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    1. Do you think there are ways to moderate well that involve less traumatizing of moderators or taking advantage of poor people?

      I instantly thought about discord moderators for larger servers. I think it's extremely difficult to make moderation less traumatizing, besides just having a more robust automated moderation bot. In the case of discord moderation, a lot of traumatizing incidents happen directly to mods, like abuse of power. For the case of taking advantage of poor people, that really comes down to the morals of companies themselves. Most companies have the ability to pay their workers fairly, but try to find a workaround to get a larger profit. Only thing I can think of is expanding current laws to include paying international workers by U.S.A. minimum wage standards.

    1. you want to answer a question that you (and other people) have about the world.

      Not only are you convincing your audience but also yourself. Research as if you want to get to the truth and gather your evidence to support your findings.

    2. . Your main research question should be substantial enough to form the guiding principle of your paper—but focused enough to guide your research. A strong research question requires you not only to find information but also to put together different pieces of information, interpret and analyze them, and figure out what you think. As you consider potential research questions, ask yourself whether they would be too hard or too easy to answer.

      main research question should be focused enough to guide your research.

    3. After narrowing your focus, think about key search terms that will apply only to your subtopic. Develop specific questions that can be answered through your research process, but be careful not to choose a focus that is overly narrow. You should aim for a question that will limit search results to sources that relate to your topic, but will still result in a varied pool of sources to explore.

      Try not to write something that is overly narrow. You need to keep the questions you want to ask broad enough to have enough resources to support your research.

    4. But the research process does not end when you have solved your mystery. Imagine what would happen if a detective collected enough evidence to solve a criminal case, but she never shared her solution with the authorities. Presenting what you have learned from research can be just as important as performing the research. Research results can be presented in a variety of ways, but one of the most popular—and effective—presentation forms is the research paper. A research paper presents an original thesis, or purpose statement, about a topic and develops that thesis with information gathered from a variety of sources.

      A better way to describe the effort you have to put into researching all sides of the argument or thesis

    1. The revised thesis makes a more specific statement about success and what it means to work hard.

      This brings me back to what we read earlier about writing confidently knowing that you have the supportive information to back up your claims, but leaving just enough room for an argument or debate. I once read that ' only fools speak in absolutes ' so this kind of ties back to that.

    2. Specificity A thesis statement must concentrate on a specific area of a general topic. As you may recall, the creation of a thesis statement begins when you choose a broad subject and then narrow down its parts until you pinpoint a specific aspect of that topic. For example, health care is a broad topic, but a proper thesis statement would focus on a specific area of that topic, such as options for individuals without health-care coverage.
      • must concentrate on a specific general topic
      • narrow down the parts of a broad subject until you reach a specific pinpoint.
    3. A thesis is not your paper’s topic, but rather your interpretation of the question or subject. For whatever topic your professor gives you, you must ask yourself, “What do I want to write about it?” Asking and then answering this question is vital to forming a thesis that is precise, forceful, and confident. A thesis is generally one to two sentences long and appears toward the end of your introduction. It is specific and focuses on one to three points of a single idea—points that will be demonstrated in the body. The thesis forecasts the content of the essay and suggests how you will organize your information. Remember that a thesis statement does not summarize an issue but rather dissects it.

      A thesis is not the topic of your paper, but you perspective of the subject/topic. Answering "what do I want to write about" is vital to forming a thesis that is productive

    4. Specificity A thesis statement must concentrate on a specific area of a general topic. As you may recall, the creation of a thesis statement begins when you choose a broad subject and then narrow down its parts until you pinpoint a specific aspect of that topic. For example, health care is a broad topic, but a proper thesis statement would focus on a specific area of that topic, such as options for individuals without health-care coverage. Precision A strong thesis statement must be precise enough to allow for a coherent argument and to remain focused on the topic.

      Specificity: narrowing down thesis. Precision: Hitting the nail on the head so to speak, with the thesis statement.

    5. A thesis is generally one to two sentences long and appears toward the end of your introduction. It is specific and focuses on one to three points of a single idea—points that will be demonstrated in the body. The thesis forecasts the content of the essay and suggests how you will organize your information. Remember that a thesis statement does not summarize an issue but rather dissects it.

      A description of how to utilize a thesis.

    1. The paradox of serving Count Keller, an aristocratic minister of high privilege, when poverty and destruction awaited them in every small town they traveled through, also weighed upon Jacob's conscience. High-ranking officials in the delegation held extravagant parties and dinners, which Jacob desperately tried to avoid attending. Surrounded by the decadence, he was beginning to feel isolated and homesick.

      This passage vividly portrays Jacob Green's inner conflicts during the war. On one hand, he served the privileged noble officials, while on the other hand, he witnessed the poverty and destruction of the towns along the way. When the high-ranking officials still held luxurious banquets during the war, Jacob tried to avoid them, which made him feel out of place with the extravagance around him and filled him with loneliness and longing for his hometown. This intense contrast not only reflects his sympathy for the lower-class people, but also allows us to see his conscience as an intellectual - he could not comfortably enjoy the privileges and maintained a clear understanding of the cruelty of the war and the injustice of society.

    1. sther as proto-feminist for a few reasons. First, because this commentary demonstrates how the systematic domination of women served broader imperial interests and was also enhanced by blurring the relation between patriarchal domination of households and despotic domination of the empire. Under Ahasuerus, women (starting with Vashti) had to be controlled or neutralized so that the household could serve as a model for the state, even while the state claimed to be modeled on the structure of households. This sort of mutually reinforcing dynamic or political cosmology is by now a commonplace of social analysis, but it wasn’t in 18

      so we see a proto-feminost view because the push to subjugate the queen lead to the centralization of power and later the order to exterminate the jews

    2. On the level of political rhetoric, Ahasuerus’ executive order must have seemed a master stroke because of all that it simultaneously accomplished. Malbim thinks that by emphasizing that the letters were to be sent in the diverse languages of the polyglot empire, Ahasuerus was once again stoking popular resentment against the Persian elites who used to demand that all state business be conducted in Persian.[15]Apparently, “cultural diversity” can be coopted by authoritarian state power as easily as any other ideology under the right circumstances. More importantly, Ahasuerus’ letter would have distracted people from his naked power grab by disguising it as the utterly ordinary resentment of a husband whose wife has defied him, guaranteeing the support of other men who feared the rebellion of their own wives in turn. Could he have found a more potent strategy for harnessing their resentment? In the 1970’s it began to be said in some quarters that “the personal is political,” but Ahasuerus’ letters represent the utter suppression of that frame by insisting that the political is merely personal. Whether

      furthermore his decree that all royal letters be conducted in different languages was made to fuel support for his regime against the persian elite and distract them from his political move against his wife whom they would have taken as something done to subdue his insubordinate wife

    3. among the leaders of the disenfranchised, non-Persian provinces and the lower Persian classes who had been systematically excluded from most of the benefits of the constitutional—but colonial and deeply class conscious—state Ahasuerus had come to dominate.

      included the servants to create commoner loyality to him

    4. Ahasuerus seized power from a constitutional monarch but was set on absolutizing his rule through a series of very intentional stratagems that required him to sideline or eliminate his wife. Faced by the ancient rabbinic conundrum whether to portray Ahasuerus as a wise or a foolish king, Malbim decides from the outset to treat him as someone who knows what he wants and works deliberately to achieve his

      Malbim's interpretation establishes that Ahasuerues was a commonor who overthrew the constitutional monarchy to centralize absolute power through himself. From there it required him to sideline his wife to do so

    1. What storm is this that blows so contrary? Is Romeo slaughter'd, and is Tybalt dead? My dear-loved cousin, and my dearer lord? Then, dreadful trumpet, sound the general doom! For who is living, if those two are gone? 1790 Nurse. Tybalt is gone, and Romeo banished; Romeo that kill'd him, he is banished.

      Juliet thinks that Romeo got killed, but then she finds out that Tybalt is the one who got killed, and the nurse seems more affected due to Tybalt being her friend

    2. Capulet. When the sun sets, the air doth drizzle dew; But for the sunset of my brother's son It rains downright. 2235How now! a conduit, girl? what, still in tears? Evermore showering? In one little body Thou counterfeit'st a bark, a sea, a wind; For still thy eyes, which I may call the sea, Do ebb and flow with tears; the bark thy body is, 2240Sailing in this salt flood; the winds, thy sighs; Who, raging with thy tears, and they with them, Without a sudden calm, will overset Thy tempest-tossed body. How now, wife! Have you deliver'd to her our decree? 2245 Lady Capulet. Ay, sir; but she will none, she gives you thanks. I would the fool were married to her grave! Capulet. Soft! take me with you, take me with you, wife. How! will she none? doth she not give us thanks? Is she not proud? doth she not count her blest, 2250Unworthy as she is, that we have wrought So worthy a gentleman to be her bridegroom? Juliet. Not proud, you have; but thankful, that you have: Proud can I never be of what I hate; But thankful even for hate, that is meant love. 2255 Capulet. How now, how now, chop-logic! What is this? 'Proud,' and 'I thank you,' and 'I thank you not;' And yet 'not proud,' mistress minion, you, Thank me no thankings, nor, proud me no prouds, But fettle your fine joints 'gainst Thursday next, 2260To go with Paris to Saint Peter's Church, Or I will drag thee on a hurdle thither. Out, you green-sickness carrion! out, you baggage! You tallow-face! Lady Capulet. Fie, fie! what, are you mad? 2265 Juliet. Good father, I beseech you on my knees, Hear me with patience but to speak a word. Capulet. Hang thee, young baggage! disobedient wretch! I tell thee what: get thee to church o' Thursday, Or never after look me in the face: 2270Speak not, reply not, do not answer me; My fingers itch. Wife, we scarce thought us blest That God had lent us but this only child; But now I see this one is one too much, And that we have a curse in having her: 2275Out on her, hilding! Nurse. God in heaven bless her! You are to blame, my lord, to rate her so. Capulet. And why, my lady wisdom? hold your tongue, Good prudence; smatter with your gossips, go. 2280 Nurse. I speak no treason. Capulet. O, God ye god-den. Nurse. May not one speak? Capulet. Peace, you mumbling fool! Utter your gravity o'er a gossip's bowl; 2285For here we need it not. Lady Capulet. You are too hot. Capulet. God's bread! it makes me mad: Day, night, hour, tide, time, work, play, Alone, in company, still my care hath been 2290To have her match'd: and having now provided A gentleman of noble parentage, Of fair demesnes, youthful, and nobly train'd, Stuff'd, as they say, with honourable parts, Proportion'd as one's thought would wish a man; 2295And then to have a wretched puling fool, A whining mammet, in her fortune's tender, To answer 'I'll not wed; I cannot love, I am too young; I pray you, pardon me.' But, as you will not wed, I'll pardon you: 2300Graze where you will you shall not house with me: Look to't, think on't, I do not use to jest. Thursday is near; lay hand on heart, advise: An you be mine, I'll give you to my friend; And you be not, hang, beg, starve, die in 2305the streets, For, by my soul, I'll ne'er acknowledge thee, Nor what is mine shall never do thee good: Trust to't, bethink you; I'll not be forsworn. [Exit]

      lord Capulet enters and mocks Juliet's grief however after he learns that Juliet is rejecting the wedding he gets enraged saying that he would drag her to the church himself he then gives juliet a ultimatium saying if he doesnt marry paris he would disown juliet and leave her a beggar on the streets

    3. Lady Capulet. Why, how now, Juliet! Juliet. Madam, I am not well. Lady Capulet. Evermore weeping for your cousin's death? What, wilt thou wash him from his grave with tears? An if thou couldst, thou couldst not make him live; 2175Therefore, have done: some grief shows much of love; But much of grief shows still some want of wit. Juliet. Yet let me weep for such a feeling loss. Lady Capulet. So shall you feel the loss, but not the friend Which you weep for. 2180 Juliet. Feeling so the loss, Cannot choose but ever weep the friend. Lady Capulet. Well, girl, thou weep'st not so much for his death, As that the villain lives which slaughter'd him. Juliet. What villain madam? 2185 Lady Capulet. That same villain, Romeo. Juliet. [Aside] Villain and he be many miles asunder.— God Pardon him! I do, with all my heart; And yet no man like he doth grieve my heart. Lady Capulet. That is, because the traitor murderer lives. 2190 Juliet. Ay, madam, from the reach of these my hands: Would none but I might venge my cousin's death! Lady Capulet. We will have vengeance for it, fear thou not: Then weep no more. I'll send to one in Mantua, Where that same banish'd runagate doth live, 2195Shall give him such an unaccustom'd dram, That he shall soon keep Tybalt company: And then, I hope, thou wilt be satisfied. Juliet. Indeed, I never shall be satisfied With Romeo, till I behold him—dead— 2200Is my poor heart for a kinsman vex'd. Madam, if you could find out but a man To bear a poison, I would temper it; That Romeo should, upon receipt thereof, Soon sleep in quiet. O, how my heart abhors 2205To hear him named, and cannot come to him. To wreak the love I bore my cousin Upon his body that slaughter'd him! Lady Capulet. Find thou the means, and I'll find such a man. But now I'll tell thee joyful tidings, girl. 2210 Juliet. And joy comes well in such a needy time: What are they, I beseech your ladyship? Lady Capulet. Well, well, thou hast a careful father, child; One who, to put thee from thy heaviness, Hath sorted out a sudden day of joy, 2215That thou expect'st not nor I look'd not for. Juliet. Madam, in happy time, what day is that? Lady Capulet. Marry, my child, early next Thursday morn, The gallant, young and noble gentleman, The County Paris, at Saint Peter's Church, 2220Shall happily make thee there a joyful bride. Juliet. Now, by Saint Peter's Church and Peter too, He shall not make me there a joyful bride. I wonder at this haste; that I must wed Ere he, that should be husband, comes to woo. 2225I pray you, tell my lord and father, madam, I will not marry yet; and, when I do, I swear, It shall be Romeo, whom you know I hate, Rather than Paris. These are news indeed! Lady Capulet. Here comes your father; tell him so yourself, 2230And see how he will take it at your hands.

      lady capulet mistakens juliets grief for romeo as mourning for tybalt so she offered to send a assassin to mantua to poison romeo and she also tells juliet she is going to marry paris on thursday juliet flat out refuses and say she would rather marry her enemy romeo

    4. Nurse. Madam! 2135 Juliet. Nurse? Nurse. Your lady mother is coming to your chamber: The day is broke; be wary, look about. [Exit] Juliet. Then, window, let day in, and let life out. 2140 Romeo. Farewell, farewell! one kiss, and I'll descend. [He goeth down] Juliet. Art thou gone so? love, lord, ay, husband, friend! I must hear from thee every day in the hour, For in a minute there are many days: 2145O, by this count I shall be much in years Ere I again behold my Romeo! Romeo. Farewell! I will omit no opportunity That may convey my greetings, love, to thee. 2150 Juliet. O think'st thou we shall ever meet again? Romeo. I doubt it not; and all these woes shall serve For sweet discourses in our time to come. Juliet. O God, I have an ill-divining soul! Methinks I see thee, now thou art below, 2155As one dead in the bottom of a tomb: Either my eyesight fails, or thou look'st pale. Romeo. And trust me, love, in my eye so do you: Dry sorrow drinks our blood. Adieu, adieu! [Exit] Juliet. O fortune, fortune! all men call thee fickle: If thou art fickle, what dost thou with him. That is renown'd for faith? Be fickle, fortune; For then, I hope, thou wilt not keep him long, But send him back. 2165 Lady Capulet. [Within] Ho, daughter! are you up? Juliet. Who is't that calls? is it my lady mother? Is she not down so late, or up so early? What unaccustom'd cause procures her hither?

      the nurse comes telling the couple that lady capulet is approaching as romeo is desending the windows juliet had a vision of romeo looking like a corpse

    5. Juliet. Wilt thou be gone? it is not yet near day: It was the nightingale, and not the lark, That pierced the fearful hollow of thine ear; 2100Nightly she sings on yon pomegranate-tree: Believe me, love, it was the nightingale. Romeo. It was the lark, the herald of the morn, No nightingale: look, love, what envious streaks Do lace the severing clouds in yonder east: 2105Night's candles are burnt out, and jocund day Stands tiptoe on the misty mountain tops. I must be gone and live, or stay and die. Juliet. Yon light is not day-light, I know it, I: It is some meteor that the sun exhales, 2110To be to thee this night a torch-bearer, And light thee on thy way to Mantua: Therefore stay yet; thou need'st not to be gone. Romeo. Let me be ta'en, let me be put to death; I am content, so thou wilt have it so. 2115I'll say yon grey is not the morning's eye, 'Tis but the pale reflex of Cynthia's brow; Nor that is not the lark, whose notes do beat The vaulty heaven so high above our heads: I have more care to stay than will to go: 2120Come, death, and welcome! Juliet wills it so. How is't, my soul? let's talk; it is not day. Juliet. It is, it is: hie hence, be gone, away! It is the lark that sings so out of tune, Straining harsh discords and unpleasing sharps. 2125Some say the lark makes sweet division; This doth not so, for she divideth us: Some say the lark and loathed toad change eyes, O, now I would they had changed voices too! Since arm from arm that voice doth us affray, 2130Hunting thee hence with hunt's-up to the day, O, now be gone; more light and light it grows. Romeo. More light and light; more dark and dark our woes

      romeo and juliet struggles to part after their secret wedding but he realizes that it is about to become morning and juliet urges romeo to leave before danger arrives

    6. Capulet. Things have fall'n out, sir, so unluckily, That we have had no time to move our daughter: 2060Look you, she loved her kinsman Tybalt dearly, And so did I:—Well, we were born to die. 'Tis very late, she'll not come down to-night: I promise you, but for your company, I would have been a-bed an hour ago. 2065 Paris. These times of woe afford no time to woo. Madam, good night: commend me to your daughter. Lady Capulet. I will, and know her mind early to-morrow; To-night she is mew'd up to her heaviness. Capulet. Sir Paris, I will make a desperate tender 2070Of my child's love: I think she will be ruled In all respects by me; nay, more, I doubt it not. Wife, go you to her ere you go to bed; Acquaint her here of my son Paris' love; And bid her, mark you me, on Wednesday next— 2075But, soft! what day is this? Paris. Monday, my lord, Capulet. Monday! ha, ha! Well, Wednesday is too soon, O' Thursday let it be: o' Thursday, tell her, She shall be married to this noble earl. 2080Will you be ready? do you like this haste? We'll keep no great ado,—a friend or two; For, hark you, Tybalt being slain so late, It may be thought we held him carelessly, Being our kinsman, if we revel much: 2085Therefore we'll have some half a dozen friends, And there an end. But what say you to Thursday? Paris. My lord, I would that Thursday were to-morrow. Capulet. Well get you gone: o' Thursday be it, then. Go you to Juliet ere you go to bed, 2090Prepare her, wife, against this wedding-day. Farewell, my lord. Light to my chamber, ho! Afore me! it is so very very late, That we may call it early by and by. Good night.

      lord capulet is talking to paris and is planning to speed up the wedding between the two he schedule the wedding for thursday opting for a small and private party

    7. Friar Laurence. Hold thy desperate hand: Art thou a man? thy form cries out thou art: 1990Thy tears are womanish; thy wild acts denote The unreasonable fury of a beast: Unseemly woman in a seeming man! Or ill-beseeming beast in seeming both! Thou hast amazed me: by my holy order, 1995I thought thy disposition better temper'd. Hast thou slain Tybalt? wilt thou slay thyself? And stay thy lady too that lives in thee, By doing damned hate upon thyself? Why rail'st thou on thy birth, the heaven, and earth? 2000Since birth, and heaven, and earth, all three do meet In thee at once; which thou at once wouldst lose. Fie, fie, thou shamest thy shape, thy love, thy wit; Which, like a usurer, abound'st in all, And usest none in that true use indeed 2005Which should bedeck thy shape, thy love, thy wit: Thy noble shape is but a form of wax, Digressing from the valour of a man; Thy dear love sworn but hollow perjury, Killing that love which thou hast vow'd to cherish; 2010Thy wit, that ornament to shape and love, Misshapen in the conduct of them both, Like powder in a skitless soldier's flask, Is set afire by thine own ignorance, And thou dismember'd with thine own defence. 2015What, rouse thee, man! thy Juliet is alive, For whose dear sake thou wast but lately dead; There art thou happy: Tybalt would kill thee, But thou slew'st Tybalt; there are thou happy too: The law that threaten'd death becomes thy friend 2020And turns it to exile; there art thou happy: A pack of blessings lights up upon thy back; Happiness courts thee in her best array; But, like a misbehaved and sullen wench, Thou pout'st upon thy fortune and thy love: 2025Take heed, take heed, for such die miserable. Go, get thee to thy love, as was decreed, Ascend her chamber, hence and comfort her: But look thou stay not till the watch be set, For then thou canst not pass to Mantua; 2030Where thou shalt live, till we can find a time To blaze your marriage, reconcile your friends, Beg pardon of the prince, and call thee back With twenty hundred thousand times more joy Than thou went'st forth in lamentation. 2035Go before, nurse: commend me to thy lady; And bid her hasten all the house to bed, Which heavy sorrow makes them apt unto: Romeo is coming. Nurse. O Lord, I could have stay'd here all the night 2040To hear good counsel: O, what learning is! My lord, I'll tell my lady you will come. Romeo. Do so, and bid my sweet prepare to chide. Nurse. Here, sir, a ring she bid me give you, sir: Hie you, make haste, for it grows very late. 2045 [Exit] Romeo. How well my comfort is revived by this! Friar Laurence. Go hence; good night; and here stands all your state: Either be gone before the watch be set, Or by the break of day disguised from hence: 2050Sojourn in Mantua; I'll find out your man, And he shall signify from time to time Every good hap to you that chances here: Give me thy hand; 'tis late: farewell; good night. Romeo. But that a joy past joy calls out on me, 2055It were a grief, so brief to part with thee: Farewell. [Exeunt]

      romeo goes on about how sad he is and friar finally snaps and gives romeo a reality check telling him to stop crying and man up friar tells romeo he must meet juliet and escape to mantua

    8. Friar Laurence. Thou fond mad man, hear me but speak a word. Romeo. O, thou wilt speak again of banishment. Friar Laurence. I'll give thee armour to keep off that word: 1925Adversity's sweet milk, philosophy, To comfort thee, though thou art banished. Romeo. Yet 'banished'? Hang up philosophy! Unless philosophy can make a Juliet, Displant a town, reverse a prince's doom, 1930It helps not, it prevails not: talk no more. Friar Laurence. O, then I see that madmen have no ears. Romeo. How should they, when that wise men have no eyes? Friar Laurence. Let me dispute with thee of thy estate. Romeo. Thou canst not speak of that thou dost not feel: 1935Wert thou as young as I, Juliet thy love, An hour but married, Tybalt murdered, Doting like me and like me banished, Then mightst thou speak, then mightst thou tear thy hair, And fall upon the ground, as I do now, 1940Taking the measure of an unmade grave. [Knocking within] Friar Laurence. Arise; one knocks; good Romeo, hide thyself. Romeo. Not I; unless the breath of heartsick groans, Mist-like, infold me from the search of eyes. 1945 [Knocking] Friar Laurence. Hark, how they knock! Who's there? Romeo, arise; Thou wilt be taken. Stay awhile! Stand up; [Knocking] Run to my study. By and by! God's will, 1950What simpleness is this! I come, I come! [Knocking] Who knocks so hard? whence come you? what's your will? Nurse. [Within] Let me come in, and you shall know my errand; 1955I come from Lady Juliet. Friar Laurence. Welcome, then. [Enter Nurse] Nurse. O holy friar, O, tell me, holy friar, Where is my lady's lord, where's Romeo? 1960 Friar Laurence. There on the ground, with his own tears made drunk. Nurse. O, he is even in my mistress' case, Just in her case! O woful sympathy! Piteous predicament! Even so lies she, Blubbering and weeping, weeping and blubbering. 1965Stand up, stand up; stand, and you be a man: For Juliet's sake, for her sake, rise and stand; Why should you fall into so deep an O? Romeo. Nurse! Nurse. Ah sir! ah sir! Well, death's the end of all. 1970 Romeo. Spakest thou of Juliet? how is it with her? Doth she not think me an old murderer, Now I have stain'd the childhood of our joy With blood removed but little from her own? Where is she? and how doth she? and what says 1975My conceal'd lady to our cancell'd love? Nurse. O, she says nothing, sir, but weeps and weeps; And now falls on her bed; and then starts up, And Tybalt calls; and then on Romeo cries, And then down falls again. 1980 Romeo. As if that name, Shot from the deadly level of a gun, Did murder her; as that name's cursed hand Murder'd her kinsman. O, tell me, friar, tell me, In what vile part of this anatomy 1985Doth my name lodge? tell me, that I may sack The hateful mansion.

      friar tries to calm romeo down but romeo says unless he can physically bring juliet to him or undo his exile it is useless the nurse comes to inform romeo of juliets state and the news worsens romeos guilt knowing that he is causing juliet harm he said he would kill himself

    9. [Enter FRIAR LAURENCE] Friar Laurence. Romeo, come forth; come forth, thou fearful man: 1870Affliction is enamour'd of thy parts, And thou art wedded to calamity. [Enter ROMEO] Romeo. Father, what news? what is the prince's doom? What sorrow craves acquaintance at my hand, 1875That I yet know not? Friar Laurence. Too familiar Is my dear son with such sour company: I bring thee tidings of the prince's doom. Romeo. What less than dooms-day is the prince's doom? 1880 Friar Laurence. A gentler judgment vanish'd from his lips, Not body's death, but body's banishment. Romeo. Ha, banishment! be merciful, say 'death;' For exile hath more terror in his look, Much more than death: do not say 'banishment.' 1885 Friar Laurence. Hence from Verona art thou banished: Be patient, for the world is broad and wide. Romeo. There is no world without Verona walls, But purgatory, torture, hell itself. Hence-banished is banish'd from the world, 1890And world's exile is death: then banished, Is death mis-term'd: calling death banishment, Thou cutt'st my head off with a golden axe, And smilest upon the stroke that murders me. Friar Laurence. O deadly sin! O rude unthankfulness! 1895Thy fault our law calls death; but the kind prince, Taking thy part, hath rush'd aside the law, And turn'd that black word death to banishment: This is dear mercy, and thou seest it not. Romeo. 'Tis torture, and not mercy: heaven is here, 1900Where Juliet lives; and every cat and dog And little mouse, every unworthy thing, Live here in heaven and may look on her; But Romeo may not: more validity, More honourable state, more courtship lives 1905In carrion-flies than Romeo: they my seize On the white wonder of dear Juliet's hand And steal immortal blessing from her lips, Who even in pure and vestal modesty, Still blush, as thinking their own kisses sin; 1910But Romeo may not; he is banished: Flies may do this, but I from this must fly: They are free men, but I am banished. And say'st thou yet that exile is not death? Hadst thou no poison mix'd, no sharp-ground knife, 1915No sudden mean of death, though ne'er so mean, But 'banished' to kill me?—'banished'? O friar, the damned use that word in hell; Howlings attend it: how hast thou the heart, Being a divine, a ghostly confessor, 1920A sin-absolver, and my friend profess'd, To mangle me with that word 'banished'?

      friar tells romeo that the prince had shown him mercy instead of killing him he decided to banish him but romeo insist that this is worse then executing him because he would be separated from Juliet

    10. Juliet. Shall I speak ill of him that is my husband? Ah, poor my lord, what tongue shall smooth thy name, When I, thy three-hours wife, have mangled it? But, wherefore, villain, didst thou kill my cousin? That villain cousin would have kill'd my husband: 1825Back, foolish tears, back to your native spring; Your tributary drops belong to woe, Which you, mistaking, offer up to joy. My husband lives, that Tybalt would have slain; And Tybalt's dead, that would have slain my husband: 1830All this is comfort; wherefore weep I then? Some word there was, worser than Tybalt's death, That murder'd me: I would forget it fain; But, O, it presses to my memory, Like damned guilty deeds to sinners' minds: 1835'Tybalt is dead, and Romeo—banished;' That 'banished,' that one word 'banished,' Hath slain ten thousand Tybalts. Tybalt's death Was woe enough, if it had ended there: Or, if sour woe delights in fellowship 1840And needly will be rank'd with other griefs, Why follow'd not, when she said 'Tybalt's dead,' Thy father, or thy mother, nay, or both, Which modern lamentations might have moved? But with a rear-ward following Tybalt's death, 1845'Romeo is banished,' to speak that word, Is father, mother, Tybalt, Romeo, Juliet, All slain, all dead. 'Romeo is banished!' There is no end, no limit, measure, bound, In that word's death; no words can that woe sound. 1850Where is my father, and my mother, nurse? Nurse. Weeping and wailing over Tybalt's corse: Will you go to them? I will bring you thither. Juliet. Wash they his wounds with tears: mine shall be spent, When theirs are dry, for Romeo's banishment. 1855Take up those cords: poor ropes, you are beguiled, Both you and I; for Romeo is exiled: He made you for a highway to my bed; But I, a maid, die maiden-widowed. Come, cords, come, nurse; I'll to my wedding-bed; 1860And death, not Romeo, take my maidenhead! Nurse. Hie to your chamber: I'll find Romeo To comfort you: I wot well where he is. Hark ye, your Romeo will be here at night: I'll to him; he is hid at Laurence' cell. 1865 Juliet. O, find him! give this ring to my true knight, And bid him come to take his last farewell.

      juliet is shocked after learning the whole truth that romeo have been banished she is extremely heartbroken despite this she decides to seek romeo in secret

    11. Juliet. Ay me! what news? why dost thou wring thy hands? Nurse. Ah, well-a-day! he's dead, he's dead, he's dead! We are undone, lady, we are undone! Alack the day! he's gone, he's kill'd, he's dead! 1760 Juliet. Can heaven be so envious? Nurse. Romeo can, Though heaven cannot: O Romeo, Romeo! Who ever would have thought it? Romeo! Juliet. What devil art thou, that dost torment me thus? 1765This torture should be roar'd in dismal hell. Hath Romeo slain himself? say thou but 'I,' And that bare vowel 'I' shall poison more Than the death-darting eye of cockatrice: I am not I, if there be such an I; 1770Or those eyes shut, that make thee answer 'I.' If he be slain, say 'I'; or if not, no: Brief sounds determine of my weal or woe. Nurse. I saw the wound, I saw it with mine eyes,— God save the mark!—here on his manly breast: 1775A piteous corse, a bloody piteous corse; Pale, pale as ashes, all bedaub'd in blood, All in gore-blood; I swounded at the sight. Juliet. O, break, my heart! poor bankrupt, break at once! To prison, eyes, ne'er look on liberty! 1780Vile earth, to earth resign; end motion here; And thou and Romeo press one heavy bier! Nurse. O Tybalt, Tybalt, the best friend I had! O courteous Tybalt! honest gentleman! That ever I should live to see thee dead! 1785 Juliet. What storm is this that blows so contrary? Is Romeo slaughter'd, and is Tybalt dead? My dear-loved cousin, and my dearer lord? Then, dreadful trumpet, sound the general doom! For who is living, if those two are gone? 1790 Nurse. Tybalt is gone, and Romeo banished; Romeo that kill'd him, he is banished. Juliet. O God! did Romeo's hand shed Tybalt's blood? Nurse. It did, it did; alas the day, it did! Juliet. O serpent heart, hid with a flowering face! 1795Did ever dragon keep so fair a cave? Beautiful tyrant! fiend angelical! Dove-feather'd raven! wolvish-ravening lamb! Despised substance of divinest show! Just opposite to what thou justly seem'st, 1800A damned saint, an honourable villain! O nature, what hadst thou to do in hell, When thou didst bower the spirit of a fiend In moral paradise of such sweet flesh? Was ever book containing such vile matter 1805So fairly bound? O that deceit should dwell In such a gorgeous palace! Nurse. There's no trust, No faith, no honesty in men; all perjured, All forsworn, all naught, all dissemblers. 1810Ah, where's my man? give me some aqua vitae: These griefs, these woes, these sorrows make me old. Shame come to Romeo! Juliet. Blister'd be thy tongue For such a wish! he was not born to shame: 1815Upon his brow shame is ashamed to sit; For 'tis a throne where honour may be crown'd Sole monarch of the universal earth. O, what a beast was I to chide at him! Nurse. Will you speak well of him that kill'd your cousin?

      the nurse runs in crying and juliet thinks that romeo is dead but found out that tybalt is the one who died and was killed by romeo so now she is torn between loyalty to her family or her love for romeo

    12. Juliet. Gallop apace, you fiery-footed steeds, Towards Phoebus' lodging: such a wagoner 1720As Phaethon would whip you to the west, And bring in cloudy night immediately. Spread thy close curtain, love-performing night, That runaway's eyes may wink and Romeo Leap to these arms, untalk'd of and unseen. 1725Lovers can see to do their amorous rites By their own beauties; or, if love be blind, It best agrees with night. Come, civil night, Thou sober-suited matron, all in black, And learn me how to lose a winning match, 1730Play'd for a pair of stainless maidenhoods: Hood my unmann'd blood, bating in my cheeks, With thy black mantle; till strange love, grown bold, Think true love acted simple modesty. Come, night; come, Romeo; come, thou day in night; 1735For thou wilt lie upon the wings of night Whiter than new snow on a raven's back. Come, gentle night, come, loving, black-brow'd night, Give me my Romeo; and, when he shall die, Take him and cut him out in little stars, 1740And he will make the face of heaven so fine That all the world will be in love with night And pay no worship to the garish sun. O, I have bought the mansion of a love, But not possess'd it, and, though I am sold, 1745Not yet enjoy'd: so tedious is this day As is the night before some festival To an impatient child that hath new robes And may not wear them. O, here comes my nurse, And she brings news; and every tongue that speaks 1750But Romeo's name speaks heavenly eloquence. [Enter Nurse, with cords] Now, nurse, what news? What hast thou there? the cords That Romeo bid thee fetch? Nurse. Ay, ay, the cords.

      juliet eagerly wait for romeo to visit her after her secret marriage juliet expresses her excitement and starts making up senarios about their relationships

    13. Benvolio. O Romeo, Romeo, brave Mercutio's dead! That gallant spirit hath aspired the clouds, 1625Which too untimely here did scorn the earth. Romeo. This day's black fate on more days doth depend; This but begins the woe, others must end. Benvolio. Here comes the furious Tybalt back again. Romeo. Alive, in triumph! and Mercutio slain! 1630Away to heaven, respective lenity, And fire-eyed fury be my conduct now! [Re-enter TYBALT] Now, Tybalt, take the villain back again, That late thou gavest me; for Mercutio's soul 1635Is but a little way above our heads, Staying for thine to keep him company: Either thou, or I, or both, must go with him. Tybalt. Thou, wretched boy, that didst consort him here, Shalt with him hence. 1640 Romeo. This shall determine that. [They fight; TYBALT falls] Benvolio. Romeo, away, be gone! The citizens are up, and Tybalt slain. Stand not amazed: the prince will doom thee death, 1645If thou art taken: hence, be gone, away! Romeo. O, I am fortune's fool! Benvolio. Why dost thou stay? [Exit ROMEO] [Enter Citizens, &c] First Citizen. Which way ran he that kill'd Mercutio? Tybalt, that murderer, which way ran he? Benvolio. There lies that Tybalt. First Citizen. Up, sir, go with me; I charge thee in the princes name, obey. 1655[Enter Prince, attended; MONTAGUE, CAPULET, their] Wives, and others] Prince Escalus. Where are the vile beginners of this fray? Benvolio. O noble prince, I can discover all The unlucky manage of this fatal brawl: 1660There lies the man, slain by young Romeo, That slew thy kinsman, brave Mercutio. Lady Capulet. Tybalt, my cousin! O my brother's child! O prince! O cousin! husband! O, the blood is spilt O my dear kinsman! Prince, as thou art true, 1665For blood of ours, shed blood of Montague. O cousin, cousin! Prince Escalus. Benvolio, who began this bloody fray? Benvolio. Tybalt, here slain, whom Romeo's hand did slay; Romeo that spoke him fair, bade him bethink 1670How nice the quarrel was, and urged withal Your high displeasure: all this uttered With gentle breath, calm look, knees humbly bow'd, Could not take truce with the unruly spleen Of Tybalt deaf to peace, but that he tilts 1675With piercing steel at bold Mercutio's breast, Who all as hot, turns deadly point to point, And, with a martial scorn, with one hand beats Cold death aside, and with the other sends It back to Tybalt, whose dexterity, 1680Retorts it: Romeo he cries aloud, 'Hold, friends! friends, part!' and, swifter than his tongue, His agile arm beats down their fatal points, And 'twixt them rushes; underneath whose arm 1685An envious thrust from Tybalt hit the life Of stout Mercutio, and then Tybalt fled; But by and by comes back to Romeo, Who had but newly entertain'd revenge, And to 't they go like lightning, for, ere I 1690Could draw to part them, was stout Tybalt slain. And, as he fell, did Romeo turn and fly. This is the truth, or let Benvolio die. Lady Capulet. He is a kinsman to the Montague; Affection makes him false; he speaks not true: 1695Some twenty of them fought in this black strife, And all those twenty could but kill one life. I beg for justice, which thou, prince, must give; Romeo slew Tybalt, Romeo must not live. Prince Escalus. Romeo slew him, he slew Mercutio; 1700Who now the price of his dear blood doth owe? Montague. Not Romeo, prince, he was Mercutio's friend; His fault concludes but what the law should end, The life of Tybalt. Prince Escalus. And for that offence 1705Immediately we do exile him hence: I have an interest in your hate's proceeding, My blood for your rude brawls doth lie a-bleeding; But I'll amerce you with so strong a fine That you shall all repent the loss of mine: 1710I will be deaf to pleading and excuses; Nor tears nor prayers shall purchase out abuses: Therefore use none: let Romeo hence in haste, Else, when he's found, that hour is his last. Bear hence this body and attend our will: 1715Mercy but murders, pardoning those that kill.

      benvolio tells romeo that mercutio had died in anger romeo kills tybalt the prince comes along with both familes and lady capulet urges the prince to execute romeo but romeo was defended by the montague and the prince decides to banish romeo from verona

    14. Romeo. Gentle Mercutio, put thy rapier up. Mercutio. Come, sir, your passado. 1585 [They fight] Romeo. Draw, Benvolio; beat down their weapons. Gentlemen, for shame, forbear this outrage! Tybalt, Mercutio, the prince expressly hath Forbidden bandying in Verona streets: 1590Hold, Tybalt! good Mercutio! [TYBALT under ROMEO's arm stabs MERCUTIO, and flies with his followers] Mercutio. I am hurt. A plague o' both your houses! I am sped. Is he gone, and hath nothing? 1595 Benvolio. What, art thou hurt? Mercutio. Ay, ay, a scratch, a scratch; marry, 'tis enough. Where is my page? Go, villain, fetch a surgeon. [Exit Page] Romeo. Courage, man; the hurt cannot be much. 1600 Mercutio. No, 'tis not so deep as a well, nor so wide as a church-door; but 'tis enough,'twill serve: ask for me to-morrow, and you shall find me a grave man. I am peppered, I warrant, for this world. A plague o' both your houses! 'Zounds, a dog, a rat, a mouse, a 1605cat, to scratch a man to death! a braggart, a rogue, a villain, that fights by the book of arithmetic! Why the devil came you between us? I was hurt under your arm. Romeo. I thought all for the best. 1610 Mercutio. Help me into some house, Benvolio, Or I shall faint. A plague o' both your houses! They have made worms' meat of me: I have it, And soundly too: your houses! [Exeunt MERCUTIO and BENVOLIO] Romeo. This gentleman, the prince's near ally, My very friend, hath got his mortal hurt In my behalf; my reputation stain'd With Tybalt's slander,—Tybalt, that an hour Hath been my kinsman! O sweet Juliet, 1620Thy beauty hath made me effeminate And in my temper soften'd valour's steel!

      romeo steps inbetween them to stop the fight but tybalt stabes mercutio and runs aways romeo gets sad and blames himself for mercutios injuries

    15. Tybalt. Well, peace be with you, sir: here comes my man. Mercutio. But I'll be hanged, sir, if he wear your livery: 1555Marry, go before to field, he'll be your follower; Your worship in that sense may call him 'man.' Tybalt. Romeo, the hate I bear thee can afford No better term than this,—thou art a villain. Romeo. Tybalt, the reason that I have to love thee 1560Doth much excuse the appertaining rage To such a greeting: villain am I none; Therefore farewell; I see thou know'st me not. Tybalt. Boy, this shall not excuse the injuries That thou hast done me; therefore turn and draw. 1565 Romeo. I do protest, I never injured thee, But love thee better than thou canst devise, Till thou shalt know the reason of my love: And so, good Capulet,—which name I tender As dearly as my own,—be satisfied. 1570 Mercutio. O calm, dishonourable, vile submission! Alla stoccata carries it away. [Draws] Tybalt, you rat-catcher, will you walk? Tybalt. What wouldst thou have with me? 1575 Mercutio. Good king of cats, nothing but one of your nine lives; that I mean to make bold withal, and as you shall use me hereafter, drybeat the rest of the eight. Will you pluck your sword out of his pitcher by the ears? make haste, lest mine be about your 1580ears ere it be out. Tybalt. I am for you.

      tybalt spots romeo and challenges him to a fight but romeo refuses and says that we are closer than you think mercutio sees romeo as a coward and decide to draw his sword challenging tybalt in romeos place

    16. Tybalt. Follow me close, for I will speak to them. 1535Gentlemen, good den: a word with one of you. Mercutio. And but one word with one of us? couple it with something; make it a word and a blow. Tybalt. You shall find me apt enough to that, sir, an you will give me occasion. 1540 Mercutio. Could you not take some occasion without giving? Tybalt. Mercutio, thou consort'st with Romeo,— Mercutio. Consort! what, dost thou make us minstrels? an thou make minstrels of us, look to hear nothing but discords: here's my fiddlestick; here's that shall 1545make you dance. 'Zounds, consort! Benvolio. We talk here in the public haunt of men: Either withdraw unto some private place, And reason coldly of your grievances, Or else depart; here all eyes gaze on us. 1550 Mercutio. Men's eyes were made to look, and let them gaze; I will not budge for no man's pleasure, I.

      tybalts approches looking to confront romeo but mercutio challenges him to a fight

    17. Benvolio. I pray thee, good Mercutio, let's retire: The day is hot, the Capulets abroad, 1500And, if we meet, we shall not scape a brawl; For now, these hot days, is the mad blood stirring. Mercutio. Thou art like one of those fellows that when he enters the confines of a tavern claps me his sword upon the table and says 'God send me no need of 1505thee!' and by the operation of the second cup draws it on the drawer, when indeed there is no need. Benvolio. Am I like such a fellow? Mercutio. Come, come, thou art as hot a Jack in thy mood as any in Italy, and as soon moved to be moody, and as 1510soon moody to be moved. Benvolio. And what to? Mercutio. Nay, an there were two such, we should have none shortly, for one would kill the other. Thou! why, thou wilt quarrel with a man that hath a hair more, 1515or a hair less, in his beard, than thou hast: thou wilt quarrel with a man for cracking nuts, having no other reason but because thou hast hazel eyes: what eye but such an eye would spy out such a quarrel? Thy head is as fun of quarrels as an egg is full of 1520meat, and yet thy head hath been beaten as addle as an egg for quarrelling: thou hast quarrelled with a man for coughing in the street, because he hath wakened thy dog that hath lain asleep in the sun: didst thou not fall out with a tailor for wearing 1525his new doublet before Easter? with another, for tying his new shoes with old riband? and yet thou wilt tutor me from quarrelling! Benvolio. An I were so apt to quarrel as thou art, any man should buy the fee-simple of my life for an hour and a quarter. 1530 Mercutio. The fee-simple! O simple! Benvolio. By my head, here come the Capulets. Mercutio. By my heel, I care not. [Enter TYBALT and others] Tybalt. Follow me close, for I will speak to them. 1535Gentlemen, good den: a word with one of you. Mercutio. And but one word with one of us? couple it with something; make it a word and a blow. Tybalt. You shall find me apt enough to that, sir, an you will give me occasion. 1540 Mercutio. Could you not take some occasion without giving? Tybalt. Mercutio, thou consort'st with Romeo,— Mercutio. Consort! what, dost thou make us minstrels? an thou make minstrels of us, look to hear nothing but discords: here's my fiddlestick; here's that shall 1545make you dance. 'Zounds, consort! Benvolio. We talk here in the public haunt of men: Either withdraw unto some private place, And reason coldly of your grievances, Or else depart; here all eyes gaze on us. 1550 Mercutio. Men's eyes were made to look, and let them gaze; I will not budge for no man's pleasure, I.

      benvolio is trying to get mercutio to leave because it is hot outside and their rivals the capulets are here mercutio jokes that benvolio is actually the one that likes to start fights and is easily angered

    1. Say a mathematician was trying to solve an equation that had not yet been solved. If the approach was to put twenty people in a room and watch how they solved it, other scholars in the discipline would not take the results seriously, but if something similar were done by a psychologist, the results could be quite important (see Research).

      takes about problem solving and how to hep solve them

    1. Domain TLD pricing. This one is just baffling. Certain TLDs cost significantly more when purchased through European registrars. I'm talking 2-3x markups on extensions that are cheap everywhere else. I never got a satisfying explanation for why. If anyone knows, I'm genuinely curious.

      Indeed some registrars are noteworthy costly. But I found looking around for smaller registrars is always worth it.

    1. The formation of highly consolidated reefs only occur where the temperature does not fall below 18°C for extended periods of time. This specific temperature restriction -18°C- does not, however, apply to the corals themselves. In Japan, where this has been studied in detail, approximately half of all coral species occur where the sea temperature regularly falls to 14°C an approximately 25% occur where it falls to 11°C (Veron 2000). Many grow optimally in water temperatures between 23° and 29°C, but some can tolerate temperatures as high as 40°C for limited periods of time.

      This seems like coral needs a very delicate temperature range to be sufficiently productive

    1. This may seem obvious, but compulsory voting leads to drastically higher voter turnout rates. In Australia, where mandatory voting was first introduced in 1925, turnout for elections hovers at around 90% of all registered voters, way more than the UK's 2024 general-election turnout of 59.7%.

      lowk how is that good

    1. Voting is a necessary part of the duties of citizenship, just like jury duty or paying taxes.

      really tbf what use would forced voting really have? jury duty has a use, where they will be judged by a jury of their peers, while paying taxes go directly into the social services of the country, but really what use is compulsory voting?

    1. it has become more likely that nonvoting Americans lean to the right.

      so before people who didnt vote voted left, but because democrats now are pushing for people who are already going to vote for them, it is more likely that the people who don't vote are gonna be right

    1. Some of the different characteristics that means of communication can have include (but are not limited to): Location: Some forms of communication require you to be physically close, some allow you to be located anywhere with an internet signal.

      location really changes who can even participate in the conversation. If you have to be face-to-face, it’s more personal, but it also excludes people who are far away, busy, or don’t feel safe meeting in person. Online communication removes distance, but it can also make things feel less human and easier to misunderstand.

    1. YouTube comments can be a place to find these, particularly replies to comments. It’s hard to know where the spammers are currently getting away with spam, but you might try the latest honest trailer from ScreenJunkies, sort comments by “newest first” and then look for replies and see if any are spam. If you find one, try reporting it.

      YouTube comment replies are especially where spam hides, because people don’t always read the reply threads closely. Sorting by “newest first” makes sense since spammers try to hit fresh videos before mods and filters catch up. And reporting even one obvious spammer helps train the system and keeps the thread from getting overrun.

    1. Without quality control moderation, the social media site will likely fill up with content that the target users of the site don’t want, and those users will leave. What content is considered “quality” content will vary by site, with 4chan considering a lot of offensive and trolling content to be “quality” but still banning spam (because it would make the site repetitive in a boring way), while most sites would ban some offensive content.

      Yeah, without some kind of moderation, the feed can turn into spam, scams, and low-effort posts really fast, and then the people the site was built for just stop showing up. And “quality” is totally relative—4chan might treat edgy trolling as part of the culture, while Instagram or TikTok would call that harmful and remove it. The common thread is that even “anything goes” spaces still block stuff like spam because it ruins the experience by making everything repetitive and useless.

    1. But, because of technology, industrialization, and urbanization, today’s world is considerably different today than it was 200 years ago. In fact, the change has accelerated: we live much differently than our parents did when they were our age. Consider how many of you may be reading this on a hand-held electronic device, which were not all that common even ten years ago.

      Yes! I think the world we live in now and the world from back then is very different.

    2. Scandinavians began arriving after the Civil War, and but by the 1890s, most new immigrants came from southern Europe (especially Italians) and from eastern Europe—including large numbers of persecuted Jews from the Russian Empire.

      This is very interesting because different ethnic groups of Europeans start to come to the US.

    3. For instance, British workers agitated for the right to vote and for a social contract called the People’s Charter in the 1830s and 40s, but conservative Tories blocked the Chartists. Enlightenment-inspired ideas about democracy, popular sovereignty, and new ideas like socialism all came to a head in Europe by 1848, which was known as the Year of Revolutions.

      I find this paragraph very crucial because it shows that democracy wasn't the right idea to the conservatives and that the Chartists realized without the right to vote, they wouldn't be able to pass laws to fix the working conditions.

    4. The acceleration of life in many aspects is just one of the results of the unprecedented worldwide technological innovations of the last two centuries.

      This shows the connection between the Industrial Revolution and the modern age. It explains that industrialization did not just change factories but also changed how quickly people live, work, and communicate and this is something that we still experience today.

    1. When I left the Courier I took leave of my friend Capt Cunningham. Should chance ever throw this in his way he will perhaps be gratified to find that I have not forgotten his name or his friendship. That I recollect with the most grateful feelings his kind offices in times that made them doubly valuable and in a country to which he had traveled by the unmarked and perilous paths of the Ocean while my way had been through an unknown Land over mountains and parched inhospitable plains. Meeting in a distant country by routes so different gave an instance of that restless enterprise that has lead and is now leading our countrymen to all parts of the world that has made them travellers on every ocean until it can now be said there is not a breeze of heaven but spreads an american flag.

      i love us

    1. education is a fearful enterprise.”2 Students, he explains, are “afraid of failing, of not understanding, of being drawn into issues they would rather avoid, of having their ignorance exposed or their prejudices challenged, of looking foolish in front of their peers.”

      This learning principle very much resonates with me. I will most likely be afraid to fail for the rest of my life as it’s a normal human feeling. But, I want to get the most out of my education. Doing just the bare minimum in a class and passing is not going to help you grow your knowledge. I have to seek the classes that will challenge me and help me grow. Ethical issues go hand-in-hand with Furthering your education. You can’t learn by cheating, copying others, and doing the easiest classes. You have to put in the honest work yourself to learn.

    2. Ethics is a “branch of philosophy dealing with values relating to human conduct, with respect to the rightness and wrongness of certain actions and to the goodness and badness of the motives and ends of such actions” (“Ethics,” n.d.).

      One ethical issue that I anticipated when starting college was cheating. When I was in high school, I had a lot of difficulty in class and I was too scared to ask for help so on I cheated on assignments or had someone tell me the answers. It kept my grades up, but I felt incredibility guilty. As an adult, I am much better at asking for help and I have a support group that can help me study or help me with topics I find difficult.

    1. Understanding what a child brings to the table allows the teacher not only to identify needs, but also to build upon strengths. Asked how she would describe her teacher, a young child diagnosed with behavioral chal- lenges responded about her Alverno student teacher, “My teacher makes me feel calm .. . She treats me like I’m smart.” The young child’s response

      Children with behavior challenges need to have an adult supporting them in this way. Making them feel like that belong and are capable.

    2. All students feel they ee ikea jearning to become responsible community members, critic , problem sok ers. fA range O f culturally conn

      I have been reading more about belonging and the importance of belonging for not only students but also staff in a school community. I believe strongly in supporting in this way.

    1. Each of these academic fields had their own goals, their own genres, their own writing conventions, their own formats for citing sources, and their own expectations for writing style

      Teachers assume students understand conventions — but often they don't explain them.

    1. AI fatigue is real and nobody talks about it

      Summary of "AI Fatigue is Real"

      • The Productivity Paradox: AI significantly speeds up individual tasks (e.g., turning a 3-hour task into 45 minutes), but this doesn't lead to more free time. Instead, the baseline for "normal" output shifts, and the work expands to fill the new capacity, leading to a relentless pace.
      • From Creator to Reviewer: Engineering work is shifting from "generative" (energizing, flow-state tasks) to "evaluative" (draining, decision-fatigue tasks). Developers now spend their days as "quality inspectors" on an unending assembly line of AI-generated code.
      • The Cost of Nondeterminism: Engineers are trained for determinism (same input = same output). AI’s probabilistic nature creates a constant cognitive load because the output is always "suspect," requiring more rigorous review than code written by a trusted human colleague.
      • Context-Switching Exhaustion: Because tasks are "faster," engineers now touch 6–8 different problems a day instead of focusing on one. The mental cost of switching contexts so frequently is "brutally expensive" for the human brain.
      • Skill Atrophy: Much like GPS has weakened our innate sense of direction, over-reliance on AI coding tools can cause core technical reasoning and mental mapping of codebases to atrophy.
      • Strategies for Sustainability:
        • Time-boxing: Setting strict timers for AI sessions to avoid "prompt spirals."
        • Separating Phases: Dedicating mornings to deep thinking and afternoons to AI-assisted execution.
        • Accepting "Good Enough": Setting the bar at 70% usable output and fixing the rest manually to reduce frustration.
        • Strategic Hype Management: Ignoring every new tool launch and focusing on mastering one primary assistant.
    1. r\'s, plot is important, and so arc scene and narra-tion, and point of view, and all the other things we've been discussing in this book, but whether the characters ,m' compl'lling or not is really the bottom line.

      I like that it makes a point that the characters are almost more important to the plot. It makes sure to point out that the characters should be our main focus. It's very important to make them come to life so the reader doesn't have to guess what they look like and what their personality is.

    2. consistency is not necessarily a virtue

      I found this interesting because I usually think consistency is a good thing, but this made me realize real people are inconsistent sometimes and that actually makes them more believable.

    3. if characters surprise but do not convince us, they are only flat pretending to be round

      This line made me pause because it shows that being random isn't the same as being complex. A character has to surprise us in a way that still makes sense.

    1. What I didn’t know was that the process of writing, the process of developing my own arguments, would challenge me even more and become the core practice that stretched my thinking.

      it's not just asking questions and talk to the author, but also arguments with your thoughts, with their thoughts. I love this "Stretched my thinking". I actually picture a visual line of what I thought before and then a much longer when I stretched it with more in-depth processing.

    1. Sample Email to an Instructor Subject: English 1110 Section 102: Absence Dear/Hello Professor [Last name], l was unable to attend class today, so I wanted to ask if there are any handouts or additional assignments I should complete before we meet on Thursday? I did review the syllabus and course outline, and I will complete the quiz and reading homework listed there. Many thanks, [First name] [Last name]

      This is a very useful tool/reminder on how to properly structure and email an instructor. In the video of the knowledge check as well it states to include your student ID, I haven't been applying my ID in my emails but now I will!

    1. As Katherine Sierra, awoman who has suffered frequent and sustained harassment, puts itabout technology culture more broadly, “A meritocracy is exactly whatI and so many others believed tech to be. ‘After all,’ I wrote nearly adecade ago, ‘the compiler doesn’t care if the person writing the codeis wearing a black lace bra.’ I was wrong. Embarrassingly, naïvely,wrong. Because while the compiler doesn’t care, the context in whichprogramming exists sure as hell does. To ignore that context is theessence of privilege blindness.”

      You've missed the opportunity to do a jargon analysis here! Count the "easy rekt's" typed on keyboard warriors, and on forums, but also inside programmer work cubicles...

    2. Leveling ensures the appearance that weall start from the same place and then allows us to see how we stackup against other players, as we know they are going through the samethings we are. The status inequality Castronova believes we seek istranslated into a number that grows slowly over time and broadcastsour efforts and skill to everyone we encounter. However, the notionthat we all start from the same place requires deliberate inattentionto the resources players bring to a game in the first place.

      Leveling pushes the illusion of explanatory depth behind the myth of experience. It doesn't accumulate infinitely. But more than leveling, I'd argue, it's also skill trees and abilities. They learned forever, and this linear progress is plain false. You can't magically carry more and more guns, and become more and more strong in real life, and there are no augmentations or powerups without side effects.

      You know what fucking game portrays opression properly? Rain World.

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    1. The professor sees the situation as an example of individual merit but according to the researcher, the Iranian student draws on the Persian tradition of shekasteh-nafsi, which "motivates the speakers to downplay their talents, skills, achievements, etc

      This in return is a small part of the overarching culture of "Taarof" (تعارف pronounced tah-roff): the complex, sometimes a bit silly but very rich in subtlety and implication art of Persian social etiquette and hospitality, emphasizing politeness, deference, and rank. It's a whole choreograpy of polite, (often insincere but not negatively) refusals and offers, such as refusing food or payment or gifts multiple times before accepting. Some Asian cultures have similar attitudes, but my Persian teachers told me of the wild stories of the lengths people went to insist on being the one to pay the bill at a restaurant or coffee house bordering the levels of a comedy film.

    1. Glassie describes the joy that the woman of the house takes in the estheticquality of her dresser, which is then reflected back on her and those who cross herthreshold: “the dresser’s beauty is a gift to the visitor” (364). However, the dresser isalso an active part of the household. Its rows of gleaming china, or “delph”, plates andornaments glimmer with associations to friends and family who have been marriedconfirmed, visited, been born or died, occasioning the gifting or passing on of the dresser’scontents. It’s possible that when Margaret thinks of her sister “sitting triumphant there inpossession of all the old bits of ornaments,” she is in fact imagining the contents of thefamily’s dresser (Brennan 19).

      Although it seems obvious, I wonder if Margaret is not only jealous of her sister but if her sister is also jealous of the new opportunities allowed to Margaret. In chapter 6 of our reading it talked about all the hardships of the women even that they had to work to afford their brothers tuition it makes me wonder if Margaret is doing the same for her family.

    2. Maeve Brennan herself had a complicated relation-ship with the notion of “home,” and recent work by scholars such as Angela Bourke, EllenMcWilliams, and Elke D’hoker has engaged with themes of exile and loss in her writing,with her persona as a “self-conscious transatlantic” (McWilliams 96), who immigrated toAmerica along with her family but was fiercely independent and spent passages of later lifehomeless.

      I remember in our reading for this week we had discussed briefly the conflict that Irish women had faced because of leaving home, One thing I wanted to connect too that is this part of the article. I think it is so powerful they had added that even when women when back to their home they were unable to feel "at home".

    3. Margaret, seems less concerned with the physical objects of household furniture that shehas not been able to bring to America, and more concerned with what they signify, howthey manipulate and determine proper social behavior. Living in a house, but not “womanof the house,” Margaret is ashamed to receive her fiancé at the back, serviceman’s door ofher employer’s home when he arrives to pick her up for a date

      This is talked about briefly in our reading, women did not know when they were allowed to rest and be "free" but I didn't realize the importance of that. If maids and cooks were constantly being "watched" it seems as though they must constantly remain in a professional setting.

    4. They had to adjust not only to a new culture, but to newconfigurations of domestic space and household “tools,” leaving behind the spaces andthings that had shaped their own education and experience in homemaking.

      During our reading of chapter 6 it talked about Italian men not allowing their wives to work when they had gotten married would that concept influence Irish couples as well. How would that work with the women being "Domestic" maids and cooks.

    1. When memorizing, most people use rote memorization techniques, which entail reading and then reciting something over and over until it is committed to memory. One major downfall of this technique is its effect on speaking rate. When we memorize this way, we end up going over the early parts of a speech many more times than the later parts. As you memorize one sentence, you add on another, and so on. By the time you’re adding on later parts of your speech, you are likely speed talking through the earlier parts because you know them by heart at that point. As we’ll discuss more later, to prevent bad habits from practice from hurting our speech delivery, speakers should practice a speech the exact way they want to deliver it to their audience. Fast-paced speaking during practice will likely make its way into the actual delivery of the speech. Delivery also suffers when speaking from memory if the speaker sounds like he or she is reciting the speech. Rote memorization tasks that many of us had to do in school have left their mark on our memorized delivery. Being made to recite the pledge of allegiance, the preamble to the Constitution, and so on didn’t enhance our speaking abilities. I’ve observed many students whose speeches remind me of the sound of school children flatly going through the motions of reciting the Pledge of Allegiance. It’s the “going through the motions” impression that speakers should want to avoid.

      The discussion of memorized delivery highlights how relying too heavily on memory can negatively affect delivery, especially when speakers use rote memorization. This method can lead to unnatural pacing, monotone delivery, and increased anxiety if the speaker forgets a section. The reading emphasizes that effective delivery is not just about remembering words but about engaging the audience through vocal variety, eye contact, and adaptability. Overall, the section reinforces the idea that choosing the appropriate delivery method is a strategic decision based on context, audience, and purpose.

    2. In what situations would impromptu speaking be used? Since we’ve already started thinking of the similarities between public speaking and conversations, we can clearly see that most of our day-to-day interactions involve impromptu speaking. When your roommate asks you what your plans for the weekend are, you don’t pull a few note cards out of your back pocket to prompt your response. This type of conversational impromptu speaking isn’t anxiety inducing because we’re talking about our lives, experiences, or something we’re familiar with. This is also usually the case when we are asked to speak publicly with little to no advance warning. For example, if you are at a meeting for work and you are representing the public relations department, a colleague may ask you to say a few words about a recent news story involving a public relations misstep of a competing company. In this case, you are being asked to speak on the spot because of your expertise. A competent communicator should anticipate instances like this when they might be called on to speak, so they won’t be so surprised. Of course, being caught completely off guard or being asked to comment on something unfamiliar to you creates more anxiety. In such cases, do not pretend to know something you don’t, as that may come back to hurt you later. You can usually mention that you do not have the necessary background information at that time but will follow up later with your comments.

      This reading explains that each delivery method—impromptu, manuscript, and memorized—has specific strengths and weaknesses depending on the speaking situation. I found it interesting that impromptu speaking, although anxiety-inducing, can actually strengthen public speaking skills because it forces speakers to think quickly and organize ideas on the spot. However, it also carries the risk of rambling or overstating knowledge. Manuscript delivery, on the other hand, offers precision and consistency, especially for complex information, but often reduces audience engagement because the speaker may sound like they are reading rather than speaking naturally.

    1. Public speaking anxiety is a type of CA that produces physiological, cognitive, and behavioral reactions in people when faced with a real or imagined presentation (Bodie, 2010). Physiological responses to public speaking anxiety include increased heart rate, flushing of the skin or face, and sweaty palms, among other things. These reactions are the result of natural chemical processes in the human body. The fight or flight instinct helped early humans survive threatening situations. When faced with a ferocious saber-toothed tiger, for example, the body released adrenaline, cortisol, and other hormones that increased heart rate and blood pressure to get more energy to the brain, organs, and muscles in order to respond to the threat. We can be thankful for this evolutionary advantage, but our physiology hasn’t caught up with our new ways of life. Our body doesn’t distinguish between the causes of stressful situations, so facing down an audience releases the same hormones as facing down a wild beast.

      This reading explains that public speaking anxiety is a common form of communication apprehension (CA), which can be either trait-based (part of someone’s personality) or state-based (triggered by a specific situation). I found it interesting that the body reacts to public speaking the same way it would to a life-threatening danger because of the fight-or-flight response. The physiological reactions—like sweating, increased heart rate, and shaking—combine with negative thoughts such as fear of judgment, which can then lead to avoidance behaviors. This helps me understand that speaking anxiety is not just “being nervous,” but a complex mix of physical, cognitive, and behavioral responses.

    1. Situé à tout juste 2 km de la cathédrale et du centre ville de Reims

      This is important because it tells me the location. It’s not directly in the city center, but it’s close enough to be convenient.

    1. But the decision of the Indians to defend their homeland from invaders is not equal to the attitude of the British, who regarded native peoples as a lesser race that must be moved out of the way of progress.

      This interests me because it really shows how bad the indians were really being treated.

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    1. . In fact, attimes throughout history, the best authors were believed to havebeen chosen and directly inspired by God Himself.

      i personally don't believe this in its entirety, I don't follow much religion so I cant say anything for certain, but i feel like man has their OWN separate ideas. So I feel they had created them and wrote the past stories themselves, though i do know people are obsessed with religion

    1. When people found themselves with more discretionary income in the 50s, they had more choices of what physical goods to buy. When it comes to physical items, the selection can be quite large, but ultimately there are a finite number of product options to choose from. With digital products, by contrast, options are virtually endless; as of 2023 there are almost 2 billion websites on the internet and almost 3 million mobile apps available for download.

      "How is design different for physical and digital products? their approach, the purposes they serve?"

    2. “In most people’s vocabularies, design means veneer. It’s interior decorating. It’s the fabric of the curtains of the sofa. But to me, nothing could be further from the meaning of design. Design is the fundamental soul of a human-made creation that ends up expressing itself in successive outer layers of the product or service.” (Steve Jobs)

      "why is design important when creating or launching new products, especially today?"

    1. Advanced Typing - Shortcuts (1943)

      Advanced Typing: Shortcuts. 16 mm. Vol. MN-1512c. United States Navy Training Film, 1943. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUJfCfqgsX0.

      Correct typing posture: fingers curved<br /> arms sloping up<br /> light fast strokes<br /> steady rhythm

      fast continuous motion of return lever<br /> using backing sheet (aka temping sheet ??)

      Shortcuts:<br /> mise en place for office supplies (she doesn't use this phrasing though) - greater efficiency - cuts down on searching

      tabulators can be helpful. There are two types:<br /> - automatic - handset

      Use tabs for paragraphs, dating letters, columns of numbers, and letter closings.

      To clear all tab stops, put carriage to left, hold tab clear key and move the carriage across. (Usually applies to Royal, Remington, Underwood, and Electromatic).

      On LC Smith and Woodstock machines sometimes have a tab clear lever on the back.

      Decimal tabulator keys help to align a variety of numbers around a decimal point. 09:43

      Always have a few tabs set to prevent a flying carriage which can be hard on the machine.

      When using carbon sheets which are slightly longer than the paper size, cut off a small triangle at the top left hand side. This makes it easier for one to separate the carbons from the copies by holding the top left with one hand and pulling the carbons out from the bottom of the stack.

      To align multiple sheets of paper for carbon copies, use a folded sheet at the top to taco the pages into the machine. Remove the folded sheet once the carbon pack is rolled forward.

      Paper bail rollers should be set to split the pages into thirds (for two rollers).

      Remington noiseless machines have a pressure indicator on the front of the machine (usually above the keyboard) which can be used when using thick carbon packs that may cause the ribbon guide to stick or bind.

      Only erase when the carriage is fully left or right to prevent eraser crumbs from falling into the machine.

      Use a soft eraser on carbon copies. Use and insert slips of paper behind the carbons and allowing them to stick out the sides, erasing from back sheet to front so as not to allow the eraser to mark your carbon copies. For the front sheet, use a shield and ink eraser and erase with a horizontal motion. After erasing, easily pull out the inserted sheets.

      When typing a correction, tap the key lightly two or three times rather than hard once.

      When in a rush and it's necessary to add a word (on double spacing), underline the last letter of the prior word and type a slash (/). Then move the typing line up and type the insertion above the prior line. This creates an "arrow" of sorts for the inserted word.

      Details for inserting extra letters in misspelled words using half-spacing machines. (Underwoods and Electromatics don't have this function.)

      Light pencil marks at the bottom of the sheet can help to indicate the coming bottom of the sheet.

      Putting up the card holders (fingers) on Underwoods and Royals. They help to hold the card and improve print quality and reduce noise.

      Card holders can cause markings on carbon packs if they're not lowered.

      Trick for quickly writing postcards in succession: Disengage the ratchet using the platen spring release (or variable platen switch) Type the address on the front of the card. When done give the platen a quick practiced spin. The postcard with "jump" up and stop at the paper table and be in position for rolling in the opposite direction to write the message on the back of the card! When done a faster spin of the platen will shoot the card over the back of the typewriter where it can land in a box to collect all the postcards which were written in such a manner. <br /> timestamp 23:22

      Time saving methods for addressing envelopes:

      • Front seat principle. Insert the envelope in the usual way and type out the address. When done, turn the envelope down through the machine with the right hand. With the left hand, place the next envelope between the top of the first envelope and the front of the platen. Feed the first envelope back through the machine (in reverse) and the second will be rolled in to place for typing. Continue in this fashion until finished. All the finished envelopes will stack up in the back at the paper table.

      • Chain feeding. The first envelope is inserted and rolled partway into the machine. A second envelope is inserted between the platen and the second envelope (behind the platen). Turn the first envelope to the writing line and type the address. Take out the first envelope and insert the next the same way as before.

      • Uses paper bail. Do the first envelope in the usual way. Spin it out of the machine up and behind the paper bail into a box behind the typewriter.

      For quickly doing labels or small cards:<br /> Create a small zig-zag fold into a piece of paper to create a pocket slot which can be scotch taped on either side. This template paper can then be inserted so that the pocket is visible above the writing line, but the paper below it is still in the platen. The label or card can be placed into the pocket and the platen reversed to feed the label or card in backwards to the desired typing line. Using a v-groove or hole in the typing line can create a pencil line to serve as a guide for inserting many labels at the same place so that the typing lines up between labels.

      Some offices had special platens for holding cards like this.

      Pockets like this can also be used to hold the page to add additional lines at the bottom of pages. Deeper pockets may need to be used for doing this with carbon packs whose carbons are longer than the pages.

      Alternately one can do something similar by creating a inverted u-shaped set of slits into an index card. to hold such labels.

      When in the midst of a page and needing to do another piece urgently, roll back the letter until about 2 inches from the top, and then place in the new page and one between each of the carbons. Then roll forward to do the short message as necessary. Turn back to the insertion position to remove the copies and then continue with the first letter where you left off.

      For drawing horizontal lines on typewriter paper, push the carriage to the extreme left and place the pencil or pen at the edge of the card guide and the scale. Then move the carriage to the right to effect the line. For vertical lines, put the carriage at the desired space and place the pencil at the card guide and scale and move the platen up/down as necessary.

    1. I enrolled my daughter into Mission College in her senior year to get extra credit to graduate and to get a jumpstart on general ed courses. But didn't think of it as an extension of high school.

    1. You know, it forces kids to not just live their experience but be nostalgic for their experience while they’re living it, watch people watch them, watch people watch them watch them.

      This reminds me of John Berger's famous quote about how "men watch women, and women watch themselves being watched" in art. It also reminds me of Raymond William's assertion that culture and society are experienced in the habitual past tense. I wonder if the experience of viewing the self as separate from one's body, as a representation, has any ramifications as to the construction of identity.

    1. Technical communication uses elements of document design such as visuals, graphics, typography, color, and spacing to make a document interesting, attractive, usable, and comprehensible. While some documents may be totally in print, many more use images such as charts, photographs, and illustrations to enhance readability and understanding and simplify complex information. Research and Technology Oriented: Because of workplace demands, technical and workplace writing is often created in collaboration with others through a network of experts and designers and depends on sound research practices to ensure that information provided is correct, accurate, and complete. Ethical: Lastly, technical communication is ethical. All workplace writers have ethical obligations, many of which are closely linked to legal obligations that include liability laws, copyright laws, contract laws, and trademark laws. You'll learn more about these in a later chapter on ethics. What Standards Should I Observe to Make my Writing Successful? Good question! As a member of an organization or team, even as a student, you want to produce the absolute best writing you can. Here are the standards you must follow and some tips to help you. If you keep these in mind as you work through your learning in this text, hooray for you! You get the great writer award! You will also have a tremendous advantage in the workplace if your communication and design skills meet these standards. First and most important, your writing must be honest. Your trustworthiness in communication reflects not only on you personally but on your organization or discipline. Your writing has to be clear so that your reader can get from it the information you intended. Strive to make sure that you have expressed exactly what you mean, and have not left room for incorrect interpretations. Next, good writing is accurate. Do your homework and make sure you have your facts right. There is no excuse for presenting incorrect information. Also make sure you have all the facts, as your writing must also be complete. Have you included everything that your reader needs? Your audience has neither time nor patience for excessive verbiage, so simplify and cut any clutter. Good writing is always concise writing. Your document should be attractive and pleasing to look at. Just as you wouldn't eat a hamburger from a dirty plate, your reader will not be moved by a document that is not carefully designed and professional. Without exception, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure have to be correct. Even a single grammatical or spelling error can cause your reader to dismiss you as not professional, as not caring enough to edit carefully. Poor writing at this level reflects poorly on your organization as well, and most companies can't mandate good writing with a law!

      Note 1: Visuals and Document Design

      Design components like images, graphics, color, and spacing are just as important in technical communication as words. These components aid in making material more comprehensible and interesting. Because images may make complex information easier to understand and make it easier to read, this demonstrates that presentation is equally as important as content.

      Note 2: Research and Cooperation

      This section emphasizes how research and teamwork are frequently used to generate technical communication. This is crucial since writing in the workplace needs to be trustworthy and precise. It demonstrates that technical writing needs to be grounded in facts and collaboration to guarantee accuracy rather than being merely subjective.

      Note 3: Technical Communication Ethics

      Technical writers must adhere to ethical standards, which include respecting copyright laws and refraining from giving inaccurate or deceptive information. This is crucial since unethical communication can undermine confidence and result in legal issues. It demonstrates that authors have obligations to both their organization and their audience.

      Note 4: The Value of Conciseness and Clarity

      The chapter illustrates that in order for readers to grasp the idea quickly, writing must be clear and succinct. Because workplace readers frequently lack the time to read lengthy or complex texts, this is crucial. Effective communication is enhanced and misconceptions are avoided with clear writing.

      Note 5: Concern Regarding Grammar and Professionalism

      According to this section, a writer can come out as unprofessional with just one spelling or punctuation error. This raises the question of how much a reader's trust in the writer is impacted by grammar. It demonstrates the need of proofreading since mistakes can undermine confidence even when the content is accurate.

    1. Choosing an appropriate font is the first step, and the focus should be on a clean, clear font with adequate spacing between letters (Kitchel, 2011/2019). The main choices for font are between serif and sans serif.

      I’ve always known that font choice is important, especially in early childhood settings, since those are the prime years for letter recognition and learning to read. However, I wasn’t always sure which fonts were actually best to use. The only one I really knew by name was Times New Roman, but I often felt like it wasn’t the most effective or child-friendly option.

    2. creating materials from scratch is not always necessary and, at times, may not be feasible. Complex images and sophisticated multimedia tutorials can be engaging, but they also require time, knowledge, and equipment to create. Rather than developing these materials on our own, we might search online repositories for existing materials.

      This makes me feel a lot better because as educators we usually tend to put a lot of pressure on ourselves to give our students the best that we can but using already made materials can help put our efforts in more important areas.

    3. Used well, these materials are integral to the session, and to be effective, they need the same careful level of planning and design as the rest of our lesson.

      I agree with this statement that emphasizes that the materials teachers use are not just add ons, but rather key components of teaching.

    1. 💻.asus.🧊.♖-05xy

      IPNS Publishing keys are given personal names referred to as inter planetary personal names ippns

      these names are made up by the creator of the file system and show the path to the folder that would be the root of the mutable filesystem that is being named followed by a dash and the last four character taken from the public key

      💻.asus.🧊.♖-05xy

      the personally understood name goves tha name of the machine used as the root elements in the file system 💻.asus. the ice icon signifies that this folderis part of an IPFS file system

      the white rook utf8 icon ♖signifies that a peergos file system is being mirrored here in 🧊 IPFS

      So retrieval depends on the storage infrastructure technology-protocol chosen But these can be global unique names, and there may be others but the combination of these two is self-sufficient

    1. Art is intertwined with humanity, with all its flawed dimensions, and the two cannot be separated. In the making of art, there is family, there are friends and collaborators, there is both fragility and permanence, and there is the passage of time. And there is physicality.

      This further shows why people didn't like this ad and how the author who wrote this has a personal attachment to music. This could mean that other musicians would be upset, but non-musicians would care a bit less.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the investigators identified LMOD1 as one of a subset of cytoskeletal proteins that levels increase in early stages of myogenic differentiation. Lmod1 is understudied in striated muscle and in particular in myogenic differentiation. Thus, this is an important study. It is also a very thorough study, with perhaps even too much data presented. Importantly, the investigators observed that LMOD1 appears to be important for skeletal regeneration, myogenic differentiation and that it interacts with SIRT1. Both primary myoblast differentiation and skeletal muscle regeneration were studied. Rescue experiments confirmed these observations: SIRT1 can rescue perturbations of myogenic differentiation as a result of LMOD1 knockdown.

      Strengths:

      Particular strengths include: an important topic, the use of primary skeletal cultures, the use of both cell culture and in vivo approaches, careful biomarker analysis of primary mouse myoblast differentiation, the use of two methods to probe the function of the Lmod1/SIRT1 pathway via using depletion approaches and inhibitors, and the generation of six independent myoblast cultures. Results support their conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Figure 1. Images of cells in Figure 1A are too small to be meaningful (especially in comparison to the other data presented in this figure). Perhaps make graphs smaller?

      (2) Line 148 "We found LMOD2 to be the most abundant Lmod in whole skeletal muscle." This is confusing since most, if not all, prior studies have shown that Lmod3 is the predominant isoform in skeletal muscle. The two papers that are cited are incorrectly cited. Clarification to resolve this discrepancy is needed.

      (3) Figure 2. Immunofluorescence (IF) panels are too small to be meaningful. Perhaps the graphs could be made smaller and more space allocated for the IF panels? This issue is apparent for just about all IF panels - they are simply too small to be meaningful. Additionally, in many of the immunofluorescence figures, the colors that were used make it difficult to discern the stained cellular structures. For example, in Figure S1, orange and purple are used - they do not stand out as well as other colors that are more commonly used.

      (4) There is huge variability in many experiments presented - as such, more samples appear to be required to allow for meaningful data to be obtained. For example, Figure S2. Many experimental groups, only have 3 samples - this is highly problematic - I would estimate that 5-6 would be the minimum.

      (5) Ponceau S staining is often used as a loading control in this manuscript for western blots. The area/molecular weight range actually used should be specified. Not clear why in some experiments GAPDH staining is used, in other experiments Ponceau S staining is used, and in some, both are used. In some experiments the variability of total protein loaded from lane-to-lane is disconcerting. For example, in Figure S4C there appears to be more than normal variability. Can the protein assay be redone and the samples run again?

      (6) Figure S3 - Lmod3 is included in the figure but no mention of it occurs in the title of the figure and/or legend.

      (7) Abstract, line 25. "overexpression accelerates and improves the formation of myotubes". This is a confusing sentence. How is it improving the formation? A little more information about how they are different than developing myotubes in normal/healthy muscle would be helpful

      (8) Impossible from IF figures presented to determine where Lmod1 localizes in the myocytes. Information on its subcellular localization is important. Does it localize with Lmod2 and Lmod3 at thin filament pointed ends?

      Comments on revisions:

      Many comments have been adequately addressed. However, some concerns remain.

      Former Concern #2. The issue with the lack of detection of LMOD3 in their muscle samples is troublesome and has not been adequately resolved in the revised manuscript. It is a fact that most, if not all, studies on Lmod3 report that it is the most abundant isoform in skeletal muscle. This issue should be discussed in the manuscript. It is recognized that a different assay was utilized in this paper. The papers that are cited continue to remain incorrect. Specifically:

      Tsukada et al., reports abundance of LMOD2 in cardiac muscle, not in skeletal muscle.

      Nworu et al., 2015 reports on LMOD3 in skeletal muscle.

      Kiss et al.,2020. While this paper reveals an important function for Lmod2 in thin filament length regulation, it is clearly shows many examples of high expression of Lmod3 in various skeletal muscles isolated from mice.

      Former Concern #3. With respect to small sample numbers. Hopefully a statistical editor is available to comment. While this reviewer is happy that other assays were used to verify their data, the problem still remains that many experimental groups only have 3 samples (with high variability).

      Former Concern #3. Many immunofluorescence panels are hard to evaluate because of their small size.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      eLife Assessment

      This valuable study offers insights into the role of Leiomodin-1 (LMOD1) in muscle stem cell biology, advancing our understanding of myogenic differentiation and indicating LMOD1 as a regulator of muscle regeneration, aging, and exercise adaptation. The integration of in vitro and in vivo approaches, complemented by proteomic and imaging methodologies, is solid. However, certain aspects require further attention to improve the clarity, impact, and overall significance of the work, particularly in substantiating the in vivo relevance. This work will provide a starting point that will be of value to medical biologists and biochemists working on LMOD and its variants in muscle biology.

      Thank you for the positive feedback on our manuscript and the constructive criticism provided by the reviewers that helped us improve our manuscript.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript by Ori and colleagues investigates the role of Lmod1 in muscle stem cell activation and differentiation. The study begins with a time-course mass spectrometry analysis of primary muscle stem cells, identifying Lmod1 as a pro-myogenic candidate (Figure 1). While the initial approach is robust, the subsequent characterization lacks depth and clarity. Although the data suggest that Lmod1 promotes myogenesis, the underlying mechanisms remain vague, and key experiments are missing. Please find my comments below.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive feedback on our manuscript and the helpful comments, which helped improve it.

      (1) The authors mainly rely on coarse and less-established readouts such as myotube length and spherical Myh-positive cells. More comprehensive and standard analyses, such as co-staining for Pax7, MyoD, and Myogenin, would allow quantification of quiescent, activated, and differentiating stem cells in knockdown and overexpression experiments. The exact stage at which Lmod1 functions (stem cell, progenitor, or post-fusion) is unclear due to the limited depth of the analysis. Performing similar experiments on cultured single EDL fibers would add valuable insights.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. In addition to performing standard measurements such as staining for Myogenin and Myosin Heavy Chain (Figure S2H), we focused on morphological readouts, such as myotube formation, because LMOD1 is an actin cytoskeleton-associated protein. Therefore, we reasoned its function would be most directly reflected in structural changes during differentiation, rather than solely in early transcriptional markers. 

      Regarding the use of standard markers, we have already performed co-staining for Myogenin and Myosin Heavy Chain (MHC), which effectively quantifies early myogenic committed (Myogenin+/MHC-) and terminally differentiating (Myogenin+/MHC+) cells (Figure S2H). We did not include Pax7 as our primary culture system consists of already activated myoblasts, where Pax7 is not a reliable marker of quiescence. Our data also suggest that Lmod1 is important in regulating differentiation with comparably only mild effects on proliferation (S2D-E), therefore, we focused on this stage of myogenesis.

      Our focus on differentiation over activation is further supported by multiple lines of evidence. First, analysis of publicly available transcriptome datasets reveals that Lmod1 mRNA levels actually decrease upon Muscle Stem Cell (MuSC) activation, suggesting its primary role is not during this initial phase. We added this data for clarification to Figure S1B. This aligns perfectly with our in vivo data from cardiotoxin-induced muscle regeneration, where abundance of LMOD1 protein peaks at days 4-7 post-injury — a time point coinciding with new myofiber formation and maturation — rather than during the initial activation and proliferation phase (days 1-3) (Figure 4I).

      Given this strong evidence pointing to a primary role for LMOD1 during the later stages of differentiation, we believe our current analyses are the most relevant. While single EDL fiber cultures are valuable for studying the quiescence-to-activation transition, they would not provide significant additional insight into the specific differentiation-centric mechanism we are investigating here. We are confident that our chosen readouts appropriately address Lmod1's function in the differentiation of myoblasts and formation of myotubes.

      (2) In supplementary Figure 2E, the distinction between Hoechst-positive cells and total cell counts is unclear. The authors should clarify why Hoechst-positive cells increase and relabel "reserve cells," as the term is confusing without reading the legend.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out the confusion regarding the naming of the cell populations and the increase in Hoechst-positive cells. We have now modified this and revised the terminology used in Figure S2E to improve clarity. Specifically, we have relabeled "reserve cells" as "non-proliferating myoblasts (Ki67-/Hoechst+)" to describe these cells more accurately without requiring the legend for interpretation. Regarding the increase in Hoechst-positive cells, we observed a slight (26%) but significant decrease in the number of proliferating myoblasts (Ki67+/Hoechst+) (Figures S2D and S2E). The relative increase in non-proliferating (Ki67-/Hoechst+) cells is a consequence of the significant reduction in the number of proliferating cells (Ki67+/Hoechst+) cells. Importantly, the total cell count (sum of Ki67-/Hoechst+) and (Ki67+/Hoechst+) remained stable. This has been clarified in the revised figure legend and main text as follows:

      “This was accompanied by a proportional increase in non-proliferating myoblasts (Ki67-/Hoechst+), while the total Hoechst-positive cell count (Ki67+/Hoechst+ and Ki67-/Hoechst+) remained unchanged (Figure S2E).”

      (3) The specificity of Lmod1 and Sirt1 immunostaining needs validation using siRNA-treated samples, especially as these data form the basis of the mechanistic conclusions.

      We have validated the specificity of the LMOD1 antibody using multiple approaches. Specifically, we performed immunofluorescence and immunoblotting on Lmod1 siRNA-transfected samples, where we observed a significant reduction in the Lmod1 protein signal compared to control conditions (see manuscript data from Figure S2G).

      Additionally, LMOD1 overexpression experiments demonstrated a corresponding increase in the signal for LMOD1 using immunofluorescence analyses, confirming the specificity of the antibody for detecting LMOD1.

      For the reviewers’ interest, we add Author response image 1:

      Author response image 1.

      Specificity of antibodies detecting LMOD1. Representative immunofluorescence images of LMOD1 in primary myoblast cultures following siLmod1 knockdown, LMOD1 overexpression, or controls transfected with a non-targeting siRNA (siCtrl) after one day of differentiation. LMOD1 (purple), SIRT1 (yellow), and nuclei (Hoechst, blue). Scale bar: 10 µm.

      For the SIRT1 antibody used in our immunostaining, the specificity was validated by transfecting primary myoblasts with siRNA targeting Sirt1 and performing immunoblot analyses (Figure S5A). These showed a significant reduction in SIRT1 protein levels, confirming both the effectiveness of the siRNA and, critically, the antibody's ability to specifically recognize and detect SIRT1 protein. Furthermore, the same SIRT1 antibody was utilized in our nuclear-cytoplasmic fractionation experiments (Figure S4C), and its ability to detect SIRT1 in the expected subcellular compartments further supports its specific binding to SIRT1. While direct immunofluorescence on Sirt1 siRNA-transfected samples was not performed, the robust demonstration of the antibody's specificity for Sirt1 protein via immunoblotting (i.e., correct molecular weight band, significantly reduced by Sirt1 siRNA) and its distribution in subcellular fractions, which is fully consistent with the localization immunostaining performed at the same time points (compare Figure S4C and 5A), provide strong evidence on the antibody’s specificity, also in immunofluorescence experiments.

      (4) The authors must test the effect of Lmod1 siRNA on Sirt1 localization, as only overexpression experiments are shown

      We carefully considered performing this experiment. However, the knockdown of Lmod1 significantly impairs myogenic differentiation, a crucial cellular process that itself can influence protein localization. Consequently, if SIRT1 localization would be altered following knockdown of Lmod1, it would be challenging to disentangle whether this was a direct result of LMOD1 absence impacting SIRT1 trafficking or an indirect consequence of the cells failing to differentiate properly. This would make it difficult to draw clear conclusions regarding a direct causal link between LMOD1 and SIRT1 localization from such an experiment. Therefore, we focused on overexpression experiments, where we could demonstrate that altering LMOD1 levels is sufficient to affect SIRT1 localization. Our nuclear-cytoplasmic fractionation experiments clearly show that LMOD1 overexpression leads to changes in SIRT1 distribution (Figure 5H-K). These findings provide evidence that LMOD1 can directly modulate SIRT1 localization, supporting our mechanistic conclusions.

      (5) In Figure S3, the biotin signal in LMOD2 samples appears weak. The authors need to address whether comparing LMOD1 and LMOD2 is valid given the apparent difference in reaction efficiency. It would also help to highlight where Sirt1 falls on the volcano plot in S3B.

      We agree that the overall biotin signal on the streptavidin blot for the LMOD2-BirA* sample appears weaker than for LMOD1-BirA*. To provide a more direct comparison of the bait proteins themselves, we have now added a bar graph to the revised Figure S3D, which quantifies the relative abundance of LMOD1 and LMOD2 bait proteins in the pull down experiments. This analysis shows that the levels of LMOD1-BirA* and LMOD2-BirA* were comparable in our BioID samples. Furthermore, the validity of the LMOD2 BioID experiment is strongly supported by the identification of several known LMOD1 and LMOD2 interaction partners. As shown in the dataset, well-established interactors such as TMOD1, TPM3, and TMOD3 were identified, with some even showing stronger enrichment with LMOD2 than with LMOD1. This confirms that the biotinylation reaction was efficient enough to capture proximal proteins for both baits.

      Regarding SIRT1, we have now highlighted in yellow its position on the volcano plot in the revised Figure S3E. As can be seen, SIRT1 was identified in the LMOD1-BirA sample and showed enrichment. We believe these clarifications, along with the additional expression data and the successful identification of known interactors, confirm the validity of our comparative BioID analysis.

      (6) The immunostaining data suggest that Lmod1 remains cytoplasmic throughout differentiation, whereas Sirt1 shows transient cytoplasmic localization at day 1 of differentiation. The authors should explain why Sirt1 is not constantly sequestered if Lmod1's cytoplasmic localization is consistent. It is also unclear whether day 1 is the key time point for Lmod1 function, as its precise role during myogenesis remains ambiguous.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. We have no data explaining why SIRT1 is not constantly sequestered while LMOD1 remains consistently cytoplasmic. We can only speculate that the transient cytoplasmic localization of SIRT1 may be linked to the availability and functional role of LMOD1 throughout the differentiation process. While LMOD1 is present at low levels in proliferating primary myoblasts, its expression increases upon the initiation of differentiation (Figure 2A). Initially, during the early stages of differentiation, LMOD1 may not be required for actin nucleation as the major remodeling of the cytoskeleton has not yet begun. During this phase, LMOD1 might have the capacity to sequester SIRT1 in the cytoplasm.

      However, as differentiation progresses and morphological changes take place, LMOD1 may switch its functional role to actin nucleation, thereby releasing SIRT1. This transition could explain why SIRT1 is free to localize transiently to the cytoplasm, particularly at day 1, when cytoskeletal remodeling is beginning but not yet fully established.

      Additionally, as LMOD1 and SIRT1 are known to colocalize in the nucleus, they may exit the nucleus together. Once in the cytoplasm, LMOD1 may become engaged in actin nucleation, allowing SIRT1 to function independently, which could explain the transient nature of SIRT1’s cytoplasmic localization.

      We have acknowledged this gap in our understanding in the discussion of the revised manuscript:

      “Our immunostaining data show that while LMOD1 is consistently cytoplasmic, its partner SIRT1 is only transiently localized in the cytoplasm. This suggests that their interaction is dynamically regulated. We hypothesize that the function of LMOD1 is determined by the changing availability of its binding partners during differentiation. During the initial phase, LMOD1 may primarily function to sequester SIRT1, a key regulator of myogenic genes. As differentiation proceeds, the increased expression of cytoskeletal components, such as its canonical partners TMODs and TPMs, likely shifts the function of LMOD1 towards its role in actin nucleation. This molecular switch, potentially driven by a change in the interactome of LMOD1, could then result in the release of SIRT1 from the cytoplasm. Such a mechanism may coordinate transcriptional regulation with cytoskeletal remodeling during myoblast differentiation.”

      (7) The introduction does not sufficiently establish the motivation or knowledge gap this work aims to address. Instead, it reads like a narration of disparate topics in a single paragraph. The authors should clarify the statement in line 150, "since this protein has been...,".

      We thank the reviewer for requesting clarification regarding our focus on LMOD1 (Introduction and Line 150 in the original submission). In the revised manuscript, we shortened the introduction and more clearly emphasized the motivation of our study:

      “Although these mechanisms contribute to remodeling the cellular architecture of MuSCs, a comprehensive understanding of the temporal dynamics of proteome remodeling during differentiation remains lacking. To address this knowledge gap, we performed an unbiased proteomic analysis of the early stages of myogenic differentiation to identify previously unrecognized proteins involved in this process and to examine how they functionally interact with established regulatory pathways.”

      Our decision to focus on LMOD1 was driven by its significant upregulation in our temporal proteome dataset, together with its previously uncharacterized role in primary myoblasts. Furthermore, to strengthen the interpretation of LMOD1’s role, particularly in the context of aging, we have integrated a new analysis of published transcriptomic datasets. This can be found in the main text as follows:

      “Surprisingly, we detected LMOD1 in freshly isolated muscle stem cells (MuSCs), but not LMOD2. Additionally, we observed that the protein levels of LMOD1 increased in MuSCs isolated from older mice (Figure 2C and Figure S1B). We further analyzed published transcriptomic data sets that describe changes between young and old MuSCs in both quiescent and activated states in young and old animals (Liu et al. 2013; Lukjanenko et al. 2016). In these analyzed transcriptomic data sets, Lmod1 was found to be significantly downregulated during the activation of MuSCs in both young and old mice (see Figure S1B).

      To assess the in vivo relevance of our finding, we queried two proteomic datasets of freshly isolated MuSCs and four different skeletal muscles (gastrocnemius, G; soleus, S; tibialis anterior, TA; extensor digitorum longus, EDL) (Schüler et al. 2021). We found LMOD2 to be the most abundant leiomodin protein in whole skeletal muscle, consistent with data from (Tsukada et al. 2010; Nworu et al. 2015; Kiss et al. 2020), while the overall abundance of LMOD1 was lower since this protein has been mainly associated with smooth muscle cells (Nanda and Miano 2012; Conley et al. 2001; Nanda et al. 2018) (Figure 2B).”

      Overall, while the identification of Lmod1 as a pro-myogenic factor is convincing, the mechanistic insights are insufficient, and the manuscript would benefit from addressing these concerns.

      We thank the reviewer for their constructive criticism. In the revised manuscript, we have strengthened our mechanistic insights and the validation of our findings by implementing the suggestions of the reviewers and including new experimental data to address their concerns.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors identify Leiomodin-1 (LMOD1) as a key regulator of early myogenic differentiation, demonstrating its interaction with SIRT1 to influence SIRT1's cellular localization and gene expression. The authors propose that LMOD1 translocates SIRT1 from the nucleus to the cytoplasm to permit the expression of myogenic differentiation genes such as MYOD or Myogenin.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this work lies in the robust temporal resolution achieved through a time-course mass spectrometry analysis of in vitro muscle differentiation. This provides novel insights into the dynamic process of myogenic differentiation, often under-explored in terms of temporal progression. The authors provide a strong mechanistic case for how LMOD1 exerts its role in muscle differentiation which opens avenues to modulate.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive feedback on our manuscript and the insightful comments which helped to improve the manuscript!

      Weaknesses:

      One limitation of the study is the in vivo data. Although the authors do translate their findings in vivo for LMOD1 localization and expression, the cross-sectional imaging is not highly convincing. Longitudinal cuts or isolated fibers could have been more useful specimens to answer these questions. Moreover, the authors do not assess their in vitro SIRT1 findings in vivo. A few key experiments in regenerating or aged mice would strengthen the mechanistic insight of the findings.

      We agree that longitudinal cuts and isolated fibers can provide excellent morphological detail for specific questions. However, for our primary objective in this study, which was to assess the temporal expression and localization of LMOD1 across the tissue during the regeneration process, we decided that cross-sectional analysis provided the most robust and reliable overview. Cross-sectional imaging effectively captures the spatial distribution of LMOD1 across multiple myofibers and their surrounding microenvironment, simultaneously assessing the whole cross-sectional area. By using this approach, we were able to evaluate the broader tissue architecture and cellular context, which was essential for understanding the dynamic changes occurring during regeneration. We were also able to investigate all myofibers of a muscle, and not only a small proportion, which we would analyze with longitudinal sections and isolated myofibers. Therefore, we continued using cross-sections for further analyses.

      We fully agree with the reviewer that validating our in vitro SIRT1 findings in an in vivo context is an essential next step. To address this, we performed additional analyses on our existing regenerating muscle samples and incorporated new immunostainings for SIRT1 and PAX7 into the regeneration time-course (now shown in revised Figure 4I), providing further in vivo support for our proposed mechanism. We focused specifically on cross-sections collected at day 5 post-injury, a time point selected based on the peak in LMOD1 expression, to assess whether SIRT1 levels increase in parallel with LMOD1 during regeneration. Notably, SIRT1 abundance is elevated at day 5 post-injury, underscoring its involvement in early myogenic differentiation. This conclusion is further supported by the localization of SIRT1 within mononucleated cells and newly formed myofibers at this stage of regeneration.

      Finally, we agree that further mechanistic studies in vivo would be highly valuable. While we were able to address SIRT1 dynamics in our regeneration model as suggested, an aged mouse cohort was unfortunately not available to us for this kind of study. Furthermore, more extensive in vivo experiments, such as those involving genetic manipulation, were beyond the scope of the current study, partly due to constraints related to animal welfare regulations and our approved experimental protocols.

      Discussion:

      Overall, the study emphasizes the importance of understanding the temporal dynamics of molecular players during myogenic differentiation and provides valuable proteomic data that will benefit the field. Future studies should explore whether LMOD1 modulates the nuclear-cytoplasmic shuttling of other transcription factors during muscle development and how these processes are mechanistically achieved. Investigating whether LMOD1 can be therapeutically targeted to enhance muscle regeneration in contexts such as exercise, aging, and disease will be critical for translational applications. Additionally, elucidating the interplay among LMOD1, LMOD2, and LMOD3 could uncover broader implications for actin cytoskeletal regulation in muscle biology.

      We thank the reviewer for this excellent suggestion for future analyses. We have included these important considerations and future avenues in the Discussion of the revised manuscript:

      “Our immunostaining data show that while LMOD1 is consistently cytoplasmic, its partner SIRT1 is only transiently localized in the cytoplasm. This suggests that their interaction is dynamically regulated. We hypothesize that the function of LMOD1 is determined by the changing availability of its binding partners during differentiation. During the initial phase, LMOD1 may primarily function to sequester SIRT1, a key regulator of myogenic genes. As differentiation proceeds, the increased expression of cytoskeletal components, such as its canonical partners TMODs and TPMs, likely shifts the function of LMOD1 towards its role in actin nucleation. This molecular switch, potentially driven by a change in the interactome of LMOD1, could then result in the release of SIRT1 from the cytoplasm. Such a mechanism may coordinate transcriptional regulation with cytoskeletal remodeling during myoblast differentiation.”

      “Moreover, delineating the functional specialization and potential redundancy among leiomodin proteins represents an important next step. Our data indicate that LMOD1 primarily regulates early myogenic differentiation (Figure 3). In contrast, the lack of an early functional phenotype upon LMOD2 depletion, together with its upregulation at later stages (Figure S2A), suggests a temporal shift in regulatory control. Accordingly, a systematic comparative analysis of LMOD1, LMOD2, and LMOD3 will be required to elucidate their distinct roles in actin cytoskeleton regulation across the myogenic program, particularly with respect to myofibril maturation and maintenance.”

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Major Changes:

      (1) In Vivo Data on SIRT1:

      The inclusion of in vivo data on SIRT1 localization and expression would significantly strengthen the manuscript. Similar staining techniques used for LMOD1 could be applied to SIRT1. Additionally, imaging muscle specimens such as longitudinal sections or isolated myofibers would provide clearer insights into SIRT1's spatial distribution and improve upon the less convincing cross-sectional images currently presented (Figure 2).

      We fully agree that providing in vivo data on SIRT1 localization and expression is a crucial step to support our in vitro findings. Following the reviewer's suggestion, we have performed new experiments on muscle regeneration samples using the analyses of cross-sections as done for the analysis of LMOD1 localization. Specifically, we performed immunostaining for SIRT1 on cross-sections from muscle samples collected at day 5 post-injury, a time point selected based on the observed peak in LMOD1 expression. These new data (now included in revised Figure 4I) allowed us to assess whether SIRT1 levels increase during regeneration in parallel with an increase in LMOD1 abundance.

      Regarding the suggestion to use longitudinal sections or isolated myofibers, we agree that these preparations offer excellent answers for certain questions. For the primary goal of our study, to assess the temporal expression changes across the entire regenerating tissue at different time points, we found that cross-sections provided the most comprehensive and robust overview and therefore did not use longitudinal sections or isolated myofibers. 

      Performing additional animal experiments to obtain these specific preparations was beyond the scope of the current study and subject to constraints from our approved animal welfare protocols.

      (2) Morphology of siLmod1 Cells:

      The morphology of siLmod1-treated cells in vitro (Figure 3) raises concerns. Assessing cell viability or cell death in these experiments would help ensure that differences are not due to dead or unhealthy cells being quantified. There is also a notable discrepancy between the control panels in Figures 3C and 3H compared to the experimental conditions in 3F and 3K, particularly in terms of cell length and morphology. These inconsistencies should be addressed or clarified.

      We acknowledge the visual discrepancies in cell morphology noted by the reviewer (e.g., between Figures 3C/3H and 3F/3K). These differences can be attributed to biological variability between primary myoblast cultures isolated from different mice. Such variability includes differences in myogenic potential and the fact that cells are not synchronized, leading to variations in differentiation efficiency, baseline morphology, and cell length across cultures (Cornelison 2008; Vaughan and Lamia 2019). To account for this, we decided to use n=6 biological replicates, i.e., primary myoblast cultures isolated from 6 different mice, for immunofluorescence analysis, ensuring robust quantitative data. Furthermore, we confirmed that this phenotype was not an artifact of culture conditions, as we consistently observed the same effect of Lmod1 knockdown independently of the passage number of the myoblasts or the donor mouse.

      To address the concerns that morphological changes in siLmod1-treated cells might reflect cell death, we performed a TUNEL assay (transfection at day 1, analysis at day 3 of differentiation). This revealed no significant increase in TUNEL-positive (apoptotic) cells in siLmod1- (or siSirt1-) transfected samples versus siCtrl-transfected cells. These new data have been added to the revised manuscript as Supplementary Figure S2I. The TUNEL data indicate that the observed morphological changes upon knockdown of Lmod1 are not due to induced cell death. Supported by these results, our interpretation is that knockdown of Lmod1 impairs or arrests differentiation rather than causing cell death. Furthermore, our quantification of different cell populations showed shifts indicative of impaired differentiation (e.g., accumulation of cells at earlier stages) without exhibiting significant loss in cell numbers. For example, the numbers of myogenin+/MHC- and myogenin+/MHC+ cell populations, and differentiated myotubes, were not significantly reduced after transfection with siLmod1. A slight, not significant trend towards fewer non-proliferating myoblasts/reserve cells characterized by the expression of Myogenin-/MHC-Hoechst+ (Figure S2H) was noted. Overall, cells appeared to be 'stuck' in differentiation, consistent with the role of Lmod1 in impairing differentiation but not causing cell death. We have further clarified this aspect in the revised manuscript.

      (3) LMOD1 and SIRT1 Interaction in Myogenic Cells:

      Strengthening the connection between LMOD1 and SIRT1 within the myogenic system would enhance the manuscript. Could proximity ligation assays (PLA) be performed in myogenic cells, as was done in HEK293T cells? Additionally, investigating whether SIRT1 remains in the nucleus upon LMOD1 knockdown using siRNA would provide mechanistic insight into their interaction during myogenic differentiation.

      We would like to clarify that the Proximity Ligation Assays (PLA) shown in Figure 4H were indeed performed in primary myoblasts, confirming the LMOD1-SIRT1 interaction directly in a myogenic context. We have modified the text to clarify that primary myoblasts were used for the PLA assays.

      Minor Points:

      (1) Was Lmod1 knockdown confirmed in vivo?

      To target Lmod1 in Muscle Stem Cells (MuSCs) in vivo, we utilized self-delivering Accell siRNAs. This delivery system has been previously validated and shown to be highly effective for targeting MuSCs in regenerating muscle (Bentzinger et al., Cell Stem Cell, 2013).

      While this is an established method for delivery, confirming knockdown specifically within the rare MuSC population is technically challenging using bulk tissue analysis, as the target signal is diluted by numerous other cell types. 

      Therefore, to ensure the efficacy of our specific siRNA, we performed in vitro validation. For the reviewers' interest, we add Author response image 2 showing the efficiency of the respective siRNAs:

      Author response image 2.

      Knockdown efficiency of siRNAs targeting Lmod1 and Lmod2 following using the same self-delivering siRNA in proliferating primary myoblasts as used in in vivo experiments. Self-delivering Accell siRNA was added to primary myoblasts cultured in low serum media for 48 hours. Relative mRNA expression levels of Lmod1 and Lmod2 were measured after self-delivering Accell siRNA transfection targeting either Lmod1 (siLmod1) or Lmod2 (siLmod2). Expression levels were compared to control siRNA-transfected cells (siCtrl) and normalized to Gapdh expression.

      Based on the documented efficacy of this delivery system from prior literature and our own validation of the specific siRNAs used here, we are confident in the knockdown efficiency of the respective siRNAs. We decided not to perform additional animal experiments due to animal welfare considerations.

      (2) Some of the western blot bands do not appear to match the expected patterns for the tested proteins compared to controls (e.g., Figure S2J, S4C). Ensure that these are accurately labeled and include the entire membrane for transparency and reproducibility.

      Regarding Figure S2J, we agree that the presentation could be confusing to the reader. The blot shows LMOD1 and LMOD2 knockdown, while the bar plot quantifies only the change in LMOD2 levels. We have now revised the figure legend to explicitly state this. We hope this makes the presentation of our data clearer.

      For Figure S4C, we believe the concern about 'patterns' relates to loading variability. In this experiment, we manually counted the nuclei before lysis to ensure that each nuclear fraction started with an equal amount of material. We then loaded the cytoplasmic fractions in proportion to these counts. The purity of the fractions was additionally confirmed using nuclear (H4) and cytoplasmic (ALDOA) markers. As stated in the figure, the nuclear/cytoplasmic ratio of LMOD1 or SIRT1 was normalized across the entire lane of the Ponceau S staining, which we have now clarified in the relevant figure legends.

      Finally, regarding transparency, the presented immunoblot images are representative crops, which is standard practice for clarity. We are committed to reproducibility and will provide full, uncropped scans of all blots in the final version of the manuscript, in line with eLife publishing guidelines. 

      (3) Figure S1B appears to reuse images from Figure 2D (rotated). Verify that this is acceptable for the journal's guidelines, and if necessary, provide additional justification or clarification.

      We acknowledge that the image presented in Figure S1B was accidentally reused as a representative example in Figure 2D. To address this and prevent any potential redundancy or confusion, we have revised Figure S1B by replacing the duplicated image with a different, representative example from our dataset. The updated figure now contains unique image data, and we believe this revision fully resolves the concern.

      (4) Ensure consistent scale bars across images, particularly in Figures 3C and 3H, where discrepancies might affect interpretation.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing this out, we have now standardized all scale bars throughout the manuscript to ensure consistency. All immunofluorescence images of cultured cells (including Fig 3C and 3H) now have a 50 µm scale bar, and all tissue cross-sections have a 100 µm scale bar. This change has been implemented in the revised figures.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the investigators identified LMOD1 as one of a subset of cytoskeletal proteins whose levels increase in the early stages of myogenic differentiation. Lmod1 is understudied in striated muscle and in particular in myogenic differentiation. Thus, this is an important study. It is also a very thorough study - with perhaps even too much data presented. Importantly, the investigators observed that LMOD1 appears to be important for skeletal regeneration, and myogenic differentiation and that it interacts with SIRT1. Both primary myoblast differentiation and skeletal muscle regeneration were studied. Rescue experiments confirmed these observations: SIRT1 can rescue perturbations of myogenic differentiation as a result of LMOD1 knockdown.

      Strengths:

      Particular strengths include: important topic, the use of primary skeletal cultures, the use of both cell culture and in vivo approaches, careful biomarker analysis of primary mouse myoblast differentiation, the use of two methods to probe the function of the Lmod1/SIRT1 pathway via using depletion approaches and inhibitors, and generation of six independent myoblast cultures. Results support their conclusions.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive assessment of our work and the helpful comments for improving our manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Figure 1. Images of cells in Figure 1A are too small to be meaningful (especially in comparison to the other data presented in this figure). Perhaps the authors could make graphs smaller?

      We have adjusted the size of the images across all figure panels to ensure better visibility and clarity. We hope these adjustments improve the presentation of the data.

      (2) Line 148 "We found LMOD2 to be the most abundant Lmod in the whole skeletal muscle." This is confusing since most, if not all, prior studies have shown that Lmod3 is the predominant isoform in skeletal muscle. The two papers that are cited are incorrectly cited. Clarification to resolve this discrepancy is needed.

      We acknowledge that LMOD2 and LMOD3 are predominantly expressed in skeletal and cardiac muscles (Tsukada et al. 2010; Nworu et al. 2015), www.proteinatlas.org) and LMOD3’s transcription is directly regulated by MRTF/SRF and MEF2 to coordinate sarcomeric assembly (Cenik et al. 2015). However, our statement refers specifically to the analysis of the proteomic datasets from freshly isolated MuSCs and four distinct skeletal muscles (G, S, TA, EDL) generated by Schüler et al. 2021. Crucially, LMOD3 was not detected in the quantitative mass spectrometry data for the EDL, G, S, or TA muscle samples analyzed in this specific study. In the context of this particular dataset, LMOD2 was the most highly abundant Leiomodin isoform detected in the whole skeletal muscle samples. This finding suggests a differential expression and function between LMOD isoforms depending on the muscle type and/or developmental/regenerative state. We have revised and corrected this clarification in the manuscript, including correcting the initial citations.

      (3) Figure 2. Immunoflorescence (IF) panels are too small to be meaningful. Perhaps the graphs could be made smaller and more space allocated for the IF panels? This issue is apparent for just about all IF panels - they are simply too small to be meaningful. Additionally, in many of the immunofluorescence figures, the colors that were used make it difficult to discern the stained cellular structures. For example, in Figure S1, orange and purple are used - they do not stand out as well as other colors that are more commonly used.

      We agree that the IF panels were too small for optimal interpretation and have adjusted them in Figure 2 and throughout the manuscript. Regarding the color choices, we appreciate the reviewer's comments. Our initial selection (e.g., orange and purple in Figure S1) was intended to enhance accessibility for individuals with common color vision deficiencies, including red-green color blindness. However, we acknowledge the reviewer's point that these combinations provided insufficient contrast for discerning cellular structures. Therefore, we have revised the color schemes to use green, red, and blue, which should offer improved contrast.

      (4) There is huge variability in many experiments presented - as such, more samples appear to be required to allow for meaningful data to be obtained. For example, Figure S2. Many experimental groups, only have 3 samples - this is highly problematic - I would estimate that 5-6 would be the minimum.

      We thank the reviewer for the comment regarding experimental variability and sample size. In our study, n=3 biological replicates, i.e., independent primary cell cultures obtained from different mice, were primarily used for immunoblots. We acknowledge that variability can be observed between distinct primary cell cultures due to factors such as inherent differences in myogenic potential, cell cycle state (as cells were not synchronized), and passage number. Importantly, despite this inter-sample variation, the investigated phenotypes showed consistent trends across biological replicates. Rather than increasing the number of replicates for immunoblots, we opted for validating our key findings using independent approaches with a higher number of replicates. For instance, qRT-PCR analyses (to confirm knockdown efficiency) and immunofluorescence analyses were mostly performed using five to six independent myoblast cultures (biological replicates).

      (5) Ponceau S staining is often used as a loading control in this manuscript for western blots. The area/molecular weight range actually used should be specified. Not clear why in some experiments GAPDH staining is used, in other experiments Ponceau S staining is used, and in some, both are used. In some experiments, the variability of total protein loaded from lane to lane is disconcerting. For example, in Figure S4C there appears to be more than normal variability. Can the protein assay be redone and samples run again?

      We have clarified in the relevant figure legends that Ponceau S normalization, when used, was based on the quantification of the entire lane. Our standard loading control is GAPDH. We used Ponceau S for normalization only when GAPDH was deemed unsuitable, e.g., in nuclear-cytoplasmic fractionation experiments where GAPDH is not present in all fractions.

      Concerning the variability observed in Figure S4C, we manually counted the nuclei before lysis to ensure that each nuclear fraction started with an equal amount of material. We then loaded the cytoplasmic fractions in proportion to these counts. The purity of the fractions was additionally confirmed using nuclear (H4) and cytoplasmic (ALDOA) markers. The nuclear/cytoplasmic ratio of LMOD1 or SIRT1 was normalized across the entire lane of the Ponceau S staining, which we have now clarified in the relevant figure legends.

      (6) Figure S3 - Lmod3 is included in the figure but no mention of it occurs in the title of the figure and/or legend.

      We wish to clarify that the protein identified in Figure S3 is TMOD3 (Tropomodulin 3), not LMOD3. TMOD3 is a known pointed-end capping protein regulating the actin filament nucleation process together with LMODs (Fowler and Dominguez 2017; Boczkowska et al. 2015), so its presence in our dataset was expected and helps validate our results.

      (7) Abstract, line 25. "overexpression accelerates and improves the formation of myotubes". This is a confusing sentence. How is it improving the formation? A little more information about how they are different than developing myotubes in normal/healthy muscles would be helpful.

      We thank the reviewer for the comment. To clarify, we have revised the sentence in line 25 to "improves the initiation of myotube formation." This change reflects our observation that overexpression of LMOD1 leads to a more rapid onset of myotube formation, as evidenced by earlier expression of differentiation markers and accelerated fusion of myoblasts into myotubes compared to GFP overexpression myoblast cell line. These findings suggest that LMOD1 overexpression enhances the efficiency of the early stages of differentiation and fusion, thereby contributing to improved initiation of myotube formation.

      (8) It is impossible from the IF figures presented to determine where Lmod1 localizes in the myocytes. Information on its subcellular localization is important. Does it localize with Lmod2 and Lmod3 at thin filament pointed ends?

      Several publications suggest that LMODs are involved in actin nucleation and interact with TMODs at the thin filament pointed ends (Boczkowska et al. 2015; Fowler and Dominguez 2017; Fowler, Greenfield, and Moyer 2003; Tsukada et al. 2010; Rao, Madasu, and Dominguez 2014). We performed F-actin (Phalloidin) staining together with LMOD1 staining and observed possible co-localization (see Author response image 3). Specifically, we noted an accumulation of LMOD1 at the ends of myocytes, indicating that LMOD1 might play a role in the elongation and guidance of myotube differentiation. For the reviewer’s interest, we include Author response image 3 as it was not part of the original manuscript. While performing subcellular localization stainings, we added the F-actin/Phalloidin staining to explore potential interactions, but this aspect was not further investigated in the current study.

      Author response image 3.

      Co-staining of LMOD1 and Phalloidin in differentiating myocytes.Example image showing immunofluorescence staining of LMOD1 (purple) and F-actin (green; Phalloidin) in differentiating primary myocytes. LMOD1 appears to accumulate at the ends of elongated myocytes and co-localizes with actin structures (highlighted in boxes), suggesting a potential role in myotube elongation and guidance during differentiation.

      Our study focused on a distinct role for LMOD1, independent from its function in actin filament nucleation, and we therefore did not pursue further co-localization staining with LMOD2 or LMOD3. We recognize the potential importance of exploring these interactions and their relevance to thin filament organization in skeletal muscle. However, although this was beyond the scope of our current work, we will investigate this aspect in the future.

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, the noncanonical amino acid acridon-2-ylalanine (Acd) was inserted at various positions within the human Hv1 protein using a genetic code expansion approach. The purified mutants with incorporated fluorophore were shown to be functional using a proton flux assay in proteoliposomes. FRET between native tryptophan and tyrosine residues and Acd were quantified using spectral FRET analysis. Predicted FRET efficiencies calculated from an AlphaFold model of the Hv1 dimer were compared to the corresponding experimental values. Spectral FRET analysis was also used to test whether structural rearrangements caused by Zn2+, a well-known Hv1 inhibitor, could be detected. The experimental data provide a good validation of the approach, but further expansion of the analysis will be necessary to differentiate between intra- and intersubunit structural features.

      Interestingly, the observed rearrangements induced by Zn2+ were not limited to the protein region proximal to the extracellular binding site but extended to the intracellular side of the channel. This finding agrees with previous studies showing that some extracellular Hv1 inhibitors, such as Zn2+ or AGAP/W38F, can cause long-range structural changes propagating to the intracellular vestibule of the channel (De La Rosa et al. J. Gen. Physiol. 2018, and Tang et al. Brit J. Pharm 2020). The authors should consider adding these references.

      Since one of the main goals of this work was to validate Acd incorporation and the spectral FRET analysis approach to detect conformational changes in hHv1 in preparation for future studies, the authors should consider removing one subunit from their dimer model, recalculating FRET efficiencies for the monomer, and comparing the predicted values to the experimental FRET data. This comparison could support the idea that the reported FRET measurements can inform not only on intrasubunit structural features but also on subunit organization.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript by Carmona, Zagotta, and Gordon is generally well-written. It presents a crude and incomplete structural analysis of the voltage-gated proton channel based on measured FRET distances. The primary experimental approach is Förster Resonance Energy Transfer (FRET), using a fluorescent probe attached to a noncanonical amino acid. This strategy is advantageous because the noncanonical amino acid likely occupies less space than conventional labels, allowing more effective incorporation into the channel structure.

      Fourteen individual positions within the channel were mutated for site-specific labeling, twelve of which yielded functional protein expression. These twelve labeling sites span discrete regions of the channel, including P1, P2, S0, S1, S2, S3, S4, and the dimer-connecting coiled-coil domain. FRET measurements are achieved using acridon-2-ylalanine (Acd) as the acceptor, with four tryptophan or four tyrosine residues per monomer serving as donors. In addition to estimating distances from FRET efficiency, the authors analyze full FRET spectra and investigate fluorescence lifetimes on the nanosecond timescale.

      Despite these strengths, the manuscript does not provide a clear explanation of how channel structure changes during gating. While a discrepancy between AlphaFold structural predictions and the experimental measurements is noted, it remains unclear whether this mismatch arises from limitations of the model or from the experimental approach. No further structural analysis is presented to resolve this issue or to clarify the conformational states of the protein.

      The manuscript successfully demonstrates that Acd can be incorporated at specific positions without abolishing channel function, and it is noteworthy that the reconstituted proteins function as voltage-activated proton channels in liposomes. The authors also report reversible zinc inhibition of the channel, suggesting that zinc induces structural changes in certain channel regions that can be reversed by EDTA chelation. However, this observation is not explored in sufficient depth to yield meaningful mechanistic insight.

      Overall, while the study introduces an interesting labeling strategy and provides valuable methodological observations, the analysis appears incomplete. Additional structural interpretation and mechanistic insight are needed.

      Major Points

      (1) Tryptophan and tyrosine exhibit similar quantum yields, but their extinction coefficients differ substantially. Is this difference accounted for in your FRET analysis? Please clarify whether this would result in a stronger weighting of tryptophan compared to tyrosine.

      (2) Is the fluorescence of acridon-2-ylalanine (Acd) pH-dependent? If so, could local pH variations within the channel environment influence the probe's photophysical properties and affect the measurements?

      (3) Several constructs (e.g., K125Tag, Y134Tag, I217Tag, and Q233Tag) display two bands on SDS-PAGE rather than a single band. Could this indicate incomplete translation or premature termination at the introduced tag site? Please clarify.

      (4) In Figure 5F, the comparison between predicted FRET values and experimentally determined ratio values appears largely uninformative. The discussion on page 9 suggests either an inaccurate structural model or insufficient quantification of protein dynamics. If the underlying cause cannot be distinguished, how do the authors propose to improve the structural model of hHV1 or better describe its conformational dynamics?

      (5) Cu²⁺, Ru²⁺, and Ni²⁺ are presented as suitable FRET acceptors for Acd. Would Zn²⁺ also be expected to function as an acceptor in this context? If so, could structural information be derived from zinc binding independently of Trp/Tyr?

      (6) The investigated structure is most likely dimeric. Previous studies report that zinc stabilizes interactions between hHV1 monomers more strongly than in the native dimeric state. Could this provide an explanation for the observed zinc-dependent effects? Additionally, do the detergent micelles used in this study predominantly contain monomers or dimers?

      (7) hHV1 normally inserts into a phospholipid bilayer, as used in the reconstitution experiments. In contrast, detergent micelles may form monolayers rather than bilayers. Could the authors clarify the nature of the micelles used and discuss whether the protein is expected to adopt the same fold in a monolayer environment as in a bilayer?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This revised manuscript describes critical intermediate reaction steps of a HA synthase at the molecular level; specifically, they examine the 2nd step, polymerization, adding GlcA to GlcNAc to form the initial disaccharide of the repeating HA structure. Unlike the vast majority of known glycosyltransferases, the viral HAS (a convenient proxy extrapolated to resemble the vertebrate forms) uses a single pocket to catalyze both monosaccharide transfer steps. The authors work illustrates the interactions needed to bind & proof-read the UDP-GlcA using direct and '2nd layer' amino acid residues. This step also allows the HAS to distinguish the two UDP-sugars; this is very important as the enzymes are not known or observed to make homopolymers of only GlcA or GlcNAc, but only make the HA disaccharide repeats GlcNAc-GlcA.

      Strengths:

      Techniques & analysis; overview of HA synthase mechanisms

      Weaknesses:

      None

      Comments on revisions:

      Previous clarity issues in the original submission were all resolved. Again, this is a very well done body of work!!

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes critical intermediate reaction steps of a HA synthase at the molecular level; specifically, it examines the 2nd step, polymerization, adding GlcA to GlcNAc to form the initial disaccharide of the repeating HA structure. Unlike the vast majority of known glycosyltransferases, the viral HAS (a convenient proxy extrapolated to resemble the vertebrate forms) uses a single pocket to catalyze both monosaccharide transfer steps. The authors' work illustrates the interactions needed to bind & proof-read the UDP-GlcA using direct and '2nd layer' amino acid residues. This step also allows the HAS to distinguish the two UDP-sugars; this is very important as the enzymes are not known or observed to make homopolymers of only GlcA or GlcNAc, but only make the HA disaccharide repeats GlcNAc-GlcA.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the strengths of this paper lie in its techniques & analysis.

      The authors make significant leaps forward towards understanding this process using a variety of tools and comparisons of wild-type & mutant enzymes. The work is well presented overall with respect to the text and illustrations (especially the 3D representations), and the robustness of the analyses & statistics is also noteworthy.

      Furthermore, the authors make some strides towards creating novel sugar polymers using alternative primers & work with detergent binding to the HAS. The authors tested a wide variety of monosaccharides and several disaccharides for primer activity and observed that GlcA could be added to cellobiose and chitobiose, which are moderately close structural analogs to HA disaccharides. Did the authors also test the readily available HA tetramer (HA4, [GlcA-GlcNAc]2) as a primer in their system? This is a highly recommended experiment; if it works, then this molecule may also be useful for cryo-EM studies of CvHAS as well.

      The reviewer requested testing whether an HA tetratsaccharide could also serve as an glycosyl transfer acceptor for HAS. The commerically available HA tetrasaccharide (HA4) is terminated at its non-reducing end by GlcA, therein we proceeded to measure its effect on UDP-GlcNAc turnover kientics. Titration of HA4 failed to elicit any detectable change in UDP-GlcNAc turnover rate, indicating no priming. This is now mentioned in the main text and the data is shown in Fig. S9.

      Weaknesses:

      In the past, another report describing the failed attempt of elongating short primers (HA4 & chitin oligosaccharides larger than the cello- or chitobiose that have activity in this report) with a vertebrate HAS, XlHAS1, an enzyme that seems to behave like the CvHAS ( https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/10473619/); this work should probably be cited and briefly discussed. It may be that the longer primers in the 1999 paper and/or the different construct or isolation specifics (detergent extract vs crude) were not conducive to the extension reaction, as the authors extracted recombinant enzyme.

      We apologize for the oversight. This reference is now cited (ref. 18) together with the description of the failed elongation of HA4 by CvHAS.

      There are a few areas that should be addressed for clarity and correctness, especially defining the class of HAS studied here (Class I-NR) as the results may (Class I-R) or may not (Class II) align (see comment (a) below), but overall, a very nicely done body of work that will significantly enhance understanding in the field.

      Done as requested

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Stephens and co-workers provides important mechanistic insight into how hyaluronan synthase (HAS) coordinates alternating GlcNAc and GlcA incorporation using a single Type-I catalytic centre. Through cryo-EM structures capturing both "proofreading" and fully "inserted" binding poses of UDP-GlcA, combined with detailed biochemical analysis, the authors show how the enzyme selectively recognizes the GlcA carboxylate, stabilizes substrates through conformational gating, and requires a priming GlcNAc for productive turnover.

      These findings clarify how one active site can manage two chemically distinct donor sugars while simultaneously coupling catalysis to polymer translocation.

      The work also reports a DDM-bound, detergent-inhibited conformation that possibly illuminates features of the acceptor pocket, although this appears to be a purification artefact (it is indeed inhibitory) rather than a relevant biological state.

      Overall, the study convincingly establishes a unified catalytic mechanism for Type-I HAS enzymes and represents a significant advance in understanding HA biosynthesis at the molecular level.

      Strengths:

      There are many strengths.

      This is a multi-disciplinary study with very high-quality cryo-EM and enzyme kinetics (backed up with orthogonal methods of product analysis) to justify the conclusions discussed above.

      Weaknesses:

      There are few weaknesses.

      The abstract and introduction assume a lot of detailed prior knowledge about hyaluronan synthases, and in doing so, risk lessening the readership pool.

      A lot of discussion focuses on detergents (whose presence is totally inhibitory) and transfer to non-biological acceptors (at high concentrations). This risks weakening the manuscript.

      The abstract and parts of the introduction have been revised to address the reviewer’s concerns.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) As noted above, please state in title, abstract & introduction that this work is focused on a "Class I-NR HAS" (as described in Ref. #4), and NOT all HAS families...this is truly essential to note as someone working with the Pasteurella HAS version (Class II) would be totally misled & at this point, no one knows the Streptococcus HAS (Class-IR) mechanistic details which could be different due to its inverse molecular directionality of elongation compared to the CvHAS Class I-NR enzyme.

      Done as requested.

      (2) Page 6 - for the usefulness of the HAS mutants as being folded correctly, it was stated these mutants are suitable since they all 'purify' similarly...the use of the more proper term should probably be 'chromatograph', similarly suggesting similar hydrodynamic radii without massive folding issues.

      This has been revised to state that they all exhibited comparable size exclusion chromatography profiles.

      “All mutants share similar size exclusion chromatography profiles with the WT enzyme, suggesting that the substitutions do not cause a folding defect (Fig. S3).”

      (3) Page 7 - please check these sentences (& rest of paragraph?) as the meaning is not clear. "First, UDP-GlcNAc was titrated in the presence of excess UDP-GlcA, resulting in a response similar to the acceptor-free condition (Fig. 2C). However, the maximum reaction velocity at 20 mM UDP-GlcNAc was approximately 25% lower than that measured in the presence of UDP-GlcNAc only (Fig. 2C)."

      The paragraph has been revised to avoid confusion.

      (4) In Methods, please use an italicized 'g' for the centrifugation steps globally.

      Changed as requested

      (5) Please note the source/vendor for the HA standards on gels.

      Done

      (6) Page 35 - TLC section.

      (a) 'n-butanol' (with italic n) is the most widespread chemical name (not butan-1-ol).

      Done

      (b) Also, for all of the TLC images, the origin and the solvent front should be marked.

      Changed as suggested.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      A number of minor issues should be addressed.

      (1) Abstract

      Two comments on the Abstract, which I found surprisingly weak given the quality of the work, and lacking a key detail.

      A major conceptual contribution of this work is the demonstration of how a single Type-I catalytic centre discriminates, positions, and transfers two chemically distinct substrates in an alternating pattern. This distinguishes HAS from dual-active-site (Type-II) glycosyltransferases and is important for understanding HA polymerization.

      However, this central point is not clearly articulated in the abstract. I suggest explicitly stating that HAS performs both GlcNAc and GlcA transfer reactions within a single catalytic site, and that the proofreading/inserted poses illuminate how this multifunctionality is achieved.

      The abstract currently ends with the observation of a DDM-bound, detergent-inhibited state. While this is interesting, it absolutely does not represent the central conceptual advance of the study and gives the abstract an artefactual ending.

      I strongly recommend revising the final sentences to emphasize the broader mechanistic insight and not an "artefact" (indeed, the enzyme is inactive in the presence of this detergent; it is thus a very unusual way to conclude an abstract).

      That is, finish with the wider implications of how HAS coordinates alternating substrate use, proofreading, and polymer translocation. Ending on the main mechanistic or biological significance would make the abstract considerably stronger and more aligned with the main message of the paper.

      The abstract has been revised thoroughly to reflect the important insights gained on CvHAS’ catalytic function and HA biogenesis in general.

      (2) Introduction

      The distinction between single active-centre enzymes, which transfer both sugars alternately, and twin catalytic domain enzymes that each perform one addition is surely central to the whole paper. But it is not discussed. Surely this has to be covered. There is a lot of work in this space, including, but not limited to:

      https://doi.org/10.1093/glycob/cwg085

      https://doi.org/10.1093/glycob/10.9.883

      https://doi.org/10.1093/glycob/cwad075 (includes this author team)

      Originally back to https://doi.org/10.1021/bi990270y

      If the authors instead assume such a level of knowledge for the reader, then surely they are writing for a specialist audience, not consistent with the wider readership ambitions of eLife?

      The Introduction has been revised as suggested by the reviewer, providing necessary background to frame our description of the Chlorella virus HAS. We made a deliberate effort to put new insights into a broader context.

      (3) Results and Discussion

      DDM "was observed for >50% of the analysed particles". I struggled with this. I couldn't understand how the authors selected particles that did or did not contain DDM. The main body text states: "To our surprise, careful sorting of the UDP-GlcA supplemented cryo EM dataset revealed a CvHAS subpopulation that was not bound to the substrate, but, instead, a DDM molecule near the active site (Fig 3A and S7). This was observed for >50% of the analyzed particles."

      That reads like there is one sample with two populations. But the figures and the methods section suggest differently: they suggest two samples with different data-collection regimes. That does not match the main text. Could this be clarified?

      Yes, that wasn’t explained well. We clarified the text to stress that the DDM-bound sample came from a dataset that was intended to resolve an UDP-GlcA-bound state, but instead revealed the inhibition by DDM.

      Also in this space, in the modern world, "nominal magnification" has no real meaning, and calibrated pixel size would be more appropriate. Can this be given, please?

      The relevant Methods section now states: “imaging of … was performed at a calibrated pixel size of 0.652 Å”.

      The discovery of DDM in the active site is surprising. But it is an inhibitory artefact. Is this section pushed a little too hard? Also, "The coordination of DDM's maltoside moiety, an αlinked glucose disaccharide, is consistent with priming by cellobiose and chitobiose." I'm not sure why an α-linked maltose is consistent with the binding of a β-linked cellobiose. That makes no sense. There will be no other enzymes where starch and cellulose oligos are mutually accepted. Consider rewriting.

      We like to stress the DDM coordination because it could lead to the development of compounds that can really function as inhibitors, either for HAS or other related enzymes. In the observed DDM binding pose, the alpha-linkage is not recognized. Instead, the reducing end glucosyl unit stacks against Trp342 while the non-reducing unit extends into the catalytic pocket. Hence, a similar binding pose is conceivable for cellobiose and potentially also for chitobiose. The relevant section has been reworded.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This important study introduces an approach to discovering antibiotic resistance determinants by leveraging diverse susceptibility profiles among related mycobacterial species, with particular relevance to high-level resistance against natural product-derived antibiotics. The research provides convincing evidence for the role of ADP-ribosylation enzymes in rifamycin resistance among mycobacteria, whilst also demonstrating that antibiotic susceptibility is not correlated with growth rate or intracellular compound concentration. The revision is substantively improved, but some broader claims still require additional experimental support. This work lays a significant foundation for understanding the complexity of antibiotic resistance mechanisms in mycobacteria and opens new avenues for future antimicrobial research.

    2. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This manuscript presents a macroevolutionary approach to identification of novel high-level antibiotic resistance determinants that takes advantage of the natural genetic diversity within a genus (mycobacteria, in this case) by comparing antibiotic resistance profiles across related bacterial species and then using computational, molecular, and cellular approaches to identify and characterize the distinguishing mechanisms of resistance. The approach is contrasted with "microevolutionary" approaches based on comparing resistant and susceptible strains of the same species and approaches based on ecological sampling that may not include clinically relevant pathogens or related species. The potential for new discoveries with the macroevolution-inspired approach is evident in the diversity of drug susceptibility profiles revealed amongst the selected mycobacterial species and the identification and characterization of a new group of rifamycin-modifying ADP-ribosyltransferase (Arr) orthologs of previously described mycobacterial Arr enzymes. Additional findings that intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation does not always predict potency within this genus, that M. marinum is a better proxy for M. tuberculosis drug susceptibility than the commonly used saprophyte M. smegmatis, and that susceptibility to semi-synthetic antibiotic classes is generally less variable than susceptibility to antibiotics more directly derived from natural products strengthen the claim that the macroevolutionary lens is valuable for elucidating general principles of susceptibility within a genus.

      There are some limitations to the work. The argument for the novelty of the approach could be better articulated. While the opportunities for new discoveries presented by identification of discrepant susceptibility results between related species is evident, it is less clear how the macroevolutionary approach is further leveraged for the discovery of truly novel resistance mechanisms. The example of the discovery of Arr-X enzymes presented here relied upon foundational knowledge of previously characterized Arr orthologs. There is less clarity about what the pipeline would look like for discovery of previously unknown determinants when one is agnostic to putative mechanisms. From the point at which interspecies differences in susceptibility are noted, does the framework still remain distinct from other discovery frameworks and approaches?

      While the experimentation and analyses performed are generally well designed and rigorous, there are a few instances in which broad claims are based on inferences from sample sets or data sets that are, at present, too limited to provide robust support. For example, the claim that rifampicin modification, and precisely ADP-ribosylation, is the dominant mechanism of resistance to rifampicin in mycobacteria is still a bit premature or at least an over-generalization, as other enzymatic modification mechanisms and other mechanisms such as helR-mediated dissociation of rifampicin-stalled RNA polymerases, efflux, etc were not examined. CRISPR interference was used in a demonstrative example to support this assertion, but would need to be applied more systematically to be more conclusive. The general claim that intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation does not predict potency in mycobacteria may be another over-generalization based on the limited set of drugs and species studied.

      Comments on revisions:

      Discussion, lines 321-323: "We found that resistance to these antibiotics in mycobacteria do not correlate with by uptake/efflux mechanisms in the species tested..." is an over-generalization and conflicts with the following statement on lines 199-201: "for BDQ we could observe some correlation between antibiotic potency and [BDQ]IB which could be indicative of efflux playing a role in antibiotic efficacy. Given that the current statement in the Discussion only applies to 2 of 3 drugs tested, a more specific or nuanced interpretation seems warranted.

    3. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This work shows that resistance profiles to a variety of drugs are variable between different mycobacterial species and are not correlated with growth rate or intrabacterial compound concentration (at least for linezolid, bedaquiline, and Rifampicin). Note that intrabacterial compound concentration does not distinguish between cytosolic and periplasmic/cell wall-associated drugs. The susceptibility profiles for a wide range of mycobacteria tested under the same conditions against 15 commonly used antimycobacterial drugs provide the first recorded cross-species comparison which will be a valuable resource for the scientific community. To understand the reasons for the high Rifampicin resistance seen in many mycobacteria, the authors confirm the presence of the arr gene known to encode a Rif ribosyltransferase involved in Rif resistance in M. smegmatis in the resistant mycobacteria after confirming the absence of on-target mutations in the RpoB RRDR. Metabolomic analyses confirm the presence of ribosylated Rif in some of the naturally resistant mycobacteria which may not be entirely surprising but an important confirmation. Presumably M. branderi is highly resistant despite lacking the arr homolog due to the rpoB S45N mutation. M. flavescens has an MIC similar to that of M. smegmatis, despite having both Arr-1 and Arr-X. Various Arr-1 and Arr-X proteins are expressed and characterized for catalytic activity which shows that Arr-X is a faster enzyme,, especially with respect to more hydrophobic rifamycins. M. flavescens has similar MIC values to Rifapentine and Rifabutin to M. smegmatis. Thus, the Arr-1 versus Arr-X comparison does not provide a complete explanation for the underlying reasons driving natural Rif resistance in mycobacteria. Downregulation of Arr-X expression in M. conceptionense confers increased sensitivity to Rifabutin confirming its role as a rifamycin-inactivating enzyme.

      Overall, the comparison of cross-species susceptibility profiles is novel; the demonstration that MIC is not correlated with intracellular drug concentration is important but not sufficiently interrogated, the demonstration that Arr-X is also a Rif ADP-ribosyltransferase is a good confirmation and shows that it is more efficient than Arr-1 on hydrophobic rifamycins is interesting but maybe not entirely surprising. The manuscript seems to have two parts that are related, but the rifamycin modification aspect of the work is not strongly linked to the first part since it interrogates the modification of one drug but not the common cause of natural resistance for other drugs.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use a variety of methods to investigate the mechanisms of innate drug resistance in mycobacteria. They end up focusing on two primary determinants - drug accumulation, which correlates rather poorly with resistance for many species, and, for the rifamycins, ADP-ribosyltransferases. The latter enzymes do appear to account for a good deal of resistance, though it is difficult to extrapolate quantitatively what their relative contributions are.

      Overall, they make excellent use of biochemical methods to support their conclusions. Though they set out to draw very broad lessons, much of the focus ends up being on rifamycins. This is still a very interesting set of conclusions.

      Strengths:

      (1) A very interesting approach and set of questions.

      (2) Outstanding technical approaches to measuring intracellular drug concentrations and chemical modification of rifamycins.

      (3) Excellent characterization of variant rifamycin ADP-ribosyltransferases

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Figure 3c/d: These panels show the same experiment done twice, yet they display substantially different results in certain cases. For instance, M. smegmatis appears to show an order of magnitude lower RIF accumulation in panel d compared to M. flavescens, despite them displaying equal accumulation in panel c. The authors should provide justification for this variation, particularly as quantitative intra-species comparisons are central to the conclusions of this figure.

      The data in panels 3c and 3d are from different sets of experiments. The reviewer is correct with regards to M. smegmatis. The data indeed is ~ 1 order of magnitude different. However, the data for other species is very similar. The reviewer may also have noticed that the error bars are also larger in 3d, compared to 3c, indicating a greater variation between independent experiments use in 3d. We do not have a good explanation for this, other than the experiments shown in 3d were associated with greater biological variability.

      (2) There are several technical concerns with Figure 3 that affect how to interpret the work. According to the methods, the authors did not appear to normalize to an internal standard, only to an external antibiotic standard (which may account for some of the technical variation alluded to above).

      We agree that using a labeled drug as an internal standard (IS) would be ideal. However, the experiment initially followed an untargeted metabolomics approach, which later shifted to relative drug quantification. At that stage, normalizing with IS was impractical because proper implementation would require multiple IS across the chromatographic range. Therefore, we opted for total ion current (TIC) normalization, which accounts for variability in overall metabolite abundance—even though the experimental setup was already adjusted for each bacterial species’ growth rate. Additionally, we prepared external standard curves for each drug to enable quantification, and the amount of drug added to each plate was considered when reporting these values.

      Second, the authors used different concentrations of drug for each species to try to match the species' MICs. I appreciate the authors' thinking on this, but I think for an uptake experiment it would be more appropriate to treat with the same concentration of drug since uptake is likely saturable at higher drug concentrations. In the current setup, for the species with higher MIC, they have to be able to uptake substantially more antibiotics than the species with low MIC in order to end up with the same normalized uptake value in Figure 3d. It would be helpful to repeat this experiment with a single drug concentration in the media for all species and test whether that gives the same results seen here.

      We respectfully disagree with the reviewer. Experiments such as the one proposed by the review work well when MIC values are a few fold apart, for strains of the same species, but have not been tested when MIC values are 100-1000-fold apart, with different species. Furthermore, what would be the interpretation of compound uptake at 1000-fold the MIC for one species and MIC level for another? By using antibiotic concentrations at the respective MIC for each species we are at least under conditions where we know the biological effect of the antibiotic across species is the same, based on its potency.

      (3) Figure 4f: This panel seems to argue against the idea that the efficacy of RIF ribosylation is what's driving drug susceptibility. M. flavescens is similarly resistant to RIF as M. smegmatis, yet M. flavescens has dramatically lower riboslyation of RIF. This is perhaps not surprising, as the authors appropriately highlight the number of different rif-modifying enzymes that have been identified that likely also contribute to drug resistance. However, I do think this means that the authors can't make the claim that the resistance they observe is caused by rifamycin modification, so those claims in the text and figure legend should be altered unless the authors can provide further evidence to support them. This experiment also has results that are inconsistent with what appears to be an identical experiment performed in Supplemental Figure 5b. The authors should provide context for why these results differ.

      In regard to enzyme efficiency, the apparent rate of all Arr-1 is relatively similar in converting RIF into ADP-Ribosyl-Rif between species. However, Arr-X is much more efficient when compared to Arr-1 in both M. flavescents and M. conceptionense. This is indicated by the apparent rate measured and displayed on figure 5c.

      Proteomics data shows that there is upregulation of Arr-1 and Arr-X upon rifampicin treatment in M. flavescens and M. conceptionense. However, the same experiment was not performed in Arr-1 KD. Therefore, we can’t verify through this approach if the activity observed in vivo directly correlates with a higher expression of Arr-X alone. Of note, likely both enzymes contribute to resistance to rifamycins, as per our results with the Arr-X KD and sensitization of M. conceptionense to RIF.

      Author response image 1.

      It is also worth mentioning that there are other enzymes in the pathway of RIF ribosylation and their efficiency is unknown (Author response image 2). Therefore ADP-Ribosyl-RIF It is not an “end-metabolite” and maybe not the sole determinant of RIF resistance via ADP-ribosylation. Downstream enzymes can also account for the difference observed between M. flavescens and M. smegmatis.

      Author response image 2.

      It is correct that the Rifampicin MIC for M. flavescens is the same as M. smegmatis.

      (4) Fig 4f/5c: M. flavescens has both Arr-1 and Arr-X, yet it appears to not have ribosylated RIF. This result seems to undermine the authors' reliance on the enzyme assay shown in Fig 5c - in that assay, M. flavescens Arr-X is very capable of modifying rifampicin, yet that doesn't appear to translate to the in vivo setting. This is of importance because the authors use this enzyme assay to argue that Arr-X is a fundamentally more powerful RIF resistance mechanism than Arr-1 and that it has specificity for rifabutin. However, the result in Figure 4f would argue that the enzyme assay results cannot be directly translated to in vivo contexts. For the authors to claim that Arr-X is most potent at modifying rifabutin, they could test their CRISPRi knockdowns of Arr-X and Arr-1 under treatment with each of the rifamycins they use in the enzyme assay. The authors mentioned that they didn't do this because all the strains are resistant to those compounds; however, if Arr-X is important for drug resistance, it would be reasonable to expect to see sensitization of the bacteria to those compounds upon knockdown.

      The reviewer is reading Fig. 4f incorrectly, probably because it is plotted in a linear scale instead of logarithmic scale. Ribosylated Rif is present in M. flavescens, just at lower levels than M. conceptionense and M. smegmatis. In species where there is no Arr-1 or Arr-3, ribosylated RIF is not detected at all (e.g. M. tuberculosis), i.e., concentration is zero. Therefore, any detection of ribosylated RIF can be considered significant. In addition, as mentioned before, ADP-ribosylation of RIF is not the final product of the reaction and further studies need to be undertaken to understand subsequent reactions.

      (5) Figure 5d: The authors use this CRISRPi experiment to claim that ArrX from M. conceptionanse is more potent at inactivating rifabutin than Arr-1. This claim depends on there being equal degrees of knockdown of Arr-1 and Arr-X, so the authors should validate the degree of knockdown they get. This is particularly important because, to my knowledge, nobody has used this system in M. conceptionanse before.

      We agree with the reviewer that a qPCR should have been performed to define the extent of interference in the strain. generated Unfortunately, at this time a qPCR was not performed in the strains tested to confirm the extent of down regulation. Although it is the best practice to validate the strain KD, there is no indication that the effect observed is due to unspecific downregulation. The genetic environment in which Arr-X is positioned is different from Arr-1 and the targeting oligonucleotides are specific and would not promiscuously bind to Arr-1. Said that, this is indeed a fault in our setup.

      (6) The authors' arguments about Arr-X and Arr-1 would be strengthened by showing by LC/MS that Arr-X knockdown in M. conceptionense results in more loss of ribosyl-rifabutin than knockdown of Arr-1.

      We agree with the reviewer that performing the LC-MS analysis of the Arr-x knockdown would have strengthened the argument of our paper. Unfortunately, this experiment was not performed.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This manuscript presents a macroevolutionary approach to the identification of novel high-level antibiotic resistance determinants that takes advantage of the natural genetic diversity within a genus (mycobacteria, in this case) by comparing antibiotic resistance profiles across related bacterial species and then using computational, molecular, and cellular approaches to identify and characterize the distinguishing mechanisms of resistance. The approach is contrasted with "microevolutionary" approaches based on comparing resistant and susceptible strains of the same species and approaches based on ecological sampling that may not include clinically relevant pathogens or related species. The potential for new discoveries with the macroevolution-inspired approach is evident in the diversity of drug susceptibility profiles revealed amongst the selected mycobacterial species and the identification and characterization of a new group of rifamycin-modifying ADP-ribosyltransferase (Arr) orthologs of previously described mycobacterial Arr enzymes. Additional findings that intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation does not always predict potency within this genus, that M. marinum is a better proxy for M. tuberculosis drug susceptibility than the commonly used saprophyte M. smegmatis, and that susceptibility to semi-synthetic antibiotic classes is generally less variable than susceptibility to antibiotics more directly derived from natural products strengthen the claim that the macroevolutionary lens is valuable for elucidating general principles of susceptibility within a genus.

      There are some limitations to the work. The argument for the novelty of the approach could be better articulated. While the opportunities for new discoveries presented by the identification of discrepant susceptibility results between related species are evident, it is less clear how the macroevolutionary approach is further leveraged for the discovery of truly novel resistance determinants. The example of the discovery of Arr-X enzymes presented here relied upon foundational knowledge of previously characterized Arr orthologs. There is little clarity on what the pipeline for identifying more novel resistance determinants would look like. In other words, what does the macroevolutionary perspective contribute to discovery from the point of finding interspecies differences in susceptibility? Does the framework still remain distinct from other discovery frameworks and approaches? If so, how?

      Thanks for pointing this out, as this is a critical feature of our study and method. Our approach relies on inter-species comparative genomics and phenotypes, and therefore, it is distinct from inter-strains comparison. This difference is dramatic, and it becomes clearer when we are comparing the core genome of M. tuberculosis (one species) 92% with the core genome of the genus, circa of 1%. While we focus on rifamycin in this manuscript, future manuscripts will investigate many of the other dozens of “inconsistencies” observed between the genetic makeup of different mycobacterial species and there actual performance in the presence of different antibiotics.

      While the experimentation and analyses performed appear well-designed and rigorous, there are a few instances in which broad claims are based on inferences from sample sets or data sets that are too limited to provide robust support. For example, the claim that rifampicin modification, and precisely ADP-ribosylation, is the dominant mechanism of resistance to rifampicin in mycobacteria may be a bit premature or an over-generalization, as other enzymatic modification mechanisms and other mechanisms such as helR-mediated dissociation of rifampicin-stalled RNA polymerases, efflux, etc were not examined nor were CRISPRi knockdown experiments conducted beyond an experiment to tease out the role of Arr-X and Arr-1 in one strain. The general claim that intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation does not predict potency in mycobacteria may be another over-generalization based on the limited number of drugs and species studied, but perhaps the intended assertion was that antibiotic accumulation ALONE does not predict potency.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Major comments

      (1) The metabolomics is done using mycobacteria grown on filters. Initially, mycobacterial cells are grown on the filters for 5 doublings before being transferred to drug-containing (or free) agar for one doubling. Is this based on calculated doubling time in liquid culture or a true determination of the fact that the biomass increases to what would amount to 5 doublings?

      The doubling time used is the one determined in liquid media. Although it is possible that the growth kinetics in solid media is slightly different from liquid (±10%), this experimental design is well established for M. tuberculosis (since Proc Natl Acad Sci U S A. 2010 May 25;107(21):9819-24.) and M. smegmatis (unpublished). Therefore, we used the growth rate as a proxy for having the same biomass of cells for each species tested. A maximum difference of 10% was observed between M. tuberculosis growth in liquid and in solid media, however, cells grow exponentially for much longer in filters. This makes filter-based experiments more reliable, as few growth phase-derived differences are present.

      (2) The demonstration that intrabacterial drug concentrations vary between mycobacterial species in a manner not related to MIC for at least LZD and RIF, is an important finding. However, intrabacterial does not mean cytoplasmic since a considerable fraction could be present in the periplasmic/cell wall layers. Ideally, this would need to be determined but would of course be a massive undertaking since the method needs validation & optimization for each mycobacterial species. Nevertheless, this has to be mentioned. In addition, three drugs are limiting. Measuring additional drug concentrations in these 5 mycobacteria would at least establish some confirmation about the extent of this lack of correlation. Thus, could the authors measure concentrations of additional drugs with intracellular targets?

      Testing additional drugs can be beneficial and would be an expansion of our paper, which will definitely be on future plans for further studies focusing on other antibiotics described here. It would also provide new insights into other possible mechanisms of resistance in mycobacterial species. However, in this study we aimed to first determine the antibiotic response profile in different mycobacterial species, and once we identified interesting resistance phenotypes that could not be readily explained by known mechanisms of resistance, we narrowed it down to certain drugs and species that would potentially provide insights into new mechanisms of antibiotic resistance. Finally, exploring drug concentration across multiple bacterial compartments is a dauting task and it has not been done extensively with any species, not to mention with multiple species, many of which are still lacking any study of their actual cell envelope.

      (3) CRISPRi was used to reduce transcription in M. conceptionense. What was the level of gene downregulation?

      As mentioned previously, a setback from our setup is that the level of KD was not measured at this instance.

      Minor comments:

      (1) The introduction mentions the fast and slow-growing mycobacteria which are classified based on the time that it takes to observe colonies on solid agar. However, in liquid medium, there is less correlation between the reported growth on agar and doubling time in liquid (Figure 1b, Figure 2d). This could be mentioned in the results section. In Figure 2d, the filled circles represent fast-growers but this does not hold well for liquid culture and it might make more sense to not distinguish between fast- and slow-growers in these graphs. A small complication would also be the fact that the doubling time represents growth in a liquid medium with Tyloxapol as a detergent whereas the MIC and metabolomics are done on solid agar with no detergent. The metabolomics is done after a doubling but for those where agar growth and liquid growth have large discrepancies in growth rate, there could be some differences.

      Apologies for this misunderstanding. Fast- and slow-growth phenotypes are determined in Lowenstein-Jensen (LJ) agar, not in 7H10 agar (used in our study and most studies of mycobacteria). Furthermore, this is a qualitative definition, not a quantitative one. Therefore, our measurements do not need to correlate with fast- and slow-growth phenotypes, unless we had used that one specific medium. Furthermore, in liquid medium, we determined growth rate directly, which is never done with LJ medium.

      In addition to adding the same amount of cells to each filter, we also perform TIC normalization, which should account for how rich the samples were – and therefore how much material we had. Therefore, we do not observe discrepancies due to differences in growth rate and the presence/absence of detergent in the media.

      It is also worth mentioning that this experimental set up has been well established in many M. tuberculosis labs that study metabolism. Importantly, the use of detergent drastically affects mass spectrometry, and therefore cannot be used.

      (2) Figure 1g in the text should be Figure 1f.

      Apologies, it has been fixed.

      (3) Figure S1 would be ideal to have in (supplementary) table format.

      This data is now being provided in a table format.

      (4) Table S1 - ethambutol misspelt.

      Spelling has been corrected.

      (5) MIC for species such as M. abscessus could depend on medium (7H9-based medium can give different MIC values than CAMH).

      Indeed, different media can significantly change MIC values, and this is true for many bacterial species, if not all. For this study we used only species that could be grown in 7H9 broth containing 10 % ADC, 0.05% glycerol 0.05% tyloxapol and 7H10 plates containing 10% OADC and 0.05% glycerol. MIC<sub>99</sub> was determined in the latter as we found more efficient and robust to do our tests it in solid media. The goal of our experiment was not to the determined the “true” MIC for the antibiotics tested, as this value does not exist. It was to find lack of correlations between relative values and the presence of genes that can account for it.

      (6) The statement "the experiment was performed at a concentration of antibiotic equal to its MIC" initially seems confusing. It was not equal to the MIC but performed at 6-fold the respective MIC of the species in question. Maybe re-phrasing this would help.

      Apologies for this oversight. It has been corrected.

      (7) Note that some mutations outside the RRDR (eg. V170F and I491F) can also cause Rif resistance.

      Author response image 3.

      A Rainbow diagram of RpoB X-Ray structure coloured according to sequence conservation. Dark purple indicates high conservation, whereas dark orange indicates low conservation. RIF (showed in magenta) is bound to RpoB. Zoomed view displays that the RIF-binding pocket is considerably conserved. B RpoB protein sequence has an 81bp region called Rifampicin Resistance Determining Region (RRDR) that is known to be important for RIF binding and is where most mutations occur in drug-resistant TB. Sequence alignment displays that the RRDR region is conserved with the exception of M. branderi, which has an Asn instead of a Ser residue in position 456 (numbering is related to the M. tuberculosis sequence), highlighted in bold.

      Attached we have a structural alignment of RpoB of the species highlighted on this paper. Although there is variability within the sequences, which is also displayed in Author response image 3 with the conservation analysis, the residues that have been implicated with resistance (including V170 and I491) are conserved. Alignment sent on .fasta file that can be opened in jalview.

      (8) Discuss how the RpoB S450N mutation in M. branderi confers the observed level of resistance.

      That’s a great point, thank you. Now it reads as:

      “The rifampicin (RIF) binding pocket is generally conserved, but Mycobacterium branderi has an S450N mutation in the RRDR region. While this specific mutation hasn't been found in clinical isolates, it's located at the binding site and may confer resistance (273). Although both serine (S) and asparagine (N) have similar side chains, related mutations like S450Q have been linked to resistance (156). Thus, M. branderi may be RIF-resistant due to this mutation. In contrast, M. conceptionense, M. flavescens, and M. smegmatis show no target sequence differences that explain their resistance”

      (9) The statement that the three tested NTM are sensitive to rifabutin ("resistant to all rifamycins except for rifabutin") needs to be interpreted considering what sensitivity means. The MIC is still high (1.6-3.1 ug/mL) when compared to that of Mtb. The 2-fold differences in MIC between M. smegmatis and M. conceptionense do not really prove or disprove the role of Arr-X in rifabutin resistance.

      We fixed the sentence to be more careful with the language on the text. We agree, but it is worth mentioning that generally with bacteria there is a regulation by the CLSI. Each bacterial species has a range that is considered sensitive or resistant, but these are not available for the species used in this study. In general, bacteria with MIC values above 8 µg/mL are considered resistant to rifampin (J Antibiot 2014 67:625).

      (10) Figure 1d: It's hard to quantify the sensitivity of the plates. Can this be done by MIC? Was only rifabutin tested or also rifampicin?

      The initial experiments described on the paper were all performed using Rifampicin only. Then, the MIC for the remaining rifamycins was determined for M. smegmatis, M. flavescens and M. conceptionense, and can be perused on “Supplementary table 4”. Figure 5d is to illustrate the effect of the KD in M. conceptionense sensitivity to rifabutin.

      (11) Is there data to show the ADP-ribosylation of rifabutin in M. conceptionense and the CRISPRi strains?

      Unfortunately, we did not perform LC-MS analysis on M. conceptionense CRISPRi strains exposed to rifabutin to measure potential ADP-ribosylation.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) It would be useful if the authors would complete Figure 1A by determining growth rates for the remaining 18 strains that they currently omitted.

      These growth rates were obtained using roller bottles and in at least 3 independent experiments, unfortunately the throughput is far ideal. The goal of the experiment was to highlight difference in growth rate, beyond fast- and slow-growth, which we did. Adding the remaining values would not change this conclusion. Growth rate variation in 7H9 is significant and the point is made in our figure.

      (2) The authors should justify their choice of species used in Figures 3-4. It would be useful to know, for instance, if the authors chose these species in an unbiased fashion, or if they were chosen because the authors had already determined that they possess rifamycin-modifying enzymes of interest. In that case, they wouldn't necessarily be a representative sample to use for the correlation analysis of antibiotic uptake and potency in Figure 3.

      They were chosen because of their resistance profile for BDQ, LZD and RIF. This has been addressed in the text, which now reads “Given the antibiotic response profiles observed, we selected BDQ, LZD and RIF to explore the molecular causes of these dramatic changes in antibiotic potency observed across the Mycobacterium genus.”

      (3) Figure 4b: The data in this panel appear inconsistent - for instance, M. houstonense appears to grow at 10X Mtb MIC, but fails to grow at 1X Mtb MIC. Repeating this experiment would better establish the validity of the authors' claims about the relative susceptibility of these strains to RIF.

      The figures got rotated when exported from illustrator. Corrected figure is uploaded, and original plate photos are also uploaded for clarity.

      (4) Figure 4e: Does Arr-X get upregulated in these proteomic datasets? The authors' argument that proteomic upregulation correlates with important drug resistance genes would imply that it might be, so that would be useful information to provide.

      Arr-X is slightly upregulated, but not statistically significant – this could be due to the native expression of Arr-1. Data is displayed in a previous answer.

      (5) I wasn't able to find the supplementary tables that the authors allude to - not sure if that was a file mixup, but those tables would be useful for interpreting the manuscript.

      We are sorry that you couldn’t access the table. It must be a file corruption issues, as the other reviewers were able to. We will make sure that all tables are available and accessible.

      (6) For LC/MS, the authors use peak height instead of peak area, which they argue correlates better with the amount of drug in cells because of the poor peak shape they observed for linezolid. This is not standard practice, so the authors should provide evidence to support this claim by running an LC/MS standard curve, then showing the correlation between peak height and amount of compound added as well as the correlation between peak area and compound.

      Thank you for pointing that out, accuracy calculated and displayed. Both peak area and height can be used, but indeed area is standard practice.

      (7) The authors should provide methods information about the LC column and the gradient settings used for LC-MS, as well as the settings of the MS.

      The full method has been added to the paper.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      I have only minor comments aside from the information in the Public Review:

      (1) Results, section on Intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation, line 8: "experiment was performed at a concentration of antibiotic PROPORTIONAL to its MIC" would be more accurate?

      Agreed and adjusted according to Reviewer’s suggestion.

      (2) Results, section on A minor role for pre-existing target modification, last sentence: the mere presence of RIF-ribosylating enzymes does not, in and of itself indicate that "RIF modification, and precisely ADP-ribosylation, is the dominant mechanism of resistance to RIF in mycobacteria", as other mechanisms and other forms of modifying enzymes are known to confer rifamycin resistance, with redundancy (e.g., other rifampicin-modifying enzymes, or helR-mediated dissociation of rifampicin-stalled RNA polymerases from DNA). It would be more appropriate to suggest the results presented to this point indicate RIF modification is common among mycobacteria. The evidence from the CRISPRi knockdown of Arrs shown in Fig 5d is the kind of evidence that suggests ribosylation as a dominant mechanism, at least against rifabutin in this particular species.

      Absolutely, there are other possible modifying enzymes that could be encoded by these mycobacterial species. There is a possibility that M. flavescens and M. smegmatis encode for a putative helR (attached alignment) but further experiments would need to be carried out to confirm its ability to displace RIF in the RNAP. Interestingly, the presence of both Arr and HelR has been studied in M. abscessus and those mechanisms of resistance are independent from each other (Molecular Cell 2022 82(17):3166-3177.e5).

      (3) Discussion, 2nd sentence needs grammatical editing.

      Rephrased and it reads “Using our mycobacterial library, we identified for the first time high- and ultra-high-level intrinsic resistance (3) to many of the antibiotics tested. Of note, the resistant phenotype is naturally occurring and not a result of mutations due to exposure to the antibiotic in the clinic – which is the more traditional approach for probing mechanisms of antibiotic resistance. Our observations revealed that resistance profiles are highly variable across the genus and do not follow phylogeny, implicating HGT as the key mechanism for acquisition of resistance determinants and evolution of antibiotic resistance in mycobacteria (42).”

      (4) Discussion, page 7, first line: the inclusion of LZD and BDQ in this statement seems at odds with Figure 2c and the statements in the first paragraph of page 5 highlighting these as examples of drugs to which most mycobacteria are susceptible.

      Indeed, many of the species are susceptible, however the MIC<sub>99</sub> levels observed have never been reported before, and therefore we found it to be an interesting finding to highlight. From a treatment perspective, knowing which species are sensitive to which drugs is of course the most useful outcome of our study.

      (5) The next sentence..."We found that resistance to these antibiotics in mycobacteria cannot be explained by uptake/efflux mechanisms..." is a bit of an over-generalization and conflicts with the evidence presented earlier that efflux could be playing a role in BDQ resistance and the published evidence establishing a clinically significant role for efflux-mediated BDQ resistance in M. tuberculosis, M. avium complex and M. abscessus complex.

      We rephrased it to make it more specific to our findings. It reads “We found that resistance to these antibiotics in mycobacteria do not correlate with by uptake/efflux mechanisms in the species tested and it does not correlate with growth rate. Identification of mycobacterial species highly resistant to BDQ and LZD is worrisome as most of this species, if not all, have never been exposed to these drugs.”

      (6) Methods, section on In vitro activity assay of Arr enzymes, line 1: reference(s) should be provided for previously reported methods.

      Reference now added.

      (7) Figure 2d: the low end of the susceptibility range is not well defined.

      In this figure the susceptibility is not defined as the lowest area of the graph, but the lower concentrations are indeed harder to be defined. Hopefully supplementary figure 1 and the additional table containing the MIC can be informative to address this comment.

      (8) Figures 3c,d: the presentation of the relative antibiotic concentrations could be harmonized between the graphs in 3c and those in 3d to enable a more ready comparison.

      We disagree. The goal of these different panels is exactly to illustrate two distinct points. C gives the relative concentration of antibiotic, while D correlates relative concentration with MIC99. The use of log scale in D further clarifies that there is no correlation between intracellular antibiotic concentration and potency (MIC). This information is not present in C.

      (9) Figure 4f and Supplementary Figure 5b: it is difficult to understand the limited amount of ribsosyl-RIF in M. flavescens in Fig 4f relative to Supplementary Figure 5b (esp. when considering M. smeg as a common comparator); and, further, to understand the seeming lack of correlation between RIF susceptibility, ribosylation and Arr number and catalytic efficiency for these two strains without considering additional resistance mechanisms.

      In reality the difference between figure 4f and Supplementary figure 5b is mainly due to M. smegmatis – that has an apparent lower production of ribosyl-RIF in the experiment described in the supplementary figure. The values for M. flavescens are relatively similar. In addition, the ADP-Ribosyl-RIF is not the final metabolite of the pathway.

      In regards of having the entire picture, it is true that we were unable to completely unravel and correlate MIC value, expression of Arr-1, expression of Arr-3, efficiency of each enzyme, production of ADP-Ribosyl-RIF and the presence of other possible mechanisms of resistance and this is indeed a setback in our study, and of most studies ever published, which usually focus on one resistant determinant.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the role of the insulin receptor and the insulin growth factor receptor was investigated in podocytes. Mice, where both receptors were deleted, developed glomerular dysfunction and developed proteinuria and glomerulrosclerosis over several months. Because of concerns about incomplete KO, the authors generated and studied podocyte cell lines where both receptors were deleted. Loss of both receptors was highly deleterious with greater than 50% cell death. To elucidate the mechanism of cell death, the authors performed global proteomics and found that spliceosome proteins were downregulated. They confirmed this directly by using long-read sequencing. These results suggest a novel role for insulin and IGF1R signaling in RNA splicing in podocytes.

      This is primarily a descriptive study and no technical concerns are raised. The mechanism of how insulin and IGF1 signaling regulates splicing is not directly addressed but implicates potentially the phosphorylation downstream of these receptors. In the revised manuscript, it is shown that the mouse KO is incomplete potentially explaining the slow onset of renal insufficiency. Direct measurement of GFR and serial serum creatinines might also enhance our understanding of progression of disease, proteinuria is a strong sign of renal injury. An attempt to rescue the phenotype by overexpression of SF3B4 would also be useful but may be masked by defects in other spliceosome genes. As insulin and IGF are regulators of metabolism, some assessment of metabolic parameters would be an optional add-on.

      Significance:

      With the GLP1 agonists providing renal protection, there is great interest in understanding the role of insulin and other incretins in kidney cell biology. It is already known that Insulin and IGFR signaling play important roles in other cells of the kidney. So, there is great interest in understanding these pathways in podocytes. The major advance is that these two pathways appear to have a role in RNA metabolism.

      Comments on revised version:

      I'm satisfied with the revised manuscript and the responses to my previous concerns.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, submitted to Review Commons (journal agnostic), Coward and colleagues report on the role of insulin/IGF axis in podocyte gene transcription. They knocked out both the insulin and IGFR1 mice. Dual KO mice manifested a severe phenotype, with albuminuria, glomerulosclerosis, renal failure and death at 4-24 weeks.

      Long read RNA sequencing was used to assess splicing events. Podocyte transcripts manifesting intron retention were identified. Dual knock-out podocytes manifested more transcripts with intron retention (18%) compared wild-type controls (18%), with an overlap between experiments of ~30%.

      Transcript productivity was also assessed using FLAIR-mark-intron-retention software. Intron retention w seen in 18% of ciDKO podocyte transcripts compared to 14% of wild-type podocyte transcripts (P=0.004), with an overlap between experiments of ~30% (indicating the variability of results with this method). Interestingly, ciDKO podocytes showed downregulation of proteins involved in spliceosome function and RNA processing, as suggested by LC/MS and confirmed by Western blot.

      Pladienolide (a spliceosome inhibitor) was cytotoxic to HeLa cells and to mouse podocytes but no toxicity was seen in murine glomerular endothelial cells.

      The manuscript is generally clear and well-written. Mouse work was approved in advance. The four figures are generally well-designed, bars/superimposed dot-plots.

      Methods are generally well described.

      Comments on revised version:

      Coward and colleagues have done an excellent job of responding to all the reviewer comments.

    3. Reviewer #4 (Public review):

      Summary and background:

      This report entitled "The insulin/IGF axis is critically important (for) controlling gene transcription in the podocyte" from Hurcombe et al is based on a mouse double knockdown of the IR and IGF1R and a parallel cultured mouse podocyte model. Insulin/IGF signaling system in mammals evolved as three gene reduplicated peptides (insulin, IGF-1, and IGF-2) and their two receptors IR and IGF1R that cross-react to variable extents with the peptides, are ubiquitously expressed, and signal through parallel pathways. The major downstream effect of insulin is to regulate glucose uptake and metabolism, while that of the IGF pathways is to regulate growth and cell cycling in part through mTORC1. The GH-IGF-1-IGF1R pathway regulates post-natal growth. IGF-2 signaling is thought to play a major role in regulating intrauterine growth and development, although IGF-2 is also present at high levels in post-natal life. Thus, one would anticipate that reducing IR/IGF1R signaling in any cell would slow growth and cell cycling by reducing growth factor and metabolic mTORC1-mediated and other processes including the splicing of RNA for protein synthesis.

      Mouse IR/IGF1R double knockdown model:

      A double knockdown mouse model was generated by interbreeding mice with different genetic backgrounds carrying floxed sites for IR and IGF-1R to produce mixed background offspring with both floxed IR and IGF-1R genes. These mice were crossed so that the podocin promoter driven-Cre (that comes on at about embryonic day 12 bas podocytes are developing) would delete IR and IGF-1R genes. Since podocin is believed to be an absolutely podocyte-specific protein, this podocin promoter this is predicted to specifically knock down the IR and IGF1R genes only in podocytes. The weight and growth of double KO offspring was not different from controls, but some proportion of the double knockdown mice subsequently developed proteinuria by 6 months and 20% died, although no specific data is provided to identify the cause of the deaths since eGFR was not decreased. Surviving mice were evaluated at 6 months of age. The efficacy of knockdown was not demonstrated in the mouse model itself, although a temperature-sensitive cell line developed from these double knockdown mice showed that expression of IR and IGF-1R proteins in the Cre-treated cell line were both reduced by about 50% (no statistical analysis of this result provided). In the knockout mice, proteinuria was significantly increased by 6 months, but not at earlier time points. Histologic analysis showed proteinaceous casts, glomerulosclerosis and interstitial fibrosis. Podocyte number was stated to be reduced by about 30% in double knockdown mice, although the method by which this was evaluated seems to have been by counting WT1 positive nuclei in glomerular cross-sections, an approach that is well-known not to be a reliable way of assessing true podocyte number. No information is provided about podocyte size, density or glomerular volume.

      Comment: If IR/IGF1R deletion plays a significant role in normal podocyte function sufficient to cause proteinuria and glomerulosclerosis then the effect of reduced IR and IGF1R protein expression on podocyte function would have been expected to produce a phenotype before 6 months. A more likely scenario to explain the overall result is that deleting the IR and IGF1R genes at about embryonic day12 impacted podocyte development to a variable extent such that some mice developed fewer podocytes per glomerulus than other mice. As mice grow and their glomeruli and glomerular capillary area increases, those mice with fewer podocytes would not be able to completely cover the filtration surface with foot processes and would develop proteinuria and glomerulosclerosis. If reduced podocyte number per glomerulus is the proximate cause of the observed proteinuria, then modulation of the body and kidney growth rate by calorie restriction to slow growth (lower circulating IGF-1 levels) would be expected to be protective, while a high protein high calorie diet (higher circulating IGF-1 levels) or uni-nephrectomy to increase kidney growth rate would be expected to enhance proteinuria and glomerulosclerosis.

      The model as used may be more representative of a variable degree of podocyte depletion than an effect of impaired IR/IGF1R signaling. Therefore, although the phenotype may be ultimately attributable to the IR/IGF1R gene deletions the proteinuria and glomerulosclerotic phenotype itself was probably a consequence of defective podocyte development. Examining podocyte number, size, density and glomerular volume at earlier time points (4 weeks) would help to answer this question. Therefore, a more appropriate title would be "The insulin/IGF axis is critically important (for) normal podocyte development and deployment". In this context the effect of the knockdowns on splicing would make more sense.

      Cell culture studies. A cell line was generated using a temperature sensitive SV40 system that has been previously reported from this laboratory. A detailed analysis is provided to show that double knockout cells exhibited abnormal spliceosome activity. This forms the basis for the conclusion that "The insulin/IGF axis is critically important (for) controlling gene transcription in the podocyte". There are several concerns that weaken this conclusion.

      (1) In the double knockdown cell culture system about 30% of cells were "lost" by 3 days and about 70% of cells were "lost" by 5days. The studies were done at the 3 day time point. It is not clear whether "lost" cells were in the process of dying, stress-induced detachment, or just growing more slowly than control due to reduced IR and IGF-1R signaling. These processes could have impacted splicing in a non-specific way independent of IR/IGF1R signaling itself.

      (2) Can a single cell line derived from the double floxed mice be relied on to provide an unbiased picture of the effect of deleting IR and IGF-1R? Presumably, the transfection and selection process will select for cells that survive thereby including unknown biases, possibly related to spliceosome function. Is a single cell line adequate? These investigators have extensive experience with this type of analysis, but this question is not addressed in the discussion.

      (3) To determine whether the effect is specific to reduced IR/IGFR signaling the deletion of IR and IGF-1R could be corrected by transfecting full length IR and IGF-1R cDNAs into the cells to restore normal IR/IGF1R signaling. If transfected cells with intact IR and IGF-1R expression and activity returns spliceosome activity to normal this would be evidence that receptors themselves play some role in spliceosome activity, as opposed to the downstream effect on growth limitation/stress on the cells.

      (4) Other ways of testing whether the splicing effect is specifically due to reduced IR/IGF-1R signaling would be to (a) block IR and IGF1R receptors using available inhibitors, (b) remove or reduce insulin, IGF-1 and IGF-2 levels in the culture medium, (c) use low glucose and amino acid culture medium to slow growth rate independent of receptor function, (d) or block intra-cellular signaling via the IR and IGF-1R receptors through mTORC1 inhibition using rapamycin or other signaling targets.

      (5) It would be useful to determine whether the cultured cells stressed in other ways (e.g. ischemia, toxins, etc.) also results in the same splicing abnormalities.

    4. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Many thanks for your helpful and constructive comments for our work examining the effect of inhibiting both the insulin receptor (IR) and IGF1 receptor (IGF1R) in the podocyte. We are pleased to submit an updated manuscript addressing your concerns.

      (1) A major concern was a lack of mechanistic insight into how deletion (or knock-down) of both receptors caused the spliceosomal phenotype (Reviewer 1 and Reviewer 3).

      We now think this is due to the lack of a network of insulin/IGF phospho-signalling events to a variety of spliceosomal proteins and kinases. The reasons for this are as follows:

      A. Since submitting our paper Turewicz et al have published a comprehensive phospho-proteomic paper examining the effects of 100nM insulin on human primary myotubes (DOI: 10.1038/s41467-025-56335-6). They discovered that multiple post-translational phosphorylation events occur in a variety of spliceosomal proteins at differing time points (1 minute to 60 minutes). Furthermore, they show that mRNA splicing is rapidly modified in response to insulin stimulation in their cells. This follows elegant work from Bastista et al who studied diabetic and non-diabetic iPSC derived human myositis and also detected a spliceosome phosphorylation signature (DOI: 10.1016/j.cmet.2020.08.007).

      B. We have examined phospho-proteosome changes that occur in wild -type podocytes (expressing both the IR and IGF1R) compared to double (IR and IGF1R) knockout cells using phosho-proteomics. We have done this 3 days after inducing receptor knockdown, before major cell loss, and have stimulated the cells with either 10nM insulin or 100mg IGF1.

      Interestingly, we detected several post-translational modifications (PTM) in our data set that are also present in Turewicz’s studies. Of note, 100nM insulin (as used by Turewicz) will signal through both the insulin and IGF1 receptor (and hybrid Insulin/IGF1 receptors) which is relevant to our studies.

      Our work shows a cascade of phospho- signalling events affecting multiple components of the spliceosomal complex and evidence of kinase modulation (phosphorylation) (New Figure 7 and supplementary Figure 5). Also new results section in paper (lines 391-425 in track changes version). We acknowledge that we only studied a single time point after stimulation (10 minutes) and could have missed other PTM in the spliceosomal complex and other kinases. This is mentioned in our new limitations of study section (lines 595-606). This will be a focus of future work. We did not find major PTM differences when stimulating with either insulin or IGF1 in our studies and suspect that the doses of insulin (10nM) and IGF1 (100mg) used are still able to signal through cognate receptors.

      Furthermore, we have examined the relative contributions of the insulin and IGF1 receptor in detail in the model (addressed in point 13 below).

      (2) The phenotype of the mouse is only superficially addressed. The main issues are that the completeness of the mouse KO is never assessed nor is the completeness of the KO in cell lines. The absence of this data is a significant weakness. (Reviewer 1)

      We apologise for not making this clear, but we did assess the level of receptor knockdown in both the animal and cell models. The in vivo model showed variable and non-complete levels of insulin receptor and IGF1 receptor podocyte knock down (shown in supplementary Figure 1C). This is why we made the in vitro floxed podocyte cell lines in which we could robustly knockdown both the IR and IGF1R. We show this using Western blotting (shown in Figure 2A). We agree that calling the models knockout is misleading and have changed all to knock down (KD) now.

      (3) The mouse experiments would be improved if the serum creatinine’s were measured to provide some idea how severe the kidney injury is. (Reviewer 1)

      There is variability in creatinine levels which is not uncommon in transgenic mouse models (probably partly due to variability in receptor knock down levels with cre-lox system). This is part of rationale of developing the robust double receptor knockout cell models where we robustly knocked out both receptors by >80%. We have added measured creatinine levels in a subset of mice in supplementary data (New Supplementary Figure 1E) and mention this in the text (lines 285-286). As some mice died we expect they may have developed acute kidney injury, but we did not serially measure the creatinine’s in every mouse over time. We could have assessed the GFR in a more sensitive way to look at differences. However, we consider the highly significant levels of albuminuria and histological damage observed in our models show a significant kidney phenotype.

      (4) An attempt to rescue the phenotype by overexpression of SF3B4 would also be useful. If this didn't work, an explanation in the text would suffice. (Reviewer 1).

      We did consider doing this but on reflection think it is very unlikely to rescue the phenotype as an array of different spliceosomal proteins quantitatively changed and were differentially phosphorylated / dephosphorylated throughout the complex (as we hope our revised work illustrates now). We think a single protein rescue is highly unlikely to work. We hope this is an appropriate explanation for this action. We have mentioned this in the text now in our discussion (lines 601-602).

      (5) As insulin and IGF are regulators of metabolism, some assessment of metabolic parameters would be an optional add-on. (Reviewer 1).

      Thank you for this suggestion. We did not extensively examine the metabolism of the mice however we did perform blood glucose measurement and weight which are included in the paper (Figure 1A and Figure 1B).

      (6) The authors should caveat the cell experiments by discussing the ramifications of studying the 50% of the cells that survive vs the ones that died. (Reviewer 1).

      We appreciate this and this was the rationale behind cells being studied after 3 days differentiation for total and phospho-proteomics before significant cell loss to avoid the issue of studying the 50% of cells that survive (which happened at 7 days). We have made this clearer in the manuscript. We also have added the data showing less cell death at 3 days in the cell model (New Supp Figure 2B).

      (7) It would be helpful to say that tissue scoring was performed by an investigator masked to sample identity. (Reviewer 2)

      We did this and have added to manuscript (line 113).

      (8) Data are presented as mean/SEM. In general, mean/SD or median/IQR are preferred to allow the reader to evaluate the spread of the data. There may be exceptions where only SEM is reasonable. (Reviewer 2)

      All graphs have now been changed to SD rather than SEM.

      (9) It would be useful to for the reader to be told the number of over-lapping genes (with similar expression between mouse groups) and the results of a statistical test comparing WT and KO mice. The overlap of intron retention events between experimental repeats was about 30% in both knock-out podocytes. This seems low and I am curious to know whether this is typical for this method; a reference could be helpful. (Reviewer 2)

      This is an excellent question. We had 30% overlap as the parameters used for analysis were very stringent. We suspect we could get more than 30% by being less stringent, which still be considered as similar events if requested. Our methods were based on FLAIR analysis (PMID: 32188845). We have added this reference to the manuscript (Line 242 & 680).

      (10) With the GLP1 agonists providing renal protection, there is great interest in understanding the role of insulin and other incretins in kidney cell biology. It is already known that Insulin and IGFR signaling play important roles in other cells of the kidney. So, there is great interest in understanding these pathways in podocytes. The major advance is that these two pathways appear to have a role in RNA metabolism, the major limitations are the lack of information regarding the completeness of the KO's. If, for example, they can determine that in the mice, the KO is complete, that the GFR is relatively normal, then the phenotype they describe is relatively mild. (Reviewer 1)

      Thank you. The receptor knock-out (KO) in the mice is highly unlikely to be complete (Please see comments above and Supplementary Figure 1C). There are many examples of “KO” animal models targeting other tissues showing that complete KO of these receptors seems difficult to achieve, particularly in reference to the IGF1 receptor. In the brain, which also contains terminally differentiated cells, barely 50% of IGF1R knockdown was achieved in the target cells (PMID:28595357). In ovarian granulosa cells (PMID:28407051) -several tissue specific drivers tried but couldn't achieve any better than 80%. The paper states that 10% of IGF1R is sufficient for function in these cells so they conclude that their knockdown animals are probably still responding to IGF1. Finally, in our recent IGF1R podocyte knockdown model we found Cre levels were important for excision of a single homozygous floxed gene (PMID: 38706850) hence we were not surprised that trying to excise two homozygous floxed genes (insulin receptor and IGF1 receptor) was challenging. This was the rationale for making the double receptor knockout cell lines to understand processes / biology in more detail. As stated earlier, we have changed our description of the mice and cell lines from knock-out to knock-down throughout the revised manuscript as this is more accurate.

      (11) For the in vivo studies, the only information given is for mice at 24 weeks of age. There needs to be a full-time course of when the albuminuria was first seen and the rate of development. Also, GFR was not measured. Since the podocin-Cre utilized was not inducible, there should be a determination of whether there was a developmental defect in glomeruli or podocytes. Were there any differences in wither prenatal post-natal development or number of glomeruli? (Reviewer 3)

      We have added further urinary Albumin:creatinine ratio (uACR) data at 12, 16 and 20 weeks to manuscript. We do not think there was a major developmental phenotype as albuminuria did not become significantly different until several months of age (new Supp Figure 1B). We did consider using a doxycycline inducible model but we know the excision efficiency is much less than the constitutive podocin-cre driven model Author response image 1. This would likely give a very mild (if any) phenotype when attempting to knockout both receptors and not reveal the biology adequately. We acknowledge the weaknesses of the animal model and this was the rationale for generating the cell models.

      (12) Although the in vitro studies are of interest, there are no studies to determine if this is the underlying mechanism for the in vivo abnormalities seen in the mice. Cultured podocytes may not necessarily reflect what is occurring in podocytes in vivo. (Reviewer 3)

      This is a good point. We have now immune-stained the DKD and WT mice for Sf3b4 (a spliceosomal change in our in vitro proteomics) and also find a significant reduction in this protein in podocytes of the DKD mice (New Figure 3F).

      (13) Given that both receptors are deleted in the podocyte cell line, it is not clear if the spliceosome defect requires deletion of both receptors or if there is redundancy in the effect. The studies need to be repeated in podocyte cell lines with either IR or IGFR single deletions. (Reviewer 3)

      We have now performed proteomics and phospho-proteomics in all 4 cell types (Wild-type, Insulin receptor knock down, IGF1R knockdown and double knockdown) at 3 days (New Figure 8 and supplementary Figure 6. Also new results section lines 425 to 450). This shows that both receptors contribute to the pathways (and hence there is a high level of compensation built into the system). For total proteins we detected that spliceosomal tri-snRNP was only reduced when both receptors were lacking but other proteins / pathways had an incremental effect of losing the insulin or IGF1 receptor. Likewise, the spliceosomal phospho-signaling events can go through either the insulin or igf1 receptors predominantly or through both. We think this reflects the complexity of this system and how evolutioatily it has developed in mammals to protect against its loss.

      Finally in revision we have rewritten the discussion with a “limitations of the study” section and hopefully in an easier to read fashion for the readership.

      Author response image 1.

      (A) mT/mG reporter mouse crossed to constitutional podocin Cre heterozygous mouse. Illustrates podocyte specificity for Cre driver and excision Of reporter Figure shows GFP expression in Cre producing cells (top panel scale bar=250vm; bottom panel scale bar=50pm). Cre expression causes GFP to be switched on. (B) mT/mG reporter mouse crossed to podocin RtTA— tet-o-cre heterozygous mouse shows podocyte specificity for driver and approximately 60% excision. (top and bottom panels scale bar=250pm; middle panel scale bar=50pm). Doxycycline required for expression showing not leaky.

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors show that genetic deletion of the orphan tumor necrosis factor receptor DR6 in mice does not protect peripheral axons against degeneration after axotomy. Similarly, Schwann cells in DR6 mutant mice react to axotomy similarly to wild type controls. These negative results are important because previous work has indicated that loss or inhibition of DR6 is protective in disease models and also against Wallerian degeneration of axons following injury. This carefully executed counterexample is important for the field to consider.

      Strengths:

      A strength of the paper is the use of two independent mouse strains that knockout DR6 in slightly different ways. The authors confirm that DR6 mRNA is absent in these models (western blots for DR6 protein are less convincingly null, but given the absence of mRNA, this is likely an issue of antibody specificity). One of the DR6 knockout strains used is the same strain used in a previous paper examining the effects of DR6 on Wallerian degeneration.

      The authors use a series of established assays to evaluate axon degeneration, including light and electron microscopy on nerve histological samples and cultured dorsal root ganglion neurons in which axons are mechanically severed and degeneration is scored in time lapse microscopy. These assays consistently show a lack of effect of loss of DR6 on Wallerian degeneration in both mouse strains examined.

      Additional strengths are that the authors examine both the axonal response and the Schwann cell response to axotomy and use both in vivo and in vitro assays.

      Therefore, these experiments, the author's data support their conclusion that loss of DR6 does not protect against Wallerian degeneration.

      Weaknesses:

      A weakness of this paper is that no effort is made to determine why the results presented here may differ from previous studies. A notable possibility is that the original mouse strain that showed 5 of 13 mice being protected from Wallerian degeneration was studies on a segregating C57BL/6.129S background.

      Finally, it is important to note that previously reported effects of DR6 inhibition, such as protection of cultured cortical neurons from beta-amyloid toxicity, are not necessarily the same as Wallerian degeneration of axons distal to an injury studied here. The negative results presented here showing that loss of DR6 is not protective against Wallerian degeneration induced by injury are important given the interest in DR6 as a therapeutic target. However, care should be taken in attempting to extrapolate these results to other disease contexts such as ALS or Alzheimer's disease.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors show that genetic deletion of the orphan tumor necrosis factor receptor DR6 in mice does not protect peripheral axons against degeneration after axotomy. Similarly, Schwann cells in DR6 mutant mice react to axotomy similarly to wild-type controls. These negative results are important because previous work has indicated that loss or inhibition of DR6 is protective in disease models and also against Wallerian degeneration of axons following injury. This carefully executed counterexample is important for the field to consider.

      Strengths:

      A strength of the paper is the use of two independent mouse strains that knock out DR6 in slightly different ways. The authors confirm that DR6 mRNA is absent in these models (western blots for DR6 protein are less convincingly null, but given the absence of mRNA, this is likely an issue of antibody specificity). One of the DR6 knockout strains used is the same strain used in a previous paper examining the effects of DR6 on Wallerian degeneration.

      The authors use a series of established assays to evaluate axon degeneration, including light and electron microscopy on nerve histological samples and cultured dorsal root ganglion neurons in which axons are mechanically severed and degeneration is scored in time-lapse microscopy. These assays consistently show a lack of effect of loss of DR6 on Wallerian degeneration in both mouse strains examined.

      Therefore, in the specific context of these experiments, the author's data support their conclusion that loss of DR6 does not protect against Wallerian degeneration.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The major weaknesses of this paper include the tone of correcting previously erroneous results and the lack of reporting on important details around animal experiments that would help determine whether the results here really are discordant with previous studies, and if so, why.

      The authors do not report the genetic strain background of the mice used, the sex distributions of their experimental cohorts, or the age of the mice at the time the experiments were performed. All of these are important variables.

      (Response 1) We thank the reviewer for emphasizing the importance of reporting the sex, age, and genetic background of the experimental animals used in our axon protection analyses. We have incorporated this information into the revised manuscript wherever available. The sole exception concerns the genetic background of the conditional DR6 mice generated by Genentech, which remains unknown. The original publication describing these mice (Tam et al., 2012, Dev Cell, PMID 22340501) did not report this information, and we were unable to obtain it directly from Genentech. Details regarding the genetic background of the Wld<sup>S</sup> and aPhr1 mutant mice are provided in their respective original publications, which are cited in our manuscript. Because the Gamage et al. study from the Deppmann laboratory did not report the sex or age of the animals used, we were unable to assess whether these variables might contribute to the differences observed between the two studies. Moreover, we are not aware of published evidence identifying sex or age as modifiers of structural axon preservation in axotomized peripheral nerve stumps in mouse models of delayed Wallerian degeneration. Furthermore, in the original publications describing the phenotypes of transgenic Nmnat2 and Wld<sup>S</sup> mice, as well as Sarm1 or Phr1 knockout mice, sex and age of the animals used in the Wallerian degeneration assays were not reported (PMIDs 23995269, 12106171, 22678360, 23665224). Although, to our knowledge, no large-scale systematic studies have been conducted, over the last 15 years we have never observed any sex-based differences in Wallerian degeneration phenotypes in these mutants exhibiting prominent axon protection. This topic was discussed informally at conferences, and we are also not aware of other investigators having observed such effects.

      In response to the reviewer’s comment regarding “tone”, we made sure that our data and interpretations are presented in a professional, balanced, and objective manner, including a detailed discussion of potential alternative explanations for the discrepant findings.

      (2) The DR6 knockout strain reported in Gamage et al. (2017) was on a C57BL/6.129S segregating background. Gamage et al. reported that loss of DR6 protected axons from Wallerian degeneration for up to 4 weeks, but importantly, only in 38.5% (5 out of 13) mice they examined. In the present paper, the authors speculate on possible causes for differences between the lack of effect seen here and the effects reported in Gamage et al., including possible spontaneous background mutations, epigenetic changes, genetic modifiers, neuroinflammation, and environmental differences. A likely explanation of the incomplete penetrance reported by Gamage et al. is the segregating genetic background and the presence of modifier loci between C57BL/6 and 129S. The authors do not report the genetic background of the mice used in this study, other than to note that the knockout strain was provided by the group in Gamage et al. However, if, for example, that mutation has been made congenic on C57BL/6 in the intervening years, this would be important to know. One could also argue that the results presented here are consistent with 8 out of 13 mice presented in Gamage et al.

      (Response 2) As noted above, we now provide information on the genetic background of the mice in the revised manuscript, where available. We have not backcrossed the constitutive DR6 knockout mice obtained from the Deppmann laboratory (Gamage et al.) to a C57BL/6 background; our colony was maintained primarily through intercrosses of heterozygous animals. Similarly, the conditional DR6 mutant mice used in this study were also not backcrossed to C57BL/6 mice.

      We respectfully hold a different view regarding the reviewer’s final point. We understand it is not appropriate to infer consistency between two datasets by disregarding the subset of results that do not align. By the same logic, it would be flawed to draw conclusions from the Gamage et al. study based solely on the single Wld<sup>S</sup> mouse out of five that did not show axon preservation after nerve injury. Selectively omitting conflicting data does not provide a valid basis for establishing phenotype concordance across studies.

      To further strengthen our study, we note that we performed additional analyses on three more nerve samples from constitutive DR6 null mice during the revision process and have incorporated the resulting data in Fig. 1.

      (3) Age is also an important variable. The protective effects of the spontaneous WldS mutation decrease with age, for example. It is unclear whether the possible protective effects of DR6 also change with age; perhaps this could explain the variable response seen in Gamage et al. and the lack of response seen here.

      (Response 3) As discussed above, we now provide the age information for the mice used for the Wallerian degeneration assessments in the respective figure legends. To our knowledge, there are no prior reports suggesting that age is a significant determinant of structural axon preservation in the indicated mutants. Electrophysiological function and neuromuscular junction preservation decrease with age in axotomized Wld<sup>S</sup> mice (e.g., PMIDs 12231635, 19158292, 15654865), but these parameters are not subject of our study, and we have not studied them. Unfortunately, a direct comparison of ages between our DR6 mutant mice and those used in Gamage et al. (2017) is not possible, as the earlier study from the Deppmann laboratory did not report this information.

      (4) It is unclear if sex is a factor, but this is part of why it should be reported.

      (Response 4) We now report the requested sex information for our axon preservation analyses during nerve injury-induced Wallerian degeneration in the DR6 mouse models in Figs. 1 and 2.

      (5) The authors also state that they do not see differences in the Schwann cell response to injury in the absence of DR6 that were reported in Gamage et al., but this is not an accurate comparison. In Gamage et al., they examined Schwann cells around axons that were protected from degeneration 2 and 4 weeks post-injury. Those axons had much thinner myelin, in contrast to axons protected by WldS or loss of Sarm1, where the myelin thickness remained relatively normal. Thus, Gamage et al. concluded that the protection of axons from degeneration and the preservation of Schwann cell myelin thickness are separate processes. Here, since no axon protection was seen, the same analysis cannot be done, and we can only say that when axons degenerate, the Schwann cells respond the same whether DR6 is expressed or not.

      (Response 5) We appreciate the reviewer’s detailed comments. Our intention was not to directly compare our findings with those of Gamage et al. regarding the myelin behavior at these time points (because we never observed axon protection), but rather to note that we did not observe any DR6-dependent alterations in Schwann cell responses under conditions where axons undergo normal Wallerian degeneration. As the reviewer correctly points out, Gamage et al. analyzed Schwann cell myelin surrounding axons that were protected from degeneration for extended periods, a context fundamentally different from the complete lack of axon protection observed in our DR6-deficient models. Therefore, the specific dissociation between axon preservation and myelin maintenance claimed by Gamage et al. cannot be evaluated in our study. A statement to make this point clearer has been incorporated in the revised manuscript.

      We fully agree with the reviewer’s concluding point: in our experiments, once axons degenerate, Schwann cell responses proceed similarly regardless of DR6 expression. This agreement reinforces one of the central conclusions of our work.

      (6) The authors also take issue with Colombo et al. (2018), where it was reported that there is an increase in axon diameter and a change in the g-ratio (axon diameter to fiber diameter - the axon + myelin) in peripheral nerves in DR6 knockout mice. This change resulted in a small population of abnormally large axons that had thinner myelin than one would expect for their size. The change in g-ratio was specific to these axons and driven by the increased axon diameter, not decreased myelin thickness, although those two factors are normally loosely correlated. Here, the authors report no changes in axon size or g-ratio, but this could also be due to how the distribution of axon sizes was binned for analysis, and looking at individual data points in supplemental figure 3A, there are axons in the DR6 knockout mice that are larger than any axons in wild type. Thus, this discrepancy may be down to specifics and how statistics were performed or how histograms were binned, but it is unclear if the results presented here are dramatically at odds with the results in Colombo et al. (2018).

      (Response 6) Several points raised by the reviewer appear to reflect differences in interpretation of the findings reported in Colombo et al. (2018). That study did not report altered myelination in DR6 null mice at stages when myelination is largely complete (P21). Instead, modest changes were observed at P1, which were reduced by P7, and P21 mutants were reported to be indistinguishable from controls. No analyses of peripheral nerves in older animals were presented, and the authors concluded in the discussion that myelination in young adult DR6 null mice appears normal. In contrast, our analysis of constitutive DR6 null mice at P1 does not reproduce the increase in the number of myelinated fibers per unit area reported by Colombo et al. We obtained similar results in the independent conditional DR6 knockout mouse line. Differences in nerve tissue processing, embedding, staining, or in the microscopic imaging and quantification of thinly myelinated axons in P1 sciatic nerve cross-sections may have contributed to the observed discrepancy. However, because the relevant methodological details were not described in Colombo et al., the underlying reasons for these differences cannot be determined and remain speculative.

      (7) Finally, it is important to note that previously reported effects of DR6 inhibition, such as protection of cultured cortical neurons from beta-amyloid toxicity, are not necessarily the same as Wallerian degeneration of axons distal to an injury studied here. The negative results presented here, showing that loss of DR6 is not protective against Wallerian degeneration induced by injury, are important given the interest in DR6 as a therapeutic target, but they are specific to these mice and this mechanism of induced axon degeneration. The extent to which these findings contradict previous work is difficult to assess due to the lack of detail in describing the mouse experiments, and care should be taken in attempting to extrapolate these results to other disease contexts, such as ALS or Alzheimer's disease.

      (Response 7) We agree with the reviewer’s point and emphasize that our manuscript carefully differentiates our data regarding the function of DR6 in Wallerian degeneration from the potential involvement of DR6 in other forms of axon degeneration. Our findings do not conflict with previous work on DR6 in the context of in vitro beta-amyloid and prion toxicity as well as in vitro models of ALS and multiple sclerosis. We believe these distinctions are explicitly and appropriately articulated throughout the entire manuscript and in more detail in the discussion section.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) The authors should include additional information about the mice used, including strain background for both the DR6 mice and the Cre transgenes crossed into the DR6 conditional knockout, the age of the mice when the nerve crush experiments were performed, and the sex distributions of the experimental cohorts. This information is critical for reproducibility in animal experiments, and that point is compounded here, where the major focus of this paper is taking issue with the reproducibility of previous work.

      (Response 8) This information has been included in the revision. See above responses.

      (2) In the abstract, reference 5 is cited as a study on the response to Schwann cells to injury in a DR6 background, but this probably should be reference 10.

      (Response 9) This typo has been corrected.

      (3) "Site-by-site comparison" in line 201 should be side-by-side?

      (Response 10) This typo has been corrected.

      (4) The paper contains a lot of self-evaluative wording, "surprising contrast," "compelling evidence," "robust results." Whether those adjectives apply should be for the reader to decide, and a drier, more objective tone in the presentation would improve the paper.

      (Response 11) We agree that excessive self-evaluative wording can weaken objectivity. In the manuscript, such phrasing is used sparingly and intentionally to highlight differences from previously published studies, guide the reader, and convey scholarly judgment. We do not consider this limited use to be counterproductive. The adjectives “surprising,” “compelling,” and “robust” each appear only one to three times across the entire manuscript, and the specific phrase “robust results” does not appear at all.

      (5) In Figure 2A, DR6-/-, there is no significant difference, but there is also a lot of variability, and one could argue the authors are seeing axon protection comparable to WldS in 40% of their samples (2/5), which is very similar to Gamage et al.

      (Response 12) We respectfully disagree with this reasoning as it relies on selectively emphasizing only a subset of the data. Please also see our response #2 for more detailed discussion.

      (6) Overall, the data presented here are convincing and support the conclusions drawn, but the paper needs to focus more on the negative results at hand and less on bashing previous studies, particularly when the results presented here do definitively show that the previous studies were incorrect and plausible explanations for differences in outcome exist.

      (Response 13) We have carefully revisited the wording of the manuscript and are confident that our emphasis remains on the central negative finding that DR6 does not regulate axon degeneration and Schwann cell injury responses during Wallerian degeneration. We do not believe the manuscript “bashes” previous studies; nonetheless, we thoroughly re-examined all relevant sections to ensure that our language is neutral, accurate, and non-inflammatory. We believe the current phrasing presents our interpretations in an appropriately balanced, objective, and professional manner.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Beirowski, Huang, and Babetto revisits the proposed role of Death Receptor 6 (DR6/Tnfrsf21) in Wallerian degeneration (WD). A prior study (Gamage et al., 2017) suggested that DR6 deletion delays axon degeneration and alters Schwann cell responses following peripheral nerve injury. Here, the authors comprehensively test this claim using two DR6 knockout mouse models (the line used in the earlier report plus a CMV-Cre derived floxed ko line) and multiple WD assays in vivo and in vitro, aligned with three positive controls, Sarm1 WldS and Phr1/Mycbp2 mutants. Contrary to the prior findings, they find no evidence that DR6 deletion affects axon degeneration kinetics or Schwann cell dynamics (assessed by cJun expression or [intact+degenerating] myelin abundance after injury) during WD. Importantly, in DRG explant assays, neurites from DR6-deficient mice degenerated at rates indistinguishable from controls. The authors conclude that DR6 is dispensable for WD, and that previously reported protective effects may have been due to confounding factors such as genetic background or spontaneous mutations.

      Strengths:

      The authors employ two independently generated DR6 knockout models, one overlapping with the previously published study, and confirm loss of DR6 expression by qPCR and Western blotting. Multiple complementary readouts of WD are applied (structural, ultrastructural, molecular, and functional), providing a robust test of the hypothesis.

      Comparisons are drawn with established positive controls (WldS, SARM1, Phr1/Mycbp2 mutants), reinforcing the validity of the assays.

      By directly addressing an influential but inconsistent prior report, the manuscript clarifies the role of DR6 and prevents potential misdirection of therapeutic strategies aimed at modulating WD in the PNS. The discussion thoughtfully considers possible explanations for the earlier results, including colony-specific second-site mutations that could explain the incomplete penetrance of the earlier reported phenotype of only 36%.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study focuses on peripheral nerves. The manuscript frequently refers to CNS studies to argue for consistency with their findings. It would be more accurate to frame PNS/CNS similarities as reminiscences rather than as consistencies (e.g., line 205ff in the Discussion).

      (Response 14) Axon protection in all key genetic models of delayed axon degeneration, including Wld<sup>S</sup>, SARM1, Phr1/Mycbp2 mutants, has been demonstrated in both the peripheral and central nervous systems. This observation supports the view that core molecular mechanisms regulating axon degeneration are conserved across neuronal populations throughout the entire nervous system. We have scrutinized the wording in our manuscript and are not aware that we frequently refer to CNS studies in regards to axon degeneration. Nevertheless, we have replaced the term “consistent” to avoid potential ambiguity when we discuss the earlier study showing normal Wallerian degeneration in the optic nerves from DR6 knockout mice.

      (2) The DRG explant assays are convincing, though the slight acceleration of degeneration in the DR6 floxed/Cre condition is intriguing (Figure 4E). Could the authors clarify whether this is statistically robust or biologically meaningful?

      (Response 15) We thank the reviewer for noting this aspect of our in vitro data in Fig. 4. The difference observed in the DR6 floxed/Cre condition is statistically significant at the 6h time point following disconnection, as indicated by the p value shown in Fig. 4E. However, a similarly statistically significant acceleration of axon degeneration was not observed in DRG axotomy experiments using constitutive DR6 knockout preparations, although a trend toward more rapid axon breakdown is apparent at 6 h post-axotomy (Fig. 4B). These observations may suggest reduced stability of DR6-deficient axons in this specific neuron-only in vitro context. Further investigation would be required to determine the biological significance of this effect. In contrast, our in vitro quantitative analyses of the initiation and early phases of Wallerian degeneration (Fig. 2) revealed no evidence of accelerated axon disintegration in the DR6 mutant mouse models, highlighting potential differences between in vitro and in vitro systems.

      (3) In the summary (line 43), the authors refer to Hu et al. (2013) (reference 5) as the study that previously reported AxD delay and SC response alteration after injury. However, this study did not investigate the PNS, and I believe the authors intended to reference Gamage et al. (2017) (reference 10) at this point.

      (Response 16) Thanks for pointing this out. We have corrected this typo in the revised manuscript.

      (4) In line 74ff of the results section, the authors claim that developmental myelination is not altered in DR6 mutants at postnatal day 1. However, the variability in Figure S2 appears substantial, and the group size seems underpowered to support this claim. Colombo et al. (2018) (reference 11) reported accelerated myelination at P1, but this study likewise appears underpowered. Possible reasons for these discrepancies and the large variability could be that only a defined cross-sectional area was quantified, rather than the entire nerve cross-section.

      (Response 17) We confirm that the quantification of thinly myelinated axons was performed on entire sciatic nerves from P1 mouse pups, as described in the methods section in our original manuscript. The data shown in Fig. S2 were obtained from 5-9 pups per experimental group. Sample sizes were determined based on a priori power analyses using pilot data, which indicated that a minimum of five biological replicates was sufficient to detect statistically significant differences with acceptable confidence. Comparable sample sizes have been used in our previous studies and by other groups to assess early postnatal myelination (e.g., PMIDs 21949390, 28484008). Several published studies have reported analyses using 3-4 animals per group (e.g., PMIDs 28484008, 25310982, 29367382). For comparison, the study by Colombo et al. used 3-8 pups for the analysis presented in their Fig. 3. We note that the apparent variability in Fig. S2 may be accentuated by the scaling of the y-axis, which was chosen to ensure that individual data points are clearly resolved and visible.

      (5) The authors stress the data of Gamage et al. (2017) on altered SC responses in DR6 mutants after injury. They employed cJun quantification to show that SC reprogramming after injury is not altered in DR6 mutants. This approach is valid and the conclusion trustworthy. Here, the addition of data showing the combined abundance of intact and degenerated myelin does not add much insight. However, Gamage et al. (2017) reported altered myelin thickness in a subset of axons at 14 days after injury, which is considerably later than the time points analyzed in the present study. While, in the Reviewer's view, the thin myelin observed by Gamage et al. in fact resembles remyelination, the authors may wish to highlight the difference in the time points analyzed.

      (Response 18) We consider the additional quantification of the area occupied by intact myelin and myelin debris to provide complementary information that supports the c-Jun-based conclusion that Schwann cell injury responses are normal in DR6-deficient nerves following lesion. We agree with this reviewer that the thin myelin observed by Gamage et al. resembles remyelination, raising the possibility that axon regeneration occurred into the distal nerve stump at the studied 14d post-injury time point (see their Fig. 3). This may have been interpreted as axon protection in this study. In our study, it was impossible to examine such myelin effects since axon protection was never observed in any of the DR6 mutant models at any of the time point we investigated. We have incorporated appropriate additional text to highlight this difference. See also response #5 above.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors revisit the role of DR6 in axon degeneration following physical injury (Wallerian degeneration), examining both its effects on axons and its role in regulating the Schwann cell response to injury. Surprisingly, and in contrast to previous studies, they find that DR6 deletion does not delay the rate of axon degeneration after injury, suggesting that DR6 is not a mediator of this process.

      Overall, this is a valuable study. As the authors note, the current literature on DR6 is inconsistent, and these results provide useful new data and clarification. This work will help other researchers interpret their own data and re-evaluate studies related to DR6 and axon degeneration.

      Strengths:

      (1) The use of two independent DR6 knockout mouse models strengthens the conclusions, particularly when reporting the absence of a phenotype.

      (2) The focus on early time points after injury addresses a key limitation of previous studies. This approach reduces the risk of missing subtle protective phenotypes and avoids confounding results with regenerating axons at later time points after axotomy.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study would benefit from including an additional experimental paradigm in which DR6 deficiency is expected to have a protective effect, to increase confidence in the experimental models, and to better contextualize the findings within different pathways of axon degeneration. For example, DR6 deletion has been shown in more than one study to be partially axon protective in the NGF deprivation model in DRGs in vitro. Incorporating such an experiment could be straightforward and would strengthen the paper, especially if some of the neuroprotective effects previously reported are confirmed.

      (Response 19) We thank the reviewer for these suggestions. We would like to highlight that our study addresses the role of DR6 in Wallerian degeneration, whereas in vitro NGF deprivation has been used to model developmental axon pruning. Previous work indicates fundamental biological differences between these regressive pathways regulating the stereotyped removal of axon segments. We feel that studying this alternative form of axon degeneration is beyond the scope of the current work and could be addressed in a separate manuscript. Although additional tests will be needed, we note that our preliminary data using samples from both DR6 knockout mouse models suggest no axon protection after NGF-deprivation in DRG neuron preparations in our hands (deprivation of the growth factor and administration of anti-NGF antibody).

      (2) The quality of some figures could be improved, particularly the EM images in Figure 2. As presented, they make it difficult to discern subtle differences.

      (Response 20) We have pseudocolored intact (turquoise) and degenerated (magenta) myelinated fibers on the high-resolution semithin micrographs (not electron micrographs) in the new Fig. 2 to make the distinction between the two fiber categories clearer.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Line 121: The authors mention toluidine blue staining, but it does not appear to be shown in Figure S5.

      (Response 21) This appears to be a misunderstanding. Fig. S5A shows the ultrastructure of dedifferentiated Schwann cells in transmission electron micrographs, while Figs. S5B and C show quantification of the area occupied by myelin sheaths and myelin debris profiles on osmium tetroxide and toluidine blue stained nerve sections from the two DR6 mutant models, based on semithin light microscopy. These are two different aspects of the analysis. The text has been modified in the revised manuscript to make the distinction clearer.

      (2) Line 175: The authors should add NMNAT2 to the list of enzymes implicated in the regulation of Wallerian degeneration in mammals.

      (Response 22) Nmnat2 and a literature reference (Milde et al., 2013) has been incorporated in the discussion of the revised manuscript to address this point.

      (3) Line 201: Please correct the typo "site-by-site" to "side-by-side."

      (Response 23) This typo has been corrected.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors investigate the physiological role of the Type VI secretion system (T6SS) in a naturally evolved gut microbiome derived from wild mice (the WildR microbiome). Focusing on Bacteroides acidifaciens, the authors use newly developed genetic tools and strain-replacement strategies to test how T6SS-mediated antagonism influences colonization, persistence, and fitness within a complex gut community. They further show that the T6SS resides on an integrative and conjugative element (ICE), is distributed among select community members, and can be horizontally transferred, with context-dependent effects on colonization and persistence. The authors conclude that the T6SS stabilizes strain presence in the gut microbiome while imposing ecological and physiological constraints that shape its value across contexts.

      This study is likely to have a significant impact on the microbiome field by moving experimental tests of T6SS function out of simplified systems and into a naturally co-evolved gut community. The WildR system, together with the strain replacement strategy, ICE-seq approach, and genetic toolkit, represents a powerful and reusable platform for future mechanistic studies of microbial antagonism and mobile genetic elements in vivo.

      The datasets, including isolate genomes, metagenomes, and ICE distribution maps, will be a valuable community resource, particularly for researchers interested in strain-resolved dynamics, horizontal gene transfer, and ecological context dependence. Even where mechanistic resolution is incomplete, the work provides a strong experimental foundation upon which such questions can be directly addressed.

      Overall, this study occupies a space between system building and mechanistic dissection. The authors demonstrate that the T6SS influences persistence and community structure in vivo, but the physiological basis of these effects remains unresolved. Interpreting the results as evidence of fitness costs or selective advantage, therefore, requires caution, as multiple ecological and host-mediated processes could produce similar abundance trajectories.

      Placing the findings within the broader literature on microbial antagonism, particularly work emphasizing measurable costs, benefits, and tradeoffs, would help readers better contextualize what is directly demonstrated here versus what remains an open question. Viewed in this light, the principal contribution of the study is to show that such questions can now be addressed experimentally in a realistic gut ecosystem.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this study is that it directly interrogates the physiological role of the T6SS in a naturally evolved gut microbiome, rather than relying on simplified pairwise or in vitro systems. By working within the WildR community, the authors advance beyond descriptive surveys of T6SS prevalence and address function in an ecologically relevant context.

      The authors provide clear genetic evidence that Bacteroides acidifaciens uses a T6SS to antagonize co-resident Bacteroidales, and that loss of T6SS function specifically compromises long-term persistence without affecting initial colonization. This temporal separation is well designed and supports the conclusion that the T6SS contributes to maintenance rather than establishment within the community.

      Another strength is the identification of the T6SS on an integrative and conjugative element (ICE) and the demonstration that this element is distributed among, and exchanged between, community members. The use of ICE-seq to track distribution and transfer provides strong support for horizontal mobility and adds mechanistic depth to the study.

      Finally, the transfer of the T6SS-ICE into Phocaeicola vulgatus and the observation of context-dependent colonization benefits followed by decline is a compelling result that moves the study beyond simple "T6SS is beneficial" narratives and highlights ecological contingency.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite these strengths, there is a mismatch between the precision of the claims and the precision of the measurements, particularly regarding fitness costs, physiological burden, and the mechanistic role of the T6SS.

      First, while the authors conclude that the T6SS "stabilizes strain presence" and that its value is constrained by fitness costs, these costs are not directly measured. Persistence, abundance trajectories, and eventual loss are informative outcomes, but they do not uniquely identify fitness tradeoffs. Decline could arise from multiple non-exclusive mechanisms, including community restructuring, host-mediated effects, incompatibilities of the ICE in new hosts, or ecological retaliation, none of which are disentangled here.

      Second, the manuscript frames the T6SS as having a defined physiological role, yet the data do not resolve which physiological processes are under selection. The experiments demonstrate that T6SS activity affects persistence, but they do not distinguish whether this occurs via direct killing, resource release, niche modification, or higher-order community effects. As a result, "physiological role" remains underspecified and risks being conflated with ecological outcome.

      Third, although the authors emphasize context dependence, the study offers limited quantitative insight into what aspects of context matter. Differences between native and recipient hosts, or between early and late colonization phases, are described but not mechanistically interrogated, making it difficult to generalize beyond the specific cases examined.

      Fourth is the lack of engagement with recent experimental literature demonstrating functional roles of the T6SS beyond simple interference competition. While the authors focus on persistence and competitive outcomes, they do not adequately situate their findings within recent work demonstrating that T6SS-mediated antagonism can serve additional physiological functions, including resource acquisition and DNA uptake, thereby linking killing to measurable benefits and tradeoffs. The absence of this literature makes it difficult to place the authors' conclusions about physiological role and fitness cost within the current conceptual framework of the field. Without this context, the physiological interpretation of the results remains incomplete, and alternative functional explanations for the observed dynamics are underexplored.

      A further limitation concerns the taxonomic scope of the functional analysis. The authors state that the role of the T6SS in the murine environment is functionally investigated using genetically tractable Bacteroides species, citing the lack of genetic tools for Mucispirillum schaedleri. While this is a reasonable, practical choice, it means that a substantial fraction of T6SS-encoding species in the WildR community are not experimentally interrogated. Consequently, conclusions about the role of the T6SS in the murine gut necessarily reflect the subset of taxa that are genetically accessible and may not fully capture community-level or niche-specific functions of T6SS activity. Given that M. schaedleri is represented as a metagenome-assembled genome, its isolation and genetic manipulation would be technically challenging. Nonetheless, explicitly acknowledging this limitation and slightly tempering claims of generality would strengthen the manuscript.

      Finally, several interpretations would benefit from more cautious language. In particular, claims invoking fitness costs, selective advantage, or physiological burden should be explicitly framed as inferences from persistence dynamics, rather than as direct measurements, unless supported by additional quantitative fitness or growth assays.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors set out to determine how a contact-dependent bacterial antagonistic system contributes to the ability of specific bacterial strains to persist within a complex, native gut community derived from wild animals. Rather than focusing on simplified or artificial models, the authors aimed to examine this system in a biologically realistic setting that captures the ecological complexity of the gut environment. To achieve this, they combined controlled laboratory experiments with animal colonization studies and sequencing-based tracking approaches that allow individual strains and mobile genetic elements to be followed over time.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the work is the integration of multiple complementary approaches to address the same biological question. The use of defined but complex communities, together with in vivo experiments, provides a strong ecological context for interpreting the results. The data consistently show that the antagonistic system is not required for initial establishment but plays a critical role in long-term strain persistence. This insight that moves beyond traditional invasion-based views of microbial competition. The observation that transferable genetic elements can confer only temporary advantages, and may impose longer-term costs depending on community context, adds important nuance to current understanding of microbial fitness.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, there is not a lack of evidence, but a deliberate trade-off between ecological realism and mechanistic resolution, which leaves some causal pathways open to interpretation.

    3. Author response:

      We appreciate that the reviewers provided an overall positive assessment of our manuscript and offered constructive suggestions for improvement. All three reviewers noted that a key strength of our study is the implementation of a gut microbiome model for the characterization of interbacterial antagonism pathways such as the type VI secretion system (T6SS) that approaches natural complexity. They note our work represents a significant advance in microbiome research, and generates resources that will be of use to many researchers in the field. Two of the reviewers point out that the complexity of our model limits the nature of measurements we can make, and suggest we temper the strength of the some of the conclusions we draw. As noted in more detail below, in our revised manuscript, we will be more precise in the wording we use to characterize our findings, and we will be more explicit about what the measurements we are able to make allow us to conclude about the physiological role of the T6SS in the gut microbiome.

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors investigate the physiological role of the Type VI secretion system (T6SS) in a naturally evolved gut microbiome derived from wild mice (the WildR microbiome). Focusing on Bacteroides acidifaciens, the authors use newly developed genetic tools and strain-replacement strategies to test how T6SS-mediated antagonism influences colonization, persistence, and fitness within a complex gut community. They further show that the T6SS resides on an integrative and conjugative element (ICE), is distributed among select community members, and can be horizontally transferred, with context-dependent effects on colonization and persistence. The authors conclude that the T6SS stabilizes strain presence in the gut microbiome while imposing ecological and physiological constraints that shape its value across contexts.

      This study is likely to have a significant impact on the microbiome field by moving experimental tests of T6SS function out of simplified systems and into a naturally co-evolved gut community. The WildR system, together with the strain replacement strategy, ICE-seq approach, and genetic toolkit, represents a powerful and reusable platform for future mechanistic studies of microbial antagonism and mobile genetic elements in vivo.

      The datasets, including isolate genomes, metagenomes, and ICE distribution maps, will be a valuable community resource, particularly for researchers interested in strain-resolved dynamics, horizontal gene transfer, and ecological context dependence. Even where mechanistic resolution is incomplete, the work provides a strong experimental foundation upon which such questions can be directly addressed.

      Overall, this study occupies a space between system building and mechanistic dissection. The authors demonstrate that the T6SS influences persistence and community structure in vivo, but the physiological basis of these effects remains unresolved. Interpreting the results as evidence of fitness costs or selective advantage, therefore, requires caution, as multiple ecological and host-mediated processes could produce similar abundance trajectories.

      Placing the findings within the broader literature on microbial antagonism, particularly work emphasizing measurable costs, benefits, and tradeoffs, would help readers better contextualize what is directly demonstrated here versus what remains an open question. Viewed in this light, the principal contribution of the study is to show that such questions can now be addressed experimentally in a realistic gut ecosystem.

      We thank the reviewer for this thoughtful summary of our study. We were glad to read they conclude our work will have a significant impact on the microbiome field and that the resources we have developed will be of value to the community.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this study is that it directly interrogates the physiological role of the T6SS in a naturally evolved gut microbiome, rather than relying on simplified pairwise or in vitro systems. By working within the WildR community, the authors advance beyond descriptive surveys of T6SS prevalence and address function in an ecologically relevant context.

      The authors provide clear genetic evidence that Bacteroides acidifaciens uses a T6SS to antagonize co-resident Bacteroidales, and that loss of T6SS function specifically compromises long-term persistence without affecting initial colonization. This temporal separation is well designed and supports the conclusion that the T6SS contributes to maintenance rather than establishment within the community.

      Another strength is the identification of the T6SS on an integrative and conjugative element (ICE) and the demonstration that this element is distributed among, and exchanged between, community members. The use of ICE-seq to track distribution and transfer provides strong support for horizontal mobility and adds mechanistic depth to the study.

      Finally, the transfer of the T6SS-ICE into Phocaeicola vulgatus and the observation of context-dependent colonization benefits followed by decline is a compelling result that moves the study beyond simple "T6SS is beneficial" narratives and highlights ecological contingency.

      We appreciate this detailed and nuanced characterization of the strengths of our study.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite these strengths, there is a mismatch between the precision of the claims and the precision of the measurements, particularly regarding fitness costs, physiological burden, and the mechanistic role of the T6SS.

      We acknowledge that in some places, our manuscript could benefit from greater precision in the language we use when linking the outcomes we observe in our study to their potential underlying causes. Specific revisions we propose to address this concern are described below.

      First, while the authors conclude that the T6SS "stabilizes strain presence" and that its value is constrained by fitness costs, these costs are not directly measured. Persistence, abundance trajectories, and eventual loss are informative outcomes, but they do not uniquely identify fitness tradeoffs. Decline could arise from multiple non-exclusive mechanisms, including community restructuring, host-mediated effects, incompatibilities of the ICE in new hosts, or ecological retaliation, none of which are disentangled here.

      We agree that multiple mechanisms could explain why P. vulgatus carrying a T6SS-encoding ICE declines over time. Our use of the term “fitness cost” to describe this trend was not meant to imply any particular underlying mechanism, but was rather our attempt to characterize the phenotypic outcome we observed in simplified terms. We note that ecological context is an important determinant of the fitness cost or benefit of any given trait, and our study sheds light on the importance of the presence of the WildR community and the mouse intestinal environment to the fitness contribution of the ICE to P. vulgatus. Nonetheless, to avoid implying an overly simplistic interpretation of our results, we propose to modify the language used in the manuscript when describing the contribution of the T6SS to species persistence in WildR-colonized mice.

      Second, the manuscript frames the T6SS as having a defined physiological role, yet the data do not resolve which physiological processes are under selection. The experiments demonstrate that T6SS activity affects persistence, but they do not distinguish whether this occurs via direct killing, resource release, niche modification, or higher-order community effects. As a result, "physiological role" remains underspecified and risks being conflated with ecological outcome.

      We acknowledge that our study does not fully resolve the physiological processes under selection that mediate role of the T6SS in maintaining B. acidifaciens populations in WildR-colonized mice. Indeed, several of the outcomes of T6SS activity the reviewer lists, such as target cell killing and nutrient release, are inextricably linked and thus inherently difficult to disentangle. We note that we did attempt to measure higher-order community effects of T6SS activity with metagenomic sequencing, but acknowledge that this approach may not have been sufficiently sensitive to detect small community shifts mediated by a relatively low-abundance species. To address the concern that our current framing implies more of a mechanistic understanding that our study achieves, we propose to substitute “ecological” for “physiological” where appropriate when summarizing our key findings.

      Third, although the authors emphasize context dependence, the study offers limited quantitative insight into what aspects of context matter. Differences between native and recipient hosts, or between early and late colonization phases, are described but not mechanistically interrogated, making it difficult to generalize beyond the specific cases examined.

      We are not entirely clear what the reviewer means by “differences between native and recipient hosts”, but we agree that additional quantitative studies will be needed to address the generalizability of our findings. Future studies are also needed to address the mechanistic basis for the difference in the benefit conferred by the T6SS that we observed between P. vulgatus and B. acidifaciens.

      Fourth is the lack of engagement with recent experimental literature demonstrating functional roles of the T6SS beyond simple interference competition. While the authors focus on persistence and competitive outcomes, they do not adequately situate their findings within recent work demonstrating that T6SS-mediated antagonism can serve additional physiological functions, including resource acquisition and DNA uptake, thereby linking killing to measurable benefits and tradeoffs. The absence of this literature makes it difficult to place the authors' conclusions about physiological role and fitness cost within the current conceptual framework of the field. Without this context, the physiological interpretation of the results remains incomplete, and alternative functional explanations for the observed dynamics are underexplored.

      We thank the reviewer for specifically highlighting the potential pertinence of this literature to our study. Indeed, we did not cite studies indicating a link between T6SS activity and the uptake of DNA and other resources released by targeted cells. As we note above, the release of intracellular contents from target cells is an inevitable consequence of the delivery of lytic effectors. Thus, distinguishing between fitness benefits conferred from the elimination of competitor species and those arising from scavenging the nutrients released during this process is not straightforward. Measuring the benefits deriving from the uptake of certain released molecules, such as DNA, was not immediately feasible in the system employed in this study and instead we focused on the direct lytic consequences of the effectors delivered via the T6SS. We will revise our Discussion to include reference to how downstream consequences of T6SS activity on target cells could impact the community, and thus the adaptive role of the T6SS in the microbiome.

      A further limitation concerns the taxonomic scope of the functional analysis. The authors state that the role of the T6SS in the murine environment is functionally investigated using genetically tractable Bacteroides species, citing the lack of genetic tools for Mucispirillum schaedleri. While this is a reasonable, practical choice, it means that a substantial fraction of T6SS-encoding species in the WildR community are not experimentally interrogated. Consequently, conclusions about the role of the T6SS in the murine gut necessarily reflect the subset of taxa that are genetically accessible and may not fully capture community-level or niche-specific functions of T6SS activity. Given that M. schaedleri is represented as a metagenome-assembled genome, its isolation and genetic manipulation would be technically challenging. Nonetheless, explicitly acknowledging this limitation and slightly tempering claims of generality would strengthen the manuscript.

      The reviewer points out that studying the T6SS activity in M. schadleri would potentially expand the generality of our claims. We agree that having an isolate of this species along with genetic tools for its manipulation would allow us to probe the importance of the T6SS in the gut microbiome more broadly. At the suggestion of the reviewer, we will add explicit mention for the need to develop such tools, an endeavor that lies outside of the scope of the current study.

      Finally, several interpretations would benefit from more cautious language. In particular, claims invoking fitness costs, selective advantage, or physiological burden should be explicitly framed as inferences from persistence dynamics, rather than as direct measurements, unless supported by additional quantitative fitness or growth assays.

      We agree with the reviewer that invoking fitness costs, selective advantages or physiological burdens should be done cautiously, and in our revised manuscript we will carefully re-evalute our usage of those terms. However, we would also argue invoking fitness costs and benefits when describe strain persistence dynamics in mice has substantial precedent in the literature ((Feng et al. 2020, Brown et al. 2021, Park et al. 2022, Segura Munoz et al. 2022), to list a handful of representative examples published by different groups). It is unclear to us what additional in vivo growth measurements could be taken to substantiate our claim that the T6SS provides a fitness benefit to B. acidifaciens during prolonged gut colonization, or that carrying the ICE imposes a fitness cost on P. vulgatus during long-term colonization. Our in vitro experiments evaluating the competitiveness conferred by T6SS activity provide a measure of insight into its fitness benefits, but as our in vivo strain persistence data and the work of many others show, in vitro measurements do not necessarily capture in vivo parameters.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors set out to determine how a contact-dependent bacterial antagonistic system contributes to the ability of specific bacterial strains to persist within a complex, native gut community derived from wild animals. Rather than focusing on simplified or artificial models, the authors aimed to examine this system in a biologically realistic setting that captures the ecological complexity of the gut environment. To achieve this, they combined controlled laboratory experiments with animal colonization studies and sequencing-based tracking approaches that allow individual strains and mobile genetic elements to be followed over time.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the work is the integration of multiple complementary approaches to address the same biological question. The use of defined but complex communities, together with in vivo experiments, provides a strong ecological context for interpreting the results. The data consistently show that the antagonistic system is not required for initial establishment but plays a critical role in long-term strain persistence. This insight that moves beyond traditional invasion-based views of microbial competition. The observation that transferable genetic elements can confer only temporary advantages, and may impose longer-term costs depending on community context, adds important nuance to current understanding of microbial fitness.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive feedback and are glad they agree our study provides new insight into the role of interbacterial antagonism in natural communities.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, there is not a lack of evidence, but a deliberate trade-off between ecological realism and mechanistic resolution, which leaves some causal pathways open to interpretation.

      The reviewer makes a good point that the complexity of the experimental system we employ precludes some lines of experimentation that would yield more mechanistic information. As the reviewer notes, we were aware of the tradeoff between mechanistic resolution and ecological realism when selecting our experimental system. Our deliberate choice to favor biological complexity over mechanistic clarity in this study stemmed from our perception that a major gap in understanding of the T6SS and other antagonism pathways lies in defining their ecological function in complex microbial communities.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Shen et al. investigate the contribution of the type VI secretion system of Bacteroidales in the gut microbiome assembly and targeting of closely related species. They demonstrate that B. acidifaciens relies on T6SS-mediated antagonism to prevent displacement by co-resident Bacteroidales and other members of the microbiome, allowing B. acidifaciens to persist in the gut.

      Strengths:

      Using a gnotobiotic model colonized with a wild-mouse microbiome is a significant strength of this study. This approach allows tracking of microbiome changes over time and directly examining targeting by Bacteroidales carrying T6SS in a more natural setting. The development of ICE-seq for mapping the distribution of the T6SS in the microbiome is remarkable, enabling the study of how this bacterial weapon is transferred between microbiome members without requiring long-read metagenomics methods.

      We thank the reviewer for their enthusiasm toward our study.

      Weaknesses:

      Some conclusions are based on only four mice per condition. The author should consider increasing the sample size.

      We agree that in some experiments it would be beneficial to increase the sample size from four mice. However, the experiments we performed for this study are time and resource intensive. Additionally, the experiments on which we base our primary conclusions were all independently replicated with similar results. Given these factors, we determined that the extra confidence that might be afforded by increasing our sample size did not merit the delay in publication and investment in resources that would be required.

      Overall, the authors successfully achieved their objectives, and their experimental design and results support their findings. As mentioned in the discussion, it would be important to investigate the role of the T6SS in resilience to disturbances in the microbiome, such as antibiotics, diet, or pathogen invasion. This work represents a step forward in understanding how contact-dependent competition influences the gut microbiome in relevant ecological contexts.

      We agree that investigating the role of the T6SS during perturbations of the microbiome is a key next step for this work and thank the reviewer for highlighting this important future direction.

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    1. § 103. Recall Any elected official or official appointed to elective office holding a Town office may be recalled by the following process: (1) A petition signed by not less than 35 percent of the number of registered voters voting in the last annual Town meeting shall be filed with the Town Clerk. (2) The petition shall request a special Town meeting for the purpose of recalling a specific person or persons and shall state the office that they hold. (3) The Selectboard shall act upon the petition within seven days by warning a special Town meeting. (4) The Town meeting shall be held not less than 30 days and not more than 40 days from the date of the receipt of the petition. (5) The special Town meeting shall be warned as provided by the general law of this State. (6) At least four days but not more than 15 days prior to the voting, an informational meeting shall be held at which time both the elected official and the proponents for the recall shall have the opportunity to discuss the issue of recall. The informational meeting shall be warned in conjunction with the warning for the special Town meeting. (7) Voting on the issue of recall shall be by Australian ballot. A majority of the legal votes cast shall be needed to effect a recall of that official.

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aim to determine whether TENT5A, a post-transcriptional regulator previously implicated in bone formation, also plays a role in enamel development. Using a mouse model lacking TENT5A, they report hypomineralized enamel with structural defects, accompanied by reduced expression, altered poly(A) tail length, and impaired secretion of enamel matrix proteins, particularly amelogenin. By combining ultrastructural imaging, transcriptomics, direct RNA sequencing, and protein localization analyses, the study proposes that TENT5A promotes cytoplasmic polyadenylation and translation of a subset of extracellular matrix transcripts required for enamel biomineralization.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this work is its conceptual novelty. To my knowledge, this is the first study to demonstrate that a non-canonical poly(A) polymerase plays a direct role in enamel development, extending post-transcriptional regulation by cytoplasmic polyadenylation from bone to enamel, a biologically distinct and non-regenerative mineralized tissue. The identification of amelogenin as a dominant, tissue-specific target provides a new perspective on how enamel matrix production is regulated beyond transcriptional control.

      In addition, the study is supported by a comprehensive and complementary set of approaches linking molecular changes to tissue-level phenotypes. The use of direct RNA sequencing provides strong evidence for selective regulation of poly(A) tail length in specific transcripts rather than global effects on mRNA metabolism, and the phenotypic analyses convincingly connect altered post-transcriptional regulation to defects in enamel structure and mineralization.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the data support a role for TENT5A in stabilizing and promoting translation of amelogenin and related transcripts, the mechanism underlying substrate specificity remains unresolved. Poly(A) tail length alone does not explain why certain transcripts are regulated while others are not, and the proposed involvement of protein partners or RNA processing steps remains speculative. This limitation should be more clearly framed as an open question rather than an emerging mechanism.

      A further limitation is the lack of direct human genetic or clinical evidence linking TENT5A to enamel defects. In humans, loss-of-function variants in TENT5A are known to cause a recessive form of osteogenesis imperfecta, but TENT5A has not been associated with amelogenesis imperfecta or other enamel phenotypes. This limits immediate translational interpretation of the mouse enamel phenotype and highlights the need for future human genetic or clinical studies.

      Finally, the manuscript does not address whether other members of the TENT5 family are expressed in ameloblasts or could compensate for the loss of TENT5A, leaving open questions about redundancy and specificity within this family.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Aranaz-Novaliches describes a study of Tent5a knockout (KO) mice. The authors demonstrate a severe enamel phenotype in these mice, characterized by hypoplastic enamel with markedly disturbed organization of enamel rods. Additionally, they report that Amelx expression is reduced in the mutant compared to wild type (WT) at both mRNA and protein levels. The authors also examine the distribution and co-localization of Amelx and Ambn in ameloblasts and the enamel matrix. These findings are novel and provide important insights into the role of polyadenylation in regulating enamel matrix protein translation and its downstream effects on protein trafficking, secretion, and enamel formation. However, I have multiple concerns regarding the data and its analysis that need to be addressed.

      Specific comments:

      (1) Introduction

      The structure of the introduction is unconventional. The first sentence of the third paragraph states that the goal of this study is to investigate the role of TENT5A in enamel formation, but the rest of the paragraph focuses on enamel in general. The following paragraph claims that the authors discovered the effects of Tent5a deficiency on enamel formation for the first time, yet most of the paragraph discusses enamel proteins and amelogenesis. The choice of references is problematic. The authors cite Sire et al. (2007), which focuses on the origin and evolution of enamel mineralisation genes, a poor fit for this context. A more appropriate source would be a recent review, e.g., Lacruz R et al., Physiol Rev. 2017;97(3):939-993. Ambn constitutes ~5% of the enamel matrix, not 10%. Reference 16 (Martin) is not ideal for murine enamel; more detailed studies exist, e.g., Smith CE et al., J Anat. 2019;234(2):274-290. References on protein-protein interactions (17-19) are also off: Wald et al. studied Ambn-Ambn and Amelx-Amelx interactions separately; Fang et al. focused on Amelx self-assembly only; Kawasaki and Weiss addressed gene evolution. The authors should cite work from Moradian-Oldak's lab, which clearly demonstrates Amelx-Ambn interactions. The last paragraph contains confusing statements, e.g., "TENT5a localized in rER promotes the expression of AmelX and other secreted protein transcripts." Also, the manuscript does not convincingly show disruption of self-assembly beyond overall enamel disorganization.

      (2) Results

      (a) microCT

      Quantitative microCT analyses of WT and KO enamel are needed. At a minimum, enamel thickness and density should be measured from at least three biological replicates per genotype. Severe malocclusion in KO mice is not discussed. The mandibular incisor appears abraded, while the maxillary incisor is overgrown. Is maxillary enamel as affected as mandibular? The age of the mice is not specified. High-resolution scans of isolated mandibular incisors described in Materials and Methods should be included.

      (b) SEM

      The term "disorganized crystal structure" is incorrect - SEM cannot reveal crystal structure. This requires electron/X-ray diffraction or vibrational spectroscopy. Likely, the authors meant disorganized rods and interrod enamel. The phrase "weak HAP composition" is unclear. Can the increase in interprismatic matrix volume and reduction in rod diameter be quantified? Since rods are secreted by distal Tomes' processes and interrod by proximal Tomes' processes, an imbalance may indicate alterations in the ameloblast secretory apparatus. TEM studies of demineralized incisors are recommended to assess ameloblast ultrastructure.

      (c) EMP expression

      There is a discrepancy between WB images and data in Figure S2a. In Figure 2b, Amelx band is stronger than Ambn (expected, as Amelx is ~20× more abundant), but in Figure S2a, Ambn appears higher. How was protein intensity in Fig. S2a calculated? Optical density? Was normalization applied? Co-localization in Figure 2d was performed on LS8 cells, which lack a true ameloblast phenotype. Amelx expression in LS8 cells is ~2% of actin (Sarkar et al., 2014), whereas in murine incisors, it is ~600× higher than actin (Bui et al., 2023). Ambn signal is weaker than Amelx, which may affect co-localization results.

      (d) Splicing products in Figure 2e

      All isoforms except one contain exon 4. The major functional splice product of Amelx lacks exon 4 (Haruyama et al. J Oral Biosci. 2011;53(3):257-266), and there are some indications that the presence of exon 4 can lead to enamel defects. Can it be that the observed phenotype is due to the presence of exon 4?

      (e) Co-localization studies

      The presented co-localization studies do not demonstrate self-assembly defects; they reflect enamel microstructural defects observed by SEM. Self-assembly occurs at the nanoscale and cannot be assessed by light microscopy except with advanced optical methods. Conclusions based on single images are weak. The authors should perform experiments at least on three biological replicates per genotype, quantify results (e.g., total gray values per ROI of equal pixel size), and use co-localization metrics such as Mander's coefficient. Claims about alternative secretory pathways require much stronger evidence.

      The authors should avoid implying that mRNA is inside the ER lumen. It is likely associated with the outer rER surface, which is expected. The resolution of the methods used is insufficient to confirm ER lumen localization.

    3. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      It is well established that poly(A) tails at the 3' end of mRNA are critical for mRNA stability, providing another layer of gene regulation. TENT5A is one of the non-canonical poly(A) polymerases that add an extra poly(A) tail. This manuscript demonstrates that the Tent5A mutation leads to mineralization abnormalities in the tooth, shorter poly(A) tails in amelogenin mRNA and some other selected mRNAs, and provides a list of TENT5A interacting proteins.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors show in vivo genetic evidence that Tent5a is critical for normal tooth mineralization.

      (2) The authors show that the length of the poly(A) tail in amelogenin (AmelX) is 13 bases shorter in Tent5a mutants but not in other mRNAs, such as ameloblastin (Ambn).

      (3) Differentially expressed genes (DEGs) in Tent5A mutant tissues (cervical loop) are identified, and some of them show different lengths of poly(A) tails.

      (4) TENT5A interacting proteins are identified. Together with the DEGs, these datasets will provide valuable research tools to the community.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There is no direct evidence to support the main conclusion; the length of the poly(A) tail is critical for normal tooth mineralization.

      (2) The RNAseq data to identify TENT5A substrate is based on the assumption that shorter poly(A) tailed RNA is less stable. However, there are multiple reasons for the differential expression of RNA in Tent5A mutant tissues.

      (3) Several TENT5A-interacting proteins have been identified, but, beyond their colocalization with a target mRNA, no mechanistic studies have been conducted.

    1. Note de Synthèse : Les Enjeux de la Professionnalité Enseignante et de l'Éthique Relationnelle

      Résumé Analytique

      Ce document synthétise les interventions du webinaire du 12 avril 2023, animé par Christophe Marsollier, Inspecteur général de l'éducation, du sport et de la recherche.

      L'analyse explore la mutation profonde du métier d'enseignant face à la complexité croissante du milieu scolaire. Les points de bascule majeurs identifiés incluent l'intégration systémique des compétences psychosociales (CPS), l'adoption de pédagogies institutionnelles et coopératives, et le passage d'une posture de « sachant » à celle d'« écoutant ».

      La réussite de l'élève est ici pensée non seulement par la transmission académique, mais par une « éthique relationnelle » fondée sur la confiance, la reconnaissance de la vulnérabilité et le bien-être eudémonique.

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      I. Les Compétences Psychosociales (CPS) : Socle de la Réussite et de l'Équilibre

      Le développement des CPS n'est plus considéré comme une activité périphérique, mais comme la « trame de fond » de la réussite scolaire et de la santé mentale.

      1. Définition et Objectifs

      Les CPS englobent les capacités permettant à l’élève de :

      Gérer ses émotions : Appréhender son ressenti et celui d'autrui.

      S'auto-réguler : Gérer les conflits en autonomie et appartenir au groupe.

      Développer sa citoyenneté : Favoriser le dialogue, l’échange et la collaboration.

      2. Impact sur la Pratique de Classe

      Les témoignages d'enseignants (notamment du réseau Jean Lolive à Pantin) soulignent une transformation concrète :

      Apaisement du climat : Moins de besoin de « faire le gendarme » ; les élèves règlent les conflits en amont.

      Disponibilité cognitive : Des élèves sereins et empathiques sont plus aptes à entrer dans les apprentissages pédagogiques.

      Transformation de l'enseignant : Le passage d'un scepticisme initial à une confiance réelle en la capacité d'agir des élèves.

      3. Institutionnalisation et Formation

      Une instruction interministérielle, rédigée par Santé Publique France, fixe un horizon à 2037 pour la formation généralisée de la population aux CPS.

      Cadre de référence : Publication d'un référentiel en février 2022 pour uniformiser les pratiques.

      Pédagogies préconisées : Utilisation de méthodes expérientielles comme le « théâtre forum » ou le « jeu des trois figures » pour favoriser le changement de rôle et l'empathie.

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      II. Pédagogie Institutionnelle et Autonomie de l'Élève

      L'analyse met en lumière la pédagogie institutionnelle (PI) comme levier de transformation, particulièrement en éducation prioritaire (REP+).

      1. Le Système des « Ceintures d'Apprentissage »

      Inspiré du mouvement Freinet, ce dispositif permet d'articuler éducation (épanouissement) et transmission (connaissances).

      | Caractéristique | Fonctionnement et Bénéfices | | --- | --- | | Différenciation | L'élève choisit son niveau de ceinture par compétence (ex: se repérer dans le temps). | | Auto-évaluation | Utilisation de fichiers autocorrectifs ; l'élève identifie ses stratégies d'apprentissage. | | Évaluation Positive | La ceinture sanctionne la réussite (100% requis) et non le manque. L'échec est une étape formative. | | Coopération | Les élèves ayant validé des ceintures deviennent des « aides » pour leurs pairs. |

      2. Les Institutions de la Classe

      La classe est pensée comme une « petite société » régulée par :

      Le Conseil : Lieu de décision collective où l'on critique l'organisation et propose des améliorations.

      Les Responsabilités : Métiers spécifiques (responsable du temps, du matériel, des affichages) qui donnent une place à chacun.

      L'Espace de parole : Le « Quoi de neuf » et les temps de météo intérieure pour intégrer les affects.

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      III. La Métaphore du Tisseur : Penser la Complexité

      Le métier d'enseignant est comparé à celui d'un tisseur, créateur de liens et de sens dans un monde « déchiré ».

      1. La Triple Reliance

      S'appuyant sur les travaux d'Edgar Morin et d'Adrien Rivard, Christophe Marsollier évoque la nécessité de cultiver :

      • 1. La reliance à soi : Apprendre à se connaître et à être présent à ses propres émotions.
      • 2. La reliance aux autres : Développer des relations saines et authentiques.
      • 3. La reliance à la nature : Répondre à l'anxiété climatique des jeunes générations par un retour à l'essentiel.

      2. Les Quatre Réciprocités Fondamentales

      Pour maintenir le « tissu » de la relation pédagogique, quatre piliers sont identifiés :

      La Confiance : Elle doit être mutuelle et engagée.

      Le Respect : L'élève doit être considéré comme une personne à part entière, avec sa dignité propre.

      L'Écoute : Sortir de l'écoute passive pour une écoute active des difficultés et erreurs.

      Le Droit à l'erreur : Admis pour l'élève, mais aussi pour l'enseignant qui doit pouvoir s'excuser.

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      IV. Vulnérabilité et Éthique de l'Accompagnement

      L'enseignement, particulièrement en milieu défavorisé, exige une attention particulière à la vulnérabilité des élèves.

      La Blessure Psychologique : Les élèves en grande vulnérabilité sont souvent touchés dans leurs besoins fondamentaux (sécurité, reconnaissance, justice).

      L'Intérêt pour la Singularité : Les recherches (Virginie Muniglia) montrent que le besoin premier des jeunes vulnérables est que l'adulte s'intéresse à leur singularité, et non qu'il les traite de manière standardisée.

      Le Tact Pédagogique : Capacité (théorisée par Éric Prairat) à trouver le bon geste et le bon mot au bon moment, en s'adaptant à l'imprévu.

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      V. Vers une Redéfinition du Bien-être à l'École

      Le document clarifie la notion de bien-être, souvent mal comprise dans le cadre scolaire.

      1. Bien-être Hédonique vs Eudémonique

      Bien-être Hédonique : Recherche du plaisir immédiat (souvent critiqué à l'école).

      Bien-être Eudémonique : Sentiment de satisfaction ressenti lorsqu'on est captivé par une activité, qu'on dépasse une difficulté ou que l'on progresse.

      C'est le « bien-être optimal » ou l'expérience autotélique.

      2. Le Bien-être comme Condition, non comme Finalité

      Le bien-être n'est pas le but ultime de l'école, mais la condition indispensable pour favoriser la réussite, notamment pour les élèves les plus fragiles.

      Il permet de transformer la « souffrance relationnelle » en un climat d'exigence bienveillante.

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      VI. Perspectives pour la Professionnalité Enseignante

      En conclusion, le métier d'enseignant est décrit comme une profession de la relation, nécessitant :

      Le Travail Collectif : Créer des communautés d'apprentissage professionnel pour rompre l'isolement et penser la pratique (monographies, analyses de pratiques).

      La Foi en l'Éducabilité : Posture philosophique (Philippe Meirieu) consistant à croire inconditionnellement en la capacité de chaque élève à progresser.

      La Joie comme Boussole : Pour les jeunes enseignants, le critère de la joie et de l'alignement personnel est présenté comme le meilleur garant de la créativité et de l'efficacité pédagogique.

      « La question n'est pas quel monde laisserons-nous à nos enfants, mais quels enfants laisserons-nous au monde. » — Philippe Meirieu (cité en conclusion).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes a multi-modal study of associative learning and memory in humans that combines scalp EEG, pupillometry and behavioral analysis to explore the construct of mnemonic prediction errors (MPEs), in terms of their relationship to attention and cognitive control. Across two pooled studies, participants performed associative memory tasks in which they learned the relationship between a cue word (action verb) and a subsequent picture (animate or inanimate) with a strong vs. weak (4 or 1 repetitions) encoding manipulation. At test, participants were encouraged to generate a prediction following the cue word to determine whether the subsequently presented picture was a match or a mismatch. The timecourse of pupillary responses during match decisions was decomposed using temporal principal components analysis, which identified 6 distinct and overlapping processes. Some of the components (PC3/PC4) exhibited sensitivity to both the strength and mismatch conditions, as well as behavior (both RT and accuracy) and retrieval success on the subsequent trial. Furthermore, relationships were also observed between pupillary responses (specifically for PC4) and both frontal theta and posterior alpha power measures obtained from scalp EEG in Experiment 2, as well as for frontal theta and subsequent learning from mismatch stimuli (assessed using subsequent memory findings from a surprise recognition test). The authors suggest the findings indicate that MPEs elicit changes in attention, arousal and cognitive control which impact subsequent learning.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript has many strengths, including a clever study design, thoughtful integration of multiple neurocognitive measures, and a set of rigorous and technically sophisticated analyses, which reveal a large set of relationships among the measures and behavior. The findings demonstrating brain/physiology-behavior relationships are particularly important, in that they point to potential functional consequences of MPES.

      Weaknesses:

      The technical proficiency and complexity of the study and analysis also present a clear limitation and challenge for interpretation. As a reader, even those who are quite knowledgeable about the methods, constructs, and questions being addressed will often struggle (as this reviewer did) to keep the large set of findings in mind and gain an understanding of how they all fit together.

      Indeed, it seems like there are many threads running together in the paper, which makes it challenging to find the through-line of the key findings, or to understand how they might relate to some pre-existing hypotheses, rather than merely interesting patterns detected in the data. In the Introduction and Discussion, it seems as if the key question is to understand the pathways by which MPEs impact cognition, but this is a rather broad topic, so it is not clear exactly what the authors are aiming at with this question and study design.

      As an example, authors operationalize frontal theta power as an index of cognitive control demand, and one of the pathways by which MPEs impact cognition. But this point becomes somewhat circular, since it is not clear how or why the Mismatch x Strength interaction in frontal theta reflects that demand. It would have been better to set this pattern up in the Introduction as a theoretically driven hypothesis, since it currently appears more like a post-hoc interpretation. This is mirrored by how the issue is first brought up in the Introduction, where it states somewhat vaguely: "whether MPEs are followed by an increase in frontal theta... warrants closer examination". Later in the results, there are findings relating frontal theta to pupil dilation, posterior alpha suppression and then subsequent memory. It was hard to understand how all the findings might be linked together functionally or conceptually. Are the authors potentially postulating a mediating or mechanistic pathway, in which the MPE leads to increased cognitive control (frontal theta), which then leads to enhanced subsequent memory of those events? If this is the case, then maybe a formal path analysis would be the best way to test or state this hypothesis. It would also be useful to specify more clearly how the pupil components and alpha suppression factor into this mediating path, since it was not clear.

      Relatedly, the authors suggest that internal attention and arousal also play relevant roles in this pathway, but these are also not clear. In some cases, it is stated as if this is a distinct pathway from the cognitive control one, since there is a focus in the results on the independence of frontal theta and posterior alpha, but elsewhere they seem to be treated as two aspects, or distinct steps, within a single pathway. Again, these different threads of the findings were quite challenging for the reader to follow. Pathway analyses, such as with multiple mediation or moderated mediation, could be a useful way to address this question. For example, it seems as if readiness-to-remember is another behavioral outcome (like subsequent memory) that could be used in the search for mediators.

      At the minimum, it would be quite helpful to have diagrammatic figures that specify the hypothesized and observed relationships between independent variables (Strength, Mismatch), physiological indices (pupil dilation components, frontal theta, posterior alpha) and key outcome measures (accuracy, RT, next-trial retrieval success, subsequent memory), so that the reader can refer back to them as each component of the analyses is conducted.

      Minor Points:

      Many figures had x-axes showing a pupil component or EEG power metric broken down by quartile or quintile. Yet nowhere is it ever explained why this graphical (or analytic?) approach is used and what it reflects, or how it is decided which break down to use (quartile/quintile). If the data are analyzed as a correlation, why is a scatterplot not shown instead?

      It was surprising that, unlike readiness-to-remember, which was analyzed via logistic regression and odds-ratio, subsequent memory was not analyzed in the same fashion (i.e., as a binary outcome variable predicted by frontal theta), rather than in a reverse chronological one (subsequent memory predicting frontal theta). Historically, it was the case that subsequent memory was analyzed in this manner, but that was before the era in which trial-level linear mixed-effect models were in wide usage, as they are implemented in this study. Thus, the choice seems like a wasted opportunity or a step backwards analytically.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors studied cognitive control and attention in response to mnemonic prediction errors (MPEs): situations in which the external reality violates internal memory-based predictions. The behavioral task first established strong versus weak predictions, and then either confirmed or violated these predictions. The authors examined markers of cognitive control (frontal theta) and attention (posterior alpha suppression, pupil response) while strong and weak predictions were confirmed or violated. They found increased cognitive control (frontal theta) for strong MPEs, which correlated with subsequent memory. Markers of attention (alpha suppression, pupil response) also accompanied strong MPEs but did not correlate with subsequent memory. Pupil response was investigated using an interesting approach that decomposes the response into different components, finding that different components respond earlier or later and show different correlations with MPEs and their strength. The authors also investigated how EEG, reaction time, and pupil responses correlated with one another, providing further insight into the mechanism underlying the response to MPEs. Together, the study points toward multiple control and attention mechanisms involved in MPE response and memory.

      Strengths:

      The study has a clear behavioral paradigm with multiple measures - behavioral, EEG, and pupillometry that offer an investigation into different aspects of MPE response and memory.

      The study is also very comprehensive in looking at multiple phases in processing MPEs: the prediction phase (prior to the violation), the response to MPEs, and subsequent memory of MPEs, all within one study. Specifically, the link between neural mechanisms and subsequent memory is a major advancement, as most prior studies did not include this component. Mechanisms underlying subsequent memory of MPEs are theoretically important, as a primary function of MPEs is to promote learning and memory. As the authors mention, the different neural and pupillary signals are not robustly correlated, suggesting multiple mechanisms underlying MPE detections, which is interesting, offers avenues for future research, and can facilitate a better theory of how MPEs are processed in the brain. Finally, the decomposition of pupil response into different components and their correlation with behavior (RT during match/MPE detection) is interesting.

      Weaknesses:

      The methods are rigorous, and the claims are mostly supported by the data, but there are a few weaknesses or places that could be improved:

      (1) The authors conduct PCA analysis to identify different components of the pupillary response to MPE and relate them to behavior. Specifically, the authors identify components PC3 and PC4, which they interpret as related to MPE. However, some parts of the interpretation could be clearer or better justified:

      (a) The authors refer to PC4 as "post-decision cognitive processing". But, given that RT was between .5-.7s, and PC3 peaked after more than 1s, wouldn't it be cautious to interpret PC3 as post-decision as well?

      (b) MPEs overall elicit longer RTs in this study, suggesting that long RT is a behavioral marker of MPE. Nonetheless, the authors argue on p. 12: "Altogether, these findings indicate that when stronger mnemonic predictions (as indexed by shorter RTs) were violated." And, PC3 is correlated with shorter RTs for mismatches, meaning that behaviorally, these trials were more similar to matches. Thus, how do the authors interpret shorter versus longer RTs for MPEs, and what processes do these RT reflect?

      (2) The brain to pupil relationship (p. 13-14): If I understand correctly, this was done on a trial-by-trial basis, but the high temporal resolution allows doing the analysis in a time-resolved manner - does brain activity at a certain time point preceding/following the pupil response correlate with the pupil response? It might be that cognitive control influences attention mechanisms or vice versa (because there is some overlap in the response). Although not testing causality, this temporally resolved correlation would be an interesting way to start probing how signals might influence each other.

      (3) The relationships the authors find between brain measures and pupil components were largely not specific to mismatches/matches. However, are they specific to this task? I think it would benefit the paper to show that these relationships are potentially specific to making match/mismatch memory decisions, versus, e.g., any stimulus processing. For example, the authors could run the same analyses locked to stimuli in the study phase, anticipating a different pattern, if indeed these findings are specific to the associative memory task.

      (4) During memory retrieval (i.e., before the probe), the authors find that frontal theta, a marker of cognitive control, was associated on a trial-by-trial basis with more posterior alpha (i.e., less alpha suppression, potentially reflecting less attention), and that this association was stronger for weaker predictions. The authors interpreted this as weaker predictions necessitating more cognitive control, and that more cognitive control was recruited specifically in trials where retrieval included less content (memory reinstatement) to attend to. Generally, cognitive control is recruited to facilitate memory retrieval. If so, one possible interpretation is that this correlation reflects cognitive control effort that has failed to produce enough memory reinstatement. The other possibility is that this correlation reflects more specific retrieval of the correct probe, without retrieval of interfering items (i.e., overall less content). I believe that the former explanation predicts that this correlation would be associated with longer RTs (more difficult decisions), while the latter predicts shorter RTs (easier decisions due to successful retrieval), at least for matches.

      (5) In section 3, the authors found a positive relationship between alpha during memory retrieval and PC3 during MPE. If I understood correctly, this means that less attention during retrieval (less suppression) is correlated with a stronger PC3 response. How do the authors interpret this? Maybe along the same lines as in (5), specifically retrieving the correct information (i.e., less retrieved content to attend to) means a stronger prediction, leading to a stronger MPE, and a stronger MPE response, as reflected by PC3?

      (6) The results with subsequent memory are important and address a major gap in the field that largely did not relate neural effects of MPE to subsequent memory. However, one major limitation of the study is that the authors did not test memory for matches. I understand the logic of avoiding testing matches. Because matches were repeated more times in the study, it's not a fair comparison, and could change participants' overall criterion for old/new decisions. However, one possibility would have been to test only the weak prediction; this could have given some specificity to the neural subsequent memory findings.

      (7) The authors nicely characterized the different PC of pupillary MPE response. But, with respect to subsequent memory, they only present pupil size. Unless there is some methodological reason that prevents testing subsequent memory on the PC, I think this will be very informative about the potential mechanisms underlying memory of MPE.

      (8) This paper includes many interesting findings, and I am not sure how they all come together into a cohesive mechanistic understanding of MPE response and subsequent memory. I think the paper would benefit from either a conceptual mechanism figure or, in the Discussion, have a summary of a proposed mechanism integrating the findings together.

      (9) Relatedly, the section "Immediate, strength-sensitive neurocognitive impacts of MPEs" does not link the arguments to specific data points, so it's hard to follow which data specifically the authors are interpreting.

      (10) If I understand correctly, the authors did not find improved memory for strong compared to weak MPE. First, I think this behavioral result should be incorporated in the main paper and in the interpretation of the results. Second, given that the neural effects the authors tested either correlated with memory for strong MPE or did not show a relationship with memory, what neural/pupil response could explain memory for weak MPE?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This computational modelling study addresses the important question of how neurons can learn non-linear functions using biologically realistic plasticity mechanisms. The study extends the previous related work on metaplasticity by Khodadadi et al. (2025), using the same detailed biophysical model and basic study design, while significantly simplifying the synaptic plasticity rule by removing non-linearities, reducing the number of free parameters, and limiting plasticity to only excitatory synapses. The rule itself is supervised by the presence or absence of a binary dopamine reward signal, and gated by separate calcium-sensitive thresholds for potentiation and depression. The author shows that, when paired with a strong form of dendritic non-linearity called a "plateau potential" and appropriate pre-existing dendritic clustering of features, this simpler learning mechanism can solve a non-linear classification task similar to the classic XOR logic operator, with equal or better performance than the previous publication. The primary claims of this publication are that metaplasticity is required for learning non-linear feature classification, and that simultaneous dynamics in two separate thresholds (for potentiation and depression) are critical in this process. By systematically studying the properties of a biophysically plausible supervised learning rule, this paper adds interesting insights into the mechanics of learning complex computations in single neurons.

      Strengths:

      The simplified form of the learning rule makes it easier to understand and study than previous metaplasticity rules, and makes the conclusions more generalizable, while preserving biological realism. Since similar biophysical mechanisms and dynamics exist in many different cell types across the whole brain, the proposed rule could easily be integrated into a wide range of computational models specializing in brain regions beyond the striatum (which is the focus of this study), making it of broad interest to computational neuroscientists. The general approach of systematically fixing or modifying each variable while observing the effects and interactions with other variables is sound and brings great clarity to understanding the dynamic properties and mechanics of the proposed learning rule.

      Weaknesses:

      General notes

      (1) The credibility of the main claims is mainly limited by the very narrow range of model parameters that was explored, including several seemingly arbitrary choices that were not adequately justified or explored.

      (2) The choice to use a morphologically detailed biophysical model, rather than a simpler multi-compartment model, adds a great deal of complexity that further increases uncertainty as to whether the conclusions can generalize beyond the specific choices of model and morphology studied in this paper.

      (3) The requirement for pre-existing synaptic clustering, while not implausible, greatly limits the flexibility of this rule to solve non-linear problems more generally.

      (4) In order to claim that two thresholds are truly necessary, the author would have to show that other well-known rules with a single threshold (e.g., BCM) cannot solve this problem. No such direct head-to-head comparisons are made, raising the question of whether the same task could be achieved without having two separate plasticity thresholds.

      Specific notes

      (1) Regarding the limited hyperparameter search:

      (a) On page 5, the author introduces the upper LTP threshold Theta_LTP. It is not clear why this upper threshold is necessary when the weights are already bounded by w_max. Since w_max is just another hyperparameter, why not set it to a lower value if the goal is to avoid excessively strong synapses? The values of w_max and Theta_LTP appear to have been chosen arbitrarily, but this question could be resolved by doing a proper hyperparameter search over w_max in the absence of an upper Theta_LTP.

      (b) The author does not explore the effect of having separate learning rates for theta_LTP and theta_LTD, which could also improve learning performance in the NFBP. A more comprehensive exploration of these parameters would make the inclusion of theta_max (and the specific value chosen) a lot less arbitrary.

      (c) Figure 4 Supplements 3-4: The author shows results for a hyperparameter search of the learning rule parameters, which is important to see. However, the parameter search is very limited: only 3 parameter values were tried, and there is no explanation or rationale for choosing these specific parameters. In particular, the metaplasticity learning rates do not even span one order of magnitude. If the author wants to claim that the learning rule is insensitive to this parameter, it should be explored over a much broader range of values (e.g., something like the range [0.1-10]).

      (2) Regarding the similarity to BCM, the author would ideally directly implement the BCM learning rule in their model, but at the least the author could have shown whether a slight variant of their rule presented here can be effective: for example having a single (plastic, not fixed) Ca-dependent threshold that applies to both LTP and LTD, with a single learning rate parameter.

      (3) This paper is extremely similar (and essentially an extension) to the work of Khodadadi et al. (2025). Yet this paper is not mentioned at all in the introduction, and the relation between these papers is not made clear until the discussion, leaving me initially puzzled as to what problems this paper addresses that have not already been extensively solved. The introduction could be reworked to make this connection clearer while pointing out the main differences in approach (e.g., the important distinction between "boosting" nonlinearities and plateau potentials).

      (4) The introduction is missing some citations of other recent work that has addressed single-neuron non-linear computation and learning, such as Gidon et al (2020); Jones & Kording (2021).

      (5) Figure 1: The figure prominently features mGluR next to the CaV channel, but there is no mention of mGluR in the introduction. The introduction should be updated to include this.

      (6) Could the author explain why there is a non-monotonic increase/decrease in the [Ca]_L in Figure 2B_4? Perhaps my confusion comes from not understanding what a single line represents. Does each line represent the [Ca] in a single spine (and if so, which spine), or is each line an average of all the spines in a given stim condition?

      (7) Row 124 (page 4): L-type Ca microdomains (in which ions don't diffuse and therefore don't interact with Ca_NMDA) is a critical assumption of this model. The references for this appear only in the discussion, so when reading this paper, I found myself a bit confused about why the same ion is treated as two completely independent variables with separate dynamics. Highlighting the assumption (with citations) a bit more clearly in the results section when describing the rule would help with understanding.

      (8) Row 149 (page 5): The current formulation of the update rule is not actually multiplicative. The fact that the update is weight-dependent alone does not make it a multiplicative rule, and judging by equation (1) it appears to simply be an additive rule with a weight regularization term that guarantees weight bounds. For example, a similar weight-dependent update is also a core component of BTSP (Milstein et al. 2021; Galloni et al. 2025), which is another well-known *additive* rule. An actual multiplicative rule implies that the update itself is applied via a multiplication, i.e. w_new = w_old * delta_w

      For an example of a genuinely multiplicative rule, see: Cornford et al. 2024, "Brain-like learning with exponentiated gradients"). Multiplicative rules have very different properties to additive rules, since larger weights tend to grow quickly while small weights shrink towards 0.

      (9) Equation 1 (page 5): Shouldn't the depression term be written as: (w_min - w)? This term would be negative if w is larger than w_min, leading to LTD. As it is written now, a large w and small w_min would just cause further potentiation instead of depression.

      (10) In the introduction, the teaching signal is described in binary terms (DA peak, or DA pause), but in Equation 1, it actually appears to take on 3 different values. Could the author clarify what the difference is between a "DA pause" and the "no DA" condition? The way I read it, pause = absence of DA = no DA

      (11) Figure 3: In these experimental simulations, DA feedback comes in 400ms after the stimulus. The author could motivate this choice a bit better and explain the significance of this delay. Clearly, the equations have a delta_t term, but as far as the learning algorithm is concerned, it seems like learning would be more effective at delta_t=0. Is the choice of 400ms mainly motivated by experimental observations? On a related note, is it meaningful that the 200ms delta_t before the next stimulus is shorter than the 400ms pause from the first stimulus? Wouldn't the DA that arrives shortly before a stimulus also have an effect on the learning rule?

      (12) Figure 4C: How is it possible that the theta_LTP value goes higher than the upper threshold (dashed line)? Equation 3 implies that it should always be lower.

      (13) Row 429 (page 11): The statement that "without metaplasticity the NFBP cannot be solved" is overly general and not supported by the evidence presented. There exist many papers in which people solve similar non-linear feature learning problems with Hebbian or other bio-plausible rules that don't have metaplasticity. A more accurate statement that can be made here is that the specific rule presented in this paper requires metaplasticity.

      (14) The methods section does not make any mention of publicly available code or a GitHub repository. The author should add a link to the code and put some effort into improving the documentation so that others can more easily assess the code and reproduce the simulations.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript proposes interesting synaptic plasticity rules grounded in experimental data. Its main features are:

      (1) plasticity depends on local calcium concentration driven by presynaptic activity and is independent of somatic action potentials,

      (2) the rules incorporate metaplasticity, and (3) they demonstrate how a single neuron could address the feature-binding problem at the dendritic level.

      The work extends a previous study (https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.97274.2), to which the author also contributed.

      The author models two calcium thresholds (LTP/LTD) from two different calcium sources (NMDA/VGCC), and these thresholds are flexible (metaplasticity rule, similar to BCM), which is claimed to be necessary for successful learning of both FBP and NFBP (linear and nonlinear feature binding problem with 1 or 2 patterns). The role of each threshold seems to be opposite and complementary. One extra condition has been added: an upper threshold for LTP. This threshold serves to stop synaptic strengthening once synapses are strong enough to evoke a plateau. With that, synapses are not strengthened to the maximal value, avoiding strong supralinear integration for irrelevant patterns.

      Strengths:

      The current model implements not only local synaptic plasticity but also metaplasticity and solves the FBP at the dendrite level. Another strong aspect of the model is that metaplasticity in the LTD threshold protects strengthened synapses from weakening. In this way, as the author mentioned, metaplasticity is able to protect learned patterns from being forgotten or weakened and prevent irrelevant patterns from being stored. This is a nice modelling example of metaplasticity being helpful in preventing the catastrophic interference or forgetting (as has been explicitly discussed in a recent article https://doi.org/10.1016/j.tins.2022.06.002 ). The author might want to briefly mention or emphasize this aspect of the model, which might be interesting also for the AI community.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) What is novel in the current paper as compared to Khodadadi et al. eLife 2025? That is not completely clear and should be made clearer. Is it only a minor difference related to the fact that the new learning rule has metaplasticity in both calcium thresholds and is simpler? This seems to be just an incremental increase in knowledge/methods. Can the author defend his paper against this point from the „devil's advocate"? How is the conclusion of the author in the abstract that „metaplasticity in both thresholds is necessary" reconcilable with his previous publication (Khodadadi et al. eLife 2025), in which only metaplasticity in one threshold was successful in solving the nonlinear feature binding problem?

      (2) As far as I can judge without testing the model, metaplasticity causes thresholds to monotonically increase during systematic pattern presentation, which stabilizes weights and allows pattern separation. Due to the closed-loop nature of the current implementation, where metaplasticity only happens if plasticity happens, this also effectively locks patterns in place. However, flexible learning is an essential mechanism for survival. Imagine a mutation event takes place and bananas suddenly become red and/or strawberries turn yellow. It seems that the current model would be unable to adapt to these new patterns even if rewards were to be shifted. While out of the scope of the study, due to its importance, I feel that pattern shifting/relearning should at least be briefly discussed. How could the model be improved to allow relearning?

    1. L’Évolution du Rôle Paternel : Fondements Biologiques, Neurobiologiques et Sociaux

      Résumé Exécutif

      Ce document analyse la transformation du rôle des pères à travers le prisme de l'anthropologie évolutionniste et des neurosciences.

      Contrairement aux autres grands singes africains où le soin paternel est quasi inexistant, l'être humain a développé une capacité unique de "coopérative breeding" (élevage coopératif).

      Cette évolution, dictée par les contraintes climatiques du Pléistocène et l'augmentation massive du volume cérébral des nourrissons, a nécessité l'implication des pères et d'autres membres du groupe pour assurer la survie de l'espèce.

      Les recherches récentes démontrent que les hommes disposent de circuits neuronaux et hormonaux ancestraux, partagés avec d'autres vertébrés, qui s'activent lors d'un contact prolongé et intime avec le nouveau-né.

      L'éloignement historique des pères du soin direct est identifié non pas comme une barrière biologique, mais comme une construction sociale datant de la révolution néolithique.

      La réengagement des pères aujourd'hui présente des bénéfices psychologiques et physiologiques majeurs, tant pour l'enfant que pour le parent.

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      I. Le Paradoxe Évolutionnaire de la Paternité Humaine

      L'exception humaine chez les primates

      Dans la lignée des grands singes africains dont l'humain descend, le soin des nourrissons est traditionnellement l'apanage exclusif des mères.

      Chez la plupart des 5 500 espèces de mammifères, l'investissement mâle est rare, limité souvent aux espèces monogames où la certitude de paternité est élevée.

      La rupture du Pléistocène

      L'émergence du soin paternel humain s'enracine dans les conditions extrêmes du Pléistocène en Afrique :

      Contraintes environnementales : Un climat devenant plus frais et sec, marqué par des précipitations instables.

      Le coût du cerveau : Le cerveau humain a triplé de volume, passant de 900 cm³ chez Homo erectus à 1 350 cm³ chez Homo sapiens.

      La dépendance du nourrisson : Les bébés humains sont les plus "coûteux" de la planète en termes de ressources et de temps de maturation.

      Une mère seule ne pouvait assurer leur survie sans aide extérieure (soins alloparentaux et paternels).

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      II. Mécanismes Neurobiologiques et Hormonaux

      Les pères ne sont pas biologiquement "désarmés" face aux soins des nourrissons ; ils possèdent un équipement physiologique latent qui s'active sous certaines conditions.

      Transformations Hormonales

      Lorsqu'un père s'occupe activement d'un bébé, son profil hormonal se modifie de manière significative :

      Prolactine : Les niveaux augmentent, favorisant les réponses de soin (une hormone originellement liée à la lactation chez la mère).

      Ocytocine : Des poussées de cette "hormone du lien" sont observées chez les pères impliqués.

      Testostérone : On observe une diminution du taux de testostérone, facilitant une attitude plus douce et attentive.

      Activation Cérébrale

      Une étude de 2014 (Ruth Feldman et son équipe) a révélé des données cruciales sur les pères agissant comme soignants principaux :

      Activation de l'amygdale : Chez les pères en contact prolongé et intime avec leur bébé dès la naissance, l'activation de l'amygdale (zone liée à la vigilance et au soin maternel) est quatre fois supérieure à celle des pères n'apportant qu'une aide secondaire.

      Anciens circuits : Ces circuits neuronaux sont hautement conservés et se trouvent dans des zones primitives du cerveau (hypothalamus), similaires à celles activées chez les mères.

      | Hormone / Zone | Effet chez le père impliqué | | --- | --- | | Prolactine | Augmentation des réponses de soin et d'attention. | | Ocytocine | Renforcement du lien affectif et de l'affiliation. | | Testostérone | Diminution des niveaux circulants. | | Amygdale | Vigilance accrue et réaction immédiate aux besoins du bébé. |

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      III. Les Racines Ancestrales : De l'Eau à la Terre

      L'anthropologie évolutionniste suggère que les capacités de soin mâle sont bien plus anciennes que les mammifères eux-mêmes.

      L'héritage des poissons : Il y a 400 millions d'années, certains poissons mâles pratiquaient déjà le soin des œufs (ex: le cichlidé du Tanganyika ou le poisson-mâchoire qui porte sa progéniture dans sa bouche).

      La plasticité de la Prolactine : À l'origine, cette hormone servait à réguler l'équilibre hydrique chez les organismes aquatiques avant d'être "réutilisée" par l'évolution pour les fonctions de reproduction et de soin.

      Conservation génétique : Les gènes responsables de la production de molécules comme l'isotocine chez les poissons sont les précurseurs directs de l'ocytocine chez les mammifères.

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      IV. La Construction Sociale de la Masculinité

      Si la biologie prédispose les hommes au soin, l'histoire récente a créé une rupture.

      Le tournant du Néolithique

      L'adoption de l'agriculture et de l'élevage a transformé les structures sociales :

      Apparition de la propriété : La nécessité de protéger les terres et les troupeaux a favorisé l'émergence de sociétés patriarcales.

      Redéfinition de la masculinité : L'identité masculine s'est déplacée vers la protection des institutions, du statut et de la propriété, éloignant physiquement les hommes de la sphère domestique et des nourrissons.

      Institutions patrilinéaires : Ces structures ont perduré jusqu'à l'époque moderne, excluant souvent les femmes et confinant les hommes à des rôles de pourvoyeurs distants.

      La "Sélection Sociale" par le bébé

      Le nourrisson humain a lui-même évolué pour encourager ce soin. Dès son plus jeune âge, le bébé utilise son cortex préfrontal médial pour :

      • Monitorer son entourage.

      • Apprendre à s'ingratiatier et attirer l'attention.

      • Compétiter pour obtenir des soins alloparentaux par son attrait physique et comportemental.

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      V. Implications et Bénéfices Modernes

      Le réengagement des pères dans les soins primaires n'est pas seulement un retour à une nécessité biologique ancienne, mais un levier de santé publique.

      Santé mentale et longévité : Les relations de soin augmentent l'espérance de vie et réduisent les risques de dépression.

      Lutte contre les addictions : Les circuits de la récompense (dopamine) activés par l'amour parental sont les mêmes que ceux sollicités par les drogues.

      Un engagement profond envers un enfant pourrait agir comme un protecteur contre les "décès par désespoir" et les addictions.

      Sens et finalité : Le soin direct apporte un sentiment immédiat d'utilité et de but, contrecarrant la solitude et l'aliénation sociale.

      "Les mâles d'aujourd'hui, lorsqu'ils sont en contact suffisant et en proximité intime prolongée avec les bébés, possèdent l'équipement nécessaire. Ils sont aussi équipés pour s'occuper des bébés que les mères le sont."

    1. “Everyone on campus is so much happier. You see kids actually socializing, problem solving, enjoying themselves,” Lancaster said, choking up as she described the school atmosphere. “It’s true, it’s one more thing to enforce. But education matters, and now kids are learning. That’s the No. 1 reason we did this.”

      This shows that the no phone policy rule during school has helped children socialize more and the energy seems lively overall.

    2. “It’s great to say no phones, but I don’t think people realize the addiction of the phones and what students will go to to tell you ‘No, you’re not taking my phone.’”

      Reading this article I understand why schools want fewer distractions, especially during class time, but I also think completely banning phones may not address the real issue.

    1. Albus Dumbledore says: "Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?"

      it is happening inside your head

      does it now?

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    1. A practical implication of these findings is that factors present before kindergarten may largely explain racial and ethnic underrepresentation in STEM.

      Implied, but not studied, indicating further study is required

    2. Use of universal screen-ing using standardized measures

      But also, we know students are already overtested, and even so, these tests are often heavily biased to favor the dominant group.

    3. 2.6 percentage point increase in publica-tions, a 4.3 percentage point increase in citations, and a .03

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    1. HTML, which is not a programming language

      Sure it is:

      It's not really a debate, HTML is a markup language [1], not a programming language

      This is a false dichotomy, and untrue on two points (a) that HTML is "not a programming language", and (b) that the stance you have taken is not up for debate.

      You're using the term "programming language" as shorthand to refer to the subset of languages more rigorously referred to as Turing-complete general-purpose programming languages.* There are programming languages outside this subset that no less have set membership with the larger "programming language" superset.

      A programming language is a programming language in the sense that they have come to exist with the advent of the stored program computer. Though HTML and other markup languages are not** Turing-complete general-purpose programming languages, they are used every bit as much to describe a stored program as a language you might encounter when opening a file containing G-code "instructions" for controlling a CNC machine.

      * We had a similar (but not the same) silly recurring argument in the 90s where people, at a loss for words to accurately capture their thoughts and grasping at whatever came to mind, argued that there were two distinct classes: "programming languages" and "scripting languages"—a category error arising from the same phenomenon of mistaking loose, off-the-cuff shorthand for The Real Idea Behind the Thing That's Involved Here

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    1. In assisted suicide, the physician provides the means (such as a prescription for barbiturates) at the request of the patient, but the patient must eventually take (or not take) the potentially lethal medication by his or her own hand.

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    2. Withdrawing life-sustaining but burdensome treatments, even though the withdrawal leads to death, is also an accepted part of practice based on the patient’s right to bodily integrity.

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    3. CASE ILLUSTRATION 6 Caleb, a 101-year-old rugged dairy farmer, has become partly deaf and then blind in the last 5 years of his life but remains alert and communicative.

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    4. Invasive interventions that exceed the usual boundaries of hospice care but that extend meaningful life and improve quality of life are sometimes appropriate even within a hospice approach, as long as the patient consents. Remaining flexible in the face of changing, difficult situations and allowing the patient’s goals to guide the treatment as much as possible permit the clinician to hope along with the patient for a death with as little meaningless suffering as possible.

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    5. CASE ILLUSTRATION 4 Max, a 63-year-old, recently retired, and previously healthy man, develops abdominal pain and is found to have widely metastasized colon cancer.

      He is told to have 6-12 months to live. Max and his wife go to a different clinic for holistic treatment, but they ghost them after the visit. He goes back to the original clinic and recieved paalliative care before he passes.

    6. Providing ranges of survival times and allowing for outliers on either end is better than predicting an exact amount of time. (“The average person with your illness will live two to six months. It could be longer, and we will try to make that happen, but it could also be shorter, so you may want to make sure everything is prepared just in case things don’t go as we hope.”)

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    1. Demographic factors such as female gender, age, socioeconomic status, and African American race often are thought of as nonmodifiable risk factors, but it is increasingly clear that societal response to race, gender, or age, and the resultant chronic stress, may create the actual risk in these populations.

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    1. More detailed questions on WELLBY reliability

      Should be 'on WELLBY reliability and wellbeing measures' ... but also the folding box is still not ideal here -- better for this to link out to another page/subpage (open in new window)

    1. The ability to producenovice teachers who are resilient and persistent in the face of the complex problemsencountered in todayís schools is a goal to which every teacher education programaspires.

      More than just educationally, but also in society. If educators are unable to model resiliency and persistence, the question arises: how will the next generation learn those qualities? It is our responsibility as educators to push the next generation to be greater than we are today.

    2. Sally noted that one day of her teacher induction program was very goodbecause she got to share a bad situation she had with a student with her mentor group

      Everyone loves success stories, but humbling dialogues with your mentor or other educators about reflecting on negative endeavors are where true growth arises.

    3. These teachers were also observed to use questioningas a formative assessment tool, variations in groupings to ensure that students werelearning at appropriate levels, and a wide range of instructional practices, such ascooperative grouping, centers, and inquiry methods, to ensure that all styles oflearning were accommodated in the classroom setting

      It is fantastic that they were using the listed learning strategies, but were they using them effectively? From experience, I believe that transitions are among the hardest things to implement in education. Perhaps it was a product of throwing a bunch of ideas against the wall and seeing what sticks? Without the educator himself reflecting, only the students know the quality of the education they received.

    4. The literature on teacher education has focused on novice teachers who leavethe profession, which has substantially contributed to our understanding ofimportant variables related to teacher retention.

      Taking the time to examine why young teachers are no longer teachers should be the focus of all final semesters, in my opinion. Granted, institutions are tasked with producing educators, but to address the nationwide shortage, those same institutions have the obligation to shift their focus to developing teachers with longevity.

    5. The studiespresented in this review also point to self-efficacy and reflection as two importantcomponents related to teacher retention, persistence, and resiliency

      With teaching experience as a guide, this is absolutely true, but there is so much more to it. It is the extra things that those two actions force you to do as an educator that help teachers stay teachers.

    1. Building an Archives 139Then exactly what are we docubuildings?); the architect (likewisinstitutional context in which mworks departments; the many othence the architect's activities; theultimately, the ideal of architectfunction of architecture is, in shnumerous and varied, and the recgenerated b

      While reading this article, I was impressed by the choice of an architect as a professional stand-in for appraisal theory and archival appraisal. Terry Cook could’ve picked any profession really but an architect is such a great choice in relation to macro-appraisal because of how broad an architects social and physical dynamics and interactions can be and also how varied the purpose of a architect’s design can be. It really seems like the perfect choice for this subject and I kind of got hung up in the second part of this article trying to think of a comparable or better example that wouldn’t necessarily overlap with an architect directly. A novelist? Some sort of mass transit (commercial plane, train, bus, etc.) designer? It’s tough to come up with a topic that suits this subject as well as an architect.

    1. The HER2 S310F Mutant Can Form an Active Heterodimer with the EGFR, Which Can Be Inhibited by Cetuximab but Not by Trastuzumab as well as Pertuzumab

      [Paper-level Aggregated] PMCID: PMC6843359

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Predictive, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The S310F HER2 mutant is described as inducing receptor activation and forming active heterodimers with EGFR, suggesting its role in promoting cancer cell proliferation. Predictive: The text indicates that patients with the S310F mutation responded to trastuzumab with or without pertuzumab, suggesting that the presence of this mutation can predict treatment response. Functional: The S310F HER2 mutant's ability to interact with EGFR and its effects on HER2 phosphorylation and cell proliferation demonstrate its functional role in cellular signaling pathways.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): ERBB2(2064):G309 ERBB2(2064):G309A ERBB2(2064):G309E ERBB2(2064):S309A ERBB2(2064):S310 ERBB2(2064):S310F ERBB2(2064):S310Y

      Genes: ERBB2(2064)

      Variants: G309 G309A G309E S309A S310 S310F S310Y

    2. 3.1. The Recombinant S310F Mutant Is Not Reactive to Pertuzumab but Binds to Trastuzumab

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC6843359 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 2

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Functional

      Justification: Predictive: The passage indicates that the S310F mutant is not reactive to Pertuzumab, suggesting a correlation with resistance to this specific therapy. Functional: The passage discusses the binding characteristics of the S310F mutant, indicating an alteration in molecular function related to its interaction with Trastuzumab.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2064:S310F

      Genes: 2064

      Variants: S310F

    3. 3.1. The Recombinant S310F Mutant Is Not Reactive to Pertuzumab but Binds to Trastuzumab

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC6843359 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 2

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Functional

      Justification: Predictive: The passage indicates that the S310F mutant is not reactive to Pertuzumab, suggesting a correlation with resistance to this specific therapy. Functional: The passage discusses the binding characteristics of the S310F mutant, indicating an alteration in molecular function related to its interaction with Trastuzumab.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2064:S310F

      Genes: 2064

      Variants: S310F

    1. An oncogenic Ezh2 mutation cooperates with particular genetic alterations to induce tumors in mice and redistributes H3K27 trimethylation throughout the genome

      [Paper-level Aggregated] PMCID: PMC4899144

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional, Predictive, Prognostic

      Justification: Oncogenic: The expression of the Ezh2Y641F mutation in mouse B-cells and melanocytes led to the development of high-penetrance lymphoma and melanoma, indicating its role in promoting cancer. Functional: The study demonstrated that Ezh2Y641F exhibits altered enzymatic activity, with decreased mono-methylase activity but increased di- and tri-methylase activity, suggesting a functional change associated with the mutation. Predictive: The presence of the Ezh2Y641F mutation was shown to cooperate with B-RAFV600E in accelerating melanoma formation, indicating its potential to predict tumorigenesis in the context of specific genetic alterations. Prognostic: The study reported that mice expressing Ezh2Y641F had a median survival of one year, suggesting that the mutation may have implications for disease progression and patient outcomes.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): BRAF(673):B-RAFV600E BRAF(673):B-RafV600E EZH2(2146):Y641F EZH2(2146):Y646 EZH2(2146):tyrosine to phenylalanine EZH2(2146):Y646F

      Genes: BRAF(673) EZH2(2146)

      Variants: B-RAFV600E B-RafV600E Y641F Y646 tyrosine to phenylalanine Y646F

    2. We performed experiments to address the cooperation of EZH2 mutation with B-RAF but not N-RAS. We observed that the expression of N-RAS and B-RAF is not altered by the presence of the Y641F mutation (data not shown). A m

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4899144 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 10

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage discusses the oncogenic effects of the B-RAFV600E and Ezh2Y641F mutations in the context of melanoma formation, indicating that these variants contribute to tumor development or progression. Functional: The passage describes how the presence of the Y641F mutation does not alter the expression of certain genes, suggesting that it may affect molecular or biochemical functions related to oncogenic pathways.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 673:B-RAFV600E 2146:Y641F

      Genes: 673 2146

      Variants: B-RAFV600E Y641F

    3. In vitro, EZH2Y641F exhibits decreased H3K27 mono-methylase activity, but increased di- and tri-methylase activity compared to EZH2+/+ , suggesting that transformation may require expression of both wild-type and mutant

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4899144 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 6

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how the EZH2Y641F variant exhibits altered methylase activity, indicating that the variant affects molecular function. Oncogenic: The evidence suggests that the EZH2Y641F mutation contributes to tumor development, as demonstrated by the tumorigenesis observed in mice harboring this mutation.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2146:Y641F 2146:Y646 2146:tyrosine to phenylalanine

      Genes: 2146

      Variants: Y641F Y646 tyrosine to phenylalanine

    4. B-cell lymphoma and melanoma harbor recurrent mutations in the gene encoding the EZH2 histone methyltransferase, but the carcinogenic role of these mutations is unclear. Here we describe a mouse model in which the most c

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4899144 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage describes how the somatic mutations Y641F and Y646F in the EZH2 gene contribute to tumor development, specifically leading to high-penetrance lymphoma and melanoma in a mouse model. Functional: The variant Ezh2Y641F is shown to alter molecular function by increasing global H3K27 trimethylation and causing a redistribution of this mark, which affects transcription at various loci.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2146:Y641F 2146:Y646F

      Genes: 2146

      Variants: Y641F Y646F

    5. B-cell lymphoma and melanoma harbor recurrent mutations in the gene encoding the EZH2 histone methyltransferase, but the carcinogenic role of these mutations is unclear. Here we describe a mouse model in which the most c

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4899144 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage describes how the somatic mutations Y641F and Y646F in the EZH2 gene contribute to tumor development, specifically leading to high-penetrance lymphoma and melanoma in a mouse model. Functional: The variant Ezh2Y641F is shown to alter molecular function by increasing global H3K27 trimethylation and causing a redistribution of this mark, which affects transcription at various loci.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2146:Y641F 2146:Y646F

      Genes: 2146

      Variants: Y641F Y646F

    1. KRAS mutation is a weak, but valid predictor for poor prognosis and treatment outcomes in NSCLC: A meta-analysis of 41 studies

      [Paper-level Aggregated] PMCID: PMC4884999

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Predictive

      Justification: Oncogenic: The text indicates that the majority of KRAS mutations occur in codon 12, with G12C being the most common, suggesting its role in cancer development. Predictive: The mention of KRAS mutations, including G12C, in the context of studies focused on NSCLC implies that these mutations may predict response to targeted therapies.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): KRAS(3845):G12C

      Genes: KRAS(3845)

      Variants: G12C

    1. ‘Classical’ but not ‘other’ mutations of EGFR kinase domain are associated with clinical outcome in gefitinib-treated patients with non-small cell lung cancer

      [Paper-level Aggregated] PMCID: PMC2360265

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic, Prognostic

      Justification: Predictive: The text indicates that classical mutations in the EGFR tyrosine kinase domain are associated with sensitivity to tyrosine kinase inhibitors (TKIs) in patients with NSCLC, suggesting that these mutations can predict treatment response. Oncogenic: The presence of EGFR mutations, including E746V, G719D, and L858R, is implied to have a role in tumorigenesis, as they are described as somatic mutations found in tumor tissues, indicating their potential oncogenic nature. Prognostic: The text discusses median time to tumor progression (TTP) and overall survival (OS) in relation to different EGFR mutation statuses, suggesting that these mutations may have prognostic implications for patient outcomes.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): EGFR(1956):E746V EGFR(1956):G719D EGFR(1956):L858R EGFR(1956):G719X

      Genes: EGFR(1956)

      Variants: E746V G719D L858R G719X

    1. Given the aforementioned differences in H3.1- and H3.3-K27M tumours, we next compared their clinical characteristics. We did not find any significant difference in terms of sex ratio (Fig. 5a), but found an earlier onset

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4654747 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the association of H3.1-K27M tumors with clinical characteristics and outcomes, indicating its role in defining and classifying the disease. Prognostic: The variant K27M is correlated with overall survival outcomes, with H3.1 mutations showing a better prognosis compared to H3.3 mutations, independent of therapy. Oncogenic: The mention of H3.1-K27M tumors suggests that this somatic variant contributes to tumor development or progression, as it is associated with clinical characteristics and outcomes in cancer patients.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3021:K27M

      Genes: 3021

      Variants: K27M

    2. All but one H3-K27M mutation found by sequencing could also be accurately detected by IHC, including a novel mutation a gene encoding the H3.2 variant, HIST2H3C, not previously described (Fig. 1c, suppl. Fig S2b, c). How

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4654747 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 4

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Functional

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the detection of H3-K27M mutations and their association with immunohistochemistry (IHC) staining, indicating the use of these variants to classify or define a subtype of disease. Functional: The passage mentions the loss of H3K27me3 immunoexpression associated with the K27I variant, indicating an alteration in molecular function related to protein activity or modification.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 7157:83A>T 4613:84G>T 3021:K27I 3021:K27M 126961:lysine-to-isoleucine

      Genes: 7157 4613 3021 126961

      Variants: 83A>T 84G>T K27I K27M lysine-to-isoleucine

    1. Cervical cancer patients who develop distant metastasis are rarely curable with very limited treatment options. Chemotherapy is often administered but with limited efficacy. Immunotherapy and anti-angiogenesis therapy ar

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC8453302 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 2

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The variant G292R in HER2 is associated with a complete response to pyrotinib treatment in a patient with metastatic cervical adenocarcinoma, indicating its correlation with therapy response. Oncogenic: The passage discusses the HER2 G292R variant in the context of a metastatic cervical adenocarcinoma, suggesting that it contributes to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2064:G292R

      Genes: 2064

      Variants: G292R

    1. Analysis of DNA copy number alterations in K27M-H3.3 versus H3.3 wild-type DIPG samples showed not only the areas of overlap but also major differences between both groups. Large chromosomal copy number alterations commo

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3422615 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 9

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage discusses the K27M-H3.3 mutation in the context of DNA copy number alterations in tumors, indicating its role in tumor development or progression through the identification of specific chromosomal changes associated with this variant.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3021:K27M

      Genes: 3021

      Variants: K27M

    1. Mutation of p53 is the most common genetic change in human cancer, causing complex effects including not only loss of wild-type function but also gain of novel oncogenic functions (GOF). It is increasingly likely that p5

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3973211 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Prognostic, Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Prognostic: The passage indicates that mutations at Arg248 and Arg282 positions are associated with shorter patient survival, suggesting a correlation with disease outcome independent of therapy. Predictive: The passage discusses the association of p53 mutations with resistance to several CYP3A4-metabolized chemotherapeutic drugs, indicating a correlation with treatment response. Oncogenic: The mention of p53 mutations contributing to gain of novel oncogenic functions and their association with cancer cell lines suggests that these somatic variants play a role in tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 7157:Arg248 7157:Arg282 7157:R282W

      Genes: 7157

      Variants: Arg248 Arg282 R282W

    1. The opposite effects of PLX4032 on ERK1/2 phosphorylation in YULAC-BRAFV600E and YUDOSO-BRAFWT melanoma cells were concentration dependent. Both cell types responded to the drug at 1 and 0.5 muM, but not at 0.1 muM (Figu

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC2848976 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 7

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the response of melanoma cells with the BRAFV600E variant to the drug PLX4032, indicating a correlation with treatment sensitivity. Oncogenic: The BRAFV600E variant is implicated in the context of melanoma cells, suggesting its role in tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 673:BRAFV600E

      Genes: 673

      Variants: BRAFV600E

    1. In addition to the main driver mutations discussed above, several patients carry recurrent mutations that are clearly subclonal (present in some but not all tumour areas in a patient) and occur at later stages of tumour

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4823825 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 12

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage indicates that the PIK3CA H1047R mutation contributes to tumor development and progression, as it is associated with high-grade astrocytoma (WHO IV) and is linked to localized survival and growth advantages in tumor areas where it is acquired. Functional: The H1047R mutation affects the catalytic domain of PIK3CA, suggesting that it alters the molecular function of the protein, which is further supported by the mention of its role in PI3K activation and associated pathways.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:H1047R

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: H1047R

    2. In addition to the main driver mutations discussed above, several patients carry recurrent mutations that are clearly subclonal (present in some but not all tumour areas in a patient) and occur at later stages of tumour

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4823825 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 12

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage indicates that the PIK3CA H1047R mutation contributes to tumor development and progression, as it is associated with high-grade astrocytoma (WHO IV) and is linked to localized survival and growth advantages in tumor areas where it is acquired. Functional: The H1047R mutation affects the catalytic domain of PIK3CA, suggesting that it alters the molecular function of the protein, which is further supported by the mention of its role in PI3K activation and associated pathways.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:H1047R

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: H1047R

    1. Within the LBD, all but two loss of function mutations were clustered between residues 720 and 798. Of these, half had essentially no transactivational activity at physiological levels of DHT and comprise of L744F, A748V

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3293822 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 28

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how specific mutations, including V757A and Q798E, show impaired binding to co-regulatory proteins and altered transactivational activity, indicating changes in molecular function. Oncogenic: The mention of loss of function mutations clustered in the ligand binding domain (LBD) and their association with reduced transactivational activity suggests a role in tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of antiandrogen treatment.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 367:A748V 367:A765T 9611:K720E 367:L744F 1387:M749 1387:M749I 9611:M886V 367:N756D 10514:Q798E 367:Q902R 367:R726L 367:S759P 10514:V757A 10514:V757I 367:Y763C

      Genes: 367 9611 1387 10514

      Variants: A748V A765T K720E L744F M749 M749I M886V N756D Q798E Q902R R726L S759P V757A V757I Y763C

    2. Within the LBD, all but two loss of function mutations were clustered between residues 720 and 798. Of these, half had essentially no transactivational activity at physiological levels of DHT and comprise of L744F, A748V

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3293822 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 28

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how specific mutations, including V757A and Q798E, show impaired binding to co-regulatory proteins and altered transactivational activity, indicating changes in molecular function. Oncogenic: The mention of loss of function mutations clustered in the ligand binding domain (LBD) and their association with reduced transactivational activity suggests a role in tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of antiandrogen treatment.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 367:A748V 367:A765T 9611:K720E 367:L744F 1387:M749 1387:M749I 9611:M886V 367:N756D 10514:Q798E 367:Q902R 367:R726L 367:S759P 10514:V757A 10514:V757I 367:Y763C

      Genes: 367 9611 1387 10514

      Variants: A748V A765T K720E L744F M749 M749I M886V N756D Q798E Q902R R726L S759P V757A V757I Y763C

    1. OS in patients with any EGFR mutation was higher for those diagnosed in 2017 (median 18.1 months; 95% CI, 15.7-20.5) compared to 2013 (median 14.3 months; 95% CI, 12.5-16.1; p = 0.035), but similar to 2015 (median 17.6 m

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC8307492 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 13

      Evidence Type(s): Prognostic, Diagnostic

      Justification: Prognostic: The passage discusses overall survival (OS) in patients with the L858R variant, indicating a correlation between this variant and disease outcome, independent of therapy. Diagnostic: The mention of distinct survival patterns observed in different EGFR mutation subclasses, including L858R, suggests that this variant is used to classify or define a subtype of disease.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 1956:L858R

      Genes: 1956

      Variants: L858R

    2. OS in patients with any EGFR mutation was higher for those diagnosed in 2017 (median 18.1 months; 95% CI, 15.7-20.5) compared to 2013 (median 14.3 months; 95% CI, 12.5-16.1; p = 0.035), but similar to 2015 (median 17.6 m

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC8307492 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 13

      Evidence Type(s): Prognostic, Diagnostic

      Justification: Prognostic: The passage discusses overall survival (OS) in patients with the L858R variant, indicating a correlation between this variant and disease outcome, independent of therapy. Diagnostic: The mention of distinct survival patterns observed in different EGFR mutation subclasses, including L858R, suggests that this variant is used to classify or define a subtype of disease.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 1956:L858R

      Genes: 1956

      Variants: L858R

    1. The clinical context indicated that VMOS RAS variants cause enhanced RAS signalling, but the outcome of the in silico analysis is not unambiguously supporting this expectation. In fact, it strongly suggested deficiencies

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC6547725 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 11

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses the impact of the p.Q61L variant on nucleotide exchange, effector binding, and GTP hydrolysis, indicating that it alters molecular or biochemical function. Oncogenic: The p.Q61L variant is described as a classic pathogenic missense mutation, suggesting its contribution to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 4893:p.Q61L

      Genes: 4893

      Variants: p.Q61L

    2. The clinical context indicated that VMOS RAS variants cause enhanced RAS signalling, but the outcome of the in silico analysis is not unambiguously supporting this expectation. In fact, it strongly suggested deficiencies

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC6547725 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 11

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses the impact of the p.Q61L variant on nucleotide exchange, effector binding, and GTP hydrolysis, indicating that it alters molecular or biochemical function. Oncogenic: The p.Q61L variant is described as a classic pathogenic missense mutation, suggesting its contribution to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 4893:p.Q61L

      Genes: 4893

      Variants: p.Q61L

    1. In the cBioPortal database, variants of the MAP2K1 gene are reported at frequencies of 1.7% in CRC patients (Table 1) and correlated with worse disease/progression-free survival (Logrank Test P-Value: 1.815e-3), but not

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC6627713 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 20

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic, Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the frequencies of MAP2K1 variants in CRC patients and their association with specific tumor characteristics, indicating their role in defining or classifying the disease. Prognostic: The variants are correlated with worse disease/progression-free survival, suggesting they have prognostic implications independent of therapy. Predictive: The passage mentions that MAP2K1 mutations are associated with de novo and acquired resistance to anti-EGFR MoAbs, indicating a predictive relationship with therapy response. Oncogenic: The variants are described as contributing to a gain of function of the MEK1 protein, which is indicative of their role in tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5604:c.169A>G 5604:c.199G>A 5604:p.Asp67Asn 5604:p.Lys57Glu

      Genes: 5604

      Variants: c.169A>G c.199G>A p.Asp67Asn p.Lys57Glu

    2. In the cBioPortal database, variants of the MAP2K1 gene are reported at frequencies of 1.7% in CRC patients (Table 1) and correlated with worse disease/progression-free survival (Logrank Test P-Value: 1.815e-3), but not

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC6627713 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 20

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic, Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the frequencies of MAP2K1 variants in CRC patients and their association with specific tumor characteristics, indicating their role in defining or classifying the disease. Prognostic: The variants are correlated with worse disease/progression-free survival, suggesting they have prognostic implications independent of therapy. Predictive: The passage mentions that MAP2K1 mutations are associated with de novo and acquired resistance to anti-EGFR MoAbs, indicating a predictive relationship with therapy response. Oncogenic: The variants are described as contributing to a gain of function of the MEK1 protein, which is indicative of their role in tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5604:c.169A>G 5604:c.199G>A 5604:p.Asp67Asn 5604:p.Lys57Glu

      Genes: 5604

      Variants: c.169A>G c.199G>A p.Asp67Asn p.Lys57Glu

    1. We identified the ROS1-G2032R mutation in YU1079, which was serially established in the same patient as YU1078 but after progressing on crizotinib treatment. Based on recent studies examining lorlatinib and cabozantinib

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC10283448 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 10

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the response of the ROS1-G2032R mutation to various therapies, specifically mentioning the effectiveness of cabozantinib and repotrectinib in inhibiting growth, which correlates with treatment response. Oncogenic: The ROS1-G2032R mutation is implicated in tumor growth, as indicated by the investigation of its effects in Ba/F3 cells and the context of progression on crizotinib treatment, suggesting its role in tumor development.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 6098:G2032R

      Genes: 6098

      Variants: G2032R

    2. We identified the ROS1-G2032R mutation in YU1079, which was serially established in the same patient as YU1078 but after progressing on crizotinib treatment. Based on recent studies examining lorlatinib and cabozantinib

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC10283448 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 10

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the response of the ROS1-G2032R mutation to various therapies, specifically mentioning the effectiveness of cabozantinib and repotrectinib in inhibiting growth, which correlates with treatment response. Oncogenic: The ROS1-G2032R mutation is implicated in tumor growth, as indicated by the investigation of its effects in Ba/F3 cells and the context of progression on crizotinib treatment, suggesting its role in tumor development.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 6098:G2032R

      Genes: 6098

      Variants: G2032R

    1. P03 was a female patient with EGFR L858R-mutant advanced LUAD with bone metastasis. ERBB2DeltaEx16 was detected after disease progression with osimertinib using her plasma samples but not in the paired tissue rebiopsy (

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC9859631 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 11

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the presence of the EGFR L858R variant in a patient with advanced LUAD and its association with resistance to osimertinib, indicating a correlation with treatment response. Oncogenic: The mention of the EGFR L858R variant and its role in the context of advanced LUAD suggests that it contributes to tumor development or progression, particularly as it is associated with resistance mechanisms.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2064:D769Y 2064:L755S 1956:L858R 2064:c.1899-32_1909del

      Genes: 2064 1956

      Variants: D769Y L755S L858R c.1899-32_1909del

    2. P03 was a female patient with EGFR L858R-mutant advanced LUAD with bone metastasis. ERBB2DeltaEx16 was detected after disease progression with osimertinib using her plasma samples but not in the paired tissue rebiopsy (

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC9859631 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 11

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the presence of the EGFR L858R variant in a patient with advanced LUAD and its association with resistance to osimertinib, indicating a correlation with treatment response. Oncogenic: The mention of the EGFR L858R variant and its role in the context of advanced LUAD suggests that it contributes to tumor development or progression, particularly as it is associated with resistance mechanisms.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 2064:D769Y 2064:L755S 1956:L858R 2064:c.1899-32_1909del

      Genes: 2064 1956

      Variants: D769Y L755S L858R c.1899-32_1909del

    1. In clinical practice, there are a number of cancer patients with clear family histories, but the patients lack mutations in known familial cancer syndrome genes. Recent advances in genomic technologies have enhanced the

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5111006 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage indicates that the homozygous CHEK2 variant p.R474C was contributory to familial cancer, and the inactivation of CHEK2 in mice led to cancers in multiple organs, suggesting a role in tumor development. Functional: The variant p.R474C alters the tertiary structure of the CHK2 protein by disrupting a salt bridge, and subsequent analysis showed that it was unstable and scarcely activated, indicating a change in molecular function.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 11200:p.R474 11200:p.R474C

      Genes: 11200

      Variants: p.R474 p.R474C

    2. In clinical practice, there are a number of cancer patients with clear family histories, but the patients lack mutations in known familial cancer syndrome genes. Recent advances in genomic technologies have enhanced the

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5111006 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage indicates that the homozygous CHEK2 variant p.R474C was contributory to familial cancer, and the inactivation of CHEK2 in mice led to cancers in multiple organs, suggesting a role in tumor development. Functional: The variant p.R474C alters the tertiary structure of the CHK2 protein by disrupting a salt bridge, and subsequent analysis showed that it was unstable and scarcely activated, indicating a change in molecular function.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 11200:p.R474 11200:p.R474C

      Genes: 11200

      Variants: p.R474 p.R474C

    1. Expression of K-RasG12D and each tandem duplication mutant, but not WT K-Ras, transformed interleukin 3 (IL-3)-dependent Ba/F3 cells to cytokine-independent growth (Supplementary Fig. 3a). Ba/F3 cells expressing K-RasG12

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4748120 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 11

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage describes how the K-RasG12D variant and tandem duplication mutants transform Ba/F3 cells to cytokine-independent growth, indicating their role in tumor development or progression. Functional: The passage mentions that Ba/F3 cells expressing K-RasG12D and the tandem duplication mutants had elevated levels of Ras-GTP, suggesting that these variants alter molecular function related to Ras signaling.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5295:A66dup 3845:K-RasG12D

      Genes: 5295 3845

      Variants: A66dup K-RasG12D

    2. Expression of K-RasG12D and each tandem duplication mutant, but not WT K-Ras, transformed interleukin 3 (IL-3)-dependent Ba/F3 cells to cytokine-independent growth (Supplementary Fig. 3a). Ba/F3 cells expressing K-RasG12

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4748120 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 11

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage describes how the K-RasG12D variant and tandem duplication mutants transform Ba/F3 cells to cytokine-independent growth, indicating their role in tumor development or progression. Functional: The passage mentions that Ba/F3 cells expressing K-RasG12D and the tandem duplication mutants had elevated levels of Ras-GTP, suggesting that these variants alter molecular function related to Ras signaling.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5295:A66dup 3845:K-RasG12D

      Genes: 5295 3845

      Variants: A66dup K-RasG12D

    1. ALK-break positive non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC) patients initially respond to crizotinib, but resistance occurs inevitably. In this study we aimed to identify fusion genes in crizotinib resistant tumor samples. Re-

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4821611 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses ALK mutations (p.C1156Y and p.G1269A) in the context of crizotinib resistance, indicating a correlation between these variants and resistance to the therapy. Oncogenic: The ALK mutations are described as being detected in post-treatment tumor samples, suggesting their contribution to tumor development or progression in the context of crizotinib resistance.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 238:p.C1156Y 238:p.G1269A

      Genes: 238

      Variants: p.C1156Y p.G1269A

    2. ALK-break positive non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC) patients initially respond to crizotinib, but resistance occurs inevitably. In this study we aimed to identify fusion genes in crizotinib resistant tumor samples. Re-

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC4821611 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses ALK mutations (p.C1156Y and p.G1269A) in the context of crizotinib resistance, indicating a correlation between these variants and resistance to the therapy. Oncogenic: The ALK mutations are described as being detected in post-treatment tumor samples, suggesting their contribution to tumor development or progression in the context of crizotinib resistance.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 238:p.C1156Y 238:p.G1269A

      Genes: 238

      Variants: p.C1156Y p.G1269A

    1. The 14 NF1-associated gliomas belonging to the molecular high-grade group did not form a distinct epigenomic cluster but instead aligned with other sporadic reference entities, most frequently high-grade astrocytoma with

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC9468105 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the association of the BRAF p.V600E mutation with pleomorphic xanthoastrocytoma, indicating its role in defining or classifying this specific tumor type. Prognostic: The Kaplan-Meier survival analysis mentioned in the passage indicates that patients with NF1-associated gliomas have inferior outcomes, suggesting a correlation between the presence of certain mutations and disease prognosis.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 673:p.V600E

      Genes: 673

      Variants: p.V600E

    2. The 14 NF1-associated gliomas belonging to the molecular high-grade group did not form a distinct epigenomic cluster but instead aligned with other sporadic reference entities, most frequently high-grade astrocytoma with

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC9468105 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the association of the BRAF p.V600E mutation with pleomorphic xanthoastrocytoma, indicating its role in defining or classifying this specific tumor type. Prognostic: The Kaplan-Meier survival analysis mentioned in the passage indicates that patients with NF1-associated gliomas have inferior outcomes, suggesting a correlation between the presence of certain mutations and disease prognosis.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 673:p.V600E

      Genes: 673

      Variants: p.V600E

    1. NS sequence variants were excluded as disease candidates by their (a) presence in 28 control samples sequenced by our group using a similar method, (b) presence in the exome sequence of the germline sample and (c) presen

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3542862 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 4

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the presence of the R115P mutation in PIK3CA in lesional tissue but not in blood, indicating its potential role in defining or confirming a disease state. Oncogenic: The R115P mutation in PIK3CA is described as potentially deleterious and is present in lesional tissue, suggesting it contributes to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 91544:C392G 5163:R115P

      Genes: 91544 5163

      Variants: C392G R115P

    2. NS sequence variants were excluded as disease candidates by their (a) presence in 28 control samples sequenced by our group using a similar method, (b) presence in the exome sequence of the germline sample and (c) presen

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3542862 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 4

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the presence of the R115P mutation in PIK3CA in lesional tissue but not in blood, indicating its potential role in defining or confirming a disease state. Oncogenic: The R115P mutation in PIK3CA is described as potentially deleterious and is present in lesional tissue, suggesting it contributes to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 91544:C392G 5163:R115P

      Genes: 91544 5163

      Variants: C392G R115P

    1. We investigated whether the above large-scale patterns characterize all KRAS, HRAS and NRAS hotspot variants, by projecting the amino acid substitutions at G12, G13 and Q61 and observed an overall similar pattern, but wi

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC8688876 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 20

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how specific amino acid substitutions at G12, G13, and Q61 alter biochemical properties and mechanisms across RAS proteins, indicating a change in molecular function related to GTP hydrolysis and downstream signaling. Oncogenic: The mention of hotspot variants and their clustering patterns suggests that these somatic variants contribute to tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of their distinct biochemical properties and disease incidence.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3845:G12 3845:G13 3845:Q61

      Genes: 3845

      Variants: G12 G13 Q61

    2. We investigated whether the above large-scale patterns characterize all KRAS, HRAS and NRAS hotspot variants, by projecting the amino acid substitutions at G12, G13 and Q61 and observed an overall similar pattern, but wi

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC8688876 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 20

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how specific amino acid substitutions at G12, G13, and Q61 alter biochemical properties and mechanisms across RAS proteins, indicating a change in molecular function related to GTP hydrolysis and downstream signaling. Oncogenic: The mention of hotspot variants and their clustering patterns suggests that these somatic variants contribute to tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of their distinct biochemical properties and disease incidence.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3845:G12 3845:G13 3845:Q61

      Genes: 3845

      Variants: G12 G13 Q61

    1. The p85alpha nSH2 does not contact the lipid binding elements in the kinase C-lobe (Figure 4a) but appears to control their access to membrane (Figure 3f-j). This suggests the activation mechanism by nSH2 to be allosteri

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3378484 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 22

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how the H1047R variant leads to a global conformational change in the p110alpha/p85alpha structure, suggesting that it alters molecular function and potentially impacts activity. Oncogenic: The context implies that the H1047R variant contributes to tumor development or progression through its role in altering the conformational dynamics of the kinase, which is relevant in cancer biology.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:H1047R

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: H1047R

    2. Our structure is for the WT p110alpha, but the kinase C-terminal tail more closely resembles those in the structures of the oncogenic mutant H1047R p110alpha/p85alpha-niSH2, than that in the WT apo p110alpha/p85alpha-iSH

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3378484 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 6

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage discusses the oncogenic mutant H1047R p110alpha, indicating that this variant is associated with tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of its structural characteristics compared to the wild-type. Functional: The passage describes how the H1047R variant affects the conformation of the C-terminal tail and its interactions, suggesting alterations in molecular or biochemical function related to the protein's structure.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:H1047R

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: H1047R

    3. The p85alpha nSH2 does not contact the lipid binding elements in the kinase C-lobe (Figure 4a) but appears to control their access to membrane (Figure 3f-j). This suggests the activation mechanism by nSH2 to be allosteri

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3378484 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 22

      Evidence Type(s): Functional, Oncogenic

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how the H1047R variant leads to a global conformational change in the p110alpha/p85alpha structure, suggesting that it alters molecular function and potentially impacts activity. Oncogenic: The context implies that the H1047R variant contributes to tumor development or progression through its role in altering the conformational dynamics of the kinase, which is relevant in cancer biology.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:H1047R

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: H1047R

    4. Our structure is for the WT p110alpha, but the kinase C-terminal tail more closely resembles those in the structures of the oncogenic mutant H1047R p110alpha/p85alpha-niSH2, than that in the WT apo p110alpha/p85alpha-iSH

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3378484 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 6

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage discusses the oncogenic mutant H1047R p110alpha, indicating that this variant is associated with tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of its structural characteristics compared to the wild-type. Functional: The passage describes how the H1047R variant affects the conformation of the C-terminal tail and its interactions, suggesting alterations in molecular or biochemical function related to the protein's structure.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:H1047R

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: H1047R

    1. Finally, case C586 showed a remarkable pattern of convergent evolution (Fig. 2d). We found two SF3B1 mutations (c.1996A > C; p.K666Q and c.1997A > C; p.K666T) affecting the same codon, but evolved in two independent clon

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5820258 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the SF3B1 mutations in the context of venetoclax exposure and resistance, indicating a correlation between these variants and treatment response. Oncogenic: The SF3B1 mutations are described as evolving during treatment and being selected for during venetoclax therapy, suggesting their role in tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 23451:c.1996A > C 23451:c.1997A > C 23451:p.K666Q 23451:p.K666T

      Genes: 23451

      Variants: c.1996A > C c.1997A > C p.K666Q p.K666T

    2. Finally, case C586 showed a remarkable pattern of convergent evolution (Fig. 2d). We found two SF3B1 mutations (c.1996A > C; p.K666Q and c.1997A > C; p.K666T) affecting the same codon, but evolved in two independent clon

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5820258 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Predictive, Oncogenic

      Justification: Predictive: The passage discusses the SF3B1 mutations in the context of venetoclax exposure and resistance, indicating a correlation between these variants and treatment response. Oncogenic: The SF3B1 mutations are described as evolving during treatment and being selected for during venetoclax therapy, suggesting their role in tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 23451:c.1996A > C 23451:c.1997A > C 23451:p.K666Q 23451:p.K666T

      Genes: 23451

      Variants: c.1996A > C c.1997A > C p.K666Q p.K666T

    1. We also expressed selected EGFR mutants (R108K, T263P, A289V, G598V, L861Q) in murine hematopoietic cells (Ba/F3 cells) which do not express any EGFR family members but otherwise retain functional properties of the EGF-s

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC1702556 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Functional

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how the EGFR mutants (R108K, T263P, A289V, G598V, L861Q) alter the molecular function of the EGF-signaling pathway, specifically showing increased tyrosine phosphorylation and differences in receptor downregulation in response to EGF stimulation.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 1956:A289V 1956:G598V 1956:L861Q 1956:R108K 1956:T263P

      Genes: 1956

      Variants: A289V G598V L861Q R108K T263P

    2. We also expressed selected EGFR mutants (R108K, T263P, A289V, G598V, L861Q) in murine hematopoietic cells (Ba/F3 cells) which do not express any EGFR family members but otherwise retain functional properties of the EGF-s

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC1702556 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 14

      Evidence Type(s): Functional

      Justification: Functional: The passage discusses how the EGFR mutants (R108K, T263P, A289V, G598V, L861Q) alter the molecular function of the EGF-signaling pathway, specifically showing increased tyrosine phosphorylation and differences in receptor downregulation in response to EGF stimulation.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 1956:A289V 1956:G598V 1956:L861Q 1956:R108K 1956:T263P

      Genes: 1956

      Variants: A289V G598V L861Q R108K T263P

    1. Several patients (n = 7) had novel phenotypes with features either overlapping MCAP but lacking megalencephaly or suggesting a milder variant of CLOVES. Patient LR15-238 had mild somatic hemihypertrophy and cutaneous vas

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5019182 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 16

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the presence of specific mutations (p.Arg93Gln, p.Gly106Val, p.Cys378Tyr) in patients with phenotypes that overlap with or suggest variants of MCAP, indicating that these mutations are associated with defining or classifying the disease. Oncogenic: The passage describes the mutations as somatic variants present in patients with specific phenotypes, suggesting their contribution to tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of the patients' conditions.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:p.Arg93Gln 5290:p.Cys378Tyr 5290:p.Gly106Val

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: p.Arg93Gln p.Cys378Tyr p.Gly106Val

    2. Several patients (n = 7) had novel phenotypes with features either overlapping MCAP but lacking megalencephaly or suggesting a milder variant of CLOVES. Patient LR15-238 had mild somatic hemihypertrophy and cutaneous vas

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5019182 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 16

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the presence of specific mutations (p.Arg93Gln, p.Gly106Val, p.Cys378Tyr) in patients with phenotypes that overlap with or suggest variants of MCAP, indicating that these mutations are associated with defining or classifying the disease. Oncogenic: The passage describes the mutations as somatic variants present in patients with specific phenotypes, suggesting their contribution to tumor development or progression, particularly in the context of the patients' conditions.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 5290:p.Arg93Gln 5290:p.Cys378Tyr 5290:p.Gly106Val

      Genes: 5290

      Variants: p.Arg93Gln p.Cys378Tyr p.Gly106Val

    1. The mutation frequency of TYK2 in T-ALL cell lines compared to primary T-ALL samples was substantially different, with a high mutation rate of TYK2 in cell lines, but only a low mutation rate in primary samples. To deter

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3366948 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 22

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage discusses the presence of TYK2 mutations in T-ALL cell lines and suggests that these mutations may not represent an oncogenic event important for leukemia development in vivo, indicating a potential role in tumor progression. Functional: The analysis of the transforming properties of the TYK2 variants in Ba/F3 cells indicates that the variants do not show major differences in function compared to wild type TYK2, suggesting an assessment of molecular function.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 4486:A35V 5395:C192Y 7297:R1027H

      Genes: 4486 5395 7297

      Variants: A35V C192Y R1027H

    2. The mutation frequency of TYK2 in T-ALL cell lines compared to primary T-ALL samples was substantially different, with a high mutation rate of TYK2 in cell lines, but only a low mutation rate in primary samples. To deter

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC3366948 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 22

      Evidence Type(s): Oncogenic, Functional

      Justification: Oncogenic: The passage discusses the presence of TYK2 mutations in T-ALL cell lines and suggests that these mutations may not represent an oncogenic event important for leukemia development in vivo, indicating a potential role in tumor progression. Functional: The analysis of the transforming properties of the TYK2 variants in Ba/F3 cells indicates that the variants do not show major differences in function compared to wild type TYK2, suggesting an assessment of molecular function.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 4486:A35V 5395:C192Y 7297:R1027H

      Genes: 4486 5395 7297

      Variants: A35V C192Y R1027H

    1. Four NSCLC samples extracted from FFPE tissues were tested by LCN-HRM to investigate the cause of discrepant results between HRM and sequencing. TX450 was negative by sequencing but positive by HRM for KRAS exon 2. After

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC2766370 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 8

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the detection of the KRAS mutation c.34G>T (p.G12C) in NSCLC samples, indicating its association with the disease and its role in characterizing the mutation through sequencing. Oncogenic: The variant c.34G>T (p.G12C) is mentioned in the context of being a mutation detected in NSCLC samples, suggesting its contribution to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3845:c.34G>T 3845:p.G12C

      Genes: 3845

      Variants: c.34G>T p.G12C

    2. Four NSCLC samples extracted from FFPE tissues were tested by LCN-HRM to investigate the cause of discrepant results between HRM and sequencing. TX450 was negative by sequencing but positive by HRM for KRAS exon 2. After

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC2766370 Section: RESULTS PassageIndex: 8

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the detection of the KRAS mutation c.34G>T (p.G12C) in NSCLC samples, indicating its association with the disease and its role in characterizing the mutation through sequencing. Oncogenic: The variant c.34G>T (p.G12C) is mentioned in the context of being a mutation detected in NSCLC samples, suggesting its contribution to tumor development or progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3845:c.34G>T 3845:p.G12C

      Genes: 3845

      Variants: c.34G>T p.G12C

    1. Background: H3 K27M mutation was originally described in pediatric diffuse intrinsic pontine gliomas (DIPGs), but has been recently recognized to occur also in adult midline diffuse gliomas, as well as midline tumors wit

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5822176 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the H3 K27M mutation's association with various tumor types, indicating its role in defining and classifying these tumors, particularly in pediatric and adult cohorts. Prognostic: The passage mentions survival outcomes for patients with H3 K27M-mutant tumors, comparing mean survival times between adults and pediatric patients, which indicates a correlation with disease outcome. Oncogenic: The H3 K27M mutation is described as contributing to tumor development in various glioma types, indicating its role as a somatic variant involved in tumor progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3417:K27M

      Genes: 3417

      Variants: K27M

    2. Background: H3 K27M mutation was originally described in pediatric diffuse intrinsic pontine gliomas (DIPGs), but has been recently recognized to occur also in adult midline diffuse gliomas, as well as midline tumors wit

      [Paragraph-level] PMCID: PMC5822176 Section: ABSTRACT PassageIndex: 1

      Evidence Type(s): Diagnostic, Prognostic, Oncogenic

      Justification: Diagnostic: The passage discusses the H3 K27M mutation's association with various tumor types, indicating its role in defining and classifying these tumors, particularly in pediatric and adult cohorts. Prognostic: The passage mentions survival outcomes for patients with H3 K27M-mutant tumors, comparing mean survival times between adults and pediatric patients, which indicates a correlation with disease outcome. Oncogenic: The H3 K27M mutation is described as contributing to tumor development in various glioma types, indicating its role as a somatic variant involved in tumor progression.

      Gene→Variant (gene-first): 3417:K27M

      Genes: 3417

      Variants: K27M

    1. So, this is an attempt to provide a comprehensive description of the DOI system, why we use it, and why it doesn’t always work smoothly. Referencing, effort, and reward For most of our readership, reading an Ars science article is the beginning and end of their exposure to a topic. But we also have a notable population of scientists who read, and they may find themselves interested in reading the academic paper that led to our coverage. There are any number of good reasons for doing that: the paper may be relevant to their work, they may want details we did not provide in our coverage, they suspect we might have gotten something wrong and want to correct us, etc. As a result, some form of reference to the paper is a definite good—it’s a benefit for some of our readership, and may help correct errors that are read by the rest of our audience.

      The state of { journalism, the Web–industrial complex, and understanding about the fundamentals of research and scholarship } are so poor that the staff actually had to justify something as simple as citing your sources.

      (In 2010, but still… 2010!)

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript reports the application of a combined targeted therapeutic approach to gastric cancer treatment. The RTK, FGFR2 and the phosphatase, SHP2 are targeted with existing drugs; AZD457 and SHP099, respectively. Having shown increased mRNA levels of FGFR2 and SHP2 in a patient population and highlighted the issue of resistance to single therapies the combination of inhibitors is shown to reduce cancer-related signalling in two gastric cell lines. The efficacy of the dual therapy is further demonstrated in a single patient case study and mouse xenograft models. Finally, the rationale for SHP2 inhibition is shown to be linked to immune response.

      Strengths:

      The data is generally well presented, and the study invokes a novel patient data set which could have wider value. The study provides additional evidence to support the combined therapeutic approach of RTK and phosphatase inhibition.

      Weaknesses:

      Combined therapy approaches targeting RTKs and SHP2 have been widely reported. Indeed, SHP099 in combination with FGFR inhibitors has been shown to overcome adaptive resistance in FGFR-driven cancers. Furthermore, the inhibition of SHP2 has been documented to have important implications in both targeting proliferative signalling as well as immune response. Thus, it is difficult to see novelty or a significant scientific advance in this manuscript. Although the data is generally well presented, there is inconsistency in the interpretation of the experimental outcomes from ex vivo, patient and mouse systems investigated. In addition, the study provides only minor or circumstantial understanding of the dual mechanism.

      Using data from a 161 patient cohort FGFR2 was identified as displaying amplification of FGFR2 in ~6% with concomitant elevation of mRNA of patients which correlated with PTPN11 (SHP2) mRNA expression. The broader context of this data is of value and could add a different patient demographic to other data on gastric cancer. However, there is no detail on patient stratification or prior therapeutic intervention.

      Comments on revisions: This has been attended to in the revised version

      In SNU16 and KATOIII cells the combined therapy is shown to be effective and appears to be correlated with increase apoptotic effects (i.e. not immune response).

      Fig 2E suggests that the combined therapy in SNU16 cells is little better than FGFR2-directed AZD457 inhibitor alone, particularly at the higher dose.

      The individual patient case study described via Fig 3 suggests efficacy of the combined therapy (at very high dosage), however the cell biopsies only show reduced phosphorylation of ERK, but not AKT. This is at odds with the ex vivo cell-based assays. Thus, it is not clear how relevant this study is.

      The mouse xenograft study shows a convincing reduction in tumor mass/volume and a clear reduction in pAKT, whilst pERK remains largely unaffected by the combined therapeutic approach. This is in conflict with the previous data which seems to show the opposite effect.

      Comments on revisions: The authors have clarified this point

      In all, the impact of the dual therapy is unclear with respect to the two pathways mediated by ERK and AKT.

      Finally, the authors demonstrate the impact of SHP2 on PD-1 expression and propose that the SHP099/AZD4547 combination therapy significantly induces the production of IFN-γ in CD8+ T cells. This part of the study is unconvincing and would benefit from an investigation of the tumor micro-environment to assess T cell infiltration.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The data in Figure 1 is not novel, similar data has been reported elsewhere.

      We are grateful for the critical evaluation of our finding. Although there have been a few researches indicating the prevalence of FGFR2-amplified GC patients, our research provided a novel dataset of 161 GC patients using next-generation sequencing (NGS) in China, further emphasizing the high frequency of FGFR2 amplification in gastric cancer patients. Moreover, the proportion of FGFR2-amplified GC patients in our center (6.2%) is relatively higher than that of TCGA cohort (5%).

      We have transferred the original Figure 1C and 1D to the supplementary figures, and constructed a novel pie chart for Nanjing Drum Tower Hospital cohort to compare with the TCGA cohort.

      It is unclear why the two panels in Fig 2a and 2b can not be integrated into one panel, which will make it easier to compare the activities.

      Thanks for pointing this out. In the first figure of Figure 2a and 2b, we performed gradient concentration CCK8 detection on the cytotoxicity of SHP099 against tumor cells. In the second figure, we selected 10 μm (IC50) as the fixed concentration of SHP099 for combined efficacy testing with gradient concentration of AZD4547. Moreover, the units of the horizontal axis in both figure 2a and 2b cannot be unified. Therefore, we believe that the two figures in figures 2a and 2b are not suitable for merging into one figure.

      For the convenience of observation, we integrated the first panel of figure 2a and 2b into one panel, and integrated the second panel in the same way.

      The synergetic effects of azd4547 and shp099 are not significant in Fig 2e and 2f, as well as in Fig. 3g and fig. 4f

      In Fig 2e and 2f, we not only analyzed the synergetic effects of 3 nM (a relatively lower dose) AZD4547 and 10 μm SHP099, but also 10 nM (a relatively higher dose) AZD4547 and 10 μm SHP099. The synergetic effects of different dosage combinations should be compared correctly. From our perspective, the combination treatment led to a stronger inhibition of phospho-FGFR, phospho-SHP2 and FGFR2-initiated downstream signaling molecules, especially in KATOIII.

      For ease of comparison, we circled 10 μm SHP099, 10nM AZD4547 and 10nM AZD4547+10 μm SHP099 in red.

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      We also circled 10μM SHP099, 3nM AZD4547 and 3nM AZD4547+10 μm SHP099 in blue.

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      For ease of comparison, we also conducted grayscale value analysis and normalization using image J.

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      In Fig. 3g, the combination therapy exhibited relatively stronger inhibitory effects on phospho-ERK, phospho-AKT and phospho-mTOR.

      For ease of comparison, we conducted grayscale value analysis and normalization using image J.

      The unclear effect of combination therapy may be due to the presence of impurities other than tumor cells in patient’s ascites.

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      In Fig. 4f, it was obvious that phospho-AKT and phospho-mTOR were further suppressed in combination group.

      For ease of comparison, we conducted grayscale value analysis and normalization using image J.

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      Therefore, in our opinions, our data could relatively sufficiently confirm the synergetic effects of AZD4547 and SHP099.

      Data in Fig. 5 is weak and can be removed. It is unclear why FGFR inhibitor has some activities toward t cells since t cells do not express FGFR.

      The activation effect of SHP099 on T cells has been validated in many articles. In a previous study published in Cancer Immunology Research, it was pointed out that the combination of FGFR2 inhibitor erdafitinib and PD-1 antibody can activate T cells and downregulate T cell surface exhaustion related factors (including PD-1) in vivo Therefore, the anti-tumor immune effect of FGFR2 inhibitor cannot be ignored. Although T cells do not express FGFR, FGFR2 inhibitors may still affect PD-1 expression on the surface of T cells in some other ways, which requires further research. We have deleted fig.5D in our article. We believe that the combination of FGFR2 inhibitor and SHP2 inhibitor not only has a direct killing effect on tumor cells, but also promotes anti-tumor immunity by activating T cells. Therefore, we believe that the in vitro data in Figure 5 is also meaningful.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Strengths:

      The data is generally well presented and the study invokes a novel patient data set which could have wider value. The study provides additional evidence to support the combined therapeutic approach of RTK and phosphatase inhibition.

      We sincerely thank the reviewer for the critical evaluation and appreciation of our findings.

      Weaknesses:

      Combined therapy approaches targeting RTKs and SHP2 have been widely reported. Indeed, SHP099 in combination with FGFR inhibitors has been shown to overcome adaptive resistance in FGFR-driven cancers. Furthermore, the inhibition of SHP2 has been documented to have important implications in both targeting proliferative signalling as well as immune response. Thus, it is difficult to see novelty or a significant scientific advance in this manuscript. Although the data is generally well presented, there is inconsistency in the interpretation of the experimental outcomes from ex vivo, patient and mouse systems investigated. In addition, the study provides only minor or circumstantial understanding of the dual mechanism.

      We acknowledge that our research on the mechanism of dual inhibition is not deep enough. There remain more in-depth mechanisms of the combination of SHP2 inhibitor and RTK inhibitors needed to be explored, and it would be the main direction of our future study.

      Using data from a 161 patient cohort FGFR2 was identified as displaying amplification of FGFR2 in ~6% with concomitant elevation of mRNA of patients which correlated with PTPN11 (SHP2) mRNA expression. The broader context of this data is of value and could add a different patient demographic to other data on gastric cancer. However, there is no detail on patient stratification or prior therapeutic intervention.

      Thanks for pointing this out and we have added a table on patients’ stratification such as age, gender and so on. Unfortunately, data on patients’ prior therapeutic intervention weren’t collected.

      In SNU16 and KATOIII cells the combined therapy is shown to be effective and appears to be correlated with increased apoptotic effects (i.e. not immune response).

      Fig 2E suggests that the combined therapy in SNU16 cells is a little better than FGFR2-directed AZD457 inhibitor alone, particularly at the higher dose.

      The individual patient case study described via Fig 3 suggests efficacy of the combined therapy (at very high dosage), however, the cell biopsies only show reduced phosphorylation of ERK, but not AKT. This is at odds with the ex vivo cell-based assays. Thus, it is not clear how relevant this study is.

      The mouse xenograft study shows a convincing reduction in tumor mass/volume and clear reduction in pAKT, whilst pERK remains largely unaffected by the combined therapeutic approach. This is in conflict with the previous data which seems to show the opposite effect. In all, the impact of the dual therapy is unclear with respect to the two pathways mediated by ERK and AKT.

      Thank you for the comment. Previous researches have confirmed that both RAS/ERK and PI3K/AKT pathways are two important downstream signaling of FGFR2. In Fig 2E and F, we observed that in FGFR2-amplified cell lines dual blockade had significant inhibitory effects both on p-ERK and p-AKT, and the inhibitory effect on p-ERK is greater than that on p-AKT. Similarly, in Fig 3G, dual blockade mainly suppressed p-ERK, and slightly inhibited p-AKT and p-mTOR in cancer cells derived from the individual patient. Thus, in the two types in-vitro models, dual inhibition simultaneously inhibited both RAS/ERK and PI3K/AKT pathways, and primarily inhibited RAS/ERK pathway, which is not contradictory.

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      For the in-vivo animal model. Although dual inhibition had inhibitory effects on both pathways, it mainly suppressed p-AKT.

      In both in vivo and in vitro models, combination therapy has a certain inhibitory effect on the RAS/ERK and PI3K/AKT pathways, but the emphasis on the two is not the same in vivo and in vitro. Considering the significant differences between in vivo and in vitro models, we believe that this difference in emphasis is understandable.

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      Finally, the authors demonstrate the impact of SHP2 on PD-1 expression and propose that the SHP099/AZD4547 combination therapy significantly induces the production of IFN-γ in CD8+ T cells. This part of the study is unconvincing and would benefit from the investigation of the tumor micro-environment to assess T cell infiltration.

      To investigate the tumor micro-environment to assess T cell infiltration, we have to establish our research model in immunocompetent mice. However, there is currently only one type of gastric cancer cell line derived from mice, MFC, which is not a cell line with FGFR2 amplification. We attempted to transfect FGFR2 amplification plasmids into MFC, but the transfection effect was poor, making it difficult to conduct in vivo animal experiments.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Strengths:

      The authors demonstrate that FGFR2 amplification positively correlates with PTPN11 in human gastric cancer samples, providing rationale for combination therapies. Furthermore, convincing data are provided demonstrating that targeting both FGFR and SHP2 is more effective than targeting either pathway alone using in vitro and in vivo models. The use of cells derived from a gastric cancer patient that progressed following treatment with an FGFR inhibitor is also a strength. The findings from this study support the conclusion that SHP2 inhibitors enhance the efficacy of FGFR-targeted therapies in cancer patients. This study also suggests that targeting SHP2 may also be an effective strategy for targeting cancers that are resistant to FGFR-targeted therapies.

      Weaknesses:

      The main caveat with these studies is the lack of an immune competent model with which to test the finding that this combination therapy enhances T cell cytotoxicity in vivo. Discussing this limitation within the context of these findings and future directions for this work, particularly since the combination therapy appears to work quite well without the presence of T cells in the environment, would be beneficial.

      Thank you for the great suggestion. To investigate the tumor micro-environment to assess T cell infiltration, we have to establish our research model in immunocompetent mice. However, there is currently only one type of gastric cancer cell line derived from mice, MFC, which is not a cell line with FGFR2 amplification. We attempted to transfect FGFR2 amplification plasmids into MFC, but the transfection effect was poor, making it difficult to conduct in vivo animal experiments.

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      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Minor points. The manuscript is poorly written and loaded with language errors.

      We sincerely thank you for your constructive suggestion and we are sorry for the mistake. We have polished the article and corrected these language errors.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      In addition to the comments made in the Public Review the manuscript lacks detail on statistical analysis of experimental results.

      Thank you for your advice. In response to the feedback, we have supplemented detail on statistical analysis of experimental results in the “Methods” part.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      There are numerous grammatical errors throughout, and incorrect wording is used in some places (such as "syngeneic mouse tumor model" rather than "xenograft tumor model", line 253). Careful proofreading and editing of this manuscript is recommended.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have made corrections to the relevant content of the article.

      AZD4547 is an FGFR-selective inhibitor and is not specific for FGFR2 as it also targets FGFR1 and FGFR3, this should be clarified in the text.

      Thank you for rasing this point. We have clarified that AZD4547 is an FGFR-selective inhibitor targeting FGFR1-3 in the “Introduction” part.

      The specific FGFR inhibitor(s) used to treat the patient with FGFR2 amplification, are the authors able to provide this information?

      Thank you for raising this important issue. Indeed, due to the difficulty of small molecule drug development, the fastest clinical progress currently is in FGFR pan inhibitors. Recently, Relay Therapeutics has also developed a highly FGFR2-selective inhibitor, RLY-4008, in phase I/II clinical trials, but lacks preclinical research on gastric cancer.

      Figure 2F: the p38 and p-p38 bands are cut off at the bottom

      We sincerely thank you for your thoughtful feedback. we have improved our experimental methods and retested the two p38 and p-p38 in Figure 2F by western blotting.

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