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__Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): __ Summary In this work, the authors present a careful study of the lattice of the indirect flight muscle (IFM) in Drosophila using data from a morphometric analysis. To this end, an automated tool is developed for precise, high-throughput measurements of sarcomere length and myofibril width, and various microscopy techniques are used to assess sub-sarcomeric structures. These methods are applied to analyze sarcomere structure at multiple stages in the process of myofibrillogenesis. In addition, the authors present various factors and experimental methods that may affect the accurate measurement of IFM structures. Although the comprehensive structural study is appreciated, there are major issues with the presentation/scope of the work that need to be addressed: Major Comments 1. The main weakness of the paper is in its claim of presenting a model of the sarcomere. Indeed, the paper reports a structural study that is drawn onto a 3D schematic. There is no myofibrillogenesis model that would provide insights into mechanisms. Therefore, the use of the word model is grossly overstated.
In biology, the term “model” is used in various contexts, but it generally refers to a simplified representation of a biological system, a structure or a process. Accordingly, we consider “model” the most fitting phrase for what we present in Figure 4 (Figure 7 in the revised manuscript). These are not arbitrary 3D schematics; they are scaled representations in which the length, the number and the relative three-dimensional arrangement of thin and thick filaments are based on measurements. These measurements are primarily based on our own data (presented in the main text and provided in the supplementary materials), as published data were either lacking or inconsistent. Moreover, we would like to highlight that we do not claim to present a conceptual or mechanistic model of myofibrillogenesis, but we do present structural reconstructions or models for four developmental time points. Therefore, we disagree with the remark that “the use of the word model is grossly overstated”, as our wording fully corresponds to the common sense.
In general, the major focus and contribution of the work is unclear. How does the comprehensive nature of the measurements contribute to existing literature?
We significantly revised the text to highlight the main points more firmly, and added an additional section to help non-specialist readers to better understand our aims and findings.
Figure labels are often rather confusing - for example it is unclear why there is a B, B', B' etc instead of B,C,D, etc.
The figure labels have been revised in accordance with the reviewer’s recommendation.
Some comments in the text are not clearly tied to the figures. For example, in lines 108-109, are the authors referring to the shadow along the edges of the myofibril when saying they are not clearly defined (Figure 1C)?
The lines refer to the fact that identifying the boundary of an “object” in a fluorescence microscopy image is inherently challenging - even under ideal conditions where the object’s image is not affected by nearby signals or background noise. To improve clarity, we revised this section and now it reads: The other key parameter - myofibril diameter - is typically measured using phalloidin staining. However, accurately delineating their boundaries in micrographs is difficult - even under optimal conditions (high signal‑to‑noise ratio, no overlapping fibers, etc.; Fig. 1C). This limitation arises from the fundamental nature of light microscopy as the image produced is a blurred version of the actual structure, due to convolution with the microscope’s point spread function.
In line 116, it is unclear what "surrounding structures" the authors are referring to if the myofibrils are isolated.
We revised the text for clarity. It now states: Once isolated, myofibrils lie flat on the coverslip, aligning with the focal plane of the objective lens. This orientation allows for high-resolution, undistorted imaging and accurate two-dimensional measurements, free from interference by neighboring biological structures (e.g.: other myofibrils).
In lines 141-142, there is no reference of data to back up the claim of validation.
We addressed this mistake by including a reference to Fig. S1E (Fig. S1D in the revised manuscript).
In line 170, the authors mention the mef2-Gal4/+ strain as a Gal4 driver line but do not clearly state how this strain is different from the wildtypes or how this impacts their results.
Mef2-Gal4 is a muscle-specific Gal4 driver, often used in Drosophila muscle studies. It is a convention between Drosophila geneticists that presence of a transgene (i.e. Mef2-Gal4) changes the genetic background, and although it does not necessariliy cause any phenotypic effect, it is clearly distinguished from the wild type situation, and whenever relevant, Mef2-Gal4/+ is the preferred choice (if not the correct choice) as a control instead of wild type. As clear from our data, presence of the Mef2-Gal4 driver line does not affect the length or width of IFM sarcomeres as compared to wild type.
In lines 182-185, the authors discuss the effects of tissue embedding on morphometrics. Were factors such as animal sex, age, fiber type, etc. conserved in these experiments? If not, any differences in results may be confounding.
We fully agree with the reviewer that when testing the effect of a single variable, all other variables should remain constant. This is actually one of the main points emphasized in the results section. Additionally, this information is already provided in the Source Data files for each panel.
In lines 199-201, the authors discuss results of myofibril diameter using different preparation methods, yet no data is cited to support the claims. In line 220, the phrase "6 independent experiments" is unclear. Is each independent experiment performed using a different animal? Furthermore, are 6 experiments performed for each time point?
We substantially revised the relevant paragraphs and ensured that the corresponding data (Figure 2A in the revised manuscript) is cited each time when it is discussed. We conducted six independent experiments at each time point. This is consistently indicated in the figures and can be verified in the SourceData files (specifically, Fig3SourceData in this case). To clarify what we mean by "independent experiments," we added the following sentence to the Methods section: Experiments were considered independent when specimens came from different parental crosses, and each experiment included approximately six animals to capture individual variability.
In line 254, the authors refer to "number of sarcomeres". It must be clearly stated if this refers to sarcomeres per myofibril, image area, etc.
It is now clearly stated as: "number of sarcomeres per myofibril".
In line 274, the authors refer to "myofilament number". It must be clearly stated if this refers to myofilaments per myofibril, image area, etc.
We counted the number of myofilaments in developing myofibrils, and this is now clearly stated in the text and in the legend of Figure 3 (Figure 4 in the revised manuscript).
In line 299, the authors mention that thin filaments measured less than 560 nm in length, yet no data is cited to support this.
The previously missing reference to Figure 4 (Figure 7 in the revised manuscript) has now been added in addition to the revised Supplementary Figure 5.
In the "Quantifying sarcomere growth dynamics" section of the summary (starting from line 402) the authors introduce data that would be more naturally placed in the results and discussion section.
As suggested by the reviewer, we incorporated the key aspects of sarcomere growth dynamics into the Results and Discussion section.
In lines 422-423, it is not mentioned what the controls are for.
This was already explained in the main text between lines 167 and 173.
In the caption of Figure 1C, it is not mentioned what the red dashed lines in the microscope images represent.
The caption has been updated to include the following clarification: The red dashed lines border the ROI used for generating the intensity profiles.
In the caption of Figure 1D, the difference between the lighter and darker grey points is not mentioned.
This was already explained in each relevant figure legend. In this specific case, it is stated between lines 850 and 852: “Light gray dots represent individual measurements of sarcomere length and myofibril diameter, while the larger dots indicate the mean values from independent experiments.”
In line 849, the stated p-value (0.003) does not match that mentioned in the figure (0.0003).
We thank the reviewer for noticing this small mistake; correction was made to display the accurate p-value of 0.0003 at both places.
In line 874, it is not clear what an "independent experiment" refers to (different animal, etc.?).
We refer the reviewer to point 9, where this question has already been addressed.
Figure 2A is hard to read. Using different colored dots for different time points might help.
As suggested by the reviewer, we generated a plot with the individual points color-coded by time.
The significant figures presented in Figure 4 give a completely inaccurate representation of the variability of the measurements achieved with these techniques.
Certainly, each measured parameter exhibits inherent biological and technical variability. We have made all the raw data available to the reader through the SourceData files, and this variability is also evident in Figures 1, 2, 3, Supplementary Figure 1, 3, and 5 (Figure 1, 2, 3, 4, 6, and Supplementary Figure 1 in the revised manuscript). Also we have included an additional plot (Supplementary Figure 5 in the revised manuscript) that presents the calculated thin and thick filament lengths and their uncertainty. However, in Figure 4 (Figure 7 in the revised manuscript), our goal was to present an easily understandable visual representation of the sarcomeric structures for each time point, based on the averages of the relevant measurements.
In line 877, it should be mentioned that the number of filaments is counted per myofibril. The y-axes in the figure should also be adjusted to clarify this.
As suggested by the reviewer, both the figure legend and the plot have been updated to clearly indicate that the filament count refers to the number per myofibril.
In line 883, it is not clear what an "independent experiment" refers to (different animal, etc.?).
We refer the reviewer to point 9, where this question has already been addressed.
The statement of sample sizes in all figures is a little confusing.
Following general guidelines, we used SuperPlots to effectively present the data, as nicely demonstrated in the JCB viewpoint article by Lord et al., 2020 (PMID: 32346721). Individual measurements are shown as pooled data points, allowing readers to appreciate the spread, distribution and number of measurements. Overlaid on these pooled dot plots are the mean values from each independent experiment, with error bars representing variability between independent experiments. Sample sizes are provided for both individual measurements and independent experiments. This is now clearly explained in the Materials and Methods section, and we corrected the legends to improve clarity (“n” indicates the number of independent experiments/individual measurements).
In lines 1007-1008, the authors imply that the lattice model is needed for calculation of myofilament length. However, from the equations and previous data, it seems that this can be estimated using the confocal and dSTORM images.
As the reviewer correctly noted, myofilament length can be estimated using measurements from confocal and dSTORM images, following the equations provided. However, constructing even a simplified model requires multiple constraints to be defined and applied in a specific order. In practice, one must first determine the number and arrangement of myofilaments in a cross-sectional view of an “average sarcomere” before attempting to build a longitudinal model, where length calculations become relevant. This is now clarified in the text.
A more specific discussion of future directions is needed to put this paper in context. For example: Can anything from the overall process be used to better understand sarcomere dynamics in larger animals/humans? Can this be applied to disease modelling?
To address these questions, we have added a section titled STUDY LIMITATIONS, which states: “Our study is focused on describing the growth of IFM sarcomeres during myofibrillogenesis at the level of individual myofilaments. Additionally, we developed a user-friendly software tool for precise sarcomere size measurements and demonstrate that these measurements are sensitive to varying conditions. Whereas, this tool can be used successfully on whole muscle fiber preparations as well, our pipeline was intentionally optimized for individual IFM myofibrils ensuring higher measurement precision in our hands than other type of preparations. Thus, we predict that future work will be required to extend it to sarcomeres from other muscle tissues or species. Nevertheless, our study exemplifies a workflow how to measure sarcomere dimensions precisely. With some variations, it should be possible to adopt it for other muscles, including vertebrate and human striated muscles. To facilitate this and to enhance the accessibility and usability of this dataset, we welcome any feedback and suggestions from researchers in the field.”
One of the major claims of the paper is that there is a measurable variability with sex and other parameters. However, this data is never clearly summarized, presented (except for supplement), or discussed for its implications.
We followed the suggestion of the reviewer, and we moved this supplementary data into a main figure, and thoroughly revised the corresponding paragraphs to present and discuss the findings more clearly.
Minor Comments: 1. Lines 60-65 seem to break the flow of the introduction. As the authors discuss existing methods in literature for IFM analysis in the previous couple sentences, the following sentences should clearly state the limitations of existing methods/current gap in literature and a general idea of what the current work is contributing.
We agree with this remark, and we substantially revised the Introduction to clearly define the existing gap in the literature and to articulate how our work addresses this gap.
In line 104, the acronym for ZASPs is not spelled out.
The acronym has now been spelled out for clarity.
**Referee Cross-commenting**
I agree as well.
Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):
In summary, this paper provides a multi-scale characterization of Drosophila flight muscle sarcomere structure under a variety of conditions, which is potentially a significant contribution for the field. However, the paper scope is overstated in that it does not provide an actual sarcomere model. Further, there are multiple issues with data presentation that impact the readability of the manuscript.
Although it is somewhat unclear what would be “an actual sarcomere model” for the reviewer, but we cannot accept that we made on overstatement by using the word “model”, because one of the main outcomes of our work are indeed the myofilament level sarcomere models depicted in Figure 4 (Figure 7 in the revised manuscript). As said above, we do not claim that these would be molecular models, or mechanistic models or developmental models, but it makes absolutely nonsense (even in common terms!) that our scaled graphical representations (based on a wealth of measurements) should not be or cannot be called models.
As to the comment with data presentation, we thank the reviewer for the numerous suggestions, and we substantially revised the manuscript to increase clarity and overall readability.
__Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): __ Summary: In this manuscript titled "A myofilament lattice model of Drosophila flight muscle sarcomeres based on multiscale morphometric analysis during development," Görög et al. perform a detailed analysis of morphological parameters of the indirect flight muscle (IFM) of D. melanogaster. The authors start by illustrating the range of measurements reported in the literature for mature IFM sarcomere length and width, showing a need to revisit and determine a standardized measurement. They develop a new Python-based tool, IMA, to analyze sarcomere lengths from confocal micrographs of isolated myofibrils stained with phalloidin and a z-disc marker. Using this tool, they demonstrate that sample preparation (especially mounting medium), as well as fiber type, sex, and age influence sarcomere measurements. Combining IMA, TEM, and STORM data, they measure sarcomere parameters across development, providing a comprehensive and up-to-date set of "standardized" sarcomere measurements. Using these data, they generate a model integrating all of the parameters to model sarcomeres at four discrete timepoints of development, recapitulating key phases of sarcomere formation and growth.
Major comments: Line 200 & 901 - Figure S1B - The authors make a strong statement about the use of liquid versus hardening media, and it is clear from the image provided in Figure S1 that there is a difference in the apparent sarcomere width. The identity of the "liquid media" versus the "hardening media" should be clearly identified in the Results, in addition to the legend for Figure S1. The authors show that "glycerol-based solutions" increase sarcomere width, but the Materials only list 90% glycerol and PBS. However, a frequently used liquid mounting media is Vectashield. Based on the literature, measurements in liquid Vectashield show diameters significantly less than 2.2 microns observed here with presumably 90% glycerol or PBS. Can the authors qualify this statement, or provide data that all forms of liquid mounting media cause this effect? Does this also apply to hemi-thorax and sectioned preparations, or just isolated myofibrils?
We used a PBS-based solution containing 90% glycerol as our liquid medium, as now stated in the main text. In response to the reviewer’s suggestion, we also tested a non-hardening version of Vectashield (H-1000). Myofibrils in Vectashield were significantly thicker than those in ProLong Gold but still thinner than those in the 90% glycerol–PBS solution, shown in Figure 2B. The mechanisms that could potentially explain these observations have been described in several studies (Miller et al., 2008; Tanner et al., 2011, 2012). Briefly, IFM is a densely packed macromolecular assembly. Upon removal of the cell membrane, myofibrillar proteins attract water, leading to overhydration of the myofilament lattice. This increases the spacing between filaments, resulting in an expansion of overall myofibril diameter. The extent of hydration depends on the osmolarity of the surrounding medium, as the system eventually reaches osmotic equilibrium. While both liquid media induced significant swelling, the observed differences likely reflect variations in their osmotic properties. In contrast, dehydration - an essential step in electron microscopy sample preparation - reduces the spacing between filaments, making myofibrils appear thinner. This explains why EM micrographs consistently show significantly smaller myofibril diameters (Chakravorty et al., 2017).
Hardening media such as ProLong Gold introduce additional artifacts: during polymerization, these media shrink, exerting compressive forces on the tissue (Jonkman et al., 2020). We therefore propose that isolated myofibrils first expand due to overhydration in the dissection solution, and are then compressed back toward their *in vivo* dimensions during incubation in ProLong Gold. The average *in vivo* diameter of IFM myofibrils can be estimated without direct measurements, as it is determined by two key factors: (i) the number of myofilaments, which has been quantified in EM cross-sections in several studies (Fernandes & Schöck, 2014; Shwartz et al., 2016; Chakravorty et al., 2017) including our own, and (ii) the spacing between filaments, which can be measured by X-ray diffraction even in live *Drosophila* or under various experimental conditions (Irving & Maughan, 2000; Miller et al., 2008; Tanner et al., 2011, 2012). Our findings suggest that the effects of lattice overhydration and media-induced shrinkage are most pronounced in isolated myofibrils. In larger tissue preparations, the inter-myofibrillar space likely acts as a mechanical and osmotic buffer, reducing the extent of such distortions
Can the authors comment on whether the length of fixation or fixation buffer solution, in addition to the mounting medium, make a difference on sarcomere length and diameter measurements? This is another source of variation in published protocols.
The effect of fixation time on sarcomere morphometrics in whole-mount IFM preparations has been previously demonstrated by DeAguero et al. (2019), as briefly noted in our manuscript. To extend these findings, we performed a comparison using isolated myofibrils, assessing morphometric parameters after fixation for 10, 20 (standard) and 60 minutes. We found no difference between the 10- and 20-minute fixation conditions; however, fixation for 60 minutes resulted in significantly increased myofibril diameter (and these data are now shown in Supplementary Figure 1C). A comparable increase in thickness was also observed when using a glutaraldehyde-based fixative. These results suggest that more extensively fixed myofibrils may better resist the compressive forces exerted by hardening media.
Line 237-238. The authors conclude that premyofibrils are much thinner than previously measured. The use of Airyscan to more accurately measure myofibril width at this timepoint is a good contribution, as indeed diffraction and light scatter likely contribute to increased width measured in light microscopy images. I also wonder, though, how well the IMP software performs in measuring width at 36h APF, given how irregular the isolated myofibrils at this stage look (wide z-lines but thinner and weaker H and I bands as shown in Fig. 2B)?
The reviewer is correct that measurements during the early stages of myofibrillogenesis require additional effort. However, in addition to its automatic mode, IMA can also operate in semi-automatic or manual modes, ensuring complete control over the measurements. Myofibril width is determined from the phalloidin channel at the Z-line (as described in the software’s User Guide and Supplementary Figure 2), where it is at its thickest.
Also, how much of the difference in sarcomere width arises due to effects of "stripping" components off of the sarcomere at the earliest timepoint (for example alpha-actinin or Zasp proteins)?
A comparison between isolated myofibrils and those from microdissected muscles (Supplementary Figure 3B, Figure 3C in the revised manuscript) shows that the isolation process does not alter the morphometric measurements of sarcomeres. Moreover, the measured myofibril width aligns well with what we expect based on the number of myofilaments observed in TEM cross-sections of myofibrils at 36 hours APF (Figure 3A, now Figure 4A in the revised manuscript), supporting the consistency of our model.
Myofibrils at early timepoints do contain more than 4-12 sarcomeres in a line (they extend the full length of the myofiber), so it is possible they are breaking due to the detergent and mechanical disruption induced by the isolation method.
The reviewer is correct - myofibrils likely span the full length of the myofiber from the onset of myofibrillogenesis. However, during the isolation of individual myofibrils, they often break, and even mature myofibrils typically fragment into pieces of about 300 µm in length (illustrated in Figure 1E, now Figure 2A in the revised manuscript). Importantly, our measurements show that this fragmentation does not affect the assessed sarcomere length or width (as shown in Supplementary Figure 3B, now Figure 3C in the revised manuscript).
Line 312 - What does "stable association" mean in this context? The authors mention early timepoints lack stable association of alpha-Actinin or Zasp52, and they reference Fig. S4C, but this figure only shows 72h and 24 AE, not 36h and 48 h APF. Previous reports have seen localization of both alpha-Actinin and Zasp52, so presumably the detergent or mechanical isolation is stripping these components off of the isolated myofibrils up until 72h.
In agreement with previous reports, we also detected both α-Actinin (as shown in former Supplementary Figure 3B, now Figure 3C) and Zasp52 in microdissected IFM starting from 36 hours APF. However, these markers were largely absent from the isolated myofibrils of young pupae (36 to 60 hours APF). By 60 hours APF, strong α-Actinin and Zasp52 staining became evident in isolated myofibrils, whereas dTitin epitopes were clearly detectable from the earliest time point examined. This indicates that some proteins, such as α-Actinin and Zasp52, can be lost during the isolation process, whereas others like dTitin are retained and this differential sensitivity appears to depend on developmental stage. A likely explanation is that α-Actinin and Zasp52 are recruited early to Z-bodies but are only fully incorporated as more mature Z-disks form between 48 and 60 hours APF. This incomplete incorporation at the earlier stages could account for their loss during the isolation process. This interpretation is supported by our morphological analysis of the Z-discs, as shown in the dSTORM dataset (former Figure 3B, B’’, now Figure 4C, E) and in longitudinal TEM sections (former Supplementary Figure 5B, now in Figure 6B). Because α-Actinin and Zasp52 are not detected in isolated myofibrils at 36 and 48 hours APF, they are not included in Figure S4C (Figure 5C in the revised manuscript). This is explained in the updated figure legend.
This same type of issue comes up again in Lines 325-334, where the authors talk about 3E8 and MAC147. They state that 3E8 signal significantly declines in later stages and that MAC147 is not suitable to label myofibrils in young pupae, but they only show data from 72 APF and 24 AE (which looks to have decent staining for both 3E8 and MAC147). A clearer explanation here would be helpful.
To put it simply: we used one myosin antibody to label the A-band in the IFM of 36h APF and 48h APF animals, and a different antibody for the 72h APF and 24h AE stages. In more detail: Myosin 3E8 is a monoclonal antibody targeting the myosin heavy chain and labels the entire length of mature thick filaments except for the bare zone (former Supplementary Figure 4D, now in Figure 5D), suggesting its epitope is near the head domain. As a result, we expect a uniform A-band staining - excluding the bare zone - which is exactly what we observe in the IFM of young pupae (36h APF and 48h APF; formerly Figure 3B, now Figure 4C in the revised manuscript). However, at 72h APF and 24h AE, Myosin 3E8 produces a different staining pattern: two narrow stripes flanking the bare zone and two broader, more diffuse stripes near the A/I band junction (former Supplementary Figure 4D, now Figure 5D). This change is likely due to restricted antigen accessibility at these later developmental stages - a common issue in the densely packed IFM - making this antibody unsuitable for reliably measuring thick filament length in these stages.
MAC147 is another monoclonal antibody against Mhc that recognizes an epitope near the head domain. However, it only works reliably in more mature myofibrils (72h APF and 24h AE; formerly Figure 3B, now Figure 4C in the revised manuscript), likely due to its specificity for a particular Mhc isoform. This is why we do not include images from earlier developmental stages using this antibody. We added a revised, concise explanation in the main text for general readers, and provided a more detailed description for specialist readers in the legend of Supplementary Figure 4D (updated as Figure 5D in the revised manuscript).
Figure 3B. The authors show the H, Z, and I lengths in B', B', and B' and discuss these lengths in the text (lines 305-320). It would also be nice to actually have the plots showing the measured/calculated lengths for thin and thick filaments. These are mentioned in the results, but I cannot find the plots in the figures and there is no panel reference.
A summary table of the measured and calculated parameters is provided in Fig4SourceData (Fig7Source Data in the revised manuscript). However, following the reviewer’s suggestion, we also generated an additional plot (Supplementary Figure 5 in the revised manuscript) that displays the calculated thin and thick filament lengths.
Line 400. Does the model in Figure 4 actually have molecular resolution as the authors claim? From these views, thick and thin filaments appear to be represented by cylindrical objects. Localization of specific molecules would require further modeling with individual proteins. Or do the authors mean localization from STORM imaging relative to the ends of the thick and/or thin filaments? The model itself is a useful contribution, but based on Figure 4, resolution of individual molecules is not evident.
The reviewer is correct; and we fully agree that we do not present a molecular model of sarcomeres in this study - nor do we claim to. Instead we present a myofilament level model. Nevertheless, the scaled myofilament lattice model we introduce could serve as a geometric constraint when constructing supramolecular models of sarcomeres. As the reviewer rightly notes, implementing such an approach would require additional effort.
The main Results section of the text is condensed into 4 figures. However, I found myself flipping back and forth between the main figures and the supplement continuously, especially parts of Supplemental Figures 1, 3, 4, and 5. With such large amounts of detail in the Results relying on the supplement, it may be worth considering reorganizing the main and supplemental figures, and having 7 main figures, to include important panels that are currently in the supplement (esp. Fig S1B, S1C, S1D, S3B, S4, S5).
We found it a very useful suggestion, and we substantially reorganized the figures in the revised manuscript according to the recommendations of the reviewer.
Minor comments: On the plots in Fig. S1B, D, and F, it is hard to see the color of the dots because the red error bars are on top of them. Can the other distribution dots be tinted the correct color or the x-axis labels be added, so it is clear which dataset is which?
We significantly enlarged the dots to enhance visual clarity.
Line 142 needs a reference to Figure S1, Panel E, which shows the accuracy and precision measurements.
The requested panel reference has now been included in the revised manuscript.
Lines 198 - is this range from the above publications? Needs to be clearly cited.
The range has indeed been estimated using measurements from the aforementioned publications, and this point is now further clarified in the revised text.
Figure S3B is confusing - why do the blow-ups overlap both the top (presumably microdissected) and the bottom (presumably isolated) images? The identity of microdissected images should be labeled, as they are hard to see underneath of the blown-up images and the identity of individual image planes wasn't immediately obvious.
We refined the panel structure of Figure S3B (Figure 3C in the revised manuscript) to enhance clarity as the reviewer suggested.
Line 298. By "misaligned," do the authors mean the pointed ends are not uniformly anchored in the z-disc, leading to the wide z-disc measurements? At this early stage, I'm not sure "misaligned" is the right word - perhaps "were not yet aligned in register at the z-disc" or something similar.
We revised the text for clarity. It now reads: At 36 hours APF, thin filaments had not yet aligned in perfect register at the Z-disc, with most measuring less than 560 nm in length - and exhibiting considerable variability.
Figure S6 - spelling mistake in label of panel A, "sarcomer" should be "sarcomere"
The typo is corrected.
Line 487. Spelling "Zaps52" should be "Zasp52"
The typo is corrected.
Line 887. Spelling "Myofilement" should be "Myofilament"
The typo is corrected.
Line 946-947. In the legend for Supp. Fig. 3., the authors should specify which published datasets on sarcomere length are shown in the figure by including the references in the legend. Presumably the "isolated individual myofibrils" are the blue "this study" lines, leaving the "microdissected muscles" as the magenta "previous reports" on the figure. Without the reference, it is not clear if these are microdissected, isolated myofibrils, hemi-thorax sections, cryosections, or another preparation method for the "previous reports" data.
The references have now been added to both the figure and its legend.
**Referee Cross-commenting**
I agree with the comments from the other reviewers. Many of the major themes are consistent across the reviews, including regarding the model, preparation methods, and the software tool.
Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):
Strengths: This manuscript is an important contribution to the field of sarcomere development. The authors use modern technologies to revisit variation in morphometric measurements in the literature, and they identify parameters that influence this variation. Notably, sex-specific differences, DLM versus DVM measurements, and mouting media are potential contributors to the variability. Combining TEM and STORM with a confocal timecourse of isolated myofibrils, they refine previously published values of sarcomere length and width, and add more comprehensive data for filament length, number and spacing. This highly accurate timecourse demonstrates continual growth of sarcomeres after 48 h APF, and correct some inconsistencies from previous large-scale timecourse datasets. These data are very valuable to the field, especially Drosophila muscle biologists, and will serve as a comparative resource for future studies. Weaknesses: At early timepoints, loss of sarcomere components through mechanical or detergent-mediated artifacts may influence the authors' measurements. In addition, isolating myofibrils is not always the most ideal approach, as it loses information on myofiber structure as well as organization and structure of the myofibrils in vivo.
We believe that the control experiments we presented here adequately demonstrate that sarcomere measurements are not affected by the myofibril isolation process at early timepoints (Figure 3C). Nevertheless, we certainly agree with the reviewer that isolated myofibrils alone cannot capture the entire complexity of muscle tissues, and additional approaches should also be applied in complex projects. Yet, we are confident that our approach offers the most reliable and efficient method for precise morphometric analysis of the sarcomeres, and although alone it is very unlikely to be sufficient to address all questions of a muscle development project, it can still be applied as a very useful and robust tool.
The point regarding liquid versus hardening mounting media is valuable, but remains to be tested and validated with the diverse liquid and hardening media used by other labs.
Whereas it would not be feasible for us to test all possible liquid and hardening media used by others in all possible conditions, we tested the effect of Vectashield (the most commonly used liquid media) according to the suggestion of the reviewer, and the results are now included in the manuscript. We think that this is a valuable extension of the list of the materials and conditions we tested, although we need to point out that our primary goal was not necessarily to test as many conditions as possible (because the number of those conditions is virtually endless), rather to raise awareness among colleagues that these variables can significantly impact the data obtained and affect their comparability.
The IMA software seems to be designed specifically for analysis of isolated myofibrils, and it is unclear if it would work for other types of IFM preparations.
As stated in the manuscript, IMA is a specialized tool designed for the analysis of individual myofibrils. While it can also process other types of IFM preparations in semi-automatic or manual modes, we believe these approaches compromise both efficiency and accuracy. This is further clarified in the revised manuscript.
A last point is that TEM and STORM may not be available on a regular basis to many labs, hindering wide implementation of the approach used in this manuscript to generate very accurate and detailed measurements of sarcomere morphometrics.
Regarding the availability of TEM and STORM, we acknowledge that these techniques are not universally accessible. However, that is exactly one major value of our work that our open-source software tool now allows researchers to generate valuable data using only a confocal microscope in combination with our published datasets.
Audience: Scientists who study sarcomerogenesis or Drosophila muscle biology.
My expertise: I study muscle development in the Drosophila model.
__Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)): __ Summary: This manuscripts presents a computational tool to quantify sarcomere length and myofibril width of the Drosophila indirect flight muscles, including developmental samples. This tool was applied to confocal and STORM super-resolution images of isolated myofibrils from adult and developing flight muscles. Thick filament numbers per myofibril were counted during development of flight muscles. A myofilament model of developing flight muscle myofibrils is presented that remains speculative for the early developmental stages.
Major comments: 1. The title of the manuscript appears unclear. What is a lattice model? Lattice is an ordered array. The filament array parameters for mature flight muscles was aready measured. It appears that the authors speculate how this order might be generated during sarcomere assembly, which is not studied in this manuscript as it is limited to periodic arrays after 36h APF.
As the reviewer correctly points out, a lattice refers to an ordered array - in the case of IFM sarcomeres, this includes both thin and thick filaments. Therefore, the phrase "myofilament lattice model of Drosophila flight muscle sarcomeres" specifically describes a model representing the spatial organization of these filament arrays within the sarcomere. To provide additional clarity for readers, we have revised the title to include more context. It now reads: Developmental Remodeling of Drosophila Flight Muscle Sarcomeres: A Scaled Myofilament Lattice Model Based on Multiscale Morphometrics
To create a model of these arrays, three essential pieces of information are required:
1) The length of the filaments,
2) The number of filaments, and
3) The relative position of the filaments.
While some direct measurements are available in the literature, and others can be used to calculate the necessary values, available data is often contradictory or simply different from each other (as described in our ms) making them unsuitable for constructing scaled models of the myofilament arrays. In contrast to that, here we present a comprehensive and consistent set of measurements that enabled us to build models not only of mature sarcomeres but also of sarcomeres at three other significant developmental time points.
Regarding the mention of "sarcomere assembly" in line 37, we intended it to refer to the growth of the sarcomeres, not their initial formation. We do not speculate about sarcomere assembly anywhere in the text. In fact, we have clearly stated multiple times that our focus is on the growth of the IFM myofilament array during myofibrillogenesis. Nevertheless, to avoid confusion, we revised the phrase in line 37 to "sarcomere growth".
The authors review the flight muscle sarcomere length literature and conclude it is variable because of imprecise measurements. Likely this is partially true, however, more importantly is that the sarcomere length and width changes during isolation methods of the myofibrils, as well as by various embedding methods, as the authors show here as well in Figure 1B-E.
We dedicated two sections of the Results - “An automated method to accurately measure sarcomeric parameters” and “IFM sarcomere morphometrics are affected by sex, age, fiber type, and sample preparation” - to exploring potential sources of variability in published IFM sarcomere measurements. Based on these analyses, we conclude that such variability stems from both measurement imprecision and biological or technical factors, including sex, age, fiber type and, of foremost, sample preparation. Because it is difficult to quantify the relative impact of each variable across published studies, we have refrained from speculations about the relative contribution of the different factors in the revised manuscript.
Hence, I find the strongly claims the authors make here surprising, while they are isolating the myofibrils. Hence, these myofibrils are ruptured at the ends, relaxed or contracted, depending on buffer choice and passive tension is released. On page 8, the authors correctly state that the embedding medium causes shrinkage of the myofibrils. While isolation is state of the art for electron microscopy techniques, other methods including sectioning or even whole mount preparation have been developed for high resolution microscopy of IFMs that avoid these artifacts. Unfortunately, this manuscript only uses isolated myofibrils that were fixed and then mechanically dissociated by pipetting. This method likely induces variations as seen by the large spread of sarcomere length reported in Figure 1C (2.8-3.9µm?) and even bigger spreads for myofibril widths. Are these also seen in tissue without dissections? Unfortunately, no comparision to intact flight muscles are reported with the here presented quantification tool. The sarcomere length spread in the developmental samples is even larger.
The major issue raised in this paragraph is the use of isolated myofibril versus intact flight muscle preparations. The reviewer claims that the latter might be superior because the isolated myofibrils are ruptured at their ends. Clearly, the intact IFMs cannot be imaged in vivo by light microscopy because the adult fly cuticle is opaque. To visualize these muscles, one must open the thorax, but neither microdissection nor sectioning preserves them perfectly, even the cleanest longitudinal cuts sever some myofibrils, and dissection itself can damage the tissue. Although published images often show only the most pristine regions, the practice of selective cropping cannot be taken as a scientific argument. Here, by comparing sarcomere lengths measured in isolated myofibrils with those from whole-mount longitudinal DLM sections and microdissected IFM myofibers, we demonstrate that isolation does not alter sarcomere length (Figure 1E, now Figure 2A in the revised manuscript). As to myofibril width, it is determined by two parameters: the number of myofilaments and the spacing between them. In vivo filament spacing has been measured directly, and filament counts can be obtained from EM cross-sections of DLM fibers. Combining these values gives an expected in vivo myofibril diameter. While isolated myofibrils measure thinner than those in whole-mount or microdissected samples (Figure 1E, now Figure 2A in the revised manuscript), their diameter closely matches this in vivo estimate (see manuscript, lines 187–198). Therefore, we conclude that isolated myofibrils (even if it seems counterintuitive for this reviewer) are superior for sarcomere measurements than whole-mount preparations - and that is why we primarily rely on them here.
Despite that, we certainly recognize that isolated myofibrils cannot recapitulate every aspect of an IFM fiber, and the need for whole-mount preparations during our IFM studies is not questioned by us.
In addition to this general answer to the issues raised in the above paragraph of the reviewer, we would like to specifically reflect for some of the remarks:
„Unfortunately, this manuscript only uses isolated myofibrils that were fixed and then mechanically dissociated by pipetting.”
This is a false statement that “this manuscript only uses isolated myofibrils” as we used different preparation methods for initial comparisons (see Figure 1E, now Figure 2A in the revised manuscript). Additionally, unlike the reviewer assumed, the myofibrils were first dissociated and then fixed, and not vice versa (as described in the Materials and Methods section).
„This method likely induces variations as seen by the large spread of sarcomere length reported in Figure 1C (2.8-3.9µm?) and even bigger spreads for myofibril widths. Are these also seen in tissue without dissections?”
This remark makes absolutely no sense, as we do not report sarcomere length values in Figure 1C at all. By assuming that the reviewer meant to refer to Figure 1B, it still remains a misunderstanding or a false statement, because that panel refers to the variations found in published data (not in our current data), and this is clearly explained both in the figure legend and the main text. Regardless of that, the stated spread does not appear unusual. In the article by Spletter et al. (2018), the authors report a similar spread (2.576–3.542 µm) for sarcomere length in mature IFM using whole-mount DLM cross-sections. As to the second question here, we do observe a comparable spread in other preparations as well (see Figure 1E, now Figure 2A in the revised manuscript), which is again the opposite conclusion as compared to the (clearly false) assumption of the reviewer.
„Unfortunately, no comparision to intact flight muscles are reported with the here presented quantification tool. „
This is also a false statement; as we do report comparison to whole mount cross sections which we belive the reviewer considers „intact” in Figure 1E (Figure 2A in the revised manuscript).
„The sarcomere length spread in the developmental samples is even larger.”
The spread is not larger at all than in previous reports, as clearly shown in Supplementary Figure 3A.
The authors suggest that there are sex differences in sarcomere length and pupal development duration. This is potentially interesting, unfortunately they then use mixed sex samples to analyse sarcomeres during flight muscle development.
In the revised manuscript, we now provide a more detailed description of a subtle post-eclosion difference in IFM sarcomere metrics between male and female Drosophila. We attribute this variation to the well-established observation that female pupae develop slightly faster than males, a property that may last till shortly after eclosion. Confirming this experimentally would require considerable effort with limited scientific benefit. Nonetheless, the subtle nature of this sex-linked variation reinforced our decision to include IFM sarcomeres from both male and female flies in our comprehensive developmental analysis.
The IMA software tool lacks critical assessment of its performance compared to other tools and the validation presented is too limited. IMA seems to generate systematic errors, based on Fig S1E, as it does not report the ground truth. These have to be discussed and compared to available tools. The principles of fitting used in IMA seem well adapted to IFM myofibrils in low noise conditions, but may not be usable in other situations. This should be assessed and discussed.
IMA is a specialized software tool developed to address a specific need, notably, to accurately and efficiently measure sarcomere length and myofibril diameter in individual IFM myofibril images labeled with both phalloidin and Z-disc markers. For our purposes, it remains the most suitable and reliable option, and we are confident that IMA outperforms all other available tools. To demonstrate this, we have included a table comparing the few alternatives (MyofibrilJ, SarcGraph, and sarcApp) capable of both measurements, which further supports our conclusion. Given IMA's focused application, extensive validation under artificially low signal-to-noise conditions is unnecessary. While IMA may introduce minor systematic errors (~0.01 µm for sarcomere length and ~0.03 µm for myofibril diameter), these are negligible errors relative to the limitations of the simulated ground truth data used for benchmarking. This point is now addressed in the manuscript.
It is claimed that validation was achieved on simulated IFM images: do the authors rather mean simulated isolated IFM myofibril images? This is not quite the same in terms of algorithm complexity and this should be corrected if this is the case.
Indeed, we used simulated individual IFM myofibril images, where both phalloidin labeling and Z-disc labeling are present. This is clearly shown in Supplementary Figure 1A, and stated in the text when first introduced: „we generated artificial images of IFM myofibrils with known dimensions, simulating the image formation process”
The authors need to revise their comparison to other tools. It is incomplete and seemingly incorrect. It should be clearly stated that IMA is limited to isolated myofibrils, which is a far easier segmentation task than what other tools can do, such as sarcApp (Neininger-Castro et al. 2023, PMID: 37921850). Defining the acronym would be valuable in that sense. The claim line 129-130 "none can adequately measure myofibril diameter from regular side view images" is unclear. What do the authors refer to as "side view images"? Sarc-Graph from Zhao et al 2021, PMID: 34613960, and sarcApp from Neininger-Castro et al. 2023 provide sarcomere width, in conditions that are very similar to what IMA does, e.g. on xy images based on the documentation provided on github. A performance comparison with these tools would be valuable. Does installation and use of IMA require computational skills?
Motivated by the reviewer’s comments, we revised the section introducing IMA. However, we chose not to include an extensive comparison with other software tools, as this would divert the manuscript’s focus without impacting the main conclusions. Instead, we added a summary table highlighting the key requirements for analyzing IFM sarcomere morphometrics from Z-stacks of phalloidin- and Z-line-labeled individual myofibrils and compared the available tools accordingly. In our experience, most software tools are developed to address very specific problems, even those marketed as general-purpose solutions. Consequently, applying them beyond their intended scope often results in reduced efficiency and suboptimal performance. Although sarcApp was initially available as a free tool, one of its dependencies (PySimpleGUI 5) has since adopted a commercial license model. Using a trial version of PySimpleGUI 5, we evaluated sarcApp on our dataset. The software is limited to single-plane image input, hence raw image stacks must be preprocessed into a suitable format, which is a time consuming step. Furthermore, implementation requires basic programming proficiency, as parameter adjustments must be performed directly within the source code to accommodate dataset-specific configurations. Once appropriately configured, sarcApp reliably quantifies both sarcomere length and myofibril width with accuracy comparable to that of IMA. However, it lacks built-in diagnostic feedback or visualization tools to facilitate measurement verification or troubleshooting during batch processing. SarcGraph also supports only single-plane image inputs and requires prior image preprocessing. Additionally, images must be loaded manually one by one, which further reduces processing efficiency. Parameter optimization relies on direct code modification through a trial-and-error process, demanding a certain level of programming proficiency. Even with these adjustments, the software frequently introduces artifacts - such as Z-line splitting - when applied to our dataset. Even when segmentation is successful, sarcomere length is often overestimated, whereas myofibril diameter is consistently underestimated. As compared to these issues, IMA was designed for ease of use and does not require any programming experience to install or operate. It can automatically handle raw microscopic image formats without the need for preprocessing. Segmentation is fully automated, with no requirement for parameter tuning. The tool provides visual feedback during both the segmentation and fitting steps, allowing users to confidently assess and validate the results. IMA produces accurate and precise measurements of sarcomere length and diameter. Batch processing is enabled by default, significantly improving efficiency when analyzing multiple images. Finally, unlike the reviewer stated, IMA is not limited to isolated myofibrils. It is optimized for isolated myofibrils (i.e. full performance is achieved on these samples), but it can also work on whole-mount preparations in semi-automatic and manual mode, which still allow precise measurements (with some reduction in processing efficiency).
As to the minor comments, the acronym IMA was already defined in lines 541 and 917–918 of the original submission, as well as on the software’s GitHub page. Additionally, we replaced the phrase "side view images" with "longitudinal myofibril projections" to improve clarity.
How do the authors know that the bright phallodin signal visible that the Z-disc at 36h and 48h APF is due to actin filament overlap, as suggested? An alternative solution are more short actin filaments at the early Z-discs.
It is widely accepted that the bright phalloidin signal at the Z-line in mature sarcomeres reflects actin filament overlap (e.g., Littlefield and Fowler, 2002; PMID: 11964243). Accordingly, in slightly stretched myofibrils, this bright signal diminishes, and in more significantly stretched myofibrils, a small gap appears (e.g., Kulke et al., 2001; PMID: 11535621). The width of this bright phalloidin signal corresponds to the electron-dense band seen in longitudinal EM sections (Figure 3B and Supplementary Figure 5B, now Figure 4B and Figure 6B in the revised manuscript) and matches the actin filament overlap observed in Z-disc cryo-EM reconstructions from other species (Yeganeh et al., 2023; Rusu et al., 2017), where individual thin filaments can be resolved. By extension, we interpret the bright phalloidin signals at the Z-discs observed at 36 h and 48 h APF as arising from similar actin filament overlaps, given their comparable width to the electron-dense Z-bodies described both in our study (Supplemantary Figure 5B, now Figure 6B in the revised manuscript) and by Reedy and Beall (1993). While we cannot fully rule out the reviewer’s alternative interpretation, for the time being it remains a bold speculation without supporting evidence, and therefore we prefer to stay with the conventional view.
The authors seem to doubt their own interpretation that actin filaments shrink when reading line 304 and following. This is obviously critical for the "model" presented.
Unlike the reviewer implies, we certainly do not doubt our own interpretation, but to avoid confusion we revised the corresponding paragraph in the manuscript and provided more details on our explanation, and we also provide a brief overview of it here. Between 36 h and 48 h APF we observe a pronounced structural transition in the IFM sarcomeres. In EM cross-sections, the previously irregular myofilament lattice becomes organized into a regular hexagonal pattern (Figure 3A, now Figure 4A in the revised manuscript) with filament spacing typical of mature myofibrils (Supplementary Figure 5A, now Figure 6A in the revised manuscript). In longitudinal EM sections, the elongated, amorphous Z-bodies condense along the myofibril axis to form well-defined, adult-like Z-discs (Supplementary Figure 5B, now Figure 6B in the revised manuscript). Similarly, dSTORM imaging shows that the Z-disc associated D-Titin epitopes become more compact and organized during this period (Supplementary Figure 4E, now Figure 5E in the revised manuscript). The edges of the thick filament arrays also become more sharply defined, and the appearance of a distinct bare zone indicates the establishment of a regular register (Figure 3B, now Figure 4B in the revised manuscript). By assuming that a similar reorganization occurs within the thin filament array, the apparent length of the thin filament array would decrease—not due to shortening of individual filaments, rather due to improved alignment. Although we cannot directly resolve single thin filaments, this reorganization offers the most plausible explanation for the observed change.
Minor comments: 1. Figure S1B is not called out in the text.
The reviewer might have missed this, but in fact, it is explicitly called out in line 181.
Fig. 1: Please state whenever images are simulations?
We appreciate the reviewer’s observation that the simulated IFM myofibril images are indistinguishable from the real ones, as this confirms the adequacy of these images for testing our software tool. However, this is already clearly indicated: Figure 1B features simulated images, as noted in the figure legend (line 824), and Supplementary Figure 1A similarly shows simulated images, as stated both in the legend (line 886) and in the figure.
Fig. 2: Length-width correlation - please provide individual points color-coded by time point?
As suggested by the reviewer, we generated a plot with the individual points color-coded by time.
"newly eclosed males and females, we observed that males have slightly shorter sarcomeres and narrower myofibrils". Please provide a statistical test supporting the difference.
In the revised manuscript, we compared sarcomere length and myofibril width between males and females from 0 to 96 hours AE using a two-way ANOVA with Sidak’s multiple comparisons test. We expanded our description of these observations in the main text, and details of the statistical analysis are now included in the revised figure legend (Figure 1E). Briefly, newly eclosed males showed slightly shorter sarcomeres than females - a consistent but non-significant trend (p = 0.9846) - which resolved by 12 h AE, with sarcomere lengths remaining similar thereafter (p = 0.1533; Figure 1E). In contrast, myofibril width was significantly narrower in the newly eclosed males (p = 0.0374), but this difference disappeared between 24 and 48 h AE as myofibrils expanded in diameter during post-eclosion development (p
Were statistical tests performed using animals as sample numbers? Please clarify in the images what are animal and what are sarcomere numbers.
Following standard guidelines, statistical tests were performed using the means of independent experiments, as noted in the figure legends. For each experiment, we used approximately 6 animals, and this information is now included in the Materials and Methods section.
mef2-Gal4 should be spelled Mef2-GAL4 according to Flybase.
This has been corrected in the revised text and figures.
Are the images shown in Figure 2B representative? 96h AE appears thicker than 24h AE but the graph reports no difference.
We aimed to show representative images, however, in the case of 96h APF we may have selected a wrong example. We now changed the image for a more appropriate one.
The authors only found Zasp52 and alpha-Actinin at the Z-discs from 72h APF onwards, which is different to what others have reported.
Similarly to former reports, we detected both α-Actinin (see Supplementary Figure 3B, now Figure 3C in the revised manuscript) and Zasp52 in microdissected IFMs as early as 36 hours APF. However, these markers were largely absent in isolated myofibrils from the early pupal stages (36–60 hours APF). By 60 hours APF, strong α-Actinin and Zasp52 signals were clearly visible in isolated myofibrils (the closest timepoint captured by dSTORM is 72h APF). As discussed in the manuscript, a likely explanation is that α-Actinin and Zasp52 are recruited to developing Z-bodies early on but are only fully incorporated into mature Z-discs between 48 and 60 hours APF. Their incomplete integration at earlier stages may lead to their loss during the isolation procedure.
Thick filament length during development has also been estimated by Orfanos and Sparrow, which should be cited (PMID: 23178940)
Contrary to the reviewer’s claim, the article 'Myosin isoform switching during assembly of the Drosophila flight muscle thick filament lattice' does not provide any measurements or estimates of thick filament length; it only includes a schematic illustration where the length of the thick filaments is not based on empirical data.
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I also agree with my colleagues comments, which are largely consistent.
Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):
This paper introduces a tool to measure sarcomere length. Easy to use tools that do this as well already exist. The tool can also measure sarcomere width, which it claims as unique point, which is not the case, see above comment.
We are aware that other tools exist to measure sarcomere parameters (and we did not claim the opposite in our ms), nevertheless, we need to emphasize that based on our comparisons, IMA is superior to all three alternatives. Three software tools could, in principle, be used to measure both sarcomere length and myofibril diameter: MyofibrilJ, SarcGraph, and sarcApp. However, two of them - MyofibrilJ and SarcGraph - consistently under- or overestimate these values. The only tool capable of performing these measurements reliably, sarcApp, is no longer freely available, it requires programming expertise, and it does not support raw image file formats, making it difficult to use in practice (see above comments for more details). In contrast, IMA is user-friendly and does not require any programming expertise to install or operate. It can automatically process raw microscopic image formats without the need for preprocessing. Segmentation is fully automated, and no parameter tuning is necessary. The tool offers visual feedback on both the segmentation and fitting processes, enabling users to validate results with confidence. IMA delivers accurate and precise measurements of sarcomere length and diameter. Additionally, batch processing is enabled by default, significantly enhancing workflow efficiency.
This manuscript shows that depending on the isolation and embedding media sarcomere and myofibrils width changes and hence artifacts can be introduced. While this is not suprising, it has not been well controlled in a number of previous publications.
Furthermore, this paper measures sarcomere length and width during flight muscle development and consolidates what was already known from previous publications. Sarcomeres are added until 48 h APF, then they grow in diameter. Despite strong claims in the text, I do not see any significant novel findings how sarcomeres grow in length or width or any significant deviations from what has been published before. This is even documented in the supplementary graphs by comparing to published data. It is close to identical.
The overall process has been quantitatively described in four previous studies (Reedy and Beall, 1993, Orfanos et al., 2015, Spletter et al., 2018, Nikonova et al., 2024). While there is general agreement on the pattern of sarcomere development, significant discrepancies exist among these datasets; differences that become particularly problematic when attempting to build structural models. More specifically: Reedy and Beall (1993) report substantially shorter sarcomeres compared to all other datasets, including ours. This discrepancy likely stems from two factors: (i) their use of longitudinal EM sections, where sample preparation is known to cause considerable tissue shrinkage; and (ii) the maintenance of their flies at 23 °C, a temperature that clearly delays development relative to the more commonly used 25 °C. Interestingly, Spletter et al. (2018) and Nikonova et al. (2024) conducted their experiments at 27 °C, which also deviates from standard conditions and may complicate comparisons. Orfanos et al. (2015) suggested that mature sarcomere length is reached by approximately 88 hours after puparium formation (APF). In contrast, our measurements show that sarcomeres continue to elongate beyond this point, reaching mature length between 12 and 24 hours post-eclosion. All four earlier studies report a mature sarcomere length around 3.2-3.3 µm, only slightly longer than the ~3.2 µm length of thick filaments (Katzemich et al., 2012; Gasek et al., 2016). This would imply an I-band length below ~100 nm, which is an implausibly short distance. In contrast, our data, along with several recent studies (González-Morales et al., 2019; Deng et al., 2021; Dhanyasi et al., 2020; DeAguero et al., 2019), support a mature sarcomere length of approximately 3.45 µm, placing the length of the I-band at around 250 nm. This estimate is more consistent with high-resolution structural observations from longitudinal EM sections and fluorescent nanoscopy (Szikora et al., 2020; Schueder et al., 2023). Although Reedy and Beall (1993) provide limited data on myofibril diameter during myofibrillogenesis, a more detailed quantitative analysis is presented by Spletter et al. (2018) and by Nikonova et al. (2024). Interestingly, Spletter et al. report two separate datasets - one based on longitudinal sections and another on cross-sections of DLM fibers. While the measurements are consistent during early pupal stages, they diverge significantly in mature IFMs (1.116 ± 0.1025 µm vs. 1.428 ± 0.0995 µm), a discrepancy that is not addressed in their publication. Nikonova et al. (2024) report even narrower myofibril widths (0.9887 ± 0.1273 µm). Moreover, the reported diameters of early myofibrils in all three datasets are nearly twice as large as those reported by Reedy and Beall (1993) and in our own measurements, directly contradicting the reviewer's claim that the values are “close to identical.” Finally, our data clearly demonstrate that both the length and diameter of IFM sarcomeres reach a plateau in young adults, which is a key developmental feature not examined in previous studies.
In summary, we did not and we do not intend to claim that our conclusions are novel as to the general mechanisms of myofibril and sarcomere growth. Rather, our contribution lies in providing a high-precision, robust analysis of the growth process using a state-of-the-art toolkit, resulting in a comprehensive description that aligns with structural data obtained from TEM and dSTORM. We therefore believe that expert readers will recognize numerous valuable aspects of our approaches that will advance research in the field.
Counting the total number of thick filaments during myofibril development is nice, however, this also has been done (REEDY, M. C. & BEALL, C. 1993, PMID: 8253277). In this old study, the authors reported the amount of filament across one myofibril. How does this compare to the new data here counting all filaments? Unfortunatley, this is not discussed.
Indeed, the study by Reedy and Beall (1993) was primarily based on longitudinal DLM sections, which were used to estimate myofibril width and count the number of thick filaments on this lateral view images (e.g., ~15 thick filaments wide at 75 hours APF), but total thick filament numbers were not provided. While such data could theoretically be used to estimate the number of myofilaments per myofibril, these estimations would depend on the unverified assumption that the section includes the full width of the myofibril. Additionally, the study did not provide standard deviations or the number of measurements, limiting the interpretability and reproducibility of their findings. These points highlight the need for a more rigorous and quantitative approach. For these reasons, we chose to quantify myofilament number using cross-sections, providing more accurate and reliable assessments.
Besides the difference between the lateral versus cross sections, a direct comparison of our studies is further complicated by differences in the developmental time points and experimental conditions used. Reedy and Beall (1993) reports data from pupae aged 42, 60, 75 and 100 hours, as well as from adults, whereas we present data from 36, 48, and 72 hours APF, and from 24 hours after eclosion, which corresponds to approximately 124 hours APF. Moreover, their experiments were carried out at 23 °C, a temperature that somewhat slows down pupal development and results in adult eclosion at around 112 hours APF, as stated in their study. In contrast, our experiments were carried out at the more commonly used 25 °C, where adults typically emerge around 100 hours APF.
Collectively, these differences prevented meaningful comparisons between the two datasets, and therefore we preferred to avoid lengthy discussions on this issue.
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Summary
In this work, the authors present a careful study of the lattice of the indirect flight muscle (IFM) in Drosophila using data from a morphometric analysis. To this end, an automated tool is developed for precise, high-throughput measurements of sarcomere length and myofibril width, and various microscopy techniques are used to assess sub-sarcomeric structures. These methods are applied to analyze sarcomere structure at multiple stages in the process of myofibrillogenesis. In addition, the authors present various factors and experimental methods that may affect the accurate measurement of IFM structures. Although the comprehensive structural study is appreciated, there are major issues with the presentation/scope of the work that need to be addressed:
Major Comments
The main weakness of the paper is in its claim of presenting a model of the sarcomere. Indeed, the paper reports a structural study that is drawn onto a 3D schematic. There is no myofibrillogenesis model that would provide insights into mechanisms. Therefore, the use of the word model is grossly overstated.
In general, the major focus and contribution of the work is unclear. How does the comprehensive nature of the measurements contribute to existing literature?
Figure labels are often rather confusing - for example it is unclear why there is a B, B', B' etc instead of B,C,D, etc.
Some comments in the text are not clearly tied to the figures. For example, in lines 108-109, are the authors referring to the shadow along the edges of the myofibril when saying they are not clearly defined (Figure 1C)?
In line 116, it is unclear what "surrounding structures" the authors are referring to if the myofibrils are isolated.
In lines 141-142, there is no reference of data to back up the claim of validation.
In line 170, the authors mention the mef2-Gal4/+ strain as a Gal4 driver line but do not clearly state how this strain is different from the wildtypes or how this impacts their results.
In lines 182-185, the authors discuss the effects of tissue embedding on morphometrics. Were factors such as animal sex, age, fiber type, etc. conserved in these experiments? If not, any differences in results may be confounding.
In lines 199-201, the authors discuss results of myofibril diameter using different preparation methods, yet no data is cited to support the claims. In line 220, the phrase "6 independent experiments" is unclear. Is each independent experiment performed using a different animal? Furthermore, are 6 experiments performed for each time point?
In line 254, the authors refer to "number of sarcomeres". It must be clearly stated if this refers to sarcomeres per myofibril, image area, etc.
In line 274, the authors refer to "myofilament number". It must be clearly stated if this refers to myofilaments per myofibril, image area, etc.
In line 299, the authors mention that thin filaments measured less than 560 nm in length, yet no data is cited to support this.
In the "Quantifying sarcomere growth dynamics" section of the summary (starting from line 402) the authors introduce data that would be more naturally placed in the results and discussion section.
In lines 422-423, it is not mentioned what the controls are for.
In the caption of Figure 1C, it is not mentioned what the red dashed lines in the microscope images represent.
In the caption of Figure 1D, the difference between the lighter and darker grey points is not mentioned.
In line 849, the stated p-value (0.003) does not match that mentioned in the figure (0.0003).
In line 874, it is not clear what an "independent experiment" refers to (different animal, etc.?).
Figure 2A is hard to read. Using different colored dots for different time points might help.
The significant figures presented in Figure 4 give a completely inaccurate representation of the variability of the measurements achieved with these techniques.
In line 877, it should be mentioned that the number of filaments is counted per myofibril. The y-axes in the figure should also be adjusted to clarify this.
In line 883, it is not clear what an "independent experiment" refers to (different animal, etc.?).
The statement of sample sizes in all figures is a little confusing.
In lines 1007-1008, the authors imply that the lattice model is needed for calculation of myofilament length. However, from the equations and previous data, it seems that this can be estimated using the confocal and dSTORM images.
A more specific discussion of future directions is needed to put this paper in context. For example: Can anything from the overall process be used to better understand sarcomere dynamics in larger animals/humans? Can this be applied to disease modelling?
One of the major claims of the paper is that there is a measurable variability with sex and other parameters. However, this data is never clearly summarized, presented (except for supplement), or discussed for its implications.
Minor Comments
Lines 60-65 seem to break the flow of the introduction. As the authors discuss existing methods in literature for IFM analysis in the previous couple sentences, the following sentences should clearly state the limitations of existing methods/current gap in literature and a general idea of what the current work is contributing.
In line 104, the acronym for ZASPs is not spelled out.
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I agree as well.
In summary, this paper provides a multi-scale characterization of Drosophila flight muscle sarcomere structure under a variety of conditions, which is potentially a significant contribution for the field. However, the paper scope is overstated in that it does not provide an actual sarcomere model. Further, there are multiple issues with data presentation that impact the readability of the manuscript.
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DOCUMENT DE BRIEFING - AUDITION DE FRANÇOIS BAYROU SUR LES VIOLENCES SCOLAIRES, NOTAMMENT À NOTRE-DAME DE BÉTHARRAM
Date : [Insérer la date de l'audition si disponible, sinon indiquer "Non spécifié"] Sujet : Audition de François Bayrou devant la commission d'enquête sur les violences scolaires, en particulier à Notre-Dame de Bétharram. Source : Extraits de la retranscription de l'audition. Intervenant Principal : François Bayrou (Premier Ministre) Rapporteurs : Violette Spilbou, Paul Vanier Présidente : [Nom de la présidente non précisé dans les extraits]
1. Synthèse Exécutive
François Bayrou, auditionné sous serment, a abordé les accusations portées à son encontre concernant sa connaissance et sa gestion des violences, notamment sexuelles, au sein de l'établissement Notre-Dame de Bétharram.
Il a vivement contesté les allégations selon lesquelles il aurait protégé des pédocriminels ou minimisé la gravité des faits.
Il a insisté sur l'importance de son audition pour les victimes, qu'il considère comme le cœur du sujet, tout en dénonçant une instrumentalisation politique de l'affaire visant à l'abattre et à déstabiliser le gouvernement.
Bayrou a fourni une chronologie précise de ses liens avec Bétharram (en tant que parent d'élève de 1987 à 2002) et de son action en tant que Ministre de l'Éducation Nationale (1993-1997) face aux alertes reçues, notamment un rapport d'inspection de 1996 qu'il a commandé.
Il a longuement débattu avec les rapporteurs, en particulier sur les variations perçues dans ses déclarations antérieures et sur l'existence et le contenu d'une conversation avec le juge Mirand en 1998.
Il a également défendu son approche face à la violence, y compris un incident personnel controversé.
2. Points Clés et Thèmes Principaux
3. Principales Contradictions et Points de Tension
4. Faits Importants et Idées Clés à Retenir
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plusieurs types de publics : ceux, amateurs de belles images, et d’autres plus avertis, comme le public universitaire.
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14 Neuroscience and Cognitive Ontology: A Case for Pluralism
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Summary: This manuscript by Leone et al describes the role of the PIDDosome in cardiomyocytes. Using a series of whole body and cardiomyocyte specific knockouts, the authors show that the PIDDosome maintains correct ploidy in these cells. It achieves this through inducing cell cycle arrest in cardiomyocytes in a p53 dependent manner. Despite this effect on ploidy, PIDDosome-deficient hearts show no structural or functional defects. Statistics and rigor appear to be adequate.
We thank this referee for taking the time to evaluate our work and their valuable comments. We assume that this reviewer by mistake indicates that the phenomenon we describe, depends on p53. As outlined in the abstract and throughout the manuscript, the effect is independent of p53, but may additionally still involve p21, acting along or parallel to the PIDDosome.
Major comments: 1. Figure 1 uses fluorescent intensity of a nuclear stain to determine ploidy per nucleus and they further separate the results into mononucleated, binucleated or multinucleated cells. It is hard to know how to interpret these results without further information or controls. Is there a good positive control that can be used to help to show whether this assay is quantitative? The differences are larger with the Raidd and caspase-2 knockouts than with the Pidd knockouts but this is not addressed.
*We appreciate this concern. Regarding a "good positive control" we can say that we follow state-of the art in the cardiomyocyte field and studies by the Evans (PMID: 36622904), Kuhn (PMID: 32109383), Bergmann (PMID: 26544945) and Patterson labs (PMID: 28783163, 36912240) all use the identical approach to discriminate 2n from 4n nuclei in microscopy images at the cellular level. The fact that the majority of rodent CM nuclei is indeed diploid (PMID: 31175264, 31585517 and 32078450) and a large number of nuclei has been evaluated to assess their mean fluorescence intensity (MFI) reduces the risk of a systematic bias in our analysis. Moreover, we have used an orthogonal approach that is indeed quantitative to define DNA content, i.e,. flow-cytometry based evaluation of DNA content in isolated CM nuclei (Fig. 1C). We hence are confident our assays are quantitative. *
Regarding the fact that loss of Pidd1 causes a more saddle phenotype, we can offer to discuss this in light of the fact that Pidd1 has additional functions, outside the PIDDosome (PMID: 35343572), and that we made similar observations when analyzing ploidy in hepatocytes (PMID: *31983631). Given the fact that all components of the PIDDosome show a similar phenotype, and that this phenotype is mimicked by loss of the protein that connects PIDD1 and centrosomes, ANKRD26 (Fig. 4a), we are confident that this biological variation in our analysis is not affecting our conclusions. *
On line 459 the authors state that the increase in polyploidy in PIDDosome knockouts occurs in adult hood but this is not directly tested. In fact, in the next section the polyploidy is assessed in early postnatal development. This statement should be explained or removed.
We see that we have made an unclear statement here. In fact, we first noted increases in ploidy in adult heart and then define the time window in development when this happens. This sentence will be rephrased.
In Figure 4. The authors obtained RNAseq data for P1, P7 and P14 but only show the differences with and without caspase-2 at P7. Given that the differences in ploidy are more significant at P14 (Fig 3D), all the comparisons should be shown along with analysis of whether the same genes/gene families are altered in the absence of caspase-2.
The reason why we focus on postnatal day 7 (P7) is that data from Alkass et al (PMID: 26544945) and other labs (PMID: 31175264 ) document that on this day the initial wave of binucleation peaks. Hence, we hypothesized that the PIDDosome must be active in most CM, which aligns well with the increased mRNA levels of all of its components (Figure 3). Interestingly, it seems that its action is tightly regulated, as mRNA of PIDDosome components drop on P10, suggesting PIDDosome shut-down or downregulation. Similar findings have been noted in the liver (PMID: *31983631). Alkass and colleagues also show that very few CMs enter another round of DNA synthesis between P7 and P14, and hence possible transcriptome changes in the absence of the PIDDosome will be strongly diluted. *
Please note that on P1, there is no difference between genotypes to be expected as all CM are mononucleated diploids and cytokinesis competent, as previously demonstrated (PMID: *26544945). Moreover, PIDDosome expression levels are extremely low (Fig. 3A). As such, no difference between genotypes are expected on P1. In addition, on P14 the ploidy phenotype observed in PIDDosome knockout mice reaches the maximum and ploidy increases are comparable to adult tissue. Thus, at this time the trigger for PIDDosome activation (cytokinesis failure) is no longer observed as the majority of CMs are post-mitotic, (PMID: 26247711). As such the impact of PIDDosome activation on the P14 transcriptome is most likely negligible. However, if desired, we can expand our bioinformatics analysis summarizing findings made related to DEGs over time in wt animals by comparing genotypes also on day 1 and day 14. In light of the above, analysis between genotypes on P7 holds still appears as the one most meaningful. *
Some validation of the RNAseq and/or proteomics results would be an important addition to this study
We agree with this notion and propose to validate key candidates related to cardiomyocyte proliferation and polyploidization, some of which we found to be differentially expressed at the mRNA level on day 7in the RNAseq data (e.g., p21, Foxm1, Kif18a, Lin37 and others)
Regarding the proteomics results, we face the challenge that we can only try to confirm if candidate proteins are likely caspase substrates in silico using DeepCleave*, and potentially pick one or two candidates linked to CM differentiation for further analysis in vitro and in heterologous cell based assays (e.g. 293T cells), as no bona-fide ventricular cardiomyocyte cell lines exist. Primary postnatal CMs are extremely difficult to transfect, nor they proliferate without drug-treatment, or fail cytokinesis ex vivo. *
Figure 4D: the authors make the conclusion that p21 is downstream of PIDD (et p53 independent). However, this is not supported by the data because the increase in 4N cells/decrease in 2N cells, although statistically significant, is nowhere near that of caspase-2 KO and caspase-2/p21 KO. Statistics should also compare p32KO with c2KO. In the absence of any other data, the more likely conclusion is that p21 is not involved.
*We agree that the findings related to the impact seen upon loss of p21 suggest that it is not the only effector involved in ploidy control and it may not even be an effector engaged by caspase-2, as C2/p21 DKO mice have an even higher ploidy increase, albeit not statistically significant. However, it is important to highlight that p21 (Cdkn1a) was found to be downregulated in our transcriptomic analysis suggesting an involvement in the caspace2-cascade. We are happy to highlight this when presenting the results and in the discussion. *
*We assume that this referee refers to p73 KO data that should be compared to Casp2 KO data (could be read as p73 or p53, but the latter we compare side by side with Casp2 in Fig. 4 already). As p73 KO mice were not found to be viable beyond day 7 (our attempt to find animals on day 10 failed, in line with published literature (PMID: 24500610, 10716451)), we can only offer to compare this data set to the data presented in Figure 3C, where we have analyzed ploidy increases on day 7 from wt and PIDDosome mutant mice. This re-analysis will show that only Caspase-2 mutant mice display a significant ploidy increase on P7, when compared to wt or p73 mutant animals, while no difference are noted between wt and p73 mutant mice (to be included in new Suppl. Fig. 3C) *
Minor comments: Suggest moving Figure 4A to Figure 3 as it seems to fit better there based on the citation of this figure in the text
*We can see some benefit in this recommendation and included panel 4A now in an updated version of Figure 3. *
Recommend enhancing the brightness of microscopy images in Figure 1E and 2D
We will try to improve image quality, may have been due to PDF conversion
Significance
This study provides interesting information for the role of the PIDDosome in protecting from polyploidy and adds to the body of work by this same group studying this pathway in the liver.
The main weakness in terms of significance is the lack of a phenotype in the hearts of these animals. Therefore, it is clear that ploidy (or at least PIDDosome dependent ploidy) has minimal impact on cardiac development.
We respectfully disagree with the comment that the lack of impact on cardiac function constitutes a weakness of our findings. Several studies on ploidy control in the liver (PMID 34228992) but importantly also heart (PMID: 36622904) have failed to document a clear impact of increased ploidy on organ function. This does not infer insignificance, but maybe rather that the context where this becomes relevant has not been identified. We are happy expand on this in our discussion
The authors mention that they have not tried giving these mice an myocardial infarct (MI) or inducing any other type of cardiac damage. Although it is understood that these experiments are likely outside of the scope of the present study, without this information the impact of this study is moderate. I recommend expanding the discussion to provide a more in-depth possible rationale as to why ploidy perturbations do not lead to structural changes like in the liver.
Despite this, the insights to the pathway itself are interesting to investigators in the caspase-2 field if a little underdeveloped, especially concerning the role of p21.
My expertise is in cell death and caspase biology (especially caspase-2). I have sufficient expertise to evaluate all parts of this paper.
*As mentioned above, we will amend our conclusions on p21, in light of potential findings made when validating DEG candidates, as stated above. *
*We hope that the changes and amendments proposed here will be satisfactory to this referee to recommend publication of a revised manuscript. *
Reviewer #2
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__Summary: __
In this study, the authors investigated the role of the PIDDosome during cardiomyocyte polyploidization. PIDDosome is a multi-protein complex activating the endopeptidase Caspase-2, and shown to be involved in eliminating cells with extra centrosomes or in response to genotoxic stress (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020). In both cases, the PIDDosome is recruited in a ANKRD26-dependent manner at the centrosomes leading to p53 stabilization and cell death (Burigotto & Fava, 2021; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021).
Here, by studying mouse cardiomyocyte differentiation, the authors showed that PIDDosome is imposing ploidy restriction during cardiomyocyte differentiation. Importantly, in contrast to a previous report in the liver (Sladky et al., 2020), they showed that PIDDosome acts in a p53-independent manner in cardiomyocytes. Indeed, they suggested that PIDDosome controls ploidy in cardiomyocytes through p21 activation.
We want to thank this reviewer for the time taken to evaluate our work and provide critical feedback that will help to improve our revised manuscript.
__Major comments: __
In general the conclusions of the authors are well supported by the experiments. However, I would suggest the following experiments/analysis to strengthen the paper:
The authors should improve the Figure 1 to help the readers who are not familiar with cardiomyocyte polyploidization. For instance, I would suggest to add a scheme to summarize cardiomyocyte polyploidization (in terms of nuclear size, mono vs multi and so on).
We agree that a visual summary of the postnatal timing of CM polyploidization will be helpful for the generalist not familiar with the topic and have added a scheme, adapted from a study by Alkass et al. (PMID: *26544945), who elegantly defined the timing of this process during postnatal mice life (now Fig. 1A). *
Based on the images they presented in 1B, the authors should also measure the nuclear area or volume in the different conditions in which components of the PIDDosome were depleted. Indeed, these two parameters should be easier to conceptualize for the readers (instead of the fluorescence nuclear intensity). This could help to understand if the nuclear size is maintained between the different conditions and if this is comparable between mono, bi or multinucleated cardiomyocytes.
We have acquired this data and it can be used to provide additional information on nuclear area and/or volume. We propose to focus on re-analyzing data from wt, Casp2 and XMLC2CRE/Casp2f/f mice. The additional information can be included in Figures 1 & 2, respectively.
We agree with this comment. We can measure the heart vs. body weight ratio or tibia length in adult Casp2-/- vs. WT (3 month old) in order to indirectly evaluate possible increases in CM size linked to increased ploidy.
Also, the percentage of cardiomyocytes presenting higher levels of ploidy seems quite low. The authors should discuss this point. In particular because this could explain the absence of consequences on heart size and function at steady state.
We agree with this conclusion and will expand on this in our discussion. It is important to note that as opposed to findings made in liver (PMID: *31983631), genetic manipulation of ploidy regulators such as E2f7/8 (PMID: 36622904), only led to modest changes in CM ploidy, suggesting that either a small band-width compatible with normal heart function exists, or that additional mechanisms exist that take control when these thresholds set by the PIDDosome or E2f7/8 are exceeded. These mechanisms could involve Cyclin G (PMID: 20360255), or TNNI3K (PMID: 31589606). Importantly, a recent publication has shown that overexpression of Plk1(T210D) and Ect2 from birth causes increased heart weight coupled with a minor decrease in CM size. These mice undergo to premature death (PMID: 39912233) suggesting that CM polyploidization is a tight regulated process regulated by several independent mechanisms during heart development. *
In Figure 2D, the authors measured the cardiomyocyte cross-sectional area and concluded that removing PIDDosome components have no effect on cardiomyocyte cell size. Since it has been shown that ploidy increase is normally associated with an increase in cell area, the authors should measure cell area of cardiomyocytes analyzed in Figure 1B. It could be then interesting to establish a correlation with nuclear area and the mono, bi or multinucleated status. This will strengthen the results showing that ploidy increases without affecting cell area.
Indeed, studies in PIDDosome deficient livers suggest that tissue is containing fewer but bigger cells (PMID: *31983631). As opposed to the liver the percentage of cardiomyocytes presenting higher levels of ploidy is relatively low. Thus, a possible increase in CM size in PIDDosome deficient mice may be masked in heart cross-sections. In order to better correlate the ploidy with cell size, we propose to reanalyze our microscopy images used to extract the data displayed in Fig. 1D. We may run into the problem though that the number of cells acquired may become limiting to achieve sufficient statistical power. In this case we could pool data from different PIDDosome mutant CM to increase statistical power. Again, we propose to initially prioritize wt vs. Casp2 vs. XMLC2/Casp2f/f mice. In addition, we can offer to quantify heart to body weight ratio or tibia length as an additional read-out (see answer to a previous reviewer comment). *
The authors should discuss the fact that PIDDosome depletion lead only to a mild increase in ploidy levels (4N) in a small percentage of cardiomyocyte. If the PIDDosome is controlling ploidy, one could expect that removing it should lead to a drastic increase in the ploidy levels. Is PIDDosome depletion leading to cell death in some cardiomyocyte? The authors should discuss this point in the discussion or if relevant show a staining with an apoptosis marker. Is another mechanism compensating to prevent higher ploidy levels in cardiomyocytes?
These are valid thoughts, some of which we contemplated before. In part, we have addressed them in our response to Reviewer#1, above, discussing similar findings made in E2f7/8 deficient hearts (PMID: 36622904), or Cyclin G overexpressing hearts (PMID: 20360255), where also only modest changes in ploidy were achieved. Together these observations are suggesting alternative control mechanism able to act, or limited tolerance towards larger shifts in ploidy, incompatible with proper cell function and survival. Towards this end, we can offer to test if we find increased signs of cell death in PIDDosome mutant hearts by TUNEL staining of histological sections. Of note, we did not find evidence for such a phenomenon in the liver (PMID: 31983631).
Even if the authors presented RNAseq data suggesting that the PIDDosome is activated during cardiomyocyte differentiation, they should clearly demonstrate this point to strengthen the message of the paper. Indeed, the conclusions are based on the absence of PIDDosome components triggering higher ploidy in cardiomyocytes. However, we don't know whether (and when) the PIDDosome is activated during cardiomyocyte differentiation to control their ploidy levels. I would suggest to analyze PIDDosome activation markers by immunofluorescence in *cardiomyocytes at different developmental stages. *
*We agree with this referee that direct proof of PIDDosome activation would be helpful and that we only infer back from loss of function phenotypes when and where the PIDDosome becomes activated. However, several technical issues prevent us from collecting more direct evidence of PIDDosome activation in the developing heart. 1) Polyploidization in heart CM appears to happen gradually in CM from day 3 on with a peak at day 7 (PMID: 26544945). Hence, this is not a synchronous process, where we could pinpoint simultaneous activation of the PIDDosome in all cells at the same time, which would facilitate biochemical analysis, e.g., by western blotting for signs of Caspase-2 activation (i.e. the loss of its pro-form, PMID: 28130345). 2) Our most reliable readout, MDM2 cleavage by caspase-2 giving rise to specific fragments detectable in western, is not applicable to mouse tissue, as the antibody we use only detects human MDM2 (PMID: 28130345) and no other MDM2 Ab we tested gave satisfactory results. Independent of that, 3) we do not see involvement of p53 in CM ploidy control (arguing against a role of MDM2). *
*As such, we can only offer to look at extra centrosome clustering in postnatal binucleated CM (as also suggested further below), as a putative trigger for PIDDosome activation. However, this has been published by the first author of this study before (PMID 31301302). Given that we have made the significant effort to time resolve the increase in ploidy in postnatal mice (please note that several hearts needed to be pooled for each time point, analyzed in multiple biological replicates), we think that our conclusions are well-justified based on the genetic data provided. *
Concerning the methods, the authors must add the references for each product they used and not only the origin. When relevant, the RRID should be indicated. Without this information the method and the data cannot be reproduced.
We will update this information where relevant to reproduce our results
Minor comments:
In general, the text and the figures are clear. Nevertheless, I would suggest the following changes:
We will adopt axes accordingly
Figure 4A: The authors should stain centrosomes in cardiomyocytes. This should strengthen the conclusion taken by the authors based on the results obtained in mice depleted for ANKRD26. Indeed, for the moment they are insufficient to conclude about the role of the centrosomes. The authors should show that centrosomes cluster in cardiomyocytes (a condition necessary for PIDDosome activation in polyploid cells) and if possible that component of the PIDDosome are recruited here.
*This point is well taken and addressed in part above. Clustering of extra centrosomes has been documented and published by the first author of this study in rat polyploid cardiomyocytes (PIMID; cited). We can offer to show clustering of centrosomes in mouse CM isolated from day 7 hearts, but while PIDD1 can be detected well in MEF, we repeatedly failed to stain fro PIDD1 in primary CMs. *
Figure 4F: I would suggest to modify the working model to emphasize more the differences between WT and PIDDosome KO.
We will aim to improve this cartoon/graphical abstract
The prior studies are referenced appropriately.
Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):
How polyploid cells control their ploidy levels during differentiation remains poorly understood. The data presented here represent thus an advance concerning this question. The actual model concerning PIDDosome activation relies on the presence of extra centrosomes that drives the ANKDR26-dependent recruitment of the PIDDosome. Then, Caspase 2 is activated leading to a p53-p21 dependent cell cycle arrest (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020; Janssens & Tinel, 2012; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021). In this study, the authors showed that similar pathway takes place during cardiomyocyte differentiation to control ploidy levels. These data are reminiscent of previous work showing PIDDosome involvement during hepatocyte polyploidization (Sladky et al. 2020). Together, these data highlight the prominent role of the PIDDosome complex in controlling ploidy levels in physiological context. Importantly, this study identified that the classical p53-dependent cell cycle arrest described after PIDDosome activation is not involved here. Instead, the data established that independently of p53, p21 contribute to control cardiomyocyte ploidy. In consequence, this study extends the initial pathway associated with PIDDosome activation and suggest that other mechanisms could take place to restrain cell proliferation upon PIDDosome activation. Overall, this makes this paper significant and of interest for the following fields: polyploidy, heart/cardiomyocyte development and PIDDosome.
My field of expertise includes polyploidy, cell cycle and genetic instability.
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In this study, the authors investigated the role of the PIDDosome during cardiomyocyte polyploidization. PIDDosome is a multi-protein complex activating the endopeptidase Caspase-2, and shown to be involved in eliminating cells with extra centrosomes or in response to genotoxic stress (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020). In both cases, the PIDDosome is recruited in a ANKRD26-dependent manner at the centrosomes leading to p53 stabilization and cell death (Burigotto & Fava, 2021; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021).
Here, by studying mouse cardiomyocyte differentiation, the authors showed that PIDDosome is imposing ploidy restriction during cardiomyocyte differentiation. Importantly, in contrast to a previous report in the liver (Sladky et al., 2020), they showed that PIDDosome acts in a p53-independent manner in cardiomyocytes. Indeed, they suggested that PIDDosome controls ploidy in cardiomyocytes through p21 activation.
Major comments:
In general the conclusions of the authors are well supported by the experiments. However, I would suggest the following experiments/analysis to strengthen the paper:
Concerning the methods, the authors must add the references for each product they used and not only the origin. When relevant, the RRID should be indicated. Without this information the method and the data cannot be reproduced.
The statistics are well indicated in the figures and in the figure legends.
Minor comments:
In general, the text and the figures are clear. Nevertheless, I would suggest the following changes:
The prior studies are referenced appropriately.
How polyploid cells control their ploidy levels during differentiation remains poorly understood. The data presented here represent thus an advance concerning this question.
The actual model concerning PIDDosome activation relies on the presence of extra centrosomes that drives the ANKDR26-dependent recruitment of the PIDDosome. Then, Caspase 2 is activated leading to a p53-p21 dependent cell cycle arrest (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020; Janssens & Tinel, 2012; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021). In this study, the authors showed that similar pathway takes place during cardiomyocyte differentiation to control ploidy levels. These data are reminiscent of previous work showing PIDDosome involvement during hepatocyte polyploidization (Sladky et al. 2020). Together, these data highlight the prominent role of the PIDDosome complex in controlling ploidy levels in physiological context.
Importantly, this study identified that the classical p53-dependent cell cycle arrest described after PIDDosome activation is not involved here. Instead, the data established that independently of p53, p21 contribute to control cardiomyocyte ploidy. In consequence, this study extend the initial pathway associated with PIDDosome activation and suggest that other mechanisms could take place to restrain cell proliferation upon PIDDosome activation.
Overall, this makes this paper significant and of interest for the following fields: polyploidy, heart/cardiomyocyte development and PIDDosome.
My field of expertise includes polyploidy, cell cycle and genetic instability.
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Summary: This manuscript by Leone et al describes the role of the PIDDosome in cardiomyocytes. Using a series of whole body and cardiomyocyte specific knockouts, the authors show that the PIDDosome maintains correct ploidy in these cells. It achieves this through inducing cell cycle arrest in cardiomyocytes in a p53 dependent manner. Despite this effect on ploidy, PIDDosome-deficient hearts show no structural or functional defects. Statistics and rigor appear to be adequate.
We thank this referee for taking the time to evaluate our work and their valuable comments. We assume that this reviewer by mistake indicates that the phenomenon we describe, depends on p53. As outlined in the abstract and throughout the manuscript, the effect is independent of p53, but may additionally still involve p21, acting along or parallel to the PIDDosome.
Major comments: 1. Figure 1 uses fluorescent intensity of a nuclear stain to determine ploidy per nucleus and they further separate the results into mononucleated, binucleated or multinucleated cells. It is hard to know how to interpret these results without further information or controls. Is there a good positive control that can be used to help to show whether this assay is quantitative? The differences are larger with the Raidd and caspase-2 knockouts than with the Pidd knockouts but this is not addressed.
*We appreciate this concern. Regarding a “good positive control” we can say that we follow state-of the art in the cardiomyocyte field and studies by the Evans (PMID: 36622904), Kuhn (PMID: 32109383), Bergmann (PMID: 26544945) and Patterson labs (PMID: 28783163, 36912240) all use the identical approach to discriminate 2n from 4n nuclei in microscopy images at the cellular level. The fact that the majority of rodent CM nuclei is indeed diploid (PMID: 31175264, 31585517 and 32078450) and a large number of nuclei has been evaluated to assess their mean fluorescence intensity (MFI) reduces the risk of a systematic bias in our analysis. Moreover, we have used an orthogonal approach that is indeed quantitative to define DNA content, i.e,. flow-cytometry based evaluation of DNA content in isolated CM nuclei (Fig. 1C). We hence are confident our assays are quantitative. *
Regarding the fact that loss of Pidd1 causes a more saddle phenotype, we can offer to discuss this in light of the fact that Pidd1 has additional functions, outside the PIDDosome (PMID: 35343572), and that we made similar observations when analyzing ploidy in hepatocytes (PMID: *31983631). Given the fact that all components of the PIDDosome show a similar phenotype, and that this phenotype is mimicked by loss of the protein that connects PIDD1 and centrosomes, ANKRD26 (Fig. 4a), we are confident that this biological variation in our analysis is not affecting our conclusions. *
On line 459 the authors state that the increase in polyploidy in PIDDosome knockouts occurs in adult hood but this is not directly tested. In fact, in the next section the polyploidy is assessed in early postnatal development. This statement should be explained or removed.
We see that we have made an unclear statement here. In fact, we first noted increases in ploidy in adult heart and then define the time window in development when this happens. This sentence will be rephrased.
In Figure 4. The authors obtained RNAseq data for P1, P7 and P14 but only show the differences with and without caspase-2 at P7. Given that the differences in ploidy are more significant at P14 (Fig 3D), all the comparisons should be shown along with analysis of whether the same genes/gene families are altered in the absence of caspase-2.
The reason why we focus on postnatal day 7 (P7) is that data from Alkass et al (PMID: 26544945) and other labs (PMID: 31175264 ) document that on this day the initial wave of binucleation peaks. Hence, we hypothesized that the PIDDosome must be active in most CM, which aligns well with the increased mRNA levels of all of its components (Figure 3). Interestingly, it seems that its action is tightly regulated, as mRNA of PIDDosome components drop on P10, suggesting PIDDosome shut-down or downregulation. Similar findings have been noted in the liver (PMID: *31983631). Alkass and colleagues also show that very few CMs enter another round of DNA synthesis between P7 and P14, and hence possible transcriptome changes in the absence of the PIDDosome will be strongly diluted. *
Please note that on P1, there is no difference between genotypes to be expected as all CM are mononucleated diploids and cytokinesis competent, as previously demonstrated (PMID: *26544945). Moreover, PIDDosome expression levels are extremely low (Fig. 3A). As such, no difference between genotypes are expected on P1. In addition, on P14 the ploidy phenotype observed in PIDDosome knockout mice reaches the maximum and ploidy increases are comparable to adult tissue. Thus, at this time the trigger for PIDDosome activation (cytokinesis failure) is no longer observed as the majority of CMs are post-mitotic, (PMID: 26247711). As such the impact of PIDDosome activation on the P14 transcriptome is most likely negligible. However, if desired, we can expand our bioinformatics analysis summarizing findings made related to DEGs over time in wt animals by comparing genotypes also on day 1 and day 14. In light of the above, analysis between genotypes on P7 holds still appears as the one most meaningful. *
Some validation of the RNAseq and/or proteomics results would be an important addition to this study
We agree with this notion and propose to validate key candidates related to cardiomyocyte proliferation and polyploidization, some of which we found to be differentially expressed at the mRNA level on day 7in the RNAseq data (e.g., p21, Foxm1, Kif18a, Lin37 and others)
Regarding the proteomics results, we face the challenge that we can only try to confirm if candidate proteins are likely caspase substrates in silico using DeepCleave*, and potentially pick one or two candidates linked to CM differentiation for further analysis in vitro and in heterologous cell based assays (e.g. 293T cells), as no bona-fide ventricular cardiomyocyte cell lines exist. Primary postnatal CMs are extremely difficult to transfect, nor they proliferate without drug-treatment, or fail cytokinesis ex vivo. *
Figure 4D: the authors make the conclusion that p21 is downstream of PIDD (et p53 independent). However, this is not supported by the data because the increase in 4N cells/decrease in 2N cells, although statistically significant, is nowhere near that of caspase-2 KO and caspase-2/p21 KO. Statistics should also compare p32KO with c2KO. In the absence of any other data, the more likely conclusion is that p21 is not involved.
*We agree that the findings related to the impact seen upon loss of p21 suggest that it is not the only effector involved in ploidy control and it may not even be an effector engaged by caspase-2, as C2/p21 DKO mice have an even higher ploidy increase, albeit not statistically significant. However, it is important to highlight that p21 (Cdkn1a) was found to be downregulated in our transcriptomic analysis suggesting an involvement in the caspace2-cascade. We are happy to highlight this when presenting the results and in the discussion. *
*We assume that this referee refers to p73 KO data that should be compared to Casp2 KO data (could be read as p73 or p53, but the latter we compare side by side with Casp2 in Fig. 4 already). As p73 KO mice were not found to be viable beyond day 7 (our attempt to find animals on day 10 failed, in line with published literature (PMID: 24500610, 10716451)), we can only offer to compare this data set to the data presented in Figure 3C, where we have analyzed ploidy increases on day 7 from wt and PIDDosome mutant mice. This re-analysis will show that only Caspase-2 mutant mice display a significant ploidy increase on P7, when compared to wt or p73 mutant animals, while no difference are noted between wt and p73 mutant mice (to be included in new Suppl. Fig. 3C) *
Minor comments: Suggest moving Figure 4A to Figure 3 as it seems to fit better there based on the citation of this figure in the text
*We can see some benefit in this recommendation and included panel 4A now in an updated version of Figure 3. *
Recommend enhancing the brightness of microscopy images in Figure 1E and 2D
We will try to improve image quality, may have been due to PDF conversion
Significance
This study provides interesting information for the role of the PIDDosome in protecting from polyploidy and adds to the body of work by this same group studying this pathway in the liver.
The main weakness in terms of significance is the lack of a phenotype in the hearts of these animals. Therefore, it is clear that ploidy (or at least PIDDosome dependent ploidy) has minimal impact on cardiac development.
We respectfully disagree with the comment that the lack of impact on cardiac function constitutes a weakness of our findings. Several studies on ploidy control in the liver (PMID 34228992) but importantly also heart (PMID: 36622904) have failed to document a clear impact of increased ploidy on organ function. This does not infer insignificance, but maybe rather that the context where this becomes relevant has not been identified. We are happy expand on this in our discussion
The authors mention that they have not tried giving these mice an myocardial infarct (MI) or inducing any other type of cardiac damage. Although it is understood that these experiments are likely outside of the scope of the present study, without this information the impact of this study is moderate. I recommend expanding the discussion to provide a more in-depth possible rationale as to why ploidy perturbations do not lead to structural changes like in the liver.
Despite this, the insights to the pathway itself are interesting to investigators in the caspase-2 field if a little underdeveloped, especially concerning the role of p21.
My expertise is in cell death and caspase biology (especially caspase-2). I have sufficient expertise to evaluate all parts of this paper.
*As mentioned above, we will amend our conclusions on p21, in light of potential findings made when validating DEG candidates, as stated above. *
*We hope that the changes and amendments proposed here will be satisfactory to this referee to recommend publication of a revised manuscript. *
Reviewer #2
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__Summary: __
In this study, the authors investigated the role of the PIDDosome during cardiomyocyte polyploidization. PIDDosome is a multi-protein complex activating the endopeptidase Caspase-2, and shown to be involved in eliminating cells with extra centrosomes or in response to genotoxic stress (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020). In both cases, the PIDDosome is recruited in a ANKRD26-dependent manner at the centrosomes leading to p53 stabilization and cell death (Burigotto & Fava, 2021; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021).
Here, by studying mouse cardiomyocyte differentiation, the authors showed that PIDDosome is imposing ploidy restriction during cardiomyocyte differentiation. Importantly, in contrast to a previous report in the liver (Sladky et al., 2020), they showed that PIDDosome acts in a p53-independent manner in cardiomyocytes. Indeed, they suggested that PIDDosome controls ploidy in cardiomyocytes through p21 activation.
We want to thank this reviewer for the time taken to evaluate our work and provide critical feedback that will help to improve our revised manuscript.
__Major comments: __
In general the conclusions of the authors are well supported by the experiments. However, I would suggest the following experiments/analysis to strengthen the paper:
The authors should improve the Figure 1 to help the readers who are not familiar with cardiomyocyte polyploidization. For instance, I would suggest to add a scheme to summarize cardiomyocyte polyploidization (in terms of nuclear size, mono vs multi and so on).
We agree that a visual summary of the postnatal timing of CM polyploidization will be helpful for the generalist not familiar with the topic and have added a scheme, adapted from a study by Alkass et al. (PMID: *26544945), who elegantly defined the timing of this process during postnatal mice life (now Fig. 1A). *
Based on the images they presented in 1B, the authors should also measure the nuclear area or volume in the different conditions in which components of the PIDDosome were depleted. Indeed, these two parameters should be easier to conceptualize for the readers (instead of the fluorescence nuclear intensity). This could help to understand if the nuclear size is maintained between the different conditions and if this is comparable between mono, bi or multinucleated cardiomyocytes.
We have acquired this data and it can be used to provide additional information on nuclear area and/or volume. We propose to focus on re-analyzing data from wt, Casp2 and XMLC2CRE/Casp2f/f mice. The additional information can be included in Figures 1 & 2, respectively.
We agree with this comment. We can measure the heart vs. body weight ratio or tibia length in adult Casp2-/- vs. WT (3 month old) in order to indirectly evaluate possible increases in CM size linked to increased ploidy.
Also, the percentage of cardiomyocytes presenting higher levels of ploidy seems quite low. The authors should discuss this point. In particular because this could explain the absence of consequences on heart size and function at steady state.
We agree with this conclusion and will expand on this in our discussion. It is important to note that as opposed to findings made in liver (PMID: *31983631), genetic manipulation of ploidy regulators such as E2f7/8 (PMID: 36622904), only led to modest changes in CM ploidy, suggesting that either a small band-width compatible with normal heart function exists, or that additional mechanisms exist that take control when these thresholds set by the PIDDosome or E2f7/8 are exceeded. These mechanisms could involve Cyclin G (PMID: 20360255), or TNNI3K (PMID: 31589606). Importantly, a recent publication has shown that overexpression of Plk1(T210D) and Ect2 from birth causes increased heart weight coupled with a minor decrease in CM size. These mice undergo to premature death (PMID: 39912233) suggesting that CM polyploidization is a tight regulated process regulated by several independent mechanisms during heart development. *
In Figure 2D, the authors measured the cardiomyocyte cross-sectional area and concluded that removing PIDDosome components have no effect on cardiomyocyte cell size. Since it has been shown that ploidy increase is normally associated with an increase in cell area, the authors should measure cell area of cardiomyocytes analyzed in Figure 1B. It could be then interesting to establish a correlation with nuclear area and the mono, bi or multinucleated status. This will strengthen the results showing that ploidy increases without affecting cell area.
Indeed, studies in PIDDosome deficient livers suggest that tissue is containing fewer but bigger cells (PMID: *31983631). As opposed to the liver the percentage of cardiomyocytes presenting higher levels of ploidy is relatively low. Thus, a possible increase in CM size in PIDDosome deficient mice may be masked in heart cross-sections. In order to better correlate the ploidy with cell size, we propose to reanalyze our microscopy images used to extract the data displayed in Fig. 1D. We may run into the problem though that the number of cells acquired may become limiting to achieve sufficient statistical power. In this case we could pool data from different PIDDosome mutant CM to increase statistical power. Again, we propose to initially prioritize wt vs. Casp2 vs. XMLC2/Casp2f/f mice. In addition, we can offer to quantify heart to body weight ratio or tibia length as an additional read-out (see answer to a previous reviewer comment). *
The authors should discuss the fact that PIDDosome depletion lead only to a mild increase in ploidy levels (4N) in a small percentage of cardiomyocyte. If the PIDDosome is controlling ploidy, one could expect that removing it should lead to a drastic increase in the ploidy levels. Is PIDDosome depletion leading to cell death in some cardiomyocyte? The authors should discuss this point in the discussion or if relevant show a staining with an apoptosis marker. Is another mechanism compensating to prevent higher ploidy levels in cardiomyocytes?
These are valid thoughts, some of which we contemplated before. In part, we have addressed them in our response to Reviewer#1, above, discussing similar findings made in E2f7/8 deficient hearts (PMID: 36622904), or Cyclin G overexpressing hearts (PMID: 20360255), where also only modest changes in ploidy were achieved. Together these observations are suggesting alternative control mechanism able to act, or limited tolerance towards larger shifts in ploidy, incompatible with proper cell function and survival. Towards this end, we can offer to test if we find increased signs of cell death in PIDDosome mutant hearts by TUNEL staining of histological sections. Of note, we did not find evidence for such a phenomenon in the liver (PMID: 31983631).
Even if the authors presented RNAseq data suggesting that the PIDDosome is activated during cardiomyocyte differentiation, they should clearly demonstrate this point to strengthen the message of the paper. Indeed, the conclusions are based on the absence of PIDDosome components triggering higher ploidy in cardiomyocytes. However, we don't know whether (and when) the PIDDosome is activated during cardiomyocyte differentiation to control their ploidy levels. I would suggest to analyze PIDDosome activation markers by immunofluorescence in *cardiomyocytes at different developmental stages. *
*We agree with this referee that direct proof of PIDDosome activation would be helpful and that we only infer back from loss of function phenotypes when and where the PIDDosome becomes activated. However, several technical issues prevent us from collecting more direct evidence of PIDDosome activation in the developing heart. 1) Polyploidization in heart CM appears to happen gradually in CM from day 3 on with a peak at day 7 (PMID: 26544945). Hence, this is not a synchronous process, where we could pinpoint simultaneous activation of the PIDDosome in all cells at the same time, which would facilitate biochemical analysis, e.g., by western blotting for signs of Caspase-2 activation (i.e. the loss of its pro-form, PMID: 28130345). 2) Our most reliable readout, MDM2 cleavage by caspase-2 giving rise to specific fragments detectable in western, is not applicable to mouse tissue, as the antibody we use only detects human MDM2 (PMID: 28130345) and no other MDM2 Ab we tested gave satisfactory results. Independent of that, 3) we do not see involvement of p53 in CM ploidy control (arguing against a role of MDM2). *
*As such, we can only offer to look at extra centrosome clustering in postnatal binucleated CM (as also suggested further below), as a putative trigger for PIDDosome activation. However, this has been published by the first author of this study before (PMID 31301302). Given that we have made the significant effort to time resolve the increase in ploidy in postnatal mice (please note that several hearts needed to be pooled for each time point, analyzed in multiple biological replicates), we think that our conclusions are well-justified based on the genetic data provided. *
Concerning the methods, the authors must add the references for each product they used and not only the origin. When relevant, the RRID should be indicated. Without this information the method and the data cannot be reproduced.
We will update this information where relevant to reproduce our results
Minor comments:
In general, the text and the figures are clear. Nevertheless, I would suggest the following changes:
We will adopt axes accordingly
Figure 4A: The authors should stain centrosomes in cardiomyocytes. This should strengthen the conclusion taken by the authors based on the results obtained in mice depleted for ANKRD26. Indeed, for the moment they are insufficient to conclude about the role of the centrosomes. The authors should show that centrosomes cluster in cardiomyocytes (a condition necessary for PIDDosome activation in polyploid cells) and if possible that component of the PIDDosome are recruited here.
*This point is well taken and addressed in part above. Clustering of extra centrosomes has been documented and published by the first author of this study in rat polyploid cardiomyocytes (PIMID; cited). We can offer to show clustering of centrosomes in mouse CM isolated from day 7 hearts, but while PIDD1 can be detected well in MEF, we repeatedly failed to stain fro PIDD1 in primary CMs. *
Figure 4F: I would suggest to modify the working model to emphasize more the differences between WT and PIDDosome KO.
We will aim to improve this cartoon/graphical abstract
The prior studies are referenced appropriately.
Reviewer #2 (Significance (Required)):
How polyploid cells control their ploidy levels during differentiation remains poorly understood. The data presented here represent thus an advance concerning this question. The actual model concerning PIDDosome activation relies on the presence of extra centrosomes that drives the ANKDR26-dependent recruitment of the PIDDosome. Then, Caspase 2 is activated leading to a p53-p21 dependent cell cycle arrest (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020; Janssens & Tinel, 2012; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021). In this study, the authors showed that similar pathway takes place during cardiomyocyte differentiation to control ploidy levels. These data are reminiscent of previous work showing PIDDosome involvement during hepatocyte polyploidization (Sladky et al. 2020). Together, these data highlight the prominent role of the PIDDosome complex in controlling ploidy levels in physiological context. Importantly, this study identified that the classical p53-dependent cell cycle arrest described after PIDDosome activation is not involved here. Instead, the data established that independently of p53, p21 contribute to control cardiomyocyte ploidy. In consequence, this study extends the initial pathway associated with PIDDosome activation and suggest that other mechanisms could take place to restrain cell proliferation upon PIDDosome activation. Overall, this makes this paper significant and of interest for the following fields: polyploidy, heart/cardiomyocyte development and PIDDosome.
My field of expertise includes polyploidy, cell cycle and genetic instability.
We thank this reviewer for the time taken and the positive feedback provided.
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Summary:
In this study, the authors investigated the role of the PIDDosome during cardiomyocyte polyploidization. PIDDosome is a multi-protein complex activating the endopeptidase Caspase-2, and shown to be involved in eliminating cells with extra centrosomes or in response to genotoxic stress (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020). In both cases, the PIDDosome is recruited in a ANKRD26-dependent manner at the centrosomes leading to p53 stabilization and cell death (Burigotto & Fava, 2021; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021).
Here, by studying mouse cardiomyocyte differentiation, the authors showed that PIDDosome is imposing ploidy restriction during cardiomyocyte differentiation. Importantly, in contrast to a previous report in the liver (Sladky et al., 2020), they showed that PIDDosome acts in a p53-independent manner in cardiomyocytes. Indeed, they suggested that PIDDosome controls ploidy in cardiomyocytes through p21 activation.
Major comments:
In general the conclusions of the authors are well supported by the experiments. However, I would suggest the following experiments/analysis to strengthen the paper:
Concerning the methods, the authors must add the references for each product they used and not only the origin. When relevant, the RRID should be indicated. Without this information the method and the data cannot be reproduced.
The statistics are well indicated in the figures and in the figure legends.
Minor comments:
In general, the text and the figures are clear. Nevertheless, I would suggest the following changes:
The prior studies are referenced appropriately.
How polyploid cells control their ploidy levels during differentiation remains poorly understood. The data presented here represent thus an advance concerning this question.
The actual model concerning PIDDosome activation relies on the presence of extra centrosomes that drives the ANKDR26-dependent recruitment of the PIDDosome. Then, Caspase 2 is activated leading to a p53-p21 dependent cell cycle arrest (Burigotto & Fava, 2021, Sladky and Villunger, 2020; Janssens & Tinel, 2012; Evans et al., 2020; Burigotto et al., 2021). In this study, the authors showed that similar pathway takes place during cardiomyocyte differentiation to control ploidy levels. These data are reminiscent of previous work showing PIDDosome involvement during hepatocyte polyploidization (Sladky et al. 2020). Together, these data highlight the prominent role of the PIDDosome complex in controlling ploidy levels in physiological context.
Importantly, this study identified that the classical p53-dependent cell cycle arrest described after PIDDosome activation is not involved here. Instead, the data established that independently of p53, p21 contribute to control cardiomyocyte ploidy. In consequence, this study extend the initial pathway associated with PIDDosome activation and suggest that other mechanisms could take place to restrain cell proliferation upon PIDDosome activation.
Overall, this makes this paper significant and of interest for the following fields: polyploidy, heart/cardiomyocyte development and PIDDosome.
My field of expertise includes polyploidy, cell cycle and genetic instability.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This study investigates the potential of targeting specific regions within the RNA genome of the Porcine Epidemic Diarrhea Virus (PEDV) for antiviral drug development. The authors used SHAPE-MaP to analyze the structure of the PEDV RNA genome in infected cells. They categorized different regions of the genome based on their structural characteristics, focusing on those that might be good targets for drugs or small interfering RNAs (siRNAs).
They found that dynamic single-stranded regions can be stabilized by compounds (e.g., to form G-quadruplexes), which inhibit viral proliferation. They demonstrated this by targeting a specific G4-forming sequence with a compound called Braco-19. The authors also describe stable (structured) single-stranded regions that they used to design siRNAs showing that they effectively inhibited viral replication.
Strengths:
There are a number of strengths to highlight in this manuscript.
(1) The study uses a sophisticated technique (SHAPE-MaP) to analyze the PEDV RNA genome in situ, providing valuable insights into its structural features.
(2) The authors provide a strong rationale for targeting specific RNA structures for antiviral development.
(3) The study includes a range of experiments, including structural analysis, compound screening, siRNA design, and viral proliferation assays, to support their conclusions.
(4) Finally, the findings have potential implications for the development of new antiviral therapies against PEDV and other RNA viruses.
Overall, this interesting study highlights the importance of considering RNA structure when designing antiviral therapies and provides a compelling strategy for identifying promising RNA targets in viral genomes.
Weaknesses:
I have some concerns about the utility of the 3D analyses, the effects of their synonymous mutants on expression/proliferation, a potentially missed control for studies of mutants, and the therapeutic utility of the compound they tested vs. Gquadruplexes.
We thank the reviewer for their positive assessment and insightful comments. Below, we address each point of concern:
(1) The utility of the 3D analyses:
In the revised manuscript, we have toned down this discussion and moved Figure 3A to the supplementary materials to reduce any sense of fragmentation in the overall story. While SHAPE-MaP technology is mature and convenient to use and can indeed capture some RNA structural elements with special functions in certain case; we acknowledge that its application for 3D analyses requires further validation. We believe this approach will become more prevalent in future research.
(2) The effects of synonymous mutants on expression/proliferation:
In the PEDV genome, the PQS1 mutation site encodes lysine (AAG). Given that lysine has only two codons (AAG and AAA), the G3109A synonymous mutation represented our sole viable option. Published studies (Ding et al., 2024) confirm that neither AAG nor AAA are classified as rare or dominant codons in mammalian cells. Therefore, the observed changes in viral proliferation levels are likely to stem from alterations in RNA secondary structure rather than codon usage effects.
REFERENCES:
Ding W, Yu W, Chen Y, et al. Rare codon recoding for efficient noncanonical amino acid incorporation in mammalian cells. Science. 2024;384(6700):1134-1142.
(3) Potentially missed control for studies of mutants:
In the revised manuscript, we have incorporated additional control experiments evaluating Braco-19's therapeutic effects on the PQS3 mutant strain (Figure 4 – figure supplement 3):
(4) The therapeutic utility of Braco-19 vs. G-quadruplexes:
While Braco-19 is indeed a broad-spectrum G4 ligand, our data clearly show that not all PQSs in the viral genome can form G4 structures. Our findings primarily provide proof-of-concept that sequences with high G4-forming potential in viral genomes represent viable targets for antiviral therapy. Future studies could leverage SHAPEguided structural insights to design ligands with enhanced specificity for viral G4s, potentially improving therapeutic utility while minimizing off-target effects.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Luo et. al. use SHAPE-MaP to find suitable RNA targets in Porcine Epidemic Diarrhoea Virus. Results show that dynamic and transient structures are good targets for small molecules, and that exposed strand regions are adequate targets for siRNA. This work is important to segment the RNA targeting.
Strengths:
This work is well done and the data supports its findings and conclusions. When possible, more than one technique was used to confirm some of the findings.
Weaknesses:
The study uses a cell line that is not porcine (not the natural target of the virus).
We thank the reviewer for their insightful comments and recognition of our study's value. The most commonly employed cell models for in vitro PEDV studies are monkey-derived Vero E6 cells and porcine PK1 cells. However, PEDV (particularly our strain) exhibits significantly lower replication efficiency in PK1 cells compared to Vero cells, and no cytopathic effects were observed in PK1 cells. In our preliminary attempts to perform SHAPE-MaP experiments using infected PK1 cells, the sequencing data showed less than 0.03% alignment to the PEDV genome, rendering subsequent analysis and downstream experiments unfeasible.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript by Luo et al. applied SHAPE-Map to analyze the secondary structure of the Porcine Epidemic Diarrhoea Virus (PEDV) RNA genome in infected cells. By combining SHAPE reactivity and Shannon entropy, the study indicated that the folding of the PEDV genomic RNA was nonuniform, with the 5' and 3' untranslated regions being more compactly structured, which revealed potentially antiviral targetable RNA regions. Interestingly, the study also suggested that compounds bound to well-folded RNA structures in vitro did not necessarily exhibit antiviral activity in cells, because the binding of these compounds did not necessarily alter the functions of the well-folded RNA regions. Later in the manuscript, the authors focus on guanine-rich regions, which may form G-quadruplexes and be potential targets for small interfering RNA (siRNA). The manuscript shows the binding effect of Braco-19 (a G-quadruplex-binding ligand) to a predicted G4 region in vitro, along with the inhibition of PEDV proliferation in cells. This suggests that targeting high SHAPE-high Shannon G4 regions could be a promising approach against RNA viruses. Lastly, the manuscript identifies 73 singlestranded regions with high SHAPE and low Shannon entropy, which demonstrated high success in antiviral siRNA targeting.
Strengths:
The paper presents valuable data for the community. Additionally, the experimental design and data analysis are well documented.
Weakness:
The manuscript presents the effect of Braco-19 on PQS1, a single G4 region with high SHAPE and high Shannon entropy, to suggest that "the compound can selectively target the PQS1 of the high SHAPE-high Shannon region in cells" (lines 625-626). While the effect of Braco-19 on PQS1 is supported by strong evidence in the manuscript, the conclusion regarding the G4 region with high SHAPE and high Shannon entropy is based on a single target, PQS1.
We thank the reviewer for their positive assessment of our methodology and dataset. We propose that dynamic RNA structures in high SHAPE-high Shannon regions, when stabilized by small molecules, can serve as viable targets for antiviral therapy. Gquadruplexes represent a characteristic type of such dynamic structures that compete with local stem-loop formations in the genome. While we identified seven highly conserved PQSs in the PEDV genome, only PQS1 was located within a high SHAPEhigh Shannon region. To further validate this concept, we have supplemented the revised manuscript with Thioflavin T (ThT) fluorescence turn-on assays (Figures 3D, 3E, and Figure 3 – figure supplement 6), which provide additional evidence for the differential G4-forming capabilities of PQSs across regions with distinct structural features.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
Major Comments:
(1) It could be valuable for the authors to spend some more effort comparing their approach to siRNA target discovery and design to current methods for siRNA design. It would be good to highlight which components are novel, and which might offer superior performance with respect to other existing methods.
We thank the reviewer for highlighting this important point. In response, we have rewritten the relevant section in the discussion:
“Our approach uniquely integrates in situ RNA structural data (SHAPE reactivity and Shannon entropy) to prioritize siRNA targets within stable single-stranded regions (high SHAPE reactivity, low Shannon entropy), which are experimentally validated as accessible in infected cells. This represents a significant departure from traditional siRNA design methods that rely primarily on sequence conservation, thermodynamic rules (e.g., Tuschl rules), or in vitro structural predictions (Ali Zaidi et al., 2023; Qureshi et al., 2018; Tang and Khvorova, 2024),which may not accurately reflect intracellular RNA accessibility. Bowden-Reid et al. designed 39 antiviral siRNAs against various SARS-CoV-2 variants based on sequence conservation, ultimately identifying 8 highly effective sequences (Bowden-Reid et al., 2023). Notably, five of these effective sequences targeted regions that were located in high SHAPE-high Shannon regions according to SARS-CoV-2 SHAPE datasets (Supplementary Table 8) (Manfredonia et al., 2020). This independent finding aligns perfectly with our conclusions and demonstrates that SHAPE-based siRNA design outperforms sequence/structureagnostic approaches, at least in terms of significantly improving antiviral siRNA screening efficiency. Given the growing availability of SHAPE datasets for numerous viruses, we are confident that our methodology will facilitate more precise design of antiviral siRNAs.”
(2) The section targeting their discovered G4 structure with Braco-19 is interesting, particularly showing effects on viral proliferation; however, it's not clear to me how this compound could be used therapeutically against PEDV, as it is a non-selective binder of G4 structures. Their results are good support for the presence and functionality of a G4 structure in PEDV, but I don't see any strategy outlined in the manuscript on how this could be specifically targeted with Braco-19.
While Braco-19 is indeed a broad-spectrum G4 ligand, our data demonstrate that not all PQSs in the viral genome can form G4 structures under physiological conditions. Our results specifically show that Braco-19 exerts its anti-PEDV activity by targeting PQS1, which is located in a high SHAPE-high Shannon entropy region. This target specificity was further confirmed by the complete resistance of the PQS1mut strain (lacking G4-forming ability) to Braco-19 treatment in our in vitro assays.
Additionally, previous studies have reported that during rapid viral replication, viral RNA accumulates to levels that significantly exceed host RNA concentrations. This "concentration advantage" suggests that G4 ligands like Braco-19 would preferentially bind viral G4 structures over host targets, thereby enhancing their antiviral specificity in vivo. In summary, our data provide proof-of-concept that viral genomic regions with high G4-forming potential - particularly those in high SHAPE-high Shannon entropy regions - represent promising targets for antiviral therapy.
(3) The section where they proposed 3D RNA structures based on sequence similarity feels "tacked on" and I don't see how it adds to the overall story. The authors identify a short RNA hairpin in the PEDV genome with some sequence similarity to the CPEB3 nuclease P4 hairpin. However, they don't provide any evidence that this motif functions in a similar way or that it's important for the virus's life cycle. They also don't explain how this similarity could be exploited for antiviral drug development. It's not clear whether targeting this motif would have any effect on the virus. It's interesting that these two sequences share nucleotides, but it's unlikely that they share any homology...perhaps they convergently evolved (or were captured), but the similarity could also be coincidental.
We appreciate the reviewer's insightful observation regarding this section. While our intention was to demonstrate that flexible conformations in high SHAPE-high Shannon regions could potentially be targeted, we acknowledge that extensive discussion of these motifs' functions would exceed the scope of this study, resulting in some disconnection from the main narrative. In response to this valuable feedback, we have consequentially removed it from the manuscript.
(4) The authors should consider the optimality of the synonymous mutation (G3109A) that they introduced, as G3109A could swap a rare codon for a more optimal one. Even though the protein sequence is unaffected, the translation rate (and ability to proliferate) could be very different due to altered codon optimality. Additionally, to show the inactivity of the PQS3 mutant, the Braco-19 treatment studies performed on the PQS1 mutants could be repeated with PQS3 - using this as a control for these experiments.
We appreciate the reviewer's insightful comment regarding codon optimization. In the PEDV genome, the PQS1 mutation site encodes lysine (AAG). Since lysine has only two codons (AAG and AAA), the G3109A synonymous mutation was our only viable option. Published literature (Ding et al. 2024) confirms that neither AAG nor AAA are classified as either preferred or rare codons in mammalian cells. Therefore, this substitution should have minimal direct impact on translation efficiency. Compared to nonsynonymous mutations that would alter amino acid sequences, we believe this synonymous mutation represents the optimal approach for maintaining native protein function while introducing the desired structural modification.
REFERENCES:
Ding W, Yu W, Chen Y, et al. Rare codon recoding for efficient noncanonical amino acid incorporation in mammalian cells. Science. 2024;384(6700):1134-1142.
In the revised version, we have added control experiments showing the inhibitory activity of Braco-19 against the PQS3 mutant strain (Figure 4—figure supplement 3C) and discussed it in the results section.
“Furthermore, as a control, we observed nearly identical inhibitory activity of Braco19 against both the PQS3 mutant strain (AJ1102-PQS3mut) and wild-type virus (Figure 4—figure supplement 3C), demonstrating the specificity of Braco-19's action on PQS1.”
Minor Comments:
(5) The authors' description of the Shannon Entropy could be improved. The current description makes it seem like the Shannon Entropy only provides information on base pairing, however, the Shannon entropy quantifies the uncertainty of structural states at each position and is calculated based on the probabilities of the different states (paired or unpaired) that a nucleotide can adopt.
We have revised the description of Shannon entropy in the manuscript:
"The pairing probability of each nucleotide derived from SHAPE reactivities was subsequently used to calculate Shannon entropy. Regions with high Shannon entropy may adopt alternative conformations, while those with low Shannon entropy correspond to either well-defined RNA structures or persistently single-stranded regions (MATHEWS, 2004; Siegfried et al., 2014)."
(6) The overall writing of the manuscript is very good, but there are some minor grammatical issues throughout, e.g., here are some of the ones that I caught:
a) Lines 71-3: "various types of RNA structures such as hairpin structure, RNA singlestrand, RNA pseudoknot and RNA G-quadruplex (G4)" - the examples should be plural and, rather than "hairpins" (or in addition), perhaps add "helixes" to be more generically correct(?).
We have revised the relevant description:
"various types of RNA structures such as stem-loop structures (with double-helical stems), RNA single-strand, RNA pseudoknot and RNA G-quadruplex (G4)"
b) Lines 74-5: "Of these, RNA G4 has shown considerable promise because of the high stability and modulation by small molecules" should be "Of these, RNA G4 has shown considerable promise because of its high stability and ability for modulation by small molecules."
We have revised the sentence:
“Of these, RNA G4 has shown considerable promise because of its high stability and ability for modulation by small molecules.”
c) Line 76: "have" should be "has".
We have revised the sentence.
d) Lines 104-5 (and elsewhere): "frameshift stimulation element (FSE)" should be "frameshift stimulatory element (FSE)".
We have revised the sentence.
e) Lines 428-9: following the Manfredonia's methods" should be "following Manfredonia's method" or "following the Manfredonia method".
We have made the appropriate edit.
These edits ensure grammatical accuracy and consistency with standard scientific terminology. We appreciate the reviewer's attention to detail, which has significantly improved the clarity of our manuscript.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) There are some important references missing, on shape-seq from Julius Lucks.
We have added citations to the foundational work by Lucks et al. (2011, PNAS) that pioneered in vitro RNA structure probing using SHAPE-seq.
(2) Describe the acronym "SHAPE",
We have now included the full name of SHAPE:“Selective 2’-Hydroxyl Acylation and Primer Extension”.
(3) Line 81: 2"-hydroxyl-selective - the prime is incorrect.
We thank the reviewer for catching this technical error. We have corrected "2"hydroxyl" to "2'-hydroxyl".
(4) Explaining a bit better how shape reagent works would be beneficial (one sentence should suffice).
We have revised the Introduction section:
“SHAPE reagents like NAI selectively modify flexible, unpaired 2′-OH groups in RNA, and these modifications are detected as mutations during reverse transcription, enabling precise mapping of RNA secondary structures through sequencing.”
(5) Line 128: cite the paper that introduced NAI.
We have now properly cited the original publication introducing NAI(Spitale et al., 2012).
(6) Line 243: Can you describe what the compound is?
The compound is Braco-19. This has now been included in the methods section.
(7) Line 272: describe what 3Dpol is and the source of it.
We have supplemented the relevant information as follows:
"3Dpol (recombinant RNA-dependent RNA polymerase; Abcam, ab277617, 0.02 mg/reaction)"
(8) Figure 1 legend: For both C and D, the explanation of the G4 structure and the RISC complex should be added, otherwise, it becomes unclear why they are there.
We have revised the captions for Figure 1 as follows:
"(A) Well-folded regions (low SHAPE reactivity and low Shannon entropy; 26.40% of genome). These regions represent stably folded RNA structures with minimal conformational flexibility, likely serving as structural scaffolds or functional elements in viral replication. (B) Dynamic structured regions (low SHAPE reactivity and high Shannon entropy; 11.70% of genome). These conformationally plastic domains likely mediate regulatory switches between alternative secondary structures during infection. (C) Dynamic unpaired regions (high SHAPE reactivity and high Shannon entropy; 26.90% of genome). These regions are prone to form non-canonical nucleic acid structures (e.g., G-quadruplexes), which can be stabilized by small-molecule ligands to inhibit viral replication. (D) Persistent unpaired regions (high SHAPE reactivity and low Shannon entropy; 9.67% of genome). These regions are more accessible for siRNA binding, facilitating recruitment of Argonaute proteins and Dicer to form the RNAinduced silencing complex (RISC) for targeted cleavage."
(9) Figure S2 panel A should be in Figure 1. This is a nice picture showing the backbone of the research.
In the revised manuscript, we have reorganized Figure 1 and Figure S2 by incorporating the SHAPE-MaP workflow diagram (previously Figure S2A) into Figure 1 as panel (A):
(10) Please add the citation to Braco-19.
We have now added the appropriate citation for Braco-19 (Gowan et al., 2002) in the revised manuscript.
(11) Figure 5 legend: could you add in parenthesis the what ds means (and call Figure S28).
We appreciate the reviewer's attention to detail. In the revised manuscript, we have clarified the abbreviations in the Figure 5 legend: ss (single-stranded targeting siRNAs); ds (dual-stranded targeting siRNAs).
(12) Line 107: I would argue that the "stabilization of a G4" inhibited viral proliferation. And that supports the point of the paper, that a small molecule that stabilizes the G4 can be used to reduce viral replication. I suggest emphasizing this thorough the paper.
We fully concur with the reviewer's insightful perspective. In the revised manuscript, we have comprehensively strengthened the point of 'G4 stabilization' as an antiviral mechanism through the following enhancements:
(1) In the Results section: We present Thioflavin T (ThT) fluorescence assays demonstrating the G4-forming capability of PQSs in the full-length PEDV genomic RNA context:
“These findings indicate that although most PQSs can form G4 structures in vitro, PQS1—located in the high SHAPE-high Shannon entropy region—demonstrates the most robust G4-forming capability when competing with local secondary structures in the genomic context.”
(2) In the Results section: The inclusion of Braco-19 inhibition assays using PQS3 mutant virus as control provides robust evidence that Braco-19 exerts its antiviral effects specifically through PQS1 stabilization:
“Furthermore, as a control, we observed nearly identical inhibitory activity of Braco-19 against both the PQS3 mutant strain (AJ1102-PQS3mut) and wild-type virus, demonstrating the specificity of Braco-19's action on PQS1.”
(3) In the Discussion section: We have rewritten the mechanistic interpretation to emphasize:
"Crucially, Braco-19 showed no inhibitory activity against the PQS1-mutant strain while maintaining potent activity against the PQS3-mutant strain (Figure 4E, Figure 4—figure supplement 3C). This suggests that the compound can selectively target the PQS1 of the high SHAPE-high Shannon region in cells."
(13) For PQS1, it's suggested that it is indeed a competing and transient conformation that forms the G4. I wonder if using an extended PQS1 (perhaps what is shown in Figure 3E) and using fluorescence, and/or K+ vs Li+, and/or in-vitro SHAPE could tell us more about this dynamic structure. Thioflavin T or any other fluorescent molecule that binds to G4s could be easily used to show how the formation of G4 may happen or not. In addition, how Braco-19 could really lock the dynamic structure in-vitro as well. I think the field would benefit from a deeper investigation of it.
To address the dynamic competition between G4 and alternative RNA conformations, we performed Thioflavin T (ThT) fluorescence turn-on assay (now in Figure 3D-E and Figure 3—figure supplement 6) under physiological K<sup>+</sup> conditions (100 mM), with PRRSV-G4 RNA as a positive control. This reads as:
“To validate whether SHAPE analysis could reflect the competitive conformational folding of PQSs in the PEDV genome, we performed in vitro transcription to obtain local intact structures containing PQSs within dynamic single-stranded regions and stable double-stranded regions (Table S6). Thioflavin T (ThT) fluorescence turn-on assays were conducted under physiological K<sup>+</sup> conditions (100 mM), with the G4 sequence of porcine reproductive and respiratory syndrome virus (PRRSV) serving as a positive control (Control-G4)(Fang et al., 2023). The results demonstrated that for short PQSs sequences containing only G4-forming motifs (Table S7), PQS1, PQS3, PQS4, and PQS6 all induced significant ThT fluorescence enhancement (Figure 3D-E, Figure 3—figure supplement 6), confirming their ability to form G4 structures. However, in long RNA fragments encompassing PQSs and their flanking sequences, only PQS1 and PQS4 exhibited pronounced ThT fluorescence responses (Figure 3DE), whereas PQS2, PQS3, and PQS6 showed negligible signals (Figure 3E, Figure 3— figure supplement 6). Notably, the PQS1-long chain displayed the strongest fluorescence signal, while its mutant counterpart (PQS1mut-long chain) exhibited the lowest background fluorescence (Figure 3D). These findings indicate that although most PQSs can form G4 structures in vitro, PQS1—located in the high SHAPE-high Shannon entropy region—demonstrates the most robust G4-forming capability when competing with local secondary structures in the genomic context. Therefore, PQS1 was selected for further structural and functional validation.”
(14) Figure S29 is nice and informative. Consider moving it to the main text.
We appreciate the reviewer's positive assessment of Figure S29. Now we have renamed this figure as "Figure 5—Supplement 2".
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although Django has special conveniences for building “CMS-y” apps, that doesn’t mean it’s not just as appropriate for building “non-CMS-y” apps
I now wonder if I can build a powerful CRM on Django.
State law currently allows teachers to have a moment of silence in the classroom, so this bill would change one word in the law — from may to shall, creating a new mandate. The bill leaves the implementation up to the teacher.
w h y???
First,
In the following section of the speech, Trump dives into his series of executive orders and controversial as well as polarized policy positions, which he will be stating effectively. Though this context is not present here these policies are argued by many political analysts as directly enabling the marginalization of selected groups consisting of demographics, which have been deemed as "un-American". This controversial and divisive listing of policy starkly contrasts from the task, presented by an Inaugural Address. While certain policy positions and general political goals or ambitions are usually emphasized by past presidents in their inaugural speeches, such occurrences do not tend to wander into territories concerning directly polarizing policy.
In his dissertation "Make the Inaugural Great Again... Daniel Dickerson presents an analysis on Trump's rhetoric as a diverges from presidential president to illicit fantasy – themes and ideological narratives of nationalism and us versus them. He presents President Obama's inauguration speech as an example which adheres to the format that Trump's subverts.
"In President Obama’s inaugural addresses, many historical themes as used by past presidents were present. In fact, Obama chose to take a route derived in humility and theology (Frank, 2011). His inaugural responded to a recurring rhetorical situation of the expectations of presidential inaugurals (Frank, 2011). The president should express to the members of the audience that they have a common identity: their humanity (Ericson,1997). Further, Ericson (1997) explained, the people who voted for the president want to know he is working for them, and Obama met this particular exigence in his inaugural address. Understanding the history of the presidential inaugural is essential to grasp the importance of this study within rhetorical studies, and the communication discipline."
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This is a very well-written paper presenting interesting findings related to the recovery following the end-Permian event in continental settings, from N China. The finding is timely as the topic is actively discussed in the scientific community. The data provides additional insights into the faunal, and partly, floral global recovery following the EPE, adding to the global picture.
Strengths:
The conclusions are supported by an impressive amount of sedimentological and paleontological data (mainly trace fossils) and illustrations.
We thank Reviewer #1 for the positive assessments.
Weaknesses:
The occurrence of MISS (Microbially Induced Sedimentary Structures) could be discussed more in detail as these provide interesting information directly linked to the delayed recovery of the biota.
We appreciate the reviewer for highlighting this important point. In the Phanerozoic, increase of microbial abundances generally occurred with rapid warming when documented and those hyperthermal events had causal links to mass extinction in continental realms, including the Permian–Triassic mass extinction (Mays et al., 2021). Accumulations of cyanobacteria and other microbes was favored by low dissolved oxygen concentrations (Pacton et al., 2011) and the produced secondary metabolites may also be toxic to animals (Paerl and Otten, 2013). Therefore, repeated algal and bacterial blooms in the post-extinction interval could disrupt ecological stability and inhibit the restoration of ecosystems.
So, the sentence from Lines 127–130 “The depauperate ichnofauna of the late Smithian were monospecific, representing initial recolonization of empty niches by opportunists, but the coeval thrived microbial mats indicated harsh environments, which might have inhibited the recovery of freshwater ecosystems (Tu et al., 2016; Chu et al., 2017; Mays et al., 2021).” is rephased by:
“The depauperate ichnofauna of the late Smithian were monospecific, representing initial recolonization of empty niches by opportunists. However, recurrent occurrences of microbial induced sedimentary structures (MISS) in the Liujiagou Formation imply that depressed ecosystems persisted until the Smithian (Tu et al., 2016; Chu et al., 2017). Studies revealed that the increase in microbial abundances were generally associated with hyperthermals, which would be the principal causes for mass extinction on land (Mays et al., 2021). Accumulations of microbes were favored by low dissolved oxygen concentration condition and their secondary metabolites could also be toxic to animals (Pacton et al., 2011; Paerl and Otten, 2013). Therefore, repeated thriving of MISS during the Dienerian–Smithian disrupted ecological stability in freshwater ecosystem and delayed biotic recovery in North China.”
References:
Mays, C., et al. 2021. Lethal microbial blooms delayed freshwater ecosystem recovery following the end-Permian extinction. Nat. Commun. 12, 5511. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-021-25711-3
Pacton, M., et al. 2011. Amorphous organic matter—Experimental data on formation and the role of microbes. Rev. Palaeobot. Palynol. 166, 253–267. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.revpalbo.2011.05.011
Paerl, H. W. & Otten, T. G. 2013. Harmful cyanobacterial blooms: causes, consequences, and controls. Microb. Ecol. 65, 995–1010. https://doi.org/10.1007/s00248-012-0159-y
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
A rapid recovery of the ecosystems during the late Early Triassic, in the aftermath of the end-Permian mass extinction, is discussed based on different types of fossils.
Strengths:
The combined study of invertebrate trace fossils, tetrapod bones, and plant remains together with their stratigraphic distribution in different sections provides a convincing case to support a rapid recovery as the authors hypothesize.
We thank Reviewer #2 for the positive comments on our work.
Weaknesses:
The study is based on three regions with Triassic successions from the North China block. While a first-hand study of other localities of similar age would be ideal, this is of course a difficult task. Instead, the authors provide comparisons with other worldwide regions to build their case and support the initial hypothesis.
Globally, ichnoassemblages reported from the Lower Triassic are relatively impoverished (Guo et al., 2019). We have compiled ichnoassemblages from several continental basins before, including South Africa, Antarctica, North America, European Basin and North China (Fig. 14 in Guo et al., 2019). However, most of the Early Triassic strata lack bioturbation (e.g., Guo et al., 2019, Buatois et al., 2021). On the contrary, the coeval deposits in North China contain diverse trace fossils, making it an ideal place for ichnological investigations. Hence, this study mainly focuses on the ichnological records in North China, but we hope more work will be done in other basins.
References:
Guo, W.W, et al. 2019. Secular variations of ichnofossils from the terrestrial Late Permian–Middle Triassic succession at the Shichuanhe section in Shaanxi Province, North China. Glob. Planet. Change 181, 102978. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gloplacha.2019.102978
Buatois, L.A., et al. 2021. Impact of Permian mass extinctions on continental invertebrate infauna. Terra Nova 33, 455–464. https://doi.org/10.1111/ter.12530
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript by Guo and colleagues features the documentation and interpretation of three successions of continental to marginal marine deposits spanning the P/T transition and their respective ichnofaunas. Based on these new data inferences concerning end-Permian mass extinction and Triassic recovery in the tropical realm are discussed.
Strengths:
The manuscript is well-written and organized and includes a large amount of new lithological and ichnological data that illuminate ecosystem evolution in a time of large-scale transition. The lithological documentations, facies interpretations, and ichnotaxonomic assignments look okay (with a few exceptions).
We thank Reviewer #3 for the positive assessments.
Weaknesses:
Some interpretations in Table 1 could be questioned: For facies association FA2 the interpretation as „terrestrial facies with periodical flooding" should be put into the right column and, given the fossil content, other interpretations, such as "marine facies" or "lagoonal environment" with some plant debris and (terrestrial) animal remains washed in, could also be possible. For FA3 the statement "bioturbation is absent" is in conflict with the next statement "strata are moderately reworked". For FA5 the observation of a "monospecific ichnoassemblage" contradicts the listing of several ichnotaxa.
We thank the reviewer for this feedback. The “FA2: terrestrial facies with periodical flooding” has been moved to the right column. As for the interpretation of depositional environment of FA2, this interval was basically terrestrial accordingly to the well-developed paleosols (Yu et al., 2022). Meanwhile, regional geological surveys have shown a faunal transition in this interval among a series of successions, from typical marine fauna containing Lingula, Eumorphotis, etc. in the southwest to a marine bivalve-terrestrial conchostracan mixed fauna in the northeast (Yin and Lin, 1979; Chu et al., 2019). Therefore, occurrence of episodic transgressions is suggested.
The FA3: Costal mudplain facies distributed to both the upper Sunjiagou Formation and Lower Heshang Formation (Fig S1), where the former lack bioturbation and the latter were moderately disturbed. We have stated this clearly in the table S1.
Ichnofauna in FA5 are dominated by Skolithos, Lockeia and Gordia, with only one poorly preserved specimen of Palaeophycus, which are distributed at the Shichuanhe and Liulin sections. However, there ichnotaxa were distributed separately, characterized by low diversity (single ichnogenus) and high density. We have deleted the “monospecific ichnoassemblage” for clarity.
References:
Chu, D., et al. 2019, Mixed continental-marine biotas following the Permian-Triassic mass extinction in South and North China: Palaeogeography, Palaeoclimatology, Palaeoecology, v. 519, p. 95–107, doi:10.1016/j.palaeo.2017.10.028.
Yu, Y., et al. 2021, Latest Permian–Early Triassic paleoclimatic reconstruction by sedimentary and isotopic analyses of paleosols from the Shichuanhe section in central North China Basin: Palaeogeography, Palaeoclimatology, Palaeoecology, v. 585, p. 110726, doi:10.1016/j.palaeo.2021.110726.
Yin, H.F., Lin, H.M., 1979. Marine Triassic faunas and the geologic time from Shihchienfeng Group in the northern Weihe River Basin, Shaanxi Province. Acta Stratigr. Sin. 3, 233–241 (in Chinese).
Concerning the structure of the manuscript, certain hypotheses related to the end-Permian mass extinction and the process of the P/T extinction and recovery, namely the existence of a long-persisting "tropic dead zone" are introduced as a foregone conclusion to which the new data seemingly shall be fit as corroborating evidence. Some of the data - e.g. the presence of a supposedly Smithian-age ichnofauna are interpreted as a fast recovery shortening the duration of the "tropic dead zone" episode - but these interpretations could also be interpreted as contradicting the idea of a "dead zone" sensu stricto in favour of a "normal" post-extinction environment with low diversity and occurrence of typical disaster taxa. Due to their large error bars the early Triassic radiometric ages did not put much of a constraint on the age determination of the earliest post-extinction ichnofaunas discussed here.
In the first ~5 Myr of the Triassic, there is evidence for a broad equatorial belt (30°N-40°S) where marine and terrestrial animals were nearly absent (namely “equatorial tetrapod gap”; Sun et al., 2012). However, the nature, duration and range of the “equatorial tetrapod gap” remain debated. Allen et al. (2020) show poleward migrations of terrestrial tetrapods during the Late Permian to Middle Triassic, with marine reptile diversity peak still restricted to northern low latitudes. Romano et al. (2020) argued that the Early Triassic equatorial terrestrial tetrapod gap would be narrower and restricted the “death belt” between 15° N and about 31° S, while Liu et al. (2022) consider that the exact boundaries of this gap likely varied with climate change (hot phases). Moreover, duration of the gap is also questioned, it’s long-lasting (Late Permian to Middle Triassic), during Induan (Bernardi et al., 2018), or from Induan to the early Spathian (Liu et al., 2022). Regardless of these discrepancies, all the related studies show the existence of the “low latitudinal tetrapod gap”, which is mentioned as background information. On this basis, this study aims to reveal when and how terrestrial ecosystems recovered from the “tropic dead zone” from the ecological point of view, rather than tetrapods only.
The fast recovered terrestrial ecosystems are represented by diverse traces, and concurrent tetrapods and plants found in the Heshanggou Formation. We acknowledge that the chronostratigraphy of the Lower Triassic in North China (and most of continental basins globally) are not controlled by precise ages, this formation, however, could be constrained to Spathian (or even straddle to earliest Middle Triassic), based on integrated magnetostratigraphic correlation, fossil records and geochemical data (Liu, 2018; Guo et al., 2022). The Smithian-age ichnofaunas here are not interpreted as a rapidly recovering biota, but early occurring opportunist-dominated communities that explore the empty ecospace under inhospitable environments. Our study also constrains roughly the “tropical dead zone” from Induan to late Smithian in North China (Fig. 4).
References:
Allen, B.J., et al. 2020. The latitudinal diversity gradient of tetrapods across the Permo-Triassic mass extinction and recovery interval. Proc Biol Sci 287, 20201125. https://doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2020.1125
Bernardi, M., et al. 2018. Tetrapod distribution and temperature rise during the Permian-Triassic mass extinction. Proc Biol Sci 285, 20172331. https://doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2017.2331
Guo, W., et al. 2022. Late Permian–Middle Triassic magnetostratigraphy in North China and its implications for terrestrial-marine correlations. Earth Planet. Sci. Lett. 585, 117519. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.epsl.2022.117519
Liu, J. 2018. New progress on the correlation of Chinese terrestrial Permo-Triassic strata. Vertebrata Palasiatica, 56, 327-342. 10.19615/j.cnki.1000-3118.180709
Liu, J., et al. 2021. Permo-Triassic tetrapods and their climate implications. Glob. Planet. Change 103618. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gloplacha.2021.103618
Romano, M., et al. 2020. Early Triassic terrestrial tetrapod fauna: a review. Earth-Sci. Rev. 210, 103331. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.earscirev.2020.103331
Sun, Y., er al. 2012. Lethally hot temperatures during the early triassic greenhouse. Science 338, 366–70. https://doi.org/10.1126/science.1224126
Considering the somewhat equivocal evidence and controversial ideas about the P/T transition, the introduction could be improved by describing how the idea of a "tropic dead zone" arose against the background of earlier ideas, alternative views, and conflicting data. In the discussion section, alternative interpretations of the extensive data presented here - e.g. proximal-distal shifts in lithofacies with respect to the sediment source, sea level changes, preservation bias, the local occurrence of hostile environments instead of a regional scale, etc. should be discussed, also to avoid the impression that the author's conclusion was driven by confirmation bias.
As mentioned above, it’s still controversial about the nature, duration and range of the “equatorial tetrapod gap”, which primarily derived from the database (body fossils only vs. both skeletal and footprint data) and analytical methods. However, detailed discussions about these differences are beyond the scope of our study. This paper provides new evidence for the "tropical dead zone" from the ecological perspective (invertebrate ichnology, paleobotany and newly found tetrapods). Our results show that the "tropical dead zone" in North China terminated in the Smithian, followed by the reappearance of many animals in the Spathian, shedding light on the more rapidly recovering terrestrial ecosystems than previously thought.
We have improved the Introduction section by providing a summary of the “equatorial tetrapod gap”. Lines 33-35: “A tropical “tetrapod gap”, spanning between 15°N and ~31°S, prevailed through the Early Triassic, or at least during particular intervals of intense global warming (Bernardi et al., 2018; Allen et al., 2020; Romano et al., 2020; Liu et al., 2022).” is revised to:
“A tropical “tetrapod gap”, spanning between 15°N and ~31°S, prevailed in the Early Triassic, or at particular interval of intense global warming, even though the nature, duration and range remain debated (Bernardi et al., 2018; Allen et al., 2020; Romano et al., 2020; Liu et al., 2022).”
In the Discussion section, Lines 180-181: “Although the specimens are not yet fully prepared for taxonomic description, they clearly show the existence of tetrapod at this level” is revised to:
“Although the specimens are not yet fully prepared for taxonomic description, they clearly show the existence of tetrapods at this level, narrowing the “tetrapod gap” to the Spathian.”
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“Our results also shed light on the timing of the tropical dead zone. The late Smithian-age ichnofauna, although impoverished, represents early opportunist-dominated communities that explored empty ecospace under inhospitable environments, which constrains the equatorial death belt to the late Smithian in North China.”
Contrary to the authors' claim, Figures S7 and S8 suggest that burrow size does not vary much within the studied sections. Size decreases and increases in the Shichuanhe and Liulin sections do not contemporaneously, are usually within the error-bar range, and might be driven by ichnotaxa composition, i.e. the presence or absence of larger ichnotaxa, rather than by size changes in the same ichnotaxon (and producer group). Here the measurement data would be needed as well to check the basis of the authors' interpretations.
We thank the reviewer for highlighting this important point. We have checked the accuracy of our raw data. Both the average size of all ichnogenera and single ichnogenera do not change obviously, but increase slightly upwards in the Spathian (Figures S7c and S8). This tendency is congruent with other coeval studies in North China (e.g., Shu et al., 2018; Xing et al., 2020). The presence of larger ichnotaxa will indeed improve the average sizes of fossil-bearing horizons, however, burrows of single ichnogenera in the Spathian generally show wider size distributions than in the Smithian, which might be associated with enriched producer groups or different growth stages of the same biota.
The asynchronous burrow size changes in the Shichuanhe and Liulin sections could be attributed to sedimentary facies. Late Permian deposits at Shichuanhe are finer than those at Linlin, which is located at the basin margin. As a result, tiny traces, like Helminthoidichnites, which were widely distributed at Shichuanhe, are absent at Linlin section. Those traces significantly reduce the average sizes in this interval, leading to inconsistent size variation patterns.
References:
Shu, W., et al. 2018. Limuloid trackways from Permian-Triassic continental successions of North China. Palaeogeogr. Palaeoclimatol. Palaeoecol. 508, 71–90. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.palaeo.2018.07.022
Xing, Z.F., et al. 2020. Trace fossils from the Lower Triassic of North China—a potential signature of the gradual recovery of a terrestrial ecosystem. Palaeoworld 30, 95–105. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.palwor.2020.06.002
Some arthropod tracks assigned here to Kouphichnium might not represent limulid traces but other (non-marine) arthropod taxa in accordance with their occurrence in terrestrial facies/non-marine units of the succession. More generally, the ichnotaxonomy of arthropod trackways is not yet well reserved - beyond Kouphichnium and Diplichnites various similar-looking types may occur that can have a variety of distinct insect, crustacean, millipede, etc. producers (including larval stages).
Well, individual trace-makers can produce different traces, and different organisms can make morphologically similar traces. In consideration of this, it’s hard to give a one-on-one relationship between trace fossils and their producers in most cases, especially for the invertebrates. So, Kouphichnium could be made by arthropods other than limuloidss.
However, horseshoe crabs, originating in the early Ordovician, invaded freshwater environments twice in the Paleozoic and once in the Mesozoic (Lamsdell, 2016), and their body fossils have been found from the Early Triassic of Germany (e.g., Hauschke and Wilde, 2008) and North China (which occur with their traces; unpublished data). Accordingly, we tentatively speculate Kouphichnium found in this interval could be primarily produced by limuloids.
References:
Hauschke, N., Wilde, V. 2008. Limuliden aus dem Oberen Buntsandstein von Süddeutschland. Hallesches Jahrb. Für Geowiss. 30, 21–26.
Lamsdell, J.C. 2016. Horseshoe crab phylogeny and independent colonizations of fresh water: ecological invasion as a driver for morphological innovation. Palaeontology 59, 181–194. https://doi.org/10.1111/pala.12220
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for The Authors):
(1) Line 112 - was identified during..; please change to ...was identified in successions of late Changsian-early Smithian age.
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(2) Line 116 - change prolong to prolonged.
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(3) Line 121 - change ichnofaunal to ichnofauna (check the entire sentence).
We checked the manuscript thoroughly and revised as suggested.
(4) Figure 1 caption - check sentence starting with - Base map...(delete 'of is')
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(6) Figure S9 - would it be possible to include this reconstruction in the main manuscript?
We have moved the artistic illustration to the main text as Figure 5.
(7) Add the illustrators name / or indicate if it is produced by AI.
We have added the sentence “The artistic illustration is credited to J. Sun” at the end.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for The Authors):
(1) Line 15 – change 252 million years ago to ca. 252 million years ago.
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(2) Line 18 – change low-latitude North China to low-latitude present-day North China.
Actually, the paleolatitude of North China during the Early Triassic is about 17-18°N according to paleomagnetic results (Huang et al., 2018; Guo et al., 2022,).
References:
Guo, W., et al. 2022. Late Permian–Middle Triassic magnetostratigraphy in North China and its implications for terrestrial-marine correlations. Earth Planet. Sci. Lett. 585, 117519. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.epsl.2022.117519
Huang, B., et al. 2018. Paleomagnetic constraints on the paleogeography of the east asian blocks during Late Paleozoic and Early Mesozoic times. Earth-Sci. Rev. 186, 8–36. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.earscirev.2018.02.004
(3) Line 25 - "possible" doesn't seem the appropriate term here for the structure of the sentence. Could it be "to make possible" that it meant? Or otherwise you could write "possibly". Please revise this.
Revised “possible” to “possibly”.
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(5) Line 43 – There are other, more appropriate articles that should (also) be cited here, especially because Mujal et al. (2017) doesn't deal with the Central European Basin (so you could even remove this reference). For sure this one should be cited:
Scholze, F., Wang, Z., Kirscher, U., Kraft, J., Schneider, J.W., Götz, A.E., Joachimski, M.M., Bachtadse, V., 2017. A multistratigraphic approach to pinpoint the Permian-Triassic boundary in continental deposits: the Zechstein–Lower Buntsandstein transition in Germany. Glob. Planet. Chang. 152, 129–151. http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.gloplacha.2017.03.004.
We have replaced Mujal’s paper with Scholze et al., (2017) in the main text.
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(7) Line 53 – Here Mujal et al. (2017) would be more appropriate, since it deals with a basin from the western peri-Tethys, also, this other article by Mujal et al. (2017) discussed the recovery in the western peri-Tethys based on tetrapod footprints:
Mujal, E., Fortuny, J., Bolet, A., Oms, O., López, J.Á., 2017. An archosauromorph dominated ichnoassemblage in fluvial settings from the late Early Triassic of the Catalan Pyrenees (NE Iberian Peninsula). PLoS One 12 (4), e0174693. http://dx.doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0174693.
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(10) Line 81 – These two paragraphs could be under a section named Geological setting or similar.
Yes, these two paragraphs are brief introductions of the geological background of North China, so we change the section name to “Geological Settings and Methods”.
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The sentence “Tiering, referring to the life position of an animal vertically in the sediment, is divided into surficial, semi-infaunal (0–0.5 cm), shallow (0.5–6 cm), intermediate (6–12 cm) and deep infaunal tiers (> 12 cm), adopted from Minter et al. (2017).” is changed to “…, based on Minter et al. (2017).”
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el embrión.
Septima a octava semana: Comienza diferenciación genital aunque aun no se distinguen, en la semana 12 ya se cierra la hendidura urogenital y forman o pene o vagina
Hay 46 cromosomas: en los machos, 22 pares de autosomas más un cromosoma X y un cromosoma Y; en las mujeres, 22 pares de autosomas y dos cromosomas X
Hombres: 22 pares más 1 par XY Mujeres: 22 pares mas 1 pa XX
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public Review):
Summary:
This manuscript reports experiments designed to dissect the function of N-cadherin during mammalian folliculogenesis, using the mouse as a model system. Prior studies have shown that this is the principal cadherin expressed by the follicular granulosa cells. Two main strategies are used - small-molecule inhibitors that target N-cadherin and a conditional knockout where the gene encoding N-cad is deleted in granulosa cells. The authors also take advantage of the ability to reproduce key events of folliculogenesis, such as oocyte meiotic maturation, in vitro. Four main conclusions are drawn from the studies: (i) cadherin-based cell contact is required to maintain cadherin (N-cad in the granulosa cells; E-cad in the oocyte) at the plasma membrane; (ii) N-cad is required for cumulus layer expansion; (iii) N-cad is required for meiotic maturation of the oocyte; (iv) N-cad is required for ovulation.
Strengths:
The experiments are logically conceived, clearly described and presented, and carefully interpreted. A key strength of the paper is that multiple approaches have been used (drugs, knockouts, immunofluorescence, PLA, in vitro and in vivo studies). Taken together, they clearly establish essential roles for N-cadherin during folliculogenesis.
It is intriguing that, when cadherin activity is impaired, the cadherins are lost from the plasma membrane. This suggests that, in a multicellular context, interactions with other cadherins, either in cis within the same cell or in trans with a neighboring cell, are required to maintain cadherins at the membrane. Hence, beyond their significance for understanding female reproductive biology, these experiments have broader implications for cell biology.
Weaknesses:
A few points could be considered or clarified by the authors:
The YAP experiments were confusing to the reviewer. CRS-066 increased YAP activity, as indicated by increased expression of target genes. Since CRS-066 prevents expansion, this result suggests that YAP antagonizes expansion. Therefore, blocking YAP should favor expansion. Yet, the YAP inhibitor impaired expansion. In the reviewer's eyes, these results seem to be contradictory.
The mechanism through which N-cadherin inhibitors block cumulus expansion isn’t fully elucidated but isn’t deemed to be through YAP alone. The transcriptional changes indicate crosstalk between N-cadherin, β-catenin and Hippo/YAP pathways, as well as impacting on the signalling between cumulus cells and the oocyte.
It is intriguing that the inhibitors were able to efficiently block oocyte maturation. Oocytes from which the cumulus granulosa cells have been removed (denuded) will mature in vitro in the absence of LH or EGF. Since the effect of the inhibitors is to break the contact between the cumulus cells and oocyte, one might have predicted that this would not impair the ability of the oocytes to mature. Perhaps the authors could comment on this.
Indeed, removal of cumulus cells permits oocyte meiotic maturation by reducing oocyte cAMP, leading to activation of meiosis promoting factor (MPF). A hypothesis would be that cyclic nucleotides and MPF arrest in the oocyte are maintained when N-cadherin contacts are blocked but this was not determined.
Regarding the experiments where the inhibitors were administered intra-peritoneally, the authors might comment on the rationale for choosing the doses that were used. An additional point to consider is that, since N-cadherin is expressed in a variety of tissues, an effect of interfering with N-cadherin at these non-ovarian sites could indirectly influence ovarian function.
Doses were chosen based on previous reported use of these inhibitors in vivo (Mrozik et al. 2020). Possible effects of the N-cadherin antagonists in other tissues was a carefully considered in this and the previous Mrozik et al study. While we saw no evidence of effects in gross morphological observations, or closer examination of vasculature or blood in these studies, this potential is not excluded.
Reviewer #2 (Public Review):
Summary:
The manuscript entitled "N-cadherin mechanosensing in ovarian follicles controls oocyte maturation and ovulation" aimed to investigate the role of N-cadherin in different ovarian physiological processes, including cumulus oocyte expansion, oocyte maturation, and ovulation. The authors performed several in vitro and in vivo mice experiments, using diverse techniques to reinforce their results.
First, they identified two compounds (N-cadherin antagonists) that block the adhesion of periovulatory COCs to fibronectin through screening a small molecule library, using the xCELLigenceTM system, performing proper and complementary controls. Second, the authors showed the presence of N-cadherin adherens junctions between granulosa cells and cumulus cells and at the interface of cumulus cell transzonal projections and the oocyte throughout folliculogenesis. And that these adherens complexes between cumulus cells and oocytes were disrupted when inhibited N-cadherin, as observed by nice representative confocal images. Then, the authors assessed COC expansion and oocyte meiotic maturation to determine whether the loss of oocyte membrane β-catenin and E-cadherin upon N-cadherin inhibitor treatment disrupts the bi-directional communication between cumulus cells and the oocyte. Indeed, N-cadherin antagonists disrupted both processes (cumulus expansion and oocyte meiotic). However, the expression of known mediators of COC expansion (E.g., Areg and Ptgs2) were either increased or unaffected. Nevertheless, RNA-Seq showed consistent effects on cell signaling mRNA genes by the antagonist CRS-066.
In vivo studies using mice were also achieved using stimulated protocols (together with one of the antagonists or vehicle) or granulosa-specific Cdh2 Knockouts to further analyze the role of N-cadherin. N-cadherin antagonist CRS-066 (but not LCRF-0006) significantly reduced mouse ovulation compared to controls. RNA-sequencing data analysis identified distinct gene expression profiles in CRS-066 treated compared to control ovaries. Ovulation in CdhFl/FL; Amhr2Cre mice after stimulation were also significantly reduced; multiple large unruptured follicles were observed in these granulosa-specific Cdh2 mutant ovaries, and the mRNA expression of Areg and Ptgs2 were reduced.
The authors conclude that their study identified N-cadherin as a mechanosensory regulator important in ovarian granulosa cell differentiation able to respond to hormone stimuli both in vivo and in vitro, demonstrating a critical role for N-cadherin in ovarian follicular development and ovulation. They highlighted the potential to inhibit ovulation by targeting this signaling mechanism.
Strengths:
This remarkable manuscript is very well designed, performed, and discussed. The authors analyzed different aspects, and their data supports their conclusions.
Weaknesses:
This study was performed using the mouse as a research model; further studies in larger animals and humans would be interesting and warranted.
Indeed, this would be interesting. Ongoing research into therapeutic applications of N-cadherin targeting is reviewed in Blaschuk OW. Front Cell Dev Biol. 2022 Mar 3;10:866200
Minor comments:
Some results are intriguing. While the AREG y PTGS2 mRNA increased within the COC in vitro by the N-cadherin antagonists, in vivo, the treatment induced a significant increase in both genes when analyzing the whole ovary. What are the authors' ideas that could explain these discrepancies in outcomes?
Comparing the responses in IVM COCs to in vivo whole ovaries carries multiple caveats, though as noted, the observations are consistent with altered mechanotransduction in each case. It is important to note the change in pre-ovulatory follicle gene expression in vivo, which likely affects the response of follicles to ovulatory stimulus.
The authors stated that the ovaries from mice treated in the same manner and collected either before hCG treatment (eCG 44 h) or 11 h after hCG showed equivalent numbers of follicles at each stage of development from primary to antral. However, in Panel l from Figure 5, there is a significant increase in the number of antral follicles in the CRS-066 group (hCG 11 h) compared to the vehicle. Could the author discuss it in the manuscript?
A small change in these follicle types was significant in hCG 11h treated mice and is consistent with the altered response to the ovulatory stimulus and reduced ovulation resulting in persistent antral follicles.
Recommendations For The Authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):
Is the mechanism by which the small molecules block N-cad's adhesive activity known? And is the stable residence of cadherins in the plasma membrane known to depend on their engagement with other cadherins either in cis or in trans?
Adhesion interactions between N-cadherin in Cis or Trans results in their clustering and enrichment at the membrane. Molecular docking models of the small molecule N-cadherin inhibitors are not available. However, these inhibitors were designed as peptidomimetics of the N-cadherin amino-terminus that is shown to interacts in Trans with N-cadherin on neighbouring cells (Blaschuk OW. Front Cell Dev Biol. 2022 Mar 3;10:866200).
Since the inhibitors are blocking cadherin activity, one might have expected the cumulus cell mass to disaggregate into individual cells. Yet, Figures 3a and 3c show that this does not happen. Could the authors speculate how the cells are being held together?
Author Response
The following is the authors’ response to the current reviews.
1) The main issue relates to Set2, and how STIM1 expression rescues Set2-dependent functions in Set2 KO flies. If Set2 is downstream of STIM1, how would STIM1 over-expression rescue a Set2-dependent effect?
STIM rescue is of Set2 knockdown (RNAi) and NOT Set2 Knockout flies. Over expression of STIM raises SOCE in primary cultures of Drosophila neurons (as demonstrated in previous publications from our group: Agrawal et al., 2010; Chakraborty et al, 2016; Deb et al., 2016). The higher SOCE drives greater expression of Set2 from the endogenous locus thus reducing the efficacy of Set2 RNAi. Hence the rescue by STIM of Set2 KD flies in Figure S2E. We have explained this in lines 227-234.
2) There is still no characterization of SOCE in fpDANs from flies expressing native Orai or the dominant negative OraiE180A mutant.
Measurement of SOCE is not technically feasible in ex-vivo preps due to the presence of extracellular calcium in the brain milieu. In the past we have measured SOCE from primary cultures of central dopaminergic neurons expressing either native Orai OR OraiE180A mutant (Pathak et al., 2015) where we found that all dopaminergic neurons expressing OraiE180A exhibit very low SOCE. This is the reason we have not measured SOCE in the fewer cells of the fpDAN subset marked by THD' GAL4. This point has been specifically mentioned and explained in the section on “limitations of the study” at the end of the manuscript.
3) The revised version does not include an analysis of the STIM:Orai stoichiometry, which has been demonstrated to be essential for SOCE.
To measure such stoichiometry we would need to perform direct measurements of STIM and Orai levels by protein extraction from the fpDANs of all appropriate genotypes. This is not feasible due to the small number of cells available from each brain.
I confirm that there are no changes to the text OR figures from the previous version of the manuscript.
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
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The manuscript by Mitra and coworkers analyses the functional role of Orai in the excitability of central dopaminergic neurons in Drosophila. The authors show that a dominant-negative mutant of Orai (OraiE180A) significantly alters the gene expression profile of flight-promoting dopaminergic neurons (fpDANs). Among them, OraiE180A attenuates the expression of Set2 and enhances that of E(z) shifting the level of epigenetic signatures that modulate gene expression. The present results also demonstrate that Set2 expression via Orai involves the transcription factor Trl. The Orai-Trl-Set1 pathway modulates the expression of VGCC, which, in turn, are involved in dopamine release. The topic investigated is interesting and timely and the study is carefully performed and technically sound; however, there are several major concerns that need to be addressed:
1) In Figure S2E, STIM is overexpressed in the absence of Set2 and this leads to rescue. It is presumed that STIM overexpression causes excess SOCE, yet this is rarely the case. Perhaps the bigger concern, however, is how excess SOCE might overcome the loss of SET2 if SET2 mediates SOCE-induced development of flight. These data are more consistent with something other than SET2 mediating this function.
Our statement that STIM overexpression overcomes deficits in SOCE is based on the following published work, which has been highlighted in the revised version of the manuscript (see Lines 226-233):
Studies of SOCE in wildtype cultured larval Drosophila neurons demonstrated that overexpression of STIM raised SOCE to the same extent as co-expression of STIM and Orai in the WT background (Chakraborty et al, 2016; Figure 1D).
Both Carbachol-induced IP3-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE (measured by Ca2+ add back after Thapsigargin-induced store depletion) were rescued in primary cultures of IP3R hypomorphic mutant (itprku) Drosophila neurons by overexpression of STIM (Agrawal et al., 2010; Figure 8A-G).
Deb et al., 2016 (Supplementary Figure 2h,i) reaffirmed that overexpression of STIM significantly improves SOCE after Thapsigargin-induced passive store-depletion in Drosophila neurons expressing IP3RRNAi.
Consistent with the cellular rescue of SOCE, defects in flight initiation and physiology observed in the heteroallelic IP3R hypomorphic background (itprku) could be rescued by overexpression of STIM (Agrawal et al., 2010; Figure 3A-E) as well as Orai (Venkiteswaran and Hasan, 2009; Figure 3).
In Figure S2E, we show that flight deficits arising from THD’> Set2RNAi are rescued upon overexpression of STIM (i.e. THD’>Set2RNAi; STIMOE). Here and in another recent publication (Mitra et al., 2021) we show that neurons expressing Set2RNAi exhibit reduced expression of the IP3R and reduced ER-Ca2+ release presumably leading to reduced SOCE. As mentioned above we have consistently found that STIM overexpression raises both IP3-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE in Drosophila neurons.
In this study, we propose that Ca2+ release through the IP3R followed by SOCE are part of a positive feedback loop (described in the revised manuscript- see Lines 302-307) driving expression of Set2 which in turn upregulates expression of mAChR and IP3R (Figure 3F) to regulate dopaminergic neuron function. Our observation that loss of Set2 (THD’>Set2RNAi) can be rescued by STIM overexpression is consistent with this model because:
Loss of Set2 (THD’>Set2RNAi) results in downregulation of several genes including mAChR and IP3R leading to decreased SOCE.
As evident from our previous studies increased STIM expression in the Set2RNAi background (THD’>Set2RNAi; STIMOE) is expected to enhance SOCE which we predict would rescue Set2 expression leading to rescue of other Set2 dependent downstream functions like flight (Figure 2D).
2) In Figure 3, data is provided linking SET2 expression and Cch-induced Ca2+ responses. The presentation of these data is confusing. In addition, the results may be a simple side effect of SET2-dependent expression of IP3R. Given that this article is about SOCE, why isn't SOCE shown here? More generally, there are no measurements of SOCE in this entire article. Measuring SOCE (not what is measured in response to Cch) could help eliminate some of this confusion.
This section has been re-written in the revised version for better clarity and we have explained how Set2-dependent IP3R expression is an important component of Orai-mediated Ca2+ entry in fpDANs (see Lines 302-307). Here, we propose that IP3-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE, through Orai, are together part of a positive feedback loop (see Lines 286-307) driving transcription of Set2 which in turn upregulates mAChR and IP3R expression (Figure 3F). We hypothesized that the observed loss of CCh-induced Ca2+ response in the Set2RNAi background (Figure 3B-D; THD’>Set2RNAi) results from decreased itpr and mAChR expression and verified this in Figure 3E. This is further validated by the rescue of CCh-induced Ca2+ response and itpr/mAChR expression in the OraiE180A background upon Set2 overexpression (Figure 3B-E; THD’>OraiE180A; Set2OE). We were constrained to measure CCh-induced Ca2+ responses in OraiE180A expressing neurons for the following reasons (highlighted in the revised version of the manuscript- (See Lines 307-313; ‘Limitations of the study’-Lines 719-735):
SOCE measurements through Tg mediated store Ca2+ release followed by Ca2+ add back require a 0 Ca2+ environment that can only be achieved in culture. The Drosophila brain is bathed in hemolymph which contains Ca2+ and there do not exist any methods to readily deplete Ca2+ from the tissue to create a 0 Ca2+ environment without also effecting the health of the neurons.
Cultures of the subset of dopaminergic neurons (THD’) we have focused on in this study were not feasible due to the small number of neurons being studied from the total number of dopaminergic neurons in the brain (~35/400). In previous studies we have shown that SOCE post-Tg induced store depletion is abrogated in cultured dopaminergic neurons from Drosophila upon expression of OraiE180A (Pathak et al., 2015). Furthermore, Carbachol-induced IP3-mediated Ca2+ release is tightly coupled to SOCE in Drosophila neurons (Venkiteswaran and Hasan, 2009) and Ca2+ release from the IP3R is physiologically relevant for flight behavior in THD’ neurons (Sharma and Hasan, 2020).
3) A significant gap in the study relates to the conclusion that trl is a SOCE-regulated transcription factor. This conclusion is entirely based on genetic analysis of STIMKO heterozygous flies in which a copy of the trl13C hypomorph allele is introduced. While these results suggest a genetic interaction between the expression of the two genes, the evidence that expression translates into a functional interaction that places trl immediately downstream of SOCE is not rigorous or convincing. All that can be said is that the double mutant shows a defect in flight which could arise from an interruption of the circuit. Further, it is not clear whether the trl13C hypomorph is only introduced during the critical 72-96 hour time window when the Orai1E180E phenotype shows up. The same applies to the over-expression of Set2 and the other genes. If the expression is not temporally controlled, then the phenotype could be due to the blockade of an entirely different aspect of flight neuron function.
The idea that Trl functions downstream of Orai-mediated Ca2+ entry in THD’ neurons is based on the following genetic evidence (highlighted in the revised version; see Lines 339-341; 351-367; 647-65; ‘Limitations of the study’: 736-739)
In Figure 4D, we show evidence of genetic interaction between trl-STIM and trl-Set2. The rescue of trl13c/STIMKO with STIM overexpression in THD’ neurons indicates that excess SOCE (driven by STIMOE) may activate the residual Trl (there exists a WT Trl copy in this genetic background) to rescue THD’ flight function. This is further supported by the rescue of trl/STIMKO with Set2 overexpression in THD’ neurons, which is consistent with the feedback loop model proposed in Figure 5C (see Lines 390-396) where we propose that reduced SOCE leads to reduced ‘activated’ Trl and thus reduced Set2 expression, and the latter is rescued by SET2OE . The manner in which SOCE ‘activates’ Trl is the subject of ongoing investigations.
The trl hypomorphic alleles (including trl13C) exist as genetic mutants and they affect Trl function in all tissues throughout development. While we concede that these mutant alleles would affect multiple functions at other stages of development, which may impinge on the phenotypes noted in Figure S4B, we have used a targeted RNAi approach to validate Trl function specifically in the THD’ neurons (see Figure 4C; Lines 339-341).
Overexpression mediated rescues (including Set2) were not induced only during the critical 72-96 hrs APF developmental window. Having established that Orai function drives critical gene expression during this window (Figure 1), it is reasonable to assume that Set2 rescue of loss of flight in OraiE180A occurs in the same time window where flight is disrupted (see Lines 221-224).
4) In Figure 4, data is shown that SOCE compensates for the loss of Trl, the presumed mediator of SOCE-dependent flight. The fact that flight deficits are rescued by raising SOCE in the absence of Trl is very inconsistent with this conclusion.
We apologise for this confusion and have clarified in the revision (see Lines 346-367). trl13c is a recessive allele of Trl and has been written as such throughout the text and in the figures (i.e trl13c and NOT Trl13c). In all cases of Trl mutant rescue by STIMOE and Set2OE there exists residual Trl that can be activated by excess SOCE thus leading to the rescue. This is true for trl13C/ STIMKO where each mutant is present as a heterozygote (the complete genotype of this strain is STIMKO/+; trl13c/+; this has been corrected in the revision). Similarly, for TrlRNAi we expect reduced levels (but not complete loss) of Trl. Thus the SOCE rescue of loss of Trl occurs in conditions where Trl levels are reduced but NOT absent. Homozygous trl null mutants are lethal.
5) In Figure 5 (A-C), data is provided that Trl transcripts are unaffected by loss of SOCE and that overexpression cannot rescue flightlessness. From this, the authors conclude that this gene "must" be calcium responsive. While that is one possibility, it is also possible that these genes are not functionally linked.
The idea that Trl is functionally linked to SOCE is based on the following evidence (included in the revised version- see Lines 339-341; 346-367; 391-396)
In Figure 4C we show that flight defects caused by partial loss of Trl (THD’>TrlRNAi) were rescued by STIM overexpression (THD’>TrlRNAi; STIMOE). As mentioned above we have found that STIM overexpression raises SOCE.
Heteroalleles of the trl13C hypomorph exhibit a strong genetic interaction with a single copy of the null allele of STIMKO as shown by the flight deficit of trl13c/+; STIMKO/+ (trl13C/STIMKO ) flies (Figure 4D). The genotypes will be corrected in the revision.
Flight defects in trl13C/STIMKO flies could be rescued by STIM overexpression in the THD’ neurons (trl13C/STIMKO; THD’>STIMOE)
In Figure 4E, we show that partial loss of Trl in THD’ neurons (THD’>TrlRNAi) leads to decreased expression of the Ca2+ responsive genes mAChR, itpr, and Set2 genes indicating that Trl is a constituent of the SOCE-driven transcriptional feedback loop (see Figure 5C).
Since we could not detect a well-defined Ca2+ binding domain in Trl, we hypothesize that it could be activated by a Ca2+ dependent post-translational modification. Phosphoproteome analysis of Trl demonstrated that it does indeed undergo phosphorylation at a Threonine residue (T237; Zhai et al., 2008), which lies within a potential site for CaMKII. Independently, CaMKII has been identified as a binding partner of Trl from a Trl interactome study (Lomaev et al., 2018). Past work from our group (Ravi et al., 2018) identified a role for CaMKII in THD’ neurons in the context of flight. We are currently testing if CaMKII functions downstream of SOCE in THD’ neurons to mediate flight and will update this information in the next version of the manuscript.
Now included in the revised version of the manuscript as Figure S5; Lines 397-424)
6) There is no characterization of SOCE in fpDANs from flies expressing native Orai or the dominant negative OraiE180A mutant. While the authors refer to previous studies, as the manuscript is essentially based on Orai function thapsigargin-induced SOCE should be tested using the Ca2+ add-back protocol in order to assess the release of Ca2+ from the ER in response to thapsigargin as well as the subsequent SOCE.
The fpDANs consist of 16-19 neurons in each hemisphere (PPL1 are 10-12 and PPM3 are 6-7 cells; Pathak et al., 2015). Measuring SOCE from these neurons in vivo is not possible due to the presence of abundant extracellular Ca2+ in the brain. Given their sparse number, it proved technically challenging to isolate the fpDANs in culture to perform SOCE measurements using the Ca2+ add back protocol. Due to these reasons, we have relied upon using Carbachol to elicit IP3-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE as a proxy for in vivo SOCE. In previous studies we have shown that Carbachol treatment of cultured Drosophila neurons elicits IP3-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE (Agrawal et al., 2010; Figure 8). Moreover, expression of OraiE180A completely blocks SOCE as measured in primary cultures of dopaminergic neurons (Pathak et al., 2015; Figure 1E). Hence we have not repeated SOCE measurements from all dopaminergic neurons in this work. In the revised version we have explicitly stated this weakness of our study and the reasons for it (See Lines 307-313; ‘Limitations of the study’-Lines 719-735).
7) In the experiments performed to rescue flight duration in Set2RNAi individuals the authors overexpress STIM and attribute the effect to "Excess STIM presumably drives higher SOCE sufficient to rescue flight bout durations caused by deficient Set2 levels.". This should be experimentally tested as the STIM:Orai stoichiometry has been demonstrated as essential for SOCE.
The assumption that STIM overexpression drives higher SOCE is based upon previously published work from Drosophila neurons (Agrawal et al., 2010; Chakraborty et al, 2016; Deb et al., 2016) which demonstrates that excess WT STIM overcomes IP3R deficiencies (RNAi or hypomorphic mutants) to rescue SOCE. We agree that STIM-Orai stoichiometry is essential for SOCE, and propose that the rescue backgrounds possess sufficient WT Orai, which is recruited by the excess STIM to mediate the rescue. We have referenced the earlier work to validate our use of STIMOE for rescue of SOCE (See Lines 226-233).
Here, we propose that Set2 is part of a positive feedback loop (see Lines 286-307) driving transcription of mAChR and IP3R (Figure 3F). In keeping with this hypothesis, we posit that the phenotypes observed in the Set2RNAi background (Figure 2D) result from decreased itpr and mAChR expression (validated in Figure 3E). This is further validated by the Set2 overexpression mediated rescue of OraiE180A (Figure 2D) and rescue of itpr/mAChR expression in the OraiE180A background (Figure 3B-E; THD’>OraiE180A; Set2OE).
8) The authors show that overexpression of OraiE108A results in Stim downregulation at a mRNA level. What about the protein level? And more important, how does OraiE108A downregulate Stim expression? Does it promote Stim degradation? Does it inhibit Stim expression?
We hypothesize that changes in STIM mRNA observed in the THD’ > OraiE180A neurons stems from an overall reduction in IP3-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE due to loss of Trl-Set2 driven gene expression detailed in our transcriptional feedback loop model (Figure 5C; see Lines 286-307; 581-591). We have attempted to explain this aspect more clearly in the revised version of the manuscript. While we agree that measuring levels of STIM protein would be helpful, estimation of protein levels from a limited number of neurons (~35 cells per brain) is technically challenging. The STIM antibody does not work well in immunohistochemistry. In the absence of any experimental evidence we cannot comment on how expression of OraiE180A might affect STIM protein turnover (see Lines 307-313).
9) Lines 271-273, the authors state "whereas overexpression of a transgene encoding Set2 in THD' neurons either with loss of SOCE (OraiE180A) or with knockdown of the IP3R (itprRNAi), lead to significant rescue of the Ca2+ response". This is attributed to a positive effect of Set2 expression on IP3R expression and the authors show a positive correlation between these two parameters; however, there is no demonstration that Set2 expression can rescue IP3R expression in cells where the IP3R is knocked down (itprRNAi). This should be further demonstrated.
The rescue of IP3R expression by Set2 overexpression in itprRNAi was demonstrated in a different set of Drosophila neurons in an earlier study (Mitra et al., 2021) and has not been repeated specifically in THD’ neurons (see Lines 286-307). Similar to the previous study, here we tested CCh stimulated Ca2+ responses of THD’ neurons with itprRNAi and itprRNAi; SetOE (Fig S3), which are indeed rescued by SET2OE see Lines 280-285)
10) The data presented in Figure 3E should be functionally demonstrated by analyzing the ability of CCh to release Ca2+ from the intracellular stores in the absence of extracellular Ca2+.
CCh-mediated Ca2+ release from the intracellular stores in the absence of extracellular Ca2+ has been described in primary cultures of Drosophila neurons in previously published work (Venkiteswaran and Hasan, 2009; Agrawal et al., 2010) This work focuses on a set of 16-19 dopaminergic neurons in a hemisphere of the Drosophila central brain. It is technically challenging to generate a 0 Ca2+ environment in vivo, which is essential for measuring store Ca2+ release. Given their meagre numbers, primary cultures of these neurons is not readily feasible. (see Lines 307-313; ‘Limitations of the study’-Lines 719-735)
11) The conclusion that SOCE regulates the neuronal excitability threshold is based entirely on either partial behavioral rescue of flight, or measurements of KCl-induced Ca2+ rises monitored by GCaMP6m in DAN neurons. The threshold for neuronal excitability is a precise parameter based on rheobase measurements of action potentials in current-clamp. Measurements of slow calcium signals using a slow dye such as GCaMp6m should not be equated with neuronal excitability. What is measured is a loss of the calcium response in high K depolarization experiments, which occurs due to the loss of expression of Cav channels. Hence, the use of this term is not accurate and will confuse readers. The use of terms referring to neuronal excitability needs to be changed throughout the manuscript. As such, the conclusions regarding neuronal excitability should be strongly tempered and the data reinterpreted as there are no true measurements of neuronal excitability in the manuscript. All that can be said is that expression of certain ion channel genes is suppressed. Since both Na+ channels and K+ channel expression is down-regulated, it is hard to say precisely how membrane excitability is altered without action potential analysis.
The claim that SOCE influences neuronal excitability is based on the following observations:
Interruption of the transcriptional feedback loop involving SOCE, Trl, and Set2 through loss of any of its constituents, results in the downregulation of VGCCs (Figure 5G, 6H), which are essential components of action potentials.
OraiE180A mediated loss of SOCE in THD’ neurons abrogates the KCl-evoked depolarization response (Figure 6B, C) measured using GCaMP6m. We verified that this response requires VGCC function using pharmacological inhibition of L-type VGCCs (Figure 6E, F).
SOCE deficient THD’ neurons, which were presumably compromised in their ability to evoke action potentials could be rescued to undergo KCl-evoked depolarisation by expression of NachBac, which lowers the depolarization threshold (Figure 7C, D) or through optogenetic stimulation using CsChrimson (Figure 7F).
We agree that ‘neuronal excitability threshold’ is a precise electrophysiological parameter that has not been directly investigated here by measurement of action potentials. Therefore, references to neuronal excitability have been tempered throughout the revised manuscript and be replaced with a more generic reference to ‘neuronal activity’. In this context we have included further evidence supporting reduced activity of THD’ neurons upon loss of SOCE in the revision.
Since one of the key functional outcomes of activity during critical developmental periods such as the 72-96 hrs APF developmental window identified in this study, is remodelling of neuronal morphology, we decided to investigate the same in our context. Neuronal activity can drive changes in neurite complexity and axonal arborization (Depetris-Chauvin et al., 2011) especially during critical developmental periods (Sachse et al., 2007). To understand if Orai mediated Ca2+ entry and downstream gene expression through Set2 affects this activity-driven parameter, we investigated the morphology of fpDANs, and specifically measured the complexity of presynaptic terminals within the 2’1 lobe MB using super-resolution microscopy. We found striking changes in the neurite volume upon expression of OraiE180A which could be rescued by restoring either Set2 (OraiE180A; Set2OE) or by inducing hyperactivity through NachBac expression (OraiE180A ; NachBacOE). These data have been included in the revised manuscript (Figure 8 B, C, D; see Lines 481-482; 519-534; 584-591; 701-704).
12) Related, since trl does not contain any molecular domains that could be regulated by Ca2+ signaling, it is unclear whether trl is directly regulated by SOCE or the regulation is highly indirect. Reporter assays evaluating trl activation upon Ca2+ rises would provide much stronger and more direct evidence for the conclusion that trl is a SOCE-regulated TF. As such the evidence is entirely based on RNAi downregulation of trl which indicates that trl is essential but has no bearing on exactly what point of the signaling cascade it is involved.
We agree that luciferase Trl reporters would provide a direct method to test SOCE-mediated activation. Future investigations will be targeted in this direction. Regarding possible mechanisms of Trl activation - since we could not detect a well-defined Ca2+ binding domain in Trl, we hypothesize that it may be phosphorylation by a Ca2+ sensitive kinase. Phosphoproteome analysis of Trl indicates that it does indeed undergo phosphorylation at a Threonine reside (T237; Zhai et al., 2008), which may be mediated by the Ca2+ sensitive kinase-CaMKII based on binding partners identified in the Trl interactome (Lomaev et al., 2018; Past work (Ravi et al., 2018) has indeed demonstrated a requirement for CaMKII in THD’ neurons for flight. We are currently testing whether CaMKII functions downstream of SOCE in these neurons to mediate flight, and will be updating this information in the next version of the manuscript.
New data and analysis has been included - see Figure S5; ‘Limitations of the study’- Lines 397-424; 736-739).
13) Are NFAT levels altered in the Orai1 loss of function mutant? If not, this should be explicitly stated. It would seem based on previous literature that some gene regulation may be related to the downregulation of this established Ca2+-dependent transcription factor. Same for NFkb.
As mentioned in the revised version of the manuscript (see Lines 315-326), Drosophila NFAT lacks a calcineurin binding site and is therefore not sensitive to Ca2+ (Keyser et al., 2007). In the past we tested if knockdown of NF-kB in dopaminergic neurons gave a flight phenotype and did not observe any measurable deficit. From the RNAseq data we find a slight downregulation of NFAT (0.49 fold, p value=0.048) and NF-kb (0.26 fold, p value =0.258) the significance of which is unclear at this point. We did not find any consensus binding sites for these two factors in the regulatory regions of downregulated genes from THD’ neurons.
14) Does over-expression of Set2 restore ion channel expression especially those of the VGCCs? This would provide rigorous, direct evidence that SOCE-mediated regulation of VGCCs through Set2 controls voltage-gated calcium channel signaling.
Set2 overexpression in the OraiE180A background indeed restores the expression of VGCC genes (see Figure 6H; Lines 461-468).
15) All 6 representative panels from Figure 3B are duplicated in Figure 4G. Likewise, 2 representative panels from Figure 5H are duplicated in Figure 6D. Although these panels all represent the results from control experiments, the relevant experiments were likely not conducted at the same time and under the same conditions. Thus, control images from other experiments should not be used simply because they correspond to controls. This situation should be clarified.
We regret the confusion caused by the same representative images for the control experiments. These have been replaced by new representative images for Figure 4G and 6D in the updated version of the manuscript.
16) The figures are unusually busy and difficult to follow. In part this is because they usually have many panels (Fig. 1: A-I; Fig. 2, A-J, etc) but also because the arrangement of the panels is not consistent: sometimes the following panel is found to the right, other times it is below. It would help the reader to make the order of the panels consistent, and, if possible, reduce the number of panels and/or move some of the panels to new figures (eLife does not limit the number of display items).
The image panels have been rearranged for ease of reading in the updated version of the manuscript.
17) As a final recommendation, the reviewers suggest that the authors a- Reword the text that refers to membrane excitability since membrane excitability was not directly measured here. b-Explain why STIM1 rescues the partial loss of flight in Set2 RNAi flies (Fig. S2E); and c- Explain how/why trl is calcium regulated and test using luciferase (or other) reporter assays whether Orai activation leads to trl activation.
a. Textual references to membrane excitability have been appropriately modified and some new data has been included in this regard (see Figure 8 B, C, D; Lines 481-483; 519-534; 584-591; 701-704).
b. We have provided a detailed explanation for how STIM overexpression might rescue the phenotypes caused by Set2RNAi in Point 1 (see Lines 226-233). In short, these phenotypes depend upon IP3R mediated Ca2+ entry driving a transcriptional feedback loop. We relied upon past reports that STIM overexpression upregulates IP3R-mediated Ca2+ release and SOCE in Drosophila itpr mutant neurons (Agrawal et al., 2010; Chakraborty et al, 2016; Deb et al, 2016). We therefore propose that STIM overexpression in the Set2RNAi background rescues IP3R mediated Ca2+ release followed by SOCE, which drives enhanced Set2 transcription, counteracting the effects of the RNAi. We will explain this more clearly with past references in the next revision.
c. We have provided a detailed response to this comment in Point 12. Briefly, we agree that building luciferase reporters for Trl could be an ideal strategy to test for its responsiveness to SOCE and needs to be done in future. As an alternate strategy, we have looked at data from existing studies of interacting partners of Trl (Lomaev et al., 2017) and identified CamKII, which is both Ca2+ responsive (Braun and Schulman, 1995; Yasuda et al., 2022), and thus might activate Trl through a phosphorylation-switch like mechanism (see Figure S5; ‘Limitations of the study’-736-739; Lines 397-424). Moreover, a previous publication identified a requirement for CamKII in THD’ neurons for Drosophila flight (Ravi et al., 2018). We have tested the ability of a dominant active version of CamKII to rescue THD’>E180A flight deficits and have included this information in the next version of the manuscript.
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Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews
Reviewer #1(Public review):
Summary:
This manuscript details the results of a small pilot study of neoadjuvant radiotherapy followed by combination treatment with hormone therapy and dalpiciclib for early-stage HR+/HER2-negative breast cancer.
Strengths:
The strengths of the manuscript include the scientific rationale behind the approach and the inclusion of some simple translational studies.
Weaknesses:
The main weakness of the manuscript is that overly strong conclusions are made by the authors based on a very small study of twelve patients. A study this small is not powered to fully characterize the efficacy or safety of a treatment approach, and can, at best, demonstrate feasibility. These data need validation in a larger cohort before they can have any implications for clinical practice, and the treatment approach outlined should not yet be considered a true alternative to standard evidence-based approaches.
I would urge the authors and readers to exercise caution when comparing results of this 12-patient pilot study to historical studies, many of which were much larger, and had different treatment protocols and baseline patient characteristics. Cross-trial comparisons like this are prone to mislead, even when comparing well powered studies. With such a small sample size, the risk of statistical error is very high, and comparisons like this have little meaning.
We greatly appreciate your evaluation of our study and fully agree with the limitations you have pointed out. We have clearly stated the limitations of the small sample size and emphasized the need for a larger population to validate our preliminary findings in the discussion section (Lines 311-316).
We acknowledge that this small sample size is not powered to characterize this regimen as a promising alternative regimen in the treatment of patients with HR-positive, HER2-negative breast cancer. Therefore, we have revised the description of this regimen to serve as a feasible option for neoadjuvant therapy in HR-positive, HER2-negative breast cancers both in the discussion (Lines 317-320) and the abstract (Lines 71-72).
We agree with you that cross-trial comparisons should be approached with caution due to differences in study designs and patient populations. In our discussion section, we acknowledge that small sample size limited the comparison of our data with historical data in the literature due to the potential bias (Lines 312-313). We clearly state that such comparisons hold limited significance (Lines 313-314) and suggest a larger population to validate our preliminary findings.
• Why was dalpiciclib chosen, as opposed to another CDK4/6 inhibitor?
Thank you for your comments. The rationale for selecting dalpiciclib over other CDK4/6 inhibitors in our study is primarily based on the following considerations:
(1) Clinical Efficacy: In several clinical trials, including DAWNA-1 and DAWNA-2, the combination of dalpiciclib with endocrine therapies such as fulvestrant, letrozole, or anastrozole has been shown to significantly extend the progression-free survival (PFS) in patients with hormone receptor-positive, HER2-negative advanced breast cancer [1-2].
(2) Tolerability and Management of Adverse Reactions: The primary adverse reactions associated with dalpiciclib are neutropenia, leukopenia, and anemia. Despite these potential side effects, the majority of patients are able to tolerate them, and with proper monitoring and management, these reactions can be effectively mitigated [1-2].
(3) Comparable pharmacodynamic with other CDK4/6 inhibitors: The combination of CDK4/6 inhibitors, including palbociclib, ribociclib, and abemaciclib, with aromatase inhibitors has demonstrated an enhanced ability to suppress tumor proliferation and increase the rate of clinical response in neoadjuvant therapy for HR-positive, HER2-negative breast cancer [3-5]. Furthermore, preclinical studies have shown that dalpiciclib has comparable in vivo and in vitro pharmacodynamic activity to palbociclib, suggesting its potential effectiveness in similar treatment regimens [6].
(4) Accessibility and Regulatory Approval: Dalpiciclib has gained marketing approval in China on December 31, 2021, which facilitates the accessibility of this medication, making it a more convenient option when considering treatment plans.
References:
(1) Zhang P, Zhang Q, Tong Z, et al. Dalpiciclib plus letrozole or anastrozole versus placebo plus letrozole or anastrozole as first-line treatment in patients with hormone receptor-positive, HER2-negative advanced breast cancer (DAWNA-2): a multicentre, randomised, double-blind, placebo-controlled, phase 3 trial[J]. The Lancet Oncology, 2023, 24(6): 646-657.
(2) Xu B, Zhang Q, Zhang P, et al. Dalpiciclib or placebo plus fulvestrant in hormone receptor-positive and HER2-negative advanced breast cancer: a randomized, phase 3 trial[J]. Nature medicine, 2021, 27(11): 1904-1909.
(3) Hurvitz S A, Martin M, Press M F, et al. Potent cell-cycle inhibition and upregulation of immune response with abemaciclib and anastrozole in neoMONARCH, phase II neoadjuvant study in HR+/HER2− breast cancer[J]. Clinical Cancer Research, 2020, 26(3): 566-580.
(4) Prat A, Saura C, Pascual T, et al. Ribociclib plus letrozole versus chemotherapy for postmenopausal women with hormone receptor-positive, HER2-negative, luminal B breast cancer (CORALLEEN): an open-label, multicentre, randomised, phase 2 trial[J]. The lancet oncology, 2020, 21(1): 33-43.
(5) Ma C X, Gao F, Luo J, et al. NeoPalAna: neoadjuvant palbociclib, a cyclin-dependent kinase 4/6 inhibitor, and anastrozole for clinical stage 2 or 3 estrogen receptor–positive breast cancer[J]. Clinical Cancer Research, 2017, 23(15): 4055-4065.
(6) Long F, He Y, Fu H, et al. Preclinical characterization of SHR6390, a novel CDK 4/6 inhibitor, in vitro and in human tumor xenograft models[J]. Cancer science, 2019, 110(4): 1420-1430.
• The eligibility criteria are not consistent throughout the manuscript, sometimes saying early breast cancer, other times saying stage II/III by MRI criteria.
Thank you for pointing out the inconsistencies in the description of the eligibility criteria in our manuscript. We deeply apologize for any confusion caused by these inconsistencies. We have revised the term from “early-stage HR-positive, HER2-negative breast cancer” to “early or locally advanced HR-positive, HER2-negative breast cancer” (Lines 128 and 150). The term “early or locally advanced” encompasses two different stages of breast cancer, whereas “Stage II/III by MRI criteria” refers to specific stages within the TNM staging system.
• The authors should emphasize the 25% rate of conversion from mastectomy to breast conservation and also report the type and nature of axillary lymph node surgery performed. As the authors note in the discussion section, rates of pathologic complete response/RCB scores are less prognostic for hormone-receptor-positive breast cancer than other subtypes, so one of the main rationales for neoadjuvant medical therapy is for surgical downstaging. This is a clinically relevant outcome.
We appreciate your constructive comments. Based on your suggestions, we have made the following revisions and additions to the article.
The breast conservation rate serves as a secondary endpoint in our study (Line 62 and 179). We have highlighted the significant 25% conversion rate from mastectomy to breast conservation in both the results (Lines 229-230) and discussion sections (Lines 290-292).
In our study, all patients underwent lymph node surgery, including sentinel lymph node biopsy or axillary lymph node dissection. Among them, 58.3% of patients (7/12) underwent sentinel lymph node biopsies.
We agree with your point that the prognostic value of pathologic complete response/RCB score is lower for hormone receptor-positive breast cancer compared to other subtypes, we have revised the discussion section to clarify that one of the principal objectives for neoadjuvant therapy in this patient population is to facilitate downstaging and enhance the rate of breast conservation (Lines 289-290). And also emphasized that this neoadjuvant therapeutic regiment appeared to improve the likelihood of pathological downstaging and achieve a margin-free resection, particularly for those with locally advanced and high-risk breast cancer (Lines 293-295).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Firstly, as this is a single-arm preliminary study, we are curious about the order of radiotherapy and the endocrine therapy. Besides, considering the radiotherapy, we also concern about the recovery of the wound after the surgery and whether related data were collected.
Thanks for the comments. The treatment sequence in this study is to first administer radiotherapy, followed by endocrine therapy. A meta-analysis has indicated that concurrent radiotherapy with endocrine therapy does not significantly impact the incidence of radiation-induced toxicity or survival rates compared to a sequential approach [1]. In light of preclinical research suggesting enhanced therapeutic efficacy when radiotherapy is delivered prior to CDK4/6 inhibitors, we have opted to administer radiotherapy before the combination therapy of CDK4/6 inhibitors and hormone therapy [2].
In our study, we collected data on surgical wound recovery. All 12 patients had Class I incisions, which healed by primary intention. The wounds exhibited no signs of redness, swelling, exudate, or fat necrosis.
References:
(1) Li Y F, Chang L, Li W H, et al. Radiotherapy concurrent versus sequential with endocrine therapy in breast cancer: A meta-analysis[J]. The Breast, 2016, 27: 93-98.
(2) Petroni G, Buqué A, Yamazaki T, et al. Radiotherapy delivered before CDK4/6 inhibitors mediates superior therapeutic effects in ER+ breast cancer[J]. Clinical Cancer Research, 2021, 27(7): 1855-1863.
Secondly, in the methodology, please describe the sample size estimation of this study and follow up details.
Thanks for pointing out this crucial omission. Sample size estimation for this study and follow-up details have been added in the methodology section. The section on sample size estimation has been revised to state in Statistical analysis: “This exploratory study involves 12 patients, with the sample size determined based on clinical considerations, not statistical factors (Lines 210-211).” The section on follow up has been revised to state in Procedures section “A 5-year follow-up is conducted every 3 months during the first 2 years, and every 6 months for the subsequent 3 years. Additionally, safety data are collected within 90 days after surgery for subjects who discontinue study treatment (Lines 169-172).”
Thirdly, in Table 1, the item HER2 expression, it's better to categorise HER2 into 0, 1+, 2+ and FISH-.
Thank you very much for pointing out this issue. The item HER2 expression in Table 1 has been revised from “negative, 1+, 2+ and FISH-” to “0, 1+, 2+ and FISH-”.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
We appreciate the reviewers' thoughtful comments and suggestions. Below, we provide point-by-point responses to the recommendations and outline the updates made to the manuscript.
(1) Discussion, "the obvious experiment is to manipulate a neuron's anatomical embedding while leaving stimulus information intact."] The epiphenomenon can arise from the placement and types of a neuron's neurotransmitters and neuromodulators, too.
The content of vesicles released by a neuron is obviously of great importance in determining postsynaptic impact. However, we’re suggesting that (assuming vesicular content is held constant) the anatomically-relevant patterning of spiking might additionally affect the postsynaptic neuron’s integration of the presynaptic input. To avoid confusion, we updated the text accordingly: “the obvious experiment is to manipulate a neuron's anatomical embedding while minimally impacting external and internal variables, such as stimulus information and levels of neurotransmitters or neuromodulators” (Line 594 - 596).
(2) “In all conditions, the slope of the input duration versus sensitivity line was still positive at 1,800 seconds (Fig. 3B)". This may suggest that the estimate of the calculated statistics (ISI, PSTH) is more reliable with more data, rather than (or in addition to) specific information being extracted from faraway time points. Another potential confound is the training statistics were calculated from all training data, so the test data is a better match to training data when test statistics are calculated from more data. Overall, the validity of the conclusions following this observation is not clear to me.
This is a great point. Accordingly, we revised the text to include this possibility: “Because the training data were of similar duration, this could be explained by either of two possibilities. First, the signal is relatively short, but noisy—in this case, extended sampling will increase reliability. Second, the anatomical signal is, itself, distributed over time scales of tens to hundreds of seconds.” (Line 252 - 255).
(3) "This further suggests that there is a latent neural code for anatomical location embedded within the spike train, a feature that could be practically applied to determining the brain region of a recording electrode without the need for post-hoc histology". The performance of the model at the subregion level, which is a typical level of desired precision in locating cells, does not seem to support such a practical application. Please clarify to avoid confusion.
The current model should not be considered a replacement for traditional methods, such as histology. Our intention is to convey that, with the inclusion of multimodal data and additional samples, a computational approach to anatomical localization has great promise. We updated the manuscript to clarify this point: “While significantly above chance, the structure-level model still lacks the accuracy for immediate practical application. However, it is highly likely that the incorporation of datasets with diverse multi-modal features and alternative regions from other research groups will increase the accuracy of such a model. In addition, a computational approach can be combined with other methods of anatomical reconstruction.” (Line 355 - 359).
Additionally, we directly addressed this point in our original manuscript (Discussion section: Line 498 - 505 in the current version). Furthermore, following the release of our preprint, independent efforts have adopted a multimodal strategy with qualitatively similar results (Yu et al., 2024). Other recent work expands on the idea of utilizing single-neuron features for brain region/structure characterization (La Merre et al., 2024).
Yu, H., Lyu, H., Xu, E. Y., Windolf, C., Lee, E. K., Yang, F., ... & Hurwitz, C. (2024). In vivo cell-type and brain region classification via multimodal contrastive learning. bioRxiv, 2024-11.
Le Merre, P., Heining, K., Slashcheva, M., Jung, F., Moysiadou, E., Guyon, N., ... & Carlén, M. (2024). A Prefrontal Cortex Map based on Single Neuron Activity. bioRxiv, 2024-11.
(4) "These results support the notion the meaningful computational division in murine visuocortical regions is at the level of VISp versus secondary areas.". The use of the word "meaningful" is vague and this conclusion is not well justified because it is possible that subregions serve different functional roles without having different spiking statistics.
Precisely! It is well established that different subregions serve different functional purposes - but they do not necessitate different regional embeddings. It is important to note the difference between stimulus encoding and the embedding that we are describing. As a rough analogy, the regional embedding might be considered a language, while the stimulus is the content of the spoken words. However, to avoid vague words, we revised the sentence to “These results suggest that the computational differentiability of murine visuocortical regions is at the level of VISp versus secondary areas.” (Line 380 - 381)
(5) Figure 3D left/right halves look similar. A measure of the effect size needs to accompany these p-values.
We assume the reviewer is referring to Figure 3E. Although some of the violin plots in Figure 3E look similar, they are not identical. In the revision, we include effect sizes in the caption.
(6) Figure 3A, 3F: Could uncertainty estimates be provided?
Yes. We added uncertainty estimates to the text (Line 272 - 294) and to the caption of Figure S2, which displays confusion matrices corresponding to Figure 3A. The inclusion of similar estimates for 3F would be so unwieldy as to be a disservice to the reader—there are 240 unique combinations of stimulus parameters and structures. In the context of the larger figure, 3F serves to illustrate a relationship between stimulus, region, and the anatomical embedding.
(7) Page 21. "semi-orthogonal". Please reword or explain if this usage is technical.
We replaced “semi-orthogonal” with “dissociable” (Line 549).
(8) Page 11, "This approach tested whether..."] Unclear sentence. Please reword.
We changed “This approach tested whether the MLP’s performance depended on viewing the entire ISI distribution or was enriched in a subset of patterns” to “This approach identified regions of the ISI distribution informative for classification” (Line 261).
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
We appreciate the reviewer’s comments and summary of the results. We agree that the introductory results (Figs. 1-3) are not particularly compelling when considered in isolation. They provide a baseline of comparison for the subsequent results. Our intention was to approach the problem systematically, progressing from well-established, basic methods to more advanced approaches. This allows us to clearly test a baseline and avoid analytical leaps or untested assumptions. Specifically:
● Figure 1 provides an evaluation of the standard dimensionality reduction methods. As expected, these methods yield minimal results, serving as a clear baseline. This is consistent, for example, with an understanding of single units as rate-varying Poisson processes.
● Figures 2 and 3 then build upon these results with spiking features frequent in neuroscience literature such as firing rate, coefficient of variation, etc using linear supervised and more detailed spiking features such as ISI distribution using nonlinear supervised machine learning methods.
By starting from the standpoint of the status quo, we are better able to contextualize the significance of our later findings in Figures 4–6.
Response to Specific Points in the Summary
(6) Separability of VISp vs. Secondary Visual Areas
I found the entire argument about visual areas somewhat messy and unclear. The stimuli used might not drive the secondary visual areas particularly well and might necessitate task engagement.
We appreciate your feedback that the dissection of visual cortical structures is unclear. To summarize, as shown in the bottom three rows of Figure 6, there is a notable lack of diagonality in visuocortical structures. This means that our model was unable to learn signatures to reliably predict these classes. In contrast, visuocortical layer is returned well above chance, and superstructures (primary and secondary areas) are moderately well identified, albeit still well above chance.
Consider a thought experiment, if Charlie Gross had not shown faces to monkeys to find IT, or Newsome and others shown motion to find MT and Zeki and others color stimuli to find V4, we would conclude that there are no differences.
The thought experiment is misleading. The results specifically do not arise from stimulus selectivity—much of Newsome’s own work suggests that the selectivity of neurons in IT etc. is explained by little more than rate varying Poisson processes. In this case, there should be no fundamental anatomical difference in the “language” of the neurons in V4 and IT, only a difference in the inputs driving those neurons. In contrast, our work suggests that the “language” of neurons varies as a function of some anatomical divisions. In other words, in contrast to a Poisson rate code, our results predict that single neuron spike patterns might be remarkably different in MT and IT— and that this is not a function of stimulus selectivity. Notably, the anatomical (and functional) division between V1 and secondary visual areas does not appear to manifest in a different “language”, thus constituting an interesting result in and of itself.
We regret a failure to communicate this in a tight and compelling fashion on the first submission, but hope that the revision is limpid and accessible.
Barberini, C. L., Horwitz, G. D., & Newsome, W. T. (2001). A comparison of spiking statistics in motion sensing neurones of flies and monkeys. Motion Vision: Computational, Neural, and Ecological Constraints, 307-320.
Bair, W., Zohary, E., & Newsome, W. T. (2001). Correlated firing in macaque visual area MT: time scales and relationship to behavior. Journal of Neuroscience, 21(5), 1676-1697.
Similarly, why would drifting gratings be a good example of a stimulus for the hippocampus, an area thought to be involved in memory/place fields?
The results suggest that anatomical “language” is not tied to stimuli. It is imperative to recall that neurons are highly active absent experimentally imposed stimuli, such as when an animal is at rest, when an animal is asleep, and when an animal is in the dark (relevant to visual cortices). With this in mind, also recall that, despite the lack of stimuli tailored to the hippocampus, neurons therein were still reliably separable from neurons in seven nuclei in the thalamus, 6 of which are not classically considered visual regions. Should these regions (including hippocampus) have been inert during the presentation of visual stimuli, there would have been very little separability.
(7) Generalization across laboratories
“[C]omparison across laboratories was somewhat underwhelming. It does okay but none of the results are particularly compelling in terms of performance.
Any result above chance is a rejection of the null hypothesis: that a model trained on a set of animals in Laboratory A will be ineffective in identifying brain regions when tested on recordings collected in Laboratory B (in different animals and under different experimental conditions). As an existence proof, the results suggest conserved principles (however modest) that constrain neuronal activity as a function of anatomy. That models fail to achieve high accuracy (in this context) is not surprising (given the limitations of available recordings)---that models achieve anything above chance, however, is.
Thus, after reading the paper many times, I think part of the problem is that the study is not cohesive, and the authors need to either come up with a tool or demonstrate a scientific finding.
We demonstrate that neuronal spike trains carry robust anatomical information. We developed an ML architecture for this and that architecture is publicly available.
They try to split the middle and I am left somewhat perplexed about what exact scientific problem they or other researchers are solving.
We humbly suggest that the question of a neurons “language” is highly important and central to an understanding of how brains work. From a computational perspective, there is no reason for a vast diversity of cell types, nor a differentiation of the rules that dictate neuronal activity in one region versus another. A Turing Complete system can be trivially constructed from a small number of simple components, such as an excitatory and inhibitory cell type. This is the basis of many machine learning tools.
Please do not confuse stimulus specificity with the concept of a neuron’s language. Neurons in VISp might fire more in response to light, while those in auditory cortex respond to sound. This does not mean that these neurons are different - only that their inputs are. Given the lack of a literature describing our main effect—that single neuron spiking carries information about anatomical location—it is difficult to conclude that our results are either commonplace or to be expected.
I am also unsure why the authors think some of these results are particularly important.
See above.
For instance, has anyone ever argued that brain areas do not have different spike patterns?
Yes. In effect, by two avenues. The first is a lack of any argument otherwise (please do not conflate spike patterns with stimulus tuning), and the second is the preponderance of, e.g., rate codes across many functionally distinct regions and circuits.
Is that not the premise for all systems neuroscience?
No. The premise for all systems neuroscience (from our perspective) is that the brain is a) a collection of interacting neurons and b) the collective system of neurons gives rise to behavior, cognition, sensation, and perception. As stated above, these axiomatic first principles fundamentally do not require that neurons, as individual entities, obey different rules in different parts of the brain.
I could see how one could argue no one has said ISIs matter but the premise that the areas are different is a fundamental part of neuroscience.
Based on logic and the literature, we fundamentally disagree. Consider: while systems neuroscience operates on the principle that brain regions have specialized functions, there is no a priori reason to assume that these functions must be reflected in different underlying computational rules. The simplest explanation is that a single language of spiking exists across regions, with functional differences arising from processing distinct inputs rather than fundamentally different spiking rules. For example, an identical spike train in the amygdala and Layer 5 of M1 would have profoundly different functional impacts, yet the spike timing itself could be identical (even as stimulus response). Until now, evidence for region-specific spiking patterns has been lacking, and our work attempts to begin addressing this gap. There is extensive further work to be conducted in this space, and it is certain that models will improve, rules will be clarified, and mechanisms will be identified.
Detailed major comments
(1) Exploratory trends in spiking by region and structure across the population:
The argument in this section is that unsupervised analyses might reveal subtle trends in the organization of spiking patterns by area. The authors show 4 plots from t-SNE and claim to see subtle organization. I have concerns. For Figure 1C, it is nearly impossible to see if a significant structure exists that differentiates regions and structures. So this leads certain readers to conclude that the authors are looking at the artifactual structure (see Chari et al. 2024) - likely to contribute to large Twitter battles. Contributing to this issue is that the hyperparameter for tSNE was incorrectly chosen. I do think that a different perplexity should be used for the visualization in order to better show the underlying structure; the current visualization just looks like a single "blob". The UMAP visualizations in the supplement make this point more clearly. I also think the authors should include a better plot with appropriate perplexity or not include this at all. The color map of subtle shades of green and yellow is hard to see as well in both Figure S1 and Figure 1.
In response to the feedback, we replaced t-SNE/UMAP with LDA, while keeping PCA for dimensionality reduction.
As stated in the original methods, t-SNE/UMAP hyperparameters were chosen based on the combination that led to the greatest classifiable separability of the regions/structures in the space (across a broad range of possible combinations). It just so happens that the maximally separable structure from a regions/structures perspective is the “blob”. This suggests that perhaps the predominant structure the t-SNE finds in the data is not driven by anatomy. If we selected hyperparameters in some other way that was not based specifically on regions/structures (e.g. simple visual inspection of the plots) the conformation would of course be different and not blob-like. However, we removed the t-SNE and UMAP to avoid further confusion.
The “muddy appearance” is not an issue with the color map. As seen in Figure 1B, the chosen colors are visibly distinct. Figure 1C (previous version) appeared muddy yellow/green because of points that overlap with transparency, resulting in a mix of clearly defined classes (e.g., a yellow point on top of a blue point creating green). This overlap is a meaningful representation of the separability observed in this analysis. We also tried using 2D KDE for visualization, but it did not improve the impression of visual separability.
We are removing p-values from the figures because they lead to the impression that we over-interpret these results quantitatively. However, we calculated p-values based on label permutation similar to the way R2 suggests (see previous methods). The conflation with the Wasserstein distances is an understandable misunderstanding. These are unrelated to p-values and used for the heatmaps in S1 only (see previous methods).
Instead of p-values, we now use the adjusted rand index, which measures how accurately neurons within the same region are clustered together (see Line 670 - 671, Figure 1C, and Figure S1) (Hubert & Arabie 1985). This quantifies the extent to which the distribution of points in dimensionally-reduced space is shaped by region/structure.
Hubert, L., & Arabie, P. (1985). Comparing partitions. Journal of Classification, 2(1), 193–218. https://doi.org/10.1007/BF01908075
(2) Logistic classifiers:
The results in this section are somewhat underwhelming. Accuracy is around 40% and yes above chance but I would be very surprised if someone is worried about separating visual structures from the thalamus. Such coarse brain targeting is not difficult. If the authors want to include this data, I recommend they show it as a control in the ISI distribution section. The entire argument here is that perhaps one should not use derived metrics and a nonlinear classifier on more data is better, which is essentially the thrust of the next section.
As outlined above, our work systematically increases in model complexity. The logistic result is an intermediate model, and it returns intermediate results. This is an important stepping stone between the lack of a result based on unsupervised linear dimensionality reduction and the performance of supervised nonlinear models.
From a purely utilitarian perspective, the argument could be framed as “one should not use derived metrics, and a nonlinear classifier on more data is better.” However, please see all of our notes above.
(3) MLP classifiers:
Even in this section, I was left somewhat underwhelmed that a nonlinear classifier with large amounts of data outperforms a linear classifier with small amounts of data. I found the analysis of the ISIs and which timescales are driving the classifier interesting but I think the classifier with smoothing is more interesting. So with a modest chance level decodability of different brain areas in the visual system, I found it somewhat grandiose to claim a "conserved" code for anatomy in the brain. If there is conservation, it seems to be at the level of the coarse brain organization, which in my opinion is not particularly compelling.
The sample size used for both the linear and nonlinear classifiers is the same; however, the nonlinear classifier leverages the detailed spiking time information from ISIs. Our goal here was to systematically evaluate how classical spike metrics compare to more detailed temporal features in their ability to decode brain areas. We chose a linear classifier for spike metrics because, with fewer features, nonlinear methods like neural networks often offer very modest advantages over linear methods, less interpretability, and are prone to overfitting.
Respectfully, we stand by our word choice. The term “conserved” is appropriate given that our results hold appreciably, i.e., statistically above chance, across animals.
(4) Generalization section:
The authors suggest that a classifier learned from one set of data could be used for new data. I was unsure if this was a scientific point or the fact that they could use it as a tool.
It can be both. We are more driven by the scientific implications of a rejection of the null.
Is the scientific argument that ISIs are similar across areas even in different tasks?
It appears so - despite heterogeneity in the tuning of single neurons, their presynaptic inputs, and stimuli, there is identifiable information about anatomical location in the spike train.
Why would one not learn a classifier from every piece of available data: like LFP bands, ISI distributions, and average firing rates, and use that to predict the brain area as a comparison?
Because this would obfuscate the ability to conclude that spike trains embed information about anatomy.
Considering all features simultaneously and adding additional data modalities—such as LFP bands and spike waveforms—has potential to improve classification accuracy at the cost of understanding the contribution of each feature. The spike train as a time series is the most fundamental component of neuronal communication. As a result, this is the only feature of neuronal activity of concern for the present investigation.
Or is the argument that the ISIs are a conserved code for anatomy? Unfortunately, even in this section, the data are underwhelming.
We appreciate the reviewer’s comments, but arrive at a very different conclusion. We were quite surprised to find any generalizability whatsoever.
Moreover, for use as a tool, I think the authors need to seriously consider a control that is either waveforms from different brain areas or the local field potentials. Without that, I am struggling to understand how good this tool is. The authors said "because information transmission in the brain arises primarily from the timing of spiking and not waveforms (etc)., our studies involve only the timestamps of individual spikes from well-isolated units ". However, we are not talking about information transmission and actually trying to identify and assess brain areas from electrophysiological data.
While we are not blind to the “tool” potential that is suggested by our work, this is not the primary motivation or content in any section of the paper. As stated clearly in the abstract, our motivation is to ask “whether individual neurons [...] embed information about their own anatomical location within their spike patterns”. We go on to say “This discovery provides new insights into the relationship between brain structure and function, with broad implications for neurodevelopment, multimodal integration, and the interpretation of large-scale neuronal recordings. Immediately, it has potential as a strategy for in-vivo electrode localization.” Crucially, the last point we make is a nod to application. Indeed, our results suggest that in-vivo electrode localization protocols may benefit from the incorporation of such a model.
In light of the reviewer’s concerns, we have further dampened the weight of statements about our model as a consumer-ready tool.
Example 1: The final sentence of the abstract now reads: “Computational approximations of anatomy have potential to support in-vivo electrode localization.”
Example 2: The results sections now contains the following text: “While significantly above chance, the structure-level model still lacks the accuracy for immediate practical application. However, it is highly likely that the incorporation of datasets with diverse multi-modal features and alternative regions from other research groups will increase the accuracy of such a model. In addition, a computational approach can be combined with other methods of anatomical reconstruction.” (Line 355 - 359).
Example 3: We replaced the phrase "because information transmission in the brain arises primarily from the timing of spiking and not waveforms (etc) " with the phrase “because information is primarily encoded by the firing rate or the timing of spiking and not waveforms (etc)” (Line 116 - 118).
(5) Discussion section:
In the discussion, beginning with "It is reasonable to consider . . ." all the way to the penultimate paragraph, I found the argumentation here extremely hard to follow. Furthermore, the parts of the discussion here I did feel I understood, I heavily disagreed with. They state that "recordings are random in their local sampling" which is almost certainly untrue when it comes to electrophysiology which tends to oversample task-modulated excitatory neurons (https://elifesciences.org/articles/69068). I also disagree that "each neuron's connectivity is unique, and vertebrate brains lack 'identified neurons' characteristic of simple organisms. While brains are only eutelic and "nameable" in only the simplest organisms (C. elegans), cell types are exceedingly stereotyped in their connectivity even in mammals and such connectivity defines their computational properties. Thus I don't find the premise the authors state in the next sentence to be undermined ("it seems unlikely that a single neuron's happenstance imprinting of its unique connectivity should generalize across stimuli and animals"). Overall, I found this subsection to rely on false premises and in my opinion it should be removed.
At the suggestion of R2, we removed the paragraph in question. However, we would like to address some points of disagreement:
We agree that electrophysiology, along with spike-sorting, quality metrics, and filtering of low-firing neurons, leads to oversampling of task-modulated neurons. However, when we stated that recordings are random in their local sampling, we were referring to structural (anatomical) randomness, not functional randomness. In other words, the recorded neurons were not specifically targeted (see below).
Electrode arrays, such as Neuropixels, record from hundreds of neurons within a small volume relative to the total number of neurons and the volume of a given brain region. For instance, the paper R2 referenced includes a statement supporting this: “... assuming a 50-μm ‘listening radius’ for the probes (radius of half-cylinder around the probe where the neurons’ spike amplitude is sufficiently above noise to trigger detection) …, the average yield of 116 regular-spiking units/probe (prior to QC filtering) would imply a density of 42,000 neurons/mm³, much lower than the known density of ~90,000 neurons/mm³ for excitatory cells in mouse visual cortex….”
If we take the estimated volume of V1 to be approximately 3 mm³, this region could theoretically be subdivided into multiple cylinders with a 100-μm diameter. While stereotaxic implantation of the probe mitigates some variability, the natural anatomical variability across individual animals introduces spatially random sampling. This was the randomness we were referring to, and thus, we disagree with the assertion that our claim is “almost certainly untrue.”
Additionally, each cortical pyramidal neuron is understood to have ~ 10,000 presynaptic partners. It is highly unlikely that these connections are entirely pre-specified, perfectly replicated within the same animal, and identical across all members of species. Further, there is enormous diversity in the activity properties of even neighboring cells of the same type. Consider pyramidal neurons in V1. Single neuron firing rates are log normally distributed, there are many of combinations of tuning properties (i.e., direction, orientation) that must occupy each point in retinotopic space, and there is powerful experience dependent change in the connectivity of these cells. We suggest that it is inconceivable that any two neurons, even within a small region of V1, have identical connectivity.
Minor Comments:
(1) Although the description of confusion matrices is good from a didactic perspective, some of this could be moved to methods to simplify the paper.
We thank the reviewer for the suggestion. However, given the broad readership of eLife, we gently suggest that confusion matrices are not a trivial and universally appreciated plotting format. For the purpose of accessibility, a brief and didactic 2-sentence description will make the paper far more comprehensible to many readers at little cost to experts.
(2) Figure 3A: It is concluded in their subsequent figure that the longer the measured amount of time, the better the decoding performance. Thus it makes sense why the average PSTHs do not show significant decoding of areas or structures
That is a good observation. However, all features were calculated from the same duration of data, except in Figure 3B, where we tested the effect of duration. The averaged PSTH was calculated from the same length of data as the ISI distribution and binned to have the same number of feature lengths as the ISI distribution (refer to Methods section). Therefore, we interpreted this as an indication of information degradation through averaging, rather than an effect of data length (Line 234 - 237).
(3) Figure 3D: A Gaussian is used to fit the ISI distributions here but ISI distributions do not follow a normal distribution, they follow an inverse gamma distribution.
We agree with the reviewer and we are familiar with the literature that the ISI distribution is best fitted by a gamma family distribution (as a recent, but not earliest example: Li et al. 2018). However, we did not fit a gaussian (or any distribution) to the data, we just calculated the sample mean and variance. Reporting sample mean and variance (or standard deviation) is not something that is only done for Gaussian distributions. They are broadly used metrics that simply have additional intrinsic meaning for Gaussian distributions. We used the schematic illustration in Fig 3D because mean and variance are much more familiar in Gaussian distribution context, but ultimately that does not affect our analyses in Fig 3 E-F. Alternatively, the alpha and beta intrinsic parameters of a gamma distribution could have been used, but they are known by a much smaller portion of neuroscientists.
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(4) Figure 3G: Something is wrong with this figure as each vertical bar is supposed to represent a drifting grating onset but yet, they are all at 5 hz despite the PSTH being purportedly shown at many different frequencies from 1 to 15 hz.
We appreciate your attention to detail, but we are not representing the onset of individual drifting gratings in this. We just meant to represent the overall start\end of the drifting grating session. We did not intend to signal the temporal frequency of the drifting gratings (or the spatial frequency, orientation, or contrast).
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the current reviews.
eLife Assessment
This important and creative study finds that the uplift of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau-via its resultant monsoon system rather than solely its high elevation-has shifted avian migratory directions from a latitudinal to a longitudinal orientation. However, the main claims are incomplete and only partially supported, as the reliance on eBird data-which lacks the resolution to capture population-specific teleconnections-combined with a limited tracking dataset covering only seven species leaves key aspects of the argument underdetermined, and the critical assumption of niche conservatism is not sufficiently foregrounded in the manuscript. More clearly communicating these limitations would significantly enhance the interpretability of the results, ensuring that the major conclusions are presented in the context of these essential caveats.
We appreciate your positive comments and constructive suggestions. We fully acknowledge your concerns about clearly communicating the limitations associated with the data used and analytical assumptions. We will try to get more satellite tracking data of birds migrating across the plateau. We will carefully consider the insights that our paper can deliver and make sure the limitations of our datasets and the critical assumption of niche conservatism are clearly presented. By explicitly clarifying these caveats, we believe the transparency and interpretability of the findings will be much improved.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
The authors have done a good job of responding to the reviewer's comments, and the paper is now much improved.
Again, we thank the reviewer for constructive comments during review.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
I would like to thank the authors for the revision and the input they invested in this study.
We are grateful for your thoughtful feedback and enthusiasms, which will help us improve our manuscript.
With the revised text of the study, my earlier criticism holds, and your arguments about the counterfactual approach are irrelevant to that. The recent rise of the counterfactual approach might likely mirror the fact that there are too many scientists behind their computers, and few go into the field to collect in situ data. Studies like the one presented here are a good intellectual exercise but the real impact is questionable.
We understand your question about the relevance of the counterfactual approach used in our study. Our intent in using a counterfactual scenario (reconstructing migration patterns assuming pre-uplift conditions on the QTP) was to isolate the potential influence of the plateau’s geological history on current migration routes. We agree that such an approach must be used properly. In the revision, we will explicitly clarify why this counterfactual comparison is useful – namely, it provides a theoretical baseline to test how much the QTP’s uplift (and the associated monsoon system) might have redirected migration paths. We acknowledge that the counterfactual results are theoretical and will explicitly emphasise the assumptions involved (e.g. species–environment relationships hold between pre- and post- lift environments) in the main text. Nonetheless, we defend the approach as a valuable study design: it helps generate testable hypotheses about migration (for instance, that the plateau’s monsoon-driven climate, rather than just its elevation, introduces an east–west shift en route). We will also tone down the language around this analysis to avoid overstating its real-world relevance. In summary, we will clarify that the counterfactual analysis is meant to complement, not replace, empirical observations, and we will discuss its limitations so that its role is appropriately bounded in the paper.
All your main conclusions are inferred from published studies on 7! bird species. In addition, spatial sampling in those seven species was not ideal in relation to your target questions. Thus, no matter how fancy your findings look, the basic fact remains that your input data were for 7 bird species only! Your conclusion, “our study provides a novel understanding of how QTP shapes migration patterns of birds” is simply overstretching.
Thank you for your comments. We apologise for any confusion regarding the scope of our dataset. Our main conclusions are not solely derived from seven bird species. Rather, we integrated a full list of 50 bird species that migrate across the QTP and analysed their migratory patterns with eBird data. We studied the factors influencing their choices of migratory routes with seven species that were among the few with available tracking data across the QTP. In this revision, we will clarify the role of these seven species and the rationale for their selection. Additionally, we attempt to include more satellite tracking data to improve spatial coverage, as recommended by the reviewer and editor. Based on discussions with potential collaborators, we will hopefully include a number of at least 10 more species with available tracking data.
The way you respond to my criticism on L 81-93 is something different than what you admit in the rebuttal letter. The text of the ms is silent about the drawbacks and instead highlights your perspective. I understand you; you are trying to sell the story in a nice wrapper. In the rebuttal you state: “we assume species' responses to environments are conservative and their evolution should not discount our findings.” But I do not see that clearly stated in the main text.
Thanks, as suggested we will clearly state the assumptions of niche conservatism in the Introduction.
In your rebuttal, you respond to my criticism of "No matter how good the data eBird provides is, you do not know population-specific connections between wintering and breeding sites" when you responded: ... "we can track the movement of species every week, and capture the breeding and wintering areas for specific populations" I am having a feeling that you either play with words with me or do not understand that from eBird data nobody will be ever able to estimate population-specific teleconnections between breeding and wintering areas. It is simply impossible as you do not track individuals. eBird gives you a global picture per species but not for particular populations. You cannot resolve this critical drawback of your study.
We agree that inferring population-specific migratory connections (teleconnections) from eBird data is challenging and inherently limited. eBird provides occurrence records for species, but it generally cannot distinguish which breeding population an individual bird came from or exactly where it goes for winter. However, in this study we intend to infer broad-scale movement patterns (e.g. general directions and stopover regions) rather than precise one-to-one population linkages. In the revision, we will carefully rephrase those sections to make clear that our inferences are at the species level and at large spatial scales. We will also explicitly state in the Discussion that confirming population connectivity would require targeted tracking or genetic studies, and that our eBird-based analysis can only suggest plausible routes and region-to-region linkages. We will contrast migratory routes identified by using eBird data and satellite tracking for the same species to check their similarity. We argue that, even with its limits, the eBird dataset can still yield useful insights (such as identifying major flyway corridors over the QTP).
I am sorry that you invested so much energy into this study, but I see it as a very limited contribution to understanding the role of a major barrier in shaping migration.
Thank you for recognising our efforts in the study. By integrating both satellite tracking and community-contributed data, we explored how the uplift of the QTP could shape avian migration across the area. We believe our findings provide important insights of how birds balance their responses to large-scale climate change and geological barrier, which yields the most comprehensive picture to date of how the QTP uplift shapes migratory patterns of birds. We will also acknowledge the study’s limitations to ensure that readers understand the context and constraints of our findings.
My modest suggestion for you is: go into the field. Ideally use bird radars along the plateau to document whether the birds shift the directions when facing the barrier.
We appreciate your suggestions to incorporate field tracking or radar studies to strengthen our results. All coauthors have years of field experiences, even on the QTP and Arctic. For example, the tracking data of peregrine falcons (Falco peregrinus) that we will incorporate in the revision are collected with during our own fieldwork in the Arctic for more than six years. We agree that more direct tracking (through GPS tagging or radar) would be an ideal way to validate migration pathways and population connectivity. In this revision, as stated above we will try to more species with satellite tracking data. We will also note that future studies should build on our findings by using dedicated tracking of more individual birds and radar monitoring of migration over the QTP. We will cite recent advances in these techniques and suggest that incorporating more tracking data could further test the hypotheses generated by our analyses.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
L55 "an important animal movement behaviour is.." Is there any unimportant animal movement? I mean this sentence is floppy, empty.
We will rewrite this sentence to remove any ambiguous phrasing.
L 152-154 This sentence is full of nonsense or you misinterpretation. First of all, the issue of inflexible initiation of migration was related to long-distance migrants only! The way you present it mixes apples and oranges (long- and short-distance migrants). It is not "owing to insufficient responses" but due to inherited patterns of when to take off, photoperiod and local conditions.
We will remove the sentence to avoid misinterpretation.
L 158 what is a migration circle? I do not know such a term.
We will amend it as “annual migration cycle”, which is a more common way to describe the yearly round-trip journey between breeding and wintering grounds of birds.
L 193 The way you present and mix capital and income breeding theory with your simulation study is quite tricky and super speculative.
We will present this idea as an inference rather than a conclusion: “This pattern could be consistent with a ‘capital breeding’ strategy — where birds rely on energy reserves acquired before breeding — rather than an ‘income’ strategy that depends on food acquired during breeding. However, we note that this interpretation would require further study.” By adding this caution, we will make it clear that we are not asserting this link as proven fact, only suggesting it as one possible explanation. We will also double-check that the rest of the discussion around this point is framed appropriately.
The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews
eLife Assessment
This study addresses a novel and interesting question about how the rise of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau influenced patterns of bird migration, employing a multi-faceted approach that combines species distribution data with environmental modeling. The findings are valuable for understanding avian migration within a subfield, but the strength of evidence is incomplete due to critical methodological assumptions about historical species-environment correlations, limited tracking data, and insufficient clarity in species selection criteria. Addressing these weaknesses would significantly enhance the reliability and interpretability of the results.
We would like to thank you and two anonymous reviewers for your careful, thoughtful, and constructive feedback on our manuscript. These reviews made us revisit a lot of our assumptions and we believe the paper is much improved as a result. In addition to minor points, we have made three main changes to our manuscript in response to the reviews. First, we addressed the concerns on the assumptions of historical species-environment correlations from perspectives of both theoretical and empirical evidence. Second, we discussed the benefits and limitations of using tracking data in our study and demonstrate how the findings of our study are consolidated with results of previous studies. Third, we clarified our criteria for selecting species in terms of both eBird and tracking data.
Below, we respond to each comment in turn. Once again, we thank you all for your feedback.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Strengths:
This is an interesting topic and a novel theme. The visualisations and presentation are to a very high standard. The Introduction is very well-written and introduces the main concepts well, with a clear logical structure and good use of the literature. The methods are detailed and well described and written in such a fashion that they are transparent and repeatable.
We are appreciative of the reviewer’s careful reading of our manuscript, encouraging comments and constructive suggestions.
Weaknesses:
I only have one major issue, which is possibly a product of the structure requirements of the paper/journal. This relates to the Results and Discussion, line 91 onwards. I understand the structure of the paper necessitates delving immediately into the results, but it is quite hard to follow due to a lack of background information. In comparison to the Methods, which are incredibly detailed, the Results in the main section reads as quite superficial. They provide broad overviews of broad findings but I found it very hard to actually get a picture of the main results in its current form. For example, how the different species factor in, etc.
Yes, it is the journal request to format in this way (Methods follows the Results and Discussion) for the article type of short reports. As suggested, in the revision we have elaborated on details of our findings, in terms of (i) shifts of distribution of avian breeding and wintering areas under the influence of the uplift of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau (Lines 102-116), and (ii) major factors that shape current migration patterns of birds in the plateau (Lines 118-138). We have also better referenced the approaches we used in the study.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The study tries to assess how the rise of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau affected patterns of bird migration between their breeding and wintering sites. They do so by correlating the present distribution of the species with a set of environmental variables. The data on species distributions come from eBird. The main issue lies in the problematic assumption that species correlations between their current distribution and environment were about the same before the rise of the Plateau. There is no ground truthing and the study relies on Movebank data of only 7 species which are not even listed in the study. Similarly, the study does not outline the boundaries of breeding sites NE of the Plateau. Thus it is absolutely unclear potentially which breeding populations it covers.
We are very grateful for the careful review and helpful suggestions. We have revised the manuscript carefully in response to the reviewer’s comments and believe that it is much improved as a result. Below are our point-by-point replies to the comments.
Strengths:
I like the approach for how you combined various environmental datasets for the modelling part.
We appreciate the reviewer’s encouragement.
Weaknesses:
The major weakness of the study lies in the assumption that species correlations between their current distribution and environments found today are back-projected to the far past before the rise of the Q-T Plateau. This would mean that species responses to the environmental cues do not evolve which is clearly not true. Thus, your study is a very nice intellectual exercise of too many ifs.
This is a valid concern. We have addressed this from both the perspectives of the theoretical design of our study and empirical evidence.
First, we agree with the reviewer that species responses to environmental cues might vary over time. Nonetheless, the simulated environments before the uplift of the plateau serve as a counterfactual state in our study. Counterfactual is an important concept to support causation claims by comparing what happened to what would have happened in a hypothetical situation: “If event X had not occurred, event Y would not have occurred” (Lewis 1973). Recent years have seen an increasing application of the counterfactual approach to detect biodiversity change, i.e., comparing diversity between the counterfactual state and real estimates to attribute the factors causing such changes (e.g., Gonzalez et al. 2023). Whilst we do not aim to provide causal inferences for avian distributional change, using the counterfactual approach, we are able to estimate the influence of the plateau uplift by detecting the changes of avian distributions, i.e., by comparing where the birds would have distributed without the plateau to where they currently distributed. We regard the counterfactual environments as a powerful tool for eliminating, to the extent possible, vagueness, as opposed to simply description of current distributions of birds. Therefore, we assume species’ responses to environments are conservative and their evolution should not discount our findings. We have clarified this in the Introduction (Lines 81-93).
Second, we used species distribution modelling to contrast the distributions of birds before and after the uplift of the plateau under the assumption that species tend to keep their ancestral ecological traits over time (i.e., niche conservatism). This indicates a high probability for species to distribute in similar environments wherever suitable. Particularly, considering bird distributions are more likely to be influenced by food resources and vegetation distributions (Qu et al. 2010, Li et al. 2021, Martins et al. 2024), and the available food and vegetation before the uplift can provide suitable habitats for birds (Jia et al. 2020), we believe the findings can provide valuable insights into the influence of the plateau rise on avian migratory patterns. Having said that, we acknowledge other factors, e.g., carbon dioxide concentrations (Zhang et al. 2022), can influence the simulations of environments and our prediction of avian distribution. We have clarified the assumptions and evidence we have for the modelling in Methods (Lines 362-370).
The second major drawback lies in the way you estimate the migratory routes of particular birds. No matter how good the data eBird provides is, you do not know population-specific connections between wintering and breeding sites. Some might overwinter in India, some populations in Africa and you will never know the teleconnections between breeding and wintering sites of particular species. The few available tracking studies (seven!) are too coarse and with limited aspects of migratory connectivity to give answer on the target questions of your study.
We agree with the reviewer that establishing interconnections for birds is important for estimating the migration patterns of birds. We employed a dynamic model to assess their weekly distributions. Thus, we can track the movement of species every week, and capture the breeding and wintering areas for specific populations. That being said, we acknowledge that our approach can be subjected to the patchy sampling of eBird data. In contrast, tracking data can provide detailed information of the movement patterns of species but are limited to small numbers of species due to the considerable costs and time needed. We aimed to adopt the tracking data to examine the influence of focal factors on avian migration patterns, but only seven species, to the best of our ability, were acquired. Moreover, similar results were found in studies that used tracking data to estimate the distribution of breeding and wintering areas of birds in the plateau (e.g., Prosser et al. 2011, Zhang et al. 2011, Zhang et al. 2014, Liu et al. 2018, Kumar et al. 2020, Wang et al. 2020, Pu and Guo 2023, Yu et al. 2024, Zhao et al. 2024). We believe the conclusions based on seven species are rigour, but their implications could be restricted by the number of tracking species we obtained. We have better demonstrated how our findings on breeding and wintering areas of birds are reinforced by other studies reporting the locations of those areas. We have also added a separate caveat section to discuss the limitations stated above (Lines 202-215).
Your set of species is unclear, selection criteria for the 50 species are unknown and variability in their migratory strategies is likely to affect the direction of the effects.
In this revision, we have clarified the selection criteria for the 50 species and outlined the boundaries of the breeding areas of all birds (Lines 243-249). Briefly, we first obtained a full list of birds in the plateau from Prins and Namgail (2017). We then extracted species identified as full migrants in Birdlife International (https://datazone.birdlife.org/species/spcdistPOS) from the full list. Migratory birds may follow a capital or income migratory strategy depending on how much birds ingest endogenous reserved energy gained prior to reproduction. We have added discussions on how these migratory strategies might influence the effects of environment on migratory direction (Lines 183-200).
In addition, the position of the breeding sites relative to the Q-T plate will affect the azimuths and resulting migratory flyways. So in fact, we have no idea what your estimates mean in Figure 2.
We calculated the azimuths not only by the angles between breeding sites and wintering sites but also based on the angles between the stopovers of birds. Therefore, the azimuths are influenced by the relative positions of breeding, wintering and stopover sites. This would minimize the possible errors by just using breeding areas such as the biases caused by relative locations of breeding areas to the QTP as the reviewer pointed. We have better explained this both in the Introduction, Methods and legend of Figure 2.
There is no way one can assess the performance of your statistical exercises, e.g. performances of the models.
As suggested, we have reported Area Under the Curve (AUC) of the Receiver Operator Characteristic (ROC)assess the performances of the models (Table S1). AUC is a threshold-independent measurement for discrimination ability between presence and random points (Phillips et al. 2006). When the AUC value is higher than 0.75, the model was considered to be good (Elith et al. 2006). (Lines 379-383).
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
This is an interesting topic and a novel theme. The visualisations and presentation are to a very high standard. The Introduction is very well-written and introduces the main concepts well, with a clear logical structure and good use of the literature. The Methods are detailed and well described and written in such a fashion that they are transparent and repeatable.
I only have one major issue, which is possibly a product of the structure requirements of the paper/journal. With the Results and Discussion, line 91 onwards. I understand the structure of the paper necessitates delving immediately into the results, but it is quite hard to follow due to a lack of background information. In comparison to the Methods, which are incredibly detailed, the Results in the main section read quite superficial. They provide broad overviews of broad findings but I found it very hard to actually get a picture of the main results in its current form. For example, how the different species factor in, etc.
Please see our responses above.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
Methodological issues:
Line 219 Why have you selected only 64 species and what were the selection criteria?
We have clarified the selection criteria (Lines 243-248). Briefly, we first obtained a full list of birds in the plateau from Prins and Namgail (2017). We then extracted species identified as full migrants in Birdlife International (https://datazone.birdlife.org/species/spcdistPOS) from the full list.
Minor:
Line 219 eBird has very uneven distribution, especially in vast areas of Russia. How can your exercise on Lines 232-238 overcome this issue?
Yes, eBird data can be biased due to patchy sampling and variation of observers’ skills in identifying species. To address this issue, we have developed an adaptive spatial-temporal modelling (stemflow; Chen et al. 2024) to correct the imbalance distribution of data and modelled the observer experience to address the bias in recognising species. The stemflow was developed based on a machine learning modelling framework (AdaSTEM) which leverages the spatio-temporal adjacency information of sample points to model occurrence or abundance of species at different scales. It has been frequently used in modelling eBird data (Fink et al. 2013, Johnston et al. 2015, Fink et al. 2020) and has been proven to be efficient and advanced in multi-scale spatiotemporal data modelling. We have better explained this (Lines 251-270; Lines 307-321).
Line 54 This sentence sounds very empty and in fact does not tell us much.
We have adjusted this sentenced to “Animal movement underpins species’ spatial distributions and ecosystem processes”.
Line 55 Again a sentence that implies a causality of the annual cycle to make the species migrate. It does not make sense.
We have revised this sentence as “An important animal movement behaviour is migrating between breeding and wintering grounds”.
Line 58 How is our fascination with migratory journeys related to the present article? I think this line is empty.
We have changed this sentence to “Those migratory journeys have intrigued a body of different approaches and indicators to describe and model migration, including migratory direction, speed, timing, distance, and staging periods”.
Figure 1 - ABC insets are OK, but a combination of lati- and longitudinal patterns is possible, e.g. in species with conservative strategies or for whatever other reason.
Thank you for the suggestion. We kept the ABC insets rather than combining them together as we believe this can deliver a clear structure of influence of QTP uplift under different scenarios.
The legend to Figure 2 is not self-explanatory. Please make it clear what the response variable is and its units. The first line of the legend should read something like The influence of environmental factors on the direction of avian migration.
Thank you. We have amended the legends of Figure 2 as suggested:
“Figure 2. The influence of environmental factors on the direction of avian migration. Migratory directions are calculated based on the azimuths between each adjacent stopover, breeding and wintering areas for each species. We employ multivariate linear regression models under the Bayesian framework to measure the correlation between environmental factors and avian migratory directions. Wind represents the wind cost calculated by wind connectivity. Vegetation is measured by the proportion of average vegetation cover in each pixel (~1.9° in latitude by 2.5° in longitude). Temperature is the average annual temperature. Precipitation is the average yearly precipitation. All environmental layers are obtained using the Community Earth System Model. West QTP, central QTP, and East QTP denote areas in the areas west (longitude < 73°E), central (73°E ≤ longitude < 105°E), and east of (longitude ≥ 105°E) the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, respectively.”
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Author response:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Weaknesses:
(1) The manuscript's logical flow is challenging and hard to follow, and key arguments could be more clearly structured, particularly in transitions between mechanistic components.
We will revise our manuscript so as to make it easy to follow the logical flow in transitions between mechanistic components.
(2) The causality between stress-induced α2A-AR internalization and the enhanced MAO-A remains unclear. Direct experimental evidence is needed to determine whether α2A-AR internalization itself or Ca<sup>2+</sup> drives MAO-A activation, and how they activate MAO-A should be considered.
We believe that the causality between stress-induced α2A-AR internalization and the enhancement of MAO-A is clearly demonstrated by our current experiments, while our explanations may be improved by making them easier to understand especially for those who are not expert on electrophysiology.
Firstly, it is well established that autoinhibition in LC neurons is mediated by α2A-AR coupled-GIRK (Arima et al., 1998, J Physiol; Williams et al., 1985, Neuroscience). We found that spike frequency adaptation in LC neurons was also mediated by α2A-AR coupled GIRK-I (Fig. 1A-I), and that α2A-AR coupled GIRK-I underwent [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub>-dependent rundown (Figs. 2, S1, S2), leading to an abolishment of spike-frequency adaptation (Figs. S4). [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub>-dependent rundown of α2A-AR coupled GIRK-I was prevented by barbadin (Fig 2G-J), which prevents the internalization of G-protein coupled receptor (GPCR) channels.
Abolishment of spike frequency adaptation itself, i.e., “increased spike activity” can increase [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> because [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> is entirely dependent on the spike activity as shown by Ca<sup>2+</sup> imaging method in Figure S3.
Thus, α2A-AR internalization can increase [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> through the abolishment of autoinhibition or spike frequency adaptation, and a [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> increase drives MAO-A activation as reported previously (Cao et al., 2007, BMC Neurosci). The mechanism how Ca<sup>2+</sup> activates MAO-A is beyond the scope of the current study.
Our study just focused on the mechanism how chronic or sever stress can cause persistent overexcitation and how it results in LC degeneration.
(3) The connection between α2A-AR internalization and increased cytosolic NA levels lacks direct quantification, which is necessary to validate the proposed mechanism.
Direct quantification of the relationship between α2A-AR internalization and increased cytosolic NA levels may not be possible, and may not be necessarily needed to be demonstrated as explained below.
The internalization of α2A-AR can increase [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> through the abolishment of autoinhibition or spike frequency adaptation, and [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> increases can facilitate NA autocrine (Huang et al., 2007), similar to the transmitter release from nerve terminals (Kaeser & Regehr, 2014, Annu Rev Physiol).
Autocrine released NA must be re-uptaken by NAT (NA transporter), which is firmly established (Torres et al., 2003, Nat Rev Neurosci). Re-uptake of NA by NAT is the only source of intracellular NA, and NA re-uptake by NAT should be increased as the internalization of NA biding site (α2A-AR) progresses in association with [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> increases (see page 11, lines 334-336).
Thus, the connection between α2A-AR internalization and increased cytosolic NA levels is logically compelling, and the quantification of such connection may not be possible at present (see the response to the comment made by the Reviewer #1 as Recommendations for the authors (2) and beyond the scope of our current study.
(4) The chronic stress model needs further validation, including measurements of stress-induced physiological changes (e.g., corticosterone levels) to rule out systemic effects that may influence LC activity. Additional behavioral assays for spatial memory impairment should also be included, as a single behavioral test is insufficient to confirm memory dysfunction.
It is well established that restraint stress (RS) increases corticosterone levels depending on the period of RS (García-Iglesias et al., 2014, Neuropharmacology), although we are not reluctant to measure the corticosterone levels. In addition, there are numerous reports that showed the increased activity of LC neurons in response to various stresses (Valentino et al., 1983; Valentino and Foote, 1988; Valentino et al., 2001; McCall et al., 2015), as described in the text (page 4, lines 96-98). Measurement of cortisol levels may not be able to rule out systemic effects of CRS on the whole brain.
We had already done another behavioral test using elevated plus maze (EPM) test.
By combining the two tests, it may be possible to more accurately evaluate the results of Y-maze test by differentiating the memory impairment from anxiety. However, the results obtained by these behavioral tests are just supplementary to our current aim to elucidate the cellular mechanisms for the accumulation of cytosolic free NA. Its subsequent anxiety and memory impairment are just supplementary to our current study. We will soften the implication of anxiety and memory impairment.
(5) Beyond b-arrestin binding, the role of alternative internalization pathways (e.g., phosphorylation, ubiquitination) in α2A-AR desensitization should be considered, as current evidence is insufficient to establish a purely Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependent mechanism.
We can hardly agree with this comment.
It was clearly demonstrated that repeated application of NA itself did not cause desensitization of α2A-AR (Figure S1A-D), and that the blockade of b-arrestin binding by barbadin completely suppressed the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependent downregulation of GIRK (Fig. 2G-K). These observations can clearly rule out the possible involvement of phosphorylation or ubiquitination for the desensitization.
Not only the barbadin experiment, but also the immunohistochemistry and western blot method clearly demonstrated the decrease of α2A-AR expression on the cell membrane (Fig. 3).
Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependent mechanism of the rundown of GIRK was convincingly demonstrated by a set of different protocols of voltage-clamp study, in which Ca<sup>2+</sup> influx was differentially increased. The rundown of GIRK-I was orderly potentiated or accelerated by increasing the number of positive command pulses each of which induces Ca<sup>2+</sup> influx (compare Figure S1E-J, Figure S2A-E and Figure S2F-K along with Fig. 2A-F). The presence or absence of Ca<sup>2+</sup> currents and the amount of Ca<sup>2+</sup> currents determined the trend of the rundown of GIRK-I (Figs. 2, S1 and S2). Because the same voltage protocol hardly caused the rundown when it did not induce Ca<sup>2+</sup> currents in the absence of TEA (Fig. S1F; compare with Fig. 2B), blockade of Ca<sup>2+</sup> currents by nifedipine would not be so beneficial.
We believe the series of voltage-clamp protocols convincingly demonstrated the orderly involvement of [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> in accelerating the rundown of GIRK-I.
(6) NA leakage for free NA accumulation is also influenced by NAT or VMAT2. Please discuss the potential role of VMAT2 in NA accumulation within the LC in AD.
We will discuss the role of VMAT2 in NA accumulation, especially when VMAT2 was impaired. Indeed, it has been demonstrated that reduced VMAT2 levels increased susceptibility to neuronal damage: VMAT2 heterozygote mice displayed increased vulnerability to MPTP as evidenced by reductions in nigral dopamine cell counts (Takahashi et al, 1997, PNAS). Thus, when the activity of VMAT2 in LC neurons were impaired by chronic restraint stress, cytosolic NA levels in LC neurons would increase. We will add such discussion in the revised manuscript.
(7) Since the LC is a small brain region, proper staining is required to differentiate it from surrounding areas. Please provide a detailed explanation of the methodology used to define LC regions and how LC neurons were selected among different cell types in brain slices for whole-cell recordings.
LC neurons were identified immunohistochemically and electrophysiologically as we previously reported (see Fig. 2 in Front. Cell. Neurosci. 16:841239. doi: 10.3389/fncel.2022.841239). A delayed spiking pattern in response to depolarizing pulses (Figure S9) applied at a hyperpolarized membrane potential was commonly observed in LC neurons in many studies (Masuko et al., 1986; van den Pol et al., 2002; Wagner-Altendorf et al., 2019).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Weaknesses:
(1) The manuscript reports that chronic stress for 5 days increases MAO-A levels in LC neurons, leading to the production of DOPEGAL, activation of AEP, and subsequent tau cleavage into the tau N368 fragment, ultimately contributing to neuronal damage. However, the authors used wild-type C57BL/6 mice, and previous literature has indicated that AEP-mediated tau cleavage in wild-type mice is minimal and generally insufficient to cause significant behavioral alterations. Please clarify and discuss this apparent discrepancy.
In our study, normalized relative value of AEP-mediated tau cleavage (Tau N368) was much higher in CRS mice than non-stress wild-type mice. It is not possible to compare AEP-mediated tau cleavage between our non-stress wild type mice and those observed in previous study (Zhang et al., 2014, Nat Med), because band intensity is largely dependent on the exposure time and its numerical value is the normalized relative value. In view of such differences, our apparent band expression might have been intensified to detect small changes.
(2) It is recommended that the authors include additional experiments to examine the effects of different durations and intensities of stress on MAO-A expression and AEP activity. This would strengthen the understanding of stress-induced biochemical changes and their thresholds.
GIRK rundown was almost saturated after 3-day RS and remained the same in 5-day RS mice (Fig. 4A-G), which is consistent with the downregulation of α2A-AR and GIRK1 expression by 3-day RS (Fig. 3C, F and G; Fig. 4J and K). However, we examine the protein levels of MAO-A, pro/active-AEP and Tau N368 only in 5-day RS mice without examining in 3-day RS mice. This is because we considered the possibility that 3-day RS may be insufficient to induce changes in MAO-A, AEP and Tau N368 and some period of high [Ca<sup>2+</sup>]<sub>i</sub> condition may be necessary to induce such changes. We will discuss this in the revised manuscript.
(3) Please clarify the rationale for the inconsistent stress durations used across Figures 3, 4, and 5. In some cases, a 3-day stress protocol is used, while in others, a 5-day protocol is applied. This discrepancy should be addressed to ensure clarity and experimental consistency.
Please see our response to the comment (2).
(4) The abbreviation "vMAT2" is incorrectly formatted. It should be "VMAT2," and the full name (vesicular monoamine transporter 2) should be provided at first mention.
Thank you for your suggestion. We will revise accordingly.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
A subset of cancer cells attain replicative immortality by activating the ALT mechanism of telomere maintenance, which is currently the subject of intense research due to its potential for novel targeted therapies. Key questions remain in the field, such as whether ALT telomeres adhere to the same end-protection rules as telomeres in telomerase-expressing cells, or if ALT telomeres possess unique properties that could be targeted with new, less toxic cancer therapies. Both questions, along with the approaches developed by the authors to address them, are highly relevant.
Strengths:
Since chromosome ends resemble one-ended DSBs, the authors hypothesized that the previously described END-SEQ protocol could be used to accurately sequence the 5' end of telomeres on the C-rich strand. As expected, most reads corresponded to the C-rich strand and, confirming a previous observation by de Lange's group, most chromosomes end with the ATC-5' sequence, a feature that was found to be dependent on POT1 and to be conserved in both human ALT cells and mouse cells. Through a complementary method, S1-END-SEQ, the authors further explored ssDNA regions at telomeres, providing new insights into the characteristics of ALT telomeres. The study is original, the experiments were well-controlled and excellently executed.
Weaknesses:
Overall, the discussion section is lacking depth and should be expanded and a few additional experiments should be performed to clarify the results.
(1) The finding that the abundance of variant telomeric repeats (VTRs) within the final 30 nucleotides of the telomeric 5' ends is similar in both telomerase-expressing and ALT cells is intriguing, but the authors do not address this result. Could the authors provide more insight into this observation and suggest potential explanations? As the frequency of VTRs does not seem to be upregulated in POT1-depleted cells, what then drives the appearance of VTRs on the C-strand at the very end of telomeres? Is CST-Pola complex responsible?
(2) The authors also note that, in ALT cells, the frequency of VTRs in the first 30 nucleotides of the S1-END-SEQ reads is higher compared to END-SEQ, but this finding is not discussed either. Do the authors think that the presence of ssDNA regions is associated with the VTRs? Along this line, what is the frequency of VTRs in the END-SEQ analysis of TRF1-FokI-expressing ALT cells? Is it also increased? Has TRF1-FokI been applied to telomerase-expressing cells to compare VTR frequencies at internal sites between ALT and telomerase-expressing cells?
Finally, in these experiments (S1-END-SEQ or END-SEQ in TRF1-Fok1), is the frequency of VTRs the same on both the C- and the G-rich strands? It is possible that the sequences are not fully complementary in regions where G4 structures form.
(3) Based on the ratio of C-rich to G-rich reads in the S1-END-SEQ experiment, the authors estimate that ALT cells contain at least 3-5 ssDNA regions per chromosome end. While the calculation is understandable, this number could be discussed further to consider the possibility that the observed ratios (of roughly 0.5) might result from the presence of extrachromosomal DNA species, such as C-circles. The observed increase in the ratio of C-rich to G-rich reads in BLM-depleted cells supports this hypothesis, as BLM depletion suppresses C-circle formation in U2OS cells. To test this, the authors should examine the impact of POLD3 depletion on the C-rich/G-rich read ratio. Alternatively, they could separate high-molecular-weight (HMW) DNA from low-molecular-weight DNA in ALT cells and repeat the S1-END-SEQ in the HMW fraction.
(4) What is the authors' perspective on the presence of ssDNA at ALT telomeres? Do they attribute this to replication stress? It would be helpful for the authors to repeat the S1-END-SEQ in telomerase-expressing cells with very long telomeres, such as HeLa1.3 cells, to determine if ssDNA is a specific feature of ALT cells or a result of replication stress. The increased abundance of G4 structures at telomeres in HeLa1.3 cells (as shown in J. Wong's lab) may indicate that replication stress is a factor. Similar to Wong's work, it would be valuable to compare the C-rich/G-rich read ratios in HeLa1.3 cells to those in ALT cells with similar telomeric DNA content.
Minor Points:
(1) The Y-axes of Figure 4 should be relabeled to account for the G-strand reads. Additionally, statistical analyses are absent in Figure 4 and Figure S3.
(2) A careful proofreading of the manuscript is necessary.
Author response:
We thank the reviewers for their thoughtful and generous assessment of our work. Overall, the reviewers found our work to be novel and relevant. In particular: reviewer #1 found that our manuscript “It is timely and highly valuable for the telomere field” reviewer #2 stated, “Overall, I find this manuscript worthy of publication, as the optimized END-seq methods described here will likely be widely utilized in the telomere field.” Reviewer #3 stated that “The study is original, the experiments were well-controlled and excellently executed.”
We are extremely grateful for these comments and want to thank all the reviewers and the editors for their time and effort in reviewing our work.
The reviewers had a number of suggestions to improve our work. We have addressed all the points as highlighted in the point-by-point responses below.
Reviewer 1:
One minor question would be whether the authors could expand more on the application of END-Seq to examine the processive steps of the ALT mechanism? Can they speculate if the ssDNA detected in ALT cells might be an intermediate generated during BIR (i.e., is the ssDNA displaced strand during BIR) or a lesion? Furthermore, have the authors assessed whether ssDNA lesions are due to the loss of ATRX or DAXX, either of which can be mutated in the ALT setting?
We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful questions regarding the application of our assays to investigate the nature of the ssDNA detected in ALT telomeres. Our primary aim in this study was to establish the utility of END-seq and S1-END-seq in telomere biology and to demonstrate their applicability across both ALT-positive and -negative contexts. We agree that exploring the mechanistic origins of ssDNA would be highly informative, and we anticipate that END-seq–based approaches will be well suited for such future studies. However, it remains unclear whether the resolution of S1-END-seq is sufficient to capture transient intermediates such as those generated during BIR. We have now included a brief speculative statement in the revised discussion addressing the potential nature of ssDNA at telomeres in ALT cells.
Reviewer #2:
How can we be sure that all telomeres are equally represented? The authors seem to assume that END-seq captures all chromosome ends equally, but can we be certain of this? While I do not see an obvious way to resolve this experimentally, I recommend discussing this potential bias more extensively in the manuscript.
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point. END-seq and S1-END-seq are unbiased methods designed to capture either double-stranded or single-stranded DNA that can be converted into blunt-ended double-stranded DNA and ligated to a capture oligo. As such, if a subset of telomeres cannot be processed using this approach, it is possible that these telomeres may be underrepresented or lost. However, to our knowledge, there are no proposed telomeric structures that would prevent capture using this method. For example, even if a subset of telomeres possesses a 5′ overhang, it would still be captured by END-seq. Indeed, we observed the consistent presence of the 5′-ATC motif across multiple cell lines and species (human, mouse, and dog). More importantly, we detected predictable and significant changes in sequence composition when telomere ends were experimentally altered, either in vivo (via POT1 depletion) or in vitro (via T7 exonuclease treatment). Together, these findings support the robustness of the method in capturing a representative and dynamic view of telomeres across different systems.
That said, we have now included a brief statement in the revised discussion acknowledging that we cannot fully exclude the possibility that a subset of telomeres may be missed due to unusual or uncharacterized structures
I believe Figures 1 and 2 should be merged.
We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion to merge Figures 1 and 2. However, we feel that keeping them as separate figures better preserves the logical flow of the manuscript and allows the validation of END-seq and its application to be presented with appropriate clarity and focus. We hope the reviewer agrees that this layout enhances the clarity and interpretability of the data.
Scale bars should be added to all microscopy figures.
We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have now added scale bars to all the microscopy panels in the figures and included the scale details in the figure legends.
Reviewer #3:
Overall, the discussion section is lacking depth and should be expanded and a few additional experiments should be performed to clarify the results.
We thank the reviewer for the suggestions. Based on this reviewer’s comments and comments for the other reviewers, we incorporated several points into the discussion. As a result, we hope that we provide additional depth to our conclusions.
(1) The finding that the abundance of variant telomeric repeats (VTRs) within the final 30 nucleotides of the telomeric 5' ends is similar in both telomerase-expressing and ALT cells is intriguing, but the authors do not address this result. Could the authors provide more insight into this observation and suggest potential explanations? As the frequency of VTRs does not seem to be upregulated in POT1-depleted cells, what then drives the appearance of VTRs on the C-strand at the very end of telomeres? Is CST-Pola complex responsible?
The reviewer raises a very interesting and relevant point. We are hesitant at this point to speculate on why we do not see a difference in variant repeats in ALT versus non-ALT cells, since additional data would be needed. One possibility is that variant repeats in ALT cells accumulate stochastically within telomeres but are selected against when they are present at the terminal portion of chromosome ends. However, to prove this hypothesis, we would need error-free long-read technology combined with END-seq. We feel that developing this approach would be beyond the scope of this manuscript.
(2) The authors also note that, in ALT cells, the frequency of VTRs in the first 30 nucleotides of the S1-END-SEQ reads is higher compared to END-SEQ, but this finding is not discussed either. Do the authors think that the presence of ssDNA regions is associated with the VTRs? Along this line, what is the frequency of VTRs in the END-SEQ analysis of TRF1-FokI-expressing ALT cells? Is it also increased? Has TRF1-FokI been applied to telomerase-expressing cells to compare VTR frequencies at internal sites between ALT and telomerase-expressing cells?
Similarly to what is discussed above, short reads have the advantage of being very accurate but do not provide sufficient length to establish the relative frequency of VTRs across the whole telomere sequence. The TRF1-FokI experiment is a good suggestion, but it would still be biased toward non-variant repeats due to the TRF1-binding properties. We plan to address these questions in a future study involving long-read sequencing and END-seq capture of telomeres.
Finally, in these experiments (S1-END-SEQ or END-SEQ in TRF1-Fok1), is the frequency of VTRs the same on both the C- and the G-rich strands? It is possible that the sequences are not fully complementary in regions where G4 structures form.
We thank the reviewer for this observation. While we do observe a higher frequency of variant telomeric repeats (VTRs) in the first 30 nucleotides of S1-END-seq reads compared to END-seq in ALT cells, we are currently unable to determine whether this difference is significant, as an appropriate control or matched normalization strategy for this comparison is lacking. Therefore, we refrain from overinterpreting the biological relevance of this observation.
The reviewer is absolutely correct. Our calculation did not exclude the possibility of extrachromosomal DNA as a source of telomeric ssDNA. We have now addressed this point in our discussion.
The reviewer is correct in pointing out that we still do not know what causes ssDNA at telomeres in ALT cells. Replication stress seems the most logical explanation based on the work of many labs in the field. However, our data did not reveal any significant difference in the levels of ssDNA at telomeres in non-ALT cells based on telomere length. We used the HeLa1.2.11 cell line (now clarified in the Materials section), which is the parental line of HeLa1.3 and has similarly long telomeres (~20 kb vs. ~23 kb). Despite their long telomeres and potential for replication-associated challenges such as G-quadruplex formation, HeLa1.2.11 cells did not exhibit the elevated levels of telomeric ssDNA that we observed in ALT cells (Figure 4B). Additional experiments are needed to map the occurrence of ssDNA at telomeres in relation to progression toward ALT.
(3) Based on the ratio of C-rich to G-rich reads in the S1-END-SEQ experiment, the authors estimate that ALT cells contain at least 3-5 ssDNA regions per chromosome end. While the calculation is understandable, this number could be discussed further to consider the possibility that the observed ratios (of roughly 0.5) might result from the presence of extrachromosomal DNA species, such as C-circles. The observed increase in the ratio of C-rich to G-rich reads in BLM-depleted cells supports this hypothesis, as BLM depletion suppresses C-circle formation in U2OS cells. To test this, the authors should examine the impact of POLD3 depletion on the C-rich/G-rich read ratio. Alternatively, they could separate high-molecular-weight (HMW) DNA from low-molecular-weight DNA in ALT cells and repeat the S1-END-SEQ in the HMW fraction.
The reviewer is absolutely correct. Our calculation did not exclude the possibility of extrachromosomal DNA as a source of telomeric ssDNA. We have now addressed this point in our discussion.
(4) What is the authors' perspective on the presence of ssDNA at ALT telomeres? Do they attribute this to replication stress? It would be helpful for the authors to repeat the S1-END-SEQ in telomerase-expressing cells with very long telomeres, such as HeLa1.3 cells, to determine if ssDNA is a specific feature of ALT cells or a result of replication stress. The increased abundance of G4 structures at telomeres in HeLa1.3 cells (as shown in J. Wong's lab) may indicate that replication stress is a factor. Similar to Wong's work, it would be valuable to compare the C-rich/G-rich read ratios in HeLa1.3 cells to those in ALT cells with similar telomeric DNA content.
The reviewer is correct in pointing out that we still do not know what causes ssDNA at telomeres in ALT cells. Replication stress seems the most logical explanation based on the work of many labs in the field. However, our data did not reveal any significant difference in the levels of ssDNA at telomeres in non-ALT cells based on telomere length. We used the HeLa1.2.11 cell line (now clarified in the Materials section), which is the parental line of HeLa1.3 and has similarly long telomeres (~20 kb vs. ~23 kb). Despite their long telomeres and potential for replication-associated challenges such as G-quadruplex formation, HeLa1.2.11 cells did not exhibit the elevated levels of telomeric ssDNA that we observed in ALT cells (Figure 4B). Additional experiments are needed to map the occurrence of ssDNA at telomeres in relation to progression toward ALT.
Finally, Reviewer #3 raises a list of minor points:
(1) The Y-axes of Figure 4 have been relabeled to account for the G-strand reads.
(2) Statistical analyses have been added to the figures where applicable.
(3) The manuscript has been carefully proofread to improve clarity and consistency throughout the text and figure legends.
(4) We have revised the text to address issues related to the lack of cross-referencing between the supplementary figures and their corresponding legends.
Individual variables
falta lámina de transición de "Methods"
Y acá no hablaría de variables, ya que sigues en el nivel conceptual. Individual factors
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Y abajo, otro punto sobre esto que te permita hablar sobre la relevancia de abrir esta área de investigación
BRÈVE D'INFORMATION : Baromètre de l'esprit critique, 3e édition (2024)
Source : Excerpts from "Baromètre de l'esprit critique, 3e édition - Printemps de l'esprit critique" (Universcience, France Info, La Croix, L'Express, Opinionway)
Date de la publication/présentation : Printemps 2024
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Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
This study examined the interaction between two key cortical regions in the mouse brain involved in goal-directed movements, the rostral forelimb area (RFA) - considered a premotor region involved in movement planning, and the caudal forelimb area (CFA) - considered a primary motor region that more directly influences movement execution. The authors ask whether there exists a hierarchical interaction between these regions, as previously hypothesized, and focus on a specific definition of hierarchy - examining whether the neural activity in the premotor region exerts a larger functional influence on the activity in the primary motor area than vice versa. They examine this question using advanced experimental and analytical methods, including localized optogenetic manipulation of neural activity in either region while measuring both the neural activity in the other region and EMG signals from several muscles involved in the reaching movement, as well as simultaneous electrophysiology recordings from both regions in a separate cohort of animals.
The findings presented show that localized optogenetic manipulation of neural activity in either RFA or CFA resulted in similarly short-latency changes in the muscle output and in firing rate changes in the other region. However, perturbation of RFA led to a larger absolute change in the neural activity of CFA neurons. The authors interpret these findings as evidence for reciprocal, but asymmetrical, influence between the regions, suggesting some degree of hierarchy in which RFA has a greater effect on the neural activity in CFA. They go on to examine whether this asymmetry can also be observed in simultaneously recorded neural activity patterns from both regions. They use multiple advanced analysis methods that either identify latent components at the population level or measure the predictability of firing rates of single neurons in one region using firing rates of single neurons in the other region. Interestingly, the main finding across these analyses seems to be that both regions share highly similar components that capture a high degree of variability of the neural activity patterns in each region. Single units' activity from either region could be predicted to a similar degree from the activity of single units in the other region, without a clear division into a leading area and a lagging area, as one might expect to find in a simple hierarchical interaction. However, the authors find some evidence showing a slight bias towards leading activity in RFA. Using a two-region neural network model that is fit to the summed neural activity recorded in the different experiments and to the summed muscle output, the authors show that a network with constrained (balanced) weights between the regions can still output the observed measured activities and the observed asymmetrical effects of the optogenetic manipulations, by having different within-region local weights. These results put into question whether previous and current findings that demonstrate asymmetry in the output of regions can be interpreted as evidence for asymmetrical (and thus hierarchical) inputs between regions, emphasizing the challenges in studying interactions between any brain regions.
Strengths:
The experiments and analyses performed in this study are comprehensive and provide a detailed examination and comparison of neural activity recorded simultaneously using dense electrophysiology probes from two main motor regions that have been the focus of studies examining goal-directed movements. The findings showing reciprocal effects from each region to the other, similar short-latency modulation of muscle output by both regions, and similarity of neural activity patterns without a clear lead/lag interaction, are convincing and add to the growing body of evidence that highlight the complexity of the interactions between multiple regions in the motor system and go against a simple feedforward-like network and dynamics. The neural network model complements these findings and adds an important demonstration that the observed asymmetry can, in theory, also arise from differences in local recurrent connections and not necessarily from different input projections from one region to the other. This sheds an important light on the multiple factors that should be considered when studying the interaction between any two brain regions, with a specific emphasis on the role of local recurrent connections, that should be of interest to the general neuroscience community.
Weaknesses:
While the similarity of the activity patterns across regions and lack of a clear leading/lagging interaction are interesting observations that are mostly supported by the findings presented (however, see comment below for lack of clarity in CCA/PLS analyses), the main question posed by the authors - whether there exists an endogenous hierarchical interaction between RFA and CFA - seems to be left largely open.
The authors note that there is currently no clear evidence of asymmetrical reciprocal influence between naturally occurring neural activity patterns of the two regions, as previous attempts have used non-natural electrical stimulation, lesions, or pharmacological inactivation. The use of acute optogenetic perturbations does not seem to be vastly different in that aspect, as it is a non-natural stimulation of inhibitory interneurons that abruptly perturbs the ongoing dynamics.
We do believe that our optogenetic inactivation identifies a causal interaction between the endogenous activity patterns in the excitatory projection neurons, which we have largely silenced, and the downstream endogenous activity that is perturbed. The effect in the downstream region results directly from the silencing of activity in the excitatory projection neurons that mediate each region’s interaction with other regions. Here we have performed a causal intervention common in biology: a loss-of-function experiment. Such experiments generally reveal that a causal interaction of some sort is present, but often do not clarify much about the nature of the interaction, as is true in our case. By showing that a silencing of endogenous activity in one motor cortical region causes a significant change to the endogenous activity in another, we establish a causal relationship between these activity patterns. This is analogous to knocking out the gene for a transcription factor and observing causal effects on the expression of other genes that depend on it.
Moreover, our experiments are, to our knowledge, the first that localize a causal relationship to endogenous activity in motor cortex at a particular point during a motor behavior. Lesion and pharmacological or chemogenetic inactivation have long-lasting effects, and so their consequences on firing in other regions cannot be attributed to a short-latency influence of activity at a particular point during movement. Moreover, the involvement of motor cortex in motor learning and movement preparation/initiation complicates the interpretation of these consequences in relation to movement execution, as disturbance to processes on which execution depends can impede execution itself. Stimulation experiments generate spiking in excitatory projection neurons that is not endogenous.
That said, we would agree that the form of the causal interaction between RFA and CFA remains unaddressed by our results. These results do not expose how the silenced activity patterns affect activity in the downstream region, just as knocking out a transcription factor gene does not expose how the transcription factor influences the expression of other genes. To show evidence for a specific type of interaction dynamics between RFA and CFA, a different sort of experiment would be necessary. See Jazayeri and Afraz, Neuron, 2017 for more on this issue.
Furthermore, the main finding that supports a hierarchical interaction is a difference in the absolute change of firing rates as a result of the optogenetic perturbation, a finding that is based on a small number of animals (N = 3 in each experimental group), and one which may be difficult to interpret.
Though N = 3, we do show statistical significance. Moreover, using three replicates is not uncommon in biological experiments that require a large technical investment.
As the authors nicely demonstrate in their neural network model, the two regions may differ in the strength of local within-region inhibitory connections. Could this theoretically also lead to a difference in the effect of the artificial light stimulation of the inhibitory interneurons on the local population of excitatory projection neurons, driving an asymmetrical effect on the downstream region?
We (Miri et al., Neuron, 2017) and others (Guo et al., Neuron, 2014) have shown that the effect of this inactivation on excitatory neurons in CFA is a near-complete silencing (90-95% within 20 ms). There thus is not much room for the effects on projection neurons in RFA to be much larger. We have measured these local effects in RFA as part of other work (Kristl et al., biorxiv, 2025), verifying that the effects on RFA projection neuron firing are not larger.
Moreover, the manipulation was performed upon the beginning of the reaching movement, while the premotor region is often hypothesized to exert its main control during movement preparation, and thus possibly show greater modulation during that movement epoch. It is not clear if the observed difference in absolute change is dependent on the chosen time of optogenetic stimulation and if this effect is a general effect that will hold if the stimulation is delivered during different movement epochs, such as during movement preparation.
We agree that the dependence of RFA-CFA interactions on movement phase would be interesting to address in subsequent experiments. While a strong interpretation of lesion results might lead to a hypothesis that premotor influence on primary motor cortex is local to, or stronger during, movement preparation as opposed to execution, at present there is to our knowledge no empirical support from interventional experiments for this hypothesis. Moreover, existing results from analysis of activity in these two regions have produced conflicting results on the strength of interaction between these regions during preparation. Compare for example BachschmidRomano et al., eLife, 2023 to Kaufman et al., Nature Neuroscience, 2014.
That said, this lesion interpretation would predict the same asymmetry we have observed from perturbations at the beginning of a reach - a larger effect of RFA on CFA than vice versa.
Another finding that is not clearly interpretable is in the analysis of the population activity using CCA and PLS. The authors show that shifting the activity of one region compared to the other, in an attempt to find the optimal leading/lagging interaction, does not affect the results of these analyses. Assuming the activities of both regions are better aligned at some unknown groundtruth lead/lag time, I would expect to see a peak somewhere in the range examined, as is nicely shown when running the same analyses on a single region's activity. If the activities are indeed aligned at zero, without a clear leading/lagging interaction, but the results remain similar when shifting the activities of one region compared to the other, the interpretation of these analyses is not clear.
Our results in this case were definitely surprising. Many share the intuition that there should be a lag at which the correlations in activity between regions may be strongest. The similarity in alignment across lags we observed might be expected if communication between regions occurs over a range of latencies as a result of dependence on a broad diversity of synaptic paths that connect neurons. In the Discussion, we offer an explanation of how to reconcile these findings with the seemingly different picture presented by DLAG.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
While technical advances have enabled large-scale, multi-site neural recordings, characterizing inter-regional communication and its behavioral relevance remains challenging due to intrinsic properties of the brain such as shared inputs, network complexity, and external noise. This work by Saiki-Ishkawa et al. examines the functional hierarchy between premotor (PM) and primary motor (M1) cortices in mice during a directional reaching task. The authors find some evidence consistent with an asymmetric reciprocal influence between the regions, but overall, activity patterns were highly similar and equally predictive of one another. These results suggest that motor cortical hierarchy, though present, is not fully reflected in firing patterns alone.
Strengths:
Inferring functional hierarchies between brain regions, given the complexity of reciprocal and local connectivity, dynamic interactions, and the influence of both shared and independent external inputs, is a challenging task. It requires careful analysis of simultaneous recording data, combined with cross-validation across multiple metrics, to accurately assess the functional relationships between regions. The authors have generated a valuable dataset simultaneously recording from both regions at scale from mice performing a cortex-dependent directional reaching task.
Using electrophysiological and silencing data, the authors found evidence supporting the traditionally assumed asymmetric influence from PM to M1. While earlier studies inferred a functional hierarchy based on partial temporal relationships in firing patterns, the authors applied a series of complementary analyses to rigorously test this hierarchy at both individual neuron and population levels, with robust statistical validation of significance.
In addition, recording combined with brief optogenetic silencing of the other region allowed authors to infer the asymmetric functional influence in a more causal manner. This experiment is well designed to focus on the effect of inactivation manifesting through oligosynaptic connections to support the existence of a premotor to primary motor functional hierarchy.
Subsequent analyses revealed a more complex picture. CCA, PLS, and three measures of predictivity (Granger causality, transfer entropy, and convergent cross-mapping) emphasized similarities in firing patterns and cross-region predictability. However, DLAG suggested an imbalance, with RFA capturing CFA variance at a negative time lag, indicating that RFA 'leads' CFA. Taken together these results provide useful insights for current studies of functional hierarchy about potential limitations in inferring hierarchy solely based on firing rates.
While I would detail some questions and issues on specifics of data analyses and modeling below, I appreciate the authors' effort in training RNNs that match some behavioral and recorded neural activity patterns including the inactivation result. The authors point out two components that can determine the across-region influence - 1) the amount of inputs received and 2) the dependence on across-region input, i.e., the relative importance of local dynamics, providing useful insights in inferring functional relationships across regions.
Weaknesses:
(1) Trial-averaging was applied in CCA and PLS analyses. While trial-averaging can be appropriate in certain cases, it leads to the loss of trial-to-trial variance, potentially inflating the perceived similarities between the activity in the two regions (Figure 4). Do authors observe comparable degrees of similarity, e.g., variance explained by canonical variables? Also, the authors report conflicting findings regarding the temporal relationship between RFA and CFA when using CCA/PLS versus DLAG. Could this discrepancy be due to the use of trial-averaging in former analyses but not in the latter?
We certainly agree that the similarity in firing patterns is higher in trial averages than on single trials, given the variation in single-neuron firing patterns across trials. Here, we were trying to examine the similarity of activity variance that is clearly movement dependent, as trial averages are, and to use an approach aligned with those applied in the existing literature. We would also agree that there is more that can be learned about interactions from trial-by-trial analysis. It is possible that the activity components identified by DLAG as being asymmetric somehow are not reflected strongly in trial averages. In our Discussion we offer another potential explanation that is based on other differences in what is calculated by DLAG and CCA/PLS.
We also note here that all of the firing pattern predictivity analysis we report (Figure 6) was done on single trial data, and in all cases the predictivity was symmetric. Thus, our results in aggregate are not consistent with symmetry purely being an artifact of trial averaging.
(2) A key strength of the current study is the precise tracking of forelimb muscle activity during a complex motor task involving reaching for four different targets. This rich behavioral data is rarely collected in mice and offers a valuable opportunity to investigate the behavioral relevance of the PM-M1 functional interaction, yet little has been done to explore this aspect in depth. For example, single-trial time courses of inter-regional latent variables acquired from DLAG analysis can be correlated with single-trial muscle activity and/or reach trajectories to examine the behavioral relevance of inter-regional dynamics. Namely, can trial-by-trial change in inter-regional dynamics explain behavioral variability across trials and/or targets? Does the inter-areal interaction change in error trials? Furthermore, the authors could quantify the relative contribution of across-area versus within-area dynamics to behavioral variability. It would also be interesting to assess the degree to which across-area and within-area dynamics are correlated. Specifically, can acrossarea dynamics vary independently from within-area dynamics across trials, potentially operating through a distinct communication subspace?
These are all very interesting questions. Our study does not attempt to parse activity into components predictive of muscle activity and others that may reflect other functions. Distinct components of RFA and CFA activity may very well rely on distinct interactions between them.
(3) While network modeling of RFA and CFA activity captured some aspects of behavioral and neural data, I wonder if certain findings such as the connection weight distribution (Figure 7C), across-region input (Figure 7F), and the within-region weights (Figure 7G), primarily resulted from fitting the different overall firing rates between the two regions with CFA exhibiting higher average firing rates. Did the authors account for this firing rate disparity when training the RNNs?
The key comparison in Figure 7 is shown in 7F, where the firing rates are accounted for in calculating the across-region input strength. Equalizing the firing rates in RFA and CFA would effectively increase RFA rates. If the mean firing rates in each region were appreciably dependent on across-region inputs, we would then expect an off-setting change in the RFA→CFA weights, such that the RFA→CFA distributions in 7F would stay the same. We would also expect the CFA→RFA weights would increase, since RFA neurons would need more input. This would shift the CFA→RFA (blue) distributions up. Thus, if anything, the key difference in this panel would only get larger.
We also generally feel that it is a better approach to fit the actual firing rates, rather than normalizing, since normalizing the firing rates would take us further from the actual biology, not closer.
(4) Another way to assess the functional hierarchy is by comparing the time courses of movement representation between the two regions. For example, a linear decoder could be used to compare the amount of information about muscle activity and/or target location as well as time courses thereof between the two regions. This approach is advantageous because it incorporates behavior rather than focusing solely on neural activity. Since one of the main claims of this study is the limitation of inferring functional hierarchy from firing rate data alone, the authors should use the behavior as a lens for examining inter-areal interactions.
As we state above, we agree that examining interactions specific to movement-related activity components could reveal interesting structure in interregional interactions. Since it remains a challenge to rigorously identify a subset of neural activity patterns specifically related to driving muscle activity, any such analysis would involve an additional assumption. It remains unclear how well the activity that decoders use for predicting muscle activity matches the activity that actually drives muscle activity in situ.
To address this issue, which related to one raised by Reviewer #3 below, we have added an additional paragraph to the Discussion (see “Manifestations of hierarchy in firing patterns”).
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
This study investigates how two cortical regions that are central to the study of rodent motor control (rostral forelimb area, RFA, and caudal forelimb area, CFA) interact during directional forelimb reaching in mice. The authors investigate this interaction using
(1) optogenetic manipulations in one area while recording extracellularly from the other, (2) statistical analyses of simultaneous CFA/RFA extracellular recordings, and (3) network modeling.
The authors provide solid evidence that asymmetry between RFA and CFA can be observed, although such asymmetry is only observed in certain experimental and analytical contexts.
The authors find asymmetry when applying optogenetic perturbations, reporting a greater impact of RFA inactivation on CFA activity than vice-versa. The authors then investigate asymmetry in endogenous activity during forelimb movements and find asymmetry with some analytical methods but not others. Asymmetry was observed in the onset timing of movement-related deviations of local latent components with RFA leading CFA (computed with PCA) and in a relatively higher proportion and importance of cross-area latent components with RFA leading than CFA leading (computed with DLAG). However, no asymmetry was observed using several other methods that compute cross-area latent dynamics, nor with methods computed on individual neuron pairs across regions. The authors follow up this experimental work by developing a twoarea model with asymmetric dependence on cross-area input. This model is used to show that differences in local connectivity can drive asymmetry between two areas with equal amounts of across-region input.
Overall, this work provides a useful demonstration that different cross-area analysis methods result in different conclusions regarding asymmetric interactions between brain areas and suggests careful consideration of methods when analyzing such networks is critical. A deeper examination of why different analytical methods result in observed asymmetry or no asymmetry, analyses that specifically examine neural dynamics informative about details of the movement, or a biological investigation of the hypothesis provided by the model would provide greater clarity regarding the interaction between RFA and CFA.
Strengths:
The authors are rigorous in their experimental and analytical methods, carefully monitoring the impact of their perturbations with simultaneous recordings, and providing valid controls for their analytical methods. They cite relevant previous literature that largely agrees with the current work, highlighting the continued ambiguity regarding the extent to which there exists an asymmetry in endogenous activity between RFA and CFA.
A strength of the paper is the evidence for asymmetry provided by optogenetic manipulation. They show that RFA inactivation causes a greater absolute difference in muscle activity than CFA interaction (deviations begin 25-50 ms after laser onset, Figure 1) and that RFA inactivation causes a relatively larger decrease in CFA firing rate than CFA inactivation causes in RFA (deviations begin <25ms after laser onset, Figure 3). The timescales of these changes provide solid evidence for an asymmetry in the impact of inactivating RFA/CFA on the other region that could not be driven by differences in feedback from disrupted movement (which would appear with a ~50ms delay).
The authors also utilize a range of different analytical methods, showing an interesting difference between some population-based methods (PCA, DLAG) that observe asymmetry, and single neuron pair methods (granger causality, transfer entropy, and convergent cross mapping) that do not. Moreover, the modeling work presents an interesting potential cause of "hierarchy" or "asymmetry" between brain areas: local connectivity that impacts dependence on across-region input, rather than the amount of across-region input actually present.
Weaknesses:
There is no attempt to examine neural dynamics that are specifically relevant/informative about the details of the ongoing forelimb movement (e.g., kinematics, reach direction). Thus, it may be preemptive to claim that firing patterns alone do not reflect functional influence between RFA/CFA. For example, given evidence that the largest component of motor cortical activity doesn't reflect details of ongoing movement (reach direction or path; Kaufman, et al. PMID: 27761519) and that the analytical tools the authors use likely isolate this component (PCA, CCA), it may not be surprising that CFA and RFA do not show asymmetry if such asymmetry is related to the control of movement details.
An asymmetry may still exist in the components of neural activity that encode information about movement details, and thus it may be necessary to isolate and examine the interaction of behaviorally-relevant dynamics (e.g., Sani, et al. PMID: 33169030).
To clarify, we are not claiming that firing patterns in no way reflect the asymmetric functional influence that we demonstrate with optogenetic inactivation. Instead, we show that certain types of analysis that we might expect to reflect such influence, in fact, do not. Indeed, DLAG did exhibit asymmetries that matched those seen in functional influence (at least qualitatively), though other methods we applied did not.
As we state above, we do think that there is more that can be gleaned by looking at influence specifically in terms of activity related to movement. However, if we did find that movement-related activity exhibited an asymmetry following functional influence, our results imply that the remaining activity components would exhibit an opposite asymmetry, such that the overall balance is symmetric. This would itself be surprising. We also note that the components identified by CCA and PLS do show substantial variation across reach targets, indicating that they are not only reflecting condition-invariant components. These analyses were performed on components accounting for well over 90% of the total activity variance, suggesting that both conditiondependent and condition-invariant components should be included.
To address the concern about condition-dependent and condition-invariant components, we have added a sentence to the Results section reporting our CCA and PLS results: “Because our results here involve the vast majority of trial-averaged activity variance, we expect that they encompass both components of activity that vary for different movement conditions (condition-dependent), and those that do not (condition-invariant).” To address the general concerns about potential differences in activity components specifically related to muscle activity, we have also added an additional paragraph to the Discussion (see “Manifestations of hierarchy in firing patterns”).
The idea that local circuit dynamics play a central role in determining the asymmetry between RFA and CFA is not supported by experimental data in this paper. The plausibility of this hypothesis is supported by the model but is not explored in any analyses of the experimental data collected. Given the focus on this idea in the discussion, further experimental investigation is warranted.
While we do not provide experimental support for this hypothesis, the data we present also do not contradict this hypothesis. Here we used modeling as it is often used - to capture experimental results and generate hypotheses about potential explanation. We do feel that our Discussion makes clear where the hypothesis derives from and does not misrepresent the lack of experimental support. We expect readers will take our engagement with this hypothesis with the appropriate grain of salt. The imaginable experiments to support such a hypothesis would constitute another substantial study, requiring numerous controls - a whole other paper in itself.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) There are a few small text/figure caption modifications that can be made for clarity of reading:
(2) Unclear sentence in the second paragraph of the introduction: "For example, stimulation applied in PM has been shown to alter the effects on muscles of stimulation in M1 under anesthesia, both in monkeys and rodents."
This sentence has been rephrased for clarity: “For example, in anesthetized monkeys34 and rodents35, stimulation in PM alters the effects of stimulation in M1 on muscles.”
(3) The first section of the results presents the optogenetic manipulation. However, the critical control that tests whether this was strictly a local manipulation that did not affect cells in the other region is introduced only much later. It may be helpful to add a comment in this section noting that such a control was performed, even if it is explained in detail later when introducing the recordings.
We have added the following to the first Results section: “we show below that direct optogenetic effects were only seen in the targeted forelimb area and not the other.”
(4) Figure 1D - I imagine these averages are from a single animal, but this is not stated in the figure caption.
“For one example mouse,” has been added to the beginning of the Figure 1D legend.
(5) Figure 2F - N=6 is not stated in the panel's caption (though it can make it clearer), while it is stated in the caption of 2H.
“n = 6 mice” has been added to the Figure 2F legend.
(6) There's some inconsistency with the order of RFA/CFA in the figures, sometimes RFA is presented first (e.g., Figure 1D and 1F), and sometimes CFA is presented first (e.g., panels of Figure 2).
We do not foresee this leading to confusion.
(7) "As expected, the majority of recorded neurons in each region exhibited an elevated average firing rate during movement as compared to periods when forelimb muscles were quiescent (Figure 2D,E; Figure S1A,B)" - Figure S1A,B show histograms of narrow vs. wide waveforms, is this the relevant figure here?
We apologize for the cryptic reference. The waveform width histograms were referred to here because they enabled the separation of narrow- and wide-waveform cells shown in Figure 2D,E. We have added the following clause to the referenced sentence to make this explicit: “, both for narrow-waveform, putative interneurons and wide-waveform putative pyramidal neurons.”
(8) Figure 2I caption - "The fraction of activity variance from 150 ms before reach onset to 150 ms after it that occurs before reach onset" - this sentence is not clear.
The Figure 2I legend has been updated to “The activity variance in the 150 ms before muscle activity onset, defined as a fraction of the total activity variance from 150 ms before to 150 ms after muscle activity onset, for each animal (circles) and the mean across animals (black bars, n = 6 mice).”
(9) Figure 4B-G - is this showing results across the 6 animals? Not stated clearly.
Yes - the 21 sessions we had referred to are drawn from all six mice. We have updated the legend here to make this explicit.
(10) DLAG analysis - is there any particular reasoning behind choosing four across-region and four within-region components?
In actuality, we completed this analysis for a broad range of component numbers and obtained similar results in all cases. Four fell in the center of our range, and so we focused the illustrations shown in the figure on this value. In general, the number of components is arbitrary. The original paper from Gokcen et al. describes a method for identifying a lower bound on the number of distinct components the method can identify. However, this method yields different results for each individual recording session. For the comparisons we performed, we needed to use the same range of values for each session.
(11) Figure 5A seems to show 11 across-session components, it's unclear from the caption but I imagine this should show 12 (4 components times 3 sessions?)
As we state in the Methods, any across-region latent variable with a lag that failed to converge between the boundary values of ±200 ms was removed from the analysis. In the case illustrated in this panel, the lag for one of the components failed to converge and is not shown. We have now clarified this both in the relevant Results paragraph and in the figure legend.
(12) Figure 5B - is each marker here the average variance explained by all across/within components that were within the specified lag criteria across sessions per mouse? In other words, what does a single marker here stand for?
We apologize for the lack of clarity here. These values reflect the average across sessions for each mouse. We have updated the legend to make this explicit.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
As I have addressed most of my major recommendations in the public review, I will use this section to include relatively minor points for the authors to consider.
(1) The EMG data in Figure 1C shows distinct patterns across spouts, both in the magnitude and complexity of muscle activations. It would be interesting to investigate whether these differences in muscle activity lead to behavioral variations (e.g., reaction time, reach duration) and how they relate to the relative involvement of the two areas.
We agree that it would be interesting to examine how the interactions between areas vary as behavior varies. While the differences between reaches here are limited, we have addressed this question for two substantially different motor behaviors (reaching and climbing) in a follow-up study that was recently preprinted (Kristl et al., biorxiv, 2025).
(2) How do the authors account for the lingering impact of RFA inactivation on muscle activity, which persists for tens of milliseconds after laser offset? Could this effect be due to compensatory motor activity following the perturbation? A further illustration of how the raw limb trajectories and/or muscle activity are perturbed and recovered would help readers better understand the impact of motor cortical inactivation.
To clarify the effects of inactivation on a longer timescale, we have added a new supplemental figure showing the plots from Figure 1D over a longer time window extending to 500 ms after trial onset (new Figure S1). Lingering effects do persist, at least in certain cases. In general, we find it hard to ascertain the source of optogenetic effects on longer timescales like this. On the shortest timescales, effects will be mediated by relatively direct connections between regions. However, on these longer timescales, effects could be due to broader changes in brain and behavioral state that can influence muscle activity. For example, attempts to compensate for the initial disturbance to muscle activity could cause divergence from controls on these longer timescales. Muscle tissue itself is also known to have long timescale relaxation dynamics, and it would not be surprising if the relevant control circuits here also had long timescales dynamics, such that we would not expect an immediate return to control when the light pulse ends. Because of this ambiguity, we generally avoid interpretation of optogenetic effects on these longer timescales.
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) Page 9: ". We measured the time at which the activity state deviated from baseline preceding reach onset," - I cannot find how this deviation was defined (neither the baseline nor the threshold).
We have added text to the Figure 2G legend that explicitly states how the baseline and activity onset time were defined.
(2) Given the shape of the curves in Figure 2G, the significance of this result seems susceptible to slight modifications of what defines a baseline or a deviation threshold. For example, it looks like the circle for CFA has a higher y-axis value, suggesting the baseline deviance is higher, but it is unclear why that would be from the plot. If the threshold for deviation in neural activity state were held uniform between CFA and RFA is the difference still significant across animals?
We have repeated the analysis using the same absolute threshold for each region. We used the higher of the two thresholds from each region. The difference remains significant. This is now described in the last paragraph of the Results section for Figure 2.
(3) Since summed deviation of the top 3 PCs is used to show a difference in activity onset between CFA/RFA, but only a small proportion of variance is explained pre-movement (<2% in most animals), it seems relevant to understand what percentage of CFA/RFA neuron activity actually is modulated and deviates from baseline prior to movement and to show the distribution of activity onsets at the single neuron level in CFA/RFA. Can an onset difference only be observed using PCA?
Because many neurons have low firing rates, estimating the time at which their firing rate begins to rise near reach onset is difficult to do reliably. It is also true that not all neurons show an increase around onset - some show a decrease and others show no discernible change. Using PCs to measure onset avoids both of these problems, since they capture both increases and decreases in individual neuron firing rates and are much less noisy than individual neuron firing rates.
However, based on this comment, we have repeated this analysis on a single-neuron level using only neurons with relatively high average firing rates. Specifically, we analyzed neurons with mean firing rates above the 90th percentile across all sessions within an animal. Neurons whose activity never crossed threshold were excluded. Results matched those using PCs, with RFA neurons showing an earlier average activity onset time. This is now described in the last paragraph of the Results section for Figure 2.
(4) It is stated that to study the impact of inactivation on CFA/RFA activity, only the 50 highest average firing rate neurons were used (and maybe elsewhere too, e.g., convergent cross mapping). It is unclear why this subselection is necessary. It is justified by stating that higher firing rate neurons have better firing rate estimates. This may be supportable for very low firing rate units that spike sorting tools have a hard time tracking, but I don't think this is supported by data for most of the distribution of firing rates. It therefore seems like the results might be biased by a subselection of certain high firing rate neuron populations. It would be useful to also compute and mention if the results for all neurons/neuron pairs are the same. If there is worry about low-quality units being those with low firing rates, a threshold for firing rate as used elsewhere in the paper (at least 1 spike / 2 trials) seems justified.
The issue here is that as firing rates decrease and firing rate estimates get noisier, estimates of the change in firing rate get more variable. Here we are trying to estimate the fraction of neurons for which firing rates decreased upon inactivation of the other region. Variability in estimates of the firing rate change will bias this estimate toward 50%, since in the limit when the change estimates are entirely based on noise, we expect 50% to be decreases. As expected, when we use increasingly liberal thresholds for this analysis, the fraction of decreases trends closer to 50%.
As a consequence of this, we cannot easily distinguish whether higher firing rate neurons might for some reason have a greater tendency to exhibit decreases in firing compared to lower firing rate neurons. However, we see no positive reason to expect such a difference. We have added a sentence noting this caveat in interpreting our findings to the relevant paragraph of the Results.
The lack of min/max axis values in Figure 3B-F makes it hard to interpret - are these neurons almost silent when near the bottom of the plot or are they still firing a substantial # of spikes?
To aid interpretation of the relative magnitude of firing rate changes, we have added minimum firing rates for the averages depicted in Figure 3B,C,E and F to the legend. Our original thinking was that the plots in Figure 3G and H would provide an indication of the relative changes in firing.
It would be interesting to know if the impact of optogenetic stimulation changed with exposure to the manipulation. Are all results presented only from the first X number of sessions in each animal? Or is the effect robust over time and (within the same animal) you can get the same results of optogenetic inactivation over time? This information seems critical for reproducibility.
We have now performed brief optogenetic inactivations in several brain areas in several different behavioral paradigms, and have found that inactivation effects are stable both within and across sessions, almost surprisingly so. This includes cases where the inactivations were more frequent (every ~1.25 s on average) and more numerous (>15,000 trials per animal) than in the present manuscript. Thus we did not restrict our analysis here to the first X sessions or trials within a session. We have added additional plots as Figure S3T-AA showing the stability of optogenetic effects both within and across sessions.
Given that it can be difficult to record from interneurons (as the proportion of putative interneurons in Figure S1 attests), the SALT analyses would be more convincing if a few recordings had been performed in the same region as optogenetic stimulation to show a "positive control" of what direct interneuron stimulation looks like. Could also use this to validate the narrow/wide waveform classification.
We have verified that using SALT as we have in the present manuscript does detect vGAT+ interneurons directly responding to light. This is included in a recent preprint from the lab (Kristl et al., biorxiv, 2025). We (Warriner et al., Cell Reports, 2022) and others (Guo et al., Neuron, 2014) have previously used direct ChR2 activation to validate waveform-based classification.
Simultaneous CFA/RFA recordings during optogenetic perturbation would also allow for time courses of inhibition to be compared in RFA/CFA. Does it take 25ms to inhibit locally, and the cross-area impact is fast, or does it inactivate very fast locally and takes ~25ms to impact the other region?
Latencies of this sort are difficult to precisely measure given the statistical limits of this sort of data, but there does appear to be some degree of delay between local and downstream effects. We do not have a statistical foundation as of yet for concluding that this is the case. It will be interesting to examine this issue more rigorously in the future.
Given the difference in the analytical methods, the authors should share data in a relatively unprocessed format (e.g., spike times from sorted units relative to video tracking + behavioral data), along with analysis code, to allow others to investigate these differences.
We plan to post the data and code to our lab’s Github site once the Version of Record is online.
Briefing sur les défis de l'enfance et le rôle de la culture pour faire grandir les enfants
Source : Extraits de "Demain, quel défis pour les enfants - Faire grandir les enfants : quel rôle pour la culture ?"
Contexte : Cette table ronde réunit des experts et une jeune participante pour discuter de l'avenir de l'enfance, des défis auxquels les enfants sont confrontés et de la manière dont la culture peut jouer un rôle dans leur développement.
Les intervenants sont :
Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :
Conclusion :
Un point central qui émerge est le manque de pouvoir et de considération accordé à la voix des enfants dans la société.
L'engagement des experts et de la jeune participante Naïlem témoigne d'une volonté de changer les choses. Des pistes de solutions sont explorées, allant du droit de vote pour les enfants à une meilleure formation des enseignants et un soutien accru à la parentalité.
La consultation et la cocréation intergénérationnelle sont vues comme essentielles, à condition que la voix des enfants soit réellement écoutée et prise en compte pour éviter la frustration et l'impuissance.
Les témoignages d'enfants soulignent à la fois leurs inquiétudes et leur capacité d'engagement et d'optimisme.
Quotes Clés :
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Esta sintaxis luce extraña en comparación con lo que hemos usado previamente para narrativas sobre los repositorios. Debería ser algo como:
setasRepo := FossilRepo new
remote: 'https://mutabit.com/repos.fossil/setas-libertarias';
local: FileLocator documents / 'Repositorios/setas-libertarias';
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Y debería verificar si el repo ya existe y si no, clonarlo, produciendo el mismo resutado, aunque quizás con el repositorio incluido dentro del folder (quizás esto pueda ser una opción a configurar).
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Briefing Document : Inverser la donne participative, ou comment relancer une machine qui s’essouffle !
Source : Excerpts de la présentation "Inverser la donne participative, ou comment relancer une machine qui s’essouffle !" (Orateur : Chercheur de l'Université de Rouen, spécialisé dans la participation).
Date : Déc 2024.
Thème Principal : La nécessité de repenser fondamentalement la communication et l'approche de la participation citoyenne pour toucher un public plus large et diversifié, en inversant les pratiques habituelles qui mènent à une participation limitée et homogène.
Idées et Faits Clés :
1. Constat d'un Essoufflement de la Participation et d'une Présélection Involontaire des Publics :
L'orateur, chercheur spécialisé en participation, partage l'expérience de son équipe qui, initialement sans contact avec la population, a rencontré des difficultés majeures pour susciter l'engagement ("Les premières les premières démarches qu'on a réalisé cumulaient un total de 0 à 1 participant").
Il souligne que malgré l'existence de nouvelles méthodes de participation, la communication joue un rôle crucial, mais est souvent un "grain de sable dans l'océan de la participation". Une mauvaise communication initiale peut rapidement poser problème.
L'orateur identifie quatre erreurs fréquentes dans la communication qui mènent à une "présélection" involontaire des participants :
L'objectif initial de la participation était de renouer avec cette population.
Prolifération d'acronymes et de jargon technique : Cela attire les professionnels du secteur, mais exclut les autres qui se sentent non concernés ("Ils comprennent assez rapidement qu'en fait on ne s'adresse pas à eux. Donc à nouveau on a un effet de désertion").
Mise en avant excessive de l'objet technique du projet : Par exemple, dans des projets liés à l'énergie ou à la mobilité, insister sur les détails techniques (ex: "flotte de véhicules hydrogènes alimenté par des piles à combustible") attire plus les hommes et repousse potentiellement les femmes, reproduisant des inégalités observées dans l'enseignement supérieur.
Descriptifs de communication trop longs : Répulsifs en général, ils le sont encore plus pour les personnes faiblement diplômées.
La combinaison de ces erreurs mène souvent à un profil de participant homogène : "un homme qui va être âgé bien souvent de plus de 45 ans et qui va être attiré par des raisons soit professionnelles soit politique et qui s'avère assez diplômé". C'est le phénomène du "tous les mêmes".
L'orateur propose trois astuces principales, issues de leur expérience réussie :
Réduire la quantité d'informations dans la communication : Il est préférable de "réduire trop qu'à réduire trop peu".
Il faut se concentrer sur l'essentiel et se demander si les participants potentiels ont réellement besoin de toutes les informations détaillées dès le départ.
On peut souvent résumer des communications de plusieurs pages à "5-6 lignes".
Privilégier l'expérience proposée aux participants plutôt que la thématique du projet : Au lieu de mettre en avant l'objet technique (ex: véhicules hydrogène), il faut communiquer sur ce que les participants vont vivre concrètement (ex: "un format de table ronde" favorisant la discussion entre les participants).
Cette approche a permis de passer de séances avec peu ou pas de participants à des sessions complètes ("On est passé à des séances où on avait personne [...] à quasiment ça coû à chaque fois").
Dans leur cas, l'expérience mise en avant était une discussion de 2 heures entre participants, facilitée par quelques questions.
Ils ont constaté que 80% des participants venaient avant tout pour cette expérience, rendant la thématique secondaire pour eux. Cela permet d'attirer un public beaucoup plus diversifié, y compris sur des sujets a priori "austères".
Envisager la démarche participative comme concurrente de l'offre de divertissement disponible : Il faut se demander "pourquoi est-ce qu'une personne devrait venir à une démarche participative plutôt que de faire autre chose ?".
Les motivations purement informatives ou civiques sont souvent insuffisantes. Il faut repenser le "contenu" et la "finalité" de la participation pour la rendre plus attractive face aux autres options de loisirs.
3. Exemple Concret et Résultats Obtenus :
L'équipe a appliqué ces principes à deux projets :
"l'exploitation chimique de la matière lignocellulosique" (un sujet a priori peu attractif) et "l'intelligence artificielle" (plus populaire). Ils ont obtenu des résultats similaires avec le même modèle de communication.
L'exemple de communication présenté met l'accent sur :
Une réduction maximale de la quantité d'informations initiales.
Les résultats ont été significatifs : "30 places disponibles plus de 40 volontaires", avec un taux de présence élevé ("27 sur 30 inscrits"), bien supérieur à la moyenne locale.
Citation Significative :
"La communication c'est un grain de sable dans l'océan de la participation il faut beaucoup plus qu'une bonne communication pour pouvoir faire une participation qui dure dans le temps." (Souligne l'importance, mais aussi les limites de la communication seule).
"L'idée que je veux porter avec cette astuce c'est qu'évidemment [...] une personne qui voit le voix de communication et qui décide de ne pas participer le jour venu elle va pas rester assise à les yeux dans le vide à attendre que ça se passe. Forcément elle va s'occuper." (Met en lumière la concurrence avec les loisirs).
"À partir du moment où on arrive à mettre en place un modèle de communication qui soit pertinent et qu'on arrive à avoir plus de volontaires qu'on a de place là à ce moment-là on peut se faire plaisir et choisir ses participants." (Illustre le bénéfice d'une communication efficace).
Conclusion :
La présentation met en évidence que pour revitaliser la participation citoyenne et atteindre un public plus diversifié, il est crucial de rompre avec les approches de communication traditionnelles.
En se concentrant sur l'expérience proposée plutôt que sur la thématique, en simplifiant radicalement les messages et en tenant compte des alternatives de loisirs, il est possible d'inverser la "présélection" involontaire des participants et de relancer une dynamique participative plus inclusive et efficace.
L'exemple concret présenté par l'orateur témoigne de la validité de ces stratégies.
Note de Synthèse : Audition des Représentants de Parents d'Élèves sur la Prévention des Violences en Milieu Scolaire
Date de l'audition : 2025
Participants :
APEL (Association des parents d'élèves de l'école libre) : Madame Hélène Louign (présidente du bureau national), Monsieur Christophe Abraham (secrétaire général)
Objet de l'audition : Modalités du contrôle par l'État et prévention des violences dans les établissements scolaires, avec un focus particulier sur les recours à la disposition des parents d'élèves lorsqu'ils suspectent des élèves victimes de violence par des adultes.
Serment prêté par les intervenants : Tous les intervenants ont prêté serment de dire la vérité, toute la vérité, rien que la vérité.
Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :
Rôle des associations de parents d'élèves dans la prévention des violences :
Les associations se définissent comme des "vigies", attentives aux signaux faibles et cherchant à engager le dialogue avec les chefs d'établissement et les autorités académiques.
Leur action est variable en fonction de leur présence locale et de la qualité des échanges avec les instances académiques.
La FCPE et la PEEP ont un rôle statutaire de lutte contre les violences sexuelles et peuvent se constituer partie civile en justice.
L'APEL, bien qu'elle déplore fortement les violences, n'a pas le même statut de fédération structurée et ne peut pas se porter partie civile pour l'instant, mais souhaite sensibiliser les parents au signalement.
Il existe une reconnaissance de la nécessité de la coéducation et de la présence des parents dans les établissements.
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "nous avons un rôle de de vigie nous sommes extrêmement attentifs"
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "notre fédération a dans ses statuts depuis maintenant de nombreuses années la lutte contre les violences sexuelles et donc nous sommes dans nos statut habilités à nous porter partie civile"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "l'appel c'est une association euh donc àolitique non confessionnelle euh qui regroupe aujourd'hui un peu plus d'un million de de familles mais qui représente toutes les familles dans leur diversité au sein de l'enseignement catholique"
Recours et processus de signalement :
Il n'y a pas de processus clair et unique pour les parents pour donner l'alerte.
Le 119 est présenté par l'APEL comme un numéro unique qui devrait être la référence, mais il est reconnu comme difficilement joignable et manquant de moyens.
Les associations privilégient d'abord le dialogue amiable (avec l'enseignant, le directeur d'école, l'inspecteur) pour comprendre la situation avant d'agir.
La FCPE et la PEEP peuvent aller jusqu'à se porter partie civile en justice, s'appuyant sur leur réseau territorial pour faire remonter les informations jusqu'au niveau national.
L'APEL, en raison de sa structure associative indépendante, déplore que les informations ne remontent pas systématiquement au niveau national. Elle souhaite mettre en place un processus de remontée.
Les signalements aux procureurs sont une option, mais les associations explorent différentes voies (119, dialogue, actions en justice).
Il y a un manque de transparence sur le suivi des signalements, ce qui peut créer de l'énervement et de la méfiance chez les parents.
La question de la "médiation amiable ou temporisation" est soulevée par les rapporteurs comme potentiellement problématique si elle retarde le signalement. Les associations clarifient qu'il s'agit d'abord de comprendre pour mieux agir, pas de temporiser indûment.
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "il n'y a pas clairement de process qui nous permettent de donner l'alerte"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "nous constatons que nous avons plus que des trous dans la raquette les moyens de signalement ne sont pas efficaces aux yeux de l'appel aujourd'hui il devrait y avoir un numéro unique qui est le 119"
Citation Clé (PEEP) : "nous on privilégie toujours en premier l'amiable les la discussion d'abord avec l'enseignant en deuxième temps si ça ne fonctionne pas la discussion avec le le chef d'établ enfin le chef d'établissement le directeur d'école l'inspecteur de circonscription"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "nous ne pouvons que déplorer le fait que les informations ne nous remontent pas au niveau national"
Relations avec les établissements et les autorités :
Dans l'enseignement public, il existe une communauté éducative qui fonctionne mieux quand la relation de confiance avec les associations de parents est établie. Cependant, les associations peuvent aussi être vues comme des "perturbateurs".
Dans l'enseignement privé, l'APEL est partenaire de l'enseignement catholique mais revendique une "parole libre".
Les statuts de l'enseignement catholique reconnaissent l'APEL comme la seule association de parents, bien que d'autres pourraient théoriquement exister.
Il existe des situations de "grand écart" entre les établissements où les associations de parents travaillent main dans la main avec la direction et ceux où elles sont tenues à l'écart.
La question de l'opacité des contrôles de l'État sur les établissements privés sous contrat, qui reçoivent une part importante d'argent public, est soulevée par la FCPE.
Citation Clé (PEEP) : "on nous incuse souvent de nous mêler de ce qui nous regarde pas"
Citation Clé (PEEP) : "à l'inverse dans des écoles où l'association est bien implantée dans lequel on a une relation de confiance avec les équipes pédagogiques... on crée des cercles virtuux"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "nous sommes partenaires avec l'enseignement catholique mais nous avons une parole libre et j'y tiens"
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "aujourd'hui nous avons des établissements privés sur contrat qui touchent plus de 75 % d'argent public et qui échapperait à tout contrôle"
Problèmes structurels et dysfonctionnements :
La situation de Betaram est mentionnée comme un élément déclencheur de l'audition et un exemple de dysfonctionnement grave, en partie lié à un environnement quasi "huis clos".
Les victimes n'ont pas été protégées ni par leur école ni par la nation (selon la FCPE, en raison d'un manque de contrôle).
Il y a un problème avec l'administration de l'Éducation Nationale, jugée "mortifère et mortelle", qui a tendance à "enfouir" les situations et manque de transparence.
Les difficultés de joindre les instances (119, inspecteurs, etc.) sont un frein au signalement.
Le manque de psychologues et d'infirmiers scolaires, en particulier dans l'enseignement catholique (selon l'APEL), est un problème majeur pour le suivi et le soutien des élèves.
La question des conflits d'intérêts potentiels au sein de l'enseignement catholique, notamment en raison de la possibilité pour une même personne d'être membre de l'APEL et de l'OGEC (organisme de gestion employeur du personnel), est soulevée.
L'APEL reconnaît que cela n'est pas souhaitable et va revoir ses statuts, mais reconnaît que la pratique existe encore, surtout en Bretagne.
La "loi du silence" ou l'omerta au sein de la communauté éducative est évoquée comme un facteur potentiel entravant les signalements.
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "on n'est pas du tout sur le même fonctionnement a priori j'imagine en tout cas quand il y a quelque chose ça se vite après on doit on a un rôle de médiateur" (en comparaison avec Betaram)
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "ces victimes n'ont pas été protégées... elles n'ont pas été protégées par la nation parce que la nation ne contrôle pas"
Citation Clé (PEEP) : "nous avons aussi une administration qui est mortifère et mortelle une administration qui se veut euh maltraiter et qui est maltraitante et qui a une perte en ligne monumentale"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "il y a quand même peu d'établissements où il y a des psychologues et des infirmières scolaires lorsque c'est le cas pour nous parents c'est totalement insuffisant"
Citation Clé (Députée) : "est-ce que vous pensez que ce fonctionnement peut ou a pu générer des conflits d'intérêt serré entre le général et le particulier des fois la frontière est est mince surtout que les parents membres de l'OJEC je le répète ont la fonction d'employeur des personnels"
Moyens et structuration des associations :
L'APEL (20 ETP au national) est une union d'associations indépendantes, ce qui limite la remontée d'informations au niveau national malgré des moyens centraux importants.
Les associations publiques peuvent s'appuyer sur leur réseau pour les actions en justice, un soutien juridique et une assurance pour leurs membres.
L'APEL, en raison de son statut d'association et non de fédération, n'a pas de pouvoir hiérarchique sur ses structures locales, ce qui entrave la remontée systématique des signalements.
Le bénévolat est en évolution, avec des engagements moins longs, ce qui rend la formation des représentants (délégués ou correspondants) d'autant plus cruciale.
Il y a un besoin de moyens publics pour soutenir la mission des associations de parents d'élèves.
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "nous n'avons pas autorité hiérarchique sur nos nos membres nous avons conseil des dialogues échange mais on n'impose pas une association départementale une action plutôt qu'une autre"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "nous sommes une association donc chaque structure est indépendante et nous ne pouvons que déplorer le fait que les informations ne nous remontent pas au niveau national"
Citation Clé (PEEP) : "le bon évela aujourd'hui est en crise et aujourd'hui c'est de plus en plus difficile d'avoir effectivement des subsides publics"
Propositions d'amélioration et avenir :
Tolérance zéro : Affirmée par l'APEL.
Amélioration du signalement : Numéro unique efficace (119 renforcé), transparence sur le suivi, communication claire aux parents sur les procédures.
Contrôle renforcé : Création d'une agence nationale publique de contrôle des établissements privés sous contrat (proposition FCPE), contrôles périodiques et transparents, publication des rapports d'audit.
Formation : Meilleure formation des enseignants, chefs d'établissement, inspecteurs sur la détection et le signalement des violences. Formation obligatoire des cadres de l'APEL sur ces sujets.
Soutien psychologique et sanitaire : Augmentation du nombre de psychologues et infirmiers scolaires dans tous les établissements.
Libération de la parole : Déploiement et application ferme du programme Evars, création de dispositifs d'écoute (présence adulte hors CPE/direction), dispositif d'alerte anonyme.
Transparence : Sur les contrôles, le suivi des signalements, les conseils de discipline (étude sur les conseils de discipline demandée par la FCPE).
Coopération : Meilleure collaboration entre l'État, les établissements et les associations de parents. Institutionnalisation du contact avec les fédérations reconnues d'utilité publique (proposition FCPE).
Réflexion interne (APEL) : Audit externe sur le fonctionnement associatif et les relations avec l'OGEC et les directions diocésaines pour dégager un plan d'action structurel.
Recrutement et suivi du personnel : Contrôles systématiques des antécédents judiciaires (B2) au recrutement et régulièrement, suivi des enseignants en difficulté.
Valorisation de l'engagement parental : Campagne de communication publique sur l'importance des élections de parents d'élèves (proposition FCPE), moyens pour les associations de parents.
Citation Clé (APEL) : "il faut vraiment une tolérance zéro dans l'ensemble de nos établissements"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "il devrait y avoir un numéro unique qui est le 119"
Citation Clé (FCPE) : "créer une agence nationale publique de contrôle des organismes privés sous contrat"
Citation Clé (PEEP) : "il y a plus de ps il y a plus aussi vous avez tout vu l'émission la vie émission Joël Mazar café cette présence de quelqu'un qui ne soit pas le CPE qui soit pas la direction mais à qui on peut parler librement elle est fondamentale"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "il faut à mon avis créer un dispositif d'alerte anonyme qui soit accessible à tous et qui soit compréhensible par tous"
Citation Clé (APEL) : "il faut faire une véritable introspection... prendre un cabinet externe pour faire ce travail"
Points de convergence entre les associations :
Points de divergence ou spécificités :
Le statut (fédération vs association) et l'impact sur la remontée des informations et la capacité à se porter partie civile (FCPE et PEEP le peuvent, APEL pas actuellement).
Les propositions plus spécifiques (agence de contrôle pour les privés sous contrat pour la FCPE, audit externe pour l'APEL).
La relation avec l'enseignement catholique et les OGEC (spécifique à l'APEL).
Conclusion générale :
Les associations de parents, malgré leur engagement et leur rôle essentiel de "vigies" et de soutien aux familles, sont confrontées à des défis structurels, un manque de transparence de l'administration, et des relations variables avec les établissements et les autorités.
Des propositions concrètes sont formulées pour améliorer le système, notamment par un renforcement des contrôles (en particulier dans le privé sous contrat), une meilleure formation, des dispositifs de signalement plus efficaces et transparents, et un soutien accru aux associations elles-mêmes.
L'actualité récente a accentué la prise de conscience et la volonté d'agir, y compris au sein de l'APEL qui souhaite revoir son fonctionnement interne pour faciliter la remontée des informations.
Briefing : Utiliser l'IA dans le monde associatif avec Yann Ferguson (LaborIA)
Source : Extraits de "Parlez-moi d’IA #67 Utiliser l'IA dans le monde associatif avec Yann Ferguson (LaborIA)", podcast animé par Jean-Philippe Clément, avec la participation de Yann Ferguson, chercheur et sociologue, directeur du laboratoire Laboria.
Contexte : Ce briefing est basé sur des extraits d'une table ronde organisée par la Maison de la Vie Associative et Citoyenne du 13ème arrondissement de Paris, abordant les enjeux, risques et bonnes pratiques de l'utilisation de l'IA dans le monde associatif.
Yann Ferguson, spécialiste de l'IA dans le monde du travail, y a partagé son expertise.
Thèmes Principaux :
Idées Clés et Faits Importants :
Définition et histoire de l'IA :
L'IA est avant tout une discipline de recherche formalisée à partir du milieu des années 1950.
Le terme "Intelligence Artificielle" a été choisi dès 1955 pour son pouvoir accrocheur et marketing, permettant d'attirer des financements.
Les fondateurs avaient pour ambition de créer des machines capables de réaliser des tâches nécessitant des processus mentaux de haut niveau, jusqu'alors mieux réalisées par les humains (raisonnement, organisation de la mémoire, pensée critique, apprentissage perceptuel).
Citation : "l'intelligence artificielle c'est une discipline de recherche avant d'être des outils et des applications qui... a commencé à se formaliser à partir de la deuxième moitié des années 50 donc 1950."
Citation : "Ils cherchaient un terme assez accrocheur... un peu qui avait une dimension marketing assez forte." Deux approches historiques de l'IA : Initialement, deux grandes voies ont été explorées :
L'imitation du raisonnement humain (IA logique ou symbolique) : reproduire les logiques des experts face aux problèmes. Cette approche a dominé jusqu'aux années 2000.
L'imitation de l'apprentissage humain (apprentissage machine - machine learning) : fabriquer des machines qui apprennent à partir d'exemples, comme les humains. Cette approche a connu un renouveau important depuis 2010, notamment grâce à l'avènement du Big Data.
Citation : "Le premier chemin consiste à imiter le raisonnement humain... La deuxième manière qu'ils ont imaginé c'est plutôt d'imiter le l'apprentissage humain."
Citation : "depuis 2010 on connaît un renouveau de l'intelligence artificielle mais plus autour de l'approche de limitation du raisonnement humain bien plus autour de l'approche de limitation de l'apprentissage humain."
Citation : "une des raisons pour lesquelles on a une accélération... ça a été le big data vous savez toutes ces données que l'on retrouve sur internet."
L'apprentissage profond (Deep Learning) et le problème de la boîte noire : Le Deep Learning, un courant du machine learning, a permis d'obtenir d'excellents résultats (conversation, reconnaissance d'images) mais souffre d'un problème d'opacité dans son fonctionnement, appelé "problème de l'explicabilité et de la boîte noire".
Citation : "un courant du machine learning qui est le deep learning l'apprentissage profond... avec un problème c'est que la façon dont la machine parvient à apprendre est assez opaque."
IA et le monde du travail : L'IA s'inscrit dans la révolution informatique, aux côtés de l'intelligence augmentée (l'ordinateur comme outil d'assistance) et de l'intelligence distribuée (réseau, Web, intelligence collective). L'IA, ou intelligence automatisée, est la machine capable de raisonner seule.
Citation : "l'intelligence artificielle elle prend place dans la dans la révolution informatique à partir des années 50 et autour de cette de ces nouvelles machines les ordinateurs il y a en fait trois promesses d'intelligence Il y a l'intelligence augmentée... l'intelligence distribué... la troisième l'intelligence artificielle qui était plutôt l'intelligence automatisée."
Les cinq scénarios du futur du travail face à l'IA : Yann Ferguson a identifié cinq grands récits sur l'impact de l'IA sur le travail :
Le travailleur remplacé : la machine prend la place de l'humain.
Le travailleur dominé : l'humain est commandé par la machine ou dépend de plateformes sans protection sociale ("uberisation").
Les travailleurs divisés : apparition d'une classe de travailleurs pauvres avec des emplois peu intéressants et mal payés.
Le travailleur augmenté : l'IA libère l'humain des tâches répétitives, lui permettant de se concentrer sur des tâches plus créatives et relationnelles. Le travailleur réhumanisé : Recentrage de l'humain sur des tâches dignes de son humanité.
Citation : "j'avais proposé cinq grandes directions à ce récit... Il y a évidemment le récit du travailleur remplacé... la deuxième le deuxième élément un peu dystopique aussi hein c'est le travailleur dominé... 3ème scénario négatif c'est ce que j'avais appelé les travailleurs divisés...
Il y avait quand même deux scénarios beaucoup plus optimistes Il y avait le scénario du travailleur euh du travailleur augmenté... Après le dernier c'est ce qu'on appelle le travailleur réhumanisé."
Le rôle essentiel du secteur associatif ("tiers secteur non marchand") : Jeremy Rifkin, dans les années 90, anticipait que le logiciel remplacerait de nombreux emplois, mais que le "tiers secteur non marchand" (l'associatif), essentiel pour vivre ensemble et non adressé par les logiques marchandes, prendrait une part importante de notre activité.
Citation : "il y a plein d'activités dont on a absolument besoin pour vivre ensemble Et il a appelé ça le tiers secteur non marchand."
Citation : "l'associatif c'est tout ce dont on a besoin pour vivre ensemble mais que le marché n'adresse pas."
L'impact de l'IA générative (ChatGPT) : La sortie de ChatGPT en novembre 2022 a transformé l'usage de l'IA, passant d'initiatives majoritairement patronales à une adoption par les employés eux-mêmes ("Shadow AI"). Plus de la moitié des Français utilisant l'IA au travail le font sans l'accord de leur manager.
Citation : "Lia générative ça change tout... Avant ChatGPT les études montraient que il y avait entre 1 et 10 % des Français qui pouvaient dire j'ai travaillé avec lire Voilà au moins une fois avec Chat GPT on a dépassé les 20 %."
Citation : "on est beaucoup plus dans moi employé j'utilise chat GPT et c'est mon employeur qui veut pas mais je le fais quand même Voilà on appelle ça le shadow AI."
La crise récurrente de l'intelligence face aux technologies : L'histoire montre une résistance récurrente aux nouvelles technologies de l'intelligence, de l'écriture (critiquée par Socrate) à l'imprimerie, la télévision, internet et Wikipédia, toutes accusées de "nous rendre idiot" ou de détruire le lien social. Cette crainte se manifeste aujourd'hui avec l'IA.
Citation : "Qu'est-ce qu'une technologie de l'intelligence c'est un un artefact qui va intervenir d'une façon ou d'une autre dans nos raisonnements Et un artefact très noble extrêmement valorisé dans les universités c'est l'écriture."
Citation : "on a eu différents moments de crise de l'intelligence en lien avec les technologies de l'intelligence L'imprimerie a été une crise dans l'intelligence majeure... Lorsque j'étais jeune c'était la la télévision hein qui était qui nous rendait idiot... internet non seulement devait nous rendre idiot mais aussi de mettre devait mettre fin au lien social... Wikipédia... lorsque Tiag GPT est arrivé on a dit il cite pas ses sources."
Citation : "on a une espèce de crise récurrente de l'intelligence qui amène souvent à considérer que la nouvelle technologie l'intelligence ça nous rend idiot." Perte de facultés versus développement de compétences supérieures : L'utilisation de technologies de l'intelligence peut entraîner une perte de certaines facultés (ex: mémorisation avec les smartphones), mais la question est de savoir si cette perte permet de se déplacer vers des facultés cognitives supérieures (raisonnement, interprétation).
Citation : "il y a toujours une perte de faculté euh lorsqu'on ne mobilise pas la compétence... Montigne nous dit il vaut mieux une tête bien faite qu'une tête bien pleine."
Le risque de la médiocrité généralisée par l'IA générative :
L'IA générative peut rendre un travail "moyen" accessible sans effort, ce qui est gratuit et peut satisfaire le marché (y compris associatif).
Le risque est d'accepter cette médiocrité intellectuelle au détriment d'un travail de meilleure qualité. Les experts sont mieux placés pour utiliser l'IA pour aller au-delà de la moyenne.
Citation : "l' générative dont on parle beaucoup de ce soir elle peut facilement rendre tout le monde moyen sans effort." Citation : "quand vous êtes très performant dans votre sujet et bien vous êtes finalement un bien meilleur utilisateur de lien." Citation : "l'escroquerie c'est de dire que tout le monde peut tout faire avec liagénérative Ça c'est le mensonge." Citation : "le risque c'est plutôt cette espèce de satisfaction générale pour des choses de médiocre qualité intellectuelle."
Alternatives Open Source et IA frugale : Face aux grands modèles propriétaires (comme ChatGPT d'OpenAI), il existe des alternatives Open Source dont le code est public et modifiable. Des modèles spécialisés et "frugaux" (moins consommateurs de ressources énergétiques) sont développés, permettant d'installer l'IA localement sur son ordinateur (ex: LM Studio).
Des acteurs comme Perplexity proposent des modèles qui citent leurs sources (même si la vérification reste nécessaire). Des initiatives françaises comme Playas entraînent des modèles Open Source sur des corpus de données transparents.
Citation : "il y a une une troisième voix qui est en train de s'ouvrir... J'ai il y a un acteur qui je trouve fait un travail fantastique en France qui s'appelle Playas qui est un acteur qui qui entraîne ses modèles ce qu'on appelle en open source."
Citation : "Les solutions commencent à émerger... il n'y a pas que les grands modèles générals qui sont après on va revenir peut-être à un moment donné mais qui sont très très consommateurs de ressources d'énergie On peut il y a il y a désormais une école de développement de l'IA qui est euh très frugal très spé spécial très spécifique à des sujets."
Citation : "Open AI est une solution privée où on ne connaît pas la source... Et il y a plein de modèles qui sont open source c'est-à-dire que le code il est publié en ligne."
L'éthique et l'écologie de l'IA : La course au "scaling" (augmenter l'échelle des modèles) des grands acteurs est très énergivore.
L'IA frugale, qui se concentre sur des tâches spécifiques et minimise les ressources, est une approche plus responsable. Une spécification AFNOR sur l'IA Frugale existe pour guider les développeurs.
Citation : "J'ai pas pu m'empêcher de faire mon petit coup de gueule sur l'usage des modèles généraux énormes et leur fabrication euh versus les petits modèles frugo et et open source."
Citation : "vous avez une spécification de l'AFNOR donc vraiment un truc officiel quand même qui s'appelle IA Frugal et qui donne des méthodes aux gens qui développent sur l'IA pour s'interroger sur la manière de le faire de la manière la plus la plus frugale."
Utilisation de l'IA comme outil d'amélioration dans l'éducation :
L'exemple de l'utilisation de l'IA pour aider une lycéenne à améliorer son devoir montre comment l'IA peut servir non pas à faire le travail à la place de l'humain, mais à le perfectionner et à développer des compétences critiques.
Citation : "on a plutôt essayé de voir comment Lia pouvait l'aider à faire mieux qu'à faire moins."
Conclusion Principale :
L'IA représente une évolution majeure de l'intelligence, inscrite dans une histoire longue de technologies qui ont suscité des craintes récurrentes.
Son impact sur le monde du travail, y compris dans le secteur associatif, est multiforme, avec des scénarios allant du remplacement à l'augmentation et à la réhumanisation du travail.
L'avènement de l'IA générative a démocratisé son usage, mais soulève des questions éthiques, écologiques et de qualité.
Il est crucial de ne pas se limiter aux grands modèles propriétaires et de considérer les alternatives Open Source et les approches d'IA frugale.
L'enjeu n'est pas nécessairement de "déléguer l'intelligence humaine à une machine", mais de comprendre comment l'IA peut être un outil pour améliorer et développer les compétences humaines, notamment en s'appuyant sur les forces relationnelles et créatives de l'humain, particulièrement importantes dans le monde associatif.
Être un "bon utilisateur" de l'IA, capable d'interpréter et de contextualiser ses réponses, est essentiel.
NOTE D'INFORMATION : Traque des pédocriminels en ligne par l'association Les Enfants d'Argus
Source : Extraits du documentaire "Ils TRAQUENT les pédocriminels en ligne - documentaire complet" (france.tv access)
Date : 26/10/2023
Sujet : Activités et motivations de l'association Les Enfants d'Argus dans la lutte contre la pédocriminalité en ligne.
Résumé Exécutif :
L'objectif est de recueillir des preuves d'infractions (corruption de mineurs, proposition sexuelle, diffusion d'images pornographiques, etc.) pour constituer des dossiers solides et les transmettre aux autorités judiciaires (police, gendarmerie, parquets) afin de mener à des arrestations et des condamnations.
L'association, active dans les pays francophones d'Europe (France, Suisse, Luxembourg, Belgique), s'appuie sur le travail d'une vingtaine à une trentaine de bénévoles, répartis en "enfants virtuels" (les appâts) et "enquêteurs" (ceux qui analysent les preuves et identifient les auteurs).
Les motivations des membres sont souvent liées à des expériences personnelles de traumatisme, la démarche étant perçue comme un moyen de trouver une utilité et de combattre un fléau omniprésent mais tabou.
Le travail est éprouvant émotionnellement et nécessite des précautions importantes pour la sécurité et la crédibilité des profils.
L'association collabore avec les autorités, précisant ne pas "voler" leur travail mais le compléter.
Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :
La méthode de l'Appât Virtuel :
L'association crée des profils fictifs sur les réseaux sociaux (principalement Facebook et Instagram) représentant des enfants de 10 à 12 ans. Ces profils sont conçus pour être crédibles, avec des centres d'intérêt (dessin, danse, chant, équitation), des photos (adultes rajeunis avec accord, photos libres de droit modifiées), et des publications imitant le langage et les fautes d'orthographe d'un enfant de cet âge.
"Un enfant virtuel, comme son nom l'indique, ce n'est pas un enfant, c'est un adulte qui a rejoint notre association... qui représente, sur les réseaux sociaux, un enfant qui aurait entre 10 et 12 ans..."
Ces comptes servent d'"appât" : "Le compte, c'est un appât ? - Oui, c'est un appât. - Et ça marche ? - Oui. Bah oui."
Étonnamment, les algorithmes des réseaux sociaux aident à diriger les "enfants virtuels" vers des "présumés pédocriminels" via les suggestions d'amis.
"Paradoxalement, nous, on ne fait rien. Absolument rien. Les algorithmes des réseaux sociaux, d'une manière générale, vont eux-mêmes nous diriger, en suggestion d'amis, chez certains présumés pédocriminels." Un "enfant virtuel" mentionne avoir près de 1000 demandes d'amis, majoritairement d'hommes.
L'omniprésence de la Pédocriminalité :
Les participants soulignent la fréquence alarmante des contacts initiés par des pédocriminels dès la création d'un faux profil enfant.
Un membre affirme : "La pédocriminalité, c'est vraiment... On se rend pas compte que nous, on connaît tous des gens... C'est partout. En moyenne, il y en a trois par classe."
Un autre ajoute : "sur les réseaux sociaux ou sur n'importe quel jeu électronique, il y a des pédocriminels. Comme je vous l'ai dit : là où il y a des enfants, il y aura des pédocriminels."
Le documentaire souligne que les agresseurs ne correspondent pas à un "profil type" et peuvent être "ton jardinier, ça peut être ton boulanger, ça peut être absolument n'importe qui."
La majorité des abus (environ 95%) ont lieu dans les cercles familiaux ou connus de l'enfant. L'association se concentre sur les 5% d'agressions commises par des inconnus rencontrés en ligne.
Les Motivations des Bénévoles :
De nombreux membres sont personnellement touchés par le fléau, ayant eux-mêmes été victimes ou connaissant des proches abusés.
"Je suis rentré dans l'association Les Enfants d'Argus parce que, malheureusement, comme beaucoup de gens dans le monde, j'ai été abusé quand j'étais enfant, et c'est ce qui a principalement motivé mes démarches pour rejoindre l'association."
Un membre exprime sa motivation principale par la "haine" envers les agresseurs, qui lui donne "tellement de détermination".
La démarche est aussi un moyen de trouver une "utilité à sa vie" et de "se servir de ses traumas comme d'une force".
La "satisfaction" de voir un agresseur inquiété ou arrêté est un facteur de motivation.
Le fait d'occuper les agresseurs sur les faux profils empêche ces derniers de contacter de vrais enfants : "même, juste le temps qu'on passe à parler avec ces mecs, c'est du temps en moins qu'ils ont à parler avec des vrais enfants. Donc, on ne fait pas rien."
Le Processus de Traque et de Constitution de Dossiers :
Les "enfants virtuels" interagissent avec les agresseurs potentiels, en maintenant la crédibilité de leur rôle et en évitant toute incitation. "Ne jamais laisser sous-entendre qu'on est d'accord pour avoir des relations sexuelles... jamais d'incitation."
Ils documentent les échanges, en particulier les "infractions claires et nettes" (demandes de photos, propositions sexuelles, envoi d'images pornographiques).
Les captures d'écran sont essentielles car les agresseurs suppriment souvent les messages. "Capture d'écran immédiatement et j'enregistre le média qu'il m'a envoyé... Heureusement qu'on l'a screenée, parce qu'on a bien notre preuve d'infraction."
Il est crucial de rappeler l'âge supposé de l'enfant virtuel dans les conversations pour caractériser l'intentionnalité de l'agresseur. "C'est précieux pour aller sur l'aspect psychologique, sur ce qu'on appelle l'intentionnalité... En ayant créé un avatar et en ayant fait... plusieurs messages un peu types : 'J'ai cet âge-là', 'Ça me fait peur, ce que tu me dis'... Avec plusieurs messages comme ça, ça permet de caractériser toute l'intentionnalité."
Les dossiers, compilant les preuves et les infractions caractérisées, sont ensuite transmis aux "enquêteurs".
Les "enquêteurs" analysent les nombreuses captures d'écran et messages (parfois plus de 140 screens et 1500 messages par dossier).
Ils effectuent des recherches en ligne ("OSINT" - Open Source INTelligence), en utilisant des informations publiques (profils Facebook, likes, photos, commentaires, etc.) pour tenter d'identifier l'auteur réel.
Des exemples de techniques d'identification sont donnés, comme l'analyse d'arrière-plans sur les photos pour repérer des lieux précis (une rambarde en fer forgé identifiée grâce à Google Street View).
L'association peut être convoquée comme partie civile lors du procès pour représenter l'enfant virtuel.
Les Défis et les Conséquences Émotionnelles :
Le travail d'"enfant virtuel" et d'"enquêteur" est décrit comme "fastidieux" et demandant "énormément de temps".
L'exposition constante à du contenu choquant ("voir des choses qui vont peut-être me faire vomir ou pleurer") est un poids émotionnel majeur.
"On est parfois confrontés à des choses qui sont dures... Les écrits, ça peut être dur, au même titre que les vidéos... Ce qu'il y a de plus dur, c'est le son. C'est ça, le plus dur."
Certains membres "craquent" et quittent l'association en raison de la difficulté émotionnelle.
Le "syndrome de Peter Pan" est mentionné pour décrire l'idéalisation du monde de l'enfance par les pédophiles, souvent liée à un sentiment de frustration de leur propre jeunesse.
Le suivi psychologique n'est pas optionnel pour les professionnels et est fortement recommandé pour les bénévoles compte tenu de l'exposition. Se mettre dans cette démarche sans préparation est perçu comme "se mettre soi-même en danger".
Les bénévoles doivent apprendre à "faire la part des choses" et à prendre du temps pour "décompresser" afin de préserver leur santé mentale.
La Collaboration avec les Autorités :
L'association précise ne pas "voler le travail de la police", mais les aider. "On n'est pas des shérifs... on va juste faire des dépôts de plaintes, et après, c'est entre les mains de la police ou de la gendarmerie et de la justice."
La collaboration avec certaines unités de police ou de gendarmerie est décrite comme positive ("Eux, ils sont vraiment bien").
Les dossiers bien documentés de l'association sont précieux pour les autorités car ils caractérisent l'"intentionnalité" des agresseurs.
Un procureur adjoint reconnaît que le système judiciaire actuel est débordé par la masse de signalements et que, malgré l'existence de peines et de condamnations, les moyens humains et matériels sont limités. "si l'intégralité de ces plaintes devait amener à des procès, notre système exploserait."
Structure et Fonctionnement de l'Association :
L'association compte entre 25 et 30 bénévoles, avec une limite d'environ 40-50 personnes pour rester gérable.
Elle s'organise avec des "enfants virtuels" et des "enquêteurs", encadrés par des "chefs d'équipe".
Une nouvelle salariée ("Akela") est embauchée pour professionnaliser l'association et aider à gérer la charge de travail croissante et les relations avec la justice.
La communication interne peut être complexe ("ça part dans tous les sens ou ça s'engueule presque"), nécessitant de la diplomatie.
Les arrivées et départs de bénévoles sont réguliers.
Conclusion :
Le documentaire met en lumière l'engagement profond et souvent douloureux des bénévoles de l'association
Les Enfants d'Argus dans la lutte contre la pédocriminalité en ligne.
Leur méthode, basée sur l'utilisation d'avatars d'enfants pour attirer les agresseurs et documenter leurs actes, est à la fois efficace pour obtenir des preuves et émotionnellement très éprouvante.
Bien que l'association contribue de manière significative à l'identification et la poursuite des agresseurs, elle opère dans un contexte où le phénomène de la pédocriminalité en ligne est massif et où le système judiciaire fait face à des contraintes de moyens importantes.
Les motivations personnelles, souvent liées à un passé traumatique, constituent un moteur puissant pour ces bénévoles, mais les risques pour leur santé mentale sont bien réels.
L'association représente une initiative citoyenne essentielle pour combler les lacunes dans la surveillance et la lutte contre ce fléau sur internet.
Document d'Information : Analyse des Biais Cognitifs, des Fake News et de la Post-Vérité
Source : Extraits de "Quels biais cognitifs à l’œuvre ?"
Date : [La date n'est pas précisée dans l'extrait, mais le contexte renvoie à des événements récents comme le Brexit et l'élection de Donald Trump.]
Auteur(s) : Michel Wieviorka (introduction) et Jean-Pierre Dozon (intervention sur la modernité sorcière).
Résumé Exécutif :
L'intervention de Jean-Pierre Dozon propose une perspective anthropologique, établissant un parallèle entre les théories du complot et le modèle de la sorcellerie, suggérant que ce dernier n'est pas une relique du passé mais une "modernité sorcière" universelle, particulièrement exacerbée par les inégalités et la circulation de l'information à l'ère de la globalisation.
Les intervenants soulignent le danger de la dissolution des frontières entre le vrai et le faux et la nécessité de recherches solides et d'une pensée critique non complotiste pour y faire face.
Thèmes Principaux :
Points Clés et Faits Importants :
Citations Clés :
Conclusion :
Les extraits offrent une analyse riche et multidimensionnelle des phénomènes de fake news et de post-vérité, les ancrant dans le contexte socio-politique contemporain tout en proposant une perspective anthropologique.
Ils mettent en lumière la complexité de la diffusion de l'information à l'ère numérique et le danger d'une polarisation croissante alimentée par des logiques de confiance et de défiance dissociées.
L'analogie avec la "modernité sorcière" suggère que la recherche d'explications alternatives, même irrationnelles, est une réponse profondément ancrée à un monde perçu comme injuste ou incompréhensible.
La période actuelle est vue comme un moment de transition où les anciennes références (sciences, médias, politique) sont remises en cause, rendant la promotion de la pensée critique et du débat démocratique d'autant plus essentielle.
La nécessité de recherches sociales rigoureuses et non complotistes pour comprendre ces dynamiques est un appel majeur.
Author response:
We will revise the statements of novelty in the introduction by more clearly emphasizing how our model addresses gaps in the existing literature. In addition, we will clarify the description of the dispersal process. Briefly, we use the same dispersal gene β to represent the likelihood an individual will either leave or join a group, thereby quantifying both dispersal and immigration using the same parameter. Specifically, individuals with higher β are more likely to remain as floaters (i.e., disperse from their natal group to become a breeder elsewhere), whereas those with lower β are either more likely to remain in their natal group as subordinates (i.e., queue in a group for the breeding position) or join another group if they dispersed. Immigrants that join a group as a subordinate help and queue for a breeding position, as does any natal subordinate born into the group. To follow the suggestion of the referee and more fully explore the impact of competition between subordinates born in the group and subordinate immigrants, we will explore extending our model to allow dispersers to leave their natal group and join another as subordinates, by incorporating a reaction norm based on their age or rank (D = 1 / (1 + exp (β<sub>t</sub> * t – β<sub>0</sub>)) . This approach will allow individuals to adjust also their dispersal strategy to their competitiveness and to avoid kin competition by remaining as a subordinate in another group.
We apologize that there was some confusion with terminology. We use the term “disperser” to describe individuals that disperse from their natal group. Dispersers can assume one of three roles: (1) they can migrate to another group as "subordinates"; (2) they can join another group as "breeders" if they successfully outcompete other candidates; or (3) they can remain as "floaters" if they fail to join a group. "Floaters" are individuals who persist in a transient state without access to a breeding territory, waiting for opportunities to join a group in an established territory. Therefore, dispersers do not work when they are floaters, but they may later help if they immigrate to a group as a subordinate. Consequently, immigrant subordinates have no inherent competitive advantage over natal subordinates (as step 2.2. “Join a group” is followed by step 3. “Help”, which occurs before step 5. “Become a breeder”). Nevertheless, floaters can potentially outcompete subordinates of the same age if they attempt to breed without first queuing as a subordinate (step 5) when subordinates are engaged in work tasks. We believe that this assumption is realistic and constitutes part of the costs associated with work tasks. However, floaters are at a disadvantage for becoming a breeder because: (1) floaters incur higher mortality than individuals within groups (eq. 3); and (2) floaters may only attempt to become breeders in some breeding cycles (versus subordinate groups members, who are automatically candidates for an open breeding position in the group in each cycle). Therefore, due to their higher mortality, floaters are rarely older than individuals within groups, which heavily influences dominance value and competitiveness. Additionally, any competitive advantage that floaters might have over other subordinate group members is unlikely to drive the kin selection-only results because subordinates would preferably choose defense tasks instead of work tasks so as not to be at a competitive disadvantage compared to floaters.
We note that reviewers also mention that floaters often aren't usually high resource holding potential (RHP) individuals and, therefore, our assumptions might be unrealistic. As we explain above, floaters are not inherently at a competitive advantage in our model. In any case, empirical work in a number of species has shown that dispersers are not necessarily those of lower RHP or of lower quality. In fact, according to the ecological constraints hypothesis, one might predict that high quality individuals are the ones that disperse because only individuals in good condition (e.g., larger body size, better energy reserves) can afford the costs associated with dispersal (Cote et al., 2022). By adding a reaction norm approach to explore the role of age or rank in the revised version, we can also determine whether higher or lower quality individuals are the ones dispersing. We will address the issues of terminology and clarity of the relative competitive advantage of floaters versus subordinates, and also include more information in the Supplementary Tables (e.g., the number of floaters). As a side note, the “scramble context” we mention was an additional implementation that we decided to remove from the final manuscript, but we forgot to remove from Table 1 before submission.
The reviewers also raised a question about asexual reproduction and relatedness more generally. As we showed in the Supplementary Tables and the section on relatedness in the SI (“Kin selection and the evolution of division of labor"), high relatedness does not appear to explain our results. In evolutionary biology generally and in game theory specifically (with the exception of models on sexual selection or sex-specific traits), asexual reproduction is often modelled because it reduces unnecessary complexity. To further study the effect of relatedness on kin structures more closely resembling those of vertebrates, however, we will create an additional “relatedness structure level”, where we will shuffle half of the philopatric offspring using the same method used to remove relatedness completely. This approach will effectively reduce relatedness structure by half and overcome the concerns with our decision to model asexual reproduction.
Briefly, we will elaborate on the concept of division of labor and the tasks that cooperative breeders perform. In nature, multiple tasks are often necessary to successfully rear offspring. For example, in many cooperatively breeding birds, the primary reasons that individuals fail to produce offspring are (1) starvation, which is mitigated by the feeding of offspring, and (2) nest depredation, which is countered by defensive behavior. Consequently, both types of tasks are necessary to successfully produce offspring, and focusing solely on one while neglecting the other is likely to result in lower reproductive success than if both tasks are performed by individuals within the group. We simplify this principle in the model by maximizing reproductive output when both tasks are carried out to a similar extent, allowing for some flexibility from the mean. In response to the reviewer suggestion about making fecundity a function of work tasks and offspring survival as a function of defensive tasks, these are actually equivalent in model terms, as it’s the same whether breeders produce three offspring and two die, or if they only produce one. This represents, of course, a simplification of the natural context, where breeding unsuccessfully is more costly (in terms of time and energy investment) than not breeding at all, but this is approach is typically used in models of this sort.
The scope of this paper was to study division of labor in cooperatively breeding species with fertile workers, in which help is exclusively directed towards breeders to enhance offspring production (i.e., alloparental care). Our focus is in line with previous work in most other social animals, including eusocial insects and humans, which emphasizes how division of labor maximizes group productivity. Other forms of “general” help are not considered in the paper, and such forms of help are rarely considered in cooperatively breeding vertebrates or in the division of labor literature, as they do not result in task partitioning to enhance productivity.
How do we model help? Help provided is an interaction between H (total effort) and T (proportion of total effort invested in each type of task). We will make this definition clearer in the revised manuscript. Thank you for pointing out an error in Eq. 1. This inequality was indeed written incorrectly in the paper (but is correct in the model code); it is dominance rank instead of age (see code in Individual.cpp lines 99-119). We will correct this mistake in the revision.
There was also a question about bounded and unbounded helping costs. The difference in costs is inherent to the nature of the different task (work or defense): while survival is naturally bounded, with death as the lower bound, dominance costs are potentially unbounded, as they are influenced by dynamic social contexts and potential competitors. Therefore, we believe that the model’s cost structure is not too different to that in nature.
Thank you for your comments about the parameter landscape. It is important to point out that variations in the mutation rate do not qualitatively affect our results, as this is something we explored in previous versions of the model (not shown). Briefly, we find that variations in the mutation rates only alter the time required to reach equilibrium. Increasing the step size of mutation diminishes the strength of selection by adding stochasticity and reducing the genetic correlation between offspring and their parents. Population size could, in theory, affect our results, as small populations are more prone to extinction. Since this was not something we planned to explore in the paper directly, we specifically chose a large population size, or better said, a large number of territories (i.e. 5000) that can potentially host a large population.
During the exploratory phase of the model development, various parameters and values were also assessed. However, the manuscript only details the ranges of values and parameters where changes in the behaviors of interest were observed, enhancing clarity and conciseness. For instance, variation in y<sub>h</sub> (the cost of help on dominance when performing “work tasks”) led to behavioral changes similar to those caused by changes in x<sub>h</sub> (the cost of help in survival when performing “defensive tasks”), as both are proportional to each other. Specifically, since an increase in defense costs raises the proportion of work relative to defense tasks, while an increase in the costs of work task has the opposite effect, only results for the variation of x<sub>h</sub> were included in the manuscript to avoid redundancy. We will make this clearer in the revision.
Finally, following the advice from the reviewers, we will add the symbols of the variables to the figure axes, and clarify whether the values shown represent a genetic or phenotypic trait. In Figure 2, the x-axis is H and the y-axis is T. In Figure 3A, the subindex t in x-axis is incorrect; it should be subindex R (reaction norm to dominance rank instead of age), the y-axis is T. In Figure 3B, the x-axis is R, and the y-axis is T. All values of T, H and R are phenotypic expressed values (see Table 1). For instance, T values are the phenotypic expressed values from the individuals in the population according to their genetic gamma values and their current dominance rank at a given time point.
References
Cote, J., Dahirel, M., Schtickzelle, N., Altermatt, F., Ansart, A., Blanchet, S., Chaine, A. S., De Laender, F., De Raedt, J., & Haegeman, B. (2022). Dispersal syndromes in challenging environments: A cross‐species experiment. Ecology Letters, 25(12), 2675–2687.
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Los grades repositorios permiten un divulgación paga, lo que puede llamar personas interesadas en mi tema, debido a la jerarquía algorítmica que ofrecen, a su vez permite ser citado lo que da un prestigio académico. Muchos de los autores que hoy en día son citados han pasado por la divulgación del voz a voz, un trabajo largo y tedioso. Las infraestructuras utilizadas permiten divulgar, comentar y recibir retroalimentación, aunque nada garantiza un reconocimiento, más que la ética del lector, además que suele necesitar un nivel de literacidad digital, para participar en estos entornos participativos, lo que me problematiza lo que llamamos participación, pues si la interfaz no es amigable coarta la participación, pero el publicar en estos espacios puede llevar a interesar a nuevos usuarios.
La fase inicial permitirá identificar patrones de apropiación tecnológica y seleccionar una muestra intencionada para el desarrollo de la segunda fase cualitativa
Me quedan dudas si la primera parte no es cualitativa, ya que haces énfasis en que está en una segunda fase.
artificial
Creo que es positivo que puedas mirar los debates que propone el doctorado frente al concepto "inteligencia artificial". Artificial podría problematizarse, además porque ya estás hablando de que es generativa.<br /> Podrías abrir la discusión desde el inicio sobre lo que se está entendiendo en tu trabajo como artificial, justamente por la coexistencia de formas humanas de producción simbólica y de conocimiento.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public Review):
Summary:
Nuclear depletion and cytoplasmic mislocalization/aggregation of the DNA and RNA binding protein TDP-43 are pathological hallmarks of multiple neurodegenerative diseases. Prior work has demonstrated that depletion of TDP-43 from the nucleus leads to alterations in transcription and splicing. Conversely, cytoplasmic mislocalization/aggregation can contribute to toxicity by impairing mRNA transport and translation as well as miRNA dysregulation. However, to date, models of TDP-43 proteinopathy rely on artificial knockdown- or overexpression-based systems to evaluate either nuclear loss or cytoplasmic gain of function events independently. Few model systems authentically reproduce both nuclear depletion and cytoplasmic miscloalization/aggregation events. In this manuscript, the authors generate novel iPSC-based reagents to manipulate the localization of endogenous TDP-43. This is a valuable resource for the field to study pathological consequences of TDP-43 proteinopathy in a more endogenous and authentic setting. However, in the current manuscript, there are a number of weaknesses that should be addressed to further validate the ability of this model to replicate human disease pathology and demonstrate utility for future studies.
Strengths:
The primary strength of this paper is the development of a novel in vitro tool.
Weaknesses:
There are a number of weaknesses detailed below that should be addressed to thoroughly validate these new reagents as more authentic models of TDP-43 proteinopathy and demonstrate their utility for future investigations.
(1) The authors should include images of their engineered TDP-43-GFP iPSC line to demonstrate TDP-43 localization without the addition of any nanobodies (perhaps immediately prior to addition of nanobodies). Additionally, it is unclear whether simply adding a GFP tag to endogenous TDP-43 impact its normal function (nuclear-cytoplasmic shuttling, regulation of transcription and splicing, mRNA transport etc).
We have included images of the untransduced day 20 MNs derived from the engineered TDP43-GFP iPSC lines and the unedited line (Supplementary Fig. 1B).
We acknowledge the reviewer’s concern about the potential impact of the GFP tag on TDP43's normal function. To address this, we have validated the functionality of TDP43 by assessing the inclusion of cryptic exons in highly sensitive targets such as UNC13A and STMN2, both of which are known to be directly regulated by TDP43.
We compared MNs derived from the unedited parent line with the TDP43-GFP MNs prior to nanobody addition. As measured by qPCR, cryptic exon inclusion in UNC13A and STMN2 was not observed in the unedited or edited TDP43-GFP MNs (Supplementary Fig.1C), confirming that the tagging does not induce splicing defects by itself. The cryptic exon inclusion in UNC13A and STMN2 were only observed in TDP43-GFP MNs expressing the NES nanobody (Supplementary Fig. 2D). These findings were further supported by our next-generation sequencing data, which also showed that cryptic exon inclusion was specific to the TDP43 mislocalization condition (Supplementary Fig.3 and 4).
Thus, we have strong evidence that the GFP-tagged TDP43 behaves similarly to the wild-type protein and does not interfere with its function in our model.
(2) Can the authors explain why there is a significant discrepancy in time points selected for nanobody transduction and immunostaining or cell lysis throughout Figure 1 and 2? This makes interpretation and overall assessment of the model challenging.
For the phenotypic data shown in Fig.1, we added the AAVs at day 18 or 20 and analyzed the cells at day 40. For the phosphorylated TDP43 western blot (revised Fig. 3D), cells were treated with doxycycline at day 20 to induce nanobody expression and samples were harvested at day 40. Thus, cells were harvested between days 20 or 22 after adding the nanobodies. The onset of transgene expression when using AAVs in neurons typically display slow kinetics. We observed TDP43 mislocalization in less than 50% of the neurons after 7 days post-transduction that peaked at 10-12 days after addition of the nanobodies, when more than 80% of the cells displayed TDP43 mislocalization. Hence, we do not believe that a two-day difference significantly alters the interpretation of the data.
The decision to harvest neurons at day 30 for the qPCR data was taken to investigate whether the splicing changes seen at day 40 from the transcriptomics analysis can be detected well before the phenotypes observed at day 40.
(3) The authors should further characterize their TDP-43 puncta. TDP-43 immunostaining is typically punctate so it is unclear if the puncta observed are physiologic or pathologic based on the analyses carried out in the current version of this manuscript. Additionally, do these puncta co-localize with stress granule markers or RNA transport granule markers? Are these puncta phosphorylated (which may be more reminiscent of end-stage pathologic observations in humans)?
We have tried immunostaining neurons for phosphorylated TDP43. However, our immunostaining attempts were unsuccessful. Depending on the antibody, we either saw no signal (antibody from Cosmo Bio, TIP-PTD-M01A) or even the control neurons displayed detectable phosphorylation within the nucleus (antibody from Proteintech 22309-1-AP). Consequently, we performed western blot analysis using an antibody from Cosmo Bio, (TIP-PTD-M01A) that clearly shows hyperphosphorylation of TDP43 in whole cell lysates (Fig. 3D, E). Hence, we have referred to these structures as puncta and not aggregates (Page 4).
To assess co-localization of the puncta with stress granules, we immunostained for the stress granule marker G3BP1. This was done in MNs that were treated with sodium arsenite (SA) or PBS as a control. In the PBS treated control MN cultures, TDP43 mislocalization alone did not induce stress granule formation. G3BP1+ stress granules were only observed following SA stress (0.5 mM, 60 minutes). Further, only a subset of TDP43 puncta overlapped with these stress granules (Supplementary Fig. 7) (Page 6).
(4) The authors should include multiple time points in their evaluation of TDP-43 loss of function events and aggregation. Does loss of function get worse over time? Is there a time course by which RNA misprocessing events emerge or does everything happen all at once? Does aggregation get worse over time? Do these neurons die at any point as a result of TDP-43 proteinopathy?
We agree that a time course to analyze TDP43 mislocalization and its consequences would be ideal. However, the mislocalization of TDP43 across neurons is not a coordinated process. At each given time instance, neurons display varying levels of TDP43 mislocalization. Answering the questions raised by the reviewer would require tracking individual neurons in real time in a controlled environment over weeks. Unfortunately, we currently do not have the hardware to run these experiments. However, we do observe increased levels of cleaved caspase 3 in MNs expressing the NES nanobody, indicating that these neurons indeed undergo apoptosis by day 40 (Fig.1).
We have, however, analyzed changes in splicing using qPCR for 12 genes over a time course starting as early as 4 hours after inducing mislocalization. We detect time-dependent cryptic splicing events in all genes as early as 8 hours after doxycycline addition, coinciding with the appearance TDP43 mislocalization (Fig. 4A, B).
(5) Can the authors please comment on whether or not their model is "tunable"? In real human disease, not every neuron displays complete nuclear depletion of TDP-43. Instead there is often a gradient of neurons with differing magnitudes of nuclear TDP-43 loss. Additionally, very few neurons (5-10%) harbor cytoplasmic TDP-43 aggregates at end-stage disease. These are all important considerations when developing a novel authentic and endogenous model of TDP-43 proteinopathy which the current manuscript fails to address.
As shown in Fig .1, the neurons expressing the NES-nanobody display a wide range of mislocalization as assessed by the % of nuclear TDP43 present. By titrating the amount of AAVs added to the culture, the model can be tuned to achieve a wide gradient of TDP43 mislocalization.
We calculated the size and percentage of neurons displaying TDP43 puncta. The size and the number of aggregates varies across the neurons that display TDP43 mislocalization. Around 50% of the neurons displayed small (1 um<sup>2</sup>) puncta while large puncta (> 5 um<sup>2</sup>) were observed in <10% of the cells, similar to observations in patient tissue (Fig. 1F).
Reviewer #2 (Public Review):
Summary:
TDP-43 mislocalization occurs in nearly all of ALS, roughly half of FTD, and as a co-pathology in roughly half of AD cases. Both gain-of-function and loss-of-function mechanisms associated with this mislocalization likely contribute to disease pathogeneisis.
Here, the authors describe a new method to induce TDP-43 mislocalization in cellular models. They endogenously tagged TDP-43 with a C-terminal GFP tag in human iPSCs. They then expressed an intrabody - fused with a nuclear export signal (NES) - that targeted GFP to the cytosol. Expression of this intrabody-NES in human iPSC-derived neurons induced nuclear depletion of homozygous TDP-43-GFP, caused its mislocalization to the cytosol, and at least in some cells appeared to cause cytosolic aggregates. This mislocalization was accompanied by induction of cryptic exons in well characterized transcripts known to be regulated by TDP-43, a hallmark of functional TDP-43 loss and consistent with pathological nuclear TDP-43 depletion. Interestingly, in heterozygous TDP-43-GFP neurons, expression of intrabody-NES appeared to also induce the mislocalization of untagged TDP-43 in roughly half of the neurons, suggesting that this system can also be used to study effects on untagged endogenous TDP-43 as well as TDP-43-GFP fusion protein.
Strengths:
A clearer understanding of how TDP-43 mislocalization alters cellular function, as well as pathways that mitigate clearance of TDP-43 aggregates, is critical. But modeling TDP-43 mislocalization in disease-relevant cellular systems has proven to be challenging. High levels of overexpression of TDP-43 lacking an NES can drive endogenous TDP-43 mislocalization, but such overexpression has direct and artificial consequences on certain cellular features (e.g. altered exon skipping) not seen in diseased patients. Toxic small molecules such as MG132 and arsenite can induce TDP-43 mislocalization, but co-induce myriad additional cellular dysfunctions unrelated to TDP-43 or ALS. TDP-43 binding oligonucleotides can cause cytosolic mislocalization as well. Each system has pros and cons, and additional ways to induce TDP-43 mislocalization would be useful for the field. The method described in this manuscript could provide researchers with a powerful way to study the combined biology of cytosolic TDP-43 mislocalization and nuclear TDP-43 depletion, with additional temporal control that is lacking in current method. Indeed, the authors see some evidence of differences in RNA splicing caused by pure TDP-43 depletion versus their induced mislocalization model. Finally, their method may be especially useful in determining how TDP-43 aggregates are cleared by cells, potentially revealing new biological pathways that could be therapeutically targeted.
Weaknesses:
The method and supporting data have limitations in its current form, outlined below, and in its current form the findings are rather preliminary.
(1) Tagging of TDP-43 with a bulky GFP tag may alter its normal physiological functions, for example phase separation properties and functions within complex ribonucleoprotein complexes. In addition, alternative isoforms of TDP-43 (e.g. "short" TDP-43, would not be GFP tagged and therefore these species would not be directly manipulatable or visualizable with the tools currently employed in the manuscript.
With reference to our answer above, we have confirmed using qPCR and RNA-seq analysis that adding a GFP tag to the C-terminus of TDP43 does not result in an appreciable loss of functionality. We do not observe any cryptic exon inclusion in STMN2 and UNC13A. Cryptic exon inclusion in these genes, especially STMN2, has been recognized as a very sensitive indicator of TDP43 loss of function (Supplementary Fig 1C, Supplementary 2D, Fig. 3, Fig.4)
We acknowledge that truncated alternatively spliced versions of TDP43 will lose the GFP-tag and cannot be manipulated with our system. Since our GFP tag is positioned on the C-terminus, our system cannot manipulate these truncated fragments as the tag is lost in these isoforms. But these isoforms, if present, should be detectable using the Proteintech antibody against total TDP43, which recognizes N-terminal TDP43 epitopes. However, western blot analysis, even 20 days after inducing TDP43 mislocalization, showed no truncated fragments. This suggests that TDP43 mislocalization alone is insufficient to generate significant levels of truncated isoforms. We have added this section to the Limitations paragraph (page 9).
(2) The data regarding potential mislocalization of endogenous TDP-43 in the heterozygous TDP-43-GFP lines is especially intriguing and important, yet very little characterization was done. Does untagged TDP-43 co-aggregate with the tagged TDP-43? Is localization of TDP-43 immunostaining the same as the GFP signal in these cells?
The purpose of the heterozygous experiments was to see whether mislocalized TDP43 could potentially trap the untagged TDP43. If this was not the case, we would have seen a maximum of 50% of the TDP43 signal mislocalized to the cytoplasm. The fact that a sizeable proportion of cells had significantly higher levels of TDP43 loss from the nucleus, indicates that mislocalized TDP43 can indeed trap the untagged protein fraction. We used GFP immunostaining to identify the tagged TDP43 while an antibody against the endogenous TDP43 protein was used to detect total TDP43 levels. In the cells that show near complete loss of nuclear TDP43, the total TDP43 signal coincides with the GFP (tagged TDP43) signal. We are unable to distinguish the untagged fraction selectively as we do not have an antibody that can detect this directly.
But we agree with the reviewer that these observations need further detailed follow-up that we are unable to provide currently. Hence, we have removed this figure from the manuscript.
(3) The experiments in which dox was used to induce the nanobody-NES, then dox withdrawn to study potential longer-lasting or self-perpetuating inductions of aggregation is potentially interesting. However, the nanobody was only measured at the RNA level. We know that protein half lives can be very long in neurons, and therefore residual nanobody could be present at these delayed time points. The key measurement to make would be at the protein level of the nanobody if any conclusions are be made from this experiment.
The reviewer has highlighted an important point. To address this issue, we tagged the nanobodies with a V5 tag that allowed us to directly measure nanobody levels within cells. After Dox withdrawal, we indeed observed significant expression of the nanobody within cells even after two weeks of Dox withdrawal. Extending the time point to three weeks allowed complete loss of the nanobody in most neurons. However, in contrast to our observations at two weeks, this was accompanied by a reversal of TDP43 mislocalization in these neurons at three weeks (Fig. 5).
Surprisingly, in less than 10% of the neurons, we observed >80% of the total TDP43 still mislocalized to the cytoplasm, despite nearly undetectable levels of the nanobody. Super-resolution microscopy further revealed persistent cytoplasmic TDP43 in these neurons that did not overlap with residual nanobody signal. This suggests that in these neurons, the nanobody was no longer required to maintain TDP43 mislocalization (Fig. 5, page 7)
(4) Potential differences in splicing and microRNAs between TDP-43 knockdown and TDP-43 mislocalization are potentially interesting. However, different patterns of dysregulated RNA splicing can occur at different levels of TDP-knockdown, thus it is difficult to assess whether the changes observed in this paper are due to mislocalization per se, or rather just reflect differences in nuclear TDP-43 abundance.
This a fair point. It is possible that microRNA dysregulation might require a greater loss of nuclear TDP43 and maybe more resilient to TDP43 loss as compared to splicing. We have acknowledged this in the discussion section (page 9).
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):
(1) It would be helpful to include nuclear vs cytoplasmic ratios of TDP-43 instead of simply "% nuclear TDP-43"
We have used % nuclear TDP43 as these values have biologically meaningful upper and lower bounds, which makes it easier to compare across experiments. We found that using a ratio of nuclear vs cytoplasmic TDP43 intensities displayed higher variability and a wider range.
We have re-labelled the y-axis as “% Nuclear TD43 / soma TDP43” to make our quantification clearer. The conversion from % nuclear TDP43 to N/C is straightforward. If the % nuclear TDP43 is X, then the N/C ratio can be calculated as X / (100-X). For example, a % nuclear TDP43 of 80% would amount to an N/C ratio of 80/20 = 4.
(2) The axis descriptions in Figure 1D are very unclear. While this is described better in the figure legend, it would be beneficial to have a more descriptive y-axis title in the figure (which may mean increasing the number of graphs).
Axis descriptions and figures changed as recommended.
(3) In Figure 1, the time points at which iPSNs were transduced with nanobody and/or fixed for immunostaining is somewhat inconsistent across all panels. This hinders interpretation of the figure as a whole. The authors should use same transduction and immunostaining time points for consistency or demonstrate that the same phenotype is observed regardless of transduction and immunostaining day as long as the time in between (time of nano body expression) is consistent. Subsequently, in Figure 2, a different set of time points is used.
Please see our response in the public comments above
(4) In Figure 1, please show individual data points for each independent differentiation to demonstrate the level of reproducibility from batch to batch.
Data points have been shown per replicate (Supplementary Fig. 2)
We have refined our approach for phenotypic analysis to improve consistency across different clones. Previously, we set thresholds on % nuclear TDP43 to distinguish MNs with nuclear versus mislocalized TDP43. This was done by ranking all cells based on % nuclear TDP43 and applying quantile-based thresholds—designating the top 25% as control and the bottom 25% as mislocalized, ensuring equal number of cells per category. However, we observed significant variability in thresholds across clones. For instance, the E8 clone had thresholds of 96% and 29%, while the E5 clone had 93% and 40%.
To address this, we reanalysed the data using a standardized three-bin approach:
(1) Control: MNs expressing the control nanobody.
(2) Low-Moderate Mislocalization: MNs expressing the NES nanobody with > 40% nuclear TDP43.
(3) Severe Mislocalization: MNs expressing the NES nanobody with < 40% nuclear TDP43.
This approach ensured a more reliable comparison of TDP43 mislocalization effects across experiments. The conclusions remain the same.
(5) In Figure 2, please show individual data points.
Data points for all the qPCR analyses in the paper have been included as a supplementary text file.
(6) In Figure 3, please show individual data points.
Data points for the western blot data have been included as a supplementary data file.
All other comments are within the public review.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):
(1) In general more robust quantification of many of the described phenotypes are necessary. In particular, no apparent quantification of cytosolic mislocalization was performed in Figure 1, or quantification of mislocalization of Figure 3F. It is unclear in the western blot in Fig 1G if TDP-43 signal were normalized to total protein, and of note it seems that expression of the intrabody-NES reduced total proteins in the western blots that were shown. No quantification or measurement of the insoluble material was done or shown.
We have quantified cytosolic mislocalization of TDP43 (Fig. 1C). The y-axis indicates the total TDP43 signal observed in the nucleus as a percentage of the total signal observed in the soma (including the nucleus). This value has the advantage of ranging between 100% (perfectly nuclear) to 0% (complete nuclear loss). The boxplots indicate that expression of the NES-nanobody results in a range of cytosolic mislocalization with a median value around 40% of the TDP43 remaining in the nucleus.
Western blot data in previous Fig. 1G was normalized to alpha-tubulin. We were unable to get a good signal for the insoluble fraction. From the alpha-tubulin alone, it cannot be concluded that NES-nanobody results in a decrease in total protein levels. In the revised western blot for phosphorylated TDP43 (Fig. 3D, E), we have quantified total and phosphorylated TDP43. Here, we observe a six-fold increase in the levels of phosphorylated TDP43 without a significant change in total TDP43 protein levels.
To avoid potential mis-interpretation of our results, we have now removed the previous Fig. 1G.
(2) Additional images of nearly all microscopy data at higher magnifications would be required to better evaluate TDP-43 localization. Ideally including images for each channel in addition to merged images, and especially for key figures such as Figure 1B, 3B, 3F.
Better images have been provided.
(3) No control images were shown for Figure 1F and 3F. It is unclear what the bright punctate spots of cytoplasmic TDP-43 GFP signal represent. Are these true aggregates? If so, additional characterization would be required before such conclusions can be made, beyond the relatively superficial western blot analysis that was done in Figure 1.
Control images have now been provided (Figure 1E). As we mentioned above, immunostaining analysis to characterize whether the aggregates are phosphorylated failed to provide a clear signal. However, we have now confirmed that the mislocalized TDP43 is indeed hyper-phosphorylated (Figure 3D, E). We have acknowledged this in the main text, and have referred to these as puncta reminiscent of aggregates (Page 4, Page 6).
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Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public Review):
Summary:
This paper reports an intracranial SEEG study of speech coordination, where participants synchronize their speech output with a virtual partner that is designed to vary its synchronization behavior. This allows the authors to identify electrodes throughout the left hemisphere of the brain that have activity (both power and phase) that correlates with the degree of synchronization behavior. They find that high-frequency activity in the secondary auditory cortex (superior temporal gyrus) is correlated to synchronization, in contrast to primary auditory regions. Furthermore, activity in the inferior frontal gyrus shows a significant phase-amplitude coupling relationship that is interpreted as compensation for deviation from synchronized behavior with the virtual partner.
Strengths:
(1) The development of a virtual partner model trained for each individual participant, which can dynamically vary its synchronization to the participant's behavior in real-time, is novel and exciting.
(2) Understanding real-time temporal coordination for behaviors like speech is a critical and understudied area.
(3) The use of SEEG provides the spatial and temporal resolution necessary to address the complex dynamics associated with the behavior.
(4) The paper provides some results that suggest a role for regions like IFG and STG in the dynamic temporal coordination of behavior both within an individual speaker and across speakers performing a coordination task.
We thank the Reviewer for their positive comments on our manuscript.
Weaknesses:
(1) The main weakness of the paper is that the results are presented in a largely descriptive and vague manner. For instance, while the interpretation of predictive coding and error correction is interesting, it is not clear how the experimental design or analyses specifically support such a model, or how they differentiate that model from the alternatives. It's possible that some greater specificity could be achieved by a more detailed examination of this rich dataset, for example by characterizing the specific phase relationships (e.g., positive vs negative lags) in areas that show correlations with synchronization behavior. However, as written, it is difficult to understand what these results tell us about how coordination behavior arises.
We understand the reviewer’s comment. It is true that this work, being the first in the field using real-time adapting synchronous speech and intracerebral neural data, is a descriptive work, that hopefully will pave the way for further studies. We have now added more statistical analyses (see point 2) to go beyond a descriptive approach and we have also rewritten the discussion to clarify how this work can possibly contribute to disentangle different models of language interaction. Most importantly we have also run new analyses taking into account the specific phase relationship, as suggested.
We already had an analysis using instantaneous phase difference in the phase-amplitude coupling approach, that bridges phase of behaviour to neural responses (amplitude in the high-frequency range). However, this analysis, as the reviewer noted, does not distinguish between positive and negative lags, but rather uses the continuous fluctuations of coordinative behaviour. Following the reviewer’s suggestion, we have now run a new analysis estimating the average delay (between virtual partner speech and patient speech) in each trial, using a cross-correlation approach. This gives a distribution of delays across trials that can then be “binned” as positive or negative. We have thus rerun the phase-amplitude coupling analyses on positive and negative trials separately, to assess whether the phase amplitude relationship depends upon the anticipatory (negative lags) or compensatory (positive lags) behaviour. Our new analysis (now in the supplementary, see figure below) does not reveal significant differences between positive and negative lags. This lack of difference, although not easy to interpret, is nonetheless interesting because it seems to show that the IFG does not have a stronger coupling for anticipatory trials. Rather the IFG seems to be strongly involved in adjusting behaviour, minimizing the error, independently of whether this is early or late.
We have updated the “Coupling behavioural and neurophysiological data” section in Materials and methods as follows:
“In the third approach, we assessed whether the phase-amplitude relationship (or coupling) depends upon the anticipatory (negative delays) or compensatory (positive delays) behaviour between the VO and the patients’ speech. We computed the average delay in each trial using a cross-correlation approach on speech signals (between patient and VP) with the MATLAB function xcorr. A median split (patient-specific ; average median split = 0ms, average sd = 24ms) was applied to conserve a sufficient amount of data, classifying trials below the median as “anticipatory behaviour” and trials above the median as “compensatory behaviour”. Then we conducted the phase-amplitude coupling analyses on positive and negative trials separately.”
We also added a paragraph on this finding in the Discussion:
“Our results highlight the involvement of the inferior frontal gyrus (IFG) bilaterally, in particular the BA44 region, in speech coordination. First, trials with a weak verbal coordination (VCI) are accompanied by more prominent high frequency activity (HFa, Fig.4; Fig.S4). Second, when considering the within-trial time-resolved dynamics, the phase-amplitude coupling (PAC) reveals a tight relation between the low frequency behavioural dynamics (phase) and the modulation of high-frequency neural activity (amplitude, Fig.5B ; Fig.S5). This relation is strongest when considering the phase adjustments rather than the phase of speech of the VP per se : larger deviations in verbal coordination are accompanied by increase in HFa. Additionally, we also tested for potential effects of different asynchronies (i.e., temporal delay) between the participant's speech and that of the virtual partner but found no significant differences (Fig.S6). While lack of delay-effect does not permit to conclude about the sensitivity of BA44 to absolute timing of the partner’s speech, its neural dynamics are linked to the ongoing process of resolving phase deviations and maintaining synchrony.”
(2) In the results section, there's a general lack of quantification. While some of the statistics reported in the figures are helpful, there are also claims that are stated without any statistical test. For example, in the paragraph starting on line 342, it is claimed that there is an inverse relationship between rho-value and frequency band, "possibly due to the reversed desynchronization/synchronization process in low and high frequency bands". Based on Figure 3, the first part of this statement appears to be true qualitatively, but is not quantified, and is therefore impossible to assess in relation to the second part of the claim. Similarly, the next paragraph on line 348 describes optimal clustering, but statistics of the clustering algorithm and silhouette metric are not provided. More importantly, it's not entirely clear what is being clustered - is the point to identify activity patterns that are similar within/across brain regions? Or to interpret the meaning of the specific patterns? If the latter, this is not explained or explored in the paper.
The reviewer is right. We have now added statistical analyses showing that:
(1) the ratio between synchronization and desynchronization evolves across frequencies (as often reported in the literature).
(2) the sign of rho values also evolves across frequencies.
(3) the clustering does indeed differ when taking into account behaviour. We have also clarified the use of clustering and the reasoning behind it.
We have updated the Materials and methods section as follows:
“The statistical difference between spatial clustering in global effect and brain-behaviour correlation was estimated with linear model using the R function lm (stat package), post-hoc comparisons were corrected for multiple comparisons using the Tukey test (lsmeans R package ; Lenth, 2016). The statistical difference between clustering in global effect and behaviour correlation across the number of clusters was estimated using permutation tests (N=1000) by computing the silhouette score difference between the two conditions.” We have updated the Results section as follows:
(1) “This modulation between synchronization and desynchronization across frequencies was significant (F(5) = 6.42, p < .001 ; estimated with linear model using the R function lm).”
(2) “The first observation is a gradual transition in the direction of correlations as we move up frequency bands, from positive correlations at low frequencies to negative ones at high frequencies (F(5) = 2.68, p = .02). This effect, present in both hemispheres, mimics the reversed desynchronization/synchronization process in low and high frequency bands reported above.”
(3) “Importantly, compared to the global activity (task vs rest, Fig 3A), the neural spatial profile of the behaviour-related activity (Fig 3B) is more clustered, in the left hemisphere. Indeed, silhouette scores are systematically higher for behaviour-related activity compared to global activity, indicating greater clustering consistency across frequency bands (t(106) = 7.79, p < .001, see Figure S3). Moreover, silhouette scores are maximal, in particular for HFa, for five clusters (p < .001), located in the IFG BA44, the IPL BA 40 and the STG BA 41/42 and BA22 (see Figure S3).”
(3) Given the design of the stimuli, it would be useful to know more about how coordination relates to specific speech units. The authors focus on the syllabic level, which is understandable. But as far as the results relate to speech planning (an explicit point in the paper), the claims could be strengthened by determining whether the coordination signal (whether error correction or otherwise) is specifically timed to e.g., the consonant vs the vowel. If the mechanism is a phase reset, does it tend to occur on one part of the syllable?
Thank you for this thoughtful feedback. We agree that the relationship between speech coordination and specific speech units, such as consonants versus vowels, is an intriguing question. However, in our study, both interlocutors (the participant and the virtual partner) are adapting their speech production in real-time. This interactive coordination makes it difficult to isolate neural signatures corresponding to precise segments like consonants or vowels, as the adjustments occur in a continuous and dynamic context.
The VP's ability to adapt depends on its sensitivity to spectral cues, such as the transition from one phonetic element to another. This is likely influenced by the type of articulation, with certain transitions being more salient (e.g., between a stop consonant like "p" and a vowel like "a") and others being less distinct (e.g., between nasal consonants like "m" and a vowel). Thus, the VP’s spectral adaptation tends to occur at these transitions, which are more prominent in some cases than in others.
For the participants, previous studies have shown a greater sensitivity during the production of stressed vowels (Oschkinat & Hoole, 2022; Li & Lancia, 2024), which may reflect a heightened attentional or motor adjustment to stressed syllables.
Here, we did not specifically address the question of coordination at the level of individual linguistic units. Moreover, even if we attempted to focus on this level, it would be challenging to relate neural dynamics directly to specific speech segments. The question of how synchronization at the level of individual linguistic units might relate to neural data is complex. The lack of clear, unit-specific predictions makes it difficult to parse out distinct neural signatures tied to individual segments, particularly when both interlocutors are continuously adjusting their speech in relation to one another.
Therefore, while we recognize the potential importance of examining synchronization at the level of individual phonetic elements, the design of our task and the nature of the coordination in this interactive context (realtime bidirection adaptation) led us to focus more broadly on the overall dynamics of speech synchronization at the syllabic level, rather than on specific linguistic units.
We now state at the end of the Discussion section:
“It is worth noting that the influence of specific speech units, such as consonants versus vowels, on speech coordination remains to be explored. In non-interactive contexts, participants show greater sensitivity during the production of stressed vowels, possibly reflecting heightened attentional or motor adjustments (Oschkinat & Hoole, 2022; Li & Lancia, 2024). In this study, the VP’s adaptation relies on sensitivity to spectral cues, particularly phonetic transitions, with some (e.g., formant transitions) being more salient than others. However, how these effects manifest in an interactive setting remains an open question, as both interlocutors continuously adjust their speech in real time. Future studies could investigate whether coordination signals, such as phase resets, preferentially align with specific parts of the syllable.” References cited:
– Oschkinat, M., & Hoole, P. (2022). Reactive feedback control and adaptation to perturbed speech timing in stressed and unstressed syllables. Journal of Phonetics, 91, 101133.
– Li, J., & Lancia, L. (2024). A multimodal approach to study the nature of coordinative patterns underlying speech rhythm. In Proc. Interspeech, 397-401.
(4) In the discussion the results are related to a previously-described speech-induced suppression effect. However, it's not clear what the current results have to do with SIS, since the speaker's own voice is present and predictable from the forward model on every trial. Statements such as "Moreover, when the two speech signals come close enough in time, the patient possibly perceives them as its own voice" are highly speculative and apparently not supported by the data.
We thank the reviewer for raising thoughtful concerns about our interpretation of the observed neural suppression as related to speaker-induced suppression (SIS). We agree that our study lacks a passive listening condition, which limits direct comparisons to the original SIS effect, traditionally defined as the suppression of neural responses to self-produced speech compared to externally-generated speech (Meekings & Scott, 2021).
In response, we have reconsidered our terminology and interpretation. In the revised Discussion section, we refer to our findings as a "SIS-related phenomenon specific to the synchronous speech context". Unlike classic SIS paradigms, our interactive task involves simultaneous monitoring of self- and externally-generated speech, introducing additional attentional and coordinative demands.
The revised Discussion also incorporates findings by Ozker et al. (2022, 2024), which link SIS and speech monitoring, suggesting that suppressing responses to self-generated speech facilitates error detection. We propose that the decrease in high-frequency activity (HFa) as verbal coordination increases reflects reduced error signals due to closer alignment between perceived and produced speech. Conversely, HFa increases with reduced coordination may signify greater prediction error.
Additionally, we relate our findings to the "rubber voice" effect (Zheng et al., 2011; Lind et al., 2014; Franken et al., 2021), where temporally and phonetically congruent external speech can be perceived as self-generated. We speculate that this may occur in synchronous speech tasks when the participant's and VP's speech signals closely align. However, this interpretation remains speculative, as no subjective reports were collected to confirm this perception. Future studies could include participant questionnaires to validate this effect and relate subjective experience to neural measures of synchronization.
Overall, our findings extend the study of SIS to dynamic, interactive contexts and contribute to understanding internal forward models of speech production in more naturalistic scenarios.
We have now added these points to the discussion as follows:
“The observed negative correlation between verbal coordination and high-frequency activity (HFa) in STG BA22 suggests a suppression of neural responses as the degree of behavioural synchrony increases. This result is reminiscent of findings on speaker-induced suppression (SIS), where neural activity in auditory cortex decreases during self-generated speech compared to externally-generated speech (Meekings & Scott, 2021; Niziolek et al., 2013). However, our paradigm differs from traditional SIS studies in two critical ways: (1) the speaker's own voice is always present and predictable from the forward model, and (2) no passive listening condition was included. Therefore, our findings cannot be directly equated with the original SIS effect.
Instead, we propose that the suppression observed here reflects a SIS-related phenomenon specific to the synchronous speech context. Synchronous speech requires simultaneous monitoring of self- and externallygenerated speech, a task that is both attentionally demanding and coordinative. This aligns with evidence from Ozker et al. (2024, 2022), showing that the same neural populations in STG exhibit SIS and heightened responses to feedback perturbations. These findings suggest that SIS and speech monitoring are related processes, where suppressing responses to self-generated speech facilitates error detection. In our study, suppression of HFa as coordination increases may reflect reduced prediction errors due to closer alignment between perceived and produced speech signals. Conversely, increased HFa during poor coordination may signify greater mismatch, consistent with prediction error theories (Houde & Nagarajan, 2011; Friston et al., 2020). Furthermore, when self- and externally-generated speech signals are temporally and phonetically congruent, participants may perceive external speech as their own. This echoes the "rubber voice" effect, where external speech resembling self-produced feedback is perceived as self-generated (Zheng et al., 2011; Lind et al., 2014; Franken et al., 2021). While this interpretation remains speculative, future studies could incorporate subjective reports to investigate this phenomenon in more detail.” References cited:
– Franken, M. K., Hartsuiker, R. J., Johansson, P., Hall, L., & Lind, A. (2021). Speaking With an Alien Voice: Flexible Sense of Agency During Vocal Production. Journal of Experimental Psychology-Human perception and performance, 47(4), 479-494. https://doi.org/10.1037/xhp0000799
– Houde, J. F., & Nagarajan, S. S. (2011). Speech production as state feedback control. Frontiers in human neuroscience, 5, 82.
– Lind, A., Hall, L., Breidegard, B., Balkenius, C., & Johansson, P. (2014). Speakers' acceptance of real-time speech exchange indicates that we use auditory feedback to specify the meaning of what we say. Psychological Science, 25(6), 1198-1205. https://doi.org/10.1177/0956797614529797
– Meekings, S., & Scott, S. K. (2021). Error in the Superior Temporal Gyrus? A Systematic Review and Activation Likelihood Estimation Meta-Analysis of Speech Production Studies. Journal of Cognitive Neuroscience, 33(3), 422-444. https://doi.org/10.1162/jocn_a_01661
– Niziolek C. A., Nagarajan S. S., Houde J. F (2013) What does motor efference copy represent? Evidence from speech production Journal of Neuroscience 33:16110–16116Ozker M., Doyle W., Devinsky O., Flinker A (2022) A cortical network processes auditory error signals during human speech production to maintain fluency PLoS Biology 20.
– Ozker, M., Yu, L., Dugan, P., Doyle, W., Friedman, D., Devinsky, O., & Flinker, A. (2024). Speech-induced suppression and vocal feedback sensitivity in human cortex. eLife, 13, RP94198. https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.94198
– Zheng, Z. Z., MacDonald, E. N., Munhall, K. G., & Johnsrude, I. S. (2011). Perceiving a Stranger's Voice as Being One's Own: A 'Rubber Voice' Illusion? PLOS ONE, 6(4), e18655.
(5) There are some seemingly arbitrary decisions made in the design and analysis that, while likely justified, need to be explained. For example, how were the cutoffs for moderate coupling vs phase-shifted coupling (k ~0.09) determined? This is noted as "rather weak" (line 212), but it's not clear where this comes from. Similarly, the ROI-based analyses are only done on regions "recorded in at least 7 patients" - how was this number chosen? How many electrodes total does this correspond to? Is there heterogeneity within each ROI?
The reviewer is correct, we apologize for this missing information. We now specify that the coupling values were empirically determined on the basis of a pilot experiment in order to induce more or less synchronization, but keeping the phase-shifted coupling at a rather implicit level.
Concerning the definition of coupling as weak, one should consider that, in the Kuramoto model, the strength of coupling (k) is relative to the spread of the natural frequencies (Δω) in the system. In our study, the natural frequencies of syllables range approximately from 2 Hz to 10Hz, resulting in a frequency spread of Δω = 8 Hz. For coupling to strongly synchronize oscillators across such a wide range, k must be comparable to or exceed Δω. Thus, since k = 0.1 is far much smaller than Δω, it is therefore classified as weak coupling.
We have now modified the Materials and methods section as follows:
“More precisely, for a third of the trials the VP had a neutral behaviour (close to zero coupling: k = +/- 0.01). For a third it had a moderate coupling, meaning that the VP synchronised more to the participant speech (k = -0.09). And for the last third of the trials the VP had a moderate coupling but with a phase shift of pi/2, meaning that it moderately aimed to speak in between the participant syllables (k = + 0.09). The coupling values were empirically determined on the basis of a pilot experiment in order to induce more or less synchronization but keeping the phase-shifted coupling at a rather implicit level. In other terms, while participants knew that the VP would adapt, they did not necessarily know in which direction the coupling went.”
Regarding the criterion of including regions recorded in at least 7 patients, our goal was to balance data completeness with statistical power. Given our total sample of 16 patients, this threshold ensures that each included region is represented in at least ~44% of the cohort, reducing the likelihood of spurious findings due to extremely small sample sizes. This choice also aligns with common neurophysiological analysis practices, where a minimum number of subjects (at least 2 in extreme cases) is required to achieve meaningful interindividual comparisons while avoiding excessive data exclusion. Additionally, this threshold maintains a reasonable tradeoff between maximizing patient inclusion and ensuring that statistical tests remain robust.
We have now added more information in the Results section “Spectral profiles in the language network are nuanced by behaviour” on this point as follows:
“To balance data completeness and statistical power, we included only brain regions recorded in at least 7 patients (~44% of the cohort) for the left hemisphere and at least 5 patients for the right hemisphere (~31% of the cohort), ensuring sufficient representation while minimizing biases due to sparse data.”
Reviewer #2 (Public Review):
Summary:
This paper investigates the neural underpinnings of an interactive speech task requiring verbal coordination with another speaker. To achieve this, the authors recorded intracranial brain activity from the left hemisphere in a group of drug-resistant epilepsy patients while they synchronised their speech with a 'virtual partner'. Crucially, the authors were able to manipulate the degree of success of this synchronisation by programming the virtual partner to either actively synchronise or desynchronise their speech with the participant, or else to not vary its speech in response to the participant (making the synchronisation task purely one-way). Using such a paradigm, the authors identified different brain regions that were either more sensitive to the speech of the virtual partner (primary auditory cortex), or more sensitive to the degree of verbal coordination (i.e. synchronisation success) with the virtual partner (secondary auditory cortex and IFG). Such sensitivity was measured by (1) calculating the correlation between the index of verbal coordination and mean power within a range of frequency bands across trials, and (2) calculating the phase-amplitude coupling between the behavioural and brain signals within single trials (using the power of high-frequency neural activity only). Overall, the findings help to elucidate some of the left hemisphere brain areas involved in interactive speaking behaviours, particularly highlighting the highfrequency activity of the IFG as a potential candidate supporting verbal coordination.
Strengths:
This study provides the field with a convincing demonstration of how to investigate speaking behaviours in more complex situations that share many features with real-world speaking contexts e.g. simultaneous engagement of speech perception and production processes, the presence of an interlocutor, and the need for inter-speaker coordination. The findings thus go beyond previous work that has typically studied solo speech production in isolation, and represent a significant advance in our understanding of speech as a social and communicative behaviour. It is further an impressive feat to develop a paradigm in which the degree of cooperativity of the synchronisation partner can be so tightly controlled; in this way, this study combines the benefits of using prerecorded stimuli (namely, the high degree of experimental control) with the benefits of using a live synchronisation partner (allowing the task to be truly two-way interactive, an important criticism of other work using pre-recorded stimuli). A further key strength of the study lies in its employment of stereotactic EEG to measure brain responses with both high temporal and spatial resolution, an ideal method for studying the unfolding relationship between neural processing and this dynamic coordination behaviour.
We sincerely appreciate the Reviewer's thoughtful and positive feedback on our manuscript.
Weaknesses:
One major limitation of the current study is the lack of coverage of the right hemisphere by the implanted electrodes. Of course, electrode location is solely clinically motivated, and so the authors did not have control over this. However, this means that the current study neglects the potentially important role of the right hemisphere in this task. The right hemisphere has previously been proposed to support feedback control for speech (likely a core process engaged by synchronous speech), as opposed to the left hemisphere which has been argued to underlie feedforward control (Tourville & Guenther, 2011). Indeed, a previous fMRI study of synchronous speech reported the engagement of a network of right hemisphere regions, including STG, IPL, IFG, and the temporal pole (Jasmin et al., 2016). Further, the release from speech-induced suppression during a synchronous speech reported by Jasmin et al. was found in the right temporal pole, which may explain the discrepancy with the current finding of reduced leftward high-frequency activity with increasing verbal coordination (suggesting instead increased speech-induced suppression for successful synchronisation). The findings should therefore be interpreted with the caveat that they are limited to the left hemisphere, and are thus likely missing an important aspect of the neural processing underpinning verbal coordination behaviour.
We have now included, in the supplementary materials, data from the right hemisphere, although the coverage is a bit sparse (Figures S2, S4, S5, see our responses in the ‘Recommendation for the authors’ section, below). We have also revised the Discussion section to add the putative role of right temporal regions (see below as well).
A further limitation of this study is that its findings are purely correlational in nature; that is, the results tell us how neural activity correlates with behaviour, but not whether it is instrumental in that behaviour. Elucidating the latter would require some form of intervention such as electrode stimulation, to disrupt activity in a brain area and measure the resulting effect on behaviour. Any claims therefore as to the specific role of brain areas in verbal coordination (e.g. the role of the IFG in supporting online coordinative adjustments to achieve synchronisation) are therefore speculative.
We appreciate the reviewer’s observation regarding the correlational nature of our findings and agree that this is a common limitation of neuroimaging studies. While elucidating causal relationships would indeed require intervention techniques such as electrical stimulation, our study leverages the unique advantages of intracerebral recordings, offering the best available spatial and temporal resolution alongside a high signal-tonoise ratio. These attributes ensure that our data accurately reflect neural activity and its temporal dynamics, providing a robust foundation for understanding the relationship between neural processes and behaviour. Therefore, while causal claims are beyond the scope of this study, the precision of our methodology allows us to make well-supported observations about the neural correlates of synchronous speech tasks.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewing Editor Comment:
After joint consultation, we are seeing the potential for the report to be strengthened and the evidence here to be deemed ultimately at least 'solid': to us (editors and reviewers) it seems that this would require both (1) clarifying/acknowledging the limitations of not having right hemisphere data, and (2) running some of the additional analyses the reviewers suggest, which should allow for richer examination of the data e.g. phase relationships in areas that correlate with synchronisation.
We have now added data on the right hemisphere (RH) that we did not previously report due to a rather sparse sampling of the RH. These results are now reported in the Results section as well as in the Supplementary section, where we put all right hemisphere figures for all analyses (Figure S2, S4, S5). We have also run additional analyses digging into the phase relationship in areas that correlate with synchronisation (Figure S6). These additional analyses allowed us to improve the Discussion section as well.
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):
In some sections, the writing is a bit unclear, with both typos and vague statements that could be fixed with careful proofreading.
We thank the reviewer for pointing out areas where the writing could be improved. We carefully proofread the manuscript to address typos and clarify any vague statements. Specific sections identified as unclear have been rephrased for better precision and readability.
In Figure 1, the colors repeat, making it impossible to tell patients apart.
We have now updated Figure 1 colormap to avoid redundancy and added the right hemisphere.
Line 132: "16 unilateral implantations (9 left, 7 bilateral implantations)". Should this say 7 right hemisphere? If so, the following sentence stating that there was "insufficient cover [sic] of the right hemisphere" is unclear, since the number of patients between LH and RH is similar.
The confusion was due to the fact that the lateralization refers to the presence/absence of electrodes in the Heschl’s gyrus (left : H’ ; right : H) exclusively.
We have thus changed this section as follows:
“16 patients (7 women, mean age 29.8 y, range 17 - 50 y) with pharmacoresistant epilepsy took part in the study. They were included if their implantation map covered at least partially the Heschl's gyrus and had sufficiently intact diction to support relatively sustained language production.” The relevant part (previously line 132) now states:
“Sixteen patients with a total of 236 electrodes (145 in the left hemisphere) and 2395 contacts (1459 in the left hemisphere, see Figure 1). While this gives a rather sparse coverage of the right hemisphere, we decided, due to the rarity of this type of data, to report results for both hemispheres, with figures for the left hemisphere in the main text and figures for the right hemisphere in the supplementary section.”
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):
(1) To address the concern regarding the absence of data from the right hemisphere, I would advise the authors to directly acknowledge this limitation in their Discussion section, citing relevant work suggesting that the right hemisphere has an important role to play in this task (e.g. Jasmin et al., 2016). You should also make this clear in your abstract e.g. you could rewrite the sentence in line 40 to be: "Then, we recorded the intracranial brain activity of the left hemisphere in 16 patients with drug-resistant epilepsy...".
We are grateful to the reviewer for this comment that incited us to look into the right hemisphere data. We have now included results in the right hemisphere, although the coverage is a bit sparse. We have also revised the Discussion section to add the putative role of right temporal regions. Interestingly, our results show, as suggested by the reviewer, a clear involvement of the RH in this task.
First, the full brain analyses show a very similar implication of the RH as compared to the LH (see Figure below). We have now added in the Results section:
“As expected, the whole language network is strongly involved, including both dorsal and ventral pathways (Fig 3A). More precisely, in the left temporal lobe the superior, middle and inferior temporal gyri, in the left parietal lobe the inferior parietal lobule (IPL) and in the left frontal lobe the inferior frontal gyrus (IFG) and the middle frontal gyrus (MFG). Similar results are observed in the right hemisphere, neural responses being present across all six frequency bands with medium to large modulation in activity compared to baseline (Figure S2A) in the same regions. Desynchronizations are present in the theta, alpha and beta bands while the low gamma and HFa bands show power increases.”
As to compared to the left hemisphere, assessing brain-behaviour correlations in the right hemisphere does not provide the same statistical power, because some anatomical regions have very few electrodes. Nonetheless, we observe a strong correlation in the right IFG, similar to the one we previously reported in the left hemisphere, and we now report in the Results section:
“The decrease in HFa along the dorsal pathway is replicated in the right hemisphere (Figure S4). However, while both the right STG BA41/42 and STG BA22 present a power increase (compared to baseline) — with a stronger increase for the STG BA41/42 — neither shows a significant correlation with verbal coordination (t(45)=-1.65, p=.1 ; t(8)=-0.67, p=.5 ; Student’s T test, FDR correction). By contrast, results in the right IFG BA44 are similar to the one observed in the left hemisphere with a significant power increase associated with a negative brainbehaviour correlation (t(17) = -3.11, p = .01 ; Student’s T test, FDR correction).”
Interestingly, the phase-amplitude coupling analysis yields very similar results in both hemispheres (exception made for BA22). We have thus updated the Results section as follows:
“Notably, when comparing – within the regions of interest previously described – the PAC with the virtual partner speech and the PAC with the phase difference, the coupling relationship changes when moving along the dorsal pathway: a stronger coupling in the auditory regions with the speech input, no difference between speech and coordination dynamics in the IPL and a stronger coupling for the coordinative dynamics compared to speech signal in the IFG (Figure 5B ). When looking at the right hemisphere, we observe the same changes in the coupling relationship when moving along the dorsal pathway, except that no difference between speech and coordination dynamics is present in the right secondary auditory regions (STG BA22; Figure S5).”
We also included in the Discussion section the right hemisphere results also mentioning previous work of Guenther and the one of Jasmin. On the section “Left secondary auditory regions are more sensitive to coordinative behaviour” one can read:
“Furthermore, the absence of correlation in the right STG BA22 (Figure S4) seems in first stance to challenge influential speech production models (e.g. Guenther & Hickok, 2016) that propose that the right hemisphere is involved in feedback control. However, one needs to consider the the task at stake heavily relied upon temporal mismatches and adjustments. In this context, the left-lateralized sensitivity to verbal coordination reminds of the works of Floegel and colleagues (2020, 2023) suggesting that both hemispheres are involved depending on the type of error: the right auditory association cortex monitoring preferentially spectral speech features and the left auditory association cortex monitoring preferentially temporal speech features. Nonetheless, the right temporal pole seems to be sensitive to speech coordinative behaviour, confirming previous findings using fMRI (Jasmin et al., 2016) and thus showing that the right hemisphere has an important role to play in this type of tasks (e.g. Jasmin et al., 2016).”
References cited:
– Floegel, M., Fuchs, S., & Kell, C. A. (2020). Differential contributions of the two cerebral hemispheres to temporal and spectral speech feedback control. Nature Communications, 11(1), 2839.
– Floegel, M., Kasper, J., Perrier, P., & Kell, C. A. (2023). How the conception of control influences our understanding of actions. Nature Reviews Neuroscience, 24(5), 313-329.
– Guenther, F. H., & Hickok, G. (2016). Neural models of motor speech control. In Neurobiology of language (pp. 725-740). Academic Press.
(2) When discussing previous work on alignment during synchronous speech, you may wish to include a recently published paper by Bradshaw et al (2024); this manipulated the acoustics of the accompanist's voice during a synchronous speech task to show interactions between speech motor adaptation and phonetic convergence/alignment.
We thank the reviewer for pointing to this recent and interesting paper. We added the article as reference as follows
“Furthermore, synchronous speech favors the emergence of alignment phenomena, for instance of the fundamental frequency or the syllable onset (Assaneo et al., 2019 ; Bradshaw & McGettigan, 2021 ; Bradshaw et al., 2023; Bradshaw et al., 2024).”
(3) Line 80: "Synchronous speech resembles to a certain extent to delayed auditory feedback tasks"- I think you mean "altered auditory feedback tasks" here.
In the case of synchronous speech it is more about timing than altered speech signals, that is why the comparison is done with delayed and not altered auditory feedback. Nonetheless, we understand the Reviewer’s point and we have now changed the sentence as follows:
“Synchronous speech resembles to a certain extent to delayed/altered auditory feedback tasks”
(4) When discussing superior temporal responses during such altered feedback tasks, you may also want to cite a review paper by Meekings and Scott (2021).
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion, indeed this was a big oversight!
The paper is now quoted in the introduction as follows:
“Previous studies have revealed increased responses in the superior temporal regions compared to normal feedback conditions (Hirano et al., 1997 ; Hashimoto & Sakai, 2003 ; Takaso et al., 2010 ; Ozerk et al., 2022 ; Floegel et al., 2020 ; see Meekings & Scott, 2021 for a review of error-monitoring and feedback control in the STG during speech production).”
Furthermore, we updated the discussion part concerning the speaker-induced suppression phenomenon (see below our response to the point 10).
(5) Line 125: "The parameters and sound adjustment were set using an external low-latency sound card (RME Babyface Pro Fs)". Can you please report the total feedback loop latency in your set-up? Or at the least cite the following paper which reports low latencies with this audio device.
Kim, K. S., Wang, H., & Max, L. (2020). It's About Time: Minimizing Hardware and Software Latencies in Speech Research With Real-Time Auditory Feedback. Journal of Speech, Language, and Hearing Research, 63(8), 25222534. https://doi.org/10.1044/2020_JSLHR-19-00419
We now report the total feedback loop latency (~5ms) and also cite the relevant paper (Kim et al., 2020).
(6) Line 127 "A calibration was made to find a comfortable volume and an optimal balance for both the sound of the participant's own voice, which was fed back through the headphones, and the sound of the stimuli." What do you mean here by an 'optimal balance'? Was the participant's own voice always louder than the VP stimuli? Can you report roughly what you consider to be a comfortable volume in dB?
This point was indeed unlcear. We have now changed as follows:
“A calibration was made to find a comfortable volume and an optimal balance for both the sound of the participant's own voice, which was fed back through the headphones, and the sound of the stimuli. The aim of this procedure was that the patient would subjectively perceive their voice and the VP-voice in equal measure. VP voice was delivered at approximately 70dB.”
(7) Relatedly, did you use any noise masking to mask the air-conducted feedback from their own voice (which would have been slightly out of phase with the feedback through the headphones, depending on your latency)?
Considering the low-latency condition allowed with the sound card (RME Babyface Pro Fs), we did not use noise masking to mask the air-conducted feedback from the self-voice of the patients.
(8) Line 141: "four short sentences were pre-recorded by a woman and a man." Did all participants synchronise with both the man and woman or was the VP gender matched to that of the participant/patient?
We thank the reviewer for this important missing detail. We know changed the text as follows:
“Four stimuli corresponding to four short sentences were pre-recorded by both a female and a male speaker. This allowed to adapt to the natural gender differences in fundamental frequency (i.e. so that the VP gender matched that of the patients). All stimuli were normalised in amplitude.”
(9) Can you clarify what instructions participants were given regarding the VP? That is, were they told that this was a recording or a real live speaker? Were they naïve to the manipulation of the VP's coupling to the participant?
We have now added this information to the task description as follows:
“Participants, comfortably seated in a medical chair, were instructed that they would perform a real-time interactive synchronous speech task with an artificial agent (Virtual Partner, henceforth VP, see next section) that can modulate and adapt to the participant’s speech in real time.”
“The third step was the actual experiment. This was identical to the training but consisted of 24 trials (14s long, speech rate ~3Hz, yielding ~1000 syllables). Importantly, the VP varied its coupling behaviour to the participant. More precisely, for a third of the sequences the VP had a neutral behaviour (close to zero coupling : k = +/- 0.01). For a third it had a moderate coupling, meaning that the VP synchronised more to the participant speech (k = - 0.09). And for the last third of the sequences the VP had a moderate coupling but with a phase shift of pi/2, meaning that it moderately aimed to speak in between the participant syllables (k = + 0.09). The coupling values were empirically determined on the basis of a pilot experiment in order to induce more or less synchronization, but keeping the phase-shifted coupling at a rather implicit level. In other terms, while participants knew that the VP would adapt, they did not necessarily know in which direction the coupling went.”
(10) The paragraph from line 438 entitled "Secondary auditory regions are more sensitive to coordinative behaviour" includes an interesting discussion of the relation of the current findings to the phenomenon of speech-induced suppression (SIS). However, the authors appear to equate the observed decrease in highfrequency activity as speech coordination increases with the phenomenon of SIS (in lines 456-457), which is quite a speculative leap. I would encourage the authors to temper this discussion by referring to SIS as a potentially related phenomenon, with a need for more experimental work to determine if this is indeed the same phenomenon as the decreases in high-frequency power observed here. I believe that the authors are arguing here for an interpretation of SIS as reflecting internal modelling of sensory input regardless of whether this is self-generated or other-generated; if this is indeed the case, I would ask the authors to be more explicit here that these ideas are not a standard part of the traditional account of SIS, which only includes internal modelling of self-produced sensory feedback.
As stated in the public review, we thank both reviewers for raising thoughtful concerns about our interpretation of the observed neural suppression as related to speaker-induced suppression (SIS). We agree that our study lacks a passive listening condition, which limits direct comparisons to the original SIS effect, traditionally defined as the suppression of neural responses to self-produced speech compared to externally-generated speech (Meekings & Scott, 2021).
In response, we have reconsidered our terminology and interpretation. In the revised discussion, we refer to our findings as a "SIS-related phenomenon specific to the synchronous speech context." Unlike classic SIS paradigms, our interactive task involves simultaneous monitoring of self- and externally-generated speech, introducing additional attentional and coordinative demands.
The revised discussion also incorporates findings by Ozker et al. (2024, 2022), which link SIS and speech monitoring, suggesting that suppressing responses to self-generated speech facilitates error detection. We propose that the decrease in high-frequency activity (HFa) as verbal coordination increases reflects reduced error signals due to closer alignment between perceived and produced speech. Conversely, HFa increases with reduced coordination may signify greater prediction error.
Additionally, we relate our findings to the "rubber voice" effect (Zheng et al., 2011; Lind et al., 2014; Franken et al., 2021), where temporally and phonetically congruent external speech can be perceived as self-generated. We speculate that this may occur in synchronous speech tasks when the participant's and VP's speech signals closely align. However, this interpretation remains speculative, as no subjective reports were collected to confirm this perception. Future studies could include participant questionnaires to validate this effect and relate subjective experience to neural measures of synchronization.
Overall, our findings extend the study of SIS to dynamic, interactive contexts and contribute to understanding internal forward models of speech production in more naturalistic scenarios.
We have now added these points to the discussion as follows:
“The observed negative correlation between verbal coordination and high-frequency activity (HFa) in STG BA22 suggests a suppression of neural responses as the degree of synchrony increases. This result aligns with findings on speaker-induced suppression (SIS), where neural activity in auditory cortex decreases during self-generated speech compared to externally-generated speech (Meekings & Scott, 2021; Niziolek et al., 2013). However, our paradigm differs from traditional SIS studies in two critical ways: (1) the speaker's own voice is always present and predictable from the forward model, and (2) no passive listening condition was included. Therefore, our findings cannot be directly equated with the original SIS effect.
Instead, we propose that the suppression observed here reflects a SIS-related phenomenon specific to the synchronous speech context. Synchronous speech requires simultaneous monitoring of self- and externally generated speech, a task that is both attentionally demanding and coordinative. This aligns with evidence from Ozker et al. (2024, 2022), showing that the same neural populations in STG exhibit SIS and heightened responses to feedback perturbations. These findings suggest that SIS and speech monitoring are related processes, where suppressing responses to self-generated speech facilitates error detection.
In our study, suppression of HFa as coordination increases may reflect reduced prediction errors due to closer alignment between perceived and produced speech signals. Conversely, increased HFa during poor coordination may signify greater mismatch, consistent with prediction error theories (Houde & Nagarajan, 2011; Friston et al., 2020).”
(11) Within this section, you also speculate in line 460 that "Moreover, when the two speech signals come close enough in time, the patient possibly perceives them as its own voice." I would recommend citing studies on the 'rubber voice' effect to back up this claim (e.g. Franken et al., 2021; Lind et al., 2014; Zheng et al., 2011).
We are grateful to the Reviewer for this interesting suggestion. Directly following the previous comment, the section now states:
“Furthermore, when self- and externally-generated speech signals are temporally and phonetically congruent, participants may perceive external speech as their own. This echoes the "rubber voice" effect, where external speech resembling self-produced feedback is perceived as self-generated (Zheng et al., 2011; Lind et al., 2014; Franken et al., 2021). While this interpretation remains speculative, future studies could incorporate subjective reports to investigate this phenomenon in more detail.”
(12) As noted in my public review, since your methods are correlational, you need to be careful about inferring the causal role of any brain areas in supporting a specific aspect of functioning e.g. line 501-504: "By contrast, in the inferior frontal gyrus, the coupling in the high-frequency activity is strongest with the input-output phase difference (input of the VP - output of the speaker), a metric that reflects the amount of error in the internal computation to reach optimal coordination, which indicates that this region optimises the predictive and coordinative behaviour required by the task." I would argue that the latter part of this sentence is a conclusion that, although consistent with, goes beyond the current data in this study, and thus needs tempering.
We agree with the Reviewer and changed the sentence as follows:
“By contrast, in the inferior frontal gyrus, the coupling in the high-frequency activity is strongest with the inputoutput phase difference (input of the VP - output of the speaker), a metric that could possibly reflect the amount of error in the internal computation to reach optimal coordination. This indicates that this region could have an implication in the optimisation of the predictive and coordinative behaviour required by the task.”
DATIFICACIÓN CRÍTICA DE LA VIOLENCIA. CONCEPTUALIZACIÓN, PROCESAMIENTO, VISUALIZACIÓN Y ANÁLISIS DE DATOS CON REGISTROS DE VIOLACIONES GRAVES A LOS DERECHOS HUMANOS EN COLOMBIA Y EN MÉXICO
Creo que puedes usar después de violencia dos puntos: y colocar el título en minúscula, siguiendo las normas apa.
1 Gráfica de edad promedio de los docentes en el distrito Por lo tanto, comprender cómo los docentes de educación secundaria configuran sus ecologías de aprendizaje, puede contribuir a determinar, en qué medida la literacidad digital facilita o limita la adopción de estas herramientas, esto resulta fundamental para enfrentar los desafíos educativos contemporáneos
Me genera dudas la relación entre promedio de edad y lo que sigue
prácticas de los estudiantes, también desafía los métodos tradicionales de enseñanza y evaluación, especialmente aquellos centrados en pruebas escritas o resolución de problemas
¿Es posible pensar que se mantienen los métodos tradicionales, solo que se median por lo tecnológico? En estudios sobre lectura y escritura se han visto que el objeto no necesariamente modifica las prácticas.
impacto social y cultural
¿y técnico?
fenómeno sociocultural
¿Podría pensarse mejor desde lo sociotécnico y no solo sociocultural? Para que mantengas las categorías que hemos aprendido en las clase en donde hemos discutido estos temas
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public Review):
Summary:
Glaser et al present ExA-SPIM, a light-sheet microscope platform with large volumetric coverage (Field of view 85mm^2, working distance 35mm), designed to image expanded mouse brains in their entirety. The authors also present an expansion method optimized for whole mouse brains and an acquisition software suite. The microscope is employed in imaging an expanded mouse brain, the macaque motor cortex, and human brain slices of white matter.
This is impressive work and represents a leap over existing light-sheet microscopes. As an example, it offers a fivefold higher resolution than mesoSPIM (https://mesospim.org/), a popular platform for imaging large cleared samples. Thus while this work is rooted in optical engineering, it manifests a huge step forward and has the potential to become an important tool in the neurosciences.
Strengths:
- ExA-SPIM features an exceptional combination of field of view, working distance, resolution, and throughput.
- An expanded mouse brain can be acquired with only 15 tiles, lowering the burden on computational stitching. That the brain does not need to be mechanically sectioned is also seen as an important capability.
- The image data is compelling, and tracing of neurons has been performed. This demonstrates the potential of the microscope platform.
Weaknesses:
- There is a general question about the scaling laws of lenses, and expansion microscopy, which in my opinion remained unanswered: In the context of whole brain imaging, a larger expansion factor requires a microscope system with larger volumetric coverage, which in turn will have lower resolution (Figure 1B). So what is optimal? Could one alternatively image a cleared (non-expanded) brain with a high-resolution ASLM system (Chakraborty, Tonmoy, Nature Methods 2019, potentially upgraded with custom objectives) and get a similar effective resolution as the authors get with expansion? This is not meant to diminish the achievement, but it was unclear if the gains in resolution from the expansion factor are traded off by the scaling laws of current optical systems.
Paraphrasing the reviewer: Expanding the tissue requires imaging larger volumes and allows lower optical resolution. What has been gained?
The answer to the reviewer’s question is nuanced and contains four parts.
First, optical engineering requirements are more forgiving for lenses with lower resolution. Lower resolution lenses can have much larger fields of view (in real terms: the number of resolvable elements, proportional to ‘etendue’) and much longer working distances. In other words, it is currently more feasible to engineer lower resolution lenses with larger volumetric coverage, even when accounting for the expansion factor.
Second, these lenses are also much better corrected compared to higher resolution (NA) lenses. They have a flat field of view, negligible pincushion distortions, and constant resolution across the field of view. We are not aware of comparable performance for high NA objectives, even when correcting for expansion.
Third, although clearing and expansion render tissues ‘transparent’, there still exist refractive index inhomogeneities which deteriorate image quality, especially at larger imaging depths. These effects are more severe for higher optical resolutions (NA), because the rays entering the objective at higher angles have longer paths in the tissue and will see more aberrations. For lower NA systems, such as ExaSPIM, the differences in paths between the extreme and axial rays are relatively small and image formation is less sensitive to aberrations.
Fourth, aberrations are proportional to the index of refraction inhomogeneities (dn/dx). Since the index of refraction is roughly proportional to density, scattering and aberration of light decreases as M^3, where M is the expansion factor. In contrast, the imaging path length through the tissue only increases as M. This produces a huge win for imaging larger samples with lower resolutions.
To our knowledge there are no convincing demonstrations in the literature of diffraction-limited ASLM imaging at a depth of 1 cm in cleared mouse brain tissue, which would be equivalent to the ExA-SPIM imaging results presented in this manuscript.
In the discussion of the revised manuscript we discuss these factors in more depth.
- It was unclear if 300 nm lateral and 800 nm axial resolution is enough for many questions in neuroscience. Segmenting spines, distinguishing pre- and postsynaptic densities, or tracing densely labeled neurons might be challenging. A discussion about the necessary resolution levels in neuroscience would be appreciated.
We have previously shown good results in tracing the thinnest (100 nm thick) axons over cm scales with 1.5 um axial resolution. It is the contrast (SNR) that matters, and the ExaSPIM contrast exceeds the block-face 2-photon contrast, not to mention imaging speed (> 10x).
Indeed, for some questions, like distinguishing fluorescence in pre- and postsynaptic structures, higher resolutions will be required (0.2 um isotropic; Rah et al Frontiers Neurosci, 2013). This could be achieved with higher expansion factors.
This is not within the intended scope of the current manuscript. As mentioned in the discussion section, we are working towards ExA-SPIM-based concepts to achieve better resolution through the design and fabrication of a customized imaging lens that maintains a high volumetric coverage with increased numerical aperture.
- Would it be possible to characterize the aberrations that might be still present after whole brain expansion? One approach could be to image small fluorescent nanospheres behind the expanded brain and recover the pupil function via phase retrieval. But even full width half maximum (FWHM) measurements of the nanospheres' images would give some idea of the magnitude of the aberrations.
We now included a supplementary figure highlighting images of small axon segments within distal regions of the brain.
Reviewer #2 (Public Review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, Glaser et al. describe a new selective plane illumination microscope designed to image a large field of view that is optimized for expanded and cleared tissue samples. For the most part, the microscope design follows a standard formula that is common among many systems (e.g. Keller PJ et al Science 2008, Pitrone PG et al. Nature Methods 2013, Dean KM et al. Biophys J 2015, and Voigt FF et al. Nature Methods 2019). The primary conceptual and technical novelty is to use a detection objective from the metrology industry that has a large field of view and a large area camera. The authors characterize the system resolution, field curvature, and chromatic focal shift by measuring fluorescent beads in a hydrogel and then show example images of expanded samples from mouse, macaque, and human brain tissue.
Strengths:
I commend the authors for making all of the documentation, models, and acquisition software openly accessible and believe that this will help assist others who would like to replicate the instrument. I anticipate that the protocols for imaging large expanded tissues (such as an entire mouse brain) will also be useful to the community.
Weaknesses:
The characterization of the instrument needs to be improved to validate the claims. If the manuscript claims that the instrument allows for robust automated neuronal tracing, then this should be included in the data.
The reviewer raises a valid concern. Our assertion that the resolution and contrast is sufficient for robust automated neuronal tracing is overstated based on the data in the paper. We are hard at work on automated tracing of datasets from the ExA-SPIM microscope. We have demonstrated full reconstruction of axonal arbors encompassing >20 cm of axonal length. But including these methods and results is out of the scope of the current manuscript.
The claims of robust automated neuronal tracing have been appropriately modified.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):
Smaller questions to the authors:
- Would a multi-directional illumination and detection architecture help? Was there a particular reason the authors did not go that route?
Despite the clarity of the expanded tissue, and the lower numerical aperture of the ExA-SPIM microscope, image quality still degrades slightly towards the distal regions of the brain relative to both the excitation and detection objective. Therefore, multi-directional illumination and detection would be advantageous. Since the initial submission of the manuscript, we have undertaken re-designing the optics and mechanics of the system. This includes provisions for multi-directional illumination and detection. However, this new design is beyond the scope of this manuscript. We now mention this in L254-255 of the Discussion section.
- Why did the authors not use the same objective for illumination and detection, which would allow isotropic resolution in ASLM?
The current implementation of ASLM requires an infinity corrected objective (i.e. conjugating the axial sweeping mechanism to the back focal plane). This is not possible due to the finite conjugate design of the ExA-SPIM detection lens.
More fundamentally, pushing the excitation NA higher would result in a shorter light sheet Rayleigh length, which would require a smaller detection slit (shorter exposure time, lower signal to noise ratio). For our purposes an excitation NA of 0.1 is an excellent compromise between axial resolution, signal to noise ratio, and imaging speed.
For other potentially brighter biological structures, it may be possible to design a custom infinity corrected objective that enables ASLM with NA > 0.1.
- Have the authors made any attempt to characterize distortions of the brain tissue that can occur due to expansion?
We have not systematically characterized the distortions of the brain tissue pre and post expansion. Imaged mouse brain volumes are registered to the Allen CCF regardless of whether or not the tissue was expanded. It is beyond the scope of this manuscript to include these results and processing methods, but we have confirmed that the ExA-SPIM mouse brain volumes contain only modest deformation that is easily accounted for during registration to the Allen CCF.
- The authors state that a custom lens with NA 0.5-0.6 lens can be designed, featuring similar specifications. Is there a practical design? Wouldn't such a lens be more prone to Field curvature?
This custom lens has already been designed and is currently being fabricated. The lens maintains a similar space bandwidth product as the current lens (increased numerical aperture but over a proportionally smaller field of view). Over the designed field of view, field curvature is <1 µm. However, including additional discussion or results of this customized lens is beyond the scope of this manuscript.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):
System characterization:
- Please state what wavelength was used for the resolution measurements in Figure 2.
An excitation wavelength of 561 nm was used. This has been added to the manuscript text.
- The manuscript highlights that a key advance for the microscope is the ability to image over a very large 13 mm diameter field of view. Can the authors clarify why they chose to characterize resolution over an 8diameter mm field rather than the full area?
The 13 mm diameter field of view refers to the diagonal of the 10.6 x 8.0 mm field of view. The results presented in Figure 1c are with respect to the horizontal x direction and vertical y direction. A note indicating that the 13 mm is with respect to the diagonal of the rectangular imaging field has been added to the manuscript text. The results were presented in this way to present the axial and lateral resolution as a function of y (the axial sweeping direction).
- The resolution estimates seem lower than I would expect for a 0.30 NA lens (which should be closer to ~850 nm for 515 nm emission). Could the authors clarify the discrepancy? Is this predicted by the Zemax model and due to using the lens in immersion media, related to sampling size on the camera, or something else? It would be helpful if the authors could overlay the expected diffraction-limited performance together with the plots in Figure 2C.
As mentioned previously, the resolution measurements were performed with 561 nm excitation and an emission bandpass of ~573 – 616 nm (595 nm average). Based on this we would expect the full width half maximum resolution to be ~975 nm. The resolution is in fact limited by sampling on the camera. The 3.76 µm pixel size, combined with the 5.0X magnification results in a sampling of 752 nm. Based on the Nyquist the resolution is limited to ~1.5 µm. We have added clarifying statements to the text.
- I'm confused about the characterization of light sheet thickness and how it relates to the measured detection field curvature. The authors state that they "deliver a light sheet with NA = 0.10 which has a width of 12.5 mm (FWHM)." If we estimate that light fills the 0.10 NA, it should have a beam waist (2wo) of ~3 microns (assuming Gaussian beam approximations). Although field curvature is described as "minimal" in the text, it is still ~10-15 microns at the edge of the field for the emission bands for GFP and RFP proteins. Given that this is 5X larger than the light sheet thickness, how do the authors deal with this?
The generated light sheet is flat, with a thickness of ~ 3 µm. This flat light sheet will be captured in focus over the depth of focus of the detection objective. The stated field curvature is within 2.5X the depth of focus of the detection lens, which is equivalent to the “Plan” specification of standard microscope objectives.
- In Figure 2E, it would be helpful if the authors could list the exposure times as well as the total voxels/second for the two-camera comparison. It's also worth noting that the Sony chip used in the VP151MX camera was released last year whereas the Orca Flash V3 chosen for comparison is over a decade old now. I'm confused as to why the authors chose this camera for comparison when they appear to have a more recent Orca BT-Fusion that they show in a picture in the supplement (indicated as Figure S2 in the text, but I believe this is a typo and should be Figure S3).
This is a useful addition, and we have added exposure times to the plot. We have also added a note that the Orca Flash V3 is an older generation sCMOS camera and that newer variants exist. Including the Orca BT-Fusion. The BT-Fusion has a read noise of 1.0 e- rms versus 1.6 e- rms, and a peak quantum efficiency of ~95% vs. 85%. Based on the discussion in Supplementary Note S1, we do not expect that these differences in specifications would dramatically change the data presented in the plot. In addition, the typo in Figure S2 has been corrected to Figure S3.
- In Table S1, the authors note that they only compare their work to prior modalities that are capable of providing <= 1 micron resolution. I'm a bit confused by this choice given that Figure 2 seems to show the resolution of ExA-SPIM as ~1.5 microns at 4 mm off center (1/2 their stated radial field of view). It also excludes a comparison with the mesoSPIM project which at least to me seems to be the most relevant prior to this manuscript. This system is designed for imaging large cleared tissues like the ones shown here. While the original publication in 2019 had a substantially lower lateral resolution, a newer variant, Nikita et al bioRxiv (which is cited in general terms in this manuscript, but not explicitly discussed) also provides 1.5-micron lateral resolution over a comparable field of view.
We have updated the table to include the benchtop mesoSPIM from Nikita et al., Nature Communications, 2024. Based on this published version of the manuscript, the lateral resolution is 1.5 µm and axial resolution is 3.3 µm. Assuming the Iris 15 camera sensor, with the stated 2.5 fps, the volumetric rate (megavoxels/sec) is 37.41.
- The authors state that, "We systematically evaluated dehydration agents, including methanol, ethanol, and tetrahydrofuran (THF), followed by delipidation with commonly used protocols on 1 mm thick brain slices. Slices were expanded and examined for clarity under a macroscope." It would be useful to include some data from this evaluation in the manuscript to make it clear how the authors arrived at their final protocol.
Additional details on the expansion protocol may be included in another manuscript.
General comments:
There is a tendency in the manuscript to use negative qualitative terms when describing prior work and positive qualitative terms when describing the work here. Examples include:
- "Throughput is limited in part by cumbersome and error-prone microscopy methods". While I agree that performing single neuron reconstructions at a large scale is a difficult challenge, the terms cumbersome and error-prone are qualitative and lacking objective metrics.
We have revised this statement to be more precise, stating that throughput is limited in part by the speed and image quality of existing microscopy methods.
- The resolution of the system is described in several places as "near-isotropic" whereas prior methods were described as "highly anisotropic". I agree that the ~1:3 lateral to axial ratio here is more isotropic than the 1:6 ratio of the other cited publications. However, I'm not sure I'd consider 3-fold worse axial resolution than lateral to be considered "near" isotropic.
We agree that the term near-isotropic is ambiguous. We have modified the text accordingly, removing the term near-isotropic and where appropriate stating that the resolution is more isotropic than that of other cited publications.
- In the manuscript, the authors describe the photobleaching in their imaging conditions as "negligible". Figure S5 seems to show a loss of 60% fluorescence after 2000 exposures (which in the caption is described as "modest"). I'd suggest removing these qualitative terms and just stating the values.
We agree and have changed the text accordingly.
- The results section for Figure 5 is titled "Tracing axons in human neocortex and white matter". Although this section states "larger axons (>1 um) are well separated... allowing for robust automated and manual tracing" there is no data for any tracing in the manuscript. Although I agree that the images are visually impressive, I'm not sure that this claim is backed by data.
We have now removed the text in this section referring to automated and manual tracing.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Parise presents another instantiation of the Multisensory Correlation Detector model that can now accept stimulus-level inputs. This is a valuable development as it removes researcher involvement in the characterization/labeling of features and allows analysis of complex stimuli with a high degree of nuance that was previously unconsidered (i.e., spatial/spectral distributions across time). The author demonstrates the power of the model by fitting data from dozens of previous experiments, including multiple species, tasks, behavioral modalities, and pharmacological interventions.
Strengths:
One of the model's biggest strengths, in my opinion, is its ability to extract complex spatiotemporal co-relationships from multisensory stimuli. These relationships have typically been manually computed or assigned based on stimulus condition and often distilled to a single dimension or even a single number (e.g., "-50 ms asynchrony"). Thus, many models of multisensory integration depend heavily on human preprocessing of stimuli, and these models miss out on complex dynamics of stimuli; the lead modality distribution apparent in Figures 3b and c is provocative. I can imagine the model revealing interesting characteristics of the facial distribution of correlation during continuous audiovisual speech that have up to this point been largely described as "present" and almost solely focused on the lip area.
Another aspect that makes the MCD stand out among other models is the biological inspiration and generalizability across domains. The model was developed to describe a separate process - motion perception - and in a much simpler organism - Drosophila. It could then describe a very basic neural computation that has been conserved across phylogeny (which is further demonstrated in the ability to predict rat, primate, and human data) and brain area. This aspect makes the model likely able to account for much more than what has already been demonstrated with only a few tweaks akin to the modifications described in this and previous articles from Parise.
What allows this potential is that, as Parise and colleagues have demonstrated in those papers since our (re)introduction of the model in 2016, the MCD model is modular - both in its ability to interface with different inputs/outputs and its ability to chain MCD units in a way that can analyze spatial, spectral, or any other arbitrary dimension of a stimulus. This fact leaves wide open the possibilities for types of data, stimuli, and tasks a simplistic, neutrally inspired model can account for.
And so it's unsurprising (but impressive!) that Parise has demonstrated the model's ability here to account for such a wide range of empirical data from numerous tasks (synchrony/temporal order judgement, localization, detection, etc.) and behavior types (manual/saccade responses, gaze, etc.) using only the stimulus and a few free parameters. This ability is another of the model's main strengths that I think deserves some emphasis: it represents a kind of validation of those experiments, especially in the context of cross-experiment predictions (but see some criticism of that below).
Finally, what is perhaps most impressive to me is that the MCD (and the accompanying decision model) does all this with very few (sometimes zero) free parameters. This highlights the utility of the model and the plausibility of its underlying architecture, but also helps to prevent extreme overfitting if fit correctly (but see a related concern below).
Weaknesses:
There is an insufficient level of detail in the methods about model fitting. As a result, it's unclear what data the models were fitted and validated on. Were models fit individually or on average group data? Each condition separately? Is the model predictive of unseen data? Was the model cross-validated? Relatedly, the manuscript mentions a randomization test, but the shuffled data produces model responses that are still highly correlated to behavior despite shuffling. Could it be that any stimulus that varies in AV onset asynchrony can produce a psychometric curve that matches any other task with asynchrony judgements baked into the task? Does this mean all SJ or TOJ tasks produce correlated psychometric curves? Or more generally, is Pearson's correlation insensitive to subtle changes here, considering psychometric curves are typically sigmoidal? Curves can be non-overlapping and still highly correlated if one is, for example, scaled differently. Would an error term such as mean-squared or root mean-squared error be more sensitive to subtle changes in psychometric curves? Alternatively, perhaps if the models aren't cross-validated, the high correlation values are due to overfitting?
While the model boasts incredible versatility across tasks and stimulus configurations, fitting behavioral data well doesn't mean we've captured the underlying neural processes, and thus, we need to be careful when interpreting results. For example, the model produces temporal parameters fitting rat behavior that are 4x faster than when fitting human data. This difference in slope and a difference at the tails were interpreted as differences in perceptual sensitivity related to general processing speeds of the rat, presumably related to brain/body size differences. While rats no doubt have these differences in neural processing speed/integration windows, it seems reasonable that a lot of the differences in human and rat psychometric functions could be explained by the (over)training and motivation of rats to perform on every trial for a reward - increasing attention/sensitivity (slope) - and a tendency to make mistakes (compression evident at the tails). Was there an attempt to fit these data with a lapse parameter built into the decisional model as was done in Equation 21? Likewise, the fitted parameters for the pharmacological manipulations during the SJ task indicated differences in the decisional (but not the perceptual) process and the article makes the claim that "all pharmacologically-induced changes in audiovisual time perception" can be attributed to decisional processes "with no need to postulate changes in low-level temporal processing." However, those papers discuss actual sensory effects of pharmacological manipulation, with one specifically reporting changes to response timing. Moreover, and again contrary to the conclusions drawn from model fits to those data, both papers also report a change in psychometric slope/JND in the TOJ task after pharmacological manipulation, which would presumably be reflected in changes to the perceptual (but not the decisional) parameters.
The case for the utility of a stimulus-computable model is convincing (as I mentioned above), but its framing as mission-critical for understanding multisensory perception is overstated, I think. The line for what is "stimulus computable" is arbitrary and doesn't seem to be followed in the paper. A strict definition might realistically require inputs to be, e.g., the patterns of light and sound waves available to our eyes and ears, while an even more strict definition might (unrealistically) require those stimuli to be physically present and transduced by the model. A reasonable looser definition might allow an "abstract and low-dimensional representation of the stimulus, such as the stimulus envelope (which was used in the paper), to be an input. Ultimately, some preprocessing of a stimulus does not necessarily confound interpretations about (multi)sensory perception. And on the flip side, the stimulus-computable aspect doesn't necessarily give the model supreme insight into perception. For example, the MCD model was "confused" by the stimuli used in our 2018 paper (Nidiffer et al., 2018; Parise & Ernst, 2025). In each of our stimuli (including catch trials), the onset and offset drove strong AV temporal correlations across all stimulus conditions (including catch trials), but were irrelevant to participants performing an amplitude modulation detection task. The to-be-detected amplitude modulations, set at individual thresholds, were not a salient aspect of the physical stimulus, and thus only marginally affected stimulus correlations. The model was of course, able to fit our data by "ignoring" the on/offsets (i.e., requiring human intervention), again highlighting that the model is tapping into a very basic and ubiquitous computational principle of (multi)sensory perception. But it does reveal a limitation of such a stimulus-computable model: that it is (so far) strictly bottom-up.
The manuscript rightly chooses to focus a lot of the work on speech, fitting the MCD model to predict behavioral responses to speech. The range of findings from AV speech experiments that the MCD can account for is very convincing. Given the provided context that speech is "often claimed to be processed via dedicated mechanisms in the brain," a statement claiming a "first end-to-end account of multisensory perception," and findings that the MCD model can account for speech behaviors, it seems the reader is meant to infer that energetic correlation detection is a complete account of speech perception. I think this conclusion misses some facets of AV speech perception, such as integration of higher-order, non-redundant/correlated speech features (Campbell, 2008) and also the existence of top-down and predictive processing that aren't (yet!) explained by MCD. For example, one important benefit of AV speech is interactions on linguistic processes - how complementary sensitivity to articulatory features in the auditory and visual systems (Summerfield, 1987) allow constraint of linguistic processes (Peelle & Sommers, 2015; Tye-Murray et al., 2007).
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Sujet : L'expérience de l'IVG en France : Persistance des tabous et complexité des vécus.
Source : Extraits du documentaire "IVG : Est-ce encore un sujet tabou en France ? - Documentaire complet" (sans mention d'une date de publication ou de diffusion précise dans les extraits).
Présentation générale :
Il met en lumière la persistance d'un tabou autour de ce sujet, malgré sa légalisation depuis 1975 (Loi Veil).
Le film alterne récits personnels, extraits de discussions de groupe animées par une psychologue, et informations factuelles sur les méthodes et le contexte légal de l'IVG en France et dans le monde.
Un cas particulier est suivi à distance via des messages vocaux, documentant le parcours de Marion tout au long de son IVG médicamenteuse.
Thèmes principaux et idées clés :
L'importance du soutien et de la parole :
Citations clés :
Conclusion :
Le documentaire révèle que, malgré sa légalisation depuis près de 50 ans, l'IVG demeure un sujet empreint de tabous en France.
Les femmes qui y ont recours vivent souvent cette expérience dans le silence et l'isolement, confrontées à des émotions complexes allant de la culpabilité à la tristesse, mais aussi au soulagement et à la joie.
Le rôle crucial de l'accompagnement (professionnel et personnel), la nécessité de normaliser le recours à l'IVG, notamment en cas d'échec contraceptif, et la dénonciation des jugements et du sexisme dans le parcours de soins sont des éléments centraux.
Les témoignages soulignent la diversité des vécus et l'importance fondamentale de la parole pour briser l'isolement et permettre aux femmes de se réapproprier leur histoire.
Le documentaire se termine sur un rappel de la fragilité du droit à l'IVG, à l'échelle nationale et internationale, et de l'importance continue de la lutte pour le garantir pleinement.
Briefing Document : Enquête sur les travailleuses du sexe (OnlyFans & Mym)
Source : Extraits de "Enquête sur les travailleuses du SE*E (OnlyFans & Mym) - TDS le documentaire complet"
Date du briefing : 29 mai 2024
Objet : Analyse des témoignages de travailleuses du sexe en ligne (OnlyFans, Mym), explorant les motivations, les réalités du travail, les défis et les impacts personnels.
Thèmes Principaux :
Idées ou Faits Importants :
Conclusion Provisoire :
Les témoignages de ces travailleuses du sexe en ligne dressent un portrait complexe et souvent difficile de cette activité.
Si elle peut offrir un revenu rapide et, pour certaines, une forme d'empowerment ou de thérapie après un traumatisme, elle est également parsemée de dangers, de harcèlement, de jugement social et d'impacts psychologiques importants.
L'idée d'"argent facile" est un leurre, masquant un travail exigeant et des risques considérables, particulièrement pour les personnes jeunes ou vulnérables.
La ligne entre la vie professionnelle et personnelle est souvent floue, et l'identité associée au travail du sexe en ligne semble difficile à effacer.
Briefing Document : Prostitution des mineures, enquête sur une jeunesse invisible
Ce briefing examine les thèmes centraux abordés dans le documentaire "Prostitution des mineures, enquête sur une jeunesse invisible", mettant en lumière les expériences des jeunes filles concernées, les défis rencontrés par les structures d'accueil et le regard de la société sur cette problématique complexe.
Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés :
Les sources soulignent la grande vulnérabilité des mineures, souvent décrite comme "multivulnérables", cumulant diverses fragilités (antécédents de violence, problèmes familiaux, etc.). Les prédateurs identifient et exploitent ces faiblesses.
Le mécanisme du "lover boy" est un élément crucial de la manipulation. Ces individus se présentent comme des amis ou des amoureux attentionnés pour établir un lien fort et une dépendance affective avant d'inciter les jeunes filles à la prostitution.
Une jeune fille témoigne : "Au début, il s'est présenté comme un copain, et c'était quelqu'un qui m'écoutait toujours quand je racontais mes petits problèmes, qui avait l'air attentionné... Et j'avais l'impression que c'était vraiment quelqu'un qui m'aimait, parce qu'il avait vu le fond de ma personne."
Elle reconnaît plus tard qu'il lui a "vendu du rêve" et qu'il avait "son but dans la tête" dès le début.
Une jeune fille exprime : "Je sais pas, c'est bizarre, un peu, mais j'ai toujours de l'attachement pour lui, un peu." malgré le mal qu'il lui a fait.
La Fugue comme Facteur de Risque et Symptôme de Détresse :
La fugue est identifiée comme l'un des risques les plus importants pour les jeunes filles en foyer. Comme l'écrit quelqu'un sur un Post-it : "La prostitution."
La fugue est souvent perçue comme un cercle vicieux, menant rapidement à l'exposition aux dangers extérieurs et à la prostitution.
Une jeune fille raconte : "Moi, ma première fugue du foyer, c'était, je crois, le soir ou le lendemain de mon arrivée. En fait, ça va venir... C'est un cercle vicieux, ça va venir rythmer ta vie."
"Est-ce que, quelque part, ça nous plaît, ça nous fait du bien de nous mettre en danger, parce que ça nous apporte aussi des sensations ?" est une question soulevée lors d'un échange.
Le Foyer et la Protection de l'Enfance : Défis et Engagement :
Un éducateur note : "on sait que si on les retient de force, elles vont ouvrir la fenêtre et vont passer par la fenêtre..."
"La priorité, c'est de ne pas perdre le lien... d'être suffisamment proches pour que, si un jour, elle a besoin de nous, elle puisse tendre la main pour qu'on l'attrape."
Un membre du personnel confie : "Il y a des moments où on a envie de baisser les bras et où on se dit que tout ce qu'on est en train de faire, ça ne sert à rien."
La mère d'Éva exprime sa colère envers l'ASE pour le placement de sa fille, estimant que sa situation a empiré depuis.
L'Exploitation Sexuelle et ses Conséquences Dévastatrices :
Un intervenant déclare :
"Il y a des hommes qui achètent l'accès au corps d'enfants. Je suis désolée : 13-14 ans !
Et quand on me parle de choix, j'aimerais qu'on m'explique de quel choix on parle."
Les "clients" sont décrits comme violents, déshumanisants et sans remords. Une jeune fille témoigne : "Dès que je te passe l'argent, tu m'appartiens. Ils sont vraiment comme ça... Du coup, toi, tu te sens comme... Comme une déchetterie, en fait."
Les conséquences psychologiques de l'exploitation sont profondes et durables, incluant la perte d'estime de soi, le sentiment de n'être qu'un objet, la honte et le traumatisme. Une jeune fille confie : "Pour moi, mon corps n'avait plus de valeur." et ressentait un "vide en moi".
"Vous voyez, quand vous dites : 'Il se passe rien, ça risque rien...' Vous découvrez toutes ces vidéos. Ça veut dire que quelqu'un vous a filmée en pleine situation..."
Le Rétablissement et le Cheminement vers la Guérison :
Les jeunes filles cherchent des moyens de s'en sortir et de reconstruire leur vie.
Le désir de mener une vie "normale", comme les autres jeunes filles qui vont à l'école, est une motivation importante. "
Je commence à me dire que c'est pas normal d'envier quelqu'un dans la rue juste parce qu'il marche et qu'il a pas à faire ce que je dois faire après."
La mère d'Éva exprime l'importance d'être "ensemble pour... être présents pour elle".
Elle reconnaît cependant la peur de rechuter dans les moments de faiblesse.
Le processus de guérison est long et difficile, impliquant le travail sur le traumatisme, la confiance en soi et la capacité à se projeter dans l'avenir. Une jeune fille exprime la difficulté de se méfier des hommes et la peur de l'attachement.
Le sentiment de honte lié au passé est un obstacle au partage et au soutien.
"Mes proches ne savent pas que j'ai été dans cette situation... c'est une chose dont j'ai encore honte, parce que je sais que la société n'est pas prête à accueillir ce genre de parole.
Le Regard de la Société et l'Indifférence :
Le documentaire critique l'indifférence et le manque de compréhension de la société face à cette problématique. Un intervenant raconte comment les gens évitent le sujet lorsqu'il décrit les réalités vécues par ces jeunes. "très vite, tu te rends compte qu'il manque de la bière, que les gens vont chercher de la bière, mais ils ne reviennent jamais, quoi."
Les justifications ou minimisations de la prostitution des mineures (achat de biens de luxe, consentement) sont fermement rejetées comme une méconnaissance profonde de la réalité et de la détresse des jeunes filles.
Un intervenant s'exclame : "Putain, mais merde... Si quelqu'un veut un sac à main à ce point-là, ça dit quelque chose de la valeur qu'il se donne. Il pense que sans ce sac à main, il n'est rien. Et c'est ça, le problème. C'est pas le sac à main."
Le manque de réaction ou la lenteur des institutions (police, justice) pour démanteler les réseaux est également souligné. La mère d'Éva alerte la police, mais on lui répond : "Oui, mais nous, on ne peut rien faire."
En conclusion, ce documentaire offre un aperçu poignant et sans concession de la réalité de la prostitution des mineures, mettant en lumière les parcours de vie brisés, la complexité de la protection de l'enfance et l'urgence d'une prise de conscience sociétale pour mieux protéger et accompagner ces jeunes filles.
Briefing rapport 2025 sur la protection de l'enfance en France
Ce briefing examine les principaux constats et recommandations concernant la politique publique de protection de l'enfance en France, selon les sources fournies, notamment des extraits d'un rapport d'enquête parlementaire.
Thèmes Principaux:
Idées ou Faits Importants:
Recommandations Clés (liste non exhaustive):
Élaborer une loi de programmation pluriannuelle pour la protection de l'enfance et généraliser la logique pluriannuelle aux enjeux financiers. (p. 127)
Renforcer le rôle du préfet pour contrôler les manquements des départements et coordonner les acteurs au niveau local. (p. 125)
Imposer un éditeur de logiciel unique et obligatoire de gestion de l’ASE pour tous les départements. (p. 241)
Augmenter le nombre de juges des enfants et de greffiers, et renforcer leur formation. (p. 242)
Donner à la Banque des territoires un rôle central dans le soutien aux départements pour construire et réhabiliter des structures d'accueil. (p. 188)
Renforcer l’implication de l’État dans la prise en charge des MNA, notamment en créant une instance de gouvernance dédiée au niveau national. (p. 238)
Augmenter les contrôles conjoints entre les services de l’État et ceux du département, et créer une cellule unique par département pour recenser et gérer les incidents. (p. 262)
Prévoir la désignation systématique d'un avocat spécialisé pour chaque enfant dans le cadre des procédures d'assistance éducative. (p. 260)
Mieux garantir le droit et l’accès aux loisirs des enfants protégés. (p. 260)
Mieux garantir la prise en compte de la parole des enfants pour les droits de visite. (p. 260)
Mieux accompagner les jeunes majeurs vers l'autonomie, y compris un soutien financier plus durable. (p. 402)
Mener un plan national de recrutement d'assistants familiaux. (p. 410)
Renforcer les moyens humains et financiers de la sous-direction Enfance et famille de la DGCS et des équipes de la DREES. (p. 131)
Ce briefing met en évidence un système de protection de l'enfance sous tension en France, marqué par des problèmes de gouvernance, de financement, de ressources humaines et d'inégalités territoriales, nécessitant des réformes structurelles profondes pour garantir l'intérêt supérieur de l'enfant.
BRIEFING : L'ÉVOLUTION DE L'ÉGALITÉ FILLES-GARÇONS DANS L'ÉDUCATION
Date: 2025
Sujet: Analyse des jalons historiques, des défis actuels et des initiatives en faveur de l'égalité filles-garçons dans le système éducatif.
Sources: Excerpts from "Faire progresser l’égalité filles-garçons à l’école" (Multiple Intervenants)
Résumé Exécutif:
Les sources analysées explorent la progression historique et les défis persistants de l'égalité filles-garçons dans le système éducatif français.
Elles mettent en lumière les résistances passées à l'accès des filles à l'enseignement supérieur et aux matières considérées comme "masculines", tout en soulignant les inégalités qui subsistent aujourd'hui, notamment dans les domaines scientifiques et techniques.
Le rôle des stéréotypes de genre, la construction sociale des choix d'orientation et l'impact des politiques publiques et des initiatives locales sont des thèmes centraux.
Le document met également en avant des figures pionnières comme Julie Victoire Daubié et l'importance de la commémoration et de la visibilité des femmes dans l'histoire des sciences et de l'éducation.
Thèmes Principaux et Idées Clés:
La Longue Marche vers la Mixité et l'Accès à l'Enseignement Supérieur:
L'introduction souligne que si les programmes scolaires ont contribué à égaliser les chances pour les filles d'obtenir le baccalauréat et d'accéder aux études supérieures, cette mixité s'est installée "non sans mal".
Il est rappelé qu'en 1972, la majore de Polytechnique, Madame Chopinet, a été interrogée par un journaliste lui demandant si elle n'avait pas peur de "devenir un monstre et de faire fuir [ses] camarades masculins".
Ceci illustre les mentalités qui persistaient même après l'ouverture des portes.
Rebecca Rogers retrace l'histoire de l'éducation des filles en France, mettant en évidence la création progressive de structures dédiées (collèges et lycées de jeunes filles, écoles normales) tout en soulignant une vision initialement "différentialiste" visant à former de "bonnes épouses et mères".
L'enseignement classique (latin, grec) a longtemps été fermé aux filles, n'entrant officiellement dans les programmes des lycées de filles qu'en 1913.
L'accès au baccalauréat et à l'université a été une conquête lente.
La loi Guizot de 1833 n'a pas rendu l'école primaire publique obligatoire pour les filles, et il a fallu attendre la loi Paul Bert en 1879 pour une formation systématique des institutrices.
Le décret Bérard en 1924 est identifié comme un jalon majeur, ouvrant l'accès aux filles à l'infinité du savoir enseigné dans les lycées de garçons.
Les Inégalités Persistantes, Notamment dans les Sciences et Techniques:
Malgré les avancées, les stéréotypes de genre continuent de freiner les ambitions des filles dans les domaines scientifiques, en particulier les mathématiques.
Un professeur de mathématiques des années 1930 est cité, affirmant que les filles "apprennent ce que les garçons comprennent".
Aujourd'hui, les filles sont moins confiantes dans leurs capacités en mathématiques et ont moins de modèles de réussite dans ce domaine.
Elles s'orientent davantage vers la biologie que vers la physique ou l'informatique.
Le domaine de l'informatique, investi par les filles à ses débuts dans les années 1970, les a progressivement évincées "au fur et à mesure que la discipline [...] devient un enjeu de pouvoir économique et politique".
Les chiffres actuels de l'OCDE et des concours aux grandes écoles montrent une sous-représentation significative des femmes dans les "sciences dures" (mathématiques, physique, ingénierie), bien que la chimie et surtout la biologie attirent davantage de femmes.
Les filières professionnelles, comme la métallurgie ou la cuisine, ont également été fermées aux filles pendant longtemps, et il faut du temps pour "déconstruire" ces barrières, même après l'ouverture.
L'Influence des Stéréotypes de Genre et du Milieu Social: Les inégalités d'orientation sont présentées comme des "constructions sociales".
Le milieu social joue un rôle important, avec une "spécialisation" plus marquée des filles vers les filières littéraires ou scientifiques (SV) et des garçons vers les mathématiques dans les milieux aisés, "beaucoup plus spécialisé[s] que ne le sont les enfants de milieu populaire".
Il est suggéré que dans les milieux favorisés, les rôles de genre sont renforcés, et que les filles essaient de "rentabiliser" leur réussite en s'orientant vers des matières offrant la "meilleure insertion professionnelle".
Les stéréotypes de genre sont présents dans la mentalité sociétale, véhiculés par l'environnement familial, scolaire et plus généralement la société, "qui pousse les femmes enfin qui tend à les écarter dès très jeune des études scientifiques".
Le problème se déclare dès l'école élémentaire et s'amplifie au collège, au lycée et après.
Le Rôle Crucial de l'Éducation et de la Formation des Enseignants:
La formation scientifique des enseignants du premier degré est soulignée comme essentielle, car 84% à 91% d'entre eux sont des femmes. Si ces enseignantes ne sont pas à l'aise avec les matières scientifiques, cela peut impacter la perception des élèves.
Il est recommandé de renforcer la formation scientifique initiale et continue des professeurs des écoles pour qu'ils se sentent plus à l'aise et enseignent ces matières avec plus de goût.
L'identification et l'effacement des biais de genre, notamment dans les manuels scolaires, est une recommandation.
La sensibilisation de la communauté éducative à leurs propres biais de genre et à ceux de leurs collègues est jugée nécessaire pour rendre les propos genrés "incongru[s]".
Les Initiatives Concrètes et les Perspectives d'Action: Un groupe de travail associant l'inspection, la recherche et le terrain travaille sur les écarts de résultats en mathématiques au premier degré, proposant des formations et des grilles d'auto-évaluation.
Des initiatives locales, comme le projet dans une école de l'Essonne utilisant l'art et le jeu pour rendre les mathématiques plus attrayantes et mettre en place du tutorat, montrent des pistes d'action.
La création de "brigades égalité filles-garçons" dans les lycées est présentée comme un moyen d'impliquer les élèves dans la déconstruction des stéréotypes et la promotion du respect mutuel, avec des effets positifs sur l'engagement scolaire.
La labellisation Égalité filles-garçons est un moteur pour l'établissement d'objectifs clairs et la mise en place d'actions concrètes, comme l'accueil de collégiennes pour découvrir les filières techniques et scientifiques et des ateliers sur les stéréotypes.
L'importance de favoriser l'insertion des femmes dans le numérique est soulignée comme un enjeu majeur, non seulement pour l'emploi rémunérateur, mais aussi pour que les femmes participent à la création et à l'administration du monde digital.
Le développement de jeux pédagogiques par des étudiants ingénieurs pour sensibiliser les lycéens aux carrières d'ingénierie et déconstruire les stéréotypes est une autre initiative concrète, soulignant l'accessibilité de ces études par différentes voies et pour divers profils.
Figures Pionnières et Importance de l'Histoire:
Julie Victoire Daubié est célébrée comme une figure majeure pour sa lutte pour l'accès des femmes aux diplômes universitaires, notamment le baccalauréat en 1861. Son parcours d'autodidacte et son combat pour l'égalité salariale et l'ouverture de nouvelles carrières sont mis en avant.
L'analyse de ses écrits, notamment "La femme pauvre", révèle une critique de la société de son temps et une conscience de l'importance de l'apprentissage et de l'indépendance économique des femmes. L'histoire des femmes dans les sciences, avec l'exemple de Marie Curie et la conférence Solvay, souligne la sous-représentation historique.
La commémoration de figures féminines, comme Julie Victoire Daubié et Edmé Chandan, est vue comme un geste politique et symbolique important pour rendre visibles les contributions des femmes et inspirer les générations futures.
Réflexions sur la Nature du Savoir et de l'Égalité:
Les textes de Poulin de la Barre (17ème siècle) sont convoqués pour montrer une pensée précoce sur l'égalité des sexes en matière de capacité intellectuelle, affirmant que l'esprit "n'est pas sexué".
La distinction entre "prendre son droit" (comme Julie Victoire Daubié) et obtenir des droits par la loi est une perspective intéressante sur les stratégies d'émancipation.
Le savoir est présenté comme "subversif", et l'accès à un savoir "infini" pour les femmes (notamment après 1924) est vu comme un privilège majeur.
La réflexion de Simone de Beauvoir sur le "privilège" d'être une femme (lui permettant de se placer en marge pour analyser la condition féminine) et sur la différence entre se mêler de "ce qui [nous] regarde" et de "ce qui ne [nous] regarde pas" est un apport philosophique sur la position de l'intellectuel et la construction du savoir. La question de la restitution des "privilèges" nécessaires pour faire progresser l'égalité aujourd'hui est posée.
Citations Clés:
"...cette mixité s'installée mais je le répète non sans mal..." "...n'avez-vous pas peur de devenir un monstre et de faire fuir vos camarades masculins..." (Journaliste à Mme Chopinet en 1972) "...l'objectif n'est pas de former des femmes savantes ni des femmes professionnelles... mais de former de bonnes épouses et mères..." (M. Camille Sée, 1880) "...dans sa discipline les filles apprennent ce que les garçons comprennent..." (Professeur de mathématiques, années 1930) "...ces inégalités en terme d'orientation ce sont des constructions sociales..." "...il y a un vrai problème parce que c'est pas seulement une question d'égalité fille garçon à l'école... mais c'est quand même la question de savoir justement toutes ces disciplines qui permettent de bah quelque part de de de de penser le monde... il faut que les femmes participent à à cette construction..." "...l'économiste français de Duval il faut peut-être laisser et c'est là donc ce qui est un salaire rich liieu qui a envie qui est lié entre 62 et 70 ou euh donc d'autres évidemment intellectuel euh progressiste alors c'est un fourériste colonialiste comme il y en a beaucoup et Julie victoire dobier en correspondance intense avec Jules dual de même que avec d'autres hommes politiques comme Jul Simon qui reconnaissent son travail..." (Manuela Martini) "...les filles choisissent ce qu'elles ont envie de faire..." (Christophe Salomon) - Nuancé par la notion de choix socialement construit. "...le fait de choisir c'est quand même un petit peu plus complexe et que notamment... les jouets que l'on offre font qu'on a petit à petit on dé des intérêts et des et des compétences qui peuvent être très distinctes en fonction qu'on soit une fille ou un garçon..." (Participation du public) "...le savoir est subversif..." (Geneviève Fraisse, citant Condorcet) "...le privilège de la pensée..." (Geneviève Fraisse, à propos de Simone de Beauvoir)
Conclusion:
Les sources démontrent que la lutte pour l'égalité filles-garçons dans l'éducation est un processus historique long et complexe, marqué par des avancées législatives, des résistances sociales et des défis persistants.
Les inégalités d'orientation, en particulier dans les domaines scientifiques et techniques, restent une préoccupation majeure, alimentée par des stéréotypes de genre profondément ancrés et la construction sociale des choix individuels.
Cependant, les initiatives locales, le travail sur la formation des enseignants et la valorisation des figures pionnières et de l'histoire offrent des perspectives concrètes pour continuer à faire progresser l'égalité.
La commémoration de ces combats passés et la prise de parole sur les défis actuels sont essentielles pour sensibiliser et mobiliser l'ensemble de la société.
Prochaines Étapes Potentielles (non tirées des sources, mais suggestions découlant de l'analyse):
Analyser plus en détail l'impact des réformes récentes du système éducatif sur les choix d'orientation genrés. Développer des outils et des formations spécifiquement conçus pour déconstruire les stéréotypes de genre dès le plus jeune âge.
Favoriser les partenariats entre les établissements scolaires, les universités, les entreprises et les associations pour offrir des modèles et des expériences diversifiées aux élèves.
Continuer à promouvoir la visibilité des femmes dans l'histoire des sciences, de la technologie et de l'éducation. Soutenir la recherche sur les facteurs qui influencent les choix d'orientation genrés et les inégalités qui en découlent.
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Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public Review):
Summary:
This article presents a meta-analysis that challenges established abundance-occupancy relationships (AORs) by utilizing the largest known bird observation database. The analysis yields contentious outcomes, raising the question of whether these findings could potentially refute AORs.
We thank the Reviewer for their positive comments.
Strengths:
The study employed an extensive aggregation of datasets to date to scrutinize the abundance-occupancy relationships (AORs).
We thank the Reviewer for their positive comments.
Weaknesses:
While the dataset employed in this research holds promise, a rigorous justification of the core assumptions underpinning the analytical framework is inadequate. The authors should thoroughly address the correlation between checklist data and global range data, ensuring that the foundational assumptions and potential confounding factors are explicitly examined and articulated within the study's context.
We thank the Reviewer for these comments. We agree that more justification and transparency is needed of the core assumptions that form the foundation of our methods. In our revised version, we have taken the following steps to achieve this:
- Altered the title to be more explicit about the core assumptions, which now reads: “Local-scale relative abundance is decoupled from global range size”
- We have added more details on why and how we treat global range size as a measure of ‘occupancy.’
- We have added a section that discusses the limitations of using eBird relative abundance
Reviewer #2 (Public Review):
Summary:
The goal is to ask if common species when studied across their range tend to have larger ranges in total. To do this the authors examined a very large citizen science database which gives estimates of numbers, and correlated that with the total range size, available from Birdlife. The average correlation is positive but close to zero, and the distribution around zero is also narrow, leading to the conclusion that, even if applicable in some cases, there is no evidence for consistent trends in one or other direction.
We thank the Reviewer for these comments.
Strengths:
The study raises a dormant question, with a large dataset.
We thank the Reviewer for these comments. We intended to take a longstanding question and attempt to apply novel datasets that were not available mere decades ago. While we do not imply that we have ‘solved’ the question, we hope this work highlights the potential for further interrogation using these large datasets.
Weaknesses:
This study combines information from across the whole world, with many different habitats, taxa, and observations, which surely leads to a quite heterogeneous collection.
We agree that there is a heterogeneous collection of data across many habitats, taxa, and observations. However, rather than as a weakness, we see this as a significant strength. Our work assumes we are averaging over this variability to assess for a large-scale pattern in the relationship - something that was potentially a limitation of previous work, as these large datasets were often focused on particular contexts (e.g., much work focused solely on the UK), which we believe could limit some of the generalizability of the previous work. However, the reviewer makes a fair point in regard to the heterogeneity of data collection. We have now added some text in the discussion which is explicit about this - see the new section named “Potential limitations of current work and future work –-although our findings challenge some long-held assumptions about the consistency of the abundance-occupancy relationship, our work only deals with interspecific AORs among birds, synthesizing observations of potentially heterogeneous locations, context and quality”.
First, scale. Many of the earlier analyses were within smaller areas, and for example, ranges are not obviously bounded by a physical barrier. I assume this study is only looking at breeding ranges; that should be stated, as 40% of all bird species migrate, and winter limitation of populations is important. Also are abundances only breeding abundances or are they measured through the year? Are alien distributions removed?
Second, consider various reasons why abundance and range size may be correlated (sometimes positively and sometimes negatively) at large scales. Combining studies across such a large diversity of ecological situations seems to create many possibilities to miss interesting patterns. For example:
(1) Islands are small and often show density release.
See comment below.
(2) North temperate regions have large ranges (Rapoport's rule) and higher population sizes than the tropics.
See comment below.
(3) Body size correlates with global range size (I am unsure if this has recently been tested but is present in older papers) and with density. For example, cosmopolitan species (barn owl, osprey, peregrine) are relatively large and relatively rare.
See comment below.
(4) In the consideration of alien species, it certainly looks to me as if the law is followed, with pigeon, starling, and sparrow both common and widely distributed. I guess one needs to make some sort of statement about anthropogenic influences, given the dramatic changes in both populations and environments over the past 50 years.
See comment below. We also added a sentence in the methods that highlighted we did not remove alien ranges and provided reasons why. Still, we do acknowledge the dramatic changes in populations and environments over the past 50 years (see the new section “Potential limitations of current work and futur work”)
(5) Wing shape correlates with ecological niche and range size (e.g. White, American Naturalist). Aerial foraging species with pointed wings are likely to be easily detected, and several have large ranges reflecting dispersal (e.g. barn swallow).
We agree that all of the points above are interesting data explorations. As said above, our main purpose was to highlight the potential for further interrogation using these large datasets. However, we have added some additional text in the discussion that explicitly mentions/encourages these additional data explorations. We hope people will pick up on the potential for these data and explore them further.
Third, biases. I am not conversant with ebird methodology, but the number appearing on checklists seems a very poor estimate of local abundance. As noted in the paper, common species may be underestimated in their abundance. Flocking species must generate large numbers, skulking species few. The survey is often likely to be in areas favorable to some species and not others. The alternative approach in the paper comes from an earlier study, based on ebird but then creating densities within grids and surely comes with similar issues.
We agree that if we were interested in the absolute abundance of a given species, the local number on an eBird checklist would be a poor representation. However, our study aims not to estimate absolute abundance but to examine relative abundance among species on each checklist. By focusing on relative abundance, we leverage eBird data's strengths in detecting the presence and frequency of species across diverse locations and times, thereby capturing community composition trends that can provide meaningful insights despite individual checklist biases. This approach allows us to assess the comparative prominence of species in the community as reported by the observer, providing a consistent metric of relative abundance. Despite detectability biases, the structure of eBird checklists reflects the observer’s encounter rates with each species under similar conditions, offering a valuable snapshot of relative species composition across sites and times. The key to our assumption is that these biases discussed are not directional and, therefore, random throughout the sampling process, which would translate to no ‘real’ bias in our effect size of interest.
Range biases are also present. Notably, tropical mountain-occupying species have range sizes overestimated because holes in the range are not generally accounted for (Ocampo-Peñuela et al., Nature Communications). These species are often quite rare, too.
We thanks the reviewer for pointing to this issue and reference. We included a discussion on these biases in our limitations section and reference Ocampo-Peñuela et al. to emphasize the need for improved spatial resolution in range data for more accurate AOR assessments.”More precise range-size estimates would also improve the accuracy of AOR assessments, since species range data are often overestimated due to the failure to capture gaps in actual distributions ”
Fourth, random error. Random error in ebird assessments is likely to be large, with differences among observers, seasons, days, and weather (e.g. Callaghan et al. 2021, PNAS). Range sizes also come with many errors, which is why occupancy is usually seen as the more appropriate measure.
If we consider both range and abundance measurements to be subject to random error in any one species list, then the removal of all these errors will surely increase the correlation for that list (the covariance shouldn't change but the variances will decrease). I think (but am not sure) that this will affect the mean correlation because more of the positive correlations appear 'real' given the overall mean is positive. It will definitely affect the variance of the correlations; the low variance is one of the main points in the paper. A high variance would point to the operation of multiple mechanisms, some perhaps producing negative correlations (Blackburn et al. 2006).
We agree random errors can affect estimates, but as we wrote above, random errors, regardless of magnitudes, would not bias estimates. After accounting for sampling error (a part of random errors), little variance is left to be explained as we have shown in the MS. This suggests that many of the random errors were part of the sampling errors. And this is where meta-analysis really shines.
On P.80 it is stated: "Specifically, we can quantify how AOR will change in relation to increases in species richness and sampling duration, both of which are predicted to reduce the magnitude of AORs" I haven't checked the references that make this statement, but intuitively the opposite is expected? More species and longer durations should both increase the accuracy of the estimate, so removing them introduces more error? Perhaps dividing by an uncertain estimate introduces more error anyway. At any rate, the authors should explain the quoted statement in this paper.
It would be of considerable interest to look at the extreme negative and extreme positive correlations: do they make any biological sense?
Extremely high correlations would not make any biological sense if these observations were based on large sample sizes. However, as shown in Figure 2, all extreme correlations come from small sample sizes (i.e., low precision), as sampling theory expects (actually our Fig 2 a text-book example of the funnel shape). Therefore, we do not need to invoke any biological explanations here.
Discussion:
I can see how publication bias can affect meta-analyses (addressed in the Gaston et al. 2006 paper) but less easily see how confirmation bias can. It seems to me that some of the points made above must explain the difference between this study and Blackburn et al. 2006's strong result.
We agree. Now, we extended an explanation of why confirmation bias could result in positive AOR. Yet, we point out confirmation bias is a very common phenomena which we cite relevant citations in the original MS. The only way to avoid confirmation bias is to conduct a study blind but this is not often possible in ecological work.
“Meta-research on behavioural ecology identified 79 studies on nestmate recognition, 23 of which were conducted blind. Non-blind studies confirmed a hypothesis of no aggression towards nestmates nearly three times more often. It is possible that confirmation bias was at play in earlier AOR studies.”
Certainly, AOR really does seem to be present in at least some cases (e.g. British breeding birds) and a discussion of individual cases would be valuable. Previous studies have also noted that there are at least some negative and some non-significant associations, and understanding the underlying causes is of great interest (e.g. Kotiaho et al. Biology Letters).
We agree. And yes, we pointed out these in our introduction.
Reviewer #3 (Public Review):
Summary:
This paper claims to overturn the longstanding abundance occupancy relationship.
Strengths:
(1) The above would be important if true.
(2) The dataset is large.
We have clarified this point by changing the title to emphasize that we do not suggest overturning AORs entirely but instead provide a refined view of the relationship at a global scale. Our results suggest a weaker and more context-dependent AOR than previously documented. We hope our revised title and additional clarifications in the text convey our intent to contribute to a more nuanced understanding rather than a whole overturning of the AOR framework.
Weaknesses:
(1) The authors are not really measuring the abundance-occupancy relationship (AOR). They are measuring abundance-range size. The AOR typically measures patches in a metapopulation, i.e. at a local scale. Range size is not an interchangeable notion with local occupancy.
We have refined this in our revision to be more explicitly focused on global range size. However, we note that the classic paper by Bock and Richlefs (1983, Am Nat) also refers to global (species entire) range size in the context of the AOR. Importantly, Bock and Richlefs pointed out the importance of using species’ entire ranges; without such uses, there will be sampling artifacts creating positive AORs when using arbitrary geographical ranges, which were used in some studies of AORs. So we highlight that our work is well in line with the previous work, allowing us to question the longstanding macroecological work. One of the issues of AOR has been how to define occupancy and global range size, which provides a relatively ambiguous measure, which is why we used this measure.
(2) Ebird is a poor dataset for this. The sampling unit is non-standard. So abundance can at best be estimated by controlling for sampling effort. Comparisons across space are also likely to be highly heterogenous. They also threw out checklists in which abundances were too high to be estimated (reported as "X"). As evidence of the biases in using eBird for this pattern, the North American Breeding Bird Survey, a very similar taxonomic and geographic scope but with a consistent sampling protocol across space does show clear support for the AOR.
Yes, we agree the sampling unit is non-standard. However, this is a significant strength in that it samples across much heterogeneity (as discussed in response to Reviewer 2, above). We were interested in relative abundance and not direct absolute abundance per se, which is accurate, especially since we did control for sampling effort.
We appreciate the reviewer’s attention to our data selection criteria. We excluded checklists containing ‘X’ entries to minimize biases in our abundance estimates. The 'X' notation is often used for the most common species, reflecting the observer's identification of presence without specifying a count. This approach was chosen to avoid disproportionately inflating presence data for these abundant species, which could distort the relative abundance calculations in our analysis. By excluding such checklists, we aimed to retain consistency and ensure that local abundance estimates were representative across all species on each checklist. We have revised our manuscript to clarify this methodological choice and hope this explanation addresses the reviewer’s concern. We modified our text in the methods to make the entries ‘X’ clearer (see the Method section).
(3) In general, I wonder if a pattern demonstrated in thousands of data sets can be overturned by findings in one data set. It may be a big dataset but any biases in the dataset are repeated across all of those observations.
Overturning a major conclusion requires careful work. This paper did not rise to this level.
We appreciate the reviewer’s caution regarding broad conclusions based on a single dataset, even one as large as eBird. Our intention was not to definitively overturn the abundance-occupancy relationship (AOR) but to re-evaluate it with the most extensive and globally representative dataset currently available. We recognise that potential biases in citizen science data, such as observer variation, may influence our findings, and we have taken steps to address these in our methodology and limitations sections. We see this work as a contribution to an ongoing discourse, suggesting that AOR may be less universally consistent than previously believed, mainly when tested with large-scale citizen science data. We hope this study will encourage additional research that tests AORs using other expansive datasets and approaches, further refining our understanding of this classic macroecological relationship. However, we have left our broad message about instigating credible revolution and also re-examining ecological laws.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):
(1) The investigation focuses solely on interspecific relationships among birds; thus, the extrapolation of these conclusions to broader ecological contexts requires further validation.
We have now added this point to our new section: “Although our findings challenge some long-held assumptions about the consistency of the abundance-occupancy relationship, our work only deals with interspecific AORs among birds, so we hope this work serves as a foundation for further investigations that utilize such comprehensive datasets.”
(2) The rationale for combining data from eBird - a platform predominantly representing individual observations from urban North America - with the more globally comprehensive BirdLife International database needs to be substantiated. The potential underrepresentation of global abundance in the eBird checklist data could introduce a sampling bias, undermining the foundational premises of AORs.
We agree with the limitation of ebird sampling coverage, but it should not bias our results. In statistical definitions, bias is directional, and if not directional, it will become statistical noise, making it difficult to detect the signal. In fact, our meta-analyses adjust what statisticians call sampling bias and it is the strength of meta-analysis.
(3) In the full mixed-effect model, checklist duration and sampling variance (inversely proportional to sample size N) are treated as fixed effects. However, these variables are likely to be negatively correlated, which could introduce multicollinearity, inflating standard errors and diminishing the statistical significance of other factors, such as the intercept. This calls into question the interpretation of insignificance in the results.
Multicollinearity is an issue with sample sizes. For example, with small datasets, correlations of 0.5 could be an issue, and such an issue would usually show up as a large SE. We do not have such an issue with ~ 17 million data points. Please refer to this paper.
Freckleton, Robert P. "Dealing with collinearity in behavioural and ecological data: model averaging and the problems of measurement error." Behavioral Ecology and Sociobiology 65 (2011): 91-101.
(4) The observed low heterogeneity may stem from discrepancies in sampling for abundance versus occupancy, compounded by uncertainties in reporting behavior.
If we assume everybody underreports common species or overreports rare species, this could happen. However, such an assumption is unlikely. If some people report accurately (but not others), we should see high heterogeneity, which we do not observe). We have touched upon this point in our original MS.
(5) The contribution and implementation of phylogenetic comparative analysis remain ambiguous and were not sufficiently clarified within the study.
We need to add more explanation for the global abundance analysis
“To statistically test whether there was an effect of abundance and occupancy at the macro-scale, we used phylogenetic comparative analysis. This analysis also addresses the issue of positive interspecific AORs potentially arising from not accounting for phylogenetic relatedness among species examined ”
(6) The use of large N checklists could skew the perceived rarity or commonality of species, potentially diminishing the positive correlation observed in AORs. A consistent observer effect could lead to a near-zero effect with high precision.
Regardless of the number of N species in checklists (seen in Fig 2), correlations are distributed around zero. This means there is nothing special about large N checklists.
(7) The study should acknowledge and discuss any discrepancies or deviations from previous literature or expected outcomes.
We felt we had already done this as we discussed the previous meta-analysis and what we expected from this meta-analysis. Nevertheless, we have added some relevant sentences in the new version of MS.
In addition to these major points, there are several minor concerns:
(1) Figure 2B lacks discussion, and the metric for the number of observations is not clarified. Furthermore, the labeling of the y-axis appears to be incorrect.
Thank you very much for pointing out this shortcoming. Now, the y-axis label has been fixed and we mention 2B in the main text.
(2) The study should provide a clear, mathematical expression of the multilevel random effect models for greater transparency.
Many thanks for this point, and now we have added relevant mathematical expressions in Table S6.
(3) On Line 260, the term "number of species" should be refined to "number of species in a checklist," ideally represented by a formula for precision.
This ambiguity has been mended as suggested.
Please provide the data and R code linked to the outputs.
The referee must have missed the link (https://github.com/itchyshin/AORs) in our original MS. In addition to our GitHub repository link, we now have added a link to our Zenodo repository (https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.14019900).
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):
The authors cite Rabinowitz's 7 forms of rarity paper as a suggestion that previous findings also break the AOR. In fact empirical studies of the 7 forms of rarity typically find that all three forms of rareness vs commonness are heavily correlated (e.g. Yu & Dobson 2000).
We thank the reviewer for drawing attention to Yu & Dobson (2000) and similar studies that find positive correlations among the axes of rarity. Ref 3 is correct in that Rabinowitz’s (1981) framework does not require that local abundance and geographic range size be uncorrelated for every species; instead, it highlights conceptual scenarios where a species may be common locally yet have a restricted distribution (or vice versa).
Empirical analyses such as Yu & Dobson (2000) show that, on average, these axes can be correlated, which may align with conventional AOR findings in some taxonomic groups. However, Rabinowitz’s key insight was that exceptions do occur, so these exceptions demonstrate that strong positive AORs may not be universally applicable. Our results do not claim that Rabinowitz’s framework “breaks” the AOR outright; instead, we use it to underscore that local abundance can, in principle, be “decoupled” from global occupancy. Whether the correlation found by Yu & Dobson (2000) implies a positive AOR, requires a detailed simulation study, which is an interesting avenue for future research.
Thus, citing Rabinowitz serves to highlight the potential heterogeneity and complexity of abundance–occupancy relationships rather than to refute every positive correlation reported in the literature. Our findings suggest that when examined at large spatiotemporal scales (with unbiased sampling), the overall AOR signal may be less robust than traditionally believed. This is consistent with Rabinowitz’s view that local abundance and global range can vary along independent axes. Now we added
“Although studies using her framework found positive correlations between species range and local abundance.”
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
This manuscript uses a well-validated behavioural estimation task to investigate the degree to which optimistic belief updating was attenuated during the 2020 global pandemic. Online participants estimated how likely different negative life events were to happen to them in the future and were given statistics about these events. Belief updating (measured as the degree to which estimations changed after viewing the statistics) was less optimistically biased during the pandemic (compared to outside of it). This resulted from reduced updating from "good news" (better than expected information). Computational models were used to try to unpack how statistics were integrated and used to revise beliefs. Two families of models were compared - an RL set of models where "estimation errors" (analogous to prediction errors in classic RL models) predict belief change and a Bayesian set of models where an implied likelihood ratio was calculated (derived from participants estimations of their own risk and estimation of the base rate risk) and used to predict belief change. The authors found evidence that the former set of models accounted for updating better outside of the pandemic, but the latter accounted for updating during the pandemic. In addition, the RL model provides evidence that learning was asymmetrically positively biased outside of the pandemic but symmetric during it (as a result of reduced learning rates from good news estimation errors).
Strengths
Understanding whether biases in learning are fixed modes of information processing or flexible and adapt in response to environmental shocks (like a global pandemic or economic recession) is an important area of research relevant to a wide range of fields, including cognitive psychology, behavioural economics, and computational psychiatry. The study uses a well-validated task, and the authors conduct a power analysis to show that the sample sizes are appropriate. Furthermore, the authors test that their results hold in both a between-group analysis (the focus of the main paper) and a within-group analysis (mainly in the supplemental).
The finding that optimistic biases are reduced in response to acute stress, perceived threat, and depression has been shown before using this task both in the lab (social stress manipulation), in the real world (firefighters on duty), and clinical groups (patients with depression). However, the work does extend these findings here in important ways:
(1) Examining the effect of a new real-world adverse event (the pandemic).<br /> (2) The reduction in optimistic updating here arises due to reduced updating from positive information (previously, in the case of environmental threat, this reduction mainly arose from increased sensitivity to negative information).<br /> (3) Leveraging new RL-inspired computational approaches, demonstrating that the bias - and its attenuation - can be captured using trial-by-trial computational modelling with separate learning rates for positive and negative estimation errors.
The authors now take great care to caveat that the findings cannot directly attribute the observed lack of optimistically biased belief updating during lockdown to psychological causes such as heightened anxiety and stress.
The authors have added model recovery results. Whilst there are some cases within a family (RL or Bayesian) of models where they can be confused (e.g., Bayesian model 10-the winning model during the pandemic-sometimes gets confused with Bayesian model 9), there is no confusion between families of models (RL models don't get confused with Bayesian models and vice versa), which is reassuring.
Weaknesses
The authors now conduct model recovery (SI Figure 5) and show how the behaviour of the two best-fitting models (Rational Bayesian model and optimistically biased RL-like model) approximates the actual data observed by showing them alongside each other (Figure 1b). It seems from Figure 1b that the 2 models predict similar behaviour for bad news but diverge for good news, with the optimistically biased RL-like model predicting greater updates than the rational Bayesian model. However, it is difficult to tell from the figure (partly because of the y-axis scale) how much of a divergence this is and how distinctive a pattern relative to the other models. I think the interpretation could be improved further by a clearer sense of the behavioural signatures of each model, enabling them to be reliably teased apart from one another in the model recovery.
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