

"... the modulation of blood-feeding": blood-feeding -> blood feeding

"For example, whether virgin females take blood-meals...": blood-meals -> blood meals

".... how internal and external cues shape meal-choice"-> meal choice

"blood-meal" is often used throughout the text, but is correctly "blood meal" in the figures.

There are many more examples throughout.

We apologise for these errors and appreciate the reviewer’s keen eye. We have now fixed them throughout the manuscript.

b) Figure 1 Caption has a typo: "co-housed males were accessed for sugar-feeding" should be "co-housed males were assessed for sugar feeding"

We apologise for the typo and thank the reviewer for spotting it. We have now corrected this.

c) It would be helpful in some other figure captions to more clearly label which statement is relevant to which part of the text. For example, in Figure 4's caption.

"C,D. Blood-feeding and sugar-feeding behaviour of females when both RYa and sNPF are knocked down in the head (C). Relative mRNA expressions of RYa and sNPF in the heads of dsRYa+dssNPF - injected blood-fed and unfed females, as compared to that in uninjected females, analysed via qPCR (D)."

I found re-referencing C and D at the end of their statements makes it look as thought C precedes the "Relative mRNA expression" and on a first read through, I thought the figure captions were backwards. I'd recommend reformating here and throughout consistently to only have the figure letter precede its relevant caption information, e.g.:

"C. Blood-feeding and sugar-feeding behaviour of females when both RYa and sNPF are knocked down in the head. D. Relative mRNA expressions of RYa and sNPF in the heads of dsRYa+dssNPF - injected bloodfed and unfed females, as compared to that in uninjected females, analysed via qPCR."

We have now edited the legends as suggested.

Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

Separately from the clarifications and limitations listed above, the authors could strengthen their study and the conclusions drawn if they could rescue the behavioural phenotype observed following knockdown of sNPF and RYamide. This could be achieved by injection of either sNPF or RYa peptide independently or combined following knockdown to validate the role of these peptides in promoting blood-feeding in An. stephensi. Additionally, the apparent (but unclear) regionalized (or tissue-specific) knockdown of sNPF and RYamide transcripts could be visualized and verified by implementing HCR in situ hyb in knockdown animals (or immunohistochemistry using antibodies specific for these two neuropeptides).

In a follow up of this work, we are generating mutants and peptides for these candidates and are planning to conduct exactly the experiments the reviewer suggests.

Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

The loss-of-function data suggest necessity but not sufficiency. Synthetic peptide injection in non-host seeking (blood-fed mated or juvenile) mosquitoes would provide direct evidence for peptide-induced behavioral activation. The lack of these experiments weakens the central claim of the paper that these neuropeptides directly promote blood feeding.

As noted above, we plan to synthesise the peptide to test rescue in a mutant background and sufficiency.

Some of the claims about knockdown efficiency and interpretation are conflicting; the authors dismiss Hairy and Prp as candidates due to 30-35% knockdown, yet base major conclusions on sNPF and RYamide knockdowns with comparable efficiencies (25-40%). This inconsistency should be addressed, or the justification for different thresholds should be clearly stated.

We have not defined any specific knockdown efficacy thresholds in the manuscript, as these can vary considerably between genes, and in some cases, even modest reductions can be sufficient to produce detectable phenotypes. For example, knockdown efficiencies of even as low as about 25% - 40% gave us observable phenotypes for sNPF and RYa RNAi (Figure S9B-G).

No such phenotypes were observed for Hairy (30%) or Prp (35%) knockdowns. Either these genes are not involved in blood feeding, or the knockdown was not sufficient for these specific genes to induce phenotypes. We cannot distinguish between these scenarios.

The observation that knockdown animals take smaller blood meals is interesting and could reflect a downstream effect of altered host-seeking or an independent physiological change. The relationship between meal size and host-seeking behavior should be clarified.

We agree with the reviewer that the reduced meal size observed in sNPF and RYa knockdown animals could result from their inability to seek a host or due to an independent effect on blood meal intake. Unfortunately, we did not measure host-seeking in these animals. We plan to distinguish between these possibilities using mutants in future work.

Several figures are difficult to interpret due to cluttered labeling and poorly distinguishable color schemes. Simplifying these and improving contrast (especially for co-housed vs. virgin conditions) would enhance readability.

We regret that the reviewer found the figures difficult to follow. We have now revised our annotations throughout the manuscript for enhanced readability. For example, “D1^B” is now “D1^PBM” (post-bloodmeal) and “D1^O” is now “D1^PO” (post-oviposition). Wherever mated females were used, we have now appended “(m)” to the annotations and consistently depicted these females with striped abdomens in all the schematics. We believe these changes will improve clarity and readability.

The manuscript does not clearly justify the use of whole-brain RNA sequencing to identify peptides involved in metabolic or peripheral processes. Given that anticipatory feeding signals are often peripheral, the logic for brain transcriptomics should be explained.

The reviewer is correct in pointing out that feeding signals could also emerge from peripheral tissues. Signals from these tissues – in response to both changing nutritional and reproductive states – are then integrated by the central brain to modulate feeding choices. For example, in Drosophila, increased protein intake is mediated by central brain circuitry including those in the SEZ and central complex (Munch et al., 2022; Liu et al., 2017; Goldschmidt et al., 2023). In the context of mating, male-derived sex peptide further increases protein feeding by acting on a dedicated central brain circuitry (Walker et al., 2015). We, therefore focused on the central brain for our studies.

The proposed model suggests brain-derived peptides initiate feeding, while gut peptides provide feedback. However, gut-specific knockdowns had no effect, undermining this hypothesis. Conversely, the authors also suggest abdominal involvement based on RNAi results. These contradictions need to be resolved into a consistent model.

We thank the reviewer for raising this point and recognise their concern. Our reasons for invoking an involvement of the gut were two-fold:

(1) We find increased sNPF transcript expression in the entero-endocrine cells of the midgut in blood-hungry females, which returns to baseline  after a blood-meal (Fig. 4L, M).

(2) While the abdomen-only knockdowns did not affect blood feeding, every effective head knockdown that affected blood feeding also abolished abdominal transcript levels (Fig. S9C, F). (Achieving a head-only reduction proved impossible because (i) systemic dsRNA delivery inevitably reaches the abdomen and (ii) abdominal expression of both peptides is low, leaving little dynamic range for selective manipulation.) Consequently, we can only conclude the following: 1) that brain expression is required for the behaviour, 2) that we cannot exclude a contributory role for gut-derived sNPF. We have discussed this in lines 364-371.

The identification of candidate receptors is promising, but the manuscript would be significantly strengthened by testing whether receptor knockdowns phenocopy peptide knockdowns. Without this, it is difficult to conclude that the identified receptors mediate the behavioral effects.

We agree that functional validation of the receptors would strengthen the evidence for sNPF and RYa_mediated control of blood feeding in _An. stephensi. We selected these receptors based on sequence homology. A possibility remains that sNPF neuropeptides activate more than one receptor, each modulating a distinct circuit, as shown in the case of Drosophila Tachykinin (https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC10184743/). This will mean a systematic characterisation and knockdown of each of them to confirm their role. We are planning these experiments in the future.

The authors compared the percentage changes in sugar-fed and blood-fed animals under sugar-sated or sugar-starved conditions. Figure 1F should reflect what was discussed in the results.

Perhaps this concern stems from our representation of the data in figure 1F? We have now edited the xaxis and revised its label from “choice of food” to “choice made” to better reflect what food the mosquitoes chose to take.

For clarity, we have now also plotted the same data as stacked graphs at the bottom of Fig. 1F, which clearly shows the proportion of mosquitoes fed on each particular choice. We avoid the stacked graph as the sole representation of this data because it does not capture the variability in the data.

Minor issues:

(1) The authors used mosquitoes with belly stripes to indicate mated females. To be consistent, the post-oviposition females should also have belly stripes.

We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have now edited all the figures as suggested.

(2) In the first paragraph on the right column of the second page, the authors state, "Since females took blood-meals regardless of their prior sugar-feeding status and only sugar-feeding was selectively suppressed by prior sugar access." Just because the well-fed animals ate less than the starved animals does not mean their feeding behavior was suppressed.

Perhaps there has been a misunderstanding in the experimental setup of figure 1F, probably stemming from our data representation. The experiment is a choice assay in which sugar-starved or sugar-sated females, co-housed with males, were provided simultaneous access to both blood and sugar, and were assessed for the choice made (indicated on the x-axis): both blood and sugar, blood only, sugar only, or neither. We scored females only for the presence or absence of each meal type (blood or sugar) and did not quantify the amount consumed.

(3) The figure legend for Figure 1A and the naming convention for different experimental groups are difficult to follow. A simplified or consistently abbreviated scheme would help readers navigate the figures and text.

We regret that the reviewer found the figure difficult to follow. We have now revised our annotations throughout the manuscript for enhanced readability. For example, “D1^B” is now “D1^PBM” (post-bloodmeal) and “D1^O” is now “D1^PO” (post-oviposition).

(4) In the last paragraph of the Y-maze olfactory assay for host-seeking behaviour in An. stephensi in Methods, the authors state, "When testing blood-fed females, aged-matched sugar-fed females (bloodhungry) were included as positive controls where ever possible, with satisfactory results." The authors should explicitly describe what the criteria are for "satisfactory results".

We apologise for the lack of clarity. We have now edited the statement to read:

“When testing blood-fed females, age-matched sugar-fed females (blood-hungry) were included wherever possible as positive controls. These females consistently showed attraction to host cues, as expected.” See lines 786-790.

(5) In the first paragraph of the dsRNA-mediated gene knockdown section in Methods, dsRNA against GFP is used as a negative control for the injection itself, but not for the potential off-target effect.

We agree with the reviewer that dsGFP injections act as controls only for injection-related behavioural changes, and not for off-target effects of RNAi. We have now corrected the statement. See lines 919-920.

To control for off-target effects, we could have designed multiple dsRNAs targeting different parts of a given gene. We regret not including these controls for potential off-target effects of dsRNAs injected.

(6) References numbers 48, 89, and 90 are not complete citations.

We thank the reviewer for spotting these. We have now corrected these citations.

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DOI: 10.3390/ijms26199540

Resource: RRID:IMSR_JAX:000664

Curator: @evieth

SciCrunch record: RRID:IMSR_JAX:000664

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