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  1. Apr 2026
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Spinal projection neurons in the anterolateral tract transmit diverse somatosensory signals to the brain, including touch, temperature, itch, and pain. This group of spinal projection neurons is heterogeneous in their molecular identities, projection targets in the brain, and response properties. While most anterolateral tract projection neurons are multimodal (responding to more than one somatosensory modality), it has been shown that cold-selective projection neurons exist in lamina I of the spinal cord dorsal horn. Using a combination of anatomical and physiological approaches, the authors discovered that the cold-selective lamina I projection neurons are heavily innervated by Trpm8+ sensory neuron axons, with calb1+ spinal projection neurons primarily capturing these cold-selective lamina I projection neurons. These neurons project to specific brain targets, including the PBNrel and cPAG. This study adds to the ongoing effort in the field to identify and characterize spinal projection neuron subtypes, their physiology, and functions.

      Strengths:

      (1) The combination of anatomical and physiological analyses is powerful and offers a comprehensive understanding of the cold-selective lamina I projection neurons in the spinal cord dorsal horn. For example, the authors used detailed anatomical methods, including EM imaging of Trpm8+ axon terminals contacting the Phox2a+ lamina I projection neurons. Additionally, they recorded stimulus-evoked activity in Trpm8-recipient neurons, carefully selected by visual confirmation of tdTomato and GFP juxtaposition, which is technically challenging.

      (2) This study identifies, for the first time, a molecular marker (calb1) that labels cold-selective lamina I projection neurons. Although calb1+ projection neurons are not entirely specific to cold-selective neurons, using an intersectional strategy combined with other genes enriched in this ALS group or cold-induced FosTRAP may further enhance specificity in the future.

      (3) This study shows that cold-selective lamina I projection neurons specifically innervate certain brain targets of the anterolateral tract, including the NTS, PBNrel, and cPAG. This connectivity provides insights into the role of these neurons in cold sensation, which will be an exciting area for future research.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The sample size for the ex vivo electrophysiology is small. Given the difficulty and complexity of the preparation, this is understandable. However, a larger sample size would have strengthened the authors' conclusions.

      (2) The authors used tdTomato expression to identify brain targets innervated by these cold-selective lamina I projection neurons. Since tdTomato is a soluble fluorescent protein that fills the entire cell, using synaptophysin reporters (e.g., synaptophysin-GFP) would have been more convincing in revealing the synaptic targets of these projection neurons.

      (3) The summary cartoon shown in Figure 7 can be misleading because this study did not determine whether these cold-selective lamina I projection neurons have collateral branches to multiple brain targets or if there are anatomical subtypes that may project exclusively to specific targets. For example, a recent study (Ding et al., Neuron, 2025) demonstrated that there are PBN-projecting spinal neurons that do not project to other rostral brain areas. Furthermore, based on the authors' bulk labeling experiments, the three main brain targets are NTS, PBNrel, and cPAG. The VPL projection is very sparse and almost negligible.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors took advantage of a semi-intact ex vivo somatosensory preparation that includes hindlimb skin to characterize the response of projection neurons in the dorsal horn of the spinal cord to peripheral stimulation, including cold thermal stimuli. The main aim was to characterize the connectivity between peripheral afferents expressing the cold-sensing receptor TRPM8 and a set of genetically tagged neurons of the anterolateral system (ALS). These ALS neurons expressed high levels of the calcium-binding protein calbindin 1.

      In addition, combining different viral tracing methods, the authors could identify the anatomical targets of this specific subset of projection neurons within the brainstem and diencephalon.

      Strengths:

      The use of a relatively new (seldom used previously) transgenic line to label TRPM8-expressing afferents, combined with the genetic characterization of a previously identified subset of projection neurons, adds a specificity to the characterization. The transgenic line appears to capture well the subpopulation of Trpm8-expressing neurons

      In addition, the use of electron microscopy techniques makes the interpretation of the structural contacts more compelling.

      The writing is clear, and the presentation of findings follows a logical flow.

      Overall, this study provides solid, novel information about the brain circuits involved in cold thermosensation.

      Weaknesses:

      In the characterization of recorded neurons in close contact or in the absence of this contact with TRPM8 afferents, the number of recorded neurons is relatively low. In addition, the strength of thermal stimuli is not very well controlled, preventing a more precise characterization of the connectivity.

      The authors could provide some sense of the effort needed to record from the 6 cold-activated neurons described. How many preparations were needed, etc?

    3. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Razlan and colleagues provide a detailed anatomical characterization of lamina I projection neurons in the mouse spinal cord that are densely innervated by primary afferents activated by cooling of the skin. The authors, building on their previous anatomical work, validate a Trpm8-Flp mouse line, show synaptic contacts between Trpm8⁺ boutons and projection neurons at the ultrastructural level, and demonstrate at the physiological level that these neurons specifically respond to cooling stimuli. Next, by taking advantage of their previous transcriptomic analysis of ALS neurons, they identify calbindin as a marker for cold-activated lamina I projection neurons and map their ascending projections to the rostral lateral parabrachial area, caudal periaqueductal gray, and ventral posterolateral thalamus, well-known thermosensory and thermoregulatory centers. Altogether, these findings provide strong anatomical and functional evidence for a direct line of transmission from Trpm8⁺ sensory afferents through Calb1⁺ lamina I neurons to key supraspinal centers controlling perception of cold and thermoregulatory responses.

      Strengths:

      The combination of mouse genetics, electron microscopy, ex vivo physiology, and viral tracing provides convincing evidence for a direct cold pathway. The work validates the Trpm8-Flp line by extensive anatomical and molecular characterization. Integration with previous transcriptomic and anatomical data neatly links the cold-selective lamina I neurons to a molecularly defined cluster of ALS neurons, strengthening the bridge between molecular identity, anatomy, and physiological function.

      Weaknesses:

      While anatomical evidence for direct synaptic connectivity between Trpm8+ afferents and lamina I projection neurons is compelling, a physiological demonstration of strict monosynaptic transmission is not shown. The conclusion that these inputs are exclusively monosynaptic should be toned down. Similarly, the statement that "Lamina I ALS neurons that are surrounded by Trpm8 afferents are cold-selective" should also be toned down as only a few neurons have been tested and it cannot be excluded that other neurons with similar characteristics may be polymodal.

    1. In the complete absence of probabilities, Rawls thinks you should play it safe and maximise the minimum you could get (a policy he calls Maximin). Translated into a society, that means that we should ensure that the worst-off people in society do as well as possible.

      So if it doesn't consider "the least of these" it falls short? But how do we know who is the least of these if the Veil hides so much of our personal identities?

    2. The Veil is meant to ensure that people’s concern for their personal benefit could translate into a set of arrangements that were fair for everyone, assuming that they had to stick to those choices once the Veil of Ignorance ‘lifts’, and they are given full information again.

      HOW?! This operates on a lot of assumptions about the willingness and behavior of humans. Maybe I'm not as optimistic as Rawls and therefore the actual issue is that I'm not able to see past my own biases and known facts about myself?

    3. People in the Original Position are assumed to be free and equal, and to have certain motivations: they want to do well for themselves, but they are prepared to adhere to reasonable terms of cooperation, so long as others do too.

      Seemingly, Rawls is starting at a place of believing that will do the right thing as long as others will also agree to doing the right thing. That said, who moves first in doing what is "right"?

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      〔方評〕皮曷云畫?冶容也。畫曷云皮?臭囊也。乃世見容忘臭如王生者,以爲眉若遠山,眼如秋水,云鬢桃腮,櫻唇犀齒,與夫鷄頭乳、楊柳腰、金蓮步、芙蓉脂肉,聚天下之怡情悦目者悉備於此。一旦抱裯獨走,遂逃獅吼之憂;携手同歸,我慰蝶隨之慕,有不待玉體横陳,而魂已消于阿堵矣。蠅拂懸,寢門折,獰鬼口張,心亡肚裂。嗚呼!斬獰鬼首者獰鬼也,非道士也。掬王生心者王生也,非獰鬼也。設獰鬼能不害人,則可以免乎木劍;王生能不漁色,又何至使其妻遭夫亡之慘,復拒食唾之羞?由是觀之,較視玉容爲臭皮囊更爲毛髮悚然。其如狂且之不悟何。

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      〔何評〕魅挑生之言甚工。使非有以自持,無不入其彀中矣。然魅之爲魅可畏,非魅之魅仍可畏,是故君子慎之。道士以蠅拂授王生,終不能救王生之死,是道士不濟。瘋者以咯痰啖生妻,乃竟能致王生之生,彼瘋者何人?

    Annotators

    1. TFIIE, con su acción de helicasa, desenrolla el DNA y TFIIH fosforila la RNA polimerasa II en su dominio CTD, lo que produce su activación

      TFIIH fosforila (le pega un grupo fosfato) a la "cola" de la ARN polimerasa. Ese es el "disparo de salida" que hace que la polimerasa se suelte de todos estos factores y empiece a correr por el gen fabricando el ARN

    2. TFIIE, TFIIH y TFIIJ se acoplan después a este complejo

      Son los últimos en llegar para completar el equipo. Como mencionamos antes, TFIIH es la estrella aquí porque tiene la energía (actividad ATPasa y helicasa) para abrir la doble hélice y permitir que empiece la lectura.

    3. la RNA polimerasa II, formando complejo con TFIIF, se une al promotor

      Entran para estabilizar esa unión. TFIIB es fundamental porque actúa como un puente: por un lado agarra al TFIID y por el otro le dice a la ARN polimerasa II exactamente dónde ponerse.

    4. TFIIA y TFIIB

      Entran para estabilizar esa unión. TFIIB es fundamental porque actúa como un puente: por un lado agarra al TFIID y por el otro le dice a la ARN polimerasa II exactamente dónde ponerse.

    5. TFIIA, TFIIB, TFIID, TFIIE, TFIIF, TFIIH y TFIIJ

      actuan juntos como equipo de ensamblaje para permitir que la polimerasa pueda iniciar la transcripcion

    1. Against the medicine or any allergic molecule that hasalready been used in some way, the body has formedan antibody called "IgE" specific to thatmolecule(antigen).

      Daha önce herhangi bir şekilde kullanılan ilaç ya da alerjiye neden olan bir moleküle karşı, vücut o moleküle (antijene) özgü “IgE” adı verilen bir antikor oluşturmuştur.

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    1. It is a pathergy reaction characterized by the hyperirritable response of the skin inthe form of an erythematous papule or sterile pustule for 24-48 hours to minimaltrauma such as needle sticking.

      Deriye iğne batırma gibi minimal travmalardan sonra 24–48 saat içinde eritemli bir papül veya steril püstül şeklinde gelişen, derinin aşırı duyarlı (hiperirritabl) yanıtı ile karakterize bir paterji reaksiyonudur.

    2. Doctors looking toward a diagnosis of Behçet's disease may attempt to induce apathergy reaction with a test known as a "skin prick test".

      Behçet hastalığı tanısına yönelen doktorlar, “skin prick test” olarak bilinen bir testle paterji reaksiyonunu indüklemeye çalışabilirler.

    3. Presence of at least three of the abovefive symptoms, provided that at leastone of aphthae or genital ulcerations ispresent

      Yukarıdaki beş semptomdan en az üçünün bulunması, bunlardan en az birinin aftlar veya genital ülserasyonlar olması şartıyla.

    4. 1) Aphthae2) Genital ulcerations3) Uveitis4) Dermal Vasculitis5) Arthritis

      Aftlar Genital ülserler Üveit (göz iltihabı) Deri damar iltihabı (dermal vaskülit) Eklem iltihabı (artrit)

      👉 Özet: Ağız + genital + göz + deri + eklem tutulumu.

    5. 1- Ocular form2- Mucocutaneous form3- Arthritis form4- Neurological form

      Ocular form → Göz tutulumu olan form Mucocutaneous form → Ağız ve deri tutulumu olan form Arthritis form → Eklem tutulumu olan form Neurological form → Sinir sistemi tutulumu olan form

    6. (erythema nodosum, subcutaneous thrombophlebitis, excessive skinirritability

      Erythema nodosum → Eritema nodozum (ağrılı, kırmızı deri nodülleri) Subcutaneous thrombophlebitis → Subkutan tromboflebit (deri altı damar iltihabı ve pıhtı) Excessive skin irritability → Aşırı cilt hassasiyeti/reaktivitesi

    7. Skin lesions (erythema nodosum, subcutaneous thrombophlebitis, excessive skinirritability) may be observed.21

      Deri lezyonları (eritema nodozum, subkutan tromboflebit, aşırı cilt irritabilitesi) gözlemlenebilir.

    8. Uveitis and conjunctivitis are the most common inflammatory findings in theeye

      Üveit ve konjonktivit, gözde en sık görülen inflamatuvar bulgulardır.

    9. Ulcers are in the form of minor aphthae and show a typical aphthousdistribution

      Ülserler minor aft formundadır ve tipik aftöz dağılım gösterir.

    10. Vascular inflammatory changes can disrupt the bloodsupply to the area and cause major damage.

      Vasküler inflamatuvar değişiklikler, bölgenin kan akımını bozabilir ve ciddi hasara yol açabilir.

    11. Cardiovascular manifestations occur as a result ofvasculitis and thrombosis. Central nervous systemsymptoms usually present as headache.

      Kardiyovasküler bulgular vaskülit ve tromboz sonucunda ortaya çıkar. Merkezi sinir sistemi belirtileri genellikle baş ağrısı şeklinde görülür.

    12. Histologic lesions are similar to those of delayedhypersensitivity

      Histolojik lezyonlar, gecikmiş tip aşırı duyarlılık (delayed hypersensitivity) reaksiyonlarındaki lezyonlara benzer.

    13. It is thought to occur ingenetically predisposed individuals (racial predisposition) due toimpaired immunoregulation caused by various microbial agentsor environmental factors

      Çeşitli mikrobiyal ajanlar veya çevresel faktörlerin neden olduğu bozulmuş immün düzenleme (immün regülasyon) sonucu, genetik olarak yatkın (ırksal yatkınlığı olan) bireylerde ortaya çıktığı düşünülmektedir.

    14. Although oral manifestations are minor, eye and centralnervous system involvement in particular can be very serious

      Ağız bulguları hafif olsa da, özellikle göz ve merkezi sinir sistemi tutulumu çok ciddi olabilir.

    15. Behçet's disease is a disease in which more than onesystem is involved (gastrointestinal, cardiovascular, eye,central nervous system, joint, lung, skin) and recurrentoral aphthae are seen.

      Behçet hastalığı, birden fazla sistemin (gastrointestinal, kardiyovasküler, göz, merkezi sinir sistemi, eklem, akciğer, deri) tutulduğu ve tekrarlayan oral aftların görüldüğü bir hastalıktır.

    16. Behçet's disease is characterized by vasculitis with atriad of oral, genital and ophthalmic symptoms.

      Behçet hastalığı, oral (ağız), genital ve oftalmik (göz) semptomlardan oluşan bir triad ile birlikte görülen vaskülit ile karakterizedir.

    17. The disease has a chronic course but is benignand tends to improve over time

      Hastalık kronik bir seyir gösterir, ancak benign (iyi huylu) olup zamanla düzelme eğilimindedir.

    18. PFAPA affects children in early childhood;onset is under five years of age.

      PFAPA, erken çocukluk dönemindeki çocukları etkiler; başlangıcı 5 yaşın altındadır.

    19. PFAPA (in English) stands for Periodic Feverwith Aphthae, Pharyngitis, Adenitis. It is themedical term for recurrent episodes of fever,swollen lymph nodes in the throat, sore throatand ulcers in the mouth.

      PFAPA (İngilizce adıyla Periodic Fever with Aphthae, Pharyngitis, Adenitis), Periyodik Ateş, Aftlar, Farenjit ve Adenit ile karakterize bir durumdur. Bu, tekrarlayan ateş atakları, boğazda şişmiş lenf düğümleri, boğaz ağrısı ve ağız içinde ülserlerle seyreden tıbbi bir hastalık terimidir.

    20. It is the formation of aprominent ulcer under the tongue due totrauma of the lower milk sacs in infants whoconstantly stick their tongue out.

      Sürekli dilini dışarı çıkaran bebeklerde, alt süt dişlerinin travmasına bağlı olarak dil altında belirgin bir ülser oluşmasıdır.

    21. A superficialulcer develops on the mucosa over thepterygoid process due to trauma caused bywiping the mouths of infants with a diaperfor cleaning

      Bebeklerin ağızlarının temizlenmesi sırasında bezle silinmesine bağlı travma nedeniyle, pterigoid çıkıntı üzerindeki mukozada yüzeysel bir ülser gelişir.

    22. It is seen on the mobile mucosa, but cansometimes be seen on the back of the tongueand gingiva. It may look similar to malignantulcers.

      Hareketli mukozada görülür, ancak bazen dilin arka kısmında ve gingivada da görülebilir. Malign ülserlere benzer görünebilir.

    23. Clinically, major aphthae have a crater-shapedappearance depending on the depth ofinflammation and may leave scars as they heal.

      Klinik olarak, major aftlar inflamasyonun derinliğine bağlı olarak krater şeklinde bir görünüme sahiptir ve iyileşirken skar (iz) bırakabilir.

    24. t is usually smaller than 5 mm, single, painful, covered witha yellowish fibrinous membrane and surrounded byerythematous ulcers.

      Genellikle 5 mm’den küçüktür, tek (soliter), ağrılıdır, sarımsı fibrinöz bir membranla örtülüdür ve etrafı eritemli ülserlerle çevrilidir.

    25. It is thought to be a response to the increase in heat at the cellular levelcaused by stress

      Stresin neden olduğu hücresel düzeydeki ısı artışına karşı bir yanıt olduğu düşünülmektedir.

    26. Although aphthae are said to increase during the menstrual cycle, there isno evidence that hormone therapy is effective.

      Aftların adet döngüsü sırasında arttığı söylenmesine rağmen, hormon tedavisinin etkili olduğuna dair bir kanıt yoktur.

    27. Recent studies have shown Helicobacter pylori DNA in a smallproportion (2-11%) of recurrent aphthae

      Son çalışmalar, rekürrent (tekrarlayan) aftların küçük bir oranında (%2–11) Helicobacter pylori DNA’sının varlığını göstermiştir.

    28. Autoantibodies against the oral mucosa have been detected in aphthae. Increased HLA-DR-7 antigen. Hereditary !!!

      Aftlarda ağız mukozasına karşı otoantikorlar tespit edilmiştir. HLA-DR-7 antijeninde artış vardır. Kalıtsal (herediter) !!!

    29. It is now believed that T lymphocytes play an important role in the etiology of aphthaeand that they occur due to focal immune dysfunction.

      Günümüzde, T lenfositlerinin aftların etiyolojisinde önemli bir rol oynadığı ve bunların fokal immün (bağışıklık) disfonksiyon nedeniyle ortaya çıktığı kabul edilmektedir.

    30. Autoantibodies against the oral mucosa have been detected in aphthae. Increased HLA-DR-7 antigen. Hereditary !!

      👉 Bu ifade şunu anlatır:

      Aftlarda vücut kendi ağız mukozasına karşı bağışıklık tepkisi oluşturabilir (otoimmün mekanizma) Bazı kişilerde HLA-DR7 genetik tipi daha sık bulunur Bu da genetik yatkınlık (herediter predispozisyon) olduğunu düşündürür

    31. The presence of streptococcus sangius, adenovirus type 1 and HSV 1 in some aphthous lesionssuggested infectious etiology. HSV 1 could not be cultured

      Bazı aftöz lezyonlarda Streptococcus sanguis, adenovirüs tip 1 ve HSV-1’in (Herpes simpleks virüs tip 1) varlığının saptanması, enfeksiyöz bir etiyolojiyi düşündürmüştür. HSV-1 ise kültürde üretilememiştir.

    32. Some individuals have been found to have a positive family history. Geneticpredisposition

      Bazı bireylerde pozitif aile öyküsü olduğu tespit edilmiştir. Genetik yatkınlık?

    33. Aphthae is a painful ulceration that occurs when a vesicle thatforms in the epithelium bursts in a very short time.

      Aft, epitel içinde oluşan bir vezikülün (su dolu kabarcığın) çok kısa sürede patlaması sonucu ortaya çıkan ağrılı bir ülserasyondur.

    34. Extensive ulcerations of the oral mucosa, often with oval-shapederythematous borders with distinct borders.

      Ağız mukozasında yaygın ülserasyonlar, sıklıkla oval şekilli, çevresi kızarık (eritemli) ve sınırları belirgin lezyonlar şeklinde görülür.

    35. APHTHOUS DISEASES

      Aphthous diseases (aftöz hastalıklar), ağız içinde tekrarlayan aft yaraları (aphthous ulcers) ile karakterize hastalık grubudur. Aft yarası (aphthous ulcer), ağız içinde görülen küçük, yüzeysel ama çok ağrılı ülserlerdir.

    Annotators

    1. The basis for recognizing a unit can be its age, its component sequence of lithologies, and the character of its bedding.

      is one of these methods better or more reliable than any of the others?

    1. espace d’amitié, d’entraide, de soutien,

      Je ne suis pas entièrement d’accord : le chat vocal ne crée pas toujours de la proximité et de l'amitié. Pour certains (femmes, débutants), il peut au contraire générer de l'exclusion ou de l'hostilité.

    2. Plus l’identité est reliée à des comptes uniques et à des traces persistantes, plus la question devient sensible

      Faut‑il plus d’anonymat pour protéger les joueurs, ou plus de traçabilité pour limiter la toxicité ?

    1. Consultad la previsión meteorológica el día anterior. Si la previsión es mala, estudiad alternativas de fechas o frente a la imposibilidad de transformar la entrevista a un formato tradicional en interior. Enviad un recordatorio a la persona participante para confirmar los detalles del encuentro y evitad ausencias, sobre todo en el caso de haberla agendado con bastante antelación. Antes de iniciar la caminata, comprobad que todos los aparatos de grabación y el móvil estén funcionando correctamente. Ropa y calzado cómodos, dado que se estará caminando durante el transcurso de la entrevista. Delimitad un perímetro claro por el que se camina, y controlar no saliros de los límites establecidos. Dentro de estos, mantened la libertad de la persona entrevistada para vagar. Estad preparados para los cambios inesperados durante el trayecto y para la posibilidad de que se incorpore alguna persona, ruidos u otras interrupciones durante la caminada. Generad una conversación de confianza fluida y natural. El movimiento puede ayudar a ello. Si usáis vídeo, hay que asegurar su buen uso. Una vez finalizada la entrevista, reiterad las gracias a la persona participante tras la entrevista, mantened los canales abiertos de comunicación y, cuando sea posible, compartid los resultados relevantes del estudio

      empezar siempre en infinitivo y usar el impersonal

    1. La entrevista como técnica de investigación social: Notas para los jóvenes investigadores Texto breve y claro que introduce reflexiones críticas sobre la entrevista desde una perspectiva latinoamericana, especialmente útil en contextos comunitarios.

      borrar

    2. Adaptad la entrevista al nivel de conocimiento, lenguaje y motivación de la persona entrevistada. La persona entrevistadora debe asegurar un clima adecuado, manteniendo el equilibrio de poder y evitando actitudes jerárquicas que afecten la conversación (Íñiguez, 2008). Mantened una actitud cordial y facilitadora, empática y clara en el papel de entrevistadora. Adaptad el desarrollo de la entrevista al marco de referencia de la persona entrevistada. La entrevista debe promover la confianza, el respeto mutuo y la comprensión, sin forzar respuestas ni imponer significados (Íñiguez, 2008). Es fundamental que respetéis los tiempos, asegurad la confidencialidad, cuidad el registro y el entorno, y garantizad una dinámica fluida y respetuosa.

      empezar todos los verbos en infinitivo: Adaptar, Mantener...etc

    1. Recursos

      después de recursos poner un apartado de Referencias: Muñoz Rodríguez, D. I., Carmona Rodríguez, C. ., & Bell Sebastián, J. . (2022). Photo-Voice as an Innovative Methodology in Higher Education: A Systematic Review. TECHNO REVIEW. International Technology, Science and Society Review /Revista Internacional De Tecnología, Ciencia Y Sociedad, 11(3), 1–20. https://doi.org/10.37467/revtechno.v11.3795

      Wang, C., & Burris, M. A. (1997). Photovoice: Concept, methodology, and use for participatory needs assessment. Health Education & Behavior, 24(3), 369–387.

    2. Explicad con claridad los objetivos del proceso desde el inicio; de esta forma estaréis creando un canal de comunicación para solventar las dudas que puedan surgir en la recolección de imágenes. Recopilad las imágenes previamente a la sesión de reflexión y cuidad la calidad en la impresión, porque la presentación de las fotografías da valor al trabajo realizado por las personas participantes. Durante la dinamización de la sesión de reflexión, favoreced un ambiente de confianza para la expresión de las percepciones. Adaptad las herramientas y materiales a las características del grupo. Considerad la accesibilidad y disponibilidad tecnológica de las personas participantes

      iniciar siempre con el verbo en infinitivo: Explicar, recopilar..etc

    1. Even at its most strident resistance to the ungodliness of American culture, there is a sense in which Christians ought to be good societal participants, even as our citizenship is elsewhere

    2. the aims of Babylon/Rome are fundamentally opposed to the mission of the church, since Rome declares that Caesar is Lord and Christianity proclaims that Jesus is Lord

      it's interesting to say that conversion is conversion into a new narrative in which my allegiance is to Jesus and anything that aims to subvert that allegiance is to be resisted — perhaps not always openly, but insistently

    3. Ought we to see America as the Babylon of today? I know that there are lots of people on the cultural margins who do — ought we to agree with them in solidarity, or use the resources that we have and influence we have to further the kingdom?

    4. Interesting to see the cultural negotiation as a middle ground between conformity and resistance

      Again, I think that the evangelical church is in a different place than the church of 1Pet's day but

    5. I'm not sure that we do a good job of this overall; or even to what extent non-immigrant churches have an obligation to do this? The NT churches are immigrant churches on the margins, and they embrace that

    6. To what extent might this be applied to GA church today? To achieve an apologetic purpose by the conduct of our households

      I'm not sure that there still would be one— given that the conduct of the household isn't as intensely scrutinized as it was back then

      Maybe in LA or other secular areas, having really dominant complementarianism might be hard for witness

    Annotators

    1. Recursos

      Añadir: Guía Mapeando el CuerpoTerritorio Guía metodológica para mujeres que defienden sus territorios La guía metodológica, creada por el colectivo Miradas Críticas del Territorio desde el Feminismo, ofrece una metodología participativa para mujeres defensoras de sus territorios. Visibiliza la conexión entre cuerpo y espacio frente a violencias patriarcales y extractivistas, promoviendo reflexión colectiva, empoderamiento y estrategias comunitarias para proteger vida y tierra

      https://territorioyfeminismos.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/11/mapeando-el-cuerpo-territorio.pdf

      Al final, añadir:

      **Otros recursos: ** Mapas Satelites Pro (linkar: https://satellites.pro/) Open Street Maps (linkar: https://www.openstreetmap.org)

      Íconos Flaticon (linkar: https://www.flaticon.es/) Noun Project (Linkar https://thenounproject.com/)

    2. Asegurad una representación fiel de la comunidad, involucrando a grupos normalmente infrarrepresentados. Estableced una primera ronda para que todas las personas participantes tengan la oportunidad de aportar a la dinámica. Definid si implementaréis pautas de participación, como establecer un número máximo de iconos o elementos por persona o definir categorías mínimas requeridas. Reconoced y valorad el conocimiento y la experiencia de las comunidades, evitando la imposición de perspectivas externas o narrativas dominantes. Si surgen aportaciones contradictorias, documentad y reconoced los diferentes puntos de vista. Estas diferencias pueden explorarse con más profundidad en otra sesión o registrarse como parte del proceso de mapeo. Asignad a uno o más participantes para documentar el proceso, asegurando que se conserven todas las ideas, los debates y los resultados visuales. Proporcionad apoyo técnico si es necesario. Compartid los hallazgos con los participantes

      iniciar siempre en infinitivo: Asegurar; Establecer; etc

    1. Identificación de actores clave: reconocer a las personas y grupos con mayor influencia en el contexto analizado. Mapeo de redes y relaciones: comprender las conexiones existentes entre los actores y cómo estas pueden facilitar o dificultar la implementación de proyectos comunitarios. Detección de conflictos y alianzas: permite visualizar tensiones o posibles colaboraciones entre los diferentes actores. Diseño de estrategias de intervención: basado en el análisis del sociograma, se pueden definir acciones para fortalecer relaciones, mitigar conflictos o mejorar la cohesión social. Monitoreo de cambios en el espacio social analizado: al aplicarlo en diferentes momentos, se pueden observar dinámicas en las interacciones y evaluar la evolución de los procesos comunitarios.

      empezar siempre con infinitivo : Identificar; Mapear; detectar...etc

    1. Recordar que no todas las personas tenemos por qué aplicar las mismas herramientas. Si se considera que estas herramientas no son las idóneas, pero tienen valor, se puede contar con otros estudiantes o profesionales que puedan ayudar en el trabajo de campo.

      borrar

    1. Testeo performático: Taller de priorización: ordenar de forma colectiva las propuestas según diferentes criterios para poder seleccionar y rechazar acciones.

      borrar

    2. Photovoice: los diagnósticos comunitarios sobre problemáticas urbanas permiten que los habitantes capturen imágenes que reflejan sus percepciones y experiencias del entorno estudiado, facilitando la identificación de problemáticas como la falta de infraestructura, la inseguridad o la degradación del entorno desde una perspectiva vivencial.

      borrar

    1. eLife Assessment

      This study presents data suggesting that excitatory cholecystokinin (CCK)-expressing neurons in hippocampal area CA3 influence hippocampal-dependent memory using multiple methods to manipulate excitatory CCK-expressing CA3 neurons. The study is valuable, particularly considering that most past studies of CCK-expressing neurons have focused on those neurons that co-express CCK and GABA. Currently, the strength of evidence is incomplete, but it would improve if evidence of specificity was provided and other concerns were addressed. If this is not possible, the conclusions, particularly those requiring evidence of specific targeting of excitatory neurons, should be modified accordingly.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      CCK is the most abundant neuropeptide in the brain, and many studies have investigated the role of CCK and inhibitory CCK interneurons in modulating neural circuits, especially in the hippocampus. The manuscript presents interesting questions regarding the role of excitatory CCK+ neurons in the hippocampus, which has been much less studied compared to the well-known roles of inhibitory CCK neurons in regulating network function. The authors adopt several methods including transgenic mice and viruses, optogenetics, chemogenetics, RNAi, and behavioral tasks to explore these less-studied roles of excitatory CCK neurons in CA3. They find that the excitatory CCK neurons are involved in hippocampal-dependent tasks such as spatial learning and memory formation, and that CCK-knockdown impairs these tasks.

      However, these questions are very dependent on ensuring that the study is properly targeting excitatory CCK neurons (and thus their specific contributions to behavior).

      There needs to be much more characterization of the CCK transgenic mice and viruses to confirm the targeting. Without this, it is unclear whether the study is looking at excitatory CCK neurons or a more general heterogeneous CCK neuron population.

      Strengths:

      This field has focused mainly on inhibitory CCK+ interneurons and their role in network function and activity, and thus this manuscript raises interesting questions regarding the role of excitatory CCK+ neurons, which have been much less studied.

      Weaknesses:

      (1a) This manuscript is dependent on ensuring that the study is indeed investigating the role of excitatory CCK-expressing neurons themselves and their specific contribution to behavior. There needs to be much more characterization of the CCK-expressing mice (crossed with Ai14 or transduced with various viruses) to confirm the excitatory-cell targeting. Without this, it is unclear whether the study is looking at excitatory CCK neurons or a more general heterogeneous CCK neuron population.

      (2) The methods and figure legends are still extremely sparse, still leading to many questions regarding methodology and accuracy. More details would be useful in evaluating the tools and data, and the lack of proper quantification is still prevalent throughout the paper. In many places, only % values are noted, or only images are presented, and the number of cells counted is almost never reported.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors have demonstrated, through a comprehensive approach combining electrophysiology, chemogenetics, fiber photometry, RNA interference, and multiple behavioral tasks, the necessity of projections from CCK+ CAMKIIergic neurons in the hippocampal CA3 region to the CA1 region for regulating spatial memory in mice. Specifically, authors have shown that CA3-CCK CAMKIIergic neurons are selectively activated by novel locations during a spatial memory task. Furthermore, authors have identified the CA3-CA1 pathway as crucial for this spatial working memory function, thereby suggesting a pivotal role for CA3 excitatory CCK neurons in influencing CA1 LTP. The data presented appear to be well-organized and comprehensive.

      Strengths:

      (1) This work combined various methods to validate the excitatory CCK neurons in the CA3 area; these data are convincing and solid.

      (2) This study demonstrated that the CA3-CCK CAMKIIergic neurons are involved in the spatial memory tasks; these are interesting findings, which suggest that these neurons are important targets for manipulating the memory-related diseases.

      (3) This manuscript also measured the endogenous CCK from the CA3-CCK CAMKIIergic neurons; this means that CCK can be released under certain conditions.

      Weaknesses:

      In summary, this work can be formally accepted after the revision. For the limitations of the revision, the distinct neural effects of cholecystokinin (CCK) receptors (CCK-1R, CCK-2R, and CCK-3R) on hippocampal function have not been fully elucidated. Recent studies indicate that CCK-2R can modulate hippocampal activity at CA3-Schaffer collateral synapses; however, the roles of CCK-1R and CCK-3R in hippocampal function remain poorly characterized, with limited experimental evidence supporting their involvement. Overall, this study provides an interesting and novel perspective on the role of excitatory CCK signaling in hippocampus-dependent navigation learning.

    4. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fengwen Huang et al. used multiple neuroscience techniques (transgenetic mouse, immunochemistry, bulk calcium recording, neural sensor, hippocampal-dependent task, optogenetics, chemogenetics, and interfer RNA technique) to elucidate the role of the excitatory cholecystokinin-positive pyramidal neurons in the hippocampus in regulating the hippocampal functions, including navigation and neuroplasticity.

      Strengths:

      (i) The authors provided the distribution profiles of excitatory cholecystokinin in the dorsal hippocampus via the transgenetic mice (Ai14::CCK Cre mice), immunochemistry, and retrograde AAV.

      (ii) The authors used the neural sensor and light stimulation to monitor the CCK release from the CA3 area, indicating that CCK can be secreted by activation of the excitatory CCK neurons.

      (iii) The authors showed that the activity of the excitatory CCK neurons in CA3 is necessary for navigation learning

      (iv) The authors demonstrated that inhibition of the excitatory CCK neurons and knockdown of the CCK gene expression in CA3 impaired the navigation learning and the neuroplasticity of CA3-CA1 projections.

      Weaknesses:

      (i) The causal relationship between navigation learning and CCK secretion remains nebulous; answering this question will require a more sensitive CCK-BR sensor in future work.

    5. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      CCK is the most abundant neuropeptide in the brain, and many studies have investigated the role of CCK and inhibitory CCK interneurons in modulating neural circuits, especially in the hippocampus. The manuscript presents interesting questions regarding the role of excitatory CCK+ neurons in the hippocampus, which has been much less studied compared to the well-known roles of inhibitory CCK neurons in regulating network function. The authors adopt several methods, including transgenic mice and viruses, optogenetics, chemogenetics, RNAi, and behavioral tasks to explore these less-studied roles of excitatory CCK neurons in CA3. They find that the excitatory CCK neurons are involved in hippocampal-dependent tasks such as spatial learning and memory formation, and that CCK-knockdown impairs these tasks.

      However, these questions are very dependent on ensuring that the study is properly targeting excitatory CCK neurons (and thus their specific contributions to behavior). There needs to be much more characterization of the CCK transgenic mice and viruses to confirm the targeting. Without this, it is unclear whether the study is looking at excitatory CCK neurons or a more general heterogeneous CCK neuron population.

      Strengths:

      This field has focused mainly on inhibitory CCK+ interneurons and their role in network function and activity, and thus, this manuscript raises interesting questions regarding the role of excitatory CCK+ neurons, which have been much less studied.

      Weaknesses:

      (1a) This manuscript is dependent on ensuring that the study is indeed investigating the role of excitatory CCK-expressing neurons themselves and their specific contribution to behavior. There needs to be much more characterization of the CCK-expressing mice (crossed with Ai14 or transduced with various viruses) to confirm the excitatory-cell targeting. Without this, it is unclear whether the study is looking at excitatory CCK neurons or a more general heterogeneous CCK neuron population.

      Thank you for this constructive comment. Indeed, the current study lacks comprehensive strategies to unequivocally distinguish excitatory CCK neurons from heterogeneous CCK neuronal populations. Nevertheless, we provide multiple lines of evidence supporting the distribution of CaMKIIα/Vglut1-expressing CCK<sup>+</sup> neurons in the hippocampus (Figure 1F), using complementary approaches including transgenic mouse models as well as viral and antibody-based labeling (Figure 1A, Figure 1H-I). In addition, we demonstrate that 635 nm light reliably evokes field excitatory postsynaptic potentials (fEPSPs) at CA3-Schaffer collateral synapses expressing DIO-CaMKIIα-ChrimsonR in vitro (Figure 2A-F). Importantly, these light-evoked excitatory synaptic responses are abolished by AMPA and NMDA receptor antagonists (CNQX and APV), confirming the excitatory nature of the DIO-CaMKIIα-ChrimsonR-expressing synapses. To demonstrate the future works that can further support our findings and conclusions, we have added the strategies that can be conducted in the Discussion section in the revision:

      “Due to technical limitations at the current stage, we were unable to perform whole-cell recordings or pharmacological manipulations using CCK receptor antagonists. In future studies, the application of these approaches to directly record and selectively block EPSPs from excitatory CCK neurons in the hippocampus will further strengthen and validate our conclusions.” (Line 265 - line 269 in the revision).

      (1b) For the experiments that use a virus with the CCK-IRES-Cre mouse, there is no information or characterization on how well the virus targets excitatory CCK-expressing neurons. (Additionally, it has been reported that with CaMKIIa-driven protein expression, using viruses, can be seen in both pyramidal and inhibitory cells.

      We thank the reviewer for this insightful comment regarding the specificity of viral targeting in CCK-IRES-Cre mice.

      To address this concern, we performed additional characterization of viral expression in CA3. We found that DIO-CaMKIIα-mCherry expression showed a high degree of colocalization with CaMKIIα immunoreactivity, indicating preferential targeting of excitatory neurons (sFigure 1A-B; sFigure 2A-B; sFigure 3A-B). We showed an example to confirmed the high specificity of the AAV for infecting the excitatory CCK neurons in CA3 area.

      Besides, we acknowledge prior reports showing that CaMKIIα-driven viral expression can, in some cases, be detected in a small subset of inhibitory neurons. However, because CA3-Schaffer collateral projections to CA1 arise exclusively from excitatory CA3 pyramidal neurons, any potential expression in inhibitory CCK<sup>+</sup> interneurons are unlikely to directly contribute to the recorded CA1 synaptic responses in our electrophysiological experiments. That said, we cannot fully exclude the possibility that a minor population of inhibitory CCK⁺ neurons could indirectly modulate CA3 pyramidal neuron activity via local circuit mechanisms, particularly in experiments involving optogenetic manipulation or shRNA expression. We now explicitly acknowledge this limitation in the revised manuscript:

      “Importantly, to further improve cell-type specificity, we propose an intersectional genetic strategy using CCK-IRES-Cre × VGlut1-Flp mice combined with a Cre-On/Flp-On (Con/Fon) AAV, which would restrict expression exclusively to excitatory CCK-expressing neurons and eliminate potential contributions from inhibitory CCK<sup>+</sup> cells. This approach will be implemented in future studies to refine circuit specificity.” (Line 269 - line 273 in the revision).

      (2) The methods and figure legends are extremely sparse, leading to many questions regarding methodology and accuracy. More details would be useful in evaluating the tools and data. More details would be useful in evaluating the tools and data. Additionally, further quantification would be useful-e.g. in some places, only % values are noted, or only images are presented.

      Thank you for these constructive comments. We have expanded the methodological descriptions in both the Methods section and the figure legends to provide sufficient detail for evaluating the experimental tools and data accuracy. In addition, we have added quantitative analyses where previously only representative images or percentage values were shown. Specifically, quantification has now been included for each AAV condition in the corresponding figures in the revised manuscript.

      (3) It is unclear whether the reduced CCK expression is correlated, or directly causing the impairments in hippocampal function. Does the CCK-shRNA have any additional detrimental effects besides affecting CCK-expression (e.g., is the CCK-shRNA also affecting some other essential (but not CCK-related) aspect of the neuron itself?)? Is there any histology comparison between the shRNA and the scrambled shRNA?

      Recent studies from our lab demonstrated that knockout the CCK gene expression significantly attenuates the hippocampal-dependent spatial learning and CA3-CA1 LTP, indicating CCK plays a critical role in modulating the hippocampal functions[1,2]. Additionally, CCK-shRNA or CCK-scramble did not significantly affect the excitatory synaptic transmission in the CA3-CA1 projections, hinting that CCK-shRNA may exhibits no obvious adverse effect on other neural components.

      Finally, we have provided the histology comparison between the shRNA and the scrambled shRNA regrading the expression level of the CCK protein (Pro-CCK) in the revision. Our result shows that CCK-shRNA (left panel) significantly reduced CCK expression in CA3<sup>CCK</sup>-positive neurons compared with the CCK-Scramble group (right panel).

      Citation:

      (1) Wang, J. L., Sha, X. Y., Shao, Y., Zhang, Z. H., Huang, S. M., Lin, H., ... & Sun, J. P. (2025). Elucidating pathway-selective biased CCKBR agonism for Alzheimer’s disease treatment. Cell.

      (2) Zhang, N., Sui, Y., Jendrichovsky, P., Feng, H., Shi, H., Zhang, X., ... & He, J. (2024). Cholecystokinin B receptor agonists alleviates anterograde amnesia in cholecystokinin-deficient and aged Alzheimer's disease mice. Alzheimer's research & therapy, 16(1), 109.

      https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.109001.1.sa2

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors have demonstrated, through a comprehensive approach combining electrophysiology, chemogenetics, fiber photometry, RNA interference, and multiple behavioral tasks, the necessity of projections from CCK+ CAMKIIergic neurons in the hippocampal CA3 region to the CA1 region for regulating spatial memory in mice. Specifically, authors have shown that CA3-CCK CAMKIIergic neurons are selectively activated by novel locations during a spatial memory task. Furthermore, authors have identified the CA3-CA1 pathway as crucial for this spatial working memory function, thereby suggesting a pivotal role for CA3 excitatory CCK neurons in influencing CA1 LTP. The data presented appear to be well-organized and comprehensive.

      Strengths:

      (1) This work combined various methods to validate the excitatory CCK neurons in the CA3 area; these data are convincing and solid.

      (2) This study demonstrated that the CA3-CCK CAMKIIergic neurons are involved in the spatial memory tasks; these are interesting findings, which suggest that these neurons are important targets for manipulating the memory-related diseases.

      (3) This manuscript also measured the endogenous CCK from the CA3-CCK CAMKIIergic neurons; this means that CCK can be released under certain conditions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors do not mention which receptors of the CCK modulate these processes.

      We appreciate the reviewer for raising this important question. Based on our recent work, CCK-B receptors are the primary neural components mediating CCK functions in the hippocampus at both the synaptic plasticity and behavioral levels (Su et al., 2023; Zhang et al., 2024; Wang et al., 2025). To clarify this mechanism, we have added the following content to the revised manuscript:

      “Based on our recent work, CCK signaling in the hippocampus is predominantly mediated by CCK-B receptors, which play a critical role in regulating synaptic plasticity and spatial memory-related behaviors.” (Line 105 - line 106 in the revision).

      (2) This author does not test the CCK gene knockout mice or the CCK receptor knockout mice in these neural processes.

      Thank you for this insightful comment. We previously tested these experiments in an earlier study. Our results showed that high-frequency electrical stimulation failed to induce significant LTP in the CA3-CA1 pathway in both CCK gene knockout (CCK-KO) mice and CCK-B receptor knockout (CCK-BR-KO) mice in vitro (Su et al., 2023; Zhang et al., 2024; Wang et al., 2025). These findings indicate that CCK mediates its synaptic effects predominantly through CCK-B receptors in the CA3-CA1 pathway. Accordingly, we have added this description to the revised manuscript.

      “Additionally, high-frequency electrical stimulation fails to induce LTP in the CA3-CA1 pathway in both CCK-KO and CCK-BR-KO mice, indicating that CCK-dependent synaptic plasticity in this circuit is primarily mediated by CCK-B receptors.” (Line 170 - line 173 in the revision).

      (3) The author does not test the source of CCK release during the behavioral tasks.

      We thank the reviewer for raising this important point. In our previous work, we directly monitored CCK release in the hippocampus during an object-exploration task using a GPCR-based CCK-BR sensor combined with fiber photometry (Su et al., 2023). During object exploration, we observed a rapid and robust increase in CCK-BR sensor fluorescence, indicating activity-dependent CCK release in the hippocampus. Based on these findings, we deduced that hippocampal CCK release plays a critical role in hippocampus-dependent behavioral tasks.

      We acknowledge that hippocampal neurons receive CCK-positive projections from multiple brain regions, making it technically challenging to isolate and monitor the precise source of CCK release in the CA1 area during behavioral tasks in vivo. One potential strategy to address this limitation is selective overexpression of CCK in CA3 neurons (e.g., AAV-CCK delivery), followed by assessment of CCK-BR sensor responses during hippocampal-dependent behaviors. We have added this discussion to the revised manuscript to clarify the source and functional relevance of CCK release during behavioral tasks.

      “Besides, using a GPCR-based CCK-BR sensor combined with fiber photometry, our previous work demonstrated rapid, activity-dependent CCK release in the hippocampus during object-exploratory behavior, supporting a functional role for hippocampal CCK signaling in cognitive tasks (Su et al., 2023). Given that hippocampal neurons receive CCK-positive projections from multiple brain regions, it remains technically challenging to precisely identify the cellular source of CCK release in CA1 during behavior. Future studies employing selective CCK overexpression in CA3 neurons, together with CCK-BR sensor recordings, may help further delineate the contribution of CA3-derived CCK to hippocampal-dependent behaviors.” (Line 313 - line 321 in the revision).

      Citation:

      (1) Wang, J. L., Sha, X. Y., Shao, Y., Zhang, Z. H., Huang, S. M., Lin, H., ... & Sun, J. P. (2025). Elucidating pathway-selective biased CCKBR agonism for Alzheimer’s disease treatment. Cell.

      (2) Zhang, N., Sui, Y., Jendrichovsky, P., Feng, H., Shi, H., Zhang, X., ... & He, J. (2024). Cholecystokinin B receptor agonists alleviates anterograde amnesia in cholecystokinin-deficient and aged Alzheimer's disease mice. Alzheimer's research & therapy, 16(1), 109.

      (3) Su, J., Huang, F., Tian, Y., Tian, R., Qianqian, G., Bello, S. T., ... & He, J. (2023). Entorhinohippocampal cholecystokinin modulates spatial learning by facilitating neuroplasticity of hippocampal CA3-CA1 synapses. Cell Reports, 42(12).

      https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.109001.1.sa1

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fengwen Huang et al. used multiple neuroscience techniques (transgenetic mouse, immunochemistry, bulk calcium recording, neural sensor, hippocampal-dependent task, optogenetics, chemogenetics, and interfer RNA technique) to elucidate the role of the excitatory cholecystokinin-positive pyramidal neurons in the hippocampus in regulating the hippocampal functions, including navigation and neuroplasticity.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors provided the distribution profiles of excitatory cholecystokinin in the dorsal hippocampus via the transgenetic mice (Ai14::CCK Cre mice), immunochemistry, and retrograde AAV.

      (2) The authors used the neural sensor and light stimulation to monitor the CCK release from the CA3 area, indicating that CCK can be secreted by activation of the excitatory CCK neurons.

      (3) The authors showed that the activity of the excitatory CCK neurons in CA3 is necessary for navigation learning.

      (4) The authors demonstrated that inhibition of the excitatory CCK neurons and knockdown of the CCK gene expression in CA3 impaired the navigation learning and the neuroplasticity of CA3-CA1 projections.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The causal relationship between navigation learning and CCK secretion?

      Thank you for pointing out this important issue. Previous studies have shown that CCK can be rapidly secreted during exploratory behaviors, as detected by the CCK-BR sensor. In parallel, CCK-positive neurons have been demonstrated to play a critical role in the precise execution of hippocampus-dependent spatial learning. Together, these findings suggest that exploratory behavior induces CCK secretion, which in turn contributes to the accuracy of hippocampal-dependent learning and memory processes. Based on this evidence, we propose that CCK secretion serves as a functional link between behavioral exploration and spatial learning. We have added these explanations in the revised manuscript to better clarify the causal relationship between behavioral exploration and CCK secretion:

      “Besides, using a GPCR-based CCK-BR sensor combined with fiber photometry, our previous work demonstrated rapid, activity-dependent CCK release in the hippocampus during object-exploratory behavior, supporting a functional role for hippocampal CCK signaling in cognitive tasks (Su et al., 2023). Given that hippocampal neurons receive CCK-positive projections from multiple brain regions, it remains technically challenging to precisely identify the cellular source of CCK release in CA1 during behavior. Future studies employing selective CCK overexpression in CA3 neurons, together with CCK-BR sensor recordings, may help further delineate the contribution of CA3-derived CCK to hippocampal-dependent behaviors.” (Line 313 - line 321 in the revision)

      (2) The effect of overexpression of the CCK gene on hippocampal functions?

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. In fact, an earlier study from our laboratory demonstrated that intraperitoneal injection of exogenous CCK-4 significantly improved performance in hippocampus-dependent spatial learning tasks in both CCK gene knockout (CCK-KO) mice and Alzheimer’s disease (AD) mouse models. These findings suggest that enhancing CCK signaling can ameliorate hippocampal dysfunction at both the behavioral and synaptic plasticity levels (Zhang et al., 2024; Wang et al., 2025). Accordingly, although direct genetic overexpression of CCK in the hippocampus has not yet been extensively characterized, the observed benefits of exogenous CCK delivery support the notion that increased CCK availability positively modulates hippocampal function and spatial learning. We have cited this study in the revised manuscript to support this interpretation.

      “Interestingly, an earlier study demonstrated that intraperitoneal injection of exogenous CCK-4 significantly improved performance in hippocampus-dependent spatial learning tasks in both CCK gene knockout (CCK-KO) mice and Alzheimer’s disease (AD) mouse models (Zhang et al., 2024). These findings suggest that enhancing CCK signaling can ameliorate hippocampal dysfunction at both the behavioral and synaptic plasticity levels.” (Line 291 - line 297 in the revision)

      (3) What are the functional differences between the excitatory and inhibitory CCK neurons in the hippocampus?

      In the hippocampus, CCK-expressing neurons consist of two major populations with distinct functions: excitatory (glutamatergic) and inhibitory (GABAergic) neurons. Excitatory CCK neurons are relatively sparse and intermingled with pyramidal cells. By releasing glutamate, they directly contribute to excitatory transmission and are thought to participate in synaptic plasticity and information processing related to learning and memory. In contrast, inhibitory CCK neurons are more abundant and include well-characterized interneuron subtypes such as CCK-positive basket cells. These neurons release GABA and primarily target the perisomatic region of pyramidal neurons, providing strong control over neuronal firing. Notably, inhibitory CCK interneurons are highly sensitive to neuromodulatory signals, particularly endocannabinoids via CB1 receptors, enabling dynamic regulation of inhibitory tone and network activity. Together, excitatory CCK neurons mainly support hippocampal excitation and plasticity, whereas inhibitory CCK neurons regulate network dynamics and spike timing. As the focus of the present study is on excitatory CCK neurons, a detailed comparison between these two populations was not included in the original manuscript.

      (4) Do CCK sources come from the local CA3 or entorhinal cortex (EC) during the high-frequency electrical stimulation?

      Thank you for this insightful comment. Our data indicate that the CCK detected during high-frequency stimulation originates from CA3 neurons rather than the entorhinal cortex (EC). As shown in Figure 2, we used an optogenetic approach combined with a GPCR-based CCK sensor to selectively examine CCK release from the CA3-CA1 pathway. ChrimsonR was specifically expressed in CA3 neurons projecting to CA1, restricting light stimulation to CA3 axon terminals. In parallel, the CCK sensor was locally expressed in CA1, allowing real-time detection of CCK release at CA3 presynaptic sites. High-frequency light stimulation robustly evoked CCK signals in CA1, demonstrating activity-dependent CCK release from CA3 terminals. Importantly, EC inputs were neither genetically targeted nor optically stimulated in this experiment, excluding the EC as a source of the detected CCK. Together, these results support the conclusion that CCK released during high-frequency stimulation is derived from local CA3 projections to CA1. Similarly, as the focus of the present study is on excitatory CCK neurons in the CA3 area, a detailed comparison between these two CCK sources was not included in the original manuscript.

      Citation:

      (4) Wang, J. L., Sha, X. Y., Shao, Y., Zhang, Z. H., Huang, S. M., Lin, H., ... & Sun, J. P. (2025). Elucidating pathway-selective biased CCKBR agonism for Alzheimer’s disease treatment. Cell.

      (5) Zhang, N., Sui, Y., Jendrichovsky, P., Feng, H., Shi, H., Zhang, X., ... & He, J. (2024). Cholecystokinin B receptor agonists alleviates anterograde amnesia in cholecystokinin-deficient and aged Alzheimer's disease mice. Alzheimer's research & therapy, 16(1), 109.

      (6) Su, J., Huang, F., Tian, Y., Tian, R., Qianqian, G., Bello, S. T., ... & He, J. (2023). Entorhinohippocampal cholecystokinin modulates spatial learning by facilitating neuroplasticity of hippocampal CA3-CA1 synapses. Cell Reports, 42(12).

    1. eLife Assessment

      Using isolated frog brainstem preparations, pharmacological manipulation of excitability, systematic extracellular unit mapping, and focal microinjections, this study provides important findings on whether the buccal rhythm generator is a discrete anatomical nucleus or a distributed, state-dependent network. The question is conceptually significant and of interest to researchers working within respiratory neurobiology and rhythmogenicity in general, and the preparation and experimental strategy are generally appropriate. However, the evidence for the strongest architectural claims is incomplete, with pseudoreplication in pooled unit-mapping analyses, inconsistent statistical reporting, and limited controls in necessity/sufficiency experiments. Overall, although data are largely convincing, substantial revision and more nuanced interpretation of the results are required before claims of state-dependent architectural reorganization can be considered well-supported.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors test whether the frog buccal ventilatory rhythm generator behaves as a discrete, anatomically localized oscillator or as a distributed, state-dependent network. They combine reduced preparations (segment/subsegment work), systematic extracellular unit surveys over a defined grid, and local AMPA/GABA microinjections in a hemisected brainstem preparation. Based on these approaches, the authors conclude that mild global excitation (bath AMPA) broadens the distribution of rhythmically active units and renders a previously defined "buccal area" functionally non-identifiable as a unique necessary/sufficient locus.

      The central idea is plausible, and the overall experimental strategy is appropriate for the question being asked. However, in its current form, the manuscript overstates the strength of inference supporting the "expansion" and "loss of necessity/sufficiency" conclusions. This is primarily due to (a) statistical treatment of unit-mapping data that does not respect clustering by preparation/animal, (b) inconsistent statistical reporting across sections, and (c) limited interpretability of focal inhibitory perturbations under a globally excited state.

      Strengths:

      (1) The manuscript addresses a clear mechanistic question with broader relevance: whether rhythm generation is best conceptualized as a localized kernel or as an emergent distributed property that changes with excitatory state.

      (2) The authors use convergent approaches (reduced preparations, mapping, and necessity/sufficiency-style pharmacological perturbations), which is appropriate for circuit-level inference.

      (3) A strong element is the within-unit analysis supporting state-dependent changes in phase coupling for a subset of units ("lung" units adopting a buccal-like pattern). The authors' offline PCA-based spike sorting (with cluster-quality selection via silhouette score) provides some reassurance that the reported pre/post injection changes are not simply driven by unit misidentification.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Pseudoreplication in unit-survey statistics undermines the main mapping inference. The Methods state that "Units were pooled from multiple preparations" and that chi-squared tests were used to compare proportions across conditions (baseline vs 60 nM AMPA). The Results similarly report proportion changes (e.g., 110 units pooled from three preparations vs 137 units pooled from three additional animals) analyzed with chi-squared tests. Because many units come from the same preparation/animal, independence is unlikely to hold; therefore, inference about state-dependent reorganization at the systems level should be made at the preparation/animal level or via hierarchical models that explicitly account for clustering.

      (2) Statistical methods are inconsistently described and need harmonization. In the segment dose-response "Analysis," values are described as compared to zero using a "One-sample t-test." Yet Table 1 is titled as using a "Wilcoxon One-sample Test." These discrepancies must be resolved throughout (Methods, Results, figure legends, and tables), including clear reporting of the unit of n and exact test statistics.

      (3) Unit classification and operational definitions raise interpretational concerns. The unit classification scheme defines "buccal units" as those firing during buccal bursts as well as lung bursts, and explicitly notes that "no units were found which fired only during buccal bursts." This is a consequential result, and it currently reads more like a limitation of detection/classification (or state-space sampled) than a robust biological conclusion. Without additional evidence, it weakens claims about a distinct buccal rhythmogenic module and complicates the interpretation of "buccal identity" changes under excitation.

      (4) Microinjection mapping: high exclusion rate and alternative explanations for 'loss of necessity' under excitation. The manuscript reports that 15 experiments were conducted, but 9 were excluded because the buccal area was not found or the preparation was "overdriven." This exclusion rate is too high to leave implicit; it raises concerns about selection bias and demands transparent accounting. Moreover, under baseline conditions, GABA (or AMPA-GABA) microinjections reliably reduce/abolish buccal bursts, but under bath 60 nM AMPA, the same injections produce no significant change in instantaneous frequency. This pattern can be interpreted as network redistribution, but it can also reflect state-dependent changes in gain, dynamic range, or local pharmacological impact (e.g., inhibition being comparatively underpowered in the globally excited state). Additional controls/analyses are required to distinguish these explanations.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors investigate the response of the amphibian respiratory rhythm generator under varying excitability conditions. They use pharmacological agents to increase and/ or decrease synaptic excitability and demonstrate the resilience of buccal rhythms under different conditions. They employ these results to formulate their primary thesis, that there is no obligatory locus of the buccal respiratory rhythm in the frog, and that their respiratory rhythmogenic mechanisms should be considered diffuse and anatomically distributed across a larger brainstem region.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript is well written, with a sufficiently large number of experiments, for which the authors should be congratulated.

      Weaknesses:

      The presented results don't support the authors' main conclusions, and the interpretation of the data is heavily biased toward their hypothesis. This impregnates an unsubstantiated narrative in the Abstract, Introduction, and Discussion of this manuscript, which must be reexamined with the following points in consideration:

      (1) The authors seem to confuse degeneracy with redundancy. For instance, at line 54, they state, "These findings support the broader hypothesis that respiratory rhythm-generating circuits can switch to being diffuse and redundant, with discrete oscillators quickly drowning in a sea of excitations."

      Redundancy means having the same component repeated multiple times to buffer the failure of any single component, whereas degeneracy means different functional components that compensate for one another under perturbations (Goaillard and Marder, ARN 2021)

      Since the premotor-lung units get converted to buccal units under high excitability, this suggests a degenerate mechanism for respiratory rhythm generation- rather than a redundant mechanism, where there should be multiple buccal units that get recruited under different excitability conditions.

      (2) Line 83, "but the essential requirement for a discrete, rudimentary buccal oscillator is also lost".

      This statement is not supported by the data presented in this study. How does the expansion of the buccal unit imply that the essential requirement for discreteness is lost? Under increased excitability, does the burst/rhythm initiation zone also expand? Or does it still remain centered around the location of buccal units under physiological conditions? Increased excitability can lead to recruitment of a larger area, without a change in the location of the rhythmogenic kernel.

      (3) Line 86, "... oscillators should be viewed as promiscuous flexible functional entities that expand or contract...".

      Oscillators can be regarded as promiscuous only if, under physiological conditions, they switch positions. Under high excitability, only the flexibility argument holds, which has been established in mammals before (e.g., CA Del Negro, K Kam, JA Hayes, JL Feldman, The Journal of physiology 587 (6), 1217-1231; CA Del Negro, C Morgado-Valle, JL Feldman,Neuron 34 (5), 821-830; NA Baertsch, LJ Severs, TM Anderson, JM Ramirez, Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences 116 (15), 7493-7502; NA Baertsch, HC Baertsch, JM Ramirez Nature communications 9 (1), 843).

      Results:

      (4) Interpretation of data in Figure 6.

      How does the Buccal activity and L2 Power stroke change with 60nm AMPA (in CN5)? Does the increase in the Buccal neurons and decrease in power stroke neurons also reflect in the CN5 activity? Also see comments on Figure 9 data below.

      (5) Interpretation of data in Figure 7.

      Here, classifying buccal neurons solely by spiking may obscure the fact that the 'silent' neurons under baseline conditions were part of the rhythmic network but could not spike due to subthreshold inputs. 60 nM AMPA increased their firing in response to previously subthreshold synchronous inputs during the buccal burst. Intracellular recordings are required to negate this possibility and establish that the neuronal classification is robust.

      (6) Interpretation of data in Figure 8.

      "Lung units can transform into buccal units under excitation".<br /> CN5 buccal and lung bursts need to be compared before and after AMPA injection. From Figure 8 A-D, it is apparent that the example Unit2's activity increases during the buccal bursts, after AMPA injection. However, they are also present in buccal burst pre-AMPA, albeit with less frequency.

      It is striking that the pre-AMPA epoch (panel A) is less than half of the post-AMPA epoch. This would, in itself, lead to a biased estimate of lung units that are active under the baseline condition during the buccal bursts.

      Figure 8G, meta-analysis of lung units spiking during the baseline buccal bursts is warranted to interpret the main claim of this figure. Similarly, analysis of spiking per lung burst for the post-AMPA condition is essential for comparing the lung unit's contribution under high excitability.

      (7) Interpretation of data in Figure 9

      "Buccal area loses importance under increased excitation."

      This interpretation is not fully supported by the data presented in this manuscript. Under 60 nm AMPA, does the ratio of lung burst to buccal burst change in CN5? This analysis is crucial for determining whether the lung units are indeed converted into buccal bursts at the expense of lung activity or whether their appearance during buccal bursts is incidental due to increased excitability. In the baseline, there are 4-5 buccal bursts per lung burst, whereas under high excitability, there are 2-3 buccal bursts per lung burst (Figure 9 A-B). This seems inconsistent with the conclusion that increased excitability converts lung units into buccal units (Figures 6 &7).

      Could the authors comment on the connectivity between the lung and the buccal units? Results in Figure 9A-B indicate that lung units may receive an efference copy of buccal units, and under high excitability, their spikes may generate negative feedback onto the buccal units, terminating their bursts. This could explain the decrease in the buccal-to-lung burst in high-AMPA conditions. This type of circuit interaction resembles the mammalian breathing CPG, in which the parafacial/RTN (which controls the abdominal muscles) and preBötC (which controls the diaphragm) interact and cross-inhibit each other.

      (8) Line 382.

      "Buccal-like bursting produced from two independent slices".

      The two "independent" slices have portions of the same anatomical kernel, the buccal rhythm generator. This experiment is like the sandwich slice preparation of preBötC (Del Negro Lab), in which two thinner slices exhibit rhythmic activity. Thus, the two slices are not independent; they are anatomically adjacent and functionally overlapping.

    4. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses isolated frog brainstem preparations to test whether inspiratory rhythm generation is confined to a narrowly defined neural center or instead reflects the activity of a distributed and adaptable network. Building on prior rodent work, the authors examine structural and functional parallels between the frog Buccal Area and the mammalian preBötzinger complex. By increasing excitatory drive, they assess whether a localized rhythmogenic region can expand into a broader network that participates in buccal rhythm generation, providing insight into how respiratory circuits are dynamically reconfigured across physiological states.

      Strengths:

      The work presents compelling evidence that ventilatory rhythm generation is supported by a flexible, state-dependent network rather than a fixed anatomical locus. The experimental preparation is well-suited to address these questions, and the data are generally of high quality. The demonstration that increased excitation recruits a more distributed network parallels observations in mammalian systems and strengthens the translational relevance of the findings. Overall, the analyses are thoughtful, and the interpretations are largely well supported by the results.

      Weaknesses:

      Some issues limit the strength of the conclusions. First, the study does not address the transition from eupnea to gasping in mammals, which could provide important physiological context for the observed AMPA-induced network reorganization. Second, the reported transformation of lung-active neurons into buccal-active neurons would benefit from additional analyses to clarify whether neurons switch identities or acquire dual activity. Finally, the necessity and sufficiency experiments in Figure 9 require further support, particularly through AMPA dose-response analyses and more comprehensive GABA manipulations, to confirm that network expansion does not obscure the continued functional importance of the core buccal region.

    5. Author response:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Hierarchical Inference (Unit Survey)

      We agree that pooling units across preparations can overstate the strength of inference if preparation-level clustering is ignored. We will therefore reanalyze the unit-survey dataset using a hierarchical approach in which the preparation/animal is treated as the unit of inference. Our pooled dataset was derived from three chunk preparations exposed to AMPA and three baseline preparations, allowing us to report per-preparation proportions and variability as requested.

      A preliminary reanalysis of the buccal segment preparations is summarized below. In this analysis, the unit of inference is shifted from individual recorded units to the preparation level (n = 3 baseline; n = 3 at 60 nM AMPA), thereby accounting for potential within-preparation dependence.

      Author response table 1.

      The distribution of units for each of the three preparations per condition is as follows:

      Using the proportion of buccal units per preparation as the dependent variable:

      Baseline (n = 3): mean proportion of buccal units = 6.5% (SD 5.7%).

      60 nM AMPA (n = 3): mean proportion of buccal units = 53.2% (SD 6.0%).

      Absolute difference in proportions = 46.7% (95% CI 33.4% to 59.8%).

      Independent-samples t-test on per-preparation proportions: t(4) = 9.77, p = 0.0006.

      Thus, this preliminary hierarchical reanalysis indicates that the observed recruitment is consistent across preparations and is not driven by outlier data from a single animal. These results support substantial expansion of the buccal oscillator with excitation.

      Statistical Standardization: In the revision, we will better justify our use of parametric and non-parametric versions of the one-sample tests and review usage in the Methods, Table 1, and figure legends for consistency.

      Exclusion criteria for microinjection experiments: We will extend the description of these experiments by including a flow diagram summarizing the 15 attempted microinjection experiments and documenting the technical reasons for the 9 exclusions. These exclusions reflected the technical requirements of the preparation: (a) the buccal area had to be localized before AMPA excitation so that the effects of buccal-area manipulation during excitation could be interpreted reliably, which was not always possible; and (b) preparations had to exhibit sufficiently sustained periods of consecutive buccal bursting to permit quantification of buccal burst frequency, whereas some preparations expressed motor patterns dominated by lung bursts.

      Pharmacological Potency and Necessity: We will revise the wording of this section to make the causal interpretation more precise. Our data already show that local GABA microinjections can reverse the excitatory effects of local AMPA microinjections, providing an internal control for local pharmacological efficacy of GABA when the local network is excited. Notably, the local AMPA concentration used in these experiments (5 µM) is nearly two orders of magnitude greater than the 60 nM concentration used in bath application. We therefore interpret the failure of focal GABA inhibition to abolish rhythm during global excitation as being consistent with expansion of rhythmogenic capacity beyond the spatial reach of the local injection, rather than with failure of the GABA manipulation itself.

      Finding an inhibitory site that remains sensitive in bath applied AMPA is an interesting experiment but this would require identifying the anatomical substrate of a brainstem circuit for a non-ventilatory circuit in Rana that is guaranteed not to undergo reconfiguration with AMPA. This is beyond the scope of the current manuscript; based on our work to identify the neuronal substrate for ventilation in Rana, this would take at least five years to complete. In addition, having identified such a circuit there would be no guarantee that AMPA would not cause reconfiguration in this case too. With regards to transection boundaries and location of injections, we agree these would be useful refinements. We used the location of nerves as reliable landmarks to guide transections and located the buccal area using stereotactic coordinates to guide micropipette insertion and functional criteria (AMPA and GABA sufficiency and necessity tests) to locate the exact position based on our previous work.

      Unit Classification: We will review the nomenclature we use to define units to ensure it does not cause confusion and provide more explicit criteria for unit classes. This will include clarification of the absence of “buccal-only” units as currently defined. Specifically, when both buccal and lung rhythms are present, units active during buccal bursts are also active during lung bursts in our preparation. This does not conflict with the multiple interacting oscillator model we have proposed previously. Rather, recruitment of buccal-area neurons during lung bursts is consistent with a model in which the lung oscillator excites the buccal oscillator. It is also consistent with prior evidence that lung bursts persist after buccal-area ablation. In addition, burst frequency during lung episodes exceeds buccal burst frequency during intervening buccal periods. We will revise the text to make this logic clearer.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      (1) Degeneracy vs. Redundancy

      We agree that degeneracy is the more precise term for the phenomenon our data demonstrate, in which structurally and functionally distinct neurons (lung units) acquire the capacity to participate in buccal rhythm generation under excitation. The Discussion already uses this language (e.g., "necessity and sufficiency may not work in a large degenerate network where rhythm generation is distributed across many elements"), but we used the word "redundant" in the Key Points Summary and Abstract in the broader sense of distributed robustness that a wider readership could grasp. Nonetheless, we recognize the distinction drawn by Goaillard and Marder (2021) and, considering the reviewers concerns, we will revise the Abstract and Key Points to adopt the degeneracy framework consistently.

      (2) Loss of Essential Requirement for a Discrete Oscillator

      The reviewer asks whether expansion of the rhythmically active region necessarily implies loss of the rhythmogenic kernel. We believe our necessity and sufficiency experiments (Figure 9) directly address this. Under baseline conditions, GABA microinjection into the buccal area reliably abolishes buccal bursting; under 60 nM bath AMPA, the same injection at the same location and volume has no significant effect on buccal frequency. If the kernel remained essential and the surrounding recruitment were merely supplementary, local inhibition of the kernel should still slow or abolish the rhythm. It does not. We interpret this as evidence that the essential requirement for the discrete buccal area is lost under excitation, not merely that a larger area has been recruited around a still-critical core. We acknowledge, however, that the word "lost" could be read as implying permanent elimination rather than state-dependent suspension, and we will temper this language in the revision.

      (3) Novelty Relative to Mammalian Studies

      We appreciate the reviewer drawing attention to the cited mammalian literature (Del Negro et al., 2002, 2009; Baertsch et al., 2018, 2019), which we discuss in detail in the manuscript. However, we respectfully note that our findings extend this literature in several ways that the public review does not acknowledge. First, Baertsch et al. demonstrated recruitment of tonic or silent neurons to become phasically active during inspiration; we show that neurons already assigned to one oscillator phase (lung) can be dynamically reassigned to another (buccal), which represents a qualitatively different form of reconfiguration. Second, we developed a novel approach to functionally ablate motor neuron pools using high-frequency nerve stimulation, enabling the unit survey to be interpreted at the premotor level which was not achieved in the mammalian studies cited. Third, our data provide the first demonstration of state-dependent oscillator expansion in a non-mammalian tetrapod, offering evolutionary context that strengthens the generality of the principle. We will revise the term "promiscuous" if it overstates the claim, but we maintain that our data support the conclusion that oscillator boundaries are flexible, which goes beyond what has been shown in mammals.

      (4) Figure 6, CN5 Output Under AMPA

      The reviewer asks whether the shift in premotor unit composition is reflected in CN5 motor output. This is a reasonable question. As noted in the manuscript, 60 nM AMPA produces only minor changes in the overt motor pattern as recorded from CN5, which is precisely why we interpret the premotor changes as a reorganization of the network's internal architecture that is not readily apparent from motor output alone. This is in sharp contrast to observations of substantive network reconfiguration in mammals in which eupnea is replaced by the pathological condition of gasping. We will add quantification of CN5 burst parameters (amplitude, duration, frequency) under baseline and 60 nM AMPA to make this point explicit.

      (5) Subthreshold Recruitment vs. Network Expansion

      The reviewer suggests that neurons classified as newly rhythmic under AMPA may have been part of the rhythmic network all along, receiving subthreshold inputs at baseline. We are grateful to the reviewer for highlighting this and hope they would agree that the literature clearly demonstrates that all respiratory neurons receive subthreshold phasic inputs of one kind or another, perhaps providing a clue that reconfiguration is a common feature of respiratory networks generally. Regardless of the implications for other animals, we agree this is likely the mechanism at work in the frog, and indeed our manuscript states that "this increase in the number and proportion of premotor buccal units is due in part to recruitment of sub-threshold buccal neurons that, under low excitability, only fire during lung bursts," citing intracellular evidence from Kogo and Remmers (1994) that lung neurons in this region receive subthreshold buccal-timed input. We note that this observation does not diminish our conclusion and likely explains the mechanism by which network expansion occurs. Whether one calls these neurons "newly recruited" or "pushed above threshold," the functional consequence is the same: a larger population of neurons is now rhythmically active during buccal bursts, and the necessity of the original buccal area is lost. We will clarify this reasoning in the revision and acknowledge the limitation that additional intracellular recordings from our preparation would be needed to fully characterize the subthreshold dynamics.

      (6) Figure 8, Epoch Length and Meta-analysis

      The reviewer notes that the pre-AMPA epoch appears shorter than the post-AMPA epoch in Figure 8A, which could bias unit classification. We will address this in the revision by reporting epoch durations explicitly and addressing its implication on spike counts where appropriate. Regarding the request for meta-analysis of lung unit spiking during baseline buccal bursts: this analysis is part of the rationale for the phase-recruitment panels, and we will expand Figure 8 to include the requested cross-condition comparisons (lung unit activity during baseline buccal bursts, and during post-AMPA lung bursts) as also suggested by Reviewer 3.

      (7) Figure 9, Buccal-to-Lung Burst Ratio

      The reviewer observes that the ratio of buccal to lung bursts decreases from approximately 4-5:1 under baseline to 2-3:1 under 60 nM AMPA, and suggests this is inconsistent with conversion of lung units into buccal units. We do not believe this is inconsistent. The buccal-to-lung burst ratio reflects the overt motor pattern, which is determined by the interaction of multiple oscillators and is influenced by AMPA at both buccal and lung levels. A change in this ratio does not speak to whether individual premotor units have acquired buccal-timed activity; the unit survey and the single-unit transformation data (Figure 8) address that question directly. Regarding the alternative model involving efference copy and cross-inhibition: this is an interesting hypothesis, but it is speculative and not tested by the current dataset. We are happy to discuss lung-buccal interactions more fully in the revision, including the parallels to parafacial/preBötC interactions in mammals, but we note that our data on unit transformation are better explained by network reconfiguration than by a feedback model that remains to be tested.

      (8) "Independent" Slices

      The reviewer compares our Level 2 transection to the preBötC sandwich slice preparation and argues the two resulting slices are not independent. We take the reviewer's point that "independent" may be read as implying no shared developmental or functional origin, which is not our intent. By "independent" we mean that the two physically separated slices can each generate rhythmic output without being synaptically connected to each other. This is, in fact, our central point: rhythmogenic capacity is distributed across a region broad enough to endow two separated slices with independent rhythm-generating capability when excited. We note that the analogy to the sandwich slice is imperfect because in our Level 1 cuts, only the rostral slice containing the buccal area generates rhythm -- the caudal slice does not -- whereas Level 2 cuts that bisect the buccal area produce rhythmicity in both halves, consistent with distributed capacity specifically within the buccal region. We will revise the wording to clarify what we mean by "independent" in this context.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Physiological Parallels: We will expand the Discussion to place these findings in a broader comparative context, including the eupnea-to-gasping transition in mammals as an example of state-dependent reconfiguration of respiratory networks. This will also allow us to clarify two advances that may otherwise be missed when comparing our work to that in mammals: (a) we developed a novel approach to functionally eliminate motor neurons, allowing mapped units to be interpreted as premotor; and (b) the state-dependent reconfiguration of the buccal oscillator occurred without qualitative changes in the overt lung-buccal motor pattern.

      Unit Transformation Analysis: We will revise Figure 8 to improve clarity around the observed lung-to-buccal transformation by expanding the phase-recruitment panels as suggested and will revisit the operational definitions of lung and buccal unit identity to reduce ambiguity. The central observation is that some units active only during lung bursts under one condition become active during buccal bursts when network excitation is increased.

      Saturation vs. Network Expansion: We will directly address the possibility that 60 nM bath-applied AMPA simply pushes the network toward a frequency ceiling. Two observations strongly argue against this interpretation: (a) 60 nM global AMPA produced only mild changes in buccal frequency, whereas local AMPA injection at much higher concentrations produced larger effects; and (b) local GABA was sufficient to reverse the effects of high-concentration local AMPA microinjections but insufficient to abolish rhythm during low-concentration global AMPA application. Together, these findings are more consistent with global AMPA endowing the network with distributed rhythm-generating capacity than with simple saturation of a discrete local oscillator. Notwithstanding these arguments, we will attempt to extend AMPA/GABA dose response experiment as suggested or add the lack of such experiments as a caveat to our interpretation.

      Figure 9C Correction: We will correct the statistical markings in Figure 9C to align with the text in the Results regarding the significance of frequency changes under 60 nM AMPA.

      In total, we believe these revisions will improve the rigor and clarity of the manuscript while preserving the central conclusion supported by the data: that the organization of the frog respiratory rhythmogenic network is state dependent and becomes more distributed under excitation.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This valuable study addresses a timely question regarding the contribution of transposable elements to splice isoform diversity in the Drosophila brain, directly engaging with recent conflicting findings in the field. The work provides convincing evidence that TE-gene chimeric transcripts are detectable and that prior discrepancies largely arise from methodological differences in computational pipelines and experimental design. The combination of reanalysis, methodological clarification, and targeted validation represents a technical contribution that will be of interest to researchers studying transcriptome complexity and transposable elements. However, the strength of evidence would be further enhanced by increased methodological transparency, more rigorous experimental controls, and a more cautious interpretation of functional implications.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Choucri and Treiber have reassessed their previous study on TE-gene chimeric transcripts in neural genes in response to Azad et al (2024). Azad and colleagues argued that, contrary to Choucri and Treiber's findings, chimeric TE-mRNAs are relatively infrequent, and they cautioned that further optimization of bioinformatics pipelines is needed to detect TE insertions from RNAseq accurately. In this short response, Choucri and Treiber clearly demonstrate that differences in the tools used between their study and that of Azad et al. likely account for the contrasting results, along with RT-PCR failure in designing primers that would match the chimeric transcript, and the use of different Drosophila lines. The authors emphasize the need for uniform, standardized criteria in such analysis, which would ultimately strengthen and advance the field.

      Strengths:

      The addition of a ratio to compute the number of splice reads specific to the chimeric transcript and compare to the exon-exon splice reads is really interesting because it opens the door to finally quantify the contribution of chimeric TEs to the overall gene expression, although this is not the scope of the present article. The clear dissection of chimeric transcripts, along with the results from Azad et al, allows us to understand the differences between the two studies confidently. Finally, the discussion on Drosophila lines is indeed essential, given that the lines and even individuals have high TE polymorphism.

      Weaknesses:

      I think it is necessary to add more detail to this article, for instance, the differences between TEchim and Tidal could be laid out more precisely. Regarding the roo example, one of the caveats of this family, along with others, is the presence of simple repeats. It would be important to show that the simple repeats are not interfering with the read mapping. Regarding the experiments, if we are looking for a standardized protocol, then we should have a detailed material and methods section, with every experiment, replicate, and PCR temperature clearly defined. Finally, and in my opinion, more importantly, the use of RT negative controls on the RT PCRs, along with DNA PCRs to show insertion presence, is mandatory for testing the presence of chimeric genes. Of course, water negative PCR controls are also needed, and unfortunately, absent from Figure 3.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study by Choucri and Treiber aims to directly address a recent critique regarding the role of transposable elements (TEs) in diversifying the neural transcriptome of Drosophila. The authors seek to demonstrate that TEs are not merely genomic "noise" but are frequently and reliably "exonized" into brain-specific mRNA. By introducing an upgraded computational pipeline, TEChim, and conducting precise experimental validations, the authors set out to show that TE-mediated splicing represents a genuine biological phenomenon that expands the molecular repertoire of the nervous system.

      Strengths:

      The study's primary strength lies in its rigorous technical "forensic" analysis of previous failed replication attempts. The authors convincingly demonstrate that the lack of signal in the opposing study stemmed from a fundamental methodological mismatch: the software used by the critics (TIDAL) is logically incapable of detecting splice sites located within TE sequences. Importantly, the authors complement this computational clarification with definitive experimental evidence through an effective "experimental rescue." By employing correctly designed primers and matching the genetic backgrounds of the fly strains, thereby accounting for genomic polymorphisms, they successfully validated all seven loci that were previously reported as undetectable. This dual-pronged strategy, addressing both algorithmic bias and experimental design, establishes a more robust technical benchmark for the detection and validation of TE-derived exons in neural tissues.

      Weaknesses:

      While the technical rebuttal is highly convincing, the scope of the study remains primarily defensive. As a response to a prior critique, the work focuses on establishing the existence and detectability of chimeric TE-derived transcripts rather than exploring their broader functional consequences. As a result, there is limited new insight into how these TE-modified isoforms influence neural circuit function or organismal behavior. In addition, the detection and validation of these events remain technically demanding, requiring deep sequencing and specialized bioinformatic expertise, which may limit broader adoption by laboratories without dedicated computational resources.

    4. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Choucri and Treiber responds to a recent paper by Azad et al., which responds to a paper by Treiber and Wadell (Genome Research, 2020). The controversy relates to the detection of transcripts with transposable elements (TEs) spliced into them in the Drosophila brain.

      Strengths:

      The authors now argue convincingly that these transcripts exist using an improved, updated version of their pipeline. They also validate some of their findings using RT-PCR and explain why Azad et al. failed to detect these transcripts due to methodological errors. Overall, I am convinced that these transcripts exist and that the TE-derived transcripts described by Choucri and Treiber are real.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors should mention that combining PCR-amplified cDNA generation with short-read sequencing is suboptimal for detecting TE-fusion transcripts. Recently, direct long-read ONT RNA sequencing, which does not require amplification and spans the entire transcript, has been used to detect similar transcripts in human stem cells and the human brain (PMID: 40848716 & Garza et al, BioRxiv). Had the authors used this technology to validate their findings, there would be no question about these transcripts. If not doing such experiments, then they should at least discuss the possibility and the advantage of the approach.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This study presents an important methodological advance-Liver-CUBIC combined with multicolor metallic nanoparticle perfusion-that enables high-resolution 3D visualization of the liver's complex multi-ductal architecture. The identification of the Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC) as a novel perivascular structure with distinct cellular composition and low-permeability characteristics is convincing, supported by rigorous imaging data. The observed scaffolding role during fibrosis offers intriguing biological insights, though the functional claims would benefit from direct experimental validation.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      [Editors' note: this version has been assessed by the Reviewing Editor without further input from the original reviewers. The authors have addressed the minor comments raised in the previous round of review.]

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Chengjian Zhao et al. focused on the interactions between vascular, biliary, and neural networks in the liver microenvironment, addressing the critical bottleneck that the lack of high-resolution 3D visualization has hindered understanding of these interactions in liver disease.

      Strengths:

      This study developed a high-resolution multiplex 3D imaging method that integrates multicolor metallic compound nanoparticle (MCNP) perfusion with optimized CUBIC tissue clearing. This method enables the simultaneous 3D visualization of spatial networks of the portal vein, hepatic artery, bile ducts, and central vein in the mouse liver. The authors reported a perivascular structure termed the Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC), which is identified along the portal vein axis. This study clarifies that the PLC comprises CD34⁺Sca-1⁺ dual-positive endothelial cells with a distinct gene expression profile, and reveals its colocalization with terminal bile duct branches and sympathetic nerve fibers under physiological conditions.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors very nicely addressed all concerns from this reviewer. There are no further concerns and comments.

    3. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Xu, Cao and colleagues aimed to overcome the obstacles of high-resolution imaging of intact liver tissue. They report successful modification of the existing CUBIC protocol into Liver-CUBIC, a high-resolution multiplex 3D imaging method that integrates multicolor metallic compound nanoparticle (MCNP) perfusion with optimized liver tissue clearing, significantly reducing clearing time and enabling simultaneous 3D visualization of the portal vein, hepatic artery, bile ducts, and central vein spatial networks in the mouse liver. Using this novel platform, the researchers describe a previously unrecognized perivascular structure they termed Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC), regularly distributed along the adult liver portal veins.<br /> Using available scRNAseq data, the authors assessed the CD34⁺Sca-1⁺ cells' expression profile, highlighting mRNA presence of genes linked to neurodevelopment, bile acid transport, and hematopoietic niche potential. Different aspects of this analysis were then addressed by protein staining of selected marker proteins in the mouse liver tissue. Next, the authors addressed how the PLC and biliary system react to CCL4-induced liver fibrosis, implying PLC dynamically extends, acting as a scaffold that guides the migration and expansion of terminal bile ducts and sympathetic nerve fibers into the hepatic parenchyma upon injury.

      The work clearly demonstrates the usefulness of the Liver-CUBIC technique and the improvement of both resolution and complexity of the information, gained by simultaneous visualization of multiple vascular and biliary systems of the liver. The identification of PLC and the interpretation of its function represent an intriguing set of observations that will surely attract the attention of liver biologists as well as hepatologists. The importance of the CD34+/Sca1+ endothelial cell population and claims based on transcriptomic re-analysis require future assessment by functional experimental approaches to decipher the functional molecules involved in PLC formation, maintenance, and the involvement in injury response before establishing their role in biliary, arterial, and neural liver systems.

      Strengths:

      The authors clearly demonstrate an improved technique tailored to the visualization of the liver vasulo-biliary architecture in unprecedented resolution.<br /> This work proposes a new morphological feature of adult liver facilitating interaction between the portal vein, hepatic arteries, biliary tree, and intrahepatic innervation, centered at previously underappreciated protrusions of the portal veins - PLCs.

      Weaknesses:

      The importance of CD34+Sca1+ endothelial cell sub-population for PLC formation and function was not tested and warrants further validation.

    4. Author Response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Chengjian Zhao et al. focused on the interactions between vascular, biliary, and neural networks in the liver microenvironment, addressing the critical bottleneck that the lack of high-resolution 3D visualization has hindered understanding of these interactions in liver disease.

      Strengths:

      This study developed a high-resolution multiplex 3D imaging method that integrates multicolor metallic compound nanoparticle (MCNP) perfusion with optimized CUBIC tissue clearing. This method enables the simultaneous 3D visualization of spatial networks of the portal vein, hepatic artery, bile ducts, and central vein in the mouse liver. The authors reported a perivascular structure termed the Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC), which is identified along the portal vein axis. This study clarifies that the PLC comprises CD34⁺Sca-1⁺ dual-positive endothelial cells with a distinct gene expression profile, and reveals its colocalization with terminal bile duct branches and sympathetic nerve fibers under physiological conditions.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors very nicely addressed all concerns from this reviewer. There are no further concerns and comments.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive evaluation and helpful feedback.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Xu, Cao and colleagues aimed to overcome the obstacles of high-resolution imaging of intact liver tissue. They report successful modification of the existing CUBIC protocol into Liver-CUBIC, a high-resolution multiplex 3D imaging method that integrates multicolor metallic compound nanoparticle (MCNP) perfusion with optimized liver tissue clearing, significantly reducing clearing time and enabling simultaneous 3D visualization of the portal vein, hepatic artery, bile ducts, and central vein spatial networks in the mouse liver. Using this novel platform, the researchers describe a previously unrecognized perivascular structure they termed Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC), regularly distributed along the adult liver portal veins.

      Using available scRNAseq data, the authors assessed the CD34<sup>+</sup>/Sca-1<sup>+</sup> cells' expression profile, highlighting mRNA presence of genes linked to neurodevelopment, bile acid transport, and hematopoietic niche potential. Different aspects of this analysis were then addressed by protein staining of selected marker proteins in the mouse liver tissue. Next, the authors addressed how the PLC and biliary system react to CCL4-induced liver fibrosis, implying PLC dynamically extends, acting as a scaffold that guides the migration and expansion of terminal bile ducts and sympathetic nerve fibers into the hepatic parenchyma upon injury.

      The work clearly demonstrates the usefulness of the Liver-CUBIC technique and the improvement of both resolution and complexity of the information, gained by simultaneous visualization of multiple vascular and biliary systems of the liver. The identification of PLC and the interpretation of its function represent an intriguing set of observations that will surely attract the attention of liver biologists as well as hepatologists. The importance of the CD34+/Sca1+ endothelial cell population and claims based on transcriptomic re-analysis require future assessment by functional experimental approaches to decipher the functional molecules involved in PLC formation, maintenance, and the involvement in injury response before establishing their role in biliary, arterial, and neural liver systems.

      Strengths:

      The authors clearly demonstrate an improved technique tailored to the visualization of the liver vasulo-biliary architecture in unprecedented resolution.

      This work proposes a new morphological feature of adult liver facilitating interaction between the portal vein, hepatic arteries, biliary tree, and intrahepatic innervation, centered at previously underappreciated protrusions of the portal veins - PLCs.

      Weaknesses:

      The importance of CD34+Sca1+ endothelial cell sub-population for PLC formation and function was not tested and warrants further validation.

      We thank the reviewer for the valuable comment regarding the potential role of the CD34<sup>+</sup>/Sca-1<sup>+</sup> endothelial cell sub-population in PLC function.

      We agree that direct functional validation would be a crucial next step to confirm the contribution of this specific sub-population to PLC formation and function. The focus of the present study remains on the spatial localization and reproducible characterization of PLC structures based on 3D imaging, as well as the relevant transcriptional features revealed by single-cell analysis.

      To avoid overinterpretation, we have revised the Discussion section accordingly, providing a more focused and cautious description of the related findings.

      Comments on revisions:

      I appreciate the author's effort to revise the text so it more rigorously adheres to the presented evidence. Following a thorough read of the revised text, a few remaining minor issues were identified in the Discussion.

      (1) From where comes the hard evidence for PLC being the stem cell niche in the following sentence?

      for the two following statements:

      This suggests that the PLC may not only provide structural support but also serve as a perivascular stem cell niche specific to the portal region, potentially involved in hematopoiesis and tissue regeneration.

      The PLC serves as a directional scaffold for ductal growth, a specialized stem cell niche, and a potential site of neurovascular coupling.

      We thank the reviewer for this important comment. We agree that the term “stem cell niche” may imply functional evidence for direct stem cell regulation, which was not demonstrated in this study. Our conclusions were based on the spatial enrichment and transcriptional features of CD34<sup>+</sup>/Sca-1<sup>+</sup> endothelial populations expressing hematopoiesis-related genes in the portal region.

      To avoid overinterpretation, we have revised the sentence to remove the term “stem cell niche” and instead describe the PLC as being enriched in perivascular endothelial cell populations with hematopoiesis-related gene expression features. The revised text now reads:

      “These results suggest that, beyond structural support, the PLC in the portal region is enriched with perivascular endothelial cell populations exhibiting hematopoiesis-related gene expression features.”

      We have also modified the corresponding statement later in the Discussion. It now reads:

      “The PLC serves as a directional scaffold for ductal growth, displays distinct perivascular endothelial transcriptional features in the portal region, and may represent a potential site of neurovascular coupling.”

      We believe this wording more accurately reflects the descriptive and transcriptomic nature of our data without implying functional niche activity.

      (2) In the following paragraph, I lack references to the previously published evidence of liver innervation guidance mechanisms, such as the mesenchyme-mediated guidance (CD31- population) Gannoun et al., 2023 https://doi.org/10.1242/dev.201642, an important context for your finding.

      Further analysis showed significant upregulation of genes involved in neurodevelopment and axonal guidance in the CD34<sup>+</sup>/Sca-1<sup>+</sup> cluster, along with activation of neuronal signaling pathways. Immunostaining confirmed the presence of TH<sup>+</sup> sympathetic nerve fibers wrapping around the PLC in a "beads-on-a-string" pattern (Fig. 6), consistent with a classic neurovascular unit(Adori et al., 2021). Previous studies have shown that sympathetic nerves enter the liver along collagen fibers of Glisson's capsule and interact with hepatic arteries, portal veins, and bile duct epithelium, supporting the PLC as a scaffold for intrahepatic neurovascular integration.

      We thank the reviewer for highlighting the importance of previously published evidence regarding liver innervation guidance mechanisms. We agree that these studies provide important context for interpreting the neurodevelopmental and axon guidance–related transcriptional signatures observed in our dataset. Accordingly, we have revised the Discussion section to incorporate reference to mesenchyme-mediated axon guidance mechanisms in the portal region during liver development (Gannoun et al., 2023). This addition better situates our findings within the existing literature.

      (3) Several sentences have issues with a lack of space between words.

      We have carefully re-examined the entire manuscript for spacing and formatting inconsistencies and corrected minor typographical issues to ensure uniform formatting throughout the text.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This manuscript presents a valuable study of the activity and functional relevance of different circuits in the dentate gyrus of mice performing a pattern separation task. Solid evidence is presented to support the paper's central conclusions. The study is likely to be of interest to those studying the subregional organization and cell type-specific functions of the dentate gyrus.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript investigates how dentate gyrus (DG) granule cell subregions, specifically suprapyramidal (SB) and infrapyramidal (IB) blades, are differentially recruited during a high cognitive demand pattern separation task. The authors combine TRAP2 activity labeling, touchscreen-based TUNL behavior, and chemogenetic inhibition of adult-born dentate granule cells (abDGCs) or mature granule cells (mGCs) to dissect circuit contributions.

      This manuscript presents an interesting and well-designed investigation into DG activity patterns under varying cognitive demands and the role of abDGCs in shaping mGC activity. The integration of TRAP2-based activity labeling, chemogenetic manipulation, and behavioral assays provides valuable insight into DG subregional organization and functional recruitment. However, several methodological and quantitative issues limit the interpretability of the findings. Addressing the concerns below will greatly strengthen the rigor and clarity of the study.

      Major points:

      (1) Quantification methods for TRAP+ cells are not applied consistently across panels in Figure 1, making interpretation difficult. Specifically, Figure 1F reports TRAP+ mGCs as density, whereas Figure 1G reports TRAP+ abDGCs as a percentage, hindering direct comparison. Additionally, Figure 1H presents reactivation analysis only for mGCs; a parallel analysis for abDGCs is needed for comparison across cell types.

      (2) The anatomical distribution of TRAP+ cells is different between low- and high-cognitive demand conditions (Figure 2). Are these sections from dorsal or ventral DG? Is this specific to dorsal DG, as itis preferentially involved in cognitive function? What happens in ventral DG?

      (3) The activity manipulation using chemogenetic inhibition of abDGCs in AsclCreER; hM4 mice was performed; however, because tamoxifen chow was administered for 4 or 7 weeks, the labeled abDGC population was not properly birth-dated. Instead, it consisted of a heterogeneous cohort of cells ranging from 0 to 5-7 weeks old. Thus, caution should be taken when interpreting these results, and the limitations of this approach should be acknowledged.

      (4) There is a major issue related to the quantification of the DREADD experiments in Figure 4, Figure 5, Figure 6, and Figure 7. The hM4 mouse line used in this study should be quantified using HA, rather than mCitrine, to reliably identify cells derived from the Ascl lineage. mCitrine expression in this mouse line is not specific to adult-born neurons (off-targets), and its expression does not accurately reflect hM4 expression.

      (5) Key markers needed to assess the maturation state of abDGCs are missing from the quantification. Incorporating DCX and NeuN into the analysis would provide essential information about the developmental stage of these cells.

      Minor points:

      (1) The labeling (Distance from the hilus) in Figure 2B is misleading. Is that the same location as the subgranular zone (SGZ)? If so, it's better to use the term SGZ to avoid confusion.

      (2) Cell number information is missing from Figures 2B and 2C; please include this data.

      (3) Sample DG images should clearly delineate the borders between the dentate gyrus and the hilus. In several images, this boundary is difficult to discern.

      (4) In Figure 6, it is not clear how tamoxifen was administered to selectively inhibit the more mature 6-7-week-old abDGC population, nor how this paradigm differs from the chow-based approach. Please clarify the tamoxifen administration protocol and the rationale for its specificity.

      Comments on revisions:

      I appreciate the authors' careful and thorough revisions. They have addressed all of my previous concerns satisfactorily, and the manuscript is now significantly strengthened. I have no further concerns.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors investigate how increasing cognitive demand shapes activity patterns in the dorsal dentate gyrus (DG). Using a touchscreen-based TUNL task combined with TRAP/c-Fos tagging, birth-dating of adult-born granule cells (abDGCs), and chemogenetic inhibition, they show that higher task demand increases mature granule cell (mGC) recruitment and enhances suprapyramidal (SB) versus infrapyramidal (IB) blade bias. Functionally, mGC inhibition reduces overall activity and impairs performance without disrupting blade bias, whereas inhibition of {less than or equal to}7-week-old abDGCs increases mGC activity, abolishes blade bias, and impairs discrimination under high-demand conditions. These findings suggest that effective pattern separation depends not only on overall DG activity levels but also on the spatial organization of recruited ensembles.

      The integration of touchscreen TUNL with temporally controlled activity tagging and birth-dated cohorts is technically strong. Quantification of SB-IB bias and radial/apical distributions adds anatomical precision beyond bulk activity measures. The comparison between mGC and abDGC inhibition is conceptually compelling and supports dissociable functional roles. Overall, the data convincingly demonstrate that increasing cognitive demand amplifies blade-biased DG recruitment and that mGCs and abDGCs differentially contribute to both behavioral performance and network organization.

      However, how abDGCs are integrated into the mGC network under high cognitive demand remains unresolved. Additional experiments are needed to clarify how abDGCs shape spatial recruitment patterns and whether they directly inhibit or indirectly regulate mGC activity to maintain high performance.

      Furthermore, the authors frame "high cognitive demand" as a multidimensional construct encompassing broad behavioral challenge. It would strengthen the work to delineate how local abDGC-mGC circuit interactions regulate specific task components in real time. This will require higher temporal resolution approaches, as TRAP and c-Fos labeling integrate activity over prolonged windows and primarily reflect sustained engagement rather than moment-to-moment computations.<br /> The central conclusion that dentate function depends on coordinated spatial recruitment rather than total activity magnitude is supported by the data, although mechanistic interpretations should be tempered given methodological limitations.<br /> Overall, this work advances models of adult neurogenesis by emphasizing a critical-period modulatory role of abDGCs in organizing DG network activity during high-demand discrimination. The combined behavioral and circuit-level framework is likely to be influential in the field.

    4. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This study examines the role of dentate gyrus neuronal populations, reflecting neurogenesis and anatomical location (suprapyramidal vs infrapyramidal blade), in a mnemonic discrimination task that taxes the pattern separation functions of the dentate. The authors measure dentate gyrus activity resulting from cognitive training and test whether adult neurogenesis is required for both the anatomical patterns of activity and performance in the cognitive task. The authors find that more cognitively challenging variants of the task evoked more dentate activity, but also distinct patterns of activity (more activity in the suprapyramidal blade, less in the infdrapyramidal blade). Using chemogenetic approaches they silence mature vs immature dentate gyrus neurons and find that only mature neurons (either the general population or specifically mature adult-born neurons), and not immature adult-born neurons, are required for the difficult version of the task. Inhibition of mature adult-born neurons furthermore increased overall activity in the dentate and reduced the biased pattern of activity across the blades, consistent with evidence that adult-born neurons broadly regulate dentate gyrus activity.

      Comments on revisions:

      I appreciate the efforts the authors have taken to revise this manuscript. I have only minor concerns with this revised version of the manuscript:

      Methods state that significance is defined as P<0.05 but some results are interpreted as significant when P=0.05. Either the alpha value needs to change or the interpretation needs to change.

      I believe the statistical results for group and blade effects for the ANOVAs, in Figs 2,3 & 4, appear to be switched (blade should be significant, not group).

      I appreciate that sometimes there is not a perfect overlap between immunohistochemical signals, but I continue to believe that the spatially-non-overlapping TRAP and EDU signals in Fig 3 is caused by these 2 markers being in different cells. A Z-stack or orthogonal projection could verify/disprove this concern.

    5. Author Response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript investigates how dentate gyrus (DG) granule cell subregions, specifically suprapyramidal (SB) and infrapyramidal (IB) blades, are differentially recruited during a high cognitive demand pattern separation task. The authors combine TRAP2 activity labeling, touchscreen-based TUNL behavior, and chemogenetic inhibition of adult-born dentate granule cells (abDGCs) or mature granule cells (mGCs) to dissect circuit contributions.

      This manuscript presents an interesting and well-designed investigation into DG activity patterns under varying cognitive demands and the role of abDGCs in shaping mGC activity. The integration of TRAP2-based activity labeling, chemogenetic manipulation, and behavioral assays provides valuable insight into DG subregional organization and functional recruitment. However, several methodological and quantitative issues limit the interpretability of the findings. Addressing the concerns below will greatly strengthen the rigor and clarity of the study.

      Major points:

      (1) Quantification methods for TRAP+ cells are not applied consistently across panels in Figure 1, making interpretation difficult. Specifically, Figure 1F reports TRAP+ mGCs as density, whereas Figure 1G reports TRAP+ abDGCs as a percentage, hindering direct comparison. Additionally, Figure 1H presents reactivation analysis only for mGCs; a parallel analysis for abDGCs is needed for comparison across cell types.

      In Figure 1G and 1H we report TRAP+ abDGCs as a percentage rather than density because we are analyzing colocalization of the two markers, which are very sparse in this population. Given the very low number of double-labeled abDGCs, calculating density would not be practical. In the revised manuscript we have clarified the rationale for using these measures. As noted in the current text, we did not observe abDGCs co-expressing TRAP and c-Fos; we have made this point more explicit to guide interpretation of these data.

      (2) The anatomical distribution of TRAP+ cells is different between low- and high-cognitive demand conditions (Figure 2). Are these sections from dorsal or ventral DG? Is this specific to dorsal DG, as it is preferentially involved in cognitive function? What happens in ventral DG?

      The sections shown in Figure 2 were obtained from the dorsal dentate gyrus (see Methods, “Histology and imaging”: stereotaxic coordinates −1.20 to −2.30 mm relative to bregma, Paxinos atlas). From a feasibility standpoint, it is not possible to analyze the entire longitudinal extent of the hippocampus with these low-throughput histological approaches. We therefore focused on the dorsal DG, for which there is a strong functional rationale. A large body of work indicates that the dorsal hippocampus, and specifically the dorsal DG, is preferentially involved in spatial memory and in the fine contextual discrimination that underlies pattern separation. The dorsal hippocampus is critical for encoding and distinguishing similar spatial representations, a core component of the high-cognitive demand task used here. In contrast, the ventral DG is more strongly associated with emotional regulation and affective memory processing and is less implicated in high-resolution spatial encoding. For these reasons, the present study was designed to assess TRAP+ cell distributions specifically in the dorsal DG.

      (3) The activity manipulation using chemogenetic inhibition of abDGCs in AsclCreER; hM4 mice was performed; however, because tamoxifen chow was administered for 4 or 7 weeks, the labeled abDGC population was not properly birth-dated. Instead, it consisted of a heterogeneous cohort of cells ranging from 0 to 5-7 weeks old. Thus, caution should be taken when interpreting these results, and the limitations of this approach should be acknowledged.

      We agree that prolonged tamoxifen administration results in labeling a heterogeneous population of abDGCs spanning approximately 0 to 5–7 weeks of age, rather than a precisely birth-dated cohort. This is a limitation of this approach and we have included discussion of this in more detail in the revised manuscript.

      (4) There is a major issue related to the quantification of the DREADD experiments in Figure 4, Figure 5, Figure 6, and Figure 7. The hM4 mouse line used in this study should be quantified using HA, rather than mCitrine, to reliably identify cells derived from the Ascl lineage. mCitrine expression in this mouse line is not specific to adult-born neurons (off-targets), and its expression does not accurately reflect hM4 expression.

      We agree that mCitrine is not a marker that allows localization of hM4Di as it is well known that the mCitrine can be independently expressed in a Cre independent manner in this mouse. As suggested, we have removed the figure that showed the mCitrine and have performed immunohistochemical localization of the DREADD with an antibody against the HA tag. This is now shown in Figure 5.

      (5) Key markers needed to assess the maturation state of abDGCs are missing from the quantification. Incorporating DCX and NeuN into the analysis would provide essential information about the developmental stage of these cells.

      The goal of this study was to examine activity patterns of adult-born versus mature granule cells, rather than to assess maturation state. The adult-born neurons analyzed were 25–39 days old, an age at which point most cells have progressed beyond the DCX⁺ stage and are expected to express NeuN based on prior work. We therefore do not think that including DCX or NeuN quantification would provide additional information relevant to the aims or interpretation of this study.

      Minor points:

      (1) The labeling (Distance from the hilus) in Figure 2B is misleading. Is that the same location as the subgranular zone (SGZ)? If so, it's better to use the term SGZ to avoid confusion.

      We have updated Figure 2B, the Methods, and the main text to more explicitly localize this which it the boundary between the subgranular zone (SGZ) and the hilus.

      (2) Cell number information is missing from Figures 2B and 2C; please include this data.

      We have now added the cell number information to the figure legends. In Figures 2B and 2C, each point corresponds to a single cell, with an equal number of mice per group. The total number of TRAP⁺ cells per mouse is shown in Figure 1F, which reports TRAP⁺ cell densities by group.

      (3) Sample DG images should clearly delineate the borders between the dentate gyrus and the hilus. In several images, this boundary is difficult to discern.

      We made the DG-hilus boundaries clearer in the sample images to improve visualization and interpretation.

      (4) In Figure 6, it is not clear how tamoxifen was administered to selectively inhibit the more mature 6-7-week-old abDGC population, nor how this paradigm differs from the chow-based approach. Please clarify the tamoxifen administration protocol and the rationale for its specificity.

      We apologize for the confusion here. The protocol used in Figure 6 is the same tamoxifen chow–based approach as in Figure 5, differing only in the duration of tamoxifen exposure. Mice in Figure 5 received tamoxifen chow for 7 weeks, whereas mice in Figure 6 received it for 4 weeks, restricting labeling to a younger and narrower cohort of adult-born DGCs. Thus, the population targeted in Figure 6 is younger than that in Figure 5 and does not correspond to mature 6–7-week-old neurons. By contrast, the experiment in Figure 4 targets a more mature population, consisting predominantly of ~5-week-old adult-born neurons as well as mature granule cells, which are Dock10-positive and express Cre endogenously, allowing selective manipulation of this later-stage population.

      We have corrected the paragraph accordingly and clarified the age range of the labeled populations in the revised manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      In this manuscript, the authors combine an automated touchscreen-based trial-unique nonmatching-to-location (TUNL) task with activity-dependent labeling (TRAP/c-Fos) and birth-dating of adult-born dentate granule cells (abDGCs) to examine how cognitive demand modulates dentate gyrus (DG) activity patterns. By varying spatial separation between sample and choice locations, the authors operationally increase task difficulty and show that higher demand is associated with increased mature granule cell (mGC) activity and an amplified suprapyramidal (SB) versus infrapyramidal (IB) blade bias. Using chemogenetic inhibition, they further demonstrate dissociable contributions of abDGCs and mGCs to task performance and DG activation patterns.

      The combination of behavioral manipulation, spatially resolved activity tagging, and temporally defined abDGC perturbations is a strength of the study and provides a novel circuit-level perspective on how adult neurogenesis modulates DG function. In particular, the comparison across different abDGC maturation windows is well designed and narrows the functionally relevant population to neurons within the critical period (~4-7 weeks). The finding that overall mGC activity levels, in addition to spatially biased activation patterns, are required for successful performance under high cognitive demand is intriguing.

      Major Comments

      (1) Individual variability and the relationship between performance and DG activation.

      The manuscript reports substantial inter-animal variability in the number of days required to reach the criterion, particularly during large-separation training. Given this variability, it would be informative to examine whether individual differences in performance correlate with TRAP+ or c-Fos+ density and/or spatial bias metrics. While the authors report no correlation between success and TRAP+ density in some analyses, a more systematic correlation across learning rate, final performance, and DG activation patterns (mGC vs abDGC, SB vs IB) could strengthen the interpretation that DG activity reflects task engagement rather than performance only.

      As mentioned, we previously reported no correlation between task success and TRAP+ density. We have now performed additional analyses examining correlations with learning rate, final performance, and DG activation patterns (mGC vs abDGC, SB vs IB), and found no significant relationships. Therefore, as we did not find any positive correlations the original interpretation that DG activity primarily reflects task engagement rather than performance level seems the most parsimonious.

      (2) Operational definition of "cognitive demand".

      The distinction between low (large separation) and high (small separation) cognitive demand is central to the manuscript, yet the definition remains somewhat broad. Reduced spatial separation likely alters multiple behavioral variables beyond cognitive load, including reward expectation, attentional demands, confidence, engagement, and potentially motivation. The authors should more explicitly acknowledge these alternative interpretations and clarify whether "cognitive demand" is intended as a composite construct rather than a strictly defined cognitive operation.

      We agree that reducing spatial separation between stimuli likely engages multiple behavioral and cognitive processes beyond a single, strictly defined operation. We have now clarified this point in the manuscript and explicitly state that our use of the term “cognitive demand” reflects a multidimensional behavioral challenge rather than a singular cognitive process (see Discussion).

      (3) Potential effects of task engagement on neurogenesis.

      Given the extensive behavioral training and known effects of experience on adult neurogenesis, it remains unclear whether the task itself alters the size or maturation state of the abDGC population. Although the focus is on activity and function rather than cell number, it would be useful to clarify whether neurogenesis rates were assessed or controlled for, or to explicitly state this as a limitation.

      While the primary goal of this study was to examine activity and functional recruitment of adult-born granule cells, we also quantified the survival of birth-dated neurons at the end of behavioral training. Density measurements of BrdU⁺ and EdU⁺ cells revealed no differences across experimental groups, indicating that engagement in the pattern separation task, across low to high cognitive demand conditions, did not significantly alter survival of adult-born neurons. In addition, we examined the spatial distribution of BrdU⁺ and EdU⁺ neurons between the suprapyramidal and infrapyramidal blades of the dentate gyrus. The proportion of newborn neurons was consistent across all groups, with approximately 60% located in the suprapyramidal blade and 40% in the infrapyramidal blade. These findings indicate that behavioral training did not alter the baseline distribution of adult-born neurons. We have now clarified these points in the manuscript (See Results).

      (4) Temporal resolution of activity tagging.

      TRAP and c-Fos labeling provide a snapshot of neural activity integrated over a temporal window, making it difficult to determine which task epochs or trial types drive the observed activation patterns. This limitation is partially acknowledged, but the conclusions occasionally imply trial-specific or demand-specific encoding. The authors should more clearly distinguish between sustained task engagement and moment-to-moment trial processing, and temper interpretations accordingly. While beyond the scope of the current study, this also motivates future experiments using in vivo recording approaches.

      We agree and have made changes to the manuscript to discuss these points (see Discussion and Limitations).

      (5) Interpretation of altered spatial patterns following abDGC inhibition.

      In the abDGC inhibition experiments, Cre+ DCZ animals show delayed learning relative to controls. As a result, when animals are sacrificed, they may be at an intermediate learning stage rather than at an equivalent behavioral endpoint. This raises the possibility that altered DG activation patterns reflect the learning stage rather than a direct circuit effect of abDGC inhibition. Additional clarification or analysis controlling for the learning stage would strengthen the causal interpretation.

      We agree that differences in learning stage could in principle confound the interpretation of DG activation patterns. However, although Cre+ DCZ-treated mice exhibited delayed learning, they ultimately reached the same performance criterion as control animals. Thus, adult-born DGC inhibition did not prevent learning but increased the time required to reach criterion, indicating that these neurons are beneficial for learning efficiency rather than strictly necessary for task acquisition. Importantly, all animals were sacrificed only after reaching the predefined success criterion. Therefore, the immunohistochemical analyses were performed at the same behavioral endpoint for Cre+ DCZ and control groups, even though the number of training days differed. Consequently, the observed differences in DG activation reflect circuit recruitment at equivalent task mastery rather than differences in learning stage.

      (6) Relationship between c-Fos density and behavioral performance.

      The study reports that abDGC inhibition increases c-Fos density while impairing performance, whereas mGC inhibition decreases c-Fos density and also impairs performance. This raises an important conceptual question regarding the relationship between overall activity levels and task success. The authors suggest that both sufficient activity and appropriate spatial patterning are required, but the manuscript would benefit from a more explicit discussion of how different perturbations may shift the identity, composition, or coordination of the active neuronal ensemble rather than simply altering total activity levels.

      We agree that our findings highlight that successful performance is not determined solely by the overall level of dentate gyrus activity, but rather by the composition and spatial organization of the active neuronal ensemble. In our study, inhibition of abDGCs increased overall mGC activity while disrupting the spatially organized, blade-biased activation pattern and impaired performance. In contrast, direct inhibition of mGCs reduced global excitability but preserved the relative spatial organization of active neurons in animals that continued to perform the task. These findings suggest that different perturbations alter task performance by shifting the identity and coordination of the active neuronal ensemble, rather than simply increasing or decreasing total activity levels. We have now expanded the Discussion to more explicitly address how dentate gyrus computations may depend on the structured recruitment of granule cell ensembles and how distinct manipulations differentially disrupt this organization.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used genetic models and immunohistochemistry to identify how training in a spatial discrimination working memory task influences activity in the dentate gyrus subregion of the hippocampus. Finding that more cognitively challenging variants of the task evoked more and distinct patterns of activity, they then investigated whether newborn neurons in particular were important for learning this task and regulating the spatial activity patterns.

      Strengths:

      The focus on precise anatomical locations of activity is relatively novel and potentially important, given that little is known about how DG subregions contribute to behavior. The authors also use a task that is known to depend on this memory-related part of the brain.

      Weaknesses:

      Statistical rigor is insufficient. Many statistical results are not stated, inappropriate tests are used, and sample sizes differ across experiments (which appear to potentially underlie null results). The chemogenetic approach to inhibit adult-born neurons also does not appear to be targeting these neurons, as judged by their location in the DG.

      Please refer to the updated statistical analyses in response to the recommendations below.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewing Editor Comments

      Please note that reviewers agreed that appropriate revisions are needed to increase the strength of evidence for the paper's claims. Concerns were raised about a lack of statistical rigor in the statistical analyses used. Results of statistical tests were not consistently provided (i.e., statistic applied, value of statistic, degrees of freedom, p-value), and seemingly inappropriate statistical tests were used in some instances. Also, some comparisons had lower statistical power than others. When clarifying the statistical approaches used in the manuscript, we also encourage you to consider reading this article that outlines common statistical mistakes (Makin TR, Orban de Xivry JJ. Ten common statistical mistakes to watch out for when writing or reviewing a manuscript. Elife. 2019 Oct 9;8:e48175. doi: 10.7554/eLife.48175.), such as the importance of not basing conclusions on a significant p-value for one pair-wise comparison vs a non-significant p-value for another pairwise comparison (i.e., groups that are being compared should be included in the same statistical analysis, and interaction effects should be reported when appropriate). We hope that you find this information to be helpful should you decide to submit a revised manuscript to eLife.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Standardize TRAP+ quantification across Figure 1.

      Please report TRAP+ cell numbers using consistent metrics (e.g., density or percentage) to enable comparison across cell types. In addition, extend the TRAP+ reactivation analysis in Figure 1H to include abDGCs so that reactivation dynamics can be compared directly between mGCs and abDGCs.

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      (2) Clarify whether dorsal or ventral DG was analyzed in Figure 2.

      The differing anatomical distributions of TRAP+ cells under low- and high-demand conditions raise important questions about DG axis specificity. Please indicate whether analyses were performed in dorsal DG, ventral DG, or both, and provide data or justification accordingly.

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      (3) Acknowledge limitations of the tamoxifen-chow labeling strategy in AsclCreER; hM4 experiments.

      Since tamoxifen chow administered over 4-7 weeks labels a heterogeneous abDGC population spanning a broad age range, this approach does not generate birth-dated cohorts. This limitation should be clearly addressed in the text and interpretations, particularly related to cell age-dependent effects, should be tempered.

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      (4) Revise DREADD quantification using HA rather than mCitrine.

      The hM4 mouse line requires HA immunostaining to accurately identify Ascl-lineage cells expressing the DREADD receptor. Because mCitrine is not specific to adult-born neurons and does not reliably reflect hM4 expression, quantification based on mCitrine should be revised.

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      (5) Include markers to assess abDGC maturation state.

      Adding quantification of DCX and NeuN would help define the developmental stage of abDGCs in key experiments and improve the interpretation of cell-age-dependent effects.

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      (6) Clarify DG layer boundaries and terminology in Figure 2.

      If the metric labeled "Distance from the hilus" corresponds to the subgranular zone (SGZ), using SGZ terminology would prevent confusion. Additionally, please provide clearer delineation of DG and hilus borders in sample images.

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      (7) Provide missing cell number data for Figures 2B and 2C.

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      (8) Clarify the tamoxifen administration protocol in Figure 6.

      Please describe how the protocol selectively targets 6-7-week-old abDGCs and how it differs from the chow-based approach. This will help readers understand the intended specificity of the manipulation.

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      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) EdU birth-dating timeline

      The manuscript would benefit from a clearer description of the EdU birth-dating timeline, ideally with a schematic similar to that provided for BrdU in Supplementary Figure 1.

      We appreciate the suggestion. However, we did not include a separate schematic for EdU because its use and birth-dating logic are identical to BrdU (both are thymidine analogs administered systemically and incorporated during S-phase). Therefore, the timeline shown in Supplementary Figure 1 applies equally to both markers. We have clarified this point in the Methods section to avoid confusion.

      (2) Clarity of TUNL task description.

      The description of the TUNL task, particularly for readers unfamiliar with touchscreen-based paradigms, is difficult to follow without consulting prior literature. A simplified schematic or a clearer step-by-step explanation in the main text or supplementary material would improve accessibility.

      We note that the main steps of the TUNL protocol are illustrated in Figure 1A, Supplementary Figure 2A and 2B. Nevertheless, we agree that the description in the text can be made clearer for readers less familiar with touchscreen-based tasks. Thus , we have now revised the Methods section to provide a clearer step-by-step description of the TUNL.

      (3) Influence of outliers in Figure 1G.

      In Figure 1G, the reported trend that ~1% of 25-39-day-old abDGCs are TRAP+ during LS trials appears to be driven by a small number of outliers. This should be acknowledged, and the wording of the conclusion moderated to reflect the variability in the data.

      We agree with the reviewer that the apparent outliers reflect the inherent sparsity of TRAP labeling in this population. In absolute terms, this corresponds to between 0 and 2 TRAP⁺ 25–39-day-old abDGCs per mouse, such that the presence or absence of a small number of labeled cells can appear as outliers when expressed as a percentage. We have revised the text to acknowledge this (see Results).

      (4) Presentation of learning curves.

      Rather than focusing primarily on "days before criterion" (DBC), it would be helpful to show full learning curves across the entire training period. This would provide a clearer picture of acquisition dynamics and inter-animal variability.

      We agree that learning curves can be informative in many behavioral paradigms. However, in our protocol, mice do not undergo the same number of training days because training stops individually once each animal reaches criterion. As a result, plotting full learning curves would produce trajectories of different lengths, making group comparisons difficult and visually cluttered. For this reason, we aligned animals based on days before criterion (DBC), which allows direct comparison of learning dynamics relative to task acquisition. We also consider the cumulative probability representation to be the most appropriate way to summarize learning progression across animals in this context which are also included in the figures.

      (5) Clarification of Figure 3B labeling

      In Figure 3B, the identity of the orange-labeled group above the LS condition is unclear. Clarification in the figure legend would improve interoperability.

      Figure 3B includes two experimental groups. One group performed both the large- and small-separation conditions; this group is shown in orange and labeled LS. Within this group, the upper orange trace corresponds to performance in the large-separation condition, while the lower orange trace corresponds to performance in the small-separation condition. The second group is a control group that performed only the large-separation configuration, and therefore only a single green trace is shown. We agree that this distinction was not sufficiently clear and have revised the figure legend and text to clarify the identity of each trace.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Please label figures and, even better, put the legends on the same page.

      (2) Just to confirm, in establishing the task, mice performed above 70% for the small separation trials in one of the sessions on 2 consecutive days, for each criterion? Performance seems to be below 70%.

      Yes. To meet the criterion, each mouse had to reach ≥70% correct performance in at least one of the two daily sessions on two consecutive days. We then averaged the performance across both sessions for each of those days. As a result, if one session was ≥70% but the other was lower, the daily average could fall below 70%. The values shown in the figure correspond to these daily averages, further averaged across mice.

      (3) mGC needs to be explicitly defined. Am I assuming any non-birthdated GC is an mGC according to the authors? (which means it is unknown whether they are in fact mature, though likely most of them are).

      In this study, “mature granule cells” (mGCs) refer operationally to granule cells that are not birth-dated with BrdU or EdU and therefore are not classified as adult-born neurons within the defined labeling window. We agree that this population is not directly age-defined, and that while the majority are expected to be mature based on their birth timing relative to the labeling period, we cannot exclude the possibility that a small fraction may include younger, unlabeled neurons. We have now explicitly defined this usage of mGCs in the Methods and clarified this point in the text to avoid ambiguity.

      (4) Methods state that Kruskal-Wallis tests were used when more than 3 groups were compared, but I don't see these stats presented (e.g., for trap data in Figure 1, blade x task TRAP expt in Figure 3 (should be 2-way RM anova here and elsewhere), etc) or any corrections for multiple comparisons. I appreciate that the mean rates of TRAPed abGCs are higher in the S and LS groups than in the shaping group, but most mice do not have any BrdU+ cells that are also TRAPed, and there are no statistics here to support the claim. I don't think there is enough sampling to accurately quantify activation of abGCs. Also, no stats to support the claim that TRAPing increases at the "tip of the SB after the more demanding LS task".

      We agree with this comment. We have now systematically tested all datasets for normality (by group) and applied parametric tests when the data met normality assumptions, and non-parametric tests otherwise. The statistical analyses have been revised accordingly. We added the appropriate tests (including two-way ANOVA where relevant, such as for blade × group comparisons) and now report full statistics in the figure legends and results sections. For the TRAP analyses in adult-born DGCs, we explicitly acknowledge the very low number of BrdU⁺/TRAP⁺ cells, which limits statistical power and, in some cases, precludes robust statistical testing. These limitations are now clearly stated in the Results and Discussion, and the corresponding interpretations have been tempered. For all Kruskal–Wallis tests, post hoc pairwise comparisons were performed using Dunn’s test, with Bonferroni correction for multiple comparisons, as now specified in the Methods section. We also expanded the Methods to describe the statistical workflow in detail. In addition, we have added the previously missing statistical analysis for Figure 2C. Comparisons were performed between the 0–50% and 50–100% portions of the blade, where 0% corresponds to the apex and 100% corresponds to the distal tip of the blade.

      (5) Figure 3I: I can't figure out which effect is statistically significant here (what does the asterisk signify?). Why no individual data points in this graph?

      We agree that the absence of individual data points reduced interpretability, and we have now updated the figure to include individual data points to better illustrate data distribution and variability.

      (6) The gradient of activity (shap < S < LS) could be due to how long they've been trained on a given stage (e.g. less activity during shaping because they have habituated, and neurons encoding that task phase have already been selected)

      We agree that task duration and habituation could, in principle, influence activity levels. Under this interpretation, higher activity would primarily reflect task novelty rather than cognitive demand. However, our data do not support this explanation. Specifically, we found no correlation between the number of training days required to reach criterion and c-Fos–positive or TRAP-positive cell density within a given stage. Thus, animals that reached criterion rapidly did not show higher activity levels than animals that required more days of training and were presumably more habituated to the task demands. This suggests that the observed activity gradient (shaping < S < LS) is not driven by exposure duration or habituation, but rather reflects differences in cognitive demand across task stages.

      (7) The TRAP+ EDU+ cell in Figure 3 looks odd because the BrdU signal is (a lot) larger than the TRAP signal, but BrdU is in the nucleus and should be smaller.

      We agree that the example in Figure 3 is not optimal. In dividing cells, BrdU/EdU signals can sometimes appear broader or closely apposed, which may affect their apparent size.

      (8) For the Ascl-HM4Di experiment, HM4Di appears to be expressed in all of the areas of the granule cell layer where abGCs are NOT located (i.e. no expression in the deep cell layer, near the sgz). This is problematic because it suggests perhaps abGCs are not inhibited as expected.

      As noted in our response to Reviewer #1, we did not use the mCitrine to localize the DREADD receptor as it has been demonstrated that mCitrine expression is expressed in a Cre-independent manner and not correlated with hM4Di expression. In the revised manuscript we include a representative image were we performed immunostaining using an HA antibody to directly visualize hM4Di and confirm its expression in adult-born granule cells (Figure 5).

      (9) Line 267: "6-7 week old neurons by themselves do not influence either the performance of mice in the task". I don't think this is fair because this experiment wasn't designed with as much power to detect an effect. The group trends are in the same direction, but there are many fewer mice in this experiment (n=6/group) than in the =<7w experiment (n=11/group), where the effect just reached statistical significance.

      We are sorry for this confusion which came from an incorrect version. The experiment shown in Figure 6 does not target 6–7-week-old neurons specifically. It uses the same tamoxifen chow–based protocol as Figure 5, but with a shorter exposure (4 weeks vs. 7 weeks), thereby labeling a younger and more restricted cohort of adult-born DGCs. By contrast, Figure 4 targets a more mature population, consisting predominantly of ~5-week-old adult-born neurons as well as mature granule cells (Dock10+).

      We have corrected the paragraph accordingly and clarified the age range of the labeled populations in the revised manuscript.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This paper describes Unbend - a new method for measuring and correcting motions in cryo-EM images, with a particular emphasis on more challenging in situ samples such as lamellae and whole cells. The method, which fits a B-spline model using cross-correlation-based local patch alignment of micrograph frames, represents an important tool for the cryo-EM community. The authors elegantly use 2D template matching to provide convincing evidence that Unbend outperforms the previously reported method of Unblur by the same authors. Comparison to alternative programs for motion correction shows smaller gains, but with interesting differences between data sets.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Kong et al.'s work describes a new approach that does exactly what the title states, "Correction of local beam-induced sample motion in cryo-EM images using a 3D spline model." It is, therefore, a more elaborate approach than current methods in the field for the "movie alignment" stage. Additionally, the work uses 2DTM (2D Template Matching)-related measurements to quantify the improvement of the new method compared to other methods in the field. I find both parts very compelling (the new method and the testing approach)

      On a "focused" view, the strengths of the work rest on presenting a better approach for motion correction and on measuring their performance very well at the 2D level in a compelling manner

      On a more "general" view, the authors introduce the important notion that even one of the most worked-out steps in the processing workflow can still be done better in a measurable way, and that this could lead to better results beyond the 2DTM metrics used for testing, reflecting in better results along the processing pipeline (although the manuscript does not explore further this notion)

      On the "usability" side, the method is still CPU-based and is slower than standards in the field. This may pose significant limitations in practical work, although the authors are aware of this issue and are working on it.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present a new method, Unbend, for measuring motion in cryo-EM images, with a particular emphasis on more challenging in situ samples such as lamella and whole cells (that can be more prone to overall motion and/or variability in motion across a field of view). Building on their previous approach of full-frame alignment (Unblur), they now perform full-frame alignment followed by patch alignment, and then use these outputs to generate a 3D model of the motion. This model allows them to estimate a continuous, per-pixel shift field for each movie frame that aims to better describe complex motions and so ultimately generate improved motion-corrected micrographs. Performance of Unbend is evaluated using the 2D template matching (2DTM) method developed previously by the lab, and results are compared to using full-frame correction alone and to the leading local motion correction methods. Several different in situ samples are used for evaluation covering a broad range that will be of interest to the rapidly growing in situ cryo-EM community.

      Strengths:

      The method appears an elegant way of describing complex motions in cryo-EM samples and the authors present sound data that Unbend generally improves SNR of aligned micrographs as well as increases detection of particles matching the 60S ribosome template when compared to using full-frame correction alone and since review to the leading local motion correction methods. The authors also give interesting insights into how different areas of a lamella behave with respect to motion by using Unbend on a montage dataset collected previously by the group. There is growing interest in imaging larger areas of in situ samples at high resolution and these insights contribute valuable knowledge. Additionally, the availability of data collected in this study through the EMPIAR repository will be much appreciated by the field.

      Weaknesses:

      A major weakness was comparing this method to full-frame approaches only but this has since been addressed by the authors during review and Unbend is compared to MotionCor2, 3, CryoSPARC and Warp. The improvements here are smaller, generally it seems to perform on par with the above methods, but there are significant gains for certain samples (e.g. the M. pneumoniae sample). A comment from this reviewer about using an adaptive approach to decide if/when to proceed to the full Unbend pipeline, over full-frame alone, has been addressed by the authors.

    4. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      Kong and coauthors describe and implement a method to correct local deformations due to beam induced motion in cryo-EM movie frames. This is done by fitting a 3D spline model to a stack of micrograph frames using cross-correlation-based local patch alignment to describe the deformations across the micrograph in each frame, and then computing the value of the deformed micrograph at each pixel by interpolating the undeformed micrograph at the displacement positions given by the spline model. A graphical interface in cisTEM allows the user to visualise the deformations in the sample, and the method is proved to be successful by showing improvements in 2D template matching (2DTM) results on the corrected micrographs using five in situ samples.

      Impact

      This method has great potential to further streamline the cryo-EM single particle analysis pipeline by shortening the required processing time as a result of obtaining higher quality particles early in the pipeline, and is applicable to both old and new datasets, therefore being relevant to all cryo-EM users.

      Strengths

      (1) The key idea of the paper is that local beam induced motion affects frames continuously in space (in the image plane) as well as in time (along the frame stack), so one can obtain improvements in the image quality by correcting such deformations in a continuous way (deformations vary continuously from pixel to pixel and from frame to frame) rather than based on local discrete patches only. 3D splines are used to model the deformations: they are initialised using local patch alignments and further refined using cross-correlation between individual patch frames and the average of the other frames in the same patch stack.

      (2) Another strength of the paper is using 2DTM to show that correcting such deformations continuously using the proposed method does indeed lead to improvements, as evidenced by the number of particles found and the quality of the detections (measured using 2DTM SNR). This is shown using five in situ datasets, where local motion is quantified using statistics based on the estimated motions of ribosomes. The same analysis is performed using other deformation correction tools, with Unbend showing superior performance in terms of particle detected or 2DTM SNR of the detections.

    5. Author Response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      We thank the reviewers for their constructive comments. A central concern raised is the comparison of performance with existing motion-correction methods. In response, we performed motion correction using several widely used approaches and compared results using the number of particles detected by 2DTM and their associated SNR. To minimize potential bias, we selected parameters to give each method a comparable level of model flexibility so that the results are as directly comparable as possible. Overall, Unbend performs the best. We note that extensive, method-specific parameter optimization could further affect absolute performance, and a comprehensive benchmarking study is therefore beyond the scope of this work

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Kong et al.'s work describes a new approach that does exactly what the title states: "Correction of local beam-induced sample motion in cryo-EM images using a 3D spline model." I find the method appropriate, logical, and well-explained. Additionally, the work suggests using 2DTM-related measurements to quantify the improvement of the new method compared to the old one in cisTEM, Unblur. I find this part engaging; it is straightforward, accurate, and, of course, the group has a strong command of 2DTM, presenting a thorough study.

      However, everything in the paper (except some correct general references) refers to comparisons with the full-frame approach, Unblur. Still, we have known for more than a decade that local correction approaches perform better than global ones, so I do not find anything truly novel in their proposal of using local methods (the method itself- Unbend- is new, but many others have been described previously). In fact, the use of 2DTM is perhaps a more interesting novelty of the work, and here, a more systematic study comparing different methods with these proposed well-defined metrics would be very valuable. As currently presented, there is no doubt that it is better than an older, well-established approach, and the way to measure "better" is very interesting, but there is no indication of how the situation stands regarding newer methods.

      Regarding practical aspects, it seems that the current implementation of the method is significantly slower than other patch-based approaches. If its results are shown to exceed those of existing local methods, then exploring the use of Unbend, possibly optimizing its code first, could be a valuable task. However, without more recent comparisons, the impact of Unbend remains unclear.

      We thank the reviewer for this important point. We agree that comparing against modern local motion-correction approaches is a valuable task. To address this, we added a new benchmarking section (pp. 17–18, lines 444–492, Fig. 8, Fig. 8—figure supplement 1) that compares Unbend against widely used patch-based local correction methods, including MotionCor2, MotionCor3, Warp, and CryoSPARC. Using the same 2DTM-based metrics described in the manuscript (detections per micrograph and SNR distributions for commonly detected particles), we find that Unbend provides the most stable performance across the tested datasets and, in most cases, yields higher detection counts and higher SNR than the alternative methods.

      Regarding runtime, the current implementation is CPU-based and is therefore slower than some optimized GPU-accelerated packages. We now clarify this limitation in the manuscript (line 498–499). Our primary goal in this study is to improve motion-correction accuracy and quantify its impact using 2DTM-based measures. Importantly, higher-quality motion-corrected micrographs can reduce downstream processing cost (e.g., by increasing particle detection efficiency and reducing ambiguous candidates), so modest additional compute times at the motion-correction stage can be offset later in the workflow. We also note that GPU acceleration and additional code-level optimizations are planned for future releases (line 501-503); however, they are not required to evaluate the methodological contribution and the benchmarking results presented here.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present a new method, Unbend, for measuring motion in cryo-EM images, with a particular emphasis on more challenging in situ samples such as lamella and whole cells (that can be more prone to overall motion and/or variability in motion across a field of view). Building on their previous approach of full-frame alignment (Unblur), they now perform full-frame alignment followed by patch alignment, and then use these outputs to generate a 3D cubic spline model of the motion. This model allows them to estimate a continuous, per-pixel shift field for each movie frame that aims to better describe complex motions and so ultimately generate improved motion-corrected micrographs. Performance of Unbend is evaluated using the 2D template matching (2DTM) method developed previously by the lab, and results are compared to using full-frame correction alone. Several different in situ samples are used for evaluation, covering a broad range that will be of interest to the rapidly growing in situ cryo-EM community.

      Strengths:

      The method appears to be an elegant way of describing complex motions in cryo-EM samples, and the authors present convincing data that Unbend generally improves SNR of aligned micrographs as well as increases detection of particles matching the 60S ribosome template when compared to using full-frame correction alone. The authors also give interesting insights into how different areas of a lamella behave with respect to motion by using Unbend on a montage dataset collected previously by the group. There is growing interest in imaging larger areas of in situ samples at high resolution, and these insights contribute valuable knowledge. Additionally, the availability of data collected in this study through the EMPIAR repository will be much appreciated by the field.

      Thank you for this positive assessment.

      Weaknesses:

      While the improvements with Unbend vs. Unblur appear clear, it is less obvious whether Unbend provides substantial gains over patch motion correction alone (the current norm in the field). It might be helpful for readers if this comparison were investigated for the in situ datasets. Additionally, the authors are open that in cases where full motion correction already does a good job, the extra degrees of freedom in Unbend can perhaps overfit the motions, making the corrections ultimately worse. I wonder if an adaptive approach could be explored, for example, using the readout from full-frame or patch correction to decide whether a movie should proceed to the full Unbend pipeline, or whether correction should stop at the patch estimation stage.

      We thank the reviewer for suggesting an adaptive criterion to decide whether to proceed patch alignment or not. We agree that such an approach could be valuable for efficiency and for avoiding unnecessary model flexibility. However, our results indicate that a simple criterion based on the magnitude of estimated local patch motion is unlikely to be sufficient. For example, in the BS-C-1 cell lysate dataset, (see line 412-417 on page 16), we observe minimal local motion (Figure 4b) with mean patch shifts of only 0.7Å and full-frame alignment already yields comparable detection counts, yet local correction still produces a measurable SNR gain (13.84 ± 0.04 to 14.25 ± 0.04, 3%) and improves SNR for ~70% of the commonly detected targets (Figure 6c). This suggests that residual local distortion can remain even when overall local motion appears small. Establishing a robust, dataset-agnostic stopping rule would therefore require a dedicated, systematic benchmarking study across many samples and acquisition conditions.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      Kong and coauthors describe and implement a method to correct local deformations due to beam-induced motion in cryo-EM movie frames. This is done by fitting a 3D spline model to a stack of micrograph frames using cross-correlation-based local patch alignment to describe the deformations across the micrograph in each frame, and then computing the value of the deformed micrograph at each pixel by interpolating the undeformed micrograph at the displacement positions given by the spline model. A graphical interface in cisTEM allows the user to visualise the deformations in the sample, and the method has been proven to be successful by showing improvements in 2D template matching (2DTM) results on the corrected micrographs using five in situ samples.

      Impact

      This method has great potential to further streamline the cryo-EM single particle analysis pipeline by shortening the required processing time as a result of obtaining higher quality particles early in the pipeline, and is applicable to both old and new datasets, therefore being relevant to all cryo-EM users.

      Strengths

      (1) One key idea of the paper is that local beam induced motion affects frames continuously in space (in the image plane) as well as in time (along the frame stack), so one can obtain improvements in the image quality by correcting such deformations in a continuous way (deformations vary continuously from pixel to pixel and from frame to frame) rather than based on local discrete patches only. 3D splines are used to model the deformations: they are initialised using local patch alignments and further refined using cross-correlation between individual patch frames and the average of the other frames in the same patch stack.

      (2) Another strength of the paper is using 2DTM to show that correcting such deformations continuously using the proposed method does indeed lead to improvements. This is shown using five in situ datasets, where local motion is quantified using statistics based on the estimated motions of ribosomes.

      Thank you for this positive assessment.

      Weaknesses

      (1) While very interesting, it is not clear how the proposed method using 3D splines for estimating local deformations compares with other existing methods that also aim to correct local beam-induced motion by approximating the deformations throughout the frames using other types of approximation, such as polynomials, as done, for example MotionCor2.

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We agree that positioning Unbend relative to existing local motion-correction methods is important. In the revised manuscript, we added a dedicated benchmarking section comparing Unbend with widely used local correction approaches, including MotionCor2, MotionCor3, Warp, and CryoSPARC, using the same 2DTM-based metrics (Fig. 8, Fig. 8—figure supplement 1). This section is included on pp. 17–18, lines 444–492. To make the comparison as fair as possible, we matched nominal model flexibility across methods and otherwise used default parameters to reduce method-specific tuning. This expanded comparison provides a direct baseline against current patch-/spline-based approaches and shows that Unbend performs consistently across the in situ datasets evaluated here, with improvements in detection counts and/or SNR in multiple cases.

      (2) The use of 2DTM is appropriate, and the results of the analysis are enlightening, but one shortcoming is that some relevant technical details are missing. For example, the 2DTM SNR is not defined in the article, and it is not clear how the authors ensured that no false positives were included in the particles counted before and after deformation correction. The Jupyter notebooks where this analysis was performed have not been made publicly available.

      We agree that these technical details improve clarity and reproducibility. We have therefore made three changes.

      (1) Definition of 2DTM SNR. We added an explicit definition of the 2DTM SNR in Section “2DTM provides a one-step verification for motion correction”, pp. 11, lines 277–287). Briefly, at each image location we compute cross-correlation values over the searched orientation space and define the 2DTM SNR as the maximum per location z-score across orientations.

      (2) False-positive control / detection threshold. We clarified how detection thresholds were set to control false positives (pp. 11, lines 285–287). Specifically, we used the standard 2DTM statistical framework in which the threshold  is chosen using the one-false-positive (1-FP) criterion (or equivalently, a specified expected false-positive rate). We applied the same thresholding procedure consistently across all motion-corrected micrographs. This ensures that particle counts before/after correction reflect changes in signal recovery.

      (3) Reproducibility of the analysis. We have made the script used for the benchmarking and figure generation publicly available (pp. 24 line 622-623), and we provide a link in the Data Availability statement (pp. 25 line 650). The repository includes sample .star files and a python package that computes detections per micrograph, commonly detected particles, and SNR comparisons.

      (3) It is also not clear how the proposed deformation correction method is affected by CTF defocus in the different samples (are the defocus values used in the different datasets similar or significantly different?) or if there is any effect at all.

      We thank the reviewer for raising this point. In the revised manuscript, we now report the defocus ranges used for each dataset (Table 1) and clarify that all motion-correction comparisons were performed within each dataset using the same CTF estimation and 2DTM settings (pp. 23 line 615-618). Across the five datasets, four were collected at similar defocus ranges (1.0 µm to 1.5µm), whereas one dataset includes near-focus (0.4 µm) micrographs (Table 1). Because Unbend operates on frame alignment/warping rather than CTF modeling, we do not expect a defocus specific effect beyond indirect influences through image SNR and reliability of cross-correlation-based alignment.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      The obvious recommendation would be to use their 2DTM approach for a comparison of their new method with other currently used ones

      We agree and added a new comparison section (pp. 17–18, lines 444–492). Addressed above in Response to Reviewer #1 Public Review.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Line 29, typo. 3 ~ 8% > 3 - 8%.

      Corrected.

      (2) Lines 220 and 226. Should this be e-/Angstrom squared for the exposure?

      Corrected to e<sup>-</sup>/Å<sup>2</sup> (Now pp. 9 lines 230, 236).

      (3) Figure 2 c-d. These are good for instinctively seeing the movement, but I found the legend confusing, as a 10 x 10 pixel array is mentioned, yet the schematics show a higher sampling (30 x 30 pixels? in c-e).

      Thank you for pointing this out. The “10×10” annotation refers to the physical scale, whereas the grid represents pixel sampling. We removed the “10×10” label and now show only the pixel grid to avoid confusion. The caption has been updated to state that the grid corresponds to a 30×30 pixel sampling. (Fig. 2c, d; pp. 31, line 766)

      (4) Figure 4. It would be good if the n of movies analyzed was given in the figure legend.

      Thank you for noticing this. We report the number of movies per dataset in the corresponding summary table (Table 1).

      (5) Figure 5. X/Y axes labels missing (assume pixels). Also, suggest changing the strain scale to % to match the main text description of this figure.

      We added X/Y axis labels, changed the strain scale to % (Figure 5), and specified that the strains are per pixel on pp. 14 line 367. Correspondingly, the X/Y labels and strain scale in strain plots in Figure 4—figure supplementary 1 to 5 are also changed.

      (6) Unify labelling of Figure 4 and 6 (i.e., Bacteria vs. M. pneumoniae, etc.).

      Corrected. Sample labels are now consistent across figures. (Figures 4 and 6)

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Some recommendations related to the points mentioned in the 'Weaknesses' section in the public review:

      (1) If feasible, it would be useful to see a comparison with other existing methods that estimate local deformations (e.g., MotionCor2), at least on some of the datasets. For example, does the proposed method lead to better 2DTM SNR in the detected particles compared to other methods, or higher detection numbers? Alternatively, if such a comparison would require too much additional work and the authors have good reasons to believe that the results are evident, it would be helpful to include a discussion about why the proposed method is expected to perform better, both in terms of the general approach and specific implementation details.

      We agree that this comparison is important. (pp. 17–18, lines 444–492). Addressed above in Response to Reviewer #3 Public Review (1).

      (2) It would be useful to define the 2DTM SNR in the main text of the paper, as well as to address the point about false positives in the picked particles.

      We added an explicit definition of 2DTM SNR and clarified the detection thresholding/false-positive control used in our analysis (pp. 11, lines 277–287). Addressed above in Response to Reviewer #3 Public Review (2.1 and 2.2).

      (3) Regarding the results shown in Figures 4 and 6: do the authors have any insight about how the CTF defocus affects the deformation estimation and correction across the different sample types?

      We now report the defocus ranges used for each dataset (Table 1). We have addressed this problem in Response to Reviewer #3 Public Review (3).

      (4) Will the Jupyter notebooks used for the 2DTM analysis be made publicly available?

      Yes. We have deposited a python script used for the 2DTM benchmarking and figure generation in a public repository and added the link in Data Availability statement. (pp. 23 line 622, pp. 25 line 650). Addressed above in Response to Reviewer #3 Public Review (2.3).

      (5) I would also appreciate a few words about the implementation details of the 3D spline model (e.g., what libraries have been used, if any, or if the authors have implemented their own code for this).

      The 3D spline model and warping code were implemented by us (no external spline library was used) and the relevant implementation details are described in the “Sample distortion modeling and correction” section (pp. 7–10, lines 174–246). For optimization, we used the L-BFGS implementation provided by the dlib library, which is now explicitly cited (pp. 10, line 264).

      Some comments regarding the presentation of the work:

      (1) I found the mathematical background on splines on pages 7-9 a little distracting from the main ideas of the paper, and I believe it could be moved to the methods section. A short description of this in the main text of the paper would suffice, and it would be useful to state clearly when this is background material and when it is the authors' contribution.

      We appreciate the suggestion. Because Unbend includes an in-house spline implementation (no external spline library) and it is the central part of this work, we retained the spline description to support reproducibility. (pp. 7–10, lines 174–246).

      (2) More generally, I found the whole method very interesting, but understanding exactly what all the steps involved were was a bit cumbersome, as they are spread across different sections of the main text. I think it would be useful to have a dedicated section giving the exact steps taken in the algorithm, possibly pointing to the relevant section in the text for more details about each step. This could be, for example, in the form of an 'Algorithm' box or a flowchart.

      We added an Algorithm box as Figure 2 supplement summarizing the end-to-end workflow and pointing to the relevant sections for details (Figure 2—figure supplement 1 Algorithm, pp. 4, line 96–103, pp. 32 line 799). This is intended to make the sequence of steps easier to follow.

      (3) In Figure 3, panels (b) and (c), the difference between the two micrographs, before and after correction, is not very noticeable, particularly the Thon rings in the spectra. I don't know if this is due to the image quality in the paper or if a better example could be shown. For example, the differences are clear in some of the supplementary figures.

      Thank you for the suggestion. We revised the figure by adding annotations to show the recovered Thon rings. This figure shows a vertex motion and is intended not only to show improvement but also to illustrate complex, spatially varying deformation patterns that motivate the 3D spline model (pp. 12, lines 304–308). The supplementary figures display those with highest motions in each sample type, thus the Thon rings for the motion corrected micrograph in higher frequency space look more obvious. We also refer readers to the supplementary examples where the differences are more pronounced (pp. 12, lines 310–312).

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    1. eLife Assessment

      This is a valuable study that integrates behavioral and molecular approaches to identify neuromodulators influencing blood-feeding behavior in the disease vector Anopheles stephensi. Through gene expression analyses across blood-seeking life stages and RNA interference experiments, the authors present solid evidence that co-knockdown of the neuromodulators short Neuropeptide F and RYamide affects blood-seeking states in A. stephensi. However, evidence demonstrating that these neuropeptides are sufficient to promote host-seeking is lacking.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Bansal et al examine and characterize feeding behaviour in Anopheles stephensi mosquitoes. While sharing some similarities to the well-studied Aedes aegypti mosquito, the authors demonstrate that mated-females, but not unmated (virgin) females, exhibit suppression in their blood-feeding behaviour after imbibing an initial bloodmeal. Using brain transcriptomic analysis comparing sugar fed, blood fed and starved mosquitoes, several candidate genes potentially responsible for influencing blood-feeding behaviour were identified, including two neuropeptides (short NPF and RYamide) that are known to modulate feeding behaviour in other mosquito species. Using molecular tools including in situ hybridization, the authors map the distribution of cells producing these neuropeptides in the nervous system and in the gut. Further, by implementing systemic RNA interference (RNAi), the study suggests that both neuropeptides (particularly in the brain, but not in the abdomen since knockdown outside the brain did not affect feeding behaviour) appear to promote blood-feeding while having no impact on sugar feeding. Interestingly, when either of these two neuropeptide gene transcripts were reduced independently by RNAi, the proportion of females acquiring a blood meal was not affected, whereas simultaneous knockdown of both sNPF and RYa led to a reduction in blood feeding behaviour but did not impact sugar feeding.

      Given that the expression of both neuropeptide genes was found in mostly in non-overlapping brain neurons, this suggests that these two neuropeptides may elicit at least partially complementary actions promoting blood feeding in A. stephensi. Indeed, their putative receptors appear to be colocalized within several neurons within the brain, which could explain why knockdown of both sNPF and RYa transcripts was required to affect blood feeding behaviour (although authors could not confirm if either of these neuropeptides act independently as only partial knockdown was achieved in the brain). Finally, while sNPF was mapped to brain neurons and midgut enteroendocrine cells, the authors mapped RYa only in the brain while reporting expression in the abdomen by qPCR, but that was not localized to the midgut EECs (like sNPF). Therefore, the source of RYamide in the abdomen remains unknown in this mosquito species, but could involve the abdominal ganglia where this neuropeptide has been localized in Ae. aegypti.

      Strengths and/or weaknesses:

      Overall, the manuscript was effectively communicated. Previous concerns and requested clarifications have been addressed in the revised manuscript. While advanced cell-specific tools are lacking in this mosquito species, one weakness here is that peptides could have been applied ectopically in attempts to rescue the deficit in blood feeding behaviour following knockdown by RNAi. Further insight in this regard may be provided in future studies by this and other research groups.

      Reviewing editor comment:

      Inclusion of a schematic in Supplementary Figure S9B addresses the point raised by reviewer 1 in the previous round.

    3. Author Response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Here Bansal et al., present a study on the fundamental blood and nectar feeding behaviors of the critical disease vector, Anopheles stephensi. The study encompasses not just the fundamental changes in blood feeding behaviors of the crucially understudied vector, but then use a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate neuromodulation path ways which influence blood feeding behavior in this mosquito species. The authors then provide evidence through RNAi knockdown of candidate pathways that the neuromodulators sNPF and Rya modulate feeding either via their physiological activity in the brain alone or through joint physiological activity along the brain-gut axis (but critically not the gut alone). Overall, I found this study to be built on tractable, well-designed behavioral experiments.

      Their study begins with a well-structured experiment to assess how the feeding behaviors of A. stephensi changes over the course of its life history and in response to its age, mating and oviposition status. The authors are careful and validate their experimental paradigm in the more well-studied Ae. aegypti, and are able to recapitulate the results of prior studies which show that mating is pre-requisite for blood feeding behaviors in Ae. aegypt. Here they find A. stephensi like another Anopheline mosquitoes has a more nuanced regulation of its blood and nectar feeding behaviors.

      The authors then go on to show in a Y- maze olfactometer that to some degree, changes in blood feeding status depend on behavioral modulation to host-cues, and this is not likely to be a simple change to the biting behaviors alone. I was especially struck by the swap in valence of the host-cues for the blood-fed and mated individuals which had not yet oviposited. This indicates that there is a change in behavior that is not simply desensitization to host-cues while navigating in flight, but something much more exciting happening.

      The authors then use a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate genes in the blood feeding stages of the mosquito's life cycle to identify a list of 9 candidates which have a role in regulating the host-seeking status of A. stephensi. Then through investigations of gene knockdown of candidates they identify the dual action of RYa and sNPF and candidate neuromodulators of host-seeking in this species. Overrall, I found the experiments to be welldesigned. I found the molecular approach to be sound. While I do not think the molecular approach is necessarily an all-encompassing mechanism identification (owing mostly to the fact that genetic resources are not yet available in A. stephensi as they are in other dipteran models), I think it sets up a rich lines of research questions for the neurobiology of mosquito behavioral plasticity and comparative evolution of neuromodulator action.

      Strengths:

      I am especially impressed by the authors' attention to small details in the course of this article. As I read and evaluated this article I continued to think how many crucial details I may have missed if I were the scientist conducting these experiments. That attention to detail paid off in spades and allowed the authors to carefully tease apart molecular candidates of blood-seeking stages. The authors top down approach to identifying RYamide and sNPF starting from first principles behavioral experiments is especially comprehensive. The results from both the behavioral and molecular target studies will have broad implications for the vectorial capacity of this species and comparative evolution of neural circuit modulation.

      I believe the authors have adequately addressed all of my concerns; however, I think an accompanying figure to match the explained methods of the tissue-specific knockdown would help readers. The methods are now explicitly written for the timing and concentrations required to achieve tissue-specific knockdown, but seeing the data as a supplement would be especially reassuring given the critical nature of tissue-specific knockdown to the final interpretations of this paper.

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion and have now incorporated a schematic in the supplementary figure S9B, explaining our methodology for achieving tissue-specific knockdowns.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Bansal et al examine and characterize feeding behaviour in Anopheles stephensi mosquitoes. While sharing some similarities to the well-studied Aedes aegypti mosquito, the authors demonstrate that mated-females, but not unmated (virgin) females, exhibit suppression in their blood-feeding behaviour. Using brain transcriptomic analysis comparing sugar fed, blood fed and starved mosquitoes, several candidate genes potentially responsible for influencing blood-feeding behaviour were identified, including two neuropeptides (short NPF and RYamide) that are known to modulate feeding behaviour in other mosquito species. Using molecular tools including in situ hybridization, the authors map the distribution of cells producing these neuropeptides in the nervous system and in the gut. Further, by implementing systemic RNA interference (RNAi), the study suggests that both neuropeptides appear to promote blood-feeding (but do not impact sugar feeding) although the impact was observed only after both neuropeptide genes underwent knockdown.

      While the authors have addressed most of the concerns of the original manuscript, a few issues remain. Particularly, the following two points:

      (5) Figure 4

      The authors state that there is more efficient knockdown in the head of unfed females; however, this is not accurate since they only get knockdown in unfed animals, and no evidence of any knockdown in fed animals (panel D). This point should be revised in the results test as well.

      Perhaps we do not understand the reviewer's point or there has been a misunderstanding. In Figure 4D, we show that while there is more robust gene knockdown in unfed females, bloodfed females also showed modest but measurable knockdowns ranging from 5-40% for RYamide and 2-21% for sNPF.

      NEW-

      In both the dsRNA treatments where animals were fed, neither was significantly different from control. Therefore, there is no change, and indeed this is confirmed by the author's labelling of the figure stats in panel 4D.

      We agree with the reviewer and thank them for pointing it out. We have now revised the figure legend and the text to reflect these results (see lines 351-354).

      In addition, do the uninjected and dsGFP-injected relative mRNA expression data reflect combined RYa and sNPF levels? Why is there no variation in these data,...

      In these qPCRs, we calculated relative mRNA expression using the delta-delta Ct method (see line 975). For each neuropeptide its respective control was used. For simplicity, we combined the RYa and sNPF control data into a single representation. The value of this control is invariant because this method sets the control baseline to a value of 1.

      NEW-

      The authors are claiming that there is no variation between individual qPCR experiments (particularly in their controls)? Normally, one uses a known standard value (or calibrator) across multiple experiments/plates so that variation across biological replicates can be assessed. This has an impact on statistical analyses since there is no variation in the control data. Indeed, this impacts all figures/datasets in the manuscript where qPCR data is presented. All the controls have zero variation!

      We are truly thankful to this reviewer for insisting on this point. It has made us revisit what we thought we understood and now realise were doing wrong (though many in literature do it this way!). We were – incorrectly – setting each control to 1 and calculating relative fold changes for each replicate independently. While this is often seen in literature, we now realise that it is incorrect. We have revisited all our analyses and normalized all samples to the mean ΔCt of the control group, which captures biological variation in both control and experimental groups. All data are now re-plotted to show individual data points for both control and experimental groups, and the error bars on controls represent the biological variation across replicates (Figure 4D, 4F, 4G, S8, S9). Statistical analyses were also revised accordingly, and, importantly, they do not change any conclusions. Please note that the abdominal expression of sNPF and RYa are so low that the controls show very variable baseline expression values.

      Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the regulation of host-seeking behavior in Anopheles stephensi females across different life stages and mating states. Through transcriptomic profiling, the authors identify differential gene expression between "blood-hungry" and "blood-sated" states. Two neuropeptides, sNPF and RYamide, are highlighted as potential mediators of host-seeking behavior. RNAi knockdown of these peptides alters host-seeking activity, and their expression is anatomically mapped in the mosquito brain (sNPF and RYamide) and midgut (sNPF only).

      Strengths:

      (1) The study addresses an important question in mosquito biology, with relevance to vector control and disease transmission.

      Transcriptomic profiling is used to uncover gene expression changes linked to behavioral states.

      (2) The identification of sNPF and RYamide as candidate regulators provides a clear focus for downstream mechanistic work.

      (3) RNAi experiments demonstrate that these neuropeptides are necessary for normal hostseeking behavior.

      (4) Anatomical localization of neuropeptide expression adds depth to the functional findings.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The title implies that the neuropeptides promote host-seeking, but sufficiency is not demonstrated and some conclusions appear premature based on the current data. The support for this conclusion would be strengthened with functional validation using peptide injection or genetic manipulation.

      (2) The identification of candidate receptors is promising, but the manuscript would be significantly strengthened by testing whether receptor knockdowns phenocopy peptide knockdowns. Without this, it is difficult to conclude that the identified receptors mediate the behavioral effects.

      (3) Some important caveats, such as variation in knockdown efficiency and the possibility of offtarget effects, are not adequately discussed.

      These comments were addressed in the previous round.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      Awesome paper everyone. A delight to read and review.

      Thank you very much! We appreciated your comments too!

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    1. the term “anthrome”suggests that human beings have had such an enormous impact on theEarth’s surface that it no longer makes sense to speak of our world withoutreference to our planet-changing ways. Unlike regional biomes dictated pri-marily by climate and terrain, anthromes are also determined by the densityof human settlement and human activities such as farming and herding.An important corollary to this reclassification, in Ellis and Ramankutty’sview, is ridding ecology of the antiquated but persistent notion of our envi-ronment as “natural ecosystems with humans disturbing them.” Instead, asthey explain, “Anthropogenic biomes tell a completely different story, oneof ‘human systems, with natural ecosystems embedded within them.’ Thisis no minor change in the story we tell our children and each other. Yet it isnecessary for sustainable management of the biosphere in the 21st century.”

      No land is empty. It has not been this case for a long time. This has implications for repairs.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This study presents valuable findings and employs modern analytical approaches on how transient absence of visual input (darkness) affects tactile encoding in the rat somatosensory cortex (S1). The evidence supporting the authors' claims is solid, as population-level neural activity recorded in S1 and decoded by a CNN carries more discriminable texture information in darkness. The underlying basis of this effect remains only partly resolved, however, because it is still unclear which neural features from the CNN drive the decoding and if visual interference is appropriately accounted for, which might confound true neural representational change.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to investigate how short-term visual deprivation influences tactile processing in the primary somatosensory cortex (S1) of sighted rats. They justify the study based on previous studies that have shown that long-term blindness can enhance tactile perception, and aim to investigate the change in neural representations underlying rapid, short-term cross-modal effects. The authors recorded local field potentials from S1 as rats encountered different tactile textures (smooth and rough sandpaper) under light and dark conditions. They used deep learning techniques to decode the neural signals and assess how tactile representations changed across the four different conditions. Their goal was to uncover whether the absence of visual cues leads to a rapid reorganization of tactile encoding in the brain.

      Strengths:

      The study effectively integrates high-density local field potential (LFP) recordings with convolutional neural network (CNN) analysis. This combination allows for decoding high-dimensional population-level signals, revealing changes in neural representations that traditional analyses (e.g., amplitude measures) failed to detect. The custom treadmill paradigm permits independent manipulation of visual and tactile inputs under stable locomotion conditions. Gait analysis confirms that motor behavior was consistent across conditions, strengthening the conclusion that neural changes are due to sensory input rather than movement artifacts.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the study interprets the emergence of more distinct texture representations in the dark as evidence of rapid cross-modal plasticity, the claim rests on correlational data from a short-term manipulation and decoding analysis. The authors show that CNN-derived feature embeddings cluster more clearly by texture in the dark, but this does not directly demonstrate plasticity in the classical sense (e.g., synaptic or circuit-level reorganization). The authors have noted this as a limitation and have clarified that the observed changes reflect functional reorganization rather than structural plasticity.

      (2) Although gait was controlled, changes in arousal or exploratory behavior in light versus dark conditions might play a role in the observed neural differences. The authors have controlled for various factors in relation to locomotion, but future studies would benefit from more direct behavioural readouts of arousal states (e.g., via pupillometry or cortical state indicators).

      (3) It should be noted that the time course of the observed changes (within 10 minutes) is quite rapid, and while intriguing, the study does not include direct evidence that the underlying circuits were reorganized-only that population-level signals become more discriminable. The authors have adequately discussed this as an avenue for more mechanistic future research.

      (4) The authors have adequately discussed that, while these findings are consistent with somatotopy and context-dependent dynamics, they do not provide strong independent evidence for novel spatial or temporal organization.

      (5) The authors have also discussed that, while the neural data suggest enhanced tactile representations, the study does not assess whether rats' actual tactile perception improved. Future studies including an assessment of a behavioral readout (e.g., discrimination accuracy), would be insightful.

      (6) The authors' discussion about the implications for sensory rehabilitation, including Braille training and haptic feedback enhancement was a bit premature, but they have amended this, and it remains an interesting translational potential to be explored in future studies.

      (7) While the CNN showed good performance, more transparent models (e.g., linear classifiers or dimensionality reduction) appear to not exceed chance level. The implications of this are that there is an underlying complex structure in the LFPs that has yet to be fully uncovered, on the mechanistic level. This would be important to push the findings forward in future studies.

      Therefore, while the authors raise interesting hypotheses around rapid plasticity, somatotopic dynamics, and rehabilitation, the evidence for each is indirect. Stronger claims will require future causal experiments, behavioral readouts, and mechanistic specificity beyond what the current data provides. However, the work represents an interesting starting point to a more mechanistic understanding in the future.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Yamashiro et al. investigated how transient absence of visual input (i.e. darkness) impacts tactile neural encoding in the rat primary somatosensory cortex (S1). They recorded local field potentials (LFPs) using a 32-channel array implanted in forelimb and hindlimb primary somatosensory cortex while rats walked on smooth or rough textures under illuminated and dark conditions. Employing a convolutional neural network (CNN), they successfully decoded both texture and lighting conditions from the LFPs. The authors conclude that the subtle differences in LFP patterns underlie tactile representation surface roughness and become more distinct in darkness, suggesting a rapid cross-modal reorganization of the neural code for this sensory feature.

      Strengths:

      • The manuscript addresses a valuable question regarding how sensory cortices dynamically adapt to changes in sensory context.<br /> • The use of machine learning (CNNs) enables the analysis to go beyond conventional amplitude-based metrics, potentially uncovering subtle but meaningful effects.<br /> • The authors have substantially improved the manuscript with clearer figures, additional statistical analyses (including permutation tests and cross-validation), and greater methodological transparency.

      Weaknesses:

      • The new analyses (grand-average LFPs, correlation maps, wavelet decompositions, attribution-score correlations) improve transparency but do not yet clarify which specific neural features the CNN exploits, leaving the central interpretability question unresolved.<br /> • A plausible alternative explanation for the increased discriminability in darkness remains insufficiently ruled out: visually driven activity in the light condition (e.g., ambient illumination changes or self-motion-induced visual input) could contaminate S1 LFPs and account for the effect without reflecting a true neural representational change.<br /> • Behavioural and order controls have been improved but remain somewhat limited in sample size.

      Overall assessment:

      The revised manuscript is clearer, more transparent, and technically strengthened. However, the true nature of the signal changes underlying the observed differences in discriminability remains unclear, limiting the scientific strength of the conclusions. The possibility that visual interference contributes to the observed effects remains a plausible and untested alternative interpretation. Additional experiments or analyses quantifying visually evoked activity in S1 would be required to confirm the claim of genuine reorganization of neural representation depending on the illumination condition.

    4. Author Response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      (1) While the study interprets the emergence of more distinct texture representations in the dark as evidence of rapid cross-modal plasticity, the claim rests on correlational data from a short-term manipulation and decoding analysis. The authors show that CNN-derived feature embeddings cluster more clearly by texture in the dark, but this does not directly demonstrate plasticity in the classical sense (e.g., synaptic or circuit-level reorganization).

      Thank you for this insightful comment. We acknowledge that our claim of “rapid cross-modal plasticity” is based on correlational evidence and does not directly address synaptic or circuit-level reorganization, which would require more invasive methods. Our study instead focuses on changes in the representational structure of tactile stimuli when visual input is temporarily removed, highlighting the adaptability of sensory coding to environmental context. We agree that this distinction is important and have revised the manuscript to clarify that the observed changes reflect functional reorganization rather than structural plasticity, as indicated by the enhanced separability of texture representations in S1 during darkness.

      (2) Although gait was controlled, changes in arousal or exploratory behavior in light versus dark conditions might contribute to the observed neural differences. These factors are acknowledged but not directly measured (e.g., via pupillometry or cortical state indicators).

      Thank you for your insightful comment. We agree that arousal and exploratory behavior could influence neural differences and have considered these factors in our study. While gait was controlled, we did not directly measure arousal (e.g., via pupillometry or cortical indicators).

      To partially address this, we reviewed locomotor-speed traces (Supplementary Figure 1), which showed no significant differences between light and dark conditions, suggesting movement speed did not drive the neural differences. We also reversed the order of light and dark conditions, and although the separability of textures was not significantly different, it further supports that motivation did not confound our results.

      However, we acknowledge that arousal may still affect cortical dynamics, especially in the dark condition, where the lack of visual input might alter exploratory behavior. Due to technical limitations, we could not directly measure arousal states, and this is now discussed in the revised manuscript. While we cannot rule out the influence of arousal, the enhanced separability of texture representations suggests that sensory reorganization due to visual deprivation likely played a substantial role.

      (3) Moreover, the time course of the observed changes (within 10 minutes) is quite rapid, and while intriguing, the study does not include direct evidence that the underlying circuits were reorganized - only that population-level signals become more discriminable. As such, the term "plasticity" may overstate the conclusions and should be interpreted with caution unless validated by additional causal or longitudinal data.

      Thank you for your important comment. We agree that the term "plasticity" may overstate our conclusions, as our study focuses on population-level signal changes rather than direct evidence of circuit-level reorganization.

      To address this, we have revised the manuscript to clarify that while the observed changes in neural separability suggest functional reorganization of sensory representations, they do not confirm structural plasticity. We have updated the wording throughout the manuscript to emphasize that these findings reflect functional reorganization in response to short-term visual input loss, rather than structural or long-term plasticity.

      We also updated the discussion to highlight the need for future research with more invasive approaches to validate the causal mechanisms behind these rapid changes in neural dynamics.

      (4) The study highlights the forelimb region of S1 and a post-contact temporal window as particularly important for decoding texture, based on occlusion and integrated gradient analyses. However, this finding may be somewhat circular: The LFPs were aligned to forelimb contact, and the floor textures were sensed primarily via the forelimbs, making it unsurprising that forelimb electrodes were most informative. The observed temporal window corresponds directly to the event-aligned epoch, and while it may shift slightly in duration in the dark, this could reflect general differences in sensory gain or arousal, rather than changes in stimulus-specific encoding. Thus, while these findings are consistent with somatotopy and context-dependent dynamics, they do not provide strong independent evidence for novel spatial or temporal organization.

      Thank you for your insightful comment. We understand your concern that the finding of forelimb electrodes being most informative might seem circular, given that the LFPs were aligned to forelimb contact, and the floor textures were primarily sensed by the forelimbs. This design choice was intentional, as the task focused on texture perception through the forelimb, and the forelimb subregion of S1 is naturally expected to play a dominant role in this process. While this somatotopic specificity may make the results predictable, our aim was to emphasize the changes in temporal dynamics of neural processing under visual deprivation.

      We observed a shift in the temporal window's duration in the dark condition, which we interpret as a change in how texture information is processed without visual input. While this could reflect sensory gain or arousal differences, the lack of significant differences in locomotor speed or other behavioral measures (Supplementary Figure 1) suggests that these changes are more likely due to functional reorganization of sensory processing.

      We have clarified in the discussion that the shift in the temporal window is consistent with previous research on sensory reorganization involving both spatial and temporal cortical adjustments. While we do not claim novel spatial or temporal organization, we emphasize that the shift in temporal dynamics suggests adaptation in encoding strategy for texture perception in the absence of visual input. Future studies measuring arousal states (e.g., pupil diameter or cortical state markers) would help distinguish the contributions of arousal versus sensory reorganization to these dynamics.

      (5) While the neural data suggest enhanced tactile representations, the study does not assess whether rats' actual tactile perception improved. Without a behavioral readout (e.g., discrimination accuracy), claims about perceptual enhancement remain speculative.

      Thank you for raising this important point. We agree that while the neural data suggest enhanced separability of tactile representations in the dark condition, we do not directly assess whether these changes translate into improved tactile perception behaviorally.

      However, the primary aim of our study is not to claim perceptual enhancement, but to demonstrate that neural representations in the somatosensory cortex can rapidly reorganize in response to visual deprivation. To clarify this distinction, we have revised the manuscript to emphasize that the observed neural changes in S1 are consistent with functional reorganization of tactile representations, rather than a direct indication of perceptual improvement.

      Future studies will be crucial to directly test whether the enhanced separability of tactile representations in S1 correlates with improved tactile perception in a behavioral task. We have highlighted this as an avenue for future research to better understand the link between neural changes and perceptual outcomes.

      (6) In addition to point 4, the authors discuss implications for sensory rehabilitation, including Braille training and haptic feedback enhancement. However, the lack of actual chronic or even more acute pathological sensory deprivation, behavioral data, or subsequent intervention in this study limits the ability to draw translational conclusions. It remains unknown whether the more distinct neural representations observed actually translate into better tactile performance, discriminability, or perception. Additionally, extrapolating from rats walking on sandpaper in the dark to human rehabilitative contexts is speculative without a clearer behavioral or mechanistic bridge. The potential is certainly there, but the claim is currently aspirational rather than empirically grounded.

      Thank you for raising this important point. Upon careful consideration, we have decided to remove the discussion of sensory rehabilitation implications from the revised manuscript. We have refocused the manuscript to concentrate solely on the neural findings related to tactile encoding reorganization in response to short-term sensory deprivation, avoiding speculative extrapolation to human rehabilitative contexts. This revised approach ensures that the manuscript emphasizes the empirical findings without overstating the translational potential.

      (7) While the CNN showed good performance, details on generalization robustness and validation (e.g., cross-validation folds, variance across animals) are not deeply discussed. Also, while explainability tools were used, interpretability of CNNs remains limited, and more transparent models (e.g., linear classifiers or dimensionality reduction) could offer complementary insights.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable feedback. In response to the concern about generalization robustness and validation, we have now conducted 5-fold cross-validation to assess the model's performance within animals (Figure 6C). We also have added supplementary information on the average silhouette scores across the different folds and animals (Supplementary Table 1, 2). These details are provided in the methods section and discussed in the results to offer a clearer picture of the model's robustness and consistency across rats.

      Regarding the interpretability of CNNs, we acknowledge that deep learning models can lack transparency. We also attempted classification using more transparent models such as PCA and SVM, but their performance did not exceed chance level (Supplementary Figure 2). This indicates that while these simpler models are more interpretable, they cannot capture the complex representations in the LFPs, making deep learning models like CNNs necessary for extracting these insights.

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      (1) Despite applying explainability techniques to the CNN-based decoder, the study does not clearly demonstrate the precise "subtle, high-dimensional patterns" exploited by the CNN for surface roughness decoding, limiting the physiological interpretability of the results. Additional analyses (e.g., detailed waveform morphology analysis on grand averages, time-frequency decompositions, or further use of explainability methods) are necessary to clarify the exact nature of the discriminative activity features enabling the CNN to decode surface roughness and how these change with the sensory context (i.e., in light or darkness).

      Thank you for your insightful comment. We recognize the importance of clarifying the exact nature of the high-dimensional neural patterns that the CNN exploits for surface roughness decoding. In response, we have performed additional analyses to provide a more detailed explanation of the CNN's decision-making process and the discriminative features it learned:

      Grand-Average LFP Waveforms Analysis: We calculated the grand-average LFP waveforms for each texture × lighting condition (Figure 4A). While visual inspection did not reveal distinct features in the averaged waveforms, we explored the channel-wise correlations between textures under both light and dark conditions (Figure 4B). We found that the correlation between textures was lower in the dark condition, suggesting that LFPs become more distinct between textures when visual input is absent, which aligns with the CNN’s output.

      Time-Frequency Decomposition (Wavelet Analysis): We also performed time-frequency decomposition of the LFPs using wavelet transforms (Figure 4D). No prominent differences emerged across texture × lighting conditions in the spectral domain. However, upon computing differences in wavelet features between light and dark conditions and analyzing the relationship with the CNN's attribution scores (Supplementary Figures 5A-C), we observed a negative correlation in the 50-60 Hz range and a positive correlation in the 80-90 Hz range. This suggests frequency-specific modulation in LFP activity that may contribute to texture representations, providing further support for the CNN’s learned features.

      (2) The claim regarding cross-modal representation reorganization heavily relies on a silhouette analysis (Figure 5C), which shows a modest effect size and borderline statistical significance (p≈0.05 with n=9+2). More rigorous statistical quantification, such as permutation tests and reporting underlying cluster distances for all animals, would strengthen confidence in this finding.

      Thank you for your thoughtful comment. We appreciate your suggestion to strengthen the statistical rigor of our analysis regarding the cross-modal representation reorganization. In response, we have implemented several additional analyses to more rigorously quantify the separability of neural representations between light and dark conditions:

      (1) Permutation Test for Cluster Separability: We performed a permutation test to assess whether the observed differences in cluster separability between light and dark conditions were statistically significant or could have arisen by chance. The results showed that the silhouette scores for the dark condition consistently exceeded the 95th percentile of the null distribution (Supplementary Figure 4). This permutation test strengthens the validity of our findings, indicating that the enhanced separability in darkness is a systematic reorganization of neural representations, not due to random fluctuations.

      (2) Reporting Cluster Distances: To address concerns about the modest effect size and borderline significance, we have explicitly reported the underlying cluster distances in the form of silhouette scores for each individual animal (Supplementary Table 1, 2). These values reflect the Euclidean distance between clusters within each rat, providing a clearer understanding of the separability observed.

      (3) Additional Statistical Analysis on Silhouette Scores: To further enhance the rigor of our statistical analysis, we recalculated the silhouette scores using 5-fold cross-validation within each animal, ensuring that our results are robust across multiple data splits (Figure 6C).

      By incorporating these additional analyses and reporting detailed cluster distances, we believe we have significantly strengthened the confidence in our claim of cross-modal reorganization.

      (3) While the authors recorded in the somatosensory cortex, primarily known for its tactile responsivity, I would be cautious not to rule out a priori the presence of crossmodal (visual) responses in the area. In this case, the stronger texture separation in darkness might be explained by the absence of some visually-evoked potentials (VEPs) rather than genuine cross-modal reorganization. Clarification is needed to rule out visual interference and this would strengthen the claim.

      Thank you for raising this important point. In response to your concern, we carefully examined whether visually-evoked potentials (VEPs) could be present in the S1 recordings, particularly under the light condition. However, we observed that this experiment did not involve any cue-guided visual stimulation, such as flashing lights or visual cues aligned with the LFP recordings. Without such external visual stimuli, it is unlikely that VEPs would be reliably evoked in the S1. Therefore, we believe the stronger texture separation observed in the dark condition is not due to visual interference, but rather reflects a genuine sensory reorganization in response to the absence of visual input.

      (4) Behavioural controls are limited to gross gait parameters; more detailed analyses of locomotor behavior and additional metrics (e.g., pupil size or locomotor variance) would robustly rule out potential arousal or motor confounds.

      Thank you for your insightful comment regarding behavioral controls. In response, we have added locomotor speed traces aligned with corresponding LFPs (Supplementary Figure 1) to demonstrate that locomotion remained consistent across trials, irrespective of environmental condition (light vs. dark). Additionally, we report locomotor speed variance over 10-minute blocks to confirm no significant motor changes affecting neural recordings. These analyses indicate that LFP differences are unlikely due to locomotor confounds.

      While measuring pupil size could be useful for assessing arousal, the camera resolution in our study was insufficient for reliable measurements. We have noted this limitation in the Discussion and recommend that future studies with high-resolution eye-tracking explore arousal's role in sensory processing in S1.

      (5) The consistent ordering of trials (10 minutes of light then 10 minutes of dark) could introduce confounds such as fatigue or satiation (and also related arousal state), which should be controlled by analyzing sessions with reversed condition ordering.

      Thank you for highlighting the potential confounds due to trial ordering. To address this, we reversed the condition order (dark before light) in a subset of sessions from six rats and reanalyzed the data (Supplementary Figure 3). The results showed not significant, but increase separability in the dark condition, suggesting that the enhanced separability in the dark condition is not due to trial order effects like fatigue or satiation. While order effects may contribute to trial-to-trial variability, the consistent pattern of enhanced separability in the dark further supports the interpretation that visual deprivation directly influences the reorganization of tactile representations in S1.

      (6) The focus on forelimb-aligned LFP analyses raises the possibility that hindlimb-aligned data might yield different conclusions, suggesting alignment effects might bias the results.

      Thank you for your insightful comment on the potential bias of forelimb-aligned LFP analyses. We acknowledge that the choice of alignment event can influence the results and appreciate the suggestion to consider hindlimb-aligned data. However, our experimental design specifically focused on forelimb S1. The forelimb region of S1 was oversampled in our array, and as expected, we observed larger responses there, consistent with the known somatotopic organization of S1.

      While hindlimb-aligned data could provide additional insights, it is not directly relevant to the primary question of how forelimb S1 codes tactile information under visual deprivation. We do not believe the forelimb alignment introduces a bias, as it aligns with the sensory task being investigated. However, we recognize the value of exploring alternative alignments and have now included a discussion in the Methods section regarding the rationale for our design choices.

      (7) The authors' dismissal of amplitude-based metrics as ineffective is inadequately substantiated. A clearer demonstration (e.g., event-related waveforms averaged by conditions, presented both spatially and temporally) would support this claim.

      Thank you for your constructive comment. In response, we have added a more detailed analysis of event-related waveforms, averaged across conditions (light vs. dark, smooth vs. rough textures), and presented them spatially and temporally aligned to forelimb contact (Figure 4A). These waveforms did not show clear, distinct features that could differentiate conditions, which highlights the limitations of traditional amplitude-based metrics in detecting subtle neural activity changes related to visual deprivation.

      We further performed channel-wise correlation analyses (Figure 4B), revealing stronger texture correlations in the light condition, indicating that averaged waveforms do not capture the nuanced differences in neural dynamics. Additionally, time-frequency spectrograms and channel–channel correlation matrices (Figures 4C and 4D) did not show distinct condition differences, reinforcing the limitations of amplitude-based metrics.

      These findings, along with the superior performance of machine learning-based decoding methods (e.g., CNN), support our claim that amplitude-based approaches are insufficient for fully capturing the complexity of the neural data.

      (8) Wording ambiguity regarding "attribution score" versus "activation amplitude" (Figure 5) complicates the interpretation of key findings. This distinction must be clarified for proper assessment of the results.

      Thank you for pointing out the ambiguity between "attribution score" and "activation amplitude." To address this, we have revised the manuscript to use "attribution score" only.

      (9) Generalization across animals remains unaddressed. The current within-subject decoding setup limits conclusions regarding shared neural representations across individuals. Adopting cross-validation strategies and exploring between-animal analyses would add significant value to the manuscript.

      Thank you for highlighting the importance of generalization across animals. While our study focused on within-subject decoding, we acknowledge that this limits conclusions about shared neural representations across individuals. We expect that inter-animal generalization would be challenging, as models trained on data from a single rat may not perform well on data from others due to differences in electrode placement, brain anatomy, and neural representations. We recognize the value of cross-validation strategies and between-animal analyses and will consider them in future work to address this limitation.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) I would strongly recommend that the authors refine their introduction to be more concise. Many concepts and study aims are repeated many times and, therefore, present as highly redundant text. The introduction may be half the length and still contain the important concepts to set up the justification for the study. I would also suggest refining to be less about sensory deprivation (e.g., with blindness) and more in relation to context, as the acute nature of the study allows one to conclude more about the latter than the former.

      Thank you for your feedback on the introduction. We have revised the section to reduce redundancy and present the key concepts more concisely. We also streamlined the study aims and focused more on the context of the acute nature of the study, as you suggested, rather than emphasizing sensory deprivation. This revision better aligns with the main focus of the research and improves clarity. We believe the updated introduction provides a more direct justification for the study.

      (2) I am not sure if Figures 1-3 are meant to be in grey-scale for some reason (perhaps to represent light and dark), but I would encourage the authors to examine if this is necessary, as the use of color generally helps one more easily follow Figures.

      Thank you for this suggestion. Upon review, we agree that the use of color would enhance the clarity and readability of our figures. We have revised the figures including the newly added supplementary figures to incorporate color.

      (3) Figure 5, Figure legend title - check wording.

      Thank you for pointing this out. The title has been adjusted for consistency with the other figure legends.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):

      (1) Analyses that would strengthen the main claims (major):

      (a) Identify the features exploited by the CNN.

      (i) Provide grand-average LFP waveforms for each texture × lighting condition (fore- and hind-limb channels shown separately, spatially arranged as in Figure 3C) and try to relate them to the decoding strategy learned by the CNN.

      Thank you for your helpful suggestion. We have calculated the grand-average LFP waveforms for each texture × lighting condition and included them in Figure 4A, with fore- and hind-limb channels shown separately and spatially arranged as in Figure 3C. Upon visual inspection, the mean waveforms did not reveal clear, distinct features. To further investigate, we computed the channel-wise correlation between different textures under both dark and light conditions. By subtracting the correlation coefficients for the dark environment from those in the light, we observed that the correlation between textures was lower in the dark environment (Figure 4B). This suggests that LFPs are more distinct between textures in the dark, supporting the CNN model's output. However, this also indicates that the CNN has captured more complex, nuanced information, as it is able to discriminate between LFPs on a single-trial basis, rather than relying on mean traces.

      To assess how the correlation between average LFP waveforms varied across channels, we also calculated the channel-channel correlation matrix for all 32 channels in each condition. While we found stronger correlations within each S1 subregion, we did not observe clear differences of correlation matrix between light and dark conditions, nor between different textures (Figure 4C).

      (ii) Add channel-wise and time-frequency maps (e.g., wavelet or spectrograms) for each texture × lighting condition and try to relate them to the decoding strategy learned by the CNN.

      Thank you for the valuable suggestion. We calculated wavelet features for each LFP segment and averaged them across trials to assess differences in LFP between light and dark conditions, as well as across textures (Figure 4D). However, no distinct differences were observed in the spectral map. To investigate further, we computed the differences in spectral maps for LFPs in light and dark trials. We then calculated the difference in attribution scores derived from the integrated gradient map (Supplementary Figure 4A). Subsequently, we calculated the correlation coefficients between the differences in integrated gradients and the differences in power across each frequency band in the spectral map (Supplementary Figures 4B and 4C). A negative correlation was found in the 50-60 Hz range, while a positive correlation was observed in the 80-90 Hz range. These findings suggest that frequency-specific patterns of LFP activity in different conditions may be linked to the texture representations captured by the CNN model. We have included a discussion of these findings in [lines 463-468].

      (b) Quantify the "enhanced separability in darkness" more rigorously.

      (i) Report cluster-distances (e.g. Euclidean) for each individual animal.

      We thank the reviewer for this helpful comment. When calculating the silhouette score, we used Euclidean distance as the distance metric. The silhouette score is defined for each data point as the difference between the average distance to points within its assigned cluster and the average distance to points in the nearest other cluster, normalized by the larger of the two values. Thus, the silhouette score inherently reflects the relative cluster distances both within and across conditions for each individual animal. Because we report and statistically analyze silhouette scores (Figure 6C), these values already quantify and compare the Euclidean cluster distances across conditions at the animal level. For clarity, we have now added a definition of the silhouette score in the Methods section of the main text [lines 269-278]. We also included the calculated silhouette scores in Supplementary Table 1.

      (ii) Run a permutation or bootstrap test (shuffling darkness/light labels within animals) to obtain an empirical null distribution for cluster separability in the network embedding space.

      We thank the reviewer for this important suggestion. In response, we implemented a permutation test to assess the robustness of our cluster separability results. Specifically, we shuffled the darkness/light labels within each animal and recalculated silhouette scores across 1000 resamples to generate an empirical null distribution. The observed separability between light and dark conditions consistently exceeded the 95th percentile of the null distribution (Supplementary Figure 3). This confirms that the enhanced cluster separability in darkness was not attributable to random fluctuations in labeling but instead reflected a systematic reorganization of neural representations.

      (c) Control for possible visually-evoked potentials (VEPs).

      (i) Search the LFPs recorded in light for stereotyped VEP components and/or comment on this possible confound (i.e., VEPs in S1?).

      Thank you for raising this point. Although it would be interesting to observe if a VEP is present in the S1 of rats, this experiment did not involve cue-guided visual stimulation. Additionally, there was no environmental visual cue that could serve as an external trigger to align the LFPs for VEP analysis in S1. Furthermore, since even the somatosensory evoked potential was not clearly visible in the S1 LFP without averaging the aligned LFPs, it is unlikely that we would be able to observe VEPs in single trials.

      (d) Address behavioral and arousal confounds.

      (i) Provide example locomotor-speed traces (aligned with corresponding LFPs) and report locomotor-speed variance across the 10-min blocks.

      Thank you for your comment. We had speedometer installed for the recording of the last two rats. We have now provided example speed traces and the speed variance across blocks in Supplementary Figure 1. The traces show that the locomotor-speed was stable in each trial.

      (ii) If available from the camera recordings, include pupil diameter as a proxy for arousal; otherwise, discuss explicitly how arousal changes might affect S1 LFPs.

      Thank you for this suggestion. We strongly agree that measuring pupil diameters should be incorporated into future studies. However, because our camera did not have sufficient resolution to capture pupil diameters, we have addressed this limitation in the discussion section [lines 525-537].

      (e) Address order effects (and motivation/satiety confounds)

      (i) Present at least a subset of sessions in which the dark block precedes the light block; re-analyze the silhouette score/discriminability with block order as a factor.

      Thank you for this helpful suggestion. We conducted additional analyses using sessions from 6 rats in which the dark block preceded the light block (Supplementary Figure 5A). Using the same model architecture, we calculated the silhouette score for each rat (Supplementary Figure 5B). However, when the order was reversed (dark preceding light), this discriminability effect disappeared. Thus, while we observed a trend toward higher scores in the dark condition, no statistically significant differences in texture discriminability were observed.

      If trial order alone accounted for the increase in discriminability, reversing the order would be expected to yield higher silhouette scores in the light condition. Our findings suggest that factors related to order (e.g., thirst or motivation, as you proposed) are not the sole contributors. Furthermore, previous studies in human participants have shown that brief blindfolding can produce lingering increases in tactile sensitivity, indicating a lasting effect of visual deprivation. Thus, the absence of significant differences in texture representation when the dark condition preceded the light condition may reflect such lasting effects. We have included a discussion in [lines 441-452].

      (ii) Discuss explicitly the potential confounding effect of motivational state/thirst.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. In the revised manuscript, we now explicitly address the potential confounding role of motivational state and thirst in shaping our results. Because animals were water-restricted to maintain task engagement, it is possible that increasing thirst or fluctuating motivation over the course of a session could alter arousal or attentional state, thereby influencing neural separability. However, when the trial order was reversed (dark condition preceding light), silhouette scores did not show a significant increase in the second (light) trial. Thus, while we acknowledge that motivational state may contribute to trial-to-trial variability, the systematic increase in separability during darkness cannot be fully explained by thirst or motivational confounds. This addition has been incorporated into the discussion section [lines 441-452].

      (f) Alignment control and the role of forelimb S1.

      (i) Repeat the decoding analysis with LFPs aligned to hind-limb strike; report whether the fore-limb dominance persists.

      Thank you for your thoughtful suggestion. We appreciate the opportunity to clarify. Our study was designed to ask a different question: how the absence of visual input reorganizes tactile encoding for the body part that actually initiates texture contact in our paradigm (the forepaw). Accordingly, all analyses were aligned to forelimb strike and our array intentionally oversampled S1-forelimb relative to S1-hindlimb (18 vs. 14 electrodes; Fig. 1F–G), yielding clear topographic forelimb-locked event-related responses (Fig. 3B–D) and forelimb-channel dominance in the decoding explainability analyses (Fig. 5D–E). Repeating the full decoding locked to hind-limb strike would test a different hypothesis and would be difficult to interpret for three reasons:

      Design/measurement alignment. Our kinematic detection was built to identify forelimb foot strikes. Extending the detector to hindlimb would require new model training/validation and introduces uncertainty in the exact contact timing relative to the LFP segments we analyze.

      Sampling asymmetry. The array and cortical magnification are not balanced across subregions (18 forelimb vs. 14 hindlimb electrodes; Fig. 1G), so a hind-limb–aligned comparison would be confounded by unequal coverage and signal-to-noise across S1 subdivisions rather than reflecting true “dominance.”

      Scope of the claim. We do not claim that the forelimb is globally more informative about texture; we show the intuitive and topographically specific result that “forelimb S1 codes textures touching the forelimb,” and that these representations become more separable in darkness (silhouette increase; Fig. 5C). A hind-limb–locked re-analysis would likely reveal hindlimb contributions when the hindpaw is the alignment event — but that would not change the central conclusion about darkness enhancing tactile representational separability.

      To address the underlying concern about generality without introducing the above confounds, we have clarified these design choices and limitations in the revised Methods [lines 194-197].

      (g) Amplitude-based baseline.

      (i) Show that a simple linear discriminant or logistic-regression model on peak amplitudes (and/or other simple features like trough width/slope) cannot reach the CNN's accuracy. This kind of "baseline" analysis could also be useful to pinpoint the discriminative features learned by the CNN.

      Thank you for your insightful suggestion. We agree that performing a baseline comparison with a simpler model could help highlight the advantage of using a CNN. However, in our dataset, individual LFP traces do not exhibit clear peaks or well-defined features such as peak amplitude, width, or energy, which makes feature extraction using traditional methods like linear discriminants or logistic regression challenging.

      To address this, we performed principal component analysis (PCA) on the raw LFP traces to reduce the dimensionality and applied a support vector machine (SVM) classifier on the reduced features, in line with the approach used for the CNN models (Supplementary Figure 2A). The results of this analysis, demonstrate that the SVM model struggles to effectively discriminate between conditions, further reinforcing the necessity of the CNN model. The CNN’s ability to automatically learn complex features from the raw LFP data appears to be a crucial factor in achieving superior classification performance (Supplementary Figure 2B).

      (h) Cross-validation and inter-animal generalization.

      (i) Consider replacing the single 80/20 split with k-fold cross-validation within animals.

      Thank you for this suggestion. Instead of using an 80/20 split, we performed 5-fold cross-validation on all rats. The silhouette scores were averaged within each animal across the five folds, and Figure 6C was updated accordingly. After performing a paired t-test, we still observed a significant difference in silhouette scores between the light and dark conditions.

      (ii) Comment on inter-animal generalization.

      Thank you for this valuable feedback. Although we did not explicitly test inter-animal generalization, it is unlikely that a model trained on data from one rat would perform equally well when classifying data recorded from another animal. This limitation arises from two main factors. First, despite careful efforts to implant electrodes in the same brain region and cortical layer across experiments, it is impossible to align all 32 electrodes to identical coordinates. Consequently, the recorded LFPs are obtained from slightly different locations, which may reflect distinct neural processing. Second, even within the same species, individual animals differ in brain size and neural circuit organization. Thus, even if electrodes could be placed at identical anatomical locations, inter-individual variability in brain structure would still lead to differences in the recorded signals. Because deep learning models are often sensitive to small perturbations in their input data, we believe that robust inter-animal generalization is unlikely without fine-tuning the model using data from the target animal. This comment has been inserted in the Discussion [lines 494-507].

      (2) Writing, figure and terminology improvements (minor):

      (a) Figure 5F-G axis label. Decide on either "attribution score" or "activation amplitude" and use that term consistently in panels, legend, and text (currently, I believe it could be confused with raw signal amplitude).

      We have unified the terminology to "attribution score" and applied this consistently across the panels, legend, and text.

      (b) Throughout the manuscript, use "population-level activity" or "average population dynamics" when discussing LFPs (I believe it is more correct to reserve "population code" for multiple single-unit datasets).

      We agree with the reviewer’s point and have adapted the term "population dynamics" to describe LFP information consistently throughout the manuscript.

      (c) Lines 219-221, state down-sampling to 2 kHz, whereas line 289 mentions 10 kHz. Reconcile these numbers.

      We apologize for the confusion and thank the reviewer for thoroughly reading the manuscript. Our original sampling rate was 30 kHz, and all analyses were performed on data resampled to 10 kHz. The reference to 2 kHz was an error, and we have corrected it.

      (d) Specify the tail of each statistical test mentioned in the manuscript and any multiple-comparison correction used.

      We have specified the tail of each statistical test and any multiple-comparison corrections used in the "Data Analysis" section of the Methods.

      (e) Line 244: "variables (He et al., 2015)" → "variables (He et al., 2015)".

      We have corrected this formatting issue and revised it to "variables (He et al., 2015)".

      (f) Line 253: "one-dimentional" → "one-dimensional".

      We have corrected the spelling error and revised it to "one-dimensional".

      (3) Data and code sharing:

      (a) Consider depositing data and code for the analysis in public open repositories.

      Thank you for your suggestion. We have set up a public GitHub repository to share the code. Since the full dataset is quite large (~400GB), we have uploaded a smaller example dataset for the analysis.

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