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    1. Art. 326

      A cumulação diz-se eventual quando a parte pretende o acolhimento de uma das ações cumuladas para a eventualidade de não poder ser acolhida aquela inserida na ordem prioritária de sua postulação. Pertence a essa categoria a cumulação alternativa que deriva de pretensão alternativa de direito material fundada em lei ou em contrato e a cumulação eventual decorrente do pedido assim formulado pelo autor.


      • Enunciado 287, FPPC: (art. 326) O pedido subsidiário somente pode ser apreciado se o juiz não puder examinar ou expressamente rejeitar o principal.

      • Enunciado 288, FPPC: (art. 326) Quando acolhido o pedido subsidiário, o autor tem interesse de recorrer em relação ao principal.

    2. § 2º

      Trata-se de hipótese de LITISCONSÓRCIO MULTITUDINÁRIO

      Observe que é o requerimento para a limitação do litisconsórcio quem interrompe o prazo para manifestação ou resposta.

      Acolhido ou não o requerimento para limitação do litisconsórcio, é a partir da decisão que solucionar o requerimento que se recontará o prazo interrompido.

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    1. La escritura surgió por primera vez en una variedad de culturas diferentes en la Edad del Bronce, las primeras escrituras conocidas parecen haber sido logográficas o pictográficas.

      No había escuchado esta palabra “logográficas” me llamó mucho la atención ya que dice que es una unidad de sistema de escritura que representa una palabra, por otro lado “pictográficas” que viene hacer un signo visual icónico, me parece interesante porque significa que en el tiempo pasado aquellas personas tuvieron un ingenio fascinante al poder poner las palabras en tan impresionante representación. Por ejemplo, si miro un logograma con símbolos de líneas horizontales o verticales, en mi punto de vista ya que no es de mi conocimiento diría que son solo líneas. En cambio, para esta edad de bronce significaría que son complementos fonéticos para facilitar la lectura de los signos logográficos.

    2. Se alcanzó un alto grado de complejidad cuando se tuvo que manejar más de cien tipos distintos de fichas, y estaban envueltas con arcilla, con marcas que indicaban el tipo de fichas del interior. Estas marcas pronto reemplazaron a las fichas en sí y los envoltorios de arcilla se constituyeron, como puede demostrarse, en el prototipo de las tablillas de escritura sobre arcilla.[5

      La complejidad que comienza a tener la escritura de a poco, me parece muy interesante, sobre todo el como se modifica para llegar a una mayor simpleza y facilidad de usar, quisiera compararlos con los emoticones que enviamos hoy en día, los cuales pueden llegar a remplazar a las palabras o incluso frases largas, esto simplificado en un solo mensaje. La evolución de la escritura comprende como fue transformándose para poder comunicarnos con mayor facilidad y va más allá con forme pasa el tiempo.

    3. El sistema de escritura sumerio original deriva de un sistema de fichas de arcilla que se utilizaban para representar registros de haberes y bienes. A finales del IV milenio a. C. ya había evolucionado hacia un método de contabilidad en el que se utilizaba un estilete redondeado que se imprimía sobre arcilla flexible con ángulos variables para grabar números. A este sistema se incorporó una escritura pictográfica utilizando un estilete afilado para indicar lo que se estaba contando. La escritura con estilete redondeado y estilete afilado se reemplazó poco a poco hacia el 2700-2500 a. C. por un estilete en forma de cuña (de ahí el término cuneiforme). A partir de cierto momento, la escritura cuneiforme se convirtió en un sistema de escritura de propósito general para los logogramas, las sílabas y los números ampliamente usada en diferentes versiones para varias lenguas antiguas de Oriente Medio y Anatolia. A partir del siglo XXVI a. C., esta escritura se adaptó al idioma acadio y más tarde a otros como el hurrita y el hitita. Otras escrituras similares en apariencia a este sistema son el ugarítico y el antiguo persa. Los escribas mesopotámicos escribían los signos cuneiformes mediante cuñas sobre tablillas casi siempre de arcilla (muy escasamente grabados en metal), que luego se guardaban en una suerte de primitivas bibliotecas, escrupulosamente organizadas, que servían para el aprendizaje de futuros escribas. Estas bibliotecas pertenecían a la escuela de cada ciudad o, a veces, a colecciones particulares.

      En este texto podemos decir que gracias a La escritura cuneiforme, originada en Sumeria, evolucionó desde un sistema de fichas de arcilla hasta convertirse en un sistema de escritura generalizado, adoptado por varias lenguas antiguas. Las tablillas de arcilla con inscripciones cuneiformes eran la principal forma de documentación en la antigüedad. y esta escritura fue muy importante para dar paso a la escritura que conocemos hoy en día.

    4. El texto ofrece una buena introducción al tema del surgimiento de la escritura en la Edad del Bronce. Es importante destacar la diversidad cultural, la naturaleza logográfica o pictográfica de las primeras escrituras y su desarrollo independiente en cada región.

    5. Los escribas mesopotámicos escribían los signos cuneiformes mediante cuñas sobre tablillas casi siempre de arcilla (muy escasamente grabados en metal), que luego se guardaban en una suerte de primitivas bibliotecas, escrupulosamente organizadas, que servían para el aprendizaje de futuros escribas.

      Resaltemos en esta época lo importante que eran los escribas porque sin ellos no se podía transmitir los conocimientos o las futuras generaciones aunque no lo mencione los escribas eran personas muy cultas entrenadas en la lectura y escritura de diversos temas además también se dedicaban a documentar las transiciones financieras realizadas a través de comercio y con el tiempo se convirtieron en parte esencial de la vida en todo el mundo.

    6. Estos sistemas aparecieron al principio del periodo neolítico, ya en el VII milenio a. C. si no antes (Kamyana Mohyla), en pleno Paleolítico Superior. Se ha observado el uso de tales signos lineales de una posible escritura lineal paleolítica no solo en la zona astur-cántabro-aquitana o franco-cantábrica, sino también en cuevas del sur de la península, concretamente en las cuevas de la Pileta y Nerja en Málaga.

      Desde muchisimos años anteriores se puede ver que se uso signos para poder comunicarse ya que se han encontrado en diferentes cuevas, esto significa que de algun modo intentaron comunicarse nuestros antepasados.

    7. Aunque es posible que la escritura egipcia sea un ejemplo de difusionismo transcultural de sus contemporáneos comerciales de Mesopotamia, los egipcios no tomaron prestados los símbolos escritos mesopotámicos. En su lugar, utilizaron su propia iconografía artística.

      Esta lectura nos permite ver como fue la evolución basada en las antiguas maneras de comunicación simbólica. La historia me parece muy interesante, el conocer algunas cosas que no hemos conocido de la historia de las diferentes culturas , sus símbolos y que cada cultura o territorio tenia su forma de escribir a través de sencillos símbolos pero que eran el inicio de de trasmitir la información y que cada cultura plasmaban los símbolos en diferentes cosa y lo que me llamo la atención es de la escritura egipcia es que ellos no tomaron prestados los símbolos de Mesopotamia, sino que ellos utilizaron su propia iconografía artística.

    8. En el antiguo Oriente Próximo, la evolución de la escritura fue un proceso originado por la práctica económica y la necesidad de llevar registros administrativos. La arqueóloga Denise Schmandt-Besserat determinó la conexión entre las «fichas» de arcilla sin categorizar previamente y la primera escritura conocida, el protocuneiforme.[4]​[5]​. En otras regiones, como la antigua China y Mesoamérica, surgieron otras escrituras independientemente. En China, aparece ligada más bien a técnicas de adivinación, por lo que los factores por los cuales surgió la escritura en Oriente Próximo no necesariamente se extrapolan a otros lugares. Centrándonos en la escritura de Mesopotamia, parece que las fichas de arcilla se utilizaban para representar bienes e incluso puede que unidades de tiempo empleado en el trabajo, haciéndose su número y sus tipos cada vez más complejos según avanzaba la civilización.

      Quizá muchos de nosotros nos hemos planteado algunas preguntas del porque de las cosas que actualmente existen, y una de ella es ¿Cómo se originó la escritura? Tal vez pequeñas cositas nos contaron en la escuela o quizá no, lo que se sabe es que esta surgió en la antigüedad y que no surgió en una sola ubicación, sino que fue descubierta por varias civilizaciones antiguas en distintos momentos. La primera es la cuneiforme surgida en Mesopotamia, el sistema de este es un sumerio de fichas de arcilla, originado para trabajar en la parte económica y la necesidad de llevar registros administrativos, en este caso como bien lo menciona la invención de la escritura, nos habla también sobre la representación de bienes, así como también las unidades de tiempo que fueron empleados para el trabajo, convirtiendo su número y sus tipos cada vez más complejos según avanzaba la civilización. La invención de la escritura no solo transformó la vida de las civilizaciones antiguas, sino que también sentó las bases para el mundo moderno, permitiendo la conservación y difusión del conocimiento a lo largo de la historia.

    9. Estan impresionante como la escritura a ido evolucionando a lo largo de los siglos empezando como que la escritura era un misterio pero se ha ido investigando a lo largo del tiempo su historia o origen por lo cual ha dejado de ser un misterio existen varias versiones pero tenemos en cuenta que los primero pueblos en escribir fueron los sumerios de Mesopotamia obteniendo las primeras formas de escritura como logográficas las cuales se basaban en la naturaleza como pictográficos y ideograficos, de igual manera se desarrollado sistemas de escritura precolombiana en mesoamérica para las lenguas indígenas de América las cuales se representan a partir de un sistema fonológico, es más existen escrituras que no tiene mucha explicación de como fueron originadas como la de rongorongo siendo especulada por contener un sistema alfabético por sus signos, más que nada la invención alfabeto es un proceso en la Edad de Hierro porque se va desarrollando y complemetando dando paso a cada uno de los alfabeto de su historia los cuales se van mejorando, por ende la escritura es tan interesante que cada paso es para mejoramiento y compresión de ella, porque gracias ella en la actualidad podemos expresarnos, comprendernos y comunicarnos su origen nos ayuda para mejor compresión de como surgió y nos ayudo para contar las experiencias para llegar a lo de hoy en día.

    10. La lectura me permitió conocer la historia de la escritura de manera cronológica, y como esta ha tenido su evolución al igual que conexión con los diferentes métodos de escritura que se fueron creando partiendo desde la protoescritura, que se representaba a través de gráficos los cuales nos permite realizar una reflexión que todo nace desde querer dejar plasmado algo, para que no sea olvidado, que puede ser una vivencia o un día cotidiano, graficándolo en diferentes materiales como la piedra, arcilla, madera, entre otros. Lo que se conoce como escritura rupestre que cumple un factor fundamental en esta historia, también el ser humano al dejar de ser nómada y formar las primeras civilizaciones, como la famosa Mesopotamia o la Egipcia, se dieron cuenta de que debían llevar un registro de cuentas e información naciendo la escritura cuneiforme, incluso aquí pudimos ver que también ya se dieron los primeros sistemas de educación a través de las primitivas bibliotecas, en donde se deseaba dejar la enseñanza de estas lenguas a las futuras generaciones para que no se extingan. Este desarrollo de la escritura permitió crear el alfabeto, que en las diferentes civilizaciones inicio de manera fonológica motivo por el cual algunos de ellos no han sido descifrados aún como el idioma de la Isla de Pascua, pero también nos da a conocer que gracias a la creación de estos primeros alfabetos se derivaron hacia varios idiomas los cuales se hablan hoy en día.

    11. La escritura ha tenido un impacto profundo en la historia de la humanidad. Ha hecho posible registrar información y comunicarla a través de grandes distancias. También ha jugado un papel fundamental en el desarrollo de la civilización. Explora la evolución de los sistemas de escritura desde los pictogramas hasta los alfabetos. De igual manera describe los diferentes sistemas de escritura que se han desarrollado alrededor del mundo. Los primeros sistemas de escritura eran pictográficos e ideográficos, es decir, representaban objetos o ideas mediante dibujos. Estos sistemas fueron gradualmente reemplazados por sistemas más complejos que podían representar sonidos.

    12. En China, los historiadores han hallado mucha información sobre las primeras dinastías chinas a partir de los documentos escritos que han perdurado. La mayor parte de los escritos de la dinastía shang han llegado a nosotros en forma de huesos o accesorios de bronce.

      Es impresionante como los historiadores han ido encontrando varios tipos de información para saber como fue nuestro pasado y de donde provenimos, también es importante que valoraremos el esfuerzo que estos hacen porque no es fácil tratar con documentos antiguos ni mucho menos con accesorios encontrados, ya que hay la probabilidad de que si hacen mal el procedimiento estos hallazgos puedan dañarse o echarse a perder.

    13. Desde mi punto de vista, es impresionante reconocer lo significativo y poderoso que puede llegar a ser la escritura. A lo largo de su evolución, ha adoptado múltiples formas de interpretación por parte de los seres de aquel entonces. La escritura no tuvo un desarrollo específico como el que conocemos hoy en día (letras o abecedario). Su origen inició con símbolos representativos que promulgaban un significado entendible para aquellos que habitaban ese entorno en aquel tiempo, lo que hoy conocemos como escritura simbólica, que utilizaba símbolos ideográficos. Ejemplos incluyen la escritura Vinča y las Tablas de Tărtăria y Gradeshnitsa. La escritura continuó evolucionando, destacando en:

      Mesopotamia: con fichas de arcilla que evolucionaron a escritura cuneiforme. Egipto: con jeroglíficos, un sistema independiente basado en iconografía. China: con la escritura de Jiahu, similar a huesos oraculares posteriores. Aunque hay más teorías que podría mencionar, el principal objetivo de esta reflexión es comprender la importancia de esta herramienta heredada de nuestros antepasados. La escritura ha evolucionado con el ser humano, permitiendo la transferencia de cultura, conocimiento, pensamiento e ideologías.

    14. La invención del alfabeto no fue un episodio repentino, sino el resultado de todo un largo proceso.

      A partir de lo señalado esta frase a mi parecer resume perfectamente lo que es la historia de la escritura, ya que, para llegar a la misma escritura es como la historia no los relata empezando con símbolos ideográficos y mnemónicos, para luego seguir con su evolución llegar a las Tablas de TartarIa y de Grandeshnitsa, también hay que tener en cuenta que toda está evolución de la escritura llevo un gran tiempo y paso por muchos cambios, y es así como se llega a una creencia es que los primeros pueblos en escribir fueron los sumerios de Mesopotamia. Pero así es como prácticamente todos los sistemas de escritura descienden en última instancia de la escritura china o de los alfabetos semíticos. Por lo cual para mi la escritura se ha visto de manera impresionante en cada uno de los "continentes" debido a que todos formaron sus propios caracteres de escritura, ya que, inclusive en Mesoamérica se utilizó el pictograma o nemotécnico y todo por el interés de compartir información a través de la escritura la cual gracias a todos los cambios es que nosotros en la actualidad también contamos con esto que es la escritura que es una forma increíble de expresarse y compartir experiencias, ciencia entre muchas otras.

    15. Centrándonos en la escritura de Mesopotamia, parece que las fichas de arcilla se utilizaban para representar bienes e incluso puede que unidades de tiempo empleado en el trabajo, haciéndose su número y sus tipos cada vez más complejos según avanzaba la civilización.

      Si bien es cierto la escritura cuneiforme es de Mesopotamia, donde se utilizaban lineas y tipo triángulos o forma de cuñas para representar las letras del abecedario y los números, todo esto era en arcilla. Es muy interesante como cada lugar por así decirlo tenía su propia escritura. Utilizada y creada desde la necesidad podría decirse ya que en el trabajo se necesitan varias anotaciones y valores por lo general. Desde de mi criterio la escritura cuneiforme si es un poco compleja, lo cuento desde mi experiencia porque realicé en arcilla esta escritura.

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    1. uando isto ocorrer, o papel fundamental das escolas tradicionais vai se alterardramaticamente. As escolas irªo focar mais, por exemplo, em oferecer instalações bemcuidadas e com um grande suporte presencial, refeições de alta qualidade e uma variedade deprogramas atléticos, musicais e artísticos para que os estudantes queiram estar ali, além dealavancar o uso educacional da Internet.

      Será que se vai alterar de forma tão drástica numa altura em que tanto se questiona o digital nas escolas? Em qualquer caso, os autores apresentam uma perspetiva interessante sobre o futuro das escolas tradicionais, mas é fundamental olhar para os aspetos positivos e negativos que decorrem desta mudança e considerar a forma como ela será feita. As escolas precisam se adaptar às novas realidades, mas sem perder de vista seu papel fundamental na formação de cidadãos críticos, reflexivos e preparados para os desafios do mundo atual, ou seja, literatos.

    2. Sala de Aula Invertida

      Esquema da modalidade de ensino em Sala de Aula Invertida

      A flipped classroom is a widely adopted version of blended learning, in this method using which In this method students are introduced to a portion in advance, and in the classroom, they are made to discuss the topic and clarify doubts with the support of teachers and peers. Flip Class-Based Group Quiz is also an effective method through which active learning can be implemented

      Tenho tido alguma dificuldade em motivar os alunos para seguir esta modalidade de ensino. Não estão familiarizados, e penso que eu teria de melhorar muito a interface destinada à aprendizagem prévia à sessão presencial. Terei de melhorar essa componente, e os alunos terão de se ir habituando a esta modalidade, não ficando, passivamente, à espera que o professor "debite" o conteúdos.

    3. Rotaçªo porEstações

      Esquema da modalidade de ensino de Rotação por Estações

      No modelo de rotação de estações, os alunos alternam entre aprender com um professor em sala de aula física, aprender online e envolver-se em projetos de grupo. Penso que já é relativamente comum, embora a componente online não seja, muitas vezes, incorporada de modo formal.

      Ao implementar este modelo, um conjunto de alunos poderá receber orientação de um professor em sala de aula, enquanto outros conjuntos de alunos poderão definir o ritmo da sua própria aprendizagem. Esta modalidade é-me menos familiar, visto que, em geral, nos cursos em que leciono, os alunos, forçosamente, seguem o mesmo calendário, e a mesma sucessão de tópicos.

      A rotação entre estações geralmente é feita dentro de um curso ou disciplina, seguindo um horário fixo ou de acordo com as instruções do professor.

      Esta modalidade inclui, pelo menos, uma estação para aprendizagem on-line, as outras podendo ser projetos em grupo, palestras em grupo ou atividades individuais. Neste âmbito, num curso de pós-graduação em ecoturismo, penso que seguimos esta modalidade, incluindo seminários, sala da aulas assíncrona sob a forma de fórum de discussão, e atividades colaborativas entre os alunos, no sentido de elaborarem um guião para uma atividade de turismo de natureza.

    4. Rotaçªo Individual

      Encontrei esta definição.

      The Individual Rotation model allows students to rotate through stations, but on individual schedules set by a teacher or software algorithm. Unlike other rotation models, students do not necessarily rotate to every station; they rotate only to the activities scheduled on their playlists.

      Parece-me algo mais talhado para alunos de um mestrado ou doutoramento, em que já é comum que rodem por um certo número de atividades ou laboratórios, selecionando os que sejam mais pertinentes para o seu trabalho ou investigação futura. Por exemplo, um aluno que pretenda fazer investigação em dendroclimatologia (estudo dos anéis de crescimento das árvores em função do clima), certamente que terá vantagem em rodar por laboratórios relacionados com climatologia, anatomia vegetal e modelação ecológica, e talvez menos interesse em passar por um laboratório de genética populacional.

    5. Inovação Disruptiva

      Olá a todos, Algumas ideias sobre inovação disruptiva em educação, baseadas em diferentes perspectivas.

      Uma empresa prestadora de serviços na área. (https://www.chetu.com/blogs/e-learn/disruptive-technology-in-education.php) São dados exemplos de metodologias de aprendizagem disruptiva. 1) Aprendizagem online É uma metodologia com crescente popularidade. Permite que os alunos aprendam a ritmos diferentes e a incorporação de variadas tecnologias de suporte ao modelo pedagógico a desenvolver. É possível a produção facilitada de relatórios sobre os progresso de cada aluno.

      2) Colaboração baseada em chat/discussão Permite uma maior interação entre os colegas ou os alunos, podendo funcionar de modo síncrono ou assíncrono. Facilitam a realização de reuniões e o ensino colaborativo ou cooperativo em rede.

      3) Aprendizagem guiada por IA O sistema pode monitorizar o progresso dos alunos, indicando onde deverá haver um apoio reforçado. permitindo um estudo mais personalizado.

      4) Realidade Virtual e Aumentada As tecnologias VR e AR estão agora a entrar na educação. No entanto, a realidade virtual proporcionará uma experiência imersiva de diferentes lugares do mundo ou momentos da história na sala de aula. No entanto, exigirá uma ligação muito próxima entre a inovação tecnológica e o sistema educativo.

      Uma revista especializada em assuntos digitais https://www.digitalfirstmagazine.com/revolutionizing-education-through-disruptive-technologies/

      Segundo o autor, embora as tecnologias disruptivas anunciem possibilidades transformadoras, a maioria das escolas internacionais permanece enraizada no modelo tradicional dependente do professor, apoiando-se fortemente nas proezas individuais dos educadores. No entanto, este modelo está a perder rapidamente relevância face à rápida evolução da tecnologia.

      O novo modelo aproveita o potencial das plataformas digitais de aprendizagem e adota metodologias pedagógicas inovadoras. Ainda segundo ao autor: "Sem uma adoção imediata desta mudança de paradigma, as instituições educativas correm o risco de estagnação. As tecnologias disruptivas, combinadas com uma abordagem visionária à educação, estão a remodelar o panorama educativo. Aqueles que aproveitarem esta oportunidade estarão preparados para liderar a vanguarda numa nova era de aprendizagem."

    6. Inovações sustentadas

      Considero que os sub-modelos do Modelo de Rotação (referidos mais à frente neste documento, em páginas que não estão disponíveis nesta atividade) podem ser uma boa base para uma inovação sustentada (no sentido de poder ter diferentes níveis de intensidade da componente online, o que poderá ser feito de forma progressiva pelos professores e pelas instituições). Os sub-modelos do Modelo de Rotação estão detalhados neste link. A apresentação da informação foi desenvolvida com recurso ao Gamma, uma ferramenta de IA.

      Moreira, J. A. & Horta, M. J. (2020). Educação e Ambientes Híbridos de Aprendizagem: um Processo de Inovação Sustentada. Revista UFG, vol. 20: e66027, 1-29.

    7. O ensino híbrido permite que esses estudantes aprendam online ao mesmo tempo em que sebeneficiam da supervisªo física e, em muitos casos, instruçªo presencial

      Esta passagem faz-me lembrar os espaços flexíveis de aprendizagem, que facilitam o ensino híbrido. Uma síntese da informação retirada da brochura "Rethinking teaching and learning - Future Classroom Lab", da European Schoolnet, está disponível neste link. A apresentação da informação foi desenvolvida com recurso ao Gamma, uma ferramenta de IA.

    8. Em muitas escolas, o ensino híbrido está emergindo como uma inovaçªo sustentada em relaçªo àsala de aula tradicional.

      Leituras que destaco sobre ambientes híbridos de aprendizagem: "Mais do que a integração de ambientes físicos e virtuais de aprendizagem, a educação híbrida deve afirmar-se como um conceito de educação total caracterizado pelo uso de soluções combinadas, envolvendo a interação entre diferentes modalidades, abordagens pedagógicas e recursos tecnológicos. [...] Com efeito, em tempos de profundas transformações, de um mundo estruturado de uma forma complexa onde coabitam o analógico e o digital, o real e o virtual, o humano e a máquina, o offline e o online, do reconhecimento de que vivemos numa nova ordem social, cultural, económica, política e até ética e da vertiginosa evolução das tecnologias digitais, deparamo-nos com a necessidade de repensar o paradigma educacional onde a comunicação possa assumir um papel fulcral unindo e aproximando atores humanos e não-humanos. Esta centralidade do processo comunicacional, e não do professor, do aluno ou da tecnologia, remetem para variáveis comunicacionais significativas como a interação, ligação, conexão e participação, essenciais à relação pedagógica. [...] Implementar modelos de educação híbrida, não como um processo de disrupção pura, mas como um processo de inovação sustentada, permitirá avançar para a ideia de uma comunidade educativa unida nos seus propósitos de mudança. [...] Nesta perspetiva, e apesar das múltiplas definições que existem na literatura, o termo Blended Learning é entendido como integrante desta realidade híbrida e como a combinação de diferentes ambientes de aprendizagem, quer na geografia física, quer virtual."

      Moreira, J. A. & Horta, M. J. (2020). Educação e Ambientes Híbridos de Aprendizagem: um Processo de Inovação Sustentada. Revista UFG, vol. 20: e66027, 1-29.

    9. Uma característica importante é que, em mercados onde nªo há nªo-consumidores, umasoluçªo híbrida é a única opçªo viável para uma nova tecnologia cujo desempenho é inferiorà tecnologia anterior, de acordo com a definiçªo original de desempenho. Isto significaque as inovações híbridas tendem a dominar em mercados de consumo pleno, em vez dasdisrupções puras

      A predominância de soluções híbridas nos mercados onde não há consumidores torna-se uma abordagem prática e estratégica. Em mercados de consumo absoluto, em que todos os potenciais consumidores já estão utilizam uma tecnologia existente, introduzir uma nova tecnologia que apresenta um desempenho inferior àquele estabelecido é, sem dúvida, um desafio.

      Nesse contexto, as soluções híbridas representam uma ponte crucial para a adoção de novas tecnologias.

      A integração de tecnologias distintas pode ser complexa e requer um grande investimento inicial em pesquisa e desenvolvimento. Além disso, é possível que a solução híbrida não seja tão eficiente quanto a tecnologia existente, o que pode causar uma percepção de valor limitada.

    1. O-S-O-R (Orientation-Stimulus-Orientation-Response) model

      The O-S-O-R model is a framework in communication research that explains how individuals' orientations (O) influence their responses to stimuli (S), which in turn affect their subsequent orientations and responses (R).

    Annotators

    1. O objetivo do artigo não está explicitamente delimitado no texto, porém é possível inferir que este consiste em apresentar os procedimentos, as escolhas metodológicas e os resultados oriundos do projeto de elaboração da Gramática Pedagógica Haliti-Paresi. Por causa da falta de uma delimitação mais precisa é difícil concluir se os autores alcançaram ou não o(s) objetivo(s) do artigo. É preciso ressaltar, entretanto, que o objetivo do projeto que era a elaboração de uma gramática pedagógica monolíngue em Parese-Haliti foi cumprido pela equipe de pesquisadores envolvidos. Um dos pontos fortes da metodologia empregada no desenvolvimento da GP é o uso de contextos comunicativos reais para apresentar as estruturas gramaticais estudadas nas unidades, além da não utilização de metalinguagem ou termos técnicos de Linguística para a explicação dos usos das estruturas, o que amplia as possibilidades de uso do material por parte de diferentes professores indígenas. Soma-se a isso o fato do material ser produzido na própria língua indígena e a participação de vários membros da comunidade no projeto, caracterizando assim uma ação colaborativa entre os pesquisadores e a comunidade indígena Paresi-Haliti. Um ponto fraco do artigo é que os autores não conseguem fazer uma estreita relação entre o referencial teórico citado (AMARAL 2020; VANPATEEN, 2007; SHARWOOD SMITH, 1993; COSTA, 2021; GOMES, 2019) e as etapas de desenvolvimento da gramática em questão; nem também com as escolhas metodológicas que guiaram as decisões da equipe para a confecção do produto final. Faltou discutir melhor a teoria dos autores citados e como elas dialogaram ou contribuíram com a elaboração do material didático proposto. As etapas metodológicas poderiam ser descritas com mais riquezas de detalhes, evidenciando os fatores que embasaram as escolhas da equipe até a chegada da versão final.

      Angela Chagas

      O artigo nos traz uma contribuição significativa para a área da educação escolar em contextos indígenas, observando o desenvolvimento de materiais didáticos específicos para o ensino da língua Haliti-Paresi. O projeto tem uma característica de projeto-ação, centrado na colaboração entre linguistas e professores indígenas, desenvolvido dentro das escolas indígenas, medidas acertadas que garantem um bom resultado. O processo colaborativo não garante apenas a adequação dos materiais didáticos ao contexto linguístico e cultural específico da língua Haliti-Paresi, mas promove um protagonismo dos povos indígenas na preservação e revitalização da língua e cultura. O artigo acentua a importância da produção de materiais didáticos produzindo em colaboração com os professores indígenas e que irão servir não somente como subsídios para o ensino da língua, mas também como meio de fortalecer a cultura escrita e, por extensão, a própria língua oral. Os resultados do projeto são apresentados de forma clara e refletem as experiências, dificuldades e expectativas relacionadas à implementação da gramática. O artigo traz um relato de experiência importante para o entendimento das condições práticas e dos desafios enfrentados no contexto educacional indígena. A produção de uma gramática pedagógica que integra aspectos da cultura oral nas práticas de ensino se torna mais representativa da realidade linguística e cultural do povo Haliti-Paresi e se torna muito mais acessível para os estudantes indígenas. O artigo descreve a experiência de um projeto que oferece um modelo de material didático que é funcional e culturalmente relevante.

      Gelsama Mara Santos

      O relato aborda a importância do desenvolvimento de materiais didáticos em línguas indígenas, destacando o papel crucial que estes desempenham no fortalecimento da língua e da cultura escrita do Paresi. O foco recai sobre a Gramática Pedagógica, um recurso destinado a auxiliar professores no ensino da língua indígena, ressaltando a necessidade de colaboração entre linguistas e professores pesquisadores nativos. O estudo apresenta os resultados do subprojeto da Gramática Haliti-Paresi, parte de um projeto de pesquisa mais amplo voltado para a salvaguarda do patrimônio linguístico e cultural dos povos indígenas. São discutidas as experiências, dificuldades e expectativas encontradas durante a implementação desse material didático, enfatizando a importância do trabalho colaborativo e o protagonismo dos povos indígenas. Como principais pontos fortes, pontuamos: (i) o artigo destaca a relevância e a necessidade de desenvolvimento de materiais didáticos em línguas indígenas para fortalecer tanto a língua quanto a cultura desses povos; (ii) a abordagem colaborativa entre linguistas e professores indígenas mostra-se consolidada como mais eficiente abordagem, representando um avanço significativo na valorização e no reconhecimento do conhecimento tradicional; (iii) a discussão sobre a adaptação da metodologia às especificidades culturais e educacionais dos povos indígenas demonstra sensibilidade e compromisso com a promoção de uma educação inclusiva e contextualizada, bem como esmero técnico com os processos envolvidos. Como ponto que sugerimos que seja melhor explorado em publicações futuras, apontamos que embora o artigo mencione algumas dificuldades enfrentadas na implementação do material didático, seria enriquecedor ter uma análise mais aprofundada das estratégias utilizadas para superar esses desafios. Em relação ao alcance dos objetivos e conclusões do relato, consideramos que os autores conseguiram claramente delinear os objetivos do estudo e fornecer uma visão geral abrangente do contexto, métodos e resultados. A metodologia utilizada (Amaral 2020; Rubim 2016) destaca-se pelo viés prático e objetivo: evitar metalinguagens desnecessárias e valorizar a compreensão linguística do falante. Quanto ao impacto e à utilidade, o trabalho tem o potencial de promover debates interessantes no campo da linguística e da educação escolar indígena, fornecendo insights valiosos sobre o desenvolvimento de materiais didáticos culturalmente sensíveis. A metodologia apresentada pode servir como um modelo para futuros projetos de salvaguarda do patrimônio linguístico e cultural de povos indígenas, contribuindo para uma abordagem mais inclusiva e contextualizada no ensino. Como contexto adicional, sugerimos que os autores considerem a inclusão de recomendações práticas para a implementação eficaz do material didático em ambientes escolares indígenas.

      Glauber Romling

      O manuscrito em revisão aborda a produção de gramáticas pedagógicas para línguas indígenas, com foco específico na língua Haliti-Paresi. Os autores têm como objetivo destacar a importância desses materiais no reforço da educação linguística e na preservação cultural entre as comunidades indígenas, dentro do contexto mais amplo do projeto "Salvaguarda do Patrimônio Linguístico e Cultural de Povos Indígenas Transfronteiriços e de Recente Contato na Região Amazônica". As principais qualidades do manuscrito residem na clara articulação da abordagem colaborativa entre linguistas e falantes nativos, e na ênfase na integração de elementos culturais nas metodologias de ensino. Além disso, a descrição detalhada do processo de pesquisa e a apresentação dos resultados contribuem para a robustez do artigo. Os autores destacam de forma eficaz o potencial das gramáticas pedagógicas para aprimorar a educação linguística e os esforços de revitalização cultural entre populações indígenas. No entanto, algumas áreas para melhoria incluem uma maior elaboração sobre os desafios específicos enfrentados durante o projeto e uma exploração mais profunda das implicações dos resultados para políticas educacionais e linguísticas mais amplas. Além disso, expandir a seção de metodologia para fornecer mais insights sobre o desenho da pesquisa e o processo de coleta de dados poderia melhorar a clareza e a reprodutibilidade do manuscrito. No geral, o manuscrito oferece insights valiosos sobre a produção de gramáticas pedagógicas para línguas indígenas e seu potencial impacto na educação linguística e na preservação cultural. Ele representa uma contribuição significativa para o campo e provavelmente despertará interesse em uma audiência diversificada, incluindo linguistas, educadores, formuladores de políticas e comunidades indígenas.

      Amanda da Costa Carvalho

    1. ensejara

      1. transitivo direto e bitransitivo dar ensejo a, apresentar a oportunidade para; ser a causa ou o motivo de; possibilitar, justificar. "o dia de verão ensejou(-lhes) um piquenique" 2. transitivo direto aguardar a oportunidade de; almejar. "todos ensejavam que a festa começasse"

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      Response to Reviewer 1


      __Glycosaminoglycan (GAG)-binding proteins regulating essential processes such as cell growth and migration are essential for cell homeostasis. It is reported that the GAG has the ability to bind to Herpin sulfate. As both GAGs and the LPS lipid A disaccharide core of gram-negative bacteria contain negatively charged disaccharide units, the researchers proposed that heparin-binding peptides might have cryptic antimicrobial peptide motifs. To prove the hypothesis, they have synthesized five candidates [HBP1-5], which showed a binding affinity towards heparin and LPS binding. By using various methods, they showed that these molecules have antimicrobial activity. The key finding in this study is the finding of the CPC domain, where C is a cationic amino acid and P is a polar amino acid. __

      Major comments

      1. __ Even though the Authors propose here that CPC' clip motif is needed for antimicrobial activity. However, various studies have demonstrated that the mere presence of cationic amino or hydrophobic amino acids does not give the activity, the location of these amino acids at the strategic position is critically needed. The major issue in this work, the authors have not presented, whether there was a single CPC motif or multiple in the 5 peptides they have synthesized. Further, they need to demonstrate how are the charged and hydrophobic amino acids distributed in the peptides. these things will clearly explain the difference in the activity as well spectrum of the peptides. The authors should make an extra figure or add information highlighting this unique characteristic for better understanding to the reader.__

      We thank the reviewer for his/her comments and suggestions. We concur that the distribution of amino acids is crucial for the antimicrobial activity of the peptides and their ability to bind heparin. We also agree with the suggestion of illustrating the location of the CPC' motifs of HBPs in the context of the parental proteins and have accordingly done so in the new Supplementary Figure 1. In all cases, only one CPC' motif was identified in the antimicrobial region, as highlighted in the figure, and the inter-residue distances measured are consistent with the CPC' motif definition. Thus, we demonstrate that a CPC' motif exists in all five HBPs, which explains how they recognize and bind heparin.

      To illustrate the distribution of charged and hydrophobic amino acids in HBPs, we have also prepared new Supplementary Figure 2, displaying electrostatic potentials in the predicted HBP structures, and showing how the distribution of charged residues creates hydrophobic and cationic patches on the surface of the peptides. Our analysis reveals cationic patches to be surrounded by hydrophobic residues, which may explain the ability of the peptides to disrupt membranes and exert antimicrobial activity.

      __ It is strange to observe that there are quite a number of reports showing that the peptides derived from the Herprin binding proteins have antimicrobial activity, but no one has reported their efficacy in the in vivo mouse model. if possible, the authors could add their observations if in vivo studies were done. or as a future line of study.__

      We thank the reviewer for his/her comment on the observation of antimicrobial activity in peptides derived from heparin-binding proteins. Indeed, a few such studies have appeared in the literature, some with moderate success [1]. It is possible that a lack of understanding on how to identify heparin-binding regions in proteins and AMPs underlies their relative paucity. In this context, we believe our results will spur further efforts, specifically by providing a rationale on how to identify CPC' motifs hence heparin-binding regions in protein sequences.

      Regarding the suggestion of assessing the in vivo efficacy of HBPs, we would agree that it would be helpful for better understanding their potential therapeutic applications. However, we feel that such experiments are beyond the scope of our manuscript, which offers ample, compelling in vitro and in silico evidence of how heparin-binding proteins can be a source of AMPs. We have done this by showing that CPC' motifs embedded in such proteins can be unveiled, accurately defined in structural terms, and experimentally shown to possess antimicrobial activity. Furthermore, we have shown that heparin binding correlates with LPS binding, allowing us to propose a mechanistic explanation for how heparin binding can be related to antimicrobial activity.

      Translating these results to animal models is possibly premature at this stage as, from a classical medicinal chemistry perspective, it would require previous structural elaboration in terms of, e.g., optimized serum half-life or serum protein binding, both of which can modulate activity in in vivo studies regardless of heparin affinity or bactericidal activity per se. Ongoing work in our laboratories is focused in these directions and will be reported in due time.

      *Referees cross-commenting**

      Minor comments

      1. __ The presence of Cryptic antimicrobial domain in various heparin-binding proteins like laminin isoforms, von Willebrand factor, vitronectin, protein C inhibitor, matrix glycoproteins thrombospondin, proline arginine-rich end leucine-rich repeat protein and fibronectin, have been reported previous. It is not clear why the authors did not refer to that work. The authors should refer to the works. (same as reviewer 3)__

      We were aware of other prior studies on heparin-binding proteins and did indeed cite some of them, though not exhaustively for conciseness' sake. However, as encouraged by reviewers 1 and 3 we have cited the following studies:

      Malmström E, Mörgelin M, Malmsten M, Johansson L, Norrby-Teglund A, Shannon O, Schmidtchen A, Meijers JC, Herwald H. Protein C inhibitor--a novel antimicrobial agent. PLoS Pathog. 2009 Dec;5(12):e1000698. doi: 10.1371/journal.ppat.1000698. Epub 2009 Dec 18. PMID: 20019810; PMCID: PMC2788422.

      Ishihara, J., Ishihara, A., Fukunaga, K. et al. Laminin heparin-binding peptides bind to several growth factors and enhance diabetic wound healing. Nat Commun 9, 2163 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-04525-w

      Chillakuri Chandramouli R, Jones Céline and Mardon Helen J(2010), Heparin binding domain in vitronectin is required for oligomerization and thus enhances integrin mediated cell adhesion and spreading, FEBS Letters, 584, doi: 10.1016/j.febslet.2010.06.023

      Papareddy P, Kasetty G, Kalle M, Bhongir RK, Mörgelin M, Schmidtchen A, Malmsten M. NLF20: an antimicrobial peptide with therapeutic potential against invasive Pseudomonas aeruginosa infection. J Antimicrob Chemother. 2016 Jan;71(1):170-80. doi: 10.1093/jac/dkv322. Epub 2015 Oct 26. PMID: 26503666.

      All the earlier studies related to the antimicrobial activity of the peptides derived from the Heparin-binding protein reported a consensus Cardin and Weintraub motifs i.e, XBBBXXBX or XBBXBX, where X represents hydrophobic or uncharged amino acids, and B represents basic amino acids. However, in this work, the researchers report about the presence of the new CPC motif. So, this is unique and a novelty in the study.

      We thank the reviewers for these observations. Indeed, our quest to unveil CPC' motifs in antimicrobial regions of heparin-binding proteins is the key point of our investigation, and what distinguishes it from previous studies on consensus motifs such as XBBBXXBX or XBBXBX. We believe our definition of CPC' motifs in simple, structure-based, and experimentally verifiable terms is not only a significant departure but also a step forward from earlier views, highlighting the importance of a structural perspective in defining heparin-binding regions. In point of fact, we show that our peptides, even without consensus Cardin-Weintraub motifs, bind heparin with high affinity. The presence of the CPC' motif is crucial for such binding, as well as for LPS binding, and the new experiments performed at editor/reviewer's request, where the CPC motif in HBP5 is abolished, with predictable impact, fully support our view, see new section "Insights into the CPC' motif of HBP-5 and its implication on the antibacterial mechanism" and new Table 3 in the revised manuscript.

      __ Even though the researchers report on the role of the CPC motif in the antimicrobial activity and binding to the heprin, the authors did not show any data or draw the conclusions related to the CPC domain when it comes to differences in the activity. this is the weakness of the manuscript. (same as reviewer 2)__

      We welcome the reviewer's observation. To address it, we made and tested three HBP-5 mutants aimed at showing how alterations in the CPC' motif might influence interaction with heparin and LPS, as well as antimicrobial properties. The first two mutants involved replacing positively charged R10 and R14 residues with glutamine, similar in size and polarity but uncharged. As shown in the new section "Insights into the CPC' motif of HBP-5 and its implication on the antibacterial mechanism" and on the new Table 3 of the revised manuscript, the changes reduced heparin binding, i.e., shorter retention times on affinity chromatography, as well as LPS binding, i.e., a decrease in EC50 in the cadaverine assay (Table 3). The modifications had a lesser impact on antimicrobial activity, most likely due to the low resolution of MIC assays.

      In a further step to assess the effect of the CPC' motif on antimicrobial activity, we deleted it in full by replacing residues H9, R10 and R14 of HBP-5 by alanine. As expected, this DCPC' peptide showed a sharp reduction in both heparin and LPS binding (Table 3) and, most importantly, a significant and asymmetric change in antimicrobial activity, with substantial impact on Gram-negatives yet practically no effect on Gram-positives, suggesting that LPS plays a key role in this selective response. Altogether, these observations align with our hypothesis that heparin-binding proteins might exploit their intrinsic affinity for heparin as an opportunity to developing antimicrobial properties by leveraging structural similarities between glycosaminoglycans and LPS.

      __ It is strange to observe that there are quite a number of reports showing that the peptides derived from the Herprin (sic) binding proteins have antimicrobial activity, but no one has reported their efficacy in the in vivo mouse model. if possible, the authors could add their observations if in vivo studies were done. or as a future line of study. (Same as reviewer 2)__

      We would kindly direct attention to #2 in the response to reviewer 1 above.

      __ There are more than 20 different AMP databases or prediction software. however, not all of them are 100 % current, their success rate varies from 30-50% only. It needs to be investigated if adding this search in the hit peptides might increase the success rate of the extra in silico-based AMPs prediction software.__

      If we understand the question correctly, the reviewer wonders whether including a CPC' motif predictor would increase the accuracy of AMP search algorithms. In our view, this strategy has two main limitations to be considered: (i) locating a CPC' motif in a peptide sequence typically requires a known 3D structure. Unfortunately, this is not always the case, and for proteins lacking reliable 3D data it can be a challenging and resource-intensive process; (ii) while CPC' motifs may predispose proteins to evolve antimicrobial properties, it is unclear if this is a required feature for all AMPs. Imposing the presence of a CPC' motif may not be applicable to all AMPs, although it might help identifying peptides with specific activity against gram-negative strains.

      In summary, while the query of including a CPC' motif search tool in AMP predictors is intriguing and worthy of exploration for its potential bearing on antimicrobial research, it is technically complicated and beyond the scope of our manuscript.

      __Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)): __

      __All the earlier studies related to the antimicrobial activity of the peptides derived from the Heparin-binding protein reported a consensus Cardin and Weintraub motifs i.e, XBBBXXBX or XBBXBX, where X represents hydrophobic or uncharged amino acids, and B represents basic amino acids. However, in this work, the researchers report about the presence of the new CPC motif. So this is unique and a novelty in the study. __

      Even though the researchers report on the role of the CPC motif in the antimicrobial activity and binding to the heparin, the authors did not show any data or draw conclusions related to the CPC domain when it comes to differences in the activity. This is the weakness of the manuscript.

      We would direct reviewer's attention to #1 in the Referee's cross-commenting section above.


      Response to Reviewer 2


      This is a very nice paper by the Andreu and Torrent groups that report the antimicrobial and heparin-binding of several encrypted peptides. Overall, this study presents an intriguing exploration into the potential dual functionality of glycosaminoglycan (GAG)-binding proteins, specifically heparin-binding proteins (HBPs), in recognizing lipopolysaccharide (LPS) and exhibiting antimicrobial properties. The findings, particularly the identification and characterization of novel encrypted peptides, such as HBP-5, are promising and contribute to our understanding of the intricate interplay between GAG-binding proteins and immunity. The data provided and methodology are thorough and well described. In sum, this is a very nice work. Please see below my minor comments.


      Minor comments:

      1. __ Fig. 1 legend does not show antimicrobial activity. Please remove from the figure legend title.__

      As pointed out by the reviewer, the legend was incorrect and has been corrected accordingly and now reads "Figure 1. Structural and bioinformatics analysis of HBPs".

      __ Discussion section: the authors should expand this section a bit to discuss recent work in the encrypted/cryptic peptide area. There are some recent relevant papers published in the past 3 years that should be discussed.__

      We agree with the reviewer's suggestion to expand the discussion section to address recent work in the field of encrypted/cryptic peptides. We have carefully reviewed the recent literature and added several references in this topic:

      Torres MDT, Melo MCR, Flowers L, Crescenzi O, Notomista E, de la Fuente-Nunez C. Mining for encrypted peptide antibiotics in the human proteome. Nat Biomed Eng. 2022 Jan;6(1):67-75. doi: 10.1038/s41551-021-00801-1. Epub 2021 Nov 4. Erratum in: Nat Biomed Eng. 2022 Dec;6(12):1451. PMID: 34737399.

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      Santos MFDS, Freitas CS, Verissimo da Costa GC, Pereira PR, Paschoalin VMF. Identification of Antibacterial Peptide Candidates Encrypted in Stress-Related and Metabolic Saccharomyces cerevisiae Proteins. Pharmaceuticals (Basel). 2022 Jan 28;15(2):163. doi: 10.3390/ph15020163. PMID: 35215278; PMCID: PMC8877035.

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      Boaro A, Ageitos L, Torres MT, Blasco EB, Oztekin S, de la Fuente-Nunez C. Structure-function-guided design of synthetic peptides with anti-infective activity derived from wasp venom. Cell Rep Phys Sci. 2023 Jul 19;4(7):101459. doi: 10.1016/j.xcrp.2023.101459. PMID: 38239869; PMCID: PMC10795512.

      __ References provided are a bit outdated and do not accurately reflect the latest in the field (see comment above).__

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. Older references were updated as suggested.

      __ Gram should be capitalized throughout the text.__

      Gram has been capitalized as suggested by the reviewer.

      __ Can the authors comment on the potential translatability of HBP-5? Please also comment on the potential advantages of having peptides that 1) bind to heparin; and 2) kill bacteria.__

      We appreciate the reviewer's interest in the potential of HBP-5. Indeed, we believe it has promise for clinical applications due to its unique attributes, but further studies, including in vivo experiments and pharmacokinetic assessments, are needed to fully evaluate its potential. The advantages of peptides that bind to heparin and kill bacteria include targeted delivery or localization of therapeutic agents, enhanced efficacy, and minimized off-target effects. HBP-5's ability to perturb outer membrane LPS, a crucial aspect of its antibacterial activity, makes it a promising approach to combat Gram-negative bacterial infections, which are often challenging to treat. By disrupting the outer membrane integrity, HBP-5 may also enhance the susceptibility of Gram-negative bacteria to other antimicrobial agents or host immune responses, underscoring its translational potential for treating bacterial infections.

      __ More details on the computational tools and methods used to mine the peptides are needed.__

      We have updated the Methods section to provide more details on the computational tools used for defining AMPs. Briefly, from the library of heparin-binding proteins obtained from previous studies [2] and AMP scanning for all these proteins was performed using the AMPA tool. The predicted antibacterial segments were located in the 3D structure of their respective proteins. Then, the CPC' motifs were searched in each segment following the criteria previously reported in [3, 4]. The motif involves two cationic residues (Arg or Lys) and a polar residue (preferentially Asn, Gln, Thr, Tyr or Ser), with fairly conserved distances between the carbons and the side chain center of gravity, defining a clip-like structure where heparin would be lodged. This structural motif is highly conserved and can be found in many proteins with reported heparin binding capacity. Finally, for all these regions, docking with a heparin disaccharide was performed using AutoDock Vina to evaluate the potential binding energy.



      Response to Reviewer 3


      __Summary: This manuscript has identified and investigated antimicrobial peptides from GAG binding proteins. Authors hypothesized that due to physiochemical similarity between GAG and LPS, fragments of GAG binding proteins might exert antimicrobial activity particularly against G- bacteria. Authors have identified few such AMPs that demonstrate LPS binding and displayed antibacterial activity. They have also solved NMR structure of the potent peptide and mode of action. __

      Major comments: AMPs are promising molecules that can serve as lead for the development of therapeutics against MDR bacteria. In particular, currently therapeutic options to treat MDR Gram negative pathogens are limited. The current study is interesting and provides new non-toxic AMPs. Conclusions drawn from the works are largely valid. However, authors should address following comments:

      1. __ The design and characterization of the peptide YI12WF is not described. Previous studies had shown design of β-boomerang peptides (Bhattacharjya and coworkers) that target LPS.__

      We thank the reviewer for this comment. YI12WF (YVLWKRKRFIFI-amide) has been previously reported [4, 5] and shown to bind LPS with high affinity. YI12WF also contains a CPC' motif that, if deleted, reduces heparin binding [4]. References have been added in the text.

      __ Mutations or substitution of the key residues peptide 5 might improve the novelty of the work.__

      We thank the reviewer for this comment and agree that targeted substitutions in HBP-5 might shed light on the importance of the CPC' motif. As this point was also raised by reviewer 1, we would direct the reviewer's attention to #2 in the *Referees cross-commenting** section above.

      __ How these peptides disrupt LPS permeability is not investigated. As LPS is the major target.__

      We thank the reviewer for this suggestion and have accordingly evaluated the outer membrane (OM) permeability of the peptides by the 1-N-phenyl-naphthylamine (NPN) assay, a widely used method to assess OM integrity in Gram-negative bacteria. NPN is typically unable to cross the intact outer membrane; however, when the membrane is damaged or disrupted, it can penetrate and interact with lipids and proteins inside the cell, leading to an increase in fluorescence which is directly correlated with the degree of OM permeability and serves as an indicator of membrane damage.

      Our results, illustrated in the new Figure 2D, show that all peptides are able to disrupt the OM of Gram-negative bacteria comparably to the LL-37 positive control, except for HBP2. Notably, HBP-5 exhibits the highest activity against OM, consistent with findings elsewhere in the manuscript and altogether confirming the ability of HBPs to bind to and disrupt the LPS structure.

      __ Are the D-enantiomers of the peptides active against bacteria?__

      We tested the antibacterial activity of the D-enantiomer of HBP5 (dHBP-and 5) and found it to be even higher than that of all-L HBP-5 against both Gram-negative and -positive bacteria, probably due to increased proteolytic stability as found in many AMP studies [6, 7]. As for LPS and heparin affinity, L- and D-HBP-5 behaved similarly (Table R1). As expected, the CD signatures of L- and D-HBP-5 were mirror images (Figure R1). These results suggest that the conformation of the CPC' motif is preserved in dHBP5, in tune with all previous results.

      Antibacterial Activity

      ID

      E. Coli

      P. Aeruginosa

      A. Baumannii

      S. Aureus

      E. Faecium

      L. monocytognes

      HPB-5

      0.4

      0.8

      0.2

      6.3

      25

      1.6

      dHBP-5

      0.1

      0.2

      0.2

      1.6

      0.4

      0.2



      Binding Affinity


      LPS (EC50, µM)

      Heparin (% Elution buffer)

      HPB-5

      0.9 {plus minus} 0.7

      98.0

      dHBP-5

      1.1 {plus minus} 0.8

      97.2

      Table R1. Antimicrobial activity of HBP-5 and dHBP-5









      Figure R1. CD spectra of HBP-5 (red line) and dHBP-5 (green line) in LPS (left panel) and heparin (right panel).


      __ 3D structure of peptide 5 is solved in DPC micelle which is a mimic for eukaryotic cells. Authors should attempt to determine structure in LPS as shown in several recent studies with potent AMPs thanatin, MSI etc.__

      We appreciate the suggestion and have indeed attempted to obtain NMR spectra of HBP-5 in LPS micelles. However, we've been hindered by peptide precipitation and, despite considerable efforts, have not been able to obtain satisfactory results thus far. In contrast, we have succeeded in obtaining CD spectra of HBP5 in LPS micelles, showing an a-helix conformation similar to the one in SDS micelles, hence suggesting similar conformation in both environments.

      Minor comments: There are examples of AMPs derived from human proteins. Authors should highlight such works.

      Other studies have been cited according to the reviewers' comments:

      Malmström E, Mörgelin M, Malmsten M, Johansson L, Norrby-Teglund A, Shannon O, Schmidtchen A, Meijers JC, Herwald H. Protein C inhibitor--a novel antimicrobial agent. PLoS Pathog. 2009 Dec;5(12):e1000698. doi: 10.1371/journal.ppat.1000698. Epub 2009 Dec 18. PMID: 20019810; PMCID: PMC2788422.

      Ishihara, J., Ishihara, A., Fukunaga, K. et al. Laminin heparin-binding peptides bind to several growth factors and enhance diabetic wound healing. Nat Commun 9, 2163 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-04525-w

      Chillakuri Chandramouli R, Jones Céline and Mardon Helen J(2010), Heparin binding domain in vitronectin is required for oligomerization and thus enhances integrin mediated cell adhesion and spreading, FEBS Letters, 584, doi: 10.1016/j.febslet.2010.06.023

      Papareddy P, Kasetty G, Kalle M, Bhongir RK, Mörgelin M, Schmidtchen A, Malmsten M. NLF20: an antimicrobial peptide with therapeutic potential against invasive Pseudomonas aeruginosa infection. J Antimicrob Chemother. 2016 Jan;71(1):170-80. doi: 10.1093/jac/dkv322. Epub 2015 Oct 26. PMID: 26503666.



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    1. O Pantanal, maior planície alagável do Planeta, volta a sofrer com as queimadas em 2024, com números recordes de focos de incêncio e danos incalculáveis para a biodiversidade da flora e da fauna do bioma.

    1. I had a number of sheets of newspaper, and I took a Stanley blade and cut through them, and little bits and pieces looked so amusing to me that I started jiggling them around as one would in a collage.” Gysin had accidentally rediscovered the cut-up method, a technique that can be traced back to at least the Dadaists of the 1920s.

      So it was by accident the origin of the technique! :O

    1. Ejemplos de tales reacciones adversas son la aparición deerupciones, ictericia, anemia, disminución del número deglóbulos blancos (leucocitos), lesión renal y lesión nerviosa quepuede dar lugar a trastornos visuales o auditivos. Estasreacciones tienden a ser más graves, pero se producen por logeneral en un pequeño número de personas.

      Paciente amarillo, anemia, lesion renal o que se lesionen os nervios sensoriares o visibilidad. Genetica de cada quien que hace que haya una reaccion diferente para las personas.

    2. Tratamiento:+ Mascara con oxigeno 6-10L/min + fluidos IV (10-20 ml/kg) 500 a 1000 ml.+ Dar fluidos EV: suero salino al 0,9%. (Si no responde a los fluidos considerar epinefrina IV 0.1mg/mL (dilución 1:10000) o 0.01mg/kg; repetir cada 5 a 10 min;dosis máxima 1.0 mL IM: 0.01mL/kg de 1,0 mg/mL (dilución1000) cada 5 a 10 min máximo.+ Anhistamínicos como Difenhidramina 1mg/kg (máximo 50 mg); intramuscular o intravenosa(lentamente 1-2 min).L.+ Broncodilatadores: beta-2 agonistas, 2 ó 3 inhalaciones (metaproterenol, terbutalina oalbuterol).+ Adrenalina:A = subcutánea: 0,1- 0,2 ml en dilución 1:1000.B = endovenosa: 1 ml = 0,1 mg en dilución1:10000 e inyección lenta (10 mg/min).+ Corticoides: hidrocortisona 0,5-1 g EV o metilprednisolona entre 500-2000mg IV

      Varias personas deben de ayudar, hipotension,piernas arriba angulo de 30 cm, vias arteriales, vasodilatacion y los bronquios se cierran. Se ataca la histamina con dos maneras

    3. 5) Hipotensión con taquicardia.* Elevar los miembros inferiores.Dar fluidos EV: suero salino al 0,9%Dar oxígeno 3 l/min conbigotera/mascarilla.Si no revierte, dar vasopresores:Dopamina intravenosa (IV) 2-5mg/kg/min.Adrenalina IV 4-8 mg/min

      Elevar las piernas a 50 grados o 30 centimentros

    4. Tratamiento:• Monitoreo de signos vitales por 15 min• Preservar acceso IV.• Difenhidramina 1mg/kg (máximo 50 mg); vía oral, intramuscular o intravenosa (lentamente 1-2 min).• Mascara con oxigeno 6-10L/min

      Siempre hay que monitorear, se agrega la mascara de oxigeno y asi la sangre esta normal

    5. Son reacciones impredecibles que no estánclaros sus mecanismos desencadenantes, serelación por asociación a liberación de histaminay la activación o inhibición de sistemas como elde complemento , fibrinolítico , de coagulación ,de quininas y otros capaces de producir estosefectos anafilactoideos. Su aparición y gravedadson independientes de la dosis administrada

      Siempre hay que estar viendo al paciente, si el paciente dice que es alergico hay que prestar mucha atencion

    6. La mayor parte de las reacciones adversasocurren a los pocos minutos tras laadministración del producto por lo que seconocen como: precoces, inmediatas o agudas+ Las que se manifiestan horas o días despuésconocidas como tardías o retardadas.

      Las anafilacticas o alergicas puedes ser de estos tipos, mientras que las idiosincraticas se tardan mas

    Annotators

    1. § 8º

      Enunciado nº 11 da I Jornada de Direito Administrativo do CJF

      • O contrato de desempenho previsto na Lei 13.934/2019, quando celebrado entre órgãos que mantêm entre si relação hierárquica, significa a suspensão da hierarquia administrativa, por autovinculação do órgão superior, em relação ao objeto acordado, para substituí-la por uma regulação contratual, nos termos do art. 3º da referida Lei.

      a Advocacia-Geral da União emitiu o parecer AC 051 – que foi aprovado pelo Presidente da República, passando a ser vinculante para toda a Administração Federal direta e indireta, nos termos do art. 40, § 1º da Lei Complementar nº 73/93. No parecer, foi acolhida a terceira corrente, admitindo-se recurso hierárquico impróprio das decisões das agências reguladoras se extrapolarem os limites legais de suas competências ou violarem as políticas públicas setoriais de competência da Administração direta.

      Portanto, par a AGU, cabe recurso hierárquico impróprio para os Ministérios das decisões das agências reguladoras nos seguintes casos:

      • Decisões acerca de atividades administrativas;

      • Decisões que ultrapassem suas competências materiais definidas em lei ou regulamento;

      • Decisões que violem as políticas públicas definidas para o setor regulado pela Administração direta.

      Não caberá recurso hierárquico impróprio, por outro lado, quando se tratar de decisão da agência adotada finalisticamente no estrito âmbito de suas competências regulatórias previstas em lei e que estejam adequadas às políticas públicas setoriais definidas pela Administração direta. Destaque-se que o referido parecer é vinculante, porém, apenas na esfera federal.


      I jornada de Direito Administrativo do CJF Enunciado 25: A ausência de tutela a que se refere o art. 3º, caput, da Lei 13.848/2019 impede a interposição de recurso hierárquico impróprio contra decisões finais proferidas pela diretoria colegiada das agências reguladoras, ressalvados os casos de previsão legal expressa e assegurada, em todo caso, a apreciação judicial, em atenção ao disposto no art. 5º, XXXV, da Constituição Federal.

    2. autarquia
      • ADI 2225 (Overrruling)
      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno
      • Relator(a): Min. DIAS TOFFOLI
      • Julgamento: 21/08/2014
      • Publicação: 30/10/2014

      Ementa

      Ação direta de inconstitucionalidade. Lei nº 11.288/99 do Estado de Santa Catarina. Estabelecimento de condições e critérios a serem observados para o exercício de cargos de direção da administração indireta do Estado. Necessidade de prévia aprovação da Assembleia Legislativa. Inconstitucionalidade apenas em relação às empresas públicas e às sociedades de economia mista. Artigo 173, § 1º, CF/88. Fornecimento de informações protegidas por sigilo fiscal como condição para a aprovação prévia pelo Poder Legislativo. Mecanismo de fiscalização permanente após a exoneração dos ocupantes dos referidos cargos. Violação do princípio da separação dos Poderes.

      1. A Corte já pacificou o entendimento de que não padece de nenhum vício constitucional a previsão de participação do Poder Legislativo na nomeação de dirigentes de autarquias ou fundações públicas. Trata-se de aplicação aos estados-membros do parâmetro de simetria constante do art. 52, III, f, da Constituição Federal, que submete ao crivo do Senado Federal a aprovação prévia dos indicados para ocupar determinados cargos definidos por lei. Nesses termos, são válidas as normas locais que subordinam a nomeação dos dirigentes de autarquias ou fundações públicas à prévia aprovação de Assembleia Legislativa, não havendo, nesse caso, nenhuma interferência indevida do Poder Legislativo em função típica do Poder Executivo, nem violação do princípio da separação dos Poderes.

      2. Situação diversa, entretanto, ocorre em relação à intervenção parlamentar no processo de provimento das cargas de direção das empresas públicas e das sociedades de economia mista da administração indireta dos estados, por serem pessoas jurídicas de direito privado, que, nos termos do art. 173, § 1º, da Constituição Federal, estão sujeitas ao regime jurídico próprio das empresas privadas, o que obsta a exigência de manifestação prévia do Poder Legislativo estadual. Precedentes.

      3. O art. 2º, IV, e o art. 3º da Lei nº 11.288/99 extrapolam o sistema de freios e contrapesos autorizado pela Constituição Federal, pois, além de determinarem o fornecimento de informações protegidas por sigilo fiscal como condição para a aprovação prévia pelo Poder Legislativo dos titulares de determinados cargos, criam mecanismo de fiscalização permanente pela Assembleia Legislativa para após a exoneração dos ocupantes dos referidos cargos. Esses dispositivos instituíram modalidade de controle direto pela Assembleia Legislativa - sem o auxílio do Tribunal de Contas do Estado - que não encontra fundamento de validade em nenhuma norma constitucional, resultando em violação ao princípio da separação dos Poderes (art. 2º, CF/88).

      4. No âmbito do Poder Legislativo, apenas as comissões parlamentares de inquérito, nos termos do art. 58, § 3º, da Lei Maior, pode determinar a apresentação de declaração de bens ou informações sob sigilo fiscal, o que, evidentemente, fica ainda condicionado pela existência de um quadro fático concreto e específico e pela apresentação de pedido com fundamentação individualizada que justifique a invasão da privacidade do investigado.

      5. Ação direta julgada parcialmente procedente.


      • ADI 2167 (Posicionamento atual)

      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno

      • Relator(a): Min. RICARDO LEWANDOWSKI
      • Redator(a) do acórdão: Min. ALEXANDRE DE MORAES
      • Julgamento: 03/06/2020

      • É vedada à legislação estadual submeter à aprovação prévia da Assembleia Legislativa a nomeação de dirigentes de Autarquias, Fundações Públicas, Presidentes de Empresas de Economia Mista, Interventores de Municípios, bem como de titulares de Defensoria Pública e da Procuradoria-Geral do Estado; por afronta à separação de poderes.

      • Declaração de inconstitucionalidade parcial, com redução de texto, do inciso XVIII do art. 33 do dispositivo impugnado, retirando-se a expressão "antes da nomeação, arguir os Titulares da Defensoria Pública, da Procuradoria Geral do Estado, das Fundações Públicas, das Autarquias, os Presidentes das Empresas de Economia Mista".

      • Declaração de inconstitucionalidade do parágrafo único do art. 62 da lei impugnada, bem como de inconstitucionalidade parcial, com redução de texto, do art. 103, retirando-se a expressão "após arguição pelo Poder Legislativo".

      • Ação Direta de Inconstitucionalidade julgada parcialmente prejudicada e, na parte não prejudicada, julgada parcialmente procedente.

      • OBS.: O julgado citado é importante pois promove uma alteração da própria jurisprudência da Corte Suprema. Antes, o STF vinha sustentando posicionamento pela constitucionalidade do condicionamento da nomeação de dirigentes das autarquias e fundações a sabatina no Poder Legislativo, ao contrário do que ocorria com as empresas públicas e sociedades de economia mista, em que a prévia sabatina dos dirigentes indicados era vedada. Esse entendimento foi superado no julgado acima.

      • Por outro lado, de acordo com o Supremo Tribunal Federal, a exoneração dos dirigentes cabe ao Chefe do Poder Executivo, não podendo a lei estabelecer hipótese de exoneração direta dos dirigentes pelo Poder Legislativo.


    3. 154, I

      Art. 154. A União poderá instituir:

      I - mediante lei complementar, impostos não previstos no artigo anterior, desde que sejam não-cumulativos e não tenham fato gerador ou base de cálculo próprios dos discriminados nesta Constituição;


      • RE 700922
      • Repercussão Geral – Mérito (Tema 651)
      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno
      • Relator(a): Min. MARCO AURÉLIO
      • Redator(a) do acórdão: Min. ALEXANDRE DE MORAES
      • Julgamento: 15/03/2023

      [...]

        1. O art. 195, § 4º, com a remissão feita ao art. 154, I, ambos da CF, vedam a cumulatividade e o bis in idem, quando da criação de novos impostos ou contribuições sociais. No presente caso, não se trata de nova fonte de custeio para a seguridade social, uma vez que está assentada no art. 195, I, da CARTA MAGNA, na redação da EC 20/1998.
        1. Ainda que assim não fosse, a vedação constitucional impede a criação de imposto ou contribuição social novos com fato gerador ou base de cálculo próprios de imposto ou contribuição social já existentes, não sendo vedada, porém, a criação de uma contribuição social prevista no texto constitucional com fato gerador ou base de cálculo idênticos aos de imposto já existente.
        1. Do mesmo modo, o princípio da não cumulatividade dos novos tributos alude tão somente àquela cumulatividade que resulta da tributação de operações em cadeia, decorrente da sobreposição de incidências, não se referindo tal proibição à cumulação de dois tributos já previstos na Constituição, incidentes sobre o mesmo fato gerador.
    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      eLife assessment

      This important study identifies differential Orsay virus infection of C. elegans when animals are fed on different bacteria. The evidence for this is however, incomplete, as experiments to control for feeding rate and bacterial pathogenicity are needed as well as direct quantification of viral load. 

      We appreciate that the editors and reviewers felt that our manuscript addressed an important problem. We appreciate the constructive critiques provided by the reviewers and have worked to address all of the concerns, including a number of additional experiments as indicated below.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary: 

      This manuscript explores the importance of food type on virus infection dynamics using a nematode virus as a model system. The authors demonstrate that susceptibility to viral infection can change by several orders of magnitude based on the type of bacterial food that potential hosts consume. They go on to show that, for the bacterial food source that reduces susceptibility, the effect is modulated by quorum sensing molecules that the bacteria produce. 

      Strengths: 

      This manuscript shows convincingly that nematode susceptibility to viral infection changes by several orders of magnitude (i.e. doses must be increased by several orders of magnitude to infect the same fraction of the population) depending on the bacterial food source on which hosts are reared. The authors then focus on the bacteria that reduce host susceptibility to viral infection and demonstrate that certain bacterial quorum-sensing compounds are required to see this effect of reduced susceptibility. Overall, sample sizes are large, methods are generally rigorous, experiments are repeated, and patterns are clear. 

      Weaknesses: 

      Although the molecular correlate of reduced susceptibility is identified (i.e. quorum sensing compounds) the mechanisms underlying this effect are missing. For example, there are changes in susceptibility due to altered nutrition, host condition, the microbiome, feeding rate, mortality of infected hosts, etc. In addition, the authors focus almost entirely on the reduction in susceptibility even though I personally find the increased susceptibility generated when reared on Ochrobactrum to be much more exciting. 

      I was a bit surprised that there was no data on basic factors that could have led to reductions in susceptibility. In particular, data on feeding rates and mortality rates seem really important. I would expect that feeding rates are reduced in the presence of Pseudomonas. Reduced feeding rates would translate to lower consumed doses, and so even though the same concentration of virus is on a plate, it doesn't mean that the same quantity of virus is consumed. Likewise, if Pseudomonas is causing mortality of virus-infected hosts, it could give the impression of lower infection rates. Perhaps mortality rates are too small in the experimental setup to explain this pattern, but that isn't clear in the current version of the manuscript. Is mortality greatly impacted by knocking out quorum-sensing genes? Also, the authors explored susceptibility to infection, but completely ignored variation in virus shedding. 

      We have added data on feeding rates (Line numbers 141-148 and 176-182, Supplementary Figure 4). After six hours of exposure no differences in feeding rate were observed. After 24 hours minor differences emerged between O. vermis MYb71 and each Pseudomonas species, however feeding rate inversely correlated with susceptibility to Orsay virus in that O. vermis MYb71 displayed the lowest feeding rate while P. aeruginosa PA14 displayed the highest feeding rate.

      We have also added data on mortality rates (Line numbers 183-200, Supplementary Figure 6). No significant mortality was observed within the 24-hour exposure period used for our Orsay infection and transmission assays. P. aeruginosa virulence is dependent upon temperature and as our assays are done at 20°C rather than 25°C this may account for reduced mortality compared to other published results. Regardless, we noted that O. vermis MYb71 killed C. elegans as quickly as P. aeruginosa PA14 under these conditions and these two bacteria led to the shortest lifespan compared to the other tested bacteria. Interestingly, P. lurida MYb11 was observed to be more virulent than P. aeruginosa PA01 under these conditions. These results suggest that there is no direct correlation between mortality and susceptibility to Orsay virus, although it does not rule out that virulence effects unique to each bacterium could contribute to alterations in host susceptibility.  

      The reviewer is correct to assert that differences in viral shedding could exist. However, our susceptibility assays using exogenous Orsay virus remove this source of variation and yet we still observe the same trends such that O. vermis MYb71 promotes infection while P. lurida MYb11, P. aeruginosa PA01, and P. aeruginosa PA14 attenuate infection. Further we measured the amount of virus shed into the lawns in the presence of different bacteria and did not observe differences in shed virus that could account for the differences we observe in incidence proportion (Line numbers 241-254, Fig. 3 F). Viral stability could be an issue in both the transmission and susceptibility assays. We therefore tested viral stability in the presence of E. coli, P. lurida MYb11, P. aeruginosa PA01, and P. aeruginosa PA14 and successfully recovered virus from all lawns, suggesting virus is not rapidly degraded in the presence of any bacterium (Fig. 3D and 3E). However, we noted that the recovery of Orsay virus from lawns of E. coli OP50 and P. lurida MYb11 within 30 minutes was decreased compared to a spike-in control suggesting recovery from each lawn is not equivalent. This complicates a comparison of viral stability and shedding rates between different bacteria, but our ability to recover substantial amounts of virus in the shedding assay from the three Pseudomonas strains we examined precludes a substantial decrease in shedding rates as an explanation for the robust attenuation of Orsay virus observed in transmission assays.  

      I was also curious why the authors did not further explore the mechanism behind the quorumsensing effect. Not sure whether this is possible, but would it be possible to add spent media to the infection plates where the spent media was from Pseudomonas that produce the quorum sensing compound but the plates contain OP50, Pseudomonas, or the quorum sensing knockout of Pseudomonas? That would reveal whether it is the compound itself vs. something that the compound does. 

      We observed that quorum sensing mutants suppressed the attenuation of Orsay virus infection and we agree that this could be a consequence of the compounds themselves, or more likely an effect of the downstream consequences of quorum signaling. We added culture supernatant from each bacterium to lawns of E. coli OP50 to assess the effect on host susceptibility and did not observe any potent effect (Line numbers 311-318, Supplementary Figure 9). This supports an interpretation that it is not the compound itself that is responsible, however we cannot rule out that the compounds themselves may be responsible if provided at a higher concentration.

      In addition, I was surprised by how much focus there was on the attenuation of infection and how little there was on the enhancement of infection. To me, enhancement seems like the more obvious thing to find a mechanism for -- is the bacteria suppressing immunity, preventing entry to gut cells, etc? 

      We are also intrigued by the enhancement of infection by Ochrobactrum spp, however we chose to focus on attenuation given the availability of Pseudomonas aeruginosa genetic mutants for study. We have added data (Line numbers 371-402, Figure 7, and Supplemental Figure 12) that inform our current hypothesis regarding Ochrobactrum mediated enhancement of Orsay virus infection.

      I was a bit concerned about the "arbitrary units", which were used without any effort to normalize them. David Wang and Hongbing Jiang have developed a method based on tissue culture infectious dose 50 (TCID50) that can be used to measure infectious doses in a somewhat repeatable way. Without some type of normalization, it is hard to imagine how this study could be repeated. The 24-hour time period between exposure and glowing suggests very high doses, but it is still unclear precisely how high. Also, it is clear that multiple batches of virus were used in this study, but it is entirely unclear how variable these batches were. 

      We have clarified that we also measured the (TC)ID50 for every batch of virus used similar to the methods suggested by the Wang laboratory (Line numbers 107-119 and 499-506). We have added a figure showing the virus batch variability for all batches used in this study (Supp. Fig. 2). We have further clarified that the arbitrary units correspond to the actual microliters of viral filtrate used during infection and provided clear methods to replicate our viral batch production to assist with issues of reproducibility (Line numbers 107-119 and 499-506).

      The authors in several places discuss high variability or low variability in incidence as though it is a feature of the virus or a feature of the host. It isn't. For infection data (or any type of binomial data) results are highly variable in the middle (close to 50% infection) and lowly variable at the ends (close to 0% or 100% infection). This is a result that is derived from a binomial distribution and it should not be taken as evidence that the bacteria or the host affect randomness. If you were to conduct dose-response experiments, on any of your bacterial food source treatments, you would find that variability is lowest at the extremely high and extremely low doses and it is most variable in the middle when you are at doses where about 50% of hosts are infected. 

      Thank you for pointing this out, we have removed all reference to this throughout the manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary and Major Findings/Strengths:

      Across diverse hosts, microbiota can influence viral infection and transmission. C. elegans is naturally infected by the Orsay virus, which infects intestinal cells and is transmitted via the fecal-oral route. Previous work has demonstrated that host immune defense pathways, such as antiviral RNAi and the intracellular pathogen response (IPR), can influence host susceptibility to virus infection. However, little is known about how bacteria modulate viral transmission and host susceptibility. 

      In this study, the authors investigate how diverse bacterial species influence Orsay virus transmission and host susceptibility in C. elegans. When C. elegans is grown in the presence of two Ochrobactrum species, the authors find that animals exhibit increased viral transmission, as measured by the increased proportion of newly infected worms (relative to growth on E. coli OP50). The presence of the two Ochrobactrum species also resulted in increased host susceptibility to the virus, which is reflected by the increased fraction of infected animals following exposure to the exogenous Orsay virus. In contrast, the presence of Pseudomonas lurida MYb11, as well as Pseudomonas PA01 or PA14, attenuates viral transmission and host susceptibility relative to E. coli OP50. For growth in the presence of P. aeruginosa PA01 and PA14, the attenuated transmission and susceptibility are suppressed by mutations in regulators of quorum sensing and the gacA two-component system. The authors also identify six virulence genes in P. aeruginosa PA14 that modulate host susceptibility to virus and viral transmission, albeit to a lesser extent. Based on the findings in P. aeruginosa, the authors further demonstrate that deletion of the gacA ortholog in P. lurida results in loss of the attenuation of viral transmission and host susceptibility. 

      Taken together, these findings provide important insights into the species-specific effects that bacteria can have on viral infection in C. elegans. The authors also describe a role for Pseudomonas quorum sensing and virulence genes in influencing viral transmission and host susceptibility. 

      Major weaknesses: 

      The manuscript has several issues that need to be addressed, such as insufficient rigor of the experiments performed and questions about the reproducibility of the data presented in some places. In addition, confounding variables complicate the interpretations that can be made from the authors' findings and weaken some of the conclusions that are stated in the manuscript. 

      (1) The authors sometimes use pals-5p::GFP expression to indicate infection, however, this is not necessarily an accurate measure of the infection rate. Specifically, in Figures 4-6, the authors should include measurements of viral RNA, either by FISH staining or qRT-PCR, to support the claims related to differences in infection rate. 

      Following the reviewers comment we have corroborated our pals-5::GFP data using FISH staining (Line numbers 291-292 and 357-359, Figure 4D & 4E, and Figure 6C).  

      (2) In several instances, the experimental setup and presentation of data lack sufficient rigor. For example, Fig 1D and Fig 2B only display data from one experimental replicate. The authors should include information from all 3 experimental replicates for more transparency. In Fig 3B, the authors should include a control that demonstrates how RNA1 levels change in the presence of E. coli OP50 for comparison with the results showing replication in the presence of PA14. In order to support the claim that "P. aeruginosa and P. lurida MYb11 do not eliminate Orsay virus infection", the authors should also measure RNA1 fold change in the presence of PA01 and P. lurida in the context of exogenous Orsay virus. Additionally, the authors should standardize the amount of bacteria added to the plate and specify how this was done in the Methods, as differing concentrations of bacteria could be the reason for species-specific effects on infection. 

      All experimental replicates are now included within the supplementary information. 

      We have also measured RNA1 fold change following infection in the presence of P. aeruginosa PA01 and P. lurida MYb11 (Line numbers Fig 3B and 3C) and found that these bacteria also do not eliminate Orsay virus replication. 

      We thank the reviewer for their comment on controlling the amount of bacteria and have clarified our methods section to more clearly explain that we seed our plates with equivalent amounts (based on volume) of overnight bacterial culture before allowing the bacteria to grow on the plates for 48 hours.  

      (3) The authors should be more careful about conclusions that are made from experiments involving PA14, which is a P. aeruginosa strain (isolated from humans), that can rapidly kill C. elegans. To eliminate confounding factors that are introduced by the pathogenicity of PA14, the authors should address how PA14 affects the health of the worms in their assays. For example, the authors should perform bead-feeding assays to demonstrate that feeding rates are unaffected when worms are grown in the presence of PA14. Because Orsay virus infection occurs through feeding, a decrease in C. elegans feeding rates can influence the outcome of viral infection. The authors should also address whether or not the presence of PA14 affects the stability of viral particles because that could be another trivial reason for the attenuation of viral infection that occurs in the presence of PA14. 

      We have added data on feeding rates (Line numbers 141-148 and 176-182, Supplementary Figure 4). After six hours of exposure no differences in feeding rate were observed. After 24 hours minor differences emerged between O. vermis MYb71 and each Pseudomonas species, however feeding rate inversely correlated with susceptibility to Orsay virus in that O. vermis MYb71 displayed the lowest feeding rate while P. aeruginosa PA14 displayed the highest feeding rate.

      We have also added data on mortality rates (Line numbers 183-200, Supplementary Figure 6). No significant mortality was observed within the 24-hour exposure period used for our Orsay infection and transmission assays. P. aeruginosa virulence is dependent upon temperature and as our assays are done at 20°C rather than 25°C this may account for reduced mortality compared to other published results. Regardless, we noted that O. vermis MYb71 killed C. elegans as quickly as P. aeruginosa PA14 under these conditions and these two bacteria led to the shortest lifespan compared to the other tested bacteria. Interestingly, P. lurida MYb11 was observed to be more virulent than P. aeruginosa PA01 under these conditions. These results suggest that there is no direct correlation between mortality and susceptibility to Orsay virus, although it does not rule out that virulence effects unique to each bacterium could contribute to alterations in host susceptibility.  

      We tested viral stability in the presence of E. coli OP50 and Pseudomonas spp. and successfully recovered virus from all lawns, suggesting virus is not rapidly degraded in the presence of P. lurida MYb11, P. aeruginosa PA01, and P. aeruginosa PA14 (Line numbers 241-249, Fig 3D and Fig 3E). However, we noted that the recovery of Orsay virus from lawns of E. coli OP50 and P. lurida MYb11 within 30 minutes was decreased compared to a spike-in control suggesting recovery from each lawn is not equivalent. This complicates a comparison of viral stability and shedding rates between different bacteria, but our ability to recover substantial amounts of virus in the shedding assay from each Pseudomonas species precludes a substantial decrease in shedding rates as an explanation for the robust attenuation of Orsay virus observed in transmission assays.  

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors): 

      Overall, I really liked this manuscript, I do think there are areas for improvement though. 

      Some smaller things: 

      Line 84: "can be observed spreading from a single animal" -- this isn't really great wording because the virus itself can't be observed (at least not very easily) -- even infection is hard to see. 

      The wording in line 84-85 has now been adjusted to read “can spread from a single animal”.

      Fig 1C: which groups are statistically significantly different from each other? 

      Statistics have now been added to Figure 1C. 

      Line 154: not necessary to do for this paper, but this sentence made me curious whether the effect would have been seen with mixtures of bacteria (i.e. what if 50% were OP50 and 50% were Pseudomonas?) 

      This data has now been added in Line numbers 372-378, Figure 7A, and Supp. Fig. 12A and 12B.

      Line 262-264: I don't find this interesting at all for the reasons mentioned earlier about binomial data being the most variable in the middle. 

      These lines have been removed.

      Figure 4 B: The labels for the first two tick marks on the x-axis are switched I suspect. Otherwise, the controls did not behave as expected. 

      Figure 4B has been corrected.

      Line 288, 297 and several other places: "Orsay Virus" should be "Orsay virus". 

      We have corrected these instances.

      Supplemental Figure 2: Labels in the figure legend are B and C instead of A and B. 

      These labels have been adjusted for their placement within Figure 6.

      Line 411: I suspect this was supposed to be 13,200 xg rather than 13.2 xg. 

      This error has been corrected.

      Line 416-417: This sentence is very hard to interpret. More details are needed. This is the ID50 in which host strain? Is this averaged over all batches of virus? How variable are the batches? 

      This sentence (line number 114) has been amended to clarify that all ID50 values referred to here were calculated for ZD2611 populations in the presence of E. coli OP50. Further, Supplementary Figure 2 now shows all the ID50 values measured for each batch of virus used in this manuscript resulting in an average ID50 of 3.6.

      Lines 467-469: Why exclude these instead of counting them as zeros in the analysis? How many plates fit this description -- were there lots or only a few over the course of all experiments? 

      We have chosen to exclude these plates as these samples lost spreaders at some point during the course of the assay potentially skewing the eventual number of new infections counted depending on when the infected spreader animal crawled off the plate.  We have detailed the number of plates that fit this description in lines 559-562. 

      Line 476: A critical detail that is missing here is what number of worms were counted to score infection. Please say here or in the figure legends. 

      We have added the total number of worms counted and the minimum number counted per plate for each assay in the figure legends.

      Line 546: Why was only a single representative experiment shown? I'm asking for a justification, not necessarily for you to show all the data. 

      We chose to show a single representative experiment for two reasons:  We noted variability between susceptibility assays even when using the same batch of virus such that we could not combine experiments into a single plot as we did for transmission assays. Second, while we could normalize to a control within each experiment and expect to see similar relative differences across experiments, we believe this makes it more difficult to interpret the underlying data. For example, an increase in the infection rate of 80% compared to 10% within a population has only a single interpretation while a relative increase in the infection rate by 8x within a population could have several underlying meanings (e.g. 80% vs 10%, 64%vs 8%, 24% vs 3%). We have now included all experimental replicates in the supplementary material. 

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Minor concerns: 

      (1) Lines 86-87: "utilized a collection of bacteria isolated from the environment with wild C. elegans". The authors should provide more context on the source of these bacterial strains. 

      More references for the sources of these bacteria have been added to Supplementary Table 2.

      (2) The presentation of data in Fig 1 could be improved. The authors should include the text "pals-5p::GFP" on the images shown in Fig 1B. The red dashed line in Fig. 1D should intersect the dose-response curve at y = 0.5. The column heading for Fig 1E states "ID50 +/- SD (a.u.)", but should read "ID50 ratio" and should not have units. It also might be more intuitive to normalize the ID50 value for O. vermis to E. coli OP50. This way, having an ID50 ratio >1 indicates decreased transmission relative to E. coli, and ID50 ratio <1 indicates increased transmission relative to E. coli. To increase the transparency and rigor of 1E, the authors should plot the ratios from all 3 experimental replicates. The authors should also briefly explain why different viral doses were used in Fig 1D and 1F. 

      The text “pals-5p::GFP” has now been added to Figure 1B and throughout the text. The red dashed line in figure 1D has been corrected. Figure 1E has been adjusted to an actual figure as suggested and the y-axis label is “ID50 Ratio Compared to E. coli OP50”. The ID50 replicates have been plotted in Supplementary Figure 2. We have clarified that the doses used are the same. Briefly, the technical replicates of individual doses from Figure 1D and Supplementary Figure 3A and 3B were pooled and processed for FISH staining to provide each experimental replicate of Figure 1F. 

      (3) Line 110: The claim is that Ochrobactrum and P. lurida MYb11 reduce the variability of infection levels. However, another possibility is that there's simply less dynamic range in the assay because the infection levels have been compressed to 100% and 0% under these conditions. 

      This line has been removed.

      (4) There are discrepancies between what is shown in Fig 2C and what is described in the text. Lines 163-164: "P. aeruginosa PA01 and P. lurida MYb11 attenuated average infection to 33% and 62% of the population respectively". In Fig 2C, the mean for PA01 is ~25% whereas the mean for P. lurida appears to be less than 62%. 

      These values have been corrected.

      (5) Line 196: Provide more context for why rde-1 mutants were tested. This is the first time rde-1 is mentioned in the text (i.e. why show results in rde-1 mutants when the results are in Fig 2). 

      More context has been provided for why rde-1 mutants were tested (Line numbers 228-232). Briefly, using the rde-1 mutant, which has defective antiviral immunity and therefore supports higher viral replication levels than the wild-type (Félix et al. 2011), allows us to potentiate our infection assay in Figure 3B and 3C such that we maximize our chances of detecting viral replication in the presence of the Pseudomonas species, and especially P. aeruginiosa PA14, where fewer animals might be expected to get infected based upon Figure 2B and Supplementary Figure 5. 

      (6) Lines 228-229: "Mutations of any the regulators of the las, rhl, or pqs quorum sensing systems suppressed the attenuation of Orsay virus infection caused by the presence of wild-type P. aeruginosa PA01". Based on this description, PA01 should have a lower fraction of GFP positive relative to the quorum sensing mutants in Fig 4B. It seems that the x-axis labels OP50 and PA01 are swapped. 

      The x-axis labels of Figure 4B have been corrected. 

      (7) To improve clarity, for any figures that have data showing the "fraction of individuals GFP positive", the authors should include "pals-5p::GFP" in the y-axis title and legend. 

      The y-axis labels, legends, and text have been corrected throughout.  

      (8) To improve overall clarity and flow, the order in which the data is presented could be reordered. In particular, Fig. 6 could be better positioned instead of being the last figure, as no further characterization is performed on the mutants, and the findings are not conserved in strains that are more relevant to the C. elegans microbiota, such as P. lurida. The overall story could be strengthened if the authors ended the manuscript with more details related to the mechanism by which regulators of quorum sensing modulate the outcome of viral infection. 

      Figure 5 and Figure 6 have now been swapped.

      (9) Fig 5A: Make arrow sizes consistent across diagrams (i.e. the diagram for gacA deletion). 

      This figure (now Figure 6A) has been adjusted to make arrow sizes consistent across diagrams.  

      (10) Lines 280-282: "These data suggest that gacA has a conserved role across distant Pseudomonas species..." Here, the authors can provide more context on how well-conserved gacA is across Pseudomonas species (i.e. phylogenetic analysis of gacA sequences across different Pseudomonas species/strains). Furthermore, the data in Fig 5 does not provide strong enough support for the conclusion that gacA has a conserved role broadly across Pseudomonas species, as the authors only assess the effects of a gacA deletion in two species, P. aeruginosa and P. lurida. 

      We have adjusted lines 361-362 to “These data suggest that gacA has a conserved role between P. aeruginosa and P. lurida Myb11 in the attenuation of Orsay virus transmission and infection of C. elegans.” to reflect that we only assessed the effects of the gacA deletion in P. aeruginosa and P. lurida MYb11.

      (11) The manuscript can be strengthened by performing additional experiments to elucidate the mechanism by which Pseudomonas modulates viral infection. Does the attenuation of viral transmission and host susceptibility by P. lurida and P. aeruginosa require C. elegans to be in the presence of live bacteria? For example, the authors could measure viral transmission and susceptibility of C. elegans grown on heat-killed Pseudomonas. Additionally, it would be interesting to determine if modulation of viral infection is dependent on a secreted molecule. To assess this, the authors could perform viral infections in the context of Pseudomonas culture supernatant. 

      We added bacterial culture supernatant from each bacterium to lawns of E. coli OP50 to assess the effect on host susceptibility and did not observe any potent effect (Line numbers 311-318, Supplementary Figure 9). This supports an interpretation that attenuation is not mediated by a secreted molecule, however we cannot rule out that attenuation activity would become apparent if supernatant were provided at a higher concentration.

      We have found substantial challenges appropriately controlling live vs. heat-killed experiments particularly with the specifics of our susceptibility experiments. With regards to the underlying question of mechanism we believe that the genetic mutants (e.g. rhlR/gacA) are equally informative and that further comparison of these mutants’ interaction with the C. elegans host as compared to wild-type may be informative. 

      (12) The authors should include a discussion on the relative virulence potential of PA01, PA14, and P. lurida and the relationship between bacterial virulence potential and the outcome of viral infection. 

      We have also added data on mortality rates (Line numbers 183-200, Supplementary Figure 6). No significant mortality was observed within the 24-hour exposure period used for our Orsay infection and transmission assays. P. aeruginosa virulence is dependent upon temperature and as our assays are done at 20°C rather than 25°C this may account for reduced mortality compared to other published results. Regardless, we noted that O. vermis MYb71 killed C. elegans as quickly as P. aeruginosa PA14 under these conditions and these two bacteria led to the shortest lifespan compared to the other tested bacteria. Interestingly, P. lurida MYb11 was observed to be more virulent than P. aeruginosa PA01 under these conditions. These results suggest that there is no direct correlation between mortality and susceptibility to Orsay virus, although it does not rule out that virulence effects unique to each bacterium could contribute to alterations in host susceptibility.  

      (13) More information is needed on strains listed in Supplementary Table 2, particularly when there is no reference listed and the strain is "Gift of XXX lab". For example, the Troemel lab previously published about an Ochrobactrum strain in Troemel et al PLOS Biology 2008 PMID: 19071962 - is this the same strain? Please ensure that there is adequate information about each strain with as many published references as possible so that the work can be more easily reproduced. 

      We have added additional information and references to the strain table in Supplementary Table 2. The strain listed as Ochrobactrum sp. has been amended to Ochrobactrum BH3 as it is the strain described in Troemel et al. 2008.

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      Reviewer 1:

      Although HEK cells are effective for studying molecular mechanisms and post-translational modifications through siRNA and variant overexpression manipulations, they lack functional relevance in a neuronal context. Consequently, the connection between molecular findings and observed phenotypes in mice is tenuous. It is suggested that the authors attempt to replicate these results (Figures 4 and 5) using a neuronal differentiation model employing ESCs or iPSCs.

      We have previously attempted to generate DDX3XSer584Ala knock-in ESCs via CRISPR-Cas9 because, as the reviewer points out, this would facilitate investigating the role of DDX3X O-GlcNAcylation in a neuronal differentiation model. However, clones derived after puromycin selection stop proliferating and perish during clonal outgrowth - we will include a statement to this effect in the revised manuscript. A similar phenomenon has been reported previously in Neuro2a cells by Lennox et al. (2020), who reported that installation of DDX3X patient variants is potentially toxic in certain cell lines. Therefore, the HEK293 KD/overexpression approach, also used for the study of clinically relevant DDX3X variants in other studies, while sub-optimal, is the best possible currently accessible model.

      While employing variant overexpression following siRNA-mediated reduction of the endogenous protein is a direct method to illustrate the effects of mutated DDX3X variants, the authors stress a connection between this regulatory mechanism and neurodevelopmental defects. Therefore, it would be justifiable for the authors to create cell lines by editing the endogenous DDX3X gene and demonstrate the effects of O-GlcNAc, disruption of DDX3X target levels, and cell cycle regulation. Combining these approaches (from points 1 and 2), the authors could generate iPSC/ESC lines containing the DDX3X mutations and examine their effects within a neuronal differentiation context. Such an approach would significantly enhance the impact of this study.

      As mentioned above for point 1, we have previously tried to edit the endogenous DDX3X gene with a Ser584Ala point mutation for this purpose. However, after trying this approach in both ESCs and HEK293T cells, we consistently observed stalled proliferation and cell death during clonal outgrowth. Therefore, as desirable as this experiment is, we are limited to siRNA-mediated reduction of DDX3X and rescue via over-expression, as also extensively used in other studies.

      Given the points raised by reviewers 1 and 3 about the appropriateness of model system and the links drawn between DDX3X O-GlcNAcylation and neurodevelopmental defects, we will revise the manuscript to highlight the correlative nature of this link. In addition we will add further data from OGT-CDG mouse models that strengthens this possible link (see response to point 4 by reviewer 1).

      The finding of diminished DDX3X levels in OGT mutant mice and the consequent reduction in O-GlcNAc represents a pivotal connection to the observed neurodevelopmental defects in OGT-CDG. However, this aspect of the research remains somewhat unclear, as it has not been definitively demonstrated that O-GlcNAc levels of DDX3X in OGT mutant mice are indeed decreased. Without this confirmation, the causal relationship between OGT malfunction, O-GlcNAc, and reduced DDX3X levels cannot be firmly established. There is a possibility of indirect effects, and merely observing correlation does not suffice to draw the robust conclusions presented in this paper. To address the uncertainty surrounding Figure 6D, attributed to the antibody's declared lack of specificity, the authors should conduct additional experiments.

      The aim of this study is not to confirm whether there is a causal link between OGT catalytic deficiency and DDX3X, but rather to report the function of DDX3X O-GlcNAcylation and propose a possible link between OGT catalytic deficiency, DDX3X loss of activity, and neurodevelopmental defects. However, we do agree that further investigation is required to determine whether there is a correlative link between OGT catalytic deficiency and DDX3X levels (and O-GlcNAcylation) in the mouse brain. Towards this end, we will repeat the immunoprecipitation of DDX3X from mouse brain lysate of wild type and OGT-CDG mice and blot for O-GlcNAc using different pan-specific O-GlcNAc antibodies/ far western techniques (CTD110.6, GST-CpOGAD298N). We will also incorporate an internal negative control (competition with free GlcNAc) to verify the specificity of the O-GlcNAc signals.

      The study places significant emphasis on this phenotype and seeks to elucidate it, at least partially, through the O-GlcNAcylation of DDX3X. However, a precise description or depiction of this phenotype is absent. Understanding the phenotype of the OGT-CDG mice necessitates consulting existing literature. The authors ought to contemplate providing brain sections with relevant staining to (i) showcase the microcephaly phenotype and (ii) bolster their assertion regarding the dysregulated cell cycle by utilising appropriate marker stainings for the progenitor cells during embryonic development.

      We have recently published a manuscript reporting a mouse model of OGT-CDG (OGTC921Y). OGTC921Y mice display microcephaly as determined by brain weight and skull length. An additional mouse model of the N648Y OGT-CDG variant also displays microcephaly (Authier et al., 2024 reports the C921Y mouse; the N648Y mice line is on BioRxiv: https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.08.23.554427 and subject to peer review elsewhere). As part of the revisions for this manuscript, we will report a micro CT-based analysis of reduced skull/brain volume that supports the microcephaly phenotype. O-GlcNAc, OGT, OGA, DDX3X and cyclin E1 western blots for three brain regions from these mouse models will also be provided. Furthermore, we will include NeuN staining of cortical brain sections to establish whether cortical density is reduced in OGTN648Y mouse brains. The proposed staining of progenitor cells during embryonic corticogenesis is a very good suggestion for future investigation, but is a time-consuming experiment (est. 1 year) that falls beyond the scope of this study and would delay sharing of our current findings.

      The proposed staining of progenitor cells during embryonic corticogenesis is a time consuming experiment (est. 1 year) that falls beyond the scope of this study.

      Reviewer 2:

      Figure 6 D - text last paragraph on page 16, and in supplement where you use RL2 - You need to do the control to show that RL2 staining goes away in the presence of free GlcNAc or when you galactosylate the protein. This control would indicate that you are detecting the sugar, not the protein backbone.

      We agree with the reviewer that an internal negative control will help validate the specificity of the RL2 signal. We will repeat the immunoprecipitation/ O-GlcNAc western blot with a free GlcNAc control.

      • Reviewer 3:*

      Lack of Appropriate Model System: Although the authors initially address the role of O-GlcNAcylation (OGT/OGA) and DDX3X in cerebral development, given that mutations in these enzymes are causative for neurological malformations and disabilities, the experiments addressing the consequences of DDX3X or OGT silencing are predominantly performed in HEK293T cells rather than a nervous system model. This limits the relevance of the findings.

      As discussed above (see Reviewer 1, points 1 and 2), we have previously tried to generate ESC knock-ins of the DDX3XSer584Alain ESCs to establish a neuronal differentiation model. However, clones perish during outgrowth, and thus these experiments are not possible. We have however performed preliminary biochemical analysis of DDX3X levels in the brains of OGT-CDG mice. It is important to emphasise that whether there is a causal link between OGT catalytic deficiency, DDX3X and cerebral development, lies beyond the remit of this manuscript. This manuscript aims to highlight DDX3X loss of activity as a candidate conveyor of neurodevelopmental defects in the mouse brain.

      Inconclusive Cell Cycle Analysis: The authors' analysis regarding cell cycle characterization is not sufficiently conclusive. First, they need to accurately define the link between DDX3X and cyclin E1. The study they refer to (Lai et al., 2010) is rather superficial, and requires a more in-depth analysis, in order to appreciate the existing link between the two given molecules. Indeed, the current experiments do not clarify whether cells are stuck in G1 due to cyclin E1 downregulation or if cyclin E1 is downregulated because cells are blocked in G1. A suggested approach would be to perform rescue experiments with cyclin E1 overexpression, by using Quantitative Image-Based Cytometry (QIBC) or flow cytometry (EdU incorporation + Hoecsht staining) to monitor cell cycle changes and define the interplay between these molecules mechanistically. However, this alone cannot exclude the presence of alternative substrates of DDX3X regulation influencing cell cycle phase transition. A more holistic approach, such as an interactome analysis through mass spectrometry, may be helpful. Additionally, mild mitotic stress often results in cell cycle arrest in the subsequent G0/G1 phase, which can resemble the G1/S transition impairment described by the authors. Consequently, the statement "Here we identify Ser584 O-GlcNAcylation of DDX3X (...) as a key regulator of G1/S transition" is not well-supported (to do so, the authors should define the temporal pattern of such post-translational modification). It would also be interesting to determine whether the reduction in cell viability is due to a simple slowdown of the cell cycle or apoptotic induction.

      We agree that performing cyclin E1 over-expression could provide mechanistic insights into the link between DDX3X, cyclin E1, and the cell cycle. We will therefore repeat the cell cycle analysis by flow cytometry shown in Fig. 5B with the addition of cyclin E1 over-expression in cells co-transfected with siRNA against DDX3X and siRNA-resistant DDX3XSer584Ala, to investigate whether cyclin E1 rescues the observed accumulation of cells in G1.

      We acknowledge the reviewer's point that quiescence (G0 entry) and G1/S stalling can provide similar cell cycle profiles to that observed in Fig. 5B. We will therefore re-write the necessary sections of the manuscript to emphasise that we cannot be certain whether the observed cell cycle defects resulting from loss of DDX3X Ser584 O-GlcNAcylation stem from G1/S phase stalling or mitotic stress followed by quiescence.

      Regarding the possibility that our observed reductions in the number of viable cells stems from stalled cell cycle progress or apoptosis, we will knock-down DDX3X and blot for cleaved caspase-3 as a marker for apoptosis to investigate the latter.

      The proposed interactome analysis of DDX3X is a tangential experiment. Given that DDX3X regulates cell cycle progression through its RNA helicase and transcriptional co-regulator functions, interactome analysis would not provide direct (or indeed, useful) readouts of how loss of DDX3X Ser584 O-GlcNAcylation affects cell cycle progression (i.e. it is possible there are significant effects on DDX3X activity without affecting the interactome).

      Weak Correlative Link: While the link between OGT/OGA and the cell cycle is well-established (seereviewSaunders et al., 2023) due to the multitude of targets subjected to this post-translational regulation, the correlative link between DDX3X mutations and cell cycle effects is further weakened by the fact that cyclin E1 knockout mice are indistinguishable from their wild-type littermates.

      DDX3X controls the transcription and translation of hundreds of genes, not just cyclin E1. For example, DDX3X controls Klf4 transcription which, in certain cell lines, regulates S-phase entry (Canizarro et al., FEBS Lett. 2018). Thus, it is possible for one candidate conveyor of the observed cell cycle defects to not produce significant phenotypes in a KO mouse. In the interests of emphasising this point, we will add a discussion point regarding the multiple pathways through which loss of DDX3X O-GlcNAcylation may affect the cell cycle in the discussion.

      Throughout the text, the authors refer to figures out of alphanumerical order, making the reading experience extremely difficult. To enhance readability, it is essential to present figures in a logical, sequential manner. Additionally, for further comments I would suggest to implement the text with line numbers.

      We will correct the text to ensure all figures are referenced and presented in a sequential manner, and line numbers will be added.

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      Referee #3

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary:

      In the manuscript, Mitchell et al. explore the interplay between O-GlcNAcylation and the cell cycle, with a particular focus on how DDX3X, an RNA helicase of the DEAD box family, influences the G1/S phase transition. The authors begin with a bioinformatics strategy to identify patterns of correlation between cell cycle regulators and the enzymes OGT and OGA in a dataset of temporal transcriptomics of the human prefrontal cortex. They then narrow their analysis to DDX3X, due to its strong potential correlation with the cell cycle and its candidacy as a substrate for O-GlcNAcylation. Subsequently, the authors biochemically investigate how O-GlcNAcylation regulates DDX3X. Finally, given that DDX3X has been previously shown to regulate cyclin E1, the authors assess the effect of DDX3X depletion on the cell cycle in vitro.

      Major comments:

      Despite the authors' interesting identification of a novel substrate for O-GlcNAcylation, most conclusions drawn from the study are correlative. The manuscript suffers from three major drawbacks:

      1. Lack of Appropriate Model System: Although the authors initially address the role of O-GlcNAcylation (OGT/OGA) and DDX3X in cerebral development, given that mutations in these enzymes are causative for neurological malformations and disabilities, the experiments addressing the consequences of DDX3X or OGT silencing are predominantly performed in HEK293T cells rather than a nervous system model. This limits the relevance of the findings.
      2. Inconclusive Cell Cycle Analysis: The authors' analysis regarding cell cycle characterization is not sufficiently conclusive. First, they need to accurately define the link between DDX3X and cyclin E1. The study they refer to (Lai et al., 2010) is rather superficial, and requires a more in-depth analysis, in order to appreciate the existing link between the two given molecules. Indeed, the current experiments do not clarify whether cells are stuck in G1 due to cyclin E1 downregulation or if cyclin E1 is downregulated because cells are blocked in G1. A suggested approach would be to perform rescue experiments with cyclin E1 overexpression, by using Quantitative Image-Based Cytometry (QIBC) or flow cytometry (EdU incorporation + Hoecsht staining) to monitor cell cycle changes and define the interplay between these molecules mechanistically. However, this alone cannot exclude the presence of alternative substrates of DDX3X regulation influencing cell cycle phase transition. A more holistic approach, such as an interactome analysis through mass spectrometry, may be helpful. Additionally, mild mitotic stress often results in cell cycle arrest in the subsequent G0/G1 phase, which can resemble the G1/S transition impairment described by the authors. Consequently, the statement "Here we identify Ser584 O-GlcNAcylation of DDX3X (...) as a key regulator of G1/S transition" is not well-supported (to do so, the authors should define the temporal pattern of such post-translational modification). It would also be interesting to determine whether the reduction in cell viability is due to a simple slowdown of the cell cycle or apoptotic induction.
      3. Weak Correlative Link: While the link between OGT/OGA and the cell cycle is well-established (see review Saunders et al., 2023) due to the multitude of targets subjected to this post-translational regulation, the correlative link between DDX3X mutations and cell cycle effects is further weakened by the fact that cyclin E1 knockout mice are indistinguishable from their wild-type littermates.

      Minor comments:

      Throughout the text, the authors refer to figures out of alphanumerical order, making the reading experience extremely difficult. To enhance readability, it is essential to present figures in a logical, sequential manner. Additionally, for further comments I would suggest to implement the text with line numbers.

      Significance

      Overall, the major novelty of the manuscript is the interesting link between DDX3X, its O-GlcNAcylation, and cell cycle regulation. However, this section requires the most intense revision to ensure robustness and clarity of the findings.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Missense mutations in OGT are causative in X-linked intellectual disability disorders, termed OGT-CDG. This paper identifies O-GlcNAcylation (OGN) at Ser584 of DDX3X, a known intellectual disability and microcephaly associated protein, as a regulator of G1/S transition, inhibiting the proteasome degradation of DDX3X. This OGN site controls the degradation of DDX3X. Lack of OGN at Ser 584 results in more rapid degradation of the protein, which affects the cell cycle. The study shows that dysregulation of DDX3X-dependent translation and concomitant impairments in cortical neurogenesis as a pathway disrupted in OGT-CDG. Overall, a well written paper. The data support the author's conclusions.

      Figure 6 D - text last paragraph on page 16, and in supplement where you use RL2 - You need to do the control to show that RL2 staining goes away in the presence of free GlcNAc or when you galactosylate the protein. This control would indicate that you are detecting the sugar, not the protein backbone.

      Significance

      This well prepared paper is highly significant. 1) It provides mechanistic insights into a cause of human intellectual disability; 2) It helps elucidate the role of O-GlcNAcylation in nutrient regulation of the cell cycle. 3) It provides more data on the roles of DDX3X.

      The paper is of significant general interest.

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      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      O-GlcNAcylation is a post-translational modification and plays a crucial role in neurodevelopment. Variants of O-GlcNAc transferase (OGT) are linked to OGT Congenital Disorder of Glycosylation (OGT-CDG), a syndrome causing intellectual disability. Microcephaly in OGT-CDG patients suggests the involvement of cell cycle dysregulation and abnormal neurogenesis. Mitchell et al. identify Ser584 O-GlcNAcylation of DDX3X, a protein associated with intellectual disability and microcephaly, as a regulator of G1/S-phase transition. They show that this PTM of DDX3X stabilises and prevents the targeting of DDX3X to the proteasome and therefore its degradation. Reduced DDX3X levels in an OGT-CDG mouse model and decreased expression of DDX3X-target gene cyclin E1 suggest impaired cell cycle control and cortical neurogenesis as pathways affected in OGT-CDG.

      This study introduces DDX3X as a novel target for O-GlcNAcylation, which enhances its stability and ensures proper regulation of the cell cycle, particularly through its target cyclin E1. While the findings regarding DDX3X O-GlcNAcylation and the identification of the modified residue are compelling, addressing several issues regarding the link between O-GlcNAc of DDX3X-cell cycle regulation and neurodevelopmental impact would enhance the study's robustness.

      Major points requiring attention:

      1. Although HEK cells are effective for studying molecular mechanisms and post-translational modifications through siRNA and variant overexpression manipulations, they lack functional relevance in a neuronal context. Consequently, the connection between molecular findings and observed phenotypes in mice is tenuous. It is suggested that the authors attempt to replicate these results (Figures 4 and 5) using a neuronal differentiation model employing ESCs or iPSCs.
      2. While employing variant overexpression following siRNA-mediated reduction of the endogenous protein is a direct method to illustrate the effects of mutated DDX3X variants, the authors stress a connection between this regulatory mechanism and neurodevelopmental defects. Therefore, it would be justifiable for the authors to create cell lines by editing the endogenous DDX3X gene and demonstrate the effects of O-GlcNAc, disruption of DDX3X target levels, and cell cycle regulation. Combining these approaches (from points 1 and 2), the authors could generate iPSC/ESC lines containing the DDX3X mutations and examine their effects within a neuronal differentiation context. Such an approach would significantly enhance the impact of this study.
      3. The finding of diminished DDX3X levels in OGT mutant mice and the consequent reduction in O-GlcNAc represents a pivotal connection to the observed neurodevelopmental defects in OGT-CDG. However, this aspect of the research remains somewhat unclear, as it has not been definitively demonstrated that O-GlcNAc levels of DDX3X in OGT mutant mice are indeed decreased. Without this confirmation, the causal relationship between OGT malfunction, O-GlcNAc, and reduced DDX3X levels cannot be firmly established. There is a possibility of indirect effects, and merely observing correlation does not suffice to draw the robust conclusions presented in this paper. To address the uncertainty surrounding Figure 6D, attributed to the antibody's declared lack of specificity, the authors should conduct additional experiments.
      4. The study places significant emphasis on this phenotype and seeks to elucidate it, at least partially, through the O-GlcNAcylation of DDX3X. However, a precise description or depiction of this phenotype is absent. Understanding the phenotype of the OGT-CDG mice necessitates consulting existing literature. The authors ought to contemplate providing brain sections with relevant staining to (i) showcase the microcephaly phenotype and (ii) bolster their assertion regarding the dysregulated cell cycle by utilising appropriate marker stainings for the progenitor cells during embryonic development.

      Minor issue:

      Consider replacing in cellulo with in vitro

      Significance

      The study provides an in-depth biochemical analysis of the O-GlcNAcylation of DDX3X, identifying it as a novel target. However, limitations stem from the absence of a robust causal connection between OGT-DDX3X and neurodevelopmental effects, as well as the utilization of HEK cells rather than a neuronal model. Moreover, the study would gain from exploring endogenous proteins instead of solely relying on siRNA and OE methods to investigate the cellular and functional impacts of DDX3X O-GlcNAcylation. Overall, the study provides a mechanistic advance regarding O-GlcNAc PTM and the targets of OGT. This work could be of interest to audiences interested in neurodevelopment, as well as PTM of non-histone proteins.

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      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Metabotropic glutamate receptors (mGLuRs) play a key role in regulating neuronal activity and related behaviors. In different brain regions these receptors can be expressed presynaptically and postsynaptically in different classes of neurons. Therefore, it is difficult to predict the effects of systemically applied drugs that act on these receptors. Here, the authors harness the power of photopharmacology, applying modulators that can be activated or inactivated by light with spatial precision, to address this problem. Their stated goal is to determine the role of mGluRs in regulating pain behaviors, and the circuit mechanisms driving this regulation. Their findings suggest that mGluRs acting in medial prefrontal cortex and thalamus drive antinociception in animals with neuropathic pain, whereas these receptors drive pronociception when acting in the amygdala. Their circuit analysis suggests that, in the amygdala, mGluRs act by decreasing feedforward inhibition of the output neurons. These findings have the potential to affect the development of targeted treatment for pain and related disorders. The elegant photopharmacological approaches will likely inform future studies attempting to distinguish the action of neuroactive drugs in different brain regions.

      We thank the reviewer for the insightful evaluation of our study.

      Reducing the impact of these studies are several methodological, analytical, and interpretation issues.

      The authors report that "the effect of optical manipulations of photosensitive mGlu5 NAMs in individual brain regions in pain models has been studied before". It is, therefore, not immediately clear what is novel in the present study.

      We have clarified this in the following statement (page 3, lines 15‐17): “It remains to be determined if region‐specific actions play a role in the overall analgesic activity of mGlu5 receptor NAMs, considering that opposite actions have been reported”. The subsequent paragraph nicely explains the novelty of our approach, which is based on the combined use of a drug activated by light (JF‐NP‐26) and another drug inactivated by light (alloswitch‐1) to determine which region is sufficient and/or necessary for the analgesic effect of systemic mGlu5 receptor NAMs. In the Discussion (page 7) we state that “To the best of our knowledge, this is the first study to employ photopharmacological tools to compare and contrast distinct roles of mGlu5 receptors in different regions of the pain matrix”.

      The reliance only on reflexive measures of pain, especially in a study that examines the role of "affective and cognitive aspects of pain and pain modulation".

      The main endpoint of the study was not to examine the cognitive and affective aspects of pain, although some of the regions examined are involved in these aspects of pain besides the regulation of sensory aspects (pain thresholds). However, we followed the kind suggestion and measured depression‐like and risk‐taking (anxiety‐like) behaviors in mice. To optimize the number of mice and be still consistent with the number of mice approved by the regulatory agency we used the following groups of mice for the evaluation of risk‐taking behavior with the light‐dark box: (i) sham‐operated mice treated with vehicle; (ii) CCI mice treated with vehicle; (iii) CCI mice treated with JF‐NP‐26 without light activation; and (iv) CCI mice treated with JF‐NP‐26 and irradiated with activating light (the test cannot be performed in the same mice before and after light activation to avoid habituation); depression‐like behavior with the tail suspension test was performed in two separate groups of mice: (i) CCI mice treated with JF‐NP‐26 with no light; and (ii) CCI mice treated with JF‐NP‐26 and light activation. All mice had been implanted with optic fibers in the basolateral amygdala.

      Data are shown in the new Supplementary Fig. S4 and reported in the Results section (page 5) as follows: “Knowing that mGlu5 receptors in the BLA shape susceptibility to stress and fear in rodents (35, 36), we also measured depression‐like and risk‐taking behavior after light‐induced activation of JF‐NP26 in the BLA of neuropathic mice. Light‐induced activation of JF‐NP‐26 decreased risk‐taking hence increased anxiety‐like behavior in CCI mice as shown by the decreased number of entries into, and reduced time spent in, the light compartment of the light‐dark box (Fig. S4a‐c). Depression‐like behavior assessed with the tail‐suspension test was unchanged in CCI mice after light‐induced irradiation of JF‐NP‐26 in the BLA (Fig. S4d).”

      The inclusion of only males is unfortunate because of known, significant sex differences in neuronal circuits driving pain conditions, in both preclinical models (including form work by the authors) and in clinical populations.

      We are aware that there are important sex differences in the pain neuraxis, but this study was not about sex differences. The goal was to evaluate any region‐specific actions of systemically administered compounds (mGlu5 NAMs) and the contribution and requirement of specific brain regions to the observed drug effects, using photopharmacology and drugs activated or inactivated/reactivated by light. This analysis would have been less straightforward in female mice given for example that it is known that mGlu5 receptors interact with estrogen receptors. This aspect could be addressed in a future project. The present study provides the basis for comparative studies in females.

      The elegant slice experiments (especially Fig. 3) were designed to probe circuit mechanisms through which mGluRs act in different brain regions. These experiments also provide a control to assess whether the photopharmacological compounds act as advertised. Surprisingly, the effect size produced by these compounds on neuronal activity are rather small (and, at times, seems driven by outliers). How this small effect affects the interpretation of the behavioral findings is not clear.

      These small effect sizes should also be considered when interpreting the circuit actions studied here.

      We greatly appreciate your insightful comments and constructive feedback on our findings. The mean effect sizes observed in certain experiments are quite small, but effects or changes were very consistent. And we illustrate this now by including lines to connect individual data points for the same neuron in the modified Figure 3 (f, g, n, o) to show consistent changes observed in the EPSC and IPSC graphs. We would like to add that is not quite clear how neuronal effects translate into behavioral consequence, how much of a change in individual neurons or in a population of neurons or change of a certain magnitude is sufficient and required. These are all interesting questions, but the results of our behavioral and electrophysiological data match quite nicely, including differential or opposing drug effects.

      Some of the sample sizes are as small as n=3. Without an a priori power analysis, it is difficult to assess the validity of the analyses.

      The authors present intriguing data on changes in InsP levels in some (but not all) animals after injury, but not in sham animals. They also report an increase in the expression of mGLuRs expression in some, but not all brain regions. These findings are not discussed. It is not clear how these selective changes in mGluR expression and activity might affect the interpretation of the photopharmacological results.

      We performed new experiments to increase sample size in PI experiments in the infralimbic and prelimbic cortices where the n was low. Now the data are more solid. New statistical values are reported in the legend of Fig. 1. We also added a discussion of the signaling data (page 9) as follows:

      “We found that mGlu5 receptor‐mediated PI hydrolysis was significantly amplified in all subregions of the contralateral mPFC and in the contralateral amygdala after induction of neuropathic pain whereas mGlu5 receptor protein levels were significantly increased only in the contralateral infralimbic cortex of neuropathic mice. This suggests that, at least in the anterior cingulate cortex, prelimbic cortex, and basolateral amygdala, mGlu5 receptors become hyperactive after induction of pain. It remains to be determined if this is mediated by an enhanced coupling of mGlu5 receptors to Gq/11 proteins, increased expression of phospholipase‐C or other mechanisms. Interestingly, mGlu5 receptor signaling was down‐regulated in the thalamus of neuropathic mice, but mGlu5 blockade in the thalamus still had antinociceptive effects (see below). Downregulation of mGlu5 receptor signaling in the thalamus might represent a compensatory mechanism aimed at mitigating pain in neuropathic mice.”

      The behavioral data seem to represent discrete, and not continuous variables. The statistical tests applied are likely inappropriate for these analyses.

      The behavioral values reported here represent measurements of force (g) required to elicit a reflex (i.e., reflex thresholds) and can be considered continuous variables. The statistical tests used for the behavioral experiments included either t‐test to determine if the difference between two groups was statistically significant or One‐Way ANOVA (repeated measures when appropriate) to determine if there were any statistically significant differences between the means of three or more groups. This form of analysis for the outcome measures in this study is well‐established in the literature.

      The authors assume (and state in the abstract) that they can selectively stimulate BLA afferents to the neocortex. This is technically highly unlikely.

      We appreciate the reviewer's insightful comment regarding the technical challenges associated with the selective stimulation of BLA afferents to the neocortex. We are aware that the electrical stimulation does not allow the exclusive stimulation of a specific pathway, though BLA afferents form the major component of afferent fibers running in the layer IV of the infralimbic cortex on their way to targets in layer II/III and layer V or infra‐ and pre‐limbic cortices.

      Our previous work (Kiritoshi et al., 2016) compared directly electrical and optogenetic stimulation in the mPFC, and found that they match, suggesting that electrical stimulation provides a reliable means to activate BLA input in the mPFC. We acknowledge the technical limitations of selective BLA activation with electrical stimulation, though we are confident that our approach allowed the investigation of mGlu5 manipulations in the BLA‐mPFC circuitry. We have modified the abstract to read as follows: “Electrophysiological analysis showed that alloswitch‐1 increased excitatory synaptic responses in prelimbic pyramidal neurons evoked by stimulation of presumed BLA input, and decreased BLA‐driven feedforward inhibition of amygdala output neurons”.

      The results from the experiment on rostroventral medulla (RVM) neurons are less than convincing because only a "trend" towards decreased excitation is reported. As above, without consideration of effect size, it is hard to appreciate the significance of these findings. The absence of a demonstration of a classical ON Cell firing pattern is also unfortunate.

      We appreciate this observation. Based on the Reviewer’s suggestion, we report below the effect size of optical modulation in the prelimbic cortex on RVM activity, according to Cohen’s d calculation from ttests (now shown in the Table 1). This information is also included in Results (page 6).

      Moreover, in this study we classified ON‐ or OFF‐cells based on their firing patterns relative to nocifensive withdrawal responses (H.L. Fields and M.M. Heinricher 1985). As ON‐cells with high basal firing can be easily misclassified as NEUTRAL‐cells (N.M. Barbaro, M.M. Heinricher, H.L. Fields, 1986), potential NEUTRAL‐cells with continuous spontaneous activity were verified by giving a brief bolus of anesthetic to the point that the withdrawal reflex was abolished. Indeed, firing of spontaneously active ON‐cells slows or stops with this manipulation, which unmasks reflex‐related responses. This is now reported and explained in Methods (page 14).

    1. Résumé de la vidéo [00:00:01][^1^][1] - [00:18:34][^2^][2]:

      Cette vidéo présente une conférence d'Olivier Vors lors de la Journée Jean Zoro 2018, où il explore le monde des "élèves difficiles". Il discute des défis rencontrés par les enseignants dans les établissements prioritaires et propose des stratégies pour engager ces élèves en alternant entre le travail et le jeu.

      Points forts: + [00:01:35][^3^][3] Comprendre les élèves difficiles * Présentation d'une méthode pour entrer dans leur monde * Importance de comprendre les élèves avant d'intervenir * Distinction entre adolescents en difficulté et élèves difficiles + [00:03:58][^4^][4] Engagement des élèves * Identification des récurrences dans l'engagement des élèves * Équilibre entre faire le travail demandé et s'amuser * Exemple d'un élève alternant entre les tâches et le jeu + [00:10:16][^5^][5] Le monde des élèves * Alternance entre travail et jeu comme constante anthropologique * Activités fragmentées et courtes des élèves * Recherche d'occasions pour s'amuser ou travailler + [00:15:18][^6^][6] Activité de l'enseignant * Analyse de l'activité de l'enseignant face aux élèves difficiles * Tolérance empathique aux déviances mineures * Importance de comprendre les freins et motivations des élèves

    1. exceto

      Todos os ganhos habituais integram o salário-de-benefício, à exceção do 13º salário.

      No entanto, observe que o salário-de-contribuição contabiliza o 13º salário, conforme art. 28, § 7º. da Lei 8.212.

      Nesse sentido:

      • STF, ADI 1.049, j. em 2023: É constitucional a exclusão da gratificação natalina (13º salário) da base de cálculo de benefício previdenciário, notadamente diante da inexistência de ofensa à garantia constitucional da irredutibilidade do valor dos benefícios da seguridade social.

      • Súmula 688, STF: É legítima a incidência da contribuição previdenciária sobre o 13º salário.

      Conjugando a decisão da ADI com a Súmula, percebemos que o 13º salário é objeto de contribuição previdenciária e, portanto, ele integra o salário de contribuição para esse fim. Por outro lado, ele não integra a base de cálculo dos benefícios previdenciários, ou seja, o seu valor não deve ser considerado no cálculo do salário de benefício.

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    1. o comércio mundial crescer mais rapidamente do que a produção mundial

      O aumento do comércio mundial é sinal menos do aumento da produção que do seu deslocamento em relação ao mercado consumidor, o que é inédito, pois, historicamente, o maior mercado consumidor de mercadorias era também o maior mercado produtor. Hoje, a produção se concentra na China, e o consumo, nos EUA e na Europa Ocidental.

    1. Un interprete, invece, è un programma che esegue il codice sorgente direttamente, istruzione per istruzione, senza produrre un file eseguibile separato. L’interprete legge una riga di codice, la traduce in codice macchina e la esegue immediatamente. Questo processo viene ripetuto per ogni riga del codice sorgente.

      @antonio c'è un vantaggio nell'utilizzare un interprete al posto di un compilatore? o sono scelte diverse ma concettualmente equivalenti?

    1. La inducción del parto está indicada cuando el riesgo percibido de continuar el embarazo para la mujer o el feto rebasa los riesgos del parto o la inducción farmacológica.

      Cuando esta indicado la induccion del parto

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      Reply to the reviewers

      Reply to reviewers

      First, we would like to extend our gratitude to all reviewers for their supportive and enthusiastic feedback, which acknowledges our study as an interesting, well-executed, and well-documented contribution to the field. We are also pleased that the novelty and significance of our work have been recognized and appreciated.

      As highlighted by reviewers 2, 3, and 4, our research represents a substantial advancement in understanding the mechanisms that coordinate the development of different cell types. Our findings have broader implications for developmental biology. We also thank the reviewers for their valuable insights, which have significantly improved the overall readability of our manuscript. We have carefully considered all minor corrections and text modifications they had suggested and made amendments accordingly.

      The reviewers proposed several complementary experiments to enhance and clarify our points. We have conducted most of these experiments, with one exception (detailed below), and incorporated the corresponding results into this revised version of the manuscript.

      Additionally, reviewers agreed that higher resolution images depicting the interactions between tendon and myoblast membranes would strengthen our manuscript. In response, we are pleased to present new high-resolution images of Ama::EGFP localization with respect to tendon and muscle cells, obtained using Zeiss Airyscan technology. We also provide new images using newly generated flies that allow simultaneous observation of both myoblast and tendon membranes.

      We believe these modifications substantially enhance the quality and interest of our results, as already highlighted by the reviewers.

      __Referees cross-commenting: __

      All reviewers agreed* that "this is an interesting study that is well done and well documented. I agree with reviewer 1 that the study would further benefit from better imaging of the cellular extensions of tendons and myoblasts to see how both cell types interact." *

      Reply: We agree with this point. To address it, we analyzed leg discs from Sr-Gal4>UAS-myrGFP line (labelling tendon membranes) crossed with a newly generated line R32D05::CD4TdTomato (myoblast specific expression of membrane tagged Tomato protein). Using confocal Zeiss Airy Scan technology, we generated high resolution images for which both tendon cell extensions and myoblast membranes are simultaneously visualized. These images are included in the new Figure 2 (O, P and O', P'). To be noticed: as we also provide new high resolution images of Ama::EGFP and Nrt localizations (Fig. 2 M, N and M', N'), we removed images of zoom in of 5h APF leg disc.

      REVIEWER 1

      Moucaud et al carried out single cell sequencing on myoblasts from the developing drosophila leg muscles, focusing on gene expressions overlapping with tendon and muscle cells. This study proposes that neuronal cell adhesion molecules Ama and Nrt interact in myoblast and tendon adhesion to support tendon and in proliferation of muscle progenitors. This study traces Ama and Nrt expression with various drosophila mutant strains and provides evidence to support its claims using single cell sequencing, immuno-fluoresence and in situ hybridisation. *The authors report novel markers to study the interactions between muscle and tendon progenitors in the Drosophila leg provide convincing evidence of their functions in muscle and muscle and tendon formation. *

      • The authors report novel markers to study the interactions between muscle and tendon progenitors in the Drosophila leg provide convincing evidence of their functions in muscle and muscle and tendon formation. *

      __ Reply:__ We are grateful to the Reviewer 1 for his/her supportive comments on the quality of our work.

      Page 2 "cell types*..." might be worth including other cell types such as vascular/endothelial if listing all cell types in the limb, as the sentence is suggesting. *

      __ Reply__: "blood vessels" have been added as components of the limb musculoskeletal system.

      Reviewer's comment: The authors discuss the interactions between the myoblasts and tendon cells but do not show any cellular resolution of the interaction between the cells and the secreted adhesion proteins. It would enhance the manuscript if the authors could show high resolution images of these cellular interactions with the secreted protein in vivo.

      __ Reply__: see reply to referees cross-commenting about newly generated high-resolution images shown in Fig. 2.

      Lots of examples of definite article (the) missing throughout the text.

      Reply: The text has been edited and missing articles added

      Second line of Abstract does not flow: Ama encodes secreted proteins to "Ama encodes a secreted protein"

      __ Reply__ the correction has been made accordingly

      2nd para Intro- this para is essentially discussing vertebrate limb muscle/tendon precursors, although includes a non-vertebrate citation. It could be helpful to (briefly) compare/contrast the non-vertebrate vs vertebrate literature on this topic.

      __ Reply__: Indeed, this paragraph is primarily focused on the development of the musculoskeletal system in vertebrates. The comparison (from a molecular standpoint) with the muscle system of the Drosophila leg appears in the following paragraph. For clarity, we have included a brief, more general description (end of second paragraph) about the muscle/tendon system in Drosophila to highlight certain divergences between vertebrate and invertebrate systems and to introduce the subsequent paragraph.

      "in limb of chick embryo add "the limb"

      __ Reply:__ the correction has been made accordingly

      p6 because these two antibodies were raised in rabbit, as the Twist antibody, needs some additional explanatory text.

      __ Reply__: We have modified the text to give a more accurate explanation: "Because these two antibodies were raised in rabbit, as was the Twist antibody, we could not use this latter to visualize the myoblasts"

      P9 discussion creeping into results section-with some speculation on Ama forming homophilic adhesions which has not been experimentally tested.

      __ Reply:__ Because we chose to submit this work as a short format paper, Results and Discussion sections are indeed combined. However, we agree that homophilic adhesion properties of Ama have been shown only in cell culture and not tested in physiological context. To clarify this point, we have modified the corresponding part of the text and only suggest that Ama could directly bind to membranes through its putative GPI modification as proposed by Seeger et al.

      Ama depletion affects both viability and the proliferation rate of leg disc myoblasts (in a Nrt-independent way) Does it have similar role in tendon precursors? Could the authors provide any evidence of apoptosis given proposed role of Ama in glial cells?

      __ Reply: __As asked by Reviewer 1, we have tested these two points and included the results in suppl figure 3 (A-C). As expected, the proliferation rate of tendon cells is not affected as we have previously showed that tendon cells are post-mitotic cells (Laurichesse et al. 2021). Moreover, we now show that Ama depletion does not lead to apoptosis of tendon cells. See Supp. Figure 3 (A-C), the main text has also been modified accordingly.

      REVIEWER 2:

      In this well-written, comprehensive, and interesting manuscript, the authors study the molecular circuitry that supports the coordinated activity of tendon cells and myoblasts during development. As the authors themselves point out in the introduction, the assembly of tissues within the musculoskeletal system provides a particularly attractive system in which to study how different cell types coordinate their behaviours to form higher-order structures. Using single-cell transcriptomics, the authors first identify the cell adhesion molecule Ama and transmembrane protein Nrt as enriched in Drosophila myoblasts and tendon cells. Their transcriptomic data suggest that Nrt is specifically expressed in the tendon cells while Ama is expressed in both. They support these data with a variety of in situ, antibody, and endogenous stainings. Using a series of genetic manipulations, they then convincingly show that Ama controls the total number of myoblasts during the larval stages: Ama knockdown is associated with both decreased proliferation and increased apoptosis of myoblasts. Ama's role in regulating myoblast number is shown to be independent of Nrt and likely under the control of the FGF/RTK pathway. Finally, the authors show that the loss of either Nrt or Ama activity is associated with a loss of adhesion between myoblasts and tendon cells and with the stunted growth of the long tendon. Thus, their data point to Ama playing dual roles in muscle development by regulating both myoblast number and cell adhesion.

      * I very much enjoyed reading the paper, which I think makes an important contribution to our understanding of both the developing musculature and inter-cell-type coordination during development more broadly. I have only a handful of grammatical errors to point out.*

      __Reply: __We appreciate these enthusiastic and supportive comments, and we would like to thank the Reviewer for highlighting the broader contribution of our work to the understanding of the mechanisms of coordination between different cell types.

      *- Grammar: 'This prompted us to use Drosophila model to search' should read 'This prompted us to use the Drosophila model to search' - Grammar: '...identify Neurotactin (Nrt) and its binding partner, Amalgam (Ama) as candidates...' should read '...identify Neurotactin (Nrt) and its binding partner, Amalgam (Ama), as candidates...' - Grammar: 'As tendon precursors in leg disc' should read 'As tendon precursors in the leg disc'. - Grammar : '...we performed a series of in situ hybridization...' should read '...we performed a series of in situ hybridizations...' - Grammar: 'Because these two antibodies were raised in rabbit, as the Twist antibody' should read 'Because these two antibodies were raised in rabbit, as was the Twist antibody' - Grammar: 'Statistical analysis reveals an increase myoblast total number when overexpressing an activated ERK' should read 'Statistical analysis reveals an increase in the total number of myoblasts when overexpressing an activated ERK' - Grammar: The following section header needs rephrasing: 'Ama, potential downstream effector of FGF pathway in the regulation of myoblast number'. Maybe 'Ama is a potential downstream effector of the FGF pathway in the regulation of myoblast number' or Ama: a potential downstream effector of the FGF pathway in the regulation of myoblast number. - Grammar: 'whereas its reduction (UAS-StyRNAi) lead to more myoblasts' should read 'whereas its reduction (UAS-StyRNAi) leads to more myoblasts' - For clarity 'The expression of the constitutively active form of ERK could rescue the phenotype of Ama depletion in glial cells (Ariss et al. 2020)' might read better as 'Previous work has shown that the expression of the constitutively active form of ERK can rescue the phenotype of Ama depletion in glial cells (Ariss et al. 2020). Therefore, we tried...' - Grammar: 'showed a significant higher number of myoblasts compared' should read 'showed a significantly higher number of myoblasts compared' - Grammar: 'Another, not exclusive, possibility' should read Another, non-mutually exclusive, possibility'. - Grammar: 'We measured the length of the tilt relatively to the length' should read '. We measured the length of the tilt relative to the length' *

      Reply: All the modifications suggested above by Reviewer 2 are now included in the text.

      REVIEWER 3:

      *Myoblast and tendon precursors stem from different developmental origins. Hence, they need to find each other to build a functional muscle-skeleton. How they do so is an exciting biological problem, not only for this reviewer who is working on Drosophila muscle development, too. As we currently understand little about how myoblasts communicate with tendons during development, I find this manuscript a generally interesting contribution unravelling a new mechanism of cell-cell communication between these two cell types. It proposes a role for 2 interesting proteins that are little studied. Furthermore, Drosophila leg muscle-tendon development is complex and results in an intricate final architecture. Thus, a better understanding of its molecular mechanisms of development is exciting to this reviewer and to the muscle and tendon fields. *

      Reply: We express our gratitude to Reviewer 3 for his/her keen interest in our work and for emphasizing its significance within the field of developmental biology.

      *While some Ama mRNA expression in myoblasts was confirmed with in situ hybridisation, it was also shown that Ama mRNA is expressed in other sources including tendon precursors. As the interesting AmaGFP protein overlapping with the developing tendon cells is found at some distance from the myoblasts, the source for this Ama protein population is not entirely clear. To identify if it is secreted from myoblasts I suggest to stain for Ama-GFP in the muscle-specific Ama knock-down discs at 5h APF. This could use the late knock-down condition. *

      __ Reply:__ In Suppl Fig.2 in a close-up view of the femur region, we show that at 5h APF Ama is transcribed in addition to myoblasts also in the developing tilt tendon. This tendon associated Ama expression is specific as it is detected after myoblast specific Ama knockdown. Thus, at 5h APF, the Ama-GFP signal detected at the interface of muscle and tendon precursors could in part correspond to Ama secreted by the tilt tendon cells. However, we also observed clear Ama-GFP signal at the interface of myoblasts and tendon precursors at 0h APF when Ama is not yet transcriptionally activated in tilt tendon precursors (not shown). Thus, we are confident that the myoblasts are the main source of secreted Ama protein that ensure close proximity of myoblast and tendon precursor cells. A view supported by the loss of myoblast-tendon cell proximity in myoblast-specific Ama knockdown. However, to clarify this point, we immunostained myoblast-specific Ama knock-down discs for the Ama protein in at 5h APF as suggested. As stated in the text, we were concerned that GFP tag could influence the life-time of the Ama protein, as GFP itself is pretty stable. This is why we used anti-Ama antibody kindly provided by Dr. Silman to determine whether myoblast-specific Ama knockdown (using R32D05-Gal4 driver) would completely abolish Ama protein at 5h APF. We indeed observed a strong reduction of Ama protein at this stage indicating that the contribution of Ama protein from tendon cells is minimal (but cannot be completely excluded), with myoblasts remaining the major source at this stage. This new result is now presented in Suppl Fig. 2M-P. This result is also in accordance with our new result showing that tendon-specific AmaKD has no effect on tendon growth (see reply to the comment below regarding tendon length). In light of this new result, we have modified the text accordingly in the corresponding paragraph (p5-6).

      Generally, it might be useful to move the part of Figure 2 that shows the Ama-GFP Nrt co-staining to the later part in the text that addresses the interaction of both cell types and keep the autonomous Ama role in muscle for the start of paper only.

      __ Reply: __We have indeed debated extensively about this possibility before submitting this work. While such a presentation would have some logical coherence, it also has the disadvantage of having to resume, at least partially, the expression of Ama, leading to certain redundancies. Additionally, we chose to begin with a comparison of the new myoblast transcriptomic data with pre-established tendon data to highlight the presence of ligand-receptor pairs. In this context, it seemed to us more pertinent to present the expression patterns of Ama and Nrt together in the initial figures.

      To quantify the interaction of the myoblast cell membranes and the tendon cells better it would be useful to combine sr>CAAXmCherry with a myoblast membrane maker (possibly Him-CD8-GFP or use R15B03-Gal4 with R79D08-lexA). This could also improve the "mean distance" measurements. As currently presented, it is not so clear how the mean distance was measured. It could be helpful to indicate some examples in zoom-in vies on Figure 5. Does a distance of 4 µm in wild type mean that the myoblast is not touching the tendon precursors, or is only the myoblast nucleus that is Twi positive at this distance?

      __ Reply: We are grateful to this reviewer for its relevant suggestion. Thus, as stated above (referees cross-commenting), we provide new high-resolution images with labelled membranes of both tendon cells and myoblasts (fig 2 O-P). As shown here, myoblast membranes are very closed to each other, and nuclei occupy an important part of myoblast volumes. So, we found more accurate to use the myoblast nucleus (stained with Twist antibody) to detect individual myoblasts using Imaris Spot function rather than myoblast membranes. We also believe that the distances between the center of myoblast nuclei and the tendon surface are representative of the distance between these two cell types as nucleus myoblast occupies most of the cell volume. We addressed this point in the new Suppl. Fig.5. __Regarding the distance of 4____ µm: As mentioned in the original text, the 4 µm distance represents the average distance between myoblasts and the tendon surface in wild type discs. We do not perceive this distance as indicative of a threshold distinguishing myoblasts that interact physically with tendons from those that do not. We rather use this mean distance to quantify the distribution of myoblasts around the tendon and their dispersion/mis-distribution in Ama and Nrt knockdown leg discs. To clarify this point, we have modified the corresponding paragraph: "This result indicates that AmaKD leads to myoblasts mis-distribution around the tilt, suggesting that the reduction of Ama level could affect myoblast-tendon adhesion".

      For a better understanding of how the mean distance was measured, we added a new Supplementary Figure 5 (rather than a zoom-in in the main figure as suggested by this reviewer), with a corresponding description of how this distance was measured in addition to the explanations in the material and method section.

      Is the tendon elongation phenotype seen after Ama RNAi in muscle and in Nrt mutants due to the fact that myoblasts are further away from tendons or is it an Ama/Nrt role that is autonomous to tendons? This could be tested by assaying tendon elongation after tendon-specific Ama knock-down as shown in Figure S2.

      __ Reply: __As asked by this reviewer, we have performed this experiment using Sr-Gal4 driver to induce tendon-specific Ama knockdown and assessed tendon elongation using R79D08-lexA>lexAop-GFP marker. Overall statistical analysis is now included in Fig 5F and G graphs. This analysis shows that tendon-specific Ama knockdown does not affect tendon elongation. This is in concordance with the fact that Ama knockdown in myoblasts leads to tendon defects similar to that of Nrt loss of function in tendon clearly indicating that the observed phenotypes are due to Ama's role in myoblasts. This does not exclude an additional subsequent Ama function in growing tendon precursors in later development.

      Minor : Is Figure 2Q a zoom-in from Figure 2P? If yes, it would be helpful to indicate the rough position of it in the lower magnification image.

      Reply: Figure 2Q was not a zoom-in from Figure 2P in the previous version of the paper. As stated above Fig. 2 has now been modified.

      Minor page 6 - w[1118] is with small "w".

      Reply: modifications have been made accordingly in main and figure texts.

      REVIEWER 4:

      *The manuscript is well-organized, with clear descriptions of methods and results. The use of transcriptomic datasets and gene expression analyses provides insights into the molecular mechanisms underlying the interaction between muscle and tendon precursors. *

      *The immunostaining and in situ hybridization experiments well illustrate the expression patterns of Ama and Nrt in muscle and tendon cells during leg disc development in Drosophila. *

      *The functional analyses, including knockdown experiments, support the conclusion that Ama plays a crucial role in maintaining the pool of leg muscle precursor cells and coordinating tendon and muscle precursor growth. *

      The manuscript significantly enhances our understanding of cell-cell interactions in the musculoskeletal system of Drosophila. The findings have broader implications for the field of developmental biology. In general, this manuscript provides valuable insights into the molecular processes governing leg muscle and tendon development.

      Reply: We are indebted to Reviewer 4 for highlighting that our manuscript is well-organized and well-illustrated. We are also grateful to Reviewer 4 for highlighting the valuable insights of our work.

      some aspects in the manuscript, for example how Ama regulates myoblast number and its interaction with the FGFR pathway, could be further explored or clarified.

      __ Reply:__ Regarding Ama's contribution for maintaining the myoblast pool through its interaction with the FGF pathway, we demonstrate here that, contrary to what has been proposed for glial cells, Ama acts downstream of this pathway, although we emphasize that there is a synergistic effect with the MAPK pathway inhibitor, Sprouty. These findings thus reveal complex and variable regulatory mechanisms between Ama and the FGF pathway that would require specific investigation, the entirety of which appears challenging to integrate into this same publication.

      the organization of the abstract could be improved to provide a clearer and more comprehensive overview of the study. The abstract currently lacks a structured presentation of essential components such as methods, results, and conclusions. It would greatly benefit from a more systematic arrangement.

      __ Reply:__ We have made modifications to propose a more structured abstract.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This paper suggests to apply intrinsically-motivated exploration for the discovery of robust goal states in gene regulatory networks.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well written. The biological motivation and the need for such methods are formulated extraordinarily well. The battery of experimental models is impressive.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The proposed method is compared to the random search. That says little about the performance with regard to the true steady-state goal sets. The latter could be calculated at least for a few simple ODE (e.g., BIOMD0000000454, `Metabolic Control Analysis: Rereading Reder'). The experiment with 'oscillator circuits' may not be directly interpolated to the other models.

      The lack of comparison to the ground truth goal set (attractors of ODE) from arbitrary initial conditions makes it hard to evaluate the true performance/contribution of the method. A part of the used models can be analyzed numerically using JAX, while there are models that can be analyzed analytically.

      "...The true versatility of the GRN is unknown and can only be inferred through empirical exploration and proxy metrics....": one could perform a sensitivity analysis of the ODEs, identifying stable equilibria. That could provide a proxy for the ground truth 'versatility'.

      (2) The proposed method is based on `Intrinsically Motivated Goal Exploration Processes with Automatic Curriculum Learning', which assumes state action trajectories [s_{t_0:t}, a_{t_0:t}], (2.1 Notations and Assumptions' in the IMGEP paper). However, the models used in the current work do not include external control actions, but rather only the initial conditions can be set. It is not clear from the methods whether IMGEP was adapted to this setting, and how the exploration policy was designed w/o actual time-dependent actions. What does "...generates candidate intervention parameters to achieve the current goal...."<br /> mean considering that interventions 'Sets the initial state...' as explained in Table 2?

      (3) Fig 2 shows the phase space for (ERK, RKIPP_RP) without mentioning the typical full scale of ERK, RKIPP_RP. It is unclear whether the path from (0, 0) to (~0.575, ~3.75) at t=1000 is significant on the typical scale of this phase space. is it significant on the typical scale of this phase space?

      (4) Table 2:<br /> (a) Where is 'effective intervention' used in the method?<br /> (b) In my opinion 'controllability', 'trainability', and 'versatility' are different terms. If there correspondence is important I would suggest to extend/enhance the column "Proposed Isomorphism". otherwise, it may be confusing. I don't see how this table generalizes generalizes "concepts from dynamical complex systems and behavioral sciences under a common navigation task perspective".

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      eLife assessment

      This important study develops a machine learning method to reveal hidden unknown functions and behavior in gene regulatory networks by searching parameter space in an efficient way. The evidence for some parts of the paper is still incomplete and needs systematic comparison to other methods and to the ground truth, but the work will be of broad interest to anyone working in biology of all stripes since the ideas reach beyond gene regulatory networks to revealing hidden functions in any complex system with many interacting parts.

      We thank the editors and reviewers for their positive assessment and constructive suggestions. In our response, we acknowledge the importance of systematic comparison to other methods and to the ground truth, when available. However we also emphasize the challenges associated with evaluating such methods in the context of uncovering hidden behaviors in complex biological networks as the ground truth is often unknown.  We hope that our explanations will clarify the potential of our approach in advancing the exploration of these systems.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This paper suggests to apply intrinsically-motivated exploration for the discovery of robust goal states in gene regulatory networks.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well written. The biological motivation and the need for such methods are formulated extraordinarily well. The battery of experimental models is impressive.

      We thank the reviewer for sharing interest in the research problem and for recognizing the strengths of our work.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The proposed method is compared to the random search. That says little about the performance with regard to the true steady-state goal sets. The latter could be calculated at least for a few simple ODE (e.g., BIOMD0000000454, `Metabolic Control Analysis: Rereading Reder'). The experiment with 'oscillator circuits' may not be directly interpolated to the other models.

      The lack of comparison to the ground truth goal set (attractors of ODE) from arbitrary initial conditions makes it hard to evaluate the true performance/contribution of the method. A part of the used models can be analyzed numerically using JAX, while there are models that can be analyzed analytically.

      "...The true versatility of the GRN is unknown and can only be inferred through empirical exploration and proxy metrics....": one could perform a sensitivity analysis of the ODEs, identifying stable equilibria. That could provide a proxy for the ground truth 'versatility'.

      We agree with the reviewer that one primary concern is to properly evaluate the effectiveness of the proposed method. However, as we move toward complex pathways, knowledge of the “true” steady-state goal sets is often unknown which is where the use of machine learning methods as the one we propose are particularly interesting (but challenging to evaluate).

      For simple models whose true steady-state distribution can be derived numerically and/or analytically, it is very likely that their exploration will be much simpler and this is not where a lot of improvement over random search may be found, which explains our focus on more complex models. While we agree that it is still interesting to evaluate exploration methods on these simple models for checking their behavior, it is not clear how to scale this analysis to the targeted more complex systems.

      For systems whose true steady state distribution cannot be derived analytically or numerically, we believe that random search is a pertinent baseline as it is commonly used in the literature to discover the attractors/trajectories of a biological network. For instance, Venkatachalapathy et al. [1] initialize stochastic simulations at multiple randomly sampled starting conditions (which is called a kinetic Monte Carlo-based method) to capture the steady states of a biological system. Similarly, Donzé et al. [29] use a Monte Carlo approach to compute the reachable set of a biological network «when the number of parameters  is large and their uncertain range  is not negligible». For the considered models, the true steady-state goal set is unknown, which is why we chose comparison with random search. We added a “Statistics” subsection in the Methods section providing additional details about the statistical analyses we perform between our method and the random search baseline.

      (2) The proposed method is based on `Intrinsically Motivated Goal Exploration Processes with Automatic Curriculum Learning', which assumes state action trajectories [s_{t_0:t}, a_{t_0:t}], (2.1 Notations and Assumptions' in the IMGEP paper). However, the models used in the current work do not include external control actions, but rather only the initial conditions can be set. It is not clear from the methods whether IMGEP was adapted to this setting, and how the exploration policy was designed w/o actual time-dependent actions. What does "...generates candidate intervention parameters to achieve the current goal....", mean considering that interventions 'Sets the initial state...' as explained in Table 2?

      We thank the reviewer for asking for clarification, as indeed the IMGEP methodology originates from developmental robotics scenarios which generally focus on the problem of robotic sequential decision-making, therefore assuming state action trajectories as presented in Forestier et al. [65]. However, in both cases, note that the IMGEP is responsible for sampling parameters which then govern the exploration of the dynamical system. In Forestier et al. [65], the IMGEP also only sets one vector at the start (denoted ) which was specifying parameters of a movement (like the initial state of the GRN), which was then actually produced with dynamic motion primitives which are dynamical system equations similar to GRN ODEs, so the two systems are mathematically equivalent. More generally, while in our case the “intervention” of the IMGEP (denoted ) only controls the initial state of the GRN, future work could consider more advanced sequential interventions simply by setting parameters of an action policy  at the start which could be called during the GRN’s trajectory to sample control actions  where  would be the state of the GRN. In practice this would also require setting only one vector at the start, so it would remain the same exploration algorithm and only the space of parameters would change, which illustrates the generality of the approach.

      (3) Fig 2 shows the phase space for (ERK, RKIPP_RP) without mentioning the typical full scale of ERK, RKIPP_RP. It is unclear whether the path from (0, 0) to (~0.575, ~3.75) at t=1000 is significant on the typical scale of this phase space. is it significant on the typical scale of this phase space?

      The purpose of Figure 2 is to illustrate an example of GRN trajectory in transcriptional space, and to illustrate what “interventions” and “perturbations” can be in that context. To that end we have used the fixed initial conditions provided in the BIOMD0000000647, replicating Figure 5 of Cho et al. [56].

      While we are not sure of what the reviewer means with “typical” scale of this phase space, we would like to point reviewer toward Figure 8 which shows examples of certain paths that indeed reach further point in the same phase space (up to ~10 in RKIPP_RP levels and ~300 in ERK levels). However, while the paths displayed in Figure 8 are possible (and were discovered with the IMGEP), note that they may be “rarer” to occur naturally  in the sense that a large portion of the tested initial conditions with random search tend to converge toward smaller (ERK, RKIPP_RP) steady-state values similar to the ones displayed in Figure 2.

      (4) Table 2:

      a. Where is 'effective intervention' used in the method?

      b. in my opinion 'controllability', 'trainability', and 'versatility' are different terms. If their correspondence is important I would suggest to extend/enhance the column "Proposed Isomorphism". otherwise, it may be confusing.

      a) We thank the reviewer for pointing out that “effective intervention” is not explicitly used in the method. The idea here is that as we are exploring a complex dynamical system (here the GRN), some of the sampled interventions will be particularly effective at revealing novel unseen outcomes whereas others will fail to produce a qualitative change to the distribution of discovered outcomes. What we show in this paper, for instance in Figure 3a and Figure 4, is that the IMGEP method is particularly sample-efficient in finding those “effective interventions”, at least more than a random exploration. However we agree that the term “effective intervention” is ambiguous (does not say effective in what) and we have replaced it with “salient intervention” in the revised version.

      b) We thank the reviewer for highlighting some confusing terms in our chosen vocabulary, and we have clarified those terms in the revised version. We agree that controllability/trainability and versatility are not exactly equivalent concepts, as controllability/trainability typically refers to the amount to which a system is externally controllable/trainable whereas versatility typically refers to the inherent adaptability or diversity of behaviors that a system can exhibit in response to inputs or conditions. However, they are both measuring the extent of states that can be reached by the system under a distribution of stimuli/conditions, whether natural conditions or engineered ones, which is why we believe that their correspondence is relevant.

      I don't see how this table generalizes "concepts from dynamical complex systems and behavioral sciences under a common navigation task perspective".

      We have replaced the verb “generalize” with “investigate” in the revised version.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Etcheverry et al. present two computational frameworks for exploring the functional capabilities of gene regulatory networks (GRNs). The first is a framework based on intrinsically-motivated exploration, here used to reveal the set of steady states achievable by a given gene regulatory network as a function of initial conditions. The second is a behaviorist framework, here used to assess the robustness of steady states to dynamical perturbations experienced along typical trajectories to those steady states. In Figs. 1-5, the authors convincingly show how these frameworks can explore and quantify the diversity of behaviors that can be displayed by GRNs. In Figs. 6-9, the authors present applications of their framework to the analysis and control of GRNs, but the support presented for their case studies is often incomplete.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the paper presents an important development for exploring and understanding GRNs/dynamical systems broadly, with solid evidence supporting the first half of their paper in a narratively clear way.

      The behaviorist point of view for robustness is potentially of interest to a broad community, and to my knowledge introduces novel considerations for defining robustness in the GRN context.

      We thank the reviewer for recognizing the strengths and novelty of the proposed experimental framework for exploring and understanding GRNs, and complex dynamical systems more generally. We agree that the results presented in the section “Possible Reuses of the Behavioral Catalog and Framework” (Fig 6-9) can be seen as incomplete along certain aspects, which we tried to make as explicit as possible throughout the paper, and why we explicitly state that these are “preliminary experiments”. Despite the discussed limitations, we believe that these experiments are still very useful to illustrate the variety of potential use-cases in which the community could benefit from such computational methods and experimental framework, and build on for future work.

      Some specific weaknesses, mostly concerning incomplete analyses in the second half of the paper:

      (1) The analysis presented in Fig. 6 is exciting but preliminary. Are there other appropriate methods for constructing energy landscapes from dynamical trajectories in gene regulatory networks? How do the results in this particular case study compare to other GRNs studied in the paper?

      We are not aware of other methods than the one proposed by Venkatachalapathy et al. [1] for constructing an energy landscape given an input set of recorded dynamical trajectories, although it might indeed be the case. We want to emphasize that any of such methods would anyway depend on the input set of trajectories, and should therefore benefit from a set that is more representative of the diversity of behaviors that can be achieved by the GRN, which is why we believe the results presented in Figure 6 are interesting. As the IMGEP was able to find a higher diversity of reachable goal states (and corresponding trajectories) for many of the studied GRNs, we believe that similar effects should be observable when constructing the energy landscapes for these GRN models, with the discovery of additional or wider “valleys” of reachable steady states.

      Additionally, it is unclear whether the analysis presented in Fig. 6C is appropriate. In particular, if the pseudopotential landscapes are constructed from statistics of visited states along trajectories to the steady state, then the trajectories derived from dynamical perturbations do not only reflect the underlying pseudo-landscape of the GRN. Instead, they also include contributions from the perturbations themselves.

      We agree that the landscape displayed Fig. 6C integrates contributions from the perturbations on the GRN’s behavior, and that it can shape the landscape in various ways, for instance affecting the paths that are accessible, the shape/depth of certain valleys, etc. But we believe that qualitatively or quantitatively analyzing the effect of these perturbations  on the landscape is precisely what is interesting here: it might help 1) understand how a system respond to a range of perturbations and to visualize which behaviors are robust to those perturbations, 2) design better strategies for manipulating those systems to produce certain behaviors

      (2) In Fig. 7, I'm not sure how much is possible to take away from the results as given here, as they depend sensitively on the cohort of 432 (GRN, Z) pairs used. The comparison against random networks is well-motivated. However, as the authors note, comparison between organismal categories is more difficult due to low sample size; for instance, the "plant" and "slime mold" categories each only have 1 associated GRN. Additionally, the "n/a" category is difficult to interpret.

      We acknowledge that this part is speculative as stated in the paper: “the surveyed database is relatively small with respect to the wealth of available models and biological pathways, so we can hardly claim that these results represent the true distribution of competencies across these organism categories”. However, when further data is available, the same methodology can be reused and we believe that the resulting statistical analyses could be very informative to compare organismal (or other) categories.

      (3) In Fig. 8, it is unclear whether the behavioral catalog generated is important to the intervention design problem of moving a system from one attractor basin to another. The authors note that evolutionary searches or SGD could also be used to solve the problem. Is the analysis somehow enabled by the behavioral catalog in a way that is complementary to those methods? If not, comparison against those methods (or others e.g. optimal control) would strengthen the paper.

      We thank the reviewer for asking to clarify this point, which might not be clearly explained in the paper. Here the behavioral catalog is indeed used in a complementary way to the optimization method, by identifying a representative set of reachable attractors which are then used to define the optimization problem. For instance here, thanks to the catalog, we 1) were able to identify a “disease” region and several possible reachable states in that region and 2) use several of these states as starting points of our optimization problem, where we want to find a single intervention that can successfully and robustly reset all those points, as illustrated in Figure 8. Please note that given this problem formulation, a simple random search was used as an optimization strategy. When we mention more advanced techniques such as EA or SGD, it is to say that they might be more efficient optimizers than random search. However, we agree that in many cases optimizing directly will not work if starting from random or bad initial guess, and this even with EA or SGD. In that case the discovered behavioral catalog can be useful to better initialize  this local search and make it more efficient/useful, akin to what is done in Figure 9.

      (4) The analysis presented in Fig. 9 also is preliminary. The authors note that there exist many algorithms for choosing/identifying the parameter values of a dynamical system that give rise to a desired time-series. It would be a stronger result to compare their approach to more sophisticated methods, as opposed to random search and SGD. Other options from the recent literature include Bayesian techniques, sparse nonlinear regression techniques (e.g. SINDy), and evolutionary searches. The authors note that some methods require fine-tuning in order to be successful, but even so, it would be good to know the degree of fine-tuning which is necessary compared to their method.

      We agree that the analysis presented in Figure 9 is preliminary, and thank the reviewer for the suggestion. We would first like to refer to other papers from the ML literature that have more thoroughly analyzed this issue, such as Colas et al. [74] and Pugh et al. [34], and shown the interest of diversity-driven strategies as promising alternatives.  Additionally, as suggested by the reviewer, we added an additional comparison to the CMA-ES algorithm in the revised version in order to complete our analysis. CMA-ES is an evolutionary algorithm which is self-adaptive in the optimization steps and that is known to be better suited than SGD to escape local minimas when the number of parameters is not too high (here we only have 15 parameters). However, our results showed that while CMA-ES explores more the solution space at the beginning of optimization than SGD does, it also ultimately converges into a local minima similarly to SGD. The best solution converges toward a constant signal (of the target b) but fails to maintain the target oscillations, similar to the solutions discovered by gradient descent. We tried this for a few hyperparameters (init mean and std) but always found similar results.  We have updated the figure 9 image and caption, as well as descriptive text, to include these novel results in the revised version. We also added a reference to the CMA-ES paper in the citations.

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      I would suggest to conduct a more rigor analysis of the performance by estimating/approximating the ground truth robust goal sets in important GRNs.

      Also, the use of terminology from different disciplines can be improved. Please see my comments above. Specifically, the connection between controllability in dynamical control systems and versatility used in this paper is unclear.

      We hope to have addressed the reviewer's concerns in our previous answers.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Fig 4b: I'm not sure if DBSCAN is the appropriate method to use here, as the visual focus on the core elements of the clusters downplays the full convex hull of the points that random sampling achieves in Z space. An analysis based on convex hulls or the ball-coverage from Fig. 3b would presumably generate plots that were more similar between random sampling and curiosity search. If the goal is to highlight redundancy/non-linearity in the mapping between Z and I, another approach might be to simply bin Z-space in a grid, or to use a clustering algorithm that is less stringent about core/noise distinctions.

      We thank the reviewer for the suggestion. This plot is intended to convey the reader an understanding of why a method that uniformly samples goals in Z (what the  IMGEP is doing), is more efficient than a method that uniformly samples parameters in I (what the random search is doing), in systems for which there is high redundancy/non-linearity in the mapping between I and Z. We agree that binning the Z-space in a grid and counting the number of achieved bins is a way to quantitatively measure this, which is by the way very close to what we do in Figure 3 for measuring the achieved diversity. We believe however that the clustering and coloring provides additional intuitions on why this is the case: it illustrates that large regions of the intervention space map to small regions in the outcome space and vice versa.

      Additional changes in the revised version:

      We added a sentence in the Methods section as well as in the caption of Table S1 providing additional details about the way we simulate the biological models from the BioModels website

      We fixed a wrong reference to Figure 4 in the Methods “Sensitivity measure” subsection with reference to Figure 5.

    1. OPTIONAL stretch goal see if you can find the emptyDir in your hosts' file system. It will involve finding out which node the pod is running on, connecting to that node and working out where in the file system the emptyDir is (you might be able to find a file named data-volume). Once you have found it, you could look for the files therein. Also, if you do take on this chalenge, observe, once you've deleted the pod, that the directory is removed.

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      kubectl get pod kvname -o jsonpath='{.metadata.uid}'

      and then

      on k8s-worker-1 in the terminal windows I used the syntax and replaced my id I had retrieved from above command in the poduid:

      /var/lib/kubelet/pods/<podUID>/volumes/kubernetes.io~empty-dir/

      sudo ls //var/lib/kubelet/pods/37abdd08-c0f7-4549-a9cc-20df89ed7fa8/volum es/kubernetes.io~empty-dir/

      you have to run it with sudo permissions otherwise you get denied access, but then you can see data-volume

      I then did sudo -i

      cd /var/lib/kubelet/pods/37abdd08-c0f7-4549-a9cc-20df89ed7fa8/volumes/kubernetes.io~empty-dir/

      ls (to see directory listing it shoowed me data-volume)

      cd data-volume

      ls

      it then showed me age and name which were the two values I had put in there

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    1. Anexos

      Antes de los anexos falta un apartado de recomendaciones:

      • ¿Cuáles fueron los límites de esta tesis? por ejemplo en el análisis de información arbórea, las dificultades respecto al cambio de términos y condiciones de Twittter/X? etc.
      • ¿Cómo se espera que las investigaciones futuras y/o el proceso formativo en pregrado pueda contribuir a superar las limitaciones pasada o construir con base en lo que se hizo acá?
    2. Además, se ha construido y documentado rigurosamente una metodología, comenzando con la configuración inicial del entorno y terminando con el análisis de datos. Esta extensa documentación del procedimiento de configuración del entorno reproducible garantiza que los resultados obtenidos sean replicables y consistentes, lo que contribuye a la solidez y confiabilidad del estudio.

      Esto debería hacer parte de la conclusión 2, que está referida al objetivo específico del entorno de investigación reproducible.

      No es necesario indicar repetidamente que la investigación o su metodología son rigurosas. Si ya se dijo antes, se puede omitir su mención posterior.

    3. Figura 1: Hypothesis

      Explicar en el pie de figura cómo se está usando la herramienta. Por ejemplo:

      Hypothesis, siendo empleada para los comentarios y corrección por parte del tutor y la realimentación al estudiante.

      No todas las imágenes pueden empezar por "Figura 1", sino que su numeración debe ser sucesiva, teniendo en cuenta el número del capítulo (ejemplo figura 1.1., figura 2.1) o simplemente un sucesivo (figura 1, figura 2, etc).

    1. Author response:

      eLife assessment

      This study presents a valuable finding on sperm flagellum and HTCA stabilization. The evidence supporting the authors' claims is incomplete. The work will be of broad interest to cell and reproductive biologists working on cilium and sperm biology.

      We thank the Editor and the two referees for their time in carefully reviewing our work, and we are grateful for the helpful guidance about how to improve our study. We will supplement the experiments and provide quantitative data guided by the referees’ comments in the revised manuscript. Additionally, we will polish the manuscript and add further context to help readers understand the significance of this work.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      In this paper, Wu et al. investigated the physiological roles of CCDC113 in sperm flagellum and HTCA stabilization by using CRISPR/Cas knockouts mouse models, co-IP, and single sperm imaging. They find that CCDC113 localizes in the linker region among radial spokes, the nexin-dynein regulatory complex (N-DRC), and doublet microtubules (DMTs) RS, N-DRC, and DMTs and interacts with axoneme-associated proteins CFAP57 and CFAP91, acting as an adaptor protein that facilitates the linkage between RS, N-DRC, and DMTs within the sperm axoneme. They show the disruption of CCDC113 produced spermatozoa with disorganized sperm flagella and CFAP91, DRC2 could not colocalize with DMTs in Ccdc113-/- spermatozoa. Interestingly, the data also indicate that CCDC113 could localize on the HTCA region, and interact with HTCA-associated proteins. The knockout of Ccdc113 could also produce acephalic spermatozoa. By using Sun5 and Centlein knockout mouse models, the authors further find SUN5 and CENTLEIN are indispensable for the docking of CCDC113 to the implantation site on the sperm head. Overall, the experiments were designed properly and performed well to support the authors' observation in each part. Furthermore, the study's findings offer valuable insights into the physiological and developmental roles of CCDC113 in the male germ line, which can provide insight into impaired sperm development and male infertility. The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data, but some points need to be clarified and discussed.

      We thank Reviewer #1 for his or her critical reading and the positive assessment.

      (1) In Figure 1, a sperm flagellum protein, which is far away from CCDC113, should be selected as a negative control to exclude artificial effects in co-IP experiments.

      We greatly appreciate Reviewer #1’s insightful suggestion. We will include a negative control in the co-IP experiment to eliminate potential artificial effects.

      (2) Whether the detachment of sperm head and tail in Ccdc113-/- mice is a secondary effect of the sperm flagellum defects? The author should discuss this point.

      Good question. Given that CCDC113 could localized in the sperm neck region, and interact with SUN5 and CENTELIN, CCDC113 may directly function in the sperm head and tail connection. Indeed, PAS staining revealed that Ccdc113–/– sperm heads with abnormal orientation in stages V–VIII seminiferous epithelia (Fig. 6C), and transmission electron microscopy (TEM) analysis further revealed that the disruption of CCDC113 caused the detachment of the destroyed coupling apparatus from the sperm head in step 9–11 spermatids (Fig. 6D). All these results suggest that the detachment of sperm head and tail in Ccdc113–/– mice may be not a secondary effect of the sperm flagellum defects. And we have discuss this point as below:

      CCDC113 could interact with SUN5 and CENTLEIN, but not PMFBP1 (Fig. 7A-C), and CCDC113 was in the cytoplasm in Sun5–/– and Centlein–/– spermatozoa (Fig. 7L, K). In addition, CCDC113 colocalizes with SUN5 in the HTCA region, and the immunofluorescence staining in spermatozoa shows that SUN5 is closer to the sperm nucleus than CCDC113 (Fig. 7G, H). Therefore, SUN5 and CENTLEIN may be more closed to the sperm nucleus compared with CCDC113. PAS staining revealed that Ccdc113–/– sperm heads with abnormal orientation in stages V–VIII seminiferous epithelia (Fig. 6C), and transmission electron microscopy (TEM) analysis further revealed that the disruption of CCDC113 caused the detachment of the destroyed coupling apparatus from the sperm head in step 9–11 spermatids (Fig. 6D). All these results suggest that the detachment of sperm head and tail in Ccdc113–/– mice may be not a secondary effect of the sperm flagellum defects.

      (3) Given that some cytoplasm materials could be observed in Ccdc113-/- spermatozoa (Fig. 5A), whether CCDC113 is also essential for cytoplasmic removal?

      Good question. Unremoved cytoplasm could be detected in spermatozoa by using transmission electron microscopy (TEM) analysis, including disrupted mitochondria, damaged axonemes, and large vacuoles, indicating cytoplasmic removal defects in Ccdc113–/– mice. We have discussed this point as below:

      “Unremoved cytoplasm could be detected in spermatozoa by using transmission electron microscopy (TEM) analysis, including disrupted mitochondria, damaged axonemes, and large vacuoles, indicating cytoplasmic removal defects in Ccdc113–/– mice (Fig. 5A).”

      (4) Although CCDC113 could not bind to PMFBP1, the localization of CCDC113 in Pmfbp1-/- spermatozoa should be also detected to clarify the relationship between CCDC113 and SUN5-CENTLEIN-PMFBP1.

      We are thankful to Reviewer #1 for this suggestion. We will analyze the localization of CCDC113 in Pmfbp1-/- spermatozoa to clarify the relationship between CCDC113 and SUN5-CENTLEIN-PMFBP1.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      In the present study, the authors select the coiled-coil protein CCDC113 and revealed its expression in the stages of spermatogenesis in the testis as well as in the different steps of spermiogenesis with expression also mapped in the different parts of the epididymis. Gene deletion led to male infertility in CRISPR-Cas9 KO mice and PAS staining showed defects mapped in the different stages of the seminiferous cycle and through the different steps of spermiogenesis. EM and IF with several markers of testis germ cells and spermatozoa in the epididymis indicated defects in flagella and head-to-tail coupling for flagella as well as acephaly. The authors' co-IP experiments of expressed CCDC113 in HEK293T cells indicated an association with CFAP91 and DRC2 as well as SUN5 and CENTLEIN.

      The authors propose that CCDC113 connects CFAP91 and DRC2 to doublet microtubules of the axoneme and CCDC113's association with SUN5 and CENTLEIN to stabilize the sperm flagellum head-to-tail coupling apparatus. Extensive experiments mapping CCDC13 during postnatal development are reported as well as negative co-IP experiments and studies with SUN5 KO mice as well as CENTLEIN KO mice.

      Strengths:

      The authors provide compelling observations to indicate the relevance of CCDC113 to flagellum formation with potential protein partners. The data are relevant to sperm flagella formation and its coupling to the sperm head.

      We are grateful to Reviewer #2 for his or her recognition of the strength of this study.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors' observations are consistent with the model proposed but the authors' conclusions for the mechanism may require direct demonstration in sperm flagella. The Walton et al paper shows human CCDC96/113 in cilia of human respiratory epithelia. An application of such methodology to the proteins indicated by Wu et al for the sperm axoneme and head-tail coupling apparatus is eagerly awaited as a follow-up study.

      We thank Reviewer 2 for his/her kindly help in improving the manuscript. We now understand that directly detection of CCDC113 precise localization in sperm axoneme and head-tail coupling apparatus (HTCA) using cryo-electron microscopy (cryo-EM) could powerfully strengthen our model. Recent advances in cryo-electron microscopy (cryo-EM) have facilitated the analysis of axonemal structures and determined the structures of native axonemal DMTs from mouse, bovine, and human sperm (Leung et al., 2023; Zhou et al., 2023). However, some high-resolution structures of sperm axoneme and HTCA regions, including those involving CCDC113, remain to be detected. Thus, we would like to discuss this point and regard it as an important follow-up study.

      References:

      Bazan, R., Schröfel, A., Joachimiak, E., Poprzeczko, M., Pigino, G., & Wloga, D. (2021). Ccdc113/Ccdc96 complex, a novel regulator of ciliary beating that connects radial spoke 3 to dynein g and the nexin link. PLoS Genet, 17(3), e1009388.

      Ghanaeian, A., Majhi, S., McCafferty, C. L., Nami, B., Black, C. S., Yang, S. K., Legal, T., Papoulas, O., Janowska, M., Valente-Paterno, M., Marcotte, E. M., Wloga, D., & Bui, K. H. (2023). Integrated modeling of the Nexin-dynein regulatory complex reveals its regulatory mechanism. Nat Commun, 14(1), 5741.

      Leung, M. R., Zeng, J., Wang, X., Roelofs, M. C., Huang, W., Zenezini Chiozzi, R., Hevler, J. F., Heck, A. J. R., Dutcher, S. K., Brown, A., Zhang, R., & Zeev-Ben-Mordehai, T.  (2023). Structural specializations of the sperm tail. Cell, 186(13), 2880-2896.e2817

      Walton, T., Gui, M., Velkova, S., Fassad, M. R., Hirst, R. A., Haarman, E., O'Callaghan, C., Bottier, M., Burgoyne, T., Mitchison, H. M., & Brown, A. (2023). Axonemal structures reveal mechanoregulatory and disease mechanisms. Nature, 618(7965), 625-633.

      Zhou, L., Liu, H., Liu, S., Yang, X., Dong, Y., Pan, Y., Xiao, Z., Zheng, B., Sun, Y., Huang, P., Zhang, X., Hu, J., Sun, R., Feng, S., Zhu, Y., Liu, M., Gui, M., & Wu, J. (2023). Structures of sperm flagellar doublet microtubules expand the genetic spectrum of male infertility. Cell, 186(13), 2897-2910.e2819.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      By conducting QM/MM free energy simulations, the authors aimed to characterize the mechanism and transition state for the phosphoryl transfer in adenylate kinase. The qualitative reliability of the QM/MM results has been supported by several interesting experimental kinetic studies. However, the interpretation of the QM/MM results is not well supported by the current calculations.

      Strengths:

      The QM/MM free energy simulations have been carefully conducted. The accuracy of the semi-empirical QM/MM results was further supported by DFT/MM calculations, as well as qualitatively by several experimental studies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) One key issue is the definition of the transition state ensemble. The authors appear to define this by simply considering structures that lie within a given free energy range from the barrier. However, this is not the rigorous definition of transition state ensemble, which should be defined in terms of committor distribution. This is not simply an issue of semantics, since only a rigorous definition allows a fair comparison between different cases - such as the transition state in an enzyme vs in solution, or with and without the metal ion. For a chemical reaction in a complex environment, it is also possible that many other variables (in addition to the breaking and forming P-O bonds) should be considered when one measures the diversity in the conformational ensemble.

      In the revised ms, the authors included committor analysis. However, the discussion of the result is very brief. In particular, if we use the common definition of the transition state ensemble (TSE) as those featuring the committor around 0.5, the reaction coordinate of the TSE would span a much narrower range than those listed in Table 1. This point should be carefully addressed.

      (2) While the experimental observation that the activation entropy differs significantly with and without the Ca2+ ion is interesting, it is difficult to connect this result with the "wide" transition state ensemble observed in the QM/MM simulations so far. Even without considering the definition of the transition state ensemble mentioned above, it is unlikely that a broader range of P-O distances would explain the substantial difference in the activation entropy measured in the experiment. Since the difference is sufficiently large, it should be possible to compute the value by repeating the free energy simulations at different temperatures, which would lead to a much more direct evaluation of the QM/MM model/result and the interpretation.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      eLife assessment

      This is a potentially important study that integrates QM/MM free energy simulations and experimental kinetic analyses to probe the nature of phosphoryl transfer transition state in adenylate kinase. The idea that the transition state ensemble encompasses conformations with substantially different structural features (including the breaking/forming bonds) is interesting and potentially applicable to many other enzyme systems. In the current form, however, the study is considered incomplete since the connection between the putative transition state ensemble from the computations and key experimental observables, such as the activation entropy, is not well established.

      Thank you so much for your great professional work as the senior editor. We thank you and the reviewers for carefully reading our manuscript and for very valuable suggestions. In response, we have performed the recommended additional calculations and modified the manuscript as suggested, in order to improve the connection between the transition state ensemble obtained from simulations and experimental observables. Importantly, the new simulations fully corroborate our original findings, and thanks to your work made the revised manuscript stronger and better.

      Below are our point-to-point responses:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This study investigated the phosphoryl transfer mechanism of the enzyme adenylate kinase, using SCC-DFTB quantum mechanical/molecular mechanical (QM/MM) simulations, along with kinetic studies exploring the temperature and pH dependence of the enzyme's activity, as well as the effects of various active site mutants. Based on a broad free energy landscape near the transition state, the authors proposed the existence of wide transition states (TS), characterized by the transferring phosphoryl group adopting a meta-phosphate-like geometry with asymmetric bond distances to the nucleophilic and leaving oxygens. In support of this finding, kinetic experiments were conducted with Ca2+ ions (instead of Mg2+) at different temperatures, which revealed a negative entropy of activation. Overall, in its present form, the manuscript has more weaknesses in terms of interpretation of the simulation results than strengths, which need to be addressed by the authors.

      We thank the reviewer for carefully reviewing our manuscript and the great suggestions for the revisions. Thanks to these points raised we are able to submit a revised manuscript addressing all questions.

      There are several major concerns:

      First, the authors' claim that the catalytic mechanism of adenylate kinase (Adk) has not been previously studied by QM/MM free energy simulations is somewhat inaccurate. In fact, two different groups have previously investigated the catalytic mechanism of Adk. The first study, cited by the authors themselves, used the string method to determine the minimum free energy profile, but resulted in an unexpected intermediate; note that they obtained a minimum free energy profile, not a minimum energy profile. The second study (Ojedat-May et al., Biochemistry 2021 and Dulko-Smith et al., J Chem Inf Model 2023) overlaps substantially with the present study, but its main conclusions differ from those of the present study. Therefore, a thorough discussion comparing the results of these studies is needed.

      We thank the reviewer for pointing out two additional articles to the one we had discussed. Accordingly, we have changed the claim that the Adk mechanism was not previously studied using QM/MM, and added a discussion of the latter two citations. Notably, although the general outcome is consistent with our results, the conclusions and details of findings differ. The two additional papers agree with our findings of a concerted TS, and not the metastable intermediate as observed in the QM/MM simulation of Shibanuma et al., 2020.

      The difference of the two papers by Nam/Wolf-Watz and our manuscript pointed out by the reviewer is mainly in the interpretation. Importantly, the authors do not primarily focus on the nature of the Transition State for the P-transfer reaction, but on the connection between the chemical and conformational steps. We have extensively reported on the fact that the conformational changes of lid opening and closing are obviously unrelated to the chemical step, see also our free energy landscape in Fig. 1a. Consequently, there cannot be a coupling. We note that our group had extensively studied the lid opening step both experimentally and computationally before. In contrast, we discover here a fundamental concept for rate enhancement by an optimal enzyme: the reduction in the activation entropy by a wide TSE. New experiments were triggered by this finding, that then delivered experimental validation of this concept.

      In the revised version of the manuscript, and according to the reviewer’s suggestion we expanded our discussion to these two additional papers.

      Second, the interpretation of the TS ensemble needs deeper scrutiny. In general, the TS is defined as the hypersurface separating the reactant and product states. Consequently, if a correct reaction coordinate is defined, trajectories initiated at the TS should have equal probabilities of reaching either the reactant or product state; if an approximate reaction coordinate, such as the distance difference used in this study, is used, recrossing may be introduced as a correction into the probabilities. Thus, in order to establish the presence of a wide TS region, it is necessary to characterize the TS ensemble through a commitment analysis across the TS region.

      We thank the reviewer for suggesting to add a commitment analysis to our calculations. The newly performed commitment analysis is shown in Fig. 4b. The corresponding analysis further strengthens our original findings of the wide TS in the fully active enzyme.

      The relatively flat free energy surface observed near TS in Figures 1c and 2a, may be attributed to the cleavage and formation of P-O bonds relative to the marginally stable phosphorane intermediate, as described in Zhou et al.'s work (Chem Rev 1998, 98:991). This scenario is clearly different from a wide TS ensemble concept. In addition, given the inherent similarity in reactivity of the two oxygens towards the phosphoryl atom, it is reasonable to expect a single TS as shown in Figure 1 - supplement 9, rather than two TSs with a marginally stable intermediate as shown in Figure 1c. Consequently, it remains uncertain whether the elongated P-O bonds observed near the TS and their asymmetry are realistic or potentially an artifact of the pulling/non-equilibrium MD simulations. Further validation in this regard is required.

      The reviewer raises the key issue of how realistic the observation of the wide TSE is, and the possibility of it being a potential artifact of the simulation strategy, and suggests that further validation is required in this regard. According to his/her suggestion, in the revised version we have further validated this key observation by two additional simulations. First, we performed a commitment analysis (see above), and second, we also performed Umbrella Sampling, see Fig. 4a. We consistently observe one wide TSE in the presence of Mg2+, but not in the absence of Mg2+. The fact that this wide TSE is observed with the three strategies (i.e pulling/nonequilibrium MD, commitment analysis, and umbrella sampling) most likely rules out the possibility of an artifact related to the simulation strategy.

      Third, there are several inconsistencies in the free energy results and their discussion. First, the data from Kerns et al. (Kerns, NSMB, 2015, 22:124) indicate that the ATP/AMP -> ADP/ADP reaction proceeds at a faster rate than the ADP/ADP -> ATP/AMP reaction, suggesting that the ADP/ADP state has a lower free energy (approximately -1.0 kcal/mol) compared to the ATP/ATP state. This contrasts with Figure 1c, which shows a higher free energy of 6.0 kcal/mol for the ATP/ADP state. This discrepancy needs to be discussed.

      The reviewer correctly found our experimental result on the equilibrium of about -1 kcal/mol for ADP/ADP relative to ATP/AMP with Mg. Importantly, that was measured at a pH of 7. With a pKA of about 7.2 for ADP, under these experimental conditions more than 50% is in the monoprotonated state. As we found in our QM/MM simulations, for the monoprotonated state the ADP/ADP is much more stable than ATP/AMP (see Figure 1 – supplement 4, about 8 kcal/mol). In contrast, as shown in Fig. 1c and highlighted by the reviewer, for the nonprotonated state the equilibrium is flipped. Consequently our QM/MM simulations roughly recapitulate the ensemble equilibrium of substrates/products measured at pH 7. 

      We should have better described these facts in the manuscript, and we thank the reviewer for noting this point, as it promoted us to better explaining this agreement between experiments and computation for this on enzyme equilibrium between the substrate and product states (see page 11 in the revised manuscript).

      Furthermore, the barrier for ATP/AMP -> ADP/ADP, calculated to be 20 kcal/mol for the fully charged state, exceeds the corresponding barrier for the monoprotonated state. This cautions against the conclusion that the fully charged state is the reactive state. In addition, the difference in the barrier for the no-Mg2+ system compared to the barriers with Mg2+ is substantially too large (21 kcal/mol from the calculation versus 7 kcal/mol from the experimental values). These inconsistencies raise questions as to their origins, whether they result from the use of the pulling/non-equilibrium MD simulation approach, which may yield unrealistic TS geometries, or from potential issues related to the convergence of the determined free energy values. To address this issue, a comparison of results obtained by umbrella sampling and similar methodologies is necessary.

      We agree that these points need to be clarified. For the resubmission, we performed an umbrella sampling for the fully charged nucleotide with Mg2+, and for the noMg2+ systems, and added these new figures to the manuscript (new Fig. 4). We agree with the reviewer that the obtained free energy profiles from the umbrella sampling are more reliable; the original simulations for the monoprotonated state have larger errors, see Fig. 1, supplement 4. Importantly, we experimentally measured the pH dependence of the reaction in the direction ADP/ADP to AMP and ATP, and hence compare the corresponding barriers in this direction.

      In respect to the comparison of the simulated (9.5 kcal/mol) to the experimental barriers with and without Mg, the experimental barrier is 7 kcal/mol for Ca2+ versus no metal, but larger for Mg2+ versus no metal, for which the simulations were performed. The P-transfer with Mg2+ is faster than 500 sec-1, meaning the experimental barrier for the no Mg versus magnesium is ≥ 11 kcal/mol, which is in quite good agreement with our umbrella sampling barrier differences (Fig. 4a). In response to this reviewer’s question, we added these points into the revised manuscript.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The authors report the results of QM/MM simulations and kinetic measurements for the phosphoryl-transfer step in adenylate kinase. The main assertion of the paper is that a wide transition state ensemble is a key concept in enzyme catalysis as a strategy to circumvent entropic barriers. This assertion is based on the observation of a "structurally wide" set of energetically equivalent configurations that lie along the reaction coordinate in QM/MM simulations, together with kinetic measurements that suggest a decrease in the entropy of activation.

      We thank the reviewer for the endorsement, and very useful suggestions to improve the manuscript in an revised manuscript. Thanks to the questions, we have edited our manuscript accordingly. All suggested additional simulations and analysis further support our original findings.

      Strengths:

      The study combines theoretical calculations and supporting experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      The role(s) of entropy in enzyme catalysis has been discussed extensively in the literature, from the Circe effect proposed by Jencks and many other works. The current paper hypothesizes a "wide" transition state ensemble as a catalytic strategy and key concept in enzyme catalysis. Overall, it is not clear the degree to which this hypothesis is supported by the data. The reasons are as follows:

      (1) Enzyme catalysis reflects a rate enhancement with respect to a baseline reaction in solution. In order to assert that something is part of a catalytic strategy of an enzyme, it would be necessary to demonstrate from simulations that the activation entropy for the baseline reaction is indeed greater and the transition state ensemble less "wide". Alternatively stated, when indicating there is a "wide transition state ensemble" for the enzyme system - one needs to indicate that is with respect to the non-enzymatic reaction. However, these simulations were not performed and the comparisons were not demonstrated.

      We agree with the reviewer, that the ideal comparison to address enzyme catalytic power is to compare with the baseline reaction in solution. However, as is the case for many biological relevant reactions, in solution the reactions are too slow (i.e have too high barriers) and thus cannot be measured (this reaction would take about 7000 years without the enzyme). Moreover, in many cases, the reaction mechanism in solution is too different to that observed in the enzyme.

      To overcome this problem, another reference reaction is used instead of that in solution, such as a mutant enzyme, or the enzyme lacking a key cofactor, hence a non-optimized enzyme. In the present case, this baseline reaction corresponds to enzyme reaction in the absence of the Mg ion. Consistently, our results clearly show that the reaction without Mg which displays a larger barrier, has a narrower TS. We want to highlight that the extensive and excellent literature about QM/MM calculations of the hydrolysis of ATP hydrolysis in solution, which shows narrow transitions state ensembles, just to mention a few: Klähn, M., Rosta, E., & Warshel, A. (2006).

      On the mechanism of hydrolysis of phosphate monoesters dianions in solutions and proteins.

      Journal of the American Chemical Society, 128(47), 15310–15323. https://doi.org/10.1021/ja065470t; Wang, C., Huang, W., & Liao, J. lou. (2015). QM/MM investigation of ATP hydrolysis in aqueous solution. Journal of Physical Chemistry B, 119(9), 3720–3726. https://doi.org/10.1021/jp512960e.

      (2) The observation of a "wide conformational ensemble" is not a quantitative measure ofentropy. In order to make a meaningful computational prediction of the entropic contribution to the activation of free energy, one would need to perform free energy simulations over a range of temperatures (for the enzymatic and non-enzymatic systems). Such simulations were not performed, and the entropy of activation was thus not quantified by the computational predictions.

      In the present work we do not intend to quantify entropy from the simulations, since such calculations are known to have too large errors.  However, even if not strictly quantified, a wider TS ensemble is a proxy for a larger entropy.

      (3) The authors indicate that lid-opening, essential for product release, and not P-transfer is therate-limiting step in the catalytic cycle and Mg2+ accelerates both steps. How is it certain that the kinetic measurements are reporting on the chemical steps of the reaction, and not other factors such as metal ion binding or conformational changes?

      These questions were indeed the absolute critically ones we needed to answer early for studying how adenylate kinase is catalyzing the reaction by more than 14 orders of magnitude. This was done by a combination of pre-steady state, steady-state experiments combined with NMR dynamics, published in (Kerns et al., 2015), and described in the beginning of this manuscript in Fig. 1a. We agree with the reviewer that for many other enzymes such experimental examination of all microscopic steps for the enzymatic cycle had not been performed, leading to the risk of wrong interpretation of observed kinetic rates.

      (4) The authors explore different starting states for the chemical steps of the reaction (e.g.,different metal ion binding and protonation states), and conclude that the most reactive enzyme configuration is the one with the more favorable reaction-free energy barrier. However, it is not clear what is the probability of observing the system in these different states as a function of pH and metal ion concentration without performing appropriate pKa and metal ion binding calculations. This was not done, and hence these results seem somewhat inconclusive.

      As noted by the reviewer, in the present work our aim was to compare the chemical step of the reaction in different metal ion and protonation states. Our computational results show that the most reactive enzyme configuration is the nonprotonated state with Mg2+ in our forward reaction.

      We actually know what the probability of the metal-bound states are for this enzyme. The experimental data were described in (Kerns et al., 2015), we directly experimentally determined the concentration needed to fully occupy the Mg site with Mg or Ca, therefore no metal binding calculations are needed as the experiments are a direct measurement. From our x-ray structures we know the accurate binding site, and also see full occupancy. This is also true for the pH dependence of the chemical step, measured in this manuscript and shown in Fig. 5b. We note that the excellent agreement between our simulations and the experiments are one of the key features of the current manuscript.  As stated in the manuscript, we analyzed the pH dependence of the P-transfer step and showed that the rate increases with higher pH in the presence of Ca2+, while without a metal the opposite trend is observed. These results further support the QM/MM results showing that the fully-charged nucleotides state was the most reactive in the presence of the metal, whereas in the absence of the cation, only the monoprotonated nucleotides (low pH) were reactive.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      By conducting QM/MM free energy simulations, the authors aimed to characterize the mechanism and transition state for the phosphoryl transfer in adenylate kinase. The qualitative reliability of the QM/MM results has been supported by several interesting experimental kinetic studies. However, the interpretation of the QM/MM results is not well supported by the current calculations.

      Strengths:

      The QM/MM free energy simulations have been carefully conducted. The accuracy of the semiempirical QM/MM results was further supported by DFT/MM calculations, as well as qualitatively by several experimental studies.

      We thank the reviewer for the positive comments on the manuscript, particularly highlighting the support of the QM/MM results by additional DFT/MM calculations and several experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) One key issue is the definition of the transition state ensemble. The authors appear to define this by simply considering structures that lie within a given free energy range from the barrier. However, this is not the rigorous definition of transition state ensemble, which should be defined in terms of committor distribution. This is not simply an issue of semantics, since only a rigorous definition allows a fair comparison between different cases - such as the transition state in an enzyme vs in solution, or with and without the metal ion. For a chemical reaction in a complex environment, it is also possible that many other variables (in addition to the breaking and forming P-O bonds) should be considered when one measures the diversity in the conformational ensemble.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this issue and for this great suggestion, as this led to a strengthening of the key findings in the revised manuscript version.  According to his/her suggestion, we performed a commitment analysis to properly define the TSE and compare the results between the enzyme in the presence/absence of Mg2+ (see new Fig. 4b).  The results further strengthen our previous finding and interpretation of a wider TSE for the reaction with Mg relative to without Mg.

      (2) While the experimental observation that the activation entropy differs significantly with and without the Ca2+ ion is interesting, it is difficult to connect this result with the "wide" transition state ensemble observed in the QM/MM simulations so far. Even without considering the definition of the transition state ensemble mentioned above, it is unlikely that a broader range of P-O distances would explain the substantial difference in the activation entropy measured in the experiment. Since the difference is sufficiently large, it should be possible to compute the value by repeating the free energy simulations at different temperatures, which would lead to a much more direct evaluation of the QM/MM model/result and the interpretation.

      In the present work we do not intend to quantify entropy from the simulations, since such calculations are known to have too large errors.  However, even if not strictly quantified, a wider TS ensemble is a proxy for a larger entropy. We believe that the additional committor calculations and the umbrella sampling (new Fig. 4a) are a strong support of our original findings, and better suited for supporting our findings as compared to repeating the free energy simulations at different temperatures.  

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Minor comments:

      Make sure consistent units are used, either kJ/mol or kcal/mol.

      Thanks, we made the changes.

      In the case of the mono-protonated simulation, where does the proton transfer between AD(T)P and AMP occur in both the forward and reverse reactions? It is worthwhile to note that the proton transfer may take place at different reaction coordinate values (between the two reactions), as it is not explicitly defined in the reaction coordinate. In this context, it is also necessary to discuss how to combine the results to generate a single free energy profile.

      We agree with the reviewer on this point. Accordingly, we have analyzed for the monoprotonated reaction when (or where in terms of RC) the proton transfer occurs in both forward and reverse reactions. The proton transfer occurs at -0.7 of the reaction coordinate (average value, figures 3-supplement 5 e and f).

      The methods section needs improvements:

      (1) Computational setup of the system: Were the systems neutralized? If so, what types of ions were used, and how many of them were included? If systems were not neutralized, discuss a potential artifact in the results. In addition, if the system for the reverse reaction (and no-Mg2+ systems) was prepared separately, provide details regarding their preparation.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this issue. Accordingly, we have provided the requested additional details of the computational setup in the revised version.

      (2) Simulation parameters: Clarify how non-bonded interactions were treated in both MM and QM/MM simulations. For the QM/MM simulation, specify the time step used, whether the Shake was applied; whether the NPT simulations were performed, and any other relevant parameters.

      We thank the reviewer for noting this issue. Accordingly, we have provided the requested additional details of the simulation parameters.

      (3) Free energy determination strategy: Describe how the two profiles (forward and reverse profiles) were combined and provide a theoretical justification for this approach. Additionally, include a comment on whether Jarzynski's inequality equation is directly applicable to the NPT simulation.

      According to the reviewer request, in the revised version of the manuscript we have described how the two profiles where combined and provided a theoretical justification for this approach.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      See recommendations in the Public Review regarding the analysis of transition state ensemble and activation entropy.

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    1. autoridade coatora

      SÚMULA 628 - DIREITO PROCESSUAL CIVIL - MANDADO DE SEGURANÇA

      Enunciado:

      A teoria da encampação é aplicada no mandado de segurança quando presentes, cumulativamente, os seguintes requisitos: - a) existência de vínculo hierárquico entre a autoridade que prestou informações e a que ordenou a prática do ato impugnado; - b) manifestação a respeito do mérito nas informações prestadas; e - c) ausência de modificação de competência estabelecida na Constituição Federal.

      Quanto ao terceiro requisito, observe:

      • Em mandado de segurança, é vedada a oportunização ao impetrante de emenda à inicial para a indicação da correta autoridade coatora, quando a referida modificação implique na alteração da competência jurisdicional. (STJ. 2ª Turma. REsp 1.954.451-RJ, Rel. Min. Francisco Falcão, julgado em 14/2/2023) (Info 764).

      Súmula nº 510/STF: Praticado o ato por autoridade, no exercício de competência delegada, contra ela cabe o mandado de segurança ou a medida judicial.

    1. Μέσω της ανάλυσης των ευρημάτων προέκυψε ότι οι φοιτητέςθεωρούν πως η ποιοτική επικοινωνία προϋποθέτειπως o/ηκαθηγητής/τριαθα πρέπει να τους ενθαρρύνει να συμμετέχουν, να τουςεμπλέκει ενεργά στη διαδικασία της μάθησηςκαι να αναπτύσσουν κριτική σκέψη. Ωστόσο, μέσω της έρευνας φαίνεται ότιοι φοιτητές/τριεςπιστεύουν πως μέσω της τηλεδιάσκεψης δεν υπάρχει μεγάλη συχνότητα αλληλεπίδρασης,αλλά και γνωριμίας με τους/τιςυπόλοιπους/εςσυμφοιτητές/τριες.

      ποιοτική επικοινωνία

    1. i)Δημογραφικά δεδομένα, ii)Μορφή παρεχόμενης ανατροφοδότησης, iii) Συναισθηματική επιρροή στους φοιτητές, iv) Αλληλεπίδραση-Στοχασμός, v) Κατανόηση-επικοινωνία, vi) Προτιμήσεις των φοιτητών για την μορφή της ανατροφοδότησης, vii) Σχεδιασμός -Προτάσεις για βελτίωση της ανατροφοδότησης. Στoσύνολο σχεδόν των ερωτημάτων (n=39) χρησιμοποιήθηκε επταβάθμια κλίμακα Likert(1= «διαφωνώ απόλυτα» ως 7 = «συμφωνώ απόλυτα»). Υπήρξαν τρία ερωτήματα όπου χρησιμοποιήθηκε πενταβάθμια κλίμακα Likert(1= «πολύ λίγο» ως 5 = «πάρα πολύ»)όπου οι φοιτητές κλήθηκαν να αξιολογήσουν (από πολύ λίγοέως πάρα πολύ) σε τι αφορούν τα σχόλια που λαμβάνουν στην αξιολόγηση των εργασιών τους (σύνταξη, δομή, προτάσεις βελτίωσης) και μία μόνο ανοικτή ερώτηση στο τέλος του ερωτηματολογίου όπου οι συμμετέχοντες κλήθηκαν να προτείνουν ελεύθερα (αν το θεωρούν αναγκαίο) τρόπους και να βελτιωθεί η διεργασία τηςανατροφοδότησης των γραπτών εργασιών στα μεταπτυχιακά προγράμματα του Ε.Α.Π.

      ποσοτική

    1. there are many um and that that pulls us into 00:00:26 reaction mode that has been long steeped in industrial responsiveness which is to the first order

      for - quote - progress trap - Nora Bateson

      quote - progress trap - Nora Bateson - (see below) - it's really easy to get distracted by the alarms that are ringing - and like you said, there are many that pulls us into reaction mode - that has been long steeped in industrial responsiveness - which is to the first order - that is, if something is happening we want to stop that thing from happening - whatever it is, whether it's - a refugee crisis or - a nuclear war threat or a this or a that - and that first order response does not take into account - the next and the next and the next order of consequences - so it's a kind of thinking that is very much appropriate for - engineering, - for building machines - but it's not appropriate for complex living systems

      adjacency - between - Nora Bateson comment on first order industrial responsiveness - progress trap - Stop Reset Go complexity mapping - Deep Humanity - progress trap - emptiness/shunyata - adjacency relationship - What Nora is saying is articulated within the Deep Humanity praxis using the language of progress traps - Dan O'Leary - https://jonudell.info/h/facet/?max=100&expanded=true&user=stopresetgo&exactTagSearch=true&any=dan+o%27leary - Ronald Wright - https://jonudell.info/h/facet/?max=100&expanded=true&user=stopresetgo&exactTagSearch=true&any=ronald+wright - which are the unintended consequences of progress - Deep Humanity praxis relates progress traps to the intertwingled Eastern philosophical ideas of - emptiness (shunyata) - https://jonudell.info/h/facet/?max=100&expanded=true&user=stopresetgo&exactTagSearch=true&any=emptiness - dependent arising and - https://jonudell.info/h/facet/?max=100&expanded=true&user=stopresetgo&exactTagSearch=true&any=dependent+arising - interdependent origination - https://jonudell.info/h/facet/?max=100&expanded=true&user=stopresetgo&exactTagSearch=true&any=interdependent+origination - In the context of the Stop Reset Go complexity mapping process, - to be integrated into the Indyweb / Indranet web 3 software ecosystem, - is designed to map multiple perspectives of how to solve a problem - so that we can see the many different solutions and avoid simply adopting a first order response solution - in so doing, it integrates complexity into our problem solving process and helps to mitigate - future progress traps in our solutions - The Indyweb / Indranet is a technology ecosystem designed to reflect the two pillars of emptiness: - (evolutionary) change and - interdependent origination / intertwingularity, - reflecting a universe that is fractally connected in all - dimensions and - scales - Stop Reset Go will be integrated into the Indyweb/Indranet as a specific Markin notation.

    1. Acredita-se no impacto que o metaverso tem sobre o processo de ensino e aprendizagem, principalmente porque os alunos atuais pertencem à geração internet, portanto são ávidos por tecnologia e, o metaverso oferece para esses alunos um ambiente cercado por tecnologias.

      O metaverso pode transformar a educação ao proporcionar ambientes imersivos e interativos, que são especialmente atraentes para a geração internet, ávida por tecnologia.

      As principais vantagens incluem:

      • Participação ativa: Ambientes 3D e elementos de gamificação tornam a aprendizagem mais envolvente.

      • Personalização: Adaptabilidade ao ritmo e estilo de cada aluno, com recursos diversificados.

      • Colaboração: Facilita a colaboração global e o desenvolvimento de habilidades sociais.

      • Competências Digitais: Prepara os alunos para o mercado de trabalho através do uso de tecnologias avançadas.

      Desafios:

      • Acessibilidade: Necessidade de enfrentar as desigualdades no acesso à tecnologia.

      • Formação de Professores: Os professores precisam de formação para integrar efetivamente estas tecnologias.

      • Saúde: É necessário ter muita atenção aos impactos na saúde física e mental dos alunos.

      Na minha opinião, o metaverso oferece um potencial significativo para enriquecer o processo educativo, desde que sejam abordados os desafios de forma eficaz.

    2. A partir dessas características, pode-se considerar que o metaverso é uma extensão virtual da vida real,

      Sim, considero que se pode considerar que o metaverso é uma extensão virtual da vida real. Ele cria ambientes digitais onde as pessoas podem interagir, trabalhar, estudar e socializar de maneira similar ao mundo físico, mas com as vantagens adicionais da tecnologia digital. No contexto da educação, o metaverso pode simular salas de aula, laboratórios, museus e outros espaços de aprendizagem, proporcionando experiências enriquecedoras que complementam a educação tradicional.

    3. Portanto, entende-se que o metaverso é um mundo alternativo, uma realidade paralela, baseado em RV e Realidade Aumentada (RA)

      O metaverso, é um conceito popularizado por Neal Stephenson em 1992 e impulsionado recentemente por Mark Zuckerberg. Tem o potencial de transformar a educação através de ambientes imersivos e interativos baseados na Realidade Virtual (RV) e Realidade Aumentada (RA). No entanto, a sua implementação enfrenta vários desafios, tais como:

      Acessibilidade e Inclusão * A disparidade tecnológica e a falta de conectividade podem ampliar a desigualdade educacional.

      Custo * Possibilidade de existirem custos elevados com equipamentos, manutenção e atualizações.

      Formação de Professores * Existe necessidade de formação contínua para a utilização eficaz das novas tecnologias.

      Desenvolvimento de Conteúdo * A produção de conteúdo educacional de qualidade é complexa e cara, além da falta de padronização.

      Segurança e Privacidade * A proteção de dados e a segurança online são cruciais.

      Aspectos Psicológicos e Físicos * A utilização prolongada pode causar fadiga digital e problemas de saúde física e mental.

      Resistência à Mudança * A resistência de estudantes, professores e administradores às novas tecnologias.

      Superar esses desafios requer um planeamento cuidadoso, investimento em infraestruturas e formação, além da colaboração entre todas as partes interessadas. Com a abordagem correta, o metaverso pode tornar a aprendizagem mais envolvente, acessível e eficaz.

    1. In the context of Multi-Agent Reinforcement Learning (MARL), a dataset corresponds to a collection of scenarios that comprise a single multi-agent task. Multi-agent tasks are customizable on a variety of aspects, such as the number of agents, map size, reward function, and unit status. This section provides a brief overview of the categories of multi-agent tasks, ranging from the simplest matrix game to real-world applications.

      Trong bối cảnh của bài toán MARL, một bộ dữ liệu tương ứng với một tập các kịch bản chứa một bài toán đa tác tử đơn lẻ. Các bài toán đa tác tử có thể được tùy biến ở hàng loạt yếu tố, ví dụ như số lượng tác tử, kích thước bản đồ, hàm phần thưởng,...

    1. Art. 135
      1. O redirecionamento da execução fiscal, quando fundado na dissolução irregular da pessoa jurídica executada ou na presunção de sua ocorrência, pode ser autorizado contra o sócio ou o terceiro não sócio, com poderes de administração na data em que configurada ou presumida a dissolução irregular, ainda que não tenha exercido poderes de gerência quando ocorrido o fato gerador do tributo não adimplido, conforme art. 135, III, do CTN.(REsp 1.645.333-SP) (TEMA 981)
      2. O redirecionamento da execução fiscal, quando fundado na dissolução irregular da pessoa jurídica executada ou na presunção de sua ocorrência, não pode ser autorizado * contra o sócio ou o terceiro não sócio que, embora exercessem poderes de gerência ao tempo do fato gerador, sem incorrer em prática de atos com excesso de poderes ou infração à lei, ao contrato social ou aos estatutos, dela regularmente se retirou e não deu causa à sua posterior dissolução irregular, conforme art. 135, III do CTN. (REsp 1.377.019-SP) (TEMA 962)
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      Referee #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      In this manuscript, Nabeel-Shah et al. identified that the telomeric zinc finger protein ZBTB48 help recruit FTO onto target RNA, including mRNAs and the telomere-associated regulatory RNA TERRA, to achieve cellular RNA m6A/m6Am demethylation, thereby regulating cell biology such as tumour growth studied in this study. The biochemistry and molecular biology experiments were done in HEK293 cells, and the cell models for tumour growth was done in HCT116 cells. However, I have identified both major and minor concerns that, when addressed, could further strengthen the findings and enhance the impact on the field.

      Major concerns

      1. Regarding the ZBTB48/FTO targets and m6A/m6Am level that are regulated by ZBTB48/FTO axis. Wei et al Molecular Cell 2018 (PMID: 30197295) (Figure 1B) quantified the m6A/m6Am levels upon knockdown of FTO in HeLa, HEK293, and 3T3-L1 cells, and found that the m6A/m6Am levels are generally mildly (10-20%) yet significantly upregulated on poly(A)+ RNAs. Here shown in the Figure 4A in this manuscript, the authors show that (1) siFTO and siZBTB48 led to ~2-3 fold upregulation of m6A and m6Am levels using total RNAs (dominant by rRNA in the population), and (2) that the m6A and m6Am levels are similar between siFTO and siZBTB48. Regarding (1), can the authors explain the discrepancy? This point is also relevant to the m6AIP-qRT-PCR results in this manuscript. Regarding (2), does this result suggest that ZBTB48 helps FTO to demethylate nearly all its targets, rather than a subset?
      2. Considering the significance of how FTO achieves target specificity, can the author anticipate the extent of applicability of the proposed model? Does the interaction between ZBTB48 and FTO also exist in various human and mouse cell lines? If confirmed, this discovery would hold substantial value for the field. This interaction at least needs to be confirmed in HCT116 cells used for tumour growth model in this study.

      Minor concerns.

      1. The authors realised that knockdown of ZBTB48 does not change FTO levels, whereas overexpression of ZBTB48 leads to elevated FTO. It is unclear about the rationale behind overexpression studies?
      2. Considering the multifunctional nature of ZBTB48, it's important to disentangle transcriptional and post-transcriptional roles of ZBTB48 to draw conclusions. I appreciate the analysis conducted in this manuscript. Is it possible to overexpress an DNA-binding mutant of ZBTB48 or RNA-binding mutant of ZBTB48 proteins?
      3. In Fig 2B, the innet panel does not match the metagene profile regarding the difference.
      4. In Fig 5H, there is a lack of experiments for comparison, i.e. siFTO and o/e FTO.
      5. Page 3, "Genome-wide studies" should be "Transcriptome-wide studies".

      Significance

      Strengths: The biochemistry and molecular biology experiments are comprehensive and well designed. The analysis is robust, and the conclusions generally align with the presented data.

      Limitations: Cell line-specific and/or species-specific interaction?

      Advance: filling a gap in our knowledge of how FTO achieves target specificity.

      Audience: Basica research in the field of RNA modifications and RNA Biology.

      My expertise: Bioinformatics, gene regulation by RNA m6A modification

  5. May 2024
    1. ação

      Processo: REsp 2.029.809-MG, Rel. Ministro Marco Aurélio Bellizze, Segunda Seção, por unanimidade, julgado em 22/5/2024. (Tema 1200).

      REsp 2.034.650-SP, Rel. Ministro Marco Aurélio Bellizze, Segunda Seção, por unanimidade, julgado em 22/5/2024 (Tema 1200).

      Ramo do Direito DIREITO CIVIL

      TemaPaz, Justiça e Instituições Eficazes <br /> Termo inicial do prazo prescricional de petição de herança. Pretenso filho. Pedido de reconhecimento de paternidade post mortem. Data da abertura da sucessão. Tema 1200.

      DESTAQUE - O prazo prescricional para propor ação de petição de herança conta-se da abertura da sucessão, cuja fluência não é impedida, suspensa ou interrompida pelo ajuizamento de ação de reconhecimento de filiação, independentemente do seu trânsito em julgado.

      INFORMAÇÕES DO INTEIRO TEOR - A controvérsia posta no recurso especial repetitivo centra-se em definir o termo inicial do prazo prescricional da ação de petição de herança, promovida por pretenso filho, cumulativamente com ação de reconhecimento de paternidade post mortem - se seria a partir da abertura da sucessão ou se seria após o trânsito em julgado da ação relativa ao estado de filiação.

      • A Segunda Seção do Superior Tribunal de Justiça, por ocasião do julgamento dos EAREsp n. 1.260.418/MG (Relator Ministro Antônio Carlos Ferreira, julgado em 26/10/2022, DJe 24/11/2022), dissipou a intensa divergência então existente entre as suas Turmas de Direito Privado, para compreender que o prazo prescricional para propor ação de petição de herança conta-se da abertura da sucessão, aplicada a vertente objetiva do princípio da actio nata, adotada como regra no ordenamento jurídico nacional (arts. 177 do CC/1916 e 189 do CC/2002).

      • Compreendeu-se, em resumo, que a teoria da actio nata em sua vertente subjetiva tem aplicação em situações absolutamente excepcionais, apresentando-se, pois, descabida sua adoção no caso da pretensão de petição de herança, em atenção, notadamente, às regras sucessórias postas.

      • De acordo com o art. 1.784 do Código Civil, que internaliza o princípio da saisine, "aberta a sucessão, a herança transmite-se, desde logo, aos herdeiros legítimos e testamentários", independentemente do reconhecimento oficial desta condição. Por sua vez, o art. 1.784 do Código Civil preceitua que: "legitimam-se a suceder as pessoas nascidas ou já concebidas no momento da abertura da sucessão".

      • Dessa maneira, conforme consignado no voto condutor, o pretenso herdeiro poderá, desde logo e independentemente do reconhecimento oficial desta condição (a de herdeiro), postular seus direitos hereditários, nos seguintes moldes: "i) propor ação de investigação de paternidade cumulada com petição de herança; ii) propor concomitantemente, mas em processos distintos, ação de investigação de paternidade e ação de petição de herança, caso em que ambas poderão tramitar simultaneamente, ou se poderá suspender a petição de herança até o julgamento da investigatória; e iii) propor ação de petição de herança, na qual deverão se discutidas, na esfera das causas de pedir, a efetiva paternidade do falecido e a violação do direito hereditário".

      • Reputa-se, assim, absolutamente insubsistente a alegação de que a pretensão de reivindicar os direitos sucessórios apenas surgiria a partir da decisão judicial que reconhece a qualidade de herdeiro.

      • A imprescritibilidade da pretensão atinente ao reconhecimento do estado de filiação - concebida como uma ação declaratória (pura), na qual se pretende, tão somente, a obtenção de uma certeza jurídica, atribuindo-se a ela, em verdade, o caráter de perpetuidade, já que não relacionada nem à reparação/proteção de um direito subjetivo violado, nem ao exercício de um direito potestativo - não poderia conferir ao pretenso filho/herdeiro a prerrogativa de escolher, ao seu exclusivo alvedrio, o momento em que postularia, em juízo, a pretensão da petição de herança, a redundar, indevidamente (considerada a sua natureza ressarcitória), também na imprescritibilidade desta, o que não se pode conceber.

      • Esta linha interpretativa vai na direção da segurança jurídica e da almejada estabilização das relações jurídicas em lapso temporal condizente com a dinâmica natural das situações jurídicas daí decorrentes.

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      • Tema: 1.036
      • Processo(s): RE 1.188.352
      • Relator: Min. Luiz Fux
      • Título: Competência legislativa para editar norma sobre a ordem de fases de processo licitatório, à luz do art. 22, inciso XXVII, da Constituição Federal.
      • O Tribunal fixou a seguinte tese: “São constitucionais as leis dos Estados, Distrito Federal e Municípios que, no procedimento licitatório, antecipam a fase da apresentação das propostas à da habilitação dos licitantes, em razão da competência dos demais entes federativos de legislar sobre procedimento administrativo”.
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      O Índice de Vegetação por Diferença Normalizada (NDVI, do inglês Normalized Difference Vegetation Index) é uma métrica amplamente utilizada na área de sensoriamento remoto para quantificar a vegetação em uma determinada área a partir de imagens de satélite ou aeronaves. Este índice é baseado na reflexão da luz em diferentes comprimentos de onda pelas plantas.

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    1. A noção de cultura
      • O conceito de cultura tem várias acepções, sendo a mais utilizada como um conjunto de crenças, conhecimentos, manifestações artísticas, morais, hábitos, entre outros, que são adquiridos no espaço e no tempo. Por isso, não existe ser humano que não tenha cultura, pois ela é inerente a sua vida.

      • A cultura popular é qualquer manifestação artística (dança, música, ritos, folclore, literatura, arte) que o povo produz e que o povo participe ativamente, sendo o interlocutor.

      • A cultura popular surge de tradições e costumes regionais, vindo de baixo para cima. Ou seja, não é imposta por uma elite ou pelo Estado ou por meio de comunicação tradicionais. Por isso, se diferencia da Cultura de Massas, que utiliza manifestações culturais com distribuição massificada, como a televisão, o futebol, entre outros, que tem por muitas vezes objetos comerciais e econômicos.

      • Os elementos que compõem a cultura popular são importantes fontes da história de um povoado, um Estado e enfim uma nação, e por isso devem ser preservados.

    1. In a Partially Observable Markov Decision Process (POMDP), the system states are unobservable and probabilistically mapped to observations. The agent’s access to the system state is limited, and taking the same action can result in different observations. The observation is, however, still dependent on the system state. Hence, the agent must learn or hold a belief about its observation and learn a policy that accounts for all possible states.

      Trong POMDP, các trạng thái của hệ thống là không thể quan sát được và ở một xác suất nào đó được ghép nối với các quan sát. Mức độ truy cập của tác tử vào trạng thái của hệ thống là hữu hạn và việc thực hiện cùng một hành động có thể dẫn đến nhiều quan sát khác nhau. Tuy vậy, các quan sát vẫn phụ thuộc vào trạng thái của hệ thống.

    1. Según los estudios realizados nuestro país tiene poca cultura y malos hábitos en la lectura, es muy importante tener un buen hábito lector ya que nos permite el desarrollo del pensamiento crítico. Además es crucial crear o generar hábitos lectores, prácticos y culturales en niños ya que desde ahí se cambiaría la sociedad.

    1. Wang et al. (2023a) and Li et al. (2023b) instead proposed to iterate the retrievermodel multiple times. More specifically, the retriever trained in iteration i will be employed toretrieve a new set of candidates for the subsequent iteration i + 1. Such an iterative training approachallows progressively improving retriever quality by mining better positive and hard negative examplesat each iteration

      Nghiên cứu của Wang đã đề xuất việc lặp lại mô hình truy xuất nhiều lần. Cụ thể, mô hình truy xuất được huấn luyện ở vòng lặp thứ i sẽ được sử dụng để truy xuất một tập các ngữ cảnh cho vòng lặp tiếp theo là i +1.Việc huấn luyện như vậy sẽ giúp cải thiện dần chất lượng của mô hình truy xuất bằng cách xác định các mẫu thuận và nghịch tốt hơn.

    2. Order of Demonstrations: The order of demonstrations has been shown to substantially affect themodel performance. For example, Lu et al. (2022b) show that on some tasks, the model performancecan range from near-random to state-of-the-art depending on the order of the prompts, and Zhao et al.(2021) show that answers appearing toward the end of the prompt are more likely to be predicted bythe model

      Thứ tự của ngữ cảnh có ảnh hướng rất lớn đến kết quả của mô hình. Nghiên cứu của zhao cho thấy các câu trả lời xuất hiện ở gần cuối của prompt khả năng cao sẽ được dự đoán bởi mô hình.

    1. As tecnologias digitais da informação e comunicação (TDIC) estão cada vezmais presentes no cotidiano das pessoas e com isso as formas de se comunicar,trabalhar, de se relacionar e de aprender foram mudando. Na educação, o uso dasTDICs tem sido integrado nas práticas docentes com o objetivo de fomentar oprocesso de ensino aprendizagem mais significativo, implementando novasmetodologias ativas que alinhem com a realidade dos alunos e ao mesmo tempodesperte o interesse deles em todo o processo da Educação Básica.A Base Nacional Comum Curricular (BNCC) faz referência quanto ao usocrítico e responsável das TDICs de forma transversal em que contempla todas asáreas do conhecimento e as destaca nas várias competências e habilidade

      O texto destaca a crescente presença das Tecnologias Digitais da Informação e Comunicação (TDIC) no dia a dia das pessoas e como isso tem impactado diferentes aspectos, desde a comunicação até a educação. Na área educacional, a integração das TDICs nas práticas docentes busca promover um processo de ensino-aprendizagem mais significativo, incorporando metodologias ativas que estejam alinhadas com a realidade dos alunos e que despertem o interesse deles ao longo de toda a Educação Básica.

    2. o novo meio de comunicação que surge da interconexão mundialdos computadores. O termo especifica não apenas a infraestruturamaterial da comunicação digital mas também o universo oceânico deinformações que ela abriga, assim como os seres humanos quenavegam e alimentam esse universo

      O autor considera que o ciberespaço é muito mais do que apenas um recurso ou uma solução técnica; ele visa, por meio de qualquer tipo de conexão física, um tipo específico de relacionamento entre as pessoas.

    3. O conceito de educação aberta também envolve os princípios que embasamas práticas pedagógicas abertas que tem enfoque na acessibilidade, igualdade e8

      Lewis e Spencer (1986) definem a Educação Aberta como um termo utilizado para descrever cursos flexíveis, desenvolvidos para atender necessidades individuais; que visam remover as barreiras de acesso à educação tradicional, e sugerem uma filosofia de aprendizagem centrada no aluno (SANTOS, 2012).

    4. O conceito de educação aberta também envolve os princípios que embasam as práticas pedagógicas abertas que tem enfoque na acessibilidade, igualdade e a inclusão. Tem como base as tecnologias abertas para facilitar o processo de ensino e aprendizagem colaborativo de maneira flexível para que todos tenham acesso ao material compartilhado. A inclusão não é responsabilidade exclusiva das escolas, mas também da comunidade em geral. Logo, estabelecer parcerias com organizações da sociedade civil, famílias e outros stakeholders é essencial para criar um ambiente de apoio à educação inclusiva. A educação inclusiva a qual faço referência é a amparada pela Constituição Federal de 1988, que estabelece a igualdade de direitos e a proibição da discriminação, baseando-se em indivíduos com deficiência, discriminação de gênero, etnia e religião, dentre outros. Há que se pensar nos parâmetros que identificam inclusão e acessibilidade: infraestrutura adequada, formação contínua dos professores, adaptação curricular, recursos financeiros limitados etc. Abordo aqui também que a educação aberta não se liga somente ao uso desses Recursos e vai muito além do conceito EaD. Tanto os recursos quanto as práticas educacionais de acesso aberto contextualizam em uma interação social que passa de um modelo de transferência para um modelo de práticas sociais, assim a EaD ganhou novos impulsos a partir do movimento REA, criando espaços de comunicação, colaboração e aprendizagem que encorajam os participantes dessas comunidades a explorarem múltiplas representações da realidade e de processos colaborativos de construção do conhecimento. Falando em educação inclusiva, podemos dizer que a modalidade EaD promove a equidade educacional para atender às diversidades dos alunos, promovendo a participação colaborativa de todos dentro dessa comunidade, independente de suas características ou especificidades individuais e atemporais.

    5. Com o advento da pandemia COVID-19 surgiram novos desafios na educaçãopresencial em que os REAs obtiveram mais importância e seu uso ganhouintensidade, com o objetivo de contribuir e promover uma educação mais igualitáriae minimizar as implicações causadas pelo período pandêmico.

      A desmistificação do uso da tecnologia na educação é uma das contribuições das atualizações de didática impulsionada pelas aulas online.

    1. 65% dos entrevistados disseram usar dados para justificar uma decisão já tomada, normalmente pela pessoa mais bem paga na organização.

      O que me parece que pode acontecer aqui é que a chamada "pessoa mais bem paga na organização" pode ter uma hipótese sobre um determinado movimento, na qual já acredita fortemente, e usar a IA para embasar essa percepção. Logo, a pergunta já é feita com viés e a IA pode facilmente selecionar dados que corroborem com a hipótese. Sempre há dados que podem ajudar a corroborar algo. No caso, entendo que para evitar esse viés, os dados que contradizem o que se quer devem ser explorados também. Se pararmos para pensar um pouco, isso passa por um reeducação massiva, tendo em vista que somos altamente enviesados nas nossas percepções sobre a realidade de acordo com o nosso ambiente.

    2. Gestores de diferentes áreas, mas principalmente aqueles ligados a implantações de inteligência artificial e análise de dados, devem cuidar para que não cheguemos a isso. A IA deve auxiliar na tomada de decisões, mas não pode responder sozinha por elas. Considerando que, em um tempo relativamente curto, todo mundo usará essa tecnologia no seu cotidiano, as pessoas devem ser educadas para compreender o que estão fazendo e se apropriar do processo, sedo responsáveis pelas consequências de suas decisões apoiadas pelas máquinas.No final, o conceito de inteligência coletiva do mundo animal pode mesmo guiar nossos passos nesse mundo em transformação acelerada pela IA. Todos devemos ter autonomia para tomar mais e melhores decisões dentro do escopo de nossas atuações, mas elas devem estar sempre alinhadas com um objetivo maior

      Na minha opinião, é essencial que gestores, especialmente aqueles envolvidos com inteligência artificial e análise de dados, usem a IA de maneira consciente e responsável. A IA deve ser uma ferramenta poderosa para apoiar nossas decisões, mas não deve substituir o julgamento humano. Com o avanço rápido dessa tecnologia em nosso cotidiano, acredito que todos nós precisamos nos educar para entender e dominar esse processo, assumindo a responsabilidade pelas decisões tomadas..

    3. A IA deve auxiliar na tomada de decisões, mas não pode responder sozinha por elas.

      Recentemente li uma reportagem que mencionava que as organizações que usam as máquinas apenas para substituir os funcionários por meio da automação não aproveitarão todo o potencial da IA. A IA pode operar em velocidades e escalas muito fora do nosso alcance, mas as máquinas ainda estão muito longe de reproduzir a flexibilidade, a curiosidade e a compreensão do contexto humano.

    4. Em um deles, veremos a tomada de decisões e a liderança se tornando demasiadamente centralizadas por tecnologias digitais. "Isto eliminaria a autonomia das pessoas, e lhe falta a diversidade e a inclusão que levam a melhores decisões", explicou.

      Esse futuro distópico chama a atenção para o seguinte ponto: a ação humana é necessária na mediação das tecnologias e principalmente da IA.

    5. Esse fenômeno se observa desde enxames de abelhas até matilhas de lobos. Nelas, cada indivíduo tem autonomia para tomar suas decisões, mas também trabalha para os objetivos do grupo. Dessa maneira, ele não apenas sobrevive, como também prospera, atingindo coletivamente ganhos que não conseguiria sozinho.

      Achei incrível essa comparação entre a colaboração entre os animais e dos humanos com a máquina. De fato, nós somos capazes de realizar muitas tarefas sozinhos, mas com o auxílio das IAs nós podemos potencializar e otimizar essas tarefas. Ou seja, a tecnologia não está aí para nos substituir até então, mas para atuar como nossas grandes aliadas.

    6. Segundo os executivos, a inteligência artificial funciona agora como um facilitador para as pessoas criarem valores inéditos juntas. Mas, para isso, as empresas precisam reorganizar seus modelos operacionais para dar autonomia e flexibilidade aos profissionais. Devem também ampliar sua educação para usos conscientes dos dados e da IA. Por fim, precisam distribuir autoridade e responsabilidade para que todos atuem com um propósito bem definido, em todos os níveis da organização.

      A inteligência artificial carrega inúmeras possibilidades de criação e inovação. Pensando na questão da IA nas empresas, é essencial que as corporações promovam mudanças em seus modelos operacionais, favorecendo para mais autonomia e flexibilidade aos profissionais. Além disso, é fundamental investir em educação para o uso ético e responsável dos dados e da IA, além da necessidade de que todos atuem com um propósito claro e bem definido. Assim, os ganhos serão muito mais significativos.

    7. Mas isso não é verdade: o ser humano ainda precisa supervisionar seu aprendizado e suas conclusões.

      As grandes descobertas e os inúmeros avanços relacionados à Inteligência Artificial nos últimos tempos, trazem benefícios e também dúvidas a respeito dos impactos sociais que as tecnologias podem ocasionar.

      Nesse contexto, ter como cerne a conciliação entre pessoas e suas interações com as máquinas em prol de melhorias sistêmicas para a sociedade.

      Sob essa ótica, o tema relaciona-se diretamente com o futuro do trabalho. Particularmente, espero que esse futuro nos resguarde com mais oportunidades, do que ameaças.

    8. "Esse fenômeno se observa desde enxames de abelhas até matilhas de lobos. Nelas, cada indivíduo tem autonomia para tomar suas decisões, mas também trabalha para os objetivos do grupo. Dessa maneira, ele não apenas sobrevive, como também prospera, atingindo coletivamente ganhos que não conseguiria sozinho." Este trecho do texto destaca a importância de se trabalhar em coletivo, mas sempre amparado por sua própria capacidade lógica e intelectual e desta forma conseguindo os melhores resultados. Em educação o pensar e criar coletivamente faz parte do processo de construção de aprendizagens e pode se apoiar em ferramentas digitais e inteligências artificiais. Lembrando a importância de se utilizar a ferramenta e não "ser usado" por ela. Assim, ela complementa nossas ideias e potencializa nosso trabalho como docentes.

    9. A cada dia, aplicações com inteligência artificial surgem nos mais diversos setores. O ChatGPT mostrou para as massas como essa tecnologia pode trazer grandes ganhos de produtividade, e isso ciou uma sensação de que a IA automatizará tudo por conta própria. Mas isso não é verdade: o ser humano ainda precisa supervisionar seu aprendizado e suas conclusões. Ainda assim, a colaboração inteligente entre máquinas e pessoas pode tornar possível coisas até então inimagináveis.

      Esse trecho do texto me chamou a atenção, pois relata o potencial da Inteligência Artificial, revelada por meio do CHATGPT, a presença da insegurança sobre a automatização de tudo, porém ressaltando a relevância do ser humano para supervisionar seu aprendizado e suas conclusões. Creio que o papel do ser humano é ainda mais amplo em relação à Inteligência Artificial, pois ela não é um fim em si mesma, mas uma ferramenta a serviço dos seres humanos. Portanto, é essencial que os humanos assumam a liderança na definição dos objetivos e propósitos éticos para o desenvolvimento e aplicação da IA. Questões éticas e morais são fundamentalmente humanas, pois apenas os seres humanos têm a capacidade de refletir, debater e estabelecer princípios éticos que devem reger o uso da IA, de modo a evitar danos e proteger os valores humanos. As relações sociais e interpessoais são aspectos centrais da experiência humana, mesmo com a automação de tarefas, a dimensão humana das interações, cooperação e liderança não pode ser substituída pela IA. A questão chave é que, mesmo com o avanço impressionante da IA, o papel do ser humano ainda é fundamental, não se trata de uma substituição, mas de uma colaboração sinérgica que potencializa as capacidades de ambos. Nesse sentido, é necessário aproveitar os benefícios da IA de forma responsável e sustentável, considerando a relevância humana como crucial nesse cenário.

    10. As aplicações da inteligência artificial(IA) tem se mostrado cada vez mais frequente no cotidiano da população.O uso se estende da região educacional e saúde até organização domiciliar,com eletrodomésticos conectados à um celular.É inegável que sua utilização agiliza o trabalho,resultando em produções elaboradas em um curto intervalo de tempo,mas não se pode esquecer da hierarquia existente entre máquina e ser humano.O indivíduo necessita ter um senso crítico para avaliar se o retorno porposto por uma IA é coerente e totalmente correta,principalmente quando aplicada em setores como a área da saúde.Para que essa análise seja feita,é fundamental que o conhecimento do indivíduo seja superior ao da máquina,visando a IA como uma ferramenta de ajuda e não como a protagonista da formação do conhecimento.

    11. As aplicações da inteligência artificial(IA) tem se mostrado cada vez mais frequente no cotidiano da população.O uso se estende da região educacional e saúde até organização domiciliar,com eletrodomésticos conectados à um celular.É inegável que sua utilização agiliza o trabalho,resultando em produções elaboradas em um curto intervalo de tempo,mas não se pode esquecer da hierarquia existente entre máquina e ser humano.O indivíduo necessita ter um senso crítico para avaliar se o retorno porposto por uma IA é coerente e totalmente correta,principalmente quando aplicada em setores como a área da saúde.Para que essa análise seja feita,é fundamental que o conhecimento do indivíduo seja superior ao da máquina,visando a IA como uma ferramenta de ajuda e não como a protagonista da formação do conhecimento.

    12. Segundo os executivos, a inteligência artificial funciona agora como um facilitador para as pessoas criarem valores inéditos juntas. Mas, para isso, as empresas precisam reorganizar seus modelos operacionais para dar autonomia e flexibilidade aos profissionais. Devem também ampliar sua educação para usos conscientes dos dados e da IA. Por fim, precisam distribuir autoridade e responsabilidade para que todos atuem com um propósito bem definido, em todos os níveis da organização.

      A grande questão colocada pela reportagem é como a IA (Inteligência Artificial) pode ajudar nas tomadas de decisões dentro de grupos de pessoas em ambientes empresariais. A analogia feita é com o conceito de inteligência coletiva, presente no mundo animal, como no caso da cooperação das abelhas, ou seja, cada indivíduo do grupo tem uma certa autonomia para realizar o seu trabalho, mas ao mesmo tempo pode contribuir para o trabalho do todo. A IA pode ser um mecanismo que ajude neste processo, mesmo que o texto não explique muito bem como seria. Entretanto, os articuladores desta ideia apontam que na maioria das empresas existem deficiências nas tomadas de decisões, principalmente porque elas não são baseadas em dados. A IA poderia ser um desses embasamentos, colaborando para que a decisão tomada seja justificada a partir de dados de demandas internas do grupo e não só através da opinião de um gestor. A questão que coloco então é: se o IA é, grosso modo, um articulador que apresenta de uma forma coerente, e se possível muito próxima do discurso humano, de dados dispersos presentes nos bancos de dados que alimentam as informação da internet, não seria possível então que ele seja usado exatamente de maneira contrária ao que se propõem o texto? Isso porque, como o próprio texto aponta, as informações que ele buscará serão sempre informações passadas, de modos de como gestores do mundo inteiro resolveram problemas semelhantes. Isso é extremamente perigoso, pois via de regra nossas decisões em situações sociais humanas (e o ambiente de trabalho é uma delas) exigem respostas muito particulares e exatamente por conta desta particularidades, inéditas. Mas a IA e o ineditismo paradigmático, pelo menos por enquanto caminham separados. O risco é que tenhamos decisões baseadas na IA que apenas sejam estereótipos de decisões anteriores e pior, com os mesmos vieses de preconceitos em determinados assuntos que já estão presentes na sociedade. Como paralelo, vale lembrar de como os primeiros algoritmos de reconhecimento facial davam respostas de cunho racista por exatamente utilizarem bancos de dados que foram montados a partir de imagens só de pessoas brancas, pois na sociedade racista ocidental, rostos brancos eram a maioria nos bancos de dados. Ou seja, talvez a caixa preta da tomada de decisões, não esteja realmente disponível para ser aberta. O texto de certa forma também previne sobre isso, dizendo que a IA não deverá responder sozinha pelas tomadas de decisão, mas então qual seria sua grande contribuição? Uma ferramenta mais avançada de análise de dados? Não muito diferente do que temos hoje (embora muito mais rápida). Dá a impressão de ser um daqueles templates de apresentação em power point que, embora ajudem a construir uma apresentação de forma rápida, sempre será inútil se o conteúdo da apresentação não for bom. Enfim, são algumas questões para pensarmos.

    1. c)

      Assim como art. 195, § 7º, a expressão "requisitos da lei" deverá ser interpretado como exigência de lei complementar, em conformidade com o Tema 32 assentado no RE 566622:

      • IMUNIDADE – DISCIPLINA – LEI COMPLEMENTAR. Ante a Constituição Federal, que a todos indistintamente submete, a regência de imunidade faz-se mediante lei complementar.
      • Tema 32 - Reserva de lei complementar para instituir requisitos à concessão de imunidade tributária às entidades beneficentes de assistência social.

      • Tese: A lei complementar é forma exigível para a definição do modo beneficente de atuação das entidades de assistência social contempladas pelo art. 195, § 7º, da CF, especialmente no que se refere à instituição de contrapartidas a serem por elas observadas.

      Vide:

      Art. 146. Cabe à lei complementar:

      II - regular as limitações constitucionais ao poder de tributar;

    1. os alunos deram indícios de que entenderame se lembraram das informações mais claramente

      Do ponto de vista da neurociência da aprendizagem, a ABP se mostra eficaz ao envolver os alunos em atividades práticas que aumentam o engajamento e a motivação, aspectos essenciais para a formação de memórias duradouras. Além disso, a flexibilidade cognitiva promovida pela ABP facilita a adaptação a novas informações e a aplicação de conhecimentos em diversos contextos, enquanto a colaboração em grupo ativa redes neurais que favorecem a aprendizagem profunda e a retenção de informações. Esses elementos combinados ajudam os alunos a transferir conhecimentos e habilidades aprendidos para novos contextos, confirmando a eficácia da ABP como abordagem pedagógica. Já adotei essa metodologia em sala de aula há algum tempo e obtive ótimos resultados!

    2. A conexão entre os conteúdos curriculares e a vida real é essencial para uma aprendizagem mais significativa e imersiva. O trabalho baseado em projetos e a Aprendizagem Baseada em Problemas permitem aos alunos uma visão mais ampla e integrada do conhecimento, estimulando a reflexão, a criatividade e o desenvolvimento de habilidades práticas. Dessa forma, a valorização do trabalho baseado em projetos e da ABP no contexto educacional é fundamental para preparar os alunos para os desafios do mundo contemporâneo e estimular o pensamento crítico e a resolução de problemas de forma colaborativa. Além de promover uma imersão e uma aprendizagem que faça mais sentido aos estudantes.

    3. Promover a inteligência coletiva por meio da aprendizagem baseada em projetos é uma abordagem incrível. Essa metodologia não apenas desenvolve habilidades práticas e conhecimento, mas também incentiva a colaboração, comunicação e resolução de problemas em equipe. Ao trabalhar em projetos, os participantes aprendem a compartilhar ideias, aprimorar soluções e alcançar objetivos comuns, refletindo a dinâmica da inteligência coletiva. Além disso, essa abordagem proporciona um ambiente onde todos contribuem com suas habilidades únicas, fortalecendo a diversidade de perspectivas e ampliando o potencial criativo do grupo.

    4. A aprendizagem baseada em projetos (ABP) é uma abordagem educacional onde os alunos são engajados a participarem de atividades práticas visando um aprendizado mais profundo e significativo. Ao trabalharem em projetos que solucionam problemas reais e da comunidade, aplicam os conhecimentos teóricos visando o pensamento crítico, a colaboração, comunicação,investigação e planejamento. Eles se tornam protagonistas de seu próprio aprendizado, partindo da definição do problema,projetos para a sua resolução,implementação e análise de resultados através da tomada de decisões e responsabilidades ao longo do processo.

    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews. 

      eLife assessment<br /> This important manuscript follows up on previous findings from the same lab supporting the idea that deficits in learning due to enhanced synaptic plasticity are due to saturation effects. Compelling evidence is presented that behavioral learning deficits associated with enhanced synaptic plasticity in a transgenic mouse model can be rescued by manipulations designed to reverse the saturation of synaptic plasticity. In particular, the finding that a previously FDA-approved therapeutic can rescue learning could provide new insights for biologists, psychologists, and others studying learning and neurodevelopment.

      eLife assessment, Significance of findings

      This valuable manuscript follows up on previous findings from the same lab supporting the idea that deficits in learning due to enhanced synaptic plasticity are due to saturation effects. 

      According to the eLife criteria for assessing significance, the “valuable” assessment indicates “findings that have theoretical or practical implications for a subfield.” We have revised the manuscript to emphasize the “theoretical and practical implications beyond a single subfield” which “substantially advance our understanding of major research questions”, with “profound implications” and the potential for “widespread influence,” the eLife criteria for a designation of “landmark” significance.   

      The most immediate implications of our results are for the two major neuroscience subfields of cerebellar research and autism research. However, as recognized by Reviewer 2, the implications are much broader than that: “the finding that a previously FDA-approved therapeutic can rescue learning could provide important new insights for biologists, psychologists, and others studying learning and neurodevelopment.” We have substantially revised the Discussion section of the manuscript to more explicitly lay out how the central idea of our manuscript-- that the capacity for learning at any given moment is powerfully influenced by dynamic, activity- and plasticity-dependent changes in the threshold for synaptic plasticity over short timescales of tens of minutes to hours --has implications for scientific thinking and experiments on plasticity and learning throughout the brain, as well as clinical practice for a wide array of brain disorders associated with altered plasticity and learning impairment. 

      To emphasize the broad conceptual implications of our research, we have reframed our conclusions in terms of metaplasticity rather than saturation of plasticity throughout the revised manuscript. In our previous submission, we had used the “saturation “ terminology for continuity with our previous NguyenVu et al 2017 eLife paper, and mentioned the related idea of threshold metaplasticity in a single sentence: “Similarly, the aberrant recruitment of LTD before training may lead, not to its saturation per se, but to some other kind of reduced availability, such as an increased threshold for its induction (Bienenstock, Cooper, and Munro, 1982; Leet, Bear, and Gaier, 2022).” However, we now appreciate that metaplasticity is a more general conceptual framework for our findings, and therefore emphasize this concept in the revised manuscript, while still making the conceptual link with the “saturation” idea presented in NguyenVu et al 2017 (lines 236-238). 

      The concept of a sliding threshold for synaptic plasticity (threshold metaplasticity) was proposed four decades ago by Bienenstock, Cooper and Munro (1982) as a mechanism for countering an instability inherent in Hebbian plasticity whereby correlated pre- and post-synaptic activity strengthens a synapse, which leads to an increase in correlated activity, which in turn leads to further strengthening. To counter this, BCM proposed a sliding threshold whereby increases in neural activity increase the threshold for LTP and decreases in activity decrease the threshold for LTP, thereby providing a mechanism for stabilizing firing rates and synaptic weights. This BCM sliding threshold model has been highly influential in theoretical and computational neuroscience, but experimental evidence for whether and how such a mechanism functions in vivo has been quite limited.  

      Our work extends the previous, limited experimental evidence for a BCM-like sliding threshold in vivo in several significant ways, which we now discuss in the revised manuscript:

      First, we analyze threshold metaplasticity at synapses where the plasticity is not Hebbian and lacks the inherent instability that inspired the BCM model. The synapses onto cerebellar Purkinje cells have been described as “anti-Hebbian” because the associative form of plasticity is synaptic LTD of excitatory inputs. This anti-Hebbian associative plasticity lacks the instability inherent in Hebbian plasticity. Moreover, a BCM-like sliding threshold that increases the threshold for associative LTD with increased firing rates and decreases threshold for LTD with decreased firing rates would tend to oppose rather than support the stability of firing rates, nevertheless we find evidence for this in our experimental results. Thus, for cerebellar LTD, the central function of the sliding threshold may not be the stabilization of firing rates, but rather to limit plasticity in order to suppress the overwrite of new memories or to allocate different memories to the synapses of different Purkinje cells. 

      Second, we analyze the influence of a BCM-like sliding threshold for plasticity on behavioral learning. Most previous evidence for the BCM model in vivo has derived from studies of the effects of sensory deprivation (e.g., monocular occlusion) on the functional connectivity of sensory circuits (Kirkwood et al., 1996; Desai et al. 2002; Fong et al., 2021) rather than on learning per se.  

      Third, our results provide evidence for major changes in the threshold for plasticity over short time scales and with more subtle manipulations of neural activity than used in previous studies, with practical implications for clinical application. Previously, metaplasticity has been demonstrated with sensory deprivation over multiple days (Kirkwood et al., 1996; Desai et al. 2002) or with drastic changes in neural activity, such as with TTX in the retina (Fong et al, 2021), TMS (Hamada et al 2008), or high frequency electrical stimulation in vitro (Holland & Wagner 1998; Montgomery & Madison 2002) or in vivo (Abraham et al 2001). In contrast, we provide evidence for metaplasticity induced by 30 min of behavioral manipulation (pre-training) and by the relatively subtle pharmacological manipulation of activity with systemic administration of diazepam, a drug approved for humans. Thus, our work contributes not only conceptually to understanding the function of threshold metaplasticity in vivo, but also offers practical observations that could pave the way for novel therapeutic interventions.  

      Fourth, whereas efforts to enhance plasticity and learning have largely focused on increasing the excitability of neurons during learning to help cross the threshold for plasticity (e.g., Albergaria et al., 2018; Yamaguchi et al., 2020; Le Friec et al., 2017), we take the opposite, somewhat counterintuitive approach of inhibiting the excitability of neurons during a period before learning to reset the threshold for plasticity to a state compatible with new learning. To our knowledge, the only other application of such an approach in an animal model of a brain disorder has been inhibiting peripheral (retinal) activity with TTX for treatment of amblyopia (Fong et al, 2021). Our findings from CNS inhibition with a single systemic dose of diazepam greatly expands the potential applications, which could readily be tested in other mouse models of human disorders, and other learning deficits. Even in cases where the specific synaptic impairments and circuitry are less fully understood, the impact of suppressing neural activity during a period before training to reduce the threshold for plasticity could be empirically tested.  

      Fifth, our work extends the consideration of a BCM-like sliding threshold for plasticity to the cerebellum, whereas previous work has focused on models and experimental studies of forebrain circuits. Currently there is a surge of interest in the contribution of the cerebellum to functions and brain disorders previously ascribed to forebrain, hence we anticipate broad interest in this work. 

      Sixth, our results suggest that the history of plasticity rather than the history of firing rates may be the homeostat controlling the threshold for plasticity, at least at the synapses under consideration. Diazepam pre-treatment only enhanced learning in the L7-Fmr1 KO mice with a low “baseline” threshold for plasticity, as measured in vitro, and not WT mice. This suggests it is not the neural activity per se that drives the change in threshold for plasticity, but the interaction of activity with the plasticity mechanism.

      In the revised Discussion, we make all of the above points, to make the implications more clear to readers.  

      The broad interest in this topic is illustrated by two concrete examples. First, an abstract of this work was honored with selection for oral presentation at the November 2023 Symposium of the Molecular and Cellular Cognition Society, a conceptually wide-ranging organization with thousands of members worldwide. Second, the most closely related published work on activity-dependent metaplasticity in vivo, the Fong et al 2021 eLife paper demonstrating reversal of amblyopia by suppression of activity in the retina by TTX, attracted such broad interest, not just of professional scientists, but also the general public, as to be reported on National Public Radio’s All Things Considered, with an audience of 11.9 million people worldwide.  

      In considering the potential of this work for widespread influence, it is important to note that activitydriven changes in the threshold for plasticity could very well be a general property of most if not all synapses, yet very little is known about its function in vivo, especially during learning.  Therefore, the seminal conceptual and practical advances described above have the potential for profound implications throughout neuroscience, psychiatry, neurology and computer science/AI, the eLife criterion for designation as “landmark” in significance. We respectfully request that the reviewers and editor reassess the significance of our findings in light of our much-improved discussion of the broad significance of the work.

      eLife assessment, Strength of support

      Convincing evidence is presented that behavioral learning deficits associated with enhanced synaptic plasticity in a transgenic mouse model can be rescued by manipulations designed to reverse the saturation of synaptic plasticity. In particular, the finding that a previously FDA-approved therapeutic can rescue learning could provide important new insights for biologists, psychologists, and others studying learning and neurodevelopment.

      The designation of “Convincing” indicates “methodology in line with current state-of the-art.” In the revised Discussion, we more clearly highlight that our evidence is “more rigorous than current state-ofthe-art” in several respects, thereby meeting the eLife criterion for “Compelling”:

      (1) Comparison of learning deficits and effects of behavioral and pharmacological pretreatment across five closely related oculomotor learning tasks, which all depend on the same region of the cerebellum (the flocculus), but which previous work has found to vary in their dependence on LTD at the cerebellar parallel fiber-to-Purkinje cell synapses. 

      The “state-of-the-art” behavioral standard in the field of learning is assessment of a single learning task that depends on a given brain area, with the implicit or explicit assumption that the task chosen is representative of “cerebellum-dependent learning” or hippocampus-, amygdala-, basal ganglia-, cortex- dependent learning, etc. Sometimes there is a no-learning behavioral control. 

      Our study exceeds this standard by comparing across many different closely related learning tasks, which all depend on the cerebellar flocculus and other shared vestibular, visual, and oculomotor circuitry, but vary in their dependence on LTD at the cerebellar parallel fiber-to-Purkinje cell synapses. In the original submission, we reported results for high-frequency VOR-increase learning that were dramatically different than for three other VOR learning tasks for which there is less evidence for a role of LTD. Reviewer 2 noted, “the specificity of the effects to forms of plasticity previously shown to require LTD is remarkable.” In the revised manuscript, we provide new data for a second oculomotor learning task in which LTD has been implicated, OKR adaptation, with very similar results as for high-frequency VORincrease learning. The remarkable specificity of both the learning deficits and the effects of pre-training manipulations, in two different lines of mice, for the two specific learning tasks in which LTD has been most strongly implicated, and not the other three oculomotor learning tasks, substantially strengthens the evidence for the conclusion that the learning deficits and effects of pre-training are related specifically to the lower threshold for LTD, rather than the result of some other effect of the gene KO or pre-treatment on the cerebellar or oculomotor circuitry (discussed on lines 270-290 of revised manuscript). 

      (2) Replication of findings in more than one line of mice, targeting distinct signaling pathways, with a common impact of enhancing LTD at the cerebellar PF-Purkinje cell synapses.  

      State-of-the-art is to report the effects of one specific molecular signaling pathway on behavior. 

      In the first part of this Research Advance, we replicate the findings of Nguyen-Vu et al 2017 for a completely different line of mice with enhanced LTD at the parallel fiber-to-Purkinje cell synapses. Like the comparison across LTD-dependent and LTD-independent oculomotor learning tasks, the comparison across completely different lines of mice with enhanced LTD strengthens the evidence that the shared behavioral phenotypes are a reflection of the state of LTD rather than other “off-target” effects of each mutation (discussed on lines 291-309 of revised manuscript).

      (3) Reversal of learning impairments with more than one type of treatment. 

      State-of-the-art is to be able to reverse a learning deficit or other functional impairment in an animal model of a brain disorder with a single treatment; indeed, success in this respect is viewed as wildly exciting, as evidenced by the reception by the scientific and lay communities of the Fong et al, 2021 eLife report of reversal of amblyopia by TTX treatment of the retina. 

      In the current work, we demonstrate reversal of learning deficits with two different types of treatment during the period before training, one behavioral and one pharmacological. The current diazepam pretreatment results provide a fundamentally new type of evidence for the hypothesis that the threshold for LTD and LTD-dependent learning varies with the recent history of activity in the circuit, complementing the evidence from behavioral and optogenetic pre-training approaches used previously in Nguyen-Vu et al, 2017 (discussed on lines 151-158 and 246-255 of revised manuscript).

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Shakhawat et al., investigated how enhancement of plasticity and impairment could result in the same behavioral phenotype. The authors tested the hypothesis that learning impairments result from saturation of plasticity mechanisms and had previously tested this hypothesis using mice lacking two class I major histocompatibility molecules. The current study extends this work by testing the saturation hypothesis in a Purkinje-cell (L7) specific Fmr1 knockout mouse mice, which have enhanced parallel fiber-Purkinje cell LTD. The authors found that L7-Fmr1 knockout mice are impaired on an oculomotor learning task and both pre-training, to reverse LTD, and diazepam, to suppress neural activity, eliminated the deficit when compared to controls.

      Strengths:

      This study tests the "saturation hypothesis" to understand plasticity in learning using a well-known behavior task, VOR, and an additional genetic mouse line with a cerebellar cell-specific target, L7-Fmr1 KO. This hypothesis is of interest to the community as it evokes a novel inquisition into LTD that has not been examined previously.

      Utilizing a cell-specific mouse line that has been previously used as a genetic model to study Fragile X syndrome is a unique way to study the role of Purkinje cells and the Fmr1 gene. This increases the understanding in the field in regards to Fragile X syndrome and LTD.

      The VOR task is a classic behavior task that is well understood, therefore using this metric is very reliable for testing new animal models and treatment strategies. The effects of pretraining are clearly robust and this analysis technique could be applied across different behavior data sets.

      The rescue shown using diazepam is very interesting as this is a therapeutic that could be used in clinical populations as it is already approved.

      There was a proper use of controls and all animal information was described. The statistical analysis and figures are clear and well describe the results.

      We thank the reviewer for summarizing the main strengths of our original submission. We have further strengthened the revised submission by 

      (1) more fully discussing the broad conceptual implications, as outlined above; 

      (2) adding additional new data (Fig. 5) showing that another LTD-dependent oculomotor learning task, optokinetic reflex (OKR) adaptation, is impaired in the L7-Fmr1 KO mice and rescued by pre-treatment with diazepam, as we had already shown for high-frequency VOR increase learning;  3) responding to the specific points raised by the reviewers, as detailed below.

      Weaknesses:

      While the proposed hypothesis is tested using genetic animal models and the VOR task, LTD itself is not measured. This study would have benefited from a direct analysis of LTD in the cerebellar cortex in the proposed circuits.

      Our current experiments were motivated by the direct analysis of cerebellar LTD in Fmr1 knock out mice that was already published (Koekkoek et al., 2005). In that previous work, LTD was analyzed in both Purkinje cell selective L7-Fmr1 KO mice (Koekkoek et al., 2005; Fig. 4D), as used in our study, and global Fmr1 knock out mice (Koekkoek et al., 2005; Fig. 4B). Both lines were found to have enhanced LTD, as cited in the Introduction of our manuscript (lines 48-51, 63-64). The goal of our current study was to build on this previous work by analyzing the behavioral correlates of the findings from this previous, direct analysis of LTD. 

      Diazepam was shown to rescue learning in L7-Fmr1 KO mice, but this drug is a benzodiazepine and can cause a physical dependence. While the concentrations used in this study were quite low and animals were dosed acutely, potential side-effects of the drug were not examined, including any possible withdrawal. 

      In humans, diazepam (valium) is one of the most frequently prescribed drugs in the world, and the side effects and withdrawal symptoms have been extensively studied and documented.1 Withdrawal symptoms are generally not observed with treatments of less than 2 weeks (Brett and Murnion, 2015). After longterm treatments tapering of the dosage is recommended to mitigate withdrawal (Brett and Murnion, 2015 and https://americanaddictioncenters.org/valium-treatment/withdrawal-duration). The extensive data on the safety of diazepam in humans lowers the barrier to potential clinical translation of our basic science findings, although we emphasize that our own expertise is scientific, and translation to Fragile X patients or other patient groups will require additional development of the research by clinicians.

      Given the extensive history of research on this drug, we focused on looking for side effects that would reflect an adverse effect of diazepam on the function of the same oculomotor neural circuitry whose ability to support certain oculomotor learning tasks was improved after diazepam. In other words, we assessed whether the pharmacological manipulation was enhancing certain functions of a given circuit at the expense of others. As we note (line 164), “The acute effect of diazepam administration [measured 2 hours after administration] was to impair learning” in both WT and L7-Fmr1 KO mice. One could consider this a side effect. More importantly, we also tested extensively for oculomotor side-effects during the therapeutic period when learning impairments were eliminated in the L7-Fmr1 KOs, 18-24 hours post-administration, and have a full section of the Results describing our findings about this, titled “Specificity of pre-training effects on learning.” As described in the Results and Discussion (lines 184195, 312-318, Figure 3, figure 3-supplement1; figure 4B; figure 5-supplement 1), we found no such adverse side-effects, which is again encouraging with respect to the translational potential of our findings. 

      This drug is not specific to Purkinje cells or cerebellar circuits, so the action of the drug on cerebellar circuitry is not well understood for the study presented.

      The effects of diazepam are indeed not specific to Purkinje cells, but rather are known to be widespread. Diazepam is a positive allosteric modulator of GABAA receptors, which are found throughout the brain, including the cerebellum. When delivered systemically, as we did in our experiments, diazepam will suppress neural activity throughout the brain by facilitating inhibition, as documented by decades of previous research with this and related benzodiazepines, including dozens of studies of the effects of diazepam in the cerebellum. 

      To our knowledge, there is currently no drug that can specifically inhibit Purkinje cells, especially one that can be given systemically to cross the blood-brain barrier. Moreover, if such a drug did exist, we would not predict it to have the same effect as diazepam in reversing the learning deficits of the L7-Fmr1 KO mice, because the latter presumably depends on suppression of activity in the cerebellar granule cells and neurons of the inferior olive, whose axons form the parallel fibers and climbing fibers, and whose correlated activity controls LTD at the parallel fiber-Purkinje cell synapses.  

      We have revised the text to clarify the key point that despite its widespread action on the brain, the effects of diazepam on cerebellum-dependent learning were remarkably specific (lines 184-195, 210-228, 312318). During the period 18-24 hours after a single dose of diazepam, the learning deficits of L7-Fmr1 KO mice on two LTD-dependent oculomotor learning tasks were completely reversed, with no effects on the same tasks in WT mice, and no effects (“side-effects”) in L7-Fmr1 KO mice or WT mice on other, LTDindependent oculomotor learning tasks that depend on the same region of the cerebellum, and no effects on baseline performance of visually or vestibularly driven eye movements. 

      As described in the revised Discussion (lines 318-323), the non-specific mild suppression of neural activity throughout the brain by diazepam makes it a potentially generalizable approach for inducing BCM-like shifts in the threshold for associative plasticity to facilitate subsequent learning. More specifically, diazepam-mediated reduction of activity throughout the brain has the potential to lower any aberrantly high thresholds for associative plasticity at synapses throughout the brain, and thereby reverse any learning deficits associated with such aberrantly high plasticity thresholds. This approach might even be useful in cases where the neural circuitry supporting a given behavior is not well characterized and the specific synapses responsible for the learning deficit are unknown. On lines 323-327 we compare this generalizable approach with the challenges of designing task- and circuit-specific approaches to reset the threshold for plasticity, particularly in circuits that are less well characterized than the oculomotor circuit.

      It was not mentioned if L7-Fmr1 KO mice have behavior impairments that worsen with age or if Purkinje cells and the cerebellar microcircuit are intact throughout the lifespan. 

      At the adult ages used in our study (8-22 weeks), the oculomotor circuitry, including the Fmr1-deficient Purkinje cells, appears to be functionally intact because all of the oculomotor performance and learning tasks we tested were either normal, or could be restored to normal with brief behavioral and/or pharmacological pre-treatment.  

      Any degeneration of the Fmr1-deficient Purkinje cells or cerebellar microcircuit or additional behavioral impairments at older ages, if they should exist, would not alter our interpretation of the results from 8-22 week old adults regarding history- and activity-dependent changes in the capacity for LTD-dependent learning. Therefore, we leave the question of changes throughout the lifespan to investigators with an interest and expertise in development and/or aging. 

      Only a small handful of the scores of previous studies of the Fmr1 KO mouse model have investigated age-dependent effects; the reviewer may be interested in papers such as Tang et al., 2015 (doi: 10.1073/pnas.1502258112) or Martin et al., 2016 (doi: 10.1093/cercor/bhv031). 

      Connections between Purkinje cells and interneurons could also influence the behavior results found.

      This comment is repeated below in a more general form (Reviewer 1, second to last comment)—please see our response there and lines 270-309 of the revised manuscript for a discussion of how concerns about “off-target” effects are mitigated by the high degree of specificity of the learning deficits and effects of pre-training for the specific learning tasks in which LTD has been previously implicated, and the very similar findings in two different lines of mice with enhanced LTD.

      While males and females were both used for the current study, only 7 of each sex were analyzed, which could be underpowered. While it might be justified to combine sexes for this particular study, it would be worth understanding this model in more detail.

      We performed additional analyses to address the question of whether there might be sex differences that were not detected because of the sample size.

      (1) In a new figure, Fig. 1-figure supplement 1, we break out the results for male and female mice in separate plots, and show that all of the effects of both the KO of Fmr1 from the Purkinje cells and of pretreatment with diazepam that are observed in the full cohort are also statistically significant in just the subset of male mice, and just the subset of female mice (see Fig. 1-figure supplement 1 legend for statistics). In other words, qualitatively, there are no sex differences, and all of the conclusions of our manuscript are statistically valid in both male and female mice. This strengthens the justification for combining sexes for the specific scientific purposes of our study.  

      (2) We performed a power analysis to determine how many mice would be needed to determine whether the very, very small quantitative differences between male and female mice are significant. The analysis indicates that this would require upwards of 70 mice of each sex for WT mice (Cohen’s d, 0.6162; power

      0.95) and upwards of 2500 mice of each sex for L7-Fmr1 KO mice (Cohen’s d, 0.0989; power 0.95). Since the very small quantitative sex differences observed in our cohorts would not alter our scientific conclusions or the possibility for clinical application to patients of both sexes, even if the small quantitative differences turned out to be significant, the very large number of animals needed did not seem warranted for the current scientific purposes. Researchers focused on sex differences may find a motivation to pursue this issue further.   

      Training was only shown up to 30 minutes and learning did not seem to plateau in most cases. What would happen if training continued beyond the 30 minutes? Would L7-Fmr1 KO mice catch-up to WT littermates? Nguyen-Vu

      (1) For VOR learning, we used a 30 min training time because in our past (e.g., Boyden et al., 2003; Kimpo and Raymond, 2007; Nguyen-Vu et al., 2013; Nguyen-Vu et al., 2017) and current results, we find that VOR learning does plateau quite rapidly, with little or no additional adaptive change in the VOR observed between the tests of learning after 30 min vs 20 min of VOR-increase training, in WT or L7Fmr1 KO mice (Fig. 1A; WT, p=0.917; L7-Fmr1 KO, p=0.861; 20 vs. 30 min; Tukey). In the L7-Fmr1 KO mice, there is no significant high-frequency VOR-increase learning after 30 min training, and the mean VOR gain is even slightly lower on average (not significant) than before training (Fig. 1A, red). Therefore, we have no reason to expect that the L7-Fmr1 KO mice would catch up to WT after additional VOR-increase training.  

      (2) We have added new data on OKR adaptation, induced with 60 min of training (Fig. 5). The L7-Fmr1 KO mice exhibited impaired OKR adaptation, even with 60 min of training (p= 1.27x10-4, Tukey). In our experience, restraint for longer than 60 min produces a behavioral state that is not conducive to learning, as also reported by (Katoh and Yamagiwa, 2018), therefore longer training times were not attempted. 

      The pathway discussed as the main focus for VOR in this learning paradigm was connections between parallel fibers (PF) and Purkinje cells, but the possibility of other local or downstream circuitry being involved was not discussed. PF-Purkinje cell circuits were not directly analyzed, which makes this claim difficult to assess.

      In the revised manuscript (lines 299-309), we have expanded our discussion of the possibility that loss of expression of Fmr1 from Purkinje cells in the Purkinje cell-specific L7-Fmr1 KO mice might influence other synapses or intrinsic properties of the Purkinje cells (including synapses from interneurons, as raised in this reviewer’s comment above), in addition to enhancing associative LTD at the parallel fiberPurkinje cell synapses. 

      It is a very general limitation of all perturbation studies, even cell-type specific perturbation studies as in the current case, that it is never possible to completely rule out “off-target” effects of the manipulation. Because of this, causality cannot be definitively concluded from correlations (e.g., between the effects of a perturbation observed at the cellular and behavioral level), and therefore we make no such claim in our manuscript. Rather, we conclude that our results “provide evidence for,” “support,” “predict,” or “are consistent with” the hypothesis of a history- and activity-dependent change in the threshold for associative LTD at the parallel fiber-Purkinje cells.

      That said, perturbation is still one of the major tools in the experimental toolbox, and there are approaches for mitigating concern about off-target effects. We highlight three aspects of our experimental design that accomplish this (lines 184-228, 256-309). First, we show nearly identical learning impairments and effects of behavioral pretreatment in lines of mice with two completely different molecular manipulations that have the common effect of enhancing PF-Purkinje cell LTD, but are likely to have different off-target cellular effects on the Purkinje cells and their synapses. Second, we show that the learning impairments were highly specific to oculomotor learning tasks in which PF-Purkinje cell LTD was previously implicated, with no such effects on three other oculomotor learning tasks that depend on the same region of the cerebellum and oculomotor circuitry. In the original submission, we provided data for one LTDdependent oculomotor learning task, high-frequency VOR-increase learning; in the revised manuscript we provide new data for a second LTD-dependent oculomotor learning task, optokinetic reflex adaptation, with nearly identical results (Fig. 5). Third, we show that the effects of diazepam pre-treatment were highly specific to the same two LTD-dependent oculomotor learning tasks and also highly specific to the L7-Fmr1 KO mice with enhanced LTD and not WT mice. These three features of the experimental design are not common in studies of learning, especially in combination. On lines 256-309, we provide an expanded discussion of how together, these three features of the design strengthen the evidence that the learning impairments and effects of diazepam pre-treatment on learning are related to LTD at the PF-Pk synapses, while acknowledging the possibility of other effects on the circuit. 

      The authors mostly achieved their aim and the results support their conclusion and proposed hypothesis. This work will be impactful on the field as it uses a new Purkinje-cell specific mouse model to study a classic cerebellar task. The use of diazepam could be further analyzed in other genetic models of neurodevelopmental disorders to understand if effects on LTD can rescue other pathways and behavior outcomes.

      We agree that the present findings are potentially relevant for a very wide array of behavioral tasks, disease models, and brain areas beyond the specific ones in our study, and we make this point on lines 310-338 of the revised manuscript. 

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      This manuscript explores the seemingly paradoxical observation that enhanced synaptic plasticity impairs (rather than enhances) certain forms of learning and memory. The central hypothesis is that such impairments arise due to saturation of synaptic plasticity, such that the synaptic plasticity required for learning can no longer be induced. A prior study provided evidence for this hypothesis using transgenic mice that lack major histocompatibility class 1 molecules and show enhanced long-term depression (LTD) at synapses between granule cells and Purkinje cells of the cerebellum. The study found that a form of LTD-dependent motor learning-increasing the gain of the vestibulo-ocular reflex (VOR)-is impaired in these mice and can be rescued by manipulations designed to "unsaturate" LTD. The present study extends this line of investigation to another transgenic mouse line with enhanced LTD, namely, mice with the Fragile X gene knocked out. The main findings are that VOR gain increased learning is selectively impaired in these mice but can be rescued by specific manipulations of visuomotor experience known to reverse cerebellar LTD. Additionally, the authors show that a transient global enhancement of neuronal inhibition also selectively rescues gain increases learning. This latter finding has potential clinical relevance since the drug used to boost inhibition, diazepam, is FDA-approved and commonly used in the clinic. The evidence provided for the saturation is somewhat indirect because directly measuring synaptic strength in vivo is technically difficult. Nevertheless, the experimental results are solid. In particular, the specificity of the effects to forms of plasticity previously shown to require LTD is remarkable. The authors should consider including a brief discussion of some of the important untested assumptions of the saturation hypothesis, including the requirement that cerebellar LTD depends not only on pre- and postsynaptic activity (as is typically assumed) but also on the prior history of synaptic activation.

      We thank the reviewer for this exceptionally clear and concise assessment of the findings and strengths of the manuscript.

      We agree that one of the most “remarkable” aspects of our findings is the specificity of the effects for oculomotor learning tasks for which there is the strongest previous evidence for a role of PF-Purkinje cell LTD. In the original manuscript, we tested just one LTD-dependent oculomotor learning task, highfrequency VOR increase learning; in the revised manuscript, we strengthen the case for LTD-dependent task specificity by adding new data (Fig. 5) showing the same effects for OKR adaptation, an additional LTD-dependent oculomotor learning task.

      The reviewer’s suggestion to include discussion of “untested assumptions”, “including the requirement that cerebellar LTD depends not only on pre- and postsynaptic activity (as is typically assumed) but also on the prior history of synaptic activation” prompted us to more deeply consider the broader implications of our results, and extensively revise the Discussion accordingly. We clarify that we consider historydependent changes in the threshold for LTD to be a prediction of the behavioral and pharmacological findings (lines 339-347, 356) rather than an assumption. In addition, we highlight the broader implications of the results by putting them in the context of work in other brain areas on historydependent changes in the threshold for plasticity, i.e., metaplasticity, going back to the seminal Bienenstock-Cooper-Munro (BCM; year) theory (lines 348-378).  

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for The Authors):

      The text and figures are very clear to read, but there are a couple of questions that remain:

      The concentrations chosen for diazepam are not well described and it is unclear why the concentrations jump from 2.5 mg/kg to 0.5 mg/kg. Please add an explanation for these concentrations and if any additional behavior outcomes were observed.

      Our choice of diazepam concentrations was guided by the concentrations reported in the literature to be effective in mice, which suggest that a higher dose (2 mg/kg) can have additional effects not observed with a lower effective dose (0.5 mg/kg) (Pádua-Reis et al, 2021). Since we did not know how much enhancement of inhibition/suppression of activity might be necessary to substantially reduce the induction of PF-Purkinje cell LTD, we did pilot experiments to test concentrations at the low and high ends of the doses typically used in mice. These pilot experiments revealed that a lower dose of 0.4 or 0.5 mg/kg was comparable to the higher dose of 2.5 mg/kg in suppressing VOR-increase learning 2 hours after administration (Fig. 3 – figure supplement 2). Anecdotally, we observed higher levels of locomotor activity and other abnormal cage behavior during the period immediately after administration of the higher compared to the lower dose. To limit these side effects and any possibility of dependence, we used only the lower dose in all subsequent experiments. We clarify this rationale for using a lower dose in the legend of Fig. 3 – figure supplement 2.   

      Figure 4 describes low-frequency VOR, but the paragraph discussing these results (line 191) mentions high-frequency VOR-increase learning. It is unclear where the results are for the high-frequency data. Please include or rephrase for clearer understanding.

      In the revised manuscript, we clarify that the 1 Hz vestibular and visual stimuli used in Figs. 1-3 is the

      “high” frequency, which yields different results than the “low” frequency of 0.5 Hz (Fig. 4), as also observed in Boyden et al 2006, and Nguyen-Vu et al, 2017. 

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      The authors should consider including a brief discussion of some of the important untested assumptions of the saturation hypothesis, including the requirement that cerebellar LTD depends not only on pre- and postsynaptic activity (as is typically assumed) but also on the prior history of synaptic activation.

      We thank the reviewer for this comment, which, along with your public comments, inspired us to thoroughly reconsider and revise our Discussion. We think this has greatly improved the manuscript, and will substantially increase its appeal to a broad segment of the neuroscience research community, including computational neuroscientists as well as those interested in synaptic physiology, learning and memory, or plasticity-related brain disorders including autism. 

      Note that we consider the idea that ”LTD depends not only on pre- and post- synaptic activity but also on the prior history of synaptic activation” to be the central prediction of the threshold metaplasticity hypothesis rather than an assumption, and in the revised manuscript we explicitly refer to this as a prediction (line 339, 356).  We also added a discussion of multiple known cellular phenomena in the Purkinje cells and their synapses that can regulate LTD and thus represent candidate mechanisms for LTD threshold metaplasticity (lines 339-347). Again, sincere thanks for prompting us to write a vastly improved Discussion section.

      Editor's note:

      Should you choose to revise your manuscript, please include full statistical reporting including exact pvalues wherever possible alongside the summary statistics (test statistic and df) and 95% confidence intervals. These should be reported in the main text for all key questions and not only when the p-value is less than 0.05.

      We have added exact p-values throughout the manuscript.  

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    1. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews.

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      In this study, Hoops et al. showed that Netrin-1 and UNC5c can guide dopaminergic innervation from nucleus accumbens to cortex during adolescence in rodent models. 

      We showed this with respect to Netrin-1 only. With respect to UNC5c, we showed that the timing of its expression suggests that it may be involved, but did not conduct the UNC5cmanipulation experiments necessary to prove it. We state this clearly in the manuscript.

      They found that these dopamine axons project to the prefrontal cortex in a Netrin-1 dependent manner and knocking down Netrin-1 disrupted motor and learning behaviors in mice. 

      We would like to clarify that we did not show that learning or motor behaviors are affected. We showed that inhibitory control, measured in the Go/No-Go task, is altered in adulthood.

      Furthermore, the authors used hamsters, a seasonal model that is affected by the length of daylight, to demonstrate that the guidance of dopamine axons is mediated by the environmental factor such as daytime length and in sex dependent manner. 

      We agree with this characterization of our hamster experiments, but want to emphasize that it is the timing of the adolescent dopamine axon input to the prefrontal cortex what is impacted by daytime length in a sex dependent manner.

      Regarding the cell type specificity of Netrin-1 expression, the authors began by stating "this question is not the focus of the study and we consider it irrelevant to the main issue we are addressing, which is where in the forebrain regions we examined Netrin-1+ cells are present." This statement contradicts the exact issue regarding the specificity issue I raised.

      We are not sure why the identities of the cell types expressing Netrin-1 are at issue. As a secreted protein, Netrin-1 can be attached to the extracellular cell surface or in the extracellular matrix, where it interacts with its receptors, which are embedded in the cell surfaces of growing axons (Finci et al., 2015; Rajasekharan & Kennedy, 2009). Netrin-1 is expressed by a wide variety of cell types, for example it is expressed in medium spiny neurons in the striatum of rodents as well as in cholinergic neurons (Shatzmiller et al., 2008). However, we cannot see why showing exactly what type(s) of cells have Netrin-1 on their surfaces, or have secreted them into the matrix, would be at issue for our study.

      They then went on to show the RNAscope data for Netrin-1 in Figure 2, which showed Netrin-1 mRNA was actually expressed quite ubiquitously in anterior cingulate cortex, dorsopeduncular cortex, infralimbic cortex, prelimbic cortex, etc. 

      Figure 2 - this is referring to Author response image 2 of our first response to reviewers.

      We agree that Netrin-1 mRNA is present throughout the forebrain. In particular, its presence in the regions mentioned by Reviewer #1 is a key component of our theory for how dopamine axons grow to the prefrontal cortex in adolescence.

      In addition, contrary to the authors' statement that Netrin-1 is a "secreted protein", the confocal images in Figure 1 in the rebuttal letter actually show Netrin-1 present in "granule-like" organelles inside the cytoplasm of neurons. 

      The rebuttal letter’s Figure 1 is not sufficient to determine the subcellular location of the Netrin-1, however we agree that it is likely that Netrin-1 is present in the cytoplasm of neurons. Indeed, its presence in vesicles in the cytoplasm is to be expected as this is a common mechanism for cells to secrete proteins into the extracellular space (Glasgow et al., 2018). We are not sure whether Reviewer #1’s “granule-like” organelles are in fact secretory vesicles or not, and we do not think our immunohistochemical images are an appropriate method by which to determine this kind of question. We find, however, that a detailed characterization of the subcellular distribution of Netrin-1 is beyond the scope of our study. 

      That Netrin-1 is a secreted protein is well-established in the literature (for example, see Glasgow et al., 2018). The confocal images we provide suggest, but do not prove, that it is likely Netrin-1 is present both extracellularly and intracellularly, which is entirely consistent with its synthesis, secretion, and function. It is also consistent with our methodology and findings. 

      Finally, the authors presented Figure 7 to indicate the location where virus expressing Netrin-1 shRNA might be located. Again, the brain region targeted was quite focal and most likely did not cover all the Netrin-1+ brain regions in Figure 2. 

      Figure 2 - this is referring to Author response image 2 of our first response to reviewers.

      Figure 7 - this is referring to Author response image 4 of our first response to reviewers.

      We agree with Reviewer #1’s characterization of our experiment. We intended to interrupt the Netrin-1 pathway to the prefrontal cortex, like removing a bridge along a road. The Netrin-1 signal remained intact along the dopamine axon’s route before and after the location of the viral injection, however it was lost at the site of the virus injection. This is like a road remaining intact on either side of a destroyed bridge, but becoming impassable at the location where the bridge was destroyed. We are glad that Reviewer 1 agrees our experimental design achieved the desired outcome (a focal reduction in Netrin-1 expression).

      Collectively, these results raised more questions regarding the specificity of Netrin-1 expression in brain regions that are behaviorally relevant to this study.

      We do not agree with this assessment. Our manipulation of Netrin-1 expression was highly localized and specific, as Reviewer #1 seems to acknowledge. We are not clear on what questions this might raise that would call into question our findings as described in our manuscript. We have now added the following paragraph to our manuscript:  

      “It remains unknown exactly what types of cells are expressing Netrin-1 along the dopamine axon route, and how this expression is regulated to produce the Netrin-1 gradients that guide the dopamine axons. It also remains unclear where the misrouted axons end up in adulthood. Future experiments aimed at addressing these questions will provide further valuable insight into the nature of the “Netrin-1 pathway”. Nonetheless, our results allow us to conclude that Netrin-1 expressing cells “pave the way” for dopamine axons growing to the medial prefrontal cortex.”

      With respect to the effectiveness of Netrin-1 knockdown in the animals in this study, the authors cited data in HEK293 cells (Cuesta et al., 2020. Figure 2a), which did not include any statistics, and previously published in vivo data in a separate, independent study (Cuesta et al., 2020. Figure 2c). They do not provide any data regarding the effectiveness of Netrin-1 knockdown in THIS study.

      Indeed, we understand the concerns of Reviewer 1 here. This issue was discussed at the time all the experiments (both in the current manuscript and in Cuesta et al., (2020)) were conducted, and we decided that it was sufficient to show the virus was capable of knocking down Netrin-1 in vitro and in vivo in the forebrain. These characterization experiments were published in the first manuscript to present results using the virus, which was Cuesta et al., 2020. However, all experiments from both manuscripts were conducted contemporaneously.

      We do not see how repeating the same characterization experiments again is useful. 

      Similar concerns regarding UNC5C knockdown (points #6, #7, and #8) were not adequately addressed.

      There is no UNC5c knockdown in this manuscript. Furthermore, points #6, #7 and #8 do not deal with UNC5c knockdown. Point #6 is regarding the Netrin-1 virus efficacy, which we discuss above. Points #7 and #8 are requesting numerous additional experiments that we feel are worthy of their own manuscripts, and we do not feel that they call into question the findings we present here. Rather, answering points #7 and #8 would further refine our understanding of how dopamine axons grow to the prefrontal cortex beyond our current manuscript.

      In brief, while this study provides a potential role of Netrin-1-UNC5C in target innervation of dopaminergic neurons and its behavioral output in risk-taking, the data lack sufficient evidence to firmly establish the cause-effect relationship.

      We do not claim a cause-effect relationship here or anywhere in the manuscript. Concrete establishment of a cause-effect relationship will require several more manuscripts worth of experiments.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      In this manuscript, Hoops et al., using two different model systems, identified key developmental changes in Netrin-1 and UNC5C signaling that correspond to behavioral changes and are sensitive to environmental factors that affect the timing of development. They found that Netrin-1 expression is highest in regions of the striatum and cortex where TH+ axons are travelling, and that knocking down Netrin-1 reduces TH+ varicosities in mPFC and reduces impulsive behaviors in a Go-No-Go test. 

      We want to point out that we examined the Netrin-1 expression in the septum rather than the striatum but otherwise feel the above description is accurate.

      Further, they show that the onset of Unc5 expression is sexually dimorphic in mice, and that in Siberian hamsters, environmental effects on development are also sexually dimorophic. This study addresses an important question using approaches that link molecular, circuit and behavioral changes. Understanding developmental trajectories of adolescence, and how they can be impacted by environmental factors, is an understudied area of neuroscience that is highly relevant to understanding the onset of mental health disorders. I appreciated the inclusion of replication cohorts within the study.

      We appreciate Reviewer #2’s comments, which we feel accurately describe our experimental approach and findings, including their limitations.

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      This study from the Flores group aims at understanding neuronal circuit changes during adolescence which is an ill-defined, transitional period involving dramatic changes in behavior and anatomy. They focus on DA innervation of the prefrontal cortex, and their interaction with the guidance cue Netrin1. They propose DA axons in the PFC increase in the postnatal period, and their density is reduced in a Netrin 1 knockdown, suggesting that Netrin abets the development of this mesocortical pathway. 

      We feel it necessary to point out that we are not the first to propose that dopamine axons in the prefrontal cortex increase in the postnatal period.  This is well-established and was first documented in rodents in the 1980s (Kalsbeek et al., 1988). Otherwise we agree with Reviewer 3’s characterization.

      In such mice impulsivity gauged by a go-no go task is reduced. They then provide some evidence that Unc5c is developmentally regulated in DA axons. Finally they use an interesting hamster model, to study the effect of light hours on mesocortical innervation, and make some interesting observations about the timing of innervation and Unc5c expression, and the fact that females housed in winter day length conditions display an accelerated innervation of the prefrontal cortex.

      We agree with Reviewer #3’s characterization of our study and findings here.

      Comments on the revision. Several points were addressed; some remain to be addressed.

      (4) It's not clear to me that TH doesnt stain noradrenergic axons in the PFC. See Islam and Blaess, 2021, and references therein.

      Presuming that Reviewer #3 is referring to Islam et al. (2021), the review they cite supports our position that TH-stained axons in the forebrain are by-and-large dopamine axons.

      Nonetheless, Islam et al. do point out that it is important to keep in mind that TH-positive axons have a slight possibility of being noradrenaline axons. We are very conscious of this possibility and are careful to minimize this risk. As we state in the methods, we only examine axons that are morphologically consistent with dopamine axons and are localized to areas within the forebrain where dopamine axons are known to innervate, in addition to being THpositive. The localization and morphology of noradrenaline axons in the forebrain is different from that of dopamine axons. This is stated in our methods on lines 76-94, where we describe in detail the differentiation between dopamine and norepinephrine axons and include a full list of relevant citations.

      (6) The Netrin knockdown data provided is from a previous study/samples.

      Indeed, however the experiments for the two manuscripts were conducted contemporaneously. We believe two sets of validation experiments are not required.

      (8) While the authors make the argument that the behavior is linked to DA, they still haven't formally tested it, in my opinion.

      We agree that we have not formally tested this link. However, we disagree that we claim to have established a formal link in our manuscript.

      (1). Fig 3, UNc 5c  levels are not yet quantified. Furthermore, I agree with the previous reviewer that Unc5C knockdown would corroborate key aspects of the model.

      We present UNC5c quantities for mice in our first response to reviewers (Figure 11 therein) however we did not do so for the hamsters due to the time involved. We are planning further experiments with the hamsters and may include quantification of UNC5c in the nucleus accumbens at such time. However, we do not feel its absence from this manuscript calls into question our findings.

      With regards to the UNC5c knockdown, we agree it would be an informative extension of our findings here, but again we do not feel that it is necessary to corroborate our current findings.

      New - Developmental trajectory of prefrontal TH-positive axons from early adolescence to adulthood is similar in male and female rats, (Willing Juraska et al., 2017). This needs discussion.

      Willing et al. (2017) reported an increase in prefrontal dopamine density during adolescence in male and female rats, with a non-significant trend towards an earlier increase in females.

      This is in line with our current results in mice indicating that the timing of dopamine axon targeting and growth is sex specific. We are currently testing this idea directly using intersectional viral tracing methods. We now added the following sentence to the manuscript: 

      “Differences in the precise timing of dopamine innervation to the PFC in adolescence have been suggested by findings reported in male and female rats (Willing et al., 2017)”.

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    1. he Inkan practice of quipu, for example—a technique of recording quantitative information as knots on strings—has been recorded as early as 250 B.C.E.

      And there's Chinese Counting Boards, and Marshall island stick charts, Nile-o-meters, and maps of course that in some cases predate writing...

      Although there is an interesting question (and I think the Wainer/Friendly book gets at this) about the distinction between representing or exteriorizing information (for instance, are ideograms or writing systems data visualization?) and the vicissitudes that the definition of "data visualization" has to be put through for claims like "Playfair invented the bar chart" to be close to true. So stuff like Philippe Buache and Guillaume de L’Isle's 1770 chart of water levels in the Seine is said not to count for the "Playfair was first" bar chart narrative because the bars represent some physical quantity (river height) rather than an abstract quantity (Playfair's exports and imports). Likewise I wonder what other definitional challenges exist mostly to exclude other ways of externalizing information. Or things like Snow's Cholera presented as this notable first for data visualization when similar dot maps of epidemiology data were created (e.g. Valentine Seaman's yellow fever map) decades earlier, but don't get credit mostly, it seems, because the conclusion of that map (that miasma caused yellow fever) was /wrong/ whereas Snow just so happened to be /right/?

    1. O Direito de Saltar Páginas

      Neste capítulo o autor quer dar a entender e a dar a ideia de que apesar de um livro apresentar uma ordem de informação/história, o leitor não é obrigado a seguir essa ordem e pode ler da forma que lhe apeteça, ou seja, o "saltar páginas" vai ressaltar uma "vontade" por parte do leitor pois acaba por ter e mostrar a vontade de ler certa parte do livro.

    2. O Direito de Não Ler

      No primeiro capítulo abordamos o direito de não ler. Como vemos no nosso dia a dia, ou provávelmente a nível pessoal, observamos que as pessoas sentem cada vez menos a vontade e a necessidade de ler, isto porque existem outras formas mais apelativas de terem conhecimento do que própriamente se sentirem na necessidade de leitura. Devemos entender que a leitura é algo benéfico para cada um, especialmente começar com esta rotina desde novos. Porém, todos devem ter na sua consciência o que lhes faz bem ou mal, e se não querem ler, é então um direito a que têm direito a 100% (terem a sua opção de escolha e vontade)

    3. 10O Direito de Não Falar do Que se Leu

      Neste direito, o autor fala da intimidade que pode ser gerada pela leitura e de como essa intimidade pode ser comparada à intimidade que se pode ter com um ser humano. Decidi comentar este ponto porque me parece muito correto e muito real, pois sinto que é algo que acontece realmente. Quando mergulhamos numa história que nos liga a aspectos reais da nossa vida, ela pode tocar em assuntos sobre os quais não queremos falar, criando uma relação com o livro que não queremos partilhar, porque nos parece íntima e íntima. A leitura transporta-nos assim para um mundo privado do qual nem sempre queremos partilhar tudo e, como diz a autora, temos o direito de não o fazer.

    4. 5O Direito de Ler não Importa o Quê

      O autor fala da opinião de cada um sobre o que lemos, o que escolhemos, o que gostamos e o que não gostamos, o que consideramos "bom" e o que não consideramos... Mas para mim, para além de destacar o direito do ponto de vista do autor, gostaria também de acrescentar um outro ponto de vista e o dos outros. Ou seja, a opinião dos outros sobre as nossas leituras. Penso que é um ponto de vista interessante, pois é possível que, por vezes, nos sintamos julgados pelo tipo de livros que gostamos de ler, seja porque são popularmente considerados "maus" ou por qualquer outro motivo. O direito à leitura, independentemente do que aconteça, também se pode centrar neste ponto, uma vez que somos livres de ler qualquer tipo de livro sem que ninguém nos julgue.

    1. Author response:

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Kroll et al. conduct an in-depth behavioral analysis of F0 knockouts of 4 genes associated with late-onset Alzheimer's Disease (AD), together with 3 genes associated with early- onset AD. Kroll and colleagues developed a web application (ZOLTAR) to compare sleep-associated traits between genetic mutants with those obtained from a panel of small molecules to promote the identification of affected pathways and potential therapeutic interventions. The authors make a set of potentially important findings vis-à-vis the relationship between AD-associated genes and sleep. First, they find that loss-of-function in late-onset AD genes universally results in nighttime sleep loss, consistent with the well-supported hypothesis that sleep disruption contributes to Alzheimer's-related pathologies. psen-1, an early-onset associated AD gene, which the authors find is principally responsible for the generation of AB40 and AB42 in zebrafish, also shows a slight increase in activity at night and slight decreases in nighttime sleep. Conversely, psen-2 mutations increase daytime sleep, while appa/appb mutations have no impact on sleep. Finally, using ZOLTAR, the authors identify serotonin receptor activity as potentially disrupted in sorl1 mutants, while betamethasone is identified as a potential therapeutic to promote reversal of psen2 knockout-associated phenotypes.

      This is a highly innovative and thorough study, yet a handful of key questions remain. First, are nighttime sleep loss phenotypes observed in all knockouts for late-onset AD genes in the larval zebrafish a valid proxy for AD risk?

      We cannot say, but it is an interesting question. We selected the four late-onset Alzheimer’s risk genes (APOE, CD2AP, CLU, SORL1) based on human genetics data and brain expression in zebrafish larvae, not based on their likelihood to modify sleep behaviour, which we could have tried by searching for overlaps with GWAS of sleep phenotypes, for example. Consequently, we find it remarkable that all four of these genes caused a night-time sleep phenotype when mutated. We also find it reassuring that knockout of appa/appb and psen2 did not cause a night-time sleep phenotype, which largely excludes the possibility that the phenotype is a technical artefact (e.g. caused by the F0 knockout method) or a property of every gene expressed in the larval brain.

      Having said that, it could still be a coincidence, rather than a special property of genes associated with late-onset AD. In addition to testing additional late-onset Alzheimer’s risk genes, the ideal way to answer this question would be to test in parallel a random set of genes expressed in the brain at this stage of development. From this random set, one could estimate the proportion of genes that cause a night-time sleep phenotype when mutated. One could then use that information to test whether late-onset Alzheimer’s risk genes are indeed enriched for genes that cause a night-time sleep phenotype when mutated.

      For those mutants that cause nighttime sleep disturbances, do these phenotypes share a common underlying pathway? e.g. Do 5-HT reuptake inhibitors promote sleep across all 4 late-onset genes in addition to psen1? Can 5-HT reuptake inhibitors reverse other AD-related pathologies in zebrafish? Can compounds be identified that have a common behavioral fingerprint across all or multiple AD risk genes? Do these modify sleep phenotypes?

      To attempt to answer these questions, we used ZOLTAR to generate predictions for all the knockout behavioural fingerprints presented in the study, in the same way as for sorl1 in Fig. 5 and Fig. 5–suppl. 1. Here are the indications, targets, and KEGG pathways which are shared by the largest number of knockouts:

      – Four indications are shared by 4/7 knockouts: “mydriasis” (dilated pupils, significant for psen1, apoea/apoeb, cd2ap, clu); “fragile X syndrome” (psen1, apoea/apoeb, cd2ap, sorl1), “insomnia” (psen2, apoea/apoeb, cd2ap, sorl1); “malignant essential hypertension” (appa/appb, psen1, apoea/apoeb, cd2ap).

      – Two targets are shared by 5/7 knockouts: “glycogen synthase kinase−3 alpha” (psen1, apoeab, cd2ap, clu, sorl1) and “neuronal acetylcholine receptor beta−2” (appa/appb, psen1, apoeab, cd2ap, clu).

      – Two KEGG pathways are shared by 5/7 knockouts: “cholinergic synapse” (psen1, apoea/apoeb, cd2ap, clu, sorl1) and “nitrogen metabolism” (appa/appb, psen1, psen2, cd2ap, clu).

      As reminder, we hypothesised that loss of Sorl1 affected serotonin signalling based on the following annotations being significant: indication “depression”, target “serotonin transporter”, and KEGG pathway “serotonergic synapse”. All three are also significant for psen2 knockouts, but none others. ZOLTAR therefore does not predict serotonin signalling to be a major theme common to all mutants with a night-time sleep loss phenotype.

      While perhaps not surprising, we find reassuring that insomnia appears in the indications shared by the largest number of knockouts. apoea/apoeb, cd2ap, sorl1 also happen to be the knockouts with the largest loss in night-time sleep.

      Particularly interesting is cholinergic signalling appearing in the most common targets and KEGG pathways. Acetylcholine signalling is a major theme in research on Alzheimer’s disease. For example, the first four drugs ever approved by the FDA to treat Alzheimer’s disease were acetylcholinesterase inhibitors, which increase acetylcholine signalling by preventing its breakdown by acetylcholinesterase. These drugs are generally considered only to treat symptoms and not modify disease course, but this view has been called into question (Munoz-Torrero, 2008; Relkin, 2007). If, as ZOLTAR suggests, mutations in several Alzheimer’s risk genes affect cholinergic signalling early in development, this would point to a potential causal role of cholinergic disruption in Alzheimer’s disease.

      We see that literature also exists on the involvement of glycogen synthase kinase-3 in AD (Lauretti et al., 2020). We plan to explore further these predictions in a future study.

      Finally, the web- based platform presented could be expanded to facilitate comparison of other behavioral phenotypes, including stimulus-evoked behaviors.

      Yes, absolutely. The behavioural dataset we used (Rihel et al., 2010) did not measure other stimuli than day/night light transitions, but the “SauronX” platform and dataset (Myers-Turnbull et al., 2022) seems particularly well suited for this. To provide some context, we and collaborators have occasionally used the dataset by Rihel et al. (2010) to generate hypotheses or find candidate drugs that reverse a behavioural phenotype measured in the sleep/wake assay (Ashlin et al., 2018; Hoffman et al., 2016). The present work was the occasion to enable a wider and more intuitive use of this dataset through the ZOLTAR app, which has already proven successful. Future versions of ZOLTAR will seek to incorporate larger drug datasets using more types of measurements.

      Finally, the authors propose but do not test the hypothesis that sorl1 might regulate localization/surface expression of 5-HT2 receptors. This could provide exciting / more convincing mechanistic support for the assertion that serotonin signaling is disrupted upon loss of AD-associated genes.

      5-HT receptor type 4a is another candidate as it was shown to interact with sorting nexin 27, a subunit of retromer (Joubert et al., 2004). We see that antibodies against human 5-HT receptor type 2 and 4a exist; whether they would work in zebrafish remains to be tested, and in our experience, the availability of antibodies suitable for immunohistochemistry in the zebrafish is a serious experimental roadblock.

      Despite these important considerations, this study provides a valuable platform for high-throughput analysis of sleep phenotypes and correlation with small-molecule-induced sleep phenotypes.

      Strengths:

      - Provides a useful platform for comparison of sleep phenotypes across genotypes/drug manipulations.

      - Presents convincing evidence that nighttime sleep is disrupted in mutants for multiple late-onset AD-related genes.

      - Provides potential mechanistic insights for how AD-related genes might impact sleep and identifies a few drugs that modify their identified phenotypes

      Weaknesses:

      - Exploration of potential mechanisms for serotonin disruption in sorl1 mutants is limited.

      - The pipeline developed can only be used to examine sleep-related / spontaneous movement phenotypes and stimulus-evoked behaviors are not examined.

      - Comparisons between mutants/exploration of commonly affected pathways are limited.

      Thank you for these excellent suggestions, please see our answers above.

      Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This work delineates the larval zebrafish behavioral phenotypes caused by the F0 knockout of several important genes that increase the risk for Alzheimer's disease. Using behavioral pharmacology, comparing the behavioral fingerprint of previously assayed molecules to the newly generated knockout data, compounds were discovered that impacted larval movement in ways that suggest interaction with or recovery of disrupted mechanisms.

      Strengths:

      This is a well-written manuscript that uses newly developed analysis methods to present the findings in a clear, high-quality way. The addition of an extensive behavioral analysis pipeline is of value to the field of zebrafish neuroscience and will be particularly helpful for researchers who prefer the R programming language. Even the behavioral profiling of these AD risk genes, regardless of the pharmacology aspect, is an important contribution. The recovery of most behavioral parameters in the psen2 knockout with betamethasone, predicted by comparing fingerprints, is an exciting demonstration of the approach. The hypotheses generated by this work are important stepping stones to future studies uncovering the molecular basis of the proposed gene-drug interactions and discovering novel therapeutics to treat AD or co-occurring conditions such as sleep disturbance.

      Weaknesses:

      - The overarching concept of the work is that comparing behavioral fingerprints can align genes and molecules with similarly disrupted molecular pathways. While the recovery of the psen2 phenotypes by one molecule with the opposite phenotype is interesting, as are previous studies that show similar behaviorally-based recoveries, the underlying assumption that normalizing the larval movement normalizes the mechanism still lacks substantial support. There are many ways that a reduction in movement bouts could be returned to baseline that are unrelated to the root cause of the genetically driven phenotype. An ideal experiment would be to thoroughly characterize a mutant, such as by identifying a missing population of neurons, and use this approach to find a small molecule that rescues both behavior and the cellular phenotype. If the connection to serotonin in the sorl1 was more complete, for example, the overarching idea would be more compelling.

      Thank you for this cogent criticism.

      On the first point, we were careful not to claim that betamethasone normalises the molecular/cellular mechanism that causes the psen2 behavioural phenotype. Having said that, yes, to a certain extent that would be the hope of the approach. As you say, every compound which normalises the behavioural fingerprint will not normalise the underlying mechanism, but the opposite seems true: every compound that normalises the underlying mechanism should also normalise the behavioural fingerprint. We think this logic makes the “behaviour-first” approach innovative and interesting. The logic is to discover compounds that normalise the behavioural phenotype first, only subsequently test whether they also normalise the molecular mechanism, akin to testing first whether a drug resolves the symptoms before testing whether it actually modifies disease course. While in practice testing thousands of drugs in sufficient sample sizes and replicates on a mutant line is challenging, the dataset queried through ZOLTAR provides a potential shortcut by shortlisting in silico compounds that have the opposite effect on behaviour.

      You mention a “reduction in movement bouts” but note here that the number of behavioural parameters tested is key to our argument. To take the two extremes, say the only behavioural parameter we measured in psen2 knockout larvae was time active during the day, then, yes, any stimulant used at the right concentration could probably normalise the phenotype. In this situation, claiming that the stimulant is likely to also normalise the underlying mechanism, or even that it is a genuine “phenotypic rescue”, would not be convincing. Conversely, say we were measuring thousands of behavioural parameters under various stimuli, such as swimming speed, position in the well, bout usage, tail movements, and eye angles, it seems almost impossible for a compound to rescue most parameters without also normalising the underlying mechanism. The present approach is somewhere in-between: ZOLTAR uses six behavioural parameters for prediction (e.g. Fig 6a), but all 17 parameters calculated by FramebyFrame can be used to assess rescue during a subsequent experiment (Fig. 6c). For both, splitting each parameter in day and night increases the resolution of the approach, which partly answers your criticism. For example, betamethasone rescued the day-time hypoactivity without causing night-time hyperactivity, so we are not making the “straw man argument” explained above of using any broad stimulant to rescue the hypoactivity phenotype.

      Furthermore, for diseases where the behavioural defect is the primary concern, such as autism or bipolar disorder, perhaps this behaviour-first approach is all that is needed, and whether or not the compound precisely rescues the underlying mechanism is somewhat secondary. The use of lithium to prevent manic episodes in bipolar disorder is a good example. It was initially tested because mania was thought to be caused by excess uric acid and lithium can dissolve uric acid (Mitchell and Hadzi-Pavlovic, 2000). The theory is now discredited, but lithium continues to be used without a precise understanding of its mode of action. In this example, behavioural rescue alone, with tolerable secondary effects, is sufficient to be beneficial to patients, and whether it modulates the correct causal pathway is secondary.

      On the second point, we agree that testing first ZOLTAR on a mutant for which we have a fairly good understanding of the mechanism causing the behavioural phenotype could have been a productive approach. Note, however, that examples already exist in the literature. First, Hoffman et al. (2016) found that drugs generating behavioural fingerprints that positively correlate with the cntnap2a/cntnap2b double knockout fingerprint are enriched with NMDA and GABA receptor antagonists. In experiments analogous to our citalopram treatment (Fig. 5c,d), cntnap2a/cntnap2b knockout larvae were found to be overly sensitive to the NMDA receptor antagonist MK-801 and the GABAA receptor antagonist pentylenetetrazol (PTZ). Among other drugs tested, zolpidem, a GABAA receptor agonist, caused opposite effects on wild-type and cntnap2a/cntnap2b knockout larvae. Knockout larvae also had fewer GABAergic neurons in the forebrain. Second, Ashlin et al. (2018) found that the fingerprint of pitpnc1a knockout larvae clustered with anti-inflammatory compounds. Flumethasone, an anti-inflammatory corticosteroid, caused a lower increase in activity when added to knockout larvae compared to wild-type larvae. While these studies did not use precisely the same analysis that ZOLTAR runs, they used the same rationale and behavioural dataset to make these predictions (Rihel et al., 2010), which shows that approaches like ZOLTAR can point to causal processes.

      Related to your next point, we may reduce the discussion on sorl1 and serotonin and add some of the present arguments instead, depending on the results from  testing a second SSRI (see next point).

      - The behavioral difference between the sorl1 KO and scrambled at the higher dose of the citalopram is based on a small number of animals. The KO Euclidean distance measure is also more spread out than for the other datasets, and it looks like only five or so fish are driving the group difference. It also appears as though the numbers were also from two injection series. While there is nothing obviously wrong with the data, I would feel more comfortable if such a strong statement of a result from a relatively subtle phenotype were backed up by a higher N or a stable line. It is not impossible that the observed difference is an experimental fluke. If something obvious had emerged through the HCR, that would have also supported the conclusions. As it stands, if no more experiments are done to bolster the claim, the confidence in the strength of the link to serotonin should be reduced (possibly putting the entire section in the supplement and modifying the discussion). The discussion section about serotonin and AD is interesting, but I think that it is excessive without additional evidence.

      We mostly agree with this criticism. One could interpret the larger spread of the data for sorl1 larvae treated with 10 µM citalopram as evidence that the knockout larvae do indeed react differently to the drug at this dose. However, the result indeed does not survive removing the top 5 (p = 0.87) or top 3 (p = 0.18) sorl1 larvae.

      Given that the HCR did not reveal anything striking, we agree with you that too much of our argument relies on this result being robust. As you and reviewer #3 suggest, we plan on repeating this experiment with a different serotonin reuptake inhibitor (SSRI). If the other SSRI also shows a differential effect, this should strengthen the claim that ZOLTAR correctly predicted serotonin signalling as being affected by the loss of Sorl1, even if we did not discover the molecular mechanism.

      - The authors suggest two hypotheses for the behavioral difference between the sorl1 KO and scrambled at the higher dose of the citalopram. While the first is tested, and found to not be supported, the second is not tested at all ("Ruling out the first hypothesis, sorl1 knockouts may react excessively to a given spike in serotonin." and "Second, sorl1 knockouts may be overly sensitive to serotonin itself because post-synaptic neurons have higher levels of serotonin receptors."). Assuming that the finding is robust, there are probably other reasons why the mutants could have a different sensitivity to this molecule. However, if this particular one is going to be mentioned, it is surprising that it was not tested alongside the first hypothesis. This work could proceed without a complete explanation, but additional discussion of the possibilities would be helpful or why the second hypothesis was not tested.

      There are no strong scientific reasons why this hypothesis was not tested. The lead author (F Kroll) moved to a different lab and country so the project was finalised at that time. We do not plan on testing this hypothesis at this stage. However, we will adapt the wording to make it clear this is one possible alternative hypothesis which could be tested in the future, rather than the only alternative.

      - The authors claim that "all four genes produced a fairly consistent phenotype at night". While it is interesting that this result arose in the different lines, the second clutch for some genes did not replicate as well as others. I think the findings are compelling, regardless, but the sometimes missing replicability should be discussed. I wonder if the F0 strategy adds noise to the results and if clean null lines would yield stronger phenotypes. Please discuss this possibility, or others, in regard to the variability in some phenotypes.

      For the first part of this point, please see below our answer to Reviewer #3, point (2) c.

      Regarding the F0 strategy potentially adding variability, it is an interesting question which we tested in a larger dataset of behavioural recordings from F0 and stable knockouts for the same genes (unpublished). In summary, the F0 knockout method does not increase clutch-to-clutch or larva-to-larva variability in the assay. F0 knockout experiments found many more significant parameters and larger effect sizes than stable knockout experiments, but this difference could largely be explained by the larger sample sizes of F0 knockout experiments. In fact, larger sample sizes within individual clutches appears to be a major advantage of the F0 knockout approach over in-cross of heterozygous knockout animals as it increases sensitivity of the assay without causing substantial variability. We plan to report in more details on this analysis in a separate paper as we think it would dilute the focus of the present work.

      - In this work, the knockout of appa/appb is included. While APP is a well-known risk gene, there is no clear justification for making a knockout model. It is well known that the upregulation of app is the driver of Alzheimer's, not downregulation. The authors even indicate an expectation that it could be similar to the other knockouts ("Moreover, the behavioural phenotypes of appa/appb and psen1 knockout larvae had little overlap while they presumably both resulted in the loss of Aβ." and "Comparing with early-onset genes, psen1 knockouts had similar night-time phenotypes, but loss of psen2 or appa/appb had no effect on night-time sleep."). There is no reason to expect similarity between appa/appb and psen1/2. I understand that the app knockouts could unveil interesting early neurodevelopmental roles, but the manuscript needs to be clarified that any findings could be the opposite of expectation in AD.

      On “there is no reason to expect similarity […]”, we disagree. Knockout of appa/appb and knockout psen1 will both result in loss of Aβ (appa/appb encode Aβ and psen1 cleaves Appa/Appb to release Aβ, cf. Fig. 3e). Consequently, a phenotype caused by the loss of Aβ, or possibly other Appa/Appb cleavage products, should logically be found in both appa/appb and psen1 knockouts.

      On “it is well known that the upregulation of APP is the driver of Alzheimer’s, not downregulation”; we of course agree. Among others, the examples of Down syndrome, APP duplication (Sleegers et al., 2006), or mouse models overexpressing human APP show definitely that overexpression of APP is sufficient to cause AD. Having said that, we would not be so quick in dismissing APP knockout as potentially relevant to understanding of Alzheimer’s disease. Loss of soluble Aβ due to aggregation could contribute to pathology (Espay et al., 2023). Without getting too much into this intricate debate, links between levels of Aβ and risk of disease are often counter-intuitive too. For example, out of 138 PSEN1 mutations screened in vitro, 104 reduced total Aβ production and 11 even seemingly abolished the production of both Aβ40 and Aβ42 (Sun et al., 2017). In short, loss of soluble Aβ occurs in both AD and in our appa/appb knockout larvae, but the ideal approach would be to study zebrafish larvae with an in-frame deletion in the Aβ sequence within appa/appb.

      We will adapt the language to address your point. We would not want to imply, for example, that the absence of a night-time sleep phenotype for appa/appb is contradictory to the body of literature showing links between Aβ and sleep, including in zebrafish (Özcan et al., 2020). As you say, our experiment tested loss of App, including Aβ, while the literature typically reports on overexpression of APP, as in APP/PSEN1-overexpressing mice (Jagirdar et al., 2021).

      Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      In this manuscript by Kroll and colleagues, the authors describe combining behavioral pharmacology with sleep profiling to predict disease and potential treatment pathways at play in AD. AD is used here as a case study, but the approaches detailed can be used for other genetic screens related to normal or pathological states for which sleep/arousal is relevant. The data are for the most part convincing, although generally the phenotypes are relatively small and there are no major new mechanistic insights. Nonetheless, the approaches are certainly of broad interest and the data are comprehensive and detailed.

      A notable weakness is the introduction, which overly generalizes numerous concepts and fails to provide the necessary background to set the stage for the data.

      Major points

      (1) The authors should spend more time explaining what they see as the meaning of the large number of behavioral parameters assayed and specifically what they tell readers about the biology of the animal. Many are hard to understand--e.g. a "slope" parameter.

      We agree that some parameters do not tell something intuitive about the biology of the animal. It would be easy to speculate. For example, the “activity slope” parameter may indicate how quickly the animal becomes tired over the course of the day. On the other hand, fractal dimension describes the “roughness/smoothness” of the larva’s activity trace (Fig. 2–suppl. 1a); but it is not obvious how to translate this into information about the physiology of the animal. We do not see this as an issue though. While some parameters do provide intuitive information about the animal’s behaviour (e.g. sleep duration or sunset startle as a measure of startle response), the benefit of having a large number of behavioural parameters is to compare behavioural fingerprints and assess rescue of the behavioural phenotype by small molecules (Fig. 6c). For this purpose, the more parameters the better. The “MoSeq” approach from Wiltschko et al., 2020 is a good example from literature that inspired our own Fig. 6c. While some of the “behavioural syllables” may be intuitive (e.g. running or grooming), it is probably pointless to try to explain the ‘meaning’ of the “small left turn in place with head motion” syllable (Wiltschko et al., 2020). Nonetheless, this syllable was useful to assess whether a drug specifically treats the behavioural phenotype under study without causing too many side effects. Unfortunately, ZOLTAR has to reduce the FramebyFrame fingerprint (17 parameters) to just six parameters to compare it to the behavioural dataset from Rihel et al., 2010, but here, more parameters would almost certainly translate into better predictions too, regardless of their intuitiveness.

      It is true however that we do not give much information on how some of the less intuitive parameters, such as activity slope or fractal dimension, are calculated or what they describe about the dataset (e.g. roughness/smoothness for fractal dimension). We will improve this in our revised version.

      (2) Because in the end the authors did not screen that many lines, it would increase confidence in the phenotypes to provide more validation of KO specificity. Some suggestions include:

      a. The authors cite a psen1 and psen2 germline mutant lines. Can these be tested in the FramebyFrame R analysis? Do they phenocopy F0 KO larvae?

      We unfortunately do not have those lines. We investigated the availability of importing a psen2 knockout line from abroad, but the process of shipping live animals is becoming more and more cost and time prohibitive. However, we observed the same pigmentation phenotype for psen2 knockouts as reported by Jiang et al., 2018, which is at least a partial confirmation of phenocopying a loss of function stable mutant. 

      b. psen2KO is one of the larger centerpieces of the paper. The authors should present more compelling evidence that animals are truly functionally null. Without this, how do we interpret their phenotypes?

      We disagree that there should be significant doubt about these mutants being truly functionally null,  given the high mutation rate and presence of the expected pigmentation phenotype (Jiang et al., 2018, Fig. 3f and Fig. 3–suppl. 2). The psen2 F0 knockouts were virtually 100% mutated at three exons across the gene (mutation rates were locus 1: 100 ± 0%; locus 2: 99.99 ± 0.06%; locus 3: 99.85 ± 0.24%). Additionally, two of the three mutated exons had particularly high rates of frameshift mutations (locus 1: 97 ± 5%; locus 2: 88 ± 17% frameshift mutation rate). It is virtually impossible that a functional protein is translated given this burden of frameshift mutations. Phenotypically, in addition to the pigmentation defect, double psen1/psen2 F0 knockout larvae had curved tails, the same phenotype as caused by a high dose of the γ-secretase inhibitor DAPT (Yang et al., 2008). These double F0 knockouts were lethal, while knockout of psen1 or psen2 alone did not cause obvious morphological defects. Evidently, most larvae must have been psen2 null mutants in this experiment, otherwise functional Psen2 would have prevented early lethality.

      Translation of zebrafish psen2 can start at downstream start codons if the first exon has a frameshift mutation, generating a seemingly functional Psen2 missing the N-terminus (Jiang et al., 2020). Zebrafish homozygous for this early frameshift mutation had normal pigmentation, showing it is a reliable marker of Psen2 function even when it is mutated. This mechanism is not a concern here as the alternative start codons are still upstream of two of the three mutated exons (the alternative start codons discovered by Jiang et al., 2020 are in exon 2 and 3, but we targeted exon 3, exon 4, and exon 6).

      We understand that the zebrafish community may be cautious about F0 phenotyping compared to stably generated mutants. As mentioned to Reviewer 2, we are planning to assemble a paper that expressly examines F0s vs. stable mutants to allay some of these concerns. We would also suggest that our current manuscript, which combines CRISPR-F0 rapid screening with in silico pharmacological predictions, ultimately represents a first step in characterizing the functions of genes.

      c. Related to the above, for cd2AP and sorl1 KO, some of the effect sizes seem to be driven by one clutch and not the other. In other words, great clutch-to-clutch variability. Should the authors increase the number of clutches assayed?

      Correct, there is great clutch-to-clutch variability in this behavioural assay. This is not specific to our experiments. Even within the same strain, wild-type larvae from different clutches (i.e. non-siblings) behave differently (Joo et al., 2021). This is why it is essential to compare behavioural phenotypes within individual clutches (i.e., from a single pair of parents, one male and one female), as we explain in Methods (section Behavioural video-tracking) and in the documentation of the FramebyFrame package. We often see two different experimental designs in literature: comparing non-sibling wild-type and mutant larvae, or pooling different clutches which include all genotypes (e.g., pooling multiple clutches from heterozygous in-crosses or pooling wild-type clutches before injecting them). The first experimental design causes false positive findings, as the clutch-to-clutch variability we and others (Joo et al., 2021) observe gets interpreted as a behavioural phenotype. The second experimental design should not cause false positives but will decrease the sensitivity of the assay by increasing the spread within genotypes. In both cases, the clutch-to-clutch variability is hidden, either by interpreting it as a phenotype (first case) or by adding it to animal-to-animal variability (second case). Our experimental design is technically more challenging as it requires obtaining large clutches from unique pairs of parents. However, this approach is better as it clearly separates the different sources of variability (clutch-to-clutch or animal-to-animal). As for every experiment, yes, a larger number of replicates would be better, but we do not plan to assay additional clutches at this time. Our work heavily focuses on the sorl1 and psen2 knockout behavioural phenotypes. The key aspects of these phenotypes were effectively tested in four clutches as sorl1 were also tested in the citalopram experiment (Fig. 5), and psen2 was also tested in the small molecule rescue experiment (Fig. 6 and Fig. 6–suppl. 1). In the citalopram experiment, one H2O-treated sorl1 knockout clutch (n = 10) replicates fairly well the baseline recordings in Fig. 4–suppl. 5, the other does not but had especially low sample size (n = 6).

      We also plan to test another SSRI on sorl1 knockouts, so this point will be addressed.

      (3) The authors make the point that most of the AD risk genes are expressed in fish during development. Is there public data to comment on whether the genes of interest are expressed in mature/old fish as well? Just because the genes are expressed early does not at all mean that early- life dysfunction is related to future AD (though this could be the case, of course). Genes with exclusive developmental expression would be strong candidates for such an early-life role, however. I presume the case is made because sleep studies are mainly done in juvenile fish, but I think it is really a pretty minor point and such a strong claim does not even need to be made.

      This is a fair criticism but we do not make this claim, at least not from expression. The reviewer is probably referring to the following quote:

      “[…] most of these were expressed in the brain of 5–6-dpf zebrafish larvae, suggesting they play a role in early brain development or function,”

      which does not mention future risk of Alzheimer’s disease. We do suggest that these genes have a function in development. After all, every gene that plays a role in brain development must be expressed during development, so this wording seems reasonable. As noted, the primary goal was to check that the genes we selected were indeed expressed in zebrafish larvae before performing knockout experiments. Our discussion does raise the hypothesis that mutations in Alzheimer’s risk genes impact brain development and sleep early in life, but this argument primarily relies on our observation that knockout of late-onset Alzheimer’s risk genes causes sleep phenotypes in 7-day old zebrafish larvae and from previous work showing brain structural differences in infants and children at high genetic risk of Alzheimer’s disease (Dean et al., 2014; Quiroz et al., 2015), not solely on gene expression early in life.

      (4) A common quandary with defining sleep behaviorally is how to rectify sleep and activity changes that influence one another. With psen2 KOs, the authors describe reduced activity and increased sleep during the day. But how do we know if the reduced activity drives increased behavioral quiescence that is incorrectly defined as sleep? In instances where sleep is increased but activity during periods during wake are normal or elevated, this is not an issue. But here, the animals might very well be unhealthy, and less active, so naturally they stop moving more for prolonged periods, but the main conclusion is not sleep per se. This is an area where more experiments should be added if the authors do not wish to change/temper the conclusions they draw. Are psen2 KOs responsive to startling stimuli like controls when awake? Do they respond normally when quiescent? Great care must be taken in all models using inactivity as a proxy for sleep, and it can harm the field when there is no acknowledgment that overall health/activity changes could be a confound. Particularly worrisome is the betamethasone data in Figure 6, where activity and sleep are once again coordinately modified by the drug.

      This is a fair criticism. We agree it is a concern, especially in the case of psen2 as we claim that day-time sleep is increased while zebrafish are diurnal. We do not rely heavily on the day-time inactivity being sleep (the ZOLTAR predictions or the small molecule rescue do not change whether the parameter is called sleep or inactivity), but  our choice of labelling may be misleading. We will try to test this claim by plotting the distribution of the inactive period durations. If psen2 knockout larvae indeed sleep more during the day compared to controls, we might predict that inactive periods longer than 1 minute to increase disproportionately compared to the increase in shorter inactive periods.

      To address, “are psen2 KO responsive to startling stimuli like controls when awake/when quiescent”, we can try to look at the behaviour of psen2 knockout larvae that were awake (i.e., moved in the preceding one minute) or ‘asleep’ (i.e., did not move in the preceding one minute) at the light transitions and count the proportion of psen2 knockout or control larvae which displayed a startle response. If most psen2 knockouts react to the light transition, it should at least exclude the concern that they are very unhealthy, as the reviewer suggests. This criticism seems challenging to definitely address experimentally though. A possible approach could be to use a closed-loop system which, after one minute of inactivity, triggers a stimulus which is sufficient to startle an awake larva but not an asleep larva. If psen2 knockout larvae indeed sleep more during the day, the stimulus should usually not be sufficient to startle them. Note, how to calibrate this stimulus is also not straightforward. We do not plan to test this, but our analysis of the light transitions may provide a decent proxy.

      (5) The conclusions for the serotonin section are overstated. Behavioural pharmacology purports to predict a signaling pathway disrupted with sorl1 KO. But is it not just possible that the drug acts in parallel to the true disrupted pathway in these fish? There is no direct evidence for serotonin dysfunction - that conclusion is based on response to the drug. Moreover, it is just 1 drug - is the same phenotype present with another SSRI? Likewise, language should be toned down in the discussion, as this hypothesis is not "confirmed" by the results (consider "supported"). The lack of measured serotonin differences further raises concern that this is not the true pathway. This is another major point that deserves further experimental evidence, because without it, the entire approach (behavioral pharm screen) seems more shaky as a way to identify mechanisms. There are any number of testable hypotheses to pursue such as a) Using transient transgenesis to visualize 5HT neuron morphology (is development perturbed: cell number, neurite morphology, synapse formation); b) Using transgenic Ca reporters to assay 5HT neuron activity.

      Regarding the comment, “is it not just possible that the drug acts in parallel to the true disrupted pathway”, we think no, assuming we understand correctly your question. Key to our argument is the fact that sorl1 knockout larvae react differently to the drug than control larvae. As an example, take night-time sleep bout length, which was not affected by knockout of sorl1 (Fig. 4–suppl. 5). For the sake of the argument, say only dopamine signalling (the “true disrupted pathway”) was affected in sorl1 knockouts but that serotonin signalling was intact. Assuming that citalopram specifically alters serotonin signalling, then treatment should cause the same increase in sleep bout length in both knockouts and controls as serotonin signalling is intact in both. This is not what we see, however. Citalopram caused a greater increase in sleep bout length in sorl1 knockouts than in scrambled-injected larvae. In other words, the effect is non-additive, in the sense that citalopram did not add the same number of Z-scores to sorl1 knockouts or controls. We think this shows that serotonin signalling is somehow different in sorl1 knockouts. Nonetheless, we would concede that the experiment does not necessarily says much about the importance of the serotonin disruption caused by loss of Sorl1. It could be, for example, that the most salient consequence of loss of Sorl1 is cholinergic disruption (see reply to Reviewer #1 above) and that serotonin signalling is a minor theme.

      Furthermore, we agree with you and Reviewer #2 that the conclusions are overly confident. We will repeat this experiment with another SSRI as you suggest. Your suggestions to further test the serotonin system in the sorl1 knockouts are excellent as well, however we do not plan to pursue them at this stage.

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    1. Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      The aim of the study was to map, a) whether different tissues exhibit different metabolic profiles (this is known already), what differences are found between female and male mice and how the profiles changes with age. In particular, the study recorded the activity of respirasomes, i.e. the concerted activity of mitochondrial respiratory complex chains consisting of CI+CIII2+CIV, CII+CIII2+CIV or CIV alone.

      The strength is certainly the atlas of oxidative metabolism in the whole mouse body, the inclusion of the two different sexes and the comparison between young and old mice. The measurement was performed on frozen tissue, which is possible as already shown (Acin-Perez et al, EMBO J, 2020).

      Weakness:

      The assay reveals the maximum capacity of enzyme activity, which is an artificial situation and may differ from in vivo respiration, as the authors themselves discuss. The material used was a very crude preparation of cells containing mitochondria and other cytosolic compounds and organelles. Thus, the conditions are not well defined and the respiratory chain activity was certainly uncoupled from ATP synthesis. Preparation of more pure mitochondria and testing for coupling would allow evaluation of additional parameters: P/O ratios, feedback mechanism, basal respiration, and ATP-coupled respiration, which reflect in vivo conditions much better. The discussion is rather descriptive and cautious and could lead to some speculations about what could cause the differences in respiration and also what consequences these could have, or what certain changes imply.

      Nevertheless, this study is an important step towards this kind of analysis.

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    1. Líderes educacionais podem alimentar a inovaçªo disruptiva de vários modos, incluindoseguir estes cinco passos:1. Criar uma equipe na escola que seja autônoma em relaçªo a todos os aspectos da sala deaula tradicional.2. Focar os modelos disruptivos de ensino híbrido inicialmente nas áreas de nªo-consumo.3. Quando estiverem prontos para expandir para além das áreas de nªo-consumo, procurarpor alunos com menores exigências de desempenho.4. Se comprometer em persistir no recente projeto disruptivo.5. Introduzir políticas de incentivo à inovaçªo.

      Estes passos parecem utópicos e pouco pragmáticos. De facto a inovação denomina-se disruptiva, mas apresenta aqui, nestes passos, um desligar abrupto do ensino dito tradicional e não devemos esquecer que o ensino é híbrido e há modelos pedagógicos que são aplicadas em sala de aula tradicional e que devem ser tidos em conta no âmbito desta transição.

    2. Os mesmospadrões estªo agora desenvolvendo na Educaçªo Básica à medida que o ensino online começa atransformar o sistema educacional.

      Para estas evoluções acontecerem, haverá também a necessidade de definir uma estrutura flexível, como refere Moreira (pp. 27). O autor aborda a importância da inovação por parte dos professores, o que na maior parte dos casos só vai acontecer se houver espírito colaborativo e formação ativa.

      Referências: Moreira, J. A., & Horta, M. J. (2020). Educação e ambientes híbridos de aprendizagem. Um processo de inovação sustentada. Revista UFG, 20. https://doi.org/10.5216/revufg.v20.66027

    3. Um híbrido é uma combinaçªo da nova tecnologia disruptiva com aantiga tecnologia, e representa uma inovaçªo sustentada em relaçªo à tecnologia anterior

      Vários autores e investigadores da área (e.g: Moreira & Horta, 2020, p.6) defendem que os cenários híbridos (que combinam metodologias online e presenciais) oferecem “o melhor de dois mundos”, onde novas tecnologias e novos modelos são integrados no que já existia. Assim, são combinadas estratégias de ensino de aprendizagem presencial e online de forma a proporcionar aos professores e alunos o melhor dos dois formatos. Neste âmbito as tecnologias digitais tanto podem complementar a sala de aula presencial, como criar novos espaços e ambientes (online) que incentivam a aprendizagem. Desta forma, podemos referir que o híbrido “representa uma inovação sustentava em relação à tecnologia anterior”, que junta com “sucesso as vantagens da sala de aula física com os benefícios da educação online” (Moreira & Horta, 2020, p. 6). (Melanie Magalhães,2303293)

    4. pelo menos em parte por meio doensino online, com algum elementode controle do aluno sobre o tempo,local, caminho e/ou ritmodo aprendizado;pelo menos em parte em umalocalidade física supervisionada,fora de sua residência;

      Esta definição de ensino híbrido vai ao encontro da definição de Sangrà que nos diz que a presencialidade e a virtualidade se devem ligar de uma forma tão fluida que vão seguir em direções que se aproximam cada vez mais e podem assim coexistir de uma forma natural (Sangrà, pp. 122).

      Sangrà, A. (2022). Una mirada diferente para la Educación Híbrida. Video Journal of Social and Human Research, 1(2), 117-125. <br /> https://doi.org/10.18817/vjshr.v1i2.33

    5. Os modelos de ensino híbrido que seguem o padrªo dos híbridos estªo numa trajetória sustentadaem relaçªo à sala de aula tradicional. Eles estªo montados de modo a construir sobre o sistemaindustrial de salas de aula e oferecer melhorias sustentadas em relaçªo a ele, mas nªo a rompercom ele.

      Os modelos de ensino híbrido representam uma inovação incremental relativamente ao modelo de ensino dito tradicional, isto é, apresentam uma melhoria sustentada mas não o eliminam. Importa também referir que este ensino híbrido, aliás, parte precisamente desse modelo de ensino tradicional socialmente aceite e incorpora atividades com recurso ao ambiente digital ou virtual (e-atividades) como forma de melhorá-lo, torná-lo mais apelativo, mais motivador para os alunos e até para os professores e, assim, potenciar as aprendizagens e obter melhores resultados.

    6. As indústrias criam os híbridos por razões previsíveis, como o fato de o modelo de negócio dastecnologias puramente disruptivas nªo ser atrativo para empresas líderes logo no início, enquantoque implementar um híbrido como inovaçªo sustentada permite que as organizações inovadorassatisfaçam melhor seus clientes.

      No caso da indústria automóvel, as empresas tiveram perfeita noção de que, se apresentassem inicialmente veículos 100% elétricos, os clientes teriam receio em adquiri-los por funcionarem de um modo que lhes era completamente desconhecido. Por isso, apresentaram um veículo que incorporava os dois sistemas de funcionamento e assim apareceram os veículos híbridos. Estes apresentavam uma inovação sustentada que era melhor do que a tecnologia anterior. Hoje já existem veículos 100% elétricos. Do mesmo modo, no que diz respeito ao ensino, se pretendêssemos implementar um modelo de ensino 100% online nas nossas escolas, não iríamos ser bem sucedidos. Ao utilizarmos modelos educativos híbridos estaremos a aplicar uma inovação sustentada em relação ao ensino tradicional, conseguindo obter melhores resultados. No entanto, existem escolas/cursos que funcionam 100% online. Estes modelos de ensino têm vindo a crescer cada vez mais.

    7. Um terceiro elemento das inovações disruptivas bem-sucedidas é que elas melhoram ao longodo tempo, até que se tornem boas o bastante para atender às necessidades dos consumidorestradicionais. O ensino online está atualmente passando por esta transformaçªo ascendente.

      Transformação esta que contribuirá para uma educação mais acessível e universal, procurando dar uma melhor resposta às necessidades e demandas atuais, tornando-se mais inclusiva, personalizada e eficaz.

    8. asorganizações inovadoras consistentemente escolhem participar de batalhas sustentadas em vez debatalhas disruptivas

      Enquanto instituições que esperam a melhoria das suas funcionalidades, o desenvolvimento de comportamentos sustentáveis e harmoniosos traz mais benefícios do que a adoção de estratégias mais radicais, sob pena de impactarem negativamente tanto o seu percurso enquanto órgãos de gestão como os seus trabalhadores. Assim, transportando essa realidade para o contexto educativo, é imprescindível incluir nas nossas ações experiências de ensino positivas e que promovam o efeito em cadeia. No entanto, nem todas as novas correntes ideológicas e invenções em educação têm sucesso imediato. Há que haver coragem para sermos criteriosos e curadores dessas novas tendências e analisar as suas vantagens e desvantagens.

    9. No longo prazo, os modelos disruptivos de ensino híbrido se tornarªo bons o bastante paraatrair estudantes tradicionais do sistema existente para o modelo disruptivo

      Neste mundo moderno também os alunos esperam e procuram novas formas de saber. Também eles podem funcionar como elementos disruptivos na medida em que forçam o ensino a atualizar-se, a deixar cair as suas amarras ao passado e, consequentemente, a tornar-se mais humanista e flexível. A longo prazo todas as escolas terão que se tornar mais apelativas a esta juventude repleta de nómadas digitais, que vivem no mundo digital com a mesma facilidade com que o fazem em sociedade.

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    1. Considera-se receita bruta
      • Processo: AgInt no AREsp 1.846.725-PI, Rel. Ministro Gurgel de Faria, Primeira Turma, por unanimidade, julgado em 8/4/2024, DJe 18/4/2024.

      Ramo do Direito DIREITO TRIBUTÁRIO

      TemaPaz, Justiça e Instituições Eficazes <br /> Simples nacional. Base de cálculo. Receita bruta. Gorjeta. Natureza salarial. Exclusão.

      DESTAQUE - O valor pago a título de gorjetas, ante a sua natureza salarial, não pode integrar o conceito de faturamento, receita bruta ou lucro para fins de apuração tributária.

      INFORMAÇÕES DO INTEIRO TEOR - Na origem, o feito decorre de mandado segurança em que se busca o reconhecimento do direito líquido e certo da contribuinte impetrante de que as gorjetas e o couvert artístico não sejam considerados receita bruta para fins de tributação sob o regime do Simples Nacional, ou seja, discute-se a possibilidade de inclusão da gorjeta no conceito de receita bruta, base de cálculo do Simples Nacional.

      • De acordo com o art. 18, § 3º, da Lei Complementar n. 123/2006, a tributação unificada "Simples Nacional" tem como base de cálculo a receita bruta da microempresa ou empresa de pequeno porte optante ("Sobre a receita bruta auferida no mês incidirá a alíquota efetiva determinada na forma do caput e dos §§ 1º, 1º-A e 2º deste artigo, podendo tal incidência se dar, à opção do contribuinte, na forma regulamentada pelo Comitê Gestor, sobre a receita recebida no mês, sendo essa opção irretratável para todo o ano-calendário").

      • Já o art. 3º, § 1º, dessa norma traz o conceito de receita bruta e dispõe que se considera "receita bruta, para fins do disposto no caput deste artigo, o produto da venda de bens e serviços nas operações de conta própria, o preço dos serviços prestados e o resultado nas operações em conta alheia, não incluídas as vendas canceladas e os descontos incondicionais concedidos".

      • Nesse diapasão, esta Corte Superior adotou o entendimento de que o valor pago a título de gorjetas, ante a sua natureza salarial, não pode integrar o conceito de faturamento, receita bruta ou lucro para fins de apuração tributária. Nesse sentido: AgInt no REsp n. 1.668.117/PR, relator Ministro Sérgio Kukina, Primeira Turma, julgado em 21/2/2022, DJe de 24/2/2022 e AREsp n. 1.604.057/PE, relator Ministro Herman Benjamin, Segunda Turma, julgado em 4/2/2020, DJe de 12/5/2020.

      • Dessa forma, considerando o conceito de receita bruta explicitado na Lei Complementar n. 123/2006, não se vislumbra nenhuma possibilidade de considerar a gorjeta como produto de venda, preço de serviço prestado ou resultado nas operações em conta alheia, pois, de acordo com o entendimento do STJ, a gorjeta tem natureza salarial, ou seja, compõe o salário do empregado. Assim, a referida verba não deve integrar a receita bruta para fins de cálculo do Simples Nacional.

    1. Art. 53
      • REsp 2.105.387-SP, Rel. Ministro Gurgel de Faria, Primeira Turma, por unanimidade, julgado em 14/5/2024.

      Ramo do Direito DIREITO TRIBUTÁRIO, DIREITO URBANÍSTICO

      DESTAQUE - As providências elencadas no art. 53 da Lei n. 6.766/1979 para que possa ser alterado o uso de solo rural para fins urbanos, dentre elas a necessidade de prévia audiência do Incra, não configuram condição à caracterização do fato gerador e à cobrança de IPTU sobre imóvel que, por lei local, passou a integrar a zona urbana da municipalidade e que preenche os requisitos do art. 32 do CTN.

      INFORMAÇÕES DO INTEIRO TEOR - Cinge-se a controvérsia em definir se o art. 53 da Lei n. 6.766/1979 estabelece a obrigação do município de previamente comunicar ao Instituto Nacional de Colonização e Reforma Agrária - Incra acerca da alteração de destinação de área rural para urbana, como condição para que a propriedade deixe de sofrer a incidênica do Imposto sobre a Propriedade Territorial Rural - ITR e passe a sofrer a incidência do Imposto Predial e Territorial Urbano - IPTU, a fim de se evitar a bitributação.

      • O art. 182 da Constituição Federal (CF) preconiza que "a política de desenvolvimento urbano, executada pelo Poder Público municipal, conforme diretrizes gerais fixadas em lei, tem por objetivo ordenar o pleno desenvolvimento das funções sociais da cidade e garantir o bem-estar de seus habitantes".

      • A Lei n. 6.766/1979, por sua vez, é a lei federal ordinária, recepcionada pela CF, que disciplina as normas gerais sobre a política urbana referente ao parcelamento do solo, dispondo no mencionado art. 53 que: "todas as alterações de uso do solo rural para fins urbanos dependerão de prévia audiência do Instituto Nacional de Colonização e Reforma Agrária - INCRA, do Órgão Metropolitano, se houver, onde se localiza o Município, e da aprovação da Prefeitura municipal, ou do Distrito Federal quando for o caso, segundo as exigências da legislação pertinente".

      • Não há na redação do texto legal, portanto, passagem que possa sugerir eventual subordinação entre os entes públicos, notadamente em relação à existência de condicionante para fins de tributação municipal. As condições estabelecidas no supracitado dispositivo dizem respeito à realização de alterações no uso do solo rural para fins urbanos, ou seja, são dirigidas à pessoa do loteador, que somente poderá efetivar essa modificação de utilização da área depois de consultar ("prévia audiência") o Incra e o órgão municipal pertinente e de obter a aprovação do projeto pela prefeitura ou do Distrito Federal.

      • Essa disposição legal atribui apenas à municipalidade a atribuição de aprovar ou desaprovar essa modificação de uso para fins de loteamento, o que guarda sintonia com o art. 12 dessa mesma lei, que assim dispõe: "Art. 12. O projeto de loteamento e desmembramento deverá ser aprovado pela Prefeitura Municipal, ou pelo Distrito Federal quando for o caso, a quem compete também a fixação das diretrizes a que aludem os arts. 6º e 7º desta Lei, salvo a exceção prevista no artigo seguinte". Ressalte-se ainda que essa consulta ao Incra está prevista antes da aprovação do projeto pela municipalidade e, por conseguinte, da lei municipal que integrará essa área na zona urbana da cidade.

      • Constata-se, assim, que as providências elencadas no art. 53 da Lei n. 6.766/1979 dizem respeito às condições para se garantir, no máximo, a regularidade do processo de parcelamento/loteamento de área então rural, e não aos requisitos para a cobrança do IPTU sobre imóvel que, por lei local, passou a ser considerado como urbano, ou seja, o supracitado comando normativo trata de regra procedimental para fins de parcelamento do solo urbano, não implicando regra de natureza tributária.

      • Ademais, eventual circunstância condicionante à configuração do fato gerador do tributo em questão (IPTU) somente poderia ser validamente instituída por lei complementar (art. 146, III, "a", da CF), o que não é o caso da Lei n. 6.766/1979; bem como não se vislumbra a ocorrência de bitributação, porquanto tal fenômeno ocorre quando dois entes federados exigem o pagamento de tributo por um mesmo fato gerador, o que não ocorre na espécie.

      • Dessa forma, ressalvada a subsistência da destinação rural do imóvel (Tema 174 do STJ), estando preenchidas as condições elencadas no art. 32 do Código Tributário Nacional - CTN, é de se considerar válidos o lançamento e a cobrança do IPTU sobre os imóveis que a lei municipal passou a definir como pertencentes à zona urbana da cidade.

    1. Para crear un entorno de investigación reproducible en una computadora, con sistemas operativos Windows GNU/Linux o MacOS, se instalan en ella los recursos necesarios para construir dicho entorno.

      Cambiar por:

      Si bien hemos mostrado, en las secciones previas las herramientas individuales y sus usos en esta investigación. Este apartado se encarga de mostrar los flujos de trabajo que conectaron las herramientas.

    2. siguientes elementos

      Agregar una frase corta al frente de cada uno indicando qué hacen. Por ejemplo:

      1. Scoop: Gestor de instalación de software libre, de código abierto y/o libre distribución.
      2. Fossil y ChiselApp: Sistema de control de versiones y publicación de borradores de la tesis y sus narrativas de datos.

      y así suscesivamente. De esta manera el lector no se queda con un listado de nombres que no sabe qué significan.

    3. Los resultados de la extracción de datos en Twitter/X se entregaron a las partes interesadas para su aprobación, lo que permitió realizar evaluaciones adicionales dentro de los parámetros del proyecto.

      Se iteró en los prototipos, mirando qué tanto ellos podían efectivamente dar cuenta de la calidad de los datos y qué elemento algorítmicos completaban la narrativa o donde estaban las limitaciones, bien en los conocimientos para mejorar los analisis o bien en las herramientas para dicho analisis.

    4. La mineria de datos es importante para sacar conclusiones interesantes a partir de conjuntos de datos masivos, que se aplica con gran éxito al analizar redes sociales como Twitter/X. Durante este proceso se recopilan y procesan cantidades masivas de datos generados por los usuarios, como tweets, encontrando patrones y tendencias (Blázquez., 2019) . La minería de datos se utiliza para detección de tendencias en tiempo real y el análisis de los tweets (Blázquez., 2019). Con el uso de esta técnica, las personas pueden clasificarse en varias categorías según sus intereses y comportamientos. También se pueden identificar eventos cruciales o emergencias.

      Si bien usamos minería de datos para extraer los datos, lo clave no fue su tamaño, sino su calidad. Este párrafo debería expresarlo. También es necesario plantear elementos de ciencia abierta y reproducible en los tipos de estudios que estamos realizando, pues es una parte importante del problema y de los objetivos específicos y no hay nada al respecto en la justificación.

    1. Logic in a narrow sense is equivalent to deductive logic. By definition, such reasoning cannot produce any information (in the form of a conclusion) that is not already contained in the premises.

      Si la lógica deductiva no puede generar nueva información, ¿cómo es que la utilizamos para hacer descubrimientos en física? ¿No estaríamos limitados solo a lo que ya sabemos? ¿O es que la física se basa más en la inducción que en la deducción?

    1. sentimento de pertença

      O metaverso nas escolas e nas universidades, também deve ser visto como um recurso pedagógico digital de apoio para portadores de necessidades especiais (PDE), porque aumenta o sentimento de pertença com a criação de avatares que podem ser programados para usar linguagem de sinais e legendas permitindo que alunos surdos ou com deficiência auditiva participem das atividades com facilidade e efetividade. Muitos alunos PDE, desistem da escola ou das universidades, porque não se sentem realmente incluídos no ambiente e muitas vezes não recebe um suporte pedagógico adequado para a inclusão e permanência na instituição. O metaverso e outros recursos inovadores aplicados aos ambientes virtuais de aprendizagem podem transformar as vidas destes jovens, tornado suas expectativas para um futuro profissional concretizáveis.

    2. Isso rompe com os limites da sala de aula física, aproximando o mundo físico do virtual e tudo acontecendo em um tempo real (LEITÃO, 2022), o que tem despertado o interesse dos alunos que nasceram nas “duas últimas décadas e encontraram uma realidade mediada pelas tecnologias digitais

      Os alunos que nasceram nas duas últimas décadas, são nativos digitais, cresceram em um mundo fortemente influenciado por tecnologias digitais e seu ritmo frenético de evolução dos últimos tempos. Isso moldou as expectativas e interesses destes jovens em relação a forma de aprender e a forma de se relacionar socialmente. O metaverso na educação se alinha com as expectativas desta faixa etária de alunos, pois para eles é naturalmente atraente, estão sempre envolvidos no cotidiano com as tecnologias, dominam as novidades com facilidade maior que outras gerações. Romper os limites da sala de aula tradicional, oferecendo uma educação mais interativa, personalizada, colaborativa, relevante e envolvente é acompanhar o ritmo e comportamento totalmente digital deste público, que já vivem imersos na tecnologia do amanhecer ao anoitecer. Sem dúvida, o metaverso na educação é um elemento que deve se integrar as demais práticas pedagógicas digitais, sem desprezar ou eliminar as práticas pedagógicas analógicas eficientes para outros conteúdos.

    3. MDV3D Modelos Didáticos Virtuais 3D

      Alguns conteúdos e conceitos complexos podem ser mais difíceis para compreender, absorver e reter nos métodos tracionais de estudo. Então, o MDV3D pode ser um facilitador tanto para o docente que está a acompanhar este processo de ensino, quanto para os alunos como aprendentes. Atende a dificuldades individuais e particulares de aprendizagem, que o aluno normalmente teria com o mesmo conteúdo, na sala de aula física.

    4. existem diferentes plataformas do metaverso no mercado que podem ser utilizados na educação, como: o metaverso Eduverse –versão educacional do Active Words, o Second Life, oOpenSimulator,o GPe-dU que tem realizado algumas experiências com o SLOODLE, módulo que integra funcionalidades do Ambiente virtual de aprendizagem Modular Object-Oriented Dynamic Learning Environment(Moodle) e do Second Life.

      Existe uma diversidade de plataformas do metaverso que estão a ser exploradas na educação. A variedade mencionada, que inclui o Eduverse, Second Life, OpenSimulator e GPe-dU, reflete o potencial vasto e versátil destas tecnologias em ambientes educativos. Cada uma destas plataformas oferece diferentes funcionalidades e possibilidades, como o SLOODLE, que integra o Moodle com o Second Life, proporcionando uma experiência de aprendizagem imersiva e dinâmica.

    5. Roblox "é uma plataforma de games3D que permite ao usuário criar e jogar em centenas de mundos construídos pelos próprios jogadores, (bem semelhante à Minecraft) onde é possível participar de diferentes aventuras. Entre esses mundos, há diversos elaborados especialmente para crianças, que podem jogar junto com os amigos e conversar via chat(Farias; Messias; Schimiguel, 2022, p. 21)."

      O metaverso facilita de forma significativa a interações entre alunos de diferentes partes do mundo, utilizando avatares, gestos e emoções. Plataformas como Adicionalmente, a plataforma Virtual, que permite treinar entrevistas e apresentações num ambiente virtual imersivo e realista, mostra claramente o potencial do metaverso para o desenvolvimento de competências práticas de forma acessível e económica, sem custos adicionais para participação internacional. Esta capacidade de simular experiências práticas e promover interações globais torna o metaverso uma ferramenta valiosa para o futuro da educação.

      Meta. (s.d.). Jogos no metaverso. https://youtu.be/5FwztKGQmd8 BBC My World. (s.d.) O que é o Metaverso?https://youtu.be/StW2bLOqbkQ

      Fernanda Mestre

    6. " fazendo uso da linguagem textual, oral, gestual e gráfica"

      O benefício da integração de múltiplas linguagens gera inclusão, engajamento, colaboração e compreensão extensiva. Então, a aplicabilidade do metaverso na educação transforma a maneira como os alunos aprendem. Mas o importante, é que este acesso seja equitativo. Vamos torcer para que isto aconteça em todo sistema educacional, seja no nível escolar ou universitário.

    7. O professor sempre aparece com temas muito relevantes e interessantes, apps que nunca vi na vida. Estou a adorar esta app! Nossa colega Ana Sacavém fala maravilhas do metaverso e realmente estão a conseguir convencer-me que é uma realidade inevitável, atual e a escola/educação não pode ficar fora dela.

    8. Sobre o Metaverso na educação, achei essa parte do texto fabulosa. Principalmente para quem trabalha com crianças e adolescentes que muitas vezes escondem-se atrás de um ecrã para conseguir verbalizar as emoçóes.

      Partindo do contexto atual e, com as Tecnologias Digitais da Informação e Comunicação (TDIC) avançando cada vez mais, inclusive com contribuições da educação, percebe-se que os espaços digitais virtuais estão ressignificando as maneiras de se conviver. No contexto educacional, os alunosde diferentes lugares do mundo conseguem interagir entre eles, por meio da linguagem oral, gráfica e gestual, pois os avatares possibilitam manifestações de gestos e emoções (Backes; Schlemmer, 2014).

    9. **Outro aspecto observado nas práticas pedagógicas do Quadro 1, é que essas permitem a sensação de presencialidade e imersão, que são características do metaverso, o que já era percebido pelos autores: Maria (2010); Gomes (2012); Silva (2012); Schaf (2011); Locatelli (2011); Pires (2010) e Costa (2008). **

      Entendo ser esse um dos maiores desafios, em complemento aos demais já apresentados pelos colegas: criar experiências que realmente promovam presencialidade e imersão do ponto de vista da aprendizagem, não apenas pelo lado lúdico da tecnologia envolvida.

    10. *Campos (2022) aborda o metaverso como sendo uma rede de ambientes virtuais sempre ativos, um lugar onde pode acontecer uma interação entre as pessoase entre objetos digitais *

      Essa nova dimensão, onde o relacionamento entre pessoas e entre pessoas com objetos de aprendizagem pode ocorrer sem barreiras é de um potencial realmente inimaginável. A questão é lidar com as barreiras de entrada, relacionadas às questões de infraestrutura, desenvolvimento e capacitação dos docentes. Sabemos do valor da aprendizagem gerado pelas relações, seja entre pessoas, entre pessoas e objetos de aprendizagem e entre atores humanos e não humanos, por exemplo. Tudo isso está presente em AVAs e pode estar apresentado de uma forma muito mais disruptiva em um metaverso.

    11. Ou seja, ele viabiliza uma experimentação para além de uma sala de aula comum (Pereira, 2009).

      O que mais me atrai no assunto é a possibilidade de ampliação dos ambientes virtuais de aprendizagem. Novas possibilidades são sempre bem-vindas, se traduzirem abordagens pedagógicas que gerem a aprendizagem pretendida pelo docente, pelo aluno ou pela própria instituição. Mas, novas possibilidades precisam ser experimentadas até para que seus potenciais venham à tona e se provem realmente úteis. É assim que percebo o tema abordado aqui neste texto.

    12. ...enquanto os professores não estiverem familiarizados com o mundo MDV3D, o uso do metaverso na educação será sempre um desafio, pois qualquer mudança tecnológica e/ou pedagógica nas instituições de ensino começa com os professores preparados e motivados para tal.

      A preparação e a familiarização dos professores com os Mundos Digitais Virtuais em 3D (MDV3D) são fundamentais para o sucesso do metaverso na educação. A adoção de novas tecnologias e práticas pedagógicas nas instituições de ensino depende diretamente da preparação e da motivação dos professores. Eles precisam não apenas dominar estas novas ferramentas, mas também compreender profundamente o novo espaço de interação para poder abordar questões éticas e orientar adequadamente os seus alunos, especialmente os mais jovens. Portanto, investir na formação (capacitação) dos professores é crucial para integrar o metaverso de forma eficaz e responsável na educação.

    13. É nessa linha de entendimento que Santos (2019, p. 16) afirma que o “o uso das tecnologiasdigitais, mais especificamente os recursos à RVI e as metodologias educacionais gamificadas, não devem passar despercebidos pelas instituições, sejam de ensino ou de pesquisa”. Afonso et al.(2020, p. 55) reforçam esse ponto de vista ao afirmarem que dentre várias razões favoráveis à utilização da RV na educação está a “questão ilustrativa que sobressai as demais mídias”

      Pessoalmente, acredito que a integração de tecnologias digitais, como a Realidade Virtual (RV) e as metodologias gamificadas, são essenciais para modernizar a educação e a pesquisa. A RV ofereceuma imersão e uma interatividade que enriquecem o aluno e a aprendizagem, especialmente em áreas complexas como a medicina e a engenharia. As metodologias gamificadas, por sua vez, aumentam a motivação dos alunos através de elementos lúdicos.

      Concordo com Santos (2019) e Afonso et al. (2020) sobre a importância destas tecnologias. No entanto, é crucial que sua implementação seja planeada e acessível a todos os estudantes para maximizar os seus benefícios e evitar desigualdades. Em resumo, a adoção de RV e gamificação na educação é uma necessidade estratégica para tornar o aluno e a aprendizagem mais eficaz e envolvente.

    14. em termos de educação deve-se ter consciência que a RV não deve ser utilizada indiscriminadamente. É necessário ter um propósito, planejamento e um objetivo claro por parte do professor. Dessa forma haverá clareza na aprendizagem e a RV não perderá sua função em si mesma (Santos, 2019, p. 43).

      Destaco esta citação por considerar essencial a questão do propósito das atividades. A mais-valia da RV reside no facto de proporcionar experiências que não seriam possíveis de outra forma. O uso indiscriminado deste recurso pode esvaziá-lo de sentido, ara além de criar dificuldades de análise da qualidade da aprendizagem.

      É necessário, pois, que se faça uma moderação eficaz e uma administração cuidadosa dos ambientes virtuais para garantir a segurança dos participantes, prevenir comportamentos inadequados ou ofensivos e promover um ambiente adequado e enriquecedor para a aprendizagem.

    15. “Ademais, o metaverso tem como possibilidade oferecer ao aluno uma experiência imersiva e realista, com riqueza de detalhes...”

      Esta parece-me ser a maior vantagem do uso do metaverso na educação, pois incluí a possibilidade de proporcionar experiências imersivas e interativas aos alunos, criando um ambiente envolvente e estimulante para a aprendizagem. Além disso, permite experimentar novas possibilidades e vivenciar realidades que não seriam alcançáveis de outra forma, potenciando o ensino personalizado, a redução de limites geográficos e a criação de ambientes educacionais colaborativos.

    16. "Para o alcance dessas possibilidades, têm-se ainda algumas dificuldades como, por exemplo, o Second Life, que é uma tentativa promissora de metaverso, mas que esbarra na qualidade da conexão da internet." Embora plataformas como o Second Life tenham mostrado o potencial do metaverso na educação, a qualidade da conexão de internet ainda é um obstáculo significativo. Uma conexão estável e rápida é essencial para garantir que os ambientes virtuais funcionem de maneira eficiente e sem interrupções. No entanto, muitos alunos, especialmente aqueles que se situam em áreas rurais ou em países com infraestrutura de rede limitada, podem não ter acesso à internet de alta velocidade. Isso cria uma disparidade digital que pode agravar as desigualdades educacionais. As instituições de ensino precisam de encontrar soluções alternativas, como o desenvolvimento de plataformas que sejam menos exigentes em termos de largura de banda. Podem, também, ser implementadas políticas públicas que melhorem a infraestrutura da internet em regiões desfavorecidas. Além disso, a experiência de uso de dispositivos de RV e RA, como óculos e luvas tácteis, pode ser desconfortável e fisicamente exigente, o que exige atenção aos aspetos ergonómicos e de saúde dos alunos.

    17. ...simulação de vida social por meio da interação entre avatares. ...pode-se considerar que o metaverso é uma extensão virtual da vida real... ..Nesse ambiente seria possível reaplicar as experiências cotidianas...

      Conforme mencionado por Maturana, o ato de viver assenta na relação e interação diária. A vivência educacional abre portas a uma interação pelo Metaverso, produzindo experiências imersivas, com aproximação à realidade futura.

    18. Destaca-se que o metaverso apresenta semelhanças com jogos...com a diferença que esse não corresponde a um jogo com objetivo de vencer.

      Considero que se trata de uma vantagem na aplicação educacional: diminui a competitividade excessiva e retira "peso" ao conceito de jogo, permitindo maior abertura por parte dos atores envolvidos na educação.

      Pedro Lopes

    19. Por isso, é necessário capacitar os professores para o uso das tecnologias do metaverso...

      Fazer uso do metaverso no processo de ensino e aprendizagem sem integrá-lo às novas metodologias ou recorrendo à metodologia tradicional...

      É uma transição desafiadora, sendo necessário derrubar aulas tradicionalmente físicas. Que alterações foram efetuadas na formação de um professor para que este esteja preparado para a utilização do Metaverso?

    20. "Os avatares possibilitam ações em primeira pessoa, semelhante aos jogos online, destacando-se que o metaverso apresenta semelhanças com jogos, por exemplo, os Role Playing Games (RPG), com a diferença que esse não corresponde a um jogo com objetivo de vencer."

      A utilização de avatares no metaverso, que permite aos alunos interagir na primeira pessoa, assemelha-se aos mecanismos dos jogos de RPG, onde os jogadores assumem papéis e exploram mundos virtuais. Esta característica pode ser extremamente benéfica para a educação, pois promove o compromisso e a motivação dos alunos ao aprenderem de forma lúdica e interativa. Contudo, o metaverso no contexto educacional vai além dos objetivos tradicionais dos jogos, que normalmente envolvem vencer desafios ou alcançar pontuações elevadas. No ambiente educacional, o foco está na aprendizagem e no desenvolvimento de competências. Esta abordagem exige que os educadores adaptem as suas estratégias pedagógicas para aproveitar as vantagens dos ambientes virtuais sem perder de vista os objetivos educacionais. Além disso, é importante considerar a ética e a segurança no uso de avatares, garantindo que os alunos estejam num ambiente seguro e que suas interações sejam monitorizadas para prevenir comportamentos inadequados.

    21. "O metaverso possibilita a construção de Mundos Digitais Virtuais em 3D (MDV3D), onde os sujeitos são representados por avatares em um ambiente tridimensional e dinâmico."

      A capacidade do metaverso em criar Mundos Digitais Virtuais em 3D (MDV3D) representa uma evolução significativa na maneira como os estudantes interagem com o conhecimento. Esses ambientes tridimensionais permitem que os alunos participem ativamente em simulações realistas, promovendo uma aprendizagem prática e experiencial. No entanto, a criação e manutenção desses mundos digitais requerem investimentos substanciais em tecnologia. As escolas precisam de computadores potentes, software especializado e dispositivos de realidade virtual para proporcionar uma experiência de aprendizagem imersiva. Além disso, o desenvolvimento desses ambientes virtuais deve ser feito de forma colaborativa entre educadores, desenvolvedores de software e especialistas em pedagogia para garantir que os conteúdos sejam educativamente valiosos e acessíveis. O uso de avatares permite aos alunos explorar conceitos abstratos de maneira concreta, mas também levanta questões sobre a monitorização e avaliação do progresso dos alunos nesses ambientes virtuais.

    1. ** ¿Podría un compuesto inorgánico convertirse en orgánico si, por ejemplo, un átomo de carbono decidiera espontáneamente unirse a su estructura? ¿Qué fuerzas cósmicas deberían estar en juego para que eso ocurra? **Rpta: La transición espontánea de un compuesto inorgánico a orgánico con la adición de un átomo de carbono es prácticamente imposible sin la intervención de una fuente de energía externa o condiciones muy específicas. Para que esto ocurra, fuerzas cósmicas o procesos energéticos significativos deben estar en juego, como altas energías presentes en ciertos eventos astronómicos o intervención biológica en un entorno controlado.

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      Corresponding author(s): Katja Petzold

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      We thank the reviewers for recognising the impact of our manuscript. The reviewers noted the novelty of the miRNA bulge structure, the importance of the three observed binding modes and their potential for use in future structure-based drug design, and the possible importance of the duplex release phenomenon. We are also thankful for the relevant and constructive feedback provided.

      Our responses to the comments are written point by point in blue, and any changes in the manuscript are shown in red.

      2. Description of the planned revisions

      In response to Reviewer 1 - major comment 2

      Some of the data is over-interpreted. For example, in Figure 3A, it is concluded that supplementary regions are more important for weaker seeds. Only two 8-mer seeds are present among the twelve target sites and thus it might be difficult to generalize.

      We found the relationship between seed type and the effect of supplementary pairing in our data intriguing. To further investigate this effect, we tested whether it exists in published microarray data from HCT116 cells transfected with six different miRNAs (Linsley et al., 2007; Argawal et al., 2015). Here we found that the for the two miRNAs (miR-103 and miR-106b) where we see an impact of supplementary pairing, the difference is primarily driven by 7mer-m8 seeds.

      Since the effect appears to be specific to the miRNA, we would like to test whether it can be observed for miR-34a in a larger dataset. Therefore, we plan to transfect HEK293T cells with miR-34a and analyse the mRNA response via RNAseq. We will repeat the analysis shown above, using the predicted number of supplementary pairs to categorise the dataset into groups with or without the effect of supplementary pairing. We will then compare the three seed types within these groups.

      In response to Reviewer 2 - minor comment 1, "why was the 34-nt 3'Cy3-labeled miR34a complementary probe shifted up in the presence of AGO?".

      We plan to investigate the upper band, which we hypothesise is a result of duplex release, using EMSA to ascertain whether the band height agrees with the size of the duplex.

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      Reviewer #1

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Sweetapple et al. Biophysics of microRNA-34a targeting and its influence on down-regulation

      In this study, the authors have investigated binding of miR-34a to a panel of natural target sequences using EMSA, luciferase reporter systems and structural probing. The authors compared binding within a binary and a ternary complex that included Ago2 and find that Ago2 affects affinity and strengthens weak binders and weakens strong binders. The affinity is, however, generally determined by binary RNA-RNA interactions also in the ternary complex. Luciferase reporter assays containing 12 different target sites that belong to one of three seed-match types were tested. Generally, affinity is a strong contributor to repression efficiency. Duplex release, a phenomenon observed for specific miRNA-target complementarities, seems to be more pronounced when high affinity within the binary complex is observed. Furthermore, the authors use RABS for structural probing either in a construct in CIS or binding by the individual miRNA in TRANS or in a complex with Ago2. They find pronounced asymmetric target binding and Ago2 does not generally change the binding pattern. The authors observe one specific structural group that was unexpected, which was mRNA binding with bulged miRNAs, which was expected sterically problematic based on the known structures. MD simulations, however, revealed that such structures could indeed form.

      This is an interesting manuscript that contributes to our mechanistic understanding of the miRNA-target pairing rules. The combination of affinity measurements, structural probing and luciferase reporters allow for a broad correlation of target binding and repression strength, which is a well-thought and highly conclusive approach. However, there are a number of shortcomings that are summarized below.

      The manuscript is not easy to read and to follow for several reasons. First, many of the sub-Figures are not referenced in the text of the results section (1C, 1D, 2C, 4D), which is somewhat annoying. Figure 4A seems to be mis-labeled. Second, a lot of data is presented in suppl. Figures. It should be considered to move more data into the main text in order to make it easier for readers to evaluate and follow.

      Thank you for bringing this to our attention. We have now revised the figure references accordingly.

      We have relocated gel images of BCL2, WNT1, MTA2 and the control samples from Figure S3 and S4 to the main results (Figure 2A-B) to improve readability and provide controls and details that aid in clear understanding. Additionally, we have relocated panel C from Figure S6 to Figure 2C to enhance the clarity of our rationale for using polyuridine (pU) in our AGO2 binding assays.

      The updated figure is shown below, with changes to the legend marked in red.

      Figure 2. Binary and ternary____ complex binding affinities measured by EMSA. (A) Binary (mRNA:miR-34a) binding assays showing examples of BCL2, WNT1 and MTA2. (B) Ternary (mRNA:miR-34a-AGO2) binding assays showing examples of BCL2, WNT1, MTA2, and the three control targets PERFECT, SCRseed, and SCRall. The Cy5 labelled species is indicated with asterisk (*). F indicates the free labelled species (miR34a or mRNA), B indicates binary complex, and T indicates ternary complex. Adjacent titrations points differ two-fold in concentration, with maximum concentrations stated at the top right. Adjacent titration points for MTA2 differed three-fold to assess a wider concentration range. In theternary assay, miRNA duplex release from AGO2 was observed for amongst others BCL2, WNT1, PERFECT, and SCRseed (band indicated with B), while it was not observed for SCRall and MTA2. See Figures S3 and S4 for representative gel images for all targets. See Supplementary files 2 and 3 for all images and replicates. (C) Titrations with increasing miR-34a-AGO2 concentration against Cy5-labelled SCRall (left) or PNUTS (right) comparing the absence and presence of 20 μM polyuridine (pU) during equilibration. pU acted as a blocking agent, reducing nonspecific binding, as seen by the different KD,app values for SCRall and PNUTS after addition of 20 μM pU. Therefore, all final mRNA:miR-34a-AGO2 EMSAs were carried out in the presence of 20 μM pU. Labels are as stated above. (D) Individual binding profiles for each of the 12 mRNA targets assessed by electrophoretic mobility assay (EMSA). Each datapoint represents an individual experiment (n=3). Blue represents results for the binary complex, and green represents results for the ternary complex. Dotted horizontal lines represent the KD,app values, which are also stated in blue and green with standard deviations (units = nM). Note that the x-axis spans from 0.1 to 100,000 in CCND1, MTA2 and NOTCH2, whereas the remaining targets span 0.1 to 10,000.

      Some of the data is over-interpreted. For example, in Figure 3A, it is concluded that supplementary regions are more important for weaker seeds. Only two 8-mer seeds are present among the twelve target sites and thus it might be difficult to generalize.

      We have revised our wording to recognise that more 8-mer sites would be required to draw a stronger conclusion based on this hypothesis. This hypothesis would be interesting to confirm in a larger dataset but is unfortunately outside of the scope of this paper.

      Our hypothesis also aligns with recent data from Kosek et al. (NAR 2023; Figure 2D) where SIRT1 with an 8mer and 7mer-A1 seed was compared. Only the 7mer-A1 was sensitive to mutations in the central region or switching all mismatched to WC pairs.

      Page 21 now states:

      "This result indicates that the impact of supplementary binding may be greater for targets with weaker seeds, as has been observed earlier in a mutation study of miR-34a binding to SIRT1 (Kosek et al., 2023), although a larger sample size would be needed to confirm this observation."

      Furthermore, we found the relationship between seed type and the effect of supplementary pairing in our data intriguing. To further investigate this effect, we tested whether it exists in published microarray data from HCT116 cells transfected with six different miRNAs (Linsley et al., 2007; Argawal et al., 2015). Here we found that the for the two miRNAs (miR-103 and miR-106b) where we see an impact of supplementary pairing, the difference is primarily driven by 7mer-m8 seeds. We therefore plan to test whether the effect can be observed for miR-34a in a larger dataset. We have outlined our preliminary data and planned experiments in Section 2 - description of the planned revisions.

      I did not understand why the CIS system shown in 4A is a good test case for miR-34a-target binding. It appears very unnatural and artificial. This needs to be rationalized better. Otherwise it remains questionable, whether these data are meaningful at all.

      Thank you for pointing out the need for clearer rationalisation.

      The TRANS construct, where the scaffold carries the mRNA targeting sequence, provides reactivity information for the mRNA side only, while the microRNA is bound within RISC, with the backbone protected by AGO2. Therefore, to gain information on the miR-34a side of each complex we used the CIS construct, which provides reactivity information from both the miRNA and mRNA. We used the miRNA and mRNA reactivities to calculate all possible secondary structures for the binary complex, and then compared these structures to the mRNA reactivity in TRANS to find which structure fitted the reactivity patterns observed in the ternary complex.

      We have included an additional statement in the manuscript to clarify this point on pages 12-13:

      "Two RNA scaffolds were used for each mRNA target; i) a CIS-scaffold: RNA scaffold containing both mRNA target and miRNA sequence separated by a 10 nucleotide non-interacting closing loop, and ii) a TRANS-scaffold: RNA scaffold containing only the mRNA target sequence, to which free miR-34a or the miR-34a-AGO2 complex was bound (Figure 4A). The CIS constructs therefore provided reactivity information on the miRNA side, which is lacking in the TRANS construct, and was used to complement the TRANS data."

      It may be worthwhile noting that a non-interacting 10 nucleotide loop was inserted between then miRNA and mRNA of the CIS constructs, allowing the miRNA and mRNA strands to bind and release freely. The reactivity patterns of each mRNA:miRNA duplex were compared between CIS and TRANS, and showed similar base pairing (Figure 4D). Furthermore, we have previously compared the two scaffolds in our RABS methodology paper (Banijamali et al. 2022), where no differences were observed besides reduced end fraying in the CIS construct.

      For the TRANS experiments, only one specific scaffold structure is used. This structure might impact binding as well and thus at least one additional and independent scaffold should be selected for a generalized statement.

      For each construct, the potential of interaction with the scaffold was tested using the RNAstructure (Reuter & Mathews, 2010)package. Based on the results of this assessment, two different scaffolds were used for our TRANS experiments. The testing and use of scaffolds has now been clarified further on page 13:

      "The overall conformation of each scaffold with the inserted RNA was assessed using the RNAstructure (Reuter & Mathews, 2010) package to ensure that the sequence of interest did not interact with the scaffold. If any interaction was observed between the RNA of interest and the scaffold, then the scaffold was modified until no predicted interaction occurred. The different scaffolds and their sequence details are shown in supplementary information (Table S1)."

      We have previously examined the scaffold's effect on binding and structure during the development of the RABS method. We tested the same mRNA (SIRT1) in separate, independent scaffolds to verify the consistency of the results. An example of this can be found in the supplementary information (Figure S1a) of Banijamali et al. (2022).

      Generally, it would be nice to have some more information about the experiments also in the result section. Recombinant Ago2 is expressed in insect cells and re-loaded with miR-34a, luciferase reporters are transfected into tissue culture cells, I guess.

      We have now stated the cell types used for AGO2 expression and luciferase reporter assays in the results.

      On page 17 we have included:

      "Samples of each of the 12 mRNA targets, as well as miR-34a and AGO2, were synthesised in-house for biophysical and biological characterisation. Target mRNA constructs were produced via solid-phase synthesis while miR-34a was transcribed in vitro and cleaved from a tandem transcript (Feyrer et al., 2020), ensuring a 5' monophosphate group. AGO2 was produced in Sf9 insect cells."

      "To measure the affinity of each mRNA target binding to miR-34a, both within the binary complex (mRNA:miR-34a) and theternary complex (mRNA:miR-34a-AGO2), we optimised an RNA:RNA binding EMSA protocol to suit small RNA interactions. The protocol is loosely based on Bak et al. (2014)36, with major differences being use of a sodium phosphate buffering system so as not to disturb weaker interactions (James et al., 1996; Stellwagen et al., 2000), supplemented with Mg2+ as a counterion to reduce electrostatic repulsion between the two negatively charged RNAs (Misra & Draper, 1998), and fluorescently labelled probes."

      Page 19:

      " We successfully tested various RNA backgrounds, including polyuridine (pU) and total RNA extract (Figure S6B) to block any unspecific binding. Ultimately, we supplemented our binding buffer with pU at a fixed concentration of 20 µM for the ternary assays to achieve the greatest consistency."

      Page 20:

      "Repression efficacy for the 12 mRNA targets by miR-34a was assessed through a dual luciferase reporter assay6. Target mRNAs were cloned into reporter constructs and transfected into HEK293T cells."

      Page 22:

      "To infer base pairing patterns and secondary structure for each of the 12 mRNA:miR-34a pairs, we used the RABS technique (Banijamali et al., 2023) with 1M7 as a chemical probe. All individual reactivity traces are shown in Figure S9. Reactivity of each of the 22 miR-34a nucleotides was assessed upon binding to each of the 12 mRNA targets within a CIS construct, containing both miR-34a and the mRNA target site separated by a non-interacting 10-nucleotide loop. The two RNAs can therefore bind and release freely within the CIS construct and reactivity information is collected from both RNA strands."

      In the first sentence of the abstract, Argonaute 2 should be replaced by Argonaute only since other members bind to miRNAs as well.

      Thank you for recognising this. It has now been corrected.

      Significance

      This is an interesting manuscript that contributes to our mechanistic understanding of the miRNA-target pairing rules. The combination of affinity measurements, structural probing and luciferase reporters allow for a broad correlation of target binding and repression strength, which is a well-thought and highly conclusive approach. However, there are a number of shortcomings.

      We thank the reviewer for recognising the approach and impact of our work. In addition we thank the reviewer for identifying the need for further data to support our conclusions from the luciferase assays, which is something that we plan to address, as described in section 2.



      Reviewer #2

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity

      Summary: Sweetapple et al. took the approaches of EMSA, SHAPE, and MD simulations to investigate target recognition by miR-34a in the presence and absence of AGO2. Surprisingly, their EMSA showed that guide unloading occurred even with seed-unpaired targets. Although previous studies reported guide unloading, they used perfectly complementary guide and target sets. The authors of this study concluded that the base-pairing pattern of miR-34a with target RNAs, even without AGO2, can be applicable to understanding target recognition by miR-34a-bound AGO2.

      Major comments:

      (Page 11 and Figure S4) The authors pre-loaded miR-34a into AGO2 and subsequently equilibrated the RISC with a 5' modified Cy5 target mRNA. Since properly loaded miR-34a is never released from AGO2, it is impossible for the miR-34a loaded into AGO2 to form the binary complex (mRNA:miR-34a) in the EMSA (guide unloading has been a long-standing controversy). However, they observed bands of the binary complex in Figure S4. The authors did not use ion-exchange chromatography. AGOs are known to bind RNAs nonspecifically on their positively charged surface. Is it possible that most miR-34a was actually bound to the surface of AGO2 instead of being loaded into the central cleft? This could explain why they observed the bands of the binary complex in EMSA.

      Thank you for mentioning this crucial point which has been a focus of our controls. We have addressed this point in four ways:

      Salt wash during reverse IMAC purification. Separation of unbound RNA and proteins via SEC. Blocking non-specific interactions using polyuridine. Observing both the presence and absence of duplex release among different targets using the same AGO2 preparation and conditions.

      Firstly, although we did not use a specific ion exchange column for purification, we believe the ionic strength used in our IMAC wash step was sufficient to remove non-specific interactions. We used A linear gradient with using buffer A (50 mM Tris-HCl, 300 mM NaCl, 10 mM Imidazole, 1 mM TCEP, 5% glycerol v/v) and buffer B (50 mM Tris-HCl, 500 mM NaCl, 300 mM Imidazole, 1 mM TCEP, 5% glycerol) at pH 8. The protocol followed recommendation by BioRad for their Profinity IMAC resins where it is stated that 300 mM NaCl should be included in buffers to deter nonspecific protein binding due to ionic interactions. The protein itself has a higher affinity for the resin than nucleic acids.

      A commonly used protocol for RISC purification follows the method by Flores-Jasso et al. (RNA 2013). Here, the authors use ion exchange chromatography to remove competitor oligonucleotides. After loading, they washed the column with lysis buffer (30 mM HEPES-KOH at pH 7.4, 100 mM potassium acetate, 2 mM magnesium acetate and 2 mM DTT). AGO was eluted with lysis buffer containing 500 mM potassium acetate. Competing oligonucleotides were eluted in the wash.

      As ionic strength is independent of ion identity or chemical nature of the ion involved (Jerermy M. Berg, John L. Tymoczko, Gregory J. Garret Jr., Biochemistry 2015), we reasoned that our Tris-HCl/NaCl/ imidazole buffer wash should have at comparable ionic strength to the Flores-Jasso protocol.

      Our total ionic contributions were: 500 mM Na+, 550 mM Cl-, 50 mM Tris and 300 mM imidazole. We recognise that Tris and imidazole are both partially ionized according the pH of the buffer (pH 8) and their respective pKa values, but even if only considering the sodium and chloride it should be comparable to the Flores-Jasso protocol.

      We have restated the buffer compositions below written the methods section more explicitly to describe this:

      "Following dialysis, any precipitate was removed by centrifugation, and the resulting supernatant was loaded onto a IMAC buffer A-equilibrated HisTrap-Ni2+ column to remove TEV protease, other proteins, and non-specifically bound RNA. A linear gradient was employed using IMAC buffers A and B."

      Secondly, after reverse HisTrap purification, AGO2 was run through size exclusion chromatography to remove any remaining impurities (shown Figure S2B).

      Thirdly, knowing that AGO2 has many positively charged surface patches and can bind nucleic acid nonspecifically (Nakanishi, 2022; O'Geen et al., 2018), we tested various blocking backgrounds to eliminate nonspecific binding effects in our EMSA ternary binding assays. We were able to address this issue by adding either non-homogenous RNA extract or homogenous polyuridine (pU) in our EMSA buffer during equilibration background experiments. This allowed us to eliminate non-specific binding of our target mRNAs, as shown previously in Supplementary Figure S6. We appreciate that the reviewer finds this technical detail important and have moved the panel C of figure S6 into the main results in Figure 2C, to highlight the novel conditions used and important controls needed to be performed. If miR-34a were non-specifically bound to the surface of AGO2 after washing, this blocking step would render any impact of surface-bound miR-34a negligible due to the excess of competing polyuridine (pU).

      Our EMSA results show that, using polyU, we can reduce non-specific interaction between AGO2 and RNAs that are present. And still, duplex release occurs despite the blocking step. It is therefore less likely that duplex release is caused by surface-bound miR-34a.

      Finally, the observation of distinct duplex release for certain targets, but not for others (e.g. MTA2, which bound tightly to miR-34a-AGO2 but did not exhibit duplex release; see Figure 2), argues against the possibility that the phenomenon was solely due to non-specifically bound RNA releasing from AGO2.

      In response to the reviewers statement "Since properly loaded miR-34a is never released from AGO2, it is impossible for the miR-34a loaded into AGO2 to form the binary complex (mRNA:miR-34a)" we would like to refer to the three papers, De et al. (2013) Jo MH et al. (2015), and Park JH et al. (2017), which have previously reported duplex release and collectively provide considerable evidence that miRNA can be unloaded from AGO in order to promote turnover and recycling of AGO. It is known that AGO recycling must occur, therefore there must be some mechanisms to enable release of miRNA from AGO2 to enable this. It is possible that AGO recycling proceeds via miRNA degradation (TDMD) in the cell, but in the absence of enzymes responsible for oligouridylation and degradation, the miRNA duplex may be released. As TDMD-competent mRNA targets have been observed to release the miRNA 3' tail from AGO2 (Sheu-Gruttadauria et al., 2019; Willkomm et al., 2022), there is a possible mechanistic similarity between the two processes, however, we do not have sufficient data to make any statement on this.

      (Page 18 and Figure S5) Previous studies (De et al., Jo MH et al., Park JH et al.) reported guide unloading when they incubated a RISC with a fully complementary target. However, neither MTA2, CCND1, CD44, nor NOTCH2 can be perfectly paired with miR-34a (Figure 1A). Therefore, the unloading reported in this study is quite different from the previously reported works and thus cannot be explained by the previously reported logic. The authors need to explain the guide unloading mechanism that they observed. Otherwise, they might misinterpret the results of their EMSA and RABS of the ternary complex.

      The three aforementioned studies have reported unloading/duplex release. However, they did not only report fully complementary targets in this process.

      De et al. (2013) reported that "highly complementary target RNAs promote release of guide RNAs from human Argonaute2".

      Subsequently, Park et al. (2017) reported: "Strikingly, we showed that miRNA destabilization is dramatically enhanced by an interaction with seedless, non-canonical targets."

      A figure extracted from Figure 5 of Park et al. is shown below illustrating the occurrence of unloading in the presence of seed mismatches in positions 2 and 3 (mm 2-3). Jo et al. (2015) also reported that binding lifetime was not affected by the number of base pairs in the RNA duplex.

      In addition to these three reports, a methodology paper focusing on miRNA duplex release was published recently titled "Detection of MicroRNAs Released from Argonautes" (Min et al., 2020).

      Therefore, we do believe that the previously observed microRNA release is similar to our observation. Here we also correlate it to structure and stability of the complex.

      (Page 20) The authors reported, "it is notable that the seed region binding does not appear to be necessary for duplex release." The crystal structures of AGO2 visualize that the seed of the guide RNA is recognized, whereas the rest is not, except for the 3' end captured by the PAZ domain. How do the authors explain the discrepancy?

      In this manuscript, we intend to present our observations of duplex release. There are many potential relationships between duplex release and AGO2 activity, which we do not have data to speculate upon. Previous studies, such as Park et al. (2017) have also observed non-canonical and seedless targets leading to duplex release, supporting our findings. Additionally, other publications including McGearly et al. (2019) report 3'-only miRNA targets, Lal et al. (2009) have documented seedless binding by miRNA and their downstream biological effects, and Duan et al. (2022) show that a large number of let-7a targets are regulated through 3′ non-seed pairing.

      It is also possible that duplex release is not coupled to classical repression outcomes, and does not need to proceed by the seed, but instead regulates AGO2 recycling before AGO2 enters the quality control mode of recognising the formed seed.

      (Pages 22) The authors mentioned, "It follows that the structure imparted via direct RNA:RNA interaction remains intact within AGO2, highlighting the role of RNA as the structural determinant." A free guide and a target can start their annealing from any nucleotide position. In contrast, a guide loaded into AGO needs to start annealing with targets through the seed region. Additionally, the Zamore group reported that the loaded guide RNA behaves quite differently from its free state (Wee et al., Cell 2012). How do the authors explain the discrepancy?

      The key point we would like to emphasise is that AGO does not seem to alter the underlying RNA:RNA interactions. The bound state in the ternary complex reflects the structure established in the binary complex. We do not aim to claim a specific sequence of events, as this interpretation is not possible from our equilibrium data. Our data indicates that the protein is flexible enough to accommodate the RNA structure that is favoured in the binary complex. This hypothesis is further supported by our MD simulation, which demonstrates the accommodation of a miRNA-bulge structure within AGO2.

      Targets lacking seeds have been identified previously (McGeary et al. 2019, Park et al. 2017, Lal et al. 2009) and can bind to miRNA within AGO. Therefore, there must be a mechanism by which these targets can anneal within AGO, such as via sequence-independent interactions (as discussed in question 3).

      With respect to Wee et al., (2012), which studied fly and mouse AGO2 and found considerable differences between the thermodynamic and kinetic properties of the two AGO2 species. Furthermore, they found different average affinities between the two species, with the fly AGO binding tighter the mouse. Following this logic, it is not unexpected that human AGO2 would have unique properties compared to those of fly and mouse.

      Below is an extract from Wee et al., (2012):

      "Our KM data and published Argonaute structures (Wang et al., 2009) suggest that 16-17 base pairs form between the guide and the target RNAs, yet the binding affinity of fly Ago2-RISC (KD = 3.7 {plus minus} 0.9 pM, mean {plus minus} S.D.) and mouse AGO2-RISC (KD = 20 {plus minus} 10 pM, mean {plus minus} S.D.) for a fully complementary target was comparable to that of a 10 bp RNA:RNA helix. Thus, Argonaute functions to weaken the binding of the 21 nt siRNA to its fully complementary target: without the protein, the siRNA, base paired from positions g2 to g17, is predicted to have a KD ∼3.0 × 10−11 pM (ΔG25{degree sign}C = −30.7 kcal mol−1). Argonaute raises the KD of the 16 bp RNA:RNA hybrid by a factor of > 1011."

      In the Wee et al. (2012) paper, affinity data on mouse and fly AGO2 was collected via filter binding assays, using a phosphorothioate linkage flanked by 2′-O-methyl ribose at positions 10 and 11 of the target to prevent cleavage. They then compared the experimentally determined mean KD and ΔG values for each species to predicted values of an RNA:RNA helix of 16-17 base-pairs. No comparison was made between individual targets, and no experimental data was collected for the RNA:RNA binding. The calculated energy values were made based on a simple helix without taking into account any possible secondary structure features. Considering the different AGO species, alternative experimental setup, modified nucleotides in the tested RNA, and the computationally predicted RNA values compared to the averaged experimental values, we believe there is considerable reason to observe differences compared to our findings.

      We have expanded our discussion on page 27 to the following:

      "An earlier examination of mRNA:miRNA binding thermodynamics by Wee and colleagues (2012) found that mouse and fly AGO2 reduce the affinity of a guide RNA for its target61. Our data indicate that the range of miR-34a binary complex affinities is instead constricted by human AGO2 in the ternary complex - strengthening weak binders while weakening strong binders. The 2012 study reported different average affinities between the two AGO2 species, with the fly protein binding tighter the mouse. Following this logic, it is not unexpected that human AGO2 would have unique properties compared to those of fly and mouse."

      The authors concluded that the range of binary complex affinities is constricted by human AGO2 in the ternary complex - strengthening weak binders while weakening strong binders. This may hold true for miR-34a, but it cannot be generalized. Other miRNAs need to be tested.

      That is true, we have now adjusted the wording to encompass this more clearly, shown below. Testing of further miRNAs is the likely content of future work from us and others.

      "Our data indicate that the range of miR-34a binary complex affinities is instead constricted by human AGO2 in the ternary complex - strengthening weak binders while weakening strong binders."

      Minor comments:

      (Figure S2) Why was the 34-nt 3'Cy3-labeled miR34a complementary probe shifted up in the presence of AGO?

      We believe this observation is also indicative of duplex release. At the time that these activity assays were collected, we were not as aware of the presence of duplex release so did not test it further, assuming it may be due to transient interactions. We plan to investigate this via EMSA and have included this in the planned revisions (section 2).

      2.(Page 17) Does the Cy3 affect the interaction of the 3' end of miR-34 with AGO2?

      miR-34a-3'Cy5 was used for binary experiments only and the reverse experiment was conducted as a control (where Cy5 was located on the mRNA) (Figure S3b), showing no change in affinity/interaction when the probe was switched to the target. For ternary experiments the mRNA target was labelled on the 5' terminus, to make sure there was no interference with loading miR-34a into AGO2.

      A Cy3 labelled RNA probe (fully complementary to miR-34a) was used to detect miR-34a in northern blots, but AGO2 interaction is not relevant here under denaturing conditions.

      Otherwise, the 34-nt slicing probe had Cy3 on the 5 nt 3' overhang and should therefore not interact with AGO.

      1. Several groups reported that overproduced AGOs loaded endogenous small RNAs. The authors should mention that their purified AGO2 was not as pure as a RISC with miR-34a. Otherwise, readers might think that the authors used a specific RISC.

      We have now improved our explanation of the loading efficiency to make it more clear to the reader that our AGO2 sample was not fully bound by miR-34a, and that all concentrations refer to the miR-34a-loaded portion of AGO2. The following text can be found in the results on page 18:

      "The mRNA:miR-34a-AGO2 assay had a limited titration range, reaching a maximum miR-34a-AGO2 concentration of 268 nM due to a 5% loading efficiency (see Figure S2D for loading efficiency quantification). The total AGO2 concentration was thus 20-fold higher than the miR-34a-loaded portion. Further increase in protein concentration was prevented by precipitation. Weaker mRNA targets (CD44, CCND1, and NOTCH2) did not reach a saturated binding plateau within this range, leading to larger errors in their estimated KD,app values. However, reasonable estimation of the KD,app was possible by monitoring the disappearance of the free mRNA probe. Note that we refer to the miR-34a-loaded portion of AGO2 when discussing concentration values for all titration ranges. To ensure AGO2 binding specificity despite low loading efficiency, a scrambled control was used (SCRall; lacking stable base pairing with miR-34a or other human miRNAs according to the miRBase database57). SCRall showed no interaction with miR-34a-AGO2 (Figure 2B)."

      (Figure legend of Figure S5) Binding was assessed "by."

      Thank you for pointing this out, it is now fixed.

      (Page 17) It would be great if the authors could even briefly describe the mechanism by which the sodium phosphate buffer with magnesium does not disturb weaker interactions by citing reference papers.

      We have now added a supplementary methods section to our manuscript and included the description below on page 10:

      "We found that a more traditional Tris-borate-EDTA (TBE) buffer disrupted weaker RNA:RNA binding interactions (Supplementary Methods Figure M1). Borate anions form stable adducts with carbohydrate hydroxyl groups (James et al., 1996) and can form complexes with nucleic acids, likely through amino groups in nucleic bases or oxygen in phosphate groups (Stellwagen et al., 2000). This makes TBE unsuitable for assessment of RNA binding, particularly involving small RNA molecules, which typically have weaker affinities. We therefore adapted our buffer system to a sodium phosphate buffer supplemented with magnesium. Magnesium acts as a counterion to reduce electrostatic repulsion between the two negatively charged backbones by neutralisation (Misra et al., 1998)."

      We have also clarified the buffer adaptions in our results section on page 17:

      The protocol is loosely based on Bak et al. (2014)36, with major differences being use of a sodium phosphate buffering system so as not to disturb weaker interactions(James et al., 1996; Stellwagen et al., 2000), supplemented with Mg2+ as a counterion to reduce electrostatic repulsion between the two negatively charged RNAs(Misra & Draper, 1998), and fluorescently labelled probes. Original gel images and quantification are shown in supplementary Figures S3 and S4. All KD,app values are shown in Supplementary Table 1, and represent the mean of three independent replicates.

      Figure M1. Comparison of Tris-borate EDTA (TBE) and sodium phosphate with magnesium (NaP-Mg2+) buffer systems for EMSA. Cy5-labelled miR-34a and unlabelled CD44 were equilibrated in the two different buffer systems, using the same titration range. No mobility shifts were observed in the TBE system, while clear binding shifts were observed in the NaP-Mg2+ system.

      6.(Page 22) The authors cited Figure 4C in the sentence, "Comparison between CIS and TRANS ..." Is this supposed to be Figure 4D?

      The reviewer was correct in their assumption, and this has now been corrected.

      7.(Figure 6) Readers would appreciate it if the guide and target were colored in red and blue. The color codes have been used in most papers reporting AGO structures. The current color codes are opposite.

      We have now adjusted the colour schemes throughout the manuscript, and Figure 6 has been modified to the following:

      __"Figure 6. The miRNA-bulge structure is readily accommodated by AGO2 as shown by molecular dynamics simulation. __Panel (A) displays a snapshot of the all-atom MD simulation of miR-34a (red) and NOTCH1 (blue) in AGO2. The NOTCH1:miR-34a duplex is shown with AGO2 removed for clarity and is rotated 90{degree sign} to show the miRNA bulge and bend in the duplex. This NOTCH1:miR-34a-AGO2 structure is compared with (B), which shows the crystal structure of miR-122 (orange) paired with its target (purple) via the seed and four nucleotides in the supplementary region (PDB-ID 6N4O17), and (C), which shows the crystal structure of miR-122 (orange) and its target (green) with extended 3' pairing, necessary for the TDMD-competent state (PDB-ID 6NIT19). AGO2 is depicted in grey, with the PAZ domain in green, and the N-terminal domain marked with N. The miRNA duplexes in (B) and (C) feature symmetrical 4-nucleotide internal loops, whereas the NOTCH1 structure in (A) has an asymmetrical miRNA bulge with five unpaired nucleotides on the miRNA side and a 3-nucleotide asymmetry."

      Significance

      This paper will have a significant impact on the field if seed-unpaired targets can indeed unload guide RNAs. The authors may want to validate their results very carefully.

      We thank the reviewer for recognising the significance of duplex release (or guide unloading) from AGO2. We agree that the observations should be tested rigorously and have outlined the actions we took to ensure validity in our AGO2 preparation.

      __Reviewer #3 __

      Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required):

      In this manuscript, the authors use a combination of biochemical, biophysical, and computational approaches to investigate the structure-function relationship of miRNA binding sites. Interestingly, they find that AGO2 weakens tight RNA:RNA binding interactions, and strengthens weaker interactions.

      Given this antagonistic role, I wonder: shouldn't there be an 'average' final binding affinity? Furthermore, if I understand correctly, not many trends were observed to correlate binding affinity with repression, etc.

      Overall, there was no 'average' final binding affinity observed, as the binary assays had a much higher maximum (NOTCH2binary affinity was within the micromolar range) skewing the mean average of the binary affinities to 657 nM, versus 111 nM for the ternary affinities. We also compare the variances of the binary and ternary affinity datasets using the F-test and found that F > F(critical one tail) and thus the variation of the two populations is unequal (binary variation is significantly larger than ternary).

      F-Test Two-Sample for Variances

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      binary affinity

      ternary affinity

      Mean

      657.3

      110.971667

      Variance

      2971596.1

      24406.4012

      Observations

      12

      12

      df

      11

      11

      F

      121.754784

      P(F

      7.559E-10

      F(critical one-tail)

      2.81793047

      We agree that the overall correlation between affinity and repression was not strong, although we found a stronger correlation within the miRNA-bulge group (Figure 5C and S7C). A larger sample size of miRNA bulge-forming duplexes would be needed to test the generalizability of this observation.

      Given the context of the study - whereby structure is being investigated as a contributing factor to the interaction between the miRNA and mRNA, I find it interesting that the authors chose to use MC-fold to predict the structures of the mRNA, rather than using an experimental approach to assess / validate the structures. Thirty-seven RNAs were assessed; I think even for a subset (the 12 that were focused on in the study), the secondary structure should be validated experimentally (e.g., by chemical probing experiments, which the research group has demonstrated expertise in over the last several years). The validation should follow the in silico folding approach used to narrow down the region of interest. It is necessary to know whether an energy barrier (associated with the mRNA unfolding) has to occur prior to miRNA binding; this could help explain some of the unexplained results in the study. Indeed, the authors mention that there are many variables that influence miRNA regulation.

      Indeed, experimentally validated structures offer valuable insights that cannot be obtained solely through sequence-based predictions. This is why we opted to employ our RABS method to experimentally evaluate the binary and ternary complex binding of our 12 selected targets (as depicted in Figures 4 and S9 and discussed in the text on pages 23-24). While we (in silico) assessed all 37 RNA targets that were experimentally confirmed at the time, selecting 12 to represent both biological and predicted structural diversity, it would have been impractical to experimentally pre-assess all the targets not included in the final selection. Our in-silico assessment was designed to narrow down the regions of interest and evaluate predicted secondary structures present. The pipeline is shown in Figure 1. Details of the code used in the in-silico analysis are provided in Supplementary File 1.

      Regarding the energy of unfolding of mRNA, our constructs considered the isolated binding sites thus the effects of surrounding mRNA interactions were removed. We compared our affinities to dG as well as MFE and have now included this analysis in Figure S8A. Additionally, we have included the text on page 27-28 of the discussion:

      "Gibbs free energy (G), which is often included in targeting prediction models as a measure of stability of the miRNA:mRNA pair12,62, correlated with the log of our binary KD,app values, using ΔG values predicted by RNAcofold (R2 = 0.61). There was a weaker correlation with the free energy values derived from the minimum free energy (MFE) structures predicted by RNAcofold (R2 = 0.41) (Figure S8A). This result highlights the contribution of unfolding (in ΔG) as being an important in predicting KD. The differences between ΔG and KD,app are likely primarily due to inaccurately predicted structures used for energy calculations."

      Additionally, we assessed the free form of all mRNA targets via RABS (Figure S9) and observed that the seed of each free mRNA was available for miRNA binding (seeds of the free mRNA were not stably bound).

      Finally, when designing our luciferase plasmids we used RNAstructure (Reuter & Mathews, 2010) to check for self-folding effects which could interfere with target site binding and ensured that all plasmids were void of such effects.

      In the methods, T7 is italicized by accident in the T7 in vitro transcription section. Bacmid is sometimes written with a capital B and other times with a lower-cased b. The authors should be consistent. The concentration of TEV protease that was added (as opposed to the volume) should be described for reproducibility.

      Thank you for pointing out these overlooked points. They have now been corrected.

      In figure S2D, what is the second species in the gel on the right-hand side of the gel in the miR-34a:AGO lanes? The authors should mention this.

      We believe that the faint upper band corresponds to other longer RNA species loaded into AGO2. As AGO2 is loaded with a diversity of RNA species, it is likely that some of them may have a weak affinity for the miR-34a-complementary probe, and therefore show up on the northern blot.

      Figure S3B and S3A are referenced out of order in the text. In regard to S3A, what are the anticipated or hypothesized alternative conformations for NOTCH1, DLL1, and MTA2? There are really interesting things going on in the gels, also for HNF4a and NOTCH2. Can the authors offer some explanation for why the free RNA bands don't seem to disappear, but rather migrate slowly? Is this a new species?

      The order of the figure references have now been updated, thank you for alerting us to this.

      Figure S3A: For MTA2, the two alternative conformations are shown in Figure S9 and S10 (and shown below here, miR-34aseed marked in pink). It appears that a single conformation is favoured at high concentration (> 1 µM) while the two conformations are present at {less than or equal to} 1 µM. The RABS data for MTA2 also indicated multiple binding conformations, as the reactivity traces were inconsistent. We expect that the conformation shown on the left was most dominant within AGO2, based on the reactivity of the TRANS + AGO assays. However, we cannot exclude a possible G-quadruplex formation due to the high G content of MTA2 (shown below right).

      Regarding NOTCH1 and DLL1, a faint fluorescent shadow was observed beneath the miR-34a bound band. The RABS reactivity traces indicated a single dominant conformation for these targets, so it is possible that the lower shadow observed was due to more subtle differences in conformation, such as the opening/closing of one or a few base pairs at the terminus or bulge, (i.e. end fraying). HNF4α and NOTCH2 appear to never fully saturate the miR-34a, so a small un-bound population remains visible on the gel. For NOTCH2 this free miR-34a band appears to migrate upwards, possibly due to overloading the gel lane with excess NOTCH2 (which are not observed in the Cy5 fluorescence image).

      In the EMSA for Perfect, why does the band intensity for the bound complex increase then decrease? How many replicates were run for this? This needs to be reconciled.

      As for all EMSAs, three replicates were carried out for each mRNA target and all gels are shown in Supplementary Files 2 and 3, for the binary and ternary assays respectively.

      Uneven heat distribution across the gel can lead to bleaching of the Cy5 fluorophore. To address this, we we used a circulating cooler in our electrophoresis tank, as outlined in our methods (page 10). However, the aforementioned gel for one of thePERFECT sample replicates appears to have been evenly cooled. As the binding ratio (rather than total band volume) was used for quantification, the binding curve was unaffected, and this did not influence KD,app.

      We have now replaced the exemplary gel for PERFECT in Figure S3 with a more representative and evenly labelled gel from our replicates (Cy5 fluorescence image shown below). The binding curve for PERFECT is also shown here:

      The authors list that the RNA concentration was held constant at 10 nM; in EMSAs, the RNA concentration should be less than the binding affinity; what is the lowest concentration of protein used in the assays shown in S3A? Is this a serial dilution? It seems to me like the binding assays for MTA2, Perfect, and SRCseed might have too high of an RNA concentration. (Actually, now I see in the supplement the concentrations of proteins, and the RNA concentration is too high). Also, why is the intensity of bands for bound complex for SRCseed more intense than the free RNA?

      Why are the binding affinity error bars so large (e.g., for NOTCH2 with mir-34a) - 6 uM +/- 3 uM?

      No protein was used in the binary assays shown in Figure S3A. For the ternary assays in Figure S4, the maximum concentration of miR-34a-loaded AGO2 (miR-34a-AGO2) was 268 nM, with a serial dilution down to a minimum of 0.06 nM.

      Optimal EMSA conditions require a constant RNA concentration that is lower than the binding affinity to accurately estimate high-affinity interactions.

      For our tightest binders, such as SIRT1, we can confidently state that the KD,app is less than 10 nM, estimated at 0.4 {plus minus} 1.1 nM. Therefore, the accuracy of this estimation is reduced, and the standard deviation is larger than the estimated KD,app. As NOTCH2 bound miR-34a very weakly and did not reach a fully bound plateau, the resulting high error was expected. Consequently, we do not have the same level of certainty for extremely tight or weak binders. In this study, the relative affinities were of primary importance.

      We have included on page 18:

      As the Cy5-miR-34a concentration was fixed to 10 nM to give sufficient signal during detection, KD,app values below 10 nM have a lower confidence.

      Regarding the control samples PERFECT and SCRseed, our focus was not on determining the exact KD,app of these artificial constructs. Instead, we were primarily interested in whether they exhibited binding and under which conditions. For SCRseed, we neither adjusted the titration range nor calculated KD,app. For PERFECT, the concentration was adjusted to a lower range of 30 nM - 0.001 nM to give a relative comparison with the other tight binder SIRT1. However, further reduction in RNA concentration was not pursued, as it already fell well below the 10 nM sensitivity threshold.

      Regarding the intensity of the bound SCRseed band, we observed that the bound fluorophore often resulted in stronger intensity than for the free probe. This was observed for a number of the samples (PERFECT, BLC2, SCRseed). A previous publication reported that Cy5 is sequence dependent in DNA, that the effect is more sensitive to double-stranded DNA, and that the fluorophore is sensitive to the surrounding 5 base pairs (Kretschy, Sack and Somoza, 2016). It is likely that the same phenonenon exists in RNA.

      For MTA2, the two alternative conformations (shown in Figure S9 and S10) make assessment of KD,app more difficult. As the higher affinity conformation did not reach a fully-bound plateau before the weaker affinity conformation appeared, the binding curve plateau (where all miR-34a was bound) reflected the weaker conformation KD,app. We increased the range of titration tested by using a three-fold serial dilution, but further reduction in RNA concentration would not have been fruitful as it already dropped below well below the 10 nM sensitivity range. Therefore the MTA2 binary complex had a higher error at (944 {plus minus} 274 nM) and lower confidence.

      We then decided to run a competition assay to detect the weaker KD,app of MTA2. The assay was set up using the known binding affinity of CD44, which was labelled with Cy5 to track the reaction. MTA2 was titrated against a constant concentration of Cy5-CD44:miR-34a, and disruption of the CD44 and miR-34a binding was monitored. We fitted the data to a quadratic for competitive binding (Cheng and Prusoff., 1973) to calculate the KD,app for competitive binding, or KC,app.

      We validated our competition assay by comparing it with our direct binding assays, specifically assessing CD44 in a self-competition assay. The CD44 KC,app (168 {plus minus} 24 nM; mean and SD of three replicates) was found to be consistent with the KD,app obtained from the direct assay (165 {plus minus} 21 nM).

      As we wanted all affinity data to be directly comparable (using the same methodology), we compared the KD,app values obtained via direct assay in the manuscript. It appears that the competitive EMSA assay for MTA2 reflects the weaker affinity conformation observed in the direct assay.

      It would be very helpful if the authors wrote in the Kds in Figure 2A in green and blue (in the extra space in the plots). This would help the reader to better understand what's going on, and for me, as a reviewer, to better consider the analysis/conclusions presented by the authors.

      KD,app values are written in in green and blue in what is now Figure 2D (originally Figure 2A).

      The authors state on page 18 that 'Interestingly, however, we did not observe a correlation between binary or ternary complex affinity and seed type.' They should elaborate on why this is interesting.

      The prevailing view is that the miRNA seed type significantly influences affinity within AGO2. The largest biochemical studies of miRNA-target interactions to date, conducted by McGeary et al. (2019, 2022), used AGO-RBNS (RNA Bind-n-Seq) to reveal relative binding affinities. These studies demonstrated strong correlations between the canonical seed types and binding affinity. Therefore, we find it interesting that no such correlation was observed in our dataset (despite its small size).

      We have now added to the manuscript (page 20):

      "The largest biochemical studies of miRNA-target interactions to date (McGeary et al., 2019, 2022) used AGO-RBNS (RNA Bind-n-Seq) to extract relative binding affinities, demonstrating strong correlations between the canonical seed types and binding affinity. Therefore, it is intriguing that our dataset, despite its small size, showed no such correlation."

      Figure 2C is not referenced in the text (the authors should go back through the text to make sure everything is referenced and in order). The Kds should be listed alongside the gels in Figure 2C.

      Figure 2 has now been rearranged and updated, with KD,app values listed in what is now Figure 2D.

      Figure 3B is rather confusing to understand.

      We have now adapted Figure 3 to simplify readability. Panel B has now been moved to C, and we have introduced panel A (moved from Figure 2B). In Figure 3C (originally 3B) we have added arrows to indicate the direction of affinity change from binary to ternary complex, and moved the duplex release information to panel A. We thank the reviewer and think that the data is now much clearer.

      Figure 3. AGO2 moderates affinity by strengthening weak binders and weakening strong binders. (A) Correlation of relative mRNA:miR-34a with mRNA:miR-34aAGO2 binding affinities. No seed type correlation is observed, seeds coloured, where 8mer is pink, 7mer-m8 is turquoise, and 7-mer-A1 is mauve. The slope of the linear fit is 0.48, and intercept on the (log y)-axis is 7.11. The occurrence of miRNA duplex release from AGO2 is marked with diamonds. (B) miR-34a-mediated repression of dual luciferase reporters fused to the 12 mRNA targeting sites. Luciferase activity from HEK293T cells co-transfected with each reporter construct, miR-34a was measured 24 hours following transfection and normalised to the miR-34a-negative transfection control. Each datapoint represents the R/F ratio for an independent experiment (n=3) with standard deviations indicated. SCRseed is a scrambled seed control, SCRall is a fully scrambled control, and PERFECT is the perfect complement of miR-34a. Dotted horizontal lines represent the repression values for the 22-nucleotide seed-only controls6 for the respective seed types, in the absence of any other WC base pairing. (C) Comparison of relative target repression with relative affinity assessed by EMSA. Blue represents mRNA:miR-34a affinity (binary complex), while green represents mRNA:miR-34a-AGO2 affinity (ternary complex). Arrows indicate the direction of change in affinity upon binding within AGO2 compared to the binary complex. It is seen that AGO2 moderates affinity bi-directionally by strengthening weak binders and weakening strong binders.

      Page 20: Perfect should be italicized.

      Thank you for bringing this to our attention, this how now been adjusted.

      Have the authors considered using NMR to assess the base pair pattern formed between the miRNA:mRNA complexes (with / without AGO)? As a validation for results obtained by RABS? This could be helpful for the Asymmetric target binding section, the Ago increases flexibility section, and the three distinct structural groups section in the results. It is widely accepted that while chemical probing is insightful, results should be validated using alternative approaches. Distinguishing structural changes and protected reactivity in the presence of protein is challenging.

      NMR provides high-resolution information on RNA base-pairing patterns, allowing us to compare our RABS results for SIRT1with those obtained via NMR (Banijamali et al., 2022) for the binary complex. For SIRT1, the RNA:RNA structures identified were consistent between both methods. However, using NMR to measure RNA:RNA binding within AGO2 is challenging due to the protein's large size. Currently, there are no published complete NMR structures of RNA within AGO2. The largest solution-state NMR structures published that include AGO consist solely of the PAZ domain. Our group has been working on method development using DNP-enhanced solid-state NMR to obtain structural information within the complete AGO2 protein, but the current resolution does not allow us to fully reconstruct a complete NMR structure. We hope that in the coming years, this will be a method to evaluate RNA within AGO. This limitation highlights the advantage of RABS in providing RNA base-pairing information within the ternary complex in solution.

      Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)):

      The work is helpful for understanding how microRNAs recognize and bind their mRNA targets, and the impact Ago has on this interaction. I think for therapeutic studies, this will be helpful for structure-based design. Especially given the three types of structures identified to be a part of the interaction.

      We thank the reviewer for their detailed remarks, especially concerning the importance of technical details the binding assays. We further thank the reviewer for recognising the potential impact of our work for rational design.

      4. Description of analyses that authors prefer not to carry out

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      In response to Reviewer 2 - major comment 1, we prefer to not run an additional ion exchange purification on the AGO2 protein due to the reasoning discussed above, which is repeated here:

      We have addressed this point in three ways:

      Thank you for mentioning this crucial point which has been a focus of our controls. We have addressed this point in four ways:

      Salt wash during reverse IMAC purification. Separation of unbound RNA and proteins via SEC. Blocking non-specific interactions using polyuridine. Observing both the presence and absence of duplex release among different targets using the same AGO2 preparation and conditions.

      Firstly, although we did not use a specific ion exchange column for purification, we believe the ionic strength used in our IMAC wash step was sufficient to remove non-specific interactions. We used A linear gradient with using buffer A (50 mM Tris-HCl, 300 mM NaCl, 10 mM Imidazole, 1 mM TCEP, 5% glycerol v/v) and buffer B (50 mM Tris-HCl, 500 mM NaCl, 300 mM Imidazole, 1 mM TCEP, 5% glycerol) at pH 8. The protocol followed recommendation by BioRad for their Profinity IMAC resins where it is stated that 300 mM NaCl should be included in buffers to deter nonspecific protein binding due to ionic interactions. The protein itself has a higher affinity for the resin than nucleic acids.

      A commonly used protocol for RISC purification follows the method by Flores-Jasso et al. (RNA 2013). Here, the authors use ion exchange chromatography to remove competitor oligonucleotides. After loading, they washed the column with lysis buffer (30 mM HEPES-KOH at pH 7.4, 100 mM potassium acetate, 2 mM magnesium acetate and 2 mM DTT). AGO was eluted with lysis buffer containing 500 mM potassium acetate. Competing oligonucleotides were eluted in the wash.

      As ionic strength is independent of ion identity or chemical nature of the ion involved (Jerermy M. Berg, John L. Tymoczko, Gregory J. Garret Jr., Biochemistry 2015), we reasoned that our Tris-HCl/NaCl/ imidazole buffer wash should have at comparable ionic strength to the Flores-Jasso protocol.

      Our total ionic contributions were: 500 mM Na+, 550 mM Cl-, 50 mM Tris and 300 mM imidazole. We recognise that Tris and imidazole are both partially ionized according the pH of the buffer (pH 8) and their respective pKa values, but even if only considering the sodium and chloride it should be comparable to the Flores-Jasso protocol.

      Secondly, after reverse HisTrap purification, AGO2 was run through size exclusion chromatography to remove any remaining impurities (shown Figure S2B).

      Thirdly, knowing that AGO2 has many positively charged surface patches and can bind nucleic acid nonspecifically (Nakanishi, 2022; O'Geen et al., 2018), we tested various blocking backgrounds to eliminate nonspecific binding effects in our EMSA ternary binding assays. We were able to address this issue by adding either non-homogenous RNA extract or homogenous polyuridine (pU) in our EMSA buffer during equilibration background experiments. This allowed us to eliminate non-specific binding of our target mRNAs, as shown previously in Supplementary Figure S6. We appreciate that the reviewer finds this technical detail important and have moved the panel C of figure S6 into the main results in Figure 2C, to highlight the novel conditions used and important controls needed to be performed. If miR-34a were non-specifically bound to the surface of AGO2 after washing, this blocking step would render any impact of surface-bound miR-34a negligible due to the excess of competing polyuridine (pU).

      Our EMSA results show that, using polyU, we can reduce non-specific interaction between AGO2 and RNAs that are present. And still, duplex release occurs despite the blocking step. It is therefore less likely that duplex release is caused by surface-bound miR-34a.

      Finally, the observation of distinct duplex release for certain targets, but not for others (e.g. MTA2, which bound tightly to miR-34a-AGO2 but did not exhibit duplex release; see Figure 2), argues against the possibility that the phenomenon was solely due to non-specifically bound RNA releasing from AGO2.

      In response to the reviewers statement "Since properly loaded miR-34a is never released from AGO2, it is impossible for the miR-34a loaded into AGO2 to form the binary complex (mRNA:miR-34a)" we would like to refer to the three papers, De et al. (2013) Jo MH et al. (2015), and Park JH et al. (2017), which have previously reported duplex release and collectively provide considerable evidence that miRNA can be unloaded from AGO in order to promote turnover and recycling of AGO. It is known that AGO recycling must occur, therefore there must be some mechanisms to enable release of miRNA from AGO2 to enable this. It is possible that AGO recycling proceeds via miRNA degradation (TDMD) in the cell, but in the absence of enzymes responsible for oligouridylation and degradation, the miRNA duplex may be released. As TDMD-competent mRNA targets have been observed to release the miRNA 3' tail from AGO2 (Sheu-Gruttadauria et al., 2019; Willkomm et al., 2022), there is a possible mechanistic similarity between the two processes, however, we do not have sufficient data to make any statement on this.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      This manuscript by Geng et al. aims to demonstrate that MDA5 compensates for the loss of RIG-I in certain species, such as teleofish miiuy croacker. The authors use siniperca cheats rhabdovirus (SCRV) and poly(I:C) to demonstrate that these RNA ligands induce an IFN response in an MDA5-dependent manner in m.miiuy derived cells. Furthermore, they show that MDA5 requires its RD domain to directly bind to SCRV RNA and to induce an IFN response. They use in vitro synthesized RNA with a 5'triphosphate (or lacking a 5'triphosphate as a control) to demonstrate that MDA5 can directly bind to 5'-triphosphorylated RNA. The second part of the paper is devoted to m6A modification of MDA5 transcripts by SCRV as an immune evasion strategy. The authors demonstrate that the modification of MDA5 with m6A is increased upon infection and that this causes increased decay of MDA5 and consequently a decreased IFN response.

      - One critical caveat in this study is that it does not address whether ppp-SCRV RNA induces IRF3-dimerization and type I IFN induction in an MDA5 dependent manner. The data demonstrate that mmiMDA5 can bind to triphosphorylated RNA (Fig. 4D). In addition, triphosphorylated RNA can dimerize IRF3 (4C). However, a key experiment that ties these two observations together is missing.<br /> - Specifically, although Fig. 4C demonstrates that 5'ppp-SCRV RNA induces dimerization (unlike its dephosphorylated or capped derivatives), this does not proof that this happens in an MDA5-dependent manner. This experiment should have been done in WT and siMDA5 MKC cells side-by-side to demonstrate that the IRF3 dimerization that is observed here is mediated by MDA5 and not by another (unknown) protein. The same holds true for Fig. 4J.<br /> - Fig 1C-D: these experiments are not sufficiently convincing, i.e. the difference in IRF3 dimerization between VSV-RNA and VSV-RNA+CIAP transfection is minimal.<br /> - Fig. 2N and 2O: why did the authors decide to use overexpression of MDA5 to assess the impact of STING on MDA5-mediated IFN induction? This should have been done in cells transfected with SCRV or polyIC (as in 2D-G) or in infected cells (as in 2H-K). In addition, it is a pity that the authors did not include an siMAVS condition alongside siSTING, to investigate the relative contribution of MAVS versus STING to the MDA5-mediated IFN response. Panel O suggests that the IFN response is completely dependent on STING, which is hard to envision.<br /> - Fig. 3F and 3G: where are the mock-transfected/infected conditions? Given that ectopic expression of hMDA5 is known to cause autoactivation of the IFN pathway, the baseline ISG levels should be shown (ie. In absence of a stimulus or infection). Normalization of the data does not reveal whether this is the case and is therefore misleading.<br /> - Fig. 4F and 4G: can the authors please indicate in the figure which area of the gel is relevant here? The band that runs halfway the gel? If so, the effects described in the text are not supported by the data (i.e. the 5'OH-SCRV and 5'pppGG-SCRV appear to compete with Bio-5'ppp-SCRV as well as 5'ppp-SCRV).<br /> - My concerns about Fig. 5 remain unaltered. The fact that MDA5 is an ISG explains its increased expression and increased methylation pattern. The authors should at the very least mention in their text that MDA5 is an ISG and that their observations may be partially explained by this fact.

    2. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.

      eLife assessment

      The authors present evidence suggesting that MDA5 can substitute as a sensor for triphosphate RNA in a species that naturally lacks RIG-I. The key findings are potentially important for our understanding of the evolution of innate immune responses, but the evidence is incomplete, as additional biochemical and functional experiments are needed to unambiguously assign MDA5 as a bona fide sensor of triphosphate RNA in this model. This also leaves the title as overstating its case.

      We would like to thank the editorial team for these positive comments on our manuscript and the constructive suggestions to improve our manuscript. According to the suggestions and valuable comments of the referees, we have added substantial amounts of new data and analysis to substantiate our claims, and the manuscript, including the title, has been carefully revised to better reflect our conclusions. We are now happy to send you our revised manuscript, we hope the modified manuscript addresses your and the reviewers’ concerns satisfactorily and is suitable for publication in eLife now.

      Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      This study offers valuable insights into host-virus interactions, emphasizing the adaptability of the immune system. Readers should recognize the significance of MDA5 in potentially replacing RIG-I and the adversarial strategy employed by 5'ppp-RNA SCRV in degrading MDA5 mediated by m6A modification in different species, further indicating that m6A is a conservational process in the antiviral immune response.

      However, caution is warranted in extrapolating these findings universally, given the dynamic nature of host-virus dynamics. The study provides a snapshot into the complexity of these interactions, but further research is needed to validate and extend these insights, considering potential variations across viral species and environmental contexts.

      We concur with the viewpoint that virus-host coevolution complicates the derivation of universal conclusions. To address this challenge, incorporated additional experiments and data based on the suggestions of the reviewers. These experiments were carried out across diverse models, including two distinct vertebrate species (M. miiuy and G. gallus), two different viruses (SCRV and VSV), and the synthesis of corresponding 5’ppp-RNA probes. We believe that these supplementary data bolster the evidence supporting the immune replacement role of MDA5 in the recognition of 5'ppp-RNA in RIG-I deficient species (Figure 1C-1E, Figure 2O and 2P, Figure 4). Moreover, we have duly incorporated references in both the introduction and discussion sections to further support our conclusion that MDA5 in T. belangeri, a mammal lacking RIG-I, possesses the ability to detect RNA viruses posed as RIG-I agonists (doi: 10.1073/pnas.1604939113). Lastly, meticulous revisions have been undertaken in the manuscript, including adjustments to the title, to ensure harmonization with our research outcomes.

      Reviewer#2 (Public Review):

      This manuscript by Geng et al. aims to demonstrate that MDA5 compensates for the loss of RIG-I in certain species, such as teleost fish miiuy croaker. The authors use siniperca cheats rhabdovirus (SCRV) and poly(I:C) to demonstrate that these RNA ligands induce an IFN response in an MDA5-dependent manner in M. miiuy derived cells. Furthermore, they show that MDA5 requires its RD domain to directly bind to SCRV RNA and to induce an IFN response. They use in vitro synthesized RNA with a 5'triphosphate (or lacking a 5'triphosphate as a control) to demonstrate that MDA5 can directly bind to 5'-triphosphorylated RNA. The second part of the paper is devoted to m6A modification of MDA5 transcripts by SCRV as an immune evasion strategy. The authors demonstrate that the modification of MDA5 with m6A is increased upon infection and that this causes increased decay of MDA5 and consequently a decreased IFN response.

      The key message of this paper, i.e. MDA5 can sense 5'-triphosphorylated RNA and thereby compensate for the loss of RIG-I, is novel and interesting, yet there is insufficient evidence provided to prove this hypothesis. Most importantly, it is crucial to test the capacity of in vitro synthesized 5'-triphosphorylated RNA to induce an IFN response in MDA5-sufficient and -deficient cells. In addition, a number of important controls are missing, as detailed below.

      To further support the notion that MDA5 is capable of detecting 5'ppp-RNA in species lacking RIG-I, we conducted additional experiments. Initially, we isolated the RNA from SCRV and VSV viruses. Subsequently, we synthesized 5'ppp-RNA probes that corresponded to the genome termini of SCRV and VSV in vitro. Then, these RNAs were treated with Calf intestinal phosphatase (CIAP) to generate dephosphorylated derivatives. Next, we separately tested the activation ability of various RNAs on IRF3 dimer and IFN response in MKC (M. miiuy kidney cell line) and DF-1 (G. gallus fibroblast cell line) cells, and determined that the immune activation ability of SCRV/VSV viruses depends on their triphosphate structure (Figure 1C-1E, Figure 4C and 4J). In addition, the knockdown of MDA5 inhibited the immune response mediated by SCRV RNA (Figure 2P and 2Q). Finally, we incorporated essential experimental controls (Figure 4B and 4I). We think that the inclusion of these supplementary experimental data significantly enhances the credibility and further substantiates our hypothesis.

      The authors describe an interaction between MDA5 and STING which, if true, is very interesting. However, the functional implications of this interaction are not further investigated in the manuscript. Is STING required to relay signaling downstream of MDA5?

      To better explore the role of STING in MDA5 signal transduction, we constructed a STING expression plasmid and synthesized specific siRNA targeting STING. Next, we found that co-expression of STING and MDA5 significantly enhance MDA5-mediated IFN-1 response during SCRV virus infection (Figure 2N). Conversely, silencing of STING expression restored the MDA5-mediated IFN-1 response (Figure 2O). These findings provide important evidence for the critical involvement of STING in the immune signaling cascade mediated by MDA5 in response to 5'ppp-RNA viruses.

      The second part of the paper is quite distinct from the first part. The fact that MDA5 is an interferon-stimulated gene is not mentioned and complicates the analyses (i.e. is there truly more m6A modification of MDA5 on a per molecule basis, or is there simply more total MDA5 and therefore more total m6A modification of MDA5).

      For the experimental data analysis in Figure 5E and 5F, we first compared the m6A-IP group to the input group, and then normalized the control group (IgG group of 5E and Mock group of 5F) to a value of “1”. Given the observed variability in MDA5 expression levels within the input group of Mock and SCRV virus-infected cells, our analysis represents the actual m6A content of each MDA5 molecule. To enhance clarity, we have updated the label on the Y-axis in Figure 5E and 5F.

      Finally, it should be pointed out that several figures require additional labels, markings, or information in the figure itself or in the accompanying legend to increase the overall clarity of the manuscript. There are frequently details missing from figures that make them difficult to interpret and not self-explanatory. These details are sometimes not even found in the legend, only in the materials and methods section. The manuscript also requires extensive language editing by the editorial team or the authors.

      We acknowledge the valuable feedback from the reviewer and have made significant improvements to our manuscript based on the recommendations provided in the "Recommendation for the authors" section. Furthermore, we have conducted a thorough review of the entire article, resulting in substantial enhancements to the format, clarity, and overall readability of our manuscript.

      Reviewer#3 (Public Review):

      Summary: In this manuscript, the authors investigated the interaction between the pattern recognition receptor MDA5 and 5'ppp-RNA in a teleost fish called Miiuy croaker. They claimed that MDA5 can replace RIG-I in sensing 5'ppp-RNA of Siniperca cheats rhabdovirus (SCRV) in the absence of RIG-I in Miiuy croaker. The recognition of MDA5 to 5'ppp-RNA was also observed in the chicken (Gallus gallus), a bird species that lacks RIG-I. Additionally, they reported that the function of MDA5 can be impaired through m6A-mediated methylation and degradation of MDA5 mRNA by the METTL3/14-YTHDF2/3 regulatory network in Miiuy croaker under SCRV infection. This impairment weakens the innate antiviral immunity of fish and promotes the immune evasion of SCRV.

      Strengths:<br /> These findings provide insights into the adaptation and functional diversity of innate antiviral activity in vertebrates.

      Weaknesses:<br /> However, there are some major and minor concerns that need to be further addressed. Addressing these concerns will help the authors improve the quality of their manuscript.One significant issue with the manuscript is that the authors claim to be investigating the role of MDA5 as a substitute for RIG-I in recognizing 5'ppp-RNA, but their study extends beyond this specific scenario. Based on my understanding, it appears that sections 2.2, 2.3, 2.5, 2.6, and 2.7 do not strictly adhere to this particular scenario. Instead, these sections tend to investigate the functional involvement of Miiuy croaker MDA5 in the innate immune response to viral infection. Furthermore, the majority of the data is focused on Miiuy croaker MDA5, with only a limited and insufficient study on chicken MDA5. Consequently, the authors cannot make broad claims that their research represents events in all RIG-I deficient species, considering the limited scope of the species studied.

      We agree with the reviewer's perspective that functional analysis of MDA5 in M. miiuy may not adequately represent all species lacking RIG-I. To address this concern, we have incorporated additional experimental data utilizing different model systems, including two different vertebrate species (M. miiuy and G. gallus), two distinct viruses (SCRV and VSV), and the synthesis of two corresponding 5’ppp-RNA probes. While the functional characterization of G. gallus MDA5 remains relatively limited compared to M. miiuy, our current experimental findings provide support for two key observations. Firstly, the triphosphate structure of the VSV virus is pivotal in activating the innate immune response in G. gallus against the virus (Figure 1D and 4J). Secondly, G. gallus MDA5 can recognize 5’ppp-RNA (Figure 4I, 4K and 4L). Consequently, although we cannot definitively establish the immune surrogate function of MDA5 in all RIG-I-deficient species, our research data further substantiates this hypothesis. Moreover, we have adopted a more cautious attitude in summarizing our experimental conclusions, thereby enhancing the rigor of our manuscript language.

      The current title of the article does not align well with its actual content. It is recommended that the focus of the research be redirected to the recognition function and molecular mechanism of MDA5 in the absence of RIG-I concerning 5'ppp-RNA. This can be achieved through bolstering experimental analysis in the fields of biochemistry and molecular biology, as well as enhancing theoretical research on the molecular evolution of MDA5. It is advisable to decrease or eliminate content related to m6A modification.

      Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have revised the title to emphasize that our main research focus is a teleost fish devoid of RIG-I. Furthermore, we have conducted additional molecular experiments to further elucidate the 5'ppp-RNA recognition function of MDA5 in RIG-I-deficient species. In an attempt to analyze the potential molecular evolution of MDA5 resulting from RIG-I deficiency, we collected MDA5 coding sequences from diverse vertebrates. However, due to multiple independent loss events of RIG-I in fish, fish with or without RIG-I genes in the phylogenetic tree cannot be effectively clustered separately, making it extremely difficult to perform this aspect of analysis. Consequently, we have regrettably opted to forgo the molecular evolution analysis of MDA5.

      Our article topic is to reveal an antagonistic phenomenon between fish receptor and RNA viruses. The MDA5 of RIG-I-lost fish has evolved the ability to recognize 5’ppp-RNA virus and mediate IFN response to resist SCRV infection. Conversely, the m6A methylation mechanism endows the SCRV virus with a means to weaken the immune capacity of MDA5. Therefore, we believe that the latter part is an important part of the arms race between the virus and its host, and should be retained.

      Additionally, the main body of the writing contains several aspects that lack rigor and tend to exaggerate, necessitating significant improvement.

      We appreciate the reviewer’s comment and have improved the manuscript addressing the points raised in the “Recommendation for the authors”. We have added corresponding experiments to strengthen the verification of the conclusions, and in addition, we are more cautious in summarizing the language of the conclusions.

      Recommendations for the authors:

      Reviewer #1 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      (1) The evidential foundation within the Result 1 section appears somewhat tenuous.

      Firstly, the author derives conclusions regarding the phenomenon of RIG-I loss in lower vertebrates by referencing external literature and conducting bioinformatics analyses. It is pertinent to inquire whether the author considered fortifying these findings through additional WB/PCR experiments, particularly for evaluating RIG-I expression levels across diverse vertebrates, encompassing both lower and higher orders.

      Firstly, the species we analyzed are mostly model species with excellent genomic sequence information in the database. Secondly, the RIG-I protein sequences (at least some domain sequences) are relatively conserved in vertebrates. Therefore, the credibility of evaluating the existence of RIG-I in these species through homology comparison is high. Therefore, we do not intend to conduct additional PCR/WB experiments to confirm this.

      Additionally, following the identification of RIG-I loss, the author postulates MDA5 as a substitute of RIG-I, grounding this speculation in the analysis of MDA5 and LGP2 protein structures. It is imperative to address whether the author could enhance the manuscript by supplying expression data for MDA5 and LGP2 across different vertebrates and elucidating further why MDA5 is posited as the compensatory mechanism for RIGI loss.

      Like MDA5, LGP2 is also an interferon-stimulating gene, so they both likely exhibit high sensitivity to viral infections. Therefore, we think that comparing the expression data of these two genes is difficult to evaluate their function. In mammals, the regulatory mechanisms of LGP2 to RIG-I and MDA5 were complicated and ambiguous. To evaluate the potential function of LGP2 in M. miiuy, we further constructed LGP2 plasmid and synthesized siRNA targeting LGP2. Then, our results indicate that mmiLGP2 can enhance the antiviral immune response mediated by mmiMDA5 (Figure 1H and 1I), further indicating the regulatory role of mmiLGP2 in RLR signaling, rather than acting as a compensatory receptor for RIG-I.

      Also, is it conceivable that other receptors contribute to this compensatory effect in lower vertebrates?

      5’ triphosphate short blunt-end double-strand RNA is the ligand of RIG-I as contained in the panhandle of negative-strand viral genomes. We mainly focus on the immune recognition and compensatory effects of other receptors on RIG-I loss, and MDA5, as the protein with the most similar structure, first attracted our attention. In addition, IFIT proteins have been reported to recognize triphosphate single-stranded RNA (doi: 10.1038/nature11783). However, we used SCRV and VSV RNA as viral models, both of which have negative stranded genomes and meet the ligand standards of RIG-I, rather than IFIT. Therefore, we excluded the IFIT protein from our research scope.

      (2) The article exclusively employs a singular type of 5'PPP-RNA virus and one specific lower vertebrate species, thereby potentially compromising the robustness of the assertion that this phenomenon is prevalent in lower vertebrates. To bolster this claim, could the author consider incorporating data from an alternative 5'PPP-RNA virus and a different lower vertebrate species?

      To address this concern, we have incorporated additional experimental data utilizing different model systems, including two different vertebrate species (M. miiuy and G. gallus) and two distinct viruses (SCRV and VSV). While the functional characterization of G. gallus MDA5 remains relatively limited compared to M. miiuy, our current experimental findings provide support for two key observations. Firstly, the triphosphate structure of the VSV virus is pivotal in activating the innate immune response in G. gallus against the virus (Figure 1D and 4J). Secondly, G. gallus MDA5 can recognize 5’ppp-RNA (Figure 4I, 4K and 4L). Consequently, these experimental results further confirmed the conservatism of this immune compensation mechanism.

      (3) A nuanced consideration of the statement in Result 5 is warranted. Examination of the results under SCRV infection conditions suggests dynamic fluctuations in MDA5 expression levels, challenging the veracity of the statement implying "increased expression", which contradicts the proposed working model of this article.

      Because MDA5 acts as a receptor and plays a recognition immune role in the early stages of virus infection, the expression of MDA5 in the early stage of SCRV infection rapidly increases. In the later stage of infection, the expression of MDA5 may gradually decrease again due to the negative feedback mechanism in the host body to prevent excessive inflammation. However, compared to the uninfected group, the expression of MDA5 was significantly increased in the SCRV-infected group, so we believe that the term "increased expression" is not a problem. In addition, the m6A mechanism can weaken the function of MDA5, but it still cannot prevent the overall increase of MDA5 expression, which is not contradictory to the working model in this article.

      Additionally, the alterations in m6A levels in miiuy croaker under SCRV infection conditions warrant clarification. Could the author employ m6A dot blotting to supplement the findings related to total m6A levels?

      Our previous studies (doi: 10.4049/jimmunol.2200618) have suggested that the total m6A level is increased after SCRV infection in miiuy croaker. We cited this conclusion in the discussion of our manuscript.

      (4) It would be beneficial if the editors could assist the author in enhancing the language of the manuscript.

      We have carefully checked the full article and modified it with Grammarly tools, and we believe that the grammar, format, and readability of our articles have been greatly improved.

      Reviewer #2 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Figure 1

      (1) Figure 1B - some clarification needs to be added about this figure in the text. It is unclear what the main point is that the authors would like to convey.

      What we want to emphasize is that some species with RIG-I, such as zebrafish, have also experienced RIG-I loss events, but have undergone whole genome replication events before the loss, thus preserving a copy of RIG-I. This indicates that loss events of RIG-I are very common in vertebrates and do not occur randomly. We have elaborated on this point in the results and discussion.

      (2) Figure 1C - is not very informative other than showing Mm MDA5 and LGP2 side-by-side. It would be more useful to show a comparison of human RIG-I/MDA5 alongside Mm and Gg MDA5. Are there any conserved/shared key residues between hRIG-I/hMDA5 versus mmMDA5?

      Homologous proteins are often known to adopt the same or similar structure and function. We have added human RIG-I domain information to this figure (Figure 1F). By comparing the domain information of human RIG-I with M. miiuy MDA5 and LGP2, M. miiuy MDA5 has a similar structure to human RIG-I, making it most likely to compensate for the missing RIG-I. While M. miiuy LGP2 lacks the CARD domain, which is crucial for signal transduction, so we will shift our focus to M. miiuy MDA5. In addition, we collected protein sequences of MDA5 and RIG-I from various vertebrates to identify key residues evolved in recognizing 5'ppp-RNA by M. miiuy MDA5. However, unfortunately, no potential residues were found during the comparison process.

      Figure 2

      (1) Figure 2B - It would be important to demonstrate MDA5-Flag expression by immunoblot and compare MDA5-Flag overexpression to endogenous MDA5 expression using the anti-MDA5 antibody from panel 2A. If IF is used, more cells need to be visible in the field.

      After transfecting the MDA5 plasmid into MKC, endogenous MDA5 expression was detected using MDA5 antibodies. The results showed a significant increase in MDA5 protein levels, indicating that MDA5 antibodies can specifically recognize MDA5 protein. In addition, we retained the original immunofluorescence images to better demonstrate the subcellular localization of MDA5.

      (2) Figure 2C - The 1:1 stoichiometry of MDA5:MAVS (in the absence of any stimulus) is quite surprising. How does the interaction between MDA5 and MAVS change upon stimulation with an RNA ligand (SCRV, poly(I:C))?

      We do not believe that the actual stoichiometry between MDA5 and MAVS is what you described as 1:1. In fact, the proportion of proteins in the complex depends on many factors in the experimental results with Co-IP. Firstly, the MDA5 plasmid in this study has a 3 × Flag tag, while the MAVS only has a 1x Myc tag, which makes the antibody more sensitive for detecting MDA5-Flag. In addition, the Co-IP results are also affected by multiple factors such as the type of antibody and the number of recoveries, making it difficult to estimate the actual ratio of MDA5 to MAVS. Based on the above reasons and the fact that the detection of the interaction strength between MDA5 and MAVS after infection seems to be off-topic, we did not continue to explore this point.

      (3) Figure 2D - The interaction between MDA5 and STING is a very interesting finding but is not elaborated on in the paper (even though the interaction between MDA5 and STING is mentioned in the abstract). The manuscript would be strengthened if the interaction between MDA5 and STING is further investigated. For example, does the IFN response that is reported in panels 2E to 2H require the presence of STING? Does mmMDA5 signal via STING in response to a DNA ligand?

      We appreciate the referee's suggestion to study the mutual influence between MDA5 and STING. We found that co-expression of STING and MDA5 can enhance MDA5-mediated IFN-1 response during SCRV virus infection, while knocking down STING can restore MDA5-mediated IFN-1 (Figure 2N and 2O). This indicates that STING plays an important signaling role in the immune response of MDA5 to RNA viruses. We understand the importance of cGAS/STING pathways in identifying exogenous DNA, so exploring the MDA5 pathway for DNA ligand recognition is an interesting and meaningful perspective. But this seems to be detached from the theme of our article, so we didn't continue to explore this point.

      (4) Figures 2F and 2H - the authors demonstrate that SCRV induces a type I IFN response in an MDA5-dependent manner. While SCRV is a single-stranded negative-sense RNA virus that contains 5'ppp-RNA, it cannot be excluded that MDA5 is activated here in response to a double-stranded RNA intermediate of viral origin or even a host-derived RNA whose expression or modification is altered during infection. To demonstrate in an unambiguous manner that MDA5 senses 5'ppp-RNA, it is crucial to use the in vitro synthesized 5'ppp-RNA (and its dephosphorylated derivative as a control) from Fig. 4 in these experiments.

      We transfected 5 'ppp SCRV and 5' ppp VSV (and their dephosphorylated derivatives) synthesized in vitro into MKC cells and DF-1 cells, respectively. The results showed that 5’ppp-RNAs significantly promoted the formation of IRF3 dimers, while their dephosphorylated derivatives did not (Figure 4C and 4J). In addition, we extracted virus RNA from the SCRV and VSV viruses and dephosphorylated them with Calf intestinal phosphatase (CIAP). These RNAs were transfected into MKC and DF-1 cells and found that the immune response mediated by virus RNAs was much higher than the dephosphorylated form (Figure 1C-1E). The above results indicate that the immune response activated by SCRV and VSV is indeed dependent on their triphosphate structure. Finally, the IRF3 dimer and IFN induction activated by SCRV RNA can be inhibited by si-MDA5 (Figure 2P and 2Q), further demonstrating the involvement of MDA5 in the immune response mediated by 5’ppp-RNA ligands.

      (5) In mice and humans, MDA5 is known to collaborate with LGP2 to jointly induce an IFN response. Does M.miiuy express LGP2? If so, it would be informative to include a siRNA targeting LGP2 in the experiments in panel F. In mammals, LGP2 potentiates the response via MDA5 while it may inhibit RIG-I activation.

      M.miiuy express LGP2. We constructed an LGP2 plasmid and synthesized si-LGP2 to investigate the impact of LGP2 on MDA5-mediated immune processes (Figure 1G-1I). The results showed that LGP2 can enhance the IFN response mediated by MDA5 during SCRV virus infection, similar to that in mammals.

      (6) Minor comment - Is the poly(I:C) used in this figure high or low molecular weight poly(I:C)? HMW poly(I:C) preferentially stimulates MDA5, while LMW poly(I:C) preferentially stimulates RIG-I.

      We used poly(I:C)-HMW as a positive control for activating MDA5. We have modified the relevant information in Figure 2 and its legend.

      Figure 3

      (1) Figure 3F/G - The normalization in this Figure is difficult to interpret. It would be better to split Figure 3G into 4 separate graphs and include the mock-infected cells alongside the infected samples (as done in Figure 2).

      To better demonstrate the function of the RD domain of MDA5 in M. miiuy, we have changed the experimental plan, as shown in figure 3F. We detected the induction of antiviral factors by overexpression of MDA5 and MDA5-△RD under poly (I:C)-HMW stimulation. This can indicate that the RD domain of MDA5 has a conserved function in the recognition of poly(I:C)-HMW in M. miiuy, and can serve as a positive control for the recognition of SCRV virus by the RD domain.

      Figure 4

      (1) Figure 4B - A number of important controls are missing. Was the immunoprecipitation of RNA successful? This could be shown by running a fraction of the immunoprecipitated material on an RNA gel and/or by showing that the input RNA was depleted after IP. In addition, a control IP (Streptavidin beads without biotinylated RNA) is missing to ensure that MDA5 does not stick non-specifically to the Streptavidin resin.

      We appreciate the referee's suggestions. We rerun this experiment and added a non-biomarker RNA IP control group, and the results showed that MDA5 did not adsorb non-specific onto the beads (Figure 4B). In addition, based on the referee's suggestion, we tested the consumption of RNA before and after immunoprecipitation, and the results showed that biotin-labeled RNA, rather than non-biotin-labeled RNA, could be adsorbed by beads, indicating the success of RNA precipitation. However, we think that this is not necessary for the final presentation of the experimental results, so we did not show this in the figure.

      (2) Figure 4B - It is unclear why there is such a large molecular weight difference between endogenous MDA5 and MDA5-Flag (110 kDa versus 130/140 kDa). Why is there less MDA5-Flag retrieved than endogenous MDA5?

      After careful analysis, we believe that the significant difference in molecular weight between endogenous MDA5 and MDA5 Flag may be due to three reasons. Firstly, MDA5 flag has a 3× Flag tag. Secondly, as shown in the primer table, we constructed MDA5 between the NotI and XbaI cleavage sites in the pcDNA3.1 vector, which are located at the posterior position in the vector. This means that the Flag tag has a certain distance from the starting codon of MDA5, and these sequences on the vector can also be translated and increase the molecular weight of the exogenous MDA5 protein. Finally, in order to facilitate the amplification of the primers, the F-terminal primers of MDA5 contain a small portion of the 3'UTR sequence (excluding the stop codon). These above reasons may have led to significant differences in molecular weight. In addition, in order to supplement important experimental controls, we have conducted a new RNA pull-down experiment as shown in Figure 4B.

      (3) Minor point: Figure 4B - please clarify in the figure whether RNA or protein is immunoprecipitated and via which tags.

      We have conducted a new RNA pull-down experiment as shown in Fig 4B, and we have clearly labeled the relevant information in the figure.

      (4) Figure 4E - the fraction of MDA5 that binds 5'ppp-RNA seems incredibly minor. And why is this experiment done using 5'OH-RNA as a competitor, rather than simply incubating MDA5 and 5'OH-RNA together and demonstrating that these do not form a complex?

      The proportion of MDA5 combined with 5’ppp-RNA is influenced by many conditions, including the concentration and purity of the probe and purified protein. In addition, the dosage ratio between the RNA probe and MDA5 protein in the EMSA experiment can also have a significant impact on the results. Therefore, it is not possible to accurately determine the actual binding force between MDA5 and RNA. In the EMSA experimental program, both cold probes (5’ppp-RNA) and mutated cold probes (5’OH-RNA and 5’pppGG-RNA) are crucial for demonstrating the specific binding between MDA5 and 5’ppp-RNA, as they can exclude false positive errors caused by factors such as the presence of biotin in the purified MDA5 protein itself.

      (5) Figure 4B/4C/4F - These experiments would be strengthened by including an MDA5 mutant that cannot bind to RNA. These mutants are well-described in mammals. If these residues are conserved, it is straightforward to generate this mutant.

      As shown in Figure 3, the MDA5 of M. miiuy has an RD domain that can recognize the SCRV virus. We constructed MDA5-△RD mutant plasmids with 6x His-tags and purified them for EMSA experiments (Figure 4E). The experimental results further indicate that MDA5, rather than MDA5-△RD, can bind to 5’ppp-SCRV (Figure 4G). This further confirms the crucial role of the RD domain in recognizing the 5'ppp-RNA virus.

      (6) Minor point: Figure 4E: please clarify in which lanes MDA5 has been added.

      Thank you for the referee's suggestion. We have synthesized new 5'ppp-RNA probes (5’ppp-SCRV and their dephosphate derivatives) and rerun this experiment, and relevant information has been added in the Figure (Figure 4F).

      Figure 5

      (1) Figure 5C - As MDA5 is an interferon-stimulated gene (as shown in panel G/H/I)) the increased MDA5 expression could simply explain the increase in the amount of m6A-MDA5 that is immunoprecipitated after infection. Could this figure be improved by doing a fold change between input vs m6A-IP OR uninfected vs SCRV-infected conditions? This would reveal whether the modification of MDA5 with m6A is really increased after infection.

      As shown in Figure 5F below, our data indicates that the proportion of m6A-modified MDA5 does indeed increase after SCRV infection, rather than solely due to the increased expression of MDA5 itself.

      (2) Figure. 5E/F - The y-axis is unclear: relative MDA5 m6A levels. Relative to what? Input? Mock infected?

      For experiments in Figure 5E/F, we first compared the m6A-IP group with the input group, and then normalized the control group (IgG group of 5E and Mock group of 5F) to “1”. We have replaced the Y-axis name with a clearer one (Figure 5E and 5F).

      (3) General comment - It is not mentioned in the text that MDA5 is an interferon-stimulated gene. This would account for the increase in expression (qPCR) after viral infection or poly(I:C) transfection, hence there is no novelty in this finding. In addition, the authors suggest that MDA5 increases at the protein level (by immunoblot) but the increase on these blots is not convincing (figure 5H/5I).

      We understand that the increase in expression of MDA5 as an interferon-stimulated gene after viral infection is a common phenomenon. We present this to further validate the m6A sequencing transcriptome data, and to demonstrate that although m6A modification interferes with MDA5 expression during viral infection, it cannot prevent the increase of mRNA level of MDA5. In addition, we rerun the experiment and the results showed that the expression of MDA5 protein can indeed be specifically activated by the SCRV virus and poly(I:C)-HMW.

      Figure 6

      (1) Figure 6E - What was the MOI of the virus used in this experiment? It is not mentioned in the figure legend.

      MOI=5, we have added this point in the figure legend.

      Figure 7

      (1) Figure 7J - This graphic is somewhat misleading and should be altered to better reflect the conclusions that are drawn in the manuscript. The graphic suggests that MAVS and STING interact, but this is not demonstrated in the paper. In addition, the paper does not demonstrate whether MAVS or STING (or both) are needed downstream of MDA5 to relay signalling. Finally, please draw an arrow from type I IFNs to increased expression of MDA5 to illustrate that MDA5 is an ISG.

      Thank you for the referee's suggestion. We have revised the images to more accurately match the conclusions of the manuscript (Figure 7J). Firstly, we have separated the STING protein from the MAVS protein. Secondly, arrows have been used to indicate that MDA5 is an IFN-stimulated gene. Finally, as we have added relevant experiments to demonstrate the importance of MITA protein in the signaling process of MDA5-activated IFN response. In addition, the function of MAVS binding to MDA5 protein and promoting its signal transduction is very conserved, and there is a good research background even in fish with RIG-I deficiency (10.1016/j.dci.2021.104235). Therefore, in Figure 7J, we still chose to bind MAVS to MDA5 protein and use it as a downstream signal transducer of MDA5.

      Discussion<br /> (1) There is very little discussion about METTL and YTHDF proteins in the discussion despite the fact that the last 2 figures are entirely devoted to these proteins.

      Based on the referee's suggestion, we have added relevant content about METTL and YTHDF proteins in the discussion. In addition, the basic mechanism and function of METTL and YTHDF proteins were briefly described in the introduction.

      Reviewer #3 (Recommendations For The Authors):

      Please refer to the specific suggestions and recommendations. They include proposals for experimental additions, improved methodologies, and suggestions to resolve writing-related concerns.

      Major concerns

      (1) I suggest changing the article title to "Functional Replacement of RIG-I with MDA5 in Fish Miiuy Croaker", or a similar title, to make it more focused and closely aligned with the content of the article.

      Following the reviewer's recommendations, we have revised the title to emphasize our primary research subject is a teleost fish that lacks RIG-I. In addition, we have changed “5’ppp-RNA” to “5’ppp-RNA virus” to emphasize the interaction between the virus and the receptor. We believe that the revised title is more in line with the content of the article.

      (2) Due to the inherent limitations in genome sequencing, assembly, and annotation for the Miiuy croaker, comprehensive annotation of immune-related genes remains incomplete. To address this critical gap, it is recommended that authors establish experimental protocols, such as Fluorescence In Situ Hybridization (FISH), to confirm the absence of RIG-I in the Miiuy croaker. They should simultaneously employ MDA5 probes as a positive control for validation purposes.

      The miiuy croaker has good genomic information at the chromosomal level (doi: 10.1016/j.aaf.2021.06.001). In addition, studies have shown that RIG-I is absent in the orders of Perciformes (doi: 10.1016/j.fsirep.2021.100012), while miiuy croaker belongs to the order Perciformes, so it does indeed lose the RIG-I gene. Therefore, we do not intend to use FISH technology to prove this.

      (3) Similarly, it is recommended that the authors first provide evidence of the presence of 5'ppp at the 5' terminus of the genome RNA of SCRV, as demonstrated in the study by Goubau et al. (doi: 10.1038/nature13590, Supplementary figure 1). This evidence is crucial before drawing conclusions about the compensatory role of MDA5 in recognizing 5'ppp RNA viruses, using SCRV as the viral model.

      As suggested by the referee, we extracted SCRV RNA from SCRV virus particles and assessed the 5’-phosphate-dependence of stimulation by SCRV RNA. Calf intestinal phosphatase (CIAP) treatment substantially reduced the stimulatory activity of SCRV RNA in MKC cells of M. miiuy (Figure 1C and 1E). In addition, similar results were obtained by transfecting VSV-RNA isolated from VSV virus into DF-1 cells of G. gallus (Figure 1D). The above evidences confirm the presence of triphosphate molecular features between SCRV and VSV viruses, and indicating that birds and fish lacking RIG-I have other receptors that can recognize 5’ppp-RNA.

      (4) The 62-nucleotide (nt) 5'ppp-RNA utilized in this study was obtained from Vesicular Stomatitis Virus (VSV). In order to provide direct evidence, it is necessary to include a 62-nt 5'ppp-RNA that is directly derived from SCRV itself.

      We adopted this suggestion and synthesized a 67-nucleotide 5’ppp-SCRV RNA probe. We found that 5’ppp-SCRV activates dimerization of IRF3 and binds to MDA5 of M. miiuy in a 5’-triphosphate-dependent manner (Figure 4A-4F).

      (5) Given that RNAs with uncapped diphosphate (PP) groups at the 5′ end also activate RIG-I, similar to RNAs with 5′-PPP moieties, and the 5′-terminal nucleotide must remain unmethylated at its 2′-O position to allow RNA recognition by RIG-I, it is necessary for the authors to conduct additional experiments to supplement and validate these two distinguishing features of RIG-I in RNA recognition. This will provide more reliable evidence for the replacement of RIG-I by MDA5 in RNA recognition.

      Thank you for the reviewer's professional suggestions. We understand that exploring the combination of 5’pp-RNA and 2′-O-methylated RNA with MDA5 can further demonstrate the alternative function of MDA5. But we think that the use of 5’ppp-RNA and their dephosphorylation derivatives can fully demonstrate that the MDA5 of M. miiuy and G. gallus have evolved to recognize 5’triphosphate structure like human RIG-I. Therefore, we do not intend to conduct any additional experiments

      (6) In section 2.3, the authors assert that Miiuy croaker recognizes SCRV through its RD domain. This claim is supported by their data showing that cells overexpressed with the MDA5 ΔRD mutant lost the ability to inhibit SCRV replication. As a result, the authors draw the conclusion that "these findings provide evidence that MDA5 may recognize 5'-triphosphate-dependent RNA (5'ppp-RNA) through its RD domain." However, to strengthen their argument, the authors should first demonstrate that during SCRV infection, MDA5-mediated antiviral immune response is indeed initiated by recognizing the 5'ppp part of the SCRV RNA, rather than the double-strand part (which can exist in ssRNA virus) of the viral RNA, as this is naturally a ligand for MDA5. Additionally, the authors should treat the isolated SCRV RNA with CIP to remove the phosphate group and examine the binding of MDA5 with SCRV RNA before and after treatment. They should also transfect CIP-treated or untreated SCRV RNA into MDA5 knockdown and wild-type MKC cells to investigate the induction of antiviral signaling and levels of viral replication. Finally, the authors should verify the binding ability of the mutants with isolated SCRV RNA, with or without CIP treatment, to determine which domain of MDA5 is responsible for SCRV 5'ppp-RNA recognition.

      We understand the reviewer's concern that MDA5 may be identified by binding to dsRNA in the SCRV virus. Based on the reviewer's suggestion, we extracted SCRV RNA and obtained its dephosphorylated RNA using Calf intestinal phosphatase (CIAP). Next, we transfected them into MDA5-knockdown and wild-type MKC cells, and detected the dimerization of IRF3 and IFN reaction. The results indicate that SCRV RNA does indeed activate immunity in a triphosphate-dependent manner, and knockdown of MDA5 prevents immune activation of SCRV RNA (Figure 1C and 1E, Figure 2P and 2Q). Finally, we synthesized a 5'ppp-SCRV RNA probe and demonstrated that MDA5 binds to 5'ppp-SCRV through the RD domain (Figure 4E-4G). We believe that these results can better demonstrate that MDA5 recognizes 5’ppp-RNA through its RD domain and addresses the concerns of the reviewers.

      (7) Similarly, merely presenting Co-IP data demonstrating the interaction between Miiuy croaker MDA5 and STING in overexpressed EPC cells does not justify the claim that "in vertebrates lacking RIG-I, MDA5 can utilize STING to facilitate signal transduction in the antiviral response". This is because interactions observed through overexpression may not accurately reflect the events occurring during viral infection or their actual antiviral functions. To provide more robust evidence, it is essential to conduct functional experiments after STING knockout (or at least knockdown). Furthermore, it is important to note that Miiuy Croaker alone cannot adequately represent all "vertebrates lacking RIG-I".

      We found that co-expression of STING and MDA5 can enhance MDA5-mediated IFN-1 response during SCRV virus infection, while knocking down STING can restore MDA5-mediated IFN-1 response (Figure 2N and 2O). This indicates that STING plays an important signaling role in the immune response of MDA5 to RNA viruses. In addition, loss of RIG-I is a common phenomenon in vertebrates, and STING of birds such as chickens (doi: 10.4049/jimmunol.1500638) and mammalian tree shrews (doi: 10.1073/pnas.1604939113) can also bind to MDA5, indicating that STING can indeed play a crucial role in MDA5 signaling in species with RIG-I deficiency. We have added this section to our discussion and elaborated on our observations in more cautious language.

      (8) In the manuscript, a series of experiments were conducted using an antibody (Beyotime Cat# AF7164) against endogenous MDA5. The corresponding immunogen for this MDA5 antibody is a recombinant fusion protein containing amino acids 1-205 of human IFIH1/MDA5 (NP_071451.2). However, the amino acid sequences of IFIH1/MDA5 differ substantially between humans and Miiuy croaker, which could introduce errors in the results. Therefore, it is essential to employ antibodies specifically designed for targeting Miiuy croaker's own MDA5 in the experiments.

      As shown in Figure 2B, endogenous MDA5 antibodies can detect the MDA5 portion that is forcibly overexpressed by plasmids, suggesting that the MDA5 antibody can indeed specifically recognize the MDA5 protein of M. miiuy.

      (9) It is recommended to investigate the phosphorylation of IRF3 in order to confirm the downstream signaling pathway during viral infection when MDA5 is knocked down or overexpressed.

      Due to the lack of available phosphorylation antibodies for fish IRF3, we used IRF3 dimer experiments to detect downstream signaling (Figure 1C and 1D, Figure 2P, Figure 4C and 4J).

      (10) The use of poly I:C as a mimic for dsRNA to investigate MDA5's recognition of 5'ppp-RNA in hosts lacking RIG-I, as well as the examination of the regulatory role of MDA5 m6A methylation upon activation by 5'ppp-RNA, may be inappropriate. Poly I:C does not possess 5'ppp, and while it has been identified as a ligand for MDA5 in various studies, MDA5 cannot serve as a substitute for RIG-I in recognizing poly (I:C). Therefore, the authors should utilize 5'ppp-dsRNA as the mimic and include the corresponding 5'ppp-dsRNA control without a 5'triphosphate as the negative control (both available from InvivoGen). This approach will specifically elucidate the mechanisms involved when MDA5 functions similarly to RIG-I in the recognition of 5'ppp-RNA.

      In our study, we used poly(I:C)-HMW, a known dsRNA mimetic that can be preferentially recognized by MDA5 rather than RIG-I, as a positive control for activating MDA5. What we want to demonstrate is that, like poly(I:C)-HMW (positive control), SCRV can also promote MDA5-mediated IFN immunity, further indicating the important role of MDA5 in 5’ppp-RNA virus invasion. We have clearly labeled the type of poly(I:C) in the figures and legends to avoid misunderstandings for readers.

      (11) In Figure 2, Figure 3, and Figure 6, the appearance of virus plaques is not readily apparent, and it is necessary to replace these images with clearer photographs. It appears that MKC or MPC cells are not appropriate for conducting plaque assays. To accurately assess viral proliferation, the authors should measure key indicators throughout the process, such as the production of positive-strand RNAs (+RNAs), replication intermediates (RF), and transcription of subgenomic RNAs. This approach is preferable to solely measuring the M and G protein genes from the virus genome as positive results can still be observed in contaminated cells.

      As pointed out by the reviewer, we also think that the virus plaque images in Figure 2K and Figure 3D are not clear enough, so we have replaced them with new clear images (Figure 2J and Figure 3D). But we think that other images can clearly display the proliferation of the SCRV virus, so we did not replace them. In addition, the primers we currently use do measure +RNA, so the replication level of the SCRV virus can be accurately evaluated without being affected by virus contamination. Because the regions where the two pairs of primers are located belong to the SCRV-M and SCRV-G protein genes, we label them as SCRV-M and SCRV-G to distinguish between the two pairs of genes. To avoid reader misunderstanding, we have modified the Y-axis label in the figures (Figure 2I and 2K, Figure 3E, Figure 6E and 6O).

      (12) There is a substantial disparity in the molecular size of M. miiuy MDA5 between endogenous and exogenously expressed proteins, as shown in Figure 2A and 2C-D. Please provide clarification.

      Please refer to the response to Reviewer 2's question regarding Figure 4B above.

      (13) The manuscript incorporates the evolutionary perspective, but lacks specific evolutionary analysis. Thus, it is essential to include relevant analysis to comprehend the evolutionary dynamics and positive selection on MDA5 and LGP2 in the absence of RIG-I in Miiuy croaker. This can be achieved through theoretical calculations using appropriate algorithms, such as the branch models and branch-site models based on the maximum-likelihood method implemented in the phylogenetic analysis by maximum likelihood (PAML) package.

      In fact, we have analyzed the molecular evolution of MDA5 and LGP2. Unfortunately, even when analyzing only the MDA5/LGP2 CDS sequences in fish, we found that the topologies of gene trees of MDA5/LGP2 were largely consistent with the species tree. Thus, species with or without RIG-I in the gene trees cannot effectively separate clusters, making it extremely difficult to analyze the molecular evolution of MDA5/LGP2 caused by RIG-I deficiency. Consequently, we gave up this aspect of analysis.

      (14) If the narrative regarding m6A methylation goes beyond the activation of MDA5 through recognition of 5'ppp-RNA and represents a regulatory mechanism for all MDA5 activation events, it is not relevant to the theme of "An arms race under RIG-I loss: 5'ppp-RNA and its alternative recognition receptor MDA5." Therefore, all investigations in this paper should focus solely on events when MDA5 recognizes 5'ppp-RNA. Any data associated with the broader regulatory mechanisms and m6A methylation of MDA5 should be excluded from this manuscript and instead be included in a separate study dedicated to exploring this specific topic.

      Our theme aims to showcase RNA viruses, rather than an interaction between 5'ppp-RNA and host virus receptors, which our current topic cannot accurately express. Therefore, we made two main changes: firstly, we limited the study species to M. miiuy, although some studies on the functional substitution of MDA5 for RIG-I involved birds. Secondly, change “5’ppp-RNA” to “5’ppp-RNA virus”. We believe that the revised title is more in line with our current research contents.

      (15) The running title appears to be hastily done.

      We modified it to “MDA5 recognizes 5’ppp-RNA virus in species lacking RIG-I”.

      (16) There are many descriptions that are not strongly related to the main theme of the article in the introduction section, making it lengthy and fragmented. Please focus on the research background of RIG-I and MDA5, including their structures, functions, and regulatory mechanisms, as well as the research progress on the compensatory effect of MDA5 in the absence of RIG-I and its evolutionary adaptation mechanism in other species.

      Based on the suggestions of the reviewers, we have removed some of the less relevant content in the introduction and added research progress on the compensatory effect of MDA5 in the evolutionary adaptation mechanism of tree shrews in the absence of RIG-I.

      (17) Lines 149-156 in the "Results" section include content that resembles an "Introduction" It is important to avoid duplicating information in the results section. Therefore, the authors are encouraged to revise this paragraph to ensure conciseness in the article.

      We have streamlined this section to enhance the article's conciseness and clarity.

      (18) In the "Results" section, at line 177, the authors assert, "As depicted in Figure 1F-1H," which should be corrected to Figure 2F-2H. Furthermore, the y-axis of the two figures on the right-hand side of Figure 2H represents the ISG15 genes. At line 182, "as demonstrated in Figure 1I-1L," should be revised as "as illustrated in Figure 2I-2L". The authors demonstrated a lack of attention to detail.

      Thank you to the reviewer for pointing out our errors, and we have made the necessary corrections.

      (19) In lines 197-198, the authors stated that "MDA5-ΔRD showed an inability to interact with SCRV." However, Figure 3D did not reveal any significant difference, thus it is advisable to repeat this experiment at least once.

      We have replaced this virus spot image with a new one (Figure 3D).

      (20) In lines 200-201 of the "2.3 RD domain is required for MDA5 to recognize SCRV" section, the authors report that the expression of antiviral genes was induced by the overexpression of both MDA5 and MDA5-ΔRD, even in the absence of infection (Figure 3F). Why does the expression of antiviral genes increase in the absence of viral RNA stimulation? Please provide a reasonable explanation.

      In the absence of viral infection, overexpression of viral receptor proteins may still transmit erroneous signaling, affecting the body's immunity. We speculate that due to the preservation of the CARD domain by MDA5 and MDA5-ΔRD, they can still induce the expression of antiviral factors without ligands, although this induction effect is much smaller than that of viral infection. However, in order to better demonstrate the function of the RD domain of MDA5 in M. miiuy, we have changed the experimental plan, as shown in the figure 3F. We detected the induction of antiviral factors by overexpression of MDA5 and MDA5-△RD under poly (I:C)-HMW stimulation. This can indicate that the RD domain has a conserved function in the recognition of poly(I:C)-HMW in M. miiuy, and can serve as a positive control for the recognition of SCRV virus invasion by the RD domain of MDA5.

      (21) Please provide the GeneBank accession number of M. miiuy MDA5.

      The GeneBank accession number of M. miiuy MDA5 was added in the section 4.5 plasmids construction.

      (22) The content of lines 228-233 in the "Results" section bears resemblance to that of the "Introduction." To ensure the avoidance of information duplication, it is recommended to remove this paragraph from the results section.

      This section has been streamlined.

      (23) The bands of mmiMDA5 in the 5'ppp-RNA and dsRNA lanes in Figure 4B are weak and almost unobservable. Please replace them with clear images.

      We have rerun this experiment and replaced the images (Figure 4B).

      (24) In Figure 5G and at line 253, there are only results presented for the SCRV infection group, while no results are shown for the control group. This raises the question of why the control group results are missing. It is necessary to provide a reasonable explanation or correction for this issue.

      The "0 h" infection time point of the SCRV virus is the control group, and we have replaced it with a more intuitive image (Figure 5G).

      (25) In Figure 7C, it would be necessary to include the western blot result of YTHDF protein expression in order to verify the efficiency of YTHDF siRNA.

      In fact, we have attempted to detect the endogenous expression of YTHDF protein using available commercial antibodies. Unfortunately, only the YTHDF2 antibody can specifically recognize the endogenous protein expression of YTHDF2 in M. miiuy. In addition, the knockdown effect of si-YTHDF2 has been validated by YTHDF2 antibody (doi: 10.4049/jimmunol.2200618).

      (26) In line 422 of the "4.3 Cell culture and treatment" section, the paragraph raises a question regarding the nature of Miiuy croaker kidney cells (MKCs) and spleen cells (MPCs) - whether they are cell lines or freshly isolated cells (or primary cultures) derived from kidney and spleen tissues. If these cells are indeed cell lines, it is requested to provide detailed information about the sources and properties of the cells (such as whether they are epithelial cells or other mixed cell types) and the generations of propagation. Alternatively, if the cells were freshly isolated or primary cultures obtained from fish, the method for cell isolation should be provided. The source and stability of cells are extremely important for ensuring the repeatability and reliability of experimental outcomes.

      M. miiuy kidney cells (MKCs) and spleen cells (MPCs) are cell lines derived from the kidney and spleen tissues of M. miiuy, with passages ranging from 20 to 40 times. These details have been incorporated into section 4.3.

      (27) There are many inaccurate descriptions in the text, which employ concepts that are too broad. These descriptions need to be narrowed down to specific species or objects. Here are a few examples, along with the necessary revisions. Other similar instances should also be revised accordingly. For instance, in line 119, "fish MDA5" should be changed to "Miiuy croaker MDA5." Similarly, in line 166, "fish MDA5-mediated signaling pathway" should be changed to "Miiuy croaker MDA5-mediated signaling pathway." In line 174, "fish MDA5" should be revised to "Miiuy croaker MDA5." Additionally, in line 185, "antiviral responses of teleost" should be changed to "antiviral responses of Miiuy croaker." In line 197, "interact with SCRV" should be revised to "interact with 5'ppp-RNA of SCRV." In line 337, "loss of RIG-I in the vertebrate" should be modified to "loss of RIG-I in Miiuy croaker and chicken." Similarly, in line 338, "MDA5 of fish" should be changed to "MDA5 of Miiuy croaker." Lastly, in line 348, "RIG-I deficient vertebrates" should be revised to "RIG-I deficient Miichthys miiuy and Gallus gallus."

      Thank you for the reviewer's suggestions. We have made revisions to these inaccurate descriptions and reviewed the entire manuscript to address similar statements with broad concepts.

      (28) Finally, it should be noted that a similar discovery has already been reported in tree shrews (Ling Xu, et al., Proc Natl Acad Sci., 2016, 113(39):10950-10955). This article shares similarities with that research report, therefore it is necessary to discuss in detail the relationship between the two in the discussion and compare and analyze the evolutionary patterns of MDA5 from it.

      Based on the reviewer's suggestions, we have compared the similarities and differences between these two reports during the discussion and analyzed the evolutionary dynamics of MDA5 in these vertebrates lacking RIG-I.

      Minor concerns:

      Thank you to the reviewer for their meticulous examination to our manuscript, we have made revisions to the following suggestions.

      (1) At line 120, the sentence "SCRV(one 5'ppp-RNA virus)" should have a space between "SCRV" and "(one 5'ppp-RNA virus)". Please make this correction.

      Corrected.

      (2) At lines 147-148, the sentence "However, the downstream gene of TOPORSa is missing a RIG-I" is not accurate and needs modification.

      We have modified this sentence.

      (3) At line 184, "findings indicate" should be corrected to "findings indicated".

      Corrected.

      (4) At line 189, "a 5'ppp-RNA virus" should be deleted and the text seems redundant.

      Deleted.

      (5) At line 198, "replication. (Figure 3C-3E)", please remove the punctuation between "replication" and "(Figure 3C-3E)".

      Corrected.

      (6) At line 416 in "Materials and methods" section, "4.2 Sample and challenge" should be corrected to "4.2 Fish and challenge".

      Corrected.

      (7) At line 419, the authors state that "The experimental procedure for SCRV infection was performed as described", please briefly describe the SCRV infection method and the infectious dose.

      Based on the reviewer's suggestions, we have added relevant descriptions of SCRV infection in section 4.2.

      (8) There are several formatting issues in the "Materials and Methods" section. For instance, in line 424, there is no space between the number and letter in "100 μg/ml" and "26 ℃" should be corrected to "26℃". Additionally, in line 430, "Cells" should be corrected to "cells".

      Corrected.

      (9) At line 446, "50 ng/ul" and "100 mU/ul" should be corrected to "50 ng/μl" and "100 mU/μl".

      Corrected.

      (10) At line 459, "primers 1)" should be corrected to "primers".

      Corrected.

      (11) At lines 461-464, the description "For protein purification, MDA5 plasmids with 6× His tag was constructed based on pcDNA3" seems to be no direct logical connection between protein purification and the plasmid construction. Please make the necessary corrections.

      Corrected.

      (12) At line 548, "cytoplasmic" should be corrected to "Cytoplasmic".

      Corrected.

      (13) At line 549, "5× 107" should be corrected to "5 × 107".

      Corrected.

      (14) At line 557, "MgCl2" should be corrected to "MgCl2".

      Corrected.

      (15) At line 558, "6 %" should be corrected to "6%".

      Corrected.

      (16) At line 565, "50μg" should be corrected to "50 μg".

      Corrected.

      (17) At line 571, "300{plus minus}50 bp." should be corrected to "300 {plus minus} 50 bp."

      Corrected.

      (18) At lines 592-593, the sentence "After several incubations, the m6A level was quantified colorimetrically at a wavelength of 450 nm" does not read smoothly, please improve it.

      Revised.

      (19) At line 786, "MDA5 recognize" should be corrected to "MDA5 recognized".

      Corrected.

      (20) At lines 788 and 798, "Pulldown" should be corrected to "Pull-down".

      Corrected.

      (21) At lines 790 and 796, "bluestaining" should be corrected to "blue staining".

      Deleted.

      (22) At line 825, "SCRV and infection" should be corrected to "SCRV infection".

      Corrected.

      (23) At lines 826-827, "SCRV (H) and poly(I:C) (I) infection" should be corrected to "SCRV infection (H) and poly(I:C) stimulation (I)".

      Corrected.

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